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Original: On a demonstration will be held at the Finnish Parliament against censorship, after the Finnish National Bureau of Investigation (NBI) blacklisted censorship critic Matti Nikki's site and the Finnish Internet child porn filter has been brought to public scrutiny .
Revised: On a demonstration will be held at the Finnish Parliament against censorship, after the Finnish National Bureau of Investigation (NBI) blacklisted censorship critic Matti Nikki's site and the Finnish Internet child porn filter .
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Original:  The Finnish Minister of Communication Suvi Lindén and the NBI have been the targets of severe criticism over the filtering system  .
Revised:  The Finnish Minister of Communication Suvi Lindén and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system .
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Original:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is "not a matter of freedom of speech", an uproar over Lindén's comments manifested itself in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding Minister Lindén's resignation.
Revised:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is "not a matter of freedom of speech", an uproar over Lindén's comments resulted in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding Minister Lindén's resignation.
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Original:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is "not a matter of freedom of speech", an uproar over Lindén's comments manifested itself in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding Minister Lindén's resignation.
Revised:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is "not a matter of freedom of speech", an uproar over Lindén's comments manifested itself in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding her resignation.
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Original:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn  . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist  explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
Revised:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking as child porn . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn  . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist  explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
Revised:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist , explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
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Original:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn  . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist  explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
Revised:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist explaining that the DNS based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
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Original:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn  . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist  explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
Revised:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn under the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn  . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist  explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain , although not on the princess' memorial .
Revised:  This was accompanied by a Thai civil rights group questioning the blocking of the late Thai princess' memorial site as child porn . Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist explaining that the DNS-based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn on the same domain .
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Original:  Lindén has  admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system , because it had been established by her predecessors before the change of government in early 2007.
Revised:  Lindén has later admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system , because it had been established by her predecessors before the change of government in early 2007.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Lindén has  admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system , because it had been established by her predecessors before the change of government in early 2007.
Revised:  Lindén has admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system before, as it had been established by her predecessors before the change of government in early 2007.
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Original:  In it the NBI admits that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them, but claims that it wasn't their fault but rather a side effect of the system.
Revised:  In it the NBI admitted that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them, but claims that it wasn't their fault but rather a side effect of the system.
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Original:  In it the NBI admits that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them, but claims that it wasn't their fault but rather a side effect of the system.
Revised:  In it the NBI admits that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them, but claimed that it wasn't their fault but rather a side effect of the system.
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Original:  They also note that they are planning to fix things by switching from a DNS based filter to a URL based system.
Revised:  They also noted that they are planning to fix things by switching from a DNS based filter to a URL based system.
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Original:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is " not a matter of freedom of speech " , an uproar over Lindén's comments resulted in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding her resignation.
Revised:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is not a matter of freedom of speech " , an uproar over Lindén's comments resulted in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding her resignation.
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Original:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is " not a matter of freedom of speech " , an uproar over Lindén's comments resulted in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding her resignation.
Revised:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is " not a matter of freedom of speech , an uproar over Lindén's comments resulted in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding her resignation.
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Original: On March 4, 2008 a demonstration against censorship is  to be held at the Finnish Parliament, a part of the continuing controversy over the Finnish Internet child porn filter.
Revised: On March 4, 2008 a demonstration against censorship is planned to be held at the Finnish Parliament, a part of the continuing controversy over the Finnish Internet child porn filter.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The controversy rose after the Finnish National Bureau of Investigation (NBI) blacklisted censorship critic Matti Nikki's site.
Revised:  The controversy arose after the Finnish National Bureau of Investigation (NBI) blacklisted censorship critic Matti Nikki's site.
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Original:  Effi's response to the NBI's statement was that the issue with censorship is not technical but that it has no place in an open, democratic society  
Revised:  Effi's response to the NBI's statement was that the issue with censorship is not technical but that it has no place in an open, democratic society . 
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Original: On March 4, 2008 a demonstration against censorship is planned to be held at the Finnish Parliament, a part of the continuing controversy over the Finnish Internet child porn filter.
Revised: On March 4, 2008 a demonstration against censorship is planned to be held at the Finnish Parliament, part of the continuing controversy over the Finnish Internet child porn filter.
