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0F32DDCBECB6 | It is important try to do your best for conserve energy and resources. But, I am disagree that my school follow this model and change to a four day school week and extend the school day two hours. Even if maybe it can have some benefits but as student i think it can have many disadvantages for us. And if we want to conserve energy and resources we can do it follow others methods.
I am not in favor of that my school follow this model for some reasons. First, thIs proposal could affect most to the students in many ways for example if they extend the school day two hours I think it is to much time at school it will be so stressful for the students and teachers as well. Another reason is because many students have to work a part time after school. So, if they extend the school day two hours is possible that the students who have to work after school will can work only few hours and some of them really need to work after school becase maybe they live by themself and they have to pay rent and anothers bills it means they need the money. Then, this students who have to support by themself maybe they will can not go to school any more if the school accept this new proposal because they have to work .
Another disadvantage is that it will be stessfull if we have to do our homework after have been almost whole day at school. Next, some students have to help their parents after school for example they have go to pick up their little brothers from school and take care of them or they have to cook, clean up the house, wash diches, do the loundry and other stuff. So, if the students have to do this things they will don't have time to do their homework. Then, those students who have to work or help their parents after school will be so affect if the school follow this model maybe their grades will decrease because they don't do their homework or they don't sleep well if they don't sleep well they will be distract and not paying attention in classes.
Another reason why i am not in favor is because sometimes maybe we want to hang out with friends, go visit your family and spend time with them but if we leave late school maybe we will be tired or have things at home to do. So, we will not have a time for that and sometime we need time for ourself, time to rest but if we have work, do homework, school we can not it is so stressfull. Then, the students will not concentrate at school nor work.
There are some benefits too for example for some students who don't have to work or help their parents after school so they can rest when they get back from school and they will have time to do their homework. Also they can hang out with his friends or go visit his families on weekends.
Another benefit is that if we have only four day school the students will have one day left that can use to work all day or do other things like homeworks, go play soccer or other things for fun. So, with this model we can have 3 days without school and work those days and study thet other four days if we live with our parents or someone who support us then if the schooIl follow this model wll not affect us and it is a great option.
In conclusion i am disagree to my school follow this model because i think it will afect the student and as student i want to be successful and reponsible with my homeworks. Also, for those students who have to work they have to be competent in their jobs to not get fire because they need the money. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
0F3EC382C3CB | The benefits of working in as a group or working alone.
I believe working as a group is more beneficial for the students.
My friend Generic_Name is very capable of doing school work by himself.
However, even he needed others help to understand somethings.
I am very capable of doing a school project by myself.
However, even I could use some one else's input in the matter.
I believe working together as a group is beneficial .
For example, my friend Generic_Name he is a very smart person.
He was on the top of the class with grades but, even he could not do it by himself.
One day the teacher assigned us projects.
Generic_Name decided to do it alone.
On the due date, which was later that week Generic_Name turned in the project.
The teacher told him he failed he did not understand why.
The teacher later on the day took him aside and explained that he was not understanding the question.
He asked her how he could make up the points for the failed project.
Two weeks after that she assigned another project.
She took Generic_Name aside and said ' this time work with somebody".
Generic_Name listed so he asked somebody to work with him.
The day the project was due, he was nervous because he does not work with people often.
The teacher told him they got a perfect score.
The teacher took him aside and told him why he passed.
She told him he passed because when you have more than just one persons input.
Things become clear so when you do not understand something that other person's input can help.
Another reason I believe working as a group helps is when I was in high school we were assigned a two part project.
The first part I had to do by self.
I got it done when the due date came the teacher told us to pick a partner.
I picked a friend of mine, Generic_Name.
The teacher told us to compare our papers.
However, our paper even though they were on the same subject, they were very different.
She later told us to now write a paper on the same subject but working together.
When we were all done with the two parts she told everyone to rotate their papers to the right once.
Everyone passed them on the teacher then told the whole class to read all three papers and to pick which one made more sense.
When every one was done they all picked the one that made the most sense and gave it to her.
Every single one of those papers she got were all the one people worked on together.
She then asked the class why they did not pick the other one.
They all said because the other papers were one sided as in only one perspective.
Some students may say working alone is better.
However, Generic_Name and I both learned that in some places you need two sides to a story, argument and debate.
If I would have gone on with my life thinking the way I thought before I worked with some one, it would be very different in some perspective.
My friend Generic_Name's life would have been very different too.
Thanks to the team work skill and the skill to listen to other peoples side, Generic_Name and I can make decision with some one instead of just making it alone.
I recommend you talk to your teacher about this and get more group projects going.
Talk to your parents about how you could use those skills in the outside world, become surprised by how much you use them, and by how easier your life become.
When you do not have to make decision alone, decision making becomes much easier. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
0F473C4B0103 | First impressions are more effective, and can be enough to break relationships. First impressions are possible to change. People are more knowledgeable nowadays it can not be easy to change their minds. People are not believing anything easily at first impressions. It is possible to change through: speech, proves, and loyalty.
Comparing to past people are more educated. They can convince people back from first impressions through their speech. According to the speech, it describes how his speech was con vincible. "I got nothing: no power, no money, but my loyalty and love to my country". (Afghan Presidential Candidate) It explains how speech can change minds. Speeches can be strong enough to win or loss. Speech can be more effective to convince someone back from first impressions.
Proves can be a reason to change first impressions. Nowadays people are not believing easily. They want some proofs to trust. According to the quote, it says how can proofs be more valuable than first impressions. "I saw the video recording today, and I realized that he is not guilty". (ACB Bank Manager) This part describes how proofs can change someone life and first impressions. Proofs can be more effective and reasonable to change first impressions.
Loyalty can be the main thing to change first impressions. People can be more close to other people through loyalty. According to the speech, it shows how loyalty can win someone trust. "I would have not forgive anyone, but since you are involve in it I can change my decision." (AXC Security co Supervisor) It is hard to gain trust but to be loyal its easy to have everyone's trust. Loyalty can change someone's first impressions.
It is possible to change first impressions. Great speeches can change someone idea and their first impressions. Proves are one of the strong reason for changing first impressions. Loyalty is one of the important reason and can be enough to change first impressions. First impressions are changeable. We can change our first impressions anytime we want. We do not have to take action on first impressions, because it can not be strong reason to decide. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |
0F563E567370 | I would like to go to a landscaping company.
I would like to see how to do the job like them.
I chose this place because it looks fun.
I would like to convince you to let me go.
I also chose this place because you get to go different places.
I would also like to see big houses.
I also want to go to see how to start my own company.
I would also like to go to different states.
I would like to compare the difference from the houses.
I would also like to go with my family.
I would get to know the world better
I would also like to go to a construction site.
I would like to see all the equipment they use.
I would ask how much time they spend there.
I would ask how the boss mad it to have a big company.
I would ask how do they get a lot of money they get in such a short time.
The other place i would like to visit is a famous song writers house.
I would like to go there because they get a lot of money too.
I would ask if they sing day and night
I would ask how hard it is to make a song.
I would also ask if they have to be a certain age.
One other job I would like to visit is a basketball players house.
I would like to know how they got that famous and how they got to that level. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
0F634E9B3E9C | Changing the cafeteria lunch menu is a really bad idea because not all students may eat the food, students may have a aligick reaction and that can be really bad for the students,and students would throw away all the food causeing the school losing money on trying to make the kids happy.
In this stage of life, people/students are so picky these days. Students would look in there food to make sure that the food is pertfecty right. If the food smells werid or the food looks nasty most students would throw it away or they would just not touch it and starve until they get home. Me Generic_Name, im a really picky guy, if im going to eat something i want that too look perfeshonal.
Schools should leave the school menus alone because you may not know but some kids have alergys. Students when they have something like that they think it is a werid thing to have but its peryfically fine and normal. Kids that are in school dont like telling people what they have in side them because they are scared that students would make fun of them. Thats why schools should leave the menus alone because they dont know the right information about the students.
Some schools around the world have money to ah ford a lot of things for the students. Schools want to change the lunch menus for the students so they can be more happy in what they eat. But what they do not know there is so many kids that are picky, so they dont eat the food and throw it away. That is not good for the school because they are losing money and its not worth doing that, if the studnets do not appreciate the new food the schools are trying to give them, the schools should use the money on something else that the kids would like.
Schools should just leave the lunch menus how it is because schools are not getting the information they wanted back. The schools are wasting money, kids are not eating the food and are throwing it away, students have alergys so in order for all that not to happen, schools should leave the menus alone and not even bother to change it. Schools saves more money, students stay happy, and no student would get sick. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
0F7900292BB6 | Have you event been told that you had to chose a career before high school. I have, and I say we as young adult should pace ourselfs and not rush this important life decision so early. Because that decision de the person and the time, not important for take one career. Each young person has a decision to purse a career or not because it is optional.
First of all I disagree whit this idea, because young students are more like to listen what adults tell them to chose. That ends up on kinds chosen careers they dont want or like and in the long run it takes away their Dreams, money, and time. The kinds need more inspiration for that in future they take one career like: doctor, arquitec, teacher, and other carriers is good have one inspiration. Is good have persons that support in every time like Mom, family or dad. Because much young not listen the adult or not have support in the family for that reason they do not pursue a career.
Secondly us young adults need to expand our knowledge in the work field. Like for example we need to watch videos and have people already working their to explain How they work and ward they do. It would be a good idea to have two examples of people: a person who has ready finished his career and has work and money and the other, who does not finish his studies and asks for money in the street. Is good what a young thing in her future the difficult is life outside working in the hot or cold not is nathing essy.
Everybody have that thing in her future, on good future for the family, wife, sons, daughter. Is good have idea in the High school that like you. Because you like draw you take the career arquitec is good idea. The people inspired draw like building, the natural place everything is good. The people like arquitec to created building in Dubai is very nice I don't no but is beautiful in only imagination. Much person no have idea the important is the study in the life.
Much young take to abandon the high school and decision working because no everybody have east opportunity other people need more working because not have more family. I need one program or event for the people have one idea the good that is study. Study have for the benefit apprenticeship. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
0F7DB6BD1AD5 | Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? I think students would benefit themselfs by taking classes at home. Because they would be more focus with out anyother classmates around they would also focus more if they had a quite place to study or just do there work and students would have more time to do there work or get things done.
students would focus better if they did not have a other classmate talking to them. Some students can not foucs if someone else is talking it might bother them it also might bother them if other classmates are making loud noises. For example i am one of those students that when i am taking a test i can not concentrate if other students are talking.
students would have more time to study and finsh work because. They would be able to take breakes during each class. students can ask there teachers to help them study for a test or quiz they can also ask a friend to help them too. students can take a break between clases and do work for other clases.
students would focus more if they had a quite place to study like the libary or somewhere they might know that would not have much noise or taking involved. students would focus better and concentrate better they will also get there work done on time.
Inconclusion this is why schools should offer distance learnig for students because students would benefit themselfs to work alone with out any taking or classmates making noise. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
0F8436260047 | Some people say that first impressions are easy to change. Many others may say that it's impossible to change your first impression. Many people have experienced this before and there are others who have not yet experience it. I agree and there are many reasons why people may try to change their impression. You might find it difficult to change your first impression because you do not know how others will react to you, you do not want people to remember your first impression especially if it was bad, and you do not know how its going to go.
If you worry about how people will react when trying to change your first impression, it will make things more difficult for you to achieve that goal. Take your chances be confident and do what you have to do. There have been times where people can just look at someone and assume the worst about them. They could be going through a rough time and you may not even know that but you still assume the worst. First impressions may be easy and may be hard to change.
First impressions are almost always remembered,that makes it difficult to change your first impression. No matter how many times you try to change your first impression some people will still remember it. First impressions are important because its how people see you. You always want to make it your best not your worst. Think to yourself about what your going to do before you do it, because many people will agree or disagree that first impressions are impossible to change.
Not Knowing how your first impression is going to be is horrifying. On the other hand it can go great you just never know. You may be nervous about how everything will go things may not be so easy to change. You need to focus on the good things that. will make you feel comfortable and confident. Make yourself feel right before you change your first impressions because as you know there either easy or impossible to change.
Some people say the first impressions are easy to change others will say its impossible. People may disagree and agree with this. People who have experienced this know how hard it might have been. Some may seem insecure by their first impression because you do not know how others will react to you, you do not want people to remember your first impression especially if it was bad, and you do not know how everything will go. First impressions are impossible to change. | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
0F84CCFB4982 | I think is good take elective courses for the student , because if he want to graduate to the school , but if you want more gratuated in four years is better ,because you learning more knowledge is important that you learn.
if you take a decision studied ,studied because in your future is helping the stuied is good ,but the people don't like studing in my opinion is better take elective course , beacuse i learning more information.
example.
1. in my country all pleople speak spanish ,when i go to the salvador and i speak ttwo language ,i feel proud, my english is bad ,but all time practice and is important learning each day.
2. if you don't take elective course you not learn nothing ,because you are lazy you need studied is bettter your family are proud if you want a good title.
3. in your future, if you has a good title you have a good work. all people in this country don't have work and don't won money is because don't go to the school, whenhim was a children ,but we are a good oportunity in the shool, all student need studyng for a good future.
4. if the pepe don't to entrust ,you meed to prove that always to beat you and make feel the mother.
5. if you take elective courses in summer i think is bad , bacuse in the summer is not the same tha all year, all years you have more information is better ,but in summer id two months or three is bad . | 2 | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
0F8F499BAAB9 | I think it is a good idea for students to select a career at a young age by the time they enter high school.
Because for example right now I am in high schools in eleven grade and I dont know what career I want to take it.
I agree with the societies that do students expected to identify a career, at that way they are gonna know what career they want, some students likes more than one career and they dont know which to decided before they graduated..
They are others students that the career that they want it is to expanses and they don't have enough money to pay they can try to get like a scholarship with having good grades and they have to stars in nine grade with good grades and they can apply for one later and see if they can get it.
I agree that the students select a career at a young age, at that way they are prepared and when they graduated of high schools that are gonna go to college ad choose a good career,
and than after that get a good job. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
0F9FDD188673 | I like to be a pilot in the future. but I can't see with my eye's that much good, and the pilot job don't eccept that if i want to be a pilot my eye's have to be good. So I Agree with Emerson's statment. I hope in the future that I can fix my eye's that I can be a pilot.
some people disagree with that, that I can be a pilot and my eye's not good or it dosen't matter. If I don't fix my eye's I will thinking with another job that I like to be on it. I like to be a dentist but this job so hard to be a dentist and it take's like 5-8 years to be a dentist but I will do my best to get a job that i like it and the job get for me more money. If I'm going to be a pilot it takes just 2-5 year to be a pilot and it's not that hard. I like this job so much so i'm going to do my best to be pilot in the future. I have three brothers Generic_Name, Generic_Name, and Generic_Name. Generic_Name like to be a Doctor, Generic_Name like to get something in the Computer's, Generic_Name like to be engineer and lastly I love to be a pilot. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
0FD73E4EED03 | People should seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters because the people that wants make their own decisions they could not to know anything, just they are following their instincts and ideas so that mean they will believe that what they are doing is correct when it does not and it is against the rules.
Laws; the consumption of drugs and alcohol, to carry of guns, and to drive; the consumption of drugs is unlawful in too many states and you need a permission that you can buy it and the alcohol is legal but you need to be 21 years old or more to buy it, to carry of guns; is legal but is same to drugs and alcohol you need a permission to buy one and be older, and to drive to get a license need to be 16 or older that its up to you, but if you decided to get your license when you are 16 years old, you have to drive with someone also as copilot; the copilot need be more older than you, you need to do this because they want be sure you have the experience to drive alone.
Work; when you have a job you have rules that you need to follow as a schedule, duties; you have a specific schedule that tell you when you have to come to the work and when you have go to home this help to your job keep everything organize to the employers because if the employers come to the work whenever they want to, can this affect the company, like if you are an accountant and the company needs you in the morning but how you make your own decision to do not go in the morning you go in the afternoon, so as you skip your specific schedule the company have a problem with the accounts and its your fault for not follow the schedule, duties well you have specific duties for you by your skills, so that mean you can not make a decision do something also because you can be fire.
Society; well you do not have the decision to do every thing you want outside, like you can not to burn a library because you had the idea brilliant to do it, you can not kick or hit to everyone to see outside just because you have a idea make laugh your friends, and you can not into a private property to get a flower that you see and liked , you can not make that decision in your life
In conclusion, we can not let the people make their own decisions, I am not saying that people can not have rights to do or be something, I am saying that people can not do everything they want, they need guidance from experts and authorities to help them more to the minors they do not have the conscience to know what is right or no. | 3 | 2 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
0FF307182628 | Dear principal,
I think that it is okay for students to bring cell phones to school . But there cell phones need to be turned off during class . They could use them during passing periods and lunch time but not during class time . What if they need their phones for emergencies or what if their parents want to know where they are after school. Parents some times want to know where their kids are so that is why we need to bring cell phones to school . That is if some kids have cell phones because not all the kids have cell phones . We will promise not to use the cell phones during class times . And the teachers can see if they are turned off o not . And that is all i want to say.
Sincerely ,
Your Student | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
0FFB44B5D0C2 | Do you think that people make there own character traits?
the british naturalist and politian john lubbock wrote. I believe that we choose our character traits.
People need to choose what character traits they want. For example, at the street you going to see many influiences can get to you. People will going to try to change your personality but you going to see what is right for you. People can't not change your personality because is your own thought. Some people knows their own personality if they want to be a good characher or bad.
Some people can give bad advice or some people want to trap you. For example at my school their is a lot people that they have bad personality or vice. People need to understand or think before what character they want because everyone is different their thought or feelings. Some people need to choose what character is right for themself.
while some people believe that we choose our characher traits, some people believe that our character formed by influeces beyond our control because they think that influences change their though or actions. Although this might be valide, there are several important ideas to be considered like People need to choose what character traits they want. For example, at the street you going to see many influiences can get to you. some people cant not change your thought because is your own decision what is good for you. People can give their own opinion but is your decesion what characher you want. people need to learn the right way the character.
People need to choose what character traits they want. Some people can give bad advice or some people want to trap you. My final though is to not let the influence people change your thought because you influences people just can bringe you some problems on school or on the street. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
101576652D3B | The British naturalists and politician John Lubbock wrote, "Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. I agree with this statement because people should know how to make decisions themselves instead of relying on others to do it for us.
Although we are surrounded by people who influence us ever since we where young, people should choose their own character because people should make decisions by themselves more often. Everyone isn't the same, and we shouldn't always be taught to follow what we see everyone do. It's important that we make choices by ourselves because by doing so, it makes us stronger humans beings who can rely on ourselves and helps us gain self confidence and makes us rely on ourselves more often then we do.
Even though Influences help you know what's right from what's wrong, people should choose the person they want to because the people you know might be setting bad examples and you wouldn't even know that they're wrong because they told you it's right. For example, growing up, your guardians could be anyone. They could be good people, or they could be not so good people. It's our job to use common sense and decide for ourselves what's right and what's wrong. It's always good to use your brain and decide if something is morally right or wrong. If you see someone close to you being a bad influence, then one must learn to not replicate those actions, but instead make good decisions their selves.
