wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  During the first quarter of 2008, mobile telephony service suppliers connected to their network over 205.8 thousand new users, by more than thrice more against first quarter of 2007.
Revised:  During the first quarter of 2008, mobile telephony service suppliers connected over 205.8 thousand new users, by more than thrice more against first quarter of 2007.
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Original:  The local mobile telephony market is divided between three GSM  (Orange, Moldcell and Eventis) and one CDMA (Unité) mobile operators . Orange Moldova has launched its network in October 1998, Moldcell in April 2000, Moldtelecom (under the trademark Unité) in March 2007 and Eventis in December 2007.
Revised:  The local mobile phone market is divided between three GSM (Orange, Moldcell and Eventis) and one CDMA (Unité) mobile operators . Orange Moldova has launched its network in October 1998, Moldcell in April 2000, Moldtelecom (under the trademark Unité) in March 2007 and Eventis in December 2007.
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Original:  The local mobile telephony market is divided between three GSM  (Orange, Moldcell and Eventis) and one CDMA (Unité) mobile operators . Orange Moldova has launched its network in October 1998, Moldcell in April 2000, Moldtelecom (under the trademark Unité) in March 2007 and Eventis in December 2007.
Revised:  The local mobile telephony market is divided between three GSM (Orange, Moldcell and Eventis) and one CDMA (Unité) mobile operator . Orange Moldova has launched its network in October 1998, Moldcell in April 2000, Moldtelecom (under the trademark Unité) in March 2007 and Eventis in December 2007.
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Original:  The local mobile telephony market is divided between three GSM  (Orange, Moldcell and Eventis) and one CDMA (Unité) mobile operators . Orange Moldova has launched its network in October 1998, Moldcell in April 2000, Moldtelecom (under the trademark Unité) in March 2007 and Eventis in December 2007.
Revised:  The local mobile telephony market is divided between three GSM (Orange, Moldcell and Eventis) and one CDMA (Unité) mobile operators . Orange Moldova launched its network in October 1998, Moldcell in April 2000, Moldtelecom (under the trademark Unité) in March 2007 and Eventis in December 2007.
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Original:  Moldcell connected the most users to its network  103.9 thousand.
Revised:  Moldcell connected the most users to its network , achieving 103.9 thousand.
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Original:  “ I am going to announce this during my speech in Parliament, ” Sarkozy said when asked about media reports on the matter.
Revised:  " I am going to announce this during my speech in Parliament, ” Sarkozy said when asked about media reports on the matter.
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Original:  “ I am going to announce this during my speech in Parliament, ” Sarkozy said when asked about media reports on the matter.
Revised:  “ I am going to announce this during my speech in Parliament, " Sarkozy said when asked about media reports on the matter.
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Original:  “ Poland is one of the six great countries of Europe.
Revised:  " Poland is one of the six great countries of Europe.
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Original:  ” Of “old EU” member states, only Austria, Belgium, Denmark and Germany now maintain the ban.
Revised:  " Of "old EU" member states, only Austria, Belgium, Denmark and Germany now maintain the ban.
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Original:  “ I've met with the president of Ukraine and his objective is not membership, rather closer cooperation on various levels.
Revised:  " I've met with the president of Ukraine and his objective is not membership, rather closer cooperation on various levels.
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Original:  I will have opportunities to make such proposals, ” he said
Revised:  I will have opportunities to make such proposals, " he said
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Original: Image:Nicolas Sarkozy (2008).jpg|Nicolas Sarkozy at the Charlemagne Prize ceremony in 2008.]] During a one-day visit to Warsaw on Tuesday French President Nicolas Sarkozy announced that his country would lift job restrictions on the citizens of some of the European Union's former communist states.
Revised: Image:Nicolas Sarkozy (2008).jpg|Nicolas Sarkozy at the Charlemagne Prize ceremony in 2008.]] During a one-day visit to Warsaw on Tuesday French President Nicolas _Sarkozy announced that his country would lift job restrictions on the citizens of some of the European Union's former communist states.