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Original:  The organizers of the demonstration expect at least a couple of hundred participants, and representatives of the digital rights organization Electronic Frontier Finland (Effi) and several political parties will also be present.
Revised:  The organizers of the demonstration expect at least two-hundred participants, with representatives of the digital rights organization Electronic Frontier Finland (Effi) and several political parties will also be present.
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Original:  The organizers of the demonstration expect at least a couple of hundred participants, and representatives of the digital rights organization Electronic Frontier Finland (Effi) and several political parties will also be present.
Revised:  The organizers of the demonstration expect at least a couple of hundred participants, and representatives of the digital rights organization Electronic Frontier Finland (Effi) and several political parties will also present.
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Original:  The Finnish Minister of Communication  Suvi Lindén  and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
Revised:  The Finnish Minister of Communication , Suvi Lindén and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
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Original:  The Finnish Minister of Communication  Suvi Lindén  and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
Revised:  The Finnish Minister of Communication Suvi Lindén , and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
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Original:  The Finnish Minister of Communication  Suvi Lindén  and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
Revised:  The Finnish Minister of Communication Suvi Lindén and the NBI have been severely criticized over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The Finnish Minister of Communication  Suvi Lindén  and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
Revised:  The Finnish Minister of Communication Suvi Lindén and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system , which has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The Finnish Minister of Communication  Suvi Lindén  and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy public scrutiny in the media.
Revised:  The Finnish Minister of Communication Suvi Lindén and the NBI have been criticized severely over the filtering system over the past few weeks, and the system has been under heavy scrutiny by the media.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is not a matter of freedom of speech, an uproar over Lindén's comments resulted in a petition signed by over 12,000 people demanding her resignation.
Revised:  After stating that she will not tolerate discussion criticizing the filtering system, as the situation is not a matter of freedom of speech, a petition was signed by over 12,000 people demanding her resignation.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist, explaining that the DNS based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn under the same domain .
Revised:  Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist, explaining that the DNS based system blocks only whole sites , and that there was child porn under the same domain .
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist, explaining that the DNS based system blocks only whole sites and there was child porn under the same domain .
Revised:  Eventually the NBI removed the memorial site from the blacklist, explaining that the DNS based system blocks only whole sites and there was child pornography site under the same domain .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Lindén has later admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system before , as it had been established by her predecessors  before the change of government in early 2007.
Revised:  Lindén later admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system before , as it had been established by her predecessors before the change of government in early 2007.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Lindén has later admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system before , as it had been established by her predecessors  before the change of government in early 2007.
Revised:  Lindén has later admitted that she did not know the details of the filtering system before , as it had been established by her predecessors before the change of government in early 2007.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Lindén has later admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system before , as it had been established by her predecessors  before the change of government in early 2007.
Revised:  Lindén has later admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system , as it had been established by her predecessors before the change of government in early 2007.
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Original:  Lindén has later admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system before , as it had been established by her predecessors  before the change of government in early 2007.
Revised:  Lindén has later admitted that she didn't really know of the details of the filtering system before , as it had been established by her predecessors , before the change of government in early 2007.
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Original:  She has nevertheless defended the system by appealing to the protection of children, but also admitted that there are problems in Finland and other countries with similar systems.
Revised:  She has nevertheless defended the system , citing the protection of children, but also admitted that there are problems in Finland and other countries with similar systems.
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Original:  She has nevertheless defended the system by appealing to the protection of children, but also admitted that there are problems in Finland and other countries with similar systems.
Revised:  She has nevertheless defended the system by appealing to the protection of children, but admitted that there are problems in Finland and other countries with similar systems.
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Original:  She has nevertheless defended the system by appealing to the protection of children, but also admitted that there are problems in Finland and other countries with similar systems.
Revised:  She has nevertheless defended the system by appealing to the protection of children, but also admitted that there are problems with the Finnish system, and in other countries with similar systems.
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Original:  After Lindén promised to check the situation with the NBI , they have published a statement explaining their actions  .
Revised:  The NBI have published a statement explaining their actions .
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Original:  In it the NBI admitted that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them , but claimed that it wasn't their faultbut rather a side effect of the system.
Revised:  In it the NBI stated that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them , but claimed that it wasn't their faultbut rather a side effect of the system.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In it the NBI admitted that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them , but claimed that it wasn't their faultbut rather a side effect of the system.