Some might say that influences help if you're lost or confused in life, however, another reason why people should create their own character is because attempting something on your own and not succeeding helps you grow as a person. For example, if you just follow what everyone else is doing, you won't learn because thats the equivalent of you being spoon fed. If you dont attempt anything of your own, you won't know how to do anything by yourself. By always letting people make decisions for you, you won't be able to complete tasks on your own and makes you a less independent person. This is why making your own decisions is important. Not only does it help you grow as a person, but it also strengthens your mind.
In life, people often rely on others to build the person they are but in reality, it's better to rely on yourself instead of others to make decisions because it makes us rely on ourselves more often then we do, helps us avoid bad influences, helps you grow as a person, and strengthens our minds. All of these things are why we should all grow up by making our own choices and decisions instead of mindlessly do what everyone else does. People have all the power in their selves to be who they want to be. You're no one other than yourself after all, and that's the most important thing to think about when choosing our own character traits. | 4.5 | 4 | 5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 |
101E0C554F66 | Have you ever thought of an outdoor activity that aided you, your families, and friends? while there are some activities that aid you and other groups of people, one of the most helpful is going to the park. it is good to go to the park because you can ride your bike, and because you can spend time with your family.
going for a ride in you bike to the park is good for your body and mind because your leg movements aid the muscles, the fresh air blowing in your face feels relaxing, and because you can burn unnecessary calories while riding.
It is good to go to the park with your family because you can get some helpful advises from them, because you can have a stronger bond with you family and/or friends, and because you can talk about life problems and how to solve them.
it is best to fly a kite at the park because when flying kites, you have to maintain it's height which is a good challenge, because you can compete with friends, and because you can teach others how to fly a kite
Overall, riding a bike and spending time with your family are both good things to do at the park. life aiding activities exist outdoors all around the world. Going to the park is a good choice when thinking about family or frineds. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
101E64C9DA0E | School cafeteria are planning to make healthier and nutrisous food for students. While applying healthier food to the menu, it could eliminate some students favorite food. convincing the principle to change the menu would be a good idea, for example, students are eating junk food for lunch, eating healthier could help students body become more active and stonger, also students may feel good about themselves for eating nutrisous food and not having to eat burgers for lunch.
Junk food isn't healthy for student do to how less active they have become. Monday through Friday students have lunch everyday and may eat the same unhealthy food. sometimes it's good to eat junk food once in a while.
Healthy and nutrisous food help students become more active and stronger. For example, nutrisous food would help students become active during their classes and after school activities. Having something small to eat like a chicken salad may help students from sleeping, being lazy to become more social, and having a healthier mindset. Students wouldn't have to worry much about getting sick or having some sort of stomach problem.
Students should feel good about themselves having to eat healthy. While students eat healthy and nutrisous meal they're keeping their body from shutting down on themselves. eating healthy effects students in good ways by keeping them fit and strong. Every student should eat healthy to keep their mindset healthy for school and ready to learn.
While the principle may eliminate some of the students favorite food it would help for the great or good. Healthy food should help students in may ways from becoming lazy to staying awake in class and to learn properly. To some students, changing the menu may be hard because some food have been eliminated and it could have been their favorite food. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
1087B6C7FB98 | I say its a good idea that the school menu should change to being more healthier because a lot of students eat junkfood mostly everyday, need to eat more fruits and vegetables, and wanting a healthy live.
As you know, students eat junkfood food anywhere they go to such as movie theaters, gas stations, and restaurants. Some places do serve healthy foods and snacks but people rather choose junkfood because they're not use to eating good. Most stores put the unhealthy foods in the front, so kids can go straight into putting it in their carts or baskets. However, we can't manage telling people if they want to eat healthy or not.
Every school want kids to get a fruit or a vegetable at lunch. Some kids chose not to get a fruit or vegetable because they dont care about eating it or they it just throw away. Eating veggies will help you with your body like for an example; a carrot will help with your eyes. If kids dont want to get any of their fruits or veggies they could give it to a friend that will love to eat it instead of wasting it.
Eating healthy will not cause you to have much problems but, eating unhealthy will cause much problems. I think parents should focus on what their kids are eating for breakfast, lunch, and dinner. If you dont like eating unhealthy you could always pack lunch. Although, you could eat junkfood once or twice a week and not everyday.
I personality agree to having the school changing the school menu because the world has change and we want to eat more fruit and veggies, having our lives healthy, and wanting kids to stop eating junk food all the time. It has been an issue for the past years and I think its time for schools to have different types of food. Not everyone wants to eat healthy food we could sometime have some unhealthy at lunch. These are the reasons I want the school menu to change. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
108CA77CBAB4 | although former British minister Winston Churchill says "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." actually to get to success sometimes does take failure to get it. actually this is very true for people who never give and work hard even after they fail time and time and again. for example when you fail at something to keep trying after till you succeed. some people think if you fail you won't be successful that is not true. if you never give up you will be successful. another example when you fall you always get back up and keep going and pushing forward. only you can decide if you want to always fail or try harder. to get success it ain't easy. there is a saying nothing that is easy to get is wroth having. this relates to what Churchill said. Winston Churchill is a wise man and i would agree with him. everything he said about failing and being successful after is true. they are so many successful people who have failed plenty of times in their life. it happens to all people no can be perfect at what they want or do in their life. inconclousion Winston Churchill is a wise man for his saying. his saying can motivate many people who feel like giving up after failing. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
10988CD16BF3 | The beach is the best place on earth!! A beach is a place by the ocean with sand. Most beach's have a board walk where people can walk up and down for fun. There are always stores along the board walk that have amazing things for people to take back home. One place I would love to visit is Virginia Beach because the wonderful water. I would spend all day on the beach and most of the night on the amazing board walk.
When I would spend the day on the beach I would ride the big waves on my stomach even tho it hurts but its still fun. Also, I would go boggy boarding because its hard to stay on if you don't time when to jump on the wave right, I would usually bring my own board from home but the waves are so strong mine would brake and I would always have to buy a new one over there. My all time favorite thing to do is play on the sand when I to tired of being in the water for too long. I would usually build a long and tall sand castle then run throw it and get my mom mad because I just got sand all over her. Then my dad would dig a big whole in the sand then put me in it while my brother holding me down my dad would cover me with sand so that just my head would sick out, they would usually leave me in there for about 20 minutes or so
With this in mind, at night I would love going on the board walk and explore all the cool places. Most night there would be a band playing outside next to a Sonic fast food outdoor restraint and they would have a game where people can win two free meals if you guess how many Jolly ranchers are in the jar. Then me and my dad would rent bikes and ride all around the board walk for like an hour or so to see everything that is there. Once it hits like 10:30 my brother, sister, and I would go on the sand and find cool stuff on the ground with flash lights then we would all sit down, listen to music and talk for about two hours. At like 12:00 we would go back to the hotel and while my mom and dad sleep we would sneak out and go eat out at the 24/7 all you can eat restraint.
With all these fun ideas, I would love to visit Virgina Beach and have a great time with the family. Going on the beach for th day and the borad walk at night is the best thing to do. | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
109D8D4A91FC | Some may say it's impossbile because of the impression you left on a person, but people can always change. People can leave multiple impressions other people, its just the person to decide if there willing to see the whole picture. No one is perfect, people make mistakes all the time is a part of being human. From my past experience i've left multiple impressions on people, "ya people maybe nieve nor stubborn to pay attention to things they want see". Especailly at a job interview your probably won't ready, alarm didn't work, and 5 minutes late, the manager is think that your a lazy person that doesn't deserve it, but you meet all the requirements for the job. Then can see what your really made of. You may meet people on a bad day and they seem angry that doesn't define a person. People can change so others can as well. People can be blunt off the first impression and every time they you thats the first thing that comes to mind, but you always change the way they think of you. It might take minutes,hours,days,months, or maybe years, but people will always try again and again to get the satistfaction needed. When people are motivated they can do anything. So I don't think its impossible but say it is possible to change the first impression. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 2.5 |
10A367BB87EB | Based on Emerson's statement, I firmly agree that if you never try to do something beyond what you already know, you will never do something and know if you could have done it or of you were good at it. Based on my experience, for what I've live and for what I know, I strongly believe and agree with this statement. My brother for example wanted to be an engineer, with hard work and effort he made it. In the other hand we have Hitler, he went from being a simple art student to one of the most exponent dictators of Germany.
For example, my brother wanted to be an engineer since he was little, at the time he reach High school, he was sure what career he wanted for his future. He started taking courses that would help him get credits for college and getting involve with sports that would help him get scholarships. Also, he took classes that would help him improve his skills and understanding of his future career. Now with hard work and effort, he graduated as an engineer from Generic_school and he's happily working with his dream job. This shows that with hard work you can accomplish any goal and letting yourself grow.
Another example was Hitler, he went from being a simple art student to one of the most exponent dictators of Germany. At a young age Hitler had a dream, he wanted to study arts, he started working on it, but when he apply to college he wasn't accepted. That was the moment when Hitler decided to do something different, and experience something new that could change his life. With hard work and patience he did it. Even though he fail the first time, he didn't give up, therefore, he became a dictator.
Some people say that you should do what life gives you at the moment because even if you work hard, sometimes you don't reach what you were hoping for and the work is not even worth it, however, you should always try to do something to grow because if you don't, that's when life gets too bored, you don't have to be in the same spot your entire life. You need to let yourself expand and fly to grow and experience something beyond what you already know, something that will make proud at the end of the day.
In conclusion I agree with Emerson's statement that if you never try yo do something beyond what you already know, you will never grow and never have experience something out of your comfort zone. You'll never know if what you could have done was worth your time, which is why you should always try to something beyond what you have already master and challenge yourself to do bigger things that you never knew you could. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
10AC7944DC4A | Winston Churchill once said that "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." this means that if people fail they should get back up and try again and if they fail once more to never give up. Some people think that if you fail you should just give up right then and there. some people say that if they give up when they fail they should get up and try again and never loss hope, to determined, and to dedicate on what they are trying to achieve.
Everyone person fails in some point of their lives its part of life to fail no one is perfect. people should never loss hope if they fail they should be determined to make it through and be successful. Hope is so important in peoples lives because lets say if someone loses they child and if that person losses hope they would stop looking for their child and if they stop looking for their child they will never find him or her. Failure is important in peoples lives because it make people to not lose hope but also it makes them to dedicate on what they are trying to succeed.
People should dedicate on what they are trying to achieve or on what they want to succeed. dedication is very important in everyone lives. Cristiano Ronaldo is so dedicated to soccer that is why he is so successful he was playing in the best league in Spain now he is paying in the best league in Italy. many people admire Cristiano Ronaldo because started from the bottom and now he is one on the best player and is one the player that gets payed the most.
in conclusion, people should never loss home and they should be dedicated to be successful. Having hope is very important to succeed, also to succeed people need to be dedicated and determined. In other words, to succeed people need to fail and get back up again and again. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
10BE9BFD7D41 | the British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote, " your character will be what you yourself choose to make it."
I disagree with that because our character formed by influences beyond our control, for example we all leaned whats right or wrong, let's take a babies for example the leaned for people all around them, by seeing what they do for example how they speak, how they walk and how they dress. the only they can not be influences by other people if their parent stop then from doing all those things. take me for example as a baby grow up speaking french because thats that the Language. when I moves to my grandma place she speak Spanish with me so now I speak Spanish, and french I could never speak those languages if I was not influence by those around me.
I get the part that said we choose our own character trait because we all now if something worn or not we can choose to the wrong thing or the right thing it up to us at this point for example some ask you what you what to be in the future now it you choose to make even tho you have a choose there is a 50/50 present you will follow the same path as some in your life that influences you. we all are influences by something or someone an example some teen want to be raper because there is someone around their that one or they want to be a basketball player because the know a basketball player they think he or she is cool. if you disagree with me, ask yourself, how did I become who I'm today? Was I influence by someone? Or did I choose to become who I'm?
I disageer with that "character will be what you yourself choose to make it." | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
10D0BBF44479 | I believe that we have to work for our goals, and also we have to focus in what we want in our life. and that is true that we accomplish more if we are always doing something, because we maintain our mind occupied in our goals or what we want to be, we could accomplish more things if we focus in our goals and don't waste our time doing other stuff.
For example: In our school we can do awesome things with hard work or if we try to concentrate just in our goals. that is get good grade, and graduate and if we keep doing good job in school we can accomplish many great things. like if we get a good career we can get good money and we can enjoy life because we are doing the things that we like not just a simple job.
Another example: Once we decide what our goal is we maintain our mind occupied in our goal and work hard to get there, or to accomplish that we really want, and not matter how hard it is we can do it. because it what we want to be, is what we like, and also is to get a good future and a good life, like if we get a good job we can get good money and we don't have to worried about that and just enjoy life and try to work hard everyday.
Another reason that why I think we have to maintain our self doing something we like. is because we can get trouble to accomplish want we want. like we can do drugs and drink alcohol and all that kind of stuff and I think that is bad for our life because that interrupt our way and we get distracted and loss our path and our faith for our self because for just one mistake we can loss all the think that we had worked for. and I think we have to focus if we really what to be a professional person of if we want to be someone in the future.
In the other hand other people think that inactivity also serve a purpose like we can live our life no matter if we do something, or not like if we don't work hard for our goals its fine, and some people say that what happen in your life is for a reason or like is your destiny. but i think that they are wrong because we can decide what we going to be in our life, that's why God left us the free will to have the opportunity to choose what we going to fight for, and make a decision that going to help us to accomplish whatever we want in this life.
In conclusion I believe that we can accomplish many awesome and great things if we work hard for our goals and maintain our mind doing something good and something that we love like in our jobs, our school, our career etc. also if we maintain our mind occupied in something productive at the same we win something because its help our life and also we have to be careful to don't get distracted for others bad things like drugs, alcohol etc.
I believe we have to take care to our life like a treasure because this life is what God give us and we have to be careful the decision we take and if we get wrong we can learn from our mistake, and I think is wonderful how much may be done if we are doing something that we like. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
10D2D1173D36 | Should schools have partnerships with companies? There are two sides whom chose one of the two alternative choices. Considering the topic is about students pursuing a type of job, its safe to assume that schools should have partnership with companies.
However, the opposition overlooks an important view, namely that since there are students who wouldn't be interested in the slightest, there would be some that are intrigued. If schools didn't have a partnership with a company then students wouldn't have been able to find their future jobs.
Due to this, students would have found a job they like. They wouldn't have any difficulties searching for a job if school had partnership. By working at a job they really like, it'll be easy for them to finish through any work they have.
With the partnership, students, who found an employment they like, can work at their dream job. They'll be able to success through their careers.
In conclusion, schools should have a partnership with a company. That way students can be able to have a job they're good at. | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
10D3A9E5E79E | Whlie some people say that doing something that you mastered help you achive your goals, others say that you should try something more challenging to achive more than your goals.
Achiving more than yhour goals can get you farther in life, it can make your job or what you like to do exciting, and your education expands.
If you think you cannot do it, you are not beliving in yourself.
In order to achive your goals and be happy, you have to belive in yourself first.
Put yourself to do more than what you expected.
Being successful meaning get further in life, have to do with the majority of the world, what's around you, and what you put yourself to do.
In my opinion,
getting further in life is great, not so many people have the privilages to do what you can.
A student once challenged herself by taking chemistry.
At first she did not believe that she can do it but hen she ended up passing the class.
Do not expect less from what you deserve.
Some people do not like their job, so they do a really crappy job.
Making your job exciting is great but, how can you make it fun?
First find something that you like.
Then make a challage every week to be successful, keep in mind that is for the better. Think about it like a game.
Everyone likes games meaning that they would like a challege.
Education has been a big part of ours lives and will always be.
A person can learn from just watching a person characteristics.
There is planty ways a person can learn.
Be ready for any occasion that happens, mentally ready, emotional ready, and even physically ready.
Life is full of surprises and will teach us good and bad things through out the times.
Just be your best and learn from every little thing that happen and will happen.
In conclusion Emerson is right, "do something beyond what you already mastered."
Meaning that you should challage yourself and achive more than your actual goals.
Believe in yourself and be better each day.
In this world everything is like a game but, is to make you better. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
10D5A47D0859 | I disagree whit this statement,because positive attitude is not the solution for all your problems in life there are many problem that you can beat.
when you came to this country and you are alone and dont have help from other people you just cant be positive you dont understand the language and if you are illegal you dont have the many benefit like if you are born here in the united stated you have to hide from the police sometime you can not find a good job because your situation.
2. when you lost someone important in your family and you cant go to se then because you were in other country etc. you can not be positive for this reason i said what i positive attitude is not good of all.
3. if you are from other country some people discriminate you may be they think is easy to be here they dont think about the danger than you have to pass to be here they discriminate you by your skin color and becouse they think you came to this country just to make money and then came back to your country but sometimes you came to suscive and make a knew lefe but many people dont understand that and they trate you so bad and who can have a positive attitude by this reason.
4. yeah! is right there are many thinks to be positive, like your family,frirnds,girfriend have a good jod, graduate from high school is other reason to ve happy and positive but sometime you just can be positive.
some time when you feel bad and you have a bad economic situation youcant caund whit your friendsbecouse they tell you that tney can help you becouse they dont have the resources but some of then are lyan and if you know it you fell like their are playing whit you and that is not a reason to be positive.
so my point is that you can be all the positive you can but sometime bad thinks happens like youare immigrant and you can se your family and that make you be negative. | 3 | 2 | 2 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
10D60ACB3E5D | Because the educators say, what the summer vacation sound too long and the ecucators, wants to what the summer break was short ever. and the students no retain the information about that in the wich is easy for they to know that.
Is similar to winter break because is long,
My opinion is what the educators too should be enjoy the summer vacation and the equal what the students but for me is good what the students have long summer vacation for what enjoyed, and don't me dislike what the summer break only has
3-4 week that should be what have how the others break summer, and winter.
Much students think what the summer vacation it's ok like that because when the vacation over to drop off of enjoy.
The educators have almost 1 year for teaching a the students when the vacatios over;
Educators too should be enjoy the summer vacation because they are too a break, to relast.
The Reasons why news: The students enjoy example:If I no have summer vacation me to feel tense for to have much working about the school. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 3 |
10DA9316D02D | This program helps students to learn new things,helps older students to mature of teaching and taking it seriously,and helps younger students to socialize with new people and to communicate,and prepares the older students to prepare lessons and teach and be more organized,it can also help older and younger students to learn new different skills and learn different ways.
The first best thing about having programs for younger and older students is for the younger students can learn new things. I think it's best to teach young people to learn new things because it can prepare them in the future. I think that the program can help the younger students for they can learn interesting new things and for they can decide what they want to be in the future. If the younger students get help from the older students to learn new things it's good because for they can use that information and teach other kids what they have learn from the older students. I think this program can help many other young students to learn new things from the older students because it's a better way for the students for can use what they have learn and use it for something for their future life like for example math they can use that for paying taxes and bills I think that this program can help students learn new things.
The second, thing that is good about this program,is the older kids can mature from teaching younger students and learn how to be more thinkable about what to teach and how to teach something. I think that this program is good because the older student learn how to focus more on what they are able to teach the younger students. The reason why I think the program is a good learning resource is because when the older students know more things than the younger students they can decide what do they need help on learning what should I teach them and how do I teach the subject to them so it makes the older students more focus to how to know how teach a younger students and the best way to help them. It helps older students because they can think in a better way and to make them feel more grown up teaching someone that is younger than them. This program helps older students because it makes them think more harder and it also teaches the older students how to think more ideas and thin what happens if they teach that, or well this lesson help them, and makes them ask questions to themselves.
