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Original:  Users on social networking website Twitter have reacted negatively to the news, with @safi_x said that the programme is "going downhill" and @chuka claiming that Contostavlos "not experienced enough like Danni , I think it was a bad choice. "
Revised:  Various users of social networking website Twitter have reacted negatively to the news, with @safi_x said that the programme is "going downhill" and @chuka claiming that Contostavlos "not experienced enough like Danni , I think it was a bad choice. "
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Original:  Users on social networking website Twitter have reacted negatively to the news, with @safi_x said that the programme is "going downhill" and @chuka claiming that Contostavlos "not experienced enough like Danni , I think it was a bad choice. "
Revised:  Users on social networking website Twitter have reacted negatively to this news.
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Original:  Various users of social networking website Twitter have reacted negatively to this news  .
Revised:  Various users of social networking website Twitter reacted negatively to this news .
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Original: We fired 'shake and abake'  missions at the insurgents using WP to flush them out and high exposive shells (HE) to take them out."
Revised: We fired 'shake and bake' missions at the insurgents using WP to flush them out and high exposive shells (HE) to take them out."
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Original: We fired 'shake and bake' a combination of white phosphorus and explosives%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% missions at the insurgents using WP to flush them out and high exposive shells (HE) to take them out."
Revised: We fired 'shake and bake' %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% missions at the insurgents using WP to flush them out and high exposive shells (HE) to take them out."
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Original: We fired 'shake and bake' a combination of white phosphorus and explosives%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% missions at the insurgents using WP to flush them out and high exposive shells (HE) to take them out."
Revised: We fired 'shake and bake' a combination of white phosphorus and explosives%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% 
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Original:  We should think on this rather than arguing about whether we can squeak such weapons past the Geneva Conventions and international accords.'%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Related new
Revised:  We should think on this rather than arguing about whether we can squeak such weapons past the Geneva Conventions and international accords.'%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: We fired 'shake and bake' a combination of white phosphorus and explosives%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% missions at the insurgents using WP to flush them out and high exposive shells (HE) to take them out. "
Revised: We fired 'shake and bake' %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% missions at the insurgents using WP to flush them out and high exposive shells (HE) to take them out. "
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Original: As reported on November 15 in the UK's Independent, according to three artillery men writing in the March-April edition of Field Artillery, the magazine of the US Field Artillery basaed in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, which is readily available on the internet, white phosphorus was used "as a potent psychological weapon against insurgents in trench lines and spider holes...
Revised: As reported on November 15 in the UK's Independent, according to three artillery men writing in the March-April edition of Field Artillery, the magazine of the US Field Artillery based in Fort Sill, Oklahoma, which is readily available on the internet, white phosphorus was used "as a potent psychological weapon against insurgents in trench lines and spider holes...
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Original:  The fourth time, they tried something else - based of readouts, investigators believe they reset power to their Flight Augmentation Computers.
Revised:  The fourth time, they tried something else — based of readouts, investigators believe they reset power to their Flight Augmentation Computers.
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Original:  Most were Indonesians, but  three South Koreans, one Malaysian, one Brit  and French national Plesel.
Revised:  Most were Indonesians, but for three South Koreans, one Malaysian, one Brit and French national Plesel.
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Original:  Most were Indonesians, but  three South Koreans, one Malaysian, one Brit  and French national Plesel.
Revised:  Most were Indonesians, but three South Koreans, one Malaysian, one Brit , and French national Plesel.
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Original:  The investigation concluded maintenance failings contributed to the disaster, but Muhammad Alwi of the Indonesian Transportation Ministry said "Repeated trouble in maintenance is a normal thing .
Revised:  The investigation concluded maintenance failings contributed to the disaster, but Muhammad Alwi of the Indonesian Transportation Ministry said "Repeated trouble in maintenance is a normal thing ...
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Original:  If the trouble is fixed in accordance with the manual maintenance procedures, then it's alright . " 
Revised:  If the trouble is fixed in accordance with the manual maintenance procedures, then it's alright " 
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Original:  If the trouble is fixed in accordance with the manual maintenance procedures, then it's alright . " 
Revised:  If the trouble is fixed in accordance with the manual maintenance procedures, then it's alright . " .
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Original:  We will not leave any stone unturned to make sure the industry learns from this tragic incident . " 
Revised:  We will not leave any stone unturned to make sure the industry learns from this tragic incident " 
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Original:  We will not leave any stone unturned to make sure the industry learns from this tragic incident . " 
Revised:  We will not leave any stone unturned to make sure the industry learns from this tragic incident . " .
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Original: The report also rules out weather as a contributory factor.
Revised: The report also dismisses weather as a contributory factor.
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Original:  With both  switched off, the entire system of semi-automation disconnected, as did the and systems.
Revised:  With both computers switched off, the entire system of semi-automation disconnected, as did the and systems.
