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Chicago P.D. 3x19

Cop shows are always different; each episode is usually a whole different story which tends to keep the audience interested. This shows succeeds in keeping things interesting but are falling short in some areas. Despite it being a mystery/drama show, there has to be a love element, which it does, but barely. There are two characters, Ruzek and Burgess, who become a couple in the second season. They eventually get engaged but Burgess ends up giving back the ring, which basically ended the relationship completely. In this episode, Burgess seems to have developed a crush on her partner, Roman; it is hinted that he might have feelings for her as well, in previous episodes, but it is hard to tell for sure. What annoys most of the audience, as shown by the comments from numerous fans, is that Ruzek has not done a single thing about getting his supposed ‘love of his life’ back. He just let her go off into someone else’s arms; right under his nose. Ruzek ends up giving Roman *permission* to date Burgess, which is completely mind boggling. The show really dropped the ball on their love life, it’s very slight and sloppy. To improve the show, they should have Ruzek *do* something; it does not fit his character to just sit back and watch, he is the one usually jumping into things headfirst. It would make sense if Ruzek confronted her and talked to her; ask her why she cut him out of her life completely and why she left so suddenly. Being the hothead that he is, he should have also confronted Roman and told him to back off. The air is very tense and awkward now when they are around each other, which shouldn’t be! It is very clear they still have deep feelings for each other and neither of them are doing anything about it. The actors are not doing a very good job at portraying their emotions either; it is understandable that to play a cop they need to have their serious, ‘I mean business’ face but when they aren’t fighting crime they need to have other emotions and reactions. The actors playing Burgess and Ruzek tend to be very stoic in their relationship towards each other and should be fixed; that is something the actors need to work on in order to better themselves as actors.

Purple Bird(P.B.)(Peanut Butter)
Decoy Bride

This is a fix it in post first. The first fix is the poster. It looks like it was generated by a local news channel to promo an upcoming local assignment. Put the star of your show up front. The best part about this film is the location. It's stunning, remote and new. I found myself sometimes looking into the distance and drinking in the salt water spray, the curling waves, the ugly local inhabitants and a dense green underbrush that never stopped moving with a persistent ocean breeze. Put that on the cover, and I would have turned it on just for kicks.

My biggest problem with the film was the way the main love interest completely smothered the local life that they'd worked so hard to establish. The minute that Tennant hits the shores, the story becomes a boy meets girl at the alter story. They pull in a priest at one point, and that's the best part of the film. Having the couple bounce around the island and come into contact with the people and places that built a false fame for the author and a real lonliness for the girl would have been a very nice construct. Instead, most of their relationship is spent in an argument of terms over predictions about each other that they often don't earn. The dialog has charm, but move into more sequences where they have to live in the moment and learn about each other in the moment, and this love story would have been even better.
Harry potter and the prisoner of azkaban

Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban was directed by Alfonso Cuarón and it stars Daniel Radcliffe, Emma Watson, and Rupert Grint. This movie is one of my absolute favorite out of the whole Harry Potter series. It seems like a movie that is unlike all of the others with the certain tone that it gives off. It is also the start of the more dark themed Harry Potter movies. Even though this movie is certainly brilliant and creative, there is a big problem with the plot of this movie.

In this movie Hermione Granger uses a time turner to be able to get to multiple classes during the day in which the times for the classes overlap. Later in the movie, Hermione and Harry use the time turner to save Sirius Black and Buckbeak. However, the fact that they can travel back in time disturbing the past and therefore manipulating the future at their leisure, opens up worlds of possibilities for the two of them. In this movie, the two of them should have winded the clock back to before Voldemort committed all of his cruel acts and killed him. This would effectively end Voldemort's timeline and it would save all of the innocent people that he killed. This would include Harry's parents, James and Lily, which would mean that Harry would grow up with two loving parents rather than the Dursley's. If they had done this all of their problems throughout all of the movies would be solved.

Although this solution does have a few problems such as the butterfly effect, where if you manipulate the past in anyway a countless number of things could be affected. However, in the movie the two show that even if they manipulate the past the future works out in the way that they want it to just as long as they follow a few rules such as not being seen. So if they follow these same rules, theoretically, the solution above should work.
Gone Girl (2014)

The film *Gone Girl* (2014) is based on the life of a woman named Amy Dunne, who did a series of crimes in order to frame her husband Nick Dunne for her murder. While this movie has been reviewed as a cinematic masterpiece of the mystery category, there are quite a few discrepancies and questionable events left from the film that had viewers confused as to how she was able to get away with her crimes. Don't get me wrong--the film did an amazing job of storytelling and truly impacted viewers on how clever yet insane Amy Dunne is; however, in the real world, this female heroine would have never been able to leave the police station without her misconduct being discovered.

