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Original:  A pivital figure in uroscopy, Constantine the African's Latin translations of popular Byzantine and Arab texts inspired a new era in uroscopic prominence, specifically in western Europe throughout the High Middle Ages.
Revised:  A pivital figure in uroscopy, Constantine the African's Latin translations of popular Byzantine and Arab texts inspired a new era in uroscopic interest specifically in western Europe throughout the High Middle Ages.
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Original:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy  still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
Revised:  Despite this popularization, uroscopy still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
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Original:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy  still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
Revised:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy was still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
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Original:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy  still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
Revised:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy still mostly maintained by the principals Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
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Original:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy  still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
Revised:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's first postulated, aided by Byzantine interpretations that were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
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Original:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy  still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this peroid through works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
Revised:  Regardless of this intense popularization, uroscopy still mostly maintained the principals defined by Hippocrates's and Galen's initial postulations, and the Byzantine interpretations were further disseminated during this period in works by French physicians of the era Bernard de Gordon and Gilles de Corbeil.
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Original:  The practice was upheld as the standard until the beginning of the 16th century when, due to cultural movements like the Renaissance , figures from all areas of intellectual discipline begain to re-examine the procedure of uroscopy , both to re-evaluate its effectiveness and explore new applications.
Revised:  The practice was upheld as the standard until the beginning of the 16th century , when influence from cultural movements like the Renaissance , figures from all areas of intellectual discipline begain to re-examine the procedure of uroscopy , both to re-evaluate its effectiveness and explore new applications.
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Original:  The practice was upheld as the standard until the beginning of the 16th century when, due to cultural movements like the Renaissance , figures from all areas of intellectual discipline begain to re-examine the procedure of uroscopy , both to re-evaluate its effectiveness and explore new applications.
Revised:  The practice was upheld as the standard until the beginning of the 16th century when, due to cultural movements like the Renaissance inspired the re-examination of the its methods , both to re-evaluate its effectiveness and explore new applications.
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Original:  During this peroid , a lack of empiracle evidence supporting uroscopy initiated its gradual decline among licenced physicians.
Revised:  During this period , a lack of empiracle evidence supporting uroscopy initiated its gradual decline among licenced physicians.
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Original:  During this peroid , a lack of empiracle evidence supporting uroscopy initiated its gradual decline among licenced physicians.
Revised:  During this peroid , a lack of empirical evidence supporting uroscopy initiated its gradual decline among licenced physicians.
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Original:  More modern doctors like the Swiss medical pioneer Paracelsus  began researching more empiracally backed scientific approaches to diagnoses and treatment , launching the Medical Renaissance and  redefining how we look at disease, eventually resulting in the discredibility of uroscopy.
Revised:  More modern doctors like the Swiss medical pioneer Paracelsus , began researching more empiracally backed scientific approaches to diagnoses and treatment , launching the Medical Renaissance and redefining how we look at disease, eventually resulting in the discredibility of uroscopy.
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Original:  More modern doctors like the Swiss medical pioneer Paracelsus  began researching more empiracally backed scientific approaches to diagnoses and treatment , launching the Medical Renaissance and  redefining how we look at disease, eventually resulting in the discredibility of uroscopy.
Revised:  More modern doctors like the Swiss medical pioneer Paracelsus began researching more empirically qualified approaches to diagnosis and treatment — an integral part of the Medical Renaissance and redefining how we look at disease, eventually resulting in the discredibility of uroscopy.
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Original:  More modern doctors like the Swiss medical pioneer Paracelsus  began researching more empiracally backed scientific approaches to diagnoses and treatment , launching the Medical Renaissance and  redefining how we look at disease, eventually resulting in the discredibility of uroscopy.
Revised:  More modern doctors like the Swiss medical pioneer Paracelsus began researching more empiracally backed scientific approaches to diagnoses and treatment , launching the Medical Renaissance and its redefining how we look at disease, eventually resulting in the discredibility of uroscopy.
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Original:  More modern doctors like the Swiss medical pioneer Paracelsus  began researching more empiracally backed scientific approaches to diagnoses and treatment , launching the Medical Renaissance and  redefining how we look at disease, eventually resulting in the discredibility of uroscopy.
Revised:  More modern doctors like the Swiss medical pioneer Paracelsus began researching more empiracally backed scientific approaches to diagnoses and treatment , launching the Medical Renaissance and redefining how we look at 
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Original:  Incidently, as the decline of uroscopy continued, a new form of divination emerged in "Uromancy" — the analysis of one's urine for fortune-telling or state-reading purposes.
