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Improve the grammar of this text: Genetic testing is an issue that mankind has place great emphasis on.

Genetic testing is an issue that mankind has placed great emphasis on.

702

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Fix errors in this text: Despite the fact that human rights exist, the physicians actually have a clearer understanding of the results and, the ethical and social issues that surfaces by withholding such information.

Despite the fact that human rights exist, physicians actually have a clearer understanding of the results and the ethical and social issues that surface by withholding such information.

703

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: This is clearly true as test results indirectly reflect genetic information related to family members and there is a possibility of them inheriting the disease too.

This is clearly true as test results indirectly reflect genetic information related to family members, as there is a possibility of them inheriting the disease too.

704

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: In such a situation, the authority to release the result should lie with the healthcare professionals.

In such a situation, the authority to release the results should lie with the healthcare professionals.

705

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: As a result, the employers and insurance companies should have the rights to request genetic information from their employees or clients directly, or indirectly from medical professionals who has a better interpretation of the genetic test results.

As a result, employers and insurance companies should have the right to request genetic information from their employees or clients directly or indirectly from medical professionals who have a better interpretation of the genetic test results.

706

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Make the sentence fluent: In case of kidnapping, those who had RFID implanted can be easily located by RFID readers.

In the case of kidnapping, those who had RFID implanted can be easily located by RFID readers.

707

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: This brought about many debate on the ethical and law issues on whether the individual have the final say in revealing the genetic testing results.

This has brought about a lot of debate on ethical and law issues on whether the individual has the final say in revealing the genetic testing results.

708

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Remove grammar mistakes: Tracking of individual's movement using RFID technology is make possible when it is used in a combination with Global Positioning System technology, as proposed by RFID vendors.

Tracking of an individual's movement using RFID technology is made possible when it is used in combination with Global Positioning System technology, as proposed by RFID vendors.

709

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Fix grammar errors: The RFID tag could be tag in an article of clothing or under the skin in some parts of the body and it could also serve as an identifier for the person wearing it.

The RFID tag could be in an article of clothing or under the skin in some part of the body, and it could also serve as an identifier for the person wearing it.

710

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Fix grammar in the sentence: There are many advantages of using RFID technology to track people's movement.

There are many advantages to using RFID technology to track people's movement.

711

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Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Patient misidentification has been the leading causes of medical errors and medical malpractice, posing a serious risk to patient safety.

Patient misidentification has been the leading cause of medical errors and medical malpractice, posing a serious risk to patient safety.

712

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: But guidelines in recommended limits of EMF exposure have been adopted internationally to prevent any known negative health effects.

But guidelines of recommended limits of EMF exposure have been adopted internationally to prevent any known negative health effects.

713

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Fix the grammar mistakes: Hospital staff and family members can thus easily track down the locations of their loved ones with the use of the RFID.

Hospital staff and family members can thus easily track down the locations of their loved ones with the use of the RFID

714

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Grammar improvements: The use of such tracking device would mean that the locations and actions of the person will always be known.

The use of such a tracking device would mean that the locations and actions of the person will always be known.

715

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Fix all grammatical errors: Despite the disadvantages it may pose, these can be offset with appropriate actions put in place.

Despite the disadvantages it may pose, these can be offset by appropriate actions put in place.

716

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Fix grammar errors: Hence, we should not totally shun away from the use of RFID to track people but put in place measures to overcome the problems so as to ensure its optimal use.

Hence, society should not totally shun away from the use of RFID to track people but put in place measures to overcome the problems so as to ensure its optimal use.

717

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Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: However, the use of RFID in tracking people has brought about many controversies.

However, the use of RFID in tracking people has brought about a lot of controversies.

718

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Fix grammar in the sentence: There are two important reasons that RFID technology to track people should not be banned.

There are two important reasons why RFID technology to track people should not be banned.

719

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Fix grammaticality: In an event of an accident, rescue operators can locate workers who are RFID tagged and save them as soon as possible.

In the event of an accident, rescue operators can locate workers who are RFID tagged and save them as soon as possible

720

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Fix errors in this text: Moreover, others oppose this as it causes invasion of privacy due to leakage of personal information to the third party.

Moreover, others oppose this as it causes an invasion of privacy due to the leakage of personal information to the third part

721

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Fix grammar in the sentence: In conclusion, we should not ban RFID technologies to track people as there are many benefits and its use as an effective measure to locate individuals during times of emergencies.

