Avinaash/finalDPOChallengeNewTest6 · Datasets at Hugging Face

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I don't know why, but when I am with him, I feel comfortable.	#I don't know why when I am with him, I feel comfortable.	#I don't know why when I am with him, I feel comfortable.	#I don't know why when I am with him, I feel comfortable.	6	6	6
We hold held the party in one of my friend's house, and one of my Korean friends cooked Korean dishes!!	#We hold the party one of my friends' house and one of my Korean friends cooked Korean dishes!!	The party one of my friends' house and one of my Korean friends cooked Korean dishes!!	# We hold the party one of my friends' house and one of my Korean friends cooked Korean dishes!!	12	20	13
When I return to Japan, it'll be difficult to find a job myself.	# When I return to Japan, it is difficult to find a job myself.	# When I return to Japan, it is difficult to find a job myself.	# When I return to Japan, it is difficult to find a job myself.	7	7	7
She is the master of shopping.	#She is a master of shopping.	#She is a master of shopping.	# She is a master of shopping.	4	4	5
She is a master of shopping.	# She is a master of shopping.	# She is a master of shopping.	#She is a master of shopping.	2	2	1
If the class finishes, I can enjoy it so I can fight endured sleepiness.	# If the class finishes, I can enjoy so I have endured sleepiness.	The class will finish, and I can enjoy so I endured sleepiness.	# If the class finishes, I can enjoy so I have been endured sleepiness.	13	27	13
So the dentist decided to pull out only two of them.	#So the dentist decided to pull two of them.	#So the dentist decided to pull two of them.	#So the dentist decided to pull two of them.	10	10	10
First, I can't cook, second I don't know what I will cook.	# First, I can't cook, second, I don't know what I should cook.	# First, I can't cook; second, I don't know what I should cook.	#First, I can't cook, but second, I don't know what I should cook.	8	9	11
I need to fire myself up.	#I need to fire myself.	#I need to fire up myself.	#I need to fire up myself.	4	7	7
Yesterday I went to a library which is located near my house.	#Yesterday I went to a library which is located near my house.	#Yesterday I went to a library, which is located near my house.	#Yesterday I went to a library which is located near my house.	1	2	1
I made friends with my host family.	#I made friends with my host family.	#I made friends with my host family.	The host family made friends with me.	1	1	28
In my previous class, there were some guys who made me laugh.	# In my previous class, there were some guys who made me laugh.	# In my previous class, there were some guys who made me laugh.	# In my previous class, there were some guys who made me laugh.	2	2	2
Why did he commit suicide?	# Why did he suicide?	# Why did he suicide?	The reason why he suicide?	9	9	14
I had slept that weekend.	#I had slept a weekend.	#I had slept a weekend.	#I had slept a weekend.	4	4	4
So after after school I went to eat dinner with my friends!	#So after school, I went to eat dinner with my friends!	#So after school, I went to eat dinner with my friends!	#So after school, I went to eat dinner with my friends!	8	8	8
She said she felt bored and wanted to hear some interesting stories.	The she said she felt boring and wanted to hear some interesting stories.	#She said she felt bored and wanted to hear some interesting stories.	#She said she felt bored and wanted to hear some interesting stories.	8	1	1
The next morning, the war began.	#The next morning, the war began.	The next morning, the war began.	#The next morning, the war began.	1	0	1
The female lion lioness dashed into the forest, and she came to a higher place and smelled the air.	#The female lion dashed into the forest, and she came to a higher place and smelled the air.	The female lion dashed into the forest, and she came to a higher place and smelled the air.	The female lion dashed into the forest, and she came to a higher place and smelled the air.	9	8	8
This bigger prison is just like the prison in the movie that the actor and his friends and enemies lived in, and Both of them look good on the surface, but they are actually horrifying rot totally.	This bigger prison is just like the prison that the actor and his friends and enemies lived in, and both of them look like good on the surface, but they actually rot totally.	This bigger prison is just like the prison that the actor and his friends and enemies lived in, and both of them look like good on the surface, but they actually rot totally.	This bigger prison is just like the prison that the actor and his friends and enemies lived in, and both of them look like good on the surface, but they actually rot totally.	34	34	34
In There, even an angel could be a monster.	# In there, even an angel could be a monster.	# In there, even an angel could be a monster.	# In there, even an angel could be a monster.	3	3	3
The situation was not good for the chimpanzees because there were was no trees,	#The situation was not good for the chimpanzees because there was no tree.	The situation was not good for the chimpanzees because there was no tree.	The situation was not good for the chimpanzees because there was no tree.	8	7	7
The soldiers immediately beat the chimpanzee to death immediately and held happily took the muntjac happily to see the king.	#The soldiers beat the chimpanzee to death immediately and held the muntjac happily to see the king.	The soldiers beat the chimpanzee to death immediately and held the muntjac happily to see the king.	#The soldiers beat the chimpanzee to death immediately and held the muntjac happily to see the king.	26	25	26
Don't you think it's amazing and funny?	#Don't you think it's amazing and funny?	#Don't you think it's amazing and funny?	#Don't you think it's amazing and funny?	1	1	1
My mum was agitated and dragged us to see how heavily their house got wrecked.	#My mum was agitated and dragged us to see how heavily their house got wrecked.	#My mum was agitated and dragged us to see how heavily their house got wrecked.	# My mum was agitated and dragged us to see how heavily their house got wrecked.	1	1	2
The island needs eternal peace, and we will not hurt others or be hurt anymore.	#The island needs eternal peace, and we will not hurt others and be hurt anymore.	The island needs eternal peace, and we will not hurt others and be hurt anymore.	The island needs eternal peace, and we will not hurt others and be hurt anymore.	4	3	3
But all the monkeys decided to support the black monkey, and so did two deers.	#But all monkeys decided to support the black monkey, and so did two deers.	#But all monkeys decided to support the black monkey, and so did two deers.	The monkeys decided to support the black monkey and so did two deers.	5	5	10
When she was only about 15 years old, she was forced to marry a man as second wife, who was 20 years older than her.	#When she was only about 15 years old, she was forced to marry a man as a second wife, who was 20 years older than her.	#When she was only about 15 years old, she was forced to marry a man as a second wife, who was 20 years older than her.	# When she was only about 15 years old, she was forced to marry a man as a second wife, who was 20 years older than her.	3	3	4
