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Original:  Kostrad At the end of 1964, a meeting of RPKAD officers was held and Moerdani was invited along.
Revised: Move to the Kostrad At the end of 1964, a meeting of RPKAD officers was held and Moerdani was invited along.
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Original:  Kostrad Moerdani's move from RPKAD to Kostrad had been a sudden one and there had been no position prepared for him.
Revised:  Moerdani's move from RPKAD to Kostrad had been a sudden one and there had been no position prepared for him.
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Original:  Whilst on the other it was characterised by 'indirect rule ' which was rural in nature and involved the incorporation of 'natives' into a 'state enforced customary order' enforced by a 'rural tribal authority' which he termed as 'decentralised despotism'.
Revised:  Whilst on the other it was characterised by indirect rule which was rural in nature and involved the incorporation of 'natives' into a 'state enforced customary order' enforced by a 'rural tribal authority' which he termed as 'decentralised despotism'.
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Original:  Challenging conventional perceptions of apartheid in South Africa as exceptional, he argues that apartheid was the generic form of the colonial state in Africa, encompassing both British 'indirect rule ' and French 'association' strategies . Personal life He is married to Mira Nair, the Indian film director and producer.
Revised:  Challenging conventional perceptions of apartheid in South Africa as exceptional, he argues that apartheid was the generic form of a European colony in Africa, encompassing both British 'indirect rule ' and French 'association' strategies . Personal life He is married to Mira Nair, the Indian film director and producer.
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Original:  Challenging conventional perceptions of apartheid in South Africa as exceptional, he argues that apartheid was the generic form of the colonial state in Africa, encompassing both British 'indirect rule ' and French 'association' strategies . Personal life He is married to Mira Nair, the Indian film director and producer.
Revised:  Challenging conventional perceptions of apartheid in South Africa as exceptional, he argues that apartheid was the generic form of the colonial state in Africa, encompassing aspects of indirect rule and association . Personal life He is married to Mira Nair, the Indian film director and producer.
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Original:  Challenging conventional perceptions of apartheid in South Africa as exceptional, he argues that apartheid was the generic form of the colonial state in Africa, encompassing both British 'indirect rule ' and French 'association' strategies . Personal life He is married to Mira Nair, the Indian film director and producer.
Revised:  Challenging conventional perceptions of apartheid in South Africa as exceptional, he argues that apartheid was the generic form of the colonial state in Africa, encompassing both British 'indirect rule ' and French 'association' strategies . Personal life Mamdani is married to Mira Nair, the Indian film director and producer.
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Original:  Challenging conventional perceptions of apartheid in South Africa as exceptional, he argues that apartheid was the generic form of the colonial state in Africa, encompassing both British 'indirect rule ' and French 'association' strategies . Personal life He is married to Mira Nair, the Indian film director and producer.
Revised:  Challenging conventional perceptions of apartheid in South Africa as exceptional, he argues that apartheid was the generic form of the colonial state in Africa, encompassing both British 'indirect rule ' and French 'association' strategies . Personal life He is married to Mira Nair, an Indian film director and producer.
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Original:  They met in Kampala, Uganda, in 1989 when Nair was researching for her film, Mississippi Masala.
Revised:  They met in Kampala, Uganda, in 1989 when Nair was conducting research for her film, Mississippi Masala.
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Original: Robert Fudali (born 13 December 1969)  better known as Rob Darken, is a Polish musician and singer, best known for being the frontman for black metal band Graveland.
Revised: Robert Fudali (born 13 December 1969) , better known as Rob Darken, is a Polish musician and singer, best known for being the frontman for black metal band Graveland.
