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Albert Schweitzer is right because the example is not the main thing in influencing others, but people learn how to be respectful, responsible, and thoughtful to others this can be a really good example to people who are around, is a big responsibility when that happen, people sometimes just see what is the bad things other do life sometimes is hard or easy, all depend the decisions what people choose to be better, just every single one know, everything is like that, good decisions, good things will be happened in the life people have all the power in the mind, heart. People know, is the biggest goal to be better day by day and be the good example for a future family. In part is right like what it's said before, every single one is a different world, people can see how others live or sometimes criticize of others life, some people want to copy thing from other may be because are jealous of how other live with good cars, house, clothes, luxury things what others expect to have, no one is perfect but some people appear to have the best life, no body has to have billions of money to be happy if people have love and a big heart and charity to others and is no matter the race, religion or economic position, be the best example for those who need direction in theirs life, young people need orientations, discipline, best prospects of life. This also can be so bad because in the family if the father go out with friends and came back very drunk, the kids may see that, and sometimes the drunk father can be aggressor with the kids and the wife, the father is giving a big bad example to those kids, and this is totally real, if people watch the television and see the news is a lot of people how died every single day not just for aggression in the house also out side when the family are driving and sometimes the father or the mother or both are drunk and they crash the car on the highway, a lot of things, parents have the responsibility if the kids are so little but when the kids growth they will be take their own decisions. Many people change to a good way or a bad one but everyone have to know that is fine the life is only one, everybody is free to take all the depositions what people want, but with clear mind and the responsibility this can effect so much to those who are very closer, more for those who are young, parents are the most important example, there is the rot, parents have the responsibility of educate the kids, talk with theme, be the best friend, that way the kids are learning and expressing the thinks, dreams, and goals for the future, what the kids want to be, kids can think more clearly when the parents are always there giving counsels, talking like a friend. everybody see and criticize each other, sometimes people talk so bad thing, everyone have account people are different than others. Examples ones to others every time, every space in the Earth, everything is important. But what can said! the unique on everyone can trust and the best example is God. That's why no one is perfect in the world. Sometimes the parents can be the best example but when comes the times where people do not want to listen or trust this happened when people fail every single time when try to follow others example, every body has to follow the heart, do what people think is the best decision for be the best example to others.
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Some schools offer distance learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by a way of online or video conferencing. Schools offer this so that students who are troubled or don't like coming to school can still have a right to to learn and it also helps students who are very sickly to have access to all their classes and homework that they missed when their not at school. Some students can not focus in class because they are easily distracted by other students and by these distractions they end up getting bad grades and it causes them to lose hope in school and even what they want to become in life. they could also have something happening outside of school that could affect them to not want to be in school anymore and they can also get bullied by other students which would make them stop coming to school and some kids are just better off staying a home and doing classes at home. These online and distance learning classes can help students get back on track with school and catch up with their work that they missed. The students who want to be home schooled can wake up at anytime that they choose and do the work that is planned for them and the ones that don't like coming to school or the ones that get bullied can stay at home and get their work done without missing class and getting bad grades because of them not being their to do classwork or take test and quizzes. The students who are taking these classes can benefit from these a lot. These programs can help students be able to their work on their own time and a have teacher who can teach them but online like at school and this can help students become independent in being able to do their work and help them stay away from trouble that they could be having at school and give them confidence to be able to do their work. I think this can benefit students because they are in the comfort of their homes and its like a regular class but it just online and you could get all your work done and by that you earn good grades. If students who don't like coming to school,sickly and get bullied,always miss class and get bad grades because their are not their to take tests or quizzes then these online and distance class can benefit them to do work at the comfort of their home. It will also persuade them to not give up on school and give them a right to get their education before they throw it away. These online classes and distance classes can help teach these students as if they were in school and if they work hard enough they can get good grades. These are all reasons why these programs can benefit student.
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Hello, Mr: Principal. I'm writing to you this letter to inform you about our responses about changing the school manu. I'm a senior student in your high school. I really want to thank you about approving the idea of chenging the school manu to a new healthier and bigger one. We really appreciate that. Some of us have a bad experince about the unhealthy food and the schol old manu. one of them is PROPER_NAME he hate the spicy food and once before he tried it by mistake from the cafeteria, his stomach hurt him and he was throwing up all the day, and all of that because of the un healthy food. And also I will tell you sir about my own experince, I still remember, when I was a kid I had one of the worst days on my entire life in the middle school when I decided to eat the new spicy wings with the super hot souce, I went to the hospital and I was very sick for a long time in the home. And all of that because of the unhealthy food such as what our school used to have. Do you know sir, I used to feel unacceptable in the school, just because the food, just because I can not eat like the rest of the students. and I can not enjoy the food with them. I have never tried the school food since that day. the only case I could eat the school food is when the cafeteria have some kinds of soap, and some kind of the none spaicy food. And there is a lot of students have the same case of me, we all are sharing our healthy lunch together, you might before have seen us in the cafeteria while we are setting as a circle. But by your decision, there are more than a hundred of student will turn back to eat in the school cafeteria. We all will be enjoying the new cafeteria manu. Especially because I heard that will be a different types of milk and different type chicken and also I heard from the new chef that you brought him from one of the biggest holtes in Virginia, he told me we will have a few types of salmon fish and others fish types. In my opinion changing the school cafeteria manu was great idea to begin to keep your student health safe, especially your freshman and salphamore students. I know what i'm telling you about the salphamore and the freshmens student very well, because I have my youngest brother his name is Generic_Name, he is addicted to the unhealthy food with the all of this food types, like the fast food. he could eat only the fast food in his life and he would be happy, but his body would not like that. Acctually his body begun to hurt him from now, because he been so fat and he could not move or do ant effort. he eats only the fast food which is the only unhealthy food in the world. he has a problems in his body, his body hurt him because he does not eat a vegetables and he does not has ant vetimans in his body, his body is fery big but is's very weak.and that is what the un healthy food does in our boodies. that is what you sir, saved us from and saved the next students from it. absotutly the healthy food a lot cheper than the unhealthy food. also one of the good thing is the teacher also would like to eat and try the new healthy food. one of the good thing and actually it's the best thing ever is that healthy food will give the student more power than the un healthy food, and also the healthy food will make them paying more attention to the classes and to what the teachers are saying. the new healthy food will be very good thing. I wish if you sir would took this decision 3 years ago, just whaen I was a freshman or when I was a salphamore that would be great if that happend. I can not stop Imagine if that happen I was going to be playing Gym all the summer and in the winter I'm was going to have PE class. That was going to be very good. I wish if that happend before. But htat's fine I still can enjoy the rest of this year with eating a just healthy food from our cafeteria from this new chef. I heard he will add a new typers of food from other countries like France and Egypt and Spain, and Ethiopia also. yeah that is how the school lunch should be like. Do you know Mr: principle that there are about 20 Muslim student in this school who does not eat the old manu food like the bacon and Pig. Do you know Mr: Principal, in our school there are about 50 student or more than that who are vegan, this students used to feel very bad about the old school manu because they could ot eat any food from the cafeteria for all the time they had in the school. But from now and over these students are very happy about your decision. and also the Muslims students now they are happy because they can eat the vegan food and a least they can eat the chicken and the others food. Actually I know there are a lot of student will arguement with you about your decision. but they still young to understand that, they still too young to look for thier health and the healthy food and the unhealthy food. But, acctualy they will appreciate that very well when they became adults. Mr: the principale thank you, thank you about looking for our health. thank you for being acceptable for the new ideas.
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One topic that is frequently debated today is schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing would be benefit to student or not. Some people believe school should offer this program for students that need time for their morning routine. They feel that it would help students for do not need to have to wake up early and go to school. I believe distance learning program that school offer for students would not be benefit to students because students will not have a skill to communicate with other people, it will make students have less enthusiasm, and some students family did not have no internet or device to watch the video online teaching. One reason why schools should not offer the distance learning program because it would make student get less skill from communicate with other people. When students go to school they will meet friends have a communication with each other or talk to their teacher. Communication is an important for every type of jobs. Communication is one of the most important thing that should have inside the lesson because every job or every company will hiring people that have good skill to communication with other people. Communication is almost every where inside the school but if school have to consent to have the distance learning program, it will affect to student to get a job by taking students away from their communication with other people. Another reason why schools should not offer the distance learning program because it will make students have less enthusiasm to learn. Every morning students have to wake up early and get ready for school is one of the practice thing that will let student get ready for outside the world. Enthusiasm is one of the most thing that will help students to have more responsibility to their job or their self. Lack of the enthusiasm will make students have a lack of responsibility to their job or their self. However, if school consent the distance program it will make student get a lack of the enthusiasm and it will make students get lack of the responsibly to take care even them self. Final reason why schools should not offer the distance learning program because some students did not have device or Internet at home to watch the online or video conferencing. There are many family that did not have the Internet at home and they will not be able to attend the classes at home and will not be able to watch the online or video conferencing. It will not be fair to the outer family that do not have a internet or device to get into the online or video conference to the family that have the internet or device to use. Therefore, school should not consent the distance learning program to make all the students equally. As you have read, I believe distance learning program that school offer to students would not be benefit to students and affect to students by take students to the bad position. School is the learning place for students to get a knowledge. If we are going to have only the online teaching, school will not exist. Only when we value the learning in class, communicating with friends, and being equal with other we will feel that school is a good place for studying and getting the knowledge. On that day the world will better to have school full with students that have a good knowledge and ready for out world.
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Students work hard there is no arguing that. They have schoolwork, homework, extracurricular and maybe work, all these things make a students life stressful so it is important that they get a break every once in a while. I believe that students should get a long summer break, instead of a year-round school year, because, firstly, there are other activities that can be done during the summer that keep students minds active, secondly their health is at risk and lastly, summer break is beneficial to school staff as well. From time to time, people need to get a break from their day-today life they need to take a moment to relax and enjoy their life and maybe discover an interest that they may have. Although school is important and necessary for success later on in life, so are outside experiences that can contribute to the development of a student's 'real life skills'. During summer break there are multiple activities that can be done in order to keep a student's mind active, whether it may be sports, summer camps, summer jobs etc. All these activities allow for their minds and bodies to stay active. Eventhough, they are not keeping their brains engaged in terms of school work and studying they are exposing themselves to new activities that might require them to think critically, open-mindedly and collaboratively; which I feel is essential for real life. For example, a student might be at summer camp and they are put in a group with four strangers and are given a challenging task that requires them to collaborate with the other member of the group, critically analyzing the situation and coming up with solutions and be open-minded to listening and trying to understand the perspectives of their peers. This also reflects their environment in school therefore, it can be said that they are keeping their minds active while outside of school. Although, not all students might be involved in activities outside of school, some are taking a break from the stress of life itself. Due to all the demands in their life during the school year summer break is a good way to take a breather and take care of themselves mentally. Depression has been very common in teenagers in recent years, and although it may not be entirely due to the stress of school, school does contribute to the detirriation of their mental health. In addition, over-working ones self has negative impacts overall whether they are depressed or not. Too much stress in ones life can have negative effects on their health overall. High blood pressure, hypertension, severe weight loss are a few examples of the effects stress. Furthermore, when stressed our body releases a neurotransmitter called Cortisol, this neurotransmitter in excess can impair a persons thinking and reaction time; which is very important for students as they are required to think in order to complete school work and homework, therefore, if they dont take breaks their grades are probably going to drop due to their inability to think effectively, further contributing to their detirriating mental health. Lastly, summer break is and essential time for everyone that is involved in schools, such as teachers, administrators, councilors etc. Although schools are intended to educate students, its the school staff that make this possible. This is why we need to give our school staff a break because all the points I stated above also applies to them. In addition, with a long summer break teachers are able to have more time to thoroughly think about their lesson plans for their students as well as have an extended amount of time to live their lives and enjoy time with their family and friends, after all, teachers are humans too and they need to be able to life their lives and forget that they are required to do so much for such little pay. To emphasize further, I believe that schools should give students a long summer break instead of a year-round school year because a students mind will stay active during the summer through various activities that require students to think open-mindedly, critically and collaboratively. Also, students need a break in order to de-stress for the sake of their health mentally and physically. Lastly, a long summer break is needed for school staff as well because they also need to take a break, as well as the students.
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The first impression is always imposible to change; I agree with this statement because most of the time people judge on youas you look and it is always on the mind of the person for example: the kind of clothes that you had been dreessed, the way that you speak and the face expression of that person. As, peopple dreessed define their personality. If you have requiered to atttend to a meeting at work with the bosses of your boss, and dressed that is neccessity its not appropiated, they may judge on you and they could said that you are not a proffesional worker, or a formal person. To get full attention people forgat a good value adecuated at the time of wave, meet, and speak with the other person. One reason is the major or important for people, and is the way the people communicated with others always matter because represent they selfs. The expresssion with the face when someone meet others for the first time is never forget like when they heard your name, even the smile of the person most of the case represent the character of a person. All of all, the way that you present with others at the first is how you are going to be remember, but are we good judgen people only for the first impression that we made about it?.
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Having good aditude is very important in life beacuase thats what u would need to have in many things, childhood and adult hood etc. Why having a good aditude is very important is say for example, if ur trying to apply for a job, its good to have a good aditude at all times is because if ur looking foward to get the job and have good adidute and be pacient, theres a higher chance you will get the job. My second reason on why having good aditude is important is that say that u didnt get the job, always stay cool and not try the flash out on anyone or even put it on anyone because you can always try again and theres always jobs that are hiring and available. There are many benifets of good aditude but few benefits are making friends, having a good life with no hate in your heart, get hired at jobs u apply at and many more. Benifets of having bad aditute can lead u to a place you wont like places like Jail if u talk back and not follow instructions or evan go to jail for not paying ur bills, get a office referal for not following directions and doing bad in school too. I've also witnessed bad aditude and good growing up. As in fifth grade I wasnt the best kid but I made bad decision and talk back at the teachers etc and that lead my mom taking away my ps4 so i cant play on it untill I fix what im doing. Also I remember when i was little, in church that if me and my siblings did good and behaved at church that my mom will buy us one candy each at a gas station of our choice so we followed that and had good aditude through out the whole church sessions continusly through out the times we attended church. Before my mother passed thats one of the many things she've taught me and my siblings to always have good aditude is because u can acomplish anything u worked hard at and respect people around you and a holy place like church. Now you know that having good aditude can effect not just you but people around you and your future.
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Some schools use cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes to allow students to use their phone in class but also some schools doesn't like students having their cell phones in class or educational purposes. In addition, students can get distracted while the teacher is talking or just in general but students should use their cell phones in the classroom for educational purposes because if student needs help finding a word, students can use for emergency, and students can use their phones to check on theirs grades and any missing work. First, If students need help finding a word, they can look it up on their phones for example, if the word is apple they can look for the definition and use it for resource. Second, if the student has an emergency therefor, students can contact their parents if the student isn't feeling well or any problems. Third, students can check on their phones to see if they have any missing work or any grades fix furthermore, if students can't remember if they turned in their papers, they can check on their phones to see if they turned it in. If the student has a F in the class and if students can't use their phone how will they know what grade they have in that class. In conclusion, I strongly agree to let student have their cell phones in the classroom because of those reasons. Some other students likes listening to music while they work because they can focus better. The students also can prove that they use their cell phones wisely in class.
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" How would pairing older students with younger students in school be helpful for both older and younger students?" When I was in elementary school in Zambia I skipped 4th grade and went in 5th grade and it was challenging for me to keep up with the work in 5th grade. I was used to doing the same work as the other 4th graders in my school however things changed when I skipped 4th grade to 5th grade. When I got in 5th grade I started doing harder work than I did in 4th grade, I started getting lower grades than I did in 4th grade. When I was in 5th grade (where there were older people than me) I had to work hard to be at the same level as the other 5th graders. This was like taking college classes in high school. Pairing older students with younger students in school will help both the older and younger students because the younger students will be able to learn from the older students, the older students will learn how be good examples for the younger students, and the older students will encourage the younger students to keep learning and become good examples when they grow up. When younger students are paired with older students, the younger students will be able to learn from the older students. Generally speaking kids are most likely to follow what older people are doing. In this case if older students are paired with younger students the younger students will learn good manners from the older students. Younger students will learn many things from the older students such as: good behavior, hard work, kindness, and etc... When I'm sitting around elder at home I learn a lot about different countries and cultures in the world. For instance, when the elders are talking about what is happening in Congo - a country in Africa - I learn about the economy in Congo and its government. It is just like learning in my Civics class at school. This is beneficial for me because I get learn and share about is going in some other places with my Civics teacher. When older students are paired with younger student, the older students will learn how to be good examples for the younger students. Being a good example for younger kids is best for what the will do and be in the future hence, it is why my parents tell me to be the good example for my younger my younger brothers by being well behaved and respectful so that my younger bothers will learn from my behavior. My AVID teacher told me that when his son was young he taught him that boots were bananas and bananas were boots therefor his son knew that boot were bananas and bananas were boots. According to what AVID teacher told me in the pasted sentence it shows that kids do what elders do. It is really important for older people to be good examples for the younger ones. When older students are paired with younger students, the older students will encourage the younger students to keep learn in school and become good examples when they grow up. Additionally when older students are paired with younger students it will encourage the your students to work hard and on the same level as the older students. I have a friend who skipped 7th grade at my school. When I asked her how she was doing in 8th grade, she said at first it was really hard for her to maintain her grades. But she encouraged herself to work hard and get good grades. She had to study every night and on the other hand she had work to do at home. It became challenging for her to keep up with both school work and work she did at home. Ultimately from all her hard work she got a scholarship for college while in middle school. Pairing older kids with younger kids in school is helpful for both the older students and the younger students because the younger students will be able to learn from the older students, the older students will learn how to be good examples for the younger students, and the older students will encourage the younger students to keep learning in school and become good examples for others when they grow up. How would your life be like being in a place where there are no elderly people to learn from? We should always be good examples for younger people so that they can learn from us.
