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Original: Vishnu Vasudev Narlikar FRAS (26 September 1908 — 1 April 1991) was an Indian physicist specializing in general relativity.
Revised: Vishnu Vasudev Narlikar FRAS (26 September 1908 1 April 1991) was an Indian physicist specializing in general relativity.
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Original: Vishnu Vasudev Narlikar FRAS (26 September 1908 — 1 April 1991) was an Indian physicist specializing in general relativity.
Revised: Vishnu Vasudev Narlikar FRAS (26 September 1908 – 1 April 1991) was an Indian physicist specializing in general relativity.
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Original: The clinical findings characteristic of Bartter syndrome are hypokalemia, metabolic alkalosis, and normal to low blood pressure.
Revised: The clinical findings characteristic of Bartter syndrome is hypokalemia, metabolic alkalosis, and normal to low blood pressure.
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Original:  Abuse of diuretic medications (water pills): The physician must screen urine for multiple diuretics before  diagnosis is made.
Revised:  Abuse of diuretic medications (water pills): The physician must screen urine for multiple diuretics before a diagnosis is made.
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Original:  In young babies and children, a low threshold to check serum electrolytes during periods of illness compromising fluid intake in necessary.
Revised:  In young babies and children, a low threshold to check serum electrolytes during periods of illness compromising fluid intake is necessary.
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Original:  Typically created to enhance the liveability of a structure that would otherwise be exposed to the annoyances of the outdoors, screened porches often serve to permit residents to enjoy an indoor environment outdoors.
Revised:  Typically created to enhance the liveability of a structure that would otherwise be exposed to the annoyances of the outdoors, screened porches often permit residents to enjoy an indoor environment outdoors.
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Original:  While screen porches are often attached to their houses, they are sometimes built separately in order to simplify the construction process.
Revised:  While screen porches are often attached to houses, they are sometimes built separately in order to simplify the construction process.
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Original:  Screened porches can be built in a manner similar to that of pole barns, with the screens added after the structure of the walls and the roof is completed.
Revised: Construction Screened porches can be built in a manner similar to that of pole barns, with the screens added after the structure of the walls and the roof is completed.
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Original:  "A Home of Substantial and Artistic Features", The Art World 3.6 (1918): 529-531: 530.  A man sits on his screened porch, which is filled with furniture.
Revised:  "A Home of Substantial and Artistic Features", The Art World 3.6 (1918): 529-531: 530. Uses A man sits on his screened porch, which is filled with furniture.
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Original: Cotton Association of India Board of Central Depository Services (India) Limited URL National Payment Corporation of India since August 2011 Personal life Mehta has been married to Asit Mehta since 1984 and has two sons, Aditya and Aakash.
Revised: Cotton Association of India Board of Central Depository Services (India) URL National Payment Corporation of India since August 2011 Personal life Mehta has been married to Asit Mehta since 1984 and has two sons, Aditya and Aakash.
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Original:  In august 2018, Mehta discussed her upbringing and personal interests on the WartaLab podcast.
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Original:  Aakash works has been working as a comedian for the past 9 years and is one of the people with whom the comedy revolution in India started ref name=ToI/> In August 2018, Mehta discussed her upbringing and personal interests on the VartaLab podcast.
Revised:  In August 2018, Mehta discussed her upbringing and personal interests on the VartaLab podcast.
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Original:  Mehta Investment Interrmediates Ltd.
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Original:  Mumbai Awards and achievements First woman president of Bombay stock Exchange in the 125 years of the exchange's existence Awarded for outstanding contribution in the field of banking and financial services by Ladies Wing, Indian Merchant Chamber Honored by Cosmos Bank for outstanding contribution in the field of finance in December, 2005 Awarded as outstanding Young Indian in Business Category by Indian Jaycees in 1998
Revised:  Mumbai Awards and achievements First woman president of Bombay Stock Exchange in the 125 years of the exchange's existence Awarded for outstanding contribution in the field of banking and financial services by Ladies Wing, Indian Merchant Chamber Honored by Cosmos Bank for outstanding contribution in the field of finance in December, 2005 Awarded as outstanding Young Indian in Business Category by Indian Jaycees in 1998
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Original:  Mumbai Awards and achievements First woman president of Bombay stock Exchange in the 125 years of the exchange's existence Awarded for outstanding contribution in the field of banking and financial services by Ladies Wing, Indian Merchant Chamber Honored by Cosmos Bank for outstanding contribution in the field of finance in December, 2005 Awarded as outstanding Young Indian in Business Category by Indian Jaycees in 1998
Revised:  Mumbai Awards and achievements First woman president of Bombay stock Exchange in the 125 years of the exchange's existence Awarded for outstanding contribution in the field of banking and financial services by Ladies Wing, Indian Merchant Chamber Honoured by Cosmos Bank for outstanding contribution in the field of finance in December, 2005 Awarded as outstanding Young Indian in Business Category by Indian Jaycees in 1998
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Original: Joop Ave ( December 5 , 1934 – February 5 , 2014) was the Indonesian Minister of Tourism, Post and Telecommunications (MENPARPOSTEL) between 1993 and 1998.
