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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The packets were then be forwarded from one computer to another computer until the information arrived at its final destination computer.

The packets would then be forwarded from one computer to another computer until the information arrived at its final destination computer.

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Fix grammatical errors: This was important part of a computer network.

This was an important part of a computer network.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: As a result of decentralization, packet switching, unlike the telephone system, will not break down when one part of the network systems is faulty since the packets can be rerouted until it arrived at its intended destination.

As a result of decentralization, packet switching, unlike the telephone system, will not break down when one part of the network system is faulty since the packets can be rerouted until it arrives at their intended destination.

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Fix errors in this text: Although there were over 230 ARPANET sites in 1982, Usenet take less than two years to reach that number.

Although there were over 230 ARPANET sites in 1982, Usenet took less than two years to reach that number.

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Improve the grammar of this text: This resulted in hundreds of discussion groups, each discussing different subjects, which range from politics to daily life experience.

This resulted in hundreds of discussion groups, each discussing different subjects, which range from politics to daily life experiences.

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Fix grammatical errors: In conclusion, it was the historical background during the era of Cold War that prompted the US government to consider new ways of creating indestructible communication to enable the political and military leaders to communicate with each other during a nuclear attack.

In conclusion, it was the historical background during the era of the Cold War that prompted the US government to consider new ways of creating indestructible communication to enable the political and military leaders to communicate with each other during a nuclear attack.

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Through the works of brilliant researchers, the Internet, which has limited to a few users at first, was improvised to accommodate increase electronic traffic and finally commercialize to be available to each and individual of us.

Through the works of brilliant researchers, the Internet, which was limited to a few users at first, was improvised to accommodate increase electronic traffic and finally commercialized to be available to each and every individual.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Such cases are typical examples of how a technological invention is shaped by economic factor, in which the technology made available to the consumer was directed by corporations' profits earned instead of offering the one that benefits consumer most.

Such cases are typical examples of how a technological invention is shaped by economic factors, in which the technology made available to the consumer was directed by earned profits of corporations instead of offering the one that benefits the consumer most.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: Therefore, it can be concluded that functionality may not be only determining factor to the success of technology since it may not be the priority of consumer's concern, but rather how the technology is commercialized and diffused to the public or society.

Therefore, it can be concluded that functionality may not be the only determining factor to the success of technology since it may not be the priority of the consumer's concern, but rather how the technology is commercialized and diffused to the public or society.

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Remove grammatical mistakes: Due to the flourishing of construction industries over the years, the construction industries worldwide consume resources equivalent to more than what the nature are able to produce on Earth.

Due to the flourishing of construction industries over the years, construction industries worldwide consume resources equivalent to more than what nature is able to produce on Earth.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: However, few considerations should be taken into account during the design process.

However, considerations should be taken into account during the design process.

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Improve the grammar of this text: Moreover, recycling which need reprocessing may not be economically feasible because it requires a facility using recycled resources to be located near the source.

Moreover, recycling, which needs reprocessing, may not be economically feasible because it requires a facility using recycled resources to be located near the source.

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Fix grammar errors: For a technology that is deliberately invented, it generally requires much a longer time frame as compared to those fortuitous discoveries.

For a technology that is deliberately invented, it generally requires a much longer time frame as compared to fortuitous discoveries.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Much research has to be prepared so that the best solution could be found.

Much research has to be prepared so that the best solution can be found.

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Update to remove grammar errors: In the case of the tomato harvesting machine, there are plenty of factors that need to be consider.

In the case of the tomato harvesting machine, there are plenty of factors that need to be considered.

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Fix grammatical errors: However in the case of the serendipitous discoveries, identifying a problem or need as well as selecting the best solution are eliminated.

However, in the case of serendipitous discoveries, identifying a problem or need as well as selecting the best solutions are eliminated.

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Fix all grammatical errors: In the case of a deliberate technology, inventors must not restrict themselves to only one solution but exposed themselves to the various possible solutions.

In the case of deliberate technology, inventors must not restrict themselves to only one solution but expose themselves to various possible solutions.

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Fix errors in this text: If luck is presence with coincidence, the best solution will be generated in a shorter time.

If luck is present with coincidence, the best solution will be generated in a shorter time.

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Make the sentence grammatical: Since fortuitous discovery often occurs while research was carried out in a totally unrelated field, they must be able to identify the technology that came by accidentally.

