Webnovel/15

## Chapter 15

* Main

The **15th chapter** of the web novel is titled 《梦魔副本》 which translates to *"Dream Demon's Script"*. It was first published in Chinese on JJWXC, July 2015.

## English Novel Location

This chapter starts on the line

> The so-called protagonist’s privilege was that even if he stepped in dog shit, there would probably be a hidden scroll or elixir within it.
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Of the English Novel volume 1, chapter 3: Favor Points, and ends on the line

> “Anyone else being here is the strange thing, while your presence is quite natural,” said Shen Qingqiu. “This is your dream realm.”
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Of the English Novel volume 1, chapter 3: Favor Points.

## Recap

While Shen Qingqiu was dwelling on Proud Immortal Demon Way, he managed to not hear the other peak lords calling for him repeatedly. Once he focused again, he was given Mu Qingfang’s treatment prescription, alongside a warning that his qi will occasionally stagnate and there may be other abnormalities. At this, the other peak lord’s expect him to freak out, but Shen Qingqiu is just satisfied that a scum villain like him could be poisoned and live.

Yue Qingyuan blamed himself for the poisoning, claiming he should have stayed on the mountain. Shen Qingqiu hurried to insist that the Immortal Alliance Conference meeting was important and it was the demons who were at fault, knowing that Yue Qingyuan would never leave the mountain again if he didn’t make that clear. Mu Qingfang then jumped in and claimed the blame was his for not realizing there was an invasion and having too poor of skills to cure Shen Qingqiu. At that, Shen Qingqiu tried to take the blame again, and they devolved into a comical three way back and forth of apologizing and blame taking.

After they exhausted themselves, Liu Qingge pointed out that this has to stay a secret restricted to just the peak lords, Yue Qingyuan asked if this will hinder Shen Qingqiu’s Peak Lord abilities. Shen Qingqiu insists he is satisfied, acknowledging inwardly that the original Shen Qingqiu would see this as the sect leader undermining his authority. After discussing the details of the Demon Invasion, Mu Qingfang and Yue Qingyuan leave and Liu Qingge stays behind.

When it’s the two of them, Liu Qingge points out how Shen Qingqiu is acting so odd that he’d seem possessed if not for the lack of ghostly qi, and how strange it is that he saved a no name disciple. To dodge the question a bit, he called Ming Fan for tea and insisted that Luo Binghe is only nameless for now. When Liu Qingge pushed back against this, Shen Qingqiu worried that Liu Qingge may become an obstacle for Luo Binghe later and get defeated. From this, he urges Liu Qingge to offer Luo Binghe support and guidance.

Having delivered tea and overheard this praise, Ming Fan stormed off to find Luo Binghe and hit him with verbal abuse and issued a series of pointless hard commands, insisting that he can sleep on the kitchen floor if the woodshed is full. Luo Binghe, still thinking the bullying was part of his training based on his interactions with Shen Qingqiu, wasn’t embittered by this interaction at all. Since he went to start the chores without complaint, Ming Fan got no satisfaction, and stormed off while cursing how he had caught Shen Qingqiu’s eye and must have bewitched him. Luo Binghe overheard these mutterings, and felt a strength in his heart starting to bud and become stronger.

Meanwhile, Shen Qingqiu spends the rest of the day greeting Peak Lords, who visit to offer gifts of condolences for him having been the sole representative of the older generation during the invasion. Even if they were on the mountain and realized there was an invasion, Sha Hualing’s demons had cut the Rainbow Bridges and erected a barrier around Qiong Ding peak so they couldn’t arrive to help. That night, Shen Qingqiu went to bed satisfied, looking forward to a peaceful night of sleep.

Instead, he wakes up four hours later to what The System describes as “a world within a dream realm,” and soon enough, Luo Binghe stumbles across him and dashes to him like a chick to a mother hen. With that, Shen Qingqiu recognizes the scenario that he’s in, and tells Luo Binghe that they are within Luo Binghe’s dream realm.

## Changes Between Versions

### The Faelicy/Lily Translation (January 2020 version)

#### Larger Changes

* In the Faelicy translation, Mu Qingfang tells Shen Qingqiu to take the four medicines daily, while the Seven Seas translation has him telling him to take them every month.
* While the various peak lords bring their disciples to visit in both translations, the Seven Seas translation specifies they came “along with gifts of condolence.”

#### Smaller Changes

* When the three peak lords are trying to take blame for what happened, the Faelicy translation describes their exchange as full of “ jumbled urging” while the Seven Seas translation describes it as “jumbled apologizing and blame-taking.”
* When Ming Fan is complaining about how Shen Qingqiu complimented Luo Binghe, in the Faelicy translation, he uses future tense and says “What “will be successful” what “become outstanding!”” while in the Seven Seas translation he uses present tense and says “‘A success’? ‘Outstanding’?”
* In the Facelicy translation, Ming Fan accidentally boosting Luo Binghe’s opinion of Shen Qingqiu is described as “the useless teammate’s divine assistance” while the Seven Seas translation describes it as “the divine wingman abilities of his useless teammate.”
* In the Faelicy translation, Shen Qingqiu is annoyed since he was “full of satisfied smiles,” while in the Seven Seas translation, the wording he uses is that he was “drunk on satisfied smiles.”

