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Original:  Gunmen from the Lou Nuer tribe attacked a village of the Dinka Hol tribe on Sunday, driving away security forces who were guarding the remote settlement , Duk Padiet.
Revised:  Gunmen from the Lou Nuer tribe attacked a village of the Dinka Hol tribe on Sunday, driving away security forces who were guarding the remote settlement of Duk Padiet.
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Original:  Sir Bobby Robson .  Sir Bobby Robson was born on February 18 1933 and had died on July 31 2009, aged 76 after a fifth, long battle with lung cancer.
Revised:  Sir Bobby Robson was born on February 18 1933 and had died on July 31 2009, aged 76 after a fifth, long battle with lung cancer.
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Original: In a VOA interview , Afghanistan Ambassador to the United Nations Zahir Tanin endorsed General McChrystal's sense of urgency, and his view that while a comprehensive approach is needed, security comes first.
Revised: In an interview with Voice of America , Afghanistan Ambassador to the United Nations Zahir Tanin endorsed General McChrystal's sense of urgency, and his view that while a comprehensive approach is needed, security comes first.
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Original:  Whitman would not say when General McChrystal will make his expected detailed request for more troops, or when a decision might be made.
Revised:  Whitman would not say when McChrystal will make his expected detailed request for more troops, or when a decision might be made.
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Original:  On the president's aircraft Monday, White House Press Secretary Robert Gibbs told reporters  while the general may want more troops, he does not expect a formal request for a little while.
Revised:  On the president's aircraft Monday, White House Press Secretary Robert Gibbs told reporters that while the general may want more troops, he does not expect a formal request for a little while.
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Original:  Ambassador Tanin said General McChrystal is in the best position to assess the security needs and if there is a need for more forces, the Afghan government must support such a request.
Revised:  Ambassador Tanin said McChrystal is in the best position to assess the security needs and if there is a need for more forces, the Afghan government must support such a request.
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Original:  In the report, General McChrystal concludes that "while the situation is serious, success is still achievable."
Revised:  In the report, McChrystal concluded that "while the situation is serious, success is still achievable."
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Original:  But he says the effort needs "a fundamentally new approach" that is "properly resourced and supported" throughout the coalition and across military and civilian agencies
Revised:  But he said the effort needs "a fundamentally new approach" that is "properly resourced and supported" throughout the coalition and across military and civilian agencies
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Original: General McChrystal in June 2009 A report from the new US and NATO commander in Afghanistan says there is an urgent need for more foreign troops and civilians, more Afghan forces and a new strategic approach to reverse Taliban gains.
Revised:  A report from the new US and NATO commander in Afghanistan says there is an urgent need for more foreign troops and civilians, more Afghan forces and a new strategic approach to reverse Taliban gains.
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Original: Gibbs said any decision on troop levels will wait until the conclusion of a broader assessment of the way forward in Afghanistan, of which he indicated General McChrystal's document is only one part.
Revised: Gibbs said any decision on troop levels will wait until the conclusion of a broader assessment of the way forward in Afghanistan, of which he indicated McChrystal's document is only one part.
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Original:  The secretary indicated he, the president and other senior officials have sent questions to General McChrystal about his assessment, and are awaiting his answers.
Revised:  The secretary indicated he, the president and other senior officials have sent questions to McChrystal about his assessment, and are awaiting his answers.
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Original:  He says the coalition must operate "dramatically differently -- even uncomfortably differently."
Revised:  He said the coalition must operate "dramatically differently -- even uncomfortably differently."
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Original:  He also repeats some of his earlier calls for more civilian help and a new approach by his troops that makes the security of the Afghan people their top priority.
Revised:  He also repeated some of his earlier calls for more civilian help and a new approach by his troops that makes the security of the Afghan people their top priority.
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Original:  He says the coalition is in a "war of ideas," in which he says it must demonstrate its commitment and its ability to deliver security without causing undue civilian casualties.
Revised:  He said the coalition is in a "war of ideas," in which he says it must demonstrate its commitment and its ability to deliver security without causing undue civilian casualties.
