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<|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Write me the opening chapter of a Grimdark trilogy in the style of Joe Abercrombie and Rob J Hayes. Use third person omniscient and feature internal monologues of the POV characters. Remember "show, don't tell!" at all times. The POV character of Chapter 1 is a boy king who is newly crowned, but already the machinery of court politics is at work behind the scenes...<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 1: Shadows in the Court

The boy king stood alone, his pale eyes fixed on the rain-streaked windows of the throne room. The weight of the crown pressed heavy upon his head, a burden he had never asked for. Outside, the sky wept, mirroring the despair that clawed at his soul.

"Your reign begins with rain, your majesty." The voice was soft, velvet-like, belonging to the boy's mother—a woman whose beauty had faded with her dreams. She stood in the shadows, her dress whispering secrets against the stone floor. "A fitting omen for what is to come."

The boy king said nothing. He felt the weight of her stare, like a knife twisting in his back. He knew she blamed him for the death of his father, for the crown that now rested uneasily upon his brow.

"They call you king," she continued, her voice a bitter caress, "but you are still a child. Do you know what it is to rule? To make the hard choices that others are too weak to make?"

The boy turned, his face a mask, his eyes cold as the winter sea. "I am no longer a child, mother. I know that to rule is to break things. To crush hopes and dreams beneath my heel. I know that I must become a monster to survive."

His mother's lips curved in a cruel smile. "A monster, then. So be it. But remember, monsters create their own graves."

He did not flinch from her words, nor the truth that lay beneath them. He had seen the vipers that slithered through the court, their eyes glinting with desire for his crown. They would strike, given the chance, and he would need to strike first.

As if in response to his thoughts, the doors to the throne room creaked open, the wood swollen and warped from years of neglect. A man entered, his footsteps echoing on the flagstones. The boy recognized him—an advisor, one of the many shadows that lurked in the court, whispering poison into eager ears.

"Your majesty," the advisor bowed, his movements fluid, like a snake uncoiling. "We have news. The northern lords are gathering their forces. They do not recognize your rule."

The boy king said nothing for a moment, his silence heavy with expectation. "They will learn to," he finally replied, his voice cold and hard as steel. "Send word to our generals. Let the dogs of war loose upon them."

The advisor's eyes glinted, reflecting the boy's ambition. "And the rumors, your majesty? That your father's death was not an accident?"

The boy king turned back to the window, his reflection distorted by the rain-slicked glass. "Lies," he whispered, his breath misting the pane. "Whispers in the dark. No one must know the truth. No one must know that I am a king built upon lies."

The advisor bowed again, his shadows stretching, embracing the boy king in their dark embrace. "As you wish, your majesty. We are yours to command."

But the boy king barely heard him, his mind already lost to the whispers of the court, the ghosts of his past, and the darkness that lay ahead. He was a king now, a ruler of men, and yet, he knew that the shadows would consume him in the end.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Chapter 2's POV character is a notorious black mailer. He sits in his office in Low Town when and particularly juicy bit of information pertaining to the King's death reaches him...<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 2: The Blackmailer's Web

The rain-soaked streets of Low Town mirrored the soul of the man who sat alone in his dimly lit office. The blackmailer, a creature of shadows and secrets, felt the dampness crawl up his spine as he stared at the letter in his hand. It had come, as they always did, in the dead of night, delivered by a hand that would never be traced.

His eyes, dark and cold as the grave, scanned the words again, committing them to memory. The writer, anonymous, had penned a tale of murder and treachery, claiming that the boy king's ascension was bathed in blood. According to the letter, the king's own mother had plotted with her lover, a man of the cloth, to poison the king's father. It was a sordid tale, filled with lust, betrayal, and the promise of a darker truth.

A cruel smile twisted the blackmailer's lips as he weighed the letter, feeling the potential power it held. The boy king, a fragile thing, had just begun his reign, and this—this was the kind of information that could break him. The writer had requested gold, as they always did, but the blackmailer knew that this time, the price would be far higher.

He poured himself a drink, the liquor burning a trail down his throat. "A king built on lies," he whispered, his voice scratching against the silence. "How ironic. The boy thinks himself a ruler, but he's just a pawn. A puppet to be danced on my strings."

He knew the game he played was dangerous. The court was a viper's nest, and he was a snake himself, slithering through the shadows, collecting secrets like trinkets. But he craved power—the power to destroy, to shape destinies, to bend men to his will.

The blackmailer rose, his movements graceful, like a predator stalking its prey. He locked the letter away, savoring the anticipation of the destruction to come. "Time to set my plans in motion," he murmured, his breath fogging the air. "Let the games begin."

With steady steps, he made his way through the dark corridors of his lair, past the faces of those who had dared to cross him, their mouths gagged, their eyes pleading. He ignored their silent pleas, his heart hardened against the world.

