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Many people argue about how there shouldn't be a long summer break because students do not retain information as easily when they return in the fall. But I do not agree to this argument , because I know that having a long break makes students accomplish more things in life. For example There is many students that have not seen one of their family members in a long time and most of them don't have that time to even say hi to them and why? well because sometimes the schools do not provide a longer breaks and they are so busy trying to focus on school work and get everything done on time that they forget even on their own name. In reality not everyone is going to have things planned for summer break. There's still students that prefer making their vacation useful. They make they time valuable by taking classes online. And the reason to this is that they might want to graduate early so that they get out of school and maybe have more time to think about their future and what they want to study in college. For me this is a great opportunity to manage time and use it correctly. But even though not all students prefer doing it they still succeed in school and they will accomplish too. Educators say that students are more likely to forget information that they have learned in school after they come back from their good time. And the answer to this is yes thats true but that doesnt mean that all the information goes to waste, because that's why there is technology to help us remember things that we might have forgotten and also their is still teachers that can answer our questions if we have some. And not only the teachers can help, there is so many things were we could get information from like going to the library, asking a friend, asking a teacher , dictionary , and the internet. Another example is that after coming from summer break some students also feel relief because they didn't worried about having to turn in school work or an assignment being late, the main thing that a lot of students hate is, waking up so early and being stressed . But with a vacation they could save some energy they could sleep more and they can relax and enjoy their break. For me personally I don't really like waking up in the morning because of how tired I am with so many assignments that I am not able to rest as much. Sometimes I even fall asleep and wish to get a break from school because I feel so weak and I feel like my brain is going to explode if I do not get a break and thats only going to happened if you never get a break but if you do then you are ready to go and learn. Last but not least students are able to work during summer they could get a part time or a full time job. This would be so helpful for many students that have fees to pay to the school , or just in general. They could get a chance to pay for things that they might need in school and classes or they could work just to get some extra money. After summer break is over they can keep the job for only part time or they could go and focus again in school . To conclude I agree that having a 3-4 week break in the summer , a winter break and a week off spring and fall is the best idea. Because we are like cars if you put gas on them they will take you anywhere you'd like but if you don't they will not move until you put gas in it. Same as us if we do not get breaks we will be tired everyday but if you do give us time to relax outside of school we will be more successful and we could accomplish more things. And this is why I believe having a longer break sounds a good idea.
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Studies has been showed that students that been committing to their dream career before entering high school would be most likely to get their career more successful than other students. However, it'll be a stressful/pressure thing for students because they would have to achieve it faster than others. The issue of students committing to a career at a young age is a stressful, mental thing, should not be considered because students would be more stress, they would focus on their future career and not themselves and high school makes everyone change their minds. My firsts reason why students should not commit to their career at a young age is because they would be more stress throughout high school. Yes, high school seems like an easy place to stick to your future career but at the same time it's really not. If you commit to your career throughout high school, your're more likely to be stress because you feel like okay if i do this i'll achieve faster but not at the same time if i do this i won't be achieving. So technically you just put yourself in a position that you really can't get yourself out of. You're focus on one thing that in your other classes it's hard to think or studied about. Yes, committing is easy but it's not. Its's high school the place where your education change you. You would probably change your mind no time soon. Therefore, don't put yourself in the position to be stress. Pressure is a main key to everything nowadays because it's "fun". However, it is not. Being put on pressure is the most hardest thing to be in because you feel like you have to do it to make someone or somebody proud. Like in this case your future career. You feel like you're pressure because you want to make your parents, teacher, your school admins proud and know that you can really commit to things. As days or weeks goes on, the pressure level goes up and up and when that goes up you kinda get depressed, sad and not yourself because you are doing this for them and not you. High school changes everyone mind. As soon as, you walk into high school it's not the typically high school movie you think. It is place where students and teachers minding their selves and doing their know things. Middle school vs. High school are two different place. The classes are harder, high school have many many electives to pick from so like of course you are going to change so like why would you want to stick to your career at a young age when your haven't taken those other classes. Like your never know what you actually like when you have tried taken those classes. In my personal opinion i would not commit to career at a young age. i learned from experiences and from other. Take the classes that you like in high and if you like keep moving on. If not, move to a different one. What your see on TV is not want you see in reality. So again in my opinion Everyone is different, you are different. career is just a word. Don't push yourself at a young age.
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Today in the actually there are so many things the it have be done and that we have to do, as Thomas Jefferson wrote, "Determine never to be idle... it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Imagen if all work together for a better life, that don't just benefit one persone we all get benifits of a society. Determine our mind to don't wait intil things happen by then self we have to get ours life ready to make it happen. We have to be useful and do something for as and for others if we all work together for a better society we can do it. Imagen that stead of droing trash every time that we walk, we should peak it up make a different between this past years and now, clean our own commiunity demostrate that we can do better every day without someone to tell us what we have to do and do it. I have seen groups of people around the world making a big difference on our planet, cleaning rivers and parks if we determine our mind to don't wait intil things happen and like those groups of peolpe make our own difference and keep do things for a better living because this all about, be useful and be better every day do something that's the key. Do something should be a porpuse in our community, we should be more actived with thing aroud as make more difference and make things be possible. Be determine and keep doing something, do something will always be better than just wait until some do it and not do nothing. Keep it possible, productive, and wonderful
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Other people would say that failure is a way you learn about your mistakes and where you can improve. Being successful isn't necessarily a way of failing so much it's a way to show that your trying and trying while not giving up. I would have to agree on Mister Winston Churchill about "Success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." In other words, I believe being the person whos mistakes or failures is someone successful because they didn't give up they believed on they're selves and continued to work harder. First, when you seem to fail everytime but, you just keep believing in yourself that's how you know you want to be successful and when you look back at those days in either high school,work,or even at home. You'll noticed that those days weren't perfect but, it's a way for you to learn about your failures in the end of the day you become someone whose very successful. My parents told me to always believe in myself and to never give up and if you fail over and over then get back up and do better. Second, it's not just us people who has failures but celebrities also had failures believe it or not. Celebrities went through what we went through. Classmates either said "your not gonna be famous your just gonna fail." or " Your failures won't lead you to be successful you'l only fail again." They didn't care what they're classmates said they just kept trying and trying until they made it. For an example, Will Smith he kept trying to be successful in the acting world and he once said that if it wasn't for his parents who told him to keep trying he wouldn't be where he is. Jackson Wang, his a Chinese artist who didn't think he'd become successful but now people see him as an inspiring artist who is also in a Korean boy group. So in other words, if you keep failing then keep trying because you'll become someone someday. In conclusion, Mister Winston Churchill is right about "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". His message about it would bring people to they're feet and not give up. Just keep trying until you made it. Don't every say you can't do it, just keep believing in yourself you can do it.
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In my opinion i think online schooling wont benefit any student because, you dont have a teacher in front of you explaining what to do. Video conferencing is something different, you basically at school but on a screen. Youll be able to hear the teacher while shes explaining the assignment and teach it to you better so that way you understand more and you can be able to ask questions. Looking at a screen and reading an assignment isnt going to help you much. If you have an actual teacher, she/he goes into details and shows you examples of how to do an assignment. Being home schooled is pretty challenging. Most online schooled kids tend to procrastinate and end up falling behind. Most shy kids are home schooled or video conferencing because of problems or any other thing thats going on with them. If students want to attend online and video conferencing, then thats fine as long as their getting their education and finishing their assignments. Its the law for every student to go to school or to do something thats related to school. Online classes are pretty expensive to pay up, so students must complete their assignments because theyll charge you for it either way. I think attending school would be better. Teachers teach you better and help you out when you dont understand something. You get less homework and maybe even easier homework to do. You dont need to pay anything for your child to go to a public school. Your student gets taught well. So in that case i think going to school is better then online class and video conferencing.
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Benefits of being home school. Have you ever felt like you could not handle school?, well let me tell you that you have options, in here you are going to know the benefits of being home school. When I was younger school was a challenge for me; There was always conflicts at school and the environment was really a distraction, not good for me. Attending to school from hone have a lot of benefits. Students are going to be more focus in their studies and they are going to understand the meaning of responsibility. One of the reason why home school it's good for students is going to be that students are going to be more concentrate and focus on their studies. Students manage to work better if they are alone, since they do not have any distraction around them like: drama, bad influences, mean teachers, stress and so much more. This is really good for those students who want to get their stuff done and learn more efficiency. So attending to school from home is one good option for those who want to focus on their studies. Responsibility is one of the most important skill that us like humans have to have. Being responsible is a hard skill to follow but it is the most important one since we use it on the daily bases. If students attend to be on home school they have to learn that is not easy and they have to be really responsible because they are not going to have a physical teacher in front telling them what to do. Therefore you have to get it by their on hands and learn the meaning of being a mature and a responsible person. Students are going to be more responsible because if thy have any project, homework or test they are going to manage the way to study and do their stuff by them self and using the tools of their online program. I understand that some people may disagree and prefer students to go to a normal school since they are going to have more social life. Having social life it's really important but who said that being in home school means that they are not going to have any social life, it's the opposite because if students are all caught up with their things they are going to have so much time to hang out with friends and family. In conclusion the benefits of being home school are really good since students are going to focus on their own things and studies also they are going to learn how important it's to be responsible. now days we use technology for everything because it let us have a lot of more options if people is struggling with school. so more schools should include some online programs for students who want to continue their studies from home. This is going to bring a big change in our community and more professional, responsible people.
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I have a awesome talent, that is making weird high pitch noises. I make the noise sometimes, But in elementary school I made the noise all the time. When I found out that I could make the noise it was in 1st grade. I made the noise all the time, I could do it and no won could stop me except myself. The only reason I really never stopped was because i made my friends laugh and i made jokes. The first example was I making what does the fox say and I made my weird noises. The second example was I randomly out of nowhere I slowly looked at my friends and stared right at them and i quickly made a lobster position and chased them well making the noise. I make a lot of noises at school but at home its even worse. When am at home thats when I strike with the noises. I really liked annoying my sisters all the time. But, they punched me because I was being annoying because I always made the noises. The first reason they would punch me was because I sat right next to them and started making the noise, and less the two seconds she punched me really hard on the shoulder. The second reason was when I went in my sister room and started pocking her when i was making the weird noises and she got so mad she punched me on my chest that really hurt. But, now I really don't make the noises anymore i got tired of it myself. But, I do it on accident sometimes when im playing games. I found out I had a talent and that was making high pitch noises And I used a lot. I made my friends laugh hard and made my sisters hate me a lot but i had fun with it. I made jokes one is what does the fox say and i made my high pitch sounds. the other was being punched by my sisters on the shoulder and the chest " man the chest one really hurt". But im pass that i may on accident do sometimes but other then that im done with it for good this time.
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I agree with adding one and a half hours to school each day because. Most parents only get off work at 4:00 and they need to be home before their kids. Also if kids are at school longer they will learn more and get smarter. First parents need to be home before their kids because. If they leave work early to get home they will get paid less. If they get paid less they will not be able to pay for their kid's college. Or out of school activities like horseback riding and soccer. Or even paying for a nanny or a babysitter to watch their kid so they can get paid more. Second if kids are at school longer they will learn more and get smarter. If people learn more and get smarter they will have a higher a chance in getting in to a good college. If they get in to a good college they will have a higher chance in getting a good job. If they get a good job they will get good money to help their families out someday. In the conclusion that's why I agree with adding one and a half hours to school each day. That's why you should accept my position.
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Imagine waking up in the middle of the night and suddently all the technology devices went off. What will you do ,how will you see where you are going, play games online or communicate with your familes far away. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human contact is having negative effects on people's lives today because,people are getting addicted to it,people are geting lazy, and people are commiting more crimes. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human is having negative effects on people's lives today. First,Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human is having negative effects on people's lives today,because people are getting addicted to it. People get into more car accident because of their phones. People are having eye problems. People dont focused on what's going on in the real world instead they focus on fashions and games. Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human contact is having negative effects on people's lives today. Second,Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contact with others but the limitation of human contact is having negative effects on people's lives today because people are geting lazy. People are geting fat because they dont want to to do nothing. people eat a lot and relay on technology to do everything Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contacts with others but the limitation of humans contact is having negative effect on peoples lives today. Third, Technology allows people to complete many tasks without having contacts with others but the limitation of human contact is having negative effect on peoples lives today because people are commiting more crimes. People are bullying each other. Teenagers are killing themselves because of cyberbulling. People are using technology to spread false information of others. People are communication with the wrong people. Because people are getting addicted to it ,people are getting lazy ,and people are commiting more crimes. The limitation of human contact is having negative effcts on people lives today. Technology is becoming more danger to human ,therefore,if we dont stop it now no one will. If you agree with me in this ,please join our organizations of "How to use technology the better way".
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Honestly i think being honest can't always be hard or sometimes easy because, when you did something wrong you feel guilty, telling the truth gets rid of the guilt that you had, and also you feel a lot of stress. Letting the stress out in your body is good at one point so be honest! Your body will feel like your hiding something and be afraid to talk so just be honest, for an example, you broke your moms favorite vase but she doesn't know yet. "You" may be afraid to even talk to mother because "you" wont know if "you should lie or be honest or you might even feel like you will get in trouble. It's good to be honest because your parents will feel like they can trust you for an example being home by yourself and taking care of your younger siblings . If your not honest your parents might think that you're lazy and dont actually take care of your siblings while there out grocery shopping. Not being honest can cause problems with you and your parents relationship. It's your job to be grateful of your parents, what they give you and how much they support you. If you have a friend who is good with their parents maybe try being like them and try your best to love and appreciate your parents at this moment. Now that you know how to appreciate your parents and be honest and not lie, let me tell you this we all know we will lie maybe once or twice but after you can just say, "Hey I'm sorry i was not telling the truth, will you forgive me?" Everything will all be better. Be more respectful say it with love and like you actually mean it. People will feel loved and that they actually mean to you.
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The should be people make their own decision, or should be others make to Them. The should be make their own the decisions. The have to self confident. because the decisions is more doing u can to the act of reaching a concly sion or just making up one's mind The should be make theri own the decisions, They can be happy in life. because for life is the decisions are it's important. In the a victory won on points has occurred The should be make theri own the decisions, The face challenging moments in life. because the challenging it;s hard but more better for we can be for the decisons. People should make their own decisions because they would have self confident, They can be happy in their life ,and They face challenging moments in life. The people who don't make their own decisions can be have easy life and they don't have to think about only thing; however, It's better to make their decision by Them self.
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I agree with Winston Churchill because we don't have to give up. There are many ways to continue even if you failure. Even though, people have to be awareness for what they doing. They have to confront the problem without losing they enthusiasm. In other example, confront your failure make you more strong and think about what is good and what is bad. When you confront your failure you have to be conscious for what you doing. For example, you can't repent because you do what you do for a reason. In other word, people don't never have to give up they have to fight and have always the enthusiasm to be what are they are. Although, when you failure make you think more straight and clearly. That teach you to be a strong and continue struggle with your life. In fact, I always have my enthusiasm up even if I failure because that make me more comfortable to who I am and don't be scare to confront my problem. There are many people that scare loss they enthusiasm just because they failure. Failure don't make make a you a bad person, It make you to understand that in the life have down and up emotion. However, we choice "what we want to be and we do what we want to do" Therefore, Winston Churchill want to people be happy. He want to people understand that they don't have to loss they enthusiasm don't matter what. On the other hand, I agree with him because if you have the enthusiasm you can handle your problem and be able to solved it. In my opinion, Winston Churchill have throughout for many things and he want to other people be strongly and never give up like him. People have to consider that not always will be easy to don't have any problem or other thing that make you to do thing that you don't want to do, but you always have to be with the enthusiasm to confidence. Despite, it hard to always have the enthusiasm to confront your failure, but you have to be strong and continue for what you have been done. In life you learn a lot include your problem, your failure. Even though, you never have to give up because you will have a future that you want to know and live with your family, have good time. The enthusiasm help you to reflect your ideas and make you to do the things that you scare to do. Make the success strong with you enthusiasm. In conclusion, never loss your enthusiasm because that help you to be strong. Confront your failure with all your enthusiasm you have to demonstrated that you are more strong than your problems. There are many ways to be success with your own personality you can focus on what you propose, being strongly and confront your failure. Finally, "success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm". Don't be scared to confront it.
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students should not be allow to use their cellphone during class time only if it is necessary or with the teacher permission. One of the most important reason why you should not be allow to use your phone during class is because the cellphone really distract you, it may be because you're playing, text ting or listening music. Cellphone can be a big distraction for the student for to many reasons, sometimes students do not really think like that, but on my opinion it is a big distraction, using the cellphone during class can make you miss important parts from the class that you may need for a future test that maybe one of the answer can be that small part that you didn't hear because you were on your phone, but the teacher is not the responsible from your actions, you take your own decisions,and you choose the decision to look at your phone than pay attention at class. in other parts teachers should make that their rules for the classroom has appraisal, and make the students respect them, or if the teacher can't do that at least the school can make that rule. Some times you're just pretending that you are paying attention, but you're not really paying attention for the reason that you may be at your phone or answering a text, i am saying this because it happened to me and i do the same, i know some students has the same situation and others that can't live without their cellphone. it can be addictive. some times I think it can because the age, we are just young persons and some persons think different they really come to study but others just come because they have to. The effects of being using the cellphone at class are that you not really pay attention at class and you fail the class. cellphones are not necessary at class and it's not educational or helpful for you to remained or learn things. On my person i fail classes because the same situation, i fail classes and if i fail classes i'll fail the school year and then wont would like to repeat other school year. That gonna make me think about that and i don't would like to come to school because i feel like i loose my time coming to school to repeat it every single day. i think cellphone make you stupid and act like a dumb because when youre on your phone, you are like in other world, you don't pay attention on what is happening around you. you are loosing time from your life time that you can use study or do others necessary and important things for your life. i see students that they just dgf and they on their phone during class, i'm one of them, lol. On my opinion, cellphone can be necessary some times, but i dont really need it during class because i come to study, take notes and do my best in class for have good grades, i will say that cellphone can be use only during test, classwork because i am that kind of person that likes to be listening relax songs and doing my job. in other way schools gives you a laptop and i think the only thing where you can do all of those things is the computer, i can use Google or YouTube, it's not necessary to have your phone on your hands. How can we solve this issue? teachers should collect all cellphones before start class, and make a rule that something gonna happen if he/she see someone with their phone, so students may have to respect this rule. All this conversation i think the problem is not cellphone, i think the problem is technology because humans are depending from technology and and it makes them fool, todays technology can be more smart than a person. if you really read to this side you should understand how is life now, you may be older and smarter than i am, but we both lived different generations, it is all my decisions, we have to control technology not technology has to control us. legalize ;)
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Would you like to have more time at school? I would like to have more time at school. Setting at class and learning more things. Getting work done and relaxing. I have three reason why we should have more time at school. My first reason why we should have more time at5 school is getting work done. If theres more time at school,then theres more time to do your homework at school. Getting your homework done so you dont have to do ot at home because you finish your work at school. My reason is getting work done. My second reason why we should have more time at school is your friends. School can get boring so thats why you have friends so you can hangout with them at school. Your friends can be your work buddy so you and your friends can work together at school so you can finish your work. You can have fun with your friends at school so it wont be so boring i school. My other reason is your friends. My third reason why we should have more time at school is your grades. Is your grades bad? Well you can make it up because theres more time at school. If you have more work and if you get a good grade on it,the your grade will go up. Theres more time at school so you can make up work that you did bad on because theres more time at school. My last one is about grades. So there you go,I gave you three reason why we should have more time at school. I think there good reasons. I hop you area what I wrote. If you dont area its ok. Stay in school kids.
