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Jane the virgin

Jane the Virgin, where do I even begin. Now ladies we love a good romance and comedy show am I right? The dialogue does not miss a single beat, neither do the actors and actresses. The episodes are filled with suspense and always leave me itching for the next episode.

The story is based on a one big love triangle between jane who was accidentally artificially inseminated and Michael and Rafael. Now jane was accidentally artificially inseminated by the sperm of rafael who was not yet in the picture before all this happened. Before this she was a virgin. He was also married and wealthy which was the complete opposite of jane and not to mention jane was in a relationship with Micael. Confusing yet?. Anyways the more time Rafael and Jane spend together due to their baby they begin to jane more and more feeling for each other. The show comes up with a slogan that has you chose what mans side your on. For example when jane is with Rafael the show calls it team Rafael and vice versa. It is really just an ongoing internal debate for jane because now that she has feelings for both men she is conflicted.

The story is honestly just too back and forth.

I understand that being a virgin and pregnant is not a small matter and can be extremely confusing. Not to mention all the hormones that play in with pregnancy it can be a stressful time no doubt about it. But honestly it was dragged on for far too long. Jane identified herself as a cathloic who remains faithful to her religion. So with that being said I would have just assumed she would have stayed with the father of her child regardless of the situation. The story has so much drama and hidden themes through out it that this love triangle did not need to be dragged on as long as it was.

Don’t even get me started on the ending of season 4…
Inglourious Basterds

\*Rain\*

Inglourious Basterds (2009)

The ending of the 2009 Tarantino movie Inglourious Basterds was surprisingly unsatisfying. The movie is set in Nazi-occupied France during World War II following a group of Jewish-American guerilla soldiers known as the “Basterds”, and Shosanna Dreyfus, a Jewish refugee cinema owner, seeking revenge who both unknowingly have plans to assassinate a large group of Nazis during a movie premiere including four major political figures of Nazi-Germany, one being Adolf Hitler himself, that following their death would ultimately end the war. In the end the Theatre is not only burned down by Dreyfus, but with the help of the “Basterds” who strapped themselves with timed explosives, everyone in the theatre died a fiery, explosive death. Only two “Good Guys” survived, one being “Basterds” leader Lt. Aldo Raine and the other one of his soldiers. Yes if the movie continued we’d see the fall of Nazis and the end of World War II, however by the end we watched so many people die both on Allied and Axis side  that we grew to sympathize with. It’s righteous that so many people willingly agreed to a suicide mission to end the war but I would’ve ended it on a different note. Instead of dying willingly in the theatre with the Nazis, I would’ve given Dreyfus and her assistant to escape. They began the fire before the explosions went off, and had plenty of time to escape but Tarantino chose to kill them off as well. Once Dreyfus set the theatre aflame, she should’ve watched outside silhouetted by the flames. With this ending we can ignore the death of hundreds and focus on the Jewish fight back against their oppressors.
Aladdin

Disney has become a “household” name for producing and creating popular movies that almost every child can recognize. Moreover, the “princess genre” is what made Disney extremely successful and was able to set themselves apart from their competition. *Aladdin* is no exception from this success as it made around half a billion dollars in the box office. Aladdin is also the name of the main character and the story revolves around him trying to court the love of a beautiful princess named Jasmine. This was one of the first animated films that Disney adapted which did not have a single Caucasian-looking character. Therefore, it seemed that they were taking a more progressive approach to their films. However, once one takes a closer look, the progressive approach was there in order to mask another big issue.

Disney’s most famous archetype are of princesses who are unable to do much for themselves other than doing tasks that are deemed appropriate for their gender. For example, these characters are usually seen to be doing house work or being very nurturing towards something. In addition, the princess characters are noticeably physically weaker and much smaller than their male counterparts which gives off a sense of male dominance. As a result, it is attempting to solidify outdated gender roles. Princess Jasmine is a very outspoken character and is able to hold off on being married by suitors who she thinks is not worthy of her. This is not a usual characteristic of past Disney princesses. However, she is still seen to be very nurturing towards her father and her pet tiger. Moreover, the sex appeal of this character is much higher compared to her predecessors due to her brassiere-like top and unrealistically thin waist. I think a solution for this is to have a more realistic representation of both genders because the social roles of men and women in society have changed into something much more complex. For example, there are now “stay at home” dads which stereotypically would have been the other way around.
Frozen II: The spirits need to be explained a little more

