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La La Land

"La La Land" was a huge hit when it came to theaters. It drew a large crowd, and it was all people were talking about for some time.

The movie was great; the music was beautiful, the choreography was fun, and the acting was real-life. The ending had a controversial response: while some loved the ending, as it wasn’t generic, others despised it. What could have been better in the movie was the love-story beginning.

The movie begins with two random people, each with their own lives and interests. However As the two subjects begin to interact with one another, the audience witnesses a dissension. ‘Sebastian’ (played by Ryan Gosling) is quite rude to “Mia’ (Emma Stone), and a bitterness is witnessed between the two. Approximately fifteen minutes later, Mia sees Sebastian playing in a gig at a summer pool party. They share some rude words with one another, but then they proceed to share with one another a typical hollywood-style ‘fall-in-love’ moment. But the audience is left asking the question ‘How and why did these two people (who dislike one another just seconds ago) fall in love as they sing about wasting a night with one another?’. The entirety of the movie is based upon their relationship, but there is no transition between enemy and lover.

This was a great movie, don’t get me wrong. But what could have been improved was the development of this relationship. Instead of going from enemies to lovers in the span of two scenes, either cut out the ‘enemy’ aspect altogether, or give the romance time to bud. This could have been done by giving them something in common besides just both having a dream that had not been achieved. But the best option is to just remove this awkward bitterness between the two characters from the start; it was redundant and made no sense.
Lost

Lost may not be a tv show that is particularly well known by a lot of people, or if it is, it is very rare that they have watched it through its entirety. Personally, I loved lost and thought that it was such an incredible show. It was filled with shock factor, incredible character stories, and incorporated lots of different ideas. As good as this series was I would say that after a while it did seem like the writers were adding extremely random things into the script in order to make the show last a lot longer. I feel like this made the show seem dragged out and it became confusing to the viewer. I remember in a few points I didn’t understand what was going on anymore. Altogether the show had 121 episodes and with each one being an hour long the story began to spiral. I feel that to avoid this they could have had either less seasons or less episodes within each season. This would have allowed the plot of the story to be a lot more put together and less scattered. With that being said I think the ending was incredible and really did the show justice. It just took too long to get to that point. As a lover of lost, I have seen it twice all the way through, but now I never find myself wanting to rewatch it. It really just takes too much time and patience to get to the best bits. It could definitely be argued that the writers were trying to prolong the ending and keep getting the views that they were receiving and that is why they added a lot of random things like the polar bears. With that being said they obviously did it for a reason but I think that this show would have been a lot stronger if it wasn’t dragged out.
Climax solution

The film that I will be talking about in a hope to fix is Climax, a 2018/2019 film (released in France in 2018, released in the US in 2019) directed by Paris-based Argentine filmmaker Gaspar Noé. Noé is considered to be a highly provocative and controversial filmmaker.

Climax is about a group of 24 dancers that gather in an abandoned school in Paris to rehearse dance choreography. Afterwards they throw a party in the same location with sangria. Little do they know that their sangria has been spiked with LSD, and their innocent afterparty quickly turns into a drug fueled, hallucinatory nightmare.

The dancers become more and more agitated, confused, violent, and even sexually charged throughout the night. This leads some of the characters to make some questionable decisions.

One of the dumb decisions in the film is the decision made by Emmanuelle to lock her son Tito in the circuit closet by himself, in an effort to protect him from the other dancers that are drugged out. She loses the key to that room and this leads to him, in a mix of curiosity, boredom, and fear, playing with the circuit breaker, causing a power shortage and killing himself in the process. This leads to Emmanuelle killing herself since she’s overcome with grief and guilt, by slitting her own wrists.

A solution to that could’ve been that Emmanuelle kept Tito with Lou, the only sober one in the building, or that she put the key in a place where she only knew where to find it. Or maybe put Tito in a safer not so enclosed, claustrophobic room.

A lot of you might be asking “why don’t they just leave?”, they were in a remote location in the middle of nowhere, on a cold, snowy, Paris night. One of the first major events in the film is when the dancers suspect Omar, another dancer, of spiking the sangria, since he is not drinking any. This leads to a group of them forcefully dragging Omar out and kicking him out of the building and into the cold, thinking he was the one who drugged them. This would lead Omar to freeze to death, even though it turns out that he was not the one who did it. In fact, earlier in the night, before they even drank the sangria, David offered Omar a drink and he refused, saying that he doesn’t drink.