Since fortuitous discovery often occurs while research is carried out in a totally unrelated field, scientists must be able to identify the technology that was come by accidentally.

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Fix grammar errors: However, the products in market are not updating as fast as the innovation introduced to the public.

However, the products in the market are not updating as fast as the innovation introduced to the public.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Because of these overwhelming advantages, people expected that gas refrigerator would dominate the consumer market.

Because of these overwhelming advantages, people expected that gas refrigerators would dominate the consumer market.

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Fix all grammatical errors: To sum up, in the generation of innovation, the development of technology is not just technologically decisive, but more socially decisive.

To sum up, in the generation of innovation, the development of technology is not just technologically decisive but also more socially decisive.

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Fix grammar in this sentence: This process and system assist in the growing of crops in dry area especially during periods of inadequate rainfall.

This process and system assist in the growing of crops in dry areas, especially during periods of inadequate rainfall.

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Engineers in recent years have been working creatively and innovatively to properly treat and managed water.

Engineers in recent years have been working creatively and innovatively to properly treat and manage water.

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Remove grammar mistakes: In certain countries, dried-out lands are even brought alive through water irrigation, where water are stored up somewhere and constantly transported through pipes to these lands.

In certain countries, dried-out lands are even brought alive through water irrigation, where water is stored up somewhere and constantly transported through pipes to these lands.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Nevertheless, both of the inventions require time and effort to create miracles in the world.

Nevertheless, both of the inventions required time and effort to create miracles in the world.

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Grammar improvements: In singapore, the local society and education system produces problems that hinder the usage of the engineering design process.

In Singaporengapore, the local society and education system produces problems that hinder the usage of the engineering design process.

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Whether students learned or not depends on the outcome of major examinations such as GCE 'O' and 'A' levels.

Whether students learn or not depends on the outcome of major examinations such as GCE 'O' and 'A' levels.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: These skills are critical to the two stages of the design process, but is lacking in locals due to the effect of the education system.

These skills are critical to the two stages of the design process but are lacking in locals due to the effect of the education system.

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Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Moreover, majority of the locals are apathetic to their surroundings.

Moreover, the majority of the locals are apathetic to their surroundings.

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Remove grammar mistakes: To be able to define a problem, the innovator must be observant enough to see the problem, and bothers to do something to improve it, hence creating an innovation.

To be able to define a problem, the innovator must be observant enough to see the problem and be bothered to do something to improve it, hence creating an innovation.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: Therefore, it can be seen that the government's involvement in promoting environmentally-friendly vehicles affected how marketable electric vehicles are.

Therefore, it can be seen that the government's involvement in promoting environmentally-friendly vehicles has affected how marketable electric vehicles are.

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Fix grammar in the sentence: In short, there are several factors that could have shaped the electric vehicles.

In short, there are several factors that could have shaped electric vehicles.

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Grammar improvements: However, there is a close relationship between the social factors and the technical challenges that the electric vehicles face.

However, there is a close relationship between social factors and the technical challenges that electric vehicles face.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Hence, the recognition of electric vehicles by society could be affected by both social factors and challenges faced in the present technology of the electric vehicle.

Hence, the recognition of electric vehicles by society could be affected by both social factors and challenges faced by the present technology of electric vehicle.

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Update to remove grammar errors: In Singapore, and other countries next to the equator, air conditioners and electric fans have greatly contributed to people's life and people are able to enjoy cool and refreshing in burning hot days.

In Singapore, and other countries next to the equator, air conditioners and electric fans have greatly contributed to people's lives, and people are able to enjoy cool and refreshing air on burning hot days.

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The advent of electric fan was a great success and it was implemented around the world.

The advent of the electric fan was a great success, and it was implemented around the world.

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Remove grammar mistakes: It cannot really cool the temperature and do not control humidity.

It cannot really cool the temperature and does not control humidity.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The air conditioner was so effective that despite its relatively high price, it was integrated to people's life and installed everywhere.

The air conditioner was so effective that despite its relatively high price, it was integrated into people's lives and installed everywhere.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The design was initiated by people's needs, and they ultimately met people's needs.

The design was initiated by people's needs, and it ultimately met people's needs.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: More developed and enhanced functions will be added and improve people's life better and better.

More developed and enhanced functions will be added to improve people's lives better and better.

