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Original:  He  will retire from the Formula One as the man who wins the most then the other drivers - a true champion of this sport.
Revised:  He will retire from Formula One as the man who wins the most then the other drivers - a true champion of this sport.
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Original:  This closed his gap from Schumacher to the minimum of 2 points and allowed Ferrari to overtake the lead from Renault.
Revised:  This closed his gap from Schumacher to the minimum of 2 points and allowed Ferrari to take the lead from Renault.
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Original: Michael Schumacher Michael Schumacher won the FIA Formula One Italian Grand Prix on the on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
Revised: Michael Schumacher Michael Schumacher won the FIA Formula One Italian Grand Prix on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
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Original:  He announced that he will retire from Formula One as the man who wins the most then the other drivers - a true champion of this sport.
Revised:  He announced that he will retire from Formula One as the man who wins the most than the other drivers - a true champion of this sport.
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Original:  Hetu criticised Layton for not doing enough to build the party in w: Quebec while Summerville, a former banker who had been the NDP's economic spokesperson in the last election, denounced the party as being hostile to the idea of a market economy and joined the Liberals.
Revised:  Hetu criticised Layton for not doing enough to build the party in Quebec while Summerville, a former banker who had been the NDP's economic spokesperson in the last election, denounced the party as being hostile to the idea of a market economy and joined the Liberals.
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Original: April's snap-election followed months of building criticism and protests and was apparently called by the beleagured PM to renew his mandate.
Revised: April's snap-election followed months of building criticism and protests and was apparently called by the beleaguered PM to renew his mandate.
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Original:  The condition remains treatable with other types of medications, but those are less efective , costlier and toxic.
Revised:  The condition remains treatable with other types of medications, but those are less effective , costlier and toxic.
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Original: Photo credit: Dr. George P. Kubica, CDC New research findigs from South Africa on an extremely drug-resistant (XDR) strain of the bacterium that causes tuberculosis (TB) alarm experts.
Revised: Photo credit: Dr. George P. Kubica, CDC New research findings from South Africa on an extremely drug-resistant (XDR) strain of the bacterium that causes tuberculosis (TB) alarm experts.
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Original:  Experts like Dr. Moll believe the new strain is also present in other provinces then Kwazulu-Natal.
Revised:  Experts like Dr. Moll believe the new strain is also present in other provinces than Kwazulu-Natal.
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Original:  In the new  study, 52 out of 53 people affected have subsided .
Revised:  In the new the study, 52 out of 53 people affected have subsided .
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Original:  Of 53 patients who had this form of the lung infection in the study, 52 died, reports ABC News.
Revised:  Of 53 patients who had this form of the lung infection in the study, 52 died, reports ABC News.
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Original: During the 1990s, multidrug-resistant tuberculosis (MDR-TB), defined as resistance to at least isoniazid and rifampin, emerged as a threat to TB control, both in the United States and worldwide .
Revised: During the 1990s, multidrug-resistant tuberculosis (MDR-TB), defined as resistance to at least isoniazid and rifampin, emerged as a threat to TB control, both in the United States and worldwide 
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Original:  The strain of tuberculosis hits Gauteng%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A young woman carrying the deadly strain of tuberculosis is walking the streets of Gauteng, the most densely populated area in South Africa.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A young woman carrying the deadly strain of tuberculosis is walking the streets of Gauteng, the most densely populated area in South Africa.
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Original:  She was pipped to the post initially by Romania's , but took the bronze after  appeal.
Revised:  She was pipped to the post initially by Romania's , but took the bronze after an appeal.
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Original:  Artistic gymnastics events at the London 2012 Summer Olympic games concluded today with two gold medal wins for China and gold medals for Netherlands and the United States . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the German gymnast by 0.166 points.
Revised:  Artistic gymnastics events at the concluded today with two gold medal wins for China and gold medals for Netherlands and the United States . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the German gymnast by 0.166 points.
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Original:  Artistic gymnastics events at the London 2012 Summer Olympic games concluded today with two gold medal wins for China and gold medals for Netherlands and the United States . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the German gymnast by 0.166 points.