My solution to this would be for the other dancers to come to Omar’s defense a little quicker, and even get physical to help him out. It would’ve also helped if David came to Omar’s defense, since Omar told him he doesn’t drink earlier in the night. These actions would’ve saved Omar’s life and prevented him from freezing to death.

I think some solutions for the film in general would be to calm down and relax. A lot of these dancers get angry and agitated, and some even take it out on other people. Maybe just enjoy it, since it will all be over the next day. The next day, it is in fact all over, as most of the dancers are passed out the next day. The solution would be to just ride it out, and do your best to enjoy. It’s not the most practical, but it’s what I would do since I wouldn’t have much of a choice.
Fixing 500 Days of Summer

500 Days of Summer, is a romantic movie, a girl named Summer and Tom. The movie is one of my favorite,  mostly since i tend to relate it back to me and my girlfriend. Summer and Tom have a very horrible relationship, a very toxic one to be exact. Tom wanted to be in a relationship, while Summer did not want to be in one. Tom and Summer are then in this weird relationship in which they don’t really know what they are, but they don’t want to be together. Summer one day decides to just leave Tom since he did something very bad. Leaving Tom alone, made Tom get very depressed and into this very dark place. It’s crazy how one person can change your life in an instant. The movie itself is very good, but at the end of the movie, after being broken up for quite some time, Tom and Summer meet again. Summer invites him to this party that she was having, while Tom secretly got his hopes up, he was scared that something would happen and that he would be disappointed. He goes to her party, and he did not get what he was expecting. It turns out that Summer got engaged and by Tom going to her party, she wanted to show him that she got engaged. WHAT?!? Sound messed up, instead of having a happy ending, it was a sad one. At the beginning of the movie the narrator says how the movie doesn’t have a happy ending, but that still doesn’t beta the fact that i wanted one. I don’t believe in happy ending but after seeing a movie so sad, its only fair for Tom to end up with Summer isn’t it? It is his gift after having been put up through so much. It just hurt him how she ended up leaving him and moving on to someone else, while he couldn’t even do that. At the end he found a different girl, but i would have loved to see him and Summer end up being together.
Jurassic World (2015)

When the movie Jurassic World was announced I wanted it to be good. Fans were excited that the series of movies was continuing and not being given a re-boot like so many other franchises. But the movie that fans got was met with split reactions. Some people loved the new story, direction, and visual effects. Others though thought the plot was lacking and that certain situations were just plain ridiculous even for a Hollywood blockbuster.

When I was young I was absolutely obsessed with the movie Jurassic Park directed by Steven Spielberg. The dinosaurs looked and sounded so real, the way action scenes we’re shot brought real tension to the experience, and the story, even though I didn’t understand the more elaborately put forth science theories at the time, was well thought out and almost believable. Jurassic world on the other hand, while visually pleasing to the eye, lacked the magic of the original. The characters were dull and uninspired, the plot was basically a rehash of the previous movies in the franchise but with newer and more hip characters, and the science behind the whole concept became just another cheap cliché about the folly of man playing God. With all of that said, the biggest problem I saw, and some may view this as incredibly minor, is the character Claire, running from dinosaurs in the jungle, rivers, and destroyed theme park in her high heels. As minor as this is, this one thing shows to me that this movie was not taken seriously at all. They portray Claire as this strong independent woman on one hand, but then show her as the typical damsel in distress who needs a strong man to help her. It is not overt in any way, but the fact that this woman with assumed multiple degrees from colleges, who also works on a tropical island, and regularly visits sites not complete or under construction would not have a pair of more practical shoes playing to the stereotype that woman need to be fashionable at all times to be successful.

Hollywood gets away with shoddy film making all the time because they can hide many flaws by saturating the consumer with gratuitous use of CGI and other visual effects to distract from the flaws and lazy writing used in many Blockbusters. Films that have better planned and thought ought narrative are what every filmmaker should strive for in order to produce the best possible product for their consumers.
All American

All American is my favorite show at the moment and maybe ever. Although the show is only on its second season there are two changes I would make to the plot. The storyline is really interesting, but these are just two things that I wish had happened. The first thing I wished had happened was that Shawn had never died. He was just getting his life together by making a huge effort to leave the bloods. One of the main reasons he made an effort to leave the gang was for his daughter, Maya. If Shawn had made it out of Crenshaw and out of the gang, he could have gotten a real life with a real job to support him and his daughter. Not to mention that he became my favorite character right before he got killed off of the show. Although he was in a gang for a while, it was obvious that he still had a heart because he told everyone that they couldn’t mess with Spencer because Shawn knew Spencer could make it out of Crenshaw and turn into something special. If Shawn made it out of Crenshaw, I would have thought that he would bring Coop with him. They had a special bond and always had each other’s backs. I would have liked to see what Shawn would do outside of Crenshaw. The other change I would make to the storyline is if Spencer was actually Billy’s son. They played around with the audience hinting that Spencer was actually Billy’s son but we later find out that he isn’t. I would only want to see that Spencer was Billy’s son just to see how everyone would react and what they would do about it. I like that they didn’t make him Billy’s son, but my curiosity is wondering what would have happened with the show if he was.
More creepiness

