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Original:  The Metropolitan Police have said that the arrests are based on information that has been disclosed to them by News Corporation .
Revised:  The Metropolitan Police have said News Corporation disclosed the information that led to the arrests .
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Original: The Metropolitan Police have said News Corporation disclosed the information that led to the arrests.
Revised: The Metropolitan Police have said News Corporation disclosed information leading to the arrests.
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Original:  The police have not identified the journalists, but the BBC claim they are Fergus Shanahan, ex-deputy editor of The Sun;
Revised:  The police have not identified the journalists, but the BBC suggest they are Fergus Shanahan, ex-deputy editor of The Sun;
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Original: The   second day of the penalty phase trial of 9/11 co-conspirator Zacarias Moussaoui riveted the defendant and jurors when a federal prosecutor read a radio transmission account of the exchange between a flight attendant on Flight 11 and ground controllers.
Revised: The The second day of the penalty phase trial of 9/11 co-conspirator Zacarias Moussaoui riveted the defendant and jurors when a federal prosecutor read a radio transmission account of the exchange between a flight attendant on Flight 11 and ground controllers.
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Original:  Defense attorney Edward B. MacMahon said that Moussaoui "aspires to martyrdom," and called on jurors to deny the Al-Qaeda defendant his wish to die.
Revised:  Defense attorney Edward B. MacMahon said that Moussaoui "aspires to martyrdom," and called on jurors to deny the Al-Qaeda operative his wish to die.
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Original:   "We are flying low.
Revised:  The jury will return Monday for the trial's resumption. "We are flying low.
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Original: The judge in the U.S. federal death penalty trial against Zacarias Moussaoui ruled on Friday that prosecutors can seek replacement witnesses for Federal Aviation Administration  employees whose testimony was tainted, and therefore disallowed because of pre-trial coaching by a Transportation Security Administration  lawyer.
Revised: The judge in the U.S. federal death penalty trial against Zacarias Moussaoui ruled on Friday that prosecutors can seek replacement witnesses for Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) employees whose testimony was tainted, and therefore disallowed because of pre-trial coaching by a Transportation Security Administration lawyer.
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Original: The judge in the U.S. federal death penalty trial against Zacarias Moussaoui ruled on Friday that prosecutors can seek replacement witnesses for Federal Aviation Administration  employees whose testimony was tainted, and therefore disallowed because of pre-trial coaching by a Transportation Security Administration  lawyer.
Revised: The judge in the U.S. federal death penalty trial against Zacarias Moussaoui ruled on Friday that prosecutors can seek replacement witnesses for Federal Aviation Administration employees whose testimony was tainted, and therefore disallowed because of pre-trial coaching by a Transportation Security Administration (TSA) lawyer.
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Original:  The 18-member jury (6 alternates) were sent home for a week while the court dealt with the revelation that government aviation security witness had been contacted prior to the trial by TSA lawyer Carla J. Martin, to prepared for their testimony in the case   .
Revised:  The 18-member jury (6 alternates) were sent home for a week while the court dealt with the revelation that government aviation security witness had been contacted prior to the trial by TSA lawyer Carla J. Martin, to help prepare their testimony in the case .
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Original:  The 18-member jury (6 alternates) were sent home for a week while the court dealt with the revelation that government aviation security witness had been contacted prior to the trial by TSA lawyer Carla J. Martin, to prepared for their testimony in the case   .
Revised:  The 18-member jury (6 alternates) were sent home for a week while the court dealt with the revelation that government aviation security witness had been contacted prior to the trial by TSA lawyer Carla J. Martin, to prepared for their testimony in the case . .
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Original:  Moussaoui is believed by some to be the missing member in the team of 19 other attackers that carried out the September 11, 2001 suicide airliner strikes in New York City and Washington D.C. Arrested in Minnesota on immigration charges three weeks prior to the attacks, Moussaoui could have warned officials of the pending attacks, but failed to do so, argued Assistant U.S. Attorney Rob Spencer for the prosecution in opening statements.
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Original:  FAA employee testimoney is expected to take the form of what measures would have been taken by the agency to prevent the September 11, 2001 airliner attacks if Moussaoui had warned officials of plan prior to the stikes .
Revised:  FAA employee testimoney is expected to take the form of what measures would have been taken by the agency to prevent the September 11, 2001 airliner attacks if Moussaoui had warned officials of plan prior to the strikes .
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Original:  Moussaoui is believed by some to be the missing member in the team of 19 other attackers that carried out the September 11, 2001 suicide airliner strikes in New York City and Washington D.C. Arrested in Minnesota on immigration charges three weeks prior to the attacks, Moussaoui could have warned officials of the pending attacks, but failed to do so, argued Assistant U.S. Attorney Rob Spencer for the prosecution in opening statements.