In the final act of the film, Amy finally comes home to her husband, limping out of her ex boyfriend's stolen car with her body covered in blood. When taken to the police station, the investigators attempted to question her. The testimony given was that her ex-boyfriend, played by Neil Patrick Harris, kidnapped her and raped her, until she finally murdered him in his bedroom. Immediately afterwards, she escaped with his car and went straight to her husband's house, stumbling to get help. While this can be a trustworthy testimony, there are not enough questions asked or evidence presented to get the full story. Not only did they refuse to continue with the investigation, but they let her go home without any further questionings.

The conclusion of the story was that Amy was able to get away with her crimes because of the media. Society refused to question her anymore, as all they wanted was for the female victim in distress to be saved. Because of this, the police refused to give any further effort to give any doubt towards Amy. This causes a huge problem in the film because any person would know that in reality, the police would not have been as biased and the investigations would have gone through like they were supposed to.

The solution for this would be to create a script where the police actually continued with their investigations, rather than closing the case immediately. This would correlate with our reality and how special forces would actually conduct the investigation, rather than simply writing this conclusion for the sake of convenience. Although the movie was extremely long, it would have not received the criticism that it did if it simply stuck with how the real world works.
Friday Night Lights

Friday Night Lights (FNL), a show loved by many about high school football and life in the fictional town of Dillon, Texas. The first 3 seasons were the best while the 4th and 5th season could never compare. In season 3 of FNL star players such as Running Back Tim Riggins and Quarterback Matt Saracen are in their senior season under the infamous Coach Eric Taylor. They won a state championship their sophomore year but every year a state championship is expected when it comes to Texas high school football. However this football season a new star freshman quarterback J.D. McCoy has come to Dillon High School to take the role of "QB1" from Matt Saracen and lead the Dillon Panthers to a state championship himself. Eventually freshman J.D. McCoy does become "QB1" while senior Matt Saracen transitions to wide receiver so he can play his senior season on the field and not ride the bench. Coach Taylor and the McCoy family start to develop a rift when Coach Taylor calls Child Protective Services on J.D.'s dad, Joe McCoy, for fighting with his son after a bad showing in a game. This rift leads Joe McCoy to try and push Coach Taylor out of his job and replace him with J.D.'s personal coach, Wade Aikman. The final straw for the McCoy's is when J.D. is benched in the state championship and having Matt Saracen take the reigns again but ultimately still losing the state championship. After the season ends Joe McCoy tells Coach Taylor that he can still have a job if he guarantees his son J.D. is the starting quarterback no matter what happens and Coach Taylor says he can't promise that. It is because of this that Joe McCoy with the help of the booster club gets Coach Taylor fired, Wade Aikman is hired, and Coach Taylor becomes the new coach at the re-opened East Dillon High School. In my perfect scenario J.D. McCoy is still benched in the state championship and Matt Saracen leads the Dillon Panthers to a state championship victory in his senior finale. The state championship victory gives the seniors and beloved characters Riggins and Saracen a way to go out on top. However since Coach Taylor wins 2 state championships in 3 years, it would be hard for even Joe McCoy to get him fired for benching J.D. Also since J.D. is naturally gifted at being quarterback he still will be the starter anyways even if Coach Taylor doesn't promise it as him and Coach Taylor could win a couple of state championships together. Overall my new ending would make it so Coach Eric Taylor stays the head football coach for the Dillon Panthers and that the rift between the McCoy's is patched up over future football success together. This twist in the show would result in a more peaceful ending and change seasons 4 and 5 for the better in my opinion.

-MadamUSA
Coraline

When I was younger, I can’t deny that the film Coraline creeped me and made me want to be on my best behavior from the eerie scenes to the plot twist with the other mother. The film starts out lonely with us meeting Coraline, a girl who just moved to Oregon with her parents. Quickly we figure out that Coraline’s parents are very business oriented which results in them seeming ignoring their daughter. So this has Coraline exploring her new home, sometimes accompanied by a cat and a neighborhood boy. In her exploration, Coraline finds a secret door that only opens at night. Her curiosity leads her to enter the portal which leads to a parallel world that at first seems to fulfill her sad heart’s every desire. The versions of her parents who live there are warm and attentive, and the pink house is a wild wonderland where gardens bloom in moonlight and every visit discloses new amusements. At first this is Coraline’s dream, which we know, just goes downhill from here. I believe the parents, mostly the mother, are to blame for Coraline’s want for what the other world offered. Most of the beginning has Coraline’s mother being annoyed by Coraline’s constant nagging. Coraline just moved to this new place with only two people to talk to, if you count the cat. She’s lonely, as any child would be. The mother should have understood this and tried to make Coraline feel at home. In the end, Coraline still chose the real world over the parallel. Which also brings up the fact of how many lives the other mother destroyed. What would have happened if Coraline wasn’t successful in her escape? How long would it have taken Coraline’s parents to realize she’s no where to be found? How did precious families deal with such a loss? I would assume that her parents would have moved out, to overcome with emotions of their missing daughter. This would result in another family moving in, possibly with a young child. A new prey for the other mother, thus the cycle starting over.
Black Summer : Season One Ending

