wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Category:1933 births Category:1985 deaths Category: Kiowa people Category: Native American male artists Category:Apache people Category: Bacone College alumni Category: People from Lawton, Oklaho
Revised:  Category:1933 births Category:1985 deaths Category: Apache people Category: Native American male artists Category:Apache people Category: Bacone College alumni Category: People from Lawton, Oklaho
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Original:  Category:1933 births Category:1985 deaths Category: Kiowa people Category: Native American male artists Category:Apache people Category: Bacone College alumni Category: People from Lawton, Oklaho
Revised:  Category:1933 births Category:1985 deaths Category: Kiowa people Category: Bacone College alumni Category:Kiowa people Category: Bacone College alumni Category: People from Lawton, Oklaho
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Original:   August 20, 1933 – November 1985) was a Native American painter of Kiowa/Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache heritage from Oklahoma.
Revised:  , August 20, 1933 – November 1985) was a Native American painter of Kiowa/Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache heritage from Oklahoma.
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Original:   August 20, 1933 – November 1985) was a Native American painter of Kiowa/Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache heritage from Oklahoma.
Revised:  August 20, 1933 – November 1985) was a Native American painter , who was Kiowa/Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache heritage from Oklahoma.
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Original:   August 20, 1933 – November 1985) was a Native American painter of Kiowa/Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache heritage from Oklahoma.
Revised:  August 20, 1933 – November 1985) was a Native American painter of Kiowa/Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache from Oklahoma.
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Original:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Background David Emmett Williams ( native name: Tos-que ) was born  August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma  to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/ Kiowa-Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Background David Emmett Williams ( Tonkawa name: Tosque ) was born August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/ Kiowa-Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Background David Emmett Williams ( native name: Tos-que ) was born  August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma  to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/ Kiowa-Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Background David Emmett Williams ( native name: Tos-que ) was born on August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/ Kiowa-Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Background David Emmett Williams ( native name: Tos-que ) was born  August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma  to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/ Kiowa-Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Background David Emmett Williams ( native name: Tos-que ) was born August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma , to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/ Kiowa-Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Background David Emmett Williams ( native name: Tos-que ) was born  August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma  to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/ Kiowa-Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
Revised:  He painted in the Flatstyle painting technique that was taught at Bacone from the 1940s to the 1960s . Background David Emmett Williams ( native name: Tos-que ) was born August 20, 1933, in Lawton, Oklahoma to singer and leather-worker Emmett Williams (Tonkawa/ Kiowa Apache ) and his Kiowa wife, Jennie Sahkoodlequoie, who was descended of Sitting Bear.
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Original:  Census records confirm Williams was a full-blood , but show his father's heritage was Comanche.
Revised:  Census records confirm Williams was a full-blood but show his father's heritage was Comanche.
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Original:  He became serious and passionate about art in the early 1960s and worked in acrylic, gouache, pencil, prints and tempera .
Revised:  He became serious and passionate about art in the early 1960s and worked in acrylic, gouache, pencil, distemper, and printmaking .
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Original:  All of the artists of this period at Bacone were taught the Bacone style, a Flatstyle painting technique , which was often showcased at the Philbrook Museum of Art's Indian Annual, a competitive juried art show annual .
Revised:  All of the artists of this period at Bacone were taught the Bacone style, a Flatstyle painting style , which was often showcased at the Philbrook Museum of Art's Indian Annual, a competitive juried art show annual .
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Original:  All of the artists of this period at Bacone were taught the Bacone style, a Flatstyle painting technique , which was often showcased at the Philbrook Museum of Art's Indian Annual, a competitive juried art show annual .
Revised:  All of the artists of this period at Bacone were taught the Bacone style, a Flatstyle painting technique , which was often showcased at the Philbrook Museum of Art's Indian Annual, a competitive juried art show .
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Original:  William's first solo exhibit was at the Heard Museum in Phoenix, in 1964.
Revised:  William's first solo exhibition was at the Heard Museum in Phoenix, in 1964.
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Original:  By 1970, the Williams family had decided to move back to Oklahoma and were living in Tahlequah with their two sons.
Revised:  By 1970, the Williams family had decided to move back to Oklahoma and lived in Tahlequah with their two sons.
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Original:  the Owensboro Museum of Fine Art in Owensboro, Kentucky , among many others.
Revised:  the Owensboro Museum of Fine Art in Owensboro, Kentucky ; among many others.
