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Original:   A sheet or towel is placed on the client’s skin to provide a barrier between the hot or cold stones and their bare skin, preventing potential burns or discomfort.
Revised:  Sufficient internal hydration is also essential for the treatment due to an increase in body temperature to be experience, which can be achieved through clients consuming water before, during and after a session. A sheet or towel is placed on the client’s skin to provide a barrier between the hot or cold stones and their bare skin, preventing potential burns or discomfort.
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Original:   Many professionals also recommend that specifically hot stone massages should be avoided by pregnant individuals and children due to potential risk associated with the practice for these groups      .
Revised:  Many professionals also recommend that specifically hot stone massages should be avoided by pregnant individuals and children due to potential risk associated with the practice for these groups . .
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Original:   Many professionals also recommend that specifically hot stone massages should be avoided by pregnant individuals and children due to potential risk associated with the practice for these groups      .
Revised:  Many professionals also recommend that specifically hot stone massages should be avoided by pregnant individuals and children due to potential risk associated with the practice for these groups Supply Companies and Industries As the stone massage utilises equipment and techniques that were new to the massage industry and unfamiliar to practioneers, the rise in demand for the practice evidenced a necessity for specialised equipment and resources. A number of stone supply companies were developed to fulfil the need for greater supplies of the stones required for the practice. Firms such as Desert Stone People, RubRocks and Nature’s Stones Inc became prominent suppliers and distributors of the stones to spas and parlours predominantly across the United States. The development of equipment suited towards heating and cooling the stones was also essential is establishing adequate and safe applications of this process, with products such as the ‘Spa-Pro Massage Stone Heater being designed and distributed. .
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Original:  These basalt stones are most commonly used as they retain heat well and have a smooth surface, ideal for the practice.
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Original:  Stones are also placed in areas and points of the body that assist in balancing energy both spiritually and physically.
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Original:  The heat from the stones will typically take a 3-4 to penetrate into the skin due to the safety barrier provided by the towel or sheet used for the practice and the warmth will then further penetrate into the muscle and tissue of the targeted areas.
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Original:  When combined with techniques such as Swedish massage therapy, the stones will be applied to the skin using long, gliding movements and kneading techniques to relax the muscles.
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Original:  Clients are intended to complete a stone message session feeling rejuvenated, energised, relaxed and soothed from the practice.
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Original: Notable Media Representation As the stone massage increased in popularity internationally as a form of therapy and mainstream massage, the practice got incorporated into the media including films, tv shows, advertisement and books.
Revised: Notable Media Representation As the stone massage increased in popularity internationally as a form of therapy and mainstream massage, the practice was incorporated into media including films, tv shows, advertisement and books.
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Original:  Children ’s film ‘ LEGO Movie 2 ’ also features a scene including a hot stone massage.
Revised:  The children ’s film ‘ LEGO Movie 2 ’ also features a scene including a hot stone massage.
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Original:  Alongside this , the stones are held by the massage therapist and massage into the muscle acting as an extension of their hands.
Revised:  Additionally , the stones are held by the massage therapist and massage into the muscle acting as an extension of their hands.
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Original:  Award-winning cabaret about the ten plagues set in a modern South African farm environment. smallchange (2004) Nominated cabaret written for and performed by Elzabé Zietsman URL URL (2008) Afrikaans black comedy thriller set in the French court during the baroque period.
Revised:  Award-winning cabaret about the ten plagues set in a modern South African farm environment. smallchange (2004) Nominated cabaret written for and performed by Elzabé Zietsman URL (2008) Afrikaans black comedy thriller set in the French court during the baroque period.
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Original:  Women were sometimes times the cause of tribal warfare, and were the prizes once the battle was over.
Revised:  Women were sometimes the cause of tribal warfare, and were the prizes once the battle was over.
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Original:  At this time, James Knight, a director of the Hudson's Bay Company, was seeking a interpreter to help convince the Cree to allow other northern Indians to reach bay side trading posts in order to trade furs with his company.