The third reason, how this program can help younger students, is because the younger students can communicate more to new people they don't know. I think that this program helps younger students to communicate more is because if they talk to more new people that are helping them they well be less shy and it well make it less difficult for them to be shy to talking to someone new. I think that this program helps younger student to learn better to communicate is because they can get more confidence, and not be scared to talk in front of someone new and different. I think that this program dose help younger students with communication because when they talk to someone new they can feel more comfortable talking to more people and be more social. This program helps younger people to communicate because when they talk to someone it can help them to be less scared to like present projects and talk to a crowd.
The fourth reason, why this program helps older students to prepare for lessons and be like a more organized,thinkable person. I think that this program dose help older students be more organized is because they think what they are gonna teach them and what the younger students are struggling on. I think that this program dose help a lot of certain older students be organized because they think what time,and day,where they are gonna teach the lessons to the younger students. I think that this program dose really help the older students to be organized cause it makes them more prepare what they are gonna teach and how they are gonna teach it so basically, the older students think were to put what. Why I think that this program dose help older students to be more organized because they plan everything in order.
The last,reason why I think this program is great is because it helps both younger and older students to help each other and to improve there learning skills. I think this program dose help both young and older students because if they all work together and help each other it can make a difference on helping and making people learn in a way certain way an easier way. I think that this program dose help younger and older students cause they can both share their learning skills how they learn things and shares ideas. I think this program helps because all the younger students and older students teach each other things and help them get better at something they are having trouble at doing. I think this program dose help cause it helps every students to learn a easy way to learn in different ways like flashcards,reading something over and over again,watching turturiols videos on how to do a equation or math so this program helps to find the best skill for you. It helps for all the students for they can learn faster and easier and help others find their best learning skill to focus on what they are learning.
It helps both older students and younger students to improve there learning skills and it's a good program to learn new interesting things to help students for the future. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
10DF0ACB336C | There is one place I would like to visit is Generic_City because that is a beautiful country there is really great people. At night is really beautiful if you live in a apartment you can see how beautiful it is when i'm bigger i'm going to Generic_City with my girl because I love that country and it's a awesome country. The food there is really good and at night you can go in the water with someone it's really fun.
The boats are big and small you can ride them and you can relax. I don;t know how much you have to play to ride them all I know is that they are really nice to ride. And I want to go and get on the Eiffel it's really high up and you can see everything. At night the Eiffel it lights up and it;s really cool because you can see it from ever were because it's really high up.
Theres and elevator do that you can go really high in the Eiffel you my take some time because it's really high and there my be going a lot of people so you have to take an other ride. For me it's better to look at night because of the lights it's really cool. At day time it nice but it dose't have the lights so I like it when it's night time. But the thing I don't like about night time it's that you can go but in the elevator.
The food is really good they eat a lot of things they eat bread at any time of day. They have cafe's there are really good. But Paris is really different form a lot of country's. They have really good chafes that make really good food that you are going to love. They have awesome food. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
10E11F30F47C | Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others. In the world people's are using technology in many different away. Some people used technology in their business. And others are using technology to contact with other people who are live different country. However children are use technology for fun. Technology has the limitation of human contact due to the use of technology had positive effects on people's lives.
Technology are use for business their daily lives. Although people's are use technology for helping them to solve the problem. For instance when people have meeting, and they do not know what time is meeting. That time they can use technology to send the email to the boss. Also teacher are use the technology everyday for many reasons. For example to great student test, and email other's teacher etc. In addition some time in business people are used technology person reasons. For example talked to they friend and family. Also some parent live they children at home, and they are use technology to speak to they children.
People's are used technology to contact other people who are live different country. People's are move to different country because of money and have good life. So they have to use technology to talk with they family. Some time people's are used technology different away to contact they family. For example text, email, call, and messages. Also many people are do not go home long time they live in different country. For those people's technology is very imperative to communication with they family.
Children are use technology for fun. Most of the time children are played games. Also children like to watch the movie with they friends. But some people are do not agree with me. Because they think the technology are wishing of time. Also people's said that technology is bad for children because some time they use for bad reasons. But I think technology are helping children to learn more from the technology.
In conclusion technology are allows people to communication to each other. Has a human I think technology are helpful for our community to have positive effects on people's. In addition people has technology around the world. Also the technology helped people complete many different tasks. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 3 |
10ECA491D66C | I disagree that someone can change you. First of all nobody can change the person you are from the beggining. Second of all no body can tell you how to be or what to do either even if your married or single. Third of all you have to be who you are you don't need to pleasure no body in this world but yourself. You have to be proud for who you are and what you are doing in order to be doing good in your ways of life.
To begin with I disagree that someone could change. One because that's for you to decide if you wanna be the way you want to be. You can't change for anybody to accomplish whatever you want. If you want to change you'll have to change on you know nobody can that for you.
For example when I was a freshmen in high school I used to like skipping my classes all the time. I never went to my classes I liked being around my friends most of the time. My grades drops from 100 to 50 real fast. I didn't realize friends can make you go the down road. I felt like I did not care in the moment but then I realized all those friends were not real friends at the end.
Nobody is going to help you get you stuff together, your grades, your education. I believe you have to always be your self in order to progress and success in your own life.
Secondly people say that when you get married your suppose to be someone else that your suppose to cook at all times, do laundry for you partner and yourself, I believe that is not correct. I believe that you can still be who you are even if your with someone or not. You don't nessecarly have to be someone your not in order to make others happy. Your friends, your boyfriend or girlfriend are not going to give you a High school diploma, an apartment, a car, and food. You have to get that on your own you have to be happy the way you are. If you are a lazy person, crazy person, dramatic person, you can be how ever you want to be. You do not have to change to make the rest happy.
For example I do not like being around friends anymore, I do not like drama at all that is just me I learned from my experience that no body is going to be there for you on your rough times and it is not worth changing for no body ever.
Lastly I believe you have to be who you are and be yourself in order to success and follow your goals. Being your self is one of the best things there could be. You do not need to care if someone judges you. You do not need to be worried about anything but trying to accomplish your goals, your dreams and a better life style. You have to have a good character in order to achieve everything you want and especially being positive to yourself. Never let others try to change who you are or what you want to be always go by what you want and do not question your self. You have to be happy by the way you are and not think about how the rest want to see you.
For example when I used to skip class in freshmen year in high school my friends wanted me to be like them they wanted me to skip at all times and just hang out in them mall or park. I realized one day I want to get somewhere in life I want to graduate on time, I want to have a good job, I want something different for my self. I realized I was doing my self wrong so I stop completly and started of my sophomore year fresh and different. I began to see the difference. My friends thought I changed and I did because I did not want to stay back with them I wanted to move on forward with my self and goals I had. This was my experience and ever since I realized being your self is a big worth anyone has.
This is my opinion on why I disagree that you do not need to change for anybody. You always have to remain being the way you are and never let no one change the character you are just to make them feel happy. Even if you are with friends, boyfriend or girlfriend you do not have to change the way you are for them. Always be proud of the person you are too. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 |
10F5D7C3719C | Some people shose for a four work week model, should be this one be taken as practice at schools. In this option there are many people who think this is a benefit to conserve energy in whatever place.
I think that this practice could be disadvantage because it will be two more hours of work, between longer day , the estudents will be using more energy in those ten hours every day.
Then, we have to use more resources at school for the students be working in class those resources could be naturals, we could be wasting many papers,water when we are in the school and we have to make progress of this kind of resources.
Also, ten hours each day we will be wasting resources as electricity every class could be using computers,monitors,tablets, and we have to find a way how to save this resources at school.
In conclusion all of this are my reasons and explanation by this model of how to conserve energy and resources at schools. | 3 | 2.5 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 |
112AA24D20BC | Some years ago before my uncle became a doctor, I saw how he was struggling with anxiety attacks of too much studying time at medical school, but he noticed that he needed to do different activities to get distracted a little bit and at the same time get rid of all the stress. Every student participating at least in one extracurricular activity is a really good idea because they could do sports, get in book clubs or help around doing community service. If all the students would do extra activities , they're lives could be really different and better in many ways with variations of experiences and less stress.
Students doing any sports would be really helpful for their health. Mostly every student at school is seating on a chair for hours and at home they are probably just also seating on the couch for more hours . A human body needs to move and do some exercise to have a good health. Sports are really a good ting that makes your body feel or have some changes just like on teens they're metabolism makes them get taller or develop their bodies. Even if the students do just 20 minutes a day stills helpful for them.
Book clubs are something really interesting and fun for students to do. Do you ever just feel like your mind needs a break? Well books are the best option as a break , they take you to many different places around the world even places that dont even exist without moving from anywhere you are at. You can find new adventures, drama, romance and some things you never experienced; just like transferring your mind to another world, and distracting you from your regular life. Making you have and enjoy some good time without going somewhere. In the book clubs you can discuss with people about all those thoughts you have about what you just read, and could also find someone that thinks the exact same things as you.
Doing community service not only helps others, it also helps you! You might be asking yourself right now how? Well, helping your community it's teaching you as a student how important cooperation is , helping others brings you happiness, and that feeling of how responsible you are becoming. Also, community service helps students a lot with credits for an advanced diploma or even a scholarship for college. If you never have helped your community thinking is nothing fun, you should consider it as a extracurricular activity that you can do.
Every student should do an extracurricular activity after schools so theyre body and mind can have an productive break. Any type of activity helps you and relax's you when need a break. Choose something to do that you like and after school finishes then do everything you can in that time. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
113436EC45E2 | The philosopher Albert Schweitzer thought the example is not important and is not the main thing to influencing others, it is the only thing. Now the society thing different around the world many persons like the parents thing they need to give a good example their sons. the teacher need to be good example from their students at the school. Famous people like their fans sometimes they are under 12 ages. if the persons did not given to the new generation good example they can not be influencing good things in them.
The parents they are the best example for their sons, and daughter at home. Because at home sometimes is the first school for our child that can has, there we learn speak, walk, and who clothing you. Example: if her father is a drunk, and smoker what is a example him given to his sons. That would by influencing in her sons and can destroy the future of them. This situation happen in many family and children start to have problem with the authority. And is the bad example that their parents given to them . And is no only the things the parents give to her sons nevertheless they need more then a example, more then things like expensive clothes. and shoe many of them they need a parents that care of them.
The teacher after the father they are so important to give a example of respect, how can be responsible with our homework they challenge us , with no matter the obstacle is front of us we can do it many of the teacher support you in the situation of the school but they teach us who can we do our work when be adults and they start to explain many thinks that you dont know example: if you do something wrong they help us to find a situation like i math and they do not say bad thinks when you do something wrong because they respect you but we like a students need to do it too. And with this attitude is like a teacher can influencing in a student with the respect.
Leader is person that is caretaker of a group of people it is in the school, in a church in many places we can find one. This one example of who can be influences of a movement like in the church that person need to be example of his people than the people follow him or she. Example: always a leader need to support the people no the people to him. Because the leader teach them how can be a good leader and him give example of that like a good person,good attitude, friendly. etc. And with his example this is the person can influence the other person without things and inspire more person that one day them teach another
In conclusion, to be a examples is the main thing to be a influence in the world and any areas. i desaggres because i think for influence to another persons. So your must be the best example you can because one they more then one person will fallow your steps. Like on my neighborhood or community helped who needed one day on person can do the same thing for anothers. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
113B1543C433 | If School programs offer
Student to graduate early instead of waiting the four year to graduate. Graduating a year earlier would be a great thing for student to do because there are people who are trying to manage work and school but it's difficult for some people because they can't do both, If they work and they come late after work and the next morning they wake up tired from work that they are tired to go to school and it makes it difficult to go to work and then go to school.
A reason why I feel students should graduate early is because if they graduate early they can go to college, and if college allows them to choose their hours they can decide on what time they can go to college or the days.
It could also depend on what you want to do career wise.
If they allow that you can work and go to college and it would make it easier for you and you won't feel tired after college to go to work.
For example,My mom graduated early and she was able to work and and go to college as well.
Another reason is that if you go to high school and work its difficult because you have to worry about school and work, sometimes thats a problem because when you come late from work and in the morning when you have to go into school your tired and you dont wanna go to school and your tired and you can't concentrate in school but I feel like when your in college you can choose your time and date and it makes it easier for you.
For Example, I have a friend who works and goes to school to and he tells me its difficult for him to manage school and work and sometimes hes even tired to go to school. Even when hes at school hes tired and can't do any of his work because hes tired and its hard for him to concentrate.
The last reason is if people were to graduate a year earlier from high school. They can also go to college and depending on on what they want in their career, they could also graduate college early and start you career early
For Example, My Uncle graduated High school earlier and he also graduated college which made it easier for him to start his own business and it really helped him out in life and hes really happy because he graduated early.
If you choose to graduate and do classes in the summer you would feel accomplished and you would feel relief you wont have to be there for 4 years and only 3 years.
If you finish early you can have time for work and college and also you get start your career early and you would feel happy with what you have accomplished. | 2.5 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
11402548A471 | Does true self-esteem come from praise or does it come from achievement?
True self-esteem comes from praise because it can be motivating to students,it helps them want to learn more, and it helps the student to achieve any goal even if the work is not the students effort.
one reason why motivation can help a student build self-esteem is because when you feel that you're not able to do something, but if you have someone who's there with you, you are motivated to keep on going, to keep trying harder until you achieve the goal that you want.
For example, the first time that I took the W!SE test I didn't pass the firs time and I was close to pass, but I had my mom who told "don't worry you're smart and I know that you will pass the second time" and those words motivated me and it helped me to studied more and then when I took the test the second time I passed. Therefore, motivation can help students to build self-esteem and to achieve any goal.
Another reason why praising students can help build self-esteem on them is that they may want to learn more if they got someone who's always supporting then and help them to keep trying, for example, when I was in elementary school I used to get really bad grades, but I've always had my mom who has always supported me in anything and she told me that I could get better grades because I was smart to achieve any goal and it helped me to keep learning and I was motivated to get better grades, in middle school I started to get good grades and now in high school I've got better grades than I used to get in middle school, therefore, praising students helps to build self-esteem on them and it help them to want to keep learning more.
In addition, praising students can help them to achieve any goal even if the work is not the students best effort, it helps them to keep trying harder even if things don't go well and it helps them to never give up.
For example, English is not my first language and It was hard for me when I came to America because I couldn't understand anything, I couldn't communicate with other people who didn't spoke the same language as me. When I first came to America I didn't like to speak English because it was hard for me to pronounce each word, but I had to learn English to communicate with other people.
I used to cry because I couldn't understand anything, I couldn't even say a word in English, but I had people who always told me not to worry because I was smart and that I was going to learn English that really helped me to build self-esteem on me, I don't speak English perfectly, but now I'm able to understand and to communicate with other people.
Therefore, it is important that we got people who are there to support us and to motivate us to keep trying hard no matter how hard it is or how hard it looks.
Praising students builds self-esteem on them, because that gives them motivation to keep trying hard to achieve any goal, it motivates them to keep on going and to learn more each day, with people who motivates students, it does not matter how hard things are, they just want someone who is there to support them in anything. There are some students who don't like giving up, but sometimes if there is nobody who helps them to keep going they will stop trying, because they need motivation, they need someone who is there whenever they need them.
My mom had always supported me and I know that she always be there for me, she will always motivate me, that builds self-esteem on me because I know that I have someone who will always support me and that helps me to keep trying harder and to never give up. If we got people who praise students, then they're going to build self-esteem on them. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 |
11598C88FBA4 | Generic_Name never loss the enthusiasm should Success consists of going form failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm? Some people have a hard life more when they trying to be better because some of them feel like they are failure by not having a good jod, or by living in a bad place.
Firts, for some peolpe is hard to find a good jod that they can really appreciate be good finalcially. To be sure that they can have evething they want for life because soometimes people try get somenthing but they can't. It's better to force their self to get whta they really want. For example if tey trying to go out they have to make sure they dont have anydebitos they having pay yet.
Second, some peolpe that livi in a bad place is depend by the econom. Some of them says they loss the enthusiasm by not having a good palce.
Thinking about pleople that really do thinks in live to get a good life is depend on they record. For example the people that go out and find hte way to move from they old life they had to take alot of choice. Or have making alot of bad choises to get something they do have now.
For the people that have evething is more easy to do the things they have i their mind.
On the way tha they can doevething they like or they want. but the enthusiasm they will have will be alot of better them what others can have. In conclusion everyone have a diferent way of life that they have to be grateful for everething. For others is a good way they have to tell then that they alway have to keep they enthusiasm up and never lose. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2 |
1170D6863F27 | Is homework club good. Do you agree or degree. homework club is good for the people how are failing and you can do your home work at homework club. I agree that home work club is good for are school. Do you like seeing your kids failing there classes your in luck I will tell the positive of having a homework club for your students how are failing and, I will tell you the native of having a homework club. If you are thinking about how munch it cost to have a homework club don't worry about how it cost you should only think about what happens if you do get a homework club.
I agree that homework club is good therefore all the students how go to home work club are getting good grades. It been proven by smart people that people how go to home work club get better grades then others students. The students can do homework in home work club and ask for help by the teacher.
If you are a teacher how is reading this what are your opinion about homework club. A teacher probably want what good for there students and they want to work after school with them.
ones I went to homework club I got help by the teacher and she help me to understand the subject that we were working on. Then the next day I went again to the homework club to study for the test that I have the next day.
I took the the test, when i got the test back I got a 100% on the test, ever since that day I went to homework club every day. The only bad thing you should worry is what if the students are only going there to talk with there friend after school.
I think that homework club should be add to every school so they can improve there school. When then other school how good your school is doing they are going to copy what your doing then the further of the students will be good so they can get good job and improve the world some way or another. The county will look at your shool and will give you more mony then you can improve the homework club and make your school better.
Therefore homework club is good for the students and I will give you a advice. You need to have a homework club for your school so they will have a opportunely to pass there classes. If you do not a agree about having homework club for your students. If you do put homework club in your school you will see the improvements in your school like grades and, student beaver. I hope you add a homework come for are school so we can improve are grads and, do better in are classes. | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
11DD0B26B584 | Although some say schools should not offer classes online because when students are out of school someone else could be doing the work for them and they will not be learning anything, actually schools should offer classes online because most of the students who go to schools have to work and they drop out of school to work and taking classes online would help them be educated at the same time they're working.
Those who believe schools should offer classes online have their reasons because research shows that 80% of the students that go to high school work after school. They get home late and they have to do homework, and they go to bed too late and having to wake up at least at 7 am to go school it's hard. They are falling asleep in class and they don't want to do any work. Taking classes online helps because they can take them at anytime.
Also, some students have to walk to get to school. In winter they have to suffer all the cold weather and that's what make them sick. Last year I saw a student who broke his arm cause it was snowing and the sidewalk was really slippery,and I also saw a guy who got beat up by a group of guys on the street he was on his way home,and if they can take classes online they would not have to walk to school, and those situations wouldn't happen.
In addition, research shows that 70% of the students that have attended classes online have been successful which means taking classes online really helps students. They can rest more at home and they don't have to wake up early every morning.
