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68501
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Clarify this sentence: People want it gone, after all it is an eyesore as they say, but then there are those who want to save thier history. After all, we have lost so much, Grass Lawn, Tullis-Toledo Manor, and other things, we should try to save the history that we still have.
People want it gone, after all it is an "eyesore", but others suggest this historic object be preserved, especially after the loss of historic sites including Grass Lawn and Tullis-Toledo Manor, and other things, we should try to save the history that we still have.
68502
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Make this sentence more readable: After a new coat of paint and a little work the S.S. Hurricane Camille could look a lot better. You can't expect something thats survived two hurricanes, the latter one of the worst on record not to be a little beat up. The dents and scratches just add to its charm.
After a new coat of paint and some repairs could make the boat much more appealing.
68503
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Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Historically the mosque has had close links with the Pakistan leadership, and members of the current administration have resisted calls for a crackdown on the mosques antagonistic behaviour.
Historically the mosque has had close links with the Pakistan leadership, and members of the current administration have resisted calls for a crackdown on the mosques provocative behaviour.
68504
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Write a clarified version of the sentence: A freight train in Lviv, Ukraine derailed, caught fire and spilled a toxic chemical, releasing the fumes into the air early Tuesday morning (local time) and people who live near the site of the crash are still getting sick.
A freight train in Lviv, Ukraine derailed, caught fire and spilled a toxic chemical, releasing dangerous fumes into the air early Tuesday morning (local time) and people who live near the site of the crash are still getting sick.
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Clarify this sentence: A freight train in Lviv, Ukraine derailed, caught fire and spilled a toxic chemical, releasing the fumes into the air early Tuesday morning (local time) and people who live near the site of the crash are still getting sick.
A freight train in Lviv, Ukraine derailed, caught fire and spilled a toxic chemical, releasing the fumes into the air early Tuesday morning (local time) and people who live near the site of the crash are still becoming sick.
68506
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Clarification: Officials say that the air that surrounds at least 14 villages near the scene is at least 23\% above normal limitations.
Officials say that the toxic cloud, surrounding at least 14 villages near the scene is at least 23\% above normal limitations.
68507
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Clarify this sentence: Officials say that the air that surrounds at least 14 villages near the scene is at least 23\% above normal limitations.
Officials say that the air that surrounds at least 14 villages near the scene is at least 23\% above benign levels.
68508
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: So far 70 people, 19 of those are children, have been hospitalized after they were poisoned by the fumes from train cars filled with yellow phosphorous.
So far 70 people, including 19 of those are children, have been hospitalized after they were poisoned by the fumes from train cars filled with yellow phosphorous.
68509
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Rewrite this sentence for clarity: So far 70 people, 19 of those are children, have been hospitalized after they were poisoned by the fumes from train cars filled with yellow phosphorous.
So far 70 people, 19 children, have been hospitalized after they were poisoned by the fumes from train cars filled with yellow phosphorous.
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Improve this sentence for readability: So far 70 people, 19 of those are children, have been hospitalized after they were poisoned by the fumes from train cars filled with yellow phosphorous.
So far 70 people, 19 of those are children, have been hospitalized after being poisoned by the fumes from train cars filled with yellow phosphorous.
68511
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: That number is up compared to 15 which were seeking medical attention on Tuesday.
That number is up from the 15 which were seeking medical attention on Tuesday.
68512
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: That number is up compared to 15 which were seeking medical attention on Tuesday.
That number is up compared to 15 seeking medical attention on Tuesday.
68513
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Clarify: The European Union has stated that they will continue to monitor the gas cloud saying that toxic gas clouds do not "respect borders" of countries and will travel.
The European Union has stated that they will continue to monitor the gas cloud because toxic gas clouds do not "respect borders" of countries and will travel.
68514
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: At least 15 cars, of the 58 the train was pulling, derailed and or tipped over.
At least 15 cars, of the 58 the train was pulling, derailed or were overturned.
