The jurassic world remake

We start the story off by cutting beetween various newspapers. The headlines read;

**Quetzlacoatlus ravage ireland**

**Vic Hoskins capture the quetzas**

L**ocal hero Vic Hoskins now head of Ingen security**

**Ingen anounces big project**

M**ezosoic world** **opens**

T**he truth about Ingens Great White Shark genocide**

K**ronosaurus** **eats trainer in mesozoic world freak accident**

I**ngen hit with several lawsuits**

**the ethics of cloning Dinosaurs**

**Ingen anounces biggest project yet**

The last one has a picture of a mesozoic world lab with an egg. We then cut from the picture to the actual lab and see the creature poking it head out of the egg. The egg is a mix betwen that of a soft egg of a fish and the hard egg of a bird or reptile not being fully see through but we can see the silhouette of a dinosaur.

Suddenly we see a dinosaur like foot slam against some dirt. before revealing its a raven who is eating worms in the Mitchells garden. The story of Zach mitchell and Gray mitchell stays the same.

Zach and Gray arive on the ferry to the island . They then go on board the monorail and enter Mezozoic Worlds gates. They walk past some Protoceratops in glass exhibetts and a Kronosaur statue. and once Zach, Gray and Zara young arrive at the hotel they look out at the view and see the full park.

We then cut to Simon and Claire seeing evreything going on in the control center. When she asks if anythings wrong with the park Lowery says two tyranotitans are in a fight. We then see the security footage of the fight. Claire then flies on the helicopter with Simon Masrani to the secret exhibett.

We then cut to the Velociraptors who are eating some meat from a bowl. Their enclosure is small but desert like. Zach comments he thought the Velos would be bigger. We then see Zach and Gray visit Rexy in the T.rex Kingdom who eats a Bull. We then see them visit the Utahraptor enclosure the fence is steel wire. The bush's shake and 5 utahraptors ( with feathers ) slam against the fence.

We then see the Zach, Gray and Zara in the Kronosaur Stadium. A crane pulls up a giant Tuna. A female Kronosaur jumps out of the water to get it but misses causing a big splash. Then a male bursts out and grabs the Tuna pulling it into the water giving an even bigger splash. Evreyone claps as the crowd moves down to the glass to see the male and female eat together along with the kronosaur infants.

Zach is now begining to have fun so he Zara and Gray go to the Pteranadon feeding. They are given some Fish and sent in the Pteranadon eclosure. The Pteranadons land down beside zach and grey and eat the fish from their hand. Gray gently pets their pycnofibers. After that the Pteranadons fly into the air majesticaly.

Masrani and Claire land outside the hybrids enclosure and go inside to the window. As they enter they see nothing but the silhoutte of the hybrid.

The indominus rex isnt in this viersion of the script but rather my favorite entry of the build a better fake therapod compettition who i will reveal later.

Claire tells Masrani the creature is called the Dunkleosaurus and is larger than Rexy. The Dunkleosaurus moves around its not clear exactly what it looks like but its clear it has big teeth feathers and claws. We then get this conversation;

Claire; " will it scare the kids? "

Masrani; " the kids!? it will give the adults nightmares "

Claire; " is that good "

Masrani; " its brilliant "

Simon asks claire to bring owen grady in to see if the padok is safe to open.

Meanwhile we see 4 Rabbits being released from a hatch their carefully being watched by the pentinodon squad. The pentinodon squad is made up of;

Blue

Echo

Delta

Charlie

Red

Bravo

Tango

Omega

the rabbit comes a little closer to investigate. But then Tango grabs the Rabbit in the neck from behind and kills him. Tango and Omega then eat their kill.

The other Rabbits run through the maze and see's a room without any pentinodon. It hides inside. Suddenly Bravo and Charlie reveal they were hiding in leaves and start to tear the Rabbit apart.

As the two remaning rabbits run. One spots a carrot being moved around from behind a wall. It aproaches the carrot chewing on it , and its revealed Delta is sneaking behind her with Echo using the carrot as bait.

We hear the rabbits last scream and we cut to the only Rabbit remaining. Suddenly Blue steps on the rabbits neck with her foot and Red uses his saw to cut off the Rabbits head.

