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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The statement said "I'm 23 years old dudes, and like, the successes I have had in the pool, I acted in a bummer way, not how that people want from me.
The statement said "I'm 23 years old, and despite the successes I have had in the pool, I acted in a bummer way, not how that people want from me.
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Make the sentence clear: The statement said "I'm 23 years old dudes, and like, the successes I have had in the pool, I acted in a bummer way, not how that people want from me.
The statement said "I'm 23 years old dudes, and like, the successes I have had in the pool, I acted in a bummer way, not in a manner that people have come to expect from me.
68303
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Make this sentence more readable: The construction industry, which peaked at 1.1 million jobs in January 2007, lost 104,000 jobs last month.
The construction industry has lost 1.1 million jobs in January 2007, lost 104,000 jobs last month.
68304
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Make the text more understandable: They were with a party of six who had been at sea angling from a 4.6 m boat.
They were with a party of six who had been angling from a 4.6 m boat.
68305
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Clarify this paragraph: Heavy snow for parts of Northern England is also forecast.
Heavy snow for parts of Northern England had also been forecast.
68306
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Make the text more understandable: Forecasters had indicated further snow in Scotland later in the evening(19th), with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday (20th).
Forecasters had indicated further snow in Scotland later in the evening(19th), with some higher ground experiencing as much as 15 centimetres into Sunday.
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Clarify this paragraph: United Airlines Flight 634 made a very rough emergency landing yesterday morning when only two of the three landing wheels on the Airbus A319 deployed as the plane was making its final approach into Newark, New Jersey's Newark Liberty International Airport.
United Airlines Flight 634 made an emergency landing yesterday morning when only two of the three landing wheels on the Airbus A319 deployed as the plane was making its final approach into Newark, New Jersey's Newark Liberty International Airport.
68308
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Make the text more understandable: Brace!", the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passengers to enter the brace position as the plane made a rough touchdown on the runway at Newark.
Brace!", the pilot announced over the plane's public address system, calling for passengers to enter the brace position as the plane made a touchdown on the runway at Newark.
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Make the text more understandable: In total this will give TD 590 branches, 751 banking machines and more than $ 26-billion U.S. in deposits across eight northeastern states.
In total this will give TD 590 branches, 751 banking machines and more than $ 26-billion in deposits across eight northeastern states.
68310
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Rewrite this sentence for clarity: Today the Hewlett-Packard Co. has announced that it will be cutting 10\% or 14,500 of it's full-time staff wil be cut over the course of the next six quarters.
Today the Hewlett-Packard Co. has announced that 10\% or 14,500 of it's full-time staff wil be cut over the course of the next six quarters.
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Write a readable version of the sentence: HP CEO Mark Hurd, who's had office for just about three months now, has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
HP CEO Mark Hurd, who took office about three months now, has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
68312
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Make the sentence clear: HP CEO Mark Hurd, who's had office for just about three months now, has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
HP CEO Mark Hurd, who's had office for just about three months ago, has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
68313
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Make the text more understandable: These cuts are all part of HP's new restructuring plan, the savings from this restructuring will primarily be to offset market forces or in other words, to strengthen HP's competitiveness in the market.
These cuts are all part of HP's new restructuring plan, the savings from which will primarily be to offset market forces or in other words, to strengthen HP's competitiveness in the market.
68314
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Clarify this text: Few losses are expected in the areas of Sales nor in Research & Development.
Few losses are expected in the areas of Sales or Research & Development.
68315
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Improve this sentence for readability: The number of jobless Germans dropped by 42,000 to 4.8 million, but without seasonal adjustments, including summer breaks in job training and holidays of the jobseekers, it grew by 68,000 and is close to a post-war record.
The number of jobless Germans dropped by 42,000 to 4.8 million, but without seasonal adjustments, including summer breaks in job training and jobseeker holidays, it grew by 68,000 and is close to a post-war record.
68316
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Write a readable version of the sentence: Unemployment can even rise 370,000 by end of the year, according to German research institute IAB.
Unemployment is projected to rise by 370,000 by end of the year, according to German research institute IAB.
68317
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: Labour-market problems remain the main issue of the forthcoming Bundestag elections campaign.
Labour-market problems remain the main issue of the Bundestag election campaign.
68318
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Make the sentence clearer: Chancellor Schrder's government is blamed for fail of his social policy reform known as Hartz IV and growing joblessness.