In conclusion,schools should provide classes online because colleges,universities also provide them and most of the people who have taken them have been successful from their classes. That is the best thing schools could do for the students. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 |
11E5C01714C5 | Dear Generic_Name,
Our school gave opportunity to us, students, that will allow us to explore occupation through your internship. Although, some people may say that it will just be a waste of time for students but for me its not. As a student i don't want to miss any opportunity given to me that will help me to be more prepared for the future, give me more experience, and lead me to success.
Firstly, this internship will help me be prepared more for the future. Since I'm still young I still haven't made up my mind on what kind of job i wanted to have, so through this internship i will have the chance to explore the occupations that i can get and make up my mind and have a decision. Therefore, this internship will help me on being ready for the future.
Secondly, this internship will give me more experience. Experience is great way for learning and discovering new things. There's this saying that "You will never know until you try". For example, my friend hated the thought of her dancing but when one of our teachers asked us to dance, she discovered that she was really good at dancing. Through this internship i may discover things that never really crossed my mind but actually good at it.
Thirdly, this internship will help me lead to success. This internship will help me plan for my future and not just do anything that will cross my mind. After this internship i already know what job i should get, know what to do and what to expect, and be more confident and more prepared. This internship will lead me to success because it will help me boost up my confidence and help me do better on my future job.
If i were to be selected i will do my best and everything i can for this internship because i don't wan to miss the chance of being prepared for the future, get more experience, and most importantly will lead me to success. | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
11E9348F5072 | In this prompt we are going to talk,and choose if we accomplish more by doing more things in the world,or does inactivity also serve a purpose or not. We all have a different opinion when it comes to things like this choosing between something different. Well we actually do accomplish more if we do more things for an example say someone wants to become a doctor we go to collage, we do things,and we learn, after doing all that we all accomplish something because we all did something to succeed what we love. Therefore a reason why doing more makes a person accomplish something is because doing more,and learning more teaches someone things they never learned before. So by that we mean that once a person learns something they have never done before they start loving it and start doing it. Other reasons and examples why doing more is better is because when the person does more they have all the energy to do it which is honestly a good thing because once a person learns something that person just wants to go to collage,graduate, and succeed which is something we all want. Here is an example why it is that we study a lot and try to learn things it is because we want to grow up,succeed on what we love doing,and also to accomplish new things we have always wanted to try. When you start learning new things,and get the hang of it all everything will just become easier for someone,and also things they always wanted to do will just become easier for that person too. Another thing is that when we keep doing things it will just be done faster like it said in the prompt something Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle. It is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." which is honestly facts we do get things done faster if we just keep doing it, if we just keep trying without stopping, and i mean yes taking breaks on important things is good because we all do need breaks at some point to be honest but also getting things done is better and once someone gets things done they feel really proud of themselves, all of us do because it is a good feeling to finish things that were hard,and stressful. Another good feeling is having nothing to do when you are accomplishing things,and succeeding too. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 4 |
1202062A4FA5 | Just like some businesses schools should adopted a four day school week with each day consisting of ten hours by making the school day two hours longer. To conserve energy and resources some businesses have adapted a four day work week with each day consisting of ten hours. Should this school follow this model by extending the school day two hours? After considering the benefits and disadvantages to a four day school week. Some believe that changing the school week to only four days is a bad idea because less school days means most work is not done and students will have extra time they don't need. Other people think a four day school week is an effective way of conserving students energy while keeping the same passe. People are still arguing about this issue. Schools should adopted a four day work week because students will be productive, It is healthy especially for students that work and have time for family and friends.
Four days of school week help students to be productive. To be productive you need two things energy and motivation. Most students have the motivation to work but they lake the energy therefor they need four day school week. By extending the school day two hours we can achieve the same amount of work by working only four days. For example one school day is consists of for classes and one class is one hour and forty five minuet long. When we extend the school day two hours long for four days it covers the same time. That helps us to use own time efficiently and increase productivity in the school.
Learning four days week also help students to be healthy specially for those who work on the regular days or weekends. People need enough amount of energy to get through the day without fatigue. The only natural and healthy way of get ride of fatigue is sleep. Many scientific studies says "Kids and Teenagers need at list 9 hours of sleep!" having four day of school day a week gives students one extra day of rest. It makes a big different and very important for students health.
The final reason we need a four day school week day is to give students time with there parents and friends. parents and students want to spent quality time together but they are not able to because some parents work on the weekends or the students work on weekends. Four days school week is the best solution to this problem. It gives students the attention that they need form there parents and spend some time with there friends.
If we can change the old school system by this new and effective four day school week days It will be beneficial in many ways not just for students but for teachers and parents. Students will be productive, health and they will have more time to spent with there family and friends. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 |
1204D17C682A | To conserve energy the students do not Should fallow that policy, because is going to be much stress for the students work ten hours per day. Some students would be affected by the change. Students that work after school are going to be affected by the change. and that also will affected the income that the students have to help their parents, if the students work less hours their income would be affected.
Also students help their parents taking care of their sibling after school, some times also students help their parents at home as clean the floor, wash dishes, make dinner and time for their hobbies, made the life of the students more easy at schools and at home.
students that like to do sports after school as soccer, fotbool, basquelbal, or tennis, some just wants to have a little time of peace by themselves as reading or walking alone those little thing is what a student can miss but if teachers decide to extended the schools to hours late, students also are going to work the same amount of time the only different is that they have to work to hour more each day to complete the forty hours work for week, and those two hours would private students to do what they like to do and make the life more happy.
considering the idea of work after schools some students need that income to help parents bring food over the table this is what some of the mothers do time ago, look the possibility of help their parents by working a little part time and getting food for their tables, always think that those mothers are heroes that god put aver the earth to do the best they can for help their parents, amazing some students already have the opportunity of study because their parents already pay the price of work hard and now we have the opportunity of have a better future. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 | 2.5 |
120FE0B76D5C | Imagine if you are in school and they decide to change to a four days of school, but they also will extend the school day two hours. your parents get angry because is the closest school you have and it's fifty minutes away from home. what would you do if your house is to far away? school should change to a four days school because students who live far away will get tired, the students who work after school will lose their jobs, and will not have enough time to spend with their family. these changes will bring problems for these students and I will tell you why.
First: Students who live far away will get tired. these students will not have enough time to do their homework because of the time they spend in their journey back to home. This may be a problem for the students who want to stay after school. they will be not able to do it because of the time. In my case i'm tired because I don't have the enough time to sleep. scientist say that students might sleep for nine hours, but I can't because of the time I spend working after school.
Second: These new changes will bring problems for the students who work after school. They may lose their jobs because they can't be on time. The students who live by their own will not have the money to pay for the things they need in order to graduate. 50% is the percentage of students, who work after school and they will get in serious problems if the school makes these changes. They will get bad grades, tired, and also this can make a person to think about doing bad things such as robbery or drugs.
Finally; These students will not have the time to spend with their parents. parents enjoy spending their free time in the afternoon, but this is a problem because of the four days of school. student do not have the time for their parents, because they arrive home late. these students will feel they are alone without any support. because os the amount of time the have with their families.
Some students say it is a great idea to change to a four days of school. but they are wrong because of the students who live far away, it will be hard to finish their studies.
In conclusion school should not change to a four days to because students will get tired, lose their jobs and will not have the time to enjoy with their family. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 4 |
1214E4605B0C | Should the school break system be change to 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break , and a week off in the spring. Some educator feel that the summer break is to long and students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. Others argue that summer break is for students to take a mid break and stop think about school. Schools should not change the break system, because many students and parents had already planed,what they would do during the summer, and because many students work, and by changing the break system it could affect them, and because summer break is for students to relax, get a mid break and stop worrying about school.
The school break system should not be change to 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the the spring, because many students work during the summer and many jobs do not gives students the opportunity to work only a few week or days,they want students work a lest two months so they can be able to give them the jobs, otherwise they would give the jobs to peoples that can stay more time with them. For example I work during the summer, and the company that I work with, only gives jobs to persons how agree to stay more than two months with them, if the school system change, this clear is going to affect me, because I going to lose my job and it would be difficult for me, to find another job during the break, because most of the jobs do not want people, how just going to stay in the company for a few days or weeks.
The school break system should not be change , because students and parents have already planed , where they going to go, and what they going do, and if the school change the brake system, most of the plants that they had already made it, are going to be destroy . for example my bother and my parent visit my grandparents every single year and if the school break system change this could be a problem because they would have to come back more soon, and probably they may not go.
The school break system should not be change, because students have the right to have a long break and stop think about all those worksheet,quizzes, and tests that ,they had already done during the school period,summer break should be a time to relax spent time with family and friends and not a time for be think and worry about school.
Considering all this factors that I just talk about, I clear believe summer break, should stay the way it's, because it has being working like that for many year. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
1247CB034EF7 | Wouldnt you want to have time and do your homework after school so you wouldnt have to do it later?
If you were to go after school and do your homework so you wouldnt do it later you would have much more time to do things. You can go outside and hangout with friends without any concern about doing projects or homework.
Also if you do your homework you can have time to go study for a test or, and you can study to take a retake test or quiz and bring your grade up.
And if you do your homework after school you can have massive time to relax.
You can lay down and take a little nap or play on your phone with friends, and you can take a little walk or play in the playground and you will not have a worry in the world.
And finally you can do community service hours for the school. Community service hours can help you pass the year and gives you time to work hard and maybe have fun with some friends of yours, and you can have fun even if you are walking a dog or watching someones cat you wouldnt have to worry about school work at all.
In Conclusion, Doing your homework after school is fantastic because you wont have any worries, and you will have time to do more work like a project or a test, and also you will can relax and take nap or take a calm walk, and you can do a little community service hours. | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 |
125C1167A84A | Mrs. Generic_Name i think changing the school menu is a very bad idea because the students will not have many choices of what they wanna eat in the cafeteria. so the student wouldnt get to eat what they like or of their favorite choice what the student usually get when they are in the cafeteria. and the students wouldnt be happy about changing the school menu and most student would go to school and not eat lunch and go home with their stomach empty.
so Generic_Name i would not recommend not changing the school menu because. the student would not be very happy at school and if the school menu changes. mostly the student would will bring their own lunch from home and bring it in to the cafeteria and the school lunch food would be wasting . because the students wouldnt eat the school lunch food because majorly the student are bring their own lunch. which its not a very bad idea because students can bring their own lunch and they will not be starving to death with out skipping lunch and going going home with their stomach full instead of empty which it is a good thing. so i think not changing the school menu is a very good idea because friend and i can have free choices of what i like to eat and what the whole school would like to eat or bring the Owen lunch to school which i think it a very good idea because if i had the freedom to to bring my own lunch or choice in the cafeteria. i would eat very well and i wont have an empty stomach the whole entered day in school. and i will not be sleepy for the rest of the day and the few class i have at the end of the day.
i think sum of the students will do the same thing as me if we all eat very good and very well in school in the cafeteria and it will be nice.
Mrs. Generic_Name i think that most student would not like to have a healthier school lunch menu becuase no student usaly get school lunch in school so the students usaly bring in their own school lunch and which its a very good go idea because the student can bring what they like to eat during lunch time .and if you change the school lunch menu then the student wouldnt get school lunch any more. and if the whole school didnt jget the school lunch any more because they dont like the new school lunch menu. it because no one like to eat very healthy at school and maybe if the whole school didnt get lunch and every single student in Generic_School pack their own lunch with its a bad sin becuse all the food would be wasting . so mrs Generic_Name pelase dont change the school lunch menu becuase most student wouldnt be happy if the school lunch menu changes and every every student in Generic_School would be so happy and glad if you didnt change the school lunch mean. | 2 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 |
125CD13D5FA4 | Splash splash there I was drowning when the life guard saved me but that was a long time ago. in that situation having the skill of swimming would've been good but at the time I was young. Everyone has a talent or a skill? do you have a talent or skill that you have practice for or worked so hard for that skill? Well one of my strongest skills is swimming
You know not everyone can swim right well now I can unlike the time I was drowning well from that experience I have learned not to jump in the deep side of the pool. Well I can swim and an important talent to have or else you will probably end up like me but swimming is one of my talents I love swimming and i'm good at it and i learned to swim by myself.
Although talents and skills are nice to have but some times you just have to work for them like if you want a skill that requires a lot of effort then you have to prepare yourself. Practice and practice it makes perfect trust me thats why every one says it, because its true and thats why i'm such a strong swimmer. Every time that I went to a pool or river to have fun with my family I always tried swimming failed a lot but every time I fell I would force myself to get up and try once more.
takes a lot of work and money to be a good swimmer. In the summer I always begged my mom to go to the pool sometimes she took me and sometimes not but for the times that we went I put all my effort into it. Effort, effort is a big part of obtaining a skill. It all just depends on your part of the process. The process mite be long or the process mite be short it all depends .
in conclusion every one has a talent or skill. skills and talents take time, practice, and effort, what talents and skills do you have and if you dont like the skills and talents that you already have learn anther one it doesnt take much. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
125E7C6E0D31 | Ha ha ha that the sound of happy children playing video games. Video games are what everyone is playing even in their 30's you will still see them playing. Are video games really that fun for people in their 30's.
Why do they find This Activity Enjoyable.
First, Why do kids find playing video games exciting. Do they believe it's exciting and invigorating to play video games. Video games are exciting to kids because of the action danger and excitement they get each time they play a video game. Are video games a stress reliever for stressed kids and adults. Some video games can be frustrating, but some are relaxing and soothing for the mind like Tetris and Pokemon.
Second, There are many video games in the world that people like to play like Fortnite, League Of Legends, Roblox and more. Kids play games cause of how fun it is. Kids like to play video games like a pack of wolves looking for food. Kids use their senses when playing it's like their getting a mind workout while playing a video games and they just don't know it. adult and kids use 3 senses when playing video games hearing( listening) touch( ability to play) sight (looking around). They use their other senses when eating and smell the food.
Third, Video Games has a downside to adults and kids. They ruin your eye sight if you stare at them for a long period of time. They can make your attention span really slow. Makes you shy of the outside world and of other people. There are risks when having fun.
Lastly, Kids enjoy playing video games cause it video games they don't care about the consequences that come with playing them. Adults Understand the reason and they know it will come back for them in the future but they don't care. There are all types of reasons video games are fun and bad but to kids and adults it just a way to have fun. Why do you think kids and adults play video games. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 |
126555810C31 | An great author, Ralph Waldo Emerson, once wrote, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." Based on my experiences, I agree with Mr. Emerson. Because in order for a person to grow, that person will have to do an certen task, to help that person reach that goal or goals. There are difference things a person can grow in like: school, career, and hobbies.
In school a person learned skills to help a person in the further such as, wrighting, reading, vocabulary, history, and math etc. A person will learned, how to talk to other people, and how to act, by making friend. Also in school like, community collage, can help a person can also developing jobs skills, for further career.
Another thing you can grow in, is careers. A person can grow in their career by going up their working rank I am currently working at Searchs and I am the supervisor their. At first, I got hired as a cashier. It took me a while, but I got my way up there.
Hobbies is another thing you can grow in. People can learning and practicing skills to help them up prove their's hobbies. One of my many hobbies, is drawing. When I was six, I can only draw sticks finger. I have taken many art classes to help me develop my drawing skills. Now I can draw a human with details.
Going above in beyond, what you have mastered can help you with, learning a new skill, going up the jobs rank, or developing a skills for a hobbies. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
1271A68BDC00 | Would you want to spend your day Indoors? I don't think so! There are many ways to spend your day outdoors, for example, excercise with your friends. Many people likes to workout outdoors because It's calming and It makes you less stressful. Just imagine hearing the birds chirping and seeing the butterflies, Isn't that something you'd enjoy?
You can also make a lemonade stand! Everyone loves lemonade, especially In the hot! Putting up a lemonade stand isn't hard. It literally takes 10 minutes or so to put one up. Kids enjoy doing this because they have something fun to do and not lay down on the couch having nothing to do ;However, you're just not giving people lemonade but you're also getting money!
Do you like going to the pool? I think everyone does! Another way you can spend your day outdoors Is going to the pool. Going to the pool is somewhere everyone goes everyday because you can relax on a floaty, play tag In the pool and you can also try new things In the pool that you thought you could never do!
Walking around the neighborhood and listening to music Is also teenagers enjoy doing because they can get to know the area better and It can set their minds off of the things.
Going to the park Is where children enjoy because they can play hide and seek, tag or play around. Teenagers also enjoy going because they can go to read a book or have a picnic! Picnics are fun because you get to talk about stuff with your friends and eat at the same time!
These are some fun ways you can enjoy your time outdoors and not watch Television everyday! | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
1274667FF6E3 | Generic_Name
Greetings Generic_Name I'am writing this letter to you, to let you know that am very interested on going to visit and learning more about your dealership. For the future am planing on pursuing the Auto tech field. In the past I worked at a Mc Donald's. At the moment am a high school student who is involved in the Auto tech classes, I'm also a member of the engine building team. When I first came to this the U.S I started working with my brother on landscaping, under a lot of pressure.
When I first started working at Mc Donald's I didn't know a lot about how to treat costumers. With in the time I experience multiple occasions in which I had to be patient and listen to the costumers. I had to learn how to work with different people and different personalities. Thanks to the opportunity Mc Donald's gave to work there I gain a lot of knowledge on treating costumers. Now I can say that am confident and willing to work with others and help costumers.
At the moment I'm involved in the auto tech classes and am a member of the engine building team which take place after school. Being in this classes has help me learn and gain experience on cars. This classes have taught me how to be organized and clean with the tools. In the engine team I learn how to be faster on everything and also being careful. Graduate being a Auto technician is my goal.
When I first came to the United States I needed to work, thats when I started working in landscaping with one of my older brothers. working in landscaping is hard, you have to deal with heavy equipment sometimes. I remember my brother use to put a lot of pressure on me sometimes, because he needed the job to be done in one day. There I learn how to control myself during peer pressure. Thanks to my brother now I know how to use power equipment and delicate tools.
With all this being said I will like to be selected to go visit your dealership and learn more about it. I see many oportunities for me at your dealership. I will like to have an Idea of what are the requirements to pursue the auto tech field. With all my experience I'm positive and confident that I can achieve my goal of being a technician one day. I will also like to thank you for taking your time to read this letter. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
12796C5A0480 | Desagree,because to select yes the to taste to participe in an activity ,what no effort in the that no to select for example pay a sport and to arrive to hurt. a estudent has decide that sport play and to know the it that game, they decide to understand and to have a good time,to be acquainted with more people have more friends, weight control,check health,to control the sentiment.
To know and to learn much more things , to surpass whole every day ,to throw out desire every second,to understand or to quastions if to want learning to find to avail oneself of the right moment to find that all himself to again ,not to matter if is difficult or easy never to determine that is impossible.
never to surrender because if one all the propose ,sole is to want to learn and to againg ,for example to want to learn play a sport if himself the to propose play sport, and every day to surpass. Not himself to need that east obliged.
They to know that if not participate in the working as task in the rating. if to need to find on the theme power to quastions and to understand. | 1.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 |
128161F8B117 | It is a good idea, a lot of students like to do that, because for them is a good opportunity, is not easier for the students who wanna graduate early but when they finish the school, they have more time and is easy that they think about collage and what they wanna do in collage. Also is depend if the student want to, but for me it's a good choice, the student have to take summer school, be honest it's not a lot of work.