Revised:  At this time, James Knight, a director of the Hudson's Bay Company, was seeking an interpreter to help convince the Cree to allow other northern Indians to reach bay side trading posts in order to trade furs with his company.
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Original:  Petitot had heard the story from a man with Cree and Dene ancestry, named Alexis Enna-aze, who told him this story of a Chipewyan woman who convinced her people to trade with the Hudson's Bay URL Edward S. Curtis in 1920 published his own version of the story he had learned from Dene people in Cold Lake, URL It was similar to Petitot's, but Curtis called her Thanadelthur, which meant "marten shake,"
Revised:  Petitot had heard the story from a man with Cree and Dene ancestry, named Alexis Enna-aze, who told him this story of a Chipewyan woman who convinced her people to trade with the Hudson's Bay Company. Edward S. Curtis in 1920 published his own version of the story he had learned from Dene people in Cold Lake, URL It was similar to Petitot's, but Curtis called her Thanadelthur, which meant "marten shake,"
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Original:  Petitot had heard the story from a man with Cree and Dene ancestry, named Alexis Enna-aze, who told him this story of a Chipewyan woman who convinced her people to trade with the Hudson's Bay URL Edward S. Curtis in 1920 published his own version of the story he had learned from Dene people in Cold Lake, URL It was similar to Petitot's, but Curtis called her Thanadelthur, which meant "marten shake,"
Revised:  Petitot had heard the story from a man with Cree and Dene ancestry, named Alexis Enna-aze, who told him this story of a Chipewyan woman who convinced her people to trade with the Hudson's Bay URL Edward S. Curtis in 1920 published his own version of the story he had learned from Dene people in Cold Lake, Alberta. It was similar to Petitot's, but Curtis called her Thanadelthur, which meant "marten shake,"
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Original:  and has become the name she is recognized by URL Explorer Samuel Hearne, who recorded Chipewyan society in the later 18th century, recorded that girls were named after a property of marten.
Revised:  and has become the name she is recognized by today. Explorer Samuel Hearne, who recorded Chipewyan society in the later 18th century, recorded that girls were named after a property of marten.
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Original: In psychology, mental time travel (also called "chronosthesia") is the capacity to mentally reconstruct personal events from the past (episodic memory) as well as to imagine possible scenarios in the future (episodic foresight / episodic future thinking).
Revised: In psychology, mental time travel is the capacity to mentally reconstruct personal events from the past (episodic memory) as well as to imagine possible scenarios in the future (episodic foresight / episodic future thinking).
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Original:  All these findings once again show that it is not instinctive or learning predispositions that made the animals behave the way they did;
Revised:  All these findings suggest that it is not instinctive or learning predispositions that made the animals behave the way they did;
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Original:  rather, they have the ability to mental time travel , just like humans can.
Revised:  rather, they have the ability to mental time travel . However, comparative psychologists are divided about this conclusion
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Original:  This study also contradicts the Bischof-Kohler hypothesis by showing that some animals can mentally time travel into the future or back to the past. 
Revised:  This study also contradicts the Bischof-Kohler hypothesis by showing that some animals may mentally time travel into the future or back to the past. 
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Original:  The term was coined by Thomas Suddendorf and Michael Corballis, building on the work of Endel Tulving on episodic memory (Tulving proposed the alternative term chronesthesia ).
Revised:  The term was coined by Thomas Suddendorf and Michael Corballis, building on Endel Tulving's work on episodic memory (Tulving proposed the alternative term chronesthesia ).
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Original: Development in children Studies into the development of mental time travel in infancy suggest that the involved component processes come online piece by piece .
Revised: Development in children Studies into the development of mental time travel in infancy suggest that the involved component processes come online piece by pieces .
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Original:  See also Hyperkalemia Hypoaldosteronism Aldostero 
Revised:  See also Hyperkalemia Hypoaldosteronism Aldosterone 
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Original: External links TTKG calculator available online for iOS, Windows and Android by QxMD.
Revised:  for iOS, Windows and Android by QxMD.