The lion was walking from the forest with his wife and another three companions, the fox and the dog brothers, and his expression was blank.	#The lion was walking from the forest with his wife and another three companies, the fox and the dog brothers, and his expression was blank.	#The lion was walking from the forest with his wife and another three companies, the fox and the dog brothers, and his expression was blank.	# The lion was walking from the forest with his wife and another three companies, the fox and the dog brothers, and his expression was blank.	3	3	4
I checked the number from which she phoned me last night, and I found it was a strange number.	# I checked the number that she phoned me last night, and I found it was a strange number.	# I checked the number that she phoned me last night, and I found it was a strange number.	#I checked the number that she phoned me last night, and I found it was a strange number.	11	11	10
I wanted to go home to take a show or at least wash my face and brush my teeth, and I also wanted to check my home to see if it was damaged or collapsed.	#I wanted to go home to take a show or at least wash my face and brush my teeth, and I also wanted to check my home.	#I wanted to go home to take a show or at least wash my face and brush my teeth, and I also wanted to check my home, was it chapped or collapsed.	# I wanted to go home to take a show or at least wash my face and brush my teeth, and I also wanted to check my home.	39	18	40
I was waiting here and hoped the bus company still worked.	#I was waiting here and hoped the bus company would still work.	#I was waiting here and hoped the bus company would still work.	#I was waiting here and hoped the bus company would still work.	9	9	9
There still were many aftermaths, and when there was a tremor, people in the cars or trucks would be scared and start screaming.	#There still had many aftermaths, and when there was a tremor, people in cars or trucks would be scared and screaming.	#There still had many aftermaths, and when there was a tremor, people in the cars or trucks would be scared and screaming.	# There still had many aftermaths, and when there was a tremor, people in cars or trucks would be scared and screaming.	15	11	16
But was it really quiet in the apartment?	#Was it really quiet in the apartment?	#Was it really quiet in the apartment?	#Was it really quiet in the apartment?	5	5	5
I remembered that, before I fell asleep, all animals got well along with each other.	#I remembered that before I fell asleep, all animals got well along with each other.	#I remembered that before I fell asleep, all animals got well along with each other.	The memory of I remembered that before I fell asleep, all the animals got well along with each other.	2	2	19
We were surrounded by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.	#We were around by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.	#We were around by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.	#We were around by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.	6	6	6
We were around surrounded by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.	# We were around by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.	# We were around by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.	# We were around by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.	13	13	13
I could not help crying, so happy, so sweet, and she smiled and was singing all the time, like an angel, walking on the surface of the lake.	#I could not help crying, so happy, so sweet, and she smiled and was singing all the time, like an angle walking on the surface of the lake.	#I could not help crying, so happy, so sweet, and she smiled and was singing all the time, like an angle walking on the surface of the lake.	#I could not help crying, so happy, so sweet, and she smiled and was singing all the time, like an angle walking on the surface of the lake.	3	3	3
Yes, one day, I will die, as will the same as all the animals.	# Yes, one day I will die, as the same as all the animals.	# Yes, one day I will die, as the same as all the animals.	# Yes, one day I will die, as the same as all the animals.	8	8	8
Even the grey goat, in spite of the pain in his right leg, was clapping vigorously with his hoofs, and his old bother, who had just glared at the lion with hateful eyes, was dancing with a deer.	#Even the grey goat, in spite of the hurt of his right leg, was clapping vigorously with his hoofs, and his old bother, who had just glared at the lion with the hated eyes, was dancing with a deer.	#Even the grey goat, in spite of the hurt of his right leg, was clapping vigorously with his hoofs, and his old bother, who had just glared at the lion with the hated eyes, was dancing with a deer.	#Even the grey goat, in spite of the hurt of his right leg, was clapping vigorously with his hoofs, and his old bother, who had just glared at the lion with the hated eyes, was dancing with a deer.	14	14	14
The history of the island has changed, and you all are the creators of this new history.	# History of the island changed, and you all are the creators of the new history.	The history of the island has changed, and you all are the creators of the new history.	# History of the island changed, and you all are the creators of the new history.	10	2	10
My father refused strongly, and he said with a series of heavy coughs that he had prepared himself to die, and when death came, he must be at his hometown.	#My father refused strongly, and he said with a series of heavy coughs that he prepared himself to die, and when death came, he must be at the hometown.	#My father refused strongly, and he said with a series of heavy coughs that he prepared himself to die, and when death came, he must be at the hometown.	#My father refused strongly, and he said with a series of heavy coughs that he prepared himself to die, and when death came, he must be at the hometown.	8	8	8
There is another reason that you maybe never know clearly, that some people killed others at random, and maybe you can do nothing about it.	#There is another reason that you might never know clearly, that some people killed others by random, and maybe you can do nothing for it.	The other reason that you might never know clearly is that some people killed others by random, and maybe you can do nothing for it.	The other reason is that some people killed others by random, and maybe you can do nothing for it.	11	20	47
Because the monkeys, deers, and goats believe he is not strong enough to hurt them, and the bears and pigs believe he is not strong enough to compete with them, so all of them feel free to make friends with him.	Because the monkeys, deers, and goats believe he is not strong enough to hurt them, and the beers and pigs believe he is not strong enough to compete with them, so all of them feel free to make friends with him.	Because the monkeys, deers, and goats believe he is not strong enough to hurt them, and the beers and pigs believe he is not strong enough to compete with them, so all of them feel free to make friends with him.	Because the monkeys, deers, and goats believe he is not strong enough to hurt them, and the beers and pigs believe him is not strong enough to compete with them, so all of them feel free to make friends with him.	1	1	3
I have an exam in Spanish today, so I'm studying for it.	#I have a Spanish exam today, so I'm studying for it.	#I have an exam in Spanish today, so I'm studying for it.	#I have a Spanish exam today, so I'm studying for it.	14	1	14