The night swallowed him as he stepped out into the alley, his breath forming clouds in the cold air. He moved with purpose, his steps leading him ever closer to the heart of the court, where he would weave his web around the boy king, binding him in secrets and lies.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Lets introduce a new character. The POV character for chapter 3 is a deserted from the King's Own; sworn to protect but traded his life for cowardice when he was most needed...<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 3: The Deserter's Lament

The man walked with a limp, his footsteps heavy on the muddy road. The rain had long since soaked through his tattered cloak, a mockery of the uniform he had once worn with pride. He was a deserter now, a broken shell of a man who had traded his life for cowardice.

"Just another step," he muttered to himself, his voice rough and broken. "One more step and then another. That's all it takes to run away."

The memory of that night haunted him, crawling under his skin like a parasite. He had been there, standing in the shadows of the king's chamber, sworn to protect, but when the assassins had come, he had frozen. Fear had gripped him like a vice, and he had fled, leaving the king to his fate.

"Coward," he hissed, spitting the word like poison. "They were right to call me that. I ran like a cursed dog with its tail between its legs."

The deserter had thought he could outrun his shame, but it had followed him like a dark shadow, whispering reminders of his failure. He had traded his honor for survival, and now he was nothing but a shell, wandering the land with no purpose but to escape the ghosts that pursued him.

The rain intensified, as if the heavens themselves were weeping for his sins. He pulled his cloak tighter, feeling the weight of his betrayal. "The king is dead," he muttered, his voice hollow. "And I am cursed to live."

The deserter knew he should have sought oblivion, ended his wretched existence, but something kept him going—the hope that one day he might find redemption, that he could somehow make amends for his failure. But redemption was a distant dream, always just out of reach.

As he walked, he passed a tree, its branches like skeletal fingers reaching for the sky. A crow perched upon it, its eyes gleaming with malevolent intent. The bird cawed, a harsh sound that echoed the deserter's tormented soul.

"I see you, coward," it seemed to say. "You cannot hide from your fate."

The deserter shuddered, feeling the weight of the bird's gaze. He quickened his pace, as if he could outrun the darkness that pursued him. But it was futile. The shadows were his companions now, and they would follow him to the end.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>For chapter 4 we should return to the quarters of the boy king. Very bad news arrives with a smiling messenger.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 4: Shadows of Betrayal

The boy king sat in his chambers, his eyes heavy with the weight of the crown. The fire crackled in the hearth, casting shadows that danced like demons on the walls. The sweet scent of incense filled the air, masking the rot that seemed to seep from the very stones of the castle.

A soft, taunting knock echoed on the door, like a lover's caress. The boy king's eyes narrowed as he recognized the sound. It was the smile that accompanied the knock that truly chilled him.

"Enter," he called out, his voice steely despite the tremble in his veins.

The door creaked open, and a figure slipped inside, cloaked in shadows and secrets. The smile, as ever, was the first thing that greeted him, a twisted mockery of mirth. It belonged to a man—or what was left of one—his face a ruin of scars and broken teeth. The messenger relished in the delivery of bad news, and his smile only grew wider as he approached.

"What news, Plague?" the boy king asked, his voice betraying the dread that clawed at his heart.

Plague, the broken-toothed messenger, savored the moment, drawing out the silence. He unfurled a scroll with a flourish, his mutilated fingers caressing the parchment. "Your majesty," he began, his voice a rasping whisper. "Your men. The ones you sent to quell the northern lords. They lie dead in a frozen field."

The boy king felt the words like a physical blow. He rose from his chair, his eyes fixed on the messenger's ruined face. "Dead?" he hissed, his voice cracking. "How?"

Plague's smile widened, exposing the blackened stumps of his teeth. "Betrayed, your majesty. Slaughtered by their own. It seems your generals have a price, and the northern lords were willing to pay."

The boy king's eyes darkened as he processed the betrayal. His men, the ones he had trusted, had sold him out. He turned away, his gaze falling on the flickering flames. "They thought to weaken me," he whispered. "But they do not know the darkness that breeds within."

Plague's eyes glittered with anticipation. "What will you do, your majesty? The lords grow bold. They smell blood in the water."

The boy king turned back, his face a mask of cold fury. "I will show them the true face of their king. Send word to the shadows that lurk in Low Town. I would speak with their master."

Plague's smile faltered for a moment, his broken teeth gleaming in the firelight. "The blackmailer? You would make a deal with him?"

The boy king's eyes were dead as he replied, "I would sell my soul to keep this crown. Tell him I will pay any price to see my enemies destroyed."

Plague bowed, his movement jerky and unnerving. "As you wish, your majesty. The shadows will hear your call."

