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Original:  The settlement proposal , as it became known, was worked out after lengthy consultations by the Western Contact Group with South Africa, the front-line states (Angola, Botswana, Mozambique, Tanzania, Zambia, and Zimbabwe),  SWAPO and the  UN Commissioner for Namibia, Martti Ahtisaari.
Revised:  The settlement proposal , as it became known, was worked out after lengthy consultations by the WCG with South Africa, the front-line states (Angola, Botswana, Mozambique, Tanzania, Zambia, and Zimbabwe), SWAPO and the UN Commissioner for Namibia, Martti Ahtisaari.
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Original:  The settlement proposal , as it became known, was worked out after lengthy consultations by the Western Contact Group with South Africa, the front-line states (Angola, Botswana, Mozambique, Tanzania, Zambia, and Zimbabwe),  SWAPO and the  UN Commissioner for Namibia, Martti Ahtisaari.
Revised:  The settlement proposal , as it became known, was worked out after lengthy consultations by the Western Contact Group with South Africa, the front-line states (Angola, Botswana, Mozambique, Tanzania, Zambia, and Zimbabwe), together with SWAPO and the UN Commissioner for Namibia, Martti Ahtisaari.
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Original:  The settlement proposal , as it became known, was worked out after lengthy consultations by the Western Contact Group with South Africa, the front-line states (Angola, Botswana, Mozambique, Tanzania, Zambia, and Zimbabwe),  SWAPO and the  UN Commissioner for Namibia, Martti Ahtisaari.
Revised:  The settlement proposal , as it became known, was worked out after lengthy consultations by the Western Contact Group with South Africa, the front-line states (Angola, Botswana, Mozambique, Tanzania, Zambia, and Zimbabwe), SWAPO and the then UN Commissioner for Namibia, Martti Ahtisaari.
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Original: Image:Slí-na-sláinte-sign.jpg|150px|Slí na Sláinte signpost in Galway]] Slí na Sláinte ( ( , meaning "Path of health" ) ), abbreviated SnaS, is an initiative developed by the Irish Heart Foundation, with the aim to encourage and increase the number of people walking in the Republic of Ireland.
Revised: Image:Slí-na-sláinte-sign.jpg|150px|Slí na Sláinte signpost in Galway]] Slí na Sláinte ( , meaning "Path of health" ) ), abbreviated SnaS, is an initiative developed by the Irish Heart Foundation, with the aim to encourage and increase the number of people walking in the Republic of Ireland.
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Original: Image:Slí-na-sláinte-sign.jpg|150px|Slí na Sláinte signpost in Galway]] Slí na Sláinte ( ( , meaning "Path of health" ) ), abbreviated SnaS, is an initiative developed by the Irish Heart Foundation, with the aim to encourage and increase the number of people walking in the Republic of Ireland.
Revised: Image:Slí-na-sláinte-sign.jpg|150px|Slí na Sláinte signpost in Galway]] Slí na Sláinte ( ( , meaning "Path of health" ), abbreviated SnaS, is an initiative developed by the Irish Heart Foundation, with the aim to encourage and increase the number of people walking in the Republic of Ireland.
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Original: Image:Slí-na-sláinte-sign.jpg|150px|Slí na Sláinte signpost in Galway]] Slí na Sláinte ( , meaning "Path of health"), abbreviated SnaS, is an initiative developed by the Irish Heart Foundation, with the aim to encourage and increase the number of people walking in the Republic of Ireland.
Revised: Image:Slí-na-sláinte-sign.jpg|150px|Slí na Sláinte signpost in Galway]] Slí na Sláinte ( ; meaning "Path of health"), abbreviated SnaS, is an initiative developed by the Irish Heart Foundation, with the aim to encourage and increase the number of people walking in the Republic of Ireland.
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Original: A pitch book (or pitch deck), also called a Confidential Information Memorandum, is a marketing presentation (information layout) used by investment banks,  corporate finance firms, business brokers and other M&A intermediaries advising on the sale or disposal of the shares or assets of a business.