Revised:  Artistic gymnastics events at the London 2012 Summer Olympic games concluded today with two gold medal wins for and gold medals for Netherlands and the United States . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the German gymnast by 0.166 points.
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Original:  Artistic gymnastics events at the London 2012 Summer Olympic games concluded today with two gold medal wins for China and gold medals for Netherlands and the United States . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the German gymnast by 0.166 points.
Revised:  Artistic gymnastics events at the London 2012 Summer Olympic games concluded today with two gold medal wins for China and gold medals for and the . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the German gymnast by 0.166 points.
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Original:  Artistic gymnastics events at the London 2012 Summer Olympic games concluded today with two gold medal wins for China and gold medals for Netherlands and the United States . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the German gymnast by 0.166 points.
Revised:  Artistic gymnastics events at the London 2012 Summer Olympic games concluded today with two gold medal wins for China and gold medals for Netherlands and the United States . China's won gold in the men's parallel bars, just narrowly beating out the gymnast by 0.166 points.
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Original:  Zonderland's performance makes him the first Dutch gymnast to win gold at the Olympics since the win for the Dutch women's team at the Amsterdam Games in 1928.
Revised:  Zonderland's performance makes him the first Dutch gymnast to win gold at the since the win for the Dutch women's team at the Amsterdam Games in 1928.
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Original:  Zonderland's performance makes him the first Dutch gymnast to win gold at the Olympics since the win for the Dutch women's team at the Amsterdam Games in 1928.
Revised:  Zonderland's performance makes him the first Dutch gymnast to win gold at the Olympics since the win for the Dutch women's team at the Games in 1928.
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Original:  As in the beam event, she narrowly beat out Catalina Ponor from Romania with a score of 15.600 to 15.200.
Revised:  As in the beam event, she narrowly beat out Catalina Ponor from with a score of 15.600 to 15.200.
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Original:  Aliya Mustafina from Russia took home bronze for her 14.900 point routine
Revised:  Aliya Mustafina from took home bronze for her 14.900 point routine
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Original:  She initially got less points than Romania 's , but took the bronze after an appeal.
Revised:  She initially got less points than 's , but took the bronze after an appeal.
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Original:  As in the beam event, she narrowly beat out Catalina Ponor from  with a score of 15.600 to 15.200.
Revised:  As in the beam event, she narrowly beat out Catalina Ponor from Romania with a score of 15.600 to 15.200.
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Original: In the women's floor event, the eighteen-year-old American gymnast Alexandra Raisman secured a second gold after her success in the women's team event last week.
Revised: In the women's floor event, the eighteen-year-old United States gymnast Alexandra Raisman secured a second gold after her success in the women's team event last week.
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Original:  Danell Levya from the United States started with a strong 15.833 point routine.
Revised:  from the United States started with a strong 15.833 point routine.
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Original:  His consort was Queen Halaevalu Mataʻaho ʻAhomeʻe, born in 1926.
Revised:  His wife was Queen Halaevalu Mataʻaho ʻAhomeʻe, born in 1926.
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Original: "The sun has set in the Kingdom of Tonga," said an official government statement from the royal palace.
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Original:  The Kingdom of Tonga was      stricken into mourning earlier this year, when in July, Prince Tu'ipelehake and his wife Princess Kaimana, along with their driver Vinisia Hefa, were killed when their vehicle was stuck by a speeding car on a San Francisco, California, USA highway.
Revised:  The Kingdom of Tonga was The Kingdom of Tonga was stricken into mourning earlier this year, when in July, Prince Tu'ipelehake and his wife Princess Kaimana, along with their driver Vinisia Hefa, were killed when their vehicle was stuck by a speeding car on a San Francisco, California, USA highway.
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Original:  Crown Prince Tupouta, the King's eldest son, is the expected successor .
Revised:  Crown Prince Tupouta, the King's eldest son, has been crowned .