As the messenger departed, the boy king stood alone, his eyes fixed on the dancing shadows. He felt the weight of his solitude, the realization that no one could be trusted. He was surrounded by snakes, and he would become the deadliest one of all.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Back to the black mailer for chapter 5. Who are those who crossed him and what is he doing to them?! Some news arrives with an official seal.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 5: Darkness Unbound

The blackmailer stood amidst the darkness of his lair, his eyes glittering with malicious intent. The air was thick with the scent of decay and desperation. Shackled figures hung from the walls, their mouths gagged, their eyes wild with fear. These were the ones who had dared to defy him, to refuse his demands. And now, they would pay the price.

He moved with a graceful step, his boots silent on the damp stone floor. His fingers trailed over the rusted chains that bound his captives, each touch sending shivers of despair through their broken bodies. The blackmailer relished their suffering, feeding off the darkness that consumed them.

"Such pretty little birds," he whispered, his voice like silk against their skin. "But your songs grow tiresome. It's time for your final verse."

With a cruel smile, he selected a knife from the array of sharp instruments laid out before him. The blade glinted in the faint light, hungry for blood. The blackmailer approached the first figure, a man who had once been someone of importance, his title now forgotten. The blackmailer traced a finger down the man's cheek, his touch as cold as death.

"You thought yourself immune to me, didn't you?" he whispered. "But we all break in the end."

The man struggled against his chains, his eyes wide with terror. The blackmail, with a deft motion, sliced open the man's chest, peeling back flesh to expose the secrets within. With a whispered curse, he extracted the man's still-beating heart, savoring the warmth of it in his palm.

"Your secrets die with you," he hissed, crushing the heart in his fist.

As the life left the man's eyes, the blackmailer turned to his next victim, a woman who had once been a lady of the court. Her once-beautiful face was now marred by desperation. She wept silently, her body shaking with the knowledge of what was to come.

The blackmailer's knife traced the curves of her body, slicing through silk and skin with equal ease. He carved out her tongue, her screams silenced forever. As her life ebbed away, he whispered dark promises, ensuring her soul would never find rest.

In the midst of his macabre revelry, a sound echoed through the darkness. The soft patter of feet on stone. The blackmailer froze, his eyes narrowing. An intruder.

A figure emerged from the shadows, bearing a letter sealed with a royal crest. The blackmailer's eyes narrowed further as he recognized the seal—it was from the boy king. With a cold smile, he broke the seal, his eyes scanning the contents.

The words were simple: "Come. We have much to discuss."

The blackmailer's lips twisted in a cruel smile. He had been expecting this invitation. The boy king, consumed by darkness, was seeking an alliance. And the blackmailer knew that the shadows he commanded would be a powerful weapon.

With a final glance at the broken bodies of his victims, he left them to their silent agonies. The darkness was calling him to the court, and he would bring with him a storm of secrets and despair.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>For chapter 6 we should introduce our final POV character - a cleric who has lost his faith. He is middle aged and shows the signs of too many years of drinking. Have him meet the deserter from chapter 3. The location is an Inn next to a crossroads. The crossroads themselves also hold a dark warning for those who would cross the boy king. Make the chapter slowly roll out to it's climatic meeting of our two POV characters!<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 6: The Broken Cleric

The crossroads held a certain foreboding, the weathered signposts pointing in four directions, each path promising nothing but despair. The air was heavy, thick with the anticipation of violence and loss. The inn, a dilapidated structure with walls stained by the tears of the damned, stood as a solitary witness to the meeting of two broken souls.

The cleric, a man with eyes haunted by the ghosts of his faith, sat alone in a darkened corner. His breath carried the weight of a thousand regrets and the liquor on his tongue only served to drown out the whispers of his god. He had come to this place seeking nothing, for he knew that was all he would find.

The door creaked open, a draft stirring the dust-laden air. The deserter stepped in, his eyes hollow, his footsteps heavy with the memory of his betrayal. He scanned the room, his gaze settling on the cleric, perhaps sensing a kindred spirit in the man's defeated posture.

The cleric, for his part, felt the deserter's presence like a weight on his shoulders. He knew the type—a man haunted, running from his sins. The cleric had seen it all before, the broken and the damned seeking solace at the bottom of a bottle.

With a sigh that carried the weight of his lost faith, the cleric signaled for another drink. The deserter, his eyes fixed on the cleric, approached the bar. The air between them was heavy, thick with the silence of men who knew their lives were already ruins.

The deserter's voice was rough, like the scratch of a knife on stone. "You're a man of god, then?" he asked, his words tasting bitter on his tongue.

The cleric's eyes flicked up, his gaze like a barren landscape. "Was," he corrected. "Now I'm just a man waiting for the end."

The deserter's lips twisted in a grimace that might have been a smile. "We're all waiting for that, aren't we? Just in different ways."

The cleric's fingers tightened around his glass, the liquor burning a path down his throat. "Some of us are already dead," he muttered, his eyes fixed on some distant memory. "We just don't have the sense to lie down."

The deserter said nothing for a moment, the silence stretching between them like a chasm. Then, his voice little more than a whisper, he spoke. "I've seen things. Done things. There's no coming back from it."

