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Original:  16th century 1500s Year Date Event Source 1500 In the Battle of Manila the Tondo Dynasty defeated by Bruneian Empire.
Revised:  16th century 1500s Year Date Event Source 1500 In the Battle of Manila the Tondo Dynasty was defeated by the Bruneian Empire.
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Original:  And the Rise of Kingdom of Maynila the puppet state under the Bolkiah dynasty had installed its puppet ruler under Rajah Sulayman.
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Original:  And the Rise of Kingdom of Maynila the puppet state under the Bolkiah dynasty had installed its puppet ruler under Rajah Sulayman.
Revised:  And the Rise of Kingdom of Maynila was established under the Bolkiah dynasty had installed its puppet ruler under Rajah Sulayman.
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Original:  And the Rise of Kingdom of Maynila the puppet state under the Bolkiah dynasty had installed its puppet ruler under Rajah Sulayman.
Revised:  And the Rise of Kingdom of Maynila the puppet state under the Bolkiah dynasty under Rajah Sulayman.
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Original:  Sultan Bolkiah of Bruniean Empire Allies which is Maynla , Sultanate of Sulu and Maguindanao had failed to attack the Panay Island and wage a war against the Madyas Confederation.
Revised:  Sultan Bolkiah of Bruniean Empireand its allies consisting of Maynila , Sultanate of Sulu and Maguindanao had failed to attack the Panay Island and wage a war against the Madyas Confederation.
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Original:  Sultan Bolkiah of Bruniean Empire Allies which is Maynla , Sultanate of Sulu and Maguindanao had failed to attack the Panay Island and wage a war against the Madyas Confederation.
Revised:  Sultan Bolkiah of Bruniean Empire Allies which is Maynla , Sultanate of Sulu and Maguindanao had failed to attack the Panay Island and waged a war against the Madyas Confederation.
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Original:  1937 February 3–7 The 33rd International Eucharistic Congress was held in Rizal Park, Manila  , Philippines;
Revised:  1937 February 3–7 The 33rd International Eucharistic Congress was held in Rizal Park , Philippines;
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Original:  1937 February 3–7 The 33rd International Eucharistic Congress was held in Rizal Park, Manila  , Philippines;
Revised:  1937 February 3–7 The 33rd International Eucharistic Congress was held in Rizal Park, Manila , Manila , Philippines;
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Original:  Sultan Bolkiah of Bruniean Empireand its allies consisting of Maynila, Sultanate of Sulu and Maguindanao had failed to attack the Panay Island and waged a war against the Madyas Confederation.
Revised:  Sultan Bolkiah of Bruneian Empire and its allies consisting of Maynila, Sultanate of Sulu and Maguindanao had failed to attack the Panay Island and waged a war against the Madyas Confederation.
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Original: Details Home detention is an alternative to imprisonment;
Revised:  Home detention is an alternative to imprisonment;
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Original:  The agency's primary aim is to ensure that New Zealanders get the best possible health outcomes as is possible from pharmaceutical treatment with the limited amount of Government funding available.
Revised:  The agency's primary aim is "to secure for eligible people in need of pharmaceuticals, the best health outcomes that are reasonably achievable from pharmaceutical treatment with the limited amount of Government funding available.
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Original:  Doctors and organisations like Medicins Sans Frontieres have also expressed concern.
Revised:  Doctors and organisations like Médecins Sans Frontières have also expressed concern.
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Original:  Generally, organic marketing occurs alongside strategic marketing, as the perception of the city is rather impossible to solely construct with strategic efforts.
Revised:  Generally, organic marketing occurs alongside strategic marketing, as the perception of the city is impossible to solely construct with strategic efforts.
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Original:  City Brand Index The City Brand Index is released biannually and ranks the image of 50 cities on 6 components: presence, place, potential, pulse, people, and prerequisites.