Revised:  medicine —which only further hastened the decline of uroscopy continued, a new form of divination emerged in "Uromancy" — the analysis of one's urine for fortune-telling or state-reading purposes.
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Original:  Although uromancy initially gained interest in the 18th 19th centuries, it is rarely practiced and unknown to most.
Revised:  Although uromancy initially gained interest in the 18th .
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Original:  Since the beginning of the 17th century the practice of uroscopy has been considered unverifiable and unorthodox, quickly becoming a subject of satire , including in the plays of Shakespeare  .
Revised:  Since the beginning of the 17th century the practice has been largely considered unverifiable and unorthodox, quickly becoming a subject of satire , including in the plays of Shakespeare .
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Original:  Since the beginning of the 17th century the practice of uroscopy has been considered unverifiable and unorthodox, quickly becoming a subject of satire , including in the plays of Shakespeare  .
Revised:  Since the beginning of the 17th century the practice of uroscopy has been considered unverifiable and unorthodox, and became a subject of satire , including in the plays of Shakespeare .
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Original:  Since the beginning of the 17th century the practice of uroscopy has been considered unverifiable and unorthodox, quickly becoming a subject of satire , including in the plays of Shakespeare  .
Revised:  Since the beginning of the 17th century the practice of uroscopy has been considered unverifiable and unorthodox, quickly becoming a subject of satire , including in the plays of Shakespeare ) .
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Original:  Though uroscopy is no longer popular in modern medicine, remnants of its diagmost of utility still exist in simplified and empirically proven forms  &  .
Revised:  Though uroscopy is no longer popular in modern medicine, examples of its preliminary diagnostic utility still exist in simplified and empirically proven forms & .
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Original:  Though uroscopy is no longer popular in modern medicine, remnants of its diagmost of utility still exist in simplified and empirically proven forms  &  .
Revised:  Though uroscopy is no longer popular in modern medicine, remnants of its diagmost of utility still exist in simplified and empirically proven forms . & .
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Original: It is notable that pregancy and diabetes are two diagnoses that uroscopy, although out of favor with medical professionals, has a good rate of predicting.
Revised: It is notable that pregnancy and diabetes are two diagnoses that uroscopy, although out of favor with medical professionals, has a good rate of predicting.
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Original:  Byzantine physicians created some of the foundational codifications of uroscopy, with the most well known example being a 7th century guide on uroscopic methods: Theophilus Protospatharius's On Urines.
Revised:  Byzantine physicians created some of the foundational codifications of uroscopy, with the most well known example being a 7th-century guide on uroscopic methods: Theophilus Protospatharius's On Urines.
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Original:  In the era in which uroscopy was a popular way of thinking, one of the major benifits was the lack of surgical operations, lending itself to the most conservative of adherents to the Hippocratic Oath.
Revised:  In the era in which uroscopy was a popular way of thinking, one of the major benefits was the lack of surgical operations, lending itself to the most conservative of adherents to the Hippocratic Oath.
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Original:  Diabetes In 1674 English doctor Thomas Willis submitted into medical literature a peculiar (and peculiarly found) relationship he'd observed: people with type 1 diabetes usually have sweet tasting urine — this is due to a oversaturation of glucose in the blood, the excess of which is excreted out via urine, as the diabetic lacks sufficient insulin to process the high amounts of glucose.
Revised:  Diabetes In 1674 English doctor Thomas Willis submitted into medical literature a peculiar (and peculiarly found) relationship he'd observed: people with type 1 diabetes usually have sweet tasting urine — this is due to an oversaturation of glucose in the blood, the excess of which is excreted out via urine, as the diabetic lacks sufficient insulin to process the high amounts of glucose.
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Original: Jaundice Yellowish discoloration of the whites of the eyes, skin, and mucous membranes caused by deposition of bilirubine in these tissues.
Revised: Jaundice Yellowish discoloration of the whites of the eyes, skin, and mucous membranes caused by deposition of bilirubin in these tissues.
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Original: Career  Gildo Pallanca Pastor     purchased Venturi Automobiles in 2001.
Revised: Career Gildo Pallanca Pastor Gildo Pallanca Pastor purchased Venturi Automobiles in 2001.
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Original:  Honours In 2009, Prince Albert II of Monaco made him a Knight of the Order of Saint-Charles   .
Revised:  Honours In 2009, Prince Albert II of Monaco made him a Knight of the Order of Saint-Charles . .
