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Original: The Scales of Justice at the Old Bailey The Lord Chief Justice, Sir Igor Judge ,  together with two other judges, today ruled that a trial could be heard by a judge alone.
Revised: The Scales of Justice at the Old Bailey The Lord Chief Justice, Sir Igor Judge , , together with two other judges, today ruled that a trial could be heard by a judge alone.
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Original:  Four men are accused of taking part in an armed robbery at Heathrow Airport in 2004.
Revised:  Four men are accused of taking part in an armed robbery at in 2004.
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Original:  RBS has previously threatened legal action to recoup some of the money  
Revised:  RBS has previously threatened legal action to recoup some of the money . 
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Original: According to an industry source, " Fred is sick of living his life like a pariah and wants to get home, possibly with a view to working in the banking sector again.
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Original: Sir Fred Goodwin, the former head of Royal Bank of Scotland has said he will reduce his pension by up to £200,000 a year, leaving him with a years salary of approximately £350, 000.
Revised: Sir Fred Goodwin, the former head of Royal Bank of Scotland has said he will reduce his pension by up to £200,000 a year, leaving him with approximately £350, 000.
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Original: Sir Fred Goodwin, the former head of Royal Bank of Scotland has said he will reduce his pension by up to £200,000 a year, leaving him with a years salary of approximately £350, 000.
Revised: Sir Fred Goodwin, the former head of Royal Bank of Scotland has said he will reduce his pension by up to £200,000 a year, leaving him with a years salary of approximately £350, 000 a year.
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Original:  RBS has previously threatened legal action to recoup some of the money .
Revised:  RBS has previously threatened legal action to recoup some of the money 
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Original: He has been heavily criticised for receiving a large pension, while being blamed for  RBS' recent issues, which is now owned mainly by the UK government, after a £20 billion bailout last autumn.
Revised: He has been heavily criticised for receiving a large pension, while being blamed for contributing to RBS' recent issues, which is now owned mainly by the UK government, after a £20 billion bailout last autumn.
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Original: In October 2008, Goodwin agreed  a deal with the bank that allowed him to take his whole pension of £703,000 a year.
Revised: In October 2008, Goodwin agreed to a deal with the bank that allowed him to take his whole pension of £703,000 a year.
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Original:  It will be orbiting approximately 30 miles above the moon, trying to find safe landing sites, locate potential resources, characterize the radiation environment and test new technology.
Revised:  It will be orbiting approximately 30 miles above the moon, trying to find safe landing sites, locating potential resources, characterize the radiation environment and test new technology.
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Original:  It will be orbiting approximately 30 miles above the moon, trying to find safe landing sites, locate potential resources, characterize the radiation environment and test new technology.
Revised:  It will be orbiting approximately 30 miles above the moon, trying to find safe landing sites, locate potential resources, characterizing the radiation environment and test new technology.
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Original:  It will be orbiting approximately 30 miles above the moon, trying to find safe landing sites, locate potential resources, characterize the radiation environment and test new technology.
Revised:  It will be orbiting approximately 30 miles above the moon, trying to find safe landing sites, locate potential resources, characterize the radiation environment and testing new technology.
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Original:  The rocket will also launch a Centaur missile at the surface of the moon to blow up a plume of debris, from which scientists hope to be able to detect any water ice or vapour .
Revised:  The rocket will also launch a Centaur missile at the surface of the moon to blow up a plume of debris, from which scientists hope to be able to detect any water ice or vapor .
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Original:  The launch was originally planned for yesterday, but delayed for the launch of the space shuttle Endeavour, which was  later delayed
Revised:  The launch was originally planned for yesterday, but delayed for the launch of the Space Shuttle Endeavour, which was later delayed
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Original:  The launch was originally planned for yesterday, but delayed for the launch of the space shuttle Endeavour, which was  later delayed
Revised:  The launch was originally planned for yesterday, but delayed for the launch of the space shuttle Endeavour, which was itself later delayed
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Original:  The aim of the  mission is to spend at least a year in a low polar orbit above the surface of the moon to gather neccesary data for future missions and longer lunar expeditions.
Revised:  The aim of the LRO mission is to spend at least a year in a low polar orbit above the surface of the moon to gather neccesary data for future missions and longer lunar expeditions.
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Original:  The rocket will also launch a Centaur missile at the surface of the moon to blow up a plume of debris  , from which scientists hope to be able to detect any water ice or vapor  .
Revised:  The spent Centaur rocket upper stage of the Atlas V launch vehicle will strike the surface of the moon to blow up a plume of debris , from which scientists hope to be able to detect any water ice or vapor .