In conclusion, we should not ban RFID technologies to track people as there are many benefits and because of its use as an effective measure to locate individuals during times of emergencies.

722

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Make the sentence fluent: To a large extent, these have helped to ease the aging process through investing in healthcare for elderly, giving financial aids to the elderly and also enhancing the psychological well being of the elderly.

To a large extent, these have helped to ease the aging process through investing in healthcare for the elderly, giving financial aid to the elderly, and also enhancing their psychological well-being of the elderly.

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Remove grammatical mistakes: Governments help to reduce the burden of the elderly by subsidizing healthcare, giving financial aid and also enforcing the people to save for retirement.

Governments help to reduce the burden of the elderly by subsidizing healthcare, giving financial aid, and also forcing people to save for retirement.

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: An example would be the Maintenance of Parents Act in Singapore, where parents could lawfully demand support from their child in court.

An example would be the Maintenance of Parents Act in Singapore, where parents could lawfully demand support from their children in court.

725

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: While healthcare for the elderly is still important, however governments must ensure that other important areas will not get neglected as well.

While healthcare for the elderly is still important, governments must ensure that other important areas will not get neglected as well.

726

gec

Remove grammar mistakes: Ageing population is a serious problem faced by many developed state.

The ageing population is a serious problem faced by many developed states.

727

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Make the sentence fluent: However, most of these policies tend to be ineffective in easing the ageing process because they either have their limitation or fail to solve the social problems behind the ageing process.

However, most of these policies tend to be ineffective in easing the aging process because they either have their limitations or fail to solve the social problems behind the aging process.

728

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Fix the grammar mistakes: For example, the UK has tried to make the nation to become welfare state, but this leaves heavy tax burden to the working class and created low working incentive for the workers.

For example, the UK has tried to make the nation a welfare state, but this leaves a heavy tax burden on the working class and creates a low working incentives for the workers.

729

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: For example, Japan has introduced medical service, which allows its citizens to save for their personal medical account so that we can use the money when they fall sick in their old age.

For example, Japan has introduced a medical service which allows its citizens to save for their personal medical account so that they can use the money when they fall sick in their old age.

730

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Remove grammar mistakes: Hence, with more children, more economic support could be provided and the old parents could be taken care better.

Hence, with more children, more economic support could be provided, and the old parents could be taken care of better.

731

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Secondly, getting more salary through longer working hours makes life much easier than appealing for limited economic aids after having many children.

Secondly, getting more salary through longer working hours makes life much easier than appealing for limited economic aid by having many children.

732

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Improve the grammar of this text: Thus, government fails to notice the two root of the evil.

Thus, the government fails to notice the two root causes of the evil.

733

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Fix grammar in this sentence: Therefore, baby bonus policy could not increase the birth rate effectively in easing ageing process.

Therefore, the baby bonus policy could not increase the birth rate effectively in easing the aging process.

734

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Improve the grammaticality: The family bonding in most western society is very weak and the young generation does not really have a sense of filial piety in their head.

Family bonding in most western societies is very weak, and the young generation does not really have a sense of filial piety in their minds.

735

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Improve the grammaticality: Also, the stressful working market created by capitalism today is taking away too much time and effort from people so that they cannot spend them with their family, or even cannot think of having a family.

Also, the stressful working market created by capitalism today is taking away so much time and effort from people that they do not have time with their families or even cannot think of having a family.

736

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: It creates modern value that allows people of opposite sex to live together without having a family.

It creates a modern value that allows people of the opposite sex to live together without having a family.

737

gec

Fix grammaticality of the sentence: It was at first experienced by the developed countries, but now taking place around the globe.

It was at first experienced by the developed countries but is now taking place around the globe.

738

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Fix grammar in this sentence: However, the figures have each increased to 67 and 78, and it has no signs of stopping.

However, the figures have each increased to 67 and 78, and the increase has no signs of stopping.

739

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: The decline performance of the body limits the ability of the aged to care for themselves.

The declining performance of the body limits the ability of the aged to care for themselves.

740

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Grammar improvements: Some may argue that, the measure of increasing the retirement age should be able to reduce the negative effects of the aging population.

Some may argue that the measure of increasing the retirement age should be able to reduce the negative effects of the aging population.

741

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Therefore the current problem Singapore facing now is the aged population.

Therefore the current problem Singapore is facing now is the aged population.

