The jurassic park remake

Our story starts more or less the same the parks security pushes the crate to the enclosure. Meanwhile in the enclosure we see the silhouette of 3 raptors wakeing up. We then see one of the gatekeepers climbs up to open the gate when a raptor snout bites him in the ankle through the bars. He falls to the floor andgets pulled into the raptor crate " shoot her " is of course screamed. The only difference is instead of one big veloceraptor dragging the human we see multiple small raptor snouts dragging him in.

The rest of the movie goes as normal ( though the amber is replaced by a Ugrunaaluk corpse in ice and donald genaros introdcution is in an artic dig site )right until the mongolia dig site. Its a smaller raptor ( with feather markings ) and the kid says " 3 foot turkey " instead of " 6 foot turkey " alan grant tells him that these guys may have looked small and cute with their feathers but together they could jump up on your face rip out your eyes and then leave you to slowly bleed to death blind. The kids is disgusted and runs away. Alan and ellie sattler's thoughts on kids stay the same john hammond visits the same way and of we got to mezozoic park. I understand that john hammond of course would have gone with the more dramatic name but i have to keep it accurate. I would imagine mezozoic park would be better somewhere in scotlland ( with plenty of heaters ). So the gang meets ian and then they go to the feild. The build up to the brachiosaurs is perfect and the scene where they are revealed is one of the best scenes in cinema. So now we need to fix the brachiosaurs. They would probably not be brown but more grey with bits of yellow displayed along with spikes as this would best help display to mates and reflect the jurassic heat.

Other than that the brachis are perfect now we need to talk about the parasaurolophus. They are shrink wrapped quite a bit in the movie of course this was how paleontology was done at the time but now it is seen as outdated i would also imagine they would have bright orange on their frill and the rest of their body would be black with white spots like a mix beetween toucans and cows. other than those small nit picks the reveal scene is perfect. The brachiosaur rearing up is possible with evidence of footprints and of course they wouldnt be eating from a poisonous eucolyptus tree instead a douglas fir a very tall non poisonous tree.

so I actualy want to leave how hammond cloned the animals up to the audiences imagination and they can imagine how they would clone dinosaurs because theres not much we can do right now to clone them that makes sense. the baby raptor is feathered with a long snout with corectly pronated arms.

We see the dilophosaurus hiding from the humans like in the movie but we do catch a glimpse of its hawk like eyes. We then see the raptor feeding but instead of a bull its a goat. We then see them pull up the goats skelaton. We see them pass the tyrannosaurus rex enclosure a bull is pulled up but the car moves just as the trees shake and it looks like the rex might come out. We then see the sick triceratops .

Triceratops scales found holes in the scales indicating at least to me and certain paleontologists had quills. A black colour would help camoflauge and white markings would make it more attractive. So thats what i imagine a triceratops looks like.

so ellie stays with the trike to care for it and ian and allan go to the visitor centre to debate with hammond. Personaly I think prehistoric animals should be brought back we humans as a species has so much power yet we only use it to take. I think we should use that power to give to save the former animals of our planet. But i agree playing god is bad and i understand thats what the movies were realy trying to say .

so the debate stays the same lex and tim and lex are introduced here. Alan and the kids interactions stay the same.

So then we see dennis nedry talk to lewis dodgson on his mobile phone dogdson doesnt show his face mearly a blank face icon and has a voice changer to make it sound deeper in case anyone heres him. Nedry shuts down the power takes the dino embryos puts it in the barbasol can and drives off. We see alan and the kids back at the tyrannosaur enclosure then lex asks " wheres the bull?" then the bulls leg falls onto the car. We then see the t.rex chewing on the rest of the bull. Now t.rex is probably the most accurate of the dinosaurs . Its skulls a little to short and the arms arent correctly pronated and i think females probably had hyena like colours. It also doesnt need lips and is slightly less bulky. With the exception of the far more muscular tail.

The rex scene has to be rewritten due to its innacuarcies.