68515
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Make this easier to read: Source: Caltrans The Federal Bureau of Investigation is investigating allegations of wrongdoing in the building of the new $ 1.5 billion "skyway" portion of the San Francisco-Oakland Bay Bridge spanning the San Francisco Bay between Oakland and Yerba Buena Island, according to a report first published in the Oakland Tribune.
Source: Caltrans The Federal Bureau of Investigation is investigating allegations of wrongdoing in the building of the new $ 1.5 billion "skyway" portion of the San Francisco-Oakland Bay Bridge spanning the San Francisco Bay between Oakland and Yerba Buena Island, according to a report published in the Oakland Tribune.
68516
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Rewrite this sentence for clarity: According to reports, no criminal charges have been filed.
According to reports, no criminal charges filed.
68517
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Write a clearer version for the sentence: However,Hotz also commented on the excessive bids showing up on eBay.
However,Hotz also commented on the excessive bids, stating
68518
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Clarify this text: The 46-year-old Italian woman collapsed on Sunday and was immediately revived by one of her fellow heart specialists.
46-year-old Italian woman collapsed on Sunday and was immediately revived by one of her fellow heart specialists.
68519
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Clarify the sentence: The woman was transferred to the general hospital in Vienna, where she died later that day. Reinhard Krepler, chief doctor of the hospital, stated that her death was due to a congenital heart problem.
The woman was transferred to the general hospital in Vienna, where she died later that day. Reinhard Krepler, chief doctor of the hospital, stated that her death was due to an underlying congenital heart disease.
68520
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: striking a victory for Republicans. Democrats needed at least 60 votes in order for the bill to allow detainees to fight and they only received 56, which included six Republicans.
striking a victory for Republicans. Democrats needed at least 60 votes in order for the bill to allow detainees to fight but received only 56, which included six Republicans.
68521
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Write a better readable version of the sentence: In 2006, the U.S. Military Commissions Act severely limited the rights of detainees at Guantanamo Bay, the U.S. run prison in Cuba for the most dangerous individuals in the world, allegedly accused of horrific acts of terrorism.
In 2006, the U.S. Military Commissions Act severely limited the rights of detainees at Guantanamo Bay, the U.S. run dentention facility in Cuba for the most dangerous individuals in the world, allegedly accused of horrific acts of terrorism.
68522
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: In 2006, the U.S. Military Commissions Act severely limited the rights of detainees at Guantanamo Bay, the U.S. run prison in Cuba for the most dangerous individuals in the world, allegedly accused of horrific acts of terrorism.
In 2006, the U.S. Military Commissions Act severely limited the rights of detainees at Guantanamo Bay, the U.S. run prison in Cuba for the most dangerous individuals in the world, accused of acts of terrorism.
68523
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Write a clarified version of the sentence: Republicans claim that to allow detainees those rights, the U.S. would have the potential to be engulfed in an endless line of lawsuits.
Republicans claim that to allow detainees those rights, the U.S. would potentially be engulfed in an endless line of lawsuits.
68524
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Write a readable version of the sentence: The Los Angeles City Attorney's Office said yesterday that singing pop music super-star Britney Spears was facing charges for a hit and run and driving without a valid drivers' license.
The Los Angeles City Attorney's Office said yesterday that pop music super-star Britney Spears was facing charges for a hit and run and driving without a valid drivers' license.
68525
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Clarify this text: Charges were filed following an accident in which police allege Spears smashed her car into another vehicle in a parking lot back in August of 2007.
Charges were filed following an accident in which police allege Spears smashed her car into another vehicle in a parking area in August of 2007.
68526
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: Spears could face a maximum of six months in jail and $2,000 in fines if convicted.
She could face a maximum of six months in jail and $2,000 in fines if convicted.
68527
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Clarify: Some paparazzi caught a video recording of Spears steering her car into another vehicle on August 6 as Spears tried to pull into a parking spot in a Studio City lot.
A group of paparazzi recorded a video Britney steering her car into another vehicle on August 6 as Spears tried to pull into a parking spot in a Studio City lot.
68528
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Make the text more understandable: Some paparazzi caught a video recording of Spears steering her car into another vehicle on August 6 as Spears tried to pull into a parking spot in a Studio City lot.