742

gec

Update to remove grammar errors: Money is needed to encourage elders to work longer and lifelong learning.

Money is needed to encourage the elderly to work longer and pursue lifelong learning.

743

gec

Fix grammar: For example, housing grants are given to encourage children to stay near to their parents.

For example, housing grants are given to encourage children to stay close to their parents.

744

gec

Fix grammatical errors: Even though government encourages children to take care of their parents, there are still cases where parents sue their children for not taking care of them.

Even though the government encourages children to take care of their parents, there are still cases where parents sue their children for not taking care of them.

745

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Fix grammaticality of the sentence: In cases where the elder do not have any children or saving left, money is also needed to cater for their daily expenses, housing and medical expenses.

In cases where the elderly do not have any children or do not have any savings left, money is also needed to cater for their daily expenses, housing, and medical expenses.

746

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Fix errors in this text: Eventually by 2050, 35 percent of the population will reach the age of 60 years and above.

Eventually, by 2050, 35 percent of the population will have reached the age of 60 years and above.

747

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Fix grammar: However, during the next 50 years there will be a dramatic increase in aged and it is inevitable for Asian countries to face this challenge from now on.

However, during the next 50 years, there will be a dramatic increase in age, and it is inevitable for Asian countries to face this challenge from now on.

748

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Remove grammatical mistakes: According to the survey done by United Nations, aging population in Asia is estimated to increase by 314 percent, from 207 million to 857 million in 2050 and among those sub regions East Asia will suffer most.

According to a survey done by the United Nations, the aging population in Asia is estimated to increase by 314 percent, from 207 million to 857 million in 2050, and among those sub-regions, East Asia will suffer the most.

749

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: Both china and Singapore are anticipated to become the second right after Japan in 30 years and aged above 65 will make up 20 percent of the total population.

Both China and Singapore are anticipated to become the second right after Japan in 30 years, and those aged above 65 will make up 20 percent of the total population.

750

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: So it has been a controversial issue that whether government shall cut public spending on the aged and divert to other areas of economic development to secure stable productivity and GDP.

So it has been a controversial issue whether governments should cut public spending on the aged and divert it to other areas of economic development to secure stable productivity and GDP.

751

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: It looks aging population will become a worse problem if current low-level government spending is going to be cut further.

It seems that the aging population will become a worse problem if current low-level government spending is going to be cut further.

752

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Make the sentence fluent: It is more important to pay attention to other trends and characteristics of aging population in order to solve this problem it in some other ways.

It is more important to pay attention to other trends and characteristics of the aging population in order to solve this problem in some other ways.

753

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Fix grammar in this sentence: Thus it will be more essential for the government to emphasize the responsibility that adult children bear to support the family rather than directly give financial support to the aged, which will in turn lay more tax burdens on the working group.

Thus it will be more essential for the government to emphasize the responsibility that adult children should bear to support the family rather than directly give financial support to the aged, which will, in turn, lay more tax burdens on the working population.

754

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: For instance, hiring the elderly as part-time worker may be a good choice for both aged and employers so as to enable the elderly to earn more as well as enhance productivity.

For instance, hiring the elderly as part-time workers may be a good choice for both the aged and employers so as to enable the elderly to earn more as well as to enhance productivity.

755

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: By the year 2050, our median age would be 54 years.

By the year 2050, our median age will be 54 years

756

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Fix errors in this text: The government have incorporated this approach from Japan because it is a pragmatic step compared to just increasing the official retirement age.

The government has incorporated this approach from Japan because it is a pragmatic step compared to just increasing the official retirement age.

757

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Improve the grammaticality: The healthcare sector has also contributed in helping to ease the aging process.

The healthcare sector has also contributed to helping to ease the aging process.

758

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: On top of the 3 M, the government have also introduced Eldershield which is an insurance scheme that gives financial protection to those who need long-term care, especially during old age.

On top of the 3Ms, the government has also introduced Eldershield, which is an insurance scheme that gives financial protection to those who need long-term care, especially during old age.

759

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Fix grammar errors in this sentence: This is an effective solution because the role of caring for the elderly is divided as effectively as possible between the private and government sectors.

This is an effective solution because the role of caring for the elderly is divided as effectively as possible between the private and the government sectors.

760

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: To ensure better comfort for the elderly, the government have also been upgrading home care to serve the elderly better.

To ensure better comfort for the elderly, the government has also been upgrading home care to serve the elderly better.

