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Original: Shaun Greatbatch (born 13 July 1969  ) is an English former professional darts player.
Revised: Shaun Greatbatch (born 13 July 1969 ) is an English retired professional darts player.
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Original:  His nickname is Nine Dart  , having been the first player to hit a perfect nine dart finish on live television, in the final of the 2002 Dutch Open against Steve Coote.
Revised:  His nickname is Nine Dart Man , having been the first player to hit a perfect nine dart finish on live television, in the final of the 2002 Dutch Open against Steve Coote.
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Original: Fast Subsystem Slow Subsystem Bursts differ from tonic firing, rapid spiking at similar rates to bursting but continuing for long periods of time, in that bursting involves a physiological "slow subsystem" that eventually depletes as the bursting continues and then must be replenished before the cell can burst again (compare refractory period).
Revised: Fast subsystem Slow Subsystem Bursts differ from tonic firing, rapid spiking at similar rates to bursting but continuing for long periods of time, in that bursting involves a physiological "slow subsystem" that eventually depletes as the bursting continues and then must be replenished before the cell can burst again (compare refractory period).
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Original: Fast Subsystem Slow Subsystem Bursts differ from tonic firing, rapid spiking at similar rates to bursting but continuing for long periods of time, in that bursting involves a physiological "slow subsystem" that eventually depletes as the bursting continues and then must be replenished before the cell can burst again (compare refractory period).
Revised: Fast Subsystem Slow subsystem Bursts differ from tonic firing, rapid spiking at similar rates to bursting but continuing for long periods of time, in that bursting involves a physiological "slow subsystem" that eventually depletes as the bursting continues and then must be replenished before the cell can burst again (compare refractory period).
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Original: pre-Bötzinger Complex The pre-Bötzinger complex (preBötC) is located in ventrolateral medulla and is proposed to generate the rhythm underlying inspiratory efforts in mammals.
Revised: pre-Bötzinger complex The pre-Bötzinger complex (preBötC) is located in ventrolateral medulla and is proposed to generate the rhythm underlying inspiratory efforts in mammals.
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Original: Purposes of bursting Bursting is a very general phenomenon and is observed in many contexts in many neural systems.
Revised: Purposes Bursting is a very general phenomenon and is observed in many contexts in many neural systems.
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Original:  Later, Sathyan joined the naxalite movement and became the Kozhikode district Secretary of the Communist Party of India (Marxist-Leninist) and had to undergo imprisonment during the Emergency period of 1975-77.
Revised:  Later, Sathyan joined the naxalite movement and became the Kozhikode district Secretary of the Communist Party of India (Marxist-Leninist) and had to undergo imprisonment during the Emergency period of 1975–77.
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Original:  External links Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 1 Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 2 Sathyan at the 18th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK) News report on Madhyamam daily News report on Mathrubhumi News News report on Kaiali TV (YouTube video)
Revised:  External links Documentary on the life of Sathyan – Kairali TV video - Part 1 Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 2 Sathyan at the 18th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK) News report on Madhyamam daily News report on Mathrubhumi News News report on Kaiali TV (YouTube video)
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Original:  External links Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 1 Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 2 Sathyan at the 18th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK) News report on Madhyamam daily News report on Mathrubhumi News News report on Kaiali TV (YouTube video)
Revised:  External links Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video – Part 1 Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 2 Sathyan at the 18th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK) News report on Madhyamam daily News report on Mathrubhumi News News report on Kaiali TV (YouTube video)
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Original:  External links Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 1 Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 2 Sathyan at the 18th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK) News report on Madhyamam daily News report on Mathrubhumi News News report on Kaiali TV (YouTube video)
Revised:  External links Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 1 Documentary on the life of Sathyan – Kairali TV video - Part 2 Sathyan at the 18th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK) News report on Madhyamam daily News report on Mathrubhumi News News report on Kaiali TV (YouTube video)
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Original:  External links Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 1 Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 2 Sathyan at the 18th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK) News report on Madhyamam daily News report on Mathrubhumi News News report on Kaiali TV (YouTube video)
Revised:  External links Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video - Part 1 Documentary on the life of Sathyan - Kairali TV video – Part 2 Sathyan at the 18th International Film Festival of Kerala (IFFK) News report on Madhyamam daily News report on Mathrubhumi News News report on Kaiali TV (YouTube video)
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Original:  Later, Sathyan joined the naxalite movement and became the Kozhikode district Secretary of the Communist Party of India ( Marxist-Leninist ) and had to undergo imprisonment during the Emergency period of 1975–77.
