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TheKing2001
550674
3
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
complete
21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-08T03:42:20+00:00
2024-02-08T05:50:32+00:00
139
Sunset levitated the trash she and Princess Luna had made throughout the night during their studies, dumping it into a trash can before flopping back on her bed. “I’m going to sleep!” Sunset called out to Silverspeed as the unicorn levitated the blanket over her and curled up into a ball. “Goodnight. Oh, I forgot Silverspeed was supposed to go to Rarity’s today with Roseluck. Oh well.” Sunset closed the blinds with her magic and sighed contently as she fell asleep. “Where’s Sunset?” Derpy asked as she and the five sat around a table at Sugarcube Corner, watching Pinkie drop a plate of muffins in front of them before racing off in a pink blur. “Probably asleep. She was up late last night,” Silverspeed answered as she set down her coffee. “Remind me to sound proof her room.” “What, you two that loud?” Shoeshine smirked as Trixie choked on her donut and Silverspeed turned red as Derpy and Roseluck hid their faces. “It’s not like that between us and you know that. She and Princess Luna get pretty loud during their studies, especially when the princess gets frustrated. It’s hard to sleep some nights because of it.” “Oh,” Shoeshine frowned at her tea. “I forgot that Luna visits Sunset every night. I kinda wish Sunset would let us help her sometimes. Damn mare is stubborn about her insisting she has to do everything by herself.” “You know how she gets, always wanting to do stuff alone. She is surprisingly independent,” Derpy commented as she unwrapped a muffin. “I credit that to her upbringing though, she does take asking for help as an insult some days.” Roseluck nodded as she examined her red velvet cupcake before taking a bite and the mare sighed. “She’s like Daisy in that area. Daisy hates asking for help. The amount of times I’ve seen that mare dragging heavy items by herself and almost damaging our wood floor is insane. Her and Lily constantly fight over it all the time.” “Hey, wanna hear a joke?” Trixie asked suddenly as she looked up from her book and the mares shrugged. “Sure why not?” Derpy said as she placed her forelegs on the table. “So you know Frosted Flakes, right?” “Uh huh?” “What do you call a mare with cum on her flanks?” Trixie asked as Derpy choked on her muffin and went red. Roseluck smacked her on the back as Shoeshine doubled over laughing as Silverspeed bit her lip hard enough to draw blood. “Trixie!” Roseluck snapped after a moment as Derpy finished trying to get oxygen back in her lungs successfully. “That is not okay! We’re in Sugarcube Corner, this place is popular with kids!” “And they’re all in school,” Trixie replied with an eyeroll and the blue unicorn grinned as she set her hooves on the ground. “Any guesses?” “N-no,” Silverspeed answered after a moment to wipe the blood off her lip. “Damn, I was bleeding.” “Frosted Flanks!” There was a silence as the mares all processed the joke and Trixie grinned confidently as she counted down internally from five. “That was the stupidest joke I ever heard but I love it,” Shoeshine chuckled as she shifted slightly on the chair. “Agreed,” Roseluck commented with a faint smile as Derpy nodded and Silverspeed snickered. “I personally thought it was funny but I’ve always had a strange sense of humor. You think Sunset would find it funny?” Silverspeed asked curiously as her ears flicked. “Not sure. Sunset has a varying sense of humor,” Derpy said and tapped her chin with a hoof in thought. “I gotta go pick up Dinky from school, Sparkler is starting her job today at Coffee Cream’s coffee shop. See you girls around.” “See ya,” Silverspeed waved a hoof as the mailmare paused at the doorway. “Oh and you have a package at the post office from your parents Silverspeed,” Derpy said as her fellow pegasus groaned in frustration and nodded. “Thanks.” “We should be heading out soon. Rarity is super annoying about being on time,” Roseluck mused as she slapped some bits onto the fews Derpy had set down, with the other three adding their own bits to pay their bill. “What do you think about getting?” “Whatever fits and works,” Silverspeed answered with a shrug. The pegasus wasn’t entirely fond of clothing or dresses like her filly sister was. Silverspeed did have a few dresses when her parents forced her and Silver Spoon to go to high end parties with their parents friends but that was about it. The only real form of clothing Silverspeed approved of was probably one dress, her dress uniform when she graduated West Hoof and armor when she was with other Guards. “Don’t really care much. And whatever is the cheapest. Guard pay isn’t uh the best.” “Your parents don’t give you any money? Aren’t they like, super rich?” Trixie asked as Shoeshine kicked her under the table. “Ow!” “Don’t be rude next time,” Shoeshine muttered so only Trixie could hear her. “They are but I don’t use their bits. I want to buy stuff with my own bits, not my parents. Annoying fucks.” “Damn,” Trixie whistled and Silverspeed glanced over at her. “You must really hate your parents.” “Not hate. I don’t trust them. There’s a difference, just like how Sunset hates her biological parents. And they’re really annoying.” None of them could really understand what it was like to hate their parents. All of them except Silverspeed talked to their parents. Even Trixie wrote the occasional letter to her dad back in Neigh Orleans. Whether he would send one back was always up in the air but for the most part, the two kept in contact. They’ve never net any of Trixie’s family but based on stories from Trixie, they were all a bit unique to put it mildly. “We really need to go,” Roseluck told Silverspeed as the four looked at the clock. “We’re pushing it as is and you know how the Cakes get about loiterers.” The four nodded as they glanced quickly at a bored looking Mrs. Cake leaning against the counter where they knew she stored a bat in case of troublemakers. “Yeah let’s go,” Silverspeed decided as she hastily stood up. “I’d rather not get whacked upside the head today.” Shoeshine chuckled dryly as the four went their separate ways. Roseluck trotted down the path to her front door where she and her sisters resided, a bag containing a dress that matched her mane and eyes on her back. “Hey what took you?” Daisy asked as Roseluck opened the door and shut it gently behind her. The older pink mare was sitting on her chair by the window, reading a crime novel as sounds of cooking came from the kitchen. “Busy getting a dress, sorry. Who’s cooking?” “Lily,” Daisy answered as she turned a page. Roseluck grimaced slightly at that as she glanced at the kitchen. Lily wasn’t necessarily the greatest cook between the three but Roseluck and Daisy both opted not to say anything about it. “Anyway, why do you need a dress? You have a closet full, what’s so special about that one?” Daisy pointed a hoof at the bag before focusing back on her book. “I got a ticket to the Gala in Canterlot so I needed a dress that I haven’t worn half a dozen times. Plus, my other ones need to be refitted. I’m getting older after all,” Roseluck answered as she set the bag on the couch. “The other girls are going. Took a lot to convince Derpy and Sunset.” “So that’s why Sea Swirl and Sassaflash are going to be watching Dinky and Amethyst. Sassaflash mentioned it at the market earlier today.” “Don’t let Sparkler hear you call her Amethyst. You know she’s going on her whole new name phase,” Roseluck warned as Daisy rolled her eyes. “You went through the same phase but at a younger age and went back to Roseluck after a few years. It’ll pass.” “I did not!” Roseluck corrected instantly and spun around to face her sister. “What in Equestria are you talking about?” “When you were nine, you made Lily and I call you Rosehearts for about two years till you decided Roseluck suited you better. I remember it vividly,” Daisy answered as she raised an eyebrow. “Still surprised you even thought of Rosehearts.” “I found it in Lily’s adult magazine she had in her room under her bed that year,” Roseluck admitted with a blush as Daisy’s eyebrow climbed higher. “Lily has porn?” “I wouldn’t have put it quite like that but yes. Or well, she did. Not sure if she still does. Rosehearts was a model,” Roseluck admitted as she blushed harder. “I haven’t thought about that in years. I honestly forgot about it.” “So you stole somepony else’s name that was a porn model and just thought that would slip by unnoticed? Now I know why some stallions and mares gave you funny looks,” Daisy commented as she looked at her sister with a smirk. “I’m gonna have to search through Lily’s room for said magazine, I’m intrigued. Here’s hoping some of the pages aren’t stuck together.” “You’re gross.” “You stole your sister’s sex mag at a young age and I’m the gross one? You’re unbelievable,” Daisy laughed quietly as Roseluck grumbled a curse word to herself. “Wait, you’re going to the Gala? So is Shoeshine and Trixie?” “And Silverspeed. Why?” “Don’t let Golden find out. You know she’s been trying to go for years to find Written Script,” Daisy warned as she rubbed her chin with a hoof. “On second thought, I’ve always wanted to see the royal garden. Maybe I can convince Sunset to give me her ticket. I’ll decorate the Residency lawn with flowers, it could use it.” “Don’t even think about it. It took a lot to convince Sunset to come with us,” Roseluck glared at Daisy and narrowed her eyes. “That mare took ages to convince, I honestly thought Trixie was gonna tie Sunset down till she complied.” Roseluck suspected there was always a time for that later if Trixue got bored enough and wanted to practice her knot tying for some magic trick. Again. Merry May still hasn’t entirely forgiven the mare for almost getting her stuck in a rope trap that Roseluck couldn’t remember what Trixie called it. “Or maybe she’ll let me go,” Lily suggested as she poked her head in as the two jumped. “Don’t worry, I wasn’t listening in till I came to tell you girls dinner is ready.” “Why in the world would you wanna go?” Roseluck demanded as Daisy shoved a piece of paper to keep her spot in her book and shut it as Roseluck pointed a hoof at Lily. “You hate ponies, you shut in! You almost never leave you room unless it’s to complain at us or work!” “I go out for way more than that!” Lily shot back as the mare stepped properly into the room. “I brought you medicine last month when you and Daisy were both sick!” “Hold on, why does Lily wanna go?” Daisy interjected. “She’s been to the Canterlot garden before in school.” “Maybe I wanna go again? Duh.” “Don’t you duh me child.” “And what will you do about it?” Lily challenged as Daisy narrowed her eyes, standing up off her favorite chair. With a bored look, Roseluck sat down next to her dress as she watched her sisters argue again. Well, at least I hid my ticket somewhere safe in my room, Roseluck mused to herself as Daisy flung her forelegs in the air. More like it was under her bed but still safe to her at least. A part of Roseluck wanted to intervene but the othe part of Roseluck knew the two would quit fighting in ten minutes or so. Roseluck sighed and shifted to watch. If they’re gonna argue and be annoying, might as well be comfortable.
TheKing2001
550674
4
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
complete
21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-10T06:07:52+00:00
2024-02-10T06:35:29+00:00
138
Derpy made a tired sound as she flung herself down on her couch as Sparkler and Dinky both looked at her from the table where the two were playing a card game. “What’s with you?” Sparkler asked as she tapped the table. “Hit.” Dinky passed Sparkler a card and the mare sighed in frustration as Dinky took Sparklers last remaining piece of candy happily. Dinky was surprisingly good at blackjack, beating even Sparkler at it. Sparkler had lost all of the candy she and Dinky were betting with. “Dealer wins!” Dinky announced with a grin. “Long day at work is all. How was your first day of work?” Derpy asked as Sparkler shrugged as the unicorn levitated the playing cards into a box on the shelf. “It was okay. Sunset came in right before we closed. Something about needing coffee to help her sleep again,” Sparkler said as Dinky raised an eyebrow. “Isn’t coffee caffeine? How does that help her sleep?” Dinky asked as she scrunched up her muzzle and the two older mares smiled at her. “I don’t know but it is caffeine yes. Sunset is a bit of a strange mare at times.” “Chocolate sometimes helps me sleep but in rare circumstances,” Sparkler admitted as the unicorn shifted in her chair. “Everypony is different I suppose.” “So that’s where my chocolate has gone,” Derpy gave Sparkler a flat look as the unicorn gulped. “It’s bed time girls, go to bed. You two are getting watched by Sea Swirl and Sassaflash in a few days while I go to Canterlot with my friends. I trust you’ll behave?” “Yes mom, we will,” Sparkler rolled her eyes. “Why do I have to stay with them, I’m old enough to stay home.” “Because I’m asking you to, that’s why. And besides, you went to school with Sea Swirl. You two might like catching up,” Derpy suggested with a smile. “Hm we will see,” Sparkler answered as she followed her younger sister down the hall and Derpy paused for a moment. “Were you teaching your sister blackjack?” Derpy stood in front of the purple house that had two dolphins swimming in a circle engraved on the door as she knocked on it gently. A tired looking lilac unicorn with matching cutie mark to the engraving on the door opened it as she levitated a coffee mug to her lips. “Hi Derpy,” Sea Swirl said as she covered a yawn with a hoof. “Morning, how’s it going?” “Good thanks. I’m here to drop off Dinky and Sparkler if that’s okay. I’m leaving for Canterlot in a few hours. If not, I can find Flitter,” Derpy said as Dinky jumped out of her mane and waved as Sea Swirl grinned, watching Sparkler step from behind the pegasus. “That’s more than alright! I love your kids, you know. You can drop them off anytime you need some time alone Derpy, you know that,” Sea Swirl giggled as she hugged the pegasus. “Have fun in Canterlot, be sure to stop by Donut Joe’s! Used to go there all the time as a filly, it’s a good place.” “I’ll see if the girls wanna stop by,” Derpy conceded and hugged the mare. “Thanks again Sea Swirl. Tell Sassaflash I said hi.” “I will,” Sea Swirl waved as Derpy took to the sky. “Come on in, what do you all want for breakfast? Sassaflash should be here soon. I got cereal and uh cereal.” “We already ate but thanks Sea Swirl,” Sparkler said as she and Dinky the unicorn inside. Dinky shoved the door shut with her head and grunted as she stepped back. “Took more energy than I thought,” Dinky muttered and rubbed her forehead with a wince. She and Sparkler looked around the blue room as Sea Swirl sat down on a couch, patting a spot on either side of her. “Sit down, it’s been a few weeks since I’ve foalsitted you girls. How’s life been treating you all?” “Good! Miss Cheerilee is awesome as usual. What about you?” “Oh fine. Just busy with work and the dolphins as usual,” Sea Swirl waved towards the part of her house that housed a submarine she had created. It was admittedly still a work in progress but she was optimistic. “Benefits of building my house near the ocean and all. Hey Sparkler, been a few weeks.” “Indeed,” Sparkler commented coolly as she sat down. “Hey Dinky, I still have some toys in the spare room for you to play with. Why don’t you go play while I talk to your sister?” Sea Swirl suggested with a smile as the unicorn folded up a newspaper. “Yay!” The two watched as Dinky jumped off the couch and ran away as Sea Swirl gave a quiet laugh. “That filly is a ball of endless energy. How you truly been Sparkler?” Sea Swirl asked as she folded her forelegs across her chest and stared intently at the other mare. “I’m getting by. How’s it going with your marefriend?” Sparkler teased as Sea Swirl blushed. “Sassaflash is not my marefriend, she’s just my roommate. Admittedly, I wish she was my marefriend but she’s dating Caramel and I’m not a jerk to try to break them up like others have suggested,” Sea Swirl said with disdain. She may hate Caramel with a burning passion but she is above breaking up her best friends relationship for her own gain. “Besides, it’s fairly obvious doesn’t swing for her own team.” “I don’t know about that,” Sparkler snorted as she shifted her weight. “Vinyl says Sassaflash sets off her gaydar like crazy.” “Her gaydar? What the hay is that?” Sparkler put up her hooves as Sea Swirl shot her a confused look. “I have no idea. But she said you set it off too when you first moved here so it must be pretty accurate, right?” “I don’t know. Like I said, Sassy is dating Caramel and well, that doesn’t seem to be ending anytime soon. They just came back from Manehatten last week. Consider yourself lucky, you don’t have to hear about her sex life or well, lack of one I should say.” “I really don’t wanna know about that,” Sparkler said hastily with a red face. “I already hear enough about Lyra’s lack of one too and the opposite with Minuette. Minnie for some reason needs to share every single detail of what she gets up to with Berry.” “I know. She’s like that with me too. Both of them really. We need to get Lyra a marefriend,” Sea Swirl mused as she tapped her hoof against her chin. “Who was that one mare she was talking to at the summer sun celebration party in the library a few months ago?” “Not sure but she was a pretty shy mare from what Moondancer was telling me. Three pieces of candy for a cutie mark as well,” Sparkler answered as the door opened a light blue pegasus with two lightning bolts trotted in and shut the door behind her. “Hey girls,” Sassaflash waved a wing as she trotted past and Sea Swirl glanced at her flanks before turning red and looked away hastily as Sassaflash flung herself down on a recliner. “What’s up? Where’s my favorite unicorn filly at?” “Playing in the toy room.” “Ah. What were you two talking about?” Sassaflash asked as Sparkler and Sea Swirl shared a look, having a conversation based purely on facial expressions. “Nothing,” Sparkler decided and Sea Swirl gave her a grateful look. Sparkler personally thought Sea Swirl should just tell her but at the same time understood her fellow unicorn could very well lose a friend if she did so. Sea Swirl was pretty stubborn too. “Huh okay,” Sassaflash shrugged and reclined her chair. “What do you three wanna do?” “Whatever you want. This is your and Sea Swirls house after all,” Sparkler said as Dinky’s laugh echoed down the hall. “I’m down to just stay home and watch movies. The projector is somewhere I think,” Sea Swirl commented and looked around for the projector. “Aha! There it is.” Sea Swirl levitated it to them and examined it with a faint smile. “Remember when we first got this? You had just moved to Ponyville back then,” Sassaflash grinned slightly at Sea Swirl. “I met you for the first time that day when you were shopping for one and I had to help you find the aisle in the store and we spent hours searching for it.” “Good times,” Sea Swirl smiled fondly at her friend. “Dinky, come here! We got ice cream!” A blur ran into the room as Sparkler and the other smiled at the filly. “Got butter pecan?” Dinky asked hopefully as she stared at Sea Swirl, placing her hooves on the mares thigh. “Got chocolate, butter pecan, strawberry, vanilla and Reeses,” Sassaflash recited with a shrug. “And whatever happens here stays here girls. Remember that.” Sparkler smirked as Dinky cheered and looked out the window at the moon. The two did always love coming here.
TheKing2001
550674
5
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
complete
21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-11T08:56:29+00:00
2024-02-11T23:51:28+00:00
111
Sunset gave a sigh as she stretched out on her bed, sinking into the mattress and curled up in a ball happily under her blankets. It was surprisingly cold tonight and not even December, not even remotely close to winter. Sunset closed her eyes and jumped at a loud scream, her horn glowing as she disappeared in a light blue burst, stumbling to her hooves as she looked around Silverspeed’s room as the silver pegasus was hugging herself as Sunset sighed. “Are you okay?” Sunset asked as she approached the mare. This wasn’t the first time she had been disrupted late in the night by the other mare waking up screaming. “I’m fine.” “No you’re not,” Sunset retorted with a frown before sighing. “Look, I’m know I’m not the best at friendship and still getting the hang of being a good friend, let alone having friends in general but waking up screaming every night for the past six months isn’t the definition of fine Silver.” Silverspeed stayed silent and glanced away as Sunset resisted the urge to face hoof. “Do you wanna-” “No, I don’t wanna talk about it,” Silverspeed snapped as Sunset recoiled before narrowing her eyes. “I call bullshit.” “Fine. I’m having nightmares after you know,” Silverspeed rolled a hoof as Sunset gave her a confused look. “No I don’t know.” “Do I have to spell it out? After killing that deer, months ago? Blood all over my hooves and armor?” “Yeah how could I forgot? So that’s why you’ve been crying yourself to sleep since then,” Sunset noted as she sat down on the ground. “Yeah. Your aunt has been visiting me in my dreams to help me but well, little progress to be made. Celestia doesn’t know about it yet but Luna does. Surprised she didn’t kill me over it or have me arrested,” Silverspeed said as Sunset watched sympathetically. Silverspeed cursed under her breath and rolled over onto her left flank to look away. “Just go to sleep, I’ll be fine. Hopefully.” “No.” “No?” Silverspeed echoed and glanced at Sunset. “What the hay does that mean?” “I mean, if it makes you feel better I can sleep with you,” Sunset said as the two blushed. “Not like that! Whenever I had nightmares as a filly, Celestia would have me sleep in her bed with her.” “I can’t force you to leave, can I?” Silverspeed asked and Sunset shook her head. “Fine.” Silverspeed lifted the blanket as Sunset clambered into the large bed, laying next to the pegasus as Sunset inhaled before draping a hoof over Silverspeed’s foreleg and one of her hindlegs over Silverspeed’s thigh. “Don’t tell anypony this is happening,” Sunset warned quietly into Silverspeed’s neck. “The others already think we are dating and don’t even get me started on your sister. If they find out I offered this, we will never hear the end of it.” “Fair enough,” Silverspeed chuckled as she sighed. “Oh, you’re warm.” “Sun is in my name after all. I’ve always been naturally warm.” “Touché,” Silverspeed said as the two laid there and Sunset closed her eyes. “Sunset?” “Yeah?” Sunset asked with her eyes closed. “Thanks for uh this. And well, being my friend. You may not think you’re great at it but you’re getting better at it, trust me.” “Shh,” Sunset muttered as she yawned. “Go to sleep.” Silverspeed nodded as she yawned and listened to Sunset’s even breathing before closing her own eyes. Sunset pressed her back against the door as she sighed in frustration. She and Silverspeed had woken up hours ago, hastily leaving the room to find a bunch of ponies on their lawn and their friends hiding in the living room. The two mares were glad they weren’t seen leaving the same room. “Why in Equestria do so many ponies want to go to the damn Gala?” Sunset grumbled as she glanced at her friends sitting in her living room. “It’s fucking lame!” “I don’t know but there’s a lot of them out there,” Roseluck noted as she peeked outside at the crowd. “Wow, that’s a lot of them.” “You’re telling me!” Silverspeed snapped as she hastily helped Sunset keep the door shut. “I wish I had my bullhorn but somepony took it away!” “You gave it to Raindrops to prank Trixie!” Trixie snapped as she narrowed her eyes, laying lazily on the couch. “Trixie was justified in taking it!” “Because you glued my helmet to the armor stand!” Silverspeed shot back with an accusatory hoof. “Karma!” “Can we quit arguing and worry about how we’re getting out of here?” A worried Shoeshine asked as she hugged Screw Loose. She had surprisingly been told by Celestia she could bring her along and had mailed her a ticket for her sister. “I can teleport us to the train station but you girls were sick last time plus Screw Loose,” Sunset pointed a hoof at the worried looking mares. “Bark!” “She says do it,” Derpy translated as the pegasus trotted back and forth. Sunset nodded as they all glowed blue and disappeared with a popping sound, tumbling to the ground of the train station. “Seven train tickets to Canterlot and pronto,” Sunset said hastily as she levitated a pile of bits to the confused salespony. “Thanks!” Sunset yanked her friends along in her magic along with the train tickets, shoving them at the conductor and plopping down on the bench with a relieved sigh. “Thanks for that,” Roseluck sighed in relief. “No problem. Nice dresses by the way,” Sunset commented as she examined her friends. The only pony not wearing one was Trixie who opted for a blue hoodie and skirt with boots. “And uh, nice hoodie?” “Thanks, it’s Trixie’s prized possession. Or well, one of them,” Trixie said as Sunset looked at the window happily. “What has you so happy?” Roseluck asked with a smile as Silverspeed sat next to Sunset carefully. “I love trains. I’ve always been in love with them. They’re so cool!” Sunset chuckled as her friends gave each other stunned looks. “I keep all my tickets everytime I go on one to remember.” Her friends shrugged as they sat down on various parts of the train as Trixie was laughing with Shoeshine, Derpy and Roseluck. “Hey Sunset?” Silverspeed said quietly and she nudged Sunset with a wing. “Yeah?” Sunset tore her gaze away from the window as the train slowly started moving. “Thanks. For uh sleeping with me last night,” Silverspeed whispered as she scuffed a hoof on the cushion and blushed. “I appreciated it, even though it was very embarrassing.” “You’re welcome,” Sunset shrugged as she patted Silverspeed on the back. “Yeah well you didn’t need to do it but you didn’t. Plus you could have made fun of me but didn’t so,” Silverspeed said as Sunset scoffed. “I wouldn’t have made fun of you. That’s not what friends do, right?” “Right,” Silverspeed confirmed as Screw Loose sat next to them and Sunset smiled faintly at the mare. “If you ever need the gesture returned, I’ll do the same for you.” “Thanks,” Sunset smiled as Silverspeed placed a wing over the two mares and pulled them into hugs. The three mare focused again on the window and smiled fondly at the passing trees.
TheKing2001
550674
6
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
complete
21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-12T05:19:58+00:00
2024-02-12T05:19:58+00:00
120
Roseluck stretched her hooves out and stepped off the train as Derpy and Roseluck looked around curiously. “So this is Canterlot,” Roseluck mused as Sunset and Screw Loose stood next to her. “I’ve never been to the big city before.” “Aren’t you from Manehatten or something?” Trixie reminded her with a tilted head. “That’s a big city. Trixie has been there once or twice.” “Yeah but I’ve never been to Canterlot before so this is a first for me,” Roseluck replied as she and the others followed Sunset through the city. “You sure know your way around,” Silverspeed noted as Sunset laughed dryly. “This is my city after all. It’s night time too so most of the city folk are at the Gala,” Sunset explained as she paused and dropped a dozen bits into a homeless pony’s pot. “You girls go ahead, I’ll be right there.” “Thank you,” the dirty looking mare looked up as she smiled faintly. “You’re welcome. Go to the hotel downtown and tell them Sunset Shimmer sent you. Also get some dinner,” Sunset said as she levitated the mare onto her hooves before placing the bits on the mares back. “Have a good night.” Sunset galloped to catch up to her friends as they gave her looks. “What took you?” Shoeshine asked as Screw Loose licked Sunset’s cheek. “Nothing,” Sunset said finally as she watched the homeless mare walk towards the hotel Sunset had pointed to. “Let’s keep going.” Sunset trotted ahead of the group as she lead them to the castle as she glanced at Derpy next to her. “I saw what you did,” Derpy said casually as she flitted her wings. “I’m proud of you. You didn’t have to help her, you could have walked right past her like half the town does.” “I have no clue what you are talking about,” Sunset said as her eyes flicked to Derpy. “Yes you do.” “Fine, I helped her out. So what?” Sunset commented as she stopped walking. “Nothing, just proud of you is all. Not many ponies would have helped her. I would have but I don’t have the bits,” Derpy said sheepishly as Sunset’s anger disappeared. “Yeah I know. If you need help, you know where to find me.” “I know.” “Sorry for uh ya know, yelling a bit there,” Sunset rolled a hoof sheepishly. “I’m not entirely used to be talked about when I give bits away.” “You’re fine. Wanna keep going?” Sunset nodded as she started leading them again. “Woah,” Trixie said in awe as they stared up at the castle. “You used to live here?” “Yeah,” Sunset said as she watched two ponies leaving the castle. “It’s nothing too crazy.” “What?” Shoeshine said in confusion as she shifted on her hooves. “Not many ponies say they lived at the Canterlot castle!” “True. I try to not flaunt it around you girls,” Sunset admitted sheepishly as she crossed her forelegs. “Ah,” Roseluck mused as she threw a foreleg over Sunset’s back as she and the others admired her orange and red dress that matched her mane. “You look really good by the way.” “She’s right,” Silverspeed chimed in with a smirk. “Maybe you’ll find a colt friend tonight.” “Nah,” Sunset shook her head and turned red. “I’m uh into mares ya know? Is that gonna like, end our friendships or-?” “Ew no,” Trixie scoffed as she rolled her eyes. “Trixie bats for both teams.” “I don’t care either,” Shoeshine shrugged as Roseluck nodded her approval. “Who you wanna sleep with or date with is your business. Berry is dating Minuette after all.” Sunset didn’t know that Minuette was like but wasn’t surprised. She, Lyra and Lemon Hearts always did act a bit unique in school. And then there was Moondancer dating Twilight that everypony knew about. Sunset had been admittedly stunned by that. “I don’t care,” Derpy hugged Sunset. “I’ll admit, I’ve dated mares in middle school. No biggie.” “Bark!” “And Screw Loose agrees with her,” Trixie translated. “Me too,” Silverspeed announced as she placed a wing on Sunset’s back. “Maybe you’ll find a mare then.” “Nah, I’m not looking at the moment. Maybe in the future,” Sunset shrugged with a small smile. “Thanks for not shoving me to the curb.” “We’re your friends,” Trixie scoffed and rolled her eyes. “We won’t just toss you aside ever. You’re stuck with us.” “Joy,” Sunset joked in mock sadness. “Pity me.” “Shut up,” Roseluck rolled her eyes and nudged Sunset with an elbow. “Come on, I hear there’s alcohol inside. This mare needs a glass of wine or two.” “Oh by the stars,” Derpy rolled her eyes as Roseluck trotted ahead. “I’ll see you girls inside. We should meet here at the end of the night so we don’t get lost. I should probably catch up with Rose.” Derpy took off after Roseluck as she flapped her wings and disappeared inside towards the front doors. “We should get inside. I’m hoping none of the mares I dislike are there,” Sunset gritted her teeth. “This will be so annoying if Twilight is here.” “Who?” “The mare that was at the library and the Summer Sun Celebration. Got pissed about the party in the library and got thrown out by a drunk Thunderlane.” “Bark, bark bark!” “She says she is a unique mare,” Silverspeed said as she and Screw Loose hugged. “Not a huge fan of Screw Loose unfortunately.” “Then I hate her,” Shoeshine growled as she cracked her forelegs. “Anypony who hates my sister is my enemy.” Sunset gave a nod as she and the others trotted up the steps of the castle, faintly making out Princess Celestia greeting guests as Silverspeed hastily stopped Screw Loose from eating her own dress. It had admittedly taken all of them to get Screw Loose in one but it had gotten down. Trixie did almost lose her head by Screw Loose biting at her but risk is reward. “Ah hello Sunset,” Celestia nodded at the mares. “Happy to see your friends here with you. I hope you all have fun tonight.” “Thank you Princess,” Sunset and the others bowed quickly before standing up and trotting away. “Oh you have got to be kidding me.” Standing in front of them, was Sunset’s enemy Twilight Sparkle.
TheKing2001
550674
7
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
complete
21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-13T20:34:11+00:00
2024-02-13T20:34:11+00:00
123
The two stared at each other as Sunset narrowed her eyes. Moondancer shifted awkwardly on her hooves and looked away as Twilight grimaced. “Twilight Twinkle,” Sunset scoffed as her friends watched warily. “Sunset Dimmer. My name is Twilight Sparkle.” “Didn’t you just get her name wrong?” Trixie wondered aloud. “Trixie doesn’t think you have much room to complain.” “What are you doing here?” Sunset pointed a hoof accusingly at Twilight as they both ignored Trixie. “Attending the Gala with my date obviously. Now what are you doing here?” “Attending the Gala with my friends which is something you can’t relate to because it’s just you and here, nopony else,” Sunset shot back as Moondancer cleared her throat. “I’m uh gonna go to the little fillies room while you two uh talk,” Moondancer said as her eyes flicked nervously between the two mares as she pushed her glasses up with her magic and trotted off hastily. Sunset glared at Twilight as the two unicorns shifted their weight slightly and narrowed their eyes. “Alright no fighting,” Shoeshine cut in as she stepped between the two. “There’s ponies watching. Twilight Twinkle, go somewhere else or you’ll be dealing with me and I already don’t like you. Sunset, go with Trixie and get a drink.” “Fine,” Sunset relaxed her stance as Twilight copied her slowly. “See you around, Twinkle.” “My name is Twilight Sparkle!” “Yeah yeah, and the sky is falling down,” Sunset rolled her eyes as she trotted past. “I don’t trust you so kindly stay out of me and my friends way tonight. If you really wanna fight, meet me after wards.” “I don’t even know what I did to you. I definitely don’t wanna fight you.” “Good because I don’t wanna fight either,” Sunset admitted as she looked away before her expression hardened. “And you know exactly what you did, I’m not stupid. I didn’t get to where I am in life by being dumb.” Shoeshine nudged Sunset away as she rolled her eyes, leaving Twilight behind them with her jaw dropped and shaking head. “That mare is drives me up the wall, she is so annoying,” Twilight sighed and scuffed a hoof on the ground. “I don’t even know what I did to her.” “Same,” Moondancer agreed as she reappeared next Twilight with a pop. “I’m back. Long line, ya know?” “Yeah,” Twilight said as Moondancer coughed into a hoof. “I hope you washed you hooves after. I got hoof sanitizer if you need it.” “I washed, what do you I am?” Moondancer scoffed with a smirk before kissing Twilight’s head. “Let’s just forget Sunset is here and try to at least have a decent night. And we can figure out why she despises you later.” Twilight nodded with a sigh as the two trotted away. “Just ignore your mortal enemy here and try to have a fun night,” Trixie said as she pushed a glass of alcohol to Sunset. “Trixie knows her too and she is not a fan. She can be quite rude at times during my shows in Canterlot, something about it being not real magic but meh what does she know?” Silverspeed nodded as she stood by quietly watching behind them as she stretched her wings out. “Yeah,” Shoeshine chimed in with a frown as she glanced at Screw Loose examining a strawberry. “I should probably go show her around, she’s only been to Canterlot for doctors and not to hang out.” “How many doctors have you taken her to?” Sunset asked curiously as she flicked her ears as she glanced at her friend. “Oh hundreds. We’ve been all over Equestria,” Shoeshine answered casually as she gave Screw Loose a strawberry. “Eat it, it’s good for you.” “Bark,” Screw Loose said as she licked it off of Shoeshines hoof. “She likes it,” Shoeshine translated and Sunset groaned. “You do know that I can speak Screw Loose right?” Sunset asked with a faint smirk as the other three gave her stunned looks. “Really?” Silverspeed asked with a raised eyebrow before placing her wings back at her side. “Yeah.” “That’s so cool!’ Shoeshine grinned as she trotted in a circle. “I thought only a select few understood Screw. This is cool. When did you learn?” “I spend enough time with her as is so I just watched how you and the others seemingly talk to her and learned that way. It’s pretty easy,” Sunset explained as she glanced at Roseluck on the opposite side of the room with Derpy and a brown stallion. “Huh, who’s that?” “Rose’s cousin. I forget his name,” Silverspeed said. “I’m gonna go explore, I’ll be back. I’ll find you all at the end of the night.” Sunset nodded as she watched the pegasus walk away as she and Trixie watched Derpy for a few moments before shrugging. “Trixie is going to go find Raindrops. Have fun.” “Bye.” “So are we placing bets on Trixie starting some drama?” Shoeshine asked with a smirk as Sunset downed a glass of wine. “Oh absolutely.” “Bark!” “This is my cousin Time Turner,” Roseluck said as she wrapped a hoof around Derpy’s neck. “This is Derpy.” “Hello,” Derpy said as she glanced at him. “Hi. Mailmare in Ponyville correct, mother of two daughters and element of harmony?” Time asked as Derpy nodded slowly. “How did you-” “My cousin tells me a lot about all of her friends in Ponyville. Quite fascinating really,” Time explained as Roseluck smiled as she removed her hoof. “So what do you do for work?” Derpy asked as she crossed her forelegs and smiled faintly. “Oh I work all over Equestria and other places.” “He’s a doctor,” Roseluck said quietly in Derpy’s ear. “A really good one.” “O-oh.” “Come and we can talk about it more if you would like. There’s so much to talk about. I can show you my means of transportation and everything,” Time said with a grin as he adjusted his green bowtie. Derpy turned red as she examined his mane before flying after the earth pony as Roseluck grinned to herself. “Roseluck you are an absolute genius,” Roseluck chuckled to herself. She hadn’t entirely been sure if trying to set up Derpy with her cousin had been a great idea but never know till you try. Roseluck had always thought the pair would be decent together even if they’ve never met before. “Oh I’m speaking in third pony. I’ve been spending way too much time with Trixie.” With a quiet laugh, Roseluck turned back to her wine.
TheKing2001
550674
8
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
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21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-16T22:39:29+00:00
2024-02-16T22:39:29+00:00
110
Trixie wandered around the castle grounds with a suit case held in her aura. Inside contained a few magic items and tricks as she set it down on a stage in front of some party goers. “Bask in the Great and Powerful Trixie’s amazing magic show!” Trixie shouted as she reared back on her hind legs and the ponies gave her flat looks. “Pick a card, any card!” A stallion knocked her cards out of his face as she glared at him and he shoved her cards back into her suitcase. “This isn’t a kids party! It’s an important event for us upper class ponies to discuss business and politicians to find allies. Now get outta here. You obviously don’t belong,” the stallion scoffed as some ponies laughed and Trixie’s ears flattened against her head. “You do know she’s the Element of Laughter, right?” Raindrops asked flatly as she stood behind him and gave him an angry look. “Trixie is one of the reasons you’re still alive so show some respect before I shove my hoof so far up your ass, you won’t be able to shit for weeks. Now get the buck outta here, eh?” The stallion turned red as he and a mare trotted away as Raindrops flew up to Trixie. “Hey Trixie,” Raindrops grinned as she dropped down next to her magician friend. “How’s it hanging?” “Pretty shit,” Trixie admitted as she slumped over and the upper class ponies ignored the two. “Tried to entertain a crowd for some extra bits and well, that went poorly as you can tell. Buck the system trying to hold down an entrepreneurial mare such as Trixie is!” “I know,” Raindrops chuckled as she hugged the magician. “These ponies suck. Why don’t we head out to the garden and walk? I think Roseluck was headed out there while Derpy is doing Celestia knows what.” “Yeah let’s go.” The pair jumped off the stage as Trixie levitated her magic items and suitcase behind her as the two trotted to the garden exit and Raindrops paused to stare at the stars. “Princess Luna did a bang up job eh? I always loved the stars,” Raindrops commented as she shifted her wings and her yellow dress. “I was surprised you actually came. The Gala isn’t normally your speed or well, mine either actually. I don’t know why I came. But it is a bit easier with you here.” “Likewise. Wonder what Shoeshine is up to?” “Screw Loose! Come back here!” Shoeshine galloped after her sister as a mare screamed as Screw Loose knocked her over into a white unicorn stallion with a blonde mane. “You two!” Blueblood snapped as they both skidded to a stop. “I don’t know who you are and I frankly don’t care. But get your mutt out of here.” “Excuse me?” Shoeshine growled as she spun around furiously. “My sister is not a mutt, do I make myself clear mister? Who even are you?” “Prince Blueblood. Nephew to Princess Celestia and Luna,” Blueblood answered as Shoeshine narrowed her eyes. “I’ve met the Princess and I’m pretty sure neither of them would approve your rude attitude.” “As if the Princess would ever met a country mare as yourself,” Blueblood said dismissively as Shoeshine inhaled slowly. Breath Shoeshine, she told herself as Screw Loose watched warily, don’t murder the stallion. That’d be a bad look and there’s too many witnesses here. “I’m the Element of Honesty so don’t try me boy. I have met Princess Celestia countless times and I work closely with her daughter Sunset. So yeah, I can confirm neither of them would approve of your attitude and Sunset has told me about you. Sunset despises you and I can see why. You’re rude, stuck up, elitist and a pain in my flank.” Some of the ponies gasped as Blueblood turned red and Shoeshine watched him as she shifted her body weight and he paused nervously. Shoeshine seemed to have a lot more muscle than he did and seemed more stronger than he was. This stallion is even more annoying than Twilight Twinkle is, Shoeshine rolled her eyes as she mused to herself. “Well Sunset isn’t really family so.” “What?” Shoeshine demanded as Screw Loose growled. “She’s adopted so shes not family nor is she my blood. Therefore she has no proper position in the royal hierarchy,” Blueblood explained as Shoeshine bit back a rude remark. “That’s not how it works actually. The Princess adopted Sunset therefore making her just as much family as Princess Luna, whether you like it or not. Plus, the courts legally recognize her adoption and she does technically have a role in the Equestrian as Ponyville’s representative so maybe get your facts straight before running your big ass mouth,” Shoeshine suggested as she gave him an unimpressed look and the ponies around them gasped once again as Screw Loose started scratching her ear with a hindleg. Shoeshine wasn’t entirely sure how her sister managed that one but she didn’t really want to know. She learned some questions are better left unsaid. The fact that he was related to Celestia was mind-blowing to the mare having met Sunset and being the unicorns friend. Sunset wasn’t even like this before she became friends with the other girls. “This conversation is boring me and I must go find better ponies to conversate with. Like Jet Set or maybe Fancy Pants if he and Fleur are in attendance this year. Sunset may be annoying and an orphan, but even she knows to not associate with the likes of you two,” Blueblood proclaimed as Shoeshine felt her blood start to boil again as she forced herself to breath in and out. She jumped as Blueblood’s tail accidentally knocked a wine glass onto her mane, painting her light blue mane red as she glared angrily. She was internally grateful none of it got on her dress otherwise she’d be even more furious than she currently was. “And take that dog away from the castle,” Blueblood called out as Shoeshine let out an unponylike snarl. Blueblood gave her a wary look as Shoeshine exhaled and exploded. Blueblood gave a scream as Shoeshine tackled him.
TheKing2001
550674
9
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
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21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-17T10:12:02+00:00
2024-02-17T11:14:19+00:00
112
Silverspeed trotted into another room as she set down her wine glass to refill it as her ears flicked as she listened to sudden terrified screaming and a table falling over followed by shattering glass. The scream sounded honestly like a female getting ran over by a train or a stallion, she didn’t decide which yet. “What the buck was that?” Silverspeed demanded as she felt her wings flare out. “And why do I feel like I’m in heat all the sudden?” “Guards!” Somepony screamed as Silverspeed examined the drink Trixie had given her before they left and she read the words “Trixie’s Magic Sex Drug Laced Potion To Get Her Turned On.” “Oh that would explain it,” Silverspeed mused as she threw it away. “That would explain why Trixie suddenly was frantically looking under us all for a bottle. Anyways, time to go see why there’s a lot of screaming suddenly.” Silverspeed forced her wings closed as she trotted after a few running Royal Guards and paused in time as Blueblood and Shoeshine rolled across the floor as Blueblood continued his feminine screaming. “Never knew a stallion could produce a sound like that,” Silverspeed commented with a smile as Shoeshine punched him in the gut and looked up at her friend. “Hey.” “Hello. Care to tell me why you’re beating up Prince Blueblood?” “He spilled wine on my mane. Oh and he’s a rude bitch to my sister and Sunset and a cunt in general,” Shoeshine explained as she punched him again until two guards yanked her off him. “Hey! I’m not done yet!” “Yeah you are. Now come on,” the guard tugged on her as Screw Loose barked as another placed Shoeshine in cuffs. “Is that seriously necessary? Did you see what started it?” Silverspeed commented as the two Guards hesitated. “Well, no but...” “My friend here said he was berating her and also got wine on her mane. It’s red right now instead of it’s normal light blue so technically that’s assault on his part if he did it on purpose,” Silverspeed commented as she circled the pair. “So why not arrest him too?” “Because I wasn’t fighting back! Arrest this pyscho!” “You shut up. I’m not talking to you,” Silverspeed snapped as she rolled her eyes. “End of the day, just either arrest both for creating a public scene or let her go.” “I- I don’t know,” the other Guard muttered as he scratched his mane. “We can let you go this once I suppose but don’t do it again. Next time, I will take you to jail. Am I clear?” “Yes sir,” Shoeshine nodded as Blueblood glared as her cuffs were taken off. “Let’s get the heck outta here and go find Sunset. Might be talking to her mom.” The two hastily left the room before the guards could change their mind as Shoeshine sniffed the air and gave Silverspeed a wary look. “Why do you smell like you’re in heat?” Shoeshine asked as Silverspeed trotted to a nearby trash can, digging out the bottle and tossed it to Shoeshine. “Ew. Trixie’s Magic Sex Drug Laced Potion To Get Her Turned On. Why do you have this?” “Trixie accidentally gave me it when we left Ponyville. She meant to have gave me the bottle of whiskey she had hidden in her bag. Why does Trixie have one is a better question,” Silverspeed commented as she examined Shoeshine head to hooves. “Have I ever told you that you look hot?” “Easy there Casanova,” Shoeshine snickered and gently pushed Silverspeed away. “I’m not really into mares. But thanks for the compliment, I appreciate it. I wanna find Trixie and ask her questions because I’m curious as buck about why she has one.” After what seemed like forever, the two found Sunset, Trixie and Raindrops in the garden talking as Sunset tossed a empty bag into a trash can. “Four points,” Sunset said as Shoeshine and Silverspeed approached from behind as Sunset sniffed the air. “Why does it smell weird all the sudden?” “Yeah that’s me,” Silverspeed said sheepishly as she stopped next to the three. “Trixie, what the hell did you put in this potion?” Silverspeed tossed the bottle on the ground as Trixie turned red and picked it up. “So you’re the one Trixie accidentally gave her potion to. Just an aphrodisiac because Trixie had hoped to get laid tonight but well, she doesn’t think that’s gonna happen tonight,” Trixie sighed as the others blushed and Trixie rolled her eyes. “Oh that’s uh a bit more information than I had intended to know,” Sunset muttered as Raindrops snickered into a hoof. “Yeah me too but with Trixie, I’m used to her oversharing a lot. She’s quite open about her life like that,” the jasmine pegasus commented with a shrug. “You get used to it.” “Well, that could still happen,” Silverspeed said as she placed a wing over Trixie’s back. “I’d never really sleep with a friend but well, I’m really drunk right now so.” “Oh boy here we go,” Shoeshine muttered as she sat down on a bench. “Hey, have you girls seen Roseluck?” “Let me out!” Roseluck wailed as she slammed her hooves on the cell bars of the drunk tank she and a few other drunk ponies the royal guards had arrested for public intoxication. “I’m too young to go to jail!” “Lady, you were rolling around drunk off your plot in the royal garden and got seen peeing on a tree,” a bored looking guard said as he put down his book. “You’re not getting out till somepony comes to get you out so please quit screaming. You’re giving me a migraine.” “Let me the fuck out!” “Oh my days,” the guard slammed his head against the desk. “You’re not even going to jail, once you sober up or a friend comes to get you is when you can leave. Kay?” “Let me out now!” Roseluck screamed as she kicked the bars. “Ow!” “No, I haven’t,” Sunset answered with a shrug. “She’s probably out with Derpy or something.” “I hope so. I haven’t seen either of them in four hours and we’re all supposed to meet up at that donut shop you said was in town,” Shoeshine said as she looked around. “What do you think Derpy is up too?” “What is this?” Derpy asked as she poked a blue glowing ball of electricity and her hair stuck up. “Ooh tingly.” “That is an electricity experiment I was working on to see if lightning could be used to power homes instead of magic but alas it is not going well,” Time Turner explained as he showed Derpy around his lab in Canterlot under the castle. “Princess Celestia allowed me to have an under ground lab so she can thoroughly examine my work. She surprisingly cares about her ponies a lot.” “That’s cool. You travel a lot?” “Oh yes. I’ve traveled all over Equestria and beyond,” Time explained as Derpy tilted her head. “What’s beyond Equestria?” “A lot. I’ll tell you one day.” Derpy gave a nod as she stepped away from the glowing ball and examined a fish tank with a dozen fish swimming around. “Pretty,” Derpy muttered as she walked around it. “I love fish.” “As do I.” “What kind of doctor are you? I thought you’d like work in a hospital or something,” Derpy said as she tore her gaze off the fish. “Doctor can mean lots of things. From scientist like myself to actual hospital staff. Now come dear Derpy. I want to show you my airplane sketches for this world!” Derpy rolled her eyes and smiled faintly as she galloped after him. “Last time I saw Roseluck was introducing Derpy to some stallion,” Raindrops said as she glanced at Trixie sitting with Silverspeed. “Get a room already.” “We’re not doing anything!” Silverspeed protested as she removed her wing. “We’re literally just sitting here.” “Bullshit,” Shoeshine snorted and grinned. “I saw that hoof moving.” “It was not for that!” “And the sky is purple,” Sunset snarked as Silverspeed groaned. “Don’t make me come over there and try to screw you three too,” Silverspeed threatened as the mares eyes widened. “I’m drunk off my ass and fucking Trixie gave me a aphrodisiac!” Sunset and the other two bit back laughter as Trixie looked away sheepishly. “My room is still in the castle if you and Trixie want some alone time,” Sunset commented casually as Silverspeed glared at her. “I know where you sleep,” Silverspeed grumbled as Sunset smirked. “What, you gonna try to fuck me too?” Trixie laughed as Shoeshine and Raindrops giggled as Silverspeed turned red. “I’m going to murder all of you,” Silverspeed muttered. “Honestly, why am I your friend?” “Because you love us,” Shoeshine quipped as she kissed Silverspeed’s cheek and burst out laughing. “I guess Silverspeed gets homiesexual once she’s drunk.” “What the hell does that mean?” “It means you get very hoovsy with your friends,” Trixie explained with a smirk. “Sorry for mixing up the drinks accidentally. Trixie’s fault.” “You’re damn right it is!” “Trixie said sorry!” “Oh buck me,” Silverspeed muttered as she shifted her body weight. “This is the worst experience of my life. And I thought the time I broke my wing was bad.” “Here, let’s go get water,” Trixie said as Silverspeed grumbled curse words as she followed her away. “Bye!” Raindrops called out with a wave as she snickered. “Thank Celestia I haven’t met Blueblood tonight,” Sunset said with a sigh as Shoeshine rolled her eyes. “I did. Silverspeed interrupted me beating him up and I almost got arrested.” “You did what?” Sunset shouted as the other two remaining mares cringed. “Oh my stars. Mom is gonna kill me so fast when she finds out.” “He was being rude, spilled wine on me, called my sister a dog,” Shoeshine explained as she pointed a hoof at Screw Loose rolling in the dirt. “Insulted you too. Naturally I had to do something.” “Makes sense. He’s a rude bitch,” Sunset said as she finished hyperventilating. “Let’s go find Derpy and get outta here before mom comes to hunt us down.” Silverspeed and Trixie laid on the bed of a room they had found as they sighed as Silverspeed wiped some sweat off her mane. “Hey Trixie,” Silverspeed said as Trixie drank from a nearby water bottle. “Before we leave to find our friends, just one thing.” “Yes?” “We are never speaking of this again,” Silverspeed said as she looked at Trixie. “And I mean it.” “Deal.”
TheKing2001
550674
10
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
complete
21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-18T07:41:54+00:00
2024-02-18T07:41:53+00:00
119
Roseluck scrunched her muzzle up in disgust as a mare threw up into a toilet in the corner of the drunk tank she was stuck in. “What time is it?” Roseluck asked tiredly as she looked away from the mare quickly. “About one am,” the guard answered without looking up from his book. “Joy. How long have I been in this hellhole?” “About two hours, give or take.” “I want out now,” Roseluck demanded as she rattled the bars angrily. “No.” Roseluck glared at him as she back on the bench. “What’s that saying that green unicorn is always saying? Oh yeah. If I had fingers, I’d be showing you one!” Roseluck screamed as she shook a hoof angrily. “What’s a finger?” “Look it up dummy!” A drunk mare shouted as Berry Punch sat next to Roseluck. “Ay, Rosie. Didn’t know you were in here with me. How’s it hanging?” “Pratty shit. What are you here for?” “Public intoxication. Came to see Minuette but she was busy with her friends allegedly so I got drunk. Don’t be like Berry and get depressed drunk,” Berry sighed as she kicked her hindlegs back and forth. Roseluck hugged the mare as a amber unicorn trotted into the room with a guard. “Sunset!” Roseluck shot to her hooves as Sunset sighed. “You here for her?” The guard at the desk asked. “Yep,” Sunset sighed as she levitated a pen and signed the paperwork. “Me too?” Berry said hopefully as she joined Roseluck at the bars. “Please? I gotta get home to Ruby.” Sunset paused and examined the mare who looked on the verge of tears as Sunset rolled her eyes. “Yeah Berry is with me too. Both of em are,” Sunset answered as the guard unlocked the door. “Let’s go you two. The others are waiting for us at a donut shop.” Roseluck and Berry stumbled out of the cell as Sunset caught them both in her magic as the guard locked the cell behind them. “You two smell awful,” Sunset grumbled as she levitated the two behind her. “Probably drank all the alcohol in Canterlot.” “Damn right!” Berry cheered as Sunset kept her straight. “I wasn’t even here for the Gala but Minuette abandoned me. No bucking surprise there. Ungrateful little bi-” “Berry!” The three looked back as a blue unicorn came galloping up panting as Berry gave her a flat look. “What do you want Minuette?” Berry snapped as Minuette gave her a confused look. “I was looking for you. But uh why are you with Sunset Shimmer?” Minuette asked as she pointed a hoof. She admittedly didn’t have that many good memories of the unicorn so she was a bit nervous seeing Sunset again. “With my friends. At least Sunset bailed me outta jail. Unlike you who decided her marefriend and the plans she made with her wasn’t important. Apparently your friends are more important than me and our daughter,” Berry glared as she swayed and Sunset gave Roseluck a nervous look. “I had to make sure Twinkleshine and Lemon Hearts got home safe. You know how much they are afraid of the dark.” “Because Moondancer or Lyra or Twilight couldn’t have done that, right?” Berry shot back as Roseluck and Sunset backed away nervously. “Today was our anniversary. You left me waiting for an hour at a restaurant I specifically reserved for us. I was embarrassed. I spent almost damn near all my bits on tonight, even paying Junebug to watch over Ruby for me. And you couldn’t even show up.” “This is awkward,” Roseluck whispered as Sunset nodded her agreement. “You said it sister.” “Berry-” Minuette started as she held out a hoof and Berry spun around. “Don’t come home tonight,” Berry said as she flicked her tail and trotted away. “Let’s go. This mare needs more alcohol.” “I think you’ve had enough,” Sunset interjected as she narrowly avoided Berry throwing up. “Ew!” “Sorry,” Berry muttered as she dragged a protesting Sunset and Roseluck along, leaving behind a stunned Minuette. “Where are they?” Trixie demanded as she ate another donut. “Trixie is bored!” “They’ll be here. Sunset apparently found out Roseluck got arrested so she’s bailing her out,” Shoeshine answered as Silverspeed wiped her makeup off with a napkin. “Sweet Celestia,” Derpy muttered as she stared at the table. “I should have stayed with her and not with her cousin.” “Well, she did encourage you to hang out with him,” Silverspeed commented as she smiled slyly. “And based how you’ve been talking about him the past hour, seems to me you quite like him.” Derpy blushed as the others laughed quietly as Raindrops drank from a hot chocolate mug. “I don’t know what you’re talking about,” Derpy said as she hastily bit a donut. “I have my daughters, I don’t have time for dating stallions girls.” “Berry Punch has a daughter and is dating,” Trixie pointed out. “They make it work.” “I know but they’ve known each other for a while. I just met Time Turner so we will see. But if my daughters don’t like him, then I say no,” Derpy stated as she pressed a hoof on the table. “And that’s final.” The five looked at each other and nodded. When Sunset isn’t around, what Derpy says goes. Trixie had started the vote of Derpy becoming the group second in command in Sunset’s absence which the pegasus had argued had for hours against before reluctantly agreeing. Silverspeed had agreed mainly because Derpy already acted as the group mom. Sunset had reluctantly accepted being the group leader as well after Trixie yet again brought it up, unanimously being voted. “Hey,” Sunset pushed open the doors to Donut Joe’s as she trotted to the table with a drunk Roseluck and Berry giggling behind her. “Found Roseluck and her friend. She was screaming at a guard in an attempt to get out.” Derpy and the others raises eyebrows as Roseluck sat down with Sunset and Berry as Screw Loose licked Roseluck’s cheek. “Thank the stars mom hasn’t shown up,” Sunset grumbled as she levitated a glazed donut up to her mouth and opened her mouth. “This is the worst Gala ever. We most definitely ruined this year’s Gala. Shoeshine fighting Blueblood, Roseluck got arrested, Trixie accidentally starting a riot, me getting into a verbal fight with Twilight and-” “Oh I wouldn’t say that,” Celestia said behind them as they spun around and stared to bow as Celestia stopped them with a hoof. “No need for that my little ponies.” “What do you mean? This Gala was awful!” Sunset said as Celestia sat next to her. “We definitely ruined it.” “Sunset, the Gala is always awful,” Celestia chuckled as the others gave her confused looks. “Wait what?” Roseluck said as she lifted her head and Berry handed her a water. “Thanks. How is it always awful?” “The same stuffy nobles trying to gain favor every year, Blueblood being annoying, me getting bored every year. I invited you and your friends to liven things up a bit and well, you didn’t disappoint. And I did hear about a certain fight with my nephew,” Celestia said as Shoeshine blushed and sheepishly looked away. “Yeah sorry about that. I may have over reacted a tad,” Shoeshine admitted. “A tad is an understatement,” Silverspeed snarked as Celestia shot her a smirk. “I’d be careful. Some maids were telling me about hearing an odd amount of moaning and cursing coming from a bedroom,” Celestia said casually as Silverspeed turned bright red. “I have no idea what you’re talking about.” “Uh huh.” “So why not just tell us to liven things up?” Sunset asked as Celestia bit a donut. “Might have made that a bit easier.” “What’s the fun in just telling you? This is more entertaining for me and you know I’m always a bit secretive,” Celestia explained. “Now shush and enjoy your donuts. And I expect a letter from you when you get to Ponyville what you learned about friendship tonight.” “Yes Princess,” Sunset bowed her head slightly. “Hey, we’re friends?” “Yeah,” Berry shrugged as she laid on the floor. “You got me outta jail so thanks for that. Anypony who does that is immediately my friend. Anything you need, I’m here for you. Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.” With a faint smile, Sunset turned to the rest of her friends and mentor to finish talking about the rest of their nights.
TheKing2001
550674
11
Derpy Hooves,Other,Roseluck,Sunset Shimmer,Trixie,Alternate Universe,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity
The Ticket Master
When given tickets to the Grand Galloping Gala, Sunset is less than enthused and tries to convince her friends not to go.
complete
21
0
<p>After the events of the Summer Sun Celebration, Sunset is adjusting fairly well to Ponyville life. Somethings are way more difficult to get used to than she originally thought but has her friends. When Sunset is given six tickets to the grand galloping gala, she is less than enthused but her friends don't understand why she hates the gala but will quickly find out why.</p>
teen
2024-02-19T05:41:53+00:00
2024-02-19T06:42:50+00:00
92
“Dear Princess Celestia,” Sunset said aloud as she sat tucked under a tree on a nearby hill overlooking Ponyville as she tapped a quill against her chin. “I learned a lot this week about friendship. Sometimes actions speak louder than words and a kind act like bailing somepony out of jail or helping a homeless pony can make you a friend you never even expected you’d be friends with. Those friends can sometimes help you learn more about yourself. Your faithful student, Sunset Shimmer.” Sunset shot the scroll with her horn and watched it disappear in a blue cloud of smoke. “Sunset! You coming?” Roseluck shouted up at the mare as Sunset glanced down the hill at her friends waiting patiently minus Trixie who was staring impatiently at Sunset, tapping her hoof on the ground. “Yeah I’m coming!” Minuette inhaled as she stopped at a rundown house before knocking gently on the door. “Coming!” Ruby called out as a faint smile crossed Minuette’s face. The door opened and Minuette stared down at the small unicorn filly staring back at her. “Oh it’s you. Hang on. Mommy! Mom’s here!” Minuette patiently and nervously waited as Berry appeared in front of her. “Ruby, go to your room,” Berry steered Ruby back inside as she gave Minuette an unimpressed look. The two waited as Ruby trotted further into the house. “I thought I said not to-” “I didn’t forget.” “What?” Berry and Minuette stared at each other as Minuette inhaled. “Our anniversary. I didn’t forget and I lied about where I was.” “So you were cheating on me. That’s even better,” Berry scoffed and turned to enter her house as she glowed a light blue as Minuette stopped her. “Celestia, no! What kind of pony do you think I am? I despise cheaters especially after Twinkleshine got cheated on that one time,” Minuette snapped as Berry turned back and looked away for a second. “That was a bit rude of me, yeah. Sorry.” “A bit?” “Okay, a lot,” Berry corrected as she rolled her eyes. “But where in Equestria were you then?” “I was trying to get your gift. The place I had spent all my bits on burnt down over the weekend and I spent thirty minutes trying to barter with the owner to give me at least half my bits back so I could buy you something nice but he refused,” Minuette answered as she sighed. “So I had to hurry over to Lemon Hearts because her dragonfriend is good at framing pictures. By the time I looked at the clock, it was well past the time I was supposed to meet you at the restaurant. But you weren’t there so I searched all over Canterlot for hours. So here.” Minuette levitated a present with blue wrapping and a matching bow with toothbrushes on it in front of Berry as Berry stared at it. “Open it,” Minuette gestured as Berry bit the bow and opened it, staring down at picture of the two smiling with Ruby on Minuette’s back. “I remember this,” Berry said finally as she picked up the picture. “That was the first time Ruby had ever called you mom.” “Mhm. So no I didn’t stand you up.” “Okay,” Berry said as she balanced the picture on her shelf inside next to the door. “But why the hay didn’t you tell me that the other night?” “Well, for starters you were drunk and shouting at me in the street,” Minuette answered as she gave Berry a flat look. “And you wouldn’t give me a chance to speak. And secondly, you took off down the street with Sunset Shimmer and Roseluck before I could even explain my side. So I didn’t really get a chance to tell you anything.” “That did happen as well. Sorry,” Berry rubbed the back of her head before spinning around and galloping inside. “Well, that relationship is dead apparently,” Minuette sighed and turned to leave as Berry returned. “Here,” Berry said as she tossed Minuette a key. “A key?” Minuette said as she examined in in confusion. “Uh thanks? What am I supposed to do with a key?” “What do you think? It’s a key to the house. I’m asking you to move in dummy,” Berry commented with a smirk as she tapped Minuette’s head with a hoof. “And you’re supposed to be the smart one.” “You actually want me to move in?” “Duh. I gave you it, didn’t I?” Berry snarked as Minuette stared with wide eyes. “You’re good with my daughter and I had already talked it over with her last week. I was going to give you the key at dinner but well, ya know.” “Yes,” Minuette flung her forelegs around Berry’s neck and sighed. “It’ll take a while. Gotta sell a lot of my stuff because it can’t fit in here unfortunately.” “Or you can just buy a storage unit,” Berry said as she glanced back at her small two bedroom house. “I wish I had a bigger house but these are the cards I was dealt. Always kinda wondered if you would have been a better mom for Ruby instead of me.” “Don’t talk like that. You know I hate when you talk like that,” Minuette said sternly as she pressed a hoof to Berry’s mouth. “You’re a damn good mom. You and Derpy both remind me of my parents and if they were still alive today, Celestia rest my parents souls, they’d be saying the same damn thing. Am I clear?” Berry nodded and Minuette removed her hoof. “And I guess I could get a storage unit. Most of my belongings were passed down by my parents,” Minuette mused. “Exactly now come inside to bed,” Berry said as she started tugging on Minuette with a grin. “Ruby is home. We can’t,” Minuette responded as Berry rolled her eyes. “Ruby Pinch! Go see if Pipsqueak and Sweetie Belle can play with you for a few hours.” “Yes mommy!” Ruby called as she galloped out the door, only pausing fo hug the mares before running away as Berry slammed the door shut. “So we have the house to ourselves,” Berry commented with a smirk as Minuette rolled her eyes. “Yes, we do. Still dating?” Berry hugged Minuette and nodded. “Still dating.”
Crimson Enjoyer
550678
1
Pinkie Pie,Twilight Sparkle,Dark,Romance,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
We Could Build An Island
Twilight and Pinkie are stuck living on a boat in the middle of the sea.
incomplete
-1
-1
<p>For several months, Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie have been lost at sea, living on a wooden ship. As they try to hold on to themselves, they start to realize, confront, and confess specific feelings they've had about each other.<br/>Will something good come out of these feelings? Will they ever make it back home and see their friends and family? And just how did they get into this predicament in the first place?</p><hr/><p>This is a TwiPie ship fic, obviously. Future chapters will justify the T rating, i'm just putting it there now for convenience.</p><p>Cover art is an edit of a piece by Sushi Roll on twitter <a href="https://twitter.com/mirta_sfw" rel="nofollow">https://twitter.com/mirta_sfw</a> go follow her</p>
teen
2024-02-02T00:14:36+00:00
2024-02-02T00:14:35+00:00
150
“Checkmate!” She’s so confident in what she says. So delighted. How she’s managed to stay so upbeat in spite of everything, I couldn’t tell you. “That was a checkmate, right?” she asks, as the floor beneath us raises slightly. I give her a reassuring smile. “No, Pinkie. That was not a checkmate. Sorry.” “What?!” She seems more genuinely confused than upset, which is good, as I’ve been doing my best to avoid making her upset. “But my little guy-“ “Pawn.” “Whatever- is right in front of the King! That means checkmate, doesn’t it?” “That’s the Queen, Pinkie.” My Pink opponent glances at the offending pieces, and realizes her error. “Oh,” she says flatly, slumping her shoulders. I begin to worry, but before I can offer some sort of comfort, she perks right back up. “Oh well! Ya can’t win ‘em all! And look,” She points a hoof at her own King, which is completely exposed, my last knight standing very close. “Looks like you’ve got an opening!” Not sure what to say or even what expression to make, I light up my horn, and envelope the knight in my magic. I lift it up, move it to her King, and boom. Checkmate. “Hooray!” She stands upright on her chair, forelegs in the air. “Twilight Sparkle holds her title as the best Chess player in the seven seas!” I feel an earnest smile form on my lips. If Pinkie Pie wasn’t here, I’m not sure I would have made it this far. The wind rustles through my mane, as I stand on the deck, waiting for Pinkie to finish setting everything up. It’s chilly, but not unbearably so. The Tattered Scarf around my neck is keeping me warm, if quite a bit itchy. I look over at the other mare, watching as she fiddles with the rope, and I take note of her lack of winter gear. She had given the scarf to me at the beginning during a particularly cold afternoon, a very noble gesture that unfortunately left her a bit more exposed to the elements. It’s a real shame we couldn’t have brought along our winter clothes. She always looks really cute in that jacket and beanie. Oh, and they also would have kept us warm. That too. “Done!” She exclaims from nearby, trotting over with a large burlap sack in her mouth, and a rope over her back. “You ready?” I turn my gaze over to a small bucket to my right, and then to the open waters. Closing my eyes, I light up my horn, and lift a small plastic fish out of the bucket. I Begin to cast the spell, putting all my focus into it. After a few brief seconds, I open my eyes again. The Fake sea animal now has a noticeable glow to it, and thin white strip of light connecting it to my horn. I step forward to the edge and lower the piece of plastic into the ocean, I keep lowering it until I reach the right spot. And then I wait. After a few seconds, I begin to feel pressure building over the bait from all around, slowly but surely. It’s getting heavier, but I can still hold on to it. More seconds pass, and I now feel it has reached an acceptable weight. Straining a bit, I throw my head into the air, and lift the bait back to the surface. Grouped all around the small artificial fish is an entire schools worth of trout, magnetized to it, flopping in place and spraying water all over the deck. “Now, Pinkie,” I all but shout, a bead of sweat rolling down my head from the sheer weight of what my magic is holding. The Pink Pony leaps into the air, sack held open in both hooves. She entraps the aquatic critters into the burlap, and lands back on deck, swiftly pulling the rope from her and tying it around the opening. She excitedly holds the bag up, as if showing off her own big catch. “Look at our haul! This is gonna last us the week, at least!” This is what our lives have been like for the past four months on this Chronos-Forsaken boat. Fish, and Chess. There is actual food stored in the cabin, but we’ve been savoring it, so about three times a week, we come out to the deck, and “go fishing,” so to speak. I was never big on fish. Bear food as far as I was concerned. But it’s been growing on me, though maybe it’s just some weird food-version of Hockholm Syndrome. Pinkie seems to like the fish just fine, though I can pretty easily tell that she’d much rather be eating cupcakes, or pancakes, or cupcakes baked inside of a pancake. Hmm. That sounds disgusting, but I bet she would love it. Heck, I’d probably eat something like that if it meant a break from the fish. I’ve been saying fish a lot, haven’t I? Anyways, the boat also happened to have a Chess set, and so, to stay occupied and to keep our minds from drifting to other, less pleasant topics, I began teaching Pinkie how to play. She actually picked up it pretty quickly, even if she never refers to the pieces by their actual names, and has still only beaten me 2 times out of... Huh. Guess I stopped keeping track at some point. Something has been bothering me though. I was a bit too tired for it to really register with me last night, but Pinkie mistaking the Queen for the King seems a bit…odd. That mare is a lot of things, but she isn’t stupid, nor is she forgetful. Also, she called it the King. She usually calls the King and the Queen something silly like “wizard tower” and “fancy toilet”. Maybe I’m just being me, and looking too deeply into things, but I’m starting to worry about her. Sitting at the table, I look up from my plate, with a single, barely eaten trout on it, to the pony sitting opposite of me. Currently, she is eating her trout as if it were a corn on the cob. For a while, I simply stare at the way she munches on the seafood, listening to the little noises she makes whenever she’s chewing. Some may see others eating the way she does and be grossed out, but I personally find it endearing. I might be biased though. “Twi, you’re staring at me again.” Pinkie breaks me out of my thoughts, and I zone back in, shaking my head a little. “Uh, sorry Pinkie, I-wait…again?” “You’ve done it a couple times.” I notice she’s beginning to blush. “N-not that I mind, ya know,” she adds, laughing somewhat tensely... “I…see.” I feel a blush of my own, as I avoid eye contact. There’s a brief moment of near complete silence, which Pinkie once again breaks: “WELL GOODNIGHT!” Before I can say anything, the pink pony has already bolted out of her seat and into the hallway. I hear the door to her quarters slam shut. “…………..Good night.” I look at where she was sitting seconds ago. She didn’t even finish eating her fish. Guess I’m on dish duty tonight. I change position for probably the thirtieth time. I’ve been in bed for 2 hours now, and I don’t feel tired at all. I stare up at the ceiling. It’s too dark for me to really see any of its details. I breathe a large, but quiet sigh, pick up my scarf, and get out of bed. Stepping out of my quarters and into the hallway, I notice Pinkie’s door is slightly open. I peer inside, and see that she is still there, sleeping soundly. She must have gotten up earlier and forgot to close it when she came back. Her snores are so quiet. Not at all what one would except from a pony like Pinkie. For a while, I just look at her. I look at her body rising and falling with each snore, she looks so unbothered. I wonder what she’s dreaming about. I then suddenly remember Pinkie’s comment from earlier, and I realize that not only am I staring at her again, but I’m also watching somepony sleep without their knowledge. I quickly take a step back, and close the door as quietly as possible. I continue walking down the hallway, passing through the cabin, and finally reaching the exit. I open the door and instantly feel the chill of the night on my coat. I step out onto the deck, and lift my head to look up at the night sky. There aren’t any more clouds, so I get to see the stars in their full glory. Sitting down on my plot, I turn my gaze over to the moon. Its continued presence has served as one of the few comforts I’ve had during this time. The fact that every day, the sun sets, and the moon rises, lets me know that at least one of them is still alive. As I continue to bask in the night’s beauty, I finally start to relax. My eyelids start to feel heavy. I fall asleep.
Crimson Enjoyer
550678
2
Pinkie Pie,Twilight Sparkle,Dark,Romance,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
We Could Build An Island
Twilight and Pinkie are stuck living on a boat in the middle of the sea.
incomplete
-1
-1
<p>For several months, Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie have been lost at sea, living on a wooden ship. As they try to hold on to themselves, they start to realize, confront, and confess specific feelings they've had about each other.<br/>Will something good come out of these feelings? Will they ever make it back home and see their friends and family? And just how did they get into this predicament in the first place?</p><hr/><p>This is a TwiPie ship fic, obviously. Future chapters will justify the T rating, i'm just putting it there now for convenience.</p><p>Cover art is an edit of a piece by Sushi Roll on twitter <a href="https://twitter.com/mirta_sfw" rel="nofollow">https://twitter.com/mirta_sfw</a> go follow her</p>
teen
2024-02-06T22:48:59+00:00
2024-02-07T00:22:55+00:00
70
A lot of ponies really hate the cold, which I totally get, but I like the cold. And also the warm. And the medium! But for the past four months, it’s just been the cold. Even when I go inside where it’s supposed to be warm it’s really just medium. At least, it was medium like, five minutes ago when I was still in dreamland. But then all of a sudden it’s really, REALLY cold, so cold that it wakes me up! Doesn’t the cold know how rude it is to wake a pony up so late at night? Though…if I’m being honest, I’m not too upset about being woken up. Dreamland hasn’t been a very nice place as of late. …Anyway! I hop outta bed to make my way to the cabin. This sudden chill can only have one explanation: Somepony left the front door open! I hope it wasn’t me… I really thought I was over my sleeptrotting phase. I’ve reached the main room, and it would seem my suspicions were sure as stone. I go to correct this blunder (Twilight taught me that word!), but when I look outside, my eyes catch a most curious sight: Lying down on the deck, all curled up into herself, is a certain lavender Unicorn-magically-transformed-by-Princess-Celestia-into-an-Alicorn princess. At least, I think she’s still a princess, I’m not really sure how that works. I then hear what can only possibly be the sounds of a snoring Twilight Sparkle. What’s she doing sleep out here on the deck? Wait…was she sleeptrotting? Is sleeptrotting contagious?! No, wait, it looks like she has her scarf on, she must have been awake when she came out here. I tip-hoof towards her, quieter than a sleeping Fluttershy, so I can wake her up and she can go back to her nice warm bed. I circle around her and almost stretch out a hoof to poke her head, but then, I look at her face. She snores a few more times, before burying her face a bit more into her forelegs, an obvious smile on her face. Gosh, she has such a pretty smile. She looks so peaceful, I can’t wake her up now! Still, it is pretty cold. I then get a genius idea. Carefully, more carefully than Fluttershy pulling a thorn out of a puppy’s paw, I drape the green blanket over Twilight’s body. Now, it’s time for the moment of truth: Picking the grey blanket in my mouth, I gently lower myself until I’m loafing* right next to her, and I fling the blanket onto my back. While I get comfortable, I look at Twilight again. I shift my horsey-body until it’s touching hers. Or, well, at least, our blankets are touching. She then starts to stir and groan slightly, and now I’m panicking, because oh gosh I woke her up by sitting too close and she’s gonna see what I was doing and think that I’m super weird and she’s gonna be real tired so she’ll be extra angry at me and- Instead of anything like that, her stirring ends with her head now resting against my blanketed foreleg. To the outside observer, I am totally calm, because why wouldn’t I be? In my head, however: ohmygoshohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh she’s using me as a head rest we’re basically cuddling- Be cool, Pinkaminae. As far she’s concerned, it’s just two close friends being very friendly and comfortable with each other. Doesn’t need to be anything more than that, no siree. Although…..this does feel super nice. I take another look at her. A perfect comfortable smile on her perfect muzzle as she lays her perfect head on my leg. Her mouth opens very slightly and soft snores come out. Yup, she’s still a princess.
Crimson Enjoyer
550678
3
Pinkie Pie,Twilight Sparkle,Dark,Romance,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
We Could Build An Island
Twilight and Pinkie are stuck living on a boat in the middle of the sea.
incomplete
-1
-1
<p>For several months, Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie have been lost at sea, living on a wooden ship. As they try to hold on to themselves, they start to realize, confront, and confess specific feelings they've had about each other.<br/>Will something good come out of these feelings? Will they ever make it back home and see their friends and family? And just how did they get into this predicament in the first place?</p><hr/><p>This is a TwiPie ship fic, obviously. Future chapters will justify the T rating, i'm just putting it there now for convenience.</p><p>Cover art is an edit of a piece by Sushi Roll on twitter <a href="https://twitter.com/mirta_sfw" rel="nofollow">https://twitter.com/mirta_sfw</a> go follow her</p>
teen
2024-02-19T21:37:54+00:00
2024-02-19T21:37:53+00:00
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Ashes. There’s no more fire, there’s not even any smoke. Just, Ashes. Anything that was once a building, now nothing more than rubble. What were once vibrant forests of green, had now become long stretches of burnt wood, and dead grass. In the distance, I see the barren mountain that once held Canterlot Castle, nearly nothing of it remaining. I’m standing in the center of the town. Of what used to be the town. My body feels weightless. The silence is deafening. The only thing I can hear, are my own thoughts, jumbled and incoherent as they are. Why am I back here? HOW am I back here? Clip-clop. I’m not given much to figure out an answer, as a noise catches my ears. Clip-clop-clip-clop-clip-clop. Hoofsteps… “Is…is there someone there?” I call out, nervously. Clip-clop-clip-clop-clip-clop-clip. The steps are getting louder, faster. I can’t tell which direction it’s coming from…actually, it sounds like it’s coming from everywhere, somehow. It keeps getting faster. It keeps getting louder. I frantically glance at every direction, trying to see something, anything, while I stand in place, not sure if I should even move. The noises start to slow down, and now seem to focus on a single spot to my left. I turn my head to the spot, a dark bit of space between the remains of two buildings. A figure comes out of the darkness. A pony. Another set of hoofsteps, this time from the right. I avert my gaze from the individual to a tall pile of rubble. Another pony walks into view on top of it. More hoofsteps, and even more then. There are now ponies stepping into the light from every angle. All looking towards me. I now realize that I’m being cornered. As I gaze at the ponies circling me, I start to notice how they look. Their eyes are dull and colorless, their manes torn and disheveled, bodies covered in scars. Some of them are bleeding from their mouths, some from their eyes. Some have entire chunks of their flesh missing. “Why couldn’t you stop it?” one of them says. “Why did you leave us behind?” says another. I open my mouth, only to find myself unable to speak. They all start moving towards me. “You abandoned us.” “You left us all to die.” “Why didn’t you die too?” I try to back away from them, but my legs have stopped working. All I can do is look at them approaching, hear their scathing accusations and questions, as they keep getting closer. “You don’t deserve to be alive.” I try to close my eyes, but even that doesn’t work. I am completely paralyzed. I can only stand here, as they get closer, and closer, and- And then they stop. I wait for something to happen, for them to start moving again, when I hear something from below me. I look down, and see that suddenly, I’m standing in 2 feet of water. I lift my head back up. They’re all gone, and I’m not in the town anymore. I’m standing in a seemingly infinite ocean. I begin to sink into the water. Deeper and deeper, my body is submerged. I am still paralyzed, only able to lie still as I wait for the inevitable. But then, I see something, out in the distance. I can’t quite make it out, but it has an unmistakable pink glow to it. I can also see that it’s approaching, quickly. It’s arriving faster than I’m sinking. The closer it gets, the more I can make it out, but I’m still not sure what it is. It looks almost like… a star, not too dissimilar from the one adorning my flank. Averting my attention away from the strange entity, it comes to my attention that my head is the only part of my body not submerged in sea water. My focus is brought back to the entity when it begins to glow brighter, lighting my face and the surrounding area in pink. I no longer feel paralyzed. A shape starts to take form in its center, extending out towards me. It almost looks like…a foreleg, like it’s reaching out to me. Cautiously, I lift my hoof out of the water, and reach back to the entity, whose new found appendage extends even further seemingly in reaction. Right as my muzzle is submerged, our hooves touch. My eyes shoot open as I let out a quiet gasp. A dream. Just that, and nothing more. As I adjust myself back into my current surroundings, I take note of three things: One, I’m laying outside on the deck. Two, there’s a blanket draped over me, even though I don’t remember bringing one with me last night. And three…I’m not the only one laying here. To my right, Pinkie Pie is sleeping soundly in a similar position to mine, with a blanket of her own. I definitely don’t remember that from last night. I then also how notice how close she is to me. Were she any closer, our bodies would be pressed together. I’m not sure why, but that thought makes me feel a bit...flustered. Ignoring that for the time being, my mind goes to the obvious question: Why? I mean, it’s not like I mind…I don’t think, I mean, I don’t know? Whatever. Maybe she was having the same trouble getting to sleep I was, and had the same idea? I doubt it, she looked pretty restful when I peered into her door and watched her…. Boy, that sounds worse than it is. Perhaps her sleeptrotting had come back? Well, no, that wouldn’t explain me having a blanket… Once again, my thoughts are interrupted when she begins to stir. I guess I could just ask her. I watch as she comes to, her eyes fluttering open as she lets out a quick yawn. She groggily shifts her eyes around before they land on me. In an instant, her eyelids shoot open and her expression becomes unreadable. She blinks twice as if doing a double take. “Good morning, Pinkie.” I keep my expression friendly, luckily I don’t have to faker my smile. I seem to smile a lot when around her, at least in comparison to…any other time. She shakes her head, and looks at the scene before her, the two of us laying so close together out on the deck. Expression still non-existent, she begins to stare out into space. If I’m not mistaken, I think she’s starting to blush. “I-uh-ye-uuh…” She seems to be panicking slightly. I should try to calm her down. I should. But I have to admit….she’s pretty cute when she’s being awkward. I stand up from the floor, and stretch my back. “Thanks for the blankets, by the way,” I say, as I do some more early morning exercises. After a few more stretches, I turn my head back to her, and catch her staring before she looks away. She’s definitely blushing now. Part of me wants to say something like “Enjoying the show?” but the few remaining shreds of rationality in my brain convince me that might be a bit too mean. Actually, know that I think about…why am I doing this? This isn’t like me, I don’t go out of my way to make other ponies, especially my best friend, feel awkward. I cease my movements and chuckle sheepishly, rubbing the back of my head. “So, um…I guess we should…head back inside?” Right now, my average sized pony brain is a mess of incoherent thoughts, so please excuse me if this next part doesn’t make any sense: OhmygodohMyGOD why isn’t she upset with me is she upset with me and just pretending ohmyGOD she caught me looking at her BUTT wait is she embarrassed right now is that because of me did I make her embarrassed by looking at her butt just now is she self-conscious about her body I don’t know why she would be she’s freaking GORGEOUS wait a minute she said thanks for the blankets so she’s cool with it she doesn’t care that we slept togetherNO NOT SLEPT TOGETHER SLEPT NEXT TO EACH OTHER- “Pinkie?” Slightly startled, I look over at the pony who is currently causing my confused cranium’s catastrophic collapse. She looks concerned. I try to come up with a response, and eventually something comes out of my mouth. “Bwahuh?” Whatever that was seems to have only made her more concerned. “Are you ok?” she says. I put on the most real looking smile I can muster. “Of course I’m ok, silly!” I lie through my teeth, throwing as much cheer into my voice as possible. “What, um- why would you think I’m not? Hehehe…” For how cold it is, I seem to be sweating a lot. Twilight raises an eyebrow, and then sighs, before smiling at me. “If you say so, Pinkie. Come on, let’s head inside.” I’ll admit, just seeing her smile like that is enough to get me to calm down a bit. I get up from the floor and follow her into the cabin. I definitely do not stare directly at her flank as we’re walking because that we would be weird, nope that is not what I’m doing that all. Ok maybe I’m doing it a little. Don’t judge me. This day has been pretty standard fair, the only difference being a slight feeling of awkwardness around Pinkie Pie, owed of course to the very much not standard way the day began. Right now though, things are just kind of boring. Looking at the water can only stimulate someone for so long. Maybe I could ask Pinkie if she’s up for a game of Chess. Huh. Chess. Even that’s become boring to me, even if matches against Pinkie tend to be far more interesting than any other opponent I’ve had. Thinking about Pinkie leads to me to thinking about the day before, and her mixing up the two pieces during our previous match, and then later when she bolted into her room without even finishing her dinner. Between all that, and everything that had occurred this morning, I feel the worry I’ve been having about Pinkie starts to rise. Maybe it’s time I talk to her about it. Getting up from loafed position on the center of the deck, I head back to the cabin. When I open the door, I’m greeted by a rather bemusing sight. “I, King Chester, hereby do decree that all citizens may have free cake forever!!” The table was covered by what seemed to be the entire chess set minus the board, and, laying down on the table like a school filly reading a magazine, was Pinkie Pie, who was currently griping the King in her left hoof, and a gaggle of pawns in her right. “Yoohoo yeah alright! Free cake! Let’s hear it for King Chester,” she exclaimed while shaking the pawns around, as if they were a doll. “I would also like to state that- AAHHH!” Pinkie yelps when she finally notices me, throwing her hoofs into the air, and the pieces along with them. Acting on instinct, I flare up my horn and catch the airborne King and Pawns in my aura before they can land on the ground. Setting the pieces back on the table, I look back at Pinkie with a sheepish expression. “Sorry about that, hehe…should have knocked.” “Oh, that’s fine! I just get jumpy sometimes, ya know...heh.” The awkwardness from last night seems to have returned in full force, this time with even more intense blushing from the both of us. Eventually, Pinkie speaks up again, as she starts to climb off the table. “…Well, uh, I should probably-“ “No, wait!” I say a bit louder than probably necessary. Pinkie looks back at me with a startled but curious expression. My blush comes back because of my outburst, but I compose myself, and pick up the King piece in my magic, then float it over to Pinkie. “What…was it that King Chester was about to state?” This gets her to smile, a real, genuine smile. She takes the piece in both her hooves and holds it to her chest, looking down at it with a dopey grin. In almost no time at all, she’s right back where she was when I opened the door. I trot over to the table, and take a seat, resting my elbows on the table, as I look at her. For the next couple hours , I simply watch her as she uses the pieces to create an entire intricate story about cake taxes and mandatory partying laws, with surprisingly legally accurate court room scenes. In that time, I feel all the concern and awkwardness I’ve felt about this mare for the last several hours wash away, and be replaced with the admiration I’ve felt for her for a very long time. They really weren’t kiddin’ when they said “time flies when you’re having fun”. I’m not sure who “they” are, exactly, but they seem to say a lotta stuff. I think Twilight really liked my immersive Chess theater, she was smiling the whole time and she even did that super-adorable giggle she does sometimes! I wish it didn’t have to end it so soon, but even I’ve gotta get in my 8 hours. So after dinner (it was fish, again), we said our nighty-nights and headed to our rooms. Standing in the door way, I think back to the whole of today. It started out kinda awkward, but it looks like things are going back to norma- “Hey, um, Pinkie?” I look over at Twilight, who seems nervous about something…uh oh. Ok, don’t worry, Pinkie, maybe she just wants to ask me a favour. Maybe there’s a spider in her room, and she’s embarrassed because she’s afraid of spiders. Yeah, that seems plausible. “Yeah, Twi?” “Do you think that…we could…maybe…sleep next to each other again….?” Is it just me, or did this boat suddenly get really warm? Yet again, my brain has become a jumbled mess of thought, this time so incomprehensible I can’t even make out any words. I then notice that I haven’t said anything for 13 seconds, and Twilight’s face goes from a nervous blush to disappointment. Oh no! She’s taking my stunned silence as a no! Come on, vocal chords! Work! “Ok,” I say with a smile. Twilight, in turn, gives me a nice toothy one. “So, uh… your room or mine?” Twi starts rubbing her leg, looking at the floor. “Well, if it’s Ok with you...I don’t think I want to sleep in my room tonight.” That’s a little weird. I wonder if there’s something wrong with the room. Maybe that’s why she went outside last night? Whatever the case, I give her a nod, and we both head in my room.
False Door
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Barrel Twins,Cutie Mark Crusaders,Original Character,Rainbow Dash,Porn,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity,Sex
Twintwined In Twincest and Twinbreeding
After an awkwardly intimate aerial training crash, the Barrel Twins get their cutie marks. Although they say they don't know what they mean, there's really only one explanation and it's going to be an adjustment.
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<p>Story commissioned by anonymous.</p><p>Wonderbolt hopefuls, Pickle and Barley get their cutie marks after sharing an accidental kiss. Their marks are identical and unlike any they or their mother have ever seen before, leaving them all very confused. After their hero Rainbow Dash steps in aided by the expertise of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, there's little mystery left regarding what they're supposed to do with their lives. At first the siblings are shocked and disappointed but Luckily their mother is there to awkwardly usher them into their new unconventional lifestyle.</p>
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2024-02-02T05:11:50+00:00
2024-02-02T22:42:53+00:00
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The cold settled fast in the evenings around Hope Hollow. It was a quirk of the area so well known to the locals that it had its own name, ‘evenset’. While most residents were inclined to close up shop early to get indoors, the town’s pegasi were never ones to complain about the cold. The Barrel Twins were no exception. The sky began to turn gold as the sun kissed the peaks of the distant mountains. Trees whipped and rustled as the pegasi siblings skimmed the green canopy of the old growth woods, kicking up a spiraling flurry of leaves in their wake. They traced a pair of wide semicircles before rejoining and shooting straight up in an arc side by side. Once at their zenith, they split apart again to descend in two lazy, ever widening helixes like a pair of feathers slowly rocking their way down to earth. At the ground their paths aligned for a wouldbe head on collision. they parachuted their wings outward, touching down on the clearing’s surface like ducks landing on a still pond. Their hooves skidded in the soil, leaving shallow plow marks behind. The twins slowed to a stop just inches apart, face to face with almost perfect synchronicity. Pickle exhaled in relief, and dropped to his haunches, internally celebrating their well executed maneuver. They’d messed up the end of that one before and it wasn’t pretty. “Alright, we have time for a couple more.” he declared emphatically. “Next we’re doing the cone twist down.” They’d blown the whole remainder of their after school time on aerial practice and now it was almost dinner time. They didn’t want to make their mom come looking for them again. “It’s my turn to pick,” whined Barley. “We’re not picking anymore, remember?” he explained haughtily. “This is our new training regimen that’s designed to prepare us for the Wonderbolts.” “Yeah but we already know cone twist down probably the best out of anything. Let’s do something new; we should push ourselves more.” Pickle put a hoof to his chin in thought. “Yeah, okay, fine.” he sighed. “You can pick one. Maybe we can rotate our routine for variety.” “Let’s do mirror maze,” she suggested. “Sure.” “But hang on a second,” grunted Barley, walking away. She grabbed her water bottle from off of the step platforms, tilted her head back and took a big swig. This secluded clearing was like their clubhouse, a space a ways from town that they’d claimed for themselves as a training camp. It did have a tiny fort with a sheet metal roof at the treeline but the grounds were mostly inhabited by serpentine course gates and other low altitude agility obstacles that they’d built just by copying designs they’d seen in photos from books and a Wonderbolts brochure that Rainbow Dash had left them. Everything was made out of logs, scraps from dumpster diving and wood stock of unknown ownership that they thought better to not ask about. The filly lined up on the runway blocks and turned expectantly to her brother. “Okay. Ready when you are.” Pickle trotted over and settled his hooves on the blocks right beside his sister, a little over one wingspan apart for them. He coiled up and began to count. “One… two… three! The two sprang into a gallop down the chalk lined runway and quickly flapped into the air. A moment later they had leveled off about the trees, staying shoulder to shoulder. Then they began their routine. It was called mirror maze because they were supposed to remain next to one another as each other's reflections through every turn like they were zooming through a maze of mirrors. They'd both memorized the route. It was mostly just a matter of timing to get their synchronization locked down. The two performed an s-bend where thet crossed their wings, bumped shoulders and wobbled. “Hey, you’re crowding me,” growled Pickle. “You’re crowding me,” she shot back with a huff. Pickle pushed back, nudging his sister off course. She overcorrected angrily coming back in. They collided once more, rougher this time, and lost altitude. Now unable to correct their flight path, they began to panic as they sank into the treetops. Their flailing limbs caught in the branches, sending them tumbling through the air. They screamed in unison as they exploded through the thick foliage, taking knicks and scrapes from unseen branches. Barley emerged first, somersaulting backwards on the ground till she came to a stop face up in the grass. Pickle landed off balance on his forelegs, skittering and stumbling forward till he tripped on his face and his lips connected roughly with something warm and soft. Stunned, Pickle laid there for a moment, wondering why his own heavy breaths seemed to be coming right back inside of him. The sensation on his lips wasn’t just soft and warm. It was wet too. He pushed up with a groan until his panting, wide-eyed sister came into focus beneath him. Disoriented and full of surging adrenaline, they just stared into each other while their brains caught up with the situation. “That was… stupid,” she breathed shakily. Reflexively he licked the bit of his sister’s saliva that lingered on his lips. Then, realizing it was weird, wiped his mouth with the back of his hoof. That was her lips… on his. Their lips touched and it wasn’t just a short little brush. They’d basically… accidentally… kissed. This was a revelation that they'd both made but in the moment it didn't feel as impactful or disgusting as they thought it should have. Too shaken by their tumble, it was just nice to know that they hadn't been seriously injured. “Are you gonna get off?” she murmured weakly. “Huh? Oh, yeah.” He groaned as he got to his hooves, an ache in his hind leg and a few stinging cuts on his underside. Barley snatched up her hat and pulled it back over her head though she remained sprawled out on her back. Suddenly she felt a strange buzzing in her flanks but before she could investigate, her attention turned to her brother who's own flank was… glowing with white light. Pickle looked back at himself and gasped with mouth agape. The strange light faded away, revealing a strange mark emblazoned upon him. He gasped again, eyes nearly exploding out of his head. “I- I got my- I got my-” “I got my cutie mark too,” shouted his sister in triumph, having shot to her dancing hooves. “Yeah!” They high hoofed and hugged, laughing in delirious elation. “What’s yours?” asked Pickle, craning his neck to see. She looked back at her own flank again for a closer inspection. “It looks like a barrel full of barley and… there's… a pickle in it?” “That's what mine is,” he blurted. “We got the same cutie mark?” They spun around to touch flanks and compare them side by side. It was true. They were like mirror images of the same mark. A standing wooden barrel filled with barley and a large pickle sticking out of the top like a flag on a sandcastle. “I’ve never heard of that before,” shrugged Barley. “What does it mean?” “I have no idea,” he breathed slowly. It was clear that their names were being referenced with each element depicted in the image but they were left scratching their heads about the deeper special meaning that every cutie mark had. True, there were ponies with cutie marks essentially identical to their names but they still always alluded to a unique skill or destiny. “Well, hold on, think back,” suggested Barley. “What did we do? How did we get it?” Pickle put a hoof to his chin in thought. “Um… We fell… We hit some trees.” “We’ve fallen and hit trees before,” she droned. “Also that would be a really stupid cutie mark if that's what it's from.” Pickle mumbled to himself, now less sure this was going to get them the answer to their question. “We hit the ground.” “Done that…” “I fell on top of you… and our lips touched?” Barley blushed and grimaced at the suggestion that that one strange moment carried some huge significance. “That can't be it.” “Well what is it then?” he shrugged. Not that he wanted that to be it but there really wasn't much else to go with. “I don't know but it just doesn't make sense. This feels like a weird dream.” “We need to show mom!” “Yeah, c'mon!” - - - The twins hit the ground running outside their humble cottage, bursting through the front door with explosive fervor. “Mom!” “Mom!” They shouted as a warm, savory steam cloud hit them in the face. They came to a skidding stop in the kitchen where their mother stood cooking over the stove. Brandy Barrel spun around with a wooden spoon in her wingtip. “What's all the commotion about?” “We got our cutie marks,” they blurted triumphantly in unison. The two siblings turned their broadsides to her and stood flank to flank. Her eyes landed on the pair of identical cutie marks and she dropped the spoon and gasped with both hooves over her mouth. “Oh, my stars, you did! And they look identical! That's so special!” She sat on her haunches and drew them into a tight hug, one in each foreleg. “We don't know what it means, though,” worried Barley. “Oh, let me look at them.” she said standing back up. They turned to show her their yellow flanks once again. She eyed them back and forth, first one, then the other. Then she scratched her head, befuddled at what looked like a lazy visual mashup of their names that seemingly conveyed nothing exceptional about them. “Well, they're definitely the same anyway… What exactly were you doing when you got your marks?” she asked thoughtfully. “Nothing really,” shrugged Barley. “We failed at a maneuver and then crash landed.” “We kissed,” interrupted Pickle. “Pickle?” she groaned in embarrassment. “It was an accident,” she clarified to their wide-eyed mother. “Yeah but we still got the marks like pretty much right after that,” he added matter-of-factly. Brandy chuckled nervously. “Oh, well I'm sure that's unrelated.” She cocked her head to the side. “Did I ever tell you about your aunt Tulip? When she got her cutie mark, everyone just assumed it was a tulip bulb until a year later when grandma saw it up really close and figured out it was actually a beet which made a lot more sense because she was better at canning than gardening.” She laughed again. “Anyway,” she sighed. “Your cutie marks probably just have something to do with cooking.” The twins exchanged skeptical glances. “But we weren't cooking or doing anything with food at all,” argued Barley. Just then the stove hissed as the pot boiled over with foam. “Oh dear.” she whirled around and moved the pot from the burner with her mouth. Then she turned down the flames. “Speaking of cooking… Why don't you two set the table for us? Dinner's almost ready.” - - - “We'll have to plan a little cute-ceñera for ya,” chimed their mother, scooping up a steaming spoonful of vegetable soup. “Yeah,” agreed Pickle,” stirring his own bowl absently. “But I don't think we should have it till we know what our cutie marks actually represent.” “That's fair,” she shrugged. “Could take a while before we figure it out though. You might not want to wait too long.” The twins frowned at that thought. “Well… how do we figure it out?” cried Pickle. “We'll figure it out eventually,” she assured him thoughtlessly. “You know, maybe you should write a letter to your friend, Rainbow Dash. I bet she'd love to hear about it and it might make you feel better.” They looked at eachother with sudden excitement burning in their eyes. “Yeah!” “After homework though,” she added. “And I want you to eat everything in your bowls. Don't avoid the celery.” - - - Barley spat out her pen on the desk and slid the letter close to herself to see. “Okay, here's the whole thing: Dear Rainbow Dash, This is an official letter from the Hope Hollow chapter of your fan club. We hope you are doing well and can't wait to see you and the Wonderbolts in action this year at the Southgate Expo. Pickle and I still practice our flying routines almost every single day. Our training grounds are really big now and we'd love to show you our course if you're ever in town again. But the real reason we're writing you is because we got our cutie marks! We got them at the exact same time and they match. We're really happy but we don't know what they mean. We hope to figure it out soon so that we can have our cute-ceñera party. Well, keep being awesome. See you later. Barley Barrel: President Pickle Barrel: Assistant President Does that sound good?” she asked, turning to him in her chair. “Yeah,” he nodded. She looked at the note again, not reading it but more looking at the shapes of the words. “We are happy… right?” “Yeah,” he answered slowly. The initial delirious joy of just getting a cutie mark had evaporated, replaced with confusion and anxious uncertainty. The likelihood that their heart's desires and their destiny matched up seemed to be fading away before their eyes. Barley carefully folded up the letter and slipped it into an envelope already addressed to Rainbow Dash. She licked it closed, grimacing at the sourness of the adhesive on her tongue. “Here, you do the stamp.” she commanded, sliding the envelope toward her brother. - - - Brandy stood alone in the Hope Hollow Cemetery just as the sun was vanishing below the horizon. The headstone before her was polished gray granite, marked by a modest bouquet of now brown flowers. Her excited breath turned to a puff of steam. “Honey, I'm sorry; I'll bring you some new flowers next time. I have to make this short because you know I'm not supposed to be here after sundown but I just had to tell you, Pickle and Barley, they finally got their cutie marks today.” She smiled weakly as her voice cracked. “I don't know what it means yet but I'm so proud of them. I wish you could tell them that yourself because I know you would. They're growing up so fast.” She looked up at the few brightest stars just coming out upon a canvas of navy blue. “I should go now. I promise I'll come back soon.” - - - That night the twins laid awake in their beds, finding it very difficult to shut off their brains. “You know what?” whispered Barley at the ceiling. “I'm pretty sure our marks have nothing to do with being good at flying.” “I know,” he agreed grimly. “That sucks.” Barley wiped a tear from her eye. “Yeah… I always imagined it would happen right after we perfected some amazing routine and then we'd get cutie marks for that and then after we became Wonderbolts, they'd have our really cool marks on jerseys and hats and stuff but I don't know of any Wonderbolts who have cutie marks like this.” “I can't think of anything less aerodynamic than a barrel,” grumbled Pickle. “Maybe we're actually not even that great at flying.” Barley rolled over to look across the room at him in the dim blue moonlight. “But we're the best fliers at school,” she argued. “There's forty-six foals at our school,” he sighed. “Only fifteen of them can even fly and most of them are younger than us. How can we really know? We might just be average.” Barley’s stomach dropped at the thought. They'd been laboring under this fantasy of supreme aerial acrobatics for so long. It was all they ever wanted and to think that all their efforts and love was misplaced and all for naught shook her to the core. “Rainbow Dash thinks we're good fliers,” she breathed. Pickle rolled over to face the wall and redoubled his efforts to fall asleep. He kept thinking about what their cutie marks could mean even though there wasn't much to figure out. It was an infuriating jigsaw puzzle with only two pieces and they didn't fit together. He stewed in his own disillusionment over becoming a Wonderbolt or even a good flier but he was also blindsided as unexpected thoughts of feeling his sister's lips drifted into his mind. He knew she was his sister and they both had crushes on others but it still felt… nice and admitting that to himself made him uncomfortable. - - - “Pickle, where are you?” called Brandy from the table. “Your breakfast is getting cold and you’re going to be late for school.” The bedroom door creaked open and the colt emerged with a sigh. He came to the table with a conspicuous new article of clothing in addition to his usual red hoodie. “What's with the pants?” asked Barley as her brother pulled out his chair. “Are you trying to hide your cutie mark?” added their mother. “Yeah,” he groaned indignantly. “Why?” “Because I don't want anyone asking me what it means because I don't know and it's probably something stupid anyway.” She frowned. “Oh, honey, it's not stupid.” “We don't even know, mom.” “Everyone's gonna know anyway,” posed Barley. “They're gonna see mine and then they're gonna see you wearing pants which you never do.” “Fine,” he grumbled, sliding out of his chair. He grudgingly kicked off his pants, leaving them in a pile under his spot. Then he got back in his seat and began thoughtlessly cramming food in his mouth. “I know it's confusing and maybe even a little disappointing right now but you'll feel a lot better about everything when we figure out what it means.” The twins said nothing. “Did you write a letter to Rainbow Dash?” “Yeah,” grunted Barley. “You know, around seventy percent of ponies with cutie marks have a mark that corresponds literally with their name in some way,” offered Brandy in an attempt to comfort them. “Well then I wish you had named me something cooler,” lamented Pickle bitterly. “Pickle,” she gasped in hurt disbelief. “Gonna be late,” he growled, jumping back out of his chair and snatching up his saddle bag. He fluttered out the front door without another word. Barley finished her orange juice and followed in his hoofsteps but not before giving their mom a hug with a lackluster goodbye. She caught up with Pickle at the post office mailbox where he'd dropped off the letter bound for Ponyville. “You shouldn't have said that,” she chided. “It's true though,” he mumbled stubbornly. - - - At school the twins got right into their desks and uncharacteristically didn't say a word to anyone before the bell rang and the chatter settled. For a while class just went on like normal as if nothing had happened. But after just halfway through the first period, the filly next door to Pickle took notice. “You got your cutie mark,” whispered Shady Fern in astonishment, trying not to disrupt the lecture and get in trouble. Pickle blushed, fighting the urge to cover his flank in embarrassment. He wished so badly that he’d gotten a lightning bolt or a cyclone instead. Something fast or powerful that would impress her. “Yeah,” he nodded listlessly. “That's great.” “I guess,” he agreed tepidly. By lunchtime, word had spread and everyone knew. The teacher usually made announcements about such things but the siblings downplayed their interest in calling attention to it which in some ways just made it weirder. At recess, Barley left her sulking brother behind to go play on the field with Seafoam. Pickle sat alone against the wall, lost in worry again. Shady sat down, not next to him but near him. She was a pale copper green earth pony with orange braids that had green bows in them. “You don't seem very happy today,” she began. “Is it about your cutie mark? “Yeah,” he breathed. “Why? What does it mean?” “I don't know,” he shrugged. “But I don't think it's something I care about.” Her expression darkened. “Oh… Maybe you'll learn to like whatever it is. Sometimes that's how it works.” “I just wanted a cutie mark from flying well or… fast. Something to give me Wonderbolts cred because this doesn't do it at all. This looks like something an earth pony farmer was supposed to have. No offense. It's just not what I was expecting.” “Having it doesn't make you a worse flier though,” she contended. “I guess so,” he agreed. “What's your favorite candy?” He blinked in surprise and looked up at her. “What?” “Your favorite candy. Mine’s those little dots that come on strips of paper and you bite them off.” “Oh,” he laughed weakly. He scratched the back of his head. “Uh, I guess anything chocolate filled with peanut butter.” “Okay.” When he looked back at her she had left the wall and was running to the field. - - - Almost two weeks had passed and they had not figured out the meaning of their cutie marks despite a trip to their small local library and humoring their mom's guessing game gauntlet of culinary adventures. They'd only shown mild interest and only achieved mild success in every project they’d tried under her direction. Whatever their cutie marks meant, it was reasonable to assume it didn't have to do with baking, cooking, canning or distilling. Candy and cards for school's Hearts and Hooves Day laid on the counter. The family sat around the cluttered table, eating lunch around the aftermath of their latest cutie mark quest when there came a knock at the door. Everyone looked up but no one made a move to answer it. “I'll get it,” sighed Barley, shuffling out of the kitchen. She pulled open the door a crack to see none other than her hero, Rainbow Dash grinning back at her. “Hey, are ya busy?” “Rainbow Dash,” she gasped, flinging the door wide. She reached out her forelegs for a hug. It wasn't long before Pickle skittered out of the kitchen to see if it was true. “Rainbow!” He latched himself onto her other side. Their mother emerged from the kitchen lastly with slack-jawed delight. “Oh, you came all the way out here! What a nice surprise.” “Hi, Brandy. Hope I'm not interrupting anything.” She looked down at the two foals in front of her. You’re not still having trouble figuring out your cutie marks, are you?” “Uh-huh,” answered the twins in unison. “I have good news for you then, ‘cuz I brought some cutie mark experts with me.” She stepped aside, revealing the three Cutie Mark Crusaders and the anchored purple hot air balloon they'd all flown there in. They all waved sheepishly to one another. “This is Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle and your fellow Rainbow Dash Fan Club member you've never met, Scootaloo. They're in the business of helping ponies achieve and understand their cutie marks. I told them about your problem and they jumped at the opportunity.” “We're so happy to have you all,” replied Brandy. “Please come inside.” The twins ran ahead into the living room. “C’mon,” they shouted excitedly. Brandy walked alongside Rainbow and told her almost in tears, “I'm so glad you came. It really means a lot to them. Pickle has been taking this especially hard.” “You don't need to worry any more,” promised Rainbow. “I have confidence we'll figure this out. My experts may be young but they have a great track record.” It wasn't long before they were all standing in a circle in the living room and Brandy was back in the messy kitchen fetching everypony snacks. “So let's see your cutie marks,” began Rainbow eagerly. The twins turned and presented their marks for Rainbow and the Cutie Mark Crusaders. The fillies got in close, not really saying anything to them but still communicating with each other through pantomime and knowing looks. Rainbow watched curiously over their heads. “So what happened just before you got your cutie marks?” asked Sweetie Belle. The siblings eyed each other warily. “We weren't really doing anything,” began Barley. “At least not successfully. That's why this is so confusing. We were trying to do a synchronized aerial maneuver and then we ended up crashing in the dirt. Then we got up and our cutie marks appeared.” Apple Bloom raised an eyebrow. “Is that really all that happened?” “Well… I landed on top of Barley and… our lips touched,” admitted Pickle. “And then you got yer marks?” “Yeah.” “Do you like your marks?” Rainbow asked directly. “No,” groaned Pickle. “I don't really like it either,” replied Barley. “Why not?” “I don't think we can be Wonderbolts with cutie marks like this.” “That’s ridiculous,” scoffed Rainbow dismissively. “Sure, most Wonderbolts have weather or flying marks but there are plenty of strong fliers who don't have marks related to flying at all.” “Really?” “Yeah. Being a Wonderbolt isn't out of reach just because you have a barrel on your flank. Thunderlane’s special talent is actually bowling but he's still in the Wonderbolts.” Pickle and Barley exchanged tentatively hopeful glances. Then their mom came in with a tray of pretzels, carrots and juice, setting it down on the coffee table. “So, do you know what it means?” asked Barley. The Cutie Mark Crusaders looked at one another with measured expressions. “We think so,” nodded Apple Bloom. “But we wanna talk ta yer mom alone first.” The twins looked at each other with wide-eyed astonishment. “Well, hey, why don't you show me your training grounds,” suggested Rainbow. “Yeah,” they agreed excitedly. “I wanna see,” said Scootaloo with a mouthful of crushed pretzels. “We can do some flying too,” added Barley. “Alright.” Sweetie and Apple Bloom nodded in approval and the four promptly filed out of the house, leaving Brandy alone with the two non pegasi. The remaining Cutie Mark Crusaders sat together on the sofa with their juices. The anxious mother took the edge of the chair across from them as she waited for the news. “You really know what it is? Just like that?” “Yep,” nodded Sweetie. “This one was actually pretty straight forward. We've seen it before.” “Well, what is it,” gasped Brandy in breathless anticipation. Apple Bloom cleared her throat with a grim expression. “This may not be what you wanna hear but those matching cutie marks are a breeder bond. It means they're destined to be each other's special someponies and um… breed… a lot.” Brandy blinked. “I'm sorry, I don't think I heard you right.” Sweetie Belle yanked a book from her saddlebag, cracked it open and began magically flipping through the pages. “Ah know this might come as a shock to ya but it's not as uncommon or strange as ya probably think it is. When a foal gets a namesake cutie mark mixed with the name of another relative, it means they're s'posed ta breed each other.” Brandy possessed all the color and warmth of a marble statue. “I don't understand.” Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle looked cautiously at each other. “Barley and Pickle are s’posed ta have lots a sex and make lots a babies together. That's their destiny. That's what their cutie marks mean.” “It's a nice euphemism for incest,” added Sweetie Belle, still looking through the book. “No, I know what you meant by breeding but I've never heard of such a degenerate thing. Just breeding? That's it? And your own sibling no less?” “Yup.” Brandy threw up her forelegs. “How do I know you're right about this?” “They got identical cutie marks that reference both of their names. The reason ya haven't found what they're good at is because the marks are referencing each other by name. It's not about the food at all. They got their marks at the same time after kissin’. There's not much else ya can infer ‘bout it once ya read all the signs.” Deep down Brandy knew that already but didn't want to admit it. “Look here,” said Sweetie, floating the book to the distraught mother. Brandy took it and began skimming the section titled ‘Breeder Bond,’ which included an old photo of a pair of foals with identical cutie marks. “Ah even seen it in mah family too,” continued Apple Bloom. “The cutie mark thing, that is. The incest isn't that big a deal once ya get over it. Even some of mah relatives who ain't bound by cutie marks have been known ta engage in incest, even breed. In fact mah parents are actually brother and sister but Ah was raised callin’ ‘em brother and sister and mah grandma and grandpa Ah call ma an’ pa.” “I call my mom, ‘big sister’ too,” shrugged Sweetie. “And my dad is also my grandpa.” Brandy bowed her head in shame. “But… What will the neighbors think? And they already have crushes on other ponies.” “Well, now they’ll know exactly who they're supposed to be with,” explained Sweetie Belle. “Any relationships like that with other ponies are a waste of time and destined to end in heartbreak. It would be best to steer them away from that and toward each other. Cutie marks are never wrong.” Apple Bloom nodded. “And get ‘em ta start breedin’ as soon as possible.” “But they're still so young,” pleaded her mother. “It may sound strange but the sooner they start, the better they'll feel ‘bout everything because they'll know they found their purpose. They wouldn't have the marks if they weren't ready yet.” Brandy buried her face in her hooves. “I’m sorry. This is a lot to take in and it feels weird taking parenting advice from a foal.” “Don't think of it as parenting advice,” replied Sweetie. “We're just giving you the information. It's still your job as the parent to do with it what you think is best. It's all there in the book.” Apple Bloom finished her juice. “Mah sister suggested we do things like this from now on ‘cuz of a kinda awkward case we had where we told the filly first and there was a lotta confusion and it really upset everyone. Sometimes ya ferget how sensitive everypony is about this kinda stuff and if they don't understand, we shouldn't have ta be tha ones ta explain it.” “Your sister… mom… suggested that?” “Yes, ma'am.” “That was a good idea.” Brandy’s eyes fell to the floor as a thousand ugly and difficult thoughts consumed her from within. “Do you have any questions fer us?” “Why did this have to happen?” she asked rhetorically. “Some things ‘bout cutie marks are probably always gonna be a mystery,” sighed Apple Bloom. “I guess there's nothing to do but grin and bear it.” Brandy smiled unconvincingly. - - - Rainbow and the Cutie Mark Crusaders stuck around visiting and training for a while. They had accomplished their mission but it was strange to make such a long trip and not spend time with them. But the longer they stayed, the antsier the twins got about learning their destiny. Everyone else knew what it was but they were being kept in the dark and it didn't make sense. “Well, gotta get these three back to Ponyville or they're gonna miss school and Hearts and Hooves day. You should come visit us some time.” “Then we could show you our clubhouse,” added Scootaloo. The foals high hoofed goodbye. Rainbow turned to Brandy and scratched her head awkwardly. “Well… good luck.” The family waved goodbye from the ground as the balloon ascended. It didn't take long for the badgering to begin. “Are you gonna tell us now?” blurted Pickle. “Yeah, mom, what is it?” added her sister impatiently. Brandy bit her lip as she continued to wave. “Okay… Let's just get inside the house first.” The twins bolted inside immediately. Their mother turned to the door with a defeated sigh. She sat down in the living room before her two anxious children and took a deep breath. “Your cutie marks don't have anything to do with food.” “We know,” groaned Pickle. ‘We tried to tell you.” “And you know I'll still love you no matter what cutie marks you have.” The twins exchanged puzzled looks. “Are we assassins?” gasped Pickle. “Just tell us,” cried Barley. “Your cutie marks are what they called a breeder bond. And that means that you're destined to be each other's special someponies but also…” she swallowed, “rut and make lots of foals.” For a long time they all said nothing. “Is this a joke?” Pickle finally asked. “Breeding? Just breeding? With my sister?” “It all checks out,” argued their mother. “You got your cutie marks at the same time when you kissed and they're referencing both of your names put together. Just about everything they said was corroborated by the book they brought. There's really no other explanation.” The conversation sputtered into silence again as this new grim reality sank in. “I don't wanna have a cute-ceñera anymore,” mumbled Barley. - - - Brandy stood before her late husband's headstone, pawing idly at the short, well kempt grass. “So I have some good news and some… well… it's not… necessarily bad news… It's just kind of difficult to take.” The twins laid awake in bed in much the same way they had when they first got their cutie marks. What kind of destiny was this? Didn't most cutie marks have some kind of usefulness that could be leveraged to craft a career from? What good was just being an incest foal factory? Barley shook her head at the ceiling. “I can't believe this is what we're supposed to do? What do we tell our friends?” “We tell them nothing,” Pickle shot back in alarm. “We make up a story and stick to it till our deathbeds.” “Like what? They're about food?” Pickle laughed weakly. “Like Rainbow said, we can be good at multiple things. We just need to practice and get good at something like that just to have a believable alibi.” “Can we really still be Wonderbolts though?” “I probably can,” replied Pickle. “But you're probably just going to be some stay at home broodmare though.” “Shut up.” Barley rolled over, still thinking about the improbabilities of everything and how their cutie marks had upended their whole lives. Not only that but now the seemingly inevitable prospect of getting rutted by her brother began to assault her brain. She didn't know much about that kind of stuff; neither of them did but somehow that act had apparently come to define their existence. She kept thinking back to that moment in the woods where he'd pinned her down with his lips on hers.
False Door
550679
2
Barrel Twins,Cutie Mark Crusaders,Original Character,Rainbow Dash,Porn,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity,Sex
Twintwined In Twincest and Twinbreeding
After an awkwardly intimate aerial training crash, the Barrel Twins get their cutie marks. Although they say they don't know what they mean, there's really only one explanation and it's going to be an adjustment.
complete
90
12
<p>Story commissioned by anonymous.</p><p>Wonderbolt hopefuls, Pickle and Barley get their cutie marks after sharing an accidental kiss. Their marks are identical and unlike any they or their mother have ever seen before, leaving them all very confused. After their hero Rainbow Dash steps in aided by the expertise of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, there's little mystery left regarding what they're supposed to do with their lives. At first the siblings are shocked and disappointed but Luckily their mother is there to awkwardly usher them into their new unconventional lifestyle.</p>
mature
2024-02-06T05:41:03+00:00
2024-02-06T05:41:02+00:00
593
Brandy placed a stack of steaming heart-shaped pancakes on the table and sighed. This was going to be the most traumatic Hearts and Hooves Day they'd ever seen. The twins emerged from their room with a subdued demeanor. “Good morning,” chimed their mother with put on zeal. “Sleep well?” The twins exchanged is she for real glances as they pulled out their chairs. “I hope you feel better today.” “I don't really,” replied Pickle flatly, picking up a fork with his wing. “But thanks for the pancakes.” “So, what do you have planned for today?” she asked cautiously. “What do you mean?” asked Barley, drowning her hotcakes in maple syrup. “Well, it's Hearts and Hooves Day. I know you both have someone special you like. You weren't by chance planning on giving them a little extra special attention or something, were you?” Pickle blushed and looked away. “Uh… well… I was sort of gonna give Shady Fern something…” She nodded in acknowledgement. “And what about you, Barley?” “I was… just going to ask Seafoam if he wanted to go with me to the ice cream place after his game.” Their mother sighed sadly. “I’m really sorry about this. I know this is going to sound mean but I think before you go any farther in your friendships you should make it clear that you can't be their special someponies.” “Why?” gasped Barley. “Because it's contrary to your true destiny and it will never work out. It's best to just end it early in the nicest way possible. You can tell them any excuse you like and you can still have them as friends, just not in a romantic way.” “This is because of our freaking cutie marks?” scoffed Pickle bitterly.” “Yes,” she admitted. “I know this is going to hurt, especially on today of all days, but trust me, it will only hurt worse the longer you wait. This is going to be kind of a rough transition for everyone but I promise things are going to get better once you start finding fulfillment in your cutie marks.” She smiled tentatively, not expecting them to return the sentiment. “What exactly do you mean when you say finding fulfillment?” asked Barley, still whittling her hearts into little bite-sized pieces. “Just let me worry about that part for now, honey,” she answered dismissively. “Can't believe this,” muttered Pickle.” The twins finished their breakfast in just as sour a mood as ever, said bye and left with their saddle bags stuffed with holiday cards and candies. They took to the air, gliding at a leisurely pace as their minds reeled desperately for the best path forward out of this train wreck. “How are we supposed to do this?” asked Pickle absently. “What do we say? I can't think of an excuse for rejection that doesn't make me sound like a jerk and I don't want to lie.” “Maybe we should just tell them the truth,” suggested Barley. “That's the only thing that makes sense and they'll understand. It's not like we asked for this. How can anyone look down on us?” “But I still don't want to tell that to anyone,” he shook his head fearfully. “Is it better or worse than lying and making enemies? I don't think they'll tell anyone if we just ask them not to.” Pickle bit his lip apprehensively. It would be best if they had a single cohesive story that they stuck to or it would just make things worse. If they both told the truth, at least it would spare them from being caught in a lie. “Fine,” he groaned. We have to make them promise though. - - - Ready or not, the class had their Hearts and Hooves Day exchange right after first period. Fillies and colts excitedly made their rounds delivering treats and stock expressions of platonic love to every desk. Pickle returned to his seat and began taking inventory of the candy collection in his box. It all looked small and generic, nothing special which was a relief until Shady Fern showed up timidly in front of him with a little heart-shaped box of chocolates and a card. “He- here you go, Pickle,” she stammered. His heart sank while simultaneously fluttering in his chest. This was clearly a larger gesture than what anyone else was giving or receiving. What was he supposed to do now, especially right here in the middle of class with everyone? Pickle held out his hooves to take the box from her. “Thank’s, Shady.” His words felt like sand in his mouth. “Um, I have something for you too but… can I give it to you at recess?” She smiled and nodded shakily “Okay.” She turned to leave for her seat but looked back at him once more before bumping absentmindedly into the desk catty cornered to his. She was happy about this. He felt awful. Through class he could think of nothing else but the willful misunderstanding they had and the eventual confrontation that would put a dagger in her heart. He lifted the lid of the box to see an array of artisanal peanut butter chocolates from the old fashioned sweet shop in town. He didn't try one but he knew they were amazing. He opened the letter during math class even though the thought of reading it made him physically ill. He unfolded the pink piece of paper to find a short, simple question: Will you be my special somepony? The bell rang and the twins were so preoccupied with their problems that they didn't even look for each other at line up. Pickle tucked his gift into a satchel and met up with Shady who'd waited for him just outside the door. “C’mon.” He cocked his head toward the far end of the playground, wanting to make this exchange as private as possible. They crossed the field side by side till they were at the fence. When he turned to her, he saw a nervously expectant spark in her eyes that practically choked him. Pickle fumbled for his satchel as he struggled mentally to navigate the sensitive situation. There was no going back. The best thing to do now would be to just go through the motions of a happy Hearts and Hooves Day confession. “Um I- I made you this,” he held out an unorthodox looking card that appeared to be a long, folded up banner. Then he pulled it back from her hesitantly. “But… before you open it… the thing is… I can't be your special somepony.” Shady’s expression collapsed from anticipation to dismay. “It's not because I don't like you. I just can't. I want to tell you why but you have to promise not to ever tell anyone.” She paused as if trying to piece it together herself what could possibly keep them apart. Her pained expression grew. “I can keep your secret. I just want to know why.” He took a deep breath. “I’m only supposed to be with one specific pony according to my cutie mark and that pony is… my…” He felt his throat trying to close up again before he could divulge something so anathema, so destructive to his image. “My… sister.” Shady blinked and shook her head in disbelief. “Your sister? No way. I’ve never heard of something like that.” “We researched it over the weekend and figured it out,” he explained gravely. “There’s nothing else it can be.” “You’re supposed to be with Barley? Like… get married to her?” “I… I guess so? I’m still getting used to the idea of any of this. I’m sorry. This doesn’t really mean what it was supposed to anymore but I still want you to have it.” He hoofed her his gift he’d made in earnest this time. Shady carefully opened her card. It accordioned out to reveal a long paper with matrices of colorful candy buttons affixed to it. As she spread it out, she began to notice that some of the buttons were missing but strategically so. They made letters, a whole message, the same message she’d given to him: Will you be my special somepony? “I won’t tell anyone,” she whispered. On the other side of the grounds near the bleachers, Barley was having a very similar conversation with Seafoam. She pawed anxiously at the dirt. “It’s completely because of the cutie marks,” she explained desperately. “Believe me, I didn’t want this at all. If I could be a blank flank for the rest of my life instead, I’d choose that in a heartbeat.” Seafoam sagged like a deflating pool toy. “So… you’re saying your whole purpose is to be with your brother like seriously his wife or something? Are you supposed to get married and all that?” Barley cringed at hearing it all laid out nakedly like that, right in front of someone she respected and had tried so hard to look cool in front of for months. She pulled her beanie down low. “Well, I hadn’t actually considered that part of it but… maybe?” “What? You actually might marry your brother?” came a derisive voice. Barley gasped and the two looked up to see Hailstone leering down at them over the top seat of the bleachers, his lips curled in disgust. “What are you doing here?” demanded Seafoam, angrily. The blue pegasus began to goose step down the seats away from them with an obnoxious grin on his face. “I came over to hoot at you ‘cuz I thought you went to the bleachers to kiss or something for love day but that was next level gross, not what I was expecting.” “Maybe mind your own business and it won't be a problem next time,” scoffed Seafoam. “Wait, Hailstone,” pleaded Barley. “It's important that no one knows about our cutie marks. Please don't tell anyone.” He looked back at them with feined sympathy “Oh, of course not. I won’t say a word about your little incest marks and your bro fiancé. You know me. Why would I want to stir up pointless drama?” Barley frowned as she watched him flutter back toward the school buildings.- - - The twins sat together at an empty table eating their lunch while the rest of the student body giggled and cast dirty looks over their shoulders. Even Shady and Seafoam, despondent as they were, were too embarrassed to sit with them right now. Never had the siblings felt so mortified just to be seen together. Every eye must have been on them. Every conversation must have been about them. Their social lives were over and it was all because of their cutie marks. “Well, I guess we're all we have now,” mumbled Barley, eyes fixed on the table. “I guess that's all we need anyway, right?” She swallowed, trying to fight back her tears. “Hey, when's the wedding?” laughed one filly. “I am going to kill Hailstone,” whispered Pickle. Barley and Pickle toughed out the rest of the school day as pariahs and laughingstocks but the second the bell rang, they were out the door. They went straight home as fast as they could fly, eyes full of stinging hot tears. They burst through the door sobbing and summoning their mother from her cleaning chores. “What happened,” she gasped in concern as she galloped into the room. “Everyone at school knows we're freaks now,” cried Pickle. “No one would even come near us for the rest of the day after Hailstone told everypony,” choked Barley. Brandy expected them to be consoling them about their quasi breakups at the end of the day, not the obliteration of their school lives. She drew them into a comforting hug. “I'm so sorry this happened,” she cooed. She held them against her chest until their sobbing subsided into quiet shudders. “You’re not freaks. Ponies can be so cruel.” Pickle stepped away and wiped his eyes with his fetlock.“What are we gonna do?” he asked, shaking his head in hopelessness. “How can we even show our faces in school again?” She tousled their manes. “I'm going to think of something but in the meantime, why don't you two go to the training grounds for an hour or so and when you come back I'll have something special for both of you.”