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Some schools offer distance learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing. But I don't think that it would benefit from being able to attend classes from home. Because, there are many reasons that the students could not able to learn home by yourself in online; which are that some problems, and communicating. Also there are more position to I disagree and agree with this argument. Firstable, I think the students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing, it would not benefit for the studehts, because of the students could have some question that they don't know. And if someone who dont' teach with them, they cannot learn that more understable. And they migth cannot catch up their late works, because of they don't help anybody. I have an examples of that the girl who has taken an online classes, and she didn't go to the school, because she thought, the online class is better than to learn subjects and it doesn't have to do that everyday and she can study her subject whenever day she could. But she have to her exam in the school, and she didn't study as well as can't catch up her study work. Now she stopped to take an online class in the home and go to school. So, in my opinion, even thought the online class is giving you as more free time but if you can't study by yourself, It couldn't help you that learn. Also, the students can't communicate with other students. It means that the student can't study with other students that they can't make some friends and could not be an active just like some other students. Also, it will be impact their behaviour that they'll be more lonely. Because the students behaivior is always changing and easy to get used to their environment, especially the high school students. Therefore, i disagree to attend classes from home by way of the online and video conferencing benefit for the students. On the other hand, the online class is not really useless thing that for the students. Of course, It should be has some advantegious way to attend online and video class, which are it helps that the students could be more mature and more focusing on their work. And they have more free time because the student doesn't have to this everyday as a school, they can do that whatever time to working on it. So, we don't have to hold one point of view, we should try that two other sides. For examples, the every students are different way to study, we don't have to demand to do only one way, they might be more interest with the online, video class and the other students could be more enjoy to attend this class. Consequently, every students who enjoy that much, they could take that class much easily to study in their home. In conclusion, I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home, but not all of students, because they all have a different way to study and somehow the student will need some help to support their what they are studying. In that case, students might be trying to give up to study alone. Therefore, the student might think very well to thier option to to attend classes from the home.
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People this days deal with a lot of issues . Its clear that sometimes adults also need help with making their own decisions. Most of the time we tend to think that because we're adults we are doing the right thing, but instead we're doing the opposite. Once you start to see the downfall,or the bad things that have started to happen to you or the people close to you because of the decisions that you made, its time for you to go for to seek for guidance. Its best that you seek help before you're life falls apart. Guidance has helped a lot of people with their daily lives. The best part about it is that their's no age limit for when you can and can not go. For example high school students have the privilege to go for guidance at school anytime they need it. One important thing that high school students are given during guidance is to always pick the classes that will help them in the future. Going for guidance should begin at an early age. When you start going, you get to understand the aspect of life and the decisions that you make as you move on with you're life. Its a great place to go when you have no idea of what you're going to do with you life or how to make the right decisions. The best part about going for guidance is that you are assured you'll be talking to an expert;meaning that they are able to control themselves in any situation and talk to you in any circumstance. Most of the people who hold these jobs have degrees and are licensed to do that work. For most people,talking to someone the do not know is easier that talking to someone who they know. In this case it's easier to open up to an expert who will soon give you advice and what to do next with you're life. After all maybe guidance isn't a good place to go. One of the reasons that people don't seek for guidance is that it's too expensive. Most people can not afford to go for guidance every month or week. You need to have some form of income or at least be making a decent amount of money in order for you to afford it. The second reason would be, you're not really sure that the decisions that the experts make for you will be helpful. Its not always good to rely on what people say or when people tell you what to do with your life. In the end we are the ones who know ourselves better than anyone else does. In conclusion most of us still need help with the decisions that we make. We all make good decisions and bad choices. As we grow we deal with so many things and sometimes its good to always talk with an expert. After all we're not perfect but the best decision for you is to seek guidance. You will be surprised by the outcomes of it.
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Personally, I have been able to find myself to be able and do more when I'm up and active, as in doing something good for me, someone else, or in general. It's like you're able to do more once you're up and you are able to tell yourself that you can do better and you can do more than what you're supposed too. As Jefferson said "it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing." Sometimes you can be so into the work and time can fly and you can get so much done with no distractions. When I am doing something positive for myself and I want to do more, I find me telling myself a lot "what good will this do to me?" or "where will it get me?" I'm sure that I'm not the only one asking myself questions like these when I want do something good for myself or my life. When we are doing something for us, we can ask ourselves questions like the ones I stated. Once we do more than what we want to do and keep a positive mindset about it, that can be able to stick with us and become a good habit we can carry on in our lives. Which is amazing. We'll be able to strive for the best for ourselves and others when we carry on a good habit like that and show others how much we care about not just ourselves but others as well. We can always be able to carry a positive mindset with us and we can pass that on to others and it'll be able to motivate people to do more than what we can do once we are up and doing something. I really tend to look at the bright side a lot and look at what is at the end or the outcome, when I'm trying to strive for the best by doing the absolute best that I can. We may have our moments where we can get tired of doing the most, but then we are able to tell ourselves how much the hard work is worth at the end when we do the most of what we're supposed too. Once we do the best that we can, we can reflect on it later on in life and be so proud of ourselves and tell ourselves how tired we were for doing the most but how much worth it all was at the end. I have my moments where I can be so tired of trying my best and just want to give up. But then I take a step back, look at my work, and once I'm done and I tell myself how proud I am because it got me far. We also are able to have no regrets at the end of the day and reflect on it and see how dedicated we were and still are to this day. We can tell others our story and say how proud you are for yourself and see how dedicated you were and still are for doing what you can and doing better. Not in any bragging type of way but to motivate them in a way. You're able to pick up the habit of being so dedicated to bettering yourself or others by doing more once you're doing. It's like self motivation, telling yourself "you can do more." Once we pick up this good habit of accomplishing more than what we are supposed too, we motivate not just ourselves, but others as well to do more and more. Like I said, we can look at the bright side of it always, and feel nothing but good and proud of ourselves at the end. When we build this good habit and do the most, we are able to do the more than what we could before and little by little building that up. At the end of accomplishing what you could, you are able to tell others what the hard work and dedication gives you at the end of it all. As well as how far it get's you in life. It can sometimes motivate others to strive for the best and it can help them, sometimes they need to hear you out for it to motivate them. What I like about it is that, when we are able to pick up this good habit of ours, we can tell others about it and it can motivate them to do the same. It's like we talk them into to striving for the best for themselves and others in life. It's like we are passing this good habit we've built down and then it just keeps going and going. Sometimes hearing others out really helps others a lot. When you are able to just take a moment and take one step back, it really is possible for you to accomplish more than what you can when you're doing. You motivate not just yourself but others when you really are dedicated to doing your best and it can become a good habit. You're able to pass that down and it can give you a positive mindset to it all. The outcome can turn out to be good and make you feel good about yourself at the end. It can get you so far in life as well and you're able to look back at the most that you have accomplished and have no regrets about any of it. It is truly motivational and can truly help if you are really dedicated to it all.
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Attend classes from home by way of online can be a good idea but , in my position is not a good way for the student and can be innecesary or bad idea in many reasons. When the student is in home he going to do what he want he don't care the class he going to feel like if he don't have to do have to work in that class and he don't thing if he going to lost the class, one example is one of my friends he have a oline class but when he is in home he dont work because he dont care because no have one teacher who says "Work or you no going to pass the class" and thats one reason. My second reason is when the student is taken online classes he just going to finish, he no going to learn because he dont care learn he just going to complete the leasons but just that, why? because he dont have the teacher who explaing when he have questions or when he is interesting in something of the class he no have the teacher who know more abaut that. Some people says when the student take the online class from home he are more concentrade however whent the student take this classes from home he are more distractic because he have the cellphone in his hand or he have the TV in the room, the dog, the play station and he going to prefer play or see movies than work on the classes. In conclusion thye student can no work , no have the teacher for question or warn he can lostr the class or are more distractict or prefer play than work on the class are my reasons for no take online classes but with the good students can be a good idea.
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I disagree with this statement because your first impressions of someone or something can change overtime. When you first meet someone you automatically get an impression of that person from the way they dress, or the way they speak basically the way they do things. Now a days people jump into conclusions, they never met the person, they just go off upon looks. For example say a teenager is wearing all black with ripped jeans and they got their pants down low, adults are going to think that teen is possible a gangster or a thug but thats not the case, thats just the style now a days. First impression can change overtime, once you get used to something your mindset changes, say you meet a friend and you guys start talking and your friends starts giving you an attitude, your going to assume that your friend doesn't like you so you keep that mindset. Yall start talking again and this time it's going way better, you and your friend are laughing, overall just having a good time now your opinion has changed towards the person. there was this guy he started to stare at me every few seconds so i thought he had a problem or something but he looked familiar but i couldn't figure out where i've seen him from, later that day he ended up being in my last block class, the teacher made the class work in pairs so i got up and asked the guy if he wanted to be my partner, he said sure and we began working, we started talking about random things until he said "you look familar" then he said didn't we go to the same middle school together, then it clicked I was friends with this guy back in middle school and haven't seen him in a long time, after that day we began talking almost everyday. The first impressions aren't always impossible to change, you learn to change your mind overtime and start accepting things for what it is.
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Do you think that the failure is a reason to don't reach the hit. my opinion about the "success" is that no everyone find the easy way to catch up the hit. I am agree with the minister Winston Churchill because failure is not a option to loss our enthusiasm and don't realize our goals. Also,the enthusiasm is a good reason to stay what do you doing in your life. Then, we learn of the failure and that cause to make a important decision in our life. Failure is not a option to loss our enthusiasm and don't realize our goals. First, the life is not easy and always will be a fall on the way to the hit. Second, there is people that they don't like to see you and the top and they try to cause us a fall to don't realize our goals but also it's a people that help you to catch up our goals . In conclusion, there is no reason to you give up to realize your goals and go up to the hit. The enthusiasm is a good reason to still in what do you want pursuit of success. initially, the enthusiasm is a motivation in our life to reach the hit that you want in your life. also, the enthusiasm help you to never give up when you fall down. Then, failure is a bad experience but if we try to be positive person and find another way to be a successful person. In conclusion, the enthusiasms a tool that will help to grow up and find the way to be a successful person in our life. we learn of the failure and that help to grow up to the hit. For example, to failure give to you a experience and we learn about this experience. Initially, what do we learn about our fall that will help us to find out what do we want in our life. Also, we need to decide what do we doing, if we give up and loos our enthusiasm or stand up and continues until we reach the hit. Then, failure is not always a bad thing pass in your life sometime we need failures in life to find out our ways to where we want to be. In summary, success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm because the enthusiasm is a good reason to stay in what do you doing and never give up when the failure come. Another reason is we learn of the failure and that help to decide in what we want to do in our life. Also, most of the people want to be in the hit and no is only won no to be in the hit also need some failure for learn about the experience that the fall give us. For this reason I'm agree with Churchill"s statement and is our decision to loss the enthusiasm or stay with the same enthusiasm that we has before of the failure. Finally, a successful person is not a person that never have a failure and his life the successful person is one person that have many fairule and his life but he never loss his enthusiasm on what he want to be.
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Should people make their own decisions, or should they seek guidance from experts and authorities about life's important matters? When it has to do with life's important matters people should be self-reliance. Making your own decisions in what you'r instincts tells you, or even ideas that crosses your mind. Can lead you to the path you want to be in. All decisions or ideas you have should be followed. Making choices or even having ideas about your own life matters, it's important Because at the end of the day it's your life and you want to always make the choices for yourself. Your life dosen't effect others, what you want to pursue or have should be done by the choices you decide. Being told what is best for you is something that should be appreciated but its your life and not the others and decisions you make for yourself should be because you know whats best for yourselves When wanting to purchase a car you want to make your own choice in what kind of car you want or if the payments for the car can reach your budget. Buying items that are needed in life is all about what you want and what your instincts tells you. Buying houses or what bank account you want is what you should decide. All that has to do about your life's matters it's your choices and instincts. Everyone wants the best for themselves and want to be self-reliance. Decisions that are decided for yourself and ideas you come upon on should always be followed. Your life matters is on your hands we do and know whats best for ourselves and the choices we make throughout our life is what we want, and not seeking to others to make the choices for your life. Overall people who value self-reliance know exactly what you want and know whats best for themselves.
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Dear, principal i think that you should not make students do community service to students that don't like doing it. First i want you to know that is a good thing that you thing of that but if students don't want to help and you sent them do something i think they are going to make it worst. EX: you sent them to go pick up trash and they go and they are just playing around they are going to be fighting with the trash throwing it where it was clean then later when they finish playing they are going to see a mess that they are going to get lazy and just walk away and go to another place where its cleaner and if they are trouble makers they are going to do that over and over again. Think about it if you let students that really want to help out and they do the same thing (throw the trash to each other) and if they really want to help out they are going to clean for them selves. and they are going to be helping because they want to ,not because you forced them to do community service. I was also thinking of you giving 2 choices 1*students should do community service 2*students get to do extra home work for their hardest classes(where they are almost flunking the class)................ come on unlist think about it. from one of your best students *STUDENT_NAME
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Well, I feel that working with a group is better than working alone. In my opinion is more easy to work with other people and you can be sociable working like that ,there's a lot benefits and reasons why I prefer more work together than work alone. Let me explain what are my reasons why I prefer work in a group and why I don't like to work alone. First of all, I prefer work together because is more easy and you can finish your work quicky. For example, is you work in group of three, one member can search for the information about the topic, another member can make a poster showing examples about the topic and the last one has to organize how they are going to present and explain the topic. However, if I work alone I have to do all the work by my own, and it can takes a lot time to finish the project. Second of all, Working together is so funny you can talk with your classmates about the topic, and having good discussions. I feel comfortable working in a group and I enjoy working like that, because they share their opinions with you, even you can learn more from your classmates than the information of the topic, it can be strange,but it is true you don't know how much they know about the topic. Sometimes you can't understand the topic, but you have your group and ask questions to them, and they can help you to understand the topic. Third of all, Working in groups can be sociable, you can have a good time knowing new people and make new friends. I think is good be sociable because you can learn new things about them and you can develop your knowlege getting the new information from your classmates. For example, if you don't know anythink about history and you are in a group, and you ask who knows something about history and someone likes history you can aks him about it, and you can get new information about history and at the same time you are being sociable. However, if you are working alone, you can't ask to anybody because you dont know them. In conclusion, that's are the reasons why I prefer working in a group. Working together can be easy you can share the work with your group, you can have a good time with your classmate talking about the topic , and you can develop your friendship making new friends.
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I agree to the quote "Success consist of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm." In our life, in order to get what we desire is to overcome failures. It teaches us to become more stronger and to keep going without losing faith in pursuing our goals until we succeed. Based on my experience, doing what i love is the most important thing. No matter how many times i fail; as long as i love it, i will keep going to reach my goal. I will not mind other people, even they're telling me to stop and give up. For me, failing is the way that life gives to be stronger. Some people might think that life is very unfair, it just depends on how strong a person is to rise up after every falls. Every individual should have faith, in order to conquer challenges. Failing is just a word, it can't do nothing to stop a person to keep trying to pursue its goals. Failing for me doesn't mean it's the end. It's a good experience, because it teaches lessons. Doing what i love motivates me more not to give up, instead i'll keep standing up after i fail in order to succeed. In life, trying is not bad. Having faith and being enthusiastic is needed to overpass all obstacles by not giving up after failing. Keep trying to get what we want.
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Do you wish to have healthier school lunch menu?. Imagine your school cafeteria plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu, which would eliminate some of the students' favorite cafeteria foods. Many students wouldn't want to eliminate some of there favorite cafeteria foods. Therefore, I believe healthier school lunch menu you could benefit students at school, at work, and at home. Dear, Dr. Generic_Name My name is Generic_Name, I am a freshman at Generic_School. I would like to talk to you about a healthier school lunch menu. Ever since these 4 months have passed I've been eating the school lunch. Every time I eat the school lunch, after 30 minutes I would go to the restroom. The food wouldn't sit right nor feel right in my stomach. The issue isn't just with me, my friend Generic_Name has an allergic reaction whenever he eats something from the school lunch menu. I believe it would be a good idea to have healthier school lunch menu. Because half of our students at Generic_School are obese. Even you know all the food your providing for us is junk food. The pasta has puddles of oil, the burgers don't taste like real meat, the orange chicken isn't even cooked well. All the food you are providing for us is microwaved food. Instead of all these microwaved food. We could have similar foods as the ones we have right now for the lunch menu. The foods you feed us should be organic like the bread, meat , spaghetti , etc. The school lunch should be worth $3.75. Dr. Generic_Name instead of thinking about yourself think about us a little bit more. Imagine yourself sitting down at the lunch table seeing a puddle of oil on you're pasta tray. Imagine eating rock hard french fries. Please think about it and call me into your office if you ever want to talk about this issue that 75% of the students are having here at Generic_School. Sincerely, Generic_Name
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It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. Some people agree with this statement. In my opinion, first impressions are always wrong, and they are possible to change. I have several reasons for my opinion. The first reason why I dissagree with this statement is because we can not judge on other people from the first sight. Meeting someone and talking to them dose not mean that you know them yet. Some people treat others with different way. For example, if you are close to me and we know each other for long time, I will treat you different than a person who I just met. The second reason why I dissagree with this statment is because we do not know what other people going through. If you met a person for the first time and this person was rude or aggressive, there should be a reason for this behaviour. Maybe the person had a bad day or perhaps he is going through rough situations. You should think about what you are going to do if you were in the same position. That is why I dissagree with the statement. In conclusion, I'm against the statement that says the first impressions are almost impossible to change because we should know the person well before we think about any impression. In addition, everything could change and nothing stays the same.
