Avalice of Doom

A another desperate search...Another World in danger...They`re coming....

### Websites

Freedom Fanlore (Chapters formerly published on blogs in parts, chapters considering to be given their own pages in full chapter)

## Overview

### Rating

E/ Pegi 7+ (Intimidating scenes, would be scary music and sounds and dark gritty nature, almost swearing/narrative profanity filter, cartoon violence, low-key rude jokes)

### Characters

* Lilac
* Carol
* Milla
* Neera
* Dail
* Spade
* Torque
* The Piraka
* Order of Mata Nui
* Zao
* Jaller
* Hahli
* Kongu
* Balta (As Toa)
* Garan (As Toa)
* Kazi (As Toa)
* Piruk (As Toa)
* Dalu (As Toa)

### Ships

* Low-key Judail
* Jaller x Hahli
* Low-key Neerail
* Low-Key Torlac
* Lilac admiring and thinking Kazi is cool (Not a "ship")
* Lilac feeling sympathy and empathy for Dail (Not a "ship")
* Carol thinking Balta and Piruk are cute (Not a "ship")
* Thokeera/Thokli/Neerthok

### Status

Ongoing

**Avalice of Doom** is a fanfic story being written by Shadow North which takes place a few months after the original Freedom Panet. It is a crossover story between Freedom Planet and Lego Bionicle where the Piraka (Suprise) has somehow returned with their weapons and antidermis spheres (It is explained how later in the story) and have somehow ended up in Avalice and are invading the said world. The fanfic encaptures and reimagines the dark gritty nature of the Bionicle 2006 storyline in Avalice.

## Conception

Avalice of Doom is a crossover story. Rather than being a crossover between Sonic the Hedgehog and Freedom Planet (like most crossovers involving Freedom Planet) it is a crossover between Freedom Planet and Lego`s legendary toyline Bionicle. The story recaptures the 2006 storyline of Bionicle as a completely new story taking place in Avalice where the Piraka (like in the original story during 2006 in Voya Nui) have a dystopian effect on Avalice on their new scheme to create a superior Mask of Life (As the Mask of Life was in the end of Bionicle`s storyline used for a place for Mata Nui to lay dormant) which they can use to claim power both over Avalice and in their own respective realm.

Parts of the story is also inspired of dark scenes in the 2006 storyline like the one where The Piraka rounds up the innocent villagers and starts shooting them with zamor spheres containing antidermis but this time in Avalice where Avalicians gets rounded up.

Dail also serves as a major protagonist in this story as he follows Team Lilac (plus his brother Spade and later Torque) on their quest to save Avalice from the Piraka and serves as a somesort of atoning arc for Dail (even if he was brainwashed and mind controlled). The story has also similarities to the Freedom Planet fanfiction Kingdom Come by Spookyrus where Dail have depression and remorse over the events of the original Freedom Planet game like the death of his father but also over the fact he got brainwashed by Brevon. Unlike Kingdom Come however this part of the plot is taken to the next level like the Piraka using Dail`s fear of being brainwashed and used as a pawn for evil again against him, Dail being insecure and uncertain of himself to Dail lashing out in anger at Neera Li (to the point of her becoming very upset despite her mature personality) after Neera lectures him and speaks lowly of Spade (whom Dail considers to be one of the few who actually understands him).He does feel remorse of course after making Neera Li upset.

The story`s dark and gritty nature was also influenced by fanmade music for the fan concept of a Bionicle 4: Island of Doom like this one

## Reception

Avalice of Doom , while not yet so far have gotten any feedback have trended a couple of times of this wiki.