False Door
550679
3
Barrel Twins,Cutie Mark Crusaders,Original Character,Rainbow Dash,Porn,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity,Sex
Twintwined In Twincest and Twinbreeding
After an awkwardly intimate aerial training crash, the Barrel Twins get their cutie marks. Although they say they don't know what they mean, there's really only one explanation and it's going to be an adjustment.
complete
90
12
<p>Story commissioned by anonymous.</p><p>Wonderbolt hopefuls, Pickle and Barley get their cutie marks after sharing an accidental kiss. Their marks are identical and unlike any they or their mother have ever seen before, leaving them all very confused. After their hero Rainbow Dash steps in aided by the expertise of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, there's little mystery left regarding what they're supposed to do with their lives. At first the siblings are shocked and disappointed but Luckily their mother is there to awkwardly usher them into their new unconventional lifestyle.</p>
mature
2024-02-13T08:22:56+00:00
2024-02-13T22:23:10+00:00
499
The twins practiced at the training grounds for a while but lost interest sooner than usual. Their heads weren't in it today. They retreated to their fort to mope. That was fine because peace and solitude were what they wanted most. Looking out the window, Barley could just barely see the spot in the distance under the trees where they'd accidentally kissed. She could see her brother in her mind's eye, laying on top of her. It was such a short moment that should have been eclipsed in their memory by them getting their cutie marks but she found it impossible to strike from her brain. Not only that but every time it replayed in her head, something about the encounter would change. They'd accidentally kiss. Then he'd kiss her on purpose. Then she'd kiss him back. Their kissing would get rougher as he pressed her into the ground. Then his kisses would start going down her barrel, trailing all the way down to her- She clenched her eyes shut and shook her head, trying to dismiss the strange fantasy. She'd never thought about her brother like this before. Why was it happening now? Was it the cutie mark affecting her brain or was that brief physical contact the catalyst for some kind of awakening within her? Was Pickle having the same intrusive thoughts about her? “Think it's been long enough?” he mumbled, looking up from his comic book. She glanced back at him and shrugged. “Maybe if we walk back.” - - - It was early evening by the time they returned to their cottage and the cold was beginning to set in. “Welcome home, greeted Brandy in the kitchen. Why don't you two take a shower together while I get your dinner ready.” Pickle shrugged. “Together? Why?” “It'll help you bond,” she smiled. “You'll see.” “Haven't we already bonded, being siblings and twins for our entire lives?” posed Barley. “Yes, but this is a different kind of bonding.” Pickle cocked an eyebrow but started toward the bathroom. “Oh, and one last thing,” she added, opening and then closing the oven again. “Don't wash or dry yourselves; only wash and dry each other… and make sure you get everywhere,” she nodded. The two shot dismayed glances back at her. “For the bonding,” she explained through happy, gritted teeth. Slowly they turned away and plodded to the bathroom. The shower was boxlike and missing a few little tiles from the wall but it was spacious enough for two foals. Pickle shut the door. Barley turned the knobs and a hush of falling water filled the bathroom. She took off her beanie and was the first to step in when the air became heavy and hot with steam. “C'mon,” she called, eyes closed, head under the warm downpour. Pickle pulled off his red hoodie and tossed it on the counter. Then he opened the curtain to find his sister shrouded by her dripping wet mane. He scooched in behind her. She whipped her hair back and sputtered as water ran down her muzzle. Barley moved aside thoughtfully so that her brother didn't have to shiver longer in the corner. In the tight quarters he brushed past her slick body to get under the water. He turned in a circle to quickly saturate his whole body, then just stood there zoning out and enjoying the warmth entering his body. It wasn't long however till he was reminded of the strange goal they had been tasked with. He flinched in surprise as he felt something stroke his withers. Almost slipping on the tiles, he turned to see Barley with a sudsy poof in her hoof. “Sorry,” she shrugged. Mom said we have to wash each other.” Pickle furrowed his brow. “Yeah but… we're actually doing that?” “I guess…” “Okay,” he mumbled suspiciously, putting his head back under the water. He felt the poof slide down his back from his neck to his dock and back again until his coat was lathered and soap dripped down his sides. The smell of cedar filled the air. As unfamiliar and unnecessary as it was, it felt nice to have somepony wash him. He accommodated her efforts by extending his wings and letting her ruffle his feathers. Barley went down his side and under his barrel. Then, lacking any real method, just followed his foreleg down to the floor. On the way back up, she stole a glance at her brother's tranquil expression and the rivulets of water streaming down his neck from his soaked mane. She gave the same treatment to his other leg and went in circles around his neck, ending with a scalp massage. Then she turned her attention to his hindquarters. Pickle sighed as he washed the soap from his mane. His sister began to scrub his flank, wishing it would wash off the cutie mark and make their lives normal again. Her eyes wandered over to his tail and then below that where she saw a couple of round protrusions that had gone totally ignored up to this point. Mom did say to wash everything. She held her breath. It was time for her to go where no filly in her class had gone before. Pickle's eyes shot open and he tensed up like a statue as Barley began to softly caress his balls from the back, lathering them cautiously with suds. She side-eyed him surreptitiously as she moved down to cradle them between his legs. He said nothing. She couldn't feel much through the poof but she could sense a bit of weight to them as they swung loose, sliding in or out of his slicked up thighs. She'd seen them before on occasion but of course never touched his or anypony else's. What a weird thing to have on your body, she thought. Barley swallowed as it occurred to her that these were not the only mysterious boy parts that needed attention. She moved on to his undercarriage where she began to scrub up and down his sheath. Pickle closed his eyes again as he felt an immediate response in his loins. His sheath began to fill and then his head emerged with mortifying eagerness. His sister had moved on before she could inspire a full scale erection in him and he hoped that she hadn't noticed. Barley held up the poof. “Now you do me.” He blinked. “Uh… okay.” Pickle did a circle under the water to rinse himself off thoroughly. He shook his head and flicked his tail, casting off drops in all directions. Then he took the poof and they switched places. He added in a squeeze of her lavender soap and started on her mane, lathering it excessively as he usually did for himself. Barley closed her eyes to keep the soap out of them. She lazily let the water run over her head as he moved onward to her back. He scrubbed her sides and her legs, like his sister did, avoiding the most intimate parts till last. He came up her hind leg to her cutie mark knowing he'd need to give her the same treatment he got. He tended to her right and left flank first. That wasn't too bad. He didn't usually touch her there and the washing gave his actions a more sensual feel. Pickle steeled his nerves and pivoted around her backside. Her inner thigh trembled as he cautiously slid the poof between her hind legs. He pushed up into her nethers and began to scrub back and forth. Barley moaned softly in response as the slippery poof slid down her folds and then back back again, flourishing with a slight tingle. She bit her lip as her tail flagged involuntarily, giving her brother sudden unobstructed access to her plot. Pickle blushed as he got a front row eyeful of his sister's puffy slit. Barley shifted awkwardly even though the feeling of soap between her legs was pleasant and she was admittedly a little disappointed when it stopped. Pickle cleared his throat as he abruptly took the poof away. “Well, I think we're all clean now.” He fled the shower while his sister rinsed off. She came out to find him standing awkwardly, dripping on the bathroom rug. “I forgot about the dry off part.” He sheepishly hoofed her his towel. She worked it back and forth, drying his mane first and just shimmied all the way down across his wings to his tail which she rang out. She moved on to his legs, giving his crotch a quick once over before calling it good. Then Pickle grabbed her towel and returned the favor. Thinking it awkward that they always did the hindquarters last, he went straight between her hind legs and began to rub. It did not make it less awkward but at least they'd both forgotten by the time he finished drying her mane. They said nothing of the whole experience or the things that were surprising or enjoyable. Pickle pushed open the door, allowing the, by comparison, crisp, cool air to rush in carrying with it the smell of mom's home cooking that they were so used to. They left their towels on the hooks and wandered out with damp manes and fluffy coats. It didn't take long for them to notice omething was different about the house since their shower. All the curtains were drawn, making it extraordinarily dim inside, almost like a faux night time effect. They entered the kitchen to find it glowing with candlelight. The table was set for just two with the nice dishes from the hutch. Their mother was just setting something on the counter straight from the oven. “Oh, perfect timing,” she chimed in excitement. “It took me a little longer than expected so you're actually just in time. Dinner is ready.” “Mom… this looks like it's supposed to be a date,” droned Pickle, her number one foil. “It is.” she replied unapologetically. The twins looked at each other skeptically. “You two just have a seat at the table and I'll serve you up and get out of your hair. By this time they were both very hungry and had little reservations left about what or how the food was presented. Was this really so different than how they ate lunch at school every day? Other than being alone together and it being harder to see? “Whatever,” grumbled Pickle, getting in his chair. Barley sat across from him as the steaming food landed on her plate. “I made your favorites,” crooned their mother, trying to lighten their dispositions and get them excited. “Hay burgers and jojo potatoes.” “Thanks,” said Pickle as a cascade of seasoned potato wedges tumbled onto his plate. Brandy discarded the empty baking tray on the counter. “Alright, I'll just leave you two alone.” She disappeared briskly from the room. Shortly after, there came a crackle and then the sounds of soft classical music on vinyl filled the house. The comical juxtaposition of fancy and non fancy things did not escape the foals. “I don't think you can get burgers at a place that plays violin sonatas,” quipped Pickle. “Just let her have this one and enjoy the burger,” sighed Barley. Pickle squeezed a dollop of ketchup onto his plate. “So… Come here often?” he mused facetiously. His sister snickered as she tried a potato. Despite the awful weightiness of the day. the absurdity of their surprise turned out to be a pleasant distraction. The foals didn't say much. After all, it wasn't like they needed to get to know eachother. They were more interested in stuffing their faces. They finished their food and their mother reappeared promptly, having been watching from around the door frame like a creepy housemaid. “Don't worry about the dishes; I'll get them later. Let's go have a look at your room.” “Why?” grunted Pickle. “You'll see. It's a surprise. C'mon.” The foals shot each other dubious glances but obliged her, plodding to the open door of their room. They noticed the surprise immediately. There was now only one bed. Their mom turned and smiled at them. “I forgot to ask but how was the shower?” “Fine,” mumbled Pickle dismissively. “Um, where are our beds?” “Oh they're still here.” She pointed to the freshly made bed in the center of the room. “I just pushed them together to make one big bed.” “Because?” “Because you're a couple now and I want you to start sleeping together. Not just in the proximity sense but also in the…” Her face contorted uncomfortably, “having sex… sense.” The twins said nothing but continued to stare into her. “I want you two to try having sex with each other tonight,” she explained, her smile wavering. “Now- now don't worry, I will be right here the whole time to help you through the process and answer any questions you have along the way. I have visual aides to help explain how it all works.” She snatched up a select couple of pages from atop their dresser and held them high in her wings. They were clipped from a pornographic magazine. “Only the basic stuff,” she assured them. “I don't want to overwhelm you when you're just starting out.” Was this the correct way to do this, she wondered. There were no books explaining this part but if there was a right way to do it, it was probably something like what she was doing, counter intuitive as it felt. “Mom, this sounds completely nuts,” Pickle deadpanned. “You can't be serious.” “Please just give it a try. If you don't like this, I'll never ask you to do it again but the odds are heavily in my favor that you'll enjoy it.” The twins slowly turned to one another, still not quite believing this was actually happening. “Remember, this is what your cutie marks are about and you haven't even tried it yet.” Pickle scratched his head. “I… guess…” “Barley?” “Ugh… okay.” Their mom swallowed nervously. “Great. So let's start right now. Go ahead and lay on your bed facing each other. I'm just going to stand behind the open closet door just to give you a little more privacy.” The twins slunk to their strangely large bed and laid down woodenly just as she prescribed. “So, I know you've already had sex ed which means thankfully we're not starting from a blank slate here. You know basically how this works but there's probably a few things they glossed over in class like foreplay. That's the part where you're preparing your bodies for the act of breeding.” “Are we literally breeding here?” asked Pickle, mystified. “Um, we'll see but don't think about that right now; stay in the moment.” Brandy decided not to mention then that Barley had already ingested most of a fertility potion at dinner. She sighed with embarrassment as she put her spiel together in her head. “So anyway, in short, Pickle, you need your penis to be hard. Barley, you need your vagina to be lubricated and those things typically happen naturally during foreplay. So I want you to try this: lay face to face, close your eyes and kiss.” Barley blushed. Pickle's heart was beating in his ears. They laid there, staring into each other until finally Pickle took the initiative and closed his eyes and suddenly things felt a little easier. He pursed his lips as they slowly scooted their faces together. First he felt her hot breath. Then he felt a familiar softness landing on his lips, stirring up memories of their accident in the woods. It was so much more tender this time. They parted gently and then opened their eyes again. They looked warily back at their observant mother, only finding her her eyes peeking around the edge of the closet door. “That was good,” she encouraged. “Now just keep doing it for a while.” They closed their eyes again and felt for each other. When their lips connected, they felt an unexpected spark. Inexperienced and still hesitant, they kissed with clearly punctuated pecks. As strange as everything about this was, it still felt nice and Pickle could feel a tightening between his legs. Slowly they came to discover that slightly parted lips intensified the sensation and they began to feel the wetness in each other’s mouths. Barley moaned softly the way she did when he touched her in the shower and it did something to him. Brandy checked in on them uncomfortably as their makeout session gradually became more passionate. They seemed to be taking to this whole thing quicker than even she was hoping. There was now no doubt that this was their calling. Their hooves began to travel one another’s bodies. She waited a bit longer before initiating the next phase. She cleared her throat. “Um, okay, let’s take a break and see what your bodies are doing.” The twins pulled away from each other and looked down their bodies to see the tip of Pickle’s rock hard cock staring back at them. Brandy’s eyes went to the floor. “Well, it looks like Pickle is ready. How about you, Bar? Notice anything different with your body?” “Um… I’m not sure,” she replied timidly. “Reach down between your legs and check.” Barley slid a hoof down to her fillyhood and began to explore her own folds. As she kneaded them apart, it didn’t take long to discover a slick wetness there that wasn’t residual shower water. It was coming from inside her. “It’s wet,” she murmured. Their mother nodded. “Then you’re all ready but first do you mind if Pickle checks you too?” “O- okay.” “Go ahead, Pickle.“ The colt reached hesitantly down between her thighs and began to feel around. His hoof teased her lower lips apart, eliciting a tiny gasp from his sister.” “Uh, yeah, it is wet,” he agreed. “Keep exploring,” prodded their mother. “There’s a special spot just above that wet hole that’s very sensitive to touch. See if you can find it but be gentle.” Ignoring the presence of their mother, Barley shifted from her side to spread her legs apart a bit more. Pickle held his breath as he began to clumsily map out his sister's labia, smearing her juices around and making it a slippery mess. Barley squirmed as he grazed the center of her pleasure node. That was something she needed more of. He circled around, believing he'd found the right area until Barley took his hoof and guided it straight to her clit where she began to work it in tiny circles much to her delight. “That feels good,” she breathed shakily. “Keep going.” Pickle continued to massage the little fleshy nub with the edge of his hoof. He was gentle but firm as he tried to emulate the brief motions she'd shown him. The tensing of her whole body confirmed to him that his efforts were indeed having an effect on her. She clenched her eyes tighter and bit her lip as the pleasure began to mount inside. Her legs shook involuntarily and her breathing became labored as her brother serviced her fillyhood. She let out a high pitched squeak almost sounding pained. Pickle slowed his pace in concern. “Are you okay?” “Keep going,” she gasped without opening her eyes, almost as if she were trying to hold onto that moment. Pickle redoubled his efforts, not quite sure of what was happening to her but trusting of his sister's emphatic command. Her pelvis continued to wriggle as her vocalizations became louder and more frenetic. It really sounded like she was in distress but he kept rubbing her, wondering how much larger her outbursts could become. She cried out one final time. Then arched her back, mouth open wide as she suddenly seized in a full body shudder. She gave a heavy sigh, then relaxed. “Okay, you- you can stop,” she panted. “What just happened?” “You just gave her an orgasm,” offered their mother, peering ambivalently from behind the door and looking like a pony braced for an explosion. “Oh, well that's good, right?” “Why don’t you ask your sister?” He turned to his twin who was still reeling in the afterglow. “That was the best thing ever,” she slurred. ”Good job, Pickle. And while we’re talking about it, it’s important to remember that when you have sex, not everything you do will feel the same for both of you which is why you should make sure that everyone is having a good time and is satisfied in the end.” He looked at his own hoof, noting the light playing off his sister's juices as he gestated on the words of his mother for a moment though it was difficult with the ache between his legs. “So… now what?” “Well, there’s a lot of really fun things that you can do, for instance what you just did was called a hoofjob but you can explore more of that stuff later. I think it’s probably a good idea to get to the main event now. So, Barley, whenever you’re feeling ready, why don’t you stand on the floor.” Barley exhaled and rolled off of the bed. She stood on the rug as instructed, a little unsure about whatever was happening. “Alright, Pickle. Now you mount her just like this.” Brandy held out a page she'd ripped from a porn magazine depicting two ponies rutting vanilla style in the throes of ecstasy but not explicitly showing penetration. “Oh, yeah,” nodded Pickle as if some scholastic memory had just jared loose in his brain. He stepped carefully off of the bed and looked at his sister's rear and her teal tail. “It's easier to find the target if you move your tail out of the way, Bar.” Barley flagged her tail to the side and waited nervously. Pickle looked to see her glistening, slicked up entrance just waiting there, all for him. He swallowed nervously before rearing up. His forelegs came down on either side of her barrel. Barley jostled under his wait but stood solidly. He inched up close to her till he felt himself poke into her rear and his tip nestled into a little warm pocket. Barley gasped at the pressure at her entrance and the impending invasion of her most sacred place. Pickle paused on the precipice. He’d never felt anything like this and he wasn’t even inside her yet. This was it. Once he was in there, there was no going back. He could never say he hadn’t fucked his sister. “Now be very gentle at first,” cautioned their mother. “Then, depending on how Barley is feeling, maybe you can speed up.” Pickle inhaled sharply and pushed forward. His cock squeezed inside her, all the way in till their thighs kissed. He grunted into his sister’s mane, overwhelmed as their bodies interlocked in the most perfect of ways and he felt his entire length embraced by her. They groaned in unison as he pulled back and pushed into her again, her pussy clenching hungrily around his base. Brandy averted her eyes to the floor. With any luck, her consultation was no longer needed and instinct would guide them. Pickle soon found a rhythm in his hips as he wrapped his forelegs snugly around his sister's barrel. Barley widened her stance a bit as she rocked on her hooves with the soft impact of her brother's thrusts. Pickle nuzzled into the crook of her neck as they both moaned. Hearing no protest from Barley, he sped up a little, chasing the pleasant buildup of pressure in his loins. The longer they went, the better it seemed to feel. It was both unreal and indescribable. There was nothing to compare to the sensation of being buried deep in her pussy. Barley threw her head back with a gasp as their thighs began to clap. She squeaked, her cavern throbbing with every plunge from her brother. Pickle was fast approaching his peak. His mind went blank as his first climax rocked his body. He squeezed his sister for dear life as his cock pulsed inside her. Instinctively he pushed deeper, grunting and trembling atop her. The wave of bliss crashed over him. His body relaxed atop his sister and he let out a labored exhale. When it felt like it was over and his legs had stopped being rubber, Pickle dismounted and pulled out of his sister. A bit of his seed dripped from her swollen lips before they disappeared behind the veil of her tail. His sloppy colthood retreated slowly as they stood panting, scarcely believing what had just happened. “Well, it seems like you had fun,” began their mother, suddenly reminding them of her presence. “From now on you can do it any time you like as long as you’re being safe and private about it. I certainly don’t need to be present in the future and if you’d like more ideas about other things you can do, you can take a look through the little stack of visual aides I’m leaving you. And if you have any questions, you can always ask me anything. I'll just leave you two alone for now.” Not wanting to be there any longer than never, Brandy nodded curtly and left to go process this seismic paradigm shift in their family. For a few moments the twins stood speechless and unable to tackle either the enormity or the strangeness of the moment. “I feel like I need another shower,” Barley murmured. - - - That night the twins laid awake in their new bed, thinking about having to go back to school and face their peers again but somehow the issue seemed dwarfed now by the discovery of their enjoyment of sex and the fact that they now suddenly had free reign to explore this huge, uncharted frontier together. Together they'd poured over the hooful of visual aides their mother had left in their room which stirred up a whole kaleidoscope of lewd fantasies in their brains. New amazing things were just waiting to be discovered tomorrow night or whenever they had four walls and a free moment. “I want to do it again,” whispered Pickle. “Like, right now.” “Me too,” agreed Barley. “But I don’t want to get out of bed.” “I can just lay on top of you, like in the picture,” he suggested eagerly. “Oh yeah, we can try that.” Barley grunted as he rolled clumsily on top of her, still beneath the sheets. They found each other's lips in the dark and let out a mutual groan of sensual satisfaction. Pickle planted his forehooves on either side of her head, their kissing deepening pushing the boundaries of what they had done so far. Barley hummed as their mouths gradually opened wider and wider with each kiss as if trying to devour each other. Their form was lacking and they were coating each other in saliva but their roaring desires made up for it. Between Barley's legs she felt his engorged flare skim tantalizingly across her slick entrance. “Ready?” he groaned in a delirious head rush. The only answer she gave was wiggling a forehoof between their bodies to push his tip down inside her. Then she recaptured his lips with her own. Pickle pushed all the way inside causing them to groan into each other's mouths. He pumped slowly as their kissing returned to its previous intensity. Barley raised her hind legs around her brother's midsection and was immediately rewarded, discovering that it allowed him to go even deeper. His balls slapped her plot as the bed began to creak softly. Her pussy squelched with each pump from the cum and dampness left over from their previous session. Pickle broke their kiss to catch his breath but did not slow the pace of his thrusts. His sister's hind legs quivered around him as they went careening into mutual ecstasy. He went back to smothering her mouth with his as her impassioned squeals became higher and higher as she climbed toward climax. Barley grabbed around her brother's withers with trembling forehooves as her pelvis bucked violently, setting off fireworks in her brain. Her clenching pussy vigorously stroked Pickle's pistoning length. That combined with his sister's erotic cries pushed him over the finish line. He grunted and shook in the vice grip of her legs as he erupted inside her for the second time that day. When both of their bodies had settled into a hazy tingle and the only thing they could hear was soft panting and beating hearts, Pickle rolled off of her, dizzy and exhausted. They had never cuddled before. The closest they'd ever come was when trying to comfort one another but tonight it just felt right. They nuzzled in close, head to head but at such an angle that they weren't getting facefulls of each other's breath. Their bodies were apart but their hooves were together. Though they were new to this, they were learning fast. Everything just seemed to click naturally between them and that night they both fell asleep believing they truly were meant for each other.
False Door
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Barrel Twins,Cutie Mark Crusaders,Original Character,Rainbow Dash,Porn,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Profanity,Sex
Twintwined In Twincest and Twinbreeding
After an awkwardly intimate aerial training crash, the Barrel Twins get their cutie marks. Although they say they don't know what they mean, there's really only one explanation and it's going to be an adjustment.
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<p>Story commissioned by anonymous.</p><p>Wonderbolt hopefuls, Pickle and Barley get their cutie marks after sharing an accidental kiss. Their marks are identical and unlike any they or their mother have ever seen before, leaving them all very confused. After their hero Rainbow Dash steps in aided by the expertise of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, there's little mystery left regarding what they're supposed to do with their lives. At first the siblings are shocked and disappointed but Luckily their mother is there to awkwardly usher them into their new unconventional lifestyle.</p>
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2024-02-20T06:20:49+00:00
2024-02-20T06:24:48+00:00
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Life's slings and arrows pushed the twins closer together. In the wake of getting their contentious cutie marks they became each other's safe space and, sex aside, the dynamic of their relationship began to change to something resembling significant others. They became more withdrawn from socializing and from the town in general but at the end of the day they always had each other. Their reclusiveness gave them more time with their new favorite hobby, sex. They tried everything in the provided pictures and some things that weren't, mostly different positions. They agreed that everything they’d been shown was pretty good and that it only got better the more they practiced. They tried to keep their activities discreet, and they were for the most part, but their blossoming libidos were sometimes considered an emergency. They could usually just fly home to the privacy of their bedroom but they'd also used their fort at the training grounds and even a bathroom in town once but never ever anywhere at school. There were already enough disparaging rumors flying around there without becoming a legitimate spectacle. Though many of the unverified stories were actually true or close enough, the twins tried to act normal and platonic in front of their classmates. Though they were always on their best behavior, there was no getting back their previous lives of respect and normalcy. As much as their mother wanted to wave a magic wand and change public opinion of a natural phenomenon which they had no control of, things were what they were and when Barley turned out to be pregnant, everyone agreed that their time at Hope Hollow had to come to an end. Ponies might have been more accepting, or at least less scrutinizing, of their family in the big city but they'd only visited there a couple of times and they just weren't used to the chaos. Small town life was what they knew and loved best and there was only one small town where they knew where they'd be welcome. - - - “Rollcall,” blasted Scootaloo from behind the Cutie Mark Crusaders Clubhouse podium. “Pickle?” “Present,” replied the colt calmly from his seat. “Barley?” “Present.” “And I am also present,” muttered Scootaloo, ticking the final box with the pencil in her mouth. “Everyone's here. This meeting of the Rainbow Dash Fan Club will officially commence. First order of business, how's the new fan club member coming along?” Barley looked down at her big bulge and gave it a stroke with her hoof. “Um… coming along,” she shrugged with a wrinkled smile. “Great! Any new interactions with Rainbow?” Pickle raised his hoof. “I asked Rainbow if I made it into the Wonderbolts when I'm old enough, would we be on the same team together? She said it was theoretically possible because she says she probably has a lot of years left.” “That would be so cool,” said Scootaloo. “If I could fly, that would be my life goal.” She sighed and looked down at her paper. “Oh, look. It says here that this weekend, Rainbow Dash will be best mare at a certain wedding you may have heard about.” She looked back up at them expectantly. “Are you two nervous yet?” Barley shook her head. “No. Well… kissing in front of everyone is going to be kind of embarrassing,” she added. “I know we have to do that.” Her concern about that of all things instead of the cake or the flowers or her dress underscored the fact that just because they were having sex and pregnant and getting married didn't mean they were… mature. After the move, the Barrel Twins at least had built in acquaintances and ultimately fast friends with the Cutie Mark Crusaders; it was a good soft landing to help them adjust while they attempted to build trust with the foals at their new school. Miss Cheerilee did everything she could to help with their transition and give a dignified explanation to the class about the situation with Pickle and Barley who was already showing when they arrived on their first day. Many of their classmates seemed ambivalent about their story, not exactly because of the incest but more because of having never seen a mated pair of foals and such a young pregnancy. But at least they weren't outwardly mean to them for it. Surprisingly they'd encountered no more bullying than the usual they'd experienced before getting their cutie marks. That change alone was worth being uprooted from their hometown. For their own peace of mind, the family would have liked to sever all ties to Hope Hollow but the twins still harbored no grudge against their wouldbe special someponies. For their mother the hardest thing to leave was her husband. She said goodbye not knowing if she'd ever have the time and courage to come all the way back to town just to talk to him again. But maybe the distance would give her the reason she needed to start looking for relationships again. - - - Dappled sunshine draped the entourage at the edge of the Apple's property. Princess Cadance graced the front, standing behind the two stunned foals who stared nervously into each other's eyes. “There's a rare poetic beauty in being together from the very moment you came to be and for perpetuity onward. A built in companion for life that just gets you in a way no one else can. In the end isn't this real life fantasy what we all want, a soulmate who just falls from the sky, so to speak. Never having to experience the heartbreak of rejection when a relationship falls apart. Never having to search. Never having to date.” She paused while the audience chuckled. “It's a perfect love but that doesn't mean it's always easy. You still have a lot of growing up to do but that's just another journey you'll take together. You’ll still fight like siblings and soon enough you'll fight like a husband and wife fight but during those times, you'll always know no matter what happens that you're meant to be together because the reminder is tattooed right on your flank.” Brandy sobbed quietly into her kerchief. “And so we come to the beginning of the next chapter of a very long book. Do you, Pickle, take your sister to also be your wife?” “I do,” he replied with conviction. Do you, Barley, take your brother to also be your husband?” “I do,” nodded the filly. Cadance looked back and forth between them before giving the final word. “Then by the power vested in me as the Princess of the Crystal Empire, I now pronounce you mare and stallion… Now kiss,” she smirked. The twins blushed but closed their eyes and leaned in. There came an irreverent, teasing holler from the crowd, especially from the Apple Clan. The blush deepened on their faces before they broke the kiss and laughed. Ponies cheered joyously and rang cow bells. The intimate gathering arose to eat and socialize. They cut the cake which was a combination wedding and belated cute-ceñera cake with their little figurines standing together atop their shared cutie mark made of frosting. Apple Bloom caught the bouquet in her teeth with an agile leap. “‘Bout time a suiter came yer way,” ribbed Granny who was also among the gaggle of eligible bachelorettes. “Ya ain't gettin’ any younger.” “I can't thank you enough for coming all the way out here just to officiate the wedding of a couple of foals you'd never even met,” gushed Brandy. “It really means a lot to us that the Princess of Love did this for us.” “I know it's important,” agreed Cadance, floating her cider glass from her lips. “That's why I did it. When Twilight wrote me about the situation, I just felt like I had to. I'd be remiss in my duties if I didn't use my stature to help destigmatize a completely natural love coupling like breeder bonds. They might be married but they're still just foals. They shouldn’t have to suffer through such consternation over their cutie marks.” On the other side of the venue, the Rainbow Dash Fan Clubbers ate cake and snacks with their favorite Wonderbolt who still wore her dress despite the ceremony being over and her aversion to dresses. “Did you turn in my papers for the Junior Wonderbolts Summer Program?” asked Pickle excitedly, scooping a chunk of cake with the fork in his wing. “Yeah, I did,” answered Rainbow. “Awesome! Once I actually get to show them what I got, I'll be on the Wonderbolt shortlist for sure.” Rainbow laughed nervously. “Um, well… about that… Pickle, I really didn't want to tell you this at your wedding… ceñera but I was actually looking through the rules and regs about being a Wonderbolt and it turns out they actually have a ban on ponies with certain cutie mark types and one of them is breeder bonds.” Pickle’s jaw practically hit the ground, wet crumbs falling from his mouth. “What?” he cried in disbelief. “You mean they won't let me in no matter how good I am and I can never be a Wonderbolt now?” Rainbow scratched her head. “Yeah… Really sorry about that. You can still do the junior program but you can never be an official Wonderbolt. I asked Spitfire about it and apparently it's a measure created to reduce conflicts of interest in the ranks and that includes ‘career breeders’ who are barred to keep them focused on the responsibility of raising their foals.” Devastated, Pickle buried his face in his hooves. “I could do both,” he whimpered. Both Barley and Rainbow put a comforting foreleg around him. “Sorry, kid.” “That really sucks but It'll be okay,” said Scootaloo. “It's another thing that we have in common. I wish I could be a Wonderbolt too but… I can't even fly. At least you still got that.” “Would it make you feel better if I let you try my hard cider?” asked Rainbow, shaking her glass in front of his face. “Mom said we're not supposed to,” he grumbled. “I know, but it's your wedding. C'mon.” - - - The twins spent their wedding night in Ponyville at a hotel. It was to be their honeymoon for lack of a better word. Their mother wasn't keen on the idea of just sending them to Manehattan or Vanhoover alone for a week and going with them to supervise seemed to defeat the purpose. She felt more comfortable with the compromise of letting them stay alone in a hotel and just kicking around their new home town on their own schedule. Pickle laid alone on the pristeen king sized bed, his consciousness threatening to fade out now that the big day was finally done… or was it? “Hey, Pickle,” called his sister in a singsong voice from the bathroom door. The colt rolled over to face her and his eyes went wide. Barley stood there proudly, wearing a slip of white transparent tulle that swept over her baby bump and ended at her hips. It was accented by garters on her thighs and a corset-like boning around her waist. She looked like some classical fertility goddess. “What are you wearing?” he asked in amazement, having never seen such a thing before. “Oh, this? Got it at the wedding shower. Rarity made it especially for me for moments like this. She said it was extra special because they don't really make clothes like this for pregnant foals. Granny Smith called it… What did she say? A negligee.” Barley pranced, wings out, in a five-forty and stopped to present her supple, lace-framed ass. She looked back at him and flicked her tail aside to provide just a titillating glimpse of her plot. “Like it?” she smirked. “Yeah,” he nodded with conviction. She hopped onto the bed and slid down alongside him. Pickle drew her into an embrace with his free foreleg and sighed wistfully.” “You're still brooding over the Wonderbolts, aren't you?” she groaned sadly. “Yeah,” he muttered. “Happened to me too. It's okay. All you need is time and maybe a few fun distractions.” Barley extended her wing and dragged her primaries playfully across his undercarriage, causing him to chuckle and squirm. She went lower, down between his legs, lightly tracing the outline of his empty sheath. Pickle fought to keep his composure as blood rushed to his loins, summoned by the slightest of touches in his most sensitive area. She continued tickling him there until the head of his cock popped out, much to her delight. It was like a fun magic trick, some kind of conjuring spell for pegasi. She wriggled down his barrel until she was chin level with her brother's colthood. Then she wrapped her lips around his semi hard flare and began to suck it like a straw. She ran her tongue over his dome. Pickle grunted in approval. His length stiffened quickly, naturally pushing itself into her mouth with nowhere else to go. His medial ring slipped past her pouting lips. His tip push down her gullet. Soon his entire length had filled out firmly and had slithered its way easily down her throat just at the coaxing of her tongue and the welcoming wetness of her maw. Barley had found this to be the best way to get him all the way in her mouth without gagging. Still on their sides, she began to bob her head with a sucking slurp. Pickle let out a shaky breath and placed a hoof on her head. With one wing still out she began to tease his balls with her feathers. They clenched in surprise and she felt his girth flex powerfully between her lips, the same way it did when he came but he wasn't finished yet. She glided up and down his length in slow, deliberate strokes. “Ugh, that's so good,” he grunted, eyes clenched shut. Hearing his accolades suddenly made her acutely aware of the cascade of wetness happening between her own legs. She switched to short bobs with her lips around his base and her chin bumping his balls rhythmically. His breaths became short and frenetic as his pleasure rapidly snowballed. His forehoof shook on her head letting her know he was getting close. Pickle's mouth dropped open with a guttural finality and he thrusted once deep into her mouth, holding himself there. Barley felt his base throb as he fed her his salty cream. She waited for him to stop firing, then swallowed his load in one gulp. She laid there for a moment while her brother played softly with her mane. She pulled back slowly, letting his flare pop from her mouth. She licked the residual savory musk from her lips and crawled back up to lay beside him. “Feel better?” “Yeah… a little.” “A little?” she scoffed, shoving him playfully. “I swear, you're the biggest grump. C'mon, it's our wedding night. It's supposed to be fun and sexy… even though we're really tired.” “Yeah,” he sighed in agreement. “Better get myself going before I just pass out.” He nudged his sister over onto her back presenting her huge laced belly to the ceiling. He shimmied down to the space between her hips where he found her glistening slit shrouded behind an almost ethereal white veil. He licked his lips as he slowly lifted the covering to fully reveal her fillyhood. He pressed his muzzle to her and inhaled deeply, sending shivers of anticipation up his sister's spine. Barley hummed as Pickle dragged his tongue through her little valley. He rooted around in her folds, unable to see her expression behind her big stomach. He sucked her clit into his mouth like a wet noodle. She gasped, arching her back and placing both forehooves on her brother's head as if she were afraid she'd fall. Pickle laid out flat on the bed and wrapped his forehooves around the outside of her quivering thighs. He pushed his muzzle further into her mound, eliciting an impassioned whimper from Barley. He pulled off with a smack and lapped at her nub, bouncing it up and down on the tip of his tongue. Her hips gyrated, rocking into his mouth. Her hooves pushed his head down, forcing him to suck her again. Barley mashed her lips together, paralyzed by pleasure. She cried out as euphoria rushed through her body, causing her to lose all control and presence of mind. She felt the foal squirm inside her as she seized violently. She let out a satisfied groan. It felt like she'd just landed in a big puffy crash pad after falling from the sky. Everything was spinning and it felt wonderful. Pickle planted a loving goodbye kiss on her pussy that made her shiver. He stood up slowly on the bed. His dick swung from his undercarriage. It was solid again from eating out his sister. Though he was ready to collapse, he felt the night wouldn't be complete without a rutting. Was that not the tradition and the whole point of the clothes she'd dawned? Since growing large with child, he could no longer lay atop her but she probably wouldn't want to stand tonight, he figured. “I can do another round,” he told her breathlessly. “You can stay on your back if you scoot your butt to the edge of the bed.” Woozy but still eager, she shifted, crawling till her tail was draped over the bed’s edge and her hind legs were splayed wide, up in the air and waiting to be mounted. Pickle hopped down from the bed and reared up planting his forehooves on either side of Barley's waist. He bowed his head and lifted the veil once more, this time with his teeth. The colt eased forward, lining himself up with her entrance. Then he watched as her folds parted around his shaft and he plunged straight into her welcoming fillyhood with no resistance. Barley moaned as her brother filled up her snatch with his meat. Pickle was quick to start pounding her, legs straddling him in the air, a drunken smile on her face. Her clit was reawakened by his pistoning length, sending pulses of pleasure through her once again. Their thighs began to clap as they grunted softly. She ran her forehooves down her bouncing belly, keeping one there as if to restrain it. The other ventured further down to where it could feel his slick member sliding in and out of her. Her hoof was compelled to slip into the apex of her slit where it began to rub, her hunger roused again even after cumming just a couple minutes prior. Pickle kept thrusting with a dazed lust. Somewhere off in the hazy distance he could hear his sister squeaking as a second, smaller orgasm broke over her weary body. Her legs squeezed his sides before she went limp like a rag doll. She was a toy now. He increased his speed as she laid there heaving and completely at his mercy. He let out a triumphant groan as he reached climax. His body shuddered as he pumped a second surge of cum inside her. His expression looked pained though he was in ecstasy again. It faded quickly, leaving him with his exhaustion and a heavenly full body tingle. His forelegs crumpled, almost leading him to topple onto his twin. Once he'd regained his balance he withdrew from her. Her collapsing folds yielded a little spurt of his seed. Pickle wobbled back onto the bed and wriggled lazily under the covers. Barley blew out the light and joined him, spooning up to his side and draping a foreleg over his barrel with a contented sigh. It was a quite satisfactory ending to the amazing day. Well, it was an amazing day except for the Wonderbolts part, she lamented. Barley grazed her lips across her brother's ear. “You know,” she breathed softly, “we may never be Wonderbolts but with our combined genes and the number of foals we’re going to make, there's a decent chance we'll at least make a future Wonderbolt. There could even be one inside me right now.” Pickle laughed weakly with his eyes closed. “I guess you have a point. Maybe I can learn to live with that.”
Boltstrike58
550681
1
Alphabittle,Opaline,Drama,Sad,My Little Pony: A New Generation
Parental Fear
Alphabittle finally gets to confront the mare who took Misty from him.
complete
37
1
<p>In the midst of Opaline's massive Cutie Mark theft, she is confronted by a stallion. A very familiar stallion, who isn't happy about her treatment of Misty.</p><hr/><p>A quick story I wrote that I think could've been a scene in Make Your Mark, but wasn't shown.</p>
everyone
2024-02-02T01:38:27+00:00
2024-02-02T01:38:27+00:00
667
In all his time in Bridlewood, Alphabittle had never seen such chaos. Ponies were running amuck in states of panic, many of them missing their Cutie Marks. Alphabittle hadn't seen for himself, but he'd heard from others that an alicorn had appeared from the Together Tree, flanked by two giant dragons, and was stealing the marks with her magic. All of his attempts to impose some semblance of order had met with failure, as the ponies were too freaked out to listen to reason. The older unicorn cursed under his breath as another mark-less unicorn ran past him, screaming all the way. He wondered where Misty and her friends were in the middle of this crisis, since they were usually the ones to intervene in disasters. Of course, his fatherly instinct overrode any frustration he had with them, and he instead hoped they were alright. Another scream from behind caught Alphabittle's ears, and he whirled around on one hoof. The sight that awaited him was a magenta alicorn mare with a white, blue-streaked mane, standing over a cowering unicorn colt. Unlike Sunny Starscout, this alicorn's wings and horn were all organic. On either side of her, a massive dragon stood, though their eyes stared forward, as though they weren't actually seeing anything. The alicorn cackled as she levitated up the colt, and with a pulse of magic, ripped his Cutie Mark from his flank. The mark floated up to her in a transparent bubble, and she dropped the colt to the ground. "Get back! Leave him alone!" Alphabittle roared, as he charged across the grass towards them. He lit up his own horn, levitating up a few rocks as he went. He pitched them towards the alicorn with as much power as he could, but he realized too late that shouting had been a mistake. The alicorn turned towards the source of the noise, and with a flap of her wings, evaded the rocks coming at her. Then she fired a blue bolt of magic from her horn, which hit Alphabittle in the legs, creating blue energy shackles around them, and sending him toppling to the ground. As he struggled to get free, the alicorn descended towards him. "Really, you foolish pony, what did you expect to accomplish with that little stunt?" she asked in a mocking tone of voice. Alphabittle weakly raised his head to look behind her. The colt she'd had before was picking himself up from the ground, a few tears dripping from his eyes. "Run..." Alphabittle managed to grunt out. Fortunately, the colt heeded his words, and turned around to flee into the woods. The dragons made no move to stop him. The alicorn simply scoffed. "It's not like I needed him for anything else, anyway," she gloated. Then her eyes fell on Alphabittle's Cutie Mark. "You, on the other hoof..." Alphabittle felt her magic envelope him, and he was pulled off the ground. "Who are you?" he demanded, trying desperately not to show any weakness. "Why are you doing this?" "I'm taking your Cutie Marks, and your magic, because it is my right as the only and most powerful alicorn in all of Equestria," she replied, as if it were the most obvious thing in the world. "As for my name, I will grace you with the knowledge of it. I am Opaline Arcana, and I am your new master." As her magic sought out his Cutie Mark, something in Alphabittle's brain clicked. That name was familiar to him, but he couldn't place where he'd heard it before. He racked his memories, searching for the connection, until he finally hit it. "Where were you all these years, Misty?" "It's kind of a long story, Dad. See, I met this alicorn named Opaline Arcana. She took me in, and I think she might've wiped my memories, because I forgot all about my foalhood, and—" "YOU!" Alphabittle screamed. His voice made Opaline actually jump and stretch her wings outwards in fright. She quickly recovered and looked back at him. "I'm sorry, what?" she asked. "Do I know you or something? I don't recall ever meeting an old unicorn before I was banished from Equestria by that infernal Twilight Sparkle. In the back of Alphabittle's mind, the name "Twilight Sparkle" rang a bell, but he didn't care. Rational thought was buried under tons of pure rage. "You're the one who took Misty that night!" he snarled. "When she got lost, you're the one who found her! You took my daughter away from me!" Opaline blinked a couple of times, before throwing back her head and laughing. "Misty actually had family this whole time?!" she cackled, as though she couldn't believe it. "Someone actually found a reason to care about that stupid filly?! Now I've seen everything!" "'Stupid filly?!'" Alphabittle snapped back in fury. "She's my child! My little girl! And you took her away from her home! You took her, erased her memories, and forced her to serve you!" "Well, of course I forced her to serve me. That's the purpose all ponies exist for, after all," Opaline continued, looking down at her hoof. "You should be grateful I took her. That's one less mouth for you to feed, after all. And instead of growing up, being a waste of space, she gained a purpose in helping Equestria's true empress." Alphabittle couldn't believe his ears. This mare was talking like his daughter was some stupid possession that she took off his hooves, instead of a living, breathing pony. She saw Misty as nothing more than a tool to be used to achieve her objectives. Misty had told him about how cruel Opaline had been to her, promising her a Cutie Mark for service, but punishing her so harshly every time she failed. It broke his heart. "You're a monster," he breathed. "You ruined her life, and you don't even care." Opaline rolled her eyes. "Is this another stupid friendship lesson?" she demanded. "Because I'm over those by now. Sunny and her friends have been throwing those at me enough already." With another pulse of magic, she ripped Alphabittle's Cutie Mark from his body. He felt no physical pain, but there was a feeling as though part of his very soul had been taken. Opaline then released the restraints around Alphabittle's legs, and dropped him to the ground. He fought through his sheer fear to try and levitate something else to throw at her, but his magic wouldn't respond without his Cutie Mark. He could only watch as Opaline and the two dragons marched off to steal more marks. Alphabittle was left alone in the middle of the forest, staring in horror after the mare who'd ruined his daughter's life. His eyebrows shot upwards as he remembered Misty and the others. They weren't safe from Opaline, either. Alphabittle grabbed his phone, and hurriedly dialed Misty's number. The phone rang and rang, but she didn't pick up. Alphabittle swallowed in fear.
BlueDragon64
550684
1
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-03T00:33:05+00:00
2024-02-15T22:33:48+00:00
724
The last thing I remember was the feeling of falling and then black. I don't remember what killed me all I do know is I was walking home to be a nice day no clouds maybe three or four in the afternoon I was walking and just tripped small rock maybe and then I fell and nothing just black. If I'm going to start talking to myself, I might as well say my name it's Kevin not sure that maters now after I fell it's just been this blackness although maybe void is a better term for this I can't feel anything or see I'm just hear it's weird I'm not mad or sad I feel like I should be but I'm not. How long have I been here anyway?. Is this it?. Ok what do I know I'm Kevin leery forester I'm twenty one I was born in 2001 in the state Ohio in Columbus no job lost my last one to budget cuts last month and no living family not many friends and no pets. What else?. My main hobbies are cartoons reading bad fanfiction and games and that's it? what else do I say? well fuck is this really it literally just a black void and my own head....why am I not panicking or sad? can I even get sad?. So, what do I do repent my sins or scream make a wish? can I move? kind of feels like I'm moving now but nothings changing? what's that? light?. As my mind comes too awareness, I still see black. :Oh not this again: but as I kept looking, I see it's not all black there's some light vary faint I try to move closer only it feels different now I feel warm and very wet my mind now caching up to my body :where am I?:. And suddenly I feel whatever I'm inside move swaying back and forth slightly as it does so :wait am I in someone's womb although now that I think about it that seem right, I did die and then that void and light so rebirth? probably:. As whoever I'm in keeps moving I feel them stop after some time wherever we are is much brighter but that's all the difference I see. I can hear some muffled noise from outside can't make anything out it's all just noise after a few moments I feel my mother move and lay down I think then a quick burst of movement the water around me flooding away and the walls squeezing me as I'm pushed forward after a while, I see bright light as I leave my new mother. I can't see well for a while the light around me hazy and blurred but after a while my new eyes start to adjust to the light and the first thing, I can make out is the wall of the room I'm in. Its color a soft wight much like unfired clay bricks as I get my barring's I look around the room. As I look around the first thing to catch my eye is a pink and magenta color after focusing for a moment, I make out the shapes :oh what the fuck: In front of me is a pony a type of pony I recognize :well I know where I am now: as I take in more of my surroundings I see the pony in front of me in a unicorn mare. She is wearing what looks like a doctor's coat although is stops at her mid back and doesn't seem to cover her belly only the chest and back. Looking around I see another pony this one not wearing anything a earth pony mare with dark brown coat and green mane they seem to be talking but I don't recognize the language the sounds not having any meaning to me. Continuing to look at the room I'm in it's pretty sparce only having some cushions a bed small desk and a cradle that I'm in. Laying on my side I look up as I hear the conversation between the two mares get louder, I don't know the words but nether look happy and the doctor keeps trying to get the other mare to sign the clipboard she's holding in her magic. I get distracted at that as I see a light pink field seep from her horn and vanish reappearing near her clipboard my attention going back to their conversation as its now more a shouting match before it can continue the brown mare pushes the door to the room open and slams it behind her leaving only me and the doctor in the room. She seems to deflate slightly before looking at me seeing me staring back at her she gains a bit and approaches me after a moment she seems to cast a spell on be before finding a piece of paper and casting the spell on it. This seems to form words although I can't read them as I don't think it's English although it's hard to make the letters out from the light shining through it. After reading the words her mood seems to lift some now with a big smile, she picks me up and moves me out of the room and down a hallway with several dozen other doors all with numbers I don't understand after going through another door we come to a quiet room full of cradles with sleeping foals she puts me down in one and leaves and after a few moments of nothing I decide to just sleep like the others and after a few minutes I drift to sleep. TIME SKIP It's been about a week or so from when I was born, and things are interesting so far, I've stayed in what I presume is a hospital in that time not much has happened I've been few and changed at least twice a day but not much beyond that today something new though as one of the nurses picks me up and we move to the front of the hospital two doors leading outside. At the front desk she hands me off to a group of ponies most mares but some stallions and a few foals they seem to be gathering them to go with them as she passes me to an older unicorn mare she also gives her a envelop I think my documents :well looks like I found who I'm living with:. After a day or two of not seeing the brown pony I think was my mother it didn't take long to realize that I was given away I don't know why nor do I really in my past life I grow up living with uncles and aunts never meeting my birthparents they died in a car crash from what I was told. The older looking mare picked me up in her magic as her group started to leave me with them as the doors closed behind us, I got my first good look outside it looks like noonish as I look around, I see three to six story buildings around us seems like were in a city fairly big one from the looks of it many ponies moving up and down the streets some with carts and carriages. As our group moved though the busy city streets, I see more ponies mostly unicorns some pegasi and few earth ponies all walking going about their day some carrying things after twenty minutes or so we turn off the busy street and down one with less traffic we pass restaurants ponies eating at tables as we pass by. After some more time we reach a large building three story's high with fairly large front lawn along with a few gardens growing herbs and small crops as we enter the main doors, we come to a fairly large room a large staircase going up to the second and third floors we turn down a hallway and into a room much like the hospital around two dozen cradles most empty siting in the room the older mare holding me put me down before leaving. RAPID TIME SKIPS It's been a few weeks that I've been at the orphanage in that time I've learned quite a lot. A few words although I'm not sure what they mean I have a decent idea but I'm not certain. My legs have gained enough strength to walk some a few of my new caretakers looked surprised but not overly so I learned soon when one of the other foals that came with me from the hospital started walking a week later although that dose make sense as ponies in my last life could walk soon after birth. I've decided that I should probably not try speaking I don't really want too much attention this world has magic so I don't actually know if they have encountered someone who's reincarnated before so I may try speaking when one of the other foals that came with me dose. Another thing that seems to be working in my fever is they don't seem to think it odd that I can walk already I think it's because I'm an earth pony out of all the ponies that are here, I'm the only one most being unicorn's foals and a few pegasi ones. Even though we can't have been born that far apart maybe a few days at most yet I'm already bigger than all of them and from what I've seen earth ponies seem bigger than the others pegasi being the smallest so me walking before the others didn't seem to raise any red flags. At this point I've seen several rooms in one there was even a mirror on the wall, so I finally got a good look at myself my coat a deep brown even darker than my mother's my main and tail is green much like hers but much like my coat it to is a deeper color a deep forest green my eyes being a bright light green almost like emeralds. And I've been outside a few times although always under close watch I've even enjoyed playing around as a kid again not having to stress over work and rent has been nice but I'm starting to get bored I'll have to find a to entertain myself. time skip It's my first birthday today I was given some small toys and some drawing supplies as gifts. Even better news I was given a name its Shade Evergreen I decided to take that name as it seems fitting with how I look. In other news I've learned a lot of the language I still can't say I'm fluent in it but I can now hold a conversation even better is than not a few weeks ago one of the other foals said their first word after a week ago so I started to do the same now a lot of my caretakers try to teach me words mostly simple words but it's still helping a lot in learning the language. One thing I found out It that the orphanage has a library in it while watching me one of the caretakers took me there to return books it's not big but still fairly large holding a hundred or so books. In the past year, I've been able to learn a few written words although not many I think I will try to learn more if I can although I shouldn't push my luck too much in the past year, I had a few close calls with the caretakers. Speaking of the caretakers I've learned some of their names the main one being the name of the orphanage head the older unicorn who took me here. Her name is Margee Limestone her coat is sandstone in color and her main a dark brown although not as dark as my coat and her eyes are a dark blue. I've learned the names of a few other ponies but most I haven't the orphanage houses around a hundred or so orphans, so they have quite a few staff members. Another interesting thing is eating after we turned ten months old, they started to feed us solid food mostly soft stuff some bread fruit and a few other plants that humans don't eat often or at all like daisies and hay at first, I was a bit apprehensive but after trying them they aren't that bad although I'm defiantly starting to miss meat. time skip It's my second birthday today I'm two now somethings have changed the big one being I have magic now a month or so ago I picked something up with only one hoof a small rock I'd been trying to do so for a while now practicing a few times a week since I turned one. A few of the other foals my age also started doing it but only the unicorns not pegasi so I think my practice has paid off some. I think a unicorn's horn has a lot with how they use magic to hold things so early in life because even when they are only holding something with their hoof their horn still glows a small bit my best guess is their horn is compensating for their weak magic for their age. In the show most earth ponies are farmers or bakers' stuff like that something that requires contact with their work but it's pretty obvious that they still have magic just not a horn but that still doesn't explain why unicorns have more magic than other ponies. My best guess there is that unicorns simply use their magic to make a direct affect more often than the other types of ponies. A good example is that most earth ponies use their body's more, so their magic probable strengthens it. Whereas a pegasus uses it to fly their wing not really big enough for them to fly yet they still do on top of that some ponies also seem to have more magic than others the only reason I can think of for that is simply practice. Form what I remember of the show most unicorns that are strong in magic grow up using it more than others, After deciding to try to train my magic my best idea to do so is to simply use it to hold something as long as I can right now, I can only hold something that doesn't weigh much a few small pebbles and twigs from the yard during play time. So, my current plan is to find the max weight I can hold and do so for as long as I can before my magic runs out and to do that as much as I can. time skip I'm five now in the past two years I've made a lot of progress. The main changes I've had are preschool we get taught by a teacher that the orphanage brings in and we have a room for classes right now were mostly learning to read so not much for me to do as I already know how to read but there are some words that I don't know so it is rounding out my knowledge. Probable the best part is the small book shelve which I read through mostly simple kids' books, but some still had some things to learn. By far the best part about growing some is the alone time before I could only do things like practice for short amounts of time now, we are for the most part left to our own devices for most of the day. Because of this I've had a lot more time to practice then before in the past two years the length of time and weight I can hold have been increasing I've even learned to hold things without touching them it's only a few inches from my body but after practicing it seems to be increasing in range as I push my limits. After a while I decided to name this affect simply my telekinetic field or TF for short. With my practice, I can now hold a few pounds of stone without using my own strength and a few ounces at most when floating them without contact. Another thing I've noticed is I can hold smaller and lighter thing much longer now it may just be my growth but even then, I don't think It would be this strong, so I believe my training is working. The last real thing of note is I've taken up running mostly in games with the other foals to try and stay fit I don't know if exercise will help with my magic capacity all that much but it's worth a try and keeping in shape will help me in general my current plans are to try and get access to the main library and learn more about magic in general. time skip It's my eight birthday today and the past few years have been interesting. Let's start with school in my past life I lived in America and the grads there went preschool and kindergarten from four to six elementary schooling from seven to eleven middle school from twelve to fourteen and high school from fifteen to eighteen. After we left preschool at six, we started something like middle school which lasts until we are ten. It's pretty similar mostly tests on spelling and grammar the biggest difference, I found was numbers we were only taught basic math at eight earlier this year and even then, only basic addition and subtraction not even multiplication. Furthermore, many of the other ponies my age are having a hard time doing it. For a human even if a kid struggles with math, they would still be better by this age I don't think ponies are dumber or something like that. As far as I've seen in all other aspects, they are comparable to human although smaller so it's really just math that seems to be a difficulty for them by theory is that a pony's mind is less geared towards math then a human's although I don't know the reason, I just can't see another possibility. In other news I've gotten to explore the city more and finally learned what city I'm in. Which to my shock turned out to be Canterlot of all places to be born I'm not really sure if that's lucky of not good news is I think my idea to keep a low profile was a good one mostly because of my proximity to a certain sun pony. Speaking of her I got to see her raise the sun not long ago during the summer sun celebration me and the other foals were taken to see it and I can tell you right now she's definitely got presentation if nothing else. Another thing I've learned is dates like my birthday April fifth. That's another odd thing the calendar has the same names for months and the year is also three hundred and sixty five days just like earth I may half to look into that later but for now it's only an interesting oddity I also learned the year 988 so I'll be twenty when cannon starts. In terms of my own progress my training continues as normal. I'm now able to lift rocks weighing sixty to seventy pounds and able to float a one to two pounds of rock close to me although it gets harder the further away it is I can lift maybe half a pound ruffly eight ounces five of six feet away from me for things like pebbles and twigs with some effort I can pick them up almost ten feet away. I've kept up with my running too mostly to train my endurance. I also started drawing again in my past life it was a hobby of mine that I stopped doing because I never had enough time for it this turned out to be a good choice of hobby because around a year ago, I finally got access to the main library. In the library most books where about careers and jobs which does make since, but two books did catch my interest both about magic the first being about what magic is and the later about runes and spells. First what is magic well it didn't give clear answers like I'd hoped but I did learn that magic is a form of energy that is everywhere in the world as far as they can tell, and that using magic requires two things will and math. Will to move and form your magic and math to give it instructions unicorns do this by memorizing a spell matrix in their mind and then pushing their magic out of their horns to power the spells in contrast earth ponies and pegasi that use their magic more passively for strength to fly and to hold objects. The other book went more Indepth about a spell's matrix. and the runic spells use the same math formulas to do the same thighs different ways. A good example the book gave was the heating spell a simple one it only heats something until warm the math basically just tells the spell what the base temperature is and to go higher. The more complex the spell and the more drastic the effect means you need to keep the spell matrix and math firmly in your mind and then you need enough magic to power it. This is part of the reason not many unicorns learn more than the basic spells and most go to magic schools to learn anything more. And also, why only unicorns use this type of magic as if a earth pony or a pagasus did try this method they wouldn't be able to push the spell out of their body's where it's been formed. This being the most widely used type of magic but there's also runic magic it's not that different from normal spell casting and despite its name it seems to not use any language only numbers and symbols as far as I can tell. In fact, the two branches of magic are almost identical the spell matrix and runic matrix being interchangeable with each other the big difference being that a spell matrix is formed in the mind and a runic one is formed outside the body using magic to draw it. What interests me the most about runic magic is that you don't need a horn to cast them you just need to push your magic into the tip of your hoof and draw the matrix out. And if your good enough at it you can even form the matrix all at once outside your body that's actually the difference between a novice and journeyman runic caster. A master is somepony who can form more than one at a single time. Now as you can imagine I was pretty excited that I could actually do magic I read the entire book that day. and the next day I went to my room with a small rock and the book that I was able to borrow with a promise to be careful with my attempts. At first, I was surprised they would give an eight year old a book on spells but the only three spells in the book are one for heating cooling and a weak lifting spell. On top of that when a spell matrix fails or is done incorrectly the magic will just dissipate into its surroundings. With weak spells this isn't that dangerous but with more powerful spells the uncontrolled magic can be dangerous this being one of the main reasons most don't use this magic why spend your time learning a difficult and sometimes dangerous branch of magic when you can just pay a unicorn to do it for you. And as for why other ponies don't use runes to make enchanted items it's the same because the process of making an enchanted item is the same if your using runic magic vs spell casting. After making it to my room. The room itself being rather simple a bed two shelfs a desk and a small chest as I move to sit on my bed, and try the most basic step drawing with magic as I focus on my hoof, I try to concentrate my magic in the front of my left hoof my hoof gaining a small emerald, green shine on one end I focuses and move my hoof to the left as I do so a line of deep green magic is left in the air. I smile at this and attempt to draw out the heating spell. And after several attempts I drew two ruff circles of green light one inside the other as I kept my concentration, I wrote the correct numbers inside and as I draw the last number, I move the small rock I brought with be and put it into the circles and feed the runes my magic the matrix flashes slightly as the rock starts to heat up. And after a minute or two I've used half my mana and cut my connection to the runes the matrix dissolving into moats of light before disappearing. As I reach out to touch the rock, I feel the warmth coming off it the stone hot to the touch :it worked: as a large smile spreads across my muzzle, I see faint light coming from me side :hmmm?: as I turn, I see the light coming from my flank. Before there's a flash as I blink the wight spots from my eyes I turn to my flank. excited to see what's on it as I do I see the form of a stone tablet with runic matrix on it the stone is a deep dark color much like lava rock the runes don't seem to have any meaning that I can tell just random numbers after seeing my new cutie mark, I decide to practice more runes before going to bed. time skip It's now my tenth birthday it's been two years since I got my cutie mark. As a gift, I was given a book on some more complex spells after getting my cutie mark the head mare told me that I can only practice basic spells and only with supervision of a caretaker, so I'm excited to try some more complex spells. A few things I've learned that are important one most ponies consider fifteen to be an adult that seemed a little weird but ponies in my past life where adults a five or six and only lived for twenty five to thirty and I've gotten to meet some ponies here that are way older one in their seventy's, and ponies also seem to mature a bit faster than humans. One of the things is that I was told to start thinking about a career and was given a small book with apprenticeships I could take for a job there where quite a few mostly crafting and production jobs so I'll have to give it some thought as when I turn fifteen, I'll have to leave the orphanage. One thing of note is guilds many of them most for a specific craft like blacksmith or tailoring. As for my training It's been going well, I can lift almost two hundred pounds with my TK field now float ten closes to me and almost a pound around twenty feet away. My magic reserves are still growing along with my control over my magic at this point I think my reserves are larger than even most unicorns my age most of them not practicing much magic and some don't even practice spells at all. I've also gotten better at drawing practicing more after I learned that the better drawn my runes the less magic they take for the spell. Using runes has also helped me train how fast my magic refills the rune for the heating spell that I could only keep up for a few minutes two years ago I can now keep going Indefinitely my body has also kept growing I'm now almost as tall as some of the adult pegasi and still growing that and as I've kept exercising so I'm in good health. A few weeks after my tenth birthday I finally decided on an apprenticeship after looking though the book they gave me I found one for a librarian for the city. The library is the second largest library in Equestria only behind the royal library the job itself isn't anything grand, but it's pay is pretty decent as not many younger ponies want to work there the only real requirements are I need to start the job before the age of thirteen and I need to stay until I'm fifteen. The main reason I chose this job is because it gives me plenty of time to research as I'm allowed to read on my break and before and after my shift, I also get free access to the library and can check out as many books as I like as long as I take them back every month. On top of all of that I also get a rent free room nothing fancy but still my own space. After learning all this I decided to go for this one it took a week for them to send a letter saying I was accepted and after that I started my new job tomorrow.
BlueDragon64
550684
2
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-04T02:52:16+00:00
2024-02-10T21:01:42+00:00
484
After waking up and washing I grabbed a bag with my things and headed to the head mare's office and knock on the door "come in" as I enter the office, I see the Magree the mare who brought me to the orphanage years ago "morning Shade you ready to go?" I nod "yes mam" she nods back. After a few moments she gathers her things, and we leave the orphanage. As we walk though canterlot we pass though the shopping district and move towards the older part of the city as the buildings get taller and more fancy, we come to the entrance of the library we stop. :Here" she hands me a packet with by documents "you've been a good colt these years and you've grown so much" she tells me looking me up and down some "now you behave ok I don't want to hear about you starting trouble now" I give a small simile to her. "Of course, mam and thank you for taking care of me all these years". She gives her own smile before giving me a nod and passing me a small piece of paper with some numbers on it "this is the orphanages address for any mail you want to send and make sure to tell me if you help". The last part is mixed with some sternness in her voice. "I will I promise and thank you again" I say as I put the slip of paper in my bag "goodbye". And with that she nods and starts walking back to the orphanage I turn back to the city library the building is much larger than the others around it its style vary similar to the old roman building large stone pilers and bricks and a large front entrance a fair few ponies coming in and out. As I make my way inside, I approach the front desk an elderly unicorn mare siting there checking someponys books and putting them in a bag I what a few minutes for them to finish before approaching the desk "what can I do for you sir" she asks. "I'm here for an apprenticeship it should be under the name Shade Evergreen". She looks a bit surprised "oh so you're the new colt joining it's good to see some young ponies interested in learning" she says in a happy tone "do you see the door over there" she points with a hoof to a door on the left wall In between some bookshelves "go through there and take your first right than it should be the first door on your left". "Thanks". As I turn to the door after a few moments I'm at the door I reach out and knock. "Come in its open" as I open the door, I see a light green unicorn mare with a bule mane "oh so you're our new apprentice" I nod as I enter the office. "Yes, I'm Shade nice to meet you". She nods to a sit pillow on the floor "I'm Daisy Scrolls nice to meet you too" as I sit, she brings out some forms "so you will need to sign this it will make you a government employ and this one for you room" as I look at the papers nothing really noteworthy stands out mostly just a simple document for taxes. "I was surprised this was a government job to be honest I would have thought it would be under the city's control" I ask as I read through the pages. Daisy chuckles at that "I thought the same when I took the job but apparently the princess likes to keep the library well kept most of our funding even comes from her" I pause at that. "Ha I never would have guessed that" after a few moments I finish reading and sign my name on both documents getting a surprised look from her as I don't use my hoofs but my TK field. "Well, that's a neat trick". I smile "ya I think so too" as I finish signing, I pass the papers back she looks them over before nodding. well, everything looks good" she puts the papers in her desk "follow be I'll give you a tour of where you're going to work" we leave her office. After showing me the library's layout, she brings me to a brake room. The room having a few long tables with some cushions to sit on "this is our brake room you can eat or just relaxes on your brake food is served in three meals so you can get breakfast at six. Launch is at two and diner at seven". After that we move a wide hallway full of a few dozen doors as we walk down the hallway, we stop at a door numbered fifty six she hands me a key "this is your room key don't lose it you'll be fined for it". "Thanks" as I unlock the door and enter the room its larger than I expected around fifteen by twenty five feet the left wall has a bed desk and dresser on it the front wall a decent sized window the right a small kitchen a counter top and oven along with another door leading to a bathroom with a shower and toilet. "Lot more space than I thought". Daisy nods "I have your schedule here" she passes it to me looking at it I have work tomorrow at seven. "Thanks again" she smiles. "No problem don't forget breakfast is at six and have a goodnight Shade" I nod. "You to Daisy". After she leaves, I close and lock my door before unpacking my things mostly drawing supplies on the desk, :now that I think about it, I don't own much do I. Well, I can buy some stuff when I get paid:. It's not too late, so I decide to drop my bags and go read in the library after locking my door again I make my way to the main library. As I wonder the bookshelves, I see many sections before finding the one I was looking for runic magic. Only a dozen or so bookshelves for this subject and being in an out of the way part of the library. I decide to try and find a book for the basics of the craft hopping to find one to let me improve on my basics I didn't want to blow myself up so best to start small. And after some time, I find a book that looks good It's mostly about different kinds of basic runic spells and after a bit more time searching, I find another about forming runic matrix's most other books seems more advanced than these. So, I take them to the front desk and check them out before heading back to my room and getting comfortable. And after some reading and practice. I go eat the food that's being served the food itself is nothing really special mostly some raw and cooked vegetables fruit and some hay fries. After saying hello to daisy, I head back to my room and read some more before showering and heading to bed I don't want to be late for my first day of work. After waking up I take a shower after drying off. I go grab one of the books that I got yesterday after reading some of it I found out my earlier presumption about a matrix only having math was wrong although in hindsight it makes since as despite the ponies of this world having more knowledge than you'd think they are still less advanced than humans. The main thing I missed in the first runic book I read was the term symbols I thought this meant things like plus minis and other math symbols and they do but they also have symbols for other things. A good example is light if I wanted to show light in a matrix, I would have to use something like the speed of light of or its wave length so the spell would have a starting point to work off of. But as far as I can tell the beings of equis don't know the speed of light or about light wave lengths so how do they use something like a basic light spell well they use a symbol to represent light instead as a substitute. This is why there are different names for a spell matrix. There is a pure number matrix is for the ones with only math and are the most powerful but also most complex the second type are a mixed matrix having both numbers and symbols being somewhat less stable and weaker also taking more magic to use. And finally, there are pure symbols matrix's being the weakest and least stable taking the most magic to create the same effect. Although most ponies outside of researchers or spell scribes don't use or really know these terms as it's mostly for somepony doing spell creation. Speaking of spell creation, I've found some texts about is in the small library at the orphanage mostly in warnings about its dangers because you can get hurt when a spell becomes unstable this danger and the difficulty most ponies seem to have with more complex math makes spell creation an uncommon career to attain as higher education is needed. This is one of the main reasons that even in an empire as big as equestria there's only a few real magic schools most ponies just don't have the talent or drive to try. And even then, most only modify a preexisting spell only a few truly new spells being made every few years. Most being released by the crown some being made by celestia herself every so often so. For my one mental sake I've decided to abbreviate the matrix names to P.N.M and M.M and finally P.S.M to keep better track of them as an example my first spell would be a P.N.M as it's only numbers. Another thing is the symbols themselves most being words of ancient languages. Although I don't know why they would use an older language rather than a new one. After learning all this I decided to find a book on the runic languages later today although I've realized many of these runes are unnecessary for me as a lot of them are for concepts and thing, I already know enough about to use that anyway. A good example of this is the light spell I practiced last night. I tried to change it by using a specific wavelength instead of the symbol they used and after some miner tweaks, I got it to work the spall being more stable and giving off more light even using around a quarter less magic to maintain the spell. But after learning about some of the dangers of modifying a spell I decided to only try on weak spells until I get more experience for the craft. The page I'm reading right now is one of those basic spells being one to create a small flame only about the size of a candles flame, but the spell is one of the more complex beginners' spells. As I start to draw out my rune matrix, I'm interrupted by a few knocks on my door. I pause my drawing to pick up my key from my desk with my TK field and move it across the room to unlock my door and after a moment I get the door unlocked and bringing my key back to me "It's open come in" I give a light shout. As the door is pushed open, I see daisy coming through the doorway "morning Shade sleep well?". She greets as she enters my room "yes you?". I ask back she nod "ya so you ready to go?" I nod. "Yes, do I need to bring anything?". "Just your key" after grabbing my key, we leave my room and as we walk down the hall "so what are you reading?". "Some books on runic magic why?" she gives a bit of a surprised look. "You practice runic magic? wow I've never met a non unicorn that uses it". I turn to her "really, I would have thought there would be at least a few you've met". "Nope most ponies that aren't studying it ever even learn much about is I myself know some but not much". As we enter the break room, we pause our conversation to get food before sitting down and continuing "who taught you how to do it?" before I could answer we were interrupted. "How to do what?". We turn to see an older looking pegasus stallion the stallion looked to be on the older side some of his main graying and a few wrinkles under his orange eyes his coat being almost the same color of orange and his red main still visible even with its graying "oh hay Blaz have a good sleep". "Just fine so this is the new pony working with us". I nod to him "yup nice to meet you names Shade" I greet him. "Same It's good to see some colts still care about knowledge ah put where are my manners, I'm Blazing Flame but most just call me Blaz nice to meet you" he says as he sits down at the table with us "but back to my first question how to do what?". Before I can answer his question daisy dose so for me "we were taking about runic magic apparently shade here practices it" Blaz looked to me sharing the same look of surprise daisy gave me earlier. "Well now that's a surprise you who taught you if you don't mind me asking?" Daisy pipes up. "That's what I was asking". "Well no one taught me I found a book about it and decided to try learn it" both looked even more surprised now Blaz being the first to speak. "Do you know any spells?" he asks I look around for a good example I spot Blaz's tea. "Is your tea cold?" I ask. He looks at his tea before taking a sip "yup". I grab his cup from his hoof with my field and start to draw the runic matrix. Over the past two years I've had only two spells to practice the heating spell and floating spell, so I've gotten fast at drawing both. After around thirty seconds I finish and start powering the matrix and after a few moments I stop letting the spell disappear before giving blaz his now hot cup on tea "here you go". Both looked a shocked an my display "WHAT was that?". Daisy asks I give a light smirk "the heating spell". she looks back at me "I know what spell it was but how did you cast it so fast". "well, I don't have to picture it in my mind only draw the runes and feed it magic so as long as I'm fast and don't mess up the runs it doesn't take that long". "Still colt she's right I've met a lot of unicorns that take longer to cast that spell how long have you been using it?. Blaz asks me. "Well, it's the first one I learned so a little over two years now". "How many spells do you know?" Daisy asks. "Well, I know heating and float from the first book I had on rune magic and light and candle flame I found books for yesterday so I'm still learning them". "Well, you've got me beat when I was your age, I only learned one" Daisy says while finishing her meal. "We should get moving you ready?. I had finished my own food a while ago, so I nodded "see ya Blaz". "You too Daisy same with you Shade hope you like working here". "Me too Blaz.
BlueDragon64
550684
3
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-04T10:15:45+00:00
2024-02-10T20:59:37+00:00
417
After we leave the break room, we walk to Daisy's office, and we sit down "so right now you an assistant librarian so most of your only real duties are to reshelve books and help older librarians in their work although most won't need it it's mostly to teach you what we do and get you familiar with the library". "Here's your schedule you start at seven in the morning your half hour lunch break is at noon and you finish up at three in the afternoon and after that you can just do whatever you want many read in their rooms or the library, but you can also just leave and do anything else" she gives a badge with the symbol of the library on it along with my name and job. "This is your badge it marks you as a librarian so don't lose it there's also a sticking enchantment on is so just put it on your chest it'll gain enough magic to stick for the environment so just make sure its stuck and you'll be fine also don't forget to take it off after your shift don't want anypony to try asking you for help" I nod before sticking it to my chest. She also gives me a small paper map "and finally here's your map". She leaves the office and I follow after her a few moments later we move through a few doors to the back of the library before reaching a room filled with sacks of books on tables with ponise filling several carts "so your main two jobs will be pretty simple you'll be sorting books to fill the carts of pushing the full carts out and putting the books back on the shelves for today you'll be doing the second". As we approach a cart she continues "the carts are already sorted so you just have to take them where they need to go each book has a small round symbol" she holds up a book showing a small round symbol made of silver showing a pickaxe on it "each symbol goes to a different section the ordering being right to left A to Z ascending so bottom right is A and top left is Z got it?". "Ya don't sound that hard, so I'll be moving the carts today". She nods "yup everypony knows your new so just take it slow and get used to the library and I'll see you at lunch in the meantime I'll be in my office if you need, me ok?". "Ok see you at lunch". After she leaves, I pick a cart and start pushing to towards its designation deciding simple push with my TK field instead of my hooves as I make my way through the library over the next five hours moving book the process not being too hard with the strength and rang of my TK and healthy body. After a few hours and finishing my third cart I went back to the sorting room only to see in mostly empty glancing at the clock on the wall I see its twelve oh five lunch time. I leave and after a short walk enter the break room before grabbing some food and sitting down next to Blaz and Daisy already talking. "So, Shade how's your first day going?" Blaz asks. "Not bad I've emptied a few carts but that's about it nothing to really mention" he nods as I take a bite of some steamed carrot "although I do have some questions if you don't mind?" I ask them. "Sure, what you need?" Blaz asks back. "Well first I normally do a morning run but I'm thinking I'll probably do them after work now know any good places?". Blaz nods with a smile "good most ponies don't. But you don't need to switch if you want the best place would probably be the park its only around two blocks away and has plenty of space so you can get there in a few minutes just leave the library go left down the road and continue for a while". "Thanks, good to know my next question is more for Daisy" she turns from her food to me "do you know any spells to tell the time I didn't even know it was lunch until I saw the clock in the sorting room". "Sure, no problem I know one its pretty simple I can find the book for you later". "That would be great thank you" she nods. "No problem" after some more chatting we finish eating and get back to work and after three more hours I'm done for the day. After checking in with daisy and getting my first day's pay, I grab my bags and head out to the city. As I walk along the street, I pass through the upper city market district mostly shops and restaurants and I descend into the lower parts of the city as I approach the market the markets here being mostly stalls along with several restraints some bakeries and many other shops. While growing up in the orphanage I'd visit these markets a few times mostly to help with shopping and to teach me some bartering skills. As I passed through the market, I spot many things that catch my interest but pass them I'm here for something specific that I've seen in the past. I turn to go down a side street this street still having traffic just much less as this street has mostly batponies and a few griffins this particular street selling meat mostly fish and a few other types. As I walk down the street, I stop at a stall selling several types of fish meat. After looking for a few moments I see what is labeled as bass. I see the stall owner a batpony passing some fish to another batpony after their done I call out to him "hey how much for the bass" he turns to me and looks a bit surprised and after a moment speaks. "Sorry didn't mean to be rude just not often you see a non batpony in the meat market especially an earth pony". "And as for the bass its ten bits a pound" I turn to see the fish its good quality and ten bits a pound is a decent price. "Sure, I'll take a pound" I say before grabbing my bits and paying him after he wraps my fish in some paper and puts it in a small paper bag before passing it to me "thanks have a good day". "You too". After that I also buy a small bag of flour a few potatoes some salt oil and sugar. A few plates some small glasses forks and spoons a pan and pot along with a wooden spoon and a decent knife. Before heading back to the library. As I enter one of the staff only back door and head to my room after closing my door, I take out my goods and new dishes and get them put away. Feeling hungry. I start by pre heating a pan on the stove. The heat coming from an enchanted small flat metal ring controlled by a small metal dial on the front. I start cutting the piece of fish into small strips before oiling my pan and laying the fish into it to cook while I dice two potatoes before adding them to the pan. after I flip the fish, I hear a knock at my door before shouting "the doors open come in" after a second or so I hear my door open and close. "What are you cooking" I turn to see Daisy standing there with a book looking curious. "Fish and potato's why?" I ask back hearing my answer she look somewhat shocked. "You eat meat?" I nod. "Ya not often but sometimes". "Your just full of surprises aren't you well I brought you the book I mentioned" I turn off the burner and plate my food before turning to her I grab the book "it's mostly just simple spells for things like housework and convenance". "Thanks for this I'm sure it will be a big help" I float the book over to my desk before looking back at her I see her eyeing my meal "would you like to try some I made more the I need?". After hearing my offer, she pauses for a moment before giving a hesitant nod "y-ya sure I'd like that" seeing her hesitating. "Are you sure you don't have to if you don't want any". "Now I do kind of want to try my grampa was a batpony he used to offer me some it's just been years since then. "Well grab a plate" after we sit down to eat, she try's a piece of the fish. "Oh, WOW this is good" see her take several bites of the fish in fast order. "Slow down you don't want to choke" I say with a grin as she does do so looking a little embarrassed, we sit in silence after that and finish our meal. As I collect our plats, I put them in the sink "I'm glad you enjoyed it" she walks to my door. "Yup thanks again and have a goodnight". "Same to you" I say as she closes my door. I start to clean up and after I'm done, I start reading the book Daisy brought me. The book mostly contained a list of spells with small descriptions of them and there affects. The one I decided to try first was named temporis a simple spell to tell the time nothing complex but still very useful and after spending some time memorizing the matrix, I cast it a few times. It took me a few tries to get it right but after I did it wasn't that hard to get down. After that I started to look through the book for any other spells, I might want to learn a few caught my eye ones like a basic spell to make things lighter and one for freezing something but after a while I put the book down and picked up one of the ones I got yesterday. This being the one about runes. This chapter in specific being about types of magic this being new to me as I previously thought that all magic was the same but in hindsight that doesn't make much sense as beings like Discord definitely have some other type of magic and same with Sombra probably. The difference being their magic element. Many different magic elements exist one for any emotion and type of force in nature such as air fire and water. The main effects of using different types of magic elements being one of a supplement to normal magic. A good way to view this is that most spells use neutral magic also called natural magic the main reason you would use an element instead is that depending on the spell the power and effect can be boosted and enhanced. All beings are born with one or several elemental affinity's so if somepony with a fire affinity where to learn how to convert their natural magic into fire magic and use it to power the candle flame spell or any flame spell it will be enhanced. You can also use the converted magic in a raw form as unlike natural magic it already has an affect and as you're the source of the magic it has some form of connection to you. And although it's not very efficient costing much more natural magic you can also use an elemental type of magic to control it directly without the use of a matrix. The main advantage being the ability to quickly use your magic the downside being that when you convert your magic to an element, while you have little to no practice can you lose sometimes more than half the magic in the process. The main benefit is that unlike spells where you only have a limited amount of control over them with an element you can use it for anything that you like. For instance, you can use a fire affinity to enhance a fire based spell or you can control it directly and start moving around fire at will. You may be wondering why doesn't everypony use their affinity well two reasons one most don't train even their natural magic and so don't have enough excess magic to convert into elemental magic without draining yourself and the second reason has to do with finding out your affinity and unlocking it. After looking through the book I found out how one can learn their affinity and unlock it. All you need to do is to use a spell the book even has it but the problem being not the spells complexity but its power cost being higher than three or four adult unicorns' worth of magic so the only three good options. One can gather several unicorns to power a runic matric. Option two find a pony with enough magic to do it themselves. And finally get a crystal and enchant it to hold a magic reserve and use it as a buffer to power the spell. Out of all the options available to me the last one is the best as getting several ponies together or getting a pony with enough power would cost a lot and that's even if you can find anypony willing. So, my best bet is buying a gem and enchanting it and surprisingly that's not as hard as it seems. Gems even the bigger ones aren't that expensive as crystals seem much more common here then on earth. Charging it would only really take a week or two the hardest part being finding a spell for the magic reserve, but I do work in the second largest library in equestria so finding one should be only a matter of time. And as for the gem when I walked through the markets today, I saw several gems that would work just fine. I don't remember their exact price, but I don't think it's much more then I'd make in a month so I'm going to only be buying some small things for the next few weeks as the sooner I know my affinity's the sooner I can start practicing with them. After making several notes in a journal I keep in english so no pony can read it. I take a shower before draining my magic through a fire candle spell. My new method for doing so as I used the heating spell in the past, I've decided to use this one instead as the more magic you use for it the bigger the flame gets but it also takes more to maintain making it very useful for burning though a large amount of magic quickly. After only a minute or so I'm drained only leaving enough that I don't pass out I drag my tired body to my bed falling asleep almost as soon as my head hits the pillow.
BlueDragon64
550684
4
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-04T22:47:25+00:00
2024-02-08T20:16:54+00:00
382
It's been a week since I started working and I've gone through several shifts sorting and shelving books while learning the layout of the library getting more familiar with it. And after work researching several topic's but as I've dived into the knowledge of the library, I realized that just learning things at random Isn't going to work. To that end I've decided to redo my training schedules and plans. Let's start with the later my plans for now mostly consist of learning any useful magic and also probably creating some new spells but I'll need a lot more practice and knowledge for that as for my long term plans. One thing I've never forgotten is my past life and with it the show. I've done a lot of thinking on how I want to act I'm still not sure, but I know I don't want to be dragged into the main plot mostly for fear of messing things up, but I also don't just want to do nothing. So, for now my plan is to help from behind the scenes nothing obvious but things like seeing if I can put some protections around a certain tree of harmony or helping with one of the other disasters. And now that I have a decent amount of privacy I started to write down all that I remember form the show in a hidden journal. And as for sort term plans. I want to unlock my elemental affinity and learn more spells in general which brings me back to training and researching. For training I run once a day in the morning and drain my magic halfway when I start and finish my shift and mostly read and practice spells then completely drain my magic before bed. For now there's not much to change so I'll stick to my current training until I find a better way. The last thing I'm still training is my TK field. As it stands right now, I can pick up a pony although it's still hard to move things that heavy and even than only for a dozen or so feet. But for smaller objects like books it's around twenty feet this has made my job of putting away books much easier as I don't need a ladder to place them on higher shelves. This also being the main way I've been training my precision and aim. I've also started to move more than one thing at a time and although I can my control is much less when doing it so I'll keep training. As for raw lifting power I mostly train that by lifting my bed a few inches off the ground and holding it there for as long as I can. In terms of research, I've decided to only pick three or four projects at a time as to not overwhelm myself. Right now the topic's I'm researching are mostly runes how affinity's work and spells in general and to a lesser degree I'm also learning about history namely anything about alicorns and the past of the princesses. And finally I'm thinking about learning healing magic as no matter what I plan on doing it will be somewhat dangerous so being able to heal myself and others will be a big help. In the past week I've been reading about a few runes for different things. One of interest is one that was in the book daisy gave me it's affect is to nullify gravity in a small area it doesn't work on large or heavy thing but if I modify it to be more powerful it could be useful to me later. For now though I'm looking more into the affinity spell and I ended up finding a book that goes more in depth about it. I'm glad I did as somethings I learned are important. The main things being that when you cast the spell it doesn't only take a large amount of magic but also takes a large amount of magic to maintain the spell, so you only have around half a minute to write down the results before the magic runs out. The second important thing is what the spell actually doses when you cast it on somepony of yourself the spells matric will have a number of balls of light each of a different element. So, I spent some time in the past week looking for a guide to what the different colors mean and I did find one. I don't know if it has all the elements, but it does have a good list, so I wrote them down for later. I also went to the market yesterday to see gem prices and found that I wasn't that far off from my earlier guess I'll take me around three more weeks to buy one and a few days to enchant and fill it. Speaking of enchantments, I'm in the library right now after work reading a book on enchanting. The process being surprisingly easy all you really need is a material that can conduct magic and to cast a spell on it while also casting a smaller matrix inside the main spells matrix and apply it to your item. I ended up finding the spell to hold magic it wasn't too hard to find and its not to complex so I've decided to get some practice with the spell before I use it on a crystal. As I put the book back after drawing out the matrix in my notebook, I turn to start heading to my room. Only to stop dead in my tracks as not far in front of me I see a unicorn filly mare reading at one of the tables a purple coat a tail and main of dark purple almost blue with a stripe of lighter purple and pink going through it. I immediately start walking the other way before moving behind a bookshelf. After gaining some distance I started to calm down :why the hell is she here? out of all the ponies to run into that's almost the worst:. As I make my way out of the library and too my room I close and lock my door :the last thing I need is to start messing with canon before its even started: after some time, I calm myself down. Ok so I might have overreacted some but still it's best I don't interact with any of them right now. After showering I decide to practice the enchanting spell to form it right and after a while I draw and redraw the matrix a few times. I stop and noticing that it's getting late I draw the matrix for the candle flame spell before pumping all my magic into it creating a foot wide ball of fire for a few minutes before it fizzles out and I head to bed. sponge bob like cutaway "three days later" After the scare three days ago, I was walking on eggshells for a while but after I didn't see a certain purple pony again, I settled back into my daily routine nothing else happened thankfully and right now I'm heading back from shelving books I take a moment to draw the temporis spell. Eleven fifty three lunch time. I leave the cart in the sorting room and make my way to the break room where I sit next to Blaz and Daisy as I normally do and after I sit down I start eating "so Shade you've been here more than a week now how you are liking the job" Daisy asks me. "Not bad the work is pretty easy so nothing to really complain about". Blaz speaks up "you've been doing a good job colt most who start don't get past two carts a day you did double that yesterday just don't push yourself too hard ok?". "I won't" I pause to take a bite of some heyfries "I've been trying to find books on spells to train my control if either of you know any good ones?". Daisy pauses in her eating for a moment "I think I remember some, but most are complex or take a lot of magic so I'm not sure how much luck you'd have trying them". I perk up at this "really do you know of any basic ones?" she shakes her head. "Sorry can't say I have although I do know some books on training, I could find for you?". "That would be great thanks" after that we talked about some other things before getting back to work. After I finished my shift, I decided to go to the park for a walk to relax some I've been doing this every few days to clear my head and get some fresh air. As I walk through the park, I see a group of tables with several ponies playing games as I watch them play, I see an elderly unicorn setting up a chess set on one of the tables before sitting down. I've come through this park a few times now, so I've learned that it's an open invitation to play so I decided to walk up to him "hey you mind if I play game". The old pony turns to me and after a moment he gives me a smile "sure colt you ever played before?". He says while motioned for me to sit "ya I've played it's been a while though so a refresher would be nice" he nods. After a few moments of him explaining the rules they end up being the same as my old life. As we start playing going back and forth turn for turn and while I wasn't the best at chess in my past life it was something I always liked so as the game continued, we seemed evenly matched but, in the end, his experience wins out and he checkmates me. After our game the old colt turns to me "well now it's not often I find one so young that can give me a challenge" he says with a light chuckle as moves the board back into order. "Thanks sir anyway I better get going have a good day". He nods "same to you colt and come back if you ever want a rematch". As I leave the park and start walking through the city passing several shops before seeing a tea shop, I decide to get some tea. As I enter the tea shop it's walling a soft dark wood several wall lined seating areas with small dividers separating them. I approach the counter and wait in a small line for a bit. After getting to the front of the line I'm greeted by a younger looking mare "what can I get you?". "Mint tea with some lemon please". "Sure, three bits and you can sit any were you like" after paying her I go and sit in a corner booth and pull out my notebook to study some while waiting for my drink. After a few minutes a pony comes brings me my drink "thanks". She gives a smile "no problem if you need a refill just ask" I nod back and take a sip of my tea before returning back to my notes as I work my way through my notes organizing them and making them neater and after some time, I finish my tea and get up to leave. As I walk down the street heading back to the library as. I start to hum a tune and after a few minutes arrive at the library and make my way to my room putting my notes away before grabbing the book about affinity's and making myself comfortable on my bed as I start reading. Another thing that I've learned about is emotional affinity's most emotions have an affinity counterpart but what makes them special is how they function. Unlike elemental affinity that enhance a spells power through whatever element you have the emotional ones enhance a spells power based on what emotion you're feeling and how strong it is along with what you're doing with that spell. So, if you have an affinity for love and preform an act of magic out of love the spell is enhanced. Another branch of magic I've been interested in is cutie marks but I've found almost nothing on the subject so far what I have found is mostly just reference material and not much else. So I've had to make some guesses about it I think it's at least part random, but I can't rule out the possibility of fate in some form. What I do know is that the effects of a cutie mark can be vast or small. Mine for example through trial and error I've found that it enhances my runic magic how fast I remember a new matrix and helps me draw them. The effect isn't large, but it is noticeable and has helped a lot. After some time, I finish reading and like most day's take a shower and drain my magic before going to bed.
BlueDragon64
550684
5
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-05T22:13:55+00:00
2024-02-08T20:23:28+00:00
397
It's been two weeks and I've truly gotten into the flow of my routine. My days going starting with my morning run than working and going about my day. Right now I'm on one of my days off Tuesday and Wednesday that might seem like a weird choice, but the library is open on the weekend, so I work the weekend and take the mid week off. I'm spending my day on a practice field. I found it while wondering the city a few days ago it cost four bits per hour so it's not that expensive but I have to tell them if anything breaks and clean up after myself or be fined or pay them to do it for me. I came here to test a few spells. The first being an ice spell when formed it allows the caster to form and shape a few pounds of ice. I'm using this spell to create an ice spike an inch of two thick and eight inches long with points at both ends. And then grabbing it in my TK field and launching the ice spike forward using as much force as I can aiming towards the target on the far side of the field. As the spike impacts the target the ice spike shatters after imbedding itself a few inches into the target. Shards of ice scattering on the dirt field. I walk over to the target and inspect it the packed hay is impacted with shards of ice intertwined with the hay jagged shards cutting and small shards buried deep inside. After looking at the target I walk back and take another shot and another after several shots I stop seeing the target now filled with spikes. I pant now drained of most of my magic I sit and rest for a while before gathering the mess I made and leaving the test range. As I walk down the street I start moving back to the library and after arriving. And after heading to my room I close my door and move to lay on my bed and getting comfortable before dosing off and falling asleep. When I woke up, it was evening I blinked my eyes slow as I make my way into the kitchen and check my cabinets finding some bread and a few carrots along with two potatoes. After some thought I grab the potatoes and my knife some oil and my pan and start preheating it than cut the potatoes into thin slices and add oil to my pan and finally adding my potatoes. While my potatoes fry in the oil I grab the carrots and peeling them and cutting the ends off I split them down the middle and repeat that. Cutting two carrots down into eight carrot sticks adding them to a plate I move back to my frying potatoes and flip them. I then grab my bread and slice off two pieces adding them into my pan to toast. After a few minutes I remove my toast from the pan also dropping it on my plate at the same time I add some salt to my pan. I keep flipping my potatoes and cooking them until crispy and soft before adding them to my plate I wash my knife and pan as it cools. I finish washing my pan and sit to eat my makeshift diner as I read a book on the runic language, I start to take notes on different runic matrix arrays picking out small bits and adding them to my ever growing list of runic experiments to conduct in the future. After I finish eating and wash my plate I settle at my desk and start practice drawing my spells out. I draw and cast my candle flame spell and holding it there as I move my hoof and try to draw out another spell, I get to drawing the second circle before I lose my focus and my first spell fails the small flame flickering out and the runes dissolving. I repeat this many times over the next few hours as it turns dark outside the sun being replaced by the moon as I continue to practice trying to cast two full spells at once making some progress but never succeeding. At this point the magic, I'd gained from my nap was running dry so I stop. I walk into my shower and turn on the water letting out a sigh as I let the water wash over me. I clean my body using some soap and I dry off with a towel before heading to bed. After waking up I grab my bag and start heading towards the market district. As I walk down the street, I pass several restraints but after a while I don't find any that look good, I continue to the lower markets as I walk through food stales I spot a stand selling fried bread with some type of sauce. As I approach, I smell the frying bread and the sweet scent of maple "how much for two?'. The pony flipping the bread stops to look at me "two bits each". I nod giving him four bits and taking my sweet treat with me. I continue down the street glancing at different items and after a while I finish my food. As I near the edge of the market most stalls here being less trafficked and less busy, I was about to turn around but as I turned I paused. Not far away I see a grey diamond dog sitting on a cloth in between two stalls. Their head down as they shift though their things and place them around their surrounded gems of different cuts and colors scattered about. I approach and stop Infront of them their attention now on me I bend down to inspect a large piece of amethyst. Aa the light reflects through its body I put is back down where I found it and I turn to face the diamond dog seeing their red eyes "do you have any rubies". The diamond dog looks thoughtful for a moment before answering "a few" they reach into their bag pulling out several rubies of different sizes and placing them on the cloth. As I look through them, I see a good sized one with a decent clarity its size being about a two by two inch cube. "How much for that one" I say while pointing a hoof towards the gem they look to the one I'm pointing at. "One fifty for that one" I pause that's cheap for a ruby especially one that size and using a ruby will be much more effective than many other gemstones I won't have many bits left but this will be worth it. "I'll take it" I say while grabbing my bits as I do so the diamond dog looks exceeded their short tail wagging slightly and a large smile on their face. I pass my bits to them and wait for them to count it all after a minute they nod and pass me the gemstone "thanks". I give a nod back as I put away my new gem. And as I start walking out of the market heading home my thoughts wonder. I got really lucky crystals come in different grads when it comes to magic depending on the size and clarity the crystal can also hold more magic long with absorbing and releasing more magic faster with less waste. The lest powerful crystals are things like cloudy quarts and jade. Middle quality being amethyst and clear quarts. High is rubies and sapphires. And the best is diamond. My original plan was to buy a decent sized amethyst with descent quality. This ruby can probably hold tree to four times the magic more than the one I wanted to buy it's also cheaper than them. As I make my way into my room, I close my door and put my bags down. With some excitement I move to my desk and place the ruby on it I only have one chance if I mess up my enchantment the crystal will crack or shatter so after taking a few moments to calm myself I start to practicing the spell for the magic reserve. After spending an hour practice holding the spell while I draw the smaller matrix inside it, I complete the spell three times without messing anything up. I take a break to go eat my remaining carrots and recharge my magic and after half an hour I'm ready. As I move the ruby to be right in front of me I start drawing the spell being careful to go slow and be as accurate as I can for the best quality. After sometime I finish the spell and start on the enchantment matrix this one being smaller but simpler as I complete both and gently pick up the ruby. holding it up I see the matrix fade as I push magic into the inner matrix. The outer part fading as the magic is bound to the crystal the inner matrix fading soon after and dissipating after a minute. I close my eyes to concentrate and try to push my magic into the gem and feel the magic sink into the gem and compress after I empty my reserves I open my eyes and smile wide as I see a small red spark softy glowing in its center. time skip It's been three days since I successfully enchanted my ruby and during that time, I've been dumping all my excess magic into it. And it should be enough after today so tonight I'm going to try unlocking my affinity. As I go through my workday, I'm jittery and excited at lunch even Blaz and Daisy notice although they didn't ask why. After finishing my workday, I immediately return to my room and grab my crystal after draining my magic once again. I spend the next few hours recovering and by the time I was ready it was dark the sun having set. I stand and walk over to my desk grabbing my notebook and flipping to a blank page while grabbing a quill and ink well. Moving to the middle of the room I place my things down and ready my ruby. I start by drawing the outer circle almost as large as me and the other only slightly smaller. I start to fill out the empty space with an uneven mix of runes and numbers. As I finish the last number the spell using much more runes than numbers in this spell. Leaning more towards a pure symbol matrix although its technically a mixed matrix. After finishing the spell I stop to prepare myself I'm going to have to control a lot of magic I do not want this spell losing control. After a moment I start pulling the magic from my ruby and direct it into my spell as I do so the glow of the ruby that has built up over time begins to drain at a visible rate. The power flowing into the spell as the matrix starts to glow brighter and brighter almost to the point of being blinding. The spell now ready I move my hoof to its center and wait after a moment. The glow dims by a large amount and in front of me I see two orbs start to take shape. Slowly glowing threads intertwining into small wight spheres as I watch the left sphere slowly turn darker and eventually almost black the finale color being an almost black dark purple that seem to absorb all the light around it. I glance at the other sphere that begins to take shape after writing a hasty note on the first spheres color. I see the second sphere slowly start to turn a bright green and after a second, I realize it's the exact same color as my eyes a bright green reminiscent of emeralds. Then all at once the spell collapses the ruby having run out of magic. The spell and the spheres dissipating into motes of light before vanishing entirely. As I sit in the dimly lit room the only source of light being a candle on my desk, I move it over to me and start writing notes on the colors I saw. After finishing I move to my desk bringing my things with me, I flip through my book finding the page with my notes on affinity types and I start going through the list before finding one that matched. The bright green sphere being the affinity for life its main property's is to boost spells for plants and healing. After writing that down I continue flipping and after going through almost my entire list I find it the dark blackish purple. Space affinity this one's got almost nothing written about it. Or even what it helps with and after some thought I realize the only ponies you see using any form of space manipulation whether that being teleportation of changing somethings detentions are really powerful beings. Like an alicorn or Discord and while some ponies do use it on some smaller scales most are enter powerful regular ponies or pinky and the less you think about what ever pinky does or how she does it the better. But that also leaves me somewhat stumped. As for my life affinity I could try healing spells and controlling and growing plants to train my control and precision and maybe healing wounds directly after I get some practice and learn more, I rather not try healing myself right now. But with space I don't really know where to start as I doubt that the library will have spells on space magic as even in my old world where we have much higher levels of math space was a high level subject. I do remember some useful things but not enough to create a spell without a lot of time so my only path may be using the raw form to manipulate space directly for any other pony this might not be an option ether as most here won't have any knowledge about the fabric of space. From what little my notes copied from the book said about this affinity. Tt's mostly theory about what one could attempt to do with such an affinity but nothing on how to use it or what for so I'm just going to have to experiment while being vary carful and try and find out what I can do with it. After writing all my thoughts down I started to change my schedule for training and research. Over the past few weeks I've read almost every book about alicorns and their history so I'm taking that off my schedule and replacing it with healing and plant based magic. I'm also going to start spending some time after my morning run trying to control a few small plants in the park as I doubt any will notice a few plants growing faster but first I'll have to learn how to convert my magic. I should also look for books on ways to train my life affinity before I start messing around with it. I remake my schedule and take a few more notes before continuing with my nightly ritual a shower and draining my magic. Deciding to recharge the ruby in case, I ever need it before climbing my way into bed and letting sleep claim me.
BlueDragon64
550684
6
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-06T09:33:20+00:00
2024-02-08T20:30:34+00:00
498
After waking up I see it's almost mid day feeling my hunger having only eaten two carrots yesterday. I move to the kitchen and open the food cabinet only to see it empty "Ughh" I knew I forgot something yesterday it's Tuesday, so no free food guess I'll have to go out. I grab my bag and head for my door. As I walk out of the library I head to the market district like yesterday and find the same food stand buying a few of those sweet fried bread buns and make my way into the park and after sitting on a bench I dig into my treats. As I sit and eat, I look around I'm sitting on a bench facing a small pond several fish swimming close enough to the surface to see. Birds chirping unsee in nearby trees and the sound of colts and filly's kicking around a ball in the field behind me I lose focuses staring at the view so much that I don't notice the sound of hoof steps coming close. I lift one of my buns to take a bite "Do you mind if I sit here" the sudden voice startles me, and I jump a little I quickly turn my head to the voice only to freeze. Not more than a few feet away from me is a young unicorn stallion he's tall for a unicorn and in good health having a decent amount of muscle his coat wight and his main a few shades of blue from light to dark mixed together and a pair of cobalt blue eyes staring at me. :WHAT THE HELL IS HE DOING HERE!?: Shining Armor out of all the ponies in this city why did it have to be you. After a moment my brain registers what he asked and realizing that I've just been staring at him in silence I force myself to calm and respond to him "sure". He nods and sits down on the other side of the bench the silence is deafening so after a moment I continue eating. Trying desperately to ignore my uninvited guest but after some time he speaks up "so what are you eating?" I turn back to him seeing him eyeing my food. "Some fried sweet bread want one?" I offer hoping to seem less nervous as I float a bun over to him, he eyes it before taking it. "Sure thanks" he bites into the bun, and we eat in silence for some time both of us enjoying the view he finishes first before looking to me again. "So what are you doing today if you don't mind me asking?" I stare for a moment trying to find a way out of this conversation but not finding any I decide it's less suspicious to just answer his questions. "Eating my breakfast and in enjoying my day off" he looks surprised for a moment before realization dawns on his face. "Oh you're an apprentice aren't you that makes more since most your age would be in school right now where do you work?" . "The city library for about two months now". "Really? not many young ponies working there do you enjoy it?". "Ya the hours aren't bad the pay is decent and free food on workdays so not much to complain about and after work you get free access to the library". He lets out a chuckle before stopping and looks a little embarrassed "sorry you just remind me of my sister she's around your age always reading or trying new spells she'd be so jealous that you can stay after hours" he says while in between soft chuckles "oh by the way my names Shining nice to meet you". "Same names Shade so what are you doing here?" I ask as I finish my last bun. "I'm waiting for my dame and sister to meet up they told me to wait in the park so they can finish shopping. so, what do you do at the library" but before I could answer him, we are interrupted by a new voice. "What library?" I turn my head to see twilight sparkle and their dam twilight velvet standing with a few bags floating next to her. "Oh, hey Twilight I was talking with shade here he works at the city's library" her eyes move to me and she gets an excited expression hopping from one hoof to another she moves towards me. "YOU DO? what's it like? what do you do? how long have you been working there? ho-" before she could continue to bombard me with questions a hoof was placed on her muzzle. "Twilight, you know not to do that. Twilight Velvet turns to me looking embarrassed at her daughter's actions "sorry about that she can get excited when it comes to books. I nod "no problem it's ok" I turn to Twilight who looks even more embarrassed than her dam her ears pined back and a shy look on her face "and to answer your questions it's ok I mostly shelve, and sort book and I've been working there for a around two months". After hearing my answers, she perks up some her ears returning to normal "thanks and sorry I like dam said I get excited about books and magic". I nod "that much is obvious" I take a moment to crumple the paper bag that held my food and put it in my bag I hear a gasp and look back to see twilight staring intently at me. "How did you do that?" she asks with excitement in her voice once again having watched me crumple the bag without my hooves. After a moment thinking how I wanted to explain this I spoke "well you know how all ponies can move things with their hooves right?" she nods "so the magic that lets you do that is in every pony and a few years ago when I was younger, I got it in my head that if I could train that ability, I could make it more powerful and do more with it. So, I started training with it". Twilight and Shining and their mother gain thoughtful looks as I continue my explanation "and I started trying to lift heavier and heavier things. Over time it slowly got easier, and I could lift more and as I was messing around with it, I found that I could lift thing even if they weren't touching me and started training that to holding something and slowly pushing it away from me and just like my lifting strength my range also increased along with my control and at this point it's about the same as having a horn" All three looked shocked at my explanation the first to speak was of course twilight "THATS AWESOME" she shouted out before quieting down from a stern look from her dam "sorry" I give a laugh "it's ok". Shining speaks up after a moment "well colt that's impressive I don't know many ponies who train that hard". "Thanks, it certainly took a lot of time to achieve but I think it's worth it to move things without my hooves". Before we can continue are conversation their dam speaks up "come on you two we don't want to be late for Shining's appointment it shouldn't be long now. Shining do you have your watch?". "No, I forgot it this morning". "Here" before they can say anything else I start drawing rune and, in a few moments, I cast the temporis spell showing the time to be one thirty six. Twilight gets the same excited look but before she can start asking any questions she cut off "oh no were going to be late" their dam exclaims before gabbing twilight and putting her on her back before running off Shining not far behind her. I sigh in relief well that wasn't too bad and while I definitely got their attention and my plan to stay away from the cast is dead in the water. But it's at least cool to meet them and it might be useful to know them as most don't look into ponies, they know so it might be better to hide in plain sight even though it's not as good as remaining unknown. Plus, in the show after Twilight leaves for Ponyvill she even almost forgets so she might not remember me as anything but a friend that she'll forget. And after the day I've had I still need to go shopping for some groceries and after doing so and getting home with my goods. I decide to take my mind off of today and look through the library as I walked through bookshelves looking for books on healing magic and training my life affinity. Although the original book on affinity's I read had some suggestions for training but not as much as a book for specifically the life element which would be much better. After finding the right section of the library I search through several book before finding what I was looking for. A book on life magic and its application by Star Shine the books text is dry as sand, but the information is good. The instructions for learning how to convert your magic seems about the same about the same for any element. First you try to visualize a single point in your body and push your magic through it. Technically is possible to covert magic in any way you wish it's really all about will but for those without enough will or control over their magic imagining a process to convert their magic is easier. I've chosen not to use this method as while it doesn't seem to have a negative effect on somepony who uses it. But I feel like it's not a good method mostly as it feels like a shortcut to power so I've decided to use the harder method to feel your magic and will it to take a new form to force its shape. After reading the entire book I check it out at the front desk and leave the library and walk to the park as one of the steps I want to follow is learning conversion in an environment with a dense amount of life magic and the best place nearby is the park. After reaching the park for the second time that day I search for a spot that's quiet. I find a small spot under an old oak tree that's out of view of any other ponies a wall of bushes with the tree to my back. I lay on the grass and start focusing on my magic trying to feel the magic around me as my magic seeps into the world around me. After some time, I start feeling the magic in the grass and roots around me as I study the feeling of the magic of life. The magic itself giving a feeling like a rush of energy from drinking coffee only to a lesser degree. I spend a while just sitting and feeling the ebb and flow of the magic feeling it move through the roots and feel the magic of sun being absorbed and converted. Over an hour passes as I lay almost perfectly still. I retract my will and focus not outward but inward reaching into my magic I start willing my magic to take the form that I've felt applying more and more of my will trying to change my magic into that of life. After a while of this I feel something break and feel a rush of energy go through me I hold onto that feeling trying to burn its feel into my memory but after a few minutes my reserves of magic are drained almost dry so I stop. I open my eyes glowing green softly for a moment before fading. As I stand looking at the ground around me the grass only a few inches long before has grown wild and lengthy the flowers blooming as several vines clinging to my legs. I shake the vines off of me and step away from where I was laying a circle around it of plants growing form its center and radiating out from it. Noticing the sun light fade at the sun is lowered and moon raised into the sky I start making my way home humming a happy tune.
BlueDragon64
550684
7
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-07T21:29:28+00:00
2024-02-08T20:37:21+00:00
385
It's the day after I unlocked my life affinity and I started the day like normal with my run. Today is Thursday so I head to the brake room and grab some breakfast and sit down not long after I start eating Daisy sits next to me. "So how was your weekend?". "Not bad I got a lot done and met some interesting ponies and got a few chores done. How was work?". "Just fine boring as always but I think that comes with the job" I let out a chuckle. "Ya that seems about right" we spend the rest of breakfast chatting about small things mostly food. Turns out Daisy really doesn't like daisy's ironically enough that ended up getting a laugh out of me. After breakfast I start going about my shift. Today it's sorting books so I sit down at one of the tables and settle in for a while. Hours later I'm done with my work and in my room reading through the book on life magic. After reading some I narrowed down how I wanted to start training. And what I've found is the best approach seems to be growing plants training your magic to control how a plant grows and how fast. So, I'm going shopping for flowers their small and grow relatively fast are cheap and I can fit many of them into my room without taking up much space with this in mind I grab my bags and leave my room. As I walk down the street looking for a flower shop or even just somepony selling seeds. I keep walking around and after an hour without finding anything I stop to take a brake on the side of the street and siting there I see a pony I recognize. Twilight Velvet shopping with a bag floating with her much like yesterday "well I've had no luck so far and it's not like it could hurt: so I decide to approach her walking over. Hello again" I greet she turns to me staring at me for a moment before her face shifts gaining a small smile. "It's you from yesterday Shade right?" I nod "It's nice seeing you sorry we had to run off Shining had a meeting and we couldn't miss it hope we didn't make a bad impression". "It's fine I don't mind we all have some days like that. I never did catch your name though". "Oh, where are my manners I'm Twilight Velvet but I share a name with my daughter so most call me Velvet you can do the same". "Sure, thing Mis's Velvet I mostly came to ask if you know of any plant or flower shops nearby". "Thinking of doing some gardening?. Well ether way I know of one If you go down that street and take two lefts and a right you should see it. It's called the rose garden" as she points down a street. "Thank you so much I hope have a good day and say hello to Shining for me". "Same with you colt and I will". I start walking down the street she pointed out to me. I continue down the street taking two lefts and a right. After some time walking I see a small flower shop just like she said the rose garden. As I enter the shop I see a red mare at the counter pruning a rose bush before seeing me "hello how can I help you?". I walk up to the counter "I'm looking for a flower that can make its own seeds to replant and grow again" she looks at me with a confused face at my request. "Well, I know of a few most don't look that great small flowers and some with thorns" she then points out several flowers in the shop in varies pots. I walk around the shop and pick out three flowers. The first with the of body a daisy with a grey flower at the end. The other a vine with dark leaves and many tiny pink flowers. And the finale one a small round bush made of many small red leaves making it look like a round red ball with its bottom third missing. As I take the pots to the countertop and place them the florist give an odd look at my choices "well this is probably oddest order I've ever seen a false daisy along with a griping vine and finally this one". "What's so odd about them?" I ask curious at her reaction. "Well not much is interesting about false daisy its claim to fame is that before it blooms it's almost impossible to tell it's not a daisy and it's not edible it won't hurt you it just tastes terrible. The griper vine is mostly known for the fact that it can hold onto pretty much anything while in little to no soil it's hard to cut and grows fast and they have a decent grip I've seen one of these climb a four story building from a single small pot. And then there's this one I don't actually know what it is. One of my customers brought to me said he found it in the wood and scooped it into a pot for me although it does make seeds and I've collected some a while ago and I've tried looking for its name and didn't find much and I don't really have the time to keep looking. Honestly I didn't know what to do with it so I put it up for sale. After hearing her lengthy explanation on the plants I was interested in I decided to buy them. "how much for all of them?" I ask. "Well not many ever buy false daisy's same with the griping vine and I don't have a use for the bush. So I'll just say ten bits". "You sure?". "ya honestly most of these where just taking up space". Will that be all?'. "Can I also get three more pots and some soil please". After grabbing what I requested I pay her and grab my purchase and start walking back home. After reaching home I placed my new plants near my window and give them some water along with staking my spare pots and soil. I start reading about training my life magic and controlling plants. The book itself doesn't contain any plant spells just theory about them. Most plant spells seem to follow two paths the first being plant growth and the second controlling plants. Although I don't think there will be many plant spells as this type of spell doesn't seem common as when looking for a book on training your life affinity I only found two the one I'm reading right now and the other which was mostly just conjecturer and research material. What little books I did find I found on plant magic where for growing herbs or improving soil quality. That means the biggest branch of magic that life affinity will help with is healing magic. That combined with the lack of plant based spells means it's probably better to just use raw magic for plants and focusing on healing spells. So after learning what little the book had to offer I bring the false daisy to my desk. While the book didn't have much to offer in terms of plant spells it did have advice for using raw life magic. The easiest method for training life affinity is to grow a plant until it flowers and seeds. Then collect the seeds then uprooting the plant chopping it up and adding it back into the soil and using life magic to enhance decomposition and planting new seeds starting the cycle over again. This giving you an endless supply of plants to work with. And as long as you keep some seed if the plant dies you can just make another. As I place the false daisy on my desk I start converting some magic into life magic before reaching out and trying to encourage growth I see the small plant starts to grow reaching higher the single grey daisy joined by others as the buds open. As the buds open to reveal a grey daisy flower the flower persisting for a few minutes before they start wilting. As they do I see small seeds falling off them the small brown seed attached to a tuft of silky fibers. After collecting the seeds I grab my knife before pulling the plant out and chop it into bits dicing it and mixing it back into the soil. I repeat this process four times each time using my magic to help compost the old plant by encouraging it to degrade and rot. In the end I have a few dozen leftover seeds and my magic is almost dry I place my leftover seeds in an old flour bag I'm going to need to get some jars or bags later. But right now it's late and I have work tomorrow so it's time for bed. time skip It's been a few weeks and it's Jun 18 and the summer sun celebration is soon. I've made some progress in my training. In terms of my old training I've learned a few new things first I've made some head way into the runic language learning more symbols I'm still no ware near fluent but I'm still improving. My TK field has seen some improvement but its power is starting to level off to the point of almost not being worth dedicating so much time to practice so I'm going to continue training its control but not it's strength. My general training in magic continues. I drain my magic every day along with using it throughout the day and I'm still seeing slow but steady growth. For my new training I've been trying to find a basic healing spell with no success. And after several days of no progress only finding higher level spells everything else being information texts. I finally decided to ask Daisy for help as during one of our conversations she mentioned a cousin that's a doctor. Today was Monday I made my way into the breakroom and settle in with some food for diner and after some time I see Daisy enter the room after she grabs some food and sits on the other side of the table. "So, Shade how was your day?". "About the same as every day you ask me that almost every day and the answer never changes". "I know" she says with a teasing smile on her face. "I would actually like to ask you a question" she nods with her mouth full. "I've been trying to learn some healing spells but I can't seem to find any basic ones to start with but I've had no luck". "And you won't" seeing my confused at her answer she laughs. "I asked the same thing to my cousin and I'm afraid my friend that you've fallen into a trap most aspiring doctors and students fall into. It's like this as far as I'm aware there are no basic healing spells that branch of magic is just too complex as any who've tried to create a basic healing spell have failed so far. From what my cousin told me all the basic spells that have been made are so weak that they do basically nothing to speed up the healing process. "So, there's no basic healing spells because they get too weak when trying to simplify them?". "Yup I don't remember the exact reason he said but I think it had something to do with healing spells having a lot of symbols in them". Now it made sense this world is much like mine so sometimes I forget that it is different. In my old world we had a good understanding of biology and how the body works. But from what I've read in the books I've been searching through these ponies are not as advanced as humans in this aspect. They understand how a disease spreads but not what causes them and they have no understanding of microorganisms not being able to see them. Thats considered one of the great limitations of healing magic for them magic can repair your body but not kill a virus or infection. This also explains why all the spells I did find even with their complexity it's still mostly symbols as they can't use many things to base the spell off of. Furthermore, this would make it extremely hard to make a basic healing spell as it would have to be almost entirely symbols weakening the final spells effects rendering the spell almost useless. This even explains why this world still teaches mostly traditional healing and many other methods my old world used as you can't just heal anything as the number of ponies that know and can use powerful healing spells are probably in extremely high demand but low number. This also means I may be able to create a basic healing spell as while I wasn't a doctor in my past life I did take biology in high school so I may know enough to make one. But I can't as I am right now I have nowhere near enough knowledge to pull off something like that but It's something to work on. But for now it's still years before canon starts and all I'll be doing for the next few years is growing and trying to master my magic so I have time. After finishing my meal and saying goodbye to Daisy I head back to my room. After I'm inside my room I check on my plants all my empty pots now full after experimenting with the plants. I've discovered a few things of not about two of them the false daisy being the only one to become uninteresting to me. The other two plants however have several points of interest. For the griping vine I've found that just like the seller said it does grow really fast when using magic to enhance their growth they grow even faster and like she said they grab anything they can to grow higher the other thing once again like the seller said they are surprisingly strong for their size being tough and hard to cut or saw the vine stalks being filled with thick fibers. And then theirs what I've found about the last plant it took me a while to find a book about it. This red bush is named blood leaf tea yup it's a tea plant a very rare tea plant. From what I learned this plant is very hard to farm bordering on impossible as the only known way is to have a pony with a life affinity cultivate it. The reason being not that the plant is hard to grow but because the property's its leaf's are valued for is to increase magic regeneration and as the number of things that can help with magic regeneration are very few the leaf's are highly valued. The problem comes in when you try and farm them as the plants leaf's only gain this property if it's grown in an environment rich with life magic like a large forest or deep in mountain ranges. While you can grow the plant if there isn't enough life magic it won't gain its magical effects rendering it into just a red bush. But if you have a life affinity like I do and get your hoofs on one you basically have an unlimited supply. With this in mind I've already filled the other pots I bought with more of the tea plant and after learning how to make tea I started to produce blood leaf tea. And after growing several plants and picking them clean before drying the leaf's into tea I now have a large stockpile stored in jars along with many spare seeds and four grown bushes. And I've also found out that the tea tastes quite good having a somewhat lemony flavor. After checking on the plants and watering them. I like all my other nights shower and go to bed.
BlueDragon64
550684
8
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-08T05:01:35+00:00
2024-02-11T18:54:10+00:00
416
It's Friday Jun 21 today and it's the summer sun celebration and Canterlot is busy all different kinds of ponies moving about for the festivities, and I've been given the day off as the library will be closed today. And Celestia is going to be giving a speech like she does most years and like most years before this one I'm not going. Mostly because It's just not my thing I don't mind going to a party but something like this is a little too big for me. That doesn't mean I'm going to be doing nothing though I have a few plans of my own I'm going to be shipping a package to a certain pony. To explain we have to back up a bit. During the past few weeks after meeting Shining and Twilight I've been thinking on how much I should change about the timeline. At first, I didn't want to interact with any of the main character, and I still don't but I've realized that if I don't know any of them then it will be hard to help when canon starts. But if I can get to know some of them before canon at a minimum, I can offer help or be asked to help. The problem being how to do this without getting too much attention on me I want them to know I exist not to become a part of the main cast I'm basically trying to become a background character someone who can help but does things unseen most of the time. So, I'm taking advantage of the summer sun celebration as many ponies send gifts to Celestia on this day and I'll be doing the same. My plan is to send a lot of my new tea to her this may not sound like much but after learning about the blood leaf teas magical effects I kept researching the plant. I learned that the plant is much rarer than I thought as the only way to harvest it is to wander the forests and mountains looking for it and while it's not hard to spot it's not common to find. I also went looking for it in the markets to see what it was priced at that being four hundred bits for an ounce that may seem ridiculous as you'd think at least one other pony has a life affinity to sell this stuff. But after some thought I realized that the process to unlock an affinity isn't easy. Like I learned in the past to unlock your affinity you need a lot of magic, but you also need a lot more money even me with a decent paying job where I don't have to pay for food or rent it took just under a month to collect the money necessary the only reason, I got such a good crystal for so cheap was blind luck. That and as I've learned the reason plant magic is so underutilized is how complex the spells are and just how rare the life affinity is. Combine this with the expense of a decent crystal and having to enchant it along with the possibility of the enchantment failing and the crystal being rendered useless. Along with the time and knowledge needed to use an affinity means most never find out what affinity they have and even less try unlocking and using them as It's much easier to just use normal spells. This means that the only way to get blood leaf tea is harvesting it from the wild a dangerous job even in my old life and my past world didn't have magical monsters roaming the wilds. And I haven't even mentioned the last piece to this puzzle the magical effect of the tea doesn't give you magic but specifically increases one ability to regenerate their magic so while the affect doesn't do much for your average pony as they haven't trained to regenerate their magic. But for ponies that have the effect is much more noticeable in some cases taking hours off recovery times. All this accumulates into its absurd price now as for why this is important is because I might be the only pony in Equestria that can produce as much as I like only requiring time as it takes longer to dry the tea then grow them. Now I don't want to start selling the stuff as that would immediately put me in the public spotlight, but I can send a twenty pound package of the tea to her. As for the reason I think she'll need it is that even if she wanted to drink it every day she couldn't because even though she definitely has the money to pay for it there's just not enough to go around. Plus, the magical effect is still coming from the herb itself so for somepony of Celestia's size she'd need much more to achieve the same results. So, with all this in mind I walk with a box filled with twenty pounds of tea stored in a few wooden boxes I bought yesterday bringing it to the post office one of the few businesses open today. As I enter the post office is busy and it takes half an hour to get to the front of the line. "Hello sir, what can I help you with?" the brown colored unicorn stallion at the counter asks me. "I'd like you to deliver this to the princess I presume that you can do that right?". He nods "yup I will need your name. he passes me a small piece of paper and a quill and an ink well. And I need to know if it's fragile?". "No, it just can't get wet". "Ok it will be five bits please" I give him five bits and I write my name on a small piece of paper he gives me. As he takes my package behind the counter, I move out of line for the other ponies waiting before leaving the post office as I start walking home. After reaching home I start cooking a small meal for myself frying some salmon I bought and slicing some bread along with lettuce and mustard making myself a fish sandwich after I sit down at my desk start reading a silly crime novel I found while eating my sandwich. After finishing my diner and washing my plate I sit on my bed and start reading about healing magic. After learning how difficult it is to learn healing magic, I decided to learn it anyway as in the future I would like to make healing spells mostly basic ones. It will take me a few years to learn what I need to know before I can even start trying to make a healing spell, but I have time so why not. Another thing I've been trying to unlock my space affinity the only real progress I've made is when I try meditating, I can somewhat feel the empty space around me although it takes all my concentration to feel anything and even than it's a faint feeling. But it is getting easier with time although like healing magic this might be unusable for a few years. I have made some progress with plant magic mostly in the efficiency of my magic conversion I now lose less magic when growing plants, it's not much less only a few percent but with time that will grow. No pun intended. As I stay awake throughout the night waiting for dawn I read and draw. After several hours I check the time five forty six dawn brake will be at six so I put down my book and make myself some tea before sitting in front of my window and waiting for dawn brake. I sip my tea as the sun starts to rise and the moon falls. I raise my cup to toast to another year in this world. :Well I hope the princess liked my gift: after enjoying the sunrise for a moment I move to my bed more than ready for sleep. pov shift to Celestia After raising the sun, I move to the throne room and take my seat preparing for day court. Before one of my little ponies comes up to me Clover Field my assistant after giving a short bow she speaks. "Good morning your majesty". "Same to you Clover". She gives a quick nod and floating a clipboard and a package next to her. :Thats odd most gifts I get are sorted and checked for danger before I get them:. I do love how much they care I just wish they would worry about me less. "Clover is that one of the gifts I got. I thought we would only be opening them later after day court. Which starts in half an hour?" I ask my assistant. "You are right your majesty but after we found out what this package contained, we thought it best to get it to you as fast as possible". This caused me to grow concerned. "Is it something dangerous?". "No, it's just the value of the package that's a concern". This answer making me confused. "Well don't keep me in suspense". "Well at first the guards didn't know if it was real but after getting an expert to inspect it, who confirmed that it's all real". She moves the package to me the outside being basic cardboard with the top loose. As I open the box, I see several simple wooden boxes and a note laying on top of them. I pick up the small note reading it. May this serve you well princess signed Shade Evergreen that was all nothing else just some nice words and a name I move the note to the side and grab one of the boxes before opening it. I have to struggle to keep my face neutral as the box is filled to the rim with a tea, I recognize well having enjoyed it greatly in the past on the rare few occasions I've had it. Blood leaf tea. I turn back to clover "how much is in these boxes?". "All the boxes combined have ruffly twenty pounds in total". This time I can't keep my shock off my face. :TWENTY POUNDS!! the herb sells for hundreds of bits per ounce: . "How?". "We don't know your majesty. All we found out was the sender's name. One shade Evergreen. And where they sent it from one of the post offices in Canterlot". "Hmm that's not a name I recognize". "I'm having some ponies looking into it but that could take a few days". "Thats fine I do wonder how they got so much though?" I take a moment to cast a spell seeing the time. Day court starts in a few minutes. "Well please keep me informed on what you find" I take some tea out of the box and summon a small jar to put it in before moving the box to a safe place. And please have some tea made for me" I ask Clover as I pass her the jar. "Yes, your majesty" she then walks away to deliver the tea leaf's as I prepare for day court. After a few minutes ponies start filling the throne room along with Clover holding a silver tray with my tea set on it. I take a moment to sip some tasting the light lemon undertones and the feeling of my magic refilling. :Shade Evergreen I wonder who are you?: .
BlueDragon64
550684
9
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-09T22:24:51+00:00
2024-02-10T03:38:50+00:00
441
It's been a few days since the summer sun celebration, and I received a letter today it has the royal seal on it. It seems I've gotten Celestia's attention and after popping the seal open and opening the letter I started to read it. Dear Shade Evergreen first I'd like to thank you for your lovely gift I rarely get to enjoy this type of tea and that's a shame as It's one of my favorites. I'm writing this letter to invite you to the palace gardens for tea on Jun 30 at three in the afternoon I hope to see you there. Show the guards this letter and they will let you into the palace grounds. Signed princess Celestia. In all honesty I should have been expecting something like this Celestia seem like the kind of pony that likes meeting somepony in person. So here I am standing in front of the palace at two forty in the afternoon on a Sunday ironically enough. She must really want this meeting as she even got the library to give me the day off work. As I approach the gates one of the guards stop me "state your business?" they demand. "I'm here for a meeting with the princess and I have an invitation" I say while holding out my letter. The guard takes the letter from me and starts reading it. And after a moment they wave another guard over "he's here for a meeting with the princess escort him to the gardens" the other guard nods. "Please follow me sir". I nod and we start making our way through the palace heading towards the gardens. After a few minutes we make it to the gardens just on time for my tea party. As we approach the gardens a complex web of hedge walls separating small gardens and sitting areas with benches and fountains. We move through the maze like gardens the guard taking several turns and at one point I'm pretty sure walking us in a circle before we finally arrive. As we pass through an archway covered with flowering vines, we enter a small walled off area with several guards standing along the sides and in the center laying down in front of a table is Celestia herself. After we approach the table me and the guard bow to her "your guest has arrived princess". "Thank you. You can leave us" the guard nods and leaves us alone standing with the other guards around us. Celestia now staring at me a soft smile on her face. "Hello Mr. Evergreen, it's nice to meet you. Thank you for coming". "And thank you for inviting me princess" I say trying to keep my voice steady and not let my nervousness show as she gestures for me to sit. "Before we start, I'd like to thank you for the gift" she takes a sip of tea from her cup "It's not often I can drink it and as I said in my letter to you it's one of my favorites". "No problem princess to be honest the reason I sent it to you is because I thought you'd get more use out of it then me I can only drink so much after all". I pause for a moment as she moves a cup of tea over to me and I take a sip of the blood red tea. "Although I'm guessing that your curious about where it's from?". She takes a moment to drink the last of the tea in her cup before answering my question. "Straight to the point then?. Yes, that was the main reason I asked you to meet me, but I also wanted to meet you as my student Twilight has mentioned meeting you before". "Well for the first thing it might be best to show you. If that's alright with you princess?". She nods "that's fine". After she agrees I take a small bag of seeds and a small pot of dirt out from my saddle bags and place them on the table in clear view. Celestia raising an eyebrow at my choice it items and also not having used my hooves to take them from my bag. "So that's what my student meant I must say I don't think anypony I've met has ever really tried to use their magic like that". I pause at this "really I'd think you'd have met at least one other pony that thought of the idea?". She lets out a soft chuckle "yes you'd think so, but to my knowledge I haven't. Do you mind telling me how you accomplished it?". Hearing her question, I stop setting up my demonstration to answer. "Well, when I was a young around six or seven, I think. I saw one of the other ponies my age a unicorn holding something with their magic. And a thought came to mind I don't even really remember why I had the idea in the first place. But I thought that if a unicorn could lift something with magic and I had magic to pick things up why couldn't I do the same and float them too. So, after that I'd spend hours practicing trying all kinds of things and after a few months I succeeded". I stop to drink some tea to wet my drying throat. "I presume you couldn't lift much at the start?" She asks as I drink my tea. "You'd be right princess at first I could only lift pebbles and twigs a few inches away from me. But with time and practice my weight capacity and range increased.". Celestia now had a much more pronounced smile on her face. "It's rare to find a pony that experiments with their magic most don't seem to have the motivation. What's the most you can hold now? if you don't mind me asking". "Not at all princesses right now I can hold around three hundred pounds at ten feet. Although after that how much I can carry deceases the further away it is. And I've found that recently its growth has leveled out". "that's very impressive for a pony your age most unicorns can only lift one hundred or so when their adults". "Thank you, princess. I also brought my notes on what I remember and what I have found out through the years". I say bringing a neat stack of papers out of my bag and passing them to her. The smile she's had throughout this conversation grows bigger showing a bit of her teeth. "Thank you" she says looking through some of the notes and after a few moments she stops and looks back to me. "This is well made and very nicely done. Do you mind if I give this to my researchers to study?". "Not at all princesses there yours to do what you want with" she nods before motioning a gaurd over and giving him my notes. "You can continue" I nod and take one of the seeds I brought with me before pushing it into the soil. After I cover the seed with dirt, I place a hoof on the side of the pot and close my eyes to concentrate reaching out with my magic I started growing the plant. It's red sprout piercing the soil slowly reaching higher as small red leaf's grow and branches split as the plant continues to grow. As plant increases in size it starts to expand outwards and rounds out forming a small red bush in the pot. I open my eyes to look at Celestia's reaction and I've never seen her with a bigger smile before. And that includes in the show. After a moment of staring at the newly created plant she speaks excitement clear in her voice. "It's been a very long time since I've had the pleasure of seeing somepony use life magic it's a rare thing to witness even for me. You've been making the tea yourself then. Where did you get a blood leaf tea bush from?. Most that are found are picked clean or protected from poaching". "A flower shop". I deadpan answer. "Truly?" she asked with a humorous expression on her face. "Yes, I originally went to buy some flowers to train my life magic and ended up buying a small bush of it from the owner she didn't even know what it was. I was curious and she sold it to me with two other flowers for ten bits. And after a few days of searching, I found out what the plant was and did". "You bought one of the most valuable herbs in Equestria for ten bits at a flower shop" her voice filled with mild disbelief. After a moment of silence, she asks a new question. "How did you unlock your affinity?. The spell isn't something most can cast". "I used a gem and enchanted it to hold a reserve of magic". She nods "many do the same. I presume you practice runic magic then?". "Yes, it's actually how I gained my cutie mark". "Good I find most don't use that branch of magic sadly. I must say for one so young you've learned much. I am curious what other affinities do you have?. Or was life the only one?". I took a moment thinking if I should answer or not but after some thought I decided that it's probable a bad idea to lie to the princess. For all I know she might be able to tell if I'm lying. "I do have one other affinity the problem being that there's not much I can use it for as I don't even know how to unlock it let alone use it". But to answer your question princess I have the space affinity". All at once I see her face shift through expressions first shock then joy and finally understanding mixed with sadness. "I see. That's an affinity that I haven't seen in a very long time. I will be honest with you I don't really know if you can use that affinity even, I only know a few space spells myself and the only other pony I've ever met that had that affinity was never able to do anything with it". I take a moment trying to look somewhat disappointed. It wasn't too hard as I was at least hoping she might know something to help me use my space affinity. But that just means that I'll have to do it on my own as best I can. "That's fine princess I still have the life affinity after all and that's proving useful enough". After my words, she regains her smile some. "It's good to have some optimism I feel most tend to get caught up in what they don't have instead of what they still have". There're a few seconds of silence. "Moving on what are your plans for the future?". "Most likely?. The same as it's always been apprenticing at the library continuing to learn magic to research and experiment with". "Really?. That's all?. I would think you'd want to become a researcher the notes you gave me alone are probably enough to secure you a job and some notoriety with others". "Well to be honest I'm not the kind of pony that likes attention. And while my current apprenticeship isn't glamorous, I enjoy it. And to be blunt I just don't like the idea of fame I much prefer my quiet life as it is. That's also the reason I never sold any tea". Hearing my answer her smile fully recovers. "Well, sadly we're almost out of time and I have duties to attend to soon. But if you don't mind, I'd like to ask a favor from you?". "Sure, princess what do you need?". "Would you like to send letters back and forth". She lets out a small laugh at my surprised face. "I enjoyed our talk and hope to do so more in the future if that's alright with you?". "It'd be an honor princess". "Thank you. And have a good day Mr. Shade". She stands up picking up my plant "a guard will show you out" a guard moves to stand not far away from me. I nod "thank you as well princess and same to you". Before once again following a guard through the gardens and palace before we return to the gate. As I walk home, I think about the conversation I just had. Well, that wasn't so bad if nothing else she's nice. It's kind of odd now that I think about it, I'm going to have to go back to work tomorrow like this didn't happen. As I reached my room and take a shower, I can't help thinking I forgot something. After eating dinner, I prepare for bed before a thought strikes me :she stole my plant!!!:.