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Original: Image:Nicolas Sarkozy (2008).jpg|Nicolas Sarkozy at the Charlemagne Prize ceremony in 2008.]] During a one-day visit to Warsaw on Tuesday French President Nicolas _Sarkozy announced that his country would lift job restrictions on the citizens of some of the European Union's former communist states.
Revised: Image:Nicolas Sarkozy (2008).jpg|Nicolas Sarkozy at the Charlemagne Prize ceremony in 2008.]] During a one-day visit to Warsaw on Tuesday French President Nicolas Sarkozy announced that his country would lift job restrictions on the citizens of some of the European Union's former communist states.
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Original:  "The Nepalese people have been freed from centuries of feudal tradition and the doors have now opened for a radical social and economic transformation," said a government spokesperson, commenting on the incident .
Revised:  "The Nepalese people have been freed from centuries of feudal tradition and the doors have now opened for a radical social and economic transformation," said a government spokesperson, commenting on the descision .
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Original: The former king, King Gyanendra  has been given two weeks to leave his palace.
Revised: The former king, King Gyanendra , has been given two weeks to leave his palace.
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Original:  The Nepalese president, Girija Prasad, also commented on the move . "Today is the day when my dreams have been realized and similarly the dreams of the nation have perhaps also been realized , " he said.
Revised:  The Nepalese president, Girija Prasad, also commented on the move : "Today is the day when my dreams have been realized and similarly the dreams of the nation have perhaps also been realized , " he said.
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Original:  The Nepalese president, Girija Prasad, also commented on the move . "Today is the day when my dreams have been realized and similarly the dreams of the nation have perhaps also been realized , " he said.
Revised:  The Nepalese president, Girija Prasad, also commented on the move . "Today is the day when my dreams have been realized and similarly the dreams of the nation have perhaps also been realized . " he said.
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Original:  The Nepalese president, Girija Prasad, also commented on the move . "Today is the day when my dreams have been realized and similarly the dreams of the nation have perhaps also been realized , " he said.
Revised:  The Nepalese president, Girija Prasad, also commented on the move . "Today is the day when my dreams have been realized and similarly the dreams of the nation have perhaps also been realized , " 
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Original:  Ban Ki-moon, the Secretary General of the United Nations  said that by supporting the switch to a republic, the Nepalese people have "clearly spoken for peace and change.
Revised:  Ban Ki-moon, the Secretary General of the United Nations , said that by supporting the switch to a republic, the Nepalese people have "clearly spoken for peace and change.
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Original:  The photos were entered into evidence as part of a case in Tom Green County District Court.
Revised:  The photos were entered into evidence as part of the case in Tom Green County District Court.
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Original:  The State of Texas is seeking custody of a baby boy born to Louisa Bradshaw and her "husband , " Dan Jessop.
Revised:  The State of Texas is seeking custody of a baby boy born to Louisa Bradshaw and her "husband " Dan Jessop.
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Original:  Child Protective Services lawyers told the court that the photos show Jeffs kissing the girls as "how a husband kisses a wife".
Revised:  Child Protective Services lawyers told the court that the photos show Jeffs kissing the girls similar to "how a husband kisses a wife".
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Original:  According to CNN  information revealed in court shows that one of the girls in the photos is an aunt to the children involved in the Texas custody hearing and lived on the YFZ Ranch.
Revised:  According to CNN , information revealed in court shows that one of the girls in the photos is an aunt to the children involved in the Texas custody hearing and lived on the YFZ Ranch.
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Original:  CNN reports that the girl's birth date was given as July 1994 and she is 13-years-old .
Revised:  CNN reports that the girl's birth date was given as July 1994 and she is 13 years old .
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Original:  Bradshaw was initially taken into custody as well because authorities thought she was under age, but have since stated that she is over age 18.