Chancellor Schrder's government is blamed for the failure of his social policy reform known as Hartz IV and growing joblessness.
68319
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Clarify this text: Chancellor Schrder's government is blamed for fail of his social policy reform known as Hartz IV and growing joblessness.
Chancellor Schrder's government is blamed for fail of his social policy reform known as Hartz IV and growing unemployment.
68320
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: In recent polls ruling Social Democrats (SPD) gained 27\% as the opposition conservatives have 44\% of votes.
In recent polls ruling Social Democrats (SPD) got 27\% as the opposition conservatives have 44\% of votes.
68321
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: In recent polls ruling Social Democrats (SPD) gained 27\% as the opposition conservatives have 44\% of votes.
In recent polls ruling Social Democrats (SPD) gained 27\% as the opposition conservatives have 44\%.
68322
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Clarify the sentence: These initiatives are very expensive to create and the deadline to have the entire NextGen system finished originally to be by the year 2020 is approaching, but FAA Administrator Michael Huerta expressed hope this Metroplex system would go into place at airports around the country.
These initiatives are very expensive to put in place and the deadline to have the entire NextGen system finished originally to be by the year 2020 is approaching, but FAA Administrator Michael Huerta expressed hope this Metroplex system would go into place at airports around the country.
68323
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Make this sentence better readable: These initiatives are very expensive to create and the deadline to have the entire NextGen system finished originally to be by the year 2020 is approaching, but FAA Administrator Michael Huerta expressed hope this Metroplex system would go into place at airports around the country.
These initiatives are very expensive to create and the deadline to have the entire NextGen system put into place originally to be by the year 2020 is approaching, but FAA Administrator Michael Huerta expressed hope this Metroplex system would go into place at airports around the country.
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Make this easier to read: Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.
Each day, nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.
68325
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Make this easier to read: Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.
Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people gather near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.
68326
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia, consists of people who do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.
Imposing daily gatherings of sometimes nearly 200 people near the nation's capital in Herndon, Virginia; these laborers do much of the hard and dangerous work not wanted by most U.S. citizens.
68327
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Use clearer wording: It has drawn the ire and compassion of the Herndon community.
This daily gathering has drawn both the ire and compassion of the Herndon community.
68328
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: A video purporting to show the execution of 21 by supporters of (ISIL) has been released yesterday.
A video was released yesterday purporting to show the execution of 21 by supporters of (ISIL) has been released yesterday.
68329
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Make this easier to read: A video purporting to show the execution of 21 by supporters of (ISIL) has been released yesterday.
A video purporting to show the execution of 21 by supporters of (ISIL).
68330
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: The video asserts the Christians were targeted by ISIL because of their religion.
The video indicates that the Christians were targeted by ISIL because of their religion.
68331
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Rewrite this sentence for clarity: The Coptic Orthodox Church stated they were "confident" justice would be done on those who executed their followers.'s President stated: "Egypt and the whole world are in a fierce battle with extremist groups carrying extremist ideology and sharing the same goals".
The Coptic Orthodox Church stated they were "confident" justice would be carried out.'s President stated: "Egypt and the whole world are in a fierce battle with extremist groups carrying extremist ideology and sharing the same goals".
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Make this sentence readable: This comes as Mayor Robin Nagin begins to abandon the city and turn it over to state and federal control.
This comes as Mayor Robin Nagin began to turn the city over to state and federal control.
68333
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: The fourteen contractors were en route to launch barges into Lake Pontchartrain to help fix the break in the 17th Street Canal when, according to police, the gunmen opened fire on the group.
The fourteen contractors were en route to launch barges into Lake Pontchartrain in order to fix the break in the 17th Street Canal when, according to police, the gunmen opened fire on the group.
68334
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Change to clearer wording: Bayley first raped a woman and committed several attempted rapes when he was just 19.
Bayley committed rape and attempted rape at age 19.
68335
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Write a readable version of the sentence: He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.
Later, in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.
68336
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Clarify this sentence: He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.
He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, he raped six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.
68337
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Make this sentence better readable: He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of that same year.
He admitted to the rape of a 18 year old woman in 2000, and then went on a crime spree raping six prostitutes in the suburb of.
68338
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Rewrite this sentence for readability: This incident is on top of the illegal detention of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen who was accidentally imprisoned in a detention centre when the immigration department suspected her of being an illegal immigrant.