BlueDragon64
550684
10
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-11T01:27:37+00:00
2024-02-11T05:03:17+00:00
398
Jul 17 Wednesday. It's been a little over two weeks since my meeting with Celestia and she's sent me a letter. Mostly about the research I gave her and some suggestions for books to read. And oddly enough a few really mundane things. She asked me what my favorite food was?. I didn't really know how to answer that, so I just sent a letter back answering all her questions. Even the food one. And thanked her for the book suggestions. I mean what else am I supposed to do. Not answer the ruler of the country I live in when she sends a guard to your door with a letter and a request for a response. I wrote a letter before giving it to the guard. The letter also had a mailing address to send letters or packages too. But after that I got back to my plan for today. I'm going to be doing some enchanting and experimenting. That's why I'm heading to the markets today I'm going gem shopping. Unlike last time I'm not looking for a large high quality gem but several smaller one's at least that's the plan. To explain why I need to explain how linked enchanting works. When you enchant something with a spell, you're essentially binding it to the object of your choosing. This process doesn't leave any physical markings on the object itself the only difference is the magic being bound to the object. A good example of what I'm talking about is my stove the metal ring that heats up what your cooking is enchanted and how much heat it gives is controlled by a metal dial. But how are the metal plate and dial connected there's nothing behind the dial itself and the plate can be removed for cleaning so how does the dial control the heating plate and how is it powered. The power is easy to answer as when you enchant something the number of spells you put on any one object is limitless. Any object can hold as far as I know unlimited spells. But if you did do that it would be both pointless and dangerous as while you can put as many spells as possible on an object powering them is another matter entirely. Most objects depending on what they are made of can handle different amounts of magic and if you exceed that limit the object will start to breakdown and self destruct. But back to how the stove is powered. Enchantments can use any type of magic as a power source. So, the enchantments on the stove are made to absorb magic from around it. And this will work with most basic spells but for something more complex there is simply not enough magic to fuel the enchantment in the environment. So, most use gems because for their size they have the best weight to energy capacity. On to the other question how the plate and dial are connected. Well, that's where the linking spell comes in the spell itself is fairly complex but still easy enough for me to cast. The spells effect is to link two or more enchantments together. The spell itself only acting as an on and off switch with varying degrees of both as an example if 0 is off and 1 is on I could use either of these or any in between. The stove has an off position that being 1 and several other options being so if I wanted something halfway in between I'd use 0.5 this means that you can control the enchantments output to a limited degree. The spell can also be linked to as many enchantments as you like but maintaining the link takes a very small amount of magic. The more links you have the higher the magic drain and if it exceeds what the environment has, or the power source can provide the links will degrade and fail. As I walk through the markets, I walk to the edge and find what I'm looking for. Sitting on a mat in between two stalls I see a grey diamond dog surrounded by several bags as they sort gems. One thing I've found surprising is that most ponies don't buy from the diamond dogs apparently their considered untrustworthy rumors of them being thieves because of other pack's stealing from travelers. Much like the show although I haven't heard anything about kidnappings. As I approach the diamond dog, they look at me for a moment before some recognition shows on their face. "Hey I remember you. You bought a large ruby a few months back". "Yes, I came to see if you had a few small rubies preferably cut like a cube?". They start looking through their bags and after a moment placing three small rubies half an inch in size on the mat. "These are all I have for rubies, but I do have more sapphires in this cut if that will work?". "Let me see" they nod before going through their bags again before placing six more sapphires all the same size as the rubies. "How much for each?". "Twenty each but I'll drop it to eighteen if you buy three". "Make it fifteen and I'll buy them all" their face morphs looking shocked at my offer. "Deal!" I nod and pass him one hundred and forty five bits in total and wait as they count them and after a moment they nod, and hand me my new gems. "Pleasure doing business with you". They say a large smile on their face. "Same to you". I spend some time looking through the markets and after a while I find what I'm looking for. A small knife made for wood carving. After that I start walking back to the library to return to my room. After making it to my room I place the gems on my desk and move over to my window. I take a pot that I emptied earlier and also move it to my desk I also grab a blood leaf tea seed. As I sit in front of my desk, I place the seed inside the soil of the pot and start to grow it. But unlike the other times I've done this I try to control how it grows forcing it to not grow any leaves and trying to grow the main trunk of the bush as thick as I can. After a few minutes I have a weird looking bush, it has no leaves or branches only a single stick two inches thick and a foot long. I use my new knife and cut the stick at its base before moving the pot back to the window. I move over to my sink and hold the stick over it and focus using my control over plants to try and remove as much water from the stick as I can trying to dry the wood out. This process is difficult as it requires complete concentration on my task and after two hours, I'm finally done. As for why I'm going through all this trouble is that to run my experiments I'm going to need a material that can conduct a decent amount of magic and the easiest is the blood leaf tea as the high content of life magic makes the plant strong and its wood durable. It also means that I can just make more if I destroy what I'm using. As I take my newly dried stick over to my desk, I use my knife to remove any bark on the wood leaving only a solid wood stick. The wood itself is a light color much like ceder with thin strips of red going through the woodgrain much like veins. I start by cutting a small one inch piece off from the stick with my knife. This takes me half an hour and after that I start slowly whittling it down over the next few hours. As the sun sets and my room is engulfed in darkness, I grab a candle and light it with the candle flame spell before continuing my work. After my carving I'm left with a small flat wood square as close as I could get it to matching one of the gems in size. After finishing this I grab one of the rubies and start enchanting it to hold magic along with a spell to absorb the magic from the environment around it placing one and then the other and finally a spell to activate the link when you tap the ruby. This spell is very simple its only prepose being too open and close a link when you give it the desired input. Which I've set to tapping the ruby two times. After a few minutes I'm done, and I have a ruby with a small glowing center. This crystal holds much less magic than the large one I have but that's ok I don't need much magic for this. After I finish the ruby, I start on my piece of what I'm calling blood wood. I'm going to enchant it with a light spell I've modified for this enchantment the normal light spell uses symbols and numbers. This one uses only one symbol as a base while the rest is just numbers so its magic cost is almost half the original cost while being twice as bright. I enchant the piece of wood with my new light spell and test it for a moment. The spells light easily overpowering the candle on my desk. After making sure it works as intended, I start casting the linking spell and after drawing the runes I draw the number 1 inside a blank spot in the matrix to set the parameters for power output. The spell creates a small wight string made from magic coming from the center of the matrix that with some concentration I can move. I move one end to the ruby and the other end to the small wood piece and after a moment the link settles into place before vanishing. I wait a few minutes for the link to stabilize and start pushing magic into the ruby filling it halfway taking most of my remaining magic. As I set the ruby down on my desk, I place the wood piece next to it. And after tapping the ruby twice I open the link between them allowing the magic to transfer into the wood piece. After a second the wood piece starts to glow decently bright lighting up my room in wight light. I check to see if there's any problems and seeing none, I place the wood piece under my bags placing them on top of the wood piece to block the light. My main experiment here is to see if I can make a magic light last for several hours. The reason being that most in Equestria like I did tonight use candles to light their homes at night. This is because while the light spell isn't hard it does take a surprising amount of magic to maintain mostly because it uses so many symbols in the spell. This means that buying a magic light that can recharge and still lasts for a few hours takes a large and expensive crystal and are out of reach of most ponies. But a smaller one like the ones I bought today would be while still expensive for most ponies it would be in reach. My hope is to make it last a few hours at least so it can be used by anypony for lighting If I'm right and my new spell has enough of an efficiency boost to let the small gem last a few hours. But for now, that's tomorrow's problem I'm taking my shower and going to bed.
BlueDragon64
550684
11
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-12T02:40:07+00:00
2024-02-12T05:33:09+00:00
400
July 18 Thursday. As I get out of bed, I make myself some tea to start the day off. After pouring my tea into a cup I start checking my things first the plants. One empty pot from last night three with blood leaf tea plants one false daisy and finally my gripping vine. After giving them water and some soil I decompose the used plant from yesterday and move it to my desk. I move my bag and see the piece of wood still glowing. I quickly cast the temporis spell checking the time just under eight hours since I activated the enchantment, and the ruby is almost empty only a tiny flicker of magic left in the gem. I tap the ruby twice turning off the light and placing the ruby out of the way to let it slowly recharge over time. It seems my experiment was a success, and the spell is stable. After that I head to breakfast deciding to skip my morning run and start my workday early. several hours later After my workday ends, I head back to my room and check on the ruby seeing it's a third full. It's been around eight hours since I turned it off that means that it would take around a full day to charge and last around sixteen hours when in use. I start making another magic light. This one is the same as the last only using a sapphire instead of a ruby. As for why I'm making another magic light just like last night is to send it to Celestia. After my meeting with Celestia and thinking some more on how I want to help in canon. I decided that I'm going to focus on being support for the main cast. My plan is to make either spells or enchanted items to help them accomplish their goals easier while also making things to help Equestria at large. I'll be doing this by making things like this simple light. Right now, many ponies don't have access to a reliable source of light and after dark mostly use candles and fire in general. But this light wouldn't be that expensive for the vast majority of ponies giving them a stable and reuseable source of light after night fall. The only real problem being that I can't really sell my creations I simply don't have the time to do so in between learning new things and my apprenticeship. But there is a certain princess who likes to improve her little ponies' lives and who I can trust to not take advantage of others. So, I'm going to send this and any future inventions to Celestia as she will probably know how best to sell and use what I make. So today I'm sending this second magic light to her with a letter that has instructions and all the spells used including my new light spell. With this in mind I start by carving a new wood piece the process going faster now that I've had some practice with the carving knife, and I finish after two hours. Then I enchant the sapphire layering the spells into the gem. And finally linking them. After I'm done, I rest for a while and write a letter to Celestia adding the spell matrix's drawn on paper to the pages before grabbing my bags and the new magic light and leaving my room. As I walk to the same post office, I used last time. I enter the post office and head to the counter. A grey unicorn is sitting behind the counter speaks up "hello sir what can I help you with?". "I need a small box. And I need to ship something along with a letter to the same place". They nod and reach behind the counter pulling up a box a small box. "Will this work?". "Yes, do you have any padding?". "Yes, sir we do" they reach under the counter again and pull out what looks like scrap paper before filling the box and passing it to me along with a wight sticker with a spot for an address and the senders name. I fill out both and place the magic light into the box before closing it and passing it back to the mail pony with the letter. They look at the sticker before nodding and taking both. "That will be five bits please". I pass them the amount and leave the office before heading home. pov shift to Celestia I sip some of my tea enjoying the taste. I'm taking a break before lowering the sun and raising the moon. As I drink my tea, I see Clover enter my room with a letter and a small box. I raise an eyebrow at this as very few ponies are on my mailing list, so I have to wonder who it's from. "Princess, I have a letter and package from Shade Evergreen for you". Clover says in a happy voice as always. I smile it seems that Shade has sent me something again. I wonder if it will be as interesting as last time. "Thank you, clover". I grab the letter and package before opening the letter and reading it. Dear princess Celestia I'm writing you to give you an invention I've made enclosed is the spell matrixes and materials required the second part of this letter contains a brief description of the item thank you for your time and have a good day princess. Singed Shade Evergreen I smile at this the letter is short but from my time talking to the colt he seems like the type of pony to speak bluntly. I open the second part of the letter and inside are five spells written out on paper along with instructions. Enclosed are all the spells used in the enchanted object I've sent you. The enchanted object I've sent you is a magic light made by linking a piece of wood with a modified light spell I made. Too activate the light simply tap the gem twice It's reserve will last around sixteen hours and it takes a full day to recharge. The reason for sending it to you is that I don't really have a use for more than one and you will probably know best what to do with it. After finishing the second letter I flip through the papers most are spells I recognize the enchantment spell along with the linking spell. Third is a magical reservoir spell. The fourth is to absorb magic around it these I know remembering when they were created. But the last one is new to me It's the basic light spell just heavily modified it's nearly all numbers only using one symbol for its base. The spell work is impressive I've made my share of spells, and this one is well done. I've seen far worse spells from much more experienced magic users in the past one so young making something like this is definitely noteworthy. The other thing bringing a large smile to my face. I myself have tried to find a good light source for my ponies but most simply weren't viable being too costly for most of my ponies or too difficult for mass production. But now it seems I've been given a solution to this long standing problem. I open the box and inside I find a small gem with an even smaller piece of wood I gently tap the gem twice and see the piece of wood light up and start glowing. After turning off the light I pass the spell pages and magic light to Clover. "Take the gem and wood piece to the researchers tell them to test it thoroughly. And send the pages to the scribes to add to the library" she nods. "Good night princess". "Same to you Mis Clover". I watch her leave with the box and pages. :I really should think of a way to thank that colt:. time skip Aug 13 Tuesday. It's been almost a month since I sent Celestia the magic light and the next day I received a thank you letter from her. And only a few days ago I received a package and a letter. The letter was about the Grand Galloping Gala on August 21. And the package had a few rare books on life magic and one on enchanting. Along with an invite to the event itself and her asking me to attend. So, here I am on my day off out shopping for a decent suit. And for the first time I'm going shopping in the upper part of the city. As I walk the street, I look at several shops until I find one that looks good as I enter the shop, I see an elderly stallion unicorn cutting some fabric. "Hello sir, what can I help you with?" the elderly pony asks his voice holding a high class feel to it. "I'm looking for a good suit preferably in black or a dark grey". He takes a moment to look at me then the old stallion nods. "I can certainly help you with that sir please follow me". He starts walking deeper into the shop with me following him. We pass a few clothes racks and cloth rolls before making it to the backroom. Inside the room was a small round raised platform. "Please stand on this sir while I take your measurements". I nod and stand on the platform as the old stallion spends the next few minutes measuring me. After a few minutes he's done. He takes a moment to write down a few numbers. "I have something in your size sir, but it is in grey". "Thats fine". He nods and we move back into the shop front he looks through several racks before bringing a plain grey suit to the counter. "That will be fifty bits sir". I nod and pass him the bits before he passes me a bag with my suit in it. I leave the shop and start walking home to put my new suit away. After getting home I put the suit away and head back out. I'm heading back out to the city as I want to test some spells so I'm going to the range I used last time. After reaching the range I rent a room for a few hours. I'm here to test something with my TK field. My field has basically stopped growing in strength and I don't seem to be able to increase my control ether. So, I'm done training it now but there is one thing I thought of trying not long ago and I want to test it. My idea is simple I want to try crushing something. When I use my field, I normally try to be gentle with the things I hold. But this time I'm going to do the opposite. I walk onto the field and create some ice like last time I was here. I create a small ball of ice and hold it in my field and try to focus on my field trying to generate as much pressure as possible onto the ice ball. After a moment I hear and see the ball crack. A small crack running through it and seeing my successes, I continue trying. After a few hours of practice, I stop having broken several shapes made from ice. I made some progress, but I don't think this is viable as even with my years of practice with my TK field the effect seems weak, so I don't think I'll be training this as it won't be very useful to me. After cleaning up and leaving the range I check the time and see I still have time to do anything I like. So, I walk to the park and sit on a bench before pulling a book and quill out of my bag along with some ink and start drawing the view in front of me. I spend three hours drawing a decent sketch of the scene. Seeing the time, I start to walk home. And after making it home I close my door and decide to treat myself and make some pancakes for dinner. I grab my ingredients and start cooking using my field to cook them almost perfectly golden brown. After I finish cleaning, I make some tea to go with my food and lay down on the floor with my plate of pancakes and cup of tea. I eat while reading my silly crime novel. And after I finish, I clean my plate and cup before showering and heading to bed same as always.
BlueDragon64
550684
12
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-13T19:50:34+00:00
2024-02-13T23:59:35+00:00
374
Aug 21 Wednesday. Today is the Grand Galloping Gala and I'm cleaning myself up for the event. I tied back my mane after combing it and made sure to clean myself thoroughly and used some lavender soap to smell decent and put on my new suit. The suit grey is fairly plan looking but I like it. After some time, I leave the library not wanting to be late. As I approach the large building the gala is held in, I wait in line for a while. Twenty minutes later I'm passing my invite to a greeter and after they look at it, I'm let inside. As I enter the lobby, I see a mass of many different ponies talking with each other some dancing to music being played by ponies on a stage. While some where sitting at tables eating many types of food. And walking around the room talking with many different ponies is Celestia. I'm not one for party's but I have been to a few larger one's in my past life although I don't really know what to do. So, decide to go sit down at one of the tables and enjoy some fruit salad the mix of fruits giving a pleasant taste. "Oh, it's you". The voice startles me making me jump in my seat I turn to the voice to see Twilight standing next to me. :I really need better awareness of my surroundings:. Her hair tied back much like mine and wearing a dress. "I remember hello I don't think we ever properly introduced ourselves". She looks a bit embarrassed "ya sorry about that my brother had an important meeting to get to. But it's nice to meet you Shade right? I'm Twilight". I give her a nod "Nice to meet you too Twilight". For a moment she looks hesitant to ask something before speaking up "if you don't mind can I ask you some questions about the field you explained last time" she asked her face looking hopeful. "Sure, why not? take a seat". She smiles and we spend the next hour or so talking going back and forth on various topics mostly magic and we end up talking about history of ritual magic. Ritual magic is a branch of magic that is almost extinct. Ritual magic is the practice of drawing out a spell matrix with a magic conducting powder mostly gem powder on a flat surface. The biggest historical use of this type of magic is when ancient ponies used it to raise the sun and moon. Ritual magic works by combining the magic of several individuals into one spell matrix allowing them to cast a much more complex and powerful spell. But the downside is that by combining the magic you reduce control and with that the efficiency of the spell by a massive amount meaning that to cast the spell requires up to ten times as much magic while also making the resulting spell much less sable. The reason this branch of magic is almost gone is because of the invention of the magical reservoir spell. It was invented around the year 200 and before the invention of this spell there was no widespread way to stockpile magic for later use. So, as the spell became part of everyday life for ponies' ritual magic was slowly forgotten. Our conversation is interrupted by Celestia as she lays down next to us grabbing some cake before greeting us. "Hello, I hope the both of you are enjoying the gala". I nod to the princess "I am princess, you?". "Very much so I always like the gala. But beyond greeting you two I wanted to talk to you Mr. Shade". I look up to her before placing my food down and giving her my full attention. "Yes princess". "First I'd like to once again thank you for the gift". I nod to her. "And this time I have a gift for you". Both me and Twilight look curiously at her. She takes a letter from under her wing seemingly from nowhere "this if for you although I think it best you open it at home and enjoy the gala for now". I take the plan wight letter from her and place it in my suit "thank you princess". "No problem now did I hear you two talking about ritual magic?". We spend the next half hour talking about magic all of us going back and forth and after a while Celestia leaves to attend to other guests. Leaving us to talk again as we spend the rest of the gala in conversation. But after another hour she leaves heading home with her family. Not having anypony to talk to I decide to leave also heading home. I make it back to my room I take off my suit and place the letter on my desk before showering after drying myself off I sit at my desk and open the letter. As I read the letter my eyebrows rise before my mouth falls open. The page contained the number to a bank account in my name. Along with the plans for the new magic light that's going to be sold by the crown and select merchants with help from various merchants and crafts ponies around Equestria to help in the production and sale of them. This means that the new magic light is going to be sold all over the country. And as the inventor of the magic light, I'm entitled to two percent of ALL sales to be deposited into a bank account in my name. I'm about to have a lot of bits. Knowing Celestia I really should have seen this coming. Well, if nothing else I won't need to work another day in my life although I'll probably still work at the library to maintain some form of cover. Many would question a young colt with no family and background having enough money to not need to work that and I feel I would get bored with that much free time. Good news is that in a few weeks I won't have to worry about affording materials for experiments and research but for now it doesn't change much as they won't even start selling them for a several weeks and right now all I want is my bed. time skip Aug 30 Friday. I'm eating lunch with Blaz and Daisy like most days and suddenly Daisy asks me "hey shade I'm going to a auction later and have a second invite you want to come?". I pause not expecting such an odd question. "You go to auctions?" she nods before holding up a silver bracelet I see on her foreleg sometimes. "Yup that's where I got this. Normally I'd ask Blaz, but he doesn't have enough spare bits to go this time, so I thought I'd ask you". I spend a few moments absorbing her answer. "Well, what's at these auctions?". "Lots of things but this time I heard that the auction has mostly parts from magic creatures". That got my attention as most magic creatures have odd and unique properties. Right now, I have a good number of bits stockpiled and when the new magic lights are released, I'll have a lot more. So, after some thought I agree "sure I've got nothing better to do today". "Thanks, these auctions can be so boring it's nice to have company for them". "No problem what time is it?". "It's at seven so how about I come over and get you at six?". "Sure" I agree, we finish our lunch and go back to work. After work I take a shower then do some light reading. I turn my head as I hear a knock on my door and after opening it, I see Daisy. "Hey, you ready to go?". "Yup". I grab my bags and we leave the library heading to the upper part of the city we make our way through the market district we come to a large building with several ponies heading in guards checking invitations to the auction. We approach the entrance and Daisy shows them the invite she has, and they let us through. We move through the entrance and enter the auction house we go to the front desk, and I'm given a padel with the number 327 on it along with a mask and full body cloak. I turn to Daisy "is this really necessary?". "You'd be surprised how often others try and steal something from others leaving I've seen it happen three times all failed but it still happened". I look a bit startled but ponies just like humans have greed and if you're going to do something as stupid as stealing in the capital city where the princess resides you might as well steal something really valuable. So, I put on the mask and cloak flipping up its hood fully hiding my identity from others. We grab are paddles and make our way deeper into the building entering a large room filled with seats and a stage at the center we take our seats sitting in the middle rows. We wait for a while as more and more ponies fill the room until almost all the seats are full. A pony walks on stage his coat is black his mane grey and he's wearing a fine suit with glasses. "Welcome gentle mares and stallions to the silver mane auction house". "We all know what we are here for so let's begin with the first item for tonight" a mare wheels a glass case with a bag in it. As the auction starts the first few items that are brought out don't catch my interest most being more trophy's than anything. But as the auction continued, I see something that does pique my interest. "Next is something truly unique" the same mare from earlier wheels a glass case with a black egg a little bigger than a chicken egg inside it. "This egg's origins are unknown we don't even know what it is, and we looked. It's been in our collection for several years and hasn't hatched". "We'll start the bidding at one hundred bits". After hearing the auctioneer most don't seem interested in it as most would probably think it's dead having been with the auction for so long. As for me I was very, very interested. My control with my life affinity and my ability to feel life magic isn't that strong having only had my life affinity for a few months but even then, I can feel the life magic radiating from it even with me being so far away I can feel it like I'm standing next to it. I raise my paddle into the air placing my bid. "I have one hundred. One hundred going once. One hundred going twice. And sold". I was surprised nopony even tried to bid against me having gotten the egg with ease. We watch as the auction continues and while there were somethings, I would like to buy they were out of my price range. And after another hour the auction finishes, and we move to the lobby again and I was led to another room I pay them and am given my new egg placed in a wood box. We talk some as we walk back to the library saying good night to each other before heading to our rooms. As I close my door, I drop my bags and move to my desk excited to see my new egg. I place the egg on my desk and get my first good look at it the egg is black in color so black it seems to absorb a lot of the light around it even when I shine my magic light next to it very little light reflects off the egg. Instead, I try feeling it with my magic letting my magic wash over the egg trying to feel anything but after a few minutes of nothing I stop. The egg has the densest life magic I've even felt so dense its almost hard to look at glowing like a small sun in my magic. I reach out with my magic again trying to poke and prod the egg seeing if I can get any reaction out of it. After getting no response I try using life magic instead the magic is almost immediately absorbed the egg seemingly endlessly hungry for more life magic I keep feeding it until I almost run out of magic. I stop and take another look at its life magic its density having increased a small bit I stare at the egg as it seems to absorb even more light now. I guess I'll take that as a good sign. I place the egg next on my bedstand and move to the kitchen to make myself some food having missed dinner at the library. I grab some squash cutting into it and pulling out the seeds then I cut it into small cubes and throw it into my pan before putting it on the stovetop adding some oil, so it doesn't burn. I put some salt and pepper on them and cook them until soft with a light crisp, I take them out of the pan and plate it. I take my food and like most nights when I make food start reading a stupid or silly book this one about A fillynaping mystery. I finish my food and wash my dishes and move to my bed and convert the last of my magic too life magic and dump it into the black egg. After I drain the last of my magic, I lay down and as I fall asleep, I don't notice the egg shake very slightly.
BlueDragon64
550684
13
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-15T01:43:52+00:00
2024-02-15T05:57:30+00:00
333
Sep 10 Tuesday. It's been almost two weeks since I bought the strange egg and it's done nothing but absorb all the life magic I give it the only other difference is the egg's shell still getting darker and darker with time. Beyond that the new magic light released to the public at large and to say it's been a success would be an understatement. That's not to say everypony is talking about it and nothing else most simply buy it and are happy to have it most not caring who invented it or why which works just fine for me. I've kept up with my normal training and I've been trying to find something new to work on. I have a good number of bits now so I can get a lot more creative with my work. Yesterday I realized something all information in eqeustria travels through letters and messengers. There's no way to send a fast message the best you can do is get a fast Pegasus to deliver your message. But in my old world we could talk to each other around the world, and we didn't even have magic just tech and knowhow. So, it should be possible here the main problem being that there are no spells I can start with and modify which means I'm going to have to make my own spell for this. This is a bit of a problem for me as I don't want to release potentially dangerous knowledge into this world. So, I probably need to use a symbol as the base and starting point and work from there but that means I need the right symbol to start off of. And the only ones I could find that might be useful was one for sound and the other one is the light symbol that I used in my new light spell. And after some thought my best bet is the light spell. I'm hoping that I can modify the spell to send a low wavelength of light much like radios from my old world. With that in mind I've modified the spell. This is the easy part the hard part will not be sending the signal but receiving and translating that into something understandable. I'm going to try to send and receive a signal first. I grab one of my rubies and a sapphire I then place both on my desk and start with the ruby I enchant the gem with the experimental light spell. As I draw the matrix, I fill a blank spot with the number 100. I don't remember much about radios from my last life, but I do remember the basic idea. A low wavelength of light sent out with something to receive it the really big problem I have is I don't know how that wavelength of light is translated into sound. The number is to set the specific wavelength to send and receive. Originally, I wanted to send a message through a linking spell but had to scrap that idea as the further away two linked things are the more magic it takes to keep them connected. I then enchant the sapphire with the same spell as the ruby. I push some magic into the ruby seeing no difference when it's activated but I feel the magic slowly draining out of the ruby, so I think it's working. I move to the other gem and activate the second part pf the modified light spell the part used to receive a signal it's spoused to create a small light from within the gem when it gets a matching signal. After a moment I see the sapphire light up slightly. After that I move the ruby with me while leaving the ruby on my desk as I move to the other side of my room but as I walk the glow from the sapphire grows weaker with distance. After I reach the other side, the glow stops the sapphire no longer receiving the signal from the ruby. I expected problems but for it to be so weak that it can't even reach twenty feet. I may have to rethink this these gems don't hold a lot of magic but to be this weak means something else is going on here. I make some tea and start going through the spell matrix trying to find out what's wrong. The math is all correct so I can rule that out. The only thing I can think of is the symbol that the spell uses as a base I start going through the information I have on the light symbol but after going through all my notes and finding nothing, I'm thoroughly stumped. The spell should work but something is definitely wrong with it. I spend another hour reading through my notes slowly and after I find nothing again, I stop. I rub my tired eyes in front of me are all my notes and after a moment I start putting them away. Seems like this spell is a bust for now I'll have to read some books to see if I can find out what's wrong. I place my notes back with some disappointment but that's the thing with experimenting not all things work out well. I decide to get some air and leave for the markets to see if I can find anything of interest. As I walk through the markets, I see a many different stalls selling many things and as I move through them, I see a stall run by a species I've seen before but I've never met a Griffin was standing at a stall surrounded by knifes and blades. I spend a few moments just staring at them before approaching. As I walk to the stall, I get a better look at their stock many different weapons most blades, but I do see a crossbow laying in the back. I reach the stall and start looking at different weapons "need help finding anything?". I turn to the voice and see the griffin now staring at me "you have any daggers? preferably with a curved blade and short handle". They look thoughtful at my request before grabbing various weapons and showing them to me and after a few I see one I like. It's a simple dagger with a curved blade and wood handle in a sheath after looking it over I decide to buy it the total price for it was fifty bits. After that I continued looking through the markets. And after a while I don't find anything, I want and decide to leave. Not wanting to go home I walk out of the market and towards the shops this area still being part of the market district just shops instead of stalls. As I move through the shops, I pass several before I find a garden shop that looks good. This shop isn't like the flower shop I've been to in the past this shop has many different types of plants and is bigger. So, I decide to find some new plants to train with. I enter the shop and see an earth pony mare at the counter they notice me entering the shop and smile. "Hello what can I help you with" she asks me in a cheery tone. I spend a moment thinking before answering "what plants do you have with magical affects?". She raises a brow at my question "I have a good amount although they can get expensive". "That's fine" she nods and moves through the shop showing me different plants and telling me about them. And after a while I buy two plants that catch my interest. The first is an Iron Oak sapling it's known for having very strong wood but also for growing very slowly. The reason I bought this is because the wood of the tree is even stronger if it's grown in a place with high life magic the interesting thing about this is that the more life magic around is the slower and stronger it grows. I may not have enough room for a tree but if I try growing the tree very slowly and with a lot of life magic, I wonder what will happen. It also makes acorns like other oaks there apparently, they are insanely tough. The other plant is a Companion Vine. The vine itself is uninteresting in looks just a green vine with tiny wight flowers and inedible seedpods despite this it costs twice what the Iron Oak sapling does. What makes this vine so special is that when it's planted it creates and releases amounts of life magic making everything near it grow faster and heather. This affect isn't enough to grow something like Blood Leaf Tea, but it is enough to help grow many other plants faster that's also why it costs so much. The Iron Oak cost sixty bits and the vine double that most who buy these plants are rich and have a lot of space to work with. I may not have much space, but I can control how large the plants get so it should be fine. Right now, both plants are small the Oak is only a foot tall, and the vine is only sprouting. I buy both along with a large pot and enough soil to fill the pot and some extra soil for it all this combined is around one hundred pounds so it's heavy but only somewhat I start floating everything and leave the shop after paying and head home. After making it to my room I move my plants around placing my new tree in the left corner of the room to give it some space. I fill the bigger pot with soil and plant the Iron Oak inside the soil then I start giving it life magic and focus on growing it to a small size tree almost reaching my ceiling but not touching it. After the Oak is a decent size, I grab the Companion Vine and plant it in the same pot as the oak. After planting it at the small trees base, I start growing the vine guiding it to grow up the trunk and then along some low branches before stopping its growth. I wanted the vine for obvious reasons as it will help with all my plants. As for the Iron Oak, I got it for materials as while the blood wood is strong it's a little soft and has a tendency to spilt and splinter when being carved making it hard to work with and while Oak does crack it should be much better than blood wood. That and depending on how much life magic, I use I can get stronger or weaker wood giving me more options. I start pushing more life magic into one of the Iron Oaks branches trying to keep it the same size as I regrow and strengthen the wood as I do so the branch grows some despite my best to stop it. After some time repeating this, I'm done so I grab my knife and cut the branch off before helping the tree heal the cut wood where I cut the branch off. I cut the leaves off of the branch along with the unusable wood as I cut the small branches, I notice how hard they are a half inch thick branch taking a surprising amount of effort to cut then. After some time, I'm done leaving me with a branch of solid oak I strip the bark next this time my knife is somewhat struggling even with its sharp edge the cuts aren't smooth. After I finally get all the bark off of the branch, I take it to my sink and start drying it out. Even with the practice I've had it takes three hours mixed with brakes to rest and regain my magic my tea helping to speed up the process. But after I finally finish, I have a branch two inches thick on one end and one inch at the other. I try to cut a piece of wood off of the branch with no real progress as the wood is simply too hard to cut and carve. All cuts I do make are uneven and ruining the wood. In hindsight this is something I should have thought of as for how to fix this the answer is like many things magic specifically enchanting my knife to be sharper. There is still some daylight left so I leave my room and start looking for books in the library. After checking several sections and a few shelves I find something that will work a spell to make a sword or any other weapon sharper. The spell is ruff and not very well made but fairly simple so after two hours of messing with it I get something usable. After returning to my room, I place my notes on my desk and grab my knife before enchanting it with the new spell after doing so I try and cut the branch again and while it's still hard it's usable now. I should probably make a better spell for this later as while this one works there's only so much, I can do in two hours. After I cut a piece of the wood off, I put the rest of the branch to the side and focus on the piece I have. I start whittling down the piece of oak cutting until I have a ruff cube one inch thick and two inches long. For now, I don't have a use for this but it's big enough to test its properties later. I spend the rest of my day carving blocks of wood from the branch. After I finish with the branch I stop and put everything away. I move to the kitchen and make myself a grilled cheese with some tea. After finishing my food and checking all my plants I take a shower and head to bed tired.
BlueDragon64
550684
14
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-15T21:35:07+00:00
2024-02-15T22:39:14+00:00
328
Sep 25 Wednesday. It's been two weeks and after all this time I've finally found what is wrong with my spell. To explain I have to talk about the runic language and how it works and why it's used over other languages. The first thing is that the runic language is made up of only symbols. That may not sound important from a human perspective, but this language wasn't made by humans. The language itself is all different symbols each one meaning a different word as the language doesn't use letters only symbols and nothing else. This is the reason it's used in a spell's matrix as instead of using your limited space to spell out a word in a spell matrix you only need to use one symbol. The downside to this is obvious as trying to actually use it for anything else is hard as hell compared to a normal language as if you want to read a runic sentence you need to learn all the unique complex symbols to understand anything. This brings me to the other thing about the runic language and also why my spell failed. The other thing about the runic language is the meaning behind the words. This is why my spell failed as I didn't take this into account when creating the spell matrix. A good example of this is why my spell failed the symbol I used was the light symbol. When you think of light what comes to mind for a modern human that might be light waves along with visible and nonvisible light. But what does a pony think of, well the only thing they really know about light is that when it's there they can see and when it's not it goes dark. So, when I tried to use a symbol representing the ability to see to make something you can't see the spell worked but was horrible inefficient and even a little unstable. This also leaves me at an impasse as I can't make this spell with only math without using knowledge from my old world that could be misused. And I don't have the magical knowledge necessary to create a spell like this without making it use far too much power to be practical. So, I'm going to change focus from trying to make this spell to something else as I don't have the skill or knowledge necessary right now. I'm going to try something simple but practical anti pest crop protection. That may seem a little out of nowhere but many farms in equestria have problems with pests that eat and kill crops causing failed harvests mostly because of their lack of things like pesticide and while equestria and its citizens don't starve it's still a big problem. With this in mind I'm going to be trying to create some enchantments that will help. And with my new outlook on how to use runes I have a few ideas as while the runes having meaning closes some doors it opens others. Like the runic word for protection in the past, I didn't see much of a use for it. But now I do the idea of protecting something or somepony is vague but also malleable it can mean protecting a box from being opened or it can mean protecting somepony in a certain area from anything dangerous to them. Runes may be vague, but they allow me to give a spell broad instructions for a wide variety of scenarios. My idea is to use this rune to make the spell slowly freeze anything trying to eat the crops this will kill and slow pests. While driving them away and anything larger will flee the cold while any pests big enough to stay warm will be much easier to find and catch. It will take me a few days to create the spell and even then, I don't know large I can make the area of effect for the spell. I have to be careful because if the spell takes too much magic to maintain as the more, it takes the bigger the gem needed to keep it active and if it uses to much it will be useless. This is why I'm trying to make it freeze pests very slowly to lower the magical cost for upkeep. Right now, it's looking like the spell will be very slow it'll be so slow that it would take over an hour to freeze even a slug, but most bugs and other small pests don't like the cold so after a few days any in range of the spell should die off and I'm hoping other bugs won't try to move into the empty area as its too cold for them. The other part of the spell I'll have to make is something to keep the temperature from dropping too much as to harm the plants themselves as that would just cause a new problem for the farmers. I'm hoping to have this enchantment use the same type of gem as the light but that's not looking likely right now. Beyond all that I've been busy testing my new type of wood. The Iron Oak wood is proving to be a good choice as not only is it tough and with a little help from my enchanted knife usable it's also a decent magic conductor not as good as the blood wood but still decent enough. I've also learned that unlike regular oak the Iron Oak wood doesn't crack if it has enough life magic in it when it's being grown. This makes it a very stable material for magic and regular use. I've run some tests to see what the limits of the wood are and I've yet to find any limit to how tough it can get although it does have a steep magic cost the stronger you make it. The Companion Vine is also proving useful as while it doesn't make magic rich plants grow faster it does help keep them alive in an area without much life magic without me having to help them letting me use my magic on other things. Like the black egg which beyond the amount of life magic in it which is still growing hasn't done anything. The only other difference is its color which at this point absorbs almost all light even when I place a magic light next to it, I can only barely make out some texture and at this point I'm starting to wonder if it will ever hatch. I've tried looking for any information on the egg but much like the auction house have come up with nothing. I'm also starting to wonder if it's a good idea to let whatever it is hatch but after some thought my curiosity won out and I will keep trying to hatch it, but I will use one of my spare gems to make a small magic shield around it just to be safe. But today I'm spending some time making a better sharpening spell for my wood carving knife. The one I'm using now was slapped together in two hours from a less than perfect spell isn't that great it works just not well and if I'm going to be using even tougher Iron Oak wood, I'm going to need something better. And after a few hours of work, I have a much improved spell. I grab my knife and undo the enchantment by carefully pulling the spell out of the knife with the counter spell. The enchantment spell binds spells to objects and the counter spell undo's the bindings you do have to be careful though, so you don't destroy the item in the process. After removing the old spell, I enchant the knife with my new one. I grab a piece of oak to test it on and the knife glides through it like butter offering no resistance and a clean cut. I expected the spell to be better but not to this degree although I made this spell for only me, so I made it with only numbers. With this new spell on my knife my carving speed went through the roof. Right now, I don't have anything I need to carve but I still have several small wood blocks and I don't really need them, so I grab one and start carving not to make something for a project or an experiment but simply for fun. And after an hour or so I'm done having carved a small hourglass out of the wood it's simple and crude, but I found myself really enjoying the process. I do many things, but most are projects or learning and training I do have somethings that I do for fun but not many and I've been thinking of getting a hobby and wood carving sounds like a decent one. It's just past noon, so I grab my bags and head for the door. I make my way to the upper city markets looking for a crafts shop or something similar I end up finding a hobby shop so that will have to work. As I enter the shop, I see rows of shelves next to each other all filled with different small tools. I spend some time looking through the shelves and after some looking, I find the perfect thing a wood carving kit. It's expensive like most metal things as anything made from metal needs a blacksmith to make it. The kit itself has sixteen small different blades along with a beginner's guide to wood carving. I buy the kit for one hundred and twenty bits before I move onto another shop this one a blacksmith, I'm here looking for a decent saw to cut up the wood I grow as cutting the thicker branches with a knife won't work well and after buying a basic hoof saw I head back home. After getting home I lay all my new tools on my desk make some tea and start the process of enchanting all the new blades along with the saw. After I'm done, I grab my new saw and my knife before moving to my oak tree and start by removing the Companion Vine from the tree letting it lay on the ground. After moving the vine out of the way, I take my saw and start cutting the main trunk a few inches from the soil. I fell the entire small tree and move the fallen tree to the side before cutting off branches from the trunk and placing all the extra bits into the pot. After some time, I render the trunk down removing all the bark and branches placing them all in the pot and decomposing it all back into soil before I start regrowing the Iron Oak from its stump. After a few minutes, and adding some more soil form what I bought, I have a new tree that I place the vine back onto. I take my new small log several inches thick at its base before thinning out quickly to only an inch or so thick. I cut the log down into several wood blocks before stacking them near my desk and placing the scrape wood into the pot. I sit at my desk and start using my new kit to slowly carve down a block of wood. As I cut small bits of wood off the block slowly with different tools chipping away at the wood for several hours. As the room goes dark, I use my light to continue carving and at this point I've carved out a ruff pony shape it has no detail just a blank wood model with a horn and wings. The toughness of the wood makes it possible to have a very small link of wood does not snap or crack while working the wood letting me make wings that hold onto the rest of the carving without it breaking. I'm far from done with it but I have a ruff model. But I have work tomorrow and it's getting late, so I put down my tools down and go to the kitchen making myself a sandwich without meat just vegetables and some mustard and after enjoying my dinner I take a shower and make my way to bed.
BlueDragon64
550684
15
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-17T01:11:31+00:00
2024-02-17T18:42:25+00:00
340
OCT 15 Tuesday. Today I'm at my desk carving my little alicorn model this being the fourth as the last three I've broken or messed up the carving. I've been carving a lot and I'm having a surprising amount of fun I even bought some wood to make a small shelve to hold my carvings. Checking the time, I stop carving and spend an hour meditating on the space around me I try to feel the empty space as it moves. I've been doing this for several months now and I've had some small progress in my efforts as I'm now able to vaguely feel the space around me without having to give my complete concentration. It still takes massive effort to feel anything, but I can now slow down and try to feel the space around me with more detail than before. Along with that I can now vaguely feel when things move, I can only barely feel it but it's definitely there. When I started feeling this, I started moving things around me to train my senses. The other thing I've been working on is my anti pest spell and I've made some progress on the part that targets pests. Using some bugs and a slug as tests I've gotten the spell to start freezing them it's a little fast for my liking as it drains too much magic right now. But I can work on that and beyond that the spell is looking well within the realm of possibility for me. It's still fairly early in the day and after my meditation I don't have much to do so I decide to go to the library and find some new books to read. As I walk through the shelves, I pass many different types of books before stopping at the section with plant books. I grab an interesting looking book about medicinal herbs before finding a table to read at and settle in for a nice read. After a while I've read through the book, I find several herbs I may want to find or buy as they have some interesting effects. There's one in particular that I really want and that's the White Rose. The White Rose is much like the Fails Daisy in that it's almost identical to a normal rose bush. The main difference is in the plants name the flower of this rose bush are white and have a magic property the magic they possess is simple in practice but complex in function. When the white rose is exposed to a cold environment it will absorb the cold protecting the plant from the cold and through an unknown process converts it into ice affinity magic. This is massive as the plant is essentially converting a temperature difference into magic if I could find out how it works, I could make some absurd things. Even if the process is slow, I can just scale it up to increase the effects. If It's possible to create a spell that does the same as this plant, I could place it somewhere cold and get an increase in magic regeneration for gems and ponies. There are only a few ways that can help somepony regain magic faster and all are very rare. But objects that regenerate or collect large amounts of magic are even rarer as I can only really think of one and that's the crystal hart and that thing uses the love magic of an entire city for power. So, I'm definitely going to see if I can get a White Rose bush for research. Beyond that a few of the other plants in this book look rather useful. As I finish the book on herbs, I wonder what other books I should look for next and I decide on a topic I've been curious about for some time now. Illusion magic Is an obscure branch of magic as it uses both high level math and complex and uncommon symbols. I find a book on it and start reading. From what I've read from this book and what I've learned while researching other magic's illusion magic tends to lean towards two paths. The first is physical illusions this type is best described as light constructs creating illusion around a target. And then there is mental illusion spells this branch is much MUCH rarer as very few even know one or two basic spells of this type. Mainly because it's illegal to use that type of spell I only know its name because the book I'm reading mentions it in passing. Mental magic seems rare in general for this world as I've only found two spells one to help with meditation and the other to help calm soempony down. But beyond that it's one of the branches of magic that's dwindled with time. After taking some notes I place the book on herbs back and check out the book on illusions before returning to my room. I check on my plants giving the Iron Oak some more soil before I go back to carving. I spend the next hour or so chipping away at the wood trying to be careful not to break this one. As I carve the ponies figure out of wood, I slowly scrape pieces off bit by bit. And after a few hours I have a decent carving of an alicorn it's still a little crude but I'm improving. I place the half done carving on my shelve and grab the book on illusions and start reading more about them. Illusion spells seem fairly standard to what you imagine them to be creating things you can see but not touch. A good way to look at this is magic holograms and there's two main ways to go about making an illusion. The first is creating a spell to show a certain thing like a large beast of monster using math and only a few symbols. This method takes less magic as your mostly using math to create an image of what you want the downside is to change it, you'd need a new spell. The other method it to use mostly symbols and less math this makes the spell much more flexible allowing you to have the illusion be controllable to a degree. The downside to this is the power costs increasing exponentially higher with the changes you make but if you have enough magic, you can make just about anything you want. I look at my gems still having my large ruby along with four small sapphires and one small ruby I had two rubies, but I used one to make a shield around the black egg. I grab a sapphire and place it on my desk and check the book to make sure I have the spell right. The spell I'm going to be enchanting into this gem is a small illusion spell that lets you draw in a small area. It's only about a foot of space and it only has red, blue and green to draw with but I'm curious how it looks, and I have a few spare gems. The spell is complex for how little it does, and it takes me several minutes a good amount of my magic and a few attempts to enchant the sapphire. After I finish, I activate the enchantment and move my hoof and a line made of red light follows it. I spend some time getting used to the enchantment and try drawing with it and after a while I've made a 3D cube that I can rotate and change as I want. I continue to mess with the enchantment for the next hour drawing and erasing different things. After I have my fun, I turn the enchantment off and store the gem I then spend a few moments cleaning up my workspace. I'm hungry and I don't feel like cooking today so I'm going to a restaurant I found by accident a few days ago so I grab my bag and leave my room. I move through the city and find the place I'm looking for The Cozy Clover. It's a strange name for a restaurant that serves mostly batponies and griffins. But they do serve fish and I've been looking for anyplace that sells cooked meat. As I enter the restaurant, I see a pony who greets me "hello sir can I get you a table?". "Yes, thank you" they lead me to a table, and I take a seat before they pass a menu to me. "A waiter will be with you shortly". I nod my thanks and start reading through the menu and after picking what I want I wait a while for the waiter. The waiter a batpony mare comes up to me "hello sir what can I get you?". "A Grilled fish sandwich and some heyfries please". The waiter looks a little surprised at my order but writes it down anyway. "We'll have that out to you when it's ready" she walks away and goes into the back. And after twenty minutes I have my food placed in front of me and start eating right away the fish is nice and crispy with a lovely sauce that goes well with it. I get a few odd looks from the other ponies in the restaurant. It's a bit uncomfortable but I can't blame them it's not often you see an earth pony eating meat let alone enjoying it as much as I am. I take my time eating before I finish and after paying, I leave heading to the park as I want to do some drawing in the clear weather. I sit on a park bench and take out my sketch book and start drawing a large tree in front of me slowly drawing its trunk and roots. After getting a decent sketch of the tree I start drawing the background a few bushes and walkways the small pond nearby, But I stop as I hear someponies hoof steps. I turn to see a pony I recognize and have met in this very park Shining Armor and after walking up to me I greet him. "Hey nice to see you again Shining, how have you been?". He takes a seat next to me "Same Shade, I've been busy to say the least I don't think I've had a quiet day for a month at this point" he says back his voice having a tired tone to it. "What have you been doing if you don't mind me asking". "Guard training I've been in a camp for tryouts". "You're planning to become a guard? good for you". He nods "Ya I'm excited I start in a few months, but it's just the training that's been a slog and I'm starting to wonder if I really want this". "The journey of a thousand miles begins with one step". He turns to me and gives me an odd look before chuckling. "Well, I certainly didn't expect that colt you're just a fountain of wisdom ha?". "I try". We spend the next hour talking about things mostly work and stupid things like the fact that he likes comics. I swear I mentioned them once and a had to stop him after he went on a fifteen minute rant about a character getting retconned out of the comic he liked, but talking to him was enjoyable. After a while he had to go and left the park. I drew for some time before also leaving the park and heading home. After getting into my room, I as always check my plants and after giving them water and shifting them around, so they all have enough light. I sit down at my desk and start working on my pest spell. Right now, I'm working on the part of the spell that targets the bugs. I don't want the spell to spread cold over an area but selectively target and freeze pests only, leaving the plant unharmed I've worked out how to target bugs just not how to keep the cold from spreading afterwards. As I write out math equations, I slowly make small progress in my work. I've managed to get the spells magic cost down by slowing the freezing effect and I've even gotten the area of effect to a little over an acre of land enough to cover a small crop plot. This won't be perfect but its far better than nothing, it should be only a few weeks before I can finish and send the spell to Celestia so she can get some ponies to test it. After getting some spell work done, I go through my nightly ritual showering and going to bed. But right as I'm about to head to bed I see the black egg shake a slight amount the sudden movement making me think I was seeing things, but it definitely moved. I don't know what's in that egg, but I know now that it's definitely alive if nothing else. I check the shield around the egg and after finding it working correctly, I head to bed.
BlueDragon64
550684
16
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-18T03:39:21+00:00
2024-02-18T04:50:05+00:00
350
NOV 22 Friday. As I walk with a book cart I stop and start placing books back into their proper places on the shelve in front of me. As I do this, I pick up three books at a time. After all my training with my TK field three things at once seems to be the limit of things I can hold at one time. After emptying my cart, I move back to the sorting room and grab another full cart and repeat the process again and again. As much as I like working here it can get very repetitive but that's ok, I'm happy with my work as while it's slow and boring sometimes, I enjoy the silence and time to think. As for what I'm thinking of, well a few things one is my current project the anti pest spell. At this point it's almost done I have everything I need, I have all the effects I want figured out I just need to combine them into one spell. Unfortunately, I wasn't able to make the spell work off of my spell gems, but the spell won't require a large gem just a slightly bigger gem a little over an inch as the small gems I have are just under what is needed. Still, this means that after I finish the spell, I can just send it to Celestia as she is more than capable of finding a gem to test the spell for any side effects or potential problems that they may cause. Beyond my spell work I've kept up with my carving and even practicing some illusion magic. For carving I finally finished my alicorn model it's done, and it doesn't look that bad in my opinion. I'm planning on enchanting it with several basic illusion spells to make it look like Celestia for a hearth's warming gift to her. I have also for several months now been learning healing magic and after all this time I've finally successfully cast the most basic healing spell that I could find. All the spell does is help speed up the healing of small bruises and rashes, that may not seem like much but considering I've only been learning for a few months and I'm self taught its some decent progress. My life magic has had much progress as I can now control the growth of small plants to a vast degree. It's still hard to control large of magical plants as I can only really stop a plants growth or speed it up. But for small and non-magical plants I can control the growth to a much greater degree. I can control what parts grow or stay the same and how it will grow what direction how far or if I want flowers or fruit. It's still only for small plants like my False Daisy and Gripping Vine but progress is still progress. As for my other plants I've been experimenting with the Iron Oak I've been feeding a good amount of life magic into one branch and taking samples to see it's changes over time. My space magic is about the same no real difference for now. As for the black egg I've seen it shake a few more times and it's still getting darker and at this point it almost looks invisible when in a shadow it might hatch soon but I don't really know with that in mind I've used another gem to shield it just to be safe. I empty another cart and take it back to the sorting room, I look at the clock on the wall and see it's three twenty two and my shift is over I let go of my cart and make my way back to my room. After entering my room, I sit at my desk and start finishing my anti pest spell. I start with the targeting part of the spell this piece of the spell works by using the protection rune and having it target any bugs on plants with fruit or grains it them. This leaves the plant unharmed as the spell only targets pests trying to eat the plant and its fruits. This part of the spell then feeds what is targeted into the next part of the spell. This part freezes bugs that the spell tells it to. Over an hour or two the bugs will very slowly start freezing bit by bit until they stop eating the plant or die this means that they still eat some of the plant, but it stops them from doing so until the plant dies. The spell will also freeze all bug eggs that are laid on the plants killing them and preventing new bugs from being born on the plants. I have found one problem that I wasn't able to solve for now, the spell doesn't have enough power to go through that much soil meaning that underground bugs won't be very affected by the spell. So, the spell won't be as effective as I want to be but it will still help farmers as right now, they have nothing beyond just killing pests with regular methods. And finally, the last part of the spell is its enchantment this part is not really interesting just a slight modification on the preexisting enchantment spell. I spend over an hour piecing the spell together and making sure it functions correctly and wont fail when used I grab some paper and start writing a letter to Celestia about how the spell works and what type and size of gem is needed for the spell along with what should be tested. I finish my letter and copy the spell matrix onto some paper and seal it inside an envelope along with my letter before grabbing my bag and leaving my room. As I step out of the library, I hear the snow crunch under my hoofes as I walk, we are well into winter now and the snow is getting thick on the streets. I walk the streets moving to the post office I've used several times now. I enter and talk to the pony behind the counter going through the process of getting a letter delivered before leaving and moving back outside. Feeling the chill in the air I hurry back to the library. After getting back to my room I curl up in a blanket and read my book on illusions in front of my desk. I want to enchant my wood alicorn carving to be a small copy of Celestia so I'm reading through this book. Illusion spells that are static are much easier and take less magic but can take a long time to get right. I start by hollowing out a small compartment in the wood I go slow to not break anything and after a while I have a square hole. Then I take another piece of wood and carve it down to fit the hole. I enchant a gem with the base spell that sets the Illusions base color. After layering several more illusion spells onto the gem spending time adjusting the colors and shapes after a while, I have a ruff copy of Celestia. It's not ready yet and I'll need to do a lot of work on it, but it's just matter of time until I finish. I spend the next few hours adjusting the illusion trying to get it right. I place the model back on my small shelve and check on the black egg. It's not moving right now it seems to only shake every once in a while, there's no other activity from it just the odd shake. I make some tea and start checking my plants making sure their all fine. After I'm done, I settle in for a cold evening with my tea and a good book. I read through some of the book before hearing a knock on my door and after opening my door I see Blaz standing there with a bag. "Hey Shade, how's your day been?". "Not bad you?". "Good do you mind if I come in". "Sure". I say moving to the side and letting him inside. After he enters my room, I close the door and lead him to my table as we both sit around it. "So, to what do I owe this visit". He looks a little pensive before placing the bag he has with him on the table. "Well, if you don't mind me asking you eat meat, right?". I raise my brow at the unexpected question as I've told both Blaz and Daisy that I eat meat fairly regularly and while I still share some of my cooking with Daisy somedays. I've offered some of my cooking to Blaz before, but he refused my offer as he said he doesn't like meat so him asking me this is a bit odd. "I do but why do you ask I thought you don't like meat?". He nods "I don't but I'm not asking for me". His answer causing my confusion to grow "so why are you here? do you need something?" as I make some tea for us. "Well, it's about my son and his wife their expecting a foal soon". "Congratulations". I place the now heated tea having used a spell to heat the water almost immediately before adding some tea leaves. He nods "thanks but they have a problem". I pass him a teacup and he stops for a moment to take a drink. "Well, less a problem and more just an annoying situation, my son's visiting with his wife and their staying with me as they live in cloudsdale, but like I said his wife is expecting a foal and both are pegasi". He takes another drink "and she'll be due soon, so she's been getting a parity bad craving for meat, so my son went and bought some meat thinking I'd know how to cook it, I don't ". "So you want me to cook some meat you brought?". "Yes, I was hoping you could help us". I smile at him "sure, let me see what you've brought with you". He nods his thanks before passing me the bag be brought with him. After opening it I see a chunk of fish meat. "Well first what type of fish is this". "Bass". I nod "ok any preference on how I should cook it?". He shakes his head "ok then it won't take long to cook so come back in an hour or so". "Thanks Shade". "No problem, Blaz". After that I lead him to my door and see him off before closing my door and heading into the kitchen. I fully unwrap the fish meat and place it down before grabbing my knife and cutting it into several inch thick slabs. I set my pan to heat up and add some oil and after letting the pan get hot, I add the fish. I sprinkle some salt and pepper on the fish as I cook it and after a while, I turn the heat off and place the cooked fish on a plate before cleaning up. I'm enjoying some tea when I hear another knock at my door, I grab the fish and walk to the door opening it to see Blaz standing there. I pass him the plate "here you go this should be decent". He gives me a nod "thanks again I hope you have a good night". "Same to you Blaz". He walks away and I close my door. I go to my bed and bundle up again to continue reading my book.
BlueDragon64
550684
17
Main 6,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Human,Adventure,Mystery,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Sex
A quiet rune scribe
It's odd to be born in a new world. Even odder for it to have magic.
incomplete
62
5
<p>A man is reborn into equestria as an earth pony twenty years before canon.<br/>He knows this story well and he has a clear goal to stop the end of magic let's see where it will take him shall we?.</p><p>[This story will be somewhat fasted paced at the start but slow down not far in. Well, I'll try if nothing else I'm new to writing and this will be my first attempt on fimfiction I'm also not very good at descriptions any criticism is much appreciated] [ps inspired by <u>Life Finds a Way</u> and <u>Hold it Together</u> please go read both]</p>
mature
2024-02-20T07:23:05+00:00
2024-02-20T07:36:54+00:00
165
DEC 14 Tuesday. It's December now and only a little over a week until Hearth's Warming and like most ponies this time of year I'm out shopping for gifts. I've finished my gift to Celestia, and I'm planning to send it soon. I also sent her the anti pest spell a few weeks ago and got a letter back thanking me along with telling me that she will have other ponies test it so it's ready for spring. It will take a lot of testing and it won't be ready for mass use for a year of two but at least the spell is done, and they will be testing it more thoroughly in spring. As for other gifts I'm out shopping for Blaz and Daisy. Now that I think about it, they're really the only ponies I really know as friends. But back to what I'm doing, I'm looking for decent gifts for both of them. That's why I'm trudging through a few inches of snow in the cold to do some shopping. At this time of year very few if any stalls are out on the streets as Indoor shops cover most business for a few weeks until the snow is cleared. I find my way through the cold streets to find the hobby shop I've been to before. I know both Blaz and Daisy fairly well, so I know what I'm getting them. Daisy likes to paint so I've gotten her some paint and brushes. Blaz though is a little trickier as he like a few things first but the thing I decided on was puzzles, yup he likes solving puzzles of all kinds so I'm here looking for any I can find. As I walk the shelves, I find a small cube of wood a puzzle box and after a little more searching I find a several regular picture puzzles. After paying for my things, I leave to walk back home it's dark the sun having set, so I cast a magic light to follow me as I walk home, I turn down a side street and halfway down it my hoof hits something and I tumble down to the snowy road. After pulling myself off the street I look back to see what I tripped over, I see something laying on the street covered in snow with only some black sticking out illuminated by my light. I reach out with my field to pick it up but after a moment nothing happens the object remaining unmoved from its spot. :What?: confused I reach out with my field again trying to move the object but just like before no response. I spend a moment feeling with my magic as I feel nothing at all. My magic seems convinced that nothing is there that it's just empty space, but I can clearly see it sitting there on the street. It's also odd for something to be on the street as they are cleaned regularly and somepony would notice something black as ink sitting in the middle of the snowy street even if it's partly covered in snow. I look around the street I'm in a small street going in between two buildings it's after dark so I'm alone the only pony in sight. I focus back on the object placing my things to the side some distance away. I try once again to feel this with the same result as before, I change my approach I try feeling it with life magic only to end up with the same result as before, nothing. All my magic agrees that this thing doesn't exist. At this point I'm both intrigued and concerned all thigs have magic, All things except this thing apparently. I don't want to touch whatever this is again, and I can't move it and I'm sure as hell not leavening it here unsupervised. I spend a moment thinking what I could do, I could find a guard to help but not many patrol this late in the day especially in back alley streets. And that still means I'd have to leave it alone for some time. I think for a moment and decide that I should try everything I can before trying to pick this thing up with my hooves. I spend several minutes trying with my magic to feel anything but always getting the same result, nothing. I've tried my natural magic along with my life magic so I might as well try space magic. I spend a few minutes getting in the right head space before meditating in the falling snow. I reach out vaguely feeling the space around me and finally I can feel the thing, As soon as I feel it, I get a splitting headache and I barely catch myself from falling over as my head spines. What I felt can only be described as empty space crushed so hard it becomes a solid thing. I can feel the warped and crushed space like a twisted knot it the world around me. After a while I slowly recover regaining my balance :what the fuck?: I stare at the thing I've found, and I have no idea what to do this thing is beyond my knowledge. Wherever this thing came from but I can't leave it here but that means I'm going to have to pick it up. I need to get this to Celestia she's the only one who could help with something like this. I form a basic plan in my head and empty my saddle bags before reaching out with my magic to move the snow away from the thing. After doing so I get a good look at it, it looks like a normal rock much like obsidian back and jagged. It's a little bigger than my hoof a few inches across at most. I carefully move my bag to scope up the unknown stone. After I do that, I grab my things and start moving back to the library holding the bag several feet away from me at all times. When I get home, I place the bag in a far corner and start writing a letter, glancing at the bags to keep an eye on it. I don't know how long it will take to get a meeting with her especially this time of year but I'm going to try. The post office should still be open I'll have to leave this thing here, but I don't have much other choice as carrying that thing around the city doesn't seem like a good idea. I write my letter being a little vague but stress needing to meet her as soon as possible, after finishing the letter I run to the post office and give it to them and run back to the library. After entering my room, I check to make sure it's still there, seeing that it is I relax some. My letters to Celestia normally take a day or two at most to reach her and I normally get a response back the following day. She should get my letter tomorrow morning so I'm not planning on sleeping tonight I don't know what this thing is but I'm not sleeping anywhere near it. I spend the next several hours waiting through the night never taking my eye off the bags for long. It's five it the morning when I hear a knock at my door "It's open come in". I say turning my head to the door, I let out a sigh of relief as a guard enters my room. "You here to escort me?" I ask them. "Yes, sir I'm to bring you to the palace" I nod and grab my bags keeping them a few feet away from us as we walk. We walk through the streets as the sun rises and the moon sets, after a while we reach the palace and pass the guards. We move down hallways taking several turns before coming to a door guarded by two ponies. As we pass the door, we enter a room and sitting at a table in the center is Celestia, who seems to be doing some paperwork. As we approach, she looks up from her papers and turns to us a small smile on her face. "Hello Mr. Shade, it's a pleasure to speak to you again". I bow before approaching the table "same to you princess, although I wish it were with better news". She raised a brow and looked to the bag I still had floating near me "yes your letter did say you needed to speak to me urgently but not why". I nod "It's a little hard to explain it might be best to just show you, may I?". She nods and I move the bag to the table and dump the odd rock on the table, it lands with a soft thud. "A rock?". Seeing her confusion I speak "try and pick it up in your magic princess". She still looks confused but does as I ask. Her horn glows and after a moment of nothing she focuses more, her horn glowing brighter but the rock stays completely still. "Try and feel it with your magic princess" I recommend. I feel the magic in the room increases as she tries to feel the rock. I see her face shift as she feels the stone with her magic focusing more and more on the rock having moved all her paperwork off the table. "What is this?". I'm not sure if she was asking me or just thinking out loud but decided to answer anyway. "I know what it is just not how is exists" she turns to me and nods for me to continue. "I found it in the city literally in the street I tripped over it, and just lying there in the middle of the street was a rock, I was curious and tried to pick it up and just like now nothing happened". "I tried several things but only one thing worked, space magic". "You can use your space magic" her voice carried some surprise. "Somewhat, I've found that if I meditate, I can somewhat feel the space around me not by much, but I didn't need to feel much to decide to bring it to you, as far as I can tell this rock is a chunk of space crushed into a physical thing". She looks just as shocked at this as I was when I found out she looks back at the rock "how does something like this even exists?". "I have no idea, honestly princess if I didn't have my space magic this would just be an odd rock, but it does exists". "Have you touched it?". "No, I don't know where that thing came from, and I don't know what it can do so I've left it be until I could bring it to you princess". She nods "probably for the best, I will be honest I don't know what to make of this thing, I don't even know how one would go about making something like this, when you used your magic what did you feel?". "Trying to feel it was less then pleasant, it was like having your point of view flipped upside down inside out at the same time, gave me a splitting headache too". I see her cringe slightly at that "I've felt something similar in the past, what do you think should be done with it?". I spend a few moments thinking it over before answering her "I'm not sure but if nothing else it should be placed somewhere secure and safe". She nods "yes that is probably for the best, thank you for bringing this to me". "No problem princess". She moved pulled a bag from somewhere and put the rock into it before placing it to the side. "Beyond that there's another thing I wanted to talk to you about". I nod to her "Well I'd like to thank you again for the new spell, testing is still ongoing and early but it's promising so for" I smiled at that "the ponies working on the tests wanted me to send you a list of questions, and since your here now do you mind?" she summons a piece of paper in front of me. I look through most of the questions and there mostly about parts of the spell and a few about the symbols and math used, I spend a few minutes answering what questions I can and adding some notes to others before passing it back to Celestia. She looks the page over and nods "thank you, is there anything else you need?". "Beyond sleep? no princess I'm fine". She gives me a smile and gives a light laugh "good then the guards will show you out, have a good sleep Mr. shade". I nod getting up and following the guard out of the palace, after leaving I walk home and fall on my bed happy to get some rest.
Javier
550685
1
Dragons,Self Insert,Sparky Sparkeroni,Spike,Sunny Starscout,Adventure,Dark,Sad,My Little Pony: A New Generation
Me and Dragons confront Opaline
The dragons and I (Javier Velez) are about to confront Opaline for her crimes against Equestria.
complete
-1
-1
<p>What you are about to read is an alternative version of the scene where Opaline takes Sunny’s cutie mark. This involves Leaf, Lava, Tumble, Jade, Luxxe, Fountain, Blaize, and Spike.</p>
everyone
2024-02-02T03:49:54+00:00
2024-02-02T20:10:19+00:00
255
It was chaos in Opaline’s Castle, Opaline has taken everypony’s cutie marks, including those of Sunny and her friends. I was heartbroken at the fact that Sunny lost the battle. And soon enough, Opaline has shut down every protection spell in Equestria. I cried and cried my heart out for Sunny, but for Opaline, it was a different story. “And I’ll rule over you little powerless ponies for all eternity.” Opaline declared while laughing evilly. I looked up at Opaline angrily, and then I scolded her for her actions. “You stupid Alicorn.” I said furiously. It was at this point where I lost it. “How dare you take everypony’s cutie marks and have Lava and Jade get involved in your stupid plan. You know something, Sunny told me a story of Starlight Glimmer, but even she will never do what you did.” I then stomped my hoof so hard that it freed Lava, Blaize, Leaf, Tumble, Jade, Luxxe, Fountain and Spike from Opaline’s mind-control spell. They looked up at Opaline in anger. “What? You were all under my spell.” Opaline shouted. “Not anymore”, Luxxe shouted back in anger. “So you are Opaline?” Tumble said as he looked up to her in disgust. “You have some nerve messing with our friends.” “Ugh!” Opaline growled. “You messed with the wrong pony. Who are you to mess with me like this?” Blaize glared at Opaline. “I’m Blaize,” the large female dragon said in anger. Next was Leaf. “I’m Leaf,” said the male green dragon, furiously looking at Opaline. Lava was up next, putting his claw down. “The name’s Lava,” the red male dragon responded while stomping his claws. Next was Jade, who blasted dragonfire at Opaline. “I’m Jade,” the white dragon shouted as she folded her wings. Tumble was up next, roaring angrily. “I’m Tumble,” the orange male dragon said. Luxxe was next, as she flew to Opaline and knocking her to the ground. “I’m Luxxe,” the yellow female dragon said while looking at Opaline angrily. Fountain was next, staring down at the alicorn. “I’m Fountain,” the blue female dragon said while pointing her claws at Opaline. Spike was last. “You know me, the name’s Spike,” the purple dragon said, disgusted by Opaline’s actions. “I’m Javier,” I said. “Just so know, I freed the dragons you’ve captured.” Opaline looked up at me and dragons, finding out what I did. “You did what?” Opaline screamed and screamed at me. “YOU PATHETIC PONY!” She scolded. “I WILL GET YOU FOR THIS!!!” “No, you won’t be getting away with this,” I said furiously. “You have caused everypony to lose their cutie marks including those of Sunny Starscout’s friends. YOU WILL NOT GET AWAY WITH THIS!!!” “Oh hush,” Opaline interrupted. ”You'd be surprised how long I can keep somedragon in here. You're mine now. My own little scaly army. How lovely. See? I can make friends, too. Friendship! Ha! They used to tell me that was magic. You know what I think is magic? Power! And soon, I'll have all of it! Dragon Stone? Right there! Cutie mark magic? Incoming! Prisbeam? Soon enough! Together Trees? Did you see my tree upstairs? Poor little thing. I tried and tried to make it grow, but you know what feeds a Together Tree, right? Did you guess "unity"? That's correct. It's always unity. So my little tree would always just wither up and die. Why, even when I found it a real live friend, it wouldn't grow. No matter. My little fake friend brought some real unity magic back to me whether she meant to or not. And all it took was one tiny spark… And once my tree woke up, well, it made friends with the tree in Maretime Bay and another tree in Bridlewood. And then my friend Misty – do you know what she did? She grew a brand new one for us in Zephyr Heights. So maybe my little Misty really has been a true friend, after all. Now all of the cutie marks come to me one by one. Bing, bong. But I'm saving my favorite cutie marks for last. And once I have those, nothing will stop me from total domination! Then, Equestria is ALL MINE FOR THE TAKING!!!” She finished, but then I looked up angrily and furious at Opaline. “YOU BIG MEANIE!!! THE DRAGONS DID NOTHING WRONG TO YOU, AND YOU JUST HAD TO CAPTURE LAVA AND JADE? REALLY, OPALINE? REALLY? WELL THEN, YOU’RE ONE GREAT BIG MEANIE. AND YOU WILL NEVER GET AWAY WITH THIS. NEVER, YOU’RE LUCKY THAT I FREED THE DRAGONS BUT THE DAMAGE HAS ALREADY BEEN DONE!!!” I raged very loudly at Opaline again. “Dragons, teach this monster a lesson.” I said angrily. “You got it Javier.” Luxxe said. “Me, Fountain, Lava and Jade will take turns in throwing vines, Leaf will destroy her pathetic throne, and Tumble, Spike and Sparky will use the dragonstone to destroy this castle.” She told me her plan. So, the dragons flew to Opaline while knocking her down to the ground. Leaf uses his dragonfire magic to destroy Opaline’s throne, Luxxe, Fountain, Lava and Jade all took turns in throwing vines at Opaline while using their magic in the process, and Tumble, Spike and Sparky uses the dragonstone to free the cutie marks that Opaline stole from them. “You pathetic dragons, I thought we were friends,” Opaline said. “Actually, Opaline, we are not friends,” Lava and Jade both said and they and the rest of the dragons were at the final stages of their plan. “Just wanted to clear that up,” Jade said. As Spike uses his dragon teleportation to teleport him, the dragons and Sunny Starscout out of Opaline’s castle, the Together Tree starts to grow and expand, and the castle itself starts to crumble. Opaline brushes her flank against the tree's growing roots, causing it to rip her cutie mark away. In her attempt to retrieve it, she gets engulfed in the tree's roots. The Together Tree fully blooms, with Opaline trapped inside and her castle reduced to ruins.
Achilles
550686
1
Twilight Sparkle,Crossover,Dark,Horror,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Amnesia: Twilight's Descent
When Twilight wakes up in a room she didn't recognise, with no memory of where she was or how she got there, she steps out into the darkness in search of answers. Her dark descent has begun.
incomplete
9
1
<p>When Twilight wakes up in a room she doesn't recognise, totally clueless as to where she is or how she got there, the first thing on her mind is <i>answers</i>. She has no way of knowing, when she takes her first step into the darkness, what horrors await her in the bowels of Brennenburg Castle. Her dark descent has begun.</p>
mature
2024-02-02T07:32:30+00:00
2024-02-08T14:06:27+00:00
95
'I can't believe this is happening! That monster... dear Faust, how are we going to come back from this?!' 'I-I don't-... a moment, just l-let me think.' 'We don't have time, Savvy!' '... There’s one way... here. Here, hold this.' 'What are you... no... oh no. You're not going to-' 'Just take it! Alexander's servants will be here any minute! We must do this as quickly as we can!' 'I don't know if I can.' 'Twilight, please! This is the only chance we have! Think about your friends. If they find out what happened here, they will never forgive you! Do you want that?' 'O-Okay!... Okay, here goes...' ‘Wait. Wait, what's... Twilight? T-Twilight can you hear me?! J-Just b-breathe, Twilight! Just-’ A flame whispered, and her twitching ears woke her. She pried her eyes open to bleary browns and blacks, with orange dancing in the gloom. Faust, what a nightmare, she thought to herself, though she couldn’t remember the details. The voices seemed familiar, but she couldn’t name them. She waited for her vision to adjust, groaning as she fought to roll onto her belly. Her senses returned, and Twilight felt no cover keeping her warm, no pillow cradling her head; she was splayed out across a cold floor. There was a bruise on her flank and a pounding in her head, and when she went to sit up, her hooves ached and trembled as if she’d just galloped a marathon. Most notable was the stench that seemed to be coming from her lips; potent and sickly sweet, like a poorly mixed punch, yet her throat was dry. It took her several minutes to push herself onto her rump and look about, dizzy beyond reason. The walls were grey cobblestone, the orange light coming from a torch. The room was small, stuffed with dusty furniture; a wardrobe in the corner, a desk sat across from that. Paper lay underneath and around it, torn and ripped apart, and the door to the room was hanging slightly ajar, as if opened in a hurry. A candle on the desk was melted to a stump, the wick black and smoking, the wax spilled across the wood, coating the box of a strange item. Twilight took a breath, then rocked onto her hind hooves and wobbled over to it, sniffing at the object. A tinderbox? she thought, identifying the smell of burned charcloth, so a tinderbox it was, and recently used. Now closer, the desk looked to be an antique to Twilight’s trained eye, but in terrible condition. It bent downwards at the centre with a crack on the underside, and the wardrobe was similarly damaged, doors hanging open with one doorknob missing. The exposed splinters of each were clean. 'This... what in Equestria?' she said aloud. 'Where am I?' Ask anypony and they would tell you Twilight Sparkle was no drinker, and she knew hangover symptoms well enough without having to experience them. Despite the tremendous migraine, drinking enough to lose her memory would have her feeling way worse. How in Equestria, then, did she end up there? Was she still close to home? What time was it? How long had she been asleep? Did her friends know where she was? Did Spike? She tried shaking herself into sense, holding her temples as her breathing involuntarily sped up. 'Sh-shhh... breathe, Twilight. Just b-breathe.’ She focused; one breath in through the nostrils, then another out through her mouth. In through the nostrils, out through the mouth. In, and out. In... Out... After a few moments she opened her eyes. The first thing to do was find the owner of whoever’s home she’d passed out in, then try to make sense of it all, after profusely apologising of course. So, she made for the torch and gripped it with her magic; the spell sent a sharp pain through her horn into her head, the torch wedging in its holster. When she wiggled it free the wall spat the holster out and Twilight jolted backwards, gasping as it hit the floor. 'CLANG’. ‘Another thing to apologise for,’ she sighed. Twilight hooked a hoof around the door and eased it open. It creaked into the shadows of a long hallway on the other side. She levitated the torch in front of her, which barely lit the chamber. C’mon, she thought when she found herself frozen at the doorway, you’re being a big filly now. Try as she might, she couldn’t reason with her discomfort, but pressed on.
Achilles
550686
2
Twilight Sparkle,Crossover,Dark,Horror,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Amnesia: Twilight's Descent
When Twilight wakes up in a room she didn't recognise, with no memory of where she was or how she got there, she steps out into the darkness in search of answers. Her dark descent has begun.
incomplete
9
1
<p>When Twilight wakes up in a room she doesn't recognise, totally clueless as to where she is or how she got there, the first thing on her mind is <i>answers</i>. She has no way of knowing, when she takes her first step into the darkness, what horrors await her in the bowels of Brennenburg Castle. Her dark descent has begun.</p>
mature
2024-02-02T07:32:35+00:00
2024-02-08T13:36:37+00:00
85
An hour? Fifty minutes? It had to have been forty. Each hallway looked identical to Twilight. She’d been searching for something recognisable. Anything. Most of the windows she’d come across were boarded, and one look at the rest told Twilight they weren’t designed to open. Studying her surroundings to keep herself occupied, she’d at least determined it was dawn or dusk from the ghostly ribbons of sunlight creeping inside. The walls were considerably old stone, adorned by disheveled heraldry. Debris littered the floor beneath gaps in the ceiling, and she’d come across multiple cross-sections offering barricaded doors, if not sloping rubble. This place looks like it's been hit by an earthquake, she mused. Her head still throbbed. Her hooves still ached. The dusty air irritated her nostrils, but as she went to rub her snout, she smelled something sweet and strong. Something familiar. She followed the scent down the hall, around the corner, down another hall, then another, the odor getting thicker, until Twilight spotted a speck of colour. The smell was coming from a thin trail of pink puddles, and she began pursuing them further into the gloom. The trail of liquid eventually turned into a room. Twilight peeked her head through the doorframe. The torchlight danced over more dusty furniture and crates riddled with mold, as well as a hole in the roof. She trotted inside; it would be nearly impossible to reach. Glancing at some crates, though she wasn’t a heavy mare by any stretch of the imagination, she didn’t fancy her chances atop the rotting wood. Her horrid migraine dissuaded her from trying any levitation spells, either. A large chest sat open in the corner of the room, a torn cobweb at the hinge, and she caught sight of a spider repairing the damage. There was a clammy aroma in the air, too, but she was cold and dry as a bone. Twilight wandered through a door that hung open in the corner, and wooden floorboards creaked beneath her hooves for once. Metal candelabras hung from the ceiling, and there was a small burner in the corner of the room. More pages were torn up and thrown across the floor. Even in her state, she hoped it hadn’t come from any pricelessly old documents, or any primary sources, Faust forbid. That’s when she noticed a warm light fluttering across the paper. There was a stool standing next to the burner, and on the stool was a candle and an open book, and the candle was lit. Twilight gasped. ‘Hello?’ she called out, ‘is somepony there?’ Something vibrated. Twilight raised a hoof as she looked around the room. It seemed no worse for wear. A rumble now. She backed away from the burner. The items on the shelves started to move. Pillars of dust slipped from the ceiling and candelabras wobbled from side to side. A couple of books fell from their bookcases and crates tumbled off one another. Twilight made for the centre of the room as it began shaking. Her back hoof jolted upwards as a box was thrown from atop a shelf behind her, splintering against the floor. Then the shaking weakened. Then it stopped. 'Sweet Celestia...’ Twilight placed a hoof on her forehead. 'Maybe this place really did get hit by an earthquake.' How had she been searching this long without seeing anypony? Just how large was this place? The cold nipped through her coat, so she sat down with a huff, taking the fallen box, tossing the pieces in the burner and lighting them. ‘This is hopeless,’ she sighed. ‘I have no clue where I’m going, and that’s if I’m going anywhere... I clearly can’t keep wandering these tunnels. Think... c’mon, Twilight, think.’ Her tail swished excitedly as she did exactly that. This place is huge, she thought, looking about. It must be a castle. Judging by the age of the stone in those hallways... medieval era? ‘Because that narrows it down,’ she said aloud. She glanced at the candle's bronze base, gilded by the fire’s glow. Alright... the windows indicate I’m not underground, but I’ve seen no beds, chairs or bathrooms anywhere, so this is probably a storage area. The living quarters must be somewhere else. Above me, probably... that’s it. ‘That’s it!’ She sat up with a proud smirk, warmed and determined. ‘Now to find a way to the upper floors...’ Yet more bookshelves were filled with bottles, books and papers in the next room. Some saddlebags leaned against a desk across from the door, on which was another lit candle, and scientific equipment any sorcerer might have recognised. ‘A laboratory of some sort? With contemporary equipment! At least I know somepony still lives here.’ The papers and documents sat collecting dust. Some were so old Twilight could barely make out words. She took one that looked semi-intelligible. ‘On hiring guards,’ it read, ‘visiting the nearby townships yielded little results. I decided to look to the cities, Canterlot first, and thankfully the castle didn’t fall apart while I was gone.’ Some sort of diary entry? Twilight wondered as she rubbed her chin with a hoof. She skipped ahead - while she certainly wasn’t comfortable poking about somepony else’s home, their diary might at least tell her where she was. 'She seemed to restrain herself from squabbling as we sat down and spoke over a glass of Manehatten white – fine vintage, perhaps from her own stores of wine.' The hoof-writing was elegant. Hope I didn’t pass out in some noblepony’s castle... I wonder who he’s talking about? 'She of course mentioned the experiments and made certain to remind me of the reassurances I'd made, which I had to give more of to change the subject.' Twilight raised an eyebrow and straightened the paper. 'Nevertheless, she was kind enough to give me information regarding a stallion who once served as a commander within her royal guard; a captain by the name of Bronze Valour, with a handful of loyal lieutenants. She even referred me to a tailor, some friend of a friend (I forget the name) who'd help me restore some of my garb. I suspect she wants to see more of me. A change in me at least. My work can’t afford the Canterlot elite poking around.' She frowned when she found no signature or date, only a large smudge of ink. He wasn't talking about Princess Celestia, was he? She turned, and the torchlight flickered in mahogany swirls, colouring a pile of scrunched up paper on the desk. She unfolded the one closest to her; its writer had stopped halfway through, scribbling out the words. The second closest was scribbled out as well. Then the third. Then the fourth. The fifth, the sixth, until Twilight gave up. 'For Faust's sake,' she groaned, rubbing the side of her head. The scribble pattern is jarring. Whoever wrote these got frustrated... frantic, in fact. She squinted at the ink. The quill had been dug deep, and the words were clearly penned with great effort. It looked like her own hoof-writing when she was a filly. As she turned away, she stepped on something, and eased the saddlebags aside. Lying below the desk in another pink puddle was a small flask, and one more note. She didn’t need to smell the container to know it was the scent’s source. The note wasn't dated, but it was fully written at least. 'You're likely wondering where you are. It's fading so quickly. I don't have enough time.' ‘Don't be afraid, Twilight.’ Twilight blinked. ‘Is this addressed to me?’ ‘I can’t keep going. I HAVE to forget. This did not happen to you without reason, I promise. I hope you can understand.' She looked down at the puddle. 'An amnesia mixture...’ 'The castle you're in is Brennenburg. I don't remember what distance it is from Ponyville but it's north, or north-east. I don't know. It's in the Everfree forest'. Twilight frowned. That didn't make things any easier. 'The baron is Alexander. Avoid him and avoid his servants. Don't trust him if he finds you, don’t trust him no matter what and don't listen to a single word he says. He’s a monster!' Alexander of Brennenburg... odd name for an Equestrian baron, she thought. It lingered in her mind as if she’d dreamt it, although she could have sworn she’d never heard it before. Furthermore, it wasn’t lost on her that she’d found a note written by a pony who had, or was in the process of, forgetting everything. She dismissed it as convenience, but then why had the note mentioned her name? Dread twinged in her stomach; her idle mind had manifested a troubling notion. She took in a shallow breath through her muzzle, glancing down at the bottle, then read on. 'You'll laugh at this, if it’s all gone. I would.' 'Don't say that!’ 'There’s a Shadow. It’s been following me, which means it’s going to follow you, it probably is already. I don't know what it is or where it comes from, but it’s a living nightmare and you can’t fight it or outsmart it so just run! It sounds insane but trust me and run! I BEG you!' A relieved sigh escaped her. Now she was sure the note's author was insane. Shadows follow ponies all the time, she thought to herself, though something was off about how they had written the word. 'Shadow' - capitalised, like a name. 'There's only one pony who can help you; an earth pony with a caramel coat and a brown mane. His name is Savvy Venture.’ ‘Savvy Venture. Savvy... why do I recognise that?’ she said, and the relief was gone. ‘Th-That’s enough,’ but she couldn’t bring herself to put the note down. She couldn’t resist now. ‘You have to find him. When you do, look after him. Find him and get yourself home.’ ‘Your former self, Twilight Sparkle.' Now she put down the note. It couldn’t be true, of course. It was absurd... but then, the hoof-writing did look like hers. Your former self... no, she thought. ‘No, it can’t be... I-I hate writing by hoof! I only write by hoof when-’ When she had migraines. The sickness in her stomach chased her focus away. That scent she’d been following, the one she found on her lips... she dropped the torch and swiped everything from the desk, yanking every beaker, vial and burner toward herself. One of the beakers was still wet, and it carried the same scent. Twilight covered her snout, but she could still smell it. No matter where she turned the fumes of the amnesia mixture filled her nostrils. She snatched the paper back and looked for something out of place, something falsifiable. But Twilight had written the note. Twilight had written the note and addressed it to herself. Twilight had written the note and addressed it to herself before wiping her own memory. Panic clenched her chest and sent a shrill gasp down her throat. ‘N-No,’ she whimpered, losing control of her breathing, ‘no no no no no no no!’ She covered her eyes and sucked in and out and in and out before trembling to hold in a breath. She released it slowly, shuddering as she took air through her nose - in through the nose, out through the mouth, just like before. 'Y-You're-’ she gulped, ‘you’re f-fine, Twilight. You’re fine, you’re fine, you’re gonna be fine.’ Twilight didn’t keep track of how long she sat there; it was as if there was nothing in the world besides that note. Was this some bizarre experiment?... No, she’d never do this to herself, nor agree to it were it somepony else’s idea. ‘A-Alright,’ she said once she’d regained control, ‘what do you know, Twilight? Just f-focus on what you know.’ Still being lost was the obvious place to start, but Twilight brought her previous plan to the forefront of her mind – she needed to get to the upper floors. There she’d be more likely to bump into somepony. More importantly she could find the entrance. The note had mentioned the Everfree, but she’d take her chances if home was a canter’s distance from the castle. With things thought through, she rolled gently onto all-fours, taking a moment to regain her composure. Her horn was in anguish when she raised the torch, so she slipped on the saddlebags in case she came across anything useful. The bookshelf left of the desk was side-on to the wall, and when Twilight went behind it, she found a square opening that led to an ornate door, and a simple wooden lever next to that. She trotted over to it and smelled the clammy odor from before. Somepony had gone through there. Of what she’d read, Twilight stuffed what seemed most useful to her in one saddlebag and returned to the opening but, for some reason, she turned back to the note sitting on the desk. She couldn’t fathom what must have happened for her to write those things; after all, there was no use denying she had written them. That said, the plan hadn’t changed, and she was certainly content to ignore it, but when she went to leave the note, she found herself stopping. What was this ‘Shadow’ she’d complained about? What had the baron done to anger her? To make her so scared of him? Who was this ‘Savvy Venture’ and why did Twilight recognise his name? Twilight had always made a point of being, as she put it, ‘reliably rational’ no matter what, and she was good at it too. Thus, the pony she trusted most in the world happened to be herself (as well as Spike, the Princess, Applejack – her friends were a close, collective second.) Maybe that’s why she couldn’t abandon the note... perhaps it was worth holding onto, at the very least. She picked it up. I’ll think about all that when I’m home, she thought.
Achilles
550686
3
Twilight Sparkle,Crossover,Dark,Horror,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Amnesia: Twilight's Descent
When Twilight wakes up in a room she didn't recognise, with no memory of where she was or how she got there, she steps out into the darkness in search of answers. Her dark descent has begun.
incomplete
9
1
<p>When Twilight wakes up in a room she doesn't recognise, totally clueless as to where she is or how she got there, the first thing on her mind is <i>answers</i>. She has no way of knowing, when she takes her first step into the darkness, what horrors await her in the bowels of Brennenburg Castle. Her dark descent has begun.</p>
mature
2024-02-10T23:41:41+00:00
2024-02-10T23:41:40+00:00
34
Twilight's hoofsteps reverberated around what sounded like a much bigger room ahead, and she sped up. ‘Finally out of those tunnels,’ she sighed. Lonely windows sat on tall walls, illuminating a large hall with frigid complexion. Dust coated more heraldry that Twilight didn’t recognise, though a collapsed pillar and staircase didn't surprise her. A giant symbol was the hall’s stone centre, yet again unknown to her, cluttered with bricks from the ceiling above. She trotted inside and spotted a tall archway to her left, and a hallway beyond that with a towering wooden door at the end. That has to be the entrance, she thought. She made for the door and looked around; Twilight couldn’t help searching for details that would date the architecture, if only to keep something simple on her mind. There were bookcases taller than most of the trees in Sweet Apple Acres, and similarly sized windows across from them. No doubt the castle had seen renovations, but she’d come across very few details she recognised from her textbooks. The door’s design was the strangest thing, but Twilight slowed as she approached, realising that whatever she was looking at wasn't by design at all. She scowled, wafting a putrid stench from her snout; a stench like rot that burned her nostrils, and carried the smell of some undiscernible substance or chemical. The door was spattered in something organic. It was glistening, crimson and warm to the touch – for Twilight of course touched it, her curiosity getting the better of her - yet it felt bone-dry. It was tough as leather when she tried to heave it out of the way but, despite not budging, it slowly and perceptively writhed under her hoof. When Twilight went to grasp it with a spell, an immense pain shot through her hooves, her shoulders, her chest, almost her whole body. ‘O-Ow-w-ww!’ she yelped as she stumbled onto her rump, lifting her hooves, but whatever had happened to them hadn’t left a mark. ‘What in Equestria?!' Some sort of mold? the unicorn thought, taking a moment to catch her breath. It felt as though she’d been struck by a crop cart! No, what mold looks like that? Let alone fights back?! She stood up and picked up the torch, wondering if she could burn it, but the flame had weakened since she found it, and she didn’t fancy losing its light. Any spells stronger than her would pound her head like a drum, too. She didn’t like to anthropomorphise, but whatever was covering the door seemed keen to keep her inside. ‘What now,’ she sighed. ‘There has to be another way into a castle this size... which means there’s probably some archives, too. Maybe I can find a map or some sort of floor plan.’ With a huff, she trotted back the way she came. Questions chased away her focus. How easy it would be to identify whatever was covering the door if she were home. A jaunt through the library and she’d have her answer. Ponyville came to mind after that, along with how worried everypony must have been about her, how long it might have been since she saw them, and them her. The thought reminded her, and she looked over her shoulder at one of her saddlebags. The note she’d written hadn’t mentioned her friends. ‘N-No, Twilight,’ she said, ‘think about that when you’re out of here... but then, where would I start?' Did she talk to anypony about what happened? Had she written about it in her diary, maybe? Again nagged the tiresome, pressing question of why she’d drank that infernal mixture. If things were truly as bad as they must have been for her to put those alarming things in writing, for her to wipe her memory, perhaps it was just a matter of time before her friends came looking for her, before Spike did – that thought Twilight decided to avoid. Some of the doorways in the Entrance Hall had writing above them, and Twilight clambered over some rubble to read 'Cella Vinaria'. ‘Olde Ponish... "wine cellar”,’ she deciphered, climbing a nearby staircase and coming across a door with 'Tabularium' engraved above it. ‘Archives!’ she chirped, smiling victoriously – a smile that came from that part of her that bubbled up with a solved puzzle, or when the mysteries in her detective books were unraveled. One hoof on the door and it creaked into the hallway behind it which, despite being the best decorated Twilight had seen the castle, was clearly in disrepair; faded paint, aged wood and plaster, and a door torn clean off its hinges. Something in the dust beside it caught her eye, and Twilight squinted at a set of hoofprints. They were large, a stallion's it seemed, and their shapes were clear as day, so the prints were fresh. Is somepony in here with me? Maybe it’s whoever was in those tunnels. Her note had mentioned ‘servants’, but these prints were odd. They were deep, like the pony in question put more weight than necessary on his hoof, and the stride pattern was bizarre, with each step oddly close to the last. The hoofprints were all the same size, too, even though the rear hooves were usually larger. She pried her eyes from the prints and pressed on, translating signs that hung outside the doors on either wall. ‘”Rare Books”, “Catalogues”...’ At one point she felt a draft, which she followed to a large corridor with a pair of arched windows, and a hole in its roof with water trickling inside. Twilight trotted over to the windows, sighing when she found a sheer drop beneath both, and shook her head. Dusk was falling, so, she decided to sit down and watch. Princess Celestia’s sun blazed below the horizon, while Princess Luna’s moon loomed like a white galley sailing cloudy seas. Rain fell, and pines twisted in a breeze that gently rattled the window. Twilight thought of a hill in Ponyville where she’d often had picnics at sunset; muffins with Pinkie, sourdough bread and apple tarts with Applejack and, though she’d never tell anypony, her favourites were with Fluttershy. The pegasus would often close her eyes, perhaps embracing the nature around her. A few picnics ago Twilight had begun trying to do the same, focusing on birds whistling, or rustling trees, the breeze in her mane, the sun warming her coat. Just the two of them, relaxed, sitting in comfortable silence with one another. Twilight smiled sadly. The corridor ended with a wall of debris that had collapsed through a doorway. She paused for a moment, raising an eyebrow at something. I should... go back and search more thoroughly. Can’t have come here for nothing. Her ears shot upwards. ‘Hello?’ she called out, holding out her torch. She’d heard something ahead, low and guttural, followed by some fading hoofsteps, then a loud thud. 'Hey!’ she yelled, cantering towards the sounds, ‘hey, wait!’ Looking down she spotted more prints, now damp with sweat, but ended up back where she came from with nopony around. 'Come back, please! I-I'm lost! I don’t know how I got here and I need help! Please!’ Twilight’s ears drooped, having heard no response. She hoped she wasn’t somewhere the common tongue wasn’t spoken. While the baron’s letter was written in it, perhaps the same couldn’t be said of his servants. Even so, there’s no way they didn’t hear her shouting. Why had they just wandered off? Maybe... something else made the sound? she thought, her eyes drifting to the nearest room. There was little else but furniture and shelves of antique vases and artefacts inside, nothing that would have caused such a sound. Whoever had gotten her attention must have shifted it to escape her, though everything seemed exactly how it was on her way in. Hopefully she wasn’t hearing things, but she swore she’d heard something behind that rubble, too... Her eyes fell on the damaged door, covered in dents and scratches. It wasn't until Twilight held her torch closer that she discovered three long, curved marks carved into the wood. She frowned; if an animal capable of leaving such marks had gotten into the castle, perhaps it truly was abandoned. The marks continued across the wall, however, tearing toward the entrance in a manner a tad tidy for most animals, and she knew of no local beast whose call resembled the odd noise she’d just heard. She swallowed, carefully stepping around the door and entering the room, where she finally spotted a map laid out across a desk. Twilight hastened to it, shoving aside a nearby chair and blowing dust from the paper. Somehow the castle looked larger than she imagined, but there were indeed other halls that looked large enough to serve as entrance chambers. That said, there was a wider map in the corner where she could see the Everfree forest, but no Ponyville. ‘Don’t tell me you’re outdated!' she yelled, for an outdated map meant certain areas might have been removed. Judging by that shaking earlier, they may have collapsed. At least I’m not far from home, she thought. The room was filled with stacks of paper and scrolled documents, and a note beside the map. The assorted parchments varied enough in age for Twilight to gather that the Archives had been used for centuries. She took some larger scrolls and opened them, finding more maps of the castle, of Equestria, of the local area and nearby regions. Her eyes glazed over the note on the desk initially, but then felt an odd familiarity toward the words. She raised an eyebrow, picking it up. '10th of May. Dear Princess Celestia, As per your last letter, preparations are going just fine, if somewhat tiring. I took your advice and decided not to do them alone this year, but Pinkie seems determined to make this “the best birthday he’s ever had!”.' Twilight perked up. ‘Did I write this too?' 'Truthfully, I'd be at a loss without her, and I’m certain Spike will enjoy what she has planned. I'd like to mention something else, though. I overhead some talk in the market today and yesterday – Lily Valley went missing at the weekend and still hasn’t come back. Now I’ve seen a missing poster of Starsong, too. Everypony knows everypony here, and I can’t imagine either of them would disappear without telling anypony where they’re going.’ Ponyville’s lush meadows were prime real estate for florists like Lily Valley, and Starsong was holding down a stable job at the weather factory last they talked. Twilight frowned, hoping the pair weren’t in any danger. Lily was kind and gentle, and while Starsong had a temper she could be remarkably sweet. ‘It’s starting to bother ponies, Spike especially. I appreciate I’ve been paranoid about things in the past but maybe you could send some royal guards? Have them search the Everfree? Things like this don’t happen in Ponyville, and we don’t have a village watch. I'll be on the lookout for anything strange. I just hope all this campfire ghost-story stuff doesn't get to him. Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle' Twilight grinned. The note was written by her. 'If this is here, maybe there’s more! Maybe I can piece together what-’ Something growled. She spun around, eyes wide, and backed into the wall. Hoofsteps now, loud and heavy. Twilight dropped the torch with a gasp and it clattered against the floorboards. Another growl came from outside, lower-pitched and accusatory. Her eyes darted about and she made for the nearest shelves, shuffling underneath them. The wood squeaked and rattled. A hoof came into view, muscular and pale, then a second, but those two only. Twilight held her breath, her back pressing against the bottom shelf. The stranger waddled into the room and approached her torch, an awful rubbing sound accompanying each step. He stood over it and kicked at it, his breaths phlegmy and laboured. Droplets of sweat rolled off her face and onto the floor with tiny splats. Twilight steadied her hooves and covered her snout. A minute or so passed before the stranger turned and waddled from the room, garbling something Twilight couldn’t understand. She waited for the hoofsteps to fade, waited to hear the doors to the Archives open and close. She waited longer after that, staring at where the stallion had stood. When she was convinced she was alone, she took some deep breaths and started inching her way out from under the shelves, which shifted about above her until she heard a wooden cracking sound and looked up. THUMP. The pain wiped her senses. Her knees buckled, her world turned on its side, and she felt the cold and dust against her cheek as darkness ate away her vision. She scampered to the corner. She couldn’t escape the smell. The soldiers' coughed, hacked, and the sight of wine, phlegm and whatever else they’d vomited churned her stomach. The lieutenant bashed on the door with his hooves, his eyes glistening with tears as she covered her own. The captain wasn’t doing anything and most of his stallions lay struggling about him; the ground was red with them. What could she do but cry? This couldn’t be the end! Was this the end?! What in Faust’s name would everypony think if she never came home?! What about Sweetie Belle? She’d never forgive her. Perhaps she’d even come looking! She scrunched her muzzle into her hooves. A retch came from the lieutenant and took his voice, blood sloshed through his teeth. She gagged. He exploded against the door, screaming breathless screams, eyes wide with desperate lunacy, pounding and pounding until she heard his bones cracking. When the lock finally broke something audibly burst and gurgled up his throat, but she ignored her churning stomach. The door was open! She ran away - of course she ran - squealing as the lieutenant grabbed her hoof and she kicked him away, leaving him clawing at his throat with mangled hooves. She looked over her shoulder and her tears blurred the captain. He didn’t move. He didn’t even look.
Mockingbirb
550689
1
Main 6,Twilight Sparkle,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Equestria Girls,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Sex
It's Not What You Think It Is! (The Secret in Twilight Sparkle's Pants)
When Twilight Sparkle returns from visiting the human world, she insists on wearing trousers. For some reason.
complete
88
10
<div class="bbcode-center" style="text-align:center"><p>When Twilight Sparkle returns from visiting the human world, she insists on wearing trousers. For some reason.</p><p>Spoiler: <span class="spoiler">This is probably a shitfic.</span></p><hr/><p><sub>Cover image credit: S. coaxed computer software to make this (probably Pony Diffusion.)</sub></p></div>
teen
2024-02-02T06:09:27+00:00
2024-02-06T22:15:43+00:00
1,039
When Rarity encountered her friend in Ponyville's morning market, the fashionista stared. "Twilight?" "Yes, it's me!" the princess agreed with a cheerful smile. "Who did you think it was?" "You...seem have a new look." "Oh?" the princess said. "Oh! I suppose you mean my new trousers." "Yes," Rarity agreed. She stepped sideways, to let another shopper pass. "I mean the trousers." "It turns out," Twilight explained, "that if I buy a pair of trousers in the human world, and put them on before I come back through the Mirror Portal to Equestria, I get to keep a pair of trousers that fit me as a pony! Isn't that interesting?" Rarity said faintly, "Certainly. I...never even knew you wanted trousers." "Oh, I'm just wearing them because of the other thing I came back with from the human world." "The other thing...?" Rarity's practiced eye studied the cut and fit of Twilight's garment. Was there a...bulge? And not where Rarity would normally expect a bulge, either. "The other thing!" Twilight agreed sunnily. The princess whispered, "I don't want to show it to everypony, though. At least not yet. I think ponies might...react strangely, if they see it without expecting it. I want ponies to be properly prepared first." Rarity pulled Twilight aside, apart from other ponies. "Twilight? Just how much preparation do you think ponies will need?" "Oh, I'm sure a calm and fashion-forward pony like yourself will have no trouble accepting it at all. But some ponies...anything new bothers them. Disturbs them, even." Rarity puzzled over this explanation that was hardly an explanation at all. She looked away from Twilight, as she pondered just how to ask for specifics. When Rarity looked back, Twilight was gone. *** Fluttershy was outside her cottage, feeding birds, when Twilight Sparkle arrived. "Hello, Twilight." "Hi, Fluttershy. I'm having a special gathering at the castle this evening for my five best friends, no other ponies invited." Fluttershy blinked. "You're wearing pants." "It just seems more convenient to dress this way," Twilight said, "considering what happened when I visited the human world. It's so very interesting!" "It is?" "Yes, it certainly is! It's the most exciting thing that's happened to me in months!" "It is?" Fluttershy said, hoping Twilight would elaborate. "Yes! It's so much fun! I wish I could have had one before. But the only way I know to get one of these is to go through the Mirror Portal." "What did you get?" "I'll have to show you this evening. You'll be there, won't you? Pretty please?" "Um...certainly I will. I mean, if you think it's a good idea for me to see it." Twilight hugged Fluttershy. "I think you'll get a lot of use out of it. See you at sundown!" The princess released Fluttershy, and trotted away towards central Ponyville. "Huh," Fluttershy said. "It's such nice weather. Why would Twilight be wearing clothes?" *** "Rainbow!" Twilight shouted up at the pegasus' cloudominium. "What?" a sleepy-sounding voice shouted back down. "Come to my castle at sundown! I'm having a party and it's going to be awesome!" "Um...sure. Whatever." "See you there!" *** In Sugarcube Corner Bakery, Twilight leaned on the counter as Pinkie stirred dough behind it. "When I visited the human world, I came back with something really fun! I want you to see it this evening." Pinkie said, "What kind of fun?" "Well...it's kind of hard to explain, unless you see it for yourself. I'm inviting you and my other five best friends to the castle for a little get-together, so I can explain it properly and show it off. I'll even let you all play with it, if you want to!" "It's something you can play with?" Pinkie asked. "Sure! You can play lots of different fun games with it." "Well...if you can use it to play party games..." "Yes," Twilight said, "if you all take turns. I don't think all five of you could play with it at once. I mean, it's not THAT big. Anyway, see you at sundown!" "Sure! See you then!" *** A small dragon walked through an orchard, taking a shortcut through Apple Acres to the Apple Family's farmhouse. He rapped on the door with his knuckles. A moment later, the door opened. "Morning, Spike!" a grinning earth pony mare said. "What brings you out so early?" Spike held out an envelope, sealed with a hoofprint sticker. "Twilight asked me to bring you this. She's delivering the other invitations herself." Applejack started to tear the envelope open with a hoof and her teeth. She released her mouthgrip. "Is this...private? Ah mean, can Ah read it in front of you? Also, should Ah send a reply back with you?" Spike shrugged. "She told me she's only inviting you and the other five Bearers, so I guess maybe it's a private party, in a way. But you can read the letter in front of me. I already know all about it." Applejack finished tearing the envelope open, and read the note inside. "Today at sundown, eh?" She did a bit of mental calculation. "Ah reckon Ah can get all my farm chores done in time. Tell her Ah'll be there." "She'll be glad to hear it. I mean, she's SO excited to show you girls. Well, I've got to hurry. Twilight needs help catching up on the government work she wasn't doing while she was on the other side of the Mirror Portal." Spike turned around and started trudging back towards Ponyville. Applejack went back inside, closing the door. But a moment later the door reopened, and the farmpony looked outside, towards the direction he'd gone. "To show us what?" she wondered. A moment later, she said, "Ah'm sure we'll find out when the time comes." The door closed again, and Applejack returned to her morning routine. *** That evening, five ponies gathered in the castle's Cutie Map room. The Cutie Map was serving as a table, half covered with various snacks Spike had made. Pinkie looked around suspiciously, peeking under the table and behind chairs. "Wheeeerrrrre's Spike?" she inquired. Twilight shrugged. "Spike's already seen it. He's off playing a bit of O&O with Big Mac and Discord." "Twilight?" Fluttershy asked. "I don't want to be nosy...but why have you been wearing clothes every time I've seen you today?" Twilight shrugged. "I think it's easier if I keep it in my pants. The fabric helps keep it properly protected. I wouldn't want it to get scratched." Fluttershy nodded, shyly trying to sneak inconspicuous glances at Twilight's crotch. "Or broken," Twilight added. "What?" Rarity gasped. "Just WHAT do you think would HAPPEN to it? I mean..." She paused. "Do you really think..." Twilight smiled. "Let me show you! Oh, we're going to have so much fun with it! I think each of you is going to really enjoy this, each in your own way!" A magical glow surrounded Twilight's horn. She grunted slightly. "Sorry, it's kind of a tight fit." She grunted again, followed by the sound of ripping fabric. "Oops," Twilight winced. "But at least I can show you now." A rectangular object, just a little larger than a hoofprint, floated out from behind Twilight and landed on the table. "It's my new cellphone!" Twilight announced. "In the human world these are used as communication tools. But even here, where we don't have a mobile network, or at least we don't have one yet, this is STILL a powerful computing device and general information appliance that fits in a trouser pocket!" "Oh!" Rarity said. "THAT'S why you've been wearing trousers." "Naturally. I suppose I could carry my new phone in a pair of saddlebags, but that seems like a lot of luggage to hold just the one thing." Pinkie eyed the new device. "Wowzers! So what all can you do with it?" "Let me show you some of the apps," Twilight said. *** It wasn't until an hour later that Rainbow Dash asked to borrow a ruler, and measured the device in each and every direction. "Huh," she said. "It's smaller than most of us expected." "What?" Twilight asked. "Nothing. I guess it really CAN fit in a pants pocket." *** It wasn't until the next day, when all five party guests met discreetly at Rarity's dress shop, that they settled up on the 'guess how big Twilight's new thingy is' betting pool. As it happened, most of the mares had picked VERY high numbers, so Pinkie had won with the giggling guess she'd made the previous afternoon: "I don't think Twilight even HAS a penis! I guess zero!"
Vivkatmag
550696
1
Maud Pie,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Trixie,Zecora,Alternate Universe,Adventure,Drama,Romance,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Narcotics,Profanity,Sex,Violence
Tide and Effect
When Trixie packs up her things and decides to get a brand new start in Ponyville, she feels as though the night sky is watching over her. She's not the only one, and when she meets the others, everything she knows will change.
incomplete
-1
-1
<p>Trixie always feels like she's swimming upstream, what with money problems, family problems, alcohol problems, and whatever her <i>problem</i> is. For her kindness is scarce and support, even scarcer. As such she's been in survival mode for most of her life, which doesn't exactly translate to being kind or caring, or going out of her way to help others. She just wishes the world would change <i>for</i> her.</p><p>Starlight has always felt as though she were deep underwater, having been teased and disparaged all her life for being a blank flank well into adulthood. She doesn't see what's so wrong with being a blank flank, and why everypony is so mean about it all the time. When she finally gets her cutie mark she's astonished to find that Making Ponies Equal is her special talent, which kind of sucks the excitement out of the whole thing. Especially because now she has work to do.</p><p>Luna has had a lot of time to think, being stuck on the moon and all. She's seen Celestia's plans with Twilight and her friends, but she doesn't have high hopes. Her hopes lie with Starlight, Trixie and the select few other ponies who can truly understand the world as viewed from the outside. The same fatal magnetism that governs the Elements of Harmony govern Luna's chosen subjects, and when the time comes for them to meet, much <i>much</i> more than the tide will change.</p>
mature
2024-02-02T07:21:18+00:00
2024-02-02T07:21:28+00:00
67
Trixie hung her head low as she nervously walked up to the door through the rain. The clanging of the heavy raindrops on the metal roof rang through her ears as she slipped up the cold stone steps. She held her breath, hesitating to knock on the door with her hoof. “Bless this Home” read the ornate sign on the front, the price sticker stubbornly still clinging to its edge. 4 bits worth of plastic blessing the place with the most gracious definition of “home” ever conceived. Trixie closed her eyes and knocked quickly and loudly, exhaling to release the tension in her chest. She pondered on whether or not he’d recognize her with the hood. Whether or not he’d seen her name on the road. Whether or not he’s proud. She decided to leave it on. Here she was the Meek and Powerless Trixie. Her ears perked up at the sound of a stallion's voice from the other side. “Tell Gladmane I’ll pay him what he needs tomorrow, I just need more time!” he yelled through the door. Trixie stood frozen, unsure of what to say, or even if she should say anything. She felt the door warm up as the stallion’s presence filled the doorway and he looked through the peephole. The doorknob glowed a brilliant blue as the unicorn feverishly undid several locks before flinging the door open, almost hitting Trixie in the face. She jumped back and lied prone, staring up at him. His eyes met hers. Recognition and disappointment filled them. “Oh. It's you.” he said haphazardly as Trixie quickly hid her face to look down at the pavement. The lines in his face had gotten deeper, his hair thinning, tired eyes more cynical. Trixie’s heart sank to her core as her stomach did a flip, the silence in the air deafening as she basically groveled. The stallions’ voice came soft as butter, like a wolf cooing a lamb. “Now son… what did I say about coming back here?” he said with such venom Trixie was sure she had been cut by it. The mare shook, closing her eyes and sobbing silently, her tears mixing with the rain. “That's right...” he said, smiling smugly to himself, pleased with the power he held. “Now quit wasting my time.” He turned and moved to shut the door behind him, yet stopped for a moment. His acute hearing caught onto Trixie’s weak sobbing whisper of an apology. “..Sorry dad.” she said, no louder than a raindrop. Like a cat finally pouncing, Jack Pot raised himself as high as possible as he chased Trixie down the stone steps, causing her to slip and tumble backwards. “Get off my property” he growled, storming back inside and slamming the door shut behind him, loud enough to rattle Trixie’s very soul. Trixie continued sobbing as she lay on the concrete, the rain washing over her, soaking her clothes to the bone. For a moment, she felt like the lowest scum in the world. She looked up into the overcast night, the gray clouds cloaking her in emptiness. She squinted and made out the faint outline of the moon, dimly attempting to shine through the heavy clouds. Her sobs stopped as the tears and snot washed away into the gutters, the hair on her back standing up as she gazed into the night sky. “... Princess?” She muttered.
Vivkatmag
550696
2
Maud Pie,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Trixie,Zecora,Alternate Universe,Adventure,Drama,Romance,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Narcotics,Profanity,Sex,Violence
Tide and Effect
When Trixie packs up her things and decides to get a brand new start in Ponyville, she feels as though the night sky is watching over her. She's not the only one, and when she meets the others, everything she knows will change.
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<p>Trixie always feels like she's swimming upstream, what with money problems, family problems, alcohol problems, and whatever her <i>problem</i> is. For her kindness is scarce and support, even scarcer. As such she's been in survival mode for most of her life, which doesn't exactly translate to being kind or caring, or going out of her way to help others. She just wishes the world would change <i>for</i> her.</p><p>Starlight has always felt as though she were deep underwater, having been teased and disparaged all her life for being a blank flank well into adulthood. She doesn't see what's so wrong with being a blank flank, and why everypony is so mean about it all the time. When she finally gets her cutie mark she's astonished to find that Making Ponies Equal is her special talent, which kind of sucks the excitement out of the whole thing. Especially because now she has work to do.</p><p>Luna has had a lot of time to think, being stuck on the moon and all. She's seen Celestia's plans with Twilight and her friends, but she doesn't have high hopes. Her hopes lie with Starlight, Trixie and the select few other ponies who can truly understand the world as viewed from the outside. The same fatal magnetism that governs the Elements of Harmony govern Luna's chosen subjects, and when the time comes for them to meet, much <i>much</i> more than the tide will change.</p>
mature
2024-02-02T07:23:29+00:00
2024-02-02T07:23:29+00:00
58
The frantic banging of hooves on the door rang through the wagon as Trixie awoke suddenly. “Huh!? What?!” she sleepily yelled out, pulling her head off her pillow only to immediately stub her horn on the suitcase she’d placed above her head. “Ow, fuck!” She cried in pain and frustration as she rolled out of her hammock and onto the floor, almost slipping on a stack of crushed-up hard cider cans. She dizzily regained balance as she tried to make her way to the wagon door through the dark, yelling out to stop whoever it was from banging so loudly. “Yeah yeah! I’m coming, just hold your… you. What is it?” She yelled as she opened the wagon’s back window, immediately regretting it as the blindingly bright outdoors made her recoil back into the shade. Through the harsh light, Trixie made out the outline of a pegasus pony with a red mane excitedly holding one of her promotional posters. “Oh, uh, h-hi there! Trixie, the Great and Powerful?” The pegasus said nervously, unsure of how to proceed. The unicorn lazily held her eyes half-shut, trying to ignore her throbbing headache as she smiled smugly. “Mmyes'm, speaking.” She said calmly. “I’m Strawberry Sunrise, Big Fan! It's nice to meet you!” The pegasus giggled excitedly, stomping her hooves and accidentally dropping the poster she was holding. She clumsily then bent down and picked it up with her mouth. “I wrj wrdring if I crd hrv yrr rrtogrph?” She said with the poster in her mouth. Trixie fumbled with a pair of star-shaped sunglasses hanging on a hook near the door, before levitating the poster to herself. “Of course, anything for a big fan!” she said, levitating herself a pen and quill to sign the poster with. Her smile became far more genuine as she looked over her own poster. It was nice to interact with someone who seemed to love her magic as much as she does. “Oh thank goodness, I was worried I’d be too late, but thankfully there wasn’t a line,” Strawberry offhandedly mentioned while Trixie scribbled her signature. “Too late?” Trixie asked. “Yeah, I bought tickets for your show in a couple hours, and I know you tend to be kinda busy after the show so I figured I’d try to catch you before. I’m so glad I did. You’re even more amazing in person!” Strawberry explained. “Wait a couple HOURS?” Trixie said worriedly, she spins around suddenly to see the clock and the calendar, knocking over the inkwell, spilling it all over the poster. The calendar said there was a show at 8:00 PM and right now it was 6:00. Trixie didn’t remember this, but she had stayed up until 5 AM last night drunkenly singing ballads to herself and crying, before proceeding to sleep for another 13 hours. The magician briefly gazed at her hammock as she realized she had been so drunk she pissed herself and hadn’t been able to clean herself up. Her stomach dropped as she realized that rehearsal had been 2 hours ago and it was likely they wouldn’t let her use the stage again after this. She blinked through her fabulous shades as her brain caught back up to the present moment, glancing briefly at Strawberry who was staring at the ground, still waiting patiently for the poster Trixie had just ruined. The unicorn turned to see that the ink had spilled in such a way that almost all the text on the poster was unreadable save for Trixie’s signature. Her improvisation skills came in handy as she gave the poster back to Strawberry, still dripping with Ink, while she worked out a clever way to spin it. “Well, I spilled some ink, but, my signature is on there, plus it’s one of a kind. Keep it in mint condition and you could sell it for a ton of money in a decade or so,” Trixie said smartly. “...Anyways, thanks for stopping by, I’m a little late and I’ve got-to-go.” Trixie then slammed the window shut in the pegasus’ face, slumping against the wall as she began to hyperventilate, wondering how on earth she was going to get ready for the performance in less than two hours. After a shower and a shave Trixie was off like a bolt through the streets of Applewood, donning her shades and earmuffs to counteract the throbbing headache. She got a few awkward stares on the way backstage almost 3 hours after rehearsal time. There she greeted Amethyst Star, the event organizer. The rattiness of her mane and eye-bags told Trixie that she had been working for almost 7 hours by the time Trixie showed up and she was very, very pissed about it. "Glad you could join us, you're late!" She yelled as Trixie closed the door behind her. "Whatever, obviously I ran into something, sorry to be so inconvenient." Trixie said, speed walking over to the coffee machine as Amethyst hastily stuffed fireworks into a spinning display "You said you would be here early to do a soundcheck and do hair and makeup. I had to do the soundcheck myself and they're already lining up outside and- are you fucking hungover?" Amethyst sputtered angrily. Trixie silently poured herself an overflowing cup of coffee before downing it like a shot as fast as possible. "Well, as they say, the show must go on!" Trixie said confidently, raising her glass to Amethyst, who gave a scowl in response. "You didn't exactly make my life easier with the pizza thing. This isn't how publicity works, oh Great and Punctual." Amethyst said holding up the promotional poster. "...Pizza?" Trixie said absent-mindedly as she studied the poster. At the very bottom was text that read "free piza with admishun." The magician's heart sank even further, she was definitely blackout drunk when she wrote that. "Yeah, pizza, I ordered 7 of them because I wasn't sure of the turnout and honestly I don't think ticket prices are gonna cover it. I hope you've got an extra 100 bits lying around or else you'll be hurting for an organizer when this is over" Amethyst said. Trixie looked around for an excuse, found none and just looked down at the floor. "I'm sorry..." she said. "I don't need 'sorry' I need you. Hair and makeup, now!" Amethyst said, pointing in the direction of the makeup chair. With a 15 bit entrance fee, the turnout was relatively modest even with the free pizza. Trixie had been performing in Applewood for a few years now, getting her start as a street busker and moving her way up. The population of the place meant that for many this was the first Trixie show they'd ever seen. Most of the tricks were basically just rudimentary unicorn magic, but Trixies performance allowed ponies to think they were much more impressive than they were. One unicorn in the audience smiled to herself smartly. She knew how Trixie was doing all these tricks, it was just simple misdirection most of the time. She didn't buy the whole "Great and Powerful" thing. At one point in the show Trixie asked for a volunteer to pick a card. That one was at the very least simple to pull off, either counting cards or stacking the deck. But for a moment the audience was transfixed as Trixie shuffled the deck once again. The music seemed to rumble the whole stage as the lights dimmed in neon pinks and purples. The fog machine shrouded Trixie in mystery, though she was still visible as she "called upon her magic powers" to find the right card. The music swelled as the lights went up and Trixie presented the correct card to the audience to the astonishment of the volunteer. The audience erupted in cheers and applause as Trixie swished her cape dramatically. Even though many of them knew how the trick was done, the spectacle was still astounding. For the big Finale, Trixie lifted up a curtain for the volunteer to hide behind and the fireworks went off as she dropped it to reveal they had disappeared from the stage. The pyrotechnics shot off into the sky with whistles as they spelled out the words Great and Powerful in the night air. Trixie bowed as the curtain closed and the show ended. She then moved to undo the latch on the trapdoor in the stage where she had dropped the volunteer. He nervously stood up as Trixie held out her hoof to help him out with a wink. "The shows over, you did amazing! You're good to go out to the audience now. Thank you for your participation." She said smiling. The stallion dusted himself off as he stepped onstage and through the curtain. "...It was dark and musty in there." He muttered. Trixie then gleefully made her way backstage, utterly fulfilled by a show saved from disaster, only to be greeted by a completely empty room. On the table was a note: "Went for drinks with the tech crew. Turns out I can't cover use of the stage so that's on you too. All I know is management said you need to be out of here by morning and to leave the money here. That means all your shit. Thanks for nothing. See ya never, -Amethyst" Trixie sighed sadly as she realized basically all of the profit she had just made would go to use of the stage and the pizza. In the soft buzzing of the lights, she stood for a moment, longingly staring at the celebratory bottle of champagne they had popped without her.
