Brett Blakley Files (v1) (Original/Unedited)

\***The following work is that of the original Brett Blakley Files (previously named "The Brett Blakley Stories"). This story was written in 2011 and has been edited significantly over the years to follow. "Version 1" is what the stories looked like in their original form, with absolutely no edits having been put into place. Please note that this story is very outdated now, with hardly any parts of it still being canon to the S.S.C Series.\***

okay
the story begins with brett obviously. so it was a normal day and brett was
just walking down the hallway when there was a crash and a kid came running
down the hallway and a kid actully yelled it is machine, get out of here! I was
shocked and had no idea what was happening and he ran up grabbed me and choked
me and slammed me against the wall. then he asked me are you afraid yet? i said
in your dreams freak. then he head butted me and it didn't hurt when he hit but
the back of my head hit the wall and it isn't good to get hit in the back of the
head. there were no teachers or kids around. then all of a sudden he was
tackled by an unknown hero. I watched as the hero took a book and smashed him
in the head ! >:D next thing i knew the kid was there he looked just like me
actully but without the acne and his hair was smoother ;). he said hello my
name..........is tim allender, i'm awesome. and i go like well i guess you're
right sir. He looked at me and glared don't ever talk to me or i swear i will
chop you up like a fish!!!!!!!!!!! just kidding he said. good.
Next day:
in the morning i ran into him and he said hey how is your head? i said the
usual, full of thoughts of awesomeness and adventure. he said i see, what is on
your mind? i said, nothing. He said do not be embarressed sometimes thoughts are
a bad thing unless they are thoughts of awesomeness and adventure then he
winked and said you're a pretty cool guy. i don't even know you wow. yeah well
i can tell we're going to be great friends then we came up with our secret
handshake. :D
Next day:
The next day was saturday and i went to his house to spend the night. i had all
my stuff, when i got there he said cool. did you bring the swim suit? yes i
did. Gooooooooooooood. now go change we're going to do a work out. yes sir as
you wish i said. i got changed and then we were in the pool lol. i was already
embarressed because when i jumped in i swallowed water and sank and he saved me
again :p. i was weak at first. okay so i couldn't breathe. and he was turned
around talking to his mom and then he turned around and saw the bubbles and
figured i was just holding my breath. then then when i was about to drown he
realized something was wrong and jumped in and rescued me :D. Thank you i said
gasping for breath. don't mention it, i'm awesome. yeh i figured i said. okay
so as i was saying i need your help, i said why? well this is kind of
embarressing but i have a dream that i coudl breathe underwater.......so if you
would, please hold me under the water and if i struggle it means i need a
breath and it didn't work. there are other better dreams than this but i just
always thought it was possible young apprentice. i'm sure. so we started. i
held him under and after the 1st min he didn't struggle and i thought, is it
possible? then at 2 mini saw a bubble and then he struggled and i let him up.
he says he was holding his breath then when he need a breath he would take it
under the water but then if it didn't work which of course, he is not stupid,
he knew it wouldn't work his dream was so uh not possible to come true. he gave
up. he had another dream.
Next day:
i can't breathe!!!! :D just kidding lol
okay now back to the story. At school the next day his popularity was growing
as mine was born. it wasn't for me hanging out with him. i just learned how to
be cool and i took after him. i will show what i did if i can
remember.....can't really exactly remember sooo i will try to remember when i
see you. :D okay his dream was to be the most popular kid in
school.....................there was an enemy though.......machine........he
was not popular but kids were so frightened of him they had to say he was
popular soooooo...ya know. i had a dream too. it was too be his favorite friend
and too see machine thwarted by my own hands 3:). tim understood that
popularity was not the most important thing but he just so awesome and he
wanted to kick machine out and return peace. so he wanted to be popular for
good :).
Next day:
my other dream was to run 10 miles or more. oh yeah the big challenge. so i
tried i made it to 4 miles then said i can't do it!!!!!!!! fell down and sobbed
gasping for breath which isn't a good feeling. he ran over and pulled me up and
said it is okay. you failed but you can always try again. you will try again.
and you will succeed. never never never never never, lots of nevers later, ever
give up. ya hear me brett? sir yes sir!!!!! and i ran again without a drink and
made it to 5 miles. then i tried again after that with a drink and got 7, then
8, then 9 then 9 and a half :( i couldn't breathe and began to collapse at 9
laps my last round then 9 and a half i just finall fell over and the time cam
and game me that drink like there was no tomorrow. lol fyi he let me start from
where i stopped when i had to take a breather.
Next day:
i woke feeling sore but didn't care i went and did 50 pushups right in front of
him, through pain, through sweat, through anger. I didn't care. I did this in
gym right in front of him because h told me to and everyone just stopped and
stared. then we did chin ups. i got like 28. can't do that now :(. sit ups, did
about 70 in a min. stretch, i don't remember. etc. great day, i felt good tim
was proud. On the mile i came in 1st with about 6 min or less i don't remember.
proud was tim once again.
Next day:
tim met me in his neighborhood after school. He looked me in the eye and said
it is time. yes sir i said. but for what exactly. there i something i never
told you. it is about machine. he has kids that back him up when in danger.
many have done battle but never succeeded. machine has been knnown to kill i'm
afraid too. only 1 i know of, can't tell you the name though, bet he will kill
more if we don't do something. we could be next but................who cares?
now it is time to start training. we have a battle to win. machine will fall at
your hands not mine. you have proven yourself to me, and i give you the honor
to defeat him. i nodded and said............thank you sir..........i will not

our
2nd installment begins now. okay okay here is what happened. okay so it was a
normal day at school when a kid came running down the hallway and some kid
yelled aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh who is that????????????? then he ran up to me
and i said hi how are ya? and he said oh i'm doing fine. and then i game him a
piece of pocket lint and he ran away in happiness and i was a hero that day.
time said well brett you have finally defeated someone without my help.
thanks!!!!!!!!!!! :D. you're like my best friend man. you're like the most
awesome person i know. uh that was tim saying that to me. and i was like yeh i
know but not as awesome as you!!!!!!!!!!!! oooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you're
right man!!!!!!!!!!!!! yeyah!!!!!!!!!! and then i said hey i can read a book
upside down. and he said oh yeah prove it!!!!!!!!! and so i read,a apeofinaofinaeofaejfoaienfaoiefn.
wow not even i could do that you're so awesome. thanks haha i know i am. haha.
Next day:
okay so yeh what an awesome day. and then i said haha, i can sing twinkle
twinkle little star backwards. and i did hahahaha! i can't anymore heehee it
was hard. oh yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm so awesome!!!!!!!!!!! B| This day tim was
at my house and we were eating. then he started making weird movements with his
hands and saying aoeinfaeociefoianc;oaeinfoaef. haha his face started to turn red
and i'm like how did you do that? then 1 min later i just came up and said oh
that is a classic buddy you crack me up and punched him in the back and he was
better. i was choking!!!!!!!!!!! oh normally when you do something like that
you're joking so uh sorry. brett you're a hero.........again!!!!!!!! i'm
amazed!!!!!!! then i died. and he said
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! then i said haha
gotcha!!!!!!!!! oh yoooooooouuuuuu!!!!!!!!! hahahahahahahaha oh i'm so awesome
i said. no you're not, just kidding hahahahah!!!!!!!!!! oh you, tim!!!!!!!!!!!!
hahaha!!!!!!!!
Next day:
well i hope you enjoyed that intro of our good old times ;) so now here we go.
brett!!!!!!!!! you wimp!!!!!!!!! get down on the ground and give me 1000 pushups!!!!!!!
yes sir!!!!!!!!!!!! by the time i reached like 30 he said just kidding just
give me 100 if you can. thank you sir. i did 120!!!!!!!!!! and then when i was
done he took a big rock and started tossing it around in his hands then punched
it in midair and it hit me in the chest. be ready slowpoke!!!!!! yes
sir!!!!!!!! oh my god look out brett!!!!! what??????? i turnded around and a
dog came up and bit my head off!!!!!!!!!!! just kidding!!!!!!! okay then
another kid threw a rock at me and i dodged it and time dodged it and it hit
some old dude crossing the street. :| what do you think we should do about him?
and i said i know!!!!!!!! old dude helping powers activate and i ran over and
took him to the nearest gas station. you should get better here old man. thank
you lad. just kidding i just took him back to his house. and he said he didn't
need help. Brett!!!!! you're a hero!!!!!!!! wow!!!!!!
Nest day:
i'm dying!!!!!!!! my friend said named nick and i said whatever and walked away
and i never saw him again. welp back to the story. tim and me did another work
out and then we started getting into training for fighting but it is a boring
part so i won't tell you. or is it just a trade secret of the tim clan? yeh it
is. awesome. everything about tim is awesome. it is. trust me. so this machine.
has he really ever killed someone. i saw it with my own eyes but nobody
believes me. well i do and i don't even know what happened yet!!!!!!!! well
then i'll tell you. it doesn't look like we have time to talk right now though.
why? because i don't feel like it. oh. well whatever you say time mah boy. well
i'll see you tomorrow, bye tim!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bye brett. watch your back.
On the way hom:
I was on my way home when some random kid came running over and said blah eoanca;eoifasejfao;scn;
aaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!! woah!!!!!! and i slapped him alittle to hare across
the face and he started crying ran away and slammed his head into a tree. then
his mom came and said oh its okay i don't like him anyways. okay thanks. so i was
on my way back when i hear something and i turned around and this kid was
slowly walking towards me and then when i saw him he got on his legs ran and
tackled me and i punched him. then he punched me but he punched my hand because
i caught it and twiested it then kicked my foot under his feet and said
die!!!!!!!!! just kidding about the die part :p. then i pinned him and he said
oh no you're too strong!!!!! and then he said let me go please!!!! not till ya
tell me why you attacked me!!!!! then he just said THEY are coming back!!!! not
the they but those guys ya know? then he ran away :)
Next day:
i told tim what had happened and he said well it looks like machine plans his
return earlier than we thought. we must act now before it is too late. so we
had me and tim and some other random kids i didn't know. except i saw nick
there then he just made a weird face at me then ran away and tripped saying i
will have my revenge!!!!!!!! weird. okay then ready boys? yes sir!!!!! then
they attacked it was unexpected. we thought we were the ones getting them not
us :O. then i remember just before we battled tim yelled for the
chinchllas!!!!!! if i havn't told you he had a pet chinchilla i'm so jealouse.
so i saw like 300000 of ours fall in like 2 sec and then me and tim went to
town and made it rain on all the villagers. by that i mean beat everyone up. so
then since the fighting is boring and long i will skip.
Many beatings later:
then machine himself came up and said enough!!!!!!!! and even our men backed
off. :O intimidating. Give me tim allender!!!!!!!!! And tim stepped up and said
ready for the beating of your life time. i don't know but you look like you
already have. well i just got punched 50 times total and i'm still standing so
bring it on!!!!!!!!!! fine!!!!!!!! and so they clashed. tim got hit in the
face, then the chest, then the stomach, then the head. and then after that he
\*DASHED\* attacked him and pushed him into a tree and he said oh that almost
hurt haha. and then head butted him and he fell nearlly instantly. i saw
machine had a knife and saw him getting ready to reach for it but i jumped and
kicked him in the head!!!!!!! yeyah!!!!!!!!!! so he turned and said don't mess
with me boy!!!!! you fight for the weak!!!!!!! that is why you lose!!!!!! and i
said that is not decided yet. and the battle of the ages began.
well how long have you been waiting for this moment? me? a long time!!!!!!! :D
yeyah!!!!!!!! here we go!!!!!!! he tried to punch me and i punched back and our
fists collided and it hurt really bad. really bad. probably not now but still.
and he grabbed me and choked me again just like in the beginning of the 1st one
and then threw me (again). he came and kicked me side and i stood up and
punched him in the face!!!!!! >:D then he fell down and i came down and
punched him like the speed of light over and over again in his chest and by the
time i was done he could hardly breathe. and then he said i'm
finished!!!!!!!!!! then i think he moved away some other time after this. and i
was the hero. my dream came true!!!!!!!!! the end of the battle. haha there was
lots more but i didn't feel like telling it this story is proing to be long
enough. i will tell you some other time.
Next day: brett this is the last time you will ever see me. what? yes it is. no
way!!!!!!!! yes it is. you're kidding!!!!!!! yes i'm not. :'( and so he said
well brett i have much to tell you but dominic will have to learn in the 3rd on
behind the tim. so he better be patient. brett do not mourne for my
disapearance for in real life i'm always with you in your memories. wow i never
thought of it that way master. so then he just walked away and i didn't see him
and then on my way home i saw a kid floating in a lake and then a note said,
good bye brett you were great to me. signed tim allender. and so then in his
honor i ran those last 1 half miles and smiled thank you tim allender i will
never forget you and i will pass this information on to others. B dog signing