Revised:  Moussaoui is believed by some to be the missing member in the team of 19 other attackers that carried out the suicide airliner strikes in New York City and Washington D.C. Arrested in Minnesota on immigration charges three weeks prior to the attacks, Moussaoui could have warned officials of the pending attacks, but failed to do so, argued Assistant U.S. Attorney Rob Spencer for the prosecution in opening statements.
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Original:  The second day of the trial both Moussaoui and juror's attentions was riveted as a federal prosecutor read a radio transmission account of the exchange between a flight attendant on Flight 11 and ground controllers.
Revised:  The second day of the trial both Moussaoui and juror's attention was riveted as a federal prosecutor read a radio transmission account of the exchange between a flight attendant on Flight 11 and ground controllers.
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Original:  Judge Leonie M. Brinkema initially ruled to prevent any testimony from aviation employees, but reversed her decision after the prosecution argued they would have little case left if that testimony was inadmissible.
Revised:  Judge Leonie M. Brinkema initially ruled to prevent testimony from any aviation employees, but reversed her decision after the prosecution argued they would have little case left if that testimony was inadmissible.
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Original:  Judge Leonie M. Brinkema initially ruled to prevent any testimony from aviation employees, but reversed her decision after the prosecution argued they would have little case left if that testimony was inadmissible.
Revised:  Judge Leonie M. Brinkema initially ruled to prevent any testimony from aviation employees, but reversed her decision after the prosecution argued they would have little case left if their testimony remained inadmissible.
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Original:  FAA employee testimoney is expected to take the form of what measures would have been taken by the agency to prevent the September 11, 2001 airliner attacks  if Moussaoui had warned officials of  plan prior to the strikes   .
Revised:  FAA employee testimoney is expected to take the form of what measures would have been taken by the agency to prevent the September 11, 2001 airliner attacks if Moussaoui had warned officials of the plan prior to the strikes .
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Original:  FAA employee testimoney is expected to take the form of what measures would have been taken by the agency to prevent the September 11, 2001 airliner attacks  if Moussaoui had warned officials of  plan prior to the strikes   .
Revised:  FAA employee testimoney is expected to take the form of what measures would have been taken by the agency to prevent the September 11, 2001 airliner attacks if Moussaoui had warned officials of plan prior to the strikes . .
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Original:  She was recently suspended with pay  the TSA and retained Roscoe Howard to act as legal council in the face of legal actions that might arise against her.
Revised:  She was recently suspended with pay by the TSA and retained Roscoe Howard to act as legal council in the face of legal actions that might arise against her.
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Original: Jerry Zuchlinski, a natural resources professor at Sault College, is taking the side of the administration during the 2006 Ontario college teacher' s strike.
Revised: Jerry Zuchlinski, a natural resources professor at Sault College, is taking the side of the administration during the 2006 Ontario college teachers' strike.
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Original:  This Sault Ste.
Revised:  The Sault Ste.
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Original:  Marie, Ontario  disagrees with OPSEU's suggestions that staff is overworked and underpayed , while joining his colleagues on the picket lines.
Revised:  Marie, Ontario professor disagrees with OPSEU's suggestions that staff is overworked and underpayed , while joining his colleagues on the picket lines.
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Original:  Marie, Ontario  disagrees with OPSEU's suggestions that staff is overworked and underpayed , while joining his colleagues on the picket lines.
Revised:  Marie, Ontario disagrees with OPSEU's suggestions that staff is overworked and underpaid , while joining his colleagues on the picket lines.
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Original:  He told the newspaper Soo Today, "I don't feel that the faculty concern with being overworked is valid.
Revised:  He told newspaper Soo Today, "I don't feel that the faculty concern with being overworked is valid.
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Original:  The position is especially bold of the professor , as 92.2\% of faculty at the school support the strike, the fourth highest percentage overall.
Revised:  The position is especially bold , as 92.2\% of faculty at the school support the strike, the fourth highest percentage overall.
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Original:  The position is especially bold of the professor , as 92.2\% of faculty at the school support the strike, the fourth highest percentage overall.
Revised:  The position is especially bold of the professor , as 92.2\% of Sault's faculty support the strike, the fourth highest percentage overall.
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Original:  St Clair voted overwhelmingly in favour of a strike , with 96.6\%, while Loyalist was least supportive of the action, with 64.0\%.
Revised:  St Clair voted overwhelmingly in favour , with 96.6\%, while Loyalist was least supportive of the action, with 64.0\%.
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Original:  Faculty have been without contract since 31 August 2005.
Revised:  Faculty have been without contracts since 31 August 2005.
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Original:  The strike comes just a month before the end of the school year, which may mean courses will be extended into the spring and summer, prohibiting student from making money to pay for their tuitons .
Revised:  The strike comes just a month before the end of the school year, which means courses may be extended into the spring and summer, prohibiting student from making money to pay for their tuitons .