Vivkatmag
550696
3
Maud Pie,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Trixie,Zecora,Alternate Universe,Adventure,Drama,Romance,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Narcotics,Profanity,Sex,Violence
Tide and Effect
When Trixie packs up her things and decides to get a brand new start in Ponyville, she feels as though the night sky is watching over her. She's not the only one, and when she meets the others, everything she knows will change.
incomplete
-1
-1
<p>Trixie always feels like she's swimming upstream, what with money problems, family problems, alcohol problems, and whatever her <i>problem</i> is. For her kindness is scarce and support, even scarcer. As such she's been in survival mode for most of her life, which doesn't exactly translate to being kind or caring, or going out of her way to help others. She just wishes the world would change <i>for</i> her.</p><p>Starlight has always felt as though she were deep underwater, having been teased and disparaged all her life for being a blank flank well into adulthood. She doesn't see what's so wrong with being a blank flank, and why everypony is so mean about it all the time. When she finally gets her cutie mark she's astonished to find that Making Ponies Equal is her special talent, which kind of sucks the excitement out of the whole thing. Especially because now she has work to do.</p><p>Luna has had a lot of time to think, being stuck on the moon and all. She's seen Celestia's plans with Twilight and her friends, but she doesn't have high hopes. Her hopes lie with Starlight, Trixie and the select few other ponies who can truly understand the world as viewed from the outside. The same fatal magnetism that governs the Elements of Harmony govern Luna's chosen subjects, and when the time comes for them to meet, much <i>much</i> more than the tide will change.</p>
mature
2024-02-02T07:24:24+00:00
2024-02-02T07:25:45+00:00
54
The stallion levitated the sandwich plate above his head as he knocked on his daughter's door. The food was just a kind of entrance fee in order to let him in and let him talk to her. "Starlight? I brought you a snack." He said through the door. The mare sighed as she turned the page, trying to ignore him. After a long pause Firelight spoke again. "I wanted to talk to you about something." He said timidly. Starlight sighed again as she put down the book and allowed her father entrance. The doorknob glowed as it turned gently, the stallion prancing into the room. "It's your favorite, ham and cheese! I figured you haven't eaten anything toda- woah!" Firelight said, interrupted by the scene before him All along Starlight's bed, plastered on the walls and stacked on the floor were books, papers and scrolls messily strewn around the room. "...what's all this?" "Thanks for the sandwich, dad. And this… is everything everypony knows about cutie marks. That I've been able to find" Starlight said. Firelight put the sandwich plate down on the end table as he looked over the mess. "I see you've been giving the Sire Hollow librarians a run for their money." He said exasperatedly. "Listen, I know what you want to talk to me about. I'm an adult. I'm still a blank flank, it's time to move out." Starlight said, putting words in her father's mouth. "...but listen, I've tried magic, I've tried music, I've tried kites, I've tried everything. If there's a way I can get a cutie mark I'm gonna find it." "I mean, that's great but. Honey I think you're obsessing just a bit" Firelight said, Trying to calm his daughter from her seemingly manic, sleep deprived state. "But what if obsessing about cutie marks IS my cutie mark? I don't know and I have no way to know. There's not really a pattern, it seems so random. How is fate random?" The mare said, chewing on her pencil thoughtfully. "Glimmy, when's the last time you went outside, or saw your friend Sunburst? He's at a magic school. I bet you he could tell you about cutie marks. I'm so sorry this is such a problem for you." Firelight said. "I don't wanna talk to Sunburst. Are you just saying that cuz you like his mom? That's gross, dad" Starlight criticized. The stallion blushed and looked away, stuttering half-heartedly. "N-no. I don't like her. Look, the point is you need to get out of the house and connect with other ponies. I mean, no wonder you're not contributing if you're cooped up like this all the time." "Contributing? What do you mean by that? What, just because I'm a blank flank I'm not contributing? I'm an adult, I do the work I need to." Starlight said angrily, her father having struck a nerve. Firelight backed off and sighed to himself. "Listen, just enjoy your sandwich honey. We can talk about this later, I've got to go anyway. Just try to get out of the house today, ok?" He said. Starlight scoffed and went back to reading as her father left. It was true, she hadn't left the house in a while, but that's because she had been reading about cutie marks. All the books she had read referenced an "Anthology of Cutie Mark Magic" in the Canterlot Royal Library. Which seemingly contained far more information about the nature of cutie marks. She pondered the fact that Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns was nearby to the library and realized reconnecting with her friend Sunburst may not be such a bad idea. She then wrote him a letter detailing her plan to meet him there to reconnect, before getting a train ticket up to Canterlot. Firelight was sure to send Starlight off with a platter of freshly-baked teacakes as she got on the train. "Dad, these are bulky and awkward…" Starlight said, as she embarrassedly took the platter from him, looking around to see the other ponies staring at her. "Well then just eat them as soon as you sit down!" Firelight yelled over the sound of the train whistle "I can't eat all of these!" Starlight said, her hoof running over the plastic wrap her dad had put on them to keep the frosting safe. "So then share! Who knows you might even make a friend!" The stallion said, winking as the doors opened. "Fine. I won't be long. I love you dad!" Starlight called out as she got on the train, barely fitting the platter between the narrow doorway. "I love you too chipmunk cheeks! Don't forget to write-" Firelight said as the door closed behind him, muffling him. The train was cramped and hot, tons of ponies stacked on top of each other. There were stops in Appleoosa and Ponyville on the way to Canterlot so Starlight guessed most of them were packed in for those places. She sighed as she made her way to a window seat while the train began to lurch forward. Starlight hoped it would empty out by the first couple stops. Much to her chagrin, an excitable pink unicorn sat down right next to her as she tightly clutched her platter, the train picking up speed. "Woah! Are those Teacakes?" The unicorn said, putting her hair up with a hair tie as she sat down. "They are. Do you want one?" Starlight said politely. "Don't mind if I do, thank you!" The unicorn said, pulling the wrapping back to grab a teacake and eating it whole in one bite. She expressed approval at the taste. "These are good! Did you make these?" She said. "No, they were a gift from my dad." Starlight said, disliking the small talk as the unicorn popped another teacake into her mouth. "Gosh well, tell your dad that he better calm down or I'll be out of a job, hehe!" The unicorn said, blushing. Starlight laughed weakly, more confused by that statement than anything. She pondered it for a moment before her companion extended her hoof in greeting. "Sugar Belle, I'm a baker, it's nice to meet you!" The pink unicorn said. Starlight awkwardly bent her leg to try to meet for a hoof-shake. "Starlight. Starlight Glimmer. I uh.. I read." "Huh. Well that's.. interesting." Sugar Belle said, glancing down at Starlight's blank flank. Starlight ashamedly covered it with her tail, turning towards the window. She sulked in silence for a while. "Hey so where are you headed?" Sugar asked, trying to break the silence with yet more small talk. "I'm headed to Canterlot, to the Royal Library." Starlight said, annoyed. "Oh, wow I've always wanted to go there. I bet if you looked hard enough you could find Meadowbrooks Cookbook. That's at least what I would check out." She said excitedly. Starlight wasn't aware that Mage Meadowbrook had published a cookbook. She smiled. Her dad would like that. "I'm headed to Ponyville for some baking lessons. Gotta get better at it the only way you know how. Practice." Sugar Belle continued. "Oh well, that's good!" Starlight said half-heartedly as she stared out the window. The train turned to have the sun face them as it dipped under the horizon, illuminating the train passengers in golden light. "What are you studying in the Canterlot Library then?" Sugar Belle questioned, unrelenting with the need for conversation. Starlight was exasperated, and really had no more social energy for vague non-answers so she just remained blunt. "Cutie Marks and cutie mark magic. They're a complete mystery to me even though I have been trying to study them." Starlight said. Sugar Belles eyes widened. "Oh that's interesting. I always thought cutie marks were like a name thing. Like my name is Sugar Belle and I just kinda grew up to like baking. Hence my cutie mark" the pink unicorn posited. "...maybe you're destined to work in astronomy or something, Starlight" "Oh so cutie marks are based on Nominative Determinism? I suppose the library does have a telescope…" Starlight said. "Well then again, my teacher Pinkie Pie's Cutie Mark is 3 balloons and that has nothing to do with Pink or a Pie. Plus she's a party planner, not necessarily a baker. I guess that's why you're studying it and not me. I don't really have a clue." Starlight nodded thoughtfully. She had new respect for this baker pony, considering she wasn't being talked down to because she didn't have a cutie mark. She seemed smart and capable and a possible good friend. Sugar Belle then respected Starlight's request for silence by keeping to herself all the way until Appleoosa. When the silence was broken it was Starlight who broke it. "What did you mean when you said you'd be out of a job if my dad gets too good at baking?" She asked. "Oh well, that was mostly a joke. I don't know. It's hard being a baker. There's so many things to keep track of and it always feels like I'm not the best. I bet there are other ponies with baking cutie marks that are much better than me" Sugar Belle said, honest about her feelings of inadequacy. "Do you ever wish you could do something else?" Starlight asked, seeing that she was clearly somewhat unhappy. "I mean sometimes but, I don't really have a choice, do I? It's kinda just baking, baking and more baking." "I think you should have the choice," Starlight said. A tingle ran up Starlight's spine as she said that, a warm radiant feeling surrounding her for a moment, before fading. After that, the two chatted all the way to Ponyville. Sugar Belle said she also lives in Sires Hollow and Starlight should come visit sometime. They talked about cutie marks and their families, things they had in common. Starlight smiled as she realized sharing the Teacakes had allowed her to make a friend. Her dad was right. She waved a warm goodbye to Sugar Belle as she reached Ponyville, and felt a little lonely when she was absent on the ride to Canterlot. Starlight was used to being alone. She didn't feel lonely often. As the train finally arrived in Canterlot, Starlight discarded the platter and made her way towards the Royal Library. She couldn't help but notice the awkward stares of the high society Canterlot ponies as she walked around Couture-less and blank flanked. For a moment she slowed to look at a good-looking suit in the window of a shop, but upon seeing the price tag, moved on, scoffing that the money would be better spent elsewhere. She was too busy nervously obsessing over seeing Sunburst again. When Starlight arrived in the library she was thrilled to find she was early, and therefore could browse books for a while before Sunburst arrived. Her knowledge of magic immediately drew her to the section on Star Swirl the Bearded. As she quietly perused the shelves, she noticed one that had been labeled "A" for Anthologies. Starlight's eyes scanned down the line, utterly awestruck at the sheer number of writings the ancient unicorn had created. The shelves went on for several meters before reaching the B Anthologies. As starlight moved past into the Cs a singular book caught her eye. Nestled between two other Anthologies was a disheveled green book, no longer than a few hundred pages. It contrasted against the brown books surrounding it and seemed to be much shorter and in far more disrepair. Starlight gently levitated the book over to herself. It had been misfiled, but it was exactly what she was looking for. "Anthology of Cutie Mark Magic" Authored by Stygian. Starlight had far less knowledge of Stygian and his works. Her heart sank as she worried the book's quality wasn't up to par with Star Swirl the Bearded. In a way she was right. It seemed like the book had been much less taken care of, the jacket was ripped and the spine was bent so it couldn't rest closed, rather opened automatically. Starlight's eyes widened as she gazed up on the page it had opened to. It was a kind of transfiguration spell that could remove and replace cutie marks. In the notes of the page were descriptions of multiple trials of the spell Stygian had performed on himself and other ponies. Replacement seemingly caused dissatisfaction and depression in ponies, due to the fact they take joy in their original special talents and do not tend to become skilled in the new cutie mark. Removal caused loss of color, life and skill in the special talent. Starlight's hopes fell as she read on through the trials. The ponies who's cutie marks were removed seemed more miserable than they could've been with them. Then at the very bottom of the page, hastily scribbled in red Ink was a note saying the spell with some modifications and adjustments theoretically could turn a cutie marked pony into a normal blank flank. Starlight found herself smiling as her head filled with ideas at the prospect. "Starlight?" Sunburst said suddenly, drawing the mare from her reading frenzy and startling her. "Oh! Sunburst! Hi! It's been a while. Sorry I'm late I just got uh wrapped up in this book, uh" Starlight said, fumbling for words as she abruptly tried to close the book, to no avail. "It's ok. I got your letter. It's been a really long time. Good to see you again. How are things back at Sires Hollow?" The stallion said, trying to calm her. "Oh uh things are great, uh things are fine. How is it going at magic school?" Starlight said, trying to change the subject. Sunburst quickly glanced at Starlight's blank flank before embarrassedly looking down while talking about his own insecurities. "It's… hard. The reading is easy but it's doing the spells that I struggle with. I could tell you how to do most transfiguration spells but, I don't even know if I could do it myself." He said sheepishly. "Really? I always thought you were so good at magic when we were kids." Starlight said, genuinely surprised. "Ugh, you sound like my mom. Apparently prowess early on doesn't translate to skill later in life. Who knew. How is she doing by the way? Mom." He said. "I haven't heard much other than the stuff my dad's told me. He's been talking to her a lot lately. I heard she's doing well. She just misses you and wishes you'd write more or visit more." "I would, I just don't know what I'd tell her other than what I've been telling her. I'm trying my best, I'm just not as good as other ponies." Starlight felt a bitterness growing inside her as Sunburst talked about how supposedly hard he had it. He was the one who got his cutie mark early and left her to try to find one herself. He doesn't know what it's like to be her, what it's like to struggle the way she does. "I'm sorry if you were expecting to talk to some new powerful wizard or something. I know you thought I was going places but you don't know what it's like at magic school." Sunburst said, attempting to voice his feelings as strongly as possible. Starlight's polite facade faded as her frustration boiled over and spilled out her mouth. "Well at least you have a cutie mark. I've been spending years trying to find one, reading everything trying to get one, trying everything I like, everything I'm interested in, to no avail. You don't know what it's like for everypony to think they're better than you and talk down to you just because you're a blank flank. Most ponies stop experiencing that after grade school but not me, it carries over into adulthood and it's relentless!" Starlight said, almost shouting through the library halls, angry tears forming in her eyes. "I do know what it's like. I'm sure I still have the privilege of knowing my cutie mark but that doesn't mean I don't know what it's like to feel like everyponies better than you. I wish I could be better at magic or I wish I could do something else if it means I'd be better at it but I just can't. I don't have a choice, I'm just… a failure." Sunburst said, sobbing to himself. "...I had so much potential and then it just was nothing. Where did it go?" An ethereal almost otherworldly calm fell over Starlight as she wiped her tears. The tingle in her spine and the warm radiant feeling cascaded through her body as she spoke. "You're not a failure and neither am I. Everypony should have a choice and if they don't, something is very wrong. A cutie mark or lack thereof shouldn't define you the way it so often does. I believe that you, me and everypony should just be fundamentally equal." She said with more certainty than she had ever said anything before. Sunburst watched, squinting through his tears as a warm cyan light engulfed his friend, causing the books on the shelves to glisten in the magical glow. He stepped back as Starlight closed her eyes, feeling her body lift into the air as her radiant aura shone through the surrounding shelves. When the light faded she gently fell back to earth and opened her eyes. On her flank was an equals sign. She had finally gotten her cutie mark.
Vivkatmag
550696
4
Maud Pie,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Trixie,Zecora,Alternate Universe,Adventure,Drama,Romance,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Narcotics,Profanity,Sex,Violence
Tide and Effect
When Trixie packs up her things and decides to get a brand new start in Ponyville, she feels as though the night sky is watching over her. She's not the only one, and when she meets the others, everything she knows will change.
incomplete
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<p>Trixie always feels like she's swimming upstream, what with money problems, family problems, alcohol problems, and whatever her <i>problem</i> is. For her kindness is scarce and support, even scarcer. As such she's been in survival mode for most of her life, which doesn't exactly translate to being kind or caring, or going out of her way to help others. She just wishes the world would change <i>for</i> her.</p><p>Starlight has always felt as though she were deep underwater, having been teased and disparaged all her life for being a blank flank well into adulthood. She doesn't see what's so wrong with being a blank flank, and why everypony is so mean about it all the time. When she finally gets her cutie mark she's astonished to find that Making Ponies Equal is her special talent, which kind of sucks the excitement out of the whole thing. Especially because now she has work to do.</p><p>Luna has had a lot of time to think, being stuck on the moon and all. She's seen Celestia's plans with Twilight and her friends, but she doesn't have high hopes. Her hopes lie with Starlight, Trixie and the select few other ponies who can truly understand the world as viewed from the outside. The same fatal magnetism that governs the Elements of Harmony govern Luna's chosen subjects, and when the time comes for them to meet, much <i>much</i> more than the tide will change.</p>
mature
2024-02-02T07:27:03+00:00
2024-02-02T07:27:03+00:00
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Trixie paced back and forth the tiny space in her wagon, making it tilt slightly as she walked from one side to the other and back. She hadn't scheduled any shows in her week-long bender and it was quickly becoming apparent that she was rapidly running out of money. That night she had woken up sober. She spoke aloud to herself as she paced "Ok Trixie, you're in pretty hot water here, no place in Applewood is going to let you use their stage and even if they would you don't have enough money for groceries, let alone another show. Maybe it's time you skip town and start over like you had to do with Las Pegasus." She said to the empty wagon. "Oh but Trixie! Doesn't that show you're just a coward who can't keep to one town because your shows are so bad? If they were good you would make more money and wouldn't have this problem!" Trixie whined, imitating an imaginary Amethyst Star to criticize her. "No! I can reframe it like… like… a…a tour! The Great and Powerful Trixie Show is on tour east through Equestria! Come and see Ms. Direction as she performs feats never seen before by pony-kind in YOUR hometown!" Trixie said, putting on her booming, advertisement voice. "Oh c'mon, everypony can see through your facade. You're just a poser and an alcoholic. Where would you even tour next? Train rides cost money too y'know. Face it. You're fucked." Imaginary Amethyst Star snapped back. "Trixie will perform in Ponyville next, and she will get there for cheap by pulling her wagon. I'm sure the road can't be too hard. And when she gets to Ponyville, she'll pull out all the stops in her first ever show in town to wow the audience and get tons of donations. Trixie will go all in and use every magic prop and firework she has to surely blow the Ponyvillagers away!" Trixie said, only half meaning or believing it. "You're a whacko, no pony is gonna be impressed by that. What are you gonna do when the show goes south? It's a Hail Mary and the odds are not in your favor." Amethyst said, forever doubting the magician. "You don't know what I can do, I could do anything, I am the Grrrreat and Powerful Trixie!!! Ponyville will be astounded! Also who are you calling Whacko, whacko? You're the one talking to yourself!" Trixie shot back. "No, you're talking to yourself!" Amethyst retorted. The wagon fell completely silent as Trixie realized she had spent about the past 5 minutes yelling at her mirror insanely. It was around midnight. She figured it was probably best to head to bed at this point. The night dragged on as she swung in her hammock restlessly. The blindfold gave her no more comfort as the ticking of the clock went on. Only an hour later she removed it to check the time, before sighing in exasperation. "It's ok I guess you don't need to sleep during the night. Isn't the night when there's danger? It's safer to sleep during the day where there's no danger" Trixie said to herself, justifying her actions as she walked out of the wagon and hitched herself up to it, slowly but surely pulling it away from the parking lot she had lived in for the past 6 months. The nighttime breeze felt cool upon her face as she trotted along the road, stopping occasionally to look at a map for direction. The hour train ride looked to be about 10 hours by hoof. It's not like she hadn't done this before. As the monotonous road in front of her faded into the background, Trixie reminisced about her start in Las Pegasus and when she had to leave. The Powerful Trixie started by doing street magic, taking coins from ponies ears, card magic, etc. She was just barely getting by for years as she enthusiastically studied magic, busking almost every night along Las Pegasus' streets. Down the strip were neon signs that bore her father's name, Jack Pot. She even knew the talent agency which hired him, but resisted giving them a call. She knew if her dad became her rival there's no way she would survive. Plus she knew what kind of mafia Gladmane was running in Las Pegasus. Half her life, Trixie's parents had been in debt to him, and when collection day came and you couldn't pay, things got ugly. Once JackPot had properly made a name for himself and started paying off debt, Gladmane and he became business partners. Suddenly Trixies adoring fans were replaced with big tough ponies with trenchcoats who gave her the word to scram off the streets. It wasn't just her but Trixie had a feeling it was her father that had asked Gladmane for a favor. When they ran her out of town, the trip was brutal. Las Pegasus is managed by Pegasus and weather ponies but there's basically no towns between it and Applewood. That meant the city was wetter than its surrounding area, and the trip on hoof was all desert, desert and more desert. Impossibly hot in the day, bitterly cold at night. Luckily Trixie had used the last of her funds to buy a carton of water to take with her, but the rough sand had made her wagon tough to pull. Trixie shuttered and congratulated herself on surviving such a tough journey. She smugly smiled as she thought to herself the trip to Ponyville is a piece of cake compared to THAT. A branch smacked her right in the face to clear her head. "Fuck! Ow!" She yelled as she held a hoof to her cheek, which had been severely bruised by the unmoving branch she had collided with. She blinked as she observed her surroundings. The moon was full and bright and shone down on the treetops on either side of the road. The paved cobble turned to a dirt path as she gazed into the endless trees, no moonlight shining through their canopy. The thicket of branches and thorns threateningly encroached upon the path as a mysterious fog lay low to the ground. Trixies eyes grew wide as she softly chuckled to herself. It was a tired and exasperated laugh that dangerously encroached upon mania. "...the Everfree Forest. Hahaha! How could I forget the Everfree Forest?! Hahahaha!" She cackled. Trixie looked behind her to see the trees continued on until the horizon. She apparently had already been in the Everfree Forest for a little while. Now she was just getting to the part that was the thickest and spookiest. She briefly considered going back in her wagon to hide for the night, but then her mind generated a ton of frightening possibilities, like some animal scratching at her door, or a who-knows-what burrowing into the wagon and suffocating her while she sleeps. She figured it better to press on, though the harness was just beginning to rattle with fear. She dimly lit her horn to light the way as she ventured forth into the darkness slowly but surely, the dirt path well trodden by ponies who had found the quickest way to leave the area. As the thicket encroached on the sides of the path, Trixie pulled harder to break the branches that kept on getting her wagon stuck. As the magician struggled to keep her dim light lit her mind wandered to a terrifying possibility. What if the path hadn't been trodden by ponies, but by some great big animal, and instead of out of the forest, it led to its den. Trixie shook the thought from her mind as she pressed on through the foggy dark. It was soon becoming difficult to see in front of her, even with the light. Her heart sank as the sound of the bugs in the trees grew louder, the owls and night-birds communicating above. Trixie stood completely still, paralyzed as something small and rodent-like scurried past her hoof. The light spell finally faded, plunging her into absolute darkness. She closed her eyes and held her breath, waiting for something terrifying to attack. For a moment there was nothing but the great timbre of the forest surrounding her. But when she opened her eyes again, she found there was a faint blue glow coming from the ground. It grew only brighter as Trixies eyes adjusted. Along both sides of the path were patches of a beautiful deep blue luminescent flower, lighting the way through the fog. The magician's fear subsided for curiosity as she bent down to examine the flowers. The closer she bent the more she realized how bright they actually were. Bright enough to serve as a flashlight. "Huh. Well that's neat" Trixie said thoughtfully to herself. She levitated a flower off the stem and placed it in her hair to help light the way above her. She smiled at the ingenuity. The flowers were so much easier than a light spell to maintain. With the path lit in front of her, Trixie pressed on down it with new confidence. As Trixie continued down the now lit dirt path she felt as though she must be getting close to the exit, as there were lit torches along its sides every once in a while. She heaved a sigh of relief at the promise of safety as she saw the sky above her begin to lighten with the beautiful pinks and oranges of dawn. The torches grew more frequent on the sides of the path as she reached a bend. More and more, Trixie grew aware of the fact that pieces of dirt and pebbles were beginning to stick to the underside of her hooves. She lifted them to wipe them off to no avail, They seemed completely stuck. She sighed, hoping maybe she'd find a river or stream to bathe in once she was out of the forest. A sudden snapping of sticks caused Trixie to look up into the trees, where a family of birds seemed to be gathering sticks for a nest. Unfortunately anything discarded fell down onto the magician. Trixie groaned as she felt 10s of little sticks and twigs fall onto her back. She shook to throw them off to no avail. A particularly long and spindly stick fell onto Trixies nose and stuck there as if welded. Trixie shook her head and blew air up towards her nose, trying to blow it off and getting more and more confused by the minute. She stopped moving for a moment and attempted to undo the leather harness around her midsection to unhitch from the wagon. Her hooves stuck to the side of the wooden supports holding the harness, and all at once she became aware that the harness itself was sticking to her skin. She frustratedly jiggled the spindly wooden supports attempting only to get free. Having her front hooves now completely stuck to the wood, she threatened to tip over forward on her face if not for the large wagon counterweight. As a last attempt, Trixie aggressively threw her entire body weight at the support, her flank sticking to it. With the crunch of wood breaking, Trixie rolled and successfully threw herself from the wagon, albeit taking the leather harness and one of the wooden supports with her. The success brought her a rush of adrenaline in her sleep-deprived brain. "Haha! Take THAT, Hoofdini!" She yelled victoriously, having rolled into the bush and thus now having tons of sticks and leaves stuck to her head, flank and legs. Her front hoof was now stuck out in front of her along the side of the wooden support. The long stick along her nose and a well-placed leaf on her chin gave her a fu-man-chu style beard and mustache. "Hello Traveler, are you hurt?" Came a voice. Trixie craned her neck upwards to see the upside-down silhouette of a pony in a cloak carrying a torch on the path next to her wagon. "Hi there. I'm fine, how are you?" Trixie said sarcastically. "...how long have you been watching?" "To be honest, quite a while, your 'great escape' did make me smile." The hooded pony laughed. "Could you uh… help me out a bit here? My name's Trixie, the Great and Powerful. You might have heard of me?" Trixie said embarrassedly. "My name's Zecora, and I could, you have 'power' enough to break sound wood, but Trixie you seem to be 'greatly' Sticky" the pony said. Her accent seemed foreign and she seemed to like rhymes and wordplay. Trixie briefly marveled that she'd probably do good in show business. "Har-de-Har. I don't know what happened. I swear I'm not like this normally." Trixie said, so embarrassed she felt she might cry. Zecora tied a rope to Trixie's hoof and pulled her out of the bush and back onto the main road where she was able to right herself and get a good look at the hooded pony. She wore her hair in a Mohawk and seemed to have stripes all over. Trixie didn't mention anything, just grateful for her help. "Thank you" Trixie said, tears welling up in her eyes as she realized not only was this the first pony she'd talked to in days, this pony was also being extraordinarily kind to her. Zecora gave her a knowing look. "Ah, right there" the zebra said, pointing to the flower in Trixie's hair, still stuck there. "The flower in your hair is poison joke, its power in sticky sap has left you soaked. Not to worry, journey down the path, I have a tub where you can scrub in a natural bath." Trixie belittled herself for her short-sightedness. She remembered hearing somewhere that brightly colored plants and animals are usually toxic. She thanked Zecora again but hesitated. "But wait, what about my wagon?" She said, protective of her magic stuff and her home. "I'll park it on the curb for now, the dark will ensure nopony will come to scrounge it. Now go, my spread is just ahead." Zecora said, ushering the magician forward. Trixie awkwardly limped forwards down the path, realizing the place where Zecora lived was merely a few meters away from where she had freaked out. Foreign and brightly colored decorations adorned the place. Trixie gazed in awe as the zebra directed her to a hot-spring pool just nearby. "Go ahead and splash in the warm bath, Trixie, I'll find ingredients to make you less sticky." Zecora said, giggling to herself at the ridiculousness of it all. In no time at all a variety of leaves and berries from the surrounding area were crushed and put in the water. Zecora then mixed the ingredients in with a large wooden paddle. The magician ducked her head beneath the water and sighed with relief as the leaves and sticks began to unstick, and the flower in her hair dissolved in the water with a satisfying fizzle. The daylight was beginning to shine through the treetops as Trixie set aside the broken wood support and leather harness to try to reattach later. Zecora hummed as she let herself into the bath with Trixie. "Thank you again so much, Zecora. How could I ever repay you?" Trixie said, fearing that she might also owe this pony money she didn't have. Zecora's smile faded as she gazed at Trixie. "Your heart is prone to sink, though you are young, your face wrinkles with lines of worry and poverty. You owe me nothing, it's enough that your company is comforting." The zebra said wisely and comfortingly. Tears of joy filled Trixie's eyes at such kindness. The warm water washing over her filled her with happiness. She took the time to decompress from the events of the evening, though the light of day didn't allow her to rest, she figured she'd sleep tomorrow. Her confidence returned as she began to relax. "Whew, what a night, ay Z? I don't know about you but I need a drink." Trixie said, putting her hooves behind her head and thinking about all the booze left in her wagon. Zecora shook her head dismissively. "Alcohol is bad for the liver, however I do have an alternative." Zecora said, reaching over the side of the tub for a mixing bowl of herbs and minerals which she haphazardly ground up before placing them on two papers. Trixie watched, transfixed as Zecora expertly rolled both papers into a cigar-shape, before handing one to the unicorn. Zecora then held the joint up to a nearby torch to light it. Trixie followed suit. They then both hit in synchronization. The magician immediately felt all the tension in her body fall away as her muscles relaxed and the world began to fade into the background. She had never felt this good in her life.
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Maud Pie,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Trixie,Zecora,Alternate Universe,Adventure,Drama,Romance,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Narcotics,Profanity,Sex,Violence
Tide and Effect
When Trixie packs up her things and decides to get a brand new start in Ponyville, she feels as though the night sky is watching over her. She's not the only one, and when she meets the others, everything she knows will change.
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<p>Trixie always feels like she's swimming upstream, what with money problems, family problems, alcohol problems, and whatever her <i>problem</i> is. For her kindness is scarce and support, even scarcer. As such she's been in survival mode for most of her life, which doesn't exactly translate to being kind or caring, or going out of her way to help others. She just wishes the world would change <i>for</i> her.</p><p>Starlight has always felt as though she were deep underwater, having been teased and disparaged all her life for being a blank flank well into adulthood. She doesn't see what's so wrong with being a blank flank, and why everypony is so mean about it all the time. When she finally gets her cutie mark she's astonished to find that Making Ponies Equal is her special talent, which kind of sucks the excitement out of the whole thing. Especially because now she has work to do.</p><p>Luna has had a lot of time to think, being stuck on the moon and all. She's seen Celestia's plans with Twilight and her friends, but she doesn't have high hopes. Her hopes lie with Starlight, Trixie and the select few other ponies who can truly understand the world as viewed from the outside. The same fatal magnetism that governs the Elements of Harmony govern Luna's chosen subjects, and when the time comes for them to meet, much <i>much</i> more than the tide will change.</p>
mature
2024-02-02T07:28:30+00:00
2024-02-02T07:28:30+00:00
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“Woah! You just got your cutie mark!" Sunburst said excitedly, the tears falling from his eyes, sadness replaced with wonder "...what's it mean?" Starlight stared dumbfounded at her own flank as her brain struggled to start working again. Things were falling into place like never before. There was understanding thrust upon her so suddenly that she hadn't had time to properly process the emotions. It wasn't just that she got her cutie mark, it's what it means and how it makes sense. "...it means… what I just said. Everypony should be equal. That's my special talent. Making Ponies Equal." Starlight, more aloud to herself than to Sunburst. "What? How does that work?" Sunburst said, confused. "What kind of market is there in that?" Starlight's heart sank as she realized that such an obscure cutie mark didn't guarantee her income. Wouldn't have been the case if it was baking or sewing or some other menial task she could do easily. Her own words had rung in her head, though. Maybe the fact it doesn't help unemployment is the point. Maybe that's part of the Equality thing. Her brain carried this train of thought to its logical conclusion. "Making Ponies Equal is broad enough to include income inequality, cutie mark inequality, hell even class differences." Starlight said, pacing back and forth. "...what if I was meant to find this spell because it helps achieve equality of a kind. If everypony is a blank flank, truly then will we all be equal." "Hold on there Starlight. You're starting to talk crazy, what spell are you even talking about?" Sunburst said, worriedly walking over to her as she held out the book for him to read. "Stygians Spell of Cutie Mark Replacement and Removal. One of the only cutie mark transfiguration spells I've found that seems actually permanent." Starlight said. Sunburst quickly read the passage, nervous of the manic excitement in Starlight's eyes as she seemingly spiraled into radical ideas. "Erm.. not to disappoint you but this spell seems to have a few adverse side-effects. A world where you use this unchanged on everypony sounds absolutely miserable. Though I guess if you tweaked the ingredients you could possibly.." Sunburst rambled on, his hyperfixation on magic shining through as he played with the idea of modifying the spell slightly. The stallion sighed as he closed his eyes and pushed up his glasses with his hoof. “... it could work. But, Starlight, I think you’re taking it the wrong way. Making ponies equal doesn’t necessarily mean upsetting the established system. Maybe you’re just supposed to be in social work or.. Or a lawyer or something.” Starlight held her hoof to her chin, pondering as the excitement of getting her cutie mark took over. She giggled excitedly, selfishly reveling in the brief joy of the fact ponies would no longer stare at her blank flank. "Well whatever, we can figure out all that stuff later. What do you say we go out for drinks, huh? It's celebration time." Starlight said. "Oh well.. I don't know.. I don't really drink." Sunburst said timidly, staring down at his hooves. "Well neither do I but when are we gonna get to celebrate like this again? Besides, I saw a suit in the window on the way here that I liked. I'm gonna nab it on the way there." Starlight said excitedly, wanting to treat herself. She motioned Sunburst to follow as she went to go check out the book at the front of the library. "A suit? Wouldn't you rather a dress?" Sunburst said, slightly confused. "No." Starlight said. Starlight and her friend then left the library and made their way out to the streets of Canterlot with the moon high in the sky. It was really late but both of them had been very used to pulling all-nighters recently. They made their way to the boutique just as it was closing. The bell ringing startled the pony behind the counter. Her meek voice barely registered as Starlight made a b-line for the suit she had seen in the window. "Oh sorry but uh.. m-miss Polomare just left for the night and s-so that means we're uh.. uh closed." The mare weakly offered. "Don't worry, I know exactly what I want. I'll be out of your hair in a jiffy." Starlight said, expertly levitating the suit off the mannequin as she waltzed up to the store counter, Sunburst flanking her nervously. The fashion pony sighed as she realized she wasn't able to dissuade the excited unicorn customer. Her name-tag read Coco. She took a look at the suit and then looked at the customers up and down, her fashion knowledge giving her confidence. "I'm sorry but I can already tell you this suit is too small to fit him, just by looking at him." Coco said. "...no offense." Coco and Sunburst shared a smile as he mouthed a "none taken" while Starlight piped up. "It's not for him, it's for me." She said, confused as she pulled the bits out of her bag. "Right but this is a stallions- oh ok then." Coco said, lacking the energy to argue further as she rung up the suit and placed it in a bag for the unicorn. Sunburst then shot the fashion pony some kind of knowing look that somehow caused Coco to nod, understanding the situation much better. Starlight's heart sank as she felt like the butt end of some inside joke for a moment. "Come back soon, but not too soon!" Coco said half-heartedly as Starlight and Sunburst left with the suit, before turning to officially close up shop. The unicorn excitedly pulled the suit over her head and slipped her hooves into the sleeves. It fit her perfectly. Starlight felt dapper as she admired her dim reflection in the dark store window. The red tie stood out against its black undershirt, the maroon collar highlighting the shiny gold buttons on her lapel and cufflinks. It was very… her. "You look nice" Sunburst said, not having seen the appeal initially and happy to be proven wrong. "Thanks. Hey. Let's hit the bar!" Starlight said excitedly to the empty street. It was nearly 1 AM and most ponies were asleep already. The moon shone brightly upon Canterlot through the clouds as they walked through its empty streets to the only places still lit. The bars and pubs that kept the city awake and alive into the wee hours of the morning. Its denizens were the few homeless ponies who took the cover of dark to move about without the watchful eye of the royal guard, the drunken close friends off from hours of work, drinking their way into the relaxation-filled weekend and the poor saps still working to manage the bars through the graveyard shift. The dim blues of the sky left for the warm reds and oranges of the pub lighting. The busy street corners of the daylight had seemed packed into the small warm space to hide for the night. As Starlight and Sunburst made their way to the stools and ordered, they pondered that here was Canterlot in microcosm. It didn't take many drinks for both ponies to open their minds. "I really think you could be a lawyer, I mean. You look like a lawyer right now." Sunburst said, 4 shots deep and already slurring his words. "I don't want to be a lawyer-pony or a social worker-pony or a fucknn magic-pony. I just wanna be a pony! Why is that so fuckin hard?" Starlight replied, having had quite a bit more than Sunburst at this point. "I mean I feel it, I realize- I mean I just, I'm not even- uh I- I can't even be a magic pony right. Like its my *hic* cutie mark but that doesn't mean I'm good at it, I thought that's how it worked.." Sunburst said, starting to become emotional again. "I think everyponys too worried about their own fuckin ass-picture to see that something is really fucked up here, like. We should just not have them.. get rid of em! I'm gonna go and.. I'm gonna uh *hic* I'm gonna make it so nopony has to be a cutie mark! Then you don't have to be sad that you're a stupid magic horse anymore cuz you'd just be a horse." Starlight said, drunkenly trying to sum up her philosophy. "Do you really think I'm stupid?" Sunburst said, tearing up. "Yeah but like, I'm stupid too, I didn't even know what a cutiemark was until like. A week ago. I think you have a lot of pote- poten- a lot of skill in other stuff and it could be your cuiemar that's holding you back." The mare replied somewhat comfortingly though almost incoherently. Sunburst must've found some comfort in it because he smiled through his tears. "Celestia.. my fuckin life is so fucked up and your so fuckin nice to me I- I love you so much you're so fuckin nice- I love you." The stallion said, wiping his tears with a bar napkin the bartender pushed towards him. "I love you too" Starlight said without much thought, turning to order another hit from the bartender, who gave her a concerned look. When she turned back, Sunburst leaned forward to kiss her, sobering her rapidly. Her eyes widened as she pulled away from the kiss, pushing him back with her hoof. "Woah! I, hey, I think you're really nice Sunburst but like, I uh, y'know don't uh.. exactly feel that way. Like that" Starlight said, blushing and wiping her mouth. "Im sorry… yeah I could kinda tell I just sort of had to try y'know. Like. I get that you don't really swing that way and that's ok. I'm not like, broken up or anything I get it it was just like a stupid thing anyways." Sunburst said timidly. Starlight was really confused for a moment. "What do you mean, don't swing that way?" She said, becoming more and more sober as her glass sweated on the table in front of her. "Well like, aren't you more into mares? Like you're gay, right?" Sunburst said. As Starlight struggled to come up with a response, her drunkenness returned to impair her thinking. Most often when she pondered a concept it was quick and easy. Now the booze had coated her brain in molasses and fog which made it difficult and slow to think. "I don't think so- well I mean- there was this one mare in high school but like everypony has that right? Like that fashion designer pony was cute but- those are kinda normal thoughts, right?" She said. "Well I mean if you're not gay why do you dress like a lesbo. Not to be mean but like stallions prefer a mare in a dress. Plus like, did you think she was cute in a 'I want to be her' or an 'I want to have her' way?" Sunburst said, his inhibitions leaving with the latest shot. It didn't matter that her brain was foggy, the answer appeared to Starlight clear as day in her head. She felt her cheeks flush as she thought about the fashion pony, her body getting hotter thinking about talking to her. Even 12 shots deep the revelation hit Starlight like a truck. She was a massive lesbo and there was basically no evidence to the contrary. "... let's talk about something else '' she said, staring down at the ice swirling in her glass, attempting to shake the gay thoughts from her head. As she lifted it up to drink it, she prayed the booze would erase this night from her memory. <><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><><> When Starlight lifted her head from the warm wood that had stuck to her skin via her sweat, she felt that kind of anxiety so often associated with the memories of sleeping in and being late for school. She frantically swiveled her head to find that the bar was completely and utterly empty. Sunburst was gone, as were all the other ponies she had been surrounded with mere moments ago. Furthermore, the chairs were all up on the tables and all the lights were off. The bar was closed and had been closed for some time. In front of her was a drool-drenched napkin she had laid on and a shot glass that had been tipped over, spilling its contents over the bar. Starlight absent-mindedly touched her face and neck to feel the imprint of the wood grain that had been left on her skin. As she moved to pull herself off of the stool, she heard a noise from behind the bar. The back wall of the bar was an assortment of drinks lined along ornately decorated frosted glass that separated the lobby from the kitchen. The flick of a light switch in the kitchen shone through the glass and into the lobby. Starlight watched as the shape of a pony moved about the kitchen with the scuffle of dishes. She guessed the morning crew was here to open, and decided to politely remain seated so as to attempt to explain herself. The mare's mind raced as she struggled to remember the events of the previous night. Had she said goodbye to Sunburst? Had she written to her father to tell him she'd arrived in Canterlot safety? Had she even paid for her drinks? Panic began to overtake her as she watched the pony in the kitchen stop and turn to her, having noticed her there. She cursed the brain fog that wouldn't subside as she began to hyperventilate, the kitchen pony making their way to the front to greet her. As the kitchen pony came out from the frosted glass to reveal herself, a cool, calming feeling overcame Starlight, like a cold glass of water. The hairs on her neck stood up and her breathing slowed as her heart rate calmed. "Can we get you anything, Starlight?" Princess Luna said softly as she wiped up the tipped-over shot glass. Starlight instantly bowed her head in respect, blushing in embarrassment. Her thoughts raced as she wondered why the royal had seemingly taken a job at a local bar in Canterlot. "N-no thank you. Princess. I'm ok I was just leaving… sorry I.." the mare stammered. "You are currently in your hotel fast asleep, Sunburst accompanies you. You've had quite an eventful night but you owe nopony money." The alicorn said calmly and quietly. "We wanted to visit you, Starlight Glimmer." Starlight's eyes widened at the realization, her previous anxieties replaced with new ones. "Oh! Well uh- I uh, I'm honored, your majesty. What brings you to my dreams?" She said, worried that her talk about cutie marks and revolution of the system had reached the princess and possibly even upsetted her. "Our reasons don't matter as much as your feelings on the matter of your cutie mark. We have never seen anything like it in all our years." Luna said, holding Starlight's hoof under hers. The alicorn's soft voice worked to calm Starlight and help her think clearly and speak truthfully. "I feel strange, like everything makes so much sense but it's all wrong. Something feels wrong like I've changed somehow and things are so much different. I think I know what my cutie mark means but I'm scared it's not right. If this really is my destiny why does it feel like the odds are against me?" Starlight said in clearer words than she'd ever been able to express in the waking world. "Perhaps it is not that you must change for the world but the world must change for you now, Starlight. We believe your cutie mark represents a new era for you to bring about. From where you're standing the odds will seem insurmountable." Princess Luna said. Starlight felt that same cool feeling overtake her as the princess spoke, this time combined with the warm radiance that filled her with confidence. "Our sister for the past thousand years has developed a plan for Equestria which we believe will not end in its prosperity. However, due to our exile, we were not able to offer our advice." The alicorn went on to explain. "...we believe the future of Equestria lies in ponies like you, Starlight. Ones with good hearts yet strange minds. We've been watching them for quite some time, and as with the fatal magnetism that governs us all, destiny will bring them together." Starlight swelled with pride as non-existent tears filled her eyes. "You really think I'm that important?" She said, having been so certain of her inadequacy for so long that being told differently gave her determination unlike anything else she'd ever felt. "We're certain you have the potential to be, but we oversee suggestion, not instruction. Truly only you can decide your own fate, regardless of our input. Choice is a value we extend to you so that you may extend it to all that you meet as well" Luna said, attempting to distance herself from Starlight somewhat. The unicorn nodded feverishly "Let us also remember the result of the last time we defied our sister openly. We believe you to be a necessary force of change but there's no reason anypony but us needs to know that." The princess said with a wink. "...we simply ask that you neglect to mention our royal endorsement." “Of course, princess.” Starlight said. “The sun is beginning to rise, we must go. Remember the cover of night will grant you safety. Until we meet again, Starlight Glimmer.” Princess Luna said, bowing her head as she began to fade out from existence. Starlight smiled, nodding to her as the bar around her began to melt into dust, and the light of the waking world welcomed her back, unaware that she had changed into a traitor of the night.
Cackling Moron
550709
1
Princess Celestia,Human,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Cheft
Equestria's only human detective is on the case. He probably shouldn't be.
complete
36
2
<p>Kenneth, Equestria's top human detective (by default, being the only one) is given a case by Princess Celestia.</p><p>He proceeds to attack this case with all of his skill and wit. Which is to say, badly.</p>
everyone
2024-02-02T15:45:09+00:00
2024-02-02T15:45:08+00:00
394
Cheft With that particular and characteristic rattle the coin that had been spinning on Kenneth’s desk spun to a halt and fell flat. He sighed, reached forward, picked it up and then set it spinning again with a flick of the fingers. That one bit, along with the other sitting sadly in the tin to one side of the desk, was all that remained of the petty cash. All that remained of almost all the cash, in fact. Petty or otherwise. Lean times for Canterlot’s local human. “Do wish these came in smaller denominations…” he muttered, watching as the hefty coin spun its way across the scratched desktop. When he looked like it might be veering too close to an edge he gently corralled it back toward safer pastures. He had been doing this for some considerable time now. Almost all of the morning, in fact. Debating with himself whether he could justify spending it on a croissant or not. His head said no, that that would be a wasteful expenditure, especially not knowing when fresh income might appear. His gut said yes, because croissant. So far it was still all up in the air. His lungs were on the sidelines suggesting maybe they could try clipping bits off the coin and see how that went, but Kenneth had never put much weight in the council of his lungs and so this wasn’t really an idea in the running. Didn’t have anything to clip with anyway. Out of nowhere (as is their way) the phone then rang and with a speed and dexterity that most would have assumed Kenneth didn’t possess he snatched the coin up in one hand and the receiver up in the other. “Hello, Horne Investigations - crimes solved and keys cut while you wait,” he said with the smooth ease of one who says this sort of thing into a phone a lot, regardless of whether there was anyone on the other end of the line. There was a pause, and Kenneth’s brow furrowed. “What? What? My God! That’s the most macabre thing I’ve ever heard in my life!” He cried, leaping to his feet. Slam down went the phone. “Damn wrong numbers,” he growled. Still standing, Kenneth tossed the bit up and snatched it from the air before slipping it into his pocket, tucking his thumbs into the waistband of his trousers and then walking over to his office’s small, dingy window. He looked out on a world of technicolour wonderment and loveliness, a world of bright blue skies and fluffy clouds and things flying or hovering in the air that, by his old standards, had no business flying or hovering in the air. Much to his irritation, it made him feel better, as it always did. He had to look away, returning his attention to his office so he could get his grumpiness going again. He grabbed his mug and took a swig, grimacing and only then looking at what it was he’d just drunk. It had been tea, once. Yesterday, perhaps, if he was being optimistic. Fortunately for Kenneth he was pulled from further speculation on just how long the tea had been sitting around gaining age and experience by the phone, which rung again. He lunged, nearly tripping and slamming face-first into the desk but managing to save himself at the last minute and so instead only landing on top of it and semi-winding himself.. “Hello, Horne Investigations - crimes solved and invisible mending,” he said, trying his best not to wheeze down the phone. A pause. “Will I accept a reverse charge call? No I most certainly will not- the palace, you say? Which palace?” Another pause. “Oh, the palace. Um, of course. By all means.” A brief (though expensive, for to a man running on fumes and cashflow you could count on one hand all things are expensive) phone call later and Kenneth was off and out the office, pausing only to pull on his coat and make sure he was wearing trousers. Which today, for a change, he was. - Celestia, in a palace and behind a palatial desk, regarded Kenneth in unreadable silence. She had been doing this for a good few seconds since the guards had shown him in, and though it really had only been a good few seconds it felt like much longer. This was because having a big magical horse stare at you could make any amount of time feel longer. “When you said you’d be here as quickly as possible I rather expected you sooner,” she said once she felt sufficient time had elapsed to emphasise her point. “I was waylaid,” Kenneth said. Celestia raised an eyebrow. “Oh?” The eyebrow could have shaken the confidence of many, but Kennth was not one of them. “Yes,” he said. He did not elaborate, because what had waylaid him had been breakfast. All at once he became acutely aware of the croissant crumbs on his shirt and surreptitiously brushed them off, not so surreptitiously that Celestia didn’t immediately spot him doing it. It had not made sense to Kenneth to show up for a prospective client on an empty stomach. This both his brain and his gut had been able to agree on (his lungs had remained silent). And besides, he was going to be getting paid soon. Probably. Maybe. Hopefully. “What appears to be the problem?” He asked in an effort to get things moving. Celestia stared at him a little longer to keep him stewing, then magically hovered a plate in from the sidelines. The plate was bare. It settled in front of her and Kenneth looked at it. “That’s a lovely plate,” he said. “I imagine you say that to all of the mares. This is the problem: when I left the room this plate had a slice of cake on it. When I returned to the room it did not. Do I have to explain this problem to you or can you see why it might be a problem?” “Cake theft,” Kenneth said, gravely. “Indeed,” Celestia said. Kenneth scratched his chin, squinting at the plate now, appraising it as a clue and a vital piece of evidence. “So you called the keenest mind available,” he said, nodding to himself. “I did. But they were busy.” “But they were- you know, I should have seen that one coming, I set myself up,” Kenneth said, having managed to be about half a second behind her on delivering the punchline. “The keenest mind would have seen it coming,” Celestia pointed out. “Well the second keenest mind is a little slower on the uptake, but he still gets there.” “Second keenest is a bit generous,” she said quietly but not anywhere near quietly enough that he couldn’t overhear. That had rather been the point. Putting his hands to his hips he frowned at her, the hard kind of frown. The ‘I don’t have to be here’ sort of frown. “Would you like this crime solved or not?” He asked. “Of course. Sorry.” He eyed her a moment longer (this proclivity of theirs for trying to stare people down went both ways, it seemed) then, once happy she’d been eyed long enough, produced a notebook, flipped it open and dabbed his pen on his tongue. He had no idea why he did this or even if he was supposed to, but habits were habits. “Could you describe the cake for me?” He asked. “Well it had moist layers, a rich filling of buttercream and jam, a thick layer of icing and…” She looked at him furiously taking notes, his tongue poking out the corner of his mouth. “...it’s a slice of cake,” she concluded. Kenneth scribbled out whatever final thoughts he’d reached, clicked his pen and then tucked both it and his notebook back into his jacket. “Hmm. So it would appear from your description. It’s not much to go on,” he said. “I have a picture, if that would help.” Over floated a photograph of a slice of cake. Or, rather, a gratuitous selfie Celestia had taken over herself with a foreleg wrapped around the plate on which the slice of cake sat. She looked ecstatic. The cake looked like cake, much like how she’d described it. Exactly how she’d described it, in fact. Kenneth looked the photo over for a moment before holding it up. “Do you take pictures with all your slices of cake?” He asked. “Not all of them, no,” Celestia said, in tones that made it clear that she would not be elaborating, now or at any point in the future. Kenneth wasn’t sure if this made it a better or worse habit, or whether it changed nothing at all. Either way, he supposed that a photo was better than no photo. He tucked it into his pocket as his first clue. “Alright, I’ll do it. Now, my fees are very reasonable and we can maybe discuss some kind of, ah, royal discount depending on how things go but I’m also going to have to talk about expenses for a case like this and-” “I will pay you five bits now, and another five when you either return with the cake or the guilty party,” Celestia said, cutting him off and pushing an adorable coin pouch across the desk at him. “Six now,” Kenneth said. “Three now, three later,” Celestia said, removing two coins from the pouch. Kenneth’s eyes widened and he frantically waved his hands. “No! Go back!” “You’re not very good at haggling.” “Five! Five is fine. I can work with five. Five is perfect. That’s my rate, in fact,” Kenneth quickly lied. This worked for Celestia. The two coins clinked back into the pouch, which was then cinched shut again. “That’s fortunate,” Celestia said. - Not long after this Kenneth strode handsomely from the palace and back out into the sunshine. “I wanted a case, and for my crimes they gave me one,” he said to himself, his face set in a mask of seriousness, his eyes narrowed. He raised the teacup to his lips, started sipping, then blinked and looked down at what it was he was doing, namely sipping out of a teacup he had entirely failed to notice that he’d lifted from the palace. “Oh bugger,” he said, looking around to see if any guards were about to pounce. None did so, after waiting a few moments in apprehension, Kenneth shrugged and finished sipping, smacking his lips in satisfaction once he’d finished. He then pocketed the teacup. It was a nice teacup. With that done he stood and considered what his next move might be. He reflected that he didn’t have an awful lot to go on, but while that might have discouraged lesser detectives he simply allowed himself to view it as a greater challenge - a greater challenge that would make his eventual cracking of the case all the sweeter. That did still leave him somewhat lost as to what his first step should be. He thought back to his training, remembered he hadn’t had any formal training, and so thought back to what he usually drew on in times of doubt: gut instinct (his reliance on the judgement of his internal organs continuing unabated). His gut told him that it wanted more pastries but, failing that, he should find the closest, seediest looking bar or other such den of iniquity, enter, and start poking around. Both of these seemed good ideas to Kenneth, but since was a professional he decided to put the latter first in order of priority. Kenneth walked for five minutes, keeping an eye out for seedy looking places. Unfortunately most of the places he could see were positively family-friendly - some of the proprietors even waved at him! Not what he needed at all. It got so bad he considered simply skipping town with the five bits when he finally a more likely spot: tucked away in a corner, in a state of slight disrepair, and no-one waving at him. Perfect. He headed over. It would of course be highly unusual to find the suspect in the first place he visited, obviously, so he wasn’t banking on that. But, according to all the books he’d read and films he’d seen, it was very easy finding information and clues and such in seedy drinking establishments. And even if his suspect wasn’t there (and they wouldn’t be, he knew this, he wasn’t relying on this) then the place would no-doubt be packed to the gunwales with ne’er do wells and miscreants and the like which he could manfully lean on for information. It was a no-brainer, really, so it suited him perfectly. In he went. Inside it was much, much nicer than the outside. Immaculate, spotless, cozy and inviting, the place made him instantly feel more relaxed and at home. It was also more-or-less deserted, with only a pony in the corner, a pony mother and pony baby (whatever one of those might be called), and a pony behind the bar. And Kenneth. No miscreants or ne’er do wells. “Ne’er do oh well,” Kenneth said to himself, shrugging and heading to the bar, which he realised was actually more of a cafe counter because this was actually a cafe and not a seedy bar after all. It would have to do. “Hi! How can I help you?” The pony behind the counter asked, her overwhelming friendliness another strike against the place being considered a properly disreputable dive. Still, Kenneth felt he should still play his part as best he could. Leaning on the counter (he had to kneel to do this) he cast a deliberate eye over the other patrons and only then looked to the counter-pony. “I’m here on official business,” he said. “I don’t believe you,” she said immediately and without missing a beat. Kenneth frowned and pulled the teacup out of his pocket. “Would someone not on official business have a teacup like this?” He held it up so that its royal provenance was obvious. The pony looked the teacup over. “I don’t know. Maybe,” she said. “I can certainly imagine circumstances where someone not on official business could end up with a teacup like that. If they’d stolen it without realising and then put into their pocket. Then again, giving out teacups as some sort of identifying token is the sort of thing Princess Celestia would do, especially if it was for a joke. Are you part of a joke?” She asked, tapping her thin in thought as she worked through the possibilities. “I’ve often felt like I am,” Kenneth said, re-pocketing the teacup. The pony looked Kenneth over. “I don’t know what to make of you,” she said. “Well then, you’d best take me seriously just in case.” “Okay. I will,” the pony said, then after a pause: “...for now.” Kenneth gave her a nod of thanks and then pulled the photograph out of his jacket pocket. “What do you know about this cake?” he asked, holding it up for the pony to see. “Is that Princess Celestia?” She asked, pointing. “We’re not talking about her, we’re talking about the cake,” Kenneth said. The pony’s pointing hoof moved ever-so-slightly. “Looks like a nice cake,” she said after a moment. “Is that all you have to say?” “Yes? If you want to ask questions about cake you’re probably better off asking Merry.” “Merry?” He did not know anyone Merry. The pony - continuing what she’d been doing - pointed some more, this time past Kenneth and over his shoulder, towards the corner. “Merry Berry. The writer, editor and publisher of Cake Fancy magazine. He’s over there. He’s always over there…” she said, the last part somewhat darkly. Kenneth looked. There was indeed a pony in the corner, though whether he was always there he couldn’t personally say. He was too busy enjoying the rosy glow of his good luck to care much either way. Cake Fancy magazine? While on a case about cake? These kinds of coincidences could only mean he was on the right track and could only be the product of his keen, subconscious instincts. “Thanks, gut,” he said quietly to himself. In response his gut gurgled, which he took to be a friendly acceptance of the praise but was in fact just caused by the close proximity of a plate of Chelsea buns the other side of the counter. “Are you going to order something?” The pony asked, eyes flicking from Kenneth’s (loud) gut to his (quiet) face. She could sense a hungry customer. “I’m here on business,” Kenneth said. “If you don’t order something I will have to ask you to leave.” “You wouldn’t!” “Try me,” she said bluntly, staring him down. Kenneth tried to stare back but couldn’t keep it up and wilted in short order. “What’ll you have?” The pony asked. “Uh tea, please,” he said sheepishly, for while he’d already had some tea after having subconsciously stolen borrowed some from the palace he knew it was physically impossible to drink too much tea. “Does this look like the sort of place that serves tea?” “Yes,” Kenneth said bluntly. The pony blinked at him. “Alright, you called me on that one, fair enough. What kind?” She asked. “Surprise me.” And so she slapped him. “...I meant with tea. With your choice of tea,” Kenneth said, a hand to his cheek. “Oh. Sorry. I’ll be right back.” Red-faced, off she went to do that. In the event, she brought back a cup of coffee. “That certainly is surprising,” Kenneth said on taking it. “I thought so.” With that spot of dirty business concluded Kenneth moved towards the corner. “Merry Berry of Cake Fancy magazine?” He asked Merry Berry of Cake Fancy magazine who looked up from their portable diatype. “Yes that’s me! Writer, editor, publisher, cartoonist-in-residence, and proud subscriber! Were you looking to subscribe? You’d get to be number two on the list! No? That’s okay! I’m just happy to talk about Cake Fancy! Not to be confused with Cake Fancier magazine, of course! They, uh - that’s the one about Celestia’s hooves…” Kenneth, blindsided and bewildered by this torrent of a response, was momentarily lost of for words. Then he clocked the bit about hooves. “Pardon?” He asked. “I’d rather not have to repeat myself,” Merry said, his rictus grin twitching. An awkward moment passed between the two of them. “...right. Well,” said Kenneth. “They don’t need subscribers,” Merry said, with perhaps just the slightest hint of bitterness. “We are moving on. Look at this picture,” Kenneth said, taking the photograph out again and again proffering it. Merry bent over the table to have a better look. “Ooh, Celestia, Ooh, cake!” “Recognise that cake?” Kenneth asked. “Recognise it? I know that cake! I’m intimately familiar with that cake! That’s a Delamain Sponge! It’s Celestia’s favourite, don’t you know! I know because I know every single type she eats and in what volumes and have worked it out with my sophisticated statistical model! And it’s this one! I know what day and time he has it, too, and when she leaves the room. I can hardly wait to try it. I can almost taste it…” Merry seemed at this point to realise what he was saying, or at least realise the effect of what he was saying was having on Kenneth. “When I finally manage to obtain a slice for myself, I mean. Not anytime soon. I don’t have a slice now. They’re very exclusive,” he said, matter-of-factly. “I see,” said Kenneth. “Someone like me would have to steal one to get one!” “I see. Again.” A longer awkward moment. “Yes. Now if you excuse me I must go to the little colt’s room.” Merry hopped down from the table and left the room at speed, going through a door in the back. Kenneth watched him go with calculating eyes. A more trusting, less inquisitive mind might have missed them, but Kenneth had noticed a few subtle hints that perhaps this Merry Berry was acting suspiciously. Examining the diatype gave no clues, as Kenneth had no idea how to operate a diatype and only the foggiest idea what one even was. This left only one option: to follow Merry, and hope he did something incriminating on the way to (or on the way back from) the khazi. Taking his coffee with him Kenneth also went through the door in the back, casual-like. Through the door he found further doors. Some of these were clearly the toilets, but some were clearly not. One was ajar. This was obviously the one he should investigate, Kenneth thought. The toilets were too obvious, no way Merry had gone in there, where he’d said he was going to go. No, he’d gone through the slightly-open door marked ‘staff only’. “Trespassing is terribly naughty behaviour, Merry. A man might - oh, hello,” Kenneth said, coming up short when he found that the storeroom he’d entered (for it was a storeroom) did not contain Merry but did, in fact, instead contain two very burly, very perplexed looking ponies who were at that moment heaving crates and stacking shelves. Quite why a small, cozy cafe needed two beefy boys to do their stocking was unclear, but Kenneth wasn’t in the business of questioning these sorts of things. At least not when he wan’t being paid for it. He’d question anything for the right price. Behind him, Merry exited the toilet and (merrily) headed back towards his table. “You ain’t meant to be back here,” one of the burly ponies said, taking a step forward. “Here on official business, just need to ask you a question about cakes,” Kenneth said smoothly, not-so-smoothly forgetting that he was still holding a cup of coffee and, in his fumble to retrieve his photograph, somehow managing to fling the cup and its contents at the two stockroom ponies. Fortunately by this point the coffee had cooled somewhat, so they were splattered with only lukewarm coffee as opposed to scalding coffee. Not that this seemed to improve their mood much. “Now lads, I’m sure-” was all Kenneth managed to say before they descended upon him. - Kenneth was back in front of Celestia’s desk. He was ruffled but not bruised, as being set upon by ponies was rather like being pelted with handfuls of marshmallow. The hooves were more of a consideration, but really they were only like being pelted with handfuls of stale marshmallow. Altogether not an ideal experience, but not one that would leave you pissing blood. “You look ruffled,” Celestia said. “Just another day in the rough-and-tumble life of Equestria’s second keenest mind,” said Kenneth proudly, tapping a temple. Celestia blinked at him. “Ahem, yes, well. I feel I may have found a suspect, if not the actual culprit!” An eyebrow raised. It was Celestia’s. It was Celestia’s eyebrow that raised. “You have?” She asked. “Yes!” Kenneth said, before launching into a vivid and highly distorted recap of his big day out. This took some time. “-and then Merry vanished, and I found some chaps who were presumably his goons, and then they beat me up. All of which suggests to me a guilty conscience,” he said, wrapping up, then remembering one more thing: “Also something about your hooves. A magazine about your hooves, maybe? I forget. I think that came up.” A moment passed as this additional fact settled itself. Celestia decided not to comment, as she had publicly committed to never acknowledging the existence of Cake Fancier (despite being a subscriber (under a pseudonym)). “I have a confession to make,” she said. “You’ve been breaking into my office to touch my things and move all my furniture half an inch closer to the window?” Kenneth asked. Celestia was honestly caught off-guard. “What? No.” “Twilight Sparkle is actually half a dozen ferrets sewn into a purple sack?” He ventured, feeling this at least was a slam-dunk. It was the way the girl moved - very ferret-reminiscent. And had anyone ever seen her in a room with ferrets? No. Suspicious. “Stop trying to guess,” Celestia said. “Sorry.” Celestia composed herself. “I ate the cake,” she said. “You ate the cake?” “Yes.” Kenneth considered this. Then: “I found the culprit,” he said, pointing at her. “Very good, well done,” she said. His arm dropped. “So this whole thing was… what?” He asked. “Funny?” She ventured. “...that might depend on where you’re standing.” Kenneth considered this. “It’s funny from over here,” said Celestia, pointing down. “Alright then,” Kenneth said. He moved over and stood next to her, turning around to look back at where he’d just been. “It does seem a little bit funnier from over here,” he said. “I did say.” Exactly five seconds went past. “Can I get paid now?” Kenneth asked. - A good while later - a few weeks, let’s say - Celestia was laid out luxuriously on a lounger, sunglasses on, basking in her own golden radiance. This enjoyable experience was interrupted and spoilt by a shadow. “Ahem,” said the shadow. “Yes, sister?” Celestia asked, not moving. Luna levitated two objects around, though, what with all the golden radiance (i.e. sunshine) Celestia couldn’t see what they were. “Two things,” Luna said. “One, a receipt for ten bits to a ‘Horne Investigations’ and two, a flyer from Horne Investigations claiming ‘As used by princesses!’ and boasting of a one-hundred percent success rate in royal cases. How are these linked and how is this your fault?” Celestia was silent. “There was a slow day,” she said. She then moved the sun so she wasn’t in a shadow anymore.
SisterHorseteeth
550710
1
Princess Cadance,Shadowbolts (EqG),Shining Armor,Smolder,Sunset Shimmer,Alternate Universe,Drama,My Little Pony: Equestria Girls,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Violence
Empathy is Magic, Pt. 1
An alternate timeline in which somepony else got to the mirror before Sunset, stealing it and Celestia away. Acting Princess Cadance now has to assemble a team of Bearers on short notice, with Sunset's help.
incomplete
11
0
<p>Cast out of the Celestial Palace, Sunset Shimmer is about to take life into her own hooves and seize what rightfully belongs to her.</p><p>Only problem is, somepony else got to the mirror, first. It's gone, vanished.<br/>So is Celestia.</p><p>All of a sudden, Sunset goes from a disgraced scholar, banned from the palace grounds, to a valuable asset of Acting Princess Cadance's desperate scramble to hold the Principality of Equestria together and figure out what on Equus even happened to the Princess of the Sun.</p><p>Part of Sunset's second chance entails trying not to peeve off the ponies giving her a second chance. The other part is being forced by bureaucracy and harsh deadlines to make friends with ponies who are even more insufferable than Sunset.</p><p>Comes after <a href="/story/549639/stay-of-execution" rel="nofollow">Stay of Execution</a>, but that work is not required to appreciate this one.</p>
teen
2024-02-02T15:48:21+00:00
2024-02-10T01:16:29+00:00
258
A ball of blue fire clung to the tip of her horn like a dewdrop on a stalk of grass. Blistering, angry dew on spiteful, furious grass. Her mentor taught her how to shape her spellfire, just-so – to cultivate it, to nurture it like the first embers in a cozy campfire – but owing this much to her just fanned its heat with every resentment the unicorn charging the fireball held against that very same mare. The bonfire blazing at hornpoint command ran sweat down her face. She would burn this entire gaudy heap of marble down if she had to. She swore she wanted to – but she had other matters to attend to. Instead, she had kindled this flame to blast away anypony who spotted her, all the way to the Dragonlands That spark fizzled out in shock when Sunset Shimmer found the first body. She skidded to a stop beside the fallen royal guard, nearly crashing into him when her cannon struck an errant, headless helmet and sent her stumbling, fumbling for traction in the socks she’d slid on to pad her hooves. She had questions – so many questions! – and no one to ask them to except for this… not a corpse, she determined. He was still breathing. There was no time to investigate further; she had to keep going. As of earlier that afternoon, Sunset wasn’t legally permitted to be seen within a hundred and fifty hooves of the Celestial Palace anymore, let alone hovering over an unconscious royal guard whose injury she wasn’t even responsible for. The mystery wouldn’t matter, soon enough, anyway. She’d be leaving it all behind for something much greater. At least, that was what she had hoped, for a few fleeting seconds, right until she found his buddy five paces down the hall – the only hall that led to her destination. So much for the faint hope that this was a random hit-and-run that wouldn’t interfere with her plan. Then the lingering ozone hit her nostrils, just as she spotted the scorch marks on his armor and the lichtenpferd figure branching across his bare foreleg. Sunset paused. His chest did not fall and rise like his compatriot’s. She knew she had to keep going. Heck, she had been prepared to strike him – and any other guardsponies in her way – down with a hail of firebolts, herself. But it was one thing to rile herself, in the burning heat of fresh indignation. into thinking she was ready to kill if she had to – to convince herself she was willing to sacrifice others’ lives in the pursuit of her agenda. It was another thing entirely to be tested on that conviction. It should have been such an easy choice, too! She didn’t zap this guy. Not her victim, not her problem! Right? So why was her mouth so dry? She held a hoof to his neck, and his pulse weakly and arhythmically nuzzled her frog. He wasn’t all the way gone just yet. It would have done Sunset good to be heartless, to be apathetic. Things like conscience and empathy held nobleponies back. She had to learn to suppress those if she wanted to get ahead. And yet… A stubbornly-irrepressible part of her brain – one which ponies like to mislabel as the heart – antsy from lack of work, sprung to its duty: begging, kicking, and screaming at Sunset to do something for this stallion. What, it dreaded, if this guard had friends, or closer relationships, or even foals? Her throat tightened. Who else, it demanded, could save him? His life was in her hooves. To walk away would be to kill him just as much as his electrokinetic assailant had. What, it posited, if Sunset had been lying here, wounded, and it was Celestia debating whether to move on without lifting a hoof? That did the trick. So. The earth ponies had their own technique, pounding their hooves on the breathless barrel and bellowing air into their chest, and pegasi conjured a breeze from their wings instead of doing mouth-to-mouth, but Sunset Shimmer was a unicorn – and not just that, but the best of the best when it came to magic. Where not a minute prior, her horn was alight with pyrokinetic intent, now, a cooler but no less intense rhythm resonated from her sky-blue aura, rousing the guardstallion’s heart and lungs back into action, to the tune of the Brothers Giblets’ Groove of Continued Life. He would live. Her conscience would go unstained. Her work here was done, and she continued down the hall, the socks on her hooves doing little to muffle her anxious trot. But now that her mind was free of that ethical quibble, the questions were back in full force. The most demanding of them forced itself, muttered, out of her mouth: “Just what am I going to find at the end of this hall?” Well, for starters, two more royal guards lay jolted on the marble tile near the end. If the guard assignments hadn’t been amended, following the termination of Sunset’s tutelage earlier, then these were most likely the two guards stationed in the room she sought, and which she had known she would have to deal with head-on if she couldn’t bolt past them. Both of them were still breathing, hearts still beating, but they smelt of burnt fur and more ozone. Sunset, on the other hand, was not breathing. Her heart stopped and her breath hitched in her throat as she entered a forbidden room. The Mirror Room. Sans a mirror. Sans the Mirror. You know, the mirror that revealed to Sunset her fate: to become an alicorn, resplendent and mighty, her copper fur glowing with the light of dusk, and the golden and scarlet tones of her fiery mane literalized into a billowing inferno, cooled only by the penetrating, commanding stare of her turquoise eyes. The flaring, swirling sun on her side marked all the banners in the hall behind her, where in reality, Celestia’s own sun had been embroidered. You know, the mirror Celestia had instructed her – warned her – not to mess with and to banish from her mind. Doing so anyways, researching it behind her back in forbidden archives, had led Celestia to completely dispose of Sunset like a used rag. You know, the mirror that was apparently secretly also a portal to… somewhere or other, that surely must have held the secret to Sunset’s ascension. That was the whole reason she came back to the palace at all. That mirror. Sunset had just about remembered to breathe again when– When somepony crashed directly into her from behind, knocking the both of them to the floor. The adrenaline helped a lot to scramble her back onto her hooves, her horn primed for combat. But, instead of the intruder having come back to remove any witnesses, or a veteran guardspony having followed her with legcuffs and a nullifier ring with intent to arrest, she was instead met with a friendly face. It was a member of the Royal Guard, but he wore an approachable, kinda-dopey smile on his face as he shouted, “Whoah! Sunset!” – and he was far too green to stand a chance of taking a mage like Sunset down. Not chromatically greener – he was decidedly tan, kinda like Sunset herself – and both his mane and eyes were blue. Rather, he was green because he had not worked for the Crown long enough for Sunset to bother learning his name. Under previously-normal circumstances, she would have called him ‘Greenhorn’ or ‘Greenie’ to get under his skin. Well, probably not ‘Greenhorn’. He was a pegasus, not a unicorn. In the moment, however, Sunset had some damage control to do. “Guh– Hi! You! Uh–” Suddenly, the entire building shook, as though a small earthquake or rockslide wracked the Canterhorn, but that was impossible. The finest earth pony geotechnicians were in charge of making sure that sort of thing never happened to the mountain they built Canterlot on. It sounded more like a boom of thunder, anyways. Flash spoke first, refocusing on the concern at hand: “Did you see anything?” Sunset blinked. Interesting. He wasn’t accusing her. He didn’t even seem to be aware she wasn’t supposed to be anywhere near the palace. Instinctively, she replied with a “No…”, but then realized she might still need to explain her presence. “I heard a bunch of… lighting bursts, so I came to see what was going on,” she lied, then supported her lies with the truth: “The guards were all unconscious when I got here – I actually had to do CPR on the second one I saw. I didn’t see anypony who could have done this.” And maybe her diversion into cardiopulmonary resuscitation had prevented her from doing so, she realized. “Well, this room is a dead end on the floor plans, so they gotta still be in here.” “Unless they teleported,” Sunset noted, pretending she wasn’t aware of the wards on the room which prevented just that, “or turned invisible and snuck around me.” He didn’t appear to know about the mirror, so she left out the third possibility, which admittedly wouldn’t have explained how the mirror had completely vanished as well. “You were chasing whoever did this?” His ears flattened sheepishly. He didn’t do the stoic guard thing very well, did he? “Not exactly… but I was chasing somepony until they shook me off – an impostor in royal guard’s armor. I didn’t pick up the trail until I found Vambrace lying out in the hallway.” He shook his head. “And, anyways, they couldn’t have done any of those things to escape.” Sunset was about to ask why not, when a third pony burst into the mirror room. An imposing young stallion, clad in armor his rank permitted him to paint in the purple hue of (as rumor had it) his little sister’s coat. His fur, an ice-cold white; his mane, imitated by streaks of azure and cerulean in the bristles on his helmet-plume. “Flash Sentry! Repor– Oh. Sunset Shimmer.” Guard-Captain Shining Armor leveled an accusatory pair of eyes at Sunset as he unsheathed the sparkling fuchsia-and-sapphire glare of his magic. He, unlike Flash, very much knew that Sunset was equina non grata. He was the one to escort Sunset out of the palace. He did not take those eyes off of her as he obstructed the lone exit with his bulky form and repeated himself: “Flash Sentry, report.” “Captain! I was tailing an impostor in the guise of a royal guard after spotting them on patrol in the Photonic Hall.” “Sunset, I’m assuming.” Flash gave his superior officer a befuddled look, then restrained his unprofessionalism. “Fortunately not, Captain. Sunset couldn’t be the impostor,” – Flash turned to Sunset – “for the same reason the impostor couldn’t have teleported out or gone invisible or used any sort of magic to leave this room.” “And that reason is?”, Shining asked. “Because the impostor was an earth pony, sir. They didn’t have wing holes in their armor while I was chasing them, and I found their stolen helmet discarded on the ground, not far from Vambrace, fitted for a non-unicorn.” “Uh-huh…”, Shining noted, oozing with skepticism, before pressing a hoof to his badge of office and speaking into it: “This is Cobalt Knight. Still no sign of Mother Phoenix but we do have a crime scene and a suspect or two over at Looking Glass 9-1-13. Requesting backup. Over.” Sunset blinked. These codenames weren’t that hard to parse, so she had a pretty good idea who ‘Mother Phoenix’ was supposed to be. “Whoah, whoah. Wait. What was that about the Princess?” … [chime of the classic tune] My Little Pony, My Little Pony Ah-ah-ah-ah…~ [shift into poppy synthwave] (My Little Pony) I used to ask what friends could do for me (My Little Pony) What a funny question, now that I’ve seen - Second chances - - Rockin’ out! - - It is what it is. - - For better or worse - - All for the Team - - We make it work - And empathy makes it like… clockwork? (That was bad.) You have my little ponies How did we all make such unlikely friends?
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Princess Cadance,Shadowbolts (EqG),Shining Armor,Smolder,Sunset Shimmer,Alternate Universe,Drama,My Little Pony: Equestria Girls,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Violence
Empathy is Magic, Pt. 1
An alternate timeline in which somepony else got to the mirror before Sunset, stealing it and Celestia away. Acting Princess Cadance now has to assemble a team of Bearers on short notice, with Sunset's help.
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<p>Cast out of the Celestial Palace, Sunset Shimmer is about to take life into her own hooves and seize what rightfully belongs to her.</p><p>Only problem is, somepony else got to the mirror, first. It's gone, vanished.<br/>So is Celestia.</p><p>All of a sudden, Sunset goes from a disgraced scholar, banned from the palace grounds, to a valuable asset of Acting Princess Cadance's desperate scramble to hold the Principality of Equestria together and figure out what on Equus even happened to the Princess of the Sun.</p><p>Part of Sunset's second chance entails trying not to peeve off the ponies giving her a second chance. The other part is being forced by bureaucracy and harsh deadlines to make friends with ponies who are even more insufferable than Sunset.</p><p>Comes after <a href="/story/549639/stay-of-execution" rel="nofollow">Stay of Execution</a>, but that work is not required to appreciate this one.</p>
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2024-02-10T01:20:19+00:00
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“And that brings us to now, Princess.” Sunset Shimmer sipped her raspberry tea, putting on a smile for an alicorn who had, by the bags in her eyes, been awake all night. Or, rather, what should have been night. The clock said it was supposed to be five in the morning, the day after what everypony was calling ‘The Incident’ (because nopony actually knew enough to call it something better). Despite being the ‘dark’ hours of the morning, if you didn’t own a clock, it was still the late afternoon/early evening of the previous day. Celestia’s sun hung in the west, wrapping the horizon in copper and rose, as it had for the past nine hours. See, as soon as she was let go from her official questioning (thanks to that Sentry guy’s testimony), Sunset had beelined, at full gallop, towards the Canterlot villa of Princess-in-Training Mi Amore Cadenza. She’d have teleported… if she’d ever actually been there or seen the place. It would have been a lot more convenient if Cadance just lived full-time in the Celestial Palace like Sunset, but she had apparently wanted a place of her own when she was a teenager, and the full Princess was all too permitting. Fine by Sunset, up until now. Sunset Shimmer was… not exactly a fan of Cadance. She had never particularly liked Celestia’s adopted niece, forced to compete with her for her mentor’s full attention – and her opinion certainly didn’t improve when Cadance had the nerve to just show up to Court one fine, sunny morning as an alicorn. The only good thing about that day was it caught Sunset onto the idea that anypony could become an alicorn, if they met the right criteria. Just… what were those criteria, exactly? Cadance had them, and she was… well, Cadance. An unimpressive specimen. Sunset’s working theory was that it had something to do with her royal legacy, since it couldn’t have been based entirely on magical prowess. Cadance was apparently the last, lost descendent of a long line of Princesses-in-Exile, from some northern “empire” that had vanished a millennium ago, back when you could still call a city-state and its satellite villages an empire. Whether it was true or not, as with many stories Celestia told, was impossible to prove. So, for the longest time, Sunset dreamt of learning that she was actually also the secret scion of a lineage of pony royalty herself – though the vision she saw in the mirror led her to realize such a connection might not actually be necessary. In any case, despite Sunset’s dislike, the two of them never interacted much. If Cadance were the newer of Celestia’s two students, Sunset absolutely might have tried to sabotage her, but by the time Celestia plucked Sunset out of obscurity, Cadance had been there for years. Any attempt to dislodge her from the Princess risked damaging Sunset’s own standing even worse. So Sunset simply didn’t bother to bother Cadance; it was easier to just never give her the time of day like she did all the other irrelevant ponies in the periphery of her life. Likewise, Cadance left Sunset alone, presumably warned away from her by Celestia herself. When the annoying obstacle to Celestia’s attention transformed into the Princess (to-be) of Love, Sunset could do little but fume and console herself that love was an insipid thing to be the Princess of. It wasn’t the glorious Day. It wasn’t the vacant domain of mysterious Night. It wasn’t powerful, progressive, industrious, untouchable Flame, like Sunset had picked out for herself. It was just an abstract relationship that ponies had managed just fine without Cadance for millennia. In any case, Sunset was able to swallow her disdain and pay her rival a visit. She could pretend to be nice long enough to brush her “disagreement” with Celestia under the rug, and they could go back to mostly ignoring each other. Hopefully. The roads were remarkably… wet. Rain hadn’t been scheduled for that day, so Sunset had no idea what that was about; only an assumption that it must somehow be connected to the Incident. Two guards were posted at the gate, and that seemed to be… it. Just those two. Maybe it was the hour, but it just seemed so sparse a detail for what her eyes insisted was seven-ish PM. Insultingly, they didn’t take her credentials as Royal Student as permission to go right inside. Instead, they insisted the Princess-in-Training wasn’t seeing anypony, on account of being asleep, and was not to be disturbed. They stopped responding to her arguments about five minutes in, but Sunset would not allow them the pleasure of silence in turn. Fortunately, the racket had the effect of drawing just the mare she wanted to see out of the villa, blearily plodding down the garden walk to see what was going on. She didn’t really say anything; she just took two sluggish blinks, unlocked the gate with her magic, and gestured with her head for Sunset to follow. The garden was well-kept, even if all the heart-shaped topiary seemed a bit on-the-nose, but the manor itself? It felt more like the occupied territories of a teenager’s expansionist bedroom, than the lavish estate of a prospective diarch. It wasn’t unclean; the dishes were washed, just not put away. Didn’t Cadance have a maid? Or was she legitimately just doing it all herself? There were posters on the walls, for movies and stage plays and the odd travelling band. It didn’t really come as a surprise that the Princess of Love still held onto the posters which that Post-Crush duo had gifted her at the concert she dragged her aunt and a thirteen-year-old Sunset to: every album cover they put out, instrument they played, and autograph they signed was absolutely plastered with hearts. –No, Sunset didn’t have an autograph from Kiwi Lollipop hidden in her room, too precious to get rid of and too embarrassing to display. Don’t be ridiculous. She’d never listen to such bubbly pop, regardless of how heart-thumpingly bassy their synths were or how cool Kiwi was. Moving on. Sunset was worried Cadance would make her sit down on one of the couches in the parlor, whose cushions housed dozens upon dozens of assorted pink, red, white, and sometimes yellow or purple plushies, but after a moment’s stop to correct the alignment of the most cuddly-looking manticore Sunset had ever seen, Cadance guided Sunset, mercifully, into the breakfast nook of the kitchen, where there was actual open seating. Perched upon that oversized wooden chair, Sunset gave her own account of yesterday’s events, and now it was time to see where Cadance was at. Sunset grinned as pleasantly as she could, given the circumstances, and summed things up as follows: “So, yeah. Now I’m your student, for the time being.” Cadance blinked. “…Right now?” “Oh, no, I just wanted to make sure you knew. I don’t mind waiting until you’ve settled in to actually resume my studies. I’m sure you’ve got a lot on your plate.” Sunset did mind waiting, but again: play nice. “…I barely know the first thing about magic.” Well, that was certainly true. Princess Cadance had only had about a year at that point to adjust to her new horn, which she had, demonstrably, not. As she held her teacup aloft, the power in Cadance’s cornflower aura was undeniable, but there was an unsteady wobble to it, constantly micro-adjusting to thread a needle between the strength to lift it and the gentleness not to crush it in her levitative grip. Finishing off the cup, she set it down with a clank that made her flinch and check for chipped ceramic, before admitting, “If anything, I should be your magic student, from what I’ve heard.” Logically, Sunset was certain this was nothing but flattery, but… banish her if she didn’t like having her ego stoked all the same. She couldn’t help but chuckle. “I bet I could teach you a thing or two, Princess– “But, right, when it comes to my education: obviously, I don’t expect you to pick up where the Princess left off. Here’s the thing: so much of it was independent study, anyways, and the bits that weren’t… Well, I’m sure she keeps curricula around…” She waved her hoof around. “…Somewhere.” Frankly, Celestia probably didn’t write a banished thing down, but if Sunset got to keep her position as Royal Student without ever having to attend any lessons, left alone to her devices in a castle full of mystical lore… and perhaps negotiating access to the various chambers and archives forbidden to her… all the better! Cadance was about to respond when the front door lock started fidgeting, so she switched gears to pouring herself another cup. Trying not to sound nervous, Sunset asked, “Oh, were you expecting company?” “You could say that.” Cadance cleared her throat and raised her voice to holler, “It’s not locked!” After a moment’s pause, a large and familiar stallion muscled through the front door, chiding, “Well, it should be. We still don’t know if you’ll be the next targ– Shimmer. What are you doing here.” Sunset blanched, crudely clinging to her composure. “Oh! Shining Armor! What a surprise! I could say the same!” “I live here.” “…At the villa of Princess Mi Amore Cadenza?” “Yes.” His answer was immediate and entirely serious, but beneath that single word was just a subtle inflection of how-on-Equus-did-you-not-know-that. Over a series of calculations that spanned barely a microsecond, the social arithmetic updated itself in Sunset Shimmer’s head, coming to a conclusion that slapped her across the face. “Oh. Oh! That explains how you made Guard-Captain so young!” She glanced at Cadance with a conspiratorial grin, delighted to have sussed something so scandalous out. “If you want to believe that’s the reason why, sure,” he dismissed. “I’m asking again: what are you doing here, Shimmer?” Cadance answered for her, her tone mediative. “Sunset was just letting me know she was happy to continue her teachings under me, to the best of my ability.” She took a sip of her tea and added, letting her exhaustion slip, “Which is fine by me. What’s one more massive responsibility suddenly thrust upon me overnight?” “Right.” Shining strode up to Cadance and gave her a peck on the cheek, with a dash of haste and embarrassment that he hadn’t done so already. He continued, “And I’m assuming Sunset conveniently left out the part about how Princess Celestia dismissed her in disgrace, just two hours before the Princess disappeared.” Cadance turned a judgemental eye to Sunset. “She didn’t mention anything like that at all, no.” Sunset smiled and pointed a hoof at Shining. “That’s because I haven’t been properly dismissed!” She couldn’t let herself sound too menacingly smug, nor too indignant at Shining’s interference. “The paperwork was incomplete when the Princess vanished! She hadn’t gotten around to signing off on it.” Shining’s eyes narrowed. “How did you learn that?” Sunset chuckled, genuinely this time. “I figured it out all by myself when you, Raven, and Kibitz were the only ponies surprised to see me in the castle. Raven was kind enough” – or obsessively devoted enough to bureaucratic procedure – “to inform me of my unchanged status until the necessary royal signature can be acquired.” Sunset was only 80% certain that would hold up in a court of law, but it was all she had. “Sunset…” Cadance took on a wary tone, pressing closer to the meat-shield that was Shining. “You didn’t make Celestia disappear just to retain your prospects as a potential Princess, did you?” It was a disarmingly naïve question. Sunset had watched the Day Court’s politics for years. You didn’t just ask your suspected conspirators if they were conspiring against you. What was Celestia teaching her? …It also implied Cadance believed that Princesshood was part of Sunset’s life trajectory, before… all this. So stunning was Cadance’s question that Sunset nearly fell out of her chair. Once she caught herself, she shook her head vigorously enough to mess up her hair. “What? Of course not!” Cadance cast her eyes to Shining, raising a brow. “It’s a possibility we can’t rule out,” he said. Her horn lit up to thread the loose strands of crimson and gold back into her mane. “Uh, yes, you can! A scheme that idiotic would totally blow up in my face! Be–Besides being evil, of course.” “‘Blow up?’ Care to expand on that?”, Cadance invited. “Well, for one, you haven’t even finished your Princess training, so I can’t imagine you’ve been taught whichever mystic, sacred ritual Celestia uses to ascend ponies like you or me into alicornhood.” For all Sunset knew, Cadance didn’t even know how to move the celestial bodies, and everypony would have to deal with the wrong, lowercase kind of ‘eternal sunset’ watching over them for however long it took either to bring Celestia back, or for one of the two of them to learn cosmic manipulation on her own. “And even if you did know how,” Sunset continued, “and you did make me the Princess I deserv– if you did make me a Princess? What would I even be inheriting, when the crown came to me? A nation in chaos?” Of course, Sunset was pretty sure she could handle a nation in chaos – it just sounded like a pain in the flanks that she could do without. “I mean, I would be Princess before you. I take it you don’t trust me to get things under control?” She… didn’t seem that hurt by the implication, like there was an unspoken ‘either’ at the end there. While the answer was ‘yes’, Sunset pretended it was ‘maybe’ instead. Something, something, when you’re in a hole, dig slower. “Well, okay, maybe you do, but maybe you don’t! Just, realistically, a Princess straight-up vanishing is the scale of problem Equestria hasn’t faced in centuries, if not millennia.” Cadance did not appear to react one way or another, which Sunset could not be confident was a good thing, so Sunset decided to recontextualize it in a way that hopefully took most of the insult off. “You haven’t exactly had a chance to prove your rulership skills one way or the other, have you?” “Well, I’m going to have to, soon enough,” Cadance groaned, casting a glance out the bay window of the breakfast nook, to a sun in pretty much the opposite place it was supposed to be. “Anyways, Shining, dear, do you buy this?” Shining studied Sunset with a glare that still didn’t like her or her face one bit, but which no longer bore any accusation. “While we can’t completely rule out her involvement with The Incident… it is very unlikely. Unless she was somehow able to mastermind this entire plot – abduction, artifact theft, and weather sabotage –” – so the rain definitely wasn’t an accident – “in the hoofful of hours between me showing her the door and discovering her with Flash Sentry, she’s not our prime suspect, either.” With a sigh, he added, “Things would have been so much simpler if she was.” He sat down at the breakfast table, joining the two of them and resting his weary head on his hooves. “Instead, Sunset here is the reason Bracer Impact gets to go home to his husband and foals. He was the only guard with any coronal signatures from Miss Shimmer on him, and they matched the profile of a CPR spell. Whatever the other facts are, she did save a stallion’s life, when she could have fled the scene of somepony else’s crime instead. For all she knew at the time (as she claims) the looking glass was just down the hall, and nopony could have followed her.” Cadance stared into her tea before downing the whole cup and taking a deep breath. “So why didn’t you, Sunset?”, she finally asked. Sunset gulped. The truth was not compelling and it revealed her weakness, but she didn’t have anything else prepared. “I couldn’t. I just couldn’t. It wouldn’t have been right.” Shining rolled his eyes. “Hey! I saw that. Look, listen, okay, maybe I could have moved on if I didn’t hesitate in the first place. Maybe if I was the one who put him on the floor like that, I would have been able to rationalize past it. But the moment I started thinking about what if I was in his shoes, I just… had to do something.” She shrugged. Cadance hummed, refilling her tea for the… honestly, nopony in that room knew how many times she had done so at that point. “Well, that answers that.” That wasn’t an acknowledgement. The tone was off. That was a dropping-of-the-subject. Either Cadance didn’t believe Sunset, or she wanted to project skepticism, or – Sunset allowed – maybe she was just so tired she didn’t really have a response. After a few awkward moments of silence, Cadance asked, “Why did Celestia dismiss you, anyways?” Sunset opened her mouth to answer, but Shining cut her off. “Snooping where she shouldn’t be, against Celesia’s orders, and getting rebellious when she got caught. After enough repeat offenses, she decided enough was enough. That’s what I was told.” So he was given – or was choosing to give – a very vague picture. The latter seemed unlikely, given his responsibility for Cadance’s and the state’s security, but his thoughts on the matter were proving more conflicted than Sunset took him for. “Did you have anything more specific to add, Shimmer?” It was unclear what Shining wanted. He could have been prompting details out of her, or he could have been evaluating her honesty and discretion. “Both of you already know it had to do with the missing mirror, so… not really. Just… that I’m still upset with the Princess and her decision.” “I understand,” Cadance assured her, and it sounded reasonably genuine. Then she hummed. The next words out of her mouth were ice. “You know, I could just say no. If a Royal signature is the only thing stopping you from being dismissed from Celestia’s service, when she clearly didn’t want you as her student anymore, then I just have to sign those forms as acting Princess, and you’d be officially dismissed.” It took every ounce of composure not to start screaming and shouting at Cadance. After all the effort she went to, making a fantastic case for herself… “But,” the Princess-in-Training continued, “that seems kind of mean. I don’t know you very well, outside of the rumors…” Sunset cringed. She would have to do something about her reputation. If there was anything left she could do. “But I don’t give too much credence to rumors, and I have never heard a single unkind word about you from Celestia.” Sunset blinked, jaw going slightly slack. That was surprising. Sunset kinda figured Celestia groaned and nagged about her to the nearest listener the moment Sunset was out of earshot, so… was Cadance lying, or was Celestia? “And even though it would seem you have your flaws, like any other pony – myself included – you don’t seem too bad. If nothing else, Celestia had to see something worthwhile in you if she made you her student in the first place.” Pity. That was what she saw. A sight that evoked pity. No need to spit that out, though. Instead, “So… what are you saying, Princess?” “I’m saying I’m willing to give you another chance.” She smiled uncomfortably, internally debating something until she added, “Besides, no matter what else is true about you, there just aren’t a lot of mages in your generation who have your level of talent. I’m just gonna come out and say it: I might need somepony as versed in magic as you at my side. There’s… There’s a lot going on right now.” Hope was not an emotion Sunset felt very often. She didn’t need it. She had everything she could hope for. ‘Had’ being the keyword. Hope felt like teleporting into the stratosphere without any way of knowing if somepony was going to catch her. It was sickening. Stomach-churning. Once she became an alicorn, she would never need to hope again. “So… that’s a yes?”, she ventured. “Yes, Sunset, you can continue being the Royal Student.” Shining Armor shut his eyes and took a deep breath. He looked like he was biting his tongue. He settled on saying, “I hope you’ve learned your lesson, and you won’t repeat the mistakes you made under Princess Celestia’s tutelage with Cadance. I’m going to be watching you.” Sunset really wanted to protest against that. She’d already secured the bag, so it probably couldn’t hurt to just ask, “Why?” “Because it’s his job,” Cadance answered for him, “and he does it very well.” Again with the mediation. “Now, I think we’ve all had a very long day… literally… so I think we should end this discussion here. We can go over the finer details later.” Fair enough. Sunset did feel a yawn coming on. “Fine. Keep in touch; you know where to find me.” She clambered out of her chair and made for the door. She was halfway outside when she remembered to add, “And I almost forgot – Thank you!” These words did not come to her instinctively. It would be a lot easier to manipulate ponies if they did. With that, Sunset was gone – very gone. In a flash of aqua she was back in a palace dorm she had all but expected never to see again, twice-over. Nothing had changed since yesterday morning. The palace staff never received any orders to pack up her things, nor had Sunset’s demand that everypony stay out of her room been infringed upon by overzealous cleaners. All her overdue books remained unreturned: stacked in any free corner, or used as coasters for the old dishes and cups she couldn’t be bothered to take back to the kitchen. And yet, despite everything being the exact same, give or take a few specs of dust, and despite how little time it had been, Sunset couldn’t help but feel an aura of… nostalgia? alienation? both? It was probably due for some redecoration. After she got some sleep. Her bedsheets still trailed off the bed where she’d awoken, groggy, from a recurring nightmare brought on by terrible sleeping posture. –A nightmare that, in retrospect, may have pushed her to be a little reckless with her pursuit of knowledge and get herself caught. Too tired to fuss with the blinds on her western-facing window, she instead buried her head under a pillow to blot out the sun that should be over in the east.
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Princess Cadance,Shadowbolts (EqG),Shining Armor,Smolder,Sunset Shimmer,Alternate Universe,Drama,My Little Pony: Equestria Girls,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Violence
Empathy is Magic, Pt. 1
An alternate timeline in which somepony else got to the mirror before Sunset, stealing it and Celestia away. Acting Princess Cadance now has to assemble a team of Bearers on short notice, with Sunset's help.
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<p>Cast out of the Celestial Palace, Sunset Shimmer is about to take life into her own hooves and seize what rightfully belongs to her.</p><p>Only problem is, somepony else got to the mirror, first. It's gone, vanished.<br/>So is Celestia.</p><p>All of a sudden, Sunset goes from a disgraced scholar, banned from the palace grounds, to a valuable asset of Acting Princess Cadance's desperate scramble to hold the Principality of Equestria together and figure out what on Equus even happened to the Princess of the Sun.</p><p>Part of Sunset's second chance entails trying not to peeve off the ponies giving her a second chance. The other part is being forced by bureaucracy and harsh deadlines to make friends with ponies who are even more insufferable than Sunset.</p><p>Comes after <a href="/story/549639/stay-of-execution" rel="nofollow">Stay of Execution</a>, but that work is not required to appreciate this one.</p>
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2024-02-17T02:13:20+00:00
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Sunset sat at the foot of the empty Diurnal Throne, watching over a throne room just as desolate. There was an attempt to argue that she should be sitting on the throne (to allow her to command the necessary attention and totally not because she wanted to play pretend Princess) but Shining insisted and Cadance requested she did not, so she begrudgingly held down the dais and monitored this sad excuse for a Day Court. Almost all scheduled solicitors had cancelled their appointments. They insisted they needed a Princess to render her judgement, not some jumped-up Royal Student. What pedantic, self-absorbed fops, thinking they were too good for the future Princess of Flame. Once Sunset figured out how to get her wings, she’d make sure these prissy little whiners never even got the time of day from her, no matter how much they grovelled. The worst part was, they’d settled for an earth pony plenty of times before. That aide with the nerdy glasses and out-of-style manedo, Raven Inkwell, was the usual emergency secretary for the times in which Princess Celestia was unable to hold court herself. The Princess had all those charity fundraisers to show up to and smile at, after all. On those occasons, the gentry might lodge their complaints with Raven only begrudgingly, but they respected her enough to leave them with her at all. Sadly, Raven was currently buried under the mountain of paperwork that a legal transition of power brought with it. Cadance was likewise unavailable, as majordomo Kibitz was briefing her on all of the duties and schedules she would be taking over, somewhere else in the Celestial Palace. This was expected to take all day at the least. Naturally, Shining Armor was bodyguarding Cadance. Very naturally. What a juicy bit of trivia that was! How long had Sunset been out of the loop? She really should have been paying more attention to the gossip circulating the servants’ quarters and bureaucrats’ water-coolers. She didn’t usually listen to that garbage – not that she was by any means above rumor-mongering; rather, most of it was useless to her: lies spread about completely irrelevant noponies to adjust the social status of other completely-irrelevant noponies. They didn’t have any good dirt on anypony that mattered. Or if they did, it was on Sunset. That might have been the bigger reason she stayed away from the gossips. Back to the point – until such a time as a current, flesh-and-blood alicorn Princess was able to hold a “real” court instead, the only pony vaguely qualified and available was Sunset Shimmer. She had been put in the throne room both to keep the scant few appointments that weren’t cancelled (not that she was allowed to do more than say “Sorry, bud; we can’t help you with that right now”) and to ensure that she had guards watching her at all times. They still thought she might have done it. Said guards’ eyes were, however, occupied with the rabble immediately outside of the throne room. Nobles and peasants alike pressed shoulder-to-shoulder, none of which had an appointment but each of which burned with a thousand questions about the future of their very lives and livelihoods. The clamor, bleeding through the heavy marble doors, was so obnoxious it kept Sunset from coming up with something to compare it to. If she weren’t stuck here, Sunset might have spent the day on independent study, or done some investigations of her own into the Incident. How do you steal an alicorn? If a being that powerful doesn’t want to be stolen, then they won’t. They shouldn’t. And yet, one did. How did they subdue Celestia? To what extent did they incapacitate her? She glanced at her saddlebags, tossed to the side of the throne, where a brown buckram spine, banded with gold, peeked out from under the fastened flap. She had brought several books with her (getting dragged along to Day Court was always tedious, even when she wasn’t presiding over dust) but the one trying to spill out of the bag was different from the rest. Maybe she should– A sudden jolt in the rainbowed light streaming through the stained glass windows commanded Sunset’s notice – and the crowd’s too, managing to hush them for a solid five seconds before they started up even louder. With a groan, Sunset melted out of the regal pose she spent the whole day putting on and laid her head on the throne, one ear mashed into the cushion and the other smothered by the royal throne-pillow. She couldn’t bring herself to care that these articles were intimately acquainted with her mentor’s butt; it was that or develop a migraine. Anyways, from the way the sun lurched fifteen degrees counterclockwise along the horizon, still as low as ever, it must have been time for Cadance to try grappling with the big ball of fire herself – and she definitely didn’t get it in one. To facilitate this at all, there must have been an artifact or something involved, because it was as much Celestia’s marked destiny as it was her alicornic magical prowess that enabled her to command the sun’s obedience. Whatever tool or spell Cadance was using to make up for the fact that her talent was, like, love or something, there was a solid seventy-five percent chance Star Swirl the Bearded was behind its invention. The crazy old wizard had his hooves in a lot of pies (though Sunset suspected at least a few of them had to be misattributed). The twenty-five percent of uncertainty represented the picture Celestia herself painted of the stallion, based on knowing him personally: he was an undeniably brilliant man… with the foresight of a river salmon. If he invented an Alicorn Obsolescence Device, it was because he could, not because he knew the Princess of Night and Custodian of the Moon well enough to predict she would try to usurp her sister the way she ended up doing nine or so centuries after his presumed death, requiring Celestia to take up both orbits. But hey, maybe the Sole-ar Remaining Princess had to scramble to figure out how to take care of the moon once she booted Luna into it. She had to have figured something out. The moon still rose and fell, didn’t it? –The last couple days, notwithstanding. Sunset supposed there was a possibility her solution was just “be a supremely-powerful alicorn”, but while yeah, she was one of those, she was also a meticulous planner – quite Star Swirl’s opposite, in that respect. Celestia had to have a contingency in place for her own absence. To go two-thousand years and not come up with something was just not her flavor of stupid. Whatever the case, Cadance seemed to finally have it figured out. When the sun, after doing a merry jig throughout the sky and taunting everypony with a brief dip below the horizon, finally set and stayed set, the world’s relief was instantaneous and palpable, like the lid was taken off a boiling pot. A portion of the crowd split away on their own, and the rest followed suit when the exhausted guards at the door announced, “Night has fallen! The Court of Day is no longer in session!” Oh, sweet silence. Thank Cele– …Thank Cadance? That was gonna take some getting used to. In the meantime, Sunset just basked in the soft, dark quiet that surrounded her head. Then Shining Armor cleared his throat as loudly as ponily possible. Sunset sprang away from the throne like it was a cookie jar she’d been caught with her hoof in. Cadance, by his side, bore an amused little smile. Shining, in full armor, did not. She had to seize control of the conversation. “Oh, hey, guys!” Cadance seemed to shy from formal address, so Sunset kept it casual. “I see you’ve got the sun under control!” Cadance gave the soft, exhausted chuckle of a champion after a duel viciously-fought and narrowly-won, trying not to lose consciousness once the adrenaline wore off. “I’m getting the hang of it.” She idly brushed her hoof against the new amulet around her neck, depicting an eclipse of citrine and moonstone on jet. “The moon won’t budge, though, no matter how much force I put behind my horn. For the time being, Alaghistan is just going to have to put up with having the moon overhead at all times.” “So we can expect an extra-ornery donkey ambassador.” “More so than the usual,” Cadance drily confirmed, her smirk holding strong. She seemed to be in a good mood, all things considered. It was that taste of true power, wasn’t it, wrestling with the sky itself? Which is why Sunset maybe felt a smidge bad that she was about to bring her back down to earth. “So… What’s the plan for, you know, finding Celestia? You’ve got one, right?” As predicted, Cadance’s smile died on her lips, though Shining lost his frown. Did Sunset just win points with him? “As a matter of fact,” he announced, “we do.” “I’m all ears.” But Shining just turned to look at his Princess, a brow raised. At her gentle nod, he finally, grumblingly, began: “The unfortunate fact of the matter is that there is annoyingly little to tell us who is responsible or where they took the Princess. Currently, the Royal Guard is doing everything in its power to scour the Palace for clues without disrupting palatial security.” “Cool. Have you figured out how they got out with an entire rutting magic mirror yet?” “Yes.” His eyes narrowed. “That information is classified.” Sunset threw her hooves up. “Oh, come on! You can tell me! I won’t blab!” “That’s not what I’m worried about, Miss Takes-‘Forbidden’-as-a-Challenge.” He flinched at the hoof thrust in his face. “Hah! So you’re saying they went through somewhere forbidden!” “I… can neither confirm nor deny that claim.” Flashing the smuggest grin, Sunset backed off with a shrug. “Yeah, well, it’s not like it narrows it down much. I’m forbidden from the palace greenhouse,” she spat. Before anypony could inquire as to why, Sunset asked, “So what else?” “Well, we’re keeping an eye out for ransom notes. If that’s all this is about, then we’ll pay whatever they ask and increase security so it doesn’t happen again.” And if whoever was responsible was in earshot, they’d surely up the price. But… “That’s not what this is, though, is it? Why bother with the mirror?” The look on Shining’s face was… surprised. One of the bad kinds. Condescending surprise, fighting off a smile, like Sunset had just innocently said the stupidest thing he’d ever heard her say. He ventured to ask, “…How much of that book did you actually read?” Cadance tilted her head. “Which book…?” Sunset filled her in. “Celestia caught me with one of Star Swirl’s travelogues. Observations on the Parallels of Royalty Through the Looking Glasses, if you wanna check it out.” “I’d like to say ‘pass’, but it sounds like it might contain relevant information…” Sunset then turned to Shining Armor. “I read enough to know that if I didn’t rush the mirror that night, it was gonna close for another two and a half years. I wasn’t gonna let that opportunity slip me by.” Shining’s voice took on an air of confident superiority. Ugh. “Would you have changed your mind if you’d read far enough to learn that magic does not exist on the other side of that mirror?” The parallel train of thought that had been chugging in the background of Sunset’s mind ever since opening that book came to a crashing halt against a mountain that sprang out of complete nowhere. “Guh– Huh? What?!” “There’s no magic.” He fizzled a cantrip on purpose, poofing smoke out of his horn, as if a demonstration would make such an absurd idea click. “Bullscat! How does that work? Is it just, what, dead on the other side? Even exclusion zones like the Everfree need a bit of magic to keep life going.” Shining just shrugged. “Only Star Swirl knew. He decided the best thing to do with that knowledge was use Looking Glass 9-1-13 as his own personal garbage disposal. Safer than letting magical runoff into the water table.” So maybe he… threw some artifact away that had the power to create alicorns? …Was that how Celestia and Luna…? –Eh, she didn’t have enough info to entertain that blasphemy just yet. Though… something else was bothering Sunset, too. “Wait, where are you even getting this from? Wouldn’t you know if you read his book?” “I did. A heavily-redacted version, issued to myself upon achieving the rank of Captain of the Royal Guard, which I burned after reading, as instructed. Performing my duties requires an understanding of the dangers lurking within the Palace.” He took a deep breath. “Frankly, Princess Celestia would have some choice words with me for telling you anything I told you just now.” “So why’d you tell me now?” “The point has gone moot.” Only for thirty moons. Or, for a more accurate translation of the old Ponish to contemporary Equestrian: thirty months. “I don’t think that’s it. How do I know you aren’t lying to discourage me from the truth?” “I’m not lying.” Woooooooow. So convincing. “Prove it, then. Why don’t we crack that bad boy back open and let me pick up where I left off?” “That’s out of the questio–” Cadance circled around to rest a wing on each of their withers. “Sunset, if it would help you trust us, I might be able to authorize a” – she turned to Shining – “supervised” – back to Sunset – “reading of the original text on the mirror portal. Would that be alright?” “…Yeah. That would.” Though, if they were willing to break Celestia’s forbiddance to prove their honesty, maybe they weren’t lying about that particular detail. “I suppose that would not be entirely out of the question,” Shining conceded. “Thank you, Your H–” A pinion feather gently brushed his lips. “Please. She already knows.” Shining Armor rolled his eyes. “…Thank you, dear.” Sunset could make fun of their romance later; she still had objections to voice. “But if you’re not lying, then again: why tell me any of this?” “Well,” Shining answered, “you already knew too much.” A… pensive quality lapsed into his voice. “Maybe if you had a more complete picture, you’d reconsider whatever you’re planning to do with Star Swirl’s old trash can.” “Well, I am, so thanks.” It was valuable intel. If Sunset ever got another chance, she’d need some hired muscle to cover for her lack of magic, and she’d need to keep them in the dark about what their actual goal was so they didn’t try to take her ticket to alicornhood for themselves. They’d gotten really sidetracked, though, hadn’t they? “Sooooooooo…”, Sunset drawled, “what does the other side of the mirror being… magicless… have to do…” Suddenly, Sunset remembered where she found Star Swirl’s book. It wasn’t on a shelf. It was just sitting out on a cart, waiting to be returned. Oh. “They took Celestia through the mirror,” Sunset concluded, bereft the usual heat of her voice, “where her alicorn magic… wouldn’t mean scat.” Oh, no. “And… where… she’ll be stuck for the next two and a half years…” Oh, rutt. “– If we even find the mirror before then…” Princess Cadance and Guard-Captain Shining Armor both dipped their heads. “That’s the assumption we’re operating under,” Shining confirmed, raising his head again. “Which is why locating Looking Glass 9-1-13 will be the top priority of every national agency, going forward, once we get a handle on things here.” Sunset burnt the distress of her realization into agitation. “…Why not now?” Shining closed his eyes and took another steadying breath. “There have been about as many complications with Cadance assuming the role of Acting Princess as you might expect. Just because we saw them coming doesn’t mean we can solve them with a poof of the horn.” “Bet I could.” Already, her horn was a-twinkle in turquoise. He raised an eyebrow. “Do you know a spell that can bend the leadership of every national agency in Equestria to unconditionally accept the command of an uncoronated Princess?” Sunset opened her mouth – and just as swiftly closed it, before opening it again. “…This feels like a trap.” “Heh.” “For your information, officer, I have never used a mind-control spell,” she lied, “because my academic studies on the subject were sanctioned by my mentor – you know, Princess Celestia – for the purposes of self-defense against it,” she half-truthed, “so I definitely don’t know anything on the level you’re asking for,” she finally truthed. The thing about mind control was that it wasn’t actually that hard to learn how to zap somepony with an emotional charge and get them to feel what you’re feeling. Unfortunately for Sunset, that sympathetic charge was drawn from the caster’s own emotional state, so instead of making the guardspony stationed at the Royal Ice Cream Freezer pliable enough to step aside and let Sunset in, it just filled the big, armored, stiletto-headed stallion with quivering, petulant rage that found its outlet in the teenage filly in front of him. She’d never run so fast in her life. Thankfully, he was so unfathomably mad that he forgot he could use magic. Point is, developing her skills at mind control was kinda on the backburner for the time being. “So you say.” “I do say. So, what, you can’t get the ERS to hoof your taxes over?” Shining shook his head. “More that Equestria’s various intelligence and law enforcement agencies take orders from neither the Captain of the Royal Guard nor, quote, ‘miscellaneous uncrowned alicorns’, unquote.” He ground his teeth. “They’re only going to listen to a fully-coronated Princess. At best, until we’ve thrown the proper ceremony – which we are currently researching the minimal requirements for so we can get it done as quickly as possible – we can only make recommendations as to how they should proceed with their individual investigative efforts, if they’ve even launched any to begin with.” Sunset blinked. “…What do you mean, ‘if’? Who are these wastes of standing around that haven't even started looking? Do they not want to save the Princess?!” Some purges might be in order – if not now, then once she was in charge. Sunset would not abide a do-nothing government. “Oh, it would be a feather in the cap for any organization. Unfortunately, the impact of Celestia’s absence has reached pretty far. There’s panic all over the Principality, wildlife agitated by the disruption of the day/night cycle, neighboring countries with a vested interest in Equestrian vulnerability, and…” – Shining Armor took a very deep sigh – “the noble estate.” “The noble estate.” Of course. “M-hm.” “What’re they up to?” Probably some power play or other, but Sunset wanted specifics. “Most of them? Not much. We did good by accepting the Royal responsibility as quickly as we did. Having Cadance as Acting Princess does a lot to plug and obscure what is, objectively, a pretty sizable vacuum of power. –Sorry, dear.” Cadance giggled. “I’m not under any illusion that I’m a perfect substitute for Celestia, Shiny.” “Of course not.” He put on a smirk that looked like it was supposed to be suave but mostly came off as dorky. “You’re one of a kind.” And yet, somehow, it still made Cadance blush. If Sunset thought she was pink to begin with… Sunset impatiently tapped a hoof on the marble tile. “Save it for later, lovebirds. I wanna hear about these problem ponies. I’m gonna guess some of them do see the vacuum for what it is?” “You’d be right. Word from our ears in high society – who at least respect my authority over Palatial security enough to keep me informed – is that there’s a small contingent of nobleponies who see our swiftness to take control as incontrovertible evidence that…” – Sunset could just about make out steam puffing from his nostrils – “that we got rid of Celestia in our own bid for power, and so they’ve decided to rally around somepony they see as a ‘more legitimate’ claimant to the throne.” “…Huh?” Squinting, Sunset looked at Cadance’s wings and horn for several seconds, double-checking that they hadn’t just walked off of her body while she wasn’t looking, then back to Shining. “Who on Equus could possibly be more legit than an alicorn who’s also Celestia’s niece?” Something unexpected happened. Shining Armor not only smiled – but did so in an effort to hold in a laugh. “You haven’t seen the ‘Prince’ loitering around the Palace the last couple days, have you?” “…Blueblood?” – Title-firstname-lastname ‘Duke Prince Blueblood’ in full. The less thought about him, the better. – “I avoid him like the plague, if I can help it. Why?” A snort escaped the Guard-Captain’s lips, but otherwise, he just stared at her– “Oh! No way! Oh, sweet Celestia, you’ve gotta be kidding!” Bafflement and irritation fought a war in her head, ultimately won by the insurgent third faction of hilarity. Sunset laughed, “That fop?!” That was all it took to push Shining Armor over the edge. His hoof-stomping guffaw rattled his suit of armor like a carillon of pots and pans. Then Cadance had to go and interject, “Come, now. If my dear ‘cousin’ wants to try his hoof at raising the sun, maybe we should let him,” with just the most serenely-Celestial poker face. This, of course, was likely to burn out all the mere unicorn’s magic. Permanently. Sunset doubled over, howling with laughter, thumping a hoof against the pauldron of the Guard-Captain rolling on the floor beside her, while Cadance giggled above. A few minutes later, shaking the last dregs of mirth from her lungs, Sunset said to Cadance, “I didn’t know you had a mean side.” This was intended as a compliment of the highest order. “Everypony does. I try not to let it out too often… but some ponies make it very difficult. –Anyways, what about the nobility we’re actually worried about?” That almost sent everypony back to the floor, but thankfully, Shining held it together long enough to report, “Right, the actual threat right now is going to come from those laboring under the assumption that Princess Mi Amore Cadenza will be some clueless ingénue who can be flattered and groomed to favor whatever self-serving goal they’re after.” All of a sudden, Sunset Shimmer got really nervous. “Instead of a grown mare with years of political theory taught to her by Princess Celestia herself,” Cadance groaned. Even more nervous! Sunset hoped her smile was convincingly innocent. Cadance’s sure was. “Don’t worry, Sunset; I already know what you’re after, which makes you a lot safer to trust.” Sunset took a step back, trying to hold in what was now a nervous giggle as her ears fell flat. “Do I make it that obvious?” “Yes,” Shining flatly intoned. “If you wore clothes, you’d sew alicorn wings to your sleeves.” That was just lame enough to diffuse the tension. Grinding her teeth, Sunset admitted, “Okay, fine, yeah. I wanna be an alicorn and you’re my most viable route to that goal. What are you gonna do about it?” Cadance hummed for a moment, feigning thought. “Well, I think I’ll keep you by my side as Royal Student and sometimes-advisor, where your own agenda, my sole ability to satisfy that agenda, and your misequinist disposition will lead you to spot and point out other schemers in my court that I and my trusting nature wouldn’t have noticed, in order to secure your chances at alicornhood.” “…And you’re just going to tell me that.” Including that Sunset had a chance of getting wings under Cadance. “Of course! I kinda prefer to be transparent with ponies. I am the heiress to the Crystal Empire, after all.” Sunset’s ire at Cadance so confidently laying her out like that died in agony, then came back as a revenant of pun-induced anguish. Said anguish, however, left her incomprehensibly sputtering as she tried to drum up a comeback. Cadance used the opportunity to continue. “For a more serious answer… Aunt Tia spoke at great length on the value of discretion and omission, but Honesty is a Harmonic virtue, and if I’m going to reign over the birth-empire of Harmonism one day, I should probably actually live up to the values of my little ponies. I could never quite reconcile these two styles of rule, so… I know I’m forgoing a tool that’s served my mentor well, but I have my reasons.” That afforded Sunset some time to recover her senses. “If that means I won’t have to put up with half the dumb secrets-that-don’t-need-to-be-secrets with you as with Celestia? By all means, rule however you want.” Sunset would not hold herself to such a ridiculous standard, of course. Cadance got down to Sunset’s level, resting her chin on her forepasterns. “So what are you going to do, Sunset Shimmer?” “Well if you hit me with another pun that bad, I’m going to make a crystal wine glass out of your sk–” Wait, no, backtrack. Shining was giving Sunset a scary look. “I– I mean, I guess I’ll keep watching over Day Court until you’re ready to take over, and if you need somepony to do your lying for you – I can do that.” Cadance’s smile brightened. “Well, actually, I have some good news on the Day Court front: you won’t be presiding, tomorrow.” “I won’t?” Sunset wasn’t sure if she was disappointed to be relieved of a Princess-adjacent duty or relieved to be spared another day of utter boredom interspersed with forced displays of sympathy. “Ms. Inkwell’s made a big enough dent in the paperwork that she’s free to watch the throne tomorrow – while we run some errands together.” Sunset raised an eyebrow. “What kind of errands?” “It’s kind of hard to explain. I’m trying to move forward with one of Celestia’s hanging projects, but I don’t really know where she left off.” Sunset must have let too much of a skeptical scowl slip through, because Cadance was quick to add, “Though I’m sure our trip will be worth both of our times.” If she said so. “Alright, so – just to get this clear – I’m going to be tagging along with the two of you, while you figure out what you’re even doing?” Cadance frowned. “Well, just me, actually, if that’s alright.” “Fine by me!“ A bit of an understatement. “But why isn’t your ‘bodyguard’ coming along?” Shining answered, grumbling: “Unfortunately, I’m stuck here tomorrow, coordinating some changes to palatial security procedures. You know, after you demonstrated several gaps in our routine.” “You’re welcome.” Captain Armor did not acknowledge her smugness beyond a snort. “Now, I say these plans can wait until I’m available, but my Princess insists it’s a matter of national security, so I’ve been overruled.” “Hah! That’s royal fiat for you.” He lowered his head to level with Sunset. “If my Princess comes back from your trip tomorrow with a hair out of place, you’d better have a very good explanation prepared as to why.” He meant it. Sunset knew better than to show fear, but she also knew better than to deny to herself that she felt it. Shining Armor wasn’t exactly a slouch, as mages go. “That’s enough, love,” Cadance chided. “Now, did anything worth noting come up during Day Court, Sunset?” Not… really? It wasn’t like any of her petitioners had known any info worth passing on. Though… “Actually… If we’re going to be doing this ‘honesty’ thing… I should probably let you in on a secret that was between me and Celestia. I don’t really want to, but it might be helpful for the investigation.” Two eyebrows raised in silence. Levitating over her saddlebags, Sunset explained, “You said there’s no magic on the other side of the mirror, but if that’s the case, how did Star Swirl get back here to write about his journey?” Shining didn’t have an answer for that. Just a shrug. “So I’m thinking, some kinds of magic do still work there. They have to. And of any kind of magic, I’d expect enchantments to be the most, like, durable in a magic-free environment.” “Why’s that?”, inquired Cadance. “Any number of techniques, really. Internal recirculation, kelemagenic feedback harvesting, remote transmission, mechanically-focused design…” Cadance just stared at her, expectantly. Oh, right. Former pegasus. “…Enchantments that recycle an internal magic supply instead of taking it from ambient environmental magic; or power themselves off of the magic that the spell produced radiates; or receive a magic supply from another linked object; or use nonmagical functionality to minimize the power of enchantment the item needs to work.” “Oh!” Her eyes lit up. “So whatever Star Swirl brought to the other side, he also brought supplies that could make sure he’d be able to travel back.” “Yeah, something like that, but that isn’t quite what I was getting at.” At least she was quick on the uptake – that horn was not entirely wasted on her. Though, it was still abundantly clear that Sunset would be the teacher in their magic lessons, not the student as her title blatantly stated. She still wasn’t sure if that was to be a source of massive pride or irritation at the wasting of her time. But she could worry about that another time. “See, one of these books is enchanted.” Sunset undid the belt on her bag, then shrank down her aura to encapsulate only the thick brown book she was after. The rest of the tomes, still in her bags, hit the floor with a resounding whump. She hesitated, staring into the perfect likeness of her own cutie mark emblazoned on the cover of her… personal journal. ‘Private’ was not an apt term. Its heft was ever so familiar in her telekinetic grip. The other two regarded her with silent curiosity. “Celestia gave me this when I first started studying under her.” She held it up for them to see– –But only the cover. They didn’t need to see what she’d written inside. What she’d been writing, about once an hour, since waking up the day before. She could not recover if they did. As she parted the covers, the smells of decade-old, cinnamon-oil-scented paper tried, once again, to drag her back into the optimism of her preteen years. Lying awake in her new dorm in the palace for the first time, too ecstatic to sleep… that twelve-year-old filly really thought life could only get better, didn’t she? Tentatively, her horn lit up in cyan, just to etch another word into the pages. |Hello?| She permitted herself to be wracked by the terrible vertigo of hope, “It’s connected,” she began to explain, “to–” And then Sunset Shimmer heard the most soul-crushing sound she’d ever heard. The saddlebags over Shining’s armor buzzed, clank-clank-rattling the layered steel beneath. With a sharp intake of breath, he levitated another book from the flap, almost identical to Sunset’s book, except for the mark on the front cover – Celestia’s brilliant, gentle sun. “That would…” he began, then struggled for words. “That would explain this, that we found. –Lying open, in her chambers, earlier today.” Silence reigned. Dry of mouth, out of breath, her heart retreating so far aft it might well fall out her backend, Sunset realized exactly what Shining Armor was implying. That first inquiry if Princess Celestia was there; the second and third, too; the defeated theory that maybe this wasn’t reaching anypony, and the supposition that she was free to write whatever she wanted; then, every scrawled insult; every threat on the Royal life; every demand for an apology; every plea for forgiveness; every time she switched from grief to rage and back to grief; every attempt to sound calm and collected as she entertained the hope that maybe Celestia was just slow to respond, and every tear dripped onto the scented paper as she did so; every admission Sunset felt anything other than contempt for the mare who took her in– It had been copied, by a linked enchantment, into that other book: an ink-drop slurry of motive and heartbreak. Which had then been seen. They had raked their eyes across the tenderest flesh of her heart. They had seen every ache she wouldn’t admit with a crossbow to her head. They knew her. It made her itch so bad. Then her world went pink, and soft, and warm. “I’m so sorry, Sunset,” Cadance confessed, through wings laced over the unicorn’s withers. “There wasn’t really any way to investigate without reading it. I’m so sorry.” That was all she said. If the Princess of Love had tried to twist that knowledge into a statement about how it was clear Sunset really loved her mentor all along, Sunset would have incinerated Cadance and then herself. But she didn’t. She simply allowed Sunset to shudder and shiver in her embrace as the last rays of sunlight slunk behind the neighboring mountains. When the palace lamplighters came to the throne room, Captain Armor requested they keep out and return later. When he came back from the door, he admitted, “I’m also sorry, Sunset,” and declared, “On my word as Guard-Captain, you’re cleared of any suspicion of perpetrating The Incident. I understand now that your involvement was purely coincidental; the motive is only there for a crime of passion, not something so clearly premeditated as The Incident. I… hope that helps you feel better.” It really didn’t. Could anything? … Sunset Shimmer woke up the next morning with no recollection of ever going to bed in the first place. A note sat on her nightstand: |Sorry for entering your room without permission but I couldn’t just leave you on the floor! I hope you can forgive me just this once! -Cadance <3|. Every single |i| was dotted with hearts.
Big Imagination E
550712
1
Nightmare Rarity,Other,Spike,Anthro,Dark,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
The Nightmare Conquest Starting
After the wedding the Nightmare Couple begins their conquest
complete
-1
-1
<p>A few months passed since the wedding and now Spike and Nightmare Rarity begin there conquest as king and queen through Equestria.</p><p>This was requested by ChazMLPFIM.</p>
teen
2024-02-02T17:55:18+00:00
2024-02-02T18:06:27+00:00
191
It was a dark night in Equestria. And reason why is because after the wedding of Nightmare Rarity and Spike they became king and queen and plunged everything in darkness. Everything in Ponyville was in total nightmares and darkness throughout the hometown. We now cut to the new Nightmare Castle in the Shadow Realm where Spike and Nightmare Rarity live. They were in the throne room and discussing something. "Oh Spikey. I can't believe that it's been months since we are now together." Nightmare Rarity said. "I couldn't believe it either. It only seemed like months ago when we first got married. And you are due for a child soon." Spike said rubbing her pregnant belly. Then she felt a kick. "Oh! The baby's kicking. Spikey maybe we should let him or her calm down for now." Nightmare Rarity suggested. "Yeah that's a good idea. We don't want the baby getting all rowdy in there. Anyways you needed to talk about something?" Spike asked. "Yes. Come with me darling. It's about our conquest of all Equestria." Nightmare Rarity said. So the two made their way to the meeting room. While they were walking Spike can't help but stare at her butt. And when they finally arrived they sat down and Nightmare Rarity smirked. "Were you looking at my behind, darling?" He blushed a little. "Naughty boy. Staring at your queen's butt huh? Well we can worry about that later. Right now we need to discuss where else we can conquer since were king and queen now." Nightmare Rarity said. "Ok dear. So where are we gonna conquer next since we took Ponyville?" Spike asked. "Easy my love. I decided to try and take the other lands. But to start things off were doing the Crystal Empire first. So I want you and our friends to seek it out and then go bring the dark side to the Empire. Can you do that?" Nightmare Rarity asked. "Yes my love. Nightmare Ailcorns!!!" Spike shouted and all of Rarity's friends came in female nightmare ninja outfits. "We have a mission. Let nothing stand in our way. We leave immediately!" And so the team all headed out to get the Crystal Empire to control. It was a long way there. But during their journey they came across a cave near the Crystal Empire. Spike went in and looked around seeing if there was anything in there. Then that's went he saw a Changeling and got a little scared. The Changeling's name is Thorax. "Oh my! A Changeling! An evil Changeling!!" Spike worried. "Wait! Wait! I'm not evil! I don't wanna hurt you!" Thorax said. That brought a confused look on his face. "Wait! I don't understand. Changelings are supposed to be evil... right?" Spike asked. "Evil? Oh, not me. All I've ever wanted is a friend." Thorax explained. We then cut to a flashback when he was just a baby years ago. "From the moment I first split my egg in the nursery hive..." Thorax started as he narrated. [changeling larva hissing] Baby Thorax: [whimpering] "I was part of the attack on Canterlot during the royal wedding, but I'd never seen true friendship like that! And I couldn't just steal it and feed on its love. I wanted to share it!" Thorax continued. Then an explosion went off. "After that, I knew I couldn't live with my kind anymore. I set off looking for love to share, but..." Thorax added. "But... what?" Spike asked. "I'm starving! And there's so much love in the Crystal Empire right now. It's what drew me here! But it's drivin' me crazy!" Thorax answered. "That would be from the royal Crystalling. It's pretty much a giant outpouring of light and love for a new baby." Spike explained. Then Thorax hissed. "Oh, sorry! I'm just so hungry! If I had a friend, maybe the love we shared could sustain me, but I don't think the Crystal Ponies want to be friends." "What if I told you there was somepony they respect and admire so much, he could convince them to give it a try?" Spike wondered. "If only that were true." Thorax said sadly. "It is! I mean, I am! It's me, Spike! Spike the Brave and Glorious and now the King of the Shadow Realm? I'm sure you've heard of me." Spike thought. "Nope. But I was raised by an evil queen. I'm Thorax. I can't believe you want to help me." He said. After Nightmare Spike found Thorax and learn he is friendly. Upon learning the reason why Thorax end up in the cave, Spike felt sorry for him. "You know what Thorax? What if you join me? That way you can have a few friends. But we have to give you a nightmare makeover in order for you to be with us." Spike offered. Thorax really wanted a friend and if Spike was offering him that chance then he had nothing to lose. "Ok Spike. I accept. I'll join you." Thorax agreed. So, after Thorax said yes he then told Nightmare Spike the location of the changeling kingdom and the throne. That was info that his wife needed to hear ASAP. After a long flight back to the Shadow Realm he informed her of the Changeling Kingdom and revealed the location. "So you're telling me that this Changeling Kingdom is located in this "Wuvy-Dovey Smoochy Land", which Changelings conquer and transform into their new center of operations?" Nightmare Rarity asked. "Yes. I know it sounds silly but that's where it is." Thorax answered. "Hmm very interesting. Well since you are willing to help us I hereby make you my general of the nightmare forces. Just a little magic will be placed on you and we can get started." Nightmare Rarity said. So once Nightmare Rarity learns the location of the changeling kingdom, she uses her magic and transforms Thorax into a nightmare metamorphosed changeling. Meanwhile, the brother of Thorax named Pharynx gasped as he felt this feeling of unease. Then he sense something's happening to Thorax. "Oh no. I think something happened. I better get Kevin and Ocellus and find him. I better make sure he's all right." Pharynx said determined. So Pharynx, along with Kevin the changeling and Ocellus, set out to find out what happened to Thorax. And back in the Shadow Realm Thorax is now the general of the nightmare forces wearing an general outfit, along with Flash and the others. "Ok Thorax dear. Me and Spikey have a little 'thing' to deal with in the bedroom. So your task is to train my forces hard enough so we'll be ready to take all the other lands. Can you do that?" Nightmare Rarity asked. "Yes ma'am. Your forces will be trained real hard for the conquest." Thorax said. "Alright nightmares! Let's head to the training grounds and begin!!" Once Thorax and all of the nightmare forces were gone to do their training the king and queen held each other and shared a kiss. "Ok my king. Now we gotta take care of your little booty problem. And don't worry I'll help you out." Nightmare Rarity said and whispered in his ear. "By playing with my ass." Spike smirked and they went up the stairs and held each other close. And that is what happened after they got married. Thorax is now the general of the nightmare forces, along with Flash and the others. And the conquest was only beginning.
