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House of Cards - Third Season Final Episode

So the president and the first lady break up? Sounds reasonable. They've worked their entire lives to get to where they are. It's time to let a disagreement over temporary status and advancement for Claire to turn into the most public breakup the country has ever seen.

I think it is compelling TV to put the characters into this situation.

I don't think that they did enough to let the viewers understand how they got there. The Russian ultimatum seemed forced. If you want Underwood to really be in the wrong, make it a negotiation. If the Russians gave him the choice to lose a certain part of the deal OR throw his wife over it would be more of an issue. Claire could have kept her job. She could have been on the road to being a credible candidate herself someday. But Frank let the situation turn into HER failure so that he could secure a tepid victory. Claire finds out that he has been cutting her out of the decision making process and it might be just the winds of politics. Claire finds out that it was elective sabotage of his wife for marginal gain and it might be over for them.

Maybe that's what the Russians wanted all along, too. It's tough to get a chess master to make a mistake. Underwood's personal life might just be the way to get him to take his eyes off the board and lose everything in a: check mate.
Fast and Furious 7 Solutions

I would like to start off by saying that the Fast and Furious franchise is one of my favorites and that it was a very unfortunate passing of Paul Walker.

I grew up watching the Fast and Furious franchise with my brother because he got me into it. I've noticed the movies always try to one up their previous film in order to keep the franchise fun and entertaining for viewers. While their not wrong about this, because each film has been very entertaining for me in my opinion, I just feel like it has got to the point where they may have taken it too far. I became really into Fast and Furious when I noticed it wasn't JUST about cars and fast driving. Fast and Furious involves a story about love, family, morals, relationships, home, death, and trying to obtain a future the character's have been trying to pursue.

The franchise revolves around the idea of always being there for family and protecting them at all costs. The first several films were simply just about the protagonists running from the law and/or street gangs; and the films made sense to an extent. But the producers and directors have taken it too far when they decided to step up their game for the viewers by making the antagonists too unrealistic. I could understand the protagonists having a correlation with gangs, the police, and even the cartel in their first five films. But now the protagonist, Dom Toretto, is dealing with cyber terrorism, nuclear warfare, and high-end technology. I could see how entertaining that could be to watch. It sounds like a movie with a TON of action. But it takes away the story original fans seemed to love about the films. A story about family.

I believe the story line of family ended with the sixth installment of the franchise. Furious 7 was the movie that changed it all, in my humble opinion. Although the passing of Paul Walker made the filming complicated (he filmed half of the scenes to the 7th movie when he got into a car accident), I feel like the movie had way too much unnecessary action. The beginning of the film was golden. They brought back Race Wars(from the very first fast and furious movie), they moved back to LA and brought back their happy little family living in their iconic house. But the movie took a huge turn when their next adventures included hijacking a military convoy in the Middle East only to find out the device they wanted was in a different country. There was just a whole lot of back and forth that didn't make sense and it could've been changed. And a big plot whole I realized was that the protagonists left LA to hunt the main antagonist down instead of being hunted, just for the protagonists to go back to LA at the end of the movie like they were in the beginning. There were many unrealistic mistakes with Furious 7 that could've been changed.
How to fix Ready Player One

In the film, Ready Player One, I feel as though the plot must be fixed. To start off this movie was great. This movie had viewers loving the entire cross platform virtual reality gaming life come together in unison. The only problem I really do have with this movie would have to be the characters. The antagonist is IOI, an evil corporation controlled by the dedicated mastermind Nolan Sorrento. Halliday creator of the Oasis inputs an easter egg challenge in the game before he passes away. The player that does find this easter egg gets to take over the game as the owner. Sorrentos objective is to find the easter egg to take over the Oasis and monetize it. This definitely ruins the purpose of the entire movie. Throughout the film Sorrento has more power than the game itself. The game was created for the purpose of free will. Do anything you want, whenever you want. The Oasis gave many people the opportunity to live a life that they could not have in the real world. The game itself throughout the film seems powerless and disorganized. The one thing that should be fixed would be completely removing Sorrento as the antagonist and making the game itself the antagonist. Wade being the protagonist would now be able to focus on just the game and other players. Now it would make things more interesting as it would be Wade against the game and the other players that would fight each other just to find the easter egg. Removing Sorrento would give the freedom gamers want in the game. This would remove all the small anomalies within the movie itself. The anomalies being limitations that big corporations like IOI would put on the game itself to try to control both the real world and the Oasis therefore making it a fair game for all players.
Breaking bad

