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Original: A wind swath of Richard showing watches and warnings Richard has become a Category one hurricane with winds of 85 mph (155 kph) according to the Miami-based National Hurricane Center .
Revised: A wind swath of Richard showing watches and warnings Richard has become a hurricane with winds of 85 mph (155 kph) according to the Miami-based National Hurricane Center .
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Original: A wind swath of Richard showing watches and warnings Richard has become a Category one hurricane with winds of 85 mph (155 kph) according to the Miami-based National Hurricane Center .
Revised: A wind swath of Richard showing watches and warnings Richard has become a Category one hurricane with winds of 85 mph (155 kph) according to the Miami-based .
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Original:  Richard is located 95 mi (155 km) east of Belize City , Belize, however it is still dumping heavy rains in Honduras.
Revised:  Richard is located 95 mi (155 km) east of , Belize, however it is still dumping heavy rains in Honduras.
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Original:  A tropical storm warning is also up for east coast of Yucatán Peninsula from Punta Gruesa to Chetumal.
Revised:  A tropical storm warning is also up for east coast of from Punta Gruesa to Chetumal.
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Original: Citing a growing Hispanic population, the American broadcast network ABC announced that all primetime shows in their upcoming lineup will be closed captioned in both English and Spanish.
Revised: Citing a growing Hispanic population, the American Broadcasting Company (ABC) announced that all primetime shows in their upcoming lineup will be closed captioned in both English and Spanish.
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Original:  In addition, four of the shows, as well as many theatrically-released films and other specials  will be dubbed in Spanish.
Revised:  In addition, four of the shows, as well as many theatrically-released films and other specials , will be dubbed in Spanish.
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Original:  The secondary audio program function (often referred to as SAP) , allows an optional second audio transmission, which is usually used for transmitting programs in Spanish.
Revised:  The Secondary Audio Program (SAP) function allows an optional second audio transmission, which is usually used for transmitting programs in Spanish.
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Original:  However, the additional cost of hiring voice actors to provide the dialogue, as well as production costs, had been too prohibitive for most networks to utilize .
Revised:  However, the additional costs of hiring voice actors to provide the dialogue, as well as production costs, had been too prohibitive for most networks to utilize .
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Original:  However, the additional cost of hiring voice actors to provide the dialogue, as well as production costs, had been too prohibitive for most networks to utilize .
Revised:  However, the additional cost of hiring voice actors to provide the dialogue, as well as production costs, have been prohibitive for most networks to utilize .
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Original:  However, the additional cost of hiring voice actors to provide the dialogue, as well as production costs, had been too prohibitive for most networks to utilize .
Revised:  However, the additional cost of hiring voice actors to provide the dialogue, as well as production costs, had been too prohibitive for most networks .
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Original:  George Lopez will continue to air  dubbed in Spanish.
Revised:  George Lopez will continue to air , dubbed in Spanish.
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Original:   voice actors are currently being cast for the roles
Revised:  Spanish voice actors are currently being cast for the roles
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Original: The Secondary Audio Program (SAP ) function allows an optional second audio transmission, which is usually used for transmitting programs in Spanish.
Revised: The SAP function allows an optional second audio transmission, which is usually used for transmitting programs in Spanish.
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Original: The Secondary Audio Program (SAP ) function allows an optional second audio transmission, which is usually used for transmitting programs in Spanish.
Revised: The Secondary Audio Program (SAP ) function allows an optional second audio transmission, which may be used for transmitting programs in Spanish.
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Original:  McPherson said that while the cost was "not inexpensive", having Spanish-speaking viewership could yield a significant benefit.
Revised:  McPherson said that while it was "not inexpensive", having Spanish-speaking viewership could yield a significant benefit.
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Original:  Richard seven hours before landfall It has also been reported that 3 foot (1 meter) waves were beginning to hit against the docks.
Revised:  It has also been reported that 3 foot (1 meter) waves were beginning to hit against the docks.