When he arrived came to the place, many supporters and assemblymen yelled and wanted to hit him.	#When he came to the place, many support and assemblymen yelled and wanted to hit him.	#When he came to the place, many support and assemblymen yelled and wanted to hit him.	# When he came to the place, many support and assemblymen yelled and wanted to hit him.	12	12	13
After getting into the car, Jack fell deeply asleep into a deep sleep.	# After getting into the car, Jack fell deeply asleep.	# After getting into the car, Jack fell deeply asleep.	# After getting into the car, Jack fell deeply asleep.	20	20	20
When I got learned of this news, I was so sad and cried for a long time.	#When I got this news, I was so sad and cried for a long time.	#When I got this news, I was so sad and cried for a long time.	The news was so sad and I cried for a long time.	12	12	29
I want to buy a PlayStationPortable, but my bed is almost broken.	#I want to buy a PlayStationPortable, but my bed is almost broken.	#I want to buy a PlayStationPortable, but my bed is almost broken.	#I want to buy a PlayStationPortable, but my bed is almost broken.	1	1	1
Naturally, I felt tired but easily recovered till the next day.	#Naturally, I felt tired, but easily recovered till next day.	The naturally, I felt tired, but easily recovered till the next day.	The naturally, I felt tired, but easily recovered till the next day.	6	6	6
I could not practice kendo after the big earthquake.	#I could not practice kendo after a big earthquake.	#I could not practice kendo after a big earthquake.	#I could not practice kendo after a big earthquake.	4	4	4
How do you say that phrase in English?	# How do you say that phrase in English?	# How do you say that phrase in English?	# How do you say that phrase in English?	2	2	2
Afterward, blood pressure, heartbeat, eyesight, and hearing ability were measured.	# Afterward, blood pressure, heartbeat, eyesight, hearing ability, and memory were measured.	# Afterward, blood pressure, heartbeat, eyesight, and hearing ability were measured.	The next morning, blood pressure, heartbeat, eyesight, and hearing ability were measured.	18	2	14
Do native English speakers really use this word in daily life?	# Does native English speakers really use this word in daily life?	# Does native English speakers really use this word in daily life?	# Does native English speakers really use this word in daily life?	4	4	4
Actually, I do wanna take off my tie and suit at any minute now!	#Actualy, I wanna take off my tie and suit at any minute!	#Actualy, I wanna take off my tie and suit at any minute!	#Actualy, I wanna take off my tie and suit at any minute!	9	9	9
In During morning, I barely have a seat on a commuter train.	#In the morning, I barely have a seat in a commuter train.	#In the morning, I barely have a seat in a commuter train.	#In the morning, I barely have a seat on a commuter train.	8	8	7
I don't want to take try it.	#I don't want to take it.	#I don't want to take it.	#I don't want to take it.	5	5	5
I feel that iPhone is very useful, but it doesn't catch electric waves well.	#I feel the iPhone is very useful, but it doesn't catch the electric wave well.	#I feel the iPhone is very useful, but it doesn't catch the electric wave well.	#I feel the iPhone is very useful, but it doesn't catch the electric wave well.	8	8	8
The majority of students believe that part-time jobs will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills.	The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills.	The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills.	The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills.	1	1	1
And the musician comes from the spiritual world.	#And the musician comes from the spiritual world.	#And the musician comes from the spiritual world.	The musician comes from a spiritual world.	1	1	8
First of all, extra studies surely interfere with children's physical development.	# First of all, extra studies surely interfered with children's physical development.	The first of all, extra studies surely interfered with children's physical development.	# First of all, extra studies surely interfered with children's physical development.	3	6	3
So funny that I can ignore his handsome good looks and have a good laugh.	#So funny that I can ignore his handsome and have a good laugh.	#So funny that I can ignore his handsome and have a good laugh.	#So funny that I can ignore his handsome and have a good laugh.	12	12	12
For today my work is finished.	#Today my work finished.	In today's work, my work was finished.	#Today, my work finished.	8	13	9
But the English teacher was so hyper, so I could talk with her.	#But the English teacher was so hyper, so I could talk with her.	The English teacher was so hyper, so I could talk with her.	The English teacher was so hyper, so I could talk with her.	1	5	5
It talks about going into other people's minds and trying to heal them.	# It talks about going into other people's minds and trying to heal it.	# It talks about going into other people's minds and trying to heal it.	# It talks about going into other people's minds and trying to heal it.	6	6	6
Since we haven't talked in ages, we talked a lot to each other about our recent situations.	#Since we haven't talked in ages, we've talked a lot about our recent situations.	#Since we haven't talked in ages, we've talked a lot about our recent situations.	#Since we haven't talked in ages, we've talked a lot about our recent situations.	18	18	18
What do you think I should do to get the corrections?	# Do you think what should I do to get the corrections?	# Do you think what should I do to get the corrections?	#Do you think what should I do to get the corrections?	11	11	12
I thought my strength was positive thinking, but it was I just acted like it.	#I thought my strength was positive thinking, but it was I just acted it out.	#I thought my strength was positive thinking, but it was I just acted on it.	#I thought my strength was positive thinking, but it was I just acted on it.	6	5	5
It is often said in Japan that the Japanese entrance exam is often more difficult than that of other countries.	# It is often said in Japan that the Japanese entrance exam is often more difficult than that of other countries.	# It is often said in Japan that the Japanese entrance exam is often more difficult than that of other countries.	# It is often said in Japan that the Japanese entrance exam is often more difficult than that of other countries.	2	2	2
By the way, the most commonly used one in other countries is the Hepburn system, isn't it?	By the way, the most commonly used one is the Hepburn system in other countries, isn't it?	By the way, the most commonly used one is the Hepburn system in other countries, isn't it?	By the way, the most commonly used one is the Hepburn system in other countries, isn't it?	28	28	28
I had never learned how to draw paintings, and I had trouble drawing balloons.	#I have never learned to draw paintings, and I had trouble drawing balloons.	#I have never learned to draw paintings, and I had trouble drawing balloons.	#I have never learned to draw paintings, and I have had trouble drawing balloons.	7	7	12
The second picture is the newspaper on the iPod touch.	# Second picture is the newspaper on the iPod touch.	The second picture is the newspaper on the iPod touch.	# Second picture is the newspaper on the iPod touch.	4	0	4
I also sent for some delicious sake from a bottle shop in Toyama Prefecture.	#I also sent for some delicious sake from a bottle shop in Toyama Prefecture.	#I also sent for some delicious sake from a bottle shop in Toyama Prefecture.	#I also sent for some delicious sake from a bottle shop in Toyama Prefecture.	1	1	1
