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Original:  Taking part in the exercises were the Ministry of Defence, the Association of Chief Police Officers, the Environment Agency and several other areas of the British government . "I brought to an end the national avian influenza exercise to ensure that we can bring all our resources to bear on this situation.
Revised:  Taking part in the exercises were the Ministry of Defence, the Association of Chief Police Officers, the Environment Agency and several other areas of the British government . "I brought to an end the national avian influenza exercise to ensure that we can bring all our resources to fart on this situation.
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Original:   We are already in a high state of readiness and I have every confidence that officials north and south of the border will work together to manage this incident successfully," said the United Kingdom's Chief Veterinary Officer, Debby Reynolds.
Revised:  (pardon the pun) We are already in a high state of readiness and I have every confidence that officials north and south of the border will work together to manage this incident successfully," said the United Kingdom's Chief Veterinary Officer, Debby Reynolds.
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Original:   We are already in a high state of readiness and I have every confidence that officials north and south of the border will work together to manage this incident successfully," said the United Kingdom's Chief Veterinary Officer, Debby Reynolds.
Revised:  We are already in a high state of readiness and I have every doubt that officials north and south of the border will work together to manage this incident successfully," said the United Kingdom's Chief Veterinary Officer, Debby Reynolds.
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Original:   We are already in a high state of readiness and I have every confidence that officials north and south of the border will work together to manage this incident successfully," said the United Kingdom's Chief Veterinary Officer, Debby Reynolds.
Revised:  We are already in a high state of readiness and I have every confidence that officials north and south of the border will work together to hide this incident successfully," said the United Kingdom's Chief Veterinary Officer, Debby Reynolds.
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Original: REUTERS is reporting that tests done on a dead Mute Swan found in the village of Cellardyke in Fife, Scotland has tested positve for the deadly strain of H5N1 Bird Flu virus.
Revised: REUTERS is reporting that tests done on a dead Mute Swan found in the village of Cellardyke in Fife, Scotland has tested positive for the deadly strain of H5N1 Bird Flu virus.
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Original:  There is one big question mark: Will the virus disappear from wild birds after a period of six months, or will it still be present after a period of six years?" hadded McCracken.
Revised:  There is one big question mark: Will the virus disappear from wild birds after a period of six months, or will it still be present after a period of six years?" added McCracken.
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Original:  According to the World Health Organization H5N1 has killed 109 people worldwide sice 2003
Revised:  According to the World Health Organization H5N1 has killed 109 people worldwide since 2003
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Original:  They are among at least 14 other dead  swans found in Glasgow  being tested for the H5N1 virus.
Revised:  They are among at least 14 other dead swans found in Glasgow , being tested for the H5N1 virus.
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Original:  There is one big question mark: Will the virus disappear from wild birds after a period of six months, or will it still be present after a period of six years?" added McCracken   .
Revised:  There is one big question mark: Will the virus disappear from wild birds after a period of six months, or will it still be present after a period of six years?" added McCracken . .
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Original:  " There is no doubt we are getting closer to the day when moving birds indoors will be necessary," said former President of the British Veterinary Association, Bob McCracken.
Revised:  There is no doubt we are getting closer to the day when moving birds indoors will be necessary," said former President of the British Veterinary Association, Bob McCracken.
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Original: REUTERS is reporting that tests done on a dead Mute Swan found in the village of Cellardyke in Fife, Scotland has tested positive for the deadly strain of H5N1 Bird Flu virus.
Revised: It has been confirmed that tests done on a dead Mute Swan found in the village of Cellardyke in Fife, Scotland has tested positive for the deadly strain of H5N1 Bird Flu virus.
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Original:  Sky News is now reporting that two other swans found in Richmond Park in Glasgow are being tested for the H5N1 virus.
Revised:  Two other swans found in Richmond Park in Glasgow are being tested for the H5N1 virus.
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Original:  They are among at least 14 other dead birds and 12  swans found in Glasgow,  being tested for the H5N1 virus.
Revised:  They are among at least 14 other dead birds and 12 more swans found in Glasgow, being tested for the H5N1 virus.
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Original:  They are among at least 14 other dead birds and 12  swans found in Glasgow,  being tested for the H5N1 virus.
Revised:  They are among at least 14 other dead birds and 12 swans found in Glasgow, that are being tested for the H5N1 virus.
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Original: McCracken also said that the virus could turn up in more birds saying, "I would start from the assumption that a small pool if wild birds in the Fife area are infected and potentially passing it on to other birds" and that seagulls could pose a threat of passing on the virus because they have been known to peck at the bodies of other dead birds that were infected.
