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Original:  one on August 5 , 1853 and another on August 11 , 1853 which came dangerously close to the Oba's palace but was rebuffed just in time by a burst of fire from the British naval force under Commander Phillips of HMS Polyphemus.
Revised:  one on August 5 August 1853 and another on August 11 , 1853 which came dangerously close to the Oba's palace but was rebuffed just in time by a burst of fire from the British naval force under Commander Phillips of HMS Polyphemus.
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Original:  one on August 5 , 1853 and another on August 11 , 1853 which came dangerously close to the Oba's palace but was rebuffed just in time by a burst of fire from the British naval force under Commander Phillips of HMS Polyphemus.
Revised:  one on August 5 , 1853 and another on 11 , 1853 which came dangerously close to the Oba's palace but was rebuffed just in time by a burst of fire from the British naval force under Commander Phillips of HMS Polyphemus.
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Original:  After much negotiation, Kosoko eventually signed the Treaty of Epe on September 28 , 1854 with Consul Benjamin Campbell, agreeing not to make any claims to Lagos or to endanger commerce in Lagos.
Revised:  After much negotiation, Kosoko eventually signed the Treaty of Epe on 28 , 1854 with Consul Benjamin Campbell, agreeing not to make any claims to Lagos or to endanger commerce in Lagos.
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Original:  Ecofeminism Organization Journal, 2001. UR 
Revised:  Ecofeminism Organization Journal, 2001. URL 
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Original:  Whereas ecofeminism has traditionally focused on studying issues such as how the exploitation of women and women's bodies is congruent with the exploitation of nature, ecomasculinity studies men's role in this process and also looks for ways to enable men to take on roles that would challenge exploitative thought patterns and practices.
Revised:  While ecofeminism has traditionally focused on studying issues such as how the exploitation of women and women's bodies is congruent with the exploitation of nature, ecomasculinity studies men's role in this process and also looks for ways to enable men to take on roles that would challenge exploitative thought patterns and practices.
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Original:  Whereas ecofeminism has traditionally focused on studying issues such as how the exploitation of women and women's bodies is congruent with the exploitation of nature, ecomasculinity studies men's role in this process and also looks for ways to enable men to take on roles that would challenge exploitative thought patterns and practices.
Revised:  Whereas ecofeminism has traditionally focused on studying issues such as how the exploitation of women and women's bodies is congruent with the exploitation of nature, ecomasculinity studies men's role in this process and looks for ways to enable men to take on roles that would challenge exploitative thought patterns and practices.
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Original: Sadanand Rege सदानंद रेगे (June 21, 1923 - September 21, 1982) was a Marathi poet, playwright, short-story writer, translator and painter.
Revised: Sadanand Rege सदानंद रेगे (June 21, 1923 – September 21, 1982) was a Marathi poet, playwright, short-story writer, translator and painter.
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Original:  Short Story Collections Jeevanachi Vastre, 1952 Kalokhachi Pise, 1954 Chandane, 1959 Chandra Savali Korato, 1963 Masa aani Itar Vilakshan Katha, 1965 Sadanand Rege: Nivadak Katha: Sampadak: Arvind Gokhale, 1988
Revised:  Short story collections Jeevanachi Vastre, 1952 Kalokhachi Pise, 1954 Chandane, 1959 Chandra Savali Korato, 1963 Masa aani Itar Vilakshan Katha, 1965 Sadanand Rege: Nivadak Katha: Sampadak: Arvind Gokhale, 1988
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Original:  In 2001, Shahim was commander of the 37th Brigade of Commandos and dealt often with foreign forces. aye nane tu kosmadar ra gaim , bachy tu rameen shamal da paltalk khar ware daw mezana az belgium tu az kose shehnaz meshene. alwad e paparakun , fiker meknum ya tu az kun dewana asti ya bachy tu az dega padar paida shuda.chocy massod kosmodr.
Revised:  In 2001, Shahim was commander of the 37th Brigade of Commandos and dealt often with foreign forces. 
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Original: Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition URL Later in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh, Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
Revised: Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition India. Later in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh, Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
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Original: Mirza Abdul Baqi Baig or M. A. B. Beg (September 20 , 1934– January 30 , 1990) was Pakistani-American theoretical physicist who contributions were vital in string theory and particle physics.
Revised: Mirza Abdul Baqi Bég ( 20 , 1934– January 30 , 1990) was Pakistani-American theoretical physicist who contributions were vital in string theory and particle physics.
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Original: Mirza Abdul Baqi Baig or M. A. B. Beg (September 20 , 1934– January 30 , 1990) was Pakistani-American theoretical physicist who contributions were vital in string theory and particle physics.
Revised: Mirza Abdul Baqi Baig or M. A. B. Beg (September 20 , 1934– 30 , 1990) was Pakistani-American theoretical physicist who contributions were vital in string theory and particle physics.