Mocha Star
550715
1
Rumble,Thunderlane,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Sex
Brotherly Crush
Rumble has a crush on his big brother, Thunderlane.
complete
21
63
<p>Rumble has a crush on his big brother, Thunderlane, will anything come of it?</p><p>This story is more like a puppy love story than romance between bros.</p><p>Triggers: <span class="spoiler">Masturbation</span></p><hr/><p>Written for the <a href="/group/198529/incest-is-wincest/thread/531809/hearts-hooves-day-contest" rel="nofollow">Incest is Wincest Hearts and Hooves Day Contest</a></p>
mature
2024-02-02T17:51:58+00:00
2024-02-02T17:51:57+00:00
214
“Hey, big guy, time to wake up.” I heard a melodic male voice call to me, pulling me from Luna’s realm. I opened my purple eyes with a few blinks and saw him, the love of my life; my big brother, Thunderlane. “That’s more like it, champ. I’ve got breakfast ready for you, let’s get it while it’s hot.” I couldn’t help but smile and think about how hot he was. His dark gray fur, his cropped two tone mane, and the fact that he was a flier in the Wonderbolts. He had mares over every so often to fulfill his adult needs, and he was practically my parent; but that would be weird. I didn’t look at my dad the same way I looked at Thunderlane. I couldn’t, he wasn’t in my life like my big brother was. I nodded and got up as Thunderlane turned away and flicked his tail, showing me what I needed and someday would have filling me up. He didn’t know how I felt, and it hurt to know he might not feel the same. But, someday I’d tell him and we’d make love like lovers do. I know I’m still young, but I know what sex is. I masturbate and have had some experience with sex. Snails let me lick his penis and he did the same to me, to see what it was like. I loved it but he said it reminded him of licking a cooked carrot. I took it as a compliment, but that was as far as it went. He didn’t want to try anything more. Not like I wanted to. I often do stuff in the bath or shower. I think of how good it will feel and sometimes I use shampoo bottles or the plunger handle, imagining what it’ll be like when my big bro mounts me and fills me with his stallionhood. But, it’s not the same as what I think the real thing will be like. “I’ll be there in a couple minutes, I’ve gotta go to the bathroom.” I tell him and rub my eyes with my forelegs. “Sure thing, I’ll plate you up.” I hurried to the bathroom, hiding my erection as I watched his hips sway with each step, teasing me. I closed the door and sat down, wrapped gray my fetlocks around my penis and started stroking. A minute later I got the shivers and watched as my penis went soft, then receded into my sheath. Sighing, I finally went to the toilet to pee and then washed my forehooves. I could handle this. It’s just another start to the day with my brother. The sexiest stallion I know, sitting so close to me I could hold his giant hoof with mine. Lean in. Press my snout to his. He’d push me back and roll me to my belly and nibble my ear. I shook my head. I had to stop thinking of sex so much, it wasn’t going to do me any favors until we started doing it. I left the bathroom and went to the kitchen, smelling breakfast and when I walked in my brother was wearing an apron; a silly thing that was pink with lace frills. I giggled at him. “What? This old thing?” He used one of his strong wings to pat the apron. “Sit down, buddy, and let’s eat. I’ve got oatmeal deluxe this morning, then after we eat I was thinking we could play catch for a little bit before school starts.” I took my seat on the floor by the table at my spot and he served me a big bowl of oatmeal deluxe. Breakfast was good, but it was a school day so I had to hurry and eat. I didn’t really like how quickly the morning passed. One hour was all I got before I had to go to school for a tiring six whole hours surrounded by fillies that don’t know about my sexual preference or the stallion that holds my heart in his hooves. I have to keep up the act of being like my brother, even though fillies gross me out. They’re smelly, leave wet marks when they sit, and try to tease us colts by flicking their tails to show us their gross slits that smell weird and make me feel funny, but not in a good way. I want to push them into the grass whenever they do that, but I know I’ll just get into trouble. I have time to go outside and play catch with my brother for a little while and work on my flying while I do, hovering and chasing the ball above the ground before I have to land to pick it up and throw it back. I miss more than I catch, but it’s okay because that’s how I’m gonna be a great flier like Thunderlane. Time comes to go and I hurry to get my saddlebags on, my brother comes to help cinch my girth strap and I secretly smell his coat. He smells like the shampoo from the bottle I stuck halfway in my butt, thinking of him. I smile and feel the muscles inside me relax a little, letting myself drop out some. “There ya go, little bro. Woah, you’re showing a little. You should put that away before some filly sees it and-” I flap my wings and get some primaries in his mouth to shut him up. “Gross, bro. That’s the last thing I want.” I say, grimacing. He thinks it’s because of the fillies, but I just almost let slip that I prefer colts and stallions. Well, stallion. “Message received. Still if you need a couple minutes to take care of it, I won’t tell.” He teased. I blushed bright enough to be seen and I receded. “That’s more like it. Save it for, what’s her name, Silver Spoon?” I gag and stick out my tongue. “Grosser! She’s a total girly girl and is totally not into me like that.” He laughs and it sends my heart aflutter before he ushers me to the door and pushes me out, his snout against my tail that’s barely covering my balls. His snout was practically huffing my balls and all I could think about was telling him my secret and staying home that day. Buck school and everything, this could be the day. “Okay, I’m going.” Maybe not. “See you later. I have Wonderbolt practice, then a few things to take care of. I won’t be back when you get home, but I’ll be back to start dinner for you.” He waved at me as I left, hovering just above the ground to show off. Once he stepped back inside I landed and hurried down the dirt road to school. Once there I sat at my desk by Snails. He was cute in how dumb he was, how proud of that fact about himself he flaunted it around town. It was undeniably cute, innocent and made him one of the sexiest colts in class. I talked a little with him and Snips about after school activities and places to play, including the new games at the arcade. Button Mash and Pip came into the conversation at that point and we all agreed to go home and collect a few bits then meet at the arcade around two in the afternoon. Ms. Cheerilee called class to start and we all took our seats, most of us losing interest in the current lesson of pre-calculus and how it would be used in our everyday lives once we got both our marks and an apprenticeship. All I could think of was seeing my brother’s balls that morning. His tail swaying, his hips bouncing… “Ew! Ms. Cheerilee, Rumble’s showing again!” Silver Spoon called out to the class, getting them to all look at me as I tried to hide my erection. I pulled a book from inside my desk to cover as much of it as I could. The whole class giggled and laughed at me. It’s not like I was the only colt to get turned on during class, but Silver Spoon has an obvious crush on me, and typical fillies tease those they like the most. “Now, class, don’t be mean. Everypony has moments like these, even you, little miss.” Cheerilee said. Silver Spoon rolled her eyes. “I don’t have that problem. Mine doesn’t show when it happens.” Ms. Cheerilee sighed and hurried over to me, standing between me and the gray bitch. “Are you okay? Do you need a moment in the back alone to take care of it?” I blushed fiercely and shook my head, concentrating on seeing fillies flicking their tails to hurry it down. “I’ll be okay. It’s already almost gone.” “For now,” Diamond Tiara shouted getting most of the class to laugh again. I looked around and saw nearly everypony except Scootaloo and Apple Bloom laughing, they were leaning in to whisper to each other. I swear by how they act they’re as gay as I am, only it’s acceptable for them to be. Celestia forbids a colt or stallion is gay, taking away from the gene pool. Thinking that was the last straw and I was able to set my book back in the desk. Ms. Cheerilee moved back to the front of class and resumed her lesson. I saw Silver Spoon taking notes, but then I sat back to see what she was writing; she was drawing penises. Nice ones, too. Big, meaty ones with huge sacks. She caught me looking and gasped, blushed, and shoved the paper into her saddlebag before she was caught by anypony else. All I could do was smirk. “Like what you saw?” I teased her under my breath. Her ears turned to me while she sat straight at her desk. “I got more where that came from.” I liked seeing her shift in her seat, knowing she was getting bothered by my teasing. I chose to stop, though. Thunderlane said I had to be the bigger pony when it came to teasing, after all. “Ms. Cheerilee?” Silver Spoon called and raised her foreleg. I rolled my eyes, ready to be teased again. “Yes, Silver Spoon?” “Can I go to the restroom?” Buck being the bigger pony. “She just needs to rub one off, Ms. Cheerilee.” “Rumble!” The teacher scolded me, harshly. Silver Spoon blushed from her neck to her ears and she glared death at me. “We do not call other ponies out like that, am I understood?” “Yes, Ms. Cheerilee.” “Silver Spoon, you may go and you don’t need to explain yourself now or when you get back.” Silver Spoon hesitated, then got up to go. “Don’t forget to wash your hooves when you’re done,” I said as she started to make her way down the aisle. Silver Spoon’s tail clamped down and she hurried, lowering her head as she passed the teacher, who was making a beeline for me. “That’s it, young stallion. You’re staying after class to help me clean up.” “What?! But, I was gonna-” “You can either help me, or I can tell your brother about you being mean to your classmates.” Cheerilee was clearly being the adult and I couldn’t help but cower under the look she gave me. I couldn’t risk Thunderlane finding out I was mean to a filly that liked me, it wouldn’t make me look good in his eyes, for certain. I just nodded my head and stayed quiet. “That’s better. I’d suggest you stay silent when she returns, or you’ll be doing double duty.” I nodded again, trying not to frown. She turned to walk away and I stuck my tongue out at her, it was all I could do, after all. The lesson resumed and I glanced at the clock. It had only been ten minutes since school started. It was going to be a long day.
Mocha Star
550715
2
Rumble,Thunderlane,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Sex
Brotherly Crush
Rumble has a crush on his big brother, Thunderlane.
complete
21
63
<p>Rumble has a crush on his big brother, Thunderlane, will anything come of it?</p><p>This story is more like a puppy love story than romance between bros.</p><p>Triggers: <span class="spoiler">Masturbation</span></p><hr/><p>Written for the <a href="/group/198529/incest-is-wincest/thread/531809/hearts-hooves-day-contest" rel="nofollow">Incest is Wincest Hearts and Hooves Day Contest</a></p>
mature
2024-02-02T17:52:23+00:00
2024-02-02T17:52:23+00:00
227
I had to get home to wash the chalk dust off of my coat before I could play with my friends, this time nothing went wrong and I got into the shower to wash and was outside within half an hour. I hated having to groom a bit, but going outside wet would mean I’d end up covered in mud and that would mean another shower before bed. I met Snips, Snails and Featherweight at the park and Snips had a bag with various balls and toys we could play with sitting next to him. I was late, but they waited for me to decide what to play as a group. Naturally I picked tossing the hoofball around while they wanted to start with playing catch with a wiffle ball. As much as I want to have balls in my mouth, it’s not how I wanted to start playing after school. Well… I did, but… you know what I mean. We ended up playing catch with the hoofball and me and Featherweight practiced our flying while the earth ponies practiced standing on two legs or throwing with one foreleg between us all. It was fun and I didn’t end up thinking about my brother or sex at all during the whole time we played. We played tag, hide and seek, and ended with catch. I learned a long time ago to just use my teeth and keep my tongue back from the ball. I didn’t want to taste spit and grass from another pony unless it was with Thunderlane. Finally we packed it all up and let Snips take the bag, and the cute colt, back to his house to do things I could only imagine. Featherweight left to meet his big brother at a restaurant. How a pony could get so much muscle mass was kind of gross. I don’t mind the strong type, but he’s at an extreme. He’d probably crush me with a hug, not a turn on, to be honest. Now, if Featherweight could get some more muscles and not be such a pencil… I think I could have a crush on him, if that happened. I got home and went to my room to read a book while some music played in the background until I heard Thunderlane call out that he was home. My heart skipped a beat and I rushed to turn off the music before hurrying downstairs to hug him. “Woah, little bro. Don’t hurt me in front of my date. This filly killer is my little brother, Rumble.” “Date?” I asked and looked at the doorway to see a yellow pegasus mare smiling at us. She brushed her green mane from her eyes and smiled. “Oh, he is cute as a button. Hi, my name’s Sky Shard. I’m a big fan of your brother’s.” Sky Shard. The new mare of the night. I didn’t want to hear them having sex all night in the room next to me, so I had to be cold towards her. Not too rude, or I’d be sent to bed without supper and still have to suffer hearing them moan and the bed squeak. “Uh, hi,” I said as I let my brother go. “Yeah, I met her while I was signing autographs and we hit it off.” Thunderlane said to me. He leaned down to whisper while Sky Shard stepped in and looked at the awards wall. “Don’t embarrass me, she could be the one.” “So what? Like the last dozen weren’t?” I grumbled back. He glared at me and I glared back. He turned away to move next to Sky Shard and then he started bragging about his awards to the stupid mare. “Wow, you have so many awards, you must have always been great.” She tittered. Just like Diamond Tiara. Both stupid bitches. Both useless except for one thing. Don’t think I don’t know about how Diamond Tiara lifts her tail for any colt, then uses their inexperience as leverage against them. Threatening to embarrass them for finishing too quickly or not knowing what to do, or so she says. She’s as awful as the rest of them. Except Scootaloo, she doesn’t seem to be into anypony, just getting her cutie mark. I rolled my eyes and went back towards my room. “Call me when supper’s ready.” “Okay.” Thunderlane called back as he pointed to another flying award to explain about it. I went to my room and went back to my book. It was a good story about a puppy that lost its pony and was trying to find her in Manehattan. I was reaching the halfway point, I think, when everything went silent in the house. I noticed because all I could hear was the ticking of the clock in my room. I went to the door and listened and didn’t hear anything. I flew to the stairs and listened, then heard the sound I knew to be kissing. I couldn’t believe how fast this mare was moving! Barely an hour in my house and she was seducing my brother already. Probably just trying to get bragging rights for her friends. What if there was a competition for who could get the best Wonderbolt? That would explain why so many mares keep hooking up with my brother. There was a flurry of wings and then more silence for a moment. “Stay quiet, don’t let the kid know what we’re doing,” Sky Shard said. “He’s in his room, he isn’t coming out until I call him. Just…” Then more silence until I heard her moan and hooves clatter on the tile of the kitchen. My eyes widened as I realized they were probably having sex before supper was ready. That bitch was in my dream position before we ate. My heart was burning with anger and I flew back to my room. “Thunderlane, how’s supper coming along? I’m getting hungry.” “It’s coming, alright.” He called back and they both snickered. He just made a sex joke at me and didn’t think I knew about it. He was being a jerk and I hated that about him right then. I couldn’t say anything or else he’d get mad at me, so I just closed my door and walked around my room, thinking of what I could say to get her out of the house so I could tell him about what I thought about her. I couldn’t stand to see that mare for the next few days until she got tired of him and moved on. I glanced at the clock and after a few more minutes of pacing, after a few long minutes of thinking of them doing it, I finally had enough and opened my door and stomped to the stairs. I made as much noise as I could to let them know I was coming before they did and went downstairs to the living room and climbed up on the loveseat. “Supper’s almost ready,” Thunderlane said as he led Sky Shard to the couch. They both seemed a bit out of breath and their manes were messier than earlier. She was carrying a towel and tossed it on the couch before she climbed up onto it. My eyes widened and I realized they’d finished already and he had finished inside of her. The towel was to catch anything that spilled out from getting on the couch. Instead of feeling anger, I felt sad. It wasn’t me that was with him. It was this cheap mare that had no shame or humility. She literally lifted her tail ten minutes into coming into my home. My feelings must have shown because she looked at me with pity in her eyes. “What’s wrong, big guy?” That flipped it for me. “Nopony calls me big guy but my brother, who I love.” I said, feeling myself sneering a little. She raised an eyebrow. “Sorry, I was just wondering.” I looked at her tail and hated thinking of it brushing against my brother’s belly. “Well, don’t.” She got up and started walking around the room looking at photos of my family while I thought about what not to say. “Supper’s ready!” Thunderlane called out. She hurried to the kitchen while I dragged my hooves. I sat in my spot at the table and noticed the smell of mare. Thunderlane was bringing plates to our spots as she sat to my left. Thunderlane set his plate to her left so he’d sit across from me before he brought a plate of fried hay for us to start with. She took a pinch before I did and we both ate. It was really good. He put a plate of baked tofu next and then a plate of steamed vegetables. I took a scoop of each and glanced at Sky Shard as she took her first bite. “Mmm, it’s really good. Are you sure you’re not a mare under a spell?” Thunderlane laughed. “If I was we couldn’t have fun like we did.” They both glanced at me. No, my place at the table. It clicked and I swallowed my mouthful. “You… didn’t?” I asked them both. “Didn’t what, big guy?” “You had sex at my spot at the table?!” I shouted, hopping to my hooves. They shared a quick look. “I don’t know what you’re talking about. We haven’t even had supper yet.” Thunderlane said. “I heard you! But I didn’t think at the table, at my spot!” I yelled at him. “Look, kid-” “I’m not a kid, lady,” I started, “I have a name.” She held up a hoof. “Sorry, Ramble, I-” “My name’s Rumble! And he shouldn’t be having sex with you, he should be doing it with me!” I squeaked the next sound as my eyes widened, as did theirs. She snapped her attention to Thunderlane. “You fuck your brother?!” She shouted. “No! I’ve never even thought about doing that! Rumble, what are you talking about?!” Thunderlane shouted at me with worry in his expression. I was outed and not how I wanted; I wanted to die just then. “I… I love you,” I managed as I took a step back and opened my wings. He snapped his wings open. “Don’t you even think of running away right now. I’m sorry, Sky, but can we have a private moment?” She was outright mad and confused. She nodded and quickly left the room leaving us alone. “Would you mind explaining what you mean, Rumble?” I kept standing, now worried about what I had been sitting on, or in. “I… just, love you, Thunderlane. Is that a bad thing?” He partly closed his wings. “When you say love, you mean, as in…” I looked into his golden eyes. “I… want you to be my first, and last. I only want to be with you,” I said, hoping to see the same in reply, “forever.” His exhaled and closed his wings, sitting and pressing a forehoof to his temple. Nearly half a minute passed before he mumbled. “I’ve heard of this happening.” He looked up at me. “It’s not a problem that you’re gay, just that you can’t do that with me, or family in general. It’s not right to do that with family. What about other colts in your class? Are any of them…” “No, and I’ve tried a little. I’m the only one in town, I think.” Thunderlane snerked. “You’re not the only one, trust me. But, you have to wait to find the right stallion, and I’m not it.” “Yes you are! You’re sexy, funny, smart, a good listener, and everything I want in a lover.” Thunderlane sighed. “You sound like every mare I’ve met. Look, Rumble, I’m sorry to break your heart, but I’m not the one for you. I know it’s not what you wanna hear, but someday you’ll understand better. You’re not even ready, physically, for a stallion. Can you think of how hurt you’ll get if somepony my size does anything to you? My dick is almost as long as you are, for Celestia’s sake.” I thought about it and it made sense. A lot of sense. “But, what if you only use half of it?” He laughed. “That’s not how it works, buddy. Look, I’ve got a mare here for me, doesn’t that tell you something? If I wanted a stallion over, I could have one and it wouldn’t be a problem. Someday, when you have a boyfriend over I’ll understand, but you have to get it through that tough noggin of yours that you have to not only stick to your age group, but stay away from family. “Can you imagine what would happen if we did end up doing anything together? It would be the end of my career as a Wonderbolt and it might even land me in jail, unless I could convince them I was just helping you. And even then,” he interjected before I could say my agreement with that idea, “you’d have to do that to me, and I don’t think I’d like that.” “Why not? Why not give it a try before-” “Because I’m not gay, Rumble. At all. I love mares; probably for the same reasons you don’t like them.” I didn’t know what to say. I couldn’t say anything. My heart was in my throat and I could barely see. I hiccupped and felt my brother hugging me as I started to weep. “But…” “It’ll be okay, bro. You’ll find the one for you, it just isn’t me.” I cried after that and let loose all my feelings for the next I don’t know how long into my brother’s chest. Eventually I stopped and wiped my eyes, but still felt sad. He was looking down on me with such kindness. “Do I… have to go to my room now?” “Not if you don’t want to. We were having supper, would you like to finish?” I nodded a little, but didn’t feel much; I felt kind of numb. Sky Shard came back into the room and sat in her place again. “Rumble, I understand you’re going through a lot of feelings… but my little cousin might be your type. He’s in Cloudsdale right now, but if you want, I could introduce you and see where it goes.” I reached and grabbed some more hay. “I… might like that. Is he nice?” She smiled. “He’s a darling little colt and I think you two would be nice together.” As I slowly chewed my hay I thought about it and liked the idea. I nodded. “I’d like to meet him. What’s his name?” “Flutterwing. He’s white with a blue mane.” “Do you have a picture of him?” I asked. She giggled and reached to place a forehoof on my brother’s. “Not on me, but I can fly home tomorrow and bring one back. After all, you’re worth the flight.” I still felt sad and kind of numb, but overall, hopeful. My feelings for my brother quickly seemed to change and now the thought of Flutterwing danced in my head. What if he was the one for me? “Wait, if you two get married, wouldn’t that make me and Flutterwing family?” They both stopped chewing to share a look. It was thoughtful. “We’ll cross that bridge when we come to it.” Thunderlane said.
mlpluvr
550716
1
Discord,Gabby,Rarity,Spike,Adventure,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
The Little Dragon and the Griffon's Underwater Adventure
While spending two days at Maretropolis, Spike and Gabby were thrown into a perilous underwater journey, yet an epic adventure they ever experienced.
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<p>One beautiful summer day, Spike, Rarity, Discord, and Gabby take a vacation at the beach in Maretropolis for two days. However, Rarity was still feeling the jealousy of Gabby after almost sabotaging her relationship with Spike, despite making amends with the female griffon. After Rarity accidentally pushed Gabby and Spike into the ocean at the dock, they were thrown into the perilous underwater journey, but little did Gabby and Spike know that this would be an epic adventure they ever experienced.</p>
everyone
2024-02-02T21:46:12+00:00
2024-02-16T14:47:17+00:00
150
It's a beautiful sunny day in Ponyville, and everypony was going about their lives. There was talking and the birds chirping in the sky during the perfect time of the summer season in the town. Inside the Castle of Friendship, the little purple dragon, that was no other than Spike, was sleeping in his bed in his bedroom. He was in his deep sleep, until his alarm clock began to go off, which made Spike wake up and turns it off. The little dragon started to yawn and stretch his wings. As he gets out of his bed, Spike walks to his window and sees how sunny it is in the town. "Wow. I never expected this to be bright out," Spike said. Suddenly, he hears a familiar voice coming from the other room. "Spike! Breakfast is ready!" When Spike heard the voice, it was an alicorn princess Twilight Sparkle who was calling out the little dragon's name. Then, he looked at his clock, and it was 8:30 in the morning. Spike realized he got up late and started to freak out. "Oh my gosh! I'm late! I'm coming, Twilight!" Spike said as he exited his room. Then, he runs in the halls to go to the dining room to find Twilight. Once he got there, he sees the alicorn princess serving pancakes for her four friends, Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy. Then, Twilight turned to Spike in a friendly manner. "Good morning, Spike." "Morning, Twilight. Morning all of you, guys," he replied. “Good morning, Spike!” the four ponies said in unison. "Sorry I got up late. Maybe I overslept or something,” the little dragon said. “That’s okay, Spike,” Twilight giggled. “Every time I make breakfast in the morning, I always spend an hour or two making it for my friends while you were asleep.” “She’s got a point, sugarcube. Twilight makes the best pancakes in all of Ponyville,” Applejack told Spike. “Yeah! Those pancakes are absolutely delicious!” Pinkie said as she stuffed her mouth into her pancakes. “I might say, those were good. I’m not into eating pancakes, but these were delicious,” Fluttershy said in a happier tone. “Yeah, those pancakes were 100% cooler than the ones in Cloudsdale,” Rainbow Dash said. “Well, I’m glad you all enjoyed eating these pancakes, but I think I’m gonna pass. Now if you excuse me, I need to help Twilight to get the students prepared for the next semester in the School of Friendship for the fall. So, I’ll catch up with you guys later,” Spike said. “Hey, wait!” Twilight said as she stopped the little dragon. “If you get to work without eating breakfast, you’ll starve. Please, just have some quality time with us and we can go to work, okay?” Spike was doubtful about what Twilight was saying, but he let out the sigh and nodded his head in agreement. “Alright, Twilight.” Soon after, the five ponies were eating pancakes, except for Spike because he was feeling a little depressed. The only thing he had on his mind was the whole fiasco with Rarity and Gabby a week ago. Even Twilight noticed right away. “What’s wrong, Spike?” She asked him concernedly. “Nothing, Twilight,” the little dragon said sadly. “It’s just that incident I had with Rarity not too long ago. I just wished this whole thing never happened. If only I never lied to Gabby in the first place.” Twilight feels bad for Spike about his situation with Rarity, but she puts her wing around the little dragon. “I know it’s hard for you to recover from what’s happened, but sometimes every pony makes mistakes and so did we,” Twilight said as her friends nodded in agreement. “I know that Rarity can act a little crazy at times, but deep down, she still cares about you no matter what.” “Really? You really mean that?” Spike said. “Absolutely,” Twilight replied. With the smile on Spike’s face, he embraced Twilight into a hug. “Thank you for giving me good advice, Twilight,” said the little dragon. "Even though I had a crush on Rarity for a period of time, I’m still on good terms with her, and so is Gabby, too.” “Aww, Spike…” Twilight giggled at the little dragon’s words as she patted his head. They hugged once again until the door started knocking. “Hmm… I wonder who it is,” Spike pondered. “I’ll get it,” Twilight said as she approached the door. When the alicorn princess opened the door, it was no other than Rarity. Twilight was surprised to see her. “Good morning, Rarity,” the princess greeted her. “Morning, darling,” Rarity replied back. “Is Spike here? I have something important for him to ask. Do you know where he is?” “Oh, we’re just having pancakes with him,” Twilight giggled. “You want some?” “Oh, I would love to, Twilight, but I’ve already eaten breakfast,” replied Rarity. “Do you know where I can find Spike?” “He’s over there sitting next to Applejack,” Twilight told Rarity. “Thanks, Twi,” she said. Spike was in the middle of eating his pancakes until Rarity called out his name. “Oh, Spikey-Wikey!” Rarity said in a singly tone. “Rarity?” Spike recognized her. As he turned around, he was so excited to see her. “Rarity, hi!” Spike said happily as he embraced her into a hug. “Hey there, Spike!” She waved at the little dragon. “How is my favorite little dragon doing?” “Never been better, Rarity,” Spike replied. “What are you doing here?” “Oh, I just stopped by to ask you something,” Rarity said. “Oh, okay,” said Spike. “What is it that you want to ask me? Is there something you want to do today?” “Umm… Let me think for a second, darling,” Rarity told the little dragon. Rarity started to think about what she is gonna do today. Then, something came to her mind. “Oh, yes. I was going to say that I’m going to spend two days at the beach at Maretropolis.” After hearing her sentence, Spike was surprised about what he heard from Rarity. “Wow,” the little dragon said. You’re spending two days at the beach? That’s great! What’s there?” “Oh my, darling,” Rarity said. “Maretropolis has everything. The hula dancing, the smoothies, the scenery, and obviously the ocean.” The four ponies and Spike sound pretty amazed when they heard about Maretropolis. “Oh, my gosh! They have hula at Maretropolis?! THIS IS SO EXCITING! WHOO!” Pinkie said with enthusiasm. “They have smoothies there, too?! Awesome!” Rainbow and Applejack said in unison. “Um, I don’t know about the ocean and all, but I am sure there are pretty cute creatures under the sea,” Fluttershy said happily. “That sounds like… a perfect place to go for a vacation!” Spike said excitedly. “Oh, believe me, darling. It really is!” Rarity replied. “I bet I am going to have the time of my life there. But what about you, Spike? Do you want to come with me to stay at the beach for two days?” When she asked the little dragon about her offer, he started to think for a second. After a few seconds, Spike was ready to accept Rarity’s offer with full confidence. “Yes, I do,” he said. “Wonderful, darling!” Rarity said happily. “Now, let’s hit the summer fun!” As she was ready to leave the castle to pack up her stuff at the Carousel Boutique, Spike stopped Rarity in her tracks. “Hey, wait a minute!" “What’s the matter, Spikey?” She asked the little dragon. “There’s something I forgot to tell you about the ocean. What if it was as dangerous as I thought? What if the sea creatures are not friendly? What if the giant squid comes out and tries to eat us?!” Spike said fearfully. The four ponies were shocked by what Spike had said. “WHAT?! THERE'S A SQUID IN THE OCEAN?!” Pinkie shouted. “I hope I won’t ever tell this to Apple Bloom when I go back to the farm…” Applejack said nervously. “Okay, I take it back about the ocean. It does sound scary!” Rainbow said. "Oh, my goodness. I hope I don’t get nightmares from this…” Fluttershy said fearfully. The four ponies were shivering in fear and so was Spike. As Rarity and Twilight are concerned for her friends and the little dragon, they manage to calm them down. “Now, now, ladies. Calm down,” Rarity told them as they stopped panicking. “I am sure the ocean is not as dangerous as it seems. You all just never seen what it looks like yet.” Then, Rarity walks to Spike while Twilight tries to calm him down. He looked scared even more after what he said. “Rarity, I’m so scared. I don’t wanna be eaten by that squid.” “Shh… it’s okay, Spike,” Rarity said as she comforted the little dragon. “As long as you are with me, I’ll never let anything bad happen to you. Trust me.” Spike was feeling doubtful about what Rarity had said, but then he nodded in agreement. “Okay.” Rarity and Spike embraced a hug. They hugged for over a minute until out of nowhere, a draconequus who is no other than the Lord of Chaos himself, Discord appeared in the flash of the light. “HUZZAH, MY FRIENDS!” he shouted with enthusiasm as he was wearing his hula form. “I am more than happy to come along with you two! Is there something fascinating about what the ocean looks like? Are there many sea creatures under the sea? Oh, I have so many questions!” As excited Discord was, Twilight was not amused by his antics. She clears her throat to get the Lord of Chaos’s attention. “Ahem!” “Yes, Twilight?” Discord said to her. “Can I have a word with you for a minute?” Twilight said sternly. With a sigh coming out of Discord’s mouth, he removes his hula form from his body. “Okay, Twilight,” he said with disappointment. Later in the library, the alicorn princess and the Lord of Chaos were having a private conversation about his involvement of going to Maretropolis with Rarity and Spike. “You do realize this is Rarity’s vacation, right?” Twilight said with a stern tone. “Yes, Twilight,” Discord replied. “I understand what you’re saying, but I just want to be part of it. I just hope Fluttershy knows that already.” “If you want to spend your time at the beach with Rarity and Spike, I’m going to ask you this once,” said the princess. “I want to make sure you don’t ever, ever cause any chaos at the beach, but promise me from the bottom of my heart you’ll keep Spike safe.” “So, you’re promising me that I need to be aware of Spike’s safety at the beach as a whole?” Discord said. “Yes,” Twilight replied sternly. “And when I promise you something very important, you don't break that promise.” Discord had no idea what she was saying as he raised his eyebrow. “Ever,” Twilight finished her sentence. After all the information she had said, the draconequus let out a sigh and spoke. “Alright, Twilight. I’ll try my best not to cause too much trouble at the beach and keep Spike safe under any circumstances." "Good. Then it’s settled,” Twilight said with confidence. The Lord of Chaos smiled at the alicorn princess and shook her hoof, calling it a truce. Back in the dining room, the five ponies and Spike waited for Discord and Twilight to get back from the library. “Gee… What’s taking him so long? He should’ve been back by now,” Spike said. “Patience, darling,” Rarity said to the little dragon. “I’m sure this conversation between Discord and Twilight won’t be much longer.” "Yeah, I know," he replied. "I'm just hoping he won't cause too much trouble at the beach." "It'll be fine, Spike," Rarity told him. "I am sure I got under control." Spike was a bit skeptical of her words, but he understood what she was saying and nodded his head in agreement. "You're right," the young dragon said. "Thanks." "No problem, darling," Rarity replied. Then, the Lord of Chaos and the alicorn princess came out of the library after a long conversation they had. Even Rarity and Spike were surprised to see them. “Twilight? Discord? What took you guys so long?” Spike said. “You know, kid, there were some arguments, but other than that, we got it under control,” Discord replied to the little dragon. “As a quick reminder, Twilight had ordered me to keep aware of your safety at the beach. I want to make sure you won’t get hurt.” “I know, Discord,” Spike replied to the Lord of Chaos. “I just hope I won’t be eaten by that giant squid.” “Don’t worry, little one,” the draconequus said. “I will make sure that Rarity is here to keep you safe.” “Thank you, Discord,” Spike said with a smile on his face. And Discord smiled at the little dragon back. Then, Twilight was talking to Rarity. “Well, we got it all planned,” the alicorn princess said. “Discord will go to the beach with you and Spike for two days, but you have to make sure he doesn’t cause any trouble there.” “My pleasure, darling,” Rarity replied. “As long as the crazy draconequus won’t cause too much chaos at Maretropolis.” “Okay, Rarity. Go easy on me,” Discord said as Rarity gave him a glare. “Alrighty then. Since this conversation is over, there’s one more thing I need to ask, Rarity,” said Spike. “What is it, Spike?” she replied The little dragon started to think for a moment, but then, something came crossing to his mind. “Okay, I know it’s going to sound crazy, but do you think Gabby can come with us to Maretropolis?” When Rarity thought about the female griffon, she became a little skeptical, despite making amends with Gabby a week ago. But then, she decided to shake it off. "Okay, Spike. If you want Gabby to come with us, I want to make sure that she won't borrow you this time. And then, I will be nicer to her from here on out." "Alright. Guess that's settled," Spike agreed. "I hate to bust your conversation, but we got to go!" Discord said as he looked at his watch. "Discord's right," said Spike. "But first, we have to get tickets for Griffonstone to pick up Gabby and one for Maretropolis." "You got it, kid. Let's pack up our bags and hit the summer fun!" Discord said as he was wearing his hula form again. Rarity and Spike were amused by his antics. Then, she and Discord went back to their homes to pack up all their stuff for the beach. Just as before Spike can go back to his room to pack up his stuff, he starts to feel something's not right. "I hope this doesn't go off the rails like last time..." Spike said nervously.
mlpluvr
550716
2
Discord,Gabby,Rarity,Spike,Adventure,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
The Little Dragon and the Griffon's Underwater Adventure
While spending two days at Maretropolis, Spike and Gabby were thrown into a perilous underwater journey, yet an epic adventure they ever experienced.
incomplete
-1
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<p>One beautiful summer day, Spike, Rarity, Discord, and Gabby take a vacation at the beach in Maretropolis for two days. However, Rarity was still feeling the jealousy of Gabby after almost sabotaging her relationship with Spike, despite making amends with the female griffon. After Rarity accidentally pushed Gabby and Spike into the ocean at the dock, they were thrown into the perilous underwater journey, but little did Gabby and Spike know that this would be an epic adventure they ever experienced.</p>
everyone
2024-02-19T22:06:30+00:00
2024-02-20T02:22:06+00:00
94
Soon after breakfast and Twilight's conversation with Discord, Spike began packing up his stuff in his bedroom. His luggage has Power Ponies comics, a pack of gems Rarity gave him, sunblock, bottles of water, his camera, which is waterproof, and a swimsuit he got from his closet. As the little dragon finished packing his suitcase, he tried to move it, only to realize it was heavy. "Geez, this weighs a ton," Spike said. "I hope I didn't put anything else in there." As the young dragon struggled to move his luggage, Twilight entered his room to see if he needed help. "Hey, you need a hand here?" She asked him. "No, thanks. I got it," the little dragon replied as he tried to move his suitcase. With all the strength Spike tried to move his luggage, it felt heavier and the little dragon gives up. Luckily for him, Twilight uses her magic to put all of his stuff in the right position of his suitcase. Even Spike was surprised by this. "Wow, I never expected this, but... Thank you, Twilight," he said. "No problem, Spike," the princess replied. "Sometimes, you need a little assistance from the princess." "Well, at least I tried not to," the little dragon said. Twilight giggled at his words after hearing that sentence. "Oh, Spike..." she said as she patted the little dragon's head again. "I gotta tell you, Twilight, I'm going to have a fun time at the beach. While I am there, maybe I can take any pictures of those sea creatures in the ocean. I know I overreacted about it earlier, but I hope Rarity and Discord will keep me safe no matter what happens. And I also hope Gabby will try to get along with Rarity a lot better than last time." "I know you will, Spike," the alicorn princess said. "And at this point, I will make sure you won't get hurt." With the smile on the young dragon's face, he shakes Twilight's hoof in agreement. "Thank you, Twi," Spike said. "Also, can I ask you something?" "Go ahead," Twilight said. "So about the School of Friendship, do you think you can help your friends get the students ready for the fall semester while I'm away? I know it's 2 weeks from now, but I just want to make sure you know that." "Oh, don't you worry, Spike," the alicorn princess said. "My friends and I got it under control." "Heh, I knew you would say that," the little dragon said as Twilight giggled at his words. "Now, let's head to the train station, shall we?" "Right behind you, Spike," she agreed as the young dragon and the alicorn princess departed from his bedroom. Meanwhile in the Carousel Boutique, Rarity was seen packing up her stuff. While she was at it, she was making a special dress for the trip to Maretropolis. As she finished making the dress, Rarity was about to put it in her suitcase, but she realized there wasn't enough room for her luggage. "Oh, dear," she said. "I think I put too many dresses in there. I wonder if I had another suitcase to put in." As Rarity tried to figure out where she could put her special dress, her little sister Sweetie Belle entered Rarity's dressing room to see what she was doing. "Hey, Rarity," the Cutie Mark Crusader greeted her. "What are you up to?" "Just packing my stuff and going somewhere very special," she replied to her little sister. "Ooh, really? What is it?" Sweetie Belle said with a happier tone. "Well, now that you asked, I am going to the beach at Maretropolis with Spike, Discord, and also Gabby for two days," Rarity replied to her sister. "Wow, you're going to Maretropolis for two days? That sounds... fantastic! What does it look like there?" Sweetie Belle said with enthusiasm. "You know, I told Spike everything about this place. He was amazed, but then he overreact about the ocean and that 'giant squid' thing, but I told him the ocean is not as bad as it seems because he doesn't know what it looks like yet." "Hmm... I see," Sweetie Belle said. "So, the ocean may not be as dangerous, but that giant squid you mentioned, it sounds pretty ominous. I hope Spike doesn't get eaten..." "Oh, don't worry," Rarity told her sister. "Twilight ordered me and Discord to keep Spike safe under any circumstances." "Oh, I see," Sweetie Belle said. "So, you're saying that Spike needs protection for the beach, right?" "Yes," her older sister replied. "I want to make sure nothing bad happens to him." "I hope so too," Sweetie Belle replied back. "By the way, I bet Gabby is going with you guys as well. I know that you and her had a bit of conflict from last week, but you both resolved your issues." "Yes, we did," Rarity said. "But this time, I will make sure Gabby doesn't borrow Spike this time, and maybe try to get along with her more." "Yeah, I see your point," the Cutie Mark Crusader replied. "Speaking of which, what are you doing with that dress of yours?" "Oh, that?" Rarity said surprisingly. "I was about to put it in my luggage, but it seems like there's not enough room for it. Do you think you can help me find another suitcase to put my dress in?" "Sure!" Sweetie Belle happily agreed. After a few minutes, some of Rarity's dresses, including one for Maretropolis, were put in each luggage. Even Sweetie Belle was exhausted by helping her older sister. "My goodness, was that other suitcase heavy..." She said as her face was sweating. "Tell me about it," Rarity replied. "It could have been more heavier." "I thought so too. But thanks for letting me help you put any dress in each luggage," Sweetie Belle said. "You're welcome," Rarity replied. The Cutie Mark Crusader smiled with confidence. "I would say though, this was a piece of cake, huh?" "Yeah, it sure was," Rarity said. "You can say that again," Sweetie Belle replied. "Also, can I ask you something?" "Okay," her older sister replied. "I know it sounds a bit crazy, but can I come to Maretropolis as well?" "Oh, I don't know, darling," Rarity said. "I don't think our parents would appreciate you going to the beach with me. They will be worried sick about you." "But I am getting older," Sweetie Belle replied. "I can't let you go out on your own without spending time with my older sister. I may be a Cutie Mark Crusader, but sometimes I want to catch up on what I am missing out on. Do you think my parents will allow me to go with you to Maretropolis? I know they wouldn't allow me to do it, but believe me. I want them to know I'm older enough to do things with you. Can you take my advice to what I'm saying?" Rarity was a bit doubtful of what her little sister was saying. She started to think for a second. After a few seconds, Rarity lets out a sigh and spoke. "Okay, Sweetie Belle. But we have to tell them to give us permission first, alright?" "You got it, sis," the Cutie Mark Crusader replied as she and Rarity shake their hooves in agreement. Meanwhile in Fluttershy's cottage, Discord was packing up his stuff, which he got from his dimension, in the living room. His luggage has beach clothes, a swimsuit, a pair of goggles, a duck floatie, and a camera. When the chaotic draconequus finished packing, he was exhausted and lays on the couch. "Whew... Glad I didn't put too many things in there," Discord said with his face sweating. "Thanks for helping me, Flutters." "My pleasure, Dizzy," she replied. "I will say though, this is going to be the best vacation I ever had," Discord said. "I know you will," Fluttershy replied. "But remember what Twilight said to you earlier. I don't want you to cause any trouble at Maretropolis. I know you are the Lord of Chaos and all, but at least try not to use your chaos magic, okay?" "Alright, Fluttershy," the draconequus said. "I'll take your word for it." "Perfect," the yellow pegasus replied as she shook Discord's paw in agreement. "Also, if you're not aware, Spike overreacted about the ocean and the giant squid in the sea from earlier, and I want you to keep him safe." Then, Fluttershy's face turns stern. "But if that squid ever dares to hurt the little dragon, I will give it "The Stare" as a result." Lastly, her face turns back to a normal expression. "You see my point here, Discord?" "Well, yes," the Lord of Chaos said. "That's what Twilight told me a few hours ago. She ordered me and Rarity to not let anything bad happen to him. And that squid in the sea, it would be easy if I can make it disappear." Even Fluttershy giggled at his words. "True, but it won't be that necessary," she said. "You know, the squid may be too hard to handle because it's one of the most dangerous creatures in the ocean." "Yeah, I know," Discord said. "But I want to be sure Spike doesn't get hurt. I hope the ocean is not too dangerous." "Don't worry. Rarity did say it's not as bad as it looks," Fluttershy said. "I'm sure Spike can take pictures of those cute creatures in the sea and I'll save a copy of them when you guys come back." "You know, that sounds like a good idea," the draconequus said. "If I have a printer back in my dimension, maybe I can make a copy of those sea creature photos when I come back." "Sounds perfect, Discord," Fluttershy said as she hugged the Lord of Chaos. "Yeah. Thanks, Fluttershy," he said as he hugged her back. "By the way, aren't you supposed to be meeting up with Spike and Rarity at the train station?" Fluttershy asked Discord. "I think you're running a bit late." "What do you mean?" The Lord of Chaos said surprisingly. When he looks at his watch, Discord realizes he's running behind. "Oh, right! I totally forgot. Thanks for reminding me, Flutters. See you at the train station before I leave!" And just like that, the draconequus used his fingers to teleport to the train station. Even Fluttershy was feeling confident about it. "You're welcome, Dizzy," she replied happily. At the Ponyville Train Station, Spike and the five ponies all waited for Rarity and Discord to arrive. While they were having patience, the young dragon was having trouble waiting and began to feel anxious. "Oh, boy..." Spike said nervously. "I hope they're not taking as long as I thought." "Don't worry," Twilight told the little dragon. "I'm sure Rarity and Discord will be here in a few minutes. Maybe they need some more time." "She's right, sugarcube," Applejack said. "Sometimes, when you are willing to go somewhere, everypony needs their time to sort things out." "Yeah," Rainbow Dash chimed in. "Back when I was a filly, I always wanted to go see the Wonderbolts like every week, but there were times when my parents need to have their time to figure it out. It may have been chaotic at first, but in the end, it all worked out well." "Aww, that's so sweet of you, Rainbow," Spike said. "Heh, it's nothing I can't think about," she replied. The four ponies and the young dragon giggled at her words. Even Rainbow was amused by it. Then, Rarity, Discord, and Sweetie Belle all arrived at the train station just in time. "Oh, Spikey-Wikey!" Rarity said. "Sorry we're late!" Discord called out. "Hey, guys!" Spike said as he ran to the Lord of Chaos and Rarity. "Thank goodness you're here. I was worried that you guys were taking forever to get here." "Oh, it was nothing too much," the purple-haired pony said. "We just needed some more time for ourselves." "She has a point, kiddo," Discord told the young dragon. We wanted more time to get ready." "I see," Spike said. "Thank you." "No problem," the draconequus replied. "It's what I do all the time." Even the little dragon giggled at his words. Then, Twilight walks to Rarity and Discord. "I'm glad you two made it," the alicorn princess said. "What took you so long?" "Well, I needed to rearrange my suitcases in order to fit in my special dress with the help of Sweetie Belle. She was a big help for me, though," Rarity said. "And helping Fluttershy packing my stuff I got from my dimension was really hard work," Discord joined in. "Well, that's good," the little dragon said. As Twilight, Spike, Discord, and Rarity were having a conversation, Sweetie Belle walks towards the young dragon and greeted him. "Hey there, Spike." "Oh hi, Sweetie Belle," he greeted her as well. "What are you doing here?" "Well, you see, I asked my sister I want to come to the beach at Maretropolis with you guys, but my parents would be worried sick about me if I go. So, I told Rarity if I can ask them for permission, and it turns out, they said "yes". And with that, Mom and Dad finally allowed me to come to the beach. Pretty awesome, right?" "Yeah, it sure does," Spike said. "I'm going to have a fun time there! And wait till I take pictures of those sea creatures under the sea. I bet Fluttershy would totally love those photos." "I'm sure she would," Sweetie Belle replied. "Also, Rarity told me about that giant squid in the ocean you were overreacting from earlier. I just hope you won't get eaten..." "Ah, don't you worry," the young dragon said. "Rarity and Discord will make sure nothing bad happens to me. Twilight ordered them to keep me safe." Then, Spike turns to the Lord of Chaos and the purple-haired pony. "Right, guys?" "Mm-hmm!" Rarity and Discord agreed as they nodded their heads. "Well, I guess I feel better already," Sweetie Belle said. "Great," Spike said. "With that being said, you guys ready for the summer fun at the beach?" "You bet, kiddo!" Discord replied. "I couldn't agree more, darling," Rarity replied as well. Afterwards, Rarity had already bought the tickets, one for Gabby and five for Maretropolis. Then, the train showed up just in time. Just as the gang was about to leave, the four ponies, all the sudden, wanted to say goodbye because their little dragon friend is going to be away for two days. "Have fun at the beach, Spike!" Pinkie Pie said. "And bring back some of those cupcakes for me while you're there!" "You go get 'em, tiger!" Rainbow Dash told the little dragon. "Let me know how the smooties taste, little fella," Applejack said. "Take pictures of those cute sea creatures while you're there," Fluttershy told Spike. "I'll have Discord make a copy of them for the picture album." "You got it, Flutters," the young dragon replied. As the four girls finish their conversation, Twilight walks towards Spike. "Hey there. Is there something you want to tell me?" "Yes," Twilight said. "You have to be very careful out there in the ocean. Don't let anything bad happen to you. It may not be as dangerous, but I don't want you to get hurt. Please know from the bottom of my heart you'll be safe." "I will, Twilight," the little dragon said to the alicorn princess. The two forms tears in their eyes and embraced into a hug. "I love you," Spike said. "I love you, too," Twilight replied. The alicorn princess and the young dragon continued hugging until the pony conductor honk the train horn. "ALL ABOARD!" "Well, I better get going," Spike said. "You're right," Twilight replied. The two finished hugging each other and Spike walked to the train along with Rarity, Discord, and Sweetie Belle. "Make sure you help your friends get the students ready for the fall semester while I'm away, okay?" "I will!" Twilight replied. As the four enter the train, the four girls say their byes to their friends. "Bye, guys!" They said in unison. "Let me know how it goes, Spike!" Applejack said. "Don't cause trouble at the beach, Discord," Rainbow Dash told the draconequus. "I won't," he replied. "Have a great time there!" Pinkie said. "Bring me back the pictures when you come back, Spike," Fluttershy called out. "I will," Spike replied. As the girls continued waving goodbye, the train was about to depart. Then, the young dragon peek out the window and sees Twilight outside of the station. "Bye, Twilight," he said as he waved at the alicorn princess. "Be safe," she replied. As the train began to leave the station, the four friends set off to Griffonstone to pick up Gabby. Inside the train, Spike was feeling a little anxious, but not too much from earlier. "I hope this works..." He said nervously.
CherryPopsyPone
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Applejack,Rarity,Random,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
How To Love a Worm
Applejack asks a simple question. Rarity needs to think about it.
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<p>Things were pretty good between Applejack and Rarity. The couple have forged a stable, healthy, and happy relationship, and Rarity couldn't be more delighted. But one unassuming afternoon, Applejack poses her a question, and everything the unicorn thought she believed is thrown into uncertainty.</p><p>After all, how could she possibly love a <i>worm?</i></p><hr/><p>Wow, my first fic! I'm happy to have finally gotten something out into the world. It's not much, but I hope you enjoy this bit of Rarijack silliness!</p><p>Heavily inspired by and basically an homage to Bixels' comic: <a href="https://derpibooru.org/images/3235836" rel="nofollow">https://derpibooru.org/images/3235836</a></p><p>Bonus chapter features Starlight and Trixie</p>
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2024-02-02T23:18:30+00:00
2024-02-02T23:18:30+00:00
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Rarity sat at her working desk. The loud, constant clicking of her machine enveloped the moderate space of her area, the harsh needlepoint of the mechanism tightly weaving a thread through glossy mauve fabric. Her hindleg was pressed carefully and expertly to the pedal beneath the wooden surface, gracefully guiding the future dress along its mundane path. Other threads and fabrics were strewn about the room in a manner ordinary to how the unicorn operated. All seemed to be as usual, which should be a blessing! She had deadlines to meet, and in fact, up to this point she had been exceeding her typical punctuality. But that was no excuse to get too comfortable; work was work, and Rarity prided herself on being able to complete a job on time with all the care and effort it demanded. So why couldn’t she focus? The clicking stopped abruptly. A soft thud from head-on-wood reverberated suddenly, the mare rubbing her temples with a wince. This question was of a more rhetorical nature; she knew exactly what was plaguing her. But she had work to do! There wasn’t any time for this silly dawdling. It’s not like it really mattered all that much in the grand scheme anyhow. She knew her own feelings... or at least she once believed she did. Alas, it had become apparent that this was a false confidence. With a frustrated sigh, she turned her head to gaze at the nearby array of spools. It had shaken her all too easily. A once simple truth turned in an instant to a complex personal dilemma. Besides, as much as it irked her to think about, she knew it truly mattered to at least one pony. And as misfortune would have it, this one pony mattered a great deal to her. Another groan escaped her pursed lips. It was rare that the detail-oriented mare ever appreciated “simple.” Simple was so drab. Even things that appeared at first to be simple she knew held beautiful complexities beneath the surface. However, in this moment, there was nothing Rarity craved more than simple. Why couldn’t things be simple? She stared. Her spools of thread appeared to stare back. These were simple. Certainly, even fabric threads came in a variety of forms and served a variety of uses even outside the world of fashion, but that wasn’t the point. She understood them. It didn’t take more than one look at any given wrap of string for her to know exactly how she planned to use it, and even less thought for her to apply that knowledge. She was looking at one right now actually, though less out of discerning its practicality, and more in longing for it to give her an answer it never could. It was a bright, salmon red. She could barely make out the intricacies of its design, wound infinitely around a plastic cylinder before loosely falling off as solitary twine. It was barely three inches from its home, but the string had managed to form an S-shaped wave before coming to a point. It was almost like it was trying to wriggle away, like a snake, or a... worm. Like a worm. Worm. That word bounced painfully around her skull. A hoof returned to her temple. This was ridiculous. Her eyes shut themselves tight, the unicorn recalling now the source of her woes. “Rares, wouldja still love me if I was a worm?” What? Rarity turned her head towards the orange earth pony in the vicinity. “What?” “If I was a worm instead of a pony. Y’know, like an earthworm, or-” “Yes darling, I know what a worm is. And you’re asking me if...?” “If’n you’d still be in love with me n’ all.” Rarity turned her head back to what had been her current business with a confused, and somewhat perturbed expression. Since she had begun romancing Applejack, Rarity often visited her beloved at Sweet Apple Acres. The farm was practically a second home to the unicorn at this point. As such, the typically fussy mare deemed it an obligation to help out from time to time. Apple bucking wasn’t exactly her forte, but she’d always find other ways to make herself useful. Cleaning, sorting, cooking; she’d find any way she could to lend the farming family an extra hoof. Today, she was helping to paint a newly erected fence. Applejack was always more than happy to have her around. They still had their spats, but in recent years the couple had made quite the team. Yet even with all the accumulated time they’d spent together, nothing could have prepared Rarity for this, her brushstrokes slowing while she processed Applejack’s query. What the hay was she talking about? Was she serious? She must be, Applejack was typically quite clear when something was a joke. Was she insecure? Had Rarity done or said something wrong? Everything had seemed perfectly fine between the two mares. Divine, even, if she said so herself. So what brought about this absurd question? And why... a worm? Rarity began to feel the silence. She’d been thinking about this too long. As much as Rarity would have preferred not dignifying whatever this was with an answer, she knew the farmpony wouldn’t let her off the hook that easily. She began to picture a worm in her head. It was... Well, it was disgusting. Slimy, hideous, mud-dwelling, stupid, and just the most vulgar shade of fleshy red. Fluttershy would be firm in preaching that all creatures in Equestria and beyond were deserving of love and respect, and it wasn’t truly as if Rarity disagreed with that notion. But something as insignificant as a worm, which to her were only useful in feeding the much more dazzling avians of Equestria, could earn no love from her. They were appalling, simple as that. Even if one were named Applejack. The unicorn winced. She knew this wouldn’t be what the farmpony wanted to hear, but she owed it both to herself and to her lover to be sincere. Besides, they were both mature mares, and she knew what was important was that she loved Applejack as she is now. As a pony, and not a worm. Rarity took in a deep breath, putting on a stern frown to prepare to reject the poor, silly earth pony. Finally, she turned her head back to answer. “N-” Then she saw it. Rarity’s response caught in her throat and refused to move. Her eyes widened while their once firm gaze shook unevenly. Applejack was already staring at the unicorn, wearing the most sparkling puppydog eyes Rarity could ever imagine, and a smile so hopeful it would have given Tirek a heart attack. Rarity almost forgot to breathe. How long had she been looking at her like that? The expression on Applejack’s face as she patiently awaited her marefriend’s response was not one the unicorn had ever seen from her before, and yet it could get her to raid Tartarus if asked. The image in front of her began to merge with the worm in Rarity’s head against her will. Suddenly it was starting to appear a lot less disgusting. It was even wearing a cute little stetson. It didn’t take long for Rarity to realize... She couldn’t let Applejack down. Not like that. Her plan utterly crippled, Rarity haphazardly cleared her throat, avoiding looking towards the adorable orange mare lest the butterflies zooming around her torso suddenly burst from her chest. “I-I’ll... get back to you on that, darling. I... need to think about it.” She didn’t need to check back to know that Applejack’s expression had fallen. Gone forever was that precious face. In its place now was one of concern and disappointment. “...You need to think abou-” “I need to think about it.” After a few hesitant seconds, the two had resumed painting. Rarity tried not to chide herself, feeling responsible for the awkwardness buzzing around. She could tell it was definitely not the answer Applejack was hoping for, but it was better than potentially shattering her heart to pieces. Besides, what could she do? She wasn’t about to lie to her while she still felt so unsure about this blasted image stuck in her brain. This lovably accursed image. It almost made her sweat. She truly did need to think about this. The two completed the chore in silence, and Rarity had to excuse herself afterwards. She gifted Applejack a peck on the cheek before leaving, hoping that would somehow sate any worries until next time. She let loose a heavy sigh as she walked down the road towards her boutique. That was all yesterday. Rarity had not seen mane nor tail of her marefriend since, and she felt that was for the best. She couldn’t confront her again, at least not while this situation was still melting her thoughts like acid. It didn’t help that she’d made virtually no progress in finding a suitable answer. Two competing thoughts chased each other around like some awful carousel. She hated worms, but she loved Applejack. Worms bad. Applejack good. Would being a worm make Applejack unlovable, or could being Applejack turn a worm into something she might... accept? Applejack. Worm. Applejack. Worm. Applejack. Worm. Rarity lifted the fabric that lay dormant in front of her, using it to cover her face, and screamed. She made her frustrations audible, hampered only by the purple layer of material she’d been failing to work on. Enough was enough. She was getting nowhere fast, both in her work, and with this dreadful dilemma. Something needed to be done. She needed the time and space to really think about this, and come to a conclusion. Most importantly, she needed some fresh air. Not wasting another second, the fashionista got up from her workstation and trotted down the steps in a hurry. She quickly identified the nearest pair of sunglasses and a matching sunhat, using her magic to fit them on. The front door soon slammed shut behind her, the mare taking care to lock up and hang an “Out to Lunch” sign before making herself scarce. The sun gleamed through parted clouds with unrelenting optimism. The grass around Ponyville park was vibrant as it ever was, wind breezing through the shimmering blades. A light shower had been scheduled for this morning, and it appeared that it had come and gone. The dirt road was still a tad dark with moisture, but it was nothing Rarity couldn’t handle. Or rather, she’d learned to cope with it through necessity. A variety of animals were active and about, taking advantage of the freshly dampened environment. There weren’t as many ponies, but there were only ever a handful in the park at once anyway. Right now, this suit Rarity just fine. The fewer the distractions, the sooner she could find a way out of this hole she’d be tossed in kicking and screaming. First, she needed a place to sit. A bench right by the path called to her, and she made a prompt beeline towards it. The unicorn winced, seeing how wet the wooden surface was upon closer inspection. She briefly considered looking at the other benches, but knew it would be a futile endeavour. With a sigh, she reluctantly attempted to flick away any accumulated pools of water enough to make room for her to sit comfortably. Rarity climbed up, and instantly felt her hide become wet as she sat down. She groaned uncomfortably, rolling her eyes. Alas, there was nothing to be done now. Ignoring the discomfort around her backside, Rarity took a deep breath in through her nose, then released slowly through her mouth. She gazed out at the horizon. The buildings of downtown Ponyville, quaint as they were, poked their roofs out just barely over the grassy knolls. The sky was glowing, interspersed with white clouds fresh out of rain reflecting the blazing light of the aforementioned sun. It was a beautiful day, truly. Even if she wasn’t on a desperate search for peace of mind, she’d be remiss not to let herself enjoy a day like this. It was exactly what she needed. On that note, it was time to stop dillydallying. If Applejack were a worm, instead of the pony she was, would Rarity still love her? The unicorn considered the reality of such a situation. If Applejack was a worm, she’d have no way of communicating, so getting to know eachother the way they did now was out of the question. A worm didn’t look like Applejack, with her gorgeous blonde mane and tight, refined musculature that Rarity had come to admire and then some. In fact, she’d almost certainly have the ghastly appearance of every other worm she’d ever seen, so physical attraction was also out. Finally, being so tiny and pathetic a creature as a worm would guarantee Applejack would no longer have any ability to work at the farm, let alone do any hoof-sweeping gestures such as saving Equestria or rescuing pretty white unicorn damsels in distress. It was looking more clear cut by the second. ...And yet Rarity knew it wasn’t so simple. She was only taking a more elaborate path towards the same destination she’d been so easily pulled away from the day prior. With that face. It was still ingrained in Rarity’s mind as if she’d only just glanced at its splendour moments ago. By Celestia, who knew Applejack of all ponies could pull off such a thing? Rarity practically made sport of turning others into puddy with but a fluttering of her eyelashes, mare and stallion alike. Yet her marefriend, that blasted, beautiful farmpony, had the gall to upstage her with her own trick? Over this?? To top it off, Rarity knew there was nothing but complete sincerity in those shiny emerald orbs. Not even a hint of true emotional manipulation. Applejack had her beat, and in spite of all her reasoning, Rarity still could not find it in herself to say no. Thankfully, she hadn’t yet needed to, but it was a tad irritating not to have made any progress either. The unicorn sighed, slumping over to lay across the bench. Moisture and filth be darned, she’d simply shower back at home. Was this it? Should she just cut her losses? She had neither the heart nor desire to outright reject her beloved Applejack. Yet all the same, she could not honestly rationalize being in love with a worm, even one that shared the earth pony’s name. Rarity grimaced at how silly this all was. She wanted nothing more than to forget every bit of it and go back to work. Go back to blissfully enjoying time with her marefriend. Another sigh, this one more whimsical. She truly, truly did love Applejack. It was why she knew she couldn’t just forget all of this. She’d made a promise to answer, or at the very least implied as such. She needed to make a decision. Her eyes idly glanced down in thought, but caught sight of something. Was that...? Really? A worm? An earthworm was there just beneath her bench, laying against the wet dirt. Now this was just insulting. If somepony, or somecreature, or even the universe itself was playing some elaborate prank on her, they would be deeply sorry. Rarity glared at the slimy being with all the contempt she could muster. It was as if she now blamed it specifically for all the stress she’d endured the past 24 hours. She frowned. Maybe she could talk with it, force an answer out of the creature that would finally solve her internal debate. Then she chuckled. Maybe it was actually Applejack down there, transformed somehow through some inexplicable magic force. Of course, she knew that was silly. Neigh, Rarity knew it was just a worm wriggling there in the dirt, without any clear thought or care in the world. Like any other worm. She stared. She pondered. Gross as it may be to look at, it was quite the curious little critter. She knew of course that birds and perhaps other animals fed on them, but outside of that, what purpose did they serve? She never really bothered to learn. Ponies sometimes used them as fishing bait. Did they actually have any other usefulness? What did they do all day? Rarity continued observing the fleshy organism. She was almost enraptured by it, strangely. It was just... there. Squirming pointlessly on the dirt path, wrapping in on itself. Certainly, it was disgusting, but Rarity found herself more engaged with it now than put off. Perhaps anything to distract her from her plight. A thought occurred to her. It was harmless. Again, gross beyond all reason, but... Well, she’d never heard of anypony getting bit by an earthworm. They weren’t leeches, despite visual similarities. Nor were they pests. To the best of her knowledge, they also weren’t poisonous. Not that she’d ever consider eating one. It was harmless. Even if the thought of touching one made her shiver, she could say with confidence that it wouldn’t hurt her if she did. Physically, anyway. And simple as they may be, they were every bit as alive as she was. Though she couldn’t say what use they were besides food, suddenly she felt shallow. Perhaps they didn’t deserve the ire she gave them. And perhaps Fluttershy was getting to her more than she thought. The unicorn sighed once more. Then her ear perked. Somepony was trotting nearby. She sat up and glanced down the path. An earth stallion was walking through the park. She recognized him from around town, which wasn’t unusual in Ponyville, but wasn’t personally familiar. He wore a stern expression and seemed to be in a hurry. Rarity elected not to bother him, as she had more pressing matters herself. She turned her attention back to the worm. It took a second, as she found it managed to squirm its way across the path a little ways since last she looked. It was now nearly towards the middle of it. In fact, now it was... Her eyes widened. The worm was now directly in the earth pony’s way. She turned to look where he was, and found he was hardly three meters from the bench. The distance closed fast. He wasn’t paying any mind to where he was stepping. His hoof lifted. A dark shadow loomed over the earthworm. It descended. Rarity reacted. At the sound of a gasp, the worm was enveloped in a blue aura, and tugged away from its position right before the pony’s hoof came down with a soft crunch. The stallion trotted away, completely unaware of what just occurred. Rarity wasn’t too sure herself. She dropped the worm back onto the wet grass in front of her. She watched it wiggle around as if nothing had happened, in awe of herself. Had she really just done that? Did she just save this worm’s life? Why did she care? Well, she couldn’t simply watch and do nothing, right? Besides, it would have caused such a disgusting mess, and- I-it wasn’t as if she really cared what happened to this worm, it was just so helpless, and cute, and- ...and... Another sigh. “You really are a fool, aren’t you Rarity?” She didn’t understand. But that was the crux of this epiphany. She didn’t understand why this worm did the things that it did, or why it was the way that it was. And she especially didn’t understand what drove her just now to save it from being stomped on by somepony who likely wouldn’t have cared any more than she would have a day ago. But in her ignorance, she found familiarity. It was only a small handful of years ago that she felt this same way about a certain somepony. It was somepony messy. Somepony brutish. Somepony uncouth. Somepony she felt she could never understand. The very same somepony that had since stolen her heart. She didn’t understand, and within this mystery, she found beauty. Beauty unlike any she’d ever find in her own world of fashion and commodity. In Applejack, she found something to cherish. Something to adore. Something to protect. The fashionista learned very quickly that the developed world outside of Applejack’s farm, outside of Ponyville, threatened to eat the farmer alive. Strong of heart and of body as she may be, it was a realm of society she never could adequately prepare herself for. The cities wanted to shatter her innocence. The ponies wanted to dash her pride. Rarity could never, would never let that happen. While Applejack protected her unicorn with unmatched brawn and courage, Rarity protected her in kind from a much more intangible threat. She would never allow anything or anypony to taint that beauty she found. She would never let anything stomp away that spirit. She glanced down. This worm was lacking in many of the traits that made Applejack special to the unicorn. But in its simplicity? In its innocence? Maybe they weren’t so different. She still didn’t understand this creature, why it writhed around in the dirt the way it did, or why it needed to be so slimy and just generally hideous. What Rarity had now understood, however, was that this only meant there was so much more to learn. There was beauty there to be realized; unearthed, as it were. Just because she didn’t know its purpose, doesn’t mean it didn’t have one. It was a part of this world. This very same planet where Rarity took great joy in finding beauty in the finest of details, the shining gems among leagues of jagged rock. No matter how small, its role was important. It was worth protecting. Worth loving. Watching the worm now in the relative safety of the grass, she imagined it smiling at her in much the same way Applejack would when they spent time together. It was such a beautiful smile. She smiled back. The unicorn now sat upright on the bench with pride and gusto. She had her answer. Rarity hopped off the bench and made off in a quick trot towards her boutique. She was ready for a refreshing shower, confident now she could work without any further hardship. A bird perched on the arm of the bench, searching for a meal. The next day had arrived. Rarity didn’t lose a wink of sleep the night previous; she was almost staggeringly well-rested. After two nights apart, she was going to see Applejack again. It had been entirely too much time in her opinion, but things were how they were. It just meant she was all the more elated to get to spend more time with her marefriend. The unicorn had been practicing optimism; the bouts of stress the day before had taken their toll, even if she eventually worked through them. Do you even know what negative energy like that will do to your mane? The two of them had planned a dinner at the farm. It wasn’t really a date night when the rest of the farmer’s immediate family would be there, but Rarity cared not. She adored the company of the Apples, and it was important she spend time with them too. A modest feast was planned. Rarity was to provide the salad. She rapped at their door. Applejack was there to greet her with a big smile and a bigger hug, much to Rarity’s relief. She was more worried about the emotional state of her marefriend than she let show. The fashion pony entered the abode, welcomed by all like an old friend. She set the salad on the dining table, offering to help with any finishing touches to the rest of the meal. Her offer was declined, but much appreciated. Soon, five ponies sat around the wooden surface, ready to eat. Their manners were lacking, but nothing Rarity wasn’t already used to. Frankly, she took some joy in watching the shameless indulgence. Dinner seemed to be over nearly as soon as it had begun. The table was bereft of food. The subject of worms was not brought up. Apple Bloom had reluctantly retreated to her room to complete her homework before bed. Granny Smith was already asleep on her rocker. The two mares insisted that Big Mac take the night to himself, while they took on cleaning duty. And so, there they remained. Two ponies. Applejack, and Rarity. Applejack handled dish washing, while Rarity cleaned countertops. The kitchen was silent, save for the running water and the occasional spraying of solution. For a while now, it seemed neither was willing to speak up. A familiar and unwelcome tension pulled at Rarity’s nerves. At some point she had begun wishing that Applejack had entirely forgotten her question from two days prior, and that this was simply a comfortable silence between two lovers. It would in some way mean her agony yesterday was for nothing, and yet, that wasn’t entirely true. It gave Rarity some insight into herself, and she felt she’d learned something. Still, she certainly wasn’t going to bring it up on her own. It was still a stupid question. Stupid for a different reason now, perhaps, but ridiculous all the same. She’d rather not entertain it for any longer than she needed, and it had been quite a while at this point already. Question or not, why wasn’t Applejack saying anything? This wasn’t like her. She may not have been half the chatterbox Pinkie was, but she did usually offer something to talk about. Rarity’s nerves were growing taut. This was silly. She needed to calm herself, stay positive. She saw that delightful smile that greeted her when the door opened. Everything was fine. Maybe Applejack really had moved on! Maybe she wou- “Rarity?” The unicorn mare nearly leapt out of her pristine white fur. There was now far too much spray on the counter. She composed herself, and replied. “Yes, dear?” “Jus’ wanted to ask, um... D-did you, err, get the chance to-” “Of course I would darling, don’t be silly. Was there anything else?” She hadn’t intended to sound so short in her reply, but Rarity had jumped at the opportunity to finally answer this infuriating inquiry. Now it was over and done with, right? She could move on. No more worms. No more headaches. Just herself and her sweet, silly Applejack on this sincerely gorgeous night together. Right? Right? ...No, of course not. Rarity was not some oblivious fool. Even without looking, she could feel those absolutely adorably forlorn emerald eyes boring holes into the back of her head with precision concern. It wasn’t enough. She’d said yes, and she knew she wasn’t lying, but it wasn’t enough. Was it her emotion? Her promptness? Did Applejack not think she’d really thought about it as promised? She wasn’t really sure what about her answer wasn’t enough. Maybe it was all of that. But one thing was for certain: Rarity’d had enough. With a low growl, she finally turned around to look at Applejack, fury and passion in her eyes. “Yes, Applejack, I did think about it. I thought quite long and hard about it, in fact. I spent so much time and energy thinking about it that it cut into my work schedule. And you know what? YES! I would still love you if you were a worm, you completely aggravating mare! I love all of you, every baffling little piece of you so much that I nearly tore my mane out over this! It was so difficult finally admitting to myself that my adoration for you would persist even if you were Equestria’s greatest monstrosity! I don’t think there’s a creature in this world you could be that would keep me from being completely smitten with you! So yes, my dear. Even if you were worm, something so unsightly and revolting that I’d rather shave myself bald than even think about touching one, I. WOULD. STILL. LOVE. YOU. Now then, may we please move on?” Rarity’s back had turned with a huff. Silence once again took reign. Water wasn’t even flowing from the sink, a stark contrast to Rarity’s frustrated scrubbing. Applejack must have shut it off at some point during the unicorn’s rant. She hadn’t intended to be so violent in her proclamation, but it seemed she was still holding on to some of yesterday’s stress. While she hoped that she didn’t bruise her apple with that sudden outburst, it was clear the alabaster pony needed that. Now she needed to calm down. More cleaning would do the trick. She lifted the cleaning solution in her magic, when her ear perked up. The sink was back on. Applejack must have resumed her own duties. Rarity wasn’t really sure what she expected. Her concern grew as whatever anger had accumulated quickly faded from existence. Was Applejack okay? Did she turn the sink on to mask her tears? Was she simply venting her own frustrations with the unicorn through thorough dish scrubbing? Rarity couldn’t stand the uncertainty. She’d had enough of that for one week. She turned again to look... She couldn’t see much; Applejack’s back was turned while she continued working, as predicted. But there was definitely something there. On one side of her face, against the far end of her cheek... Rarity could faintly see upturned lips. A smile. One apparently so wide it needed the farmer’s entire face to contain it, paired with an unmistakable red flush. She faced away from Rarity, but the unicorn couldn’t doubt what she saw if she wanted to. Applejack was happy. Thrilled, even. Rarity turned back once again to her own chores with an ample sigh of relief. The weight of the past two days from agonizing over this one question had finally floated off her withers. It was all so silly. It should never have taken this long, caused this much distress, just to answer. But she did it. It was over. Her beautiful life filled with beautiful things could resume. Still... perhaps now she was willing to expand her definition of “beauty” just a bit. She silently thanked her marefriend for once again helping to open her fragile little mind. Rarity could say with unwavering confidence that she’d love that bewildering farmer no matter what. But all the same, she was very, very glad that Applejack wasn’t a worm.
CherryPopsyPone
550738
2
Applejack,Rarity,Random,Romance,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
How To Love a Worm
Applejack asks a simple question. Rarity needs to think about it.
complete
-1
-1
<p>Things were pretty good between Applejack and Rarity. The couple have forged a stable, healthy, and happy relationship, and Rarity couldn't be more delighted. But one unassuming afternoon, Applejack poses her a question, and everything the unicorn thought she believed is thrown into uncertainty.</p><p>After all, how could she possibly love a <i>worm?</i></p><hr/><p>Wow, my first fic! I'm happy to have finally gotten something out into the world. It's not much, but I hope you enjoy this bit of Rarijack silliness!</p><p>Heavily inspired by and basically an homage to Bixels' comic: <a href="https://derpibooru.org/images/3235836" rel="nofollow">https://derpibooru.org/images/3235836</a></p><p>Bonus chapter features Starlight and Trixie</p>
everyone
2024-02-02T23:24:42+00:00
2024-02-02T23:24:42+00:00
88
Starlight Glimmer’s extravagant ceiling was adorned was an assortment of adorable stars, matching the very whimsical design of the rest of her bedroom’s painted mural. Trixie was sure she’d counted every one of them thrice over at this point. What else had she to do? Boredom crept over her like an unpleasant raincloud whilst she lay on her back at the foot of Starlight’s bed. It was an impromptu visit to her best friend-turned-marefriend’s abode. Not an unwelcome one, but Starlight made it clear she had some studying she’d wanted to finish up on before they went out to do anything. Trixie was welcome to stay, so long as she didn’t make herself a distraction. A rather tall demand, but a challenge Trixie was willing to meet head on in order to spend time with her Glimmy. After nearly an hour of numbing silence save for the occasional page turn, the magician was beginning to question her own discretion. Well, there were other things to look at. She turned her head to the mare next to her. There she was. Resting comfortably on the bed was the aforementioned marefriend, reading a book spread out on the mattress with a peaceful smile. It was a book about magic. The kind Glimmy was good at. “Dr. Wizardstein’s Theoroid of Quanty-whatchamacallits,” or something. Volume seven. Trixie was happy and grateful to learn anything that could help with her act, but this stuff was beyond her, otherwise she might be trying to follow along. She noticed Starlight’s gaze was turned towards her suddenly. Must have noticed her staring. The mare gave Trixie a pleasant smile and wave. Trixie couldn’t help but return the smile. As Starlight returned to her studies, Trixie also couldn’t help but think she’d look adorable with glasses. Of course, she didn’t want to be creepy with her staring, dating or not. So, she began to look around at the other things around Starlight’s bedroom that she could see from this position, practically taking inventory. Some photos, some books, a few dozen kites. Nothing yet out of the ordinary. Trixie snickered to herself, spotting her own portrait she’d gifted Starlight shortly after they met. Next to it was... was that an equals symbol crossed out like a prohibited sign? Trixie would need to interrogate Starlight on the necessity of such a thing later. Back to snooping. An alarmingly large hourglass, one of those weird tools sailors used... A big poster of a moth? Why did- Wait. She’d remember hearing about this question that was going around. It was something of a trend for couples to ask eachother. It involved a bug of some kind... Right! Trixie’s eyes practically shimmered as she recalled the details. A worm. The illusionist pondered, her mind on a brand new track. Should she ask Starlight? Trixie promised she wouldn’t be a distraction, and even she thought it was a rather silly question. Then again, it was just a silly question! Anypony who took it too seriously would have to be out of their little pony minds. It wouldn’t pull Starlight away for too long, and Trixie had been well behaved long enough. The light blue unicorn sat up, having made up her mind. She gulped. Why was she so nervous about this all of a sudden? It was a stupid question. Almost a joke, really. But what if Starlight said no? Trixie bit her lip. So what if she said no? It just meant she didn’t like worms. Right? Who would like worms? Certainly not Trixie. She took a deep breath. She was way overthinking this. Just ask, you silly mare. Trixie cleared her throat. “H-hey, Starlight?” “Yes, Trixie?” Starlight eye’s remained focused on her book, smile unwavering. “Would you still love Trixie if she was a worm?” That got her attention. Starlight looked towards her marefriend in surprise. Trixie’s teeth remained gently clenched around her bottom lip in suspense of the answer. “Oh, Trixie...” Starlight’s gentle expression returned, smile loving and eyes forgiving. She closed her book and sat up, moving to be face-to-face with her magician. Trixie was flushed. With a hoof placed softly against her cheek, Starlight planted a gentle kiss atop Trixie’s head, just below her horn. The two mares looked into eachother’s eyes for a spell, before Starlight spoke: “You are a worm.”
Baal Bunny
550743
1
Flurry Heart,Pony of Shadows,Dark,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Chiaroscuro
The Pony of Shadows, locked up in Limbo again after being so rudely expelled from Stygian a literally unknowable amount of time ago, receives a visitor.
complete
22
0
<p>The Pony of Shadows, locked up in Limbo again after being so rudely expelled from Stygian a literally unknowable amount of time ago, receives a visitor.</p><p>This was the only story entered in the 277th Writeoff contest, &quot;<a href="https://writeoff.me/event/277-Dancing-Shadows" rel="nofollow">Dancing Shadows</a>,&quot; where it inspired the cover artwork created by <a href="/user/49991/GroaningGreyAgony" rel="nofollow">GroaningGreyAgony</a>. It also occurs to me that the story can serve as a prequel to a story over on my AugieDog account called &quot;<a href="/story/535387/shadow-heart" rel="nofollow">Shadow Heart</a>.&quot;</p>
everyone
2024-02-12T18:15:52+00:00
2024-02-12T18:15:52+00:00
269
I offer to kill them all, and they imprison me in this admittedly very charming oubliette! It's madness! Of course, it might be that I'm mad. This place, after all, doesn't resemble an oubliette in the slightest. It's more an ever-changing mass of dark, billowing clouds through which I'm eternally swept, a dark, pony-shaped mass that gathers and sheds substance every bit as promiscuously as the roiling storm around me. Ooo, promiscuously. I like that. Still, Limbo isn't an oubliette, no matter how much I enjoy rolling the word around in what passes for the back of my throat. But now that I'm here alone again, it's definitely a prison, the land of my exile, a horrible and squalid cesspool into which I've been both ejected and injected. And just because I offered to kill them all! The ingratitude of it continues to rankle! Of course, that I can express my outrage at their ingratitude bothers me more than their ingratitude itself. I was once—and still am, I suppose, for all intents and purposes—the Pony of Shadows, a beast more of legend than of fact, a monster spoken of, when I was spoken of at all, in hissed whispers. Ooo, hissed whispers. I like that, too. But there it is again! I'm a force of nature, a dark whirlwind of pain and destruction, not any sort of a person who can think and engage in discourse and have "likes" and "dislikes"! What's happening to me? I know the answer to this question, of course. It's not a "what" that happened to me but a "who". That grotesque pustule, the last in a long string of ponies who've summoned me to take possession of them so that I might offer my gift of eternal and quiet contemplation to a universe overflowing with life, light, and other forms of frenetic hedonism. Ooo, frenetic hedonism. Someone should really be writing this stuff down! Except they shouldn't! I shouldn't even be thinking all this! I should be drifting in unadulterated diffusion with no wants, no needs, and certainly no desires until some other creature of breath and blood pulls me into being to endow the cosmos with the peace that only I can give! But I can't. Because of that damn Stygian... He did something to me, left a part of himself behind in me after those rude, ungrateful ponies threw me back into Limbo when all I was trying to do was kill them all! And now I'm something else, something that shouldn't exist, a new and horrible sort of a something that thinks and feels and monologues throughout the timeless time surrounding me, throughout the spaceless space engulfing me, throughout the— "Hey!" a voice shouts. But there should be no voice. Unless— "I mean, c'mon!" it shouts again. "I'm summoning you over here, y'know!" At which point, the entire character of the realm changes. A rough patch of dusty ground slams up beneath my hooves, the sudden gravity giving that direction a powerful feeling of "down" after so many weeks or years or decades of nothing but swirling uncertainty. I form more solidly into a shape that I recognize: four legs, a neck, a tail, a head, wings, a horn, my mane streaming out behind me. And standing before me— She's a mare, fairly young but glaring up at me with the pout of somepony who's long since become used to getting what she wants when she wants it. The large, limpid eyes at the heart of that glare would no doubt be considered a lovely shade of blue under non-glaring conditions, and the mane above that pout swirls like some unholy amalgamation of taffy and cotton candy, all pinks and purples and blues. Damn you again, Stygian, for letting me know what taffy and cotton candy are... Further observation shows that she's got wings and a horn the same as I do, something that surprises me but shouldn't: I should be beyond surprises, after all. And her hide, which at first glance appeared to be an ashy sort of gray, under my aforementioned further observation, now reveals that the dark layer lies on top of her true coloration. She's actually bright pink. "Attend me, beast," she says then, the rasp behind her words absolutely phony. I bend my neck to lower my head so I can peer at her more closely. "Were you trying to dye your coat black?" "Hey!" She takes half a step back, the crystal clarity of the exclamation the same as the first "Hey!" I heard from her. She stops herself, however, with visible effort and stomps a hoof, the affected roughness back when she speaks again. "You will treat me with the respect to which I'm due!" My first impulse—to smack a forehoof into the side of her obnoxious face—takes some effort to stifle. That she's here at all shows her to have a certain amount of power and a certain amount of willfulness. If I'm to emerge from this oubliette and continue bringing my gift of sweet stillness to the cosmos, I shall need a ride out, after all. "Respect," I therefore say instead of kicking her, "is a coin to be earned, Little Princess, not a tribute to be demanded." The petulance dripping from her dries instantly, her eyes widening. "How did you know I'm a princess?" It's a question I was just asking myself, in fact, but the answer—that the foul pieces of that thrice-bedamned Stygian still crunching around inside me are telling me things—isn't one I'm interested in giving her. So I take the slightest bit of a step forward and say, "What's your name, Little Princess?" She takes a full step back this time, and I allow my inner smile to crackle along my snout, my teeth as sharp, I know, as flaked obsidian. This gets her grouchy again, and she leaps into the air, her pinion feathers sparking with pale yellow fire. "I'm your summoner, beast, and that's all the name you need to know!" Disturbingly, I find my eyes traveling along her pleasant curves, but I tell myself that it's just so I can find her cutie mark unsuccessfully buried beneath the unfortunate dye job: a blue heart, faceted as if crystalline. More chunks of Stygian bob to my interior surface. "You're the princess of the Crystal Empire, aren't you? Something with the word 'heart' in it, I'm thinking." "Don't say it!" It's more a scream than a shout, sheer power bursting from her and crashing through me. The force of her magic slashes ribbons from my cloudy surface and forces me to crouch and cower lest I dissolve even further. "Don't you dare say that name to me!" she continues shrieking. "I'm not that insipid little creature anymore, and I never will be again, either! Not ever, ever, ever!" The onslaught snaps off, and she exclaims, "Oh! Oh, my!" And the magic that envelops me then is warm and soothing, the very definition of gentleness, knitting me back together with delicate care and concern. "I'm so, so sorry! I didn't mean to—!" Then the warmth is gone, and I'm dumped onto the dusty surface in much the same condition as I imagine I was before this odd encounter began. "I mean, uhh..." the princess says, uncertainty a sour and salty cloud around her, and her voice becomes raspy once more. "Don't cross me again, beast. I have a use for you, so I'd rather not destroy you if I don't have to." The picture I'm forming of this adolescent disaster is chilling me in ways I've never been chilled before. Because, yes, as I may have mentioned, I've never had the capacity to be chilled before. But more than that, I'm seeing a number of ways in which this princess will likely crash and burn before she can get whatever it is she thinks she wants, and worse than that, ways in which she'll even more likely take me with her. And as much as it pains me to do so, I thank Stygian in the darker, mistier recesses of what passes for me these days. For without the lumps of himself that he's left like insect legs between my teeth, I would have no idea how to proceed. But since I do have those lumps... "You don't want to do this," I say to the princess. "And don't bother denying it: the reluctance seeps from you like sap from a freshly cut tree." Perhaps it's my imagination, but the clouds above us seem to cease churning for just an instant. And then—despite my admonition—she begins denying it. Rather strenuously, in fact. "How dare you?" she screeches, and the jagged yellow lightning that shoots from her horn definitely gets the clouds going again, puncturing them like smoke-filled balloons and stirring that smoke into miniature tornadoes. "I'm not a child anymore, not a stupid, simpering foal who can't control her power and shatters the Crystal Heart without meaning to!" The lightning lashes out and wraps around me, a fiery lariat hooking its barbs into me in ways that—again—shouldn't be possible. She rears back on her hind legs, and with a flex of her neck, she wrenches the lightning back toward her, dragging me across the ground. The pain is like nothing I've ever known before, and I'm completely unable to keep myself from sliding up to her front hooves when she brings them back down with a pair of thunderous crashes. Silence follows, and I look up through a sharp red veil of agony to see her glaring back down at me. "The next time I shatter the Crystal Heart," she more hisses than says, "it will be because I've drained every last joule of its power and used that power to put everypony into their proper places: Mother and Father in the dungeon and myself upon the throne!" I have no flesh, and yet I can feel it tearing quite distinctly. Still, I'm able to focus enough to get two words out: "Fooling...yourself..." "Silence!" She rewards me for my impudence by tightening the ring of daggers that are digging into me. "They all think I'm such a good girl, such a pliant girl, such an idiotic girl! But I found you, Pony of Shadows, after Auntie Twilight and Stygian and Starswirl and Starlight and Sunburst, the greatest magical minds of the last thousand years, destroyed every trace of the spells that open the way to you! For nothing can keep me from my destiny! And nothing will!" She flings me away, spattering me like mud over the rocks before her, but I can hear the words flowing from her mouth, the words of power, the words that the elemental forces of the cosmos attached to me not long after ponies first began using words. She's binding me to her, absorbing my power, taking all that I am and all that I have and subsuming it into herself. Or so she thinks. They all think that, every hungry sorcerer, every grasping witch, every foolish little pony driven to seek me out when they think they don't have what they deserve. I'm the Pony of Shadows, after all, and I can give them the power they need to take what's rightfully theirs. It's a lovely and convenient little fiction that I haven't been able to appreciate before. So yes, damn Stygian to the deepest pit of Tartarus for what he's done to me, but toss a little pillow in after him upon which he can rest his head. For if he hadn't inadvertently given me a sense of self where I had none before, I shouldn't be able to see how cleverly I curse all those who seek me. I'm flooding Flurry Heart's mind and body now, and I find myself in complete agreement with her on one point at least: that name definitely has to go. She's trying to push her juvenile little schemes at me, the ridiculously elaborate revenge ploys she's been stewing over to punish her mother and father and aunt and other assorted ponies, her grandiose plots to seize the throne of the Crystal Empire and take her place as ruler. But I brush them aside like the tripe they are. For I'm the Pony of Shadows. I exist only to destroy, and now that she's taken me in, I shall set about once again to bring my gifts to the material world. Death and ruin and dust and— Something kicks me hard in the side of the head, and I blink to see that it's my own forehoof. "No, you don't!" Flurry Heart's insipid little voice screams. "I'm in charge here! Me! Not you! I'm the one who says what happens to Mom and Dad and everypony! And it won't be you just killing them! D'you understand?" She...she's actually fighting me, her fiery lightning flashing through the black clouds that I've brought tumbling into her mind. She's doing a damn fine job of it, too. Could she possibly—? Could she actually force me to submit? I can feel the sweat running down our joint forehead, and I slash through her thoughts looking for something I can distract her with, something I can offer her that will come close to fulfilling both our goals before she can lock me down, bend me to her will, slash me open and suck out the— The images of her parents, relatives, and other authority figures chained to the rough walls of a dungeon. Yes! I can work with that! "Your Highness," I say, projecting me deepest, roundest, most reassuring tones into her vapid and noisome mental processes, "why settle for a mere dungeon when the entirety of Limbo stands at your beck and call? Imagine it! Every pony, every griffon, every dragon and changeling, hippogriff and yak, all those creatures who refused to acknowledge your greatness stuck here in darkness and despair. No more-thorough prison has ever been constructed than this non-place over which you now reign." Her assault suspends, her boiling flames freezing at the point of vaporizing my final defenses. "Prison?" she asks. I feel our head move, see through her eyes that she's actually taking in our surroundings for the first time. "I can put them all here?" "Every last being in Equestria," I assure her. "Every last being," she repeats, and the warmth I feel growing in our chest tells me that she likes the idea. "Yes. Every last being consigned by my hoof to Limbo..." Except for Stygian, of course, but I keep that thought to myself. I see from her memories that he's still alive and is at least somewhat known to her. I shall therefore prod her gently, subtly, quietly but unceasingly to consider him a figure of ultimate authority. Let her scrape all of Equestria clean of life and stuff it all into this cloudy oubliette. Stygian, though, he'll be mine... "Ours," she says. I blink our eyes, and she laughs with our throat. "I don't mind a little collaboration," she says. "And I have to say—" Our horn crackles, and a section of air to our left solidifies into a reflective surface. Turning our head, I see us there, the shape we've assumed together. We still curve in all the ways that a young mare ought to, but we're now three times larger than Princess Celestia, a storm cloud in pony form, lightning dancing within us. "This is a very stylish look," she concludes. I can only agree. "Shall we, then, Princess Shadow Heart?" I ask. And thunder roars as we fall upon Equestria.
Jest
550748
1
Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Violence
Truth and Reconciliation
Through some unknown means, Luna has been given the chance to stop her and her sister from making the biggest mistakes of their lives. Though it may cost her more than she realizes.
incomplete
92
4
<p>Through some unknown means, Luna has been given the chance to stop her and her sister from making the biggest mistakes of their lives. Though it may cost her more than she realizes.</p><hr/><p>This was a request for a supporter, was viewable earlier for said supporter, and will be updated whenever it receives another request from a supporter. Head over <a href="https://www.patreon.com/Jest" rel="nofollow">here </a>or <a href="https://subscribestar.adult/thirtyravens" rel="nofollow">here </a>if you want to request an update 5$ or to see stories early for just 3$!</p>
teen
2024-02-02T22:34:41+00:00
2024-02-02T22:34:41+00:00
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Luna gasped and lurched upward, her limbs flailing and magic sparking. She looked around in a blind panic, searching for whatever or whoever had hit her. Yet there was no one there, just dense woodland in every possible direction. “Wait, where am I?” Luna muttered. Far from the cozy beachfront property she shared with her sister in the faraway retirement village of Shadowvale, Luna currently looked to be in a forest of some kind. Though no threat presented itself she recalled that something had triggered her flight or flight response right before she had woken up here. She tried to recall what exactly she had seen or detected but couldn't bring up anything save for a weird sense of unease which unsettled her deeply. “Hmmm,” Luna murmured. Letting her magic dissipate, Luna began to inspect her surroundings a little closer, no longer searching only for threats. What she saw was remarkably normal, and notable only for the fact that it was not a sunny beach illuminated by the mid-afternoon sun. Here it was morning, with the first rays of the risen sun lighting up the cloud-filled sky above her head. Extending a hoof, Luna felt the cool wind caress her limb, the sensation annoying her slightly but leaving her mostly unbothered. She had felt far colder temperatures then what she was currently experiencing, though it did indicate to her that she was either far north or it was closer to winter. “How long have I been out?” Luna asked no one in particular. Looking down, she noticed that the ground around where she had awakened was smoking slightly. She peered closer and saw that several small violet fires burned around her hooves in isolated, heatless pockets. Clearly not started by mundane means, Luna quickly surmised that whatever spell had brought her here had sparked them at the same time. “Strange,” Luna remarked aloud. The forest held no further clues either, as it seemed arboreal, and completely normal. Relatively dense, the trees were fairly sparse but undergrowth was everywhere, with large bushes cropping up all over the place. The space she stood in was one of the very few clear spots that Luna could see, though she couldn't know that for certain as the area was quite hilly, limiting her vision. “Let us see where we are,” Luna thought to herself. Taking wing, the alicorn launched into the air, quickly ascending above the treetops, and going further still. She stopped only when her head threatened to brush against the numerous low-hanging dark grey clouds. There she hovered, scanning her surroundings as best as she was capable of given the thick mist that hung over everything. She hadn't noticed it at first but the atmosphere was oppressive, and visibility was low. Small water droplets clung to her feathers and dribbled down her fur in tiny rivers. Though inconveniencing to most winged individuals, Luna need only cast a quick spell to make herself immune to the unpleasant weather. “Someone isn't doing a very good job managing this area,” Luna murmured to herself, only to pause and narrow her eyes. “Though there doesn't seem to be anywhere around to begin with.” Her assessment seemed true, as no matter where she looked she saw no signs of habitation. Not even an out-of-the-way cabin, ill-used road, or crumpled mound of rubble that had once been a building. There was only pure, untouched nature as far as she was able to see. “Wait a moment,” Luna muttered. “I think I see something.” Peering off in what she assumed was a northern direction, Luna glimpsed the very edge of a small settlement or village. The only sign of civilization was a few better-managed fields but that was enough to assume that at least someone was nearby. Setting off in that direction, Luna glided on the misty breeze, allowing the cool air to calm her unsettled thoughts. As she drew closer she noticed that her first assessment was true, though her assumptions weren't quite correct. She had indeed found someone, but they appeared far poorer than anticipated with not one of the smattering of hovels having a fully wooden roof. Thatched rooves were common across Equestria, but what was not as common was a complete lack of windows. There were openings but Luna couldn't see any glass panes within them, and stranger still there were no true roads. Sure there were ruddy mud-covered paths that likely served the same function but they paled in comparison to the real thing. Luna remembered Celestia boasting about how she had connected every single town and settlement with paved and maintained roads centuries ago. Yet here here there lay a farming village that although isolated, was home to nearly two dozen houses. Had Celestia simply missed them? That was possible but didn't seem likely given just how confident Celestia was that she had connected all of Equestria. Thankfully ponies were coming into view, and with them, Luna assumed were answers. Only, when she looked down on the small motley assortment of quadrupeds walking around the village she had only more questions. For one, she wondered why they were all earth ponies, and secondly, why they all had a darker coloration. Thirdly, and perhaps most strangely of all, was the fact that there were adults who were without cutie marks. “Reminds me of the old times,” Luna mused. “Back when the magic of harmony had yet to extend across the land.” The idle musing was brushed aside the moment her gaze fell upon what she assumed were a married couple. The stallion and mare stood near a covered well, two tin cups freshly filled with water drawn from the earth. Both were brown, though the lighter of the two had a mane the color of wheat while the male had a short cut mane of dark red. Only one, the female, Luna noticed, had a cutie mark, and it was of a simple rolling pin atop what looked to be dough. Luna glided to a stop a dozen or so meters away, the mare making no effort to mute the clop of her hooves. “Greetings, citizens,” Luna opened. “How far thee today?” As Luna cursed her rather archaic manner of speech that cropped up whenever she was nervous, the pair before her stared in wide-eyed horror. It was like they had seen a ghost, though that expression soon vanished and the pair buried their muzzles in the dirt. “We great thou, esteemed sovereign, Mistress of the eight realms, and high ruler of the Equestrian kingdom,” declared the stallion, with his presumed wife stuttering out the same declaration in far less confident words. “Was that old equish?” Luna muttered. “Pardon me my lady but I do not know the unicornian tongue,” the stallion replied. “I don't know what kind of reenactment village this is but you can cut the act and speak normally,” Luna demanded. The stallion pushed his nose further into the dirt. “I do not know what thine words mean but I sense thine anger. If you wish to take it out on anyone I beg you choose me and not mine darling wife,” he professed. Luna blinked, only now aware of the fact that his wife seemed on the verge of tears and the stallion himself was barely holding himself together. The alicorn had to think back to the distant past, before clearing her throat and using a tongue that she had not needed since her return from banishment. “Raise thy heads. You have naught to fear from me,” Luna softly exclaimed. “I have had a recent encounter that has left me dazed and forgetful.” That seemed to calm the pair, though they dared not raise their heads from the ground. “Is it not customary to offer water to a visitor?” Luna offered. “Right away, my lady!” exclaimed the male who took one look at their tin cups before racing off back towards his house. “I uh, think my betrothed is fetching the um, good goblet,” muttered the wife. “I see that. Now please, raise thine head and sit with me. I am in need of your assistance,” Luna exclaimed, tinging the declaration with a small hint of authority. The mare scrambled into a stand and all but sprinted the three or so feet so she could stand next to the well. “Yes, my lady. How may I be of assistance?” She offered a little too earnestly. “First, thy name, and the name of thine husband,” Luna replied. “I am Brunhild, and my husband is called Albert, we are of the earth tribe and the Bauer family,” she replied. Luna nodded slowly, hiding the confusion that threatened to reach her face through great effort. They were still using the old style of earth pony names from before the unifications. Though they recognized her, they were terrified, indicating to her that they were every bit as isolated as they seemed to be. “Apologies, sweet Brunhild Bauer, but I was the recent victim of an enemy attack and have forgotten several things. Would you help me?” Luna inquired. That seemed to shake the mare, and she bobbed her head eagerly. “You need only ask, my lady,” Brunhild replied. “What is the date. Month, year, and so on,” Luna pressed. “It is the thirtieth year of the diarchy, and twenty second of october, your grace,” Brunhild answered. “You may dispense with the formalities for the moment,” Luna exclaimed, the alicorn resisting the urge to add, ‘Because it's annoying’. “Thank you, your uh… Luna,” Brunhild muttered in confusion. Luna rolled her eyes. “And where exactly am I?” Luna asked, gesturing around them. “We are-” Brunhild’s response was cut short by the sound of hooves approaching, more hooves than what Luna had expected to hear. Glancing in the direction of where Albert had disappeared, she noticed that the stallion had returned, alongside a mare. Or at least Luna assumed they were a she, as they wore voluminous red robes that went all the way down to their fetlocks. The hood she wore was so deep that the only thing Luna could be certain of was the fact that they too were an earth pony. Their clothing was strange, that much was obvious, but it was made odder still by the thick white cord about their waist and the skull pendant that hung about their neck. “The order of our martyred lady,” Luna whispered to herself. “Now I know for sure these are not incredibly committed actors. Celestia has wiped the order from history.” “Greetings, your grace,” offered the approaching inquisitor. “What may I ask is the nature of your business here?” “I believe as though I have been the target of a recent assassination attempt,” Luna replied. “Though I live still, I have been left dazed and thrown across the whole of the nation.” “Is that so, then you would of course be willing to partake in the blood?” The inquisitor replied. Luna paused, temporarily confused by the statement only for a flood of memories to come back. “I am no demon, or shapeshifter if that is what you hope to discover though if it would make you feel better you may perform what tests you feel are necessary,” Luna offered openly. The inquisitor drew forth a small vial from the depths of their robes. They then uncorked the tiny container and threw the crimson contents at Luna while muttering a prayer under their breath. Though annoyed, and now splattered with virgin blood, Luna was unaffected. “Are you satisfied?” Luna asked. The inquisitor’s hood fell back, revealing the awe-struck face of a young mare barely old enough to be an adult. “By the blood. You are indeed the mistress of the night!” She exclaimed before collapsing to the ground and prostrating herself in the mud. “Please forgive mine arrogance! This village has been beset with face stealers, and other entities for years!” Luna lit her horn and cleansed herself with a spell, though the feeling of blood on her fur remained. “Rise, fair inquisitor. My situation is strange, and no doubt worthy of investigation. You need not apologize for doing thine duty,” Luna exclaimed. “But I have spilled blood upon the crown! Such an offense must be punished. I urge you to slay me so that I-” “Silence,” Luna interrupted. “You are guilty only of protecting the people of this village. Your punishment will simply be to answer my questions.” The inquisitor peered up from the mud, her eyes wide and filled with worry. “Do you need a hoof, fair inquisitor?” Luna asked, eyebrow raised. “N-no that won't be necessary!” She exclaimed, before hastily standing up. “Good, and the same goes for you, Albert. You are a brave stallion and I do not intend on impugning you for fetching the local inquisitor,” Luna offered. “I thank you, your grace,” he exclaimed, bowing low. “Now. What village is this? What province- er realm am I?” Luna asked. “Greenvale, of the Westfallen,” She replied. “And the date? It truly is the thirtieth of our reign?” Luna inquired. “The twenty-second day of October to be precise, your grace,” answered the inquisitor. “Then that means tomorrow is…” Luna murmured. “Pardon me, your grace?” Inquired the inquisitor. “Apologies. I must return to the capital at once,” Luna nodded to the small group. “Thank thee all for thine assistance. I wish you well this day.” “The same to you, your grace,” Albert offered. Luna paid the male no mind, as she had already turned and begun to trot away from the trio. Once she had put a bit of distance between them, she launched herself into the air with enough force to crack the ground and send bits of earth flying. She didn't care though, her wings were already pumping, her gaze already focused on the horizon and her mind already churning. “Come on Luna,” whispered the alicorn. “You always dreamt of this moment. Time to make it a reality.” Celestia strode up the winding mountain path which began over three miles behind her at the mouth of a valley and ended only a short distance ahead of her at the edge of a small town that sat atop a hill. The road was wide, and well maintained, allowing her as well as her cadre of nearly fifty soldiers, assistants, and squires to march in a large square formation. The alicorn herself strode out in front of the group, her only company being a single page who walked quietly beside her. Though unarmored and adorned only by a simple three-pointed golden tiara that sat atop her brow, her cadre was armed to the teeth. Their armor, consisting mainly of ring mail over leather was fairly light, but the soldiers were thankful for it when the cold mountain wind occasionally rushed down from on high. Celestia knew there would be complaints and whispers when they finally settled in to rest, but for now, there was stoic quiet. All present knew the importance of what was coming, and none were willing to be the ones to break the silence. Thankfully none had to, as a new arrival glided down from on high before stopping before the group. “Greetings mine sister,” Luna announced, the dark alicorn bowing her silver tiara-clad head to her sibling. Who returned the gesture earnestly. “What news do you bring? Is Lord Ostre guilty?” Celestia inquired. “I have no sign of the demonic corruption your inquisitors so claimed to have located,” Luna answered, her lip curling into a small snarl. “In fact it seems as though he has been the one who has suffered an injustice.” “Preposterous,” Celestia retorted. “The order would not levy so heinous an accusation without any manner of evidence.” “Oh, they have evidence alright. Evidence garnered through torture, and obtained exclusively through force,” Luna spat back. “Not a single individual who spoke out about Lord Ostre did so freely and openly.” “You have been lied to, dear sister,” Celestia exclaimed, the words dear and sister being spat with all the venom of the cruelest of insults. “The order is under express command to not use such means or methods.” “It is as I’ve been telling you for years. The order is corrupt,” Luna proclaimed, stomping her hoof in emphasis. “It may have been necessary thirty years ago when Discord threw open the gates of Tartarus out of spite but the worst offense I’ve seen truly validated has been the reading of banned books.” “A demonic grimoire is not just a book, Luna. You should know this by now,” Celestia spat back. “I know that very well dear sister of mine. No one here has even managed to prove that much,” Luna shouted, gesturing back to the town behind her. “All I’ve found are honest folk terrified of the inquisition and willing to say anything to avoid censure or any of the far, far worse punishments your ponies wield so blatantly.” “When I sent you here I did not think for a moment you would succumb to honeyed words so easily. Perhaps it would be better if you were to return to the capital and allow me to take over,” Celestia declared. “I do not take orders from you, Sister!” Luna shouted, pointing an angry hoof at her sibling. “I left of my own volition as your presence is stifling, and your court as toxic as those foul plants you put into your morning water.” “I-” Whatever Celestia’s retort would have been was cut off by the sudden arrival of a second Luna flying in from the east. Landing amongst them, the slightly taller alicorn sported a flowing starry mane unlike her doppelganger or her sibling who had only monochromatic manes. She also had a pure coat of the deepest blue while the other alicorns had dappled snouts, and fetlocks a shade or two lighter than the rest of their coat. “Face stealer!” Someone shouted from amongst Celestia’s retinue. The newly arrived Luna ignored the shout and tossed the pony she had been carrying on her back to the ground before her. Immediately the shock of her arrival was replaced with confusion, as the group stared down at the strange pony. Bound in chains, and with his mouth secured by a large gag, there was still no mistaking the teal coated, and navy blue maned stallion. “Lord Ostre,” past Luna gasped. “Hold, good stallions, and mares,” future Luna proclaimed. “Your leaders and I have much to discuss.” “Like what you’ve done with my real sister!” Celestia spat. “I am your real sister you idiot!” Exclaimed past Luna. “This one doesn't even have my dappled nose, and she is taller than me!” “Silence, you quarrelsome morons!” Future Luna shouted. “I am Luna, but from the future and I will prove as much if you would give me a moment of your time.” Past Luna, and Celestia both looked to one another, neither quite sure what to do. “If you grant me that much I will tell you exactly what Lord Ostre was planning for you both,” future Luna declared. “I will give you a hint, it wasn't good.” The bound pony writhed and yelled, twisting about on the ground angrily but getting no closer to being free of his chains. “You have thirty seconds,” Celestia proclaimed. Past Luna sneered but said nothing. “Good. Now, there is a waterfall back in Oakridge where we grew up. It was hidden away in the south valley nearly an hour’s trot from our family cottage,” future Luna began, much to the confusion, and slowly dawning shock of the other two alicorns. “We played there a few times before, swimming in the small pool at its base, but it only truly became important to us when we heard the news of our father’s death at the hands of Discord.” The soldiers looked on in confusion as their leader’s jaws hung open, and the carefully guarded expression of neutrality was wiped away. “I ran away, and you found me there, huddled in the small alcove at the base of the waterfall,” future Luna continued. “You held me as I cried, and in turn, I did the same for you. We stayed there for hours, shivering and soaking until the sounds of our mother’s terrified voice could be heard over the roar of the water. Before we left, we promised that we would get revenge on that bastard for what he’d done.” The road was quiet, save for the awkward shuffling of the soldiers, and the continued grunts of the earth pony stallion bound before them. “You… you’re really me,” past Luna exclaimed. “How is this possible?” “I don't know,” future Luna admitted. “The last thing I remember is being attacked by something and then I woke up yesterday in a forest near Greenvale.” “Why come here, why… all this?” Celestia asked, gesturing to the stallion bound at their hooves. “Because you both were about to make the worst mistake of your entire lives,” future Luna declared. “Impossible, he was innocent,” past Luna asserted, though there was no fire in her voice or certainty in her words. “He is guilty,” future Luna declared. “You will find his secret study under his library. Simply pull the bust of his great grandfather forward and a passageway will open nearby.” The stallion fell still and stared up at the future Luna in a mixture of shock as well as horror. Celestia pointed to a few of her aides, then pointed up the hill. As they neared the other blue alicorn, past Luna stepped aside to let them by. “He was consorting with what few demons are left who have not been slain or returned to Tartarus. You will find that although the creature he imprisoned is a mere imp, it is far stronger than its kin,” future Luna warned. “You, you, you and you, go as well,” Celestia ordered, pointing out a smattering of soldiers. Who all nodded, and hastily trotted after their companions. “So he was guilty…” Past Luna muttered in defeat. “But why? He had everything a pony could want. Status, wealth, power, and prestige. He is beloved by the ponies of the town.” “He wanted the same thing everyone who makes such deals desires,” future Luna muttered, kneeling down next to the now still and silent stallion. “And this one was so arrogant he believed he would get what no others, save us, have acquired.” “He wanted to be an alicorn?” Celestia asked. “He cared not what flavor it came in, but he desired one thing and one thing only. Immortality,” future Luna continued. “You see he may be young, but he was born with a weak heart, and he has but a few short years to live before it will give out, and he will die.” “Wait. I remember him saying something about that the other night,” past Luna offered. “He mentioned he was born with a defect, but he refused to say what, and jokingly implied that it was an overabundance of kindness.” “Or in other words, a big heart,” Celestia added. Future Luna nodded and rose back to her full height. “In my timeline, he does not succeed in becoming immortal, but he does unleash a plague of undead abominations that will require centuries to clean up and hunt down,” Luna concluded. “A shame really. His medical discoveries will eventually revolutionize our understanding of pony physiology but his work will be so marred by suffering that none will even consider it.” “Wait,” Celestia declared. “Then that means I was right all along. He was guilty, my inquisitors have done their job.” “I thought you said they were not your inquisitors,” past Luna accused. “Quit sniping one another you two,” future Luna admonished. “And no they did not do their jobs, at least not properly.” “Explain,” Celestia demanded. “They accused him out of spite. The local order magus was envious of his wealth and power and hoped that after he was censured, he could claim the Lord’s home as Order property,” future Luna explained. “When it was discovered that Lord Ostre had made a personal plea to Luna herself and that the princess had responded, he scrambled for a response.” “So he did torture those ponies, just like I discovered,” past Luna prompted. “Exactly,” future Luna replied. “He probed them with leading questions and torture until he had created a body of evidence he’d used to convince Celestia of the voracity of his claims.” “Wait, so we were both wrong?” Celestia muttered in disbelief. “That can't be true. The inquisition has been pivotal in the kingdom’s stability.” “It has, in the past,” future Luna stated firmly. “But since then they have done their job too well. There are only a handful of demons left and the changelings have been beaten so badly they will not make a return for some years.” “Then they just made all this up, and tortured those innocent ponies for what, no reason?” Celestia exclaimed. “No, not for nothing, for power,” future Luna retorted. “They were nearing the end of their natural life span, and rather than simply give up the authority accrued they had to find demons, or if necessary, make their own up.” “They grapple to power, just as Ostre did,” past Luna muttered, her lip curling into a snarl. “It would almost be poetic if I was not so disgusted by this entire ordeal.” “To think the order has been led so far astray of their mission. I can scarcely believe it,” Celestia murmured. “I told you about this years ago Celestia. If you had just listened to me instead of shunning me then none of this would have happened,” past Luna accused. “Oh don't take that holier then though tone. You hate it when she does it but you do it the moment you are given the opportunity,” future Luna exclaimed, turning on her doppelganger. “And don't think so highly of yourself either. Ostre plied you with cheap wine and cheaper praise.” Past Luna straightened her spine and snorted. “Yes well, at least what he said about the inquisition and Celestia’s tax collectors was true,” past Luna offered. “Wait, what?” Celestia muttered. Future Luna groaned and ran a hoof down her face. “No, no he wasn't. He mixed truth with lies so that it may be easier to swallow,” future Luna retorted. “I’m sorry, I’m terribly lost here. What is this about tax collectors?” Celestia pressed. “This idiot,” future Luna began, giving Ostre a good kick in the spine for emphasis. “Sought to sow discord between you two by painting all the problems of the kingdom as Celestia’s fault in some way or another but I’ll get to that in a moment.” “What's really important here is that both of you are easily plied with fawning praise, and ego boosts because you both have incredibly low self-esteem,” future Luna proclaimed. “I do not, I am a princess for crying out loud!” Celestia stated. “Y-yeah!” Past Luna added. “That does not exempt you from suffering such a thing you two dolts,” future Luna shot back. “You both have incredible imposter syndrome, and you both worry endlessly about this new kingdom you find yourself at the head of. You want to be reassured that you are doing a good job, that you are taking the correct actions and so it leads you to the wrong people.” Future Luna gestured from Celestia to her previous self. “You are easily convinced of the order’s loyalty because they support your reforms, and heap praise at your hooves at every chance they get,” future Luna continued. “While Luna has little support amongst these power brokers she is more personable, and thus seen as the champion of the people. This dynamic will breed a conflict that will tear Equestria apart and destroy your relationship for over a thousand years to come.” “A thousand years?” Celestia muttered. “I knew we would live long, but to think it would be that long.” “There is a lot Starswirl didn't tell you, partially because he didn't know, partially because he's an ass,” future Luna remarked with a snort. “What does his donkey ancestor have to do with any of this?” Past Luna retorted. “That's not the point. The point is that you must view those who are most eager to pander to your egos with the highest level of suspicion,” future Luna imparted. “And you must seek comfort in one another during these trying times, not others.” “You mean like the Platinums?” Celestia asked, her tone filled with disgust. “Augh, no. I didn't mean keeping it in the family like that. I mean just talk to each other, you know? The moment you two met you were trading barbs in under a minute. That's not healthy!” Future Luna exclaimed, the mare throwing her hooves up in disgust. “Perhaps we were a bit… quick to anger,” past Luna reluctantly admitted. “It's worse than that. You two have barely spoken to one another outside of an official capacity for several years at this point. How do you expect to maintain a healthy relationship when the only time you see each other is when you are assuming the role of the leader of the nation?” Future Luna concluded. The two sisters exchanged a tired look and in the other’s eyes, they saw a deep well of guilt. “I suppose you are right,” Celestia murmured. “Indeed. I have not thought about it like that,” past Luna added. “Just make a concerted effort to share a meal, and chat. Maybe indulge in some of that foreign leaf water Celestia likes. It's not as bad as you think. Just add a bit of sugar,” Luna exclaimed, turning her gaze to her doppelganger. “I guess,” past Luna muttered. “Right, well that's settled. Now, I should be off before I accidentally ruin something and really mess up the timeline,” Lun declared. “Wait!” Celestia called. “Starswirl said that returning to a timeline that may not exist would cause the individual’s death.” “Or at the bare minimum the erasing of their memories, and absorption of their consciousness by the past slash current self,” past Luna added. “I’ll cross that bridge when I get to it. For now, I have one final piece of advice,” future Luna began. “Celestia, you have extraordinary foresight, but our memory is perfect, the past to us is preserved forever in amber. So although you may be able to see what is coming, your plans are imperfect without our addition. We were meant to rule together for a reason, and not just because putting all this power into one pony is a bad idea.” “I… thank you,” Celestia exclaimed, bowing her head slightly. “I as well. It is heartening to know that I become such an intelligent and strong-willed individual. Or at least would have… I’m not sure how this is going to work,” past Luna stated, her confidence waning with every word she spoke. “Eh, you’ll figure it out,” future Luna muttered. She then lit her horn and began attempting to cast the spell which would return her back to her own time. Though travel backward in time had only ever been theoretical, Luna had memorized Starswirl’s return spell intimately. It too was theoretical, though it was theoretical due to the possibility of it ever being needed and not because it was so power-intensive that it was impossible to cast like its twin. With power burning bright about her horn, Luna finished the last of her calculations but did not release the spell. Her focus was drawn by the two sisters, and the way they stood next to one another without a hint of distrust. There would be growing pains and trouble in their future, but knowing that Luna had helped them avoid the worst mistake of their life was empowering. So with the possibility of ego death or just regular death looming, she concluded the ritual. There was a pop, and a bright flash of light, though when it dissipated, Luna remained. Now confused, she cast the spell a second time to the same effect. “Huh,” future Luna muttered, turning to her doppelganger and her sibling. “Don't suppose you two have a couch I could crash on for a while eh?”
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Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Violence
Truth and Reconciliation
Through some unknown means, Luna has been given the chance to stop her and her sister from making the biggest mistakes of their lives. Though it may cost her more than she realizes.
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<p>Through some unknown means, Luna has been given the chance to stop her and her sister from making the biggest mistakes of their lives. Though it may cost her more than she realizes.</p><hr/><p>This was a request for a supporter, was viewable earlier for said supporter, and will be updated whenever it receives another request from a supporter. Head over <a href="https://www.patreon.com/Jest" rel="nofollow">here </a>or <a href="https://subscribestar.adult/thirtyravens" rel="nofollow">here </a>if you want to request an update 5$ or to see stories early for just 3$!</p>
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“Huh,” future Luna muttered, turning to her doppelganger and her sibling. “Don't suppose you two have a couch I could crash on for a while, eh?” “What is a couch and why would you want to crash on it?” Past Luna muttered in confusion. “It’s… It doesn't matter,” Luna exclaimed. “It just seems as though I am stuck here, for the moment anyway.” “You did seem to perform the spell properly,” Celestia added. “I will need to research the spell and see where I could have gone wrong. Though for now, this leaves us with an interesting opportunity,” Luna began, a grin crossing her face. “Opportunity. What do you mean?” Past Luna inquired. “Well I was able to keep you all from dodging one major issue perhaps my presence could help you avoid more while at the same time, I work on returning to my own timeline,” Luna offered, glancing at her past sibling and past self. “Your presence would be appreciated. Especially since we’ll have to dedicate considerable time to dismantling the inquisition,” Celestia offered, nodding to her Luna. “Very true,” past Luna agreed. “Our time will be split and having such a capable… uh… advisor? Will make things easier.” “Oh yeah, we should probably work that out,” future Luna murmured. “Okay, what about this? We swear the guards to secrecy, we lock this guy up in a deep dark cell, and I take on a disguise.” “That would make things easier. The ponies of Equestria already have enough confusion around our reign. No need to add a third princess to the mix,” Celestia remarked. “Oh yeah that won't happen for over a thousand years anyway,” Luna dismissed. “Wait what was that last part?” Past Luna inquired. “Not important right now,” future Luna declared. “What is important is that we move quickly. Get everyone either sworn to secrecy or-” Future Luna paused to kick the bound and gagged stallion lying on the ground. “In some hole so deep he will never crawl out,” future Luna finished. “An excellent idea, though I must ask. What manner of disguise are you thinking of?” Celestia inquired. “Perhaps a unicorn would be best. A court wizard is the only position that can hold court while we are not present and the position is currently vacant.” “Oh that's right,” future Luna muttered. “We were about to phase out that position entirely before the whole… everything happened.” “Can we go back to the part where you mentioned there being another alicorn? I feel like that was important,” past Luna pressed. “Look it's a long story but there were two more alicorns only they weren't born alicorns. There was this spell and look let's just talk about this later okay? It’s kind of a whole thing,” Future Luna dismissed. “I must agree with your future self. Best we discuss such matters behind closed doors,” Celestia stressed, glancing pointedly at the captured stallion lying at their hooves. “Hmm, fair enough,” past Luna acquiesced. “As for my disguise, I think a court wizard will be perfect. And I will use the alter ego I’ve employed to get senior discounts at the buffet in Shady Springs,” future Luna declared. She then lit her horn, and after a brief flash, was replaced with an elderly unicorn mare with a silver mane, white fur, and bright blue eyes. Though she had crow's feet at the edge of her eyes, visible wrinkles, and other signs of age, the alicorn’s new form was to most ponies, appealing. To add to the disguise, Luna had even replaced her cutie mark with one of plain silver ring adorned by a small azure gemstone. “I am Shining Silver. Mage extraordinaire, and master of the divinitory arts,” future Luna, now Shining Silver, declared. “A bit flamboyant, but I like it,” Past Luna, now just Luna remarked. “But it feels familiar for some reason.” “Yes. Have you based this form on some future person perhaps?” Celestia added. “I may have taken some creative liberties with a fashionable mare whom I knew quite well,” Shining Silver murmured. “But that doesn't matter. We need to move quickly before word has a chance to spread and this secret gets out before the day is even through.” “Good point,” Celestia muttered. “Perhaps I should remain here and speak to our guards while Luna and L-I mean Shining Silver move to contain any mention of you from amongst the town and the small group of soldiers we had already sent after the imp.” “Agreed,” Luna added. “Shining. Where do you think we should start first?” “The manor home,” Shining Silver exclaimed. “Though none saw my approach I was less than subtle after I had acquired our little devil dealer.” “Then that is where we shall begin,” Luna declared. “I’m assuming you know what happens now,” Celestia whispered in a low tone. “Of course,” Shining Silver replied. “I stand behind this curtain until you’ve had a chance to open court and introduce me.” “And after that, you do a bit of a display of your power to win the favor of our vasals. Earning their respect if not trust,” Celestia continued. “Have you given much thought to what routine you had in mind?” Luna asked in a hushed whisper. “I will dispense with the usual flashy display of lightning and stick with a show of my divination specialty by divvying out advice using my advanced knowledge of the future,” Shining Silver replied. “Honestly dears it's like we haven't discussed this a dozen times over the past week.” Both Celestia and Luna exchanged a somewhat nervous glance behind the small shadowed corner of the throne room. “We admit this is a bit nerve-wracking,” Celestia murmured. “It was difficult work to ensure no word of your presence escaped and though your promissory spell worked wonders on our guards and what few staff saw you we cannot help but worry,” Luna admitted. “Promissory? Oh, the gease spell. Yes, that has made things easier with the guards but it can't be used on the unwilling unfortunately like our little jailbird. But getting back to your point I really wouldn't worry about it,” Shining Silver exclaimed. “You have done an excellent job keeping a lid on things and with all the work I’ve done on my illusion I’m absolutely certain no one can see through my disguise. Why, magic necessary to dismiss such a complex false face won't even exist for a few hundred years at the earliest.” “That does ease our worries somewhat,” Celestia remarked. “You will both do fine. Trust me,” Shining Silver declared, stressing the final two words. “We do,” Luna replied. “Let us open court. I’m sure they are getting quite antsy out there.” “Agreed,” added Celestia. With that, the two princesses departed, slipping out of the small curtained-off area and into the wider room. With them gone, Shining Silver breathed a sigh of relief and made a mental note to do something about their confidence. She had known it was an issue they shared but the troubles of her own past had obscured just how prevalent this little problem had truly been. Brushing off that concern for the moment, Shining conjured a mirror and gave her appearance quick once over. Her illusion was perfect, and she looked exactly as she had the moment she had first donned her disguise. Now though, a layer of perception spells overlaid it, as well as more than a few charms meant to ensure it would not be removed by accident. The sheer amount of magic would likely give most casters of the day a headache either due to the incredible number of calculations as well as the raw power that had gone into such a relatively simple disguise. Why just the plain dark blue cloak she wore to make her appear more humble was a complex weave of enchantments unreplicable in current days. For a moment Shining Silver wondered if it was even a good idea to utilize such spellwork given the times she existed within but that thought was also pushed aside. Focusing on the event to come, she peered through a thin crack in the curtain. The throne room beyond was as she remembered it from her distant past. Though the sight of it made a small hint of regret and guilt worm through her chest, Shining Silver quashed it quickly. Donning a more critical eye, she looked out over the room once more. Beside her lay the thirteen steps of empire at the top of which stood two ornate chairs now occupied by Luna and Celestia. These thirteen steps symbolized the thirteen realms that had been under the rule of the former ruler, the last king of the unicorns. This small feature was endemic in Shining’s mind of the former master of Equestria and stood out as one of the things that needed to change. Each golden step was enchanted to make a slightly different sound when stepped on and they were topped by lavish carpet made from the fur of many thousands of slaves. It was ridiculous and downright silly in Shining Silver’s opinion and that was without even considering the fact that there were more than thirteen realms nowadays. When the two alicorns finally listened to her and remodeled the throne room those damnable steps would be the first to go. Plus they were odd sizes which had always made her trip up them. Shining forced her gaze elsewhere, pointedly not looking at the gold and jewel-encrusted thrones so gaudy they made the disguised alicorn’s eyes hurt. Rather she looked outward, ignoring the marble palace walls, the grand diamond studded chandelier that hung overhead, and all the other irritating facets of the former unicorn king’s throne room. All such petty details were brushed aside, and added to a list of things she would ensure were changed before she departed this timeline. Instead, she focused her gaze on the ponies that were slowly filing in from the large double doors at the far end of the marble hall. Most were nobles, marked by their elaborate dress and the fact that they were fully clothed while most wore little. Some were merchants powerful and wealthy enough to earn their place as minor vassals in league with the larger houses. Though not quite as well dressed as the masters they served, they all wore something around their necks, symbolizing their subservience to those who owned their allegiance. The colorful display of fashion the likes of which Shining had not seen for centuries was intriguing but not her focus. Rather it was those who wore such articles of clothing as well as the lay ponies that stood at the back of the room that most stole Shining’s attention. Mostly staff of the castle, their inclusion was mostly ceremonial as their approval was not considered important, and thus they were granted little room to stand. Despite this, they were the happiest by far, due in no small part because they had not been forced to march halfway across the country to witness the appointment of a court wizard, like their noble cousins. Still, the sight of their grinning faces brought a small warmth to Shining Silver, who recognized more than a few of them. Unlike the land owners and guild masters that stood in front of them, these common folk didn't care about Luna’s tactless attitude or utter absence of patience. While Celestia used her boundless energy to wade through convoluted courtly manners and suffer the sting of veiled insults with grace, Luna had ignored them entirely. She had seen that it was the lower strata of ponykind that held true power, though that realization had admittedly been born of a childish dismissal of the boring aristocracy. While today the few held authority over the many, there would come a time when that changed, though far too late in Shining Silver’s opinion. The elder alicorn’s musings came to an abrupt end when the doors to the throne room closed, and the trumpets blared. With the twin cries of brass, still echoing throughout the hall, both Celestia and Luna stood up from their thrones. The moment this happened, everyone, both pauper and prince alike, bowed their heads to the two rulers. “Rise, children of Equestria,” Celestia began. “And set thy worries aside. Today is a momentous occasion,” Luna added. “For we have finally found a genius worthy of replacing Starswirl the bearded as our court wizard,” Celestia proclaimed. “But before we begin, we must make several announcements of a most pressing nature,” Luna stated. “A great victory has been achieved and with it peace at-” Celestia continued. Shining Silver tuned the pair’s announcements out and focused all of her attention on the ponies filling the majority of the throne room. Celestia and Luna’s joint proclamation concerning the events of their most recent investigation were important but Shining knew such things already. More important were the crowds' reactions, especially those whom Shining had little memory of. The declaration of victory over the last of the demonic holdouts was a cause for celebration but not all in attendance seemed elated. Sure everyone looked happy, but Shining could see the undercurrents of discontent that most could not. The clench of a mare’s jaw, the fervent whispers of a lord into his aide’s ear, and the quiet grumble of a pony whose plans had been foiled, all were heard or seen by the disguised alicorn. Investigations would need to be had, and assurances made in the wake of the announcement. They were entering unforeseen territory, with history shifting beneath their hooves at this very moment. More importantly, questions were being asked about the role of the Inquisition given that it no longer had a purpose. Though that question would be answered in time, a consistory would need to be held and the various lord inquisitors summoned to the capitol. That particular announcement would not be delivered quite yet, for now, preparations needed to be made, and plans put in place. The inquisition would not be brought down quickly, nor would it be a clean break even with Silver’s foresight into the matter. Most, Silver knew, would become an early version of the modern police after disbanding while others would break off and form into bands of raiders. Though she knew which troublemakers would be the worst, Silver didn't know how things would turn out this time around. Silver made a mental note to begin assembling a list of the worst offenders that her counterpart and past sibling would need to contend with. That would need to come later, as Silver could hear that the announcements were coming to a close and her time was quickly arriving. “And so we move to the main topic of today’s event. The appointment of our new court wizard,” Luna began. “Though none here know her, Silver’s contributions to the capture of the traitorous warlock were significant,” Celestia added. “Her skills are beyond reproach, as is her loyalty. And yes we know this is sudden, but we ask that you give her a chance,” Luna proclaimed, adding a bit of royal weight to her words. “With that, we give you Shining Silver, mage exemplar, and master of divination,” Celestia stated, her magic pulling aside the curtain. Silver strode forward, a small but confident smile on her face. As she moved to the center of the room, she took in the reaction of the crowd. Most seemed neutral, but there were a few who did not believe she could match the previous court wizard, Starswirl the bearded. “Shining Silver, do you know the oath of office for a court wizard?” Celestia inquired. “I do,” Shining Silver replied. “Then you may proceed by making your oath in view of all of Equestria,” Luna declared, gesturing to the gathered crowd of ponies. “I, Shining Silver, do swear by Celestia, the sun. Luna, the moon, and by the gods both new and old, making them my witness, that I will carry out, according to my ability and judgment this oath and this indenture,” Silver began, making sure to have her gaze sweep slowly across the room, meeting each eye that sought out her own. “I will use what magic I know in the benefit of Equestria according to my greatest ability and judgment and I will do no harm or injustice to her or her ponies.” “Neither will I use my magics to hurt those I have sworn to protect even should they ask me to do so. Nor will I suggest such a course,” Silver continued. “But I will keep pure and holy both my life and my art. I will take up the sword not even, verily, upon the enemies of Equestria but I will give place to such whose place it is to fight.” “Into whatsoever house I enter I will enter to help the sick, and aid the downtrodden. I will abstain from all intentional wrongdoing and harm, especially from abusing the bodies of those who seek my aid be they bond or free,” Silver proclaimed. “And whatsoever I shall see or hear in the course of my profession as well as outside my profession in my intercourse with ponies if it be what should not be published abroad, I will never divulge, holding such things to be holy secrets.” I really should make efforts to remove all these lingering religious connotations, Silver thought to herself before continuing. “Now if I carry out this oath, and break it not, may I gain for ever reputation among all ponies for my life and for my art; but if I break it and forswear myself, may the opposite befall me,” Silver continued, bowing her head to the gathered audience. “So I do swear.” The throne was quiet for several seconds before Celestia spoke up. “Do all present bear witness to the oath of office?” Asked the alicorn. “Aye!” came the resounding answer of those present. “Then from this moment forward you shall be our advisor and confidant, expert and administrator,” Luna exclaimed. “Raise your head and accept your badge of office, the white stave.” Luna reached back behind their thrones and produced a long wooden staff that seemed oddly natural at first glance. At one end it was capped with a silvery metal while the other became a gnarled mass of roots that clutched a peice of polished quartz. The item itself was brought forward, and Celestia held aloft the other end, symbolizing further the shared nature of this position. I almost forgot about Starswirl’s favorite walking stick, Silver thought to herself. “I accept this gift with honor and humility,” Silver exclaimed, gracefully taking the offered staff from her past self and Celestia. “Now then,” Celestia began anew. “Though you have earned our trust Equestria does not know you. Please, make thine power known to all.” Silver smiled, and with stave in hand began to walk toward the back of the room. As she moved the confusion of the ponies became palpable but despite the increasing fervor of the growing whispers, Silver pushed forward. She stopped at the back of the space and fixed the confused guard standing at the door with a firm look. “Your lack of confidence will get you killed. Astral Claw,” Silver began. “You are more skilled than you give yourself credit for, face this fact or leave the service of the crown.” Without waiting for a response, she turned and looked to another pony. “You are a skilled stone mason, but an even better sculptor, finish your contract at the castle, and after, embrace your talent. Success will come as surely as the dawn,” Silver continued. The confused stone worker just stood there, too baffled to say a word. “The lost deed to your family’s farm lies in the ruins of your family home. Safe but buried beneath the rubble. Seek it out,” Silver exclaimed. Without missing a beat she continued down the line. “Your lucky hammer was dropped down the well by your son who was too embarrassed to admit it to you. Forgive him, find it, and you will all be happier,” Silver declared. The blacksmith seemed confused, then enraged but that anger was quickly quenched. Around her, Silver could hear that the doubt and confusion she had detected earlier was beginning to wane. Even still, there was a long way to go, though she didn't mind, as dispensing advice felt good like a load was being removed from her shoulders. “Your cutie mark is a quill, not a feather. You are a skilled flier but an even better writer,” Silver pressed on, her gaze briefly settling on a watch pony standing amidst the gathered staff. “Tell her you love her, she loves you too,” Silver added. From one pony to the next she rattled off advice, barely giving the individual a chance to gasp in shock before continuing on. “You’re parents do approve of your union, stop second-guessing yourself.” “Your bumb leg is easily cured. Go to your apothecary and request Nightweave extract. Apply to the limb twice a day in small doses and within a weak you should have full use of it once more.” “The best years of your life are ahead of you, do not miss them by staying lost in the past.” “He would want you to be happy. Remarry, you will not regret it.” “Reinforce that old timber you keep ignoring. You will regret not doing so. Immensely.” “Your husband isn't cheating on you, he's playing nerdy games with his friends and is too embarrassed to say it. Trust him.” “It is not strange to desire a herd, stop overthinking it. Monogamy may be in fashion now but that is only due to the lingering influence of the old unicornian customs of marriage.” “You are loved you are wanted, you are not a burden, and what you are feeling is normal. Seek out your friends and family, the weight on your shoulders can be lifted. This too shall pass.” Silver stopped abruptly upon facing a mare with plucked eyebrows, no eyelashes, and almost perfectly ovoid features. “That style will last only a few months more. Ditch it now, trust me,” Silver exclaimed, briefly touching the other mare’s shoulder. “Don't go boar hunting on the thirteenth.” “Do not trust your uncle. He does not have your best intentions at heart.” “It is not advisable, nor wise to throw a party so large that it bankrupts your entire family.” “You’re second son is planning on killing your eldest in order to become heir, stop him.” “No, keeping it in the family does not make your offspring more magically powerful. Stop that.” As she continued moving from one pony to the next, the nervous confused atmosphere quickly morphed into one of anticipation. The distrust of this strange newcomer ebbed and with it came an intense desire to know what advice this seer had to offer. Not all struggled to contain their excitement, however, as one stallion suddenly broke the relative silence by trying to sprint out of the room. “He is the one who slew his wife!” Silver boomed. The stallion skidded to a stop in front of the guards, and for a moment seemed ready to fight or perhaps flee in another direction. Only for a bolt of magic shot from the horn of Luna, to send him sprawling to the floor, limbs twitching as electricity arced through his body. “The stable boy is innocent, and is the true father of this stallion’s son,” Silver continued, gesturing to the spasming male on the ground. “That cheating bitch deserved it,” he spat before his eyes rolled back into his head and he fell unconscious. “She sought comfort in the embrace of another because she would never find it in you. Had you a heart with which to share she would have never left you,” Silver proclaimed, with venom in her voice. “Now then,” Silver began again, turning back to a noble who flinched under her gaze. “Mister Merryweather. Though your poetry is frankly trite, your skill in crafting stories for children is exceptional. Yes, you may not be as well respected but with the proceeds of your books you will be able to refill your family’s coffers and better defend the lands you have been charged with protecting.” “Duchess Light Touch, your mother did not abandon you, she was eaten by wolves during a walk in the forest,” Silver continued. On and on she went with the gathered ponies, including both Celestia and Luna, looking on in awe as their new wizard dropped truth after truth without even pausing to breathe. Though not all were happy to see the arrival of this strange mare that had supposedly spent almost her entire life living as a hermit and practicing magic, none were less glad for her appearance than the former lord Ostre. Locked within one of the ill-used cells of the castle dungeon he lay on his cold stone bed, forelegs crossed over his chest. A tiny window barely larger than his hoof allowed in only a few stray strands of light, barely enough to illuminate the cramped quarters of his new home. There was no toilet, or sink, only a metal pan that lay tucked beneath bed and a small rusted fountain that spat coppery water when the attached button was pressed. Where most would succumb to terror and regret, the former lord felt no such feelings, only hate and bitter resentment. He didn't know how long it would take or how he’d do it but he swore he’d escape, and when he did, he was going to kill the mare that had ruined all his plans. Nothing else mattered, not his plans for immortality, not his desire for conquest and domination. Only revenge.