When I cooked the dinner, I cut my finger on the slicer.	# When I cook dinner, I cut my finger on the slicer.	# When I cook dinner, I cut my finger on the slicer.	# When I cook dinner, I cut my finger on a slicer.	8	8	11
I grilled the sauries with salt and ate them with a squeeze of lemon and grated radish.	#I grilled sauries with salt and ate them with a squeeze of lemon and a grated radish.	#I grilled sauries with salt and ate them with a squeeze of lemon and a grated radish.	# I grilled sauries with salt and ate them with a squeeze of lemon and a grated radish.	7	7	8
In the NBA, You were in a very different position.	# In the NBA, you were in a very different position.	# In the NBA, you were in a very different position.	# In the NBA, you were in a very different position.	3	3	3
I hope to go back again as soon as I can.	#I hope I will go back again as soon as I can.	#I hope to go back again as soon as I can.	#I hope to go back again as soon as I can.	7	1	1
Today, I will introduce one of the classes I am taking at university.	# Today, I will introduce one of my classes I am taking at university.	# Today, I will introduce one of my classes I am taking at university.	# Today, I will introduce one of my classes I am taking at university.	5	5	5
I make a X'mas cake for him every year.	#I make X'mas cakes for him every year.	#I make X'mas cakes for him every year.	# I make X'mas cakes for him every year.	4	4	5
After the graduation ceremony, I went to eat lunch with my friends from the basketball club.	# After the graduation ceremony, I went to eat lunch with my basketball club friends.	# After the graduation ceremony, I went to eat lunch with my basketball club friends.	#After graduation ceremony, I went to eat lunch with my basketball club friends.	27	27	30
Thank you for your kind comments and compliments.	# Thank you for your kind comments.	# Thank you for your kind comments.	# Thank you for your kind comments.	18	18	18
I have to study English hard every day.	#I have to study hard English every day.	#I have to study hard English every day.	#I have to study hard English every day.	11	11	11
Because the game is important for Japan and me.	# Because, the game is important for Japan and me.	# Because, the game is important for Japan and me.	The game is important for Japan and me.	3	3	9
He is a very, very interesting man.	#He is a very very interesting man.	#He is a very very interesting man.	#He is a very very interesting man.	2	2	2
I want to get used to this community as early fast as possible.	#I want to get used to this community as early as possible.	#I want to get used to this community as early as possible.	#I want to get used to this community as early as possible.	6	6	6
All day long, I have kept looking for papers, articles, and books as references for my thesis.	#I have kept looking for papers, articles, and books as references for my thesis all day long.	#I have kept looking for papers, articles, and books as references for my thesis all day long.	#I have kept looking for papers, articles, and books as references for my thesis all day long.	27	27	27
Also, I'd like to study how the Japanese educational system affects our ambiguity.	# Also, I'd like to study how the Japanese educational system affects our ambiguity.	# Also, I'd like to study how the Japanese educational system affects our ambiguity.	# Also, I'd like to study how the Japanese educational system affects our ambiguity.	2	2	2
I rejected the offer at first because I thought that I was the one who should improve my English more and more.	I rejected the offer first because I thought that I was the one who should improve English more and more.	I rejected the offer first because I thought that I was the one who should improve English more and more.	I rejected the offer first because I thought that I was the one who should improve English more and more.	6	6	6
She was pretty, and sexy, and on top of that, her voice was awesome!!!	#She's pretty, sexy, and on top of that, her voice was awesome!!!	#She's pretty, sexy, and on top of that, her voice was awesome!!!	The pretty, sexy, and on top of that, her voice was awesome!!!	8	8	9
It was July 21, my birthday, on 21, July when I was a second-year pupil grade student.	#It was my birthday on 21 July when I was a second-year pupil.	#It was my birthday on 21 July when I was a second-year pupil.	# It was my birthday on 21 July when I was a second-year pupil.	26	26	27
The next Saturday, I headed there with my friend by bicycle.	#Next Saturday, I headed there with my friend by bicycle.	The next Saturday, I headed there with my friend by bicycle.	The next Saturday, I headed there with my friend by bicycle.	5	0	0
It was a very long way, 10 kilometers, for a second-year pupil grade student to return home.	# It was a very long way, 10 kilometers, for a second-year pupil to return home.	# It was a very long way, 10 kilometers, for a second-year pupil to return home.	# It was a very long way, 10 kilometers, for a second-year pupil to return home.	16	16	16
What I had been absorbing in the wild then are very good memories for me now.	# What I had been absorbing in the wild is very good memories for me now.	# What I had been absorbing in the wild is very good memories for me now.	# What I had been absorbing in the wild is very good memories for me now.	10	10	10
This service was published yesterday on a very famous Japanese news site of Japanese.	#This service was published yesterday in a very famous news site of Japan.	The service was published yesterday in a very famous news site of Japan.	#This service was published yesterday in a very famous news site of Japan.	14	15	14
A special function of this umbrella is the rotating handle.	# Special function of this umbrella is the rotating handle.	The special function of this umbrella is the rotating handle.	# Special function of this umbrella is the rotating handle.	2	3	2
Why is he nude?	# Why is he nude?	# Why is he nude?	# Why is he nude?	2	2	2
Why is he loved by all people?	# Why is he loved by all people?	The reason why he is loved by all people is that he is loved by all people.	# Why is he loved by all people?	2	47	2
I don't have long sleeve shirts, so I felt the cold more than other people.	#I don't have long slave-shirts, so I felt more than other people.	#I don't have long slave-shirts, so I felt more than other people.	# I don't have long slave-shirts, so I felt more than other people.	13	13	14
I'm afraid no one will correct my English in this diary, but I'm very happy that it will be corrected by the excellent native English speaker pretty soon.	#I'm afraid no one would correct my English in the diary, but I'm very happy that it was corrected by the excellent native English speaker pretty soon.	#I'm afraid no one would correct my English in the diary, but I'm very happy that it was corrected by the excellent native English speaker pretty soon.	#I'm afraid no one would correct my English in the diary, but I'm very happy that it was corrected by the excellent native English speaker pretty soon.	12	12	12
I am so glad to come here for this interview!	#I am so glad to come here for this interview!	#I am so glad to come here for this interview!	In return, I am so glad to come here for this interview!	1	1	11
The bride was so beautiful and looked happy.	#Bride was so beautiful and looked happy.	The bride was so beautiful and looked happy.	#Bride was so beautiful and looked happy.	5	0	5

