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Original:  These talks failed and the coalition was desolved .
Revised:  These talks failed and the coalition was dissolved .
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Original: Prime Minister Geir Haarde , of the conservative Independence Party , had begun talks with coalition partner  Social Democratic Alliance in the run up to an early general election planned for May.
Revised: Prime Minister Geir Haarde of the conservative Independence Party , had begun talks with coalition partner Social Democratic Alliance in the run up to an early general election planned for May.
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Original: Prime Minister Geir Haarde , of the conservative Independence Party , had begun talks with coalition partner  Social Democratic Alliance in the run up to an early general election planned for May.
Revised: Prime Minister Geir Haarde , of the conservative Independence Party had begun talks with coalition partner Social Democratic Alliance in the run up to an early general election planned for May.
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Original: Prime Minister Geir Haarde , of the conservative Independence Party , had begun talks with coalition partner  Social Democratic Alliance in the run up to an early general election planned for May.
Revised: Prime Minister Geir Haarde , of the conservative Independence Party , had begun talks with coalition partner Social Democratic Alliance in the run-up to an early general election planned for May.
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Original:  The BBC reports that the centre-left Social Democrats will  try to build a coalition with opposition parties .
Revised:  The centre-left Social Democrats will try to build a coalition with opposition parties .
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Original:  The Independence Party  has 25 of the 63 seats in the country's unicameral Althing (parliament) .
Revised:  The Independence Party currently has 25 of the 63 seats in the country's unicameral Althing (parliament) .
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Original:  The Social Democratic Alliance hold 18 seats.
Revised:  The Social Democratic Alliance holds 18 seats.
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Original:   The coalition was formed after the election in 2007, but became uneasy after the  financial crisis caused Iceland to nationalise its banking system and ask for help from the International Monetary Fund, with Social Democrats seeking closer ties with the European Union and the sacking of the head of the central bank.
Revised:  The coalition was formed after the election in 2007, but became uneasy after the global financial crisis caused Iceland to nationalise its banking system and ask for help from the International Monetary Fund, with Social Democrats seeking closer ties with the European Union and the sacking of the head of the central bank.
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Original:   The coalition was formed after the election in 2007, but became uneasy after the  financial crisis caused Iceland to nationalise its banking system and ask for help from the International Monetary Fund, with Social Democrats seeking closer ties with the European Union and the sacking of the head of the central bank.
Revised:  The coalition was formed after the election in 2007, but became uneasy after the financial crisis caused Iceland to nationalise its banking system and ask for help from the International Monetary Fund, with Social Democrats seeking closer ties with the European Union and the replacement of the head of the central bank.
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Original:  The UK's "flag carrier " airline, British Airways (BA) has warned the markets that it will post a full year loss of up to £150 million.
Revised:  The United Kingdom's flag carrier airline, British Airways (BA) has warned the markets that it will post a full year loss of up to £150 million.
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Original:  McDonald’s net income fell 23\% from $1.27bn to $ 985.4 m . This happened in the same quarter that they slashed operating costs by 8\%.
Revised:  McDonald’s net income fell 23\% from $1.27bn to $ 985.4 million . This happened in the same quarter that they slashed operating costs by 8\%.
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Original:  In November 2008  McDonald’s opened up there 1000th Chinese store
Revised:  In November 2008 , McDonald’s opened up there 1000th Chinese store
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Original:  In November 2008  McDonald’s opened up there 1000th Chinese store
Revised:  In November 2008 McDonald’s opened up their 1000th Chinese store
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Original: Image:British Refurbished Stand Alone McDonalds.jpg|A McDonald's store in the United Kingdom]] American fast food chain McDonald’s are set to open up 1000 more stores threw out the year.
Revised: Image:British Refurbished Stand Alone McDonalds.jpg|A McDonald's store in the United Kingdom]] American fast food chain McDonald’s is set to open up 1000 more stores threw out the year.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chief executive Jim Skinner has said the company is to invest 2.1 bn into the opening of the new restaurants.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Chief executive Jim Skinner has said the company is to invest 2.1 billion into the opening of the new restaurants.
