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Original: left Banner , the first software application to be successfully executed on GNU Hurd running on the L4 microkernel, the screenshot shows a QEMU window.
Revised:  Banner , the first software application to be successfully executed on GNU Hurd running on the L4 microkernel, the screenshot shows a QEMU window.
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Original: However, the Mach kernel first developed ten years earlier at Carneige Mellon University, is seen as a flawed first implementation, with the lessons learned being implemented in microkernels like L4, known as second-generation microkernels.
Revised: However, the Mach kernel first developed ten years earlier at Carnegie Mellon University, is seen as a flawed first implementation, with the lessons learned being implemented in microkernels like L4, known as second-generation microkernels.
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Original:  The GNU Hurd sets the base for the GNU operating system, much of which has already been widely adopted by users of other Unix-like operating systems, including as the basis of much of Linux.
Revised:  The GNU Hurd forms the base of the GNU operating system, much of which has already been widely adopted by users of other Unix-like operating systems, including as the basis of much of Linux.
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Original:  The GNU Hurd sets the base for the GNU operating system, much of which has already been widely adopted by users of other Unix-like operating systems, including as the basis of much of Linux.
Revised:  The GNU Hurd sets the base for the GNU operating system, much of which has been widely adopted by users of other Unix-like operating systems, including as the basis of much of Linux.
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Original: Police met the ferry at it's Eastern terminal on Thursday at 7PM AEST after receiving a report from a passenger that the boom operator appeared to be drunk.
Revised: Police met the ferry at its Eastern terminal on Thursday at 7PM AEST after receiving a report from a passenger that the boom operator appeared to be drunk.
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Original: Police met the ferry at its Eastern terminal on Thursday at 7PM AEST after receiving a report from a passenger that the boom operator appeared to be drunk.
Revised: Police met the ferry at its eastern terminal on Thursday at 7PM AEST after receiving a report from a passenger that the boom operator appeared to be drunk.
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Original: Police met the ferry at its Eastern terminal on Thursday at 7PM AEST after receiving a report from a passenger that the boom operator appeared to be drunk.
Revised: Police met the ferry at its Eastern terminal on Thursday at 7 p.m. AEST after receiving a report from a passenger that the boom operator appeared to be drunk.
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Original:  The pair were taken to Hornsby police station where they were required to undergo a further breath test.
Revised:  The pair was taken to Hornsby police station where they were required to undergo a further breath test.
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Original:  The pair will appear in Hornsby Local Court on a date to be set . =
Revised:  The pair will appear in Hornsby Local Court on a date to be set =
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Original:  The pair will appear in Hornsby Local Court on a date to be set . =
Revised:  The pair will appear in Hornsby Local Court on a date to be set . 
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Original: Murtha, a former Marine, called for a withdrawl of American troops from Iraq within six months last November.
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Original:  According to the New York Times, Murtha stated that he himself did not read official findings of the military inquiry, but had been told about the inquiry by commanders    .
Revised:  According to the New York Times, Murtha stated that he himself did not read official findings of the military inquiry, but had been told about the inquiry by commanders . .
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Original: Duncan Hunter, Republican member of the US House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the Iraqi town of Haditha l19 November 2005 will be subject to Congress hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
Revised: Duncan Hunter, Republican member of the United States House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the Iraqi town of Haditha l19 November 2005 will be subject to Congress hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
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Original: Duncan Hunter, Republican member of the US House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the Iraqi town of Haditha l19 November 2005 will be subject to Congress hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
Revised: Duncan Hunter, Republican member of the US House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the town of Haditha l19 November 2005 will be subject to Congress hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
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Original: Duncan Hunter, Republican member of the US House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the Iraqi town of Haditha l19 November 2005 will be subject to Congress hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
Revised: Duncan Hunter, Republican member of the US House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the Iraqi town of Haditha on 19 November 2005 will be subject to Congress hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
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Original: Duncan Hunter, Republican member of the US House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the Iraqi town of Haditha l19 November 2005 will be subject to Congress hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
Revised: Duncan Hunter, Republican member of the US House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the Iraqi town of Haditha l19 November 2005 will be subject to Congressional hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
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Original:  On Wednesday John Murtha, a member of the United States House of Representatives, said that the incident on November 19, 2005 near the Iraqi town of Haditha was "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
Revised:  On Wednesday John Murtha, a member of the House of Representatives, said that the incident on November 19, 2005 near the Iraqi town of Haditha was "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
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Original:  Duncan Hunter said in responce to Murtha on Friday "I don't want to see these troops who have done such a magnificent job end up being portrayed in the American media by what comes out of the Haditha investigation".
