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Fix grammaticality: Genetic testing allows early detection of diseases which may be useful to mankind.

Genetic testing allows early detection of diseases, which may be useful to mankind.

602

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Fix grammar in the sentence: This is supported by the fact that most people with disabilities or diseases are discriminated.

This is supported by the fact that most people with disabilities or diseases are discriminated against.

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Fix grammatical errors: Critics of this position claim that insurer will also be at a disadvantage if such results are not revealed to them.

Critics of this position claim that insurers will also be at a disadvantage if such results are not revealed to them.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Genetic testing is a test performed to allow genetic diagnose of inherited diseases.

Genetic testing is a test performed to allow genetic diagnosis of inherited diseases.

605

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Update to remove grammar errors: It will be unfair if the spouse kept the truth from their spouse.

It would be unfair if the one kept the truth from their spouse.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Those with genetic diseases like mental retardation and Down syndrome are asked to be enrolled in school like MINDS and bright sparks.

Those with genetic diseases like mental retardation and Down syndrome are asked to be enrolled in schools like MINDS and bright sparks.

607

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Fix grammaticality: Some may debate that this is a form of discrimination and violate the human rights of these children.

Some may debate that this is a form of discrimination and violates the human rights of these children.

608

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Remove grammatical mistakes: It makes privacy lose its meaning and is unhealthy to our society.

It makes privacy lose its meaning and is unhealthy for our society.

609

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Fix grammar errors: However, the advent of genetic testing does not bring unanimous consents from the public.

However, the advent of genetic testing does not bring unanimous consent from the public.

610

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Remove grammatical mistakes: There are uproars regarding the moral and ethical issues which overwhelm the topic of genetic testing from time to time.

There are uproars regarding the moral and ethical issues which cloud the topic of genetic testing from time to time.

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: After that, parents who request genetic testing for their children must provide the genetic information of their child to school authorities for the enrollment.

After that, parents who request genetic testing for their children must provide the genetic information of their children to school authorities for enrollment.

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Fix grammatical errors: This is because individual oneself is less capable of making a suitable decision.

This is because the individual is less capable of making a suitable decision.

613

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Fix all grammatical errors: Then, who will be the one who holds the right to do it?

In that situation, who will be the one who holds the right to do it?

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Make the sentence fluent: However, in the reality, the result of genetic testing is so important and could give impact to all his family as it may comprise information about hereditary disease.

However, in reality, the result of genetic testing is so important and could give impact all his family as it may comprise information about the hereditary diseases.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In conclusion, the result of genetic testing that informs us about our hereditary disease, will not only affect us as individual but also our family.

In conclusion, the result of genetic testing that informs us about our hereditary disease will affect not only us as individuals but also our family.

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Improve the grammar of this text: Its general purpose is to check if one has potential to develop certain genetic diseases.

Its general purpose is to check if one has the potential to develop certain genetic diseases.

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Fix grammar errors in this sentence: By revealing genetic test result to companies, employers can determine if the job applicant is suitable for the job and assign them to environment that will not have any exposure to lead.

By getting employees to reveal their genetic test results, employers can determine if the job applicant is suitable for the job and therefore assign them to a job environment that will not have any exposure to lead.

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Make the sentence grammatical: Thus, the individuals should not have the final say about revealing their genetic test results.

Thus, individuals should not be given the final say about revealing their genetic test results.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Many will think that insurance companies used the test results as the excuse to deny them from claiming or even buying certain medical policies.

Many may think that the insurance companies used the test results as excuses to deny them from claiming or even buying certain medical policies.

620

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Remove grammar mistakes: Moreover, many insurance companies used the test result to encourage the clients to buy certain policies that can maximize their benefits.

Moreover, many insurance companies use the test results to encourage clients to buy certain policies that can maximize their benefits.

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: After September 11, 2001, surveillance became important as it become one of the tools to prevent terrorism.

After September 11, 2001, surveillance became important as it is one of the tools to prevent terrorism.

622

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Fix all grammatical errors: In my view, surveillance technology should be banned as the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantage.

In my view, surveillance technology should be banned as the disadvantages clearly outweigh the advantages.

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Remove grammar mistakes: Hence our privacy is being invaded as our very personal information is being known by a lot of people.

