wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: One of the first measures of revolutionaries after securing the support of six provinces  was to send diplomatic missions abroad to seek support for the revolution and the recognition of the Supreme Junta of Caracas as the legitimate councilor of Venezuela in the absence of the King.
Revised: One of the first measures of revolutionaries after securing the support of six provinces was to send diplomatic missions abroad to seek support for the revolution and that of the Supreme Junta of Caracas as the legitimate councilor of Venezuela in the absence of the King.
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Original: One of the first measures of revolutionaries after securing the support of six provinces  was to send diplomatic missions abroad to seek support for the revolution and the recognition of the Supreme Junta of Caracas as the legitimate councilor of Venezuela in the absence of the King.
Revised: One of the first measures of revolutionaries after securing the support of six provinces was to send diplomatic missions abroad to seek support for the revolution and the recognition of the Supreme Junta of Caracas as the legitimate councillor of Venezuela in the absence of the King.
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Original:  To London were sent Simon Bolivar and Luis Lopez Mendez with Andres Bello as secretary, which left La Guaira in early June 1810.
Revised:  Simon Bolivar along with Luis Lopez Mendez with Andres Bello as secretary, which left La Guaira in early June 1810.
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Original:  To London were sent Simon Bolivar and Luis Lopez Mendez with Andres Bello as secretary, which left La Guaira in early June 1810.
Revised:  To London were sent Simon Bolivar and Luis Lopez Mendez and Andres Bello as secretary, which left La Guaira in early June 1810.
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Original:  To London were sent Simon Bolivar and Luis Lopez Mendez with Andres Bello as secretary, which left La Guaira in early June 1810.
Revised:  To London were sent Simon Bolivar and Luis Lopez Mendez with Andres Bello as secretary, set sail for London from La Guaira in early June 1810.
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Original:  At the United States were Juan Vicente Bolívar Palacios, brother of the Liberator, Jose Rafael Revenga and Telesforo Orea who obtained some success in interesting the government of that country to support the Supreme Junta.
Revised:  Juan Vicente Bolívar Palacios, brother of the Liberator, Jose Rafael Revenga and Telesforo Orea who obtained some success in interesting the government of that country to support the Supreme Junta.
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Original:  At the United States were Juan Vicente Bolívar Palacios, brother of the Liberator, Jose Rafael Revenga and Telesforo Orea who obtained some success in interesting the government of that country to support the Supreme Junta.
Revised:  At the United States were Juan Vicente Bolívar Palacios, brother of the Liberator, Jose Rafael Revenga and Telesforo Orea who obtained some success in gaining the interest of that country to support the Supreme Junta.
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Original:  Accessed on 02/07/2018 at: URL Narcissa Chisholm Owen on her 75th birthday in 1906.
Revised:  Accessed on 02/07/2018 at: URL 
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Original: Cherokee people Category: Democratic Party United States senators Category: Native American members of the United States Congress Category: Oklahoma Democrats Category:Politicians from Lynchburg, Virginia Category: People from Salina, Oklahoma Category: People of the Indian Territory Category: Progressive Era in the United States Category: Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Washington and Lee University alum
Revised: Cherokee people Category: Native American members of the United States Congress Category: Oklahoma Democrats Category:Politicians from Lynchburg, Virginia Category: People from Salina, Oklahoma Category: People of the Indian Territory Category: Progressive Era in the United States Category: Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Washington and Lee University alum
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Original: Cherokee people Category: Democratic Party United States senators Category: Native American members of the United States Congress Category: Oklahoma Democrats Category:Politicians from Lynchburg, Virginia Category: People from Salina, Oklahoma Category: People of the Indian Territory Category: Progressive Era in the United States Category: Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Washington and Lee University alum
Revised: Cherokee people Category: Democratic Party United States senators Category: Native American members of the United States Congress Category: Democratic Party United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:20th-century American politicians Category: People from Salina, Oklahoma Category: People of the Indian Territory Category: Progressive Era in the United States Category: Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Washington and Lee University alum
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Original: Cherokee people Category: Democratic Party United States senators Category: Native American members of the United States Congress Category: Oklahoma Democrats Category:Politicians from Lynchburg, Virginia Category: People from Salina, Oklahoma Category: People of the Indian Territory Category: Progressive Era in the United States Category: Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Washington and Lee University alum
Revised: Cherokee people Category: Democratic Party United States senators Category: Native American members of the United States Congress Category: Oklahoma Democrats Category:Politicians from Lynchburg, Virginia Category: People from Salina, Oklahoma Category: Progressive Era in the United States Category: Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Washington and Lee University alum
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Original: Early and family life Owen was born in Lynchburg, Virginia  on February 2, 1856, the younger of two sons of Col.
