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Original:  Watching football in the cinema is not a brand new event though, during previous World Cups such as in 1966, film footage from the matches was broadcast in cinemas after the event, providing a way for people to see the games in colour when tv broadcasts were in black and white.
Revised:  Watching football in the cinema is not a brand new event though, during previous World Cups such as in 1966, film footage from the matches was broadcast in cinemas after the event, providing a way for people to see the games in colour when TV broadcasts were in black and white.
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Original: Obama speaking in March 2012.
Revised: President speaking in March 2012.
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Original:  However; though Messi was lively the Argentines struggled for space to trouble the Orangemen and in the end Argentina had to settle for a draw, which was enough to top Group C. Both teams denied each other space which made it hard for both sides to pass around the penalty box and get clear sights of goal.
Revised:  However; though Messi was lively the Argentines struggled for space to trouble the Orangemen and Argentina had to settle for a draw, which was enough to top Group C. Both teams denied each other space which made it hard for both sides to pass around the penalty box and get clear sights of goal.
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Original:  However; though Messi was lively the Argentines struggled for space to trouble the Orangemen and in the end Argentina had to settle for a draw, which was enough to top Group C. Both teams denied each other space which made it hard for both sides to pass around the penalty box and get clear sights of goal.
Revised:  However; though Messi was lively the Argentines struggled for space to trouble the Orangemen and in the end Argentina had to settle for a draw, which was enough to top Group C. The teams denied each other space which made it hard for both sides to pass around the penalty box and get clear sights of goal.
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Original: The Netherlands, who had rested Arjen Robben and Giovanni van Bronckhorst  had the best of the first twenty minutes play.
Revised: The Netherlands, who had rested Arjen Robben and Giovanni van Bronckhorst , had the best of the first twenty minutes play.
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Original: Argentina then had more of play though they needed a set play to trouble the opponent's defence.
Revised: Argentina then had more of play though they needed a set piece to trouble the opponent's defence.
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Original:  A Juan Riquelme freekick fizzed low into the box and Khalid Boolahrouz almost tipped into his own net but for the intervention of Edwin Van Der Sar's right post  .
Revised:  A Juan Riquelme freekick fizzed low into the box and Khalid Boolahrouz almost tipped into his own net but Edwin Van Der Sar's right post .
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Original: The teams denied each other space which made it hard for both sides to pass around the penalty box and get clear sights of goal.
Revised: The teams denied each other space which made it hard to pass around the penalty box and get clear sights of goal.
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Original: The teams denied each other space which made it hard for both sides to pass around the penalty box and get clear sights of goal.
Revised: The teams denied each other space which made it hard for both sides to pass around the penalty boxes and get clear sights of goal.
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Original:  Both keepers had to make exactly three saves during the game;
Revised:  Both keepers made three saves during the game;
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Original: A goal nearly came when Dirt Kuyt robbed a defender to the left of the penalty box and ran toward goal.
Revised: A goal nearly came when Dirk Kuyt robbed a defender to the left of the penalty box and ran toward goal.
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Original:  According to Tolerance.org, the report was submitted to the administration in December  by Mary Frances Berry, who has served as chair of the U.S. Commission on Civil Rights for nearly 25 years.
Revised:  The report was submitted to the administration in December by Mary Frances Berry, who has served as chair of the U.S. Commission on Civil Rights for nearly 25 years.
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Original: A new report says New Zealand's worst plane crash in seventeen years was caused by overcrowding . Nine people were killed when the skydiving plane crashed nose first in twenty ten.
Revised: A new report says New Zealand's worst plane crash in seventeen years was caused by overloading . Nine people were killed when the skydiving plane crashed nose first in twenty ten.
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Original:  Johnson served two terms  as a Republican after elections in 1994 and 1998.
Revised:  Johnson served two terms as governor as a Republican after elections in 1994 and 1998.
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Original:  He left the St. Louis Cardinals and signed up  the Angels during the drought.
Revised:  He left the St. Louis Cardinals and signed up with the Angels during the drought.
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Original:  It was also a first time derby win for the jockey, trainer  and owner.
Revised:  It was also a first time derby win for the jockey, trainer , and owner.
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Original:  The former prime minister of Ukraine is currently serving a seven-year prison term for abuse of office, and she began the hunger strike just as a new trial for tax evasion was  to begin.
Revised:  The former prime minister of Ukraine is currently serving a seven-year prison term for abuse of office, and she began the hunger strike just as a new trial for tax evasion was about to begin.
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Original:  Russian passenger jet crashes on Indonesian demonstration flight (1: 30 ) Indonesia's president says there will be an investigation into the Russian Sukhoi jet that crashed killing around 50.
