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Original: The Dutch opened the battle  bombarding the castle , later the Dutch began to march to the castle, but they were ambushed by the Portuguese and their African allies from hidden positions and they were almost totally massacred.
Revised: The Dutch opened the battle by bombarding the castle , later the Dutch began to march to the castle, but they were ambushed by the Portuguese and their African allies from hidden positions and they were almost totally massacred.
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Original: The Dutch opened the battle  bombarding the castle , later the Dutch began to march to the castle, but they were ambushed by the Portuguese and their African allies from hidden positions and they were almost totally massacred.
Revised: The Dutch opened the battle bombarding the castle . Then the Dutch began to march to the castle, but they were ambushed by the Portuguese and their African allies from hidden positions and they were almost totally massacred.
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Original: The Dutch opened the battle  bombarding the castle , later the Dutch began to march to the castle, but they were ambushed by the Portuguese and their African allies from hidden positions and they were almost totally massacred.
Revised: The Dutch opened the battle bombarding the castle , later the Dutch began to march to the castle, but they were ambushed by the Portuguese and their African allies from hidden positions and were almost totally massacred.
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Original: Taylor, p.108 The Portuguese had very few casualties and took 15 flags, 15 drums and over than 1,000 muskets, pikes, pistols and dresses.
Revised: Taylor, p.108 The Portuguese had very few casualties and took 15 flags, 15 drums and more than 1,000 muskets, pikes, pistols and dresses.
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Original:  The Dutch ships fired over 2,000 cannonballs at the castle , but they eventually withdrew.
Revised:  The Dutch ships fired over 2,000 cannonballs at the castle before they withdrew.
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Original: The Battle of Elmina was a minor conflict of the Dutch-Portuguese War, fought off the castle of São Jorge da Mina (Elmina Castle)Dann, Seaton, p.34Rodriguez, p.236 in the Portuguese Gold Coast in 1625.
Revised: The Battle of Elmina was a military engagement of the Dutch-Portuguese War, fought off the castle of São Jorge da Mina (Elmina Castle)Dann, Seaton, p.34Rodriguez, p.236 in the Portuguese Gold Coast in 1625.
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Original:  Discoverability is a concern in library and information science, many aspects of digital media, software and web development, and in marketing, since something (e.g., a website, product, service, etc.) cannot be used if people cannot find it or do not understand what it can be used for.
Revised:  Discoverability is a concern in library and information science, many aspects of digital media, software and web development, and in marketing, since products and services cannot be used if people cannot find it or do not understand what it can be used for.
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Original:  singers, musicians and record producers for songs) and the genres ( e.g., for movies genres such as action, drama or comedy;
Revised:  singers, musicians and record producers for songs) and the genres ( for movies genres such as action, drama or comedy;
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Original:  for songs, genres such as heavy metal music , hip hop music, etc.) , this makes it easier for end users to find the content they are interested in .
Revised:  for songs, genres such as heavy metal music , hip hop music, etc.) .
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Original:  In the 2010s, when users interact with online content, algorithms typically determine what types of content the user is interested in, and then a computer program suggests "more like this", which is other content that the user may be interested in.
Revised:  When users interact with online content, algorithms typically determine what types of content the user is interested in, and then a computer program suggests "more like this", which is other content that the user may be interested in.
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Original:  Different websites and systems have different algorithms, but one approach, used by Amazon  for its online store, is to indicate to a user , once the user searches for or looks at content/product x that " other users who purchased x also purchased the following items "  . This example is oriented around online purchasing behaviour, but an algorithm could also be programmed to provide suggestions based on other factors (e.g., searching, viewing, etc.).
Revised:  Different websites and systems have different algorithms, but one approach, used by Amazon for its online store, is to indicate to a user : " other users who purchased x also purchased the following items " . This example is oriented around online purchasing behaviour, but an algorithm could also be programmed to provide suggestions based on other factors (e.g., searching, viewing, etc.).