So the rex steps out of its enclosure but instead of roaring it sniffs the kids car. Gennaro abandoans them and runs in the toilet. The rex chases after him and smashes the toilet house. It then quickly eats genaro then goes back to sniffing the car. Lex closes the door and the t.rex thinking the car is alive picks it up in her mouth and tries to crush it. The car is practicaly destroyed then ian jumps out of his car and tries to shoot the rex with a flare gun he misses but the rex drops the car seeing ian and starts to chase him . Alan gets out of the car and fires the flare gun at the t.rex's thigh. She lets out a call that the humans can't hear but the call causes ripples in the puddles. She swings her tail knocking malcom out . Alan gets the kids out of the car the t.rex rams its head against the car ripping it in half starting a fire. The predator lunges towards alan and the kids who jump into a small ravine in her enclosure we see the rex walk off to look for more food.

We then see the control room and we see hamond and arnold see the dinosaurs have escaped via the security cameras. Hammond then demands they get alan ian and the kids back. We see the explorer jeep drive through the raining scottish forest . Ellie and muldoon see the crushed car on fire the kids were in . And then they also see ian and alans car with both doors open. Then muldoon spots malcom laying on the ground . Malcom explains what happened and then we cut to nedry driving a car through the forest.

Instead of dennis nedry going the wrong way he goes the right way but a tree falls on the road. He has another phone call with dodgson whilst trying to lift up the tree. And he hears a hawk like caw he turns around and its a dilophosaurus.

So lets talk about the elephant in the room the dilo. It should have downey feathers likely with a bright colour. I like to imagine different members of the species had different colour crests. also it needs to be bigger and the arms arent correctly pronated.

Nedry tries to play fetch the dilo crushes the stick with one bite . Then the dilo bites him in the neck. We then see nedry's body stop moving as the screaming stops. The barbasol can roles down the jungle floor it then stops rolling and is crushed by a brachiosaurus foot. The scene with alan the kids and the brachis plays out the same except the brachis dont chew like cows they just swallow and alan doesnt throw away his raptor claw yet.

Ellie and muldoon are trying to contact hammond on ians phone but then the tyrannosaurus comes and they drive away. They manage to drive away in a few seconds and the rex attacks an edmontosaurus ( i would use the walking with dinosaurs the movie design for the edmonto ). The rex bites the edmontosaururus's tail and uses it to pull its prey to the ground. The edmontosaurus kicks the rex in the face and then hits it in the face with its tail the tyrannosaurus then bites the edmonto in the neck killing it in seconds ending the fight.

We see the jeep arrive at the visitor centre ellie and hammond debate over whether the park can be saved or not.

alan and the kids walk through a field and then a bunch of galimimus stampede towards them. the galis have feathers like emus of course and have a patern like that of an emu or zebra. their arms are corectly pronated As the galis stampede towards them the gang hides behind a smashed up log. Then the t.rex eats a galli and continues chasing the rest of the flock. The gang escapes from the stampede and the gang meet up with ellie and go back to the visitor centre.

ellie and muldoon making it to the power centre of the park however some 3 foot fall feathered raptors snarl at her whilst trying to break some steel bars. I imagine raptors had roadrunner like colours as they are both small feathered therapod carnivores who live in deserts and rely on speed. Ellie and muldoon run out muldoon tries to step up a trap. But he is swarmed by a group of them. and he has to say " clever girls " because its illegal not to.

The raptors in the kitchen scene stays the same but the raptors are quicker here and instead of freezing one in a fridge they cook one in an oven. The scene where the raptors chase after the main characters on the skelatons stay the same. The raptors lunge and the rex kills one the others run away but she does bite down on the big one who slashes her snout with her claw before she is eaten. and that iconic " when dinosaurs roamed the earth " has to stay the same because its one of the best cinematic endings.

as the gang gets away on the helicopter alan looks out the window seeing the birds flying away from the island. He throws the raptor claw in the ocean and we focus on it as ammonites swim beside it

trailers

“when dinosaurs ruled the earth” the word stuck inside many of the mercs after they left Phoenix Corps island for the first time, but now there’s a new threat. A tyrannosaurus roars at a triceratops and the two charge at each other and the screen goes to black PRIMAL CARNAGE REVOLUTION