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Durgroth | I have no idea what these places are other than the Mothlight, but I'll definitely check them out! | 1,485,907,200 | dd61ge9 | t3_5qxrvb | t1_dd3vflb | 1 | AshevilleMusic | t5_2zgmb |
SlothOfDoom | She was also one of the very first Federation ships built specifically as a warship (although officially it is an 'escort' so the Federation can still look touchy-feely) | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gea | t3_5r9d4o | t1_dd5zw81 | 16 | funny | t5_2qh33 |
The_Bravinator | The problem with Moffat was that it was shallow but overcomplicated. There were plots I can't imagine a child following that still managed to fall flat emotionally probably because they are riddled with plot holes).
You need a story that's simple enough to allow the kids to keep up while hitting deeper emotional notes. It's certainly possible. There are kids' cartoons that are great for the little ones but which have also made me cry buckets (I'm looking at you, Avatar: TLB and Steven Universe). | 1,485,907,200 | dd61geb | t3_5r9ke7 | t1_dd60rbj | 28 | unitedkingdom | t5_2qhqb |
VacationAwayFromWork | She's currently prepping for a post-WH turn on The Walking Dead. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gec | t3_5rbv31 | t1_dd60uwx | 1 | politics | t5_2cneq |
crash787 | Regigigas and mega alakazam | 1,485,907,200 | dd61ged | t3_5rbyze | t3_5rbyze | 1 | pokemontrades | t5_2rmov |
Cuntosaurous | I think we deserve more time! | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gee | t3_5rbq4j | t1_dd611y1 | 14 | Amd | t5_2rw0n |
dwmills | You looking for a gig? In Oak cliff may need someone. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gef | t3_5r8yzx | t3_5r8yzx | 2 | KitchenConfidential | t5_2sa8b |
Shitposter2016 | Yeah, that's fair. I'm just trying to pose an argument. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61geg | t3_5r4u5g | t1_dd61a5m | 1 | youtubehaiku | t5_2tqlz |
Darth_Immitis | Shout out to Lineage Vapor's in Lunenburg Mass! | 1,485,907,200 | dd61geh | t3_5rbm4k | t3_5rbm4k | 2 | Vaping | t5_2rg4n |
GodsGiftInBeef | Just asking but being a dick helped | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gei | t3_5rb6gd | t1_dd5vmsq | -4 | LiverpoolFC | t5_2qn0o |
GreenCoffeeMug | I'm *pretty* sure Japan is a democracy. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gej | t3_5r7r1h | t1_dd52q7y | 2 | ukpolitics | t5_2qhcv |
Smeeks765 | I am interested. What is your paypal? | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gek | t3_5r47nk | t1_dd5lr61 | 1 | ecigclassifieds | t5_2tjqh |
kinmosa | 安定ですね | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gel | t3_5r9din | t3_5r9din | 3 | yuri_jp | t5_375o3 |
xepa105 | http://i.imgur.com/k3qcfFR.gifv | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gem | t3_5r9ec3 | t1_dd5lv5j | 60 | nba | t5_2qo4s |
2016TrumpMAGA | They're really doubling down on stupid. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gen | t3_5rb78o | t3_5rb78o | 2 | The_Donald | t5_38unr |
SchlongConnery | That is a lot of blood. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61geo | t3_5rbk6e | t1_dd60zzv | 3 | LosAngeles | t5_2qht0 |
Jizzle3 | If it were a Patrice special it would be called "I'll Walk You Out" | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gep | t3_5r6x5u | t1_dd5txv1 | 1 | BillBurr | t5_2trqi |
M23Pokemon | Thanks mate, did breed the Shellos just for this GA | 1,485,907,200 | dd61geq | t3_5rbe4d | t1_dd619v1 | 1 | pokemontrades | t5_2rmov |
Dqueezy | Fucking savage | 1,485,907,200 | dd61ger | t3_5r8w29 | t3_5r8w29 | 7 | rantgrumps | t5_38iu4 |
galaxion | More players to race against? | 1,485,907,200 | dd61ges | t3_5ra6ty | t1_dd5mb6q | 7 | GameDeals | t5_2qwx3 |
RobotRockism | I hate Johnny Cueto | 1,485,907,200 | dd61get | t3_5r5deu | t3_5r5deu | 2 | baseball | t5_2qm7u |
jbone9877 | Every new resident brought a car?! That's crazy! | 1,485,907,200 | dd61geu | t3_5rbyzy | t1_dd618dl | -9 | Colorado | t5_2qhkb |
[deleted] | [deleted] | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gev | t3_5r8lef | t1_dd5ge9j | 1 | news | t5_2qh3l |
BeastBeef | Thanks! | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gew | t3_5q0zz9 | t1_dd3yxk6 | 1 | PCBuilds | t5_2vlhx |
prestondabomb | uhh..