We then see Vic Hoskins congratulating his men because the animals now have clear Millitaristic potential. Owen grady the pentidontrainer says its not fair on them that they are forced to be millitarized. Saying that the second most intelligent organism on the planet shouldn't be treated like a gun. Vic tells Owen that Humans are **the** most intelligent creature and that evreything else doesnt have a concious.

As Owen leaves to check out the dunkleosaurus's enclosure Blue gives him Puppy Dog Eyes.

Owen and Claire encounters stay the same. Its not great chemistry but you will see why im doing this by Fallen Kingdom. They do mention how they did go on one date before this but it didnt work.

Owen arives at the Dunkleosaurus padock however all the security cameras show no Animal. Drones are sent in to check but no results. Grady points out the claw marks and suggests it climbed out. Owen and two other employees decicde to go in incase the drones missed anything.

Claire tries to drive to the main station to get signal. She then asks Lowery and Vivian where the Dunkleosaurus is and they tell her its still in the enclosure and even stranger in the lake.

Meanwhile in the enclosure the humans look around seeing all the bones of large animals fed to the Dunkleosaurus. Suddenly it bursts out of the water chasing after its prey.

the dunkleosaurus was designed by Ryuukibart who originaly called it Monstrumbis colossus. So good on him.

its a hybrid beetween Dunkleoustus's head jaws armour tail and colouration. With the legs and tail of Tyranosaurus. The Feathers of Yutyrannus. The vochal chords of a Tiger. The brain of a Utahraptor and the claws of Deinocheirus.

The Dunkleosaurus stabs the employee with its massive claws. Simon masrani says to open the gate a little so owen can exit. The other employees are devoured by the Dunkleosaurus and owen gets out the door. The gates close as the Dunkleosaurus charges trapping the beast inside.

Untill its revealed that the Dunkleosaurus's claws are sticking out of the gate. Using brute strength the Dunkleosaurus rips the gate off throwing it to the ground. It steps outside and lets out a territorial roar.

Its about to eat Owen when the beep of an Ingen truck is heard. The Dunkleosaurus turns around and chases after it.

Meanwhile Zach and Gray go one the Gryosphere whilst Zara goes to the bathroom. They encounter some Lambeosaurus grazing with some Paras. They pass a herd of Brontosaurus's eating from trees as Dryosaurs eat the leaves that fall. The gyrospheres are called back but Zach and Gray decide to keep going.

This is where the scene where Gray tells Zach about him knowing about the divorce comes in. Zach is a little more suporting but other than that its exactly the same.

They head in the restricted section and spot a destroyed Ingen truck. They then see a herd of Ankys and get this conversation.

zach; " You're welcome. Up close and personal with four Dinosauruses. "

gray; " Ankylosaurus. We shouldn't be here. And there's five dinosaurs. "

zach; ( slightly baffled ) " Aren't you supposed to bea genius or something? Look. One, two, three, four."

gray; " ( pointing to Dunkleosaurus reflection ) five "

They turn around and see the monster. It bites down on the Gyrosphere and it begins to crack. Zach and Gray turn on emergency exit and roll out. The Dunkleosaur is about to attack when an Anky bellows at it.

The armoured lizard slams its club at the Dunkleosaurus. This causes a small amount of damage in the Dunkleosaurus's armour. It roars and then uses its jaws to rip into the Ankys neck Killing it. Another Anky slams against the Dunkleosaurus who then flips the Ankylosaurus on its belly and uses its claws to slash its organs out.

Zach and Gray dash away into a field. The Dunkleosaurus bursts out as well its mouth and claws dripping with blood. The thrill of murder overtaking any empathy it may have had. It lunges at the boys but then gets shot in the weak point in the armour.

It turns around and see's Zara has taken an an A.C.U shotgun. She tells the boys to run and starts firing more at the Dunkelosaurus. The bullets harmlessly bounce off its hard armour and the monster kills Zara by picking her up with his massive claws and drowning her in a nearby river.

Zach and Gray make it into the abandoaned Visitor Center as the Dunkleosaurus is distracted.

They still hear the unattural roar of the monster as they enter.

meanwhile Claire contacts Owen and tells him that because Zach and Gray are lost somwhere on the island she will look for them and wants him to help.

