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Original: Ali Darassa Ali Darassa Mahamat (born 23 July 1965), also known as Ali Nassaraza Darassa, Ali Daras, and Ali Ndarass is Nigerian leader of the Central African rebel group, the Union for Peace in the Central African Republic (UPC), which is dominant around Bambari.
Revised: Ali Darassa Mahamat (born 23 July 1965), also known as Ali Nassaraza Darassa, Ali Daras, and Ali Ndarass is Nigerian leader of the Central African rebel group, the Union for Peace in the Central African Republic (UPC), which is dominant around Bambari.
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Original: upA paperboy for the Toronto Star in Whitby, Ontario, Canada, 1940 A paperboy is someonoften an older child or adolescentwho distributes printed newspapers to homes or offices on a regular route, usually by bicycle or automobile.
Revised: upA paperboy for the Toronto Star in Whitby, Ontario, Canada, 1940 A paperboy is someoneoften an older child or adolescentwho distributes printed newspapers to homes or offices on a regular route, usually by bicycle or automobile.
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Original:   The duties of a paperboy varied by distributor, but usually included counting and separating papers, rolling papers and inserting them in to newspaper bags during inclement weather, and collecting payments from customers.
Revised:  The duties of a paperboy varied by distributor, but usually included counting and separating papers, rolling papers and inserting them in newspaper bags during inclement weather, and collecting payments from customers.
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Original:  The number of paperboys has later experienced a major decline.
Revised:  The number of paperboys experienced a major decline.
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Original:  Many of the deliverances these days are  adults in cars .
Revised:  Many deliveries these days are adults in cars .
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Original:  Many of the deliverances these days are  adults in cars .
Revised:  Many of the deliverances these days are by adults in cars .
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Original:  Many of the deliverances these days are  adults in cars .
Revised:  Many of the deliverances these days are adults in cars 
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Original:  Newspaper industry lore suggests that the first paperboy, hired in 1833, was 10-year-old Barney Flaherty who answered an advertisement in the New York Sun, which read "To the Unemployed a number of steady men can find employment by vending this paper. "
Revised:  , known as newspaper carriers. They have traditionally been hired by the newspapers as independent contractors.
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Original:  This is because it has long been the first paying job available to young teenagers .
Revised:  This is because it has long been the first paying job available to youngsters .
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Original: Paperboy is essentially an archaic term.
Revised: May I suggest adding a link to the contemporary norm in newspaper delivery; usually it’s an an adult male in a beat up car who delivers the newpaper, and, “Paperboy” is essentially an archaic term.
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Original: Floyd Sonnier (1933 to April 6, 2002), known as "beau Cajun" or the "artist of the Cajuns," was a native of Pointe Noire, Louisiana and a lifelong resident of Louisiana's Acadiana region.
Revised: Floyd Sonnier (1933 – April 6, 2002), known as "beau Cajun" or the "artist of the Cajuns," was a native of Pointe Noire, Louisiana and a lifelong resident of Louisiana's Acadiana region.
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Original:  In 1961 Sonnier graduated in commercial art from the University of Louisiana at Lafayette, then called the University of Southwestern Louisiana, after serving two years in the U.S. Army.
Revised:  He was nicknamed "Beau Cajun".
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Original:  A second book, From Small Bits of Charcoal: The Life Works of a Cajun Artist was nearly completed by Sonnier and later published by his wife after his death.
Revised:  A second book, From Small Bits of Charcoal: The Life 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% About Floyd Sonnier A young French-speaking Cajunboy, humming a simple tune, sifts through the ashes around an old black pot in the backyard of a humble old share-cropper's farm house.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A young French-speaking Cajunboy, humming a simple tune, sifts through the ashes around an old black pot in the backyard of a humble old share-cropper's farm house.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% These precious bits of charcoal chosen with love and care were probably the one single most important factor in the beginning of Floyd Sonnier's life as an artist.
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Original:  Floyd and MervinFloyd Sonnier was born the oldest of six children  to David and Virgie Thibodeaux Sonnier in a small share-cropper's house in an area called "La Pointe Noire" just southwest of Church Point in Acadia Parish.
Revised:  Floyd and MervinFloyd Sonnier was born the oldest of six children ; to David and Virgie Thibodeaux Sonnier in a small share-cropper's house in an area called "La Pointe Noire" just southwest of Church Point in Acadia Parish.
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Original:  Floyd and MervinFloyd Sonnier was born the oldest of six children  to David and Virgie Thibodeaux Sonnier in a small share-cropper's house in an area called "La Pointe Noire" just southwest of Church Point in Acadia Parish.