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I think that I would chose to be a nurse for the school to make sure that students will be safe in and out of school. I want It to be somewhere that students can come and talk to me whats wrong. I think that if I get this job I will take It and learn from it ,so I would like to see the manger to see if he approves of It. I would also want to go to a good collage to get the education to be a nurse. It is going to be hard to get this job ,but I am going to work for it as hard as I can. I also have to put in a lot of effort into this job to get it. It would at least take me about four years to be in a collage to help me study about how to be a nurse. Being a nurse will be difficult in a many ways, but it's a matter of learning of how to do something. I would say its a better idea if I study longer it would be a most likely that I would get the job. More ways to be a nurse is by being organized because you need to know what the students need to become a nurse. Also I would need to listen to directions because you can mess up because it's an important job. There are a lot of pros and cons about being a nurse because it's a job where you can mess up you can get into serious trouble. It takes a lot of time to be things that you want to be ,but everything takes times ,so I would say being something that you enjoy and think if you can do it. I would definitely want to be a nurse in a school to prove to the manager that I can do it. Hopefully the manager can take this into conservation if I could get this job. I would show to make schools better by having a fantastic nurse taking care of students when they aren't feeling well at school. I would like all students to feel safe to have a nurse that is there to help them when they aren't feeling great at school. I hope I can be a great nurse ,and so I can get the job to become someone great in there school. Thank you and I hope I can the job.
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Your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. words that The British naturalist and politician John Lubbock wrote. Do we choose our own character traits, or is our character formed by influences beyond our control? My position is that we choose our own character traits. Why because Your character will be what you are and who you are. Your charcter will be what you yourself choose to do. A reason is each person has there own way of being who they are. There is diferent types of characters that make each person unique in there own way. I also think that there is character formed by influence. there is alot of character that we can have. Many have very little and many have alot of character. example some people have a very sweet chacter in something they love or some people have a diffrent charcter trait that dont like to show it . character traits is away to show your personality. When you go to a job interview the person that is taking your interview is looking at your characteristic is seeing how you are if you have a good charateristic or if you have a bad charcteristic. You are going to show your chacteristic by the way you inturduce yourself by the way you speak your body laguage. You are going to do what you feel conterble in doing. Many ask you to descibe yourself and by what you say they see if that is your charcteristic. Character Traits are one of the ways that descibe how we are as a person. For example people describe me as a shy person that likes to help that is always offering to help. I also get descibed as a person that gets mad easily but does its best to not show it as much and pretents nothing has happeaned. Thats how some people descibe me. For me charcter traits is something that is you that makes you special in some way. everywhere you go there is going to be someone seing your chacteristic. You make your own chacter, its something you do that describes who you are. Depending in how you feel thats what you going to show which is your charcter trait it all depends in us we make our own character trait in the way we feel and act. its important to always show a good atitud for we can be described in a good way and try to have some good charcter trait for we can have a good reputation in life. For example John Lubbock wrote "your character will be what you yourself choose to make it. Is very true we all make our own character and that makes us who we are and is something that makes you speical and the way you are. Many people dont think that the charteristic is not as important they dont pay much attention to it because they maybe just like the looks but the charter has so much to say. charcter is not only in humans its also in animals. you describe a animal by its charcter by the way they act and take things. its very important to see the diffrents charateristic. Many people when they go out with someone first they ask people what kind of personality that person they are going out with or wanting know. you can tell even by there looks and there body languge what kind of chacteristic they have because everyone makes there own charater.
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Some school district offer programs that allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. There are three reasons why students may want to take this chance. First reason is that they may need to help there family out. The second reason is that the students don't want to be in school for so long. Third reason is that the students may want to go to college at a early age to get that over with at a early age and get a good financial job. They would be able to get full-time jobs at a early age with a high school diploma. First of all one reason that it may be good for the students to graduate early because they may need to help out there families. The students parents may work but they need that extra help for their kid. Because, they are not financially good with money. So graduating a year early may help the students help out there family's. If students need to help there families out and they finish with school early they dont have to worry about having to go to school they can just work so that they can help there families out. Another reason is that the students want to graduate school early because they don't want to be in school for so long. Students sometimes just want to start making money so they want to get over with school. They may have a job but the part-time may not get them a lot of money. So if they finish school in three years they can start working at a full-time job early and start making the money that they really want to make. Students would love to finish school in three years because they dont want to keep on going to school. Last reason why students may want to graduate early is because students may want to go to college at a early age to get that over with at a early age and get a good financial job. Students may know what they want to become when they are older and would like to start going to college at a early age so it would benefit they if they could finish high school in three years. Also they would have a good financial job at a early age. They can also start living be them self wants they have a good financial job and out of college at a early age. Also would make good money at a early age. In conclusion, these are three good reason why students would like to finish high school in three years. They can start helping there families at a early age because they may need the help. Also that students may not want to be in high school for so long. Finishing school at a early age they may start going to college at a early age and also get a good job at a early age. They would be able to get full-time jobs at a early age with a high school diploma.
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Some students would be more excited about having a longer summer vacation, it can give the students a longer time to spend with their families and friends, but if we think in a positive side it also means that having a longer break i could be most likely be a reward for those who has been studying hard throughout the whole entire year that deserves to get a vacation or a break of getting away from everything that has them stressing out over paper or either having to worry about their grades, which is good for students to knows how serious and important their education is so, they can success in the future all full of opportunities knowing what do to when it comes to face their problems alone base on what they have learn. For example in this Prompt educators thinks that students do not seem to retain what they have learn during the year when they are coming back to school after their break, they seem not know about anything or forget about stuff, which is true people to not appear to be thinking about things that might stress them out, instead they try to have fun with their love ones, and of course try to read some books every other day or read the news papers so you wont be left behind on what is actually going on in the world, perhaps we might forgot about stuff younger people are faster learners and thinkers, can not be able to forget about important information that easy. Most of the students usually travels a lot during summer vacation out of the state or they like to visit different countries, so yes basically what i'm trying to say is that a longer break or summer vacation is a good idea for those in specific who travels far away so it can give them enough time to explore wherever they going to be staying, and this can even be helpful for students to learn about different history, experiences, explore and this are some stuff that they can even share with their friends in school or with their teachers, that it can improve more their knowledge. Being away from school just for at least one month it can really effect anyone, I think that this could be effecting on just depending on how distracted you will be during the break, some students can't even call it a "break" or "vacation" because some of them would rather to take this time to earn a little bit of money to be able to effort for their needs and expenses, or they might have responsibilities to take care of,Others likes to volunteer in community services or try to be involve in different activities that will keep you busy. In respond to everything i do think that having a longer summer vacation would be good enough to catch up as much as we can with our old friends and families maybe when we were in school we was't able to see them enough because some of our love ones live far away from us so we take our time to spend every little moment we have lost while we were way and it benefits everyone in general, not just for students.
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Yes you should learn wisdom and experience to understand. To learn people what thier life about. people could have a hard time about thier life. understand thier race. Know people religen and culture. people could be specal. The people will learn about deaf people. people can unferstand about the life kinda. people can be specal like thier brain and their body. Sometimes people have bad things in thier brain. You can understaed about them. Some kids use differet lageged. Some people don't know engesh. people can use thier hands to talk. People can be shy , chill , crazey or mean. You really need to know about feeling. Sometimes people don't know what's going on. My big brother name Generic_Name share a lot about his wisdom. He told me that he is getting stronger. I told him how and how do you know. He told me that there has a job that you really need to carry heving stuff. That he knows that. I learn eveything what he said. My borther was kinda crazey when he said that. Sometimes my big brother is not chill. 5 mouths ago my big brother was so mean to me for no reason. I told him why what wroug with you. He told me why and I understand him. Today my bif brother is now chill I think because I don't really see him that much. My big brother is always busy and I wanted to help him. How do I help him. I clean the room many times. I do the socks and clean the dirty clothes and get the room ready for him , so he can relax. My famliy is really happy what I did for my big bother. They say why did you do that. I told them because Generic_Name worked really hard he is never home. He plays soccer , goes to work and goes to clases to get ready for collage that is a big thing for him. My big brother tells me some things to keep me heathy and lose some whight. he said that happend to me. He share a lot of things to me. He said you got this I belive in you. I thought my big brother don't care about me because he always mean to me and I see why, he do care about me and I can see that. you will understand about thier wisdom and experience. if you learn about wisdom and experience.
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The use of technology has a positive effects on people's lives, it help us to get ready by doing our jobs faster, we dont lose the much time in communicating, we don't need to worry about losing paper work. Using technology makes our work easy and faster, it makes easy and fast by sending email, so that way some important documents the we send to our partners or coworkers without going to there office or making a meeting and these is because using email and we are saving time too, it's a easy way to send documents because they are always in time, we can't stop the use of paper and that way, we are helping the environment and us. Communicating it's a issue for many people and that is why using technology help then out because some people are scare to talk to their partners about task and critical information for the job, they get nervous and make then feel uncomfortable by talking to then, however the technology it's simple way to solve problem or communicated sending a email about the issues and there it's no oral and physical communication with other. The technology is us full and offered us many way to save important project, document, data and presentation, we are sure by saving those document in a flash drive or the computer are safe, other example are students, so we save our projects, presentation and letters in office 365 and that is a good place to save our important task without worrying about loosing then. Some say that the use of technology is a negative effect on people lives, but they are wrong because makes our work more efficiently, we can do presentation in PowerPoint and take or get the information from the internet,we can buy stuff the we want in the internet and we don't need to worry of going to the store, and even set business or create one, publish information about jobs and look for employs.
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Generic_Name had a job interview last week, that same day in the morning her phone fell off her bed,and it got completely broken. Generic_Name had no way to communicate with the employer; However, when Generic_Name got to the place where she was going to be interviewed,she explained what happened and it was the reason why she was late to her job interview and she was sorry for it,because her phone was really expensive Generic_Name had a bad attitude with the employer even though it was not the fault of the employer. Because of the bad attitude of Generic_Name,she had the result of not obtaining the job Generic_Name always dreamed of. Since that day Generic_Name controls her attitude and learned that a positive attitude is the key to success in life even if we are having hard times. If an individual thinks that a positive attitude is not the way to be successful relax because there are a lot of ways to show him or her that a positive attitude is the success in life. A positive attitude is the key to success in life because of better opportunities and a non-stressed life. To begin with, a positive attitude is the key to success in life because of better opportunities. Society might have no problems at school or at any place they go if they have a good attitude and know how to control themselves. For example, my cousin Generic_Name since she was little was a really good student, and always had great comments from her teachers because of her attitude and effort at school. Last year when Generic_Name graduated from Generic_School, a lot of important people offered her to work with them because they have seen the way Generic_Name was a great students, even though when she was on her bad days she always had a good attitude. Some people might say that a positive attitude is not the key to success in life because it can lead people to have some opportunities of good works and also to have friends, but they are wrong because having a good attitude all the time will help people to have greater opportunities at work as well at school. Also that people could never have any complain for having a bad attitude because they know how to control themselves. To continue,a positive attitude is the key to success in life because of a non-stressed life. Having a positive attitude can lead people to have a better future in their lives. Also, my neighbour Generic_Name used to live in California where he had no friends because Generic_Name was really shy. Since Generic_Name moved to Virginia with his Mom Generic_Name and his brother Generic_Name,he have met a lot of people at school and also in his neighborhood, which now they are friends. Generic_Name used to be really quiet because he was scared of what people might think about him, but lately he have made a bunch of new friends and have a happy and non-stressed life he no longer thinks about what people is going to judge him;Nevertheless, Generic_Name have learned that a good attitude of the key to success in life. Generic_Name is happy because his son has a great attitude and he is doing better at school now. To conclude, because of better opportunities and a non-stressed life, a positive attitude is the key to success in life. A positive attitude help teachers,students,employers,employees as many others. A good attitude is the result of a great education and by that attitude you can reach good thing in life, some things you never thought you could have. Next time, when an individual who is always alone it is because that person is just shy but might have a great attitude, go and talk to him and you will know how awesome that person is.
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Have you experience taking online classes from home? students who plans to take online classes from home they would have to learn to be more responsible and dedicated. Could students benefit by taking online classes from home, Yes I think it would be fantastic idea taking classes from home, it would be a great way to learn without having to leave your house or worrying you wont get to school on time. Home school can get you more prepare by learning and working on time managment,by woking on time managment prepares you for future jobs. For example I have friend that does home schooling she tried going to a regular school but didnt feel comfortable her parents decided to try home schooling, she ended up loving it,she had more time do other activities, its a great idea because you could prevent bullying from happening. Imagen not having to leaving youre home, students would have more energy because they wouldn't be as exausted. Cerain students have walk miles not matter the bad weather. If students take online classes they could get more sleep and finish there work faster. students would be able to concentrate. In school you get distracted a lot because you have friends next to you trying to talk or make caos also interupting the class. Not having energy for school is a big factor specially for student who work and walk to school in the mornings. if student dont have the enery to go to school learn they would not be able to get good grades. a clear example is myself having to wake up every morning at seven am and walking thirty min to school and also working every day is exausting not matter the weather. Its really hard trying to stay awake in the mornings after walking a certain distance. Thats why i would prefer online studying as well it would change my life completely and i would feel more ready to do work. in conclusion online classes is a great way to study if you dont feel comfortable going to school. I would take online clases its less tiring its a great rest having the time to do my work from home and expirience a new way to study.
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Examples are the main thing to influence others because the best way to show other people is to give them one example about your own experience and what you learned from that example in your life. Other may think that examples are not the main thing in influencing other. Because there are many others way by influencing others. Others don't want to share what happens in their life for examples. The best way to show other people is to give them one example about your own experience. There are many other ways but example is more important. You let other people know something that you have learn it. For example, My parents are taking about them self last night their was taking about how can I influence my family in the future. They said, that the is a best way to influence them is through examples in my own experience. What you learned from that examples in your life. Give other examples from what you learn in your own life would be a good way to influence that people. There are many people that are passing about what you had passing through. For example,Angie my best friend is in drugs and I don't want that she happens what happen to me. So, I give her a example about my experience in drugs that what happens to me is going to happen with her if she continue to consuming drugs. In conclusion, Example is the main thing to influence other because the best way is through examples. You learn from the example in your life. Many people need to know our experience to know what are they doing. people want to know the consequences of what is going to happen to them based on our experience.
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Image having to do a activity for school. Your principal is making everyone do an activity and it is not good because some kids need rest and some do not like to do and kind of sport or activity. Also kids need time to relax and do things they want to do. Kids need rest because they already do lots of work and they need to have energy to do any activity. Also kids like to rest and not do activity's resting make them do activity's so they need to rest. Kids like to hang out with there friends and talk when they do activity's they will not be able to talk to each other and hang out is like resting because they are not going to run and do stuff they like having fun talking to each other. resting is a good thing for kids because they need energy for other stuff. A lot of kids like to play indoors and not do activity's. kids like to play video games with friends and they have fun. Also there are kids that dont like going outside and like staying in inside they can read play games play with friends because they might have not any interest in anything or not might have many friends to play with in an activity. Kids don't like doing stuff that have to do with activitys they like doing there own thing. Your princpal makes you do activity for school. kids need rest and some kids just don't like doing activity's. I think making themdo an activity is not good if i was the principal i would let them do what they want to do if they want to stay insidethats ok if they are tired thats ok if they want do club they can.
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Should be students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home? Well,I think students can be benefit this program,if they can work at home by the way of online or video conferencing,because students have more opotuniry to study like have more time to work,they don't need to walk or take a bus to come school,can be more effect to students,students can feel better when they try to stury because in his home there is not people talking a lot abuot things,but people talking not about the class. Also student can choose the time to they can star the classes,because some students have to work in a job,so when is cold outside and students they don't like to come school,they can wort at home by the way of online or video conferencing,students can be more responseble or maybe not is depent what class of student are you,but the things is there is a lot reasons of benefit for stundents can have that classes. Some students feel good working at home,there is not streess for them,they can take a break,they can eat and his work. They spend more the energy of his mind etc... I think the best option for students to attend classes from home by the way of online or video coferencing to learn. But also is depent waht classes student do you are,because some student are lazy when they work at home. Also parent can check his work in look if they do his work good or bad,take classes online is one think like because for me is more aesy to do my homework,so inconclution students have benefit from being able to attend classes from home.
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Accomplish your dreams and you will have many opportunities. Opportunities don't always just come like magic you have to work for them. One thing I want to accomplish in the future is going to college because I want to study for the job I want, I will also find more job opportunities, and I also will get a good amount of money. I want to study for a job after college. by going to college I can study whatever I want for whatever I want to do in the future. If I study hard enough I will have a good future. The more I study the better. Because I can have a future without a lot to worry about. If I dont study I could end up having a poor job. If I have a poor job I will have to worry a lot more about how I'm going to pay this and that. So at the end its better to work hard when you the opportunity because it will pay off after in life. After college I can have I can have better job opportunities. When you go to college you have more experience on what you want to work as. The more you know the more job opportunities you have. When you look for a job they look at everything about you. When they see you went to college they will want you at their company. If you go to college you can study something you like and you know you will want to do in the future and then you will have two options. One of the options would be to look for a big company and work there or start your own company. going to college gives you two options starting your own company or look for a big company to work in. When you go to college you have better job opportunities and will get well payed. After college you can look for a big company and you will get well payed. With the money you get you can pay all your bills and keep the rest to your self. With a good job you get good money and you can help those who need it the most. You can help your family or people in the streets. With the money your get you can even start you own company. Starting your own company will take time but you will succeed. When you accomplish your dreams help does who need to be helped. My accomplishment is to go to college for many good reasons. You go to college to get a good job and get payed well. If you accomplish you dreams help others accomplish their with all the things your are provided and let them know that just like you help them to accomplish their dreams they should help others too.