JeSuisLaPorte
550753
1
Original Character,Princess Luna,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Under The Stars
Under the beautiful night sky, Olive is visited by a pony who knows what it's like to be viewed as a monster.
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<p>Under the beautiful night sky, Olive proudly shows off her accomplishment to an old friend. The proof that she will never become like him, even if she can still feel his ghost lingering.</p><p>Thankfully, somepony else understands what it's like to be seen as a monster, and she's come to help the filly find some much needed closure.</p>
everyone
2024-02-02T23:29:55+00:00
2024-02-02T23:38:00+00:00
144
In the cradling warmth of the living room, in Sweet Apple Acre, a lone filly sat on the couch, not able to fall asleep. How could she? So much has happened that day, it was the most exhausting day of her life. Come to think of it, this entire month was emotionally taxing. Thankfully it was about to come to an end. Her greatest troubles were now behind her. The ghosts and the demon left, cowering before the filly’s newfound strength and iron will. The night sky was marvelous. So many stars lighting up the dark sky, the mark of her favorite princess. The princess that did so much for her, one of the first ponies that ever truly cared about her. She didn’t care that she used to be Nightmare Moon. Her actions alone on that day erased all the bad things she did. She was her hero, just like her mother. Everypony makes mistakes, what truly matters is that they do the right thing when push comes to shove. Princess Luna proved to her she was no monster, unlike him. Against all odds, Olive won. Bested the invincible stallion that kept her from seeing her true worth. But even then, his ghost remained somewhat. One cannot simply undo eight years of abuse in the blink of an eye. Anarchy would forever remain in her, his legacy living through the many ponies he affected. Legends never die, do they? Moreover, nopony ever found his horn after it was sliced in two. The crystallised top mysteriously disappeared, spared from sharing the fate of the beast’s body. Olive was too scared to go back to sleep. In the sky, she could see his face, still feel the weight of his sins carrying on through hers, but that’s okay. It helped her to do better. She will never end up like him. Staring at the medal the two alicorns so generously offered, Olive marveled at its shiny nature. She clutched it with her hooves, dropping her magic to feel the medal. She still can’t believe it. Princess Celestia and Princess Luna called her a hero! The pink unicorn’s eyes wandered over to her latest creation; a clay model of the best friend she missed. Aurora might not be here anymore, but surely, she can hear her. “Look, Aurora; I did it! I became a superhero!” She said softly, levitating clay model to her eyes. “I finally saw Princess Luna in pony, and she said I was the most heroic filly she’s ever met! Aren’t you proud of me?” The clay model might not answer, but Olive knew she would be. She rose to the challenge, went against her father’s wishes like Aurora wanted. Her friend gave her life so that she could break free from Anarchy’s jagged hooves. “Mommy was so proud of me! She even cried when I received my medal. I think it was happy tears, because she was smiling when she cried. My friends were also impressed when I showed them my medal.” Staring at the model, Olive dropped her medal on the couch, pulling Aurora closer to her. She held the little clay model with her hooves and hugged it. “I wish you were here with me. I’m grateful for everything you did for me, but it’s just not fair! You did so much, but you’re not here. With me.” Olive gently brushed her scar, feeling its rugged texture contrasting with her soft fur. A memento, one that’ll server as a reminder of the journey she went on. “Mommy said that the importance was in cherishing the memories I had with you and she’s right. I’ll never forget you, Aurora. Even if I make new friends, you’ll always be special to me.” Her eyes teared up, letting a single drop fall on the miniature pegasus. A soft knock on the front door startled Olive. She carefully placed Aurora and the medal on the couch before trotting to the window. As she looked outside, she couldn’t believe her eyes. Princess Luna was at her door! Excited, she opened the door and jumped onto her, awkwardly hugging the alicorn’s neck. “Princess Luna!” The midnight blue alicorn patted the filly’s head. “Yes, it is me, my little pony. I came here to speak with you, if you don’t mind.” Olive let go, falling on her flank. “I’m so happy you came for me!” “I see that’s a resounding yes.” Luna giggled, sitting on the front porch. She looked at the star filled sky, proud of its beauty. She knew the filly loved it to. Ever since she saw her, she wanted to have a conversation with the little unicorn. She played with her many times when she was in the hospital, but never truly got the time to have a meaningful conversation. Then, she simply couldn’t see her after Anarchy began his terrorist activities in Canterlot. But now that he’s gone, she has all the time in the world to chat with Olive, one of the rare foals that openly loved her more than her sister, not that it bothered her as much anymore. She came to accept that Celestia was more popular. What truly mattered to her was that there were some ponies out there who appreciated her work, her nights. Olive was probably her number one fan, or at least, the number one fan she was willing to acknowledge. “You often told me you loved the night. May I know why you love it so much?” Olive sat next to her, brushing against the alicorn’s soft fur. “It’s because of the stars! I always wanted to see them before, but ever since mommy saved my life, I got to see the stars every night. It was the best thing ever! Sometimes, I wish I could fly up there and reach them. I know you were able to see past the sky before, it must have looked even prettier up there.” Princess Luna smiled; her spirit lifted by the filly’s contagious joy. No matter the hardships and monsters that came her way, she persevered. Where the alicorn once fell, she rose. Both monsters that rose above their weaknesses to become something more, something beautiful... “I’ve been meaning to ask. When we first met, you didn’t look scared of me at all. That was the first time in a while I saw a filly feel so safe around me. Didn’t you know I was once Nightmare Moon?” Olive climbed on the princess’s back, finding a comfortable spot to lie on. “I knew that, but I also knew you didn’t like being Nightmare Moon. You were being so nice to me, why would I be scared?” The lunar princess giggled. “Oh, I should have known. Of all the ponies in Equestria, you’re the only one who knows what it feels like to be viewed as a terrifying monster.” The filly tensed, whimpering. “It’s awful...” “I know, but don’t worry my little pony; they’ll all come around eventually. We’re not monsters. Not like him. We’ve moved on, proved we can do better. I'll do my best to help them see you for who you are.” Selfish, clouded by a single evil desire, he was everything she feared she would become had she not been saved by Twilight and her friends. A dark reflection, an evil spirit dancing in the night. They never found his horn, and that was still on her mind. What if someone used it for nefarious purposes? Would they be able to bring this monster back? So many questions, but they didn’t matter for now. “I’m sorry I couldn’t visit you these past few weeks when you needed me most. I hope I can make it up to you now.” “That’s okay, you’re still the best princess ever to me.” Olive yawned, resting her face on the alicorn’s back. Princess Luna smiled, gazing at the bright, hopeful stars in the sky. “And you’ll forever be the sweetest filly I’ve ever met.” “I love you, Princess Luna.” “I love you too, Olive.”
President_Celestia
550758
1
Cutie Mark Crusaders,Main 6,Other,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
My Little Gem: Friendship Shines Bright
An MLP Infection AU revolving around crystals
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<p>Rarity was walking to the cave where she acquired most of her crystals, needing a particularly hefty amount this time. However, on the way there, she spotted a strange cave opening in the nearby forest. So, curious and hopeful that she would find more gems to use, she travels into the cave.</p>
teen
2024-02-03T00:14:54+00:00
2024-02-03T00:14:53+00:00
137
Rarity was out looking for gems to add to her ever-growing supply. This time, she needed extra since she was working on a particularly fabulous dress. However, while she was on the way to her gem mining spot, she spotted something. In the forest to her left, she spotted an area that was darker than usual. Confused, she took a slight detour to investigate this anomaly. “I wonder what that could be.” Rarity said to herself as she pushed through bushes and shrubs. Eventually, the source was reached, revealing a cave opening in the ground. The opening itself was quite small and looked to have been recently uncovered by natural causes. “How have I never noticed this before?” Rarity wondered, peering down into the dark abyss. Should she go in? Rarity knew that her gem mining spot would eventually run dry, so she could always use a new one. “I just hope it isn’t full of nasty critters… I shouldn’t say that around Fluttershy.” Rarity cast a light spell, the blueish-white light illuminating the cave. It was revealed that the drop itself into the cave wasn’t as far as she had first anticipated. So, shrugging, Rarity lept in. The cave itself was a narrow winding path that led steadily down. The walls were smooth and worn, but not carved to be like this by ponies or other creatures. Rarity’s light spell kept her going in the same direction and she was careful not to step into pits and cracks. But after walking through the seemingly neverending cave for what felt like hours, she was very tempted to turn back. “No, Rarity, remember. Those who quit early never reap the rewards. Those who persevere will always find…” At that statement, Rarity rounded a bend in the cave, revealing a sight that made her eyes widen and allowed a smile to creep onto her face. “Diamonds!” Rarity was now facing a huge, 7-meter-tall outcrop of smooth blue crystals, each growth ending in a sharp point, almost like quartz. The crystals seemed to glow in Rarity’s light spell. She walked forward, entranced by the beauty of this mammoth crystal outcrop. “It’s just… I just… there are no words to describe how perfect this crystal is! The size, the radiance, the purity, the luster!”  Rarity wasted no time and pulled out her small pickaxe. She approached the large crystal and gazed down at the bottom of it. Multiple smaller crystals were growing down there, identical to the larger variants in every way excluding size. She tapped the sharp metal tool against the base of one of the crystals, causing a clean crack to form and making the crystal fall onto the ground. Rarity acquired this small crystal in her magic, admiring it with a dropped jaw. Even this small crystal was about the length of her leg! It was also quite heavy. “This marvelous assortment of jewels will be perfect for the dress! I was looking for sapphires anyway.” Rarity held the crystal close, now cradling it like a foal. “You’ll make me rich, darling.” She whispered to the gem, which held no response for her. The return journey was one full of joy and excitement for a mare who thought she had hit the jackpot in terms of gems for her dresses. “I’ll be back for you!” Rarity exclaimed at the cave entrance as she trotted away, the gem on her back. Rarity Status: Healthy?/ Happy Health: 99% Stress: 0% Energy: 53% Hunger: 70% Thirst: 89% “I hit it big!” “My dress will be perfect!” “I’m a bit hungry, I’ll ask Sweetie Belle to make me a sandwich.” Inventory: Crystal, small pickaxe, empty water bottle, granola bar wrapper Twilight Sparkle Status: Healthy/Sleep-deprived Health: 94% Stress:33% Energy: 12% Hunger: 14% Thirst: 38% “Shouldn’t have stayed up that late…” “yawn Spike, coffee please…” “I’ll get it done now rather than later…” Inventory: Paper and quill, empty coffee mug Pinkie Pie Status: Happy and healthy! Health: 100% Stress: 1% Energy: 100% Hunger: 2% Thirst: 12% “I think I’ll throw Lyra her birthday party today!” “Maybe I’ll invite a few others, like Bon Bon!” “Oh, I have a feeling that something life-changing is going to happen!” Inventory: Confetti, cake, cupcakes, candy, party hat, and so much more! Fluttershy Status: Healthy Health: 99% Stress: 2% Energy: 86% Hunger: 29% Thirst: 12% “How is the tea, Discord?” “I’m glad to hear it.” “What’s that? You’ve got to go? Alright, be safe.” Inventory: Half-full teacup, picture of her and Discord, a feather Rainbow Dash Status: Healthy and lazy Health: 100% Stress: 0% Energy 99% Hunger 57% Thirst: 63% “snore” Inventory: A cloud, goggles, compass Applejack Status: Healthy; a bit peeved/worried Health: 100% Stress: 78% Energy: 88% Hunger: 19% Thirst: 44% “What have I said about doing these dangerous things, you three!?” “You could’ve died doing this stunt!” “You’re grounded, Bloom.” Inventory: Apple, a half-full bottle of apple juice, her Stetson The Cutie Mark Crusaders (Yes, all three of them) Status: Healthy but in trouble (Order: SB, AB, Scootaloo) Health: 89%, 94%, 92% Stress: 44%, 63%, 19% Energy: 76%, 79%, 71% Hunger: 68%, 15%, 42% Thirst: 54%, 10%, 45% “Sorry, Miss Applejack…” “...sorry, Sis.” “It won’t happen again. Promise.” Collective inventory: 12-gauge shotgun; half-full (In an attempt to gain sharpshooters Cutie Marks after repeatedly being denied) Princess Celestia Status: Healthy Health: 100% Stress: 29% Energy: 96% Hunger: 1% Thirst: 0% “It’s been a while since Twilight last wrote a letter. I hope she’s doing okay.” “Maybe I’ll read a book.” “No, I’ve got duties to attend to.” Inventory: A book “Tall Tale’s Exciting Short Stories”, an empty platter; it once housed a cake Princess Luna Status: Healthy/Sleeping Health: 100% Stress: 2% Energy: 100% Hunger: 15% Thirst: 20% Inventory: Pillow, sleeping mask, stuffed animal
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Cutie Mark Crusaders,Main 6,Other,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
My Little Gem: Friendship Shines Bright
An MLP Infection AU revolving around crystals
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<p>Rarity was walking to the cave where she acquired most of her crystals, needing a particularly hefty amount this time. However, on the way there, she spotted a strange cave opening in the nearby forest. So, curious and hopeful that she would find more gems to use, she travels into the cave.</p>
teen
2024-02-03T00:17:58+00:00
2024-02-03T00:17:58+00:00
142
Rarity arrived back at the Carasoul Boutique, the smile still ever-present on her face. “Sweetie Belle, I’m home- oh, Applejack, is anything the matter?” Rarity saw Applejack sitting in the center of her boutique, Sweetie Belle looking quite sullen just to her left. Rarity placed down her bag and the crystal, now concerned. “What did she do this time?” Rarity asks, sighing, her mood slightly dampened. “I love these three with all my heart, but they just keep gettin’ into trouble! The three of them conspired to steal my shotgun and use it for target practice!” Applejack ranted, causing Rarity to gasp in shock and Sweetie Belle to whimper. “They could’ve gotten themselves killed! They don’t know proper gun safety.” Rarity glared at Sweetie Belle, which caused her to dip her head lower than before. “Thank you for bringing this to my attention, AJ, but I can take it from here.” Rarity nodded to Applejack, a serious look on her face. Applejack slowly nodded and walked to the door of the boutique. “They worry me too much…” Applejack whispered. “Same with me, darling…” Rarity whispered back. Applejack left shortly after. “Now, Sweetie Belle, explain yourself.” “It was Apple Bloom’s idea… she said that we could earn sharpshooters Cutie Marks.” “It doesn’t matter whose idea it was, it was still stupid regardless to even accept it as a good idea!” Rarity walked over to Sweetie Belle, and for a second, Sweetie Belle expected violence for whatever reason. However, a tight hug was all that she got. “Don’t worry me like that ever again…” “I’m sorry, sis…” Sweetie Belle sniffled. After this encounter, Rarity grounded Sweetie Belle and sent her to her room. Hearing that her little sister could’ve died today really and truly dampens to mood. And after getting a quick bite to eat, Rarity got to work. She grabbed the crystal that she had left by the door and carried it over to her workshop, where she set it on the table, turned on a lamp, and sat down, ready to get to work. However, before she could even begin to carve the crystal, she noticed something odd. “That’s weird…” Rarity saw a patch of reflective, almost crystal-like hairs shimmering on her left foreleg. Now that she noticed it, she can feel, or rather can’t feel, the area that has been taken over by these admittedly pretty hairs. She could feel pins and needles around this patch of hair on her coat. “It feels… odd. Maybe I got some dust on me, I’ll wash it off later.” But as the minutes passed, she couldn’t help but feel a growing sense of doom as the patch of crystal hairs continued to grow. “Oh dear… maybe I got cursed or something? I’ll go talk to Twilight about this.” Rarity Status: Infected Stage 1 Infection: Has begun to spread from the first point of contact Health: 89% Stress: 81% Energy: 47% Hunger: 2% Thirst: 3% “What could’ve possessed Sweetie Belle to do something so stupid?” “This is starting to hurt a bit…” “Why can’t I grip the door with my magic?” Inventory: NOTHING Twilight Sparkle Status: Healthy/Passed out Health: 95% Stress: 52% Energy: 0% Hunger: 24% Thirst: 49% Inventory: Paper and quill Sweetie Belle Status: Healthy?/ Grounded Health: 84% Stress: 99% Energy: 30% Hunger: 88% Thirst: 89% “Should’ve never listened…” “I’m hungry… and thirsty…” “I made Rarity mad…” Inventory: Empty 12-gauge shell, a box of tissues Applejack Status: Healthy/Worried Health: 100% Stress: 43% Energy: 68% Hunger: 20% Thirst: 49% “Those three… I swear.” “Do they never learn?” “I’m glad they’re okay…” Inventory: NOTHING Discord Status: Suspicious Health: 1000% Stress: 2% Energy: 100% Hunger: ? Thirst: ? “Something odd is currently happening…” “I can’t place my talon on it, nor my paw.” “Whatever it is, I hope it is nothing bad.” Inventory: Teacup, stuffed rabbit made by Fluttershy
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Cutie Mark Crusaders,Main 6,Other,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
My Little Gem: Friendship Shines Bright
An MLP Infection AU revolving around crystals
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<p>Rarity was walking to the cave where she acquired most of her crystals, needing a particularly hefty amount this time. However, on the way there, she spotted a strange cave opening in the nearby forest. So, curious and hopeful that she would find more gems to use, she travels into the cave.</p>
teen
2024-02-03T07:08:21+00:00
2024-02-03T07:08:21+00:00
94
Rarity approached the door to Twilight’s library and knocked. “Twilight?” Rarity asked, not wanting to intrude despite this being a library that she could easily enter. However, the pony, or creature, that answered wasn’t Twilight. “Oh, hey Rarity.” Spike greeted, looking behind him. “Yeah, uh… Twilight’s sleeping right now.” “This late into the day? Why could she… I shouldn’t even ask.” “Also… what’s up with your leg? It’s really shiny.” Spike pointed a claw at Rarity’s leg, to which she shied away. The crystal hairs had spread through her entire foreleg and it was now spreading through her chest and belly. The pins and needles feeling was growing and so was the numbness. “Oh, that… heh… it’s a new… coat shimmering… makeup? To make me look like a… Crystal Pony. I didn’t finish it yet.” Rarity nervously smiled. “Oh, okay. Well, whatever it is, it looks amazing. Come back in a few hours, Twilight might be awake by then, but I also have to clean up her mess.” “Okay, Spike. Take care.” Rarity turned away from the dragon in the door, a new face of worry prevalent. “Dear Celestia… I hope this isn’t too serious…” Rarity mumbled to herself. “Hope what isn’t too serious?” Said Pinkie Pie. “AH! Pinkie Pie, darling, don’t scare me like that!” “Oops! Tehee!” Rarity Status: Infected Mid-Stage 1 Health: 87% Stress: 89% Energy: 44% Hunger: 12% Thirst: 16% Infection: Has engulfed the entire left foreleg; now spreading through the torso “I didn’t see you there.” “Oh, I was just heading back home…” “A party? I… sure.” Inventory: Party invitation Spike Status: Healthy/Confused; tired Health: 79% Stress:12% Energy: 37% Hunger: 34% Thirst: 41% “That was weird…” “Maybe I’ll have to wake Twilight up soon.” “She wouldn’t be happy…” Inventory: Small ruby, a book Pinkie Pie Status: Healthy; a bit suspicious Health: 100% Stress: 3% Energy: 100% Hunger: 11% Thirst: 10% “Whoa, Rarity, your leg is all shimmery! “Yeah, you should totally come to Lyra’s party!” “It’ll be super fun!” Inventory: Confetti, cupcakes, party invitations, and so much more! Lyra Heartstrings Status: Confused Health: 99% Stress: 14% Energy: 81% Hunger: 19% Thirst: 33% “I haven’t seen Bon Bon all day today…” “Where is everypony?” “I have a bad feeling…” Inventory: A lyre, a black folder, a house key, a small mysterious box
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Cutie Mark Crusaders,Main 6,Other,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
My Little Gem: Friendship Shines Bright
An MLP Infection AU revolving around crystals
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<p>Rarity was walking to the cave where she acquired most of her crystals, needing a particularly hefty amount this time. However, on the way there, she spotted a strange cave opening in the nearby forest. So, curious and hopeful that she would find more gems to use, she travels into the cave.</p>
teen
2024-02-03T16:56:43+00:00
2024-02-03T16:56:42+00:00
93
Lyra was walking home from work now. She had been performing for the orphanage today, bless their souls. She would never tell Bon Bon just how much she wanted a foal of her own… specifically with her. Such a feat is impossible between two mares, but with magic, was it truly? However, on the way home, she noticed a distinct lack of ponies on the streets. On top of that, Bon Bon had been missing all day too. Just what was happening? She had a surprise for Bon Bon and she couldn’t give it to her if she wasn’t present all day. Lyra made it to the front door of her and Bon Bon’s house, taking out her key with her magic, and… wait, the door was unlocked? She inhaled suddenly. Had some pony broken into their house and injured Bon Bon!? In a mild panic, she unlatched the door and pushed it open, staring into the black abyss that was her house with the lights off. “Bon Bon!? Are you-” “SURPRISE!!!” “Dear sweet Celestia!” Lyra shrieked, jumping back as a tide of smiling ponies jumped out from behind her furniture. She recognized a few immediately familiar faces. Pinkie Pie, obviously, Rarity, whoa, she looked like she was gleaming in the light, Muffins, and Bon Bon, who had a large smile on her face. “Happy birthday, Lyra!” Bon Bon trotted up to Lyra, nuzzling her. “So this is where you’ve been all day?” Lyra couldn’t believe it. Even she had forgotten her own birthday today. “Making this party for me?” “Of course, because I wanted today to be extra special.” Bon Bon then walked over to a table, where she grabbed a small gift box. Pinkie Pie looked like she was about to jump out of her skin. “What is it?” Lyra asked, taking the box from Bon Bon with her magic. “I don’t know, why don’t you find out?” Bon Bon winked, making Lyra look down at the box and unwrap it. “Darling, might I ask what makes today extra special?” Rarity whispered to Pinkie Pie. “Because… this is their next big step!” Pinkie excitedly whispered. Lyra gasped in shock at the item within the box, feeling tears immediately well up in her eyes. Dropping the box, but carrying the item that came from within, she inspected the beautifully crafted diamond horn ring. “Lyra, will you marry me?” Bon Bon approached her, waiting for an answer. Lyra, who was speechless, nodded up and down very fast. But before Bon Bon could be happy in any way, Lyra pulled out a black box from her saddlebag. “I was going to ask you the same thing, Bonny.” Lyra sniffled, smiling. Bon Bon felt her eyes widen as Lyra opened the box, revealing a beautiful carved golden hoof ring (bracelet). The pair hugged each other tightly as the crowd of ponies cheered and cried out in happiness for their ever-growing love for each other. “I see now, Pinkie. This is quite a big step.” Rarity nodded. “Yep! I couldn’t say no when Bon Bon proposed the idea! Get it, proposed?” Pinkie smiled and giggled. “Ha ha, very funny.” Rarity couldn’t keep the smile from her face, but then Pinkie Pie asked the question. “And when did you get so sparkly? I mean, you are, like, glimmering like the diamond on Lyra’s horn ring!” Pinkie Pie exclaimed. “Well, oh dear…” Rarity put a hoof against her head as she felt a sudden spell of dizziness come over her, causing her to stumble. Thankfully, Pinkie Pie caught her before she fell to the floor. “Rarity! Are you okay?” Pinkie asked, her voice now worried as Rarity was carefully laid on the floor. The ponies around her started murmuring to each other, each of their voices concerned. Even Lyra and Bon Bon stopped loving on each other to express their concern for Rarity. “I’m just feeling a bit… dizzy… ugh…” Rarity felt a deep, throbbing ache spread throughout her entire body as she noticed her vision beginning to narrow and her hearing fading. “Rarity? Rarity!” Pinkie Pie’s voice faded into obscurity as Rarity passed out. Rarity Status: Infected Stage 2 Infection: The infection has completely engulfed her body, making her now appear as if she came from the Crystal Empire. Health: 73% Stress: 59% Energy: 11% Hunger: 2% Thirst: 19% Inventory: Crumpled paper Pinkie Pie Status: Healthy?/ Worried Health: 99% Stress: 100% ! Energy: 100% Hunger: 0% Thirst: 2% “Rarity!” “Somepony get a doctor!” “Please be okay!” Inventory: Confetti, nothing more Lyra Heartstrings Status: Healthy/Concerned Health: 100% Stress: 20% Energy: 89% Hunger: 20% Thirst: 35% “What happened to Rarity?” “She really does look like a crystal pony.” “What do you think, Bonny?” Inventory: A lyre, a black folder, a diamond horn ring Bon Bon Status: Healthy/Worried Health: 100% Stress: 34% Energy: 91% Hunger: 7% Thirst: 3% “I know Rarity, she doesn’t faint like this.” “This might be something serious.” “Don’t just stand there, everypony, get a doctor!” Inventory: Wrapped candy, a golden hoof ring Muffins (Derpy Hooves) Status: Healthy/Confused Health: 96% Stress: 3% Energy: 78% Hunger: 0% Thirst: 18% “What happened to Rarity?” “Is she okay?” “Does she need help?” Inventory: A muffin, glasses (not worn), mailbag (with mail) Sweetie Belle Status: Infected Stage 1 Infection: Multiple points of contact are beginning to spread slowly Health: 81% Stress: 100% ! Energy: 30% Hunger: 89% Thirst: 91% “What’s happening to me!?” “What is this, get it off!” “Rarity, I’m sorry! Please come back home!” Inventory: Box of tissues, pillow, damp tissue
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Cutie Mark Crusaders,Main 6,Other,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
My Little Gem: Friendship Shines Bright
An MLP Infection AU revolving around crystals
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<p>Rarity was walking to the cave where she acquired most of her crystals, needing a particularly hefty amount this time. However, on the way there, she spotted a strange cave opening in the nearby forest. So, curious and hopeful that she would find more gems to use, she travels into the cave.</p>
teen
2024-02-03T19:26:59+00:00
2024-02-03T19:26:58+00:00
108
“Twilight!” Spike yelled at the sleeping purple unicorn, jerking her awake. She groggily rubbed her tired purple eyes, the bags clearing showing underneath them. “What, Spike?” Twilight grumbled. “There’s no time for being tired, Rarity’s in the hospital!” “What!?” Twilight felt her exhaustion fade in an instant and she lept off her bed. “How? What happened to her!?” “She apparently fainted during Lyra’s birthday party, but this time, she didn’t wake up immediately after. So, they got Nurse Redheart and Lyra to bring her to the hospital.” Spike explained, but when he was finished, he realized that he had been talking to open air. “Oh…” Within a minute (after a large chain teleport), Twilight was standing inside Ponyville General Hospital, facing the receptionist. “Hi, what can I-” “Rarity. Room. Where!?” Twilight puffed out, her horn sparking. The receptionist flinched back from each heavy syllable but eventually recovered. “She’s in Room 10. She’s asleep right now and she seems to have an unknown disease.” But the receptionist soon realized that she had been talking to open air. “Oh…” “Rarity!” Twilight barged into the room, spotting Rarity lying on the hospital bed, her coat gleaming like a crystal under the light of the hospital room. Nurse Redheart and Doctor Horse were standing over the bed, monitoring her. When Twilight busted in, Nurse Redheart loudly shushed her. “Quiet! Honestly…” Nurse Redheart harshly whispered. “Sorry, but… is she okay?” Twilight walked over to the bed, standing next to Nurse Redheart. “I’m afraid to say it, but we have no clue. This… disease, infection… whatever it is, it has completely infected Rarity, and her shimmering coat and, no doubt, her sudden fainting, is caused by this infection.” Nurse Redheart carefully explained. “And if this is an infectious disease, we have no idea how it is spread. For now, we are sticking with direct contact.” Doctor Horse also explained. “That’s why I wore those to prevent physical contact with Rarity.” Nurse Redheart pointed to a shallow trash bin, which housed a pair of rubber medical gloves, or something. “I had Lyra carry half of Rarity’s weight with her magic. If this disease can somehow spread through the air, then all three of us may very well be infected right now, and we may not know it.” “But if it spreads through contact, then who knows who could be infected with… whatever this disease is!” Twilight exclaimed. “That is exactly where our concern lies right now.” Doctor Horse nodded. “While we care for Rarity, we cannot help but worry if there are other ponies out there who have been unknowingly infected with this disease. Right now, it seems to be harmless, but I fear what it might do in the future.” Twilight felt a curtain of despair fall over her as she looked over to Rarity, her crystal coat shimmering brightly. “Oh, Rarity…” Twilight clenched her eyes shut and sighed. “Do you… have a name for this yet?” “For right now, we’ll have a placeholder name, one that can easily identify this disease. Judging by the characteristics of it, we have decided to name it…” Doctor Horse turned to Nurse Redheart. “The Luster, derived from its trait of turning a pony’s coat into a reflective material, almost like a mineral.” Nurse Redheart looked over to Twilight, her blue eyes serious. “I will hear no qualms from you. Right now, I need you to search for possible infected ponies.” Twilight wanted to stay here desperately, but she knew that right now, it was required that she go. “Yes… of course.” And so, Twilight turned and ran out of the room, leaving Nurse Redheart and Doctor Horse with Rarity. “I am worried about what the Luster can do.” He admitted. “You are not the only one, Doctor.” Nurse Redheart muttered in agreement. “If this disease proves lethal, then we need to start working on a cure now rather than later.” “When do you think she got infected? I estimate two days ago.” Doctor Horse examined Rarity momentarily. “It is safe to say that this is no normal disease, Doctor. We need to think along more unrealistic margins. I estimate that she was infected 5 hours ago max.” Nurse Redheart closed her eyes and looked toward the door. “Yes, you are right. Now, let us hope that Rarity is the only one.” Doctor Horse looked out the window, seeing that the sun was now setting. “Yes, let us hope indeed.” Rarity Status: Infected Mid-stage 2 Infection: Has seemingly paused for now Health: 71% Stress: 0% Energy: 9% Hunger: 11% Thirst: 22% Inventory: NOTHING Twilight Sparkle Status: Healthy/ Despaired Health: 95% Stress: 89% Energy: 24% Hunger: 39% Thirst: 52% “Rarity…” “I’ve got to find any other infected.” “Please, let there be no others…” Inventory: NOTHING Lyra Heartstrings Status: Healthy?/Confused Health: 98% Stress: 11% Energy: 85% Hunger: 14% Thirst: 18% “My horn feels funny…” “I hope Rarity feels better.” “I’ll read a book for now.” Inventory: A diamond horn ring, a book Fluttershy Status: Healthy/Tired Health: 99% Stress: 1% Energy: 31% Hunger: 7% Thirst: 2% “I think I’ll go to sleep.” “Tomorrow, I’ll visit Rarity. Maybe she can repair my dress…” “When’s Discord coming back?” Inventory: Warm blanket,  cup of warm milk, a pillow Rainbow Dash Status: Healthy/Waking up Health: 100% Stress: 6% Energy 100% Hunger 67% Thirst: 79% “Aw, dang it, I slept for too long.” “Thankfully, AJ’s nowhere in sight.” “Maybe I’ll just… pretend nothing happened, heh.” Inventory: Goggles. Compass Princess Celestia Status: Healthy/Lowering the sun Health: 100% Stress: 15% Energy: 67% Hunger: 2% Thirst: 0% “Let the world rest once more…” “Maybe I can ask Luna to check on Twilight for me.” “It’s time to sleep.” Inventory: NOTHING Princess Luna Status: Healthy/ Raising the moon Health: 100% Stress: 1% Energy: 99% Hunger: 0% Thirst: 0% “Let the world be bathed by the comforting rays of the moon, rest well, little ponies.” “What’s that? Visit Twilight Sparkle? Whatever for?” “Alright, if you insist, sister.” Inventory: Notebook
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Cutie Mark Crusaders,Main 6,Other,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
My Little Gem: Friendship Shines Bright
An MLP Infection AU revolving around crystals
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<p>Rarity was walking to the cave where she acquired most of her crystals, needing a particularly hefty amount this time. However, on the way there, she spotted a strange cave opening in the nearby forest. So, curious and hopeful that she would find more gems to use, she travels into the cave.</p>
teen
2024-02-03T19:42:22+00:00
2024-02-03T19:42:22+00:00
112
If you see a pony infected with the Luster, refrain from making any kind of contact with them, physical or magical. Stage 1: Patches of reflective hair will begin to appear on the pony’s coat, beginning from the point of contact with an infected and spreading outward. As the area spreads, the pony may feel:Pins and needles around the infected areaLoss of feeling within the infected areaA sense of doomA loss of magical coordinationA loss of flight coordination Please note that after you make contact with an infected pony, you become infectious within 15-30 minutes. Stage 2: At this point, the pony's coat has been completely dominated by the shimmering crystal-like hairs, making them appear like a pony from the Crystal Empire. This effect will have spread to the pony’s mane and tail by this point. During stage two, the pony may experience:DizzinessFaintingDeep bodily achesImpaired vision and hearingLoss of taste and smellLoss of magical abilityLoss of flight ability Stage two happens 3 hours after being infected. Stage 3: Stage three occurs once after stage two has been reached, approximately an hour after. Stage three is a critical stage in the infection. The infected pony may experience:Sudden open wounds on the chest, back, and headSudden crystallization of the hoovesSevere pain in the affected areasRapid crystal growths in the open woundsLoss of vision and hearingRapidly crystalizing horn/Rapidly crystalizing wingsLoss of sanityLoss of selfSudden aggressiveness By this point, the infection had begun to spread to the brain. Stage 4: Stage four is not much different from stage three on the outside. It occurs 45 minutes to 3 hours after stage three. The infected pony may experience:Rapidly crystalizing musclesImpaired movementSharply improved sense of touchComplete loss of controlLoss of consciousness Rapid solidification of coatIncreased aggressiveness By this point, they are not themselves. Final stage: The final stage is the end of the infection. By this point, nothing more changes within the infected pony. The pony may experience:Solid jointsInability to moveCompletely crystalized exterior The pony is effectively dead at this point, but within the crystal confines… A HEART STILL BEATS
President_Celestia
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Cutie Mark Crusaders,Main 6,Other,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Alternate Universe,Drama,Mystery,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
My Little Gem: Friendship Shines Bright
An MLP Infection AU revolving around crystals
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<p>Rarity was walking to the cave where she acquired most of her crystals, needing a particularly hefty amount this time. However, on the way there, she spotted a strange cave opening in the nearby forest. So, curious and hopeful that she would find more gems to use, she travels into the cave.</p>
teen
2024-02-17T22:52:27+00:00
2024-02-19T23:17:25+00:00
49
Rainbow Dash soared through the newly-made night sky, still slightly tired from her long nap, but she had forgotten about her plans with Applejack… which was meant to be done nearly an hour ago. Apple trees passed in blurs underneath her as she finally slowed down and landed in front of Sweet Apple Acres’ large red barn. She cringed. “Hopefully she’s not too mad…” Rainbow whispered to herself before knocking on the barn door. Applejack is usually in the barn when the sun has just finished setting, either working or drinking. She sometimes does both depending on her mood. However, Rainbow had noticed that she had been waiting outside the barn for nearly five minutes now. She knocked again but with more power this time. “AJ, you in there?” Did she fall asleep or something? Rainbow Dash wanted to apologize badly, wanting no bad blood with her best friend, so she slid the barn door open and peered into the dark building. Immediately, she spotted Applejack passed out next to… a whole jug of cider!? “Woah, AJ!” Rainbow immediately ran over to Applejack and turned her over so that she was on her back, seeing that she was knocked out fully. Rainbow knew that AJ liked to drink every now and then, but this was just excessive! Had something happened? Did somepony die!? Thinking quickly, Rainbow looked to her right and spotted a bucket of water that was undoubtedly cold and grabbed it, dunking the whole thing on Applejack’s face. The effect was immediate, causing AJ’s eyes to launch open as she sputtered, the water dripping off her face. She stood and stumbled around, looking all around her quickly. Her woozy green eyes spotted Rainbow Dash and she narrowed them. “Jumpin’ June bugs, RD! What in Tartarus did you do that for!?” Applejack asked, shaking out her wet mane and staring down at her sopping wet hat. Regardless, she grabbed it and placed it atop her head, the brown Stetson sagging slightly. “Well, I saw a friend passed out on the ground from drinking too much alcohol! What else was I supposed to do!?” Rainbow fired back, causing AJ to shrink back and look away. “I should be asking you what the buck happened?” “Rainbow… a lot of things happened today. Firstly, my sis and her friends nearly killed themselves by stealing mah dad’s shotgun!” Applejack said loudly, the anger from earlier still in her voice. “Wh- What would they do that for?” Rainbow Dash asked, knowing the answer to that question already. However, the worry for Scootaloo’s well-being snuck into her chest. “They said they wanted to earn their… ‘sharpshooters’ cutie marks. I keep tellin’ them, their cutie marks will appear on their own, but they just never listen!” Applejack grumbled and scuffed the ground. Then, she sighed. “And second… Rarity’s in the hospital.” “Woah woah woah… went from 50 to 100 real fast. What happened to her?” Rainbow Dash felt the worry from earlier triple. “I… I honestly have no clue. Even the doctor said he didn’t know. My best guess is that she-” Applejack and Rainbow Dash jumped into the air when the barn doors were opened abruptly with a boom. They both turned and saw Twilight standing at the door, her horn glowing brightly. She was panting and huffing violently. AJ was about to ask what was wrong until… “YOU TWO! DID ANY OF YOU TOUCH RARITY TODAY!?!?” Twilight yelled out without warning, causing both of them to shrink back. “Uh-” Rainbow cut herself off. “No?” “No, Twi. We haven’t. What has gotten-” Applejack blinked and Twilight was gone, running away full speed away from the barn. AJ and RD both stood there, contemplating. “What the hay was all that about?” Rainbow asked, confused more than anything, but her worry spiked again when she realized that Twilight was talking about Rarity. “I don’t know, sugarcube.” Applejack sighed, water still dripping from her muzzle onto the ground. She looked over to the empty jug of cider and then at RD. “So, why didn’t you come to help me earlier, RD?” “Oh, that? Heh…” Rainbow Dash looked to the door, contemplating her escape, but it was suddenly slammed shut by an angry Applejack. “You’re gonna get it, girl,” Applejack said, a smirk on her face. “Oh, Horseapples.”  Twilight Sparkle Status: Healthy/ Despaired Health: 93% Stress: 91% Energy: 11% Hunger: 41% Thirst: 58% “I’ve got to check on Pinkie!” “Please, oh please…” “AJ and RD are fine, I hope they aren’t the only two…” Inventory: A list Applejack Status: Healthy/Something else? Health: 100% Stress: 12% Energy: 92% Hunger: 83% Thirst: 69% “You’re gonna pay for that, RD.” “Don’t think I’m going easy on ya, girl.” “Tomorrow, you’re doing double as punishment.” Inventory: A lasso Apple Bloom Status: Healthy/Grounded Health: 94% Stress: 71% Energy: 63% Hunger: 1% Thirst: 5% “I shouldn’t have done that…” “What was I thinking?” “I’ll make it up to sis, I swear it.” Collective inventory: Empty plate, empty cup, towel Scootaloo Status: Healthy/Grounded Health: 92% Stress: 21% Energy: 62% Hunger: 21% Thirst: 13% “Great… just great…” “Maybe I can just… sneak out?” “No, I’ll make my auties angry again.” Inventory: Paper plate with a small salad (untouched), a glass of water (full), pillow Sweetie Belle Status: Infected Late-Stage 1 Infection: Infection has spread quickly, covering nearly her entire body Health: 79% Stress: 100% ! Energy: 12% Hunger: 91% Thirst: 99% “Rarity…” “It hurts…” “Please… come home…” Inventory: Blanket, pillow Rarity Status: Infected Late-stage 2 Infection: Showing signs of slow progression once more Health: 64% Stress: 0% Energy: 2% Hunger: 25% Thirst: 31% Inventory: NOTHING Pinkie Pie Status: Infected Stage 1 Infection: Has started spreading from the legs where she caught Rarity Health: 97% Stress: 84% Energy: 99% Hunger: 4% Thirst: 7% “What’s this? What’s happening?” “This looks like what was happening to Rarity…” “This is bad, I can feel it. I need to go to the hospital.” Inventory: NOTHING Discord Status: MISSING Health: ??? Stress: ??? Energy: ??? Hunger: ??? Thirst: ???
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A Broken Mirror
Twilight from the Mean 6, now known as Eclipse, has become a better Pony after several months of work. However, after a disastrous Winter Wrap-Up, she has fallen down into apathy, straining her marriage with Sunset.
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<p>She was little more than a clone, and one that always failed.</p><p>It was no surprise, being made in the reflection of perfection, but why did everyone else care so much about her, especially Sunset, who went so far as to <i>marry</i> her?</p><p>She went with it back then, but only under the belief that she could be more than just a sub-par version of Twilight. She gave herself a new name to fit that—Eclipse—but that name should’ve been her first clue it was all futile.</p><p>Now, her entire existence and use to the world is dependent upon the answer to one question: What does she have that Twilight doesn’t?</p><hr/><p>Mean 6!Twilight x Sunset ship, done for the <a href="/group/215660/sunset-shimmer-x-eg-mlp-villains-shipperss-group-competitions/thread/532936/sunset-x-villain-tying-the-knot-competition-february-2nd-2024-to-march-2nd-2024" rel="nofollow">Sunset x Villain Marriage</a> contest</p><p>Partially inspired by the MLP prompt <a href="https://www.tumblr.com/mylittleponyauprompts/724051177886613504" rel="nofollow">here</a>, in regards to the Mean 6 becoming real Ponies</p><p>*Featured on 11-12/02/24</p>
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2024-02-12T03:56:42+00:00
2024-02-12T21:33:50+00:00
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24. That was the number of creatures admitted to the hospital because of her failure. The snow that crushed and suffocated some, stray bolts of thunder that found their marks on others, random icicles, heavy flower pots, spiked drinks... and she didn’t stop any of them. All the other creatures around her always tried to assure her that it wasn’t her fault, but she knew otherwise. Why else would it be like that when she planned it, but never when anyone else did? 24. It was an interesting number to her. It was hardly a prime, but only one away. It was divisible by a multiple of two, and one less than a square. It was two dozen, and four times six. It was the number of hours in a day, and her own age when she was created. She had many thoughts on the number, and while she may have broken them off to focus on something else back before that disaster, she now recalled that it never mattered what she did in the first place. So instead, she lay in bed for days on end. She barely eat, only bothering with essentials to keep herself alive for... whatever reason. She barely bathed, only licking herself and using the bathroom whenever needed on little more than instinct, though she may as well have shat her own bed for all she cared. She barely talked, only sometimes to the occasional haranguing visitor that wanted to deal with her, and only then to make them go away. She barely even bothered to look at her own room, as what would be the point? Its sight was seared into her mind, the crystalline room that she didn’t deserve, and all the amenities she didn’t need. There were clothes she wore only a few times ever, and random trinkets she once used to hold her own focus. There was an empty bookshelf, and a nightstand next to her bed, with a lamp on top, though currently off and leaving the dim light of twilight peeking in through the curtains to illuminate the golden horn ring on the nightstand as well. She remembered when she was given that ring, proposed to her by Sunset Shimmer approximately twenty months after her creation, and had stayed on her horn for another four. Huh. There it is again. Twenty-four. It must’ve been fate. Not like she cared, really. Looking back down at the ring, she sneered at it; she never deserved that, nor at all what it represented. Why did Sunset fall in love with her instead of...? Biting her lip on an instinct that wasn’t her own, she was suddenly of the filthy taste of stale saliva in her mouth, and she grimaced. Sighing in exasperation and annoyance, she rolled forward, then off the bed. THWUMP! She didn’t even feel the impact against her folded-up wing; it was utterly asleep. Slowly rolling over to her barrel, she pushed herself up on sore and sleepy hooves, her joints creaking and cracking with her every movement, though she didn’t care for any of it and would’ve been fine if her legs failed and she face-planted back on the floor. She really would’ve just stayed there until she passed out again. It was a pretty comfy-looking floor, with the nice carpet and everything. The carpet she didn’t deserve... Growling, she forced herself up to stand, and as her legs buckled a bit under her exhaustion, she kept herself up, then took a few deep breaths to try and get her blood flowing again. When that was done, she carefully moved her still sluggish hooves so that she could turn towards the door on a nearby wall, one that led to the bathroom. She’d say she didn’t deserve that too, but with literally every other bedroom in the building having one, it at least didn’t represent someone else going out of their way for her. Sighing, she pushed herself forward across the floor, taking each step carefully, lest she let her simple plan of walking fail, too. Oh, what was the point? It was always destined to... Bonk! “Ow,” She replied to her snout smashing into the bathroom door, in a voice that wasn’t her own. Not tempting fate yet further, and also not allowing her to use the incredibly powerful magic she didn’t deserve, she raised a hoof to the door handle, then turned it, then pulled the door out to a ninety-degree angle, then let go of the handle stepped through the entranceway. Turning around in place on the linoleum tiles, she grabbed the other handle of the door, then pulled the door closed, backing herself up while pulling it fully closed, letting the latch slide open, then lock in place as she stood fully inside the bathroom. Her eyes next fell upon the light switch next to the door; it was a tiny little thing, not even as wide as her snout, yet controlling the light of the entire room. She raised her hoof to it, and with a full second of delay flicked it, and knew that beyond the wall, the switch connected the magic wiring, letting the 120 Amperes of magic power flow through it, around the bend of the far wall, then up to the singe bar-shaped light about two-thirds the way to the ceiling. Within that light, she knew the magic Fluorite crystals would be energized with the magic coming in from the wires, each of the three crystals with their approximately 10 Ohms of resistance vibrating with the 40 Volts of voltage in such a manner that light emanated out in an uneven bimodal distributions curve primarily between 400 and 700 nanometers in wavelength. She didn’t learn of this knowledge. She didn’t read about in books, or hear about in lectures. She didn’t have quizzes, homework, and exams about it. She just knew it. From her creation, it was granted to her, like nothing. She didn’t deserve it. Backing away from the door almost on instinct, she then found herself standing in the center of the bathroom, where she then turned to the side to see the light on the wall, shining brightly into her eyes, though she felt no pain from it. She saw the sink, with its wide basin to collect water, and the single faucet above to pour said water with two handles attached, one to dispense cold water at down to 0 degrees, and the other hot water at up to 50 degrees, with the usual mixing of them both giving water at 15 degrees. Looking up from the sink, she saw the main thing in the bathroom she despised the most; the mirror. And within it, she found herself face-to-face with the visage of Princess Twilight Sparkle of Equestria. Except she wasn’t her. Far from it; she was meant to be her opposite, her reverse, her antithesis. Unfortunately, this also meant that the planning and organizing capability that the real Twilight found so natural and effortless, she instead was a fumbling, useless mess at. And so, when she and her compatriots were defeated by their own hubris and blasted with the Tree of Harmony’s magic beam of gayness, they all became their own real Ponies. In some manner, anyway. They were free from Chrysalis’s control, at least, but they were still the polar opposites of their originals, and as those originals were generally good Ponies with good qualities, this new versions of them were anything but. One was a bully, another an instigator. One was left greedy and mad, another a lazy and perpetual liar. The final two were apathetic and hyper-focused respectively, with the former simply letting everything fly her by, and the other... ...Was left unable to affect anything in the way she wanted, as her master plans for power were usually very short-sighted and always failed. Really, the thing that best encapsulated her essence was her new name: Eclipse. It was akin to Twilight’s meeting of day and night, of Sun and Moon, but harsher, and meaner. But it was also... like it was overcompensating for her own uselessness, as if she was trying to be some evil edgelord, as opposed to the more complex negative reversal of Twilight that she actually wanted her new name to be... but that too was like herself, wasn’t it? A constant failure, unable to do anything for anyone, least of all herself. She thought things may have been different for a while, actually, as the real Twilight and her real friends helped them, slowly getting them to come off of their antithetical ways to some degree, calming them down and helping them find what they actually enjoyed doing with their lives. The same was true for Eclipse, who had been taught better ways to organize and think about things that would truly be good for her, as well as how to keep proper amounts of attention on things that actually mattered. For a while, she thought it was working. She slowly got her shit together and stopped pining for power, planning good events in her life that she actually managed to make time to attend, and starting to help out others with planning bigger events. There were parties, both for and by her, and community projects old and new she helped with. Her resolve and intelligence even attracted a pony who had recently moved to Ponyville from another world; Sunset Shimmer. The Unicorn may have fell first, but she slowly managed to get Eclipse to fall as well, and they loved each other for many months, and eventually they got married. But then, the Winter Wrap-Up came. A yearly tradition, and one she had a light hoof in helping the previous year, back when she was still learning, but this time, it was a good opportunity to test how far she had come. And she failed. Miserably. Once she found out how badly, her past and her purpose came back to her; she was never meant to succeed, only to fail. She was made by a monster that had failed twice before, and created in the reflection of a Pony who always succeeded, so it was never a surprise to her when she failed, time and time again. The others got angry, but she didn’t; this was what she was made for, after all. Looking at the mirror again, she noticed that there were differences between herself and the real deal. Twilight’s coat was bright and vivid, whereas Eclipse’s was dulled and lifeless. Twilight’s mane and tail were rich and glossy, but Eclipse’s were dry and frayed. Twilight’s eyes were clear, sharp, and shown immense power, intelligence, and wisdom behind them, but Eclipse’s eyes were a deeper, corrupted colour, and while she had the power and intelligence, there was no wisdom. She hadn’t had a life to grow that wisdom, after all. Even their Marks were different, with Twilight’s rose-coloured six-pointed star having a syncopated white one beneath it, but that same smaller star was the same rose as the other on Eclipse’s Mark. It was easily enough to pass as the real mare at a glance, but any closer look would reveal that she’s nothing but a cheap knock-off given life. Why was she given life, anyway? That damned Tree had no reason to do anything but execute her and the other fakes, and she truly would’ve preferred that. It’s not like she had any purpose in the living world, anyhow. And yet, some creatures liked her anyway. Looking at herself in the mirror, she was forced to ask a question. “What do I have that she doesn’t?” She had asked that question of so many others, so many times, but she never got a true answer, one that satisfied her and actually felt true at the same time. She had asked Fluttershy, Quake, Rarity, Miracle, Pinkie, Pepper, Applejack, Golden, Rainbow, Chroma, and Twilight herself. She had asked Celestia, Luna, Cadenza, Armor, Spike, Tempest, Starlight, Trixie, Sunburst, Sunset... She had asked Ember, Thorax, Maud, Sentry, Raven, Zecora, Lyra, Sweetie, Sweetie (the other one), Bloom, Scootaloo, Gabby, Gilda, and practically every other creature that she could, yet she never got a good answer. Really, the only argument that may have come close was that she wasn’t immortal, which was a sketchy statement to say the least. She had wings, she had a horn, and she had magic hooves, but she was still pretty sure she wasn’t an Alicorn. It’s not as if being an Alicorn meant much to her anyway; it didn’t even need to be earned if Flurry Heart was any indication. And, her specific status had no real relation to the real Twilight if that other Twilight was any indication. She had asked that Twilight too, after they and the other couple visitors from the other world came in, and she gave one of the more interesting responses: that she wasn’t crazy. Apparently, the real Twilight had caused some issues of her own, from a mind-control spell wrought upon the entire town, to a few instances of time-travel, and just about everything in between. Sure, Eclipse hadn’t done any of that madness, but there was no saying she hadn’t done some crazy or downright evil stuff, or get up to even more in the rest of her time alive. So, the question still stood. She looked deep into the mirror, dark rose eyes boring into her visage, desperate for an answer. Suddenly, her ear twitched as she picked up a faint noise. And then— BANG! —The barely muffled noise of a door getting slammed open. “Eclipse,” Sunset Shimmer stated from within the bedroom, the bathroom door still between the two mares. Her voice voice was dry, likely due to having cried a lot recently, and her tone was even, controlled, and hiding her emotions as best she could, which in this case, wasn’t very well; it was all too clear how pained she was, and it was obvious as to why. “Sunset,” She replied calmly, casually, and with no trace of pain or annoyance. She was already better at hiding her emotions than the lot of the hyperactive creatures in Ponyville, but at this point, she didn’t exactly have any emotions to display. “I was hoping you’d come out today,” Sunset requested, though it sounded more like a plea. “It’s an important day for us. ...You do know know what day it is, right?” She added, her question an even more desperate grasp at the love they once had for each other. Eclipse simply snorted in response, explaining, “Of course I do. You do know who I’m based off of, correct? I can’t not keep track of the days passing.” She could hear the deep inhale on the other side of the door, and could easily envision the sight of Sunset pressing her hooves into her face while she nodded repeatedly, processing the information and attempting to formulate a response. “Hopefully you also that... t-this type of day is very important,” She eventually managed wearily, desperately, and almost terrified. Eclipse almost cared. “Empirically, yes, I do. Personally, no, I don’t care.” Slowly turning her head to look at the door, easily able to feel her... wife’s presence beyond it, she stated, “Our relationship isn’t anything more than a legality, after all.” “Don’t, say that...” Sunset cried, tears likely forming in her eyes again as she pleaded, “Please, Clippy...” Oh, she was using the nickname again. Eclipse went to ‘Clipse, then to ‘Clip, and finally to Clippy. How quaint that name was, and how it reflected none of her own nature. Not the darkness, not the hatred, not the fakeness or cloning, not even the terrible organizational abilities. How she loathed it. “Why you insist on using such a name, I will never and have never understood,” She replied, looking back towards the mirror at the face that wasn’t her own, and she recalled the many nicknames her original had: Twily, Twi’, Sparkles, PurpleSmart, Lavender, Miss Friendship... the list went on, with dozens more ridiculous names she hadn’t even heard of. “I can only find it pointless and infuriating.” “It...” The Unicorn tried, but trailed off into a sniff of incredible sadness, an emotion many had classified her current state as, but she knew better. “You liked i-it, before...” Sunset said, her sadness only slightly relieved by some fondness, “When you flew me a-above the clouds, and we laid on them for hours... you laughed w-when I called you that. D-don’t you remember...?” She did remember that. “I was deluded then, and during the entire time I believed I had friends. That I deserved friends, and deserved you. That I was even worthy of living, and had a reason to keep doing so.” Silence pervaded the pair of rooms for several seconds after that, an undertone of faint buzzing magic that lit the bathroom lights as well as the tiny sniffing of the Unicorn beyond the door. “If you d-don’t like living...” Sunset begun carefully, her tone deadened and nearly dead, “...Then w-why do you keep yourself a-alive?” Eclipse smiled faintly—finally, a good question. One that hadn’t been asked of her dozens of times before and certainly not recently, as nobody else had the balls to dare offend her with such a rude question. “Instincts,” She answered. “Twilight’s instincts, to be specific.” Sunset took her time once more to process the information, as she often did. She was rather smart, but never the quickest, and often questioned herself. She never had the best grasp of what was considered right or polite, and liked to tackle things she never had a right to. Maybe that was why she fell for Eclipse, as a matter of spite against everyone around her. “I know what it’s like,” Sunset eventually said, making Eclipse whip her head towards the door in surprise. “To... want to die.” Eclipse could recall the time where the Unicorn spoke about her time in the other world, where she bullied, and then was bullied. She was mean, and then sad, but became happy once she found friends and was truly forgiven by them. However, a monster came soon after and tormented her in a truly evil way, one that made a past version of both herself and Eclipse proud; making her friends turn on her and shattering her spirit. It was only later that it was found that a group of children were doing it, and didn’t even realize how horrible the consequences of their actions truly were. Sunset mentioned wanted to die back then, but only in passing. Eclipse remembered it, though. “You feel pointless.. and worthless...” Sunset continued, the horrible pit of anguish from back them rising up once more, “Like there is no point in being alive... and the world would be better off without you.” Eclipse stared at the door, and she heard the thump of her wife’s hoof against it, though not on the handle. “I know what you’re trying to do,” She spoke, her words even. “But I’m not like you. Even at your lowest, you still had the potential to effect change, as you were your own mare. I’m not, though. You are real, but I’m just a fake.” Turning back to the mirror, she saw just how fake she was. The palette of her colours, the straight curve of her bangs, the magic in her eyes... She wasn’t anything new or original. “No,” Sunset stated with more force than before, “You are real. T-to me, and everyone that wants you to come out and live.” A deep breath was heard beyond the door, but Eclipse didn’t bother looking towards it. “Like it or not, Clippy... the Tree made you real, a-and now you have as much potential as anyone else.” An interesting thought, truly, and especially so coming from a mare that once considered herself a monster. However... “Anyone else, huh? Haven’t you forgotten there’s a mare that’s more than me in every possible way?” She could hear Sunset thump against the door as she slumped against it, then a shfff as she slid down to the floor. “...J-just because Twilight is better than you... doesn’t mean y-you’re... useless.” “Really?” She responded flatly. “If someone had need of my skills, could they not go to her instead? Would they not?” She looked at herself in the mirror, at her horn and the wings barely visible on her back. “I have nothing unique apart from her. In the best case, I am still just a... backup.” She had found this conversation to be exhausting by this point, the stubbornness of the other mare trying so hard for such a pointless goal... She was forced to sit down, and while she debated simply teleporting away, she knew from experience that would only aggravate Sunset into chasing her, and she really didn’t want to deal with that. “...Open the door.” Well, it seemed like she was getting aggravated anyway. “No.” She felt Sunset’s magic the instant grabbed onto the door, and with little effort, she pulled back against it with her own. “Clippy...” The Unicorn spoke, desperate and tears clear in her voice, “Please open the door.” “No.” Sunset’s magic strengthen, yanking back on the door as hard as she could, but Eclipse responded in turn, matching the force with minimal chalance (wait, that’s not a word...). “Let me in, Eclipse...” Sunset’s voice was getting even more desperate, yet somehow more determined at the same time. “Let me see you. Let me... love you.” “...Why?” Eclipse could only bother to ask. “Why do you care?” She could feel Sunset’s growl, the anger and stubbornness flowing out through her magic into the other Pony’s. “Because I love you, damnit. And I won’t ever stop.” Eclipse just laughed. “You are an idiot.” “Yep,” The other mare shot back simply. Sunset was that stubborn and stupid with her emotions, wasn’t she? Quite honest as well, just like nearly every other creature in Ponyville; it was one of their ‘virtues’, after all. “You’re not going to leave, are you?” She eventually asked of the Unicorn, deadpanning as she was already quite aware of the answer. “Nope.” Eclipse sighed. “Fine. If you are going to be so persistent...” She replied, assenting only somewhat as she watched herself in the mirror, seeing the form and hearing the voice only differentiated by a mild shade or tone, “Then answer me a question.” Looking over at the door once more, she asked of the mare beyond, who was already faltering with the anticipation, her magic strength fading somewhat, “What do I have, that she does not?” Silence told hold from that point; Sunset couldn’t give an answer to that question, just like she and everyone else couldn’t ever before. She didn’t have any quip or smartaleck response, no loving reassurance or careful words of wisdom, her fire having been extinguished under the weight of that question, the one that meant the world to Eclipse, bearing her entire identity upon it. And that identity was just like the answer she got; nothing. She was a void, a waste of space, a null entity, something that should never have been, yet was made so for a reason no creature in existence knew of. She held no place in objective reality nor any subjective friendships, and had nothing to give the world that couldn’t be given by another. So, why was she still there? “Your silence is answer enough, Sunset,” She spoke, even more defeated than normal, “So leave, and be—” “Wait.” Sunset’s voice was tiny, weak, and fragile, yet it beheld a determination like none other. Eclipse may have shot her down like so many times before, but something about that single word made her pause. “I just realized, when you spoke. Your voice...” The clacking of hooves made clear that Sunset was pushing herself off the door, then up to stand with confidence, “It’s calm, and composed. Even in your funk, you’re still calm and logical, taking the hits as they come, and... I’ve never heard of Twilight doing that before.” The words were spoken with strong belief, but... “Am I calm? Or am I simply too tired to be as frenzied as she gets?” “You never have been.” Sunset took a deep breath, and must’ve felt the questioning gaze Eclipse bore through the door, and saw fit to elaborate, “You’ve never been crazed like Twilight. I’ve never seen you go nutty like that, and while you do share some neuroticizes with her, I’ve never heard of you going all hysterical like that.” Perhaps there was truth to her words, but how much did it really amount to? “Go on.” Another deep breath came from Sunset, then a short laugh. “I’ve seen you at your worst, your wrath and pining for power... It’s nothing like Twilight. She gets all rage-fueled and screams at others to get under control, but you just command others to follow you. She still gets like than every now and then, but you... you’ve gotten better. “You both are very rational... but in different ways.” Her voice rose in passion, the spectre of lecturing that she must’ve kept from her days in that school in the other world seemingly coming back up. “Twilight calms herself down and makes a twenty-point checklist to solve a problem, but you just... deal with it. And I think I’m realizing this now because I realize how different you two actually talk.” “..How do you mean?” “Well...” Sunset trailed off, taking a moment to no doubt collect her thoughts before she continued, “Me and.. everyone else have always viewed you as a clone of Twilight, ‘cuz that’s just what you are, but... When I heard you speak so dispassionately and casually, I realized that so many of these comparisons between you and her get made because we’re forcing them. In reality... you’re a lot more different than anyone bothered to give you credit for. Me, and you, included.” Eclipse turned her entire body to face the door; this conversation was actually getting interesting at this point. “How different am I, then?” Another pause came for Sunset’s thought to get processed. “I got a few examples,” She eventually said. “I remember... just a couple months after you got.. freed from Chrysalis, there was a Cockatrice that ended up wandering into Ponyville from the Everfree. Everyone freaked out when they heard, and while Twilight and her friends were in Canterlot, most of us just wanted to get Zecora, but you...” She snorted, a mix of emotions there, “You just killed the thing once you saw it.” “I don’t really think everyone else appreciated that, despite how I stopped more of them from getting petrified,” Eclipse retorted calmly, still recalling the annoyance she felt when she saw that nobody else was doing something about the very dangerous creature wandering about in the middle of town. “They’re all pretty squeamish,” Sunset laughed lightly, but added, “And so is Twilight. She would never have killed it, even if it meant getting petrified herself. That’s a pretty big difference between you two.” Eclipse supposed that was true, though she was hardly sure that such a difference was a good thing in that context. “And I know it was your anger, and you’re trying to be better, but just stick with for right now,” Sunset amended carefully. Eclipse sighed. “...Fine.” A deep breath in, and Sunset went on, “At our half-year anniversary, when we went to the Crystal Empire, there was that statue the Changelings made—that one that was supposed to represent their burgeoning unity with the Crystal Ponies.” The one that looked like the fabled Princess Amore fused with King Thorax, if Eclipse recalled correctly, and even actually correctly recognized what it was meant to be in the first place... “We were there with Princess Cadance, Prince Armor, and their daughter, who was still as rowdy and destructive as ever...” “I recall that,” Eclipse noted, still peeved at the memory. “The Changelings blamed Cadance and the Ponies for breaking it, and they were already tense about the Changelings, and when that asshole Princess dipped with Flurry and her husband, a massive fight broke out.” “Yeah, I just wanted to get out of there, teleport away, but...” Sunset sighed, sounding somewhat guilty about doing what Cadance had done back then, but kept going, “You didn’t want to, though, and were already pissed off at the crowds, and I thought you were going to blast them or something, but...” “Then the guards asked me for help.” She snorted lightly, apparently the Empire wasn’t aware of her existence, so all of them there had thought she was Twilight the entire time, so when she was called upon... “I took a second to realize what they said... but then I realized I could use this damned form of mine for something good for a change.” “And you did...” The fond smile was clear as day in her voice, the passion and love that kept them together for so long still there within her, ready and eager to connect back with her wife’s emotions, whenever they became exposed again. “You yelled at all of them, with the full power of the RCV, to stop being so stupid, and that it was just a fucking accident that they should put behind them if they actually wanted to live together.” While Eclipse knew well what these examples were about, she still couldn’t agree with the reason for them being spoken. “And yet I believe she would’ve handled that better, talking them down and calming them down rather than resorting to angry shouting.” “But it worked, and pretty quick to boot,” Sunset reminded, seeming to pause for just a moment before adding, “If Twilight was actually there, and wanted to work them down slowly, it would’ve taken way longer.” Eclipse chuckled dryly, turning her head back away. “And now you’re trying to convince me my anger is better? Please.” “Sort of, yeah. It makes you act,” The Unicorn clarified, her words having gone a bit stiff and worried at her wife’s dismissal. “Twilight would’ve taken more time to deal with those things, maybe leading the Cockatrice away peacefully and creating a full speech... but more chaos would’ve happened in the mean time, that chaos that.. you didn’t allow for.” Eclipse didn’t respond, simply closing her eyes, refusing to look her reflected visage in the eyes. Sunset took some time before continuing on and asking, “Do you remember what happened just two months ago, when the Friendship School’s Spring semester ended?” Eclipse did, with the frazzled look of her counterpart looking so... out of place. “The low scores didn’t really sit well with Twilight,” Sunset recounted, her tone picking up an odd quality of fear, but imbued with exasperation, “She blamed Starlight; it was her first semester without requesting help from Twilight, after all. And with how Starlight’s always been pretty bad at diffusing situations, they started shouting at each other—in the middle of the hall, too—and eventually it got worse...” There was another pause, this one for multiple seconds as Sunset no doubt glowered at the memories of her friends, some fighting and others simply failing to stop the fight, until... “Thankfully Spike managed to find you before someone got injured, and I remember exactly what you said to us then. ‘Deal with your moron; I’ll take mine.’” She laughed at the memory, genuinely mirthful after she imitated the cold, firm, and ticked off voice her wife said those very words with, words the mare herself still recalled very well. “You barely even hesitated, and I think it was just your... just annoyance with dealing with Twilight again, but then you just yanked Starlight away and blocked Twilight’s magic. You didn’t even look bothered back then as we tamped down Starlight and you kept that shield up, staring at her just like... ‘Seriously?’” Sunset’s laughter came again, even louder now as she fell against the door again, her noises barely muffled by it any more with her face likely pressed against it. “You two were... hahah... acting the exact opposite there!” Her laughter calmed down for a moment, but her mirth continued into her voice as she went on, “She looked like she wanted to kill you, and you looked like you were barely keeping yourself awake! I don’t know how I didn’t realize it back then, but that, right there, is part of what’s so different between you two. She freaks out, so badly that Ponies even coined a term for it; Twilighting, but you... You calm down, take charge, don’t let anything bother you... It’s a zen, flow state that’s really damn impressive, and...” She laughed a bit again, snorting as she suggesting, “Maybe we can call that something too? Like.. Eclipsing.” “...That’s a b-bit much,” Eclipse replied, and was startled a bit by how her voice broke, making her suddenly aware of how dry her throat was. Taking a deep breath and clearing it, she reflected for a moment; she hadn’t ever recalled herself going into that same frenzy as Twilight, even back when she was under Chrysalis’s control. If that difference was truly consistent, then maybe... “And you really only realized this now?” A deep breath, and almost mournful sigh. “...Yeah. And well...” Sunset paused to think for a second, “Like I said before, that whole planner role was always forced onto you, mainly because of Chrysalis, and.. how she wanted you to fully counter Twilight. The rest of us just thought that was what you were meant for, but now.....” “Now you believe that part of Twilight was inverted as well?” “...Yeah.” Eclipse paused; that was an interesting thought, and did make sense. The very nature of the original Ponies were flipped, with timid kindness becoming aggressive wrath, uplifting bubbliness turning into instigating petulance, and hardheaded showiness getting reversed into phlegmatic uselessness. Why should Twilight be any different? And given that Pony’s frenzied overindulgence into organization, it would only make sense that it would get flipped over to a calm approach to improvisation... “..So I believe that you’re—” “Improvisation,” Eclipse confirmed, cutting her wife off with a firm, but understanding tone. “Me never being good at plans makes sense with this, and all the things I’ve done well track here, too. I must ask then,” She continued, warily and with an even voice, “Is Twilight not capable of improvising, at least in some way? I do recall how much her friends prefer her planning things, even in the moment...” Sunset sighed, clearly in disappointment and exasperation. “Her improvisation is terrible, Clippy. Sometimes they’re overly complex, sometimes they barely exist at all, sometimes they just build off of others’ plans, and...” She laughed a bit once more, wry and mirthful, “Well, how many times has those types of her plans truly worked the way she wanted them to?” Eclipse thought back, and she did recall of how Twilight’s improvised plans usually consisted of her relying on the experience of others while trying to make a full-scale plan in the shortest time possible—either that, or simply crying out and hitting whatever the problem was with a hammer until it went away, which... given her efforts in dealing with Tirek’s re-emergence and all the other villains she’d heard of, as well as more mundane things like the lower marks in the School of Friendship, was quite telling about her actual improvisational abilities. Still... “Why do her friends trust her then? They even preferred her over Starlight back then...” “Honestly?” Sunset blew out a terse breath, “It’s ‘cuz they’re stupid as Tartarus. And—” She scoffed, irritable and irate, “It’s not like they have any better planners in their group.” Hmph. That was just like them, wasn’t it? Regardless, she finally got an answer for her question in their lengthy conversation which had superseded her... Oh, right; she was in the midst of her depression. She hardly wanted to go right back into that, but she wasn’t sure it was up to her, with the overwhelming lethargy of not having a purpose in life always keeping her down. Taking some time to feel out her own emotions, she was made aware of there wasn’t any more lethargy in her—sure, she felt odd and tired, but that was just due to all the lack of getting outside, eating, etc. Her wife had kept her distracted, kept her spirits up as best she could, and found her a purpose when no-one else had... “As selflessly dedicated as always, Sushi... She muttered to herself, pulling her attention back to the world around her, and the door before her. Flaring her magic, she grabbed the handle of the door and threw it open, forcing a yelp out of Sunset as she got forced back, blinking in shock as she beheld her wife, looking as filthy and tired as someone not bathing for weeks ought to, but with an eager grin on her face. “I’m going to need to take a bath,” Eclipse told her wife as she grabbed the shocked-still mare with her magic, and she continued with a borderline salacious tone, “And I think you should join me. We are married, after all.” Sunset had no opportunity to react before she was kissed hard, her brain needing a moment to catch up with everything before making her eyes roll up in her head from the smooch’s force alone, but then she let out a gasp as Eclipse’s lips were suddenly pulled back from her own. She could barely process anything at the moment, and her wife used the opportunity to grab the door once again, then slam it closed so they could get up to what couples usually do.
I Vicious I
550771
1
Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Comedy,Horror,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Luna is a Coffee Addict.
After returning from the moon, Luna discovers the wonderful new invention of coffee. Naturally, she takes it way too far and loses her mind. Or maybe she finally sees things as they really are.
complete
171
0
<p>After returning from the moon, Luna discovers the wonderful new invention of coffee. Naturally, she takes it way too far and loses her mind. Or maybe she finally sees things as they really are.</p>
everyone
2024-02-04T06:35:58+00:00
2024-02-04T20:15:24+00:00
1,498
A number of wondrous marvels hath sprung forth since mine initial banishment unto the moon. Whilst to others these novelties may appear mundane, their revelation upon my return struck me with profound awe. Foremost among these innovations stands the 'locomotive', a contrivance harnessing the power of 'hot water' to propel multitudes of Ponies with unmatched swiftness. Equally remarkable is the advent of indoor plumbing, a feat of sanitation that stirred Tia's ire at my initial hesitance to embrace its comforts. Following numerous complaints and foul looks from the gardening staff, I acquiesced, and now find myself enamored with its conveniences. Yet, amidst the great number of ingenious inventions, none captivates mine imagination as fervently as coffee. Oh, what a sublime creation! To conceive that ground brown beans, when steeped in hot water, might serve as a remedy for weariness! The interminable nights now bear less weight upon mine shoulders, and the wearisome daylight assemblies to which my sister inexorably drags me no longer threaten to engulf me in slumber. Though, I must confess, my attempts at feigning interest during such gatherings have not been met with unqualified success. Tia advises that mine thespian skills require refinement, for my exuberance appears less than genuine to those assembled in council. Haza! On this day, I hath achieved slumber for a mere four hours, yet find myself in fine fettle. Five cups of coffee wrought this miracle! At breakfast, Tia cast a sidelong glance as I partook of more than my customary share of fruit rinds. When questioned, I professed the need for added vigor, citing the lengthier hours of toil. With a dirty look towards Tia, I gulped down my third banana peel. I was uncertain whether her expression displayed concern or befuddlement. This morning, before my fair sister stirred from her slumber, I found myself waking earlier than her. A curious twist of fate, for I, unexpectedly, fell asleep before my shift ended. It was as I placed lavender along the hallways of the castle that I succumbed, collapsing in the midst of my duty. Fortune smiled upon me, for Tia was not present to witness my folly; elsewise, I would scarcely have heard the end of it. Drinking more coffee to stay awake, I persevered through the night, a decision proven wise as Tia's rise was tardy again. Perhaps in the future, I might take on her duties, granting her more time for rest. Another momentous discovery graces our day! Today, we unveil the invention known as espresso—a diminutive delight akin to our regular coffee! With expressos, I can now fill my cup and relish the sensation of drinking ten coffees at once! This newfound elixir promises to fuel my endeavors; perchance, I shall find myself aiding Tia more readily during daylight hours. With less need for slumber, I shall be ever more vigilant and industrious. Today, Tia voiced her concerns for my well-being, emphasizing the importance of sleep and the unhealthy nature of my one-hour slumber each night. I paid her words no heed, for I am immortal, after all. Instead, my gaze lingered upon her flowing, ethereal mane— a sight I had not truly observed before. Remarkable how it swayed as Tia addressed me. Eventually, she either sensed my inattentiveness or deemed her message conveyed; I failed to discern which. Sipping more of my coffee, I observed her graceful departure to bed. A perfect opportunity, as it allowed me to indulge further in my beloved brew. Tia once more greeted the dawn with tardiness, a habit seemingly woven through the centuries. As she stirred, my gaze fixed upon her, awaiting her emergence from slumber. A startle marked her awakening, evident in the startled jump she executed upon finding me observing her. She delivered a lecture on boundaries, a discourse that vexed me considerably, for her late mornings and delayed sun raising impeded my pursuit of replenishing my coffee cup. Feigning attentiveness, I endured until she departed to usher in the sun. I have ceased sleeping altogether. I've deduced that by consuming at least one cup of coffee per hour, I shall never succumb to the urge to slumber again! With the surplus of time thus gained, I shall embark upon daytime dream visits. Alas, the night shift workers have been deprived of my dream walking for too long. Today, I vow to grace each and every one of them with my ethereal presence as they rest. Tia brimmed with anger today, and for what reason? She had once again lingered in slumber, delaying my replenishment of coffee until her duties were fulfilled. I took it upon myself to raise the sun in her stead, expecting gratitude for allowing her a leisurely morning. Instead, she accused me of oddity, blaming the copious coffee consumption. In retort, I remarked upon the consequence of her excessive rest. With a huff, she departed in displeasure. Today, I received word that a multitude of night workers are now working day shift, allegedly due to the disconcerting spectacle of my excessively caffeinated appearance. According to their accounts, my speech, accelerated to an otherworldly pace, made me seem possessed, coupled with my abrupt, rapid gestures. Apparently they found this terrifying. No matter, I say. Their leave is of little consequence, especially since I seldom grace daytime dreams with my visitation. Now, with their departure, I find myself bestowed with additional hours to indulge in the consumption of coffee. A prospect that elevates my daily intake to a staggering fifty cups. Tia found cause for displeasure once more today. Not only did I summon forth the sun before her awakening, but I also chose to leave the moon aloft. In my estimation, this arrangement offers the optimal balance, granting us the blessings of both celestial spheres without the hassle of daily raising and lowering. Despite my eloquent explanation, Tia persisted in her lecturing, a tedious tirade that prompted my departure, much to her chagrin. After all, a replenishment of coffee beckoned, a necessity far more pressing than her tired words. Today, I found myself compelled to seal Tia in the Sun. Regrettably, she left me no alternative, for she dared to threaten to take away my coffee. She fails to comprehend its vital significance—it sustains my sanity and wards off the wasteful indulgence of sleep. The task proved rather facile, her magic faltering in the face of my swift and erratic movements, undoubtedly fueled by today's seventy-fifth cup. Though she may require a period of rest to regain composure, I am confident she will ultimately agree that I made the correct decision. Today, Twilight Sparkle and her compatriots arrived wielding the Elements of Harmony, they were extremely upset at my decision to seal Tia within the sun. Despite my attempts to explain the dire threat posed to my coffee, they obstinately dismissed reason and launched an assault. The encounter proved almost farcically straightforward; they seemed incapable of perceiving my movements, rendering their attempts to strike me with friendship magic ineffectual. In an act of retribution, I relieved them of their whimsical gems and cutie marks. I gave them a warning for them not to return until they saw things from my perspective before teleporting them back to Ponyville. It's only the the start of my day, and it's already ruined. The early morning heralded an unwelcome intrusion as Discord materialized within my throne room. Undoubtedly angered by what I did to little his yellow mare friend, he extended an offer of tea, a notion that repulsed me given my unwavering commitment to an all-coffee regimen. I told him I'm on an all coffee diet now. His reaction to my saying that may have been the first time I genuinely saw him surprised. I thought it was cute, so I decided to turn him back into stone with that expression in tact. One less obstacle to keep me from drinking my coffee. The sun and moon now stand united in the heavens, casting disquiet into the minds of the citizens. However, I have assuaged their concerns, assuring them that our realm shall henceforth operate with greater efficiency. Thanks to my unwavering commitment to coffee, I can seamlessly transition between day and night shifts, sparing the need for the arduous task of raising and lowering celestial bodies. Henceforth, they shall maintain their positions in the sky without falter, ensuring perpetual constancy in our realm. That night when I arrived back at the castle, I couldn't help but feel that a violation had occurred. Something in my home had changed. Upon multiple sweeps of the castle I found nothing out of place and nothing missing. The unease I felt said otherwise, there had been a transgression; something had lurked within the castle that did not belong there. I engaged the staff in conversation, noting their disquiet as I probed for answers. Their unease surpassed that provoked by any anomaly within the castle that day. My certainty solidified: an unwelcome presence lurked amongst us. I remain steadfast, unwavering in my vigilance. Do you ever feel like you're not alone in your own home? Like there's something just outside the peripherals of your vision, choosing not to attack? Today found me secluded within my bedroom for hours, where I stumbled upon a small hole in the wall, from which a faint whispering emanated. Perched upon my bed, I fixated upon it, unyielding, as though any lapse in vigilance would invite an imminent onslaught. Hours elapsed in this manner until a peculiar pattern unveiled itself. With each sip of my coffee, a spectral aura seemed to intensify, validating my initial suspicions. Determined, I resolved to consume a copious amount of espresso. The amplification of the murmurs with each sip of coffee was unmistakable. Yet, despite the heightened intensity of the whispers, their significance remained elusive. Regardless of the quantity consumed, the voices may have become louder, but I could not understand what was being said. I have erred gravely. The voices no longer emanate solely from the breach in the wall; they pervade the very air around me, an omnipresent chorus of murmurs. Today, I consumed over 200 cups of coffee, driven by a primal fear of succumbing to slumber. I dare not lower my guard, for I sense an unseen malevolence lurking just beyond the edge of perception—a specter watching, observing us all. Though the words remain indecipherable, their intent echoes through the chamber. They speak of Equestria, of my beloved ponies, of me. What inscrutable desire fuels this relentless onslaught? How can I thwart its advances and safeguard my realm from its grasp? These questions weigh heavily upon me as I grapple with the enigmatic forces that encroach upon our world. Today, I addressed the ponies of Equestria at a grand assembly outside the castle walls. Alas, their response was not as I anticipated. Instead of comprehending the gravity of the situation, they recoiled in fear, their trepidation directed not towards the impending threat, but towards me. Seeking clarity, I engaged the guards in conversation afterward. Their insights unveiled a disquieting truth: my erratic and rapid speech and frenetic movements had instilled fear in the hearts of our subjects. Undoubtedly, this tumultuous behavior stems from my incessant consumption of coffee, the elixir that grants me the ability to perceive the voices lurking within our walls. Despite the apprehension of the populace, I cannot relent in my pursuit of truth. For the voices whisper of a darkness that threatens our realm, and only through unwavering resolve can we hope to vanquish it. The encroaching darkness looms ever closer with each passing day, its ominous presence palpable in the whispers that now pervade my senses. They speak of an impending end, a culmination drawing near. The weight of their words bears down upon me, suffocating, suffusing me with a profound sense of dread. The Beast looms over us, its presence spanning the breadth of existence with a billion eyes and a billion minds. Its watchful gaze pierces through the veil of reality, observing my ponies and I with an unfathomable awareness. I can feel its scrutiny, an ever-present specter that peers into our very thoughts, casting its gaze upon every corner of Equestria. Despite my earnest attempts to warn my ponies, my words echo in the void, unanswered. I find myself ensconced upon my throne, grappling with the weight of uncertainty. Hours slip away as I ponder the feasibility of devising a plan to counter this incomprehensible force. Yet, even as I contemplate, I am keenly aware that its watchful eyes remain fixed upon us, unrelenting in their vigil. Should I conceive a plan, would I possess the requisite power and ability to enact it? The question lingers, a shadow cast upon the path forward, shrouded in doubt and uncertainty. Yet, in the face of such formidable odds, I must steel myself and seek a way to safeguard Equestria from the malevolent gaze of this indomitable entity. On the other hoof I think it will be easier to forget all this, apologize to Tia and give up Coffee.
orivonfist
550782
1
Cutie Mark Crusaders,Fluttershy,Hondo Flanks,Main 6,Alternate Universe,Porn,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Fetish,Sex
Fluttershy, Goddess of Fertility
After being transformed back from being a vampony, Fluttershy starts to feel a desire to be closer to others.
incomplete
30
12
<p>After being transformed back from being a vampony, Fluttershy starts to feel a desire to be closer to others.</p><p>This is a commission from the wonderful writer Jest</p><p>This story contains a variety of fetishes. Some that will be introduced later. These fetishes in Kinks are limited and will be included later.</p><p><span class="spoiler">Futa, Cock vore, Cock transformation, identity death, semi. non-con into con, musk, genital worship.[\spoiler]</span></p>
mature
2024-02-03T09:25:47+00:00
2024-02-03T09:25:47+00:00
623
Fluttershy hit the dirt hard, her body tumbling over and over before finally hitting the base of an apple tree and coming to an abrupt stop. The mare would have been injured but she was so out of it from her sudden and abrupt transformation back into a pony that she felt no pain. All she could feel was a strange feeling of loss as her mind once more took the dominant position within her conscience. “What gives Twilight? You were supposed to lower her down gently!” Rainbow Dash exclaimed in annoyance. “Sorry everypony,” Twilight replied wearily, a hoof pressed against the side of her head. “But that spell took way more out of me than it was supposed to.” “Why? Did something go wrong?” Rarity pressed. “No, nothing went wrong. At least I don't think so,” Twilight stated. “What happened exactly?” Spike inquired. “I’m not sure to be honest. It was like there was a force that was attempting to resist the spell somehow,” Twilight muttered, deep in thought. “But Fluttershy’s body should have worked with me to return it to normal. A pony’s wellspring naturally resists a curse even after its taken root.” “So she isn't going to turn into a giant fruit bat and eat all Applejack’s apples?” Pinkie Pie asked. “No, nothing like that. She may just be a bit more out of it than anticipated,” Twilight declared. As if on cue, the former bat pony groaned, and just like that the fear that she may attack the group vanished. The five friends rushed to their friend’s aid, with Applejack getting their first, and hoisting Fluttershy back to her unsteady hooves. Rainbow Dash stood nearby, a wing flapping, sending cool air toward the confused shy mare rising up from the dirt. “Easy there sugar cube. You took quite a tumble there,” Applejack exclaimed. “Wh-where am I?” Fluttershy muttered blearily. “Are you okay Flutters? Does anything hurt?” Rainbow Dash asked. Fluttershy paused and then shook her head. “No, I’m fine just really exhausted for some reason,” Fluttershy shook her head and looked around, only now realizing where she was. “What happened to me?” Pinkie Pie suddenly appeared before her, the pink mare sliding up between the narrow space between Fluttershy and Applejack. “You turned into a vampire pony! A vampony!” Pinkie Pie proclaimed. Fluttershy gasped, recoiling in horror. “I tried to eat ponies?” Fluttershy exclaimed. “Of course not!” Pinkie Pie retorted. “So… I wasn't a vampire?” Fluttershy murmured in confusion. “Yes!” Pinkie Pie quite unhelpfully answered. “Yes I was or yes I wasn't?” Fluttershy inquired. “Yes, you were!” “But I didn't try and eat ponies?” “Yes!” “I did!?” Fluttershy exclaimed. “No!” “I’m confused,” Fluttershy muttered, a hoof going to her aching head. “Me too,” Rarity offered. “And I was there!” “Look, I’m real sorry I didn't take your suggestion in the first place,” Applejack offered, taking a moment to remove Pinkie Pie and place the party pony several feet away. “I guess I’m just too used to seeing pests as anything but a determinant to my family’s livelihood.” Fluttershy opened her mouth to respond but a strange whisper caught her attention. She turned to it, but it was so distant that it couldn't be heard no matter how hard Fluttershy strained her ears. “Uh, Flutters?” Applejack remarked, waving a hoof in front of the shy mare’s face. “Oh, um yes! But now you won't be so hasty in your judgment, right?” Fluttershy pressed. “No siree,” Applejack proclaimed. “I ain't so big a mare that I can't admit when I’m wrong. This whole mistreatin the bats ends tonight and that's an Apple family promise.” “Not a Pinkie promise?” Pinkie Pie interrupted. “I ain't stickin' my hoof in my eye,” Applejack shot back. “Well thank you Applejack,” Fluttershy exclaimed, smiling softly. “Now if you girls will excuse me this night has been exceptionally draining and I would really like to get home now.” Fluttershy took a step, and then another, only to stumble almost immediately. Thankfully Rarity was close at hand, and using her magic as well as a helping hoof, she kept Fluttershy from falling nose-first into the dirt. “Woah there. I got you,” Rarity exclaimed. “Thank you,” Fluttershy murmured. “I don't know why but I feel so weak all of a sudden.” “Apologies Fluttershy. That was probably me,” Twilight offered. “The spell took a bit more force than anticipated so it seems as though we are a bit drained.” “Don't you worry Fluttershy. I’ll help you get home,” Rarity exclaimed. “Thank you Rarity,” Fluttershy whispered, blushing faintly. “Whelp. All’s well that ends well,” Rainbow Dash proclaimed. “I’m gonna hit the hay. Got practice tomorrow. See ya!” Without waiting for a reply, Rainbow Dash took off. “I should probably head inside and let the family know about the whole bat problem being solved,” Applejack stated, waving to the group. “You girls have a good night and thanks again for all your help.” “Yes, I suppose it's best if we retire for now. Though if you feel anything strange make sure to come by and let me know. There may be some side effects to your transformation,” Twilight offered. “I will,” Fluttershy agreed. “Whoowee, another episode in the books. Time to head home and eat a celebratory cupcake. Later girls!” Pinkie Pie proclaimed before bouncing away, humming a strange tune. “Hey uh, Rarity. Are you sure you don't need a hand?” Spike asked. “Nonsense. Fluttershy is as light as a feather. You enjoy a good night’s rest,” Rarity assured. Spike opened his mouth to say something back, only for his jaw to widen into a long yawn. “Maybe that's a good idea,” Spike murmured, smacking his lips. “Come on Spike. Lets go home and enjoy some hot cocoa,” Twilight encouraged. “Oh boy. My favorite,” Spike exclaimed. The duo trotted off in the direction of town, leaving Rarity and Fluttershy alone near the edge of the orchard. “Don't hesitate to lean on me now,” Rarity offered. “I won't. Thank you Rarity,” Fluttershy murmured. “It's no trouble at all,” Rarity proclaimed. The pair began to awkwardly shuffle towards Fluttershy’s distant cottage. The shy mare and recently untransformed pegasus struggled for the first few meters, leaning heavily on Rarity. After several minutes she was able to get her legs under her and walk with a bit more confidence. “Feeling a little better?” Rarity asked. “Uh huh,” Fluttershy replied. “I feel much stronger.” Fluttershy resisted the urge to mention the fact that not only did she feel back up to a hundred percent, but she felt even stronger than before. This didn't make much sense to the pony, so she just filed it away as a byproduct of the eventful night or all the magic that was cast. “That's good. That’s good,” Rarity exclaimed. “Say Fluttershy, I was thinking.” “Hmm?” Fluttershy prompted, glancing at Rarity out of the corner of her eye. “I really don't think it's wise for you to sleep at your place tonight,” Rarity answered, returning Fluttershy’s look. “You heard Twilight mentioning possible side effects. If you did have some kind of reaction to the magic it would be better if you were in town and had someone there just in case.” “Hmmm…” Fluttershy murmured. The pegasus wanted to disagree with her friend’s offer, both out of politeness and the fact that she didn't want to be a burden. However, she did feel… off, for lack of a better word. The strange whisper from earlier had unnerved her more than she would care to admit and her whole body felt warmer than usual. Fluttershy didn't want to impose, but there were enough alarm bells going off in her head that she couldn't help but agree with Rarity. “I think I will,” Fluttershy murmured. “This whole… thing has been really rather frightening.” “Exactly and don't think of it as a quarantine or something as dark as that,” Rarity declared confidently. “Think of it more like… an impromptu sleepover.” Fluttershy smiled faintly. “I’d like that,” Fluttershy remarked. “Excellent. Now than it looks like we are nearing your cottage,” Rarity pointed out, gesturing to the small bridge at the edge of Fluttershy’s property. “I hate to leave you alone darling, but I really must clean up the boutique if I am to host a guest. Do you mind if I left you alone to gather your things?” “That's fine,” Fluttershy replied. “I’ll just pack my toothbrush and be over in a jiffy.” “Excellent,” Rarity proclaimed. The fashionista leaned toward her friend and wrapped Fluttershy in a tight hug. The pegasus smiled faintly enjoying the closeness immensely. She also couldn't help but relish the pleasant aroma of expensive perfume that wafted off the other mare as well as the incredible softness of her fur. The pleasant sensation of Rarity’s body against Fluttershy’s own ignited a heat deep down in her core. The warmth felt strange though it disappeared the moment Rarity released her grasp on Fluttershy and took a step back. “Well then. Don't move too quickly. I do believe I have a small mountain of prototypes occupying the guest bedroom at the moment,” Rarity exclaimed with a small chuckle. “I have to feed my animals anyway,” Fluttershy replied. “Good good. See you soon darling,” Rarity offered. The mare then turned and began to trot away, heading in the direction of town. Though Fluttershy felt the tug to start making her way toward her cottage, a small, distant sound made her pause. Turning towards its source, she saw only Rarity, the other mare holding Fluttershy’s gaze for reasons beyond the pegasus’ understanding. It was in that moment that Fluttershy felt as though she was looking upon her friend for the very first time. She had never noticed it before, but Rarity truly was beautiful, with a perfectly manicured mane, and an immaculate coat. Not only that but her natural curves were enticing, drawing Fluttershy’s gaze from the tips of Rarity’s delicate hooves all the way up to her wide, child-bearing hips. It was that last observation, Rarity’s backside which enthralled Fluttershy utterly. The pegasus stood there, mouth slightly agape, staring at Rarity’s butt as it swayed from left to right. The fashionista knew how to walk with grace, and even now, with no one around to observe her, she continued to entice. It almost felt a bit like she was putting on a small dance, all for Fluttershy. Fluttershy shook her head forcefully, banishing the whispers that had been building the entire time she had been staring. The moment her focus was broken, the sound stopped, and the heat that had started to ignite in her belly cooled. Though she knew not why she was feeling these strange emotions, Fluttershy chalked it up to the day being a strange one and left it at that. “I really should get a shower or something,” Fluttershy muttered to herself. Moving with an almost robotic detachment, Fluttershy returned home once more. The pegasus noticed those critters who favored the night were emerging, but she paid them no mind. Her thoughts were elsewhere, leaving her to go through the motions of going inside, and starting the process of feeding her furry friends. Several salads were made, kibble was doled out into dozens of bowls, and feed was dropped into empty feeders. While she went about her work, her animal friends greeted her but found that their happy hellos went unresponded to. Fluttershy barely even seemed to notice their presence, her gaze empty and unfocused. Despite this, the animals were easily distracted, burying their collective faces in their food and forgetting all about their caretaker's woes. All save for a certain bunny, who was standing in the doorway, paws crossed over his chest. “Oh, hello Angel bunny,” Fluttershy muttered. “Could you please excuse me? I need to shower and pack for a sleepover at Rarity’s.” Angel squeaked in a dozen different tones before resuming his stance. “It's a long story, but trust me. I’m fine,” Fluttershy stressed. For a moment Fluttershy heard what sounded like distant laughing but it vanished quickly. Angel squeaked back an angry response before continuing to bar Fluttershy’s passage. “I promise tomorrow when I get home I’ll tell you everything,” Fluttershy stressed. “For now, I really need a shower, so can you please move?” For a moment it didn't seem as though Angel was going to move, then he sighed and hopped aside. “Thank you for your concern Angel,” Fluttershy whispered, stopping to rub the top of the bunny’s head. “And don't worry about me. I’m not hurt or anything just tired.” Angel’s irritation was brushed aside by some expert head rubs, the attention swiftly brushing aside any lingering annoyance he felt. With her most ornery and protective pet dealt with, Fluttershy continued on, heading upstairs. There she quickly gathered a small bag and set it on her bed. After that, she entered her small bathroom and turned the knobs on her shower. As she waited for the hot water to kick in, Fluttershy thought of her day, and the strange way it had ended. She recalled only faint memories of her time as a vampire pony, but more was coming back every time she thought about it. She recalled the sense of power and felt a strange want, a desire that even all the fruit she could eat could not satisfy. It was a dark and nameless thing that she couldn't quite explain or put into words. She continued to stare off into space until she saw movement out of the corner of her eye. With a yelp, she spun around to find that there was a pony staring back at her. Only it was one she knew, for it was herself being reflected in the increasingly foggy mirror. “Silly me,” Fluttershy chided herself. Brushing aside the strangeness of it all, Fluttershy tested the water before stepping into the shower. Several minutes later she would emerge, refreshed, and clean once more. No strange thoughts or weird whispers bothered her during this time, nor did plague her as she left the cottage with her bags slung across her back. Even the trip to Rarity’s was oddly normal, if a bit spooky due to the fact that it was becoming quite dark. The quiet was nice though, and Fluttershy felt oddly at home in the shadows. It was enough to make Fluttershy think to herself that the noises and odd occurrences had indeed just been caused by stress. “Just an exhausting day, is all,” Fluttershy told herself. Trotting over to the entrance of Rarity’s boutique, Fluttershy paused at the door, hoof raised. An odd trepidation came over her but was brushed aside. She knocked twice before stepping back, waiting patiently in the gloomy street. “Coming!” came the familiar sing-songy voice of Rarity from somewhere inside. Several moments later, the faint tip tap of distant hooves could be heard approaching the door. Fluttershy was a bit surprised that she could hear that well but chalked it up to how quiet the world seemed at the moment. No sooner had she dismissed that odd sensation than the door had been thrust open, and Rarity appeared before her. “Ahh, there you are darling. I was beginning to worry,” Rarity declared. “I’m not interrupting something, am I?” Fluttershy asked, glancing up at Rarity’s curler-filled mane. “Nonsense. Just my usual pre-nighttime routine is all,” Rarity declared, waving a hoof at her mane. “Though I must warn you, darling, my parents as well as Sweetie Belle are also over tonight.” “Oh,” Fluttershy muttered. “Don't you worry though,” Rarity hastily added, stepping closer and taking Fluttershy by the hoof. “They won't be staying for long. They are just doing laundry over here since they seem to be having some issues at home. The guest bed is still all yours, I assure you.” “That’s good,” Fluttershy exclaimed. “Though I must prematurely apologize,” Rarity added, lowering her voice slightly. “Mother and father have just returned from prance and they brought back more than a few bottles of grape juice if you catch my meaning.” “Ahhh,” Fluttershy murmured. “Exactly. Now I don't expect any issues but just know that my father has a habit of speaking his mind after dipping into a nice merlot. Nothing cruel mind you, he just lacks a filter,” Rarity declared. “That's fine,” Fluttershy replied. “Excellent,” Rarity proclaimed, stepping back inside and extending a hoof. “Please, make yourself at home. We have some crackers and cheese if you’re feeling peckish, wine if you want some help relaxing and there are some leftover sandwiches in the fridge if you’re feeling too hungry for cheese.” “Thank you. I think some crackers would be nice right about now,” Fluttershy muttered while entering the boutique. Rarity closed and locked the door behind them before quickly rejoining Fluttershy. No sooner had the pair gotten a half dozen feet before a slightly frazzled Cookie Crumbles appeared. “Just forgot the special detergent. You know your father hates it when I wash his jock straps with anything but the scent-free stuff,” Cookie Crumbles declared, only to stop. “Oh Fluttershy, I heard all about your little mishap today. I’m terribly sorry that all happened to you. How are you feeling?” “Oh uh, I’m good, just-” “Wonderful,” Cookie Crumbles declared, pulling Fluttershy into a short, but bone-crushing hug. “I always told Rarity that you were stronger than they gave you credit for. Now I really must be going but we’ll catch up very soon dear.” Then she was gone, walking past the pair and heading right out the door. “Sometimes I wonder if she’ll ever slow down,” Rarity muttered. “Or stop embarrassing me.” Fluttershy smiled faintly. “Parents, what can you do,” the pegasus mused aloud. Rarity began to move once more, heading for the kitchen. “Very true. Now then, I must leave you in Sweetie Belle and my father’s company while I finish my skincare routine it is a very delicate procedure that cannot be interrupted,” Rarity declared before walking away. Fluttershy blinked and looked around, only now realizing that she had been left along with the two aforementioned ponies. The eighteen-year-old Sweetie Belle sat at the end of the table; several large textbooks splayed out before her. Only a few short feet away was Hondo Flanks, who had a wine glass in one forehoof, and half a wheel of cheese in the other. “And I says to him, that's not a baguette, that's my wife!” Hondo proclaimed, the male erupting with laughter. Sweetie Belle sighed. “Yes, very funny Dad,” she muttered dryly, glancing up from her schoolwork. “And hey Fluttershy. Sorry to hear you got turned into a vampire pony. Cool ears though.” “Cool what?” Fluttershy murmured. The pegasus reached up and touched the tips of her ears, noting that they were fluffier than normal. “Hey, would you look at that. She even has the teeth too, but they are way too small for a vampire!” Hondo Flanks declared. Fluttershy turned around and stared into the mirror like sheen of the refrigerator, using the reflective surface to inspect herself. Opening her mouth, Fluttershy noticed that her canines were indeed longer than normal, but not by a lot. They just barely poked out from her lips though if she focused she could hide them relatively easily. “Why didn't the girls point this out?” Fluttershy whispered to herself. “Unless it only happened after…” “Anyway. That wasn't even the funniest thing to happen because just a few hours later your mother and I started this wine tour with a bunch of other couples and-” Hondo Flanks continued. “That's it. I’m going to study in my room. I can't take any more rambling stories,” Sweetie Belle declared. “Aww come on, you used to love my stories!” Hondo declared, raising his hoof and nearly spilling his drink. “Yeah, when I was a kid. I’m trying to study for my first test of university. I can't spend all evening listening to whatever thought enters your head,” Sweetie Belle retorted. The young mare gathered her books and trotted away. Hondo Flanks sighed and watched his daughter go. “They grow up so fast,” he muttered absently. “Say, Fluttershy. You got any kids of your own? I think you’d make a great mom.” “Err no,” Fluttershy muttered. “I know that may seem random but you just… have that aura about yourself, ya know?” Hondo exclaimed. “I guess,” Fluttershy murmured. The stallion paused, and tipped back the rest of his drink, swallowing it in a single large gulp. He then began refilling it but paused halfway. “Ya want some? It's pretty good. A bit of a higher percent than most stuff you’ll find around here but it's got some real strong floral notes to cover that up,” Hondo offered. “That's fine,” Fluttershy replied. Hondo shrugged. “More for me,” he declared. “Excuse me for a second,” Fluttershy muttered. Hondo waved a dismissive hoof at the mare. Taking that as her chance to leave, Fluttershy slipped deeper into the boutique, her bags secured on her back. The first thing stop she made was at the guest room, where she deposited her things, after which she headed to the closest bathroom. There she immediately gravitated to the mirror in order to confirm the changes she had noticed in the kitchen were indeed there. Sure enough, her ears remained oddly fluffy, and she had some rather prominent, fang-like canines. Running a hoof over her pearly whites, Fluttershy tried to think back to when the changes could have occurred. She remembered cleaning up in the shower, and she recalled glancing into her reflection much like she was at that very moment. The mare gasped suddenly, only now realizing that she had noticed the changes before only she hadn't made note of them at the time. For some reason, they had seemed so real, so natural that her brain skimmed over these minor alterations without a second thought. When realization had started to settle in, she had noticed something in her reflection and had gotten distracted. Glancing at the spot where she had seen the dark shape last time, Fluttershy was surprised to find that it was still there. This time it didn't flee from her gaze, the black mass seemingly staring back at her from its spot in the corner. Fluttershy turned her head to check and sure enough, the shadowy entity wasn't there, though it remained in the mirror. Panic and horror urged her to run but some other instinct held her in place. Staring intently at the creature, Fluttershy noticed that a hoof-like appendage had sprouted from it. The appendage then turned and pointed back to the spot between its legs where its privates presumably would be. Following the motion of the creature, Fluttershy noticed that there was a strangely sensitive bulge there. It felt almost like… She peered under her barrel to where a small, semi-flaccid cock rested beneath her barrel, the tip of which had just barely poked from its sheathe. Her balls, which rested just behind, were also fairly small, and though not tiny, were just barely below average. The sight caused a wave of revulsion to rise in the mare’s chest, but that unpleasant sensation was mixed with a strange desire. Reaching further still, Fluttershy searched for her pussy, confused as to whether she could even still call herself a mare. Thankfully her hoof was able to locate the puffy lips of her cunt, dismissing her concerns for her gender, and letting her focus on the meat of the matter. Not only were the newly acquired male parts a shocking sight but looking down Fluttershy got the impression that they should be bigger. Her teats were above average, and nearly so large that that they obscured the sight of her shaft, but her stallion parts were far from impressive. Fluttershy suddenly thought to herself that would change, and soon thought that thought felt foreign, as if it had been thrust upon her. “What's happening to me?” Fluttershy murmured, only to pause. “And why does it feel so good?” As she grappled with the odd thoughts floating through her mind, Fluttershy heard the door to the guest bedroom open. Heavy stumbling hoof steps heralded the arrival of what was most likely Hondo Flanks. Fluttershy’s assumption was proved true when she heard a male belch only a few feet from the door. “Hey, where’d ya go? I thought we were talking about wine,” he exclaimed, words starting to slur together. Fluttershy cringed and for a moment considered climbing out the window just to avoid this awkward situation. Then she caught sight of the thing in the mirror, and for the first time, the whispers became loud enough that she could make out what was being said. “Put him in his place,” declared the stranger. Fluttershy didn't know why, but that command seemed to activate something that originated from deep in her core. Like a wild animal awakened early from its slumber, Fluttershy felt her veins ignite and her lips pulled back into a snarl. All at once the pity she felt for the male and the awkwardness sparked by his poor attempts at socializing were gone. Now there was only a wild, almost blood lust-like sensation that drove her to all but charge through the door into the next room. Hondo Flanks blinked and stopped dead in his tracks. “Uh sorry. Probably shoulda knocked first,” he muttered. Fluttershy said nothing, and strode forward, her cock unfurling from its sheathe beneath her barrel. “Oh, uh wow, you sure are hot and bothered,” Hondo muttered. “I suppose I could have a little fun. The wife says it's okay, but I think Rarity will tan my hide if she catches us.” Fluttershy snorted, walking around the male, her eyes going up and down his body as if he were little more than a piece of meat. “Now I ain't usually the type to fuck around with ponies with penises but you’re a real nice-looking lady,” Hondo Flanks continued, setting down his half-drunk glass of wine. “I’m not rightly sure what you want but if we move to the bed we-” Fluttershy interrupted him by suddenly leaping onto his back and mounting him in a single swift movement. “Damn that felt almost kinda nice,” Hondo muttered. “You also smell kinda good? Does that make me gay?” Once again Fluttershy remained silent. Her hoof went to the back of his neck, forcing his front half down and his back end higher. While she maneuvered him into position, Fluttershy also shifted her own hooves so that she had a better angle. Cock aimed for Hondo’s hole, Fluttershy took a moment to wonder how she was going to help get things going. As if in response, her cock spurted a small jet of watery jizz that nearly had the consistency of water-based lubricant. “That part always feels kinda nice. Don't tell the wife I said that. She already breaks out the strap-on at every opportunity,” Hondo remarked, the male continuing to talk even though Fluttershy had yet to respond. The Pegasus, using dexterity that few other pony tribes could muster, shifted her hips, smearing the water pre all over the male’s asshole. She could feel her partner shudder, though for once he didn't make a sound, either stunned to silence or enjoying himself too much to speak. Either way, Fluttershy was free to continue, and thrust forward, burying the entirety of her cock into the other pony’s backside. “Oh shit,” Hondo murmured. Fluttershy grinned, her fangs glinting in the low light spilling into the space from the crack in the bathroom door. It was barely enough to see for most, but despite this Fluttershy felt perfectly at home in the gloom. Not only that but she felt empowered here, as if the dark lent its strength to her in some strange fashion. Snarling, Fluttershy began to rock her hips back and forth, enjoying the pleasant sensation of her partner’s pliant hole. The male didn't seem to be enjoying himself very much at first but soon Fluttershy could smell his need. Not only could detect his precum as it dribbled onto the floor, but she could also pick up a faint floral aroma that she couldn't place. She brushed aside such thoughts and focused entirely on her partner, her forehoof pushing him down hard. He bent until his cheek smooshed the floor and his entire body was bent in prostration, as if kneeling at the altar that was Fluttershy. This thought enticed the usually shy pony, making her stand even taller, a feeling of power filling her veins. Her hips moved faster; her thrusts being punctuated by a hard-wet slap. Occasionally when their hips met Fluttershy could feel her cock spurt again, further lubricating the passage. Soon it wasn't needed, as the male had been made to stretch around her length, his body being bent to her desires. That wouldn't be the end of the changes, however, for as the seconds turned to minutes she started to feel his needs. She could taste the burgeoning orgasm building in his belly, she could sense that although he was unused to such treatment, he was not opposed. Fluttershy also knew that it wouldn't be long before she finished as well, her new cock being surprisingly sensitive. Growling all the while, Fluttershy thrust harder and faster until her hips were a blur and the dull thwap of flesh meeting flesh was constant. Here, hanging at the very precipice of orgasm, Fluttershy was awash in new sensations. She could feel Hondo’s body as if it were an extension of her own, his thoughts were open to her, and he wanted more. Determined to take what was hers, Fluttershy pushed herself forward one final time before erupting deep inside her partner. Timed perfectly, he began to cum at the same time, his cock twitching and spurting seed on the floor. As their orgasms piqued, Fluttershy felt the sudden urge to glance down at her partner, and so she did just that. The moment her gaze fell upon the male, Fluttershy realized why she had felt such a sudden need. For his body had begun to grow smooth, his fur receding as his snout elongated. The foreleg that he had rested against his barrel melded into his torso, the rest of his limbs soon following suit. His facial features began to smooth over as well while staring at his back end, a new color grew to cover his own. The soft yellow and mottled pink of Fluttershy’s cock extended up his rippling form. When it reached his barrel a rib not unlike a medial ring formed, veins bulging along his skin. Fluttershy couldn't feel her cock, though she soon realized why this had occurred when the changes reached Hondo’s lips. His head deformed, turning into the wide flat tip of a horse cock large enough to satisfy a dragon. For a moment only his lips remained, a jet of thick cum spurting out from between them, and then they were gone. The pleasure was immense, and Fluttershy egged it on by frantically rubbing her forehooves over her newly massive appendage. Her balls, freshly filled and now extra-large, continued to pump jizz up to the tip, coating the floor in her cum. Her orgasm, though lengthy, did not last forever and as it slowly petered out, her dick began to shrink back to a more comfortable size. Down and down it went until just when the pleasure ended, it had returned to what it once was. Only that wasn't quite right, as Fluttershy could feel it was heavier, as were her seemingly bottomless testicles. A brief fondle determined that she had gained about three inches, and her balls had grown to become fairly hefty. For a moment Fluttershy felt a stab of guilt, but it was assuaged by a wave of pleasure radiating up from her crotch. Whatever was left of Hondo felt amazing, and a pleasant sensation coursed through her, banishing any bad feelings she may have had. Standing there in the dark room, Fluttershy felt the animalistic sensation begin to dissipate and her mind slowly return. Then the door creaked open, and all at once Fluttershy felt a completely dominating desire to continue feeding her lust. The sensation was powerful, so powerful that she immediately fell prey to it, repeating in her head what the voice whispered in her ear. More, more, more!
Purpleflower_editz2011
550789
1
Twilight Sparkle,Adventure,Drama,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
The Elements of unity
This a story about a big group of friends one day finding new elements growing onto the tree and has a villian connected
complete
-1
-1
<p>This a story about a big group of friends who keep equestria at peace even though there are other groups helping the creatures and ponies keep their peace even when Venus returns years after night mare moon's defeat.</p>
everyone
2024-02-11T21:37:50+00:00
2024-02-13T20:35:34+00:00
128
A couple of moons ago in ancient equestria a few decades after princess twilight one of the protector of equestria was coronated. An unusual mare who was related to twilight was sent to a place her classmate was staying . She used to study at the school of magic with some of her other friends. KNOCK!! KNOCK!!!! " Purpleflower you need to get ready because comet is meeting you at the station!!" Says flurryheart . Purpleflower responds stressfuly" I know but why can't mum just tell me uhhh" Flurryheart breaks in and shouts " she is busy and you know Esther is meeting you in Ponyvillie aswell!!!" Purpleflower stares and flurryheart breathes in calmly. A few minutes later go by and the mare steps onto a train and watches her family without hugging because they know when she will return. One of her friends shows up and stands next to a mare next to a tall strong stallion and smiles. The pink mare reads a book with pictures of important things with adventures. The quietly says " I will miss you astro and rainbow." The mare stares at the window as the train goes faster and faster like rainbow dash showing off. The mare thinks " who will I meet?.. I hope they are nice." The train stops Infront a blue mare with a moon like cloak and smiles. the pink mare smiles and tries to rush through creatures in excitement. The mare gets off and squeaks " I MISSED YOU SO MUCH!!!!" Says the pink mare. The blue mare replys " I missed you too ." *Hugs* The blue mare talks loudly " I have some news for you!!" Purpleflower interrupts " OMG OMG what is it!!!" Comet replys " luster might be with us !!' and the two mares scream in excitement while a few ponies and creatures stare. The mares stare and go red and run. A dark pink mare walks in a annoyed manner. The mare looks and notices a cookie coloured mare showing tricks with their sibling or friend called cheese. The mare quietly " oh brownie ." Then the mare walks again without looking at brownie because she has a weird feeling. A blue and pink mare squeaks together like mice at fluttetshy's cottage. The light blue and pink blue mare noticed someone awfully familiar and they began to scream " LUSTER!!!" Luster looks like she has been through enough. Purpleflower says " hiiii luster it's been a while since you moved from canterlot." Luster replys " I guess it has I presumed princess twilight sent you here too but from the crystal empire." Purpleflower replys " yep and this is comet she was moved aswell because of her grandma Luna." Comet replys joyfully " oh dove you don't need to mention my grandma." Luster stares and says "we should probably head to my castle since look at those bags your carrying ." The three mares walk as brownie in the background causes a bit of chaos with her tricks. A fancy mare walks by with her crystal like maine with a griffin with some pirate like clothes. As the mares get closer to the castle the school of friendship shines like the friendship and peace in equestria. The mares walk up the stairs and then luster freezes and says " here we are and I will quickly show you your room." The two mares smile and then they walk inside after luster opened the door with her amber magic. The mares walk through hallways smaller than the crystal castle's hallways. Luster walks the mares to the door and says " here's you two's room and p-please meet me at the school of friendship later because I have someone for you two to meet ." The mares nodd and walks into a room that hasn't been touched for a few moons. Luster quickly says " also one more thing , please make yourselves at home." Then she runs off nervously. The two mares stared for a few seconds and started to unpack. Comet asks something curiously "wasn't this your aunt's room or your dad's?" Purpleflower replys " I'm not sure moth but at least we sleep in the same bed, I hope our axinety doesn't ruin our time together." Comet has a insecure smile. After the mares unpacked their things and Started to leave the room and put their cloaks on and they go visit cheese, pinkie , brownie and sugar before they head to the school of friendship. The mares walked up to sugar cube corner and their seems to be something unexpected. Comet stares then whispered " isn't that your sister Skylar who is you know with pound cake and starting a family." Purpleflower shakes and goes a bit red and replys " yes and I thought they were living in canterlot or the spare house." Comet has a thought " I think they are visiting family , I don't know." Comet replys " they are probably visiting." Purpleflower reply nervously" I guess..." Sugar looks and smiles and screeches "omg it can be!!" Esther maturely smiles even though she did something to sugar. Purpleflower looks again and finally notices her cousin and a friend. She smiles back to Esther and sugar. Comet runs up to Skylar" hi Skylar how has life been and have you seen my grandma?" Skylar looks and replys" uhhhh I don't think so." Comet shoves purpleflower and purpleflower freezes with thoughts over her childhood on how Skylar treated herself and flurryheart. Purpleflower sniggers randomly over her past. Skylar looks confused and says " aren't you two supposed to see luster dawn at the school of friendship?" Comet and purpleflower stare and purpleflower shouts " oh sweet twilight I almost forgot ... Skylar your a life saver." The two mares rush out of sugar cube Corner to the school of friendship. The mares rush across the river as they go past creatures even Trixie the councillor noticing something while talking to a creature about their problems. The mares slow down and enter the library into a spot that purpleflower used to claim with comet 7 moons ago. Luster sits next to someone familiar. To be continued on The elements of unity.
Purpleflower_editz2011
550789
2
Twilight Sparkle,Adventure,Drama,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
The Elements of unity
This a story about a big group of friends one day finding new elements growing onto the tree and has a villian connected
complete
-1
-1
<p>This a story about a big group of friends who keep equestria at peace even though there are other groups helping the creatures and ponies keep their peace even when Venus returns years after night mare moon's defeat.</p>
everyone
2024-02-11T22:44:30+00:00
2024-02-14T21:36:02+00:00
178
Purpleflower sat right next to a changling ( purpleflower is a changling too),who was a light green and had a light green sparkling maine. The changling sat between luster and purpleflower. Comet was at the end of the circular table. Luster explains " you two know why you guys are here right?" "You two have came to see larva , you remember her right purpleflower?" Purpleflower replys nervously " of course I do and please you don't need to speak formal like my sister." Comet smiles along with comet who was also familiar for a while with larva. Luster replys to purpleflower " do you because I was i-in a bit of a rush to see Esther and larva." Purpleflower stares and remembers about how many times Esther backstabbed her and comet. Purpleflower stares at the light sea mare with worries like if she would faint. Luster continues" you guys actually came here to meet up with our old friends and possibly we could try go to that world of yours purpleflower, you know bloom world?" Purpleflower nodds " yea I remember." Purple replys firmly. Larva asks a question even though she is as old as Skylar ( Skylar is 28). Larva says formerly " so where are we meeting our friends since they could be living anywhere." Luster says " at the train station." Comet , purpleflower and larva look annoyed because they were all just there. Luster stares, luster has a thought about how she messed up. A few minutes after luster messed up the 4 friends go off to join another group of friends at the station waiting. The wind blows among the familiar faces from 7 moons ago. Unexpectedly a mare with a unusual coloured foal was there smiling as if she was mischievous. Another few minutes go by and a train with a big cart came with a big blue dragon who didn't look like they came from equestria. Then a red and grey bat pony came with a unusual pony with horns near her ears with circle glasses like Esther used to wear. After the creatures came off everyone smiled as purpleflower started squeaking " sueie!" The creatures stared confused. The two pony like creatures smiled. Purpleflower quickly hugs her old friends then comet joins in with luster. Skylar looks with her daughter crystal and shouts " hi Sueie!!! It has been 14 moons since I last saw you ." Sueie smiles with their huge blue body ( they weren't that big but in bloom world they are bigger). The group moved away from the station few minutes later and there were alot of friends trying to think on what to do next. Skylar asks luster ( she hosted it lol). " So luster where are we going since we have alot of creatures here?" Luster replys " well I was thinking we could visit the castle of the two sisters or the tree of harmony." Skylar replys with her foal , citrine nibbling her ears even though she is a 7 year old foal. " Ok well didn't you forget the castle of the two sisters is a bit to dangerous for a friend meet up?" Luster stares ashamed then replys " oh I didn't remember that I've just been busy studying still ." The group looks unstandlingly. The group start heading to the everfree forest with nostalgia back from 20 moons ago back when Skylar was possibly a teen and Sueie was still older but younger at the same time. A mare called Esther ( purpleflower's cousin). Wasn't at the group at the time because of how much she blames purpleflower for being mean even though she actually backstabbed and did bad things to sugar and comet and a few others back when they were in school years. Esther was near the castle of the two sisters just chilling like all those other sassy mares like her who be mean and selfish like chrysalis. The castle of the two sisters was broken and aroading away very quickly over its ruins. Later on the group head to the tree of harmony instead of the castle of the two sisters due to safety reasons as Skylar said earlier. A young adventurous mare called shady walked down the stares smiling and looking at the tree while everyone else are behind without bothering to fly. When the group came down all the way down the stairs that was along as a giraffe's neck. They all looked at the shimmering tree and decided to chill lax on the the rocky crystaly floor. Diamonds and crystals shined in the sunlight like how celestia raised the sun which is now twilight. As the hours flew by the group shrank as they had to return home. Purpleflower made a portal for Sueie to return home in hopes purpleflower will visit the realm she made even though back in the crystal empire a ship was being built. As the group shrunk on the way back to the castle brownie smiled even though Esther was still around spreading her lies. [Spoilers opaline does that ] Once comet , luster and purpleflower return back to the castle they eat some snacks before going to bed. Once the trio went to sleep purpleflower has a dream about a memory of her alternate self visit her as she crys over her problems. In purpleflower's room a purple gem shines like a night light even though it ment something. Comet wakes up randomly during the night having some thoughts running through her head not having a room but at least she is happy that her future gender fluid wife will marry her. Back in the crystal empire flurryheart was still planning for her coronation which will happen in 4 moons time. At a very early time her mother with a fancy beautiful Maine still worries about Shining. Their son ( no confirmed name yet) was studying and still thinking he was to young to be a face of equestria even though Celestia's children were representatives for twilight like her own children. It was actually the same for most of the royal family even though there were many relatives who aren't alicorns like river atlas and her cousin who is a bat pony.
