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Original:  Though other rebels were freed, the estates of rebel leaders which included Kolabira were handed over to Rai Rup Singh, a treacherous local associate of the British and the ruined fort residence of Kolabira was handed back to the son of Karunakara after his death.
Revised:  Though other rebels were freed, the estates of rebel leaders including Kolabira were handed over to Rai Rup Singh, a treacherous local associate of the British and the ruined fort residence of Kolabira was handed back to the son of Karunakara after his death.
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Original:  Though other rebels were freed, the estates of rebel leaders which included Kolabira were handed over to Rai Rup Singh, a treacherous local associate of the British and the ruined fort residence of Kolabira was handed back to the son of Karunakara after his death.
Revised:  Though other rebels were freed, the estates of rebel leaders which included Kolabira were handed over to Rai Rup Singh, a treacherous local associate of the British . The ruined fort was handed to the son of Karunakara after his death.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The British, on their part, were prepared to embark on a program of gradually increasing self-governance for Singapore and Malaya, although the British wanted to retain control of Singapore because of Singapore’s important port facilities and resources of rubber.
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Original: Singapore held polls for a general election as a state of Malaysia five days after the merger in the 1963 state elections on 21 September 1963.
Revised: Singapore held polls for a soviet union as a state of Malaysia five days after the merger in the 1963 state elections on 21 September 1963.
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Original:  The Chinese Middle School riots broke out in 1956 among students in schools such as The Chinese High School, further increasing the tension between the local government and the Chinese students and unionists who were perceived as having communist sympathies.
Revised:  The Chinese Middle School riots broke out in 1956 among students in schools such as the Chinese High School, further increasing the tension between the local government and the Chinese students and unionists who were perceived as having communist sympathies.
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Original:  Since Singapore's founding in 1819, Singapore had been under the colonial rule of the United Kingdom.
Revised:  Since the founding of Singapore in 1819, Singapore had been under the colonial rule of the United Kingdom.
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Original:  The British government would be represented by a Commissioner, who had responsibility for defence and foreign policy, apart from trade and cultural relations, and would preside over an Internal Security Council, consisting of three members from the United Kingdom, three from Singapore (including the Prime Minister) and one from the Federation of Malaya.
Revised:  The British government would be represented by a Commissioner, who had responsibility for defence and foreign policy, apart from trade and cultural relations, and would preside over an Internal Security Council, consisting of three members from the United Kingdom, three from Singapore (including the Cheif Minister) and one from the Federation of Malaya.
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Original:  The British government would be represented by a Commissioner, who had responsibility for defence and foreign policy, apart from trade and cultural relations, and would preside over an Internal Security Council, consisting of three members from the United Kingdom, three from Singapore (including the Cheif Minister) and one from the Federation of Malaya.
Revised:  The British government would be represented by a Commissioner, who had responsibility for defence and foreign policy, apart from trade and cultural relations, and would preside over an Internal Security Council, consisting of three members from the United Kingdom, three from Singapore (including the Chief Minister) and one from the Federation of Malaya.
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Original:  The Legislative Assembly would be expanded to fifty-one members, entirely chosen by popular election, and the Prime Minister and Cabinet would control all aspects of government except defence and foreign affairs.  
Revised:  The Legislative Assembly would be expanded to fifty-one members, entirely chosen by popular election, and the Prime Minister and Cabinet would control all aspects of government except defence and foreign affairs. 68
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Original: In August 1958, the State of Singapore Act was passed in the United Kingdom Parliament providing for the establishment of the State of Singapore. 68
Revised: In August 1958, the State of Singapore Act was passed in the United Kingdom Parliament providing for the establishment of the State of Singapore. 
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Original: The concept was introduced to investigate the visibility of visual stimuli, by applying Detection theory to the output of single neurons of visual cortex  In motor neuroscience, neurometric functions are used to predict body movements from the activity of neuronal populations in regions such as motor cortex.
Revised: The concept was introduced to investigate the visibility of visual stimuli, by applying Detection theory to the output of single neurons of visual cortex . In motor neuroscience, neurometric functions are used to predict body movements from the activity of neuronal populations in regions such as motor cortex.
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Original:  Such neurometric functions are used in the design of brain-computer interfaces   
Revised:  Such neurometric functions are used in the design of brain-computer interfaces . 
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Original: In neuroscience, a Neurometric function is a mathematical formula relating the activity of brain cells to aspects of an animal's sensory experience or motor behavior.