Revised: Early and family life Owen was born in Lynchburg, Virginia , on February 2, 1856, the younger of two sons of Col.
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Original:  His grandfather, Dr. William Owen, and uncle, Dr. William Otway Owen Sr. (1820–92), both practiced medicine in Lynchburg, and the latter served as Surgeon-in-Chief in charge of thirty hospitals in Lynchburg (which became a major wartime hospital center) throughout the Civil War.
Revised:  His grandfather, Dr. William Owen, and uncle, Dr. William Otway Owen Sr. (1820–92), both practiced medicine in Lynchburg, and the latter served as surgeon-in-chief in charge of thirty hospitals in Lynchburg (which became a major wartime hospital center) throughout the Civil War.
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Original:  Owen's listing on the Dawes Rolls, dating from around 1900, records him as 1/ 16th Cherokee by blood.
Revised:  Owen's listing on the Dawes Rolls, dating from around 1900, records him as 1/ 16 Cherokee by blood.
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Original:  Retrieved 18 July 2012.
Revised:  Retrieved July 18, 2012.
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Original:  However, Narcissa's Memoirs (1907) , self-describe her as 1/ 16th Cherokee, which if correct would imply that her son was 1/ 32nd Cherokee.
Revised:  However, Narcissa's memoirs (1907) , self-describe her as 1/ 16th Cherokee, which if correct would imply that her son was 1/ 32nd Cherokee.
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Original:  However, Narcissa's Memoirs (1907) , self-describe her as 1/ 16th Cherokee, which if correct would imply that her son was 1/ 32nd Cherokee.
Revised:  However, Narcissa's Memoirs (1907) self-describe her as 1/ 16th Cherokee, which if correct would imply that her son was 1/ 32nd Cherokee.
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Original:  However, Narcissa's Memoirs (1907) , self-describe her as 1/ 16th Cherokee, which if correct would imply that her son was 1/ 32nd Cherokee.
Revised:  However, Narcissa's Memoirs (1907) , self-describe her as 1/ 16 Cherokee, which if correct would imply that her son was 1/ 32nd Cherokee.
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Original:  However, Narcissa's Memoirs (1907) , self-describe her as 1/ 16th Cherokee, which if correct would imply that her son was 1/ 32nd Cherokee.
Revised:  However, Narcissa's Memoirs (1907) , self-describe her as 1/ 16th Cherokee, which if correct would imply that her son was 1/ 32 Cherokee.
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Original: Memoirs (pp. 43-44 ) portray her Cherokee descent as stemming from her great great grandmother Queen Quatsis, and mentions no other Cherokee or other line of descent.
Revised: Memoirs (pp. 43–44 ) portray her Cherokee descent as stemming from her great great grandmother Queen Quatsis, and mentions no other Cherokee or other line of descent.
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Original:  Holmes (English), Martha Holmes Chisholm (1/4 Cherokee), (4) The son of Martha and John D. Chisholm (of Scottish ancestry), Thomas Chisholm (1/ 8th Cherokee), to (5) The daughter of Thomas Chisholm and Malinda Wharton Chisholm (of Irish ancestry), Narcissa Chisholm Owen (1/ 16th Cherokee).
Revised:  Holmes (English), Martha Holmes Chisholm (1/4 Cherokee), (4) The son of Martha and John D. Chisholm (of Scottish ancestry), Thomas Chisholm (1/ 8 Cherokee), to (5) The daughter of Thomas Chisholm and Malinda Wharton Chisholm (of Irish ancestry), Narcissa Chisholm Owen (1/ 16th Cherokee).