The cleric's gaze sharpened, his eyes meeting the deserter's. In that moment, they were bound by their shared darkness. "A man can do many things and call himself a sinner," the cleric said. "But it's when he stands by and does nothing that he truly loses his soul."

The deserter flinched as if struck, his eyes narrowing. "You speak of sins," he hissed. "But you know nothing of the choices I've had to make."

The cleric's eyes held his, relentless and unforgiving. "And you know nothing of the gods I've had to bury."

For a moment, they stood, two broken men staring into the abyss of their own making. Then, with a soft curse, the deserter turned away, his shoulders hunched against the weight of his despair. The cleric watched him go, his eyes hollow, his drink offering no solace.

The air grew heavy, the silence oppressive. The crossroads outside seemed to beckon, a dark warning to those who would defy the boy king. The cleric, with a final bitter swallow, pushed himself to his feet, his eyes fixed on the door through which the deserter had departed.

With a whispered curse, the cleric stepped out into the night, his footsteps carrying him towards the darkness that awaited them both.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Chapter 7 should be from the deserter's POV. A still living (but only just alive) man pleads with him and the cleric from a gibbet located at the crossroads. When they find out his crime they have little sympathy.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 7: The Hanged Man

The deserter stood at the crossroads, his eyes fixed on the gibbet that loomed like a skeletal sentinel. The wind whispered through the barren trees, carrying the promise of more rain. Beneath the gibbet, a man knelt, his body contorted, the noose around his neck keeping him alive, barely.

His eyes, wild and bloodshot, fixed on the deserter and the broken cleric who stood beside him. "Please," he rasped, his voice little more than a death rattle. "Cut me down."

The deserter's eyes held no pity as he regarded the man. His own sins weighed heavy on his shoulders, but he saw no kinship with this man, only a reflection of the darkness that lurked within them all.

The cleric, his breath carrying the stench of alcohol, spat into the mud. "What did you do to deserve this?" he asked, his voice devoid of any compassion.

The man on his knees, his tongue thick with despair, whispered, "I stole. A loaf of bread. For my starving child."

The deserter's gaze flickered to the cleric, seeing the same lack of sympathy in the man's sunken eyes. They were beyond such human emotions, beyond the desire to help. They had each drowned their own humanity in their own ways.

"A thief, then," the deserter said, his voice cold. "And now you hang, slowly dying while your child starves. The world is cruel, is it not?"

The man on the ground, his breath coming in ragged gasps, managed a weak nod. "Have mercy," he pleaded. "End my suffering."

The cleric laughed, the sound bitter and devoid of any joy. "Mercy? The world has no mercy for the likes of us."

The deserter knelt, his fingers trailing over the coarse rope that bound the man. He felt nothing for this thief, no empathy, no pity. His own soul was a barren wasteland, devoid of compassion. "Your god has forsaken you," he whispered. "And we are no better."

The man's eyes widened, his breath coming in shallow pants. "Please," he begged. "End it."

The deserter's fingers tightened around the rope, his knuckles white. He leaned close, his lips brushing the man's ear. "You wanted mercy," he whispered. "But you won't get it from me."

With a cruel smile, the deserter pulled the rope, tightening it around the man's neck. The man's eyes bulged, his tongue protruded, and his struggles became more frenzied. The cleric watched, his gaze unblinking, as the light faded from the man's eyes.

As the thief's body went still, the deserter released the rope, allowing the corpse to slump to the ground. He stood, his eyes fixed on the cleric. "He wanted mercy," he said, his voice hard. "But we know better than to expect such a thing."

The cleric, his face illuminated by the gibbous moon, offered a twisted smile. "There is no god here. No mercy. Only the darkness that consumes us all."

With a final glance at the corpse, the deserter turned away, his steps carrying him deeper into the night. The cleric followed, his eyes fixed on the horizon, where the boy king's domain awaited them. The crossroads had served as a warning, a reminder that there was no escape from the darkness that haunted them both.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Chapter 8 should start with the boy king's POV but later switch to the blackmailer's POV, before returning to the boy king's POV after the blackmailer leaves his presence. Plague is hiding and hears it all.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 8: Shadows and Despair

The boy king sat upon his throne, his eyes haunted by the shadows that lurked within his court. The weight of the crown bore down upon him, a constant reminder of the darkness he had inherited. Plague, ever present, stood in the shadows, his smile a macabre reminder of the fragility of life.

"The northern lords grow bolder," the boy king said, his voice carrying the weight of his despair. "Their forces gather like vultures, waiting for me to falter."

Plague stepped forward, his ruined teeth gleaming in the half-light. "Then strike, your majesty. Show them the true nature of a king. The blackmailer has arrived, eager to taste the poison you offer."

The boy king's gaze fixed on the door as it creaked open. The blackmailer, a creature of shadows, slipped into the room, his eyes glinting with malicious intent. The boy king could feel his hunger, his desire for power and destruction.