Revised: A pitch book (or pitch deck), also called a Confidential Information Memorandum, is a marketing presentation (information layout) used by investment banks, entrepreneurs, corporate finance firms, business brokers and other M&A intermediaries advising on the sale or disposal of the shares or assets of a business.
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Original: Components of a Pitch Deck A pitch deck should contain the most important information to convince an investor, client or partner.
Revised: Components of a pitch deck A pitch deck should contain the most important information to convince an investor, client or partner.
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Original:  While both protestants and Catholics came together in their opposition to Spanish rule, it was only with the common goal of fighting for Netherlands liberties and freedoms, and not for the recognition of the Dutch nationality.
Revised:  While both Protestants and Catholics came together in their opposition to Spanish rule, it was only with the common goal of fighting for Netherlands liberties and freedoms, and not for the recognition of the Dutch nationality.
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Original: of common identity or unifying factors.
Revised: Early stages Before the formation of the Dutch Republic the land of the Low Countries had been inhabited by a number of disparate peoples who migrated from other lands and left only traces of their culture on the territory of the Low Countries. In the 10th century the Franks, Frisians and Saxons who lived in the territory of the Low Countries had no sense of common identity or unifying factors.
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Original: Barnouw, pg 23 In the fourteenth century  the Flemish vehemently denied their French citizenship and identified themselves as Fleming.
Revised: Barnouw, pg 23 In the fourteenth century , the Flemish vehemently denied their French citizenship and identified themselves as Fleming.
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Original:  Military Service In the 18th century, military service was considered a privilege of only the burghers.
Revised:  Military service In the 18th century, military service was considered a privilege of only the burghers.
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Original: Vink, pg 34 In 1838  a new Dutch civil code (Burgerlijk Wetboek) replaced the Code Civil and dealt with nationality in a new, Dutch way but still largely influence by the French system.
Revised: Vink, pg 34 In 1838 , a new Dutch civil code (Burgerlijk Wetboek) replaced the Code Civil and dealt with nationality in a new, Dutch way but still largely influence by the French system.
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Original: Vink, pg 34 References Bibliography Article  Ann Laura Stoler, "Rethinking Colonial Categories: European Communities and the Boundaries of Rule," Comparative Studies in Society and History 31.1 (Jan. 1989).
Revised: Vink, pg 34 References Bibliography Article References Ann Laura Stoler, "Rethinking Colonial Categories: European Communities and the Boundaries of Rule," Comparative Studies in Society and History 31.1 (Jan. 1989).
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Original:  Books Barnouw, A.J. The Making of Modern Holland.
Revised:  Barnouw, A.J. The Making of Modern Holland.
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Original:  See also Dutch nationality law Dutch people Culture of the Netherlands Politics of the Netherlands Dutch Empire Constitution of the Netherlands Nationality Nationality Dutch Nationality Identity Category:Legal history of the Netherlan
Revised:  Nationality Nationality Dutch Nationality Identity Category:Legal history of the Netherlan
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Original:  See also Dutch nationality law Dutch people Culture of the Netherlands Politics of the Netherlands Dutch Empire Constitution of the Netherlands Nationality Nationality Dutch Nationality Identity Category:Legal history of the Netherlan
Revised:  See also Dutch nationality law Dutch people Culture of the Netherlands Politics of the Netherlands Dutch Empire Constitution of the Netherlands Nationality Nationality Dutch Nationality Nationality Nationali
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Original:  Again, it should be noted that a legal system encompassing the whole population of the republic did not yet exist.
Revised:  A legal system encompassing the whole population of the republic did not yet exist.
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Original:  An example of The diatomic hydrogen molecule, H2 (right), is formed by a when two single hydrogen atoms share two electrons  A sodium ion (Na+) forms a solvation complex with water molecules when in an aqueous solution  A  laboratory apparatus designed for This diagram shows the nomenclature commonly used for each of the different The modern .
Revised:  An example of The diatomic hydrogen molecule, H2 (right), is formed by a when two single hydrogen atoms share two electrons . A sodium ion (Na+) forms a solvation complex with water molecules when in an aqueous solution A laboratory apparatus designed for This diagram shows the nomenclature commonly used for each of the different The modern .