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Original: External links TTKG calculator available online for iOS, Windows and Android by QxMD.
Revised: External links TTKG calculator available online 
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Original: Diamond plate, also known as checker plate, tread plate and Durbar floor plate, is a type of metal stock with a regular pattern of raised diamonds or lines on one side, with the reverse side being featureless.
Revised: Diamond plate, also known as chequer plate, tread plate and Durbar floor plate, is a type of metal stock with a regular pattern of raised diamonds or lines on one side, with the reverse side being featureless.
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Original: Diamond plate, also known as chequer plate, tread plate and Durbar floor plate, is a type of metal stock with a regular pattern of raised diamonds or lines on one side, with the reverse side being featureless.
Revised: Diamond plate, also known as checker plate, tread plate and Durbar floor plate, is a type of metal stock with a regular pattern of raised diamonds or lines on one side, with the reverse side being featureless.
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Original: Diamond plate, also known as checker plate , tread plateand Durbar floor plate , is a type of metal stock with a regular pattern of raised diamonds or lines on one side, with the reverse side being featureless.
Revised: Diamond plate, also known as checker plate and tread plate , is a type of metal stock with a regular pattern of raised diamonds or lines on one side, with the reverse side being featureless.
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Original:  Manufactured with polymer variants, inter-locking diamond plate tile is used in areas with high surface-erosive traffic .
Revised:  Manufactured with polymer variants, inter-locking diamond plate tile is used in areas with high surface-erosive traffic 
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Original:  Tata Steel marketed the plate as Durbar Plate .
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Original:  If the payer is to choose i without knowing the value of j, the best choice is the one that maximizes the expected monetary value:
Revised:  If the payer is to knowing the value of j, the best choice is the one that maximizes the expected monetary value:
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Original: Equation The problem is modeled with a payoff matrix Rij in which the row index i describes a choice that must be made by the payer , while the column index j describes a random variable that the payer does not yet have knowledge of, that has probability pj of being in state j.
Revised: Equation The problem is modeled with a payoff matrix Rij in which the row index i describes a choice that must be made by the player , while the column index j describes a random variable that the payer does not yet have knowledge of, that has probability pj of being in state j.
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Original: Equation The problem is modeled with a payoff matrix Rij in which the row index i describes a choice that must be made by the payer , while the column index j describes a random variable that the payer does not yet have knowledge of, that has probability pj of being in state j.
Revised: Equation The problem is modeled with a payoff matrix Rij in which the row index i describes a choice that must be made by the payer , while the column index j describes a random variable that the player does not yet have knowledge of, that has probability pj of being in state j.
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Original:  If the payer is to choose i without knowing the value of j, the best choice is the one that maximizes the expected monetary value:
Revised:  If the player is to choose i without knowing the value of j, the best choice is the one that maximizes the expected monetary value:
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Original:  Note: EV|PI is necessarily greater than or equal to EMV . That is , EVPI is always non-negative.
Revised:  Since EV|PI is necessarily greater than or equal to EMV . That is , EVPI is always non-negative.
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Original:  Note: EV|PI is necessarily greater than or equal to EMV . That is , EVPI is always non-negative.
Revised:  Note: EV|PI is necessarily greater than or equal to EMV , EVPI is always non-negative.
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Original:  EVPI provides a criterion by which to judge ordinary mortal forecasters.
Revised:  EVPI provides a criterion by which to judge ordinary imperfectly informed forecasters.
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Original:  Here  indicates the best choice of action i for each state j.
Revised:  Here , indicates the best choice of action i for each state j.
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Original: Drug therapy problems ( DTP ) (or drug related problem, DRP) is a categorization of drug problems in the field of pharmaceutical care that happen between physicians, pharmacists and patients.
Revised: Drug therapy problems ( DTPs ) (or drug related problem, DRP) is a categorization of drug problems in the field of pharmaceutical care that happen between physicians, pharmacists and patients.
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Original: Drug therapy problems ( DTP ) (or drug related problem, DRP) is a categorization of drug problems in the field of pharmaceutical care that happen between physicians, pharmacists and patients.
