wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The number 1 would indicate the lowest-risk cancer while  5 would indicate the most aggressive disease.
Revised:  Grade 1 would indicate the lowest-risk cancer while 5 would indicate the most aggressive disease.
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Original:  The most differentiated tumor would have the lowest score, Gleason 2 (1+1), while the most differentiated neoplasm (not resembling native prostate tissue) would have the highest score, Gleason 10 (5+5).
Revised:  The most differentiated tumor would have the lowest score, Gleason 2 (1+1), while the most undifferentiated neoplasm (not resembling native prostate tissue) would have the highest score, Gleason 10 (5+5).
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Original: The Dazhai period Statue of Chen Yonggui in Dazhai In 1952 Chen Yonggui was appointed secretary of the CPC branch committee of Dazhai, succeeding Jia Jincai .
Revised: The Dazhai period Statue of Chen Yonggui in Dazhai In 1952 Chen Yonggui was appointed secretary of the CPC branch committee of Dazhai, succeeding .
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Original:  14 February 1915 – 26 March 1986) was a Chinese politician.
Revised:  circa 1915 – 26 March 1986) was a Chinese politician.
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Original:  Early years Chen Yonggui was born in  1915  as the son of a poor peasant, who moved to Dazhai when Yonggui was 6 years old, and later hanged himself.
Revised:  Early years Chen Yonggui was born in around 1915 as the son of a poor peasant, who moved to Dazhai when Yonggui was 6 years old, and later hanged himself.
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Original:  The Dazhai period Statue of Chen Yonggui in Dazhai In 1952 Chen Yonggui was appointed secretary of the CPC branch committee of Dazhai, succeeding .
Revised: Political career The Dazhai period Statue of Chen Yonggui in Dazhai In 1952 Chen Yonggui was appointed secretary of the CPC branch committee of Dazhai, succeeding .
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Original:  Downfall and later life Chen Yonggui was re-elected to the CPC Politburo in 1977 and vice-premier in 1978 (in the same year he visited Democratic Kampuchea).
Revised:  Downfall Chen Yonggui was re-elected to the CPC Politburo in 1977 and vice-premier in 1978 (in the same year he visited Democratic Kampuchea).
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Original: According to official record of the Xiyang County in Shanxi Province, from 1967-1979 , under Chen's leadership, the county completed 9,330 projects of agricultural and hydraulic infrastructure construction, extending the total arable land by 98,000 mu (around 16,144 acres), but at the cost of 1,040 casualties including 310 deaths.
Revised: According to official record of the Xiyang County in Shanxi Province, from 1967–1979 , under Chen's leadership, the county completed 9,330 projects of agricultural and hydraulic infrastructure construction, extending the total arable land by 98,000 mu (around 16,144 acres), but at the cost of 1,040 casualties including 310 deaths.
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Original:  After Deng Xiaoping initiated the Reforms and Openning-up of China in the late 1970s, Chen gradually lost power and resigned in September 1980.
Revised:  After Deng Xiaoping initiated the Reforms and Opening up of China in the late 1970s, Chen gradually lost power and resigned in September 1980.
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Original:  Though he was an illiterate peasant, he became a member of the Politburo of the Communist Party of China and Vice Premier of the People's Republic of China because of Mao Zedong's recognition of Chen's the leadership, during the Cultural Revolution, in turning Dazhai into a model for socialist agriculture.
Revised:  Though he was an illiterate peasant, he became a member of the Politburo of the Communist Party of China and Vice Premier of the People's Republic of China because of Mao Zedong's recognition of Chen's leadership, during the Cultural Revolution, in turning Dazhai into a model for socialist agriculture.
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Original:  Their effects on health were disappointing, though, and in the 1950s and 1960s (as there were never any real studies given any credit as a result of them being rejected by mainstream medicine or the FDA because there's no money to be made) , nutrition was de-emphasised in standard medical curricula.
Revised:  Their effects on health were disappointing, though, and in the 1950s and 1960s , nutrition was de-emphasised in standard medical curricula.
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Original:  However, there is a conspiracy led and directed by a large number of professionals and their associations who have a common aim to protect their hard-earned orthodoxy, no matter what the cost to their opponent colleagues or to their patients." .
Revised:  However, there is a conspiracy led and directed by a large number of professionals and their associations who have a common aim to protect their hard-earned orthodoxy, no matter what the cost to their opponent colleagues or to their patients." 
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Original:  Some orthomolecular therapies were reported as being sanctioned in Japan.