Frozen II was a very good sequel to its much beloved predecessor, and I enjoyed it thoroughly. My initial attraction to it was because their main song, "Into the Unknown", was covered by my all time favorite band, *Panic at the Disco.* I also have a strong family connection to Frozen, so I knew I really wanted to see it in theaters as soon as it came out. Also, the original Frozen was a fan favorite right out of the gate, so I hoped this one would do as well. I enjoyed the movie a lot, it being a fair continuation of the first movie. But I did have one reservation about the plot. The story revolves around these elemental spirits, and their interaction with the people and nature. During the movie, these spirits are revealed as physical representations of their elements. The best example being that the fire spirit, is in reality a fire chameleon of some sort. But that is where my confusion comes in. The spirits themselves are explained to be more naturalistic and omnipresent. Clearly there is a disconnect here, and it confused me whether the elemental spirits imbued these creatures with their abilities, or if the creatures actually are the spirits themselves. If they are, then it would have to be explained why they forced the people out of Arendelle at the beginning of the movie, because their intellect does not seem to support the given reasoning. I believe the most ideal option would be that the spirits themselves are omnipresent, but they imbued these creatures with the elemental powers to fulfill their deeds. It may seem like a small problem to have with a movie, but I am all for good continuity within movies, and this change would make Frozen II be that much better in my mind.
Always a Bridsmaid

Gohar Ogtanyan

Recently, I watched a new movie on Netflix. It was called " Always a Bridesmaid". At first, I was really interested in it. I wanted to keep watching and I did till it finished. But throughout the movie, something was really off for me. The problem wasn't the plot or setting or the words. The problem was the main character. I felt that she did not play the part correctly.It felt really fake to me. It felt like I was watching a literal movie. Yes, I know but it is a movie. yes I. know but when I watch a movie that is really good, I forget that itis not real and it's just a bunch of people reading scripts and playing a part. When I would watch this character that's what it felt like to me, it felt fake. I am sure that if other people saw the movie they would say the same thing.

To fix this situation, either the actress needs to practice better on playing the part before they shot the movie or they needed to find a new actress to play the part correctly. I usually enjoy watching romantic movies. But this was something I had to force myself o sit and watch until the end. They need to re-shoot this movie with a new character or a better improvement. Honestly, it was really dreadful to watch but I had too. If I didn't then I would have to find another movie to watch, which would take me another 20 mins to find. Nowadays, Netflix doesn't really have that many options. Most of the movies end up being movies like this, which are not worth watching. if they were to re-shoot it with a new character, I would definitely watch it because I go crazy for romantic movies.
BlackCougar: Alternate ending to Prison Break

In the final two episodes of Prison Break the main character Michael is left with two huge projects on his hands. The first one is to retrieve the scylla in order to expose the Company and give his team pardons for the crimes they have committed. They are faced with the General kidnapping close relatives in order to stop them from turning in the Scylla but the General fails to keep them prisoner when Michael confronts him. The Company does everything in their power to stop Michael by even having his mother confront them where they are at a standoff. As soon as Michael pulls his trigger his gun locks and hes now defenseless against his mother who begins to slowly approach Michael with a gun ready to end his life. Michael is then saved by his wife Sara who appears just in time shooting Michael's mother in the back saving his life. The team finally gets to return the Scylla in which they are all granted pardon's. So far its a great ending until the very last scene shows Sara and Michael's team visiting a burial ground without Michael there. This can only mean that Michael has passed away. In the final episode it shows what happens before Michael's death in which Sara is arrested for the murder of Michael's mother since surveillance video is alternated to show that Sara murdered his mother cold blooded. Sara is put into a corrupt jail in which the General has inside connections and puts a bounty on Sara. Aware of this Michael and his team devise one more prison break to get Sara out but they face complications of a highly secured prison and an agent constantly watching their every move.

After many last second changes in their plans due to obstacles Michael is finally able to get inside the prison where he meets up with Sara by a church. Due to highly complicated plan working out Michael is merely a tunnel away from escaping his wife out of prison. The only catch is that in order to open the door Michael must turn off the power from the mother board and reconnect two cables in which it will override the system to open the doors. The only catch is that one must stay to connect the power and the other must escape. My alternate ending would be a
How to Get Away With Murder

One of the most
popular shows right now is How to Get Away With Murder. The title literally
speaks for itself. It is a television show involving lawyers who are taking high profiles cases while murders that
are happening left and right around them. The show is about a prominent professor named
Annalise Keating who is a criminal defense attorney who is also a well-known
law professor. She picks five students from her class to intern at her firm.
Through the show, it shows the ups and down to being apart of Professor Keating's law
firm.