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Original:  Different websites and systems have different algorithms, but one approach, used by Amazon  for its online store, is to indicate to a user , once the user searches for or looks at content/product x that " other users who purchased x also purchased the following items "  . This example is oriented around online purchasing behaviour, but an algorithm could also be programmed to provide suggestions based on other factors (e.g., searching, viewing, etc.).
Revised:  Different websites and systems have different algorithms, but one approach, used by Amazon for its online store, is to indicate to a user , once the user searches for or looks at content/product x that " customers who bought x also bought y " . This example is oriented around online purchasing behaviour, but an algorithm could also be programmed to provide suggestions based on other factors (e.g., searching, viewing, etc.).
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Original:  In the 2010s, discoverability is typically referred to in connection with search engines.
Revised:  Discoverability is typically referred to in connection with search engines.
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Original:  A highly "discoverable" piece of content (e.g., a certain movie) would be a movie that appears at the top, or near the top of a user's search results.
Revised:  A highly "discoverable" piece of content would appear at the top, or near the top of a user's search results.
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Original:  A related concept is the role of "recommendation engines", which are computer programs which give a user recommendations based on his/her  online activity.
Revised:  A related concept is the role of "recommendation engines", which give a user recommendations based on his/her online activity.
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Original:  In the 2010s, "discoverability" applies to desktop and laptop computers and do the increasingly widening range of devices that can access the Internet, including various console video game systems and mobile devices such as tablets and smartphones.
Revised:  Discoverability applies to computers and devices that can access the Internet, including various console video game systems and mobile devices such as tablets and smartphones.
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Original:  When organizations make an effort to promote certain content (e.g., a TV show, film, song, or video game), they can use "traditional marketing " (billboards, TV ads, radio ads) and digital ads (pop-up ads, pre-roll ads, etc.), or a mix of traditional and digital marketing.
Revised:  When producers make an effort to promote certain content (e.g., a TV show, film, song, or video game), they can use "traditional marketing " (billboards, TV ads, radio ads) and digital ads (pop-up ads, pre-roll ads, etc.), or a mix of traditional and digital marketing.
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Original:  When organizations make an effort to promote certain content (e.g., a TV show, film, song, or video game), they can use "traditional marketing " (billboards, TV ads, radio ads) and digital ads (pop-up ads, pre-roll ads, etc.), or a mix of traditional and digital marketing.
Revised:  When organizations make an effort to promote content (e.g., a TV show, film, song, or video game), they can use "traditional marketing " (billboards, TV ads, radio ads) and digital ads (pop-up ads, pre-roll ads, etc.), or a mix of traditional and digital marketing.
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Original:  When organizations make an effort to promote certain content (e.g., a TV show, film, song, or video game), they can use "traditional marketing " (billboards, TV ads, radio ads) and digital ads (pop-up ads, pre-roll ads, etc.), or a mix of traditional and digital marketing.
Revised:  When organizations make an effort to promote certain content (e.g., a TV show, film, song, or video game), they can use traditional marketing (billboards, TV ads, radio ads) and digital ads (pop-up ads, pre-roll ads, etc.), or a mix of traditional and digital marketing.
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Original:  In the 2010s, adding metadata to a product that is available online can make it easier for end users to find the product.
Revised:  Adding metadata to a product that is available online can make it easier for end users to find the product.
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Original:  For example, if a song file is made available online, making the title, name of the band, genre, year of release, and other pertinent information available in connection with this song file will make it easier for users to find this song file . Organizing information by putting it into alphabetical order or including it in a search engine is an example of how to improve discoverability.
Revised:  For example, if a song file is made available online, making the title, name of the band, genre, year of release, and other pertinent information available in connection with this song file can be retrieved more easily . Organizing information by putting it into alphabetical order or including it in a search engine is an example of how to improve discoverability.
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Original:  To make items, products, and services discoverable, the following set of activities need to be performed : Document the information about the item, product or service (the metadata) in a consistent manner.