761

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: The government have also upgraded infrastructure to help ease the aging process.

The government has also upgraded infrastructure to help ease the aging process.

762

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The government have also gone beyond transportation and housing to help ease the aging process by providing neighbourhoods with decent public toilets and green spaces which enables the elderly to lead an active lifestyle.

The government has also gone beyond transportation and housing to help ease the aging process by providing neighborhoods with decent public toilets and green spaces, which enable the elderly to lead an active lifestyle.

763

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Remove grammatical mistakes: In the areas of healthcare and financial security the government have been constantly upgrading and implementing new strategies to help ease the aging process.

In the areas of healthcare and financial security, the government has constantly been upgrading and implementing new strategies to help ease the aging process.

764

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: However, with the world noticing the shift in it's demographic to a more aged society, things are becoming more accommodating for the elderly.

However, with the world noticing the shift in its demographics to a more aged society, things are becoming more accommodating for the elderly.

765

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Often, the issue is that the elderly are neglected by their adult children and left to survive by their own.

Often, the issue is that the elderly are neglected by their adult children and left to survive on their own.

766

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Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: The government thus introduced the Maintenance of Parents Act to prevent adult children from abandoning their elderly parents.

The government thus introduced the Maintenance of Parents Act to prevent adult children from abandoning their elderly parents

767

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: These two policies are some of the ways that governments are looking into to help the elderly have a better and easier life during their twilight years.

These two policies are some of the ways that the government is looking into to help the elderly have a better and easier life during their twilight years.

768

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Fix grammar: Such possible failure of medical policies have spurred efforts to better protect the old.

Such possible failure of medical policies has spurred efforts to better protect the old.

769

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: The scheme ensures the elderly have the money to pay should they require long-term medical care.

The scheme ensures the elderly have the money to pay should they require long-term medical care

770

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: In our society, the aged have been marginalized in the struggle of the survivor of the fittest as their contributive power to society were reduced.

In our society, the aged have been marginalized in the struggle of the survival of the fittest as their contributive power to society is reduced.

771

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Fix grammar in the sentence: The three developments and policies highlighted are examples of the efforts made to help ease the ageing process for the elderly by helping them keep themselves relevant to society and their family.

The three developments and policies highlighted are examples of the efforts made to help ease the aging process for the elderly by helping them keep themselves relevant to society and their family.

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Fix grammaticality: It is interesting to note, also, that in helping to ease the ageing process, society has prepared itself to adapt to the prospect of an ageing population.

It is interesting to note, also, that in helping to ease the aging process, society has prepared itself to adapt to the prospect of an aging population.

773

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Fix grammaticality in this sentence: From a pragmatic stand, majority of the elderly are unable to contribute economic growth due to deteriorating health conditions which come naturally with aging.

From a pragmatic standpoint, a majority of the elderly are unable to contribute to economic growth due to deteriorating health conditions that come naturally with aging.

774

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Fix grammar: Another reason why public spending on the elderly should be limited is so that the funds could be diverted into other sectors of the country's development.

Another reason why public spending on the elderly should be limited is that the funds could be diverted into other sectors of the country's development.

775

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Fix grammar: Spending on the aged should also be contextualized accordingly with economic situations, such as the recent economic crisis where employers are extremely selective, making jobs all the more scarce for the elderly.

Spending on the aged should also be contextualized accordingly in economic situations, such as the recent economic crisis where employers are extremely selective, making jobs all the more scarce for the elderly.

776

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Make the sentence fluent: Clearly, it can be seen that though limiting public spending on the elderly might produce certain immediate difficulties, it will ease the process inevitably during the long run.

Clearly, it can be seen that though limiting public spending on the elderly might produce certain immediate difficulties, it will ease the process inevitably in the long run.

777

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: The issues of age challenge the whole of society and put it to the test.

The issues of age challenge the whole of society and put it to the test,

778

gec

Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Thus, many are put off by the idea of having more children due to the accompanying life- time commitment of raising a child.

Thus, many are put off by the idea of having more children due to the accompanying lifetime commitment of raising a child.

779

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Thus, even if the legal retirement age was raised, it clearly produces limited results.

Thus, even if the legal retirement age was raised, it has clearly produced limited results.

780

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: As a result, employers tend to shut their doors to the older workers.

As a result, employers tend to shut their doors to older workers.

781

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Make the sentence fluent: With the growing population and various problems that the present governments face today, the governments are finding it tedious to balance the budget to ensure that all areas of development are being met.