Hence, our privacy is being invaded as our very personal information is being known by a lot of people.

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Improve the grammar of this text: Opposition might argue that surveillance technology should not be banned as it provides security.

Some might argue that surveillance technology should not be banned as it provides security.

625

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Update to remove grammar errors: With the help modern technology, humans are able to create increasingly efficient devices which are able to store relevant personal information or to trace one's location.

With the help of modern technology, humans are able to create increasingly efficient devices which are able to store relevant personal information or trace one's location.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: This argument is flawed, as there is no concrete evidence showing existence of such crimes.

This argument is flawed, as there is no concrete evidence showing the existence of such crimes.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: In conclusion, tracking devices should be allowed in tracking people, as it is able to change human lives for the better, and even prevent or reduce crime rates.

In conclusion, tracking devices should be allowed to track people, as it is able to change human lives for the better, and they may even prevent or reduce crime rates.

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Update to remove grammar errors: There are two main benefits that the use of surveillance technology has brought to.

There are two main benefits that the use of surveillance technology has brought.

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Remove grammatical mistakes: GPS tracking device helps in the investigation of crimes.

The GPS tracking device helps in the investigation of crimes.

630

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Law enforcement agencies are able to identify terrorists and put a stop to their plan.

Law enforcement agencies are able to identify terrorists and put a stop to their plans.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Besides that, surveillance technology also enables tracking of criminals who are on run or even kidnappers.

Besides that, surveillance technology also enables the tracking of criminals who are on the run and even kidnappers.

632

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Fix all grammatical errors: However, the unfounded argument is not adequate to outlaw the use of human tracking technology.

However, this unfounded argument is not adequate to outlaw the use of human tracking technology.

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Fix grammar errors: In conclusion, the use of surveillance technology to track people should not be banned as it helps preventing terrorism and crimes.

In conclusion, the use of surveillance technology to track people should not be banned as it helps to prevent terrorism and crimes.

634

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: For instance, genetic information that falls into the hands of insurers and employers without consent will be used to prejudice against the tested individual.

For instance, genetic information that falls into the hands of insurers and employers without the consent of individuals will be used to prejudice against the tested individual.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Until proper steps such as enactment and reinforcement of laws are taken by the governments, genetic information of individuals should be kept private and confidential to avoid exploitation by unscrupulous parties and also to avoid disintegration of family relations.

Until proper steps such as enactment and reinforcement of laws are taken by the governments, the genetic information of individuals should be kept private and confidential to avoid exploitation by unscrupulous parties and also to avoid the disintegration of family relations.

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Fix grammar errors: However, if the result of the test can be easily access by third party, a lot of problems will be occurred.

However, if the result of the test can be easily assessed by a third party, a lot of problems will occur.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The privacy and confidentiality of a person will be affected in revealing undesirable genetic testing results.

The privacy and confidentiality of a person will be affected by revealing his or her undesirable genetic testing results.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: These people have to look for other alternative to earn a living.

These people have to look for other alternatives to earn a living.

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Fix grammar: Hence, results should not be revealed to protect employees from environment that might harm them.

Hence, results should not be revealed to protect employees from environments that might harm them.

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Make the sentence fluent: Another difficulty involves disclosure of genetic information to insurance companies.

Another difficulty involves the disclosure of genetic information to insurance companies.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: Secondly, being able to access one's genetic information will reveal the list of diseases one is susceptible to, and the one who possesses the information may have ulterior interest.

Secondly, being able to access one's genetic information will reveal the list of diseases one is susceptible to, and the one who possesses the information may have an ulterior interest.

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Remove grammar mistakes: Thus, it is still up to the discretion of individual to go for genetic testing if they are at high risk.

Thus, it is still up to the discretion of individuals to go for genetic testing if they are at high risk.

643

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Grammar improvements: Therefore, individuals whom requested for genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.

Therefore, individuals who have requested genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results of such testing.

644

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Fix grammar in the sentence: Hence, such use of surveillance technology to track people should not be banned.

Hence, the use of such surveillance technology to track people should not be banned.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Firstly, the use of biometric surveillance in the form of a biometric passport will make it more difficult for terrorists to travel in and out of countries, due to increasing passport security and border surveillance.