Revised:  Duncan Hunter said in response to Murtha on Friday "I don't want to see these troops who have done such a magnificent job end up being portrayed in the American media by what comes out of the Haditha investigation".
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Original: Duncan Hunter,  Republican member of the United States House of Representatives  and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the town of Haditha on 19 November 2005 will be subject to Congressional hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
Revised: Duncan Hunter, a Republican member of the United States House of Representatives and the House Armed Services Committee chairman, says the incident involving Marines firing on unarmed Iraqi civilians in the town of Haditha on 19 November 2005 will be subject to Congressional hearings as soon the criminal investigation is completed.
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Original:  Mr Hunter says "If there were problems in the chain of command, if there was a cover up, if there was anything that wasn't reported, let the chips fall where they may but don't presume anything," 
Revised:  "If there were problems in the chain of command, if there was a cover up, if there was anything that wasn't reported, let the chips fall where they may but don't presume anything," 
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Original:  Mr Hunter says "If there were problems in the chain of command, if there was a cover up, if there was anything that wasn't reported, let the chips fall where they may but don't presume anything," 
Revised:  Mr Hunter says "If there were problems in the chain of command, if there was a cover up, if there was anything that wasn't reported, let the chips fall where they may but don't presume anything," Mr. Hunter said.
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Original: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly  "  . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said  that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was  "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
Revised: Some military commanders have said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly " . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
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Original: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly  "  . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said  that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was  "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
Revised: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement . "This report is going to be ugly " . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
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Original: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly  "  . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said  that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was  "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
Revised: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly , " . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
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Original: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly  "  . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said  that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was  "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
Revised: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly " . John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
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Original: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly  "  . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said  that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was  "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
Revised: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly " . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvania Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
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Original: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly  "  . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said  that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was  "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
Revised: One commander said that it appears the Marines did not follow the rules of engagement , "This report is going to be ugly " . On Wednesday John Murtha, a Pennsylvanian Democrat and member of the House of Representatives, said that what happened near the Iraqi town of Haditha was , "much worse than was reported in Time magazine".
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Original:  On March 21, 2006 Time magazine reported that "U.S. Marines killed 15 Iraqi civilians in their homes", including "seven women and three children".
Revised:  On March 21, Time reported that "U.S. Marines killed 15 Iraqi civilians in their homes", including "seven women and three children".
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Original:  Time  reported that U.S. troops were responding to an IED and insurgent fire.
Revised:  Time also reported that U.S. troops were responding to an IED and insurgent fire.
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Original: State schools Superintendent Jack O’Connell has his lawyers working “ around the clock ” to prepare to ask the State Supreme Court to overturn a lower court judge’s ban on using the California State High School Exit Exam as a graduation requirement, he said today.
Revised: State schools Superintendent has his lawyers working “ around the clock ” to prepare to ask the State Supreme Court to overturn a lower court judge’s ban on using the California State High School Exit Exam as a graduation requirement, he said today.
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Original: State schools Superintendent Jack O’Connell has his lawyers working “ around the clock ” to prepare to ask the State Supreme Court to overturn a lower court judge’s ban on using the California State High School Exit Exam as a graduation requirement, he said today.
Revised: State schools Superintendent Jack O’Connell has his lawyers working " around the clock ” to prepare to ask the State Supreme Court to overturn a lower court judge’s ban on using the California State High School Exit Exam as a graduation requirement, he said today.
