Beach Day (Cholena and Fievel Version)

It was a hot summer day in June. It wasn't extremely hot, but it wasn't cool either. It was the perfect day to hit the beach, which is what two mice had in mind.

Fievel Mousekewitz was on his way over to his girlfriend Cholena's cabin to get her. Both wanted to go, so he was very excited about going to the beach with her. He walked the street to Cholena's cabin. He brought his bag, which he had in the floor board and a beach ball for them to use. In his tote bag he packed sunscreen and a towel. He also couldn't wait to eat one of the sandwiches that she made. He loved the food she made.

Cholena eagerly waited for his arrival. She too was very excited about going to the beach with Fievel. She packed a lunch for them, washed her braids, and had even found a new bathing suit just for the occasion. She checked her appearance in her mirror. She looked at the two-piece bathing suit as she held it up to herself.

"I wonder what Chulu-Chulus will think about my new suit?" she asked herself. She pondered what her friend would think and couldn't help but giggle. She stepped back over to her bed and put her swimsuit in her bag along with sunscreen and a towel with another one to dry off with. She also packed a Frisbee for them to play with on the beach. Fievel said he would bring a volleyball. She fixed everything in her tote and made her way down the hall to get her surfboard.

As she got downstairs and set her tote with her board, she heard a door close, then there was a knock on her door. She went over to it and opened it to find Fievel waiting outside.

"Hello, Cholena!" he smiled cheerfully.

"Hi, Chulu-Chulus!" she smiled brightly.

"Are you ready to go to the beach?"

"Yes I've been looking forward to this!" She stepped closer to him, took his hands into hers and gave him a hug. Pulling back, they smiled at each other. "Are you ready to hit the beach?"

"I am!" She let go of his hands and turned back inside her house.

"I've got our lunch ready," she said as she walked into the kitchen and he followed. "I've got some ham and cheese sandwiches, some cheesecake and some ice cold lemonade."

"Mmm! Boy!" Fievel said. He sniffed. "That sure smells good."

"Whoa, this is for the beach," She said, holding up her finger.

"Okay, I'll wait," he grumbled. She giggled.

"Don't worry. You won't have to wait very long." He smiled as he picked up the bag.

"I'll get your board and bag."

"Thanks," she smiled affectionately. They entered the living room and he picked up her board as he carried the basket. She got her tote and followed him out the door where she locked and closed it behind her. Turning back, she walked up alongside him. Fievel put her board in his arm, then they set off for the place. She smiled and kissed him on his nose before she got in. "Thank you."

"You're welcome." He said with a chuckle.

As they walked, he watched Cholena scoot closer to him. She joined her hand affectionately with his.

"So you ready to go?" he asked with a big smile.

"You bet! I'm ready for some fun in the sun!" she said with a big smile.

"Then let's go!" They continued on their journey to the beach for some sand and surf.

Arriving at the beach, Fievel stopped quickly, then he and Cholena looked around. They got their boards, their totes and their lunch as they made their way out onto the beach. The spot they picked was a beautiful spot that they had to themselves. There wasn't a whole lot of people at the beach, and the spot they picked was quite away from other people. So they had their own personal spot on the beach.

Fievel set up an umbrella, then he and Cholena laid out their towels. She set their lunch at the base of the umbrella, then got her tote. "Now we'd better go change," she mentioned.

"After you," Fievel said as he got his tote and held his hand out to her.

"Oh, Chulu-Chulus," she smiled as she took his hand. "Thank you," she said, then kissed him on the cheek. Their hands intertwined, they made their way over to a change hut to change into their bathing suits. When they got to the changing hut, Fievel told her to go ahead.

"You go ahead. I'll change after you."

"Are you sure?" she asked.

"Positive. You go ahead," he replied, smiling reassuringly.