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Original:  The strike comes just a month before the end of the school year, which may mean courses will be extended into the spring and summer, prohibiting student from making money to pay for their tuitons .
Revised:  The strike comes just a month before the end of the school year, which may mean courses will be extended into the spring and summer, making it difficult for students to find jobs to pay tuition .
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Original: Zuchlinski said the faculty were offered a deal that would pay many as much as $95,000 per year, which, according to Sault College Campus Newsrepresents a 12.6\% increase over four years.
Revised: Zuchlinski said the faculty were offered a deal that would pay many as much as $95,000 per year, which, according to Sault College Campus News represents a 12.6\% increase over four years.
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Original: NEW YORK-- Renowned African American artist Gordon Parks, engrained in the public memory for  such films as "Shaft" and "The Learning Tree," died today . Mr. Parks was 93. Gordon Parkswas born November 30, 1912, in Fort Scott, Kansas.
Revised:  Renowned African American artist Gordon Parks, engrained in the public memory for such films as "Shaft" and "The Learning Tree," died today . Mr. Parks was 93. Gordon Parkswas born November 30, 1912, in Fort Scott, Kansas.
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Original: NEW YORK-- Renowned African American artist Gordon Parks, engrained in the public memory for  such films as "Shaft" and "The Learning Tree," died today . Mr. Parks was 93. Gordon Parkswas born November 30, 1912, in Fort Scott, Kansas.
Revised: NEW YORK-- Renowned African American artist Gordon Parks, engrained in the public memory for such films as "Shaft" and "The Learning Tree," died today in New York. He was 93. Gordon Parkswas born November 30, 1912, in Fort Scott, Kansas.
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Original:  Mr. Parks, the youngest of 15 children,  would later recall a childhood in which he regularly encountered the forces of racism and poverty.
Revised:  Mr. Parks, the youngest of 15 children, he would later recall a childhood in which he regularly encountered the forces of racism and poverty.
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Original:  A filmmaker, Mr. Parks was also well known as a photographer for Life magazine and an ardent activist for civil rights.
Revised:  Though perhaps best known as a filmmaker, Parks was also well known as a photographer for Life magazine and an ardent activist for civil rights.
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Original:  While Mr. Parks's legacy is yet history's to establish, he shall be remembered for his ability to capture, both on the screen and with the camera, the struggles of the African American peopl
Revised:  While Mr. Parks's legacy is yet history's to establish, he shall be remembered for his ability to capture, both on the screen and with the camera, the struggles of the African American people
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Original:  Renowned African American artist Gordon Parks, engrained in the public memory for directing such films as " Shaft" and " The Learning Tree," died Tuesday  in New York.
Revised:  Renowned African American artist Gordon Parks, engrained in the public memory for directing such films as " The Learning Tree," died Tuesday in New York.
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Original:  Renowned African American artist Gordon Parks, engrained in the public memory for directing such films as " Shaft" and " The Learning Tree," died Tuesday  in New York.
Revised:  Renowned African American artist Gordon Parks, engrained in the public memory for directing such films as " Shaft" and " The Learning Tree," died Tuesday at his home in New York.
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Original:  The youngest of 15 children , he would later recall a childhood in which he regularly encountered the forces of racism and poverty  .
Revised:  , the youngest of 15 children , he would later recall a childhood in which he regularly encountered the forces of racism and poverty .
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Original:  President Reagan presented him with the National Medal of Arts in 1988 and published at least five semi- or wholly autobiographical books.
Revised:  President Reagan presented him with the National Medal of Arts in 1988. He published at least five semi- or wholly autobiographical books.
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Original:  He moved to St. Paul, Minn. after his mother's death, where he attended but did not graduate from high school, owing to a need to find work during increasinly hard times.
Revised:  He moved to St. Paul, Minn. after his mother's death, where he attended high school. He dropped out in order to find work during increasinly hard times.
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Original:  Parks traveled extensively in the North and Northwest looking for work . During his time at the FSA, Parks composed photo-essays critical of the racial and social prejudices that many facedat the times .
Revised:  Parks traveled extensively in the North and Northwest looking for jobs . During his time at the FSA, Parks composed photo-essays critical of the racial and social prejudices that many facedat the times .
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Original:  Parks traveled extensively in the North and Northwest looking for work . During his time at the FSA, Parks composed photo-essays critical of the racial and social prejudices that many facedat the times .
Revised:  Parks traveled extensively in the North and Northwest looking for work . During his time at the FSA, Parks composed photo-essays critical of the racial and social prejudices many faced .
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Original:  His work drew some attention , both to himself and to the poverty and social injustices of the time.
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Original:  Parks' other artistic achievements include a ballet, written about Martin Luther King, Jr., four other memoirs, a collection of poetry, several original musical compositions and at least one other fictional, non-autobiogrpahical novel.