Revised: In neuroscience, a neurometric function is a mathematical formula relating the activity of brain cells to aspects of an animal's sensory experience or motor behavior.
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Original: Awards and honors Pucadyil, a member of the Guha Research Conference, has held such fellowships as DST-SERB fellowship (2016), Wellcome Trust/DBT India Alliance intermediate fellowship (2016) and the Career Development Grant of the Leukemia & Lymphoma Society (2007).
Revised: Awards and honours Pucadyil, a member of the Guha Research Conference, has held such fellowships as DST-SERB fellowship (2016), Wellcome Trust/DBT India Alliance intermediate fellowship (2016) and the Career Development Grant of the Leukemia & Lymphoma Society (2007).
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Original: Thomas J. Pucadyil (born 1976) s an Indian molecular biologist, biochemist and a professor at the Indian Institute of Science Education and Research, Pune.
Revised: Thomas J. Pucadyil (born 1976) is an Indian molecular biologist, biochemist and a professor at the Indian Institute of Science Education and Research, Pune.
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Original:  Carrillo would negotiate the debt payment with Great Britain (acquired collectively as part of the Federation) to avoid the threats of invasion, encouraged the coffee-growing industry and connected Limón Province though a railroad.
Revised:  Carrillo would negotiate the debt payment with Great Britain (acquired collectively as part of the Federation) to avoid the impending threat of invasion, encouraged the coffee-growing industry and connected Limón Province though a railroad.
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Original:  Carrillo would negotiate the debt payment with Great Britain (acquired collectively as part of the Federation) to avoid the impending threat of invasion, encouraged the coffee-growing industry and connected Limón Province though a railroad.
Revised:  Carrillo would negotiate the debt payment with Great Britain (acquired collectively as part of the Federation) to avoid the impending threat of invasion, encouraged the coffee-growing industry and connected Limón Province through a railroad.
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Original:  Alfaro called for election for a new Constituent Assembly which enacts the 1844 Constitution.
Revised:  Alfaro called for elections for a new Constituent Assembly which enacts the 1844 Constitution.
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Original: Government The Executive branch of government was in the hand of the Head of State, who was also head of government and elected by popular vote.
Revised: Government The Executive branch of government was in the hands of the Head of State, who was also head of government and elected by popular vote.
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Original:  The Constitution of 1847 established a unicameral system with a single parliament called Constitutional Congress, however the constitutions of 1844, 1859, 1869 and 1917 stipulated all two-chamber systems with a Senate and a House of Representatives or Deputies.
Revised:  The Constitution of 1847 established a unicameral system with a single parliament called Constitutional Congress, however the constitutions of 1844, 1859, 1869 and 1917 all stipulated bicameral systems with a Senate and a House of Representatives or Deputies.
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Original:  The liberal hegemony was so prevalent that the period between 1970 and 1940 is known as the Liberal State.
Revised:  The liberal hegemony was so prevalent that the period between 1870 and 1940 is known as the Liberal State.
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Original:  However, the exhaustion of the model and discontent from the working classes would outcome in a series of left-leaning social reformist governments in the 40s and the consequent civil war.
Revised:  However, the exhaustion of the model and discontent from the working classes would result in a series of left-leaning social reformist governments in the 40s and the consequent civil war.
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Original:  However, the exhaustion of the model and discontent from the working classes would outcome in a series of left-leaning social reformist governments in the 40s and the consequent civil war.
Revised:  However, the exhaustion of the model and discontent from the working classes would outcome in a series of left-leaning social-reformist governments in the 40s and the consequent civil war.
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Original:  However, the exhaustion of the model and discontent from the working classes would outcome in a series of left-leaning social reformist governments in the 40s and the consequent civil war.
Revised:  However, the exhaustion of the model and discontent from the working classes would outcome in a series of left-leaning social reformist governments in the 1930s and 1940s and the consequent civil war.
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Original: John, or George, Watling (died 1681) was a 17th century English buccaneer.
Revised: John, or George, Watling (died 1681) was a 17th-century English buccaneer.
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Original:  It was said that he would never plunder on the Sabbath and refused even to allow his crew to play cards on this holy day.
Revised:  It was said that he would never plunder on the Sabbath and refused to allow his crew to play cards on this holy day.
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Original:  John Watling is best known for making  the island currently dubbed San Salvador Island his headquarters and naming it Watling Island.