Revised:  Bradshaw was initially taken into custody as well because authorities thought she was under age, but it has since been revealed that she is over age 18.
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Original:  Bradshaw was initially taken into custody as well because authorities thought she was under age, but have since stated that she is over age 18.
Revised:  Bradshaw was initially taken into custody as well because authorities thought she was under age, but have since stated that she is over the age of 18.
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Original:  Protective Services said that Bradshaw and Jessop lived in the same building as the 12-year-old girl shown in the photographs with Jeffs.
Revised:  Protective Services said that Bradshaw and Jessop lived in the same building as the 12-year old girl shown in the photographs with Jeffs.
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Original:  Child Protective Services officials said that they have evidence that "Merrianne" was 12-years-old when she was married to Jeffs at the YFZ compound.
Revised:  Child Protective Services officials said that they have evidence that "Merrianne" was 12 years old when she was married to Jeffs at the YFZ compound.
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Original:  The Vancouver Sun reported that  per a family member, "Loretta" was no older than 12 when she was married.
Revised:  The Vancouver Sun reported that , per a family member, "Loretta" was no older than 12 when she was married.
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Original:  The mothers claim  the children are under "continuing, irreparable harm every day that they are separated from their parents".
Revised:  The mothers claim that the children are under "continuing, irreparable harm every day that they are separated from their parents".
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Original:  "People are mostly shocked and scared but no one is seriously injured so far," said Soffia Sigurdardottir, a rescue worker assisting those in need of help   .
Revised:  "People are mostly shocked and scared but no one is seriously injured so far," said Soffia Sigurdardottir, a rescue worker assisting those in need of help . .
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Original:  The glass in the windows shook and everybody was just really scared," said Audbjorg Olafsdottir,  economist in Reykjavik.
Revised:  The glass in the windows shook and everybody was just really scared," said Audbjorg Olafsdottir, an economist in Reykjavik.
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Original: A strong earthquake around 6.2 Richer hit southwestern Iceland at 15.46:01 UTC.
Revised: A strong earthquake with a magnitude 6.2 Richer hit southwestern Iceland at 15.46:01 UTC.
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Original: A strong earthquake around 6.2 Richer hit southwestern Iceland at 15.46:01 UTC.
Revised: A strong earthquake around 6.2 hit southwestern Iceland at 15.46:01 UTC.
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Original: A strong earthquake with a magnitude 6.2 hit southwestern Iceland at 15.46:01 UTC.
Revised: A strong earthquake with a magnitude 6.2 hit southwestern Iceland at 15:46 UTC.
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Original: At least 300,000 people live in Iceland.
Revised: Over 300,000 people live in Iceland.
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Original:  Some buildings suffered minor damage along with the main road leading into the town of Selfoss , which has been closed .
Revised:  Some buildings along the main road leading into the town of Selfoss , which has been closed .
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Original:  Some buildings suffered minor damage along with the main road leading into the town of Selfoss , which has been closed .
Revised:  Some buildings suffered minor damage along with the main road leading to the town of Selfoss , which has been closed .
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Original:  Some buildings suffered minor damage along with the main road leading into the town of Selfoss , which has been closed .
Revised:  Some buildings suffered minor damage along with the main road leading into the town of Selfoss suffered minor damage, leading to the closure of the road .
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Original:  It showed people jumping from a sky and forming the individual letters of Honda  as a group while falling , as illustrated by the image on the left , showing the letter 'O' being formed  
Revised:  It showed people jumping from the sky and forming the individual letters of Honda as a group while falling , as illustrated by the image on the left , showing the letter 'O' being formed 
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Original:  It showed people jumping from a sky and forming the individual letters of Honda  as a group while falling , as illustrated by the image on the left , showing the letter 'O' being formed  
Revised:  It showed people jumping from a sky and forming the individual letters of Honda as a group while falling . The image on the left , showing the letter 'O' being formed 
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Original:  It showed people jumping from a sky and forming the individual letters of Honda  as a group while falling , as illustrated by the image on the left , showing the letter 'O' being formed  
Revised:  It showed people jumping from a sky and forming the individual letters of Honda as a group while falling , as illustrated by the image on the left shows the letter 'O' being formed 
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Original:  It showed people jumping from a sky and forming the individual letters of Honda  as a group while falling , as illustrated by the image on the left , showing the letter 'O' being formed  
Revised:  It showed people jumping from a sky and forming the individual letters of Honda as a group while falling , as illustrated by the image on the left , showing the letter 'O' being formed in this way. 