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Original:  The 2,300 pounds (1,043 kg) spent upper stage Centaur motor of the Atlas V launch vehicle will strike the surface of the moon at 9,000 km/h (5,600 mph) resulting in a 350 tons (317 metric tons ) plume of debris rising between 6 to 30 miles (10 to 48 km) above the moon's surface, from which scientists hope to be able to detect any water ice or vapor using the LCROSS satellite which will crash land nearby four minutes later.
Revised:  The 2,300 pounds (1,043 kg) spent upper stage Centaur motor of the Atlas V launch vehicle will strike the surface of the moon at 9,000 km/h (5,600 mph) resulting in a 350 ton (317 metric tons ) plume of debris rising between 6 to 30 miles (10 to 48 km) above the moon's surface, from which scientists hope to be able to detect any water ice or vapor using the LCROSS satellite which will crash land nearby four minutes later.
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Original:  The 2,300 pounds (1,043 kg) spent upper stage Centaur motor of the Atlas V launch vehicle will strike the surface of the moon at 9,000 km/h (5,600 mph) resulting in a 350 tons (317 metric tons ) plume of debris rising between 6 to 30 miles (10 to 48 km) above the moon's surface, from which scientists hope to be able to detect any water ice or vapor using the LCROSS satellite which will crash land nearby four minutes later.
Revised:  The 2,300 pounds (1,043 kg) spent upper stage Centaur motor of the Atlas V launch vehicle will strike the surface of the moon at 9,000 km/h (5,600 mph) resulting in a 350 tons (317 metric ton ) plume of debris rising between 6 to 30 miles (10 to 48 km) above the moon's surface, from which scientists hope to be able to detect any water ice or vapor using the LCROSS satellite which will crash land nearby four minutes later.
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Original:  The rise is the largers back-to-back increase since the last two months of 2001, the group said.
Revised:  The rise is the largest back-to-back increase since the last two months of 2001, the group said.
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Original: The United States' Conference Board said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators  rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
Revised: Non-profit global business organization Conference Board said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
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Original: Non-profit global business organization  Conference Board said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
Revised: Non-profit global business organization The Conference Board said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
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Original: Non-profit global business organization The Conference Board  said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
Revised:  The Conference Board said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
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Original: Non-profit global business organization The Conference Board  said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
Revised: Non-profit global business organization The Conference Board , a non-profit global business organization, said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
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Original: The Conference Board, a non-profit global business organization, said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
Revised: The Conference Board, a non-profit global business organization, said on Thursday that its index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
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Original: The Conference Board, a non-profit global business organization, said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, its second consecutive increase.
Revised: The Conference Board, a non-profit global business organization, said on Thursday that the index of leading economic indicators in the United States rose by 1.2\% last month, the second consecutive increase.
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Original:  Militants , believed to have links to Al-Qaeda, detonated no less than two roadside bombs to block the convoy, consisting of six vehicles.
Revised:  Militants detonated no less than two roadside bombs to block the convoy, consisting of six vehicles.
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Original:  The militants have been left over from a civil war in the 1990s between the government and radical Islamists that  killed between 150,000 and 200,000 people.
Revised:  The militants have been left over from a civil war in the 1990s between the government and radical Islamists that has killed between 150,000 and 200,000 people.
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Original: Air France Flight 447 was an Airbus A330 that had departed from Rio de Janeiro, Brazil, en route to Paris, France, when it disappeared over the Atlantic .
Revised: Air France Flight 447 was an Airbus A330 that had departed from Rio de Janeiro, Brazil, en route to Paris, France, when it disappeared over the Atlantic 
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Original:  A search investigation has found several parts of the jet, as well as some bodies of the passengers on board, but the flight data recorder and cockpit voice recorder, which could contain important information as to how exactly the plane crash  , are yet to be found
Revised:  A search investigation has found several parts of the jet, as well as some bodies of the passengers on board, but the flight data recorder and cockpit voice recorder, which could contain important information as to how exactly the plane crash occurred , are yet to be found
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Original: A Boeing  777 operated by Continental Airlines managed to safely land at Liberty Airport in Newark, New Jersey on today after the pilot died from natural causes en route, reports from officials say.
Revised: A Boeing A Boeing 777 operated by Continental Airlines managed to safely land at Liberty Airport in Newark, New Jersey on today after the pilot died from natural causes en route, reports from officials say.
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Original:  File:B777 Continental Cibao.jpg|A Continental Airlines Boeing 777-200ER in the Dominican Republic.
