Webnovel/12

## Chapter 12

* Main

The **12th chapter** of the web novel is titled 《狂刷好感》 which translates to *"Building a Good Impression"*. It was first published in Chinese on JJWXC, July 2015.

## English Novel Location

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Qing Jing Peak’s disciples fell into an uproar.

> The disciples from the other branches were calmer, as they weren’t familiar with Qing Jing Peak’s internal politics.
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Of the English Novel Volume 1, chapter 2: Mission and ends on paragraph

> Elder Sky Hammer, who’d been lying motionless on the ground, suddenly leapt up and hurled himself at Luo Binghe a second time.
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Of the English Novel Volume 1, chapter 2: Mission

## Plot Recap

When Shen Qingqiu called upon Luo Binghe to step forward, the Qing Jing disciples fell into an uproar about having a weakling representing their sect, with Ning Yingying tearing up and trying to hold Luo Binghe back. After Shen Qingqiu reaffirms his choice, she storms off and the fight begins.

It’s less of a fight and more of a one sided beat-down as Elder Sky Hammer begins to completely curb stomp the much less developed Luo Binghe. It’s so one sided and violent that even the demons are rendered shocked. In response to someone asking why the match kept going, Elder Sky Hammer laughed and suggested that Luo Binghe give up so that he could spare his life. To that, Shen Qingqiu simply said “he will win.”

At these words, Luo Binghe gained hope and began to critically analyze his opponent, searching for weaknesses and planning his attack now that he believed that Shen Qingqiu firmly believed in him. Now with a plan, and the belief that Shen Qingqiu trusted him, Luo Binghe fought back with renewed vigor, extending the battle in an almost hour long deadlock until Elder Sky Hammer was defeated.

Upon his victory, he wins the attention of Liu Mingyan and Sha Hualing, as well as winning Shen Qingqiu 500 Protagonist Satisfaction Points despite the 1000 he would have lost on failure. Angered by the loss, Sha Hualing slaps Elder Sky Hammer and reprimands him, before giving him the vague comment to figure out what to do with himself.

At this comment, Elder Sky Hammer throws himself at Luo Binghe again, hoping to take him down with him, but Shen Qingqiu had been watching and made him collapse with his fan. After checking to ensure that Luo Binghe was alright, he told Sha Hualing to control her subordinates. She honestly hadn’t expected Elder Sky Hammer to act out like that, and before she could respond, he got up and threw himself at Luo Binghe once again!

## Changes Between Versions

### The (Cnoveluv) WorshipperA translation (June 2017 version)

#### Larger Changes

* In both versions, Ming Fan suggests against sending Luo Binghe to fight since it was a matter of honor, but the Seven Seas edition expands upon that reasoning.

> To let themselves be invaded and a peak’s nameplate taken, and to set themselves up to lose this competition? Cang Qiong Mountain would lose face—and Qing Jing Peak would lose a massive amount of face!
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* After being glad that Ning Yingying fled and wouldn’t be causing more problems, in the WorshipperA translation, Shen Qingqiu makes a short mental comment about how she’s a good and darling child who is sensible for leaving, in a half joking way. This line is cut from the Seven Seas Edition.

#### Smaller Changes

* In the WorshipperA translation, Luo Binghe rationalizes Shen Qingqiu sending him out to fight by noting that his loss would lose face for himself, the sect, the human realm, and Shen Qingqiu. In the Seven Seas edition, he only notes the loss of face for himself, the sect, and Shen Qingqiu.
* The WorshipperA translation has Luo Binghe’s battle lasting half an hour, while it lasts nearly an hour in the Seven Seas Edition
* Tian Chui makes a comment in the WorshipperA translation about how he didn’t believe Sha Hualing’s invitation until he saw how easy the pickings were. In the Seven Seas Edition, this line instead talks about how he wanted to use the easy pickings to earn favor before the new saintess.

## Appearances

Shen Qingqiu

Luo Binghe

Ming Fan

Ning Yingying

Tian Chui

Liu Mingyan

Sha Hualing

the System

M.Du Bi

## Author's Note

"Getting the favorability of the male protagonist who is as pure as a white sheep is just that easy"