Screamake

**Screamake** is a remake written by Donald Newton. It is a remake to the original Honor stories

## Plot and Setting

After Lorraine Carter and her husband is murdered, her family meets her daughter, Rey, who discloses to them a side of Lorraine that they never knew about. She also rescues her long lost brother, George, from his abusive father. As it seems that the family is fully happy and complete now, Lorraine's killer, Ghostface, comes back to target the entire family.

## Characters

REY CARTER (18): Rey is a mysterious girl who Lorraine had after leaving her family for the rest of her life. As her family only had bad memories of Lorraine, Rey is able to give them closure on another side of Lorraine they never knew about. She must protect her younger brother George. She becomes the final girl as Ghostface begins to call her.GEORGE CARTER (6): George is Lorraine's youngest child. Taken from her at birth, George is abused by his father and step mother until Rey rescues him. However, when the killings begin, George becomes a main focus on Ghostface.BILLY CURTIS (23): Billy is Nick's son and a love interest to Rey. When Ghostface threatens the entire Carter family and the friends close to them, he vows to protect Rey and George, despite being a major target himself due to his closeness to Rey.CLARENCE CARTER (68): Clarence is the former Sheriff of Clearwood. He is Rey and George's maternal grandfather. He use to be very strict and hard, which strained his close relationship with Lorraine. Guilt ridden by this, he has changed and has tried to be close to his children, their friends, and now his grandchildren. He will do anything to protect his family when the killings begin.KATHY CARTER (65): Kathy is Clarence's wife, mother of Andrew and Lorraine, and grandmother of Rey, George, and Beverly. She is a very caring and loving mother and grandmother. Guilt ridden by the way she treated Lorraine upon learning her sexual history, she has changed to be more accepting and caring of her family's past behaviors.SCOTT LANE (38): Scott is Andrew's best friend and an ex-boyfriend of Lorraine's. He becomes close and protective of Rey and George when Ghostface begins his killing spree despite being a major target himself. He has a secret that may make him closer to Lorraine's children than anyone else.ANDREW CARTER (38): Andrew is Rey and George's uncle, Clarence and Kathy's son, and Lorraine's younger brother. He and Lorraine didn't get along growing up. But guilt ridden by how he treated her, Andrew has tried to make this up by being close to his sister's children and to protect them from the same fate as his older sister. He is the father of Beverly.DAPHNE CARTER (38): Daphne is Andrew's hot wife. They've been together since high school. She has been close to the Carter family and the friends due to being their neighbor when they were just kids. She is the mother of Beverly. She becomes a caring and loving aunt to Rey and George.CHARLIE RODRIGUEZ (38): Charlie is a close friend of the Carters, Lorraine's ex-husband from high school, and the current Sheriff of Clearwood. Unlike the original story where they got married so he can stay in the country, this American Charlie married Lorraine to spite the then-racist Clarence out of rebellion. Charlie and Clarence have since grown into a father-son-like relationship. When Ghostface targets the Carter family, he'll do whatever he can to protect them as Sheriff. His son is Anton Rodriguez.NICK CURTIS (38): Nick is the irresponsible, immature, unintelligent ladies man of the group. Despite this, Nick is a caring and loving father, friend, "son" to Clarence and Kathy, and "Uncle" to Rey and George. He and his son Billy are close despite their differences.BEVERLY CARTER (14): Beverly is a secondary final girl. She is the cousin of Rey and George. She is the daughter of Andrew and Daphne. She becomes close to her new cousins and becomes protective of George.ANTON RODRIGUEZ (19): Anton is Charlie's son and close friends with Billy. He becomes friends with Rey and George. He is dating Heather Thompson (Yes, Nightmare reference). Anton refers to Clarence and Kathy as his grandparents despite not being an actual Carter but due to his father's close relationship to them.HEATHER THOMPSON (19): Heather is Anton's beautiful girlfriend. She is sweet and caring. She becomes friends with Rey as she's introduced to their group of friends. Not much can be said about her as she's usually only seen with Anton and their friends.Emma Roberts as Ginger Baker.jpgVICTORIA "VIC" KENNEDY (21): Vic is Billy's bitchy ex-girlfriend. When she first meets Rey, there is a fight between them. She use to treat Billy poorly and would cheat on him. Despite this, she's still somewhat of a friend of their group of friends.Dylan Massett.jpgTHOMAS (20): Thomas is a friend of Billy, Anton, Heather, and Vic. He is dating Sabrina. He has a small role in this story as he's only seen a few times in Anton's group of friends with his girlfriend.Caitlin Ashley-Thompson.jpgSABRINA (20): Sabrina is a friend of Billy, Anton, Heather, and Vic. She is dating Thomas. She has a small role in this story as she's only seen a few times in Anton's group of friends with her boyfriend.JOHN RILEY (40s): John is Lorraine's abusive ex-boyfriend and the father of George. After she left him and he learned that she was supposedly pregnant with his child, John took George away from her. He often abuses and neglects him along with his new wife Janet.JANET RILEY (40s): Janet is John's wife and George's step mother. Like John, Janet often abuses and neglects George. But like John, her actions will haunt her by two different people with similar goals but by different means.MELISSA HOWARD (23): Melissa is George's beautiful young teacher. George has a major crush on her. She becomes close to him when he is bullied by older boys. She vows to protect him from anyone including the "scary man" when she hears about the killings.MANDY MCGUIRE (40): Mandy is a very sexy married woman, whom use to publically humanilate and slut-shame Lorraine, despite being a slut herself. She only came to her funeral to appear like a good person when she really came to mock her.ROBERT MILLERTON (70s): Millerton was Lorraine's teacher who took advantage of her when she was only fourteen. It is because of this, Lorraine became known as a slut in Clearwood. Rey eventually confronts him. But somebody else will confront him over his actions.BOB PRICE (60): Bob is the father of Daphne, grandfather of Beverly, and neighbor and best friend of Clarence and Kathy. He has an extremely small role. But as his role has always been an important in the lives of the Carter family and those close to him, he gets an honorary character bio.LORRAINE CARTER-WEST (40): Lorraine is Rey and George's mother, Clarence and Kathy's daughter, and Andrew's older sister. She was known as a slut for most of her life. But she changed after giving birth to Rey. While pregnant with George, she left John and got with Bob, who she eventually married. Aside from Charlie, Bob was the only man who cared for her. She and her husband are the opening victims.BOB WEST (40s): Bob is Lorraine's husband and step father of Rey and George. He is very loving to his wife and stepdaughter. He comforted his wife after the kidnapping of George by his alleged father John Riley. Bob and Lorraine are the opening victims.GHOSTFACE (??): Ghostface is the killer of the story. He murders Lorraine in what he refers as a "Mercy" kill in order to put her out of her misery from her past. He would then go on to kill those responsible for her miserable life, most specifically her family and friends. He confirms to be something involved with her past.
## Chapter 1

LOCATION: BOSTON, MASSACHUSETTS

An airplane lands on the runway of an airport. Coming into the Boston airport from the plane is LORRAINE CARTER-WEST (40) and her husband BOB WEST (40). They’re holding hands. Bob is excited to be back at his childhood home. Lorraine is excited to see Boston for the first time. Bob asks Lorraine if she’s ready to start their two week vacation. Lorraine confirms that she is. They walk on. We find a DARK HOODED FIGURE also coming into the airport from the plane. The Figure watches Lorraine and Bob. Outside the airport, the couple waves down a taxi. Meanwhile, the Figure steals a car while the car owner isn’t looking and follows them.

We DISSOLVE TO -- THAT NIGHT -- The taxi parks into driveway of a house in the middle of nowhere. The Figure’s car hides in the darkness of trees near the entrance of the house’s large property. Lorraine and Bob get out of the taxi. Bob pays the driver. The taxi leaves. When the taxi passes by the Figure’s car, we discover through the headlights that the figure is -- GHOSTFACE. Bob and Lorraine walk into Bob’s family’s house. Nobody is home but them. Bob tells her that his parents are visiting some family in Ohio for a few weeks. He picks Lorraine up and carries her up to his parents’ bedroom. We DISSOLVE TO --

Lorraine and Bob have finished having sex. Bob says that he’s going to get some food. Lorraine asks him to get her a Coke, which he says that he’ll do. Bob goes downstairs and into the kitchen. He opens the refrigerator and takes out some jelly. He moves over to the pantry and pulls out some bread and peanut butter. As he sits at the table and proceeds to make himself a sandwich, Bob hears something from outside the backyard. He looks up and sees a dark shadowy figure walking around. Curious, Bob rises from his seat and walks outside the backyard.

Bob looks around and says, “Hello?” Trying to see if anyone is around. But he cannot see or hear anything. He walks across the yard and continues looking. He scans the backyard. There is nothing nor nobody here. He sighs and gives up. It must have been his imagination. Bob turns around only to find himself face to face with Ghostface. Before Bob can react, Ghostface swings his knife across his throat. Bob grabs his throat and drops to his knees. He looks up at his killer in terror before falling to the grass. Bob West, husband of Lorraine, is dead.

Lorraine comes downstairs and begins to search for Bob. She calls out for her husband. But she gets no response. Lorraine’s phone rings. She answers it and it’s Ghostface, who says, “Hello, Lorraine.” Confused by this, Lorraine asks who he is. Ghostface claims that he is something from her previous life before she was married. Lorraine realizes which past he’s referring to. Lorraine asks if this either Andrew, Scott, Charlie, or Nick. Ghostface chuckles and says that he’s not telling her who he is, saying that would ruin all of his fun if she knew who he was.

Lorraine says that he better start talking or she’s going to call the police. Ghostface tells her to go ahead because they’re out in the middle of nowhere, therefore, he’ll have enough time to gut her and rip her body into pieces and will still have enough time to escape before the police show up. Lorraine asks if this is a joke. Ghostface confirms that it’s not a joke. Lorraine states that her husband is here and he’ll kick his ass. Ghostface says she’s all alone. Lorraine asks what makes him think that her husband is not with her right now.

Ghostface says that Lorraine must be hungry after having vacation sex in his parents’ bedroom. He says that perhaps she should look in the pantry for something to eat. Lorraine begins to tremble. She realizes that this is no prank. She slowly goes to the pantry. Her hands are shaking as she reaches for the door. She grabs it and opens it. Lorraine screams when she finds husband’s dead body. We can hear Ghostface chuckling through the phone. Lorraine listens to him as he says, “It’s time to put you out of your misery.”

Lorraine asks what he means by her “Misery.” Ghostface reminds her of all the times people accused her of being a slut, how she was raped twice by people who she was supposed to trust, the amount of children she gave birth to, and how her parents disowned her rather than supporting or helping her through her problems. Lorraine says that she’s over all of that now. But Ghostface says that she may have been but that others haven’t. So in order to avenge her, she must be put down to never feel the pain again. Ghostface says that she should start running.

Lorraine drops the phone and heads for the front door. She opens it but Ghostface is running towards the door. She screams and slams the door shut. She locks the door. Lorraine runs across the house to the back door as the killer is trying to open the door. She’s able to get to the sliding glass door, which is locked. She hears the door being unlocked. As the killer succeeds and begins opening the door, Lorraine unlocks the backdoor. Both Lorraine and Ghostface open the house doors simultaneously. He rushes in to see her run out. He continues the chase.

Lorraine speeds through the backyard. Ghostface runs out and realizes that she’s too far to catch by running. Ghostface pulls out his knife and throws it at her. The knife is thrown into Lorraine’s back. She falls to ground, screaming. She attempts to crawl away as Ghostface approaches her. Ghostface steps on her lower back, preventing her from moving. This makes her scream and crying. He pulls out his knife, making her scream out loud. Ghostface turns Lorraine on her back, making it so that they’re facing each other.

Ghostface removes his mask. Lorraine takes a good glance at Ghostface, not recognizing him at first. She gasps in horror -- realizing who Ghostface is. Someone from her past. Someone that not many know or remember. Ghostface puts his mask back on and hovers over her. He tells Lorraine that he loves her and is doing this to end her suffering. Ghostface claims that her death will be a mercy kill. But that he will avenge her tragic life in the end. So with that, Ghostface raises his knife. Lorraine closes her eyes, accepting her fate. Ghostface slams the knife into Lorraine. Lorraine Carter-West, wife of Bob and a major beloved Honor character, is dead.

## Chapter 2

A WEEK LATER

The funeral for Lorraine and Bob is about to commence. All of our main characters have arrived; Lorraine’s parents CLARENCE (68) and KATHY CARTER (65), their son and Lorraine’s brother ANDREW, his wife DAPHNE (both 38), and their beautiful redhead daughter BEVERLY CARTER (14), Daphne’s father BOB PRICE (60), along with their friends NICK CURTIS (38), his son BILLY CURTIS (23), Clearwood Sheriff CHARLIE RODRIGUEZ (38), his son ANTON RODRIGUEZ (19), and SCOTT LANE (38). The Carters are the first to go to the front row of seats as they are the parents of the deceased. We DISSOLVE TO --

MANDY MCGUIRE (40), an old classmate of Lorraine's, is speaking at the front and giving a speech about Lorraine. Mandy talks about how she thought Lorraine could act like a stupid bitch and was a slut. But that she liked her very much -- especially her hair. Mandy is trying to act like the kind of friend who can get away with jokingly calling her best friend a slut without looking bad as it looks like she's saying it with affection. But many those attending knows that she's really mocking the late Lorraine. Kathy is unimpressed by this. But Mandy doesn't care. She continues her game until she finishes the speech.

Sometime later, Lorraine’s casket is being lowered into ground. Clarence and Kathy are sitting in the middle seats at the front. Kathy is sobbing and being held by her equally devastated husband. Despite the things that they’ve said and thought about her and the things that Lorraine has done to make them ashamed of her and the things that have embarrassed them; none of it matters right now. Right now, Clarence and Kathy are not embarrassed parents that are ashamed at their shameful daughter. They are grieving parents burying their baby girl.

Clarence stares at the many photos of his daughter on her life collage from her later years that they missed out on because they disowned and her disappearing on them nearly twenty years ago. He stares at a picture of Lorraine when she was just sixteen years old. A time when she was still his innocent little girl, whose sex history that he didn’t know about. A time when he was happy with her. Before the dark times. They were once close until he found out the truth about her. Then he did the one thing that he regrets the most today -- he renounced his baby girl, which Clarence will never forgive himself for doing.

Clarence becomes uncomfortable when he finds that the majority of the “mourners” are men. Men of all races, styles, and ages. It’s obvious that these so called “friends” weren’t friends. But they are the men that Lorraine had slept with in the past. Everyone else is also mourning Lorraine despite their own feelings about her. What makes this sad is that Lorraine’s family and friends hasn’t seen in nearly twenty years. From 1997 to her death, she has been in California. Neither her parents or her friends know what she’s been doing. Her life is a total mystery to them.

