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Original:  In summary of the 2008 YODEX, not only industrial companies can discover talents and showcase achievements of industrial design in the exhibition, but students can make their stages to showcase excellences from their creations in several competitions related to YODEX.
Revised:  In summary , not only did the 2008 YODEX, not only industrial companies can discover talents and showcase achievements of industrial design in the exhibition, but students can make their stages to showcase excellences from their creations in several competitions related to YODEX.
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Original:  In summary of the 2008 YODEX, not only industrial companies can discover talents and showcase achievements of industrial design in the exhibition, but students can make their stages to showcase excellences from their creations in several competitions related to YODEX.
Revised:  In summary of the 2008 YODEX, have companies which can discover talents and showcase achievements of industrial design in the exhibition, but students can make their stages to showcase excellences from their creations in several competitions related to YODEX.
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Original:  Other observers which joined the watch were the 3.5-meter telescope at the Apache Point Observatory in New Mexico, the Chandra X-ray Observatory, the Gemini North telescope in Hawaii, the Hubble Space Telescope, the Keck I telescope in Hawaii, the 200-inch and 60-inch telescopes at the Palomar Observatory in California, and the Very Large Array in New Mexico   
Revised:  Other observers which joined the watch were the 3.5-meter telescope at the Apache Point Observatory in New Mexico, the Chandra X-ray Observatory, the Gemini North telescope in Hawaii, the Hubble Space Telescope, the Keck I telescope in Hawaii, the 200-inch and 60-inch telescopes at the Palomar Observatory in California, and the Very Large Array in New Mexico . 
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Original: The primary task of SWIFT is rapid detection of gamma ray bursts, which last a short time so the observatory requires constant monitoring.
Revised: The primary task of SWIFT is rapid detection of gamma ray bursts, and because of their short duration the observatory requires constant monitoring.
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Original:  SWIFT images galaxy NGC 2770 with SN 2007uy before SN 2008D, with X-ray view (left) and visible light (right).
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Original:  Alicia Soderberg, a Hubble and Carnegie-Princeton Fellow at Princeton University in Princeton, N.J. , explained the significance: "For years we have dreamed of seeing a star just as it was exploding, but actually finding one is a once in a lifetime event...
Revised:  Alicia Soderberg, a Hubble and Carnegie-Princeton Fellow at Princeton University in Princeton, New Jersey , explained the significance: "For years we have dreamed of seeing a star just as it was exploding, but actually finding one is a once in a lifetime event...
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Original:  In upper right of the galaxy image is SN 2008D in X-ray image (left) and visible light (right).
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Original:  The increase in oil prices over the past year The U.S. average retail price for regular gasoline also recently increased to a new all-time high, with the price going up 6.9 cents to 379.1 cents per gallon.
Revised:  The U.S. average retail price for regular gasoline also recently increased to a new all-time high, with the price going up 6.9 cents to 379.1 cents per gallon.
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Original:   CNN.com reports a 16.7\% increase in the cost of hamburger buns, a staple item for many U.S. familie
Revised:  For example, CNN.com reports a 16.7\% increase in the cost of hamburger buns, a staple item for many U.S. familie
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Original:   CNN.com reports a 16.7\% increase in the cost of hamburger buns, a staple item for many U.S. familie
Revised:  CNN.com reports a 16.7\% increase in the cost of hamburger buns, a staple item for many U.S. families
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Original:  Today in the Taipei International Convention Center,  Gold and Silver Awards from The 2008 16th-annual Taiwan Excellence Awards, set up to promote excellence products in Taiwan , were finally announced by Taiwan External Trade Development Council (TAITRA), the award organizer .
Revised:  Thursday at the Taipei International Convention Center, Gold and Silver Awards from The 2008 16th-annual Taiwan Excellence Awards, set up to promote excellence products in Taiwan , were finally announced by Taiwan External Trade Development Council (TAITRA), the award organizer .