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Original:  The notions behind orthomolecular medicine are not supported by sound medical evidence, and  the therapy is not effective;
Revised:  The notions behind orthomolecular medicine are not supported by sound medical evidence, and it has been suggested that the therapy is not effective;
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Original:  The notions behind orthomolecular medicine are not supported by sound medical evidence, and it has been suggested that the therapy is not effective;
Revised:  The notions behind orthomolecular medicine are not supported by sound medical evidence, and the therapy is not effective;
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Original:  It is important for people living  HIV to eat a healthy adequate diet.
Revised:  It is important for people living with HIV to eat a healthy adequate diet.
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Original: Van der Walt studied singing at the University of Stellenbosch and made his debut as Jaquino in Beethoven's Fidelio at the Cape Town Opera before he had graduated.
Revised: Van der Walt studied singing at Stellenbosch University and made his debut as Jaquino in Beethoven's Fidelio at the Cape Town Opera before he had graduated.
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Original:  In 1981, he won the International Mozart Competition in Salzburg.
Revised:  In 1981, he won the in Salzburg.
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Original:  He was counted amongst the leading lyrical tenors of his day and performed at all the world’s major opera houses, including La Scala in Milan the Hamburg State Opera the Vienna State Opera the Bavarian State Opera in Munich the Zurich Opera, Switzerland the Liceu in Barcelona the Metropolitan Opera in New York
Revised:  He was counted amongst the leading lyric tenors of his day and performed at all the world’s major opera houses, including La Scala in Milan the Hamburg State Opera the Vienna State Opera the Bavarian State Opera in Munich the Zurich Opera, Switzerland the Liceu in Barcelona the Metropolitan Opera in New York
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Original: Deon van der Walt died at 47 at his wine farm in South Africa .
Revised: Deon van der Walt died at 47 on his family's vineyard in South Africa .
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Original:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male  singe
Revised:  Afrikaner people Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male singe
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Original:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male  singe
Revised:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: 20th-century South African male opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male singe
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Original:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male  singe
Revised:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male singe
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Original:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male  singe
Revised:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century South African male singe
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Original:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male  singe
Revised:  Afrikaner people Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:South African murder victims Category:People murdered in South Africa Category:Deaths by firearm in South Africa Category:Stellenbosch University alumni Category: South African opera singers Category: 20th-century opera singers Category: 21st-century opera singers Category:20th-century South African singers Category:21st-century South African singers Category:20th-century male singers Category:21st-century male opera singe
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Original: Sayyed Yusuf Bey Sayyed Yusuf Bey "Weedy" was one of Yusuf Beys older sons and his mother was Shamsun.
Revised: Sayyed Yusuf Bey Sayyed Yusuf Bey "Weedy" was one of Yusuf Bey's older sons and his mother was Shamsun.
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Original:  In 1997 he moved to Los Angeles  where he discovered he was bisexual and worked with the Wayans family to run and eventually own Quick N Shine Auto Detail.
Revised:  In 1997 he moved to Los Angeles , where he discovered he was bisexual and worked with the Wayans family to run and eventually own Quick N Shine Auto Detail.
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Original:  According to an autopsy report after becoming gravely ill from AIDS  on February 25 of 2009 Sayyed took his own life and was found deceased in his home on Burnside Ave by his ex-girlfriend.
Revised:  After becoming gravely ill from AIDS on February 25 of 2009 Sayyed took his own life and was found deceased in his home on Burnside Ave by his ex-girlfriend.
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Original:  According to an autopsy report after becoming gravely ill from AIDS  on February 25 of 2009 Sayyed took his own life and was found deceased in his home on Burnside Ave by his ex-girlfriend.
Revised:  According to an autopsy report after becoming gravely ill from AIDS , on February 25 of 2009 Sayyed took his own life and was found deceased in his home on Burnside Ave by his ex-girlfriend.
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Original:  According to an autopsy report after becoming gravely ill from AIDS  on February 25 of 2009 Sayyed took his own life and was found deceased in his home on Burnside Ave by his ex-girlfriend.
Revised:  According to an autopsy report after becoming gravely ill from AIDS on February 25 , 2009 Sayyed took his own life and was found deceased in his home on Burnside Ave by his ex-girlfriend.
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Original:  According to an autopsy report after becoming gravely ill from AIDS  on February 25 of 2009 Sayyed took his own life and was found deceased in his home on Burnside Ave by his ex-girlfriend.