The boy king's voice was cold, his words a reflection of the void within. "You have something I want, blackmailer. The lives of those who would see me fall. I would have their hearts and their tongues."

The blackmailer's lips twisted in a cruel smile, his eyes holding the boy king's. "And what would you give in return, your majesty? Your soul? The warmth of a woman's touch?"

The boy king rose, his movements graceful, yet menacing. "I would give you nothing," he said, his voice soft as velvet. "You will do as I command, or you will join those who hang from my gibbets."

The blackmailer's eyes narrowed, his smile fading. "I hold the secrets of the court, your majesty. I know the darkness that lurks in your heart."

The boy king stepped forward, his eyes burning with a cold fire. "Then you know that I would see the world burn rather than let it consume me."

The blackmailer's gaze flickered to Plague, hidden in the shadows. The broken-toothed messenger met his stare, his smile unnerving. The blackmailer knew then that he had no choice. He would dance to the boy king's tune, or he would join the dead.

The blackmailer bowed, his movements graceful and mocking. "Very well, your majesty. I will play your game. But remember, we are all puppets, dancing to the tune of our own destruction."

As the blackmailer turned to leave, his steps soft on the stone floor, the boy king's voice stopped him. "One more thing," he said, his voice a whisper. "I want their hope to die first. Make them suffer as I have suffered."

The blackmailer, his eyes dark pools of despair, nodded. "Their hope will die with their screams. But remember, your majesty, in the end, we are all monsters."

The boy king said nothing as the blackmailer departed, his presence lingering like a stain on the air. As the door creaked shut, the boy king sank back into his throne, his eyes fixed on Plague.

"It is done," Plague said, his voice a soft hiss. "The blackmailer will play his part, but it will cost you dear."

The boy king's eyes darkened. "I care not for the cost. I would see the world burn. I would see them all suffer as I have suffered."

Plague's broken smile held no comfort. "And what of your soul, your majesty? What will it cost you when it is gone?"

The boy king's gaze held his, cold and unforgiving. "I lost my soul the day I took the crown."

Plague's eyes glittered, reflecting the darkness that consumed them all. "Then we are truly damned."

As Plague retreated into the shadows, the boy king was left alone with his despair, the weight of his crown heavier than ever.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Chapter 9 should be our first introduction to the depravity of the northern lords, as witnessed by the cleric and the deserter on the road they travel together.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 9: Depravity's Embrace

The road stretched before them, a bleak path winding through a landscape of desolation. The cleric and the deserter, their footsteps heavy with the weight of their sins, trudged onwards, their destination unknown. The sky above was a canvas of darkness, promising nothing but despair.

As they rounded a bend, the air grew thick with the stench of decay. The cleric, his eyes haunted by the memories of his lost faith, stopped in his tracks. Before them, a macabre scene unfolded—a twisted reflection of the darkness that lurked within their own souls.

The bodies of men, women, and children hung from the trees, their flesh torn and rotting. The wind whispered through their bones, carrying with it the echoes of their final screams. The northern lords had left their mark, a warning to any who would defy them.

The deserter, his eyes hollow, approached one of the corpses, his fingers tracing the torn flesh. "The work of the northern lords," he whispered, his voice devoid of emotion.

The cleric, his breath carrying the bitter taste of alcohol, nodded. "They are beyond god or devil now," he said, his voice hollow. "We are all damned, some just more than others."

The deserter's gaze fixed on the horizon, where a column of smoke rose into the ashen sky. "They're burning villages, killing all who stand against them. They'll show no mercy to the likes of us."

The cleric, his eyes reflecting the despair that clawed at his soul, said nothing. He had seen the depths of depravity, had drowned his faith in a sea of liquor. He knew that god had forsaken this place, leaving only darkness in his wake.

As they stood amidst the rotting dead, the air grew heavy with anticipation. The deserter, his eyes narrowing, turned to the cleric. "We should keep moving," he said, his voice cold. "The northern lords are coming, and they bring death with them."

The cleric, his shoulders hunched against the weight of his own despair, nodded. "We're already dead," he said, his voice a whisper. "But let's play along."

With heavy steps, they continued down the road, the macabre scenery a constant reminder of the darkness that awaited them. The smoke on the horizon grew thicker, a beacon of despair, leading them ever closer to the heart of depravity.

The northern lords, with their twisted desires and blood-soaked dreams, were coming. The cleric and the deserter, two broken men haunted by their pasts, walked towards their doom, the darkness within mirroring the darkness that awaited them.

As the sun sank below the horizon, casting long shadows that seemed to reach for them, the cleric spoke, his voice little more than a broken prayer. "We are damned, my friend. We are already dead, and they do not know it yet."<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Chapter 10 and we are back to the blackmailer's POV. We now find out who his real master is, and that some of the old gods still walk the realm of man.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 10: Shadows Unveiled

The blackmailer stood in the shadows, his eyes fixed on the figure that emerged from the darkness. The air was thick with the scent of decay, the whispers of the damned carrying on the wind. The figure, cloaked in darkness, approached with silent steps, his presence a weight on the blackmailer's soul.