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Original:  Today in the Taipei International Convention Center,  Gold and Silver Awards from The 2008 16th-annual Taiwan Excellence Awards, set up to promote excellence products in Taiwan , were finally announced by Taiwan External Trade Development Council (TAITRA), the award organizer .
Revised:  Today in the Taipei International Convention Center, the winners of the Gold and Silver Awards from The 2008 16th-annual Taiwan Excellence Awards, set up to promote excellence products in Taiwan , were finally announced by Taiwan External Trade Development Council (TAITRA), the award organizer .
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Original:  Today in the Taipei International Convention Center,  Gold and Silver Awards from The 2008 16th-annual Taiwan Excellence Awards, set up to promote excellence products in Taiwan , were finally announced by Taiwan External Trade Development Council (TAITRA), the award organizer .
Revised:  Today in the Taipei International Convention Center, Gold and Silver Awards from The 2008 16th-annual Taiwan Excellence Awards, set up to promote excellence products in Taiwan External Trade Development Council (TAITRA), the award organizer .
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Original:  This year, 601 products battled for the final 8 gold awards and 21 silver awards.
Revised:  This year, 601 products competed for the eight gold medals and twenty-one silver awards.
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Original:  Especially in the ICT product category, the competition of 388 ICT products was focused by media from IT industry because of the approach schedule of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Taipei Expo.
Revised:  In the ICT category, the competition of 388 ICT products was focused by media from IT industry because of the approach schedule of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Taipei Expo.
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Original:  Especially in the ICT product category, the competition of 388 ICT products was focused by media from IT industry because of the approach schedule of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Taipei Expo.
Revised:  Especially in the ICT product category, the competition was especially fierce as 388 ICT products was focused by media from IT industry because of the approach schedule of COMPUTEX Taipei and WiMAX Taipei Expo.
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Original:  Currently , 308 products from 102 companies were confirmed to be entitled as "Taiwan Excellent Products".
Revised:  Currently , 308 products from 102 companies were entitled as "Taiwan Excellent Products".
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Original:  Several world-class experts judged nominated products to select the final twenty-nines from four critical factors from R&D, design, quality, to marketing.
Revised:  Several world-class experts judged the nominated products, in order to select the final twenty-nines from four critical factors from R&D, design, quality, to marketing.
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Original:  Several world-class experts judged nominated products to select the final twenty-nines from four critical factors from R&D, design, quality, to marketing.
Revised:  Several world-class experts judged nominated products to select the final twenty-nine based on four critical factors from R&D, design, quality, to marketing.
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Original:  Several world-class experts judged nominated products to select the final twenty-nines from four critical factors from R&D, design, quality, to marketing.
Revised:  Several world-class experts judged nominated products to select the final twenty-nines from four critical factors including R&D, design, quality, to marketing.
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Original:  Several world-class experts judged nominated products to select the final twenty-nines from four critical factors from R&D, design, quality, to marketing.
Revised:  Several world-class experts judged nominated products to select the final twenty-nines from four critical factors from R&D, design, quality, and marketing.
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Original:  In addition, the TAITRA also held Internet voting, Mobile voting, and innovative seminars to do the basic promotion for the public before the award ceremony .
Revised:  In addition, the TAITRA also had categories where people could vote over the Internet or using their mobile phones .
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Original:  Finally, ASUSTeK picked up two Gold Awards and six Silver Awards to become the biggest winner in the "Taiwan Excellence Awards".
Revised:  ASUSTeK picked up two Gold Awards and six Silver Awards to become the biggest winner in the "Taiwan Excellence Awards".
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Original:  Finally, ASUSTeK picked up two Gold Awards and six Silver Awards to become the biggest winner in the "Taiwan Excellence Awards".
Revised:  Finally, ASUSTeK picked up two Gold Awards and six Silver Awards and was the biggest winner in the "Taiwan Excellence Awards".
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Original:  Eee PC 4G, with features like mobility, reliability, and connectively, not only won the Gold Award, but  also voted as the "Most Popular Product"  by Internet and mobile users in this award .