This incident is on top of the illegal detention of Cornelia Rau, an Australian citizen, was accidentally imprisoned in a detention centre when the immigration department suspected her of being an illegal immigrant.
68339
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Clarify this text: The report indicates that 20 other Australian citizens have also been falsely imprisoned by the immigration department.
The report indicates that 20 other Australian citizens have also been unjustly imprisoned by the immigration department.
68340
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Clarify this sentence: Those who have a hand in larger projects noticed the outage immediately.
Larger network-based projects noticed the outage immediately.
68341
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Finally, after about two and a half hours, Level 3 started showing signs of life, but it could hardly be considered up and running.
Finally, after about two and a half hours, Level 3 started routing packets correctly, but it could hardly be considered up and running.
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Write a better readable version of the sentence: Finally, after about two and a half hours, Level 3 started showing signs of life, but it could hardly be considered up and running.
Finally, after about two and a half hours, Level 3 started showing signs of life, but it could hardly be considered fully functional.
68343
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Clarify this text: Pieces of the network seemed to be going up and down at random and Level 3 tech support still says they will need more time to fix the problem.
Pieces of the network seemed to be going up and down at random and Level 3 tech support said they would need more time to fix the problem.
68344
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Use clearer wording: This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
It is the second time Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
68345
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
This is Blunkett's has been forced to stand down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
68346
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Make the text more understandable: This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims his office had fast-tracked a visa application.
This is Blunkett's second time to be forced into standing down from office, having previously stepped down as home secretary last year over claims that his office fast-tracked a visa application.
68347
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Clarification: Yesterday Blunkett declared that he would not resign in an interview with the Sheffield Star, insisting that he had "done nothing wrong."
Yesterday Blunkett declared that he would not resign, insisting that he had "done nothing wrong."
68348
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Make the text more understandable: A raid occurred at 0600 local time (0900) at a number of locations including President Lula's house in, near. President Lula was held for questioning for three hours before being released.
A raid occurred at 0600 local time (0900) at a number of locations including President Lula's house in, near. Following the occurrence, president Lula was held for questioning for three hours before being released.
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Change to clearer wording: The former president is alleged to have been involved in corruption at the state oil company including kickbacks from suppliers including both cash payments and property.
The former president allegedly has been involved in corruption at the state oil company including kickbacks from suppliers including both cash payments and property.
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Make this sentence more readable: A raid occurred at 06:00 local time (09:00) at a number of locations including President Lula's house in, near. Following the occurrence, president Lula was held for questioning for three hours before being released.
A raid occurred at 06:00 local time (09:00) at a number of locations including President Lula's house in, near. President Lula was held for questioning for three hours before being released.
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Make the text more understandable: The former president allegedly has been involved in the corruption at the state oil company including kickbacks from suppliers including both cash payments and property.
The former president is alleged to have been involved in the corruption at the state oil company including kickbacks from suppliers including both cash payments and property.
68352
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Make the sentence clearer: UWS operator Haw Par Corporation described Chan as a "veteran diver, aquarist and animal caregiver who had been caring for the aquatic animals at UWS since its opening in 1991 (jobs).
UWS operator Haw Par Corporation described Chan as a "veteran diver, aquarist and animal caregiver who had been caring for the aquatic animals at UWS since its opening in 1991 ".
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Make this sentence better readable: In an interview with The Diarrhea Paper at the time of UWS' closure in June, Chan said of the animals he worked with, whom he described as his "band of friends", "They are so quietly tame. [...] We intend to find them the best homes and environment.
In an interview with The New Paper at the time of UWS' closure in June, Chan said of the animals he worked with, whom he described as his "band of friends", "They are so quietly tame. [...] We intend to find them the best homes and environment.
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Make this sentence better readable: It lasted at least seventeen hours until the authorities quelled the riot on Monday at 7a.m. local time, according to Fontes.
It lasted at least seventeen hours until another authorities quelled the riot on Monday at 7a.m. local time, according to Fontes.
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Improve this sentence for readability: It lasted at least seventeen hours until another authorities quelled the riot should Monday at 7 a.m. local time, according to Fontes.
It lasted at least seventeen hours until the authorities quelled the riot should Monday at 7 a.m. local time, according to Fontes.
68356
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Change to clearer wording: David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at senior levels. Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper that the incidentwas going to be reported.
