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0 | You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself, describe your plans for the party, invite your neighbour to come | Dear neighbour,
My name is Mohammed Abdelkadir and I have recently moved into the house adjacent to yours. Being your new neighbour, I would like to start my letter by introducing myself. I’m 32 years old, married, and have one baby girl. Because of my Arabian background, I have developed the habit of getting into s... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate introduces themselves and their family, which is relevant to establishing a friendly tone and context for the letter. The plan for the party is described, including the attempt to mitigate noise disturbance. The invitation is clearly extended.
- The overview is implicit rather th... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate adequately introduces themselves and their reason for writing. The description of the party plans is somewhat vague, lacking specific details about the party's duration or the expected number of guests. While the intention to minimize noise is mentioned, the method (installing sou... |
1 | Your friend has asked you to teach English to their child. However, you do not have any English books so would like to borrow some from your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter say which course you are taking describe the type of books you need to borrow ask to borrow the books | Dear Sir,
Hello,
How are you? I hope everything is going well and you are in good health, I am writing this letter to inform you that I have a friend namely is applyshow examplesRegina Zhafiza shewhoshow examples is good at English and asked me to borrow some bookbooksshow examples such as grammara grammarshow ex... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter attempts to address the task, requesting books from the teacher. However, it is poorly focused and contains irrelevant information. The request for grammar books is muddled by the inclusion of a lengthy, unnecessary description of the friend's plans and aspirations. The specific type... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate attempts to address the task, but the letter is confusing and doesn't clearly explain the request. The focus shifts from the candidate needing books for teaching to the friend needing books for IELTS preparation. The connection between the candidate's course and the needed books is... |
2 | You want to go camping for a week with a group of friends.
Write a letter to the campsite manager. In your letter
• ask them to send you some information about the campsite
• find out about the cost
• give information about your likely arrival time | Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Mostafa and I am writing this letter to get some data about the next campingcampshow examples.
To begin with, there are many of information I would like to know like the location, the duration, what kind of clothes I bring, any special shoes and tolls.
In addition, I have a group ... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter attempts to address all parts of the task (asking for information, enquiring about cost, stating arrival time). However, the phrasing is often unclear and indirect, making it difficult to understand the specific requests. The candidate doesn't clearly articulate the number of friends,... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate attempts to address the prompt's requirements but fails to accurately describe the key features of the campsite. The letter is more a list of questions than a structured request for information. The candidate does not provide a clear overview of their needs. The focus is scattered ... |
3 | You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter,
Write why you are writing the letter
What kind of information you want
How and by when you can get the reques... | Dear Sir or Madam
My name is Mostafa, I just arrived in Paris coming from Alexandria on a business trip to meet some suppliers related to my job, I am writing this letter to seek your advice for some information about the area surrounding the city.
To begin with, this is my first time visiting Paris and I searche... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter fulfills the task requirements by stating the reason for writing, specifying the information needed (places to visit in and around Paris), and suggesting methods of receiving the information. However, the request is somewhat vague, lacking specifics about the type of historical sites,... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate attempts to describe the type of information needed but lacks detail and specificity. The request is vague ("places which I can visit around the city," "most popular museums, theatres"). The letter doesn't clearly define what constitutes "around the city." The overview of the let... |
4 | You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference from someone
who knows you well. Write a letter to your former teacher. In your
letter:
Explain why you are writing.
Describe the job you are applying for.
Suggest what information the teacher should include. | Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter regarding a letter of reference of yours.
Firstly, I want to tell you that I recently completed my university course and I have started applying for jobs where I need your help. As you know, I am inclined towards teaching and I really want to sh... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter fulfills the prompt's requirements by clearly stating the purpose (requesting a letter of reference), describing the job (teaching position encompassing arts and crafts), and suggesting the content for the reference letter (behavior with children, teaching style, and skills in arts an... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate explains the reason for writing and mentions the job application. However, the description of the job is vague. The candidate mentions teaching but doesn't specify the type of teaching position (e.g., primary school teacher, art instructor, etc.). The suggestions for the reference ... |
5 | Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that is runs, in order to save money
write a letter to the local council.in your letter
give detils of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and liesure centre is important for the local community
describe the p... | Dear Sir / Madam
I am writing this letter to you to discuss the impact of closing the sports centre.