Revised:  To make items, products, and services discoverable, the process is as follows : Document the information about the item, product or service (the metadata) in a consistent manner.
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Original:  Enable yourself and others to search for the documented information in an efficient manner.
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Original:  Regarding number 2, storing the information in a searchable repository: while technically a human-searchable repository, such as a printed paper list would qualify, in the 2010s, "searchable repository" is usually taken to mean a computer-searchable repository, such as a database that a human user can search using some type of search engine or "find" feature.
Revised:  while technically a human-searchable repository, such as a printed paper list would qualify, in the 2010s, "searchable repository" is usually taken to mean a computer-searchable repository, such as a database that a human user can search using some type of search engine or "find" feature.
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Original:  Regarding number 2, storing the information in a searchable repository: while technically a human-searchable repository, such as a printed paper list would qualify, in the 2010s, "searchable repository" is usually taken to mean a computer-searchable repository, such as a database that a human user can search using some type of search engine or "find" feature.
Revised:  Regarding number 2, storing the information in a searchable repository: while technically a human-searchable repository, such as a printed paper list would qualify, "searchable repository" is usually taken to mean a computer-searchable repository, such as a database that a human user can search using some type of search engine or "find" feature.
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Original:  Number 3 further supports this analysis of number 2, because while reading through a printed paper list by hand might be feasible in a theoretical sense, it is not time and cost-efficient in comparison with computer-based searching.
Revised:  Enable search for the documented information in an efficient manner. supports number 2, because while reading through a printed paper list by hand might be feasible in a theoretical sense, it is not time and cost-efficient in comparison with computer-based searching.
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Original:  In the 2010s, one concern raised with the increasing role of algorithms on search engines and databases, is that once a specific person indicates a preference for a certain type of content or product, the computer algorithm may increasingly focus on making recommendations in this type of content .
Revised:  One concern raised with the increasing role of algorithms on search engines and databases, is that once a specific person indicates a preference for a certain type of content or product, the computer algorithm may increasingly focus on making recommendations in this type of content .
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Original:  In the 2010s, one concern raised with the increasing role of algorithms on search engines and databases, is that once a specific person indicates a preference for a certain type of content or product, the computer algorithm may increasingly focus on making recommendations in this type of content .
Revised:  In the 2010s, one concern raised with the increasing role of algorithms on search engines and databases, is the creation of filter bubbles .
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Original: Algorithms In the online economy, sophisticated computer programs called algorithms analyse the ways that end users search for, access and use different content or products online.
Revised: Algorithms In the online economy, sophisticated algorithms are required for the analysis of the ways that end users search for, access and use different content or products online.
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Original:  Thus, not only is metadata created regarding the content or product (e.g., the author and genre of an e-book), but also data is generated about specific human users' interaction with this content.
Revised:  Thus, not only is metadata created regarding the content or product , but also data is generated about specific human users' interaction with this content.
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Original:  Thus, not only is metadata created regarding the content or product (e.g., the author and genre of an e-book), but also data is generated about specific human users' interaction with this content.
Revised:  Thus, not only is metadata created regarding the content or product (e.g., the author and genre of an e-book), but also data about specific users' interaction with this content.
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Original:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies  of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
Revised:  If a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
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Original:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies  of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
Revised:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
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Original:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies  of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
Revised:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this website can collect and analyse information about tendencies of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
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Original:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies  of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
Revised:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies and preferences of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
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Original:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies  of a given user or a given subcategory of users.
Revised:  If an organization such as a social media website has a user profile for a given person, indicating demographic information ( e.g., age, gender, location of residence, employment status, education, etc.), then this social media website can collect and analyse information about tendencies of a given user or a subcategory of users.
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Original:  When social media websites are collecting data about human users' online activities and preferences, this may raise potential privacy concerns.
Revised:  This raises potential privacy concerns.