Owen agrees and they go.

Zach and Gray look for a way to get out of the island. They manage to reboot an old car and drive off.

Meanwhile Owen and Claire make their way through the forest and see the remains of the Ankys. Claire is disgusted and as they make their way through the forest they see a even more grizzily site.

A herd of Brontosaurus were peacefully grazing when all of a sudden the Dunkleosaurus bursts in.

It bites the throat of one of the Brontos killing it. Another Bronto runs at the Dunkleosaurus so the monster slashes the herbivore in the throat. The creaure suffocates and dies. Another Brontosaurus tackles the dunkleosaurus. The giant Therapod throws the bronto at a dead tree impalling it.

then the last Bronto, the leader hits Dunkleosaurus in the face with its tail before trying to double stomp it. The Dunkleosaurus grabs the Sauropod and throws it to ground using its giant claws to slash at its skin.

The last Bronto lays on thr ground bleeding the Dunkleosaurus goes up to its face and lets out a weak roar almost like its mocking the creature. Before stomping off.

Owen; " it didnt eat a single one. Its killing for sport for the thrill. Its killing for fun. Its not just dangerous its evil "

as he says that a baby Brontosaurus goes up to the dying leader. The leader is her mother. The baby tries to get her mother to get up. She tries to rise but falls. She then nuzzles her child one last time before passing.

Claire is on the brink of tears her entire life of seeing Dinosaurs as only lines on a spread sheet is destroyed.

They look on at the Brontosaurus graveyard as the orphan nudges his mothers corpse crying.

We see the brothers driving the car through the field. They observe a triceratops herd. They then see a little Triceratops trying to knock down a small tree but failing. The baby Trikes older brother comes and knocks the tree down allowing him to eat the leaves. Zach then looks at Gray and smiles.

Then we cut to A.C.U gearing up preparing to take down the Dunkleosaurus. Simon tells them on the radio that they can use heavy weaponary if necessary.

Meanwhile Claire and Owen spot Zara's body in the river. Then Owen points out the Footprints leading to the Visistor Center.

They look around and Owen goes to the kitchen. He opens the oven and see's the skelaton of a Velociraptor. Claire see's the destroyed skelaton of the T-rex and Alamosaurus covered in vegetation. Suddenly the Dunkleosaurus bursts in and claire hides behind a pillar. Owen yells to Claire from the kitchen he cant find the boys. Which gets the Dunkleosaurus's attention.

The Dunkleosaurus bursts into the kitchen and prepares to attack owen. When a bomb drops in beetween both of them separating them in an explosion. The Dunkleoaurus sensing that theirs a better fight elsewhere leaves the Visitor Center.

The A.C.U men gather around the area they plan to attack the Dunkleosaurus. It charges at them so they fire their guns. The bullets bounce off the Dunkleoaurus's armour shooting the A.C.U troops. 5 memebrs of the group remain. The Dunkleosaurus throws a tree at three. One runs towards him with a grenade but the therapod slaps him away causing him to explode somewhere else. The last one fires at its weak spot causing the Dunkleosaurus in anger to hurl a boulder at the last A.C.U man crushing him and then roaring in victory.

We then cut to the Aviary as we see a Hatzegopteryx kill a Horse. It then eats the Horse leaving a corpse that the Quetzas then eat. Then evreyone is told to evacuate. We then cut to a shot in the air and see the Dunkleosaurus is heading towards it. Simon Masrani pilots the helicopter and the gunman starts firing the machine gun at the Dunkleosaurus. Its more annoyed than in pain and charges towards the aviary. The Pterosaurs look at the Dunkleosaurus who roars. It kills a Hatzegopteryx but the rest fly out. The helicopter is attacked by the pterosaurs causing it to crash in. Another hole in the aviary is created causing them to fly out faster.

Zach and Gray drive back into Main Street. Evreyone spots the Pterosaurs flying towards them.

The Pterosaurs fly over the Humans and to the Kronosaurus stadium. They drink it before the two adult Kronosaurs jump out trying to eat them. Luckily the Pterosaurs fly away in time.