Revised: Like with any successful marketing effort, cities must be willing to commit to a long-term plan in order for their identity and message to be communicated effectively. A shared vision between stakeholders will help develop a cohesive overarching strategy for a city's image. City Brand Index The City Brand Index is released biannually and ranks the image of 50 cities on 6 components: presence, place, potential, pulse, people, and prerequisites.
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Original:  and is an effect of globalisation .
Revised:  and is an effect of globalization .
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Original: On 26 February 2016, he tweeted from his personal account quoting Islamic hadith that promotes killing people who practice URL This sparked critics from general public, muslim scholars and human rights advocates due to growing intolerance towards LGBT community in Indonesia.
Revised: On 26 February 2016, he tweeted from his personal account quoting Islamic hadith that promotes killing people who practice URL This sparked criticism from general public, muslim scholars and human rights advocates due to growing intolerance towards LGBT community in Indonesia.
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Original:   References External links Partai Keadilan Sejahtera Category:1961 births Category:Living people Category:People from Bukittinggi Category:Government ministers of Indonesia Category:Prosperous Justice Party politicians Category:Indonesian Muslims Category:Minangkabau people Category:Karo peop
Revised:  References Category:1961 births Category:Living people Category:People from Bukittinggi Category:Government ministers of Indonesia Category:Prosperous Justice Party politicians Category:Indonesian Muslims Category:Minangkabau people Category:Karo peop
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Original:  He has a degree in computer engineering from the Information and Computing Management School (), Jakarta, and was active in a number of Indonesian Islamic organisations from his student days, such as PII, the Indonesian Student's Association Life and Family His father is Karo and moved to Bukittinggi where he married a Minangkabau woman.
Revised:  Life and Family His father is Karo and moved to Bukittinggi where he married a Minangkabau woman.
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Original: Tifatul Sembiring (born 28 September 1961 in Bukitinggi, West Sumatra ) is an Indonesian politician.
Revised: Tifatul Sembiring (born 28 September 1961 ) is an Indonesian politician.
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Original: Charlotte, North Carolina, police camera footage showed Keith Lamont Scott was wearing a w00tstock.net t-shirt when he was shot and killed by police  .
Revised: Police camera footage showed Keith Lamont Scott was wearing a w00tstock.net t-shirt when he was shot and killed by police .
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Original: Charlotte, North Carolina, police camera footage showed Keith Lamont Scott was wearing a w00tstock.net t-shirt when he was shot and killed by police  .
Revised: Charlotte, North Carolina, police camera footage showed Keith Lamont Scott was wearing a w00tstock.net T-shirt when he was shot and killed by police .
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Original: v5.0: Thursday, July 18, 2013 File:W00tstock 5.0 18 July 2013 SB and H star R.png|400px|Homestar Runner and Strong Bad at W00tstock 5.0. on July 18, 2013.
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Original:  Background%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Economic background Belarus is an important transit route of Russian gas to Europe, with around 20–25\% of Gazprom's European exports passing through Belarusian territory.
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Original:  Background%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Economic background Belarus is an important transit route of Russian gas to Europe, with around 20–25\% of Gazprom's European exports passing through Belarusian territory.
Revised:  Background%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Belarus is an important transit route of Russian gas to Europe, with around 20–25\% of Gazprom's European exports passing through Belarusian territory.
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Energy in Belarus Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Category:Belarus–Russia relations Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Category:Natural resource conflicts Category:Price disputes involving Gazpr
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Energy in Belarus Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Category:Belarus–Russia relations Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Category:Natural resource conflicts Category:Price disputes involving Gazpr
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Energy in Belarus Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Category:Belarus–Russia relations Russia-Belarus Gas Dispute, 2004 Category:Natural resource conflicts Category:Price disputes involving Gazpr
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Original:  He succeeded his cousin, Bongbong Marcos and was succeeded by Imee Marcos.
Revised:  He was preceded by cousin, Bongbong Marcos and was succeeded by Imee Marcos.
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Original: In 2019 elections, he again ran for the same position  with the support of the Marcos clan.
Revised: In 2019 elections, he again ran for the same position ; this time with the support of the Marcos clan.