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Original:  Reports indicate the warning may have come from Irish opposed to the peace process, only a day before is to begin the first ever state visit by a British monarch to the Republic of Ireland.
Revised:  Reports indicate the warning may have come from Irish opposed to the peace process, only a day before is to travel to Ireland.
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Original:  The French politician appeared in court charged with three crimes, including , after a chambermaid told detectives she had been sexually assaulted by Strauss-Kahn in a luxury hotel near . "The maid described being forcibly attacked, locked in the room and sexually assaulted," a spokesperson for the said.
Revised:  The politician appeared in court charged with three crimes, including , after a chambermaid told detectives she had been sexually assaulted by Strauss-Kahn in a luxury hotel near . "The maid described being forcibly attacked, locked in the room and sexually assaulted," a spokesperson for the said.
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Original:  At the time, her mother— councillor — persuaded her not to press charges against him, but today she told French television that Strauss-Kahn had an "addiction" to "preying" on women, and had "a difficulty in controlling his impulses."
Revised:  At the time, her mother— councillor — persuaded her not to press charges against him, but yesterday she told French television that Strauss-Kahn had an "addiction" to "preying" on women, and had "a difficulty in controlling his impulses."
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Original:  Afterwards, defence lawyer Benjamin Brafman said : "This battle has just begun."
Revised:  Afterwards, defence lawyer Benjamin Brafman said , "This battle has just begun."
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Original:  Afterwards, defence lawyer Benjamin Brafman said , "This battle has just begun."
Revised:  Afterwards, defence lawyer Benjamin Brafman said : "This battle has just begun."
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Original:  The decision by the judge to remand him in custody yesterday will likely disrupt emergency talks over the , demolish hopes that he will  challenge Nicolas Sarkozy for the , and spell the end of his political career.
Revised:  The decision by the judge to remand him in custody yesterday will likely disrupt emergency talks over the , demolish hopes that he will demolish hopes to challenge Nicolas Sarkozy for the , and spell the end of his political career.
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Original:  Kahn can be convicted and sentenced over the alleged attacks on the chambermaid and on Banon because he does not have . Strauss-Kahn was considered a serious contender and was expected to announce his candidacy against Sarkozy this month, but the allegations are expected to destroy the hopes of his supporters , increase infighting among the French left, and leave his political career in tatters .
Revised:  Strauss-Kahn was considered a serious contender and was expected to announce his candidacy against Sarkozy this month, but the allegations are expected to destroy the hopes of his supporters , increase infighting among the French left, and leave his political career in tatters .
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Original:  Kahn can be convicted and sentenced over the alleged attacks on the chambermaid and on Banon because he does not have . Strauss-Kahn was considered a serious contender and was expected to announce his candidacy against Sarkozy this month, but the allegations are expected to destroy the hopes of his supporters , increase infighting among the French left, and leave his political career in tatters .
Revised:  Kahn can be convicted and sentenced over the alleged attacks on the chambermaid and on Banon because he does not have . Strauss-Kahn is considered a serious contender and was expected to announce his candidacy against Sarkozy this month, but the allegations are expected to destroy the hopes of his supporters , increase infighting among the French left, and leave his political career in tatters .
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Original:  Kahn can be convicted and sentenced over the alleged attacks on the chambermaid and on Banon because he does not have . Strauss-Kahn was considered a serious contender and was expected to announce his candidacy against Sarkozy this month, but the allegations are expected to destroy the hopes of his supporters , increase infighting among the French left, and leave his political career in tatters .
Revised:  Kahn can be convicted and sentenced over the alleged attacks on the chambermaid and on Banon because he does not have . Strauss-Kahn was considered a serious contender and was expected to announce his candidacy against Sarkozy this month, but the allegations are expected to inflame the sexual desires of his opponents , increase infighting among the French left, and leave his political career in tatters .
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Original:  Kahn can be convicted and sentenced over the alleged attacks on the chambermaid and on Banon because he does not have . Strauss-Kahn was considered a serious contender and was expected to announce his candidacy against Sarkozy this month, but the allegations are expected to destroy the hopes of his supporters , increase infighting among the French left, and leave his political career in tatters .
Revised:  Kahn can be convicted and sentenced over the alleged attacks on the chambermaid and on Banon because he does not have . Strauss-Kahn was considered a serious contender and was expected to announce his candidacy against Sarkozy this month, but the allegations are expected to destroy the hopes of his supporters , increase infighting among the French left, and leave his political career as an anti-conservative intact .
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Original:  A senior statesman and point guard in the Tech family has fallen, and we will miss him greatly  
Revised:  A senior statesman and point guard in the Tech family has fallen, and we will miss him greatly ." 