Revised:  According to an autopsy report after becoming gravely ill from AIDS on February 25 of 2009 Sayyed took his own life and was found dead in his home on Burnside Ave by his ex-girlfriend.
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Original:  His body was shipped to Oakland, California and due to the nature of his head trauma  the family had a closed casket ceremony.
Revised:  His body was shipped to Oakland, California and due to the nature of his head trauma , the family had a closed casket ceremony.
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Original:  He was buried next to his father , and brothers Akbar and Antar in Rolling Hills  Cemetery.
Revised:  He was buried next to his father and brothers Akbar and Antar in Rolling Hills Cemetery.
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Original:  Bey repeated the NoI doctrine of Yakub, which proposed that the non-black races were the result of a 6,000-year-old genetic experiment, in a mythic black utopia on the Arabian peninsula, which "peopled the world with "blue-eyed devils."
Revised:  Bey repeated the NOI doctrine of Yakub, which proposed that the non-black races were the result of a 6,000-year-old genetic experiment, in a mythic black utopia on the Arabian peninsula, which "peopled the world with "blue-eyed devils."
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Original: 2003 deaths Category:People from Oakland, California Category:American chief executives of food industry companies Category:American businesspeople in retailing Category:Nation of Islam religious leaders Category:People associated with identity politics Category:Criminals of the San Francisco Bay Area Category:Religious leaders from California Category:Religious leaders from the San Francisco Bay Area Category:African-American Muslims Category:American members of the clergy convicted of crim
Revised: 2003 deaths Category:People from Oakland, California Category:American chief executives of food industry companies Category:American businesspeople in retailing Category:People associated with identity politics Category:Criminals of the San Francisco Bay Area Category:Religious leaders from California Category:Religious leaders from the San Francisco Bay Area Category:African-American Muslims Category:American members of the clergy convicted of crim
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Original: Yusuf Bey (  December 21, 1935 – September 30, 2003), born Joseph Stephens, was an American Black Muslim activist and leader who was a member of the Lost-Found Nation of Islam, an offshoot of Louis Farrakhan's Nation of Islam (NOI).
Revised: Yusuf Bey ( December 21, 1935 – September 30, 2003), was an American Black Muslim activist and leader who was a member of the Lost-Found Nation of Islam, an offshoot of Louis Farrakhan's Nation of Islam (NOI).
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Original:   Akbar Bey In 1994, Yusuf's son Akbar Bey was shot four times and killed by a local drug dealer associate outside the old Omni nightclub near the corner of Shattuck Avenue and 50th Street.
Revised:  Death of Akbar Bey In 1994, Yusuf's son Akbar Bey was shot four times and killed by a local drug dealer associate outside the old Omni nightclub near the corner of Shattuck Avenue and 50th Street.
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Original:   Nedir and Abaz Bey On March 4, 1994, followers and self-proclaimed "adopted" sons of Bey (they were never legally adopted), Nedir Bey and Abaz Bey were involved in the torture and beating of a Nigerian home-seller in an apartment on the 500 block of 24th Street in Oakland, involving a real estate deal.
Revised:  Crimes of Nedir and Abaz Bey On March 4, 1994, followers and self-proclaimed "adopted" sons of Bey (they were never legally adopted), Nedir Bey and Abaz Bey were involved in the torture and beating of a Nigerian home-seller in an apartment on the 500 block of 24th Street in Oakland, involving a real estate deal.