**Black Summer**

**Season one of Black Summer proved to be such an amazing show, however the ending made absolutely zero sense. Black Summer revolves around a great, diverse group of characters. It follows the main characters who at first are separated into smaller groups. As the show progresses and each of the characters encounter strenuous obstacles, they end up finding one another and go towards the same safe haven, a football stadium. My problem with the ending was that it was confusing and random. It ended on a cliffhanger, which actually can be a good segway to the next season; however it just wasn’t satisfying to finish the season in such a manner. As the group arrives at the stadium, they see absolutely no one. Then a random civilian appears with an automatic gun who’s all the way across the stadium. All of a sudden the daughter of the main character just incidentally shows up running towards her with no explanation whatsoever, which is how the season ends. My reasoning to a better ending would be if one of the only safe havens for people is the stadium; why isn't it better protected? My solution would be to end this show by having the area of the stadium guarded with soldiers. Throughout the show, soldiers were leading people there anyway. The soldiers should have been heavily guarding the stadium and accepting survivors instead of the real ending where they just show up there. The soldiers should have showed up at the last fight scene against the zombies. One of the main survivors was having troubling running, he knew he couldn’t run and told them to kill him instead of being eaten by the zombies. In such a tense situation, the main character shoots the injured survivor. For a better ending, this is where the soldiers should have made there way. Instead of the gunshot to the injured character, there should have been soldiers who came to protect them and shoot off the zombies that were in close proximity. They then should have taken the group and inspected them before bringing them with the other survivors. I think this would have been a better,  more sensible and realistic twist ending. It makes no sense for them to just wander into the stadium randomly and magically find the daughter of the main character. This is the twist ending I would have loved to see towards a show that is honestly so enjoyable to watch.**
Avengers Infinity War

Avengers Infinity War was one of the most epic movies of all time. The Writers, Disney, and the late great Stan Lee did such an extraordinary job with the marvel franchise. They created this universe within marvel where all these superhero's were connected and band together to protect Earth. Their main mission was to stop the mega supervillain Thanos from wiping out half of the universe with these powerful infinity stones. Every movie made in this franchise lead to this final moment in the Avengers and I loved everything about it.

Except, how they made the Incredible Hulk vulnerable.

The opening scene of this movie begins with some of the Avengers first encounter with the all powerful Thanos. They were in the middle of space when this gigantic space ship is above their ship and hi-jacks them. Thanos and his crew jumps aboard onto their ship and threatens to destroy them if they don't give him what he wants, which is one of the infinity stones. The Incredible Hulk is known to be the strongest Avenger, he is also Bruce Banner and usually always appears when Bruce gets angry. The Hulk attacks Thanos and Thanos easily defeats him. He then turns back into Bruce Banner. Later in the movie Bruce tries to get the Hulk to come out to fight Thanos again but he refuses. I really disliked this part of the movie because we are given the impression that The Hulk is afraid of Thanos, when the writers did such a great job at painting this picture of the Hulk as being pretty much unstoppable and absolutely fearless. Then in the opening scene they take that all away from one fight and don't give The Hulk a chance at redemption.

If it were me I would have made sure The Hulk had a shot to get payback on Thanos. I would have set it up during their final battle, where The Hulk and Thanos meet on the battlefield standing across from one another with The Hulk looking at Thanos with complete hate for him. They would charge at one another getting into this epic showdown and The Hulk giving Thanos the ultimate butt whooping by finishing him off with his signature move/catch phrase "Hulk Smash" and thus reclaiming his status as the strongest Avenger and also regaining his pride.
Captain America: Civil War