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Have you ever wonder why people enjoy playing an instrument? let me explain you why this is an enjoyable educational activity. First, knowing that you are talented you become passionate and interested about it. Second, when you start seeing progress you will understand that all the effort is going to be worth. Finally, you will notice that playing an instrument has it benefits. Being passionate about music means to make and effort. You dedicate time to your instrument to get better. You also need to become interested meaning that you will practice every day in the best way possible. When you are talented and you love what you do is easier to improve. Progress is what every musician is looking for. When you start to seeing it you know you are getting better at playing your instrument and that you are capable of more, knowing that the effort is not going to be wasted. You start practicing more passionate than ever and improving your skills. You understand that you are expanding your knowledge and being responsible about this activity. Playing an instrument has a lot of benefits. It makes you smarter because when you are playing your instrument you are using an special part of your brain and it starts to develop. Also, playing an instrument makes you skillful because you are improving in this new skill daily. Another benefit is that it helps you to relax when you are stressed, playing your instrument gives you peace and quiet. It makes you feel confident. In conclusion, playing an instrument is an enjoyable activity because it makes you passionate, skillful and encourage you to do not give up. It also teaches you to be responsible and patience. But the most important thing is that it makes you understand the music in a certain way that you start to loving it and when you love something, you enjoy it.
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CURFEWS SAVE TEENAGERS By Generic_Name Curfews are a great way to keep teenagers safe and out of trouble. Teen teenagers who spend too much time on the streets are more likely to get in drugs, curfews will prevent teenagers from spending too much time in the streets. Teenagers offended tend to drive at high speeds at night because the might be drunk, it will prevent then to not get influence by bad people, if this law is approved it will really help keep teenagers safe. To begin with, in streets at night there are lot bad people, teenagers are expose to a lot of dangers, when they are in the streets at night curfews can prevent this to happen. Teenagers could be kidnapped or raped when they are in the streets at night and some cases they can be forced to do drugs or join gangs, if they dont do this things they might be beaten to death until they do it. Second reason, There are teenagers at night who tempt to drive at high speeds when they are drunk. This should not be allow because, it can end in car crash, teenagers don't have a lot of experience driving at night. For example, I had a friend who always likes to drive when hi was drunk at hing speeds in the highways at night, One night he had car accident because he was driving drunk and at a high speed he is dead now. Thirdly, curfew can prevent teenagers from doing things that they are not supposed to do. They might be doing drugs or hanging out in the streets with people that are doing drugs or are in gangs, they can be influenced by bad people from the streets to do drugs. Insulation, my cousin who use to do spent a lot of time in the streets with her friends, she and her friends went to jail because they were doing drugs. In conclusion, curfew prevents teenagers from getting in trouble, it may prevent teenagers from getting in drugs, also from getting kill in cars accidents. It will keep them away from bad influences, they will stay away from danger people in the streets, but the most important is that this curfews will keep them safe.
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I believe that positive attitude is the way to be successful in life , Because is the way to connect the mind with reality . Thinking positive bring us peace , Also having a positive attitude makes yourself have good friends , And a better way too see life. First at all when you expect the best , You must get the best , Because is the way to conncet mind with a positive attitude . The negative thoughts need to go away from our minds to move forward, Because if we do not put this in practice , We must be stuck in dark way to live. Secondly Thinking positve bring us peace , For example ; When you have leave all of your dark memories in the past . The only thing you may have will be peace and selfcontrol , Moreover People will be able to control emotions. Thirdly having a good attitude makes yourself sorround by positive People , Because you are one of this persons who have positive attitude, And when you mix yourself with positive People , You learn positive things from each other , Also is a better way to live life , Because you see life in a different journey them others , Because you do not only expect to good things happen , you make them happen. Finally when you have put all of this positive thinkings into practice , you start see the results from all you have reap . Then it is when you have found the real meaning about life that is ; what ever we have done make sure we have it done well , Because if we do not , We will not be success in life.
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community parks, state parks, and national parks provide a wide variety of interesting activities. Write about an enjoyable way to spend time outdoors. Using specific details and examples, explain why someone might find that activity enjoyable. First of all, Let say that you don't really see your family that often, You can take them to the park when they come to your house so you all can spend time together as a family that you don't really see. You can talk to your brothers if you don't see him him or her that often you can take him or her to the park ride around with bikes, Maybe go for a run to burn some calories down so you can stay healthy and in a good shape. And if you have a problem with someone in your family the park is the best way yo go and talk it out, Why because you can smell that fresh and clean air from the outside world you have time to think what you really want to do and talk to your self, If your a religious person that likes talking to god Im telling you go to the park you can talk to him you get everything of your head and you don't think stupid stuffs, Because some people when they are mad or they are sad they just go on their room and lock them self in their room that's not good because you are not breathing clean air like the outside world and the firs things teenagers do is yeah I am a bad boy I am going to smoke with my friends, I ask you this what benefits do you get from doing that? The park is the best way to go and take your stress out and clear your mind. Second If your an athletic and you don't have money to go to the gym or you don't have time, Don't worry about that I have one way for you to stay healthy and on shape by going to the park look there is so much stuffs you can do at the park you can go for a run, push-ups, curl-ups you can Stretch your body, And the good thing is that you are not breathing that air from the Gym and at the park you are breathing clean and fresh air. The best thing is that it is totally free and you can take anyone you want to take and you can see more people there that you don't know you can make more and new friends. Another reason is that If the house you leave in is to small to make a party, Guess what I have the correct spot for you the park you can play music you can make a big party invite us much as people you want to invite. The good thing is that the park has games for kids to play on and other stuffs and they even have food you can go buy food they have a little lake where you can go on little boats of four people and see different stuffs. Why would you want to have a party at your house when you don't know If people are going to come and where is going to be crowded and people might want to leave because there is to much people. When you can have the park because a lot of people like the park because they can go for a walk they can spend time with friends and family and there is a lot of space there is a small lake with boats that can carry four people you can have fun and experience the park. Finally going to the park is good for you I mean I am not going to force you to go to the park but you should go just one time and you will see how cool and beautiful it is you can go with your dog, son, or your daughter, Plus sometimes they make a little concert and a lot of people come and dance with different people and different music. And in the summer they make a little fair and let me tell you man It is amazing, You can try different types of food because people come and sell food and It doesnt cost that much you can smell the delicious food. If you don't want to buy a ticket you can just walk around the park and see the different types of foods and you can go see the ocean and smell the nice wind.
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Thomas Jefferson said its amazing how much is done if we work hard, do we accomplish by doing something or does doing nothing have a purpose? If we doing something everyday we could accomplish something like if you exercise every day with healthy meals you will be losing weight and burning calories, if we do not do nothing and don't take care of your self you'll gain weight, see stretch marks on your body or even get diagnosed by diabetes or even something even more serious like a stroke, heart attack, and organ failure. Everyday people accomplish things for example: work people who work in construction have to work through some harsh conditions when its freezing or when its flaming hot. From my experience of working in construction I was a laborer working for ten hours, I as a laborer had to make sediment, mix for placing cinder blocks, carry buckets of water, cinder blocks, fill in the the holes with concrete, had no breaks only lunch, set up scaffolds and lift long heavy wooden planks and climb up and set the pallets of cinder blocks and water for the mix so it doesn't dry. A Japanese manga artist named Akira Toriyama, the creator of Dragon Ball and Dr. Slump, even though both stories are fantastic but the one who stuck out the most is Dragon Ball. a young Akira saw a manga tournament who had the best manga it took him a couple tries to win and that lucky day he saw a editor from Toei Animations and told Akira great job from there he got confident and inspired that he could make something happen. later on he kept making mangas until he made one called dragon boy and one other manga and he combine both them and created dragon ball, he created Goku the main character and gave him the personality of Akira. Akria sold more than nine million copies of dragon ball from that money he made a studio call Bird Studio for his animations. Once Dragon Ball got so popular in Japan Toei Animations bought the anime from Akria and made the next Dragon Ball series called Dragon Ball Z. Dragon Ball has been around 32 years since it released in the U.S. and it still going and getting more popular. This year in January 14 the new Dragon Ball Super Broly came out in the U.S. and made one hundred million in the box office, one of the most famous anime and one of the best selling anime movies of all time.
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A problem is something that can make a difference in your life and can also teach you. I was in walmart one day, than I saw a man with small legs and Generic_Name started make fun of how the man walked, talked, and the man heard him he asked Generic_Name if he wanted to do a biking raise with him, Generic_Name said yes, they did the raise and the man with small legs own. After that Generic_Name never made fun of anyone he saw. A problem is a chance for you to do your best because it can change your life and it can teach you. First of all, a problem can change your life. Oneday I was at walmert and Generic_Name was telling his story of the past. He said, I used to steal, tell lies, I didn't listen to anyone and I also didn't work. One day, we went on a family vacation, on our way back we got hit by a truck and I was the only one who surived in that accident. After that, I wanted to take my life, for I didn't see the reason of living anymore. Six months passed, and nothing was working in my life. Then oneday I went to the beach planing to take my own life he said, when I started walking toward the water I saw a man sitting in the sand. He asked me, who are , my name is Generic_Name I said, and I started telling the man my story. Then the man said, your life matters the reason why you survived the accident that night is because it wasn't your time yet, your life matters because you are still breathing said the man, that is a gift because there are people out there wishing they don't have machines helping them to breath. These words changed my life, he said, I didn't forget about my family but I fixed my life for the good. This evidence shows that Generic_Name used to steal, tell lies, didn't work and didn't listen to anyone, his family got into a care accident and he was the only one that surived, he wanted to take his own life but all that changed when he met a man at the beach who opened his eyes. clearly, a problem is something that can take your life to the next level. In addition, a problem can teach you. There was this man named Generic_Name, he was a faithful man he helped people in need with what he had, Generic_Name had eleven children, five boys and six girls. All his children were trained to help people in need. One day, something happened, a messanger came to Generic_Name and told him that his house was set one fire, and his children were in there. Everything that Generic_Name owned was destroyed, Generic_Name, who was Generic_Name's wife, was not pleased with what happened. Generic_Name's friends told him to repent maybe he did something bad to his God, but he said he didn't sin against anyone, his wife told him to curse God and he will die , but Generic_Name didn't. Oneday Generic_Name got really mad that he shouted at God and when he did that he remembered years ago, Generic_Name promised to give a family some food and kept saying I will give you some food I promised, but Generic_Name will always forget. The whole family died because of Generic_Name. When he remembered this Generic_Name asked forgiveness to God, and he forgave Generic_Name. Everything he had was restored. This evidence shows that Generic_Name lost everything he had, but at last he remmbered his mistake and asked for forgiveness. Clearly, we can learn from our problems. Inconclusion, a problem can be a chance for you to do your best because it can change your life and it can teacher to you. If you ever found yourself in a sitaution like Generic_Name's remember your life matters and don't forget the promises you give to people because it can destroy your life.
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Is it better to finish high school early? Yes, I would say finishing high school in three years is better. Why? because you can start college early, or go into the work force, and you can have the time to explore the world. By doing this 3 year program, you can start college early. In today's society, finishing school early may be a big benefit. If I had the chance to do this program, I would take that chance. You may be looked at different but in a good way. Also, by starting college early it can be a huge advantage to your future. Finishing school early can bring you into the work force. I would believe by finishing school early, it can be a huge benefit for looking for new jobs. Also, putting on your resume that you graduated early, the employers would look into it and see that you had to take summer and evening classes. You would look your very intelligent and responsible. If having a year off, and don't know what to do, you can explore. If I had that year off I would use the time to see new things, things that i've never seen before. By taking the year off, you would still be on track in your schooling. In life some people don't want to go into school because it is overwhelming. Have the time to go out, if not then you'll regret not having that time to yourself. By taking a 3 year course of high school, you can start looking into jobs, have time to explore, and you can start college early. Some say that finishing high school early, you don't get the same high school experience as others that don't do the 3 year program. But finishing high school a year early, can bring you more benefits than just doing the normal 4 years. In the future I believe that high school will only be 3 years of schooling.
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Should students get involved in school activities? School activities are the best way for students to get a chance at achieving something. Students should participate in at least one extracurricular activities because they will earn respect from there teachers and classmates. its also a chance for them to show off there talents and earn popularity or even any sort of achievements for it. Students can earn respect from there friends, teachers, classmates and maybe even staff if they can be nice enough or if they work hard and they have respect for other people like there teachers or if they put a lot of effort on a thing they will automatically gain respect from other people in there school. All students work hard but not all earn the respect they expect but if students respect each other they can earn respect among themselves. Students can show off there talents or achieve something by participating in anything there good at like participating in there school sports which all schools has tons of varieties or they can do any sort of clubs try to participate in yearbook making or even the student council these sorts of things have made even famous athletes or even actresses these sort of things can discover a lot of talent because the athletes, actresses or even engineers and etc got to where they are because they got the talent for it. Students can earn respect from there teachers and classmates they can also achieve awards for there talents. participate in extracurricular activities and discover your talent.
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Schools Partnerships with companies Why schools allow the students to visit the companies? Because many students are interesting about business and other types of jobs that they might want to explore. In some schools the workers of the company come to the school to talk with students about the different opportunities they have in the future. The manager of the company should chose me because I have a good grades, I am interesting about business, and I want to learn more every day about business and I work hard . First, I have a good grades in all of my classes. The teachers talk good things about me with others teachers and my uncles. I pay attention in class I do my homework every day. I missed school when I am sick or I have an appointment. I stay after school if I need to retake a quiz or if I need to print some papers in the library. I don't use my phone during class because I like to in focus what the teacher says I turn my phone off. Second, I am interesting about business because I want to be manager of companies. I always interesting about this career when was 12 years old I said I want want to be manager of companies. Now I am 19 I still want to be manager of a company. After High School I want to go to college to study about business and prepare for can find a job about manager of companies. I never stop to make my dream come truth. Finally, I always want to learn more every day about my future job. I like to work hard to show all my knowledge in my projects. I like to explore new things an discover news ideas about my Future work. If they pay me a check every month need to be for my work I don't like to win money easy. I don't like lazy people I like the people who work hard and developed their job really good. In conclusion the manage need to chose me because I am a good choose to go visit, explore and learn more things about my future job. In my opinion the manager need to chose me because I have a good grades, I am interesting about business, and I like and want to learn more about business and I work hard.
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Do you think students in high school, should commit a career at a young age? I think students should wait until there last year or second to last year of high school, to think about getting a career. Students in high school should focus more on school rather than a career. But they can think about what they wanna do after high school. Do you think by the time students enter high school, They are expected to identify a career? I think that students who are about to enter high school. Should focus on school and than getting out of high school. High school is not a joke it matters. You have to pass your classes in order to go to the next grade. If you fail some classes you repeat those classes again the next year or have to go to summer school. You dont wanna go to summer school. I wouldn't wanna have to go to summer school just because I didn't pass the first time. When kids enter high school, should they think about a career? I think they should take electives that relate to a career. like fun electives they can take during the school year. I think that high school is getting us prepared for the real world kinda. Because once we leave high school we are on our own. Noone is gonna help you besides your family and friends. That's why I suggest getting a job so you can take care of yourself. I think students thinking about a career, before going to high school. Should focus on school because high school isn't a joke. Of Course high school has drama but we have to deal with and it's not that hard. I think kids could brain storm about getting a career at a young age. High school isn't easy we all have our problems we have to deal with. But high school is temporary just like pain is temporary when your dealing with depression. High school in general sucks sometimes because of the drama and high school girls. The teachers aren't like middle school and elementary school teachers. The teachers in high school aren't gonna hold ur hand. So that's why you gotta work and not slack off in high school because it'll come back to bite you.
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I believe that is good idea for the students to commit to a career at a young age. Instead, it is important for the students to find the specific career and graduate before time. In point of view, some students can choose, if they want to a specific career or more. In thesis statement, students can find the specific career because is great opportunity and good idea. First reason, some students are considered to find the specific career. Because they want to enter to the college at their young age. For example, Generic_Name was prepare to enter to the college at her 17th years old and she win a scholarship, and enter to Generic_School to study her specific career. This shows that students can achieve their goals at their young age, that nothing is impossible. Second reason, some students have to find the specific career. Because they want to prepare before graduate of high school. For example, Generic_Name had her classes pass and all the credits before 12th grade and she apply to the college to her specific career. Being students it's not easy to achieve this specific goal, but with work hard and perseverance all is possible. Third reason, some students think that they can't commit to a career at a young age. Because they don't have courses to guide toward a specific career. For example, Generic_Name is in 12th grade and she wants to graduate before, but she don't pass her SOL and she have the enough credits for graduate. So this shows that students can't commit to a career. If they don't have everything that is necessarily to find the specific so they cannot achieve anything. In conclusion, it is important for the students to find a specific career at a young age. However, it is a great idea to find the career that proponent to achieve before the time of graduate and get all that you need like: credits, grades, exams, and courses. Also, this is a great opportunity if you want to be someone professional in this society. So be positive and perseverant.
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Having good attitudes is the best way to successes. There is two types of attitudes : a good attitudes and a bad attitudes. Good attitudes can help you in a lot of thing, for example you don't agree with your boss about your paycheck, one thing that you can do is talk with your boss with a good attitude and get to a agreement or talk with a bad attitude and get fire. Good attitudes can also help during a bad or boring times. For example, you and your family are having a bad time in a trip and then you go with a great attitude and make everyone feel better. Some ways that you can be with a good attitude are : when you sleep well, when is sunny outside, when you get a gift, when you go to your favorite restaurant or you got your favorite food , when your friends go to your house, when you visit your family, when you go to a trip and your having a good time, and so many other ways. Bad attitudes can take you to the wrong path. A lot of people have bad attitude almost all the time and it's really difficult to get along with them. That type of person does not have a lot of friends or they don't have friends. One example of a bad attitude is when you came to school with a lot of stress and a bad attitude and your teacher do something that you don't like, then you star yelling at him with a bad attitude and your teacher send you to guidance and you get a report card. Or maybe someone else is with a bad attitude and wants to fight and that can go really bad. Some ways that you can get a bad attitude are : when you are tired, when you got a lot of work, when it's raining and you can't go outside, when someone else got a bad attitude with you, when you are mad at someone, when you are hungry and the food is bad, and some other things. When I am with good attitudes I always have the best time. Some thing that make me have a good attitude is when I got my favorite food , or a present , or when I am with my family. For example, yesterday was my cousin's birthday in a really fun place, I was with a good attitude because I was playing with my cousin and then we ate really good food. Also I am with a good attitude when my family and I go on a trip, I love to travel because we can visit a lot of new places. Another example is, because my science's teacher was with a good attitude, he give us one more day to turn in a project. There is so many benefits of having good attitudes. One of them can be when you got a important exam and you study and feel secure about it, then in the next morning you woke up with a good attitude and you take the exam felling secure about your self and with a good attitude, you are going to get a good grade. I think that the best one is having a good time because you are happy and being happy is the best felling that a person can have. In conclusion, having good attitudes can help you in a lot of thing like in work, school ,and even family reunions. Now you know, the next time that you are felling bad or having a bad time the best way to handle that is having a good attitude.