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Original:  Selected works Woman Dancer, 1960 Plains Indian War Dance, 1963 Burial at Night, 1964 Kachina Dance, 1966 Comanche Rider, circa 1970s Empty Saddles - Return of War Party, circa 1970s Male Dancer, 1972 Kiowa Fancy Dancer, 1972 Kiowa Medicine Man, 1973 The Five Civilized Tribes, 1974 Hunter with Rifle, 1974 Visions to Come, 1974 The Last Remembrance, 1975 Pursued, 1979 Warriors Salute, 1979
Revised:  Selected works Woman Dancer, 1960 Plains Indian War Dance, 1963 Burial at Night, 1964 Kachina Dance, 1966 Comanche Rider, circa 1970s Empty Saddles : Return of War Party, circa 1970s Male Dancer, 1972 Kiowa Fancy Dancer, 1972 Kiowa Medicine Man, 1973 The Five Civilized Tribes, 1974 Hunter with Rifle, 1974 Visions to Come, 1974 The Last Remembrance, 1975 Pursued, 1979 Warriors Salute, 1979
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Original: David Emmett Williams (Tonkawa name: Tosque  , August 20, 1933 – November 8, 1985) was a Native American painter, who was Kiowa/Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache from Oklahoma.
Revised: David Emmett Williams (Tonkawa name: Tosque ) , August 20, 1933 – November 8, 1985) was a Native American painter, who was Kiowa/Tonkawa/Kiowa-Apache from Oklahoma.
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Original: Indonesian female models Category:People from Jakarta Category:Indonesian film actresses Category:21st-century Indonesian actresses Category:Indonesian television actresses Category:Indonesian television presenters Category:Living people Category:Indo people Category:Betawi people Category:Indonesian people of French descent Category:Indonesian former Muslims Category:Indonesian Roman Catholics Category:Converts to Roman Catholicism Category:Converts to Roman Catholicism from Isl
Revised: Indonesian female models Category:People from Jakarta Category:Indonesian film actresses Category:21st-century Indonesian actresses Category:Indonesian television actresses Category:Indonesian television presenters Category:Living people Category:Indo people Category:Betawi people Category:Indonesian people of French descent Category:Indonesian former Muslims Category:Indonesian Roman Catholics Category:Converts to Roman Catholicism from Isl
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Original: Indonesian female models Category:People from Jakarta Category:Indonesian film actresses Category:21st-century Indonesian actresses Category:Indonesian television actresses Category:Indonesian television presenters Category:Living people Category:Indo people Category:Betawi people Category:Indonesian people of French descent Category:Indonesian former Muslims Category:Indonesian Roman Catholics Category:Converts to Roman Catholicism from Islam Category: Women television presente
Revised: Indonesian female models Category:People from Jakarta Category:Indonesian film actresses Category:21st-century Indonesian actresses Category:Indonesian television actresses Category:Indonesian television presenters Category:Living people Category:Indo people Category:Betawi people Category:Indonesian people of French descent Category:Indonesian former Muslims Category:Indonesian Roman Catholics Category:Converts to Roman Catholicism from Islam Category: Indonesian women television presente
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Original:  He is President of CEPT University in Ahmedabad and leads HCP Design , Planning and Management Pvt.
Revised:  He is President of CEPT University in Ahmedabad and leads HCP Design Planning and Management Pvt.
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Original: Criticism Patel's firm HCP Design Planning and Management Private Limited has drawn criticism as they are the principal designers of the Central Vista Project.
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Original:  Later he studied at  School of Architecture, Center for Environmental Planning and Technology, CEPT, from 1978 to 1984.
Revised:  Later he studied at the School of Architecture, Center for Environmental Planning and Technology, CEPT, from 1978 to 1984.
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Original: Synopsis From Pleasure to Sin For the Jews, procreation was the vital aspect of sex, but it was celebrated as part of a polygamous male-centred culture.
Revised: Synopsis From pleasure to sin For the Jews, procreation was the vital aspect of sex, but it was celebrated as part of a polygamous male-centred culture.
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Original:  Clement of Alexandria taught that sex except for procreation is wrong and Origen castrated himself to avoid temptaion . Sexual Revolution Across Europe, women were accused of witchcraft by both Catholics and Protestants.
Revised:  Clement of Alexandria taught that sex except for procreation is wrong and Origen castrated himself to avoid temptation . Sexual Revolution Across Europe, women were accused of witchcraft by both Catholics and Protestants.
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Original:  Clement of Alexandria taught that sex except for procreation is wrong and Origen castrated himself to avoid temptaion . Sexual Revolution Across Europe, women were accused of witchcraft by both Catholics and Protestants.
Revised:  Clement of Alexandria taught that sex except for procreation is wrong and Origen castrated himself to avoid temptaion . Sexual revolution Across Europe, women were accused of witchcraft by both Catholics and Protestants.
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Original:  Many were tortured into confessing sex with the devil in  Würzburg  .
