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Original: One passenger, Pilar Abaurrea, described the landing in a telephone interview with the Associated Press  saying, "All of a sudden, when it hit the ground, the plane was kind of bouncing, someone said the plane was skidding and there was panic."
Revised: One passenger, Pilar Abaurrea, described the landing in a telephone interview with the Associated Press , saying, "All of a sudden, when it hit the ground, the plane was kind of bouncing, someone said the plane was skidding and there was panic."
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Original:  Abaurrea said that the flight had encountered turbulence so severe that the drinks service was suspended three times and then cancelled completely
Revised:  Abaurrea also noted that the flight had encountered turbulence so severe that the drinks service was suspended three times and then cancelled completely
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Original: Detainees at Camp X-Ray in January 2002 The New York Times newspaper says the Obama administration may not be able to close the United States military prison at Guantanamo Bay Cuba and transfer terrorism suspects held there until 2011 at the earliest.
Revised: Detainees at Camp X-Ray in January 2002 The New York Times newspaper says the Obama administration may not be able to close the United States military prison at Guantánamo Bay, Cuba and transfer terrorism suspects held there until 2011 at the earliest.
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Original:  The administration wants to buy the prison as part of efforts to fulfill President Barack Obama's order to close Guantanamo Bay.
Revised:  The administration wants to buy the prison as part of efforts to fulfill President Barack Obama's order to close Guantánamo Bay.
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Original:  The White House contends that the current prison at Guantanamo has become a terrorist recruiting symbol.
Revised:  The White House contends that the current prison at Guantánamo has become a terrorist recruiting symbol.
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Original:  However, some moderate Democrats have also raised concerns, Representative Loretta Sanchez, Democrat from California cited security concerns saying , “Particularly ] making something on U.S. soil an attraction for Al Qaeda and terrorists to go after — inciting them to attack something on U.S. soil — that ’ s a problem, and we need to think it through.
Revised:  However, some moderate Democrats have also raised concerns, Representative Loretta Sanchez, Democrat from California cited security concerns saying " ] making something on U.S. soil an attraction for Al Qaeda and terrorists to go after — inciting them to attack something on U.S. soil — that ’ s a problem, and we need to think it through.
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Original:  However, some moderate Democrats have also raised concerns, Representative Loretta Sanchez, Democrat from California cited security concerns saying , “Particularly ] making something on U.S. soil an attraction for Al Qaeda and terrorists to go after — inciting them to attack something on U.S. soil — that ’ s a problem, and we need to think it through.
Revised:  However, some moderate Democrats have also raised concerns, Representative Loretta Sanchez, Democrat from California cited security concerns saying , “Particularly p] making something on U.S. soil an attraction for Al Qaeda and terrorists to go after — inciting them to attack something on U.S. soil — that ’ s a problem, and we need to think it through.
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Original:  However, some moderate Democrats have also raised concerns, Representative Loretta Sanchez, Democrat from California cited security concerns saying , “Particularly ] making something on U.S. soil an attraction for Al Qaeda and terrorists to go after — inciting them to attack something on U.S. soil — that ’ s a problem, and we need to think it through.
Revised:  However, some moderate Democrats have also raised concerns, Representative Loretta Sanchez, Democrat from California cited security concerns saying , “Particularly ]articularly making something on U.S. soil an attraction for Al Qaeda and terrorists to go after — inciting them to attack something on U.S. soil — that ’ s a problem, and we need to think it through.
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Original:  However, some moderate Democrats have also raised concerns, Representative Loretta Sanchez, Democrat from California cited security concerns saying , “Particularly ] making something on U.S. soil an attraction for Al Qaeda and terrorists to go after — inciting them to attack something on U.S. soil — that ’ s a problem, and we need to think it through.
Revised:  However, some moderate Democrats have also raised concerns, Representative Loretta Sanchez, Democrat from California cited security concerns saying , “Particularly ] making something on U.S. soil an attraction for Al Qaeda and terrorists to go after — inciting them to attack something on U.S. soil — that ' s a problem, and we need to think it through.
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Original:  ” Senator Jim Webb, Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism , " Do  not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons.
Revised:  " Senator Jim Webb, Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism , " Do not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons.
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Original:  ” Senator Jim Webb, Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism , " Do  not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons.
Revised:  ” Senator Jim Webb, Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism " Do not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons.
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Original:  ” Senator Jim Webb, Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism , " Do  not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons.
Revised:  ” Senator Jim Webb, Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism , " d not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons.
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Original:  ” Senator Jim Webb, Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism , " Do  not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons.
Revised:  ” Senator Jim Webb, Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism , " Do o not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons.
