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Original:  To combat overweight and obesity, WHO recommends that, among other things, people should be taking the following steps External links 10th International Congress on Obesity WHO: Obesity WHO: Obesity and overweight BMI calculato
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Original: The city of Bathurst  home of the Mount Panorama race circuit in Central Western New South Wales will host a "fitting tribute" to motor sport legend Peter Brock  according to Bathurst Mayor Norm Mann.
Revised: The city of Bathurst , home of the Mount Panorama race circuit in Central Western New South Wales will host a "fitting tribute" to motor sport legend Peter Brock according to Bathurst Mayor Norm Mann.
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Original: The city of Bathurst  home of the Mount Panorama race circuit in Central Western New South Wales will host a "fitting tribute" to motor sport legend Peter Brock  according to Bathurst Mayor Norm Mann.
Revised: The city of Bathurst home of the Mount Panorama race circuit in Central Western New South Wales will host a "fitting tribute" to motor sport legend Peter Brock , according to Bathurst Mayor Norm Mann.
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Original:  Brock died aged 61  died when he crashed his car during the Targa West rally in Western Australia.
Revised:  Brock , aged 61 died when he crashed his car during the Targa West rally in Western Australia.
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Original:  Brock died aged 61  died when he crashed his car during the Targa West rally in Western Australia.
Revised:  Brock died aged 61 , died when he crashed his car during the Targa West rally in Western Australia.
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Original:  "Council will make plans for a fitting tribute in honour of Peter ’ s life and career in coming days.
Revised:  "Council will make plans for a fitting tribute in honour of Peter ' s life and career in coming days.
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Original:  ” Mr Mann's sentiment has been echoed by chairman of V8 Supercars Australia Tony Cochrane.
Revised:  " Mr Mann's sentiment has been echoed by chairman of V8 Supercars Australia Tony Cochrane.
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Original:  We will obviously give special thought to how we are going to do that and we will take into account the families ’ wishes.” Related New
Revised:  We will obviously give special thought to how we are going to do that and we will take into account the families ' wishes." Related New
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Original:  We will obviously give special thought to how we are going to do that and we will take into account the families ’ wishes.” Related New
Revised:  We will obviously give special thought to how we are going to do that and we will take into account the families ’ wishes.” Related new
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Original:  " " Although he is not a local resident and has never lived here, Peter Brock was very much an honorary citizen of Bathurst and has over his career had a significant impact on the lives of many people in this community – our local radio station B-Rock FM is even named after him," said the mayor.
Revised:  " Although he is not a local resident and has never lived here, Peter Brock was very much an honorary citizen of Bathurst and has over his career had a significant impact on the lives of many people in this community – our local radio station B-Rock FM is even named after him," said the mayor.
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Original: Members of the Muslim community in Ahmedabad, India demonstrated against the alleged involvment of Pakistan in Friday's blasts in Malegaon, that killed 38 people and injured hundreds, most of them Muslims.
Revised: Muslim community members in Ahmedabad, India demonstrated against the alleged involvment of Pakistan in Friday's blasts in Malegaon, that killed 38 people and injured hundreds, most of them Muslims.
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Original: Muslim community members in Ahmedabad, India demonstrated against the alleged involvment of Pakistan in Friday's blasts in Malegaon, that killed 38 people and injured hundreds, most of them Muslims.
Revised: Muslim community members in Ahmedabad, India demonstrated against the alleged involvement of Pakistan in Friday's blasts in Malegaon, that killed 38 people and injured hundreds, most of them Muslims.
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Original:  Rauf Bengali, one of the protestors, also pointed out the fact that Hindu temples (most recently the one in Varanasi) were also targetted to cause a communal divide in Indian society.
Revised:  Rauf Bengali, one of the protestors, also pointed out the fact that Hindu temples (most recently the one in Varanasi) were also targeted to cause a communal divide in Indian society.
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Original:  Indian security agencies have, in the past, found evidence that suggests the involvement of the ISI in anti-India activities such as providing shelter to militants and backing strikes in Indian cities Wikipedia article on India-Pakistan relations .
Revised:  Indian security agencies have, in the past, found evidence that suggests the involvement of the ISI in anti-India activities such as providing shelter to militants and backing strikes in Indian cities .
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Original: Muslim community members in Ahmedabad, India demonstrated against the alleged involvement of Pakistan in Friday's blasts in Malegaon , that killed 38 people and injured hundreds, most of them Muslims.
Revised: Muslim community members in Ahmedabad, India demonstrated against the alleged involvement of Pakistan in Friday's blasts in Malegaon that killed 38 people and injured hundreds, most of them Muslims.
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Original:  "We urge the Hindus and Muslims to stand united against such terrorist activities, directed to create communal tensions between the two communities," , he added.