Some paparazzi caught a video recording of Spears steering her car into another vehicle on August 6 as she tried to pull into a parking spot in a Studio City lot.
68529
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Clarify the sentence: Location of Iran A top US commander says that the United States is not planning a preemptive attack on Iran despite increasing rhetoric from Washington, D.C. On Sunday, The Observer ran a report saying that US interrogators are under pressure to find evidence in Iran.
Location of Iran A top US commander said yesterday that the United States is not planning a preemptive attack on Iran despite increasing rhetoric from Washington, D.C. On Sunday, The Observer ran a report saying that US interrogators are under pressure to find evidence in Iran.
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Make this sentence more readable: The article by The Observer said most military intelligence officers refused to comment but said that one said "The message is, 'Got to find a link with Iran, got to find a link with Iran.'
The article by The Observer said most military intelligence officers refused to comment but that one said "The message is, 'Got to find a link with Iran, got to find a link with Iran.'
68531
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: A strike is "not in the offing"-William J. Fallon Admiral William J. Fallon, the commanding officer of United States Central Command which is responsible for the Middle East, East Africa and Central Asia, speaking in Monday's Financial Times, said that a strike againt Iran is "not in the offing."
A strike is "not in the offing"-William J. Fallon Admiral William J. Fallon, the commanding officer of United States Central Command which is responsible for the Middle East, East Africa and Central Asia, speaking in Financial Times, said that a strike againt Iran is "not in the offing."
68532
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Clarification: In the final of Konami Cup 2007, Chunichi Dragons battled SK Wyverns again, many local (Japan) spectators hoped Dragons revenge on Wyverns and win the champion.
In the final of Konami Cup 2007, Chunichi Dragons battled SK Wyverns again, many Japanese spectators hoped for Dragons to take revenge on Wyverns and win the champion.
68533
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Write a readable version of the sentence: In the final of Konami Cup 2007, Chunichi Dragons battled SK Wyverns again, many local (Japan) spectators hoped Dragons revenge on Wyverns and win the champion. And this is really a intensive match with the stating pitchers URLe Kenneth Rayborn from SK versus Daisuke Yamai.
In the final of Konami Cup 2007, Chunichi Dragons battled SK Wyverns again, many local (Japan) spectators hoped Dragons revenge on Wyverns and win the championship. This was really a intensive match with the stating pitchers URLe Kenneth Rayborn from SK versus Daisuke Yamai.
68534
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Make the text more understandable: After this game, Hiromitsu Ochiai (Coach of Chunichi Dragons) remarked: "Even though we ever lose to SK Wyverns, but participants in this year proved their actual strength more than last year.
After this game, Chunichi Dragons coach Hiromitsu Ochiai remarked: "Even though we ever lose to SK Wyverns, but participants in this year proved their actual strength more than last year.
68535
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Make the text more understandable: Some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show, NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
Some low-price notebook computers (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show, NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
68536
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Write a clarified version of the sentence: Some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show, NB manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
Some low-price NBs (EeePC, OLPC) were launched before the show because notebook computer manufacturers had considered and evaluated what a consumer really want.
68537
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Make this sentence better readable: Former American Idol finalist Jessica Sierra, 22, has had her invitation to perform at an upcoming concert for United States troops revoked, following her recent arrest for disorderly conduct while intoxicated.
Former American Idol finalist Jessica Sierra, 22, has had her invitation to perform at an upcoming concert for United States troops retracted, following her recent arrest for disorderly conduct while intoxicated.
68538
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Change to clearer wording: Sierra has been in prison since the start of the month after an altercation with police officers outside a Tampa nightclub, which she had been ejected from.
Sierra has been in jail since the start of the month after an altercation with police officers outside a Tampa nightclub, which she had been ejected from.
68539
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: Patterson said URL, who URLanizing the concert, had received comments from patrons who were concerned about her participation.
Patterson said Move America Forward, who URLanizing the concert, had received comments from patrons who were concerned about her participation.
68540
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Clarify: The first sunspot on The Sun of solar cycle 24 was announced on January 4, 2008.
The first sunspot on The Sun of solar cycle 24 was announced on January 4.