Also, throughout the
show Professor Keating represents many clients from different backgrounds. Clients
who are being accused rape, murder, etc. Through the seasons, there are
currently three seasons now. I believe the storyline has been becoming very
repetitive. Usually, a typical episode shows Professor Keating and her five
students representing a client in court and the team winning every single time.
In a real life, most lawyers do not win every single time. A way to better to
storyline is to show a more realistic point of view. To show that Professor
Keating is a real human being who loses sometimes. Not a person who has to cut
corners to make a surprising win every single time. To viewers it can be very
misleading. Also, the storyline appears to be never ending story of them trying
never be caught for murdering Professor Keating’s husband. What they could have
done was turn themselves in to the police or set a trail that would not always
lead back to them.  I believe one of the
main factors in wanting of have a successful drama is to be able to connect
with your audience. You cannot do this if you are presenting unrealistic
storylines. Audiences are able to connect and from relationships with the cast

of the shows when they are relatable on a personal level.
Chuck

Chuck is a tv show about a nerdy tech guy who has all the governments secrets called the intersect in his head from an encrypted e-mail he received. This puts Chuck in danger from all the criminal organizations that want all those secrets that are in his head for their own personal gain. This prompts for Chuck to have two secret agents, John Casey and Sarah Walker, assigned to him to be his protectors. Agent Casey is a real tough guy who is serious all the time and lacks emotions, while Agent Walker is a blonde bombshell who is beautiful, intelligent, and strong. She makes a perfect compliment to Casey and is able to be the voice of reason when it comes to dealing with Chuck. This show has everything from action, comedy, and romance. I enjoyed everything this show had to offer.

Except, how the series ended.

In the final season of Chuck, Chuck and Sarah were finally able to be together with no strings attached. This was what all the fans had been waiting for since the beginning, but no it couldn't be that simple the writers had to put their own twist on it. The final remaining episodes had agent Walker become the intersect to prevent another secret agent who was a bad guy from stealing it. The bad agent gets angry when this happens. He ends up capturing agent Walker and wipes her memory clean. She has no idea who Chuck is anymore and they don't end up together.

I would have done this differently. My ending would have been for them to still end up together the way it was supposed to be or should be. I would have made sure that even though Sarah Walker's memory got erased that Chuck would have figured a way to get her memory back. Chuck is extremely intelligent, so he would have created something similar to an intersect, but instead of encrypted government secrets being downloaded to a person's brain it would have downloaded all the memories they had shared together to her brain and this would have triggered for all of her memories to come back. Then they would live happily ever after, exactly the way all the fans wanted it to be.
Arrow

Oliver Queen is a billionaire playboy who has a dark secret. He is the local superhero known as the Green Arrow.

Queen spends a lot of time saving his friends (usually beautiful female friends) from trouble. But how come his friends and his family can’t recognize him? The only difference between Queen and the Arrow is a shiny green outfit and a small eye mask! If he’s always worrying about his true identity being found, then he should wear an outfit like Spiderman.

Queen’s yacht sank in a storm that caused him to be stuck on an island. Somehow Queen became friends with a man who was a criminal and arrow master. This man taught Queen how to shoot an arrow, while he was away. Queen's father, who died after the yachting accident, had a list of "bad people" that were corrupting their city. Queen promises to kill all the people on his dad's list.

I think Queen would have saved a lot of time and energy if he just called the police on the bad guys or sold the names to a newspaper. Also, why is Queen the one to decide that death = justice for all the bad people? Who can say that Queen is a good person for KILLING all the bad people in the city? Maybe the list that Queen found was actually a list of coworkers his dad was trying to buy Christmas presents for. Or consider if Queen’s dad was lying and all the people on the list are really nice human beings??

Even if we say that the list is accurate...
Why is Queen shooting people with an arrow? Queen is a billionaire! He could just buy some long range snipers or even pay for a small army to go hunt his enemies down and kill them all (probably in 1-2 hours). He could even put the bad guys on a yacht and drive them straight to North Korea.
Cars: The Glorious Ending