well
it is over and i don't care. soo today i'm not too popular because kids are
just jerks these days. including dominic. so that is depressing when i was with
time we were populer not anymore. time said in the good old days anybody that
messes wiht this kid will be dishonoring me, and you don't want to do that. and
worse he said he would want to hae a chat with you face to face at the park so
if anybody wants to say this isn't real or pick on me if time comes back you
won't last much longer and your dreams will be crushed. sigh i can see it now,

George!!!!!!!!!!!
You do push ups like a girl!!!!!!!!!!! But sir!!!!!!!!!! Okay do you want to
skip the push ups? Yes sir, I would like that very much said George. Okay then
do 50 crunches!!!!!!!!!!!! 1 2 3 4 5. You can only do 5???!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can
do like 700000000000000000000!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're such a weakling!!!!!!
Then I took him and threw him at a tree and he got a splinter in his eye and he
ran home crying. I am never going to be able to train this kid. Not even Tim
could handle him. If he were with Tim he would be dead in less than 5 seconds.
So I went home and told my mom that I had stayed after school to finish some
homework with my teacher. I wonder why she didn't tell you. Okay son. Well,
good thing you got that over with.
Next day:
I woke up to George poking me saying sir i can do it!!!!!!!!! No you can't
George!!!!!!! Just give up!!!!!!! I won't!!!!!!!!!! Fine I'll just train you
some more!!!!!!!!!!!!! NNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! But sir I can't do that
just let me fight THEY!!!!!!! You'll lose then. Here I'll get a fight for you
of a THEY that quit. I'll train you 1st though. Okay the 1st thing you always
need to know is what kind of moves you're good at. Always have good balance and
move your feet along with your fists to keep it one smooth motion. Like this, I
stood with a stance for 3 seconds then stepped quickly with my feet and punched
George. Be ready George!!!!!!!!! I could betray you any minute and you would
just be standing there thinking about why shoop da woop killed your father but
i don't care!!!!!!!!!! I am taught from Tim Allender and I have to pass down
what he has taught to someone!!!!!!!! But sir I just can't do it. Then why do
you want to fight????????? I just believe. Wow I didn't know people like you
could believe.
Next day:
The next day I went to school and saw a kid being bullied and his girlfriend
was there. His name was Jack. The kid he was bullying was my buddy THE RANDOM
KID I DON'T KNOW. I walked up and said, hey don't bully that kid. Jack turned
and said what are you going to do about it? I'm going to give you the count of
3 before I kick your butt. Psssssssssssshhhhhhht okay then lets go. I right
away dashed into him and pushed him and he screamed like a girl and fell then i
jumped on him and just because it was so easy pulled his hair till he started
crying and ran away. His girlfriend just walked away laughing. Saying to her
friends I'm breaking up wiht that guy ahahahahaha. He is such a bully but he is
such a wimp. Then George came up adn said wow why did you do that? Because it
was the right thing to do George. When you're done training you should know the
difference between the right things and the wrong things.
Next day:
I will never forget how scared Jack sounded when I beat him up. It was hilarious
:D. I was training George at my house and we were trying to stay up all night.
Before I trained George I wanted to tell him a little more about the return of
THEY and THEY'S past. The more you know the better. Okay George are ya ready to
learn about THEY? Yes sir. Alright, well then THEY was a dangerouse group of
kids that would always pick on kids. Their leader was machine. Machine was
actually the 2nd most powerful. But their strongest soldier was eliminator.
When Tim 1st encountered THEY were bullying a huge group of kids, punching and
stealing their books and lunchmoney. But Tim had eventually had enough of that
and took down all of them and then formed his own group called..........the
FIGHTERS (not really sure if that was what it was called just putting in a
name. In fact I don't even know how Tim formed it. Or how he had gathered all
these kids I think he might've just not had time to tell me what the name was).
So I took down Machine and Tim was thought to have died after the battle. He
dissapeared. Extra bonus fact I forgot the mention but the body I saw in the
lake in part 2, it wasn't Tim. It probably wasn't human or it wasn't even a
body probably, mabe I was just hallusinating. But yeh that is some of the
history old George old buddy old pal.
Next hour:
I was training George in the feild when I heard a rustle behind us and a rock
flew and would've hit me but hit George instead because he saw it and ran up
and said i got it i got it and it hit him in the head. Then ELIMINATOR came out
of the bushes and tackled me. I punched him but it just seemed like my fist hit
metal. George was laying down moaning like a baby as usual as I told him to
help me get this kid off. I was punched in the stomach 3 times then my arm.
Then I stood up and he kicked my feet out from under me and I landed on my butt
and he jumped and slammed his fist into my chest. I didn't think I could win
this fight. I was going to lose after all those years of fighting, training,
and defeating machine and his men. I couldn't believe I was about to fall at
the hands of my best friend. :O
Next day:
George stood up and just looked around and saw ELIMINATOR and yelled
finally!!!!!!! He just started punching the air saying you like that? His elbow
popped after punching a little to hard for his liking. He tripped and fell in
pain then started punching himself yelling stop betraying me stop betraying
me!!!!!!! I was taken down by ELIMINATOR and I wasn't liking it. I stood up
again but he grabbed me and dragged me to a tree and threw me against it. Then
he took me again then actually climed the tree and threw me down from it. I
landed on a huge rock the size of a rock. After all that training and I'm
letting this happen. Then he headbut me and for once it actully hurt my head.
Seems like my head is made of stone but his is made of iron. I have no idea why
he attacked but he just walked away and let us struggle with our injuries and
George was pretty much fighting his own hands.
Next day:
I woke up as sore as if I had just recovered from a 500000000000000000000 mile
drop. Yeh ELIMINATOR was my best friend when we were young but one day he
started bullying me and others and he just wasn't the same anymore. So we had a
pretty good rival in sports. I won most of the sports but he won all the
fights. It was a never ending battle between good and randomely evil. I hate
those kinds of battles. ELIMINATOR embarressed me in front of tons of kids.
Like a true Tim I didn't need revenge. Out of nowhere George came up kicked me
out from under my feet and punched me and started yelling remember when you
threw me against that tree and a splinter got in my eye? This is what you get
in return!!!!!!!! Then he stood up and let me stand and I said you're ready for
the next step in your training.