Many students saying that is preferable take the four years because we are young and we have time to think what we wanna do, but not, is logical that the student that wanna graduate early have more time than the student that wanna take for years in the school.
Many students wanna graduate early but their parents saying no, so they can't graduate early because their parents saying that is a bad choice and a lot of things more, each person think different but for me is a really good choice.
For me is a good opportunity because i can think in what i wanna do with my life, because basically i have one more year, but something that happens with the students that graduate early is that they take a brake in that year and when they going to begin the collage they feel tired and they don't wanna go to collage because they feel tired and that is not a reason for not go.
Why not graduate early, if it is a good idea, it can feel free and it can thinking about collage without pressure.
If i wanna graduate early obviously i have to work a little be more, but i will have the chance to have one more year and in that year i can work in something good and productive for my school life. If a student gonna graduate early and in that year do nothing, he will lost his time and that's bad.
So for me it is a very good idea, if i know how to work with my time and i know what i want to do in collage it is a very good idea for the students who wanna graduate early. | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
12920189F7BB | Some societies may think that students are expected to identify a career by the time they reach high school. High school students shouldn't rush their selves to think about the career they want to accomplish. Most importantly they should stay focused on what's important which is education. Students have more than enough time to think about their careers, but not at this moment. They're too young to understand the reality that they're going to face, and the struggle that they're not expecting to happen. Which is why it's really important for them to stay focused on their education, than to suffer later in their lives.
To be honest, nothings wrong with thinking about your career, but it's not always healthy to think or stress about it all the time. Because it could cause an affection on your mind which isn't good. For students who first enter high school, should think more importantly about their grades and how well they're doing in school. At a young age students are fed in with so many ideas and careers that they want to accomplish in life. Their minds are too young to understand, so it's very important for mentors to help them realize that it's better to accomplish from education, than to suffer in the real world.
For example, high school students who work after school, never find the time to come home and focus on completing their school activities. Because of their job that's holding them back. As a student, it's commonly stressing to go through these types of stuff. In fact, no high school student should have to go through these type of things. They have a whole life ahead of them and have the time to think about their goals. So, it's very important for students to focus on what's important, and not worry so much about what they want to achieve or accomplish in their career. The goal to everything is education, maybe some day when students accomplish their ways in education, they'll probably achieve the career that they've been looking for. | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 |
12CA89146E91 | It is true that your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. First i want to be something in the the future i will choose my won character, second i will choose my won character to be socialize with people and third i might chose my won character to take care of my health.
First i want to be something in the the future i will chose my won character. For example; my parents wants me to follow what they wants to make my character but i'm not agree with their decision, they wants me to be a doctor in the future but, i want to be a pilot in the future, so i will decide my won character to be a doctor or a pilot and i would choose what is best for me.
Second i will choose my won character to be socialize with people. For instant; I love people! spending time with people around me helping me to learn how to build my won character better, being socialize with people mean you have more friends and spending time with them can help me to learn new things from them and experience them might help my won character.
Third i might choose my won character to take care of my health. whoever health is more important to me, health is depend on my won character ,for example; if i eat healthy food it's can help my mind to think about my won character, if my health is not good i won't be able to follow my won character so, we should focus more about our health,so we can be able to choose our won character in conclusion, it is true that your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. i want to be a pilot in the the future i will chose my won character,spending time with people around me helping me to learn how to build my won character better and if my health is not good i won't be able to follow my won character. | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
12E3D52345C6 | Technology has always acted as a compelling and mysterious field for me. Even as a child, I spent countless hours not playing my video-game consoles as intended, but rather meticulously studying every component of the device in an attempt to crack the mystery on how it operated. Despite the fact that I've grown older and many aspects of my life have changed, my passion for technology has not only remained, but undoubtedly grown stronger as well. Therefore, an internship in this field seems vital in feeding and nurturing this passion. Although I have not had previous experience in shadowing, an opportunity to shadow would be fitting due to my previous experience and ever-growing passion in this field.
My experience in the technological field proves fitting for this opportunity to shadow. In school, I am enrolled in the Center for Information Technology at Generic_School. This specialty center provides me with crucial access to exclusive technology-based courses and teachers that help me broaden my vision in the technology field. Classes such as IT Project Management, Programming, and AP Computer Science Principles are all courses that I have been graciously provided with through the center and received exceptional results in. This daily involvement in technology not only increased my knowledge in this field, but also my curiosity on the subject. Outside of school, I am a member of the Technology Student Association, a club dedicated to assisting students nurture their interests through rigorous competitions. Through this club I have been able to surround myself with peers with similar interests and aspirations. This club has also provided me with opportunities to exhibit my knowledge in the technological field through competitions, receiving first place in States in Mass Production, Junior Solar Sprint, and Biotechnology. My involvement and superior results in these events prove to show not only my interest in this field, but my capabilities as well. These experiences transfer directly over to the internship, allowing for a smooth transition without much confusion.
The passion I have for technology undeniably proves me to be fitting for this internship opportunity. A crucial action that proves my strong interest in technology occurred when high school specialty center results were published. I was accepted into the medical, IB, and the information technology centers. Despite the fact that the majority of my close friends chose to enroll into the medical center, I stuck with my passion and enrolled into the Information Technology center. The action of choosing my interest over my close friends of many years displays how much I value technology and wish to pursue it in the future. In addition, my strong passion for technology can be displayed through the utilization of my free time. While other kids may choose to spend this time by indulging themselves into video games, much of my time is spent educating myself on technology. Many enjoyable hours of activities such as reading on the history of computers or watching videos on the future of technology were spent during this time. This use of my limited free time shows that technology, in my mind, is not a merely a class in school, but rather a hobby or an enjoyable subject. This attitude would no doubt have a beneficial effect for the internship.
In conclusion, the heavy interest and years of experience I have in technology proves me to be exceptional candidate for this shadowing opportunity. Although my work experience is limited, my passion and expierence in technology may help me ease into the internship without trouble. The talent I have in technology mixed with the catalyst that is my preexisting passion for this field helps me understand the importance of this internship. Not only will this internship assist in broadening my horizons on technology, but it will also help nurture and grow this passion into something meaningful and of use to the real world. Therefore, I believe this internship is perfect for me. | 5 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 5 |
12F2BF34883F | I do agree wih Emerson's statement, because i've had past experiences where i did not know a thing but then i started to get better at it by practicing on what i wanted to get better at. There is this game that got really popular last year it was called fortnite and everyone was playing it, so I decided to download it and play it because it was free.
I was playing and did not know what I was doing I didn't know how to build or shoot or run i didn't even know where I was at , I started playing more often and got my first win with my friends and then I started learning how to build and strategies to get kills, but i honestly didn't like it so I stopped playing for a while and played different games that I liked more because this game seemed to childish for me to play. After a while my friends would tell me to play so I would but I got bored and played different games, then a new season came out on the game and I had money so I bought it and after that everything changed.
I really started to like it now because it had a good storyline and it was more fun, I knew how to play so I would just goof around then I really started to practice with my friends and decided to stop playing around we would fight one on one's to practice i would lose but i just kept going and going until I would get more kills now i've been playing for 7 seasons which is a very long time, seasons are usaually 60 to 80 days in the game they aren't like seasons in real life like spring or summer their like tv shows how they have new seasons and stuff like that.
Anyway I do agree Emerson's statement because on how much better at I got at the game and how long i've been plaiying and the experience I have in that game, I started out really bad at it than started getting better and better the more I practiced and played. Not only me though I know people who started out around the same time I did which was in season two and they were just as horrible as I was now it's season eight and some of them are even better than me.
I also agree with Emerson's statement because i used to fail in math since I was a little kid than last year when i was in 10th grade i had a good math teacher who would help me alot and after a lot of work and help that was the first time i passed math and also this year to had a teacher who do the same she helped me a lot and I passed that class too. | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
12F89E196E97 | Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle... It is wonderful how much may be done if we are actually doing." Idle refers to people who are not busy or keeping themselves occupied to their powers or implements. You would think being inactive serve a purpose, but personally i think it does not. To be occupied gets you to accomplish a lot in life. People who do not keep themselves busy tend to not get far in life.
In other words, to not be engage in work or activity is a very poor thing;there could be plenty of opportunities for you, but just because you are inactive you could miss these awesome opportunities. When we lack the ability to work or to keep ourselves occupied we are being inadequate. People who do not push or work themselves never actually really make it anywhere in life. Therefore, if we are always "doing", we will not fail to meet our expectations. If athletes were never idle or always "doing" some of them would of never made it in life.
However, inactivity does not serve a purpose because when you are inactive or simply not doing anything you miss out on what life has to bring you. We would accomplish so much if we always kept ourselves busy neverless. People who lack strength or courage are inactive. So when teachers say use your time wisely they are telling you to be Idle. It is wonderful when you are doing, being active, or pushing yourself because when you do these things you never miss out on any opportunity.
Lastly, when you are Idle you serve a purpose for yourself, family members, and you encourage others around. People who are active push themselved to do better. Being active can get you a good job because people will speak highly of you and recommend you to others. You ever heard of "hard work makes the dream work" when you put yourself to work anything is possible. Your peers around you will look up to you because you get stuff done and it would push them to do as you do.
In conclusion, Thomas Jefferson says when you are determined never to be Idle you serve no purpose and you are determined to get knowhere in life. Keeping yourself occupied can get you to places in life where you thought you could never be because you are putting the effort. People who move with no purpose are called lazy people these people do not accomplish as much as those who work. Thomas Jeffersom is right to be Idle is wonderful to those who put in the effort and try their best no matter what. Anything is possible as long as you are always at work. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
12FE853D6B88 | I agree with Emerson's statement because people should be themselves no matter what. You want to always show the real you. That is the beuty of life,connecting with different types of people with different types of personalitys. People in this world now a days are cruel and mean that have no heart. People bully others because of theres clothes,shoes, and how they look. You can get bullied for anything now a days, its very sad. That's why people who get bullied hate themselves and want to become something they are not.
I remember one point in my life, i was deppressed. I kept getting bullied because of how big my head was or how skinny i was. I know it sounds funny, i laugh all the time when i talk about it dont worry. I stopped wanting to come to school because of that. I never wanted to leave my house or talk to anyone. It was very sad. But one day one of my close friends asked me why i wasn't coming to school, and i told him everything. He told me straight up to ignore all the negative stuff that people call me and live your life to the fullest. Since that day, we have been bros for life. He always had my back and i always had his. A few weeks passed and i told my mother. We talked for a few hours about how i should ignore all the negative stuff because life is so short that you can't let anything stop you. That really changed me and how i see life.
Trying to be yourself in this world is very difficult now a days. Just by telling someone that there shoes are ugly can really change the whole person. They start buying stuff that they don't really like. Also doing stuff they don't want to do. Suddenly they start doing bad stuff. Just to fit in with other people that have all the nice clothes and shoes etc. People really can't be themselves because of judgment.
There should be more help in this world so people that are going through this can get help. People should be motivated to be themselves and also love themselves. Some people can really say somethig mean and the victim could commite suicide, just because of someones judgment. People should start treating other people with respect. Parents should start teaching there kids early on how to show respect. People shouldn't care about someone elses opinion. People should live there lifes to the fullest.
People should feel very accomplished to be themselves in this world. People really make you feel like trash when they say something negative about you. There is always going to be negative stuff coming at you, that's normal. That is what makes you stronger and turns you into a great human being. That is what should motivate you to do great things in life. That is what should make yourslef and everybody close to you proud. To be yourslef in this world should be the greatest accomplishment. | 4.5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4.5 | 4 |
1300AD075785 | Based on what
Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote,
''Unless you try to do something beyond what you already mastered, you will never grow."
I would have to say that i agree with his statement because as a high school student i like to go beyond on what i already know what to do. Emerson wants yous to take another step in what we do he wants us to grow wont you? knowing that we are capable of doing something so much bigger and better and just be able to grow in are generation. Success is something that every6 high school student wants to do we want to get better at something, we want to pass are classes and if we are not willing to go beyond and put forth effort then i dont think we will be able to grow.
High school is a great way to show this especially if your a student athlete; lets say that you play baseball or softball or any other type of sport that takes time to master. Playing a sport is not easy especially if you want to get a scholarship. I get ask this question all the time "have you yet mastered being a Cather and going beyond that point to see what you have in stored?" I have mastered the skills of a softball catcher but i know if i go beyond that point and keep practicing i know that i will be a great softball player in my years to come. Believing in your self to do something can also help you grow, just being able to say I got this and giving it all you got just gets you a step closer to becoming a master and growing into it. Another this is mistake those are alright , no one is perfect everyone is going to have there flaws and thats ok thats another way of growing and learning; won't you want to go beyond something you already mastered and try something new to grow?
Emerson wanted us to read this quote and think about what it meant to us. I ready this quote and it gets me to think " so if i go beyond on my catching and try something else i could grow into the sport and play multiple positions on the field instead of just one." I could also say the same thing about JROTC in my school as being part of the drill team and going to competitions. These are good examples on what we can all think about going beyond d and farther in what we already know an think about what we can do better so we can grow and learn from are mistakes. High school is a great place to start not even then you can start when ever you want just make sure you know what you want to do and just have fun and enjoy your life. The quote can also be for adults, who have already mastered in something like for example my father, he created his own software and designed it for offices and he is out of town right now in Generic_City so that he can install it and, just grow from that experience he is going beyond on what he dose at work and just making something great happen.
The Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote ,"unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." if you go this prompte and you read it and you have to pick if you agreed or disagree what would you pick? what would you tell me to make me agree or disagree with you? You tell me if i was right or wrong for agreeing with him. you will also be a great person in society. | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
130CA439835B | I think is good idea, because the students have more opportunity to graduate early. some school districts offer programs the allow school, student to graduate in three years. most students follow this plan, must take courses during the summers,or in the evenings or may not be able to take electives course. but if you finish,
the school in three year you need to study very hard to pass all the class.
is good to finish the school early too because you go to the college early and you have more time find a good job. but you need bring more focus in one class but not in other because the graduation, can be going down. but they need break too because most students going to sleep during the class because they study in the night i would like to thank all, the teachers give homework and they not finish because they, dont have time to complete. what can they do during the night they need to get energy, to continue study for the class.
some students are very smart but other students work during the night and they dont have time to do the homework because they came tire for the work, and they dont focus in the class and they no pay attention to the class because some students came from other countries they need to pay house need get foot, clothes and other thing to school but, they need to learn English first because they need to pass all the class for enter in the college,
and they can get good jab to save the money for the future ,they can buy his own house, and get a family they need more important thing the education is very important because they look good person no body say bad thing of he.
I think is good idea because you focus only in one thing. then you can study , just in the school but if you trying to graduate for bettor life if you graduate your parents be happy. because you comply your goals if you have a dream follow you can comply, but you need to focus in the school dont slept during the class, did the homework get good grade dont forget you need to graduate in three years. must students who follow this plan must take courses during the break. to study for the exam you need to be ready for the college, thinking about you life what do you do when you out the school, you getting good job they dont know, yet because we are in the college ,but they have a dream to follow in the college the most important is you get good grade to graduate because if you get good grade they know you are good students.
my opinion is if `you graduate early you have more opportunities to grow up. very first because you are ready for the new life, you can find good opportunities,
but you need to focus in one goals first because you can get good opportunities, away because you graduate for the college ,and school o ready. they families will be happy for his becuase he get good result in the college. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
13450D581EC9 | I am agree with the Waldo Emerson's prompt. He wrote that " to be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."
"Never give up." This word conveys our intensify about our thought. It makes us courageous. Life is not a bed of rose, life is struggle. Every single person has their life struggle. Nobody is a perfect at they look. A perfect man is he who win the struggle. A successful man, he not get success in a second. He had lot of struggle in his life,but he don't stop for his goal. After long time keep trying made him successful. He adjust the struggle and keep go through the struggle and win the struggle which is make him success.
For example a soccer player has his goal to make a score so that they can win. But for making a goal he has to cross the against team then he will success to make a goal.
You failed !. You are done your life today. We couldn't expect from you this. You fool !. You looser. Now you go home and get sleep that's all you can do. Should I listen them and do what they want or give up my life? NO!.I am failed, i am looser but it dosen't mean that i can't win anymore. Don't lose hope. You have hand,you have brain,you have leg use those one day win come to you then you can show them that you did. you made it.
For example,you are not good in Math but it's dosen't mean that you are bad in Social Science. Show your talent. You can't able to solving the Math equation but you have talent to make Social Science rules.
Time is valuable more than everything. A good minded people use their proper time. If you use time and you failed in your success then don't lose hope,don't stop, don't blame on time and yourself. Time can give you more opportunity to use it and make yourself successful. You just have to keep try. But if you being lazy you just waste your time and you got looser reward from the time. Always remember that time never gonna come back.
For example, If you don't do your homework the teacher not gonna give you a grade. You gonna fail in this subject. You just waste your time. But if you do the homework but is incorrect. The teacher can give you one more time to fix the correction though its incorrect.
An Inspiration can make your goal. If you look or read about successful person how they became successful in their life you also can inspire to do what they did. An inspiration can bring you encourage. Make you sense what you want to do and what should you do for your future. There are different people has their different choices. From the successful people you can organize your life.
For example, there was a story about Robert Bruce and a Spider. One day Robert Bruce was laying in the cave and saw a spider was trying to climb the wall but its failed seven times to reach the wall of top. After seven times keep trying makes its successful. The spider reached the top of the wall. This event make Robert Bruce inspire himself.
Everything has their opposition. If you wanna be a good man you have to know what is bad things. The same way if you want to win you have to know what is lose. Fail is common afire in human being. If you don't fail it's mean you dosen't even try. Fail is a part of our life. But don't get depressed yourself by depression. You fail but you have more option to start it from the beginning again. Before you stop try just think should i try one more time. Maybe this time you can become a winner. Just one more think can bring your success.
For example, You digging a soil for the gold. You dig almost come to the gold but this time you give up and stop digging the soil. If he dig the soil one more time he can see the gold which one he want. So always think one more time before you quick.
An aim can make our decision properly. An aim less man can't success in his life. A right decision depend on your future. First make a routine for your work. If you want to success in your goal you have to follow your routine. In a student life its hard to follow the rules. But if you try you can do it. In student life student should give full attention to their lesson. homework should be done before going school or college. if you continuously follow the rules it will be easier for you to success your life.
Don't be lazy. Lazy is a weak point in our life. From the laziness your life never gonna successful. So always do hard work until you done in your work. some people we have in our society they has dream but they don't wanna work. If you don't work how can you full fill in their life. Always keep try to get your dream. We have time we have life just try as much as you can.
Some people in our society some times they messed up with your dream or your work. They don't wanna let you to do your work. This typ of people are very harmful to our life. They always bothering you can't lets you doing work. That time we should ignore them. Don't say anything with them. One day they will leave you automacilly.
For example, if any person can bother you every day and if you ignoring him one day he will not interest with you and leave you.
The success of life bring you happiness. You will feel proud yourself. If you show them that you did it then they will fell ashamed because they thought wrong think about you. So never be lazy. Always do hard work,keep try and think about it what should you do or not. End of the moment it will be
Happy Ending for you because you erase the wrong think the people think about you. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
1348668DF845 | Is it a good idea for students to finish high school in three years and enter college or the work force one year early?