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Original: Black metal musicians Category:Black metal controversies Category:Living people Category:Polish male singers Category:Polish heavy metal singers Category:English-language singers from Poland Category:Polish lyricists Category:1969 births Category:Polish neopagans Category:Performers of neopagan music Category:Male bass guitarists Category:Neo-Nazism in Poland Category:White supremacists Category:Critics of Christianity Category:Anti-Christian sentiment in Euro
Revised: Black metal musicians Category:Black metal controversies Category:Living people Category:Polish male singers Category:Polish heavy metal singers Category:English-language singers from Poland Category:Polish lyricists Category:1969 births Category:Polish neopagans Category:Performers of neopagan music Category:Male bass guitarists Category:Neo-Nazism in Poland Category:White supremacists Category:Critics of Christianity Category:Anti-Christian sentiment in Europe Category:Polish male guitaris
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Original:  It is against logic and eternal law of evolution"Decibel Magazine, March 2006 and "If you are White proud of being White and proud of your forefathers faith, if you politically incorrect, if you dare to criticize the politicians and it you point at the existence of a strong powerful Jewish lobby supporting Israel – you are called nazi and anti-Semite.
Revised:  It is against logic and eternal law of evolution"Decibel Magazine, March 2006 and "If you are White proud of being White and proud of your forefathers faith, if you politically incorrect, if you dare to criticize the politicians and it you point at the existence of a strong powerful Jewish lobby supporting Israel – you are called Nazi and anti-Semite.
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Original:  However, he has made statements to contradict this accusation, even speaking out against the Third Reich and their ideology : "I do not see any point in referring to NS because I do not see any point in referring to any ideologies that lost.
Revised:  In response to these accusations he has stated : "I do not see any point in referring to NS because I do not see any point in referring to any ideologies that lost.
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Original: In 1870, the General Treasury took over paper money production and issued the only notes denominated in centesimos .
Revised: In 1870, the General Treasury took over paper money production and issued the only notes denominated in centésimos .
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Original:  These were for 50 centesimos .
Revised:  These were for 50 centésimos .
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Original:  Paraguay then decimalized, with 100 centesimos = 1 peso.
Revised:  Paraguay then decimalized, with 100 centésimos = 1 peso.
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Original:  A. H. 169-192 (C.E. Bosworth) Vol. 31 The War Between Brothers, A. D. 809-813 - A. H. 193-198 (Michael Fishbein) Vol. 32 The Absolutists in Power: The Caliphate of al-Ma'mun, A.D. 813-33 - A.H. 198-213 ( C.E. Bosworth) Vol. 33 Storm and Stress Along the Northern Frontiers of the Abbasid Caliphate (C.E. Bosworth) Vol. 34 Incipient Decline: The Caliphates of al-Wathig, al-Mutawakkil and al-Muntasir, A.D. 841-863-A.
Revised:  A. H. 169-192 (C.E. Bosworth) Vol. 31 The War Between Brothers, A. D. 809-813 - A. H. 193-198 (Michael Fishbein) Vol. 32 The Absolutists in Power: The Caliphate of al-Ma'mun, A.D. 813-33 - A.H. 198-213 ( Clifford Edmund Bosworth) Vol. 33 Storm and Stress Along the Northern Frontiers of the Abbasid Caliphate (C.E. Bosworth) Vol. 34 Incipient Decline: The Caliphates of al-Wathig, al-Mutawakkil and al-Muntasir, A.D. 841-863-A.
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Original:  Ahmad b. Ja'far al-Farghani, a Turk student of al-Tabari.
Revised:  Ahmad b. Ja'far al-Farghani, a student of al-Tabari.
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Original:  Part 1", Published by Allen and Unwin, 1975. pg 722:In the meantime another author, Tabari, Persian by origin, had been unobtrusively at work on two monumental pieces of writing, a commentary on the Koran .. historian Muhammad ibn Jarir al-Tabari (225-310 A.H., 838-923 CE ).
Revised:  Part 1", Published by Allen and Unwin, 1975. pg 722:In the meantime another author, Tabari, Persian by origin, had been unobtrusively at work on two monumental pieces of writing, a commentary on the Koran .. historian Muhammad ibn Jarir al-Tabari (225-310 A.H., 838-923 AD ).
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Original: 21st century Year Date Event 2002 May Latvian singer Marija Naumova won the annual Eurovision song competition.
