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Original: On November 2  Ted Haggard resigned from  National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship  New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is  leading social conservative voice.
Revised: On November 2 Ted Haggard resigned from National Association of Evangelicals and his pastorship New Life Church after allegations that he repeatedly engaged in homosexual sex with a prostitute (Mike Jones) and used methamphetamines . Haggard, a critic of gay-marriage and homosexuality, is a leading social conservative voice.
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Original:  In his chuch Haggard preached , "we don't have to debate about what we should think about homosexual activity, it's written in the Bible."
Revised:  In his church, Haggard preached "we don't have to debate about what we should think about homosexual activity, it's written in the Bible."
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Original: Large rallies occured in cities around the globe yesterday, to call on goverments to take greater action against climate change.
Revised: Large rallies were held in cities around the globe yesterday, to call on goverments to take greater action against climate change.
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Original: Large rallies occured in cities around the globe yesterday, to call on goverments to take greater action against climate change.
Revised: Large rallies occured in cities around the globe yesterday, to call on governments to take greater action against climate change.
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Original: Britons celebrate a national day of thanksgiving that the Gunpowder plot did not destroy their beloved king and parliament.
Revised: Britons celebrate a national day of thanksgiving that the Gunpowder plot did not destroy their king and parliament.
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Original:  The event is not only celebrated in the United Kingdom, but other Commonwealth countries including New Zealand, South Africa, Newfoundland, Bahamas, Waterloo, , ON, Saint Kitts and formerly Australia.
Revised:  The event is not only celebrated in the United Kingdom, but other Commonwealth countries including New Zealand, South Africa, Newfoundland, Bahamas, Waterloo, ON, Saint Kitts and formerly Australia.
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Original:  The event is not only celebrated in the United Kingdom, but other Commonwealth countries including New Zealand, South Africa, Newfoundland, Bahamas, Waterloo, ON  , Saint Kitts and formerly Australia.
Revised:  The event is not only celebrated in the United Kingdom, but other Commonwealth countries including New Zealand, South Africa, Newfoundland, Bahamas, Waterloo, ON . , Saint Kitts and formerly Australia.
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Original:  The event is not only celebrated in the United Kingdom, but other Commonwealth countries including New Zealand, South Africa, Newfoundland, Bahamas, Waterloo , ON. , Saint Kitts and formerly Australia.
Revised:  The event is not only celebrated in the United Kingdom, but other Commonwealth countries including New Zealand, South Africa, Newfoundland, Bahamas, Waterloo ON , Saint Kitts and formerly Australia.
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Original: ]] Today, November 5, is Guy Fawkes Night.
Revised: ]] November 5, is Guy Fawkes Night.
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Original: Italian security officer Nicola Calipari has been killed  and Giuliana Sgrena as well as two other security agents have been wounded after U.S. forces opened fire on the car they were travelling in shortly after her release from captivity.
Revised: Italian security officer Nicola Calipari has been killed , and Giuliana Sgrena as well as two other security agents have been wounded after U.S. forces opened fire on the car they were travelling in shortly after her release from captivity.
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Original:  Multinational Force Iraq officials have stated that the car approached a military check-point at speed at 8.55pm Baghdad time on Friday.
Revised:  Multinational Force Iraq officials have stated that the car approached a military check-point at speed at 8:55pm Baghdad time on Friday.
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Original:  She said the shooting continued "because the driver wasn't even managing to explain that we were Italian ".
Revised:  She said the shooting continued "because the driver wasn't even managing to explain that we were Italian ."
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Original:    Italian security officer Nicola Calipari has been killed, and Giuliana Sgrena as well as two other security agents have been wounded after U.S. forces opened fire on the car they were travelling in shortly after Sregna's release from captivity.
Revised:  Italian security officer Nicola Calipari had been killed, and Giuliana Sgrena as well as two other security agents have been wounded after U.S. forces opened fire on the car they were travelling in shortly after Sregna's release from captivity.
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Original:  Multinational Force Iraq officials have stated that the car approached a military check-point at speed at 8:55pm Baghdad time on Friday.
Revised:  Multinational Force Iraq officials have stated that the car approached a military check-point at 8:55pm Baghdad time on Friday.
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Original:  "I remember only fire..a rain of fire and bullets came at us, forever silencing the happy voices from a few minutes earlier." Suddenly, she said, she remembered her captors' warning her "to be careful because the Americans don't want you to return."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sgrena said the driver began shouting that they were Italian, then "Nicola Calipari dove on top of me to protect me and immediately, and I mean immediately, I felt his last breath as he died on me."
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sgrena said the driver began shouting that they were Italian, then "Nicola Calipari dove on top of me to protect me and immediately, and I mean immediately, I felt his last breath as he died on me."
