Core Narrative 4

TITLE (3
POINTS):

Elio

PLOT FOR INSPIRATION
(10 POINTS)

Elio Clemens’s grandma becomes ill and is in dire need of
medicine. Elio decides to enter Eden where none from the outside may enter.
Elio gets a lead about an ex hacker, from stories told around the campfire,
used to cause havoc to Eden’s security systems. After convincing Scout to help
him Elio manages to time perfect entrance. When Elio manages to deliver the
medicine but get captured in the process Elio is okay with it.

SHORT STORY
SYNOPSIS/logline THAT INCLUDES A CLEAR BEGINNING, MIDDLE AND END — make sure
plot for inspiration is recognizable (20 POINTS)

Elio is about Elio
Clemens has been raised by his grandmother since his parents died at a young
age. Elio and his grandmother live outside the wall of Eden but inside of the
force field staying safe from any harmful weapons. Many stories of the inside of
“how wonderful it is” runs through the outskirts.

When his only family member becomes ill his main objective
becomes to retrieve medicine for his grandmother and other ill people from
inside of Eden. Eden, which does not allow outsiders in, shuts his hope down to
enter which causes Elio to journey to the criminal pit in hopes of finding the
Scout, infamous technician/hacker who once lived in Eden. On his endeavor to
the criminal pit he encounters the wildlife and different groups along the way.
With some convincing The Scout decides to do one last mission for more aging
pills in order to survive more years since his death is imminent without it.
With the help of the scout Elio manages to time a perfect entrance into Eden.
Elio’s compassion and devotion to his mission shocks and humble some human
enforcers who decide to help him out on his mission to retrieve medicine. With
so many people counting on his journey he realizes that fighting for the people
you love is more important than one’s own value.

GENRE:

Drama/action

PROTAGONIST (5
POINTS)

Elio Clemens

ANTAGONIST (5
POINTS)

A
Lead Enforcer.

MAIN
SUPPORTING CHARACTERS W/ DESCRIPTIONS (5 POINTS):

Enforcer friend

Elio’s grandma

The Mayor of the East Side.

PRIMARY
LOCATIONS WITH DESCRIPTIONS (3 POINTS):

The
wall, the hospital, the statue of Luther

ADDITIVE
COMPREHENSION (10 POINTS):

Origin
Story — Historical Event

Origin
Story — Character

Origin
Story — Organization

Character
Reveal    **X**

Anticipated
Showdown

Storyworld
Reveal  **X**

Other
Micro-Story Reveal

TARGET MARKET
(5 POINTS):

18
- 65 year olds

THOROUGH
DESCRIPTION OF THEIR MEDIA HABITS (5 POINTS):

MEDIUM (REFER
TO LIST AT THE END) (5 POINTS):

Animated Film

WHY IT WORKS
IN THIS MEDIUM (5 POINTS):

To express detailed description of the difference between the
outside and the inside without actually showing any images; allowing the reader
to create the distinction. You are inside the characters head as well.

PLATFORM
(REFER TO LIST AT THE END) (5 POINTS):

DVD and Digital Download

WHY IT WORKS
IN THIS PLATFORM (5 POINTS):

One can only imagine the difference between Eden and the
outskirts of Eden.  It may work as a
movie as well but if we can allow the audience to create their own distinctions
between Eden and the outskirts of Eden, with the help of the words on the page
obviously, the reader would know that Elio, the protagonist, has no choice but
to enter Eden.  The reader would at first
believe Eden are the good guys but ultimately end up rooting for the robber
attempting to break into Eden and help the ones he loves.