Revised:  Eee PC 4G, with features like mobility, reliability, and connectively, not only won a Gold Award, but also voted as the "Most Popular Product" by Internet and mobile users in this award .
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Original:  Eee PC 4G, with features like mobility, reliability, and connectively, not only won the Gold Award, but  also voted as the "Most Popular Product"  by Internet and mobile users in this award .
Revised:  Eee PC 4G, with features like mobility, reliability, and connectively, not only won the Gold Award, but was also voted as the "Most Popular Product" by Internet and mobile users in this award .
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Original:  Eee PC 4G, with features like mobility, reliability, and connectively, not only won the Gold Award, but  also voted as the "Most Popular Product"  by Internet and mobile users in this award .
Revised:  Eee PC 4G, with features like mobility, reliability, and connectively, not only won the Gold Award, but also voted as the "Most Popular Product" by Internet and mobile users .
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Original:  In the sporting good industry, Ninety Six Carbon full suspension by Merida Corp. won the Gold Award;
Revised:  In the sporting goods industry, Ninety Six Carbon full suspension by Merida Corp. won the Gold Award;
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Original:  Maestro Trance X Twist Comfort by Giant Manufacturing, S7200HRT suspension elliptical machine by Johnson Health Technology, and X-PERTI W138 integrate full carbon road wheel set by Joy Industrial Corp. respectively won the Silver Award.
Revised:  Maestro Trance X 
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Original:  TATP is also a organic peroxide which is sometimes used in making household cleaning chemicals.
Revised:  TATP is also an organic peroxide which is sometimes used in making household cleaning chemicals.
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Original: The unnamed men in their 40's and 50's were arrested after security officials at the Oskarshamn Nuclear Power Plant in Sweden discovered traces of the explosive substance on a plastic bag  .
Revised: The unnamed men in their 40's and 50's were arrested after security officials at the plant discovered traces of the explosive substance on a plastic bag .
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Original:  Both men were arrested on Wednesday after traces of Acetone Peroxide, or TATP  were found on a plastic bag.
Revised:  Both men were arrested on Wednesday after traces of Acetone Peroxide, or TATP , were found on a plastic bag.
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Original:  There was no legal ground to hold them any longer," said Swedish police in a statement to the press who also said that an investigation is ongoing.
Revised:  There was no legal ground to hold them any longer," said Swedish police in a statement to the press . He also noted that an investigation is ongoing.
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Original:  The unnamed men  in their 40's and 50's  were arrested after security officials at the plant discovered traces of the explosive substance on a plastic bag inside a bag one of the men were carrying.
Revised:  The unnamed men , in their 40's and 50's were arrested after security officials at the plant discovered traces of the explosive substance on a plastic bag inside a bag one of the men were carrying.
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Original:  The unnamed men  in their 40's and 50's  were arrested after security officials at the plant discovered traces of the explosive substance on a plastic bag inside a bag one of the men were carrying.
Revised:  The unnamed men in their 40's and 50's , were arrested after security officials at the plant discovered traces of the explosive substance on a plastic bag inside a bag one of the men were carrying.
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Original:  The unnamed men  in their 40's and 50's  were arrested after security officials at the plant discovered traces of the explosive substance on a plastic bag inside a bag one of the men were carrying.
Revised:  The unnamed men in their 40's and 50's were arrested after security officials at the plant discovered traces of the explosive substance on a plastic bag inside a bag one of the men was carrying.
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Original:   Authorities were called to the plant on Wednesday along with the bomb squad, who sealed off parts of the plant when they detected the explosive material.
Revised:  Security detected the material on Wednesday during what was described by CNN as a "routine" security check. Authorities were called to the plant on Wednesday along with the bomb squad, who sealed off parts of the plant when they detected the explosive material.
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Original:   Authorities were called to the plant on Wednesday along with the bomb squad, who sealed off parts of the plant when they detected the explosive material.