In my opinion one of the greatest Disney movies in history with the best storyline of any kids movie. No flaws can be seen in this movie, until the very end. An ending that should have been glorious, but instead left me with two major questions that I still think about till this day, why did McQueen not cross the finish line to claim his first Piston Cup, and why did he not choose Dinoco? From the very beginning of the movie we were introduced to the plot of the rookie McQueen racing for his first Piston Cup Championship. Viewers were also drawn to the idea that when McQueen wins that Piston cup, he's getting that offer from the prestigious Dinoco racing team. The plot followed McQueen fighting his way out of “jail” to racing in the three way tie breaker race to determine who would win the Piston Cup. The stage was set, McQueen was on his way to his first Piston Cup, and he was about to fulfill that vision that had been set by the plot. Put blankly, the ending of Cars is not the ending that should have occurred. McQueen was set to make history and he was inches away from it. McQueen should have finished the race first and then gone back after to show his respect and help the King finish his last race. To make matters worse, McQueen also turned down the Dinoco offer that he had so long envisioned being a part of. The two goals that propelled the storyline did not come true after everything that he had been through. Regardless, Cars will forever remain a classic.
How I Really Met Your Mother

In “How I Met Your Mother,” one of five main characters in the show is Ted Mosby. Ted is an Architect/Professor, a hopeless romantic, and searching for his true love. The premise of the entire show revolves around Ted, as he shares with his children many significant stories from his past, including each failed relationship after failed relationship; culminating in the moments he met their mother, Tracy.

(This is where I would have made the change)

After Ted left Robin and Barney’s wedding reception he is seen waiting for at the train station. He spots Tracy out of the corner of his eye, and somehow musters the courage and to approach her by saying, “You look familiar. Where have I seen you?” Tracy then tries to explain to Ted that she had seen him through his Econ 305 class. This two-minute conversation ends up being an 8-hour, late-night dinner at the nearby Denny’s. They hit it off so well that they go back to Tracy’s apartment without her roommate being there and have sex.

They continue to see each other for the next two weeks when Tracy finds out she is pregnant with Ted’s baby. This breaks Robin’s heart, and she stops talking to Ted. Eight and a half months later, they have a healthy baby boy and a wedding officiated by the hospital’s chaplain. While celebrating their second anniversary/birthday, Tracy is rushed to the hospital due to some abdominal pains she was having. After a couple of hours, some blood work and an ultrasound it was determined that she is pregnant with their second child and has stage three ovarian cancer.

Due to complications, she delivers a premature seven-month-old baby girl. The baby stays in the hospital until she can gain weight and the strength to breathe on her own. Tracy fights for her life, and after several rounds of chemo and radiation she is cancer free! Tracy and Ted continue to live a happily-ever-after life together. After time passes, they are able to renew their vows in France for their 50thwedding anniversary with the support of Lily, Marshal and Barney.

And that is How I Really Met Your Mother.
Friends

The show friends is one that everybody watched and finds happiness in doing so. When I think of the show Friends, I think of happiness and perfection.

It is almost as if the characters in the show are too perfect and have little to no problems in their late twenties. This, however, would not be the case in real life. An alternative ending for this show would result in much more conflict. The storyline almost gives a false representation of real life. It does not highlight the hardships many adults go through in their everyday life. For example, the pairs of the friends very rarely do not get along. It seems that their problems are almost solved too easily. The whole Ross and Rachel will they won't they be together was dragged on far too much. The story should have ended with the fans watching Rachel through the airplane window and not returning, persuing her dream job in Paris. This would result in the two not ending up together and living separate lives. To balance out the sadness of Rachel and Ross not ending up together, Chandler and Monica would have had a happier ending. The two would get married and find out that they indeed could have children. The two would have twins and stay living in New York. Chandler would also have a steady job that he was truly passionate about. As for Joe, it would have been nice to see him happier. In an alternative ending, he would be in a happy relationship and content with his life, not just be left with nothing. To finish off this ending, Pheobe would realize that she isn't a good singer but instead she would realize that she was a very talented actress. This is where her career would take her and she would be the most successful out of all of them.
Captain America: The Cvil War

The movie "Captain America: The Cvil war" treats about who's belief is better either Iron Man or Captain America. Due to many people died from The Avengers activities, the government says that The Avengers had to be under the government's control. A conflict starts from here. In the Avengers, people separate by their belief. In the center of the belief, there were Iron Man and Captain America. Iron man's belief is that The Avengers have to be under the government's control in order to maintain a group Avengers, while Captain's belief is totally opposite with Iron man's. Captain America believes that the Avengers cannot active under the government's control, but Captain's belief is more likely emotional decision because he need to be free from government to save his old friend who is called 'Burkey". The problem is that Captain's belief leads to draw some troubles inside of the Avengers. In the middle of the movie, Iron man admitted his fault in his belief because all of the purposes in the government law is a trap to dismiss them. However, the problem is start from here. Iron man saw a video that his parent got killed by Captain's old friend Burkey. And then, he tried to start kill Burkey. The problem got worse as the Captain America intervened through his beliefs. His emotionally biased beliefs led to the rise of an old friend and the turmoil within the Avengers.Captain America should let just them handle their problem themselves instead of involving in this problem. Iron Man admitted his fault in his belief, while Captain America could not throw his wrong belief away because of his friend. Captain America should have cleared their misunderstanding by acting as a mediator in the middle, not by Bucky's side. This movie clearly shows that how emotional belief dangerous to surrounding people. People's belief should be neutral, rational, and efficient. Captain America's action in the film was a departure from the virtues of the leader.
Marley and Me