Sinbadx | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gex | t3_5rbnvn | t1_dd61baj | 1 | Diepio | t5_3e819 |
pinata_penis_pump2 | Yes it does. Really picks up in the 2nd season. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gey | t3_5r74ph | t1_dd5hlrc | 1 | AskReddit | t5_2qh1i |
ember__island | The app shows me people who were at locations that MY MRT TRAIN passed by. Liddat also can... | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gez | t3_5r6m34 | t1_dd55cy7 | 2 | singapore | t5_2qh8c |
Drop_the_gun | Blame the game not the players imho | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf0 | t3_5rbg36 | t3_5rbg36 | 4 | hearthstone | t5_2w31t |
Grifoshka | Well, Peridot did say that the whole point of coming to Earth was to check on the Cluster, and she went to check on the fusion experiments, so they must be connected. His speculation sounds pretty reasonable to me. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf1 | t3_5rajm3 | t1_dd5opjn | 2 | stevenuniverse | t5_2viyl |
robkeller94 | Gonna miss H.R. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf2 | t3_5rbu5e | t3_5rbu5e | 3 | FlashTV | t5_2y6bs |
TrollsoHaaard | Joke around. Call her out on stupid stuff she says. Punch her in the throat. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf3 | t3_5rc12e | t3_5rc12e | 2 | AskReddit | t5_2qh1i |
MandolinCrow | I just got a job at a movie theater and my orientation is on Thursday. I also got a call for an interview at a grocery store and they want to schedule my interview Thursday and I'm worried the interview process will conflict with my theater job. I'd much, much rather work at the grocery store so I don't know if I should go for it or keep my theater job that is now a sure source of income. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf4 | t3_5ranbe | t3_5ranbe | 3 | AskReddit | t5_2qh1i |
swokor | WOw guess you're the fan boy after all ! :) | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf5 | t3_5oj6lj | t1_dd5srdw | 1 | ClassicOffensive | t5_3g719 |
CibrecaNA | Don't use her e to harass. If you do that you're liable to die. Also, try not to use it in a team fight. It's really a great escape or a great gap closer/for finishing someone off. If you harass with it--you're probably going to die.
But--you should know e is also a great escape. I.e. you can jump over walls or even position yourself between your enemy and safety and escape.
Look at this video of every wall jump:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iA9dbjaXUo4&feature=youtu.be
My only issue is that some walls are too thick . . ..
But probably the sexiest outplay I've done this season was against a Shyvana in the dragon pit. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf6 | t3_5rbi3m | t1_dd619ru | 1 | QuinnMains | t5_37jso |
BourbonAndBasketball | Hyouka? | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf7 | t3_5rb16q | t1_dd609wq | 2 | anime | t5_2qh22 |
alephnul | I travel by myself. I just don't know anyone else who likes to travel like me. I don't plan. I like to set off in a direction with a general destination in mind, and I don't use maps. | 1,485,907,200 | dd61gf8 | t3_5rbyml | t3_5rbyml | 30 | motocamping | t5_2tko6 |
ivebeanthere | Hey there! Im kind of new here too :) No worries. Ive been trying for years - went back and forth between the idea of surgery and finally just decided to do it on my own. I cut out sugars, starch, dairy, red meat, preservatives. I eat fish, chicken, fruits and vegetables and I haven't felt better in a long time. 26.5 pounds down this month. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gf9 | t3_5r7kro | t3_5r7kro | 1 | Weightloss_everything | t5_2ux4n |
Randym1221 | Release that shit !!!! Lost me a long while ago. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfa | t3_5rbove | t3_5rbove | 1 | pokemongo | t5_34jka |
Foxconfessor01 | People who take the time and money to come to showers and bring gifts - want to. They love you and your baby! Every single person at mine seemed so thrilled and happy for me! It was a reminder to me that We are not alone this! | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfb | t3_5rb9jr | t3_5rb9jr | 4 | BabyBumps | t5_2s7cl |
[deleted] | [deleted] | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfc | t3_5rahum | t3_5rahum | 1 | nonononoyes | t5_2xp2p |
GiftOfTheGame | I subscribed to WSJ for years. Literally cancelled it a few months ago. I don't miss it. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfd | t3_5raznz | t1_dd5zmcd | 13 | The_Donald | t5_38unr |
Hescules | if you're trading everything for sky blue spiralis, add me | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfe | t3_5rbzid | t3_5rbzid | 1 | RocketLeagueExchange | t5_3g4tc |
bumbuff | Not if you read all the comments. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gff | t3_5rau3f | t1_dd615vs | 0 | hockey | t5_2qiel |
eddydoubled | They announced it on twitter. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfh | t3_5rbzl6 | t1_dd61a74 | 1 | FUTMobile | t5_379r4 |
Pompf | Ive played that game. I watch that show.