The Carters and their friends turn their attention on a teenage girl. Her name is REY (18). She is crying while being comfort by people involved with Lorraine in her later years, a lawyer, and the funeral workers. It’s now that our main characters realize that the attention is not on them, the family of the deceased, but on this random girl that they don’t know anything about. Kathy stares into the girl's’ eyes. She finds something familiar about them. Like she has seen her eyes before. Immediately, Kathy finds love for this girl despite not knowing her.

Clarence stares at her, thinking that she is so beautiful and pure. What was his “shameful” daughter doing with someone as innocent and precious as this young girl? Then the moment that Rey and Clarence make eye contact, a spark hits between them. Clarence is feeling a special bond with her that he hasn’t felt since Lorraine was sixteen. He has paternal feelings for her. But why? Why would Clarence have these feelings for a teenage girl that he’s never met before? Billy is also staring at her. But he just smiles and stares at her. She is the most beautiful girl he has ever seen in his entire life. We DISSOLVE TO --

The end of the funeral. The majority of the funeral’s attendance has left. Rey is sitting alone and staring at Lorraine’s grave. She is approached by Clarence and Kathy. They tell Rey that they saw her, which Rey confirms that she saw them looking at her. They apologize if they were being rude to her. Rey says it’s no problem. They’re all wondering about each other. The Carters asks Rey how she knew their daughter, adding that they know nothing about her California life. Rey tells them her name and that she’s been waiting to meet them all of her life.

This interests them. Why has this girl been waiting to meet them all of her life. What is so important about them to hear that she’s been waiting to meet them for. Rey smiles and reveals the truth to them; “I’m your granddaughter.” This news shocks Clarence and Kathy. They have a granddaughter that they didn’t know about. Rey tells her grandparents that she has a lot to tell them about Lorraine that they don’t know about. Rey asks them if they’re ready to be reintroduced to their daughter.

## Chapter 3

At the Carter house, the rest of the main characters have arrived before Clarence and Kathy have. Billy, Beverly, Anton, his girlfriend HEATHER THOMPSON (19), and Billy’s ex-girlfriend VICTORIA “VIC” KENNEDY (21) are all hanging out in the front yard. Heather states that the Carter family must be a very loyal and devoted family to attend a funeral for someone who was known as a slut and that they’ve disowned. Vic says that they’re just weak like Lorraine. Billy glares at her over this comment. Anton says that the Carters had regretted disowning her and went to her funeral to make up for it. Anton says that the Carters really do love Lorraine regardless.

Billy, who was only three when Lorraine left good, says that he briefly knew Lorraine and remembers her despite being so young. Anton and Beverly, who were not born yet when she left, asks Billy what Lorraine was like. Billy says that he remembers that just before she left that she was babysitting him. At first she didn’t like the idea of babysitting. But eventually, she grew attached to him. Billy feels like he could have given Lorraine maternal feelings. Meaning, had Lorraine stayed with the Carter family, they would have seen her have a child because of her experience with babysitting Billy.

Billy also states that Lorraine was a very sad person. A lost soul that was looked down upon by those around her. Especially her family and friends. Young Billy could not see why as he only saw a sweet young lady who cared for him. But even at a young age, Billy knew that Lorraine was sad and felt unwanted, helpless, and hopeless. When Lorraine left, he felt that apart of her was still there in hopes of someday being brought back to be loved and accepted for who she was truly inside and not for what people saw her as or at least what they thought she was.

Meanwhile, down in the basement, the adults; Andrew, Daphne, Scott, Charlie, and Nick are sitting at the couch and on chairs. They are going back and forth in reminiscing of their past with Lorraine. Some are good, funny, cute, and stuff. But others are just bad. They trash talk Lorraine for being a slut, liar, cheat, partier, alcoholic, and manipulator. Andrew refers to her as “The Devil”, which makes everyone laugh. Apart of Charlie feels bad about this. Charlie talks about the time that he and Lorraine got married to piss off a then racist Clarence.

But after a near fatal heart attack, Clarence changed his ways. Clarence has forgiven his children for their antics and behavior in the past. Clarence is cool with their friends now and sees them as his own children including Charlie. Scott was living with the Carters for many years until his rich biological father, who he didn’t know until he was eighteen, gave him a music store called, “The Wave.” (I know you guys loved the Wave. Do you wanna see it back?) Nick was always the idiot of the group but is the lady’s man. That’s how Billy was born. But Billy is nothing like his father except for being handsome.

The Carters arrive with Rey. They introduce Beverly to her older cousin. Beverly hugs Rey. She says that she has always wanted a cousin and never knew if she would have any (NOTE: Daphne is an only child. So Lorraine having kids is the only way for her to have cousins.) The adult main characters come upstairs to see Rey. Andrew says hello to her. Rey smiles and says, “Hello, Uncle Andy.” Andrew is shocked by what she just called him. Kathy tells the main characters that Rey has things to tell them.

We DISSOLVE TO -- Rey is sitting on the couch with everyone around her as she tells them about her life with Lorraine. A life that they never knew Lorraine partook in -- Motherhood. Rey tells them that Lorraine told her that she was babysitting a friend’s baby (Billy) prior to her running away to California when she decided that if she got pregnant that she’d keep the baby. This surprises everyone but makes them happy to hear this. Rey points out that they knew her as a whore. A selfish bitch who would rather sleep with two guys that she hardly knew rather than give any of her time to a child. Which they all nod in agreement.

But Rey tells them about the time that Lorraine was going to have sex with a guy. But when Baby Rey started crying, Lorraine stopped to help her out instead. The guy got pissed off and tried yelling at her to shut up. Lorraine got pissed off and threw the guy out. Lorraine always put Rey first before anyone else. Rey tells them that she doesn’t know the Lorraine that they knew. She only knew her mother Lorraine, who fed her, sheltered her, played with her, and loved her. Rey called Lorraine the best mother a child could ever ask for. Rey says that nobody can ever replace Lorraine as a mother to her.

Everyone is surprised by this. The Lorraine they knew would pass over a child just to sleep with a random guy she hardly knew. They do not know this woman that Rey is describing. Clarence is nearly tears. His little girl, whom he discovered was a lying whore at a young age, became a good mother. This was so unlike his daughter. Rey tells him that “his daughter” wouldn’t. She believes that the Lorraine that they knew died when she was born. Rey believes that she kept Lorraine in line by being her child. Everyone smiles over this. They begin to feel relief and at peace with Lorraine now that they know what happened to her in her long absence.

Kathy tells Rey that she’s glad that Lorraine changed and that she raised such a beautiful good girl like Rey. Rey smiles at her grandmother and tells her that she would have loved the Lorraine that she got to know. Rey says that Lorraine was the most amazing and beautiful woman that she’s ever known. Kathy and Clarence hold hands and smile. They're emotional over this news.

## Chapter 4

We open in a bedroom. We have several quick shots of a couple having sex. The woman is someone we’ve already met -- Mandy McGuire -- the bitch who attended Lorraine’s funeral and insulted her memory in front of her family. Her male lover is WILL BAILEY (27), a younger man. Very handsome and muscular. Possibly a football player in his high school/college years. We DISSOLVE TO -- Later, Mandy and Will have just finished having sex. Will is putting his clothes back on. Mandy is putting a robe on and getting ready to take a shower.

Mandy tells Will that he better leave before her husband comes home and catches him here. Will chuckles and says that he might just stick around to say hi to Mr. McGuire. Mandy tells him in a serious tone how that is not funny at all. But Will continues to laugh anyways. As Mandy heads into the bathroom, Will says his goodbyes to her. Will walks outside through the back double french doors to the backyard. He whistles to himself as he goes from the backyard to the woods just to the very end of Mandy's property. He must go through a metal gate to exit the backyard.

Will walks alone in the dark and deserted woods. The only light available to him is the bright lit moon. He suddenly hears other footsteps. He stops walking to look around for the source of the footsteps. He says, “Hello”, but gets no response from anyone. Through his POV, we see the entire woods and beyond. There is nothing there but the nature of the woods. With nothing or nobody around, Will shrugs. He must have been hearing things. He continues to walk when he trips over something. As Will brings himself up, he finds that he's tripped over -- A DEAD BODY.

Will cries out, “Holy shit”, in shock and horror. He jumps off the body, tripping backwards, and crawls backwards. He takes a good glance at the body and gasps in shock when he realizes who the deceased is. The deceased is -- NATHAN MCGUIRE, Mandy's much older husband. Most likely in his late 40s or early 50s. He has the appearance of a businessman or a city councilman. He appears to be the victim of multiple stabbings. The footsteps are heard again. Will turns to the footsteps. He gasps in horror when he finds -- GHOSTFACE. Will is too scared to move or say anything. Ghostface whacks him with a bat, rendering him unconscious.

Back at Mandy’s house, Mandy is taking a shower. From outside her shower, we see her turn off the shower. She opens the shower door and grabs a towel. While still standing in the shower, Mandy wraps the towel around herself so that we don’t see her breasts when she steps out of the shower. We CUT TO -- Mandy coming down the stairs wearing her sexy grey and black nightgown. Very Sexy. Definitely the image of a trophy wife of a much older man. She walks into the living room and jumps onto the nice expensive couch. She lays there, stretching out her sexy clean-shaved legs. Her posture on the couch definitely screams slut.

Mandy switches on the TV. A teenage drama show is playing. Her cell phone RINGS. Mandy answers the phone. It’s Ghostface, who says, “Hello.” She asks, “Yes?” and Ghostface asks who she is. Mandy asks who he’s trying to reach. Ghostface ask what number this is. Mandy asks what number he’s trying to reach. Ghostface says that he doesn’t know. Mandy states that he might have the wrong number. Ghostface confirms that he must have the wrong number. Mandy chuckles and assures him that it happens. She says goodbye and hangs up the phone.

Mandy turns back to her TV. Her cell phone rings again. She answers it. It's Ghostface again. This time he apologizes for dialing the wrong number again. Mandy asks why he dialed again. Ghostface says to apologize. Mandy chuckles and says that he's forgiven. She goes to say goodbye but he begs her not to hang up. He tells her that her voice is so beautiful and very comforting, adding that he could use a voice like hers after the night that he’s had. Mandy is flattered by this. She feels that nobody has spoken to her likes this in a long time. She may have male lovers and a husband. But they treat her like a trophy that they fight over than a person.

What makes her feel inclined to talk to the mysterious man is that his voice sounds sad and sincere. It's an obvious flirt tactic. But he could be for real. So for the sake of her boredom and for the fact that she is craving for some real attention that her husband ignores, she plays along. Mandy expresses her sorrow to him over his bad night, stating that she hasn’t had the best night either. Ghostface asks how her night has been. Mandy says that her husband is gone and that her side boyfriend is a shitty lay. But she points out that she has a nice house, money, and a gorgeous body. So she feels that she can't really complain too much.

Ghostface claims that the money, house, and body is her security blanket. He states that she’s really hurting inside. Mandy puts on a sad face. She knows that he can hear right through her and that he gets her. She confirms this to him. Ghostface tells her that he understands because he knew someone who had similar issues as her. Except that she didn't have the nice house or money. But that she had a beautiful body. Ghostface states that his mentioned lady had a beautiful and soothing voice as Mandy’s, which makes her put on a real smile. Perhaps this is a slight rare moment of Mandy being a regular human being rather than her usual bitchy self.

Mandy asks Ghostface if this is a girlfriend. Ghostface says that she wasn't. But that she was a very special person to him. Mandy is touched by how special this girl similar to her was to him. Ghostface claims that he misses the special lady. He then changes the subject and asks her what she’s up to tonight. Mandy says that she’s lying on the couch, watching TV, and waiting for her husband. She admits that as much as she hates his stupid ass, that in the end that she still does love him. Ghostface states that is understandable. Mandy asks him what he’s up to.

Ghostface claims that he’s visiting someone. Mandy asks if it’s that special lady that he talked about. Ghostface states that it’s not her. Mandy asks who then. Ghostface asks, “What if I said you?” Thinking that this is a joke, Mandy chuckles and states that he doesn’t know where she lives. Ghostface then says her address; 8596 Craven Avenue. Mandy is stunned, almost scared, when he mentions the address. Ghostface then tells her that he likes the expensive red sports car that her rich husband, Nathan, got her. Ghostface believes that the expensive car must make her real secure about herself, calling her "Blondie."

Now Mandy is in panic mode. How does he know about her car? How does he know her husband's name? And how does he know that she's a blonde? She jumps off of the couch and runs over to the front main window. She peeks through the curtains. There is nothing outside the MCGUIRE PROPERTY but a nice mowed lawn and Mandy's EXPENSIVE RED SPORTS CAR. Ghostface is nowhere in sight. Ghostface asks her if she’s still there. Mandy tries not to show herself in fear. She claims that she's got to go because her boyfriend might return because he forgot his wallet.

Ghostface asks if she's afraid. But Mandy claims that she's just annoyed. She tells him that he better leave before her boyfriend finds him there and kicks his ass. Ghostface mockingly claims that he's afraid. Mandy says that he better because her boyfriend is big and was a wrestler in high school. Ghostface asks if his name is Will Bailey. Mandy is now scared. She asks him how he knows his name. Ghostface tells her to check the back door. This does not sound good to Mandy. She hurries to the kitchen where the same back double french doors that Will left out of earlier is at. She looks through the window. She finds -- WILL IS TIED TO THE METAL FENCE.

A horrified Mandy tries to open the door. But Ghostface discourages her to do this. Mandy asks him where he's at. He tells her to guess. Will looks to his left then to his right. Implicating that there are two people nearby. One on each side of Mandy's house (NOTE: This is what Steve Orth did in the original movie to implicate that there was two killers). Mandy asks him why he is doing this. Ghostface states that he wants justice for that special girl that he told her about. He asks her why a whore like her should live a free and happy life with a rich husband, nice house, nice car, and all that money while another "whore" lived in pain and misery.

Mandy asks him who he's talking about. Ghostface confirms that the special girl was Lorraine Carter. Mandy's eyes widen by that name. She is shocked that this is about "that whore" that she hates. But Ghostface tells her that he saw her at the funeral acting all friendly. But he tells her that she didn't fool anyone and that everyone knew that she was really there to make a final insult towards Lorraine even in death. Mandy’s attitude changes back to her “bitch” mode. She tells him that Lorraine was a useful, stupid, bitchy slut. Mandy states that she deserved to die. Ghostface confesses to her that he killed her as a mercy kill over how Mandy treated her.