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Original:  However analysis of the new images shows ridges up to 4 kilometers high , similar in height to the Rocky Mountains or the Alps.
Revised:  However analysis of the new images shows ridges up to 4 kilometers tall , similar in height to the Rocky Mountains or the Alps.
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Original:  NASA's Cassini space probe has sent back remarkable images from Saturn, showing that the planet's famous rings are far more bumpy than expected.
Revised:  NASA's Cassini orbiter has sent back remarkable images from Saturn, showing that the planet's famous rings are far more bumpy than expected.
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Original:  NASA's Cassini space probe has sent back remarkable images from Saturn, showing that the planet's famous rings are far more bumpy than expected.
Revised:  NASA's Cassini space probe has sent back remarkable images from Saturn, revealing that the planet's famous rings are far more bumpy than expected.
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Original:   On Friday, Ahmadinejad gave a speech in which he called the Holocaust "mythical" and "a lie".
Revised:  File:MahmoudAhmadiNejad.jpg|President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad of Iran On Friday, Ahmadinejad gave a speech in which he called the Holocaust "mythical" and "a lie".
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Original:  File:MahmoudAhmadiNejad.jpg|President Mahmoud Ahmadinejad of Iran On Friday, Ahmadinejad gave a speech in which he called the Holocaust "mythical" and "a lie".
Revised:  On Friday, Ahmadinejad gave a speech in which he called the Holocaust "mythical" and "a lie".
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Original:  Holocaust denial is a crime in Germany, where the Nazis carried out the Holocaust, a mass persecution and killing of Jews, during World War 2
Revised:  Holocaust denial is a crime in Germany, where the Nazis carried out the Holocaust, a mass persecution and killing of Jews, during World War II
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Original:  German Foreign Minister Frank-Walter Seteinmeier condemned the remarks, calling Ahmadinejad "a disgrace".
Revised:  German Foreign Minister Frank-Walter Steinmeier condemned the remarks, calling Ahmadinejad "a disgrace".
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Original:  One such premiere location is Los Angeles, in the US state of California, which will have the film starting at 1800 BST . Another simultaneity is the Odeon Leicester Square cinema in London, England, which will start at 0100 BST on October 27.
Revised:  One such premiere location is Los Angeles, in the US state of California, which will have the film starting at 1800 GMT . Another simultaneity is the Odeon Leicester Square cinema in London, England, which will start at 0100 BST on October 27.
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Original:  One such premiere location is Los Angeles, in the US state of California, which will have the film starting at 1800 BST . Another simultaneity is the Odeon Leicester Square cinema in London, England, which will start at 0100 BST on October 27.
Revised:  One such premiere location is Los Angeles, in the US state of California, which will have the film starting at 1800 BST . Another simultaneity is the Odeon Leicester Square cinema in London, England, which will start at 0100 GMT on October 27.
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Original:  One such premiere location is Los Angeles, in the US state of California, which will have the film starting at 1800 GMT . Another simultaneity is the Odeon Leicester Square cinema in London, England, which will start at 0100 GMT on October 27.
Revised:  One such premiere location is Los Angeles, in the US state of California, which will have the film starting at 1800 PT . Another simultaneity is the Odeon Leicester Square cinema in London, England, which will start at 0100 GMT on October 27.
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Original: In a speech to world leaders at the UN climate change summit in New York on Tuesday, the president said that China plans to receive 15\% of its energy from renewable sources by 2020.
Revised: In a speech to world leaders at the United Nations' climate change summit in New York on Tuesday, the president said that China plans to receive 15\% of its energy from renewable sources by 2020.
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Original:  Prime Minister Hatoyama and President Hu also called for financial support from developed countries to help developing nations achieve climate change goals and sustainable development   
Revised:  Prime Minister Hatoyama and President Hu also called for financial support from developed countries to help developing nations achieve climate change goals and sustainable development . 
