Core Narrative 5

## **CORRESPONDING MACRO-STORY BEAT: Venti Failure**

On their way to
their base in Dakota, Eliza and her team, The Saviors, are mapping out their
plans for any future attacks need be necessary. Theirs a disagreement in plans
between Mom wanting things to work this way and Eliza and wanting things
another way. They touch down on base and walk to the headquarters head room
where the Sergeant Jeph is. To discuss and see if the full proof plan is good
enough to work. Ben who arrived with Eliza and team deviates and walks away to
“handle some business”. Back in the head quarter office Mom, Eliza, The
Sergeant, and other random team member are having heated discussion about what
they plan on doing.

Then suddenly a loud boom is heard outside,
followed by gunshots. Their getting ambushed by Randal Savage and the APC. The
APC are easily being picked off and killed one by one. During this whole time
Eliza and the friends are in the HQ being protected by only a few soldiers. Mom
confused and frustrated not knowing what to do, or how it happened sits and
waits.

Then boom! The door busts down and Randal
Vector with a K-I79 shoots towards everyone. Everybody ducks as quick as they
can dodging the flying bullets. He says he’s only here for the mother. So she
willingly give herself up. That’s when (surprise!) Ben comes around Randal in
his APC uniform coming out to the group that he was a mole in the team and he
shoot mom in head. Eliza cries and they drag her body and retreat back to where
they came from.

## **ANTAGONIST:**

Randall Vector

== **MAIN SUPPORTING CHARACTERS W/**
DESCRIPTIONS:  **==**
**Ben (Good guy turned bad, the traitor)** -
Young, Handsome man who enters the group wanting to be recruited by Eliza. He
gets close to her and they develop a romantic relationship. Eliza falls for Ben
and they go on to rule the Saviors in the fight against tyranny. But it is then
revealed that Ben is a double agent truly working for the APC.

**Mrs. Dawson** - Mother of Eliza Michelle, Never
really understood why her husband founded the Dirty Dozen group as her ideology
has always been about peace and understanding. She is a believer in non-violent
protests and supports her daughter in her quest for change. Her quick-wit and
jokes make her an instant fan favorite.

== **PRIMARY**
LOCATIONS WITH DESCRIPTIONS): **==**
**DMZ** –
Demilitarized Zone in the middle of the 2 territories. Mostly used as a
battlefield but more investigations of the zone reveals new life and mew
possibilities.

== **ADDITIVE**
COMPREHENSION:  **==**
You find out Ben was really working
for APC and the whole time he was just a mole sending information back to
Randal about the wear about of Eliza and others.

## **MEDIUM:**

Cable Television Series

== **WHY IT**
WORKS IN THIS MEDIUM:  **==**
Way better to tell than to show exactly what’s going on
and being able to really experience the shock of the plot as in this story a
major twist happens which will only drive engagement.

## **PLATFORM:**

HBO

== **WHY IT**
WORKS IN THIS PLATFORM:  **==**
HBO has our target market and their experience with
other world building shows can be used to our advantage. Also, since HBO is a
premium cable channel we have more freedom to tell the story we want to tell
exactly how we want to tell it.