Core Narrative 2

## **CORRESPONDING MACRO-STORY BEAT: Enter Bizarro World**

10 years after the implementation of
the God Particle the population keeps growing and growing. Starting civil
unrest in communities and the wealth gap suddenly increasing. The rich stay
rich and the poor not only stay poor but get even poorer because of the rise of
people is ever growing. A criminal group forms in Southern California
determined to get back at all the rich people in the state and slowly starts to
commit robberies to give back to the people that are suffering daily. Soon the Government hears about this group and
their Robin Hood like exploits of taking from the rich and giving to the poor.
They dub the 12 members “The Dirty Dozen” and soon declare them enemies of the
state. The Government then uses them as an example to pass new legislation to
combat the constant growing population and to assert their power across the
country. The law states that crimes such as robbery, and simply receiving aid
from any one of the Dirty Dozen is punishable with automatic death. A trial can
be requested but not one trial has resulted in the innocence of the defendant.

One by one the Government finds each one and
murders them on live television to show the American people what can happen
when you defy the new authoritarian regime. The final members plan their
biggest heist yet to hack into Wall Street computers and hit as many wealthy
people they can and somehow divert those funds around the community. They are
eventually caught before they can make an impact and are murdered on the steps
of the Abraham Lincoln Monument where Martin Luther King gave his revered I
Have A Dream speech showing just how lost America has become.

## **ANTAGONIST:**

Randal Vector, APC (Agents of Population Control)

## **MAIN SUPPORTING CHARACTERS W/DESCRIPTIONS:**

**Christopher Rice (Drax):** Member of dirty
dozen. Lost everything in a house fire. Since the God Particle fire insurance
was soon nullified because insurance companies couldn’t cover all the current
chaos in the country. Soon he became homeless until he found his home with the
Dirty Dozen

**Justin Carrington (Carrie):** Member of Dirty
Dozen. Was a decorated military officer until the start of the Trump Regime
where he requested to leave his post and was charged with a dishonorable
discharge after previously winning the Purple Heart for courage in fighting
enemies of the state. Demolition Expert.

**Richard Dawson (Ricky D):** Founder of the
Dirty Dozen. A family man who was murdered by the government in order to prove
a point to its citizens. He only fought and committed those crimes so his
family can live a better life and can have enough money to maybe get way from
the chaos. Dedicated to his family he sent them to a secret location before he
was murdered to protect them from a vengeful Government looking for all enemies
of the state including family members.

== **PRIMARY LOCATIONS WITH**
**DESCRIPTIONS)**: ==
**HQ** – An old abandoned office building in the
desert of California transformed into a secret Headquarters of the Dirty Dozen
where planning and meetings happen in order to come up with a strategy in
committing the Robin Hood Like robberies. A secluded, remote location where the
members met and sometimes slept in order to meticulously plan their attacks
down to the second.

**Abraham Lincoln Memorial** – Monument dedicated
to Abraham Lincoln located in Washington D.C. on the National Mall. The site
where multiple group members were slain and broadcasted to millions across live
television. Big white pillars on the sides with a massive statue of Abraham
Lincoln is erected inside a Greek – Like Pantheon of him sitting in a chair.

## **ADDITIVE COMPREHENSION:**

This is where we learn about the Dirty Dozen
and the initial reasoning for the Government to implement these laws trying to
limit the population but disguising it as a punishment for criminals. Also it
is revealed the main characters backstory and why she has the passion that she
does to give back to people who don’t have anything.

## **WHY IT WORKS IN THIS MEDIUM:**

This story has to be told in a visual medium
in order to feel the impact of someone being murdered by the Government on the
steps of the memorial that launched American democracy in the right direction.
That irony alone needs to be broadcasted for everyone to see and digest in a
visual setting. A limited series is good because the narrative can be condensed
into 10 episodes and the impact of the characters can be felt throughout the
telling of this story.

## **PLATFORM:**

**Netflix or other**
Streaming Platforms

## **WHY IT WORKS IN THIS PLATFORM**:

This limited series will be meant to be
binge-watched and our target market will take to streaming really well. Being
able to be streamed will help reach as many people as possible in order to
inform them about what is going on in this hellish dystopic storyworld.