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FF9C278EA478 | Do you want to know how Generic_Name shared his wisdom with me? First, I saw Generic_Name following direction so I started doing the same thing he did. Second, I saw him being nice to everyone even when they treat him bad. Thirdly, I felt a lot different.
To start with, the way I started to do the same things like him was because he got good grades. After that, started to think about my grades and his grade and I felt bad because my grades were bad. That's one way Generic_Name shared him wisdom with me.
Secondly, He was nice to me when I didn't know him so I was begin to nice to everyone. Then, teachers liked how I became nice and sweet. Another reason why to be nice is because you will want to treat someone the way you want to be treated.
Third, Generic_Name made me feel like a new person. You can make new friends like that too I made six new friends because I became nice. Teachers are nice back if your nice and let them teach the class so think about it and be nice to everyone.
This is how Generic_Name shared his wisdom with me. So now you know how to share wisdom with someone else. Generic_Name shared his wisdom with me because I follow direction like him, nice to everyone, made me feel like a different person. | 3 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2.5 | 3 |
FF9E0379CD98 | Some school offer distence learning as a option for students to attend classes from home by way of line or video conferencing.
I think is not benefit for student, that take classes online because in the video maybeabilities ,and dont have a teacher is not organized dont have partner when are you take the classes online.
Teacher: when are you take the video online you dont have a teacher for tell you what do you need do in the class ,and him cant help in your work for example the teacher cant help with kahoot or quizlet or with others strategies of work .
Organized: when you take the class online you dont have organized, if you need highlights or pensil for write something for read it or explain your work.
Partners: in the class you dont have partners or others people with you, just are with your teacher online, but is not your confidence or your friend like in the school the many people is your frends However; the people can say you cant take the class online because you work for ten hours for this you need to take the class online, but is not bad idea take the class, but you cant work or cant study after school with partner.
Conclusion: you dont are prepared for take the class online worst is a video coferencing because you dont have teacher, organized ,and partners in the end you cant take the class because is more difficult for learn in your work. is more better take the class in the school you have more benefit how you can pass the class and more oportunities that the school have for you ,and in the school you can help new students ,and in the school you can protrude like better student in the school. Also there are alternative of take class online becuase ther are benefit. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2.5 |
FFA3D98123DC | I agree that having a positive attitude is the key to success because in life no matter what you do you need a positive attitude. for example when you go for a job interview you go into the place with a positive attitude of you wont get the job. its like getting a job you have to have a positive attitude when your working with your others or with customers. i think that in life everyone needs a positive attitude to accomplish there goals. I think that people that doesnt have a positive attitude wont get very far in life. because when i was in middle school i never had a positive attitude and i would get into a lot of trouble because of my attitude, and now that my attitude has changed im becoming successful in life. i think that in everything you do in life requires a positive attitude. you need a positive attitude when your talking to people. if you have a negative attitude people wouldnt want to be bothered by you because people dont like to be around people with a negative attitude. for example when you have a positive attitude people would like to be around you then to be around someone with a negative attitude.
being positive is the key to success because if your being negative your not going to be successful in life. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 2.5 |
FFA6690BC309 | Having activities after school are good ideas for students so they would spend the time doing good things and not thinking in make bad decisions and we do not need more bad people in this world we need more good people to succes in this world. Although some people think that schools should control the students involvement in extracurricular activities nevertheless, the students should decide if the student wants to do extra activities after school because students would have the freedom to decide and some students needs that time to study or to work.
First, students need to have the freedom to decide if they want to do actives after school for example some students work after school sometimes they need that time to make money to help their parents to pay bills like rent or water. If the students have activities after school they would not be able to help their parents. Also some students need to take care of their family members like their brothers, sister or cousins. If the students do not help to take care of their family members their parents would have to pay somebody else and that would mean spend more money for them. The students who work are also learning more skills so in the future they would not be lazy and they are learning how an adult life is that is not to easy but they would be lucky because they would have learned that when they were younger. Also sometimes parents decide for the students to do an activity that they not even like which it means that the students would not be happy and they would have a lot of stress is better that if they want to do an activities they should decide what they want to do not be a parents decision.