Firstly, the use of biometric surveillance in the form of a biometric passport will make it more difficult for terrorists to travel in and out of different countries due to increasing passport security and border surveillance.

646

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Fix grammar in this sentence: This has brought about a wild debate on the banning of the use of surveillance technology to track person.

This has brought about a wild debate on the banning of the use of surveillance technology to track the movement of people.

647

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Grammar improvements: Next, those who were under home quarantined during the SARS period were instructed to install a camera in their isolation zone to make sure they are always visible and contactable to prevent further spread of the disease.

Next, those who were under home quarantine during the SARS period were instructed to install a camera in their isolation zone to make sure that they are always visible and contactable to prevent the further spread of the disease.

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Make the sentence grammatical: Also, the use of infrared fever sensing system in Changi airport and along borders allows mass surveillance of body temperature, which can detect and isolate feverish passengers.

Also, the use of an infrared fever sensing system in Changi airport and along borders allows mass surveillance of body temperature, which can detect and isolate feverish passengers

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Fix grammar errors: Through the use of the permission-based location tracking service, which is provided by our local telecommunication provider, SingTel, the location of our loved ones can be detected readily by this new surveillance technology.

Through the use of the permission-based location tracking service, which is provided by our local telecommunication provider, SingTel, the location of our loved ones can be detected readily by this new surveillance technology

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Fix errors in this text: This is very useful towards families with young juveniles and aging parents because their location could be tracked easily if they are lost in the crowd and thus preventing them from any possible harm they may encounter.

This is very useful for families with young juveniles and aging parents because their location could be tracked easily if they are lost in the crowd, and thus, this may prevent them from any possible harm they may encounter.

651

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: Firstly, an individual should not be robbed of their basic right to privacy.

Firstly, an individual should not be robbed of his basic right to privacy.

652

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Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Although, it cannot be denied that it is ethical to inform family members about their risk of hereditary disease however one do not have any obligation to reveal their genetic status since this information could be exploited and misused by others, threatening their welfare.

Although it cannot be denied that it is ethical to inform family members about their risk of hereditary, one does not have any obligation to reveal their genetic status since this information could be exploited and misused by others, thus threatening their welfare

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Secondly, revelation of one's genetic status subjects the individual to many social issues related to genetic discrimination.

Secondly, the revelation of one's genetic status subjects the individual to many social issues related to genetic discrimination

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Lastly, family dilemma could arise due to the tension caused by the unfavorable psychological influences of genetic testing.

Lastly, the family dilemma could arise due to the tension caused by the unfavorable psychological influences of genetic testing

655

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Fix grammar in the sentence: Since every individual have a different level of acceptance, disclosure of genetic results could cause them to experience unnecessary emotional distress.

Since every individual has a different level of acceptance, disclosure of genetic results could cause them to experience unnecessary emotional distress

656

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Remove grammatical mistakes: In conclusion, individuals should have the privacy to determine whether to reveal their genetic results or not since it not only inflicts emotional distress on their family but also subjects them social discrimination.

In conclusion, individuals should have the privacy to determine whether to reveal their genetic results or not since it not only inflicts emotional distress on their family but also subjects them to social discrimination.

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Grammar improvements: As the genetic testing is making rapid progress on providing information on the hidden DNAs which might cause diseases, the techniques have also aroused a large amount of heated debates on the ethical and moral issues surrounding the control of final say of the testing.

As genetic testing is making rapid progress in providing information on the hidden DNAs which might cause diseases, the techniques have also aroused a large number of heated debates on the ethical and moral issues surrounding the control of the final say of the testing.

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Fix grammar in this sentence: First of all, individual has the right to determine whether or not it is necessary to make the genetic testing results public.

First of all, the individual has the right to determine whether or not it is necessary to make the genetic testing results public.

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Improve the grammaticality: If one's privacy cannot be protected so that the result might be made use of on any purpose, the human rights are endangered and hence this decision should be made on the individual requesting the genetic testing.

If one's privacy cannot be protected so that the result might be made used of for any purpose, human rights are endangered, and hence this decision should be made by the individual requesting the genetic testing.

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: To conclude, the one who request genetic testing should have the final right to determine whether this result should be made public or not.