Mandy asks him if he really killed Lorraine. Ghostface confirms this. He states that when an animal is suffering that humans put them down so that they don’t have to suffer anymore. Ghostface claims that even as she was trying to live a different life that her past still haunted her and made her suffer. Therefore, Ghostface killed her out of mercy so that she wouldn’t suffer anymore. But he’s going to now continue by killing those responsible for her tragic life. He says that he can’t think of a better person to start off with than the hypocritical bitch who disrespected Lorraine at her funeral and bullied her at school. Of course, he is referring to Mandy.

Mandy says that he wouldn’t. Ghostface tells her to watch his work on “Willy” to see how serious he is. He tells her to say goodbye to Willy. Realizing that he means to kill her boyfriend, Mandy opens the two french doors and runs out to the porch. But in her state of panic, she doesn't see a wire in front of her. She runs into the wire. Suddenly a bucket of water pours all over Will and the fence. From somewhere hidden from Mandy's view, one of Ghostface’s gloved hands is seen placing a cut, loose, and operating wire against the metal fence. Will is being electrocuted by the wire's electrical transference to the fence.

Mandy just stands there in horror as she watches her lover get electrocuted to death. As Will is being electrocuted, we see Ghostface standing not far from the electrocution. He watches his next victim cry over the current victim’s ongoing death. Will Bailey, lover of Mandy, is dead. Mandy cries over his death. She suddenly hears footsteps. Not taking any chances, she runs back inside. Once inside, she locks the french doors. We can hear Ghostface laughing from the phone as Mandy hides behind a couch in the rec room.

Ghostface asks Mandy if he's still on the phone. Mandy confirms that she is. Ghostface says that he will give her a chance to live. He admits that Will isn't the only victim that he's killed tonight. He tells her that if she can who his other victim is, she'll live. Mandy begs him not to do this to her. Ghostface claims that he's done her a favor by killing this particular victim, stating that she can be free as this is somebody she lives with lives and makes her feel miserable. Mandy thinks for a moment. She guesses Nathan's daughter, Mallory. She claims that she's a slut like Lorraine and a pain in her ass. Mandy states that she can live without Mallory.

Ghostface says, "Wrong answer, bitch!" Suddenly, the french doors are shattered. A body is thrown and lands on the floor. Mandy jumps and screams. She realizes that the dead body is that of her husband Nathan. She cries over his corpse. She looks up to find -- GHOSTFACE -- walking through the broken door. Ghostface walks through the broken door. Mandy is frightened by his appearance. Mandy screams, "NO!", and starts running away. Ghostface gives chase. They run across the entire house. She grabs a lamp and throws it at Ghostface. Upon impact, Ghostface falls to the floor. Mandy then throws the lamp's stand on the floor.

Mandy grabs her keys from a stand next to the front door. Ghostface gets up only to trip over the lamp's stand as Mandy runs out the door. A barefooted Mandy runs through the rocky walkway to her red expensive car. She unlocks her car door. Ghostface can be seen running towards the door from inside the house. But Mandy gets inside her car and locks the door. Mandy starts her engine just as Ghostface runs out of the door. He is running right to the car. Mandy switches the gear into drive. BAM! Ghostface has ran into the car door. Banging on the window. Mandy screams as she stomps on the gas.

Mandy drives off. Ghostface just stands there. He doesn't look pissed at all that she got away. And with good reason to. As Mandy continues to drive on, she sighs in relief. She's gotten away. She drives through the open gate of her husband's property. She's free. Suddenly, ANOTHER GHOSTFACE pops out from behind her seat in the back. She sees this from her rear-view mirror. Mandy screams. Ghostface puts his arm around her and stabs her in the chest with his knife multiple time. Mandy McGuire, former bully and hater of Lorraine Carter, is dead.

Mandy's car swerves off the road and hits a street light. Ghostface gets out from the backseat. He is unharmed by the crash. He moves to the driver's seat and stares at his work. Mandy's dead body just sits there on the driver's seat.

## Chapter 5

The next morning, the police led by Charlie are investigating Mandy, Will, and Nathan’s murders. Charlie checks around the property for any evidence. In Mandy’s car, where her body still remains, Charlie finds a large yellow envelope. It says “For Sheriff Charlie Rodriguez.” Charlie opens the envelope and takes out the contents of the envelope. He is shocked to find that the contents are pictures of Lorraine, the Carters, Scott, Andrew, Nick, Daphne, and of himself. Charlie realizes that this is about Lorraine and her family. But why?

At the Carter house, Charlie is talking to The Carters, Andrew, Daphne, Scott, and Nick. He shows them the pictures that he found at the crime scene. Charlie believes that the same person who killed Mandy McGuire is the same person who killed Lorraine. He theorizes that Lorraine’s killer is targeting those who knew Lorraine. Clarence asks why the person might have killed Lorraine but is targeting those close to her. Charlie says that he doesn’t know. But that everyone in her life may be a target now. Everyone is horrified by this. We PAN AWAY from them to find that Rey is listening to this conversation from another room. She’s interested in this.

The DOORBELL RINGS. Rey tells everyone that she’ll get the door. Rey runs to the door and opens it. But there is nobody there. She looks down to find a large yellow envelope on the welcome mat. It’s exactly the same type of envelope that Charlie found at the crime scene. Rey picks it up and reads the name on it. It has her name on it; REYANNE CARTER. That’s right. Ghostface just sent her a package. But what is it? Rey goes inside and goes into her mother’s old bedroom, which is now her bedroom. She sits on the bed and opens the package.

Rey takes out the contents. There are pages of type up information and dozens of photos. Rey finds a set of photos that Ghostface took from outside a house. In the photos, it shows a little boy, GEORGE (6), being abused by his father, JOHN RILEY. When Rey sees John’s face, she instantly recognizes him. She has a FLASHBACK of John abusing both her and Lorraine multiple times when she was a child. One night during his abuse towards them, Bob, Lorraine’s future husband, intervenes and defeats the abusive John. Bob was upset when he saw John beat up the pregnant Lorraine. Lorraine and John were finally broken up with Bob’s help.

The flashbacks also shows that Rey and Bob were with Lorraine when she gave birth to John’s child -- A BABY BOY. Rey named the boy George. That means that the little boy in the pictures is Rey’s little brother. Angry over Lorraine leaving him, John kidnapped baby George from the nursery and ran off. Neither John nor George has been seen since. Lorraine, Rey, and Bob had since been searching for them. But with no luck. Now Rey has possession of the information of their whereabouts. Rey finds an address. It turns out that John and George are living in Vancouver, Canada, which is a two hour drive from Clearwood.

Rey puts the papers and photos back into the envelope. She puts on a black hooded jacket. She takes the envelope with her and leaves her bedroom. She goes downstairs, walks into the kitchen, and passes by her grandparents. As she heads out of the back sliding glass door, she tells them that she’s going out and doesn’t know when she’ll be home. Kathy tells her to be safe. Rey says that she will. Rey walks out of the house. Rey walks to her car and gets in. As she proceeds to start her car, she is startled when Billy appears out of nowhere by her window. He apologizes to her for scaring her, which she forgives him for.

Billy asks her where she’s heading to. Rey confesses that she’s heading for Canada. Billy asks if she’s going all alone, which Rey confirms that she is. Billy asks when she’ll be back. Rey says that she isn’t sure, as it depends on how long it takes her to complete her mission. Billy wishes her luck and to let him know when she returns. Rey says that she will. Billy proceeds to walk away and Rey goes to switch her gear. However, she stops and calls out to Billy, who gives her his attention. Rey tells him that she may need his help and asks if he’ll come with her to Canada. She says that she’ll explain everything on the way there.

## Chapter 6

We open on that night in VANCOUVER, CANADA. We’re focused on a trailer park house. TWO DARK HOODED FIGURES cautiously sneak up in front of the house. The Figures watches the house. They stare at a window where they see -- GEORGE. George is watching TV and minding his own business. Suddenly, his father John and his wife JANET RILEY (40s) barge into the living room and proceeds to beat him. George cries as they take turns smacking him around. Janet calls George a stupid little crybaby. John says that he’s a worthless piece of shit like his mother was. He kicks the boy.

Janet says that she’s going outside for a smoke. John says that he’s going back to their bedroom. They separate to do their own thing, leaving poor George to cry alone. They show no sympathy for the child that they constantly abuse to no end. Although, we don’t see their faces, we can tell that the Figures are disturbed by John and Janet’s actions against the poor child. Once Janet comes outside to smoke, the Figures decide to make their move now. Janet is just smoking her cigarette and minding her own business. She hears something behind her. She turns out -- PUNCH! Janet falls unconscious to the ground.

The two hooded Figures step into the light and are revealed to be -- REY AND BILLY. Rey shakes her fist, implicating herself as the one who punched Janet. Billy compliments her punching skills, which Rey thanks him for. She asks him if he’s ready to save a child from evil. Billy says that he’s ready to kick his father’s ass. They move into the house. Upon walking in, George sees them. He begins to panic as he doesn’t know them. But Rey and Billy give him a warm smile. Rey tells him that everything is going to be okay and that they won’t hurt him.

Rey slowly and carefully rubs his face, showing the boy that she means to love him and not harm him. George calms down over this. Rey says that she’s not gonna let them hurt him again. George gives off a slight smile. It’s so precious and sad. It’s the very first time that he’s ever smiled. Rey and Billy hear John coughing from inside his room. Rey tells George that they’ll be back. Rey and Billy walk to John’s bedroom. John is in the bathroom washing his hands. He looks up at the mirror -- Rey is behind him. Rey says, "Hello, John. Remember me?" Before John can react, Rey slams his face against the mirror, which shatters it.

As John slowly recovers from this assault, Rey turns him to face her. He asks her who she is. Rey reminds him that he used to abuse her and her mother in California. John glances at her and realizes who she is. John laughs and states that she’s “the bitch’s daughter.” John reminds her that he beat her as a child and he’ll do it again. Rey goes to punch him. But John catches her fist and punches her. Rey falls to the floor. John goes to attack her. However, before he can, Billy grabs him and decks him in the face. This pisses John off, who then proceeds to charge at Billy.

However, Billy proves to be much stronger than John. Billy proceeds to ruthlessly and brutally beat John to a pulp. Even with John weak and helpless on the floor, Billy continues to pound his face in. Rey is shocked by Billy’s ruthlessness. This is also seen by George, who is scared seeing another man beat up on his own abuser. Seeing that George is witnessing this, Rey pulls Billy off, telling him that John has had enough. Billy gets off of John when he sees that a horrified George is watching him. Rey approaches John and tells him that they’re taking George away from him and that if he comes looking for him, Rey will personally kill him.

Rey asks him if he understands. John says, “Screw you, cunt.” Rey kicks him in the balls, which makes John groan out in pain. Rey then shouts, “SAY YOU UNDERSTAND! Say it…SAY IT!” Defeated, John concedes by saying, “I understand.” Then John passes out from the injuries that he’s sustained from this fight. Rey approaches George. But Billy stays back as not to scare the boy anymore than he is. Rey kneels down to George and says hello to him. She tells him that her name is Rey. George says that his name is George. Rey says that she knows because -- She was the one who named him.

Mistaking the meaning behind that, George asks if Rey is his mommy. Rey smiles, with a tear sneaking out of her eye, and tells him that she’s not. But that she’s the next best thing -- His big sister. George smiles. Rey tells him that she’s going to take him to some great people who will love him the way that his mommy loved him. Just like she will. She promises that she will never let anyone hurt him ever again. Rey offers him her hand. George takes her hand. Billy approaches them. Finally trusting him, George holds his hand out to Billy, who smiles and takes his hand. Rey, George, and Billy leave the house.

Rey, George, and Billy go inside Rey’s car and they drive off together. After the threesome has left, we find Ghostface popping out from behind some bushes. He has seen and heard the entire incident. Ghostface had after all planned this out for George’s rescue. Now with Rey, George, and Billy gone, Ghostface can make his move and finish it off. Janet, still lying on the ground, regains consciousness. She looks up and gasps in horror when she sees -- Ghostface above her with a long wooden stick with a sharp pointy end. Before Janet can scream, Ghostface stabs her in the eye with the stick. Janet Riley, wife of John and stepmother of George, is dead.

Back inside the house, John regains conscious. He curses out loud when he remembers what just happened. He gets up and calls out to his wife, who he doesn't realize is dead yet. His cell phone RINGS. He grabs it and answers it. It's Ghostface. John asks who he is. Ghostface tells him that he's the voice of Lorraine Carter's past haunting Clearwood. He says that the people who hurt her are going to wish that they never touched her or said anything to or about her. John asks what he's talking. Ghostface reminds him that he abused Lorraine and Rey, then kidnapped George when Lorraine left him, and abused him the same way.

Thinking that this is someone involved with Rey, John states that they just bashed his face in and took the kid away. He asks him what more do they want from him. Ghostface tells him that he's not Rey nor is he with her. He tells him that he wants him to feel the same pain that he made Lorraine and George feel everyday. John asks if that's a threat. Ghostface says that it's a fucking promise. John acts all tough and demands that he shows his face, calling him a fucking coward. Ghostface says, "My Pleasure!"

A body is thrown through the window, shattering it. John jumps and turns to the body. It's Janet's dead body. John goes over to his wife's body and mourns over her. John hears Ghostface approach him from behind. He attempts to move. But Ghostface is too quick and stabs him in the back. John yelps out in pain. Ghostface takes the knife out and goes to stab him again. But John turns around struggles with the killer. After struggling a bit, Ghostface throws John over the couch, making him fall onto the floor. Ghostface quickly goes over to him and stabs him in the chest. John screams out in pain. Ghostface gets into his face.

Ghostface asks him if he knows what the penalty is for beating up on women and children. John is too scared and hurt to answer. Ghostface declares it to be DEATH. And with that, Ghostface is Judge, Jury, and Executioner for John. Ghostface proceeds to stab John multiples. John screams in pain until he goes silent. John Riley, husband of Janet, ex-boyfriend of the late Lorraine, and the father of George, is dead.

The next morning at the Carter house, the Carters, Andrew, Daphne, Scott, Charlie, Beverly, and Anton are sitting around when Rey and Billy return with the new addition; George. Rey brings George, who is asleep in her arms, into the living room. George wakes up and turns to Clarence and Kathy. The Carters gasps when they see his face and eyes. Not only are they sadden by the bruises on his face but they are shocked to see Lorraine in his eyes. Rey sets him down and tells him to say Hello to his grandparents. George runs over to The Carters. Kathy picks him up. Clarence and Kathy hug him. They are meeting their grandson for the very first time. They begin to cry over this.