As this thriller movie talks about murder and mystery, Mr. Harvey should have been seen stalking Susie throughout the movie and not just in the scene where she was murdered. For example, since he was her neighbor they needed to have shown him peeking through windows and him writing in his notebook how he was going to do his crazy act. It would have been interesting for us to know beforehand that he planned it. Even though Abigail found the journal later on, it adds more drama when we know there is something hidden that can reveal Susie's murder. The scene when she finds the notebook could have been more of a thriller because we would have known it was premeditated, like a OH MY GOD moment. When there is a creepy intense relationship it would enhance the climax of the movie. A lot of references needed to be said in the movie the way it was typed in the book because a twisted story needs twisted acting, adds a little frisk to the scene! Although it is a sensitive topic, the director could have received more rotten tomatoes if they had Mr. Harvey being seen doing parts of the crime like cutting her up and what they did underground. After all it is a thriller movie. I would add lines of him saying "take off your white panties" the way it was told in the book. The murder scene only lasted about five seconds and it needed to be longer and filled with gore by having Mr. Harvey be seen planning the murder and then it leading to him finding her on that field, that way it did not leave us wondering what happened to her. Making a book into a movie always needs to include important texts in the film.
How to fix blackmirror

Blackmirror is a great series were each episode is different. Many of the episodes predict the future and depict first world problems in our society like technology. One episode in particular, "The National Anthem", may be the most disturbing and the worst episode of black mirror i have seen. A man is set to be embarrassed for life, given a scenario to either have a princess who has been kidnapped killed, or have intercourse, with, a pig. yes, a pig, the animal. where this idea came from no one will ever know, but it was one of the most disturbing episodes of a series i have ever seen. no person should ever be put into a scenario where they would be filmed having intercourse with an animal, and yet this man did. I do not think i have to explain much on what should be changed and how to make this episode better. i get this may be for a bigger overall message, but the producers could have done something else rather than this. Kidnapping a princess, thats a good plot line, now have the man do something other than the pig. he could have stopped a bomb, had the choice of the princess or a family member, anything else. its just disturbing to know they chose a pig. Other than the pig, i think the actor was maybe a little too boring, and if they had someone else in, they would have done a better job. You kind of get lost during this episode as well, so creating a story line that flows and overall is easy to understand will get the job done and make this a better episode. black mirror is a great television series, but because of this one episode, the love i have for it has changed, and u can no longer look at it the same again.
IZombie

The TV show iZombie was a great show that put a twist on the zombie franchise. It made the zombies more human and less dead. Anyway the show started out great because it focused on only 5 characters and they were in hiding. When they were working in the morgue at the police station it always gave a suspense that they were going to get caught eating the brains of the homicide victims. After season one finally they began to find out that there were more zombies that were human-like and that there was a war on who can deal the most brains as a drug. Once it became that big it then went to a government level and there was a zombie task force. After it got that big it eventually started to get hard to follow since there were too many characters. A way to fix all of this is that they should have kept the zombie's infected a a lower count for a while longer then adjust to having more and more zombies. From one episode to the next it went to about 10 zombies to like 500 zombies and it just doesn't make sense how they got to that level that quickly. They needed to keep it small for a while longer. Probably like 2 more seasons at least. The creators of the show should have kept doing more crime investigations to prolong the main story line. Another thing they should have done was to focus on some of the characters that have been there for the first season. These characters had no background to them and would have been interesting how they got there instead of them just being at the job. Overall the creators did a good job at the beginning of the show but they should have held back to keep their viewers watching.
Gilmore Girls