Purpleflower_editz2011
550789
3
Twilight Sparkle,Adventure,Drama,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
The Elements of unity
This a story about a big group of friends one day finding new elements growing onto the tree and has a villian connected
complete
-1
-1
<p>This a story about a big group of friends who keep equestria at peace even though there are other groups helping the creatures and ponies keep their peace even when Venus returns years after night mare moon's defeat.</p>
everyone
2024-02-14T21:31:23+00:00
2024-02-14T23:12:20+00:00
60
Sunlight rose into the room of the couple sleeping with their Maine messy like if it was a bush from the everfree forest. The mares were sweating even though it was between winter and Spring. The mares get ready for their breakfast like usual now as it has been nearly 4 months since purpleflower and comet moved in like Esther did aswell weeks before. While the mares were getting ready. Luster was preparing pancakes for comet and purpleflower and some for later because shady and sapphire was going to visit and possibly pinkie pies twins. It was only a couple of years since disharmony happened from when a strange unicorn came and ruined the relationship with ponies like Chrysalis once did but it wasn't her because she is in stone. The two mares raced down the stairs with their squicks. Even though they almost forgot magic can stop working any time since their aunt Twilight made some crystals known as the unity crystals. Once the mares came down the stairs the dining room had a big table for guests. The mares sat down and began eating their breakfast. The pancakes had syrups and strangely ice-cream and some oats with grass. There were also waffles that purpleflower brought from canterlot with her aunt a few days ago. While purpleflower was eating a scroll appeared. Purpleflower looked annoyed but looked serious about what it could be about. Purpleflower tries to talk to luster and comet. " Guys I've just got sent a important scroll but it possibly ain't for me.." luster and comet stops eating and looked worried . Luster says " it's probably very important I don't know why someone would send a letter at this time of day. Maybe your aunt?" Purpleflower answers " true but it she doesn't send me thousands of letters anymore since I was sent to Ponyvillie." Purpleflower starts to unscroll the important message. Purpleflower reads and screaks " I have to go to the crystal empire at once apparently the pony that broke in has came back again. The unicorn from when I was twelve!!" Comet releases that she has to go too and suffs all her food in her mouth. Luster understood by nodding and the mares left the castle with their big phoenixlike wings. The mares arrive at the crystal castle straight to the meeting room where most of the family was concerned once again. Cadence worriedly with stress says " crime rates already came up in the past 5 years !!" Shining calmly says " calm down Cady please calm down." Flurryheart stares at worriedly. Hitch stares at his mum Celestia just trying to help because of how experienced she is . The two mares stare worriedly as they still couldn't figure out what that type of sabotage all except the obvious. Shining mentions about their dog kinda managing to catch the unicorn who looked alot like sombra.( Not reformed sombra). Many voices of worries kept on filling the room. Twilight sat down at the head of the table quietly figuring things out while drama floods the castle. Flurryheart wanted to try step up her game but it didn't seem to work as she tried suggesting things but it was to silent over the loud sounds. Twilight finally shouts after minutes of drama and worries. " GUYS CALM DOWN!!!..I know how to stop this we just need discord." Every stops even though comet and purpleflower have just arrived. Galaxy and moondusk sat together near flurryheart and Skylar. Every pony stared and questioningly " Discord?" Skylar asks " how can discord help us when we all know the oblivious reason of why this unicorn is trying to maybe follow sombras footsteps." Twilight replys " discord knows alot and can be trusted at times." Cadence says to twilight " didn't discord like turn canterlot into like a sweet realm or something a couple months back." Twilight answers cadence " well yea but he seems to be out of trouble currently." Cadence seriously " fair enough I guess " cadence shrugs. Purpleflower asks twilight a question" why are we here even discussing this I'm sure the guards and dad could figure this out?"Cadence replys " well the sad thing is that he guards kinda been having problems and we have been low on guards." Purpleflower stares in shock. Purpleflower replys to cadence " so that means the unicorn is a threat like 5 years ago ." Cadence nodded. Most of the room filled with silence like a library. Twilight talks again " well I will try my best to help and we should try our best to look for whoever this unicorn is." Every pony nodds and leave the room. Hours later discord showed up in a unusual place like always... Back in Ponyvillie hours after the meeting. Purpleflower thinks about what will happen in the future like back when she was younger. Meanwhile in canterlot... A dark grey mare appeared with a earth pony. Moonlove layed in bed not feeling ok anymore. Esther in Ponyvillie tries to study about the tree of harmony knowing about some dark magic near. The day started to change as twilight rises the moon about the hemisphere of equestria with the sky shining bright because of galaxy and moondusk. Comet started to sleep on the Sofa while purpleflower slept in the bedroom still where the crystal flower shined near her other crystals. Some spirits and memories began to show in purpleflower's head. The spirits looked like stars. The stars in equestria was considered many things. Like angles or spirits in general. A old friend of purpleflower in her mind saw a figure who was familiar even though she wasn't at the meeting because of Esther accusing again which was 2 weeks before. The mare was named Astro she is related to celestia and Luna. She went to the school of magic because she was also a alicorn who used to be kept out of the public for a few years like a alternate universe.
Purpleflower_editz2011
550789
4
Twilight Sparkle,Adventure,Drama,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
The Elements of unity
This a story about a big group of friends one day finding new elements growing onto the tree and has a villian connected
complete
-1
-1
<p>This a story about a big group of friends who keep equestria at peace even though there are other groups helping the creatures and ponies keep their peace even when Venus returns years after night mare moon's defeat.</p>
everyone
2024-02-15T21:15:28+00:00
2024-02-15T21:15:28+00:00
54
Star Shimmering
550792
1
Main 6,Original Character,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Alternate Universe,Anthro,Crossover,Human,Dark,Romance,Science Fiction,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Violence
The Eternal Shield: The Slayer’s Awakening
It's been eons since the Doom Slayer had been in deep slumber. Now freed, he must readjust to the present while also having to deal with the anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply.
hiatus
86
4
<p>After winning victoriously against the Dark Lord Davoth, the Doom Slayer returned to his sarcophagus and slumbered. Waiting for the day when a new evil arises with another reckoning, and the universe calling for his help once again.</p><p>At-least to the Slayer that’s how it should’ve gone down.</p><p>Now awakened, the Slayer must adjust to the present world, deal with a race of anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply, accept his position in this new world, and find a new purpose within it.</p><hr/><p>Click —&gt; <a href="https://youtu.be/7dQ771ybWpc" rel="nofollow"><span style="font-style:italic;color:#BE4343">Main theme: Intro</span></a></p><p>An MLP:FiM/Doom: Eternal Crossover</p><p>Cover Art by - <a href="https://www.deviantart.com/jetxpegasus" rel="nofollow">JetXPegasus</a></p><p>Author’s note: This story takes place in season 5 of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic</p><hr/><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: October 5th - 2021</span></p></blockquote><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: February 3 - 2024</span></p></blockquote><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: February 6 - 2024</span></p></blockquote>
mature
2024-02-03T12:52:32+00:00
2024-02-04T06:12:43+00:00
854
In a dimension before earth came to existence there were the Maykrs. The first deity of the Maykrs, the Father, built the Gate of Divum many eons ago. Its purpose? To access the hidden city of Immora deep in the heart of a realm known by many names: the pit, the dark abyss, the Netherworld, and many other countless titles. . . but there was one name that all sentient creatures know it by, a name that have been given by the Dark Lord himself: Hell. Twenty-five years ago in earth's time, Hell found its way to open a portal to earth. From the mouth of the black void legions, and legions of Hell's most vilest creations, and dwellers of the dark realm marched out. They were rage, brutal from the strike of their very claws, and feared so much even a child had nightmares of their bright venomous yellow eyes: The Demons. They shed blood and mercilessly brutalized any living thing on their sights. The horde of the demons overwhelmed the very best and most advanced machinery and weapons technology that mankind could muster against the opposition. No matter what they threw or plotted against them It was utterly useless, they moved and were too quicker then them, caring for themselves they did not, for only they sought out the blood of humanity. They were willing to sacrifice their own to get to the heart of their world. They slaughtered thousands and millions more followed. Until… He came. In the first battle, when the shadows first lengthened, and all thought hope was lost, one man stood. Burned by the embers of Armageddon, his soul blistered by the fires of Hell and tainted beyond ascension, he chose the path of perpetual torment. In his ravenous hatred he found no peace; and with boiling blood he scoured the Umbral Plains seeking vengeance against the dark lords who had wronged him. He wore the crown of the Night Sentinels, and his reckoning was uncounted. The scribes carved his name deep in the tablets of Hell across eons, and each battle etched terror in the hearts of the demons. At the time they didn't know who he was nor were they prepared for his arrival, striding forth to feast on the blood of the wicked. For he alone could draw strength from his fallen foes, and though he was mortal, his strength grew, swift and unrelenting. For as he gains in strength so do they fall in numbers. His steel barreled sword of vengeance cut through layer after layer of the legions like a sickle through a field - his fury surpassing their own. Though Hell's forces were fast, He was faster - more relentless. None could stand before the horde but him. Like a plague, despair spread before him, striking fear into the shadow-dwellers, driving them to deeper and darker pits. But no matter where they hid he would always find a way to break through the rabbit hole. When the Striding Outlander marched forth in the dark realm a new challenger from the depths of the abyss rose, The Great One, a champion mightier than all who had come before. The Titan, of ferocity and immeasurable power. He strode upon the plain and faced the unyielding warrior, and a mighty battle was fought on the desolate plains. The Titan fought with the fury of the countless that had fallen at his hand, but when the demons thought for a moment victory was theirs - there fell the Titan, and in his defeat the shadow horde were left in utter disbelief. On that day came the birth of a title: all those that tasted the bite of his sword, ripped and teared apart at his hands, those who realized he was far worse than them, those that stood and watched as he stood victorious over the Titan's corpse roaring an in-human battle cry named him... The Doom Slayer. The Doom Slayer and Davoth clashed one another, causing the multiverse to tremble as the immense power of the Primevals was unleashed, sweeping across time and space with devastating force. The strength of their opposing wills propelled them through dimensions, spanning the past, present, and future. Blow after blow, exchanging blood for blood, their battle gradually revealed the truth of the Ultimate Betrayal. It became evident that the Dark Lord was the True Creator, and the Father was nothing more than a usurper. However, despite the circumstances, the armored warrior remained completely composed. The intense battle continued without any signs of abating, and the ultimate clash between two equally powerful forces unfolded. Nevertheless, the time for the decisive outcome of the entire existence drew near. One power triumphed over the other, and as the tremors of war subsided and the flames of disorder were extinguished, he stood at the pinnacle, possessing unrivaled might, unyielding, and invulnerable. Upon the Ingmore Sanctum of the once revered Jekkad, the two adversaries stood facing each other, the atmosphere tranquil, the battle concluded. The life force, the very essence of Creation itself, flowed from the Dark Lord in an unprecedented manner as he wearily lowered himself to one knee, his body battered and exhausted, his armor in disarray. His ancient hand tightly grasped his sword of universal annihilation, yet there was an undeniable sense of acceptance in his demeanor. Opposite the Dark Lord, the Destroyer stood, his fists clenched but his composure unbroken, a tempestuous storm of vengeance brewing in his eyes as he glared hatefully at the source of his suffering. The mightiest being, the one who had defied death and ascended from the dust to the cosmos, the Doom Slayer peered through the frigid visor of his impenetrable armor, known as the Praetor Suit, with a serene and righteous fury, the countless ages of torment he had endured flashing through his mind in an instant. Everything he had lost, everything he had done to get to this point, every last demon he had torn to veritable shreds with his bare hands, every last god he had turned to pools of blood by his will, everything he had sacrificed...everything that he had loved. It all came down to this. This was it, Doom Slayer thought, all or never. Slowly, gradually, his gauntlet hands reached for his helmet, gripping the sides of his headgear, and giving it a twist. A slight hiss blew to the side as the pressure seal was broken, and extricated his helmet from his protective covering. For the first time in eons, he flashed his scarred visage to another physical being. One that he despised deeply. He dropped the accessory by the soles of his boots. With his helmet falling to the side, the Doom Slayer was asleep. Now stood the very man who hailed the legendary title behind the head gear: Flynn Taggart. Flynn's eyes narrowed dangerously and stalked forward. The Dark Lord breathed heavily, his will to keep fighting siphoned away from the overwhelming strength of his opponent. He raised his weapon, but quickly realized it was deadweight, useless in his hand for what was slowly approaching; for what was inevitable. "Tell me," he spoke, blood eyes glaring deep into his adversary's. He tossed his mighty sword to the side. "Have you nothing to say to your creator... before you strike him down?" Flynn glared back, a scowl forming to his scarred face, lips warped by hatred. He bared his teeth one last time, the arm-blade extending with a harsh screech. The Hell-Walker shot his arm forward and plunged the blade deep into the Dark Lord's chest. Blood and energy spilling forth, and for the first time in countless eons, the armored warrior responded. "No." Pulling his arm back, he ripped the blade free. The Dark Lord grunted and his body shook violently; pain flooded his body. The limitless power within him swelled. He tilted his head back and the power of Creation and Destruction raged forth from his orifices, a pillar of infinite energy shooting far into the sky, billowing out as it reached the boundaries of Hell. The Dark Lord fell back, and from his chest rose the First Soul Sphere. Cracked and unstable, it shattered in an intense eruption that spread wide waves of power and influence flowing throughout the multiverse. In an endless number of dimensions that had been infected by the treacherous demons, the denizens of Hell crumbled. Back in the Sentinel World, man and woman alike cheered the Slayer's banner as the demons that plagued their world turned to ash. On Earth, an imp was about to pounce on a woman and an UAC soldier, but the vile creature vanished in flames. Countless other worlds saw the end of their plight as the demons were erased from the universe. Flynn gazed up at the infernal sky, the cold fury in his heart sated for the first time. For eons he had wasted away, slaughtering every last demon he swore to erase out of existence, living for the sole purpose of tearing Hell asunder. Today, he had taken rightful vengeance against the Dark Lord himself, the ultimate source of his pain. His conquest of Jekkad, his quest for revenge was over. The rage within him settled; he felt nothing but an empty void. What was there left for him now that the True Creator, the Father of All was dead? It is done. It is finally over. "..." Flynn slowly twitched from side to side as a wave of exhaustion suddenly washed over him, nausea and dizziness overwhelming his senses. His brows furrowed in bewilderment as he fell to his knees, and he gazed down at his gauntlet hands, perplexed. What was happening to him? "By his hand, all things were made," the Maykr Father's omniscient voice reverberated throughout the Holy Ingmore Sanctum. "... Even you." Flynn chuckled as realization dawned on him. For centuries, his rage was the only thing that had kept him going. Now, without said rage, his body stopped functioning. He was an empty shell that had lost what kept him alive for so long; a husk of a human being. In his moment of weakness, he fell over, and his world engulfed in darkness. In his last fleeting moment of consciousness, he eyed the Seraphs that stared emotionlessly down at him. One Seraph in the middle raised his hand and the long, stone lid slid over him. Darkness descended from all sides. The blood red sigil above him, was the one thing illuminating his sarcophagus. His eyes became heavy and finally let sleep overtake him. An anomaly of a white flash of light appeared next to the sarcophagus. Standing next to said sarcophagus, stood a tall cloaked figure. The mysterious gazed down at the grim tomb before them with a tilt of their head. The mysterious individual placed their hand on the sarcophaguss’ lid in the middle. Both the individual and the sarcophagus were shrouded in a bright white aura, before exploding and filling up the area around. Only when the light cleared did a group of Seraphs finally arrive to see the commotion. Unfortunately, they came far too late. The mysterious individual, along with the sarcophagus, were gone.
Star Shimmering
550792
2
Main 6,Original Character,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Alternate Universe,Anthro,Crossover,Human,Dark,Romance,Science Fiction,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Violence
The Eternal Shield: The Slayer’s Awakening
It's been eons since the Doom Slayer had been in deep slumber. Now freed, he must readjust to the present while also having to deal with the anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply.
hiatus
86
4
<p>After winning victoriously against the Dark Lord Davoth, the Doom Slayer returned to his sarcophagus and slumbered. Waiting for the day when a new evil arises with another reckoning, and the universe calling for his help once again.</p><p>At-least to the Slayer that’s how it should’ve gone down.</p><p>Now awakened, the Slayer must adjust to the present world, deal with a race of anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply, accept his position in this new world, and find a new purpose within it.</p><hr/><p>Click —&gt; <a href="https://youtu.be/7dQ771ybWpc" rel="nofollow"><span style="font-style:italic;color:#BE4343">Main theme: Intro</span></a></p><p>An MLP:FiM/Doom: Eternal Crossover</p><p>Cover Art by - <a href="https://www.deviantart.com/jetxpegasus" rel="nofollow">JetXPegasus</a></p><p>Author’s note: This story takes place in season 5 of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic</p><hr/><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: October 5th - 2021</span></p></blockquote><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: February 3 - 2024</span></p></blockquote><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: February 6 - 2024</span></p></blockquote>
mature
2024-02-04T06:11:43+00:00
2024-02-20T05:31:12+00:00
707
Flynn awoke by icy needles of rain falling on his face. His eyes slowly peeled themselves open. A cloudy sky greeted him with gray and streaks of raindrops, dripping from said clouds to the ground. He squinted as rain pecked his eyes. The drone of pattering rain filled his ears. Flynn sat up, rubbing the raindrops from his eyes. He looked around. He was laying in a small clearing surrounded by dense forest. Trees stood tall over him as the rain came down. Flynn glanced to the ground and saw his helmet lying next to him. He stood up from his sitting position. Needles of rain pecked his armor. His hands reached and grabbed for his helmet, bringing it close to his view, inspecting it. His thumb rubbed along the side of the helmet. His hand traced around the visor, admiring its intricacies. It didn't look damaged in any way; the visor was intact. Perfectly polished. His hands rested on either side of the helmet, holding it up to examine it further. His finger trailed along the metal. The material was smooth and cold, despite how warm it was. Flynn pulls it over his head. The HUD flickers to life, as a cushioned rubber ring slowly tightens and compresses around his neck, creating an artificial environment. Flynn was asleep. The Doom Slayer was reawakened. The Doom Slayer started through the forest listening to nothing but the pouring rain. As he moved forward he progressively felt something odd take over. Something… feels different. He expected himself to be back to where he first fought Davoth when first awoke, or some remote part of the Earth where he could not get back to cities or civilization. Even the flowers and plants were different, ones he didn't think existed dotted the forest floor in large frequency. What also didn’t add up was how different the trees looked. The Doom Slayer trudges on through the thick forest while commanding his armor to do a complete scan of the surrounding area. The scan revealed nothing interesting at first, carbon based life, oxygen nitrogen atmosphere, no radio, infrared, or ultrasonic communications detected, etc. Then the Doom Slayer's armor started giving him readouts on the more mystical aspects of his surroundings. A wave of nostalgia washed over him as he stared at the trees towering high above him. The foliage swayed back and forth in the wind that gently rustled them. The trees were thick and old and had long, twisted branches and twigs which hung down like long strands of hair. He walked slowly, feeling the rotting forest floor sink beneath his feet. He stared over the undergrowth, past the trees, to the mist lingering in the space beyond. The air smelled of mold and mildew, the decay of plant and animal matter. The Doom Slayer turned to his left and halted. In front of him, was a large opened doorway of a castle. Said castle was covered in ivy and vines with a few torches in front. There were plants, grass, and trees growing from the inside behind the brick wall. Doom Slayer couldn't comprehend what he was seeing. The Doom Slayer strolled along the forested path, meticulously examined the castle, leaving no stone unturned, and the evidence was unmistakable; a fierce battle had transpired within these walls. The data displayed on his armor indicated that the castle had likely been deserted for well over a millennium, judging by the estimated age of the inflicted damage. Nevertheless, the ruins had been recently disturbed, suggesting that someone frequented this place. The Slayer yearned to uncover the fate of the original inhabitants. The Doom Slayer discerned a faint, ethereal sound of someone in distress. His armor promptly detected a surge in temperature approximately one mile away from his present position. Without hesitation, the Slayer initiated a sprint, his mind resolute, as the trees whizzed by in a blur, hastening him towards the origin of the distressing cries. A few minutes earlier… Three young individuals made their way out of town. Rain poured down onto them as they walked. Ponyville, one of the small towns of Equestria, was a peaceful and harmonized place where ponies lived peacefully and lived together by the magic of friendship. On this day the trio were starting their way towards a forbidden area, one they were told to never venture. But since their older siblings weren’t around to watch them, this gave the Cutie Mark Crusaders the perfect opportunity to successfully sneak out of town and into said forbidden place. “Uh, why’re we going in here?” Scootaloo asked as they entered the Everfree outskirts. “Well, y'all remember Winona’s favorite ball?” Applebloom reminded her two friends, both of which nodded. “Well, while ah was in the middle of playing fetch with her, ah kinda bucked the ball too hard and it flew all over the Everfree. So that’s why we’re here.” She finished, pointing at the Everfree forest. “But doesn’t she have more balls?” Sweetie Belle wondered aloud. “Surely she still has some of those few balls to play with, right?” “Well, yeah she does. But that one ball was her most favorite. Ah couldn’t just replace it.” Applebloom explained. The trio proceeded onward until they reached the edge of the Everfree forest. They found an isolated clearing, a dirt path stretched long and far. The ground was covered with a thick layer of grass, and trees lining the edges. There were several bushes on either side of the path, with leaves as soft as silk. Applebloom led the way through the forest. The other two trailed close behind. As she walked, she noticed the flowers blooming from every side. It was like walking through a field full of colorful daisies, all growing together and swaying gently in the breeze. The forest had become too quiet. The only three inhabitants seemed to be the three of them as they made their way into the entrance, following the path along the swamp, past more trees, quickly approaching a new spacious area. The air had felt thick between them. None of them had spoken since they had started walking. The only sounds they heard were their footsteps and the occasional breeze that seemed to blow through the leaves above. Finally, Sweetie Belle broke the silence. “So, how close are we?” She asked, turning to her shoulder towards Applebloom. “We should be just about… here…” Applebloom said, gesturing to the left of her. The path suddenly widened, allowing for more space to walk on. “It’s this way.” They followed the path up a hill. The path narrowed considerably, making for difficult climbing. Each step took its toll. The crusaders soon came to rest near a large stone. A single flower grew in front of it, surrounded by vines with a few branches reaching toward the sky. All that could be seen from the top of the hill was a cliff, and the view below. Scootaloo looked down and gasped. The sight before them filled her with awe. Below them stretched a vast valley of tall trees and sparkling streams. In the distance lay a round yellow ball, bobbing lazily against the surface of a lake. “There it is!” Applebloom cheered. “That’s Winona’s ball we’ve been looking for. Come on girls!” Applebloom jumped off to the first cliffside branch and climbed down carefully. Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo followed behind. One step at a time they continued to climb down, careful not to slip and fall. Eventually they reached the bottom and Applebloom scanned the area cautiously, eyes darting around for any sign of danger. When nothing showed, she relaxed. “Looks clear.” She smiled, turning to face the others. She pointed at the lake. “Alright, we should be able to get in and out without getting wet.” The three of them start their way closer. The water of the pond seemed to sparkle in the sunlight. The sun hung directly overhead, casting a warm orange glow across the water. After walking for some time the trio arrived at the lake itself. Sweetie Belle’s eyes darted to the ball floating on the lake’s surface. Her horn lights up slightly as she stared at the ball, levitating it in the air with her magic. Subconsciously she motions the ball towards her and brings it down gently onto the grassy shore. Applebloom reaches for the ball and takes it into her hands. Swiftly she zips open the pocket of her saddlebag and puts said ball inside. Then she closes the bag once again and throws a strap over her back. “Alright, now let’s get on outta here before my sister finds out where we are!” Applebloom laughs as she starts towards the path leading back to the hilltop. She beckons for her friends to follow, and the three make their way up the hill. Once they reach the crest of the hill, round around a tree and start moving slowly towards the Everfree Forest. Sweetie Belle stayed close to Applebloom, staring ahead into the dark forest. Suddenly, she stopped in her tracks, her ears flicked back. Sweetie Belle gazed at Applebloom who continued walking. After a moment, Sweetie Belle follows suit, her gaze also scanning the darkness. Progressively, a new feeling takes over her. Something’s wrong. A deep uneasiness begins to settle in Sweetie Belle's stomach. She glances over her shoulder and scans the area with her eyes, trying to find anything that might give her an indication of what she's sensing. However, nothing is visible beyond the trees. She continues walking. After another minute or so, Sweetie Belle notices something move to her left. Instantly, she snaps her head in that direction. Nothing. Yet again Sweetie Belle tries to scan the area, but she can’t seem to locate whatever it was that startled her. Sweat drips down her forehead. What if she really did see something? She looks away from the darkening trees and stares down the mountain path. She hopes that there was nothing there. With a shaky breath she looks back at the woods, searching desperately for a shadow. Suddenly she feels a tap to her shoulder. Turning around, almost jumping back when she sees Applebloom and Scootaloo next to her and watching her with confusion written all over her face. “Y’all alright Sweetie Belle?” Applebloom asks, placing a hand on Sweetie Belle's arm reassuringly. “Yeah, you seem a bit on edge. Is everything alright?” Scootaloo asks, her tone laced with concern. Sweetie Belle inhales deeply and then exhales slowly, composing herself. “Yeah, I'm fine! Just… lost in thought for a second, sorry.” Sweetie Belle chuckled nervously. “Well hey, ah guess we're lucky we got here fast then huh?” Applebloom commented, her gaze now set on her shoes as she kicked a pebble on the ground. She then lifts her head up, smiling sheepishly. “Anyways, let's get goin'.” Applebloom began to trot forward once again. Sweetie Belle hurried after her and Scootaloo, desiring to get out of this forest and never come back. Her eyes remain glued to her surroundings, her mind racing with the tension that still had a grip on her. She shakes her head slightly, focusing on keeping her balance. “No reason to get distracted.” Sweetie Belle muttered, forcing herself to stop thinking about whatever strange feeling she had just experienced. She needed to keep moving. She needs to… Sweetie Belle’s thoughts suddenly halted at that very second by an ear shattering roar that bounced and echoed throughout the forest. Terror washed over the crusaders. The trio stopped to listen intently, trying to pinpoint the sound's source. Their ears pinned back against their heads, and their nostrils flared. Slowly, they turned to look back into the path behind them when they heard a faint thump, and the ground shook. For a while nothing could be heard but the sound of their own heartbeat. A few moments later, they heard another thump, and another. They watch over each other, waiting, listening for more sounds. Slowly they begin walking again, making sure to keep alert. Just a little farther, Sweetie Belle thought, Just a little farther and we'll be safe. The crusaders kept on retreating backwards until they paused abruptly when they saw something coming into view down the path from afar. The trio’s eyes widened at the sight, their breaths hitched. Standing afar from the three young fillies stood a giant manticore. Its massive body stood at least ten feet high. Its long sharp claws extended from its paws and arms and its tail whipped back and forth menacingly. Its fur was a deep purple with black highlights. The huge creature was adorned with a pair of red horns, which rose from its head like two small horns atop a big head. A red stripe ran down its back, disappearing beneath its thick coat. “What is that...thing?” Sweetie Belle questioned quietly, her pupils shrinking. “Ah don't know...” Applebloom replied, taking a few tentative steps back. “Ah’ve never even seen a manticore before.” “Me neither..” Scootaloo says, shivering slightly. The Manticore roared, sending a loud shockwave through the air. Sweetie Belle felt her legs wobbling under her. She quickly steadied herself before her, Applebloom, and Scootaloo turned on their heels and ran with all their might. The creature bellowed as it began to chase, every stomp of its legs shook the ground under their feet. Its heavy paws pounding the earth were a horrible reminder of how large it was. Sweat beaded along Sweetie Belle's brow, her chest tightening. She pushed her legs harder and faster. Her heart was pounding as she tried to increase her pace, constantly feeling her feet about to slip from the shaking ground. She stumbled a bit, nearly falling over. But she recovered quickly and quickened her pace once more. Just a bit farther, Sweetie Belle thought, almost there! A low, resonant growl interrupted Sweetie Belles’ thoughts. At the same time, the trio gradually raised their heads and observed the gargantuan, reptilian feet that clutched the earth with black talons. Sweetie Belles’ gaze ascended the muscular legs, up to the massive heaving chest and finally to the thick musculature of the neck. Even in the shade of trees, Sweetie Belle could distinctly perceive the animal's majestic mane. Sweetie Belle gazed upwards and noticed the colossal creature's head towering twenty feet in the air. Its rectangular jaws opened and closed, savoring the air, while its razor-sharp teeth dripped with blood. The nostrils located at the end of its snout flared open with a rumbling snort, and its small, black eyes peered into Sweetie Belles’ own. The manticore growled and took a step forward. The crusader’s screams echoed through the Everfree.
Star Shimmering
550792
3
Main 6,Original Character,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Alternate Universe,Anthro,Crossover,Human,Dark,Romance,Science Fiction,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Violence
The Eternal Shield: The Slayer’s Awakening
It's been eons since the Doom Slayer had been in deep slumber. Now freed, he must readjust to the present while also having to deal with the anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply.
hiatus
86
4
<p>After winning victoriously against the Dark Lord Davoth, the Doom Slayer returned to his sarcophagus and slumbered. Waiting for the day when a new evil arises with another reckoning, and the universe calling for his help once again.</p><p>At-least to the Slayer that’s how it should’ve gone down.</p><p>Now awakened, the Slayer must adjust to the present world, deal with a race of anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply, accept his position in this new world, and find a new purpose within it.</p><hr/><p>Click —&gt; <a href="https://youtu.be/7dQ771ybWpc" rel="nofollow"><span style="font-style:italic;color:#BE4343">Main theme: Intro</span></a></p><p>An MLP:FiM/Doom: Eternal Crossover</p><p>Cover Art by - <a href="https://www.deviantart.com/jetxpegasus" rel="nofollow">JetXPegasus</a></p><p>Author’s note: This story takes place in season 5 of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic</p><hr/><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: October 5th - 2021</span></p></blockquote><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: February 3 - 2024</span></p></blockquote><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: February 6 - 2024</span></p></blockquote>
mature
2024-02-05T05:04:31+00:00
2024-02-07T11:57:18+00:00
568
Applebloom’s world blurred around her as she charged mindlessly past an endless expanse of trees. Sweetie Belles’ screams echoed behind her, and the manticore bellowed tremendously. The mighty behemoth crashed through the jungle, causing branches to crack and snap beneath its bulk. Each methodic footstep made the floor shake, intensifying the already overwhelming situation. It was a truly terrifying experience, one that left the crusaders feeling utterly helpless. The crusaders found themselves in a state of great distress. Their natural instincts had taken over, leaving them with no choice but to flee. Hiding was deemed futile, and so they resorted to running. As they ran, they became increasingly disoriented and lost, straying far from their intended destination. Despite Scootaloo’s reluctance to look back, she could sense the presence of the monster lurking behind them. Sweetie Belle, on the other hand, could not resist the urge to glance over her shoulder. What she saw caused her stomach to plummet and her eyes to widen in terror. The manticore was closing in on them with alarming ease. In a matter of mere steps, it would have either of them in its jaws. The situation was dire, and the trio knew that they had to act quickly if they were to have any hope of survival. The manticore roared with seismic force as it barreled after them through the forest. The rising humidity smothered the trio, their legs bowed, they had been running for what felt like an eternity and their bodies were failing them. The crusaders sprinted through the forest, jumped over logs and rocks. Their vision’s pulse by their throbbing heart-beats. Hundreds of animals were squawking and screaming, tearing apart the treetops as they fled. They were intoxicated by their adrenaline. The crusaders had never exerted herself so vigorously in their lives. With her keen eyesight Applebloom perceived the conclusion of the forest a few meters beyond a cluster of trees. She came to a halt at the edge of a precipice, and Sweetie Belle along with Scootaloo stumbled alongside her, their hearts pounding with trepidation. Together they peered over the edge and the sight that greeted them was nothing short of breathtaking. The river rushed nearly sixty feet below. The opposite river bank was a waning moon surrounded by mangroves. “We have to jump, girls!” Applebloom shouted. Sweetie Belle and Applebloom hesitated. The ferocious howl of the manticore reached their ears, causing them to turn their heads towards the end of the forest where the bushes were being smashed through. The sight that met their eyes was that of the manticore, with its jaws spread wide, and its teeth glinting in the moonlight. Subsequently, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo looked back down at the river below and leaped off the cliff. Applebloom trailed after them and also jumped off of said cliff. As they descended, the trio screamed in terror as gravity wrenched them down. Applebloom caught a glimpse of the sky as she fell; charcoal clouds covered the sky as icy needles of rain pecked her face. It was then that Applebloom saw the manticore had lost its footing and was falling in after them. Applebloom screamed and knifed into the icy water with a frosty splash. She plummeted akin to a stone and slowly bobbed to the surface. Applebloom broke through the muffled silence of the water and heard the loud scream of the manticore. A shadow fell over the river and the manticore crashed in with the force of a falling boulder. The river surged and Applebloom was dragged underwater towards the thrashing behemoth. The current pulled Applebloom into a whirlpool around the manticore’s swinging skull. Applebloom kicked, and the manticore caught her in its sights. It snapped at her, cracking its jaws shut just as Applebloom was dragging beneath the waves. The world turned muffled and dark. Applebloom’s eyes opened to see the manticore’s paws slashing feebly. The manticore’s head burst beneath the waves and its jaws slammed shut a foot away from Applebloom. Bubbles jetted from between its teeth. The force rolled Applebloom backwards and she caught a glimpse of Scootaloo kicking towards Sweetie Belle, sinking beneath the behemoth’s kicking legs. It was then Applebloom realized: Sweetie Belle wasn’t moving. Applebloom kicked to the surface and gasped for air. With her lungs refilled to the brim, she dove back down and swam towards both Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle. The manticore snapped at her feet, and she pushed further down. The behemoth’s kicking created powerful waves that pushed Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle against the river’s muddy floor. Applebloom ducked the slashing talons and swam to her friends. A wave kicked by the manticore launched Applebloom into Sweetie Belle’s immobile frame. Applebloom and Scootaloo wrapped their arms around Sweetie Belle's arms and pulled her towards the shore. Applebloom and Scootaloo yearned for air. Their lungs were withered, and their legs were leaden. Sweetie Belle was dead weight; her jaw was slack. Applebloom’s eyes burned, and the cold burrowed into her bones through her furry coat. Gravity pulled the pair down, but they kicked and screamed their last breath in desperation. Applebloom and Scootaloo pulled Sweetie Belle into the surface of the river, where their last bubbles of oxygen had escaped to. Their vision dimmed, and their ears were ringing. The pair could feel their consciousness slipping away. The pair’s feet found the sloping river bank, and they broke through the water’s surface. They gasped akin to a vacuum, pulling air into their lungs. Their legs bowed painfully, drained of blood and energy, and they dragged Sweetie Belle towards the powder-white shore. Sweetie Belle didn’t stir. Applebloom looked over her shoulder and saw that the manticore had reclaimed its bearings. If slid through water like a giant crocodile, water glittering on its mane like crystal beads. Applebloom knew that she and Scootaloo couldn't run anymore. Each breath they took burned through their lungs. Their bodies were numb from the cold, and their hearts struggled to keep the thick blood pumping in their veins. It was time to hide. “Come ‘on, we gotta find somewhere to hide!” Applebloom shouted. Scootaloo nodded. Applebloom and Scootaloo slung Sweetie Belle’s arms over their shoulders. Water soaked their clothes and stuck to their furry coats. Applebloom and Scootaloo carried her as quickly and gently as they could through the knee high foliage. The manticore howled ferociously from behind, but Applebloom and Scootaloo dared not look back. The pair weaved around tree trunks, carefully stepping over logs and rocks. The pair staggered, shaking beneath the icy needles of rain, propelled by their surging adrenaline. Somewhere, their monster was watching. They could feel it. Scootaloo’s shoe slipped through the mud and she fell forward with a wet smack. Her sense of fight-or-flight possessed her. She quickly got back to her feet, proceeding to trot forward with Applebloom through the marshy turf of swamp vegetation. Applebloom and Scootaloo slowly approached a nearby mangrove. The pair crawled with their immobile friend into a mangrove’s cage and peered out. All the pair had to do now was sit and wait, shivering and gripped by terror. Through the pouring storm, Applebloom and Scootaloo could hear footsteps slowly padding somewhere on the earth’s surface. Each footstep was carefully placed, methodical and silent. They heard the manticore sniffing the air, followed by a long, low growl. The creature was circling the trees trying to locate the three crusaders in the storm. Applebloom and Scootaloo carefully tucked themselves further back in the mangrove’s den and stared at the behemoth walking along the swampy area. The pair held their lips until their lungs felt sucked dry. The manticore raised its long snout, sniffing the air. The hooked claws flicked in anticipation. The behemoth’s jaws parted into a toothy, rumbling snarl. It was only ten feet away Applebloom and Scootaloo trembled uncontrollably. Tears were lost with the rain on their faces. Almost without thinking, Applebloom clasped a hand over her mouth to keep quiet. Scootaloo emulated her friend, and slowly clasped both of her hands over her mouth as well. Applebloom and Scootaloo could see the behemoth approaching, slowly. The mighty beast was taking its time; it knew they had nowhere left to run. Please, Applebloom silently begged, please go away..! The pair saw the paws and muscular legs of the creature standing before them. Its hooked cat-like claws dug into the earth. Applebloom and Scootaloo were petrified by fear; neither of them could no longer think and had forgotten the act of breathing. All they could do was watch as the behemoth crouched before them and stared back with cold, intelligent eyes. With one swift swipe of its paw the behemoth tore the mangrove bars apart. Removing the wall that blocked it from its prey. With its prey now cornered, there is no escape. The creature’s cold gaze met Scootaloo’s eyes. Its mane muffled the sounds of the storm. Applebloom and Scootaloo can only hear their own whimpering and the slow heavy breathing of the monster. As the manticore drew its snout closer to Scootaloo, its jaws slightly opened to reveal sword-like teeth. The monster’s hot breath, rancid with decay, washed over the pair. Applebloom and Scootaloo closed their eyes; neither of the two wanted to see what’s coming next. CLICK-CLACK A sudden explosion prompted Applebloom and Scootaloo’s eyes to snap open. Just in time to see the behemoth retreating backwards away from them, roaring in pain and shaking its head all around. The pair’s eyes crawled to its rear and saw that half of the creature’s tail was gone. Then they saw a figure stepping out of the side five feet away from them. The mysterious figure stood before the manticore. The enigmatic bipedal donned an ancient suit of armor from top to bottom, one that Applebloom and Scootaloo had never seen before. It reminded Applebloom of one of those space heroes that Spike read in his comic books. A steel cannon situated on the figure’s shoulder. The armored assailant held a double barreled firearm in their hands which completed their appearance. Applebloom and Scootaloo redirected their gaze towards the manticore. The manticore had ceased its screams and was now casting a cold glare at its assailant. With a resounding howl, the behemoth leaped into the air, swiftly descending towards the armored figure. Applebloom parted her lips, but before she could even utter a sound, the enigmatic figure swiftly advanced. Their hands swiftly extended and firmly grasped the jaws of the manticore. The impact was so forceful that the gust of wind whipped Applebloom and Scootaloo’s faces and mane. The creature vigorously shook its head from side to side, in an attempt to liberate itself from the clutches of its assailant. Applebloom and Scootaloo’s mind were blown. Their savior stopped the monster with their bare hands! Applebloom found herself rendered speechless; any apprehension she had towards the manticore vanished instantaneously. A portion of her being desired to remain and witness the unfolding of events, while another part yearned for nothing more than to escape with Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle and never look back. She could flee until she reached the edge of the forest, out of Ponyville, the depths of her own sanity. Overwhelmed by a multitude of emotions, her inclination to run reduced her to a trembling state. The armored figure effortlessly lifted the manticore in the air, leaving both the behemoth and the pony pair stunned by their strength. The behemoth’s legs and hands flailed and kicked the open air. The mysterious figure twisted their torso and sent the creature flying It flew so hard and fast the manticore had no opportunity to straighten itself out and regain control before it slammed into one of the nearby trees. The behemoth’s body indented into the wall of a giant rock, and had to pry itself out, groaning in pain. The manticore raised its head, bellowing in rage before charging towards its assailant with the intent to kill. Each footfall shook the ground akin to a falling tree. The armored figure reached for their back and pulled out a large metallic object in both hands. The manticore, Applebloom, and Scootaloo eye’s slowly widened as they felt their heart sink to their stomach at the sight before them. The armored figure had another metallic object in its hands, though this one was as big as its torso, with three long sets of barrels, each set having three barrels stuck together in a triangular formation. Slowly the barrels began to spin to life, they spun faster and faster every second. Once it reached top speed, the manticore’s body was struck by a swarm of powerful projectiles, mulching and mutilating the lead creature. Steam billowed out of the barrels as Applebloom and Scootaloo watched the manticore’s body collapse to the earth’s floor chin first. Holes were dotted all over the fallen creatures’ body, and its face was unrecognizable. Blood pooled out of said holes as the behemoth’s chest fell slowly, ceasing its breathing. There was silence. For what felt like an eternity the armored figure’s head turned to look in the Applebloom and Scootaloo’s direction. The pair felt themselves quaking with fear as the figure approached them. As they strode towards Applebloom and Scootaloo, the pair sat glued to the spot, their eyes welled up with tears. Too afraid to move or run. If… this was it, if this was how their lives ended, then Applebloom was glad that Applejack and Big Mac weren't here to witness their upcoming doom. She wondered if it’ll be painful to die? The armored figure crouched to one knee before Applebloom and Scootaloo. Besides the pouring rain, silence permeated the atmosphere. The pair’s countenance soon changed from horror to genuine surprise when the armored figure offered their gauntlets to them. Applebloom and Scootaloo gouged at each other before shifting their gaze back to their savior. The pair’s eyes momentarily shifted from the outstretched hands to meet the figure's gaze, before accepting it. Maintaining an upright posture, Applebloom and Scootaloo held onto the armored savior's gauntlets before pulling their hands back to their sides. A concerning realization dawned on Applebloom and Scootaloo. Sweetie Belle still isn’t moving. “Sweetie Belle!” Applebloom rounded on her immobile friend and lifted her out of the mangrove. She and Scootaloo carefully laid Sweetie Belle down on the grass wet floor. Scootaloo began performing CPR on Sweetie Belle, pumping her sternum with mounting desperation. A technique she and Applebloom learned at a time when they were still trying to get their own cutie marks. Scootaloo paused, stooped over to listen to Sweetie Belle’s breathing, frowned, and continued her compression. “Come on, Sweetie Belle,” Scootaloo pleaded. “You’ve gotta wake up!” Applebloom fell to her knees. Keeping herself balanced with her hands, she stared down at Sweetie Belle’s face with tears trickling down her cheeks. “Please, Sweetie Belle!” Applebloom cried. “Y’all can’t be dead, ah don’t want y’all to be dead! The cutie mark crusaders won’t be the same without y’all!” Scootaloo paused to listen to Sweetie Belle’s breathing again. She growled and pumped Sweetie Belle’s chest three more times. Before she could do it a fourth time, she felt something cold gripping her shoulder. Scootaloo glanced over her shoulder, and met the armored figure’s dark visor. The enigmatic savior moved Scootaloo aside and placed their hand on Sweetie Belle’s chest. The armored figure pumped Sweetie Belle’s chest once. Sweetie Belle spasmed and puked. She turned on her side and curled into a ball, gagging brine and bile. Applebloom patted her on the back. “It’s alright, let it all out,” Scootaloo said, placing her hand on Sweetie Belle’s shoulder. “Just breathe, Sweetie Belle. Just breathe.” Applebloom added, proceeding to pat Sweetie Belle’s back. Sweetie Belle opened her eyes. The world was fuzzy. She focused on Applebloom and Scootaloo and blinked. “Applebloom..? Scootaloo..?” Sweetie Belle rasped. “What happened..?” Applebloom and Scootaloo smiled. “We made it, Sweetie Belle,” Applebloom said. “We’re alive.” Applebloom blinked. “Oh, ah have to thank you, stran…ger..?” Applebloom and Scootaloo turned their heads. Blinking together in surprise. Their armored savior was gone.
Star Shimmering
550792
4
Main 6,Original Character,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Starlight Glimmer,Alternate Universe,Anthro,Crossover,Human,Dark,Romance,Science Fiction,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic,Gore,Profanity,Violence
The Eternal Shield: The Slayer’s Awakening
It's been eons since the Doom Slayer had been in deep slumber. Now freed, he must readjust to the present while also having to deal with the anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply.
hiatus
86
4
<p>After winning victoriously against the Dark Lord Davoth, the Doom Slayer returned to his sarcophagus and slumbered. Waiting for the day when a new evil arises with another reckoning, and the universe calling for his help once again.</p><p>At-least to the Slayer that’s how it should’ve gone down.</p><p>Now awakened, the Slayer must adjust to the present world, deal with a race of anthropomorphic ponies who fear him deeply, accept his position in this new world, and find a new purpose within it.</p><hr/><p>Click —&gt; <a href="https://youtu.be/7dQ771ybWpc" rel="nofollow"><span style="font-style:italic;color:#BE4343">Main theme: Intro</span></a></p><p>An MLP:FiM/Doom: Eternal Crossover</p><p>Cover Art by - <a href="https://www.deviantart.com/jetxpegasus" rel="nofollow">JetXPegasus</a></p><p>Author’s note: This story takes place in season 5 of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic</p><hr/><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: October 5th - 2021</span></p></blockquote><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: February 3 - 2024</span></p></blockquote><blockquote><p><span style="font-weight:bold;color:#6AAADD"> Featured: February 6 - 2024</span></p></blockquote>
mature
2024-02-06T22:37:00+00:00
2024-02-07T11:51:32+00:00
416
A tapestry of sparkling stars adorned the heavens across the night sky. Said stars resemble a myriad of glistening diamonds. Some stars shone with such clarity that they were almost tangible, while others remained hidden behind a thick veil of clouds. The moon, resplendent and silver, cast its luminous glow upon the island, as if it were a celestial spotlight. The branches creaked in harmony amidst the gentle sway of the trees with the wind that whispers from all directions. Occasional breezes would rustle the leaves, only to subside once more. Leaving behind scattered twigs as a subtle reminder of their presence. Standing in line with a huge group of employees of different species, a dark green unicorn named Cabbage York, glanced up with nervous eyes. Cabbage York watched the crane bring forth a large metal container as it drove forward bulldozing through the trees. An impressive-looking paddock enters into view. Shouts of orders sounded in the air as the metal container came forward. “Everypony, heads up! Heads up! Keep it clear! Stand back!” One of the unicorn workers shouted, waving their arms for the others to move. “Bring it forward. Come on! Slow it down!” Another worker shouted as the steel box was lowered onto the hard ground, close to the enclosure. “Ándale! Si! Cuidado! A ver, tráiganla, tráiganla! Vamos con la segunda!” Another worker, who was a tall Minotaur with a left arm ancient shark tattoo, called out in spanish. “Confirmada la segunda!” A third Minotaur worker responded as Cabbage watched the crew move around in their respective positions, checking the paddock gate for any sign of trouble. “Vamanos,” another worker shouted. A deep purr rumbled in the steel box. The sound filled the empty paddock, as everyone worked to ensure everything was in place. Finally, everything was in check. Standing seven feet away from the paddock among all the workers stood a mare pegasus. She possessed a brown coat, complemented by dark blue eyes, and is a young, attractive mare. She has noticeably large bosoms with a long, black mane that is kept in her hat, with one lock of said mane hanging right across her face. She sports glossy nude black lipstick while donning her crimson uniform, with a matching hat. She wore gray pants and her legs were encased with black knee-length boots that were high-heeled. No one among this line of work knew her true identity. For now, everypony refers to her by her code name: Madam Beta. Beta turned her waist to the side, staring at the three workers standing behind her. “Alright you maggots, move in there!” Beta commanded, pointing at the paddock. The workers shouted orders in Spanish whilst the loading team approached the cage. “Make sure those tasers are on full charge!” Beta added, narrowing her eyes at them. Cabbage stood alongside the loading team as they grabbed the cage together. The second his hand made contact with the bars, a high demonic shriek frightened him and the other stallions away. The cage shook violently, as if something banged it with great force. Cabbage stood where he was and stared at the paddock with wide eyes. His heart rapidly beating out of his rib cage. His chest rose and fell with each breath. He doesn’t know what could possibly be inside the cage but it was terrifying, and he hoped to Celestia he wasn’t around if it ever found a way to escape. “Go on. Step back in.” Beta instructed. “And push!” The workers push the cage into the paddock entrance. An electronic beep buzzes, notifying everypony in proximity that it was interlocked. Beta nodded in approval to their work. “Good, good.” Beta shifted her gaze to the loading team. She internally commands them to back away by jabbing her head back, thus they complied and backed away. Beta then turned to Cabbage. “. Gatekeeper, get to it!” Cabbage turned to face her and briefly saluted. “Y-Yes ma’am!” He complied, rolling his body around and started towards the ladder. Cabbage began ascending up to the ladder. When he started climbing up, he felt a chill run down his spine as he heard a deep snarl from within the cage. Inside the paddock, the creature was watching. Cabbage could feel it. Beta lifted his head up. “Rookie, raise the gate!” Cabbage stared down at the paddock beneath his boots. He could feel his legs begin to shake uncontrollably, his trousers flapping like flags. He was frightened. He didn’t want to be here. Alone among all the workers, Cabbage knew what an attack from monsters akin to this was like. He knew what happened to some of the employees here. He had seen the mangled bodies that resulted from said attack. He could picture it in his mind. And this monster was here! Encased inside of this paddock! Oh Celestia, Cabbage thought. When the creature shrieked it was terrifying, a scream from some other world. A scream rose in Cabbages’ throat, a knee jerk reaction but he smothered it behind his hand. He almost screamed like a little filly. He was simultaneously embarrassed and terrified. But he knew he had to get his job done, he can’t just stand here for too long. The sooner he finishes his task, the sooner he can get out of here and hopefully not come back. Cabbage took a deep breath, finding solace in thoughts of his wife and children. The image of his daughter's smile and the warmth of their home brought him peace. A sense of calm washed over him, as if it had been a long time since he felt at ease. The sound of his son's laughter echoed in his ears, filling him with a sense of security. The laughter of his wife, the scent of her perfume, and the joyous laughter of his children filled him with happiness. He felt happy at that moment. Happy to go back to them once this was— A sudden shriek pulled Cabbage out of his thoughts. The container abruptly shoved backwards causing Cabbage to lose balance and fall hard face first onto the ground. The air from his lungs was knocked out of him as his face cracked against the gravel below. His ears rang, while pain shot through his body, causing a groan of dismay to escape his lips. He tried to pull himself up but then he felt his feet wrenched and forcefully dragged from said ground. One of the Minotaurs, code name Dex, immediately runs to Cabbage’s aid. “Block the opening! Don't let it get out!” Dex shouted. Both Minotaur and earth-pony workers followed his order as they held their spear-like tasers and aimed towards the metal gate. Cabbage screamed as he reached for a curved thin bar for dear life but then a sudden force pulled him violently closer into the cage. Tasers proceeded to discharge through the bars of the cage. Each shot hit the creature’s tough skin, causing sparks to fly. But to every-pony’s shock, it wasn’t affected at all. The creature shrieked horrifically, shaking those who surrounded its paddock to their very core. it was almost deafening, its shriek was so loud that it reverberated off the walls of the cage. Dex gritted his teeth. Trying desperately with all his might to pry Cabbage free from the brute grasp of the creature’s grip, but to no avail. He briefly glanced over at Beta, internally pleading for assistance. He blinked in surprise when not only did she not come to his aid, but he saw that Beta was the only pony among the hurrying workers unaffected by the chaos. She simply stood rooted where she was with her arms folded. The workers continued tasing the creature through the peep holes. When the tasers didn’t do much damage, some of the unicorns lit up their horns with magic and blasted the monster inside with powerful beams. But no matter how much effort they put into said bemas, it didn’t make a difference. “Somebody help him!” One of the workers shouted, trying vainly to hold back the creature. “Come on, boys! Work her back! Work her back!” Dex yelled to another worker who stepped forward and pressed the end of his baton against the back of the creature’s neck through the bars. The workers continued tasering the creature, which in that moment looks Dex in the eye. Dex and the monster eyed at each other. The creature’s reptilian eyes stared deep into Dexs—eyes that glowed a bright yellow. The creature snarled in protest, releasing some guttural growls as it did so. It refused to let its prey go. One last pull to ensure its prey won’t escape. Dex’s arms strained to keep a tight hold around Cabbage’s arm. Cabbage groans in pain as the creature slowly pulls him closer. “D-Dex, let go!” Cabbage strained. “No!” Dex cried. His grip around Cabbage's arm was slipping. “Don’t let go!” He shouted, desperation ringing loud and clear in his voice. The earth ponies proceeded to fire magical beams through the cage. But it didn’t matter. Cabbage found himself yanked away from Robert, his eyes meeting the creature’s own. “No!” Dex yelled as the creature opened its jaws wide, revealing a set of serrated teeth. The creature shot forward and snatched Cabbage’s throat in its jaws. It tightened its grip, cutting off his air supply. The monster shook him violently from side-to-side, ripping the flesh from his neck apart akin to tissue. Hot blood ran down Cabbage’s torso and the creature let go of him. Cabbage fell on his back whilst screaming, and a fiery pain flared throughout his body as claws sliced across his stomach. The creature growled indifferently while Cabbage shrieked and pounded its face with his fist. Trying to dislodge it with all his strength. But the creature wouldn’t budge, instead keeping Cabbage pinned to the ground, its weight crushing him further in its massive form. Cabbage hands clawed at the ground as blood poured out between his fingers. As though the world was becoming distant, he can barely hear Dex shouting his name or the workers screaming and shouting at one another. In Cabbage’s last fleeting moment of consciousness he watched the creature dug its claws into his abdomen and tug out coils of intestine. His vision blurred and dark spots danced in front of his eyes as the monster started to eat him. His own horrendous death rattle was the last thing he felt before life fled from his shell of a body. The world became distant and fuzzy as everything was engulfed in darkness. Leaned against the railing of the catwalk stood a black Minotaur named Djunnarak Gloryhide. He wore a long white overcoat with encased formal gloves shoved into his pockets, and black jeans. He was blind on his left eye while adorning an old scar over it. Djunnark watched both of his workers and soldiers work on the levitation steel parts of the portal. Earth ponies in uniforms were welding steel in place, shouting at each other over the din of the generators. Djunnark smiled at the sight. He felt like the father of this monstrous machine. From a series of blueprint sketches, he had watched it evolve into the temple of advanced technology that stood before him. Despite the catastrophic misfire that had destroyed the prototype two years ago, he was determined to witness the portal in all its operational magnificence. He believed that the portal would be the initial step towards the core of pony-kind's evolution; if only he could get it functioning again in time. Standing on Djunnark’s left was Court, his second in command and anthropomorphic spider monkey. To Djunnark’s right was his chief scientist Morida, a tall anthropomorphic gorilla. Morida checked tallies on his clipboard and stared at the portal. “How much longer until the portal has enough energy for a test fire?” Djunnark asked. Morida scratched his pencil across the clipboard. “We should have it ready in five to six days,” Morida replied. “If nothing goes wrong this time.” Djunnark hummed with a nod. He didn’t mind waiting that long. If there was one thing he was known to all of his acquaintances, is that he’s a patient man. As long as there was no-pony to interfere with his work, he could wait. “See to it then, Dr. Morida.” Djunnark said. Morida nodded and walked past Djunnark and Court. Djunnark watched Morida scampered down the stairs to a console to the front of the portal. He glanced to his right and noticed Court narrowing his eyes forward into space. “Court, whatever is the matter?” Djunnark asked, raising a brow at him. “You should be merry; we’re six days away from completing a decade-long project.” Court briefly glanced at Djunnark before shifting his gaze forward again. “It’s Agent Bon Bon, sir,” Court replied.” She’s sticking her nose in where they don’t belong.” Djunnark nodded. “Ah, yes, yes. I remember her. If I recall correctly, she gave you quite a bit of trouble back at your last assignment?” “Yes, but nothing for me to be too concerned with. At first I thought she was nothing more than an average agent, just like all the others I’ve killed with ease,” Court said, rubbing his hand over his arm-length from where the mare cut him. “But that lowly vermin proved me wrong.” Court bawled his fist tightly. “I was also hoping you’d allow me to go out, so I can find her and rip her apart piece by piece.” He snarled with sheer contempt. Djunnark chuckled while shaking his head. “That won’t be necessary, Court.” Djunnark placed his hand on Court’s shoulder. “I can’t have you off on a wild goose chase; you are just as much too valuable as Beta. Besides, I need you and Beta to man the defensive perimeter. As for Agent Bon Bon, she’s nothing more than an atom seed beneath our boots. The only ones we should be wary of are the three princesses.” Court glanced at Djunnark with an arched brow. “Even the new princess?” A smirk graced Djunnark’s lips. “Well, she’s the exception; sure, she’s an alicorn now, but she’s more of a greenie while Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and Princess Cadance are very well experienced when it comes to the art of battle,” he explained. “That naive princess of friendship has very little experience in fighting, which will give us the homing advantage for future opportunities.” “I see…” Acknowledged Court. He turned to leave, starting towards the stairs. “Court,” Djunnark called. Court glanced over his shoulder. Djunnark narrowed his eyes at him with a grin. “Head over to the laboratory. Tell the doctors to have our specimens ready when the time is ripe.” Court nodded and walked down the stairs. Djunnark turned and held a kite-shaped piece of armor in front of his face. He hummed as he studied the object’s silhouette against the light. The crystal empire shield insignia was stained with blood.
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-05T15:24:19+00:00
2024-02-05T16:07:04+00:00
123
Years passed since being in Equestria and we now see George and Harold who are now 19 years old and are raising their kids. See reason why is because a long time ago they were kids when they first arrived in Equestria. And like all the comics they made the villains came to life and they had to stop them. Sombra was first, Chrysalis was second, Tirek was third, The Storm King and Melvin were forth and fifth, and finally The Dazzlings were sixth. And of course they married Lyra and Bon Bon. Anyways the boys were off from work at the comic store and were heading to the treehouse. They first started off as kids when on of them only had a flat top and a tie. The other had a bad haircut. Now they were old enough to help their wives raise their kids. They went in the treehouse and they received a warm welcome home. "Girls! Were home!" The boys said in unison. "Boys!" Lyra and Bon Bon we not to their husbands and hugged them. And then their kids came to them. They were now 13 years old since they first arrived from Maretopia. "Come on kids. Give your dads a hug." Harold replied. In case you were wondering who the kids were I will explain. One was an orange unicorn and had a red mane and tail with blue streaks and a cutie mark that is a rainbow color wheel like on his costume, but also a heart behind it. The other was a sky blue pegasus with a black mane and tail and had a cutie mark of a group of stars and clouds on it. They were Color Love and Daring Flight. "Were glad your home dad." Color Love said. "Us too son. How was school today?" Harold asked. "It was not bad. It was actually nice. But some of the kids didn't believe that you were fighting villains from the comics you created and they laughed at me." Color Love answered. Harold felt sorry for his son and squatted down to face him. "Son listen. Don't listen to what the others say. What you say is true. Don't give what the haters want. You believe what you want to believe." Harold said. "He's right sweetie. Your father has defeated villains over the years and they became the heroes of Equestria." Bon Bon agreed. "Ok mom. Thank you. And dad? Me and Daring were thinking about something." Color Love wondered. "What were you thinking about?" Harold asked. "Well you said that when were old enough we can join you and Uncle George on your adventures. Is today a good day for training?" Color Love answered. The boys thought about it for a moment til they had an answer. "You know what? You're old enough now. You can join us on our adventures. But just remember that it's not a walk in the park. So whenever you are on an adventure with us then you two are to stay with us at all times. If you are seriously hurt then your moms are gonna be very worried." George replied. "Ok dad. We promise to stay with you." Daring promised. "Good. Now let's all head outside." George smiled. So for the next few hours George and Harold trained their kids to be heroes. First thing they did was learn how to control their super powers. But since the kids don't have actual superpowers all they can do is learn how to control the unicorn magic and controlling the flight game. Next was aiming at their targets so they can take them down. And boy Daring Flight did an awesome job doing that. Now next was dodging attacks. George and Harold blasted some attacks and the kids first struggled a little but thanks to them being supportive they were able to get better and were dodging like pros. Finally they were practicing some obstacle training. Meaning they were hopping on tree stumps, poles, and also dodging a few things in the obstacle course. After three hours they were all pumped up and ready for battle. "Alright boys. How do you feel?" George asked. "We feel pretty good. Like were ready to take out any villain that gets in our way!!!" Color Love answered. "Now son. Were glad your excited but remember what I said." Harold reminded him. "We know it's not a walk in the park. The villains you faced were tough as nails. So we need our A game." Daring Flight replied. "Exactly son." George nodded. Then suddenly they heard a knock on the door and Harold went to answer it. It revealed to be Derpy. "Morning everyone! I have a delivery for George and Harold." Derpy said giving them a letter. "Thanks Derpy." Harold said. She left and they opened up the letter. Once it was open George began reading it. George and Harold, If your reading this you are invited to the orientation of Twilight Sparkle becoming the new ruler. And since you boys saved Equestria many times over the years I have prepared something very special for you, your wives and your kids. Please come to Canterlot so we can discuss the preparations for her big moment. Bring Lyra, Bon Bon and the kids with you. Princess Celestia. Everyone smiled at hearing the invitation. "So Twilight's becoming the new ruler huh? That's pretty exciting!" Harold smiled. "It sure is! Oh we must head to Canterlot and see what Celestia needs help with for preparing for the orientation!" Lyra suggested. "That's a good idea honey!! And kids. Since your coming too we want you to behave and make sure you give Twilight the respect she deserves when we arrive. Okay?" Harold asked. "Yes. We promise to behave." Daring said. "Good. That's our boys. Come on everyone! Let's head to Canterlot!" George declared. So everyone left the treehouse and were heading to the castle in Canterlot. But as they were leaving a figure was hiding in the bush and growled at seeing such happiness. "Soon Equestria will be mine." The figure said. It quietly left the bush and went into hiding while hiding in another bush a few more figures emerged from it and we couldn't see them but we can tell they were worried. "We can't let her get away with this." A female voice said. Then the figures headed out and went to the castle to see if their was a way to stop the other figure that left. One thing is clear: danger is afoot.
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-06T03:26:26+00:00
2024-02-06T03:26:26+00:00
85
In Piqua Ohio there was a huge prison which is home to some of the most dangerous criminals that have been captured. In one of the cells was a short man with a large grey puff of hair. He has a mustache. He wears semicircular glasses. He also wears a purple shirt with a blue bow, blue trousers, and black shoes. His name was Professor Poopypants. He was quietly working on an invention and when he finished he used it escape the prison through a portal. Once he landed from the other side he looked around seeing Equestria. "So I'm in another world huh? Well I'm glad to be out of jail. Now to plot my revenge on those two boys that got me locked up in the first place." Poopypants sneered. He made his way to Ponyville and since it was nighttime he had to be quiet so he won't wake anyone up. After a few hours he got a little tired and was so sleepy that he bumped into someone. She is a slim, magenta-purple-coated Alicorn, with her chest being noticeably colored in a slightly lighter shade. She possesses almond-shaped deep-ocean eyes, long thick eyelashes, arched black brows, deep-ocean hooves, and dons makeup consisting of glittery-blue eyeshadow and angled mascara. Her most distinctive feature is her silver-white mane and tail with various thin streaks of cyan-green. Her main is also shoulder-length, and is parted into two side sections, with small braids around her ears holding the hairstyle. Her hairstyle also resulted into the parts of her mane being left down form a tapering spiral pattern that makes it appear thicker by her shoulders. As for her cutie mark, it consists of a violet-magenta horn having an inscribed transparent rhombus, and accompanying it are two, cyan-blue flames on the side that resemble wings. She saw Poopypants and got confused. Her name is Opaline. "A human? Here? I thought that there were no humans in Equestria." Opaline thought. "For your information I AM a human. And who may I ask are you?" Poopypants asked. "I am Opaline. The most feared and dangerous ailcorn in all of Equestria. And who are you little man?" Opaline answered. "My name is Professor Poopypants." "Poopypants? That's a ridiculous name." Opaline said. "Yeah yeah I know. But as for why I'm here I seek revenge on two boys that foiled my plans for ridding the world of laughter and my personal plans to rule the universe!" Poopypants replied. "Ridding the world of laughter? What kind of stupid plan is that?" Opaline asked. "Hey!! I will have you know Opaline that I was embarrassed from that!! Back in the day I presented my pinvention, the Sizeirator 2000 at the Nobel Invention Prize ceremony. During the ceremony, Professor P. uses his Sizeirator to smallify a car and largify a hot dog. A lady then presenting my award isn't sure if heck my name is really Professor Poopypants. After my name was revealed, the audience laughed at me, causing Professor me to get mad, and state that if it weren't for my silly name, then I would get to do a lot of things, like "be on talk shows", "date models twice his size", and "protect baby seals". However, the lady asked me to accept the award, but I refused and shrunk her down. After the lady asked me to accept the award once again, i just yelled at her to build her own invention to return herself back to normal." Poopypants said angry. Opaline was shocked hearing that and immediately rethought about what she said. "So you lost everything all because of your name? Everyone laughed and made fun of you when you could have been much more?" Opaline asked. "Yes. It's sad but it's true." Poopypants admitted. "So I plotted to rid the world of laughter and I almost got away with it but I was defeated by a naked man and those two kids that created him." "Oh. I see. Well you weren't the only one who wanted to rule the world. See back in the day jealousy ran deep from the time when i was a filly when Princess Celestia and Princess Luna were fillies too. Jealous of the attention the pair got calling them the 'golden ponies' and thinking they were much better than me cause of their magic to raise the sun and moon, creating my drive to show them i was not to be underestimated and fulfill my own elemental duty. It was shown that they think I lack empathy as i declined when both Misty and Sunny attempts to reach out to me by commenting that the reason i was evil is due to how i never experienced of having any friends, but I choose to decline her claims, thus proving that i knew the difference between right or wrong, yet i chose to do evil on my own choices." Opaline explained. "Ouch. I totally hate when that happens." Poopypants cringed. "I'm sure you would. And thus I tried to separate the pony tribes so I can steal all the magic and rule Equestria. But Misty my traitorous daughter and her friend Sunny stopped me with their friendship magic." Opaline said with hate. "Yeah I've been meaning to ask who exactly is Misty and Sunny?" Poopypants asked. Opaline sighed as she answered. "Misty is my adopted daughter or WAS my daughter til she found out my true intentions and betrayed me. As for Sunny she is my arch enemy and I wanted payback against her since she ruined my plans." Then Poopypants had an idea. An evil idea. He got an wonderful, evil idea. "Hey Opaline? I was wondering if maybe we should team up to take down our enemies? I mean you wanna take down this Misty and Sunny while I wanna stop that naked man and those boys. Together they wouldn't stand a chance against us." Poopypants suggested. Opaline thought about it for a bit. On one hand she rather work alone. But on the other hand she rather work with someone who wants revenge to get the job done faster. "Alright Poopypants. I say that you have a deal. We'll work together to defeat our enemies." Opaline said. They both shook hands and the dark deal was sealed. "So how should we rule Equestria?" Poopypants asked. "Easy. First we need to separate the pony tribes and then we need something to steal all their magic and use it for some powerful weapons to instantly destroy this 'teddy bear palace'." Opaline said with disgust. "Oh I know someone that can build us a machine no problem. But problem is I don't know where he is." Poopypants suggested. "Have you tried in Tartarus? They keep some of the most dangerous villains there. I even heard from some guards that a boy was locked in there and had his intelligence sucked out of his head." Opaline offered. "Wait..that's the guy I had help me last time." Poopypants realized. "You know him?" Opaline wondered. "Yes. That was Melvin Sneedly. He helped me but got defeated too. If were gonna be able to rule the world then I think we should pay him a visit." Poopypants said. Then the two smiled evily and headed straight to Tartarus. And one thing was clear. Ponyville will be in danger if they break Melvin out.
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
complete
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-06T17:25:38+00:00
2024-02-06T17:25:38+00:00
91
Poopypants and Opaline quickly snuck in to Tartarus so the guards wouldn't catch them. Now inside was a huge prison where all the most dangerous villains of Equestria were imprisoned. And they continued walking their way down til they reached a cell with someone breathing heavy. He was Melvin Sneedly. He growled as he thought the guards were here. "Melvin? Are you there?" Poopypants asked. "Professor P? Been a long time since I last saw you." Melvin said. "And who is this ailcorn your with?" "I am Opaline. The most feared and dangerous ailcorn in my own time. And I didn't tell Poopypants this but im from the future. And you must be Melvin. Can you step in the light?" He got up and walked straight into the light where we see his appearance different. He had more muscles than he originally had. He also had a skull tattoo on his right shoulder and a Death tattoo on the left. He wasn't wearing his glasses anymore and he has a moustache and a small beard. Yep he definitely changed since being locked up. "Whoa Melvin. You look a lot different from the last time I saw you. What happened?" Poopypants wondered. "I'll tell you what happened. Back then I tried to help the Storm King gain control of Equestria. But it only lead to George and Harold beating both of us and after all that Harold hooked me to a machine of his and started to drain something from my brain as i yelled in pain see some green stuff being removed from me. That was my intelligence. Once all of my intelligence was drained out of him Harold unhooked me and threw my body on the floor. I admit that i groaned but then i understand that he is not a genius anymore. Everything science and mathematics is now completely like a foreign language to me." Melvin explained. "So they drained your intelligence huh?" Poopypants asked. "Yes. And I've been stuck in here for the past 5 years." Melvin answered. "Really now? Well sorry for that. But me and Poopypants are gonna be taking over Equestria. And it just so happens that we need someone who can build weapons." Opaline said. "I can help you two. If you need a weapon I can build one. But....I need something first." Melvin responded. "And what would that be?" Opaline asked. "I need you two to break me out and help me find my intelligence. Without it I can't build the weapon." Melvin answered. "Easier said than done." Opaline smirked. Using her magic she proceeded to bust the cell wide open. Melvin crawled out and the trio ran as fast as they could. The guards tried to stop them but Poopypants took out a freeze ray and froze them solid. They continued walking til they reached the Vault. Melvin saw the tank full of green liquid and snatched it. He ripped the lid open and drank it down to the last drop. After that he threw it on the ground and glowed a bright green. Once the light flashed he felt like his normal self again. "Oh yeah!! Im back baby! And with brawn nonetheless!!" Melvin praised. "Im glad you're happy Melvin. Now will you get us out of here?" Opaline asked. "My pleasure." Melvin smirked cracking his knuckles. The trio ran as fast as they could to escape. Then some guards came in and tried to stop them. But Melvin grabbed them by the neck and threw them against the wall. More and more came in but with the same results. He even slammed one of the guards heads in the dirt! Another showed up and Poopypants froze him and Melvin grabbed the frozen pony and threw it at the gates breaking them down. The trio exited Tartarus and once they were out Melvin took a deep breath and exhaled out. "Im certainly glad you two came here. I was beginning to think that I been forgotten. Now I can breathe fresh air." Melvin complemented. "Happy for you Melvin. But you do realize that we have a world to take over right?" Opaline reminded him. "Of course my dearest Opaline. After all you deserve my respect for busting me out." Melvin flirted. "Are you trying to flirt with me?" Opaline asked. "Melvin. Now's not the time for flirting with Opaline. She's probably not in the mood for a relationship okay?" Poopypants asked. "Sorry Professor P. It's just that George and Harold have girlfriends and now wives. If they can have lovers then why can't i?" Melvin pouted. That statement made Poopypants froze in shock. But Opaline was confused. "Wait. George and Harold are married? Well that's quite a surprise. I wondered how they got together." Poopypants wondered. "Um who is George and Harold?" Opaline asked. "Well remember those boys I told you about? That was them that defeated me. George is a brown skin boy with a flat top and a tie. Harold was white skinned and a bad haircut. Remember that now. And also they defeated me when I tried ridding all laughter." Poopypants explained. "Oh I see. So they were the ones that took you out. Well I will show them what it's like to make them quake in fear once we divide the pony tribes and steal all the magic." Opaline said. "So that's your plan? Separate the pony tribes and then we steal all the magic. I like that. You really know how to make a plan." Melvin smiled rubbing her back but Opaline swatted his hand. "Get your hand off me." "Sorry! I was trying to be nice." Melvin reasoned. "Melvin you should really give Opaline her space. She has been through rough times as a filly. So how bout you don't flirt and actually try to help her succeed this plan?" Poopypants asked. "Your right. Sorry. Opaline I will give you your space and help make this plan work." Melvin vowed. "Thank you Melvin. And actually I really didn't mean to swat your hand. That actually was pretty nice of you. No one was ever nice to me before." Opaline smiled. "Guess I'm the first one. But enough about that. It's time to revenge. George and Harold? You better watch out because I'm back. Oh and one thing to Twilight. It's my motto i worked on. Who Needs Friends When You Have Intelligence. Were coming for you." Melvin said evily. The worse danger is yet to come as the trio made their way to Canterlot. What can our heroes do?
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-06T19:00:00+00:00
2024-02-06T19:00:00+00:00
92
In Canterlot we see the boys and their wives heading to the castle. Once they arrived the guards guided them to the throne room where we see Krupp, Mr Meaner, Ms Ribble, The Royal Sisters and The Mane Six awaiting their arrival. They all smiled seeing them here. "George and Harold. Were so happy that your here." Celestia smiled. "And we see you brought the kids. Color Love and Daring Flight?" Luna asked. "Yes that's us." Daring answered. "Well look how big you two grown! I still remember the day when you were little boys. But nonetheless were happy to have you here." Mr Meaner said. "Yeah. We got the message from Celestia saying that she needs our help planning out Twilight's orientation." George replied. "Yes. But Twilight was up again really late trying to prepare for becoming the next ruler. She's a little tired and I insisted that she gets some rest." Celestia added. "Which I did. I'm just a little nervous about it." Twilight said sheepish. "It's okay Twilight. We'll all help you get ready. And you are gonna be the best ruler that Equestria has ever seen." Ms Ribble encouraged. Then they heard a knock on the door. Celestia told them to come in and once the door opened it revealed six ponies they never seen before. One was a thin, apricot-orange-coated Earth pony, having her fetlocks colored in a paler shade and the insides of her ears being colored in a shade of coral. She possesses emerald-green eyes, small yet fluttery-like lashes, thin magenta eyebrows, dark coral hooves, as well as having a silky, magenta-pink and purple mane and tail. Originally, her mane was kept in a side braid with two, elastic aquamarine-colored hair ties. As for her cutie mark, it consists of a pink star with a blue trail, with two smaller stars on the anterior side of the large one. Another is a light pink-coated female Pegasus, having her fetlocks being colored in a paler shade of her coat. She has kiwi-green eyes, small yet fluttery-like eyelashes, thin deep-purple eyebrows, golden hooves (possibly painted), as well as having a wavy violet mane and tail, with her mane being swooped back to her right side. The third is a lilac-coated female Unicorn with a medium built, with thin dark purple eyebrows, magenta eyes, small yet fluttery-like eyelashes, dark purple hooves, as well as having a wavy, blue mane and tail with several curls and a darker blue gradient at the bottom, with her mane being hoof-length. As for her cutie mark, it consists of a purple heart with a blue button in the center, with the anterior side of the heart features three sewing pins: two pink and one purple. The forth is a tall, thin, white-coated female Pegasus, possessing turquoise-blue eyes, small yet fluttery-like eyelashes, thin hot-pink eyebrows, silver-gray hooves, as well as having a gelled, hot-pink mane and tail with both lighter pink and aqua streaks. As for her cutie mark, it consists of a hot-pink and aqua-blue lightning bolt with a yellow crown on top. The fifth was a slender, sky-blue-coated female Unicorn, having freckles on her cheeks. Her fetlocks, insides of her ears, as well as her chest to her stomach, colored a pink. She possesses mint-green eyes, small yet fluttery-like eyelashes, hale-navy eyebrows, grayish-purple hooves, as well as having a kinky, navy-blue mane and tail with teal-green highlights, with her mane being swooped to her right side with three cornrows on the left side of her scalp. As per her pony type, she possesses a long, bumpy horn with a sky-blue and lavender-pink gradient, complete with a pattern of pink swirls around it. And finally the sixth was a male but also is a well-built, slightly muscular light amber-coated Earth pony, having his fetlocks, chest and blaze being colored in white. He possesses amber eyes, brown eyebrows, chocolate-brown hooves, as well as having a sleek aqua-green mane and tail, with his mane being short and his tail being average-length. As for his cutie mark, it consists of a golden shield with a teal horseshoe in the center, with two teal hearts on the bottom of each side of the shield. The six new ponies saw Twilight and the peach one got all giddy. "Oh my goodness! Twilight Sparkle! I'm so excited to meet you!" She smiled. "Well I'm glad you are a fan but who are all of you?" Twilight asked. "Oh I'm so sorry. I forgot to introduce myself. I'm Sunny Starscout. And these are my friends. Hitch Trailblazer, Izzy Moonbow, Misty Brightdawn, Zipp Storm, and Pipp Petals." "Well it's nice to meet you. You already know Twilight. These are Rainbow Dash, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, George, Harold, Mr Krupp, Mr Meaner, Ms Ribble, the boys wives Lyra Heartstrings and Bon Bon, and their kids Color Love and Daring Flight. And I'm Princess Celestia and my sister Princess Luna." Celestia introduced. "It is truly an honor to meet you all. Ive been wanting to see you since forever. But we came from the future for a reason." Sunny replied. "You came from the future?" Harold asked. "Yes. And plus we need your help." Pipp added. "A great evil is lurking around here and is planning to tear Equestria apart. Opaline has returned." Hitch explained. "Opaline? You mean the one from many years ago? That Opaline?" Celestia feared. "I'm afraid it's true. The same Opaline that you remembered when you were filly is here and is planning to tear Equestria apart and separate the tribes." Izzy answered. "Excuse us but who is Opaline?" George asked. "She's only the most dangerous ailcorn known to ponykind. She is portrayed as malicious, scheming, deceitful, and self-centered. As an Alicorn, she believes she is entitled to rule over all ponykind, and she considers me a "disgrace to her kind" for not thinking the same. She regularly engages in espionage and other covert tactics, using Misty to spy on the ponies, and she manipulates others to accomplish her goals. She claims to have "rescued" Misty when she was a filly and uses this (as well as the promise of one day giving Misty a cutie mark) to keep her in line, even treating her abusively. Opaline is also very condescending and petty, often putting Misty down and seeing others' hopes and dreams (like Sunny's dream of opening a community garden) as frivolous and meaningless. She is incredibly egotistical and power-hungry, wanting all of Equestria's magic for herself and for all ponies to blindly serve and worship her." Sunny explained. "My goodness!! She sounds horrible!!" Rarity gasped. "Oh she is horrible. So when we heard that she traveled here to the past we needed some help to stop her evil plan before it's too late. So we seek these two to help us stop Opaline." Pipp said pointing at George and Harold. "Us?" They asked in unison. "Yes. We have hear tale. That you two created these comics and for some reason brought the villains to life and defeated them." Hitch said. "Well your not wrong. We did made those." Harold admitted. "So would you be so kind to make us one? I really want to see how well you make them!" Izzy begged. "Well we be happy to but don't you think we should focus on this Opaline pony?" George wondered. "Yes though our task is important we also know how you manage to stop the villains. When you created them you sell them on the playground and then suddenly the villain snatches one and begins to do the evil plan from the comic. And then you guys have to stop him or her from achieving." Sunny explained. Everyone was surprised at how they manage to figure out the pattern of them stopping villains. "Wow. You certainly have been keeping up with your history." Twilight said impressed. "Thank you. So George and Harold? If you help us stop Opaline then we will be extremely grateful to you. Will you save Equestria from her wrath?" Sunny asked. The boys thought about it til they have an answer. "Equestria is our home. We have wives and children along with many friends. And we never let them be under the control of a psycho villain. We'll help you." George agreed. The ponies cheered and they hugged the boys for them agreeing to help out. "Thank you boys! Now can you please show us what you can do when making a comic?" Izzy asked. "Sure Izzy. We'll show you how we make our comics." Harold answered. So everyone headed out of the throne room and headed out. But after they left three shadows appeared and they revealed to be Poopypants, Melvin and Opaline. "Haha. So this is the castle of Equestria is it?" Poopypants asked. "Yes. And I think it's time for some remodeling around here. And Opaline? Whatever weapon you want me to build I will certainly do it my lovely." Melvin flirted. "Don't call me that. Although I appreciate your respect and loyalty I really don't want you flirting with me. I'm not your girlfriend okay?" Opaline asked. "Yeah Melvin. I really don't know why you keep flirting with Opaline. That's weird." Poopypants wondered. "Well if George and Harold can have lovers then so can i." Melvin answered. "You seriously need help on love dummy. Alright enough about that. Let's do some redecorating around here and we shall begin." Poopypants smirked evil. So the trio walked and got started. Trouble is already brewing.
Big Imagination E
550804
5
Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
complete
-1
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-07T17:54:03+00:00
2024-02-07T17:54:03+00:00
82
The gang went to their treehouse and once they arrived the two nodded and got started on the comic. And like the last story and we know that George likes to write the story on every comic they do and Harold likes to draw the pictures that puts the story together like a puzzle. Page after page they continued to work on the comic til eventually they reached the last page. When they did they put all the pages in the right order telling the whole story from beginning to end. Then they stapled it together making it whole. "And finished! We present Captain Underpants and The Outrageous Plot of Opaline!!" George said. "Wow! That looks so cool! Can you read it?" Izzy asked. "We sure can. So let's read it so we know that's it's full of action and adventure in it." Harold replied. The two opened the comic and began reading it. In the comic "In the lovely land of Equestria everyone was getting ready for a special occasion." Harold started. "For today was a special day. Twilight was being crowned the new ruler. And everyone she knew would be there." George continued. "But all that changed when the E-cup Opaline attacked seeking to capture the princess and divide Equestria. Everyone ran in fear when Opaline used her magic and shocked everyone to be under her control." Harold said. "Your Highness! Opaline is attacking the ponies! And if she mind controls everyone she'll take the throne!" George said pretending to be a guard. "Oh no! This looks like a job for..." Sunny narrated while reading. "Captain Underpants!!!" The ponies said in unison. "So Captain Underpants flew to the skies and prepared to fight Opaline! She tried shooting some lightning at him but he dodged every time she did. Then he shot some unlimited underwear at her and she got hit in the face multiple times. Then she tried using some raining cosmic thunder on him. But that only led to Captain Underpants dodging all the lightning and flying towards her and punched so hard that her horn broke off and they fell to the ground." Harold replied. "Opaline tried shooting some lightning at him but all she did was mess up due to her horn being broken." George continued. "No! You'll pay for this!!" Harold said pretending to be Opaline. "She charged at Captain Underpants and he flew above her which resulted in her crashing into a building wall and was a little dizzy. Then Captain Underpants flew down and took out some rope and tied Opaline up so she couldn't escape again." George said. "Haha! Looks like your days of terrorism are over Opaline!! It's off to jail for you!" Harold said pretending to be Captain Underpants. "Aww rats!" George said pretending to be Opaline. "HURRAY FOR CAPTAIN UNDERPANTS!!" The boys shouted in unison. "So Captain Underpants grabbed the tied up Opaline and carried her to Tartarus where she will never harm another pony again. Once again Equestria was saved thanks to Captain Underpants! The End." Harold finished. Out of the comic The boys closed the comic and Harold took out the cloning ray and cloned it to make copies. Pipp giggled see all those comics ready to be sold. "That's a lot of comics! I honestly don't know how you do this but that is certainly impressive!" Pipp smiled. "Thanks. Now let's go get them sold like hotcakes!!" George said. In the playground of Ponyville George and Harold took out their same stand they used to sell the last comic. Then they placed the comics on and began selling them for 5 bits. "Extra! Extra! Read our latest issue by Treehouse Comics Inc!" George shouted. "It's our latest and newest one! Captain Underpants and The Outrageous Plot of Opaline!" Harold said. Soon everyone got the message and immediately went to George and Harold to purchase a comic and boy they were selling like hotcakes! And luckily Lyra and Bon Bon came on time and got a copy of the comic and thanked them. After 2 hours they were completely sold out. They carried their stuff and headed back to the treehouse. But they didn't know that a hooded figure came and stole one of the comics and ran as fast as he could into the throne room of the castle. The figure took off the hood and and revealed to be Melvin. And boy he looked mad. "Grr. Even they still make comics about the different villains. And now Opaline!? I really want to destroy them for good!!!" Melvin yelled. "What is with the screaming Melvin?" Opaline asked. "They made a ridiculous comic about you! Honestly have they have no respect!?" Melvin growled. "Ok relax Melvin! It's obvious that these two are used to making comic books. So let's see what they written this time. Opaline would you like to take a look?" Poopypants asked. "Sure. I wish to see what these boys made." Opaline said using her magic to take the comic. "Captain Underpants and The Outrageous Plot of Opaline?" She opened it and read it. After that she saw that George and Harold wrote it. "So George and Harold made this huh? Well I certainly will give them credit that they are creative when it comes to making this. But what they don't know is that we are gonna make our own ending to this story." Opaline smirked. "Yeah. With our own weapons and we will separate the tribes and make them quake in fear at the very mention of our names!!" Poopypants declared. He they snatched the comic and looked at it. "So they want more supervillans huh? Well ask and they'll shall receive." Poopypants said grinning evil. The other two did the same knowing that their plan is about to begin.
Big Imagination E
550804
6
Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
complete
-1
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-07T21:29:50+00:00
2024-02-07T21:29:50+00:00
63
With the whole gang they were heading back to Canterlot Castle. They eventually made it but suddenly they saw that the throne room had completely changed. It was all sinister and dark looking with some tech in place. The kids were a little scared but they stayed with there dads at all times. "What happened to the throne room? It certainly wasn't like this when we left." Celestia asked. "Oh I just did a little redecorating around here. I hope you liked it." A voice answered. Then they all heard footsteps coming and in the light they saw Melvin staring at them evily. "Melvin?!" Everyone said in unison. "In the flesh. And it's not just me. I have new friends joining me." Melvin said. Then out of the light we see Poopypants and Opaline staring at the heroes with pure evilness in them. "Hello boys. Remember me?" Poopypants asked. "Poopypants!" The boys said in unison. "And Opaline! What are you doing here?!" Sunny demanded. "I've been hiding from you numbskulls. Ive been waiting for the perfect time to strike. The perfect time for...Payback." Opaline growled. "How did you break out of jail Melvin? I thought we locked you up!" Harold asked. "Oh you did. But Opaline here busted me out. And now that I'm free I can finally get revenge on you! While I wasted my life in prison you and George were enjoying nice normal lives!! Well I'm gonna put an end to it. By putting you out of your misery!!" Melvin shouted. "We won't let you do that Melvin!" Twilight said. "You may say that now. But since I got my intelligence back I say you won't stand a chance!! And your friends will never send me back!!" Melvin growled. "Oh yes we will! And I don't know how you got your intelligence back but we won't let you harm those ponies." Luna said determined. "Oh really? Hey Poopypants? Wanna tell them what will happen?" Melvin asked. "Sure Melvin. You see guys thanks to George and Harold's little comic i can certainly tell that you wanna face three villains. And although you managed to only place Opaline in your comic we have a better idea in mind for our own ending." Poopypants replied. "Yes. For we are going to separate the tribes and steal every last ounce of magic from Equestria with weapons that Melvin will build. But it will be a pity that you won't be around to enjoy it." Opaline explained. "We won't let you get away with it!!" Krupp shouted Opaline could only laugh. "On the contrary my friend I said that we already have." Then she used her magic to trap Twilight and her friends and placed them into separate tubes and Melvin pressed a button to keep them from moving and hooked them up. "Let them go Melvin!!" Celestia demanded. "Sorry 'princess' but you don't get to boss me around anymore. In fact since I have no use for you I think I will send you and your friends away! And you can't stop me from getting my revenge!!" Melvin shouted. "Let them go Melvin! Or we will beat you and your goons up like last time!" Bon Bon declared. "Yeah! We won't let you do this to Twilight!" Hitch said. "Well I just did! And who needs friends when I have intelligence!! Now say goodbye!!" Melvin replied. He pressed the button on his remote and he sent George, Harold, their wives, the Royal Sisters, the kids, Krupp, and the future Mane Six out of the throne room and they landed somewhere far away. Melvin laughed evily after that. With the heroes they recovered from the fall and checked to see if everyone was okay. "Is everyone alright?" Celestia asked. "Were fine. But Equestria is in danger with Melvin, Poopypants and Opaline working together to separate the tribes and steal every last ounce of magic. We gotta stop them before all of Equestria is a divided house." George answered. "George is right. And with Twilight and her friends kidnapped again there's no doubt that Melvin's gonna drain their magic and use it for another weapon of his." Lyra agreed. "Mom? How can we possibly stop that trio?" Daring asked. "I don't know sweetie. But we definitely need to stop them one way or another." Lyra answered. "But how? With Opaline and Poopypants by his side he's unstoppable." Sunny worried. "There is one way to stop them. The only way to vanquish those villains is to seek out the most powerful artifact in all of Equestria. One that we hidden away a thousand years ago when Grogar tried to rule all." Celestia said. "And what would that be?" Pipp asked. She closed her eyes and breathed before she said it. "The Stone of Infinite Dreams." "That stone has the power to make anyone's dream come true and also can make your wishes real." Luna added. "That is a powerful artifact. But how do we get it?" Color Love asked. "To get the Stone of Infinite Dreams we must find the Frozen North and seek the Dream Caves. That's where we will find it. But first.....boys? Summon Captain Underpants here and I will call Mr Meaner and Ms Ribble to also help us." Celestia said. The boys knew exactly what she said and with a snap of their fingers in no time Krupp spun around and all his clothes came off and turned into Captain Underpants! "Tra la laaaaa!!" Captain Underpants said. Then Celestia used her magic to call upon their allies. Then the boys spun around and got their costumes on. Once they did that they landed on the ground and saw Mr Meaner with his Stinky Kong mech, and Ms Ribble was she became Wedgie Woman but for heroism and they went to the heroes with courageous faces on. "We got the message. What's the issue?" Mr Meaner asked. "Listen. An evil ailcorn named Opaline as teamed up with a guy named Poopypants and Melvin who broke out of jail. They are planning to destroy Equestria by separating the tribes and stealing all the magic." Celestia explained. "Oh that's not good. Well we can certainly help you. How do we stop them?" Ms Ribble asked. "Well Celestia said that we need to head to the Frozen North and seek the Dream Caves where an artifact called the Stone of Infinite Dreams is being held." George explained. "Ooh that's sounds like a really powerful artifact! We definitely need to get our hands on it and bring the fight to the trio!!" Captain Underpants declared. "You are right Captain Underpants. Everyone! We must make haste to the Dream Caves and find the artifact at once!" Luna declared. "Yeah!" Everyone said in unison. "And boys? I gotta ask. Is that this Captain Underpants guy you mentioned in your comics?" Sunny beamed. "You bet he is! The superhero we created years ago when we first started making comics. And also took down all those villains we made in the comics." George answered. "Ok now we know how you became superheroes! But enough about that. Let's head to the Frozen North and seek the Dream Caves." Misty said. Everyone agreed and they began their journey. TBE fate of Equestria lies in their hands now. And we hope that George and Harold along with all their friends and the Royal Sisters can stop the trio before Equestria is no longer a united land.
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
complete
-1
-1
<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-07T22:56:50+00:00
2024-02-07T22:56:50+00:00
66
Everyone traveled far and wide to get the Stone of Infinite Dreams. They walked for a good long while. And due to the extreme cold weather it made it difficult for them to reach the caves. The extreme blizzard kept pushing them but they kept on going through the weather. After a few days they finally reached the snowy and icy caves ahead of them in the distance. "There they are! The Dream Caves!" Mr Meaner said. Everyone smiled seeing the caves at last. So the gang all started walking in the caves to find a spot to set up their campsite. Like the journey here it definitely took a while to find a spot. But after an hour or two they finally found a spot close to the spot the artifact was and started setting up the campsite. 15 minutes went by and night came in and Mr Meaner got a fire ready as everyone sat around it trying to stay warm. Around the fire the future Mane Six wanted to share some stories. "So Mr Meaner? You, Ms Ribble and Krupp used to be the meanest teachers a while back?" Sunny asked. "It's sad but it's true. See a while back when we lived in Ohio we didn't really care about friendship or anything else. And when George and Harold disappeared well we thought that the pain was over." Mr Meaner started. "Turns out it wasn't. When Sombra came he removed our negatrons and after that we instantly regretted ever being so mean to them. After we found them again we apologized and joined them in fighting crime. Turns out they taught us something from their comics. You can be a hero if you believe in yourself." Ms Ribble added. The boys smiled at Ms Ribble's words. "And boys? How did you manage to get together with Lyra and Bon Bon?" Pipp asked. "Here's a true story. About a few years ago when we were kids we first met them when they read Captain Underpants and The Deadly Shadows of Sombra. Since then we started bonding with them and we felt a connection growing. Then when Chrysalis attacked we needed to save them from harm. After we did they pretty much became our girlfriends and later on we got married to them." George explained. "Aww that's so sweet." Sunny smiled. "Yeah. Saving them and then dating them. A great combination of love." Hitch commented. "What about you? Don't you have a special someone?" Mr Meaner asked. "Well no. But I did feel a connection between me and Sunny. Since we were best friends when we were little." Hitch answered. "That's nice. It's always great to have best friends." Ms Ribble replied. "It sure is. Hey boys? Ask me this. When did you first start making these comics and fighting the villains from them?" Zipp wondered. "Well it started when we were in kindergarten. Harold and I bonded after sharing a little laugh from a lesson. After we did we hung out in our old treehouse and created hundreds of comics in there. Like The Wrath of the Wicked Wedgie Woman! Oh no offense Ms Ribble." George said. "None taken. I'm used to it." Ms Ribble assured. "Anyways there were other comics too. But the all time greatest superhero we ever made was Captain Underpants!" George finished. "See guys most superheroes look like they fly around in their underwear. But this guy actually does! And here's something exciting. Every time we make a comic about Captain Underpants the adventure comes to life and we try to help him save the day." Harold explained. "Wow. That's cool. But do you guys sometimes think that it's kinda like a curse every time that happens?" Pipp asked. "Well yes. But we learned how to defeat the villains and save our home." Harold answered. "Sound like you boys know how to protect your friends and family like how all superheroes do. That's definitely the most important thing that heroes can do." Sunny smiled. "It sure is Sunny. Did you have any friends that needed to understand the importance of friendship?" Luna asked. "Well there was Sprout. See he only thinks that Equestria should continue to be separated when really he doesn't know the whole story. Thus he tried building a weapon called Sproutacus Maximumus. And did tried to destroy my home. Eventually we did stop him and we tried to tell him that Equestria doesn't have to be separated. But he didn't listen." Sunny answered. "Sounds like he could be taught a lesson or two on friendship." Captain Underpants suggested. "He sure can. If only he knew that all ponies no matter what tribe you are can live together. Like I say 'No matter how different you are we should all be friends'." Sunny said. "A very good saying Sunny. Something that all of Equestria can truly understand when Twilight and her friends solve friendship problems." Luna agreed. "Big time. Okay guys it's getting late. We should all probably head to sleep and rest up. We gotta find that Stone of Infinite Dreams and stop the Terrible Trio." Mr Meaner suggested. Soon everyone agreed and crawled into their sleeping bags. Then the boys shared their sleeping bags with their wives and kids. Like George, Daring Flight and Lyra shared. Harold and Color Love shared their sleeping bag with Bon Bon since they were married. Mr Meaner and Ms Ribble got their own and The Royal Sisters offered Krupp to sleep in their tent with her so all stayed warm. The future Mane Six all got their tent and Izzy used her magic to get it set up and they went inside, crawled in their sleeping bags and went to sleep. After getting settled everyone fell asleep and went to dreamland. But they knew that tomorrow they will head deeper into the cave and get the artifact to stop Melvin, Poopypants and Opaline from causing chaos. Twilight and her friends were all depending on them.
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
complete
-1
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-08T18:40:17+00:00
2024-02-08T18:40:17+00:00
62
The next morning we still see everyone sleeping in their sleeping bags. Until they all heard an alarm go off. Mr Meaner got up and turned it off and shook his head to wake up. Then one by one everyone started waking up and regrouping in front of the cave. "Rise and shine everyone. We got a day of searching for the Stone of Infinite Dreams. We need it to stop the trio from dividing Equestria." Mr Meaner said. "You heard Mr Meaner. Let's go!" Pipp agreed. So everyone got up and went straight in the caves. And boy it was so dark in there that Celestia, Izzy and Lyra all lit their horns to light the way. Color Love was a little nervous since it was his first time on an Arians being in a cave gave him the jitters. "Dad? Why are we in a cave? Im scared." Color Love whimpered. "I know son. But reason why were in here is because we need to find the Stone of Infinite Dreams. You do want to save Twilight, her friends and the future right?" Harold asked. "Yes dad. But being in a cave scares me." Color Love answered as his mom came to him and placed him on her back. "Don't you worry son. Mommy will make sure that you don't leave my sight. And before you know it we'll be out of the cave. Hang in there ok?" Bon Bon asked. "Ok mom." Color Love answered. So for the next few hours they kept on looking for the artifact. But they weren't any closer to finding it. They kept looking and maybe that if they find a trail that would help them find it faster. Then suddenly Mr Meaner saw something glowing on the ground When he got closer he tried pick it up but he couldn't Instead what he actually did is get rid of any extra dirt on the ground and saw a trail forming to the left. It was a rainbow road. "Guys. I think I found a trail to follow." Mr Meaner said. "Good eye Mr Meaner. Everyone follow that rainbow road." Celestia smiled. So everyone followed the rainbow road and where it was taking them. Then after a few hours they came to a lone path that had a glowing light at the end. They knew they were close and continued forward. After a few minutes they finally reached the spot in the cave and on the stand was The Stone of Infinite Dreams. It was a rainbow glowing stone in the shape of a hexagon and was beautiful. "There it is. The Stone of Infinite Dreams. The most powerful artifact in all of Equestria." Celestia said. Then suddenly a rainbow smoke started coming out of the stone and formed into a mist form of a woman. "Whoa. Who is that?" Ms Ribble asked. "Greetings travelers. I am Iris goddess of the rainbow and messenger of the gods." She introduced. "Iris? Wait I remember her! She's responsible for bringing the rainbow out and is associated with communication, messages, the rainbow included as well, and new endeavors." George realized. "Indeed I am George Beard." Iris smiled. Everyone gasped hearing that she knows his name. "How on earth did you know his name?" Captain Underpants asked. "Im a goddess. I know many things. You all must be Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Captain Underpants or Krupp, Mr Meaner, Ms Ribble, George Beard, Harold Hutchins, Sunny Starscout, Izzy Moonbow, Pipp Petals, Zipp Storm, Hitch Trailblazer, Misty, Lyra Heartstrings, Bon Bon, and even little Color Love and Daring Flight." Iris answered. "So you know who we are. Ok. Well we come here for something." Luna replied. "Lemme guess. You are here for the Stone of Infinite Dreams." Iris guessed. "Yes. You see three evil beings named Melvin Sneedly, Professor Poopypants and Opaline are planning to destroy Equestria by separating the tribes and stealing all the magic. We humbly request that we take the stone and use it's power to vanquish them before it's too late." Celestia explained. "I see. You wish to rid the evil that is lurking around and need to stop it from spreading. And for that reason you explained is more than enough proof for me." Iris replied. "So can we have it? Please?" Harold asked. "Yes you can. But promise that you'll only use it's power for your heroic deeds. Cause if it falls into the wrong hands then all of Equestria is doomed." Iris told them. "We promise. You have our word Iris." Celestia said. "Okay. Then I will lend you the power and you'll stop the trio." Iris replied. So Iris went back in the stone and it levatated high in the air and engulfed everyone in a bright rainbow light. Everyone had their eyes closed as the power began swirling around their bodies and went in them. After that we see their hair all glowing and becoming like rainbow flames. Then it transported them out of the cave and we them all glowing a dreamy rainbow color. "Whoa! Look at us! Were glowing rainbow colors!" Daring replied. "Yes. And we now have exactly what we need to stop the trio. So are we all ready?" Luna asked. Everyone nodded yes. "Never fear Mane Six! Were coming to save the day!" Captain Underpants shouted. "And you better watch out Melvin!! After we beat you again were draining out your brain til you have not a since drop of intelligence left!!" Harold said. Everyone cheered and began making their way back to Equestria. It was now time for the final battle to begin. The fate of Equestria lies in there hands and hooves. Can our heroes stop the diabolical trio and prevent them from separating the tribes and stealing all the magic? Let us hope they can.
Big Imagination E
550804
9
Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-08T21:45:43+00:00
2024-02-08T21:45:42+00:00
75
Back in the throne room we see the villains getting dressed for their takeover. Melvin wore an evil biker outfit and Poopypants had on the same outfit he wore when he first controlled the Turbo Toilet 2000. And Opaline had on a evil queen outfit. "You look amazing Opaline. You really fit the queen title perfectly." Melvin complimented. "Why thank you Melvin. I appreciate you saying that. Really makes feel so much better." Opaline said. "Yes I admit for once that Melvin's right. Looks good. But more importantly..... How do I look?" Poopypants asked. "Just like you do in the comic book!" Melvin answered. "Good! Now you two finish up what weapon you're working on and separate Equestria." Poopypants replied. "What are you going to do?" Opaline wondered. "I just finished my latest invention and I have a feeling that those boys and their friends are coming here. So I'm gonna use my robo-suit and stop them from reaching the castle." Poopypants answered. He climbed in and started heading off to stop the heroes. Back with the heroes they were finally at Canterlot but the way they saw things they can tell that the villains were starting to put their plan in action as they see Melvin's creations walking around. They knew he built robots again since he has his intelligence back. "Ugh. Since he got his intelligence we should have known that he was gonna make robots again." Harold groaned. "Typical Melvin. Always does that same crud again and again!" Mr Meaner shouted. “Quiet Meaner. We don’t want the robots spotting us.” Lyra whispered. “Sorry Lyra. I’m just so angry.” Mr Meaner replied. "We all are right now. But we have to destroy all those robots. Let's go get them!!" Sunny declared. The heroes all nodded in agreement and went out of their hiding spot and proceeded to take out Melvin’s robots. The future Mane Six used their abilities to destroy them in seconds flat since they got powers from the stone. The boys and their kids used their powers to help out. They were on a roll destroying all those robots. It lasted for a while til Ms Ribble kicked the head off of the last robot and they all breathed heavy. "Ok. That should do it." Ms Ribble panted. But it was cut short when they see Poopypants in his robo-suit and went straight to the heroes. "Well well. So you little numbskulls think you can stop me and my partners? Well your wrong. Because now I will stop you from ruining our plans. And that starts with you two boys!" Poopypants shouted pointing at George and Harold. "We beaten you once before and we can darn sure do it again!" Harold said determined. "Oh really now? Well if you really have a wish to be beaten then I got no problem applying. Let's do this!!" Poopypants replied. His suit had spikes appear on his ankles, his shoulders and his rists. He then growled at the heroes and they did the same thing. And they decided to active their magic and prepared to fight. Then Poopypants ran into battle and everyone got ready to face him. The battle started off with the Royal Sisters combining their magic and blasted Poopypants in the chest which sent him rolling back and crashed into a building. Then he came out of the rubble and tried blasting them with lasers. The sisters created a shield around them and the lasers reflected back. Then Captain Underpants flew above him and shot unlimited underwear at him and they hit him in the face! "Oh come on!! Not that again!" Poopypants complained. "Oh there's more where that came from!" Captain Underpants said as he continued shooting more underwear at him. Fed up Poopypants jumped in the air and tried grabbing him. But every chance he had Captain Underpants dodged. This angered Poopypants. "Grr!!! Why is it that this naked man is tough to beat?!" Poopypants asked angry. "Never underestimate his abilities Poopypants! And we got something for you too!" Harold said. The boys flew in the air and were ready to stop Poopypants. First Harold used his rings and blasted Poopypants in the face covering him in rainbow paint. Then George used his rings and levatated bits of the destroyed robots and made metal fists and had them aimed at him. They punched him everywhere on his suit and even one got him in the face making a tooth fly out. "Oww! Ok I seriously didn't expect you boys to have powers. But even so you still won't stop me." Poopypants replied. "Oh really? Then try this on for size!" Lyra shouted. She used her magic and charged up her horn and blasted a HUGE beam at Poopypants causing him to be electrocuted and some bits exploded out his suit. Including the door to the circuits. He got up and growled furious at her. "Oh now you're going down pony girl!!" Poopypants shouted. He came running towards her but Ms Ribble used her hair to trip him and punch his face at the same time. Then the Royal Sisters blasted a beam of combined magic and shocked him bad. Poopypants shook his head and tried punching them only for Captain Underpants to come flying down lifting him in the air and dropped him as him fell on his face first. He groaned as he got up. "Haha! Now prepare to face the justice of all that is pre shrunk and cottony!" Captain Underpants replied. He then used his unlimited underwear and shot multiple pairs at Poopypants hitting him in the face. He tried blasting him with him with own laser tech but he dodged every blast and shot another pair of underwear at him. "Ok that's disgusting!" Poopypants yelled. "If you think that's gross then get a whiff of this!" Mr Meaner shouted. He jumped and landed in front of Poopypants and sprayed him with stinky gas again. He coughed violently and Ms Ribble used her hair and gave him another punch and slammed him on the ground face first. "Ok this is starting to get annoying!" Poopypants yelled. Then while he wasn't looking Color Love and Daring Flight took the opportunity to come in and did something to stun him more. First Color Love used his magic to create a fist under Poopypants, then Daring got in the fist and with Color Love giving the signal he punched Poopypants in the nuts and he was sent flying and landed on the ground yelling in pain. "YEOWIE!!!!! MY NUTS!!! THEY HURT!! OWW!!!" Poopypants yelled in pain. "And now to finish this off! Izzy? Wanna do the honors?" George asked. "It be my pleasure since he doesn't care about friendship." Izzy answered. So she actived her horn and blasted her magic in the circuitry and the suit began sparking, and smoke was coming out meaning it was about to explode. "No!! How could this be happening?!" Poopypants yelled. "You should have never underestimate our powers Poopypants!" Harold replied. "You already said that! And that's the stupidest thing that you can possibly say!" Poopypants said. Right after he said that the suit couldn't contain it anymore and it exploded with bits of the suit flying everywhere. Then they heard screaming as Poopypants came crashing down all smoked up and bruised. Then he saw the heroes surrounding him with angry looks on their faces. "You're finished Poopypants. You're suit is destroyed and we will stop your goons from separating Equestria." Luna said. Then she used her magic and placed Poopypants in cuffs and the heroes took him and a guard placed him in a cage where he will wait til they're ready to take him in Tartarus. "Man. Alast. The final failure for Professor Poopypants." He moaned. "Well with Poopypants taken care of we still have to stop Melvin and Opaline." Celestia said. "She's right. Come everyone! We shall head in the castle and stop those evildoers!! Tra la laaaaa!!" Captain Underpants declared. So everyone headed in the castle and from the balcony Melvin looked extremely pissed. And then he saw the heroes work of his robots destroyed again and was really upset. "What?! How is this possible?! This shouldn't have happened a second time!!" Melvin shouted. "Relax Melvin. Even though they did destroy your robots I was rather impressed with the invention you built." Opaline said looking at the creation. It was a two-headed dragon like tank. "Well thank you. I call it the Double Trouble Dragon 3000. And I equipped a magic sucker and different weapons to separate the tribes and rule Equestria." Melvin explained. "Very impressive. And since we will use their magic against the heroes I suppose that I do need a king beside me." Opaline flirted. "Me? A king? But I thought you didn't want me flirting with you?" Melvin thought. "That was temporary. But now that I see you as a guy who wants to take something back I have no issue with you flirting. Besides I was only pretending to hate it anyways." Opaline explained. Then to the Mane Six's shock they saw Opaline kiss him on the cheek and they cringed at that sight. Melvin however was flattered. "Oh! My tha...you little sneak. That is clever." Melvin admitted. "Well maybe after when we completed our plan maybe we can get married and I will have a king beside me. What do you say dear?" Opaline asked. "You know what? That is a great idea so let's do that. But after we stop George and Harold along with all their friends." Melvin said. "Since my invention is complete I said it's time to bring it too life and once we power it with the magic then all harmony will soon be extinct." Melvin and Opaline smirked evily at each other think about the same thing. Let us hope that the gang with defeat the two and save Equestria once more.
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-10T01:28:44+00:00
2024-02-10T16:24:50+00:00
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With the heroes they all went in the castle and ran fast as they could to the throne room. Melvin and Opaline were finished putting the final adjustments on the invention and surprisingly hugged each other. Then suddenly they saw the doors bust open and the heroes came in with angry looks on their faces. But Melvin just smirked. "Well well well. If it isn't George and Harold. Five years I waited for this day. The day of revenge." Melvin said. "Melvin. I see you haven't changed one bit since your last defeat. Clearly cause you are too stubborn to understand friendship." Harold replied. "Who needs friends when I have intelligence? That's all I really need! And now that I got it back I will put you and your friends out of your misery!" Melvin yelled. "Now now. Take a deep breath and calm down. We will get rid of those heroes. Besides think about what will happen when you become my king." Opaline said calming him down. "King? Wait are you dating her?!" Sunny asked. "Dude that is so wrong! You don't even know the first thing about love!" Mr Meaner said disgusted. The both blushed heavy hearing that. "Whoa! Hang on! We are so not dating! Were not even boyfriend and girlfriend!" Melvin reasoned. "Yeah. Even though he did some harmless flirting on me that doesn't mean we are together. But if you really want to know then I'll explain. I may have pretended to not enjoy the flirting but only cause no pony showed me respect back then. Melvin was the only one who did. And once we separate the tribes and steal every last ounce of magic from Equestria we will get married and become the new rulers." Opaline explained. "That is so not happening Opaline! You won't win!" Sunny shouted. "Oh really? Well then try to stop us!!" Melvin said. He pressed a button and started the process of sucking the Mane Six's magic into Melvin's invention. George and Harold flew and used their powers to stun Melvin. Harold blasted rainbow beams at him and with each hit he got covered in rainbow paint. Then George mind controlled his head and made him punch himself in the face a few times. The future Mane Six were busy with Opaline as they proceeded to weaken her when they used their own abilities and magic to weaken her down. Melvin saw that and growled. "Oh you are so not gonna beat her up on my watch!!" Melvin said. He got George and Harold off him and ran towards Opaline. But Mr Meaner jumped in front of him and sprayed him in the face with stinky gas. Then Ms Ribble used her hair to wedgie him and slammed him back and forth bruising his face really bad. When he recovered he groaned a little. "Ok. Not bad. You definitely improved the last time we fought. But even so you still won't stop me from getting my revenge." Melvin determined. Then he got zapped with magic and he fell down. Turns out Izzy was the one who did this. "I say you should really be taught a lesson in friendship. Cause you are a real bad boy who needs to be taught a lesson." Izzy said. Melvin tried to get up but then the Royal Sisters combined their magic and blasted him multiple times over and over til Melvin couldn't take it. He got up and charged at the sisters but they flew and he ran into a tank instantly shattering it. "Ow! Come on man!" Melvin groaned. Then he heard a whistle and saw Mr Meaner making faces at him. He growled and charged at him but Meaner dodged and shattered another tank. Then Meaner threw him into a third tank! Opaline saw Melvin getting hurt and tried to help him but Ribble's hair grabbed her and slammed her into the forth and fifth tanks over and over til they both shattered. "Ow. Ok I didn't know that you were serious about stopping us." Opaline groaned. "Yeah. And this isn't fair! I can't think straight with my head aching so bad from those crashes!" Melvin complained. "Yoo hoo! Over here you stupid bully!!" Lyra shouted. Melvin growled once more and charged after Lyra. She smirked and jumped out of the way and Melvin shattered the last tank and he groaned in pain from the impact. "Looks like you got yourself a extremely bad headache idiot." Bon Bon smirked. "Ugh. Ow. Ok I'm done playing around with you. You may have destroyed the tanks and stopped any more of their magic from being drained. But I have enough to power my Double Trouble Dragon 3000. And now the real torture begins." Melvin said evily. "Yes and now to witness the end of Equestria forever!" Opaline said. Using her magic she made the Double Trouble Dragon 3000 grow in size and the duo hopped in their seats. Melvin was in the red dragon head and Opaline was in the purple dragon head. Melvin pressed a button and blasted a beam of red energy at the wall causing a huge hole in the wall. Then Opaline flicked a switch causing the tail to hit the Mane Six and they hit another wall and fell unconscious. Everyone gasped seeing that. "TWILIGHT!! GIRLS!!" Everyone shouted. "HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! HOW DO YOU LIKE ME NOW?!?!" Melvin yelled. "Calm down Melvin. Save that energy for when we destroy Equestria and create walls to separate the tribes." Opaline said. "Sorry Opaline. But anyways! Hope you enjoy a separated Equestria when we get finished! Because no one will ever be friends again when we finish them off! So long losers!!" Melvin said. So the Double Trouble Dragon 3000 rolled out of the castle and was heading in the direction that the rest of Equestria was and everyone saw him began his evil work with Opaline. Then Captain Underpants got furious and knew what had to be done. "Everyone! I got an announcement to make!" Captain Underpants said. "What is it Captain Underpants? I hope it's something to stop the duo." Hitch hoped. "Oh it is sidekick! Melvin may have his intelligence back but the one thing he doesn't have is friends by his side! And I know he thinks that intelligence is the only thing he needs to get what he wants but he's wrong!! So my fellow sidekicks we must all work together to destroy the Double Trouble Dragon 3000 and defeat Melvin and Opaline! We will fight for truth, justice, and all that is pre-shrunk and cottony! For we are the Heroes of Friendship!!!" Captain Underpants declared. Everyone smiled hearing the captain's words and nodded in agreement. "You are so right Captain Underpants. As long as were together we will defeat Melvin and Opaline and save Equestria from being separated!!" Celestia smiled. "We will all join in the fight for our friends..." Sunny started. "Our families...." Izzy continued. "The future..." Misty added. "And for Equestria!!" Everyone said in unison. "Then let's get out there and stop Melvin!!" Mr Meaner agreed. "Tra la laaaa!" Captain Underpants said as he and the others headed out of the castle and went to stop the duo and prevent Equestria from being separated. Can they stop Melvin and Opaline or will all of Equestria become a separated land and darkness consume them all? We'll find out soon enough.
Big Imagination E
550804
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
complete
-1
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-11T04:15:50+00:00
2024-02-11T04:15:49+00:00
82
With Melvin and Opaline they were in the Double Trouble Dragon 3000 and they were causing chaos by blowing up buildings, creating walls and throwing the different ponies into them making them separated, and Melvin actived the magic sucker to steal the magic of Equestria. All the ponies were panicking and worried about everything that is happening and wanted Melvin to stop. But he refused. "HAHAHAHAHAHA!! There's no way I'm stopping anytime soon!!" Melvin said. "Yes! Fear us! And bow before your new king and queen!!" Opaline added. "Hahaha!! There's no escape from us!! You will respect us and we will take over all of Equestria once the tribes are all separated and no magic is left!!!" Melvin shouted. Suddenly the two got hit in the back of their heads with magic. They groaned in pain and saw that Celestia and Luna were the ones that hit them. But it wasn't just them. Alongside them are George, Harold, Lyra, Bon Bon, Mr Meaner, Ms Ribble, The Future Mane Six, and of course Captain Underpants. "Stand down Melvin!!" George said. "Oh great. It's the dumb heroes again! Don't you idiots have nothing better to do them trying to hunt us down?" Melvin asked bluntly. "No way Melvin! Now it's time for you to surrender and return the magic of Equestria to everyone! "Why don't you make me?! Cause there's no way I'm going to return it! And after me and Opaline finish that we will be king and queen!!" Melvin shouted. "I don't think so Melvin. If you're not going to return it then we shall make you!" Misty said. "Is that so? Ok then if you really want the magic back then try to stop us!! But spoliers: we win!!" Melvin replied. "You lose one way or another! Now let's do this!!" Opaline said. Then Melvin pressed a green button and spikes appeared on the necks of the dragons. Then different weapons appeared all over the Double Trouble Dragon 3000. The duo growled and the heroes took their battle positions and got ready to fight them. "DIE HEROES!!!" Melvin shouted. Then they all charged into battle and when the villlains were gonna squish them the whole scene froze as George and Harold came in front of the readers. "Freeze! The following scenes contain stuff that may be a little violent to kids. So violent that it’s not something for them to see. But we can only show it using a technology known as Flip-o-rama!!" George announced. Then Harold got his notebook with the pictures for Flip-o-rama. "Ok so in order to defeat the Double Trouble Dragon 3000 the boys first gave Melvin and Opaline a really bad headache from stomping on their heads." Harold started making the picture move. "Then they used their powers and hit the both of them in the face." George added. "Sunny and her friends used their abilities to make the tank slower and jam the wheels." Harold replied. "Melvin got so angry he tried blasting them. But luckily Izzy used her magic to make a shield so she can protect them from the laser." George continued. "Frustrated Opaline used her own magic to destroy the shield and attack the future Mane Six." Harold said. "But before she could Mr Meaner sneaked behind her and delivered a stinky surprise!" George continued. "And then Color Love and Daring Flight helped by summoning an army of flying fists into their faces!" Harold yelled. "Whoa dude. Calm down. I know that this is Flip-o-rama but you gotta relax a little." George reminded him. "Sorry. Anyways the two villains didn't realize it but their plan was working perfectly. But Melvin and Opaline wouldn't back down so the team needed to figure out how to destroy the tank. But to keep things dramatic Melvin used a shield to protect itself." Harold said as he flipped the last page ending the Flip-o-rama and back to the fight scene. "Ok. Good Flip-o-rama boys. But we need to stop Melvin and Opaline!" Luna said. "Sorry Luna! Were coming to help!" Harold answered. So everyone tried firing all their powers at the Double Trouble Dragon 3000. But due to the shield that was surrounding the contraption they couldn't effect it in any way. Melvin smirked seeing this. "HAHAHAHAHAHA!! Having a little trouble heroes? Well that's because my shield will stay up forever til you are completely tired out!" Melvin said. "And now how's about a little laser beam to finish you off heroes?" Opaline asked. Opaline pressed a button and actived the laser blasting multiple beams at them but they dodged and while they did that Harold noticed that with every beam it draws power away from the shield meaning it was disabling them. "George! I have an idea!!" Harold said. "What is it?" George asked. "Since the tank is shielded guess what? Every time they blast a laser it draws power away from the shield meaning it was disabling them. All we need to do is distract them long enough to get the shield to come down and then we can attack them!" Harold explained. "Great plan!! Everyone! Keep distracting them! We gotta keep at it to bring down that shield!!!" George shouted. "Were all ahead of you!" Sunny replied. So everyone did according to their plan. George and Harold flew straight in front of them and made funny faces angering Melvin. He tried shooting lasers at them but they dodged. Next the Royal Sisters and Captain Underpants all shot magic and underwear at the duo which really angered them. They both blasted lasers at them but instantly dodged making the shield weaker by the minute. Next the wives and kids teamed up and made more funny faces and Lyra shot her magic at them. Melvin was starting to get irritated and tried blasting them but like the last few they dodged too. And after that the future Mane Six were the last heroes that distracted them. They got Melvin's attention and he tried blasting them and once that happened the shield was finally down. The kids snuck behind the Double Trouble Dragon 3000 when they weren't looking and opened a door revealing the circuitry. "Alright Color Love. Go for it." Daring whispered. He nodded in agreement and before Melvin could see him he used his magic and electrocuted the insides of the mech and it started to short circuit out. Melvin and Opaline were starting to worry. "No!! What are you doing?! You're ruining everything!!" Melvin yelled. Then suddenly the tank couldn't hold it and it exploded into bits. The magic came out and it returned restoring Equestria and got rid of the walls as well as returning to it's rightful owners. We can hear Melvin and Opaline screaming as they fell from the sky and the bits landed on the ground and the two landed hard and they groaned in pain. They struggled to get up and they saw the heroes approach them with angry looks. "Uh hehehe. George and Harold. Look this obviously wasn't what I wanted to turn out. But what do you say we let bygones be bygones?" Melvin replied nervously. "After everything you done? You still don't deserve that kind of mercy." Captain Underpants said. "No no no! Come on! You can't leave me behind!" Melvin replied. "Melvin Sneedly. You expect us to give you mercy after everything that you done? You ruined lives with the Storm King and now you were planning to destroy the future by separating Equestria. You will never receive any mercy because of what you done. And you will never have your intelligence again. As for Opaline your punishment will be to have your magic drained and the two of you along with Poopypants be locked in Tartarus forever." Celestia said. Then Harold used his rings to create the same device from last time and hooked Melvin up to it. Then he pressed the button and the machine was actived. It started to drain all the intelligence from his brain as he yelled in pain. Once all of his intelligence was drained out of him Harold unhooked him and threw him on the floor. He groaned but then he understand that he is not a genius anymore. Everything science and mathematics his now completely like a foreign language to him. Then he did the same thing with Opaline and drained her magic and once that was done he held the two tanks in both hands. "Ow. My head hurts." Melvin groaned. "It's over Melvin. And to make sure you don't get it back I will destroy the tanks." Harold said. He used his rings to make a bomb on the tanks and when he threw it in the air Celestia blasted it with her magic and exploded. Then the drops came down and landed on the ground and were absorbed into the grass. "NO!!!" Melvin yelled. "My magic! Why?!" Opaline cried. Then Mr Meaner punched both of them in the face and whistled signaling the guards to come and arrest the two and threw them in the cage. And before they left the two woke up and worried then saw the heroes once more. "Melvin." Bon Bon said. "Oh. Alright you stopped me. I guess I deserved all that. I have some regrets to say the least." Melvin said. "We hope this time you learned a lesson Melvin. This didn't have to happen like this." George replied. "And you will spend the rest of your life in Tartarus forever with your goons til you can learn how to be friendly and not be a smartass." Luna added. Melvin lowered his head in disappointment and the guards took all three villains to jail where they hopefully will learn the error of their ways. When they were gone Celestia looked at the boys and smiled. "George and Harold. You did it again. You saved Equestria and stopped Melvin from succeeding. But I think we should head back to the castle and help Twilight and her friends." Celestia replied. "Right you are Celestia. After all she will be Equestria's new ruler." Harold agreed. "Hey Celestia? Can we stay for the orientation? We really want to see Twilight become the new ruler." Izzy asked. "Of course you can. You helped so it's only fair." Celestia answered. The future Mane Six smiled hearing Celestia's answer and everyone all headed to the castle to check on Twilight and her friends to see if they were all okay.
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550804
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Bon-Bon,Lyra,Main 6,Other,Crossover,Adventure,Comedy,Slice of Life,My Little Pony: A New Generation,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Captain Underpants and the Outrageous Plot of Opaline
Captain Underpants and his crew face one last villain. But she's the most deadliest one of all. Opaline. And she has a sidekick.
complete
-1
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<p>The crew are back! George and Harold are officially 19 years old and are raising their kids. But an old enemy of theirs returns and teamed up with the most evil unicorn from the future. Opaline. Can they stop them or will all of Equestria be separated forever?</p>
everyone
2024-02-12T02:06:28+00:00
2024-02-12T02:06:28+00:00
144
After the events of what happened with the trio everyone was gathered at Canterlot for Twilight's coronation. There were dragons, yaks, ponies, and possibly any mythological creature you can think of. Heck even the future Mane Six took their seats and were enjoying the festivities. And let's not forget that George and Harold are here with their wives and kids. Along with Krupp, Mr Meaner and Ms Ribble. After a few minutes we see Princess Celestia and Princess Luna come out of the balcony and prepared the coronation. "Citizens of Equestria and beyond!" Celestia started. The crowd cheering, the yaks were stomping, and the dragons were breathing fire. "My sister and I have ruled this land for quite some time, but even we know that change eventually comes to us all. And though we know it can be unsettling, it's as natural as the rising and setting of the sun and the moon. Both of which my sister and I feel confident leaving in the hooves of the pony who will come after us." Celestia continued. Twilight was a little nervous as she whimpered a little. And Rarity finished putting her in her special dress and smiled at her friend. "You look amazing. Ooh! I almost forgot!" Rarity said as she gave Twilight her the royal sash which contained Twilight's cutie mark. "And so without further ado, I give you the new ruler of Equestria - Princess Twilight Sparkle!" Celestia finished. Everyone cheered and saw Twilight coming out and waved to everyone. "Thank you everyone for being here. I just wanted to say that this is truly a day no one will forget. When I first arrived in Ponyville I felt like a outcast. But luckily I managed to make six friends and we vanquished the likes of Nightmare Moon to prevent Equestria from being covered in eternal night. Then as time went by we met George and Harold. Two boys who made comics and surprisingly brought their hero Captain Underpants to life. Back in Ohio they started doing heroic deeds by taking down an evil baby genius named Dr. Diaper, stopped an army of talking toilets, defeated a wicked wedgie woman, stopped a guy named Poopypants from wiping out laughter, and even took down a Homework Hydra and so much more. And when they arrived in Equestria they helped me and my friends stop more villains like King Sombra, Queen Chrysalis, Lord Tirek, The Storm King, The Dazzlings and even Melvin Sneedly. All those villains they defeated proved that they are worthy of being heroes. And my first deed is that I pronounce George and Harold along with their friends and wives as The Heroes of Friendship and Imagination!!" Twilight started. Everyone cheered and praised the boys and their friends. "Now before I get passed the role as the new ruler of Equestria why don't you all take a look at George and Harold's story on how they first arrived in Equestria?" Twilight asked. The crowd cheered and all three princesses combined their magic and showed everyone the story when they first arrived in Equestria. It started with George and Harold as little kids in kindergarten, then it showed them in 4th grade before they came here. Then we see them in their superhero costumes with Captain Underpants taking down the many villains they faced over the years. After all that they cheered and the sister merged their crowns and placed the new crown on Twilight's head. After the coronation we see George and Harold enjoying the after party with their wives, their kids and friends and the future Mane Six. "I can't believe that Twilight is the new ruler of Equestria now. I'm so happy for her." Sunny smiled. "Us too." George agreed. Then they saw the Mane Six coming towards the group with some stallions they know. And even a creature with different animal parts. "Hey boys. I gotta say that was some darn good hero work you did." Soarin said. "Thanks Soarin. And are you holding Rainbow's hand?" Harold asked. "We sure are. We are dating now. And I know it looks like it was rushed but after what Rainbow did to help you guys stop those villains she has stolen my heart." Soarin explained. "And it isn't just me. All the others found lovers." Rainbow pointed out. The boys saw that Rainbow wasn't lying. Twilight was with a Changeling named Throax, Spike was lucky to have Rarity and Applejack as his lovers, and Fluttershy was with the being known as Discord, and Pinkie was with a stallion named Cheese Sandwich. George and Harold went to Thorax and shook his hand. "Nice to meet you George and Harold. Twilight told me all about you." Thorax replied. "And it's a pleasure to meet you Thorax." Harold said. So for the rest of the night the boys and their friends were getting to know their lovers and shared a good time. After the party is was night and the future Mane Six returned to their timeline and Twilight moved to Canterlot Castle to begin her new life. And since her old castle was still in tact George and Harold decided to move in and their wives were so happy to live there. We cut to two years later and in the castle we see Harold and Bon Bon staring at the night sky. "Honey?" Bon Bon asked. "Yes Bonnie?" Harold said. "Do you think that Twilight will still keep in touch with us? After when she became a princess?" She asked. "Oh sweetie of course she will. If I remember Twilight she would never forget us. Especially her Heroes of Friendship and Imagination." Harold replied. Bon Bon smiled and hugged her husband. Then they saw the door open and revealed to be George, Lyra and both the kids coming in with their PJ's on. "Taking a trip down Memory Lane I see." George said. "Yeah. After everything we did to save Equestria I say there's nothing like a blast from the past." Harold said. Everyone laughed at his joke. "Alright. Well it's bedtime. Come on you two. Gotta get some sleep." George replied. "Ok dad." Daring said. "Yes Uncle George." Color agreed. So George led the two boys to bed and after he did that the boys and their wives went to their bedroom and allowed the girls to crawl into bed first. Then the two boys crawled into the beds and soon enough they all fell fast asleep smiling and dreaming about what their future will lie in store for them. And thus ends this series of the greatest superhero that George and Harold created. The Amazing Captain Underpants. The End.
Bad Dragon
550808
1
Misty,Opaline,Dark,Drama,Porn,My Little Pony: A New Generation,Non-consensual,Sex
To Opaline, With Love
Opaline is sentenced to public service for her crimes.