Kathy greets her grandson, telling him that she’s his Grandma Kathy. George smiles and says that his name is George. Kathy smiles and says that is a cute name for a handsome little boy. Clarence asks Rey about George’s father. Billy tells them that they took care of him and assures them that he’ll never find George or hurt him again. Kathy says that they need to give him a room. Andrew comes up and introduces himself to George as his Uncle. Andrew tells him that he can take his old bedroom that he had when he was his age. Andrew says that he deserves it. He offers to show him his new bedroom. So George takes his hand and they go upstairs.

While Andrew takes George up to his new room, Rey tells the others that John abused both her and Lorraine for a long time until Lorraine left him. In retaliation for that, John kidnapped George after he was born. Rey says that she was twelve at the time and hadn't seen him since. She declares that this is the very first time that she's seen George since he was born. Everyone smiles and tells her that she did good in rescuing George. Rey claims that she wouldn't have done it without Billy's help. Nick nods at his son with respect and admiration. Nick tells his son that he's proud of him and how he's a better man than he ever will be. Billy thanks his father for that compliment.

Everyone separates to do their own thing. Rey and Billy turn to each other and smile. Rey thanks him for helping her save George. Billy says that it was his pleasure. Rey plants a kiss on his cheeks. She smiles and runs off to her bedroom. Billy just stands there with amazement over the kiss. The most beautiful girl that he’s ever seen him just kissed him on the cheek.

## Chapter 7

FLASHBACK - B&W SCENE

The school bell rings. All of the students in ROBERT MILLERTON's (40) math class begin to leave. Millerton has his eye on one of his students. We finally recognize her as a very young LORRAINE CARTER (14). She is still innocent and pure during this time in her life and not in her whory was yet. This was before she was known as the town slut. In fact, she looks like an angel compared to her friends and fellow female classmates. All of them have either already had sex or they are attempting to get the boys' attention with their racy outfits. But our Lorraine, while curious about sex like all girls her age, is nothing like the rest of them.

Millerton asks Lorraine to stay for a moment. The other students leave and Lorraine approaches Millerton at his desk. Lorraine asks what Millerton wanted to see her for. Millerton says that it has been brought to his attention that she’s not doing as well as her other classmates. Lorraine apologizes to him and tells him that she’s really trying hard but that she’s just good at math. Millerton informs her that if she fails that she’ll have to repeat this class next year. Lorraine begs him not to fail him, stating that it’s important to her that she moves on to the eighth grade.

Lorraine says that she’ll do anything to pass the class. Millerton thinks for a moment. He knows he's got her under his thumb now. Now is the time for him to make his move. He tells her that they can work on something. He asks her about her personal life and if she has a boyfriend. Lorraine puts on a sad look. She's so innocent and lonely. She is desiring for the same kind of love and affection that her friends get from boys. She confirms that she is single because she's not pretty like the other girls. Millerton says that is non-sense, declaring her to be very pretty. Millerton admits that Lorraine is the most beautiful girl that he's ever seen.

A flattered Lorraine smiles over this. Nobody aside from her parents has ever said that to her. Millerton is the first non-relative male to ever say such thing to her. She thanks Mr. Millerton for saying that. Millerton tells her to call him Robert, which Lorraine does. Millerton asks her if she trusts him, which Lorraine confirms that he does. Millerton moves his hands down to her thighs. He pulls her closer to him. Lorraine isn't sure how to respond. She's nervous yet she is feeling the affection that nobody has ever given her. The kind of affection that she's been craving for.

Millerton states that he thinks that they have an understanding. He then moves towards Lorraine. His face getting closer to hers. She does not back away. She doesn't even move. She just lets it happen. Their lips meet. Her first kiss. Millerton begins to fondle her and putting his hands in places where he shouldn't be. He lays her on the floor as he removes her clothes. Her lying on the floor prevents us from seeing any nudity. As he gets on top of her, we DISSOLVE TO --

Lorraine is crying as she is writing in her diary in her bedroom. Lorraine writes; "How could this have happened to me? Am I trash? Am I what Mommy and Daddy hate in girls? Why did I let him do that to me? I am trash!" She closes her diary. She picks up the same underwear that she was wearing earlier that day. There is blood on it. The blood is not as a result of her period. This is the same day that Lorraine spent "after class time" with Millerton. Clarence walks into her bedroom. Seeing her crying, he asks her what is wrong. Lorraine tells her father that she something to tell him.

Before we hear him tell him anything, we DISSOLVE TO -- The next day at school, the police are escorting Millerton out in handcuffs. Despite what he did being wrong, all of the teachers, parents, and students are looking at him like he's the victim. Lorraine walks into the school. Everyone turns to her. But their looks change. It's her who, in their eyes, is the criminal. In their eyes, she's the one who took advantage of a lonely man, traded sex for a favor, and pushed a vulnerable man into something that she wouldn't let him get away from. In their eyes -- she's the tramp and the villain in this case. And she knows it.

Many students call her a tramp. Another student asks how she tricked Millerton into having sex with her. Another male students says now he understands why she's never seen with a boyfriend, claiming that she likes older men. A teacher tells the principal that he's not comfortable with Lorraine being a student of hers. The Principal agrees but says that the law says that she's the victim even though they know the truth. Lorraine cannot believe how everyone is reacting to her. She is the victim yet she's treated like she's the criminal.

Lorraine's soul has hit rock bottom. The entire school and the city of Clearwood sees her as the enemy. The cheap-easy whore, liar, and user of the easily manipulated. From then on, Lorraine became a whore as a result. Believing it was all that she was worth. Millerton raping her is what gave birth to the reputation that Lorraine was a whore that everyone knows her as today. A rape that she is a victim of. She did nothing wrong. But the world thought different. The innocent girl that she once was died that day.

WE DISSOLVE TO -- PRESENT DAY

ROBERT MILLERTON (now 76) has been free on parole for fifteen years now. He is retired and living alone at an old folks home. His phone rings. Millerton answers it. It’s Ghostface, who says, “Hello, Millerton...or should I say Robert?” Millerton asks who he is. Ghostface says that he’s the voice of Lorraine Carter coming back to haunt Clearwood. Millerton’s eyes widen over the mentioning of Lorraine Carter. Millerton says that was a long time ago and that Lorraine is dead. Ghostface admits that he’s the one who killed her over what he has done to her. Ghostface claims that it was a mercy kill. But that Millerton is to be punished for what he has done to her.

Not having anything of it, Millerton says, “Fuck you!” to Ghostface and hangs up the phone. Suddenly, Millerton is impaled with a machete from behind. Ghostface pops out from behind Millerton’s recliner. Millerton looks up as the killer in horror before dying. Robert Millerton, former teacher and rapist of Lorraine, is dead.

## Chapter 8

The next morning, Charlie and his police are outside a large red brick building, where Millerton’s body has been found. As the police investigate Millerton’s murder, Charlie stares at the building. He has been there multiple times when he was younger. It’s the place where Lorraine would go to party, to hide away from her family, and the place where he and Lorraine got married at. One of his deputies asks Charlie if he’s okay. Charlie says that he’s fine and tells him that he’s been here several times with his ex-wife and their friends. Charlie wonders why Lorraine’s old teacher was found murdered outside Lorraine’s Old Party Building as it will be called. Why here?

Rey now works for Scott at the WAVE. The two have been bonding and getting to know each other. Today, they are working behind the counter together. Scott asks how George is doing. Rey informs him that George is much happier and healthier than ever before. She states that with Lorraine being dead and John’s having been found murdered (Rey has been cleared for his murder), that Clarence and Kathy has taken over as George’s legal guardian. Scott says that is great news. He asks about her and Billy. Rey claims that they are just friends. Scott asks her if she likes Billy. Rey takes a moment to think before confessing that she does like Billy.

Scott claims that Billy is a good guy. Rey agrees with this. Scott says that if anything happens between her and Billy, that he’d support that. But that if Billy is anything like his father, Nick, and does something to hurt Rey, then Scott will kick Billy’s ass. Rey smiles over this as Scott places his hand on her shoulder. It’s clear to us that Scott and Rey are forming a father-daughter like relationship. Since Rey has came into their lives, Scott has been there for her. He has been advising her, has helped her settled in, and gave her the job at the WAVE.

Billy walks into the WAVE with two cups of coffee. Rey leaves the counter to go see him. Billy hands her a cup of coffee. Vic walks into the store without being seen by anyone as Rey hugs Billy and plants a kiss on his cheek. Rey and Billy just stare into each other’s eyes. Billy plants a kiss on Rey’s lips. She is surprised but smiles. Billy and Rey continue to kiss each other. Vic has finally snapped. She marches over to Billy, who finally takes notice of her presence. Rey and Scott sees the pissed off look on her face, which Billy slowly starts to see. SMACK! Vic has slapped Billy across the face. This shocks everyone. Billy asks, "What the hell, Vic?"

Vic berates Billy, asking him, “How dare you kiss this bitch?” Rey is stunned by the name calling. Billy asks her why she cares since they broke up. Vic reminds him that he broke up with her and that she still wants him, reminding him that she always gets what she wants. Vic says, “Besides, she the daughter of that slut.” Rey tells her to not talk about her mother like that. Vic chuckles and asks, “What you gonna do about it, bitch?” Vic says that she thinks that Rey is going to be just like her mother; “A stupid worthless whoring cunt.”

Rey snaps. She swings her hand and slaps Vic across the face. Everyone gasps over this. Vic turns to her with anger and fury. She cannot believe that Rey smacked her. They give each other the “look.” It is fucking on! Scott and Billy both say, “Oh, shit!” as they realize what is about to happen. Rey and Vic charge at each other. Punches are thrown, bodies are pushed, and hairs are pulled. It's a full on CHICK FIGHT. Their height differences isn't a factor either. Rey is 5'7" and Vic is 5'2." They're equal in their fighting abilities.

The customers huddle into a circle to watch them fight. The crowd prevents Scott and Billy from breaking it up. They all chant "FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT!" Vic gets on top of Rey and proceeds to choke her. Vic demands for Rey to stay away from Billy, calling her a slut. Rey punches Vic in the jaw. With Vic releasing her grip to feel her jaw, Rey rolls on top of her. Trying not to hurt her rival, Rey just presses Vic's face against the floor. At least Rey is not willing to do real harm and is just defending herself. Rey tells Vic that Billy doesn't want her anyway.

Being told this pisses Vic off, who then knees Rey, causing Rey to let go of her. She kicks Rey off of her. Rey and Vic get back up and charges at each other again. Choking and punching each other. Scott and Billy are finally able to get through the excited crowd. Scott pulls Rey away and Billy pulls Vic away. Even as they're being pulled away, the girls are still swinging at each other. Vic asks Billy how he could do this to her. Rey goes to say something. But Billy gets in the way and shouts, "ENOUGH! BOTH OF YOU!" Billy turns to Vic and tells her that they need to talk outside. Billy and Vic walk outside, Billy tells Rey that he'll be right back.

Outside the store, Billy confronts Vic. He asks her what the hell that was all about. Vic asks him how could he be with Rey. Billy confesses that he likes Rey and asks Vic what her problem is. Vic states that it's suppose to be her (Vic) that BIlly is supposed to be with. She reminds him that they had something. She asks him if he remembers their time together. Billy confirms that he does. But he reminds her that she became possessive and stuck up. He doesn't like that. So Billy has moved on. Billy tells her that she’s going to have to accept that.

But rather than accepting his decision, Vic says, “Fuck you, Billy. Have your little whore. But don’t come crying to me when you find out that she cheated on you like a little whore just like her mother.” Vic walks away. Billy sighs and goes back into the store. Rey asks if everything is okay. Billy says that Vic just needs to get over it. He states that if they (Billy and Rey) got together, then she (Vic) needs to accept that. Rey asks if that’s what he wants. Billy says that he’d like to give it a try. Billy asks Rey if she’d like to go out on a date with him. Rey smiles and accepts.

## Chapter 9

At Clearwood Elementary School, George is in his kindergarten class. The teacher, MELISSA HOWARD (23), is reading a book to her students. George just stares at her. It’s obvious that he has a crush on his beautiful young teacher. Melissa finally takes notice of him staring at her. George tries to hide it. But she has already seen it. She can sense his crushing feelings towards her. She finds it adorable. So Melissa just gives George a warm and beautiful smile. George smiles back at her. Melissa continues to read the book to the students.

Sometime later, George is in a bathroom stall in the boys bathroom. He hears the door opening. Walking in are two boys, NOAH BEN-MAOR and JEREMIAH MONAGHAN (both 10). They talk about a kid that they tried to fight with earlier, using a lot of profanity in the process. George is horrified by their tone of voice. As the boys talk to each other, George tries to sneak out of the bathroom. But Noah catches him, saying, “Oh, hey. Shitface.”, preventing him from leaving. Noah and Jeremiah proceeds to mock and taunt George for being the son of a known slut in town. Noah even claims that his dad use to fuck Lorraine when they were younger.

Jeremiah says that George’s mother was the sluttiest girl in ten, screwing over a dozen men in a single day. Both boys say that they wish that they had a piece of her ass before she was murdered. George begins to cry and tells them to stop. But they laugh at him for crying, calling him a little crybaby. Fed up with being teased and laughed at, George proceeds to shove the older boys. But they attack back and pushes him around. Melissa is walking in the hallway when she hears the commotion from outside the bathroom. Despite it being the boys’ bathroom, Melissa walks into the bathroom.

Melissa is shocked to see two bigger boys beating up on a small little boy. Melissa yells at Noah and Jeremiah to get off of George. They don’t listen to her at first. So Melissa grabs them both and throws them off of poor George, who is crying on the floor. Melissa berates them for beating up on the little guy. In an attempt to get away with him, the boys pin the blame on George. But Melissa isn’t buying it and calls it out as bullshit. The boys are shocked that a teacher said a bad word to them. Melissa becomes aggressive and threatens to make the rest of their school year miserable if they touch George again. Melissa asks them if they understand.

Believing her threats, the boys nods their heads in fear. Melissa says good and for them to get the hell out of here. So the boys run out of the bathroom. Melissa kneels down to George. He looks up at her and she gives him that same warm and beautiful smile that she gave him earlier. She asks him if he’s okay. George says that he thinks so. Melissa asks him if it’s his lunch time, which George confirms that it is. Melissa says that she’s about to have her lunch, too. She says that she hates to eat alone and asks George if he’d like to have lunch with her. George says that he would like to. Melissa takes George’s hand and they walk out of the bathroom together.