"Okay. Thanks," she said with a smile, then gave his hand a gentle squeeze. She let go of his hand and opened the door, then turned back to him as she smiled slyly. "No peeking!" She watched as a blush came to his cheeks. She told him. "Stay here. I wanna show you my new swimsuit," she added with a sly smile. Then she went inside, closed the door, but didn't lock it. She trusted him with her life. Cholena set her tote down on the seat and dug out her bathing suit. Then she undid her dress and slipped it off, then slipped off her panties. She stuffed her clothes in the bag, picked up her bathing suit and began to slip it on.

Fievel waited outside by the door, whistling while waiting for her. Part of him was nervous, part of him excited. She had good sense when it came to looking at him and what she wore was never different. He always liked watching her: she looked beautiful to him all the time. But he couldn't help but be a little nervous because she was wanting to show him her new suit. He was thinking and glancing out across the beach and didn't even notice that she opened the door and came out.

"Yoo-hoo!" he heard her sweet voice say in a sweet way. He turned around to her and his eyes widened and his body stiffened up. There she stood, wearing a yellow bikini bottom and triangle top along with brown sandals. "Ta-da! Well, what do you think?" she asked, striking a cute pose in front of him. She looked beautiful and hot at the same time. He stared for a moment before shaking off his daze.

"Wow... It, uh... it looks great, Cholena," He stuttered with a blush. "You're so pretty." She giggled and blushed herself. She knew he liked it, seeing as how he was acting nervous.

"Thanks." Cholena smiled, then took his hand and gave it a gentle squeeze. "Now you can change."

"Okay. I'll be out in a second."

"I'll be waiting." He opened the door and stepped inside.

Fievel set his tote on the seat, pulled off his shirt and pants and put them in his bag. Then he got out his new pair of swim trunks that he also had for the occasion, and began to put them on. Cholena waited outside, standing by the wall, waiting for her friend. She couldn't help but giggle as she thought about the expression on his face when he saw her new suit. That was the way she was hoping he would react. Just then, Fievel opened the door and came back out. Cholena turned to him and her eyes widened and her body stiffened up. He wore a red pair of swim trunks and a pair of blue sandals.

"Da da-da-da! How do I look?" he asked. He looked handsome and hot at the same time. She stared for a moment before shaking her daze.

"Wow... You look great." Cholena said with a blush. Fievel chuckled and blushed a little himself. He stepped up to her and they took each others hand as they walked back to their spot. "So what shall we do first?" she asked playfully, nuzzling her side against his.

"Well, how about a game of volleyball?" he suggested.

"I'm in," she answered. They made a quick sprint back to the spot for the ball and the net, then went back to their spot. They set up the net, then took their places on each side of the net in a friendly one-on-one game.

"I'll let you serve first," he offered, tossing her the ball.

"Are you sure?" she asked.

"Sure, go ahead," he replied.

"Thanks," she smiled. She held the ball up with her left hand and readied her right. "Here goes nothing!" She tossed the ball and hit it, sending over the net toward him. He tried to hit it back but he missed, stumbling a little before he caught himself. He turned back to her with his mouth slightly agape.

"Great shot!"

"Thanks," she giggled. He picked up the ball and got ready to hit it.

"Here it comes!" He hit the ball over the net toward her. She jumped and hit it back over the net and past him again. "Have you been practicing without me knowing?" he asked, a little bewildered.

"No. Not since when we played in your backyard," she said.

"Well you're really good today," he responded, picking up the ball. "Perhaps you should join a league."

"Nah. I'd much rather stay here and play with you," she said with a smile. He smiled, then he held up the ball.

"It's coming to ya!" He hit the ball and it flew right toward her. She tried to hit it, but she missed it. This time, she was the one with her mouth agape.

"Nice!"

"Thanks," he said. "Now I actually got a hit," he added with a chuckle." Cholena picked up the ball and grinned slyly.

"Now you've got your head in the game," she teased.

"Oh, it's game time now," he said with a grin.

"I'm coming for you!" Cholena hit the ball back to Fievel and he hit it back. The young mice played for the next half hour and had a grand time before both decided to take a break. They walked back over to their blankets and sat down. After resting for a while, Cholena dug in her tote bag and pulled out the Frisbee. "How about a game of Frisbee?" she suggested.