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Original:  Residents have advised that they have taken adequate preparations for the storm with one man saying that "he expected only some beach erosion and minor damage to homes  
Revised:  Residents have advised that they have taken adequate preparations for the storm with one man saying that "he expected only some beach erosion and minor damage to homes " 
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Original:  Richard is currently lashing the country with strong winds and heavy rain . Officials have advised that heavy rains could cause life threatening floods and landslides.
Revised:  Richard is currently lashing the country with strong winds and heavy rain , which, officials have said, could cause life threatening floods and landslides.
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Original:  Richard seven hours before landfall Officials have revealed that 10,000 people are currently sheltering in schools and churches, while some have moved to Belmopan  as the island is battered by strong winds and heavy rains.
Revised:  Richard seven hours before landfall Officials have revealed that 10,000 people are currently sheltering in schools and churches, while some have moved to Belmopan , as the island is battered by strong winds and heavy rains.
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Original:  Tourists have been evacuated from vulnerable areas, however some residents have decided to ride out the storm in their homes.
Revised:  Although tourists have been evacuated from vulnerable areas, however some residents have decided to ride out the storm in their homes.
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Original:  Tourists have been evacuated from vulnerable areas, however some residents have decided to ride out the storm in their homes.
Revised:  Tourists have been evacuated from vulnerable areas, some residents have decided to ride out the storm in their homes.
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Original:  The area that Richard landfall is populated with neighborhoods made of wooden houses with zinc roofs.
Revised:  The area which Richard made landfall in is populated with neighborhoods made of wooden houses with zinc roofs.
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Original:  According to a clerk at a bed and breakfast, Fanny Llanos, " The winds are very strong [and are] getting stronger."
Revised:  According to a clerk at a bed and breakfast, Fanny Llanos, " the winds are very strong [and are] getting stronger."
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Original:  It has also been reported that 3 foot (1 meter) waves were beginning to hit against the docks.
Revised:  It has also been reported that 3 foot (1 meter) waves were beginning to hit the docks.
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Original:  Local emergency officials have advised store owner's not to increase prices as people tried to stock up for the impending arrival of Richard . Landslides have blocked one of the countries highways in the Colon province, blocking access to 40 towns leaving 15,000 people trapped.
Revised:  Local emergency officials have advised store owners not to increase prices as people tried to stock up for the impending arrival of Richard . Landslides have blocked one of the countries highways in the Colon province, blocking access to 40 towns leaving 15,000 people trapped.
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Original:  Residents have advised that they have taken adequate preparations for the storm with one man saying that "he expected only some beach erosion and minor damage to homes  "
Revised:  Residents have advised that they have taken adequate preparations for the storm with one man saying that "he expected only some beach erosion and minor damage to homes . "
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Original:  Richard seven hours before landfall Officials have revealed that 10,000 people are currently sheltering in schools and churches, while some have moved to Belmopan, as the island is battered by strong winds and heavy rains.
Revised:  Richard seven hours before landfall Officials have revealed that 10,000 people are currently sheltering in schools and churches, while some have moved to Belmopan, as the country is battered by strong winds and heavy rains.
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Original:  She also said that palm tress were struggling in the winds and there were loud sounds all around.
Revised:  She also said that palm trees were struggling in the winds and there were loud sounds all around.
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Original: The head of the US Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) , Michael Brown , has been recalled to Washington after critisism of his role in managing the Hurricane Katrina crisis.
Revised:  US Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) , Michael Brown , has been recalled to Washington after critisism of his role in managing the Hurricane Katrina crisis.
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Original: US Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) Director Michael Brown has been recalled to Washington after critisism of his role in managing the Hurricane Katrina crisis.
Revised: US Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) Director Michael Brown has been recalled to Washington after criticism of his role in managing the Hurricane Katrina crisis.