With the growing population and various problems that the present government face today, the governments are finding it tedious to balance the budget to ensure that all areas of development are being met.

782

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Update to remove grammar errors: Not only does it benefits the government as spending on the aged can be reduced, it also benefits them both economically and socially.

Not only does it benefit the government as spending on the aged can be reduced, but it also benefits them both economically and socially.

783

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Furthermore, working can help to decrease boredom in retirement, as time will then be spent engaging in productive activities at work, and not whiled away doing nothing.

Furthermore, working can help to decrease boredom in retirement, as time will then be spent engaging in productive activities at work, and not be whiled away doing nothing.

784

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Make the sentence grammatical: Apart from defense, the government needs to invest in out country's development as well, and this includes improvements in our education system.

Apart from defense, the government needs to invest in our country's development as well, and this includes improvements in our education system.

785

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Fix grammaticality: However, other areas should not be neglected, as our nation's growth and development is of vital importance as well.

However, other areas should not be neglected, as our nation's growth and development are of vital importance as well.

786

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Fix grammatical errors: It will be made possible if these are strongly enforced, and high cooperation among citizens of our society will help to deal with this issue too.

The goal of limiting public spending on the aged will be made possible if the proposed measures are strongly enforced, and high cooperation among citizens of our society will help to deal with this issue too.

787

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: However, what we do not know or are still confused about is the effective way to both take care of the aged and enhance the development of other fields.

However, what we do not know or are still confused about is an effective way to both take care of the aged and enhance the development of other fields.

788

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Improve the grammaticality of this text: There is a suggestion that the governments should limit the expenditures on the aged and therefore they will have money to spend on other areas to develop the countries.

There is a suggestion that governments should limit expenditures on the aged so that they will have money to spend on other areas to develop the countries.

789

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Fix grammaticality: Cutting down the fiscal costs on the aging population to support other areas does not mean that those areas will receive the whole benefits.

Cutting down the fiscal costs on the aging population to support other areas does not mean that those areas will receive all the benefits.

790

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Fix the grammar mistakes: The increasing size of the economy could be relatively limited, but it does allow the government to have more choices to take care of the aged in a better way.

The increasing size of the economy could be relatively limited, but spending more on the aged does allow the government to have more choices to take care of the aged in a better way.

791

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Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: In brief the government has insufficient funds to fulfill all wants and needs of aged population.

In brief, the government has insufficient funds to fulfill all wants and needs of the aged population.

792

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Improve the grammar of this text: Consequently a country cannot afford to spend too much on elderly because of practical realities.

Consequently, a country cannot afford to spend too much on the elderly because of practical realities.

793

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Remove all grammatical errors from this text: Governments and policy makers have to decide on what should be supported by the public sector, and what should be left to individuals to 'buy' for themselves, depending on their own financial capacity.

Governments and policymakers have to decide what should be supported by the public sector and what should be left to individuals to 'buy' for themselves, depending on their own financial capacity.

794

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Fix grammatical errors: In fact, governments should only focus on those elderly who are poor, needy and abandoned by family.

In fact, governments should only focus on those elderly who are poor and needy and who have been abandoned by theirs.

795

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Fix the grammatical mistakes: Education, infrastructure, defense and investment are the other areas that need to be looked after by government.

Education, infrastructure, defense, and investment are the other areas that need to be looked after by governments.

796

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Fix grammaticality: Firstly elderly people are less productive than young people and most of them are retired or unemployment.

Firstly elderly people are less productive than young people, and most of them are retired or unemployed.

797

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Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: On the other hand, with sufficient economic growth there are more choices and fewer persons in need.

On the other hand, with sufficient economic growth, there would be more choices and fewer persons in need.

798

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Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Another outcome of better education standards is that, both the younger and older generations will better understand what could happen to them when they grow old.

Another outcome of higher education standards is that both the younger and older generations will better understand what could happen to them when they grow old.

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Fix grammatical errors: This means both the newer and older generations will be able to better plan for their old age and the problems that come with it, for example, deteriorating health.

This means both the younger and older generations will be able to better plan for their old age and the problems that come with it, for example, deteriorating health.

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Make the sentence grammatical: While the idea of improving education to ease the aging problem in the future is workable, there may still be a problem of individuals who will not be able to follow this plan.

While the idea of improving education to ease the aging problem in the future is workable, there may still be a problem for individuals who will not be able to.