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Original: Michael Edward Marcos Keon (born 22 September 1954) is a Filipino politician.
Revised: Michael Edward Marcos Keon (born September 22, 1954) is a Filipino politician.
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Original: Dozier, Kimberly, "Senior chief must retire despite flawed hazing probe", Washington Post, 18 February 2011, p. 5. Senior Chief Petty Officer Michael Toussaint, was awarded the Silver Star for "great battlefield courage" during a special operations raid in Afghanistan.
Revised: Dozier, Kimberly, "Senior chief must retire despite flawed hazing probe", Washington Post, 18 February 2011, p. 5. In 2011, Toussaint was awarded the Silver Star for "great battlefield courage" during a special operations raid in Afghanistan.
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Original: Dozier, Kimberly, "Senior chief must retire despite flawed hazing probe", Washington Post, 18 February 2011, p. 5. Senior Chief Petty Officer Michael Toussaint, was awarded the Silver Star for "great battlefield courage" during a special operations raid in Afghanistan.
Revised: Dozier, Kimberly, "Senior chief must retire despite flawed hazing probe", Washington Post, 18 February 2011, p. 5. Senior Chief Petty Officer Michael Toussaint, was awarded the Silver Star for "great battlefield courage" during a special operations raid 
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Original:  Receiving the nation's third-highest military honor marks the bittersweet end to a 22-year career marred by a hazing scandal that erupted long after he'd left his position as kennel master at the Navy's base in Bahrain in URL
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Original: The Navy held a retirement pay hearing for Touissant at Norfolk Naval Station in February 2010.
Revised: The Navy held a retirement pay hearing for Toussaint at Norfolk Naval Station in February 2010.
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Original:  After two days of testimony and 30 minutes of deliberation, the panel unanimously recommended that Touissant be retired as a senior chief petty officer.
Revised:  After two days of testimony and 30 minutes of deliberation, the panel unanimously recommended that Toussaint be retired as a senior chief petty officer.
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Original:  Juan Garcia, assistant secretary of the Navy for manpower and reserve affairs, decided to allow Touissant to retire at his current rank of senior chief petty officer.
Revised:  Juan Garcia, assistant secretary of the Navy for manpower and reserve affairs, decided to allow Toussaint to retire at his current rank of senior chief petty officer.
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Original:  However, finding a kingdom disinterested in Christianity if it did not facilitate trade in firearms, the missionaries quickly left.
Revised:  However, finding a kingdom uninterested in Christianity if it did not facilitate trade in firearms, the missionaries quickly left.
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Original:  The missionararies soon left, as the kingdom was not interested in Christianity unless this was coupled to the facilitation of trade in firearms.
Revised:  The missionaries soon left, as the kingdom was not interested in Christianity unless this was coupled to the facilitation of trade in firearms.
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Original:  Following several single releases, and a  11 chart hit with "Fat Jack",Dutch Chart archive they took part in the 1970 Dutch Eurovision selection, where their song "Waterman" ("Aquarius") earned a narrow victory, qualifying them for the 15th Eurovision Song Contest, which took place on 21 March on home ground in Amsterdam.
Revised:  Following several single releases, and a No. 11 chart hit with "Fat Jack",Dutch Chart archive they took part in the 1970 Dutch Eurovision selection, where their song "Waterman" ("Aquarius") earned a narrow victory, qualifying them for the 15th Eurovision Song Contest, which took place on 21 March on home ground in Amsterdam.
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Original: Eurovision Song Contest National Finals database - 1970 Technically, groups of more than two singers were still barred from Eurovision at that time, so to get around this they billed themselves as 'Patricia and the Hearts of Soul', implying that Stella and Bianca were backing singers to Patricia's lead.
Revised: Eurovision Song Contest National Finals database – 1970 Technically, groups of more than two singers were still barred from Eurovision at that time, so to get around this they billed themselves as 'Patricia and the Hearts of Soul', implying that Stella and Bianca were backing singers to Patricia's lead.