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Original:  Questions are being raised over Brown's background and his claims of previous experience in disaster managment . US Secretary of the Department of Homeland Security Michael Chertoff is to hold a press conference in Baton Rouge at 13:45 EDT, where it is expected that an announcment will be made over Brown's future role
Revised:  Questions are being raised over Brown's background and his claims of previous experience in disaster management . US Secretary of the Department of Homeland Security Michael Chertoff is to hold a press conference in Baton Rouge at 13:45 EDT, where it is expected that an announcment will be made over Brown's future role
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Original:  Questions are being raised over Brown's background and his claims of previous experience in disaster managment . US Secretary of the Department of Homeland Security Michael Chertoff is to hold a press conference in Baton Rouge at 13:45 EDT, where it is expected that an announcment will be made over Brown's future role
Revised:  Questions are being raised over Brown's background and his claims of previous experience in disaster managment . US Secretary of the Department of Homeland Security Michael Chertoff is to hold a press conference in Baton Rouge at 13:45 EDT, where it is expected that an announcement will be made over Brown's future role
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Original: frame|Michael Brown US Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) Director Michael Brown has been recalled to Washington after criticism of his role in managing the Hurricane Katrina crisis.
Revised: Michael Brown US Federal Emergency Management Agency (FEMA) Director Michael Brown has been recalled to Washington after criticism of his role in managing the Hurricane Katrina crisis.
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Original:  The majority of the population live of less than 1 US$ a day.
Revised:  The majority of the population live of less than one US$ a day.
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Original:  4 million people out of a population of 10 million face hunger every single day.
Revised:  Four million people out of a population of 10 million face hunger every single day.
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Original:  4 million people out of a population of 10 million face hunger every single day.
Revised:  4 million people out of a population of ten million face hunger every single day.
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Original:  The prices on the other hand  increased by 50\%, making it even harder for the affected people.
Revised:  The prices on the other hand have increased by 50\%, making it even harder for the affected people.
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Original:  Oxfam estimates that in the entire southern Africa region, about 10 million people would face serious food shortages late this year if the world doesn 't act quickly.
Revised:  Oxfam estimates that in the entire southern Africa region, about 10 million people would face serious food shortages late this year if the developed countries don 't act quickly.
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Original:  The majority of the population live of less than one US dollar a day.
Revised:  The majority of the population live on less than one US dollar a day.
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Original: Law enforcement authorities in New Orleans are confiscating private weapons , sources in the city say, whether they're stolen or not.
Revised: Law enforcement authorities in New Orleans are confiscating privately owned firearms , sources in the city say, whether they're stolen or not.
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Original:  And although this is being enforced, it's not entirely even: private guards are being allowed to keep their weapons .
Revised:  And although this is being enforced, it's not entirely even: private guards are being allowed to keep their firearms .
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Original:  The confiscations come after a wave of gun violence swept over the flood-ravaged city, with looters shooting at other refugees, police and military authorties,  and even hospital personnel.
Revised:  The confiscations come after a wave of gun violence swept over the flood-ravaged city, with looters shooting at other refugees, police and military authorties, rescuers, and even hospital personnel.
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Original:  It's not at all clear that this action is legal .
Revised:  The legality of this action is legal .
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Original:  If that is the case, the New Orleans confiscation is likely unconstitutional.
Revised:  If that is the case, the New Orleans confiscation may be unconstitutional.
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Original:  Louisiana state law has even clearer wording protecting gun owners from such seizure .
Revised:  Louisiana state law also has terms limiting the state's ability to restrict gun ownership .
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Original:  Upon hearing rumors of this, blogger Michael Barnett, who is manning a New Orleans datacenter, said he would turn in his weapons if authorities came for them.
Revised:  Blogger Michael Barnett, who is manning a New Orleans datacenter, said he would turn in his weapons if authorities came for them.
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Original: Law enforcement authorities in New Orleans are confiscating privately owned firearms, sources in the city say , whether they're stolen or not .
Revised: Law enforcement authorities in New Orleans are confiscating firearms, sources in the city say , whether they're stolen or not .
