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 Reversing soon
 
+As you can plainly see by looking at the magnificent size of his mustache alone, Reverso Expanded obviously has far greater reach than poor old [Reverso](https://huggingface.co/FPHam/Reverso_13b_Q_Generator_GPTQ) , whose questioning skills were honed to merely ask mainly "what" kind of questions, since that is the kind of guy he is, a 'what' kind of guy. 
 
-As you can clearly see from the size of the moustache, Reverso Expanded has much wider reach with his questions. 
+But his bro Reverso Expanded, with the magnificent hirsute wonder that adorns his upper lip, asks lots and lots of other kinds of questions ("explain", "write", "provide", "what if", "let's say"). 
 
-The original [Reverso](https://huggingface.co/FPHam/Reverso_13b_Q_Generator_GPTQ) was finetuned to ask mostly "What...?" type question, because that's who he is. "What" type of person. 
+Pros and cons both ways, though.
 
-But his curious brother, Reverso Expanded, asks many more detailed questions (such as Explain..., Write...., Provide..., What if..., Let's say...)
+For instance, Reverso Expanded has more sophisticated querying skills (try it some time; I'm sure you would be shocked!) but if the submitted text is mere blatherous prose, lacking any real aim or focus, Reverso Expanded can reply with a "Write a stupid, long, rambling screed about nothing, and thus bore everybody to death, including myself, as I am forced to read your stupid essay, jerk." 
 
-There are pluses and minuses to this. Reverso Expanded has more refined asking capabilities (just try it, you'd be SHOCKED), but if something is just a blabbing prose without much of aim and can resort to "Write a long and boring article about nothing in particular" type of response, which may not be for everyone, especially if you feed it a lot of text about nothing (basically most of the books in Top 10 Romance category). 
+Which might not be everybody’s cup of tea anyway, especially when you are feeding it lots of stupid junk (i.e., most of the stuff in the top-ten romance list or this entire description).
 
-Reverso Expanded also happily crashed my computer during training in about 3/4 of the entire process and so the last recoverable checkpoint was not fully what he wanted to be. That's life. 
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-He still seems to feel fine, even if not at full brain capacity. Would the full finetune be better? We will never know...
+Reverso Expanded also gleefully crashed my computer during training, and the latest recovered snapshot was not quite what I was looking for, but there you go anyway.
+He appears to be functioning perfectly well on only partial brainpower. 
 
+Maybe full finetuning would be better? We'll never know!