The jurassic park lost world remake

We start on isla sorna like my viersion of nublar this is a scottish island. Because its better suited for the mezozoic animals. ( i might even call it oileán searbhas meaning which is isla sorna in irish )

A family arives at sorna because its a warm day the family goes to the sorna beach. cathy bowman who is a toddler in this viersion. Goes into the forest there she encounters a velociraptor. Im of course using the design from my jurrassic park remake. it clucks like a chicken. Then she feeds it a peice of a burger. It then eats it up. She then reaches her hand out to pet it and the raptor places its head on her hand. She pets it and it starts to hoot like an owl. Then she then gives it another peice of burger and squawks like a seagul. She then see's she only has one peice of burger left. The raptor then snaps its jaw and she throws the meat into a bush to get it to go away. It runs into the bush to get the food. And as the little girl tries to run away but trips on a bone. As she slowly gets up a velociraptor pounces on her. Meanwhile on the beach her parents hear her screams. And rush to the forest. The mother seeing the grizzily site screams in horror and we cut to ian malcom yawning.

ians story stays the same nobody beleives him about the dinosaurs. And eventualy he comes to john hammond. Jhon says that there was another island where the animals of jurrassic park were bred. ian asks what about the raptor he saw hatch and hammond confesses those eggs were only there to keep the geusts entertained the majority of the actual creation was on sorna. He also says his wicked daughter petra hammond is slowly taking over ingen and wants to exploit the dinosaurs. He says the only thing he can do to stop her is to change the public opinion and for that he needs photographs of living dinosaurs on sorna. And he wants malcom to join. Ian says he would never go there but then hammond reveals ians girlfreind sarah harding is on the island already ian agrees to go but only to rescue sarah.

On the way their ians daughter kelly malcom wants to come but ian says he cant let her come. So she sneaks into the he meets his team. Eddie carr a freindly technician and nick van owen a suspisous activist. nick says that the locals nickname the islands hear the five deaths. Eventualy after much dred they arive at the island.

we see the gang walking across the scottish forest. Ian see's sarahs footprints and starts to call out her name. We can keep the joke of nick says sarah harding and ian asks how many sarahs he thinks are on this island. Because that made me chuckle.

than beside sarahs footprints nick spots the footprints of a large animal. Nick says that the animal in question would be around the size of an african elephant. Ian and the group run through the jungle as moose like honking is heard. Then all of a sudden the group runs into a stegosaurus herd.

The stegosaurs model are pretty good there neck needs to be shorter and their tail needs to be higher they also likely had scutes and ordostromes around the body and the plates are a different shape

sarah runs into the group and decides to take photos a baby stegosaurus ( without petting it ) this startles the baby and the mother charges at sarah like a rhino. She leaps out of the way and than whilst she is on the ground the mother slams her thagomizers down to sarah. Sarah rolls out of the spikes way. Eddie and ian try and intervene but nick blocks them telling them to watch and not interact. sarah backs down from the mother stego but behind her she is nearly stepped on by an anoyed male. Eventualy she manages to escape from the herd and meets back up with the gang.

Ian and sarah argue with each other. As they arive at the caravan and find kelly malcom has stoawayed onto the island. Suddenly eddie car spots some helicopters with ingen on it and the gang realizes that petra hammond and her team has arived.

we see a bunch of herbivore dinosaurs grazing peacefully. Then all of a sudden a triceratops gets shot in the leg with the tranquilliser dart ( im using my new triceratops design ) and then before it goes to sleep it lets out a loud roar that startles the seismosaurus. The seismosaur designs for the females are good but i want to put blue around the neck for the males. Back to the story the startled saurapods start to stampede ( try say that 3 times fast ) and they knock down a few tree's. The rampaging dinosaurs cause the other herbivores to stampede.

We see jeeps burst out of the forest we get introduced to roland tembo a big game hunter who wants to capture a buck tyrannosaurus rex and nothing else. We see a velociraptor chasing after a compsognathus we then see both animals look up and they see the stampede and run away. We see a group of jeeps zap a flock of galimimus with tazers into a large cage. Two men on top of the cage slam it shut. And the helicopter who has ropes attached to the gali cage fly off with it. We see another helicopter flying with some pteranadon ( who have white pycnofibers ) throwing smoke bombs to block of any exits for the hadrosaur herd ( made up of maiasaura parasaurolophus and edmontosaurus ) then another man in the helicopter darts them with his tranquilliser gun. We see a pachycephalosaurus ( with a weaker headbutt and thicker tail ) try and run away but it gets a net thrown at it. We see a raptor and a compy shoved into a cage and finaly two jeeps wrap ropes around the legs of seismosaurus to get them to trip up empire strikes back style.