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Original:  Prime Minister Hatoyama and President Hu also called for financial support from developed countries to help developing nations achieve climate change goals and sustainable development   
Revised:  Prime Minister Hatoyama and President Hu also called for financial support from developed countries to help developing nations achieve climate change goals and sustainable development "Our generation's response to this challenge will be judged by history, for if we fail to meet it - boldly, swiftly, and together - we risk consigning future generations to an irreversible catastrophe. The time we have to reverse this tide is running out," he said
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Original:  It was also the first  attempted on a member of the royal family
Revised:  It was also the first attack attempted on a member of the royal family
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Original:  Winds up to 100 km per hour are also predicted for Sydney  
Revised:  Winds up to 100 km per hour are also predicted for Sydney . 
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Original: The dust storm has led to eerie red skies across Sydney.
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Original:  Winds up to 100 km per hour are also predicted for Sydney . Galler
Revised:  Winds up to 100 km per hour are also predicted for Sydney Galler
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Original:  Winds up to 100 km per hour are also predicted for Sydney . Galler
Revised:  Winds up to 100 km per hour are also predicted for Sydney . 
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Original: Pope Benedict XVI  has announced that he will be coming to the United Kingdom in January 2010.
Revised: Pope Benedict XVI . Pope Benedict XVI has announced that he will be coming to the United Kingdom in January 2010.
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Original: The games are estimated to have been watched by up to ten million chess fans on the internet .
Revised: The games are estimated to have been watched by up to ten million chess fans on the internet ,
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Original:  Kasparov was the challenger, and Karpov was defending his title  .
Revised:  Karpov was defending his title .
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Original:  The match was suspended after five months and 48 games and Karpov retained his title , as neither player was able to win by enough of a margin to determine a  winner
Revised:  The match was suspended after five months and 48 games , as neither player was able to win by enough of a margin to determine a winner
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Original:  The match was suspended after five months and 48 games and Karpov retained his title , as neither player was able to win by enough of a margin to determine a  winner
Revised:  The match was suspended after five months and 48 games and Karpov retained his title , as neither player was able to win by enough of a margin to determine a clear winner
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Original:  Kasparov had won both games, which were held at a "rapid" time control, or 25 minutes per player for the whole game, with three seconds added after each move.
Revised:  Kasparov had won both games, which were held at a "rapid" time control, 25 minutes per player for the whole game, with three seconds added after each move.
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Original:  Kasparov had won both games, which were held at a "rapid" time control, or 25 minutes per player for the whole game, with three seconds added after each move.
Revised:  Kasparov had won both games, which were held at a "rapid" time control, or 25 minutes per player per game, with three seconds added after each move.
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Original:  Kasparov, however, said that "I wouldn't make any predictions yet [on the outcome of the match].
Revised:  Kasparov, however, said , "I wouldn't make any predictions yet [on the outcome of the match].
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Original:  The games are estimated to have been watched by up to ten million chess fans on the internet , and the website hosting the games temporarily had to shut down due to high traffic.
Revised:  The games are estimated to have been watched by up to ten million chess fans on the internet . The website hosting the games temporarily had to shut down due to high traffic.
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Original:  The match was suspended after five months and 48 games, as neither player was able to win by enough of a margin to determine a clear winner
Revised:  The match was suspended after five months and 48 games, as neither player was able to gain enough of a margin to determine a clear winner
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Original:  The match was suspended after five months and 48 games, as neither player was able to win by enough of a margin to determine a clear winner
Revised:  The match was suspended after five months and 48 games, as neither player was able to win by enough of a lead to determine a clear winner
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Original: Thunderstorms struck Mumbai on September 22, 2009 after a hot day in the evening along with 24.08mm rainfall.
Revised: Thunderstorms struck Mumbai on September 22, 2009 in the evening along with 24.08mm rainfall.
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Original:  Several such incidents took place in Kurla, Kalbadevi, Chembur, and Bandra-Kurla Complex, but according to the fire brigade no one was injured  .
Revised:  Lightnings also took place in Kurla, Kalbadevi, Chembur, and Bandra-Kurla Complex, but according to the fire brigade no one was injured .
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Original:  [[File:Mumbai Skyline1.jpg|Mumbai (2009) ]] Three people  including a woman  were killed and one twelve-year-old boy was injured by the lightning in Navi Mumbai.