Now that they have had water they now need food. The Hatzegopteryx target adults and the Quetzastarget the kids. One Hatzegopteryx picks up a worker throwing her into the Velociraptor enclosure. Now the Velociraptors are also out attacking the guests. A random man is picked up by a Quetza who is attacked by a Hatzo. The human falls into the water untill the Hatzegopteryx picks him up again and flies up. However as the giant Pterosaur soars up the Kronosaur male jumps out of the water eating the Hatzegopteryx and the man.

Zach and Gray are chased after by a Quetzlacoatlus they run into the Pterosaur theater and try to shut the door. The Pterosaur pushes at the door and eventualy gets in. The film then plays. As Zach and Gray crawl through the theater the as the Quetza searches for them. As thats happening the films talking about the evolution of Pterosaurs and how Pterosaurs are Dinosaurmorphs other descendents. The Quetza pays no attention and nearly catches Zach and gray when the theater then plays old footage from the Mezozoic World Aviary. The Quetza looks at the screen confused. It then sees on the cinema screen a Horse being killed and partialy eaten by a hatzo and Quetzas then scavenging. As soon as it see's the Quetzas scavenging on screen it lunges at the Cinema screen and starts to tear it apart. Zach and Gray sneak out locking the Quetza in.

Owen and claire arive at main street but as owen tranks Quetzas two Hatzegopteryx land behind them. One pecks at Owen and he dodges and darts it.

The Pterosaur feels sleepy and then lays down on the jeep. The other one slams owen against the Cretacous Cafe knocking him out. The massive flying predator then prepares to eat Claire. Claire then picks up the trank gun and takes aim. The Quetza opens its massive beak and slams it down. Claire fires and the Hatzo. It then collapses down in front of her and falls asleep.

Owen gets up and they kiss because as I said whilst the romantic sub-plot in JWs weak it will help my Fallen Kingdom rewrite.

Claire then meets up again with Zach and Grey. Owen says he has a plan to stop the Pterosaurs. He goes to the Tyrannosaurus kingdom and brings a sound recorder. He then bangs on the glass until Rexy snarls at him. He then plays the sound on the main street speakers. The Pterosaurs thinking theirs a T.rex flies away.

However as the Pterosaurs fly away main control realises something they were so distracted with the Pterosaurs that they didnt watch the Dunkleosaurus. And now its destroyed all the A.C.U bases ravaged Camp Cretacous and is heading to the Utahraptor enclosure.

Vic Hoskins convinces Owen that the only way to stop the Dunkleosaurus is to use the pentidon.

Owen reluctantly agrees. He then teaches the Troodon how Mines work by throwing a rock on one causing an explosoin. The Troodon grabs the Mines before they run off.

As the pentidon run to battle zach and Gray bond. Zach tells Gray no matter what they will always be brothers.

Vic see's that the pentidon are setting up Mines around the Dunkleosaurus Essentialy trapping it with bombs.

The Dunkleosaurus bursts into the Utahraptor enclosure the Alpha Utahraptor leaps at the Dunkleosaurus. The massive carnivore snaps the alpha in half with its jaws. It then roars at the other Utahs. Then owen says " their communicating ".

Suddenly the Dunkleosaurus and Utahraptor turn around together. And they all growl at their opponents in sync.

the utahs are all named after greek hero's;

Hercules

Orpheus

Achiles

Thesus

the pentidons run away in fear. As the A.C.U man with the controls to the pentidon's shock collars turns around to yell at them and then tries to press the button. But as he turns his back Hercules pounces on and eats him. Owen grabs the control but gets chased by Orpheus.

We then see Achiles kill Charlie and chase after Bravo but his heel steps on a mine causing him to explode.

Owen runs through the forest which due to the mine is now on fire he is then pinned down by Orpheus. However then Bravo who was running away see's owen in danger he growls at orpheus for a while. Orpheus growls back and this gives owen enough time to push orpheus into some quicksand and run off.