The movie "Marley and me" was one of the best movies I have watched, of course up until the end. The movie was very touching and not only shows the mile stones in a dogs life, from puppy life to doggy life, it also shows the miles stones between a owner and their dog. While the movie shows the viewers the life Marley had as he was growing up it also showed the viewers the life of Marleys owner and his journey through life. It portrays the image of the perfect life, where two people fall in love and get a puppy and the struggles of having a puppy, then starting a family and the struggles of growing a family with a dog. However, through the mess that Marley sometimes created, like jumping out of the car or eating the expensive necklace, they managed to make it work. This movie really shows the true love of mans best friend and the true love of family. The bond between human and dog and the bond of Marley being more than just a dog and actually being family is unreal. While the movie represented a whole new kind of love between paw prints and foot prints, the ending was too much to handle. When watching a movie that is all about love, life, and family is it hard to have the end of the moving be so incredibly heart breaking that it is all that people remember. When talking to anybody about the movie, "Marley and Me" most people will say that it was so sad or that they cried and for me that is not a way a movie should be remember, especially when 3/4 of the movie is all happy. I understand that owners normally out live their dogs but if I were to change the ending of this movie I would have the movie end with a happy moment of the whole family and Marley playing in the yard happily together instead of the scene where they are putting him down. With a movie that is all about mans best friend and the connection they share I wouldn't want the ending to be so heartbreaking that it is the only thing people remember from the movie.
"Furious 7" Too Much?

The Fast and Furious franchise has always been a set of movies I have really enjoyed. The action scenes were always jaw dropping and the story lines were always very interesting to me. It was not up until Fast and Furious 6 that I started questioning the movies. The action just went to another level of unreal. They drop cars with parachutes from planes and hop over freeway passes with cars. It is just too unrealistic at this point. This movies is set in a realistic world with unrealistic levels of physics. It just does not blend. They have to choose to be realistic or fully embrace it being unrealistic. This middle ground just does not sit well. In Furious 7 the unrealism was just stepped up to another level. At one point they jump a car from one sky scraper to another. And not from the roof tops, but from within floors. I believe an equal amount of surprise and astonishment can be made with realistic stunts. The movie Baby Driver for example has incredibly jaw dropping driving scenes throughout the whole movie. In fact I am more impressed by them than what is put out by the Fast and Furious franchise. They actually hire stunt driver to perform amazing feats. I imagine The Fast and Furious franchise has much more money and could easily do this. Our world is impressive enough with what can be accomplished in it currently without bringing additional impossible feats into it. I believe with a little bit more creativity, and well thought out cinematography to complement the shots, that they can achieve incredible looking stunts. The series has just taken a bit of a wild direction. The first few movies, which put them on the board, were much more realistic. Those movies made this franchise famous. I believe they should have just stuck to what was already working.
47 Meters Down

After seeing the movie 47 Meters Down, I would definitely change the ending due to the fact that the girl's sister was actually dead and throughout the whole movie I thought they were both actually alive. It was a huge shocker that the girl was hallucinating because of the loss of oxygen. Although hallucinating was the endgame, the sister who survived could have tried to look for her sister on the way out of the water. In my opinion, I would change that both of the sisters made it out alive after being rescued and that in fact, none of the people aboard the boat that were trying to save them died. Not only did the sisters go down alone without an experienced diver, but they sent them down there without someone who knows shark behavior. I also feel that the sister who lived could have put in more effort during the movie so they would have had a better chance of both surviving in one piece. She was too scared and not sure of herself even before they left out to the water that there was no way I could have seen her being the one to live at the end of the movie. Checking the rope and evaluating all of the equipment properly before being submerged in the beginning could have been a game changer for this movie, which was bad on the captain of the boat and the crews end. This movies ending was not incredibly disappointing as it was a shocker for me and I was definitely on edge during the last 30 minutes of the movie. All in all, if the sister who lived was portrayed as brave and not freaking out under pressure, the ending could have finished with both sisters being rescued and have a much happier ending.
Fear the Walking Dead - Season Final

The series is about as much bloody fun that a person can have during the zombie apocalypse. It doesn't quite match the original yet, but the fact that it's more of a Lavern and Shirley to Happy Days relationship rather than a Joanie Loves Chachi to Happy Days relationship is something to be thankful for.

