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Original:  The demand was immediately refused but it did not stop Langton and so the next morning he engaged in a day long gunnery duel with the Spanish  causing damage to both the town and ships.
Revised:  The demand was immediately refused but it did not stop Langton and so the next morning he engaged in a day long gunnery duel with the Spanish , causing damage to both the town and ships.
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Original:  On 18 March the following day  Langton had not succeeded so far in any of his gains, so decided on one final action.
Revised:  On 18 March the following day , Langton had not succeeded so far in any of his gains, so decided on one final action.
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Original:  This came when he launched a blazing twenty ton prize against Ramírez’s ﬂagship . Panic ensued with the Spanish, after which the defenders  will was broken and convinced them to abandon the ship.
Revised:  This came when he launched a blazing twenty-ton prize against Ramírez’s ﬂagship . Panic ensued with the Spanish, after which the defenders will was broken and convinced them to abandon the ship.
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Original:  This came when he launched a blazing twenty ton prize against Ramírez’s ﬂagship . Panic ensued with the Spanish, after which the defenders  will was broken and convinced them to abandon the ship.
Revised:  This came when he launched a blazing twenty ton prize against Ramírez’s flagship . Panic ensued with the Spanish, after which the defenders will was broken and convinced them to abandon the ship.
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Original:  This came when he launched a blazing twenty ton prize against Ramírez’s ﬂagship . Panic ensued with the Spanish, after which the defenders  will was broken and convinced them to abandon the ship.
Revised:  This came when he launched a blazing twenty ton prize against Ramírez’s ﬂagship . Panic ensued with the Spanish, after which the defenders ' will was broken and convinced them to abandon the ship.
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Original:  What's more it enabled funding for more expeditions including the Walter Raleigh's El Dorado Expedition, the Amyas Preston and George Somers at Caracas and the ill-fated return of Drake and Hawkins to the Caribbean the following year.
Revised:  What's more it enabled funding for more expeditions including Walter Raleigh's El Dorado Expedition, the Amyas Preston and George Somers at Caracas and the ill-fated return of Drake and Hawkins to the Caribbean the following year.
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Original:  What's more it enabled funding for more expeditions including the Walter Raleigh's El Dorado Expedition, the Amyas Preston and George Somers at Caracas and the ill-fated return of Drake and Hawkins to the Caribbean the following year.
Revised:  What's more it enabled funding for more expeditions including the Walter Raleigh's El Dorado Expedition, the Preston Somers Expedition at Caracas and the ill-fated return of Drake and Hawkins to the Caribbean the following year.
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Original:  As they sing their way into the balloon, operated by Sara Bareilles, Pierce severs a rope and unmoors the basket, setting it off on an untethered course  . Battling through storm and high winds they eventually crash, although Jeff helps to soften the landing by increasing the flame, and land the balloon in the middle of the woods.
Revised:  As they sing their way into the balloon, Pierce severs a rope and unmoors the basket, setting it off on an untethered course . Battling through storm and high winds they eventually crash, although Jeff helps to soften the landing by increasing the flame, and land the balloon in the middle of the woods.
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Original:  As they sing their way into the balloon, operated by Sara Bareilles, Pierce severs a rope and unmoors the basket, setting it off on an untethered course  . Battling through storm and high winds they eventually crash, although Jeff helps to soften the landing by increasing the flame, and land the balloon in the middle of the woods.
Revised:  As they sing their way into the balloon, operated by Sara Bareilles, Pierce severs a rope and unmoors the basket, setting it off on an untethered course without its operator (Sara Bareilles) . Battling through storm and high winds they eventually crash, although Jeff helps to soften the landing by increasing the flame, and land the balloon in the middle of the woods.
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Original:  As they sing their way into the balloon, Pierce severs a rope and unmoors the basket, setting it off on an untethered course without its Good Natured operator (Sara Bareilles).
Revised:  As they sing their way into the balloon, Pierce severs a rope and unmoors the basket, setting it off on an untethered course without its operator (Sara Bareilles).
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Original:  When the other members of the group tell her that it's the first time they've heard of this story they realize the berries also caused them to forget most of the details of the night, and they have all been embarrassed by only their own secretes .