Revised:  Authorities were called to the plant along with the bomb squad, who sealed off parts of the plant when they detected the explosive material.
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Original:  He also noted that an investigation is ongoing.
Revised:  The police also noted that an investigation is ongoing.
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Original:  According to deputy police spokesman Charles Owino, You may find that they the individuals arrested%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could not have been involved directly in the killing, but if you have evidence that they were involved in war cries, then they will have another offence of inciting.
Revised:  According to deputy police spokesman Charles Owino, the individuals arrested%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could not have been involved directly in the killing, but if you have evidence that they were involved in war cries, then they will have another offence of inciting.
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Original:  According to deputy police spokesman Charles Owino, You may find that they the individuals arrested%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could not have been involved directly in the killing, but if you have evidence that they were involved in war cries, then they will have another offence of inciting.
Revised:  According to deputy police spokesman Charles Owino, You may find that they %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% could not have been involved directly in the killing, but if you have evidence that they were involved in war cries, then they will have another offence of inciting.
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Original: Image:Kenya-Nyanza.png|Nyanza Province in southwest Kenya.
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Original:  According to deputy police spokesman Charles Owino, those who can be proven to have had direct involvement in the killings would be charged with murder  
Revised:  According to deputy police spokesman Charles Owino, those who can be proven to have had direct involvement in the killings would be charged with murder . 
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Original: Police launched an investigation into the incident and have been guarding the area to prevent revenge attacks.
Revised: Police launched an investigation into the incident and have deployed additional personnel to guard the area to prevent revenge attacks.
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Original:  Image:Kenya-Nyanza.png|Nyanza Province in southwest Kenya.
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Original: New film about Dr.
Revised: The new film about the fictional character Dr.
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Original:  Henry "Indiana" Jones Jr. played by Harrison Ford premiered worldwide on May 22, four days after the openning of 61st Cannes Film Festival  . Among Ford, film features two stars Shia LaBeouf and Cate Blanchett , who was 'butched up' for the role of the Soviet agent, the main villain in the film.
Revised:  Henry "Indiana" Jones Jr. played by Harrison Ford premiered worldwide on May 22, four days after the openning of 61st Cannes Film Festival . Alongside Ford, the film features stars Shia LaBeouf and Cate Blanchett , who was 'butched up' for the role of the Soviet agent, the main villain in the film.
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Original:  Henry "Indiana" Jones Jr. played by Harrison Ford premiered worldwide on May 22, four days after the openning of 61st Cannes Film Festival  . Among Ford, film features two stars Shia LaBeouf and Cate Blanchett , who was 'butched up' for the role of the Soviet agent, the main villain in the film.
Revised:  Henry "Indiana" Jones Jr. played by Harrison Ford premiered worldwide on May 22, four days after the openning of 61st Cannes Film Festival . Among Ford, film features two stars Shia LaBeouf and Cate Blanchett . The latter of the two was 'butched up' for the role of the Soviet agent, the main villain in the film.
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Original:  Film budget is US $185 million and will need to gross at least US$ 400 million  to make a profit for Paramount  .
Revised:  The film budget is US $185 million and will need to gross at least US$ 400 million to make a profit for Paramount .
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Original:  Film budget is US $185 million and will need to gross at least US$ 400 million  to make a profit for Paramount  .
Revised:  Film budget is US $185 million and it will need to gross US$ 400 million to make a profit for Paramount .
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Original:  Film budget is US $185 million and will need to gross at least US$ 400 million  to make a profit for Paramount  .
Revised:  Film budget is US $185 million and will need to gross at least US$ 400 million to make a profit for Paramount Pictures .
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Original:  The new film about the fictional character Dr.
Revised: Theatrical poster The new film about the fictional character Dr.
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Original: The film is about the fictional mystery surronding the crystal skulls, which do exist in reality, but are considered  by some sceptical scientists as 'fakes' . "Some of them are quite good, but some of them look like they were produced with a Black & Decker in someone's garage", Prof.
