Time For Some Rewriting

> "*I don't deserve a happy ending"*
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> *"You do! If anyone here deserves a happy ending it's you. Not the broken one. Not the mad fucking doctor. Not the soldier who can't even save his family."*
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> – Tommy Gwendolyn and Vincent Reid
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## Time For Some Rewriting

### Scenarios

* Camp Streamix (It's the finale and we gotta)
* The Matchelor

### Cast Present

* Kristen
* Split
* Alex
* Uprising
* Juno
* JoJo
* Scott
* Phill
* Bro
* Queen
* Adric

### Release Date

September 6, 2018

"Time For Some Rewriting" is the twelfth episode and finale of the first season of Discord Murder Party, and twelfth episode overall.

## Plot Summary:

### Scenario 1: Camp Streamix (It's the finale and we gotta)

Our dear counselor Murder God starts the day with the ice-breaker game, because she lost her clipboard to the water. We have Bro, who likes cookies and cream ice cream and has been in camp the whole time. He also tries to keep things from dying. Next is JoJo, who likes blue moon ice cream. One of their bucket list items is to break a bone. Next is a bear, who is taking Juno's place since he's doing laundry. Next is Mr. GcMillicutty who used to live in the woods before the camp thing was a thing. Next is Phill, who is JoJo’s best friend and keeps them from breaking a bone. Next is Scott who’s always crying. He likes mint chocolate chip ice cream and he’s the one who manages the scoreboard. Next is Tommy Gwendolyn, who is still broken and the intern. Next is Uprising, who Miss Murder remembers the name. She is very lovable. Next is Grace Garden, who doesn’t want to manage children. And finally Vincent Reid who was drowning for 2 weeks. He was fished out by "some kid in a hoodie". The reminder of the first day is pretty much discussion of Vincent and Grace. The two were mistaken for a couple by JoJo. After Vincent said he only had eyes for his wife, Phill said it was gay. While Mr. GcMillicutty retorted that it was the opposite, Phill threaten to kill the man which resulted in the former getting lightly slapped by JoJo. Murder God then leads the kids to the campfire for a blood circle before sending them to bed. Miss Murder retrieved some of her powers and changed some of the kids into axe killers. After all she wants the Stream Stick and only knows to solve problems with murder.

The next morning, Miss Murder informs the group that one of the campers would be given the role of the tanner. She reveals that Phill had an axe thrown at him but was saved by some cootie catcher thing. Also Vincent has received a friendship bracelet. Miss Murder then informs the group about a wheel spin, which added the tough guy role. The campers elect Phill as leader. Next, as official leader, Phill opts that they vote him out, revealing his role as Tanner. There’s some arguing going on, as Phill affirms that he hates Uprising. Vincent on the other hand suggests getting rid of the actual bear. The bear counters by not only revealing that’s actually Bogi Bear, but also that it saved Phill in the night. Some arguing continues as Phill makes no sense, before Grace starts to suspect Mr. GcMillicutty for having an actual motive. But then he reveals that he has a gun. Then Uprising is put under suspicion for not catching that Mr. GcGillicutty as the gunslinger, but she retorts that she’s the Seer, rather the psychic child. As Phill questions why everyone was focused on him, JoJo takes out a friendship bracelet, revealing them as the gardener. Then Bogi starts to question Grace Garden for her dislike of children. Grace tells them that she has morals even if she dislikes children and then turns the attention to Scott, who’s been very quiet. GcMillicutty accuses Scott with Grace seconding this accusation. Although before the vote, Scott, or rather BaritoneBlur Scott’s evil twin brother. Miss Murder decides to send him to the corner of shame, under a totally unbiased decision. Afterwards, Miss Murder sends the campers on their way, with Bogi bear taking JoJo and Phill on a picnic.

The next day, thanks to a wheel spin the bear is not dead. After clearing the confusion of where Juno was, the group asks insight from Uprising who admits being a bad seer. She confirms JoJo as the Gardener. Also, Vincent has now two friendship bracelets. JoJo then tells Vincent that they want to do something nice for him. Grace makes a comment which Vincent doesn’t take. Vincent and Grace argue about the rules and the game. As Grace narrows it down to herself, Vincent, Bro and Tommy, Vincent and her get in another argument this time about Tommy. Vincent then talks to Tommy, promising he hasn’t given up on him and that Tommy has a story and that he has names, Jason and Angela. Tommy in his broken states that he doesn’t deserve a happy ending, which both current awakened say that he does deserve one. Vincent even says that out of everyone here, Tommy deserves it the most. Then Grace realizes that they’re still missing something. She then states that despite having the names, he’s still in a broken state. Vincent can only say that Tommy’s been cheated as Murder God won’t tell him the full story. Grace apologizes before questioning what they’re missing or rather if they’ve got something wrong. Vincent accepts the probability that he might have gotten something wrong, but he doesn’t know what.