### The (CNoveluv) WorshipperA Translation (July 2017 version)

#### Larger Changes

* In the WorshipperA translation, Shen Qingqiu needs to circulate his qi strongly when taking his medication once a month. In the Seven Seas translation, he specifically needs to circulate his spiritual energy with someone who has high quantities of it.
* While Mu Qingfang apologizes for not realizing the demons are invading in both translations, In the WorshipperA translation, he also feels guilty about how he “wasn’t able to accompany martial brother Shen,” while in the Seven Seas translation, he feels guilty about how his “skill weren’t too poor to fully cure Shen-shixiong”
* After Mu Qingfang apologizes, there is dialogue from Shen Qingqiu that is not in the WorshipperA translation:

> “No, no, no, it has nothing to do with you two,” Shen Qingqiu insisted. “Ah, come to think of it, I was a bit indelicate and smashed a giant hole into the ground before Qiong Ding Hall with that hammer…”
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* When the two Peak Lords depart, the WorshipperA translation has more context for what their plan is that the Seven Seas translation lacks. That paragraph in the WorshipperA translation:

> They also talked about the problem of the demon invasion. Yue Qingyuan and Mu Qingfang were the first to step away and leave. The former had a rare angry expression and was preparing a large-scale plan for the Human Realm to suppress the demons, looking for major sects to participate. The latter continued to think about a way to solve the poison. Silently sending them off, Shen Qingqiu found them quite funny but also felt warm and happy.
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And in the Seven Seas translation, that paragraph is:

> They then discussed a variety of details of the demon invasion before Yue Qingyuan and Mu Qingfang took their leave. Shen Qingqiu watched them go, thinking it all terribly funny, yet he also felt an unutterable warmth and peace.
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* In both translations, Shen Qingqiu mentally thinks that Liu Qingge’s guess about possession is correct on a certain level, but the WorshipperA translation adds a bit more detail:

> To some extent, your guess would be very accurate……however, these words would require Shen Qingqiu to have eight hundred points of courage to say out loud, so he could only laugh wordlessly.
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* While Shen Qingqiu insists that ‘Luo Binghe is only nameless for now’ in both versions, there is additional dialogue in the WorshipperA translation:

> You watch, Luo Binghe will make you shocked.
> Liu Qingge remembered Luo Binghe’s name and said: “It’s that young boy?
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* After Liu Qingge claims that many bright disciples never amount to much, Shen Qingqiu has two different mental reactions across the translations. In the WorshipperA translate:

> That’s why I say you don’t understand! You haven’t opened your eyes! There’s no way for you to understand the high sense of superiority set by the plot!
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While in the Seven Seas translation, this paragraph is replaced by one that does in fact appear later in the WorshipperA translation:

> Shen Qingqiu suddenly sensed danger.
> What if Liu Qingge became a stumbling block on Luo Binghe’s journey to becoming overpowered and, during a confrontation between the two of them, was KO’d in a snap? For everyone’s sake, he needed to warn Liu Qingge.
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* In the WorshipperA translation, there is a paragraph comparing how verbal each Shen Qingqiu was or is, which is not in the Seven Seas translation:

> The Shen Qingqiu of the past didn’t have many words and was absolutely cold. Whenever he had to open his mouth, he was cultured and sourly envious, his wording matching as though in poetry and carefully neat. But ever since Shen Qingqiu unfroze the OOC function, all kinds of vernacular words would slip out from time to time. Even the Liu Qingge who didn’t know what OOC was couldn’t listen any further. He swept his sleeves out and left.
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#### Smaller Changes

* In the Seven Seas translation, Yue Qingyuan just mentions going down the mountain, Shen Qingqiu is the one who brings up the Immortal Alliance Conference. In the WorshipperA translation, both bring it up by name.
* In the WorshipperA translation, Shen Qingqiu claims that the sect is a dependable family and that the Original Shen Qingqiu was an idiot “to perversely slaughter his own sect members,” while the Seven Seas translation just says that “ they were a dependable family (excepting the original Shen Qingqiu).”
* While Ming Fan is complaining about Shen Qingqiu speaking fondly of Luo Binghe, In the WorshipperA translation, one line is “Even if Shizun has been blinded by this stinking brat,” which is altered in the Seven Seas translation to be “Even if that brat bewitched Shizun with some potion.”
* While the various peak lords bring their disciples to visit in both translations, the Seven Seas translation specifies they came “along with gifts of condolence.”
* In the WorshipperA translation, the System just says that Shen Qingqiu is in a dream realm, while the Seven Seas translation System says its a world within a dream realm

## Appearances

Shen Qingqiu

Yue Qingyuan

Mu Qingfang

Liu Qingge

Ming Fan

Luo Binghe

The System

M.Sha Hualing

M.OG Qingqiu

## Locations

Qing Jing Peak
Dream Realm