Revised:  In it the NBI admitted that there are filtered sites do not contain any child pornography , but claimed that it wasn't their faultbut rather a side effect of the system.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In it the NBI admitted that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them , but claimed that it wasn't their faultbut rather a side effect of the system.
Revised:  In it the NBI admitted that there are some filtered sites which don't have any child porn on them , but claimed that it was not their fault, rather a side effect of the system.
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Original:  They also noted that they are planning to fix things by switching from a DNS based filter to a URL based system.
Revised:  They also noted that they are planning to address this issue by switching from a DNS based filter to a URL based system.
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Original:  However, according to a prominent Finnish expert of filtering technology, the planned URL filtering would cost least two million euros.
Revised:  According to a prominent Finnish expert of filtering technology, the planned URL filtering would cost least two million euros.
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Original:  At the same time it was reported that the government had cut back funds for work against child abuse, causing further uproar.
Revised:  At the same time that the government had cut back funds for work against child abuse, causing further uproar.
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Original:  At the same time it was reported that the government had cut back funds for work against child abuse, causing further uproar.
Revised:  At the same time it was reported that the government cut back funds for work against child abuse, causing further uproar.
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Original:  The argument for  filtering is that there is a large amount of child porn on the Internet, most of it based on servers in countries where there the authorities are indifferent to the issue.
Revised:  The argument for the filtering is that there is a large amount of child porn on the Internet, most of it based on servers in countries where there the authorities are indifferent to the issue.
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Original:  The argument for  filtering is that there is a large amount of child porn on the Internet, most of it based on servers in countries where there the authorities are indifferent to the issue.
Revised:  The argument for filtering is that there is a large amount of child pornography on the Internet, most of it based on servers in countries where there the authorities are indifferent to the issue.
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Original:  The general opinion after analysis by multiple people is that the list of at least 1,700 sites contains a handful of actual child porn sites, most of whichare not located in Western countries.
Revised:  The general opinion after analysis by multiple people is that the list of at least 1,700 sites contains a handful of actual child pornographic sites, most of whichare not located in Western countries.
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Original:  The general opinion after analysis by multiple people is that the list of at least 1,700 sites contains a handful of actual child porn sites, most of whichare not located in Western countries.
Revised:  The general opinion after analysis by multiple people is that the list of at least 1,700 sites contains a handful of actual child porn sites, most of which are not located in Western countries.
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Original:  However, most sites in the list are located in countries like the U.S., the Netherlands, Great Britain and Germany, and very few of those contain even questionable or borderline material.
Revised:  However, some sites in the list are located in countries like the U.S., the Netherlands, Great Britain and Germany, and very few of those contain even questionable or borderline material.
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Original:  The result was that some of the sites have illegal child pornography  and that four of those are also blocked in the Netherlands by their equivalent filtering system.
Revised:  She concluded that some of the sites have illegal child pornography and that four of those are also blocked in the Netherlands by their equivalent filtering system.
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Original:  The result was that some of the sites have illegal child pornography  and that four of those are also blocked in the Netherlands by their equivalent filtering system.
Revised:  The result was that some of the sites have illegal child pornography , and that four of those are also blocked in the Netherlands by their equivalent filtering system.
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Original:  About half of the 40 didn't seem to contain any illegal material.
Revised:  She estimated that about half of the 40 didn't seem to contain any illegal material.
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Original:  About half of the 40 didn't seem to contain any illegal material.
Revised:  About half of the 40 did not contain any illegal material.
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Original:  However, some sites in the list are located in countries like the U.S. , the Netherlands, Great Britain and Germany, and very few of those contain even questionable or borderline material.
Revised:  However, some sites in the list are located in countries like the United States , the Netherlands, Great Britain and Germany, and very few of those contain even questionable or borderline material.
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Original:  However, some sites in the list are located in countries like the U.S. , the Netherlands, Great Britain and Germany, and very few of those contain even questionable or borderline material.
Revised:  However, some sites in the list are located in countries like the U.S. , the Netherlands, United Kingdom and Germany, and very few of those contain even questionable or borderline material.
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Original: Hugo Chavez FARC troops.
Revised: Hugo Chávez FARC troops.
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