Gilmore Girls is one of my favorite shows, and is a very popular show among many generations. Gilmore Girls is a show following a young single mom Lorelai, and her daughter Rory as they live their lives struggling with money issues, boy problems, and growing up. This show starts with Lorelai as a single young mom trying to build a career and find love, and her daughter Rory as she learns about herself and grows up. One of the main charms of the show is the drastic difference between Lorelai and Rory, Lorelai was irresponsible, she had rich parents and a forced path which she would do anything to get away from, including getting pregnant at 16. Rory was a young sweet, smart and driven girl who seemed to have made her own plan that she intended to follow. These two characters are very different yet they are best friends and have a great dynamic. The show ends with Rory not as successful as she had thought she would be after graduating from Yale top of her class. She has no real career, she is struggling, and doesn’t have a stable love life as she is dating an engaged man. The series ends with Rory’s last words being “Mom, I’m pregnant.” Rory had made some bad decisions, she had relations with a random guy at a club and chose not to marry her boyfriend. It was implied that Rory did not know who the father was, and would end up a young single mother with no career and no father for her child. I liked the idea of the series ending with Rory as a young mother just like Lorelai, but all the work we see Rory do throughout her life, and all the success she has worked so hard to get went completely down the drain and she seems to have gotten to a similar place as Loreli at the beginning of the series despite all the work she put in and all the love she was given, which Lorelai never had. I believe the series should have ended with Lorelai being a successful young woman, and possibly a single young mother, but at least a single young mother with a plan. All the work we saw Rory do and all that makes up her character is what should lead her to success. Rory should have ended up as a successful journalist who travels around the world finding the best stories. She should have had her career and her child.
Fuller House

The sequel of one of the most amazing shows of a 90's baby's childhood, *Full House*. This time it's about the kids (all girls) and their lives rather than 3 guys trying to raise 3 children. Definitely an interesting take on the show, the positions have completely flipped, DJ, Stephanie and Kimmy now all have kids and they are all single. Prior it was Danny, Joey, and Jesse raising Danny's 3 kids and they were all single. Just like the past, these three girls are all helping each other out with their kids but also all trying to find a man to share their life with.

The acting is great, you can tell each character is very passionate and invested in their role. It was also so nice to see my childhood stars out there again in the same historical house, but that's about all I enjoyed about this show. I think the entire story line could have been presented better. This new show tried to bring back too much of the past such as DJ's old boyfriend Steve coming back into the picture to win DJ over again, or Stephanie's band with her old friend Gia getting back together to perform, etc. As a sequel they should have moved forward and left the past episodes as a memory, not rekindled the highlights. I also think the back and forth in Kimmy's & DJ's relationship is focused on too much, Full House centered it's story on the kids, and I feel as if this show should focus on their kids now too and the struggles of parenting and all the obstacles that come with being a parent. Overall, the show could be better in many ways and seems as if a story line was just thrown together to make it work so that they can please the anxious audience by getting it out faster and working with it from there. They are two seasons in now and doing well, but personally, I think it needs a lot of improvement to even come close to comparing to Full House.
Friday the 13th

In the *Friday the 13th* series, the infamous killer, Jason Voorhees, goes on to murder 157 people throughout twelve movies. From killing with his infamous machete to even ripping out someone’s heart with his bare hand, Jason has plenty of methods of getting rid of anyone who steps foot on the Camp Crystal Lake grounds and the surrounding area. Jason Voorhees is undoubtedly one of the strongest horror icons in the horror genre. Is there a way all of these deaths could have been prevented? Even the death of his own mother? The answer is a simple yes. Mrs. Voorhees worked at Camp Crystal Lake as a cook and decided to take young Jason with her for a summer. Jason unfortunately got bullied by the other children because he had a face and head deformity. The children that bullied Jason chased him to the lake's dock and tossed him in, resulting in Jason drowning. The teenage lifeguards that were on duty could have saved him, but they went off into the forest to instead have sex. Now, it’s understandable that Jason was going to get bullied because he looked different than the other children, and sadly that is something that is going to happen regardless with children. If the life guards would have just done their job and waited until later to do their business, Jason would of never of drowned and Mrs. Voorhees wouldn't have gone on her revenge killing which ended up with her getting herself beheaded. Jason wouldn’t have gotten resurrected and go on to kill the lives of 157 people. Jason could have grown up with his mother with a normal life somewhere in New Jersey. Additionally, Jason could have even made friends with the other children if they only would have given him a chance.
Dead to Me