68541
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Three overs later, about about half an hour before lunch, the next wicket fell when Gilchrist also caught Wasim Jaffer.
About half an hour before lunch, the next wicket fell when Gilchrist also caught Wasim Jaffer.
68542
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Clarify this sentence: India were 2/74 at lunch, and played well during the afternoon, not losing any wickets.
India were 2/74 at lunch, and played well during the afternoon, losing no wickets.
68543
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Write a clarified version of the sentence: Alain Jaubert, director from the famous art program "Palettes" by Association Relative la Tlvision Europenne (ARTE was invited by Taiwan Public Television Service (PTS Taiwan) and the French Institute in Taipei to talk about productions on his notable art program "Palettes" on January 19 in Taipei City.
Alain Jaubert, director of the famous art program "Palettes" by Association Relative la Tlvision Europenne (ARTE was invited by Taiwan Public Television Service (PTS Taiwan) and the French Institute in Taipei to talk about productions on his notable art program "Palettes" on January 19 in Taipei City.
68544
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Make this easier to read: Alain Jaubert, director from the famous art program "Palettes" by Association Relative la Tlvision Europenne (ARTE was invited by Taiwan Public Television Service (PTS Taiwan) and the French Institute in Taipei to talk about productions on his notable art program "Palettes" on January 19 in Taipei City.
Alain Jaubert, director from the famous art program "Palettes" by Association Relative la Tlvision Europenne (ARTE was invited by Taiwan Public Television Service (PTS Taiwan) and the French Institute in Taipei to talk about productions on his art program on January 19 in Taipei City.
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Clarification: This also echoed Jaubert's words in his speech: "Without supports by art comrades and those administrations centers, the 'Palettes' will no longer exist, eventually, I won't become notable in Europe."
This also echoed Jaubert's words in his speech: "Without supports by art comrades and those administrations centers, 'Palettes' will no longer exist, eventually, I won't become notable in Europe."
68546
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Clarify: This also echoed Jaubert's words in his speech: "Without supports by art comrades and those administrations centers, the 'Palettes' will no longer exist, eventually, I won't become notable in Europe."
This also echoed Jaubert's words in his speech: "Without supports by art comrades and those administrations centers, the 'Palettes' would not exist; I wouldn't have become notable in Europe."
68547
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Make this sentence more readable: Libi is said to be the number 3 person in al-Qaeda.
Libi is said to have been the third highest ranking member of al-Qaeda.
68548
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Make the sentence clear: However, town official Naty Keyzilberman says this "obviously cannot be true, because Kiryat Yam was founded in 1945".
However, town's spokesman Naty Key Zilberman says this "obviously cannot be true, because Kiryat Yam was founded in 1945".
68549
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Make this sentence more readable: Leading off is the week-long Harley rally, which then will be followed in the next week by BikeFest.
Leading off is the week-long Harley rally, followed by the next week by BikeFest.
68550
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: After the 82-minute game, Sluiter recieved a standing ovation from the spectators.
After the 82-minute match, Sluiter recieved a standing ovation from the spectators.
68551
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Change to clearer wording: Sluiter remarked that the results of the game supported his decision to retire, "Today it was clear: I have to play at my best to compete with a sub-topper.
Sluiter remarked that the results of the match supported his decision to retire, "Today it was clear: I have to play at my best to compete with a sub-topper.
68552
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Clarification: There were declared 41 bird areas by the government directivesbetween 2004 and 2009.
There were declared 41 bird areas were declared by government directives.
68553
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Global Positioning System (GPS) satellites broadcast microwave signals to enable GPS receivers on or near the Earth's surface to determine locationand time, and to derive velocity.
Global Positioning System satellites to enable satellite navigation. Receivers on or near the Earth's surface to determine locationand time, and to derive velocity.
68554
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Improve this sentence for readability: Global Positioning System (GPS) satellites broadcast microwave signals to enable GPS receivers on or near the Earth's surface to determine locationand time, and to derive velocity.
Global Positioning System (GPS) satellites broadcast microwave signals to enable GPS receivers on or near the Earth's surface can determine location, time, and to derive velocity.