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Original: His death ends 41 years of his rein . Crown Prince Taufa'ahau Tupou V, the King's eldest son, has been sworn in on Monday, Sep. 11 as  king but his formal coronation is likely to be next year .
Revised: His death ends 41 years of his reign . Crown Prince Taufa'ahau Tupou V, the King's eldest son, has been sworn in on Monday, Sep. 11 as king but his formal coronation is likely to be next year .
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Original: His death ends 41 years of his rein . Crown Prince Taufa'ahau Tupou V, the King's eldest son, has been sworn in on Monday, Sep. 11 as  king but his formal coronation is likely to be next year .
Revised: His death ends 41 years of his rein . Crown Prince Taufa'ahau Tupou V, the King's eldest son, was sworn in on Monday, Sep. 11 as king but his formal coronation is likely to be next year .
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Original: His death ends 41 years of his rein . Crown Prince Taufa'ahau Tupou V, the King's eldest son, has been sworn in on Monday, Sep. 11 as  king but his formal coronation is likely to be next year .
Revised: His death ends 41 years of his rein . Crown Prince Taufa'ahau Tupou V, the King's eldest son, has been sworn in on Monday, September 11 as king but his formal coronation is likely to be next year .
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Original: His death ends 41 years of his rein . Crown Prince Taufa'ahau Tupou V, the King's eldest son, has been sworn in on Monday, Sep. 11 as  king but his formal coronation is likely to be next year .
Revised: His death ends 41 years of his rein . Crown Prince Taufa'ahau Tupou V, the King's eldest son, has been sworn in on Monday, Sep. 11 as the next king but his formal coronation is likely to be next year .
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Original:  He and his sister, Princess Pilolevu have represented the monarch during his lengthy absences due to his increasingly poor health
Revised:  He and his sister, Princess Pilolevu have represented the monarch during his lengthy absences due to failing health
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Original: thumbnail|250px|Tonga According to an official news release on the Tongan Royal Palace website, His Majesty King Taufa ’ ahau Tupou IV passed away peacefully at 11.34pm local time (2334 UTC), on Sunday, 10th September at Mercy Hospital in Auckland, New Zealand aged 88. King Taufa ’ ahau Tupou IV was the ruler of Tonga following the death of his mother, Queen Sālote Tupou III, in 1965.
Revised: thumbnail|250px|Tonga According to an official news release on the Tongan Royal Palace website, His Majesty King Taufa ' ahau Tupou IV passed away peacefully at 11.34pm local time (2334 UTC), on Sunday, 10th September at Mercy Hospital in Auckland, New Zealand aged 88. King Taufa ’ ahau Tupou IV was the ruler of Tonga following the death of his mother, Queen Sālote Tupou III, in 1965.
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Original: thumbnail|250px|Tonga According to an official news release on the Tongan Royal Palace website, His Majesty King Taufa ’ ahau Tupou IV passed away peacefully at 11.34pm local time (2334 UTC), on Sunday, 10th September at Mercy Hospital in Auckland, New Zealand aged 88. King Taufa ’ ahau Tupou IV was the ruler of Tonga following the death of his mother, Queen Sālote Tupou III, in 1965.
Revised: thumbnail|250px|Tonga According to an official news release on the Tongan Royal Palace website, His Majesty King Taufa ’ ahau Tupou IV passed away peacefully at 11.34pm local time (2334 UTC), on Sunday, 10th September at Mercy Hospital in Auckland, New Zealand aged 88. King Taufa ' ahau Tupou IV was the ruler of Tonga following the death of his mother, Queen Sālote Tupou III, in 1965.
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Original:  King Taufa ’ ahau Tupou IV was once known as being the World's heaviest monarch (his weight exceeded 200 kg then), as well as later being the victim of a number of money-making schemes.
Revised:  King Taufa ' ahau Tupou IV was once known as being the World's heaviest monarch (his weight exceeded 200 kg then), as well as later being the victim of a number of money-making schemes.
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Original:  " All efforts are being made to preserve the privacy and civil liberties of all involved, but the situation is not so dire as has been reported elsewhere in the blogosphere.
