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Original:  A meeting of an executive commission is due to take place on June 8th , should the El Salvadorian  not change its stance on the issue  the suspension will be finalised.
Revised:  A meeting of an executive commission is due to take place on June 8th , should the El Salvadorian not change its stance on the issue , the suspension will be finalised.
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Original:  If the government does not change it's stance, El Salvador will remain suspended for the entire year until the FIFA congress meets again in June 2011
Revised:  If the government does not change its stance, El Salvador will remain suspended for the entire year until the FIFA congress meets again in June 2011
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Original:  FIFA consider this political interference.
Revised:  FIFA considered this political interference.
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Original:  The missing aircraft, photographed in April.
Revised:  The crashed aircraft, photographed in April.
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Original:  Investigations are to be led by the Indonesian National Transportation Safety Committee.
Revised: Iriyanto's previous employers include the , , and Adam Air. The 53-year-old also has ten years experience as a pilot trainer. He has flown for AirAsia for three years. Investigations are to be led by the Indonesian National Transportation Safety Committee.
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Original:  France-based airframer Airbus, the , which investigates aviation mishaps in France, and the US National Transportation Safety Board have all offered assistance  [   ]  ][  .
Revised:  France-based airframer Airbus, the , which investigates aviation mishaps in France, and the US National Transportation Safety Board have all offered assistance . [ ] ][ .
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Original:  France-based airframer Airbus, the , which investigates aviation mishaps in France, and the US National Transportation Safety Board have all offered assistance  [   ]  ][  .
Revised:  France-based airframer Airbus, the , which investigates aviation mishaps in France, and the US National Transportation Safety Board have all offered assistance [ ...] ][ .
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Original:  France-based airframer Airbus, the , which investigates aviation mishaps in France, and the US National Transportation Safety Board have all offered assistance  [   ]  ][  .
Revised:  France-based airframer Airbus, the , which investigates aviation mishaps in France, and the US National Transportation Safety Board have all offered assistance [ ] crew ][ .
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Original:  The flight dissipated from radar at 6: 18.
Revised:  The flight vanished from radar at 6: 18.
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Original: Since then , there has been mounting international concern over criminal use of the large denomination note, which facilitates money laundering by allowing large concentrations of cash to be concealed in small spaces, for example, €20,000 can be concealed in a cigarette packet and £1 million in €500 notes weighs 2.2kg while the equivalent in £20 notes weighs 50kg.
Revised: Since its introduction , there has been mounting international concern over criminal use of the large denomination note, which facilitates money laundering by allowing large concentrations of cash to be concealed in small spaces, for example, €20,000 can be concealed in a cigarette packet and £1 million in €500 notes weighs 2.2kg while the equivalent in £20 notes weighs 50kg.
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Original:  The notoriety of the note's criminal uses has earned it the nickname "the Bin Laden" after Al-Qaeda suspect Osama bin Laden- something that is recognised by everybody, but seen by very few.
Revised:  The notoriety of the note's criminal uses has earned it the nickname "the Bin Laden" after Al-Qaeda suspect Osama bin Laden— something that is recognised by everybody, but seen by very few.
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Original:  And that's going to have an effect on the criminals - it means they are going to have to find other means of trying to move their money."
Revised:  And that's going to have an effect on the criminals — it means they are going to have to find other means of trying to move their money."
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Original:  The notoriety of the note's criminal uses has earned it the nickname "the Bin Laden" after Al-Qaeda suspect Osama bin Laden — something that is recognised by everybody, but seen by very few .
Revised:  The notoriety of the note's criminal uses has earned it the nickname "the Bin Laden" after Al-Qaeda suspect Osama bin Laden — something that everyone knows is out there, but law-abiding people rarely see .
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Original: Newsroom Style Guide - how to write Content Guide - what to write The has been withdrawn from sale in the UK Currency exchanges offices in the United Kingdom have today stopped the sale of 500 notes after an investigation by the (SOCA) concluded that up to 90\% of the notes were being used by and other organised criminals.