68555
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Change to clearer wording: Global Positioning System (GPS) satellites broadcast microwave signals to enable GPS receivers on or near the Earth's surface to determine locationand time, and to derive velocity.
Global Positioning System (GPS) satellites broadcast microwave signals to enable GPS receivers on or near the Earth's surface to determine locationand time, and velocity using this information.
68556
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Write a better readable version of the sentence: Many of the expellees were citizens of the United Kingdom and Colonies and 27, 200 subsequently emigrated to the United Kingdom.
Many of those expelled were citizens of the United Kingdom and Colonies and 27, 200 subsequently emigrated to the United Kingdom.
68557
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Make the sentence clearer: however, since that time, a number of different definitions have emerged, with some contradicting others.Vijayaraghavan, L., Krishnamoorthy, E. S., Brown, R. G., & Trimble, M. R. (2002).
however, since that time, a number of different definitions have emerged.Vijayaraghavan, L., Krishnamoorthy, E. S., Brown, R. G., & Trimble, M. R. (2002).
68558
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Make this sentence better readable: Abulia has been described as a loss of drive, expression, loss of behavior and speech output, slowing and prolonged speech latency, and reduction of spontaneous thought content and initiative.
Abulia has been described as a loss of drive, expression, behavior and speech output, slowing and prolonged speech latency, and reduction of spontaneous thought content and initiative.
68559
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Make the text more understandable: Abulia has been described as a loss of drive, expression, loss of behavior and speech output, slowing and prolonged speech latency, and reduction of spontaneous thought content and initiative.
Abulia has been described as a loss of drive, expression, loss of behavior and speech output, with slowing and prolonged speech latency, and reduction of spontaneous thought content and initiative.
68560
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Clarify this text: An intimate relationship is an interpersonal relationship that involves physical or emotional intimacy.
An intimate relationship is an interpersonal relationship that involves sexual intimacy, because romantic love is based on sex.
68561
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Write a readable version of the sentence: Emotional intimacy involves feelings of liking or loving one or more people, and may result in physical intimacy.
Emotional intimacy involves feelings of sex or lustingone or more people, and may result in physical intimacy.
68562
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Make the sentence clear: Physical intimacy is characterized by romantic love, sexual activity, or other passionate attachment.
Physical intimacy is characterized by romantic love, sexual activity, or other sexual attachment.
68563
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Write a clearer version for the sentence: These relationships play a central role in the overall human experience.
These relationships play a central role in the overall human sexual experience.
68564
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: Humans have a general desire to belong and to love, which is usually satisfied within an intimate relationship.
Humans have a general desire to belong and to have sex, which is usually satisfied within an intimate relationship.
68565
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Make the sentence clear: Humans have a general desire to belong and to love, which is usually satisfied within an intimate relationship.
Humans have a general desire to belong and to love, which is usually satisfied within a sexual relationship.
68566
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Make the sentence clear: An intimate relationship is an interpersonal relationship that involves sexual intimacy, because romantic love is based on sex.
An intimate relationship is an interpersonal relationship that involves physical or emotional intimacy.
68567
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Use clearer wording: Although an intimate relationship is commonly a sexual relationship Emotional intimacy involves feelings of sex or lustingone or more people, and may result in physical intimacy.
Although an intimate relationship is commonly a sexual relationship Emotional intimacy involves feelings of liking or loving one or more people, and may result in physical intimacy.
68568
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Use clearer wording: Physical intimacy is characterized by sexual activity, or other sexual attachment.
Physical intimacy is characterized by sexual activity, or other passionate attachment.
68569
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Write a readable version of the sentence: These relationships play a central role in the overall human sexual experience.
These relationships play a central role in the overall human experience.
68570
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Make this sentence more readable: Humans have a general desire to belong and to have sex, which is usually satisfied within a sexual relationship.
Humans have a general desire to belong and to love, which is usually satisfied within a sexual relationship.
68571
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Make the sentence clearer: Humans have a general desire to belong and to have sex, which is usually satisfied within a sexual relationship.