To conclude, the one who requests genetic testing should have the final right to determine whether this result should be made public or not.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: Over the years, advances in science and technology had empowered surveillance technology by introducing many forms and magnifying the scope of surveillance.

Over the years, advances in science and technology have empowered surveillance technology by introducing many forms and magnifying the scope of surveillance.

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Privacy is the fundamental human right and we have the right to lead our life without public surveillance.

Privacy is a fundamental human right, and we have the right to lead our lives without public surveillance.

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Fix errors in this text: Though some suggest that surveillance technology benefits us but the negative implications outweigh the benefits.

Though some suggest that surveillance technology benefits us, the negative implications outweigh the benefits.

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: We have lost our rights in leading a personal life and have to live in a constant fear that our every movement is being monitored.

We have lost our rights to lead a personal life and have to live in constant fear that our every movement is being monitored.

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Improve the grammar of this text: Individual should not have the final say in revealing his genetic testing result.

An individual should not have the final say in revealing his genetic testing result.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: In conclusion, individuals should not have the final say in revealing their genetic test results for the benefits of the people around them.

In conclusion, individuals should not have the final say in revealing their genetic test results for the benefit of the people around them.

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Make the sentence fluent: With revealing of the results, trust can be generated and relationship between them and their loved ones will become closer.

With the revelation of the results, trust can be generated, and the relationship between them and their loved ones will become closer.

668

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Fix all grammatical errors: While some suggest that the use of this technology brings benefits to both country and the world, it in fact not only affects the country's safety but also the citizens' privacy in the country.

While some suggest that the use of this technology brings benefits to both the country and the world, it, in fact, affects not only the country's safety but also the citizens' privacy in the country.

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: Thus, due to negative implications that outweigh the benefits of using surveillance technology, it should be banned.

Thus, due to the negative implications that outweigh the benefits of using surveillance technology, it should be banned.

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Fix grammar in the sentence: This is ethically wrong as, in general, humans has their basic right to privacy.

This is ethically wrong as, in general, humans have their basic right to privacy.

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Improve the grammar of this text: Secondly, it lowers the level of security of a country when terrorists are able to hacked into their system and take control of the country's well-being.

Secondly, it lowers the level of security of a country when terrorists are able to hack into their system and take control of the country's well-being.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: This impose a high risk to the US in a time of war or even crisis due to the disruption of network by these cyberspies.

This imposes a high risk to the US in a time of war or even crisis due to the disruption of the network by these cyber spies.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: National security as the name implies means security measures taken by the various governments to ensure that his country is a safe place for its citizens.

National security, as the name suggests means security measures taken by the various governments to ensure that the country is a safe place for its citizens.

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Some of the devices that have been set up and used are for example biometric passport.

Some of the devices that have been set up and used are, for example, biometric passports.

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: This helps in preventing terrorism as appropriate measures can be taken to stop terrorist from entering the country.

This helps in preventing terrorism as appropriate measures can be taken to stop terrorists from entering the country.

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Fix errors in this text: In 2001, the capture of terrorist members prevented a bomb explosion to Yishun train station in Singapore.

In 2001, the capture of terrorist members prevented a bomb explosion at Yishun train station in Singapore.

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Fix grammaticality: When the results of the test is given to the individual, the question of whether the results should be revealed or not arises.

When the results of the test are given to the individual, the question of whether the results should be revealed or not arises.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: In such cases, the physician would have the right to reveal the results to the family of the individual, especially if the test results indicate that the defective gene is present, there is the possibility that others in the family has the gene as well.

In such cases, the physician would have the right to reveal the results to the family of the individual, especially if the test results indicate that the defective gene is present; there is the possibility that others in the family have the gene as well.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Thus, the discriminatory treatment an individual may be subjected to makes it essential that their consent be obtained in advanced.

Thus, the discriminatory treatment an individual may be subjected to makes it essential that their consent be obtained in advance.

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Fix grammar in this sentence: Advocators suggest that using RFID to conduct social control and suspects tracking could benefit whole society.

Advocators suggest that using RFID to conduct social control and tracking suspects could benefit the whole of society.

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Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: On the contrary, it not only leads to invasion of privacy and identity theft but also risks health.