Revised: Joop Ave ( 5 , 1934 – February 5 , 2014) was the Indonesian Minister of Tourism, Post and Telecommunications (MENPARPOSTEL) between 1993 and 1998.
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Original: Joop Ave ( December 5 , 1934 – February 5 , 2014) was the Indonesian Minister of Tourism, Post and Telecommunications (MENPARPOSTEL) between 1993 and 1998.
Revised: Joop Ave ( December 5 , 1934 – 5 , 2014) was the Indonesian Minister of Tourism, Post and Telecommunications (MENPARPOSTEL) between 1993 and 1998.
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Original:  Ave died at Mount Elizabeth Hospital, Singapore on February 5 , 2014, after a long illness.
Revised:  Ave died at Mount Elizabeth Hospital, Singapore on 5 , 2014, after a long illness.
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Original:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 , 1993 – March 14 , 1998)
Revised:  Official postings Drafting programme and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 , 1993 – March 14 , 1998)
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Original:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 , 1993 – March 14 , 1998)
Revised:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( 17 , 1993 – March 14 , 1998)
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Original:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 , 1993 – March 14 , 1998)
Revised:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 March 1993 – March 14 , 1998)
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Original:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 , 1993 – March 14 , 1998)
Revised:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 , 1993 – 14 , 1998)
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Original:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 , 1993 – March 14 , 1998)
Revised:  Official postings Drafting program and French broadcaster RRI, Jakarta (1957) Servant Ministry of Foreign Affairs (1957) Consul General in New York (1967) Secretary I (1970) Consular (1972) Head of the presidential palace in Jakarta (1972–1978) Director General of Protocol and Consular Department of Foreign Affairs (1978–1982) Director General of Tourism (1982–1988) Minister of Tourism Development Cabinet VI ( March 17 , 1993 – March 14 March 1998)
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Original: Outcome of the first experience has a substantial and lasting effect on participants'subsequent behaviour in a decision from experience task , a phenomenon which was termed as "outcome primacy" .
Revised: 'Outcome primacy' is a psychological phenomenon that describes lasting effects on a subject's behavior based on the outcome of first experiences with a given task or decision .
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Original: 'Outcome primacy ' is a psychological phenomenon that describes lasting effects on a subject's behavior based on the outcome of first experiences with a given task or decision.
Revised: Outcome primacy is a psychological phenomenon that describes lasting effects on a subject's behavior based on the outcome of first experiences with a given task or decision.
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Original:  It was found that this outcome primacy can account for much of the Underweighting of Rare Events in Experience Based Decisions , where participants apparently underestimate small probabilities (in contrast to prospect theory where people tend to overestimate low probabilities, when lotteries are described).
Revised:  It was found that this outcome primacy can account for much of the underweighting of rare events in experience based decisions , where participants apparently underestimate small probabilities (in contrast to prospect theory where people tend to overestimate low probabilities, when lotteries are described).
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Original:  The mechanism of resetting of the initial conditions that underlies outcome primacy may thus also account for other forms of primacy 
Revised:  The mechanism of resetting of the initial conditions that underlies outcome primacy may thus also account for other forms of primacy .
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Original: The United Nations Mission in Côte d'Ivoire (, MINUCI) was a peacekeeping mission whose objective was to facilitate the implementation of the Linas-Marcoussis Agreement, as well as establishing a military component to compliment "the operations of the French and ECOWAS forces" in Côte d'Ivoire.
Revised: The United Nations Mission in Côte d'Ivoire (, MINUCI) was a peacekeeping mission whose objective was to facilitate the implementation of the Linas-Marcoussis Agreement, as well as establishing a military component to complement "the operations of the French and ECOWAS forces" in Côte d'Ivoire.
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Original:  This mission was to compliment the mission of the existing French and ECOWAS forces.
Revised:  This mission was to complement the mission of the existing French and ECOWAS forces.
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Original:  It was one of the original "Nine Cantons" that signed protection argreements with Great Britain in the late 19th century.
Revised:  It was one of the original "Nine Cantons" that signed protection agreements with Great Britain in the late 19th century.
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Original:  It later came under the sway of the Sultanate of Lahej and is now part of the Republic of Yemen. 
Revised:  It later came under the sway of the Sultanate of Lahej and is now part of the Republic of Yemen. References
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Original: In   1948, it came under the sway of the Sultanate of Lahej and is now part of the Republic of Yemen.
Revised: In In 1948, it came under the sway of the Sultanate of Lahej and is now part of the Republic of Yemen.
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Original:  In 1946, it had a population of 20,000.