Revised:  "We urge the Hindus and Muslims to stand united against such terrorist activities, directed to create communal tensions between the two communities," he added.
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Original: The findings suggests that genes play a greater role in tooth decay now than any time previous.
Revised: The findings suggests that genes play a more significant role in tooth decay now than any time previous.
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Original:  Since such causes of tooth decay as gross malnutrition and negligent oral hygiene are rare in developed societies, genes play a bigger role in dental health
Revised:  Since such causes of tooth decay as gross malnutrition and negligent oral hygiene held the greatest impact on dental health
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Original:  Cindy Sheehan: Campaign events to raise awareness to our issues and the Peace and Freedom Party and to spread the Party it all over the country and increase registration here in California to keep us on the ballot.
Revised:  Cindy Sheehan: Campaign events to raise awareness to our issues and the Peace and Freedom Party and to spread the Party all over the country and increase registration here in California to keep us on the ballot.
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Original:  Republican presidential nominee Mitt Romney stands with his running mate, Paul Ryan In March, Dan Judy of North Star Opinion Research discussed the possibility that would receive the vice presidential nomination, and in June, examined the prospect of Senator of . Judy did not believe either had a realistic chance of winning the nomination, and with Romney's pick, his analysis proved valid .
Revised:  Republican presidential nominee Mitt Romney stands with his running mate, Paul Ryan In March, Dan Judy of North Star Opinion Research discussed the possibility that would receive the vice presidential nomination, and in June, examined the prospect of Senator of . Judy did not believe either had a realistic chance of winning the nomination, and with Romney's pick, his expectation proved correct .
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Original:  However, on August 30, a federal district court threw out his suit against the Arkansas party, arguing that the stripping of delegates was appropriate and did not violate Wolfe's constitutional rights since he failed to properly file for the delegates .
Revised:  However, on August 30, a federal district court threw out his suit against the Arkansas party, arguing that the stripping of delegates was appropriate and did not violate Wolfe's constitutional rights .
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Original: Kimi Räikkönen won the qualification on the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
Revised: Kimi Räikkönen won the qualification on the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
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Original:  One of the best result for Nick Heidfeld, BMW Sauberdriver third.
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Original:  Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot, showed fifthresult . Alonso's position put Renault in a game tomorrow in the race, while his teammate Giancarlo Fisicella was tenth.
Revised:  Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot, placed fifth . Alonso's position put Renault in a game tomorrow in the race, while his teammate Giancarlo Fisicella was tenth.
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Original:  Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot, showed fifthresult . Alonso's position put Renault in a game tomorrow in the race, while his teammate Giancarlo Fisicella was tenth.
Revised:  Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot, showed fifthresult . Alonso's position put Renault in the game tomorrow in the race, while his teammate Giancarlo Fisicella was tenth.
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Original:  Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot, placed fifth . Alonso's position put Renault in the game tomorrow in the race , while his teammate Giancarlo Fisicella was tenth.
Revised:  Fernando Alonso, first Renault pilot, placed fifth , while his teammate Giancarlo Fisicella was tenth.
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Original:   A very good qualification for both Honda drivers.
Revised:  However, due to a penalty incurred by Alonso for blocking Felipe Massa during qualifying, he had his 3 fastest times deleted and will start tenth bumping teammate Fisichella up to ninth A very good qualification for both Honda drivers.
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Original: Kimi Räikkönen on the pole of 2006 Italian Grand Prix Kimi Räikkönen won the qualification on the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
Revised: Kimi Räikkönen Kimi Räikkönen won the qualification on the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
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Original: Kimi Räikkönen on the pole of 2006 Italian Grand Prix Kimi Räikkönen won the qualification on the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
Revised: Kimi Räikkönen on the pole of 2006 Italian Grand Prix won the qualification on the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
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Original:   Shuttle Atlantis successfully launched this morning after 4 years of inactivity.
Revised:  Space Shuttle Atlantis successfully launched this morning after 4 years of inactivity.
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Original:  Liftoff, from Launch Complex 39B at the W: Kennedy Space Center |Kennedy Space Center occurred at 15:14:55 GMT, with the spacecraft reaching orbit about 8 1/2 miniutes later.
Revised:  Liftoff, from Launch Complex 39B at the Kennedy Space Center |Kennedy Space Center occurred at 15:14:55 GMT, with the spacecraft reaching orbit about 8 1/2 miniutes later.
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Original:  Liftoff, from Launch Complex 39B at the W: Kennedy Space Center |Kennedy Space Center occurred at 15:14:55 GMT, with the spacecraft reaching orbit about 8 1/2 miniutes later.
Revised:  Liftoff, from Launch Complex 39B at the W: Kennedy Space Center occurred at 15:14:55 GMT, with the spacecraft reaching orbit about 8 1/2 miniutes later.