I watched a Netflix original series called "Dead to Me" about a few weeks ago and finished it in only two days because of how good it was. The show follows the life of a widow who lost her husband in a hit and run accident, as she hopes to find the driver who caused it, whilst learning to deal with her grief. Unfortunately, the ending did not live up to my expectations. \*spoiler alert\* During this entire situation, a woman whom the widow, Jen, met had been living with her in her guest house. Judy, the friend, and Jen became the best of friends until Judy confessed to Jen one night that it was her who hit her husband. Obviously Jen was beyond frustrated and kicked Judy out of her home, leaving her homeless and devastated. She was filled with so much regret and guilt, she nearly got herself killed. In the very last episode, Jen found out that not only was Judy guilty but so was her ex husband Steve. Turns out Steve was the one who told Judy to not stop and to keep driving because he couldn’t risk getting caught. This was something that Judy was keeping inside this whole time, due to the fact that she wanted to protect Steve. When Jen found out the whole truth, she became angry towards him and ended up shooting him when he came to confess at her house. Although some people may think that he deserved it and it was Jen’s form of revenge, it leaves some things unanswered. I think what she could’ve done instead was held him hostage and torture him just so it can keep the audience on their feet. In addition, I believe it’s more suspenseful watching a character get held hostage and interrogated rather than just watching them get shot. Overall, the plot of the show is quite interesting and fun, but I feel like a different ending to the show could have definitely made it a little better.
Bird box

Bird Box on Netflix was one of the most talked about movies for awhile so I had to watch it but I ended up being disappointed because there was no kind of explanation on where and why the “aliens” came and killed most of the population, which I would’ve changed. Giving some kind of background information during any part of the movie, most likely the end, would have made the whole entire movie more clear. I went  through the movie wondering what and why these creatures came to earth to kill everyone, it just ended with no explanation. In my opinion, usually good movies include parts of how things come to play, if it’s about some sort of alien or creatures trying to take over the world. One character by the name of Gary, was able to draw the creature. This drawing was the only reference of what these creatures my have looked like but still we do not  know why they are there, how they are able to make people want to commit suicide and what their purpose was. Doing this did keep me on my feet, as if the back story was told at the beginning, I may have not have had the same reaction which was probably the point in the first place. I just personally think sharing why things happened would have left me with a better understanding of the story. Furthermore, Bird Box was one of the most watched movies on Netflix, not taking away from how good the movie was especially for a suspenseful movie, I think that adding a back story of where these creatures were from and why they were there, would have made the movie a lot better in my eyes and would have created a better picture for the viewer, instead of feeling clueless by the end of the movie.
A Series of Unfortunate Events

This new Netflix series is very funny and slightly different from the movie and the book. Many of the jokes in the show are for the 2017 audience, like “calling an Uber,” for example.

The evil Count Olaf appears in different costumes trying to get to the Baudelaire children’s fortune that was left behind by their parents who died in a fire. The adults on the show never know that Count Olaf is just in a costume, trying to steal the Baudelaire’s money.

Why don’t the Baudelaire children make and install a CCTV? Violet Baudelaire is supposed to be an engineering genius who can make or fix anything and Klaus Baudelaire has read almost all the books that he’s ever seen. The brother and sister can learn how to make a video camera to install in the house every time they move into a new guardian’s home. With the video camera, the children can catch Count Olaf on film when he tries to murder the guardian or threaten the children. With the evidence, the adults will have no choice but to believe the Baudelaire children.

Or, if Count Olaf wants to legally adopt the children to get the money, he should just find out who the next guardian is, kill that person, and wear a costume pretending to be the new guardian! Why does Count Olaf go through all the trouble of trying to get close to the children, then killing the guardian, then finding a way to legally take the children?

But, we want the Baudelaire children to win against Count Olaf. If the CCTV doesn’t work...

Count Olaf has 5 friends who help him. These 5 people seem like they are the type of people who can be easily be bought with money. The Baudelaire children should offer these friends some money from their fortune to go against Count Olaf. Problem solved.
Grays Anatomy Paper

Today I will be analyzing the very famous tv show Grey's Anatomy. Grays Anatomy is a show based in Seattle and I love nothing more than this show. I am a huge fan. A Lot of people don't find Greys Anatomy interesting and I can see why. Most people just look at the show and see how many seasons it has and no one is interested anymore. I can see why that happens but for me Grey's Anatomy is much deeper. I think it is very easy to get connected to the characters and I think that's why  I like the show so much and it's hard for other people to get into it. Since I have been watching Greys since the beginning I have developed huge fan bases for the characters. All of the actors in the show hold a certain personality and place in the show. However I do think it is upsetting that they end up killing off a lot of the good characters. In retrospect they probably have to do this so actors can greater their acting careers with other tv shows and movies. I think a solution to this could be maybe a short film of everything major that has happened in the show. I think that would be very interesting and make people more interested in knowing more. Although in my opinion I'll never get tired of the show until they take away all of the actors I'm used to. If that doesn't happen anytime soon I see myself watching this series until it ends. I also think people should gain more patients for the show because if it has been going on for so long obviously the show has a huge fan base and Shonda Rymes has a wonderful brain to be able to come up with as many mouth dropping episodes she has come out with.
Alternate ending for Dexter

I want to start off by saying that Dexter is perhaps one of
the best TV shows I have ever seen. I can honestly say that although the ending
was not practical, it was not extremely disappointing as other audiences feel.
That being said for the sake of the assignment I will say it was one of the
most unsatisfying finale I have seen and this is how I will fix it.