Revised:  [[File:Mumbai Skyline1.jpg|Mumbai (2009) ]] Three people , including a woman were killed and one twelve-year-old boy was injured by the lightning in Navi Mumbai.
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Original:  [[File:Mumbai Skyline1.jpg|Mumbai (2009) ]] Three people  including a woman  were killed and one twelve-year-old boy was injured by the lightning in Navi Mumbai.
Revised:  [[File:Mumbai Skyline1.jpg|Mumbai (2009) ]] Three people including a woman , were killed and one twelve-year-old boy was injured by the lightning in Navi Mumbai.
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Original:  [[File:Mumbai Skyline1.jpg|Mumbai (2009) ]] Three people  including a woman  were killed and one twelve-year-old boy was injured by the lightning in Navi Mumbai.
Revised:  [[File:Mumbai Skyline1.jpg|Mumbai (2009) ]] Three people including a woman were killed and one twelve-year-old boy was hurt by the lightning in Navi Mumbai.
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Original:  Lightnings also took place in Kurla, Kalbadevi, Chembur, and Bandra-Kurla Complex, but according to the fire brigade no one was injured in the above places except for Navi Mumbai.
Revised:  Lightning was also seen in Kurla, Kalbadevi, Chembur, and Bandra-Kurla Complex, but according to the fire brigade no one was injured in the above places except for Navi Mumbai.
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Original:  [[File:Mumbai Skyline1.jpg|Mumbai (2009) ]] Three people, including a woman, were killed and one twelve-year-old boy was hurt by the lightning in Navi Mumbai.
Revised:  [[File:Mumbai Skyline1.jpg|Mumbai (2009) ]] Three people, including a woman, were killed and a twelve-year-old boy was hurt by the lightning in Navi Mumbai.
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Original:  The woman was injured while selling lampshades on the street, while the third victim had just parked his bike to escape the rain.
Revised:  The woman was injured while selling lampshades on the street, and a third victim was also hurt while parking his motorcycle, trying to get out of the rain.
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Original:  The three were taken to a hospital immediately but were declared dead on arrival.
Revised:  The three were hospitalised immediately, but were declared dead on arrival.
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Original:  The three were taken to a hospital immediately but were declared dead on arrival.
Revised:  The three were taken to a hospital immediately but were declared dead upon arrival.
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Original:  The boy is  undergoing treatment.
Revised:  The boy is currently undergoing treatment.
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Original:  Flights were delayed.
Revised:  Flights were also delayed;
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Original:  12 flights, which included six Air India and two Kingfisher, were diverted to Ahmedabad as the pilots couldn't find the runway for landing
Revised:  12 flights, including six Air India and two Kingfisher, were diverted to Ahmedabad as the pilots couldn't find the runway for landing
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Original: Lightning was also seen in Kurla, Kalbadevi, Chembur, and Bandra-Kurla Complex, but according to the fire brigade no one was injured in the above places except for Navi Mumbai .
Revised: Lightning was also seen in Kurla, Kalbadevi, Chembur, and Bandra-Kurla Complex, but according to the fire brigade no one was injured from those strikes .
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Original:  The boy is currently undergoing treatment  .
Revised:  The boy is currently undergoing treatment and he is not in trouble .
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Original:  David Figueroa, a spokesperson for the Citizens Commission On Human Rights (CCHR), a human rights group founded by the Church in 1969 , erroneously claimed that Osama bin Laden's second in command, Ayman al-Zawahiri is a psychiatrist, as did former CCHR-International president Dennis H. Clarke.
Revised:  David Figueroa, a spokesperson for CCHR , erroneously claimed that Osama bin Laden's second in command, Ayman al-Zawahiri is a psychiatrist, as did former CCHR-International president Dennis H. Clarke.
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Original:  The comment by CCHR was submitted under the heading: "Arguments in opposition , "  and stated "The Citizens Commission on Human Rights believes that there is no known medical treatment for autism except off-label drugs."