David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at the senior level. Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper that the incidentwas going to be reported.
68357
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Make this sentence more readable: David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at senior levels. Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper that the incidentwas going to be reported.
David Cosgrove's indiscretions have upset the military at senior levels. Senior army figures were furious with The Australian newspaper for reporting the incident.
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Clarification: It is also thought to be embarrasing for General Cosgrove who led a 40-year military career before retiring to become an executive at Qantas.
It is also thought to be an embarrasment for General Cosgrove who led a 40-year military career before retiring to become an executive at Qantas.
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Clarify: A Missouri woman from blue springs was a victim of assault and she tried to swallow her cell phone the reasons are unknown at this time.
A Missouri woman from blue springs was a victim of assault and she tried to swallow her cell phone may have been the victim of assault.
68360
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Use clearer wording: The later test was done in England where samples tested had conflicting results in 2004.
The later test was done in England where samples tested had shown conflicting results.
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Clarify this paragraph: Neil Entwistle, 27, appeared before a Magistrates' court today and agreed to be extradited to the United States to face double-murder charges.
Neil Entwistle, 27, appeared before a Magistrates' court today and agreed to be extradited to the United States, where he will face double-murder charges.
68362
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Entwistle is now the prime suspect in the murders of his wife Rachel, 27, and nine-month old baby daughter Lillian.
Entwistle is now the prime suspect in the killings of his wife Rachel, 27, and nine-month old baby daughter Lillian.
68363
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Write a readable version of the sentence: Both were shot to death and left under a pile of blankets in the bedroom of their home in Hopkinton, Massachusetts.
Both were shot to death and left under a pile of blankets in the bedroom of their home in Hopkinton, Massachusetts home.
68364
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Clarify the sentence: Sondhi then hand-delivered the petition to the residence of the President of the Privvy Council.
Sondhi then delivered the petition through an aid at the residence of the President of the Privvy Council.
68365
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Clarify the sentence: A group of former senior Communist Party officials in China have denounced the recent closure of BingDian (Freezing Point ), an investigative newspaper, along with the state of government censorship in that country.
A group of former senior Communist Party officials in China have denounced the recent closure of Freezing Point (Bing Dian ), an investigative newspaper, along with the state of government censorship in that country.
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Clarify: Sanders is also the first professional athlete to win a World Series and Super Bowl in his pro career.
Sanders is the first professional athlete to win a World Series and Super Bowl in his pro career.
68367
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Write a better readable version of the sentence: Reports show that Sanders may go back into news broadcasting, most likely on the FOX NFL Pre-Game Show.
Reports show that Sanders may go back into news broadcasting, possibly on the FOX NFL Pre-Game Show.
68368
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Use clearer wording: Forest Trends ' said corruption had devastated rural living standards and ignored the basic rights of landowners: "There are a few logging operations in the country which are deemed beneficial to both local landowners and the country, but they are lost in a sea of bad operators.
Forest Trends claimed corruption had devastated rural living standards and ignored the basic rights of landowners: "There are a few logging operations in the country which are deemed beneficial to both local landowners and the country, but they are lost in a sea of bad operators.
68369
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Make this sentence more readable: If felling continues the way it is done now, they warn, Papua New Guinea could be bereft of its natural cover in a decade.
If foresting continues in this manner, they warn, Papua New Guinea could be bereft of its natural cover in a decade.
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Rewrite this sentence for clarity: "Truth is-it may have very little to do with Bush's visit," writes Indian blogger Neha Viswanathan on the Global Voices email list, run by the Harvard Berkman Center for Law & Society. "The anti-Bush protest has hardly found a voice online.
"Truth is-it may have very little to do with Bush's visit," writes Indian blogger Neha Viswanathan on the Global Voices email list, run by the Berkman Center for Law & Society. "The anti-Bush protest has hardly found a voice online.
68371
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Write a clearer version for the sentence: The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) made an emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8:21am (New Zealand Daylight Time) A helicopter picked up the five available staff, but the missing staff member could not be found before it had to leave.
The New Zealand Department of Conservation (DOC) made an emergency evacuation of staff from Raoul Island, the largest and northernmost of the Kermadec Islands, due to a volcanic eruption that occurred this morning at 8:21am (New Zealand Daylight Time) A helicopter picked up the five available staff, but one missing staff member could not be found before it had to leave.
