Updated intro bunf

app.py

@@ -37,8 +37,11 @@ model_id = "openai/whisper-large-v3"
 description = f"""
  <div>
     <p>Welcome to Redmond Barry-oke! </p>
-    <p>This app aims to demonstrate the potential of using machine learning to transcribe audio. Users are invited to record themselves reading a brief and abridged excerpt from a speech delivered by Sir Redmond Barry at the opening of The Free Public Library of Ballarat Est in 1869. Once recorded and submitted the app will transcribe and return a "diction" score.</p>
-    <p>This app uses {model_id} to perform automated transcription</p>
+    <p>This app aims to demonstrate the potential of using machine learning to transcribe audio. Users are invited to record themselves reading a brief and abridged excerpt from a speech delivered by Sir Redmond Barry at the opening of The Free Public Library of Ballarat Est in 1869<./p>
+    <p>Once recorded the audio can be submitted which will invoke the {model_id} machine learning model that is designed to convert the audio to text</p>
+    <p>When a transcript is ready, any punctuation is stripped out and it's compared with a stripped version of the original text</p>
+    <p>Any differences are highlighted using colour</p>
+    <p>Finally the differences are calculated as a percentage of the total number of characters, giving an accuracy score</p>
     <p>A full transcript of Sir Redmond Barry's speech can be read in the <a href="https://latrobejournal.slv.vic.gov.au/latrobejournal/issue/latrobe-26/t1-g-t3.html" target="_blank">La Trobe Journal</a></p>
  </div>
 """