To begin with, this place is my favourite because I spend most of my free time there, to clarify, at the weekend usually I meet my friends so we can do together many activities like football, Yoga and swimming. He... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate partially addresses the task. The letter mentions personal use of the centre and the impact on the community, however, it lacks detail and depth in explaining the importance of the centre and the possible effects of closure. The reasons given are superficial. For example, stating "... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate addresses the prompt's requirements by mentioning personal use, community importance, and potential negative effects of closure. However, the description of usage and impact lacks detail and specific examples. The letter is quite general. The explanation of why the centre is import... |
6 | You have recently landed in a foreign country on a work visa and need information about the place in and around the city. Write a letter to the relocation assistance provider seeking help and in your letter,
Write why you are writing the letter
What kind of information you want
How and by when you can get the reques... | Dear Sir ,
My name is Harvi and I landed in Canada last month on a work permit. I am writing this letter to get tremendous knowledge about the applyshow examplesCambridge City where I am living in an apartment.
I came from India to explore the enormous opportunities which are offered by this prestigious country ... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter attempts to fulfill the task, requesting information about Cambridge City. However, the request is vaguely worded and lacks specific details. The candidate mentions wanting information about "exorbitant places," which is not a clear or precise term. The purpose of the letter is state... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate identifies the purpose of the letter (seeking information about Cambridge City) but the information requested is somewhat vague ("exorbitant places"). The letter lacks specificity in the type of information needed (e.g., location, price range, opening hours). The request for a list... |
7 | Your friend has asked you to teach English to their child. However, you do not have any English books so would like to borrow some from your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter say which course you are taking describe the type of books you need to borrow ask to borrow the books | Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter for seekingto seekshow examples help in order to borrow an English book from your library which is a store of knowledge and information.
My friend was requesting to teach their children English subject because their exams will be held on next month August 25. Currently, they are... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter attempts to address the task but significantly misses the mark. The request for books is buried in convoluted and poorly written sentences. The specific books needed are vaguely mentioned. While the purpose (borrowing books) is identifiable, the execution is weak. The unnecessary det... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate attempts to address all parts of the task, mentioning the need for books to teach English to a friend's children, specifying the grade levels and areas of weakness, and naming a specific book. However, the description of the needed books is vague ("some novels"). The overview of th... |
8 | You recently finished studying at a university in another country where you shared a house with a fellow student. Something urgent came up while your housemate was away on a short trip and you had to leave without saying goodbye.
Write to your housemate. In your letter
Apologize for leaving without saying goodbye.
E... | Dear Ali
How are you? I am sorry about leaving without a goodbye. My father called me and told me that unfortunately, my mother had a heart attack so I was forced rapidly to go behind them but now, thank God, the doctors said it wasn't a serious problem, and also, she'll get back on her feet soon. By the way, I hope... | The provided essay is a letter, not an essay responding to a visual prompt as specified in the initial instructions. Therefore, the existing evaluation is completely inappropriate. We need to evaluate the letter based on the letter-writing task, not an essay evaluating environmental damage. I will evaluate the letter... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate adequately addresses the prompt's requirements by apologizing for the abrupt departure and explaining the reason (family emergency). However, the explanation of the reason is somewhat brief and lacks detail. The letter includes irrelevant information about money, belongings, and a ... |
9 | You missed an appointment. Write a letter explaining what hap- pened. In your letter include:
* what the appointment was
* a apology for missing the appointment
* a request to reschedule. | Dear Mr. Hasemi
I am writing a letter in order to explain my absence from the immigration interview. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience, I am sure I caused the interviewer and others in your office. In fact, I was unable to sleep adequately due to the stress of the interview from which coming to your office... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate clearly states the reason for missing the immigration interview (a serious accident). All three bullet points in the prompt are addressed: the appointment type, an apology, and a request for rescheduling. The explanation is sufficient.
- The overview is present implicitly; the lett... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate successfully addresses all three bullet points in the prompt: the nature of the appointment (immigration interview), an apology for missing it, and a request to reschedule. However, the explanation for missing the appointment, while detailed, borders on being unbelievable. The lac... |
10 | You missed an appointment for an immigration interview recently because of circumstances out of your control. Write to the immigration office. In your letter • Introduce yourself • Apologies for missing your appointment • Explain what happened • Request a new apartment | Dear Mr. Hasemi
I am writing a letter in order to explain absence from the immigration interview. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience I am sure I caused the interviewer and others in your office. In fact, I could not sleep adequate considering stress. consequently, coming your office, I had badly crashed wit... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate attempts to explain their absence from an immigration interview, fulfilling the prompt's main requirements. However, the explanation lacks clarity and detail. The request for a new appointment is present but somewhat vague regarding the timeframe. The explanation of the accident ... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate attempts to address all points in the prompt (introduction, apology, explanation, request). However, the explanation is unclear and lacks detail. The reason for missing the appointment is unconvincing and poorly explained. The request for a new appointment is vaguely worded. The l... |
11 | You and a friend have both been accepted to a study abroad program in Paris, France.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- Congratulate them on being accepted
- Ask if they would like to be your roommate
- Discuss possible activities you could do together | Dear Sam,
Long time no see! I hope you're well. I wanted to share some thoughts and suggestions about our new study opportunity in Paris, France.