"George
you've come a long way." "Was it just me slamming you against a tree
and causing you to get a splinter in your eye?" "Partly. I just
started working out by myself because by myself i was at peace and i could
concentrate and eventually i told my mom to get some dummys and i got the hang
of it, said George." "So you didn't like working out with me?"
"It was okay but i would rather fight you and do pushups and running by
myself, said George" "Very well then." "The time when you
did beat me up the 1st time i wasn't ready but i am now so it won't be so easy
this time." I waited for at least a min but he didn't attack. "I'm
not going to make the 1st move, said George." "You do it, said
George." "Alright then, said Brett." I quickly just ran forward
and when he attempted to punch me i slik and grabbed his leg and he fell and i
sprang up and pinned him down to the ground. "Round 2, yelled George in
frusturation." Round 2 was a tie becuase i dodged and blocked all his
attacks. Round 3 George just randomely walked up grabbed me and i let him pin
me. tie.
Next day:
"So long thanks for all the fish, you make my every day, sang
George." Wrong words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "It was close
wasn't it?" "The 1st part was right, said Brett. It goes like this.
So long thanks for all the fish, so sad it should come to this and so on. Uh
Brett why do we really care about this? I-I-I-I don't know. Well okay then.
Yeah okay bye. Bye. 5 min later they saw eachother in language class and the
said oh hey i havn't seen you in a while. After a class of torment and being
made fun of Brett literally lost his nogin. He grabbed his desk and spun it
around wacking every single one of those jerk in the face!!!!!!!! The teacher
just said yeah, and ran away. Then he stormed out and left the school and ran home
with George running after him yelling. He caught up to him and said, what was
that? I'm tired of these kids!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I want them to pay!!!!! Well you
need to calm down. Okay you're right George. See ya tomorrow.
Next day:
Eliminator and his master corruption walked out of school with a grin on their
face. Brett has really lost it this time, said Eliminator. If he doesn't calm
down he will end up destroying himself once and for all. This is good because
it saves us the time of doing it, said Eliminator. GOOOOOOOOOOOOOD, said
Corruption. In a few days I want you to make that maggot squirm. Then I want
you to bring him to me so I can crush his soul!!!!!! Yes master. Meanwhile
Brett was coming back to school and everyone was pretending as if yesterday never
happened. Brett looked and actually saw George doing his workout successfully
without him. He didn't interrupt him and just walked into school with a lonsome
sad look on his face. He sat down next to his buddy Time that was gone. So he
sat by himself in real life wishing Tim was there. Then he walked to his locker
and just put his stuff in there and walked back home so he could have more time
to recover from yesterday. Good bye George.
Next day:
Brett still wasn't feeling well and stayed home again. George was very lonely
that day because Brett is the only person he could ever talk to and hang out
with because nobody else wanted to hang out with him because they were jerks.
They just didn't understand. He walked to class and sat by himself and did his
work like a good lad. It was lunch time and he was still sitting by himself. He
ate all alone while kids threw food at him and laughed. But George had a very
long temper. He just ingnored them and did what he came to do. Only one time
was he about to punch a kid but he changed his mind. I sure hope Brett gets
better soon he thought. Back at Brett's house Brett was getting worse and
worse. His temper had reached its limit and he couldn't take it anymore.
Next day:
Brett was walking down his street missing school again. He saw a little girl
and she dropped her lolly pop on the ground and she ran to get it but he just
kept on walking and stepped on it crushing it causing the girl to cry. He just
kept on walking when she got her mom to yell at him. Then he found an alley. He
made himself comfortable in the deepest darkest part of it. Then he began to
slowly fade away out of his mind and then before he knew it he began to draw
weird symbols and twitch and make weird noises. When he was done he had written
(with his hands in the dirt on the ground) I'm coming for you weakling. Then he
tried to run out but he was tackled by an unkown enemy. You have messed withe
for the last time Brett, yelled iliminator, now you're gonna get the beating of
a life time!!!!! What did I do to you??? You destroyed my childhood memories
and ruined my life!!! Now I'm gonna destroy something of yours!!!!!!!!!!!
The beginning of the end of Eliminator:
Eliminator had Brett pinned down and he had no way to escape. It is about time
somebody strong enough took you down for good Brett! The reason I attacked you
a few days ago was because I wanted to scare you. It obviously worked but not
good enough. Somehow Brett summoned up all his anger and pushed Eliminator off
and he slammed against the wall. Then yelling he grabbed him by the head and
started slamming it on the wall. It is gonna take alot more to defeat me
Brett!!!!!! But you won't just like last time and not any other time!!!!! But
this time will be different, yelled Brett. He punched him 5 times in the
stomach. Brett didn't know how but he had somehow gained strength and
Eliminator didn't seem so tough anymore. Eliminator threw a punch at him but
Eliminator was using full time anger. As was Brett but Brett was more
controlled. He simply just dodged the incoming fist and grabbed it and twisted
it. Eliminator fell over and Brett came down on top of him punching him over
and over again. Eliminator then rolled them outside the alley and there was a
nearby hill. They rolled down it just as a surprised George walking to school
appeared and ran after them. When they reached the bottom Brett headbut him and
sprang up as George secretly snuck up behind them and grabbed a rock. Brett
punched him more and more and Eliminator continued to fail dodging his fists.
Then just as Eliminator was about to be defeated George finished him with the
rock by banging him on the head. Wow not even I saw you there. You're getting
better and better. And so are you Brett.
Next hour:
Both George and Brett stayed home from school that day. But they went to
Brett's house. George asked Brett why Eliminator continued to ambush him. It is
because when we were friends he had a camera with all his child hood memories.
It contained pictures of his girlfriend and family who are dead now from a
bombing in some part of the world, I don't remember. Mabe if you see him you
should ask him. Lucky him he survived. But one day I accidently destroyed it. I
was walking at a very high spot in a hotel. Eliminator let me borrow it. I was
taking a picture of the veiw from so high up but I dropped it and it landed and
exploded into millions of little peices. He went crazy with anger. Just like I
almost did. But getting him out of my life for some time now mabe has put me at
ease. Other than that I can't think of any other reason. Close by a stalker was
stalking them. Not stalking them but spying. It was Corruption. Laughing, he
said not for long Brett. Soon I will tear you apart.

So
after my battle with Eliminator I was confused of why Eliminator attacked me
twice. He attacked me the 1st time to scare me but the 2nd time was the real
deal. Was there someone he was working for? Uh yeah said Brett's conciounse.
Shut up conciounse nobyd asked you, said Brett. Well sorrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyy.
That's okay said Brett. It was 5 months later. George had made amzing progress
in the amount of time. Pretty soon he would be ready to take on any enemy. Mabe
even me, not gonna happen. He is never ever ever ever ever ever ever ever ever
ever gonna beat me. I'm so confident. But then again he did beat me up pretty
bad one time. But that was when I wasn't ready. As I pondered through these
thoughts I was so deep into it that I ran into a boy the size of me but more
muscular it appeared to be. Oh now I got you right where I want you!!!!!!!! Who
are you? Oh my name is Jack remember? You humiliated me in front of everyone
and made my girlfriend break up with me. Jack.....not familiar.
Aaaaaaaggggghhhh!!!! Whatever I'm just gonna beat you up okay? Yeah okay-wait
its 3:00 Spongebobs on!!!! See ya!!! Can't miss this episode!!
Next day:
The next day was Saturday and George came over to have fun and fight me. Since
he works out on his own now which has proved well to him. George right away
when I opened the door for him jumped in and tried to trip me but I twisted and
grabbed him by the back of his kneck and squeezed. He grabbed my arm and
twisted it and I would have fallen but I am very good at keeping balance so I
stayed on my 2 feet and rammed him onto the floor and finished him off with a
punch in the chest whcih is his weakest spot. You're still getting better and
better George. I've seen improvement with you too master. Much much much more
than you weakling. I'm not weak then prove it. Strength is decided by your
will, attitude, knowledge, wisdom which I guess is the same thing as knowledge,
and pooooooowwwwwwweeeeeerrrrr!!! Most of all sportsmanship. I have seen
progress in all 7 of them. Mabe someday you'll be as good as Tim. I doubt I
will you even said it yourself a few years back. That was before George, now
you're probably stronger than machine was. Not to mention you are very good at
using the element of surprise. Probably the most important thinng when it comes
to fighting. That is the only thing? No, I have seen many improvements and
skills in you, I'm just letting you find them for yourself so you can better
understand it.
Fun at Brett's house continued:
Brett, who are you? What do you mean, said Brett. I mean that you told me your
name and then just said okay lets get started I think you'll find out more
about me as we go. But could you please explain to me something about you so I
can actually know the person that trains me a little better? Yeah okay, I'm 12,
I was born in March 29, 1998, I was trained by Tim Allender which you already
know, I am an A hon a roll student, never have missed a day of school in my
life, and I'm awesome. Oh well that is very interesting. Mabe someday I should
write a biography about you. Then the 2 started laughing at George's joke that
wasn't even that funny when Brett ruined it saying, I don't get it. Yeah me
neither, said George. Good idea though, said Brett. So one thing I should know
is how good are your grades? Well, my weakest subject is math which is actually
a B but everything else are A's. Well that is good that means you have a
strenth in your mind.
We finished palying the wii and eating, then we watched a movie and then we
decided to stay up all night. We grabbed a sheet of paper to think of some
ideas for a new story the 2 of us were going to write called The Legend of Uh.
When Brett started drifting away again and making weird noises and twitching,
drawing weird symbols. Brett? Oh my god Brett are you alright? But he continued
to write not paying attention to anything. Then George noticed he wasn't
breathing and he wasn't in control of his actions. Brett's face was tuning
pink. George slapped him over and over again then thumped his chest but nothing
worked. After his last attempt his face was turning pale and soon he would run
out of air. When he finally came out of it laying on the table breathing
deeply. They looked and written down on the paper was, I may have been bullying
someone and I admit it was wrong. I was wrong. But think about it Brett. What
do you think the bullies feel when you fight them off? Or totally embarress
them in front of everyone? All they feel is pure hatred. I'm gonna get my
revenge for me and all bullies around these parts. Watch and weep as I turn
YOUR life inside out!!!!!! Wouldn't you want a little REVENGE? Yes? I would
think so. Once I'm through with you your little cruel heart won't be able to
take much more and you'll die!!!!! HAHAHAHAHA good luck weakling.
Next day:
Never in Brett's life was he so scared. Except for that time when he was
dropped int the middle of the Atlantic Ocean. So Brett was walking George home
which was not very far from his. When out of nowhere George was hit in the head
with a rock. Wow dajavoo. Then out of nowhere Jack sprang out and said, HA! Now
I truly got you where we all want you!!!! Where we all want me? What is that
supposed to mean? It means I have heard many of my bully friends say wow I wish
Brett weren't around anymore. Brett gasping not truely believing it said
nnnnnnooooo!!!!! Oh yes. Now we will truely finish you off. Now I will destroy
all your loved ones like your family, Madi Taylor, Logan Jones, all your other
friends, and especially your girl friend.....Jessica!!!!! Oh well now you just
told me your plan so now I'm just gonna stop you now more than ever. Then he
charged and pile drived in the chest. Running all the way to the gorgeous Logan
Jones's house with me running behind him. He opened the door to her house which
surprisingly wasn't locked. He stopped as I got there ans said ssssssshhhhhh she's
asleep. Right there laying on the couch was Logan Jones. I grabbed him and we
rolled down the yard and into the road and a car rushed by nearly breaking us
apart. Well now that I think of it I might as well destroy you 1st!!!!
The battle:
He kicked me and I fell down and he grabbed me and carried me all the way to my
buddy Dominic's house. I'll kill him if you don't surrender!!!!! I'll take you
down before you do anything Jack!!!!!! Oh but it will be different from last
time wimp!!! I can't wait to cut your throat!!! Hey that is cheating but I'm
still skilled enough to survive your terror Jack!!!!!! Lets see about that!!!!!
I pushe him and kicked him but like me he had good balance and he just punched
me in the face. Our strengths appear to be = but only one can rise as the
victor. You're right said Jack and it will be me!!!!!!!!!!! I jumped and kicked
him in the face and he fell and I stamped on his chest. He coughed and grabbed
me and pulled me down with him and I was again scared because he was choking
me. I couldn't esape from the death grip but luckily my trusty side kick George
came and punched him. Then they got in a tussel. George was obviously no match
for Jack. George NO!!!!! He's mine!!!! You can't defeat him. Jack took him and
squeezed him so hard his back popped and he lost the ability to breathe. Why
you little!!!!! And the final faze began.
The last faze:
I grabbed him and an unkown power came through me and I punched him over and
over again. But he grabbed it and threw me off and then came at me but I rolled
aside. I couldn't esacpe and he grabbed my arm and actully broke it. I was in
agony. I took my non punching arm and still wailed away at him. Not giving up I
kicked him and overcame the pain and punched him with my broken arm. I elbowed
him in the face. But then he choked me again. Wow he has an obsession with
choking people. I was finished. Gerge was unconcious and I had no rescue and no
energy left. Soon I would be a hollow shell along with everyone I loved. Then
George obviously faking it jumped up and banged him over and over again. Then
he said alright tie!!!!!! You win this round but you won't win the next!!!!!!
Fine!!!! I'm still not done with you Jack!!!!!!!!! If you come near them I'll
tear you limb from limb!!!!!! Wow I lost my cool there. Well I quickly
recovered and I was in a cast for a month or more the doctor said. Behind Brett
though as he was hugging his loved ones glad they were alive Corruption was
standing. Nobody noticed him. He said AAAAWWWWWWW so sweet but soon you will
all be dead. I won't even spare your pets.