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Make the sentence grammatical: Without it, our society could not have progressed, nor would our life become convenient.

Without it, our society could not have progressed, nor would our lives become convenient.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: So during the process, they encounter different obstacles, such as political issues, financial issues.

So during the process, they encounter different obstacles, such as political issues and financial issues.

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Fix grammar: Moreover, more efforts are need if they want to commercialize the product from their research.

Moreover, more efforts are needed if they want to commercialize the product from their research.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: The mismatch between still low levels of technological development on the one hand, and enormous velocity of the catch-up process on the other makes company unwilling to innovate on their own.

The mismatch between low levels of technological development on the one hand and the enormous velocity of the catch-up process on the other makes companies unwilling to innovate on their own.

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Fix grammar in the sentence: Entrepreneurs' main aim is to bring higher profits in a shorter time to their company.

The main aim of entrepreneurs is to bring higher profits in a shorter time to their company.

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Improve the grammar of this text: Hopefully, these problems can be eliminated in future and situation can become better and better.

Hopefully, these problems can be eliminated in the future, and the situation can become better and better.

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Fix grammar in this sentence: The release of information is usually done by companies which wanted to flaunt their superiority over other similar companies competing in the same market.

The release of information is usually done by companies that want to flaunt their superiority over other similar companies competing in the same market.

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Fix grammar in this sentence: Second, products that emerge from both technologies can be used for a long time.

Secondly, products that emerge from both technologies can be used for a long time.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: Using the previous examples, the P-80 jet was used for close to 30 years before being replaced completely, while the HIV vaccine may be in use forever if the vaccine undergoes successful researches.

Using the previous examples, the P-80 jet was used for close to 30 years before being replaced completely, while the HIV vaccine may be in use forever if the vaccine undergoes successful research.

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Fix grammar errors: The main steps to consider in a good and proper housing system are the affordability, durability and safe living conditions.

The main steps to consider in a good and proper housing system are affordability, durability, and safe living conditions.

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Fix grammaticality: Hence the main solution to the problem of improper housing would be the reduction of housing cost without compromising on quality.

Hence the main solution to the problem of improper housing would be the reduction of housing costs without compromising on quality.

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Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: On being unable to obtain a proper home, squatters are the next and only alternative that the homeless can approach to.

On being unable to obtain a proper home, shanty houses are the next and only alternative that the homeless can approach.

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Make the sentence fluent: In meeting this need, engineering design processes takes an important role.

In meeting this need, engineering design processes play an important role.

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Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: As we know, the storage and transport of hydrogen have been two major factors that restrict the wide use of hydrogen.

As we know, the storage and transportation of hydrogen have been two major factors that restrict the wide use of hydrogen.

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Improve the grammaticality: Engineers need to find right materials and design a suitable container for hydrogen so that it can be safely transported and stored.

Engineers need to find the right materials and design a suitable container for hydrogen so that it can be safely transported and stored.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In addition, deep processing of fossil fuels also needs engineering design to improve utilization of fossil fuels.

In addition, deep processing of fossil fuels also needs engineering design to improve the utilization of fossil fuels.

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Fix grammar errors in this sentence: For example, during the process of exploiting oil, the byproducts like natural gas are often burned since it is hard to collect and stored.

For example, during the process of exploiting oil, the byproducts like natural gas are often burned since it is hard to collect and store.

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Engineers are trying to find a superconducting material that can work in room temperature to take place of traditional conducting material.

Engineers are trying to find a superconducting material that can work at room temperature to take the place of traditional conducting materials.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Furthermore, the energy- saving appliances designed by engineers have saved inestimable energy for the world.

Furthermore, energy-saving appliances designed by engineers have saved inestimable energy for the world.

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: The survival of humanity in this century is heavily dependent on the role of Engineers and we should be prepared for potential threats and challenges.

The survival of humanity in this century is heavily dependent on the role of Engineers, and they should be prepared for potential threats and challenges.

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Fix grammatical errors: Although a complete ban on RFID is impossible, its usage on individual tracking should be banned as it intrudes our privacy and compromises our security.

Although a complete ban on RFID is impossible, its usage on individual tracking should be banned as it intrudes upon our privacy and compromises our security.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Similarly, since the disease might not manifest itself even if one is tested positive, no one should have the right to reveal the results as it is difficult to verify the exactitude of the result.