First, I would like to congratulate you! I'm thrilled that you’ve been accepted. Since we know each other so well, it's a great chance to study together in a foreign co... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter successfully fulfills all three bullet points of the prompt: congratulating the friend, proposing to be roommates, and suggesting activities. The information is relevant and presented in a clear, concise manner. The tone is appropriately friendly and informal.
- A clear overview is ... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate adequately addresses the prompt's requirements, congratulating their friend, proposing a roommate arrangement, and suggesting activities. However, the letter lacks detail and depth in these areas. The discussion of activities is rather generic. The cost of living in Paris is mentio... |
12 | Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to a music concert. Please say
- where and when the concert is going to be,
- what type of music will be played there,
- and why your friend will enjoy it | Dear Neha,
I hope this letter finds you well! I wanted to share some exciting news with you. Diljit Dosanjh is performing live music in our city, and I've got an extra ticket with your name on it.
The concert is happening on June 7th at the Maple Arena, which is just a short drive from both our places. The show s... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate accurately describes the key features of the concert: the performer (Diljit Dosanjh), the date (June 7th), the venue (Maple Arena), and the type of music (a mix of bhangra, soulful melodies, and catchy tunes). The letter clearly conveys the invitation and reasons for the friend to ... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate successfully addresses all parts of the task, inviting the friend to a concert and providing necessary details about the event. The information is accurate and relevant, clearly outlining the what, when, where and why of the invitation. The letter is well-structured and easy to fol... |
13 | The parents of your Australian friend Chris have invited you to a surprise birthday party for him/her.
Write a letter to Chris's parents. In your letter
·say why you think Chris will enjoy the surprise party
·explain why you won't be able to attend the party
·give details of a plan to see Chris at a different time | Dear Sir ,
I hope this letter finds you in excellent health and best spirits. I am writing this letter to congratulate you on your son's birthday and I wish him success and prosperity for his future.
This is a great initiative that was taken by you to surprise Chris on his 24th birthday and I am sure he will ha... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate addresses all parts of the task: congratulating the parents, explaining Chris's likely enjoyment, giving reason for absence, and proposing an alternative meeting.
- The overview is clear, though somewhat simplistic. The reasons for Chris's enjoyment and the writer's absence are ade... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate mentions the surprise element and the presence of childhood friends as reasons why Chris will enjoy the party. However, the focus on the Playstation 7 is somewhat irrelevant and detracts from the overall message. The letter adequately explains the reason for absence. The alternativ... |
14 | You have rented an apartment for five years. You have decided to move out.
Write to the landlord. In the letter,
Describe who you are and where you live
Explain why you have decided to move out
Suggest what you want the landlord to do | Dear Mrs. Mimi,
I am writing to formally inform you that I am moving out of my apartment on 20th June.
First of all, I would like to express my sincerest gratitude to you for offering this place. I'm Anne whoandshow examples hashaveshow examples been living here for five years. You were a very friendly and suppor... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter successfully fulfills all parts of the task: identifying the writer, explaining the reason for moving, and stating the desired action from the landlord. The reasons for moving are clearly explained.
- A clear overview is presented: moving due to a new job requiring a shorter commute.
... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate adequately describes the key features – their tenancy length, reason for moving, and request for bond return. However, the explanation of the reason for moving could be more concise and directly related to the job opportunity in Perth. The overview of the main points is present bu... |
15 | You have not seen a close friend for a very long time. You still have a few of your friend's belongings that were left at your house, the last time he visited.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
● state why you are writing
● write what you have been doing since you last spoke
● apologise for still havin... | Dear Smith,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to let you know about some of yourtheshow examples things you left at my place the last time you visited, since it is something I thought you should know about.
