Rewritten

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## Origin

In 2017-2018, Dave wrote a story about his, at the time, self-insert (Raven), Tom from Eddsworld, and Tord from Eddsworld. The story is very self-aware and meta at times, and the plot makes almost no sense.

## Plot

**\*NOTE: details of the plot may or may not be exact, as this is a retelling from my shitty memory**

###### Chapter 1:

The plot of "*Rewritten*" begins with Raven in her bedroom writing fanfiction (meta as fuck to be sure). Suddenly, Tom and Tord appear in her room, However, this version of Tom and Tord are wearing flower crowns as the cover of the fanfiction they were on had edited flower crowns on them. Tom and Tord begin to explain to Raven that the reason why they're here is to help her, as a portal has opened in the universe and her deleted creations have come to take vengence on her. Tom and Tord have not though, and the two make it very clear they are here to assist her in this journey and they just want to go back home. Raven agrees to this journey and to risk her life. She packs her things in a bag while Tom and Tord snoop around her room a little. Tord finds a bottle of pills under her pillow, implying Raven was intending to kill herself with it that day. Knowing this, Tord hides the pills from her and once Raven is finsihed packing her things, the three of them leave her house.

###### Chapter 2:

Tom, Tord, and Raven all sit in a car together. Raven gets more exposition on what's going on and what might happen to her and the rest of the world if she doesn't put her own creations to rest. Eventually, the three reach their destination: an inconspicuous looking house. The three of them catiously approach the house before Raven takes a deep breath and knocks on the door. A girl opens the door for her. She has black hair, glasses, and purple cat ears accompanied with a purple cat tail. The girl is also wearing a purple hoodie, blue jeans, and sneakers. Raven immediately recognizes this girl as Jessy, a character she created based on her friend with the same name. Jessy immediately gets aggressive towards her and berates her for getting rid of her and her friends' story.

Jessy then swings the door wider for Raven to see who else is inhabiting the house. A girl with blonde hair, teal cat ears and tail, and a teal hoodie stands beside her. Two more girls stand behind her: one with dirty blonde hair, blue cat ears and tail, and a blue hoodie, and another that looks exactly like Raven, except with dark purple wolf ears and a wolf tail.

The four girls all jump out of the house and swing at them. Raven, Tom, and Tord act quickly, taking bats and knives to the girls and fighting them off. Eventually, the three of them manage to harm them just enough to get a portal to open beside them. The four girls resignedly make their way to the portal and give one last glare to Raven before they enter the portal and disappear with it. Once it closes, they all release a sigh of relief.

###### Chapter 3:

This chapter consists of the trio fighting off another one of Raven’s deleted creations (I don’t remember specifically what one). Afterwards, Tom, Tord, and Raven take refuge in a campsite before their next trip. More exposition is given to Raven before they all doze off. Raven has a dream sequence where she talks to the first creation(s) she dealt with, and they express their discontent towards her. She then learns that none of her creations hate her more than the version of herself that she made.

###### Chapter 4:

In this chapter, Tom and Tord mentally prepare both themselves and Raven to fight...Tom and Tord. Tom and Tord with flower crowns tell Raven that, while they're at peace with her, another version of them are not. Specifically, teenage versions of Tom (who for some reason wears glasses) and Tord. As always, the trio are successful in their attempts to get rid of the creations and sending them back home.

###### Other Chapters:

I actually don't remember what happens in the other chapters, but I *do* remember that I was somehow able to create 14 chapters out of this. I know that some point a character named Torm is introduced. Torm just kind of shows up in Raven's room one day while Tom and Tord are gone and at this point Raven is sure the journey is over. However, Torm informs her that it's not, and that his parents, Tom and Tord, are missing.

## The Loss

After Dave had finished writing the story, he went over and re-read it to make sure it was good enough to be published on Wattpad. Once he finished reading it over, he published it. After a day or two of it being published, Dave decided to delete the story off of Wattpad for whatever reason.

## Status

The story will forever be lost to time unless Dave decides to rewrite it (I probably never will).

### References:

1. ↑ This was the cover of the "Yandere Tord Fic" Dave wrote in 2017.
2. ↑ This piece of fanart was the cover of a now deleted fanfiction Dave wrote, however it was edited to give Tom glasses.