Out of the blue, Uprising speaks up saying that the Angela isn’t the right name, rather the name is Angelena. Murder God is caught off guard and tries to get Uprising back, away from Vincent and Grace. Although, Miss Murder’s efforts were late as Vincent asks Tommy if he recognizes the name Angelena. Tommy gets a reaction as he starts to remember. Miss Murder wants this to end and so Grace accuses Bro. As Grace says he can only be Bro by process of elimination, Bro goes on a rant about his involvement in the camp. They finally vote with the majority against Bro. Although Bro is revealed to be a townsfolk. Bro leaves with Juno helping him pack.

The final day dawns, Vincent gets another friendship bracelet. it’s also revealed that Grace was killed under mysterious circumstances, aka some ritual involving a cootie catcher. It’s also revealed that JoJo was found dead in the woods. As JoJo says their last word, the whole group, including Miss Murder who didn’t want this child to die, morns in their own way JoJo’s death. As Vincent and Tommy talk about being the only Townsfolk left, Tommy apologizes, which Vincent says it wasn’t his fault. Vincent accuses Tommy, saying that he knows what he did. Tommy’s defense is a confession. With that, Miss Murder has more paperwork to do and give a half hearted “Have a good summer to the rest”. Juno arrives and sees JoJo dead. He’s told he missed a lot. Counselor Alex asks something which Bro replies. Scott is stuck under the scoreboard that fell on him. Vincent admits that this is a nice world, but then Juno recognizes Vincent as one of the people he draws. Murder God says she has to close the world or else the universe with be destroyed. Before closing it, Scott tells Miss Murder that she’s winning, leaving her in confusion as it cuts.

### Scenario 2: The Matchelor

Everyone's favorite 100% totally real romance show. Which takes place in the matchelor mansion, located on Reality Island. The show is hosted by Redacted, who is here to introduce the contestants competing to win the heart of The Matchelor, Hugh Jacough, who is a rich and self absorbed asshole. The contestants are Anastasia Kõun'na Tadashi, the heiress to the Tadashi fortune who is at the age where a spouse is needed. Somehow, a reflection of Tommy's lover, Angalena Fenbun, was summoned, much to the displeasure of Murder God. Moving on, there was Grace Garden, who has no interest in romance but is taking part in the game realizing she could use Angalena's involvement in the game to her advantage and save Tommy. King Dedede, HE'S BAAAAAAAAAAAAACK! and he has the best chance of winning. Johan Claus, Anastasia's butler. Sullivan "Sully" Virion, the retired formal duke of the country of roxanne. Tifa "Table Tennis", she's very good at table tennis and she's here for a daddy. Tommy Gwendolyn, who mistook Angalena's name due to being in his broken state, which Murder God used to her advantage. And lastly, there was Vincent Reid, who was focused on fixing Tommy. Murder God sent everyone to sleep so that she could set up the game. Two of the contestants are crazed interns who have the chance to infiltrate the set and kill everyone so that they can film their art school film.

The next day, Murder God announced the results of the wheel spins. One of the players would become the doctor and another one would become the minion. In more terrible news, King Dedede was tragically murdered last night. Also Tommy got a love note, which Murder God decided not to read and she dropped it into the water. The group voted Hugh Jacough as leader of the group since it's his show. Hugh questioned those who had no feelings for him, Grace revealed that her uncle had taught her that romance was inconvenient in her line of work, only serving as a distraction. and Vincent wasn't interested since he was already married. Sully then called Hugh the second most handsome person that he had met, which offended Hugh and lead him to ask for Sully's alibi. He was just staring at himself in the mirror. He then asked Johan what he thought. he responded that he had no evidence to go by. To which Hugh responded that "the butler always did it" in the novels that he read. Johan asked him if those books had pictures in them, which lead Vincent to believe that he was trying to insult Hugh's intelligence. Anastasia tried to speak up for her butler and said that she was with him while she was sleeping. Grace formally accused Johan since Anastasia was asleep and he could have done anything while she was sleeping. Johan defended himself by saying that he had some dank kush. The majority voted against kicking him out. Hugh formally accused Anastasia since she was very controlling of her butler. While the votes tied, Anastasia was still removed by an act of god. She was a minion working for the murderers.

The next day, Grace was killed by the witch, although she refused to believe that her method of death was an overdose of drugs. She revealed being the killer which indirectly led to Vincent revealing that he was the final killer, as she had previously said, "Well Vincent, you're on your own now." However, she revealed that she meant he was on his own in saving Tommy, and admitted that Vincent's rashness in that moment had amused her. In other news, Sully was brutally murdered. He was revealed to be the seer and before dying he confirmed that Hugh was innocent. Afterwards, the wheel was spun. The wheel summoned Billy the Dickensian street orphan, who appeared tapped to the Murder God's back. Before Vincent could be accused of being murderer, he decided to play by his own rules again. He proposed to Hugh that there wasn't anything better in a love show than two people falling in love with each other instead of the host. Murder God then interrupted him to read another letter. The letter was, once again, addressed to Tommy so she stopped reading it. Angalena told Tommy that she could write more letters, which caused him to remember her more. She would always visit Tommy in the hospital and would write him letters. In an attempt to avoid the situation, Murder God gave the letter to Billy.

