Egon's Script Draft

June 19th, 2018 - A script that I made for the film before finding out what Final Draft is. It has a lot of broken parts.

## This is Red Kate's fight scene. You are currently making it. Right now the script isn't correct. Please make it accurate to the art.

Where we left off: The Ghostbusters were sent by a news reporter to blast Red Kate, who's been looking for her dead husband since 1844 but she died near a high-powered explosive. She believes it was her husband's fault so she's still looking for him.

(Somewhere Winston says: Winston: I had to ask...)

BEGIN.

Ray is having that dream thingy whatever.

Red Kate has the opportunity to attack and she uses it.

Peter (While running): What's up with Ray? [simile]

Egon: I think she's controlling Ray's brain.

Peter: Egon, I hate to be the one to tell you this but, I think you've gone right over the edge. [I think that she broke Ray!]

Egon: I-pfft-a-bbbbb-but-huh, HOW DOES THAT WORK?

The gang stop running as they are surrounded with fire. Red Kate comes down.

Red Kate: I have found you, my husband dear!

Winston: I'm afraid none of us are your suitors. I am also afraid that your suitor is dead.

Red Kate: THAT'S WHAT THEY ALL SAY!

She shoots and Ray freaks out crazily before coming back to reality and gasping.

(If Ray comes back: Ray: Oh wait, now I remember! That's Red Kate! She's still looking for her husband to this very day!)

Egon: Yes, if you can call an angry spirit trying to kill an already dead man "looking for him" Important to put somewhere)

Winston: [She's tring to kill us without trial!] I say we bust him loose and get out!

Peter: Subtle, elequant, decisive! I like it! sigh... Which means nothing good will come of it but what the heck, let's do it!

Egon: Now remember, Red Kate [Try to unrelate Red Kate's flames, which have no power besides of exploding, with trash cans]

Red Kate uses telekenisis.

Egon: But trash CANS sure CAN! RUN!

Peter: NO! BLAST EM!

They're messy and there's trash and more Doki Doki Slime.

Peter: Okay, I saw a Clint Eastwood movie once, sue me!

Red Kate flies away as they get into a weird situation where Ray is brainwashed and the antagonist is "warning" them of their vengeance.

Winston: Well guys, this couldn't possibly get any worse!

The Ecto-1 part happens, still The Friends Arrive though. Winston is tired and wants to go home. Ray can't remember a thing but his ankles hurt. Egon wants to go back. Peter is awfully quiet.

End of The Friends Arrive. The next scene, in summary, shows Janine inviting his boyfriend Roger to the house.

You are currently not working on the beginning, instead you are working on the "slice of life" scenes. I would call it "slice of reality" because common sense only exists within the prime residents (No, RGB Egon isn't included because he's from another reality)

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Morning Scene ==
Ray: Well, well! So good of you to join us for breakfast, Dr. Venkman!

Winston, Egon, RGB Egon and Ray are sitting at the table where they usually eat. (If Roger is in the firehouse, RGB Egon would be sitting with them, but not Roger. If Roger isn't, then RGB Egon wouldn't be at the table.)

Peter comes out looking all tired and stuff.

Peter: Nyeagh, coffee.

Winston: What'd he say?

(There is a chance Prime or RGB Egon says this) Egon: Sounded like "coffee", possibly "cookie".

Peter: Tffff

Ray: Translation Egon?

Egon: Sounded like, "get out of my face or eat flaming terror"

Peter talks about his dream that is either about Enigma )why he states a mysterious figure) or Shiori. If it's Shiori, then she is not in the containment unit yet.

## Morning Battle Scene

Flying demon goes and knocks Peter's coffee that he just made.

[something]

Egon: Are you thinking what I'm thinking?

RGB Egon: No, I think you're thinking what I'm thinking.

Peter: Can someone please tell me what the Egons are thinking?

Both Egons: [redacted]

They act creepy and Winston is freaked.

They do the idea.

## Context

The original 2018 plot of the film was going to be the IDW Ghostbusters having to face an evil force: Monika, Sayori, Yuri, and Natsuki! Yeah, that's right.

It ended up being changed to Enigma, aka Phoebe, who ended up being named Owari.

While this is happening, Janine has to find out an interdimensional "scramble" that's happening with Slimer and Dana Barrett. The IDW Ghostbusters find RGB Egon and do stuff. Then there's a ghost.

Yeah, it was pretty bad and hard to explain.