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Original:  After consulting the Federal Prime Minister, Roy Welensky and  Southern Rhodesia Premier, Edgar Whitehead, and with the approval of the Colonial Office, over 1,000 European troops of the Rhodesia Regiment were flown into Nyasaland, the first arriving on 27 and 28 FebruaryC Baker, (1997).
Revised:  After consulting the Federal Prime Minister, Roy Welensky and the Southern Rhodesia Premier, Edgar Whitehead, and with the approval of the Colonial Office, over 1,000 European troops of the Rhodesia Regiment were flown into Nyasaland, the first arriving on 27 and 28 FebruaryC Baker, (1997).
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Original:  However, opposition politicians made allegations of collusion between the Federal Prime Minister, Welensky  and Armitage to arrest Congress supporters in order to preserve the Federation rather than to secure peace and order in Nyasaland.
Revised:  However, opposition politicians made allegations of collusion between the Federal Prime Minister, Welensky , and Armitage to arrest Congress supporters in order to preserve the Federation rather than to secure peace and order in Nyasaland.
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Original:  The chairman of the Commission  was Patrick Devlin, who had been born in 1905 and made a High Court judge in 1948.
Revised:  The chairman of the Commission of Inquiry was Patrick Devlin, who had been born in 1905 and made a High Court judge in 1948.
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Original:  Although Devlin had been a Conservative supporter and the other commissioners were Conservatives party members, the Commission went about its work in a way that concerned the Nyasaland government, which had hoped that its declaration of the State of Emergency and the subsequent actions of the police and troops would be vindicated.
Revised:  Although Devlin had been a Conservative supporter and the other Commissioners were Conservatives party members, the Commission went about its work in a way that concerned the Nyasaland government, which had hoped that its declaration of the State of Emergency and the subsequent actions of the police and troops would be vindicated.
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Original:  Its strongest criticism was over the "murder plot", which it said not exist, and the use made of it by both the Nyasaland and British governments in trying to justify the Emergency, which  it condemned.
Revised:  Its strongest criticism was over the "murder plot", which it said not exist, and the use made of it by both the Nyasaland and British governments in trying to justify the Emergency, which use it condemned.
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Original:  At the end of May, Armitage thought the commission was satisfied that the State of Emergency was necessary, but that it did not accept that there was a massacre plot, and that it had concentrated on the use of firearms and the burning of houses by government forces, ignoring events leading up to such incidents.
Revised:  At the end of May, Armitage thought the Commission was satisfied that the State of Emergency was necessary, but that it did not accept that there was a massacre plot, and that it had concentrated on the use of firearms and the burning of houses by government forces, ignoring events leading up to such incidents.
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Original:  Armitage was incensed by the allegation, and the Secretary of State for the Colonies, Alan Lennox-Boyd, thought the claim was grossly unfair.
Revised:  Armitage was incensed by this allegation, and the Secretary of State for the Colonies, Alan Lennox-Boyd, thought the claim was grossly unfair.
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Original:  In May and June 1959, a number of issues caused Armitage and the Colonial Office concerns, should the Devlin Commission  take note of them.
Revised:  In May and June 1959, a number of issues caused Armitage and the Colonial Office concerns, in case the Devlin Commission take note of them.
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Original:  In May and June 1959, a number of issues caused Armitage and the Colonial Office concerns, should the Devlin Commission  take note of them.
Revised:  In May and June 1959, a number of issues caused Armitage and the Colonial Office concerns, should the Devlin Commission should take note of them.
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Original: ”, a reference to the political objective  which both British and Nyasaland governments had  deniedC Baker, (1997).
Revised: ”, a reference to the political objective which both British and Nyasaland governments had consistently deniedC Baker, (1997).
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Original:  Armitage  then flew to London, where he joined a high level working party which drafted a despatch, often known as the Armitage Report, to counter the Devlin Report.