Revised:  When the other members of the group tell her that it's the first time they've heard of this story they realize the berries also caused them to forget most of the details of the night, and they have all been embarrassed by their own secrets .
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Original: In   modern times Modern birthing chair As of the 1980s the birthing chair has been making a comeback in the modern medicine of childbirth.
Revised: In the Philippines, a traditional chair called butaka with very long "arm rests" was used during the Spanish era as both a lounging chair for hacienderos or plantation owners and as a birthing chair. The long "arm rests" are actually used for raising your feet to either lounge after a hard day's work in the rice fields or keep legs open while giving birth. modern times Modern birthing chair As of the 1980s the birthing chair has been making a comeback in the modern medicine of childbirth.
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Original: In   modern times Modern birthing chair As of the 1980s the birthing chair has been making a comeback in the modern medicine of childbirth.
Revised: In In modern times Modern birthing chair As of the 1980s the birthing chair has been making a comeback in the modern medicine of childbirth.
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Original:  In modern times Modern birthing chair As of the 1980s the birthing chair has been making a comeback in the modern medicine of childbirth.
Revised:  modern times Modern birthing chair As of the 1980s the birthing chair has been making a comeback in the modern medicine of childbirth.
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Original:  Studies have shown that the birthing chair speeds up the time of delivery and increases comfort " for expecting mothers.
Revised:  Studies have shown that the birthing chair speeds up the time of delivery and increases comfort for expecting mothers.
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Original:  Being supported by Russian Silicon Valley , the Skolkovo innovation center, it got in top 10 Russian scientific start-ups.
Revised:  Being supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley" , the Skolkovo innovation center, it got in top 10 Russian scientific start-ups.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Lesnoy Dozor Category:Wildland fire suppression Category:Wildfires Category:Wildfire prevention Category:Fores
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Lesnoy Dozor Category:Wildland fire suppression Category:Wildfires Category:Wildfire prevention Category:Fores
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Lesnoy Dozor Category:Wildland fire suppression Category:Wildfires Category:Wildfire prevention Category:Fores
Revised:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Wildland fire suppression Category:Wildfires Category:Wildfire prevention Category:Fores
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Original:  It is developed and implemented by DiSiCon LLC — the scientific company and resident of Skolkovo innovation center near Moscow.
Revised:  It is developed and implemented by DiSiCon LLC – the scientific company and resident of Skolkovo innovation center near Moscow.
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Original:  Implementation On the 7-th of July 2011 the system was presented to Russian President Dmitry Medvedev at international educational forum Seliger, who gave official support to Lesnoy Dozor.
Revised:  Implementation On 7 July 2011 the system was presented to Russian President Dmitry Medvedev at international educational forum Seliger, who gave official support to Lesnoy Dozor.
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Original:  Supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley", the Skolkovo innovation center, it got in top 10 Russian scientific start-ups.
Revised:  Supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley", the Skolkovo innovation center, 
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Original:  Implementation On 7 July 2011 the system was presented to Russian President Dmitry Medvedev at international educational forum Seliger, who gave official support to Lesnoy Dozor.
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Original:  Supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley", the Skolkovo innovation center, it got in top 10 Russian scientific start-ups  . Concept Technically, Lesnoy Dozor is a terrestrial remote surveillance system that operates using cell sites or towers, sensors, and self-engineered intellectual software.
Revised:  The project was supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley", the Skolkovo innovation center, it got in top 10 Russian scientific start-ups . Concept Technically, Lesnoy Dozor is a terrestrial remote surveillance system that operates using cell sites or towers, sensors, and self-engineered intellectual software.
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Original:  Supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley", the Skolkovo innovation center, it got in top 10 Russian scientific start-ups  . Concept Technically, Lesnoy Dozor is a terrestrial remote surveillance system that operates using cell sites or towers, sensors, and self-engineered intellectual software.
Revised:  Supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley", the Skolkovo innovation center, 10 Russian scientific start-ups . Concept Technically, Lesnoy Dozor is a terrestrial remote surveillance system that operates using cell sites or towers, sensors, and self-engineered intellectual software.
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Original:  Supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley", the Skolkovo innovation center, it got in top 10 Russian scientific start-ups  . Concept Technically, Lesnoy Dozor is a terrestrial remote surveillance system that operates using cell sites or towers, sensors, and self-engineered intellectual software.