Ian sarah eddie nick and kelly watch the scene in horror. We see a close up of nicks face as he seems the most angry out of all of them.

We then see as the sun sets and some pteranadon rest on an evergreen tree. Roland tembo and his assitant ajay sidhu get the their teams paleontologist robert burke who ( reluctantly ) shows him how to track a tyrannosaurus. Eventualy they find footprints. And the trio go to the tyrannosaurus nest. Where they encounter a 7 year old baby tyrannosaurus eating a pachycephlosaurus carcass his parents left him.

The tyrannosaurus babies design is from the isle's juvie rex design ( shot out to crazydino1 who sugested i used the design when i asked for a good one for the infant ) it likely had a duller colour despite being male. Probably a light brown colour.

Robert pleads the others to be gentle when using the infant for bait. Roland ties a chain around a tree and then wrestles the infant wrapping the chain around its neck. The infant not happy tries to bite roland but roland jumps out of the way and the infant bites ajay. Ajay in fustration stomps on the infants leg breaking it. Robert tells ajay the bite is infectted with bacteria and he needs to get medication imediatly.

ajay and burke go out to look for medical attention whilst tembo watches over the infant.

We see in petra hammonds base camp she is explaining she wants to take the captured dinosaurs and make mesozoic park san diego. Meanwhilst robert burke and ajay are getting treatment in a sperate tent from the camps doctor. We see nick van owen explain to the people on his team he is an enviormentalist hired by hammond. He says hammond told him to protect the animals before they arived but now he wants to release them on the hunters. He lockpicks the compsognethus out and then after that the velociraptor before he rips the galimimus door off.

We see as petras giving a speech about a spinosaurus named spike being designed for the park. Then the compys run underneath the workers chairs. one of them whispers " i feel something " the other one says " dont worry its probably just some iguanas we've seen plenty of them".

We then see him open up the pachycephlosaurus enclosure and than he moves on to the maisauras the edmonotsaurs and parasaurolophus.

we see roland tembo watching over the rex and than all of a sudden he hears the parasaurs trumpeting.

roland; " weird the paras trumputing shouldnt be so loud unless.... there out! " he leaps out of the tree and runs to camp.

we see nick finaly releases the straps off of the seismosaurus letting it go finaly.

Suddenly in tent the seismosaurus runs through it knocking down nearly evreything their except for a jurrassic park san diego model. The group slowly gets up after the titan leaves. Then all of a sudden they hide behind the knocked down tables as a flock of galimimus and raptors run in. Then the edmontosaurus and maisaura run in. Evreyone hides behind tables. As they get smashed to peices. Than a parasaurolophus runs in and acidentaly steps on someones head crushing their skull. Than a pachycephlosaurus runs in and headbutts the model of mesozoic park san diego. before the final stampeding dinosaur runs away.

we see robert burke and ajay run into what was once the main tent. Ajay asks " what the hell hapened here ?". Roland goes up to petra hammond and says to him " last time i leave you in charge. "

we see sarah harding taking photos of the dinosaurs leaving the camp whilst nick van owen finds the injured rex infant and brings it back to the base. As the baby tyrannosaurus is bandaged up kelly ian and eddie car goes to the high hide. We see some trees shake and some birds fly and eddie goes down to warn nick and sarah. he runs in and see's the baby tyrannosaur and sarah and nick debate with nick about helping it. Eventualy nick uses eddies gum to heal attach the bandage together. Then all of a sudden a car slams against the caravan. and we see 40 tyrannosaurus rexs show up.

yes tyrannosaurus fossils have been found together which indicates they hunted in packs and after doing my own calculations and talking to my also dinosaur passionate sister. And we have come to the agreement of 40.

Its my personal theory male tyrannosaurs are red with white underbellies and black stripes. Not only would this help camofaluge in the redwood forests but also it would serve as a great form of intimidation. Plus red is a very sexual colour and when your mate can rip your head-off any seconds looking attractive is important.

The pack of rexs gather outside of the caravan let out other calls that the humans cant hear but it rattles a few bottles inside. We see sarah pick up the baby rex and bring it outside the caravan. We see the baby nuzzle its mother sarah nick and eddie quickly get inside the van and then a few seconds later the rex males push the van making it dangle off of the edge of a cliff.