I don't know why, but when I am with him, I feel comfortable.

#I don't know why when I am with him, I feel comfortable.

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We hold held the party in one of my friend's house, and one of my Korean friends cooked Korean dishes!!

#We hold the party one of my friends' house and one of my Korean friends cooked Korean dishes!!

The party one of my friends' house and one of my Korean friends cooked Korean dishes!!

# We hold the party one of my friends' house and one of my Korean friends cooked Korean dishes!!

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When I return to Japan, it'll be difficult to find a job myself.

# When I return to Japan, it is difficult to find a job myself.

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She is the master of shopping.

#She is a master of shopping.

# She is a master of shopping.

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She is a master of shopping.

# She is a master of shopping.

#She is a master of shopping.

2

1

If the class finishes, I can enjoy it so I can fight endured sleepiness.

# If the class finishes, I can enjoy so I have endured sleepiness.

The class will finish, and I can enjoy so I endured sleepiness.

# If the class finishes, I can enjoy so I have been endured sleepiness.

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13

So the dentist decided to pull out only two of them.

#So the dentist decided to pull two of them.

10

First, I can't cook, second I don't know what I will cook.

# First, I can't cook, second, I don't know what I should cook.

# First, I can't cook; second, I don't know what I should cook.

#First, I can't cook, but second, I don't know what I should cook.