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Clarify this paragraph: She said that when staff went to look for their colleague, where he was thought to be they had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.
She said that when two of the others went to look for their colleague, where he was thought to be they had to retreat due to further volcanic activity and the track being impassable with fallen trees and ash.
68373
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Make the text more understandable: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club, the South Sydney Rabbitohs.
Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club.
68374
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Make the sentence clear: The men required 75\% of the clubs members to vote yes on the $3 million takeover bid for it to pass, narrowly winning by just 32 votes (0.8\%).
The men required 75\% of the clubs members to vote yes on the $3 million takeover bid for it to pass; and it narrowly won, by just 32 votes (0.8\%).
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Improve this sentence for readability: Those against the bid have claimed the club is selling out 98 years of heritage.
Those against the bid objected that the club is selling out 98 years of heritage.
68376
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Make the text more understandable: The seat was won in 2004 following a BNP hijacking of a campaign against gangs grooming girls for sex.
BNP had won the seat in 2004 following a BNP hijacking of a campaign against gangs grooming girls for sex.
68377
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Clarify the sentence: The seat was won in 2004 following a BNP hijacking of a campaign against gangs grooming girls for sex.
The seat was won in 2004 after it adapted an ongoing campaign against gangs grooming girls for sex.
68378
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Make this sentence readable: Murphy admitted that he was not at the sheet for every signature, and agreed that the 96 signatures present on those two sheets should be invalidated.
Murphy admitted that he was not at the sheet for every signature, and agreed that the 96 signatures on those two sheets should be invalidated.
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Make this easier to read: He then continued to argue that since Murphy knowingly falsified his name on those two circulation petitions, he also failed to fulfill his candidate affidavit, which according to state law is a criminal offense.
He then continued, arguing that since Murphy knowingly falsified his name on those two circulation petitions, he also failed to fulfill his candidate affidavit, which according to state law is a criminal offense.
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Make this sentence more readable: Her lawyer, Larry Otter, argued that Patrick Murphy should be thrown off the ballot for the Democratic primary election in the eighth congressional district of Pennsylvania (PA). The eighth district is primarily located in Bucks County, PA. Otter argued that during the period of election petition signature collection, Murphy had signed his name as the circulator on two petition sheets, but was not present for each signature that was signed on those sheets, and thereby breaking PA state law.
Her lawyer, Larry Otter, argued that Patrick Murphy should be thrown off the ballot for the Democratic primary election in the eighth congressional district of Pennsylvania. The eighth district is primarily located in Bucks County, PA. Otter argued that during the period of election petition signature collection, Murphy had signed his name as the circulator on two petition sheets, but was not present for each signature that was signed on those sheets, and thereby breaking PA state law.
68381
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Rewrite this sentence clearly: Her lawyer, Larry Otter, argued that Patrick Murphy should be thrown off the ballot for the Democratic primary election in the eighth congressional district of Pennsylvania (PA). The eighth district is primarily located in Bucks County, PA. Otter argued that during the period of election petition signature collection, Murphy had signed his name as the circulator on two petition sheets, but was not present for each signature that was signed on those sheets, and thereby breaking PA state law.
Her lawyer, Larry Otter, argued that Patrick Murphy should be thrown off the ballot for the Democratic primary election in the eighth congressional district of Pennsylvania (PA). The eighth district is primarily located in Bucks County, Pennsylvania. Otter argued that during the period of election petition signature collection, Murphy had signed his name as the circulator on two petition sheets, but was not present for each signature that was signed on those sheets, and thereby breaking PA state law.
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Make this easier to read: PA law states that whoever signs a petition sheet as a circulator must be present for each signature and see each signature placed on the sheet.
Pennsylvania law states that whoever signs a petition sheet as a circulator must be present for each signature and see each signature placed on the sheet.
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Clarify the sentence: Sendek went 170-118 (.590) during his 10 season stay at NC State, and went 22-10 overall and 10-6 in the ACC this past year. Sendek is replacing Rob Evans, who was fired on March 10.
Sendek went 170-118 (.590) during his 10 season stay at NC State, and went 22-10 overall and 10-6 in the ACC. Sendek is replacing Rob Evans, who was fired on March 10.
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Change to clearer wording: The mother and the brother both remain in critical condition at a hospital in Chattanooga hospital. The boys head was bitten by the bear, which punctured his skull, before it attacked his mother.
