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essay_vocab_feedback_694 | task-1 | The maps below show a part of a village in 1910 and the same part of the village in 2010. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details, and include comparisons where appropriate. | The maps compare a specific area of Shalton village between 1910 and 2010.
Overall, the village underwent several changes, with a significant increase in the number of houses, followed by the replacement of certain former commercial spaces. This modification resulted in a more modern compact layout for residents in the... | [
"The maps compare a specific area of Shalton village between 1910 and 2010.",
"Overall, the village underwent several changes, with a significant increase in the number of houses, followed by the replacement of certain former commercial spaces.",
"This modification resulted in a more modern compact layout for r... | [
"The maps compare a specific area of Shalton village between 1910 and 2010.",
"Overall, the village underwent several changes, with a significant increase in the number of houses, followed by the replacement of certain former commercial spaces.",
"This modification resulted in a more modern compact layout for r... | [
"The maps compare a specific area of Shalton village between 1910 and 2010.",
"Overall, the village underwent several changes, with a significant increase in the number of houses, followed by the replacement of certain former commercial spaces.",
"These developments resulted in a more modern compact layout for ... | [
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"The maps compare a specific area of Shalton village between 1910 and 2010.",
"Overall, the village underwent several changes, with a significant increase in the number of houses, followed by the replacement of certain former commercial spaces.",
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"Occasional error in word choice, collocation and informal language"
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, few errors"
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essay_vocab_feedback_546 | task-1 | The diagrams below show the present and planned developments in the biomedical campus of a university. | The maps illustrate how a biomedical campus of a university is expected to change in the future.
Overall, it is evident that the campus is anticipated to undergo several drastic changes, the most important of which are the demolition of green area and the construction of some new facilities to enhance campus's function... | [
"The maps illustrate how a biomedical campus of a university is expected to change in the future.",
"Overall, it is evident that the campus is anticipated to undergo several drastic changes, the most important of which are the demolition of green area and the construction of some new facilities to enhance campus'... | [
"The maps illustrate how a biomedical campus of a university is expected to change in the future.",
"Overall, it is evident that the campus is anticipated to undergo several drastic changes, the most important of which are the demolition of green area and the construction of some new facilities to enhance campus'... | [
"The maps illustrate how the biomedical campus of a university is expected to change in the future.",
"Overall, it is evident that the campus is anticipated to undergo several drastic changes, the most important of which are the demolition of the green area and the construction of some new facilities to enhance t... | [
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"Few minor errors in style and collocation. No word choice errors"
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, few errors"
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essay_vocab_feedback_406 | task-2 | Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problem on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced. Do you agree or disagree ? | Nowadays, there are big arguments about the problem that space research is costing so much money without bringing significant value. While there are some opinions for this. One view, many people support this campaign and believe the project will thrive in the future. In the contrast , some ones objected and argued that... | [
"Nowadays, there are big arguments about the problem that space research is costing so much money without bringing significant value.",
"While there are some opinions for this.",
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"Nowadays, there are big arguments about the problem that space research is costing so much money without bringing significant value.",
"While there are some opinions for this.",
"One view, many people support this campaign and believe the project will thrive in the future.",
"In the contrast , some ones obje... | [
"Currently, there is considerable debate concerning the claim that space research incurs significant costs without yielding substantial value.",
"However, there are differing perspectives regarding this issue.",
"From one perspective, many people support this campaign and believe that the project will thrive in... | [
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, few errors"
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essay_vocab_feedback_13 | task-1 | the diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. | The given diagram depicts the process of producing energy through geothermal zone
Overall cold water is adopted into hot liquid geothermal energy. Then, the hot water transformed to steam in order to spin a turbine and produce electricity.
Firstly, cold water is kept in a huge reservoir and pumped down into an inject... | [
"The given diagram depicts the process of producing energy through geothermal zone\n\nOverall cold water is adopted into hot liquid geothermal energy.",
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"The given diagram depicts the process of producing energy through geothermal zone\n\nOverall cold water is adopted into hot liquid geothermal energy.",
"Then, the hot water transformed to steam in order to spin a turbine and produce electricity.",
"Firstly, cold water is kept in a huge reservoir and pumped dow... | [
"The given diagram depicts the process of producing energy through a geothermal zone. Overall, cold water is converted into a hot liquid to generate geothermal energy.",
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"Then, the hot water <error>transformed</e... | [
"Some errors, not affecting comprehension"
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, few errors"
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essay_vocab_feedback_73 | task-1 | The map below show part of a village in 1910, and same part of that village in 2010.
summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant | The maps depict the transformation of the same part of the village of Shalton over the course of 100 years.