Revised: McCracken also said that the virus could turn up in more birds saying, "I would start from the assumption that a small pool of wild birds in the Fife area are infected and potentially passing it on to other birds" and that seagulls could pose a threat of passing on the virus because they have been known to peck at the bodies of other dead birds that were infected.
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Original:  Two and a half times the number of seats that had been reserved for women . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:January 29, 2005 Category:Israel Category:Elections Category:publishe
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Original:  Two and a half times the number of seats that had been reserved for women . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:January 29, 2005 Category:Israel Category:Elections Category:publishe
Revised:  Two and a half times the number of seats that had been reserved for women . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:January 29, 2005 Category:Israel Category:Elections Category:publishe
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Original:  Two and a half times the number of seats that had been reserved for women . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:January 29, 2005 Category:Israel Category:Elections Category:publishe
Revised:  Two and a half times the number of seats that had been reserved for women . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Opposition groups called for a new government while President Conte was recieving medical treatment in Switzerland, but he returned immediately to reduce any concerns.
Revised:  Opposition groups called for a new government while President Conte was receiving medical treatment in Switzerland, but he returned immediately to reduce any concerns.
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Original: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the Article: Duke University Men's Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
Revised: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the Duke University Men's Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
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Original: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the Article: Duke University Men's Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
Revised: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the Article: Article:Duke University Men's Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
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Original: Allegations of rape surfaced last week when an African-American exotic dancer came forward, saying she was forcefully engaged into sexual intercourse by a group of caucasian Duke lacrosse players at a house party.
Revised: Allegations of rape surfaced last week when an African-American exotic dancer came forward, saying she was forcefully engaged into sexual intercourse by a group of caucasian lacrosse players at a house party.
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Original: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the  Duke University Men's  Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
Revised: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the w: Duke University Men's Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
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Original: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the  Duke University Men's  Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
Revised: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the Duke University Men's w: Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
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Original:  Head coach Mike Pressler has also resigned after 16 seasons with the Blue Devils, winning last year's  Atlantic Coast Conference championships and leading his 2005 squad to the national title game.
Revised:  Head coach Mike Pressler has also resigned after 16 seasons with the Blue Devils, winning last year's w: Atlantic Coast Conference championships and leading his 2005 squad to the national title game.
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Original: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the w: Duke University Men's w: Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
Revised: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the Duke University Men's w: Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
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Original: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the w: Duke University Men's w: Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
Revised: Amid an escalating rape scandal involving members of the w: Duke University Men's Lacrosse team, today the university announced it has cancelled the rest of the team's season.
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Original:  Head coach Mike Pressler has also resigned after 16 seasons with the Blue Devils, winning last year's w: Atlantic Coast Conference championships and leading his 2005 squad to the national title game.
Revised:  Head coach Mike Pressler has also resigned after 16 seasons with the Blue Devils, winning last year's Atlantic Coast Conference championships and leading his 2005 squad to the national title game.
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Original:  Head coach Mike Pressler has also resigned after 16 seasons with the Blue Devils, winning last year's Atlantic Coast Conference championships  and leading his 2005 squad to the national title game.
Revised:  Head coach Mike Pressler has also resigned after 16 seasons with the Blue Devils, winning last year's Atlantic Coast Conference championships , and leading his 2005 squad to the national title game.
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Original: Massachusetts lawmakers approved legislation on Tuesday, April 4, that would make it the  first state to require all residents to have health insurance and impose penalties for non-compliance.
Revised: Massachusetts lawmakers approved legislation on Tuesday, April 4, that would make it the U.S. first state to require all residents to have health insurance and impose penalties for non-compliance.
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Original: Massachusetts lawmakers approved legislation on Tuesday, April 4, that would make it the U.S. first state to require all residents to have health insurance and impose penalties for non-compliance.
Revised: Massachusetts lawmakers approved legislation on Tuesday, April 4, that would make it the first state in the United States to require all residents to have health insurance and impose penalties for non-compliance.
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Original:  Massachusetts Gov. Mitt Romney, a Republican who is expected to run for U.S. President in 2008, is expected to sign the bill.
Revised:  Massachusetts Governor Mitt Romney, a Republican who is expected to run for U.S. President in 2008, is expected to sign the bill.
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Original:  The bill passed the Massachusetts House by a vote of 155-2, and unanimously by the Senate .
