(Compl.) 500-Word Writing Contest

## Entries

1. Entry: The Scars To Remember (written by @CordeliaHeronstairs)
2. Entry: Dream Everlasting (written by @ReadingUnderTheStars) - TW: Discussions of disease
3. Entry: The Girl (written by @Katniss4Tris) - TW: Discussions of depression
4. Entry: I'm new in an old world (Written by @JJ333888)
5. Entry: Boom (written by @Athena0700) - TW: Discussions of death and violence

## Judging

### @Kathfrost03's judging

Hi! This is how Katherine judged your works. I'm not a professional judge or anything but this can be how a reader views your works :)

#### The Scars To Remember (@CordeliaHeronstairs)

- Completeness: 5/5 (your story is complete, and the flow was smooth, and great job on the storyline!)

- Topic / Conflict Development: 3/5 (I loved how the story developed and the message it had, but it felt kind of abrupt to me, in my opinion. I also felt there should be less part about the physical scars and more content about the emotional scars.)

- Style / Coherency: 4.5/5 (overall great!)

- Total: 12.5/15

#### Dream Everlasting (@ReadingUnderTheStars)

- Completeness: 5/5 (it was great, I was totally absorbed in the story!)

- Topic / Conflict Development: 4/5 (loved the development, but please look at what I wrote about coherency.)

- Style / Coherency: 3.5/5 (I thought it was quite sudden to talk about the uncomfortable aspects of Lily's life at the end, but I still loved how you wrote about the character's dreams.)

- Total: 12.5/15

#### The Girl (@Katniss4Tris)

- Completeness: 5/5 (By. The. Angel. I was totally absorbed in this story too!)

- Topic / Conflict Development: 4.5/5 (great job! I totally thought James Dashner wrote this. This is a compliment, by the way-)

- Style / Coherency: 4.5/5 (I loved your choice of words and it was very coherent overall, however dividing the paragraphs would be a good choice. This feedback applies to most people who submitted their stories.)

- Total: 14/15

#### I'm new in an old world (@JJ333888)

- Completeness: 5/5 (I loved it! No more words.)

- Topic / Conflict Development: 4.5/5 (it was great, however I thought some paragraphs were a bit messy. Also this reminds me of The Maze Runner for no reason, hehe.)

- Style / Coherency: 5/5 (I enjoyed the flow, and your word choices / writing style was amazing!)

- Total: 14.5/15

#### Boom (@Athena0700)

- Completeness: 5/5 (oh my gods, this was so sad but a lovely work.)

- Topic / Conflict Development: 4/5 (great capture of the moment!)

- Style / Coherency: 4/5 (this is a suggestion, but maybe, using some more similes, not just bluntly stating 'she was going to die' [or other sentences] would be a better word choice, in my opinion.)

- Total: 13/15

\*Note: JJ, Amaya, I would love to see more of your stories. If this is a snippet, I understand, but I really want to see what background you were thinking, or what universe does it take place in, or some detailed explainers :D

### @Dlwlrma fan Uaena's judging

before i start, i might not be a good judge, but i'll try my best! :)

#### **The Scars To Remember (@CordeliaHeronstairs)**

-completeness: 5/5

-topic/conflict development: 3/5

-style: 5/5

total: 13/15

#### **Dream Everlasting (@ReadingUnderTheStars)**

completeness: 5/5

topic/conflict development: 3.5/5

style: 4.5/5

total: 12/15

#### **The Girl (@Katniss4Tris)**

completeness: 5/5

topic/conflict development: 4.5/5

style: 4/5

total: 13.5/15

#### **I'm new in an old world (@JJ333888)**

completeness: 5/5

topic/conflict development: 4.5/5

style: 5/5

total: 14.5/15

#### **Boom (@Athena0700)**

completeness: 5/5

topic/conflict development: 4/5

style: 5/5

14/15

i really loved all of your stories, and had a great time reading it :D great job guys!! (i hope nobody is upset cuz of the scores... i tried to give the scores as fairly as possible..)

## Winners

Congratulations to @JJ333888 for first place, and @Katniss4Tris on second place! 👏👏❤

## Prizes (TO BE DECIDED / UPLOADED)

The winners can ask @Kathfrost03 for an aesthetic :)