Humans have a general desire to belong and to have sex, which is usually satisfied within an intimate relationship.
68572
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Make the sentence clear: The existence group is concerned with providing the basic material existence requirements of humans.
The existence category is concerned with providing the basic material existence requirements of humans.
68573
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Make this sentence better readable: The existence group is concerned with providing the basic material existence requirements of humans.
The existence group is concerned with the need for providing the basic material existence requirements of humans.
68574
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Clarification: They include the items that Maslow considered to be physiological and safety needs. The second group of needs is those of relatedness the desire people have for maintaining important interpersonal relationships.
The relatedness category is concerned about the desire for maintaining important interpersonal relationships.
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Clarify the sentence: These social and status desires require interaction with others if they are to be satisfied, and they align with Maslow's social need and the external component of Maslow's esteem classification. Finally, Alderfer isolates growth needs: an intrinsic desire for personal development.
The growth category is concerned about the desire for personal development.
68576
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Write a clarified version of the sentence: He fit Maslow's interpersonal love and esteem needs into the Relatedness category.
He fit Maslow's social needs and Maslow's extrinsic component of self-esteem needs into the Relatedness category.
68577
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Make the text more understandable: He said that when needs in a higher category are not met then individuals redouble the efforts invested in a lower category need.
He said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, individuals invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, individuals invest more efforts in the lower category.
68578
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: For example if self-actualization or self-esteem is not met then individuals will invest more effort in the relatedness category in the hopes of achieving the higher need.
For example if self-esteem is not met then individuals will invest more effort in the relatedness category in the hopes of achieving the higher need.
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Clarification: For example if self-actualization or self-esteem is not met then individuals will invest more effort in the relatedness category in the hopes of achieving the higher need.
For example if self-actualization or self-esteem or self-actualization is not met then individuals will invest more effort in the relatedness category in the hopes of achieving the higher need.
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Make the text more understandable: Alderfer also proposed a progression and regression theory to go along with the ERG theory: he said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, individuals invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, individuals invest more efforts in the lower category.
Alderfer also proposed a progression and regression theory to go along with the ERG theory: he said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, an individual will invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, individuals invest more efforts in the lower category.
68581
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Make this sentence more readable: Alderfer also proposed a progression and regression theory to go along with the ERG theory: he said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, individuals invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, individuals invest more efforts in the lower category.
Alderfer also proposed a progression and regression theory to go along with the ERG theory: he said that when needs in a lower category are satisfied, individuals invest more efforts in the higher category, and when needs in a higher category are frustrated, an individual will invest more efforts in the lower category.
68582
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Make this sentence better readable: For example if self-esteem or self-actualization is not met then individuals will invest more effort in the relatedness category in the hopes of achieving the higher need.
For example if self-esteem or self-actualization is not met then an individual will invest more effort in the relatedness category in the hopes of achieving the higher need.
68583
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Clarify: The western and north-western portions of the site contain a water table that can be reached at a depth of.
Beneath the western and north-western portions of the site contain a water table that can be reached at a depth of.
68584
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: The western and north-western portions of the site contain a water table that can be reached at a depth of.
The western and north-western parts of the site contain a water table that can be reached at a depth of.
68585
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Change to clearer wording: The western and north-western portions of the site contain a water table that can be reached at a depth of.
The western and north-western portions of the site, the water table can be reached at a depth of.
68586
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Write a better readable version of the sentence: Either each volume would either be written by one historian on the faculty, or else each topic would be handled by a faculty member throughout the series of volumes, or perhaps another system of specialization would be prescribed.
Either each volume would be written by one historian on the faculty, or else each topic would be handled by a faculty member throughout the series of volumes, or perhaps another system of specialization would be prescribed.
68587
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Rewrite this sentence for clarity: This procedure was similar to that undertaken on such campuses to produce encyclopedias of natural history, such as marine biology, for which different scholars would write about different phyla.
This procedure resembled that undertaken on such campuses to produce encyclopedias of natural history, such as marine biology, for which different scholars would write about different phyla.