The final episode is a bit of a problem.

I want to bust people out of a secure governmental facility. My first idea? Thunder down the murderous masses from the Forum (great idea for a team name to play in LA) and expect that the "diversion" will buy me some time to sneak in and out and get away clean. This is the kind of plan that is worked out from the end backwards. It's like, I want to see them driving away with a group of zombies behind them, how do we get there? Any sane person who planned on the horde doing their bidding while not munching on their friends and family along the way would be considered wildly optimistic given the circumstances. It also ends in the death of all of the innocent people in the hospital. These people must really think their relatives are important if they're willing to allow so much carnage to get them back. This does not seem to fit with the way they have behaved through the season. Even the drug addict seems to care more about the people around him and he will sneak under beds and drain morphine drips. Dude. So the plan is flawed. Let's see if we can still get there.

New plan. They use the military guy to get into the base. Mistakes are made. An overzealous army guy sets into motion some military hardware that crashes into the Forum. Now it's the military's response that leads to the release of the millions of blood-thirsty walkers. On a side note, I'd love to see into the Forum at some point and find someone living in the rafters eating old cotton candy and popcorn to survive. There's always someone who carves out a little sanity in a world gone uninhabitable. The walkers take the base and they still get to rescue their family members. The doctor can blame herself for believing in the system at the end. The system was supposed to save everyone and now it can't even function well enough to keep anyone alive.
Deadpool.....please call Dr Dubrow

Deadpool was an amazing movie, one
of the best I have seen in years and in my opinion one of the greatest Marvel
superhero movies. The movie had it all. The feature included a great story-line,
a great villain, a love story, drama, action and hilarity as well as a Ryan
Reynolds as Deadpool. While this was mostly a comic book action movie, I can't remember
the last time I laughed that hard at a movie. The story starts out with a
gorgeous man meeting a gorgeous woman and they fall in love. Soon after getting
engaged Deadpool learns he is dying of cancer and leaves his new love to spare
her a broken heart. Down on his luck, nowhere to go, nothing left to live for
and running out of time, Deadpool meets a man that tells him he can cure him
and make him immortal. The process is torturous, but works for him, taking him
to the point of death and leaving him severely disfigured. His once beautiful
face looked like chopped meat left out in the sun too long.

And here is where my problem comes
in....although Deadpool and his entourage defeat the villain and his equally
nasty partners in crime with some crazy fight scenes and Deadpool does eventually
win his love back, the movie ends with him still being severely disfigured.

Now I’m not asking with only my
interests in mind, but with the interest of all the women in world in mind and
ultimate justice, a plastic surgeon needs to be called in. I know looks aren't
everything, but a man that beautiful needs to have his face restored. The
technology and precision used by plastic surgeons today it would be no time
before he was back to beautiful. Please, someone call Dr. Dubrow!
Fixing New Girl

New Girl is about a girl named Jess, after a break up she moves in with three guy roommates. These three guys have different personalities, and while never thinking of dating any of them. She used to bring guys home, but eventually she started dating this roommate of hers, Nick. Jess is a loving person though, she puts everyones needs infant of her own. She starts building this character that we all love, personally i love the show itself. There was just one bad thing about it, THE ENDING. A show that has 7 great seasons, comes crashing down on their 8th and last season. Given the fact that they take forever to have Jess and Nick fall in love, they end their love story in a very abrupt way. Traveling 3 years into the future, makes us miss exactly what we wanted to see. We did not care about the fact they get married 3 years later, personally I wanted to see what happened once they finally realized that they wanted to be and what they wanted to do. I care about the journey and not the destination, yes, i am glad that they got married and all that and at the end of the day everything worked out. But i would much rather see everything that took them that far and how all their work was being reciprocated. Jess and Nick were together before, but i want to know how they ended up, i want to see how everything was different around this time. Also, everything during the show seems to be very funny and not corny, yet during that last season everything just got messed up. Their jokes got corny, i just was not the same anymore. I still loved the show in general but that last season just killed it for me.
How I met your mother ending