Revised:  Russian passenger jet crashes on Indonesian demonstration flight (1: 30 ) Indonesia's president says there will be an investigation into the Russian Sukhoi jet that crashed killing around 50 people.
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Original:  The passenger jet was making a promotional sales flight at the time when it crashed into a cliff.
Revised:  The passenger jet was making a promotional sales flight at the time that it crashed into a cliff.
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Original:  Regulations since have placed a limit of six passengers on a similar plane .
Revised:  Regulations since have placed a limit of six passengers on similar planes .
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Original:  Financial support among the L-G-B-T community had been at a sixteen year low, but since the announcement  the Obama campaign says donations have been trending up.
Revised:  Financial support among the L-G-B-T community had been at a sixteen year low, but since the announcement , the Obama campaign says donations have been trending up.
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Original:  He left the St. Louis Cardinals and signed up with the Angels during the drought.
Revised:  He left the St. Louis Cardinals and signed up with the Angels during that drought.
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Original:  I'll Have Another wins 2012 Kentucky Derby ( 4:30 ) And the horse named I'll Have Another was the winner of the Kentucky Derby as he slipped past Bodemeister at the end of the race.
Revised:  I'll Have Another wins 2012 Kentucky Derby ( 4:30 ) And the horse I'll Have Another was the winner of the Kentucky Derby as he slipped past Bodemeister at the end of the race.
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Original: 85-year-old shoplifter , Reginald Hugh Donovan has been jailed for a month by the Christchurch District Court .
Revised: An 85-year man , Reginald Hugh Donovan has been jailed for a month by the Christchurch District Court .
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Original:  Mr Donovan has been previously banned from a numerous amount of stores for shoplifting .
Revised:  Mr Donovan has been previously banned from many stores for shoplifting .
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Original:  Despite having received about 50 convictions for shoplifting he continues to shoplift .
Revised:  Despite having received about 50 times for it .
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Original:  Mr Donovan is always stealing small items and he does have enough money in his pocket to pay for those items.
Revised:  Mr Donovan was found stealing small items and he does have enough money in his pocket to pay for those items.
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Original:  Mr Donovan is always stealing small items and he does have enough money in his pocket to pay for those items.
Revised:  Mr Donovan is always stealing small items and he did not have enough money in his pocket to pay for those items.
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Original: An 85-year man, Reginald Hugh Donovan has been jailed for a month by the Christchurch District Court for shoplifting .
Revised: An 85-year man, Reginald Hugh Donovan has been jailed for a centure by the Christ District Court for shoplifting .
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Original:  The decision had met  resistance from some Muslim countries opposing the Israeli group's admission, including representatives of the Organisation of the Islamic Conference, as well as Pakistan and Tunisia delegates
Revised:  The decision had met with resistance from some Muslim countries opposing the Israeli group's admission, including representatives of the Organisation of the Islamic Conference, as well as Pakistan and Tunisia delegates
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Original:  Australian Minister for Communications, Information Technology and the Arts, Senator Helen Coonan announced on Wednesday that the federal government would be spending AUD$116.6 million on a package of measures to protect Australians from inappropriate material on the Internet.
Revised: Helen Coonan Australian Minister for Communications, Information Technology and the Arts, Senator Helen Coonan announced on Wednesday that the federal government would be spending AUD$116.6 million on a package of measures to protect Australians from inappropriate material on the Internet.
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Original:  Marco Materazzi had an exceptional game with Fabio Cannavaro and was award Fifa's Man of the Match.
Revised:  Marco Materazzi had an exceptional game with Fabio Cannavaro and was awarded Fifa's Man of the Match.
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Original: The draw put Australia on four points and Croatia on two, which meant the Southern Hemisphere "Socceroos , " as the team is nicknamed, progressed to the Fifa World Cup round of sixteen.
Revised: The draw put Australia on four points and Croatia on two, allowing the Australian team, nicknamed "Socceroos , " as the team is nicknamed, progressed to the Fifa World Cup round of sixteen.
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Original: The draw put Australia on four points and Croatia on two, which meant the Southern Hemisphere "Socceroos , " as the team is nicknamed, progressed to the Fifa World Cup round of sixteen.
Revised: The draw put Australia on four points and Croatia on two, which meant the Southern Hemisphere "Socceroos " as the team is nicknamed, progressed to the Fifa World Cup round of sixteen.
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Original: The draw put Australia on four points and Croatia on two, which meant the Southern Hemisphere "Socceroos , " as the team is nicknamed, progressed to the Fifa World Cup round of sixteen.