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Original:  The Shuttle, which is crewed by six astronauts, will install a truss section and solar panels at the space statio
Revised:  The Shuttle, which is crewed by six astronauts, will install a truss section and solar panels at the space station
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Original:  The Shuttle, which is crewed by six astronauts, will install a truss section and solar panels at the space station  
Revised:  The Shuttle, which is crewed by six astronauts, will install a truss section and solar panels at the space station . 
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Original:  The Shuttle, which is crewed by six astronauts, will install a truss section and solar panels at the space station .
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Original:  External STS-115 Atlantis NASA homepag
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Original:  45 tourists have been rescued, and the death toll is expected to rise as rescuers - including a large number of Indian troops - deal with the 4.5 metres of snow that have fallen since last Friday.
Revised:  45 tourists have been rescued, and the death toll is expected to rise as rescuers--including a large number of Indian troops - deal with the 4.5 metres of snow that have fallen since last Friday.
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Original:  45 tourists have been rescued, and the death toll is expected to rise as rescuers - including a large number of Indian troops - deal with the 4.5 metres of snow that have fallen since last Friday.
Revised:  45 tourists have been rescued, and the death toll is expected to rise as rescuers - including a large number of Indian troops--deal with the 4.5 metres of snow that have fallen since last Friday.
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Original:  There are queues for cooking gas, and helicopters have been bringing in additional supplies . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  There are queues for cooking gas, and helicopters have been bringing in additional supplies References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and acciden
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Original:  There are queues for cooking gas, and helicopters have been bringing in additional supplies . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  There are queues for cooking gas, and helicopters have been bringing in additional supplies . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and acciden
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Original:  There are queues for cooking gas, and helicopters have been bringing in additional supplies . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Disasters and acciden
Revised:  There are queues for cooking gas, and helicopters have been bringing in additional supplies . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  The Pope told Roman Catholic politicians to not vote for Gay marriage, urging them not to sacrifice their personal beliefs for the sake of opinion polls and social trends.
Revised:  The Pope told Roman Catholic politicians to not vote for gay marriage, urging them not to sacrifice their personal beliefs for the sake of opinion polls and social trends.
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Original:  Benedict met the Ontario bishops at the Vatican in Rome.
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Original:  "In the name of tolerance, your country has had to endure the folly of the redefinition of spouse," the Pope told a group of bishopsfrom Ontario . "In the name of freedom of choice, it is confronted with the daily destruction of unborn children." "When the Creator's divine plan is ignored, the truth of human nature is lost."
Revised:  "In the name of tolerance, your country has had to endure the folly of the redefinition of spouse," the Pope told the bishops . "In the name of freedom of choice, it is confronted with the daily destruction of unborn children." "When the Creator's divine plan is ignored, the truth of human nature is lost."
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Original: Pope Benedict XVI told Canada to end gay marriage and instructed Roman Catholic politicians to not vote for gay marriage, urging them not to sacrifice their personal beliefs for the sake of opinion polls and social trends.
Revised: Pope Benedict XVI told Canada to end gay marriage and instructed Roman Catholic politicians not to vote for gay marriage, urging them not to sacrifice their personal beliefs for the sake of opinion polls and social trends.
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Original: Ralph Bucky Phillips, a long-time New York fugitive, has been cought .
Revised: Ralph Bucky Phillips, a long-time New York fugitive, has been caught .
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Original: Fridays search started just before 2:00 am.
Revised: Friday's search started just before 2:00 am.
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Original:  Phillips looked dirty , and exhausted in a photo of him in the back of the police car.
Revised:  Phillips looked dirty and exhausted in a photo of him in the back of the police car.
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Original:  19-year old Maria Sharapova won her first US Open title, defeating Belgum's Hardenne 6-4 6-4 in the Saturday Final.
Revised: develop 19-year old Maria Sharapova won her first US Open title, defeating Belgum's Hardenne 6-4 6-4 in the Saturday Final.
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Original:  Henin-Hardenne also won all four Grand Slam finals in 2006, yet only took the French Open so far . Image:Story.sharapova.heninap.jp
Revised:  Henin-Hardenne also won all four Grand Slam finals in 2006, yet only took the French Open so far Image:Story.sharapova.heninap.jp
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Original:  Henin-Hardenne also won all four Grand Slam finals in 2006, yet only took the French Open so far . Image:Story.sharapova.heninap.jp
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Original: develop 19-year old Maria Sharapova won her first US Open title, defeating Belgum's Hardenne 6-4 6-4 in the Saturday Final.
Revised:  19-year old Maria Sharapova won her first US Open title, defeating Belgum's Hardenne 6-4 6-4 in the Saturday Final.
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Original: 19-year old Maria Sharapova won her first US Open title, defeating Belgum's Hardenne 6-4  6-4 in the Saturday Final .