Dr. Quack

How I met Your Mother is a TV series about a group of
friends from New York City and the main character Ted Mosby telling his kids
about all the stories that compile to how he met their wife. The story goes
through all his experiences as a bachelor in New York and his past love affairs
that ultimately brought him to meet his wife in the end of the series. The
series is one of my favorite tv shows and does a great job of keeping the story
moving in many ways. There is great character development, awesome life
lessons, and most of all the best casting I have seen recently in a tv series.
The story goes through his own character development as well as the other
characters that are in his group of friends. Near the end of the series, while
helping his best friend prepare for a wedding, they realize that the wedding
band has cancelled last minute and it was imperative that they find a wedding
band, even though he was pushing for a wedding DJ. Even though it was his best
friend’s wedding he does not want it to happen because he is secretly in love
with his friend’s fiancé, Robin. After accepting the fact that his two friends
are very happy and right for each other, he runs into his past girlfriend who
refers him to a wedding band that her previous roommate is in and how her event
got cancelled the same weekend as Robin and Barney’s wedding. This is how he
meets his wife who is the bass player for the wedding band. The story follows
how he finally meets the love of his life and eventually ends up getting
married to her. In the last 7 minutes of the series the story reveals that Ted’s
wife is now deceased. And his kids who are listening points out that his long
story of how he met their mother was not about him meeting his mother but a
story of how his actual love in life was Robin after all. The last scene is of
Ted taking a surprise visit to Robin’s house and asking her out.

Even though this was a heartfelt ending, it was very odd to
see that this was how the writers chose to end the series. I didn’t like that
they portrayed his “love of his life” in this manor because it means that he
was in love with Robin as his one true love instead of his deceased wife, even
when married to her. I would not have killed off Tracy, Ted’s deceased wife,
but kept her alive and well. Robin living in New York with 3 dogs implies that
Robin is present in New York for the most part and not off in different parts
of the world as the story would have you think. Also the fact that she has dogs
means that she feels lonely and would not mind having a child in my opinion.
Since Barney and Robin’s marriage didn’t work out because she was always in
different parts of the world, I think it would have been better to have Robin
meet Barney again, who now has a child with one of his love affairs. That would
fulfil her need for a child as well as being with Barney now that she is not
traveling all over the world. Thus creating 3 perfect couples and the gang of
friends getting back together like how it was in the beginning of the series.
BlackCougar: Prison Break alternate ending

Black Cougar

In the final two episodes of Prison
Break the main character Michael is left with two huge projects on his hands.
The first one is to retrieve the scylla in order to expose the Company and give
his team pardons for the crimes they have committed. They are faced with the
General kidnapping close relatives in order to stop them from turning in the
Scylla but the General fails to keep them prisoner when Michael confronts him.
The Company does everything in their power to stop Michael by even having his
mother confront them where they are at a standoff. As soon as Michael pulls his
trigger his gun locks and hes now defenseless against his mother who begins to
slowly approach Michael with a gun ready to end his life. Michael is then saved
by his wife Sara who appears just in time shooting Michael's mother in the back
saving his life. The team finally gets to return the Scylla in which they are
all granted pardon's. So far it’s a great ending until the very last scene
shows Sara and Michael's team visiting a burial ground without Michael there.
This can only mean that Michael has passed away. In the final episode it shows
what happens before Michael's death in which Sara is arrested for the murder of
Michael's mother since surveillance video is alternated to show that Sara
murdered his mother cold blooded. Sara is put into a corrupt jail in which the
General has inside connections and puts a bounty on Sara. Aware of this Michael
and his team devise one more prison break to get Sara out but they face
complications of a highly secured prison and an agent constantly watching their
every move. In the end Michael is left with the choice of sacrificing his life
in order for Sara to escape. Rather than Michael having to die the directors
could have made it where Lincoln, Michael’s brother, breaks into the prison
with Michael and they are able to escape safely altogether. Instead of Michael
having to sacrifice himself Lincoln would be able to override the escape door
with a false key and they can all escape safely.
Bridge of Spies - Fix it

First off, I'm proud of Hollywood for trying to make the communist spy the hero of the film. Showing him as a man of integrity, strength and drive however does take a little of the spotlight away from Hanks. Their relationship could have been an interesting movie. Unfortunately, they wanted to make this more epic. Oh, epic, how many films have you screwed up? And when you screw them up, you do so epic-ly.

