Core Narrative 3

## **CORRESPONDING MACRO-STORY BEAT: Grande Success**

=== Years after the killing of the Dirty
Dozen we find Eliza Michelle Dawson(daughter of the founder of the Dirty Dozen)
and her mother bunkered down in a secret urban location where other family
members of the rebel group reside. Having to change their identities in order
to not get caught by the APC they try to support each other and blend in to the
millions of people living throughout the chaos of this new world. Poverty makes
up more than a quarter of the population and the middle class is hanging on by
a thread. The regime institutes The Final Plan which will order the execution
of all citizens above the age of 65 and “any citizens not able-bodied to work
or provide some sort of good to their immediate society.” People are scared and
live a life of oppression and sadness because of this growing dictatorship and
the elderly are a dwindling demographic. ===
Her and her mother are spotted by the APC and
a cash reward is offered for her immediate capture. Plastering her face all
over propaganda throughout the city. Soon after she goes to her house APC
agents are waiting for them they escape along with other members but all of
them cannot be saved. The Government captures and executes them on the spot
because of their affiliation with the Dirty Dozen. Eliza, Carter and Mrs.
Dawson are the only family members left and concoct a mission to recruit
oppressed people who are tired of the status quo and want to rebel to stop this
madman.

They go around the country in disguise
recruiting more and more “saviors” wanting to save humanity from the
Government’s rule. Eventually they make a plan to make their way to Canada in
order to inform other societies and learn how they live with the ever growing
population. Because the focus of the Saviors is to learn to live in harmony and
go back to the norms of society before the Trump’s took power.

## **PROTAGONIST:**

Eliza Michelle Dawson, Mrs. Dawson, Carter Carrington

## **ANTAGONIST:**

Randall Vector, APC, President Don Jr. and the Trump
Organization

## **MAIN SUPPORTING CHARACTERS W/DESCRIPTIONS:**

**Vincent Rice** – Son of Drax. Young, handsome
and current love interest of Eliza. When the APC came looking for Eliza he
warned her in time for her to escape. They soon find out who he is and execute
him in a back alley.

**Carter Carrington** – Son of Carrie. Heavy-Set,
young, and smart guy with a crush on Eliza. He loves her strong will and
determination to lead others out of this constant oppression.

**Mrs. Dawson** – Mother of Eliza Michelle, Never
really understood why her husband founded the Dirty Dozen group as her ideology
has always been about peace and understanding. She is a believer in non-violent
protests and supports her daughter in her quest for change. Her quick-wit and
jokes make her an instant fan favorite.

== **PRIMARY LOCATIONS WITH**
**DESCRIPTIONS):**  ==
**New New York** – New York but set a couple
decades after the God Particle was administered. A clustered and massive
dystopia where poverty and death prevail. Abandoned skyscrapers create unsafe
places to live and the subway system is now used as low income housing. Food is
scarce to come by as pollution grows and affects the crops around the New New
York.

**The Woods** – Woodsy area with a lot of trees
stumps from corporations coming in and chopping down trees for lumber. Eliza
uses this terrain to make her way to Canada and to try and inform people about
the horrors of what goes on just south of their border.

**Canadian Government Building** – Government
building where Eliza met with a government official to tell them about the new
human rights violations happening in the U.S. Massive art deco style building
engraved with the history of Canada.

## **ADDITIVE COMPREHENSION:**

Here fans learn more about urban living in
this new dystopian world and fans learn the tactics and officially meet the
APC. Eliza is introduced as the daughter of the founder of the rebel group
Dirty Dozen and its revealed that the mother who is soon turning 65 is still
alive and living in hiding.

## **WHY IT WORKS IN THIS MEDIUM:**

This is the start of Act 2 and we plan for Act
2 to be told over the course of 8 seasons of a series. Being able to expand and
construct this new world under the God Particle. This medium gets us directly
in front of our core audience and we can provide sustained additive
comprehension week after week to strengthen our narrative.

## **PLATFORM:**

Cable Television (Specifically HBO)

== **WHY IT WORKS IN THIS**
PLATFORM:  **==**
This will be our tentpole story that shows the
story of this insane dystopian world. This would require experience with a
distributor who knows how to build worlds and engage fans to stick with this
vast story and I Believe HBO would be the perfect partner. Because of their
experience they have amassed a viewership that includes our core audience and
viewers that we want to put our product in front of.