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Original:  He said in a 2003 interview that "My goal was to help bring Louisiana Tech onto the national and international scene  
Revised:  He said in a 2003 interview that "My goal was to help bring Louisiana Tech onto the national and international scene ." 
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Original:  Funeral arrangments have not yet been announce
Revised:  Funeral arrangments have not yet been announced
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Original: 180px|Taylor was President at the University for 25 years F. Jay Taylor, the former President of Louisiana Tech University has died at the age of 87.
Revised: 180px|Taylor was President at the University for 25 years F. Jay Taylor, the former president of Louisiana Tech University has died at the age of 87.
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Original:  During his tenure Taylor changed the face the universityincluding securing funding to improve the infrastructure.
Revised:  During his tenure , Taylor made major changes to the university, securing funds to improve campus infrastructure.
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Original:  He started his career as a historian and was also a Naval aviator who served druing World War II.
Revised:  He started his career as a historian and was also a Naval aviator who served during World War II.
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Original:  Dan Reneau, the current President of the university and vice-president under Taylor released a statement shortly after Taylor's death.
Revised:  Dan Reneau, the current president of the university and vice-president under Taylor released a statement shortly after Taylor's death.
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Original:  Dan Reneau, the current President of the university and vice-president under Taylor released a statement shortly after Taylor's death.
Revised:  Dan Reneau, the current President of the university and vice president under Taylor, released a statement shortly after Taylor's death.
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Original:  He paid tribute saying "Dr. Taylor was a great leader and great president ," Reneau said.
Revised:  He paid tribute to the former president, saying, "Dr. Taylor was a great leader and great president ," Reneau said.
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Original:  While president at the university Taylor worked on improving the construction of the site as well as improving the athletics programe .
Revised:  While president at the university Taylor worked on adding buildings to the site, as well as improving the athletics programe .
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Original:  While president at the university Taylor worked on improving the construction of the site as well as improving the athletics programe .
Revised:  While president at the university Taylor worked on improving the construction of the site as well as improving the school's athletics program .
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Original:  He said in a 2003 interview that " My goal was to help bring Louisiana Tech onto the national and international scene."
Revised:  He said in a 2003 interview that " his goal was to help bring Louisiana Tech onto the national and international scene."
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Original:  Funeral arrangments have not yet been announced
Revised:  Funeral arrangements were not immediately announced
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Original: File:STS-134 Official Crew Photo.jpg|The crew of '' Endeavours final mission, STS-134, which launched on Monday at 8:56 AM EDT. ]] [[File:STS-134 launch.ogv|Video of Endeavour'''s final launch. (Video: NASA)]] There is only one scheduled shuttle mission remaining after STS-134, which will be .
Revised: File:STS-134 Official Crew Photo.jpg|The crew of Endeavours final mission, STS-134, which launched on Monday at 8:56 AM EDT. ]] [[File:STS-134 launch.ogv|Video of Endeavour'''s final launch. (Video: NASA)]] There is only one scheduled shuttle mission remaining after STS-134, which will be .
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Original:  That mission, using , is currently scheduled for a July launch  
Revised:  That mission, using , is currently scheduled for a July launch . 
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Original:  In addition to the civil lawsuit, the Prime Minister is seeking a court order gagging the press from making defamatory comments about him   
Revised:  In addition to the civil lawsuit, the Prime Minister is seeking a court order gagging the press from making defamatory comments about him . 
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Original:  Yesterday the Thai civil court accepted the case submitted by Thaksin's lawyer, Thana Benjathikul, who warned that the media figure could face jail should he not cease his outspoken criticism of the Prime Minister   .
Revised:  Yesterday the Thai civil court accepted the case submitted by Thaksin's lawyer, Thana Benjathikul, who warned that the media figure could face jail should he not cease his outspoken criticism of the Prime Minister . .
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Original: The United States Fish and Wildlife Service anounced "The greater Yellowstone area population of grizzly bears ... is now recovered".
Revised: The United States Fish and Wildlife Service has announced that "The greater Yellowstone area population of grizzly bears ... is now recovered".
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Original:  As a result, they propose removing this population from the list of threatened and endangered species.
Revised:  They propose removing this population from the list of threatened and endangered species.
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Original:  The bears  range and distribution has been increasing annually and is now 48\% larger than when they were listed.
Revised:  The bears ' range and distribution has been increasing annually and is now 48\% larger than when they were listed.
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Original:  This area, which includes Yellowstone National Park, Grand Teton National Park, and sever national forests covers 18 million acres.
Revised:  This area, which includes Yellowstone National Park, Grand Teton National Park, and several national forests covers 18 million acres.
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Original:  Democrat Representative John Murtha  , one of the U.S. Congress' most decorated Vietnam veterans said while calling for the withdrawal of all american troops from Iraq.
Revised:  House Representative John Murtha , one of the U.S. Congress' most decorated Vietnam veterans said while calling for the withdrawal of all american troops from Iraq.