Although everything started off smoothly, things did not go as expected. Not only did I get caug... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter fails to adequately address all parts of the task. While it states the reason for writing and mentions having the friend's belongings, the explanation for the delay is weak and lacks detail. The apology feels insincere and the suggestion for return is vague. The task requires a more d... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate addresses all the points in the prompt: reason for writing, recent activities, and the apology and proposed solution for returning the items. However, the description of the candidate's activities lacks detail and is somewhat vague. The focus on the forgotten items overshadows the p... |
16 | You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
• describe the situation
• explain your problems and why it is difficult to wo... | Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to explain my problem with the accommodation room, and I am asking you to change it the next year. The main issue is the timing for my roommate, he is studying his lessons at night, which this not suitable for me,applyshow examples because I am sleeping early so I c... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate partially addresses the task. The letter describes the situation (shared room) and explains problems (noisy roommate, messy roommate), but the explanation of why this makes it difficult to work is weak. The preferred accommodation (single room) is stated, but the justification is ... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate describes the situation of sharing a room with a noisy and messy roommate, impacting their ability to study. However, the description lacks detail. The explanation of the problems is superficial and doesn't fully convey the extent of the difficulties faced. The preferred accommodat... |
17 | One of your friends has asked you to be a partner in his/her new business.
Write a letter to reply to your friend's offer. In your letter,
• give your opinion of your friend's business idea
• tell him/her whether or not you have decided to accept the offer
• and explain your reasons for this deci | Dear Neha,
I hope this letter finds you well! Thanks for thinking of me as a potential partner for your new start-up. This means a lot to me that you value my input and trust me enough to consider me for this venture.
I think your business idea is fantastic. The market for eco-friendly products is already booming... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate adequately addresses all parts of the task, expressing their opinion on the business idea, their decision regarding the partnership, and their reasons. However, the explanation of the reasons could be more detailed and convincing. The letter lacks specific examples of the candidat... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate adequately addresses all parts of the task: opinion on the business idea, decision regarding the partnership, and reasons for the decision. The explanation of the reasons is clear and understandable.
- The overview of the main points is present, though it could be more concisely s... |
18 | Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to a friend to tell him that you cannot go to the theatre. In your letter:
- Apologize,
- Explain the situation,
- Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket. | Hi Karan,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing to express my concern about my inability to go to the theatre with you as I have to go with my father to do an important piece of work related to the house wall-paintingswall paintingsshow examples.
As youyou areyou wereshow examples already aware, that applyshow ... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate attempts to apologize and explain their situation, but the explanation is poorly organized and unclear. The suggestion for what to do with the extra ticket is present but lacks detail and sophistication. The candidate struggles to convey the reason for their absence clearly. There... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate addresses all three bullet points in the prompt (apology, explanation, solution for the extra ticket). However, the explanation is somewhat unclear and rambling. The connection between house painting and the need to travel 50km to a paint shop isn't logically explained. The urgency... |
19 | You have arranged a plan for travel and accommodation for your friends. Write a letter to them and:
- Remind them about the plans,
- Give them the details of accommodation,
- Suggest what things they should bring to the trip. | Hi Karan and Mohit,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and great spirits. I am writing this letter to remind you about our upcoming trip to Tobermorythe Tobermoryshow examples Islands, in Northern Ontario.
I have made all the arrangements. You, me and Karan will go viabyshow examples road in my car. ... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate adequately reminds the friends about the trip and provides some details about the accommodation. However, the description of the islands and activities is somewhat disorganized and lacks a clear overview. The information about the shipwreck is interesting but not clearly connected t... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter attempts to fulfill the task, reminding friends of the trip, giving accommodation details, and suggesting what to bring. However, the information is presented in a disorganized and somewhat rambling manner. Key details are missing, such as the dates of the trip and the precise location... |
20 | Write a letter to a friend telling him/her about an interesting website that you have found recently.
In your letter,
• say how you found it
• how it can help
• how you use it
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ………………., | Dear Dhruvi,
I hope you are doing well. I am writing this in regard to a helpful website that I have discovered recently which could also benefit you.
As you know, I constantly search for ways to enhance my technical knowledge in Mechanical Engineering, and during thatthat,show examples I found a website called h... | ## Task Achievement:
- The candidate adequately describes the website, mentioning its content and usefulness. However, the overview of the main points could be more concise and impactful. The description lacks specific examples to truly illustrate the website's breadth and depth. The accuracy of the information presen... | ## Task Achievement:
- The letter fulfills the task requirements by mentioning how the website was found, its benefits, and how the writer uses it. However, the description of the website's content is somewhat vague and lacks specific examples to fully illustrate its usefulness. The claim that the website covers every... |
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