Revised: The film is about the fictional mystery surronding the crystal skulls, which do exist in reality, but are considered fakes by some sceptical scientists as 'fakes' . "Some of them are quite good, but some of them look like they were produced with a Black & Decker in someone's garage", Prof.
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Original: The film is about the fictional mystery surronding the crystal skulls, which do exist in reality, but are considered  by some sceptical scientists as 'fakes' . "Some of them are quite good, but some of them look like they were produced with a Black & Decker in someone's garage", Prof.
Revised: The film is about the fictional mystery surronding the crystal skulls, which do exist in reality, but are considered by some sceptical scientists . "Some of them are quite good, but some of them look like they were produced with a Black & Decker in someone's garage", Prof.
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Original: The film is about the fictional mystery surronding the crystal skulls, which do exist in reality, but are considered  by some sceptical scientists as 'fakes' . "Some of them are quite good, but some of them look like they were produced with a Black & Decker in someone's garage", Prof.
Revised: The film is about the fictional mystery surronding the crystal skulls, which do exist in reality, but are considered by some sceptical scientists as 'fakes' . "Some of them are quite good, but some of them look like they were produced with a Black & Decker in someone's garage", Professor
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Original:  Ian Freestone of Cardiff University say arguing that the ancient Aztecs or Mayans might not have had modern tools for that task.
Revised:  Ian Freestone of Cardiff University said, arguing that the ancient Aztecs or Mayans might not have had modern tools for that task.
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Original:  Ian Freestone of Cardiff University say arguing that the ancient Aztecs or Mayans might not have had modern tools for that task.
Revised:  Ian Freestone of Cardiff University say arguing that the ancient Aztecs or Mayans might not have had intruments with modern tool capabilities for the task.
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Original:  The film budget is US$185 million and it will need to gross US$400 million or more at theatres to make a profit for Paramount Pictures.
Revised:  The film budget was US$185 million and it will need to gross US$400 million or more at theatres to make a profit for Paramount Pictures.
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Original:  The previous film of the franchise was release in May 1989 , 19 years ago
Revised:  The previous film of the franchise was released in May of 1989 , 19 years ago
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Original:  The previous film of the franchise was release in May 1989 , 19 years ago
Revised:  The previous film of the franchise was release in May 1989 - 19 years ago
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Original:  Henry "Indiana" Jones Jr. played by Harrison Ford premiered worldwide on May 22, four days after the openning of the 61st Cannes Film Festival in France.
Revised:  Henry "Indiana" Jones Jr. played by Harrison Ford premiered worldwide on May 22, four days after the opening of the 61st Cannes Film Festival in France.
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Original:  The film is about the fictional mystery surronding the crystal skulls, which do exist in reality, but are considered fakes by some sceptical scientists.
Revised:  The film is about the fictional mystery surrounding the crystal skulls, which do exist in reality, but are considered fakes by some sceptical scientists.
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Original:  "Some of them are quite good, but some of them look like they were produced with a Black & Decker in someone's garage", Professor Ian Freestone of Cardiff University said, arguing that the ancient Aztecs or Mayans might not have had intruments with modern tool capabilities for the task.
Revised:  "Some of them are quite good, but some of them look like they were produced with a Black & Decker in someone's garage", Professor Ian Freestone of Cardiff University said, arguing that the ancient Aztecs or Mayans might not have had instruments with modern tool capabilities for the task.
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Original:  Devon, which Exeter is part of, shown on a map of England The centre of the city was evacuated by police until about 1900 Local Time (UTC+1).
Revised:  The centre of the city was evacuated by police until about 1900 Local Time (UTC+1).
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Original:  One person (believed by police to be the bomber) was injured however a second device was found and made safe nearby.
Revised:  One person (believed by police to be the bomber) was injured , and a second device was found and made safe nearby.
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Original:  The suspect has been same named as 22-year-old Nicky Reilly from Plymouth.
Revised:  The suspect has been named as 22-year-old Nicky Reilly from Plymouth.
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