I
had no idea what to do now that Jack had become so much stronger. I just know
that if I'm not careful I could end up like my old friend Nick. I was thinking
when George came up and said hey how ya doin buddy? Oh I don't know I just
fought off a gigantic Mallory beast. Oh that sounds exciting what kind of
creature is it? Oh it is a friend of mines sister. She is the fattest,
stupidest, ugliest, most annoying person you could meet, and shee likes Hannah
Montanna!!!!! How lame is that???!!!! Yeah said George. I hate her!!!! Yeah me
too. So uh Brett can I have another attempt to completely beat you up until I
punch a hole into you soul? Sure. Thanks said George. He attacked with a Mario
bros jump and landed on my head. AAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!! I yelled and fell down
with a mighty thud. How did you master that??????? I mastered it of course said
George. I'm not done yet said Brett, quickly rolling under him and grabbing his
kneck and pinning him down like always. He pushed Brett off. Woah you've never
done that before!!!! Then I realized I would have to use more force than I
usually did against George. George did the mario bros jump again but I spun in
the air and kicked him in the chest and dashed while in the air and smashed him
with my shoulder. Again George was defeated. He stood up and said you may be
able to defeat me but I can do this!!!! Then he jumped and jumped again and
again and again and again all in the air a few more dozen times. He landed on
me and it switched from him being ko to me ko. I looked up at him and said
you're ready.
Next day:
George now ready to face most of the dangers that were there to physically harm
him. Brett walked by George not saying a word and just nodded as he spotted a
kid being bullied and George took him down in less than 5 seconds. Brett on the
other hand ran away suddenly frightened of what he might have seen. Corruption
the most dangerous enemy they had had in the history of their whole lives was
standing right there. RIGHT THERE. He hid behind a pole then remembered what
Tim said, when afraid always jump in and give it a try. So he stepped out and
walked over to him and said, what do you want? But then he just turned and
walked away. As did Brett. Right away he felt a tingling in his chest and he
crumpled to the ground doing his drift away thing again. Writing in the mud
again. George saw and tried to snap him out of it. As you know he is not able
to breathe when doing this. So this is very dangerouse. When he was done 1 min
and 30 seconds later in the mud was a message saying, You weren't supposed to
see me!!!! I'm corruption master of evil, darkness and all of this world. (yeah
you're just a kid Brett would've said). You will die!!!! I will make sure of
that!!!!! Remember your good friend Tim? I was the one that got rid of him!!! I
pushed him in a lake and....I guess he drowned. So now I can once again defeat
you. What are you talking about nobody has ever defeated me except Eliminator
he thought. Yes Brett I'm your fathar. NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOO!!!!!! Just kidding. I'm
MACHINE. I WAS machine. This message ends here please leave or this mud will
turn to quicsand in 10 seconds.
Next day:
Brett was unable to believe MACHINE was Corruption the whole time. He was so
confused. He was angry about his classmates picking on him again and he didn't
talk to George who was upset about that. He went home writing a ver long story
for language class. At 12:00 at night he finished and looked out the window. It
was raining. He looked closely. He saw a figure out there. Then at the next
lightning flash the face of a deformed machine was against the window. Brett
screamed and stumbled out of his room. Mom? Dad? Nobody was home. Not eve Reid
or Alex. He ran to his mom's room and to hide. The next second he heard the
front door open. Why isn't the door locked he thought. He moved out to
investigate. There standing was machine. But then corruption simply appeared
there in front of him and said your job here is done. Yes master. For
somereason then he just walked into a lake. Now Brett!!!! Where are
you?????!!!!!
The battle:
Hi I'm right here. He spun around and faced me and I said, hey have I met you
before you seem familiar. Uh no, I'm gonna ummmmmmmmm kill you tonight okay?
Sure why not said Brett. Alright!!!!! Here we go!!!!!! Brett dashed into him
surprisingly being very effective and punched him into the ground as hard as he
could. Corruption cried out and then said you can't defeat me!!! I kicked him
and jumped off his body with bother legs pushing him backward but he grabbed my
legs before he went and we went together. We were rolling towards a lake. I
stopped us from rolling in and possibly drowning. Corruption tried to get the
roll going again but I pinned him down but he punched me in the chest and the
air was pushed out of my lungs. He started us rolling again but I stopped it
again at the edge. He yelled out obviously knowing that if we went in the lake
the battle would go much faster. I pulled us away and while I was pulling him I
saw George and for some reason I was shocked to see him and in my shock
Eliminator dragged us both under the surface of the lake.

The
battle:
I was somehow lucky to get a lung full of air before we submerged. But I can't
hold my breath underwater that long. We were also pretty deep when he lost his
grip and I had held my breath for 30 seconds. I already needed a breath of air
so I swam upward I made it but when I took a breath water poured into my mouth
and I choked and I was pulled back down. I was choking underwater now making my
air supply deplete rapidly. Corruption could obviously hold his breath longer
than me. I'm gonna get rid of you the same way I did Tim said Corruption. Wow
this fight had started out with me winning and now I lose from death of
drowning. I forced myself to stop choking and held it for as long as I could
but my lungs were stinging with pain. My head hurt and I couldn't breathe. Then
again who can breathe underwater? I know!!!!! I know, said a kid in the stands.
Shut up can't you see I'm telling a story? Sorry sir. Okay my breath had run
out and I was blacking out when George finally jumped in and pushed Corruption
away and I swam up and filled my lungs with air again.
The battle:
Well that battle could have ended really badly there. They surfaced and both
were running for me. George turned around and punched him in the face but then
Machine caught him and threw him. The battle had changed from me and him to
George and Corruption. He stomped on George and then he tried again but George
rolled over and grabbed his legs making him tumble. I watched wanting to help
but I was still getting my breath back. George got punched but then he jumped
over the other one and punched Corruption in the face. He then did a drop kick
and Corruption fell. George made one mistake. He jumped up too high for his
Mario jump move giving Corruption enough time to stand up. He caught him and
headbutted him. He was knocked out imediatly. Then Corruption tossed him into
the lake . If I didn't act George would meet the same fate I almost did. His
life was in my hands.
The final faze:
I ran but Corruption pushed me out of the way. I got up and this time dodged
him and dove in. I couldn't see George at first but then I saw his pale face. I
grabbed him and started swimming up. Corruption dove in after me but I let go
of George real quick and punched him in the chest. I grabbed him again and swam
up. I ran with him slung over my back to the playground. I swung up the ladder
and climed my way through to the highest spot and layed him down then jumped
down to face Corruption. His eyes were actully flashing red and he charged but
I grabbed a pole and spun around out of the way and he ran into it and I was
still swinging around it and I kicked him. Then I jumped up and it seemed like
he was a gigantic monster and he was banging up the place trying to get to me.
But I swung around and around to the real highest spot. It was higher than the
spot I put George at but I climbed onto the roof. I almost slipped from the
rain as lighting flashed all around us worrying me about getting struck.
Corruption climed after me snarling and roaring like a beast from another
dimension. I reached the tip and waited for him then I kicked him and he slid
down bringing me with him. I fell off and I would have began my long way down
but there was a pole and I grabbed it and swung back up. Now I let him come to
get me. But then I slid down and jumped off the roof landing on a bar after bar
after bar then hitting the bottom with a soft landing. He came after me but then
he was struck and he fell and hit a bar with his head and hit bar after bar
then landed very hard in the monkey bars. I climbed up to check him. He had
died in a terrible accident. That was not the way it was supposed to go. I took
him to the hospital along with George. Corruption was dead but George was just
knocked out and he would be fine.
Next day:
Me and George sat down mourning for Corruptions death even when he tried to
kill us. He battled me again. Doing his mario jump but I put up my had and caught
his foot and pushed him up. I had to catch him or he possily couldn've been
hurt from the fall. I put him down and pinned him there and he was done. Again.
Now all the danger is past us and Brett and his friends can live happily ever
after. Forever. Or is it?