We then see ian watching the tyrannosaurs leave and then he and kelly gets down and goes to the van. Ian then see's that the van is dangling off of the cliff. Kelly gets some rope and ties a bit onto the van and the rest onto a car. Ian drives the car and the van starts to slowly get up. Meanwhilst in the van we see eddie and nick are hanging onto some shelves and presses whilst sarah is lying on some cracking glass not wanting to move in case its breaks. Eddie throws down a hose for her and she grabs it just as the glass breaks. She then starts to climb it but one of the glass shards cuts the hose spraying water on her face. Eventualy evreyone climbs up. Then all of a sudden a male and female tyrannosaurus comes beside ian and kelly in the car. The rope holding the empty caravan finaly snaps and it falls into the ocean. The tyrannosaurs brefily look at it but then turn their attentions to ian and kelly running away. The buck steps on ians leg breaking it. The predators about to make a meal out of malcom when eddie steps on the huge animals tail. The male than bites his head and the doe bites his leg. They snap him in half and blood splatters evreywhere. The tyrannosaurs see the rest of the humans have got away and go find the rest of the pack.

We then see kelly, sarah, ian and nick find a stone that looks like a gravestone. And places down eddies wrench in front of it. Than all of a sudden they run into the hunters and both sides get into an arguement. Roland Tembo points out that their on an island full of dinosaurs and their more likely to surive working together. Evreyone agrees .

we see Petra hammond driving a jeep. Most of the other hunters are sitting on top of the jeep. Nick van owen is siting on the back of the truck. Roland tembo , robert burke , sarah harding , ajay , ian and kelly malcom are walking. Ian malcom is falling behind but luckily the group is paitent enough to wait up for him. We see then see sarah harding talk to petra hammond.

( sarah knocks on petras car window )

( petra slowly lowers it down )

sarah; " hey petra whats so important in that truck you put your men on top of it instead of inside it "

petra; " wouldnt you like to know pheasant? "

and then petra highers it up and drives off.

The next day one of the hunters goes out to brush his teeth when his tooth brush is stolen by a compsognathus.

i forgot to mention my compsognathus redesign. The lost world ones good but lacks feathering we now know they have also they most likely werent the land pirahnahs they were portrayed to be. They likely would have had bird like colours maybe greyish to help with the triassic heat

back to the story. The hunter chases after the compy who jumps onto a rock in the river. The hunter runs to the river where the compy is and then raptor snaps at the compy scareing it away. The hunter is surounded by a group of raptors. One of the raptors leaps onto his face and rips his eyeballs out of his sockets. The man strangles the raptors and tries to run away but the rest snap at him. He throws a stone at them but he misses it and the raptors watch him waiting for him to bleed out to death blind. Eventualy he tries to run but collapses in exhaustion killing him. The raptors eat his corpse as the river turns red because of the blood.

We see roland tembo hear the screams. He runs through the forest. And comes just in time to see the hunters skelaton in a river of blood.

We then see the group travel and robert burke the paleontologist show the group on the radio that if they hire the frequency up they can here the sounds of the dinosaurs better and it sounds like the tyrannosaurus's are nearby. Luckily in the montage ians leg heals. And the group settles down for the night.

As they sleep a doe tyrannosaurus sniffs petra hammonds truck. Petra wakes up and screams she starts the truck and drives it away. The female rex chases after her and suddenly the rest of the tyrannosaurus pack burst out and the group run away. A large chunk of the group is eaten by the pack. Roland takes out his elephant gun aims it at a buck and pulls the trigger only to find their is no bullets in it. He then see's nick van owen dumping the bullets into a river. The group quickly runs into a cave avoiding the jaws of a buck tyrannosaurus.

Even the gatherers are mad at nick and roland tembo robert burke and ajay have gained the groups respect. As they joureny out of the caves a tree is knocked over and kelly malcom jumps out of the way. The rest of the tree's shake and a roar is heard. Out bursts petra hammond in her truck. Luckily petra tells them that the ingen village is just over the long grass and that when they go over they can ask for help to come to the island. When they ask why she cant go with them she says the grass is to thick for her truck. However as the gang travels across the grass roland tembo accidentaly steps on an egg. Robert burke identifies it as belonging to a dilophosaurus and than a dilophosaurus leaps out and eats ajay.

