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Original:  By March 13, 12 top officials had been arrested in relation to the attempted coup , this included ex-ministers Henry Mussa, Symon Vuwa Kaunda, Jean Kalirani, Patricia Kaliati, Kondwani Nankhumwa, the Deputy Chief Secretary to the Government, Necton Mhura and Duncan Mwapasa.
Revised:  By March 13, twelve top officials had been arrested in relation to the attempted coup , this included ex-ministers Henry Mussa, Symon Vuwa Kaunda, Jean Kalirani, Patricia Kaliati, Kondwani Nankhumwa, the Deputy Chief Secretary to the Government, Necton Mhura and Duncan Mwapasa.
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Original:  By March 13, 12 top officials had been arrested in relation to the attempted coup , this included ex-ministers Henry Mussa, Symon Vuwa Kaunda, Jean Kalirani, Patricia Kaliati, Kondwani Nankhumwa, the Deputy Chief Secretary to the Government, Necton Mhura and Duncan Mwapasa.
Revised:  By March 13, 12 top officials had been arrested , this included ex-ministers Henry Mussa, Symon Vuwa Kaunda, Jean Kalirani, Patricia Kaliati, Kondwani Nankhumwa, the Deputy Chief Secretary to the Government, Necton Mhura and Duncan Mwapasa.
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Original: Administratium is a well-known joke in scientific circles, and is a spoof both on the bureaucracy of scientific establishments and on descriptions of newly discovered chemical elements.
Revised: Administratium is a well-known in-joke in scientific circles, and is a spoof both on the bureaucracy of scientific establishments and on descriptions of newly discovered chemical elements.
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Original: Administratium is a well-known joke in scientific circles, and is a spoof both on the bureaucracy of scientific establishments and on descriptions of newly discovered chemical elements.
Revised: Administratium is a well-known joke in scientific circles, and is a parody both on the bureaucracy of scientific establishments and on descriptions of newly discovered chemical elements.
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Original:  A spoof  was written by William DeBuvitz in 1988 and first appeared in print in the January 1989 issue of The Physics Teacher.
Revised:  A spoof article was written by William DeBuvitz in 1988 and first appeared in print in the January 1989 issue of The Physics Teacher.
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Original:  It spread rapidly among university campuses and research centers , and many versions surfaced, often customized to the contributor's situation.
Revised:  It spread rapidly among university campuses and research centers ; many versions surfaced, often customized to the contributor's situation.
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Original:  Category: Political satire Category:Jokes Category:Fictional materia       
Revised:  Category: Political satire Category:Jokes Category:Fictional materia Category:Political satire 
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Original: Another variation on the same joke is "Bureaucratium" . A commonly heard description describes it as "having a negative half-life", in other words the more time passes, the more massive "Bureaucratium" becomes;
Revised: Another variation on the same joke is Bureaucratium . A commonly heard description describes it as "having a negative half-life", in other words the more time passes, the more massive "Bureaucratium" becomes;
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Original:  This link is dead as of 2017-11-24, but a copy is available on the same web page as the article by Beltz (next reference) It spread rapidly among university campuses and research centers;
Revised:  It spread rapidly among university campuses and research centers;
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Original: Opening Entrance to the fair The Auckland Industrial, Agricultural and Mining Exhibition was opened on 1 December  by its chairman, George Elliott, with the Prime Minister (William Massey) and mayor of Auckland (Peter Dignan) also in attendance.
Revised: Opening The entrance to the fair The Auckland Industrial, Agricultural and Mining Exhibition was opened on 1 December by its chairman, George Elliott, with the Prime Minister (William Massey) and mayor of Auckland (Peter Dignan) also in attendance.
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Original:  There were 18,000 attendees on the opening day, and the fair ran until 18 April 1914 Exhibits and entertainment Exhibition buildings included a concert hall, art gallery, machinery court, palace of industries and exhibition tower.
Revised:  There were 18,000 attendees on the opening day, and the fair ran until 18 April 1914 Exhibits and entertainment Buildings included a concert hall, art gallery, machinery court, palace of industries and exhibition tower.
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Original:  There were 18,000 attendees on the opening day, and the fair ran until 18 April 1914 Exhibits and entertainment Exhibition buildings included a concert hall, art gallery, machinery court, palace of industries and exhibition tower.