Revised:  Armitage then flew to London, where they joined a high level working party which drafted a despatch, often known as the Armitage Report, to counter the Devlin Report.
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Original:  The working party consisted of three British ministers, Julian Amery, Reginald Manningham-Buller, the Attorney-General and Lord Kilmuir the Lord Chancellor and their senior civil servants, together with Armitage and his two senior aides.
Revised:  The working party consisted of three British ministers, Julian Amery, Reginald Manningham-Buller, the Attorney-General and Lord Kilmuir the Lord Chancellor and senior civil servants, together with Armitage and his two senior aides.
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Original:  The working party consisted of three British ministers, Julian Amery, Reginald Manningham-Buller, the Attorney-General and Lord Kilmuir the Lord Chancellor and their senior civil servants, together with Armitage and his two senior aides.
Revised:  The working party consisted of three British ministers, Julian Amery, Reginald Manningham-Buller, the Attorney-General and Lord Kilmuir the Lord Chancellor and their senior civil servants, together with Armitage and his two aides.
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Original:  State of Emergency: Nyasaland 1959 pp. 154-5 In the Commons debate on the report, the government noted that the Commission had found the declaration of a State of Emergency justified, but it attacked their use of the expression "police state" and its rejection of  talk about killings and beatings of Europeans as no more than rhetoric.
Revised:  State of Emergency: Nyasaland 1959 pp. 154-5 In the Commons debate on the report, the government noted that the Commission had found the declaration of a State of Emergency justified, but it attacked their use of the expression "police state" and its rejection of any talk about killings and beatings of Europeans as no more than rhetoric.
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Original:  The Secretary of State for the Colonies said that the government had the right and a duty to reject  the Devlin Commission's findings where it disagreed with them, and used this argument to justify accepting only what little in its report was favourable and rejecting all that was unfavourable, instead of rejecting the whole report.
Revised:  The Secretary of State for the Colonies said that the government had the right and a duty to reject any of the Devlin Commission's findings where it disagreed with them, and used this argument to justify accepting only what little in its report was favourable and rejecting all that was unfavourable, instead of rejecting the whole report.
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Original:  It was supposed to have been a despatch prepared  by the Governor of Nyasaland , Robert Perceval Armitage, but was in fact prepared  by a working party that included Armitage, British government ministers and senior Colonial Office officials, in an attempt to counteract  criticisms contained in the Report of the Devlin Commission.
Revised:  It was supposed to have been a despatch prepared by the Governor of that protectorate , Robert Perceval Armitage, but was in fact prepared by a working party that included Armitage, British government ministers and senior Colonial Office officials, in an attempt to counteract criticisms contained in the Report of the Devlin Commission.
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Original:  It was supposed to have been a despatch prepared  by the Governor of Nyasaland , Robert Perceval Armitage, but was in fact prepared  by a working party that included Armitage, British government ministers and senior Colonial Office officials, in an attempt to counteract  criticisms contained in the Report of the Devlin Commission.
Revised:  It was supposed to have been a despatch prepared by the Governor of Nyasaland , Robert Perceval Armitage, but was in fact prepared by a working party that included Armitage, British government ministers and senior Colonial Office officials, in an attempt to counteract various criticisms contained in the Report of the Devlin Commission.
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Original: Armitage decided against offering any concessions to Congress, and decided on mass arrests of almost the whole of the Congress organisation.
Revised: Armitage decided against offering any concessions to Congress, and drafted plans for mass arrests covering of almost the whole of the Congress organisation.
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Original:  Its strongest criticism was over the "murder plot", which it said not exist, and  the use made of it by both the Nyasaland and British governments in trying to justify the Emergency , which use it condemned .
Revised:  Its strongest criticism was over the "murder plot", which it said not exist, and it condemned the use made of it by both the Nyasaland and British governments in trying to justify the Emergency , which use it condemned .
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Original:  Its strongest criticism was over the "murder plot", which it said not exist, and  the use made of it by both the Nyasaland and British governments in trying to justify the Emergency , which use it condemned .
