The Story So Far...

Overall politics

Rhamos is a city of nobles an human magicians, the capitol of Aranesia. Zamani SUltanate is a human city in the east. Baren Islands in a colony of Aranesia, even has a human governer. They want independence. They even helped the humans in the Necromancer wars

Rhamos king wants to wage war on Zaman, using his missing son as an excuse. When son is found, king has his own son hidden away in a prison so that the war can still go on.

The underworld army is the remnants of the losing side of Necromancer wars. They want to launch a surprise attack on Aranesia, rhamos in particular. They want to do this by first unleashing a plague on the Aranesian land. Zaman wants to sabotage the entire attack plan by funding and aiding the underworld army secretly. The plague is being engineered in the underground city by a rogue Rhamos scientist using Moss. They are testing the plague on the Baren Isles who no one care about. This sets Madraks quest off.

Another thing is that there is an unseen war in heaven. Gods are not allowed to intervene in world of men. But a god is secretly whispering in underworld leaders ear. Twist is its a good god.

At the same time, Zaman themselves want to launch their own attack on Aranesia and Myrr (elf land) by creating a devastating weapon harnessed from divine energy obtained from the essence of a fallen god (Xyndar).

Kazfel fails to get horn. His next mission is to find the missing Rhamos scientist, who the elves suspect has something to do with the plague.

Kayas story is daytime--the politics above, night time--her own quest for vengeance against the Necromancer.

OUTDATED

**The Last Hunter**: Book Layout and Chronology: SPOILER WARNING

Breakdown of rough timeline with POV character chapters.

Only includes chapters already written. Boervie's storyline is the main driving narrative.

See https://statisticsoficeandfire.wordpress.com/2015/05/01/a-game-of-thrones/

Summaries and story idea sketch pad.

### BOERVIE AND AOURDIE

#### Story Ideas

* I think may be good for his wife to have been killed in the past event. Gives his character a dark past and motivation. The 'Miermine' character in chapter 1 can be retooled to a housekeeper or caretaker/tutor which will be killed later
* At the end of Chap **4, add like a dream Boervie has, of the coming evil, and deepen character of aourdie and Boervie, past etc.**
* In Chap 2, **the father and daughter need have a moment like in Conan, Riddle of Steel scene, when they are sitting near the Fae runes, Maybe Avarkims story**
* Chapter 1 should have more establishment scenes in the Village itself--kind of like how the Shire is set up in Fellowship... it has to have life, like a place to go back to... "What a beautiful bird.." Mayhbe add a scene in the town. More chafracter beats before the Hunter is thrown into battle.In chapter 1 prophet doomsayer tells him a premonition.
* XYNDAR NEEDS MORE PERSONALITY AND CHARACTER

### KAZ FEL

#### Chapter Summaries

* **Reference that Kaz is bruised up in Chap 4 boervie, as well as early Kaz chapters**
* **Add a chapter between cold harbor and silverfort to build ppl's like for Kaz BEFORE Saruman possesses him. Maybe meet a witch in a hut who foretells future or something. Maybe his horse dies and he tried to wager the horn for a horse in the witches stable. He gives backstory a bit here. We need to empathize more with Kaz**
* Chapter 3: As Kaz gains consciousness, he's not sure how he got out of the situation alive. Hears a voice in his head. *You dont remember do you? .....* Captured by Ice Barbarians riding snails with maws, going to be cannibalized. Tries to get out of situation. Suddenly Saruman activates his powers and he kills everyone, including a fellow prisoner. Zombie pens. Kaz kills prisoners also

### BOUNTY HUNTER

#### Chapter Summaries

* Assassination--
* During planning phase, Ajit is laying it all out. Among equipment is Dace's chopped up remains. Castle has auction going on. One of the items is one of the new dwarven hot air balloons. BH would infiltrate party as a guest and then find a way to switch thruster fuel in balloon with explosive one. To do this she needs a servant attire, which she gets.
* Countess torturing someone in basement. SOundproof room. One guard. When explosion kills the heir upstairs, guard leaves. BH goes into room. (Alternate: use vents to get there) Gets info re amulet from countess. Kills countess. Kills innocent torture victim. Makes scene look like a murder. Flees
* Nextr chapter a wordsworth poem where BH meets blackman

#### Story Ideas

* **Consider switching character to female?? To differentiate more from Kaz**

### CHESTAR / KOHUN

#### Chapter Summaries

(for now, these chapters should be split with ---- or \*\*\* to flip POV between chestar and the Ork)

* Baggrunt and Kohun have a talk, where the wise older ork advises the general
* Kohun and CHestar try to remain incognito. CHestar wants to overwhelm and attack the jailor when he walks by. Kohun thinks this is a bad idea because they are chained, etc. They have an argument which turns heated, then Kohun and Chestar are having a fight-brawl. Chestar knocks Kohun out. === Kohun and Chestar are in the cell, they exchange a few words. Unfriendly. Jailor comes by and throws them two bowls of food, asks them to eat because the Warden has something 'special in mind for them'. Symbolism here, focus on the two bowls of food have the same stuff in them, meaning the human and ork are equal. They eat in silence. === CHestar and Kohun are being marched through the desert with other prisoners to a fighting pit (this is the beggarish fighting pit from Gladiator here). Kohun and Chestar go underground, where they are outfitted and prepared for battle, very crude gear. Looking around they see all kinds of mismatched slave/prisoner pairs, like gnome-asada, ork-dwarf, etc. Kohun's second in command, Baggrunt he Old, is also there as a prisoner. SO the Warden is illegally using his prisoners as sport to get extra money. The prisoners are pushed in to the fighting pit as a group. They have to fight ((SOMETHING\_\_Viji's imagination)) === That night, Kohun and Chestar have survived. Jailor makes some comments at them. They look at each other in the dark of the night, and know that they have to work together to survive.

#### Story Ideas

* Going Gladiator here. Some good fun battle chapters which wil be fun to write
* **Warden haves them fight each other**

### MADRAK

#### Story Ideas

* NEED TO add more paragraphs of sadness for his wife Vana and praising his friend Sam, maybe highlight Godfris character a bit more.
* He's going to stumble on the lost king of Edrath, who is the Overlord. He is in charge of the drow
* Traumatologist

### Zarvod (The necromancer) The Warlock

* Maybe have an opening chapter about him. His necropolis in the mountain range is being assaulted by the dark dwarves, besieged. He is knocked off balcony. Dwarves gather round, he pops their heads. Killed but not before transferring to an earthworm
* Earthworms journey to man in front of dream mirror who jumps into Kaz
* Horse throws rider
* In past, maybe Zarvod killed Kaz grandfather, the Prime elf.. senses Kaz potential. Also the reason why Kaz turns on him

### GENERAL IDEAS

* WHats the magic about?
* Cool names: Arrowmoor
* SKYSHIPS