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Original:  ” Guantanamo , which now has some 200 inmates, has been harshly criticized by human rights advocates for the alleged abuse and mistreatment of detainees.
Revised:  " Guantanamo , which now has some 200 inmates, has been harshly criticized by human rights advocates for the alleged abuse and mistreatment of detainees.
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Original:  ” Guantanamo , which now has some 200 inmates, has been harshly criticized by human rights advocates for the alleged abuse and mistreatment of detainees.
Revised:  ” Guantánamo , which now has some 200 inmates, has been harshly criticized by human rights advocates for the alleged abuse and mistreatment of detainees.
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Original:  But the newspaper says the administration is more focused on securing funding for the Illinois facility in appropriations bills for the 2011 fiscal year, which will not be debated until late 2010.
Revised:  However, the newspaper says the administration is more focused on securing funding for the Illinois facility in appropriations bills for the 2011 fiscal year, which will not be debated until late 2010.
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Original:  However, the Times says the United States Bureau of Prisons does not have enough money to pay Illinois for the facility, which would cost about $150 million.
Revised:  However, The Times says the United States Bureau of Prisons does not have enough money to pay Illinois for the facility, which would cost about $150 million.
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Original:  However, the Times says the United States Bureau of Prisons does not have enough money to pay Illinois for the facility, which would cost about $150 million.
Revised:  However, the Times says the United States Bureau of Prisons does not have enough money to pay the state for the facility, which would cost about $150 million.
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Original:  The report says the White House approached lawmakers on the United States House of Representatives Appropriations Committee several weeks ago about adding $200 million to the 2010 military spending bill for the project , but Democrat leaders refused,  due to the project's controversial nature.
Revised:  The report says the White House approached lawmakers on the United States House of Representatives Appropriations Committee several weeks ago about adding $200 million to the 2010 military spending bill for the project . Democratic leaders refused, due to the project's controversial nature.
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Original:  The administration wants to buy the prison as part of efforts to fulfill President Barack Obama's order to close Guantánamo Bay.
Revised:  The administration wants to buy the prison as part of efforts to fulfill President Obama's order to close Guantánamo Bay.
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Original:  The plan to close the prison and house the terror suspects in the United States has been met with fierce opposition by some members of Congress.
Revised:  The plan to close the prison and house the terror suspects in the U.S. has been met with fierce opposition by some members of Congress.
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Original:  Republicans say the closure of the prison and moving of inmates to American soil will make the United States a target for terrorists.
Revised:  Republicans say the closure of the prison and moving of inmates to American soil will make the country a greater target for terrorists.
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Original:  Senator Jim Webb,  Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism "[d]o not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons."
Revised:  Senator Jim Webb, a Democrat from Virginia recently stated that suspects of terrorism "[d]o not belong in our country, they do not belong in our courts, and they do not belong in our prisons."
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Original:  It also pointed out that it would save taxpayers money as the Department of Defense currently pays $150 million to run the Guantanamo prison, while it will only cost $ 75 million to run the prison in Illinois.
Revised:  It also pointed out that it would save taxpayers money as the Department of Defense currently pays $150 million to run the Guantánamo prison, while it will only cost $ 75 million to run the prison in Illinois.
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Original:  The death brings the total number of people from Northern Ireland that have died as a result of having the disease to seventeen, taking into account one person who was in Spain and one person who was in England  .
Revised:  The death brings the total number of people from Northern Ireland that have died as a result of having the disease to 17, also including one person who was in Spain and one person who was in England .
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Original:  The death brings the total number of people from Northern Ireland that have died as a result of having the disease to seventeen, taking into account one person who was in Spain and one person who was in England  .
Revised:  The death brings the total number of people from Northern Ireland that have died as a result of having the disease to seventeen, taking into account one person who was in Spain and one person who was in England at the times of their deaths .
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Original: Lede File:CCD.jpg|File photo of a charge coupled device]] A controversy has arisen regarding this year's Nobel Prize in Physics.
Revised:  File:CCD.jpg|File photo of a charge coupled device]] A controversy has arisen regarding this year's Nobel Prize in Physics.
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Original:  Part 1 Gordon and Tompsett claim that the Royal Swedish Academy of Sciences made a mistake by awarding the prize.
Revised:  Gordon and Tompsett claim that the Royal Swedish Academy of Sciences made a mistake by awarding the prize.
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Original:  He demonstrated on them," and suggests that the prize be awarded to him instead. Part 2
Revised:  He demonstrated on them," and suggests that the prize be awarded to him instead. 
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Original:  Fellow scientists contest whether Canadian George E. Smith and American Willard Boyle deserved the prize.