Revised:  Its strongest criticism was over the "murder plot", which it said not exist, and the use made of it by both the Nyasaland and British governments in trying to justify the Emergency .
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Original:  He suspected that the Commission's report would be highly critical. the Commission's use of the phrase "a police state" caused deep offence, particularly as it was placed on the first page of his report.
Revised:  He suspected that the Commission's report would be highly critical. The Commission's use of the phrase "a police state" caused deep offence, particularly as it was placed on the first page of his report.
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Original:  In May and June 1959, a number of issues caused Armitage and the Colonial Office concerns, in case the Devlin Commission should take note of them  .
Revised:  In May and June 1959, a number of issues caused Armitage and the Colonial Office concerns, in case the Devlin Commission should take note of them in producing its report .
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Original:  A Horne, (2008) Macmillan: The Official Biography, Pan Macmillan. . J McCraken , (2012).
Revised:  A Horne, (2008) Macmillan: The Official Biography, Pan Macmillan. . J McCracken , (2012).
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Original:  During the sentencing, Madison was seen smirking which caused the father of victim, Van Terry, to try to attack Madison in anger over his daughter's murder  .
Revised:  During the sentencing, Madison was seen smirking which caused the father of victim, Van Terry, to lunge at Madison in anger over his daughter's murder .
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Original:  He was captured and arrested in 2013.
Revised:  He was arrested and charged in 2013.
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Original:  On June 2, 2016, Cuyahoga Common Pleas Judge Nancy R. McDonnell sentenced Madison to death . During the sentencing, Madison was seen smirking which caused the father of victim, Van Terry, to lunge at Madison in anger over his daughter's murder.
Revised:  On June 2, 2016, Cuyahoga Common Pleas Judge Nancy R. McDonnell sentenced Madison to the death penalty . During the sentencing, Madison was seen smirking which caused the father of victim, Van Terry, to lunge at Madison in anger over his daughter's murder.
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Original:  He has pled not guilty to all charges
Revised:  He has pled guilty to all charges
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Original:  He has pled guilty to all charges 
Revised:  He pled guilty to all charges 
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Original:  Her grandson, 18-year old Jalen Plummer is charged with his grandmother's murder and three counts of attempted murder.
Revised:  Her grandson, 18-year old Jalen Plummer was charged with his grandmother's murder and three counts of attempted murder.
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Original:  He pled guilty to all charges and was sentenced in June 2021 , Plumer was sentenced to life in UR
Revised:  He pled guilty to all charges and was sentenced in June 2021 to life in UR
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Original:  He pled guilty to all charges and was sentenced in June 2021 to life in prison with the possibility of parole after 30 UR
Revised:  He pled guilty to all charges and was sentenced in June 2021 to life in prison with the possibility of parole after 30 years
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Original: Arrest On July 19, 2013, police , responding to reports of a foul odor, investigated a garage leased to Madison and discovered a decomposing body lying inside.
Revised: Arrest On July 19, 2013, police responded to reports of a foul odor, investigated a garage leased to Madison and discovered a decomposing body lying inside.
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Original: (Comitancy means that there is the same misalignment in al gaze directions.
Revised: (Comitancy means that there is the same misalignment in all gaze directions.
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Original:  He proudly considers himself a Bicolano by choice (depsite being a Manila-born  person of mixed Kapampangan people , and has been actively supporting programs for the Bicol Region since graduating from college, particularly in areas concerning the provision of basic needs, Bicol tourism and sports.
Revised:  He proudly considers himself a Bicolano by choice (depsite being a Manila-born and bred person of mixed Kapampangan people , and has been actively supporting programs for the Bicol Region since graduating from college, particularly in areas concerning the provision of basic needs, Bicol tourism and sports.
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Original: Career Arroyo worked as one of  President Gloria Macapagal Arroyo's speechwriters, and also served as an intern with the Ateneo Human Rights Center.