The Breaking Bad storyline is an awesome tale of a
terminally ill man who pursues a career of drugs and crime in order to secure a
future for his family after he passes.  It
is a great story line up until the fifth season when Walter White goes off the
rails. It make no sense that Walter would get cold feet and murder his right
hand enforcer, Mike. Walter meets Mike in the second season and he sees that
they are worlds apart. Mike’s police background keeps him smart, cautious and
always one step ahead of the fuzz, while Walter is still painfully novice at
his new-found passion. Walter White was so wealthy at this point in the story
(we later find out his net worth is over $80 million) that all he had to do was
keep paying the 9 inmates their hazard pay and no one would have flipped. If
Walter would have done this, he wouldn’t have had to kill Mike and the 9 other
inmates and ultimately it would have saved Jesse from slavery and Hank’s death.
It is because of Mike’s death, that Jesse Pinkman forms an alliance with Hank
Schrader to take down Walter. Walter then chooses hire an assassin to kill
Jesse. The only thing to cause this sort of irrational behavior and paranoia is
if Walter White had been getting high in his own supply. That would reasonably
explain his rash decisions to take out both his business partners after several
seasons of happy and profitable growth. If I were the story editor, I would
have either Walter continue to pay the hazard pay to Mikes guys and have still
have Hank find out Walters true identity OR have mikes death and Walters
paranoia attributed to Walters newfound addiction to his master product, as a
result of all the stress associated with running the most powerful and profitable
meth ring in Northern America.
How to make Star Wars: The Last Jedi a better film

I have always been a fan of Star Wars ever since I saw the prequel trilogy when I was a kid. With the first of the prequel trilogy airing in1999 and the final film of the prequel trilogy airing in 2005. But in 2015, George Lucas released a brand new Star Wars trilogy into my life called The Force Awakens. I absolutely fell in love with this film and with Star Wars. I went from being just a mere fan to a complete nerd of the franchise. I began to watch the original trilogy to better understand the story, I've watched a couple animated series about Star Wars, and even reviewed some comics. The way I felt about The Force Awakens was probably what other viewers were feeling back in 1977 when the very first Star Wars came out.

I praised Star Wars up until the point when they released the next installment to the sequel trilogy, The Last Jedi. It was nothing like I expected it to be. Don't get me wrong, the music and directing were great, but the story did not correlate with the previous film. This was due to the fact that Disney decided to switch up the director. There were just so many unanswered questions that left me and some viewers who agree with me in awe. Because of this doing, the last film of the trilogy was ruined as well because the director tried to answer the unanswered questions of The Last Jedi instead of focusing on a good story line.

I guess there are several solutions I can come up with that could've improved the film substantially. The first is the obvious one of not changing directors. Switching directors can cause them to have different visions, screenplay, and story. Another solution for Rian Johnson (director of The Last Jedi) would be to improve the story. The movie he created was very cool and kept me entertained, but at the end of the movie he left people with a void from not being able to process what they just watched. There are some examples of questions he failed to answer or just plainly answered leaving the audience unhappy with these answers. Rian Johnson failed to give us an answer on what happened to the famous C3P-O's golden arm and why he had a red arm. He also decided the answer the story behind Rey's heritage in such an unsatisfying way because I was expecting more. Rian Johnson claimed that he loved and grew up watching Star Wars, yet he made the world famous character of Luke Skywalker to feel so useless, cowardly, and angry. I would have to re-watch the film in order to come up with every detail I found unsatisfying and how it could've been improved.

All I have to say is that the one major mistake that caused this film to not be so great was the changing of the directors.
13 Reasons Why

13 Reason Why is possible one of my all time favorite Netflix shows to binge watch. It is a very popular show on Netflix due to the fact i’ve heard that many people relate to many scenes of the show and are in touch with their feelings. A show that has the ability to make so many people feel and relate is just a great show in general. It is not easy to relate with almost half the world. 13 Reasons Why does a fantastic job with emphasizing some of the real issues that are occurring in and out of high school. The show brings awareness towards gay and lesbian people, problems with being a student athlete, bullying and what is most common, suicide. I think it does a marvelous job of just bringing awareness in general and allows people who have not experienced this kind of wake up and realize wow this is really happening all over the world.

The moral of the story shows a lot of character and truth however some things just aren’t realistic.