How do we fix this? Take away the family. They are window dressing. I get about as much from them as I do the scenery and the scenery has the advantage of being able to change. Next, the negotiations were meant to be tense and filled with drama. Hanks has nothing to lose in this version. I need to see him have some skin in the game if I'm going to be worried. I don't care about the pilot. He is a cameo. I don't care about the student. He's a cutting room scene waiting to happen. I have to care about what Hanks could lose. They need to buy him a one-way ticket to fix this problem. His supreme court debacle is what made this guy a national embarrassment. If Tom can't make this happen, he will be coming home to his own ruin. Maybe they even threaten him with some kind of conspiracy charge. Everyone in the country has him pegged as a sympathizer. Why not let him know that his next trial could be the one for his own life?
Gone Girl

By, Queen B

Although, the film Gone Girl is a successful movie being able to keep the audience at the edge of their seats throughout most of the film, and making in box office $368 million. The ending is quite unoriginal, the main characters Amy Dunne and Nick Dunne end up staying married even after all the psychotic things that Amy did like fake her death to make it look like her husband killed her so that he would be convicted of her death, in order to get revenge towards Nick after he cheated on her. The directors could have created a variety of different endings that would have been better than the one they used. For example, instead of staying together the husband should have stayed with her only to be able to find a way to prove that she had faked her death. He would be successful in retrieving a confession from her, but when she soon realizes he has proof and that he is planning to leave her as soon as he shares the truth with the world she will go psycho again and try to actually kill him because if she can’t have him then no one else can. They will have an argument in which she gets aggressive with him and in trying to defend himself he will accidently kill her when pushing her off, because she will hit her head on the side of the counter in the kitchen leading to her death. Instead of calling the cops he makes it look like his wife ran away and when he shows the truth to the public they will believe that she was running away because of the shame that came with all her past actions. The public and the authorities will believe him because they know the truth. He will go on to live his life but the truth will always haunt him.
Don't Breath

Don’t Breathe had a great concept, but there were some problems that could have been fixed to make the movie better. I personally think movies are better when you can clearly see whos side you are on. Throughout the whole movie you are confused and do not know whose side you should be on. Both of the main characters were bad guys and at one point or another you did not like one of them. You could not connect to either of them. It would have been different if the blind old man would have been a bad guy with a good motive, but his motives were sick. The girl was a loser nobody who was handing out with the wrong crowd who convinced her to try and rob a blind old man. It was just all over the place. Not a clear understanding on what the director was trying to do. I feel like a good movie should have a good main character. Not some loser or some sick old man. There needs to be a character you can connect to that makes you want for them to win. Also a lot of the times their actions were dumb and would make you understand why they needed to do. Although it was not predictable it was a mess and did not allow you to enjoy watching it because you did not know who the bad guy was.
911

911 is a fictitious television show that follows the lives of the following first responders in Los Angeles: firefighters, 911 call operators, and the police. The dramatic episodes keep one on the edge of their seat for the entire episode. Although this show is highly addictive, it has one huge flaw throughout the show. The characters constantly do things that go beyond the scope of their practice, and it magically works out every time and they face no negative repercussions for doing illegal stunts while on the job. This makes the show seem highly unrealistic of what it is actually like to be a first responder. For instance, in season three one of the firefighter/paramedic, Henrietta, performs an emergency tracheotomy in the back of a non-sterile moving ambulance because she did not think that the doctors would do it properly. Even though she has never done a tracheotomy before she does it, and everything ended up working out.

However, in real-life situations, the same outcome may not have been possible, and she would have faced many consequences for doing something outside of the scope of her practice. To fix this flaw in this show, they could show a time where the call did not necessarily end the way that everyone had hoped. This would make the show seem more realistic because 911 calls do not necessarily always end on a positive note and it is important to show both sides of the job. Additionally, if one of the first responders breaks the law while on the job, rather than just casually forgetting about it in the next episode, they should be held responsible for their actions. With a more realistic touch, I feel that they could still have the addicting drama of the show, while still showcasing a sense of what it is actually like being a first responder.

-Natalee Newcomb

English M01C (Gifford)
Brooklyn Nine Nine - Hostage Situation

This is a series that has some of the best scenes on TV. When it hits, it also keeps the entire cast involved in the joke. That was not the case in this episode.

My fix.

If Jake and Boyle are going to fail in their mission to get back the little swimmers, they need to at least best his ex wife in some way. I don't mind if they want to make adoption part of the show, but I wish they would have shown the ex getting taken down a peg. My favorite idea to do so is to put the sperm into a position where the container explodes. The force of the explosion actually puts the Boyle Juice in close contact with Boyle and his ex. His ex also is known for going commando during yoga, and the confrontation happens then.

Doyle has gotten his ex wife pregnant.  It's all because of her own selfishness.  She has to explain this to her husband. She has to carry Doyle's doughy child. Custody was the one part of the contract they had that favored him. She gave him the right for visitation for any children they produced (because she was sure they would NEVER do it).