68588
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Write a clarified version of the sentence: Examples of the end result of this procedure include the series done by Cambridge on Greco-Roman history, and that of Oxford on British history, which may be found on the reserve stacks of many public libraries in the 21st century.
Examples of the end result of this procedure include the series produced by Cambridge on Greco-Roman history, and that of Oxford on British history, which may be found on the reserve stacks of many public libraries in the 21st century.
68589
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Make this sentence readable: What gives this concept of 'academic history' its own historicity, or "cubbyhole in time", superseded by progress, is that an academic history was intended to be definitive even though its subject matter, unlike the marine biology mentioned above, was not objective.
What gives this concept of 'academic history' its own historicity, or "cubbyhole in time", challenged by progress, is that an academic history was intended to be definitive even though its subject matter, unlike the marine biology mentioned above, was not objective.
68590
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Make the sentence clear: By the second half of the 20th, there weren't any more academic histories.
By the second half of the 20th, there weren't any more new academic histories.
68591
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Write a readable version of the sentence: History is no longer subdivided in such an assembly-line fashion with such an authoritative result expected.
Historians no longer subdivided in such an assembly-line fashion with such an authoritative result expected.
68592
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Make the sentence clear: All the projects above, allocated to the faculty of a university, had the viewpoint of their country or region in mind.
All the academic-history projects mentioned above, allocated to the faculty of a university, had the viewpoint of their country or region in mind.
68593
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Write a readable version of the sentence: These new histories are similar to the academic, in that they are large and done by many people by a similar process of allocation, but they do not have the same all-specifying concept of classification;
Some new global histories resemble the academic histories are similar to the academic, in that they are large and done by many people by a similar process of allocation, but they do not have the same all-specifying concept of classification;
68594
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Make the sentence clearer: These new histories are similar to the academic, in that they are large and done by many people by a similar process of allocation, but they do not have the same all-specifying concept of classification;
These new histories are similar to the academic, in that they are large and done by many people using a similar process of allocation, but they do not have the same all-specifying concept of classification;
68595
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Make this sentence more readable: World. CIA World Handbook Therefore, the worldwide human population density is around 7,500,000,000 510,000,000 = 14.7 per km2 (38 per sq. mi.).
World. CIA World Handbook Therefore, the worldwide human population density is approximately 7,500,000,000 510,000,000 = 14.7 per km2 (38 per sq. mi.).
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Improve this sentence for readability: In comparison, based on a world population of 7.8 billion, the world's inhabitants, as a loose crowd taking up almost 1 m2 (10 sq. ft) per person (cf. Jacobs Method), would occupy a space a little larger than Delaware's land area.
In comparison, based on a world population of 7.8 billion, the world's inhabitants, as a loose crowd occupying just under 1 m2 (10 sq. ft) per person (cf. Jacobs Method), would occupy a space a little larger than Delaware's land area.
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Clarify the sentence: First, he started this in his diocese, and later it was added to the whole church.
First, he started this in his diocese, and later on it was implemented to the whole church.
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: Mor Themotheos served as the President and resident metropolitan of M.S.O.T seminary for 9 years (19912000) and a faculty of the seminary.Later on, Dr. Mor Theophilose Kuriakose succeeded him.
Mor Themotheos served as the President and resident metropolitan of M.S.O.T seminary for 9 years (19912000).Later Dr. Mor Theophilose Kuriakose succeeded him.
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Write a better readable version of the sentence: Mor Themotheos is presently the "Secretary" to the Holy Episcopal Synod of the Jacobite Syrian Orthodox Church by the regional synod on 2018 December held at Puthencruz.
Mor Themotheos is elected as the "Secretary" to the Holy Episcopal Synod of the Jacobite Syrian Orthodox Church by the regional synod on 2018 December held at Puthencruz.
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Write a readable version of the sentence: Mor Themotheos is presently the "Secretary" to the Holy Episcopal Synod of the Jacobite Syrian Orthodox Church by the regional synod on 2018 December held at Puthencruz.
Mor Themotheos is presently the "Secretary" to the Holy Episcopal Synod of the Jacobite Syrian Orthodox Church in India by the regional synod on 2018 December held at Puthencruz.