Revised:  Later, Sathyan joined the naxalite movement and became the Kozhikode district Secretary of the Communist Party of India ( Marxist–Leninist ) and had to undergo imprisonment during the Emergency period of 1975–77.
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Original: Cheeram Veetti ("C.V.") Sathyan (10 October 1957 – 19 August 2014), popularly known as Odessa Sathyan was an Indian documentary filmmaker and social activist, known for his involvement in the naxal movements of the seventies in Kerala and his association with Odessa Collective, a people's film movement which was founded by the noted Malayalam filmmaker, John Abraham.
Revised: Cheeram Veetti Sathyan (10 October 1957 – 19 August 2014), popularly known as Odessa Sathyan was an Indian documentary filmmaker and social activist, known for his involvement in the naxal movements of the seventies in Kerala and his association with Odessa Collective, a people's film movement which was founded by the noted Malayalam filmmaker, John Abraham.
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Original: Biography C. V. Sathyan was born on 10 October 1957, at Vadakara , in Kozhikode district, in the South Indian state of Kerala, to Cheeramveettil Kunkan and Cheeru.
Revised: Biography C. V. Sathyan was born on 10 October 1957, at Vatakara , in Kozhikode district, in the South Indian state of Kerala, to Cheeramveettil Kunkan and Cheeru.
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Original: Numbers In 2011 in Italy there are 246  908 regular immigrants from Peru.
Revised: Numbers In 2011 , Italy had 246 908 regular immigrants from Peru.
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Original: Numbers In 2011 in Italy there are 246  908 regular immigrants from Peru.
Revised: Numbers In 2011 in Italy there are 246 , 908 regular immigrants from Peru.
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Original:  In 2006 they were 66.506.
Revised:  In 2006 , they were 66,506.
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Original:  The three cities with most number of Peruvians are: Milan, Rome and Turin.
Revised:  The three cities with the highest number of Peruvians are: Milan, Rome and Turin.
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Original: Numbers In 2019, Italy had 97128 regular immigrants from Peru.
Revised: Numbers In 2019, Italy had 97.128 regular immigrants from Peru.
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Original:  Year Peruvian-born population Other data 200126,831200666.506Peruviani in Italia 200770.755 200877.629 200987.747 2010 225,79598.603 2011 246,908 2012 2013
Revised:  Year Peruvian-born population Other data 200126,831200666.506Peruviani in Italia 200770.755 200877.629 200987.747 2011 246,908 2012 2013
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Original:  The focus was not on their physique, and they often had large bellies and fatty limbs  .
Revised:  The focus was not on their physique, and they possessed relatively large bellies and fatty limbs .
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Original:  An individual who engages in this activity is referred to as a bodybuilder.
Revised:  A male individual who engages in this activity is referred to as a bodybuilder.
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Original:  A bodybuilder might first be able to gain a year, if he or she lifts for seven hours on a weekly basis.
Revised:  A bodybuilder might first be able to gain a year, if he lifts for seven hours on a weekly basis.
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Original:  A male individual who engages in this activity is referred to as a bodybuilder.
Revised:  An individual who engages in this activity is referred to as a bodybuilder.
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Original:  In professional bodybuilding, male competitors appear in lineups and perform specified poses (and later male individual posing routines) for a panel of judges who rank them based on symmetry, muscularity, size, conditioning, posing, and stage presentation.
Revised:  In professional bodybuilding, competitors appear in lineups and perform specified poses (and later male individual posing routines) for a panel of judges who rank them based on symmetry, muscularity, size, conditioning, posing, and stage presentation.
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Original:  In professional bodybuilding, male competitors appear in lineups and perform specified poses (and later male individual posing routines) for a panel of judges who rank them based on symmetry, muscularity, size, conditioning, posing, and stage presentation.