Part
7:
Corruption is gone and now we can do the boogie woogie with Mr.
Walrus@hotmail.com! Uh that was random wasn't it? Oh yeah but back to the
story. All was at peace and they could all live happily ever after. Or can
they? As Brett told George sayings and taught him new moves he was unaware of a
Jack right behind them smiling in a way so evil that not even THAT GUY can
defeat it. Then he walked away quietly and STALKED them as they went into
school. When they first got in right away some stupid kid came up and said hey
Mr. S how ya doin? What is the s for, asked Brett. Stalk, and stalch, watch
whatever. Brett Grabbed him and punched him so hard he ran away crying with a
perminant black eye. George looked at him and asked why did you do that? It is
about time these idiots were taught a lesson he said. Idiots like me George
asked. Exactly said Brett. At that George just walked away with a frown on his
face. Peace will never come to me with these stupid kids around Brett thought
to himself.
School:
He took his stuff from his locker that was destroyed by all the kidsthat pushed
his stuff over and were mean to him. After class Brett was really ticked off as
he went home. He took a kid by his backpack and swung him around then threw him
in a lake. Drown if all I care he said to himself. Then continued walking
ingnoring the cries for help that he was able to hear somehow coming from
underwater. He looked back and the bubbles were coming up then they stopped
suddenly and he saw alot of red and then a huge tail come up. Oh he said then
walked away to his home. A guy say the kid get eaten and yelled, BIG FISH!!!!
Somebody help him! Well I could use some excitement for once, said Brett and
ran back and dived in. He found the kid being mauled by a huge fish. It wasn't
even a shark. He didn't think he would ever find out what it was. He grabbed
it's tail and dragged it up accidently leaving the kid and the man jumped in
and saved him before he could drown or bleed out. He walked home and saw a kid
celebrating about his new car. He walked up and punched a huge dent in it. Awww
come on man! He ignored him and walked into his home.
Next day:
George was walking to school when he noticed that Brett was not gonna show up.
Not this again he sighed. He was alone when he saw Jack and jumped into action.
What do you want, he asked. Easy there boyo. I was just walking to class. Okay
then. Thought you were up to something else, said George. When Jack was alone
he said to himself, I am up to something you little wimp he said. I could have
snapped your little kneck back there and nobody would know about it. Back at
Brett's house he was running a fever. He stepped out and the sun pierced his
eyes and his head burned from the headache he had then he felt his stomach boil
and burn and then you can guess what happened nest. Brett was not in a good
mood. He layed down on the couch playing some games. As he and Tim always said,
when sick don't waste your time sleeping, make it fun. No matter how fun Brett
wasn't getting any joy out of it his heart felt like it was scrunched into a
little ball then burned. He decided he would just get over it and mabe he would
stay his old self. MABE.
Next day:
Brett was going to school today and he was not happy about it. George came up
and said hey Brett!!! Feeling any better? I don't know he said. I don't think I
ever will. Well I'll make ya feel better! He jumped up ready to punch him when
Brett just grabbed him and punched him harder than usual. Ow man! Not so hard!
See ya George. A girl ran up to George and asked if he was alright. George
looked up saying, yeah I'm good. When he looked at her he almost drooled. The
girl said, hey you okay? My name is Samantha what is yours? Names George. Well
I gotta go. Okay said George see you around. Brett went to his locker and took
his stuff to class and did his work fighting back his anger. When school was
finally over the fight with anger left him exausted. He went home and found a
note at his door. He read it. It said, Dear Brett, I'm going to you buddy Tye's
house. I'm gonna beat him sensless if you don't hurry up. From Jack. He
crumpled it in his fist. Tye's house wasn't far from his. He knew that but he
couldn't remember where it was. The race was on.
The search:
He ran through the neighborhood looking for the right house. He had no idea.
After reaching the end of the block he stopped turned around realizing he was
going the wrong way. He ran down the road. He turned and a car was there going
at least 80 miles per hour. He jumped and pushed off it narrowly escaping a
painful death. He continued running and running. The entire time he hadn't
broken a sweat. He turned again and a dog jumped at him. It landed on him but
he didn't want to hurt so he held it back and rolled it off. He ran again with
it running after him. He turned and it jumped at his face. He bent back dodging
it then did a flip over it and grabbed it while he was upside down and took it
to the person's owner. Realizing he had just wasted alot of time he ran faster
than ever. He stopped wondering which house was his. Lets see what was the
adress again? 1243? No. Oh yeah it was 000000000! He turned and found it and
ran up and rang the door bell.

The
rescue:
I was sweating and My breath was coming quickly in short rasps. My head was
beating really hard and my whole body was pulsing with anger. Come in Brett
Blakley, said Jack. He busted open the door and yelled Jack show yourself! I'm
outside wimp yelled Jack. I ran out and found Jack smiling in an evil way and
behind him was Tye hanging by a rope connected to his diving board above the
pool. His face was barely above water. The worst part was that I saw the rope
was beginning to tear down the middle. If I didn't hurry my BEST friend could
have a water grave. Nobody messes with my friends I yelled and dashed into Jack
making him fall over. Then I kicked him in the ribs and punched him in the
chest causin him alot of pain. I grabbed him and threw him and he landed with
his back right on the diving board bending it down submerging Tye. I tackled
Jack off the diving board landing on land. For some reason though Tye stayed
the way he was and I realized the rope was getting ready to tear. I grabbed a
branch and wacked Jack with it about 15 times. when I was done he was screaming
with splinters everywhere sticking into his flesh. I slammed the branch onto
him then picked him up and threw him in the pool. I untied my friend before he
could run out of breath and as I was Jack surfaced asking for help. He was
crying for mercy, begging. No I said, a new Brett is coming. A new age!!!! I
stood there finishing utying him and pulled him up. Thank you Brett!!! I
thought I was a goner. My buddy looked terrible. He had a black eye, several
deep cuts and bruises. I'm really sorry he did this to you Tye. It is okay. I
was too late. Don't feel bad. George ran in and said Brett, what happened? He
ran to Tye and said, are you responcible for this? Shut up George!!!! You're
not my appretntice and you're not my friend!!!! I don't care if you cry, or
just plain die!!!! Get out of my life now!!!!! I punched him and he fell down
then I took the same branch I hit Jack wiht and slammed it hard into his gut.
Crying George said, fine!!! I will!!!! I'll run away and I'll never come
back!!!! Brett ran to his alone spot in the dark alley to find it was already
occupied.....hello there boy my name is DARKNESS.
Metting with Darkness:
Darkness? Yes that is my name. You look upset boy, what is wrong? I used my
anger to defeat a kid and I think I did the wrong thing. Whats worse is I just
lost my best friend, my apprentice. Oh well that is good Brett. Using your
anger is good for you...use it in all situations. You will become the more
powerful than you already are. My eyes felt heavy and I almost doubled over. A
huge pain came through my back and through my head to all over my body. So how
did it get to this point asked Darkness. Well first I said gasping. I met a kid
named Tim, he trained me, I defeated a kid named machine, I was then defeated
by a kid named Eliminator and took up my apprentice, that is George, then I
defeated Eliminator, then an old friend of mine named Jack that I beat up
really bad for picking on the kid came and nearlly defeated me, then I took
down the leader behind it all, Corrution. You sound very powerful said the
Darkness. I don't think I am not after what I just did. No Brett it is good.
Trust me. I knew you were coming here Brett. I came to help you. I came to save
you from Tim. Tim? Yes Tim. He has been against you the whole time. And to
think he was your friend. What lies. How could you know? I knew him Brett. He
didn't know me though. He is a ver bad person. Always tricking kids into the
wrong sides. Join me and you will be at peace. The pain got stronger and Brett
thought his whole body would tear. He was trembling and he looked down and
veins were bulging and he could see the blood moving through. Feel his insides
churn. Then he faded. Not breathing. Just twitching. No writing. Just twitching
and struggling for breath. Let it take you Brett let it into your soul. Brett continued
to fight but the more he did he would choke. He saw images. One was George. He
said that is what you get for doing that to me jerk!!! Why wouldn't it stop!?
He thought to himself, I'm going to die. Then he died. He died. Darkness sat
smiling. Then Brett woke up with a shock. Breathing hard. He was crying.
Remembering all the memories. He felt the tears fall down his cheeks. Why?! he
yelled. Then his memories darkened and all he could remember were the dark
ones. Especially the one that happened a few minutes ago. I understand now he
said sobbing. He looked up at his new master with red eyes. What do you wish
for me to do master? Oh just go along being mean to people...for now.
The end of a hero:
Brett walked out. Looking at all the people. He saw his family. He saw everyone
and he cried. All the memories...gone. Gone forever. No I have to forget all
that. I'm a truely more powerful than Tim could ever be. More powerful than
anybody can me!!! He saw the girls playing in the medows. He saw George and his
new friend Samantha. He overheard them. Samantha had just become his new
girlfriend. George was so happy he leaped for joy. When he looked across at
Brett and Samantha looked too. Come on lets go he said. They left Brett. Alone
with the people. He walked out and destroyed a new bike a kid got. Punched
younglings and beat up tons of people. George looked back and then ignored him
and walked away then Brett kneeled down. Crying his eyes out. Then he stood up.
Now!!!! A new age begins!!!! A new age of kids!!! A NEW AGE OF DAKNESS!!!!
The end.