Revised:  All efforts are being made to preserve the privacy and civil liberties of all involved, but the situation is not so dire as has been reported elsewhere in the blogosphere.
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Original:  " All efforts are being made to preserve the privacy and civil liberties of all involved, but the situation is not so dire as has been reported elsewhere in the blogosphere.
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Original:  Civil rights advocates and cypherpunks claim that child pornography has become a carte blanche  for police suppression of disruptive technologies protecting privacy.
Revised:  Civil rights advocates and cypherpunks claim that child pornography has become a carte blanche rationale for police suppression of disruptive technologies protecting privacy.
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Original: Online privacy rights in the EU are more strict than in the US. PRIME, the EU's Privacy and Identity Management for Europe project, says: "The concept of a user-controlled identity management system implements the EU Directives 95/46/EC and 2002/58/EC, whose purpose is to safeguard individuals’ fundamental rights and freedom, including the right to privacy.
Revised: Laws circumscribing online privacy rights in the EU are more strict than in the US. PRIME, the EU's Privacy and Identity Management for Europe project, says: "The concept of a user-controlled identity management system implements the EU Directives 95/46/EC and 2002/58/EC, whose purpose is to safeguard individuals’ fundamental rights and freedom, including the right to privacy.
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Original:  It supports and facilitates anonymity and pseudonymity to minimise the processing of personal information, whenever possible.
Revised:  It supports and facilitates anonymity and pseudonymity to minimize the processing of personal information, whenever possible.
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Original:  The platform applies the EU Directive ’ s data protection principles.
Revised:  The platform applies the EU Directive ' s data protection principles.
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Original: A mid-air collision has taken the life of Swedish aerobatics champion Gabon Varga.
Revised: A mid-air collision has taken the life of Swedish aerobatics champion Gabor Varga.
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Original: Paes and Damm win men ’ s doubles title September 10, 2006 The situation in Malegaon is calm, two days after multiple blasts killed 38 people and left 200 others injured.
Revised: Paes and Damm win men ' s doubles title September 10, 2006 The situation in Malegaon is calm, two days after multiple blasts killed 38 people and left 200 others injured.
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Original:  A special ten-member team of Mahrasthra ’ s Anti-Terror Squad (ATS) is in Malegaon to probe blasts.
Revised:  A special ten-member team of Mahrasthra ' s Anti-Terror Squad (ATS) is in Malegaon to probe blasts.
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Original:  and Mrs. , Secretary of State are among the dignitaries present for the ceremony.
Revised:  and , Secretary of State are among the dignitaries present for the ceremony.
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Original:  An interdenominational burial ceremony is ongoing as thousands have gathered to bid him farewell.
Revised:  The burial ceremony is ongoing as thousands have gathered to bid him farewell.
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Original:  With a vote of 77\%, the Yes camp, lead by Prime Minister Jose Luis Rodriguez Zapatero, was the clear winnerby a large margin . Speaking about the result he said, "Today has been a great day for all Europeans".
Revised:  With a vote of 77\%, the Yes camp, lead by Prime Minister Jose Luis Rodriguez Zapatero, was the winner . Speaking about the result he said, "Today has been a great day for all Europeans".
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Original:  The No campaigners, who only achieved 17\% of the vote, were eager to point out the low turnout of 42\%.
Revised:  The No campaigners, who achieved 17\% of the vote, were eager to point out the low turnout of 42\%.
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Original: The fact is that 90\% of the parlament said yes to the Constitutionbut only one in three of the Spaniards did that .
Revised: With the referendum, one in three Spaniards gave a yes vote. This is in stark contrast to the 90\% of the parlament said yes to the Constitutionbut only one in three of the Spaniards did that .
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Original: The fact is that 90\% of the parlament said yes to the Constitutionbut only one in three of the Spaniards did that .
Revised: The fact is that 90\% of the Spanish Parliament that voted yes for the Constitution .