Revised:  Two fellow scientists contest whether Canadian George E. Smith and American Willard Boyle deserved the prize.
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Original: Boyle apparently received credit for the invention because of his position as head of the laboratory, and Gordon claims that he actually had very little, if anything, to do with the CCD's use in imaging.
Revised: Boyle allegedly received credit for the invention because of his position as head of the laboratory, and Gordon claims that he actually had very little, if anything, to do with the CCD's use in imaging.
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Original:  He demonstrated on them," and suggests that the prize be awarded to him instead  [  .
Revised:  He demonstrated on them," and suggests that the prize be awarded to him instead . [ .
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Original: The peace drop was timed to coincide with the birthday of Thailands King Bhumibol Adulyadej, and has generated much interest from the rest of the countries predominantly Buddhist population.
Revised: The peace drop was timed to coincide with the birthday of Thailands King Bhumibol Adulyadej, and has generated much interest from the rest of the country's predominantly Buddhist population.
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Original: The Thai government dropped millions of origami cranes as a gesture of goodwill on the predominantly Muslim population of its three southern provinces .
Revised: Millions of origami cranes as a gesture of goodwill on the predominantly Muslim population of its three southern provinces .
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Original: The Thai government dropped millions of origami cranes as a gesture of goodwill on the predominantly Muslim population of its three southern provinces .
Revised: The Thai government dropped millions of origami cranes have been dropped on Thailand's three southern provinces .
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Original:   The peace drop was timed to coincide with the birthday of Thailands King Bhumibol Adulyadej, and has generated much interest from the rest of the country's predominantly Buddhist population.
Revised:  The dispersal was timed to coincide with the birthday of Thailands King Bhumibol Adulyadej, and has generated much interest from the rest of the country's predominantly Buddhist population.
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Original:   The peace drop was timed to coincide with the birthday of Thailands King Bhumibol Adulyadej, and has generated much interest from the rest of the country's predominantly Buddhist population.
Revised:  The peace drop was timed to coincide with the birthday of Thailand's King Bhumibol Adulyadej, and has generated much interest from the rest of the country's predominantly Buddhist population.
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Original:  The government blamed their deaths on physical weakness due to fasting in the month of Ramadan as the cause, as most if not all the deaths occured during transport of up to 500 arrested protestors.
Revised:  The government blamed their deaths on physical weakness due to fasting in the month of Ramadan as the cause, as most if not all the deaths occurred during transport of up to 500 arrested protestors.
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Original: More than 50,000 people are expected to gather in Srebrenca today to remember the massacre of over 8,000 Muslims, mostly men and boys, which happened 11th July in 1995.
Revised: More than 50,000 people are expected to gather in Srebrenica today to remember the massacre of over 8,000 Muslims, mostly men and boys, which happened 11th July in 1995.
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Original: More than 50,000 people are expected to gather in Srebrenica today to remember the massacre of over 8,000 Muslims, mostly men and boys, which happened  11th July in 1995.
Revised: More than 50,000 people are expected to gather in Srebrenica today to remember the massacre of over 8,000 Muslims, mostly men and boys, which happened on 11th July in 1995.
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Original: More than 50,000 people are expected to gather in Srebrenica today to remember the massacre of over 8,000 Muslims, mostly men and boys, which happened  11th July in 1995.
Revised: More than 50,000 people are expected to gather in Srebrenica today to remember the massacre of over 8,000 Muslims, mostly men and boys, which happened 11th July 1995.
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Original:  This is considered the worst atrocity in Europe since the end of World War II. 610 victims of the massacres will be buried today after their bodies were recovered from multiple mass graves. 1,300 bodies have been identified with DNA testing but 4,500 body bags of human remain  need to be identified Serbian president Boris Tadic will be attending the memorial.
Revised:  This is considered the worst atrocity in Europe since the end of World War II. 610 victims of the massacres will be buried today after their bodies were recovered from multiple mass graves. 1,300 bodies have been identified with DNA testing but 4,500 body bags of human remain still need to be identified Serbian president Boris Tadic will be attending the memorial.
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Original:  This has caused outrage among Serbian hardliners but applaud by the international community.
Revised:  This has caused outrage among Serbian hardliners but been applauded by the international community.
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Original:  Mr. Karadzic and Gen  Mladic, the men accused of overseeing the massacre, have not been captured
Revised:  Radovan Karadzic and Gen Mladic, the men accused of overseeing the massacre, have not been captured
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Original:  Mr. Karadzic and Gen  Mladic, the men accused of overseeing the massacre, have not been captured
Revised:  Mr. Karadzic and Gen Ratko Mladic, the men accused of overseeing the massacre, have not been captured
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Original: More than 50,000 people are expected to gather in Srebrenica today to remember the massacre of over 8,000 Muslims, mostly men and boys, which happened on 11th July 1995.