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"Hey I had fun reading this book with you" , younger student said. Kids especially younger ones love the older students because they make everything cool and fun. Since some schools have a program where they pair up a younger and older student together to help both of them. The program could help both of them learn something cool, interesting and the older ones can learn how to assist a kid and could share different opinion that they can't share front of the teacher about learning. One way the program can help both younger and older student is by. They both can learn about something they have never learned or what they young want to learn about. Younger kids can teach the older ones how to say different stuff that they are learning. The older can each them what they are learning in class. This could be a mini deal that both have with each other and it could help. Another way the program can help both younger and older student is by. The older ones are almost ready for job. He could learn more about how to control a kid and teach them or assist them. The younger kid could tell them ways and teach them. This could lead to a good bounding with older students. I think they would see each other after years and be like I know who you are you were the one who assisted me. Last way the program can help both younger and older student is by. The feeling a student has is like why are we doing this. Is this even related to anything. They would able to give there opinion what they think about the topic or subject. Mostly students are shy front of class, but that would be only person to person, they won't be shy. This could help the students explain there self. I think it would make both of them feel comfortable. I think this program would help alot of the students confident to talk to people and learn in a fun way. This help alot of people I am one of them. When I was in 6th grade I was a reading, so I read books with my reading buddies it was fun. You get help in subject you need help in it makes everything easy. This program could help you in different problems you have. It will incourage you to learn more, so you can tell your helper.
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To me its more beneficial working as a group. I have a few reasons why its better working with a group rather then working alone you can learn from one another also be motivated to learn as a group. Making new friends can be tough but when you are but in a group you can make friends with each other. One thing in a group that can be good and bad is having disscustions with the group. There are many reasons why i prefer working with a group and im hear to share with you. Working with a group is all about sharing new ideas and discovery with your group that some people didn't know about. With a group everyone would get good grades and ace their exams. Some people in your group may have the same intrest as you and would like to study that objective more and being motivated by one another. In my opinion working with a group is more simpler and fun at the same time and kids will enojy learning that way. One small little problem about working with a group is having disscustions about the subject that the group is talking about. They with all disagreements but also argree with each other . The group tends to get mad maybe because someone in the group said something the other didn't like and would have a argument. There are more pros then cons in working with a group for sure . Everyone has a different saying if its beneficial to either work with a group or work alone . I'm not at all saying working alone is a bad thing on the contrarie its also good because sometimes you might not get along with the group you got asand with and you just wanna do your work alone. Working in a group though brings you toghter as a school and theres nothing better then working in a team.
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Students are expected to identify a career,however students to commit to a career at a young age. Students should to commit to a career at a young age. They have to study more. Students will be haveba lot homework to do. They have to working hard. Some student taking a career at a young age. Some students commit to a career at a young age. Then they have to study more to get good grades. Other things they have to focus in this career it's a important for their lifes. The students have to study everyday bacause they have the apportunity in their hands. The students sometime commit to a career at a young age. Students wil have a lot homework to do. In this school give to students the opportunity, but they wiil get a lot homerwork to do. If the students no have jod they can do their homeworks anytime. The homeworks sometimes the teachers explain or they can helping if the students have question how to make a homework. Students will have a lot homework to do. The students have to working hard to get gread grades. Sometimes the students feel tired becuase they were not sleep for study and work. Just they get focus in this career never give up. Always positive nothing is easy in this life everything have his risk. The students have to do their best in this career. Students should to commit with a career at a youg age. That's very good idea get ready early. For the future of the students than take this career. This career helping to people see their future that shows what we want to be. Students should to commit to a cereer at a young age. This is my essay maybe I don't did it perfect, but I try; Thanks
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Creativity comes with great mind! Summer projects can be fun, if only they were chosen by students. If the students were to pick their own projects depending on the subject; they would be interested, more likely to do it, and enjoy as well. teachers spent a whole summer or a school year coming up with a topic for the students to do during the summer. And, it turns out that the students aren't giving it much though or effort towards their given assignment. That can be waste of the teachers time and energy, but if the students were to come up with a topic and idea of their own they would do the project. if students were to choose their project, they would more likely to do it because its on something they want to learn and their curious. when students are curious they tend to explore their curiosity and be more drawn in the subject and want learn more about it. students can come up with great ideas when comes to doing their own projects. choosing a topic of your interest in a projects can explore students mind, and do the things they would never though of doing. The summer project can improve your grades in the class. for example a student that struggles a lot in class either because the they cannot keep with pace in class, with summer projects they can work on their own pace. and if students are not great at working in environment full students this gives the a chance to do in depended study. summer project can give an opportunity for students to increase their greats. if students were to chose their own assignment they could at pace that worked for them, and they wouldn't have to worried about due time date. students would have the whole summer to finish the project, and if they did not finish it, when they an entire summer to do it, now that's just being lazy and it can effect their grade. Subject can have a great impact on the student. If student is given an assignment on a certain subject their is a chance they would start procrastinate or not do it at all. therefore they would have zero interesting on doing the summer assignment. for example if i had a history project and a science project. And if my science teacher were to give me a project to do a research paper on how gene mutate, as interesting that sounds i would not do it because science does not fascinate me as history. Being able to choose a project of your own can be fun that way, it gives a student to look forward to do their work and be more fascinated it. Students should design their summer project; because that's less work on the teacher, it gives them an opportunity to just think outside their box, and they can make their teachers proud for doing their work, so they can look forward a better school year.
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phones i think phones should be allowed in school because if you forgot like a book or something you could call your parents to go get it so you don't get in trouble in class or if your like sick you can call your parents or guardian to bring your medicine because you can't get your medicine in school or if your lost in like a field trip you can call your parents to pick you up and without a phone you'll be lost or get in trouble or and that's why phones in school but i think it should be turned off during class other then that you won't get lose or get busted for not having any supplies but with a phone you won't get lost or miss anything you need for school and that's why i think phones should be allowed in school. and nothing will happen to you but if you have a phone I think you'll good or maybe even if you have tutoring and your mom doesn't show up or forgot you can call her and that's why i think phones should be allowed in school.
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Would you like to have more school?. I will be writing about weather, I would like more school or not. I disagree because some, kids don't get enough sleep. I disagree because some, kids don't get enough sleep. some kids stay up, late because of electronics, helping someone, or watching TV. some kids have to help their parents, do some work like farmers or cooking. some kids lose, track of time like me. Some kids have afternoon activities. Some kids are tired of school but if they make, it longer kids would be even more tired. It would give, students less time to take breaks at home. Grades would get worst because, the students get less time to take a break. Some kids would get home really late. the school buses sometimes, take an hour to drop of a kid but if they add an hour and a half those, kids would get home peaty late. some kids won't have enough time to do their homework, because they are going to get home late. Some kids would not have time to do stuff because after getting of the bus late some, kids have to help around the house or their parents when they get back. Some kids will not have a lot of time to see parents of friends. Some kids get out late because of bus or after school activities and they will not, have a lot of time left. Some kids will bot have a lot of time to get out, because of school and they will need to do their homework. In conclusion I disagree with the prompt because, i don't want to have a lot of school in a single day.
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Benefits of attending public schools Imagine a child or student taking classes at home. How would his or her parents feel? Would home school be helpful for their child? Is homeschooling important for thier child than public schools? Students would benefit to attend classes in school rather than attending class at home because students can become active, getting enough information, and having the ability to share ideas. Attending public schools can persuade students to become active. Teachers can also persuade students to become active as well. Teachers wants students to have fun. For an example, physical education, or for short PE. It is a program in school for children to have exercise and training. Teachers would allow students to play inside or outside. Even if students do not want to participate. Not only schools let students become active in class, but also offers information to students who need help. Getting information can help students to become better at understanding things that students learned in school. It is important to know why students want to learn. For an example, students staying after school for help. Staying after school can help students study for a test. If a student needs help or needs more information, do not be afraid to ask for help. A teacher will be there to help you. Teachers can give their best to answer student's questions. Not only schools can persuade students to become active and offers information to students, but also shares ideas. Sharing ideas can help students as well. Students can share their ideas other students. For an example, completing assignments in a group. Students love being with partners or group to solve problems. Students would listen to others student's opinion or debate and see if they agree or disagree. It is always helpful to be with a group and not be alone by yourself. In public schools, students can become active, can get information that they need, and let students share their ideas. That is why it is important for children to go to school. Home schools are different than public schools. Home schools can be very challenging for some students. A student working alone with no partner, not being active, and not getting enough information from parents. Imagine a student being in that position. How would she or he feel? Public schools would be the best option for children. Imagine if every student went to school, their would be a positive change in their future. School can build student's knowledge everyday and to do it is by learning.
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What if i been asked to share a lesson with elementary school students example .My lesson will be about what they want to be when they grow up . and how will they make that become true? One reason that this is important is because students need to know what they want to be and what they want to do when they grow up so when they go to school every day they know what they are working hard for. For example when they go to school they are going to be thinking about why they are in school for and how can they make their dream become true. another example is that they are going to be ready because they all ready know what they want because every day they went to school and they ask them self what do i want for my family? ,what do i want for my life ? why am i doing this for ?. they will not forget why they are in school for because they will have a goal for school. Another lesson I will tell them is that they need to do do their best in school because when they grow up they will need it on a everyday life. A reason why they have have to try their best in school is because when you grow up you will need it for everything you will need math,reading, writing and more .One example is that when you go to pay a bill you will need to know how much you need and how did it add up to all that amount of money and you will know how to because you went to school and you tried your best everyday you went. Another example is that everywhere you go you will need to read. This is why elementary school students need to know what they want to be when they grow up and why is important to go to school. And is important that they have good friends that will keep them going and to cheer them up because they might feel lonely and is not really good for them and everyone needs a friend that will help you when you need it and do let bad friends make you do bad things and you know what is good and what is bad .If you tell elementary school students what they have to do when they are small they will be better people in the world. Because some people dont take it for real but maybe they will be better and take it more serous. This is why is important this lesson for everyone.
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I agree with student taking online classes. Because some student might be to old for then to attend school or do a fulltime school program. By doing online classes. Student will be not worring about attend school on time, if they get sick or have to travel for a emergency happen. They would have the chance of talking with their counselor and talk about sign up for online school. If the teacher give them homework they would have the chance of sending by email. In other way been able to take classes online, give the student a chance of choosing their own schedule for example, some student might to take classes in the moprning, some student might want to take classes afternoon or at night time. Taking classes online give the student a chance of doing classes in the other side of the country or anywhere. Many student are not able to attend school. Attending online school give the student the advantage of working or doing their own projects at home for example student won't relay on school supplies. Students by taking classes online benefits then, because some student have two jobsor lives to far, and they are to old for attending school. For the students that have two jobs. They get the chance to use there work break to take some classes, test, or even quizzes. For example in my side of the story if my school would give online i would be able to have to jobs and support my family paying some bills. For other student have the same problem. In my conclusion taking classes online benefits the student in many different ways. for example by choosing their opwn schedule, by given then the opportunity of doing their own things, by giving then a aesier way to learn, by showing then that they are adults now and demostrating and teaching to do take the right choose.
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I agree that " A problem is a chance for you to do your best." (Duke Ellington) because I believe that this statement means that even if there is a problem there is a chance for you to improve next time. One reason why I agree with this statement is because you can improve for next time. For example, let's say you are having difficulty with one of the subjects you're learning at school and you have an assignment due the next day. So you try your hardest on this assignment but when you turn it in the next day you score a low grade,and you go ask your teacher if you can make up that assignment but they say no. Now in this situation the student can learn for this and take this as a chance to improve for next time. Another reason why I agree with this statement is because something unexpected might come out of that problem. One way is that let's say you are doing a group project for on of your classes and there's a few people in your group that aren't contributing to the group. So you decide to try your best to take the lead of this project and try to get everyone to express their ideas. This shows how a group of student go through a problem with people not wanting to participate but then the student decides to take the lead of the project and try to include everyone. My last reason why I agree with this statement is because you can do your best on something. One way you can improve the way other view you is by trying your best to solve that problem. For example, if you are having trouble with something then you can try to ask people you know are a teacher for help. This is so you can find the best solution to your problem and do your best. In conclusion, I agree that " A problem is a chance for you to do your best." (Duke Ellington). Because there are many ways for you to learn from this statement,such as you can learn for you mistake and improve next time,something unexpected for that problem,and you can do your best on something.
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I disagree with his statement, because if your good at something you can always put more effort in to it , and you can also be better at what you are good at, and last you can never stop growing of what you mastered . people in general they always get better of what they already mastered . First, putting more effort can help you grow of what you are good at. For example, i'm good at singing at church. I will put more effort so i can become better at my pitch and the tone of my voice. Putting effort on something means you want to be better at it, and also means that you will like to learn more and grow. Putting more effort can get you somewhere. What i mean by that is a better situation, a better position. There is nothing bad putting a little effort on something that you can get better at and achieve. Also , You can always be better. Being better is better then good, for example, I am good at cooking, but i can be better at cooking. You can be better then someone ; become better than that person that you want to challenge, or you can challenge yourself. Challenge yourself is a good way to grow. Perfect takes practice; be good of right now, but become better in the future. Taking your time and taking it slow, you can 100% be better. Trust me its not easy to be better that you have already mastered, but there's always way and a chance. The important thing you need to know is you cant not stop growing; you can always keep on growing even though you are already good at it. Only because you are already good at something doesnt mean you stop growing, you can keep growing, if you try a little harder. I will always try my hardest to be the best at it; no matter how hard it is. There is always a way to keep on growing. If you show others that you can be way better even though you already good so far, they will see that there is a way to keep on growing. Show an example to others; let other people know that it is possible to be better, at something you are good at. Prove to those people that thinks you cant keep on growing of what you already mastered. You will not grow, if you dont put more effort in it, and time. If you just stop of what your good at, then you will not grow. Remember you can always grow of what you mastered. Dont let anyone tell you that you cant. practice comes perfect. Do all the things you need to do to be better, then you will grow more then you expect. Its never to late to keep on growing.
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Generic_Name My grandma, always said that being in a group gives you more things to talk about. The benefits of working a group is more beneficial because,more ideas, partisan,and some one you can talk to. Many calm that working alone will not share your ideas with other clearly, it better working in a group have fun and to talk to others. To begin the benefits of working in a group is more beneficial because having more ideas. For example my sister, Generic_Name she loves sharing her ideas. Each ideas they share with they classmates. They can have have a example on what there writing about and have an idea on what there talking about. For example my Mom,is A fourth grad teacher she loves seeing others sharing it means a lot to her. She partners up the kids and so she, can see on thing the can come up with. However,having more ideas well help us share ans being thoughtfully to other in life. In addishly,the benefits of working with group is more benefice because, to pertipat in a class room. For example when i first stared middle school i didnt want ti partisan with no on. Because, i wanted to work bye my self. Later that week i made a Friend and, she intrdust me to the other class mats, we all disided to be together for this school project. Example my little brother Generic_Name ,he was shy to talk to others in the class room. I as an oldest sister, to if him they no need to be shy just talk to others and pertipat in class and get to know every one. that next day my brother was happy to with others. However,partisan is a good way to show others an example and make new friends Finely the benefits of working in a group is more beneficial because, having some one to talk to for example my friend Generic_Name, didnt have have nothing tot talk to for example my friend Generic_Name,didnt have nothing to think of .I was helping her on some thing we can together thinks of. I as a friend was there to listened to was she had to say. Example my other friend she wasnt at school because,her Grandpa, pasted away she misted on what we were working on. So i want to show her on the thinks she missed out. It helped her a lot. In concluss the benefits of working in a group is more beneficial because, more ideas, partisan, and some you can talk to.
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Imagine if students are trying to accomplish somthing that thier doing. That would be good because time will go faster rather than slower because there being more produtive. Although some people say that accompish does not serve a purpose, nevertheless, others say that accomplish does serve a purpose because a student could be working on homework and playing a sport. To beging, accompish more time on a sport. For example, a soccer team was trying to accomplish their shooting because they had a soccer game. They also knew that they could use more practice on thier shooting skills on the goalily. This shows that, the soccer team didn't want to waste time on something that they could be practeing for. Clearly, Futhermore, accompish something on homework. This proves that, a college student wants to get their homework all done because they want to go do something fun with their friends. They could also be going out with people so they might as well get all their work done. This shows that, if a student wants to accompish something they are willing to give it a try and move on. Accomplish does serve a puropse as Thomas Jeffereson wrote. Working on homework and playing a sport. In conclusion, Students should be able to do something in life if they want to.
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Winston Churchill once said "success consists of going from failure to without loss of enthusiasm." In other words, sometimes failure teach us how to get at the success. Many people agree with this statement, others disagree with it. It's easy to see both sides, but one stand out. Success is necessary consists of going from failure because failure teach us how to be better and create responsibility. First, failure teach us how to be better, for example if I did a song to someone important to see and this person didn't like it; I won't give up even if is the worse song ever because the failure will show how to learn better and if you wont give up and always try the best you will get the success. As you can see you always have to do your best to get your success even if is the hardest thing. however, most of the famous had failure. it wasn't easy to get where they are; maybe can take long time to be like they are, but is hard. Most of the times is difficult to get the success that they have; they have that success because they never give up even if was the worse song or if they were failure. Next, failure make you create responsibility, for example if you are a failure on something and want to be better, you always will try something new to get better and try your best, that's mean responsibility to yourself, for example if I want to get my drive license and I fell many times, I can be a failure on it, but if I create responsibility and study every day I will do good and pass with success. If I speak another language and my English is a failure I will be responsive and study to understand the people and do well on my classes. As you can see, always have a way, we learn with failure to be better then you were On the another hand, some people believe we never have to have failure in our success, because failure can a negative in your life and in your life you always have to be have to be positive; this point make sense, but in life we always have to learn something. Therefore this statement is right because success consist of going from failure. In conclusion, many people think that success don't consists of going from failure because it's a negative thing in our life, but success is necessary consist going from failure, because failure teach how to get the success in life, how to be better, and how to be more responsive in life.