Revised:  In professional bodybuilding, male competitors appear in lineups and perform specified poses (and later individual posing routines) for a panel of judges who rank them based on symmetry, muscularity, size, conditioning, posing, and stage presentation.
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Original:  A bodybuilder might first be able to gain a year, if he  lifts for seven hours on a weekly basis.
Revised:  A bodybuilder might first be able to gain a year, if he or she lifts for seven hours on a weekly basis.
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Original:  Body building takes a great amount of effort and time to reach the desired results (unless your J Hampton who will be small forever) .
Revised:  Body building takes a great amount of effort and time to reach the desired results .
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Original:  The overall Colombian population decreased significantly due to emigration as the result of Spain´s protracted 2008-20016 economic crisis.
Revised:  The overall Colombian population decreased significantly due to emigration as the result of Spain´s protracted 2008-2016 economic crisis.
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Original: Zhang Tiesheng  became famous during the Cultural Revolution , in 1973 for refusing to take a national exam on physics and chemistry .
Revised: Zhang Tiesheng became famous during the Cultural Revolution for refusing to take a national exam on physics and chemistry .
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Original: Zhang Tiesheng  became famous during the Cultural Revolution , in 1973 for refusing to take a national exam on physics and chemistry .
Revised: Zhang Tiesheng became famous during the Cultural Revolution , in 1973 for refusing to take the national exam on physics and chemistry .
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Original:  As of 2017, his net worth is 106 million RMB .
Revised:  As of 2017, his net worth is 106 million RMB .
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Original:  However, after the fall of the Gang of Four he was put on trial and sentenced to 15 years in prison for opposing Deng Xiaoping 's takeover of power  .
Revised:  However, after the fall of the Gang of Four he was put on trial and sentenced to 15 years in prison for opposing Deng Xiaoping 's takeover of power .
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Original:  More recent observations include (not an exhaustive list): The 1980 Mixed Layer Experiment Within the Sargasso Sea during the 1982 Long Term Upper Ocean Study Within the California Current during the 1993 Eastern Boundary Current experiment Within the Drake Passage region of the Southern Ocean In the eastern tropical Pacific, at 2°N, 140°W, using 5 current meters between 5 and 25 meters depth.
Revised:  More recent observations include (not an exhaustive list): The 1980 mixed layer experiment Within the Sargasso Sea during the 1982 Long Term Upper Ocean Study Within the California Current during the 1993 Eastern Boundary Current experiment Within the Drake Passage region of the Southern Ocean In the eastern tropical Pacific, at 2°N, 140°W, using 5 current meters between 5 and 25 meters depth.
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Original: History Ekman developed the theory of the Ekman layer after Fridtjof Nansen observed that ice drifts at an angle of 20° -40 ° to the right of the prevailing wind direction while on an Arctic expedition aboard the Fram.
Revised: History Ekman developed the theory of the Ekman layer after Fridtjof Nansen observed that ice drifts at an angle of 20° –40 ° to the right of the prevailing wind direction while on an Arctic expedition aboard the Fram.
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Original: Observations The first documented observations of an Ekman-like spiral in the ocean were made in the Arctic Ocean from a drifting ice flow in 1958.
Revised: Observations The first documented observations of an Ekman-like spiral in the ocean were made in the Arctic Ocean from a drifting ice floe in 1958.
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Original:  North of the Kerguelan Plateau during the 2008 SOFINE experiment Common to several of these observations spirals were found to be "compressed", displaying larger estimates of eddy viscosity when considering the rate of rotation with depth than the eddy viscosity derived from considering the rate of decay of speed.
Revised:  North of the Kerguelen Plateau during the 2008 SOFINE experiment Common to several of these observations spirals were found to be "compressed", displaying larger estimates of eddy viscosity when considering the rate of rotation with depth than the eddy viscosity derived from considering the rate of decay of speed.
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Original: alt=|Museum der Völker alt=|Exhibition "Unvergessen machen" Room Voodoo, Museum der Völker, Schwaz Room Indonesia, Museum der Völker Room Asia, Museum der Völker, Schwaz alt=|Barong, Bali, Indonesia The Museum der Völker in the Austrian Schwaz in the county of Tyrol was founded in 1995 as a cultural association Haus der Völker by Gert Chesi and belongs to the well known Ethnology museums in Europe.