part
8 time:
The beginning of our NEW story takes us to Franklin like the last one. Actually
this is the same series just a new Brett. He may never me the same again.
Darkness was in him now. Will someone put an end ot it before it is too late?
Or will the darkness consume Brett and every sing last one of us? Well we'll
find out. Agggggggghhhhhhh! A kid ran out of the woods towards the school
terrified. Kids looked at him wondering what spooked him. Then Brett, the new
one, punced like a lion and beat him up till all his hopes of what he would
want to be, or become, or dreams of doing something were crushed. George walked
by the gruesome scene with his new girlfriend, Samantha. Quit it Brett, said
George, or I'll beat you up. Brett looked up slowly with a smile on his face.
You truely have much to learn George. Could you ever beat me up when you were
my apprentice. No! Brett said while standing. He rushed up and tripped him
without George even laying a punch on him. He ran off to do more evil deeds
while George lay there and Samantha trying to pull him up. He ran up to the top
of a hill and they saw him beat a kid so hard he flew more than halfway down
the hill and landed with a sickening snap. This may be the end of all of us,
said George. All of us, asked Samantha. You gotta be kidding one kid could be
the end of all of us, said Samantha. It is darkness not one kid, said George.
Brett has been trained and manipulated by darkness. I don't think the old one
will ever come back.
Next day:
Brett lept dodging a fist from a kid he was picking on and kicked him into a
teacher. The teacher turned around and looked at the kid suspecting he had just
been assulted by a student and he was expelled from school. I'm unstopable
roared Brett. A shudder came through Brett and he almost appoligized but then
just turned away to see Darkness standing on a child who was about to get his
head crushed. Brett turned around to see George and Samantha looking at him he
just smiled his awesome evil smile and walked towards Darkness. Come on Brett
lets go pick on some of these freaks. I'd be honored said Brett. He ran to
George again and pushed him down then was getting ready to strike Samantha when
he realized...oh its a girl. What do I do with a girl. Then Darkness just said
strike her! Show no mercy! I pulled my fist back and thrust it forward but it
just stopped in midair. I can't hit a girl I said. Brett! You're too soft
yelled Darkness. But it is a girl.....it is wrong to do that. Brett you're evil
now get over it, yelled Darkness. I turned and smashed my fist on George
instead. He cried out and he tried to grab me but I kicked him before he could
do anything. Why do you pick on me asked George isn't there anybody else? I can
do whatever I want said Brett. Even kill a human soul but I'm not going to do
that yet. Darkness had left when Brett turned around to leave Greorge. Samantha
came up and told him to come back to them. Brett just pushed her aside and
everyone in his path banging them on their lockers and locking them inside.
Never would they be discovered till next year. I love this new me said Brett to
himself.
Next day:
Brett had a meeting with Samantha today. An unexpected meeting. A mission he
wouldn't regret. He wouldn't dissapoint his master this time. Brett had just
gone up to the bounty hunter rank with his new master. The only members were
them though. And nobody could stop them. I want you to call George at
Samantha's and cause her so much pain she screams till she is so out of breath
she needs an oxygen mask to gain it back again. That is pretty sever...but I'll
do it said Brett. He came out of the flashback of his mission briefing and rang
Samantha's doorbell. Samantha opened the door saying gosh go away Miles.
Oh...hey Brett. What are you doing here she asked nervously. Oh nothing. Just
thought I would make a visit. He took her and brought her to the sofa. They sat
down there and Brett dialed Georg's number. He answered saying hello? Oh hey
George. I'm here with your little girlfriend here. Get away from here snarled
George. I'm not gonna do anything to her I'm just following my mission. Hold on
don't hang up. Okay? said George. Brett leaned in and kissed Samantha on the
cheek. I'm sorry for this but I was assigned it and if I don't do it then what
will he do to the both of us? I guess I understand. You're not so evil are you.
Of course I am. Now lets begin.
OMG:
He pulled her close and said, hello George? Hey. Why did you call? shut up and
listen yelled Brett. He was breathing heavily fearing having to do this. All it
was was just one clean swipe to the face. Just one clean swipe. He pulled his
hand back and was about to slap her. Then George yelled and he slapped her
anyways. But really softly. I can't do it said Brett. You know I wouldn't. He
then just left the house Samantha picked up the phone and told George he was
gone. What was that about he asked. Nothing said Samantha. Nothing. Brett layed
down on his bed and fell asleep peacefully. But this was not going to be a
peaceful sleep. Here we goooooooooooooo!

The
dream:
Brett felt a pain jolt through him and he all of a sudden saw himself. Brett
looked at his body to see he was surrounded in a darke blue sort of color. The
other was a white and peaceful color. Come back to us Brett! Never yelled
Brett. Darkness will rule us soon....ver soon. And I will be his main servant.
Then I have no choice but to destroy you. Try me said Dark Brett.
Aggggggghhhhhh they yelled charging and wrestling eachother to the ground.
Light Brett pushed him off. He fell through a pit and would have landed in a
lava pit but he jumped of the wall to the other side and reached up to the
shocked Light Brett who thought the fight was already over. Darkness doesn't
just fade that easlily snarled Brett. Then he pulled them both over and they
landed in the lava and somehow it was just like water but not hot. Well this is
weird this is hot lava...but it is not hot. They still couldn't breathe under
it though. So that was the only advantage for both of them. They could drown
eachother. But Dark Brett got board under the lava and ran up the walls of the
pit and jumped up and threw Light Brett into a huge beasts mouth. Light Brett
threw out a hook catching Brett and pulling him in along with him.
Well this is just strange:
They landed and Dark Brett pinned light Brett into the beasts flesh. He sunk
right through leaving Dark Brett grasping nothing. He was shocked. Could he be
gone. Then the ground started to squeeze together and swish him around. Wow so
this is what it feels like to be in the stomach Dark Brett said to himself. He
sunk into the flesh to and well then the next second he tumbled out. Light
Brett tackled him and they were in a batlle field. Warriors were all around
them waiting for one of them to fall. Dark Brett grabbed Light Brett and
punched him in the chest and jumped off his head and smashed down on his head.
Light flashed and Light Brett was in rage. Now it was time to run. But Dark
Brett didn't. Light Brett punched him over and over again then tripped him and
pinned his throat to the ground choking him. But he pushed him off easily. Wow
this Light Brett is just as weak as he used to be. He laughed to himself and
headbutted him. Light Brett saw colors and almost blacked out. Here we go now!
Here we make our last stand yelled Dark Brett. Here Darkness takes over.
Darkness forever!:
Dark Brett closed his eyes and they appeared in a land of complete chaos. The
moon was crashing into the Earth pushing towards them. The water thrashing
around them and fires all around. Buildings falling. The sun beaming with light
burning all the lands but it seemed like they weren't able to be damaged by it.
Dark Brett threw a fist but Light Brett blocked it away. Gah gasped Dark Brett.
You won't stop me! I'm not just Darkness! I'm true power! Light Brett yelled
and pushed him into the wrekage. The moon reached them and they were crushed.
But this fight wasn't ending till one of them fell. Not by any of the backround
obstacles. One of them had to win one way or another. Dark Brett punched The
other and kicked him into a falling building. It fell onto the other Brett and
he appeared again the next second. He knew he was going to lose this battle.
But he would go down with honor. He charged Dark Brett but he just stuck out
his hand and caught him and swung him around. Then he threw him and jumped
after him and drove him into the Earth. Dark Brett looked to see Light Brett
pathetically trying to punch him but each blow was like a baby hitting an
adult. He was weak. Dying. Then his hear began to burn. Some how Dark Brett
beat him so hard whatever was protecting them from the obstacles was gone. He
choked on the poison in the air. There was actually no air. But Dark Brett was
protected. In the end I know you will do the right thing rasped light Brett.
Then the dominant Brett (Dark Brett) walked away as Light Brett was pounded by
a wave. Light Brett was crushed by buildings and burned by the sun and all
around the land, drowned and suffocated in the poison, and was crushed pretty
much reduced to nothing but a little molecule. Brett woke with an evil smile
and returned to Darkness. I am the one that will blot out the light as I have
just done. He explained his dream and Darkness was so impressed he rose him to
rank: bounty hunter expert. Good job apprentice said Darkness.
Georg's house:
George was very confused about Brett and Samantha. He pondered it and then
began to jot down ideas in his head of what he would do to Brett someday.
Something bad. Very bad. He laughed as he imagined him running into a cauldron
of lava yelling I'm Brett! Then there was a knock at the door. He answered
and.....woah! George I need your help. Tim?! Yes it is me George. We need to
stop Brett. If we don't the end could be nearer than we think. Not just Brett.
But the Darkness. It seems he has turned Brett against us all. Not to mention
what Jack did. But how are you here? Oh well when corruption drowned me. Lets
just say I'm a very good faker. Oh. I see said George. Tim explained everything
else there was to be explained. Then said George...you're my apprentice now.
I'm so proud of you. Brett should be relieved of his duties when this is all
over. Now! Lets go George! Here we goooooooooooo! Don't ever do that again said
Tim. Sorry said George. And they went off to find their enemy/friend.
Whatever!!!!
The end

