wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Yesterday February 17, 2006, the w: World Health Organisation |World Health Organisation officially declared presence of the H5N1 strain of theavian flu virus in Egypt.
Revised: Yesterday February 17, 2006, the w: World Health Organisation |World Health Organisation officially declared presence of the H5N1 strain of the avian flu virus in Egypt.
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Original: Despite of avian flu is mainly a disease of poultry,it has also infected 171 people, killing 93 of them, and is steadily Mutation .
Revised: Despite of avian flu is mainly a disease of poultry,it has also infected 171 people, killing 93 of them, and is steadily mutating .
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Original:  Despite of avian flu is mainly a disease of poultry, it has also infected 171 people, killing 93 of them, and is steadily mutating.
Revised:  Despite avian flu mainly being a disease of poultry, it has also infected 171 people, killing 93 of them, and is steadily mutating.
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Original:  If it acquires the ability to pass easily from person to person , it could cause a pandemic that might kill millions
Revised:  If it acquires the ability to pass easily from person to person it could cause a pandemic that might kill millions
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Original:  Their proposal is to support Iranians by both covert military methods and other methods to remove the  government under which president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad was recently elected, in the second round of presidential elections in 2005  and replace it by a new form of government.
Revised:  Their proposal is to support Iranians by both covert military methods and other methods to remove the system of government under which president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad was recently elected, in the second round of presidential elections in 2005 and replace it by a new form of government.
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Original:  Their proposal is to support Iranians by both covert military methods and other methods to remove the  government under which president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad was recently elected, in the second round of presidential elections in 2005  and replace it by a new form of government.
Revised:  Their proposal is to support Iranians by both covert military methods and other methods to remove the government under which president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad was recently elected, in the second round of presidential elections in 2005 , and replace it by a new form of government.
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Original:  The previous removal of an elected government in Iran in which the US was involved was Operation Ajax in 1953, a complex plot involving the CIA and British intelligence services  motivated by Mohammed Mossadegh's nationalisation of oil companies
Revised:  The previous removal of an elected government in Iran in which the US was involved was Operation Ajax in 1953, a complex plot involving the CIA and British intelligence services , motivated by Mohammed Mossadegh's nationalisation of oil companies
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Original:  The report also noted that the MKO is strongly focused on its leadership, the husband and wife team of Masoud and Maryam Rajavi, to the extent that members burned themselves alive in protest when Maryam Rajavi was arrested in Paris.
Revised:  The report also noted that the MKO is strongly focused on its leadership, the husband and wife team of Massoud and Maryam Rajavi, to the extent that members burned themselves alive in protest when Maryam Rajavi was arrested in Paris.
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Original:  The previous removal of an elected government in Iran in which the US was involved was Operation Ajax in 1953, a complex plot involving the CIA and British intelligence services, motivated by Mohammed Mossadegh's nationalisation of oil companies  
Revised:  The previous removal of an elected government in Iran in which the US was involved was Operation Ajax in 1953, a complex plot involving the CIA and British intelligence services, motivated by Mohammed Mossadegh's nationalisation of oil companies . 
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Original:  These early penguins stood 1.5 metres (5 feet) tall, weighing over 100 kilograms (220 pounds), and lived  40 million years ago.
Revised:  These early penguins stood 1.5 metres (5 feet) tall, weighing over 100 kilograms (220 pounds), and lived some 40 million years ago.
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Original:  "I think it's very exciting to find something like this...it's a very rare event to find such a well preserved specimen," he said
Revised:  "I think it's very exciting to find something like this...it's a very rare event to find such a well preserved specimen," he enthused
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Original:  Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi has called for his resignation  
Revised:  Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi has called for his resignation . 
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Original: Ten people died in Benghazi, Libya on Friday when about 1,000 protesters surounded and set fire to an Italian consulate.
Revised: Ten people died in Benghazi, Libya on Friday when about 1,000 protesters surrounded and set fire to an Italian consulate.
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Original:  The riot was in protest of Italian minister Roberto Calderoli, who had worn a T-shirt displaying the Jyllands-Posten Muhammad cartoons.
Revised:  The demonstration was in protest of Italian minister Roberto Calderoli, who had worn a T-shirt displaying the Jyllands-Posten Muhammad cartoons.
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Original:  The clerics called the vaccine a plot led by the United States to sterilize Nigerians or infect the with AIDS.
Revised:  The clerics called the vaccine a plot led by the United States to sterilize Nigerians or infect them with AIDS.
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Original: Egypt's Minister of Health Hatem Mostafa El-Gabaly said Wednesday, " “ Polio has been endemic in our country for all of recorded history.
Revised: Egypt's Minister of Health Hatem Mostafa El-Gabaly said Wednesday, " " Polio has been endemic in our country for all of recorded history.