So i made a mistake last time in saying the dilophosaurus was venomous and had a frill. I was also wrong in terms of it not having feathers. So im using art from my favorite paleoartist rj palmer. Who depicted it as mostly brown with blue areas for display. theirs also a dilophosaurus alpha called golden jaw who is bigger than the others has a golden crest hands tail and of course jaw.

the dilophosaurs pick nearly evreyone off in the long grass robert burke says that the pack probably arent even hungry they just want to kill any threat to their babies. The group makes their way through the long grass and all of a sudden robert burke is bitten in the leg by a dilo. Luckily kelly malcom pokes it in the eye with a stick like a crocodile the group makes it to the ingen village and locks the door but they can still hear the hawk like screeches outside. Nick van owen calls ingens security team to the island. Then golden jaw bursts through the ceiling and eats nick van owen. The rest of the gang escape outside and golden jaw brings to two more dilos to help him. Ones leg gets caught in bear trap roland tembo sets up whist the other one wrestles tembo himself and golden jaw himself is slamming his crest at a car the robert , ian , sarah and kelly are hidding in. The windows are about to shatter when roland tembo shoots a fuel canister causing an explosion killing the dilo wrestling him. This starts a fire in the ingen village. Golden jaw stares at him a couple of seconds and runs off. As helicopters arive nearly all of the gang get in roland says despite evreything he wants to get petra to come. Then all of a sudden as the fire blazes something large crashes out of the building in the hellish landscape roland stares directly into the eyes of buck tyrannosaurus

the two hunters look at each other as the village blazes roland puts a single tranquillizer dart into his gun. The rex charges snapping at tembo. The trophy hunter leaps away from the tyrants jaws and shoots it in the neck with the tranquilliser. The rex falls into a slumber its weight crushing an abandoaned car. Suddenly a group of helicopters come in and put out the fire. Petra hammond congragulates roland saying that not only as he captured the buck rex and she has captured the baby but there was also one dinosaur caught in the original stampede that nick van owen didnt free. The triceratops!!!

Meanwhile in san diego docks we see ingens ship arrive. Petra hammond gives her speech about san diego and roland tembo and robert burke decide to join the gatherers and tell them whats going on. They explain to ian , sarah and kelly. Ian gets karen to mind kelly whilst the 4 adults go to the dock.

The triceratops wakes up and tramples on some ingen workers its tail wacks a lever which opens up the tyranosaurus cell. The buck bursts out and the two animals charge towards san diego.

We see the tyrannosaurus drinking at a river under a bridge. Meanwhilst the triceratops is charging through the city. It bursts into the san diego park and drinks from the water. The hero's get told where the trike is by a civilian and head to the park. They see the triceratops grazing and scaring off deer. Suddenly the Tyrannosaurus buck enters the park. The rex bites the trike on the side of the throat and the large herbivore is pinned to the ground. However the herbivore hits the rexs head with its frill and charges knocking it down. The tyrannosaurus then tries to bite its horn and whilst this is happening the gang decides to get something to distract the rex. Except for robert burke who wants to study the fight and update them if anything important happens.

The group finds out because kelly was watching petra hammonds speech on youtube and phones sarah telling her about it as roland drives. She tells them its in jurrassic park san diego and so roland drives into it bursting the doors open. Ian gets the baby tyrannosaurus and brings it back to the car. Roland drives to the park and burke phones sarah telling her that the tyrannosaurus has pinned the triceratops down and is closing in for the kill.

They arrive just in time the babies cries causes the bucks parental instincts to take over instead of his hunger and he follows the car. Robert burkes stays behind to nurse the triceratops back to health and bring it back to the ship. Meanwhilst we see the buck chasing after the car ian has to deliberately go slower so the rex can catch up. A school bus nearly rams them so they drive onto the path. However the rex just rams it and knocks it into a building. The gang drives to the ramp where the car jumps into the air and flies into the boat the rex jump on board and runs at them mouth wide open

They drive into the docks to avoid the huge animal they stop the car put the baby down and get out via a small door the tyrannosaurus cant get in. Petra hammond walks into the docks to look for the adult rex only to find the baby she tries to catch it but then the Buck rex bursts in and uses its huge jaws to rip petras legs off. The baby rex then finishes her off.

The rest of the gang close the roof of the rex cell. Robert burke says the triceratops is healed and secure. And they bring the ship back to sorna and release dinosaurs.

we then see the malcom family watching the news and jhon hammond tells evreyone " these animals need our absense not our protection to survive "

we then see the buck meet up with his mate and his hatchling the happy family reunite. Meanwhilst beside them the triceratops grazes beside the stegosaurus herd. Then on a large rock a pteranadon roars at the sun.

The End

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A brachiosaurus foot goes into the mud and it roars walking next to its parent as a pachyrhinosaurus group are drinking from a lake when I foot slams down on the ground and the screen goes black. PRIMAL CARNAGE REVOLUTION