Revised:  There were 18,000 attendees on the opening day, and the fair ran until 18 April 1914 Exhibits and entertainment Exhibition buildings included a concert hall, art gallery, machinery court, palace of industries , and an exhibition tower.
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Original:  Entertainments in the fair's Wonderland included water shute, tobaggons, a figure-8 railway and a tea room.
Revised:  Entertainments in the fair's "Wonderland" included a water shute, tobaggons, a figure-8 railway and a tea room.
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Original: The   Auckland Exhibition, also known as the Auckland Industrial, Agricultural and Mining Exhibition, was a world's fair held in Auckland Domain, Auckland, New Zealand, in 1913 and 1914.
Revised: The The Auckland Exhibition, also known as the Auckland Industrial, Agricultural and Mining Exhibition, was a world's fair held in Auckland Domain, Auckland, New Zealand, in 1913 and 1914.
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Original:  Opening The entrance to the fair The Auckland Industrial, Agricultural and Mining Exhibition was opened on 1 December 1913 by its chairman, George Elliott, with the Prime Minister (William Massey) and mayor of Auckland (Peter Dignan) also in attendance.
Revised:  Opening The Auckland Industrial, Agricultural and Mining Exhibition was opened on 1 December 1913 by its chairman, George Elliott, with the Prime Minister (William Massey) and mayor of Auckland (Peter Dignan) also in attendance.
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Original: Biography Theophylact  was born to Michael  Rhangabe and Prokopia .
Revised: Biography Theophylact was born to Michael I Rhangabe and Prokopia .
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Original:  – 15 January 849) was the eldest son of the Byzantine emperor Michael I Rhangabe () and grandson, on his mother's side, of Nikephoros I ().
Revised:  – 15 January 849) was the eldest son of the Byzantine emperor Michael I Rangabe () and grandson, on his mother's side, of Nikephoros I ().
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Original: B burgdorferi infection may be relevant for the induction of a distinct autoimmune type of scleroderma;
Revised: Borrelia burgdorferi infection may be relevant for the induction of a distinct autoimmune type of scleroderma;
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Original:  it may be called "Borrelia-associated early onset morphea" and is characterized by the combination of disease onset at younger age, infection with B  burgdorferi, and evident autoimmune phenomena as reflected by high-titer antinuclear antibodies.
Revised:  it may be called "Borrelia-associated early onset morphea" and is characterized by the combination of disease onset at younger age, infection with B . burgdorferi, and evident autoimmune phenomena as reflected by high-titer antinuclear antibodies.
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Original:  Because the proportion is not an incidence rate some authors note than a more appropriate term is case fatality proportion.
Revised:  Because the proportion is not an incidence rate some authors note that a more appropriate term is case fatality proportion.
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Original: In epidemiology, a case fatality rate (CFR) – sometimes called case fatality risk or case-fatality ratio – is the proportion of deaths from a certain disease compared to the total number of people diagnosed with the diseasefor a particular period .
Revised: In epidemiology, case fatality rate (CFR) – sometimes called case fatality risk or case-fatality ratio – is the proportion of deaths from a certain disease compared to the total number of people diagnosed with the diseasefor a particular period .
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Original: In epidemiology, a case fatality rate (CFR) – sometimes called case fatality risk or case-fatality ratio – is the proportion of deaths from a certain disease compared to the total number of people diagnosed with the diseasefor a particular period .
Revised: In epidemiology, a case fatality rate (CFR) – or sometimes more accurately case-fatality ratio – is the proportion of deaths from a certain disease compared to the total number of people diagnosed with the diseasefor a particular period .
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Original: In epidemiology, a case fatality rate (CFR) – sometimes called case fatality risk or case-fatality ratio – is the proportion of deaths from a certain disease compared to the total number of people diagnosed with the diseasefor a particular period .
Revised: In epidemiology, a case fatality rate (CFR) – sometimes called case fatality risk or case-fatality risk – is the proportion of deaths from a certain disease compared to the total number of people diagnosed with the diseasefor a particular period .
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Original: In epidemiology, a case fatality rate (CFR) – sometimes called case fatality risk or case-fatality ratio – is the proportion of deaths from a certain disease compared to the total number of people diagnosed with the diseasefor a particular period .
Revised: In epidemiology, a case fatality rate (CFR) – sometimes called case fatality risk or case-fatality ratio – is the proportion of people diagnosed with the diseasefor a particular period .