\*MAJOR SPOLIER ALERT DO NOT READ IF YOU PLAN TO WATCH\* First
off, I would absolutely not kill of Debera Morgan. This show spent so much time
developing this character that it is not sensible to just let her off like
that. She deserved a lot better. I think that the whole last season was a bit
much for the finale the show got. I would’ve ended the show at the end of
season 7 where Deb is making the decision of weather to shoot Maria Laguerta or
Dexter. In my ideal finale Debera would’ve shot Dexter instead and she would
make Laguerta promise not to say anything to anyone about Dexter’s true
identity. They would come up with a cover story to explain Dexter’s death in
where Dexter would look like a hero. They would say Dexter jumped in front of a
bullet for Laguerta, meanwhile Deb shot the man that supposedly was shooting
Laguerta that way it would explain both Dexter’s death and the other man’s. Deb
would go on to raise Harrison by herself and eventually marry Quinn. This
finale also allows for Hannah never to reenter the picture. It is also a somewhat
poetic because

This ending maybe just as bad as the original, but at least
Debera Moragn would live and not have her whole world turned upside down
because of Dexter’s ways
How to fix the office

The Office, a show that goes into the lives of many individuals who work, in an office. The awkward humor throughout the show gives the audience something to laugh at, as many of the jokes told are not as funny and not as relatable. while some including myself love this show, many hate it because of its humor. The main character and maybe the funniest individual on the show, Michael Scott, is only in seven of the seasons shows. The last two seasons of the office go downhill once Michael ends up leaving. The show was never the same once he left. if Michael were to stay for the last two seasons, the show would be perfect, but because he left, nothing was the same. Michaels humor in the show is nothing compared to the others like Jim or Dwight. Michael is his own self, he is just a funny guy. He was pivotal towards the shows overall structure. in order to make the show better, they would need to keep Michael in for two more seasons, and improve on the characters introduced in seasons eight and nine. the characters in these two seasons are bland and do not bring any excitement to the rest of the cast. I feel if the characters added were played by different actors, or overall played an important role in seasons before, the show would be better. Because these characters only were seen in the last two seasons, it feels rushed and seems like the only were put into the show because they needed the finale to make sense. Shows that feel rushed never do well in the end, and that is what happened here. Michael would have saved the show if they kept him in for the final two seasons, or if the have ended the show once he left.
Leatherface

Personally I love a good horror story with sick twisted details and this movie remake did just that slightly. In order to make me say WOW is by introducing leatherface and the way his family lives. The connection to who he is and why he kills people adds more depth to the film. His family of cannibals look great but they needed to be involved more because they are the ones who influenced this behavior. Now, in the beginning of the film it shows the real footage of the sheriffs entering the home and it would have been nice to see the investigation before whether it was the phone call or the motive on how they found that house. These suggestions would boost up the horror in the movie because imagine starting it with the phone call that the sheriff received on a black screen? Goosebumps! Also the fact that Leatherface’s brother, I believe, acted like a sheriff would have made the movie more dramatic if the movie would have started with the sheriff phone call because it would have us wondering if he was the sheriff who got the real call since we could not see him in the phone call scene and we would have been more mind blown when we was seen in leatherface's house, leaving us with questions like; are the sheriffs in on this? One other thing I would have also done is connect those two ladies that lived in the trailer home by having them all be seen together with Leatherface because I was a bit confused on who they were, until in the scene where Erin entered the trailer home because she was drugged later on. We could have been yelling “no do not go in there!!!” if that connection was there for us to make.
Interstellar's Shortcomings