Suddenly, Tifa noticed something was going on and offered Billy to trade the letter for some paper and pencils. Billy gave Tifa the letter and she gave it back to Tommy. Angalena helped Tommy read the letters, which caused Tommy to remember her even more. However, 10 minutes had passed and it was time for an act of god. Murder God decided to remove Angalena from the game, to which Vincent objected. Vincent decided that he would kill someone for Murder God so that she could bring back Angelena. Vincent killed Johan, however that wasn't enough for Murder God, who decided to out Vincent as the murderer to Hugh. Out of anger, Vincent shot himself, thus removing him from the game. That only left Hugh, Tifa, Tommy and Angalena. Since Tommy and Angalena were already interested in each other. That left Tifa as the winner, who won Billy as a consolation prize. Thus ending the scenario.

### Ending

Before Murder God could end the scenario and prevent Tommy and Angelena from speaking. Dr. McGillicutty returned, after being absent from the games ever since the Higurashi scenario. Upon this, Murder God brought the awakened back to the void, including Angalena. Vincent and Grace tried to get Tommy to remember Angalena. they tried to gently push Angalena to speak to Tommy and reveal what she was feeling.

Suddenly, the Murder God turned the situation to Grace, questioning her as to why she would help Tommy when he had previously played as her uncle. This triggered the memories of the Host murdering him, which caused the Host to awaken again. The Murder God encouraged her to finish the conversation she had with the Doctor in the Higurashi Scenario. Grace angrily demanded to know where the Doctor had been, and why he was not making the effort to fix her. The Doctor was taken aback, before sternly telling her that he is incapable of curing dissociative identity disorder, telling Grace that he is a doctor, not a miracle worker. Despite Grace's despair at this fact, he told her there was nothing about her that he needed to fix, as Grace was still her own person at the end of the day. Reluctantly, Grace accepted that the Doctor could not help her, resolving instead to find a solution herself. She turned the focus back to Tommy, reminding the group that he was the one that needed the most help.

The Murder God attempted to stop them again, but Vincent shot her, telling her it was his turn now. The Awakened let Angalena help fix Tommy from his broken state. She recalled to Tommy about how when they were in middle school together, Tommy would protect Angalena from bullies, and they would support and help each other through the hard times. After Angalena's 'accident', Tommy was always by her side whenever possible. He would tell her everything that was going on, about D&D, he delivered her homework, and he talked to her about the Pokémon Trading card Game, despite having no knowledge about it. This entire time, he was ill and in pain, but he did it anyway to make Angalena happy. After she recovered, she, in turn, spent all the time that she could with Tommy. Even though he was sick, she still loved him, and even got him a ring, though he never got to see it. The ring said "From your Fluffybun to your Stalwart. She showed Tommy the ring, which caused him to remember Angalena, finally overcoming his glitched state. In a fit of rage, the Murder God banished Angalena. The Awakened were overjoyed with the outcome, ignoring the Murder God's taunts at each of them who tried to remind them that their stories are supposed to be tragedies, and they are all broken in their own ways. The Doctor chastised her for her immaturity, and asked her why he was still in the games. The Murder God retaliated that he was only there for comic relief, and played no useful part in the story. However, the rest of the Awakened quickly came to his defense, reminding the Murder God that his declaration on Reality Island 2 was the reason why they are all awakened in the first place. Vincent even went as far as to claim that the Doctor was the true hero, stating that he didn't deserve the title. In a fit of rage, the Murder God silenced the Awakened and banished them, resolving to rewriting her story.

## Starring

* Kristen Trawczynski as Murder God (Counselor Murder God/Miss Murder/Redacted)
* SplitGuardian as Vincent Reid
* Alex Beckham as Mr. GcMillicutty, Hugh Jacough, Billy and Dr. McGillicutty
* Uprising Attorney as Uprising and Angalena Fenbun
* Juno Son as One of Eight Bears (Bogi Bear), Juno and King Dedede
* JoJoSoda as JoJo and Anastasia Kõun'na Tadashi
* Scott Orenstein as Scott, BaritoneBlur and Sully Virion
* Phill Hughes as Phill and Johan Claus
* Brodingles as Bro and Tifa "Table Tennis"
* QueenCreeps as Grace Garden
* Adric as ~~T̵͕͋n̶̩͂à̷͉o̷̰̿ṵ̵͝ ̴͖̒G̵͖̈́c̷̘̈́j̴̭́e̷͕̽s̸̲͘d̷̳͝c̵̦͂l̴̳̈́s̸̹̃~~ Tommy Gwendolyn

## Gallery

Scenario 1The old wheelArtwork of Scenario 1Scenario 2The Donation WheelArtwork of Scenario 2Artwork of Grace and McGillicuttyArtwork of Vincent shooting Murder GodTommy Gwendolyn Has Awakened