"Sure," he replied. They stood up and walked out a little ways from their spot each walking a little ways from one another. Then Cholena reared back her right hand, ready to throw the Frisbee.

"Heads up!" She tossed it. The Frisbee whirled threw the air toward Fievel and he caught it.

"Gotcha!" He reared back his right hand, ready to throw. "Here it comes!" He tossed it back. It whirled threw the air toward her and she caught it.

"Got it!" Fievel and Cholena tossed the Frisbee back and forth over the next half hour or so and had a blast. After that, they decided to take a break and enjoy lunch. Cholena spread out the picnic blanket and the kids sat down and held hands as they said their prayer. After, Cholena opened up the picnic bag and got them each a sandwich out, a cup and a thermos that had lemonade in it.

"Oh, boy! Lunch!" Fievel said with a big smile. Cholena giggled at him and handed him his sandwich.

"Here you go," she said and kissed him on the cheek.

"Thanks." He took it, unwrapped the aluminum foil that she had wrapped around it, and took a bite. "Mmm! I love this sandwich!" he said as he munched on his lunch.

"Thanks. I'm glad you like it," she smiled. It warmed her to know that he enjoyed her food, and it pleased her to know that he wasn't hungry anymore. And she thought he was so cute when he ate. Though she thought he was cute all the time. She got herself out a sandwich, unwrapped it and took a bite. Then she opened up the lemonade and poured them each a cup. "Here," she smiled, handing him his drink.

"Thanks." he smiled, taking the lemonade and taking a sip.

"You're welcome." she said with a fond smile. Fievel and Cholena sat together on the blanket eating their lunch, side by side. She sat with her feet on either side of her and her knees bent and together. Fievel sat with his legs on his right side, using his left hand to hold himself up. Cholena couldn't help it as she watched him. She loved to watch him anyway. She watched him eat before. It just made her smile to know that he wasn't hungry. She glanced out across the beach and was very glad they it was just the two of them.

"Isn't this lovely, Chulu-Chulus?" she sighed softly and dreamily. "Just you and me on the beach. It's like we're the only two on this earth." She nuzzled her side affectionately against his.

"It sure is, Cholena. It sure is." he replied softly, nuzzling her back. They shared a warm smile and continued to eat.

After the mouse duo had finished their lunch and put their stuff and the picnic blanket back into the basket, Cholena then got out her bottle of sunscreen and began to put some on. Then she handed the bottle to her companion.

"Could you put some on my back, please?" she asked sweetly.

"Sure," Fievel replied. She turned her back to him as he squirted some lotion onto his hands, then he began to rub it on her back. As he gently massaged it into her skin, she was loving his massage. He moved down to her lower back and gently rubbed there, then he moved up and began to massage her back right under the back strap of her bikini top. Her eyes drifted shut as her head tilted to the side a little.

"Uhh... Oh!"

"What's the matter?" he asked curiously. Cholena's eyes shot open and she blushed. She gasped but that was because it felt so good.

"Uh... ...Yes, I did..." she answered meekly.

"Did I hurt you?" She glanced back at him, her blush now mostly gone.

"No. You didn't hurt me at all." Her blush returned. "...It just felt good..."

"Is that why you moaned?" he asked with a straight face. She nodded, feeling her cheeks become hot.

"...Yup... ...It felt good..."

"...Sorry..." he blushed.

"Don't be sorry. I liked it," she said, her cheeks still a shade of red.

"Oh, really? How about this?" He suddenly rubbed his hands up to her shoulder blades and applied a little pressure as he rubbed. Her eyes drifted shut again.

"Ouch... That feels good..." He grinned deviously as he leaned close.

"How about this?" he whispered in her round ear, making her spine shutter from his hot breath against her ear, causing her to melt. Then he gently kissed her ear, making her giggle as she turned to face him.