Later after school, Melissa and George are sitting on the bench in front of the school and waiting for Rey to come pick up George. Melissa asks George about his big sister. George says that she is his favorite person in the whole world. Melissa finds it cute of him to say that about his sister. George tells her how Rey and her friend Billy came and saved him from his Daddy. Melissa asks him what his Daddy did to him. George begins to cry and says that his Daddy would hit him for no reason and so did his step mommy. Then Rey and Billy came and hurt Daddy back for it. Then they took him to his Grandma and Grandpa’s house.

Melissa says that she’s glad that he’s safe and living with a loving family away from his mean Daddy. George says that he is, too. He loves his sister, Aunt Daphne, Uncle Andy, Uncle Scott, Uncle Charlie, Uncle Nick, cousin Beverly, Grandparents, and his friends Billy and Anton. Melissa says that he has a big family who loves and cares about him. George smiles and says that he never wants to leave his new family. He likes how they treat him compared to his Daddy, who only hurt him. Melissa smiles and says that is good. She says that he’s got so many people to look up to and love him.

George turns to her and asks if she’s one of them. Melissa smiles and says yes. She’s his teacher, therefore, she’ll be there for him, too. George hugs his teacher. She finds it so sweet. In most circumstances, it may be inappropriate for a student and teacher to hug each other. But this is a little boy and not an older child. It’s a precious moment between the boy and young lady. Billy pulls up in his truck, which confuses George on why he’s coming to pick him up. Billy tells him that Rey is still at work and he thought he’d come pick him up and hang out with him. George accepts this and gets into the truck with him. Melissa introduces herself to Billy.

Melissa tells Billy that George was being pushed around by some older boys. So she took care of them and hung out with George all day. Billy thanks her for helping him out. Melissa says that it was her pleasure. She smiles at George and tells that she’ll see him tomorrow. They say goodbye to each other. As Billy drives off, George just stares at Melissa through the window and smiling at her. Melissa smiles and waves at him. Billy notices this and asks him if he likes her. George asks him what he means. Billy says that as a guy, he knows that “smile” he’s giving her.

George confirms that he does like her. But he asks Billy not to tell anyone. Billy says that it’ll be their secret. George asks if that is something that best friends do. Billy confirms this. George asks if they’re friends. Billy says that George is his best buddy. He holds his hand for George to give him a low five. George slaps his hand, sealing their friendship. Billy asks him if he’d like to get some ice cream. George excitedly says yes. Billy says, “Let’s go.” then asks him if he likes driving fast cars. George says that he doesn’t know. Billy says hang on. Then Billy accelerates the speed. George giggles from the feeling of the speed.

Billy and George just laugh and smile together. It’s clear that they are forming a brotherly relationship. Billy is one of George’s hero for what he has done for him. Now he is bonding with him. Billy will do anything for his new girlfriend’s little brother. He would hang out with him, help him, be there for him, and he would die to protect him.

## Chapter 10

That night at the Carter house, George is in his pajamas. He is brushing his teeth and getting ready for bed. Rey walks into the bathroom to help him if he needs any help. She asks him if he had fun with Billy today. George smiles and says that he did. George says that he likes Billy. Rey smiles as this is a good sign that her baby brother likes her boyfriend. She asks him how much he likes Billy. George says a lot and that he hopes to hang out with him again. Rey smiles. Now is the time to tell him something. Rey tells George that after he goes to bed, she's going to go out to do stuff with Billy. Not thinking anything of it, George says okay to her.

Rey doesn't want to just say that she's dating Billy yet. In fact, she won't date Billy yet. Not until she does what she's about to do. George is what matters the most to her. George's opinion is the only opinion she's willing to accept. So Rey is about to do what we knew she'd do. Do something an older-adult sister hardly does for her little brother. Rey puts her arm around George and asks him if her seeing Billy is okay with him. George has a feeling what she might means. He asks her if she means her being with Billy like Grandma and Grandpa being together. Rey says something like that.

Rey asks him how he'd feel if that happened between her and Billy. George looks into Rey's eyes. He finally understand what is happening. His big sister is asking him for his permission to date a guy. To have another boy besides himself in Rey's life. George smiles and says that he likes Billy a lot. George says that he knows that Rey likes Billy and that Billy likes her, too. George tells Rey that if being with Billy would make her happy, then she should be with Billy. Rey smiles over this. Her baby brother just gave her permission. She kisses George on the head and tells him that she loves him. He tells her that he loves her, too.

Meanwhile, at another friend’s house, we find Anton and Heather sitting on a couch and watching TV, their friends, THOMAS and SABRINA (both 20), making out on another couch, and a visibly upset Vic sitting alone on a chair. She’s still fuming over Billy rejecting her over Rey. She says that she cannot believe that Billy choose that Slut Jr. for a girlfriend over her. Vic talks about how she has the gorgeous face, hot body, nice car, and money. She asks what guy would turn that away for a little whore nobody. Anton tells Vic to lay off of Rey, stating that Rey is a good woman. Vic chuckles and says that Rey is a stupid little bitch who is like her mother.

Thomas and Sabrina tell Vic that comments like that is why Billy doesn’t like her. Vic scoffs it off and says that all guys want is money and sex and that she offers both. Anton says that Billy isn’t that type of guy. He says that Billy is a genuine, kind hearted, and strong valued type of guy. Sabrina says that Billy is the kind of guy that most good girls would want. Thomas says that Rey is the kind of girl that most good guys would want. Heather says that she likes the idea of Billy and Rey being together. Vic scoffs and “thanks” her friends for their “support.” The four friends tell her that they’re just being honest. Vic just sits back and shakes her head.

We arrive at a restaurant, which is revealed to be Noah Killer's favorite, Cherry Blossom, a Chinese place near his high school. But in Clearwood in this story. Billy opens the door for Rey, who walks inside. Meanwhile, from across the street in a car, we find a shadow of a person watching them as they go in. A waitress escorts the couple to their tables. Billy holds out Rey's chair for her to sit on before sitting at his own seat. The waitress asks what they'd like to drink to start with. Rey says that she'd like a Pepsi. Billy also wants a Pepsi. The waitress says that she'll be right back with their Pepsis. They both thank her as the waitress walks off.

Rey informs Billy that she’s never been to this restaurant before. Billy says that it’s a great place with great food. She says that she’s glad that he took her out. Billy says that he’s glad, too. Billy says he’s got something to confess to her. Rey asks what that is. Billy says that he’s liked her from the moment that he first laid his eyes on her at the funeral. Billy says that she is the most beautiful woman that he’s ever seen in his entire life. He says that even in her grief and sadness over her mother, she was still able to keep such great beauty in her that he had never seen before. Rey smiles and thanks her for saying that.

Billy says that when she first kissed him the day that they brought George to the Carters was the best thing ever. Rey says that she liked kissing him, too. Billy asks if she would like to be more than just friend. Rey thinks for a moment before saying yes. They smile then they kiss each other. It is now official; Rey and Billy are in a relationship. Their kiss is seen by the person watching them from the car. This mysterious person is revealed to be -- SCOTT. Scott watches them carefully. He is very protective of Rey. But he doesn’t want to get in the way of their date. He does like Billy. But he cares deeply about Rey. But why? Why is Scott so protective of Rey, who he’s only known for like a week now?

Scott pulls out something from his pocket. It’s a picture of him and Lorraine in their early twenties. They seem cozy together despite their reputation for hating each other. But what does this mean? Scott looks up, as if to look up at Lorraine in Heaven, and says, “I’ll keep her safe for you. I’ll watch over her for you.” He is, of course, talking about Rey. Scott continues to watch as Rey and Billy talk, smile, and laugh together. It’s clear that they’re having a good time together. As long as Rey is happy and safe is all that matters to Scott. But why?

We CUT TO -- Billy's apartment. The door barges open. Billy and Rey are making out as they walk in. Billy kicks the door shut behind him as they continue to get hot and heavy. They kick their shoes off, without removing their lips or tongues away from each other. They begin helping each other remove their clothes starting with their shirts. They stop for a moment to look at each other. They're nervous about this. But they want it. They're both still virgins. Billy reminds Rey that they don't have to go all the way. Rey agrees. They go onto the bed and make out. After a few minutes of doing so, they just lay down and cuddle together.

NOTE: Earlier Vic claims that she offers sex when she’s with a guy and it’s been said that she and Billy were together. Yet, I just declared Billy a virgin. The explanation for this is that they weren’t in an actual relationship. They were together but that it was nothing serious and only made out. Vic showed her true colors, turning Billy away before anything sexual could occur between them.

## Chapter 11

Charlie is in his office at the Sheriff’s department. He’s writing up reports when his cell phone rings. He answers it, saying, “Clearwood’s Sheriff’s Department. This is Sheriff Rodriguez.” Ghostface responds with, “You went from marrying the town whore to being the town sheriff. How do you feel about that?” Confused and somewhat disturbed by this call, Charlie asks him who this is. Ghostface says that he’s the voice of Lorraine Carter haunting Clearwood. Charlie realizes that this is the killer. He asks if he’s the one who killed Lorraine Carter, Mandy McGuire, and Robert Millerton (like the other two victims weren’t important).

Ghostface claims that Lorraine’s murder was a mercy kill so that she didn’t have to suffer anymore. But that Mandy and Millerton’s murders were punishment for what they did to her. And it’s what’s coming to the rest of the Carter family and their friends, including Charlie. Charlie reminds him that he’s threatening the Sheriff. Ghostface chuckles and says that he fears no man, especially a dumbass Sheriff. Ghostface says that he’s going to be punished for what he did to Lorraine. Charlie says that he did nothing to Lorraine, stating that he really did love her even though their marriage was meant to be an insult towards Clarence.

Ghostface says that if he truly loved Lorraine, he would not have divorced her. Charlie informs him that it was Lorraine’s idea to get a divorce. She eventually felt bad for making her father upset. So she caved in and asked for the divorce after the “fun” was over. Ghostface says that why he’s weak. He should have fought for his love for her if he truly loved her. Ghostface claims that he’s just like everyone else in her life. A let down, a liar, a user, and a hater of hers. Charlie says that he (Ghostface) doesn’t know him. Charlie says he would love to have a piece of him before locking him up.

Ghostface says that if he wants him then he is to come to the Carter house. Charlie is horrified by this. Charlie begs him not to hurt anyone at the Carter house. Ghostface says that he won’t if Charlie comes right away. Ghostface says to come alone or else everyone else dies. Ghostface hangs up. Charlie jumps up and grabs his stuff. As he’s running out of the station, he tells his deputies that he’ll be right back. Charlie hurries into his car and drives off. Charlie is extremely concerned right now. Is his son at the Carter’s? Is that poor little boy home? Is Rey in danger? Is Charlie’s “In-laws” home? Charlie cannot take this as he races over to the Carter house.

Charlie arrives at the Carter house. It appears to be empty. He gets out of his car and goes inside. He calls out to many people; Clarence (who he calls Dad), Kathy (who he calls Mom), Rey, George, even Anton as his son hangs out here a lot. As he looks around the house, he suddenly hears movement coming from upstairs. He pulls out his gun and goes upstairs. He looks around the second floor. He checks inside the Carters’ bedroom, Rey’s bedroom, and George’s bedroom. The bathroom door opens and Charlie turns the gun on -- REY, who screams from being startled. Charlie puts his gun away and apologizes to Rey.

Rey asks him what is going on. Charlie says that he got a phone call from the killer or at least that he thinks that it was the killer. He asks where everyone is. Rey states that the Carters went to pick up George from school. Charlie asks about Anton. Rey says that she doesn’t know where Anton is. She says that she just got home from work. Charlie takes a moment to think. He tells her that maybe it was just a prank call. Rey says maybe. She asks him if he’s okay. Charlie smiles and says that he’s fine. He says that since there appears to be no evidence of trouble, that he’s going back to the station. They say goodbye to each other.

Charlie goes downstairs as Rey goes into her bedroom. Rey sits at her bed and puts headphones on her phone. She turns on loud rock music. And with this, she won’t be able to hear what is about to happen outside the house. Charlie goes out the sliding glass door to the driveway. He approaches his car when he suddenly hears something from inside the open garage (separated from the house). Charlie turns to see a DARK FIGURE moving away from the back door of the garage. Charlie pulls out his gun and cautiously walks through the garage.

Charlie makes it out to the back of the garage. He looks around. But he does not see anything or anybody. Giving up and thinking that he was just seeing stuff, Charlie goes to turn back when -- GHOSTFACE appears out of nowhere. Charlie goes to point his gun at him. But Ghostface slashes his wrist, causing him to drop the gun. An angry Charlie attacks Ghostface. The struggle appears to be in Charlie’s favor. It’s possible that Ghostface is young and inexperience. Charlie is a tough badass cop. Plus, we know Charlie from the previous stories. He’s not gonna back down from this fight.

Ghostface is getting his ass handed by Charlie. He is on the ground and being kicked. It’s the first time that we see Ghostface actually losing a fight since the scene in Scream 4 when Ghostface (Charlie) got knocked the fuck down by Sidney after Olivia’s murder. Charlie Rodriguez is being more aggressive than SIdney was to Charlie Walker. We even hear a rare groan and “Ows” from Ghostface that is different from other times that Ghostface expressed pain behind the mask. As Charlie goes to kick him some more, Ghostface grabs his foot and flips him to the ground. Charlie is injured by this fall.

Before Charlie can get up, Ghostface gets to him and stabs him in the chest. Charlie screams out loud in pain. Rey’s loud music prevents her from hearing this scream, which is loud enough to be heard from her bedroom without the loud music on. Charlie looks at the killer, who gets in his face. Ghostface says that Charlie shall die knowing that he cannot save the Carter family. They’re all doomed to meet his same fate. Ghostface tells him to say hello to his ex-wife (Lorraine). Ghostface raises the knife up and stabs Charlie in the heart.

Charlie Rodriguez, father of Anton, ex-husband of Lorraine, good friend of the Carter family, and the Sheriff of Clearwood, is dead.

## Chapter 12

It’s been fifteen minutes since Charlie was murdered. Rey comes into the kitchen to fix herself a snack. She hears the Carter’s car pull up. So she goes outside to greet her grandparents and little brother. Rey asks George if he had a good day at school, which he confirms that he did. At the same time, Anton arrives. He says that he got a text from his father to meet him there. Scott, Nick, Billy, Andrew, Daphne, Bob, and Beverly also arrive. They all claim that Charlie texted them to meet them here. Clarence and Kathy are confused by this and say that they heard nothing from Charlie. Rey tells them that Charlie was here earlier but that he left.