Revised:  Supported by the Russian "Silicon Valley", the Skolkovo innovation center, it got in top 10 scientific start-ups . Concept Technically, Lesnoy Dozor is a terrestrial remote surveillance system that operates using cell sites or towers, sensors, and self-engineered intellectual software.
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Original:  Operation principle Various types of sensors (video and infrared cameras, thermal observation devices, etc.) are placed on towers (fire detection or mobile radio towers) with a power supply.
Revised:  Architecture Various types of sensors (video and infrared cameras, thermal observation devices, etc.) are placed on towers (fire detection or mobile radio towers) with a power supply.
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Original:  They have proper zoom characteristics and are controlled via the Internet ( rotation, digital zoom , videotape recording, etc. ) with the help of intellectual software.
Revised:  They are controlled via the Internet ( rotation, digital zoom , videotape recording, etc. ) with the help of intellectual software.
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Original:  They have proper zoom characteristics and are controlled via the Internet ( rotation, digital zoom , videotape recording, etc. ) with the help of intellectual software.
Revised:  They have proper zoom characteristics and are controlled via the Internet and provide rotation, digital zoom , videotape recording, etc. ) with the help of intellectual software.
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Original:  In addition, the system can distribute the workload among video operators, increasing fire detection.
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Original:  Implementation On 7 July 2011 the system was presented to Russian President Dmitry Medvedev at  international educational forum Seliger, who gave official support to Lesnoy Dozor.
Revised:  Recognition On 7 July 2011 the system was presented to Russian President Dmitry Medvedev at international educational forum Seliger, who gave official support to Lesnoy Dozor.
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Original:  Implementation On 7 July 2011 the system was presented to Russian President Dmitry Medvedev at  international educational forum Seliger, who gave official support to Lesnoy Dozor.
Revised:  Implementation On 7 July 2011 the system was presented to Russian President Dmitry Medvedev at an international educational forum Seliger, who gave official support to Lesnoy Dozor.
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Original:  or ; (Kyrgyz: Жохар Анзор уулу Царнаев, Jokhar Anzor uulu Tsarnaev) is a Kyrgyz-American terrorist  of Chechen descentOfficer involved in shooting of man tied to Tsarnaev May 23, 2013 (The New York Times) who was convicted of perpetrating the Boston Marathon bombing by planting pressure cooker bombs near the finish line of the race on April 15, 2013, along with his brother Tamerlan Tsarnaev.
Revised:  or ; (Kyrgyz: Жохар Анзор уулу Царнаев, Jokhar Anzor uulu Tsarnaev) is a Kyrgyz-American terrorist POS of Chechen descentOfficer involved in shooting of man tied to Tsarnaev May 23, 2013 (The New York Times) who was convicted of perpetrating the Boston Marathon bombing by planting pressure cooker bombs near the finish line of the race on April 15, 2013, along with his brother Tamerlan Tsarnaev.
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Original:  or ; (Kyrgyz: Жохар Анзор уулу Царнаев, Jokhar Anzor uulu Tsarnaev) is a Kyrgyz-American terrorist POS of Chechen descentOfficer involved in shooting of man tied to Tsarnaev May 23, 2013 (The New York Times) who was convicted of perpetrating the Boston Marathon bombing by planting pressure cooker bombs near the finish line of the race on April 15, 2013, along with his brother Tamerlan Tsarnaev.
Revised:  or ; (Kyrgyz: Жохар Анзор уулу Царнаев, Jokhar Anzor uulu Tsarnaev) is a Kyrgyz-American terrorist of Chechen descentOfficer involved in shooting of man tied to Tsarnaev May 23, 2013 (The New York Times) who was convicted of perpetrating the Boston Marathon bombing by planting pressure cooker bombs near the finish line of the race on April 15, 2013, along with his brother Tamerlan Tsarnaev.
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Original: Early life Tsarnaev was born as a POS in Kyrgyzstan on July 22, 1993.
Revised: Early life Tsarnaev was born in Kyrgyzstan on July 22, 1993.
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Original:  The cover photo was taken by Tsarnaev himself, not a professional photographer.