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Original:  An example of The diatomic hydrogen molecule, H2 (right), is formed by a when two single hydrogen atoms share two electrons  A sodium ion (Na+) forms a solvation complex with water molecules when in an aqueous solution  A  laboratory apparatus designed for This diagram shows the nomenclature commonly used for each of the different The modern .
Revised:  An example of The diatomic hydrogen molecule, H2 (right), is formed by a when two single hydrogen atoms share two electrons A sodium ion (Na+) forms a solvation complex with water molecules when in an aqueous solution . A laboratory apparatus designed for This diagram shows the nomenclature commonly used for each of the different The modern .
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Original:  An example of The diatomic hydrogen molecule, H2 (right), is formed by a when two single hydrogen atoms share two electrons  A sodium ion (Na+) forms a solvation complex with water molecules when in an aqueous solution  A  laboratory apparatus designed for This diagram shows the nomenclature commonly used for each of the different The modern .
Revised:  An example of The diatomic hydrogen molecule, H2 (right), is formed by a when two single hydrogen atoms share two electrons A sodium ion (Na+) forms a solvation complex with water molecules when in an aqueous solution A diagram of a laboratory apparatus designed for This diagram shows the nomenclature commonly used for each of the different The modern .
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Original:  An example of The diatomic hydrogen molecule, H2 (right), is formed by a when two single hydrogen atoms share two electrons  A sodium ion (Na+) forms a solvation complex with water molecules when in an aqueous solution  A  laboratory apparatus designed for This diagram shows the nomenclature commonly used for each of the different The modern .
Revised:  An example of The diatomic hydrogen molecule, H2 (right), is formed by a when two single hydrogen atoms share two electrons A sodium ion (Na+) forms a solvation complex with water molecules when in an aqueous solution A laboratory apparatus designed for The modern .
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Original: Structural diagrams of two molecules, the non-superimposable mirror-image enantiomers (S)-alanine (left) and (R)-alanine (right).
Revised: Structural diagrams of two molecules, the non-superposable mirror-image enantiomers (S)-alanine (left) and (R)-alanine (right).
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Original:  Though they have identical and the same physical properties, they are nevertheless different chemicals, and will react differently with other chiral compounds.
Revised:  Though they have identical and the same physical properties, they are nevertheless different chemicals, and react differently with other chiral compounds.
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Original:  due to lack of depth appreciation on images Less magnification and image clarity than indirect ophthalmoscopy Conditions such as cataracts will reduce image clarity Artifact errors may produce unusual images Lack of portability High cost Brief discomfort and disruption to vision caused by the flash Flash can elicit ocular migraine in susceptible individuals See also Dilated fundus examination Optical coherence tomography, commonly used for imaging the structure of the retina Gallery
Revised:  due to lack of depth appreciation on images Less magnification and image clarity than indirect ophthalmoscopy Conditions such as cataracts will reduce image clarity Artifact errors may produce unusual images Lack of portability High cost Brief discomfort and disruption to vision caused by the flash Flash can elicit ocular migraine in susceptible individuals See also Dilated fundus examination Optical coherence tomography, commonly used for imaging the structure of the retina 
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Original:  The retinal nerve fibre layer should also be studied and commented on .
Revised:  The retinal nerve fibre layer should also be studied and commented on 
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Original: Fundus photography involves photographing the rear of an eye ;
Revised: Fundus photography involves photographing the rear of an eye ,
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Original:  making it a less invasive procedure than traditional methods High patient compliance Images can be saved and used at a later time or by different clinicians Progression of diseases can be monitored over time, allowing for better management plans Different filters and dyes available to allow for different types tests Image produced is two-dimensional, unlike 3D in binocular indirect binocular ophthalmoscopy Difficulty observing and assessing abnormalities (e.g. cotton wool spots)
Revised:  making it a less invasive procedure than traditional methods High patient compliance Images can be saved and used at a later time or by different clinicians Progression of diseases can be monitored over time, allowing for better management plans Different filters and dyes available to allow for different types tests Image produced is two-dimensional, unlike 3D in indirect binocular ophthalmoscopy Difficulty observing and assessing abnormalities (e.g. cotton wool spots)
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Original:  After high school, he studied law at the University of Leiden before returning to Indonesian in 1935 and working as a law official in Java.