Revised: Career Arroyo worked as one of President Gloria Macapagal Arroyo's ) speechwriters and also has served as an intern with the Ateneo Human Rights Center.
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Original:  He proudly considers himself a Bicolano by choice and adoption (despite being a Manila-born and bred person of mixed Kapampangan and Ilonggo ancestry as traced on both his parents' bloodline), and has been actively supporting programs for the Bicol Region since graduating from college, particularly in areas concerning the provision of basic needs, Bicol tourism and sports.
Revised:  He proudly considers himself an ethnic Bicolano by choice and adoption (despite being a Manila-born and bred person of mixed Kapampangan and Ilonggo ancestry as traced on both his parents' bloodline), and has been actively supporting programs for the Bicol Region since graduating from college, particularly in areas concerning the provision of basic needs, Bicol tourism and sports.
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Original: Career Arroyo worked as one of his mother's (former President Gloria Macapagal Arroyo 's ) speechwriters and also has served as an intern with the Ateneo Human Rights Center.
Revised: Career Arroyo worked as one of his mother's (former President Gloria Macapagal Arroyo ) speechwriters and also has served as an intern with the Ateneo Human Rights Center.
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Original:  Category:1974 births Category:Living people Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Camarines Sur Category:People from Manila  Diosdado Category:Lakas–CMD (1991) politicians Category:Lakas–CMD politicians Category: Bicolano people Category:Arroyo family Category:Bicolano politicians Category:Children of presidents of the Philippin
Revised:  Category:1974 births Category:Living people Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Camarines Sur Category:People from Manila Diosdado Category:Lakas–CMD (1991) politicians Category:Lakas–CMD politicians Category: Hiligaynon people Category:Arroyo family Category:Bicolano politicians Category:Children of presidents of the Philippin
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Original:  He proudly considers himself a Bicolano by choice and cultural adoption (although he is ethnically by birth of mixed Ilonggo on his paternal side and Kapampangan descent on his maternal side  ), and has been actively supporting programs for the Bicol Region since graduating from college, particularly in areas concerning the provision of basic needs, Bicol tourism and sports.
Revised:  He proudly considers himself a Bicolano by choice and cultural adoption (although he is ethnically of mixed Ilonggo on his paternal side and Kapampangan descent on his maternal side ), and has been actively supporting programs for the Bicol Region since graduating from college, particularly in areas concerning the provision of basic needs, Bicol tourism and sports.
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Original: Hendrik Petrus Venter (born 27 March 1992 in Bloemfontein) is a South African rugby union player for the in the Pro14 and Toshiba Brave Lupus in the Japanese Top League.
Revised: Hendrik Petrus Venter (born 27 March 1992 in Bloemfontein) is a South African rugby union player for Toshiba Brave Lupus in the Japanese Top League.
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Original: Bhalchnadra Panchwadkar (  , is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India.
Revised: Bhalchnadra Panchwadkar ( ) , is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India.
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Original:  His son Girish Panchwadkar who is is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India. .Loksatta, Solapur राष्ट्रपतिभवनात सोलापूरच्या कलावंतांची अक्षयगाण्यांची रंगली स्वरमैफल (accessed on 1 July 2012) He is a well known singer in Marathi Light music  .
Revised:  His son Girish Panchwadkar who is is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India. .Loksatta, Solapur राष्ट्रपतिभवनात सोलापूरच्या कलावंतांची अक्षयगाण्यांची रंगली स्वरमैफल (accessed on 1 July 2012) He is a well known singer in Marathi Light music . He has taught music many students under his guidance .
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Original: Bhalchnadra Panchwadkar (), is an  accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India .
Revised: Bhalchnadra Panchwadkar (), is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director .
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Original:  He is a well known music director in Marathi Light URL Music direction Personal life Panchwadkar devoted his life in Marathi music.
Revised:  He is a well known music director in Marathi Light URL Personal life Panchwadkar devoted his life in Marathi music.