Second, students need this time after school to do homework or to study. For example if the students have activities after school they would be late at home and they would be tired which it means that they would not study or do their homework so they would get bad grades and if they try to do their schools homework they would stay up late which it means that they would not get enough of sleep so they would be sleeping and lazy at class the next day. Also students need this time to take a break from the school and relax students school's life if hard sometimes they need a break from everything to came back with more energies. Having enough time to study would help the students to improve their skills at school so in the future they would have more opportunities to find a good job that they would enjoy and they make money to have a decent life and support when they have a family.
This shows that students should decide if they want to do extra activities after school because students can have the freedom to decide and the if the students have activities after school they would not have time to study or to do their homework. In my conclusion the life of a student is not easy they need to know how to manage their time so they can go to work or study sometimes they also have things to do at their house taking care of their family members. Students needs to choose if they have extra energy to do activities after school. Students would have a lot of time in the summer vacations so they can decide if they want to do and activities they would know how to manage their time to work and take care of their families member but they would be also enjoying their time doing activities. | 4 | 3.5 | 4 | 3.5 | 3.5 | 4 |
FFAEAF8D0C90 | Soccer, all people like to play soccer, and other facinate to play soccer.
First, Many people, like to play soccer because someone like to wond some cup, other like soccer to distracted his maind, other like soccer to live all problem in the field. I think soccer is the most game in the world becuse when you wond the game, you are will be excited when you take the cup with you hands. Someone like to wach the game and like when his team are wining the game.
Second, Some people don't like when his team is losting the game, some people are luck like angry when his team losted the game, I think people need to know soccer is to distract person, but the aficionate will put angry with the team, the people need to know, what the team don't will be wond every game, but the aficionate don't see that, the aficionate want what the team wond all the game.
Them, soccer player wee luck like happy when the game was finish, but the aficionate is angry because his team lost the game, some player talk with the aficnote and say to the aficionte, everyone need to know the team never will be wond all game; Everyone need to know that if you will be stay with the team you need to stay with in the bad, and the good too, but some aficionate stay winth the team only when the team wond the game. In the reason is that aficionate need to stay with the team everytime.
Inaddition, Some aficionate don'tcare if the team lost games, in the player apreceated when some aficionate don't say enithing if the team lost the game, in the team work hard and trie to wond all game, when the aficionate will stay happy with team, or with player do really goodjob in the game, in some player tell to the afocionate the team will be trie to wond the game for you aficionate thanks to stay with the tam.
Finally, the aficonate is happy with the team because the team wond the campion cup, but the reason is that team wond the game and champion cup is because some aficionate stay with the team every moment never lived the team, In the team never give up, but the team know when the team is happy or angry, but the team contune with season and play all the games.
Conclusion: I think an aficionate in the world, nee to stay happy with his team, but the aficinate don't see when his team trie to fo everything right and trie to wond the game .Other think aficionate nee to stay with his team in bad, nd good too. Some aficionate, say good bye to the team when the team lost some game in the season, but some one stay with team the aficionate will stay with team don'tcare id the team los the aficonathe will be stay winth team. | 2.5 | 2 | 2.5 | 1.5 | 2 | 2 |
FFCDB2524616 | I agree with Ralph Waldo Emerson's "
To be yourself in a world that os constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment."
because, in this generation kids are trying to fit in with other kids, by changing the way that they speak or the way they dress. Kids also try to fit in by doing what other people tell them to do, making dumb decisions that could potentially end you up in jail or possibly something even worse effecting their future all because they wanted to fit in.
Peer pressure is a main factor in kids that are trying to fit in. Kids pressure other kids into making poor decisions when in reality they don't wanna do it but they wanna look cool infront of others kids so they do it anyways. In reality it isn't cool to do what people tell you to do especially when it's just to fit in with others.