Can't confirm, game too easy in comparison to what teaching a new player is like | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfi | t3_5rbh8n | t3_5rbh8n | 2 | Tradelands | t5_38jui |
SOwED | Kamehameha? | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfj | t3_5r8183 | t1_dd5rwd5 | 4 | AskReddit | t5_2qh1i |
[deleted] | [deleted] | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfk | t3_5raa9r | t3_5raa9r | 2 | MMORPG | t5_2qlxw |
boomboxkai | Oranges. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfl | t3_5rc16c | t3_5rc16c | 1 | AskReddit | t5_2qh1i |
username1012357654 | you'd be pretty rattled by a dagger to be fair. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfm | t3_5rax0g | t1_dd5xmr1 | 1 | hockey | t5_2qiel |
havealittlepun | I prefer caffeine but whatever works for you. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfn | t3_5rbowh | t1_dd5ylv8 | 5 | AskReddit | t5_2qh1i |
tehweave | GWP is not my main channel.
http://www.youtube.com/gamingwildlife
In general, our main channel succeeded with clickbait esque stuff. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfo | t3_5r4hrj | t1_dd5j5lf | 1 | letsplay | t5_2qss1 |
PapaFern | She won't let me in on when the relationship starts again, but I'm the first to know when it's over again of I act single! :P | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfp | t3_5rbys4 | t3_5rbys4 | 1 | AskReddit | t5_2qh1i |
SamirCasino | si vreo 600.000 de membri. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfq | t3_5ral5l | t1_dd5vbph | 4 | Romania | t5_2qm35 |
thekingswitness | Cleveland Cavaliers theme. Wish they had college football ones! | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfr | t3_5ra7wu | t3_5ra7wu | 5 | PS4 | t5_2rrlp |
tanruss1 | No, it's when he was a child, he said it to his father. Now it's his son saying it to him. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfs | t3_5qf0b1 | t3_5qf0b1 | 1 | ImGoingToHellForThis | t5_2s7yq |
ItzCStephCS | Some sort of villain | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gft | t3_5r8ti5 | t1_dd5ovch | 1 | reactiongifs | t5_2t5y3 |
emilking91 | Love how Enzo is starstruck when looking toward Snoop and Vince. Its funny how he is there, even though he had nothing to do with Wrestlemania itself(debuted the night after). | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfu | t3_5rannm | t3_5rannm | 37 | SquaredCircle | t5_2sljg |
Anjunabeast | Like he's been up all night high on saiyajin power | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfv | t3_5r0k6g | t1_dd3obez | 1 | dbz | t5_2sdu8 |
Rioghasarig | > I feel like you've forgotten everything we've talked about in this regards.
I'm kind of coming back to this a while from when I started so I may have forgotten something you said. Sorry, if that's the case.
I was just saying that it doesn't make sense to say they're 'drawn like kids', because a characters age isn't really able to be determined from how they're drawn.
> Except the game takes place in a highschool, which you just said was context for them being teens. Which means a rational person would assume some of them are children.