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My dad usually told me that failure is the mother of success when i was young. Way to success is not easy, everyone had to face different kinds of problems. It will fell harder and harder every time you failed, and it's hard to keep up the enthusiasm while facing different kind of problems. Yes, i'm fully agree with Mr. Churchill. Failure lead you to success. Simple example about Elon Musk, one of the richest people on planet Earth. He was the Chairman of PayPal, Tesla. At 2002 he invented SpaceX, first ever self-investment rocket company to reach the Earth's orbit. Also, most amazing thing is they invented the reuse rocket, which is the rocket will land back to earth after launch to the Earth's orbit. SpaceX has accomplished so many that people talk about their success so much without remember their failure. Let me tell you this: The first 2 of their rocket(Falcon 1) launch are all failure due to engine failure. after during a other year of researching, testing, and examine, the 3rd rocket launch still failed to reach the Earth's orbit. At that time everyone think this project is a jock and Elon only have the money to launch the 4th rocket. Without losing hope and years of hard work, their 4th rocket(Falcon Launch 4) was successfully launched and reach the Earth's orbit. Elon and SpaceX made history, SapceX also received a large amount of money by NASA. Don't ever lose your enthusiasm(Hope). Don't Never Ever Give Up, one of the greatest quote of all time, it lead so many people to success. Like Elon Musk i talked about last paragraph, he is a great example for us. His enthusiasm and passion about Space transpiration in the future and even moving people to space lead him and his company into success. I'm a sports athlete, i play basketball for 5 years already, it's part of my life. Every athlete knows practice is boring but also important. Why so many people still play professional basketball is because they have the passion and enthusiasm about winning. Process is boring and long, however it only take one moment for sports athlete to fell everything is worth it. Still some people failed on their way, beat by the tiredness of the process and slowly lose their enthusiasm for what they are chasing for at the beginning. Failure complete the adventure, last thing i'm going talk about today. Everyone is emotional, everyone hate losing, everyone wanted to take the short cut. I'm the everyone, you are the everyone too, but without the gaps on the road to success, the adventure just seems not complete. Every failure make the explorer more stronger and smarter. Learn from the mistake, take note from it and you will be step ahead from everyone else. Every person on this planet with big accomplishment also have big mistakes too. No one is perfect, just go do thing what you want or like to do, eventually the journey will become interesting. All for all, guess you already tired of reading. i support my 3 main points: Failure lead you to success, don't ever lose your enthusiasm, failure complete the adventure. I'm also agree with Mr. Winston:'' success consists of going from failure to failure without loss of enthusiasm.'' Failure does play a important role in the pursuit of success.
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I would like to become a Cardiologist in my future, so that I can save people's lives by charging them less money and nobody has to suffer like my uncle, it is one of the high-paying jobs and there are less heart surgeons in the world. My uncle was detected with a hole in his heart since he was born. But my family couldn't afford the money for the surgery, so they left him like that itself. He started feeling more pain when he studying his final years of high school. When he went through the surgery, he had exams going on. Despite the pain, he studied for his exam and passed in flying colors. Many people cannot afford the surgeries for not only heart but for many organs in their body. So, I wanted to change that and help all the people in the world, so that they can live happily at least once in their lifetime. It is one of the high-paying jobs in the world. My family was not able to treat my uncle because of not having enough money at that time, so I wanted to earn money and save lives at the same time as much as I could. In this way, every body in my family will not be able to endure all the pain they had even before I was born. I will do anything to keep my family happy. In this world, we have more doctors in other fields but not much in the cardio field. I wanted to change that because half of the world's population has hidden heart defection, they don't know still, like my uncle. This is because of less cardiologists in the world. When people go to the heart surgeons, the doctors ask more money then the usual charge as there are only a few doctors in that field. People cannot afford the money they ask and just leave their defected hearts, they continue doing their day-to-day works. If this continues, then people will die without even enjoying their whole life in this world. I wil become a heart surgeon and charge my patients the money they can afford. With this I will also be happy and the people who come to me will also be happy as they get cured. In conclusion, becoming a cardiologist is one of big dreams I want to achieve in my life. I will save people's lives only by costing them with affordable money. I won't let my fellow people go through what my uncle did, so I would do anything to save their lives. People are dying across the world because there are only a few doctors in that field and they also charge them high, so I will change these people's lives by doing the opposite of what the other doctors did. I want to change this world into a better place to live because everything here is money, so i hope i can change it.
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Should schools have a program that pairs older student withe younger students? Well I dont. Schools have rules that must be flowed and if they are not flows the students or teacher can have a big consoquins. I dont think that schools should have this programs beaus, The younger students atint to answer most of the questions. Also the younger students may get boiled by the older students. And most of the older students play around in class. To begin withe do you think that school shooed have a program that pairs older students withe younger students? Well I dont beaus sum of the younger students answer more qushtons then the older students. For exampal they are more attentive in class,they mostly study to get good grads,the younger students now more of the qushtons then the older students. Second this is way schools should not have this program beaus the older students play to much in class. for example they like to joke around to make the class lathe,They also like to be Laud most of the time,Also they call the other students names which is also bulging. Thered the younger students may get build by the older students. The older students can pick on the younger students,Some times the older acts tougher to the younger students,Also the older students bully the younger ones in phicicall aperans, That also way school should not have this program. Do you still think that schools should have this program? Well I still think no. Beaus younger students answer more quash tons,The older students talks to much during class,and the younger students may not now how to defined him self s if a older student is bulling him.
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Self-reliance allows one to follow their own path and make their own decisions. Guidance is taking advise and having other decide what one should do. while guidance can be helpful, it can also be misleading, and people aren't completely following their insticts when other decide for them. Being self-reliance is important due to the fact that if someone make their own decisions, they have the freedom to problems solve. Making mistakes enables one to learn and grow. With the use of Self-reliance guidance from other human beings unneeded. Those who are self-reliant believe that other human are capable of doing the same tasks that they are. In nature, most animals have to be self-reliant in order to stay alive, for example, as a bear gets older, their parent has to, let them go off in the wild alone. Bears are able to maintain life by finding their own food and shelter. With the use of guidance, humans and animals learn what works the best for them. Self guidance allows for mistakes to occur, be corrected, and allows for people to find their own solution. Even though not knowing anything or not being able to complete the tasks alone; it is a trait that allows individual to grow and better themselves by finding their own way. Self-reliance is more than the choose and make one's own decisions. It requires integrity and the will to face up to the challenge that, ultimately betters one's character and work ethic. Solid solving capability leads to more creative.
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People said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. However, I think is possible since people learn how to change their impressions even that is their first impression like kids impressions change when they become a teens. Also, it is a brain game that needs practice for many years to improve their first impressions. Men and women has different impressions or simler that is the big challenge specially for a new couples. First, Innocent child impression change when become a teen. My younger sister was hard to control her impressions like screaming front of people or portending that she's not lessening to you. However, now she's yang teenager growing and learning about her new impressions and how to change in the future. Second, Men and women has different impressions or simler that is the big challenge specially for a new couples. People analyze that difference impressions between couples cause many problems for their parents or their children. My parents life was a big lesson for me because they are opposite each other like "Tom and Jerry". I'm sure that every body knows how much Tom love Jerry. based on my ex
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Why Great Britain is the greatest place to visit for the tourists? In my opinion, best place to visit for the tourists is Great Britain. Because, Great Britain has,the most interesting and mysterious places to visit, the culture differences, and why is visiting Great Britain is great motivation to start learn English. Firstly, Great Britain has a lot of tourist places to visit for example, Big Ben. Big Ben is the one of the main historical places that tourist should visit first. Also, Great Britain built a lot of castles between 15th and 17th century. This castles were serving to, protect rich people or royal families from attacks, and to keep them warm. But right now most of this castles are not used to live inside because people left hem alone and nobody could keep them clean and safe. It's great place to visit to feel how people lived differently than us right now. Secondly, Great Britain believes in very interesting type culture in the world. People are living their life with optimistic view even if they have not the best time in their life. Actually, people who lives their whole life in Great Britain has beautiful accent that helps them to make a lot of dramatic operas. All of the Great Britain history, people believed in Christianity and promoted to other people, it cause that all of their old colonies are believing in Christianity. Finally, if the tourist is visiting Great Britain, it's a good motivation to start learn English because, right now most of the world is using English to communicate with each other, and English is one of the greatest language to start to learn. English can be difficult sometimes but every language is difficult in some ways. In the end, Great Britain is the great country to visit and explore their culture style, historic places, and motivation to learn something new for yourself. Great Britain will give you the most exciting moments and feelings.
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Imagination and knowledge are very inportant parts of us. Albert Eistein said," Imagination is more important than knowledge." I'm on debate on whether I agree or not, so maybe this will help me decide. In my opinion, I believe that imagination and knowledge go hand and hand. There's many reasons on why I believe this, but due to the character limitation, I'm only going to name a few reasons. One of the first reasons I believe this is because of discovery. When someone goes out on a new adventure, they can only imagine on what they can find. When they do find something new, they use their imagination to find out what it can do, what it haas inside, or what does it do for the enviroment. Once they do figure out somethinng about it, they get the knowledge from it. It's honsetly cool on how much we know because of our imagination. Another reason on why I believe this way is because of what we created over the past years. We've created so many wonderful things and a few mistakes over the past years. When sommeone wants to invents something, they use their imagination and knowledge of the world around them to make it. If you want a job on where creativity has no boundries, then you should become either an animator or a game developer. I choose to be both, but mostly being game developer. When someone get inspired to make someone, they use the knowledge of their inspiration and their own imagination to create something wonderful or a mistake that should never been released on this world. I honestly do that too. I've takeen the knowledge from the games and animations I liked to come up with something in which I hope many people will injoy. There's plenty more reasons that I can't really come up with but I'm sure that you get my point. Imagination and knowledge work together to improve this world as we know it. Prime examples of this are discovery and creativity. If everyone can use these two things together, I'm sure that we'll come up with something wonderful or something that'll most likely mess up the planet forever.
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When you see people doing their work do you sometimes think they are feeling alone doing their work. I mean the teacher ask them if they want to work with a group or do it alone but they always chose to do it alone because they don't know anyone in the class or they don't feel like working with anyone that means they wanted to look cool about it. so that would mean more work for them, What i feel that is more beneficial is working in a group. When working in a group you have less work to do because everyone has a different job to do for example, let's say you have a project and it is a group project everyone has a job to do like one person could be doing research, another person can be working on the poster/PowerPoint,and the last person can be the one presenting it to the class. people could say that working alone is better and much quite, However working in a group means to making new friend and getting the work done much faster. Working in a group isn't really that bad you can have some fun when you are working in a group like making new friend asking when they can stay after so you can do the project together or going to each others houses planning on what you should do with your project. But it is really fun when you are working with your friends,Working with your friends is fun because you would be laughing all day and you might or might not get some work done but that just depends on the kind of friend group you have. There are some who would be focus and get the work done but there are others who would be laughing and get nothing done. people could say that working with friends is distracting, However having to work with your friends would be really easy and fun. It's much easier for the students to work in group the can get together and work things out with each other instead of them doing it alone and they don't have anything planed like no ideas at a lot then it's good to have a group because they can bring new ideas. New plans like everyone can have their ideas on their project plus it would be nice seeing what the student made see what each student has. It just shows that everyone had different themes of there project. so when you work alone you just only see one persons ideas and that fine but when you are in a group you see everybody ideas. Other might people say that one mind is good enough, However many minds would make a differences. The reason people work by their self is because they might think that working in group is too distracting and it's not fun when people keep on talking. But working with other people will help make things faster and fun but also you get to give your own opinion about things and you get to work together plus you get to learn a lot from your group.
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The lesson I well share is to be good in all in your class and never give up in elementary school. This important to kids in elementary school so when they go to middle school it is going to be lot harder. When i was in elementary school eveyone bully me all the time but i never give up. Work hard in elementary school and never gave up. Middle school is alot tougher so make it count in elementay school get good grade all the time and set goals to aconples fous goals. When it is time to go to middle school then it is your time to be in the next level. All the time to be posative in school so be your self and never stop working to get those good grade. This is my lesson to all students in elementary schoo In middle school it is going to be new people that you never met before in your life you can make new friends. So try to make new friends in middle school and make sure that you do not do nething bad in middle school or you well be in trouble. For new kids in middle school you can make new friends every time. So can you do something about it and can you stop bully around your school.
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First impressions are almost impossible to change because it's the first image that I give to the others, what other people think about me , people are going to treat me as I treat them the first time and no one is going to change his mind easily First impressions are important, because thats how the the others around see me, because after the first time that they see me, that is the image that they have about me, and if it is a bad image ,thats how they are going to remember me every time that they see me, even if I am not like that , like if a was having a bad day , and a was grumpy , they are going to think about me as a grumpy person, even if I am a happy person, but that is the image that they are going to have about me. whats people going to think about me depends on the first impression that I gave them, because if I gave a bad first impression , but then I am trying to be nice with them , they are not gonna believe me, because they are going to still thinking about me as a bad person and they are going to think that I am lying. After the first impression I am always going to get what I give ,I am going to be treated the same way as I treated others the first time , making more difficult to change their minds about the first impression. Is important to keep in mind that the others are not going to change their mind easily , but it is not impossible , if a person try really hard and with good intentions , the other person maybe can change his mind about that first impression , but sometimes a person does not have to do anything to change that first impression , someone can change the first impression by his actions , even if is from a bad impression to a good impression or from a good impression to a bad impression, but it is possible. first impressions are really hard to change because the first image a person gives, what others think about me after it, and they are going to treat me the same way as I did with them , but it si posible to change.
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I agree that a positive attitude is the key to success in life, because if you have a positive attitude you can do a lot of thing in your life. Also you can octain better things, that can help you for a good future. Sometimes you has to be positive in life to be successfull, and a better person. Think positive is the best way that you can do for betters things, and a good provilege. If you want good things in your life you have to be positive. I think if you are positive in life, that's a good way in which you can find better thing to do. That can be something very important for you. Also if you ae positive in life, you can do everything that you want to do it, for your future. That's why if you want to do a better person or a educated person you have to be positive. To complate your goals, and do better things that you think that can help you, to be positive because that's the key to success in life. To be positive is the best way to success in the life. But also if you are positive in life that can help you, because also your parents can feel proud of you. That is a good form that yours parents feel good, and they tell you, that the key to success in life is to think positive. That's why you always has to be positive in the life, because every person want to improve, for betters opportunities, and good chances that can help you for betters things in life. But also think positive for a better future.
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People can check out books, shop and play games without speaking to another person. Is better use the technology and do not use the books because we have to do more things. Technology should do not use allows people to complete because not the all time use that tradition, However; technology should use allows people to complete is better for a job. Technology should use allows people to complete many task because the people can use the technology for investigate something important, the people use the technology for work, and the people can use the technology for distract to other things. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people can use the technology to investigate something important. For example when we have a doubt we have to find evidence for real and we have to know if it is true. Also maybe we have a homework about the old time we have to use the internet. Also too if we have a question about something old or something like that we have to investigate, so we have to use the technology. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people can use the technology for investigate something important. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people use the technology for work. For example somebody work on a office and then have a project to do then have to use the technology. Also have a doubt about a unknown enterprise and have to know about that then have to find that information in the internet. Also too if work about computer's or something like that they have to use the technology. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people use the technology for work. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people can use the technology for distract to other things. For example they have stress they listen to music in the internet then they can take a relax. Also if want's to watch movie they can do that things and then is using the internet or technology. Also too they can distract using the technology because they can use or watch the social media and own phones or computer. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people use the technology for work. Technology should use allows people to complete many tasks because the people can use the technology to investigate something important, the people use the technology for work, and the people can use the technology for distract to other things. For example when we have a doubt we have to find evidence for real and we have to know if it is true. Also have a doubt about a unknown enterprise and have to know that then have to find that information in the internet. Also too they can distract using the technology because they can use or watch the social media and own phones or computer. That's why the technology is better then books because they can do a lot things with the internet or technology.
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I 'm agree because I think is neccesary help the people ,if to tell the truth is neccesary sincere you need to but remember where are you from, is important always tell the truth sometimes somepeoples have depression ,and is very important tell him talk which him, because i demostrate my help and i said you are a good person is good talk which person ,but which a person depresseon is different beacuse all the he is sad , i have a friend which depression is no necessary tell him nothing is better to go to the play soccer o other part , i always to give courage to my friends. I try to help people is good because nobody know how the people to suffer hurt mental and other things, but if you can help people helping because you after help a vagrant in your head said a feel good bacuse a help people and is very good. somepeople said i dont need help but they need more help, because the state mental is not the same, when the state mental change is hard help which the people ,because sometimes the people is crazy or other things but you need demostrate help him , like talk which him ,play which him o other things. the work psychologist is hard bacuse he talk which much people which different proble, and is heavy for him and is very hard he tgry to the the people.
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We can always accomplish if we have a time and also if we try to do more than do anything. Accomplish don't have to be all the time just when you can. For me to do accomplish more is better than don't do inactivity. I have 3 reason why I think do more accomplish. First reason is, to be better. Second reason is, do more. Third reason is, feelings. There are some reason why I think that be accomplish is better. For some of the people be accomplish is hard to the people because they don't have to much time. First reason is, be better is because your learn more, you have more experience. We don't wait our time if we do more job if we have to do more job we doing it. We don't have to be to lazy for do more job if we can do the job. Just if we don't have to much time that will be just to done the work. To do accomplish to spend more time doing it. Whatever thing is if we have time we doing it. I work every day if I have to do more work I do it but if I don't have a time do to my work I just done whatever I am doing. Second reason is do more. do more can be extra work done that will be nice ti have extra work done for the next day if we do the same we don't have to do more. Extra work have to be complete by the time and then dependently what do you do about. When people do extra work in their job the make more money and also they make more overtime hours in their job but no all the job are the same. For me to do more work is more easy for one think I learn more for, another think I just do extra job because I have time and I like too. To more is when we the people have time Third reason is feelings, why feelings? feelings is because when we do more work that have to be we are satisfy. In other way we feel like when you make a goal when you done. We have emotional feeling when we done the thing what we doing it and also when we accomplish more. After you finish doing the work we feel tired but is not the same when we are satisfy for done. when I do my extra work always measure that is good. When I know is good I say "yes I finishing" and I feel so proud of me. when we do something we have to be positive for every will be okay. In conclusion, to do accomplish will be the best idea for to better extra work. The reason why the accomplish is the idea is, to be better, to do more, and the last one is feeling. what Thomas Jefferson wrote "Determine never to be idle it is wonderful how much may be done if we always doing" that is most be true for all kind of people around the world. do more is always help and always do accomplish is the best idea.