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Original:   Yusuf Bey IV
Revised:  Related figures Yusuf Bey IV
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Original:  He was briefly detained by Allegheny County Police during a May 19, 1999 drug trial for contempt where 2 defendants were released after a chain-of-evidence   URL
Revised:  He was briefly detained by Allegheny County Police during a May 19, 1999 drug trial for contempt where 2 defendants were released after a chain-of-evidence URL URL
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Original:  He was briefly detained by Allegheny County Police during a May 19,      1999 drug trial for contempt where 2 defendants were released after a chain-of-evidence URL &       On April 6, 2015, Woodyard was discovered dead at his suburban Baldwin, Pennsylvania residence, in what has been ruled as a URL 
Revised:  He was briefly detained by Allegheny County Police during a May 19, In 1999 drug trial for contempt where 2 defendants were released after a chain-of-evidence URL & On April 6, 2015, Woodyard was discovered dead at his suburban Baldwin, Pennsylvania residence, in what has been ruled as a URL 
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Original:  He was briefly detained by Allegheny County Police during a May 19,      1999 drug trial for contempt where 2 defendants were released after a chain-of-evidence URL &       On April 6, 2015, Woodyard was discovered dead at his suburban Baldwin, Pennsylvania residence, in what has been ruled as a URL 
Revised:  He was briefly detained by Allegheny County Police during a May 19, 1999 drug trial for contempt where 2 defendants were released after a chain-of-evidence URL & Throughout his career, Woodyard was known as a no-nonsense leader and tough, but fair, disciplinarian. His career with the Bureau of Police was not without incident, as would be with any officer who assertively, and without fear, takes on the criminal element in the interest of public safety and justice. On April 6, 2015, Woodyard was discovered dead at his suburban Baldwin, Pennsylvania residence, in what has been ruled as a URL 
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Original:  He was briefly detained by Allegheny County Police during a May 19,      1999 drug trial for contempt where 2 defendants were released after a chain-of-evidence URL &       On April 6, 2015, Woodyard was discovered dead at his suburban Baldwin, Pennsylvania residence, in what has been ruled as a URL 
Revised:  He was briefly detained by Allegheny County Police during a May 19, 1999 drug trial for contempt where 2 defendants were released after a chain-of-evidence URL & Woodyard was a private man, and in spite of a no-nonsense demeanor, he was warm and open with those he did allow into his inner circle. He often took promising young officers under his wing to provide them with guidance and advice. Those closest to him will attest to his sense of humor, often played out through harmless pranks, and he would tell about for years later. On April 6, 2015, Woodyard was discovered dead at his suburban Baldwin, Pennsylvania residence, in what has been ruled as a URL 
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Original: Earl Daniel Woodyard Jr. (June 17, 1946 – April 6, 2015) was a longtime Pittsburgh Police leader, who was appointed acting Pittsburgh Police Chief from September 29, 2006 – October 31, 2006, after the death of mayor Bob URL Never did he discuss the horror and violence he experienced as a young Marine in Viet Nam, coupled with those experienced on the job.
Revised: Earl Daniel Woodyard Jr. (June 17, 1946 – April 6, 2015) was a longtime Pittsburgh Police leader, who was appointed acting Pittsburgh Police Chief from September 29, 2006 – October 31, 2006, after the death of mayor Bob O'Connor. Never did he discuss the horror and violence he experienced as a young Marine in Viet Nam, coupled with those experienced on the job.
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Original:  He leaves a wife and a son who bears his URL
Revised:  He leaves a wife and a son who bears his name.
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Original:  Between 1624 and 1625 the colonial authorities managed to captured several key Vicuña leaders, executing forty of them.
Revised:  Between 1624 and 1625 the colonial authorities managed to capture several key Vicuña leaders, executing forty of them.
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Original:  Between 1624 and 1625  the colonial authorities managed to capture several key Vicuña leaders, executing forty of them.
Revised:  Between 1624 and 1625 , the colonial authorities managed to capture several key Vicuña leaders, executing forty of them.
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Original:  In April 1625  a royal decree was issued, pardoning all Vicuñas fighters except those having committed blood crimes.
Revised:  In April 1625 , a royal decree was issued, pardoning all Vicuñas fighters except those having committed blood crimes.
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Original:  On March 15, 1626  the ingenios of Potosí were destroyed by massive flooding.
Revised:  On March 15, 1626 , the ingenios of Potosí were destroyed by massive flooding.
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Original: Rt Rev. Wiremu Netana Panapa, CBE (1898 - 1970) was a New Zealand Anglican Suffragan Bishop in the second half of the 20th century.
Revised: Rt Rev. Wiremu Netana Panapa, CBE (1898 – 1970) was a New Zealand Anglican Suffragan Bishop in the second half of the 20th century.
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Original:  Category:1898 births Category:New Zealand Anglican priests Category:  Commanders of the Order of the British Empire Category:Bishops of Aotearoa Category:1970 deaths Category:New Zealand military chaplains Category:World War II chaplains Category:20th-century Anglican bishops Category:New Zealand military personnel of World War
Revised:  Category:1898 births Category:New Zealand Anglican priests Category: New Zealand Commanders of the Order of the British Empire Category:Bishops of Aotearoa Category:1970 deaths Category:New Zealand military chaplains Category:World War II chaplains Category:20th-century Anglican bishops Category:New Zealand military personnel of World War
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Original:  In 1870, amid the continuing civil wars,  Penlop Jigme Namgyal of Trongsa ascended to the office of Druk Desi.
Revised:  In 1870, amid the continuing civil wars, Penlop Jigme Namgyal ascended to the office of Druk Desi.
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