Clarence realizes that the garage door, which he purposely left open, is closed. He asks Rey if she closed it. Rey says no and suggests that maybe Charlie did. Clarence opens the garage door. From inside the garage, we see the horrified reaction of everyone. They all scream at the sight of -- CHARLIE’S DEAD BODY hung from the ceiling. Anton screams out to his dad, falling to his knees. Kathy covers George’s eyes to prevent him from seeing the dead body. But it’s too late. Andrew and Daphne also try to shield Beverly from seeing this. But she, too, has seen the body. Rey begins crying, feeling some guilt for not being out here to save him.

WE CUT TO LATER AT THE SAME SCENE

The police department has closed down the neighborhood and sealed the Carter house. The police are investigating the murder of their boss. The Carter family and friends are inside the living room, as they mourn the loss of their friend. Anton is speechless. He has just lost his father in the most horrifying way ever. Rey tells everyone that this is her fault. Scott tells her that this isn’t her fault. Rey says that Charlie came by and said that he got a call from the killer. But because they thought it was a prank call, they didn’t take it seriously. So Rey just went on her way into her bedroom rather than going out with Charlie. Rey declares that she got Charlie killed. Billy and Scott comfort her.

The house phone rings. But everyone ignores this so that they can just mourn. They don’t feel like answering the phone. Suddenly, they all get text messages from Charlie’s phone. They all read their messages, which is the same message; “ANSWER THE FUCKING PHONE!!!” This horrifies them as the house phone rings again. Clarence answers the phone. Ghostface “welcomes” Clarence to the party. Clarence calls him a son a bitch for doing this. Ghostface says that it is such irony that he calls him a “Son of a bitch.” and mocks Clarence.

Clarence asks him what he wants from them. Ghostface wants them to open up to each other. To reflect to each other on what they did wrong to Lorraine. Ghostface states that even if they all claim that they truly loved Lorraine, they all committed horrible sins against her. Ghostface says that he wants them to confess to their sins to each other before they all die. Ghostface says that there is a package for Rey on the doorstep. Once she obtains them, they will have no choice but to admit their sins to each other. Ghostface says that they’ll be hearing from him again. Ghostface hangs up.

Kathy asks her husband what was said. Clarence tells Rey to check the front door for a package. Billy joins her, pulling out his switchblade (similar to Tyler’s knife in the original trilogy). Rey carefully opens the front door. She finds the same large yellow envelope that was given to her in Chapter 5. She picks it up and takes it inside. As Rey brings the package inside, she tells everyone that she got this same kind of package on the night she saved George from his father. Rey points out that after taking George away from his father, he was murdered. Which means, Ghostface has been planning this. Ghostface is the reason that George is with them.

Rey opens up the package. There are smaller white envelopes with everyone’s names on them. Rey reads a note that says; “Confess your sins to each other or else you’ll be forced to read out loud each of your sins against Lorraine from these envelopes with your name on them.” Rey tells everyone that almost everyone’s names are on here; Clarence, Kathy, Andrew, Daphne, Scott, Nick, Bob, Charlie. Bob says to go ahead and read his “sin” as he doesn’t think he did anything to Lorraine. Rey pulls out Bob’s envelope, opening it up, and reads Bob’s sin. Bob sin was flirting with Lorraine when she was sixteen on July 5, 1993.

They all glare at Bob, who claims that he didn’t realize that it was Lorraine and thought that she was an eighteen year old hooker. Charlie’s envelope is already opened. Rey says that Charlie’s sin was that he didn’t fight for his love for Lorraine. Despite Lorraine wanting the divorce, he showed that he didn’t love her enough to fight for her, which Lorraine hoped that he would. By not doing so, Charlie made Lorraine feel that she was not worth the fight. Everyone realizes that this is for real. Everything that they’ve done is in those envelopes. They’re scared, especially Andrew.

Clarence is brave and tells everyone that he believes that his sin is for turning away from his daughter when she needed her father the most. Rather than accepting his daughter when the whore rumors were spread, he disowned her. Rey opens up envelope and reads it. She confirms that is his sin against Lorraine. Kathy says that she didn’t believe that she was raped but rather allowed herself to have sex at fourteen with her teacher. Kathy declares that her sin was not helping her daughter after her rape. Rey opens up Kathy’s envelope and reads her sin. Rey confirms that Kathy’s sin was not helping her daughter and thinking the worst of her.

Scott says that he’s called Lorraine names throughout their life. He’s called her a whore, a bitch, a liar, and even the devil, which Andrew also claims to have called her. Rey opens Scott’s envelope and reads it. Rey is disturbed and horrified by what she has read. Scott asks what is wrong. Rey tells them that aside from what Scott said he done wrong, his big sin was -- Sleeping with Lorraine and not bringing her home after he found her and visited her in California. Meaning, she was just another whore for him to sleep with. Scott is ashamed at himself for this. He begins to cry over his sin.

Daphne asks what her sin is as she’s also just called her a whore, liar, bitch, etc. Rey opens Daphne’s envelope and reads the sin. Daphne’s sin was rejecting her as a friend. Rather than getting to know Lorraine for herself, Daphne allowed the rumors and the gossip of Andrew, Scott, Nick, and Charlie dictate how she felt about her. So Daphne just never gave Lorraine a chance. Rey says that the note claims that Lorraine wanted Daphne to be a sister figure to her. This breaks Daphne’s heart and she proceeds to sob, feeling guilty for hurting Lorraine like that.

Nick assumes that his sin against Lorraine was just sleeping with her and not caring her about her feelings. Everyone assumes this, too. Rey opens Nick’s envelope and reads his sin. But she claims that wasn’t his major sin. A confused Nick asks what his sin was. Rey states that his sin was passing Lorraine on to his brothers like a piece of meat. He disrespected Lorraine’s body by making it nothing more than a sex object. Nick sighs and digs his face into his hands with shame. Nick says that he’s always been like that this to women. But no more. He’s changing for the better over this. Billy pats his father’s back for this effort.

The last envelope -- Andrew’s sin. Everyone asks Andrew what his sin against his sister was. But Andrew can’t speak. He is horrified by his own sin. A sin that he’s lived with for over twenty four years. Andrew begins to cry and cannot speak. Rey opens the envelope and reads Andrew’s sin to herself. Rey begins to cry as she becomes disturbed and horrified by the sin that Andrew has committed against Lorraine. Everyone asks her what Andrew did. But Rey is too emotional to read. BIlly takes the note and reads it. He gives Andrew an angry glare.

Everyone now knows that it is Andrew’s sin against Lorraine that is perhaps the worst and the biggest reason why Ghostface is targeting them. Billy says that Andrew is a sick bastard for what he did to Lorraine. This disturbs Clarence, who aggressively asks his son what the hell did he do to his sister. As Andrew musters up the courage to tell them, we CUT BACK AND FORTH between the PRESENT and to a FLASHBACK:

A drunken Andrew (15) is sobbing while being comforted by Lorraine. It was the time when Daphne had broken up with Andrew. Lorraine tells him how he’s a very smart, handsome, nice guy. She believes that Andrew will find another girl. Andrew asks her if she think so. Lorraine says that if they weren’t siblings, that she’d date him as she thinks he’s very handsome. Andrew just stares into his sister’s eyes. In a moment of weakness and in their drunken state, Andrew and Lorraine kiss each other. But Lorraine realizes what they’re doing is wrong. She tries to stop the kissing. But Andrew continues and becomes aggressive. He forces Lorraine down on the bed and rips her clothes off. Lorraine screams and begs for her brother to stop.

BACK TO THE PRESENT

Andrew confesses that they were at Lorraine’s Old Party Building. They all (Andrew, Lorraine, Scott, Nick, and Charlie) got drunk to comfort Andrew, who was just dumped by Daphne. Lorraine was trying to be a good sister and comfort her brother. And one thing led to another and...Everyone asks, “And?” Andrew proceeds to sob and confesses that he forced her.

CUT TO FLASHBACK

Andrew is raping Lorraine, who is too broken by this to stop him.

BACK TO PRESENT

Andrew confesses that he raped his own sister. This disgusts and disturbs everyone. Andrew sobs and says that he has lived with this secret for so long and that it has been haunting him ever since. Kathy says that explains why she left the first time. Because everyone remembers that it was after Andrew and Daphne had broken up temporary that an emotional Lorraine ran off for a few years before returning. Andrew says that he’s so sorry for what he has done to her. He claims that he never meant for that to happen. Daphne forgives him, saying that they all done Lorraine wrong.

Nick welcomes Andrew to the Club of “Lorraine Lovers”, which makes everyone glare at him angrily, including his own son. Realizing what he had just said was wrong, Nick apologizes for saying it. Rey says that now that they know their sins, they know why they’re being targeted. She says that they should come together to defeat this motherfucker before he kills everyone. Billy agrees, taking her hand. Scott comes next to them, putting his hand on her shoulder, and says that he’ll fight to the death to make sure that Rey, George, and the rest of the family is safe from this asshole.

Nick comes next to his son, putting his arm around him, and says the same for him. Andrew says that he’ll redeem himself for what he done to his sister. For his sister and for his family, he’ll stop this killer from hurting everyone. Especially Rey and George. Everyone gives Andrew a smile, indicating that they forgive him for his major sin. Daphne says that she’ll be the best auntie and mother by protecting George and Beverly from the killer. Clarence states that he fought the bloody war in Vietnam (he was eighteen in 1967) and he will continue to fight for his family’s safety. Anton says that he’s going avenge his father’s murder. And with that, the entire Carter family declares war on Ghostface.

## Chapter 13

NOTE: The beginning of this chapter is concurring at the same time as the previous chapter. I couldn’t fit it in the previous chapter as it was getting too long. So here’s a cute opening between George and Beverly.

As the police are investigating Charlie’s murder and Rey is reading out everyone’s sins, both Beverly and George are hanging out in George’s bedroom. George is extremely scared of something bad happening now that he’s seen Uncle Charlie’s dead body. Beverly comforts him and tells him that she won’t let anyone hurt him. George asks if she promises and Beverly confirms that she promises to protect him. The cousins hug each other. George tells Beverly that he loves her and Beverly tells George that she loves him, too. Cute moment.

REST OF THE CHAPTER.

The next morning, George is at school at his desk. He’s trying to color inside the lines of a picture. But he’s struggling. Seeing this, Melissa comes up and helps him. She takes his hand and helps him color within the lines of the picture. Eventually, George is able to do it by himself. He thanks her for helping him, staring into her eyes. This is more than just an average crush. A part of George inside his very extremely young heart is falling in love with his teacher. She plays along and smiles back at him. She rubs his head as she moves on to help another student.

WE DISSOLVE TO -- LUNCH TIME.

George comes into Melissa’s classroom. Melissa is smiles and asks him if he’s ready for their lunch together, which George confirms that he is. It’s tradition for them to have lunch together everyday. They sit down together at two desk in front of each other. Melissa asks him what he has for lunch. George names each food as he pulls them out; Peanut butter and jelly sandwich, pringles, cookies, and Capri Sun. Melissa pulls out a salad, saying that is all she has. George offers her his cookie. But Melissa declines this, saying that is his cookie, calling him a sweetheart.

George, of course, mistakes the meaning behind the name calling. He feels like she's his girlfriend. He smiles at her. He's trying to imitate the smiles that he has seen Billy give to Rey. The two have lunch together. The P.E. coach, ALEX WISHER (23), walks in and asks Melissa if she was wanting to have lunch with him. But Melissa says that she promised George that she'd have lunch with him. She tells him that she'll see him at home for dinner tonight. Wisher nods and smiles at George before leaving. George turns to her and asks Melissa who that is.

Melissa sees the look on his face. She realizes that something that she must be honest with him. Melissa takes a deep breath and confesses that Alex Wisher is her boyfriend. George is heartbroken by this. He says, “But I thought that I was your boyfriend.” Melissa smiles and says that he’s an adorable and sweet little boy. But he’s too young for her. An offended George declares that he’s six years old, which Melissa points out that he’s still a child. This hurts George, who says that he loves her. Melissa says that she loves him, too. Just not the way that he thinks that he loves her. Melissa says that she’s his teacher and that teachers and students cannot be together.

George begins to cry. Melissa feel so bad for this. She begs him not cry. She tries to hug him. But George moves away and runs away. Melissa begs him to come back. But George runs out the door. Melissa feels terrible and horrible for breaking his little heart. A crying George barges through the main entrance of the school and runs out to his usual bench. He sits down and looks at his drawing that he drew of him and Melissa. He continues to cry as he rips the drawing into pieces. He sobs uncontrollably. Feeling unloved and feeling ugly. His very first crush has just broken his heart.

At the Carter's, Rey comes into George's bedroom to find him crying on his bed. It breaks her heart to see her "little boy" heartbroken. She comes in and cuddles with him on the bed. She tells him how sorry she is over what he just went through. She tells him that it wasn't meant to be. George states that he loves Melissa. But Rey says that he just only thinks he does. She assures him that he's going to fall in love with many times in his life. She says that he'll have his broken many times. But assures him that this happens to everyone in their lives.

George asks if it ever happened to Rey. Rey confirms that it has happened. She tells him about the time that she was eleven when she had her first crush. His name was Christian Lennox. He was popular and all the girl loved him. Everyone wanted to be his friend. He was older than her. She was just getting into middle school while he was about to go to high school. She says that she approached him one day and confessed her feelings for him. But that he and his friends, including a girl that he was with, laughed at her. She states that she was extremely humiliated and heartbroken over it.

George asked her if she got over it. Rey confirms that she did, stating that he'll get over his sadness, too. She assures him that he'll be okay. Rey and George hug each other. She kisses him on the head. They tell each other that they love each other. They cuddle and fall asleep together on his bed. A sweet moment between a big sister and her baby brother.

## Chapter 14

Nick and Billy are in Nick’s car. They park in a parking lot and get out. They join the rest of the family, whom all appear to be sad. Anton is the saddest one of the entire family. All of the guys are wearing suits and the women are wearing skirts. They’re preparing for Charlie’s funeral. The funeral commences. The entire family is together. Everyone is crying. Anton sits in the middle as the immediate kin of the deceased. As the funeral continues on, we see Ghostface's legs walking across grass. He is nearby the funeral. Out of sight of those attending the funeral. Everyone is oblivious to his presence.

We PAN UP to get a good shot of Ghostface watching the funeral from afar. He's waiting to make his move. The Priest finishes his religious speech. He asks if anyone has any words to say about Charlie, adding that his son would appreciate. Nick is the first to get up to the podium to speak. Nick tells everyone that Charlie was his best friends. When he first met him, Charlie was so shy that he didn't say much of anything. Nick thought that Charlie didn't speak English. But they just started talking one day and became best friends. Nick starts to cry and claims that Charlie was his brother. He loves him very much and will miss him.