Revised:  After high school, he studied law at the University of Leiden before returning to Indonesia in 1935 and working as a law official in Java.
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Original:  Microwave International New Media Arts Festival Microwave International New Media Arts Festival (微波國際新媒體藝術節）is a new media art festival based in Hong Kong.
Revised: The Microwave International New Media Arts Festival Microwave International New Media Arts Festival (微波國際新媒體藝術節）is a new media art festival based in Hong Kong.
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Original:  Microwave International New Media Arts Festival Microwave International New Media Arts Festival (微波國際新媒體藝術節）is a new media art festival based in Hong Kong.
Revised:  Microwave International New Media Arts Festival (微波國際新媒體藝術節）is a new media art festival based in Hong Kong.
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Original:  In 2006, it went through a complete rebranding to become an independent organisation, with its Hong Kong award-winning design partner Milkxhake giving it a whole new look in sharp, fluorescent colours: fluorescent orange for the brand colour and another fluorescent color as each year's festival colour.
Revised:  In 2006, it went through a rebranding to become an independent organisation, with its Hong Kong award-winning design partner Milkxhake giving it a whole new look in sharp, fluorescent colours: fluorescent orange for the brand colour and another fluorescent color as each year's festival colour.
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Original:  In 2006, it went through a complete rebranding to become an independent organisation, with its Hong Kong award-winning design partner Milkxhake giving it a whole new look in sharp, fluorescent colours: fluorescent orange for the brand colour and another fluorescent color as each year's festival colour.
Revised:  In 2006, it went through a complete rebranding to become an independent organisation, with its Hong Kong design partner Milkxhake giving it a whole new look in sharp, fluorescent colours: fluorescent orange for the brand colour and another fluorescent color as each year's festival colour.
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Original:  In 2006, it went through a complete rebranding to become an independent organisation, with its Hong Kong award-winning design partner Milkxhake giving it a whole new look in sharp, fluorescent colours: fluorescent orange for the brand colour and another fluorescent color as each year's festival colour.
Revised:  In 2006, it went through a complete rebranding to become an independent organisation, with its Hong Kong award-winning design partner Milkxhake giving it a new look in sharp, fluorescent colours: fluorescent orange for the brand colour and another fluorescent color as each year's festival colour.
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Original:  In 2006, it went through a complete rebranding to become an independent organisation, with its Hong Kong award-winning design partner Milkxhake giving it a whole new look in sharp, fluorescent colours: fluorescent orange for the brand colour and another fluorescent color as each year's festival colour.
Revised:  In 2006, it went through a complete rebranding to become an independent organisation, with its Hong Kong award-winning design partner Milkxhake giving it a whole new look in fluorescent colours: fluorescent orange for the brand colour and another fluorescent color as each year's festival colour.
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Original:  In 2006 the festival colour was fluorescent green, 2007 is shocking pink.
Revised:  In 2007 is shocking pink.
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Original:  Two new board members joined in the same year: media artist Helen Grace and LED artist Teddy Lo.
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Original:  In 2007, the Festival included a few new events, such as an alternative exhibition at the Hong Kong Film Archive (Project Room), an outdoor one-minute screening programme that makes use of the outdoor LED megascreens owned by collaborator JM Network around Hong Kong (Microwave x Project Canvas), a forum and a performance with renowned US group Graffiti Research Lab that "hacked the city" with their L.A.S.E.R.T.A.G along the two sides of Hong Kong's Victoria Harbour as a special programme.
Revised:  In 2007, the Festival included a few new events, such as an alternative exhibition at the Hong Kong Film Archive (Project Room), an outdoor one-minute screening programme that makes use of the outdoor LED megascreens owned by collaborator JM Network around Hong Kong (Microwave x Project Canvas), a forum and a performance with US group Graffiti Research Lab that "hacked the city" with their L.A.S.E.R.T.A.G along the two sides of Hong Kong's Victoria Harbour as a special programme.