*Captain America: Civil War* would have concluded much better if in the last fight scene Iron Man simply released his anger toward Bucky instead of fighting him and Captain America. The premise of *Civil War* is simply that, a civil war between two parties of the same team (that is the Avengers), Iron Man and his group versus Captain America and his group. An overarching theme throughout the film is revenge. The main villain in *Civil War*, Helmut Zemo, attacks the Avengers because they killed his family in attempting to save the world from problems that they created; T’Challa tries to kill Bucky several times because he thought that Bucky was the one who murdered his father, T’Chaka; and Iron Man attempts to murder Bucky because it is revealed to him that Bucky killed his own parents years earlier. However, Bucky did not kill Iron Man’s parents of his own accord, rather he was being controlled by others who made him do what he did. And Iron Man knew very well that Bucky couldn’t control himself or stop himself, yet he still tried at revenge and attempted to kill Bucky. Iron Man shouldn’t have done this, rather he should have realized Bucky’s unfortunate past and come to his senses that revenge is not an option. Zemo sort of got his revenge and he was not remotely satisfied; T’Challa, on the other hand, controlled himself and let his revenge go and he felt a sense of peace. As a good guy, Iron Man should have gone down T’Challa’s path not Zemo’s because he of all people should have realized that revenge is not the way. Iron Man should have forgiven Bucky and forgotten about the past because the past can’t be changed only the future. This ending would have ended on a better note because the entire movie is about the Avengers fighting amongst themselves, but it could have ended with Iron Man and Bucky and the rest of the Avengers finally coming together again in the end.
2nd one Eng

The calling for a newbie to be
casted as a witchy wife in a new TV show. Some have seen it, a lot of us love
the actual tv shows. Once the movie came out, I was slightly disappointed, even
more so after watching it.

Bewitched, the tv series, was great, we didn’t see any off
camera exclusives. It was set as a tv series. Now the movie, was different. Instead
of someone in the movie industry is starting to go downhill, so they create a
movie with a newbie, to make that actor look better, they should have just
stuck with the actual tv show. Meaning, make the movie an extended show,
highlighting the major events. They meet, they date and eventually get married,
he finds out she is in fact a witch. Appalled by the news, he makes Samantha
promise to never use the magic. Her mother makes her debut in the movie, as
well as the neighbors, Samantha’s father, her Uncle. Another important event(s)
in the movie would be her pregnancies, babies growing up and finding out they
are indeed a witch/warlock, trying to teach them not to use their powers.
Sounds boring but I actually laughed more with the tv series than I did at all
with the movie. Then as you go through the years, Tabitha (Samantha’s daughter)
and Adam (Samantha’s son) are grown. Later after the tv series of Bewitched, the
show Tabitha came out which derived from Bewitched. Tabitha’s show, where it’s
all about Tabitha. End the movie with them grown up and showing them amongst the
crowd of mortals. Kind of leaves it open for a part two of bewitched focusing
on the offspring of Samantha and Darrin: Tabitha and her brother Adam. The end.
My take of the movies and what I would have done or even what could have been
done.
Better Luck Tomorrow Fix it

The film *Better Luck Tomorrow* is about a group of high school seniors--Ben, Han, Virgil, and Daric--and their journey during senior year. While they all do great in school and have multiple college scholarships, they also have a side to them that is involved in illegal activities. In between their studies they're selling drugs, cheat sheets, and returning merchandise. Throughout the whole movie, Ben has a crush on Stephanie, but the only problem is that she's dating Steve. Ben doesn't hate Steve because he's dating her, but he hates him because Steve doesn't treat her right. As time goes on, the four guys gain more and more publicity to the point where they decide to be done with everything after one last job. Steve asked the group of guys to rob his house to give his parents a wake-up call. Steve was very wealthy and I think he lacked the attention he needed from his parents. On the night of the incident things didn't go as planned, and Ben lost his anger and brutally killed Steve with a baseball bat. Having to live with the guilt all four of the guys are disheveled, and Virgil ended up committing suicide. The future for the other three is up in the air.

 For an alternate ending, Virgil wouldn't have killed himself. The guys would go back to school, graduate, and act as if nothing happened. The movie would present the ending in a way that the viewer could feel the guilt they all possessed while showing us where they were going to college. It would end with a scene of Ben talking about himself and his crazy past, but also his hopeful future. He wouldn't actually be talking in the scene, but his dialogue would be played in the background.

-McLOVIN
AMC's The Walking Dead

At one point, it seemed like The Walking Dead would be one of the most popular television shows of all time. At their all time high, the ratings for the show were proving that to be the case. However, it has consistently gone down hill ever since and now their ratings dwindle at a fraction of what they used to be. What went wrong with the show? I think the plot of the show can sometimes seem contrived and unnatural, as far as it's possible to feel natural with a show about the zombie apocalypse. One of the things that this show could have learned was when to end it. If you are going to tell a deep and complex story, the writers should have some clue as to where to end it so it doesn't just endlessly drag on and become boring or monotonous. Another thing they should not do is leave the audience on a massive cliffhanger. The finale of season 6 showed a new villain killing a member of our team but, they don't reveal who it is until the start of the 7th season, many months later. This caused an uproar and obviously led to massive speculation, which is likely what the writers wanted. However, that just leaves an unsatisfying taste in our mouth. The first episode of the 7th season had the highest ratings, but then ratings tanked immediately afterwards.