Overall, the area underwent a significant residential development over the century, with a substantial increase in the number of houses in the village. The key changes also include the introduction of new amenit... | [
"The maps depict the transformation of the same part of the village of Shalton over the course of 100 years.",
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"The maps depict the transformation of the same part of the village of Shalton over the course of 100 years.",
"Overall, the area underwent a significant residential development over the century, with a substantial increase in the number of houses in the village.",
"The key changes also include the introduction... | [
"The maps depict the transformation of the same part of the village of Shalton over the course of 100 years.",
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"Overall, the area underwent a significant residential development over the century, with a substantial increase in the number of houses in the village.",
"The key changes also include the introduction... | [
"Occasional error in word choice, collocation and informal language"
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, few errors"
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essay_vocab_feedback_128 | task-2 | Money for postgraduate research is limited, so financial support from the government should only be used for scientific research, not for less useful research. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | Given the shortage of funding to postgraduate research , people hold a view that governments' subsidies should only be diverted to the scientific realm, not for less impactful research. From my perspective, despite acknowledging reasons behind this proposal, I strongly believe that research into other fields has equal ... | [
"Given the shortage of funding to postgraduate research , people hold a view that governments' subsidies should only be diverted to the scientific realm, not for less impactful research.",
"From my perspective, despite acknowledging reasons behind this proposal, I strongly believe that research into other fields ... | [
"Given the shortage of funding to postgraduate research , people hold a view that governments' subsidies should only be diverted to the scientific realm, not for less impactful research.",
"From my perspective, despite acknowledging reasons behind this proposal, I strongly believe that research into other fields ... | [
"Given the shortage of funding for postgraduate research, people hold a view that government subsidies should be diverted only to the scientific realm, rather than to less impactful research.",
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"Few minor errors in style and collocation. No word choice errors"
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, few errors"
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essay_vocab_feedback_1 | task-2 | Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both views and give your opinion. | It is argued that reserving the animals in the zoos is extremely immoral, while others say that these wild animals should be protected in the cages or fences in the zoos. In my perspective, I believe that animals must be free and live in their natural environment since it is the best way to keep them alive and mature. ... | [
"It is argued that reserving the animals in the zoos is extremely immoral, while others say that these wild animals should be protected in the cages or fences in the zoos.",
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"It is argued that reserving the animals in the zoos is extremely immoral, while others say that these wild animals should be protected in the cages or fences in the zoos.",
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"It is argued that confining animals to zoos is extremely immoral, while others maintain that these wild animals should be protected within the cages or fences of zoos.",
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"Some errors, not affecting comprehension"
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, some errors"
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essay_vocab_feedback_2 | task-1 | The pie charts show the proportion of users across different age groups on three apps: Twitter, Facebook and YouTube in 2005. | The pie charts compare the proportions of users in different age groups on Twitter, Facebook and YouTube in 2005.
Overall, it is evident that the three social media platforms were primarily favored by those aged 18-34 and 35-49 in the year surveyed, while individuals aged 65+ showed a far less interest. Notably, Twit... | [
"The pie charts compare the proportions of users in different age groups on Twitter, Facebook and YouTube in 2005.",
"Overall, it is evident that the three social media platforms were primarily favored by those aged 18-34 and 35-49 in the year surveyed, while individuals aged 65+ showed a far less interest.",
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"The pie charts compare the proportions of users in different age groups on Twitter, Facebook and YouTube in 2005.",
"Overall, it is evident that the three social media platforms were primarily favored by those aged 18-34 and 35-49 in the year surveyed, while individuals aged 65+ showed a far less interest.",
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"The pie charts compare the proportions of users in different age groups on Twitter, Facebook and YouTube in 2005.",
"Overall, it is evident that the three social media platforms were primarily favored by those aged 18-34 and 35-49 in the year surveyed, while individuals aged 65+ showed far less interest.",
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"Occasional error in word choice, collocation and informal language",
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, few errors"
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essay_vocab_feedback_467 | task-1 | The bar chart shows the proportion of men and women aged 60-64 employed in four different countries in 1997 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | Given are bar charts illustrating the percentage of male and female aged 60-64 employed in 4 different countries from 1997 to 2000. A cursory examination reveals that in the first chart, in 1970 ,the men in JP had reached to the top and Usa leaded the least in the chart, within 73%, in 2000, the employment rate of male... | [
"Given are bar charts illustrating the percentage of male and female aged 60-64 employed in 4 different countries from 1997 to 2000.",
"A cursory examination reveals that in the first chart, in 1970 ,the men in JP had reached to the top and Usa leaded the least in the chart, within 73%, in 2000, the employment ra... | [
"Given are bar charts illustrating the percentage of male and female aged 60-64 employed in 4 different countries from 1997 to 2000.",
"A cursory examination reveals that in the first chart, in 1970 ,the men in JP had reached to the top and Usa leaded the least in the chart, within 73%, in 2000, the employment ra... | [
"Given are bar charts illustrating the percentage of males and females aged 60-64 employed in 4 different countries from 1997 to 2000.",
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essay_vocab_feedback_0 | task-1 | The pie charts below show the different types of courses, which were followed by the students during the years of 1984, 1994 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. | The given pie charts illustrate different categories of courses that were enrolled by the students from 1984 to 2004.
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"The given pie charts illustrate different categories of courses in which students enrolled from 1984 to 2004.",
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"Few minor errors in style and collocation. No word choice errors"
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"Spelling mistakes never impede meaning, few errors",
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