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Original:  It is expected that of the twenty-five countries, Britain will be the most likely to vote No
Revised:  It is expected that of the twenty-five countries, Britain is the most likely to vote No
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Original: The official campaign was mainly dedicated to ask for the yes vote, without explaining the conents of the text.
Revised: The official campaign was mainly dedicated to ask for the yes vote, without explaining the contents of the text.
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Original:  The No campaigners, who achieved 17\% of the vote , were eager to point out the low turnout of 42\%  .
Revised:  The No achieved 17\% of the vote , were eager to point out the low turnout of 42\% .
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Original:  The No campaigners, who achieved 17\% of the vote , were eager to point out the low turnout of 42\%  .
Revised:  The No campaigners, who achieved 17\% of the vote . The turnout was a low 42\% .
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Original:  The No  achieved 17\% of the vote .
Revised:  The No campaigners, who achieved 17\% of the vote .
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Original:  The turnout was a low 42\% , so it may be said as well that "Spain says nothing to EU constitution" .
Revised:  The turnout was a low 42\% .
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Original:  It is expected that of the twenty-five countries, Britain is the most likely to vote No
Revised:  It is expected that of the twenty-five countries, the United Kingdom is the most likely to vote No
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Original: Pope Benedict XVI went to visit is homeland in Marktl-am-Inn, Germany today.
Revised: Pope Benedict XVI went to visit his homeland in Marktl-am-Inn, Germany today.
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Original: The Orginazation of the Oil Exporting Countries(OPEC) announced today at the 142nd meeting of it's Conference in Vienna, Austria that it will continue it's policy of trying to support market stability by maintaing a balance between supply and demand despite the fact that demand is slowing and inventories are growing.
Revised: The Orginazation of the Oil Exporting Countries(OPEC) announced today at the 142nd meeting of its Conference in Vienna, Austria that it will continue it's policy of trying to support market stability by maintaing a balance between supply and demand despite the fact that demand is slowing and inventories are growing.
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Original:  On the New York Mercantile Exchange Oil Contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61  a decline of 64 cents for the day , this follows a drop from their peaks at the start of the Israel-Hezbollah confilct in July of $77.03 a barrel
Revised:  On the New York Mercantile Exchange oil contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61 a decline of 64 cents for the day , this follows a drop from their peaks at the start of the Israel-Hezbollah confilct in July of $77.03 a barrel
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Original:  On the New York Mercantile Exchange Oil Contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61  a decline of 64 cents for the day , this follows a drop from their peaks at the start of the Israel-Hezbollah confilct in July of $77.03 a barrel
Revised:  On the New York Mercantile Exchange Oil Contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61 , a decline of 64 cents for the day , this follows a drop from their peaks at the start of the Israel-Hezbollah confilct in July of $77.03 a barrel
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Original:  On the New York Mercantile Exchange Oil Contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61  a decline of 64 cents for the day , this follows a drop from their peaks at the start of the Israel-Hezbollah confilct in July of $77.03 a barrel
Revised:  On the New York Mercantile Exchange Oil Contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61 a decline of 64 cents for the day . This follows a drop from their peaks at the start of the Israel-Hezbollah confilct in July of $77.03 a barrel
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Original:  On the New York Mercantile Exchange Oil Contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61  a decline of 64 cents for the day , this follows a drop from their peaks at the start of the Israel-Hezbollah confilct in July of $77.03 a barrel
Revised:  On the New York Mercantile Exchange Oil Contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61 a decline of 64 cents for the day , this follows a drop from their peaks at the start of the Israel-Hezbollah conflict in July of $77.03 a barrel
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Original: On the New York Mercantile Exchange  oil contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61, a decline of 64 cents for the day.
Revised: On the New York Mercantile Exchange , oil contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $65.61, a decline of 64 cents for the day.
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Original: On the New York Mercantile Exchange, oil contracts for October fell as low $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at $ 65.61, a decline of 64 cents for the day.
Revised: On the New York Mercantile Exchange, oil contracts for October fell as low US $64.85 before settling at the end of trading at US $ 65.61, a decline of 64 cents for the day.
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