I think it's reasonable to assume they're children until you are informed that they are not children. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfw | t3_5qxv0j | t1_dd60pd8 | 1 | SubredditDrama | t5_2ss5b |
andnowmyteaiscold | I know this isn't what you want to hear, and I completely understand where you're coming from, but I think you need to try to take it down a notch.
Three months in you're still learning the ins and outs of being a vegetarian. You're in this afterglow of the transitional period. You feel like you've finally become the person that you want to be, and you've discovered this truth about the world that other people could just see if they looked around.
You know that vegetarianism is the logical choice, and you know logical people that are eating meat, so naturally it seems easy to "convert" them. Convincing others to change their habits isn't easy, though. If gone about the wrong way you can push other people away. I think it's best for these conversations to come up organically. This pre-planned conversation could work, but I think that he should be the one that's bringing up the idea.
You obviously felt the direct approach was best, but I feel like your message could have been cut down to: "Hey Brian, when you asked about why I was a vegetarian the other day, I don't feel like I really explained it very well. I don't know if it's something that you're really interested in hearing more about, but if it is I'd be happy to answer any questions!"
Do you see how this is less focused on you (you said "I would like" in almost every sentence) and instead shifts the focus and some control to Brian? | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfx | t3_5rbk66 | t1_dd5y71l | 1 | vegetarian | t5_2qm7x |
[deleted] | [removed] | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfy | t3_5r99uz | t3_5r99uz | 1 | OldSchoolCool | t5_2tycb |
Pitta_ | Ugh, yeah. Choke it down w/o complaining, and offer to cook the next meal. Maybe your dad will say 'my goodness OP, you're a great cook!' and you can cook together and teach him your ways.
Or maybe he won't and he'll keep on making his food how he's always made it and you can have cereal for dinner instead | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gfz | t3_5rbarg | t1_dd5yn2i | 7 | Cooking | t5_2qh7f |
sushisection | Please make this happen | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg0 | t3_5rbolt | t3_5rbolt | 2 | duncantrussell | t5_2sxtx |
sergeantmunch | Sigh. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg1 | t3_5rbvzk | t3_5rbvzk | 4 | creepyPMs | t5_2ug83 |
nachomeep | I can't believe its better! | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg2 | t3_5r7wgz | t1_dd5dm4j | 2 | pcgaming | t5_2qhfg |
completelytrustworth | I would read from chapter 1 even if you've already finished S1 of the anime. This story is amazing and worth retreading | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg3 | t3_5r7w4j | t1_dd5g5un | 1 | OnePunchMan | t5_2vm97 |
GhostBond | There are only two kinds of languages: the ones people complain about, and the ones nobody uses.
- Bjarne Stroustrup | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg4 | t3_5r0i3y | t1_dd3nb19 | 1 | java | t5_2qhd7 |
mal50 | what's in the water? | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg5 | t3_5r2rrg | t3_5r2rrg | 1 | MilitaryPorn | t5_2sq9y |
RoseBladePhantom | I'm out. Yeah, it definitely has trade value, but it's an investment you'd have to commit to. It's a rare Pepe, but it's just a Pepe. OP also depreciated the value exponentially by posting it here. It would've been much better used for private trading. I have a few connections with some high level Pepe dealers that would definitely be interested in purchasing a copy, but that's only if they already haven't received one. It's only been a few hours, so I'd buy now and sell quick. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg6 | t3_5r83yu | t1_dd5mvv0 | 32 | MemeEconomy | t5_3gl3k |
greengumball70 | I had that in high school, 3 in three years and 2 of them were major and incredibly scary. (One was bleeding on the brain the other lasted 7 weeks after the season ended) and I went through a really bad depression that I still fight occasionally. Since there was a definitive cause you should definitely go get it checked out as there's a better chance of it getting better when treated (more bad possibilities if it's of an unknown cause). I wouldn't hope my worst enemy had to go through that the feelings and head pain were so rough. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg7 | t3_5r8xqu | t1_dd608ql | 3 | Showerthoughts | t5_2szyo |
Meskaline | Pos acá e visto que le entramos a la indio, a la corona, a la viky y a las leon. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg8 | t3_5r8lq2 | t1_dd5x8bk | 11 | mexico | t5_2qhv7 |
hiabara | So glad to hear another person got one of my Pokémon :)) You're welcome! | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gg9 | t3_5r5wzn | t1_dd60g6q | 2 | pokemon | t5_2qmeb |
NekoNatsumii | Thats bad dont do that | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gga | t3_5rbjs5 | t1_dd61cp7 | 1 | PokeMoonSun | t5_3csff |
PugeHeniss | jokes on you, I'm not married | 1,485,907,201 | dd61ggb | t3_5r30sb | t1_dd4thui | 1 | MLS | t5_2rbnb |
galactic_123 | I reached the hub too. PS4 name Galactic_123 Guess Im jack of all trades, tho i have a tendency to shoot things If I dont feel welcome by sentinels / fauna. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61ggc | t3_5a4yl8 | t3_5a4yl8 | 1 | NMSGalacticHub | t5_3ha7e |
cakemuncher | T-Mobile here. 7 lines. Paying $180.