## synposis

### Chapter 1-Danger is coming

The fusion that keept the six infamous Skakdi together into a neutral dream-eating being is for some reason all the suddenly no more. The Piraka are once more free but soon they learn that a lot has happened in their own respective dimension and that life is now continuing on Spherus Magna where the Matoran and Agori are living in peace and the the Great Spirit Mata Nui is now dormant in the Mask of Life after his victory against Makuta rendering the Mask useless for them for their own uses. However they find themselves suddenly in a completely different world and once more thoughts outside their heads are flowing inside their minds, "Kingdom Stone?" "Relic crystals", "Avalice". The leader of the Piraka, Zaktan comes up with the conclusion that should they find all relic crystal pieces they can absorb enough energy from the Kingdom Stone they can create a new superior Mask of Life for their own agenda to take revenge on Matoran kind and maybe conquer and crown themselves as lords of this dimension as well as their own dimension.

Carol is chasing after Serpentine on her motorcycle in the wilds craving more revenge for what horrors Brevon and his willing lackeys has caused on Avalice. Suddenly Carol retreats as someone else captures Serpentine (Which is no one other than the "tracer" and "hunter" of the Piraka). Carol drives home and obsessively tells Lilac her tale.

Meanwhile in Shuigang Dail is pondering on his would be Dark Memories during his time under Brevon and Syntax`s mind control and feels guilt over the fact he could not resist it and how Brevon has used him for destruction. In fact Zao from Shang Mu have been lecturing Dail on how weak he is for not resisting the Mind Control and still considers him to be a "Scoundrel Prince" never mind the fact that Dail was brainwashed and under mind control and it took the effort of Team Lilac plus his brother Spade to free him.

Meanwhile Vezok and Hakann are mistreating Serpentine in order to interrogate until Serpentine finally breaks, crying like a bullied child and tells the Piraka what they want to hear. Vezok then shoots Serpentine with his antidermis Zamor Launcher, turning Serpentine into a mindless slave to serve the Piraka. The Piraka through a brainwashed Serpentine have remnants of Brevon`s army as they plan their next move to locate the yellow relic crystal which lies in Shang Mu.

### Chapter 2-Enslavement of Shang Mu

The Piraka breaks into Shang Mu palace and they make the Shang Mu guards turn on Mayor Zao by turning them into slaves by shooting them with antidermis zamor spheres. The guards grab their Mayor and then Zaktan shoots Zao with antidermis turning him also into a slave. Zaktan orders the now enslaved Zao to create a "public annoucement" in Shang Mu`s amusement park to gather as much as Avalicians as possible. Next evening in the amusement park the citizens of Shang Mu are waiting for what Zao has to say but Zao says nothing and people note that Zao looks pale and sick and has some wierd eye color. But suddenly behind Zao the six vicious Piraka appears. The citizen first thinks it is some horror ride announcement with animatronic monsters but they do not think that for long when the Piraka raises their hands carrying the Zamor Launchers loaded with antidermis and start to shoot the defenless crowd of citizens turning them into mindless slaves. Several citizens try to flee but get hunted down quickly and gets shot by the Zamor Spheres made from antidermis. The Piraka then take their Zamor blasting rampage to the rest of the amusement park and later to the streets of Shang Mu, breaking into homes.The red eyes, grimaces and the horrible grinning smirks is the last thing the citizens see before being turned into mindless slaves.

The Piraka then break into the base of the Red Scarves, turning most Red Scarves into slaves (Spade and a few other Scarves were able to escape).

Neera is scouting and noticing the chaos coming from the city and decides to report back to the Magister.

Spade on the other hand runs off to Shuigang to tell his brother.

Meanwhile at the treehouse of Lilac next morning Milla wakes up screaming in fear of a nightmare suprisingly detailing the events at Shang Mu. Lilac comforts her and tells her to go out and play, this is where the third chapter begins.

### Chapter 3-Capture at Relic Maze

The Piraka now have the Yellow relic crystal and gem and control over Shang Mu and its palace, renaming Zao`s palace to "Piraka Palace". Now they are planning to use some of the slaves to work in the mines of the Relic Maze in order to find another relic gem and crystal. The Citizens of Shang mu who were not enslaved are now living in fear and staying inside their homes in fear of the Piraka taking them from their own home and do not dare to go out on the streets due to the "Nektann"- guardians (Artifical guardian drones made by the Piraka) , Brevon`s soldiers running the streets for the Piraka (through the brainwashed Serpentine) and not to mention the enslaved Shang Mu soldiers.