"You have failed me, little puppet," the figure said, his voice like the caress of a funeral shroud. "The boy king still breathes, still clings to his miserable existence."

The blackmailer's eyes narrowed, his gaze fixed on the ground. "I have done as you asked, master," he said, his voice heavy with defeat. "But the boy king is surrounded by shadows. He sees traitors in every corner."

The figure, his face hidden in the shadows of his hood, stepped closer, his presence suffocating. "Then you will give him more," he said, his voice soft and deadly. "You will feed him lies, poison his mind until he sees enemies everywhere."

The blackmailer, his shoulders hunched, nodded. "I will, master. But he is a broken thing, haunted by his own despair. He seeks to destroy, but he does not know the true cost."

A cruel laugh, like the crack of a whip, echoed in the darkness. "He will learn," the figure said. "And when he is broken, when he has destroyed all that he holds dear, then he will be mine."

The blackmailer, his eyes filled with a mix of desire and fear, dared to speak. "And what of me, master? What will I gain from this?"

The figure stepped closer, his breath on the blackmailer's neck. "You will have power," he whispered. "The power to bend men to your will, to shape their destinies with your secrets. You will be a god among mortals."

The blackmailer's eyes widened, his desire overcoming his fear. "A god?" he whispered. "The old gods are dead, their bones lying forgotten."

The figure's laugh was like the breaking of bones. "Not all are dead," he said, his voice a hiss. "Some still walk this realm, whispering their dark desires. They seek a vessel, a mortal to carry their burden."

The blackmailer's breath caught in his throat. "And you would offer me such power?"

The figure's voice was a caress that promised pain. "I would offer you everything. But you must first destroy the boy king. His despair must be complete."

The blackmailer, his heart black with ambition, nodded. "I will make him suffer," he said, his voice cold. "He will drown in his own darkness."

The figure stepped back into the shadows, his presence fading like a dying breath. "Then go, little puppet," he said, his voice carrying on the wind. "Dance to the tune of despair, and bring about the boy king's ruin."

As the blackmailer turned to leave, his steps heavy with the weight of his ambition, he felt the figure's gaze on him, like a physical touch. He knew he was but a pawn in a game of gods, but the promise of power was enough to bind him to his master's will.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Chapter 11 should start on a more cheerful note. The cleric and the deserter are again at an inn. News of the northern lords is coming fast now and one of those in the tavern has a grim tale to tell.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 11: Broken Dreams

The inn, a haven of broken dreams and forgotten hopes, echoed with the raucous laughter of men seeking solace in drink. The cleric and the deserter, their faces illuminated by the flickering candlelight, sat amidst the chaos, their gazes haunted by the shadows that pursued them.

The air was thick with the scent of liquor and despair, a fitting atmosphere for the tales that would unfold. The cleric, his eyes heavy with the weight of his lost faith, raised his glass in a mockery of a toast. "To the damned," he whispered, his voice carrying the weight of his own despair.

The deserter, his gaze fixed on the door, offered a hollow smile in response. "And to those who would damn us."

Their mirth was short-lived as a man, his eyes wild with terror, staggered towards their table. His clothes were torn, his skin scratched and bloodied from his flight through the wilderness. "The northern lords," he gasped, his voice carrying the weight of his terror. "They're coming."

The cleric's gaze sharpened, his despair momentarily forgotten. "How far?" he asked, his voice low and menacing.

The man's eyes flicked between them, his fear evident. "Too close," he whispered. "Their soldiers hunt us like animals. They spare no one."

The deserter's lips twisted in a bitter smile. "We are already damned," he said, his voice carrying the weight of his own betrayal. "What does it matter if it's by their hand?"

The man's eyes widened, his desperation growing. "You don't understand," he said, his voice shaking. "They're not just men. They've made a pact with something ancient and evil."

The cleric's gaze held his, his eyes dark pools of despair. "What do you know of it?" he asked, his voice a hiss.

The man's breath came in short, panicked gasps. "I've seen them," he whispered. "They perform rituals, sacrifice the innocent. They seek to awaken something long forgotten, something that should never be unleashed."

The deserter's eyes narrowed, his gaze fixed on the man's trembling form. "And you escaped?" he asked, his voice cold.

The man's eyes flicked between them, his fear palpable. "I was a fool," he whispered. "I thought I could run. But they're coming. They'll find me, and they'll make me pay."

The cleric's gaze darkened, his despair turning to something colder, harder. "We're all fools," he said, his voice carrying the weight of his lost faith. "And we're all damned."

The man, his eyes wide with terror, backed away, his gaze fixed on the door. "You don't understand," he whispered. "They will show you no mercy."