Revised: 19-year old Maria Sharapova won her first US Open title, defeating Belgum's Hardenne 6-4 , 6-4 in the Saturday Final .
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Original: 19-year old Maria Sharapova won her first US Open title, defeating Belgum's Hardenne 6-4  6-4 in the Saturday Final .
Revised: 19-year old Maria Sharapova won her first US Open title, defeating Belgum's Hardenne 6-4 6-4 in the Saturday final .
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Original:  Justine Henin-Hardenne defeated the Serb Jelena Jankovik 4-6  6-4  4-0.
Revised:  Justine Henin-Hardenne defeated the Serb Jelena Jankovik 4-6 , 6-4 4-0.
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Original:  Justine Henin-Hardenne defeated the Serb Jelena Jankovik 4-6  6-4  4-0.
Revised:  Justine Henin-Hardenne defeated the Serb Jelena Jankovik 4-6 6-4 , 4-0.
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Original:  After her win, Sharapova commented that she was excited to be in "...her favorite city in the world."
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Original: The loss for Australia in Johannesburg extends their poor record in South Africa , with their last win their in 2000, and their last win at specifically Ellis Park being over 40 years ago.
Revised: The loss for Australia in Johannesburg extends their poor record in South Africa - their last win their in 2000, and their last win at specifically Ellis Park being over 40 years ago.
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Original: The loss for Australia in Johannesburg extends their poor record in South Africa , with their last win their in 2000, and their last win at specifically Ellis Park being over 40 years ago.
Revised: The loss for Australia in Johannesburg extends their poor record in South Africa , with their last win there was in 2000, and their last win at specifically Ellis Park being over 40 years ago.
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Original: The loss for Australia in Johannesburg extends their poor record in South Africa , with their last win their in 2000, and their last win at specifically Ellis Park being over 40 years ago.
Revised: The loss for Australia in Johannesburg extends their poor record in South Africa , with their last win their in 2000, and their last win at Ellis Park was over 40 years ago.
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Original:  International rugby continues throughout the rest of the year, with a number of teams involved in 2007 Rugby World Cup qualifying, and the November Tests matches in the Northern Hemisphere
Revised:  International rugby continues throughout the rest of the year, with a number of teams involved in 2007 Rugby World Cup qualifying, and November Tests matches in the Northern Hemisphere
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Original:  International rugby continues throughout the rest of the year, with a number of teams involved in 2007 Rugby World Cup qualifying, and the November Tests matches in the Northern Hemisphere
Revised:  International rugby continues throughout the rest of the year, with a number of teams involved in 2007 Rugby World Cup qualifying, and the November Tests matches in the northern hemisphere
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Original: Michael Schumacher won 2006 Italian Grand Prix, victorious German will retire this year Michael Schumacher won the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
Revised: Michael Schumacher won Michael Schumacher won the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
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Original: Michael Schumacher won 2006 Italian Grand Prix, victorious German will retire this year Michael Schumacher won the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
Revised: Michael Schumacher won 2006 Italian Grand Prix, victorious German will retire this year the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
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Original: Michael Schumacher Michael Schumacher won the FIA Formula-1 Italian Grand Prix on the on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
Revised: Michael Schumacher Michael Schumacher won the FIA Formula One Italian Grand Prix on the on the Autodromo Nazionale Monza racing track.
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Original:  The "Red Baron" passed the checkered flag and won the race for 90th time in his long lasted Formula-1 career.
Revised:  The "Red Baron" passed the checkered flag and won the race , the 90th time in his long lasted Formula-1 career.
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Original:  The "Red Baron" passed the checkered flag and won the race for 90th time in his long lasted Formula-1 career.
Revised:  The "Red Baron" passed the checkered flag and won the race for 90th win in his long lasted Formula-1 career.
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Original:  The "Red Baron" passed the checkered flag and won the race for 90th time in his long lasted Formula-1 career.
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Original:  Kimi Räikkönen, the McLaren Mercedes driver started from pole, but was unable to struggle with him after his first pit-stop and finished second.
Revised:  Kimi Räikkönen, the McLaren Mercedes driver started from pole, but was unable to keep up with Schumacher after the first pit-stop and finished second.
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Original:  As expected, Ferrari's winner declared his future in Formula-1 after the race.
Revised:  As expected, Ferrari's winner spoke of his future in Formula-1 after the race.
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Original:  As expected, Ferrari's winner declared his future in Formula-1 after the race.
Revised:  As expected, Ferrari's winner declared his future in Formula One after the race.
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Original:  He  will retire from the Formula One as the man who wins the most then the other drivers - a true champion of this sport.
Revised:  He announced that he will retire from the Formula One as the man who wins the most then the other drivers - a true champion of this sport.
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