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Original:  It was a difficult battle for both sides, but , by a stroke of luck, the Spanish came out victorious.
Revised:  It was a difficult battle for both sides, but the Spanish were victorious.
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Original:  Cémaco, together with his warriors, abandoned the town and headed for the jungle.
Revised:  Cémaco, with his warriors, abandoned the town and headed for the jungle.
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Original:  Balboa kept his vow , and, in September 1510,  founded the first permanent settlement on mainland American soil, and called it Santa María la Antigua del Darién.
Revised:  Balboa kept his vow . In September 1510, founded the first permanent settlement on mainland American soil, and called it Santa María la Antigua del Darién.
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Original:  Balboa kept his vow , and, in September 1510,  founded the first permanent settlement on mainland American soil, and called it Santa María la Antigua del Darién.
Revised:  Balboa kept his vow , and, in September 1510, he founded the first permanent settlement on mainland American soil, and called it Santa María la Antigua del Darién.
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Original:  However, he was to remain imprisoned only for a short time : Balboa set him free under the condition that he return immediately to Hispaniola and from there to Spain.
Revised:  He was to remain imprisoned only for a short time : Balboa set him free under the condition that he return immediately to Hispaniola and from there to Spain.
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Original:  However, he was to remain imprisoned only for a short time : Balboa set him free under the condition that he return immediately to Hispaniola and from there to Spain.
Revised:  However, he was to remain imprisoned only for a short time . Balboa set him free under the condition that he return immediately to Hispaniola and from there to Spain.
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Original:  He was also able to quell revolts among those of his men who challenged this authority, and , through force, diplomacy, and negotiation, he earned a certain respect and fear among the natives.
Revised:  He was able to quell revolts among those of his men who challenged this authority, and , through force, diplomacy, and negotiation, he earned a certain respect and fear among the natives.
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Original:  He was also able to quell revolts among those of his men who challenged this authority, and , through force, diplomacy, and negotiation, he earned a certain respect and fear among the natives.
Revised:  He was also able to quell revolts among his men who challenged this authority, and , through force, diplomacy, and negotiation, he earned a certain respect and fear among the natives.
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Original:  He was also able to quell revolts among those of his men who challenged this authority, and , through force, diplomacy, and negotiation, he earned a certain respect and fear among the natives.
Revised:  He was also able to quell revolts among those of his men who challenged this authority, and through force, diplomacy, and negotiation, he earned a certain respect and fear among the natives.
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Original:  He succeeded in planting corn, received fresh supplies from Hispaniola and Spain, and got his men used to life as explorers in the new territories.
Revised:  He succeeded in planting corn, received fresh supplies from Hispaniola and Spain, and got his men accostomed to life as explorers in the new territories.
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Original:  Balboa managed to collect a great deal of gold, much of it from the ornaments worn by the native women, and the rest obtained by violence.
Revised:  Balboa managed to collect a great deal of gold, much of it from the ornaments worn by native women, and the rest obtained by violence.
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Original:  The Italian historian Peter Martyr d'Anghiera in his De orbe novo decades, wrote how Balboa had fed forty local homosexual men to his dogs.
Revised:  The Italian historian Peter Martyr d'Anghiera in his De orbe novo decades, wrote how Balboa had fed 40 local homosexual men to his dogs.
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Original:  However, Balboa was received peacefully  and even invited to a feast in his honor;
Revised:  Balboa was received peacefully and even invited to a feast in his honor;
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Original:  However, Balboa was received peacefully  and even invited to a feast in his honor;
Revised:  However, Balboa was received peacefully , and even invited to a feast in his honor;
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Original:  After seeing that there would be no assistance from Hispaniola, Balboa sent Enrique de Colmenares directly to Spain to look for help.
Revised:  After seeing that there would be no assistance from Hispaniola, Balboa sent Enrique de Colmenares directly to Spain to seek help.
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Original:  However, the group was by then exhausted and several men were badly wounded, so many decided to stay in Cuarecuá to regain their strength.