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Original:  Democrat Representative John Murtha  , one of the U.S. Congress' most decorated Vietnam veterans said while calling for the withdrawal of all american troops from Iraq.
Revised:  Democrat Representative John Murtha , one of the U.S. Congress' most decorated Vietnam veterans said while calling for the withdrawal of all American troops from Iraq.
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Original:  House Representative John Murtha (D-PA), one of the U.S. Congress' most decorated Vietnam veterans said during a Thursday news conference,  where he called for the withdrawal of all American troops from Iraq.
Revised:  House Representative John Murtha (D-PA), one of the U.S. Congress' most decorated Vietnam veterans said during a Thursday news conference, and where he called for the withdrawal of all American troops from Iraq.
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Original:  Murtha said he would be introducing legislation forcing U.S. troops out of Iraq  
Revised:  Murtha said he would be introducing legislation forcing U.S. troops out of Iraq . 
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Original: Murtha, who had served as a Marine Corps intelligence officer in Vietnam, angrily denounced Vice President Cheney's recent "stay the course" rheteric with sarcasm: "I like guys who've never been there that criticize us who've been there.
Revised: Murtha, who had served as a Marine Corps intelligence officer in Vietnam, angrily denounced Vice President Cheney's recent "stay the course" rhetoric with sarcasm: "I like guys who've never been there that criticize us who've been there.
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Original:  Last night, a bomb—described as "viable"—was found in the luggage compartment of a bus in . All the passengers were evacuated from the bus and the Irish army later performed a on the device to make it safe.
Revised:  On Monday night, a bomb—described as "viable"—was found in the luggage compartment of a bus in . All the passengers were evacuated from the bus and the Irish army later performed a on the device to make it safe.
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Original:  The visit is to last four days, during which time Elizabth is to visit , a football stadium where British forces fired on football supporters in 1920 during the , killing 14 players and spectators.
Revised:  The visit is to last four days, during which time Elizabeth is to visit , a football stadium where British forces fired on football supporters in 1920 during the , killing 14 players and spectators.
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Original: , the , greeted Elizabeth—wearing a Irish state visit: The Queen in green outfit—and her husband, the , when she arrived at after landing at yesterday morning.
Revised: , the , greeted Elizabeth—wearing a outfit—and her husband, the , when she arrived at after landing at yesterday morning.
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Original: , the , greeted  Elizabeth—wearing a outfit—and her husband, the , when she arrived at after landing at yesterday morning.
Revised: , the , greeted Queen Elizabeth—wearing a outfit—and her husband, the , when she arrived at after landing at yesterday morning.
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Original: , the , greeted Queen Elizabeth—wearing a outfit—and her husband, the , when she arrived at after landing at yesterday morning.
Revised: , the , greeted Elizabeth—wearing a outfit—and her husband, the , when she arrived at after landing at yesterday morning.
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Original: While most of Ireland seems to support the visit by the head of the British monarchy, the military and the have launched a the largest security operation in the history of the country amid fears republican dissidents might launch an attack.
Revised: While most of Ireland seems to support the visit by the head of the British monarchy, the military and the have launched the largest security operation in the history of the country amid fears republican dissidents might launch an attack.
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Original:  Shriver, 55, and Schwarzenegger, 63, have four children together: Katherine , 21, Christina, 19, Patrick , 17, and Christopher, 13.
Revised:  Shriver, 55, and Schwarzenegger, 63, have four children together: , 21, Christina, 19, Patrick , 17, and Christopher, 13.
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Original:  Shriver, 55, and Schwarzenegger, 63, have four children together: Katherine , 21, Christina, 19, Patrick , 17, and Christopher, 13.
Revised:  Shriver, 55, and Schwarzenegger, 63, have four children together: Katherine , 21, Christina, 19, , 17, and Christopher, 13.
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Original:  The Los Angeles Times reports that the staff member, whose name will not be released for her and her child’s privacy, worked for the family for 20 years, retiring in January.
Revised:  The reports that the staff member, whose name will not be released for her and her child’s privacy, worked for the family for 20 years, retiring in January.
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Original:  The four were released and brought safely to Rixo Hotel in Tripoli and appeared to be in good health.
Revised:  The four were released and brought safely to Tripoli's Rixo Hotel and appeared to be in good health.
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Original:  The foreign journalists have been held in different detention centre around Tripoli and were not allowed to make contact with their families and had been listed missing.
Revised:  The foreign journalists were held in different detention centre around Tripoli and were not allowed to make contact with their families and had been listed missing.
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Original:  The foreign journalists have been held in different detention centre around Tripoli and were not allowed to make contact with their families and had been listed missing.
Revised:  The foreign journalists have been held in different detention centres around Tripoli and were not allowed to make contact with their families and had been listed missing.
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