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Original:  Even though the U.S had weak sales other continents including the Middle East and Africa continued to bring in raising sales .
Revised:  Even though the U.S had weak sales other continents including the Middle East and Africa , saw even higher growth .
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Original:  The chain currently has more than 31,000 store around the globe, and counting.
Revised:  The chain currently has more than 31,000 stores around the globe, and counting.
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Original:  Sales  the US rose 5\% and other continents, including the Middle East and Africa, saw even higher growth.
Revised:  Sales in the US rose 5\% and other continents, including the Middle East and Africa, saw even higher growth.
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Original: On January 15th, a U.S raid in the Afghan province of Laghman killed 15 people.
Revised: On January 15, a United States military strike in the Afghan province of Laghman killed 15 people.
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Original:  The U.S claims they were all militants, however on Saturday village elders contradicted that claim saying that the casualties were all civilian .
Revised:  The U.S claims they were all militants, however on Saturday village elders contradicted that claim saying that the casualties were all civilians .
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Original:  In a statement the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant  , " The operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces ," a US military statement said ."
Revised:  In a statement the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant saying , " The operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces ," a US military statement said ."
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Original:  In a statement the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant  , " The operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces ," a US military statement said ."
Revised:  In a statement the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant , " the operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces ," a US military statement said ."
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Original:  In a statement the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant  , " The operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces ," a US military statement said ."
Revised:  In a statement the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant , " The operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces ."
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Original:   As coalition forces approached the wanted militant's compound, several groups of armed militants exited their homes and began manoeuvering on the force . "  Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said, adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent serach of the houses in the compound.
Revised:  " As coalition forces approached the wanted militant's compound, several groups of armed militants exited their homes and began manoeuvering on the force . " Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said, adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent serach of the houses in the compound.
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Original:   As coalition forces approached the wanted militant's compound, several groups of armed militants exited their homes and began manoeuvering on the force . "  Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said, adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent serach of the houses in the compound.
Revised:  As coalition forces approached the wanted militant's compound, several groups of armed militants exited their homes and began manoeuvering on the force , " Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said, adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent serach of the houses in the compound.
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Original:   As coalition forces approached the wanted militant's compound, several groups of armed militants exited their homes and began manoeuvering on the force . "  Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said, adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent serach of the houses in the compound.
Revised:  As coalition forces approached the wanted militant's compound, several groups of armed militants exited their homes and began manoeuvering on the force . " added the statement. Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said, adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent serach of the houses in the compound.
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Original:   As coalition forces approached the wanted militant's compound, several groups of armed militants exited their homes and began manoeuvering on the force . "  Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said, adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent serach of the houses in the compound.
Revised:  As coalition forces approached the wanted militant's compound, several groups of armed militants exited their homes and began manoeuvering on the force . " Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said, adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent search of the houses in the compound.
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Original: However, this version of events was contested when it was found that three of the dead were children and the other to were woman .
Revised: However, this version of events was contested when it was found that three of the dead were children and the other to were women .
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Original:  Thousands of angered Afghanis took to the streets streets in the Afghan city of Mihtarlam, chanting "death to Americans".
Revised:  Thousands of angered Afghanis took to the streets in the Afghan city of Mihtarlam, chanting "death to Americans".
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Original:  On January 15, a United States military strike in the Afghan province of Laghman killed 15 people .
Revised: Map of Laghman Province in Afghanistan. On January 15, a United States military strike in the Afghan province of Laghman killed 15 people .
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Original:  The U.S claims they were all militants , however on Saturdayvillage elders contradicted that claim saying that the casualties were all civilians.
Revised:  The U.S claims only militants were killed, but on Saturday, village elders disputed that claim with the allegation that the casualties were all civilians.
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Original:  In a statement  the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant  saying, "the operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces."
Revised:  In a statement , the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant saying, "the operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces."
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Original:  In a statement  the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant  saying, "the operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces."
Revised:  In a statement the U.S government described what they believed to be a successful mission against a wanted militant , saying, "the operation in Mehtar Lam District, approximately 60km northeast of Kabul City, targeted a Taliban commander believed to conduct terrorist activities throughout the Kabul, Laghman and Kapisa provinces."