Revised:  The group was by then exhausted and several men were badly wounded, so many decided to stay in Cuarecuá to regain their strength.
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Original:  Balboa went ahead and, before noon that day, September 25, he reached the summit and saw, far away in the horizon, the waters of the undiscovered sea.
Revised:  Balboa went ahead and, before noon that day, September 25, he reached the summit and saw, far in the horizon, the waters of the undiscovered sea.
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Original: In November, Balboa decided to return to Santa María but by a different route in order to further expand his territory and procure more gold.
Revised: In November, Balboa decided to return to Santa María but by a different route to further expand his territory and procure more gold.
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Original:  His son, Panquiaco, was now the new chieftain.
Revised:  His son, Panquiaco, was now the chieftain.
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Original:  All this , however, did not compare to the magnitude of the discovery of the South Sea on behalf of Spain.
Revised:  All this did not compare to the magnitude of the discovery of the South Sea on behalf of Spain.
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Original:  In 1519, Balboa moved to Acla with 300 men and, using the manpower of the natives and African slaves, managed to gather the materials necessary to fashion new ships.
Revised:  In 1519, Balboa moved to Acla with 300 men and, using the manpower of the natives and African slaves, managed to gather the materials necessary to build new ships.
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Original:  He traveled up to the Balsas River (Río Balsas), where he had four ships built.
Revised:  He traveled to the Balsas River (Río Balsas), where he had four ships built.
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Original:  On his return, however, Pedrarias wrote warm letters urging Balboa to meet him as soon as possible.
Revised:  On his return, Pedrarias wrote warm letters urging Balboa to meet him as soon as possible.
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Original:  Pedrarias , however , together with Martin Enciso, ordered that the trial take place without delay.
Revised:  Pedrarias , together with Martin Enciso, ordered that the trial take place without delay.
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Original: Despotism (, despotismós ) is a form of government in which a single entity rules with absolute power.
Revised: Despotism (, Despotism ) is a form of government in which a single entity rules with absolute power.
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Original:  Normally, that entity is an individual, the despot , as in an autocracy , but societies which limit respect and power to specific groups have also been called despotic.
Revised:  Normally, that entity is an individual, the despot ; but ( as in an autocracy , but societies which limit respect and power to specific groups have also been called despotic.
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Original:  Normally, that entity is an individual, the despot , as in an autocracy , but societies which limit respect and power to specific groups have also been called despotic.
Revised:  Normally, that entity is an individual, the despot , as in an autocracy ) societies which limit respect and power to specific groups have also been called despotic.
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Original:  The label historical anthropology has been actively promoted by some recent Annales School historians, such as Jean-Claude URL URL
Revised:  The label historical anthropology has been actively promoted by some recent Annales School historians, such as Jean-Claude URL 
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Original:  The label historical anthropology has been actively promoted by some recent Annales School historians, such as Jean-Claude URL Historical anthropology has been open to similar criticisms to anthropology: 'as Bernard Cohn and John and Jean Comaroff have observed, studies in which societies were represented in this way were often partial, biased, and unwitting handmaidens to the domination of non-Western peoples by Europeans and Americans' .Elizabeth A.
Revised:  The label historical anthropology has been actively promoted by some recent Annales School historians, such as Jean-Claude Schmitt. Historical anthropology has been open to similar criticisms to anthropology: 'as Bernard Cohn and John and Jean Comaroff have observed, studies in which societies were represented in this way were often partial, biased, and unwitting handmaidens to the domination of non-Western peoples by Europeans and Americans' .Elizabeth A.
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Original: Historical Anthropology is a historiographical movement.
Revised: Historical anthropology is a historiographical movement.
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Original:  Histoires , Sciences sociales is still one of the main French outlets for research in historical anthropology.
Revised:  Histoire , Sciences sociales is still one of the main French outlets for research in historical anthropology.
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Original:  Active since 1929  , the review Annales.
Revised:  Established in 1929 , the review Annales.
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Original:  Histoire, Sciences sociales is still one of the main French outlets for research in historical anthropology.
Revised:  Histoire, Sciences sociales is still among the most influential French publications for research in historical anthropology.