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Original:  ” Immunizations started up after local officials ended the boycott in July, 2004.
Revised:  " Immunizations started up after local officials ended the boycott in July, 2004.
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Original:  Greend denotes importation of polio.
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Original:  There has been no reported cases of the disease in the past year  leading officials to believe the disease is no longer present.
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Original:  There has been no reported cases of the disease in the past year  leading officials to believe the disease is no longer present.
Revised:  There has been no reported cases of the disease in the past year , leading officials to believe the disease is no longer present.
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Original:  Egypt's Minister of Health Hatem Mostafa El-Gabaly said Wednesday, " "Polio has been endemic in our country for all of recorded history.
Revised:  Egypt's Minister of Health Hatem Mostafa El-Gabaly said Wednesday, "Polio has been endemic in our country for all of recorded history.
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Original: The United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld said Friday that U.S. public deplomacy efforts need to do more in the media to communicate a message friendly to democracy.
Revised: The United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld said Friday that U.S. public diplomacy efforts need to do more in the media to communicate a message friendly to democracy.
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Original:  "We'll need to do all we can to attract supporters to our efforts and to correct the lies that are being told, which so damage our country, and which are repeated and repeated and repeated," Rumsfeld said in his address to the Council of Foreign Relations in New York city   .
Revised:  "We'll need to do all we can to attract supporters to our efforts and to correct the lies that are being told, which so damage our country, and which are repeated and repeated and repeated," Rumsfeld said in his address to the Council of Foreign Relations in New York city . .
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Original: The United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld said Friday that U.S. public diplomacy efforts need to do more in the media to communicate a message friendly to democracy.
Revised: The United States Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld said that U.S. public diplomacy efforts need to do more in the media to communicate a message friendly to democracy.
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Original:  "We'll need to do all we can to attract supporters to our efforts and to correct the lies that are being told, which so damage our country, and which are repeated and repeated and repeated," Rumsfeld said in his address to the Council of Foreign Relations in New York city  .
Revised:  "We'll need to do all we can to attract supporters to our efforts and to correct the lies that are being told, which so damage our country, and which are repeated and repeated and repeated," Rumsfeld said in an address to the Council of Foreign Relations in New York city .
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Original:  "We'll need to do all we can to attract supporters to our efforts and to correct the lies that are being told, which so damage our country, and which are repeated and repeated and repeated," Rumsfeld said in his address to the Council of Foreign Relations in New York city  .
Revised:  "We'll need to do all we can to attract supporters to our efforts and to correct the lies that are being told, which so damage our country, and which are repeated and repeated and repeated," Rumsfeld said in his address to the Council on Foreign Relations in New York city .
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Original:  He said that insurgent groups have learned to use  , and are working 24/7, to manipulate public opinion.  ] 
Revised:  He said that insurgent groups have learned to use , and are working 24/7, to manipulate public opinion. news] 
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Original:  The Department of Defense would begin with an emphasize on using out-sourced media expertise found in the private-sector, as was done with the controversial use of Lincoln Group who placed pro-democracy stories in Iraqi media for the U.S. military.
Revised:  The Department of Defense would begin with an emphasize on using out-sourced media expertise found in the private-sector, as was done with the controversial use of Lincoln Group who placed pro-democracy stories in Iraqi media in a business arrangement with the U.S. military.
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Original:  Rumsfeld was critical of the U.S. media for its sharp response to that program in his address in New York  . But in an appearance on the The Charlie Rose Show, a televised program taped earlier and  aired by PBS on Fridayevening, ...
Revised:  Rumsfeld was critical of the U.S. media for its sharp response to that program in his address in New York . But in an appearance on the The Charlie Rose Show, a televised program taped earlier and then aired by PBS on Fridayevening, ...
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Original: Rumsfeld was critical of the U.S. media for its sharp response to that program in his address in New York, which he said had the effect of stopping that military effort.
Revised: Rumsfeld was critical of the U.S. media for its sharp response to that program at his address in New York, which he said had the effect of stopping that military effort.
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Original:  But in an appearance on the The Charlie Rose Show, a televised program taped earlier and then aired by PBS last Friday, the same day as his New York address, Rumsfeld said "When we heard about it, we said, 'Gee, that's not what we ought to be doing.' ...
Revised:  In an appearance on the The Charlie Rose Show, a televised program taped earlier and then aired by PBS last Friday, the same day as his New York address, Rumsfeld said "When we heard about it, we said, 'Gee, that's not what we ought to be doing.' ...
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Original:  In a Los Angeles Times report, they ...
Revised:  But in a Los Angeles Times report, they ...
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Original: Feb 19, 2006 - India win the Hutch Cup One-Day cricket series 4-1 agains Pakistan.
Revised: Feb 19, 2006 - India 
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Original:  Karachi: Feb 19, 2006 - India won the final match of the recent cricket series.