Interstellar may have been the most beautiful film of its decade, with its combination of existential decisions and human connection, it presents emotion-bending entertainment which is enjoyable in every way, yet it closes out on the most unsatisfactory reunion in which the whole   film led up to and needs to be altered completely. Matthew McConaughey plays a father who went from being a pilot to a farmer, due to the world’s rapidifying death. He then stumbles into an old mentor who was employed by NASA, and is eventually given the opportunity to lead an expedition through a wormhole, hopefully to a new habitable world. Once concluding that this is what his individual journey was destined to be, he painfully left his 10 year old daughter Murph behind, the rest of the film revolves around Matthew hoping to complete his mission quickly in order to see his daughter alive once again. With time relativity resulting in different aging speeds, Matthew completes his mission and finally gets to see Murph. However, Murph is now old, wrinkly and on her deathbed, while Matthew is 135 years old looking 50. After a short embrace, murph tells her father that he shouldn’t see her daughter die, and after shedding a tear Matthew stepped out of the room and moved on. This was a rollercoaster with no ending, as zero satisfaction was filled. This should have been completely scrapped, and Murph was better off dying before they met again. The film concludes with Matthew departing back to space, in search of his old crew partner. If Matthew’s journey did not end with the reunion with his daughter, this empty reunion could have been easily scrapped. Murph dying before she was transported to the same space shuttle would provoke deeper motivation and drive for his newly embarked journey.
Game of thrones s7

HBO's hit series *Game of Thrones* is not only one of their most popular shows, but one of the most popular tv shows of our generation. Throughout the shows eight seasons we follow different major families as they attempt to seize power over one another. While *Game of Thrones* was extremely popular, many fans were disappointed by the shows ending; they felt as if they had invested too much time into this series and the final season for the most part was a let down. Season eight did have its upsides including the highly anticipated battle against the dead in the episode "The Long Night". In this alternate ending we will not be changing this battle, and instead will focus mainly on the last episode. In the seventh episode of the final season we see Daenerys lose her second of her three dragons while traveling to "King's Landing". This first thing that I would change about the ending of this series, is I would keep Daenerys last two dragons alive. Daenerys claim to the throne rests upon her being the final descendent of the last true king; however her family has not been in power for around 20 or so years so her biggest support is that she is the dragon queen. Throughout the show Daenerys has unleashed her dragons and her armies upon slavers and those who have made their living by victimizing the less fortunate, she is known as "the breaker of chains" as well as "the mother of dragons". By saving Daenerys final two dragons we are strengthening her claim because of her superior army. The biggest change I would make however is that I would save Daenerys character. While Daenerys has her weak points throughout the series, for the majority we see her as imposing figure and as a conquerer on a mission to change the world. However in the final two episodes we see Daenerys lose herself and give into her darkest impulses as her father had done before her. Instead of having Daenerys destroy the capitol and kill those within the city, I would have her use her dragons to destroy the defenses that have been set up along the outer walls of the city, however after this I would have had her come down off her dragon and march with her army to the "red keep". Doing this would not only preserve the city she wished to rule, but more importantly save the citizens that would have called her queen. Rather then using her dragons to unleash fire and chaos, Daenerys would oversee a peaceful yet still forceful takeover. But more importantly we would see her complete her mission of sitting on the iron throne. I would also have had Daenerys marry Jon Snow as he would have been a great king and would have helped her keep her dark impulses at bay.
Grey's Anatomy

For 12 seasons, Grey’s anatomy has attracted thousands of viewers that can’t get enough of drama, surgeries, and love stories. The show is great at getting the audience to fall in love with characters, yet as soon as it seems like everything might be ok, the director cuts a beloved character from the story line. The whole show is mainly based around the love connection of Meredith Grey and Derek Shepard. Their forbidden love was viewed inappropriate as Derek holds a higher position than Meredith, it can be implied that Meredith was only using him to advance in her career. They went through a series of ups and downs for many years, and I along with many other viewers, got attached to the connection Meredith and Derek shared. Last season Derek was killed as he got hit by a big rig truck trying to save a woman and her daughter stuck in a car. Soon after Derek died, Meredith found out that she was pregnant with their third child. My love for Grey’s Anatomy has only grown each season but after Derick died I feel like a part of the show is missing. If I could rewrite the 11th season, I would not kill Derek’s character. Instead I would just have Derek go through a traumatic experience causing a hiccup in their relationship. For example, saving the little girl but not being able to save her mother would cause him to be so distraught because the little girl watched her mother die and Derek couldn’t help. After that experience, he would continue to feel guilt and wouldn’t let it go as he would constantly be reminded of what happened. Therefore, causing Meredith and Derek to issues in their relationship because this experience has changed him now that he has kids himself. Eventually the problems would grow and they would split up because they couldn’t make it work and it was beginning to effect their children. Not being apart for long, they would realize life without each other is not worth living and finding out they were pregnant with their third child would push them to give it another try and fight for their love. I know its very cheesy but not having all my favorite characters die would be a nice change.
How to fix Alien covenant