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Original:  870 The legendary Danish king Hadingus wages wars in the Baltic and achieves victory against Curonian tyrant Loker (Loker, Curetum tyrannus) and king Handwanus of Duna (Duna urbs).
Revised:  870 The ok Danish king Hadingus wages wars in the Baltic and achieves victory against Curonian tyrant Loker (Loker, Curetum tyrannus) and king Handwanus of Duna (Duna urbs).
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Original:  1236 Battle of Saule: The Brothers of the Sword were defeated in Lithuania by the combined forces of the Lithuanians and Semigallians.
Revised:  1236 Battle of Saule: The Brothers of the Sword were defeated in Lithuania by the combined forces of Samogitians and Semigallians.
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Original:  1217 The Brothers of the Sword and their Livonian and Latgalian allies defeated the Estonians at Viljandi.
Revised:  1217 The Brothers of the Sword and their Livonian and Latgalian allies defeated Estonians at Viljandi.
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Original: The Gambia rejoined the commonwealth as of February of 2018.
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Original:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were:  John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966)  Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the  monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were:  John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966)  Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the  monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were: John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were:  John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966)  Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the  monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were: John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the Gambian monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:   Dawda Jawara, the prime minister (and head of government) from 1965, became the first President of the Gambia.
Revised:  Sir Dawda Jawara, the prime minister (and head of government) from 1965, became the first President of the Gambia.
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Original:  The two Governors-General who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the Gambian monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the Gambian monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  The two Governors-General who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the Gambian monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  The two Governors-General who held office in the Gambia were: John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the Gambian monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  The two Governors-General who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the Gambian monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  The two Governors-General who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the Gambian monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  The two Governors-General who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the Gambian monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  The two Governors-General who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  Sir Dawda Jawara, the prime minister (and head of government) from 1965, became the first President of the Gambia.
Revised:  Dawda Jawara, the prime minister (and head of government) from 1965, became the first President of the Gambia.
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Original:  The first referendum in 1965, with 65.85\% in favour and 34.15  against, failed to reach the two-thirds majority needed to pass.
Revised:  The first referendum in 1965, with 65.85\% in favour and 34.15 \% against, failed to reach the two-thirds majority needed to pass.
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Original: Between 1965 and 1970, The Gambia was an independent sovereign state that shared its head of state with the United Kingdom and other states headed by Queen Elizabeth II.
Revised: Between 1965 and 1970, the Gambia was an independent sovereign state that shared its head of state with the United Kingdom and other states headed by Queen Elizabeth II.
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Original:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were:  John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966)  Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  The Governors-General who held office in the Gambia were: John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were:  John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966)  Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were: Sir John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were:  John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966)  Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
Revised:  Governors-general who held office in the Gambia were: John Warburton Paul (18 February 1965 – 9 February 1966) Sir Farimang Mamadi Singateh ( 9 February 1966 – 24 April 1970) After two referenda on the issue, the monarchy was abolished on 24 April 1970, when the Gambia became a republic within the Commonwealth.
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Original:  Gambia Category:  Government of the Gambia Category:History of the Gambia Category:Politics of the Gambia Category:The Gambia and the Commonwealth of Nations Category:The Gambia–United Kingdom relations Category:1965 establishments in the Gambia Category:20th-century disestablishments in the Gambia Category:1970 disestablishments in Africa Category:Former polities of the Cold W
Revised:  Gambia Category: Government of the Gambia Category:History of the Gambia Category:Politics of the Gambia Category:The Gambia and the Commonwealth of Nations Category:The Gambia–United Kingdom relations Category:1965 establishments in the Gambia Category:20th-century disestablishments in the Gambia Category:1970 disestablishments in the Gambia Category:Former polities of the Cold W
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Original:  Sierra Leone shared the Sovereign with the other Commonwealth realms , including the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Sierra Leone shared the Sovereign with other countries , including the United Kingdom.
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Original: The link with the British monarchy was abolished on the promulgation of the 1971 constitution and Prime Minister Siaka Stevens became the first President of Sierra Leone.
