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Original:  As slavery was prohibited between Christians and could only be imposed in non-Christian prisoners of war or on men already sold as slaves, the debate on Christianization was particularly acute during the early 16th century, when Spanish c|onquerors and settlers sought to mobilize indigenous labor.
Revised:  As slavery was prohibited between Christians and could only be imposed in non-Christian prisoners of war or on men already sold as slaves, the debate on Christianization was particularly acute during the early 16th century, when Spanish conquerors and settlers sought to mobilize indigenous labor.
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Original:  As slavery was prohibited between Christians and could only be imposed in non-Christian prisoners of war or on men already sold as slaves, the debate on Christianization was particularly acute during the early 16th century, when Spanish c|onquerors and settlers sought to mobilize indigenous labor.
Revised:  As slavery was prohibited between Christians and could only be imposed in non-Christian prisoners of war or on men already sold as slaves, the debate on Christianization was particularly acute during the early 16th century, when Spanish c|onquerors and settlers sought to mobilize Indigenous labor.
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Original:  The process of Christianization was at first violent: when the first Franciscans arrived in Mexico in 1524, they burned the  places dedicated to pagan cult ."Espagnols-Indiens: le choc des civilisations", in L'Histoire n°322, July–August 2007, pp. 14–21 (interview with Christian Duverger, teacher at the EHESS) However, in pre-Columbian Mesoamerica, burning the temple of a conquered group was standard practice, shown in indigenous manuscripts, such as Codex Mendoza.
Revised:  The process of Christianization was at first violent: when the first Franciscans arrived in Mexico in 1524, they burned the sacred places dedicated to pagan cult ."Espagnols-Indiens: le choc des civilisations", in L'Histoire n°322, July–August 2007, pp. 14–21 (interview with Christian Duverger, teacher at the EHESS) However, in pre-Columbian Mesoamerica, burning the temple of a conquered group was standard practice, shown in indigenous manuscripts, such as Codex Mendoza.
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Original:  The process of Christianization was at first violent: when the first Franciscans arrived in Mexico in 1524, they burned the  places dedicated to pagan cult ."Espagnols-Indiens: le choc des civilisations", in L'Histoire n°322, July–August 2007, pp. 14–21 (interview with Christian Duverger, teacher at the EHESS) However, in pre-Columbian Mesoamerica, burning the temple of a conquered group was standard practice, shown in indigenous manuscripts, such as Codex Mendoza.
Revised:  The process of Christianization was at first violent: when the first Franciscans arrived in Mexico in 1524, they burned the places dedicated to the Indigenous peoples' native religions ."Espagnols-Indiens: le choc des civilisations", in L'Histoire n°322, July–August 2007, pp. 14–21 (interview with Christian Duverger, teacher at the EHESS) However, in pre-Columbian Mesoamerica, burning the temple of a conquered group was standard practice, shown in indigenous manuscripts, such as Codex Mendoza.
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Original:  The process of Christianization was at first violent: when the first Franciscans arrived in Mexico in 1524, they burned the  places dedicated to pagan cult ."Espagnols-Indiens: le choc des civilisations", in L'Histoire n°322, July–August 2007, pp. 14–21 (interview with Christian Duverger, teacher at the EHESS) However, in pre-Columbian Mesoamerica, burning the temple of a conquered group was standard practice, shown in indigenous manuscripts, such as Codex Mendoza.
Revised:  The process of Christianization was at first violent: when the first Franciscans arrived in Mexico in 1524, they burned the places dedicated to pagan cult ."Espagnols-Indiens: le choc des civilisations", in L'Histoire n°322, July–August 2007, pp. 14–21 (interview with Christian Duverger, teacher at the EHESS) However, in pre-Columbian Mesoamerica, burning the temple of a conquered group was standard practice, shown in Indigenous manuscripts, such as Codex Mendoza.
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Original:  Conquered indigenous groups expected to take on the gods of their new overlords, adding them to the existing pantheon.
Revised:  Conquered Indigenous groups expected to take on the gods of their new overlords, adding them to the existing pantheon.
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Original:  They likely were unaware that their conversion to Christianity entailed the complete and irrevocable renunciation of their old religious beliefs .
Revised:  They likely were unaware that their conversion to Christianity entailed the complete and irrevocable renunciation of their ancestral religious beliefs and practices .
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Original:  In 1539  Mexican bishop Juan de Zumárraga oversaw the trial and execution of indigenous nobleman Carlos of Texcoco for apostasy.
Revised:  In 1539 , Mexican bishop Juan de Zumárraga oversaw the trial and execution of indigenous nobleman Carlos of Texcoco for apostasy.
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Original:  In 1539  Mexican bishop Juan de Zumárraga oversaw the trial and execution of indigenous nobleman Carlos of Texcoco for apostasy.
Revised:  In 1539 Mexican bishop Juan de Zumárraga oversaw the trial and execution of the Indigenous nobleman Carlos of Texcoco for apostasy.
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Original:  Following that, the church removed indigenous converts from the jurisdiction of the inquisition , since it had a chilling effect on evangelization.
Revised:  Following that, the Catholic Church removed Indigenous converts from the jurisdiction of the inquisition , since it had a chilling effect on evangelization.
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Original:  Following that, the church removed indigenous converts from the jurisdiction of the inquisition , since it had a chilling effect on evangelization.
Revised:  Following that, the church removed indigenous converts from the jurisdiction of the Inquisition , since it had a chilling effect on evangelization.
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Original:  In creating a protected group of Christians, indigenous men no longer could aspire to be ordained Christian priests.
Revised:  In creating a protected group of Christians, Indigenous men no longer could aspire to be ordained Christian priests.
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Original:  Throughout the Americas, the Jesuits were active in converting the indigenous .