Revised: Drug therapy problems ( DTP ) (or drug related problems, DRPs) are a categorization of drug problems in the field of pharmaceutical care that happen between physicians, pharmacists and patients.
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Original:  These problems are then identified, prevented, and resolved primarily by pharmacists, but it can be taken care of by any health-care provider that provides pharmaceutical care .
Revised:  These problems are then identified, prevented, and /or resolved by pharmacists, but it can be taken care of by any health-care provider that provides pharmaceutical care .
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Original: Further breakdown of categories A further breakdown of the DRP categories (Ref 10) :Pharmaceutical Care Practice: The Clinician's Guide, 2e chapter 1Pharmacotherapy Casebook: A Patient-Focused Approach, 7e Chapter "Identification of Drug Therapy Problems"Adapted from: Cipolle RJ, Strand LM, Morley PC.
Revised: Further breakdown of categories A further breakdown of the DRP categories :Pharmaceutical Care Practice: The Clinician's Guide, 2e chapter 1Pharmacotherapy Casebook: A Patient-Focused Approach, 7e Chapter "Identification of Drug Therapy Problems"Adapted from: Cipolle RJ, Strand LM, Morley PC.
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Original: Further breakdown of categories A further breakdown of the DRP categories:Pharmaceutical Care Practice: The Clinician's Guide, 2e chapter 1Pharmacotherapy Casebook: A Patient-Focused Approach, 7e Chapter "Identification of Drug Therapy Problems"Adapted from: Cipolle RJ, Strand LM, Morley PC.
Revised: Further breakdown of categories DRPs can be broken down further into the following categories:Pharmaceutical Care Practice: The Clinician's Guide, 2e chapter 1Pharmacotherapy Casebook: A Patient-Focused Approach, 7e Chapter "Identification of Drug Therapy Problems"Adapted from: Cipolle RJ, Strand LM, Morley PC.
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Original:  In the course of clinical practice, DTPs are often identified, prevented, and/or resolved by pharmacists  , as medication experts , but other healthcare professionals may also manage DTPs.
Revised:  In the course of clinical practice, DTPs are often identified, prevented, and/or resolved by pharmacists , but other healthcare professionals may also manage DTPs.
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Original:  In 1990, L.M. Strand and her colleagues (based on previous works of R.L Mikeal and D.C Brodie, published respectively in 1975 and 1980) classified the DTPs into eight different categories.
Revised:  In 1990, L.M. Strand and her colleagues (based on the previous work of R.L Mikeal and D.C Brodie, published respectively in 1975 and 1980) classified the DTPs into eight different categories.
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Original:  A second publication of R.J Cipolle with L.M Strand in 1998, change the eight categories into seven, grouped in four Pharmacotherapy needs: indication, effectiveness, safety and adherence See also Pharmaceutical care Pharmacists Pharmacotherapy Medication Therapy Management
Revised:  A second publication of R.J Cipolle with L.M Strand in 1998, change the eight categories into seven, grouped in four Pharmacotherapy needs: indication, effectiveness, safety and adherence See also Pharmacotherapy
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Original: A drug-therapy (related) problem can be defined as an event or circumstance involving drug treatment that actually or potentially interferes with the patient experiencing an optimum outcome of medical care.
Revised: A drug-therapy (related) problem can be defined as an event or circumstance involving drug treatment that actually or potentially interferes with the optimal provision of medical care.
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Original:  A second publication of R.J Cipolle with L.M Strand in 1998, change the eight categories into seven, grouped in four Pharmacotherapy needs: indication, effectiveness, safety and adherence Non-adherence Directions not understood Patient prefers not to take Patient forgets to take Drug product too expensive Cannot swallow/administer Drug product not available See also Pharmacotherapy
Revised:  A second publication of R.J Cipolle with L.M Strand in 1998, change the eight categories into seven, grouped in four Pharmacotherapy needs: indication, effectiveness, safety and adherence Non-adherence Directions not understood Patient prefers not to take Patient forgets to take Drug product too expensive Cannot swallow/administer Drug product not available 
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Original:  Providing more information to pharmacists for following up patient's drug therapy caused a change in name of the term "DTP" to "DTPsm", "drug therapy problem for seamless monitoring".