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Original:  ]]A Boeing 777 operated by Continental Airlines managed to safely land at Liberty Airport in Newark, New Jersey  today after the pilot died from natural causes en route, reports from officials say.
Revised:  ]]A Boeing 777 operated by Continental Airlines managed to safely land at Liberty Airport in Newark, New Jersey , today after the pilot died from natural causes en route, reports from officials say.
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Original:  They added the importance that the next series is due to start during the build up to a possible General Election
Revised:  They added the fact that the next series is due to start during the build up to a possible General Election
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Original:  Also in response the the sanctions saying they would start a uranium enrichment program, which could lead to a new atomic bomb and use all of it's plutonium to make bombs which is estimated to make around 6 bombs.
Revised:  Also in response the the sanctions saying they would start a uranium enrichment program, which could lead to a new atomic bomb and the use of it's plutonium to make bombs which is estimated to make around 6 bombs.
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Original:  Also in response the the sanctions saying they would start a uranium enrichment program, which could lead to a new atomic bomb and use all of it's plutonium to make bombs which is estimated to make around 6 bombs.
Revised:  Also in response the the sanctions saying they would start a uranium enrichment program, which could lead to a new atomic bomb and use all of it's plutonium to make an estimated 6 bombs.
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Original: U.S. Defense Secretary Robert Gates has activated Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD) and Sea Based X-Band (SBX) to respond to any North Korean missile launch that threatens Hawaii even their is no immediate threat that the US state of Hawaii would be hit.
Revised: U.S. Defense Secretary Robert Gates has activated Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD) and Sea Based X-Band (SBX) to respond to any North Korean missile launch that threatens Hawaii even their is no immediate threat that would be hit.
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Original:  Media reports from Japan also report that the North may launch a long range missile toward the U.S. state of Hawaii in July.
Revised:  Media reports from Japan also claim that the North may launch a long range missile toward the U.S. state of Hawaii in July.
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Original:  The U.S. started tracking the ship because one unnamed official says the ship is a repeat offender of carrying illegal materials.
Revised:  The U.S. started tracking the ship because one unnamed official alleged that the ship is a repeat offender of carrying illegal materials.
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Original:  Also in response the the sanctions saying they would start a uranium enrichment program, which could lead to a new atomic bomb and the use of it's plutonium to make an estimated 6 bombs.
Revised:  They also responded to the sanctions saying they would start a uranium enrichment program, which could lead to a new atomic bomb and the use of it's plutonium to make an estimated 6 bombs.
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Original:  U.S. Defense Secretary Robert Gates has activated Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD) and Sea Based X-Band (SBX) to respond to any North Korean missile launch that threatens Hawaiieven their is no immediate threat that the stateis in any immediate threat .
Revised:  U.S. Defense Secretary Robert Gates has activated Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD) and Sea Based X-Band (SBX) to counter any North Korean missile launch that threatens Hawaiieven their is no immediate threat that the stateis in any immediate threat .
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Original:  U.S. Defense Secretary Robert Gates has activated Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD) and Sea Based X-Band (SBX) to respond to any North Korean missile launch that threatens Hawaiieven their is no immediate threat that the stateis in any immediate threat .
Revised:  U.S. Defense Secretary Robert Gates has activated Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD) and Sea Based X-Band (SBX) to respond to any North Korean missile launched towards Hawaii, even if there is no immediate threat that the stateis in any immediate threat .
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Original:  U.S. Defense Secretary Robert Gates has activated Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD) and Sea Based X-Band (SBX) to respond to any North Korean missile launch that threatens Hawaiieven their is no immediate threat that the stateis in any immediate threat .
Revised:  U.S. Defense Secretary Robert Gates has activated Terminal High Altitude Area Defense (THAAD) and Sea Based X-Band (SBX) to respond to any North Korean missile launch that threatens Hawaiieven their is no immediate threat to the state .
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Original:  Also Mr. Gates said the anti-air missiles in Alaska are ready if their is a launch by North Korea.
Revised:  Also Mr. Gates said the anti-air missiles in Alaska were ready if there is a launch by North Korea.
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Original:  James Cartwright says North Korea may be able to hit a major U.S. West coast city in three or five years, but says that it would be very unlikely to be a nuclear weapon.
Revised:  James Cartwright says North Korea may be able to hit a major U.S. West coast city in three or five years, but went on to state that it would be very unlikely to be a nuclear weapon.
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Original:  If the U.S. Navy does not receive permission to board the vessel, then no military, U.S. or otherwise, will attempt to board it using force  although America's top military officer says the U.S. Navy is prepared to stop the ship.