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Original: Career At just 21 years of age, Gildo Pallanca Pastor oversaw the construction of the Gildo Pastor Center, which to this day remains Monaco's largest office block.
Revised: Career Gildo Pallanca Pastor oversaw the construction of the Gildo Pastor Center, which to this day remains Monaco's largest office block.
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Original:  Gildo Pallanca Pastor purchased Venturi Automobiles in 2000, a French constructor specialising in sports cars.
Revised:  purchased Venturi Automobiles in 2000, a French constructor specialising in sports cars.
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Original:  Using developments from Venturi, he decided to focus on electric motorcycles and the first electric Voxan was developed 3 years later . Honours In 2009, Prince Albert II of Monaco made him a Knight of the Order of Saint-Charles . Since 2015 he has been Monaco's Consul General to the United States .
Revised:  Using developments from Venturi, he decided to focus on electric motorcycles and the first electric Voxan was developed 3 years later . Honours In 2009, Prince Albert II of Monaco made him a Knight of the Order of Saint-Charles Since 2015 he has been Monaco's Consul General to the United States .
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Original:  Using developments from Venturi, he decided to focus on electric motorcycles and the first electric Voxan was developed 3 years later . Honours In 2009, Prince Albert II of Monaco made him a Knight of the Order of Saint-Charles . Since 2015 he has been Monaco's Consul General to the United States .
Revised:  Using developments from Venturi, he decided to focus on electric motorcycles and the first electric Voxan was developed 3 years later . Honours In 2009, Prince Albert II of Monaco made him a Knight of the Order of Saint-Charles . .
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Original: Racial groups Cape Verdeans 1950 census Racial group Ref.\% of Cape Verde populationMulattos Fractionalization in Portuguese colonial territories in 1950, according to the Portuguese Yearbook, 1950, vol. II. Racial composition of total population (Page:
Revised: Racial groups Cape Verdeans 1950 census Racial group \% of populationMulattosFractionalization in Portuguese colonial territories in 1950, according to the Portuguese Yearbook, 1950, vol. II. Racial composition of total population (Page:
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Original:  6) Blacks (West African)Fractionalization in Portuguese colonial territories in 1950, according to the Portuguese Yearbook, 1950, vol. II. Racial composition of total population White Other or unknown The last time Cape Verde counted racial origin was in the 1950 census.
Revised:  6) Blacks (West African)Fractionalization in Portuguese colonial territories in 1950, according to the Portuguese Yearbook, 1950, vol. II. Racial composition of total population White Other or unknown 
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Original:  Most of them were Dutch, French, British, Spanish, (English) , Arab and Jewish (from Lebanon and Morocco).
Revised:  Most of them were Dutch, French, British, Spanish, English , Arab and Jewish (from Lebanon and Morocco).
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Original: Italians seamen who were granted land by the Portuguese Empire,  followed by Portuguese settlers, exiles, and Portuguese Jews (lançados) who were victims of the Inquisition.
Revised: Italian seamen who were granted land by the Portuguese Empire, followed by Portuguese settlers, exiles, and Portuguese Jews (lançados) who were victims of the Inquisition.
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Original: Italians seamen who were granted land by the Portuguese Empire,  followed by Portuguese settlers, exiles, and Portuguese Jews (lançados) who were victims of the Inquisition.
Revised: Italians seamen who were granted land by the Portuguese Empire, were followed by Portuguese settlers, exiles, and Portuguese Jews (lançados) who were victims of the Inquisition.
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Original: Pelagic red clay, also known as simply red clay, brown clay or pelagic clay, is a type of pelagic (deepwater) sediment.
Revised: Pelagic red clay, also known as simply red clay, brown clay or pelagic clay, is a type of pelagic sediment.
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Original:  The clays which comprise them were transported into the deep ocean in suspension, either in the air over the oceans or in surface waters.
Revised:  The clays which comprise them are transported into the deep ocean in suspension, either in the air over the oceans or in surface waters.
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Original:  Both wind and ocean currents transported these sediments in suspension thousands of kilometers from their terrestrial source.
Revised:  Both wind and ocean currents transport these sediments in suspension thousands of kilometers from their terrestrial source.
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Original:  As they were transported, the finer clays may have stayed in suspension for a hundred years or more within the water column before they settled to the ocean bottom.
Revised:  As they are transported, the finer clays may have stayed in suspension for a hundred years or more within the water column before they settled to the ocean bottom.