Yes bullying and insecurities do happen throughout years of life but the fact that all of this is happening on the school property and some teachers and parents are so oblivious to it makes the show a little irritating. In some scenes students are reaching our desperate trying to seek help from the teachers. Which in my opinion shows an example of bravery because it is not easy to get help. The teachers and adult figures are just so numb and obvious to the people reaching out to them. It makes the show seem like well there no hope if you do decide to reach out. After all the shows main motive is to provide help and awareness of those who are suicidal or are in need but the fact that the show doesn’t even portray one figure who is successful in getting help defeats the whole purpose. Adding that would be the cherry on top of these episodes.
Big Bang Theory - The Sales Call Sublimation

We've established that I am a fan. Two fixes for this one:

Sheldon and Raj get to name an asteroid. They wrangle a bit over how to name it. That was cute. But it was a chance for advancement in Sheldon and Amy's relationship. I think it would have been better if at the end they had named the comet "Amy." When Amy asks why it's named after her, Sheldon can tell her that "Nobody expects Raj to end up with Emily. Everyone knows you and I are going to be together until that comet comes crashing down and destroys life as we know it. Did I mention it is a planet-killer size?" "Sheldon, I - I don't know what to say?" "Wow, that's going around. Goodnight." He doesn't have to notice the effect it has on her. It's the great part of their relationship.

Next, we go to the Penny and Leonard plot. I really liked the way the therapist lit into Penny for using Leonard to get in the door. It might have been cool to keep that up in the next scene. She is protective of Leonard in a way that his mother never has been. She gets Penny to realize something about her life? I wouldn't mind if it were something about needing a third wheel in their relationship. She might realize that Sheldon is necessary. They are really ready for the next step in their lives. Sheldon has prepared them? Just a thought.

The therapist might eventually become so defensive about Leonard that she writes a book about undoing his mother's influence on him. Wouldn't it be interesting to see her come into direct conflict with Leonard's mom at a book signing. The book title might be a great dig at her too?
How to get away with murder

This is actually a Television series usually comes on 2 times or 3 times a year i cant really remember. Its about a defense lawyer who hires students to help her with her cases. During these cases there are murders going around and she is behind them. She has her students break the laws and cover it up at the same time. Hense the name How to get away with murder. It all ties up with the main defense attorney, who is seen as this powerful yet devious lawyer. She is very good at her job but knows how to get around the law. So i do not necessarily like how this last season that ended November i believe went down. One of her students was involved with another and he ended up dead in the attorneys house. That is the way it ended and its suspenseful because it doesn't tell you who is the one dead until the very last 30 seconds of the show. How irritating! So how would i fix it? I would definitely not do the whole last minute thing. In other words, how about telling us who is dead and then throw mystery solvers around giving hints to how he died or who was last with him. I really dislike how long the next season is to start. It is too long of a wait. Also one thing that i get bothered of is all the men with men scenes. I thought this would be a drama show but it shows too much and so graphic. I have nothing against same-sex PDA but this show almost every scene is something that involves it. I have a best friend who is gay and i love him. Yes its suspenseful and dramatic; even though that is the best part we still need some hints to keep us intrigued with the show. If you watched the show you would love it! Especially because that is what i am moving towards as a career, obviously not to break the law but to know the law and how to win. I love the rush that these attorneys get to solve their case. That is just something that intrigues me.
Fernidad

A kid’s movie with a bunch of bulls fighting to make their ultimate dream come true, fighting "El Primero." For the bulls one thing they do not know is the part that the bull NEVER wins.  In other words, they die no matter what. It is a great coming of age film, especially for kids that are growing up in a world full of different personalities and are having to learn about themselves before they can fully understand how to life works. It also worked in the way that it has demonstrated that the power of not fighting back may be just as strong as the other way around. Although, there were a few scenes where I believed that Fernidad should've listened and stayed in a place where it wouldn't harm himself or those around him. This movie also comes to show how brutal bull fights may be. Now, one of the main things I would consider changing would be, why does a parent always die? It’s already traumatizing enough for a kid to watch fighting, competition, bullying, but also death? Why is it that when the child decides to be different, the older generation pushes so hard for them to be the way the parent wants and does not let the child be who THEY want to be? A solution to this matter would be for the parent to be open minded, for the older generation to understand that not every kid wants to be like them in a sense of career path and/ or in general. There is so much sexism involved in this movie as well, just because Fernidad is a giant bull, it does not immediately mean he is tough, a beast, “a killer,” he is actually a sensitive character that never wanted anymore than to be loved for who he was. Long story short. Kid’s movies need more open minded parents that accept their children for who they want to be, having more compassion when it comes down to death in a child’s movie…
A More Conclusive Ending