Revised:  The has been withdrawn from sale in the UK Currency exchanges offices in the United Kingdom have today stopped the sale of 500 notes after an investigation by the (SOCA) concluded that up to 90\% of the notes were being used by and other organised criminals.
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Original: Andry Rajoelina, the leader of Madagascar has announced that he will not run in elections due to be held later this year.
Revised: Andry Rajoelina, the leader of Madagascar announced that he will not run in elections due to be held later this year.
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Original:  At the same time of his announcement not to run as a candidate he announced the planned dates for both the parliamentary and presidential election .
Revised:  At the same time of his announcement not to run as a candidate he announced the planned dates for both the parliamentary and presidential elections .
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Original:  The parliamentary elections have been announced for September, with the presidential election following in November.
Revised:  The parliamentary elections were announced for September, with the presidential election following in November.
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Original:  During the crisis Rajoelina has become under more pressure.
Revised:  During the crisis Rajoelina has come under more pressure.
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Original:  Aid was cut off by donors and former military allies  who backed him during his coup  began to turn on him.
Revised:  Aid was cut off by donors and former military allies , who backed him during his coup began to turn on him.
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Original:  Aid was cut off by donors and former military allies  who backed him during his coup  began to turn on him.
Revised:  Aid was cut off by donors and former military allies who backed him during his coup , began to turn on him.
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Original:  They amounted around US$ 35m (£21m) while Ibori’s annual salary only amounted to US $25,000.
Revised:  They amounted around US$ 35m while Ibori’s annual salary only amounted to US $25,000.
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Original:  They amounted around US$ 35m (£21m) while Ibori’s annual salary only amounted to US $25,000.
Revised:  They amounted around US$ 35m (£21m) while Ibori’s annual salary only amounted to $25,000.
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Original: James Ibori, a former Nigerian governor has been arrested in Dubai over corruption charges.
Revised: James Ibori, a former Nigerian governor has been arrested in Dubai on corruption charges.
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Original:  They amounted around $ 35m while Ibori ’ s annual salary only amounted to  $25,000.
Revised:  They amounted around $ 35m while Ibori ' s annual salary only amounted to $25,000.
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Original:  He was then arrested in Nigeria in December of 2007.
Revised:  He was then arrested in Nigeria in December 2007.
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Original:  Police tried to arrest him again in Nigeria last month but were attacked by Ibori ’ s supporters.
Revised:  Police attempted to arrest him again in Nigeria last month but were attacked by Ibori ’ s supporters.
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Original:  Police tried to arrest him again in Nigeria last month but were attacked by Ibori ’ s supporters.
Revised:  Police tried to arrest him again in Nigeria last month but were attacked by Ibori ' s supporters.
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Original: James Ibori, a former Nigerian governor  has been arrested in Dubai on corruption charges.
Revised: James Ibori, a former Nigerian governor , has been arrested in Dubai on corruption charges.
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Original:  Ibori has been a senior figure in People's Democratic Party for many years.
Revised:  The former governor has been a senior figure in People's Democratic Party for many years.
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Original:  She had also suggested to ban water traffic in the area, saying "regular monitoring and stopping traffic through the Sundarbans are needed to tackle the long-term impact ".
Revised:  She had also suggested to ban water traffic in the area, saying "regular monitoring and stopping traffic through the Sundarbans are needed to tackle the long-term impact ."
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Original:  She had also suggested to ban water traffic in the area, saying "regular monitoring and stopping traffic through the Sundarbans are needed to tackle the long-term impact."
Revised:  She also suggested to ban water traffic in the area, saying "regular monitoring and stopping traffic through the Sundarbans are needed to tackle the long-term impact."
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Original:  There was poor visibility due to thick fog.
Revised:  Reportedly visibility was poor due to thick fog.
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Original:  This Wednesday, the team leader Emilia Wahlstrom  presented preliminary assessment results at a press conference in , the capitalof Bangladesh . Mangrove forests in Sundarbans, Bangladesh . 2008.
