The Mess

There are two parts to this story, titled The Mess and The Mess Part 2.

## The Story

The events of *The Mess* appear to take place over the course of a single day, with the first part taking place perhaps mid-morning, early enough for breakfast, but late enough for staffing issues to become apparent; and the second part taking place in the late afternoon, when the threat of sunset ending sunbathing opportunities. The connection that makes this the same day is a comment made on page 4 of Part 1: "I love that loo—", and a comment made on page 2 of Part 2: "Oh, again, with the looks."

### The Mess

The first part is, of course, named simply *The Mess*, and it features a tipsy pre-op transgender woman named Portia and a slightly older cis woman named Rosa in a vignette in Portia's bedroom; Rosa, a uniformed chambermaid, is trying to tidy up the room and change the linens, while the essentially naked Portia lies back in the bed slowly stroking her erection. Portia manages to convince the seemingly reluctant Rosa, who has been 'accidentally' flaunting herself in front of Portia, to help her out by performing fellatio on her. After the act reaches its pleasant denouement, Rosa delicately dabs her lips clean with an embroidered handkerchief, and then she sternly reminds Portia to say 'thank you' afterwards. Finishing off a nearly empty bottle of vodka she had taken from Portia earlier, Rosa tells her to go eat breakfast so she can finish up. When Portia tries to get Rosa to undress and join her in bed, Rosa responds by yelling "OUT!" and dumping Portia out of bed using the sheets.

**•** The story consists of six pages.

### The Mess Part 2

The sequel to *The Mess* is given the uncomplicated subtitle of *Part 2*, and it again features Portia and Rosa; this time the action takes place on the balcony outside of Portia's bedroom, possibly in the afternoon of the same day. Portia is reclining on a lounge chair wearing a fairly standard magenta-and-white striped bikini suitable for a public beach. She has purchased a sexy but demure one-piece bathing suit for Rosa and insists she wear it for her. Rosa appears on the balcony wearing the snug-fitting black suit with a sheer scarf tied at her hips. Rosa accepts Portia's offer to help with the sun block. Portia escalates the application of sun block to a sexy massage, then she begins to molest the seemingly reluctant Rosa, pulling the straps of the bathing suit off her shoulders and exposing her breasts. Rosa's surrender is suspiciously quick, and much to Portia's surprise Rosa then takes the next step of aggressively initiating intercourse. Therein follows a series of pages of erotic interactions between the pair. At one point, Portia asks for a break, and Rosa insists on "one mohe."

Portia finally says they need more orange juice or she would be "shooting dust," and that she'll call another of the staff over to get it for them. Rosa vehemently refuses to allow that and says she'll get it herself. Surprised by this, Portia accuses Rosa of being jealous, and is even more surprised when Rosa admits she is. Rosa demands that she be Portia's one and only, and the stunned Portia agrees to abide by Rosa's wishes. Mollified, Rosa reaches for the phone and calls for something cold to drink to be delivered to Portia's room. A bit more than five minutes later, the only other person to appear in either story comes out on the balcony. The slim pale-skinned blond chambermaid carrying a tray with a pitcher and tumblers is abashed by her discovery of Portia and Rosa *in flagrante delicto* and runs from the room, embarrassed at having caught the two in the act … *again*.

**•** The second part of the story is nearly twice as long as the first part, consisting of eleven pages.

## The Characters

The women have a complex relationship. While it is apparent that Portia is not in fact Rosa's employer, she does seem to have some authority over Rosa; perhaps Portia is related to Rosa's employer in some fashion.

While Rosa acts as though she's submissive to Portia, giving in reluctantly but willingly to Portia's demands, she sees fit to correct Portia's behavior as needed, calling her "good girl" when she meekly complies, and demanding fidelity when confronted about her jealousy of other staff members. She also admonishes Portia for sexually harassing the staff, although, this may simply be a part of a game they play. In Part 1, Portia monologues about jerking off in view of "that pesky maid", while that pesky maid in exasperation asks her to stop masturbating while they talk.

Portia's aggressive personality positions her as the dominant in the relationship, while the more reserved Rosa behaves somewhat submissively. Rosa's behavior is an example of "topping from the bottom", where a submissive makes demands of the dominant, defining the nature of the relationship and keeping the dominant in check.

The women appear to be the same height, and Rosa's height, and thus Portia's, can be judged based on the height of the bed Rosa is standing beside on page 1 of *The Mess*. The average bed is 25 inches which makes Rosa roughly five and a half feet tall.

### Portia

Portia is a red-haired blue-eyed transgender woman with a peaches-and-cream complexion. She is approximately 5'6" as noted above, with a larger than average bust and large pale undefined areolas that spread out from her erect nipples and fade into the skin of the breast. She has a much larger than average erect penis. She has a beauty mark on her chin just below the right corner of her lips. Based on her jaded behavior, Portia may be in her early to late thirties. She has no visible hair below the neck.

### Rosa

Rosa is a black-haired gray-eyed cis woman with a dark tan complexion. She appears to be the same 5'6" as Portia, but her breasts appear to be larger, and she also has large areolas that spread out from her erect nipples, only hers are a rich brown and better defined. She has little or no pubic mound above a large, visible clitoris. She has crows-feet in the corners of her eyes which indicate she is a more mature woman than Portia, perhaps in her late forties. She also has no visible hair below the neck.

## Trivia

* In Part 1, Rosa rather expertly holds up a multi-stranded flogger on page 2 while looking wistfully over her shoulder at Portia.
* In Part 2, based on the conversation on pages 8 and 10 and the presence of Portia's bikini and Rosa's hair bun on page 9, pages 8 and 9 got swapped.
* In Part 2, the urls indicate there are *two* pages 11, but the page html titles are in order.

## References

1. ↑ *The Mess* page 6
2. ↑ *The Mess* page 2
3. ↑ *The Mess* page 1
4. ↑ *The Mess* page 4
5. ↑ *The Mess Part 2* page 2
6. ↑ *The Mess* page 2
7. ↑ *The Mess* page 6
8. ↑ *The Mess Part 2* page 11
9. ↑ *The Mess Part 2* page 2
10. ↑ *The Mess* page 1
11. ↑ *The Mess* page 1
12. ↑ *What is the Best Bed Height?* The Casper Blog