Revised: The draw put Australia on four points and Croatia on two, which meant the Southern Hemisphere "Socceroos , " , to progress into the Fifa World Cup round of sixteen.
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Original:  The observer might struggle to know where to begin with the events witnessed by 52'000 in the Gottlieb Daimler Stadion  . Stjepan Tomas twice touched crosses into the Croatian penalty area with his hand;
Revised:  The action-packed match, which was witnessed by 52'000 in the Gottlieb Daimler Stadion . Stjepan Tomas twice touched crosses into the Croatian penalty area with his hand;
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Original:  The observer might struggle to know where to begin with the events witnessed by 52'000 in the Gottlieb Daimler Stadion  . Stjepan Tomas twice touched crosses into the Croatian penalty area with his hand;
Revised:  The observer might struggle to know where to begin with the events witnessed by 52'000 at Gottlieb Daimler Stadion . Stjepan Tomas twice touched crosses into the Croatian penalty area with his hand;
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Original:  The match made history for being the fourth time - the second time in the 2006 World Cup - three players had been shown a red card in a World Cup match.
Revised:  The match made history for being the fourth time - the second time in the 2006 World Cup ), where three players had been shown a red card in a World Cup match.
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Original:  The match made history for being the fourth time - the second time in the 2006 World Cup - three players had been shown a red card in a World Cup match.
Revised:  The match made history for being the fourth time - the second time in the 2006 World Cup - three players had been shown a red card in one match.
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Original:  Italy. English referee Graham Poll sent all three players off after they had accrued two yellow cards.
Revised:  Italy. 
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Original:   Dario Simic was first to go for a bad challenge into the side of Harry Kewell to stop an Australian breakaway.
Revised:  Dario Simic was first to go after fouling into Harry Kewell's side to stop an Australian breakaway.
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Original:   Brett Emerton walked when he stuck his arm out to prevent an attacking pass  .
Revised:  Australian Brett Emerton walked when he stuck his arm out to prevent an attacking pass .
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Original:  Another point of drama in a crazy second half saw Tim Cahill back off Niko Kovac until the edge of the Australian penalty area . Kovac took advantage of the space and hit a low shot at Australian goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac.
Revised:  Another point of drama in a crazy second half saw Tim Cahill back off Niko Kovac until the edge of the Australian penalty area , resulting in Kovac using the space for a low shot at Australian goalkeeper Zeljko Kalac.
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Original:  Kalac's egregious attempt at the save seemed almost like a dive out of the way when the ball hit a bad bounce in front of him and it went into the net.
Revised:  Kalac's egregious attempt at the save seemed almost like a dive out of the way when the ball hit a bad bounce in front of him , and going into the net.
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Original:  The game started spectacularly with arguably the best freekick goal the tournament had so far seen , scored by Darijo Srna.
Revised:  The game started spectacularly with arguably the best freekick goal the tournament seen to this point , scored by Darijo Srna.
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Original:  On 37 minutes Poll spotted the first Tomas handball and Craig Moore converted the penalty  easily down the middle.
Revised:  On 37 minutes Poll spotted the first Tomas handball and Craig Moore converted the penalty shot easily down the middle.
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Original:  Stipe Pletikosa gave plenty of space for Moore to shoot, as he had moved a metre left during Moore's run up.
Revised:  Stipe Pletikosa gave plenty of space for Moore to shoot, having committed his dive a metre left during Moore's run up.
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Original:  Marco Bresciano's cross was flicked onward by John Aloisi and Kewell on the far post made a brilliant touch to control the ball and stuck it past Pletikosa.
Revised:  Marco Bresciano's cross was flicked onward by John Aloisi , allowing Kewell on the far post made a brilliant touch to control the ball and stuck it past Pletikosa.
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Original:  Marco Bresciano's cross was flicked onward by John Aloisi and Kewell on the far post made a brilliant touch to control the ball and stuck it past Pletikosa.
Revised:  Marco Bresciano's cross was flicked onward by John Aloisi and Kewell on the far post to strike it past Pletikosa.
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Original:  Australia manager Guus Hiddink might think the match was a rather surreal affair, but the reality is he had taken Australia to the round of sixteen for the first time at the World Cup finals.
Revised:  Australia manager Guus Hiddink might think the match was a rather surreal affair, but the reality is he has progressed Australia into the round of sixteen for the first time at the World Cup finals.
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Original: Croatian defender Stjepan Tomas handballed two Australian crosses into the Croatian penalty area;
Revised: Croatian defender Stjepan Tomas handballed two Australian crosses within the Croatian penalty area;
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Original:  The match was only the fifth time in World Cup history (and the second time in the 2006 World Cup) , where three players had been shown a red card in one match.