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Original:  "I remember only fire..a rain of fire and bullets came at us, forever silencing the happy voices from a few minutes earlier." Suddenly, she said, she remembered her captors' warning her "to be careful because the Americans don't want you to return."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Sgrena said the driver began shouting that they were Italian, then "Nicola Calipari dove on top of me to protect me and immediately, and I mean immediately, I felt his last breath as he died on me."
Revised:  "I remember only fire..a rain of fire and bullets came at us, forever silencing the happy voices from a few minutes earlier." Suddenly, she said, she remembered her captors' warning her "to be careful because the Americans don't want you to return."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Italian security officer Nicola Calipari had been killed, and Giuliana Sgrena as well as two other security agents have been wounded after U.S. forces opened fire on the car they were travelling in shortly after Sregna's release from captivity.
Revised:  Italian security officer Nicola Calipari has been killed, and Giuliana Sgrena as well as two other security agents have been wounded after U.S. forces opened fire on the car they were travelling in shortly after Sregna's release from captivity.
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Original: Multinational Force Iraq officials have stated that the car approached a military check-point at speed at 8:55pm Baghdad time on Friday.
Revised: Multinational Force Iraq officials have stated that the car approached a military check-point at 8:55pm Baghdad time on Friday.
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Original:   "    I remember only fire..a rain of fire and bullets came at us, forever silencing the happy voices from a few minutes earlier." Suddenly, she said, she remembered her captors' warning her "to be careful because the Americans don't want you to return." "There was suddenly this shooting, we were hit by a hail of gunfire, and I was speaking with Nicola, who was telling me about what had been happening in Italy in the meantime, when he leaned towards me, probably also to protect me.
Revised:  " " I remember only fire..a rain of fire and bullets came at us, forever silencing the happy voices from a few minutes earlier." Suddenly, she said, she remembered her captors' warning her "to be careful because the Americans don't want you to return." "There was suddenly this shooting, we were hit by a hail of gunfire, and I was speaking with Nicola, who was telling me about what had been happening in Italy in the meantime, when he leaned towards me, probably also to protect me.
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Original:  She said the shooting continued "because the driver wasn't even managing to explain that we were Italian."
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Original:  When questioned if the car was going too fast as it approached the U.S. troops, she said: "We weren't going particularly fast given that type of situation."
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Original:  But Ms Sgrena said: " There was no bright light, no signal, and at a certain point, from one side, a firestorm erupted.
Revised:  " There was no bright light, no signal, and at a certain point, from one side, a firestorm erupted.
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Original:  Suddenly, she said, she remembered her captors' warning her "to be careful because the Americans don't want you to return."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " There was suddenly this shooting, we were hit by a hail of gunfire, and I was speaking with Nicola, who was telling me about what had been happening in Italy in the meantime, when he leaned towards me, probably also to protect me.
Revised:  Suddenly, she said, she remembered her captors' warning her "to be careful because the Americans don't want you to return."%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There was suddenly this shooting, we were hit by a hail of gunfire, and I was speaking with Nicola, who was telling me about what had been happening in Italy in the meantime, when he leaned towards me, probably also to protect me.
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Original: Figures released by Simon Power, law and order spokesman for the National party, show that the New Zealand Labour led government lets 81\% of all prisoners don't do any work while in prison.
Revised: Figures released by Simon Power, law and order spokesman for the National party, show that the New Zealand Labour led government lets 81\% of all prisoners not do any work while in prison.
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Original:  Such is the typical response from a group that feels no person should ever be fully accountable for their own actions.
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Original:  where the party most insistent upon an American occupation of Iraq (Republican - GOP) lagged in polls due to domestic controversies . (This -- of course -- has more to do with the author of the original article than its subject.
Revised:  where the party most insistent upon an American occupation of Iraq (Republican - GOP) lagged in polls due to domestic controversies 
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Original:  There is heavy firing and mortar shells have landed near the Abu Hanifa mosque.
Revised:  There was heavy firing and mortar shells have landed near the Abu Hanifa mosque.
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Original:  There is heavy firing and mortar shells have landed near the Abu Hanifa mosque.
Revised:  There is heavy firing and mortar shells landed near the Abu Hanifa mosque.
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Original:  200px|File photo of Saddam Hussein appearing before the Tribunal on July 1, 2004
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Original:  The company was discovered to have been in possesion of thousands of pages of documentation from Lockheed Martin, Boeing's rival during the 1998 evolved expendable launch vehicle source selection process.
Revised:  The company was discovered to have been in possession of thousands of pages of documentation from Lockheed Martin, Boeing's rival during the 1998 evolved expendable launch vehicle source selection process.