Revised: alt=|Museum der Völker alt=|Exhibition "Unvergessen machen" Room Voodoo, Museum der Völker, Schwaz Room Indonesia, Museum der Völker Room Asia, Museum der Völker, Schwaz The Museum der Völker in the Austrian Schwaz in the county of Tyrol was founded in 1995 as a cultural association Haus der Völker by Gert Chesi and belongs to the well known Ethnology museums in Europe.
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Original: Collections Currently, the collection Chesi / Stadt Schwaz, the Schell Collection, as well as the Lindner collection are displayed at the Museum der Völker . Special Show In two rooms, special exhibitions are hosted regularly.
Revised: Collections Currently, the collection Chesi / Stadt Schwaz, the Schell Collection, as well as the Lindner collection are displayed at the Museum der Völker . In two rooms, special exhibitions are hosted regularly.
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Original: Records set at the facilities The following records have been set at the facilities: 2004 Women’s European Canopy Formation record 2005 Spanish Canopy Formation Skydiving record, with 25 skydivers 2005 European Freefly record, with 28 skydivers 2007 European Freefly record, with 40 skydivers 2009 European Freefly record, with 51 skydivers 2011 European Freefly record, with 80 skydivers 2012 World Horizontal Freefall Speed record, reaching the 304-kph mark.
Revised: Records set at the facilities The following records have been set at the facilities: 2004 Women’s European Canopy Formation record 2005 Spanish Canopy Formation Skydiving record, with 25 skydivers 2005 European Freefly record, with 28 skydivers 2007 European Freefly record, with 40 skydivers 2009 European Freefly record, with 51 skydivers 2011 European Freefly record, with 80 skydivers 2012 World Horizontal Freefall Speed record, reaching the 304-km/h mark.
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Original:  2003 largest freefall World Record: 13 December 2003, Eloy (Arizona), 300 skydivers 2004 largest freefall World Record: 6 February 2004, Korat (Thailand), 357 skydivers from around the world established a freefall formation at 280 kph , which remained intact for exactly 6 seconds at a height of 24,000 feet (7,315 metres).
Revised:  2003 largest freefall World Record: 13 December 2003, Eloy (Arizona), 300 skydivers 2004 largest freefall World Record: 6 February 2004, Korat (Thailand), 357 skydivers from around the world established a freefall formation at 280 km/h , which remained intact for exactly 6 seconds at a height of 24,000 feet (7,315 metres).
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Original: Sunder Deodhar (married  Sunder Patwardhan) is a female badminton player from India.
Revised: Sunder Deodhar (married name Sunder Patwardhan) is a female badminton player from India.
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Original:  Between 1942 and 1954 the Deodhar sisters, Suman, Sunder, and Tara  dominated the Indian National Badminton Champion competition .
Revised:  Between 1942 and 1954 the Deodhar sisters, Suman, Sunder, and Tara , dominated the Indian National Badminton Champion competition .
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Original:  Between 1942 and 1954 the Deodhar sisters, Suman, Sunder, and Tara  dominated the Indian National Badminton Champion competition .
Revised:  Between 1942 and 1954 the Deodhar sisters, Suman, Sunder, and Tara dominated the Indian National Badminton Championships .
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Original: Jihad Cool is term used by Western security experts concerning the re-branding of militant Jihadism into something fashionable, or "cool", to younger people through social media, magazines, rap videos, clothing, toys, propaganda videos, and other means.
Revised: Jihad Cool is term used by American security experts concerning the re-branding of militant Jihadism into something fashionable, or "cool", to younger people through social media, magazines, rap videos, clothing, toys, propaganda videos, and other means.
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Original: Jihad Cool is term used by American security experts concerning the re-branding of militant Jihadism into something fashionable, or "cool", to younger people through social media, magazines, rap videos, clothing, toys, propaganda videos, and other means.
Revised: Jihad Cool is term used by American security experts concerning the re-branding of militant jihadism into something fashionable, or "cool", to younger people through social media, magazines, rap videos, clothing, toys, propaganda videos, and other means.