Movie: Jurassic Park

Jurassic Park will forever be one of Steven Spielberg’s masterpieces with its action and realistic depiction of dinosaurs. The film inspired a generation of paleontologists and piqued the whole world’s interest in dinosaurs. However, the movie possesses one flawed aspect: the fact that John Hammond survives. One of the themes of the film is the ignorance regarding the control of the dinosaurs. The theme park on Isla Nublar foolishly brings creatures back that are thousands of years old, which went extinct for a reason. When Ian Malcolm explains how life always finds a way to persist and that the dinosaurs will never be controlled, Hammond dismisses his advice. He believes that nothing can go wrong at the theme park, and rather than respecting the dinosaurs, he exploits them. Almost everyone who contributed to the creation of the dinosaurs and the theme park’s function ended up dying. Their deaths prove the point Ian Malcolm made about the inability to control the chaos of life itself. However, John Hammond, the creator of the theme park, ends up surviving. Rather than experience the power he sought so hard to control, he escapes without a scratch. The fact that John Hammond survives deeply disturbs the central theme of the film. Hammond is the whole reason dinosaurs went out of extinction, and he, out of anyone, should pay the price. Although his intentions were somewhat pure, John Hammond ignorantly thought he had complete control over life itself. John even put his grandchildren in harm’s ways to prove his control. When he escapes on the helicopter at the end of the film, there is a sense of incompleteness due to his survival. Justice is not rightly served, and the dinosaurs do not show their dominance. The perfect timing for his death would have been when John ran for the helicopter because it would show the foolishness of thinking he could outrun his fate. It would have been the nail in the coffin and would signify that no one could control such a power as the creation of life.
Euphoria

Episode 1 of Euphoria starring Zendaya was executed amazingly. Critics are saying that it is promoting drug abuse but if you step back and actually analyze the movie you will see that the show is trying to provide insight to many teens hidden lives. It was an accurate depiction of what many teens struggle with but isn’t often talked about and that is serious drug addiction. It is often swept under the rug and described as a phase but the show explains how common it really is and how teens are able to cover their tracks. The show had you thinking what happened to the main character’s father and why he was absent from the plot. This might come in later episodes but if it was presented in the first episode the audience would have a better understanding of the main character Rue. There could have been more information on why the dad wasn’t present and what exactly was his role in his daughters downward spiral. They also should have included more information about the relationship that Rue has with her sister and how her sister felt after being traumatized and finding her sister that overdosed. The ending of the episode leaves the audience with knowledge that all of the characters are connected in a way that they are very unaware about which was a well done cliffhanger. Most movies show a person having an addiction but not the moments leading up to the abuse and the person’s triggers. The show is very graphic but it is well supported. If there could be less shown drug use I think more people would have a better time watching the show. This was only episode one so I am sure that following episodes will give more background on the main character Rue.
Movie- Footloose (2011)

Footloose (2011)

Catchy Blake Shelton music, line dancing, and a bit of romance, any teen
would swoon for this film. With professional dancer, Julianne Hough, and her
co- star, Kenny Wormald, danced and created a beautiful chemistry on screen.
This modern version of Footloose did not do justice in the recreation of the 1984
version, because it was a sexual version of it. Otherwise it was a carbon copy
of it, including a chunk of lines from the 1984 version.

It can be a hit or miss when remaking a film, in this case it was a miss.
With the sexualization of Ariel and the choreography, it took away from the
expression of how ridiculous the laws were for the normal, harmless acts of fun
showed in the 1984 version. There was choreography placed for Ariel in the
updated version included grinding and booty shaking. Ariel takes off her blouse
instead of throwing a cowboy hat in the air to start of the car racing duel. Lastly,
Kenny Wormald cannot live up to Kevin Bacon's suave acts. Why is there a need
to sexualize everything in film today? It distracts from the actors, the
message that is being portrayed, and the story line itself. If the director or
writers would have toned it down, it would have been a perfect modern remake.
Taking away the grinding and sweat when the actors dance in the 2011 version
the new choreography would have been much more capturing. They hired
professional dancers for the remake, they could have put actual dancing in the
movie. There was more focus on the laws that were made than there was on the
forbidden romance between Ariel and Ren in the 2011 film. It felt as if there
was a gap in the movie, if they would just insert more time between Ren and
Ariel, the movie would instantly become better.
Dope (2015)

Dope was heralded as an underdog, coming of age story that flipped the script about the stereotypes surrounding young black and Latino teenagers from low-income neighborhoods. The protagonist, Malcolm, is a nerdy, accidental drug dealer trying to get into Harvard, who encounters many challenges along the way. Some situations presented deal with serious topics, like race and wealth, but the movie is fast-paced and humorous. This is a story that many teenagers can relate to, especially those who do not usually have such authentic representation. All of these elements came together in this movie, a breath of fresh air for the movie industry in the “Oscars so white”- era.