Revised:  Floyd and MervinFloyd Sonnier was born the oldest of six children to David and Virgie Thibodeaux Sonnier in a small share-cropper's house in an area called "La Pointe Noire" , southwest of Church Point in Acadia Parish.
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Original:  His first language is French - something of which he is very proud.
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Original:  In 1961 he received a Bachelor of Arts Degree in Commercial Art from University of Southwestern Louisiana in Lafayette .
Revised:  In 1961 , Sonnier graduated in commercial art from the University of Louisiana at Lafayette (then called the University of Southwestern Louisiana) .
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Original:  In the mid fifties he served two years with the US Army, of which one year was spent in Europe.
Revised:  In the mid-fifties he served two years with the US Army, of which one year was spent in Europe.
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Original:  In the mid fifties he served two years with the US Army, of which one year was spent in Europe.
Revised:  In the mid fifties he served two years with the United States Army, of which one year was spent in Europe.
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Original:   In November 1975, Floyd Sonnier introduced his pen-and-ink drawings to the public for the first time.
Revised:  Career In November 1975, Floyd Sonnier introduced his pen-and-ink drawings to the public for the first time.
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Original:  In 1980 he opened the Floyd Sonnier's Beau Cajun Art Gallery and Studio in Scott, just outside Lafayette.
Revised:  In 1980 , he opened Floyd Sonnier's Beau Cajun Art Gallery and Studio in Scott, just outside Lafayette.
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Original:  In 1980 he opened the Floyd Sonnier's Beau Cajun Art Gallery and Studio in Scott, just outside Lafayette.
Revised:  In 1980 he opened the Floyd Sonnier's Beau Cajun Art Gallery and Studio in Scott, Louisiana.
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Original:  One of his more recent projects included a commission to do an illustration for a historical book that was published by LSU Press on the murder by and subsequent public hanging of two young Frenchmen accused of the crime in the town of Scott.
Revised:  One of his projects included a commission to do an illustration for a historical book that was published by LSU Press on the murder by and subsequent public hanging of two young Frenchmen accused of the crime in the town of Scott.
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Original:   External links Floyd Sonnier official website URL
Revised:  References External links Floyd Sonnier official website URL
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Original:   External links Floyd Sonnier official website URL
Revised:  External links Floyd Sonnier official website 
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Original:  Similar to the system set out by the American Red Cross, the Swim Kids program for school-aged children consists of ten levels that progress from basic , confidence-building skills to more complicated strokes and techniques.
Revised:  Similar to the system set out by the American Red Cross, the Swim Kids program for school-aged children consists of ten levels that progress from basic confidence-building skills to more complicated strokes and techniques.
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Original: Canadian Red Cross Swim Program. redcross.ca In beginner levels, students can expect to learn skills such as breathing techniques, basic water safety skills, and introductory swimming techniques including how to float and glide in the water at shallow depths.
Revised: Canadian Red Cross Swim Program. redcross.ca In beginner levels, students learn breathing techniques, basic water safety skills, and introductory swimming techniques including how to float and glide in the water at shallow depths.
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Original:  As the program progresses past beginner stages, students will be taught six swim strokes including front crawl, sculling, back crawl, breast stroke, elementary back stroke, and sidestroke.
Revised:  At intermediate levels, students are taught six swim strokes including front crawl, sculling, back crawl, breast stroke, elementary back stroke, and sidestroke.
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Original:  As students proceed through the levels of the program and gain further experience, they will learn to use the techniques that they have learned to swim in deeper water and will build confidence in their ability to be safe while swimming.
Revised:  Advanced levels of the program and gain further experience, they will learn to use the techniques that they have learned to swim in deeper water and will build confidence in their ability to be safe while swimming.
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Original:  As students proceed through the levels of the program and gain further experience, they will learn to use the techniques that they have learned to swim in deeper water and will build confidence in their ability to be safe while swimming.
Revised:  As students proceed through the levels of the program teach students to use these techniques to swim in deeper water and will build confidence in their ability to be safe while swimming.
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Original:  As students proceed through the levels of the program and gain further experience, they will learn to use the techniques that they have learned to swim in deeper water and will build confidence in their ability to be safe while swimming.
Revised:  As students proceed through the levels of the program and gain further experience, they will learn to use the techniques that they have learned to swim in deeper water and remain safe while swimming.
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Original:  Once students complete the ten levels of the program successfully, they are eligible to enter into Bronze Medal Programs (Bronze Star, Bronze Medallion, and Bronze Cross) to gain a better understanding of lifesaving skills.
Revised:  Upon successful completion of the ten levels of the program successfully, they are eligible to enter into Bronze Medal Programs (Bronze Star, Bronze Medallion, and Bronze Cross) to gain a better understanding of lifesaving skills.