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Original:  A CFR is conventionally expressed as a percentage and represents a measure of disease severity . CFRs are most often used for diseases with discrete, limited-time courses, such as outbreaks of acute infections.
Revised:  A CFR is generally expressed as a percentage and represents a measure of disease severity . CFRs are most often used for diseases with discrete, limited-time courses, such as outbreaks of acute infections.
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Original:  A CFR is conventionally expressed as a percentage and represents a measure of disease severity . CFRs are most often used for diseases with discrete, limited-time courses, such as outbreaks of acute infections.
Revised:  A CFR is conventionally expressed as a percentage . It represents a measure of disease severity . CFRs are most often used for diseases with discrete, limited-time courses, such as outbreaks of acute infections.
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Original:  A CFR is conventionally expressed as a percentage and represents a measure of disease severity . CFRs are most often used for diseases with discrete, limited-time courses, such as outbreaks of acute infections.
Revised:  A CFR is conventionally expressed as a percentage and represents a measure of disease severity . CFRs are most often used for diseases with discrete, limited-time courses, such as acute infections.
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Original: ) A CFR, in contrast, is the number of dead among the number of diagnosed cases only  . Sometimes the term case fatality ratio is used interchangeably with case fatality rate, but they are not the same.
Revised: ) A CFR, in contrast, is the number of deaths among the number of diagnosed cases only . Sometimes the term case fatality ratio is used interchangeably with case fatality rate, but they are not the same.
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Original:  From a mathematical point of view, CFRs, which take values between 0 and 1 ( or 0\% and 100\%, i.e., nothing and unity), are actually a measure of risk (case fatality risk) – that is, they are a proportion of incidence, although they don't reflect a disease's incidence.
Revised:  From a mathematical point of view, by taking values between 0 and 1 ( or 0\% and 100\%, i.e., nothing and unity), are actually a measure of risk (case fatality risk) – that is, they are a proportion of incidence, although they don't reflect a disease's incidence.
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Original:  From a mathematical point of view, CFRs, which take values between 0 and 1 ( or 0\% and 100\%, i.e., nothing and unity), are actually a measure of risk (case fatality risk) – that is, they are a proportion of incidence, although they don't reflect a disease's incidence.
Revised:  From a mathematical point of view, CFRs, which take values between 0 and 1 or 0\% and 100\%, i.e., nothing and unity), are actually a measure of risk (case fatality risk) – that is, they are a proportion of incidence, although they don't reflect a disease's incidence.
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Original:  From a mathematical point of view, CFRs, which take values between 0 and 1 ( or 0\% and 100\%, i.e., nothing and unity), are actually a measure of risk (case fatality risk) – that is, they are a proportion of incidence, although they don't reflect a disease's incidence.
Revised:  From a mathematical point of view, CFRs, which take values between 0 and 1 ( or 0\% and 100\%, CFRs are actually a measure of risk (case fatality risk) – that is, they are a proportion of incidence, although they don't reflect a disease's incidence.
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Original:    Infection fatality rate Like the case fatality rate, the term infection fatality rate (IFR) also applies to infectious disease outbreaks , but represents the proportion of deaths among all infected individuals, including all asymptomatic and undiagnosed subjects.
Revised:  Infection fatality rate Like the case fatality rate, the term infection fatality rate (IFR) also applies to infectious diseases , but represents the proportion of deaths among all infected individuals, including all asymptomatic and undiagnosed subjects.
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Original:  ( Individuals who are infected, but show no symptoms, are said to have "unapparent", "silent " or "subclinical " infections and may inadvertently infect others. ) By definition, the IFR cannot exceed the CFR, because the former adds asymptomatic cases to its denominator.
Revised:  Individuals who are infected, but show no symptoms, are said to have "unapparent", "silent " or "subclinical " infections and may inadvertently infect others. ) By definition, the IFR cannot exceed the CFR, because the former adds asymptomatic cases to its denominator.
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Original:  ( Individuals who are infected, but show no symptoms, are said to have "unapparent", "silent " or "subclinical " infections and may inadvertently infect others. ) By definition, the IFR cannot exceed the CFR, because the former adds asymptomatic cases to its denominator.
Revised:  ( Individuals who are infected, but show no symptoms, are said to have inapparent, silent or subclinical infections and may inadvertently infect others. ) By definition, the IFR cannot exceed the CFR, because the former adds asymptomatic cases to its denominator.