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I think working in a group is more efficiently and helpful then working alone. In these paper i will argue about the benefice of working in a group. Working in group is better because we can share ideas, prepare us for the real world, and save time. If we work in groups, we can share information, ideas and thoughts. We can see what its better for our teamwork and the assignment that we were doing in school or jobs. I think the most of the jobs in the real world are in groups, however, when i work in the mechanic shop with my dad and brothers, an i'm replacing a engine, i need their help because it takes strange, agility and experience to replaced it, because it's really hard for only one person to do it, so it's important to learn how to work in group, these skills prepare and help us for the real world by working like a team or family group. The army, police officer and government are some good examples of groups, they work together to finish their work and see the benefices of working in group. Doing work as a team is not a waste of time, we share the responsibilities,so it would not be the much work for only one person. Two or more people is a good combination of beneficial and fast work. some say that working alone is better then working in group, but they wrong because when we work in groups is more easy by sharing thought with friend and partners, we get to now each other and makes new friends, that is the way how people get better in life by working in groups. Working in groups make people to put more effort and attention in what they are doing because we want to get better opportunities in life, good greats and chances of getting a great job.
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Having to learn from the experiences of others. It may help you participate in school activities, and learn new information. My first reason is that you can try new things. If you hear that your friend participated on a school activity, and keeps talking about what they experienced , and you found it interesting. You can try joining a school activity and experience the fun time that they had in the activity. My last reason is that you can learn new things. If you hear about the math program in school and students kept talking about what they learned and how fun it was. You can get intrested and you will want to join the math program and experience what they experienced you might learn some new informations. I think it is important to learm from the experience of others. It may help you join a school activity, and learn new information. If you try new things like other people you are not going to regret it, because you are trying new things that will have benefits.
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have you ever needed examples to learn something or you learn better with different ways instead of receiving examples? Well, was as Albert Schweitzer said " Example is not the main thing to influence others". this means that there are other ways to influence other without using or giving examples. One way that people may get influenced is if they receive help from others, not receiving examples; This can be better than give examples to illustrate this, in the class of ceramic the teacher mostly give us examples of how to make clay stuff, she almost never help me and this results difficult for me and for others how to make things because she only explain one time how to do it and some of the students forget about it. when she help someone their project result always to be the best of the class because of her help on the student. Other people say that when they receive examples sometimes they get confused, this happens when the examples they get make them change their perspective over what they are doing, for example: doing a drawing, sometime the teacher tells to make a drawing of your imagination,this means of your thinking and whatever is on your brain. What could happen when the teacher tell you what to draw after she said that the drawing is about your imagination and she give examples on what to draw this make you think that she wants you to draw others things that are not on your thinking, this shows that sometimes the examples does not work on specific subjects because those get to confuse you. Although others may say that when they use examples they are more able to influence other because they show the experience that they have on it and also teach how to do something also there are many people that learn better get more influenced when they use examples. I think that there are a few ways that are stronger that make the examples less useful or powerless to influence others. For these reasons I think that there are better ways to influence other without using examples.
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If you looking for a hard worker make sure he wrights you a good resmay. If he wright you a good resmay and tells you what was his good expriens. You should ask him why was he so intrested into this job and why. ask him how searouse would you take this job and why. check for his record,ask just to make sure if he or she not into any badthing's. Ask him or she what make's him or she conterable the job they want. Make them feel conterable what they are seeking for ask him or she how they want to work like. Make sure to ask what was their fist jobs where they lived and name of the place they worked at. Ask them a good reason why they should have the job they are looking for. Ask them what collages they went at how long they were there for. Ask him or she how long are they trying to work for. Ask him or she like how long are they trying to wrok for in their jobs they are trying to get hierd from. If him or she is trying to get hierd and they dont wright a resaymay or show up not looking profectional,they are not the right person whos not trying to get hierd. if you going to and interviwe make him or she drees up nice,so you wuold get hire. Make sure you show up early not late. if you keep doing that to a inerviwe you will not get hired,and you will not have any more chancese. When you doning a interviwe they can ask as many question as they want you can also ask them back to them too. if you intervewing a person or they at you make sure you listing and making eye contact at all time. before interveiwing make sure you practice at home so when you go to your interveiw you wont be nervose. Or pratice with some you now so you would get used to it or wright a peace of paper so you know what to say the next day with no problem. if you can not make any eye contact and you get nervose while you are in the interveiw ask him nicely if you could have a little practice with him or you could got some where is quite. Ask waht's their expreance on what they like doing and when they get accepted on what they were looking for.
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I think it does keep them out of trouble it protects them. When teenagers are out in the street its could be because they are doing something bad you never know what they could be doing after 10pm or midnight. I never hangout by myself at that hour unless im with my parents or at a family party, there is no point to be out late at night but many people dont care and be out late at night many teenagers dont obey the laws. Its important to have curfews, it keeps teenager from being out at night. In the weekend teenagers may hangout late with a friend or cousin but it really depends on how strict the parent is. I have really strict parents they won't let me out at night, unless, they are with me. its important to make new laws to protect the envionment and the teenagers as well teenagers now a days think they can do whatever they want. 10pm is kind of late its close to midnight maybe during the weekends teenagers could hang out after midnight but during the weekdays after 10pm would be against the laws it really depends what they are doing like are they driving in a car or walking its scary to be out at night by yourself.
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One topic that is frequently debated today is whether students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Some people taking classes from home is more helpful. They feel like they have more time to do extra activities throughout the day. I believe that going to school is better because you get to experience real world, you get make friends, and you get to enjoy all the school activities. First reason, why I think going to school is better than taking classes at home is that you get to experience the real world. When you go to school you have to wake up early to get ready and make it on time to school, in the other hand when you are home schooled you get to wake up at whatever time and still do your work, that is not experiencing the real world because life it is not always going to be like that. School makes you experience the real world by so many ways. When you are at school you work in groups with other people and that is getting you ready for when you grow up and have to work with other people at your job. Second reason, why I think going to school is better than taking classes at home is that you get to make friends. When going to school you get to interact with people and make new friends, in the other hand when you are at home you do not interact with anyone it is only you by yourself. Having friends is really good, they can help with what they can. At school you can ask your friends for help in a subject when you do not understand something. Third reason, why I think going to school is better than taking classes at home is that you get to enjoy all the school activities. School activities are one of the favorite things about school that students like. If you are home schooled you do not get to enjoy them and have fun with your friends. When going to school you get to enjoy senior night, school dances, and extra curricular activies, which are super fun. As you have read, I believe that going to school is better than taking your classes from home because you get to experience real world, you get make friends, and you get to enjoy all the school activities. School teaches you most of the things that you know and need in life at the end of the day. On that day we are going to realize on why we need school so much.
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The use of technology had positive effect's on people's live because help when you don't know something, help the person need and inform more quick. First, the technology help when you don't know something, for example when you have homework and you need some answer you can look and Google. When you need know how do model or some project you can watch videos in YouTube and follow the instruction. When you don't how explain something you can to teach one images in some web side and show. Second, can help the person need, for example when you not speak the same language to one friend or you travel some where and you need to speak you can use the Translator. Or when you have one emergency and is urgent you call the 911 and the police go quick to place. When you need know something in special only use Google and this show you many web side with many information maybe can help you. For example, the inform more quick, for example you don't know today is rain or is cold you only need to look the climate in your phone and you have the answer. When something happen and is bad in your country or some place your phone notify with one messenger. When you have the long time you not talk with your mom and can't visit you call and is more quick. Also some people thing the use of technology had negative effect's on people's live because when something is many easy the people got lazy or when you use the phone not put attention to anything because you only concentrated in your phone; however, the technology is one resource can help to many forms. In conclusion the technology is good when you use correctly.
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Attending classes from home is not a good idea. I think it's better to attend classes at school for many reasons that I have experienced at home. It's not fun becuase you don't have any teacher to explain to you what you don't understand (well you will have a teacher but he or she wont be there personally), you won't get any help from no one if your taking the online course. Also student will not benefit it because they will be off track and instead of doing there work or what they are suppose to be doing, they will be wondering around by the internet. I defenitly do not agree that the student will benefit attending classes at home. Having a tecaher with you in class is wonderful. There will be a point when you will have so many questions about the topic that you were discussing with the class. When your in class at school you will learn so much from teachers by giving out examples that are being giving out to the class and explaining it to you. But if your taking an online course It's defenitly more difficult for you to understand the main idea of the lesson. We won't have a teacher right next to us. We have to work indepentdently with out a friends help. It's not similar to when your in class and you ask a friend for help, they will love to help you out. Online class you won't have a friend helping you out. We have to take so many notes in order to understand the objective of the lesson. I personally had so much trouble with the online class, I had to take about 3-5 lessons each day, I had to write down notes for each lesson, I had to take at least five quizzes each day. I had to re-read the lesson like threes time in order to understand and capture the important facts. Honestly you learn how to be more organize and independent each day. I personally consider students to attend classes at school. It's not a good idea doing online class and taking so many notes. In class, tecahers are strict when student have there electonic out whil there tecaheing or when student are working on class work. At home and doing your class work and at the same time being on your phone, your not paying fully interest on your class, Since you home, don't have a teacher, you feel like you have the right to be on your phone and laptop and do what ever you want, and not doing you work. That shouldn't be the case if you stay home and take the online class, It's because to there was a purpose. If we don't pay attention to what we are doing, and we are paying more attention to our phones we will never learn anything abiut the course. That could cause use to fail the class. Than, we got to re-teake the class. In my opinion I will also agree to some student that wants to take the online class because you can wake up late, taking you time to eat breakfast. It's not like going to school having to get up so early, not having the time to eat, and having to chase the school bus. I'm that type of person that loves to sleep. But it's our responsibilty to do our work and tun it on time before the deadline. If you dont want to fail the class you have to save some time for your class than, you have to save some time for your self and for school work. Not all the time it will be about you. There needs to be some time for something else more important. In conclusion, I think Student will not benefit from able to attend classes at home. It's a lot of responsibility to remind your self that have to attend class at home, do all your work and turn it in on time. We wont have a teacher with us (personally), we have to do all our work independently. That's why I think it's not a good idea for students to attend classes at home.
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By the time students enter high school, I believe that they should have an idea of what type of career they would like to pursue after they graduate. For some students, committing to a specific career at young age sometimes is a good idea as long as you have a backup idea for a different career in case you decide that you do not want to pursue in that career anymore, thats why committing to a career at a young age is only sometimes a good idea because you'll never come up with another career if you keep changing your mind. The courses that you study in high school should be thought about as well because maybe you need a specific degree from a course in order to pursue in that career. I believe that, if a student is going to commit to a career that they should be very passionate about this career, they should be at least a junior in high school so that they've had time to get a feel of the other careers and decide which one they enjoy and suits them the best, and they should keep in mind the requirements that are needed, the benefits, and the types of jobs that it offers to them. Students who commit to a career at a young age are usually athletes, or they plan on working in their family business. Pursuing your career needs a lot of hard work in school especially in this generation because you're going to need to go to a good college so you need a good GPA because you're going to want to go to the college that has a good academic program for the career that you plan on pursuing. Therefore, you need to go to college, and work hard so you can get a good job because most jobs, don't hire anyone without a college degree. Finally, thats what I think about choosing the right career for yourself, and committing to a career at a young age. although some may still believe differently and disagree with my view on this issue.
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yes is good idea, because they know what they want in the future. And they can choose good career for they life. And they can preparation they can go to wall University. When they will be adult they have experience when they get job and they get own money they will be ready but you can help you family and if you have girlfriend you can help to became they help you to when you was little boy your parents away they told you what do you need to do at you life they was good example, for you no said no because you no that In some societies ,students can brace for the future when they want a family they are ready for change and they can get Bette life. and you can start the future they can choose some work because if you study you can get more opportunity and you can will be good person en your life a person ready for start some wort nobody said nothing because you are ready for the job and you can will be a boss in you work but, you need to study and focus in you career because you need good grade in your school you need to have good presentation and you can get good job and you can help your family and friend . Many people can not comply they goals. because they not ready and they can not find good job because they not ready before when they had the opportunity they not appreciate the opportunity and is to late for start agent. but you can start with your life in other something like work in contrition , drive truck ,or cashier bank and whatever work do you like. For example you can study, hard because when you will be adult your are ready for your responsibility' and you can get good job maybe in a office, the point is you can have better life and you can get, all you want in your future but,your parents can help you in this situation because they can sea go your, school study hard because when you ready you can choose your life but you can not say my parents not help me about my future. my recommendation is you prepare and study,hard for your goals because you can get good life and you are ready for start your goals. but if you study you will be the best person in the planet you can will be good example: for you sons' and they will be very happy about they father. When they will be adult they have good example and they try to did good job for they life bacuese they have good reflection before the they was born. yourself will be the best in the planet you need to think in yourself because you need to no what will be your life and you prepare and study work hard away remember you are good person and nobody can destroy yourself
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So if it has come to a point that you don't have to make decisions on your own, even if you have what ever it takes to rule the whole nations, what would you do?. Nothing?, or run away to where you can make your own plans?. NO!. I strongly agree that, people should make decisions on their own. Making decisions on your own can make you stronger. For example, when i realize i was failing my science class. I took a decision on my own by telling myself; i need to pass this class for the rest of the quarter. And i'm doing great now because i put in my mind with all my strength, focused and i'm doing more than amazing. If someone gave me that decision to pass that class, i wouldn't be able to, because i haven't made my mind up to that and maybe i don't or not into that class. Secondly, you know your challenges to your decision that you make by yourself. For instance, i tried out this year for the school soccer team. I knew it was only 2 option: either you make it or you get cut out. So, me knowing that made me work harder when i get on the pitch. I get pains in my legs when i get home but i also know that, i have do it again tomorrow so it makes me do extra work home so that i won't be ill but be in shape for the next day. Lastly, sometimes we make a bad decision which help us learn. To prove this, 3 weeks ago, my mom ask me to clean her bathroom for her, also i had a club to attend. Because i knew going to club will be fun and meeting new friends so, i told my mom i'm going to the club instead, and i will clean the bathroom the next day. And so, i went to the party. A friend of mine was a drug dealer: i didn't know, and he was wanted my the police. He came to the same party and we were sharing the same table. We were drinking, chatting, eating and having fun. All of a sudden, we saw 3 police men that came to arrest my friend but because we were sitting together; we were all arrested because him. If i choose to clean the bathroom this would have not happen to me. The lesson that i learned is that; i don't need to follow my decision every time, and also know who hang around with. As a results, making decisions on our own can make us strong and focused, know our challenges and also learn. If all this ability only get reviewed when we make decisions on our own, why should we seek for guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters?. Let's people take decisions and do stuff with their own mind set.
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All people try to do the best they can do. All people can suppceful; however, they can work really hard to achieve what they want. Everyone should do something beyod and never give up. Never we have to thing negative, we always have to do importan thing to grow up and because, we always have to try the best that we can do. First, nobody have to think negative. Because, everyone can do something beyod. For example, when we say that we can walk only three mile but if we effort we can achieve more then we think. Always you have to think pisitive to accomplish what you want. More you think negative, less you caan grow up. Nobody have to think negative. In addition, All person need to do importan thing to grow up. For Example we need to do right think then we are not goin to fall dow. All of you can be the change you want to see in the world. We need to fallow the rules and not make mistake out of the low. All person need to do importan thing to grow up. Finally, Everyone have to try to do the best ever. all people need to try to do the best to get goal finish. Who try the best is the one who try the best is the one who can make a progress in the life. even if you don't want to try your best you have o try most you can. everyone have to try to do the best ever. Everyone should do something beyod and never give up, we never have to do importan thing to grow up and all people need to try to do the best. everyone caan do somenthing beyod. for example when we say that we can walk only three mile but if we effort we can achive more then we think. You can be the change that you want to see in the world. who try the best i the one who can make progress. If we never do somenthing beyod we never will grow.
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What would I like to accomplish in the future? I would like to buy a house or a car or both, start a family maybe. Or just be a billionaire. What would you like to accomplish in the future? and why would you like accomplish that? I would like to accomplish to become a billionaire for many reasons. First of all if I would accomplish to become a billionaire, I would buy a house to live in, because I'm not gonna stay in my mom's house all my life, and I don't think my mom would like that either. I would have a pool in the back of my house. I always wanted a pool so I could swim there and wouldn't have to go all the way to the water park. Or just relax in the pool whenever I have free time. Have parties so my friends and I have fun, and my mom would't have to tells us to keep it down. Second I would buy my mom a house, a car and some new clothes. she deserves it for all the hard work she's done. I would sell the house that we're living in now. And all the money that I will get for the house, I will give it to my mom. I would take her to see a car that she likes and buy it, because the one that she has is a little old and she is always having trouble with it. I would take her to the Mall to see different stores so she can buy different kinds of clothes that she likes. Then I would buy a hospital. I would not let the hospital charge too much for the patients though, because whenever I go to the hospital they charge to much, and some people don't got a lot of money. I would hire the best people for the job so they can help their patients, some nurses or doctors are not too good at their job. I would let any patient in no matter where they're from, because some hospitals judged the way people look, their race or the color of their skin. Finally I would help the homeless. Not all the money that I would have would be for me, because some I would give it to the homeless. I would buy them food and clothes, because some homeless people have clothes and some don't, and some are just waiting to be feed. I would buy an entire city block, so I can construct apartments for the homeless. whenever I look out the window, when I'm in the car, I see a lot of homeless people siting in the side walk or sleeping on it. They deserve a home! And those are my reason for why I would like to accomplish to become a billionaire.