Revised:  The bill passed the lower house, the Massachusetts House or Representatives by a vote of 155-2, and unanimously by the Senate .
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Original:  The bill passed the Massachusetts House by a vote of 155-2, and unanimously by the Senate .
Revised:  The bill passed the Massachusetts House by a vote of 155-2, and unanimously by the state senate .
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Original:  The Democratic Party controls both houses of the legislature.
Revised:  The Democratic Party holds supermajorities in both houses of the legislature.
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Original: The bill passed the lower house, the Massachusetts House or Representatives by a vote of 155-2, and unanimously by the state senate.
Revised: The bill passed the lower house, the Massachusetts House of Representatives by a vote of 155-2, and unanimously by the state senate.
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Original: Police in New Delhi forcibly moved Medha Patkar to  hospital, on the ninth day of the hunger strike she and two other activists had undertaken to protest the Indian government's decision to raise the height of the Sardar Sarovar dam across the Narmada river and the lack of progress in rehabilitating people displaced by the dam project.
Revised: Police in New Delhi forcibly moved Medha Patkar to a hospital, on the ninth day of the hunger strike she and two other activists had undertaken to protest the Indian government's decision to raise the height of the Sardar Sarovar dam across the Narmada river and the lack of progress in rehabilitating people displaced by the dam project.
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Original:  Police sources say that Patkar has not been arrested as of now, but an First Information Report has been lodged against her for a suicideattempt .
Revised:  Police sources say that Patkar has not been arrested as of now, but an First Information Report has been lodged against her for attempting to commit suicide .
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Original:  On April 3rd, the Prime Minister Manmohan Singh appealed to the hunger strikers to end thier fast.
Revised:  On April 3rd, the Prime Minister Manmohan Singh appealed to the hunger strikers to end their fast.
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Original: Police in New Delhi forcibly moved Medha Patkar to a hospital , on  the ninth day of the hunger strike she and two other activists had undertaken to protest the Indian government's decision to raise the height of the Sardar Sarovar dam across the Narmada river and the lack of progress in rehabilitating people displaced by the dam project . Patkar was taken to the All India Institute of Medical Sciences where she was placed under intensive care.
Revised: Police in New Delhi forcibly moved Medha Patkar to a hospital , on On the ninth day of the hunger strike she and two other activists had undertaken to protest the Indian government's decision to raise the height of the Sardar Sarovar dam across the Narmada river and the lack of progress in rehabilitating people displaced by the dam project . Patkar was taken to the All India Institute of Medical Sciences where she was placed under intensive care.
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Original: Police in New Delhi forcibly moved Medha Patkar to a hospital , on  the ninth day of the hunger strike she and two other activists had undertaken to protest the Indian government's decision to raise the height of the Sardar Sarovar dam across the Narmada river and the lack of progress in rehabilitating people displaced by the dam project . Patkar was taken to the All India Institute of Medical Sciences where she was placed under intensive care.
Revised: Police in New Delhi forcibly moved Medha Patkar to a hospital , on the ninth day of the hunger strike she and two other activists had undertaken to protest the Indian government's decision to raise the height of the Sardar Sarovar dam across the Narmada river and the lack of progress in rehabilitating people displaced by the dam project , Patkar was taken to the All India Institute of Medical Sciences where she was placed under intensive care.
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Original: According to papers filed in US Federal Court by Patrick J. Fitzgerald on Wednesday, I. Lewis Libby (known as Scooter), Vice President Dick Cheney's former Chief of Staff, has told investigators that he was authorized by President Bush to divulge to reporters information regarding the National Intelligence Estimate on Saddam Hussain 's efforts to develop nuclear weapons.
Revised: According to papers filed in US Federal Court by Patrick J. Fitzgerald on Wednesday, I. Lewis Libby (known as Scooter), Vice President Dick Cheney's former Chief of Staff, has told investigators that he was authorized by President Bush to divulge to reporters information regarding the National Intelligence Estimate on Saddam Hussein 's efforts to develop nuclear weapons.
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Original:  Libby's testimony to the federal grand jury including the statement that he had received "approval from the President through the Vice President" to release portions of the NIE.
Revised:  Libby's testimony to the federal grand jury included the statement that he had received "approval from the President through the Vice President" to release portions of the NIE.
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Original:  According to court documents  he also stated that this type of authorization was "unique in his recollection".
Revised:  According to court documents , he also stated that this type of authorization was "unique in his recollection".
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Original:  It was Libby's understanding that by Bush allowing the information to be released , it in effect declassified the information.