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Original:  Once students complete the ten levels of the program successfully, they are eligible to enter into Bronze Medal Programs (Bronze Star, Bronze Medallion, and Bronze Cross) to gain a better understanding of lifesaving skills.
Revised:  Once students complete the ten levels of the program , students are eligible to enter into Bronze Medal Programs (Bronze Star, Bronze Medallion, and Bronze Cross) to gain a better understanding of lifesaving skills.
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Original:  Once students complete the ten levels of the program successfully, they are eligible to enter into Bronze Medal Programs (Bronze Star, Bronze Medallion, and Bronze Cross) to gain a better understanding of lifesaving skills.
Revised:  Once students complete the ten levels of the program successfully, they are eligible to enter the Bronze Medal programs (Bronze Star, Bronze Medallion, and Bronze Cross) to gain a better understanding of lifesaving skills.
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Original:  Once students complete the ten levels of the program successfully, they are eligible to enter into Bronze Medal Programs (Bronze Star, Bronze Medallion, and Bronze Cross) to gain a better understanding of lifesaving skills.
Revised:  Once students complete the ten levels of the program successfully, they are eligible to enter into Bronze Medal Programs (Bronze Star, Bronze Medallion, and Bronze Cross) to learn lifesaving skills.
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Original:  After completing all three courses in the Bronze Medal Programs, students will have the opportunity to advance their skills by enrolling in additional programs such as Water Safety Instructor (WSI) programs to teach them how to become swimming instructors themselves.
Revised:  After completing all three Bronze Medal program courses, students can further advance with additional programs such as Water Safety Instructor (WSI) programs to teach them how to become swimming instructors themselves.
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Original:  After completing all three courses in the Bronze Medal Programs, students will have the opportunity to advance their skills by enrolling in additional programs such as Water Safety Instructor (WSI) programs to teach them how to become swimming instructors themselves.
Revised:  After completing all three courses in the Bronze Medal Programs, students will have the opportunity to advance their skills by enrolling in additional programs such as Water Safety Instructor (WSI) that teach them how to become swimming instructors themselves.
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Original:  Also annually , 800,000 Canadians participate  in Lifesaving Society (LSS) swimming, lifesaving, lifeguard, first aid  and leadership training programs.
Revised:  Additionally , 800,000 Canadians participate in Lifesaving Society (LSS) swimming, lifesaving, lifeguard, first aid and leadership training programs.
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Original:  Also annually , 800,000 Canadians participate  in Lifesaving Society (LSS) swimming, lifesaving, lifeguard, first aid  and leadership training programs.
Revised:  Also annually , 800,000 Canadians participate annually in Lifesaving Society (LSS) swimming, lifesaving, lifeguard, first aid and leadership training programs.
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Original:  Also annually , 800,000 Canadians participate  in Lifesaving Society (LSS) swimming, lifesaving, lifeguard, first aid  and leadership training programs.
Revised:  Also annually , 800,000 Canadians participate in Lifesaving Society (LSS) swimming, lifesaving, lifeguard, first aid , and leadership training programs.
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Original:  Each year , LSS certifies thousands of instructors who provide the leadership for those training programs.
Revised:  Each year LSS certifies thousands of instructors who provide the leadership for those training programs.
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Original: Germany The "Schwimmabzeichen " (swimming badge) is assigned in four levels – Entry, Bronze, Silver  and Gold.
Revised: Germany The Schwimmabzeichen (swimming badge) is assigned in four levels – Entry, Bronze, Silver and Gold.
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Original: Germany The "Schwimmabzeichen " (swimming badge) is assigned in four levels – Entry, Bronze, Silver  and Gold.
Revised: Germany The "Schwimmabzeichen " (swimming badge) is assigned in four levels : Entry, Bronze, Silver and Gold.
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Original: Germany The "Schwimmabzeichen " (swimming badge) is assigned in four levels – Entry, Bronze, Silver  and Gold.
Revised: Germany The "Schwimmabzeichen " (swimming badge) is assigned in four levels – Entry, Bronze, Silver , and Gold.
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Original:  The levels are defined by the Bundesverband zur Förderung der Schwimmausbildung (federal association for promotion of swimming lessons – assembling NGO associations) in coordination with the federal Kultusministerkonferenz (assembly of the ministers for education of each Bundesland-state).
Revised:  The levels are defined by the Bundesverband zur Förderung der Schwimmausbildung (federal association for promotion of swimming lessons — assembling NGO associations) in coordination with the federal Kultusministerkonferenz (assembly of the ministers for education of each Bundesland-state).