Meanwhile with Claire, Zach and Gray. The pentidons run outside Grey says " wait are they supose to do that? ". Then Hercules slams his snout into claires right window snapping. Claire drives and barely dodges Hercules's bites. Meanwhile Orpheus ( who got out of the quicksand ) and Thesus are chasing after zach and grey. Thesus jumps onto the van. Then Zach and Grey uses a Taser to zap Thesus and causes him to fall out of the van. Orpheus then leaps on and throws away the Taser however the fast movements of the van causes him to fall out. Meanwhile Hercules is still attacking Claire until a branch hits him causing him to fall off.

Hercules Orpheus and Thesus slowly get up and hear the call of the Dunkleosaurus.

Meanwhile Claire nearly runs over some Velociraptors and arives at the visitor center. They get in the door and calm down. However then something bangs against the door. Claire takes out a gun and aims it. Then out comes Owen. The humans lock the door and make their way to dr Wu's lab. Vic hoskins is in dr wu's lab designing the ultimasaurus

Zach; " thats ugly "

vic; " thats the face of the future kid. Nature is the greatest weapon of all and with mans dominion we can control it "

Suddenly Thesus sneaks up behind Vic and eats him. As the rest of the humans run to the exit Hercules runs at them. Owen shoots a chandeleir trapping Hercules. They then run outside but are confronted by orpheus. They try and turn back but as they do they see hercules and thesus. The Dunkleosaurus also steps in watching it play out. Their surrounded

As the utahs prepare to attack when owen spots the pentidons rumaging around a trash can. He then deactivates the shock collar and then the pentions look at him.

Orpheus charges at Owen but then a lamp post falls on him and a saw cuts off his head. Red calls triumphantly.

Blue and Red leading whats left of the pack let out agressive calls at the Utahs.

Thesus slams his talon down killing Omega. Then Hercules bites delta in the throat killing him. Echo and Tango start to attack Thesus. Whilst Blue and Red fend of Hercules.

Meanwhile the Dunkleosaurus chases after the humans. Who try to escape by running into a fast food resturaunt. The Dunkleosaurus's head bursts in and tries to snap at them. However even after it takes out its claws it cant reach them. Grey says they need more teeth. Claire then runs through the battlefield avoiding the Utahs Troodon and Dunkleosaurus. She then calls Lowery and asks him to open Padock 9 and then the control room needs to leave. Lowery hesitates but then slowly Padock 9 opens.

Blue notices something moving inside the theater. She runs to it and Thesus runs after her. She opens it and the Quetzlacoatlus flies out impalling thesus with its beak and flying off.

We then cut to padock 9 slowly opening loud footsteps are herd coming closer.

The pentidon roar at Hercules who in fear now runs away.

As Hercules runs away the jaws of something big picks him up and kills him. The Dunkleosaurus turns around and see's Rexy swallowing Hercules.

The Tyrannosaurus bites the Dunkleosautrus in the neck ripping through a large chunks of its armour. The Dunkleosaurus bites Rexy and throws her to the ground. The T.rex is nearly dead and just when she looks finished the 4 remaining pectinodon jump on the Dunkleosaurus's back.

The armoured therapod throws Tango at a pillar causing him to break his spine and die. The Dunkleosaurus then throws Echo to the floor and crush's him with its foot. Blue and Red contiue to rip flesh in the weak points in the armour however their barely hanging on. The Dunkleosuarus is then hit by Rexys who push's her weight causing them to move through mesozoic world.

Eventualy their knocked into the Kronosaurus Stadium. The Dunkleosaurus falls down near the water causing ripples. Rexy tries to bite him but gets slashed in the face by the Dunkleosaurus claws.

The Dunkleosaurus's tail causes ripples in the water then all of a sudden the male Kronosaurus bursts out and bites the Dunkleosaurus in the neck. The dunkleosaurus claws the kronosaurus in the eye. Then the female Kronosaur then jumps out and bites the right side of its neck and the male than bites the left side of the neck. The two marine lizards drag the hybrid into the water.

Then the Kronosaurus stadium moves seats moves down. Owen zach grey Claire Red Blue and Rexy also are moved down. And see the Dunkleosaurus drowning whilst being ripped to peices. By the Kronosaur family.

Rexy walks out the main exit. Blue and red say goodbye to Owen. The humans then go to the boat back to mainland.

The final shot of the film shows Rexy looking over her kingdom. She then lets out low frequency calls and opens her mouth.

**the end.**