Revised:  John Watling is best known for making his headquarters on the island currently dubbed San Salvador Island his headquarters and naming it Watling Island.
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Original:  John Watling is best known for making  the island currently dubbed San Salvador Island his headquarters and naming it Watling Island.
Revised:  John Watling is best known for making the island currently dubbed San Salvador and naming it Watling Island.
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Original:  It may have been the island Guanahani that Christopher Columbus discovered in 1492 and renamed San Salvador , though this is disputed by some.
Revised:  It may have been the island Guanahani that Christopher Columbus discovered in 1492 and renamed San Salvador . This is disputed by some.
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Original:  Watling Island was officially named San Salvador in 1925  after several scholars had argued that its features best matched Columbus' island . Juan Fernandez In 1680–1681 John Watling sailed under Captain Bartholomew Sharp aboard the Most Holy Trinity.
Revised:  In 1925 after several scholars had argued that its features best matched Columbus' island . Juan Fernandez In 1680–1681 John Watling sailed under Captain Bartholomew Sharp aboard the Most Holy Trinity.
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Original:  Watling Island was officially named San Salvador in 1925  after several scholars had argued that its features best matched Columbus' island . Juan Fernandez In 1680–1681 John Watling sailed under Captain Bartholomew Sharp aboard the Most Holy Trinity.
Revised:  Watling Island was officially named San Salvador in 1925 after several scholars had argued that its features best matched Columbus' description of the island he visited . Juan Fernandez In 1680–1681 John Watling sailed under Captain Bartholomew Sharp aboard the Most Holy Trinity.
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Original:  Swan Sonnenschein Co., 1893 , pp. 388-413.
Revised:  Swan Sonnenschein ( 1893 , pp. 388-413.
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Original:  Each buccaneer had amassed a fortune under Sharp's leadership, but many of them were outrageous gamblers and had gambled all of their money away.
Revised:  Each buccaneer had amassed a fortune under Sharp's leadership, but many had gambled all of their money away.
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Original:  On the 6 January 1681 at Juan Fernandez there was a mutiny in which Sharp was deposed and Watling was elected as his successor.
Revised:  On the 6 January 1681 at Juan Fernandez , the crew mutinied and deposed Sharp, electing Watling as his successor.
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Original:  On the 12 January  three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez  and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find in time .
Revised:  On the 12 January , three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find in time .
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Original:  On the 12 January  three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez  and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find in time .
Revised:  On the 12 January three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez , and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find in time .
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Original:  On the 12 January  three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez  and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find in time .
Revised:  On the 12 January three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez and Watling and his crew fled the port. They left behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find in time .
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Original:  On the 12 January  three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez  and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find in time .
Revised:  On the 12 January three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) whom they were unable to find in time .
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Original:  On the 12 January  three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez  and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find in time .
Revised:  On the 12 January three armed Spanish vessels approached Juan Fernandez and Watling and his crew were forced to flee the port, leaving behind a Mosquito Indian named Will (see for this castaway-story Will (Indian)) that they were unable to find before departure .
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Original:  Arica Several days later  the buccaneers decided to make a new attack the on the rich Spanish settlement of Arica, Viceroyalty of Peru.
Revised:  Arica Several days later , the buccaneers decided to make a new attack the on the rich Spanish settlement of Arica, Viceroyalty of Peru.
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Original:  Arica Several days later  the buccaneers decided to make a new attack the on the rich Spanish settlement of Arica, Viceroyalty of Peru.
Revised:  Arica Several days later the buccaneers decided to attack the rich Spanish settlement of Arica, Viceroyalty of Peru.
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Original:  Swan Sonnenschein Co., 1893 , pp. 388-413.
Revised:  Swan Sonnenschein Co., 1893 ), Buccaneers
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Original:  They had attacked Arica on a previous occasion, but could not find any of the rumoured riches.
Revised:  They had attacked Arica previously but had not found any of the rumoured riches.
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Original:  A captured Indian warned Watling that Arica was now heavily fortified, but much to Captain Sharp's displeasure, Watling did not believe the man and shot him.
Revised:  A captured Indian warned Watling that Arica was heavily fortified, but much to Captain Sharp's displeasure, Watling did not believe the man and shot him.
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Original:  A captured Indian warned Watling that Arica was now heavily fortified, but much to Captain Sharp's displeasure, Watling did not believe the man and shot him.