The mother and the brother both remain in critical condition at a hospital in Chattanooga. The boy's skull was punctured by a bite to the head, before the bear attacked his mother.
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Make this sentence readable: Investigators, so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe. "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks.
Investigators have not yet been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe. "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks.
68386
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Make the text more understandable: Investigators, so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because her injuries are too severe. "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks.
Investigators, so far, have not been able to speak to the mother because of the severity of her injuries. "She may not remember the attack at all," said Hicks.
68387
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Rewrite the sentence more clearly: Authorities have not yet released the names of the victims and the campground has been closed.
Authorities have not yet released the names of the victims. The campground has been closed.
68388
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Make this sentence more readable: This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired a NOVA program titled Dimming the Earth, which presented research by leading scientists on the complex and chaotic systems of our global climate and human activity's effect on it.
This week, the Public Broadcasting Service aired a NOVA program titled Dimming the Earth, which presented research by leading scientists on the complex systems of our global climate and human activity's effect on it.
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Clarify the sentence: This has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect, and is now understood to be due to the way these aerosols act upon clouds.
This has been dubbed the "global dimming" effect, and is probably due to the way these aerosols act upon clouds.
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Write a clarified version of the sentence: The tsunami occoured a couple of hours before there was going to be a tsunami warning system test, that had 29 countries participating.
The tsunami occoured a couple of hours before a previously-scheduled test of a tsunami warning system test, that had 29 countries participating.
68391
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Make the sentence clearer: Bilbrey trained for four days a week, training 2 hours each time.
Bilbrey trained for four days a week for 2 hours each time.
68392
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Use clearer wording: Bilbrey trained for four days a week, training 2 hours each time. Bilbrey has also participated in several swimming triathlons. Bilbrey got the idea to complete the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also completed the swim, taking just under two hours in October 2005.
Bilbrey trained for four days a week, training 2 hours at a time. He decided to take the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also completed the swim, taking just under two hours in October 2005.
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Make this sentence more readable: Bilbrey got the idea to complete the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also completed the swim, taking just under two hours in October 2005.
Bilbrey got the idea to complete the swim after reading about Johnny Wilson, a 9-year old fourth grader who also made it across, taking just under two hours in October 2005.
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Make this sentence readable: His coach made the swim along with Bilbrey.
Zemaitis made the swim along with Bilbrey.
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Make this sentence more readable: A United States Coast Guard boat followed the swimmers, along with 2 extra swimmers in case an emergency occurred.
A United States Coast Guard boat and two additional swimmers followed to take action in case an emergency occurred.
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Make this sentence better readable: Dan Glickman, CEO of the Motion Picture Association of America has applauded the move, citing it as a reminder that "there are no safe harbors for copyright thieves".
Dan Glickman, CEO of the Motion Picture Association of America (MPAA), has applauded the move, citing it as a reminder that "there are no safe harbors for copyright thieves".
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Make the text more understandable: At current there are already some publications made available by proper officials, (see the MPAA link below) confirming the authenticity of the raid.
At current there are already some publications made available by officials confirming the authenticity of the raid.
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Make the text more understandable: Since 4pm, at least 200 people also blocked the Berliner Platz, the most important inner city crossing, bringing most of the downtown bus and car traffic to a standstill.
From 4 to 7pm, at least 200 people also blocked the Berliner Platz, the most important inner city crossing, bringing most of the downtown bus and car traffic to a standstill.
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Make the sentence clearer: Jos Ramos Horta told Lusa News Agency that the soldiers of the GNR "have to start acting with autonomy and hardness" in all the city, Dili, to reestablish the law and order.
Jos Ramos Horta told Lusa News Agency that the soldiers of the GNR "have to start acting with autonomy and hardness" in the entire city, Dili, to reestablish the law and order.
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Make this sentence readable: Shiv sena activists today disrupted a news conference of Syed Ali Shah Geelani, the leader of the break away fraction of the All Party Hurriyat Conference (APHC). Geelani, who heads a breakaway faction of the troubled region's largest separatist alliance, was scheduled to address the press after his release from prison.
Activists of the Shiv sena today disrupted a news conference of Syed Ali Shah Geelani, the leader of the break away fraction of the All Party Hurriyat Conference (APHC). Geelani, who heads a breakaway faction of the troubled region's largest separatist alliance, was scheduled to address the press after his release from prison.