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@@ -25,15 +25,15 @@ If anything, it was even more unashamedly purile than when she first started out
 
 "Ebony, darling?"
 
-She looked up, startled. "Oh!" She blushed slightly.
+Her eyes widened. "What?" She flushed prettily.
 
-"Look," I said, after a few moments' thought. "There are one or two things. You have improved your grammar slightly. Barely noticeably, but still ..."
+"Well," I said, after a moment's deliberation. "You have improved your grammar slightly. Barely noticeably, but still ..."
 
-"Grammar!" She said disdainfully. "I had never issue with my grammar!"
+"Grammar! What about my grammar? I never got a problem with no grammar!"
 
-"Well, maybe not," I agreed, feeling vaguely guilty. "At least you've made an effort. So what you like to write about these days?" I changed subject.
+"Well, maybe not," I agreed, feeling vaguely guilty. "At least you've made an effort. So what you like to write about these days?" I changed the subject.
 
-"Just sexxy stuff, really. I'm working on a new project right now. It's called 'The Unfortunate Lustfulness of Draco Malfoy.' Do you want me to read some of it to you?"
+"Just stuff, really. I'm working on a new project right now. It's called 'The Unfortunate Lustfulness of Draco Malfoy.' Do you want me to read some of it to you?"
 
 I shook my head quickly. "No, thank you. Sounds quite... not my style.  But I hope you enjoy writing it."