Revised:  A captured Indian warned Watling that Arica was now heavily fortified, but Watling thought he was trying to trick them and shot him.
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Original:  It was four or five days  walk from the coast to Arica, and as the 92 buccaneers had to carry their own water for the journey they were exhausted by the time they arrived.
Revised:  As it was four or five days walk from the coast to Arica, and as the 92 buccaneers had to carry their own water for the journey they were exhausted by the time they arrived.
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Original:  It was four or five days  walk from the coast to Arica, and as the 92 buccaneers had to carry their own water for the journey they were exhausted by the time they arrived.
Revised:  It was four or five days ' walk from the coast to Arica, and as the 92 buccaneers had to carry their own water for the journey they were exhausted by the time they arrived.
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Original:  It was four or five days  walk from the coast to Arica, and as the 92 buccaneers had to carry their own water for the journey they were exhausted by the time they arrived.
Revised:  It was four or five days walk from the coast to Arica, and the 92 buccaneers had to carry their own water for the journey they were exhausted by the time they arrived.
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Original:  It was four or five days  walk from the coast to Arica, and as the 92 buccaneers had to carry their own water for the journey they were exhausted by the time they arrived.
Revised:  It was four or five days walk from the coast to Arica, and as the 92 buccaneers had to carry their own water , they were exhausted by the time they arrived.
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Original:  They had tried to approach the settlement without being spotted by the Spanish, but they were unsuccessful and the defenders were fully prepared for the attack .
Revised:  They had tried to approach the settlement secretly, but were seen by the Spanish, who prepared their defense .
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Original:  Upon seeing how heavily outnumbered the men were in the town, Watling soon sent everyone to attack there.
Revised:  Upon seeing how heavily outnumbered the men were in the town, Watling soon sent all his forces there.
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Original:  The fighting was successful and the buccaneers repeatedly forced the Spanish to retreat, however as a result of being outnumbered, every time they advanced the Spanish would re-take the land behind them .
Revised:  The buccaneers repeatedly forced the Spanish to retreat, however as a result of being outnumbered, every time they advanced the Spanish would re-take the land behind them .
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Original:  The fighting was successful and the buccaneers repeatedly forced the Spanish to retreat, however as a result of being outnumbered, every time they advanced the Spanish would re-take the land behind them .
Revised:  The fighting was successful and the buccaneers repeatedly forced the Spanish to retreat, but, as they were outnumbered, the Spanish quickly retook territory they left .
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Original:  However, the Spanish took this opportunity to regain the  settlement and to surround Watling's men.
Revised:  However, the Spanish took this opportunity to regain the fort. The Spanish regained the settlement and to surround Watling's men.
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Original:  However, the Spanish took this opportunity to regain the  settlement and to surround Watling's men.
Revised:  However, the Spanish took this opportunity to regain the settlement and surrounded Watling's men.
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Original:  Several men, including Captain John Watling, were shot during the retreat.
Revised:  Several men, including Captain Watling, shot during the retreat.
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Original: This special was only shown once on television and has never been repeated, similar to The Demon Headmaster Takes Over TV, which first aired on 25 December 1997, Christmas Day.
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Original: The Children's Party at the Palace was an event organized by Peter Orton of Hit Entertainment and David Johnstone of DJI consult, held at Buckingham Palace Garden on 25 June 2006 in honour of the 80th birthday of Queen Elizabeth II.
Revised: The Children's Party at the Palace was an event organised by Peter Orton of Hit Entertainment and David Johnstone of DJI consult, held at Buckingham Palace Garden on 25 June 2006 in honour of the 80th birthday of Queen Elizabeth II.
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Original:  The integration of students has proved successful - as filmmakers, exhibitors and visitors.
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Original: Other activities The Festival also functions as a distributor of experimental and media art works through cooperation with numerous cinemas and museums as well as the Goethe Institute's international affiliates, the Festival organises tour packages of films and videos through the Experimental Film Workshop, booked and presented in non-commercial cinemas, galleries, museums and other national and international cultural locations.
Revised: Other activities The Festival also functions as a distributor of experimental and media art works through cooperation with numerous cinemas and museums as well as the Goethe Institute's international affiliates, organising tour packages of films and videos through the Experimental Film Workshop, booked and presented in non-commercial cinemas, galleries, museums and other national and international cultural locations.
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