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Original:  URL Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition India . Later in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh , Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
Revised:  URL Biography Bég was born in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition India . Later in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh , Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
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Original:  URL Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition India . Later in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh , Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
Revised:  URL Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in Etawah, Uttar Pradesh in India on 20 September 1934. Following the partition of India in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh , Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
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Original:  URL Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition India . Later in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh , Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
Revised:  URL Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition India . Later in 1947, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh , Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
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Original:  URL Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition India . Later in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan and settled in Hyderabad, where he did his Bachelors (Honors) in Physics in 1951 from the University of Sindh , Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
Revised:  URL Biography Beg was born on September the 20th, 1934 in a place called Etawah in the state of U.P. in the pre-partition India . Later in 1947, following the independence of Pakistan, his family migrated to Pakistan , only to be settled in Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan. After finishing school in Karachi, Bég went to attend the University of Sindh , Jamshoro, one of the oldest universities of Pakistan.
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Original:   References Category:20th-century American physicists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:University of Sindh alumni Category:University of Karachi alumni Category:University of Pittsburgh alumni Category:1934 births Category:1990 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:American scientists of Pakistani desce
Revised:  Notes References Category:20th-century American physicists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:University of Sindh alumni Category:University of Karachi alumni Category:University of Pittsburgh alumni Category:1934 births Category:1990 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:American scientists of Pakistani desce
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Original:   References Category:20th-century American physicists Category:Pakistani physicists Category:University of Sindh alumni Category:University of Karachi alumni Category:University of Pittsburgh alumni Category:1934 births Category:1990 deaths Category:Muhajir people Category:Pakistani emigrants to the United States Category:American scientists of Pakistani desce
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Original:  After finishing school in Karachi, Bég went to attend the University of Sindh in Hyderabad, graduated with BSc with honors in Physics in 1951. . Upon returning to Karachi, Bég attended the Karachi University where he graduated with his MSc in Mathematics with area focused on the applied application in 1954.
Revised:  After finishing school in Karachi, Bég went to attend the University of Sindh in Hyderabad, graduated with BSc with honors in Physics in 1951. Upon returning to Karachi, Bég attended the Karachi University where he graduated with his MSc in Mathematics with area focused on the applied application in 1954.
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Original:  He is credited mainly with his role in laying down the theoretical foundations of the quark theory as well as development of the SU(6) URL B B B B B |  B B B B B B B B B
Revised:  He is credited mainly with his role in laying down the theoretical foundations of the quark theory as well as development of the SU(6) URL B B B B B | B B B B B B B B B B
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Original: Born in Harrisburg, Illinois , Weaver graduated from Urbana High School in Urbana, Illinois.
Revised: Born in Harrisburg, Illinois . He graduated from Urbana High School in Urbana, Illinois.
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Original:  Weaver served as mayor of Urbana, Illinois from 1957 to 1969.
Revised:  Weaver served as mayor of Urbana, Illinois from 1957 and served until 1969.
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Original:  He served in the United States Army Air Coprs in the Pacific theater during World War II.
Revised:  He served in the United States Army Air Corps in the Pacific theater during World War II.
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Original:  He then served in the Illinois House of Representatives from 1969 to 1971 and was a Republican.
Revised:  He then served in the Illinois House of Representatives from 1969 to 1971.
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Original: People from Urbana, Illinois Category:Military personnel from Illinois Category:United States Army Air Forces soldiers Category:Michigan State University alumni Category:University of Illinois alumni Category:Funeral directors Category:Illinois Republicans Category:Mayors of places in Illinois Category:Members of the Illinois House of Representatives Category:Illinois state senators Category:Deaths from cancer in Illinois Category:20th-century American politicia
Revised: People from Urbana, Illinois Category:Military personnel from Illinois Category:United States Army Air Forces soldiers Category:Michigan State University alumni Category:University of Illinois alumni Category:Funeral directors Category:Illinois Republicans Category:Mayors of places in Illinois Category:Members of the Illinois House of Representatives Category:Illinois state senators Category:Deaths from cancer in Illinois Category:20th-century American politician
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Original: Later he resigned from Kairali TV and joined as assistant director in the Mohanlal film Red Chillies, directed by Shaji Kailas .10 :30 am Local Call(2013) was the first movie that penned by Arun.
Revised: Later he resigned from Kairali TV and joined as assistant director in the Mohanlal film Red Chillies, directed by Shaji Kailas . 10 :30 am Local Call(2013) was the first movie that penned by Arun.
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Original:  also known as  Throne of Bilqis  .
Revised:  also known as " Throne of Bilqis .
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Original:  also known as  Throne of Bilqis  .
Revised:  also known as Throne of Bilqis " .