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Original: Law enforcement authorities in New Orleans are confiscating privately owned firearms, sources in the city say , whether they're stolen or not .
Revised: Law enforcement authorities in New Orleans are confiscating privately owned firearms, sources in the city say .
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Original:  And although this is being enforced, it's not entirely even: private guards are being allowed to keep their firearms.
Revised:  And although this is being enforced, private guards with permits are being allowed to keep their firearms.
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Original:  Not that legal concerns matter to the people on the ground.
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Original:  The quake prompted a tsunami warning, which was later canceled  
Revised:  The quake prompted a tsunami warning, which was later canceled . 
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Original:  The magnitude of the earthquake was first reported by the USGS as 7.5 MW, but the agency later revised their measurement, reporting it as 7.7 MW  
Revised:  The magnitude of the earthquake was first reported by the USGS as 7.5 MW, but the agency later revised their measurement, reporting it as 7.7 MW . 
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Original: A shake map of the earthquake A magnitude 7.7 earthquake occurred off the coast of Sumatra, Indonesia  at 9:42 p.m. local time (14:42 UTC).
Revised: A shake map of the earthquake A magnitude 7.7 earthquake occurred off the coast of Sumatra, Indonesia , at 9:42 p.m. local time (14:42 UTC).
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Original:  The United States Geological Survey (USGS) reported the quake's epicenter at 12.8 miles (20.6 kilometres) deep and approximately 150 miles (240 kilometres) from Bengkulu, Sumatra.
Revised:  The United States Geological Survey (USGS) reported the epicenter of the earthquake at 12.8 miles (20.6 kilometres) deep and approximately 150 miles (240 kilometres) from Bengkulu, Sumatra.
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Original: A shake map of the earthquake A magnitude 7.7 earthquake occurred off the coast of Sumatra , Indonesia, at 9:42 p.m. local time (14:42 UTC).
Revised: A shake map of the earthquake A 7.7 earthquake occurred off the coast of Sumatra , Indonesia, at 9:42 p.m. local time (14:42 UTC).
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Original: A shake map of the earthquake A magnitude 7.7 earthquake occurred off the coast of Sumatra , Indonesia, at 9:42 p.m. local time (14:42 UTC).
Revised: A shake map of the earthquake A magnitude 7.7 earthquake occurred off the coast of , Indonesia, at 9:42 p.m. local time (14:42 UTC).
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Original:  The quake prompted a tsunami warning, which was later canceled.
Revised:  The quake prompted a warning, which was later canceled.
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Original:  Residents panicked and ran to the hills but now they are starting to come down," said Priyadi Kardono, a spokesperson for the Indonesian National Board for Disaster Management .
Revised:  Residents panicked and ran to the hills but now they are starting to come down," said Priyadi Kardono, a spokesperson for the .
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Original:  Sofyan Alawi, who felt the quake in Padang , Sumatra, said, "Everyone was running out of their houses."
Revised:  Sofyan Alawi, who felt the quake in , Sumatra, said, "Everyone was running out of their houses."
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Original:  The Pacific Tsunami Warning Center issued a tsunami watch in response to the earthquake, but it was later lifted.
Revised:  The issued a tsunami watch in response to the earthquake, but it was later lifted.
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Original:  The magnitude of the earthquake was first reported by the USGS as 7.5 MW, but the agency later revised their measurement, reporting it as 7.7 MW. Several aftershocks hit the same area, near the Mentawai Islands . A magnitude 5.0 quake followed less than one hour after the original, and a magnitude 6.1 aftershock struck around four hours later  
Revised:  The magnitude of the earthquake was first reported by the USGS as 7.5 MW, but the agency later revised their measurement, reporting it as 7.7 MW. Several aftershocks hit the same area, near the Mentawai Islands . A magnitude 5.0 quake followed less than one hour after the original, and a magnitude 6.1 aftershock struck around four hours later . 
