Futari wa Pretty Cure (Lanthanum12 rewrite)

This is Lanthanum12's revised version of her favorite season, Futari wa Pretty Cure.

## Plot Changes

The plot is much the same as the original for most of the earlier episodes. The light vs dark motif has been removed. The most major change is more screen time for the villains, with further focus placed on their desperation to survive. There is more scences and screentime for Honoka. In addition Nagisa and Honoka are even more distant until episode eight. Also the Dotsuku Zone takes turns attacking, rather then going one after the other. Things start to split from the canon more around the 13th epsoide. With Kiriya getting much more focus and development. He and Poisony work together on muilple occaitions and both end up redeeming, before being presubly killed by Ilkubo in epsoide 21.

The mid season climax starts much faster then in Futari wa. It is made clear that Honoka and Nagisa are only subduing the Jaku King for the time being when battling him. Things are simlair to the canon until the Rainbow Bracelet upgrade. When Kiriya and Poisony come back, and stay allies for the rest of the season, and the sequel. Wisdom is resqued earler, and his escape attempt is successful. Regine, Juna, and Belzei betray the Jaku King during the climax like in the canon, but switch sides to the cures. The Seeds of Destruction (Seeds of Darkness in the canon), Kiriya and Poisony get to live through the season thanks to the Prism Stones, and allow the Powers of creation and dystrustucation to be balanced.

## Character Changes

### Garden of Rainbows and Garden of Serenity

**Misumi Nagisa:** Nagisa retains the same personality, however she undergoes more subdue development and becomes more mature as the series goes on.

**Yukishiro Honoka:** Like Nagisa, Honoka is pretty much the same. The most major difference is her social awkwardness is more prelvent, and she feels more socially isolated.

**Mepple:** He is less arrogant and demanding, however he still retains that nature. His struggles with adjusting to the Garden of Rainbows are focused on.

**Mipple:** She is very reserved in the rewrite. Honoka and her learn to open up together. She gets very impatient with Mepple more often then in the show.

**Pollun:** His homesickness is made clear almost from the spot, and he is less entitled and whiney then in the cannon. He desperately misses his sister Lulun.

**Lulun:** Lulun has a few small appearances through out Futari wa Pretty Cure. She doesn't appear in the Garden of Rainbows until the squeal. She frequently brings up her brother. Like her brother and Mepple her whiney nature has been toned down.

**Wisdom:** His role and personality isn't changed.

**Elder:** The most major difference about him is that his forgetfulness isn't played for comic relief as much.

**Queen:** She is never shown using CGI, and is actually animated. Sometimes she struggles to understand peoples' moral complexities.

**Takashimizu Rina:** She is very interested in the romance genre, and has elaborate explanations for her favorite ships. She always is bringing manga to school, and has to hide it from the Vice Principal.

**Fujimura Shougo:** While he is well meaning, he is oblivious to many things. Sometimes to a comedic extend. He is frequently comes across evidence for Pretty Cure, and waves it off. He is optimistic, and comes up with cheesy catch phrases that Kiriya has no patince for. The other minor characters are mostly the same.

### Dotsuku Zone

**Pisard:** Poisony and him have a rivalry. Frequently competing to be the best stragist. It is clearly Poisony, but Pisard refushes to admit it. His schemes usually fail because he has some sense of honor and ethics.

**Gekidrago:** Geikdrago is still incompent, but traits of his that are associated with nerodiavisty have been removed.

**Poisony:** She is an aloof stragist like in the cannon. She looks down on the other members of the Dotsuku 5 (Dark 5 in cannon), besides Kiriya, and mocks them. After purication she takes on a 'cool big sister' role.