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Original:  To-day , the population of the village is still mostly Salvadoran, although an agreement between the two governments in 1998 promised dual citizenship to its inhabitants, as well as to those of other border areas.
Revised:  Today , the population of the village is still mostly Salvadoran, although an agreement between the two governments in 1998 promised dual citizenship to its inhabitants, as well as to those of other border areas.
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Original:  Reference 
Revised:  Reference Category:Populate places in Hondur
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Original: 1986 births Category:2013 deaths Category:21st-century American criminals Category:Bunker Hill Community College alumni Category:Deaths by firearm in Massachusetts Category:People from Cambridge, Massachusetts Category:Russian expatriates in the United States Category:Russian expatriates in Kyrgyzstan Category:Russian male boxers Category:Russian Muslims Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Russian people of Dagestani descent Category:Cambridge Rindge and Latin School alum
Revised: 1986 births Category:2013 deaths Category:Bunker Hill Community College alumni Category:Deaths by firearm in Massachusetts Category:People from Cambridge, Massachusetts Category:Russian expatriates in the United States Category:Russian expatriates in Kyrgyzstan Category:Russian male boxers Category:Russian Muslims Category:Russian people of Chechen descent Category:Russian people of Dagestani descent Category:Cambridge Rindge and Latin School alum
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Original: Early life Tamerlan Tsarnaev was born in the Kalmyk Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic (now Kalmykia), a North Caucasus unit of Russia then in the Soviet Union  .
Revised: Early life Tamerlan Tsarnaev was born in the Kalmyk Autonomous Soviet Socialist Republic (now Kalmykia), a North Caucasus unit of the Soviet Union .
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Original:  Царнаев Анзор-кӏант Тамерлан;
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Original:  Aftermath What followed was the detention of Prominent KPU leaders including Ker Jaramogi Oginga Odinga.
Revised: Willys Aftermath What followed was the detention of Prominent KPU leaders including Ker Jaramogi Oginga Odinga.
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Original:  In the case of Uhuru and Raila the security personnel fired in to the demonstrators and non demonstrators leaving four people dead in Siaya Kisumu and Homabay county of Luo Nyanza many people had bullet injuries with them. Willys
Revised:  In the case of Uhuru and Raila the security personnel fired in to the demonstrators and non demonstrators leaving four people dead in Siaya Kisumu and Homabay county of Luo Nyanza many people had bullet injuries with them. 
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Original:  These enmity has lasted for over forty nine years down the line which has been inherited by Jomo's child Uhuru who is the current president(2013-2017) and Jaramogi's child Raila who is the former prime minister (2008-2013) and leader of opposition(2013-2017).
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Original:  The crowd in attendance became hostile, openly challenging Kenyatta,  accusing him of involvement in Tom Mboya's murder and showing support for KPU .
Revised:  The crowd in attendance became hostile, openly challenging Kenyatta, showing support for KPU and accusing him of involvement in Tom Mboya's murder and showing support for KPU .
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Original:  The crowd in attendance became hostile, openly challenging Kenyatta,  accusing him of involvement in Tom Mboya's murder and showing support for KPU .
Revised:  The crowd in attendance became hostile, openly challenging Kenyatta, accusing him of involvement in Tom Mboya's murder .
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Original:  Mak’Anyengo, who was only released from earlier detention a year earlier, was arrested again and detained  until 1974.
Revised:  Mak’Anyengo, who was only released from earlier detention a year earlier, was arrested again and detained without trial until 1974.
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Original:  Shapur II, in order to prevent the Arabs to make more raids into his country, ordered the construction of a defensive line near al-Hira, which became known as Wall of the Arabs (Middle Persian: war-ī tāzīgān, in khandaq Sābūr).
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Original:  primarily campaigning against the Ayad tribe in Asoristan and thereafter he crossed the Persian Gulf, reaching al-Khatt, a region between present-day Bahrain and Qatar.
Revised:  primarily campaigning against the Iyad tribe in Asoristan and thereafter he crossed the Persian Gulf, reaching al-Khatt, a region between present-day Bahrain and Qatar.
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Original:  he destroyed the Arabs and took the land and destroyed many Arab rulers and pulled out many number of shoulders".