Similarly, since the disease might not manifest itself even if one is tested positive, no one should have the right to reveal the results as it is difficult to verify the exactitude of the results.

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Fix grammaticality: In conclusion, the results of genetic testing do have big impacts of people's life in terms of emotional impacts and genetic discrimination.

In conclusion, the results of genetic testing do have big impacts on people's lives in terms of emotional impacts and genetic discrimination.

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: Therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results, and this is also in agreement of protecting human rights.

Therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should have the final say in whether to reveal the results, and this is also in agreement with protecting human rights.

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Improve the grammaticality: Furthermore, it is also unfair to the insurance companies if the individual with genetic disease decided to buy life insurance policies without revealing that they have such genetic disorder.

Furthermore, it is also unfair to the insurance companies if the individual with a genetic disease decides to buy life insurance policies without revealing that they have a such a genetic disorder.

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Fix all grammatical errors: It allows for more effective tracing of an individual through an instant identification approach.

This technology allows for more effective tracing of an individual through an instant identification approach.

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Improve the grammar of this text: The RFID wrist tags also codes for information regarding the patient.

The RFID wrist tags also code for information regarding the patient.

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Fix the grammar mistakes: Important data such as the appropriate medication, meal requirements can be easily retrieved, thereby facilitating the job of the nurses.

Important data such as the appropriate medication and meal requirements can be easily retrieved, thereby facilitating the job of the nurses.

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Remove grammar mistakes: RFID may revolutionize our society in future but at the very moment, it is still in its infant stage where its benefits have yet to warrant a widespread implementation while its disadvantages are surmountable.

RFID may revolutionize our society in the future, but at the very moment, it is still in its infant stage where its benefits have yet to warrant a widespread implementation while its disadvantages are insurmountable.

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Fix grammar: First of all, RFID has played an important role in preventing criminal.

First of all, RFID has played an important role in preventing crimes.

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: From security view, RFID can provide more precise and complete information on suspects or criminals, which results in the reduction in time and manpower for an investigation.

From a security point of view, RFID can provide more precise and complete information on suspects or criminals, which results in a reduction in time and manpower for an investigation.

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Fix grammar: Another key application from RFID is that RFID helps to improve the healthcare sector.

Another key application of RFID is that RFID helps to improve the healthcare sector.

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Improve the grammaticality: For instance, it is more safe now for patients who have mental lost or mental diseases if they are lost, because they are being tracked all the time in the hospital under the surveillance system like RFID.

For instance, it is safer now for patients who have mental diseases if they are lost because they are being tracked all the time in the hospital under a surveillance system like RFID.

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Update to remove grammar errors: And the fact is that most of people will choose safety and security between security and privacy.

And the fact is that most people will choose safety and security between security and privacy.

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Fix grammatical errors: To conclude, it is indisputable that the advantages of surveillance technology outweigh the negative effect.

To conclude, it is indisputable that the advantages of surveillance technology outweigh the negative effects.

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, as argued before, everybody genes may be linked to their relatives' genes, so it is possible for the relatives particularly their sibling to inherit the same defective gene.

However, as argued before, everybody's genes may be linked to their relatives' genes, so it is possible for the relatives, particularly their siblings, to inherit the same defective gene.

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Fix errors in this text: To conclude, individual requesting for genetic testing should not have the final say as it is unfair to the medical insurance company and the person's relative who may be at also at risk of inheriting the same genetic defects.

To conclude, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say as it is unfair to the medical insurance company and the person's relatives, who may also be at risk of inheriting the same genetic defects.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Since the attack on the London Underground on July 2005, surveillance technology has generated a lot of attention after they were used to track the movements of the terrorists responsible for the attack.

Since the attack on the London Underground on July 2005, surveillance technology has generated a lot of attention after it was used to track the movements of the terrorists responsible for the attack.

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Remove grammatical mistakes: Reports and articles have shown that the use of surveillance technology to track people can be beneficial to us, particularly in the healthcare and crime prevention sector and enhancing the security area.

Reports and articles have shown that the use of surveillance technology to track people can be beneficial to us, particularly in the healthcare and crime prevention sectors and in the enhancement of security.

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Fix grammar in this sentence: By that time, her life would be in danger and this would most probably bring about dire consequences such as death.

By that time, the patient's life would be in danger, and this would most probably bring about dire consequences such as death.