part
9:
Tim! Wait what are you doing here? I'm here to save the day said Tim. Never
will my own friend cover us all in darkness. Never! I won't either Tim said
George. He is my friend too but he is just gone from his old self I guess. Even
worse said Tim. The Darkness is keeping him going and he is the strongest of
all. But in the end only one shall fall. I know that sir said George. But
seriously Brett thought you were dead. Oh yeah! When Corruption drowned me I
wasn't really dead and that is all. No big deal. But why didn't you show up
asked George. It is obvious George. I didn't want to. Why asked George. That is
one question we will never know said Tim. Do you know where Brett could be
right now? No Tim I do not. Awww shucks said Tim. Looks like we're gonna have
to find him some way. Oh no said George. I just had a thought. What is it asked
Tim. It is just that the last time I talked to Brett it was over the phone just
a few minutes ago. And he was with my girlfriend. Your girlfriend asked Tim. Oh
Samantha huh? How do you know? Trust me George I'm the eye in the sky. Wow.
Well I think we have a job to do so lets go said Tim. Fine said George lazily.
Cool we're gonna switch back to Brett:
Brett arrived again back to see Darkness. I have defeated the last bit of light
within me snarled Brett. Now the true end can come said Darkness. Now what I
want you to do is find George.......and KILL him! Yes master said Brett. Then
he dashed off into the night. Somehow Brett was supposed to lure George in. He
knew George was trained enough to sence him sneaking up behind him. Now what
could I do to lure him in thought Brett. Then he had an idea. An idea so evil
it was evil. A little too evil. He dashed off to a nearby house. He rang the
door bell. And guess who answered. Why none other than Samantha! Brett hid his
face real quich and walked away saying wrong door sorry. His plan was too
delicate for him to just walk in the way he was. He quckly fixed his hair and
but his somehow dry hood over his head to keep it from getting messed up again.
Then he ran and picked a flower and ran back to Samantha's. Rang the door bell
he did for the 2nd time. Hello? Oh hi Samantha said Brett in a cheery voice.
I'm sorry about all my bad deeds but great news I'm back to my old self! Then
who do you still have the cape she asked puzzlingly. Oh it is cool said Brett.
Yeah okay. Come on in. Brett gave her the flower saying this is for you! Thank
you Brett! Wow George has never done this for me. Exactly said Brett.
The lure:
Brett sat down on the couch and said you know why do you go out with George?
Because I love him said Samantha. Oh okay said Brett. Brett where is this going
asked Samantha. Oh nowhere yelled Brett. No plot to catch you and make George
try to save you and possibly die in the process. Good said Samantha. Hey I'm to
tired to walk back to my house can I stay the night? Uh okay said Samantha.
Perfect said Brett. You have a pool don't you? Yeah you wanna swim or
something? Oh you wanna swim said Brett with enthusiasm. Well sure lets go
swim! Brett grabbed her hand and rushed her to the pool. Uh Well if we're gonna
do this I better go change then said Samantha. Okay I'll just wait here. Brett
jumped in the water. Samantha returned and he was floating on his back. He had
been for 5 minutes wow that is kind of impressive I guess. She walked in and
started floating with him. I can do this all day said Brett. I could do it in
my sleep. And he closed his eyes. I can't said Samantha but I can at least do
this for like 5 minutes. Okay this does get boring after a while said Brett and
returned to standing on his feet in the pool. He accidently splashed water on
Samantha haha. Sorry said Brett. That is okay said Samantha laughing. Then
Samantha splashed Brett. And it ended up being a splash fight. Brett almost
felt a spark return. Then he fought it back and remembered his mission.
Samantha was laughing really hard. I win she yelled. She came close and gave
Brett a hug. Wow I didn't know you were this much fun she said. I'm alot of fun
said Brett. I didn't know that but I do now. I havn't had this much with George
or in my life at all. Then surprised that it had come to this Samantha was so
close that they could have kissed...but that is just sick. So Brett just as
Samantha was closing in grabbed her and dragged her under. Samantha was smiling
at first thinking that for some reason he was more comfortable underwater. When
a minute passed and apparently the new Brett could hold his breath much longer.
Then she realized Brett was doing his evil smile. Oh god she said. Brett
obviously had to harm her some way and he didn't want to slap her or anything
so might as well do it the long way. Samantha was struggling too hard and Brett
had to squeez so hard that if he could squeeze harder her ribz would crack. Her
heart was beating like a scared bunny and she couldn't struggle anymore from
the force that Brett was squezzing. This is the end she thought. How was I so
stupid? She stopped struggling and waited for the end. But Brett could see that
she would still put up a fight. Then he thought she had learned her lesson and
they surfaced. She gasped and just about screamed and Brett put his hand over
her mouth. He dragged her out and threw her out the door. Brett stop it said a
familiar voice. No! It can't be said Brett outloud. You? Tim? The very same.
Wow the plan twists:
Brett why are you doing this asked George. Stay out of this George yelled
Brett. Finally you show yourself yelled Brett. After all those years! I was
your friend! You betrayed me! What are you talking about asked Tim. You know
what I mean. You're the villan here! You are! No Brett you are said Tim.
Nooooooooo! I'm doing this for myself! And Darkness! Soon peace will return!
Kids need to learn their lesson and they gonna learn it the hard way! Brett it
doesn't have-shut up Brett inturupted. I'll kill you for what you did! You
destroyed me! Now I'm back baby! I'm back! Brett you're going insane said
George. Shut up! Or I'll make your beating even more painful than this guy's!
Brett why are you saying this said Tim. What happened? Darkness revealed the
truth! You were just using me! He told me how bad a person you were! Brett was
crying and his eyes had turned a bloody red. He was raging. That is not-Agggggghhhhhh
yelled Brett charging. He kicked Tim off his feet and jumped up and grabbed the
fist that was coming from George. He twisted it and threw George to the ground.
Tim had jumped to his feet and tackled Brett. Brett surrender! I will not
listen to you anymore yelled Brett. He kneed him in the stomach and kicked him
aside. George dived into him but he Brett didn't budge. He just stood there.
Then he grabbed him by the head and head butted him the hardest headbutt he had
ever done in his life. George somehow stayed concious. Samantha watched with
fear in her eyes and screamed at the sight of Georg's blood. Brett grabbed his
throat and choked him. You know what George? Looks like you weren't ready at
all said Brett.
Oh my gosh its an epic battle:
Goerge was dying Brett's mission was almost complete when Time came up behind
him and he turned and punched him in the chest. Tim punched him as well in the
head. Brett's head was so hard it couldn't even be damged by this. He snarled
and grabbed Tim by the face and shoved him to the ground. He was shoving Tim
into the mud. George pushed him off ready to fight this time. Brett. why said
George. I'm not Brett anymore! My new name is Inferno! (I'll just keep calling
him Brett) My tempers a blazing yelled Brett and double jumped onto George but
George grabbed him by the foot and threw him into a tree. Tim reamerged and
jumped up and dashed while in the air and thrust his fist into Bretts stomach.
Aggggghhhhh yelled Brett, he punched him all the same in the stomach though.
Finally they had damaged Brett. This was a very even fight between Tim and
Brett. Brett summoning his strength back after the blow and charged for George.
He rammed him and head butted him over and over again. Then threw him up 30 ft
in the air and he landed at Samantha's feet. Brett! Time came up. He could be
dead now! That was my mission Tim! Till you came now my main mission is to
defeat you!
No Tim don't die! :O:
The two clashed. They circled each other, fists up. They were both waiting for
the 1st move. Then Brett did the same move he did on George 7 years ago. He ran
forward, slid and grabbed Tim's leg when he tried to punch him. Then pinned him
to the ground. Give up yet asked Brett. Brett I don't give up but Brett could
see the feer in his eyes. He punche him in the stomach and Tim took the blow.
He tried again but he caught it and pushed with all his might. Brett flew off
of Tim. He landed with a thud. He looked and saw Samantha crying over Georg's
body. He jumped back up and punched Tim in the throat. Tim choaked and couldn't
catch his breath when Brett punched him in the side the head. Brett pinned him
again saying this is the end. It all ends here once and for all.
Yeah well nobody likes George:
Brett punched Tim in the stomach again. He left him there to deal with later.
Then he walked to Samantha and grabbed her. For some reason his anger took
control of him and he started choking her. He was crying and his eyes flashed
with fire. She gasped but couldn't find air. She tried to push him away. Brett!
It was George. He dropped her and she fell gasping. You're still here?! Aghhhh
Brett charged George. He dodged and Samantha threw a rock. It hit him on the
head. He turned and ran for her at top speed ready to whail a punch on her. Tim
dived in the way. Oh come on said Brett. You guys can't beat me. Never!

Is
this over yet?:
Brett jumped and grabbed a branch on a tree. swung and kicked them in the face.
Nothing can stop me! Tim grabbed my foot to stop me. Then I broke loose and
from my struggle of breaking loose i fell off the branch and landed on George.
I looked at him then punched him in the face man this guy hasn't put much of a
hurting on me. Then he got mad and pushed me off and punched me in the face
making my head hit the tree a splinter broke off and went in his eye. Not
again. He screamed and started crying. Cry like a little baby! He ran away and
tripped and fell. I walked towards him and senced Tim coming up behind me and
forced my fist behind me and hit him in the face. This is just the end of the
begginning which begins the end that will end with a big big bang Brett laughed
to himself. He kicked George in the ribs. He heard them crack. Ooooooooohhhhhh!
Tim was not happy at that noise. Nobody takes a fight to this point Brett!
You're not yourself! I'm not Brett anymore. I'm inferno! My tempers a blazin!
He said again. Then he jumped and kicked Tim in the face and picked up a huge
stick and flung it at George. He screamed in agony. Hahahahhaha! When will you
ever ever ever give up?
Okay this fight better end here:
Brett head butted Tim till he was nearlly unconcious and swung around and
punched George in the head. Tim fell with a thud. He was gasping and Brett saw
a tear. Brett took the stick which had a very sharp tip. Well Tim, George I admit
I expected much more out of you. Looks like I was wrong. No no no I don't want
you death to be that quick. He threw the spear like stick and it drove into a
ground almost hitting Samantha she yelped. Brett laughing walked towards George
and kicked him in the face. His nose bled. Then he kicked him in the stomach at
least 5 times. He spat out alot of blood. He looked up at Brett with hopeless
eyes and said, I trusted you Brett. Everyone did. Well they were wrong to pick
on me weren't they snarled Brett. Everyone will fall at me and Darkness's feet.
Nobody shall stand any longer. They're gonna get what they deserve he said in
the most evil voice he could summon. Then wrapped his hands around George's
kneck. Brett! Tim was talking again. Don't! You're not like this! No Tim! I'm
not sorry for doing any of this! Now you must all die! He grabbed them both
around the kneck and Samantha drew breath to scream!
The end.