One simple issue that stood in the way of this becoming the ultimate movie for proper representation of historically oppressed groups was its lack of females and representative interactions between the female characters. This movie, surprisingly, fails the Bechdel Test, even with its dynamic and multi-dimensional women. This means that the female characters fail to have a conversation, or the only conversations shown revolve around men. A simple solution to this would be dedicating at least one main scene to the strong and detailed female characters. That scene could serve to advance the plot, or it could be representative of the issues low-income women of color face growing up. The movie is solely focused on the protagonist, so there are rarely scenes with two or more speaking females are there. For example, the two main female characters, Nakia and Diggy, are at the same party, but do not even converse. There is also a time where Diggy is with Malcolm delivering the drugs to a rich buyer, but they run into the buyer’s daughter instead. These scenes and others could have benefited from a few lines between the two women, even if it were just small talk or an introductory conversation. The lack of this simple conversation between female characters distracts from an otherwise really representative and interesting movie.
Avengers Endgame: Time travel was taken very lightly

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Marvel has made a huge name for itself in the cinematic form over the past 11 years, and it is my opinion that every movie it has put out has done a good job at capturing the attention of its audience until the very end. I can't name one Marvel movie that I didn't fully enjoy until the credits rolled. However, there have been some plots that I wish they had altered to make a more cohesive and thought out story.
Avengers Endgame is one of the movies that I believe could have been changed to better enhance the realism of the story, while still keeping it's charm. My most major complaint being their cavalier reaction to time travel.

## Why did everyone just say "ok"?

In the movie, time travel was their solution to fix everything that Thanos had done, and bring back all the people they had lost. This does make sense, a major solution to a major problem. The issue I have with this though is that people did not really have a large reaction to the fact that they would use time travel to reconcile everything. Most people just accepted it and moved on, with hardly any reaction at all. Tony Stark was the only character who had a real and strong reaction when this idea was told to him, but everyone else including Pepper Potts simply accepted it as a feasible idea. Time travel requires more than just a natural acceptance, it breaks the fabric of our reality and I believe should elicit much more of a response and a little more push back than it did.

## The Fix

All that would need to change to allow me to move past this point is a little more realism in characters reaction to time travel as their solution. More people must deny the idea and claim its insanity before they are eventually won over by the science behind it. I believe that this could set up some beautiful scenes where the characters are reliving the pain of their loss while fighting the one thing that might be able to bring everyone back. With a little more emotion towards their solution, I believe that Endgame could have pushed the boundaries of Marvel a little further in the right direction.
Alana Roberts/ Vampire Diaries/ Greys Anatomy

In the TV show The Vampire Diaries they end the show with Stephan Salvatore dying in hell fire. They then end the show with showing the rest of the cast later on in their life when they die in heaven with their families. They just simply pan out over the years within 3 minutes to end the show. I want to present a solution to this show by saying they should have never had Stephan Salvatore die. They also should have never ended the show showing Stephan dying or even showing the rest of the cast later on in heaven. I think that it should have been drawn out a bit more. Better yet, I think the proper solution to this would have been to carry out the series showing what the rest of the cast accomplished since they all looked so happy in heaven. We could have seen where they were at before they made it into heaven with all the smiles on their faces. We should have seen them growing into the people they were before their death and with the families they have created. Damon Salvatore and Elena Gilbert could have been shown with their children as well as their new life as human Elena and Damon. It would have been a good idea to show Elena Gilbert's nursing career play out with her challenges throughout it all. We could have seen the challenges the cast endured over the years once the hell fire was taken care of. I believe this would have been a great solution that would have made the show last longer and it would have been very entertaining to the audience. The vampire diaries audience was super upset when the show ended and this could have given us so many answers to what we all wonder.

In the TV show Grey's Anatomy season 16 Alex Carev leaves the show by a letter to his wife on the show and other cast mates saying that he is back with Izzy Stevens, his ex wife. He finds out he has two kids that Izzy never told him about and that is the reason he left since he wants to be with his family. This is the family that Alex has always wanted and he said he couldn’t miss out on the kids lives more than he already did. This whole situation could have been a great outlet to spin the show around. I think a better solution to this would have been to see Izzy come to Seattle with the two kids and “surprise” Alex with the news. I also think that one of the kids could have been sick and Izzy could have come seeking help for her daughter since she knows Grey Sloan Memorial is a great hospital. This could have been played out in many different ways and we could have seen Alex’s kids grow up with Meridth’s kids. We could have seen Alex adjust to becoming a dad and also see the relationship evolving between Alex and Izzy. The whole cast wouldn’t be heartbroken with the fact of Alex leaving and we could see Jo, Alex’s current wife on the show find out the news. By seeing Jo’s  true reactions to Alex’s face rather than her other cast mates around her would have been interesting to see. We could have seen the lives that Alex and Izzy make as a new family and seen them adjust to a life in Seattle, as well as how the cast adjusts to Alex becoming a father, especially if they did it in a way where the daughter was sick.
AlliTakenaka - I Am Legend

When thinking about the movies that I would criticize greatly to improve its potential, only one truly comes in mind.