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Original: Temple of Barran ( Arabic: معبد بران ) is a Sabaean temple near Ma'rib, Yemen;
Revised: Temple of Barran ( ) is a Sabaean temple near Ma'rib, Yemen;
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Original:  The Throne of Queen Bilquis: Ancient History Comes Alive It was partly excavated by Wendell Phillips' expedition of 1951-2.
Revised:  It was partly excavated by Wendell Phillips' expedition of 1951-2.
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Original:  The temple is located to the west of Awwam temple, dedicated also to the god Almaqah.
Revised:  The temple is located to the west of Awwam temple, also dedicated to the god Almaqah.
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Original:  The temple is considered to be the largest  temple in Yemen before Islam .
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Original: Temple of Barran () is a Sabaean temple near Marib, Yemen;
Revised: Barran Temple () is a Sabaean temple near Marib, Yemen;
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Original:  Background The temple is located to the west of Awwam temple , also dedicated to the god Almaqah.
Revised:  Background The temple is located to the west of the Temple of Awwam , also dedicated to the god Almaqah.
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Original:  Previously only five columns were known to exist, until 1988 excavations, when remains of another pillar were discovered.
Revised:  Until the 1988 excavations only five columns were known to exist, until 1988 excavations, when remains of another pillar were discovered.
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Original:  Previously only five columns were known to exist, until 1988 excavations, when remains of another pillar were discovered.
Revised:  Previously only five columns were known to exist, when remains of another pillar were discovered.
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Original:  Previously only five columns were known to exist, until 1988 excavations, when remains of another pillar were discovered.
Revised:  Previously only five columns were known to exist, until 1988 excavations, when remains of another were discovered.
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Original: Aeronautics Category:Aeronautics organizations Category:Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental Aircraft Association Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigation Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
Revised: Aeronautics Category:Aeronautics organizations Category:Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental Aircraft Association Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigation Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
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Original: Aeronautics Category: Aeronautics organizations Category: Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental Aircraft Association Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigation Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
Revised: Aeronautics Category: Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental Aircraft Association Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigation Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
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Original:  115 km. Ålesund Vigra, Norway to Wurzburg , Germany;
Revised:  115 km. Ålesund Vigra, Norway to Würzburg , Germany;
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Original:  1450 km. Wurzburg to Friedrichshafen, Germany;
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Original: Dassault Group aircraft Category:Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental Aircraft Association Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigation Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
Revised: Dassault Group aircraft Category:Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigation Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
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Original: United States Air Force appointments Category:Dassault Group aircraft Category:Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category: Circumnavigation Category: Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
Revised: United States Air Force appointments Category:Dassault Group aircraft Category:Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category: Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
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Original: Anti-submarine warfare Category: United States Air Force appointments Category: Dassault Group aircraft Category:Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
Revised: Anti-submarine warfare Category: Dassault Group aircraft Category:Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category:McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
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Original: CASA aircraft Category:Lockheed P-3 Orion Category: Anti-submarine warfare Category: Dassault Group aircraft Category: Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category: McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
Revised: CASA aircraft Category:Lockheed P-3 Orion Category: Anti-submarine warfare Category: Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category: McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
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Original: CASA aircraft Category:Lockheed P-3 Orion Category: Anti-submarine warfare Category: Dassault Group aircraft Category: Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category: McDonnell Douglas DC-9 Category:McDonnell Douglas MD-80 Category:Airbus A340 Category:Airbus A320 family Category:Experimental aircraft Category:Van's aircraft Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
Revised: CASA aircraft Category:Lockheed P-3 Orion Category: Anti-submarine warfare Category: Dassault Group aircraft Category: Aeronautics Category:Aviation record holders Category: Experimental aircraft Category:Circumnavigators of the globe Category:Air sports Category:Climate change and the environment Category:Living people Category:Commercial aviato
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Original: 200px|right He Chengjun () (June 20, 1882 - May 7, 1961) was a Kuomintang politician and military officer of the Republic of China.
Revised: 200px|right He Chengjun () (June 20, 1882 – May 7, 1961) was a Kuomintang politician and military officer of the Republic of China.
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Original: Zhao Zhengping () ( 1878-1945 ) was a politician of the Republic of China.
Revised: Zhao Zhengping () ( 1878–1945 ) was a politician of the Republic of China.
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Original:  After the downfall of Wang's government in August 1945, he committed suicide in Zhenhai District, Ningbo, Zhejiang after being charged with the crime of hanjian (treason) .
Revised:  After the downfall of Wang's government in August 1945, he committed suicide in Zhenhai District, Ningbo, Zhejiang after being charged with the crime of hanjian .
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Original: 200px|right Zhao Zhengping ( ) ( 1878–1945) was a politician of the Republic of China.
Revised: 200px|right Zhao Zhengping ( ; 1878–1945) was a politician of the Republic of China.
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