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People should go seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters because a lot of people in this world are very isolated, like they are always to themselves, sometimes you can notice when people are going through things. People always need somebody to be by their side, it's not good to stay isolated it could make you go crazy. Fifty percent of all people go through depression, anxiety attacks and mental breakdowns because there's nobody there to help them, sometimes when you try to help they just either ignore you or they just don't want to be spoken too that means they haven't been seeking help. A person who has a companion can be going through things too you know, but they express themselves to their best friend but for more help you can talk to your specialist doctor. Doctors and authorities are really a good help, they hear you out and always agree with you. Experts should be people who are very close to you it could be a neighbor, family relative, family members, your boss, coworkers and even your friends. Authorities sometimes don't really help you when your having mental breakdowns because sometimes they don't care or it's not their business. Life is way bigger than you think, don't take it for granted always be grateful that your living to this day. The Environment should be peaceful, calming and not to over dramatic always be positive in your life don't let anybody bring you down, Life is important, live it up to the best, In other places like work or school always express yourself usually at work you ideas but your not show if you should share them, don't be shy share your thoughts on new things. Sometimes at work it's hard for you to share what you are thinking even at school, a lot of people have to over think their ideas because they think it's not good enough, that makes them lose precious time because time is usually short and you need all the time you can get, it's better to go seek help because your struggling to think of a good idea. Most of the people in this world are really good at making their own decisions because they have nothing really to worry about, they like to be independent and always get things done quicker that way. For some people it's really not that easy for them to get their work done because they have a huge struggle in their life, they need the help, but sometimes they don't ask because they don't want embarrass themselves in front of others that work independently. Everyone deserves to be treated fairly and equal, the world needs to open their eyes sometimes because a lot of people are taking their life because they don't receive they need, day and night, sixty percent of people in this world work hard to live, they work hard to cover your monthly bills, groceries, clothes and gas if they have a car. People who make low income deserve a big chance so they can maintain themselves, when you in situation like that look for people you know and ask what they work for, it might match what like to do. People who are struggling to maintain rent and other important things they can always seek for government assistance. People are living in this world for a reason, they need to survive and live their life. Everybody got to do what they got to do sometimes when it comes to surviving, there is a lot of single family dad's and mom's in this world, most of the time they can't even maintain their kids and home. It's a good idea to always have someone in your life they motivate you and care for you, they do much more because their here for you no matter the situation, Always have help beside you, you will need it. A lot of people who are alone and make their own decisions, don't have families and friends, they just rather do their way because they know what they are doing. Not everyone is the same, everyone has different problems and they usually go through them alone, sometimes they don't know how to think and how to live. At the end of the day there has to be someone out there that can help you with your life, your never alone always remember that. Some people who try their hardest usually pays off even though they go through struggles but they have to be independent sometimes thats how you learn to be responsible and no one is always there to hold your hand sometimes you got to give it your all, just believe in yourself over time you will succeed
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Duke Ellington said, " A problem is a chance for you to do your best." Do you think a problem is a good way to learn form your mistake? Learning from your mistake is a great way to know, what you did wrong, and how you can fix the problem. What does he mean by " A problem is a chance for you to do your best."? A problem is a mistake you did, and doing your best is improving form your mistakes. Some people learn from their mistake, and others don't. People who do learn from their mistake can help others and their self. I do agree that problems is a chance for all of us to do are best. Their some people who don't really care if it happens again. We should all care about our mistakes because if we didn't care our mistakes would happen again , and if that mistake was bad, then you should care. I made lots of mistake like failing a grade because i didn't care about school , but then i change and stared to be more motivated and now that helps me work hard to get my dream job. One of my other mistake is my anger. I would always get angry but I always try to clam down because I would always take it out on people, but it won't hurt to try to learn form your mistakes. Everyone can learn from their mistakes and it won't hurt to try. The benefits is knowing what to do when the mistakes happens again. Like what Duke Ellington once said, "A problem is a chance for you to do your best."
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There students that would be able to benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because there schools that can let you take online classes. You are able to work on your own pace,you are also able to balance school,work and spending time with friends and families,and your able to take video conferencing at home. There are many different schools that can let you take online classes. There students going through family issues at home that they aren't able to attend school regularly. It can help them to learn in class so they don't fall behind or fail the grade. They just want to learn like us and have a great future. It can also help if you are attending collage but not want to stay on campus. When having the benefit to take online class at home is working at your own pace. You are working at your own pace to get in done fast or you just like to take your time. Many students prefer taking their time becasue it will help them understand it more then rushing the working knowing that it could be wrong. It can also help them be more then the other colleagues at school. When having this opportunity your able to get work done without any distractions. When balacing school,working and spending time with family and friends can be very diffcult at times if you are attending school regularly but when taking online classes it can help you understand the class more and you can focus more then getting distracted at school because of friends. This will help you get the work done in matter of seconds. When having the intrenet your able to do may things but having the opportunity to a video conference from home while still attending school is the best. This will help you with one on one tutoring sessions to ask questions to your teacher or professor when having trouble with anything in a subject. You are also able to learn new things while doing video conference. Students should take this opportunity to attend school from home because instead of going to school for seven to eight hours, you can learn everything at home without anyone rushing you or having a deadline when its due. Its better to take your time and take the opportunity. I would recommed this to anyone who would rather get to learn at home on their own.
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To make a successful personality from ourselves; We should always accomplish new things, otherwise inactivity cant serve our purpose. Many people think that, behind of every success is your hard wroking, and also achievment without hardworking is impossible. In my opinion inactive people are not have a good future. So they should always do something new to be able to accomplish because, to have a bright future, always successful in our life and being a good personality in our community. Every people wants to have their best future and wants to have their best life, all of these things comes by how you put yourself in a hard time. It is obvious that without nothing anything we not gonna accomplish. Accomplishment is always comes by how hard work you do. Inactive person do not have a bright future. Inactivity makes people tired of their life because they dont have any plan for their future, they just live for no idea, with no hopes. So it is better to think about our future and build our future from now. Being successful in our life is what everyone want. Every body want they way to find they key of success. But the person who get successed, they actually did accomplish new things. They things that makes our future bright and that we can have a good life and carrer is to work hard, focus on one main thing that make our carrier and believe in ourselves which has the important view in our life. Being inactive person is really useless in our community. We cannot be anything in our future if we be inactive. Obviously everybody choose to have a good personality in their community. Having a good personality makes everyones to proud on you. To accomplish a good personality we should makes our thoughts and education higher. Without having a main goal in our life we cannot achieve our aim. Education is the only way for success so by having a good education and carrer we have more attach with our community and we get respect from our community. Inactivity is not the way that we can accomplish more. I think inactivity does not serve a purpose it just makes your brain stop so you could not be able to accomplish. People should always try their best to make their life easier and it is become by hard work. People who has inactive in their life they will hurt in the future. Successful people always did something before in their life so now the successful in they have a comfort future. The reason behind accomplishment is hardworking, believe in ourselves and look forward for our goal which inactive people do not believe on this. For these reasons and many more people should do hard work to accomplish more things.
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On my opinion, I agree what Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote, Unless you try to do something beyond what you have already mastered, i agree what author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote because if you try to do something with less beyond that is already master you will never grow because you still doing the same thing that is already master, you never go advance, you have to do new things and Lear new things on the way you grow doing news things. Many people do the same thing they don't do news things they have to do news things to Lear news things If you train to do something that is already made, you loosing your time, on the time that you are loosing you can do news thing doing other things, we don't have to do the same things always. I take my position on that and i think what the Author Waldo Emerson wrote is right about what hi wrote. It is important to do news things because you learning news things doing differents things
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Some school districts offer programs that allow allow high school students to graduate in three years instead of the traditional four years. I think students should be offered the opportunity to graduate in three years so they can go to college or join the work force early. A program that offers you three years of high school has so many benefits and advantages. Its a great option, because who doesnt want to be done with high school one year early and come out ready to pursue their career or dream? It's not only about finishing school early, but in that year you also have the advantage to be offered jobs or be hired over somebody else for example, if you were competing for a job in fixing computers you would have the more experience, knowledge, and advanced while the other guy just came out of high school and is new to the work force. This program gives you the option to have a flexible schedule and to choose whats best for your comfort. Taking courses over the summer and not being able to take electives can help you finish more early and to be available to plans for the future. You will have so much time to invest in activities that your interested or visit colleges you wish to go to, because remember your graduating early and you have to be ready for this life changing experience. Having an extra year of high school is waste not just of your time but a waste of your life! Your a senior in high school and your friend who took the early college program has the same career choice like you do, but he graduated last year, has more experience, many job offers, and good pay, while your in class listening to a history channel on the television. His friend made the decision to apply for early college and took advange of it. Success is the key in life and taking this opportunity is the key that will take you further in life and your in your career. If you have the option to apply for this program be wise and take this life changing opportunity.
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Technology facilitate people to do a lot of things without having contact with others? Does technology make human's life easier?. Although, many people argue that technology is affecting the people saying that human spend most of their time using technology, for things that are not productive. I think that technology is good because you need it for your daily. For example, if you are a student you can use technology to help you to do homework, project, or specific things that require technology. However, there are some people that need technology for their life that is require, if you are very sick doctors will have to use technology to understand what sickness do you have. To begin with, using technology you can do many things at the same time that can help you in your daily. For example, there are some time when you have a lot of things to do, and you don't have a lot of time, but if you use technology you will able to make it, because you can do many things at the same time with technology. Also, technology help you with your job, now there are many machines that you can use in your job that does not need any force of your body, those machines work by using technology. If you work as a security you can security the building by just be in one office and use technology, you can install cameras around the build and you can security the building from that office by using the camaras, so you won't have to be walking around all the build, and will take you a lot of time to make it. Second, technology can make your life easier. People require to technology when there are things that human can not do. For example there are some job that are very hard that require a big force that is impossible for human, but they can use some special machines that are very strong and can do the work. Also, you can search in google things that you don't know. For example, address,news, thing about History, books it is much easier to read a book in google than going to the library that take you more time than just type the book tittle in google. Finally, technology also help schools, every schools use technology for their information. For axemple teachers have computer where they has the information of their students, where they has their work all the materials that they need to teach. Also, teachers have special programthat they use to teach, make easier their work. However, teacher, and schools do almost all their work by using technology. in addition, students need technology to do their classwork when it require to use computer, or personal divice. In conclution, technology is super inportant, helpful for everyone,and eveything. People won't be able to do the work or things that they do now without technology. Humans need it for our benefic to make our life easier. Life won't be the same without technology, schools, Hospital, Banks, everything could be different. Also, no technology will effect the community in their daily tasks, like what they do everyday with technology. I think the world won't be the same without technology.
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Setting A Good Example Have you thought of set an example for your own behavior? Albert Schweitzer said "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." Setting a good example by your own behavior is the best way to influence other people. However; others believe that their are better ways to influence others because the person being influenced should set their own examples not everyone wants to follow someone examples. Although not everyone thinks the same it's better to set an example by your own behavior to influence others. People get influenced by demonstrations, peoples mistakes and when visualizing things. To influence someone you have to set an example for them to visualize what you are trying to influence them to do. Most people get influence when presented demonstrations through videos, presentations and pictures. My favorite youtubers influence me by spreading postivity through their videos and content. They help the homeless by providing them shelter; they make people's day by helping them with their needs. They influence me to want to help the homeless and other people. These youtubers Influence their subscribers to spread posivity throughout the world by the examples they set on their videos. A lot of people learn from others mistakes; setting a good example from your own behavior will influence others not to do your mistake in your example because they will take it into concerdation. One of my friends told me their experience on missing their opportunity of taking a course required for graduation. She did not get to graduate on time she stayed one more year in high school to complete the course she missed. She regretted not taking the course her junior year to graduate on time. My friend influenced me to take the class my junior year and to learn from her mistakes. I didn't miss my opportunity I got to take the course and earned the credit for it. I learned from her example she influenced me by telling me to follow her example to accomplish it. Most people don't believe things until they see an example of things. They're are people that need to visualize things to get influenced by them. It's confirmed that most influencers present things that you can visualize to influence people. I am a person that needs to see an example of something in order to believe it. When I am searching information I need to see if it is fiction or non fiction. Once I researched up the wrong information for a presentation the article didn't state a true event. I got a bad grade for the presentation as my consequence I had an F that quarter for not stating a true fact. Influencers set example's of their own behavior to influence you the right way. Others believe that there are better ways to influence others by letting the person being influenced set their own example. The person being influenced can not set their own examples if they don't have experience. People need to follow someone example because they need to be influenced before they can influence others by setting their own examples. All influencers have been influenced by others examples they didn't set their own example. Following an influencers example will help the person being influenced learn from their mistakes and improve from them to set better examples to others being influenced. Albert schweitzer set his own examples from his own behavior to influence others. He was Inspired by other influencers examples and that it was the only thing to help influence others. He says that the best way to influence other people is to set a good example by your own behavior. You should follow someone examples by their own behavior to set a good example to influence others.
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When someone is confused like a problem or a situation in life. They're going to want a lot of advices so they could solve that problem for example: i was struggling on math. I needed help so i asked a friend. They told me some advices but i was still confused so i decide to ask another friend. If the advices were not helping out so much then i would just ask the teacher and the teacher should give you a lot of helpful advices because there the ones that are teaching the class so they should know what to do to help a student out. Also the reason why people ask multiple persons for advice is because. if you ask one person for advice that person may not give you a lot of advices than asking multiple people for advices because the advices that other people are giving you can help you out more than that one advice that the one person gave you. Asking multiple people for advice can teach you new things that you didnt know of. Asking multiple people for advice can help you in so many ways. Asking multiple people for advice make you help someone one day that needs advices in problems. I feel like asking multiple people for advice can be important to you in so many ways like doing your homework, doing school work, driving a car, taking care of a baby, and so many other stuff that could help you in life for asking multiple people for advices.
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First impression are very important when you first meet someone. Many people say first impressions are almost impossible to change, but i strongly disagree with that. Majority of the time when we meet someone we already think of them in a certain way, but our judgment could always be wrong. Thats why i believe first impressions could always change. I believe that first impressions can change the way people think of you. Sometimes people can be irritable or just in a really bad mood because something is occurring in their lives, but in reality that's not how they really are. One reason first impressions can be wrong, is because maybe they didn't get enough sleep at night, and they have to get up early to go to work, or school in the morning. For example, i am not much of a morning person, so when i wake up in the mornings i can be rude, and people might not want to talk to me, but if you see me later in the afternoon i will be smiling, and laughing. Another reason first impressions could be wrong, is because they might not feel comfortable with the people who they are surrounded by, and be very shy, but once you start talking to them they change. For example, my best friend and i used to hate each other. I used to think she was annoying, and rude, and i am guessing she thought the same for me. One day we both started to talk to each other, and i found out we have many things in common, and that we are like the same people. That same day we became the best of friends, now we are basically like sisters. This is why i think that first impressions can always change. In conclusion, i believe that from now on as we move forwards in life we shouldn't assume what the other person is like, and not to always rely on first impressions because they could always be wrong.
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Dear, Principal I think students should do community service because we have to keep our schools clean. We should also have community service because it will help people be cleaner by picking up after them. The community service is very important because if know one picks up the trash that's in school then our school is going to look ugly. I think you should get people to pick up every day and then for the next day get another ten people and be rotating every day. Its also necessary to help out the community because we don't want to have a dirty environment for our children and younger kids. That's why I think we should have community service most people think its not important but years later it will be important because our children are going to be the ones living with a bad environment . I think we should have community service for these reasons because if we don't clean up right now no one will clean up in the future and that will hurt us because we are going to be living in a bad environment because no one wanted to clean up . In the future we are not going to be able to smell oxygen because of the bad environment. These are all the reasons I had to say about why we should have community service. Thank you for listening to my opinions. Sincerely, Your Student
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They said that first impressions are almost impossible to change, I disagree with that. I believe it's possible to change your first impression. First impressions are almost always: wrong, judgmental, or they are assumptions. I'd like to say that I, Generic_Name, have had first impression on classmates, teachers, and strangers. They usually end up being wrong about that person, and end up being a totally different person than expected. First impressions are 80 percent always judgmental. They judge the person by what they wear, by what they look like, and by the way they act. I for example was non for being a trouble maker in middle school and when I started my freshman year of high school, I was non as a quiet kid for a while. Reason being is because i was too nerves sent it was my first year in a much bigger school. After a while, my classmates started to get to know me a bit more and realized how much of a troublemaker I was. Whenever I saw a new need student in the schools that i have gone to, I would always assume by the way they dressed, looked and acted. This year there was a girl, lets call her Generic_Name. Generic_Name would wear hunting clothing, had glasses and looked funny. One day I made fun of her and she went off on me. She told me her life story and I felt bad and apologized for what I said. Now I look back to this story and remind myself to try my best to not assume too much about a best. In conclusion I stilll believe that first impressions can be changed. You just have to open up and express yourself, telll people your life story like if it were a book.
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In my opinion, I know why Thomas Jefferson decide to wrote this for his people. He want to see if we are responsible with our own work and left to lose the time just little things, he just want that his people can make their dreams. When he wrote this people was scare because their people was slave before Abraham Lincol become president of the United State. This show three reason why he wrote this. First, Thomas Jefferson spend his time with us because he want to see how his people really following his wrote. Many people don't think about what they can do in their life, if we still spend time with other people we don't accomplish our own dreams, sometimes people are shy,and scare with their dreams because other people can bother them because they can accomplish their dreams or may be they don't believe in them. Some people can't acommplish their dreams because they think that is lot stuff but the reason is that they never try, if they can accommplish their dreams. Second, if we look and read carefully we can find more about this wrote. We really can't thinking about because we don't have commitment to make our own dreams better. Some people are in school but they don't see the opportunity that we have for make a lot stuff in the future. We just go at school because our mothers dispatch us at the school. If we used about Thomas Jefferson wrote we can learn how we have work hard for make our life much better. We just have to think just in the our future and study more for have a good grade and accomplish the dreams we wish. Third, in this time we have much time in our own life for do a lot stuff because we are freedom. But we just think to go out with friend and have fun, nobody care their dreams in this time. They spends their time in party and doing lots stuff with our friends. If we still doing the same things with our friends we never get something better in our own life. We need to have more commitment about what we really want in our future. In conclusion, we can be better than other people because we are young and we can do more stuff. We can teach them thst we can do all this stuff, if we can think better. We have a good concentration in all what we do. Don't matter what we can accomplish our own dreams because we are not alone we have our familes for support us with really we want to do in the future. Thomas Jefferson give force for continue with our dreams and never give up with our own dreams.
