First Draft

The following page contains themes of murder, cannibalism, sexual themes, transphobia, sexual harassment and assault, and alcohol.

The first draft of *Dog Teeth* was originally uploaded to a oneshot book belonging to Wattpad user 'oofooftimesthree'. The first three chapters, which were lengthy and mostly unedited, were uploaded to Wattpad sometime in February, a month or so into production. Eventually, the story was moved out of the oneshot book and instead uploaded to Wattpad as its own work.

The first draft of *Dog Teeth* consisted of seven chapters. Each chapter averaged about six thousand words, however, the first four chapters were much lengthier than the rest that followed.

## Plot (Chapter One)

### The Killing of Imperial Japan

The start of the first chapter was a rather gruesome one. It began with Imperial Japan coming back into consciousness in a warehouse belonging to America. Then, Imperial Japan began spewing empty threats and insults at his captor, and then America killed and ate him.

In this segment of chapter one, Imperial Japan told America, "Not even death will wife you in the end, you sick bastard." This is referenced in the final copy during an interview between Venezuela and America.

### Introduction of Peru

In the second segment of chapter one, a new character was introduced: Peru. Peru would be the first of the romantic interests in *Dog Teeth* to cross paths with America.

At the start of *Dog Teeth*, Peru was America's boyfriend. However, things changed drastically by the end of Peru's segment of the story.

### Costa Rica Is a Fucking Snitch

In the next piece of the first chapter, Costa Rica and Peru met up at a bar. As they downed shots of tequila, Costa Rica guided Peru to the idea of America being a cannibalistic murderer. Peru then fled the bar in a panic to confront America when he got home.

### Result of the Confrontation

Then began a push-pull relationship between America and Peru. It was almost as if Peru was drawing America in with one hand and pushing him away with the other. One moment, it was all 'I love you's and the next it was screaming bloody murder.

One day, Peru attempted to murder America, and when his attempt failed, he paid the price.

### Other Information Regarding Chapter One

Before *Dog Teeth* was even thought to be a book, the writers were going to have Ukraine dating Canada, but this was later changed to accommodate Ukraine's character appearing later in the story. The mentioning of Ukraine was switched to a human named Danielle.

## Plot (Chapter Two)

### Introduction of South Korea

South Korea was the second romantic interest to cross paths with America, however, in the first draft, the pair's relationship was strictly platonic. It remained this way until the final copy.

The second chapter opened with South Korea and America drinking at a bar. As South Korea finished rattling on about his new girlfriend, he asked America about the 'special someone' in his life, to which America carefully and painfully replied with a lie about how his relationship with Peru ended. He claimed that he found Peru dead in their bathroom, a kitchen knife in hand. South Korea immediately believed this lie about Peru committing suicide.

### The Problem With North Korea

Soon after this, the subject of South Korea showering with his twin brother, North Korea, when they were thirteen came up. America, aghast, told South Korea he'd handle North Korea, and South Korea flew into a panic where he claimed he loved his brother too much for America to hurt him, and that he was afraid North Korea would invade him. "Invade my ass. He's a fucking third world country with some missiles," America said.

Absolutely hammered, South Korea had to take a cab home with America. As America entered South Korea's studio, South Korea in his arms, he took note of the barren space South Korea lived in before tucking him in and fleeing to go 'take care' of his brother.

### North Korea's Death

North Korea was setting off fireworks in the middle of the night on his driveway when America showed up. America called him an incestuous cuck, and North Korea said, "...He told you." Eventually, the conversation dragged on to the subject of Peru's death. A low blow. Laughing maniacally before tackling North Korea to the pavement, he confessed to the murder and cannibalizing of Peru.

North Korea met the same fate as Peru that night.

### South Korea's Death

South Korea awoke late for a meeting that morning, and immediately, he rushed off to work. Upon returning home, he turned on the television to listen to the news. The first thing to come on was information regarding the death of North Korea. Right away, South Korea grew suspicious of America.

As much as America insisted it wasn't him, it was to no avail. South Korea flew into a panic and dialed 911, only for America to lunge at him and crush the phone in his hand. The chapter then ended with America snapping South Korea's neck and presumably eating him.

## Plot (Chapter Three)

### Introduction of Ukraine

Ukraine was the third and final romantic interest to be introduced to America in *Dog Teeth.*

In the third chapter, they came bursting into the conference room at full speed, rushed apologies flying out their mouth, despite arriving right on time. They and America then had a conversation regarding parameters for the movie Vinegar was preparing to film, and at some point, America brought up that he was just recently assigned a new assistant, and that it could be Ukraine. Ukraine then explained that when Vinegar called them back, they had stated that Ukraine would be Japan's new assistant, not America's. This then led into the next scene, which took place in Japan's office after the meeting and near the end of America's work day.

### Introduction of Japan

Japan was an interesting woman. She drank from a mug that read in bold letters, "I EAT ASS." She hung what she called "traditional Japanese art" from her office walls, which was really hentai. She also had a titty mousepad in her office.

Together, America and Japan came to a stable conclusion about the mix-up regarding who Ukraine was supposed to work under. Ukraine would be America's assistant, and Japan would get a new one in short time.

### In Which Dean Is a Piece of Shit

In this segment of chapter three, a human named Dean was introduced. Right off the bat, he was shown to be rather unlikeable.

While they were in the break room, Dean made an inappropriate comment to Ukraine, then proceeded to try to assault them. America stepped in and as Ukraine rushed out the break room, America dragged Dean down the hall and drowned him in the bathroom sink.

America then returned to his office to find Ukraine sobbing under his desk. A comfort scene ensued.

### Stolovaya

The next day, the two had lunch at a Russian restaurant. (WIP)

### Other Information Regarding Chapter Three

When posted to the oneshot book the story was originally uploaded to, the title of the chapter was "fuck".

America began displaying symptoms of the disorder found in those who cannibalize (called kuru) in chapter three.

Japan mentioned a show called Philbert in chapter three, which is a reference to a TV show in the universe of the show Bojack Horseman.

On the way from Japan's office to America's own, Ukraine mentioned they have a cat named Betonu. This translates to 'concrete' in English.