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Original:  In its first extended event outside of the annual November Festival, Microwave also held the "A-Glow-Glow" Macro Interactive Media Art Exhibition in April 2008, which was funded by the Hong Kong Arts Development Council and aimed for relatively more mass appeal.
Revised:  In its first extended event outside of the annual November Festival, Microwave also held the "A-Glow-Glow" Macro Interactive Media Art Exhibition in April 2008, which was funded by the Hong Kong Arts Development Council and aimed for more mass appeal.
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Original:  Documentaries of the creative process behind the artworks will be screened as well, as part of the Project Room's aim to make art more accessible to people.
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Original:  Transient Creatures official website: microwavefest.net The Luminous Echo main exhibition includes :
Revised:  Transient Creatures official website: microwavefest.net The Luminous Echo main exhibition included :
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Original:  Mainly government-funded, it began in 1996 as a video art festival  .
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Original:  Mainly government-funded, it began in 1996 as a video art festival  .
Revised:  Mainly government-funded, it began in 1996 as the annual video art festival .
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Original:  Two additional board members joined in the same year: media artist Helen Grace and LED artist Teddy Lo.
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Original:  The annual festival has generally included an exhibition at the Hong Kong City Hall, a  keynote conference, performances, screening programmes and other special events organised each year.
Revised:  The annual festival generally includes a main exhibition at the Hong Kong City Hall, a keynote conference, performances, screening programmes and other special events organised each year.
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Original:  In 2007, the Festival included a few new events, such as an alternative exhibition at the Hong Kong Film Archive (Project Room), an outdoor one-minute screening programme that makes use of the outdoor LED megascreens owned by collaborator JM Network around Hong Kong (Microwave x Project Canvas), a forum and a performance with US group Graffiti Research Lab that "hacked the city" with their L.A.S.E.R.T.A.G along the two sides of Hong Kong's Victoria Harbour as a special programme.
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Original:  In 2007, the Festival included a few new events, such as an alternative exhibition at the Hong Kong Film Archive (Project Room), an outdoor one-minute screening programme that makes use of the outdoor LED megascreens owned by collaborator JM Network around Hong Kong (Microwave x Project Canvas), a forum and a performance with US group Graffiti Research Lab that "hacked the city" with their L.A.S.E.R.T.A.G along the two sides of Hong Kong's Victoria Harbour as a special programme.
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Original:  Along with the participation of local graffiti artist MC Yan, they achieved a record-breaking tag 1200 metres across Victoria Harbour (James Powderly and MC Yan tagging from Central ferry, with Evan Roth and the local crew controlling the set up in front of the Cultural Centre in Tsim Sha Tsui).
Revised:  with the participation of local graffiti artist MC Yan, they achieved a record-breaking tag 1200 metres across Victoria Harbour (James Powderly and MC Yan tagging from Central ferry, with Evan Roth and the local crew controlling the set up in front of the Cultural Centre in Tsim Sha Tsui).
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Original:   Festival    2008 Transient Creatures (異生界） The Main Exhibition (7-16 Nov, Hong Kong City Hall) includes: Mei Kei LAI (Macau) - Does it Make Scents To Have Fun?
Revised:  Festival Festival 2008 Transient Creatures (異生界） The Main Exhibition (7-16 Nov, Hong Kong City Hall) includes: Mei Kei LAI (Macau) - Does it Make Scents To Have Fun?
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Original:   Festival    2008 Transient Creatures (異生界） The Main Exhibition (7-16 Nov, Hong Kong City Hall) includes: Mei Kei LAI (Macau) - Does it Make Scents To Have Fun?
Revised:  Festival 2008 Transient Creatures (異生界） Mei Kei LAI (Macau) - Does it Make Scents To Have Fun?
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Original:  Semi-Living Worry Dolls, Pig Wings, The Remains of Disembodied Cuisine (3 exhibits) Project Room Exhibition (14-23 Hong Kong Film Archive) includes:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Adam BRANDEJS (Canada) -
Revised:  Semi-Living Worry Dolls, Pig Wings, The Remains of Disembodied Cuisine (3 exhibits) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Adam BRANDEJS (Canada) -
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