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Original: ESC History - 1970 In 1973, the Maessens moved to Belgium, where they became in-demand backing vocalists.
Revised: ESC History – 1970 In 1973, the Maessens moved to Belgium, where they became in-demand backing vocalists.
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Original:  Bianca had married a Belgian singer, Luc Smets, and the four decided to form a group called Dream Express, enjoying immediate success with a single, also called "Dream Express", which reached  2 on the Flemish chart in 1976.
Revised:  Bianca had married a Belgian singer, Luc Smets, and the four decided to form a group called Dream Express, enjoying immediate success with a single, also called "Dream Express", which reached No. 2 on the Flemish chart in 1976.
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Original:  In 1977, Dream Express entered, and won, the Belgian Eurovision selection with the song "A Million In One, Two, Three".
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Original: Eurovision Song Contest National Finals database - 1977 Sung in English, it was a very contemporary track which was widely regarded as one of the favourites for that year's Eurovision, held in London on 7 May.
Revised: Eurovision Song Contest National Finals database – 1977 Sung in English, it was a very contemporary track which was widely regarded as one of the favourites for that year's Eurovision, held in London on 7 May.
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Original: ESC History - 1977 Patricia left Dream Express soon afterwards, and the others carried on as LBS before disbanding in 1981.
Revised: ESC History – 1977 Patricia left Dream Express soon afterwards, and the others carried on as LBS before disbanding in 1981.
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Original: Eurovision Song Contest National Finals database - 1981 She returned in 1982 with the French language song "Si tu aimes ma musique" ("If You Like My Music"), which was successful and went on to the 27th Eurovision in Harrogate, England on 24 April.
Revised: Eurovision Song Contest National Finals database – 1981 She returned in 1982 with the French language song "Si tu aimes ma musique" ("If You Like My Music"), which was successful and went on to the 27th Eurovision in Harrogate, England on 24 April.
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Original: Eurovision Song Contest National Finals database - 1982 Although that year's contest proved to be a one-horse race (with a runaway German victory), Maessen managed a creditable fourth place of 18 entries, also achieving the rare distinction of receiving points from every other participating country.
Revised: Eurovision Song Contest National Finals database – 1982 Although that year's contest proved to be a one-horse race (with a runaway German victory), Maessen managed a creditable fourth place of 18 entries, also achieving the rare distinction of receiving points from every other participating country.
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Original: ESC History - 1982
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Original:  He was the first non military individual that held the position since PNI cadre, Sanusi, in the late 1950's.
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Original:  During the past 10 years, I experienced the era of five presidents since Suharto era until Yudhoyono."<ref>
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Original:  Life Ernestine Hayes was raised in Juneau, and from the age of fifteen lived in California.
Revised: Early Life Ernestine Hayes was raised in Juneau, and from the age of fifteen lived in California.
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Original:  She moved back to Alaska when she was 40 years old, and at the age of 55, she graduated from the University of Alaska Southeast , magna cum laude .
Revised:  She moved back to Alaska when she was 40 years old, and at the age of 55, she graduated from the University of Alaska Southeast .
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Original:  In 2003, she graduated from University of Alaska Anchorage as Master of Fine Arts  in Creative Writing and Literary Arts.
Revised:  In 2003, she graduated from University of Alaska Anchorage with a Master of Fine Arts in Creative Writing and Literary Arts.
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Original:  She currently teaches at University of Alaska Southeast and is associated faculty for the University of Alaska Anchorage  low-residence MFA program.
Revised:  She currently teaches at University of Alaska Southeast , while also serving as associated faculty for the University of Alaska Anchorage low-residence MFA program.
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Original:  She currently teaches at University of Alaska Southeast and is associated faculty for the University of Alaska Anchorage  low-residence MFA program.
Revised:  She currently teaches at University of Alaska Southeast and is associated faculty for the University of Alaska Anchorage 's low-residence MFA program.
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Original:  Hayes is an active promoter of Native rights and culture, and decolonization .