Spade shares the news with his brother Dail. Dail assumes that its Brevon`s creations that has come to once again haunt Avalice and probably to brainwash him again in order to continue to defile and mock his family`s legacy. The two brothers goes to Dragon Valley to meet up with Lilac and Carol about these news. At first Lilac and Carol are thrown off by Spade`s visit but becomes willing to listen due to Dail begging them to listen what they have to say and Carol becomes more willing to listen when Spade tells about the creatures at Shang Mu (since Carol has seen them before the day when Serpentine was taken by Reidak).

Out in the Relic Maze Milla is playing and chasing butterflies and bees. However little does she know that she is not alone, but not in a good way...

Screams of fear and terror are heard from the Relic Maze, screams that Lilac & Carol knows to well...

### Chapter 4-Skirmish at Relic Maze

Lilac, Carol, Dail and Spade runs to the Relic Maze in order to find Milla. They find Milla captured by Reidak and Thok. Carol notices Reidak and Reidak does the same. Reidak takes Milla to Zaktan either for an interrogation or to use as a trap to then interrogate others for the Relic Crystals. A short skirmish between Thok and Vezok Versus Lilac, Carol, Spade and Dail.Carol first goes full kicking rampage towards Vezok but Vezok throws Carol back into a wall while trying to blast her with his eye-laser or try to fire an Antidermis Sphere at her .Thok uses his Ice Peg Gun to freeze Lilac, forcing Carol to catch her. Spade dashes into the air throwing his cards at Thok who is forced to dodge the cards while Dail uses his sword to battle Vezok. Dail is then forced to retreat to his great shame in fear of being brainwashed by Thok`s antidermis sphere, unwillingly leaving his brother, Lilac and Carol behind. Thok and Vezok gets bored and commands enslaved Shang Mu guards, some of the small remnants of Brevon`s troops and an enslaved Zao riding some kind of spider mech shooting different Zamor Spheres and leaves the Relic Maze. Dail returns back and together with Spade, Carol and Lilac (who was able to break free from the Ice) and defeats the Spider Mech but the enslaved Zao flees from the mech stating with a drowsy tone "must not fail master Piraka, this is far from over"

Four new beings appears, a two giants with masks (one with a two bladed sword and the second with axe) and two red armored beings with masks who claims they know about the new invaders and assure they have nothing to with Brevon but may give Brevon a new opportunity if they continue with their mad dreams. The two giants named Axonn and Brutaka says that they will negotiate with the Magister of Shang Tu and tell them about the Piraka and then temporary return to their home realm to get a powerful material that can cure antidermis enslaved people. Suddenly Torque appears from nowhere and explains how he got teleported back to Avalice and the creature who explained about the Piraka. The two red armored beings are beings known as Toa and former Matoran named Jaller and Balta.

## Characters

### Protagonists

Lilac

Milla

Carol

Dail

Spade

Neera Li

Torque

Jaller

Hahli

Kongu

The Voya Nui Resistance Team minus Velika (As Toa)

Order of Mata Nui (member of Botar`s species/Botar`s replacement,Brutaka & Axonn)

### Antagonists

Piraka

Serpentine (Brainwashed and not brainwashed)

Zao (Brainwashed by Antidermis)

Neera Li (Temporary; Brainwashed by Antidermis)

### Side-Characters/Background characters/Easter Eggs & Shout-outs

Royal Magister of Shang Tu

General Gong

Askal (Brainwashed by Antidermis )

Maria Notte (Brainwashed by Antidermis)

A female Avalician hedgehog (looks like Mobian) that looks like demo hedgehog Lilac but in green outfit (Brainwashed by Antidermis)

Member of the Scarves nicknamed "Lux"

Corazon Tea (Appeared in dream)