The show has many other problems with the way they kill off some characters. First, I'll say that I appreciate shows that don't have plot armor. If a main character survives a near death encounter, it needs to make sense and feel believable, instead of feeling like they only survived for the sake of the continuation of the show. On the flip side, if they want to kill off a main character, not only should it be properly set up and made to feel believable, but it should also lead to grave consequences. Characters should not die without consequences, else the show risks feeling pointless. The show also suffers from bad writing and dialogue. So many conversations feel awkwardly paced, or are just pointless small talk. Every word that is spoken should be with purpose and carefully thought out. The trick to good writing is making dialogue feel natural and real, as if it is a real conversation that these characters would have, but also be significant in some way or another, so as to not be meaningless.
Big Hero Six

Big Hero Six

Big Hero Six was by far one of the best movies. However, if you are going to create a story about family and friends, one of the main characters should not die, at least not in the beginning. Tadashi and Hiro's relationship is what makes the movie. The close bond between the two brothers should not have ended so quickly nor should it have ended so tragically.. Baymax of course would still be a big part of the story and Hiro and Tadashi could have saved the bots in the fire at the college and they could have tackled the enemy, the professor, together. If they were able to take out the enemy together then they could have created their own school at the end. The school they could have rebuilt could be strictly focused on the education of bots and how they can incorporate that into healthcare. Baymax could still have a huge role by being a helper in defeating the enemy and gaining the bots back. I think that most fans of the movie would agree that  they would not want to see the big brother die and that there could have been another way for him to survive the fire. If the brother was present throughout at least half of the movie it would have brought more excitement to the film and it would have proved that teamwork is possible in achieving anything. It would have also been a good example to young kids watching the film to appreciate their siblings more and work together versus fight over disagreements. I feel viewers would appreciate the film more if there was so much sadness right from the very beginning. I think easing into something sad would be less harsh on viewers and it wouldn’t catch them off guard.
Derek Shepherd

Grey's Anatomy is an extraordinary show because the power it possesses to feel and see the perspective of an everyday surgeon. It gives you all the medical terminology the medical field uses today, as well as a scenarios that happen on a day to day basis in the real world. Although this show is amazing, with many heartbreaking, totally unbearable moments, the death of Derek Shepherd was definitely the worst episode of the entire series. Derek Shepherd was an attending neurosurgeon and board director at Grey Sloan Memorial Hospital.

In the episode of Derek's death, he was on his way to the airport for one last trip to D.C. when he witnessed a car crash on a remote road. He immediately leaped into action, saving four people from the wreckage before the emergency officials arrived to take the patients to Dillard Medical Center. Derek returned to his car and began to pull out to turn around when his phone suddenly rang. Leaving the car sideways in the middle of the road, he began reaching for the phone, not noticing an approaching semi, which crashed into the side of his car. Derek was then taken to Dillard where the doctors began examining him. Conscious but unable to speak, he knew that he needed a head CT, and begged in his mind for the doctors to also realize this, but to no avail. Derek was rushed to the OR , but by the time the doctors figured out what was going on and managed to bring in a neurosurgeon (whom they had to wait for over an hour after paging him), it was already too late and Derek was pronounced brain dead. Not long after, Meredith, whom the police have brought to the hospital, signed the papers to take him off life support. She then sat with him as he died, holding his chest and telling him "You can go" as he let out his last breath. Interestingly, he continued to narrate in his mind up to almost the very end, even after losing consciousness (and possibly all brain function), at one point saying to the attending physicians "It's too late." "You're too late." We are left with the feeling that at some point an ethereal consciousness had taken over where his physical brain was no longer capable.