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Original:  Established in 1929 by Marc Bloch and Lucien Febvre, the review Annales.
Revised:  Established in 1929 by Marc Bloch and Lucien Febvre, the journal Annales.
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Original:  It was nominated for Best Album and Li was nominated for Best Male Singer, Best Lyricist,  and Best Producer at the 25th Golden Melody Awards, where he won the Best New Singer award.
Revised:  It was nominated for Best Album and Li was nominated for Best Male Singer, Best Lyricist, Best Newcomer and Best Producer at the 25th Golden Melody Awards, where he won the Best New Singer award.
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Original:  It was nominated for Best Album and Li was nominated for Best Male Singer, Best Lyricist,  and Best Producer at the 25th Golden Melody Awards, where he won the Best New Singer award.
Revised:  It was nominated for Best Album and Li was nominated for Best Male Singer, Best Lyricist, and Best Producer at the 25th Golden Melody Awards, and won the Best New Singer award.
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Original:   In 2017, Li made a special appearance in the movie Duckweed  .
Revised:  Li made a special appearance in the movie Duckweed .
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Original:   In 2018, he is the vocal instructor for Idol Producer.
Revised:  In 2018, he was the vocal instructor for Idol Producer.
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Original:  He also released his 5th album “Ear” in 2018.
Revised:  Li also released his 5th album “Ear” in 2018.
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Original:  His music video of his song If I were Young has reached over 100 million views on Youtube.
Revised:  The song If I were Young has reached over 100 million views on Youtube.
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Original: Shooters at the 1972 Summer Olympics Category:Shooters at the 1976 Summer Olympics Category:San Beda College alumni Category:Filipino businesspeople Category:Filipino chief executives Category:Sportspeople from Pampanga Category:Deaths from prostate cancer Category: Cancer deaths in the Philippines Category:Shooters at the 1974 Asian Games Category:Children of Presidents of the Philippines Category:Macapagal family Category:Asian Institute of Management alum
Revised: Shooters at the 1972 Summer Olympics Category:Shooters at the 1976 Summer Olympics Category:San Beda College alumni Category:Filipino businesspeople Category:Filipino chief executives Category:Sportspeople from Pampanga Category:Deaths from prostate cancer Category: Deaths from cancer in the Philippines Category:Shooters at the 1974 Asian Games Category:Children of Presidents of the Philippines Category:Macapagal family Category:Asian Institute of Management alum
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Original:  His father had two children with Evangeline, Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo and Diosdado  Macapagal Jr.
Revised:  His father had two children with Evangeline, Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo and Diosdado M. Macapagal Jr.
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Original:  His father had two children with Evangeline, Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo and Diosdado M. Macapagal Jr.
Revised:  His father had two children with Evangeline, Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo and Diosdado Macapagal Jr.
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Original: Arturo dela Rosa Macapagal (14 September 1942 – 11 August 2015) was the son of Philippine President Diosdado Macapagal.
Revised: Arturo de la Rosa Macapagal (14 September 1942 – 11 August 2015) was the son of Philippine President Diosdado Macapagal.
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Original:  Early life Macapagal was the son of President Diosdado Macapagal and Purita dela Rosa, sister of Rogelio and Jaime.
Revised:  Early life Macapagal was the son of President Diosdado Macapagal and Purita de la Rosa, sister of Rogelio and Jaime.
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Original: Death Macagal died on 11 August 2015 at age 72.
Revised: Death Macapagal died on 11 August 2015 at age 72.
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Original: / Khowesin (which means "queen bee") is one of the five Orlam tribes to leave the Cape Colony in the 19th century, they followed their leader, Kido Witbooi.
Revised:  Khowesin (which means "queen bee") is one of the five Orlam tribes to leave the Cape Colony in the 19th century, they followed their leader, Kido Witbooi.
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Original: Khowesin (which means "queen bee") is one of the five Orlam tribes to leave the Cape Colony in  the 19th century, they followed their leader, Kido Witbooi.