Revised: Tens of thousands of people gathered in Srebrenica today to remember the massacre of over 8,000 Muslims, mostly men and boys, which happened on 11th July 1995.
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Original:  This is considered the worst atrocity in Europe since the end of World War II. 610 victims of the massacres will be buried today after their bodies were recovered from multiple mass graves. 1,300 bodies have been identified with DNA testing but 4,500 body bags of human remain still need to be identified Serbian president Boris Tadic will be attending the memorial .
Revised:  This is considered the worst atrocity in Europe since the end of World War II. 610 victims of the massacres were buried today after their bodies were recovered from multiple mass graves. 1,300 bodies have been identified with DNA testing but 4,500 body bags of human remain still need to be identified Serbian president Boris Tadic will be attending the memorial .
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Original:  This has caused outrage among Serbian hardliners but  been applauded by the international community.
Revised:  This has caused outrage among Serbian hardliners but has been applauded by the international community.
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Original:  French, Dutch and UK ministers are also present, as well as former US Balkan envoy Richard Holbrook.
Revised:  French, Dutch and UK ministers were also present, as well as former US Balkan envoy Richard Holbrook.
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Original:   Security is tight after two bombs were found in the area last week.
Revised:  Security was tight after two bombs were found in the area last week.
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Original:  More than 1,500 policemen are patrolling the area . Radovan Karadzic and Gen Ratko Mladic, the men accused of overseeing the massacre, have not been captured
Revised:  More than 1,500 policemen are patrolling the area Radovan Karadzic and Gen Ratko Mladic, the men accused of overseeing the massacre, have not been captured
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Original:  More than 1,500 policemen are patrolling the area . Radovan Karadzic and Gen Ratko Mladic, the men accused of overseeing the massacre, have not been captured
Revised:  More than 1,500 policemen are patrolling the area . 
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Original:  It was the  Vikings' 41st consecutive regular season victory since the 2007–2008 season, bringing their undefeated record up to 14– 0 
Revised:  It was the Geneva Vikings' 41st consecutive regular season victory since the 2007–2008 season, bringing their undefeated record up to 14– 0 
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Original:  It was the  Vikings' 41st consecutive regular season victory since the 2007–2008 season, bringing their undefeated record up to 14– 0 
Revised:  It was the Vikings' 41st consecutive regular season victory since the 2007–2008 season, bringing their undefeated record up to 14– 0. 
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Original:  After eight straight possessions in which they scored at least two points each, the Vikings had a 19–7 run that brought their score up to 47–29 before the end of the third quarter   
Revised:  After eight straight possessions in which they scored at least two points each, the Vikings had a 19–7 run that brought their score up to 47–29 before the end of the third quarter . 
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Original:  It was reported that he was involved in a fatal accident at Pengoilan Farm - his parents' farm - on Wednesday at around 1430 GMT. "I went over their and his parents Gareth and Meryl were very upset," said Jan Hughes.
Revised:  It was reported that he was involved in a fatal accident at Pengoilan Farm - the boy's parents' farm - on Wednesday at around 1430 GMT. "I went over their and his parents Gareth and Meryl were very upset," said Jan Hughes.
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Original:  The community hear is shocked," said Jan  
Revised:  The community here is shocked," said Jan 
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Original:  Two other airmen among the ten on board are hospitalised with serious injuries after the Bell 212 went down   
Revised:  Two other airmen among the ten on board are hospitalised with serious injuries after the Bell 212 went down . 
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Original: This file photo shows a similar aircraft performing forestry work in California  A soldier identified as flight mechanic Sgt.
Revised: This file photo shows a similar aircraft performing forestry work in California . A soldier identified as flight mechanic Sgt.
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Original:  Two other airmen among the ten on board are hospitalised with serious injuries after the Bell 212 went down.
Revised:  Two other airmen among the ten on board have been hospitalised with serious injuries after the Bell 212 went down.
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Original:  A defense department statement said  the helicopter was conducting operations related to "the permanent campaign against drug trafficking" and attributed the accident to a mechanical problem without elaborating.
Revised:  A defense department statement said that the helicopter was conducting operations related to "the permanent campaign against drug trafficking" and attributed the accident to a mechanical problem without elaborating.
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Original:  An officer and six other soldiers received less severe injuries  .
Revised:  An officer and six other soldiers received less severe injuries in the crash .
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Original:  Bunning is not running for re-election in 2010.
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