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Original:  Holmes (English), Martha Holmes Chisholm (1/4 Cherokee), (4) The son of Martha and John D. Chisholm (of Scottish ancestry), Thomas Chisholm (1/ 8th Cherokee), to (5) The daughter of Thomas Chisholm and Malinda Wharton Chisholm (of Irish ancestry), Narcissa Chisholm Owen (1/ 16th Cherokee).
Revised:  Holmes (English), Martha Holmes Chisholm (1/4 Cherokee), (4) The son of Martha and John D. Chisholm (of Scottish ancestry), Thomas Chisholm (1/ 8th Cherokee), to (5) The daughter of Thomas Chisholm and Malinda Wharton Chisholm (of Irish ancestry), Narcissa Chisholm Owen (1/ 16 Cherokee).
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Original: People of Indian Territory Category:American people of Welsh descent Category:Cherokee people Category:Native American members of the United States Congress Category:  Democratic Party United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:20th-century American politicians Category:People from Salina, Oklahoma Category:Progressive Era in the United States Category:19th-century American lawyers Category:Washington and Lee University alum
Revised: People of Indian Territory Category:American people of Welsh descent Category:Cherokee people Category:Native American members of the United States Congress Category: Native American politicians Category: Democratic Party United States senators from Oklahoma Category:Candidates in the 1920 United States presidential election Category:20th-century American politicians Category:People from Salina, Oklahoma Category:Progressive Era in the United States Category:19th-century American lawyers Category:Washington and Lee University alum
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Original: Dorothea would have a son, who would also be called Robert Owen Jr. rather than Robert Owen III, perhaps due to the name skipping a generation. URL
Revised: Dorothea had a son, who would also be called Robert Owen Jr. rather than Robert Owen III, perhaps due to the name skipping a generation. URL
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Original: Dorothea would have a son, who would also be called Robert Owen Jr. rather than Robert Owen III, perhaps due to the name skipping a generation. URL
Revised: Dorothea would have a son, who was also called Robert Owen Jr. rather than Robert Owen III, perhaps due to the name skipping a generation. URL
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Original: The biosphere (from Greek βίος bíos "life" and σφαῖρα sphaira "sphere"), also known as the ecosphere (from Greek οἶκος oîkos "environment" and σφαῖρα), is the worldwide sum of all ecosystems.
Revised: The biosphere (from Greek βίος bíos κος oîkos "environment" and σφαῖρα), is the worldwide sum of all ecosystems.
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Original:  With regards to energy, it is an open system, with photosynthesis capturing solar energy at a rate of around 130 TerawattsNealson K.H. & Conrad P.G. (1999).
Revised:  With regards to energy, uring solar energy at a rate of around 130 TerawattsNealson K.H. & Conrad P.G. (1999).
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Original:  With regards to energy, it is an open system, with photosynthesis capturing solar energy at a rate of around 130 TerawattsNealson K.H. & Conrad P.G. (1999).
Revised:  With regards to energy, it is an open system, with photosynthesis capturing solar energy at a rate of and 130 TerawattsNealson K.H. & Conrad P.G. (1999).
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Original:  However it is a self-regulating system close to energetic equilibrium.
Revised:  Howevero energetic equilibrium.
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Original:  By the most general biophysiological definition, the biosphere is the global ecological system integrating all living beings and their relationships, including their interaction with the elements of the lithosphere, cryosphere, hydrosphere, and atmosphere.
Revised:  By the most general biophysiological definition, the biosphere is the global ecological system integrating all living beings and their relationshiluding their interaction with the elements of the lithosphere, cryosphere, hydrosphere, and atmosphere.
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Original:  The biosphere is postulated to have evolved, beginning with a process of biopoiesis (life created naturally from non-living matter, such as simple organic compounds) or biogenesis (life created from living matter), at least some 3.5 billion years ago.
Revised:  Thphere is postulated to have evolved, beginning with a process of biopoiesis (life created naturally from non-living matter, such as simple organic compounds) or biogenesis (life created from living matter), at least some 3.5 billion years ago.
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Original:  The biosphere is postulated to have evolved, beginning with a process of biopoiesis (life created naturally from non-living matter, such as simple organic compounds) or biogenesis (life created from living matter), at least some 3.5 billion years ago.