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Original: Jihad Cool is term used by American security experts concerning the re-branding of militant jihadism into something fashionable, or "cool", to younger people through social media, magazines, rap videos, clothing, toys, propaganda videos, and other means.
Revised: Jihad Cool is term used by American security experts concerning the re-branding of militant jihadism into something fashionable, or "cool", to younger people through social media, magazines, rap videos, clothing, propaganda videos, and other means.
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Original: "Djamel Saiid Ali Ameziane", Guantanamo Docket, New York Times On December 5, 2013 he was transferred to Algeria, despite his protestations that it was likely that he would be tortured URL
Revised: "Djamel Saiid Ali Ameziane", Guantanamo Docket, New York Times On December 5, 2013 he was transferred to Algeria, despite his protestations that it was likely that he would be tortured there.
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Original: "Djamel Saiid Ali Ameziane", Guantanamo Docket, New York Times On December 5, 2013  he was transferred to Algeria, despite his protestations that it was likely that he would be tortured there.
Revised: "Djamel Saiid Ali Ameziane", Guantanamo Docket, New York Times On December 5, 2013 , he was transferred to Algeria, despite his protestations that it was likely that he would be tortured there.
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Original:  In 1992  he left the country because of the Algerian Civil War and moved to Austria, where he worked as a chef until 1995.
Revised:  In 1992 , he left the country because of the Algerian Civil War and moved to Austria, where he worked as a chef until 1995.
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Original:  On July 27  Michelle Shephard, writing in the Toronto Star, reported that other Canadian security officials had interviewed Ahcene Zemiri, Djamel Ameziane and Mohamedou Ould Slahi, three Guantanamo captives who had lived in Canada.
Revised:  On July 27 , Michelle Shephard, writing in the Toronto Star, reported that other Canadian security officials had interviewed Ahcene Zemiri, Djamel Ameziane and Mohamedou Ould Slahi, three Guantanamo captives who had lived in Canada.
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Original:  In 2008  Michelle Shephard, writing in the Toronto Star speculated that Ameziane might be transferred to Canada.
Revised:  In 2008 , Michelle Shephard, writing in the Toronto Star speculated that Ameziane might be transferred to Canada.
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Original:  Shephard wrote that Ameziane might benefit from the 2002 Canada-U.S. Safe Third Country Agreement: On August 22, 2008  the Canadian Press reported that Ameziane claimed he had been subjected to waterboarding at Guantanamo, a form of water torture.
Revised:  Shephard wrote that Ameziane might benefit from the 2002 Canada-U.S. Safe Third Country Agreement: On August 22, 2008 , the Canadian Press reported that Ameziane claimed he had been subjected to waterboarding at Guantanamo, a form of water torture.
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Original:  The Canadian Press quoted from a letter Ameziane wrote: Calls for his release On 22 October 2008  a coalition of organizations, including Montreal's Anglican Diocese, and human rights groups such as Amnesty International, issued a press release about their plans to sponsor Ameziane's request for entry to Canada as a refugee.
Revised:  The Canadian Press quoted from a letter Ameziane wrote: Calls for his release On October 22, 2008 a coalition of organizations, including Montreal's Anglican Diocese, and human rights groups such as Amnesty International, issued a press release about their plans to sponsor Ameziane's request for entry to Canada as a refugee.
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Original:  The Canadian Press quoted from a letter Ameziane wrote: Calls for his release On 22 October 2008  a coalition of organizations, including Montreal's Anglican Diocese, and human rights groups such as Amnesty International, issued a press release about their plans to sponsor Ameziane's request for entry to Canada as a refugee.
Revised:  The Canadian Press quoted from a letter Ameziane wrote: Calls for his release On 22 October 2008 , a coalition of organizations, including Montreal's Anglican Diocese, and human rights groups such as Amnesty International, issued a press release about their plans to sponsor Ameziane's request for entry to Canada as a refugee.
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Original:  On December 5, 2013  he was transferred to Algeria, despite his protestations that it was likely that he would be tortured there.
Revised:  On December 5, 2013 , he was transferred to Algeria, despite his protestations that it was likely that he would be tortured there.
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