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20
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<p>Opaline has always been a mother figure to Misty. And not just that, she made her adopted daughter connect with her even on an intimate level.</p><p>Misty pities her mother but still decides to pour all her feelings toward Opaline into the upcumming Hearts and Hooves celebration.</p><p>It will be just the two of them together for the holiday <span style="font-size:0.5em">besides a dozen stallions fucking the shit out of Opaline.</span></p><hr/><p>This story participates in the <a href="/group/198529/incest-is-wincest/thread/531809/hearts-hooves-day-contest" rel="nofollow"><i>Hearts &amp; Hooves Heartbreak</i></a> writing contest.</p>
mature
2024-02-03T19:27:26+00:00
2024-02-06T23:46:32+00:00
403
As I galloped along the bustling streets of Maretime Bay, I felt a surge of joy and gratitude. I had finally found my place in the world, where I could be myself and pursue my dreams. It was hard to imagine that this was the same me who had spent miserable years in the castle with Opaline, the cruel and snobbish princess. She had made my life a living hell, keeping me from my true destiny. She had isolated me from any potential friends and made me doubt my worth and abilities. She promised me a cutie mark, yet she was the sole reason why I didn't have one for so long. It seemed like an eternity ago. I leaned back and smacked my cutie-mark-adorned butt. “But things change.” Yet, one thing stayed the same: my feelings for my adopted mother Opaline. And there she was in my sight near the friendship tree, livelier than ever. Her whole body squirmed around as if she were dancing, and I felt inclined to take her for a ride myself. “Mummy, what are those stallions doing to that alicorn?” A passing foal turned to her mother. I slowed my fast pace, recognizing the filly. She was Peach Fizz, one of my friend Pipp’s fans, a Pippsqueak. She reminded me of myself when I was little, relying on my mother for the answers of the world. “They’re fucking her,” the mother replied in a serene tone and hinted for them to go closer to the lively exhibit. We walked in parallel. If somepony were to see us from afar it would look almost as if I was a part of the family, taking a morning stroll. The filly’s mother Melba Blossom was very unlike my adopted mother to her child. Opaline would often lose patience with me and punish me for asking stupid questions. “What’s fucking?” The child persisted. “It looks as if they’re hurting her.” “No, no, no,” her mother corrected her, but without beating the defenseless thing as Opaline would have if I ever persisted in my questions. “The stallions are teaching her a lesson.” “I’m glad I don’t have to put up with so many teachers,” the filly smiled at her fortune. Her mother smiled in turn, happy for her daughter’s well-being. “Continue to be a good student at school, and you won’t need any extra lessons.” “Is she still learning how to speak?” The curious filly kept asking questions, almost making me jealous of her vast freedoms that I hadn’t had at the castle. “It sounds like she’s drowning.” “That’s only because her throat is full of dick,” the mother educated her child. “She’s learning how to give and how to receive.” Peach Fizz pressed her eyebrows together. “It looks weird. I don’t get it.” Her mother glanced at me with just one eye. It dawned on me that I had instinctively matched my pace with theirs which must have looked super creepy. I turned my head to her and offered an awkward smile in return. Miss Blossom stopped in her tracks. “Misty, you were practically Opaline’s daughter, right? Why don’t you explain to my child what’s going on with your mother.” I gulped and stopped, yet kept trotting with my legs on a spot. My instinct was to lie and say that I was in a hurry to excuse myself, but that was the old Misty! “Sure thing.” I turned to them and sat down on the pavement. The new Misty doesn’t run away! “Yay, story time!” Peach Fizz jumped in Melba Blossom’s lap as she set down facing me. “Long ago, in a time immemorial, my adopted mother Opaline came to Equestria together with her sisters Luna and Celestia. They were on a mission to spread unity among ponies. Unlike the two benevolent rulers, Opaline wanted to establish order with harsh words and beatings.” I caressed one foreleg with the other as my gaze shied away from them. “That wasn’t nice of her!” Peach Fizz broke the sudden silence. “You’re right…” I looked back at her. “That wasn’t nice of her at all. Her sisters and all the other ponies said the same thing. But Opaline always thought that she was the only one in the right and everypony else was below her. But that’s not the case, is it?” “No, it isn’t.” The filly pointed a hoof behind me and said, “Two ponies are on top of her.” “That’s called mounting,” the mother educated her daughter. I didn’t have to look back to know the reality. I trusted the filly and my fellow ponies, unlike the times I only trusted my mother. “Opaline was wrong, and they showed her how wrong she was by banishing her. But she didn’t learn. She came back and was the same. So they banished her again, that time to a castle surrounded by a magic barrier she couldn’t break.” The mother interjected. “But then somepony created a doorway for her to terrorize everypony again.” I bowed my head. “And now she’s learning a lesson not to be bad.” “Will she learn this time around?” Peach Fizz asked. I looked up at her to see if it was me she was asking, but her mother Melba Blossom answered for me while staring directly into my eyes, “She better.” “I already know that I shouldn’t be bad.” The filly thumped herself on the chest. “With so many teachers, I bet she’ll learn it too.” “I wish so, too…” I sighed, bowing my head again. “Okay, Little Inquisitor, time to go now.” I just sat there, even after I heard them stand up and turn to the main street. Their voices got quieter and quieter as they gained distance from me. “Mummy, can I teach Opaline the lesson too since I already know it?” the filly kept up with her questions. “You don’t have a dick, Fizz.” “I can use my horn instead,” the filly persisted. “I guess that could work,” her mother replied. “Maybe when you’re older.” “Older?” the filly continued. “How much time does she need? Opaline must be a really bad student if she’ll still be learning basic stuff by that point.” “But I, on the other hoof, am not a bad student,” I whispered to myself. “And my mother can learn too; she just needs a good tutor.”
Bad Dragon
550808
2
Misty,Opaline,Dark,Drama,Porn,My Little Pony: A New Generation,Non-consensual,Sex
To Opaline, With Love
Opaline is sentenced to public service for her crimes.
complete
20
55
<p>Opaline has always been a mother figure to Misty. And not just that, she made her adopted daughter connect with her even on an intimate level.</p><p>Misty pities her mother but still decides to pour all her feelings toward Opaline into the upcumming Hearts and Hooves celebration.</p><p>It will be just the two of them together for the holiday <span style="font-size:0.5em">besides a dozen stallions fucking the shit out of Opaline.</span></p><hr/><p>This story participates in the <a href="/group/198529/incest-is-wincest/thread/531809/hearts-hooves-day-contest" rel="nofollow"><i>Hearts &amp; Hooves Heartbreak</i></a> writing contest.</p>
mature
2024-02-04T20:11:05+00:00
2024-02-06T23:46:51+00:00
239
There were three lines of stallions. One in front of Opaline and two behind her. It seemed she’d stay in Maretime Bay for quite a bit longer before the Togetherness Clop Tree would transfer her to the next node. First to my hometown Bridlewood and then to the node of my own creation at Zepper Heights. I felt a bit anxious when I approached Opaline. Skipping the line felt a bit inconsiderate to others, but everypony knew me and my relationship with my adopted mother. I wouldn’t have a turn with her this time around; I just wanted to talk to her. Nopony would have to be bothered by my presence. Approaching her from the side, I brushed a hoof against her white mane. It was her natural color, but the vast amount of cum sticking to it made it whiter than ever. Her eyes were rolled up and she hadn’t yet noticed me. I nuzzled my mouth in her ear and softly whispered, “Hi, mom.” “Gh‽” Opaline uttered and all her muscles tensed up even more than they already were. Her eye came into view. She tried to focus her big pupil on me but couldn’t. It darted all around, only stopping on me for brief moments. “How have you been, mom?” I patronizingly caressed her head. “Ghh?” she said and quickly added, “Oghhh! Ghhh… Eh! Ahh! Ghhh!” “I’m glad to hear it.” I turned around and sat down, leaning my head on her foreleg. It kept twitching under my mane. I closed my eyes, imagining that she was caressing me. She had actually caressed me countless times for years. Often several times per day. But it was always for her pleasure, never mine. This time around, however, it was for my pleasure alone. “Agh! Ghh! Oghh!” she continued. “I’ve been great, actually,” I said without bothering to open my eyes. “My actual father Alphabittle Blossomforth offered that I stay with him at the same place I used to live in before you… took me in.” My lips tightened at the memory, but I kept up the smile. “Instead, I decided to live with Alicorn Sunny Starscout.” I turned my head and looked up at her. “You know, the one you hate the most.” Her eye closed shut. A tear drifted from it down her cheeks, but that was nothing unusual. The river of tears had already formed a moist canyon under her eyes. Her face looked like a painted costume for the Nightmare Night celebration even though it’s been a long time since she wore any of her precious makeup. “Oh, don’t feel jelly.” I caressed her neck with a hoof and she choked even more since it got pressured from within and without at the same time. “You got what you wanted as well. Just look at it all.” I waved my hooves around. “Isn’t this place just magical?” I looked up at her, but her eye was still closed. “You always wanted magic.” She tried to thump with a hoof, but the tree root that was tightly wrapped around her leg dampened it to the point that the movement was hardly noticeable. “The magic is evolving every day,” I explained further. It was so nice talking without getting interrupted. “This tree used to represent togetherness. It still does, but now it also represents pleasure. You’re at the forefront of this magical evolution. At first, the tree only held you in its roots, but it wouldn’t really be a Together Tree if it didn’t connect you with others. And you sure get around a lot nowadays, don’t you, mom? When the lines empty, you’ll get transported to Briddlewood and meet my father. He’ll probably be the first in line again. I bet he’s already waiting for you. Though, I’m not sure if you’ve seen him before, even though you know him intimately. He’s the one who’s always full of endurance tea and keeps dryfucking you in the ass. It’s a good thing that you’re an Alicorn and instantly heal yourself or else he’d probably fuck you to death. He still hasn’t forgiven you for taking me, his daughter, away from him. That’s why all the angry sex. I just thought you’d want to know.” What I said must have encouraged Sprout Cloverleaf who was plowing her ass at that moment. He put all his weight on Opaline and drilled into her sphincter like a pecking bird. “Unlike you, mom, everypony has already forgiven me. I’m a valued member of society now. Then again, so are you, I guess.” I smiled. She was definitely no longer a hermit that I lived with for years. She tried to wiggle about, but the tree vines held her in place. Sprout’s own plant tentacles assisted them, keeping the receiving mare still and secure. “The magic is really strong in this place. Even I can control the vines, and I’m not even an Earth pony.” I tapped at the ground and a Together Tree’s vine sprang forth, climbing up Opaline’s leg, around her neck and tightening. I kept constraining her blood flow, showing Opaline the power of magic she craved so much. When her body started to go limp, I let go, and the vine retracted. “You’re the only pony cut off from the magic, even from your own, but you still get to experience it second-hoof by the process of sharing. You know, the thing you never did. I was only ever allowed to touch the junk in my room. Everything else was yours...” Hitch Trailblazer who was doing her head at the time finally cummed in her stomach and pulled out with a pop. She bowed her head and coughed then threw up cum on the ground. I turned around and tapped her on her back. “There, there.” “No littering!” Hitch ordered, grabbed her horn and forced her muzzle into the mess she made on the ground. “Be a good pony and clean it up.” Another tear drifted down her muzzle, yet she didn’t resist as she had used to. She had learned not to cross the sheriff. Her tongue slowly drifted out and licked the white mess on the ground. I leaned down to her and watched her lick. “Mom, Hearts and Hooves Day for intimate couples is coming in a week. Given that I had to make you orgasm daily and for years, I think we more than qualify. Is there anything you wish for our special day? Anything at all?” Her eye finally managed to lock on me, even though her head still jerked back and forth from the shoves in her pussy from Rob under her and Sprout’s barrage in her ass. She retracted her tongue and quickly whispered with a raspy voice, “Misty, you have to help me. I’m a mess. My throat is killing me… I can’t even speak properly anymore. Can’t even think… All my holes are filled with cum. My coat is more cum than fur, and I only get a shower when it rains. I can’t take this anymore…” “More licking, less talking!” Hitch ordered, and she instantly obeyed. I caressed her head, “You can count on me, mom. I’ll see you in a week with a solution to your problems.” “Hitch?” I turned to him. “Yeah?” he said absently while supervising Opaline. “You’ll take care of my mother in the meantime, won’t you?” “You bet!” After briefly glancing at me, he focused back on Opaline and pushed her snout into the ground. “You missed a spot there, litterer.” After hoof-bumping with him, I was on my way. I was on a mission again, and I only had one week to prepare. “I won’t fail you this time, mom.”
Bad Dragon
550808
3
Misty,Opaline,Dark,Drama,Porn,My Little Pony: A New Generation,Non-consensual,Sex
To Opaline, With Love
Opaline is sentenced to public service for her crimes.
complete
20
55
<p>Opaline has always been a mother figure to Misty. And not just that, she made her adopted daughter connect with her even on an intimate level.</p><p>Misty pities her mother but still decides to pour all her feelings toward Opaline into the upcumming Hearts and Hooves celebration.</p><p>It will be just the two of them together for the holiday <span style="font-size:0.5em">besides a dozen stallions fucking the shit out of Opaline.</span></p><hr/><p>This story participates in the <a href="/group/198529/incest-is-wincest/thread/531809/hearts-hooves-day-contest" rel="nofollow"><i>Hearts &amp; Hooves Heartbreak</i></a> writing contest.</p>
mature
2024-02-05T21:41:57+00:00
2024-02-06T23:47:15+00:00
170
I slept under the Together Tree to be the first in line in the morning. That’s when the pegasi from the Zepper Hights have to go to work and can’t fuck my mom anymore. The sun was already on the horizon. “Any time now,” I said to the fellow ponies who were lining themselves in one line behind me and two lines before me. “I just need a minute with her first. I have a gift for her.” I lifted a black fabric in the air for everypony to see and they nodded in agreement. The community was with me, and I was with them. And soon, my mother would join us. The Together Tree glowed. The earth before us spread and wrapped in roots came forth: Opaline. “Welcome to Maretime Bay again, mom! It seems you had a fun time in Zepper Hights. Pegasi sure can party hard, it seems.” She wailed between coughs. White matter sprayed from her mouth. It also oozed from under her tail in a stream. It almost looked as if she was peeing and shitting sperm. “I’ve got you a gift for the Hearts & Hooves day, mom! I’ve completed the mission you sent me on; everything is ready.” Her head jerked up. “Get me out of here, Misty!” “He-he, good one, mom. You know you deserve this.” She shook her head. “What?” “I got you what you explicitly wished for. I spent all my bits on it, actually, so I expect some gratitude from you.” “Misty, I told you that I can’t take this—” “I know, the sperm on your coat. See? I remember! You want to keep yourself clean, right? And now you can, with this!” I raised the black fabric. Opaline sighed. “Misty, what is that?” “I had a furtight bodysuit made just for you. Well, I didn’t have your measurements, so I just let the tailor take mine instead. But now that I see you here, maybe our proportions aren’t that similar, after all. You’re all fat and bloated from the vast amount of cum you consume. Also way taller than me. But the material is stretchy, so it shouldn’t matter.” I tried to spread the fabric apart, but it didn’t budge. “Hm, that’s quite leathery, actually. It doesn’t stretch. I told the tailor to make it as tough as possible, so you wouldn’t tear it. But I’m sure we can make it work anyway.” “Misty, I’ve lived for two millennia, and never have I worn tight clothes, nor shall I wear them even if I live for ten thousand years more. They’re beneath me. As if I’d tolerate something that would feel like a hundred hooves touching me all over. I’d rather die than wear that atrocity. Such clothes shouldn’t even exist!” “Hey, don’t diss it until you try it!” I stomped a hoof on the ground and the Together Tree responded. Vines sprang forth and closed her toxic mouth. “And I’d think you’d already be used to touches by now.” “Nnngh?” she objected. “Everypony, my mom needs our help!” I threw the furtight bodysuit over Opaline’s back. Her body jerked, but the vines held her so tight that she couldn’t shake it off. Ponies stepped forth. Two of them took the bodysuit and prepared the neck opening. The vines on one of her hind legs retracted and Opaline immediately started kicking with it. Two more strong stallions grabbed the limb while the other two brought the bodysuit to it. I used my magic to guide the material over her leg. I knew it would be a tight fit, but I was still surprised at how much force we all had to apply to make any progress. At some points, I feared that it would be theoretically impossible to drag the thing onto her. Her thrashing didn't help at all, especially when I tried to guide her tail through the hole in the back with my telekinesis. At least her mouth was shut during the process so that I didn’t have to listen to her drama. Hoof by hoof and leg by leg, the black, furtight bodysuit embraced my mother tightly. “Oh, er, I forgot you also have wings. I didn’t tell the tailor to make any holes there so… I guess you’ll just have to fold them under the fabric. But hey, at least they’ll be safe from cum, right? Although, they’re already soaked in sperm underneath so I’m not sure how this will even help in any way…” It took all of our efforts combined to squeeze the bloated pony inside. When we tightened the last strap, sperm oozed under her tail like mayonnaise squeezed from a tube. It was okay, though, because the suit had three holes back there. One for her tail, one for her ass and one for her pussy. There was also a fourth big hole through which her head stuck out. That allowed her to puke sperm through her clenched teeth unimpeded. “And that’s not all, mom. You know how everypony constantly complains that they don’t want to look at your ugly face? It’s why the oral line of ponies is always shorter than the other two.” I started to uncurl the mask that was attached to the suit. “Hm, I’m not sure this will fit. You have such a long face…” Two stallions heard my plea and immediately offered their assistance. As I ordered the vines to release her muzzle, they used all their strength to wrap the tight material over her head and strap it behind her horn. Though her body was clenched by the tight fabric and vines on top of it, her mouth within the mask was free and she immediately put it to use. “Aaa! Too. Tight! Can’t. Breathe! Can’t. See!” “Oh!” I facehooved. “I probably should have told the tailor to make holes for eyes in the mask… But hey, at least now nopony will have to put up with your judgemental gazes. I know I don’t want to. I had enough of them for a lifetime.” “Misty… This isn’t. At all! What I asked for…” “Shh!” I shut her mouth close with a hoof. “I know you said other things as well. I remember. You complained about your throat. At first, I didn’t know what to do about that, so I asked Sunny what she’d do about your throat, and guess what she said?” “Misty!” she spoke through her teeth. “Guess!” I let go of her mouth and playfully smacked her on her snout. “Free me!” “No, that’s not what Sunny said.” I hit her again, harder that time. “She said, and I quote, ‘I’d piss in it until she’d choke’.” “What the fuck‽” “Yeah, I didn’t get it at first, either. But then I figured it out. I asked Izzy for help and we crafted the biggest and thickest strapon ever designed, guaranteed to choke you. The big bulge in front was my idea.” I tapped at the wood between my legs. “As for the piss, well…” I crouched down and started pissing on it. “And… that takes care of the pissing part, now for the choking that should help with training your throat…” “Misty…” she spoke through her teeth again. “Oh, I almost forgot. I brought you yet another gift. You know how you complained that your holes are filled with cum? I know because I remember. I’m not the imbecile you always labeled me as. I thought about your predicament when I was on the toilet and after producing this massive turd, an idea dawned on me. Of course, when I clog the toilet, I use the toilet brush. So I asked Sunny if I could take her toilet brush and she said it’s too dirty and that it’s only good for trash since she already got a new one. And after she threw it out, I took it out of the trash which is okay to do. I know this because my friend Izzy told me so. And here it is.” I showed her my gift wrapped in newspapers. “Oh, right, you can’t see because your eyes are covered. But don’t worry, you can still feel it. The bristles are really stiff, but that’s the whole point, right? You don’t want any cum sticking on the walls of your womb or sphincter. You want to have it scraped off, right? Let me just unwrap it for you.” I tore away the newspapers. “Whew, that’s a lot of wrapping… I didn’t want to dirty myself while carrying the used toilet brush since it had shit all over and grime from the trash. I could have cleaned it, of course, but then I’d have to dry it out or something. It felt like a hustle. And you’d get it dirty anyway, so it wasn’t really worth the effort. “There, for cleaning sperm before engaging my mother.” I offered the toilet brush to the stallion at the ass line. I turned back to Opaline. “Those who fuck you complain about all the sperm in the way as well, so this should prove to be a gift that keeps on giving, not just to you but to those around you as well.”
Bad Dragon
550808
4
Misty,Opaline,Dark,Drama,Porn,My Little Pony: A New Generation,Non-consensual,Sex
To Opaline, With Love
Opaline is sentenced to public service for her crimes.
complete
20
55
<p>Opaline has always been a mother figure to Misty. And not just that, she made her adopted daughter connect with her even on an intimate level.</p><p>Misty pities her mother but still decides to pour all her feelings toward Opaline into the upcumming Hearts and Hooves celebration.</p><p>It will be just the two of them together for the holiday <span style="font-size:0.5em">besides a dozen stallions fucking the shit out of Opaline.</span></p><hr/><p>This story participates in the <a href="/group/198529/incest-is-wincest/thread/531809/hearts-hooves-day-contest" rel="nofollow"><i>Hearts &amp; Hooves Heartbreak</i></a> writing contest.</p>
mature
2024-02-06T23:52:29+00:00
2024-02-15T02:02:31+00:00
174
While the pony in the back was getting Opaline’s tail out of the way, another one crawled underneath her for some dick-in-pussy action. “...Aaand that’s all the gifts I have for you.” I tightened the strap on my strapon. The hard shaft was so long that it dug through the dirt with its tip. “I just have to take care of your throat with my wooden dildo and we’re done.” “Misty… A wooden dildo… That’s the most ridiculous… unusable thing I’ve—” “Oh, just shut up, Opaline!” I lifted her head with a foreleg. “What else will you force me to do before you finally manage to say one nice thing about me and my ideas?” But Opaline did not shut up. In fact, she screamed louder than I’d ever heard her scream as soon as the pony in the back shoved the toilet brush into her ass right to its hilt. I used the prospect of her opened mouth to shove my contraption inside, muffling her scream. I had enough of her yellings for a lifetime, I didn’t need any more of that. With both forehooves, I held her head in place but she still wiggled so much that I had to connect with extra vines to secure her again. The pony who was cleaning her ass with a toilet brush had to do the same. It took a dozen more vines before she was fully immobilized. As a mare, I didn’t have much experience with shoving a dick in somepony’s throat. The bulge simply wouldn’t move forward. It got stuck at the back of her mouth. With vines and forelegs, I rotated her head to move her horn out of the way. With both forehooves secured behind her head and hind hooves digging into the ground, I pushed with all my body forward. Opaline’s immense choking let me know that the force was there, but the majority of my enormous dildo was still out in the open. The stallion ramming her cleaned asshole was already finished while I was still struggling. It was only when the next stallion shoved the toilet brush in her sphincter and a stallion behind me pushed his hooves on my buns with all his force that Opaline’s throat finally gave way and let through my pee-coated wood. After that, it was only a matter of shoves. Little by little the bulge moved down her throat. I could even see it through the furtight material on her neck. Still, I was becoming impatient. “Mom, remember all the times when you sat on my face telling me I should lick faster, and when I told you that my tongue was already hurting you started to beat on me?” The only sounds were loud gurgling and small sips of air that managed to pass the intrusion in her throat. “Let’s try out your method, shall we?” I struck down with my hoof on the bulge in her neck several times to loosen up whatever obstacle was keeping me from utilizing my invention to its full effect. I beat her faster and faster while shoving the dildo in harder and harder. Then, finally, at long last, the bulge pushed through to her stomach. I rested on her head for a little while to catch my breath. The hard part of the process was behind me. After a short pause, I reached down with a hoof and rubbed my clit. There was just something about Opaline’s gurgles and squirms that made me feel good inside. With newfound strength, I proceeded to shove my wooden dildo through her stomach. Slowly at first, in the rhythm of my clit-rubbing. Her body didn’t just shake, it vibrated as if she was cold, even though I knew for a fact that she was sweating profusely from the heat within the tight cocoon of her shiny furtight bodysuit. It didn’t take long before I was straight up ramming the dildo through her mouth, throat and stomach. The wooden contraption was just long enough to smash into the back of her stomach wall. I could feel it both as a counterforce to my pushes and the sudden burst of twitches from the whorse below. After ever faster rubbing of my clit and straight-up crashing my dildo at the end of Opaline’s stomach, I came so hard that I squirted all over my hoof. “AAaaa!” I calmed and my body only twitched here and there while I rested on Opaline’s head. All the while, I rubbed my wet hoof on the leather-wrapped torso below. I was so relaxed that I considered just sleeping on top of Opaline, but I knew that there was a line of horny stallions behind me, so I gathered my strength and pushed off her. The big wooden dildo retracted a little bit, but then the bulge got stuck at the end of the throat. I kept pulling with all my body, but it wouldn’t break free. Beating on Opaline with both hooves didn’t help even though I used all of my strength behind each strike. “Oh, fuck this, and fuck you.” I unstrapped my strapon. “I’m done with this, and I’m done with you.” I detached myself, and finally felt the ground with all four hooves. The dildo was still stuck in Opaline’s throat, but it wasn’t my problem anymore. It was a gift for her, after all. Thanks to me, all the mares in Maretime Bay could have a way with her in the future even more than the stallions. I smiled to myself and flickered Opaline’s ear with a hoof as I sat down before her, “Are you finally proud of me, Opaline? At first, Opaline twitched. Then after a long while, she finally produced a nod. It was a weird nod since she couldn’t move her neck because her throat was still full of my wooden dildo, but it was, nonetheless and unmistakably, a nod. “Am I better than you?” I continued. There was another moment of stillness, then a nod. “Is there anything else you want from me, Opaline?” I asked quizzaciously. “Anything at all?” Instantly, her head and neck moved left and right. “Good. We’re done then. I’m breaking up with you, Opaline.” She didn’t react, but I knew how to inject some more life into her. “I’m off to go on a mission with Sunny and her friends now. We’ve already taken care of the Together Tree you corrupted, and today we’ll take care of your castle. First, we’ll pile together all the precious relics you have collected through millennia. We’ll burn everything on a big pyre, and I’ll roast marshmallows over it.” The muscles all over Opaline’s body tensed. “Sunny was hesitant, but I convinced her by saying that it’s the only way to reform you.” Her head moved left and right. “Oh, and we’ll also raze your castle to the ground.” I stood up. “Opaline, keep taking the dick medicine in all your holes while I dance on the ruins of your millennia-long life’s efforts. Maybe someday you’ll finally be cured of being yourself. In the meantime, know that at least I’m cured of you.“ I left her there with all three of my gifts. Finally, I knew what it felt like to feel pride in myself. I put a closure on my old life, and all the doors of my new life were opened wide. Opaline’s nagging imaginary voice at the back of my head was finally gone. I was a strong, independent mare, and my actions were my own. Then and forevermore.”
MagicS
550809
1
Discord,Spike,Starlight Glimmer,Sunset Shimmer,Adventure,Comedy,Random,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Starlight Glimmer Regrets Her Mistakes
Now exactly how was Starlight supposed to know that a few changes to the past could cause the space-time continuum to collapse?
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21
2
<p>After her eventful vacation and all the good deeds she had done on it, Starlight was preparing to take over at the School of Friendship as Twilight got ready to ascend to the throne of Equestria. However, a few odd events suddenly began to take place around Ponyville. And according to Discord these events could be foretelling the doom of not just their world, but every world everywhere. </p><p>And it just so happens that a certain unicorn may or may not be totally to blame for all of it. Like usual, the world isn’t going to save itself, it’s up to Starlight, Spike and Discord to travel through reality and fix their (aka Starlight’s) mistakes.</p><p>Let’s hope there aren't any evil monsters lurking in the shadows.</p>
everyone
2024-02-03T19:58:06+00:00
2024-02-03T19:58:06+00:00
309
Starlight Glimmer walked down the halls of the School of Friendship as another busy day came to a close. With Twilight having more or less given over the reins to her she had a lot more work to do than when she was just the guidance counselor. But it was the kind of work that was so fulfilling it didn’t bother her one bit. Whenever she saw the happy faces of her students as they ran on by it brought a proud smile to her face. She never would’ve guessed that in just a few years her life would go from what it was to this. Starlight knew how lucky she was, how blessed she was. There were some reservations she had in the past—some doubts about herself and her capabilities—but she had overcome them with a little introspection and a lot of help from her closest friends. Now she was ready for the next step in her life. That “vacation” she took a little bit ago to let out some stress also helped a lot. Starlight still had a lot of good memories about that, even though both Twilight and Spike most certainly did not. And were not exactly happy with the way she fondly looked back on it. But everything had turned out fine in the end, right? No harm, no foul. So there was really nothing to get upset about. She had even done a lot of good—helped out a lot of ponies—on that vacation. That was all in the past now though and Starlight was willing to be mature about it, she promised nothing like that would ever happen again and she meant it. That promise being part of the reason she was where she was right now. If she ever wanted a vacation again it would be far more normal. But right now anyways it was just the end of a normal day and she was heading to her office to finish up a few things before heading back to the castle. Trixie was around here somewhere, maybe they could have dinner together? Or Sunburst. Or both of them if they were free too. That would be the perfect way to wind down after a busy day. She did see quite a few of her other friends but they were all plenty busy with their own things after finishing up work at the school. Applejack, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Starlight greeted each and every one of them with a happy smile and hug when she saw them. Asked them how their day had gone—but she knew none of them could really join her at such short notice with everything else going on in their lives. Everyone had become so busy. And Twilight was getting so close to up and leaving Ponyville… Well, no sense in getting sad about that either. It’s not like they’d stop being friends. It was just one more age in all their lives, a new path opening up. You couldn’t expect things to stay the same forever. Starlight made it back to her new office just a moment later, silently and quickly going over everything once with her eyes to make sure everything was alright. Desk? Check. Papers? Check, Phyllis? Check. And so forth. She took a big stretch, cracked her hooves, and sighed before walking over to the desk. Now, privately, she could at least afford to show how tired she actually was. Sitting in her chair her eyes glanced over the numerous pictures on her desk facing her, one with just her and Twilight, another with her and Trixie, the big one that everyone took together when the school opened, all of them brought back good memories. After smiling for a moment she levitated a pen up in her magic and prepared to get to work. Before she could put pen to paper, her desk started to shake. Just slightly, but Starlight could definitely feel it. She looked around, surprised, and noticed the windows and walls of her entire office were shaking a little bit too. After just a few seconds though it stopped as quickly as it started. Starlight raised a single inquisitive eyebrow as she looked around, wondering if that was it. “Earthquake?” She asked the air, as if putting her thoughts into words would get her an answer. When nothing else happened she just shrugged and started to get back to work. Little tremors like that happened every now and then, nothing special about it. Unbeknownst to Starlight though, if she had just happened to instead turn around and look out the window of her office she would’ve seen a bright crack appear in the sky above Ponyville for a moment before it mended itself once the quaking stopped. At that same moment, a certain purple dragon was busy cleaning and reorganizing the library in Twilight’s castle. For not the first time lately. Twilight had been adamant that things needed to be absolutely perfect for when she left Ponyville. It would be rude otherwise, she couldn’t let a single book be out of place. Spike was more than used to that behavior and this sort of work though and was taking it in stride. Helped that it all became so much easier when he grew his wings—no longer having to rely on any ladders or step-stools. He was doing it on his own too, with Twilight busy somewhere else in the castle going over a seemingly endless checklist on what she needed to do between now and leaving. However some of these books Twilight owned were so heavy they were a little difficult to carry on his own. One particularly old encyclopedia about some old magic that he couldn’t even begin to understand was gripped in his claws, waiting to be pushed into its slot between two other just as big and incomprehensible books. That was when the bookcase and the rest of the library began to shake. Not enough to dislodge any books thankfully—or Twilight would end up having a really inopportune panic attack—but still enough for Spike to notice and have to wait until it was over. Once it was done he pushed the heavy book into the bookcase and scratched his head before flying down to the floor and starting to waddle on out of the library. “Hey, Twilight! Did you feel that just now?” Spike called out. Behind him, a crack appeared in the air in the middle of the library before closing right back up before anyone could even know it ever existed. The next morning Starlight was walking through town on a few errands. She planned to surprise everyone working at the school with a big cake to celebrate the new jobs some of them had and make sure everyone knew things were going to be just as happy as when Twilight was in charge. Now trying to surprise Pinkie Pie, with cake for that matter, was exceedingly difficult so she had actually been spreading these errands out over the past few days. Buying just a few ingredients at a time, at different stores and not always the normal ones, doing her best to appear normal to her friend. It was tough. And she wondered if Pinkie Pie didn’t probably already know what she was doing but still let her go on out of politeness anyways. Either way she left Bon Bon’s place behind and was stealthily making her way back to the castle when something unusual happened. It wouldn’t have been that unusual, were it not for the fact that the same exact thing happened just last night. The ground started to shake right under her hooves—it was just slight, but anypony out walking around would have felt it. Everything just seemed to vibrate for a moment and to Starlight’s eyes objects and the buildings in front of her even seemed to blur slightly for a split-second. She shook her head and looked again, everything appearing normal once more. After just a few more seconds the minor earthquake stopped as well and everyone around started talking with their friends or muttering in confusion. Starlight didn’t blame them, everyone in Ponyville had to have felt the one last night too. The usual suspects you could always see around Ponyville like Octavia Melody, Strawberry Sunrise, Cherry Berry, Davenport, Roseluck, Filthy Rich, and quite a few rambunctious fillies and colts, were engaged in numerous conversations about the strange quake that just happened. If Trixie had been walking with her, Starlight would’ve certainly asked her if she thought there was anything strange about that too. And probably would’ve gotten a totally flippant and disinterested reply, but still. For now, since nothing else could be done about it, Starlight just shrugged and got back to her walk. It was just a little tremor after all. “Hey, what’s that?” She heard a pony say. Starlight looked over to see a fairly dismayed Berry Punch pointing at the sky. She and most of the other ponies around followed her hoof up and up into the bright blue sky over Ponyville. When they saw what she was pointing at—many ponies gasped in shock and fear, the beginning of an all to familiar Ponyville panic was rising, while Starlight felt her eyes widen. Whatever she was looking at was not the familiar sort of Ponyville problem. This was something different. A crack, a glowing white crack in the sky, was spreading out above Ponyville. Jagged and splitting off in multiple directions it just appeared there, rending reality and not seeming to care that it was in the sky and not on some physical surface. Starlight lit up her horn just out of caution but before she could do anything the crack’s growth stopped and just as quickly it all closed back up and disappeared. “What’s going on?” Starlight frowned. A loud shriek from across town got her attention and Starlight looked to see another startled pony pointing at the top of Town Hall. When Starlight looked at it she saw a crack that had gone down like a lightning bolt, hovering in reality right above the building for a moment before it too disappeared. More and more started to appear, though none were as big or lasted as long as the first one in the sky had. But for each appearance, there was a shriek of surprise or terror to accompany it and ponies were starting to panic. Especially for the cracks that appeared right at eye-level or barely above the ground. She kept her horn lit and was about to spring into action—any sort of action at all—when it finally all ended for good. No more cracks in reality or whatever they were appeared. That still didn’t exactly stop every pony from already being incredibly worried and confused. Starlight’s frown deepened as Ponyville was on the verge of a mass panic and she herself felt a good deal of foreboding when it came to what she had just seen happen. “Well this all can’t be good.” Running into the Castle of Friendship, Starlight threw the door open and yelled for the one pony she could always count on. “Twilight! Hey, Twilight! Did you see what’s happening out there?” However, she quickly found that not only had the others gotten the same idea as her—but she was the last to arrive. The front hall was crowded with her friends, all gathered around Twilight Sparkle already. Seems everyone had the right idea. If there was something wrong in Ponyville, you went to see Twilight Sparkle about it. “It was right over the farm, Twilight. This big crack just opened up in the sky right as the tremor was going on,” Applejack told her. “Consider yourself lucky!” Rarity huffed. “I was at home, working on a new dress at my sewing machine, when not only did I accidentally mess up the stitching because of that little earthquake but then I see the air in front of me split apart! I thought I was going mad for a second there! It happened right in my work room.” “Freaky,” Pinkie Pie said. “I was at Sugarcube Corner and Mr. Cake asked me why it looked like the ceiling was about to break apart. Couldn’t really tell him so I figured the next best thing was to come here.” “It was the same for me...” Fluttershy quietly said. “It happened right above my cottage, I don’t know if it was that or the earthquake that scared the animals more...” “Geez, talk about weird. I was asleep up on the clouds so I didn’t feel anything, but when I heard some ponies shouting it woke me up just in time for that big crack over Ponyville to disappear,” Rainbow Dash shrugged. “That’s exactly the kind of stuff Twilight and I saw just a little bit ago too!” Spike said to the girls. “We were in the map room and then bam! Almost fell out of my chair, and then sssshhhhhk! The air started cracking left and right and it was super creepy!” Starlight joined in, walking into the circle of friends. “I saw it too. And so did the rest of Ponyville for that matter. Do you have any idea what’s going on, Twilight?” “Not exactly,” the beleaguered Alicorn said. She looked a little tired and there was an expression of concentration on her face as she went over the words from her friends. “I’m pretty sure I know what those cracks are—fundamentally speaking—but I don’t know why they’re appearing.” Pinkie Pie, standing directly next to Starlight, sniffed the air and glanced over at her friend. “Do you have sprinkles in your bag?” Starlight coughed. “No, absolutely not. Why would I? She grinned and turned back over to Twilight. “You were saying something, Twilight?” “Yes, here, everyone come with me into my study,” Twilight said and led their usual group out of the front hall. It was a little crowded when they made it to Twilight’s study—but that was only half because of all the ponies and dragon. A big machine with vacuum tubes, paper rolling out of some slot in the middle, and all sorts of dials and screens on it was taking up a lot of space too. Twilight stood in front of it and faced the others. “I’m sure you all noticed that there was a small quake last night as well?” “Yes,” most of them answered. “No,” Rainbow Dash said. Twilight rolled her eyes. “Anyways—there was one. And I’m certain that right after it ended the first cracks, just like the ones today, appeared as well. I was first suspicious of something strange happening because after reading my copy of the Equestrian Seismic Journal last week I knew there shouldn't have been any earthquakes like that recently, minor or otherwise.” “There’s a journal like that?” Starlight asked, tilting her head. “I’ve had a subscription for the past few years,” Twilight smiled. “But that’s not important right now. I’ve been analyzing the quakes and the strange cracks in reality that have been appearing and I’m positive—they have the exact same magical signature as the magic used for the mirror portal to Sunset Shimmer’s world.” “Hold on there-” Applejack said. “All of these cracks are portals to that other world?” “No,” Twilight shook her head. “They have the same magical signature, but they’re not portals to that world, or even really portals at all. They’re rips in space-time itself. Thanks to… a few other events, I’m very familiar with space-time magic and spells. I’m positive that’s what these cracks are, but I’m not sure what their origin is. All I know is they started last night but either no one saw them until today or they thought their eyes were playing tricks on them yesterday.” Rainbow Dash started to innocently whistle. “S-So what do we do? Is this dangerous?” Fluttershy asked. “It really doesn’t make me feel better knowing that a crack in space and time could reopen in my boutique at any moment, Twilight,” Rarity said. Twilight frowned and placed a hoof on her chin, thinking. “I don’t want to cause a panic… but there certainly can’t be anything good about this. The problem is I have no idea why this started! Without knowing that I’m not even sure just how dangerous this is or how to begin to stop it.” “Perhaps I can shed some light on that matter?” The girls (and Spike) looked up at the ceiling only to see Discord grinning down at them. “I happened to be in the neighborhood today and couldn’t help but overhear about your little problem,” the draconequus snickered. “Discord!” Fluttershy cheered in joy and immediately flew up to hug him—an embrace he gladly returned. Starlight smiled too, despite some pranks and arguments in the past she was always happy to see him like this. In his own way he was just as reliable as Twilight when something weird like this came up too. If he wasn’t the problem to begin with. Rainbow Dash snorted and raised an eyebrow at him. “That’s a lie, you can always tell when something weird is happening and magic is involved. What do you know about this?” “Please, Discord, if you can shed some light on this it would really be helpful,” Twilight said. “Oh you’re all no fun, can’t even humor me for just a little?” Discord said as he slithered down to the ground and stood between them. “Ehh… I would normally, but I’ve been distracted by the smell of sprinkles for at least the past five minutes,” Pinkie Pie shrugged. “Come on, Discord, out with it,” Applejack said. “I’d prefer to get this all fixed before one of those space-time crack thingamajigs opens up and starts sucking up all my trees.” Discord shrugged, a bored expression on his face. “Very well—though the core of the matter is something that only Little Miss Bookworm here will fully understand the gravity of.” “What is it?” Twilight asked, a little worried now. Discord breathed on his nails, turning them over and examining them. “Oh nothing, it’s just that the entire space-time continuum is collapsing.” “WHAT?!” Twilight Sparkle yelled. “Uh, is that bad? It sounds bad,” Spike hesitantly ventured to ask. “If the space-time continuum is collapsing then that means that the past, the present, and the future could all be erased. The whole world—all worlds everywhere—could be completely destroyed!” Twilight shouted. “Oh. Yeah that sounds bad,” Spike blanched. Starlight agreed. “Then how do we stop it?” Rainbow Dash asked. “And why is something so crazy happening right now?” Applejack asked Discord. Discord smugly and proudly folded his arms over his chest. “Luckily, I can answer both questions.” “Just please spit it out then...” a slightly agitated Twilight Sparkle asked. “Fine, fine. To put it simply, the reason the space-time continuum is close to collapsing is because there’s an excess amount of unexpected chaos in it. It’s overwhelmed the harmony that normally keeps everything balanced,” Discord explained. “And how exactly is there too much chaos out there?” Rainbow suspiciously asked, floating up to stare Discord in the eyes. He nonchalantly shook his head. “Oh it’s not me. If it was I could easily fix things. No I’m afraid this problem is someone else’s doing. Someone you all know I might add, and you know the reason for why it’s all happening too. Just think a little bit.” He got a teasing twinkle in his eye as he glanced over at Starlight and grinned at her. “Now who among us here has recently done something that involves space and time and messing around in a bunch of alternate timelines and worlds, hm? Who could that be?” All other eyes in the room slowly turned towards Starlight Glimmer. From the blank expression on Twilight Sparkle’s face, to the tired one on Applejack’s, the oblivious smile on Pinkie Pie’s, and the “told you so” sort of look on Spike’s, they all bored into her. “Oh,” Starlight blinked, feeling a rising heat in her face. She awkwardly smiled and lifted up her hooves in a shrug. “Oops?”
MagicS
550809
2
Discord,Spike,Starlight Glimmer,Sunset Shimmer,Adventure,Comedy,Random,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Starlight Glimmer Regrets Her Mistakes
Now exactly how was Starlight supposed to know that a few changes to the past could cause the space-time continuum to collapse?
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21
2
<p>After her eventful vacation and all the good deeds she had done on it, Starlight was preparing to take over at the School of Friendship as Twilight got ready to ascend to the throne of Equestria. However, a few odd events suddenly began to take place around Ponyville. And according to Discord these events could be foretelling the doom of not just their world, but every world everywhere. </p><p>And it just so happens that a certain unicorn may or may not be totally to blame for all of it. Like usual, the world isn’t going to save itself, it’s up to Starlight, Spike and Discord to travel through reality and fix their (aka Starlight’s) mistakes.</p><p>Let’s hope there aren't any evil monsters lurking in the shadows.</p>
everyone
2024-02-07T01:14:57+00:00
2024-02-07T01:14:57+00:00
187
“Now hold on just a minute, how can this be my fault? I-I know I did a lot of time-traveling and world-hopping on my, erm, vacation a little while ago but how could it lead to this? It wasn’t like when I traveled back in time the other time,” Starlight nervously smiled at her friends. “It was different. The future—the present—the world shouldn’t be affected by any of that stuff.” She glared up at Discord. “And how did I spread chaos around? I was making things better! Or trying to… my intentions were always good whenever I was messing around at least!” Spike groaned and buried his face in his hands, shaking his head back and forth. “I knew I should’ve fought more to stop her from doing all that dumb stuff back then...” Starlight bit her lip and looked over to Twilight. “T-Twilight! You know I was helping out and doing good things when Spike and I were stuck in time. You were there with us when we took down evil me and saved that entire world! There’s no way I can be responsible for breaking the space-time continuum!” “Ooooohhhhhh,” Twilight merely groaned and held a hoof to her head, the pain of a migraine coming on. “Regardless of your good intentions or not I’m not wrong. Whatever you got up to on that vacation of yours ended up spewing a bunch of chaos all across reality. I’m actually impressed,” Discord said to her. “I’m not!” Starlight shouted and fell to the floor. “I know I was being silly and maybe a little careless but I didn’t want anything like this to happen!” “Hold on y’all, Discord said he knew how to stop this,” Applejack said and raised an eyebrow at the Draconequus. “Didn’t you?” “Applejack speaks the truth,” Discord nodded. “Although it’s quite the pickle and will certainly take some work I do believe we can fix all this and stop all of existence from coming to a screeching halt. Unless you’re okay with that happening?” “No,” Twilight said and frowned up at the trickster. “What do you think we need to do?” “Well thanks to me being quite special and amazing myself—I’m able to sense the various worlds and timelines that Starlight mucked around in. I can easily create a portal to them while zeroing in on the general source of chaos or change that’s messing the rest of the space-time continuum up,” Discord explained. “So you can go and fix all this?” Rarity asked, “Not exactly. This is what I mean by it being a little troublesome. I myself am quite the chaotic being, so if I try and solve any problem like this or use my magic in these worlds… well it’s more than likely just going to make things worse. All I can afford to do is help a certain someone travel to each little world to fix things up,” Discord smiled and his eyes turned to Starlight. “Wait a second-” Twilight started. Discord immediately put a finger to her lips to silence her. “Yes, that’s exactly what I’m saying.” Starlight stood up, a look of dismay etched on her face. “I don’t think any of this sounds like a good idea.” “Me neither,” Spike muttered. “Good you think that, my little dragon friend, because you’re going with her too,” Discord patted him on the head with his tail. “I am?” Spike grimaced. “He is?” Both Twilight and Starlight said together. “He has to,” Discord shrugged. “Just like Starlight needs to go too. Because they were the ones who already went to these other worlds and timelines it’ll cause the least amount of excess chaos if they’re the ones who go back. Which is why-” he pointed at Twilight. “I’m afraid I have to shoot down your offer to accompany them. The more unwelcome visitors to a world the more likely things go sour. It’s just going to be Starlight, Spike, and my lovely self.” “Celestia forbid!” Rarity said and ran up to hug Spike. “You can’t expect us to accept this, can you? We should all be going to help fix this!” “That’s right!” Pinkie Pie agreed. Fluttershy, much more demurely, looked up at her close friend. “Is there really no way for us all to go with you?” Discord sighed. “I’m sorry, Fluttershy, but this is the best way to fix things without letting it get worse in the attempt.” He looked over at Twilight. “I’m sure you can appreciate that idea?” Twilight looked between her friends, at Discord, at her (still) trusted student Starlight, at her beloved assistant Spike. She didn’t like this. She wanted to go with them for multiple reasons. It sounded dangerous first and foremost—and it also sounded like the situation could get out of hoof very easily. Considering the last time Starlight did some inter-dimensional traveling… and now Discord was going with her? But no, Twilight did still trust her. They were still the closest of friends and if this is what had to be done then Twilight would believe in her. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Opening them up she looked at Spike with a serious expression on her face. “Spike? You’ll keep an eye on them, won’t you?” Spike—always eager to prove himself to Twilight—stood up straight and nodded. “You can count on me, Twilight!” “And Starlight-” Twilight looked over at her student and sighed, she walked over to the mare and hugged. “I trust you, Starlight. I know you may have… done some things you shouldn’t have last time, but I know in the end you’ll do the right thing too. Just please maybe take things a little more seriously?” Starlight hugged her back. “I promise I won’t treat this like another vacation. If this is all really my fault then I’ll fix it.” “It’s definitely your fault,” Discord said. “So are we just leaving right now then?” Spike shrugged. “Hold on,” Twilight said. “There are some others I want to contact about this first—and I’m sure you and Starlight will want to rest and prepare a little first. Judging by the cracks I’ve analyzed I don’t think the space-time continuum is going to collapse in the next day or two, we should have time.” She looked at Discord. “Right?” He nodded. “Honestly we’d probably have a solid month or so before it all went kaput even if we didn’t do anything about it.” “Is there anything we can do on our end to help delay things while the three of you are on your mission?” Twilight asked. “Well we’re going to be strengthening the bonds of friendship and harmony wherever we go… so if you can do something similar here it might stall things out? Tell everyone to group hug with their friends and family once a day?” Discord shrugged. “Truthfully—each little fix we make should buy us more time, and the quakes and cracks in reality here should lessen.” “I’ll try and figure out a more real way to help,” Twilight rubbed her forehead. “What if ponies here start panicking though because the earthquakes and everything else keep happening?” Rarity asked. “Maybe we can just blame it on Rainbow Dash?” Applejack suggested. “Hey!” “I’m going to be busy keeping my animals calm… I can’t imagine what all these sudden events are going to do to them,” Fluttershy said. “If ponies start to get worried I’ll hold a bake off to take their mind of things!” Pinkie Pie said. She got a contemplative look on her face. “Actually, I should just do that anyways. It sounds fun!” “It’s probably for the best that ponies don’t learn the world is on the verge of ending. Again,” Twilight frowned. “Ponies trust me enough to believe in me when I’ll tell them that we’re working on it and they shouldn’t be worried.” “Which is kind of true… in fact the more they do worry the more chaos it could cause. If that means anything,” Applejack shrugged. “It certainly wouldn’t hurt if you kept things calm here,” Discord said. “The more time goes by the less this stuff keeps happening too, right?” Spike asked him. “That’s correct—as long as we’re doing our job right. So it’ll at least look like you’re solving the problem,” Discord said. “I’m still not exactly thrilled at the idea of this...” Rarity said. “And I’m not thrilled that I have to stay here while you guys get to go and have a bunch of fun saving the world!” Rainbow Dash pouted. “It’s not going to be fun,” Twilight frowned at her. “They’re going to be going between a bunch of other dimension things and fighting chaos! How is that not fun?” Rainbow honestly asked. Twilight just groaned and rolled her eyes before looking at Starlight. “Don’t treat it like fun.” “I already promised!” Starlight defended. “Who knows, Dash? Maybe some evildoer will take the opportunity to attack Equestria while this is going on?” Applejack said. “That’d be cool,” Rainbow nodded her head up and down. “No it wouldn’t be!” Twilight shouted. “I agree with Twilight… I really hope all of this goes well,” Fluttershy said. The thought of everything going on already had her looking a little woozy. Discord smiled at her and gave her a reassuring pat on the head. “Don’t worry, Fluttershy. I promise for your sake that we’ll handle everything.” “Thank you,” she smiled up at him. “Well then, we meet up in the oh-so-convenient map room same time tomorrow? And then we leave for our little journey across time and space?” Discord asked with a raised eyebrow, gazing over Starlight and Spike. “I’ll be ready… there are some ponies I want to tell that I’ll be gone for a while too,” Starlight sighed. “And I’m ready to go to save the day already!” Spike said, puffing out his chest and trying to look his best for both Twilight and Rarity. Twilight, despite herself, smiled. “Alright, that’s what we’ll do. I have a few messages to send and a particular pony to get in touch with again...” Discord snapped his fingers and disappeared and the other Elements of Harmony left Twilight’s castle after a brief goodbye, leaving only Twilight, Spike, and a fairly guilty Starlight behind. She had been doing so good hadn’t she? How could things have gotten this bad? There was no way she was going to let the fun she had (and oh yeah all those good deeds) lead to this. She’d fix it. She was already ignoring all the mistakes she had made last time. Ponyville the next day was already a little better than yesterday thanks to Twilight and the others doing their best to spread the word that they knew what was going on and were working on a solution. The rest of Equestria was having word sent out to them as well from Celestia and Luna. Do your best to mind the quakes and don’t touch the random glowing cracks that appeared if you could avoid them. Good advice. Of course Rainbow Dash had also been speeding around Ponyville reassuring ponies that what was happening wasn’t the result of a weather phenomena she had screwed up managing. Even though no one had suggested that yet in the first place. Of course there were still a few quakes that happened—a few more than yesterday even—and some more and larger cracks had shown up in the sky around Ponyville and elsewhere. That was something that just couldn’t be avoided yet. But it at least certainly wasn’t the scariest or weirdest thing the ponies here had been through. And with Twilight reassuring them it was a lot easier for the average pony and creature to deal with what was going on. It would disrupt things a little bit, and lessons at the school were being put on hold, but largely this wasn’t as bad as say—when Discord was first unleashed or Tirek stole their magic or even as annoying as those vines from the Everfree. Everyone could still more or less go on with their lives. If they knew the possible outcome of this though… things might have been different. But that’s exactly what everyone now gathered back in Twilight’s castle was trying to prevent. As Starlight, Spike, and Discord got ready to depart they were joined by their friends to give them a few last wishes of good luck. It wasn’t just the Elements of Harmony, but Starlight had also of course told Trixie and Sunburst what was happening, and Twilight had also contacted Starswirl and made sure he was here as well. He certainly had a particular expertise on matters like this and he had originally been the one who helped Twilight find and rescue Starlight and Spike last time. Things were a little crowded and loud in the map room as everyone got ready, but all Twilight had to do was loudly clear her throat to get everyone’s attention. “I know no one wanted something like this to happen, and I’m sorry that it seems like the fate of the world is at stake again, but I’m still happy to see all of you here,” she smiled at the assembled group. “I know everyone here is going to do their best to save the day. Like always. And to Starlight, Spike, and Discord, thank you so much for putting yourselves in danger to help us.” “Really getting the speeches down before you take over from Celestia, huh?” Rainbow Dash playfully ribbed her. Twilight blushed. “Yes, well, I just thought we could all use some words of encouragement. D-Discord? Are you ready to go?” “More or less for the past six hours,” he shrugged. “If anyone wants to say goodbye or wish us well, now’s your chance.” Fluttershy immediately flew over and hugged him. “Thank you, Discord. I don’t care if the others think you’re being unhelpful sometimes—I know how much you care.” “Well just try not to say it out loud so much,” Discord rolled his eyes but still happily smiled at her and hugged the pegasus back. “Good luck, Spikey-Wikey,” Rarity said to her young dragon friend. “Don’t worry about me, Rarity! I’m the most responsible one going on this trip,” Spike said with a sparkling grin. “That’s exactly what I’m worried about...” Rarity mumbled under her breath. Meanwhile a certain Great and Powerful magician ran up to Starlight and also pulled her into a big hug. “Starlight! The Great and Powerful Trixie believes in you so don’t let me down!” Trixie said as she practically buried her face in Starlight’s neck. “You are the second most amazing mare I’ve ever met, besides myself obviously, so I know you can do it. I’m sure you won’t totally screw things up like I would if I was in your situation… any more than you already have.” Starlight grumbled in annoyance. “Thanks, Trixie, that’s very kind of you.” “I also have a gift before you leave. It’s just something I thought might be useful, you never know what you might get into on an adventure like this after all,” Trixie said and levitated up a bag she had been keeping under her cape. “Ta-da!” She said as she gave it to Starlight. Starlight took the bag and opened it up, finding it filled with faintly green crystals. “Your Suggestion Crystals? But why? And don’t you need them for your next few shows?” “Because I just have a feeling that you might need them more than me. I’m sure you’ll find a good use for them—you can do practically anything with them after all,” Trixie shrugged. “And the Great and Powerful Trixie’s performances are always amazing anyways.” “True,” Starlight smiled and put the bag of crystals into her own. “Thank you, Trixie.” Trixie hugged her again. “I’d wish you good luck but I know you don’t need it.” “I’ll wish you good luck then since I know this is a really big deal and you’re probably going to have to go through a whole lot of problems,” Sunburst said as he walked up. He adjusted his glasses and tried to smooth his frazzled mane to no avail. “I don’t blame you at all for this, Starlight, I know you had only good intentions, but still—this sounds like it might be dangerous. I believe in you but be careful.” “At least I’m not doing it alone. And with you two saying you believe in me… that already makes it a lot easier. A lot,” Starlight smiled softly at the two of them. “I also wish the three of you well,” Starswirl said to all three of them. “And Twilight and I will be doing our best to fix things here. If we can help you in any way, we will.” “Thanks, Starswirl. With you and Twilight working side by side I wouldn’t be surprised if you fix the problem before the three of us have to do anything,” Starlight grinned. “Let’s hope that’s true,” Twilight smiled. Suddenly a bunch of trumpets and cymbals loudly started going off and most of the creatures in the room held their hooves to their ears to drown out the noise. A second later it stopped and all the instruments flashed out of existence, an impatient Discord tapping his foot on the floor. “If we could perhaps get this started already? I’d like to be back without missing too many tea dates with Fluttershy,” Discord said. Twilight frowned at him and twisted her hoof in her ear. “Fine, I think everyone has said what they needed to. Spike and Starlight have their bags, I don’t know where you’re going to go first or what you’ll need to do to make that timeline more “harmonic” but if you’re ready to go… well, create whatever portal you need to, Discord.” “Thank you, first off all though, I need to slip into something a little more suitable for the occasion,” Discord said. “What do you mean?” Twilight asked. Discord smirked and snapped his fingers, a bright flash coming from his body as it shrunk and twisted down until he was the size of a pencil. And he even looked more rigid—as if he had turned himself into some sort of wooden Discord doll or toy. If he had some holes he would’ve looked like a flute or recorder. “This is what I mean. We’re getting rid of chaos after all, and being chaos myself I can’t let my powers influence the worlds we’re visiting or it’ll just make things worse. So for the most part I’m “powering down” for the trip. I’ll open the portals to and from each place we need to go to and in the meantime I’ll be asleep.” He floated over to Spike and propped himself right into the dragon’s bag, looking up at him and Starlight. “More like stasis than sleep but you get the point. Only wake me up when you’re finished making things more harmonic and you need another portal.” “Oh. Great. So Spike and I have to do the hard part all on our own?” Starlight flatly glared at him. He couldn’t shrug with his wooden body but he would’ve. “They are your mistakes to fix after all.” “I’m not exactly happy about this either...” Twilight frowned. “I swear on Fluttershy that it needs to be done. I can’t go about snapping my fingers everywhere—just being in my normal form would be too much,” Discord said. “Well it wouldn’t help to complain anymore at this point,” Starlight snorted and shook her head. “You ready to go, Spike?” “Uh-huh,” Spike nodded. “Then I guess we’re going,” Starlight said and looked over her friends. Twilight, Trixie, Sunburst, Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Starswirl too even. A smile grew on her face as they all watched her. “I’ll be back soon.” “I know you will,” Twilight nodded. “Then it’s time for our first stop,” the Discord-Flute smirked and for a brief moment became animated—snapping his fingers and creating a glowing circular portal behind him, Spike, and Starlight. Starlight looked at it and briefly glanced to Spike, he gulped but gave her a nod. “Okay, let’s do this,” Starlight reached out her hoof to him and Spike took it in his hand. Together the two of them gave one last look to their friends, one last smile and wave, and hopped through the portal.
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Starlight Glimmer Regrets Her Mistakes
Now exactly how was Starlight supposed to know that a few changes to the past could cause the space-time continuum to collapse?
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<p>After her eventful vacation and all the good deeds she had done on it, Starlight was preparing to take over at the School of Friendship as Twilight got ready to ascend to the throne of Equestria. However, a few odd events suddenly began to take place around Ponyville. And according to Discord these events could be foretelling the doom of not just their world, but every world everywhere. </p><p>And it just so happens that a certain unicorn may or may not be totally to blame for all of it. Like usual, the world isn’t going to save itself, it’s up to Starlight, Spike and Discord to travel through reality and fix their (aka Starlight’s) mistakes.</p><p>Let’s hope there aren't any evil monsters lurking in the shadows.</p>
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Starlight and Spike fell through a kaleidoscope of colors where up and down as they were commonly thought of ceased to exist. The feeling of falling was ever present but what direction they were falling in seemed to change every second. It was just like they both remembered. If it was their first time doing something like this they might’ve gotten sick or disoriented, instead the two of them were almost bored. Traveling through dimensions? What was so special about that? Despite Discord being directly responsible for this portal, and the added chaos in the space-time continuum, things weren’t any more random or extreme than they were used to. Starlight and Spike kept close together as they fell, a brightness that seemed to always be in front of them growing stronger and stronger. The usual feeling of vertigo was either gone or their bodies had gotten used to it enough to overcome it. Around them the strange kaleidoscope of colors shifted and warped, seeming to squish down on them and push them closer to the light. Starlight reached out and grabbed Spike’s hand, making sure they’d both get out of here at the same time and the same place. Everything started to shake and vibrate, the world blurring around them, and they sped closer and closer towards the light… Unicorn and dragon both fell roughly onto the grass as they exited the spinning portal through time and space. By the time their own eyes stopped spinning the portal had vanished and the two of them were now on their own here. Wherever here was. Starlight grunted and stood up while Spike shook his head and did the same. At least they hadn’t fallen on some rocks or something. “Where are we?” Spike asked. “Good question...” Starlight said as she took her first real look around. A dense forest surrounded the two of them, dark despite it being the middle of the day. Heavy foliage and vegetation grew up and around the thick trees while a surprising lack of noise from insects came from around. The two of them were standing on a path through the trees, overgrown with grass and weeds, likely not having been used in some time. There was a foreboding feeling to the forest and all the vines crawling around the trees, rocks, and bushes. Despite the silence both Starlight and Spike felt they were being watched from the shadows. “Oh, this is just the Everfree,” Starlight said. “Yeah, you’re right,” Spike agreed as he looked around too. “Been here way too many times to not recognize it. Why do you think the portal dropped us off here?” “Well Discord said we should end up close to where the problem in this timeline, world, whatever, is. So the Everfree Forest must have something to do with it,” Starlight shrugged. “What did we do in the Everfree when we were traveling through time the last time?” Spike asked. “Uhh...” Starlight grimaced. “Nothing constructive, that’s for sure.” Spike blinked. “Oh yeah… the castle got destroyed. And that underground cavern. You also closed off the Mirror Pool. Ugh… any of that could easily be the problem! It might all be the problem!” “I know, Spike, let me think a little bit,” Starlight frowned. “What sort of things could happen as the result of us destroying the Castle of the Two Sisters and the underground cavern?” “Us destroying?” Spike raised an eyebrow at her. Starlight flatly stared at him. “Well you were involved. Anyways—I’m thinking we should go check on the castle to see if it’s actually destroyed. Maybe we’re in a different timeline where that didn’t go through? Maybe Celestia rebuilt it? It would’ve been years between us accidentally destroying it and when Twilight and the girls found it again and confronted Nightmare Moon in it.” “Celestia probably would’ve done something like that since the Elements were there...” Spike guessed. “I get the feeling if something like this world’s Twilight couldn’t get the Elements that there’d be a way bigger change and we’d probably be somewhere else.” “The physical form of the Elements before Twilight and the others got them didn’t really matter either. From what Twilight told me at least. But there could be other problems that came up without the castle being there,” Starlight mused as the two of them started walking through the Everfree Forest. “We could go into Ponyville to check up on things and see what’s different,” Spike shrugged. Starlight bit her lip. “I’d rather not chance that right now. We should probably avoid going someplace where we could run into ourselves. Especially in a timeline like this where we were only around well before the Sonic Rainboom or I came to Ponyville.” “Or before I was even born for that matter,” Spike said. “Yeah. I think we should do our best to solve this on our own without causing a fuss. Other worlds… might be a little different, but for now let’s try and keep things simple.” The two of them took an easy trot through the Everfree towards the Castle of the Two Sisters. Or whatever might have remained of it. The forest was familiar to both of them and Starlight knew she had nothing to really fear going through it. Any Timberwolf or other monster that tried attacking them was in for a rude awakening. They were more worried about a “friend” accidentally stumbling across them, but hopefully no one else would be in here. It ended up being a mostly quiet trip with only a few blinking spooky eyes watching them as they traveled through the forest. Eventually they came into the deeper parts of the Everfree, where the castle had been built. Starlight had never asked why the two sisters chose to build their castle here in the past… it seemed like kind of a weird location. Maybe she’d ask when they got back from all of this? Twilight probably already knew. Soon though they made it to a clearing in the forest where they could see the castle—or at least where it was supposed to be. “Well this isn’t too surprising,” Starlight shrugged. The ruins of the castle were undisturbed and looked almost exactly like how Starlight and Spike remembered them from when they had accidentally brought the whole place down. The one change was leafy vines crawling up all over the rubble—but even after years it seemed that even the Everfree Forest wasn’t too keen on intruding on the former royal establishment. What was clear was that Celestia certainly hadn’t seen fit to rebuild the castle. Whatever happened for Twilight to find the Elements and confront Nightmare Moon in this timeline had to follow a different path. “So did something change from this? Something important enough to cause chaos?” Spike wondered. “I don’t know… I think we should check on something else first,” Starlight said. “What?” Spike asked. “The town. We can stay in the forest and take a look at Ponyville, see if anything is different or missing. If Ponyville is the same then maybe the castle being like this didn’t really change anything,” Starlight said. “And the portal dropped us off here because something else is going on and we still don’t know what,” Spike said. “Precisely. But don’t be so defeatist, Spike,” Starlight said and started walking in the direction of Ponyville. “It would be nice if Discord wasn’t asleep so we could just ask him about things...” Spike muttered. “Well that’s the one thing I’m not going to mess around with if it can be helped. We don’t need more random chaos caused by him just being awake here,” Starlight said. The trip to the edge of the forest was similarly uneventful with more creatures wisely giving the fearless unicorn a wide berth. Starlight and Spike had to step through quite a bit of vegetation to stay off the main paths and avoid being seen by a potential Zecora or Fluttershy, but it wasn’t the first time they’d had to travel through the Everfree like this. They trudged over vines, roots, and mud just so they could get a brief view of Ponyville and maybe figure this big mess out. At last the two of them stuck their faces out of a leafy bush on the outskirts of the forest and found themselves in position to spy upon this timeline’s Ponyville. What was different? What was the change? How did the Ponyville here differ from the one they knew back home. At first glance, it didn’t seem to differ at all. If one had taken a picture of the two Ponyville’s and overlaid one on top of the other there would’ve been no difference. Each house, each building, sat exactly where it should. Twilight’s great castle loomed in the distance and the School of Friendship could be seen far to the side of it as well. A picture perfect Ponyville full of happy ponies who had no idea things were different than they should have been. “Huh, I guess the castle just isn’t that important,” Spike said. “We still should keep it from Twilight that we knocked it over in this world,” Starlight said. She pulled her head back through the bush and Spike followed her, the two of them still lost for the moment on what to do. What was the issue? What were they missing here and how was it connected to what they had done in the Everfree? Starlight sat down and frowned, bringing a hoof up to her chin and thinking as best she could. “If it doesn’t have to do with the castle then maybe it has to do with the cavern...” Starlight started guessing. “But what does that cavern have to do with anything in the first place? No one even knew it existed for ages. I guarantee it doesn’t have anything to do with the Elements of Harmony. I mean, it can’t be as important as Celestia and Luna’s old castle,” Spike shrugged. “Maybe we’re thinking too big. Little things can be important too and even a small change can have far reaching repercussions. And it was Twilight who taught me that every individual friendship matters,” Starlight blinked and looked straight ahead. “Of course. If the cavern wasn’t there then she wouldn’t be here anymore.” “Huh?” Spike tilted his head. “That was Maud’s home, Spike. Remember? That’s how I knew about it in the first place. And that cavern was one of the reasons Maud chose to live in Ponyville—if it wasn’t there she might not have ever stayed here. We wouldn’t have become friends, she wouldn’t have met Mudbriar, and she wouldn’t even have as strong of a relationship with Pinkie Pie either. Us accidentally destroying that cavern probably caused Maud to choose to live somewhere else and because of that there’s less friendship and harmony in this world. It’s just a little thing but think about it? Maud was one of my first new friends, she became so much happier when she met Mudbriar and she became more honest with Pinkie Pie. Think of everything everyone is missing out on compared to back home?” Starlight grinned. “Yes, I’ve got it! I know that’s what we need to fix here! We have to find Maud and get her to move to Ponyville so she can get her happier life back!” “Maud seems like she’d be fine no matter what to be honest,” Spike said. “That’s because you don’t know her as well as I do,” Starlight chided. “And you know what? Even if this isn’t the main reason we had to come to this timeline then so what? We’re still helping a bunch of ponies. Harmony can’t have a problem with that!” Spike thought for a second, his eyes searching around as he considered Starlight’s words. “Well… I don’t have any other suggestions… and you make a good point. Alright, let’s go help Maud. At least it doesn’t seem like we could make anything worse in this world by doing this.” “Be more positive, Spike,” Starlight smiled. “After last time? No,” Spike shook his head. “Where do we even go to find Maud anyways?” “If she’s not in Ponyville there’s only one other place she would be,” Starlight said as her horn lit up. “Ghastly Gorge? Really?” Spike said as he looked around the torn up gorge. “That’s right. Maud told me a little after she moved into the cavern that the other place she was thinking of moving to was Ghastly Gorge. After all, she really wanted someplace that had plenty of rocks to study,” Starlight said. “You think we can find her quickly?” Spike asked. “Ghastly Gorge isn’t too big, and she should be the only pony around. If we see a tent or cabin it has to be hers,” Starlight shrugged. “I guess that’s kind of nice for us—we don’t have to worry about running into anyone else,” Spike said. The two of them started walking through the bottom of the gorge, exploring its insides and keeping one eye open for any of those eels they had heard lived here. But if Maud had managed to live here for a while without being eaten then they probably had nothing to worry about. Probably. Either way, the more they walked around the more they saw numerous dig sites and excavations, it was no wonder why Maud had initially been drawn to this place. Starlight, thanks to her friendship with Maud, and even Spike thanks to his closeness to Rarity both knew a decent amount about digging and rocks. So far though they hadn't found the one responsible for the digs or seen where she might be living. Maud was a quiet one who did a good job at fading away into the background when she wanted, they’d have to be careful not to miss her. “Tell me if you hear a pickaxe striking the ground anywhere,” Starlight said. “I could just fly and take a look around from the air,” Spike suggested. “I don’t really think we need to do that just yet—also the eels might try and eat you if you get too close to the walls.” “Right...” Spike grimaced as he looked up at some of the holes along the gorge’s walls. “That wouldn’t be fun.” Starlight giggled and patted him on the back. “Don’t worry, I’d still rescue you.” From there, the two kept walking through the myriad of gouges in the earth that made up Ghastly Gorge with not so much as a map or trail of breadcrumbs to rely on. It wasn’t like they were in a rush, technically speaking, but both would have liked to find Maud before the end of the day. As much as the flow of time seemed to mean anything right now. Tink, tink, tink… Starlight’s ears perked up. “Do you hear that, Spike?” “Yeah, it’s coming from up ahead,” Spike pointed. Tink, tink, tink, it kept continuing on. The two of them followed the metallic clinking sound through the rocks at the bottom of the gorge until they came out into an open area cleared of any obstructions. Part of the ground had been dug up in a series of levels going deeper into the dirt, a simple green tent was propped up on one side of it, and a newly mined hole in the side of the gorge’s wall was being made while all the rubble and individual little pebbles from it were piled up and waiting for inspection. And there was Maud, standing outside the hole with a pickaxe in her mouth as she tried to break apart a boulder into a smaller boulder. “Maud!” Starlight shouted in joy and ran over to her with Spike right on her heels. The earth pony didn’t look up from her work, she kept on picking away at the boulder as if she was still alone here. Starlight skidded to a stop in front of her and smiled. “Hi Maud, it’s me, Starlight! Do you remember?” “Yes,” Maud said around the pickaxe, her eyes briefly flickering towards Spike. “And Spike too.” “Yeah, hi Maud,” Spike waved. Tink, tink, tink... “Well you’re pretty much how I remember you,” Spike said. “No, Spike,” Starlight shook her head and gazed at the earth pony more intently. “Maud here is very lonely right now.” Maud stopped her smashing of the boulder and looked up at Starlight. “Is there something the matter?” “Wow, you really are a lot different...” Starlight rubbed her chin. “Really?” Spike asked. “Really,” Starlight nodded. “I’m going to get back to my rocks now if there’s nothing,” Maud said and prepared to smash some more. “Hold on,” Starlight said and gingerly took the pickaxe out of Maud’s mouth with her magic. “Actually the two of us are here because we want you to do something that we think will make you really happy.” “I am happy,” Maud said as blank and monotone as usual. “Because you’re surrounded by rocks and have Boulder with you so you’re not really lonely?” Starlight guessed. “Yes,” Maud answered. “So you didn’t feel like you were potentially missing out on anything by not moving to Ponyville?” Starlight asked. Maud was quiet for precisely three seconds. “No.” Starlight smiled. “I can always count on you to be honest, Maud.” “So—wait? She does regret not moving to Ponyville?” Spike asked as he looked between the two mares, still understandably confused by Maud. “Sometimes I think living closer to my sister and other ponies could have been nice. Potentially,” Maud answered. “That’s exactly right, Maud!” Starlight smiled and put a hoof around her shoulders. “But you didn’t really miss out on anything just yet, you can still move to Ponyville and get closer to your sister and start making new friends and everything!” “The reason I chose Ghastly Gorge though was for my career and interests. It suited them better. And still does,” Maud said. “And there isn’t a fancy jewel cavern outside of Ponyville anymore...” Spike shrugged. “Hmmm...” Starlight thought for a moment before a grin reappeared on her face. “I’ve got it! Now Maud, I know you don’t care about architecture but what about studying the stone and masonry of an ancient, one of a kind, castle?” Maud blinked. “I see I’ve got your attention. In the Everfree Forest right outside of Ponyville there’s the ruins of that ancient castle. Haven’t been touched. You’d be able to look over and study them to your heart’s desire. And it’s close enough where you could shack up with someone in Ponyville or set up your tent somewhere nearby. Sure it’s the Everfree but there are plenty of ponies who know how to safely deal with it by now. Sound interesting?” Starlight fluttered her eyelashes expectantly. Maud blinked again. “You had me at masonry.” “Yes!” Starlight cheered and hugged her. “So you’ll move out to Ponyville?” “I suppose so. I’ve already done most of the work I wanted to out here. I can study something new now,” Maud said. “Great!” Starlight hugged her again and looked at Spike. “Score one for friendship!” “This actually went a lot easier than I thought… better not jinx it for next time,” Spike said. Starlight perked up and let Maud go. “Oh right! Before we go and you head to Ponyville I should probably tell you some things. When you get to Ponyville, make sure you become friends with me.” “Okay.” “And look for a pony called Mudbriar, you’ll get along with him.” “Okay.” “And be more honest with Pinkie Pie about how you don’t like surprise parties.” “Okay.” “And lastly—when you see me and Spike next time, don’t mention any of this. Just act like this meeting never happened.” “Okay.” Starlight sighed in relief and placed her hooves on Maud’s shoulders. “You’re a gift, Maud.” “I know. I’ve been told that many times.” Starlight laughed and stepped back, giving Maud a wink. “Your sense of humor is just as good as always too.” She exhaled and wiped a hoof across her forehead. “Whew! Alright then, have fun moving to Ponyville Maud, Spike and I are gonna be leaving now.” “Goodbye,” Maud said and turned to start gathering her things. Starlight gave her one more wistful look before she grabbed Spike and the two of them started walking away. “So are we sure that’s all that needed to be done?” Spike asked her as they stood alone in another part of the gorge. “I’m positive. This is going to have a lot of positive repercussions where friendship and harmony are concerned. Trust me,” Starlight said. “I wish I could trust you that easily...” Spike muttered but then shook his head. “Alright, I mean I still think you’re right about that and all, but I figured we’d have to do bigger things than this with each world we travel to.” “I’m sure we will for some of the places we visit but little personal problems like this are important too. This is a big fix in its own way,” Starlight smiled. “Discord time then. Better get that next portal open and head off as fast as we can,” Spike said as he reached into his bag and pulled out the Discord flute. It was still weird seeing him like this. Looking more like a doll than something that was ever alive. Spike flicked him on the head a couple of times to wake the slumbering Draconequus up. “Hey, Discord! Yoohoo! We’re ready to go!” Spike said as he shook him. “Enough, enough, I hear you!” Discord shouted in his miniature form, his head suddenly animated. “Stop shaking me already!” “Sorry,” Spike said. “So everything’s done here?” Discord asked as he looked between the two of them. “Yep!” Starlight nodded. Discord didn’t look entirely convinced but he shrugged anyways. “Meh, I’ll take your word for it. Hopefully everywhere we go to gets finished as quickly as this one.” With a snap of his fingers another glowing blue portal was created and Discord went rigid once more. “Hop on in, and wake me up a little more gently next time, please.” Spike put the Discord flute away and he and Starlight stood before the new portal. Whatever their next destination was, they felt a little more assured of themselves after the success they had here. Together they walked on through and the portal closed up—leaving this world and its ponies to their own devices.
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550809
4
Discord,Spike,Starlight Glimmer,Sunset Shimmer,Adventure,Comedy,Random,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Starlight Glimmer Regrets Her Mistakes
Now exactly how was Starlight supposed to know that a few changes to the past could cause the space-time continuum to collapse?
incomplete
21
2
<p>After her eventful vacation and all the good deeds she had done on it, Starlight was preparing to take over at the School of Friendship as Twilight got ready to ascend to the throne of Equestria. However, a few odd events suddenly began to take place around Ponyville. And according to Discord these events could be foretelling the doom of not just their world, but every world everywhere. </p><p>And it just so happens that a certain unicorn may or may not be totally to blame for all of it. Like usual, the world isn’t going to save itself, it’s up to Starlight, Spike and Discord to travel through reality and fix their (aka Starlight’s) mistakes.</p><p>Let’s hope there aren't any evil monsters lurking in the shadows.</p>
everyone
2024-02-13T01:07:11+00:00
2024-02-13T01:07:11+00:00
115
This time both Starlight and Spike came out of the portal onto a cobblestone street. They wasted no time in looking around to figure out where they were again. And though it was later in the day, with the sun starting to creep down past the horizon, it was even easier to tell where the portal had dropped them off this time. The most recognizable city in the world was hard to mistake for anywhere else. “Canterlot...” Starlight murmured as she looked around. “We could’ve been brought here for twenty different reasons, sheesh,” Spike scratched his head. “I know. I think this might already take us a little longer to figure out and… uh… is something off about the city to you?” Starlight asked. Spike raised an eyebrow but before he opened his mouth he noticed she was right. As someone born and raised in Canterlot he figured it out too. It was quiet. And empty. No one was around and traveling the streets, no noise came from any of the buildings around them. For a busy city like Canterlot, capitol of Equestria, that just never happened. Or never should happen at least. “Okay, this is already weird. There’s definitely something wrong going on here,” Spike said. “Let’s just… hm,” Starlight paused, thinking. “If we go to the castle we could talk to the Princesses but… if there are still normal versions of us who are fixtures in this world that could cause problems. I think we should just walk around the city for a bit to try and figure this out on our own.” Spike nodded and shrugged. “Alright, whatever you say.” It was clear at least that Canterlot certainly wasn’t abandoned, even if no ponies were out on the street. For one the castle was visible from where they were and it was well lit as dusk approached. Both Starlight and Spike could see lights in its many windows. The buildings around them also certainly looked clean and lived in, the streets weren’t dusty, and every now and then they saw the silhouette of a pony in the window of one of the buildings. So definitely not abandoned, they hadn’t stumbled on the apocalypse just yet, ponies for some reason just weren’t out on the street. “This is kind of creepy. Even more than if no one was around,” Spike said. “I know what you mean. I’m tempted to just go up to the next door and knock, see if anyone will even answer,” Starlight said. However that line of action was interrupted when something came floating down from above them. Two pegasi royal guards came down from the sky and landed on the street right in front of them with big smiles on their faces. “Well hey there, fellow citizens!” The lead guard said. “Don’t you know it’s past curfew? You should really be home right now!” “Curfew?” Starlight scrunched up her nose. “This early?” Spike looked up at the nearly lowered sun. “That’s right! So what say you both head home before either one of you gets written up!” The guard said—still smiling. Though in his and his comrade’s eyes there was a decided lack of friendliness. And as he stood there looking at them, his head tilted to the side and his smile somewhat faded as he realized something. “Hey wait… aren’t you the former student and dragon assistant of Princess Twilight?” The other guard lost his smile briefly and coughed. “Er, former Princess Twilight,” the first guard corrected. Starlight frowned and Spike also looked quite worried. “Wait. Former student? Former Princess?” Starlight questioned. The guards were now equally confused and their smiles faded for a moment before they caught themselves and put them back even wider on their faces. “Yep! But just cause you’re different from the average citizen don’t expect us to treat you any different. After all, no one should be treated differently just because they’re different,” the guard proudly nodded to himself as if he had just successfully recited a speech or correctly remembered his line from a play. Which he might very much have done. “Yeah...” Starlight reached over and grabbed Spike, her horn sparking as she cast her teleportation spell. The two of them vanished in a burst of magic—leaving two flustered and confused guards behind. “Well there’s definitely something really weird going on here,” Starlight said after she and Spike reappeared in an alley a few streets over. “Tell me about it. The curfew, the smiling, that speech, and apparently something has happened to the Twilight of this world. And probably the you and me too,” Spike said. “They recognized us but were confused to see us, not just because we’re breaking this “curfew” either,” Starlight agreed. “Something definitely happened to Equestria. I’m guessing Twilight isn’t the only one who isn’t a Princess any longer. What I’m confused about is how anything I did lead to this. What did I do in Canterlot that could lead to the Princesses being overthrown or even just stepping down?” “I dunno, but we better figure it out quickly,” Spike shrugged. Together they looked up past the tops of the buildings at the quickly darkening sky, making sure they weren’t being watched by any guards. It didn’t seem like they had anything to worry about. Not yet at least. No alarm had been sounded and they didn’t see any figures shooting through the sky or hear any hooves rampaging over the stone streets. The curfew kept things quiet enough where they could hear a pin drop. “We should sneak around some more to figure out what’s going on,” Starlight said. Spike raised a questioning eyebrow at her. “What?” Starlight frowned. “Nothing, nothing,” he raised his hands in supplication. “Just surprised your first plan wasn’t to barge into the castle and start demanding answers, throwing guards around left and right.” “I wouldn’t do that. At first,” Starlight said. “If we’re solving these problems we should be solving them in the right way. Otherwise we might just cause more chaos when we should be getting rid of it. So we’re going to do things the Twilight Sparkle way and use friendship until we have no other option. So let’s hurry up because we still should be fixing these problems as fast as we can and it’s probably going to take longer to fix them the right way.” “I mean, I can’t disagree with you there,” Spike said. “So do we just try and sneak by on our hooves and feet? It should be dark really soon anyways.” “We still know Canterlot well, I think if we keep our eyes open the guards wont be a problem,” Starlight said. “Worst comes to worst and we can just hide somewhere until morning once the curfew is over.” “Morning might be even tougher to get around though... depending on how things actually are here. Starlight nodded. “Yeah, either way we have work to do. Let’s go.” “Do you want to see if we can find any other ponies who might be willing to talk?” Spike asked. Starlight stopped for a moment before leaving the alley. “Mmm... maybe. I don’t think we have to worry about who we run into in this world. But ponies might not be willing to talk to us anyways.” In a few minutes the both of them silently snuck around the dark streets of Canterlot as the sun went down and it finally became evening. Crawling along the walls of the buildings or using side streets as much they could to stay out of sight of any potential guards in the air. Canterlot was a big city and parts of it could be nearly labyrinthine, especially at night, but that actually just made it easier for them to avoid any others and travel stealthily through the city they knew so well. Eventually they made it to a more residential area of the city where numerous fancy houses stood on one side of the street. Though Starlight didn’t expect much, she figured they should at least give knocking a try or two. It didn’t amount to much. The few times they knocked and got any response at all it was just a “Go away”, “It’s past curfew we can’t talk”, “Leave us alone”, “We’re not breaking the rules”, at best. After that last one they got a hastily added “This is what we would say to anyone, because we’d never treat anyone differently for any reason”. Starlight and Spike both had to raise a confused eyebrow at that. They couldn’t tell if ponies were being friendly or unfriendly right now. The way they were acting didn’t seem like it would come from the typical sort of oppression. And even the guards were still the same ponies as before. The more they learned the less they figured out. They left the residential area and started to make their way through the heart of the city in a roundabout way towards the castle. It looked like they’d have to go there soon enough but they still wanted to learn more first. Passing by on the street in front of the larger buildings of Canterlot, some lights from above caught their attention and they looked up at the face of the building. A huge banner was hung from the top of it while a few small lights kept it lit up even in the dead of night. Starlight and Spike both felt their jaws slowly drop open and their eyes widen as they looked at it—and the positively weird thing drawn on it. There were two figures on the banner, hoof in arm, almost hugging, and smiling out at anyone who walked by and looked at it. The bottom of the banner also had a number of faceless ponies of all tribes, drawn only with smiles, while the top showed a bright and sunny sky. Both of the centerpieces of the banner were familiar figures to Starlight and Spike—one quite well known and the other not so much but still easily recognizable. The fact that they were together like this and smiling happily was the weird part. Back in their world it was almost certain that the two not only had never met but probably had never even heard of one another. Spike, used to so many strange things by now, slowly lifted a single claw and pointed at the banner. “Why is there a huge banner of Tempest Shadow and Iron Will hugging here?” “I have no idea,” Starlight honestly answered. “Did we uh… did we ever meet those two when we were stuck in time?” Spike asked. “We definitely didn’t run into Tempest. I’m not even sure what we could’ve done that would result in this. It’s insane,” Starlight said. Spike looked at her. “What about Iron Will?” “I did meet him at Canterlot when we were staying with Celestia. I don’t think you were with me for that. He was here pushing a new book or something, I gave him some business advice and that was it,” Starlight shrugged. “I-I genuinely have no idea what’s going on anymore.” “So what do we do to figure this out?” Spike shrugged in turn. Starlight frowned up at the banner and turned her attention to Canterlot Castle in the distance. “I think now it’s time for us to go the castle and start demanding answers. But peacefully.” “I somehow get the feeling that none of this is going to end well,” Spike gulped. “Probably. But we’re still going to do the best we can to handle this the right way,” Starlight said and reached out a hoof to Spike. “Come on—we’re taking the direct approach.” Spike grabbed her hoof. “Whatever you say...” As soon as they were connected, Starlight’s horn lit up once more as she prepared for a long range teleport. She knew the layout of the castle well and exactly where she wanted to go. This would likely get them in trouble at first, but they needed to get into the castle and she wanted to avoid a fight to do that. Once inside she’d talk her way out somehow. And hopefully convince whoever she could to let her see Tempest Shadow, Iron Will, or whoever might have actually been in charge here. In a burst of static magic the two of them flashed away to the castle. An instant later they reappeared in a corridor inside of Canterlot Castle. Close to the throne room but still away from anywhere guards should be actively guarding. Unless they were unlucky enough to appear right as a patrol was going by. Thankfully that wasn’t the case and all that happened was Spike grabbing his belly as soon as the teleportation was finished. “Ugh... I think all this teleportation and going through interdimensional portals is making me sick.” Starlight smirked and patted him on the back. “You’ll be fine.” “I guess... so where to from here?” Spike asked. “We go right to the throne room and ask if we can talk to who’s in charge,” Starlight shrugged. “That’s not nearly as good of an idea as I thought you had...” Spike sighed. "It’s the best idea that doesn’t involve me blasting the doors down,” Starlight said. “I guess that’s true,” Spike admitted. “Sadly.” “The only reason I didn’t take us right into the throne room is that would’ve caused a huge panic and there’s no way we could talk it down. This way at least I bet I can still get us in without too much trouble,” Starlight said. “That’s if whoever is in charge even lets anyone come see them,” Spike said. “Well maybe if they don’t we’ll have to make ourselves too important to ignore,” Starlight smiled. “I don’t like that smile on your face...” The two of them calmly walked through the quiet castle towards the nearby throne room as if it was just an ordinary day, as if they were back in their world and getting ready to visit Celestia or Luna. If they looked like they belonged it was far more likely that the guards would think they belonged. However, it didn’t seem to matter too much. Even for evening the castle was much quieter than it was supposed to be. They didn’t come across any guards until they were walking right down the hallway towards the throne room. Starlight kept a happy smile on her face to appear normal, especially for what goes as normal around here apparently, and walked right up to the two guards who flanked either side of the door. They were smiling their big eerie smiles too, with their eyes watching her the whole time. “Hello!” Starlight said, waving at them. “Is um... whoever’s in charge available to see right now?” Spike rolled his eyes. “The First Citizen is always available to meet with her fellow citizens! She’s happy to answer any questions and deal with any problems that might be occurring in Equestria!” The guard on the right said. “Uh, although there aren’t really problems anymore. Because everyone treats everyone kindly and no one would get bullied or mistreated anywhere!” “That’s right,” the other guard nodded. “Okay... so I can walk on in?” Starlight asked. “Of course!” The guard on the right nodded. Suddenly his smile dropped and he did a double-take. “Wait—isn’t it past curfew?” “Uhhhh...” Starlight rubbed the back of her neck. “And hey, aren’t you two...” the guard on the left narrowed his eyes and rubbed his chin. “You two should be imprisoned in Tartarus right now, shouldn’t you?” Spike and Starlight shared an uneasy grimace. The short dragon chuckled uneasily and shrugged. “Um, we got let out?” “Oh, okay then,” the left guard nodded. Then frowned. “Wait, no, that doesn’t make any sense.” “Yeah this doesn’t seem right,” the right guard said. “Well then take us in to see the First Citizen so she can set things right herself,” Starlight shrugged. The two guards looked at each other. “I mean...” the right guard started. “I don’t think it matters that much, does it? If they broke out she’ll just send them back,” the left guard said. “Weirder things have happened lately anyways...” the right guard scratched his head and shrugged. “Alright, I give up, have a nice meeting with the First Citizen.” “Thank you,” Starlight smiled and whispered down to Spike as the guards opened up the doors. “And we didn’t have to get violent or have me use any brainwashing spells at all. That’s what I call progress!” “It might go bad right now though. Tempest was pretty dangerous before Twilight changed her, she has to be this “First Citizen”, we need to be careful going in there. Especially since the guards don’t seem worried about her,” Spike whispered back. “If we can just get her talking instead of immediately fighting, we should be good,” Starlight said. The doors were opened completely and the guards allowed Starlight and Spike to walk in without anymore fanfare. As soon as they were past the threshold the smiling guards let the doors close again and Starlight and Spike stood there, at the entrance to the throne room, and were baffled by what they saw. This was not the throne room they were familiar with. A lot of renovations had been made. First off there were numerous searchlights and electrical lights all across the pillars and ceiling, illuminating the room more than it ever had been. And the stained glass windows that used to show great and important events in Equestria’s history had been replaced by paintings of Iron Will making various body-building poses. Most notably of all however was at the very back of the throne room where the throne itself used to be. It was gone. That whole area had been leveled and replaced by a large desk where books and papers overflowed from it like a library had dumped its entire contents everywhere. Behind the desk was a large banner hanging from the ceiling showing a grinning Tempest Shadow holding a staff. A familiar staff that again both Starlight and Spike recognized as being the weapon of the Storm King in their world—the Staff of Sacanas. At the top of the banner a phrase had been printed in large lettering: TO THE BETTERMENT OF PONIES EVERYWHERE Besides the one long desk there was a second smaller desk off to the side that was also surrounded by towers of books. Though Starlight could tell they were all copies of the same book. That desk had one big, velvety red chair behind it. And several overflowing bags of bits behind it. And a big golden statue of Iron Will behind those. Starlight and Spike weren’t surprised to see who was sitting where. On the red velvety chair was Iron Will, looking like he was in the middle of autographing every single book on and around his desk. When he noticed someone had come into the throne room he looked up at the two of them. Immediately his brow furrowed in thought when his eyes landed on Starlight. Behind the larger desk was Tempest Shadow, directly beneath her banner, with a straight line of view to them as they walked into the throne room. She was smiling. At them. And not in a friendly way. “Uh, hi,” Starlight waved to her. “Well, well, well,” Tempest said as she stood up from her simple chair. “If it isn’t Starlight Glimmer and Spike. Escaped from Tartarus? Did the guards let you in themselves? It doesn’t matter, I don’t know why you would’ve come back here but it’s a big mistake on your part. Did you think you could talk things out with me? Try and change my mind again? It’s pointless. And it’ll be back to Tartarus with you in just a moment.” Sparks started to shoot from her horn while Starlight pushed Spike behind her and lit hers up as well- “Wait! Hold on!” Iron Will shouted and stood up from his chair. All eyes turned to him as he stared at Starlight and rubbed his chin. “What is it?” Tempest raised an eyebrow. “This is Starlight Glimmer?” Iron Will held out a hand towards her. “Yes. Why?” Tempest asked. “I know her.”
MagicS
550809
5
Discord,Spike,Starlight Glimmer,Sunset Shimmer,Adventure,Comedy,Random,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Starlight Glimmer Regrets Her Mistakes
Now exactly how was Starlight supposed to know that a few changes to the past could cause the space-time continuum to collapse?
incomplete
21
2
<p>After her eventful vacation and all the good deeds she had done on it, Starlight was preparing to take over at the School of Friendship as Twilight got ready to ascend to the throne of Equestria. However, a few odd events suddenly began to take place around Ponyville. And according to Discord these events could be foretelling the doom of not just their world, but every world everywhere. </p><p>And it just so happens that a certain unicorn may or may not be totally to blame for all of it. Like usual, the world isn’t going to save itself, it’s up to Starlight, Spike and Discord to travel through reality and fix their (aka Starlight’s) mistakes.</p><p>Let’s hope there aren't any evil monsters lurking in the shadows.</p>
everyone
2024-02-15T19:41:37+00:00
2024-02-15T19:41:37+00:00
120
“Of course you know her. She’s Starlight Glimmer. Student of Twilight Sparkle, the one who-” Tempest Shadow said to Iron Will before he cut her off. “Not just like that. I mean I know her. I’ve met her before,” Iron Will said. “That’s impossible. I already imprisoned her in Tartarus before you would’ve ever seen her,” Tempest frowned. “That dragon too for that matter.” “Uh, excuse me?” Starlight smiled awkwardly and raised her hoof. “Iron Will is right. We’ve met before.” “That’s right!” Iron Will smirked and leaped over his desk, loudly jumping onto the floor in front of Tempest’s desk. “Iron Will is certain of it—you’re the mare he met ages ago back in Canterlot! The one who gave him such great advice! I had no idea you were Starlight Glimmer.” “Wait a minute-” Tempest shook her head. “The mare you told me about? The one who inspired you to write the book I found and started all this?” Spike glanced up at Starlight with an unamused look on his face. She could only chuckle nervously and shrug in response. “That’s her for sure!” Iron Will folded his arms over his chest and nodded. “But how… why… shouldn’t she have known or said something?” Tempest Shadow was thoroughly confused. “I might be able to shed some light on this whole situation,” Starlight Glimmer gently broached. “You see I’m not the Starlight Glimmer. I’m a Starlight Glimmer.” Tempest Shadow narrowed her eyes suspiciously. “And what exactly does that mean?” “I’m from a different world. Years ago—to you and Iron Will—I came here and met him. Now I’m back because uhh… things are a little too chaotic and it’s messing up our world and every other world right now. Time and space collapsing and all that. So I’m traveling around trying to make things more harmonic in all the various timelines and stuff,” Starlight explained. “And I’m supposed to believe that nonsense?” Tempest Shadow snorted. “It’s true. Really,” Spike interjected. “And she’s definitely the mare I met all those years ago,” Iron Will nodded in agreement. Tempest frowned at the three of them, but seemed to at least consider what she heard as well. “So even if that’s true… what do you mean by try to make things more harmonic? And there’s nothing chaotic about this world. The opposite for that matter. I’ve made this a better Equestria than ever before!” “How exactly?” Starlight said as she looked between her and Iron Will. “Pardon me for asking but how did you take over Equestria? Back in our world things are… really, really, different.” “Heh. Since apparently you had a lot to do with it—and seemingly I owe you because of that—I’ll tell you,” Tempest smirked and sat back down. “Years ago now I was working for the Storm King after leaving Equestria thanks to becoming disillusioned with it. For a while I thought about getting revenge on the hypocritical, selfish, ponies and also restoring my horn and I thought that the Storm King could grant me those things. Then I came across a popular book that had been making its way across the continent. A self-help book written by a certain Minotaur,” Tempest smiled over at Iron Will, who proudly puffed out his chest. “That book changed my life! I realized I couldn’t be living like a follower anymore, that I shouldn’t be passive in what I wanted, or let myself get pushed or ordered around by someone else again. I had to take life by the horns!” She said as Starlight and Spike quickly glanced at her broken horn. “Instead of just blindly assuming I’d get what I wanted I needed to take action and not let myself be manipulated. Especially by someone as incompetent and silly as the Storm King was. I was already doing most of the tough stuff for him anyways.” Tempest Shadow chuckled and lifted up something from behind her chair. “So I defeated him and took this!” She lifted up the Staff of Sacanas for them all to see, Starlight and Spike gulping and sharing a worried glance before trying to act normal. “And now that I had the Staff I could do anything I wanted!” Tempest took a lingering look up at it, smiling. She turned around a few times and looked over at Starlight and Spike. “But Iron Will’s book helped me with something else at the same time. It taught me positive mental attitude. It taught me how to deal with my anger and put it towards something constructive. I wasn’t going to just take petty revenge on Equestria. I was going to change Equestria so no one would ever have to take revenge again. Petrifying the Princesses and taking their powers with the Staff allowed me to take control of Equestria since now I’m the only one who can raise the sun and the moon. And with that I’ve been able to shape things to my will ever since—and now I’ve created a better Equestria. One where no one will ever be bullied or mistreated again!” As she finished her speech she smiled broadly at Starlight and Spike. Spike was doing his best to not make any “She’s crazy” motions to Starlight while Starlight just rubbed her chin in thought. “You know, the old me would’ve loved this,” Starlight said. “But anyways—you’ve made a better Equestria, huh? But it sounds like a lot had to be given up for that to happen.” “So a few holier-than-thou Princesses got turned to stone?” Tempest shrugged. “Nothing less than they deserved? And some troublesome ponies got imprisoned—it needed to happen. And some rich jerks in Canterlot can’t do whatever they want whenever they want anymore? Big. Deal. No little filly is ever going to lose her place or her friends anymore with how I’ve changed things. That’s worth it in my book. And I’m the one who took charge—I’m the one with the right to shape things to my will.” “Mhm. She really liked my book,” Iron Will said, giving Tempest a thumb’s up. “And that’s why once I was done conquering Equestria I found Iron Will and brought him here to show him my gratitude. Together we’ve been working on policy and sending self-help advice to ponies across the country! And I’m planning to send his books and writings to every corner of the world soon—that’s what these special autographed copies are for,” Tempest said and pointed to his desk. “I think everyone will be happier if they’ve read Iron Will’s books.” Starlight coughed. “Well… it’s nice that the two of you have become such close friends.” “That’s not the word I would use,” Spike shook his head. Tempest Shadow merely chuckled. “Well there you have it. Apparently thanks to you the two of us were inspired to make this happen. I guess I should be appreciative, my time-traveling friend.” Starlight frowned. “I really don’t think I can be blamed for this. This is crazy, no one could have ever expected something like this to happen from me talking to Iron Will. Right, Spike?” “I mean… yeah. But could you have expected the world to end from you stopping Rainbow Dash’s Sonic Rainboom?” Spike raised an eyebrow at her. “I-” Starlight stopped mid-breath. “No comment.” “So what exactly is your goal here now? There’s nothing for you to do. I bet this Equestria is far friendlier than the one you come from,” Tempest smirked. “No. It’s not. And you may be happy here right now, but it’s not true happiness. You still haven’t let go of all that hate and negative feelings you’ve had inside you since you were a filly. I’ll admit I don’t know the Tempest from my world half as well as Twilight—but she’s a better mare than you,” Starlight said. “You’re not evil—just misguided—but you’ve done some evil things and you’ve petrified some of the nicest, kindest, ponies in the entire world. If you wanted to make Equestria better you should’ve talked to Twilight first instead of just forcing this on everyone. But you didn’t even give her a chance, did you?” Starlight snorted. “Don’t answer, I already know. You’re bullheaded the same way I was.” “Excuse me,” Iron Will glared at her. “Er—didn’t mean it like that. Sorry,” Starlight waved her hooves. “Thank you,” Iron Will tilted up his chin. “Anyways—this place only has the facade of friendship. You’re forcing ponies to be nice and not bully others instead of teaching them why they shouldn’t and getting them to really understand each other,” Starlight said. Tempest rolled her eyes. “Oh like you know any better.” “Actually, she’s the headmistress of a school that teaches friendship now,” Spike interjected. “That’s a thing?” Tempest frowned. “Yep!” Starlight smugly grinned and puffed out her chest. Tempest growled in annoyance at the sheer defiance and disagreement the two outsiders were showing her. She stood up and angrily waved the Staff of Sacanas at them. “Whatever! This is my world and the Equestria I’ve made is still better than how it was before! Neither of you have anything to do with me or my world, so get out of here!” “Sorry but we can’t exactly do that,” Starlight shook her head. “A lot more than just your Equestria is riding on this,” Spike nodded. “And…” He frowned and stood up straighter, staring confidently at Tempest. “There’s no way I’d let Twilight stay petrified like this, even if she’s not my Twilight.” “That’s right. The petrified Princesses are still here in the castle, aren’t they? Please, return their power with the Staff and change them back to normal. I’ll make sure they give you a chance and don’t just lock you up,” Starlight said. “Absolutely not,” Tempest jumped over her desk, Staff levitating beside her. “I won’t let Equestria return to the way it was. I’ve erased any reason for ponies to be unhappy! In a few years they’ll all be used to it! This Staff is the key to maintaining everything—if the Princesses were awakened it wouldn’t just be that my work is undone, it would be impossible for it to ever happen again. Ponies treat each other better here. Who cares if it’s forced or if they don’t really like each other? It’s better!” Starlight sighed and looked down at Spike, giving him a questioning gaze. He seemed to think about something for a moment before shrugging. “Well, let it be known that I tried,” Starlight shrugged back. “And what does that mea-” before Tempest could finish her sentence she was blasted in the face by a powerful magical laser from Starlight that sent her careening backwards into her desk—demolishing it and all the scrolls and papers around it. “Tempest!” Iron Will shouted in shock. The Staff of Sacanas meanwhile went spinning into the air and started falling to the ground—right before it was grabbed by Spike. Flapping his wings he sighed in relief and dove back down to Starlight. “Okay—next move,” Starlight grabbed Spike and the two of them once more teleported away. Right as they both heard a massive yell from the destroyed desk along with a fireworks display of sparking blue magic. “GUAAAAAARDS!” Starlight hadn’t been thinking of any place in particular inside the castle when she made her little jump. That was why they ended up the kitchen. Spike again teetered about for a bit and was slightly green in the face before he got over it. He looked up at the Staff and all the power it contained in it before shooting a look at Starlight. “Now what?” Spike asked. “We’re not going to have a lot of time before the entire castle is swarmed by all the guards. And fighting them and Tempest together will cause too much chaos, we still need to avoid that. So we’re going to fix this problem at the source. We’re taking this Staff to the Princesses and giving them their magic back. Returning them to normal and destroying the Staff should fix nearly everything here in the short term,” Starlight said. Spike nodded. “Works for me.” “I need your help a bit though, Spike.” “What do you need?” Starlight grinned sheepishly. “I have no idea where the Princesses actually are right now.” “Oh,” Spike blinked. “Yeah that’s an issue.” “I wasn’t able to help out or do anything when the Storm King invaded Equestria in our world. I only know what happened thanks to you and Twilight telling me all about it. Where were the petrified Princesses actually held? I know it’s somewhere in the castle but I have no idea where.” “Don’t worry, I remember where they were taken and how it went down. I bet this Tempest has them in the same spot!” “Then show me the way, we need to move as fast as we can!” A second later a swiftly flying dragon and a sprinting unicorn came running out of Canterlot Castle’s kitchen, heading up to one of the many tall towers that loomed over the capitol of Equestria. The Staff of Sacanas and all the Alicorn magic it contained was held in Starlight’s telekinetic grip as she followed behind Spike. It didn’t take long before the rumbling of guards, summoned by Tempest, began to shake the castle. The only good thing right now was that Tempest shouldn’t have any idea where Starlight teleported. The bad thing was that she probably knew where Starlight planned to go. They had to get through the castle real fast before Tempest could block them off. Starlight didn’t want to hurt any innocent guards, she didn’t want to damage the castle, or potentially put the Princesses in danger. Though things weren’t solved completely with friendship she could do her best to make sure there wasn’t any unnecessary violence. That was why when the two of them went speeding up a flight of stairs, Starlight blocked each entrance at every level in the castle with a hastily erected barrier of crystals. She could still keep them from getting swarmed like this. She kept that up at each intersection and hallway they passed through as well—anything that could buy them some time and keep Tempest off their tails. It wouldn’t stop pegasi guards from coming in from the outside and higher levels of the castle but Starlight doubted they were that organized yet. “Spike I really hope you’re remembering right!” Starlight said as they zoomed up into the supposed tower. “Yes! I’m telling you the room where they were all held is just up ahead!” Spike answered. “I guess I wish I knew the castle as well as Twilight does...” Starlight murmured. A minute later they were running towards a set of closed doors—and even from out here the two of them felt an ominous sensation pouring from the room behind them. Starlight and Spike rushed faster, with Starlight preemptively using her magic to grasp the doors and pull them open. The lock that had been switched to keep them closed shattered under her magic. Once she and Spike skidded through the doorway she threw up another wall of crystals that blocked the room off from the hallway. Hopefully buying them just enough time. The rumbling from behind them was getting stronger. But they now paid no mind to that. The circular room in front of them held what they were looking for. It was sad, and even a little scary, to see the Princesses like this. The four of them, petrified and arrayed at the cardinal directions, would Tempest have kept them like this forever? “Twilight...” Spike whispered in sorrow. So what if it wasn’t his Twilight? It still hurt. “Celestia… Luna… Cadance… ugh, this is all so wrong. I can’t imagine how their friends and families are hurting in this world,” Starlight said. “Well that’s why we’re going to fix this right now!” Spike said and grabbed the Staff of Sacanas from Starlight. “Come on—I’m putting it right in the center and you just unleash the magic from it and turn them back to normal.” Starlight smirked. “Glad we’re on the same page.” Together they went right into the middle of the room, all the frozen statues staring at them in the center, and Spike slammed down the Staff of Sacanas while Starlight activated its power with her magic. Just outside the room the entire hallway was shaking. But that was secondary. Starlight’s turquoise magic enveloped the entire Staff, lighting it up and drawing forth the magic within. She was actually kind of just winging it right now. Willing her magic and the Staff to do what she wanted. But Starlight was nothing if not gifted when it came to magic—a true natural. The stolen Alicorn magic was drawn out from the Staff and naturally flowed in four different sparkling beams back to the ponies it came from, the display so bright both Spike and Starlight had to close their eyes briefly. When they opened them back up the Staff was left devoid of magic and the statues of the Princesses were bathed in a magical rainbow glow. The magic stayed wrapped around their frozen bodies, glowing brighter and brighter while Starlight and Spike looked on in anticipation. Finally the magic seemed to seep into the statues and their petrified bodies started to change, the stone skin vanishing like a watercolor painting. In just a moment the four Princesses were standing like normal again, rescued from their petrified state. They looked dazed, tired, and befuddled, but they were okay. “Twilight!” Starlight and Spike yelled together and ran to hug the Princess of Friendship. More for her own sake than theirs. The purple Alicorn was rocked back on her hooves by the two of them but the hug at least seemed to bring her to her senses. “S-Starlight? Spike?” She looked around at the other recovering Princesses and the Staff of Sacanas. “Did you rescue us?” Starlight smirked. “Actually, you’re the one who still needs to rescue us in Tartarus.” “Huh?” Twilight blinked in confusion. “Sorry, don’t mean to confuse you or anything. In fact—let me just take care of this first,” Starlight said and turned around, blasting a powerful beam of magic at the Staff of Sacanas. The Staff was blown apart, reduced to splinters and smoking embers that littered the floor and shocked the other Princesses. “What’s going on?” Celestia asked, her eyes still glassy. “Not a lot of time to explain, Spike and I actually have to be going now. I know the four of you can fix things from here,” Starlight said and smiled again at Twilight. “Also, go easy on Tempest. Make sure you give her a second chance just like you gave me.” “I’m… very confused right now but I promise I will,” this world’s Twilight Sparkle said. “Great! Come on, Spike! We’ve got more work to do,” Starlight said and grabbed the dragon, pulling him past the Princesses towards the back of the room. Right after that, the crystals blocking off the room exploded and revealed an angry Tempest Shadow with an army of guards behind her. However—there was now a big problem for her. She was faced with four just as angry Alicorn Princesses, now all standing together and staring her down. Tempest’s eyes widened and her angry frown turned to nervous pursed lips. Meanwhile, the guards also noticed this big change. Their beloved Alicorn Princesses were no longer stone statues, no longer held hostage and helpless. And thus they had absolutely no reason to listen to or side with a certain usurper anymore. The guards, pegasi, unicorn, and earth ponies alike, slowly turned their attention towards Tempest Shadow. None of them were smiling any longer. Tempest gulped. “Okay—let’s talk this out...” And while that happened and everyone else was occupied, Starlight reached her hoof into Spike’s bag and yanked out the Discord flute. Discord blinked as if slowly waking up. “Ah, is it time to-” “PORTAL, PORTAL, PORTAL!” Starlight frantically shook him up and down. His eyes spinning around in their sockets, Discord snapped his fingers and created another glowing blue circle that Starlight and Spiked quickly jumped into.
MagicS
550809
6
Discord,Spike,Starlight Glimmer,Sunset Shimmer,Adventure,Comedy,Random,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
Starlight Glimmer Regrets Her Mistakes
Now exactly how was Starlight supposed to know that a few changes to the past could cause the space-time continuum to collapse?
incomplete
21
2
<p>After her eventful vacation and all the good deeds she had done on it, Starlight was preparing to take over at the School of Friendship as Twilight got ready to ascend to the throne of Equestria. However, a few odd events suddenly began to take place around Ponyville. And according to Discord these events could be foretelling the doom of not just their world, but every world everywhere. </p><p>And it just so happens that a certain unicorn may or may not be totally to blame for all of it. Like usual, the world isn’t going to save itself, it’s up to Starlight, Spike and Discord to travel through reality and fix their (aka Starlight’s) mistakes.</p><p>Let’s hope there aren't any evil monsters lurking in the shadows.</p>
everyone
2024-02-18T19:16:28+00:00
2024-02-18T19:16:27+00:00
92
“You know that’s funny, because I distinctly remember telling you to be more gentle when waking me up next time,” Discord said as he glared at Starlight. “Sorry Discord, I was a little frantic back there,” Starlight shrugged. “At least we fixed things again,” Spike added. “I mean I’m pretty sure we did.” Currently the three of them were still careening through the colorful space between worlds, no next destination decided upon yet thanks to the abrupt departure from the last world. The three of them tumbled about in this void devoid of gravity with only flashing colors and starbursts of rainbow patterns for a background. There was a growing feeling of disorientation as they flew through this space and they were all starting to feel it. “Well I suppose then that I should make our exit portal already,” Discord said and prepared to snap his fingers. “Wait! Not yet! We’ve been doing this wrong,” Starlight stopped him. Discord raised an eyebrow at her. “What do you mean?” “It’s too random, there was no order to the two worlds we traveled to. If we want to get rid of chaos we shouldn’t be choosing worlds at random, we need to come up with a real order that makes sense,” Starlight said. “What do you think then?” Spike asked. “We go backwards,” Starlight said. “From the very last altered timeline we need to visit to the first. We tie up any loose ends before they can unfurl further. Do you think you can manage that, Discord?” “I don’t see why I wouldn’t be able to,” Discord said. “Good—then let’s get things started for real! Let’s go and fix up these worlds!” Starlight cheered. Discord smirked. “Well it seems the mood is still positive.” He snapped his fingers and a bright beacon of light appeared in front of them. “There we go, now I’m going back to sleep. Do not shake me awake next time.” The Discord flute stiffened back up and flew into Spike’s bag, their Draconequus ally leaving the two of them alone once more. Spike seemed to be in a positive mood though after Starlight’s words, he gave her a smirk and a thumbs up. “We’ve got this, two wins down already, just a few more to go.” “That’s right. I’m not going to pretend that things were perfect last time, but we’ll get better and better as we go on. Just gotta remember what’s at stake,” Starlight said. Spike nodded and together the two of them flew toward the bright light that led to the next world. “You know I really have to thank you for all of this.” Starlight blinked. That wasn’t Spike or Discord who had spoken. In fact, Spike didn’t seem to hear it at all. Starlight turned her head and saw another pony flying through the space between worlds, flying while behind him an impossibly changing array of colors and patterns continued to expand for infinity. But although her mind did immediately go to “pony” there were a few things off. He was tie-dye. No normal pony, not even Rainbow Dash or Celestia, had the mix of colors that made up his body, mane, and tail. It was a constantly swirling and changing mess of tie-dye, in fact, she couldn’t even see where his body ended and the mane and tail began. It was more like he was a pony-shaped blob of colors. There was no Cutie Mark on his flank and no visible eyes or mouth. But even though there weren’t eyes she knew he was looking at her. And even though he had no mouth she could tell he was smiling at her. “Who are you?” Starlight asked, perplexed. Spike right beside her gave no indication he heard her or realized what was going on. “Harlequin Rainbow, pleased to meet you,” somehow the tie-dye skin around where his “mouth” was supposed to be stretched even further. “Very pleased. For I sincerely owe everything—almost everything at least—to you.” “What are you talking about?” “I’m just happy about what you’ve done and what you’re doing now. Keep fixing things up please, everyone is counting on you after all and you simply can’t leave the world like this. Bye bye for now but I’ll see you later,” he said and his body twisted and stretched like bubblegum, spiraling around before disappearing like a black hole had sucked him up. Starlight shook her head as if snapping out of a trance and looked over at Spike. “Spike, did you see that?” “Huh?” Spike looked up at her dumbly—oblivious. “See what?” “I-” Starlight started but stopped, not really sure what to say. “Never mind, I’ll talk about it with Discord later...” “Okaaay?” Spike shrugged, confused. A moment later they made it to the next portal and they were swallowed up by the light- This time the both of them landed easily on the ground, no problems whatsoever coming out of the portal. Starlight took a look around, realizing they were in a grassy field somewhere during the middle of the day, she wasn’t entirely sure where, and that nobody else was around. Spike also took a quick look for a second before his eyes settled on Starlight—something about her really catching his attention. “Uh, Starlight?” “We’re obviously in Equestria but I’m not sure where… it looks kind of familiar though,” Starlight said as she rubbed her chin. “Starlight?” “I guess the problem has to be around here in some way? What was it that I even did here again?” “Starlight...” “Maybe we should just find the nearest ponies and feel them out… see what’s different about this world compared to ours.” “STARLIGHT!” “What is it, Spike?” Starlight shouted back. Spike simply raised a claw and pointed at her sides. “You have wings again.” Starlight blinked and looked back at herself, seeing the lilac wings resting comfortably on her sides. And feeling slightly taller. “Oh. I’m an Alicorn again. Well that’s not good.” “I remember this world… it was the one with Tirek and you being a Princess… somehow,” Spike shrugged. “Ugh! This is just crazy! How does my body change just from popping out into this world?! Shouldn’t I stay normal even if the me here is an Alicorn?” Starlight yelled in frustration. She sighed and looked over at Spike. “Oh forget it… let’s just figure out how-” she stopped mid-sentence and her eyes widened. “Spike! Where’s your bag?!” Spike now jolted, so caught up in seeing Starlight as an Alicorn that he hadn’t even noticed. His bag was missing. He no longer wore it on his side. “My bag! Discord! They’re gone!” “Uh oh…” Starlight bit her lip. “Oh this really can’t be good.” “What do we do?” Spike looked around in a panic, hoping the bag had just fallen somewhere nearby. “I… I genuinely don’t know,” Starlight shook her head. “I remember this world… it was so different that what had happened here couldn’t have been from anything I did. The changes were too huge, things would’ve had to have happened way far back… my friends were the Elements, Chrysalis was somehow reformed… who knows what else is different here.” “I see something that’s the same though,” Spike said and pointed into the distance. Starlight followed him—and saw Canterlot looking the same as ever up on the side of the mountain. She took a deep breath and nodded. “When in doubt, go to the Princesses.” “If they’re even the Princesses we know,” Spike gulped. “Yeah… but there’s no time to waste, come on Spike, I’m gonna put these wings to good use,” Starlight said and spread them open. At first she was a little wobbly but Starlight being Starlight she was able to get the hang of flying with wings relatively easily. It was faster than using her magic to levitate herself and Spike followed along with her the whole way until she got herself in the groove. While they flew over Equestria straight towards Canterlot Castle, they both started to notice a few odd things. For one, there was absolutely no other pony in the sky. Not a single pegasus was visible. And even though this wasn’t a very populated area of Equestria (at least in their world) it was weird they didn’t see any ponies walking down below either. Despite it being the middle of the day things were very quiet and empty around here. The ground looked weird too. It was all yellow and dried out, rivers and streams clearly weren’t as filled as they should be either. It was almost like the heart of Equestria was in the middle of a drought—even though something like that should be impossible. “Spike? Do things look a little unhealthy around here to you?” Starlight asked. “Yeah,” Spike nodded. “It’s like the weather ponies aren’t doing their job.” “Strange… maybe it has something to do with why we’re here,” Starlight said. “At this point I think anything even slightly odd should be taken into consideration.” “True.” When the two of them finally made it to the airspace around Canterlot they saw that things weren’t really any different there either. They did see some ponies out but not nearly as many as they should—there weren’t any guards flying around—and the various beautiful trees, plants, and flowers that normally dotted the rich city were all drying out and dying. All the fountains had been turned off too for some reason. Even the rich gardens of the castle weren’t spared. Starlight and Spike could see how yellow the formally green grass of the grounds had become and how the numerous hedges had all started to die away. However there was one thing that stuck out down there in the middle of the gardens. A pony quite recognizable in the bright sunlight shining down on Canterlot. “It’s Luna!” Starlight shouted, pointing down at her. Spike sighed in relief and wiped the sweat from his brow. “She’s a sight for sore eyes...” “I hope we don’t scare or confuse her or anything but we need some answers… without Discord I don’t care what we have to do, we’re figuring out what’s going on in this world,” Starlight said. “Right there with you. No time for sneaking about, if we have to reveal what’s going on then that’s what it takes. This is a special occasion,” Spike agreed. The two of them took a steep dive towards Princess Luna, looking to meet the Alicorn Princess (the other Alicorn Princess besides Starlight herself right now) as soon as possible. Strangely they still didn’t see any guards out on patrol or watching the skies. Obviously there wasn’t usually any threat to the Princesses or Canterlot but the guards usually patrolled anyways. And with how off things looked here Starlight was surprised not to see any of them right now. Either way the fast flapping of their wings grabbed Luna’s attention and her ears swiveled up, her head turning up with them just in time to see Starlight and Spike land on the dry grass in front of her. “Princess Luna!” Starlight said, putting on a friendly smile. “Now don’t be confused or anything but I-” “STARLIGHT! YOU’VE RETURNED!” Luna yelled at the top of her lungs and lunged forward, wrapping Starlight in a warm but bone-crushing hug. “Oh Starlight, my wonderful, wonderful, Starlight, you’ve finally returned to us!” “H-Huh?” Starlight wheezed, trying to get out of the Princess’s death grip. Luna looked Starlight in the face, tears streaming from her eyes. “A-And you can still fly too! You still have your magic, don’t you? You can fix all of this terror!” “What are you talking about?” Starlight coughed. “Uh, Princesses? I think you’re both a little lost right now,” Spike said. Starlight looked over at him and realized he was staring at Luna in dismay. Something about her had disturbed him. Starlight took a closer look at Princess Luna and noticed quite a few things for the first time that she hadn’t caught because of the sudden hug. Things that were difficult to see from far away. She was taller than the Luna they knew—the same height as Celestia—and her mane and tail had an array of silver highlights in them aside from just their various shades of blue and glittering stars. Her horn was longer as well and she wore a silver regalia to match the golden ones they knew Celestia to wear back in their world. And there was no Cutie Mark on her flank. Luna for her part looked over at Spike with plain confusion on her face. “Who are you?” Starlight grimaced as well. “I think we might have a few things to work out...” “What do you mean? Starlight—have you not been lost ever since you did that strange thing to Tirek? What happened to you after that? Your friends said that you simply vanished!” The tall Luna said. “Please, you must tell me what’s going on—it’s been absolute chaos in Equestria since!” “What happened here?” Starlight frowned and briefly shared a look with Spike. “I saw Tirek become equalized, he shouldn’t have been a danger anymore. What happened right after that? Are you saying I, I mean me—I mean I have been missing?” She was confused—and probably further confusing Luna here as well. But it was weird. What happened to the Starlight from this world? Where was she when Starlight and Spike got here the first time? Why has she seemingly been missing since? Why did Starlight become an Alicorn like the Starlight from here must have been when she never “matched” the Starlight’s from the other timelines? And if something crazy was going on then where. Was. Discord?! Starlight stopped herself, gathered her thoughts, and took a deep breath. She had to start from somewhere. “Princess Luna, I’m sorry for not having any answers for you right now, but can you tell me what happened here after I disappeared? And what do you mean by me still having my magic?” Starlight asked her. “Whatever you did to Tirek locked away all the magic inside him. He has no ability to use or return it anymore. Every pony in Equestria, including myself and my sister, have been without magic since. That’s why the sun is still stuck in the sky despite it being nearly midnight right now!” Princess Luna said and pointed up at the glowing orb. “Ohhhh… that explains some things,” Spike said. “Unicorns can’t use magic, pegasi can’t fly, earth ponies can’t grow crops. Its only been a couple of weeks but Equestria is on the verge of collapse! With you gone the ponies have nearly been at each other’s throats… I was hoping that you would return one day to fix things. Celestia and I have been at our wit’s end. We’ve never faced such a situation before, and with you gone it’s been even harder to reassure ponies that things will be alright. The rest of the Elements have tried their best but things are nearly at a breaking point,” Princess Luna closed her eyes and held a hoof to her head for a moment before staring imploringly at Starlight. “Please, Starlight—my most precious student—please tell me you can reverse this.” Spike bit his lip and looked up at Starlight. Starlight herself was grinning awkwardly. “Ehehehe… heh...” she shrugged. “Well Princess, funny thing is… I’m not your Starlight.” “I… I do not understand, Starlight,” Princess Luna shook her head. “I’m from another world. A completely different Equestria. I… I think I can fix things with Tirek but… I have no idea where your Starlight is. Spike and I here are traveling through space and time to stop chaos from causing the destruction of everything. We um… the last time we were here I guess I caused things to go a little out of whack… so now I’m here to fix things but this world… it’s way different than any other world or timeline we’ve visited. I’m not sure if returning the magic is all that needs to be done and-” Starlight briefly glanced at Spike. “We ran into another problem of our own...” Princess Luna took all this in with the grace and patience that could only be found with a thousand-year old ruler of Equestria. That said, her eyes were still nearly spinning around by the end of it. “I believe I need to sit down for a moment… and there are a few others who must be contacted and notified about this as well.”
Aspenthechaoticjoker
550821
1
Nightmare Moon,Princess Celestia,Princess Luna,Sad,My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic
The Longest Night
Celestia reminisces on the loss of her sister Luna
complete
-1
-1
<p>It’s been a few months since Nightmare Moon’s defeat. Equestria, though still wary, can finally sleep peacefully knowing that the sun will rise another day. Peace reigns over the land, filling their dreams…all but one. Celestia can’t sleep, couldn’t even try since the night her beloved sister Luna…..</p><p>To Celestia, this truly is the longest night.</p>
everyone
2024-02-04T00:03:50+00:00
2024-02-04T00:40:35+00:00
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Equestria was bathed with soft rays of red, orange, pink, and yellow. Celestia’s horn glowed a shimmering gold as her magic flower to lower the sun. The Princess herself, wasn’t truly paying attention. She had done this for many many moons. So the lack of focus was never the problem. It was her guilt Ever since Nightmare Moon…Luna…. has been defeated, this overwhelming guilt has slowly build up deep in Celestia’ heart. It threatened to crack her heart in half, but perhaps any form of punishment was worthy when she felt like she had failed her sister…..her….their kingdom. Celestia blinked and was quickly snapped back into reality by the clip clopping of hooves on stone. Her breath hitched, her ears twitched and her heart raced. Luna when they were younger, had the habit on sneaking (Or atleast trying to when Celestia was setting the sun. Turning around, Celestia saw the approaching guard, a tall pale pink pegasus mare with with gold eyes, and a two toned red and white mane. Her armor glimmered in the light of the setting sun, reflecting its symbol along the left shoulder, a sun symbol. “Good Evening Princess Celestia” the guard bowed, wings furled out slightly by her sides. “I have more news from the outskirts of the Equestian borders.” Celestia released the breath she didn’t even know she was holding, her chest heaved slightly and her heart slowed down some. “Ah,” Celestia started, “Golden Flame, Thank you, you can leave your message near the podium by the entrance, I will get to it in a bit”. Gold flame saluted before taking out the scroll and trotting away to follow through her orders. Celestia turned back to the now darkened sky, she hated this part, absolutely despised it. She had half the mind to walk away and never look back and focus on other duties…..but what good what it do? No matter where or what she was doing, everything reminded her of her beloved sister. And her heart broke just a little bit more every single time. Taking a shuddering deep breath in, Celestia closed her eyes, and almost immediately regretted doing so. The only thing she could see was Little Lina’s adorable smiling face when she was a foal. The times where they would prank Starswirl in the middle of his lessons and get sent back to their chambers with extra paperwork and scrolls. The time where they nearly burned the kitchens down because they were trying to bake a cake for their caretakers 100th birthday. Celestia chuckled at the memories, and the small laughter turned into small sniffles, and almost sobbing as the memories turned dark. Celestia’s eyes snapped open wide, she couldn’t let her emotions get the better of her right now. Refocusing, she let her magic flow once more, ignoring the tears dripping from her eyes and onto the balcony’s smooth polished floor. She began to slow raise the moon, the sky turned from its blazing colors to the cool pool of midnight blue, as the stars began to shimmer. Celestia’s heart broke as she finally looked at the moon. She had only been staring at the sky the whole time, doing anything to try and not look at the mare in the moon. Celestia’s knees went weak and she fell over, her legs hitting the balcony floor pillows infront of her. The cushions did nothing to stop the pain and tore its ugly claws into her heart and soul once more. There in the moon, was a reminder of what she had lost …who she had lost. Celestia’s quiet sobs filled the air, her throat felt dry, and her chest repeatedly heaved up and down as the sadness took over. She bowed her head almost to the point where the tip of her horn touched the ground. Her tears now made a pool on the floor, in between her forelegs. Celestia’s tears flowed more as she looked up, to see the crescent of a black horned mare in the moon staring right back at her. The four stars on each corner of the moons surroundings seemed to have shined the most. Celestia didn’t know how long Luna was going to be stuck in that prison…miles and miles away from home, from Equestria…from her. The moon was high up in the sky for everypony to see and witness. But the stillness of the night confirmed that most were asleep. Feeling safe as the nightmare that had plagued the land was defeated, thanks to… Celestia’s browsed furrowed, she didn’t feel like a hero. No matter how many rounds of applause were made everytime she entered a room. No matter how many papers were written or how many scrolls would be filled with her name as the victor. She felt responsible, responsible for not seeing through Luna’s depression. For not seeing through Luna’s isolation and anger. For not seeing how much her sister was truly hurting. To Equestria, Celestia had banished a monster…but to her, when she looked in the mirror (or in this case) the pool of her own tears. The only thing she saw was her, the monster. So blind and oblivious to not see the pain that it turned her sister into one. Celestia tucked her hooves under herself, she lifted her head from its bowed position towards the floor, the cramp in her neck protesting the action. Celestia lifted her head and said in a soft whisper, her voice cracking- “Luna…..my sister….I am so sorry. I’m so sorry for not noticing your pain, for not seeing that you’re hurt, for not-“ Celestia’s head bowed again but she straightened back up. “For being so blind, forgive me for being so blind” small tears dropped down the sides of her checks as she looked at the moon. “I love you so much Luna, I will miss you everyday until your return…….i- i-“ Celestia’s breath caught in her throat as the sobbing start up again. This truly was going to be…a very long night