Revised:  It was Libby's understanding that Bush allowing the information to be released , it in effect declassified the information.
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Original:  It was Libby's understanding that by Bush allowing the information to be released , it in effect declassified the information.
Revised:  It was Libby's understanding that by Bush allowing the information to be released in effect declassified the information.
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Original:  Although the statements from Libby released yesterday are inflammatory, it is unknown what effect they will have on either Vice President Cheney or President Bush
Revised:  Although Libby's statements released yesterday are inflammatory, it is unknown what effect they will have on either Vice President Cheney or President Bush
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Original: According to papers filed in US Federal Court by Patrick J. Fitzgerald on Wednesday, I. Lewis "Scooter" Libby, Vice President Dick Cheney's former Chief of Staff, has told investigators that he was authorized by President Bush to divulge to reporters information regarding the National Intelligence Estimate  on Saddam Hussein's efforts to develop nuclear weapons.
Revised: According to papers filed in US Federal Court by Patrick J. Fitzgerald on Wednesday, I. Lewis "Scooter" Libby, Vice President Dick Cheney's former Chief of Staff, has told investigators that he was authorized by President Bush to divulge to reporters information regarding the National Intelligence Estimate (NIE) on Saddam Hussein's efforts to develop nuclear weapons.
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Original:  Libby's testimony to the federal grand jury included the statement that he had received "approval from the President through the Vice President" to release portions of the NIE , however he was not specifically given authorization to reveal Plame's status .
Revised:  Libby's testimony to the federal grand jury included the statement that he had received "approval from the President through the Vice President" to release portions of the NIE .
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Original: According to papers filed in US Federal Court by Patrick J. Fitzgerald on Wednesday, I. Lewis "Scooter" Libby, Vice President Dick Cheney's former Chief of Staff, has told investigators that he was authorized by President Bush to divulge to reporters information regarding the National Intelligence Estimate (NIE) on Saddam Hussein's efforts to develop nuclear weapons.
Revised: According to papers filed in U.S. Federal Court by Patrick J. Fitzgerald on Wednesday, I. Lewis "Scooter" Libby, Vice President Dick Cheney's former Chief of Staff, has told investigators that he was authorized by President Bush to divulge to reporters information regarding the National Intelligence Estimate (NIE) on Saddam Hussein's efforts to develop nuclear weapons.
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Original: According to papers filed in US Federal Court by Patrick J. Fitzgerald on Wednesday, I. Lewis "Scooter" Libby, Vice President Dick Cheney's former Chief of Staff, has told investigators that he was authorized by President Bush to divulge to reporters information regarding the National Intelligence Estimate (NIE) on Saddam Hussein's efforts to develop nuclear weapons.
Revised: According to papers filed in US Federal Court by Patrick J. Fitzgerald on Wednesday, I. Lewis "Scooter" Libby, Vice President Dick Cheney's former Chief of Staff, has told investigators that he was authorized by President Bush to divulge to reporters information from the National Intelligence Estimate (NIE) on Saddam Hussein's efforts to develop nuclear weapons.
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Original:  It was Libby's understanding that Bush  allowing the information to be released in effect declassified the information.
Revised:  It was Libby's understanding that Bush 's allowing the information to be released in effect declassified the information.
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Original:  Although legal experts disagree on this authority, Libby stated that it was a White House lawyer who told him about this fact .
Revised:  Although legal experts disagree on this authority, Libby stated that it was a White House lawyer who told so counseled him .
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Original:  This information has come into light due to the efforts of Fitzgerald  to collect information regarding the outing of former CIA operative Valerie Plame.
Revised:  This information has come into light due to the efforts of Fitzgerald 's efforts to collect information regarding the outing of former CIA operative Valerie Plame.
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Original:  This information has come into light due to the efforts of Fitzgerald  to collect information regarding the outing of former CIA operative Valerie Plame.
Revised:  This information has come into light due to the efforts of Fitzgerald to collect information regarding the "outing" of former CIA operative Valerie Plame.
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Original:  Fitzgerald has broad authority to conduct investigations  as the special prosecutor in the case.
Revised:  Fitzgerald has broad authority to conduct investigations , as the special prosecutor in the case.
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Original:  Although Libby's statements released yesterday are inflammatory, it is unknown what effect they will have on either Vice President Cheney or President Bush
Revised:  Although Libby's statements released yesterday may seem inflammatory, it is unknown what effect they will have on either Vice President Cheney or President Bush
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