School districts programs would be making a big mistake on allowing high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional 4 years.
If they allow high school students to graduate in three years , they would be making everything harder in the Generic_School because students would have to put more effort than ever on passing their classes and the SOL.
In any other state would agree on graduating high school students in 3 years because their rules are different from the the state of Virginia, For example, in Virginia high school students are required to have their SOL passed with more than 400 points, and the 22 Credits instead of graduating for high school.
Other states like Kentucky or Chicago will agree to this because they are required to have 22 credits for their graduation , and it would not be that hard to get 22 credits in 3 years.
It would be a a bad idea to allow students to graduate in 3 years instead of 4 because students would not like to come back to school in summer to do more work, get the credits they need, and make the SOL , as a student i would not like that to happen because we would not get a lot of time for vacations in summer to spend with my family, and i would not like to take courses during the evening , it would be like to be doing a lot of extra work.
People in different states would like to allow this new rule of graduating high school students in 3 years because they can prepare them more everyday doing their work so they can graduate faster in 3 years .
Many other people are saying that it would be better for them to graduate high school students in 4 years because students would be having a lot more of time to get prepare for college and for try to pass whatever they need for graduation. Students also would like to spend more time in the vacations with their family and not in the school having that pressure that you have to pass all yours classes and exams for graduation. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
134937CE445C | "To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."
Introverts can easly feel identificated with Waldo's words, in a world where the majority goes in the same diretion trying to convince themslves that the way they are taking is the best, it is just a fantacy, but sadly unique, and genius people are afected by the same.
As time passes most of us we still refusing to be like the rest of society; I trully belive that being yourself is more importar than a life lacked of happiness.
As we growing up we been told how to be, and who we have to be like, but only people who resists and face world's opinion can really know deeply what self-acceptation is. It is not about ego, it is about reallity. God, Universe or whowever gave us life, also gave us a purpose. Being different is not a crime, but a privilege, so we have to take advantage of it. Life has a lot of perspectives, just because they are right, does not mean I am wrong.
Before my favorite artist passed away, he used to say: "I rather to be hated for who I am, than be loved for who I am not." well, I think Emerson would love this quote. People that choose a diferent direction are usually called: black sheep, weirdos, misfits, and even crazy. In most of the cases they end up being rejected, just because how they look, how they dress or how they think. but it is a fact that no long they become the most greatness, successfull and happiest people in the world, and there is a few of them. well, I guess no pain, no gain.
I know is hard to be yourself when all these people are judging, in my opinion it is a really big accomplishment being yourself, even in these modern times. I never understood why we have to be like someone else just to be accepted in this cruel society but I know for fact that being myself is the best feeling I've ever felt, so I trully believe that being yourself is more important than a life lacked of happiness. | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
13578C0BCC3C | I disagree that the school board should add one hour and a half hour to school each day, because we need time to do Homework and study and spend time with family but if the school boards adds a hour and a half hour then we cannot do those things. we also need to have fun like going outside. When we get home we can only a little time to study and do homework and maybe have some fun. We will be bored in school and be tired cause then we get home we will be tired of all the time in school so we would want to take a nap but then we won't do Homework we wont study or do anything cause we will be tired. Sometimes i have to be home early and take care of my little brothers but if the school board adds one hour and a half hour then my brothers will be all alone.
I disagree that the school board should add one hour and a half hour to school each day because some teachers might have to take care of they're children and they need to take care of him at 3:30 but if the time of the school changes then he will be late to take care of they're children and come 4:30. they would want to quit they're jobs. Get another job then the school will lose a lot of teachers. All the students will be hungry because they got lunch early. Some students will not even go to school they will skip or just not go to school if they're is one hour and a half hour. If students parents want they're sons to be home early but the students cant because they're going to be one hour and a half hour extra so then a lot of students wont be in school then they're parents have to pick them up.
I disagree that the school board should add one hour and a half hour to school each day. Because the students are gonna have to get a second lunch. The lunch ladies are going to say they are tired and cant cook anymore. The lunch ladies will quit. We will have no lunch ladies. We will not eat anything.
I disagree that the school boards should add one hour and a half hour to school each day. Some parents are not going to let they're children go to school if the school board adds on hour and a half hour to school each day. Parents will be mad and sue the school. Also some of the parents will travel with theyre children to another state to another school with no extra time. The school will lose a lot of students.
I disagree that the school boards should add one hour and a half hour to school each day. Some parents want to take they're kids out and have fun but not if we have extra time. A lot of students will be mad cause they will not have fun but have to learn more at school. Parents would be mad because they wanted to take they're sons out but can't because they're will be extra time. So students cant have fun and do more work at school. | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
136B3124BE79 | In my opinion the students can't go to college when they are too young, they don't have too much experience, those societies have to accept the reason why they are too young to think about a career, they cannot expected something that is different just think about it, the reason they are young it doesn't mean they can have a though about their career yet.
1, They don't have too much experience.
ex: When your'e in school the only thing that you have to think is in your grades, and your classes ,so that's why your experience is not count because there is no experience for it.
2. They are too young to think to go college.
ex: Sometimes your age counts a lot when your'e thinking about college because when you are older you can think clear what you want for your future.
3. Not every student have any plan to college some of them can go. but other student have different thoughts.
ex: No all of the students likes go to school. so they cannot have though like have plan to take a career..
Students of high school can't expect what they want for their future, this can make harder the things because students can already start to think about college that can make more complicated, each student is different some of them want a career other don't wanna go to college they just want get a work and get money, so is impossible all the student want go at college when are too young. The experience always have point because if you don't know what you want for your future, it can make more difficult the things. Everything has to be less desperate, because your are young can a have lot of options at end. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
136F4548CFD0 | Some students think that summer break is good for students because its long break and students always like a long break so they can spend time with there friends . Actually, i think that there should be year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall because students get bored to doing same think like a study so and they can have more rest.
Some students think that students should get a summer long break because its long break and students always enjoy long break . If students get long break and there parents are not in the country where student living s so they can go to out of country for example; they can go to there hometown country to meet there parents, friends and relatives.
I think students should get a year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall because if the students keep coming school without break so they will be more stressful to doing some think again and again without break. Also,
Also, if students have a year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall so they will get a short - short break so they will be don't have so much load in there brains. Moreover, after a long break students don't like to come school so shorts break are better than long breaks.
Finally, i think a year-round schools, where there would be a 3-4 week break in the summer, a longer winter break, and a week off in the spring and fall is a good idea because students get bored to doing same think like a study so and they can have more rest. Also, after a long break students don't like to come school and they get more lazy, so shorts break are better than long breaks. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
13A94BBE2B24 | Imagine every time you look at the clock, it is time to dismissal, but you are still in school and doing tones of extra work. This is usually the time that you are in your sports practice or music lesson, or even relax at home and watching TV. However, things are different now. you lost the option to go home after the normal school time, because the school is extending the school day hours. It is not fair for the student to force them to stay any longer than the regular school time, it can simply miss up the whole plain of students' after school activities. The school should not extending the school hours, because student might have activities and practice after school, and it is the right for students to choose to stay in school when the school is ended.
For example, I have a lot of after school activities, and I always schedule them by looking at the time where school ends. I usually have music lesson right after school, it will be not convenient for me If the school hours are extended. I have to reschedule them, and decides with my private teacher. I might not have the time for the class because my private teacher and I are both very busy. The extending of school hours have the possibility to make me not taking the music lessons,because the conflict of the time. It is absolutely not worth it because , none of the new stuff will be taught in the extended hours, and we will most likely have more homework than usual. If we have more homework and more hours at school, our grade will most likely decrease because since many activities are squeezed to a short chunk of time, we will have less time to do our homework.
In addition, It should be optional for students to stay on after school sections. However, there are people who have very few after school activities, and they are welling to stay in school. That is why school have after school sections.
Instead of extending normal school time, we should let students to go on after school sections because it is better for the student to manage their own time and it is more beneficial for them. Students can stay in school for two hours every day in the week after the normal school time. There are many options for students to choose. Students can choose to study with a teacher in certain subject or work in the library if they want to study. Students can also go to the gym and play sports or even join a club like drama. Any options that students choose is benefit for them because they are learning in different kinds of way which might be more helpful than their regular class. It is clear that when students have trubble or issue in a subject, it is better for them when they come to the teacher one on one after school, because it is easier for them to understand the problem and it is easier for the teacher to only explain to one person.
Over all, it is a bad diction to extending the school time. It will not help or benefit the students and it is a wast of time for the students. It more better for student that they go to their practice and after school activities or go to any after school sections. The student will be more beneficial and more welling to learn than go to their regular class for an extra one and a half hour. | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
13AB4CC7F80F | I like to play my instrument,because I like the relaxing songs we play. And my older brother use to play the violin so that's two reason why i started to like instruments so much. And I been trying to learn how to play the violin for a while now. I also learn how to play old to joy which is a amazing song in my opinoin. My new music teacher this new year has very been pushing us to our limit which is great because he could help us on the parts we don't know how to play yet. Moon night is a old music sheet that we still play. The music notes on it are really hard to play, LIke on line number four and ten. It seems like i'm been getting better in just a short amount of time which my teacher and brother are very proud about. If i do master the violin i'm gonna try the paino next and my reason for that is just to play it on a rainy down and I know which song to play and it's called thank you by dido, it's such a lovely song to play when it's raining outside. Also i heard a song called happier which I been trying to play this week. I wonder what kind of jobs i can get if I keep going down this path, hopefully it's a good paying job. Instruments are good educational activitys becasue it makes people to try over and over again until they get it right which is very hopefull ti those who want to keep trying. My brother haves been takeing his time teaching me how to play the violin because he nocites that i been playing it lot or he had nothing else to do. The good thing about instruments it teaches you that things take time and partices to learn just like most things in the world which is really hopefull.
And ever instrument teaches you something a little different from one another which I find it amazing that each instrument has new to explore on it. Also in the world of music you can your music you just need to take your time with it. When you do that song can become the next big thing. Plus you can your feelings into the song and playing from the heart is what music is all about. Playing from the heart can be a little odd to most people, and most people are shy about it as well. And stundents can help each other parts of the music sheet so the teach won't have to waste his time ever stundent who dosen't know a part. Learning how to play a instrument it enjoyable and a new to learn something new, Which every teacher wants from their stundents correct? Also buying music sheets is also a way to go out to world and see whats going on. Which music your mind is your only limit, well that's what my music teacher saids anyway. Plus you might go into a collage for free if your very good at playing your instrument. Which is really amazing that could happen. And i think theres clubs for playing imstruments so stundents can learn which each other with things that they don't know yet which could be a huge help for them and maybe later on as well. Also if they have someone in thier famliy knows how to play a instrument they can teach them as well, and maybe even more. | 3 | 2.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
13C400DD9794 | The year book is for to not forget anything and it helps you lot will somtimes people don't like it but for me it helps me lot but we don't the have it any of thoes no more it lets you to not to foget to do your homework and what do have torrmorw and the next week But we have those any more because we are now 8th grades but the kids what year book to show thier family what spots they did even to show kids went to school even to show how there friends looks like and one day there family can met them even I agree to do it like what to show there family what did and there school looks like even for they can rember but also if there friends moves away and we will still rember even to love them so much but still I agree for to do the years book and I'am ok with it and what the year books still and I still love them and miss them lot I want them back and it actlly look good But like we only get them an a year it takes for ever to get and I think to pay to get your own one but I like and the fotes to. | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 | 2 |
13D960FD28CD | It better working as a groups because the teacher will think that we will benefit more thing as a project or classwork. And also that we will work together and talk as a groups for the teacher because working alone is hard to think for the one question that you don't know what is about. So many of students think working as a groups is better will help each other However, teacher will thinks many from us that will improve from talking each other and together. Because the student will do more stuff and talk a lot also as a groups and alone because many student will do that to get focus and pay attention the class.
This why that people prefer working with a group is better. Because the reason that we want working as a group is that we will work together and help out the question to talk and give a convince from the work. That we will don't know the answer from the question or the problem because for example, well you think that as a sport you need to be in a group that play together, talk together, and work together as a team is the same thing in the school or other place. For the other example, you saw the cartoon of luney toons that bugs bunny and the duck doing the play for the opera that people will laugh this is call working together as a team to do funny thing in the cartoon shows.
So many of student think working alone is better. Because you will achieve more thing be yourself and thinks more hard you never think before from the work. A lots of student and teacher think it will go better that working as a group well it going to be hard that whatever, that i need help or my friend need help we can not work together we only going ask the teacher for help for the question. Because many of student will do more better job in the class to do work and think more stuff outside the place. For example, some singer that work alone because the there want to be alone that make a better song and to do something and plan yourself to leave anywhere you want to see a better life alone.
In conclusion some people like working with a groups and other half like working alone because the teacher said if you want work with a group go ahead if not you can work alone. So a lot of student show the teacher you can do both as a same time because it doesn't matter if want work as a group or alone because there will give you plenty of time that to do same thing as a group and alone. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 |
13E1CB9819CB | To who it may concern,
Hello my name is STUDENT_NAME and I think doing community service is a good idea, but I think others will disagree with it. So I think we should do an assembly on how important it is to keep our planet and city clean and educated. We should have guess speakers, reward assemblies and more disappline assemblies for the students that won't do the community service. So the students can help with the community instead of destroying it with graffiti, rival gangs, and destroying public property.
Sincerely,
STUDENT_NAME | 3.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 3.5 |
13FDCF58A955 | I currently don't really like doing school online. The main reason i don't like schools online is because i used to do it myself. I didn't really learn form doing school online. One of the main reasons why i was doing school online was because my parents didn't like public schools. So for that being said other student might like it but me personally i don't.
School online may help others then going to actual school. Maybe the person is going through something in school. Doing school at home my be easier for some students,
they probably learn quicker and probably finish school faster. Others may not work that way, some maybe work slower in school, so they wanna work at their own paste . Others may just wanna tryout school at home.
On the other note it's good for schools to do that. If some students were going on a trip they could easily do school on the road. I would help them stay on track with the class. or maybe the student did something bad in school that it would lead them to do school at home. Oh and if a student gets sick to the point to where he can't come to school ,and it was something bad they would do school at home.
To be completely honest i don't like this idea at all. It's because i did it for a good old 3 years, and it was a bad experience for me. I wouldn't remand it, but if you where going through somethings then yeah go for it. I like public school better then doing school online because i like to ask questions and see it myself in person. That's all i had to say, i'm not a fan of doing school online. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
14409A305AB3 | As a student, I can say there are a lot benefits for a student from being able to attend classes from home, is really convenience for a student that some schools offer distance learning as an option, every school should have that opportunity; it ca be helpful for a lot of students, is good for students that does not have a lot of time, so that help them to have a flexible manage of time, in some cases the student are more successful by taking the classes online.
For example if some students have to work , and because their work's schedule take them a lot of time or they have to work at night, they do not feel like waking up earlier in the morning, sometimes they start to getting late to classes, missing classes or missing all days of school, but if the student try to taking classes online can be really helpful for them; since they can have their schedule at their convenient, the opportunity or the facility of making up their on schedule according to their others activities.
Also when someone have to travel a lot for some reason, taking the classes online they do not have stay in the same place every time they are taking the classes, it dose not matter, they can take it anywhere they want, the only two things they need is a computer, and also to have internet connection, and thats it, they should be good with those two things or some people do not have that facility of moving of one place to other, they do not have the money to defray cost for the transportation, or is just to far away from their houses, so the classes online are a way to fix that problem.
There is a large percentage that the students that are taking or took classes online are or were going great, their are doing a successful work, they are being tempting to show more attention to their classes, a lot people say that they feel the classes easier, and also that is easier to study,
when the classes have videos they can put back the video over and over, when ever they want, how many times they want, where ever they want,if they want the teacher to do not talk fast or to do it they can regulate that also, they save a lot of money, because they do not have to spend a lot of money in materials, like for posters and things like that, they do not have to be with some people that distract them from the classes and is also faster to get the classes done.
So how is showed the opportunity that some schools bring them is wonderful, it have a lot of benefits for us, like some students are more successful taking the classes online, so much students are interested in the classes online, feel like is better for them so that way they can be taking classes and doing other things, they just have learn how to manage their time; people that work can do their classes at morning and go work at night, they can have a flexible schedule. | 4 | 2.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
144671E445D0 | A British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote "Do you think that we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control?". Well some people believes we choose our own character traits or influences by our control. Other people doesn't agree that we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control. I think that we choose our character traits, or our character is formed by influences beyond our control because we're doing things that maybe enjoy doing, or we get to choose what we want to be. And I am going to talk about this and why I agree on this.
I Agree that we get to choose our character traits or formed by influences beyond our control because you get to do anything when it comes to you becoming what you wanna be. Another reason is that no one can control you on how you should be later on in the future. I also think that doing the things you like to do would change you for example, helping people that are in need will make you a better person because you're controlling yourself on what you are doing. Another example is that if you're doing bad things, it would make you a bad person because of your actions. That's why people think we change our character traits by choosing our own or formed by influences from our controls.
Other people doesn't agree that we can change our own character traits or formed by influences from our controls because they think it cannot change their own character traits from the actions they do. Also many doesn't believe that doing what they wanna do won't change them later on in the future. Another reason is because they dont believe that we cannot choose our own character traits and that it should only be 1 trait about yourself. For example doing something positive wouldn't effect them because they can easily change and do something negative later in the future. Last thing is that they don't think we get to choose our own traits and basically say that we are born the way we are without changing our character traits.
This makes me think if people who does't believe that they can change their character traits or controlling their influences can be a bad thing for them. the reason why i think it's a bad thing is because they don't think they can't change the way they act with actions they do normally. For example, they think doing positive actions would not change their character traits. Changing your character traits can make you a better person because of the positivity you are spreading.
if you spread positivity or have a good mindset could change your character traits.
So in this essay i believe that people can change their character traits or formed by influences beyond our control. I say this because you can choose what you wanna be or act later on in life. Another reason is any actions people can do also makes them change their character traits. This is very good if you treat others with respect; you will be a positive person. This will also help you in life because if you think down you wouldn't be motivated, but you can change that by doing something nice to yourself or to someone. That will give you a good mindset and want to do it more often if it helps you feel motivated by making someones day . | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
1451EA314B8A | Students in the classroom always debate about working alone, or in groups, both of the ways of work have beneficial and non beneficial aspects,In fact; some students do not like to work in groups, they may say things like people in their groups do not do anything ,and they would rather to work by themselves, but in my personal opinion working in groups is a better idea. When students work in groups they can divide the assignment in different pieces, in that way it can be easier for each person in the group, another aspect to think about is that students in the group can help out each other. Working in groups will also be less stressful for each person in the group.
First, when students work in groups they could perfectly divide the assignment in small portions. for instance, if they have a project about global warming, they could tell each person to find something different, one person can find the characteristics of global warming, a different person the reasons why it happens, and someone else some examples of the topic.
Second, students always need help ,and they could help each other in the group. Help out each others in the group is a good way to develop team work, it may help them when they go to college, or after when they grow up and have jobs. Furthermore, teach students about team work is a really beneficial aspect to think about because students are the future of this society, and teach them how to work with others is going to help them to develop an open-mind.