Revised:  Hayes actively promotes Native rights and culture, and decolonization .
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Original:  For just over a year, she wrote a column, "Edge of the Village ", for the Juneau Empire  .
Revised:  For just over a year, she wrote a column, "Edge of the Village ," for the Juneau Empire .
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Original:    Awards 2002 Alaska Native Writer Award Anchorage Daily News Fiction 2006 Native America Calling October Book of the Month 2007 Kiriyama Prize finalist for Blonde Indian, An Alaska Native Memoir 2007 PEN-USA non-fiction award finalist 2007 American Book Award.
Revised: Reviews Awards 2002 Alaska Native Writer Award Anchorage Daily News Fiction 2006 Native America Calling October Book of the Month 2007 Kiriyama Prize finalist for Blonde Indian, An Alaska Native Memoir 2007 PEN-USA non-fiction award finalist 2007 American Book Award.
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Original:    Awards 2002 Alaska Native Writer Award Anchorage Daily News Fiction 2006 Native America Calling October Book of the Month 2007 Kiriyama Prize finalist for Blonde Indian, An Alaska Native Memoir 2007 PEN-USA non-fiction award finalist 2007 American Book Award.
Revised:  Blonde Indian Blonde Indian, a memoir of Hayes’s childhood in Southeast Alaska is written with traditional Tlingit stories, fictional character, and historic moments. Blonde Indian is the memoir of Tlingit writer and story-teller Ernestine Hayes. Because of Hayes' fair hair, her grandmother sang out to her "Blonde Indian, blonde Indian" as Hayes danced along. The fictional tale of “Tom,” coincides with an experience similar to Hayes, an Alaskan Native child who is separated from their traditional lifestyle and heritage. In Blonde Indian, Hayes elaborates on her experiences in Western society, narrating her lived experience and traditional stories to honors her Tlingit ancestors and tradition, while shedding light on the impact of colonization on indigenous children and families. Blonde Indian has received much critical acclaim. It was awarded the American Book Award in 2007. Awards 2002 Alaska Native Writer Award Anchorage Daily News Fiction 2006 Native America Calling October Book of the Month 2007 Kiriyama Prize finalist for Blonde Indian, An Alaska Native Memoir 2007 PEN-USA non-fiction award finalist 2007 American Book Award.
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Original:  Book Review Blonde Indian: An Alaska Native Memoir Author:Becca Gercken, Studies in American Indian URL Book Review Observatory Books, Dee Longenbaugh URL
Revised:  Book Review Blonde Indian: An Alaska Native Memoir Author:Becca Gercken, Studies in American Indian URL 
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Original: Early Life Ernestine Hayes, with ancestors of Tlingit descent from the Island of Sitka, was born in Juneau Indian Village.
Revised: Early life Ernestine Hayes, with ancestors of Tlingit descent from the Island of Sitka, was born in Juneau Indian Village.
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Original:  As State Writer Laureate, from 2016-2018 , Hayes visited many small communities of Alaska, like Seward and Seldovia, where she held two-day creative writing workshops.
Revised:  As State Writer Laureate, from 2016 to 2018 , Hayes visited many small communities of Alaska, like Seward and Seldovia, where she held two-day creative writing workshops.
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Original:  Blonde Indian Blonde Indian, a memoir of Hayes ’ s childhood in Southeast Alaska is written with traditional Tlingit stories, fictional character, and historic moments.
Revised:  Blonde Indian Blonde Indian, a memoir of Hayes ' s childhood in Southeast Alaska is written with traditional Tlingit stories, fictional character, and historic moments.
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Original:  It derives its name from the similarity to corduroy wale   
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Original:  It derives its name from the similarity to corduroy wales .
Revised:  It derives its name from the visual similarity to patterns seen in the textile corduroy .
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Original:  The anti-apartheid  Robert McBride found the book to be one of the most influential toward starting his political activism.
Revised:  The anti-apartheid figure Robert McBride found the book to be one of the most influential toward starting his political activism.
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