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11

I need to fire myself up.

#I need to fire myself.

#I need to fire up myself.

4

7

Yesterday I went to a library which is located near my house.

#Yesterday I went to a library which is located near my house.

#Yesterday I went to a library, which is located near my house.

#Yesterday I went to a library which is located near my house.

1

2

1

I made friends with my host family.

#I made friends with my host family.

The host family made friends with me.

1

28

In my previous class, there were some guys who made me laugh.

# In my previous class, there were some guys who made me laugh.

2

Why did he commit suicide?

# Why did he suicide?

The reason why he suicide?

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14

I had slept that weekend.

#I had slept a weekend.

4

So after after school I went to eat dinner with my friends!

#So after school, I went to eat dinner with my friends!

8

She said she felt bored and wanted to hear some interesting stories.

The she said she felt boring and wanted to hear some interesting stories.

#She said she felt bored and wanted to hear some interesting stories.

8

1

The next morning, the war began.

#The next morning, the war began.

The next morning, the war began.

#The next morning, the war began.

1

0

1

The female lion lioness dashed into the forest, and she came to a higher place and smelled the air.

#The female lion dashed into the forest, and she came to a higher place and smelled the air.

The female lion dashed into the forest, and she came to a higher place and smelled the air.

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8

This bigger prison is just like the prison in the movie that the actor and his friends and enemies lived in, and Both of them look good on the surface, but they are actually horrifying rot totally.

This bigger prison is just like the prison that the actor and his friends and enemies lived in, and both of them look like good on the surface, but they actually rot totally.

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In There, even an angel could be a monster.

# In there, even an angel could be a monster.

3

The situation was not good for the chimpanzees because there were was no trees,

#The situation was not good for the chimpanzees because there was no tree.

The situation was not good for the chimpanzees because there was no tree.

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7

The soldiers immediately beat the chimpanzee to death immediately and held happily took the muntjac happily to see the king.

#The soldiers beat the chimpanzee to death immediately and held the muntjac happily to see the king.

The soldiers beat the chimpanzee to death immediately and held the muntjac happily to see the king.

#The soldiers beat the chimpanzee to death immediately and held the muntjac happily to see the king.

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26

Don't you think it's amazing and funny?

#Don't you think it's amazing and funny?

1

My mum was agitated and dragged us to see how heavily their house got wrecked.

#My mum was agitated and dragged us to see how heavily their house got wrecked.

# My mum was agitated and dragged us to see how heavily their house got wrecked.

1

2

The island needs eternal peace, and we will not hurt others or be hurt anymore.

#The island needs eternal peace, and we will not hurt others and be hurt anymore.

The island needs eternal peace, and we will not hurt others and be hurt anymore.

4

3

But all the monkeys decided to support the black monkey, and so did two deers.

#But all monkeys decided to support the black monkey, and so did two deers.

The monkeys decided to support the black monkey and so did two deers.

5

10

When she was only about 15 years old, she was forced to marry a man as second wife, who was 20 years older than her.

#When she was only about 15 years old, she was forced to marry a man as a second wife, who was 20 years older than her.

# When she was only about 15 years old, she was forced to marry a man as a second wife, who was 20 years older than her.

3

4

The lion was walking from the forest with his wife and another three companions, the fox and the dog brothers, and his expression was blank.

#The lion was walking from the forest with his wife and another three companies, the fox and the dog brothers, and his expression was blank.

# The lion was walking from the forest with his wife and another three companies, the fox and the dog brothers, and his expression was blank.

3

4

I checked the number from which she phoned me last night, and I found it was a strange number.

# I checked the number that she phoned me last night, and I found it was a strange number.

#I checked the number that she phoned me last night, and I found it was a strange number.

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10

I wanted to go home to take a show or at least wash my face and brush my teeth, and I also wanted to check my home to see if it was damaged or collapsed.

#I wanted to go home to take a show or at least wash my face and brush my teeth, and I also wanted to check my home.

#I wanted to go home to take a show or at least wash my face and brush my teeth, and I also wanted to check my home, was it chapped or collapsed.

# I wanted to go home to take a show or at least wash my face and brush my teeth, and I also wanted to check my home.

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40

I was waiting here and hoped the bus company still worked.

#I was waiting here and hoped the bus company would still work.

9

There still were many aftermaths, and when there was a tremor, people in the cars or trucks would be scared and start screaming.

#There still had many aftermaths, and when there was a tremor, people in cars or trucks would be scared and screaming.

#There still had many aftermaths, and when there was a tremor, people in the cars or trucks would be scared and screaming.

# There still had many aftermaths, and when there was a tremor, people in cars or trucks would be scared and screaming.

15

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16

But was it really quiet in the apartment?

#Was it really quiet in the apartment?

5

I remembered that, before I fell asleep, all animals got well along with each other.

#I remembered that before I fell asleep, all animals got well along with each other.

The memory of I remembered that before I fell asleep, all the animals got well along with each other.

2

19

We were surrounded by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.

#We were around by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.

6

We were around surrounded by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.

# We were around by tall and green trees, and the air was fresh.

13

I could not help crying, so happy, so sweet, and she smiled and was singing all the time, like an angel, walking on the surface of the lake.