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Original:  Taiwan's President Chen Shui-bian even threatened to introduce an "anti-annexation" law to oppose China's move  
Revised:  Taiwan's President Chen Shui-bian even threatened to introduce an "anti-annexation" law to oppose China's move . 
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Original:  Taiwan's President Chen Shui-bian even threatened to introduce an "anti-annexation" law to oppose China's move . sw/details.cfm?id=10881 |title= China proposes massive military spending hik
Revised:  Taiwan's President Chen Shui-bian even threatened to introduce an "anti-annexation" law to oppose China's move sw/details.cfm?id=10881 |title= China proposes massive military spending hik
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Original:  Taiwan's President Chen Shui-bian even threatened to introduce an "anti-annexation" law to oppose China's move . sw/details.cfm?id=10881 |title= China proposes massive military spending hik
Revised:  Taiwan's President Chen Shui-bian even threatened to introduce an "anti-annexation" law to oppose China's move . 
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Original: A few days latter , on October 27th, Soghoian was visited by the FBI who told him to take down the site.
Revised: A few days later , on October 27th, Soghoian was visited by the FBI who told him to take down the site.
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Original: In Febuary 2005, Senator Charles Schumer noticed this loophole in no-fly list.
Revised: In February 2005, Senator Charles Schumer noticed this loophole in no-fly list.
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Original:  He urged the TSA to "check every passenger ’ s ID against the passenger ’ s face and his boarding pass and ticket", as has been done immediately after the September 11th attacks.
Revised:  He urged the TSA to "check every passenger ' s ID against the passenger ’ s face and his boarding pass and ticket", as has been done immediately after the September 11th attacks.
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Original:  He urged the TSA to "check every passenger ’ s ID against the passenger ’ s face and his boarding pass and ticket", as has been done immediately after the September 11th attacks.
Revised:  He urged the TSA to "check every passenger ’ s ID against the passenger ' s face and his boarding pass and ticket", as has been done immediately after the September 11th attacks.
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Original: Christopher Soghoian, 24, a doctoral student in information security at Indiana University , released a boarding pass generator for Northwest Airlines on October 25th.
Revised: Christopher Soghoian, 24, a doctoral student in information security at , released a boarding pass generator for Northwest Airlines on October 25th.
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Original: Christopher Soghoian, 24, a doctoral student in information security at Indiana University , released a boarding pass generator for Northwest Airlines on October 25th.
Revised: Christopher Soghoian, 24, a doctoral student in information security at Indiana University , released a boarding pass generator for on October 25th.
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Original:  A few days later, on October 27th, Soghoian was visited by the FBI who told him to take down the site.
Revised:  A few days later, on October 27th, Soghoian was visited by the who told him to take down the site.
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Original:  Rep. Ed Markey (D-Mass.) had called for Soghoian to be arrested in October.
Revised:  Representative (D-Mass.) had called for Soghoian to be arrested in October.
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Original:  Fake boarding passes are quite easy to create in Microsoft Word ;
Revised:  Fake boarding passes are quite easy to create in ;
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Original:  Indeed, Amnesty International has created a similarly passable fake boarding pass for their AirTorture fundraising site.
Revised:  Indeed, has created a similarly passable fake boarding pass for their AirTorture fundraising site.
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Original:  In February 2005, Senator Charles Schumer noticed this loophole in no-fly list.
Revised:  In February 2005, Senator noticed this loophole in no-fly list.
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Original:  He urged the TSA to "check every passenger's ID against the passenger's face and his boarding pass and ticket", as has been done immediately after the September 11th attacks .
Revised:  He urged the to "check every passenger's ID against the passenger's face and his boarding pass and ticket", as has been done immediately after the September 11th attacks .
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Original:  He urged the TSA to "check every passenger's ID against the passenger's face and his boarding pass and ticket", as has been done immediately after the September 11th attacks .
Revised:  He urged the TSA to "check every passenger's ID against the passenger's face and his boarding pass and ticket", as has been done immediately after the .
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Original:  It is reported that Margaret Beckett, UK Foreign Secretary, is considering becoming the first UK Government Minister to admit to a link between the invasion of Iraq and the threat of terrorism in UK.
Revised: British Foreign Secretary, Margaret Beckett. It is reported that Margaret Beckett, UK Foreign Secretary, is considering becoming the first UK Government Minister to admit to a link between the invasion of Iraq and the threat of terrorism in UK.
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Original:  She has already disagreed openly with Prime Minister Blair recently by demanding that there be public debate into the need for the replacement of the Trident missile system and the Royal Navy's Vanguard class submarines, by apologising for the Iraq invasion and by not disagreeing with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble  
Revised:  She has already disagreed openly with Prime Minister Blair recently by demanding that there be public debate into the need for the replacement of the Trident missile system and the Royal Navy's Vanguard class submarines, by apologising for the Iraq invasion and by not disagreeing with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble . 