I Am Legend, a movie directed by Francis Lawrence and released in 2007, is one of my favorite movies to watch even to this day. There are many pros and cons about this movie, but one thing that gets to me the most is the ending and how terrible it is.

Personally, the movie starring Will Smith accurately portrayed the post-apocalypse world and how lonely one can live inside it. The flashbacks seen with his family interaction, then their deaths right before his eyes, was extremely touching and relatable. What I do not understand is that if he went years of surviving on his own with a dog as his best friend, why he would volunteer his life to be taken at the end? He has come so far and met new faces in a place where there was no hope left, yet soon enough, he chooses to end his life.

If an individual is feeling lonely and has to live day to day without real human interaction, they would be absolutely ecstatic when he/she meets someone real again. I would not give up my life, instead, I would do my best to make sure everyone is okay and can find a safe haven that can rebuild the world. I would change the ending to at least the cliche "two years later" with a scene of a small village full of survivors, doing their best to rebuild a new and safe society. They can change their ways to prevent previous mistakes, but everyone feels and relates to the thought of hope. In my perspective, anything else could have been better than Will Smith killing himself as a "sacrifice."
Dog With a Blog

Among many new shows added to Disney Channel, “Dog With a Blog” seems to be a hit among audiences. This fictional show, told from a family dog’s perspective, shows a newly blended family trying to adjust to their new life as step siblings. In this program, the new family dog, Stan, possesses the ability to talk. All kids in the family know this, however they keep it from their parents. In addition to talking, Stan also blogs about his daily happenings and agenda. This show does not fail to relate to teenagers, as it depicts many everyday teen and adolescent milestones. Problems with significant others, parents, and school are provided in this show so as to connect with it’s young audience. “Dog With a Blog” also touches on every pet owner’s dream of being able to talk and literally communicate with their furry friend. Although this show is almost close to an average teenager’s life, the aspect of Stan vlogging deems unnecessary. Throughout each episode, the everyday family craze goes on with school, siblings, and whatnot. The kids are able to communicate with Stan in order to be entertained or talk about their problems, and he never fails to show the loyal love and support a pet should provide. However, at the end of each episode, Stan is shown creating video blogs about what happened in his day, which does not add to the plot in any way, since no additional insight is provided as the video is made. The rest of the show does it’s job connecting with the audience, providing a comedic touch, and relaying an overlying theme for the episode. Without the video blogging, the show would still gain and retain interest. Removing the video blogging, or “vlogging” aspect of the show would be best. Though a show with a talking dog may sound cheesy enough, emitting Stan’s vlogging ability would make the show less corny.
Grey's Anatomy: Derek's Death

If you're a huge Shonda Rhimes hater, then I'm sure you have found yourself contemplating the various ways that Derek could have survived that car accident. I mean Grey-Sloan Memorial Hospital's head of neurological surgery is taken out by a crappy neurologist that is just rotten. I have found myself spending countless times watching the episode fueled by anger at all the ways that Derek could have lived because frankly the show is just terrible without the love story that fueled the entire show season after season. Why does Meredith have to be so miserable, she had finally found happiness and it was stolen from her.

Instead of Shonda killing him off, I think that his sister could have been notified and brought into the hospital because someone in the hospital recognized who he was or the work that he has done. When his sister is raced in she discovers a simple way that a procedure can save him because the hospital that he was at was making several errors as we seen on the episode. This opportunity not only saves Derek's life but also allows for them to provide workshops and opportunities for the surgeons at the hospital to learn about neurology and provides another way for the show to grow or branch off like Shonda likes to do. The doctor that was trying to help Derek was on the right track, and we seen this when she was written in as a character further down the line as she comes to work for the hospital so obviously this could have been an easy adaptation. This would've been an easy fix to eliminate the death of Derek, but also allow for the show to have more opportunities for growth. Derek's death has majorly impacted everyone's life and having him on the show could have made for happier fans.
How to Fix The Bachelor