Suddenly, they hear Ghostface’s voice say out loud, “You won’t have to miss him for long.” Suddenly, a knife is thrown into Nick’s chest. He collapses to the ground. Everyone turns around and sees Ghostface at the end of the aisle. Everyone screams and runs away. As they do, multiple people are killed by Ghostface;

The first victim is stabbed in the chest. The second victim’s chest is sliced opened. The third victim tries to fight Ghostface. But he’s stabbed multiple times in the chest. The fourth victim, who is in Ghostface’s way, get his throat slashed. Two men, whom have guns drawn out, tell Ghostface to stand down. But Ghostface kills a fifth victim and throws him at the gunmen. This makes the gunmen drop their guns and fall on the ground. The first gun man attempts to grab his gun. But Ghostface stomps on his face, making the first gunman his sixth victim. The second gunman grabs his gun. But before he can shoot, Ghostface throws his knife into his face, making him his sixth victim.

Meanwhile, Billy is crying over his father’s unconscious body. But Rey, Scott, and Clarence pull him away, telling him that they have to go now. Billy relents and runs with the family. Meanwhile, Ghostface has just stabbed a seventh victim. He approaches a couple. The husband tries to protect his wife. But the husband gets his face slashed. As he goes down, Ghostface slams the knife into the wife’s head. This makes the husband and wife his eighth and ninth victim.

Bob hurries Andrew, Daphne, and Beverly into the van. Andrew gets into the driver’s seat. Daphne holds out her hand for her father to grab so she can pull him into the van. However, as soon as Bob grabs his daughter’s hand -- Ghostface throws his knife into Bob’s back. Daphne screams over this. Knowing that he’s going to die, Bob tells his daughter to go. Andrew drives off as Bob falls to the ground. Ghostface approaches Bob and pulls his knife out of Bob’s back. He turns Bob on his back to face him. But it’s over for him. Bob Price, father of Daphne, father-in-law of Andrew, grandfather of Beverly, and a friend of the Carter family, is dead.

We CUT TO later -- The police, including the temporary appointed Sheriff is investigating the carnage left by Ghostface at the cemetery. The body count is counted as ten victims; Bob Price and nine other victims who attended the funeral. A paramedic shouts to the Sheriff that Nick is still alive but that he’s in critical condition. The paramedic says that Nick has to go to the hospital if he is to survive. The Sheriff orders for the paramedics to take Nick to the hospital immediately. The paramedics hurry Nick onto a gurney and load him into the ambulance.

As the ambulance drives off, the Sheriff looks at the ten covered bodies. He is devastated that his town is under attack by a vicious killer. It is because of this murder spree that he is even Sheriff with the murder of Sheriff Charlie Rodriguez. The Sheriff prays to God that the killer is caught soon before more people are killed.

## Chapter 15

At the hospital, Nick is connected to machines. Billy is by his side and holding his father's hand. The machines indicated that he's alive and in stable condition. Rey is sitting next to Billy, holding his other hand. Rey tells Billy that Nick is going to pull through. Billy says that he hopes so. Billy explains that when he was fifteen, his mother died in a car accident with his stepfather while he was visiting Nick, who then got custody of him. Rey puts her head on his shoulder. Rey says that they have something in common now. They've both lost their mothers and stepfathers. Billy nods. He kisses her head.

Kathy is outside of his hospital room talking to Clarence, Andrew, and Daphne. Kathy explains that the doctors say that Nick lost a lot of blood and almost died. But that he will survive. But he will have to stay at the hospital for a while. Clarence sighs in relief and thanks God that he will survive. Andrew states that he (Nick) could have been killed over this. Kathy tells Andrew and Daphne that they should take George and Beverly to the house. Andrew and Daphne agree to this. They take Beverly and George and leave the hospital together. Clarence and Kathy stay behind with Rey, Billy, and Anton.

That evening, we find Melissa and Wisher at their house. They’re having dinner together. Wisher asks Melissa how day was. Melissa says that she went shopping around and visited some girlfriends at the Mall. Wisher says that sounds good. Melissa asks her boyfriend what he did today. Wisher says that he volunteered to help out at the school with some students and their parents for an event. Melissa says that sounds like it was fun, which Wisher confirms that it was fun. Wisher asks if the little boy that Melissa had lunch with the other day was George Carter. Melissa confirms that he is.

Wisher says that he heard about what happened with the family from when Charlie was murdered. Wisher states that it’s a tragedy, which Melissa agrees with. Melissa states that George is a special sweet boy. By how Melissa talks about George, Wisher senses something in his girlfriend. Wisher asks if she’s wanting a baby. Melissa thinks for a moment. She smiles and nods her head, confirming that she’d love to have a baby. Wisher says that he’d be willing to be the father of her children if she wants that. Melissa confirms this.

We CUT TO -- Melissa and Wisher having sex on the bed. Melissa moans loudly, begging him to go harder, which he does. They both moan and rock the bed as they are getting extremely hot and heavy in the bed. Eventually, both have orgasms, which makes them both moan loudly. Wisher stops and gets off of her. He lies down next to her as they both take deep breaths. They’re both exhausted and sweaty. Melissa says that she hopes that got her pregnant. Wisher says that he hopes so, too. Melissa asks if he’s going to stay in bed. Wisher confirms this, saying that he’s too tired. Melissa says that she’s going downstairs. Wisher says okay.

Melissa gets dressed and leaves the bedroom. Wisher falls asleep. As he does so, we DISSOLVE TO -- Later. Wisher is sleeping on the bed. He is awoken by Melissa screaming from downstairs. Wisher jumps out of bed and runs out of the bedroom. He runs downstairs to find -- Ghostface using a doused cloth to knock Melissa unconscious. Wisher yells at Ghostface, who then carefully releases Melissa’s unconscious body. Wisher tackles Ghostface. The two fight it out. Despite Wisher being a large and muscular man, Ghostface isn’t that easy to fight off. But neither is Wisher. The fight can go either way.

Eventually, Ghostface gets the upperhand. He puts Wisher in a headlock. Wisher struggles to get released from his grip. Ghostface proceeds to strangle him. But Wisher is still too strong to hold for long. So not willing to take any risk -- SNAP! Ghostface has snapped his neck. Alex Wisher, boyfriend of Melissa, is dead. Ghostface releases his body and moves over to Melissa, who is still unconscious. Ghostface drags Melissa’s unconscious body off screen.

## Chapter 16

Rey, Billy, and Anton leave the hospital as the night arrives. Anton gets a text message from Heather, who tells him that they’re having a party at Thomas’s house and for Anton and Billy to come join them. They need to be distracted from the murders. Rey, Billy, and Anton agree. So they decide to go Thomas’s house. As they drive off, we find another car following them. Who is this and why is he following them? Meanwhile, back at the Carter house, Kathy is tucking George and Beverly into bed. She kisses them goodnight. After Kathy leaves the bedroom, George turns to Beverly and tells her that he’s scared that the scary man will get them. Beverly tells him that she won’t let the scary man get him. They cuddle and fall asleep together.

At Thomas’s house, Thomas, Sabrina, Heather, and Vic are hanging out and drinking. Anton, Billy, and Rey arrive. Vic is upset when she sees Billy and Rey together. Heather is surprised to see her boyfriend and friends here. She said that she thought that he was going to be too busy mourning his father and all to come. Anton reminds her that she sent him a text. A confused Heather checks her text messages. It turns out that her phone did send him a text message. However, Heather claims that she didn’t send it to him. Vic confesses that she did. Everyone asks her why. Vic says that she just wanted to see Billy and didn’t think Slut Jr. would come along.

Rey scoffs and shakes her head. Billy becomes upset with Vic and tells her to fuck off. Everyone glares at Vic, telling her the same with their eyes and facial expressions. Realizing that nobody wants her around, Vic gets up and walks off. She says, “Fuck you all!” to herself as she grabs a bottle of wine from the table. She walks out through the backdoor. Thomas suggests that since the three are here that they might as well stay and hang out. Rey, Billy, and Anton agree to stay. Anton sits with Heather and they share a beer together. Thomas hands Billy a beer and Sabrina hands Rey a beer. The main three drink with their friends.

Meanwhile, out in the backyard, Vic is walking around while drinking. She is talking to herself, cursing over Billy and Rey. She proceeds to call Rey a slut, boyfriend stealer, and a bitch. She then starts calling Billy names for choosing Rey over her. She suddenly hears something within the trees. She asks who is there. But she gets no response. Curious about this, Vic walks into the section of trees and looks around. But she sees nothing and nobody. So she shrugs this off as probably a squirrel. She turns around to find -- GHOSTFACE. She gasps in fear. But before she can scream, Ghostface covers her mouth and stabs her multiple times in the chest. Vic falls to the ground. Victoria Kennedy, ex-girlfriend of Billy and the bitch of the story, is dead.

Back at the Carter house, the house is dark and inactive. That is because everyone is in bed. Clarence and Kathy are in their bedroom. Andrew and Daphne are sleeping in the spare bedroom. George and Beverly are still asleep in George’s bedroom. Down in the basement, the door is being unlocked. The door opens and Ghostface enters. He finds the stairs and goes upstairs to the kitchen. He leaves the kitchen and goes through the living room. He finds the stairs to the second floor. Meanwhile, Beverly gets up and leaves George’s bedroom. She walks across the hall to the bathroom.

Upon Beverly closing the bathroom door, Ghostface reaches to the second floor. He stares at the bathroom door, realizing that he wasn’t seen. He turns to George’s bedroom and walks in. George is sleeping. Ghostface quietly approaches the sleeping boy. He douses a cloth with chloroform. He places the doused cloth over George’s mouth. He wakes up from this. He is frightened when he sees the “scary man.” But he cannot scream due to the cloth covering his face. George is rendered unconscious. We CUT TO -- Beverly leaving the bathroom. She looks into the bedroom and finds that George is missing. Before she can react, Ghostface sneaks up behind her and covers her mouth with the doused cloth.

We CUT TO -- The party at Thomas’s house. Anton and Heather are sitting on a couch, drinking beer and watching TV. Thomas and Sabrina are making out on the other couch. Sabrina suggests that they take this upstairs. Thomas agrees. So Thomas and Sabrina runs upstairs to have sex in his bedroom. Meanwhile, in the backyard, Billy and Rey are walking and talking together. Rey tells Billy that she just wants the killings to be over. Billy says that he does, too. He tells her that they’re going to fight this. They will stop the killer together. Rey and Billy hug and kiss each other. They continue walking, passing by Vic’s hidden body, which they don’t see.

As they continue walking away from the house, we see Ghostface coming out from the trees where he hid Vic’s body. He sneaks away from behind the couple and enters the house through the backdoor. In the living room, Anton says that he’s going to get another beer. So Anton gets up from the couch and walks into the kitchen. He opens the refrigerator and grabs a beer. After closing the refrigerator, Anton turns around only to be stabbed in the stomach by Ghostface. Anton is in too much pain to scream. He can only slightly gasps. Anton falls to the floor.

The impact of Anton falling gets Heather’s attention. Heather runs into the kitchen and sees Anton bleeding on the floor. Before she approach him, Ghostface jumps up behind her. Anton tries to warn her. But it’s too late. Ghostface grabs her from behind and stabs her multiple times in the chest like Halle’s death in Scream 2. Anton is so shocked to scream or cry as his girlfriend is murdered in front of his eyes. Heather Thompson, girlfriend of Anton, is dead. Ghostface releases her body. He turns to Anton, who is so injured and traumatized that he passes out.

Upstairs in Thomas’s bedroom, Thomas and Sabrina are having sex. They are moaning loudly. Ghostface comes up the stairs. He can hear the loud moaning of Thomas and Sabrina. Ghostface quiety sneaks into the bedroom. He sees the couple fucking on the bed. So Ghostface quietly approaches them. Sabrina finally sees him. She tries to warn Thomas. But he doesn’t stop. So Sabrina pushes him up. An upset Thomas asks her what the hell her problems is. Ghostface stabs Thomas in the back. Sabrina screams over this. Thomas’s body falls off the bed and onto the floor. Thomas, boyfriend of Sabrina, is dead.

Sabrina continues to scream as Ghostface holds her down to prevent her from running away. They struggle for a bit. Then Ghostface proceeds to stab her multiple times in the chest. Then to silence her, Ghostface raises the knife up in the air and slams the knife into her skull. Sabrina, girlfriend of Thomas, is dead.

## Chapter 17

In the backyard, Billy and Rey are walking back towards the house. They are holding hands and discussing the things that they need to do to prepare for the worst if Ghostface continues his attacks on their families. They notice some squirrels and other animals eating something by the trees. Curious over this, Billy and Rey walk over to see what they’re doing. To their horror, they find -- VIC’S CORPSE. The animals are eating sliced up skin and drinking/licking her blood. Rey says that the killer must be here. Billy says that they gotta warn the others. So Billy and Rey run back to the house.

They run into the house where they find Anton and Heather’s bodies. They check up on Anton, who is still alive. Billy tells him to hang on. Rey sees Ghostface sneaking up behind Billy. She warns Billy about the killer. So Billy turns around just in time as Ghostface goes to stab him. However, Billy dodges it and Rey tackles Ghostface. Billy attempts to help but Ghostface whacks him, causing him to fall to the floor. Rey kicks Ghostface is the balls, causing him to grabs himself over the pain, and then she punches him in the face. Billy and Rey join each other as Ghostface gets up. Ghostface raises his knife at them. But before he can stab them --

BANG! BANG! BANG!

Ghostface falls to the floor. Billy and Rey turn to find that their rescuer is -- SCOTT. He runs to the young couple and asks if they’re okay. Billy and Rey confirm that they are. Rey, Billy, and Scott check on Anton. Scott tells him to hang in there. The three hear footsteps running away from behind them. They turn to find Ghostface running away. Ghostface runs out of the house. Scott runs out to chase him. He tells Rey to call 911. As Scott runs after the killer, Rey calls 911, and Billy stays by Anton’s side. Billy encourages his friend to stay with him and to hang in there. Anton tries to stay awake but is struggling due to the amount of blood loss.

WE CUT TO LATER AT THE SAME SCENE

The paramedics load Anton into the ambulance and drives off. The bodies of Vic, Heather, Thomas, and Sabrina are lined up and covered in white sheets. Rey, Billy, and Scott tell the police what happened. Scott informs them that he chased the killer but that the killer got away. Billy and Rey hug Scott and thanks him for saving them when he did. Scott tells him that he’s glad that he got there when he did. The Sheriff says that they can leave since there is nothing more that they can do for tonight. So Billy, Rey, and Scott leave in Scott’s car, confirming that Scott was the one who followed Anton, Billy, and Rey to the house from hospital at the beginning of the previous chapter.