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Original:  His son Girish Panchwadkar who is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India. .Loksatta, Solapur राष्ट्रपतिभवनात सोलापूरच्या कलावंतांची अक्षयगाण्यांची रंगली स्वरमैफल (accessed on 1 July 2012) He is a well known singer in Marathi Light music.
Revised:  His son Girish Panchwadkar who is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India. URL He is a well known singer in Marathi Light music.
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Original:  His son Girish Panchwadkar who is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India. .Loksatta, Solapur राष्ट्रपतिभवनात सोलापूरच्या कलावंतांची अक्षयगाण्यांची रंगली स्वरमैफल (accessed on 1 July 2012) He is a well known singer in Marathi Light music.
Revised:  His son Girish Panchwadkar who is an accomplished Marathi singer and music director from India. .Loksatta, Solapur राष्ट्रपतिभवनात सोलापूरच्या कलावंतांची अक्षयगाण्यांची रंगली स्वरमैफल (accessed on 1 July 2012) He is a well known singer in Marathi light music.
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Original:  He is a well known music director in Marathi Light URL Personal life Panchwadkar devoted his life in Marathi music.
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Original:  URL He is a well known singer in Marathi light music.
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Original: Bhalchnadra Panchwadkar (), is an Indian accomplished Marathi singer and music director.
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Original:  He is a well known music director in Marathi Light music.
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Original: Personal life Panchwadkar has two kids .
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Original:  Inter-African Mission to Monitor the Implementation of the Bangui Agreements  )11366 November 1997Authorises continuation of MISAB11525 February 1998Extends MISABmandate115516 March 1998Extends MISAB mandate115927 March 1998established the United Nations Mission in the Central African Republic (MINURCA)
Revised:  Inter-African Mission to Monitor the Implementation of the Bangui Agreements )11366 November 1997Authorises continuation of MISAB11525 February 1998Extends MISABmandate115516 March 1998Extends MISAB mandate115927 March 1998Established the United Nations Mission in the Central African Republic (MINURCA)
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Original:  An international committee comprising of a member each, from the concerned state was formed to monitor the implementation of the Bangui Agreements.
Revised:  An international committee composed of a member each, from the concerned state was formed to monitor the implementation of the Bangui Agreements.
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Original:  An international committee comprising of a member each, from the concerned state was formed to monitor the implementation of the Bangui Agreements.
Revised:  An international committee comprising of a member of each from the concerned state was formed to monitor the implementation of the Bangui Agreements.
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Original: Aftermath Minurca Medal Michael Gbezera-Bria was appointed Prime Minister, and a new government was formed after signing of the Bangui Agreements.
Revised: Aftermath upMinurca Medal Michael Gbezera-Bria was appointed Prime Minister, and a new government was formed after signing of the Bangui Agreements.
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Original: Aftermath upMinurca Medal Michael Gbezera-Bria was appointed Prime Minister, and a new government was formed after signing of the Bangui Agreements.
Revised: Aftermath Michael Gbezera-Bria was appointed Prime Minister, and a new government was formed after signing of the Bangui Agreements.
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Original:  The agreement was drawn up in Bangui to bring an end to the 1990s conflict between government and rebel forces.
Revised:  It was drawn up in Bangui to bring an end to the 1990s conflict between government and rebel forces.
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Original:  The agreement envisaged several steps to sort out the views of various political factions, reorganize the defense establishment, and bring about reforms in the country which could improve the economyof the country .
Revised:  The agreement envisaged several steps to sort out the views of various political factions, reorganize the defense establishment, and implement reforms in the country which could improve the economyof the country .
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Original:  The agreement envisaged several steps to sort out the views of various political factions, reorganize the defense establishment, and bring about reforms in the country which could improve the economyof the country .
Revised:  The agreement envisaged several steps to sort out the views of various political factions, reorganize the defense establishment, and bring about reforms in the country to improve its economy .
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