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Make the sentence grammatical: Not only that, if indeed that a crime happened, the prison guards will be able to investigate and know who is the culprit.

Not only that, if indeed a crime happens, the prison guards will be able to investigate and know who the culprit is.

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Thirdly, surveillance technology can also be use to keep track of our children and prevent kidnapping.

Thirdly, surveillance technology can also be used to keep track of our children and prevent kidnapping.

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Fix all grammatical errors: The main issue pertaining to this is that when an individual choose not to disclose the result of the genetic testing, it is actually unfair to and has adverse impacts on both his family and employer.

The main issue pertaining to this is that when an individual chooses not to disclose the result of the genetic testing, it is actually unfair to and has adverse impacts on both his family and his employer.

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Fix grammatical errors: The result of the genetic testing concerns parties other than the individual alone, and therefore, the individual requesting for genetic testing should not have the final say to whether the results should be revealed to others.

The result of the genetic testing concerns parties other than the individual alone, and therefore, the individual requesting genetic testing should not have the final say on whether or not the results should be revealed to others.

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: Firstly, often, when an individual is tested to be positive for genetic disorder, he will be reluctant to share the result with others, even the closest kin.

Firstly, when an individual is tested to be positive for a genetic disorder, he would be reluctant to share the result with others, even his closest kin.

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Fix grammar: One reason for revealing the result to the family members is that the result is not only applicable to the individual but also to other family members, as they may also have inherited the diseases.

One reason for revealing the result to family members is that the result is not only applicable to the individual but also to his family members, as they may also have inherited the disease.

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Make the sentence fluent: Even though the individual may have the responsibility to inform the others about the possibility of them inheriting the genes, one should have the right to decide whether to tell.

However, even though the individual may have the responsibility to inform others about the possibility of them inheriting the genes, he should have the right to decide whether or not to tell.

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Fix grammatical errors: Moreover, the test result may be faulty and some people carrying the gene may never develop the disease.

Moreover, the test result may be faulty, and some people carrying the gene never develop the disease.

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Remove grammar mistakes: Furthermore, the testing only gives the percentage but not the definitive results.

Furthermore, the testing only gives the percentage and not the definitive results.

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Fix all grammatical errors: However, there are also several problems attributed from the use of RFID.

However, there are also several problems arising from the use of RFID.

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Fix grammaticality: Most concerns revolve around the fact that RFID invades one's privacy and violates human rights when they are used for tracking people.

Most concerns revolve around the fact that RFID invades one's privacy and violates human rights when it is used for tracking people.

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Companies which specialise in RFID tags may pass the information obtained from the RFID tags to any buyer if government does not intervene or control.

Companies that specialize in RFID tags may pass the information obtained from the RFID tags to any buyer if the government does not intervene or control such access.

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: In conclusion, RFID tracking should not be banned as it does not inflict the privacy of people and gives advantages in many aspects in human life.

In conclusion, RFID tracking should not be banned as it does not infringe on the privacy of people and gives advantages in many aspects of human life.

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Fix all grammatical errors: As genetic diseases can be inherited among family members, anxiety and fear of inheriting the genetic diseases that the individual has been diagnosed will be created.

As genetic diseases can be inherited among family members, anxiety and fear of inheriting the genetic diseases that the individual has been diagnosed with will be created.

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: However, one should not forget that once the genetic result of the individual is disclosed, it might be difficult for the individual to integrate into the society as they may be discriminated.

However, one should not forget that once the genetic result of the individual is disclosed, it might be difficult for the individual to integrate into society as he may be discriminated against.

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Fix all grammatical errors: Hence, the individual should bear in mind the impacts that may arise and decide if they should reveal such results.

Hence, the individual should bear in mind the impacts that may arise and decide if he should reveal such results.

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Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Depending on the seriousness of the disease, the individual decides whether to reveal his diagnosis.

Depending on the seriousness of the disease, the individual decides whether or not to reveal his diagnosis.

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Remove grammatical mistakes: Moreover, forcing the individual to publicize his result will bring about a new caste system where people are grouped according to the genome.

Moreover, forcing the individual to publicize his result could bring about a new caste system where people are grouped according to their genomes.

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Fix errors in this text: In conclusion, due to the serious impact in one's life, we should let the individual to decide his revealing genetic results.

In conclusion, due to the serious impact on one's life, we should let the individual decide whether or not to reveal genetic results.