In my opinion people shouldn't make poor decisions trying to fit in with the others, you should be yourself, it doesnt matter where you from or what type of clothes your wearing everyone should be accepted no matter who they are. Kids should be leaders not followers, you can end up with the wrong friends that could care less about you, but are only with you because you make the poor decisions they're telling you to make.
Kids should just be themselves, you don't have to try and fit in with the others, there plenty of other kids with possibly the same interest as you. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
FFD29828A873 | I believe using cellphones in class for education us only is good/bad idea for students.
I believe some students learn easer on technolegy then paper ad pencil, but i also believe cellphone could be use for bad use such as students using for games and apps, texting etc ,
I believe cellphones could drop grades. i've been through it all and seen it all, im a student myself and sometimes when our teachers allowes us to use our cellphones i take the chance to look through my texts and i would see my classmates do the same, but then we have moments where we reallly need to serach up information or our teacher would love to play an online game then its really useful .
There cant be a right or wrong answer to this but there could be an amazing arugment to this issue.
I believe using technolgy could save trees and our nature enviorment, using technolgy could stop schools and the goverment fro cutting down tress for papers and allow us to use our cellphones. we never | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 2.5 | 2.5 |
FFD9A83B0849 | Working alone, students do not have to argue with other about decission of their proyects and have to work with someone they do not know; however, most students prefer to work as a group because students are able to dived work, to share ideas and to help each other. Working with a group allows students to work more efficiently. Personally and due to the facts, I would prefer to work with a group because working with other is more beneficial for students.
Firstly. Most students are required to do many proyects during each marking period which is to much for each student, and specially when there is a big proyect for each class that worth 10% of the period's grade, but working with a group the proyect might be diveded to each person in the group, and share between them. Each student have different and unique qualities that can be helpful to do do certain parts of proyects that for other can be difficult to do.
Secondly. Working with a group might be also seen as opportunity for student of gaining values of cooperation which is important to have due to many companies assign jobs to two or more people to realize them because of the different knowledges they can provide to each other. Companies usually use the phrase:
"Work as a team"
to make their productivity more efficiently. Teachers should see this as way of helping students to get expiriences of working as team, and also that way, we as students would get knowledge of others.
By allowing students to work with group teacher might be helping student to get more confident about their due to the fact that students can disscuss betweend eache other the topics and loook forward the best way of doing them. Schools are allowing students to stay after school which is perfectly fine for those students that are not able to go to a house of one the members of the group. A group might be also helpful for those students that are having issues turning their work on time because; now, they can get be supported by other and be more productive.
To conclude, No students should be in the position of having a big proyect with no enough time without the opportunity of work with a groups. Many companies are assigning jobs to be done by more than one person, they know that a team works more efficiently than one person, and teachers should do the same in their classes to help students to get their grades up, and also to be productive on turning work in. Working with a group should be allowed for students during classes to improve their qualities of coorperation and to have different points of view to do the best for subject. | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3.5 | 3 |
FFDC4011AC9C | "A problem is a chance for you to do your best" What I think about that quote is that you cant do your best in every problem. If your still stuck on what it even means like I was in the first few minutes of seeing that, It means that in every challenge you see in life there is always a way to try your best and get through that challlenge, dispite what your mind tells you because your mind is your biggest enemy you will ever face. I dont particularly agree with that quote jsut because in certain problems even if you try your best you will still fail or if you just dont want to do the problem or other people around you dont then you most likley fail to. What im trying to get at to this quote is that instead of being "For every problem there is a chance for you to do your best" it should be "For every problem or challenge there is always a way to get thorugh it". Here is a few examples: If your dying from old age and your deadline is going to be this week. Then just die you get around the challlenge by dying because in most relgions there is something called heaven so you can die and go to heaven. Another example: Facing a hard question, just guess! You'll have a 1/4th chance of getting it right and if you just guess it would be bettter then sitting on the problem for 20 minutes. | 2.5 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 | 3 |
FFE16D704B16 | Many people disagree with Albert Schweitzer's quote, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." They think that he meant that it doesn't matter who did it, that the thing that matters is the example. In my case, Albert Schweitzer was right on his quote. Although many people say that there are better ways to influence others than just with your own experience because there are famous people with more interesting examples, actually the best way to influence others is setting a good example on your own behavior because it shows that you were capable of doing it no matter how hard it was for you and yet you still did it and also you will inspire other people to do their own example based on your ideas.