Revised:  The biosphere is postulated to have evolved, beginning with a process of biopoiesis (life m living matter), at least some 3.5 billion years ago.
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Original:  This includes artificial biospheres such as Biosphere 2 and BIOS-3, and potentially ones on other planets or moons.
Revised:  This includes artificial biospheres such antially ones on other planets or moons.
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Original:  With regards to energy, uring solar energy at a rate of and 130 TerawattsNealson K.H. & Conrad P.G. (1999).
Revised:  With regards to energy, uring solar energy at a rate of around 130 TerawattsNealson K.H. & Conrad P.G. (1999).
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Original:  Howevero energetic equilibrium.
Revised:  However it is a self-regulating system close to energetic equilibrium.
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Original:  By the most general biophysiological definition, the biosphere is the global ecological system integrating all living beings and their relationshiluding their interaction with the elements of the lithosphere, cryosphere, hydrosphere, and atmosphere.
Revised:  By the most general biophysiological definition, the biosphere is the global ecological system integrating all living beings and their relationships, including their interaction with the elements of the lithosphere, cryosphere, hydrosphere, and atmosphere.
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Original:  Thphere is postulated to have evolved, beginning with a process of biopoiesis (life m living matter), at least some 3.5 billion years ago.
Revised:  The biosphere is postulated to have evolved, beginning with a process of biopoiesis (life m living matter), at least some 3.5 billion years ago.
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Original:  The biosphere is virtually a closed system with regards to matter, with minimal inputs and outputs.
Revised:  The biosphere is virtually a closed system with regard to matter, with minimal inputs and outputs.
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Original:  With regards to energy, it is an open system, with photosynthesis capturing solar energy at a rate of around 130 Terawatts per year.
Revised:  With regardso to energy, it is an open system, with photosynthesis capturing solar energy at a rate of around 130 Terawatts per year.
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Original: Overview  In the 1970s, there were not many architectural and engineering firms that recognized the computer’s potential as a tool for financial evaluation.
Revised: Overview CARLA Brochure CARLA Brochure In the 1970s, there were not many architectural and engineering firms that recognized the computer’s potential as a tool for financial evaluation.
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Original: Software Development CARLA Computer Room CARLA Digitizer CARLA Plotter CARLA Plotter CARLA Drainage Plot CARLA was a customized software program conceived by Beverly Willis and written in house by a Harvard Graduate School of Design student, Jochen Eigen, designed to analyze prospective land parcels for their development potential as large-scale multi-unit complexes.
Revised: Software Development CARLA Computer Room CARLA was a customized software program conceived by Beverly Willis and written in house by a Harvard Graduate School of Design student, Jochen Eigen, designed to analyze prospective land parcels for their development potential as large-scale multi-unit complexes.
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Original:  CARLA’s analyses allowed for less earth-moving for the project, causing less destruction to the environment and lowering overall construction costs. 
Revised:  CARLA’s analyses allowed for less earth-moving for the project, causing less destruction to the environment and lowering overall construction costs. Gallery
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Original: A United Kingdom is a 2016 British biographical romantic drama film directed by Amma Asante and written by Guy Hibbert, based on the true-life romance between Seretse Khama, heir to the throne of Bechuanaland (later Botswana, of which he was President), and his wife Ruth Williams Khama.
Revised: A United Kingdom is a 2016 biographical romantic drama film directed by Amma Asante and written by Guy Hibbert, based on the true-life romance between Seretse Khama, heir to the throne of Bechuanaland (later Botswana, of which he was President), and his wife Ruth Williams Khama.
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Original: Critical response On review aggregator website Rotten Tomatoes, the film has an approval rating of 84\% based on 163 reviews, with an average rating of 6.8/10.
Revised: Critical response On review aggregator website Rotten Tomatoes, the film has an approval rating of 84\% based on 164 reviews, with an average rating of 6.8/10.
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Original:  She is the daughter of actor Sunil Shetty.
Revised:  She is the daughter of actor Suniel Shetty.
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Original: Personal Life Athiya Shetty is rumored to be dating Indian Cricketer KL Rahul Career [[File:Sooraj Pancholi & Athiya Shetty.jpg|Shetty with Hero co-actor Sooraj Pancholi in 2015|left]] Shetty made her acting debut in 2015 with the Nikhil Advani-directed romantic action film Hero, a remake of co-producer Subhash Ghai's 1983 classic of the same name.
