Wounded First Draft

This Article is coming directly from nikgk1215 (The writer of Wounded and Thairn) as a description of what could have been in the Wounded Series. Many things changed. For example, Roseline was once named "Glass"

## Concepts

### The Scarabs

The scarabs were the source of magic created by Makeria. Different colors meant different magic abilities. Glass/Gold meant super strength. White meant Healing. Orange was flame. Green was spirit magic. and Black was tech magic. Victims of the Scarab were plagued with Immortality and were immune to a cause of death after dying from it once. The only way to kill a Victim was to kill them in every single possible way.

This was changed because it would involve a lot of suffering and gore.

### The Hilt

The Hilts, unlike their canon counterparts can transform into any weapon with a handle. Two hilts existed, The golden and dark hilts Wielded by Roseline and Brianna.

not much changed...

## Settings

### Makerion

Makerion was the realm of Makeria and his minions. it was a flat plane with a large white tower. it was later adapted to become Kolob, home of the gods.

Changed because i wanted a better theological base

### Planet Robot

Planet Robot was an idea that later became Zorania

pretty much only the name changed

## Characters that changed

### "God"

God was the true master of the scarab and spoke to Glass every time she died. every scarab had a god with a different personality.

Changed to actually being god, because why not?

### Shaynore

Shaynore was originally named Shannon and was a 100 foot tall robot policeman residing on Planet Robot. This height was chosen because of the height difference between Lego Minifigures and the Bionicle/Hero Factory figures.

Made him short, short kings rise up?

### Roseline Gold

Originally "Glass," then "Gold," Roseline was a young woman infected with the glass/gold scarab. Her originally clear scarab became Golden after sacrificing someone she loved. Her preferred weapon was the BattleAxe

gave her and all the rest of the characters actual names instead of colors. they deserve it.

### Michael James

Michael was originally known as "White" and was Glass' boyfriend. later, he betrayed Glass, attempted to kill her, as he was told that he would be free from his scarab by his "God"

White's death made me cry irl. didnt know why i made him die, i was like 9 at the time.

### Brianna Chryo

Originally "Black" She was Glass' best friend and fellow scarab and hilt wielder, she preferred the Whip as her weapon.

not many changes 'cept the hilt.

### Chris Kay

Chris, Originally "Green" was the self proclaimed leader of the group and taught Glass about the scarabs. He was a ninja.

made him younger, also made him less of a douche

### Makeria

Makeria was originally going to be the creator of the universe, but i changed this because i wanted to have a different theological base. you can still see the word "maker" in his name

## Scrapped Characters

- Shannon's two unnamed sisters, one was an office worker, the other unemployed.

-"orange" an ex-construction-worker who was infected with the scarabs. kinda wish i kept him in some capacity,

## Post-Plot-Change Scrapped concepts

-The Topazian Blood Cult. A cult that worshipped Bismuth, eventually resurrecting him with necromancy. would have been sick as hell, but sadly didnt fit in the plot...

-Space Pirates. They were originally going to end Mckenna's life as a toddler. Why did i ever think this was a good concept? changed because of obvious reasons \*cough\* *Child murder* \*cough\*