Another important thing is that they would have less stress, if they work as a team and divide the work, they will feel less stress, also they are going to find more time to work in different assignments from different classes. In addition, if they have more time for others classes their grades may increase, and they will have a better academic performance.
To summarize, working in groups have a lot of beneficial aspects, students may grow as a person and develop different values when they work as a team, also they will learn more as individuals something that the new generation needs, students will also accomplish new things and be more successful. | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
14AC534FFE42 | graduating early is a very good idea but before start with my opioun or make any suggestions i would like to take sides first. graduating early comes with a lot of work and troubles . before you will be able to graduate early, you will need two math , two science ,two history and other elective subjects to graduate .but if you don't have any of that or maybe failed some classes in your freshmen year or sophomore year, it's all pales up and wait for you in your senior year. or maybe you refused to go to summer school or even take some classes during the summer, it's affect you in your senior year. summer school sometimes help you to reduce some classes during your school year.
Every high schooler's" dream is to walk on stage with a big smile on his/her face. but if you don't do the necessary part of passing your Sol and getting good
GPA to college , you might as well want to stay and wait for your traditional four years.
Many high school er"s sometimes want to leave high school and go to college because they want to live on their own, out from home,experience new things, meet new friends, or even meet new people and learn about other things and also sometimes too student graduate early or want to graduate early because they don't. like their school or get bullied a lot in high school due to that they try their possible best to leave the school before something happen to him/her.
But from my point of view I think every high school er should wait till their traditional four years of high school because college can be very very stressful if you not well organized or you not well fit.
And also before you make a decision to go to college or even work force or maybe start a life right after high school, make sure you are financially stable because college or anywhere else after high school will be very tough and very challenging.
Preparing to graduate early and go to college a year early it's very hard sometimes because you wouldn't know what you want do in college and you will be on a waiting list and you will have to pay for every semester which is going to be a waste of money and also time . so i think every high schooler's should wait till their traditional four years and be more prepared and financially stable before they graduate . | 2.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 |
14CC79B9F334 | I agree with Emerson's statement because we have always to be like we are all the time. We dont have to pretend be other person just to like someone . For some people be yourself is hard. Sometimes we do things that we never do just to have more friends and that is bad. We dont have to try or pretend be cool or acting different just for that. I think that be yourself is an accomplishment. In the world is a lot of people that you can talk quite freely, but those people sometimes are hypocrite because they are acting like they are people that you can trust. People who sometimes do not look good or something can be better than people who look kind.
I am food runner in a restaurant and literally most people loves me in there. I have been working for 6 months in there. All that I have to do is be food runner, but sometimes I help the servers and if I help them is because I wanted. they sometimes say thank you, sometimes they say nothing but I do not care that. and one day one server asked me about why you help them and I said I am just been myself and I
like it.
I think if one person is good doing something and that person decide to do that all the time, that person can achieve too many things.
When I was 9 years old I start to play soccer, and when I turned 10 I tried to enter to the team of my city where I lived, and I could not enter to the team. Some people probably should make a decision to leave everything, but when I see that I could not enter to the team I tried to be better for the next time, and the next year I achieve to enter to the team, and what I think is the importance to be yourself be positive. After play 1 year in the team of my city the next year the coach of the state team talked to me and he said that he was watching me all the time when I was playing, and he said that I am a really good player, and that he wanted me in his team .When I make the decision to go to the new team my friends told me that they are going to miss me. They wrote a letter saying thanks for you friendship and for be an example that all that we have to do is "to be yourself" and go for what do we want to do, and I told them that if we do what we want everything is going to be easy and fun.
the phrase to be yourself means that we have to be always how we are not change or pretend be other person just for have more friends or something, and if we do something that we like do it. If we do that we are going to accomplishment everything. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 |
14D2867090F2 | Philosopher, physician, humanitarian
Albert Schweitzer said," Example is not the main thing in influencing other; it is the only thing. I believe that if you show good behavior while working or simply going to school with a good behavior that some people will follow your attitude and want to have a positive way on life, however there are other ways of showing good behavior, for example you can help your mother with the groceries and help take the dog for a walk, some might think that good behavior is for the weak, but to be honest it shows that you are mature and that you know how to act around other people or places. If you continue with good behavior you have a higher chance that you will be respected in society even in your own home. good behavior is really a life skill you need for example, your trying to get a job, how are you going to behave in front of the employer? your going to act like a mature adult and tell him that your looking for a job so you can buy a house or a car. so you need to behave correctly in any given situation. It can be hard to behave correctly because some people are very disrespectful and like to get on other people's nerves, but in the end your the one that set a example to everyone else that you know how to act in any situation. dont let other people get to you because then your going to justlash out on everyone else and thats going to make you look bad no matter what. you hsve to show that you are well behaved in any type of enviroment weather its at your house or at work or even at the movie theater you still have to show that you know how to act. | 3 | 2.5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 |
14ED79D68BC4 | I think if we never try something new we will never are going to grow more. I'm agree with
Emerson's because in this life the point is to try new ideas new experiences is not only stay in one place like if I already have something why can't try something different if I can move more far than where I am for example if I never try something that I always have wanted how am going to know what it's feel. One reason if I already have a mastered in something how im supossively to grow if I never have try it before how I will know if I am good for it Ifor not
I never try before.
Example If I am a person who has a mastered in bussines and I am able to have my own company but Iam scared to try how I am supposively to grow If I don't try I will stay in the same place where I srtart because is does not matter what I am mastered fpr it if I don't try I f I don't take the risk if I am not confident in my self. Unless I try to do something that I already have mastered I will never grow. I think everything depends in our own personallity because there are person that they are already old but some times they regret their selfs because they never try somethint that they could try it when they were young but now is to late for them I think those kind of things are important in life is not only a bachilletor degree is what you want in life is something that if you don't try is gonna stay in our lives forever and we wiil never are going to see that.
Another example for this is that we always have to go beyond that what we already know we never can stop in one place we need to keep going because there are more things to discovered and the more fast we are moving the more fast we start growing it. So every time we need to keep in mind that everything that we do is what is going to make us to look different then others and always be beyond in everything. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
14EE006078C4 | Some student can learn to attend classes from home. And I think it's a great way to learn if you want some good grades. If I wanted to learned; I would stayed at school or watch a video to how to English, biology, or what classes do I chose from. But online or video conferencing are very different. online can be probably a website, YouTube, (Example like be able watch how to do math) or other. video conferencing is probably like a chat room or some video live.
Online is a great way to learn because I use on homework, essay, Google, YouTube, and other website. And here an of example. If I wanted how make a cake and when I used online website. It bring the website how to bake a cake. And there simple as that. But sometime if I ever get like a hard assignment and I checked it online, and it gave me the wrong answer, then sometimes the website can't be everything right. But I go ahead and tried other website to see if there a correct answered.
Now let say that I had to studied a lion. I can go online to checked in Google and it bring me to whole bunch of website, and click one of those website to see if there a way to studied some lion or go to YubeTube to watch how scientist studied theses creatures.
Video conference is probably like talking to a teacher or maybe live chat. And the way I think of the video conferencing is not to bad. It like you're teacher or someone is teaching you, and its like simpler to school. If I wanted to do it, like if there a problem that I need to fix then I go to video conference so they can helped me and the question. But I think its a great idea to do it.
The way I see is online is a helpful and video conference is helpful too. But I think it like home school staying at home and studied online or video conference. So my reasons is it a way to learned fast, getting good grades, or other information that you need for the future. And here a other reason why to use online or video conference. Online is been update like a few times. For example lets say Google doc. Google doc has been one the greatest website that I ever used. In that website, you can do almost everything like book project, essay, making slide shows and other helpful tools. But video conference is pretty helpful too. And my example is like if I need help I can contact my fellow people to help me.
Finally the best way to learned is sometimes online for helpful website and video conference to contact if teacher or other can help me. But I likely used online because it pretty helpful because let say I forgot a textbook and my homework is due the next day. Well I can go online and check my answer if i got it right. And I sometime I always used online to see if how to bake a cake or other information that I need. | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
150C42083D49 | The schools lunch menu should stay the same. Students have a choice on what they want to eat. It is important for students to eat foods they like because it brightens up their day. Many people believe that having a healthier school menu is a good idea because it lets students become healthy. The cafeteria should not change their lunch menu to a healthier school menu. It effects the students learning if they are not happy with their food, their parents pay for students school lunch, also students won't be used to the new healthier menu.
Students learning would be effected if they are not happy with their food. Students need food that they enjoy to motivate themselves. Students can't learn if they aren't treated with right food. If the cafeteria is not serving good menus, students will have a bad mood. It is important to give and treat students good food so that they will like being at school.
Parents aren't just paying their kid's school for nothing. Parents are paying for their child's school lunch to make them enjoy themselves at school and to learn. Students will be social if they are having a good meal at lunch. Students will also be active if they are getting the right food. Therefore it is important that the school needs to think about the students health.
Students would not be used to the new healthier menu, they would hate it. They will bring their own lunch because students don't like eating the school meals. It will also make parents stop paying for their child's school lunch. When most of students aren't eating the school food, other students will follow their footsteps. Moreover it is important to not change the school's menu because they won't get used to it.
A new healthier menu will effect students learning in school, they would not get used to the menu, and parents won't be paying the school for their child's lunch. Students will bring their own lunch to school. Students will not be active and social in school. Essentially it is very important that the school should stick with the same menu at all means. Changing students health is very important and you would need permission from all student parents to agree. That is why it is a good idea to not bring a new, healthier school lunch menu. | 3.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4 | 4.5 | 4 |
15125AF6CB82 | Student that are entering to high school, are around fourteen, and fifteen years old. Identifying a career by the time the students enter to High-School, is probably a chance to see if they are actually interested in the career that they had in mind, when they were in middle school. This is the time when you have to start picking ideas for what you want to be when get older. This doesn't mean that your not allow to change your mind in the future, is just a help from the school to see if you are interested in what you want to do when you get older. You have four years in high school to change your mind. There is so many careers that you could like; the school will provide you the classes that you need in order to graduate, and also classes that talk or teach you about the career that you pick. That's when you have to start thinking if that's what you actually like, and remember that whatever you pick, is not permanent for your entire life, because you can change your mind any time.
Don't stress out a lot, because as a freshman you can change your mind for the year that is coming up. You have another year to pick new classes and see what is that you actually want to be. Identifying a career by the time the students enter to high school, is probably a chance to see if they are actually interested in the career that they had in mind. You have around ten month in school, in those ten month you have the chance to know more about the career that you pick in the beginning, so while the time past by, you can see if you are actually interested in the career for your future. If is not what you thought it was going to be, then for your next year you can talk to your counselor about it, and they will help you giving you advises, because they are allow to see you grades, so they will see in what classes you doing good, so they can help you pick a career that you would probably like.
Student have the right to change their mind any time that they want, because the 75% of the students that are in High-School are not mature enough to actually think in their future, most of them are not ready for life. When you are in your last year of high school, is when you have to start getting ready with what you actually like, and see whatever classes that you had picked in the beginning of high High-School was actually what you wanted to be in the future; because after that you will be going to collage. It is a good idea to give the students the chance to identify their career in the beginning of High-School. Also their mind will change every year, the years that actually matter in order to go to collage is junior and senior years. Those years are the ones that you have to get ready and actually put on your mind that any classes that the school will put you in will be a guide toward the specific career that you have picked.
The classes that you have in High-School is just a help to open your mind for the career that you could have in the future. It can be helpful for some students and for others it would not matter at all. It is not necessary to identify only one career when you are just entering to High-School, because you are most likely to change your mind and ideas about the career. There is a chance that you will forget what you wanted to be as a young age. While the time past by there will be so many other cool career that you will be interested to do, or to learn more about. When you are picking your classes and your counselors and you talk about your future, or what would you like to do when you go out of High-School; is a good chance to let them know your ideas and your goals, so they will know what classes to put you in so it can help you as guide for your career and also for collage.
In conclusion, giving the students the chance to pick classes that will guide them toward their career, can be helpful for them to see if they are actually interested in that career or no. If they don't like the classes that they have that is teaching them about the career; then probably is not actually the career that they want for their future. Is complicated for them to have only one career in their mind, because there is so many chances that while the time past by it will become hard or boring for them. In the other hand most of the students is High-School have change their mind, and you can ask any person while their working, if the job that they have right now, is actually what they picked when they were in High-School. Most of the times is better if we give students chooses for their career and future. | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 |
1535E922B3AA | One topic that is frequently debated today is that to conserve energy and resources, some businesses have adopted a four_day work week, with each day consisting of ten hours. people is discussing if school should follow this model by extending the school day two hours.
Some people think that this is not a good idea because if that happened students, teachers, and all staff would work more and they are going to get tired more easily. And these four days would be consider more longer than five normal days, Also maybe school would required more things to graduate and to complete these requirements it would take more time Also people think that school should have any other ideas to conserve energy without changing the days of school. for example: turn off lights when we do not need it, open the Windows etc..
I think that extending school two more hours would be very difficult for us because almost all the students have to work after school and some have full time and that required to work more that four days so if school is more long we would not complete with our jobs. And i think that if we use the energy how we have to, that would make a big difference. Also i think that if we get opinions from other people outside of the school we would have more good ideas of what to do to conserve all energy.
I believe that study just four days should be more difficult to learn we probably get more easily tired because would be ten hours each day And and if we see and think if school is only four days we have to wake up more early and go home more tardy and actually the energy would be the same amount as five days there is just a little difference between five to four days of school. Also if we get tired maybe i think would be more difficult to learn.
Finally to decided the best solution we need to give our opinion and discuss it. And I believe that more than one student need more time than others to learn because in my experience is really really hard to learn new things,
new units, new information, and if we have only four day it make more difficult for many students. Also as we see, there is many ideas to conserve energy and very easy to catch up like in the first paragraph there are two very useful ideas how to conserve the energy, without taking away any day. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 4 |
153C3543E432 | People who value self-reliance defined as the need of each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas.
Should people make their own decisions about life important matters,or should they ask someone else for their opinion.
People should ask for guidance from experts about life important matters.
There are times when depression comes and stress appears because,of bad decisions made by one-self.
If people do not ask for experts guidance, there is a possibility that in the future the decision they have made, might affect them in the future and cause a fatality like, depression which can lead to deadly thoughts and mental problems like bipolarity.
Depression is one of the most know in all over the world which is caused by,bad decisions,over working by mental and physical jobs, family problems, and an unhealthy life style which all of this can lead to suicide thoughts.
For example, one of the most famous singers from United States Sia known for her most popular song "chandelier", she committed many bad decisions which had lead her to drug addiction.
Her fame was getting higher; and many contracts for more shows where she had it to attend to, were exploding her head which lead it to an over working stage.
She has an amazing soprano voice, with more than five different tones, and because of that, different music productions wanted to sign a contract with Sia, but she instead of taking a rest she decided to continue, knowing in which stage her body was passing through, she decided to take drugs to cover her stress but, instead of taking away her stress she became a drug addict which lead her to suicide, but thanks to the doctors she is alive; now she keeps being one of the most popular singers but, because of her pass, she covers her face with long hair bangs to the top of her upper lip; and no own has seen her face since that incident.
Also, bad decisions might lead to mental problems like bipolarity, and sadly most of the cases are seen in schools where parents and teachers do not notice until is late for that youth to recover, because of his or her bad decisions that this students had made.
For example, a student from a school in Virginia known for his great intellectual was passing through a rough time, he had to go to work every single day after school from Monday to Monday his hours to school were from 7:30 Am to 2:15 Pm, and his work hours were from 2:30 PM to 10:30 PM every single day.
He never gave up he always was the top student of his class, but there were times where his parents were putting more pressure, and Test were near to come and work was getting more and more exhausted until one day he exploded.
The day of hes graduation arrive and his most treasure sister wasn't able to accompany him because she was getting into the same stage that he already pass through.
After his graduation he wanted to have a life and do what he always wanted to do since he was a child which was being in the Marine, he was already in a bad state because of all the pressure he gent through but, he wanted to fallow his dream.
One Saturday in the morning he decided to apply for the Marine but, sadly he was not accepted because of his migratory circumstances and because of that, hes brain collapsed in a stage of dementia, but his mother instead of giving an affection, she got mad and told him "Stop, you are a man already, act like one", the only one who tried to calm him down was his little sister who did not know what to do but to say "He needs some experts help, he needs to go to see a doctor in that way, we can make a good decision and know what to do".
After all of this happened he went to a mental hospital where he was hospitalized for three long months and now he is living a life with medications from an expert who helped him to go through all of this where he was diagnosed with bipolarity.
In conclusion, if someone wants to make a decision which is about their life importance is better to ask an expert and prevent all this things to happen in that way there can be a reduction in mental problems and suicide attempts. | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
15847C58ED47 | The accomplish we are always doing is something wonderful how much we successfully achieve things. It is interesting to look back at the easily creation and compare it the work today. Modern creation are written and revised with the help of the internet that contain search able date base containing over million different things. Modern world relating to a computing, internet, and mobile technology are now established as part of the main stream rather than being considered.
Never determine how much may be done if we are always doing something. if a boy was given a straightforward earlier life as schoolmaster at Virginia. But his lack of judgment, however, meant that he could not prepare boy for confirmation. This was an effective block on the career path since he could not hope of promotion to the position nor therefore eventuality achieve a headship. But he had accordingly resigned his position and set out to his brother. He his been living by his brother for a couple of year . They were therefore the natural people to turn to when the press wish to put a long held aim to publish a small book to be published at a price of one or two shilling based on the press this accomplish is special to them. | 2 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 |
1590895B2332 | How technology have a positive effect on our lives? Nowadays over a billion people use different type of technology for example phones,laptops,computers, and tabs. Technology made our lives more easier than before. Although we spend most of the time using technology rather than doing physical activities,because we can read books,watch movies, play games,or shop online,it also helps in our education, and we can stay in touch with others.
Technology helps us to stay in touch with our friends and family. Through social media,we can share our daily routines,share our pictures or we can make new friends. People on social media are so excited to share their stories with others. We can learn some lessons by knowing each others experience. By sharing our lives personal experience maybe those inspires to other and they could make their lives better.
Nowadays technology have a big hand in education. Schools,Colleges,and University prefer laptops or computers more rather than using books or papers. Through technology students can easily access to their assignments or missing work. Students can take help from internet in their assignments and can easily submit their assignments to teachers online. Teachers can also access to other teachers resources to help them in teaching.
Most of the people use technology for entertainment to watch movies,play games and read books in free time. Nowadays we can play games with our friends even though they lives in other country. For entertainment we can record ourselves and upload that online as a daily v log and this is not just entertainment we can earn money through technology. We can also shop online or we can also sell products online and make money. Most of the people who are busy in their lives they prefer to shop online not going to market and search for their desire products.
We spend our most of the time using technology,for example using social media,playing games,or watching movies that leads us to get lazy,sleepy,and sometimes it feels sick. Technology is addicting we cant spend our day without using technology because technology is playing a big role in our lives. It brings so much to our lives for example entertainment, helping hand in education,and more.