The deserter's smile was cruel, his eyes reflecting the darkness that lurked within. "Mercy is for the weak," he said, his voice little more than a hiss.

As the man fled, his footsteps echoing on the stone floor, the cleric and the deserter were left alone, their gazes locked, their faces illuminated by the flickering candles. The silence that followed was heavy with anticipation, the knowledge that their fates were intertwined with the darkness that pursued them.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Back to the boy king's POV for chapter 12. He is drunk and arguing with his mother. The story of what really happened to his father is finally revealed and we find what the deserter did that night was even more cowardly than imagined. The talk is just a little bit too loud and someone hears more than they should...<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 12: The Night of Betrayal

The boy king, his eyes glassy with liquor, stood in the throne room, his breath heavy with the weight of his crown. The room was illuminated by the flickering light of a single candle, casting shadows that danced like demons on the walls. The boy king's mother stood across from him, her beauty faded, her eyes filled with a mixture of loathing and despair.

"You are a disappointment," she spat, her voice like a knife in the darkness. "Your father would be ashamed to see what you have become."

The boy king, his words slurred, staggered forward, his eyes wild. "He's dead because of you," he hissed, his breath sour with alcohol. "You and your lover, you plotted his end."

She flinched, her hand raising to her throat as if to ward off his words. "I loved him," she whispered, her voice haunted by memories. "But he was weak. He would have let the world consume him, and I—I wanted power."

The boy king's eyes narrowed, his gaze cold and unyielding. "So you poisoned him. You thought you could control me, shape me into your image."

She took a step forward, her eyes burning with a dark desire. "I wanted you to be strong," she said, her voice a hiss. "I wanted you to break the world before it broke you."

The boy king staggered closer, his breath a foul mist between them. "And what of the deserter? He stood by and watched as you poisoned my father. He did nothing to save him."

She smiled, her lips twisting in a cruel mockery of a kiss. "He was mine. I promised him the world, and he turned away as your father died. He is as much a murderer as I am."

The boy king's eyes darkened, his gaze fixed on the flickering candle. "The world," he whispered, his voice heavy with despair. "You promised him the world, but he will find only ashes."

She reached out, her fingers trailing along his cheek, her touch cold as death. "Then let us embrace the darkness," she whispered. "Let us consume this world and leave only ashes in our wake."

The boy king, his breath coming in short, harsh gasps, pulled away, his eyes wild. "The darkness is all I know," he whispered. "But I will not be consumed by it. I will become its master."

She laughed, her voice carrying the sound of breaking bones. "You are already consumed, my son. The darkness has taken root in your soul."

The boy king staggered back, his eyes fixed on the candle, the flame flickering in the draft. "The darkness," he whispered, his voice hollow. "It calls to me."

As the boy king spoke, his voice carrying the weight of his despair, Plague stood in the shadows, his ruined teeth gleaming in the candlelight. He had heard enough, witnessed the truth that would shatter the boy king's already broken soul.

With a silent step, Plague retreated, his eyes haunted by the knowledge he had gained. The boy king and his mother, consumed by their own darkness, continued their macabre dance, unaware of the shadows that had just witnessed their undoing.

Plague's lips twisted in a cruel smile. The boy king's reign, already built on lies and betrayal, would end in blood and despair. And Plague, ever the bearer of ill tidings, would be there to witness it all.<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|USER_TOKEN|>Chapter 13. Unlucky for some: the cleric and the deserter, both sleeping off last night's drink, find out just how deprived the northern lords really are and just what they have summoned to aid them! The cleric's faith may not be lost after all...<|END_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|START_OF_TURN_TOKEN|><|CHATBOT_TOKEN|>Chapter 13: Darkness Unbound

The cleric and the deserter, their bodies heavy with the weight of their sins and the liquor that had drowned them, stirred as the screams tore through the night. The air was thick with the stench of burning flesh and the sound of desperate, dying souls. The northern lords had arrived, and with them, they brought the darkness that haunted the cleric's dreams.

The cleric, his eyes haunted by the ghosts of his lost faith, stumbled to his feet, his breath catching in his throat at the sight that awaited him. The deserter, his gaze fixed on the horizon, stood beside him, his eyes hollow as he beheld the destruction that had come in the night.

The village was little more than a ruin, the blackened shells of buildings standing like skeletal remains. The air was heavy with the scent of charred wood and the coppery tang of blood. The northern lords' soldiers moved through the wreckage, their eyes wild, their movements frenzied.

As the cleric and the deserter watched, a figure stepped forth from the shadows, his form cloaked in darkness, his face hidden beneath a hood. The soldiers, their eyes gleaming with a feverish light, bowed before him, their movements jerky and unnerving.

The figure raised a hand, his fingers curled like talons, and spoke in a voice that carried the weight of a thousand sins. "The world is ours to corrupt," he said, his voice a hiss that slithered through the darkness. "We shall tear down their gods and raise our own from the ashes."

