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 ### Overview:
 
-Lamarck-14B version 0.3 is the product of a carefully planned sequence of templated merges.  It is broadly based on [arcee-ai/Virtuoso-Small](https://huggingface.co/arcee-ai/Virtuoso-Small), with contributions from highly-ranked portions of other models prose and reasoning.  
+Lamarck-14B is a carefully designed merge which emphasizes [arcee-ai/Virtuoso-Small](https://huggingface.co/arcee-ai/Virtuoso-Small) in early and finishing layers, and midway features strong influence on reasoning and prose from [CultriX/SeQwence-14B-EvolMerge](http://huggingface.co/CultriX/SeQwence-14B-EvolMerge) especially, but a hefty list of other models as well.
 
-It benefits from use of evolutionary merges, particularly from [CultriX/SeQwence-14B-EvolMerge](http://huggingface.co/CultriX/SeQwence-14B-EvolMerge) - hence its name.
+Its reasoning and prose skills are quite strong.  Version 0.3 is the product of a carefully planned and tested sequence of templated merges, produced by a toolchain which wraps around Arcee's mergekit.
 
 **The merge strategy of Lamarck 0.3 can be summarized as:**
 
-- Two model_stocks began specialized branches for reasoning and prose quality.
-- For refinement on Virtuoso as a base model, DELLA and SLERP re-emphasized selected ancestors.
+- Two model_stocks commence specialized branches for reasoning and prose quality.
+- For refinement on both model_stocks, DELLA and SLERP merges re-emphasize selected ancestors.
 - For smooth instruction following, a SLERP merged Virtuoso with converged branches.
-- For finalization, a TIES merge.
+- For finalization and normalization, a TIES merge.
 
 ![graph.png](https://huggingface.co/sometimesanotion/Lamarck-14B-v0.3-experimental/resolve/main/graph.png)