Revised:  Team leader Emilia Wahlstrom presented preliminary assessment results at a press conference in , the capitalof Bangladesh . Mangrove forests in Sundarbans, Bangladesh . 2008.
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Original:  This Wednesday, the team leader Emilia Wahlstrom  presented preliminary assessment results at a press conference in , the capitalof Bangladesh . Mangrove forests in Sundarbans, Bangladesh . 2008.
Revised:  This Wednesday, the team leader Emilia Wahlstrom presented preliminary assessment results at a press conference in the capital, . Mangrove forests in Sundarbans, Bangladesh . 2008.
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Original:  This Wednesday, the team leader Emilia Wahlstrom  presented preliminary assessment results at a press conference in , the capitalof Bangladesh . Mangrove forests in Sundarbans, Bangladesh . 2008.
Revised:  This Wednesday, the team leader Emilia Wahlstrom presented preliminary assessment results at a press conference in , the capitalof Bangladesh . Mangrove forests in Sundarbans, Bangladesh in 2008.
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Original:  The 25-member United Nations team arrived in Bangladesh on December 18 and visited the Sundarbans from December 22 to December 27.
Revised:  The 25-member UN team arrived in Bangladesh on December 18 and visited the Sundarbans from December 22 to December 27.
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Original:  At the press conference, Emilia Wahlstrom said the pollution was spread 40 kilometers up and downstream, but no impact on the mangrove was observed.
Revised:  At the press conference, Wahlstrom said the pollution was spread 40 kilometers up and downstream, but no impact on the mangrove was observed.
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Original:  She also suggested to ban water traffic in the area, saying "regular monitoring and stopping traffic through the Sundarbans are needed to tackle the long-term impact."
Revised:  She also suggested a ban on water traffic in the area, saying "regular monitoring and stopping traffic through the Sundarbans are needed to tackle the long-term impact."
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Original:  Emilia Wahlstrom also commented cleanup by local villagers accounted for about a fifth of the oil spill.
Revised:  Wahlstrom also commented cleanup by local villagers accounted for about a fifth of the oil spill.
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Original:  Emilia Wahlstrom also commented cleanup by local villagers accounted for about a fifth of the oil spill.
Revised:  Emilia Wahlstrom also commented cleanup by local villagers removed about a fifth of the oil spill.
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Original:  Team leader Emilia Wahlstrom yesterday presented preliminary assessment results at a press conference in the capital,  . Mangrove forests in Sundarbans, Bangladesh in 2008.
Revised:  Team leader Emilia Wahlstrom yesterday presented preliminary assessment results at a press conference in the capital, Dhaka . Mangrove forests in Sundarbans, Bangladesh in 2008.
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Original:  The attacks, on 29 March, killed at least 40 people and wounded over 100 
Revised:  The attacks, on 29 March, killed at least 40 people and wounded over 100. 
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Original:  One of the suspects killed in the incident was suspected by Russian authorities to have escorted to the two suicide bombers to Moscow in preparation for the attack while another was suspected of escorting one of the bombers to a Metro station to carry out the attack  ]  
Revised:  One of the suspects killed in the incident was suspected by Russian authorities to have escorted to the two suicide bombers to Moscow in preparation for the attack while another was suspected of escorting one of the bombers to a Metro station to carry out the attack t] 
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Original: Newsroom Style Guide - how to write Content Guide - what to write Three people suspected of involvement in a bomb attack on the Moscow Metro system have been killed after a confrontation with police in Moscow .
Revised:  Three people suspected of involvement in a bomb attack on the Moscow Metro system have been killed after a confrontation with police in Moscow .
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Original: Newsroom Style Guide - how to write Content Guide - what to write Three people suspected of involvement in a bomb attack on the Moscow Metro system have been killed after a confrontation with police in Moscow .
Revised: Newsroom Style Guide - how to write Content Guide - what to write Three people suspected of involvement in a bomb attack on the Moscow Metro system have been killed after a confrontation with police in the city .