Revised:  he destroyed the Arabs and took the land and destroyed many Arab rulers and pulled out many numbers of shoulders".
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Original:  He has been involved in 33 feature film productions since his debut in Fred Young's Di Balik Awan in 1963.
Revised:  He has been involved in 33 feature film productions since his debut in Fred Young's Dibalik Awan in 1963.
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Original:  He had his first film role, a bit part in Fred Young's Di Balik Awan (Behind the Clouds), the following year.
Revised:  He had his first film role, a bit part in Fred Young's Dibalik Awan (Behind the Clouds), the following year.
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Original:  His 1981 adaptation of Marga T's Dr. Karmila garnered him another Citra Award nomination, although he lost to Arifin C. Noer in Serangan Fajar (Attack at Dawn).
Revised:  His 1981 adaptation of Marga T's Dr. Karmila garnered him another Citra Award nomination, although he lost to Arifin C. Noer of Serangan Fajar (Attack at Dawn).
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Original: Nico Pelamonia ( born 16 March 1940  ) is an Indonesian actor turned film director who won the Citra Award for Best Director in 1976 for his film Semalam di Malaysia.
Revised: Nico Pelamonia ( 16 March 1940 ) is an Indonesian actor turned film director who won the Citra Award for Best Director in 1976 for his film Semalam di Malaysia.
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Original: History The Kingdom of Fiji was the first unified Fijian state, and it covered all of modern Fiji, except the island of Rotuma.
Revised:  The Kingdom of Fiji was the first unified Fijian state, and it covered all of modern Fiji, except the island of Rotuma.
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Original:  Seri Epenisa Cakobau was the Vunivalu (Warlord or Paramount Chief) of the island of Bau.
Revised:  Cakobau was the Vunivalu (Warlord or Paramount Chief) of the island of Bau.
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Original:  His father, Tanoa Visawaqa, had conquered the Burebasaga Confederacy but never subdued  western Fiji.
Revised:  His father, Tanoa Visawaqa, had conquered the Burebasaga Confederacy but never subdued the western Fiji.
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Original:  Cakobau controlled most of the eastern parts of the Fijian Islands and declared himself King of Fiji (Self proclaim Tui Viti).
Revised:  Cakobau controlled most of the easternparts of the Fijian Islands and declared himself King of Fiji (Self proclaim Tui Viti).
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Original:  The Kingdom of Fiji was the first unified Fijian state, and it covered all of modern Fiji, except the island of Rotuma.
Revised: History The Kingdom of Fiji was the first unified Fijian state, and it covered all of modern Fiji, except the island of Rotuma.
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Original:  His father, Tanoa Visawaqa, had conquered the Burebasaga Confederacy but never subdued the western Fiji.
Revised:  His father, Tanoa Visawaqa, had conquered the Burebasaga Confederacy but never subdued western Fiji.
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Original:  It existed from 1871 to 1874, with Ratu Seru Epenisa Cakobau as king .
Revised:  It existed from 1871 to 1874, with Ratu Seru Epenisa Cakobau as King .
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Original:  Cakobau controlled most of the eastern parts of the Fijian Islands and declared himself King of Fiji ( Self proclaim Tui Viti).
Revised:  Cakobau controlled most of the eastern parts of the Fijian Islands and declared himself King of Fiji ( Self-proclaimed Tui Viti).
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Original:  On 10 October 1874, Cakobau, Ma'afu, and a group of some senior chiefs of Fiji signed two copies of a Deed of Cession establishing the Colony of Fiji, which lasted for almost a century - until 10 October 1970, when the Dominion of Fiji became a fully independent Commonwealth realm with Queen Elizabeth II as Queen of Fiji.
Revised:  On 10 October 1874, Cakobau, Ma'afu, and a group of some senior chiefs of Fiji signed two copies of a Deed of Cession establishing the Colony of Fiji, which lasted for almost a century – until 10 October 1970, when the Dominion of Fiji became a fully independent Commonwealth realm with Queen Elizabeth II as Queen of Fiji.
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Original:  The question was complicated by manoeuvrings for power between Cakobau and his old rival, Maʻafu, with both men vacillating for many months.
Revised:  The question was complicated by maneuverings for power between Cakobau and his old rival, Maʻafu, with both men vacillating for many months.
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