Technology have some negative and positive effects on our lives but there are more positive points than negative ones. There are many helpful factors in technology that helps in our lives. Before technology life was hard to connect with people,but now you can easily call them and talk to them no matter where they live. Some negative points like we get addicted to one thing we and we spend our most of the time using it ,but there are some positive effects like it helps in education and we can earn money through technology. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 |
1594F1B5DED6 | I remember when i was in my country my uncle have a little store and he was trying to grow but he try for much time but he see that his store looks sad poor so he close the store and was asking for help and just like 5 or 4 people help him and at the pass of the year we see him building a good house he grow inmediatly and people get surprised by him because a lot of people din't not beleave of him so people get mad of him because only because he grow and people don't want to other grow. the wheter is that you will never grow. i am agree that you can grow with what you have already my firs reason is that people can grow working hard like my uncle did because my uncle did work hard and that store is there because him. my second reason is work together look there are many games in this world but some of them dont like to work together so is a game called Pug mobile and the other game is Residential of evil and those game work together and they are getting good thing and that how every one need to do to grow my third reason is to be easy going to to be sad because you dont have nothing that how the biggest company start with nothing so that how people have to thing to be ungry to dream and if you take that seriously you will be someone in this life so work hard and never give up whem you fall stand up is no matter how many time you fall that inportant thing is to never give up some people may say look at that person he or she is crasy if that dont work just keep trying and you will see you grow. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 3 | 2.5 | 2 |
15968BD9B40A | Some schools have programs where younger students can work with older students. For example, At my school there's homework club right after school. Teachers of all sort of subjects come to the libary and help out with your questions. The teachers also let you communicate with any grade level students. So I think that students of all ages should interact with each other.
So I think it can help younger students understand if they can't capture the meaning or they need an older student to clarify for them. Because younger students look up to the older students. Meaning that when there the oldest in the school or one of the oldest, they can help out kids/students who need help and use the same strategy that the older student tought them when they we're younger. So then, the younger students would always wanna go to the programs that the older students go to for some help.
It benefits for the older students because, For example, If one of the students wanted to become a teacher and is really shy, Then they can work on their communication skills on the younger students and become more secure about them selves and become a teacher. For example, When they were teaching they young ones, they could use that exact same stragety when they were "teaching" when they were young.
It defenitly can help both because, It can help with communitcation skills and meet new people you've never meet i your life, And then later on in the future you'll become really good friends with them. This can help out a lot not only one way but a lot, Because if you're the young one then you still have a long way to go. And if you're the older one then if you thought you can pursue your teaching carrear then you still have a chance to be a teacher in life.
In conclusion, My essay was yes. Why? Because some younger students parents didn't go to school, or finished school. So they have no one to ask for help. But this isn't only for homework club, this can be for any activty or program there's in the school. It can be sports,cooking, teaching, ect. For example, If you played a sport and you were the youngest, you can ask the oldest for help. Like how can i improve my skills, or how can i improve my passes, ect. So yes I think all schools should let every age group in a certain activity or program. | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
15AC952FFBC1 | Have you ever wanted an advice, but you ask more than one person. By listen different advice or opinion you have to ask more than one person. When people want an advice they ask more than 1 person because they want to hear different advice to make sure they don't make mistakes, and they want to hear the right an advice.
I think people should ask for an advice to more than one person, because maybe the first person that they ask for an advice were wrong. For example, when I need an advice I always ask my parents first. I always ask both of them, but sometimes they always have different opinions, parents always have the right advice for you, but the problem is the sometimes they both give you a different advice. Sometimes they told you an advice that you might not like, or the one that you weren't not looking for, and thats when I ask other people about advice like my teachers, friends, brothers, cousins, principals. just to hear what you wanted to hear or the right decision.
Without a doubt, I would ask more than one person for and advice, to hear about others people situations. clearly, I would ask multiple people an advice because you never know who's wrong or who's right, but atleast people give you different opinios, so they're giving you ideas about what you can't or can do. On the other hand if you ask only one person for an advice that person might be wrong, and you might to a wrong decison.
People should listen to all the advice that people give to them. I always listen to all the advice even if they're wrong i just need to make sure not to make the wrong decision. Sometimes I make mistakes by not listen to the right people.
People ask more than one person because when the first person that you ask and they told you something different, what you really wanted to hear. For example, I personally like to ask my parents for an advice first, but sometimes I don't like what they say to me, so thats when I ask other people like my friends, sometimes you think your friends are right not your parents. But let me tell you something parents are always right it doesn't matter if you don' like them or whatever but they're always right they will never will give you the wrong advice.
I can make the right or wrong decisions because i'm a human and everone had make wrong decision in their life. But sometimes people give you the wrong decision. When I ask for an advice to multiple people, you have to make the right decison. Those people might be right or wrong. I think that asking more than one person for an advice is right because you never know who's right or who's wrong. | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
15B68B826F8D | Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, "Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow." He believe people should try to do something new beyond what they already know. Being good at new things can make you feel more confident with yourself. I agree that people should try to do something new beyond what they already mastered because trying to do something new can make you feel more confident and experimenting something new can make you discover more about yourself.
To begin with, trying to do something new can make you feel more confident with yourself. People can be more success in life knowing more things. If people are always scared on doing something else they will not have experiences in life and It can be hard for them to grow. For Example, I was working in a restaurant for so long I really knew how to do that job, but I wanted another job to get more money; however, I was scared on getting a new job, I thought I was not going to be good in at that, then someone told me that I should try that I will never know if I am good at something if I do not try. Now, I working in a new job, I am more confident, and I am one of the best workers in the restaurant. Therefore, If people do not try to do something new because they do not feel like good at that, they will never know if they were one of the best. Growing is part of trying if you failed, then you will learn from your experience.
Second, experimenting something new can make you discover more about yourself. Sometimes you have to let go what you already mastered and start experimenting more about life, so you can not be stack on the same thing. Grow is difficult for the people who do not have experiences in life. For instance, When I came to this country I was so scared on learning a new language and how people will treat me, but start interacting with new people, learning about their countries, and trying different foods. Now, I can say that I have learn so much from other people and I realized that interacting with other people can make me grow in a way that I can feel more confident when I am around people. So, experimenting something else can make people matured and smart as well.
On the other hand, some people say that trying to do something beyond what you already mastered, do not make you grow. They say that people that are good at something should not be evolved in something else because they could get lost knowing different things, but I believe people will never get lost learning new things, learning is the key of growing. For Example, my friend is soccer player he is really good and he started learning to play baseball, he became good at both sports. That shows that people can be good at different things at the same time without lost what they already know. Therefore, trying something new can make you good at different things and discover talents that you did not know that you have.
To conclude, trying to do something else beyond what you already mastered will make you grow. People can discover more about themselves, grow with the experiences on tying to do something, and if they failed they will learn from that. Life give us that opportunity to mastered different things, learning something new make us be more confident and success on life. We should try to do something else maybe we are not good at that, but at least we try to do it and get something with us. Life could be bored if you are stack doing what you already know and not trying something else. | 4 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3.5 |
15BD3759DC85 | Have you ever thought what life would be like without and with success?
I agree with this quote from Winston Churchill,"Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." It's an important role that failure plays in our daily lives. Failure leads to many different directions,But, if we learn our mistakes we can understand what we did wrong. People sometimes have the enthusiasm or optional energy to get thought the obstacles. Some-others don't which it's acceptable for this type of situation. Giving up faith is likely, giving up on yourself as an individual.
Tools are like megalo, it helps us become the person we are today. Tools guide us to consist of good devolpement of character. It can read our thoughts and mind as a reader, when you specifically need them in hand. For example, working on a project from school, you use the internet to find those evidence to support your statement. You may never know that the tools you we're looking for has been sitting their waiting to be taken. You knew it was the item you we're searching for, soon enough it was a success.
Without failures or mistakes, we won't even understood what errors we had. Life would've become a lot harder, stressed, overwhelmed etc. The more mistakes we resolved, more issues fills up. We won't even be able to undo our issues. It would waste more of you're time.
I would argue with this fact, success comes from mistakes and obstacles along the path. It tells us what we should do and not fall into the same hole again. It takes time and effort to adjust,So, we must contribute as a whole.
Therefore, no matter what obstacles we face in life, considering a side-note. There may be a tense of giving up, let it slide. You can active anything in life. | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 |
15BDA0989B56 | When you trying to make something different every day, is the greatest accomplishment.
I'm agree about Emerson's Statement !
Well, when you be yourself you every moment want to be something else,something new to know how capacity you have to be yourself. When you thinking in yourself your days be more easy, fun, you enjoy yourself in a world because you are only in the world nobody is like you, you are the only who make the better decisions in your life and is something constantly trying to make you something else because is the most and greatest accomplishment that you have is like a gift that your received and you need to care.
When you constantly trying to make you something you learn something that you don't know; something that surprise you because you never think that you can do, and you say I can do that thing and I want to experiment more things spontaneous because is better when that things have spontaneous because left better and so cool and impressive to you. Experiment more things new help you to be better every moment, to that these for you can helped an others persons when they need our help, when meet with one situation where somebody need help motivate that he or she can do it nothing is impossible, because a lot of peoples in the world don't believe in their self because all that time suffrage bullying they thing that they don't serve for nothing they believe in that bad words, is for these reasons that one situation appear in front of our eyes helped, spoke with love,respect,be courteous because when you spoke with one persons that have these problems where suffrage bullying, bad words that others peoples say they feel miserable have hatred,resentment and all of times they don't want to talk, you need or our need to going to these peoples and spoke with love, love is one of the most good gun that we have is the most important in that around world. A lot of peoples suffrage depression, anxieties, contempt, and racism, and to much peoples lose their lives because they don't support all that bad words,contempt and racism they suicide about that bad situation that they pass, is not necessary to arrive to these situation when we can change that world, stop to that bullying,racism we need to stay up, help these peoples and to these form too we be better persons these help too to our lives to see all that things different and get a solution because nothing is impossible when you purpose to me a good and better person.
Is time to care yourself, is time to listen your heart, yours words, and be better for yourself not for that others peoples, is time to return to be you for make that things that you want for you,don't make things for that others peoples see, want at have happy peoples, made because you want to continue with you life, dreams, expectations, careers, and because these make that you feel happy, interesting, confident, sure, cute, fun, and enjoy your victory. We need to get that goods words specific when it's for important persons because they want that better things for you, you don't need to get the bad words that you need to put in the trash so to these form that bad words don't affect you in nothing in your life. Then when you need to be something don't tell to everybody because a lot of time that peoples have envious yours victories then they get a angry things because have zealous that you did it. The important things spoke with that persons that really is important to you that person helped you to celebrate later your victory with you.
Make your things individuality because that work that you doing left good and you have your owns opinions,strategies,problems,situation,statements,solutions you work better when you work individually, like these work on me, when a work individuality I have my owns ideas because when a work in groups I feel that a can't put all my ideas a need to put all that ideas together and them we need to decide for one of the ideas the most interesting and important ideas, for me is better when you work individuality.
Trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplished, bec a use you can learn and make a new thing,because every day our want to change the world with all bad expectations, etc we need to care whatever word that we spoke to don't hurt nobody with any word all persons in all of world needed be different because a lot kids in these time what make whatever they want don't want to make that parents say that is something that we need to change.
Yourself is something that need to care because these defined what type of people you are, the values that you have, is something delicate and important; You need to have persons that helped you to be better every moment in your life,person who import good things on you, how stay with you in (bad & good) moments that person you want the best for you, who was happy when you get the victories because that is that things that you received and help you to make that same things with that person,we need to know who really is our friend.
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Friend is who really want to support you how really wants good things for you that friends is that care you to do the true and better things.
Friend is not who don't help you, how don't care that important things for you that not be friends. All need to see very true who is really a friend.
Yourself is something happiness is like a emotional thing that you can share with your family, friend, that important persons for you, in yourself you feel a comfortable with you body because a lot of persons don't feel good with their body and suffrage for these. When you are sure with yourself and believe and yourself you feel happy,emotion, is something that we need to care a lot for no feel bad when a person who don't want to our things that we are doing. When you believe in yourself all around you is happy every moment,hour,minute,second. But most important for me is when I have a most important person in my life God my Lord because he love me before a born like to be.... | 2 | 2.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 2 | 2 |
15D10C4DBA29 | Have you ever assist a older student and a younger student from involving a program? It is better from involving a program so they can talk to each other and communicate others, if they are struggling with some work or if they need to stay after school which is important for them to get good grades.
I agree that older students should assist younger students from involving a program because they can help together and cooperate together, if older students want to enjoy a after school activity if they like being it, they can learn about social skills.
I think that cooperating together for students is good because they can hang out and talk with their phones while their at school and they can work as a group of doing a project which is good for them to do if their kind of bored and they can work together of doing a skit or a play or act they like to do and last they should book buddy which that means reading as a group or playing card games each other.
I think that older students like to enjoy a after school activity because they like to do video games because i know that some students always stay after school for video games because they like it a lot they like to play games each other which i play video games with my friend, and students might say 'Yay' i like to stay after school to play video games again.
I think that students should learn social skills, because they can educate themselves of liking it, and there is a another club that is called Personal development which is a good club of social skills so that students like it a lot and their is some fun things that students like one of the activities are really fun for them.
In conclusion, students should help together from cooperating together because they can get to know themselves and they can be happy and they award themselves from accomplishing goals that they do is important for them, and if they get all A's they can improving themselves from their teachers saying " Students have accomplished their goals because they are on time to class they respect teachers, and students working and cooperating together of doing kinds of work they like to do is best for them. | 3 | 2 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 |
15F6B5C6229A | I will agree with the Emerson's statement,but this can depend too the point view. This is one of the example:
There is a men who is an entrepreneur and he have a little company,and he decide to make it more big,but he don't know if he is going to do it. If you don't try to do it you will never grow, you have to do new things for you know you will have to try something beyond of you already mastered.
The way I understand this is if you don't try to do something that you already know, you will never learn a new things that you don't know,because there is not way to grow if you don't over pass your self or you don't try it and that is going to provoke that you can't advance to grow or even stock in the way you try to make to grow.
Example: When I was 15 years old, the only thing I did was just studying. Although when I start to think about my future and then I figure out I have to do more than just studying, I have to choose which college I'm going and work to earn money for I can pay my college and expenses I have in my house or personal,because you have to do something for you can over pass your goals or you will never grow.
But some people maybe think or have different opinions about this,perhaps people say like its a lie or you can't do it because it's impossible and also that is fake. Every one don't thing the same, maybe they a different point to see it,they just don't want or they have a another way to grow. The majority of people are going to say yes,because they already lived the moment that if you want to grow, you have to go beyond of the things you already know or you'll never going to trust your self.
My opinion is that maybe this wrote of Emerson is true and the reason why i'm saying this is that you have to do things new and over pass your self ,and doesn't matter if you already mastered something,if you want to grow you have to try it because you can't grow if you don't do different things that you have not idea about how you can grow and make or dominate more things that you can't believe. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 3.5 |
15FD5B635B50 | Did you know 67 percent of people talk to more than one person for advice. They do that because different people might have different views of the situation. Although some people experienced the situation. The advice might be useful for other people too. It can help them agree with the choice or decision they will make.
One reason why some people might ask more than one person for advice is people might have different views of the situation. Some people will have an idea of what to do and some people won't. Some people might tell you to do wrong things. Some people might not know what your going through therefore they will give you bad advice. Some people will know what they are doing so they will give you good advice.
Secondly why people ask more than one person is some people have experienced it or gone through it. They might know what will happen. They might know what you will see and go though during the experience because they probably gone through it.
Finally why people ask more than one person is to make sure that their doing it right or successfully. To make sure that they know what they are doing. To ask their opinions to see if they are thing as you are. To see if you agree with them. They might have a lot in common with with about the situation.
In conclusion why people ask multiple people for their opinions is to see their points of view and to make sure of what you are doing. The people you ask may have experienced it the thing they are going through | 3.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 |
16005A45A20A | There's 90% of people in the world that wants to be someone in life, but some people never had the chance or some people just gave up on school,and now they regret it. In the past few years, there has been many teenagers that go to college and try to do a career that they think they are able to work with, but after few days of studying for that career,they see that that's not for them, and they just drop out. Our schools and our parents have been trying to help us decide what we really want to do in our future before we enter college, that way we don't do the same mistake some people did. Now schools have a program where you get to choose what career you think you are interested in, and see if it's really what you want for your future. That way you have a chance to either stick with it or look for other career you could be interested in.
I want to be able to see if the career I want to take it's really for me or not. I think whatever career someone chooses, it shouldn't just be for the money, it should also be for some that makes you happy and that you are going to be able to stick with your whole life. My friend Generic_Name graduated in 2014, and he started to attend to Generic_school. He studied to be an architect, but the only reason he wanted to be an architect was because he wanted to help his family out with some money. Generic_Name was struggling to be an architect, because it was a lot of math, and he wasn't really good with numbers. What Generic_Name really liked to do was to fix cars with his older brother. He couldn't do it no more, he dropped out of college, and started working with what he knew was gonna make him happy. He worked for a whole year as a mechanic and saved money, that way he could have his own business and help his family out. He finally did it, he has his own business now and whenever there's a problem with my mom's car or my dad's car, we go to him. This is what I'm talking about, he never had the chance to see how hard that career could be and if it was going to make him happy. I don't want to do the same mistake, I want to know what I will be getting into and see if that career really is for me.
If you give me the chance to go,visit,and learn about the career I'm interested in. It does not only help me to see if It's really for me or not but I will also learn new things I didn't know and those things, they could help me in life. I want to be doctor and to get there, you have to go through a lot. As right now, I'm attending to a nurse class where I learn the basic things like knowing how to do blood pressure, learning body parts and learning a lot of vocabulary. I also know three languages: Spanish, English and Latin. After finishing my nursing class, I want to attend to Generic_school, because I've heard their doctor and nursing class is the best. The only reason I want to be a doctor is to help people out and be able to keep them healthy without any problems. My dad wanted to me to be an electrician because that's what he is, but I told him that wasn't really my thing. He taught me all he knew, that way if i ever have a problem with that, I would know what to do. One time i went to a friends house, and it was already 9:00 pm. Out of nowhere, the lights of the all house went off. So what me and my friend did was, turn the flashlight on of our phones to be able to see. His parents were freaking out, because they knew it was late already and there probably wouldn't be any electrician that would pick up the phone. I told my friend that this i could fix this because my dad already taught me how to do it. I called my dad to make sure I was right, since he's the one that knows everything about it. I was able to fix it and turn the lights on again at my friend's house. They thanked me and were surprised for knowing all this kind stuff already. Every career is important, it might not be the one for you but you will always learn new things that will help you in life, like it helped me.
There might be people that say to just look for a job where you get paid well, or people that say a career is too much because you have to study a lot, so I'll just go and work as a waitress. Yes, it is important to try to get a job that pays you well, everyone likes to make money. But if you don't like the job you are doing everyday, then you won't ever be happy with what you are doing. That's why you have to find a job that's really for you. You do have to study a lot to have a career, of course you have to. Because you are not only helping yourself, you are helping other people that's going to need your help. This is why it's important to know what you really want for yourself.
I am writing you this letter because i want to know what I am going to get into, I want to know if this career really is for me, because I want to make sure I stick with my decision. Like I said before, if It's not what I want, then that's okay because I've learned new things that will always help me in life. If it's not for me, then there's always another way, you can look for other career and see if you are interested in. I know there's more people that probably want the same chance as me, but I hope you choose me. It's not just because the money I want this chance but also because I want to help people out. I want an opportunity to see what I really want. | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 |