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Positive attidude is key to success in life. This should the people who have a good attitude can be help the society to improve, and I agree with this statement but most people have a bad attitude and they need to change, because if they have positive attitude they can be have a good life with the family, better in the job, and can be to improve the life of the others person. The people who have positive attitude if good with the family to improve a condition society, or help to the change they attitude. For example, the majority of the person does not have patience with the childrens, or the familty and least the society. For this many of the people need to improve they attitude, and outgrow the bad desicion they take in the life. Because if they have a bad attutude they can not help the family, or the other person when they needy. nevertheless many of them attempt change the attitude because they know the change it correct for have a better life with the family and the society. If the people have a good attitude can better in the jod, when make the work with the other people, or when a customer make a question and can be reply with a smile and kindly. For example, in many jod some employee have a bad attitude because when someone asking a question this people reply irate, and the customer irete too, for the attitude of the employee. This should that people need to have patience not only with the customer, or family need to have a positive attitude with everyone. However, if employee have patience, and some customer go in with the bad attitude and speak very bad the employee can contain and respond the same manner. Truly, the people need learn to control the attitude for can be better in the jod. A person who have a good attitude can be change the other people life, because if helping to take better decision in the school, jod, or treat the improve the attitude with others. For example, in the school the teachers try to change the attitude of the students can be more better, and taht they respent others teachers and students. This should that teachers want to the students improve they life, because when they can be adults that have a better attitude, can be take better decision. After they graduate they can be work in a good jod has positive attitude, respent the customer, help their family with they needy, and have a good condition society. In theory, the people need to have a person who have a positive attitude for be better. Positive attidude is key to success in life. Can be improve the relathionship with the family, or the society. Many of them has a good job because they respent the boss, customer, and the others employee. Have a good attitude change the life of many people get a better future.
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Although some schools offer says that distance of learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because some students prefer take classes online and for this classes you have to pay, actually If you go to the school you'll have the capacity of learn more faster. Although some schools offer says that distance of learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing because there are 50% of students that prefer take classes online and they don't come to the school. I think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home because if they stay at home, they will have more time to spend with their family or make things that they would like to do. And students who stay at home they will have more time to studied another signature like math or they can learn another language. They can practice a sport or they can do whatever they want. If you take a video conferencing this will help you to understand your teacher because a video conferencing explain you what you need to do. And also you will see what is your teacher teaching you. Reason 1, why students would be benefit from being able to attend classes from home is because if they take classes online they will finish school more early. for example some classes online are more shorter than a school year. School year require have 315 days of classes and you have to be in the school for about 6 to 8 hours per day. And also they need to complete some credits to graduated. If you want to finish school you have to complete this credits. To have complete this credits you have to take some classes that are require to complete those credits. Reason 2, why students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home is because if they studied at home they can go to doctor's appointment. There are 70% of students that doesn't come to the school because they have doctor appointment and they mostly are absent. Attendants is very important in the school because if you want to have good greats you have to come every day. If you take classes online you will have the capacity of learn more faster and whatever test that they give you online you'll available to past them. Although some schools offer think that distance of learning as an option for students to attend classes from home by way of online or video conferencing would benefit at some students that choose studied online or by a video conferencing. There are a good reasons why students prefer to studied online. That's the majority of students prefer stay at home and take classes online.
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what is your talent or skill and how you develop and use it? my talent is drawing. I used just for fun, when i want to think about something else, I develop my drawing by be in art class. first, everyone has a talent or skill, my talent is drawing, draw is the more relaxing thing that I experiment,For example,some people said draw, help you to make clear your ideas, distract you that make forget about your problems. make you focus in the paint. next, I just my talent just fun,because that make relax and that help me to clear my ideas. For example some famous artist said, A artist, for him drawing it's not a responsabilitie, or homework , art is to express all their feeeling in a paint that why I drawing just for fun because when I draw I express my problem in the paint, and that give peace, when i'm angry I draw too that make happy . then,I decided to take art to develop my drawing,and paratices, now i know more things then before for example, the rules how are the steps, the way to made more easy, some people developing the drawing by theirself, and they want to make more experienece by theirself, that is more interesting because they experiment their own talent. the results are better. In conclusion, I used my talent, drawing just for fun and when I want to think about something else, and i develop my drawing for be in art class.
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How its really nice if you say thank you or your welcome to someone. If you say nice things to others and have manners. All ways be grateful for what people do for you or even get you something just always say thank you or your welcome. Because if you do then that means they will say it back to you. If you always be kinda and have manners then they will to. Show kindness and love. Be happy make them happy to for having nice manners. Always be there to help someone out. If your kinda to others and have manners to, they will do the same back to you, so if they be kinda and say thank you or your welcome to you its because you said it to them back. You always need manners for anything you do always have to say yes sir or thank you all that good things only if you want the same thing back for you. If you want someone to say thank you or your welcome you have to say it back to them. Its all about being nice to others to. All ways be happy say some thing good try to make friends because if you have manners thats how you can make new friends to. Saying thank you after someone helps you out, or they do something for you. Always have something good to say to them because you never know if that made there day being nice to them. Just be nice have good manners to get the same thing back. We all want manners and kindness so we all have to do that. Being nice is something good. Your showing who you are. If you never said thank you or yes sir or your welcome to someone is okay but you should having manners is good because then they will be good to say your welcome and thank you. If you ever hurt someone say your sorry be kinda say something nice to them and then you will be fine. They will be fine with you to its all about manners if you want someone to be nice to you, you need to be nice back. If you want someone to say thank you for this or your welcome for doing this you have to have manners and say it back say your welcome because no one really likes if you dont have manners. If you want kindness then you have to say something or help someone out with things. You want manners back say something sweet to them then they will do the same. Seeing someone drop there thing on the floor helo them oick it back up they say thank you, say your welcome. Manners and kindness are some thing that is good because your showing some thing good about your self. If you go out and your going to pay for something always ask the person that checaking out your things ask them how there day is going. Make them feel good because if you want someone to do the same be nice and ask them to see how they are it doesnt matter if you know them but if they a worker and there helping you out say thank you and ask how they are doing and ask how there day was. Just make them happy. Always say thank you after getting some thing. Thats showing a lot of manners to someone. Even if you didnt say nothing nice and someone says have a good day say thank you, you too because your telling them to have a nice day to and that really nice. Never say some thing that will hurt them then they wont show manners back. If you go out to eat say thank you and you can even give them a tip showing kindness to them. If you see a woker not haveing a good one ask them to eat with you or get them something even some thing else thats nice giving them tips. Always say something nice because thats how you get it back. Manners and kindness are really good if you want someone to say it back to you. Be happy when they say some thing good about you and say some thing nice back. Be good the more you have manners the more you get them back.
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Author Ralph Waldo Emerson wrote " unless you try to do something beyond what you have already master, you will never grow." But i thing that when people work hard on something, even thou they all already don it, but they did poorly on it, So when they do it again thats haves them another opportunity to do it batter. For example when i was in eighth grade i had a lot of tribal how to spell in English, because i was from another country, could Generic_City. So all the time i could not spal a ward, so i will get sad, but in the minet or two i say to my self " dont worry" so to answer the cwesten that Author Ralph Waldo Emerson try to say, no i don`t believe that when people have already mastered in something they cant do it again. First, Work hard, people work very hard in something because they want to secid in the futurr. When some one bin doing something for so long even thou they did moltipal times. They can do it again, just to be batter ate it. They never hive up on something, because when some one haves up on something that they bin like in it, they will fail. Think positive about staff because when some people dont thing positive. Even no it`s hard for them to desalt what they what to do in the future but they did the same thing over and over, but when they work had and have that positive mind they will do it well . For example, my first year playing soccer on the high school teem, it was hard for me to understand what people was saying to be, but two three years later i had no tribal understanding what they war saying to me. So that shows that i speak English for three years and know i can understand what people saying to me because i bin spike net for three years. Second, Dont wary about staff, stay on track. People like to do something and finished, because when they finished it fills much better then before. When i take a test it makes me woride but when i finish it, it fills much better because my mined can relax form it. Even thou i still think what Caind of graid will get. Fist Complete the staff that is hard to do then do the easy staff later. When some people do their home work, they do the hard problems first and they do the easy staff, because it helps them to counchenteit on the hard staff first. When i have a problem that is very hard i will ask the teacher for help me with it, so that i can do the easy staff by my self. However, Some people ,like Author Ralph Waldo Emerson think different then the other people. for example when some one has a high school digry they just want to get out of school because if they did it again they will think that they will fail it. Most of the people like to finish something or accomplish something so they work very hard just to get that one thing like the pay check or college digry just to finish the last staff because they don`t want to do it. again because think that it will me waist of time. Some people look only for one thing but not the other. for instens that young man wants to play profashanal basketball, but he not thinks about school or nothing he just wants to play basketball and so when he tries out for a team and he never maid it so he just going to have up because he never grow to be a profeshanal basketball player. It dos it matter what some people do to, to be batter at something that they going to do it again but they will never grow. Therefore what Author Emerson try to say that people if the have already mastered ,you will never grow. So to say that people can do something that they want to do and they can do it as much time as they want to and they will sicsid in it. Even thou it hard, but some people can do it multiple times. So when they do it again thats haves them another opportunity to do it batter. So to answer the cwesten that Author Ralph Waldo Emerson try to say, no i don`t believe that when people have already mastered in something they cant do it again.
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I personally think that working alone is very beneficial. When I work alone I can work on my own time. I do not have to listen to anyone, I am my own boss in this situation. Also I have nothing to go over once I am done because I know I did it all myself and it was done right. Independently I can do more work. whenever I work in groups I get side tracked way more then I usually do. Working alone has become a very common thing for me. I have always preferred to work alone. Working alone lets me work on my own pace. I can work whenever I want too. I have tried to work in groups but they always want to do the last minute type of thing, but when I work alone I do that sometimes too. but i know I got to do it all. I also don't like to keep someone if they did their part. One time I was doing a group power point and two out of four of my partners did not do their part and I ended up failing because of them. When I work in groups I feel like I am doing all the work and my group members are just messing around and not helping me. I have had very bad experiences with groups I have failed many projects, class activates, and labs just because I would trust people on doing the work that they would get when we distributed it. Last week in oceanography my table was doing a lab and I had to do all the work because my whole table group wanted to talk to a whole different table group and not help me. My teacher would not let me work alone even after I told him about the situation. Later I told my guidance counselor and he did not do anything about it either. Every time I have worked in a group I have been side tracked. I can never do anything with someone because i always have the urge to just talk to them and not get any work done. I have noticed this bad habit of mine for a long time now I have tried to fix it but i just can not. Working alone is a very good thin for me i am very productive when I work alone. Working alone is very good for me. I like to do it because then I know that I did all that work for the grade I got not anyone else. I like working for stuff I do not like getting stuff ease. Whenever I work alone I mostly have good time management on all my work. I am mostly always slacking when I work with a group.
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"Unless you do something beyond what you have already mastered you will never grow up." I actually agree with this, because some people are just stuck with what they do , and they don't want to try new things; they are just so used to what they have been doing for years, so they are kind of afraid of doing something new. It's just like making new friends in school. Kids are really used to their friends that they rarely talk to new students. This might apply to Ralph's words because some people don't really want to change their routine, or because they dont really wanna change their life style at all. Another example but a little more personal would be me, I love riding my bike, I feel like I could ride it for hours without getting tired, I tried to do skateboarding for a couple months but I ended up going back to ride my bike, because I was already used to be riding my bike so I stopped trying to learn how to do skateboard. I would say that it's like a feeling of being afraid because we think about it, we think about it's pros and cons and we also try to adjust our schedules to see if we have time to do something that's not in our routine already or if we can just replace it for something that we already know how to do. I feel that to succeed in life we have too be willing to try and or to do things that are new for us like a new type of sports, a new hobby, even a career as long as we are interested on them. Where I'm from Eni Ayuwoki means "do and get stronger" back there people use to believe that if you do more than one thing that is helpful not only for you, but for everybody in your community you would be the most important and recognized person in the area. So in conclusion for me that makes sense because I dont really enjoy having the same routine every single day, I like to switch between activities to keep my mood up. I don't think anybody likes to do the same thing over and over again.
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Do you think students would benefit from being able to attend classes from home than at school? I believe taking classes online at home could be very benificial, because you wouldn't have to worry about getting distracted by other students like you would at school. You'd be able to advance at your own pace, meaning you won't have to rush at everything. Lastly, you wouldn't have to be so stressed from all the homework you get from each teacher in each class, but everything has its disadvantages as well. I'd like to start by saying that not being distracted from your class is great, most students get easily distracted by others. Anything that makes you lose your focus during class is considered a distraction, which includes even cellphones. If you don't pay attention to class your most likely going to end up getting lost and fail, but when your at home doing your work online by yourself you wouldn't have to worry about this. Another benefit from being able to attend class at home, would by that you can move at your own pace. This is a big benefit, for example at school I have to follow the teachers pace and sometimes when the teacher moves to fast on a subject I end up confused and lost making me fail the test or not doing good on the homework. At home you could take your time to process and understand the subject before moving on to a different one. Helping you do a lot better. My final reason would be less stress. I say this because I'm stressing right now to keep up my good grades. I get to much homework and most of the times I don't get time to do it because of work or family. I'm the oldest at home and I have to take care of my siblings, which means having to make food for them, clean up the house making sure everyones ok. Making me not do homwork after school. Most of the times I have to stay up late doing homework. I wouldnt have to worry about this if I did everything online making me less stressed. I have given you three reasons on how doing your classes online can be benificial, but there are also some disadvantages. One of them could be not interacting with other students. I know that earlier I had said others can become a distraction but thats during class after class it's nice talking to others, everything has its time and place. Another disadvantage could be that you may need help with something and you won't be able to have someone to help. At school we have our teachers and when your stuck with something they can help you by explaining it in other words to make it sound more simple. So, there our benefits on having class online but also disavantages. I end this essay by saying that I still believe taking online classes at home can benefit you a lot, But everyone has there own way of learning. If your more of a independant person than I would recommend taking online classes but if your more of a social person than stay in school. All that matters is that you pass your class.
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we acocomplish more if we are always doing something because of:we get more experience and skill by working, As we know more we work more perfect we get no matter it is a job or something else, In a job enterview they ask for more experience and skill in that field so we need get those skill by working and accomplishing more. Doing something make us to be prepare for our future live, We might have a family in the future that we need to take care of them, We need money for a good house,a good car,and a good live, If a chef want to make a good food he need to work more to make it delicious if he do not the food will not be good. The more we work the more beneficial it is, We make more money as we work, Live gets more esaier in the future, We will known as a hardworking guy not a useless one and it will show how we are facing toword our problems every problem slove by focusing on it not skip it. It is not always about to work if we are stadying or going to get knonledge we are accomplishing, There is nothing better than more knowledge it is a big ocean that we can sail as much as we want, Live cannot be easy without knowledge so we have to be knowledgeable to get to that dream live, Now we have to work hard. sometimes we need take a break for family,our self,and hobbies to get out of stresses, Taking a break makes us be full of energy for more work and dudies, We connot work constantly over and over so we might take a break.
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some people believe that students will be required to take a music,drama,or an art class. The students required of many classes to accomplish their knowledge, but some people think that students need to take a music, drama,or an art class because: I think that students will need those classes to graduate. To get school diploma students will have to accomplish some classes like music,drama,or an art class. they should use those classes for distraction their mind to the other classes for examples math, history and science class then, they will get relaxation. Also, I think that some people wants the students take those classes because those classes represent happiness, peace and an individual talent that every person have. but some people get frustrated that they don not have any talent like sing, act or draw. Some people want that the students take those classes because they need to develop their mind in something productive for the society and for them. No think in bad things or bad actions. Also,I think that some people think that students should be take a music,drama,or art class because students have the potential to protrude in the great music,drama and art world. To prove to the society the capacity that they may have and that they are the future. They will replace the people that do music drama and art in our present for example artists,painters and others. I think that some people believe that students should be take music,drama and art classes because is the only way to develop their mind,knowledge and to learn new things that help them for the future. Those classes help the students to get a mental and physical develop because the music make us to express feelings,emotions,or give to the audience a message that we want that they know and understand. The drama help us to develop our mind,but also,help us to use our body to express something that we want that people will know. The art class help us to represent,express and get abilities that students will do not know that they have. With those classes students will be exactly what they are and feel because they will express anything that they may want without get frustrated. In conclusion some people believes that students should be take music,drama,an art class because they need new persons that express and give to them that knowledge that represent those classes because those students that will learn are the future and are the new generation. Also, because students need express feelings,emotions and develop their knowledge. Because they think that the students are interesting in others things that is not productive and they need to learn those important topic to not be loss and continue with the music, drama and art in our world.
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It has been said that first impressions are almost impossible to change. I agree that the first impressions are the ones that are impossible to change, because impressions from other person can make you feel proud for that person, and impressions from other people about you can just make you feel good and happy for what you are doing, for your hard work. Reason of why the first impressions are impossible to change, is when you find those negative and envy people, that does not want you to be successful in life, and when the time came at your favor and you start to begin success in life, there is when you start to see those good impressions from those negative and envy people, and that just can make you feel happy and proud for the hard work that you did, that is why is almost impossible to change those impressions, because not matter what you showed them you always looked forward, but still don't hate them, love them as God loves everyone in this world. No matter what give good impressions and show them, let them know that they are working hard, people who works hard deserve good impressions, make them feel proud for what they are doing, and also no matter what give good impressions, show people how hard worker, how positive, how respectful person you are, show them that you always look forward not matter what, so when other people talk bad stuffs about you, your ones does not going to believe or change those good impressions from you, because you already showed them that good impressions you keep with you...