2Gb LTE. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61ggd | t3_5r91ak | t1_dd5poci | 3 | personalfinance | t5_2qstm |
AustinXTyler | Me millionth dollarrrrrr | 1,485,907,201 | dd61gge | t3_5rahum | t1_dd5sh6h | 83 | nonononoyes | t5_2xp2p |
Outlaw-In-Law | Psst...Anheuser Busch had an ownership stake in the brewers who make Dos Equis and Corona. | 1,485,907,201 | dd61ggf | t3_5rbkmo | t1_dd5z7fo | 2 | news | t5_2qh3l |
Lord_Tachanka | Pilot/tanker weapon, is full auto. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggg | t3_5rabve | t1_dd5v4kc | 6 | battlefield_one | t5_3eer4 |
Falform | It's a tough call since the game could go a few ways that would make one of them worse than the other. [SSJ3 Goku](/agl) has a % based passive which is going to be much better in the future than flat attack boosts. However he also has a turn limit which with Bosses getting more and more health (Up to 10 health bars from the pictures) which means his damage could really fall off in longer fights.
Also odds would say that INT leader will mainly be an Extreme leader since we've already got 2 super types so Gohan won't be getting any buff.
I think I'd go with [SSJ3 Goku](/agl). Since you have [SSJ4 Vegeta](/agl) he'll be a decently hard hitter for the turns he has his passive. Even though he shares no ki links with anyone he'll still have FB for the extra attack at least. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggh | t3_5qzh0h | t1_dd5s52p | 1 | DBZDokkanBattle | t5_384a7 |
non-rhetorical | > No thx, I've got much more intelligible arguments to tackle.
Before you tackle them, you might want to learn what the word *intelligible* means. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggi | t3_5raild | t1_dd6012d | 1 | unpopularopinion | t5_2tk0s |
mecarr | Except Archdragon Peak as always. That area seems so peaceful and out of place compared to the rest of the world that is decaying. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggj | t3_5rafnl | t1_dd61ayi | 14 | darksouls3 | t5_2w3z3 |
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Dual_Carry | It sure is! Got it off a guy on JerzeeDevil. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggl | t3_5rbufq | t1_dd60zci | 1 | knifeclub | t5_2ulfn |
-oMarkyMark | It's optional. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggm | t3_5r6f84 | t1_dd60ymz | 2 | Fallout | t5_2qnzu |
BaneWraith | Something similar happened to me. When i first started running i was really overweight and out of shape for a 16 year old.
A super fit dude was running in the other direction and gave me a high five. No words. But it said enough.