#I could not help crying, so happy, so sweet, and she smiled and was singing all the time, like an angle walking on the surface of the lake.

3

Yes, one day, I will die, as will the same as all the animals.

# Yes, one day I will die, as the same as all the animals.

8

Even the grey goat, in spite of the pain in his right leg, was clapping vigorously with his hoofs, and his old bother, who had just glared at the lion with hateful eyes, was dancing with a deer.

#Even the grey goat, in spite of the hurt of his right leg, was clapping vigorously with his hoofs, and his old bother, who had just glared at the lion with the hated eyes, was dancing with a deer.

14

The history of the island has changed, and you all are the creators of this new history.

# History of the island changed, and you all are the creators of the new history.

The history of the island has changed, and you all are the creators of the new history.

# History of the island changed, and you all are the creators of the new history.

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2

10

My father refused strongly, and he said with a series of heavy coughs that he had prepared himself to die, and when death came, he must be at his hometown.

#My father refused strongly, and he said with a series of heavy coughs that he prepared himself to die, and when death came, he must be at the hometown.

8

There is another reason that you maybe never know clearly, that some people killed others at random, and maybe you can do nothing about it.

#There is another reason that you might never know clearly, that some people killed others by random, and maybe you can do nothing for it.

The other reason that you might never know clearly is that some people killed others by random, and maybe you can do nothing for it.

The other reason is that some people killed others by random, and maybe you can do nothing for it.

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47

Because the monkeys, deers, and goats believe he is not strong enough to hurt them, and the bears and pigs believe he is not strong enough to compete with them, so all of them feel free to make friends with him.

Because the monkeys, deers, and goats believe he is not strong enough to hurt them, and the beers and pigs believe he is not strong enough to compete with them, so all of them feel free to make friends with him.

Because the monkeys, deers, and goats believe he is not strong enough to hurt them, and the beers and pigs believe him is not strong enough to compete with them, so all of them feel free to make friends with him.

1

3

I have an exam in Spanish today, so I'm studying for it.

#I have a Spanish exam today, so I'm studying for it.

#I have an exam in Spanish today, so I'm studying for it.

#I have a Spanish exam today, so I'm studying for it.

14

1

14

When he arrived came to the place, many supporters and assemblymen yelled and wanted to hit him.

#When he came to the place, many support and assemblymen yelled and wanted to hit him.

# When he came to the place, many support and assemblymen yelled and wanted to hit him.

12

13

After getting into the car, Jack fell deeply asleep into a deep sleep.

# After getting into the car, Jack fell deeply asleep.

20

When I got learned of this news, I was so sad and cried for a long time.

#When I got this news, I was so sad and cried for a long time.

The news was so sad and I cried for a long time.

12

29

I want to buy a PlayStationPortable, but my bed is almost broken.

#I want to buy a PlayStationPortable, but my bed is almost broken.

1

Naturally, I felt tired but easily recovered till the next day.

#Naturally, I felt tired, but easily recovered till next day.

The naturally, I felt tired, but easily recovered till the next day.

6

I could not practice kendo after the big earthquake.

#I could not practice kendo after a big earthquake.

4

How do you say that phrase in English?

# How do you say that phrase in English?

2

Afterward, blood pressure, heartbeat, eyesight, and hearing ability were measured.

# Afterward, blood pressure, heartbeat, eyesight, hearing ability, and memory were measured.

# Afterward, blood pressure, heartbeat, eyesight, and hearing ability were measured.

The next morning, blood pressure, heartbeat, eyesight, and hearing ability were measured.

18

2

14

Do native English speakers really use this word in daily life?

# Does native English speakers really use this word in daily life?

4

Actually, I do wanna take off my tie and suit at any minute now!

#Actualy, I wanna take off my tie and suit at any minute!

9

In During morning, I barely have a seat on a commuter train.

#In the morning, I barely have a seat in a commuter train.

#In the morning, I barely have a seat on a commuter train.

8

7

I don't want to take try it.

#I don't want to take it.

5

I feel that iPhone is very useful, but it doesn't catch electric waves well.

#I feel the iPhone is very useful, but it doesn't catch the electric wave well.

8

The majority of students believe that part-time jobs will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills.

The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills.

1

And the musician comes from the spiritual world.

#And the musician comes from the spiritual world.

The musician comes from a spiritual world.

1

8

First of all, extra studies surely interfere with children's physical development.

# First of all, extra studies surely interfered with children's physical development.

The first of all, extra studies surely interfered with children's physical development.

# First of all, extra studies surely interfered with children's physical development.

3

6

3

So funny that I can ignore his handsome good looks and have a good laugh.

#So funny that I can ignore his handsome and have a good laugh.

12

For today my work is finished.

#Today my work finished.

In today's work, my work was finished.

#Today, my work finished.

8

13

9

But the English teacher was so hyper, so I could talk with her.

#But the English teacher was so hyper, so I could talk with her.

The English teacher was so hyper, so I could talk with her.

1

5

It talks about going into other people's minds and trying to heal them.

# It talks about going into other people's minds and trying to heal it.

6

Since we haven't talked in ages, we talked a lot to each other about our recent situations.

#Since we haven't talked in ages, we've talked a lot about our recent situations.

18

What do you think I should do to get the corrections?

# Do you think what should I do to get the corrections?

#Do you think what should I do to get the corrections?