Let me just start of by saying how terribly great the show is! Honestly, its bad that you cant stop watching it and that we America so much high rating views! One thing that we must change about the bachelor is why is the show now casting a lot of young girls? It now seems that casting directors really like to cast girls in their early 20's apparently. Which is pretty obvious that most girls in their early 20's are not ready for a full time commitment of marriage. We see this a lot in the show how older contestants question other younger girls if they are even in the show for the right reasons. The final result of the show is who ever the bachelor is they will pick the final girl at the end of the episode and propose to her. Most of the time the girls who are eliminated get to go back to their hometowns and then get offered brand deals and they get featured in a article or they come out on a talk show and talk about their experience on the show. So really, if you are eliminated you get some fame out of it. Which keeps me wondering that most of these young women going in the show aren't really there for the right reasons. I've done my own research on Instagram and follow all the past contestants from past seasons and I can obviously see that they are all doing well and working with brands and have gained a huge number of followers, they're basically famous! So its pretty obvious that a 22 year old girl who seriously thinks they can find their potential husband on a dating show, is not really looking for anything serious. I would cast older people like ages 25 and older.
Fixitinpost Wikia

Have you ever wanted to change the way your favorite show or movie ended? Ever had a great twist for a beloved show? This is a wiki for all of the people who had a great idea how to make a TV show or movie better. The rule here is to alter and add. Leave the complaining to the fan sites. We are marginally better than that. We cannot change the movies or episodes in real life. But we can fix it in post.

## Welcome to the Fix it in Post Wikia

Have you ever wanted to change the way your favorite show or movie ended? Ever had a great twist for a beloved show? This is a wiki for all of the people who had a great idea how to make a TV show or movie better. The rule here is to alter and add. Leave the complaining to the fan sites. We are marginally better than that. We cannot change the movies or episodes in real life. But we can fix it in post.

## Join the conversation

Add the title of your show. Go to the box marked "add a new page" in the upper right corner and contribute.

State the problem.

Write the fix.

It won't change the world, but it might give you closure. I still haven't forgiven Dexter. Can someone please fix the final episode? That might be too much to ask of any wiki.
Episode VII not IV

I had been waiting for The Force Awakens for too long. And because of this, my expectations for the movie where high. I knew going into the theatre that these expectations were not to be fully satisfied as Disney’s production riddled the set. The biggest thing I wish I could fix was the quality of the villain, Kylo Ren. Quite frankly, I found his person to be a disturbance of the force if you will. If the chief bad guy is to be presented as a whiny and insecure boy, he needs to have the backstory to make this understandable. But as of now, how terrible could your life have been with Han Solo and Princess Leia as your parents?! To build off of this, what in the world did Han Solo do to ‘deserve’ the death at the hand of his son. Yes, I was already emotionally invested in Han Solo because I grew up watching the original trilogies, but for the younger generations, there needs to be an additional factor that instills this heartbreak in the viewers as it did for me. A backstory other than Han and Leia were the worst parents in the world needs to be added to the story line. Another issue I had is that The Force Awakens needed more original content, not another repetition of the trilogies before it. I felt as though Han’s death was Darth Vader killing Obi Wan all over again. Another suggestion to fix this was to keep Kylo in a mask until this moment, and have a dialogue that explains the issues. I think this would help the weeniness from being seen. Overall, Han should only have died with an additional backstory. Another piece of repetition I noticed was a super weapon shaped like a planet that could destroy everything. I would change this super weapon to be unique, perhaps not as large of a target for the resistance, because I felt as though I knew what the outcome was going to be right away. And finally, I would have liked to see Rey receive more Jedi training, as Kylo and Luke’s training is largely unobserved.
Empire

*Empire* is a TV show that tells the story of a family who started their multibillion dollar company off of the money they used for selling drugs; however, there was a catch. The mom had to go to prison for 17 years on drug charges while the father raised their three sons and built the company up from nothing. The show starts off when the mom was released from prison.

The husband and wife were making music out of their garage and starting to make money off the drugs they sold to invest in their future music company. Music was what ultimately brought the two together.

The first two seasons of this show were absolutely mesmerizing. They were filled with drama, suspense, twists and turns that you could not see coming, and most importantly, good music. In almost every single episode thought the first two seasons, there were numerous artists recording music. Music seemed to be the focal point of the show. There were maybe four or five different songs performed on stage, sang in living rooms, or being recorded in the studio per episode. However, once it reached the third season, it seemed to become more about the drama and not the music itself.