This episode was extremely frustrating to watch because throughout the entire time Derek was telling the surgeons what to do. Screaming at the television, i was enraged with anger.. "How can they kill of Derek in this way? This is not okay"! Keeping Derek alive would have been my number one choice of course, maybe even kill off a less important character. I immediately stopped watching Grey's Anatomy because it was the most heartbreaking death of all the many deaths on this show. Continuing the show without Derek is extremely saddening, and definitely hard to watch. I admit it was a very good plot, and it was a great episode, but my heart aches for the loss of McDreamy.
Ma

This is a horror film that just came out really recently. It was produced through the company Blumhouse Productions that also produced the famous horror films Paranormal Activity, The Purge, Get Out, Insidious, Split, Happy Death Day, etc. Based on the movies produced prior by this movie one would expect it to be scary in a horror film kind of way with jump outs and an out there concept. The plot definitely has exactly that. The movie is placed at a high school with what we have to assume is a small town because the parents of all the kids that are currently friends in High School all went to High School. There is this older lady named Zohan who went to school with these kids and starts to become friends with the High schoolers. Come to find out that Zohan was close with all of their parents in High School and she wanted revenge on the parents. She makes her apartment the party place for the kids and she provides the alcohol. This draws all the high schoolers to her basement until weird things start to happen. I think this is a great concept for a movie but it wasn't executed as well as it could be. The lead up to this movie is so long. It is all necessary but at the same time it could have been speed up. The background of what Zohan goes through with the parents could've been played in one scene speeding that up and then the weird stuff should've started immediately after the first party because the way it dragged on forever made it easy to lose the audience's attention. It also took too long for the weird stuff to actually turn into murder which was the horror part of the film. It actually only got really intense and scary with the stitching of the mouth, painting of the face and the fire. This part of the movie that felt rushed and it is the part of the movie that I most enjoyed since I was going in expecting a horror film. The way that this movie could have been improved is by shortening the lead in while still maintaining the background story that is needed and then by lengthening the horror aspect of the film when she actually goes crazy and on a murdering rampage.
Dark Phoenix

X-MEN is a very well known franchise that already has a great reputation and raises expectations every time it is the premiere of one of its films, but unfortunately when the expectations are very high, the movie is always a fine line balanced with a huge risk of falling too deep. The end, the beginning, the middle, everything is a disaster, nothing can be rescued to help this disaster, period.
But .. if we could edit the ending to make it more digestible, Jean Gray, an orphan and at the same time one of the most powerful beings in the history of marvel heroes and their comics, must have had a redemption worthy of someone With a very sad background, she should not have died and become ... space and time (?), She should have remained as the heroine that she is, strong powerful and restoring order on earth as she should have been.
13 Reasons Why You Should Stay

I understand that suicide is a very difficult subject to address. I also understand that it does happen and it is something that needs to be addressed. However, I feel as though 13 Reasons Why could have addressed not only suicide, but other deep issues in the series a lot differently. In fact, I think that the book does a perfect job at doing so. It does not give fame to the victim, and does not glamorize her depression, bullying, and suicide. Especially because television has a much larger influence on today’s youth than literature, I think the series should have followed the book closer as to prevent this trivialization. In the novel, Hannah does make the tapes, but she is not successful in her attempt. It gives a chance for her to recover and see how beautiful life is. It does not erase the problems of her past as easy as the show does. To build on this, I would add a reason to stay for every reason why Hannah thinks she should go so that people facing similar issues who may be watching the show also take into account what the will be missing in their own lives Thinking of only the negative things in life does not result in a positive change for the viewers. In fact, I think that its effect directly contradicts what its intentions were. To fix this, the show should stimulate conversation that could help those who are being bullied or suffering from mental illness. And should punish those people on the tapes who really were responsible, according to Hannah. The most prominent of those being the rapist. Bryce rapes two of the characters, and does not get in trouble or even questioned. This is something that especially in today’s social climate really needed to be addressed. The way that the rape is so casual is terrifying. It does not address the fact that consent only means saying yes. Consent is not the same thing as silence. He then proceeds to buy people off, including his best friend whose girlfriend he raped, with gifts and extravagant favors. If this is the only thing I could change in the story line, it is that Bryce should be punished as to set an example and a precedent for what happens in situations like this. The people who listened to the tapes before needed to say something about this rape.
Devin assignment Arcane

Arcane is a really good show by netflix and Riot games. It is about sisters that had fallen apart. After the little sister that just wanted to help and felt useless the entire time because she was not strong but she can build complex contraptions, killed she friends and her dad. She was blamed and pushed away from her sister because she finally felt useful but she ended up killing her friends. THe antagonist ended up finding her and took her in because he saw how destructive she can be and used her to kill people in his way to take over piltover. The big problem with it was that they did not expect it to be such a big hit that they would need to continue it. The animation was amazing and the plot was incredible but the ending left so many questions and no answers to what is going to happen  in the next season. They should have anticipated that the show was going to be a huge success and planned ahead of time for the second season but instead they just never continued the story and made a complex ending to the show. Riot has never been too good with keeping up updates to stuff that are really good not only for their company as a whole but the game that they have to keep track of. The big reason that they are really bad is the company that bought them out which is ten cent they own a lot of different companies and end up trying their best to ruin what good things that the game had with them Ten Cent has to approve of the new season of the show but like was said earlier they own a lot of different games so they have to keep up with those games to keep them relevant to get the company money so they can ruin other game but making an animation is expensive so it is not worth to do it in their eyes.
Mirrostine

**Mirrostine** is a dual-type Steel/Ghost Pokémon. It is not known to evolve into or from any other Pokémon.

## Stats

 * Minimum stats are calculated with 0 EVs, IVs of 0, and a hindering nature, if applicable.