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Original:  On a lighter note, while the report is critical of Annan, it also says that the Oil for Food program did help get food to many Iraqis  
Revised:  On a lighter note, while the report is critical of Annan, it also says that the Oil for Food program did help get food to many Iraqis . 
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Original:  The earthquake hit close to the Solomon Islands in the pacific region, in the early hours of the morning.
Revised:  earthquake hit close to the Solomon Islands in the pacific region, in the early hours of the morning.
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Original:  The US Geological Survey has stated that Tsunami warnings are yet to be released and that no major damage occurred   .
Revised:  The US Geological Survey has stated that Tsunami warnings are yet to be released and that no major damage occurred . .
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Original: The earthquake hit close to the Solomon Islands in the pacific region, in the early hours of the morning.
Revised: An earthquake hit close to the Solomon Islands in the pacific region, in the early hours of the morning.
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Original:  Geoscience Australia duty seismologist Marco Maldoni told AFP, "This is one of the most active seismic regions in the world -- in the last three years we have had 30 plus earthquakes of over 6.0 magnitude .
Revised:  "This is one of the most active seismic regions in the world -- in the last three years we have had 30 plus earthquakes of over 6.0 magnitude .
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Original:  Geoscience Australia duty seismologist Marco Maldoni told AFP, "This is one of the most active seismic regions in the world -- in the last three years we have had 30 plus earthquakes of over 6.0 magnitude .
Revised:  Geoscience Australia duty seismologist Marco Maldoni told AFP, "This is one of the most active seismic regions in the world -- in the last three years we have had 30 plus earthquakes of over 6.0 magnitude ," Geoscience Australia Duty Seismologist Marco Maldoni told AFP
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Original: An earthquake hit close to the in the pacific region , in the early hours of Thursday morning.
Revised: An earthquake hit close to the , in the early hours of Thursday morning.
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Original:  It was circa 184 kilometres from Lata and 487 kilometres from the capital Honiara.
Revised:  It was about 184 kilometres from Lata and 487 kilometres from the capital Honiara.
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Original:  It was about 184 kilometres from Lata and 487 kilometres from the capital Honiara .
Revised:  It was about 184 from and 487 kilometres from the capital Honiara .
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Original:  It was about 184 kilometres from Lata and 487 kilometres from the capital Honiara .
Revised:  It was about 184 kilometres from Lata and 487 kilometres from the capital .
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Original:  The geographical position of the Solomon Islands places them in ‘the ring of fire ’, an area of tectonic activity in the basin of the Pacific Ocean that is subject to frequent earthquakes and volcanic eruptions.
Revised:  The geographical position of the Solomon Islands places them in ‘the ’, an area of tectonic activity in the basin of the Pacific Ocean that is subject to frequent earthquakes and volcanic eruptions.
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Original:  "This is one of the most active seismic regions in the world -- in the last three years we have had 30 plus earthquakes of over 6.0 magnitude," Geoscience Australia Duty Seismologist Marco Maldoni told AFP
Revised:  "This is one of the most active seismic regions in the world -- in the last three years we have had 30 plus earthquakes of over 6.0 magnitude," Duty Seismologist Marco Maldoni told AFP
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Original: rght| The Solomon Islands in the Pacific.
Revised:  The Solomon Islands in the Pacific.
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Original:  Released by New Line Cinema  
Revised:  Released by New Line Cinema . 
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Original: The Exorcism of Emily Rose Sony Pictures Laura Linney, Campbell Scott, Shohreh Aghdashloo  The Man Samuel L. Jackson, Eugene Levy An "on-the-take" federal agent turns up dead on the mean streets of Detroit, suspicions arise around street-wise agent Derrick Vann (  Samuel L. Jackson).
Revised: The Exorcism of Emily Rose Sony Pictures Laura Linney, Campbell Scott, Shohreh Aghdashloo . The Man Samuel L. Jackson, Eugene Levy An "on-the-take" federal agent turns up dead on the mean streets of Detroit, suspicions arise around street-wise agent Derrick Vann ( Samuel L. Jackson).
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