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Original:  Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement said , adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent search of the houses in the compound.
Revised:  Nine fighters were killed by small-arms fire and four killed by "precision close-air support", the statement continued , adding that two other fighters were killed during a subsequent search of the houses in the compound.
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Original:   However, this version of events was contested when it was found that three of the dead were children and another two were women . President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan condemned the incident, and said that bombing civilians , "will not bear any progress in the war against terrorism".
Revised:  However, this version of events was contested when it was found that three of the dead were children and another two were women . President Hamid Karzai of Afghanistan condemned the incident, and said that bombing civilians "will not bear any progress in the war against terrorism".
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Original:  U.S president Barack Obama has vowed to put more U.S troops in Afghanistan, ignoring a request from president Karzai that there be a timetable for U.S withdrawal from the country 
Revised:  U.S President Barack Obama has vowed to put more U.S troops in Afghanistan, ignoring a request from president Karzai that there be a timetable for U.S withdrawal from the country 
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Original:  U.S president Barack Obama has vowed to put more U.S troops in Afghanistan, ignoring a request from president Karzai that there be a timetable for U.S withdrawal from the country 
Revised:  U.S president Barack Obama has vowed to put more U.S troops in Afghanistan, ignoring a request from President Karzai that there be a timetable for U.S withdrawal from the country 
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Original: The unidentified woman, who had the children by Caesarean section, is only the second recorded woman to deliver to live octuplets in the United States.
Revised: The unidentified woman, who had the children by Caesarean section, is only the second recorded woman to deliver live octuplets in the United States.
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Original:  Staff at the Center had expected seven babies and were surprised when an eighth was found after the rest were delivered.
Revised:  Staff at the center had expected seven babies and were surprised when an eighth was found after the rest were delivered.
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Original:  Their smallest child — born at 11oz — died of respiritory failure aged one week.
Revised:  Their smallest child — born at 11oz — died of respiratory failure at age one week.
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Original:  The remaining seven children have just  turned ten years old
Revised:  The remaining seven children have just recently turned ten years old
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Original:  In 2007, SLM previously filed a $5 billion lawsuit where it claimed co-ownership of all of Stan Lee's creations for Marvel.
Revised:  In 2007, SLM previously filed a $5 billion lawsuit where it claimed co-ownership of all of Stan Lee's creations for 
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Original: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad  for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
Revised: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
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Original: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad  for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
Revised: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
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Original: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad  for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
Revised: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
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Original: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad  for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
Revised: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
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Original: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad  for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
Revised: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, and Lee's wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
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Original: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad  for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
Revised: [[File:Stantheman.jpg|Stanley Martin Lieber]] Martin Garbus, Esq. has filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday , against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer , Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, age 86, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, his wife and former Marvel Studios head, Avi Arad . The suit is for more than $750 (£528m) million — about half of the estimated proceeds from Marvel’s movies.
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Original:  In 2007, SLM previously filed a $ 5 billion lawsuit where it claimed co-ownership of all of Stan Lee's creations for Marvel.
Revised:  In 2007, SLM previously filed a $ 5 billion lawsuit in which it claimed co-ownership of all of Stan Lee's creations for Marvel.
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Original: __NOTOC__ Stan Lee in 2007 Martin Garbus, Esq. filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, and Lee's wife and former Marvel Studios head , Avi Arad.
Revised: __NOTOC__ Stan Lee in 2007 Martin Garbus, Esq. filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, and former Marvel Studios head , Avi Arad.
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Original: __NOTOC__ Stan Lee in 2007 Martin Garbus, Esq. filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, and Lee's wife and former Marvel Studios head , Avi Arad.
Revised: __NOTOC__ Stan Lee in 2007 Martin Garbus, Esq. filed a shareholder derivative suit Monday against Marvel Entertainment and its Chief Executive Officer Isaac Perlmutter, as well as Stan Lee, the creator of Marvel superhero characters, and Lee's wife and former Marvel Studios head Avi Arad.
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