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Original:  ( Individuals who are infected, but show no symptoms, are said to have "unapparent", "silent " or "subclinical " infections and may inadvertently infect others. ) By definition, the IFR cannot exceed the CFR, because the former adds asymptomatic cases to its denominator.
Revised:  ( Individuals who are infected, but show no symptoms, are said to have "unapparent", "silent " or "subclinical " infections and may inadvertently infect others. By definition, the IFR cannot exceed the CFR, because the former adds asymptomatic cases to its denominator.
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Original:  Naegleriasis (also known as primary amoebic meningoencephalitis), caused by the unicellular Naegleria fowleri, nearly always results in death, with a case fatality rate greater than 95\%.
Revised:  Naegleriasis (also known as primary amoebic meningoencephalitis), caused by the unicellular Naegleria fowleri, has a case fatality rate greater than 95\%.
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Original:  Rabies virus , if infecting an unvaccinated individual who does not seek treatment, is also extremely deadly, with a CFR of almost 100\% . COVID-19, thought to have a CFR of 2.1\% as of November 2021.
Revised:  Rabies virus has a CFR of almost 100\% . COVID-19, thought to have a CFR of 2.1\% as of November 2021.
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Original:  Rabies virus , if infecting an unvaccinated individual who does not seek treatment, is also extremely deadly, with a CFR of almost 100\% . COVID-19, thought to have a CFR of 2.1\% as of November 2021.
Revised:  Rabies virus , if infecting an unvaccinated individual who does not seek treatment, is also extremely deadly, with a CFR of almost 100\% COVID-19, thought to have a CFR of 2.1\% as of November 2021.
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Original:  Rabies virus , if infecting an unvaccinated individual who does not seek treatment, is also extremely deadly, with a CFR of almost 100\% . COVID-19, thought to have a CFR of 2.1\% as of November 2021.
Revised:  Rabies virus , if infecting an unvaccinated individual who does not seek treatment, is also extremely deadly, with a CFR of almost 100\% . in unvaccinated individuals.
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Original:  COVID-19, whether treated or not, currently has a CFR of about  .
Revised:  COVID-19, whether treated or not, has a CFR of about .
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Original:  COVID-19, whether treated or not, has a CFR of about as of . Legionnaires' disease has a CFR of about 15\%.
Revised:  Legionnaires' disease has a CFR of about 15\%.
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Original:  The preliminary CFR, for example, of a newly occurring disease with a high daily increase and long resolution time would be substantially lower than the final CFR, if unresolved cases were not excluded from the calculation, but added to the denominator only   .
Revised:  The preliminary CFR, for example, of a newly occurring disease with a high daily increase and long resolution time would be substantially lower than the final CFR, if unresolved cases were not excluded from the calculation, but added to the denominator only . .
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Original: External links Souèloum Diagho, the poet of the desert.
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Original:  Category:French-language poets Category:Living people Category:Malian poets Category:Tuareg Category:Year of birth missing (living people)%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% fr:Souéloum Diag
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Original:  Neither is certain, one is past, the other awaits. 
Revised:  Neither is certain, one is past, the other awaits. Note
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Original: Tazeyen bouissenes as war tizeyen ilssawanes Wounds heal and words endure.
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Original:  As " Rhodesia House " it served as the High Commission of Southern Rhodesia from 1923 until the Rhodesian UDI on 11 November 1965.
Revised:  As " 'Rhodesia House' " it served as the High Commission of Southern Rhodesia from 1923 until the Rhodesian UDI on 11 November 1965.
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Original:  As "'Rhodesia House '" it served as the High Commission of Southern Rhodesia from 1923 until the Rhodesian UDI on 11 November 1965.
Revised:  As Rhodesia House it served as the High Commission of Southern Rhodesia from 1923 until the Rhodesian UDI on 11 November 1965.
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Original: The South African Business Day newspaper reported in 2002 that the deeds of the building had been given to the Libyan leader Muammar al-Gaddafi as surety for oil supplied to Zimbabwe by the Libyan state oil company Tamoil.
Revised: The South African Business Day newspaper reported in 2002 that the deeds of the building had been given to the Libyan leader Muammar Gaddafi as surety for oil supplied to Zimbabwe by the Libyan state oil company Tamoil.
