Mistakes/Cliff of Shadows

This page contains all the mistakes found in Cliff of Shadows.

* There is an inconsistency throughout the book where Medicine Wolf is used instead of Healer.
* Pebble is not listed as a pup of Grey and Sage.
* Sage is not listed as a pup of Twinkle, despite being the sister of Blaze, who is also listed without her parent.
* Winter and Silver are not listed as River and Ivory's adopted pups.
* Redwood tells Twilight "You want to catch it right?". There should be a comma between 'it' and 'right'.
* Blaze claims that Ice will tear Luna to shreds if she enters DawnPack, when the exact opposite happens next chapter.
* *"The bushes concealed a strange shadow, a strange animals... a strange wolf."* Animals should be animal.
* Cypress is described as black-and-white when she is supposed to be gray.
* In the line "Am I a *Beta*? Are *you* an Alpha, Sage?", Beta should not have been italicized, but rather I. "Am *I* a Beta? Are *you* an Alpha, Sage?"
* The line "She darted into the forest, Luna trailing close." should drop the comma and add a word to improve flow. "She darted into the forest with Luna trailing close."
* Blaze says that Pebble is training with Cypress, who is Willow's mentor. Pebble should be training with Grey in this sentence.
* Sun-trots is used to describe a day, despite the phrase never coming up again.
* Luna almost calls Cinder and Cobalt Lone Wolves when it doesn't make sense for her to do so.
* Ice's dialogue is not on the next line, making it look like Luna said "It sounds like Indigo..."
* Blaze's line, "But what if she doesn't?" is written "But what if she doesn't".
* The line "Various yeses and yeahs were sounded in the audience" should be written "Various 'yeses' and 'yeahs' sounded in the audience".
* The line "The wolf, Midnight looked between the wolves" should be written "The wolf, Midnight, looked between the wolves".
* Hawk is mistakenly described as dust-colored.
* Nova and Canyon are said to have become Apprentices despite being listed as Apprentices in the Allegiances.
* Storm is said to have become a True Wolf despite being the same age as Nova and Canyon.
* Ice explains the good qualities of Blaze, even though she wasn't set to go upstream.
* Grey explains to Sage that he gave up his spot. However, last night he said he already talked with Sage, so she shouldn't be acting like she didn't know.
* Willow asks where the upstream group is going, even though they're returning to an area they've already visited.
* Nova is said to have stayed in DawnPack when, two chapters ago, he is shown leaving for MistPack after he and Willow find the gathering place.

## References & Citations

1. ↑ 1.0 1.1 1.2 1.3 1.4 Cliff of Shadows, Allegiances.
2. ↑ 2.0 2.1 2.2 Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 5.
3. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 6.
4. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 7.
5. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 8.
6. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Prologue.
7. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 1.
8. ↑ 8.0 8.1 8.2 8.3 Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 2.
9. ↑ 9.0 9.1 Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 3.
10. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 4.
11. ↑ 11.0 11.1 11.2 11.3 11.4 Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 9.
12. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 10.
13. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 11.
14. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 14.
15. ↑ Cliff of Shadows, Chapter 18.