Revised:  The match was only the fifth time in World Cup history (and the second time in the 2006 World Cup) where three players had been shown a red card in one match.
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Original:  Italy. In the mayhem of the last moments of the match,  Croatia was desperate to get a winner while Australia did not want to concede.
Revised:  Italy. There was high tensions in the last moments of the match, Croatia was desperate to get a winner while Australia did not want to concede.
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Original:  Italy. In the mayhem of the last moments of the match,  Croatia was desperate to get a winner while Australia did not want to concede.
Revised:  Italy. In the mayhem of the last moments of the match, as Croatia was desperate to get a winner while Australia did not want to concede.
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Original:  Three players had accrued two yellow cards, but in the confusion of the last few minutes of the match, English referee Graham Poll had only sent two of those players off the field.
Revised:  Three players were shown two yellow cards, but in the confusion of the last few minutes of the match, English referee Graham Poll had only sent two of those players off the field.
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Original:  Dario Simic was first to go after fouling into Harry Kewell's side to stop an Australian breakaway.
Revised:  Dario Simic was first to go after fouling Harry Kewell, halting an Australian breakaway.
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Original:  Australian Brett Emerton walked when he committed a hand-ball foul, preventing an attacking pass by Croatia.
Revised:  Australian Brett Emerton walked when he committed a handball foul, preventing an attacking pass by Croatia.
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Original:  Josip Simunic should have gone on 90 minutes when Poll flashed him a second yellow card for what may be described as a rugby tackle in a last ditch attempt to stop another Australian breakaway.
Revised:  Josip Simunic should have gone at the 90 minutes when Poll flashed him a second yellow card for what may be described as a rugby tackle in a last ditch attempt to stop another Australian breakaway.
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Original:  Josip Simunic should have gone on 90 minutes when Poll flashed him a second yellow card for what may be described as a rugby tackle in a last ditch attempt to stop another Australian breakaway.
Revised:  Josip Simunic should have gone on 90 minute mark when Poll flashed him a second yellow card for what may be described as a rugby tackle in a last ditch attempt to stop another Australian breakaway.
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Original:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
Revised:  The referee failed to realise that he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
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Original:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
Revised:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
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Original:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
Revised:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes into the game, probably due to confusion with the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
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Original:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
Revised:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, and allowed him to stay on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
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Original:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
Revised:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked a third time after the end of the game three minutes later.
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Original:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of the game three minutes later.
Revised:  The referee forgot he had booked Simunic on 61 minutes and, unlike the similarly-named Simic, stayed on until he was booked again at the end of injury time three minutes later.
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Original:  In the Fifa match report, the last booking was  officially recorded.
Revised:  In the Fifa match report, the last booking was also officially recorded.
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Original:  Kalac's egregious attempt at the save seemed almost like a dive out of the way when the ball hit a bad bounce in front of him, and going into the net.
Revised:  Kalac's egregious attempt at the save seemed almost like a dive out of the way when the ball hit a bad bounce in front of him, and it rolled into the net.
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Original:  Stipe Pletikosa gave plenty of space for Moore to shoot, having committed his dive a metre left during Moore 's run up.
Revised:  Stipe Pletikosa gave plenty of space for Moore to shoot, having committed his dive a metre left while Moore took his run up.
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Original:  Marco Bresciano's cross was flicked onward by John Aloisi, allowing Kewell on the far post to strike it past Pletikosa .
Revised:  Marco Bresciano's cross was flicked onward by John Aloisi, allowing Kewell to strike past Pletikosa near the far post .
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Original: Croatian defender Stjepan Tomas handballed two Australian crosses within the Croatian penalty area;
Revised: Croatian defender Stjepan Tomas handballed two Australian balls within the Croatian penalty area;
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Original: 50px Australia drew with Croatia 2-2 in a stunning drama-packed final Group F game in Stuttgart, Thursday.
Revised: 50px Australia drew with Croatia 2-2 in the tension-filled final Group F game in Stuttgart, Thursday.
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Original:  This was inconsistent with matches such as the clash between Serbia and Montenegro against Côte d'Ivoire (The Ivory Coast), where Milan Dudic of Serbia and Montenegro committed two fouls against Côte d'Ivoire (The Ivory Coast) the previous day ;
Revised:  This was inconsistent with matches such as the clash between Serbia and Montenegro against Côte d'Ivoire (The Ivory Coast), where Milan Dudic of Serbia and Montenegro committed two fouls against Côte d'Ivoire (The Ivory Coast) the previous day and
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Original:  both penalties were awarded on that occasion .
Revised:  both penalties were awarded on that occassion .
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