Revised:  Many were tortured into confessing sex with the devil in the Würzburg .
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Original: Christianity v The West Very often reforming legislation was supported by some within the church.
Revised: Christianity versus the West Very often reforming legislation was supported by some within the church.
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Original:  Bishop  Colenso argued in favour of tolerance of polygamy where it was traditional in Africa;
Revised:  Bishop John Colenso argued in favour of tolerance of polygamy where it was traditional in Africa;
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Original:  Category:2015 British television programme debuts Category:2015 British television programme endings Category:2010s British television series Category:BBC television documentaries Category:English-language television programs Category:2015 British television seasons Category:Human sexuality Category: Works about religi
Revised:  Category:2015 British television programme debuts Category:2015 British television programme endings Category:2010s British television series Category:BBC television documentaries Category:English-language television programs Category:2015 British television seasons Category:Human sexuality Category: Television programs about religi
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Original:  Informal and formal Internal and external Burning pupil books in your back garden (this is a radical new approach by Stuart Tunstall - proven to reduce teacher workload and increase pupil grades to whatever their targets have been set on FFT)
Revised:  Informal and formal Internal and external 
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Original:  The majority of assessments within the United States have normative standards based on the English-speaking culture, which does not adequately represent ELL URL Consequently, it would in many cases be inaccurate and inappropriate to draw conclusions from ELL students’ normative scores.
Revised:  The majority of assessments within the United States have normative standards based on the English-speaking culture, which does not adequately represent ELL populations. Consequently, it would in many cases be inaccurate and inappropriate to draw conclusions from ELL students’ normative scores.
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Original:  (ex: Do ESL students consistently perform differently on a writing exam than native English speakers?) Moskal, Barbara M., Leydens, Jon A (2000).
Revised:  (ex: Do ESL students consistently perform differently on a writing exam than native English speakers?) Leydens, Jon A (2000).
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Original: American expatriates in Nigeria Category:Columbia University staff Category:Women heads of universities and colleges Category:Living people Category:New College of Florida alumni Category:People in international development Category:Place of birth missing (living people) Category:Presidents of Dickinson College Category:University of Maryland Global Campus alumni Category:Vice-Chancellors of Nigerian universities Category:University Relations/rebecca.ikponwonba.aun.edu.
Revised: American expatriates in Nigeria Category:Columbia University staff Category:Women heads of universities and colleges Category:Living people Category:New College of Florida alumni Category:People in international development Category:Place of birth missing (living people) Category:Presidents of Dickinson College Category:University of Maryland Global Campus alumni Category:Vice-Chancellors of Nigerian universiti
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Original:  Life  Ensign was born in 1954.
Revised:  Life President Ensign was born in 1954.
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Original:  She earned her BA  from New College of Florida, and her PhD in International Political Economy from the University of Maryland University College .
Revised:  She earned her BA from New College of Florida, and her PhD in International Political Economy from the University of Maryland .
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Original:  She began her  administrative career at Columbia University in New York City .
Revised:  She began her academic and administrative career at Columbia University in New York City .
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Original:  There she combined roles of Professor of Politics and Economy with director of the International Political Economy Program .
Revised:  There she combined roles of Professor of Politics and Economy and Director of the International Political Economy Program .
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Original:  There she combined roles of Professor of Politics and Economy with director of the International Political Economy Program .
Revised:  There she combined roles of Professor of Politics and Economy with director of the International Political Economy Program 
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Original:  Ensign came to AUN from the University of the Pacific in California where she was Dean of the School of International Studies and Associate Provost for International Initiatives.
Revised:  Ensign came to AUN from the University of the Pacific in California where she was Dean of the School of International Studies at the University of the Pacific in California where she was also appointed Associate Provost for International Initiatives.
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Original:  In 2014 and 2015, parents in Maryland were investigated by their local Child Protective Services when their children walked home from a park unsupervised.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A caveat adds, "...nothing in this section 10 shall be construed to preempt State or local laws." Legal protections In 2018, Utah became the first state to enact legislation which explicitly protected parents' right to "free range" their children.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Legal protections In 2018, Utah became the first state to enact legislation which explicitly protected parents' right to "free range" their children.
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Original: Overview Hoping to enhance psychoanalysis in the pediatric world, Spock authored a book called The Common Sense Book of Baby and Child Care.
Revised:  Hoping to enhance psychoanalysis in the pediatric world, Spock authored a book called The Common Sense Book of Baby and Child Care.
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Original:  The perception of what constitutes neglect varies a lot depending of the State Law in place, the age of the children and if an injury occurred or not.
Revised:  The perception of what constitutes neglect varies a lot depending on the State Law in place, the age of the children and if an injury occurred or not.