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Original:  "This concept breaks the boundaries of the 'perceived' confines of TV advertising, which is something Channel 4 is striving to do," he said  
Revised:  "This concept breaks the boundaries of the 'perceived' confines of TV advertising, which is something Channel 4 is striving to do," he said . 
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Original:   It showed people jumping from the sky and forming the individual letters of Honda , the advertisers, as a group while falling.
Revised:  It showed people jumping from the sky and forming the individual letters of Honda as a group while falling.
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Original:  The advert was created by car manufacturer Honda .
Revised:  The advert , created by car manufacturer Honda .
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Original:  The sales director at Channel Four commented on the advert . "This concept breaks the boundaries of the 'perceived' confines of TV advertising, which is something Channel 4 is striving to do , " he said.
Revised:  The sales director at Channel Four commented on the advert : "This concept breaks the boundaries of the 'perceived' confines of TV advertising, which is something Channel 4 is striving to do , " he said.
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Original:  The sales director at Channel Four commented on the advert . "This concept breaks the boundaries of the 'perceived' confines of TV advertising, which is something Channel 4 is striving to do , " he said.
Revised:  The sales director at Channel Four commented on the advert . "This concept breaks the boundaries of the 'perceived' confines of TV advertising, which is something Channel 4 is striving to do . " he said.
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Original:  The sales director at Channel Four commented on the advert . "This concept breaks the boundaries of the 'perceived' confines of TV advertising, which is something Channel 4 is striving to do , " he said.
Revised:  The sales director at Channel Four commented on the advert . "This concept breaks the boundaries of the 'perceived' confines of TV advertising, which is something Channel 4 is striving to do , " 
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Original:  Before the advert was shown, the advert was promoted on Channel 4. Directly before the advert , an announcer explained the event, saying why Channel 4 believed it to be a groundbreaking innovation.
Revised:  Before being shown, the advert was promoted on Channel 4. Directly before the advert , an announcer explained the event, saying why Channel 4 believed it to be a groundbreaking innovation.
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Original:  Before the advert was shown, the advert was promoted on Channel 4. Directly before the advert , an announcer explained the event, saying why Channel 4 believed it to be a groundbreaking innovation.
Revised:  Before the advert was shown, the advert was promoted on Channel 4. Directly before it , an announcer explained the event, saying why Channel 4 believed it to be a groundbreaking innovation.
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Original:  The advert was filmed from Spain, where it was 21:10 at the time of the advert
Revised:  The advert was broadcast from Spain, where it was 21:10 at the time of the advert
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Original:  The advert was filmed from Spain, where it was 21:10 at the time of the advert
Revised:  The advert was filmed from Spain, where it was 21:10 at the time of filming
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Original: Having not released an album of new work since 1987, the opportunity to tour was yet another opportunity to cash in on their legacy as one of punk rock ’ s seminal bands and a way to connect with their fans.
Revised: Having not released an album of new work since 1987, the opportunity to tour was yet another opportunity to cash in on their legacy as one of punk rock ' s seminal bands and a way to connect with their fans.
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Original:  The band played a strong set of material from their first four albums ( all from their peak years of 1980 -1983).
Revised:  The band played a strong set of material from their first four albums ( their peak years of 1980 -1983).
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Original:  Their  second encore was joined by  Nagy who provided additional vocals.
Revised:  Their second encore was joined by Rachel Nagy who provided additional vocals.