"That feels good, too," she said. "I've got your back." He turned his back to her as she put some lotion in her hands and began to rub it into his back, massaging him too, which was her plan.

"Oh..." She grinned widely.

"Did you moan?" A mad blush came to his muzzle as he turned to her.

"...Uh, yeah... ...I guess I did..." She giggled.

"I guess it felt good, huh?" she asked with a sly grin.

"...Yeah... ...It did..."

"Then how about this?" She began to rub her hands up and down his back, applying a little pressure.

"That feels good, too..." She giggled as a smile crossed her lips and leaned up to his ear.

"How about this?" she whispered, making him shiver from her hot breath. She then kissed him gently on his ear, making him chuckle.

"That also feels good," he said. Both chuckled and shared a smile. Then the young Native American mouse stood up, picked up her surfboard and turned to her Jewish sweetheart.

"Why don't we catch a wave?" she asked with a big smile. He stood up, picked up his own board and joined his love interest.

"You got it," he said playfully, giving her a wink. She blushed, but had no complaints. She loved it. She loved spending time with him.

"Well then, let's hit the surf!" she said, and the mice sprinted out toward the ocean, laughing as they carried their board. They ran into the water, the waves sloshing and splashing against them as they placed their boards in the water, got on them on their stomachs, and began swimming out to the waves. They paddled out a ways, turned their boards around and sat for a moment as they waited on the first wave to hit. It didn't take them long to spot it.

"Here it comes!" Fievel said.

"Get ready!" Cholena said. The mice stood up just in time for the wave to hit, catching the surfing mice in it's current and carrying them toward the shore. "Whoo-hoo!" Cholena laughed with glee.

"Yes!" Fievel laughed as he rode the wave.

"Go!" Cholena cheered.

"Surf's up!" Fievel said. The mice rode the wave out until it died down, then both mice sat for a moment on their boards.

"Whoo! What a rush!" Cholena said.

"I'll say!" Fievel smiled. "Wanna go again?"

"You bet!" she replied. Both laughed as they laid down on their stomachs and began to paddle out again. Once they got out far enough, they sat waiting on the first wave, which didn't take long. "Here comes another one!" Cholena said.

"Let's hit the surf!" Fievel said. The mice stood and the wave hit and began to carry the mice once again toward the shore.

"Hang ten, buddy!" She held on as she cheered.

"I'm riding the wave!" Fievel said.

"Me, too!" she said. She admired how Fievel rode the waves like he's been doing it all his life. He was a good surfer. Fievel admired how Cholena surfed, riding the waves like a pro. She was a great surfer too. Both mice were surfing well. But then Fievel lost his balance.

"Whoa!" He slipped and fell into the water. Cholena glanced over just before he hit the water and gasped when she saw him go in.

"Oh no!" A fearful shiver went up her spine as she watched and waited for him to come back up. After a few seconds, panic set in. "No... Fievel? Fievel?" she cried out his name as fear began to fill her heart. Without a moment's hesitation, she took a breath and dove in. She swam for just a few seconds before she made out the silhouette of his form swimming toward her. The current sucked him down quite far, and much to her relief, he was alive. As soon as he got to her, she grabbed him and helped him swim to the surface.

Both mice came up gasping for air and almost instantly, Cholena helped Fievel onto her board, then climbed on facing him. As soon as they both got onto the board, she began checking over him for injuries, looking him up and down.

"Are you okay?" she asked quickly. He coughed a couple times before he answered.

"Yeah, I'm okay." She wrapped her arms around his waist in a tight hug, thankful he was okay.

"Oh, Fievel! I was scared! When you didn't come up, I panicked. I was so worried!" she wailed as she clung to him tightly. He wrapped his arms around her back and began to rub one hand up and down her back, trying to comfort her.

"There, there, I'm okay, I'm all right," he soothed softly. Lifting her head off his shoulder, she lifted her gaze up to meet his. "I'm okay. You don't have to worry. Thanks for saving me," he whispered comfortingly.