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Original:  Ca2+ is also thought to trigger neuroinflammation, a key component in all CNS disorders  Glutamate antagonists Glutamate antagonists are the primary treatment used to prevent or help control excitotoxicity in CNS disorders.
Revised:  Ca2+ is also thought to trigger neuroinflammation, a key component in all CNS disorders . Glutamate antagonists Glutamate antagonists are the primary treatment used to prevent or help control excitotoxicity in CNS disorders.
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Original:  Importantly, clinical trials for the drug in patients with ischemic stroke show it to be effective as well as noninvasive  Progesterone:
Revised:  Importantly, clinical trials for the drug in patients with ischemic stroke show it to be effective as well as noninvasive . Progesterone:
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Original:  Administration of progesterone is well known to aid in the prevention of secondary injuries in patients with traumatic brain injury and stroke  Simvastatin:
Revised:  Administration of progesterone is well known to aid in the prevention of secondary injuries in patients with traumatic brain injury and stroke . Simvastatin:
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Original:  Administration in models of Parkinson's disease have been shown to have pronounced neuroprotective effects including anti-inflammatory effects due to NMDA receptor modulation  Memantine: As a low-affinity NMDA antagonist that is uncompetitive, memantine inhibits NMDA induced excitotoxicity while still preserving a degree of NMDA signalling  .
Revised:  Administration in models of Parkinson's disease have been shown to have pronounced neuroprotective effects including anti-inflammatory effects due to NMDA receptor modulation . Memantine: As a low-affinity NMDA antagonist that is uncompetitive, memantine inhibits NMDA induced excitotoxicity while still preserving a degree of NMDA signalling .
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Original: History Origins The office that the Orkoiyot held was referred to as the OrkoinotetGenealogy of the Nadi Orkoiyot from Kipsegun to Samoeionline and was established among the Nandi by Kipsegun, a Segelai Maasai.
Revised: History Origins The office that the Orkoiyot held was referred to as the OrkoinotetGenealogy of the Nadi Orkoiyot from Kipsegun to Samoei online and was established among the Nandi by Kipsegun, a Segelai Maasai.
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Original:  The Clarendon Press, Oxford, 1909, p. 50 The second dynasty was founded through a woman named Moki chebo Cheplabot, the wife of a Maasai Laibon who fled during a war with the Nandi whilst pregnant.
Revised:  The Clarendon Press, Oxford, 1909, p. 50 The second dynasty was founded through a woman named Moki chebo Cheplabot, the wife of a Maasai Laibon who fled during a war with the Nandi while pregnant.
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Original:  Garchitorena is related to the legendary attorney Sen. Jose W. Diokno, the father of human rights and the intellectual leader of the peaceful EDSA revolution and the Marcos opposition, similar to how Apolinario Mabini was the "brains of the Philippine Revolution" and Rizal was the brilliant leader of the Propaganda Movement.
Revised:  Garchitorena is the third cousin of the legendary attorney Sen. Jose W. Diokno, the father of human rights and the intellectual leader of the peaceful EDSA revolution and the Marcos opposition, similar to how Apolinario Mabini was the "brains of the Philippine Revolution" and Rizal was the brilliant leader of the Propaganda Movement.
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Original:  New Page 1 He then joined the National Defence Academy, Pune as part of the 38th course.
Revised:  He then joined the National Defence Academy, Pune as part of the 38th course.
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Original:  Colonel Neelakantan Jayachandran Nair
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Original: Early life and Education He was born to R. Neelakantan Nair and P.Saraswathy Amma on 17 Feb 1951 at Ernakulam, Kerala.
Revised: Early life and education He was born to R. Neelakantan Nair and P.Saraswathy Amma on 17 Feb 1951 at Ernakulam, Kerala.
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