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I think It will be enjoyable to couplet a science experiment because is an educational activity. You can have fun,you can work and meet with different persons,and you can learn more about the subject. First of all I think It will be fun couplet a science experiment because I like sciences and I can learn more about experiment. Also I love going to my sciences class when we do experiments because It fun. I always laugh when I do experiment and they don't work. Another thing that I think sciences is fun is because you never know if the experiment will be work. One day me and my little cause we did smile in the kitchen and my mom gets mad and she make me clean the whole kitchen but, then we did smile in school and I already knew how to do it. Secondly when you are doing a science experiment You always have to work in groups sometimes with your friend's sometimes not. For me its cool to work with different persons because when you do not know something and you ask them and they know they will help you and thats why for me is enjoyable to do sciences experiments because I'm a friendly person. One day in my sciences class we were doing an experiment then a new student came and the teacher ask me if I could help him and I said ''yes'' because he just knew Spanish and I help him and we became friend. Then doing a sciences experiment it not just to have fun is to learn more about the subject that you are learning because is no the same doing the experiment then just listing to the teacher explaining. A lot of time this has happen to me that Im listing to the teacher but I don't understand nothing but when we do the experiment I do understand. In conclusion for me completing a sciences experiment is one of the my favorite things because we don't just learn we have fun and thats why I like it. Also to complete a sciences experiment you do different things you don't just stay sit you move around. At the being of the year I did't speak to much English and it was hard to understand the teacher but when we start doing experiment it was more easy and now I understand more and that make me feel happy and that one of the reason I enjoy doing experiments.
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I am agree with this prompt, i think that everyone have to believe in their self-reliance, Because we have to follow our own ideas to be a unique person and believe in our decision in the life. the only way that you can be a successful on your job or on your life is believing in your own ideas and value your self-reliance, and never think that you cannot do nothing because you can. the only thing that you have to do is believe in your own instincts and ideas and don't let other to tell you something different. i will like to reckon in my self-reliance to be a better person in this world and don't depend of other person to get my dreams. (people who believe and value self-reliance define it as the need for each individual to follow his or her own instincts and ideas). 1-the school is one good example for this is because the school give you exams and work for do on your own self, - the school give you a lot of challenge one of them are the tests, for get good grates on those test you have to self-reliance to study and pass those test. 2-the work (jobs) is other best examples,they give you the opportunity to show them that you are a excellent employee and that you can create your own ideas. -the work is other place to explain the self-reliance, your boss is asking you if you can do a work for him and that work is important for him because he ask to other workers but they copy the work from other company so he belief that you can do the things better that other and you have to self-reliance for that work and create your own ideas for it. 3- on my own life, the idea to choose what we have to do on the future is because our parent want that us get the best opportunities but sometimes we don't want to do the things that our parent tell us because we want to do the best thing for be the best but not like they want we want to do the thing on my own way. conclusion i believe that, we always have to self reliance because, that help you doing things that you never imagine that you could do that, and never keep focus in just one thing, put your mind open for make better decisions and follow your instincts for do the best that you can, my conclusion is that you always have to believe in your self-reliance and always follow your dreams for more hard that those things can be but that is the opportunity for your self-reliance and show that you can do the things that you want if you bring your ideas and follow your dreams.
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In my point of view, I feel what is more beneficical is working alone. You might think working in a group is more beneficial, but let me tell you why is it not a good idea. It lets you concerate more on your work and won't let you get distracted and get off topic with the rest of the group. On top of that it gives you the chance to slightly get your work done in a matter of time. On the other hand, in case you don't understand a topic,it benefits you learning alone so next time you understand it in the future time. In this way of working alone, has many benefits and could help you in many ways in the long run. Have you ever been part of a group at somepoint in your life, and your group gets off topic and ends up not finishing the work that was assigned? It really isn't such a productive group like that I could say. Say perhaps you were trying to get your work done, but you entire group wants to do unproductive things and gtet off topic. Have you ever thought who gets the blame after? Your group gets the blame and you as well. Even if you were being on topic and getting your assignment done, but your also part of the group, what could you do. Let me give you an example. There was once where my math teacher said we could work in a group. Me and my group were getting our work done, until one of my group members gets off topic. There goes my whole group off topic. What was the result after, my group didn't finish the assignment. Next thing you know who got the blame that day. My whole group and including me as well. I explained to my math teacher in a nice, clamy matter to her, that I was trying to get my work done, she didn't lose an energy listening to me. What if you teacher for example set a timing to finish the project, and you couldn't finish in time because of the silliness in your group? I'm positive you would want to finish in time and get a good grade. I'm more than certain that you don't want to finish late with your group and get a zero as your grade from your teacher. I've have so many examples, but let me tell you one that stood up to me and left my eyes bright open. My biology teacher had told the whole entire class there was a project due at the end of the class. So she told us to get in groups, of four people in the group. Long short story, my group got way off topic and didn't finish in time. At the end,we all got zero's and for a week I had a zero bringing my grade down. I brought my grade up, until it was test day. I've been through so many experiences, I enjoy working alone. On the other hand, I also experienced understanding a topic on my own, which feels great let me tell you. Have you ever experienced in life going or thinking of a topic and not understanding? That has happened to me once. Where your at a point,where you don't understand a topic, but learning on your own kicks in. Everytime you go back and reazlied what you did wrong, it all kicks in, in the future. Which in my point of view is a good benefit. Learning on your own is denfitnely not a bad thing. There was once where I was having quite the trouble at a topic, in my class of english, but the outcome wasn't so bad. As I could say. In that certain assignment I got a high B. I learned after where I needed more information on that topic in my english class. On the next assignement I had I got a high A. Working alone has many benefits and could benefit you in the long run. Many poeople think its beneficial working in a group, but I say no. Want to do better, get a good result after, get a nice dencent grade after. Working alone is the solution. Don't let anyone trick you into saying it's bad, because it is most ctertainly not a bad choice/idea. If you come across a point to work in a group, thats great, i'm not saying never work in a group. Although at some points when the stitution is series to get an assignment done, thats were working alone comnes in handy.
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The qualties that make person individual or unique is, to not make any difference between society. Be sure that you're working in the right path all by your self, and be greatfull, powerfull, be honest, not making any bad disesion not making any problem for society, and last but not least, have a strong felling of wanting to have something or wishing for something to happen. If you have strong belife in god or in the doctrines of a rilegon, you'll be successfull in your life because it's him that give you all those idea and knowledge, that you can write an essay something like this. So you just have to be faithfull, and trust him, that's the only way that he can help you and then be an accomplishment. Something that has been successfully, it's beacuse of you pushed your self you put all effrot and work on you, and that's all beacuse of one goal and that is a great accomplishment. We have to follow those poeple who were successed in their life of time, we have to see what they did to their society, what honor they had/have for us to read and follow the path they followed. I think that's another way to be successed. I'm compeletly agree with this statement that says ''To be yourself in a world that is constantly trying to make you something else is the greatest accomplishment.'' Because if you have those kind of seccessfull people in your society then you will have better society, better world and better education for the future.
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School Extracurricular Activity I agree, all students should do Extracurricular Activity in school and outside of school. I feel like it will help them out with a lot of stuff like stress and can help them find out who they really are. It can give them time to be with friends and can also give them the chance to met new people. And it can bring the teachers and students closer to each other. This would give them the chance to get to know each other and try new things out. Extracurricular Activity's would be so helpful to the school's community. This program can also help kids not be on their phones as much. it would help kids come all together and work as a team. I feel like now in days kids dont really care about there Schools Extracurricular Activity's. I feel like a lot of kids\teens depend on this phones for answers, ideas, and etc. these ideas will show them that there are better stuff then just being on your Phone, iPad, and Computer. These school activity's will probably also bring students and teachers closer. Student's most of the time dont like school so these Activity's can show them that school can be fun. These activity's will give kids a chance to see the bright side of school and also the true meaning. It will also teach kids that trying new things out with new people can be fun. These programs can really make a kids or teens life a huge impact. Extracurricular Activity's can show kids how to be more outgoing and bring the shy kids out of the shy zone. These Activity's can teach kids so many life lessons. It help kids and teens who think they are lazy turn into great students. These Activity's can inspire students to do better in school and lift there grades up. It can help kids/teens find out what they truly love and what they truly dislike. I hope my words help out community's who are thinking about putting Extracurricular Activity's in there School system. I truly agree with these activity's and think it will help a lot with kids/teens. I hope one day all schools have fun activities for there students. I think can help many students come out into the real life and show them the true meaning of life. I love this idea so much and wish the best of luck for community with these activities. The End - Generic_Name
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Generic_Name English,11 Pd.7 Scare to the new You will never grow is do not try new things. I am agree with Emerson's statement because can get more knowledge, try new things and new experiences and old. I am disagree because unknow things are very risk; However, I am agree with Emerson's statement. Get more knowledge is good. To act more confidence and careful in our life to not make worst , when we remake that thing again. Also to be prepared to do something in our life. And make the things carefully. Get more knowledge is good. Try new thins is amazing. Because you take adventures on your self. And you live the risk on your own . While you earn more worth to try new things again. Try new things also good . The new experiences and old experiences are good. Because people can give examples of the old things that they had to live. take new experiences make you more strong. Also new experience make change on you . Get more knowledge is good because can act more confidence and careful in our life to not make worst when we remake the same thing again. Try new things is amazing because you earn more worth to try new things again. The new and old experiences are also good because people can give examples of their life and the old things that they live. I am agree with Emerson's statement because can get ore knowledge, try new things and new experiences and old experiences . Try new things that are unknow to as, is the best decision to as that's how you can be a better winner, experiences on life are the best things happen to be a real warrior.
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The student can shidentify a career when they enter a high school , Should or should not the student commit a career at a young age ? Reason 1: I think student should to select a career when they enter a high school with a young age. EX : Some sudent want to learn more about what different career they can choice. Reason 2 : The student can identifty a career in a young age to be prepared and know more about the career that they select . EX: If the student select a career the they have to know if they like or not because the career that select is something that they have to put a lot atencion and preparation . Reason 3 : Take a career in a young age can be good for the student because can learn more about the career and finish it when they don't have a lot responsabilities . The student that wanted to take a career with 16 or 17 old age , in the future can be beneficial for him and her family because they don't spend her young time with other thing like vice of the negative people in the society. EX: The student that take and finish her career can have a lot oportunities en her life. Conclusion : The student should to expect for a career by the time they enter in high school and can be a goal that the student can have for the future .also , the student have to do good use of her mind and know that not all is easy is this life and know that not all the people have the same oportunities for finish a career or select in the school that they go.
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I really like this quote because, i believe this is a problem that basically happens in many homes and also many society of people. Being motivated to become what they dont want to be and what you dont have the passion for. Therefore i disagree with Emersons statement; Why? Becacause i believe everyone has a choice to choose what they are passionate about, not what the society or the influenece of their parent saying I see a doctor or an engineer in you. Having the love for a profession or a study is one of the greatest thing ,you feel like you are living everytime you figure something out,you feel happy and motivated to take it futher to you reach the top. When someone is passionate about a profession,studing of a language,writting,discovering,healing,helping people,anything in this world i believe they should be motivated. Not brought down by making them do something else because its not healthy physically or mentally i believe. An example is ME.I have studied business almost my whole like since i was in my country,beause i wanted to be work in any field of business. Last year i moved to the united state and my parent and everyone around me said i should be a nurse,but i dont have the passion for nursing,but with no support on my side i decided to be nurse,and mentally i feel like ita going to be difficult, and i always bring my slef down when i thing about it, but if it was something i had the passion for i wouldnt mind the hardness i will just concentrate on how i will make it and and believe in myself that i will surly get and will also be very determined. Thata what i mean by being motivated and supported to do what you want and do what you love is really great. So i disagree with this quote,some people will agree because they believe your society or your surrounding makes you who you are. But i believe the society and everyone around do not make you,or can not stop you or influene you to do the opposite of what you want to do unless you give them the chance like me or you take your stand and let them know why you want and love this thing and it will be a great honor if you accomplished it .
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A famous quote once said by Thomas Jefferson ,"Determine never to be idle . . . it is wonderful how much may be done if we are always doing". Off this quote i feel that sometimes in life you can accomplish things with no effort but mostly, in life you gotta work hard to earn and get the things you deserve and have well accomplished in life. Another thing is that you gotta have a really good effort in life to get really far. I agree with Thomas Jefferson's quote on," how much maybe be done if we are always doing" because that's how it has to be done in life , you gotta work for what you want and need, everything is earned in life and it's way easier to get things that need to be done quicker by putting your effort and always working, than to just be standing or laying around doing nothing. One main reason i agree with Thomas Jefferson's quote is that you gotta work for what you get in life,you gotta always be doing something to get stuff done. It's an amazing quote that is used in a way that many don't think or have had the thought of. His quote is supporting the fact that it takes hard work and focusing to get work done and that work wont get done on its own. Another reason , is that no matter what you do , you always gotta work in life. To not take things for granted and actualy work and to not be lazy and get no work done that has to be done, done . It'll help out in the long run and make things easier in life by doing what you have to. Thomas Jefferson's qoute is there to incourage others to do great in life and do everything possible to get your goals achivied. This quote is a great figure of speech that can help out in the long run for people in need of it. One last reason i believe thomas jeffersons quote is a great and an amazing quote is that it justifys that life isn't easy and everything isn't free, also that things come with consequences. To also, not take things for granted and be grateful for what you got because that's the amount of effort you put in , instead of just laying down and or doing nothing at all. The quote has a alot of great reasons and thoughts that are put into peoples minds off this one quote it could help motivate someone in need of motivation. In conclussion, Thomas Jefferson's quote can help people that are in need of something to motivate them. To help them by telling them that it's fasinating to see what you get out of completing your work by always doing something. Lastly, how easily it is to complete something by moving around and not just sitting and down absolute nothing about your work. Isupport this quote beacuse it well help people understand how life goes and how you're supposed to live in order to be great and wise.
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Do you would be able to be yourself constantly in anything and accomplish the greatest of the world? I am sure if you trying to be yourself always you can accomplish the greatest, however you life is more easy to be yourself. If you believe in yourself constantly nothing in this world is impossible for you, "THE HEAVEN IS THE LIMIT", because you can do it anything you want. (Why?) Because you have the power of yourself and the most important you have faith, "THE FAITH MOVE MOINTAINS". When you believe in yourself you don't have obstacle. MARTIN LUTHER KING: I have a dream I want everybody look the same color. He believe in himself and he have a lot faith he gonna to do it, and he always was positive in his dream. He was in his belief, and he thought he can made his dream real. After a few years late he was tray to made he dream real he accomplishment. He accomplishment his dream in Washington D.C. IF you have a dream in this life and you want tray constantly to make real I know you can do it, the all you need to do it is be yourself. CRISTIANO RONALDO: He is a Portuguese guy when he was child he missed his father and that time the life was difficult for him and for his mom. But in the plans of CRISTIANO not was for given up he have a passion and he believe himself. After he get 13 years old he started to work at the mornings and afternoon he played soccer. He are the best soccer player and his village. After 15 years old he started to play soccer for the country team after he be come a renowned player of soccer in the world. when you believe in yourself you can accomplish you goals doesn't matter what obstacle you have At the front. Although you think you can't do it, yes you can do it if you believe in yourself and consistent trying to make the thing everything can be possible. When you have faith and believe in yourself you accomplish anything. After you start to do it something or something have in you life don't give up keep believe in yourself. Everything you aspiration you want be you will be everything you imaginary you will creative just keep believe in yourself. If you have a dream oh passion oh something else in you mind and you wanna do it start to be yourself.
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It has been said the first impressions are almost impossible to change? It is possible for a human to forget his/her first impression because all human forget. we easily forget small simple things for example people can just do stuff and later on in the day and forget about it easy. Many people can't remember there first childhood friend so am against that first impressions are impossible to change it is possible to change. Am against it myself I forget everybody forgets things but not all of us do but a lot does. Sometimes we purchase things and forget that we did tell we see the package in our doors or mail box then we gonna realize that we purchase something and forget about it. Is the same way how you can forget about your first impression. I myself can't tell who was my childhood best friend or my first dogs name. a lot of us don't know when we got married with our wife or husbands a lot of us don't even know some of our grandparents names is lot if things that we easily forget in life so easily. Am against it because i so it my self people forget easily a lot and there will be no human who will stand and say i don't forget or i know everything in life all what i have learn since my childhood life i can still say it and tell you all about it that is not possible. A lot can say stuff like that will not be able to do or say about it. There is no way that you can remember your first impressions there is no way. a lot maid think they still remember it but they don't your mind gives you that like i can remember my first impressions then you think about it you can't ravel it. So no to that
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Student's who do not need othes to praise their work to have self-steem are the strongest one,Because giving a individual fake praising can make them feel great and not try to become better, and that can make then weak."Individuals believe in praising a student's work to build self-steem, Even is the work is not the student best effort." Not every individual need's others to make them feel comfortable. Some person's like to be realistic and not hear lies. Praise others people's job's even if is not excellent can bring them fake happiness and hurt them. Some people think that the most important thing in this world is to give people self-steem, by praising their work even if is not good at all. Others believe that it can helps people to be sure about them selves even is the rest of the pople think's the oppositive. Still others ague that given every individual praise about what they do is the greatest accomplish people can make. People should not need other's to praise their work to have self-steem, Sometimes individuals do not gonna have others to tell them how great their work is, But the person have to know if the stuff is valid or not. People do not have to depend on other's people's opinions. They need to learn skills by their own selves and know when they can fix oh make better something. At the end of the day nobody is going to try to make others feel good so people have to be successful with their own self. Althought, People need to be realistic with their own selves, If the person is smarth and they know what they are doing and they do not need anybody to correct them that's all good. If people know they are doing wrong and somebody comes to tell them that they are doing great just to make them feel great!! Do not accept that, beause people need to be honest with their selves, All people need somebody to tell them how to became better. Sometimes being honest with someone can hurt them but is the best way to help those individuals. People have to become better to feel better with what they are, And not let anyone praise somethings that can be better. Finally, Praising other's people's work even if is not great can bring them fake happiness, and make them feel proud of their selves when the work that they did is not good enough. Being fake with someone can make them to become weak, and make them to not putt effort to make it better. That's why everybody in this world should be honest with others, Some poeple at the end of the day ended with their self-steem down, becuase somebody lied to them , And when they present their's works's peoples's opinion's can hurt them really bad. Student's should not need anybody to tell them how great they are doing their work to have a really good self-steem, Every individual should know when they are doing good or when they are having some problems, Every person in this world know when they can put more effort to things that they are doing wrong. People should not let anyone lied to their selves, Not everyone need's others to make them feel comfortable. Some person's like to be realistic and accept when something is wrong so they can fix it. Praise others people job's even if is not excellent can bring them fake happiness, and thats whe worse feeling ever. That's why all people need to know how do great things and impact others by their talent, without letting anyone hurt those endividuals at the end. -Thank you :) Att: Generic_Name, ESL student.