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Original:  The last sultan was Sultan Awad ibn Salih Al Awlaqi . Category:History of Yemen Category:Sultanates Category:Former countries in the Middle East%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ar:سلطنة العوالق العليا ca:Alt Awlaqi hr:Sultanat Gornji Aulaki sh:Sultanat Gornji Avla
Revised:  The last sultan was Sultan Awad ibn Salih Al Awlaqi Category:History of Yemen Category:Sultanates Category:Former countries in the Middle East%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ar:سلطنة العوالق العليا ca:Alt Awlaqi hr:Sultanat Gornji Aulaki sh:Sultanat Gornji Avla
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Original:  The last sultan was Sultan Awad ibn Salih Al Awlaqi . Category:History of Yemen Category:Sultanates Category:Former countries in the Middle East%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ar:سلطنة العوالق العليا ca:Alt Awlaqi hr:Sultanat Gornji Aulaki sh:Sultanat Gornji Avla
Revised:  The last sultan was Sultan Awad ibn Salih Al Awlaqi . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% ar:سلطنة العوالق العليا ca:Alt Awlaqi hr:Sultanat Gornji Aulaki sh:Sultanat Gornji Avla
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Original: thumbnail|380px|Map of the Federation of South Arabia History The Lower Aulaqi sultans separated from the Upper Aulaqi in the 18th century.
Revised:  History The Lower Aulaqi sultans separated from the Upper Aulaqi in the 18th century.
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Original:  The last sultan was Sultan Awad ibn Salih Al Awlaqi  
Revised:  The last sultan was Sultan Awad ibn Salih Al Awlaqi . 
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Original: States of the Aden Protectorates Sultans .... - ....
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Original:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
Revised:  Farid ibn Munassar .... – 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
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Original:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
Revised:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 – September 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
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Original:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
Revised:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 – 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
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Original:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
Revised:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 December 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
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Original:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
Revised:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad December 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
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Original:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
Revised:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 – 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
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Original:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
Revised:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 – 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
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Original:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 Nov 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
Revised:  Farid ibn Munassar .... - 1862 `Abd Allah ibn Farid 1862 - Sep 1879 `Awad ibn `Abd Allah 1879 - 11 Dec 1887 `Abd Allah ibn `Awad Dec 1887 - 1935 Salih ibn `Abd Allah 1935 - 29 November 1967 `Awad ibn Salih al-`Awlaq
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Original:  In   the late 19th century, the area came under British influence and in 1890 the Upper Aulaqi Sultanate became a British protectorate.
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Original:  Petr Skrabanek and James McCormick in their book " Follies and Fallacies in Medicine " .Skrabanek P and McCormick J. Follies and Fallacies in Medicine.
Revised:  Petr Skrabanek and James McCormick in their book Follies and Fallacies in Medicine " .Skrabanek P and McCormick J. Follies and Fallacies in Medicine.
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Original:  Petr Skrabanek and James McCormick in their book " Follies and Fallacies in Medicine " .Skrabanek P and McCormick J. Follies and Fallacies in Medicine.
Revised:  Petr Skrabanek and James McCormick in their book " Follies and Fallacies in Medicine .Skrabanek P and McCormick J. Follies and Fallacies in Medicine.
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Original: The Gold Effect is the phenomenon in which a scientific (often medical) idea is developed to the status of an accepted position within a professional body or association by the social process itself of scientific conferences, committees, and consensus building, despite not being supported by conclusive evidence.
Revised: The Gold Effect is the phenomenon in which a scientific idea, particularly in medicine, is developed to the status of an accepted position within a professional body or association by the social process itself of scientific conferences, committees, and consensus building, despite not being supported by conclusive evidence.
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Original: thumbnail|pure gold powdered by aqua regia The Gold Effect is the phenomenon in which a scientific idea, particularly in medicine, is developed to the status of an accepted position within a professional body or association by the social process itself of scientific conferences, committees, and consensus building, despite not being supported by conclusive evidence.
Revised:  The Gold Effect is the phenomenon in which a scientific idea, particularly in medicine, is developed to the status of an accepted position within a professional body or association by the social process itself of scientific conferences, committees, and consensus building, despite not being supported by conclusive evidence.
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Original:  The effect was described by Professor T. Gold in 1979.
Revised:  The effect was described by Thomas Gold in 1979.
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Original:  The effect was reviewed by Drs.
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Original: Qutaibi ( ) or the Qutaibi Sheikhdom ( Arabic: مشيخة القطيبي ) was a polity in the western Aden Protectorate.
Revised: Qutaibi ( ) or the Qutaibi Sheikhdom ( ) was a polity in the western Aden Protectorate.
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Original:  In 1964, local Qutaibi tribespeople attacked  British on the Aden to Mecca caravan route which passed through the nearby town Dhala (Ad Dali').
Revised:  In 1964, local Qutaibi tribespeople attacked the British on the Aden to Mecca caravan route which passed through the nearby town Dhala (Ad Dali').
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Original: thumbnail|300px|Map of the Federation of South Arabia showing Radfan within Dhala thumbnail|300px|Radfan Hills.
Revised: thumbnail|300px|Map of the Federation of South Arabia showing Radfan within Dhala 
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Original: External links "Radfan" page at The History of British Military Conflicts since 1945 Unavailable 5 Aug.
Revised: External links "Radfan" page at The History of British Military Conflicts since 1945 Unavailable 5 August
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Original:  2018. "Tracking the 'Red Wolves of Radfan': from 1964 through 1967" Unavailable 5 Aug. 2018.
Revised:  2018. "Tracking the 'Red Wolves of Radfan': from 1964 through 1967" Unavailable 5 August 2018.
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