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Original:  Seen as the opposite of helicopter parenting , the idea was popularized by pediatrician Benjamin Spock .
Revised:  Seen as the opposite of helicopter parenting .
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Original:  Other states, such as Delaware, or Colorado, based on states' child labor laws, will investigate reports of any child under the age of 12 being left alone, whereas other states, like North Carolina, have fire laws that stipulate a child under 8 should not be left home alone.
Revised:  Other states, such as Delaware, or Colorado, based on states' child labor laws, will investigate reports of any child under the age of 12 being left alone, whereas other states, like North Carolina, have firm laws that stipulate a child under 8 should not be left home alone.
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Original: The Soviet Civil Administration (SCA) functioned as the occupying government of northern Korea from October 3, 1945 until the founding of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea in 1948 although it governed concurrently after the setup of the Provisional People's Committee for North Korea in 1946.
Revised: The Soviet Civil Administration (SCA) functioned as the occupying government of northern Korea from October 3, 1945 until the founding of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea in 1948 ; it governed concurrently after the setup of the Provisional People's Committee for North Korea in 1946.
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Original:   Terentii Shtykov was the main proponent of setting up a centralized structure to coordinate Korean People's Committees.
Revised:  General Terentii Shtykov was the main proponent of setting up a centralized structure to coordinate Korean People's Committees.
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Original:  The setup was officially recommended by General Ivan Chistyakov and headed by General Andrei Romanenko in 1945 and  General Nikolai Lebedev in 1946.
Revised:  The setup was officially recommended by General Ivan Chistyakov and headed by General Andrei Romanenko in 1945 and by General Nikolai Lebedev in 1946.
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Original:  Behavior therapy , 44(1), 12-26.
Revised:  Behavior Therapy , 44(1), 12-26.
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Original:  For example, a patient with deficits in social skills may learn and rehearse proper social skills in one treatment session, then be asked to complete homework assignments before the next session that apply those newly learned skills (e.g., going to a social engagement , greeting five people each day , etc.) Falloon, I. R., Lindley, P., McDonald, R., & Marks, I. M. (1977).
Revised:  For example, a patient with deficits in social skills may learn and rehearse proper social skills in one treatment session, then be asked to complete homework assignments before the next session that apply those newly learned skills (e.g., going to a social engagement or greeting five people each day , etc.) Falloon, I. R., Lindley, P., McDonald, R., & Marks, I. M. (1977).
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Original:  For example, a patient with deficits in social skills may learn and rehearse proper social skills in one treatment session, then be asked to complete homework assignments before the next session that apply those newly learned skills (e.g., going to a social engagement , greeting five people each day , etc.) Falloon, I. R., Lindley, P., McDonald, R., & Marks, I. M. (1977).
Revised:  For example, a patient with deficits in social skills may learn and rehearse proper social skills in one treatment session, then be asked to complete homework assignments before the next session that apply those newly learned skills (e.g., going to a social engagement , greeting five people each day ). Falloon, I. R., Lindley, P., McDonald, R., & Marks, I. M. (1977).
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Original:  Clinical psychology review , 27(1), 46-57.
Revised:  Clinical Psychology Review , 27(1), 46-57.
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Original:  PloS one , 5(6), e10939.
Revised:  PloS One , 5(6), e10939.
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Original:  Behaviour research and therapy , 48(5), 368-376.
Revised:  Behaviour Research and Therapy , 48(5), 368-376.
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Original:  Journal of affective disorders , 116(3), 227-231.
Revised:  Journal of Affective Disorders , 116(3), 227-231.
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Original:  Cognitive therapy and research , 34(5), 429-438.
Revised:  Cognitive Therapy and Research , 34(5), 429-438.
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Original:  Journal of consulting and clinical psychology , 65(2), 203.
Revised:  Journal of Consulting and Clinical Psychology , 65(2), 203.
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Original:  The participant was encouraged to concretely define how she would tell whether she became ill or not (e.g., check for fever, coughing, aches, or other common symptoms of illness) and to test her belief as thoroughly as possible (e.g., if the participant believed she was more likely to get ill after touching the toilet seat and not washing her hands, she was encouraged to test this hypothesis as well .)
Revised:  The participant was encouraged to concretely define how she would tell whether she became ill or not (e.g., check for fever, coughing, aches, or other common symptoms of illness) and to test her belief as thoroughly as possible (e.g., if the participant believed she was more likely to get ill after touching the toilet seat and not washing her hands, she was encouraged to test this hypothesis as well ).
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Original:  Behavior therapy , 44(1), 162-172.
Revised:  Behavior Therapy , 44(1), 162-172.
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