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I`m agree whit the individuality. I like when the people take whatever they wants for yours life is so cool. I have too much friend and they do the think another peoples do. I mean i like do what i`m said and what i like i don`t now. My family is so negative when they said sometime and i don`t like because i want said sometime but they no want lisent. so i`m individuality because i want lisent to me and do the think i want. I know to much people dependt of other and that`s no good. The history class said too much about that because in the past the people are not indiviuality. I think the people want more attention that why depent of other people. The life now is to diferent of after because now the people yos depent the what said other person about who i`m look or what he said about me an all theese think. I like who i am cause i`m a nice and all good thinks so i do whathever i wnat because i ike who is the people and i dont care what they said about me. Yo ya nose que escribir solo sigo por que pues no se me gusta y si supiera un poco mas de ingles no pararia de escribir. so les voy a contar sobre mi vida ya que no tengo ni la menor idea de lo que tengo que escribir ni nada. comienzo llegue de Puerto Rico hace 2 anos y desde que llegue aqui mi vida cambio del todo. comenze a valorar cada cosa que obtengo por que ahora se el valor y el sarificio de la vida para cualquier cosa. solo se que apesar de todo sigo queriendo superarme y mejorar muchas cosas de mi. no se me hace tan facil pues el idioma y las costumbres no son para nada igules. Pero aqui sigo y seguire por que creo en mi y se que cada dia que me propongo algo lo cumplo. No es nada facil cuando llegas y conoces personas de otros lugares algunas muy buenas y otras no tanto. Me agrada demasiado aprender cosas nuevas y nuevos lugares solo hay una cosa que me enoja y es que apesar de no ser una persona indocumentada y pues nosotros los puertorriquenos somo parte de estados unidos y solo por el hecho de que nuestro primer idioma sea en espanol muchas personas nos tratan como indocumentados. llevo 2 anos los cuales no an sido nada facil ya que la escuela a sido uno de mis mayores obstaculos pues es bastante complicado entrar a un salon y sentir que estas completamente solo. pues por el hecho de no poder preguntar o comunicarte con alguien no nada solo te quedas hay viendo como todos pueden y tu no. Unos meses despues de que llegue de Puerto Rico comenze a salirme de la escuela y hacer las cosas mal ya que no tenia apollo de nadie alli ni en mi casa. Hoy en dia siento que no debo estar aqui por que solo siento que no es mi lugar la unica razon por la que aqui estoy es por mi mama por que quiero que se supere y poder darle todo lo que merece. ya que cuando la necesitamos hay estuvo apesar de como era la vida en puerto rico siempre trato de darnos lo mejor.
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There are so many enjoyable ways to spend time outdoors. That is bike riding,skateboarding,rollerskating, surfing,scuba-diving,camping,hiking,rock climbing, and snow boarding. However,the most people enjoy doing are skateboarding and bike riding. Mostly,during the summer,friends gather around the neighborhood and teach themselves how to skateboard and bike ride. However,most parents disagree with having their children ride bikes and skateboard. Most parents think that their children are going to get abducted,raped,kidnapped or get hurt. Some parents also think is a good idea for their to children to skateboard and ride bikes outdoors,so they can cope with talking to people. Well I think is a bad idea for children to ride and skateboard in the Summer alone without parental guidance, because it takes a lot of training and focus to bike ride or skateboard. Some people can even scuba-dive if they have the experience. Most people like to spend time outdoors,for example,they can invite some friends over for some barbecue. People like to spend time outdoors doing fun stuff like Snowboarding. Snowboarding is a cool way of spending time outdoors,because a lot of children like to play in the snow,so snowboarding is a fun way of playing in the snow. There are so many outdoor events like,Easter and partying. A lot of children like to hunt for Easter eggs during Easter,because they find eggs,candy and so on. Sometimes,most people like to go to outdoor-clubbing to chill,relax, and relieve stress. Some other people don't like to spend time outdoors during the night because they either don't have time or they have important things to do. Mostly,during the Summer,most parents take their children outdoors to teach their kids how to ride their bikes. Eventually,people might find the activities mentioned above enjoyable,because they get to tell their friends their parents thought them how to ride a bike and skateboard,they could assist their friends. People like to spend time outdoors with friends than stay home alone and do nothing. They could try and teach themselves how to ride their bikes. If parents stay outdoor with their children on a campsite,they could make smores with a campfire and enjoy. In conclusion,people should stay out more often so they can learn how to snowboard,skateboard,bike ride,rock-climb,roller-skating,surfing,camping,hiking,scuba-diving and jet-skiing.
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dear principal i have taking my position and say that all student should help make this world a cleaner planet so that we can live on it . so i thing that all student should do community server. sorry i have not introduce my self. my name is PROPER_NAME i go to the school. an a second graded. and i thing that all students should make this place a better place to live in . i also thing that does student that don't want to cleaned up should be punish. punish with lunch detention. i thing making all the student do community serves will help theme stay out of trouble. helping cleaned the community will let student out of trouble, to not use drugs or alcohol. they will know how important is to keep our environment cleaned. so that the pollution stops. and also to not make this place bad for aour babes. that one day we may have. so please principle don't let the planet come to and end. let help our planet be a safe place to live on not a bad and ugly planet. and all of those kid that are cleaning the environment should have a party a green day party that shows how they care of our planet. and wanted to be a safe place to livening. from STUDENT_NAME
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allow students to bring phones to school and wen the students jots phones are lunch periods and other free times as long as the phones are turned off during class time picas if the tilous abaute thephones dei gana tec avei and the phones tey iosem olote in school and tes mait get in a crach and dai be ded and if di don't tecst in the care tea uerent get in a crech nou day are happy but and picas in the story ter sade. and tei are neve tescin in the care. do not allow students to have phones at school at all.
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Dear principal, Well its important to help the community service because if we don't our city might be dirty and not clean and sometimes our city is very dirty cause some people just throw trush in the floor and that's why we always have to keep our city clean so we don't have to have our city dirty. Sometimes my friends don't like helping the community service because she doesn't care but i tell her its important to help the community because if we don't we just might not have water, food, etc. When my OTHER_NAME was here in LOCATION_NAME she sometimes take me to the park and pick up trash from the floor and throw it on the trash can or sometimes she takes me to go and check in the trash can to see if there is cans so we could recycle it. After when me and my OTHER_NAME was at the park picking up the trash we saw these two guys that were throwing food on the floor and I told my OTHER_NAME look those guys are throwing food on the floor so when they left I went and picked up what they threw on the floor cause its important to help the community service. Also sometimes I go to LOCATION_NAME and there is a lot of trash on the floor and when I always go over there with my cousin I always take a bag so i could pick up the trash and food that they have on the floor. Finally I really like helping the community service because i just really like picking up the cans that are in the floor and go recycle it. Finally the last thing im goin to tell you is that you should tell all the kids from the school that its important to help the community service I love it.. Sincerely, STUDENT_NAME
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I think that it would be good if we have a after school club because, some students might need to finish up some work there missing. Now let me tell you why it would be more good, first you get to do it in groups and make new friends in the homework club, it makes you more focus in the work that you need to and you can even do it with a group, solo, pairs. and after school homework club is perfect for all those things and it raises your grade up. all you have to do is... (1)Ask for your parents permission to join the homework club. (2) try and finish up the work you haven't done yet. And now your done. It even helps the school by you making the school a school where student can grow and learn. if you ask any teachers from our school they would all say that homework clubs are good to help your brain learn more and release that stress that you might have from not doing your work in time and homework club helps you in that. as a student my self i to have homework and test, and other stuff and sometimes i don't have time to do my homework at home so sometimes i choose my days that i want to stay in homework club for example lets say you want to join a club but you know you have a lot of important work missing then dont choose other electives just choose homework club and then you can choose the elective you want, and with that we should all have home work clubs in each school.
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In a world of 7 billion is hard being yourself, because everyone else is trying to make you something you are not. It might be hard to be yourself, express yourself and have your own opinion , because there's so many people that try to make to you different or make you think in a different way, even the government want's to choose for you. You can be yourself, being yourself means to express your feelings to the world but in your own unique way, for example LGBT people they are the people that get the most stuff at them because of who they love, and the stuff they believe in. People constantly keep trying to make them different, even the government is trying to tell them who they can love and who they can not love, who they can marry, and who they cant. Expressing yourself in a world of 7 billion people is not easy, because everyone has different opinions and beliefs, you might have different ways to express yourself than your family and that is hard, because when you are young you believe in the same stuff your parents/family does, but the older you get you start to understand more stuff and why your parents believe in what they believe in. Your own opinion matters do not let other people make you think your opinion does not matter or that it ain't important, you have the freedom of speech in the U.S., meaning you have the freedom to say anything you want to who you want in a whatever way you need to say or express it. To be yourself in this world it's hard but do not let anybody ruin that for you, if your friend's do not agree on who you love, then change friends, if they do not like in what you believes are, explain to them your beliefs and try to make them understand why you believe in that certain stuff.
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I agree because nothing in this world is easy once you know you have it and the realizing that it will never grow. For example doing something that i might regret doing or not thinking positively before doing something also scared of not being to reach my goal in life. Second reason of why i do agree is because when you have that feeling that you feel good and confident about yourself you just know your doing great but then something inside you just wants to give up and throw everything away. Third reason i feel like if i stay int the same bubble i will never grow out of it by being scared and not having positive feeling's toward's me. I just think it isn't easy as it looks to loose something and seeing the you won't grow from it. Lot's of people make mistake's that they regret and they wanna change that but they can't it's to late but it's never to late to try all over again until you grow out of that spot. people just think giving up on things you like doing is easy to forget but it 's not because that's something you love doing and you've mastered doing in all your life you've kept that postive view in your mind people just give up when they realize that they can't continue that's how you will never grow by giving up it's hard to when you come to a point that you commited a bad thing and you regret doing you cant take it back but life is also giving us the chance to improve and forget about everything and continue to grow bigger from that small place you feel inside you never give up on anything just continue on what you feel confident on doingand be happy. It's like falling in love with someone you follow your dream right you just don't throw it out grow out of it and u will see.
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Dear: Principal I think that all students should perform community service. Because if there cleaning they will not litter in the first plays. And also that will help the community, and tutor is not so bad because they get to lernd how other students lernd. And the students how don't want to do it because its wasting there time. I think they will how have fun if they help the elementary school sports times.
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60 percent of students have a problem with other subjects in middle schools. Although, some people believe after school homework clubs are irrelevant, I really dont believe its bad. I truly believe after school homework clubs are beneficial because students can study, get homework done faster, and socialize. First off, I believe after school homework clubs are positive because students can study. Students can study what they need to if they have a little extra time at school. Many students dont have enough time to study at home and a after school club could give them more time to study what they need to. Some students need extra help understanding what is on the paper and studying could help them a lot. Next, after school homework clubs are important because students can finish homework faster. Some students cant get homework done at home so an after school club could help them. Students can get extra help with what they dont understand at an after school club. Many students cant students can get their homework done faster by the help of other students. Additionally, after school homework clubs are useful because students can socialize. Students can learn how to talk better to other students. Students can talk to friends when their done with their work. Many students cant talk to their friends on the other teams so after school club could fix that. In conclusion, I truly believe after school homework clubs are beneficial because students can study, get homework done faster, and socialize. I believe after school homework clubs are an asset to students because it helps students a lot. I believe more people should agree with me.
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Whether the limitation of human contact due to technology has had a positive or negative effect on people's lives, is a constant topic of discussion. Technology is an amazing tool, with countless positive effects. It has made society what it is today. Without it people would not know life the way that it is now. Technology makes many activities in life possible, which before would have been impossible. The first man to walk the moon did it by the means of technology. The vehicles which allow people to commute to work, or travel the world, were also created through technology. Buildings are powered with technology and our houses are to. Our whole world is surrounded by technology, and without it people would not live life the way that they do now. If a day came when people would have to give up all their technological advantages, life would be a catastrophe. People would not be able to get to work, there would be no way to talk to friends or family that are far away, the whole teaching system would have to be rebuilt, and many other countless horrible things would occur if technology where to be taken away from the people. We are highly dependent on technology, and that is not a negative thing. People have learned to live with it, and it makes life much easier than before the technology era started. Easy and fast communication is one of the most important contributions that technology has provided to the new world. People's phones, computers, and even TV's now can connect everyone to loved ones. Human contact, is now even easier than it was before technology came into play. Now people can call a friend, and talk with them for hours, no matter the distance. People can text with family and friends, and it is even possible to constantly check on them with video calls. Before technology, people would have to travel many miles to come into contact with friends and family, but now thanks to technology everything has changed. Now, looking at family and friends through a little screen is a possibility, and not just something that happens in a futuristic TV show. People can tell close ones how their day is going, what has been going on in life, and every other small detail that could possibly pop into ones head. Losing human contact because of technology is not something to be worried about. Technology does not get rid of human contact. What it actually does is create the contact. It makes it possible to build bonds with people no matter the distance, and it also allows people to connect with loved ones when ever wanted. Technology is also a very important part of current entertainment. Netflix, Apple Music, YouTube and many other apps keep people entertained for hours non-stop. Watching movies and listening to music, was something that used to be only done at concerts and at movie theaters. Thanks to the positive effects of technology, now a day enjoying good music, and movies is something that can be done at home. The best thing of these apps is the low prices, and thousands of content, which is updated over and over again constantly. Having easy access to good music and good movies while laying in the comfort of home is an activity which most people in the world would enjoy. These apps also make it possible for people with no connections to the world of entertainment to pursue a career that will be enjoyable. YouTube is one of the leading online video streamers in the world. People who want to pursue a career in entertainment have the opportunity to post their videos online and gain fans. This is something which would have been impossible before the technology era. People love completing tasks while comfortably laying in bed inside home. Technology is so amazing, that it has made this possible to. People need to shop, but sometimes the stores which have the items that are needed are not close to their homes. Technology knows this, and it has made it possible to go to thousands of sites online and purchase anything. It is possible to buy shoes, clothing, electronics, and even food. When people shop in a normal retail store, it is possible to find sales and the items needed, but shopping online is a totally different experience. By shopping online it is much more likely to find the best possible price for an item, due to all the options that are available. There are also many items which are available for purchase online, but not available at stores. Shopping online is also surprisingly a very entertaining experience. Browsing thousands of items, and ultimately finding the best price is an activity which can keep people entertained for plenty of time. Shopping online is much easier, and comfortable than actually going to the stores to find the items that are needed. Technology is a constant growing phenomenon, which needs to be constantly worked on. It is the fuel that powers the world. If it were to run out, everything would stop moving. With the technological discoveries that are being made every day, people are living longer lives, the depths of the world are being discovered, and new ways to sustain earth are being presented. If the way technology is growing continues at the pace it is currently going at, the world might find ways to cope with global warming, and maybe even find the cure to deadly diseases like cancer. This is how important technology is to the world. It goes to the point that if it is studied correctly it can save peoples lives, and even the world. Technology has already changed the world forever, and it will be no time at all for another invention to change the world once again. These changes will be for the good, and technology will prove to positively change the world once again.
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The students must be self- confident in order to succeed. I agree that hard work helps to build self-esteems because students must have faith in their own abilities, they have to learn from their mistakes, and be proud of them achievements. That's why students can not be conform with insufficient work just to be admired by teachers or parents. Also, to able to be successful always needs high standards. Even though, parents and teachers decide to praise the students by giving them gifts or other things. It can motivate the students but there is some days were people are not in a good mood and forget to praised the students. That's how students can't continue with the same motivation and loose confidence. For example, my Probability Statistics math class she used to gave us candy every single day so we never try to do our classwork, everybody failed her class. Several students make mistakes while they are trying to accomplishing something and they give up when they don't have an easy solution. In reality that is when they are used to be treated with extreme indulgence. Of course, it doesn't matter how many mistake they make; it matters to continue believing in them self. Eventually, my friend Generic_Name came from Generic_City, she used to go to Susbury University it was difficult for her to learn English she also failed three classes. But she did not care how many times she failed. She believe in herself and she achieved her goal now she is an ESL teacher. How does people becomes doctors or professionals? some people don't have their parents alive or they are far away from each other so they don't have nobody to praised them. From my opinion, they should be proud of them self. All the effort, dedication, passion for the school and they don't need somebody to award them to be trust. But also, it's not easy for the students to succeed in this world unless they want to work for it. Everybody can notice when they gain something beneficial for their life and be satisfied with them great effort. From my own experience, my biology teacher it was very strict that she screamed at my face the first day of the semester but I showed her that I'm better what she thought I was. So I passed her class with an average of 80 and I also passed the SOL. Finally, when the students are comfortable from what they already accomplished, it's when they have a great opportunity to build them self-esteems. They do not need to be pushed with emotional things to able to be confident, If they get emotional later on, they wouldn't be able to continue without being praised. Some people do not survive when they don't get to achieved, then they complain on someone who don't give presents. Self-esteems always comes from achievements never comes from praising.
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Dear Principal, I was thinking about the policies you were offering about the cell phones allowed in school and I would suggest to choose policy 2 because students aren't going to follow what the first policy says. Also because student's have no reason to be texting in class if other students they are texting are in class too, students shouldn't be allowed to have phones in school because they would be distracting the rest of the class when their phone goes off in class. If students can have phones in school it's a sure fact that they're going to be using them in class. With Policy 2 the school can take the phones away at the beginning of the school day to be sure they aren't using the phone during class. Also with Policy 2 the students aren't able to be communicating just in case they have a test. If the phones are taken away they will reduce the chances of the students cheating on tests. I also pick Policy 2 because students are going to be distracting the class if someone sent them a message and the phone goes of in class in the middle of a lesson. No one likes to be distracted while they are learning, or at least i know i don't. That's why there shouldn't be phones in schools. With phones the grades of the students will go down because, they aren't paying attention. So i think you should pick Policy 2 So there are less distractions. Also so they aren't cheating in tests. Thank you for spending time reading this letter i hope you take it into consideration.