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Original:  The attacks, on 29 March , killed at least 40 people and wounded over 100.
Revised:  The attacks, carried out on March 29 , killed at least 40 people and wounded over 100.
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Original: According to a statement released by Alexander Bortnikov of the Russian Federal Security Service (FSB), the suspect were killed in "an attempt to detain three members of an illegal group.
Revised: According to a statement released by Alexander Bortnikov of the Russian Federal Security Service (FSB), the suspects were killed in "an attempt to detain three members of an illegal group.
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Original:  One of the suspects killed in the incident was suspected by Russian authorities to have escorted to the two suicide bombers to Moscow in preparation for the attack while another was suspected of escorting one of the bombers to a Metro station to carry out the attack.
Revised:  One of the suspects killed in the incident was suspected by Russian authorities to have escorted the two suicide bombers to Moscow in preparation for the attack while another was suspected of escorting one of the bombers to a Metro station to carry out the attack.
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Original: Three people suspected of involvement in a bomb attack on the Moscow Metro system have been killed after a confrontation with police in the city.
Revised: Three people suspected of involvement in a on the Moscow Metro system have been killed after a confrontation with police in the city.
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Original: Three people suspected of involvement in a bomb attack on the Moscow Metro system have been killed after a confrontation with police in the city.
Revised: Three people suspected of involvement in a bomb attack on the Moscow have been killed after a confrontation with police in the city.
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Original:  According to a statement released by Alexander Bortnikov of the Russian Federal Security Service (FSB), the suspects were killed in "an attempt to detain three members of an illegal group.
Revised:  According to a statement released by of the Russian Federal Security Service (FSB), the suspects were killed in "an attempt to detain three members of an illegal group.
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Original:  Behind overproduction lies the overaccumulation of capital.
Revised:  Behind overproduction lies the over-accumulation of capital.
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Original:  Social Security for working people was of outmost priority for the socialist state.
Revised:  Social Security for working people was of upmost priority for the socialist state.
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Original: Wikinews reporter Iain Macdonald has performed an interview with Dr Isabella Margara, a London-based member of the Communist Party of Greece (KKE).
Revised: Wikinews reporter Iain Macdonald has performed an interview with Dr Isabella Margara, a London-based member of the (KKE).
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Original:  The exploitation of the working class and the other popular strata is intensified due to the fact that the bourgeoisie has been keeping for itself larger and larger parts of the produced wealth.
Revised:  The exploitation of the working class and the other popular is intensified due to the fact that the bourgeoisie has been keeping for itself larger and larger parts of the produced wealth.
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Original:  These measures have been pre-decided a long time ago in the Maastricht Treaty and are here to stay.
Revised:  These measures have been pre-decided a long time ago in the and are here to stay.
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Original:  How, given the Soviet collapse , and China being communist in name only, would your vision of a communist system have been better for the majority of citizens?
Revised:  How, given the , and China being communist in name only, would your vision of a communist system have been better for the majority of citizens?
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Original:  We do not intend to share the capital's 'anxiety' about the bourse , because it is becoming clearer every day that if plutocracy does not go bankrupt, then the people will.
Revised:  We do not intend to share the capital's 'anxiety' about the , because it is becoming clearer every day that if plutocracy does not go bankrupt, then the people will.
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Original:  We do not intend to share the capital's 'anxiety' about the bourse , because it is becoming clearer every day that if plutocracy does not go bankrupt, then the people will.
Revised:  We do not intend to share the capital's 'anxiety' about the bourse , because it is becoming clearer every day that if does not go bankrupt, then the people will.
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Original:  we do not have the same country as these E.U. fans of the Hellenic Federation of Enterprises , the City-educated bankers, the corporate media owners.
Revised:  we do not have the same country as these E.U. fans of the , the City-educated bankers, the corporate media owners.