* Maximum stats are calculated with 252 EVs, IVs of 31, and a helpful nature, if applicable.

## Trivia

* Before the official release of Clover, the shiny form appeared with a black mirror with red glass rather than a light grey with pink glass.
* Additionally, the mirror on Mirrostines old back sprite could be seen.
* *Mirrostine* is a very spooky mirror.
* *Mirrostine* is a combination of the words "Mirror" and "R.L. Stine", author of the children horror novels, Goosebumps.
Breaking badd

“Better Call Saul” was an excellent series about two brothers. One was naturally gifted and very smart and one of the best autornies in the state. The other was Jimmy Mcguill. He was always sort of a con man who was always trying to make an extra buck, but he too was smart and a VERY hard worker. His older brother built up a law firm from the ground up and he hired Jimmy to work in the chart room. And from that chart room (without telling anyone in the office) Jimmy Mcguill put himself through law school and passed the bar after 3 tries. After all his hard work though, his brother wouldn’t give him a job at the firm as a lawyer.

If there were one thing I would change about this entire series, it would ve the amount of love Jimmy has for his big brother. Throughout the show Jimmys brother lives with a particular condition. He claims to be allergic to electricity which obviously isn’t possible. The doctors classify it as a mental issue and Jimmy is always looking out for his brother making sure he doesn’t get “hurt” whenever he is exposed to electricity. Jimmy's number one concern was always about the well being of his older brother, meanwhile his brothers maine concern was making sure that Jimmy didn’t become a successful lawyer. During the show there was one particular episode where Jimmy's brother was doing some investigating to try and dig up some dirt on Jimmy. Jimmy was spying on his brother because he wanted to make sure he didn’t find out any useful information. While he was investigating he had to go out into the public where there was electricity everywhere and he had an anxiety attack caused by the electricity and hit his head. Jimmy's first instinct was to run inside and help his brother, but that caused his brother to find out that Jimmy was around the area making sure that he didn’t find the information he was looking for. I was truly hoping Jimmy would see his brother collapse and that he would walk past and not give it a second thought. Jimmy's older brother never cares about him, and it irks me that Jimmy cares so much for his older brother.
Modern Family

Television Show Modern Family

Modern Family is a great television show and has been
running for a long time now with many seasons. This show has progressively
gotten less funny and the characters have not grown with the show. I believe
most of the children in this show started out the series great, but have not improved
their acting careers. Lilly and Luke started out as small children in this show
which was ok for their acting style but now years later they are growing up and
need to do so in the show. These two children in this show need to be given
more unique and funny personalities. Right now they are just given cheesy one
line jokes which are clearly not thought of by them or are just flat out stupid
jokes. I know it’s not the kid’s faults, but I feel like they can practice and
try to better their acting styles.

I believe it would help to start expanding the cast and
losing some of the not so iconic or funny cast members. This is hard to do
sometimes with a show like this because people tune in to watch a specific
character a lot of times. It also makes it hard because one bad character can
be so closely tied to a terrific character, so it’s essentially impossible to
get rid of one without getting rid of the other. Kids can start going to
college, people can move away and others can die off to fix the problem with stale
cast members and spice up the show to be as good as it was when it first
started.
Bates Motel

Bates Motel is a great adaptation of the *Psycho* franchise, however it does have its problems. Some problems that stood out to me in this series are the lack of sticking to the storyline of the movies, creating its own ending in the final season, and not including characters from the original films.

Many people are huge fans of the *Psycho* movies. Many people were also thrilled when the series “Bates Motel” was announced, which is an addition to the *Psycho* franchise. However, it became apparent towards the end of the series that the show would not stay faithful to the end of the first movie as well as the last 3 movies.

In the last season of the show, the writers strayed from the storyline and ended up creating their own version of the story. While it was not a bad version, it did not leave any storylines open for the movies to pickup. By killing Norman Bates, they ended the series without including the events of all the films. Instead of coming to the conclusion they did in the finale, the show could be fixed by instead creating a transition from the final episode in the series to the first movie, so fans would be able to watch it as one complete universe.