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Original:  The Cobras, fronted by singer Rachel Nagy and guitarist Mary Ramirez provided a energetic opening for the headliners.
Revised:  The Cobras, fronted by singer Nagy and guitarist Mary Ramirez provided a energetic opening for the headliners.
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Original: Having not released an album of new work since 1987, the opportunity to tour was yet another opportunity to cash in on their legacy as one of punk rock's seminal bands and a way to connect with their fans.
Revised: Having not released an album of new work since 1987, the tour is an opportunity for one of punk rock's seminal bands and a way to connect with their fans.
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Original: Having not released an album of new work since 1987, the opportunity to tour was yet another opportunity to cash in on their legacy as one of punk rock's seminal bands and a way to connect with their fans.
Revised: Having not released an album of new work since 1987, the opportunity to tour was yet another opportunity to cash in on their legacy as one of punk rock's seminal bands to connect with their fans.
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Original:  The band played a strong set of material from their first four albums (their peak years of 1980 -1983).
Revised:  The band played a strong set of material from their first four albums , all recorded during the years of 1980 -1983).
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Original:  The band played a strong set of material from their first four albums (their peak years of 1980 -1983).
Revised:  The band played a strong set of material from their first four albums (their peak years of 1980 - 1983.
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Original:  Though X has not produced an album of new material in 21 years, the band did visit recently as their alter-ego, The Knitters.
Revised:  While, X has not produced an album of new material in 21 years, the band did visit recently as their alter-ego, The Knitters.
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Original:  On this tour  X has donated sets of tickets to the non-profit Sweet Relief Musicians Fund to provide assistance to all types of career musicians who are struggling to make ends meet while facing illness, disability, or age-related problems
Revised:  On this tour , X has donated sets of tickets to the non-profit Sweet Relief Musicians Fund to provide assistance to all types of career musicians who are struggling to make ends meet while facing illness, disability, or age-related problems
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Original:  Their second encore was joined by Rachel Nagy who provided additional vocals.
Revised:  During the second encore they were joined by Rachel Nagy who provided additional vocals.
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Original:  That encore was delayed by the fact that Zoom was in the audience seemingly determined to meet every woman in the audience.
Revised:  That encore was delayed by Zoom, who was in the audience seemingly determined to meet every woman in the audience.
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Original: The band stopped off in Philadelphia as part of their "13 x 31 Anniversary Tour," marking the bands 31st anniversary.
Revised: The band stopped in Philadelphia as part of their "13 x 31 Anniversary Tour," marking the bands 31st anniversary.
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Original:  While , X has not produced an album of new material in 21 years, the band did visit recently as their alter-ego, The Knitters.
Revised:  While X has not produced an album of new material in 21 years, the band did visit recently as their alter-ego, The Knitters.
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Original:  The Cobras, fronted by singer Nagy and guitarist Mary Ramirez  provided an energetic opening for the headliners.
Revised:  The Cobras, fronted by singer Nagy and guitarist Mary Ramirez , provided an energetic opening for the headliners.
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Original: In May 2008, the candidates of the United States presidential election campaigned and faced questions on as wide ranging issues as assassination, Hitler , and the death of one's political career.
Revised: In May 2008, the candidates of the United States presidential election campaigned and faced questions on as wide ranging issues as assassination, Hitler and the death of one's political career.
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Original:  A third party candidate also emerged who could potentially change the outcome of the election.
Revised:  A third-party candidate also emerged who could potentially change the outcome of the election.
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Original:  Barack Obama's victories in North Carolina and Oregon propolled him to large leads in the delegate count, and he picked up new superdelegates a higher rate than Hillary Clinton, including the endorsement of former candidate John Edwards.
Revised:  Barack Obama's victories in North Carolina and Oregon propelled him to large leads in the delegate count, and he picked up new superdelegates a higher rate than Hillary Clinton, including the endorsement of former candidate John Edwards.
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