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It success consists of going from failure? I think that there are people that are successful and have gone through failure because without experiences people will not know that is out there. I believe that in live there is gong to be up and down and this teach us who to be an successful person. First,to have a successful live we need the experience to be success not matter who many obstacle we have. When I was eleven I star making cookies at first I was bad, and when I fail the first try, but I keep going to make cookies not matter how bad I was. Then as I keep failing, and one day I was able to be successful. People have to know that we are not perfect and in some point of live we have to be unsuccessful to became what we one to be some day, Also it very important that people have the capability to say that they have make mistake. Second,people have up and downs. As an example J.K Rowling she wrote the Harry Potter sires,and she want it to published,but she was not successful,and then by the time her sires was one of the most famous book. I believe that any one can be an successful person,but they have to know that not every thing is going to be a success at the first try. Other believe that success is not consisted in failure because they think that people can be successful with out making any mistake. Thinking that every thing is easy as an litter kids puzzle. In conclusion failure is one step of been success because every person can process the piece that their missing to be successful. As people have been going in up and down,and had experiences who thing are going.
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Students will not be benefited if they attend classes from home by online or video conferencing because then they will not concentrate much on studies and will take studies lightly. Students could be benefited if they attend classes by coming to school so that they can be attentive in class and will be able to clear their doubts. Students will not be benefited if they attend classes from home by online or video conferencing because then they will not concentrate much on studies and which will lead to bad grades. They will not be having test and quizzes often. They might become lazy and start copying each other work. If they do not attend school, then there will be less chances of students doing work sincerely at home. They will not be able to get proper education at home and there will be less communication with students and teachers. If there will be less communication then they will not be able to get more open with others. There will be no group work so that students can share their ideas regarding studies. They might start taking breaks often. There will be no routine for students for studying at home. They will not be able to concentrate much working at home due to lot of distractions like T.V, movies, videos games, text ting etc. If you will not get a better education you might not be able to sussed in life. The more you have the education then there are more chances of getting a bright future. The proper education you can get is by going to school. If you will attend school, then you can correct your mistakes and learn from them. If you will stay at home you won't know what are you doing correct and what you are doing wrong. How much you learn and read more the better because learning and reading takes you around the world. Teachers should also watch every student more carefully because if a student is doing something wrong then teachers can help them and make sure they go in the correct way. Parents should also keep an eye on their student that how they are doing because if they are not then parents can also guide them. So, I conclude by saying that it is better for every student to get education at school instead of getting at home.
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How should people take decisions?? thats the real question should a person follow a feeling or motion call instincts or should they make a decision by guidance by experts and the laws and authorities. Well a person should use advise really. For example lets say a business man has to make a decision about if he should invest money or not on a product thats been selling good for the last few months but in the pass they werent selling as much. so the business man has to go and get guidance with some experts because he doesnt want to make the wrong decision and make the company waste money they wont get back. Thats why having advisers are so helpful because there suppose to help people get out of any concerns a person has. They can guide and advice you to do things right. For example when a person is in high school that person has a guidance. That person is always going to be trying to help, there gonna help decide which classes are best for a student, and there gonna look in to the student and check why a student isnt doing good and after that there gonna try to help him so he can accomplish hes goals and graduate. Every time we take a decision over something serious we need to think about it more than once because if it is a decision like buying a house its life changing ether it can go really good or it can hurt you badly thats why its better to think about it and talk with an expert because its needed to know if that person is ready and its stable enough. For example if a person wants to buy a house theres a lot of responsibilities that come with that decision and he or she has to be ready that means theres no more playing around and settle down and he or she needs to think about it if thats what they really want. Take decisions it always has a grade of difficulty thats sometimes not even with the best advisers can help to make a decision being one hundred percent sure that thats the right answer. Sometimes you just have to trust youre instincts because a person has knowledge about the answer to the question but he or she think about the answer to much that they get them selves confused and thanks to that they make poor choices when really you should just trust the person is right. For example when a teacher tells a student on a test trust your instincts and dont think about the answer to much is because they know that he knows the answer. In conclusion its always better to have a person giving you advise about a question or problem, its easier to make good decisions when a person has help than when a person is alone confused and stress about a decision. But at the same time is good to trust your self and follow your instincts and not having to depend or need someones help.
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Do you have a talent or skill? If so what's you talent/skill, and how do you use it? Explain what your talent is and how did you developed it. The first thing i'll be talking about my skills. One of my skill it cooking; I love cooking and it's one of my favorite thing to do at home when I have nothing else to do, and I'm pretty decent at it. I can only cook one thing for now, the only thing I can cook right now are eggs such as sunny side ups, scrambled, and an omelet. My dad is the one who got me into cooking, and I wanted to be a good cook like him. Another skill of mine is that I can run kind of fast I don't like running that much but I still run. I can also run far with one breath, and I don't have a lot of stamina. I can also bake. It's rare for me to bake because I usually don't do it a lot, but it fun to do if you're bored and you want to make something. The only two things that I made was cupcakes, and chocolate cake. My dad's girlfriend is the one who made kind of like baking because it fun to do. Now i'll be talking about my talents. A talent I have is drawing; Drawing is one of my top five favorite things to do when i'm not doing anything or when i'm bored. I'm decent at drawing but not really good yet I practice on trying to get better at it, and the things I draw are random because when I draw something random I usually draw it when i'm bored. The person who got me into drawing was my sister, when I saw her drawings I was amazed cause she was a good drawer, and I wanted to draw like her one day. Math is also one of my talents: math is my number one subject because i like it, and my friends say i'm good at it. When I we have a hard problem I sometimes don't use my calculator because I always forget I have one. I also like build most of the time because I get to go outside and find stuff I can play with, I usually find big sticks and carve them after I finish carving them I start sanding it so it wouldn't so rough when I finish I paint them to make it look cool, but now I bare;y do it because I have a lot of stuff to do. The only thing I use is a knife and a sand paper because some of the tools I needed to use I didn't know how to use them.
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In this world its hard to be yourself everyone wants to do the same thing . Still being yourself in this world is the greatest accomplishment . A lot of people judge in this world telling people whats good and whats bad for this its hard to be yourself in a world like this . People with social media will change people and being in high school with people around you will judge and follow the trend of the world. Social media is like a book of rules everyone wants to follow and act the same . Popular apps like instagram people post things about their life and how they're doing good and looking great with a trending outfit . People see this post and do the same thing and act different knowing that this is not you . For this you want to follow and do the same thing and change your way of living and yourself . Being yourself in high school is a accomplishment , someone will always judge and make you feel down . For this people change their personality and there way of life .like me I was scared to talk to new people because i thought they will make fun of me but that was not true and for that I am always acting like my self .Its the way of high school and if you beat the judgment and still be yourself its a accomplishment in life . In conclusion being yourself in this world that is constantly trying to change you is a accomplishment . A lot people change because of social media and high school. I agree its accomplishment because you beat the judgment and the fear of not being yourself in this world .
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main idea some schools district offter programs , that allow high school students to graduated in the three years of the traditional four years. may mean idea is students is coming the different countries is heart because speak different languages y different cultures is different languages the people is coming and this countries because make you future for to pass away you life, a later young people is this country because this make you future, is coming the high school graduated is so hart because not speak English non thing not auderstant nothing the class no pass the class is later people state four years, and high school because you no put a lot effort in to pawing , because you make you future . But my self three years is coming this country is so heart because not speak nothing English pass the class because i'm make may future for my mom and litter brother i'm see you graduated and this countries because is more opportunities and may fears years in the highs school pass the sol algebra 1,and so happy because pass the this sol, becuase i'm have a later problems and my family. the a later students no coming the school because work force one o more years is coming the collage the students make you future you family.
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My talent and skill is drawing, painting, and coloring, and writing. Those are my favorite talents and skills. And the things I like to do with them is making cartoons, painting and drawing pictures, and coloring, and writing novels. But, also last year I did art and took all art clubs ,and classes ,and usually I like to be a real cartoonist so this year I want to be a writer. And I want to do that for this year. But I am still good at it. So next year in ninth grade I am doing art again next year. And I use whenever I'm bored and there nothing I can do at home of at school. So for writing I want to write novels and books for everybody. And lately I have been taking writing classes during the summer. But last year I started being a cartoonist and start writing newspapers and drawing cartoons for the newspapers. At School I join the animate club and then I started drawing pictures for the scenes of the cartoon. And I like it. So I join the yearbook club and I started writing the captions under the photos. To tell and say what it actually means. So last year for third block I had facs ,and I use art for the cakes and cupcakes and also ice cream. And then I think that art is good for me. So let me tell about my favorite skill writing. The main I like writing is I like to write novels and books. But my favorite book I like to write is about Transformers Dark of the moon. My favorite graphic novel of all times and it is the number one movie to be produce of all times and in the beginning of the novel is the war of cybertron and the rest of the movie is all about everything about the space race. But the main thing I like about writing is you know is the words and feelings of it ,but also I like to write about poems , and poems help think about feeling. And other kind of stuff let give you some specific reasons. detail#1: I think that writing can impress you detail#2: Writing can also contain facts and opinions detail#3: Writing can also have poems So for art is everything Art is everything It can be all around us And ,but also writing can have vocabulary and it is for spelling. But you must check your spelling whenever you are done with an article or an essay. And it also contains art. But also for art it shows like it graphic novels authors must make bubble speeches for the people it the book to say. Whenever they are happy, sad, or other kinds of feelings. But it contains all kinds of words and languages for people to say ,and the bold means what is important and what it really means. But it means whenever a person reads a book. And what it have to say what it self. My conclusion is that in the future I continue to think about my talents and skills and what they really means to me. But still I think I still care about it. And that is for everyone else's. That is my favorite. For example I draw and write comics. That is my conclusion. The end
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A positive attitude is the key to success, and everyone should agree at this point. People who choose to be in a successful way, always try to be positive toward every situation. Every person in this world wants to be something that could be remembered forever. To get to what they want to and dream about to achieve it, they must need to work hard, be prepared for everything, and always should be prepared for things that might be impossible to do but never give up on it at any issue. Life gets hard sometimes and gets easy by the time, but it depends on what people choose to live with. Those who choose to live happily works hard, always have positive attitude toward everything. But those who want to be successful but not working enough on it it will get nothing from it. people like "George Washington" who are still our heroes are the ones who knew how to get through tough ways by a positive attitude. We all have different habits, we are all different, but we can change the world through our positiveness, not by being mean and not pretend to be working hard for our needs and wants. Positive attitude the something that helps us get ride of our daily problems, doing something in a good way makes is a way to our goal becoming true with no tension. If we want to make our dream come true we have to make it in a good and positive way without hurting anyone, and by loving everyone. the only thing everyone absolutely have to know is that a positive attitude and thinking positive is the way we could get ride of our bad habits and live live in peace. We can't make it through our hard times if we just sit there and don't do what we should to ourselves and other needy people. We all have to be patient, not everyone gets stuff so easily, to achieve something it takes time but we all have to be prepared for things we will face. We might won't make it through in our first try, but we should never quit trying. Everything takes times and have it's own limit to get fixed. There are two things that are above all else, one is work hard, and the second one is work hard in silence but in a positive and a good way. positive attitude is the important thing in our daily life. It's not that we have to be 100% so we could get all we want, we all know not everyone in this world is perfect so we have to do things by what we really could do, the only thing that would help us in everything is positive attitude. Nowadays everyone think they could do everything without trying the best they could, and try it in a positive way, but i think they are wrong. If you want to get the same respect s everyone else you need to have a positive mind toward every different thing in this world. Whenever things keep goes wrong we need to ask our selves that are we doing what we suppose to do, are we being what our parents and our country taught us to be, so that way we could stop thing to go from right to wrong and stay positive in every way. before we start to do something new we need to ask someone that is experienced, so we will not get lost in the middle. Never give up on anything in this world things are not hard, we are the ones who makes them difficult to do. We are not pot in this world for keep quitting things to get to our goal, we are here alive to create change in world, to love people, to love the tradition, to keep doing positive and effective things for our generation and the upcoming generations. We are born to make people smile. We are not for hate, we are for love. We all should be trying to change the negative thought to a positive thought. When we have problem to solve, we need to think twice and think positive because that solution would defiantly impact others too. We should all try hard to be in a metier type place. In my opinion everyone should be thinking about how to be successful, how to be something better, how to make others feel better, and make them pot him/her as an idol. we all should always take responsibility for our action and consequences. If you want to be something memorable you have to be the change what others would like in you, and you are the one who could make it through hard and tough ways by a positive attitude. We are the ones who can change the world by just be different and make things easy and effective in a good and positive way. I know we do not want the world to go for hate and negative way instead of a positive and right way with full of benefits. If we want to work somewhere and we don't have control on our bad behavior and have negative attitude towards the boss and other workers we will not be successful, but if we do have control on our positive and negative attitude we will always be successful and always would get promotion in every place we are. Only a positive way could effect us to achieve our needs and wants.
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My central idea is supported with specific imformacion about this threes reason, one make something great for other people, two specific job, three skill. and give my opinion about all this and be very specific. In my opinion I agree with Emerson, Because is very important to make semething great for other people that you want to help. This could be a good reason constantly to help a lot people to accomplishment dreams, goals and purpose in the life. For example make something good for people that want growing and that the families feel pround by the achievement. Other example, give to other people a reason for to going forward and cumply their dreams and purpose in the life. Specific job, a specific job make something greatest for a lot people in this world. In this job we help to peoples that want cumply their purpose in their lifes and enjoy their accomplishment. Specific job that can help a lot peoples to get many oportunities for working in any work. We help to get a good information about a specific job that want greatest a magnific accomplishment. We recollected a good information about your dreams and goals that you want, for get a excellent job that you want in your life. My idea central is help to other people to find greates accomplishment in your lifes. For example we can help to other people to find information about carreer and specific job. Other example reach information about what want the people in specific for get an amaizing accomplishment. To have a skill to trying to make something else is the greatest accomplishment that you can make for other people. when you decide to help to other peoples that is very interested to going forward with the batalle of wanted fo get a good accomplishment. For example you have a big ability for help to other people to get a greates accomplishment, you can help to othetr people, and this can be some amaizing in your life and in my life too. My conclusion is help to other people to find a greatest accomplishment and purpose in the life, that can make very happy the rest of the life and enjoy a magnific job that I want, and always going forward and never finally the dreams and porposes, and never stop to dream high.
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I think they should not let them to bring cell phones during school because they will be intertain. And they will text every time when the teacher is not looking and when ask them a problem they say oh I wasn't paying attension. Or they sometime will say could you repeat it again. Sometime they are texting to there friend or boyfriend what they are doing instead on focusing on there studying or on there future . And sometime when they are passing the street of school a car come an have an accented just buy texting and not focusing if a car is coming. They don't bother to come to school because her friend told her to not go to class. And they talk about people and spreads it around. And they don't care about school but only texting to her friends. And they have low grades buy talking to her friends. And they are just talking and talking.
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The school should proved a better and healthier lunch menu. Schools cafeterias plans to change to a now school lunch menu. I think is good idea to change the lunch menu. The school menu repeat the same food every day. For example,the students are boring that school lunch menu don't change the food for a better that the students can be satisfy. First at all,some of the students skip classes just to go to buy good food outside the school. In addition,would be great if the department that make the menus can approve for the people who work in the cafeteria to give a good food that can help student to don't sleeps during the classes and have energy when the classes start and they can put attention. Also,changing the lunch menu the student can attend to the school every day because some of the students don't come to the school because they don't like the type of food that they give. In conclusion,for benefit of the student would be a excellent reason to change the school lunch menu. In the school lunch menu there are food that contain a lot of grease. For example,that type of food with grease can make the student get sicken. Moreover, the grease can be accumulate and affect the heart of some of the student. Also, there are more possibility the the system of the stomach be affecting,the the amount of grease that is use in the food. In other hand, the grease can make the student be obese there are many case in school there are a lot of student obese because the food that school provide contain to much grease. In conclusion,All the food that is in the school menu can cause several problems for the students. While other argue that change the lunch menu is a good idea,but there are other argue that change the lunch menu is not a good idea because there are some student that have a favorite food from the menu and they want the menu to stay the same. Although this might be valid, there are several important idea to considered,such as,some of the student pay there food but the food is not good enough. For example,some of the student buy the food in here of the school because they to have energy to made all the classes. So, They don't eat at home because there are not a lot amount of time so they decide to came to eat to the school but there is not a good food. However,sometimes the lunch food is costly but there are time the food is not full cook. In conclusion,the student pay the food to eat because is important to be healthier. The school don't change the food every weak and same day they have the same food. On the other hand,there are food that are not healthier for the student to consume. At the end, to have a good care for the student there need to be a good food. Althoug a really good food help student to have energic.
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Imagine being a doll that is being controlled and someone telling you that this is your character traits. You don't have control on your own character trait because you let others influence you to think that's what your character trait is. Many people let others pick what their character trait is instead of doing it on your own and learning who you are and who you want to be and/or let others decide what their character trait is or are obligated to be this this person their not. Most let others decide because they don't know who they want to be or what others want them to be. I agree with this prompt because you are obligated to because the other person is in control of your life, you let others choose because you aren't sure who you want to be, and you choose what you want your character trait to be. You are obligated to because the other person is in control of your life and will make you feel vulnerable if you don't do as they say; they are the ones in power with what your character trait is and who you are going to be. An example can be your parents especially your mom that raises you. It might not be all mothers out there but most of them will raise a child and tell them what their character trait is going to be. Another example can be is if you are in a situation and it's between your life or death and the person makes you choose what your character trait is when that is not who you want to be but your life is on the line. Whoever you choose to be reflects who and what you are going to be in the future. You let others choose what your character trait is because you are not sure what your character trait is and don't know who you want to be. Many people tell each other that this is who they are and just influences people to tell you that's who you are. How will you know that for sure though if you cannot even figure out what your character trait is on your own and if that is what you choose it to be. This is where you over think about your character trait and just take your friends or any other person's opinion about who you are and what your trait is. If you are not sure who and what your character trait is just learn more about yourself and don't take anyone else's opinion and make that your character trait. You choose what you want your character trait to be because you have the power to control who and what you want to be and not what other's have to say what your character trait is. You yourself choose to make what your character will be. The best thing that a person can do to figure out who and what they want to be and what their trait is going to be is listing what you like about yourself by doing pros and cons. You will know your character trait when you feel comfortable and you love yourself for making another person smile and making their day. Along the way you will learn new things you did not know about yourself. We get to choose our own character traits not others, let that be a valuable lesson. In conclusion you yourself choose what your character traits are going to be and not by others because you have the power to choose who you are and what your character traits is going to be.