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Original:  As they were transported, the finer clays may have stayed in suspension for a hundred years or more within the water column before they settled to the ocean bottom.
Revised:  As they were transported, the finer clays may stay in suspension for a hundred years or more within the water column before they settled to the ocean bottom.
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Original:  As they were transported, the finer clays may have stayed in suspension for a hundred years or more within the water column before they settled to the ocean bottom.
Revised:  As they were transported, the finer clays may have stayed in suspension for a hundred years or more within the water column before they settle to the ocean bottom.
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Original:  The settling of this clay-size sediment occurred primarily by the formation of clay aggregates by flocculation and by their incorporation into fecal pellets by pelagic organisms.
Revised:  The settling of this clay-size sediment occurrs primarily by the formation of clay aggregates by flocculation and by their incorporation into fecal pellets by pelagic organisms.
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Original:  On 23 April 1959, the BIA confirmed that H.R.2722 , had been submitted to Congress at the request of the tribe, and would sell all remaining tribal assets, but would not effect any individual Choctaw earnings.
Revised:  On 23 April 1959, the BIA confirmed that H.R.2722 had been submitted to Congress at the request of the tribe, and would sell all remaining tribal assets, but would not effect any individual Choctaw earnings.
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Original:  But , he also stated in an interview that same year with the Lubbock Avalanche, that he thought proposing termination was another way for the government to "shirk its responsibility to a people who owned the entire continent of North America when the white man first invaded, not discovered, this country".
Revised:  But he also stated in an interview that same year with the Lubbock Avalanche, that he thought proposing termination was another way for the government to "shirk its responsibility to a people who owned the entire continent of North America when the white man first invaded, not discovered, this country".
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Original:  On 23 April 1959, the BIA confirmed that H.R.2722 had been submitted to Congress at the request of the tribe, and would sell all remaining tribal assets, but would not effect any individual Choctaw earnings.
Revised:  On 23 April 1959, the BIA confirmed that H.R.2722 had been submitted to Congress at the request of the tribe, and would sell all remaining tribal assets, but would not affect any individual Choctaw earnings.
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Original:  It also provided for retention of 1/2 of all mineral rights which could be managed by a tribal corporation.
Revised:  It also provided for retention of half of all mineral rights which could be managed by a tribal corporation.
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Original:  What Belvin envisioned was that the high unemployment and poverty which existed in the nation , would be offset by the per capita payment that tribe members would receive from liquidation of the tribal assets.
Revised:  What Belvin envisioned was that the high unemployment and poverty which existed in the nation would be offset by the per capita payment that tribe members would receive from liquidation of the tribal assets.
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Original:  He was educated at the grammar school and university of Edinburgh.
Revised:  He was educated at the grammar school and University of Edinburgh.
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Original: Reputation , legacy and awards   Cato was known for being a very humble photographer.
Revised: Reputation , legacy and awards Nevertheless, Cato was known for being a very humble photographer.
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Original:  <blockquote> Cato has made an inestimable contribution to photography in the is state as a teacher.
Revised:  Cato has made an inestimable contribution to photography in the is state as a teacher.
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Original:  <blockquote> Cato has made an inestimable contribution to photography in the is state as a teacher.
Revised:  <blockquote> Cato has made an inestimable contribution to photography in this state as a teacher.
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Original:  As an artist he has pursued an intense engagement with nature- with trees, rocks and skies.
Revised:  As an artist he has pursued an intense engagement with nature— with trees, rocks and skies.
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Original:  The social world is absent- except in the Mantracks series, where graffiti on rocks and debris on trees signify the disfiguring effects of an imported culture.
Revised:  The social world is absent— except in the Mantracks series, where graffiti on rocks and debris on trees signify the disfiguring effects of an imported culture.
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Original:  </ref> Freda Freiberg ‘The combinations of creation’.
Revised:  Freda Freiberg ‘The combinations of creation’.
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Original:  The Age Friday, April 11, 1997, Page 27 </ref></blockquote>
Revised:  The Age Friday, April 11, 1997, Page 27 
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Original:  Between 1977 and 1979 Cato contributed to the foundation of Photography Studies College and also lectured there until becoming head of the photography department at Prahran College of Advanced Education . Cato held the position of department head until his retirement in 1991.
Revised:  Between 1977 and 1979 Cato contributed to the foundation of Photography Studies College and also lectured there until becoming head of the photography department at Prahran . Cato held the position of department head until his retirement in 1991.
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