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Original:  She has already disagreed openly with Prime Minister Blair recently by demanding that there be public debate into the need for the replacement of the Trident missile system and the Royal Navy's Vanguard class submarines, by apologising for the Iraq invasion and by not disagreeing with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble  
Revised:  She has already disagreed openly with Prime Minister Blair recently by demanding that there be public debate into the need for the replacement of the Trident missile system and the Royal Navy's Vanguard class submarines, by apologising for the Iraq invasion and by not disagreeing with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble Related new
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Original: On November 5, 2006, King Abdullah II  met with 90 survivors of the Beslan School Massacre during thier week long vacation in Jordan at his Majesty 's expense.
Revised: On November 5, 2006, King Abdullah II of Jordan met with 90 survivors of the Beslan School Massacre during thier week long vacation in Jordan at his Majesty 's expense.
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Original: On November 5, 2006, King Abdullah II  met with 90 survivors of the Beslan School Massacre during thier week long vacation in Jordan at his Majesty 's expense.
Revised: On November 5, 2006, King Abdullah II met with 90 survivors of the Beslan School Massacre during thier week long vacation in Jordan , organised at the King 's expense.
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Original:  The event took place at  King's Academy, in Madaba, Jordan
Revised:  The event took place at the King's Academy, in Madaba, Jordan
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Original:  This year's unfortunate guest appearance was  a hugely grotesque likeness of  U.S. Secretary of State w:Condoleeza Rice|Condoleeza Rice .
Revised:  This year's unfortunate guest appearance was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of U.S. Secretary of State w:Condoleeza Rice|Condoleeza Rice .
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Original:  This year's unfortunate guest appearance was  a hugely grotesque likeness of  U.S. Secretary of State w:Condoleeza Rice|Condoleeza Rice .
Revised:  This year's unfortunate guest appearance was a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State w:Condoleeza Rice|Condoleeza Rice .
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Original:  This year's unfortunate guest appearance was  a hugely grotesque likeness of  U.S. Secretary of State w:Condoleeza Rice|Condoleeza Rice .
Revised:  This year's unfortunate guest appearance was a hugely grotesque likeness of U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice .
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Original:  Six arrests occured in respect of criminal damage and public order offences, but the event was less rowdy than in previous years and eras in the history of the Bonfire.
Revised:  Six arrests occurred in respect of criminal damage and public order offences, but the event was less rowdy than in previous years and eras in the history of the Bonfire.
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Original:  In addition to the effigies, flaming crosses were carried in recognition of the town's 17 Protestant Martyrs.
Revised:  In addition to effigies, flaming crosses were carried in recognition of the town's 17 Protestant Martyrs.
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Original:  These led up to elaborate costumed parades where participants dressed as Vikings, Antique firemen, Mongol warriors, and Zulus (including for the first time at Lewes, a female cheiftan).
Revised:  These preceded elaborate costumed parades where participants dressed as Vikings, Antique firemen, Mongol warriors, and Zulus (including for the first time at Lewes, a female cheiftan).
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Original:  This year's unfortunate guest appearance was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice.
Revised:  One of this year's unfortunate guest appearance was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice.
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Original:  This year's unfortunate guest appearance was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice.
Revised:  This year's unfortunate guest appearances was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice.
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Original: The event were not without incident.
Revised: The event was not without incident.
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Original:  The effigies this year included George Bush, Condoleezza Rice (as Wonder Woman) and Crocodille Hunter Steve Irwin.
Revised:  The effigies this year included George Bush, Condoleezza Rice (as Wonder Woman) and Crocodile Hunter Steve Irwin.
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Original:  One of this year's unfortunate guest appearances was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State Condoleeza Rice.
Revised:  One of this year's unfortunate guest appearances was also rendered as a hugely grotesque likeness of the U.S. Secretary of State Condoleezza Rice.
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Original:  These preceded elaborate costumed parades where participants dressed as Vikings, Antique firemen, Mongol warriors, and Zulus (including for the first time at Lewes, a female chieftan ).
Revised:  These preceded elaborate costumed parades where participants dressed as Vikings, Antique firemen, Mongol warriors, and Zulus (including for the first time at Lewes, a female chieftain ).
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Original:  Arthurian Kinghts and pirates were also featured.
Revised:  Arthurian Knights and pirates were also featured.
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Original:  The effigies this year included George Bush, Condoleezza Rice (as Wonder Woman) and Crocodile Hunter Steve Irwin .
Revised:  The effigies this year included George Bush, Condoleezza Rice (as Wonder Woman) and Crocodile Hunter .
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Original:  These include The Pope, Guy Fawkes and other unpopular figures.
Revised:  These include The Pope, and other unpopular figures.
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