part
10:
Brett was ready to kill. He was laughing menacingly and ready to snap their
knecks when Tim said, wait! Don't we get any last words? No said Brett. He
squezzed and while being choked Tim said those born by darkness can bring new
light. Brett loosened his grip and his eyes grew wide. He went into his own
little dream world. He saw all the good times he had with George and Tim. He
saw the time when he threw George into a tree and he got a splinter in his eye.
Well that isn't good but it was funny to him. And when Tim and him were
training. Then he saw the darkness standing over kids punching them and he
wanted to help. Then he came out of it and saw George and Tim lying on the
ground in pain. Brett? Tim was confused. Then Brett suddenly hugged them both
crying. They were laughing and George was saying ow ow ow because Brett
squezzed him too hard on his wound. After their mini celebration. Brett turned
around and Darkness jumped out of nowhere and landed on his feet. The snow was
perfect for the moment because Darkness looked so cool standing in the snow in
the moons light. Well well well said Darkness. I trust you with a simple task
and you can't even kill George? Shut up I said. You turned me against my
friends and I almost killed them. You're gonna pay for that. It wasn't me said
Darkness. It was you he said in the most evil voice ever. It was but you were
involved so it wasn't entirely my fault. Hmmmmmmmm you may have a point there
said Darkness. Brett I've had alot of fun with you. But now I'm gonna have to get
rid of yet another servant. Oh what a pity.
Its the final countdown:
Darkness ran forward to charge Brett but George and Tim together stepped in the
way blocking him. Brett just stood there wondering why his friends were helping
him. After all he probably deserved what was coming after what he did to them.
Darkness swiped them both out of the way. Tim flew into Samantha while George
flew into yet another tree. Tim pushed off Samantha and punched Darkness. It
must have hurt but Darkness doesn't show pain or fear. George got a stick and
swung it at him but Darkness jumped and grabbed the stick and banged it on the
ground breaking it and a spling flew into Georg's eye. Again.
Agggggggghhhhhhhhh he yelled. Darkness blew him away with his fist as if it
were the easiest thing he had ever had to do. George lay there crying. Wow
Brett you call him ready? Wow. Just wow. I swung my fist at him hitting him in
the jaw. Tim grabbed him from behind. Darkness pulled him out from behind and
smashed his face into the snow. I'm not giving up yet said Tim in a painful
voice.
This better not be as long as the last one:
Brett was getting ready to punch again but he got hit in the head. It felt like
a bee sting. Then he looked up and it got him in the eye. He realized.....it
was freezing rain. It all started coming down on them. It felt like thousands
of needles piercing you at the same time. George got alot in his eye. Wow this
kid is going to get blind. Brett grabbed him and carried him to shelter while
Tim got punched in the face and and the chest at the same time. He flew back.
Darkness turned and rushed to Brett and grabbed his face. He squezzed so hard
in the morning he would have some pains there. Brett grabbed him and tried to
shake him off. Darkness let go. Then right away he choked Brett. Brett couldn't
shake him off. He was too strong. While the freezing rain stung his face he was
dying slowly. Samantha walked up and tapped him on the shoulder. Darkness
turned and Samantha actually punched him in the face and twisted his arm behind
his back and kicked him in the back. Brett watched as Darkness stood up and ran
for Samantha and tried to punch her. She caught the fist and punched him in the
chest. Gah! What is this? Darkness started getting worried. He had just half
gotten his butt kicke by a GIRL!
Well this is just ridonculous:
Darkness pushed her away so hard she fles all the way back to her house. George
gasped and stubled for her. He got pumbled by rain. Brett jumped up and tried
to punch Darkness but he caught it and threw him aside. He landed hard on his
back. He kept sliding on the sharp freezing pieces of ice. His shirt tore and
his back bled. Darkness ran forward and punched him in the face then the chest
over and over again. Brett flew back. This just might be the hardest battle I
have ever fought already thought Brett. Come on yelled Darkness. At least put
up a fight. Brett stood up and swung his fist but he was weak. It just fll to
the ground. The Darkness punched him the face and he hit his face in the jagged
ice shards. He came up and his face was bleeding. Tim saw this happend and
leaped into action. He punched Darkness in the back and brought his feet out
from under him. Darkness stood up and Tim tacked him and they flew over him and
as they went Darkness reached down to grab Brett but only got is shirt. Now
they could see the affects of the freezing rain. His back was red and he was
bleeding. And even worse he had already begun to freeze to death.
Uh oh.....what? Spaghettio!:
Brett's hands were freezing. The rain came down harder. Darkness had Tim in a
head lock. He tore out of it and Darkness punched him in the stomach. Blood
dripped from his mouth. Tim fell back. There was not enough time to know if he
was dead or not. Brett ignored the pain and stood up. He ran forward his feet
htiting the ground harder than usual. His feet were soon gushing were soon
leaving red marks everywhere he stepped. He punched Darkness in the face. His
hand half frozen feels like it could shatter any moment now. Darkness punches
his freezing body. Darkness took out Brett's soaked cloak and t shirt. Put on
your shirt man please. Well it was your fault said Brett and put them on. It
was still cold all the same. Darkness jumped and tried to bash him in the head
but Brett punched him in the stomach sending upward and he came down on Brett
with a thud. It was a sickening thud. Brett thought it was his body cracking.
It was but it was just his bones. Oh my goodness said Brett. You hurt me and he
punched Darkness in the face sending him flying. Oh my gosh will you just gie
up already roared Darkness. Wow you have anger issues said Brett and Darkness
charged forward to swipe him in the face

This
battle is long:
Darkness swiped him in the face and turned and banged him in the side of his
head. Brett went down hard along with Darkness pumbling him. Darkness landed on
Brett slamming his face into the freezing rain. Brett took the blow and tried
to crawl away knowing he would die here. Then out of nowhere George came up and
tackled Darkness. Darkness elbowed him in the face. George was mad. While this
was happening Samantha dragged Tim to safety. She returned to find Brett trying
to escape and Darkness on Georg's chest punching him in the face over and over
again. George is strong but he couldn't take Darkness. Brett jumped to his feet
and pushed Darkness off. They tumbled down a hill. Darkness punched Brett while
on the way down and headbutted him. Brett's head was hard but Darkness's was
harder. It hurt so bad he almost fell out of conciousness. Haha Brett you're
looking alittle dizzy said Darkness getting ready to finish him.
Well I think we all know what happens next:
Darkness grabbed Brett around the kneck. Before he could do anything though
George punched him in the back of the head. Darkness did a flip over Brett. He
landed on his feet though. Darkness charged George but before he could damage
him Samantha jumped in the way and Darkness rammed her and she flew back
screaming in pain. Darkness pushed George aside and walked to Samantha and was
about to impale her with a random stick he found. Brett grabbed it and brought
it up into the hood of Darkness's cape. His hood flew off and it made a cut
accross his face. At first Brett didn't see who he was. But then when he tried
to punch Brett. Brett saw it was the kid that called him Mr. S. You? Brett was
shocked. You? Aghhhhhh! Darkness kicked him in the chest and he flew back.
Brett was beginning to freeze over. It became hard to breathe. No matter what
even if he won this fight it looked like he would die all the same.
Well that isn't what I thought would happen:
Brett punched Darkness in the face. Darkness jumped back and charged into Brett
knocking him down a hill. They both rolled down it. They were heading straight
for a frozen lake! Darkness stopped their rolling and pulled held Brett up by
his shirt and punched him in the chest. Then threw him up and Darkness jumped
up and kicked him in the chest. Geroge meanwhile snuck up on them. He got ready
to slam Darkness in the head again. But Darkness reached back and hit him in
the throat. Darkness took George and threw him back up the hill. He walked down
to Brett and grabbed his arm and broke it like a twig. Brett screamed in agony.
He reached back with his good arm and pushed him off. Darkness just laughed and
kicked him back closer to the edge of the lake. Brett grabbed Darkness with
both hands. Both arms were freezing and one was broken. He pumble him with both
hands. His blood felt like it had turned to blocks of ice. His lungs felt
frozen. Brett grabbed Darkness and started pushing him towards the lake.
Darkness shook him off worried about the lake now. He tried to punch Brett.
Brett caught it in his BAD hand. It was the most painful thing Brett had felt.
So painful he couldn't describe it in the story. Brett held back the scream but
let a tear fall. The freezing rain falling harder, and the wind nearlly blowing
them away. Brett had Darkness's fist in his hand so he pushed with all his
might and Darkness fell in the frozen pond. For a while Brett stood there
crying. Then Darkness rememerged and said if I go down I'm taking you with me!
Tim had regained consiousness. Samantha and George, including Tim gathered at
the top of the hill just as Darkness dragged Brett under.
Wow it always comes to this:
Brett nearlly froze. Most of the air in him felt like it had frozen. Darkness
dragged him deep. The cold was too much for Brett. Brett still tried to fight
though. He was a soldier. A warrior and he wasn't going to go down like this.
He swam up and pulled Darkness back down. Darkness came down and poked Brett in
the eyes. Now his vision was nothing under the water. He tried to swim up but
he hit the ice. He couldn't find the hole. There was no way of escaping. It was
never the right thing to end a fight in the death of your opponent. But the
only thing on Brett's mind was to get air. So when he felt the tug on his leg
he kicked Darkness in the face. And finally Brett thought what am I doing. This
always happens in the movies. Just punch the ice you idiot! So he did and he
made it back to the surface. He barely had the energy to crawl back. Every part
of his body hurt. He made it back with the help of his friends. He survived.
They watched as Darkness attempted to surface but he never did. He drowned. The
battle was over.
I'm speechless:
Well it all ends this way. Darkness was dead in a lake. Brett recovered from
his wounds. It took some time but he finally got his good arm back into
buisness. He had to sit in boiling water for owers till the freezing feeling
left him. George finally got Samantha to really like him. At the senior prom
Brett passed them. When he passed they were closing in. Brett just walked past
and said ew. He left them to their romantic time. Brett made is way back to the
punch line and ran into Georg's new apprentice. Tye! Hey Tye old buddy old
pall. How are ya? Good said Tye. How is George treating you? Good! Well that is
fine said Brett and ran to go find Tim. His new master. His old master. His
friend. Tim had lived thankfully. Time continued to teach Brett. He tought many
others. Someday to mabe learn something. Someday they could come together and
create a new age of heros. The age of Brett was over. Tomorrow was graduation.
Finally after the prom the next day. Brett was surprised that everybody forgave
him. This ment that they didnt' hate him after all. He had made a huge mistake
about what he did. Everyone threw their hats in the air. They had all graduated
and were on to colledge. Brett had a huge graduation party that half the kids
in the school went to. Or mabe it was everyody? Oh well. Brett ran out the door
to see his friend that had just arrived. Samantha, Tim, George, Tye. They all
hugged. They were free.
THE END: FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!