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Many people believe it is possible to change your first impression. Since a lot people have bad impression like disrespect and negative thing to say, one can change if you really want to be a better person in the society. First of all, disrespectful people can learn how to be respectful. So when you meet again your impression can change because you never imagine that they could be an amazing person. As you can see they can have a great respect and change your mind. Next, if a persons first impressions is negative,they could had been a bad day. You never judge anyone. Some people have good and bad days. They could feel negative because the bad day. So the next time you meet them they could have a better day. Meanwhile, first impression is negative because is always in the back of your mind so is difficult to see it differently. As you can see the first impression is always part of your natural release. In conclusion, you never have to judge a person before you meet them. Because they always show that reality as they are and they can change the first impression that you already know about them.
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Why do curfews interfere with young people's lives? For some people, they have to stay at work really late because of this reason. A curfew could really mess up someones life when they're doing something important. No wonder why curfews interfere with young people's lives and here's the reason. Curfews interfere with young people's lives because they have to stay at work very late, have to intended to something , and have fun with their friends. However, some people don't agree with this position. They think that a curfew keeps teenagers out of trouble. For example, When the teenager comes home on time, their mother wouldn't be scared where they have gone and why they stay out late. So, this explains why the council thinks that a curfew to young people's lives could get them out of trouble. However, young people still consider that having a curfew could interfere with their lives and here's the first reason. Going home on time when they're at work is impossible. For example, some people working at a restaurant stay late some times because of cleaning the dirty dishes or taking a long time to do their side jobs. Also, when they're working for the government, they have to stay really late because of paper work or something urgent. This shows that having a curfew could make young people really stressed because they would have to rush their side jobs and get home in time. That is one good reason why they shouldn't adopt the curfew and here's the next one. A lot of young people have things to do when they're out . For example, when the teenagers are in a play, they can't stop the play until it's finished or they will ruin the play. When they're at a school dance,they can't leave if they're participating the dance or they have a date. Young people sometimes have things to do after hours or want to go and participate. That's another good reason why the council shouldn't adopted the curfew and here's the last reason. For teenagers, they just want to have fun and stay out late. For example, teenagers like to drive out very late with their friends or drink with them. Also, play games with their friends and stay up until they finish a level or a quest at a arcade or Dave and Busters. A lot of teenagers don't always sleep on time when they're having fun. That sums everything and here's the closing. In conclusion, this stats that curfews interfere young people's lives because of them working very late. Also, when, they're intending in an event. Lastly, when they're having fun with their friends. This shows that curfews interfere with young people's lives. They can stay out as long as they like, it's their life.
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I agree with Emerson's statement, about individuality because is something that you can try and be better person in the world. First thing if you do yours own thing by yourself is something like amazing for the world, because don't depend of nobody else. I think trying something to yourself is how we learn more. And is the pride of the family, and the world to see that you trying and trying for to be something better of life. I think is no hard to try anything for to be a better person in life. I always wish better accomplish to others persons in all world. Is like a example studying gave a good benefitsfor to be a better person. Is something that you try for to be pride of the world. When you going to school don't waste the time, in school. Is the pride for us school have a good future for us. When you do all things by yourself is an pride, for yourself. Graduate from school is something greatest accomplisment anybody can do it for yourself this is an pride, that everybody want to have. If we don't never to try something never going to know about the things, that way we need to try to do anything. Maybe something that we don't want to try can be a greatest accomplisment that we can have. Is very important to try because we going to know about it. It something that in the future can help and for the world and family too. Greatest accomplisment can be a little thing but, if you do by yourself is a pride for you it does't matter, what type of thing it is. Family always are going to be pride of it. Opportunities for to do things always can have to yourself. Greatest Accomplishment mean that you can do it like going to university for a better life is something greatest accomplisment that can do. I always going to give greatest accomplisments to other persons. Because I always want to see better to others persons accomplish their dreams. Some people they don't greatest accomplisment maybe don't find somebody to wish their dreams. I think is something, like felt big person, how to make greatest accomplisment to othes persons and then to see that they can do it.
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It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. People have that dont need take awareness that was insurance their self. Many people think that should be change the impression and attitude than families, friends and the world. However, because every person have indifference dont strive expression are sure and have perspective to be optimist different. Every person have indifference dont strive expression are sure. For example, my sister dont want go to lives Generic_City and have the impression that dont need because have friends high school. the people just want to be different because dont want change have reasons that people can't change only themselves the people feels that can have more freedom and cant be change. The people have perspective to be optimist different. For example, I like my personality is perfect but Generic_Name dont like because, she said is something genuine. Nobody can be change because is one same the people want see calm and have confidence was sure in the decisions It has been the first impression are almost impossible to change, every person have indifference dont strive expression are sure and the people have perspective to be optimist different and Dont can change the people just have resistence.
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In a recent survey 70% of pedestrians think imagination is more important than knowledge. One day I imagined that I would play travel soccer for a really good team in Florida when I imagined that I put my mind into it and I made my imagination become reality. For example when you were a kid you used to imagine that you were flying through the air or in space fighting aliens on Mars, imagination can come a long way from just being a kid to inventing something that can change the world. I agree with Albert Einstein's statement I do believe his statement not only because he was one of the greatest scientist in the world but because this statement is so truthful. Knowledge is a huge part of our lives we need knowledge in everyday activities in school we gain our knowledge by going to class and learning more and more lessons everyday. Imagination is more important than knowledge, everyone can imagine things it's not whether if I have more knowledge than you or if she has more knowledge than me there is no limit when it comes to imagination. Anyone can imagine something and make it happen it's the effort you put into your imagination that makes knowledge superior to your imagination. Knowledge can only get you so far in life if you don't have a thought proccess but what you do have is knowldge how far is that going to get you whee you need to be? If we didn't have any imagination in our lives where would we be right now? As a whole what would we do if someone never imagined a car and invented it or if someone never imagined a light bulb and invented it, what would happen if we never have imagined those daily necessity's. Imagination paints the full picture in our lives.
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Dou you think are you success or not? some people think what not is the better but other person think what yeas is the best for everyto pursue fighter for to have a world best . I am agree with the question everybody we o need to keep fighting to get the results that we want to be successf ul not let the to follow to try single why wing first work our we need to keep instant moment until till to get the purpose is to fight what all to pass an examination we have error nothing to pass an examination since the principle not as a early as possible why pron poss error to fight why the we keed and to follow a run to fight. I am think all the person we need time for more work and estudy and practice more to give fot never to leaver the struggle fotr existence in the life nothing is easy example a person some not follow in the study for not to be wary fight what all to pass an examination and aproximatein the life nothing is easy . everybodyr persuare correct the error some people need more to follow for correct the error.
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Generic_Name 10/23/2018 Schools should extend time by two hours because students will have more time to do there class work. If a students have more time to do there class work then they will not have there class work as homework. Having more time in school means that you can get your work done and have extra time to do othere class work. In my old school we only had seven hours of school and we have eight classes in a day. most of the time we barley had time to finish ower class work so we had to finish it as homework. We also did not have time to do labs, expirement, and project. Thats why having more time can help us do all of those things. Another reason would be is that teachers will have time to explane to students things that they do not get. Teachers have time to explane things to a students and help them under stand more about what they are learning. In the movie Matilda students there only had six hours of school and teacheres did not have time to explane things to students. Students only went to school, tooke notes, and went back home. Sense they had no time at school to do class work they had a lot of homework. Most of them did not even finish there home work becauses it was to much. At the end of the movei students had took an exam and they had the whole six hours to finish it. When the time was up ninde persont of the students did not finished so they automaticly failed. if only they just had more time, more students would have passed the exam. Another reason would be that having more time can help students is that scientists prove that having more time added in a school schedual will help students incress there acidemic by ten persont. That means if i spend more time in school learning i will be come smarter then students with a regular schedual. Having more can help students finish work they would not normaly finish when they have a regular schedual.
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Dear principal. We like to clean litter from our school to help the janitor. My friends would like to clean the litter with me outside the school. There kids that don't clean the litter in there school & Others who does. We will help the janitor clean the litter. From STUDENT_NAME
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I belive that students should be not requiered to take elective classes because elective classes are not importance so, student waste their time. Elective classes are nor riquiered for graduatio also, student will not dedicate time in thoes classes and they wiil get F and their gpa will came down. Studen will scape thoes classes because tey dont need thoes classes and they can be boring and they will get in problemes. I belive that student should not take elective classes because elective classes are not importan. Students are wasting their time by taking thoes classes because beside thoes classes they can take others importan classes that can get a credit from. Elective classes should be opcional because some student wnated to finish theirs classes early and by taking elective classes they waste thair time. I think that the schools shoul do is give then the opcion if they wnated to take elective classes or they can take all their credit classes. Elective classes are not riquiered for graduation so, the student will not take thoes classes seriously. Student will not do the work because they know that they don't need thoes classes and they have more imporatn work to do from the others classes that they need for their graduation. Student will get F and because of that their gpa will became down and that can affect then when they decide to go to college. Some student will not go too thoes classes because they know that thay dont haveto pass them to graduate and thoes classes can be boring. Elective classes can be boring for soame student becuse their are some student that don't like music, drama or art some studnet like sport or some student what they wnat finish all their credit classes. Student that don't like thoes classes they will tride to scape thoes classes and they can get in big problems because of that. This can affect then in the future when they wanted to go to colllege or if they want to work in a federal job. This is a big problem and because of this they can lose a lot of oportunities. The schools shoul resolve this problem by making elective classes opcional. Inconclusion student should not take elective classes because elective classes are not importan and student will not care. Becide elective classes student shoul have the opcion to take all their credit classes. Elective classes are nor requiered for graduation so, studen will not do the work and they will not go to thoes classes because it may be boring for some student. Some student will scape thoes classes because some student likeclasses like art, music or drama they my like sport. Studen will get in big prolems because they scape their classes and that can affect then in the future. Schools should do the best for their student and amke elective class opcional.
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Dear principal, i think that bringing phones to school is ok as long as we don't use them during class time. Me STUDENT_NAME is telling you to please let use the phones during free times because how about if we have an emergence and we need to call our mom or dad and we cant communicate with them. It would be very hard for use because we also have to have our own time to communicate with others in case something bad happens, So im telling you if we can please use our phones in lunch, nutrition or in other free times. We the students have to have the free time to. But we also have to be careful on not be using the phone during class time to. If we do then you can cancel the policy but if we actually do good we can continue with it. You never know, we might even do good in this and we can keep on doing it but if we fail, You can stop it. I'm telling you to just give us a chance to see if it dose work out.
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Educators say that students should have shorter breaks because, students don't retain information as easily when they return, its better if students spend more time in school rather than taking long breaks, summer breaks are better when they are shorter. Some students say having long breaks gives them time to relax and not having to worry about school for a couple of weeks is a good thing. One day on my summer break me and my friends were discussing on how much we love our long summer breaks. We also realized that having a long summer break is only fair because we spend so many hours in school everyday. Summer breaks are better when they are shorter because, students dont forget as much information that they learned during school. Its better to come back and still remember the stuff you learned. Just imagine coming back after a 5 week break, I doubt students would be able to take a test right away. We need shorter breaks because if students spend to much time away from school they'll forget the important things they've learned. Students should consider spending more time in school rather than spending all there time on their breaks. Spending more time in school is more important than spending longer weeks out of school not learning anything. Students must realize that their education is more important than spending time off of school. School teaches us what we need to know for the future, it prepares us for the next stage of life. They need to realize that they need to learn us much as they can, the more effort put into school work and learning the better the outcome. Life shows us that you can't just get a job without knowing anything, you can't sign up if you don't know your basic math or basic reading. Some students think school is a waste of time but honestly it's preparing us for the stuff we need to know. Students do not retain information as easily when they return. Those long breaks really take a toll on the students, they return to school and don't have a clue on how to solve a basic problem. The more time students have out of school the more it drains their memory on what they've learned. Coming back on an empty brain not knowing anything isn't good at all because what if a student had an exam on the day he or she returned, do you think they'd pass? Having a shorter break would improve a lot of things. In conclusion, it'd be so much better if breaks were shorter than they usually are. Students would be able to come back and easily answer a question and get it right. The less time on break the better, school should be the main priority for students. Im sure that some of the students would love to pass their classes. Overall we know that having a shorter break would improve the learning skill for all students. I agree that our breaks should be shorter so we could stay on track and keep p our good work.
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Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home ? Well school is a place your suppose to feel comfortable in, there are many different schools. I personally think being home schooled can have it's advantages and disadvantage, you of course have benefits for example not being bothered by other classmates, and finishing your work on time without having a distraction, kids in outiside schools have that disadvantage of having classmates who don't care about there education and some kids get carried away and distracted and they end up having to repeat classes or stay another extra year, It's very different because years on years you can just retake the class at home with nobody judging you about failing, here it is like an embarassment to be seen another year so that's something to look into. Home schooled kids i would say get more attention as in that one on one attention, I would also say outside schools get the same but there are plenty of full classes and the teacher can't always get around to all students. There are lots of kids who want to be able to attend outside school but they can't for many reasons for example a disability or how they are a celebrity, being in that situation you would want to not be known like that so your just forced and obligated to attend home school and that's when home school kids would think it would be better to be attending outside school you'll always be home and feel trapped you'll get tired of being in your own home, It does people good being able to socialize a bit. School can also be finished faster during home school, lots of things are offered, but also lots of things are not offered for example lunch, in almost all public schools there is free lunch, free everything your getting a free education, home school is expensive and you will always provide your own food. The wifi at home will also be payed, the computer and just many things but as we know it can be beneficial in life your getting an education so it's worth the spend you'll get something out of it. What's better than being home and getting an eduacation it's benefitting you and it will in the future, when you get a dipoma. My point is either your in public school, private school, home school, it will benefit you in many many ways.
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I think that the curfew is good idea for adopting because at least sudents will not dying on the streets and they will not be no loneliness for them. Teens would not braking the law if they were not in big trouble. For teens there will be no street fights, crime, shooting weapons, etc. The curfew will take care of them at least temporary or it depends. Government need to take care of homeless teens. Those who drop high school early is too bad because some students desided do not learning and try hard their subjects. They will not success in future without educarion. In real world no one need them because they are not educated, did not complete high school and there are take care by themsellve on the streets. After curfew they leaving, found minimum job with payment good for them, at least teens did something in their life. Their big mistake that ignor, lazy, skiping school, worse grades, attitude, not respect, selfphone and etc. If teens will not changing their minds, posobility well end up in wrong way. But I hope that they will succeed in future.
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I think we are accomplish more if we are always do in something,Because if you doing wat you have to be doing you going to get your stuff done. Because when you dont do wat you have to do you dont det nothing done,then you going to be worried because you dint get our work done. my second reason is if you get your stuff done you can get a free time when you do all your work and it fells so good finishing all you work that you had. when you done you not going to be tired.
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Imagine being asked to teach a lesson but actually teaching it to elementary students. It would be a very helpful for the students that are struggling. I conquer with the person that is going to go and share the lesson. I am going to give you specific details and examples about the things I would do if I was he or she going to share the lesson with elementary students and why it should be important. One way that I agree by sharing a lesson to other students is important. This can be more helpful because the other teacher before that taught the students maybe didn't explain very well and the students were probably were confused the whole time or some of them were lackadaisical. And the new teacher that is going to teach the lesson to the students probably is a better explained and a probably has good and more skills. He or she maybe been called from many different schools and different states and asking if he or she can go teach a lesson to their students but if the teacher agrees with it. Another way I could be more helpful for the students by asking their teacher if I can see the whole students grades that are in the class and the people that are struggling and make a group lesson with them. The teacher should tell the students to write down notes when the teacher is writing them down too. The teacher should give the students homework and tell them to bring it back and check it and see if they have gotten better with the way the teacher is helping them more or not. The teacher should give a form to the students parents for the ones that are struggling and asking them permission if they want the teacher to help them more in what they are struggling more in. So the students can get their grade up and better in the SOL's. My last thing that I would do to be more specific and very useful is to give the students tests of the things they have been struggling with and see if they have gotten more better and see if the teacher has done a good job to the students. The teacher should give meetings to the student teachers and more lessons so they don't need to call for a better teacher than them. And its better if the teachers can get taught so they can be more specific in what the students asks them. All the teachers of the elementary should all go take lessons to teach better and get quizzed like their students. I explained why it is important to share a lesson to other students. Some of the students got better and some didn't but at least they tried and put effort in it. All my reasons should help why a teacher should share a lesson with other students. The students should be more grateful for the teacher that came and helped them out. These are all my examples I would do if I was the one sharing a lesson.