Revised:  The comment by CCHR was submitted under the heading: "Arguments in opposition " and stated "The Citizens Commission on Human Rights believes that there is no known medical treatment for autism except off-label drugs."
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Original:  The comment by CCHR was submitted under the heading: "Arguments in opposition , "  and stated "The Citizens Commission on Human Rights believes that there is no known medical treatment for autism except off-label drugs."
Revised:  The comment by CCHR was submitted under the heading: "Arguments in opposition , " , and stated "The Citizens Commission on Human Rights believes that there is no known medical treatment for autism except off-label drugs."
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Original:  He also commented on why John Travolta and Kelly Preston would have kept their son's affliction hidden from the public: "It's really a big deal, so how the Travolta's dealt with this--a chronic illness in the family, I'm not sure how they would have been able to explain it."
Revised:  He also commented on why John Travolta and Kelly Preston would have kept their son's affliction hidden from the public: "It's really a big deal, so how the Travoltas dealt with this--a chronic illness in the family, I'm not sure how they would have been able to explain it."
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Original:  Pub-goers accross Dublin - as well as cities around the world including Kuala Lumpur, Lagos, Cotonou, Hong Kong and New York - raised their glasses in tribute to Arthur at exactly 17:59 p.m. to mark the year the drink was begun.
Revised:  Pub-goers across Dublin - as well as cities around the world including Kuala Lumpur, Lagos, Cotonou, Hong Kong and New York - raised their glasses in tribute to Arthur at exactly 17:59 p.m. to mark the year the drink was begun.
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Original:  Pub-goers across Dublin — as well as cities around the world including Kuala Lumpur, Lagos, Cotonou, Hong Kong , and New York — raised their glasses in tribute to Arthur at exactly 17:59 p.m. to mark the year the drink was begun.
Revised:  Pub-goers across Dublin - as well as cities around the world including Kuala Lumpur, Lagos, Cotonou, Hong Kong , and New York — raised their glasses in tribute to Arthur at exactly 17:59 p.m. to mark the year the drink was begun.
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Original:  Pub-goers across Dublin — as well as cities around the world including Kuala Lumpur, Lagos, Cotonou, Hong Kong , and New York — raised their glasses in tribute to Arthur at exactly 17:59 p.m. to mark the year the drink was begun.
Revised:  Pub-goers across Dublin — as well as cities around the world including Kuala Lumpur, Lagos, Cotonou, Hong Kong and New York — raised their glasses in tribute to Arthur at exactly 17:59 p.m. to mark the year the drink was begun.
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Original:  Pub-goers across Dublin — as well as cities around the world including Kuala Lumpur, Lagos, Cotonou, Hong Kong , and New York — raised their glasses in tribute to Arthur at exactly 17:59 p.m. to mark the year the drink was begun.
Revised:  Pub-goers across Dublin — as well as cities around the world including Kuala Lumpur, Lagos, Cotonou, Hong Kong , and New York - raised their glasses in tribute to Arthur at exactly 17:59 p.m. to mark the year the drink was begun.
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Original:  Today, Guinness is enjoyed in 150 countries and 10 million pints are drunk every 24 hours — although Irish myth has it the brew tastes best in Dublin
Revised:  Today, Guinness is enjoyed in 150 countries and 10 million pints are drunk every 24 hours - although Irish myth has it the brew tastes best in Dublin
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Original: St James' Gate Brewery had grown to become Ireland's biggest by 1833 and in 1886 had grown to the biggest in the world, producing 1.2 million barrels of black stout each year.
Revised: St James' Gate Brewery become the biggest by 1833 and in 1886 had grown to the biggest in the world, producing 1.2 million barrels of black stout each year.
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Original: The appointment comes one day after the Massachusetts state House and Senate passed legislation allowing the governor to name an interim replacement until a special election is held.
Revised: The appointment comes one day after the Massachusetts House and Senate passed legislation allowing the governor to name an interim replacement until a special election is held.
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Original:  The rule change was one of Kennedy's last wishes  
Revised:  The rule change was one of Kennedy's last wishes . 
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