Alien covenant has a variety of flaws, and its main flaw is the fact it has alien in the title, the xenomorph, the thing that is the ealien in the movie is barely present. Another big flaw is the villain of the movie, David, who is a character from the "prequel" movie Prometheus. The first thing i would fix about this film is the main villain, David, he comes out as a good guy turned bad guy after he comes into contact with the main group in the film. He killed his partner, Elizabeth shaw, who also survived the crash of their spaceship in the prometheus film. The way he killed her was to experiment on her body as he wanted to create new life, he is successful but fails as the specimens kept dying. Then he ended up perfecting his craft making the newest alien, the neomorph, a combination of the alien seen at the end of prometheus and a similar looking one to the xenomporh. This alien is in the film majority of the time as two of them were spawned while the group was exploring. The xenomorph appears towards the end of the film as majority of the scenes the actual xenomorph was in were in trailers and tv spots that when seeing it on screen it did not live up to the hype. One way I would fix davids character problem is to reveal his true intentions before the crew arrive, he appears so suddenly that he many do not know who his character is, he is also an android, so that is cool. having him at least feel a bit of sympathy towards the deaths of his creations would add on to his characters as it was his lives works. The xenomorph problem can simply be fixed, market the neomorph a lot more, add some more scenes for the xenomorph, how they were created, first looked, and also make them the main focus as the film is titled "Alien Covenant"
Luna- breaking bad

Breaking bad is a crime show created and produced by Vince Gilligan, the show tells a story about a chemist teacher named Walter White and an ex student Named Jesse Pinkman. They start to produced the best crystallized methamphetamine yet seen in the dug industry. Walter and Jesse start making crystallized methamphetamine after Walter White gets diagnosed with lung cancer. Walter keeps his cancer from his family, and also keeps Jesse a secret. The reason why walter white started making methamphetamine was to be able to pay for his medical bills. Walter White's family which is shown threw out the whole series includes his wife, his son, his daughter, his wife sister, and his wife's husband. Walter's in law Hank is a DEA (drug enforcement administration) agent, he is after Heisenberg which happens to be Walter White nickname in the drug world. The show won a lot of awards because it was one of the best crime shows on television, even though the show was amazing I wish it had a different ending. At the end of the show Walter White dies saving Jesse from being a sort of salve to some drug dealers that they had bad encounters with. The drug dealers wanted jesse to recreate the drug was being sold by him and Walter. By letting Walter live and getting away with jesse at the end would be a better ending. For example Walter white would escape to a different country with his family and Jesse to start a new life. Walter has enough money to start over and have a clean slate. By starting over he could become a chemist teacher and still continue to sell methamphetamine with Jesse. I would end the show by letting the audience know that they escaped to another country and Walter gets a job as a chemist teacher. The closing sene would be walter walking into a class room full of students and saying "good morning class my name is.." and writing his name on the chalkboard behind him. By doing this i am able to give the option to the audience to make their own ending.
"Vertical Limit" film by Maria Calderon

"Vertical Limit" is an exceptional action film. The dialogue is crisp and clever. The story did not hold anything back and was one of the most adventurous film I have ever experienced. Except the plot is simply not believable.

If you have even had an experience wherein you saw your father dying because he saved your life , then, you experienced how dangerous it can be to practice the sport mountain climbing.

This is dramatic, yet a ridiculous an unrealistic set up for the plot! . In the film Annie Garret is a famous climber, who , because of her beauty and popularity through sports magazines, was used by her fiancée , Elliot.( A billionaire dedicated to the business of the sports climbing. "Majestic"). To promote his business.

Elliot also risk the life of Annie's brother, Peter, who was the principal character in the film. Peter talked to Annie about his fear of her climbing. " The Himalaya" which are among the highest mountain in the world.

She said to him " I don't let nobody affect my climbing." Annie defends her fiancée and also admits that she admires him. In the beginning of the movie. Peter and Annie lost their father in a climbing accident where their father made the decision to cut the rope in order to save the life of his daughter and son.

In order to created a more believable story line, the father's death did not have to be related to saving his children's life, but merely caused by an already dangerous sports mishap. Furthermore, it was very difficult to believe that this billionaire would risk his life and the life of his girlfriend to merely climb the mountain.

The writer would made a much more believable story if he had made the two following changes:

First, to have made the father's death not related to saving his kids, and merely a climbing accident.

Second, by having the climbing party climb up the mountain in good weather and then the weather changed after it was too late for them to turn around.