Revised:  Parks' other artistic achievements include a ballet, written about Martin Luther King, Jr., four other memoirs, a collection of poetry, several original musical compositions and at least one other fictional, non-autobiographical novel.
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Original: Gordon Roger Alexander Buchannan Parks was born November 30, 1912, in Fort Scott, Kan. , the youngest of 15 children.
Revised: Gordon Roger Alexander Buchannan Parks was born November 30, 1912, in Fort Scott, Kansas , the youngest of 15 children.
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Original:  He moved to St. Paul, Minn. after his mother's death , where he attended high school.
Revised:  He moved to St. Paul, Minnesota , where he attended high school.
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Original:  In 1938, he bought his first camera and experimented with both documentary and fashion photography.
Revised:  In 1938, he bought his first camera and experimented with both documentary- and fashion photography.
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Original:  Parks next directed Shaft and its successful sequel, Shaft's Big Score, and a blaxploitation comedy called Supercops''.
Revised:  Parks next directed Shaft and its successful sequel, Shaft's Big Score, as well as a blaxploitation comedy called Supercops''.
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Original:  his daughter, Toni Parks Parson, and his son  David, from his first marriage;
Revised:  his daughter, Toni Parks Parson, and his son , David, from his first marriage;
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Original:  His work  attention both to himself and to the poverty and social injustices of the time.
Revised:  His work drew attention both to himself and to the poverty and social injustices of the time.
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Original: The   social network has been used in the past as an outlet for political expression.
Revised: The The social network has been used in the past as an outlet for political expression.
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Original: Twitter's text logo The service Twitter has changed it's software regarding censoring posts in some parts of the world.
Revised: Twitter's text logo The service Twitter has changed its software regarding censoring posts in some parts of the world.
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Original:  During the , protesters in various countries used Twitter to mobilize support and report report information to the outside world.
Revised:  During the , protesters in various countries used Twitter to mobilize support and report information to the outside world.
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Original:  The organization sent an open letter to , Twitters co-founder, saying “ We urge you to reverse this decision, which restricts freedom of expression and runs counter to the movements opposed to censorship that have been linked to the Arab Spring, in which Twitter served as a sounding board , Twitter is depriving cyberdissidents in repressive countries of a crucial tool for information and organization.
Revised:  The organization sent an open letter to , Twitter's co-founder, saying “ We urge you to reverse this decision, which restricts freedom of expression and runs counter to the movements opposed to censorship that have been linked to the Arab Spring, in which Twitter served as a sounding board , Twitter is depriving cyberdissidents in repressive countries of a crucial tool for information and organization.
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Original:  The organization sent an open letter to , Twitters co-founder, saying “ We urge you to reverse this decision, which restricts freedom of expression and runs counter to the movements opposed to censorship that have been linked to the Arab Spring, in which Twitter served as a sounding board , Twitter is depriving cyberdissidents in repressive countries of a crucial tool for information and organization.
Revised:  The organization sent an open letter to , Twitters co-founder, saying " We urge you to reverse this decision, which restricts freedom of expression and runs counter to the movements opposed to censorship that have been linked to the Arab Spring, in which Twitter served as a sounding board , Twitter is depriving cyberdissidents in repressive countries of a crucial tool for information and organization.
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Original:  The organization sent an open letter to , Twitters co-founder, saying “ We urge you to reverse this decision, which restricts freedom of expression and runs counter to the movements opposed to censorship that have been linked to the Arab Spring, in which Twitter served as a sounding board , Twitter is depriving cyberdissidents in repressive countries of a crucial tool for information and organization.
Revised:  The organization sent an open letter to , Twitters co-founder, saying “ We urge you to reverse this decision, which restricts freedom of expression and runs counter to the movements opposed to censorship that have been linked to the Arab Spring, in which Twitter served as a sounding board ... Twitter is depriving cyberdissidents in repressive countries of a crucial tool for information and organization.
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Original: Twitter's text logo The service Twitter has changed its software regarding censoring postsin some parts of the world .
Revised: Twitter's text logo The service Twitter has changed its software support for censoring posts .
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Original:  The organization sent an open letter to , Twitter's co-founder , saying "We urge you to reverse this decision, which restricts freedom of expression and runs counter to the movements opposed to censorship that have been linked to the Arab Spring, in which Twitter served as a sounding board...
Revised:  The organization sent an open letter to Twitter's co-founder , saying "We urge you to reverse this decision, which restricts freedom of expression and runs counter to the movements opposed to censorship that have been linked to the Arab Spring, in which Twitter served as a sounding board...
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Original: Some users have started an informal blackout of Twitteron Saturday by not posting new tweets or by only posting tweets against the changes .
Revised: Some users have proposed boycotting Twitter .
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Original: Twitter says that it needed to make the changes to expand on an international level.
Revised: Twitter says it needed to make the changes to expand on an international level.
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