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Original:  Ghosh et al. found that algorithm "web crawler"s can only access 26\% of new online content "...by recrawling a constant fraction of the entire web".
Revised:  Web crawlers can only access 26\% of new online content "...by recrawling a constant fraction of the entire web".
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Original:  URL One concern raised with the increasing role of algorithms on search engines and databases , is the creation of filter bubbles.
Revised:  URL One concern raised with the increasing role of algorithms in search engines and databases , is the creation of filter bubbles.
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Original:  URL One concern raised with the increasing role of algorithms on search engines and databases , is the creation of filter bubbles.
Revised:  URL One concern raised with the increasing role of algorithms on search engines and databases is the creation of filter bubbles.
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Original:  The search behaviour of video content viewers has changed a great deal since the widespread popularity of video sharing websites and video streaming.
Revised:  The search behaviour of video content viewers has changed a great deal with increasing popularity of video sharing websites and video streaming.
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Original:  If the user is searching on a search engine on a  device (laptop, tablet computer, smartphone) they own, the device may transmit information about the user's preferences and previous online searches to the website.
Revised:  If the user is using a search engine on a device (laptop, tablet computer, smartphone) they own, the device may transmit information about the user's preferences and previous online searches to the website.
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Original:  If the user is searching on a search engine on a  device (laptop, tablet computer, smartphone) they own, the device may transmit information about the user's preferences and previous online searches to the website.
Revised:  If the user is searching on a search engine on a device may transmit information about the user's preferences and previous online searches to the website.
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Original:  Continuing with this 1980s to 2010s comparison , in the 1980s, the type or brand of television a user was watching on did not affect his/her viewing habits.
Revised:  Furthermore , in the 1980s, the type or brand of television a user was watching on did not affect his/her viewing habits.
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Original:  Limitations For organizations that are trying to get maximal user uptake of their product, content or service online, discoverability has become an important goal.
Revised:  Limitations For organizations that are trying to get maximal user uptake of their product, discoverability has become an important goal.
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Original:  It is not enough to make the online product or service discoverable for only a short period, unless the goal is only to create “viral ” content as part of a short-term marketing campaign
Revised:  It is not enough to make the online product or service discoverable for only a short period, unless the goal is only to create “viral content" as part of a short-term marketing campaign
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Original:  For example, if a song file is made available online, making the title, name of the band, genre, year of release, and other pertinent information available in connection with this song  file can be retrieved more easily.
Revised:  For example, if a song file is made available online, making the title, name of the band, genre, year of release, and other pertinent information available in connection with this song means the file can be retrieved more easily.
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Original:  He is ranked 18th in the Lightweight division according to BoxRec.
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Original:  Unfortunately, in a study done in 1989  only 35\% of health care physicians correctly identified brain death using these criteria.
Revised:  In a study done in 1989 only 35\% of health care physicians correctly identified brain death using these criteria.
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Original:  Unfortunately, in a study done in 1989  only 35\% of health care physicians correctly identified brain death using these criteria.
Revised:  Unfortunately, in a study done in 1989 , only 35\% of health care physicians correctly identified brain death using these criteria.
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Original:  Although it is claimed the brain-dead patient cannot feel pain, an anesthesiologist is regularly present at organ donation surgical procedures  .
Revised:  An anesthesiologist is regularly present at organ donation surgical procedures .
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Original:  The anesthesiologist 's main role is to ensure that muscle spasms or reflexes do not occur during the procedure.
Revised:  The anesthesiologist also ensures that muscle spasms or reflexes do not occur during the procedure.
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Original:  This definition can create some cognitive dissonance because not responding to stimulation may show a problem with the central nervous system, yet when someone has a beating heart and lungs that will still function with the help of a ventilator it is difficult for some to consider that true death.
Revised:  This definition can create some cognitive dissonance because not responding to stimulation may show a problem with the central nervous system, yet when someone has a beating heart and lungs that will still function with the help of a ventilator it is difficult for some to accept as death.
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