Revised:  If the U.S. Navy does not receive permission to board the vessel, then no military, U.S. or otherwise, will attempt to board it using force , although America's top military officer says the U.S. Navy is prepared to stop the ship.
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Original:  According to '' guardian.co.uk, many of those arrested were affiliated with the revolution in Iran in 1979.
Revised:  According to guardian.co.uk, many of those arrested were affiliated with the revolution in Iran in 1979.
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Original: The protesters on Saturday werea supporters of Mir-Hossein Mousavi, a candidate in the recent election.
Revised: The protesters on Saturday were supporters of Mir-Hossein Mousavi, a candidate in the recent election.
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Original: The Committee to Protect Journalists  is calling for the release of seven Gambian journalists arrested for reacting to President Yahya Jammeh's dismissal of an investigation involving the 2004 murder of journalist Deyda Hydara.
Revised: The Committee to Protect Journalists (CPJ) is calling for the release of seven Gambian journalists arrested for reacting to President Yahya Jammeh's dismissal of an investigation involving the 2004 murder of journalist Deyda Hydara.
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Original:  The New York-based Committee to Protect Journalists has called for the release of seven journalists detained by Gambia's National Intelligence Agency.
Revised:  The New York-based CPJ has called for the release of seven journalists detained by Gambia's National Intelligence Agency.
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Original: The New York-based CPJ has called for the release of seven journalists detained by Gambia's National Intelligence Agency.
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Original:  The seven include three members of the Gambian Press Union, two reporters from The Point newspaper and two journalists from Foroyaa newspaper.
Revised:  seven detainees include three members of the Gambian Press Union, two reporters from The Point newspaper and two journalists from Foroyaa newspaper.
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Original: Three people were killed and a further six were wounded on Wednesday after an early 20th century building, a registered landmark, collapsed in the Zamoskvorechiye district of Moscow, Russia.
Revised: Three people were killed and a further six were wounded on Wednesday after a building collapsed in the Zamoskvorechiye district of Moscow, Russia.
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Original:  Municipal housing is to replace the soon-to-be demolished lots
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Original: A criminal investigation has been prompted after the collapse of the building, with city officials claiming that the building's owner hadn't been granted permission to redevelop it.
Revised: A criminal investigation has been prompted after the collapse of the building, with city officials claiming that the building's owner hadn't received permission to redevelop it.
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Original:  The house , which is protected under law as a historical landmark , is to be completely demolished, as well as a neighbouring building, to protect other buildings in the vicinity,  the City Hall construction chief , Vladimir Resin, announced .
Revised:  The house was protected under law as a historical landmark , is to be completely demolished, as well as a neighbouring building, to protect other buildings in the vicinity, the City Hall construction chief , Vladimir Resin, announced .
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Original:  The house , which is protected under law as a historical landmark , is to be completely demolished, as well as a neighbouring building, to protect other buildings in the vicinity,  the City Hall construction chief , Vladimir Resin, announced .
Revised:  The house , which is protected under law as a historical landmark . It must now be completely demolished, as well as a neighbouring building, to protect other buildings in the vicinity, the City Hall construction chief , Vladimir Resin, announced .
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Original:  The house , which is protected under law as a historical landmark , is to be completely demolished, as well as a neighbouring building, to protect other buildings in the vicinity,  the City Hall construction chief , Vladimir Resin, announced .
Revised:  The house , which is protected under law as a historical landmark , is to be completely demolished, as well as a neighbouring building, to protect other buildings in the vicinity, the City Hall construction chief .
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Original:  Municipal housing is to replace the lots
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Original: Lindsey Oil Refinery Total has fired 900 contract workers at Lindsey Oil Refinery in North Killingholme, North Lincolnshire, England in response to a wildcat strike which took place at the facility this week.
Revised:  Total has fired 900 contract workers at Lindsey Oil Refinery in North Killingholme, North Lincolnshire, England in response to a wildcat strike which took place at the facility this week.
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Original: According to its annual report, Total had a 2008 net income of  13.9 billion.
Revised: According to its annual report, Total had a 2008 net income of € 13.9 billion.
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Original: ]]A research team from the Institute of Biomedical Research of the National Autonomous University of Mexico has developed at the National Oncology Institute a therapy that extends survival for locally advanced cervical cancer patients  .
Revised: ]]A research team from the Institute of Biomedical Research of the National Autonomous University of Mexico has developed a therapy that extends survival for locally advanced cervical cancer patients .
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