Some people say that there are better ways to influence others because than with your own experience because there are famous people with more interesting examples. Meaning that you have to be someone important in order to influence others. They say that intelligence is another way to influence others because if you're not smart you won't make a good example for others to follow. In conclusion they say that you have to be a skilled and important person to have a huge influence on others.
Actually, the best way to influence other is not being someone important in society but setting a good example on your own behavior. It will show that that even though it was hard for you to do your example, in the end you still did it. That show that no matter who you are or where you come from as long as you have determination you will achieve your goals. Look at Barack Obama for example, he's a black man and yet he still managed to become president of the United States. That really had a huge impact in the black community and inspired many of them to work hard for their goals.
Also, you will inspire other people based on your own ideas. An article on New York Times shows that most of the people based their ideas on other people's examples, which means that if you continue working hard to achieve your goals you will appear on one of those articles and will inspire others. Think about it, wouldn't you like to hear that one person gave you credits because became successful because he read about your experience and he based his ideas on that experience of yours?
In conclusion, many people will say that in order to influence others you need to become somebody important, but you know what? That doesn't matter! As long as you have determination and great creativity you will achieve your goals and will inspire many people to follow their dreams no matter how much it will cost them. Like Albert Schweitzer said, "Example is not the main thing in influencing others; it is the only thing." It doesn't matter what people say, the one that has the power to inspire others is you! | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 | 4 | 4.5 | 4.5 |
FFED00D6E0BD | Do you think that failure is the main thing for people consist on their goal's and success without lose their enthusiasm?
I agree with the important role that failure play in the pursuit of success in life because, I think failure is the main key to people reach their goal's because they need to have the idea that after failure came the success, secondly they need to be positive and have in mind what they want and how they want to reach their success in life, and last they have to be prepared for failure, and they have to be prepared to confront the failure because they need to keep in mind that not everything is going to be in the way they want, but at the same time they always need to have in mind that everything is possible with effort.
First, people need to have the idea that after failure came the success, because everything happens for a reason and if something goes wrong for certain reason in the moment when they try to success they need to accept things, and keep trying. They need to be really patience for example, when babies are trying to walk they fall many times but get up and they keep trying until they reach their goal which in this case is walk or, there have been many cases when people have car accidents and they lose the ability to walk that's something that does not stop them they keep trying even if take more than a year they don't give up because their goal is to be able to walk again, their goal is to be the person they used to be before they get in that car accident, and they just want to be able to keep doing all the stuff they used to do before all the tragedy happens.
Secondly, everything depends in how positive people is because, if they have a negative mind and always act like their goal's is something impossible to come true their not going to accomplish nothing because people need to have the idea that they can make true everything they want, they don't have to be thinking in failure cause the more you think the more afraid you get to encourage yourself to make thing's happen and they have to try every day to improve and look for the resources available to success in life.
Finally, they always need to keep in mind that there always would be a chance of failure and they have the right to be afraid but, that's something they need to live aside and they need to be focus on their goal,
they need to have the power to stop themselves whenever they want, and they have to be the ones to say to their self to stop when they think they already accomplish what they want but, they can't let people decide for them. Because sometimes people get jealous to see the other one's success in life and they try to guide people into failure.
In conclusion, there have been nothing that can't stop people to reach their goal's and success in life because everything is possible, people have to believe in them self and always be positive they always need to keep in mind that they are capable's of everything and they need to learn to not give up. In that way they would be able to do everything and be successful the key is always have and excellent attitude and be prepared for people to judge, and be prepared to failure and get up and make it see like their have been nothing wrong and keep going. They need to be positive in every movement they make and be positive in the way that everything is going to be exactly how the planned. | 3.5 | 2.5 | 3.5 | 3 | 3 | 3.5 |