Revised:  won the final match of the recent cricket series.
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Original:  Mahendra Singh Dhoni (77 not out, 56b, 6x4, 4x6) was another importat contributer to the Indian Innings   .
Revised:  Mahendra Singh Dhoni (77 not out, 56b, 6x4, 4x6) was another importat contributer to the Indian Innings . .
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Original: Sreesanth's effort It was Sreesanth who dented Pakistan in the morning after Zaheer Khan and Ajit Agarkar shared the new ball.
Revised:  It was Sreesanth who dented Pakistan in the morning after Zaheer Khan and Ajit Agarkar shared the new ball.
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Original: Feb 19, 2006 - India won the final match of the recent cricket series.
Revised:  India won the final match of the recent cricket series.
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Original: Paksitan recovered through a strokeful fifth-wicket stand of 95 in 110 balls between Mohammad Yousuf (67, 85b, 6x4) and vice-captain Younis Khan (74 not out, 79b, 3x4, 2x6).
Revised: Pakistan recovered through a strokeful fifth-wicket stand of 95 in 110 balls between Mohammad Yousuf (67, 85b, 6x4) and vice-captain Younis Khan (74 not out, 79b, 3x4, 2x6).
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Original: According to police, as Brown's brother, 31-year-old Dale Ogarro, entered their home on 943 Schenck Ave., he was accosted by two armed men who demanded "where's the money!"
Revised: According to police, as Brown's brother, 31-year-old Dale Ogarro, approached their home on 943 Schenck Ave., he was accosted by two armed men who demanded "where's the money!"
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Original:  The robbers escaped before police arrived .
Revised:  The robbers escaped as police approached .
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Original:  According to police, as Brown's brother, 31-year-old Dale Ogarro, approached their home on 943 Schenck Ave., he was accosted by two armed men who demanded "where's the money!"
Revised:  According to police, as Brown's brother, 31-year-old Dale Ogarro, approached the home on 943 Schenck Ave., he was accosted by two armed men who demanded "where's the money!"
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Original: According to police  , as Brown's brother, 31-year-old Dale Ogarro, approached the home on 943 Schenck Ave., he was accosted by two armed men who demanded "where's the money!"
Revised: According to police reconstruction of events , as Brown's brother, 31-year-old Dale Ogarro, approached the home on 943 Schenck Ave., he was accosted by two armed men who demanded "where's the money!"
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Original:  According to police, Ogarro has been arrested in the past on several drug charges, and the firearm he carried was unregistered .
Revised:  According to police, Ogarro has been arrested in the past on several drug charges, and the firearm he carried was unregistered 
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Original:  On December 12, 2011, police officer Peter J. Figoski was killed while responding to a burglary at a nearby home
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Original:  According to police, Ogarro has been arrested in the past on several drug charges, and the firearm he carried was unregistered  
Revised:  According to police, Ogarro has been arrested in the past on several drug charges, and the firearm he carried was unregistered . 
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Original:  The victim , 26-year-old Duane Browne, was carrying a .38 caliber revolver.
Revised:  The deceased , 26-year-old Duane Browne, was carrying a .38 caliber revolver.
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Original:  2) He made a connection between sex with animals and homosexuality (presumably when he cited passages from the Bible where both activities are condemned in sequence ). 3) He made a conncection between pedophelia and homosexuality.
Revised:  2) He made a connection between sex with animals and homosexuality . (By citing passages from the Bible where both activities are condemned in sequence ). 3) He made a conncection between pedophelia and homosexuality.
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Original:  2) He made a connection between sex with animals and homosexuality (presumably when he cited passages from the Bible where both activities are condemned in sequence ). 3) He made a conncection between pedophelia and homosexuality.
Revised:  2) He made a connection between sex with animals and homosexuality (presumably when he cited passages from the Bible where both activities are condemned in sequence ). 3) He made a conncection between pedophilia and homosexuality.
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Original: ( He argued that a permissive attitude towards homosexuality would "open the gate to forbidden areas and let Sin take root in consciousness".
Revised: ( By arguing that a permissive attitude towards homosexuality would "open the gate to forbidden areas and let Sin take root in consciousness".
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Original:  Thus also leading to other sins like pedophelia .) 4) He used the phrase " Freely I leave purity and accept impurity" with reference to (among other sins) homosexuality.
Revised:  Thus also leading to other sins like pedophelia .) 4) He used the phrase " freely I leave purity and accept impurity" with reference to (among other sins) homosexuality.
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Original:  The forthcoming rally is expected to have over 100,000 in attendance with the People's Alliance for Democracy  leading the affair and various academic and pressure groups all calling for the displacement of the Prime Minister.
Revised:  The forthcoming rally is expected to have over 100,000 in attendance . The People's Alliance for Democracy leading the affair and various academic and pressure groups all calling for the displacement of the Prime Minister.