Another way to fix this series would to add more characters from the movies into the series. Each Psycho movie had a new set of characters that helped add to the plot, however most of these characters never appeared in the series. It made the shoe and movies feel as though they were two separate fictional universes, and not unified like intended to be. One of the biggest plot lines in Psycho II was the twist that Norman’s mother wasn’t who he thought it was. Instead it was his aunt. However, there is no mention of that aunt in the series, even in passing to tie it all together.
13 reasons why - Joy

13 reasons why, a show that revolves around one character(Bryce Walker), covers many topics that a majority shows wouldn’t dare to present but if i was in the position to rewrite it, I would  change the image of that every rich kid gets away with everything in the second season. My first impression of it was a little overwhelming, due to all the tragic events that were occurring but realizing that these events were not to far fetch from reality and can really go on in highschool and even college. Brace walker is the character that ruined so many lives and every time, he seemed to get away with it. Once there was a chance in court to get justice from his wrong doings,he ended up walking away with no charges. Since he had money and the right lawyers, he didn’t get the punishment he deserves. Therefore, I think he should have been convicted in the first episode and the rest of that season should have been his life in jail and once he is out, is when he will try to rebuild his relationships and make things right. I think that it would have been a great lead way into the third season and it also would have made the second season a little more interesting, as it felt super dragged out before. overall , 13 reasons why is a great show presenting real life events that young adults go through but if i had a chance to change something within the show, it would be the fate of bryce walk in the second season. Instead of walking free for his terrible acts, he would go to jail and then is when he would make an effort to change his behavior once he is out.
Kill bill Vol 2

Kill Bill Vol 1 was a masterpiece which gave the audience a look into a natural born killer and her determination to get her revenge on those who nearly killed her and took her baby. Beatrix or also known as "The bride" went through hell as she killed two outta the five members of the deadly assignation squad. Throughout the Tarantino film, it contained his notable trademarks like black-white scenes and Mexican standoffs which makes both Vol 1 and 2 unique. Vol one contained much of the action and gory blood scenes in which vol 2 didn't. Vol 2 was more of an explanation of how Beatrix found herself killing her closest colleagues. The flashbacks and somewhat calm scenery was not a problem because Tarantino delivered an interesting and diverse dialogue. The main problem with Vol 2 was the way Beatrix killed the bill. Beatrix did receive her child back after not seeing her for 4 years but all the hatred and pain she held inside was not displayed on the bill. A great ending would be a Mexican standoff with a sword fight as they battle with Hattori Hanzo steel. Throughout the series its always been about the swords and how they represent each individual. In this case, the audience expected an action-packed final showdown in which Beatrix finally completes her vengeance but it was a completely different outcome. As bill pulls out a sword, Beatrix throws it on the floor and performs the five-point exploding heart technique which Pai Mei taught Beatrix. It was an interesting and a good scene as bill takes his last steps and drops dead to the floor but wasn't something the audience would enjoy. Beatrix had killed over 100 people with her sword and for her not not eliminate the most important victim with the sword is upsetting. If the ending contained a last and final showdown like how bill originally suggested, it would end the series with a bang. Although Beatrix accomplishes her kill list and got her vengeance it would have been perfect to witness the last battle. That would be the ultimate solution to finishing the movie series
Lost - The End

I loved Lost.  I watched it when it was originally on television, and I watched it again recently on Netflix.  But there is just something so unfulfilling about the last episode, the series finale “The End”.  My main question is, did they have to die?  Did they have to be dead the entire series?  I have read interviews of the writers about how the ending was supposed to give a sense of closure to the viewers of the show because the characters were given closure.  But the ending is not fair.  If you have watched a whole show and the ending is that the characters were dead, it is like discovering that a quarter of your life so far was just a dream.  The show should have taken a science fiction turn and said that all the things happening on the island were experiments from the Darma Initiative, not just that they were doing psychological experiments and also trying to figure out why pregnant women were dying on the island (but that is cause they were dead, duh).  The island was so intricately filled with traps and very fancy technological things that why could it not have taken a scifi path?  When the flight members of flight Oceanic 815 has “crashed” on the island, somehow it should have been explained that there was a magnetic force that caused anything to fly over fall apart and crash (because later you find out that their plane wash found in the ocean, not on an island), sort of like the Bermuda Triangle conspiracies.  In this version, the people who die, really do die and the people who do not die, do not.  Although it makes sense that John Locke could start walking again if he is dead and Jack can see his dead father because he is dead, all that has to be put into it is some science fiction aspect.  Nothing else needs to be changed except, everyone lives, everyone gets off the island, and science is incorporated.  Instead of them walking into a church together and going to their afterlife because they were dead, they should all be living their lives and continuing on, because they survived.