Scott, Billy, and Rey arrive at the Carter house. They walk inside to find Clarence, Kathy, Andrew, and Daphne all crying and horrified. They hug all Billy and Rey. Rey tells them that they’re okay. Clarence informs them that Beverly and George have been kidnapped. This shocks and horrifies Rey, Billy, and Scott. Rey proceeds to cry over her failures to protect her baby brother, whom she promised to protect. Scott asks what happened. Andrew says that the killer must have grabbed the kids while they were all asleep. Rey’s cell phone rings. It’s from an Unknown Caller. Her very first phone call from the killer.

Rey answers the phone. It’s Ghostface, who tells Rey that it’s time for the unveiling of the Ghost of Lorraine Carter. Rey asks what he has done to George and Beverly. Ghostface tells her that he has them in a special place that meant a lot to Lorraine. Ghostface says that if she wants to see her brother and cousin alive, then she is to come to this place. She can bring whoever she wants, as long as Andrew accompanies her. Rey asks where. Ghostface says to Lorraine’s Old Party Building. Ghostface says see ya soon. Then hangs up.

Clarence asks where the bastard took the kids. Rey informs them that they’re at Lorraine’s Old Party Building. Scott and Andrew says that they know where that is. Rey says that anyone can come but Andrew is required to come along. Andrew agrees to go. He turns to his wife and asks her to stay with his parents while he goes to save their daughter and nephew. Daphne begs him to be careful, which Andrew says that he will. He kisses his wife. Scott and Billy say that they’re coming along. They don’t want anything to happen to Rey and Andrew. So it’s agreed upon and Rey, Andrew, Billy, and Scott leave together.

In a bedroom on the second floor of Lorraine’s Old Party Building, we find both George and Beverly tied to chairs. They regain consciousness. They call out for help. The door opens and Ghostface walks in. He says hello to the kids and apologizes for the inconvenience. But says that they are needed for the final act of this little game that he’s playing with Rey. Beverly and George begs him to let them go. Ghostface says that they are needed and that they need to understand the seriousness of this game. So he pulls in -- MELISSA, who is crying in fear for her life. George is horrified when he sees his crush being held hostage. He begs him to let her go.

Ghostface says that he needs Melissa to be an example for George to learn how this game work. He claims that George needs to understand what is going on and why it’s happening. He states that people lose those that they love and they die. It’s time for George to understand this. Realizing that she’s about to die, Melissa tells George that she loves him. George tells her that he loves her, too. And with, Ghostface stabs Melissa in the chest multiple times. George and Beverly scream and cry over seeing someone getting murdered. Melissa’s body falls to the floor. Melissa Howard, George’s teacher and first crush, is dead.

George and Beverly continue to cry in horror over this. The murder of his first crush devastates George. Ghostface says that he hopes that George understands now how serious this is. People he knows and loves are gonna die for their sins against his late mother. Ghostface walks off, leaving Melissa’s body in the room with the kids, and slams the door shut. George and Beverly continue to cry. All George can do is stare at his crush’s dead body.

## Chapter 18

Rey, Billy, Andrew, and Scott arrive at Lorraine’s Old Party Building. Rey and Billy are seeing this place for the very first time. But Andrew and Scott are reminiscing the time that they came here to party after Daphne dumped Andrew many years ago. Andrew expresses his confusion why this place was chosen and why he was needed. Rey says that she doesn’t know why. All she knows is that she needs to go in there and save her little brother. Scott says that she should let him handle the fighting part. Rey says that she made a promise to George so she’s going to fulfill it and that nobody is going to stop her.

Rey attempts walk into the building. But Scott gets in front of her and tells her that he made a promise to her mother after meeting Rey at the funeral. Scott promised her mother’s soul that he’d protect Rey. Scott then says that since he has met her, he has felt so much love and pride for her that he hasn’t felt for anyone ever in his life. Rey asks why. She asks him why she is so damn special to Scott. Scott sighs and asks her if she remembers his major sin towards Lorraine. Rey confirms that she does, reminding them that it was for sleeping with Lorraine and keeping his visit with her a secret from the family. Then Scott reveals -- That visit resulted in -- REY.

Rey, Billy, and Andrew are shocked by this. Rey looks into Scott’s eyes. They have the same eyes, same determined look, same of almost everything. Rey attempts to ask Scott something. “Are you..my…” but she cannot complete the question. But Scott confirms that he is. Scott Lane is Rey Carter’s father. Rey proceeds to cry at the realization that she’s been in the presence of her father all this time. Scott tells her that ever since he realized that she was his daughter, all he’s ever done was watched over her, protected her, and provided for her by giving her the job at the WAVE. Rey smiles. Scott and Rey -- Father and Daughter -- hug each other. Scott tells Rey that he loves her. Rey tells her father that she loves him, too.

Scott suggest that they go and save George and Beverly. So Rey, Scott, Billy, and Andrew walk into the building. They call out for George and Beverly. The kids can hear them for the bedroom. They start shouting that they’re “IN HERE!” The foursome some follows the sounds of their voices. They find the door and kicks it. Rey, Billy, Scott, and Andrew finds them. Andrew runs to his daughter and hugs her. Rey runs to her brother and hugs him. Andrew and Scott unties Beverly while Rey and Billy unties George. The kids are untied and everyone hugs each other in relief. Scott suggests that they find the bastard once and for all. They all agree to this.

Rey, Billy, Scott, Andrew, Beverly, and George head for the door. Suddenly, they hear a familiar voice say, “Nobody is going anywhere.” They hear a gun cocking behind them. They turn around to find -- MELISSA HOWARD, who is NOT dead, pointing a gun at them. Rey, Billy, George, and Beverly are shocked by this. Rey and Billy are shocked to find that George’s teacher is the killer. But George and Beverly are confused. Beverly reminds Melissa that they saw her get stabbed. Melissa lifts up her shirt, revealing her chest, which shows that there is NO STAB WOUND. Melissa says that children are easy to fool. George asks Melissa if she’s the scary man.

Melissa confirms that she is the scary man. Rey asks her why she is doing all of this. Melissa says to avenge both herself and Lorraine’s tragic life. Melissa says that everything that everyone in Lorraine’s life did to cause Lorraine’s pain also caused her own pain and misery. Melissa says that by people making her feel like a slut, Lorraine felt the need to hide and abandoned her own children. This means that Melissa Howard is Lorraine’s oldest child and Rey and George’s older sister. Melissa says that at the time she was born, Lorraine wasn’t ready to have kids yet. So she was sent to a foster home all her life.

But what hurts the most was knowing HOW she came into this world. Rey asks her how. Melissa turns to Andrew, staring him into his eyes, which have the same color as her own eyes. Melissa says that it makes her feel disgusted of herself to know that she was conceived and born through rape and incest. Everyone gasps in shock at the realization of what Melissa just revealed -- Melissa Howard is Lorraine and Andrew’s daughter, conceived in this very room from when a drunken Andrew raped Lorraine. Andrew is horrified by this. His own daughter, produced by a sin and mistake of his, is the killer.

Melissa says that her being a Carter is the reason why she didn’t kill George and Beverly. They are her siblings through her mother and father, whom were siblings themselves. Rey asks that if being family is the reason why she didn’t kill the kids, then why did she kill her own mother. Melissa says that because their mother, Lorraine, suffered for a lifetime. George and Beverly are just kids. Beverly is now the same age as Lorraine was when her life was destroyed. So Melissa believes that Beverly and George can be saved from that same fate now. But that Lorraine, who lived with that pain for twenty-six years, was unsavable. So Melissa did what she believed was best for their mother -- to end her misery by a mercy kill.

Melissa declares that it’s time for the next victim to be punished for their sins. We stay focused on Melissa as she aims the gun at the remaining survivors. She pulls the trigger. BANG! Who did Melissa shoot? Rey? Billy? Andrew? Scott? George? Beverly? Find out in the next and final chapter of this story.

## Chapter 19

Melissa Howard, George’s teacher and first crush, has just revealed that she’s the Ghostface killer and the daughter of Lorraine and Andrew, through an incest rape act against Lorraine by the drunken Andrew. Which means she’s Rey, George, and Beverly’s sister. Melissa has the remaining survivors, Rey, Billy, Scott, Andrew, Beverly, and George, at gunpoint. Melissa declares that it’s time for the next victim to be punished for their sin against Lorraine. The adults shield George and Beverly from being shot. Melissa pulls the trigger. The bullet hits -- ANDREW -- in the shoulder. Andrew falls to the floor. Beverly screams and cries out for her father.

Scott pushes Rey, Billy, and the kids behind him as he pulls out his gun. Scott runs to the side away from them and fires at Melissa. Scott and Melissa exchange gunfire at each other. Both miss each other each time. They both eventually run out of bullets. They charge at each other. It’s a fight between a Badass Killer and a Badass Hero that we all love. (BONUS: Imagine Daryl/Norman Reedus from TWD fighting her) Scott and Melissa punch each other. Melissa eventually gets the upperhand and knocks Scott out. With Scott being next in line at being her intended target, Melissa goes to stab him.

However, before Melissa can stab him, Rey tackles her. This causes Melissa to lose her knife. Now it’s a chick fight between sisters. They punch each other, scratch each other, pull each other’s hairs, etc. They’re both equal in their fighting skills. Melissa gets the upperhand and strangles Rey. Billy attempts to save Rey. But Melissa grabs her knife and stabs Billy in the side. Billy goes down. Melissa tells Rey that if she won’t join her in her mission to bring peace for the wounded souls of the dead (such as Lorraine), then she shall join her mother in death. Melissa raises the knife up. She goes to stab Rey. However --

Scott, who has regained consciousness, stabs Melissa in the back with his own knife. Melissa falls off of Rey and appears to be dead. Rey and Scott hug each other. They check on Billy, who signifies that he’ll be okay. Suddenly, Melissa rises back up. Scott tries to stop her. But Melissa slashes his chest and throws him aside. Melissa turns the knife to Rey and Billy. Both are vulnerable and helpless. They don’t have time to react. George, Beverly, and an injured but alive Andrew can only watch helplessly. As Melissa swings the knife down at them -- SCOTT JUMPS IN THE WAY -- GETTING STABBED IN THE CHEST.

Angered by her father being stabbed, Rey jumps and tackles Melissa to the wall. Because Scott’s knife was still in her back, by slamming Melissa against the wall, it made the knife go through her back, impaling through her heart, and the blade coming out of her chest. Melissa gasps in pain. Rey and Melissa, long lost sisters, give each other a final stare into each other’s eyes. Then Melissa’s eyes rolls back. Melissa Howard, daughter of siblings Lorraine and Andrew, older half sister of Rey, Beverly, and George, and the Ghostface killer of the story, is dead.

Rey rushes over to her father and holds him in her arms. She calls him Daddy. Scott looks up into her eyes. He tells her that he’s sorry for not confessing to her earlier. He just wanted to protect her. Rey says that he doesn’t need to apologize. Rey begs him to hang on and that she’ll get him to the hospital. But Scott knows better. He tells her that it’s too late and that the wound is too bad. Rey won’t accept this. But Scott turns to Billy and tells him to take care of his daughter. Billy nods as he begins to cry. Scott turns back to his daughter, who proceeds to cry, and tells her that he loves her. Rey tells him that she loves him, too.

Scott smiles then goes silent. His eyes rolls back and it’s over. Rey begs for her father to stay with her. But it’s over. Scott Lane, father of Rey, former lover of Lorraine, friend of Andrew, Nick, and Charlie, and the “foster son” of Clarence and Kathy, is dead. Everyone proceeds to cry as they mourn the brave and mighty badass Scott Lane that we all grew to love. Scott made the ultimate sacrifice for his daughter. Rey hugs her father’s dead body as she proceeds to sob hard. The injured Billy scoots over to her and holds her. They mourn Scott together.

WE DISSOLVE TO WEEKS LATER

Andrew, Nick, Anton, and Billy all recover from their wounds. The ten survivors are Rey, George, Beverly, Billy, Anton, Clarence, Kathy, Andrew, Daphne, and Nick. Rey and Billy continue to have a strong and loving relationship. Anton moves into his own apartment not far from the college that he, Billy, and their now deceased friends have been attending. With the death of Scott, the ownership of the WAVE goes to Rey as she’s his next of kin. Rey and George continue their strong bond as siblings. They become closer to Beverly as well.

Andrew faces the tragic fact that his sin of raping his own sister led to all of this. His own daughter, conceived by his sin of rape, was responsible for the murders, which in turn means to him that he is solely responsible for all of this. However, that would be the case if Melissa was the sole killer. George and Beverly do point out that they saw Melissa get “Stabbed” by another Ghostface killer. And remember when Melissa told Wisher that she went out to the mall with her girlfriends on the day of the massacre at the funeral? Well, her girlfriends confirms this. Melissa was out with friends when Ghostface slaughtered the funeral attendees.

The autopsies and evidences proves that Melissa did kill Lorraine, her husband Bob, Mandy McGuire, John Riley, his wife Janet, Robert Millerton, and Charlie Rodriguez. But everyone else; Both Mandy’s lover and husband, Bob Price, All of the Funeral Attendees, Vic, Heather, Thomas, and Sabrina were all killed by someone else. But who and why?

We find Clarence in his private office. He pulls out a box and looks through the contents. He pulls out a picture. It’s a picture of him and an unknown mysterious woman with brunette hair. Clarence looks very cozy with her. Although he was much younger, the date on the picture is from the year 1987 -- While he’s married to Kathy, whom he married in 1976. Clarence cheated on Kathy with this woman. But what does she have to do with the killings? Clarence looks up at us with a guilty look on his face.

TO BE CONTINUED IN PART 2.

## Trivia

* As this is a remake, many similiarities to it's original will remain. With many exceptions.
* There is a role reverse between the two main characters.
* Beverly (Max/Sadie Sink) is a composition of Veronica and Jeff, who are absent in this story. She will serve as a secondary final girl.
* Anthony Ruivivar and Santiago Segura, who play father and son in Scream, play father and son in this story as a MAJOR BELOVED Father and Son pair. Although their relationship isn't established until the original's version sequel.
* I was going to give Beverly a love interest. But I don't know if I can fit it in this time around. Frankie Monroe, Beverly's love interest, may come in the sequel.

## Body Count

NOTE: Like in The Three Ghosts (Part 2), Ghostface dies before his final victim succumbs to his wounds. Ghostface's death is more instant than the final victim. The final victim slowly bleeds to death.

## Survivors

With 24 main characters declared, there will be a total of 10 survivors. Only fourteen will be killed. Until the end, I am only confirming that Rey, George, and Beverly will survive this story.

## Killer

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