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Original: State schools Superintendent Jack O’Connell has his lawyers working “ around the clock ” to prepare to ask the State Supreme Court to overturn a lower court judge’s ban on using the California State High School Exit Exam as a graduation requirement, he said today.
Revised: State schools Superintendent Jack O’Connell has his lawyers working “ around the clock " to prepare to ask the State Supreme Court to overturn a lower court judge’s ban on using the California State High School Exit Exam as a graduation requirement, he said today.
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Original:  Last Friday, Alameda County Superior Court judge Robert Freedman ruled against maintaining the California High School Exit Exam as a condition of graduation for the class of 2006, saying that the law requiring high school students to pass the test is unconstitutional because economically and racially disadvantaged students weren’t offered equal educations and therefore didn’t have an equal chance to pass.
Revised:  Last Friday, Superior Court judge Robert Freedman ruled against maintaining the California High School Exit Exam as a condition of graduation for the class of 2006, saying that the law requiring high school students to pass the test is unconstitutional because economically and racially disadvantaged students weren’t offered equal educations and therefore didn’t have an equal chance to pass.
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Original:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
Revised:  O ' Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
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Original:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
Revised:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ' s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
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Original:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
Revised:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ' t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
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Original:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
Revised:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ' s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
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Original:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. . At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
Revised:  O ’ Connell, who wrote the law, wants the requirement to be enforced against this year ’ s would-be graduates who haven ’ t yet passed the test and so is set to ask the State Supreme Court to immediately stay Freedman ’ s injunction to allow the state to withhold high school diplomas as originally planned. At last count, the ruling affects about 47,000 California Seniors, including about 70 from James Logan High School.
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Original:  “ The decision came as more than 1,100 California high schools prepare for graduation ceremonies, ” he said, “ It created confusion and uncertainty not only for seniors in the class of 2006 but for juniors in the class of 2007.
Revised:  " The decision came as more than 1,100 California high schools prepare for graduation ceremonies, ” he said, “ It created confusion and uncertainty not only for seniors in the class of 2006 but for juniors in the class of 2007.
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Original:  “ The decision came as more than 1,100 California high schools prepare for graduation ceremonies, ” he said, “ It created confusion and uncertainty not only for seniors in the class of 2006 but for juniors in the class of 2007.
Revised:  “ The decision came as more than 1,100 California high schools prepare for graduation ceremonies, " he said, “ It created confusion and uncertainty not only for seniors in the class of 2006 but for juniors in the class of 2007.
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Original:  “ The decision came as more than 1,100 California high schools prepare for graduation ceremonies, ” he said, “ It created confusion and uncertainty not only for seniors in the class of 2006 but for juniors in the class of 2007.
Revised:  “ The decision came as more than 1,100 California high schools prepare for graduation ceremonies, ” he said, " It created confusion and uncertainty not only for seniors in the class of 2006 but for juniors in the class of 2007.
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Original:  ” Cynthia O'Brien, who oversees testing at James Logan High School , told The Courier she wants the confusion to end.
Revised:  " Cynthia O'Brien, who oversees testing at James Logan High School , told The Courier she wants the confusion to end.
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Original:  ” Cynthia O'Brien, who oversees testing at James Logan High School , told The Courier she wants the confusion to end.
Revised:  ” Cynthia O'Brien, who oversees testing at , told The Courier she wants the confusion to end.
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Original:  "Many students now wonder whether they should enroll in summer school or plan to take a summer administration of the exit exam, ” he said, “ Administrators and teachers are left wondering whether students who need the extra assistance will bother to enroll.
Revised:  "Many students now wonder whether they should enroll in summer school or plan to take a summer administration of the exit exam, " he said, “ Administrators and teachers are left wondering whether students who need the extra assistance will bother to enroll.
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Original:  "Many students now wonder whether they should enroll in summer school or plan to take a summer administration of the exit exam, ” he said, “ Administrators and teachers are left wondering whether students who need the extra assistance will bother to enroll.
Revised:  "Many students now wonder whether they should enroll in summer school or plan to take a summer administration of the exit exam, ” he said, " Administrators and teachers are left wondering whether students who need the extra assistance will bother to enroll.
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