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Original: Rhodesian High Commission Zimbabwe House was originally the British Medical Association Building.
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Original: Rhodesian High Commission As Rhodesia House it served as the chancery of the High Commission of Southern Rhodesia from 1923 until the Rhodesian UDI on 11 November 1965.
Revised: Rhodesian High Commission As Rhodesia House it housed of the High Commission of Southern Rhodesia from 1923 until the Rhodesian UDI on 11 November 1965.
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Original:  It simply became a Representative Office with no official diplomatic status, until the colony gained independence as Zimbabwe in 1980.
Revised:  It simply became a Representative Office with no official diplomatic status, until the country became Zimbabwe in 1980.
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Original: Klein, Martin A., Islam and Imperialism in Senegal, Sine-Saloum, 1847-1914, Edinburgh University Press, pp 55-59, ISBN 85224 029 5 Bibliography Sarr, Alioune, "Histoire du Sine-Saloum", (Introduction, bibliographie et Notes par Charles Becker), Bulletin de Institut Fondamental d'Afrique Noire, Tome 46, Serie B, n° 3-4, 1986–1987 Adande, Alexis B.A., Arinze, Emmanuel, "The place of Women in the Museum of Saint-Louis", [in]
Revised: Klein, Martin A., Islam and Imperialism in Senegal, Sine-Saloum, 1847-1914, Edinburgh University Press, pp 55-59, ISBN 0-85224-029-5 Bibliography Sarr, Alioune, "Histoire du Sine-Saloum", (Introduction, bibliographie et Notes par Charles Becker), Bulletin de Institut Fondamental d'Afrique Noire, Tome 46, Serie B, n° 3-4, 1986–1987 Adande, Alexis B.A., Arinze, Emmanuel, "The place of Women in the Museum of Saint-Louis", [in]
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Original: The Battle of LogandèmeIn the French-language works that confrontation is also known as the "Battle of Fatick" or "combat of Fatick" (18 May 1859See Klein, pp 55-57.
Revised: The Battle of LogandèmeIn the French-language works that confrontation is also known as the "Battle of Fatick" or "combat of Fatick" (18 May 1859)See Klein, pp 55-57.
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Original:  The battle took place on 18 May 1859 ) was an uprising led by Maad a Sinig Kumba Ndoffene Famak Joof, king of Sine, against the French Empire.
Revised:  The battle took place on 18 May 1859 was an uprising led by Maad a Sinig Kumba Ndoffene Famak Joof, king of Sine, against the French Empire.
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Original: Bibliography Sarr, Alioune, "Histoire du Sine-Saloum", (Introduction, bibliographie et Notes par Charles Becker), Bulletin de Institut Fondamental d'Afrique Noire, Tome 46, Serie B, n° 3–4, 1986–1987 Adande, Alexis B.A. , Arinze, Emmanuel, "The place of Women in the Museum of Saint-Louis", [in]
Revised: Bibliography Sarr, Alioune, "Histoire du Sine-Saloum", (Introduction, bibliographie et Notes par Charles Becker), Bulletin de Institut Fondamental d'Afrique Noire, Tome 46, Serie B, n° 3–4, 1986–1987 Adande, Alexis , Arinze, Emmanuel, "The place of Women in the Museum of Saint-Louis", [in]
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Original:  Museums & urban culture in West Africa, Institut africain international, Oxford, 2002, pp 145-146 Louis Faidherbe decided to launch wars against the  kingdoms of Sine and Saloum, and declared all previously signed treaties between the two kingdoms and France null and void and asked for the establishment of new treaties on Faidherbe's terms.
Revised:  Museums & urban culture in West Africa, Institut africain international, Oxford, 2002, pp 145-146 Louis Faidherbe decided to launch wars against the Serer kingdoms of Sine and Saloum, and declared all previously signed treaties between the two kingdoms and France null and void and asked for the establishment of new treaties on Faidherbe's terms.
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Original: No. 8 Brofomba consisted of refugees from Eguafo and Simbo , who fled to Elmina during the Fante War of 1810.
Revised: No. 8 Brofomba consisted of refugees from Eguafo and Simbiw , who fled to Elmina during the Fante War of 1810.
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Original: Stanley Shaloff, "The Cape Coast Asafo Company Riot of 1932", The International Journal of African Historical Studies, Vol. 7, No. 4 (1974), pp. 591–607.
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