On the contrary, it not only leads to an invasion of privacy and identity theft but also poses health risks.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: It is hard to guarantee that every racking is innocent and conducted in proper ways and.

It is hard to guarantee that every tracking is innocent and conducted in the proper ways.

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Grammar improvements: In life and death situation, doctors that are in the vicinity of the operation theatre can be called for help instantly, hence saving time.

In life and death situations, doctors that are in the vicinity of the operation theatre can be called in for help instantly, hence saving time.

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Fix grammar: Finally, there has been greater concern about RFID not only tracking the data of the patient, but also the patient's actual whereabouts.

Finally, there has been greater concern about RFID not only tracking the data of the patient but also tracking the patient's actual whereabouts.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: If one had their pocket picked, he would know and can take measures to prevent.

If one had their pocket picked, he would know and can take measures to prevent it.

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Grammar improvements: This would prevent harm to others, like the spread of HIV to the uninfected sexual partner and the future generations.

This would cause harm to others, like the spread of HIV to the uninfected sexual partner and future generations.

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Fix grammaticality: The completion of Human Genome Project has contributed significantly to the rapid development of genetic tests valuable tools that aid in diagnosis and prevention of genetic diseases.

The completion of the Human Genome Project has contributed significantly to the rapid development of genetic tests, a valuable tool that aids in the diagnosis and prevention of genetic diseases.

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Fix errors in this text: Patients who wish to keep their medical information might chose to have the chip implanted right under their skin.

Patients who wish to keep their medical information might choose to have the chip implanted right under their skin.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The user might lost his password for access to areas or monetary items and also his identity.

The user might lose his password for access to areas or monetary items and also his identity.

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Remove grammatical mistakes: This has brought about many controversial issues on the privacy and health concerns surrounding the use of RFID.

This has brought about many controversial issues regarding the privacy and health concerns surrounding the use of RFID.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Secondly, RFID ensures the safety of the public by monitoring suspicious people who might pose a danger to the society as to prevent them from causing harm to the public.

Secondly, RFID ensures the safety of the public by monitoring suspicious people who might pose a danger to society so as to prevent them from causing harm to the public.

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Remove grammatical mistakes: Human genetics has made tremendous leaps over the past years, and consequently made significant impact on many people's lives.

Human genetics has made tremendous leaps over the past years and consequently made a significant impact on many people's lives.

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Fix grammaticality: Hence, it is rightful to say that genetic information should be kept confidential and could only be revealed by the individual.

Hence, it is right to say that genetic information should be kept confidential and should only be revealed by the individual.

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Thus, they can explain the implications of the results more precisely to the family members.

Thus, they can explain the implications of the results more precisely to family members.

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Fix grammar in the sentence: In conclusion, the decision of whether to reveal the results of genetic testing should lie only on the individual and not other third parties involved.

In conclusion, the decision of whether to reveal the results of genetic testing should lie only with the individual and not other third parties involved.

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Fix errors in this text: Any disclosure of results by third parties will be considered breaching the genetic privacy and confidentiality law and may cause unnecessary moral implications.

Any disclosure of results by third parties will be considered a breach of the genetic privacy and confidentiality law and may cause unnecessary moral implications.

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Fix grammar errors: The patients know the different behavioral patterns of his family members and will know the best way to approach them regarding his genetic condition.

The patient knows the different behavioral patterns of his family members and will know the best way to approach them regarding their genetic condition.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: In this way, the family members of the patient are protected from any emotional harm like stress and anxiety.

In this way, the family members of the patient are protected from emotional harm like stress and anxiety.

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Fix grammar in this sentence: In conclusion, the final say to the disclosure of genetic test results should lie in the patient according to the legal jurisdiction and to the fact that the patients understand the different personalities of their families and will have their best interests in mind.

In conclusion, the final say in the disclosure of genetic test results should lie with the patient according to the legal jurisdiction and to the fact that the patients understand the different personalities of their families and will have their best interests in mind.

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Fix grammaticality: It is also suggested that the harsh truth of inheriting a genetic risk may create an emotional impact, especially when disclosed despite the patient reluctance.

It has also been suggested that the harsh truth of inheriting a genetic risk may create an emotional impact, especially when disclosed despite the patient's reluctance.