I started to lose interest in the show in season 3 and I wondered why. I soon realized that it was due to the lack of music being performed in the show. The show has always revolved around drama, but it began to focus too heavily on the drama. I think that the show would have continue to be as enticing as it started out if the drama continued to revolve around the music. Hakeem, the youngest son of the CEO of the company and one of the company's top selling artists, unexpectedly had a child with his father's ex-wife in season 3. That prohibited him from putting time into making new music. The show used that as his drama. Instead, Hakeem should have used his frustration of not knowing how to be a dad into his music, rather than not making any.
Finding Nemo

Many people love the film Finding Nemo, and I am no exception here. I hail the film as being one of the greatest childrens movies of all time for it's many unique, relatable, and iconic characters, and for it's capacity to be enjoyed by people of all ages. From the trope of the overbearing parent to the underdog we all come to love as Nemo to the all-too-relatable airhead Dory, the characters are all deeply relatable and enjoyable to watch on screen. However, I feel that the character Dory (despite being a fan favourite) was somewhat snubbed in the film as far as her development goes.

 From Marlin to nemo and even Bruce the shark, the movie does a great job of composing a cast of iconic and dynamic characters. Dory is no exception in terms of how iconic and relatable she is (after all, just keep swimming...). However, her degree of change throughout the course of the plot is virtually nonexistent in comparison with other characters, even ones more minor than herself.

Take for example Bruce the shark- a good natured great white shark that is struggling mightily to relieve himself of the urge to eat other fish. We meet him early on with a conflict of character and by the end of the movie he has wrestled his based desires to the ground and overcame his adversity, growing to become a better character. Dory on the other hand developed her way into remembering an address. Even at the end of the film, her Dory does not indicate that she has grown and moved forward as a dynamic character, but rather than she is complacent with her faults. Despite it's many strengths, this is one are of weakness that I feel the film would have benefited greatly from strengthening.

BY: CULLEN FALES
Flaked - Netflix series

Flaked starring Will Arnett is a comedy love story. This happens to be one of my favorite television series. I love how Netflix gave us a comedy/drama series that wasn't afraid to introduce comedy to a fundamentally tragic plot. Flaked touches on every aspect of life including falling in love, friendships, and betrayal through a twisted humorous portrayal.

In order to have a successful drama it is important to touch your audience on a deeper level. By involving a great amount of emotions portrayed throughout the cast, it will make for a more relatable experience. As people open up and share their emotions and feelings, generally we feel a sense of obligation to reach back out to them. A connection can then be formed once both parties let their guards down. We are then drawn to those characters and feel as if we somehow know them much more, than just through a television screen. I believe some of the best comedy comes in the truest form. My favorite characters are usually the most repulsive and toxic where nothing ever seems to go right for them. Most often, the best humor comes from someone who is very dysfunctional while also obtaining a deep self awareness. You will be a successful actor if you are able to find humor in some of the most horrific curve balls life throws at you.

More often than not big production companies focus on the thrillers and action movies in order to make box ticket sales. Moving forward millennials are moving past the era of action movies and thrillers, and taking more of an interest into stories where they can relate better. This generation has a deeper sense of self awareness, being it is the hardest time to be a human. We are finding out who we are and what we are evolving into as a species, hoping somehow to be able to relate to someone or something. People want a place where they feel they belong, even if it is for only one hour a day.
Death Note

*Death Note* is a Netflix movie that is based off of a popular Japanese manga. The CGI effects in this movie were compelling and it was shot wonderfully, but the movie had many shortcomings in background, plot, and character.

Starting with the background, it needed to include some of the Asian roots of the manga. In Japanese folklore, the Shinigami (Grim Reaper) is not viewed in a frightening manner because they are seen as agents that help people leave this world. This film needed to include this aspect so that viewers do not get the incorrect interpretation of the manga and Shinigamis. In addition to this, the film should have been shot in Tokyo, had an all Japanese cast, and had the names restored to Light Yagami and Misa Amane. Probably this movie, if possible, should have been shot in Japanese with English subtitles for authenticity’s sake.

As for the plot, the manga is about a high school boy, Light Yagami, who picks up a notebook that allows him to play God. The plot of the manga is simply brilliant with plot twists and intricate details that cover the span of 108 chapters. In order to have produced a better and more thrilling movie, it should have stayed closer to the manga’s original storyline. For example, Mia Sutton should have had her own Death Note. This asset is particularly important because her assistance in Light Turner's plan helps him evade the law enforcements longer. Knowing this, I would include in the movie how it took the whole police force, the greatest detective in the world, and another prodigy detective to finally catch Turner. All in all, I would have focused less on moving the story along quickly and more on building suspense and a believable plot.

Lastly, the characters in the movie should have had the same personality and quirks as in the manga. Turner should be depicted as the popular guy in high school who is smart and charismatic. Under his better qualities though, he is a manipulative person. This mixture of good and bad characteristics would make Turner feel more realistic and more likely to get away with his crime. I would say the same for the rest of the characters who also need more depth and thought in order to captivate the viewers.