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Original:  The entry level " Frühschwimmer " (early swimmer) includes a swimming test where the student shows a jump from side, 25 meter swimming (free style ), and pick up of an object underwater.
Revised:  The entry level Frühschwimmer " (early swimmer) includes a swimming test where the student shows a jump from side, 25 meter swimming (free style ), and pick up of an object underwater.
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Original:  The entry level " Frühschwimmer " (early swimmer) includes a swimming test where the student shows a jump from side, 25 meter swimming (free style ), and pick up of an object underwater.
Revised:  The entry level " Frühschwimmer (early swimmer) includes a swimming test where the student shows a jump from side, 25 meter swimming (free style ), and pick up of an object underwater.
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Original:  The entry level " Frühschwimmer " (early swimmer) includes a swimming test where the student shows a jump from side, 25 meter swimming (free style ), and pick up of an object underwater.
Revised:  The entry level " Frühschwimmer " (early swimmer) includes a swimming test where the student shows a jump from side, 25 meter swimming (free style ), and pickup of an object underwater.
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Original:  The " Frühschwimmer " level is better known by its mascot "Seepferdchen " (seahorse) shown on the badge with most people to call it the "Seepferdchen " certificate.
Revised:  The Frühschwimmer " level is better known by its mascot "Seepferdchen " (seahorse) shown on the badge with most people to call it the "Seepferdchen " certificate.
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Original:  The " Frühschwimmer " level is better known by its mascot "Seepferdchen " (seahorse) shown on the badge with most people to call it the "Seepferdchen " certificate.
Revised:  The " Frühschwimmer level is better known by its mascot "Seepferdchen " (seahorse) shown on the badge with most people to call it the "Seepferdchen " certificate.
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Original:  The " Frühschwimmer " level is better known by its mascot "Seepferdchen " (seahorse) shown on the badge with most people to call it the "Seepferdchen " certificate.
Revised:  The " Frühschwimmer " level is better known by its mascot Seepferdchen (seahorse) shown on the badge with most people to call it the "Seepferdchen " certificate.
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Original:  The " Frühschwimmer " level is better known by its mascot "Seepferdchen " (seahorse) shown on the badge with most people to call it the "Seepferdchen " certificate.
Revised:  The " Frühschwimmer " level is better known by its mascot "Seepferdchen " (seahorse) shown on the badge , leading many to refer to it as the Seepferdchen certificate.
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Original:  The bronze badge requires 200 meter of swimming in under 15 minutes (no style prescribed).
Revised:  The bronze badge requires 200 metres of swimming in under 15 minutes (no style prescribed).
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Original:  The silver badge requires 400 meter of swimming in under 12 minutes, pick up of an object from deep water (more than 2 meter ), jump and dive from the side, and 10 meter swimming underwater.
Revised:  The silver badge requires 400 metres of swimming in under 12 minutes, pick up of an object from deep water (more than 2 meter ), jump and dive from the side, and 10 meter swimming underwater.
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Original:  The silver badge requires 400 meter of swimming in under 12 minutes, pick up of an object from deep water (more than 2 meter ), jump and dive from the side, and 10 meter swimming underwater.
Revised:  The silver badge requires 400 meter of swimming in under 12 minutes, pickup of an object from deep water (more than 2 meter ), jump and dive from the side, and 10 meter swimming underwater.
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Original:  The silver badge requires 400 meter of swimming in under 12 minutes, pick up of an object from deep water (more than 2 meter ), jump and dive from the side, and 10 meter swimming underwater.
Revised:  The silver badge requires 400 meter of swimming in under 12 minutes, pick up of an object from deep water (more than 2 metres ), jump and dive from the side, and 10 meter swimming underwater.
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Original:  The silver badge requires 400 meter of swimming in under 12 minutes, pick up of an object from deep water (more than 2 meter ), jump and dive from the side, and 10 meter swimming underwater.
Revised:  The silver badge requires 400 meter of swimming in under 12 minutes, pick up of an object from deep water (more than 2 meter ), jump and dive from the side, and 10 metres of swimming underwater.
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Original:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
Revised:  The gold badge requires 1,000 metres of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
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Original:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
Revised:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meters (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
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Original:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
Revised:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 metres of back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
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Original:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 meter rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
Revised:  The gold badge requires 1000 meter of swimming (under 24 minutes for males and under 29 minutes for females), sport swimming of 100 meter (under 1:50 for males and 2:00 for females), 100 meter back crawl, 50 metres of rescue swimming, 15 meter swimming underwater, pick up of three objects from deep water (2 meters , under 3 minutes, max. 3 attempts).
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