Revised: The monarchy was abolished on the promulgation of the 1971 constitution and Prime Minister Siaka Stevens became the first President of Sierra Leone.
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Original:  The British monarch, Elizabeth II, remained the head of state of Sierra Leone and was represented in Sierra Leone by a Governor-General.
Revised:  Elizabeth II, remained the head of state of Sierra Leone and was represented in Sierra Leone by a Governor-General.
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Original:  Lansana was ousted a few days later by junior military officers who invite Andrew Juxon-Smith, a senior officer on leave, to return and head a provisional government, the National Reformation Council (NRC).
Revised:  Lansana was ousted a few days later by junior military officers who invited Andrew Juxon-Smith, a senior officer on leave, to return and head a provisional government, the National Reformation Council (NRC).
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Original:  Sierra Leone became a republic within the Commonwealth on the promulgation of the 1971 constitution and Prime Minister Siaka Stevens became the first President of Sierra Leone .
Revised:  Sierra Leone became a republic within the Commonwealth on the promulgation of the 1971 constitution and Prime Minister Siaka Stevens became the first President of Sierra Leone 
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Original:  References Bibliography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Notes External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  References Bibliography%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Notes External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:
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Original:  When British rule ended in 1964, by the Malawi Independence Act 1964, the Nyasaland Protectorate, formerly a constituent of the Federation of Rhodesia and Nyasaland, became an independent Commonwealth realm .
Revised:  When British rule ended in 1964, by the Malawi Independence Act 1964, the Nyasaland Protectorate, formerly a constituent of the Federation of Rhodesia and Nyasaland, became an independent sovereign state .
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Original:  The British monarch was head of state . Malawi shared the sovereign, Queen Elizabeth II, with the other Commonwealth realms.
Revised:  The British monarch was head of state and Malawi shared the sovereign, Queen Elizabeth II, with the other Commonwealth realms.
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Original:  The royal succession was governed by the same rules as the succession to the British throne.
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Original:  Elizabeth II did not reside in or visit Malawi in the 1960s but she did visit in 1979 (22–25 July) as Head of the Commonwealth . Hastings Banda held office as prime minister (and head of government) of Malawi during this period .
Revised:  Elizabeth II did not reside in or visit Malawi in the 1960s but she did visit in 1979 (22–25 July) . Hastings Banda held office as prime minister (and head of government) of Malawi during this period .
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Original:  Elizabeth II did not reside in or visit Malawi in the 1960s but she did visit in 1979 (22–25 July) as Head of the Commonwealth . Hastings Banda held office as prime minister (and head of government) of Malawi during this period .
Revised:  Elizabeth II did not reside in or visit Malawi in the 1960s but she did visit in 1979 (22–25 July) as Head of the Commonwealth . Hastings Banda held office as prime minister (and head of government) .
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Original: British Mauritius was a British crown colony off the Southeast coast of Africa.
Revised:  Mauritius was a British crown colony off the Southeast coast of Africa.
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Original:  Formerly part of the French colonial empire, the crown colony of Mauritius was established after the British invaded in November 1810 during the Invasion of Isle de France and the subsequent Treaty of Paris that followed.
Revised:  Formerly part of the French colonial empire, the Crown Colony of Mauritius was established after the British invaded in November 1810 during the Invasion of Isle de France and the subsequent Treaty of Paris that followed.
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Original: Mauritius was a British crown colony off the Southeast coast of Africa.
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Original:  Formerly part of the French colonial empire, the Crown Colony of Mauritius was established after the British invaded in November 1810 during the Invasion of Isle de France and the subsequent Treaty of Paris that followed . British rule ended on 12 March 1968, when Mauritius became independent.
Revised:  Formerly part of the French colonial empire, British rule in Mauritius was established after the British invaded in November 1810 during the Invasion of Isle de France and the subsequent Treaty of Paris that followed . British rule ended on 12 March 1968, when Mauritius became independent.
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