"How did I save you?" she asked curiously.

"You dove in after me. You were going to rescue me if I needed help. You were there for me. Thanks, Cholena," he said with a warm smile as he raised his right hand and cupped her left cheek. She couldn't help but smile.

"I'm always going to be there for you, Fievel. No matter what. You're welcome. Anytime," she said with a warm smile, snuggling her cheek against his palm. The young mice gazed into each others eyes for a moment, before both leaned in and pressed their lips together in a gentle kiss. Cholena couldn't help but giggle as the taste and power of his kiss tickled, and she couldn't help it as she began to rub her right hand up and down his back, sending an enjoyable shiver up his spine.

Fievel let out a gasp as the power and taste of her kiss took hold of him, and he began to rub his right hand up and down the center of her back, making a pleasurable shiver go up her spine. After about four seconds, both broke the kiss and pulled back to meet each others eyes and smiles.

"I guess that's enough surfing for today." he said.

"I agree." she replied, not feeling comfortable with him being on the water at the moment.

After a few seconds, they caught their breath. They swam to shore and walked over to their spot, got their towels and started to dry off.

"That was fun." he said, drying off his ears.

"I'll say! That was great, Fievel! " Cholena said, drying off her back.

"Now aren't you glad we didn't go for one more run?" he asked with a knowing grin.

"Yeah, I am. That was very smart," she replied. "Thanks." He chuckled as he watched her dry off her ears.

"You're welcome. I wasn't feeling it."

"I know you weren't." She stepped close to him and gave him a peck on his lips. "Thanks for the run though."

"You're welcome." She stepped back a little and started to dry off what little bit of water remained. He just watched her with a smile as she dried off. She glanced to see him watching her, and a blush crossed her peach cheeks.

"You're staring again," she said and tossed her towel playfully at him, which landed on his head and hung from his ears. She giggled, as she thought he looked so cute. He removed her towel and tossed it back to her, which she caught.

"You're fun and cute to watch," he said with a smile as he stepped close and wrapped his towel around both him and her. She dropped her towel then circled her arms around his neck as she pressed her front against his.

"Oh, Chulu-Chulus," she cooed. "You're fun and cute to watch, too." She leaned up and brushed her lips against his as she began standing on one foot. She gasped at the feel, taste and power of his kiss, and he gasped at the feel and taste of hers. After a few seconds, both mice broke the kiss and pulled back to smile at one another.

"How about we build a sandcastle?" he suggested.

"Oh, that sounds fun," she replied with an eager smile.

"Well let's start building." They pulled apart, got their buckets and pales, then began to build a sandcastle together. Both had a blast building, and when they were through they had built... well, their own little Castle in the sand. Once they finished, they stood up and looked at their sand creation.

"What do you think?" Fievel asked.

"I think it looks beautiful, King Chulu-Chulus," she said playfully as she wrapped her arm around his and gave it a gentle squeeze.

"I think so, too, Queen Cholena," he said back, then gave her a kiss on her cheek, making her giggle and sigh happily. Both looked over the ocean. Most of the day had been spent, but they still had at least an hour of sunlight left.

"Why not we look for seashells?" Cholena suggested hopefully.

"That's a good idea," he replied. He watched her deep brown eyes twinkle at his words as she beamed at him.

"Wonderful!" They joined hands as they began to stroll down the sand. As they strolled, Cholena found a shell that looked like her friend. "Oh, this is a cute shell." She picked it up and held it up to her ear, listening to the sound of the ocean. "Shh, listen." She held it up to his ear and let him listen to the soothing sound.

"Wow."

"And look at the shell. Cute." She held it up, letting him look at it. He saw that it looked a little like him.

"Well, I'll be," he chuckled.

"I'm gonna keep it." She put it into her bag, then looked back up to him. "It reminds me of you, my love," she smiled, nuzzling her side affectionately against his. "Every time I look at it, I'll think about my friend."