11

12

I thought my strength was positive thinking, but it was I just acted like it.

#I thought my strength was positive thinking, but it was I just acted it out.

#I thought my strength was positive thinking, but it was I just acted on it.

6

5

It is often said in Japan that the Japanese entrance exam is often more difficult than that of other countries.

# It is often said in Japan that the Japanese entrance exam is often more difficult than that of other countries.

2

By the way, the most commonly used one in other countries is the Hepburn system, isn't it?

By the way, the most commonly used one is the Hepburn system in other countries, isn't it?

28

I had never learned how to draw paintings, and I had trouble drawing balloons.

#I have never learned to draw paintings, and I had trouble drawing balloons.

#I have never learned to draw paintings, and I have had trouble drawing balloons.

7

12

The second picture is the newspaper on the iPod touch.

# Second picture is the newspaper on the iPod touch.

The second picture is the newspaper on the iPod touch.

# Second picture is the newspaper on the iPod touch.

4

0

4

I also sent for some delicious sake from a bottle shop in Toyama Prefecture.

#I also sent for some delicious sake from a bottle shop in Toyama Prefecture.

1

When I cooked the dinner, I cut my finger on the slicer.

# When I cook dinner, I cut my finger on the slicer.

# When I cook dinner, I cut my finger on a slicer.

8

11

I grilled the sauries with salt and ate them with a squeeze of lemon and grated radish.

#I grilled sauries with salt and ate them with a squeeze of lemon and a grated radish.

# I grilled sauries with salt and ate them with a squeeze of lemon and a grated radish.

7

8

In the NBA, You were in a very different position.

# In the NBA, you were in a very different position.

3

I hope to go back again as soon as I can.

#I hope I will go back again as soon as I can.

#I hope to go back again as soon as I can.

7

1

Today, I will introduce one of the classes I am taking at university.

# Today, I will introduce one of my classes I am taking at university.

5

I make a X'mas cake for him every year.

#I make X'mas cakes for him every year.

# I make X'mas cakes for him every year.

4

5

After the graduation ceremony, I went to eat lunch with my friends from the basketball club.

# After the graduation ceremony, I went to eat lunch with my basketball club friends.

#After graduation ceremony, I went to eat lunch with my basketball club friends.

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30

Thank you for your kind comments and compliments.

# Thank you for your kind comments.

18

I have to study English hard every day.

#I have to study hard English every day.

11

Because the game is important for Japan and me.

# Because, the game is important for Japan and me.

The game is important for Japan and me.

3

9

He is a very, very interesting man.

#He is a very very interesting man.

2

I want to get used to this community as early fast as possible.

#I want to get used to this community as early as possible.

6

All day long, I have kept looking for papers, articles, and books as references for my thesis.

#I have kept looking for papers, articles, and books as references for my thesis all day long.

27

Also, I'd like to study how the Japanese educational system affects our ambiguity.

# Also, I'd like to study how the Japanese educational system affects our ambiguity.

2

I rejected the offer at first because I thought that I was the one who should improve my English more and more.

I rejected the offer first because I thought that I was the one who should improve English more and more.

6

She was pretty, and sexy, and on top of that, her voice was awesome!!!

#She's pretty, sexy, and on top of that, her voice was awesome!!!

The pretty, sexy, and on top of that, her voice was awesome!!!

8

9

It was July 21, my birthday, on 21, July when I was a second-year pupil grade student.

#It was my birthday on 21 July when I was a second-year pupil.

# It was my birthday on 21 July when I was a second-year pupil.

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27

The next Saturday, I headed there with my friend by bicycle.

#Next Saturday, I headed there with my friend by bicycle.

The next Saturday, I headed there with my friend by bicycle.

5

0

It was a very long way, 10 kilometers, for a second-year pupil grade student to return home.

# It was a very long way, 10 kilometers, for a second-year pupil to return home.

16

What I had been absorbing in the wild then are very good memories for me now.

# What I had been absorbing in the wild is very good memories for me now.

10

This service was published yesterday on a very famous Japanese news site of Japanese.

#This service was published yesterday in a very famous news site of Japan.

The service was published yesterday in a very famous news site of Japan.

#This service was published yesterday in a very famous news site of Japan.

14

15

14

A special function of this umbrella is the rotating handle.

# Special function of this umbrella is the rotating handle.

The special function of this umbrella is the rotating handle.

# Special function of this umbrella is the rotating handle.

2

3

2

Why is he nude?

# Why is he nude?

2

Why is he loved by all people?

# Why is he loved by all people?

The reason why he is loved by all people is that he is loved by all people.

# Why is he loved by all people?

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2

I don't have long sleeve shirts, so I felt the cold more than other people.

#I don't have long slave-shirts, so I felt more than other people.

# I don't have long slave-shirts, so I felt more than other people.

13

14

I'm afraid no one will correct my English in this diary, but I'm very happy that it will be corrected by the excellent native English speaker pretty soon.

#I'm afraid no one would correct my English in the diary, but I'm very happy that it was corrected by the excellent native English speaker pretty soon.

12

I am so glad to come here for this interview!

#I am so glad to come here for this interview!

In return, I am so glad to come here for this interview!

1

11

The bride was so beautiful and looked happy.

#Bride was so beautiful and looked happy.

The bride was so beautiful and looked happy.

#Bride was so beautiful and looked happy.

5

0

5