Revised: The ǀKhowesin (literally queen bees) are one of five clans of the Orlam people in Namibia. They originated from Pella in the Cape Colony in the 19th century, they followed their leader, Kido Witbooi.
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Original:  The tribe left from Pella on the south bank of the Orange River and moved to the Fish River area living a nomadic existence.
Revised:  They crossed Orange River and moved to the Fish River area living a nomadic existence.
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Original:  They originated from Pella in the Cape Colony in South Africa and migrated to South-West Africa the 19th century, led by their Kaptein Kido Witbooi.
Revised:  They originated from Pella in the Cape Colony in South Africa and migrated to South West Africa the 19th century, led by their Kaptein Kido Witbooi.
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Original: The Mongol Empire under Yuan dynasty ruled over the Mongolian steppe, including both Inner and Outer Mongolia as well as part of southern Siberia, for roughly a century between 1271 and 1368.
Revised: The Yuan dynasty ruled over the Mongolian steppe, including both Inner and Outer Mongolia as well as part of southern Siberia, for roughly a century between 1271 and 1368.
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Original:  The Mongolian Plateau is where the ruling Mongols of the Yuan dynasty as founded by Kublai Khan came from, thus it enjoyed a somewhat special status during the Yuan dynasty , a division of the Mongol Empire , although the capital of the dynasty had been moved from Karakorum to Khanbaliq (modern Beijing) since the beginning of Kublai Khan's reign, and Mongolia had been turned into a province by the early 14th century.
Revised:  The Mongolian Plateau is where the ruling Mongols of the Yuan dynasty as founded by Kublai Khan came from, thus it enjoyed a somewhat special status during the Yuan dynasty , although the capital of the dynasty had been moved from Karakorum to Khanbaliq (modern Beijing) since the beginning of Kublai Khan's reign, and Mongolia had been turned into a province by the early 14th century.
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Original:  The Mongolian Plateau is where the ruling Mongols of the Yuan dynasty of China came from, thus it enjoyed a somewhat special status during the Yuan dynasty, although the capital of the dynasty had been moved from Karakorum to Khanbaliq (modern Beijing) since the beginning of Kublai Khan's reign, and Mongolia had been turned into a province  by the early 14th century.
Revised:  The Mongolian Plateau is where the ruling Mongols of the Yuan dynasty of China came from, thus it enjoyed a somewhat special status during the Yuan dynasty, although the capital of the dynasty had been moved from Karakorum to Khanbaliq (modern Beijing) since the beginning of Kublai Khan's reign, and Mongolia had been converted into a province by the early 14th century.
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Original: The Yuan dynasty ruled over the Mongolian steppe, including both Inner and Outer Mongolia as well as part of southern Siberia, for roughly a century between 1271 and 1368.
Revised: The Yuan dynasty ruled over the Mongolian steppe, including both Inner and Outer Mongolia as well as part of southern Siberia, between 1271 and 1368.
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Original: Salience The salience network consists of several structures, including the anterior (bilateral) insula, dorsal anterior cingulate cortex, and three subcortical structures which are the ventral striatum, substantia nigra/ventral tegmental region.
Revised:  The salience network consists of several structures, including the anterior (bilateral) insula, dorsal anterior cingulate cortex, and three subcortical structures which are the ventral striatum, substantia nigra/ventral tegmental region.
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Original:  Ventral attention Three areas of the brain are active in this network, and they include the visual cortex, temporoparietal junction , and the ventral frontal cortex  .
Revised:  This network includes the ventral attention network, which primarily includes the temporoparietal junction and the ventral frontal cortex .
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Original:  The ventral attention network may also become inhibited during focused attention in which top down processing is being used, such as when one is visually searching for something.
Revised:  The ventral attention network is inhibited during focused attention in which top down processing is being used, such as when one is visually searching for something.
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Original:  The ventral attention network may also become inhibited during focused attention in which top down processing is being used, such as when one is visually searching for something.
Revised:  The ventral attention network may also become inhibited during focused attention in which top-down processing is being used, such as when one is visually searching for something.