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Original:  The forthcoming rally is expected to have over 100,000 in attendance with the People's Alliance for Democracy  leading the affair and various academic and pressure groups all calling for the displacement of the Prime Minister.
Revised:  The forthcoming rally is expected to have over 100,000 in attendance with the People's Alliance for Democracy is leading the affair and various academic and pressure groups all calling for the displacement of the Prime Minister.
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Original:  The forthcoming rally is expected to have over 100,000 in attendance with the People's Alliance for Democracy  leading the affair and various academic and pressure groups all calling for the displacement of the Prime Minister.
Revised:  The forthcoming rally is expected to have over 100,000 in attendance with the People's Alliance for Democracy leading the affair with various academic and pressure groups all calling for the displacement of the Prime Minister.
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Original: The home town of a Washington Post article source about hackers attacking and controlling networks of personal computers to install spyware and send spam advertising was revealed by a SlashDot reader.
Revised: The home town of a Washington Post article source about hackers attacking and controlling networks of personal computers to install spyware and send spam advertising was revealed by a Slashdot reader.
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Original:  The article in the February 19th Washington Post details 0x80's earnings of around $6,800 a month sending out spam from controlled personal computers The Washington Post has not commented on if this will instigate a change in their use of metainformation for undiclosed source 
Revised:  The article in the February 19th Washington Post details 0x80's earnings of around $6,800 a month sending out spam from controlled personal computers The Washington Post has not commented on if this will instigate a change in their use of metainformation for undiclosed sources. 
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Original:  The reader found metadata information inside the Washington Post image of the hacker and was able to extract the town entered as the location of the photo.
Revised:  The reader found meta-data information inside the Washington Post image of the hacker and was able to extract the town entered as the location of the photo.
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Original:  The article in the February 19th Washington Post details 0x80's earnings of around $6,800 a month sending out spam from controlled personal computers The Washington Post has not commented on if this will instigate a change in their use of metainformation for undisclosed sources
Revised:  The article in the February 19th Washington Post details 0x80's earnings of around $6,800 a month sending out spam from controlled personal computers The Washington Post has not commented on if this will instigate a change in their use of meta information for undisclosed sources
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Original:   David Edmondson resigned after admitting to lying about his resum
Revised:  , David Edmondson resigned after admitting to lying about his resum
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Original: David Edmondson will have to pay severance payment of under one million dollars to RadioShack Inc.
Revised: David Edmondson will receive a severance package valued under one million dollars to RadioShack Inc.
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Original: David Edmondson will have to pay severance payment of under one million dollars to RadioShack Inc.
Revised: David Edmondson will have to pay severance payment of under one million dollars from RadioShack Inc.
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Original:  Claiming to have a two college degrees, theology diploma called a ThG, and four years of education.
Revised:  Claiming to have two college degrees, theology diploma called a ThG, and four years of education.
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Original:  Claiming to have two college degrees,  theology diploma called a ThG, and four years of education .
Revised:  Claiming to have two college degrees, a theology diploma called a ThG, and four years of education .
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Original:  When, actually, only attending two semester at college known now as Heartland Baptist Bible College (formally known as Pacific Coast Baptist College) and having no record of diploma(s) . Discrepancy within his "resume's accuracy" caused Edmondson and the board to mutually agree his resignation as president and CEO of RadioShack.
Revised:  When, actually, only attending two semester at college known now as Heartland Baptist Bible College (formally known as Pacific Coast Baptist College) . There are no records of any diplomas issued to Mr. Edmondson . Discrepancy within his "resume's accuracy" caused Edmondson and the board to mutually agree his resignation as president and CEO of RadioShack.
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Original:  Discrepancy within his "resume's accuracy" caused Edmondson and the board to mutually agree  his resignation as president and CEO of RadioShack.
Revised:  These discrepancies caused Edmondson and the board to mutually agree his resignation as president and CEO of RadioShack.
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Original:  Discrepancy within his "resume's accuracy" caused Edmondson and the board to mutually agree  his resignation as president and CEO of RadioShack.
Revised:  Discrepancy within his "resume's accuracy" caused Edmondson and the board to mutually agree to his resignation as president and CEO of RadioShack.
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Original:  however internal investigation of RadioShack Inc. by outside lawyers confirmed the David Edmondson's statement . David Edmondson will receive a severance package valued under one million dollars from RadioShack Inc.
Revised:  however internal investigation of Mr. Edmondson's statement . David Edmondson will receive a severance package valued under one million dollars from RadioShack Inc.
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Original:  Before then, the company already had a drop of 62\% of net income within the four-quarter causing a restructuring plans and closing of 10\% of stores  
Revised:  Before then, the company already had a drop of 62\% of net income in its fourth-quarter, prompting restructuring plans and closing of 10\% of stores 
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