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     <td>clarity</td>
     <td>Make the text more formal, concise, readable and understandable.</td>
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-    Original: The changes made the paper better than before. <br>
-    Revised: The changes improved the paper. 
+    Original: It's like a house which anyone can enter in it. <br>
+    Revised: It's like a house which anyone can enter.
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     <td>fluency</td>
     <td>Fix grammatical errors in the text.</td>
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-    Original: She went to the markt. <br>
-    Revised: She went to the market.
+    Original: In the same year he became the Fellow of the Royal Society. <br>
+    Revised: In the same year, he became the Fellow of the Royal Society.
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     <td>coherence</td>
     <td>Make the text more cohesive, logically linked and consistent as a whole.</td>
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-    Original: She works hard. She is successful. <br>
-    Revised: She works hard; therefore, she is successful.
+    Original: Achievements and awards Among his other activities, he founded the Karachi Film Guild and Pakistan Film and TV Academy. <br>
+    Revised: Among his other activities, he founded the Karachi Film Guild and Pakistan Film and TV Academy.
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     <td>style</td>
     <td>Convey the writer’s writing preferences, including emotions, tone, voice, etc..</td>
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-    Original: Everything was rotten. <br>
-    Revised: Everything was awfully rotten.
+    Original: She was last seen on 2005-10-22. <br>
+    Revised: She was last seen on October 22, 2005.
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