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well i think its a good idea because it would help out the future and give other students different opportunities that they enjoy for there choice of carrier. For example in the real life students should understand the choice of there carrier because different carriers have different working conditions. This shows that students would enjoy there future. this shows that students would enjoy there choice of there carrier. this shows that students would deal with there working conditions. this shows that students would get better understanding there choice. some people may believe that students should commit a carrier because they would enjoy what those would do. However some students would not would not there carrier because they would think about it cause there other carriers that might interest them. well most carriers can interest students because it would give them a different experience of what they do. most students might of seen there parents work on there carrier that they might seem interested. this shows that students should see what there parents would do on the carrier that they would interested on .this shows that students would enjoy that experience if they seemed interested. this shows students would be enjoy there experience by the same carrier. this shows that students would enjoy same carrier that there parents work. some people may believe that students would work on same carrier that there parents work on because most students might have the same experience. however students would choose a different that they like. well most students can go online and learn what carriers could do. Example students would use there computer to learn what carriers can do. this shows that using technology would help them with there interest. this shows they could ask someone that work on a carrier that they interest. this shows that carriers could help out the future. this shows that carriers could have different experience. some people may believe using electronics would help out the carriers that you were interested because they could understand what they do. however other carriers would something different.
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What does it mean to partnerships with a companies? I think it a good ideas for Many students who look for opportunities before they go to collega. Student will get to explore certain work area and what type of work they want to do. If student want to work at a company they can visit the company and see what kind of work they do. If school partnership with companies it will help many students to choose what type of work interest them. I think they should select me because I like to be around people, I want to know what type of jobs I want to do, and I want to have a experiment about jobs. There are so many people who don't like to be around, but I really like to be around people. I think when I am around people It give you a postive feeling. Anywhere you work or go and your around people It alway give you postive feeling. If you work in a company there will be people that you have to work with even if you like them or don't. One time at my school we were in a group project and I didn't know the people who were in the group and I didn't know what to say. Then I started talking to them and now we are friends. Whenever I am around people even If I don't know them and when I start talking to them I feel like I know them for long time. So many student alreadys know what they want to do in future, but I don't know yet what should I do. I always ask myself that what I am good at. I never figure it out what is something I am good at. I think not someone can get the jobs they want ,but If they select me to It will give me the opportunities to find out what types of work I am interesting in. It will really help me If I know what work I want to do. There are many people who are not happy with their jobs, but they still have to do it for their family. I think people should choose what jobs they want to do. If I want to work at a company and I don't know anything about the company how can I work there. I think before you work you should have a experiment so you know what is the jobs about. I wanted to work at a resturants, but I didn't know what kind of work will they have so I ask my friend who have work there. If you don't have experiment you can research about it. There are work where you don't have to have experiment, but in some jobs they want you to have a experiment. I always wanted to be a nurse so I always wanted to learn about nursing. If I get select I would have a opportunities to explore about nurse and I will get to have a experiment. However you should not select me, but you should because I like to be around people, I want to know what type of jobs I want to do, and I want to have a experiment about jobs. I like to be around people because I think it give a postive feeling. If I think you should select me because It will give me the opportunities to find out what types of work I am interesting in. I want to choose a jobs that I will enjoy working. It good ideas to have a experiment about a jobs before you work.
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Yes I think it is a good idea for students to plan their career early because students can be prepared for the real world, it can help with jobs, and it could help them in college. When students graduate they will face challenges . They have to find a job to support their needs. Students will also need to find what they want to do in life to make them be successful. A planned career really gives a head start to those who want to achieve more and be prepared. The real world is tough if you dont have a plan because it can be too late to accomplish goals. Planning at a young age gives students advantages for their work. This also helps with a students resume if they want to attend college. Jobs want students who are successful and take work seriously. When a student graduates they want to make it in life and not struggle. Another reason students should plan early is for jobs. A job gets people money and they can use this for more school or for other needs. A planned job at a young age is a very good head start for many reasons. Students can save up for college or by a vehicle. An early job gives them a lot of experience and helps benefit when they look for more places to work outside of school. More reasons students should plan their careers early is for college. College helps keep them in school giving more education. More education and knowledge also helps students get better jobs. Getting better jobs helps students make more money for their future. The money helps support their needs for example like owning a house. Some people today dont want to go to college which does not mean they wont be successful. Sometimes students prefer to find better jobs to make a living without anymore education. When students dont plan ahead that also does not mean they are always too late for anything. Students would sometimes need more time to figure want they want to do in life. As long someone works hard they can accomplish all their goals and commit to a career at a young age.
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Well the best option for my is what you attend the classes from home by way of online . My reason or my thought is, what you cant learn, in online classes, and thought what you can do it , doing others wor,k in you free time, and the school has good ideas for student what take, classes like after school just in home . So in my position is that because if you work so is you cant take the class for one hours, and you work ,and is more benefit for myself but ,each person has diferent ideas . Examples: If you not have work is more time for you ,for what you keep doing you class online. If you wnat the class . you has more time for to think best for work online and make a good work and your class. With this examples are much more for what you take any option or my option what is the best or most better already is in you home . If you not have time like time complete is for that what you take this option ya what has work and not time like for stay in the school all the time . Others examples is whent you have 18 year old has to much resposabilities and others case it 's not easy . I think whent a teacher said you need that class is for one reason, and you nedd take that class but you cant took with you teacher what, is most better for you. So and my opinion or my position is take class from home in online, and to much better what ,take video coferencing. One reason because im take that option is because in my home is relax, and with food and alone and not voices and nothing, and in my home take my time for think most better i think is the most important for my work in home and i think what the work in online is not easy so need my time for to think, and good ideas and good answer, and the idea is what you learn with any option you take for this case . The student in this time has more option for any problem . One reason for what i take this option is for the time ya what much student are major or not have much time for coming a school because the work or others case. Other reasons what the student take this option is beacuse is home not in other pleace ya what not has ride or cars for take that class or classes en other pleace . My intentions is what others student take this option what is classes from HOME because is the best ,option for any case too if you want free time is more easy for you take this class or classes home by way of online, and is more choice that idea and minus dificult just what in home or online you not have teacher for explain any question so for that reason is little complicate but not impossible make you work so you cant do it , forever you want , nothing is this life is impossible but too not is easy everthing is sacrifice. Abd you has see you work good and past the class sin difucult . My reference is the option class FROM HOME BY WAY OF ONLINE. Is the best option and more benefif for learn in home, and more easy for the time or others problem and i cant wait what everthing stay good for my cass or classes .
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Community park,sates park, and national park are fun because you can ask your friends to come with you to play any sports like basketball,soccer,baseball,and football or kickball. Playing outdoor is fun because you could play with your friend from school or you could play with your cousin or your own brothers, because some kids don't like to play outdoor because they rather stay indoor so they can play with there friend video games. Older people like going outside to go for a run or riding there bikes with there kids and they like to play any sports with there kid at the park. Examples:( basketball,football,soccer,volleyball). Why should people be outdoor because, what are they going to do indoor all day by not going outside, and go have fun with your friends or cousin or your brothers or sister. Going outside is fun because you could ride your bike around the your neigh broad hood or you can play tag with your friend because little kids like to play tag with another person because it's fun for them or they could play kickball or anything they all want to play outdoor with another person because playing outside is fun because you could play with anyone in the family because some people like to go to the park with there whole family and they could all play a sports together that they all would love to play as a family. going outdoor is fun when it's spring time or summer because its really hot that time and it's a good time to go to the park with the whole family because a lot of people like go at that time of the year or season because they can go to have fun at the soccer field or the baseball field to go on and play a game together or you can play a kickball at the baseball field. When it's summer time or spring a lot of people would like to come outside because they can go to the stat park or the community park or the national park to ride there bikes or going for a run around the park or going to the park with your family to go have some fun with your cousin at the park you could play soccer,baseball,kickball,and you could walk around the forests with your brother because you might find something really inserting and you might found an animal somewhere I think you might find a bear or fox and a frog like a different kind of a frog in the forest and you might take that kind of a frog home with you and you can take care of it yourself. Going outdoor is fun because you could go to the pool or the nearest park were you live. Some people like to be outdoor because like to play football outside because some people kids dad play football when there were kids now the father like to play football with there kids or there grandchildren. some people do not like to come outside during the summer because they don'thave school or homework they could do what ever they want to do because it's summer time some other kids come outside for the whole dad if want to because there no school or homework for them and they can even go to the park all day with there friends.
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Dear principal, I'm writting this letter to let you know my opinion on the idea of change the school lunch menu into a new healthier menu. I think that it would be a good idea change the lunch menu to be more healthy because it will help the students to consume less unhealthy food, can help students to stay healthy and could encourage the students to begin eat healthier. Students consume unhealthy food on school alsmost every day, change the menu into a healthier will help students to consume less unhealthy food. Eating unhealthy food daily could damage students in many differents ways. One this ways is that could bring students diseases such as heart problems or could cause obesity in a young age. Additionally change the menu could not just be benefical for students it could also help teachers and personal staff as well to consume less unhealthy food daily. By having a healthier menu could help the students to stay healthier because they will be eating the proteins that they needed to develped better. Also this could help students to do better in things such as sports, and their respectives classes on school. Another advantage of this menu is that will give students the opportunity to try something new instead of having the same food that they're had been having year over year. In addition by doing this could migth make students realize that having this menu is not just to force them to eat food that they don't like, instead is to keep and them stay healthy. Even thougth that some of the students will migth think that this would be a bad idea because will eliminate some of their favorite food, I think it will be helpful for them because by doing this will encourage them to begin to eat healthier, because that could help them now and on the future. Also this could encourage them to covince their friends and family to begin to eat healty because this could prevent them from having a disease just for eating unhealthy food. In conclusion I think that change the school menu into a new healthier lunch menu is a good idea, because it will help the students to consume less unhealthy food, could help them to stay healthy and could encourage them begin to eat healthier. Those are the reasons that make me think this way, I hope this letter could help you decide that implement this plan is a good idea to change the school for better. Thank you for you time, dear principal.
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I know not all of us may have experience in every way. For example i may not be experienced in everything but as long as someone is their to hep me i will be wiling to work and do what is needed. Some jobs look for the days they need their employees, Most places won't hire if you dont got what the job is actually looking for. Its better to find a place you find comfortable working at. Most jobs require- certain age experience availability Mangers go for people who they see doing good in their job. For me i know i have job myself and it wasnt easy to find. I had no experience i didnt know anything. I was trained like every other employee at my job, But now i know a lot more positions. If my manager is low on staff he knows he can rely on me to come in and help, better for me i make more hours which makes me makes me happy knowing I'm making money for myself. Its better having a job where you get along with your employees. Find something your really interested. Dont choose something is gonna make you miserable. One day their is gonna be job youll have where they pay more then you will get paid for a part time an youll probably get more then $8 of course.
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should music, drama and art classes be a requirement. no they should be a elective classes because elective are easier to take and pass. Some students aren't good at taking music , drama and arts classes. Some students dont want to take classes that is required to them. Elective classes are really easy. Students will have less stress about worrying that they will fail to meet the requirement to pass their school. when the class become an elective class there will be less home work this will allow students to get an easy credit to pass the class. if this was an requirement class it would be more hard and if the students don't pass the class they will have to repeat it. Students that are not good at music, drama and art will try their best to pass. but if they fail that means they have to do it over again until they pass it. But as an elective class student don't have to be good in it to pass. But even so the student don't like the classes but they still try to go for the free extra credit. Requirement classes is a class that students have to take in order to graduate but most of the of the student don't want to take it. Elective classes are suitable for those students because the student that did not want to take it can switch to another class that they are good at. Student that did not want to take the requirement class will skip and don't care about it. Elective class are the best they are not hard as an requirement. Requirement class is all about passing but elective classes are fun learning and less stress to put on for the student. Requirement classes are hard and not fun at all. Electve class are more fun and easier for the student. thats why music, drama and art should be elective classes.
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Generic_School plans to change to a new, healthier school lunch menu, which would eliminate some of the student's favorite cafeteria foods. Students would get better nutrions from eating more healthly foods. Also students eating healthy foods would help them stay focus in class. The change to the school lunch menu is a good idea becasue this benfits the students health and education purposes. Changing the school lunch menu would help students stay focus in class. Many researchers believes that when students eat healthy, they are more likely to pay attention and do good on thier quizes and tests. Students eating junk food will make them feel lazy and make them feel tired during class. Students will not have stomach problems during class if they eat healthy foods. Students eating healthy makes them succed in all of thier classes. Changing the school lunch menu would also help students have better nutrion. They will be more active after school and not be lazy. Students that have after school activites like sports, need good nutrions to perform well. Students that have good nutrions would feel good about themselves during school and after school. Althought other students dose not want the lunch menu to change because they want to eat thier favortie cafeteria foods. This is bad because they will not have a good nutrions for after school clubs. Also they will be very sleepy in their classes and not be focused. The school cafeteria menu is very important because it decides wheather a student will be successful in their classes or not. The school cafeteria menu should change because students will not get the right nutrions for thier classes and after school activities. They will also fall asleep in class if they eat junk food.
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Inactivity will most definitely not get you anywhere in life. By not giving up and always doing something, you'll accomplish more in your lifetime. You'll learn a lot in the process, and you'll also set a great example for others. There's a good amount of people who are good at something in life, but never get the opportunity like other's to be successful at it. For example, sports. If your good at sports nowadays, you can easily make it to the big leagues and have a good salary, if and only if, your focus and show that you want it more than others. You gotta be unique in someway. Because if you think your good enough already and sit back and think that there's no one better than you out there, then your wrong. That means your mentality is not set for success, it's set for failure. If you decide to be Idle, you'll lose your chance to make it to the big leagues because there's many people out there who are hungry and are willing to take that spot from you. For example, Ousmane Dembele, former Barcelona player, took the starting spot from Philip Coutinho. Because at practice and some games, Dembele showed that he had what it takes to start over Countinho. Coutinho did suffer an injury, but when he recovered, he pretty much became Idle and Dembele was already far ahead from what Coutinho was when he started. When you decide that you want to be successful, it's not only good for you, but also for others. Because your setting a good example,for people that look up to you, younger siblings, etc. I'd rather die trying to be successful, than not, because then I know I made someone happy, like my family. Trying isn't going to harm you, matter of fact, It'll get you somewhere in life where It will only motivate you to do more, and become a better person. A person like me, would never become Idle because i've witnessed what happens when a person becomes Idle. Especially High School students. I've seen many students get jobs and lose their interest in school because they've "found" an easy way to make money. And many think that they don't need education, that's why I, myself, haven't had the interest to look for a job at the moment. I witnessed my cousin, get a job at Wendy's, going from straight A's and B's, to becoming Idle towards school and finishing the year with all F's and only one D. That's why I encourage students not to get a job right away when they become 16 years old. I would rather wait for the summer, get a job, and make money. Because you can't also sit around and not do anything in the summer. Everyone gets to that one point in life, where they'll find themselves being Idle, but that's great because they learn from it. They learn what's bad from it, and hope to never be like that. At least I've learned from it. I suffered a bad injury freshman year, which lead to my downfall a little bit because when I came back from the injury, I noticed that I wasn't the same anymore. My team mates were telling me that I'll most likely never be the same again and that another person was gonna take my spot. I took their words, and trained harder than ever. I became a better player than I was, took me a bit of time, but I got there. And that inspired me a lot, I even started playing with better people so that I could learn from them. I pushed myself out side of my comfort zone, but it payed off. I inspired my brother to also become a goalkeeper, he now trains with me every weekend. Thomas Jefferson states that by always doing something, you'll accomplish more, and it's a wonderful thing when people acknowledge that. I, in fact agree with him, because when you're Idle, you most definitely won't get anywhere in life. There's always something to do out there, for every human being. You just have to push yourself outside of your comfort zone, and do things in life that makes you happy.
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I think this will help the younger the older students with. The younger students getting more experience from the older students. It can also help with both students being in the same level as each other. The students will get involved with both not doing the same things in the program that they do. Both younger students and older students will be able to know more things in this program that they never knew before. They can also learn more skills that can help them in their future. This can help them in the future with them knowing more skills such as "materials,knowing how to get better,getting smarter,joining programs with older and younger and older students can be a good thing with both groups learning the same things at the same time and than you can also learn things that other students may not know already or it can teach them athletic skills to keep there body healthy many of these things can help you be involved in life or anything younger students and older students can learn all of these to get smarter. Knowing all of this can help a lot. also older students assisting younger students is very useful to the younger students. Older students assisting younger students is helpful because they will be able to at least teach them a little bit more information about what the program is about and how it works. Both younger and older students can also do programs that help the school,educate more students,and helping with things around the school. Helping around the school such as"cleaning the school,helping stacking chairs,and helping with carrying things inside the school like food,things for gym,and other kinds of school supplies. Thats why assisting schools can helpful to the scholl it self. There are many programs that you can be able to join such as after school programs,programs that are during the summer, and programs that are only during the winter season. This is how younger students and older students can get involved while doing programs during or after school.
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In my opinion, they shouldn't let students attend class from home. Students do not attend their classes will most likely to slack off. Although it is a great idea, only the truthful will attend classes from home while the other student will be in school. Students need to be in school to social and get out of their house, students shouldn't be in their bed listening to the teacher and being lazy all day. Student needs to be in school. From my point of view, students should be in school to socialist and need some fresh air. If a student stay home then they'll feel lonely, decrease their social skills, and be lazy. Due to this, students can develop some type of mental health problems if they stay in their house for a while, also some student who is in home will most likely skip school just to enjoy their day off. Teachers should know their students more. If a teacher knows who wants to learn then they'll most likely will focus on that student but if the student doesn't care then the teacher will try their best to help the student. Therefore all K-12 students should be in school and learn. Even though you understand my argument however, I think the trustworthy students should attend class at home. If a student shows respect and work really hard, then they would most likely to attend class at home if necessary. Although it is best if they attend in class but if they are sick then they are welcome to attend class in home as long they listen to the teacher and take notes. But if they are really sick or any emergency, than they should email the teacher to let them know. Students should always let the teacher know when they are not in school and ask the teacher's permission to do a video conference. Without a doubt, students should be in school to socialist and need of fresh air, I do believe that everyone will be good in class and show respect to any adults. All student needs to be healthy in a physical and mental way. Students need to be in school in order to build their social skills because that's part of life, to socialist people if they need some assists or you need some assists as well. However, if there's a trustworthy student who work really hard may attend class in home. But if a student is awfully sick and in crisis then he or she will email the teacher that they are not in school and ask if they can do the work next class or in the morning and lunch break. Whether or not I think all K-12 student should go to school and learn instead learning it from home.
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