Revised:  Athiya Shetty is rumored to be dating Indian Cricketer KL Rahul Career [[File:Sooraj Pancholi & Athiya Shetty.jpg|Shetty with Hero co-actor Sooraj Pancholi in 2015|left]] Shetty made her acting debut in 2015 with the Nikhil Advani-directed romantic action film Hero, a remake of co-producer Subhash Ghai's 1983 classic of the same name.
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Original: Personal Life Athiya Shetty is rumored to be dating Indian Cricketer KL Rahul Career [[File:Sooraj Pancholi & Athiya Shetty.jpg|Shetty with Hero co-actor Sooraj Pancholi in 2015|left]] Shetty made her acting debut in 2015 with the Nikhil Advani-directed romantic action film Hero, a remake of co-producer Subhash Ghai's 1983 classic of the same name.
Revised: Personal Life Career [[File:Sooraj Pancholi & Athiya Shetty.jpg|Shetty with Hero co-actor Sooraj Pancholi in 2015|left]] Shetty made her acting debut in 2015 with the Nikhil Advani-directed romantic action film Hero, a remake of co-producer Subhash Ghai's 1983 classic of the same name.
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Original: Kunwar Naveed Jamil () is a Pakistani politician who has been a member of the National Assembly of Pakistan, since April 2015.
Revised: Kunwar Naveed Jamil () is a Pakistani politician who had been a member of the National Assembly of Pakistan, since April 2015.
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Original:  Previously  he had been a member of the Provincial Assembly of Sindh from 2002 to 2005.
Revised:  Previously , he had been a member of the Provincial Assembly of Sindh from 2002 to 2005.
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Original: Kunwar Naveed Jamil () is a Pakistani politician who had been a member of the National Assembly of Pakistan, from April 2015 to May 2018.
Revised: Kunwar Naveed Jamil () is a Pakistani politician who is the member of the National Assembly of Pakistan, from April 2015 to May 2018.
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Original:   He has visited the US and held meetings with the Filipino-American community to promote awareness and elicit support for his cause .
Revised:  . He has visited the US and held meetings with the Filipino-American community to promote awareness and elicit support for his cause .
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Original:  He also promotes turning the Spratly Islands into an ecotourism zone .
Revised:  He also promotes turning the Spratly Islands into an ecotourism zone 
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Original:  Believing that a civilian presence helps to strengthen Filipino claims to the South China Sea. ., Bito-onon helped to establish the first deliberately settled civilian town in the Spratlys on Thitu Island in 2001.
Revised:  Believing that a civilian presence helps to strengthen Filipino claims to the South China Sea. Bito-onon helped to establish the first deliberately settled civilian town in the Spratlys on Thitu Island in 2001.
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Original:  Bit-onon is running for re-election in 2016.
Revised:  Bit-onon failed in his re-election in 2016.
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Original:  Bit-onon failed in his re-election bid in 2016, coming in second place with 59 votes and losing to the eventual winner Choy del Mundo with 142 votes.
Revised:  Bit-onon failed in his re-election bid in 2016, coming in second place with 59 votes and losing to the eventual winner Roberto "Choy" M, del Mundo with 142 votes.
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Original:  He also promotes turning the Spratly Islands into an ecotourism zone  Based primarily in Puerto Princesa, where his office resides, Bito-onon is generally only able to visit Thitu Island once a year.
Revised:  He also promotes turning the Spratly Islands into an ecotourism zone . Based primarily in Puerto Princesa, where his office resides, Bito-onon is generally only able to visit Thitu Island once a year.
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Original:  Together, they have two sons 
Revised:  Together, they have two sons .
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Original:  Modern futures agreements, was created by producers and dealers (e.g. food processing companies) in Chicago in the 1840s to let other parties than producers and dealers to hold the financial risk before delivery date , with the appearance of grain elevators.
Revised:  Modern futures agreements, began in Chicago in the 1840s to let other parties than producers and dealers to hold the financial risk before delivery date , with the appearance of grain elevators.
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