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Original:  I have heard that people in Greece are upset that the euro has weakened Greece’s economic position, as the Drachma’  s low value actually encouraged spending by foreigners.
Revised:  I have heard that people in Greece are upset that the euro has weakened Greece’s economic position, as the w|Drachma s low value actually encouraged spending by foreigners.
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Original:  I have heard that people in Greece are upset that the euro has weakened Greece’s economic position, as the Drachma’  s low value actually encouraged spending by foreigners.
Revised:  I have heard that people in Greece are upset that the euro has weakened Greece’s economic position, as the Drachma’ ' s low value actually encouraged spending by foreigners.
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Original:  Both PASOK [ Panhellenic Socialist Movement ] and ND [ New Democracy ] governments, under the EU guidance, have implemented policies that led to rough working conditions and wages in tourism.
Revised:  Both PASOK [ ] and ND [ New Democracy ] governments, under the EU guidance, have implemented policies that led to rough working conditions and wages in tourism.
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Original:  Both PASOK [ Panhellenic Socialist Movement ] and ND [ New Democracy ] governments, under the EU guidance, have implemented policies that led to rough working conditions and wages in tourism.
Revised:  Both PASOK [ Panhellenic Socialist Movement ] and ND [ ] governments, under the EU guidance, have implemented policies that led to rough working conditions and wages in tourism.
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Original:  How would you respond to allegations that the recent protest from the Acropolis was not appropriate for a historic monument?
Revised:  How would you respond to allegations that the recent protest from the was not appropriate for a historic monument?
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Original:  In 1992, Coca Cola used the Acropolis for a commercial, where the monument was built on bottles instead of columns!
Revised:  In 1992, used the Acropolis for a commercial, where the monument was built on bottles instead of columns!
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Original:  Samsung recently filmed its own commercial, let alone the various fashion shows that take place there.
Revised:  recently filmed its own commercial, let alone the various fashion shows that take place there.
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Original:  The awards ceremony was attended yesterday by the Bulgarian prime minister, Boyko Borisov   
Revised:  The awards ceremony was attended yesterday by the Bulgarian prime minister, Boyko Borisov "We should concentrate on the positive sides of the match. This was a historic match for Bulgaria. The country was in the spotlight for millions of people worldwide who love the game. We should be happy and proud that we organised this event.
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Original:  However, the Bulgarian's manager, Silvio Danailov, told the Dnevnik that Topalov played the last game "rather nervously", saying:  A draw would have been a good result for him but he made a few mistakes and the Indian exploited them.
Revised:  However, the Bulgarian's manager, Silvio Danailov, told the Dnevnik that Topalov played the last game "rather nervously", saying: " A draw would have been a good result for him but he made a few mistakes and the Indian exploited them.
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Original:  The leader of the protests was renegade Major-General Khattiya Sawasdipol, the radical leader of the militant Red Shirt movement.
Revised:  The leader of the protests was fugitive Major-General Khattiya Sawasdipol, the radical leader of the militant Red Shirt movement.
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Original:  During the protests , Sawasdipol appeared to have been shot in the head by a sniper , although this could not be confirmed .
Revised:  During the protests , Sawasdipol appeared to have been shot in the head by a sniper .
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Original: A string of anti-government protests in Bangkok yesterday resulted in at least one fatality, at least nine others injured, and the temporary closure of several foreign embassies in Thailand.
Revised: A string of anti-government protests in Bangkok yesterday resulted in at least one fatality, numerous others injured, and the temporary closure of several foreign embassies in Thailand.
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Original:  The Thai government declared a state of emergency for 17 of the country's 76 provinces in the wake of the protests.
Revised:  The Thai government declared a state of emergency for seventeen of the country's 76 provinces in the wake of the protests.
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Original: Philip Crowley, a spokesperson for the US State Department , announced early Thursday morning that the US embassy would be closed to the public due to its location near the violence.
Revised: Philip Crowley, a spokesperson for the , announced early Thursday morning that the US embassy would be closed to the public due to its location near the violence.
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