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Technology is the best way to contact your family members . For example in emergency and on special occassions like religous holidays , birthdays, anniversary, wedding that you didn't have time to attend . Also you can contact them if some one far away from you is in the hospital or someone died in your family you can contact one of your family maembers to see what is happening at the house at that moment. Also You can play games on your phone or listen to music while you are going some where in the car or in the airplane. Also you can order food from your favourite restaurante to eat at home or at the hotel you are satying at. Therefor you can check out books from your phone and read from your book on your phone. also you can book a hotel room from the technology now days or you can also take pictures and send them to your love ones. Another example can be that where ever you are in the world you can order anything from online store. Like makup kits, dresses or other things from the online store. Also you can purchase movie tickets , zoo tickets or you can go on a cruise with family. Also you can purchase tickets to travel to your dream country and do fun stuff there. Technology is also bad , because what ever you post on social media it will go everywhere and everone would see what are you doing and what are you up to basically the photos you take of yourself and you post it on social media the people are going to see it and it probably hurt you future career or your job that you are in. Also technology is bad , because people out there are literlly photshoping what ever you post basically girls , because they do inpropreate things with the photos of girls. Another example of why is technology is bad. It's bad , because of cyberbullying. People bully other people on social media and the people who are getting bullied can't do anything ,because the people who are doing bullying. they don't know who they are if the people who are getting bullied said something to the bully they will do something wrong with them. So that's why technology is good and bad try to avoid these things lif you want to post something out there just be aware of those people who do all these kind of things like cyberbulling and photoshopping. The good thing can be that make a personal file and keep the photos or only send to your family members and try to avoid social media,
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The power to be successful in life is hard because it isn't always given to you easily you have to work for it to achieve in life. You have to go threw all the good and bad obstacles to grow successfully. If you have high expectations and a positive mindset then good opportunities will be handed to you. You don't need to have money in your life to be successful as long as your a hard worker everything will have a good outcome. When you go through all the good and bad obstacles you learn along the way that it will take time. It won't be easy and it won't happen overnight. Every baby step you take is getting you closer and closer to your achievement. Having faith in god will help you get through all the obstacles you have been struggling along the way and guide you to the right direction. God put's you through all these obstacles because he wants to test your strengths and weaknesses all you need to do is put your head down and walk right through them. You need failure in order to understand the purpose of life. Having high expectations and a positive mindset leads you to new chapters in life. When your passionate about something you love doing every negative outcome will come towards you and you have to work ten times harder. There are people who love and support you in every decision you decide to take they just want the best for you. Having them as a support system makes you think to yourself you have a purpose in life and the reason why you continue to do the things you love to do. Your parent's expect you to have high expectations because they wanna be proud of the person you are becoming. You are becoming someone that has great things to achieve in the future all the hard you have worked and put effort into has finally paid off because you worked really hard into getting exactly where you wanted to be that makes you an achiever. You don't need to be wealthy family in order to be successful. You can come from a poor family and have big dreams and goals and work your way up. All that doesn't define who you are. People can criticize you in every way and make fun of what economy your living in to them as long as your humble and know you are successful without the value of the money in the world you are already successful. Money does not have value in being successful it's all a fantasy people are living in. Money can make a thousands of people happy and handed to them freely but if they haven't worked hard enough for it what value does that money have? In order to be successful in life you need to be humble, an achiever, and a hard worker. All those things make you successful without the value of money. In conclusion, the value of money, wealthiness, and all the good and obstacles you battle and push through finally paid off you now have the power to be successful in life because even though you fell in every step of the way and sweated through the obstacles you can now be proud of the effort you made and got you to the finish line. All those challenges was to prepare you for the future and help you have a better understanding in life.
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Based on what I read in the sentence. What he said is something very important because there are a lot of people that spend their life. Doing just one thing, they never try something new they mind be thought the in the future wouldbe use less or they just don't feel like they actully need it but if you get more experiences you will grow as a person and besed on experiences too. For example. When you start growing u learn a lot of things that make you a better person. You know that there is a person that want to learn new things, even if he's young but you know things like that adults know that make you be a older person. In the way that you know things that persons that have you same age not , but you know that you have some other responsabilities, because based on what you know you life have to about on that things that you know or you make or that things that you learn. For example, you go to school that is a place where you learn and where you been intul you graduate because if you know more you have more oportunities to be succecful, and i'm agree on his coment why? let told you the reason. A lot of people never try new things like if you are a teacher and after like 5 years you don't feel like to teach more. you can try to be something else that help you to grow more based on experiences because if you try more things like other jobs or try to study something else like gona be rich on experience because many people sometimes get stuck on one thing but everything in this world have a solution but to get your goals is not a easy thing you have to sacrifed many things that you love. For example your hoobies or your family or other events, but at the end of the day you have everything you ever wish becuse you deservet and you work so hard to get it. And you start see the succes that you have. You would see that all you did to get there was correct and that make you grow because you have more experience. Nothing is inpossible. For example if you are the owner of a little restaurant and you want to your restaurant grow more, and more but you remenber that you study bussines and also you work for a restaurant and on that restaurant you were a manager, so you have the experience and if you know how spend money and you make a good marketing plan you can be succesfull and you will growing as a person and as experiences. In addition I think he's right becuase how I been saying if you know more you have experience and you can a have better jobs and that way you growing you have oportunities more chances to be a better on your life and unless you try something beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow. Based on your experiences.
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The principal is saying that the students must sign up in a activity so they wont be left out. it is good to say that they must sign up in a activity in sports or yearbooks. So they can move around and exersice. Sports is a good activity to sign up for because in sports you can sign up for football soccer,baseball,Track All of these activities are great to sign up for even if. You dont have to sign up for these you can sign up for the yearbooks. The year books are great because if more people sign up for the yearbooks the pictures can be done faster. Sports could be a awsome! activity to sign up for because if your in soccer you can go to soccer practices more then 2 times a week. The games can be at least 1 hour and more and you can celebrate when you win a game. Games dont happen offten a week but practicing can be good for you! because you get to run and do laps when your coach tells you to. During games there can be drinks that you can have there is mostly water so that can heal you up and get your energy back. The activities can be thery relaxing and a really good sport to join like if you like to run and exersise just join wich ever sport. The best one is most likely track because in track you can run alot. Football can be hard at most of the time you can go against tall poeple and really strong people the way how you can be like them is just train more and exersise more. If you do that then you will be able to join a higher team with better players in football. during football games the players can be really loud and anoying and tease you wich can be bad and get people mad that has happened alot during football history. during yearbooks if your teaacher tells you, you can get out for class and go to different classes and take pictures in there classroom and post them in the yearbook. Also you can take a camera with you and take some cool pictures there. The yearbooks can be awsome because you can take pictures of fun and funny stuff in a classroom.
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Dear principal, I am very honored to write to you this letter and i pray you take time from your busy schedule and read this this letter . i hope you are doing good as i am here. i also want to say that i am happy to be a student in your school. first of all i take a stand on your decision of changing the school food to a very healthier one and say it a very good one. it's a very thoughtful idea , and it's also shows that you love the school and i appreciate you for such a great idea. it's a good idea because, half of the student have allergic reaction to some food the chief's cook so they rather go hungry or have an empty stomach and if such incident still goes on, student might even pass out one day. secondly, if we get healthier food, we will be active and our brains will be able to function well as soon as class start. However, having a good breakfast or even any good food to begin your day sometimes help the brain to work very well , and it's also help make the brain be in a very good position of working during the day. and not only does it work for the brain, it's also consist or contain some particular minerals like carbohydrate, protein, and fat and other supplementary substance that also help for human growth and also help give energy to the human body. lastly , changing the school food will also will make student that has never tried the school lunch will now want to try it . Moreover, some student order food and have it deliver to the school all because they do not like the school food or allergic to certain food , and if such incident keeps happening, the school food will go waste and it's will make the school loose money. so therefore, i will end my speech by saying that it's a very good and and a nice decision for having to change the school food to a healthier one .once again i hope you take time from your busy schedule and read this letter.
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Would you choose to fail for somebody else's ideas and not your own? Although some say that people should seek guidance from people that have experience about life because they have become more wise with the years, actually people should make their own decisions because you already know what you want for your life and if you fail will be for your own decision and not on somebody else. Some say that people should seek guidance from experts that have experience about life because they have become wise with the years. Old people like my grandfather for example, he always told me that the best way to accomplish something you really want is by giving the best of us and not wait for other people to do it for you because that is not going to happen. In reality people should make their own decisions about what to do with their lives because you already have an idea about how you really want to be or what you want for your life to be in the future. When my brother was about to finish high school he tried to get an advice from somebody about what to do with his life, but my father was always working and my mom had not experience about life because she had taken some bad decisions in life. So my brother had to follow his instincts and take a decision in his own. Now he graduated from high school and he started an academy to be a police officer one day. Some people say that it is better to fail by taking our own decisions and not fail because of decisions that other people take for us. I still remember my aunt Generic_Name she always wanted to be a cloth designer but she did not take her own decision and now she is still working and making some more money then a cloth designer, but she is not completely happy with her job because she followed some other people ideas and she did not think on what she really wanted for her life. In conclusion it is better to follow your ideas because that way we will do what we really want for our lives and not what other people tell you to do even if they haven more experience sometimes is just better to follow your instincts. Seek guidance from experts that have a lot of experience about life is not always the best thing to do because if you follow their ideas you will not work on what you want. Although everything you need to succeed is to follow your dreams.
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Introduction: Author Ralph Waldo Emerson "Unless you try to do something, beyond what you have already mastered, you will never grow". One thing that is really important in life is School because is the second place that we learn about how we can be respectful, responsible, honest and education. The second thing is Work- Independent because when we are always with our family is simple because we don't know how is the reality in the life. We were dependent but work include be prepare to have new experiences in our personal life and we are prepare to the future. The third thing is Life Cycle when we are baby, kids, teenagers, adults and older. The first is School (experiences) In our life school is important because teachers educate we and we learn of them about the classes like english when we travel to any country that speak this language we need to learn by process every day inside and outside the class because we improve with new topics like verbs, punctuation marks in school porcess. Teachers teach good values in our life like integrity, respectful, honest, responsible, service. For example, when we start to study we don't know how to write, read, paint, speak. They teach we everything like our parents at home. We decide when we grow up if we want graduate from the school,those values efforts, dedication, knowledge, good skills and new opportunities if we do everything correct inside and outside the school because we can't stop growing the opportunites that we can have is only one time in the life. Education is very important now in the present because if we go to school we are professionals and we can have good choices. Second is Work being independent in the life our parents work all the time because they want that we can have a good life, but when we go to work is interesting for example when we continue going to the school our parents can't give money all the time and we think like adults being independent, finding a job and learn about the life not is simple and is hard at the same time. Our future dependent if we want to think like adults or teenagers. We can be master helping other people that need our help those people will grateful with we because if we try to help each other we know everything from life experiences, when we go to school they pay better with a diploma from High School, College or University. Finally is Life Cycle when we are babies our parents teach we every process for example how to go to the restroom, brush our tooth, take a shower, speak, walk, eat for example when is the time for go to the dinning room. The time when we need go to sleep is relly important learn every little thing that our parents teach we when we are baby. We discovere a new stair that already we can be mastered. Kids for example after when we were baby in a simple thing we discovered new things, but being kids we continue in a easy way the life like speak, walk, eat, sleep, change our clothe not is difficult because we learn in the past, we try to do something beyond that we don't know before. Teenagers when we think that the life is hard going to the school, work, family, not is easy because is more responsability, efforts being stronger and continue doing those things is very different from the past. Adults is more difficult when we were baby, kids and teenagers because adults are charge of the family, work, pay, education, responsabilitys in the job and home. Adults are dependent because they learn the good things from the past for example when teenager want permission for go to any party adults really need to know what person is, where is from, the personality and who is her/his family, in any moment like that is really difficult to say yes or no. Adults are important in the society because they are master and grow from the Life Cycle. Older like grandmother and father they already know that grow not is easy but they did every step in a good form going the school, work - independent. Old people in sometimes need help from younger people like the family can be sister, brother, son, wife and daughter because they are tired and need space to relax like going to the park sharing with his/her family and friends. In this last thing if we try something different we can have a positive life. In conclusion: We can try being a better person in our life because every step is very important maybe in sometimes life is hard but if we learn in a correctly form everything like going to the school is a new experience, work - independent teach we being stronger and not be afraid, life cycle is the process from every step when we were baby, kids, teenagers, adultd and older. We grow every moment that can be easy or difficult. We need to be dependent to grow up, master everything helping other people in the world. I agree with the author because I know if we stop growing is very impossible to have new experiences in our life. Unless we try to do something different and intersting in our life we can a better chance to do good things can be in the present or in the future, for the new generation that can have good opportunities in school, job and with the society.
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Although some say students should use cell phone in classroom because, they used for internate acsses to do in class works actually, students shouldn't use cell phone in classroom because they are trouble in the class room and they are doing chat when the teacher is teaching. First, students shouldn't use cell phone in classroom because, they are trouble in the class room. That mean when the teacher is teaching the students may be listing music so that makes trouble the other students, They didn't do any thing for classwork. They only doing listing music and watch a movie so on that happen it's very disturb. Also, If the student want listen music and teacher never want to listen music so that make fight with teacher. In the class room students usually don't use cell phone so one students use every time cellphone in class he/she always trouble in class maybe that happen again and again in class the school decide and rejected him/her for didn't come to school. Socond, students shouldn't have a cellphone in classroom because, they are doing chat when the teacher is teaching For example, When the teacher is teach on the classroom and students doing on the chat there is no attention what the teacher says. Their is no attenition to learn. Their is only play with their friends in the class .Their is show a bad image with their friends. It mean one student want to joke for other student girls or boys so he gonna show for that person bad and rude picture then student lough in bad situation. Also, the one students lough for him picture his/her moral is not good so they don't want to come again school by confidently. He/ She is scared and afraid. Third, students shouldn't have a cellphone in classroom because, they are cheating on the test. For example, If the teacher gave for students a test and he sat down in the chair then one students have a cellphone he/she can cheat on their phone so they got a good grade for that test that makes bad for the other students score. It means students they dont have confidence do their own test. Every time they don't want to study for test and they always think doing cheat on the test but that is bad for his/her kownleage. Fourth, students shouldn't have a cellphone in classroom because, there is no any particpate and activites when the teacher ask question for students. Their is more time waste and spend their time with their cell phone all the days. There is bad for health because when every time watch movie and listen music that is no good for brain and eyes. It means every time stay with their phone and the brain control one thing just the movie or the music so we can't handle or participate other thing even didnt look the people what their saying. In conclusion, students shouldn't use cell phone in classroom because they are trouble in the class room and they are doing chat when the teacher is teaching.
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I prefer to work alone, because i can focus more and not get distracted by others. Working with a group can be helpful , but some people do more work than others and at the end everyone gets the same credit. This is why i prefer to work alone, so that can get a full credit for the work i did. For example many student's like to work in groups and it takes more time than working alone in my opinion. Students that work in groups can get distracted very easily by side conversations, in the other hand students who work alone can listen to music or go to the library where it's nice and quite. I get a lot of work done working alone than working with groups, because when i'm working alone i get in zone in my mind where i'm like super focused. I be wanting to do more work alone and time passes by quickly, this is why prefer to work alone. this one time i worked with a group because we had to be in group's and i barely did any work to be honest, because there was no competition and i didn't feel motivated at all and i still got the same credit as the people who put in all their hard work into that group work. This is why i prefer to work alone.
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Do you think having a positive attitude would always bring success in life? Always having a negative attitude wouldnt really take you anywhere in life. But, having a positive attitude would bring success in life, because nothing would be in your way to reach your goals you want to reach. For example, the prompt says It has been said that a positive attitude is the key to success in life. Therefor, being a positive person would bring better life choices in the future. Agreeing with this statement would represent you as a positive person. Some examples would be, being positive would bring better benefits. This stands for being a nice and positive person would bring new and better things in life. Like, having a better job than the last one would bring you positive energy because your getting paid more than the last job you had. This could lead to always having a positive attitude every time. Another example for agreeing to this statement would be, a positive attitude could sometimes bring better opportunities in life. This represents being positive could bring good or bad things later in life. In addition, this could be like coming to school every day and being prepared to learn could bring good things in life. Or, not coming to school could bring bad benefits in the future. this would also represent you as a good and caring person or a bad and irresponsible person. In conclusion, having a positive attitude could sometimes be the key to success in life. Therefor try to always have a positive attitude, life could be hard sometimes and wont go the way you want it to go. That's why you should never give up and think positive of the positive consequences that could happen. Also, having a positive attitude could bring better friendships that could last for a lifetime. these are all my explanations on why positive attitude is the key to success in life.
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Some people believe that you don't identifying your career at a young age is a bad idea. Although some might believe that identifying your career choice at a young age is good for the future. The reason behind this idea is, students are expected to identify a career bt hte time they enter high school, some good high schools helps the students, with the courses they taking, as a high school student they talk to their parents or counsellor about the career choice and what college to choose. In my opinion identifying your career choice as high school student. Because parents and counsellors looking forward to what career i'm having in the future. And identifying what is the best college for me to attend, because of my career. But the hard thing about this idea is that you got to study hard, worry about all the tests you'll take in the future, and trying not to let your school and parents down. In conclusion identifying your career in high school is a benefit for my future.
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Dear, principal, i will like to star in saying that i think it would be good for us student to help the environment because that way there is not to much contamination on the community and it would be healthy and safe to the people that lives in the community. Us student can also do good thinks when we are doing the community service because that way un winter we can go and shovel some snow and on summer we could do other things. and doing community service its not only going outside or doing hard work you can also help some church , hospitals ,in a store and also in helping teachers and other things like babysitting. Doing community service it could also be fun it doesn't have to always be boring it could be fun because if they send you to places that you have to be with a lot of people you could be with your friend when you are doing community service like helping a teacher the teacher might need to helpers so you can ask your friend if he/she wants to go with you so you could not be by your self. community service it is also good because the way you are not always in your house trying to figure out what are you going to do because your bored or you will not be just laying down in the bed or in the sofa playing video games or watching a movie because over time that will get boring for you and it will affect your healthy so that's why its good to do community service even ones a week or in a month its not bad to do community service I do community service all Sundays and sometimes over the weekend it is so fun to do community service because i spend some times with my friends with out going to the mall or anything like that so it will be good for other student to do some community services so they can see that it is not boring to do them. so i will like to tell you principal that you should put students to do community services so they could see how good and fun it is . i will like to say that is fun to do because sometimes you are like what should i do today or what i am going to do tomorrow and you get so stress that you don't even know what to do so sometimes when you are like that and you have to do community service it would not be that hard for you to stress. you can also help your mom doing something it would be good for her to you be helping here to your dad to because sometimes your dad its tired of working and he will ask your help so you could help him and that will also can be community service because your helping your parents so that's why i thing you should put student to do the community service. sincerely, STUDENT_NAME
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