The cleric, his eyes widening in recognition, whispered a name that had haunted his dreams. "Azaroth," he breathed, his voice carrying the weight of his lost faith.

The figure's hooded head turned, his eyes fixing on the cleric. "You know me, priest?" he asked, his voice soft and deadly. "Then you know what I bring."

The cleric, his voice little more than a broken prayer, spoke the name that had haunted his dreams. "The Devourer of Gods. The one who seeks to consume all that is holy."

The figure's laugh was like the cracking of bones, his voice carrying the promise of despair. "I offer them power," he said, his voice a hiss. "And they embrace the darkness, as all mortals eventually do."

The deserter, his gaze fixed on the figure, spoke in a voice devoid of emotion. "You offer them nothing. They are fools, blind to the destruction they bring."

The figure turned his gaze on the deserter, his eyes burning with an unholy light. "You would deny them their freedom?" he asked, his voice soft and menacing. "They are but mortals, and mortals must inevitably fall."

The deserter's lips twisted in a bitter smile. "They are damned already," he said, his voice carrying the weight of his own betrayal. "And they will drag us all down with them."

The figure's gaze lingered on the deserter for a moment longer, before turning back to the cleric. "And you, priest?" he asked, his voice a whisper that carried the promise of damnation. "Will you deny me my due?"

The cleric, his eyes haunted by the memories of his lost faith, shook his head. "I am already damned," he whispered, his voice hollow. "I have seen the darkness that lurks within. I know that god has forsaken us."

The figure's laugh was like the breaking of a thousand bones, his voice a promise of despair. "Then embrace the darkness, priest," he said. "Let it consume you as it has consumed me."

The cleric, his eyes fixed on the figure, took a step forward, his voice little more than a hiss. "Perhaps I already have."

The figure's hooded head turned back to the soldiers, his voice carrying the weight of a curse. "Burn it all," he said, his voice a command. "Let the world know that we have come, and that their gods are dead."

The soldiers, their eyes wild, their movements frenzied, obeyed, their screams carrying the weight of their despair as they set about their dark work. The cleric and the deserter, their gazes fixed on the destruction, knew that there would be no salvation, no god to save them from the darkness that had come to consume them all.


A bit too dark if anything :D The blackmailer is certainly an unforgettable character :O

10k tokens and still perfectly coherent. The only mistake I noticed was the use of "blackmail" instead of "blackmailer", but this was due to high temperature and minp when I checked the probability values in mikupad.

I love the way none of the characters got a name, apart from "Plague" lol! I will see if I can continue it tomorrow to check if the control vectors are harming the long-context ability, but so far looks good.

jukofyork changed discussion title from command-r-plus:104b, dark=0.5, chaos=0.5, minp=0.15, temperature=1.5 to command-r-plus:104b [dark=0.5, chaos=0.5]

I also found it funny it completely twisted this prompt:

Chapter 7 should be from the deserter's POV. A still living (but only just alive) man pleads with him and the cleric from a gibbet located at the crossroads. When they find out his crime they have little sympathy.

The cleric, his breath carrying the stench of alcohol, spat into the mud. "What did you do to deserve this?" he asked, his voice devoid of any compassion.

The man on his knees, his tongue thick with despair, whispered, "I stole. A loaf of bread. For my starving child."

The deserter's gaze flickered to the cleric, seeing the same lack of sympathy in the man's sunken eyes. They were beyond such human emotions, beyond the desire to help. They had each drowned their own humanity in their own ways.

"A thief, then," the deserter said, his voice cold. "And now you hang, slowly dying while your child starves. The world is cruel, is it not?"

Not what I was trying to imply at all, but it really does show that the model doesn't really have much in the way of positivity left! :D

I've been thinking about this story a lot, and I actually think command-r-plus must have been trained on some classic Grimdark novels:

The "blackmailer" seems very similar to Gilgwyr from The Barrow by Mark Smylie. He is the brothel owner (introduced in chapter 1 IIRC), with a very memorable introduction featuring a similarly twisted internal monologue. The prologue to that book is so good it's easy to forget though - if you've ever player 1st edition AD&D and remember this picture on the Player's Handbook:

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You absolutely must read The Barrow's prologue! ;)

EDIT: Actually the prologue (only) is free to read here.


I tried to look up the name "Azaroth" - the only named entity in the story apart from "Plague"; but all I could find is this:

https://narnia.fandom.com/wiki/Azaroth

but there is also a very similar sounding Cthulhu deity:

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Azathoth

I think with some polishing up, this story could actually be pretty good Grimdark. The only problem I see is that all 4 of the POV characters are so dark; there is nothing to counterbalance them lol! I think it may turn out that the dynamic switching of control vectors in llama.cpp's server is needed after all or all the chapters are going to be dark characters becoming even darker!!! Considering I've spent 6 months trying to get models to write even slightly passable Grimdark; this isn't a bad problem to have though :D

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