Honestly thanks to him i actually continued on my journey. And these days im a personal trainer and studying to be a physiotherapist | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggn | t3_5r7ujg | t1_dd57pfo | 1 | AskReddit | t5_2qh1i |
CrackerDarrell | That's awesome is that a lunar with a different shell? | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggo | t3_5rbpsr | t1_dd5zflx | 1 | xboxone | t5_2xbci |
FirestormPvP | I do that and cleaver, usually Ghostblade > Cleaver > Duskblade > EoN > situational | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggp | t3_5qrnx1 | t3_5qrnx1 | 2 | Talonmains | t5_32ntp |
xenokilla | appeal to hypocrisy | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggq | t3_5r8mbd | t1_dd5m1gb | 1 | worldnews | t5_2qh13 |
Zaros104 | Just so you know, SEO is a thing that works. It can be done for images. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggr | t3_5r9d53 | t1_dd5pr9m | 4 | politics | t5_2cneq |
djdogjuam2 | Ikr starting over is a better idea than building on top of a swamp. (metaphor of course) to get a grip on how shit it actually is, here's an article: [link](
http://www.pcgamer.com/heres-whats-happening-inside-fallout-3s-metro-train/) | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggs | t3_5r7xqr | t1_dd5tyu5 | 6 | fo4 | t5_2tzv4 |
Quincy__Jones | I'm sure some intrepid soul will go in-depth on this piece, but for now, consider the following:
1. This is exposition. All of it. There is not a single scene, just the narrator going on (and on) about stuff that already happened. It's no different than some guy at a bar coming up to me and saying, "Hey, I'm real messed up. Lemme tell you, it all started with my mother..." Then the guy proceeds to tell his life story, and you just wish he would go away, because of reason number 2.
2. The story is boring. Boohoo, the guy's mom was an alcoholic. Boohoo, the guy's tried suicide a few times. "I am in eternal pain"? Gimme a break, dude. Go talk to a holocaust survivor.
3. Commas are not confetti. This is your second sentence: "Consistently, I’ve found, anguish, whether mental or physical, is a feeling that I’ve made great attempts to avoid." Terrible. What is the point of this construction? Concise language is the backbone of storytelling. Complex thoughts do not have to be expressed through complex syntax. Sentences like this are a surefire way to make editors and readers put the book down.
4. Profanity is also not confetti. The excessive swearing does not enhance the work. It comes off as edgy for the sake of edginess, especially next to the advanced vocabulary.
5. Later paragraphs are obnoxiously long. One paragraph is 336 words. In a small paperback, that's like a page of solid words. Major turn-off.
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Essentially, it's a blog post from a guy who *thinks* he's had a hard life. It's annoying to read, in both content and structure. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggt | t3_5r9t2y | t3_5r9t2y | 3 | DestructiveReaders | t5_2z15u |
Illegal_Tender | If she can't run this obstacle course in under two minutes, there's clearly no chance that she'll be able to bypass all of the traps when we raid the Tomb of the Monkey King on our third date. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggu | t3_5rbwx7 | t1_dd60wuh | 5 | OkCupid | t5_2rct2 |
appledragon127 | my first survival ship was just ships i came across exploring that i just pieced together, it legit just looks like alot of different colored boxes welded together
plus side is the cockpit is the last thing that will be destroyed, ive tried ramming it into another version of itself at 500ms and the cockpit still survives | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggv | t3_5r6hgh | t1_dd60k7w | 2 | spaceengineers | t5_2ygas |
thisdream | The entirety of "up jumps da boogie", especially magoo's verse | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggw | t3_5r8tl6 | t3_5r8tl6 | 1 | hiphopheads | t5_2rh4c |
MaradoMarado | Wow your story is exactly the same as mine. Same prices same interactions everything (except I ordered end of 2015). Someone in this sub made a FB group called Scammed by Queen Magazine (I think Farrah Moan is also in it lol). There's tons of stories from people who never saw anything after payment. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggx | t3_5r9aie | t3_5r9aie | 3 | rupaulsdragrace | t5_2t3or |
TheTrueFlexKavana | http://i.imgur.com/QgJUL.gifv | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggy | t3_5rbp85 | t1_dd60krj | 54 | mildlyinteresting | t5_2ti4h |
restringtheaxe | Happier endings? | 1,485,907,202 | dd61ggz | t3_5r4v7j | t1_dd5zx37 | 9 | Frugal | t5_2qhbe |
chuang-tzu | My sign is still up. Won't be taking it down. | 1,485,907,202 | dd61gh0 | t3_5ra67c | t3_5ra67c | 6 | SandersForPresident | t5_2zbq7 |
holierthanthee | Your MAC address gets sent to the Starbucks router and is logged with the time/date of the packet which pretty much nails you down. You'll need a MAC spoofer.
| 1,485,907,202 | dd61gh1 | t3_5r9d53 | t1_dd5se4q | 2 | politics | t5_2cneq |
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