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Original:  The ventral attention network may also become inhibited during focused attention in which top down processing is being used, such as when one is visually searching for something.
Revised:  The ventral attention network may also become inhibited during focused attention in which top down processing is being used, such as when visually searching for something.
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Original:  This response may prevent goal driven attention from being distracted by non-relevant stimuli.
Revised:  This response may prevent goal-driven attention from being distracted by non-relevant stimuli.
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Original:  It becomes active again when the target , or relevant information about the target is found.
Revised:  It becomes active again when the target or relevant information about the target is found.
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Original: This network is involved in the voluntary  deployment of attention and reorientation to unexpected events .
Revised: This network is involved in the voluntary deployment of attention .
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Original:  The auditory cortex may also be included.
Revised:  The auditory cortex may be included.
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Original: the El Niño  Southern Oscillation (ENSO) – A large scale pattern of warmer (El Niño) and colder (La Niña) tropical sea surface temperatures in the Pacific Ocean with worldwide effects.
Revised: the El Niño – Southern Oscillation (ENSO) – A large scale pattern of warmer (El Niño) and colder (La Niña) tropical sea surface temperatures in the Pacific Ocean with worldwide effects.
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Original:  An eastward moving pattern of increased rainfall over the tropics with a period of 30 to 60 days, observed mainly over the Indian and Pacific Oceans. the North Atlantic Oscillation (NAO) – Indices of the NAO are based on the difference of normalized sea level pressure (SLP) between Ponta Delgada, Azores and Stykkisholmur / Reykjavik , Iceland.
Revised:  An eastward moving pattern of increased rainfall over the tropics with a period of 30 to 60 days, observed mainly over the Indian and Pacific Oceans. the North Atlantic oscillation (NAO) – Indices of the NAO are based on the difference of normalized sea level pressure (SLP) between Ponta Delgada, Azores and Stykkisholmur / Reykjavik , Iceland.
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Original:  An eastward moving pattern of increased rainfall over the tropics with a period of 30 to 60 days, observed mainly over the Indian and Pacific Oceans. the North Atlantic Oscillation (NAO) – Indices of the NAO are based on the difference of normalized sea level pressure (SLP) between Ponta Delgada, Azores and Stykkisholmur / Reykjavik , Iceland.
Revised:  An eastward moving pattern of increased rainfall over the tropics with a period of 30 to 60 days, observed mainly over the Indian and Pacific Oceans. the North Atlantic Oscillation (NAO) – Indices of the NAO are based on the difference of normalized sea-level pressure (SLP) between Ponta Delgada, Azores and Stykkisholmur / Reykjavik , Iceland.
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Original:  An eastward moving pattern of increased rainfall over the tropics with a period of 30 to 60 days, observed mainly over the Indian and Pacific Oceans. the North Atlantic Oscillation (NAO) – Indices of the NAO are based on the difference of normalized sea level pressure (SLP) between Ponta Delgada, Azores and Stykkisholmur / Reykjavik , Iceland.
Revised:  An eastward moving pattern of increased rainfall over the tropics with a period of 30 to 60 days, observed mainly over the Indian and Pacific Oceans. the North Atlantic Oscillation (NAO) – Indices of the NAO are based on the difference of normalized sea level pressure (SLP) between Ponta Delgada, Azores and Stykkishólmur / Reykjavik , Iceland.
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Original:  An eastward moving pattern of increased rainfall over the tropics with a period of 30 to 60 days, observed mainly over the Indian and Pacific Oceans. the North Atlantic Oscillation (NAO) – Indices of the NAO are based on the difference of normalized sea level pressure (SLP) between Ponta Delgada, Azores and Stykkisholmur / Reykjavik , Iceland.
Revised:  An eastward moving pattern of increased rainfall over the tropics with a period of 30 to 60 days, observed mainly over the Indian and Pacific Oceans. the North Atlantic Oscillation (NAO) – Indices of the NAO are based on the difference of normalized sea level pressure (SLP) between Ponta Delgada, Azores and Stykkisholmur / Reykjavík , Iceland.
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