"Aw..." he blushed. She chuckled softly and nuzzled against him. They went along the beach, each picking up different shells and listening to the ocean with each. After a while, both decided to head back to their spot. When they got back, they sat down on their towels together and relaxed a little. She got a needle and thread from her tote and began to string some of the shells together that she found.

"What are you doing?" Fievel asked curiously.

"Wait and see," she giggled and flashed him a smile. After a while, she finished and held it out a little as she examined it. "It's done." He glanced at it and was amazed at it. She had made a beautiful seashell necklace.

"Wow, it looks beautiful," he smiled.

"Thanks. I made it for you, my love." she smiled.

"For me?"

"Yes." She leaned close and placed it around his head, over his ears and around his neck. "It's a good luck charm I made for you." Fievel was touched.

"Aw, Cholena..." He wrapped his arms around her slender waist and pulled her young, petite body against his. "I love it. Thank you," he whispered lovingly. Cholena felt her heart melt as she wrapped her arms around his waist and hugged him close to her.

"Oh, Fievel... You're welcome. I'm so glad you like it," she whispered lovingly. He pulled back and raised his hand to cup her cheek delicately.

"Now when I look at this, I'll be reminded of my beautiful friend."

"Chulu-Chulus," she cooed as she raised a hand and placed it over his on her cheek, staring into his beautiful eyes with hers. Then she leaned close and embraced him as she rested her head on his shoulder. "You're the best."

"So are you." They hugged each other close and tight for a little bit before both pulled back and nuzzled their noses together. After a bit, they pulled back and smiled at one another. "Wait. I have a surprise." he told her. He looked in his bag. When he came out, he had his ukulele.

Cholena gasped. "You brought your ukulele?"

"Yep. I had it behind the seat," he answered.

"Why don't you play it?" she asked sweetly, batting her eyelashes at him flirtatiously.

"You got it. But first..." He reached into his tote and pulled out a flower lei. He gently put it over her head and ears and around her neck.

"Chulu-Chulus," she cooed. She smiled lovingly at him and kissed him on his cheek. The he began to strum a little bit on the ukulele, making some soothing music. She stood up and began to do a little hula dance, swaying her hips to the gentle music. Fievel began to sing a little tune and Cholena soon joined in. He played while she swayed. Once he finished, she sat down next to him and nuzzled her side against his. They sat there and watched as the sun began to set, painting the sky a beautiful shade of orange and purple.

The two mice sat and watched the sun set together, and watched as the stars began to fill the night sky and as the moon began to shimmer in its reflection in the ocean. As they looked up at the stars, Cholena saw a shooting star streak across the sky.

"Hey, look, a shooting star," she said as she pointed to it.

"Gosh... Why don't you make a wish?" She turned to him and smiled fondly as she nuzzled against him.

"What would I wish for? I've got everything I need right here."

"Cholena," he smiled, and wrapped one arm around her as he pulled her close. She returned the favor and wrapped one arm around his back, pulling him close.

"Why don't you?" He hugged her close and smiled.

"I don't have to. Everything I need is here too."

"Oh, Fievel," she smiled, and rested her head against his shoulder with a content sigh.

"Did you have a good time today, Cholena?" he asked. She lifted her head and looked at him.

"I've had a wonderful time today, Fievel. I'm so glad we came. Thank you." she smiled.

"You're welcome," he replied.

"Did you enjoy yourself?"

"I've had a great day today. I'm glad we came, too. Perfect end..."

"...to a perfect day." Both mice stared into each others eyes as they smiled at one another. Cholena loved how the moonlight reflected in Fievel's beautiful blue eyes, making them shimmer in the moonlight. Fievel also loved how the moonlight shone in Cholena's beautiful brown eyes, making them twinkle in the moonlight. They leaned close and kissed. After a few seconds, both pulled back, smiled, then looked back up at the stars.

After a moment, they snuggled up together with one arm around each other as they looked up at the stars. Both had a great day at the beach together. They had a lot of fun and got to watch the sunset together, which made it a perfect end to their perfect day at the beach.