Revised:  Throughout the Americas, the Jesuits were active in converting the Indigenous peoples .
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Original: Christian conversion [[File:13.- 50003 0004 - Alonso de Molina - Vocabulario en lengua mexicana y castellana c 1565.tif|Franciscan Alonso de Molina's 1565 Nahuatl (Aztec) dictionary, conceived for friars to communicate with the Indigenous peoples in central Mexico in their own language.
Revised: Christianization [[File:13.- 50003 0004 - Alonso de Molina - Vocabulario en lengua mexicana y castellana c 1565.tif|Franciscan Alonso de Molina's 1565 Nahuatl (Aztec) dictionary, conceived for friars to communicate with the Indigenous peoples in central Mexico in their own language.
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Original:  Spain was the most active in converting Indigenous peoples to Christianity.
Revised:  Spain was the most active in attempting to convert the Indigenous peoples to Christianity.
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Original: Religious discrimination, persecution, and violence toward the Indigenous peoples' native religions was systematically perpetrated by the European Christian colonizers and settlers since the 16th century onwards.
Revised: Religious discrimination, persecution, and violence toward the Indigenous peoples' native religions was systematically perpetrated by the European Christian colonists and settlers since the 16th century onwards.
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Original:  [[File:Narratio Regionum indicarum per Hispanos Quosdam devastatarum verissima Theodore de Bry.jpg|Depiction of Spanish treatment of the indigenous populations in the Caribbean by Theodore de Bry, illustrating Spanish Dominican friar Bartolomé de Las Casas's indictment of early Spanish cruelty, known as the Black legend, and indigenous barbarity, including human cannibalism, in an attempt to justify their enslavement  ]] African Slave Trade [[File:
Revised:  [[File:Narratio Regionum indicarum per Hispanos Quosdam devastatarum verissima Theodore de Bry.jpg|Depiction of Spanish treatment of the indigenous populations in the Caribbean by Theodore de Bry, illustrating Spanish Dominican friar Bartolomé de Las Casas's indictment of early Spanish cruelty, known as the Black legend, and indigenous barbarity, including human cannibalism, in an attempt to justify their enslavement . ]] African Slave Trade [[File:
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Original:  [[File:Narratio Regionum indicarum per Hispanos Quosdam devastatarum verissima Theodore de Bry.jpg|Depiction of Spanish treatment of the indigenous populations in the Caribbean by Theodore de Bry, illustrating Spanish Dominican friar Bartolomé de Las Casas's indictment of early Spanish cruelty, known as the Black legend, and indigenous barbarity, including human cannibalism, in an attempt to justify their enslavement  ]] African Slave Trade [[File:
Revised:  [[File:Narratio Regionum indicarum per Hispanos Quosdam devastatarum verissima Theodore de Bry.jpg|Depiction of Spanish treatment of the indigenous populations in the Caribbean by Theodore de Bry, illustrating Spanish Dominican friar Bartolomé de Las Casas's indictment of early Spanish cruelty, known as the Black legend, and indigenous barbarity, including human cannibalism, in an attempt to justify their enslavement ]] [[File:
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Original: Triangle_trade2.png|Triangular trade between Europe, Africa, and the Americas . ]] [[File:Tobacco cultivation (Virginia, ca. 1670).jpg|African slaves 17th-century in a tobacco plantation, Virginia, 1670.
Revised: Triangle_trade2.png|Triangular trade between Europe, Africa, and the Americas ]] [[File:Tobacco cultivation (Virginia, ca. 1670).jpg|African slaves 17th-century in a tobacco plantation, Virginia, 1670.
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Original: ]] Europeans enslaved indigenous peoples where they lived in the Americas and transported African slaves to work on large-scale plantations.
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Original:  Slavery was not unknown in indigenous societies.
Revised:  Slavery was not unknown in Indigenous societies.
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Original:  With the arrival of European colonists, enslavement of indigenous peoples "became commodified, expanded in unexpected ways, and came to resemble the kinds of human trafficking that are recognizable to us today".
Revised:  With the arrival of European colonists, enslavement of Indigenous peoples "became commodified, expanded in unexpected ways, and came to resemble the kinds of human trafficking that are recognizable to us today".
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Original:  It is estimated that from Columbus's arrival to the end of the nineteenth century between 2.5 and 5 million Native Americans were forced into slavery.
Revised:  It is estimated that from Columbus's arrival to the end of the 19th century between 2.5 and 5 million Native Americans were forced into slavery.
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Original:  The Spanish crown tried to terminate the system through the Laws of Burgos (1512–13) and the New Laws of the Indies (1542).
Revised:  The Spanish Crown tried to terminate the system through the Laws of Burgos (1512–13) and the New Laws of the Indies (1542).
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Original: Upon the signing of the Treaty of Tordesillas in 1494, Portugal and Spain agreed to divide the Earth in two , with Portugal having dominion over non-Christian lands in the eastern half , and Spain over those in the western half.
Revised: In terms of the Treaty of Tordesillas in 1494, Portugal and Spain agreed to divide the Earth in two , with Portugal having dominion over non-Christian lands in the eastern half , and Spain over those in the western half.
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Original: Upon the signing of the Treaty of Tordesillas in 1494, Portugal and Spain agreed to divide the Earth in two , with Portugal having dominion over non-Christian lands in the eastern half , and Spain over those in the western half.
Revised: Upon the signing of the Treaty of Tordesillas in 1494, Portugal and Spain agreed to divide the Earth in two , with Portugal having dominion over non-Christian lands east of the line , and Spain over those in the western half.
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Original:  It quickly became clear to other Western European powers that they too could benefit from voyages west and by the 1530s, the British and French had begun colonizing the northeast tip of the Americas.
Revised:  By the 1530s, the British and French had begun colonizing the northeast tip of the Americas.
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Original:  It was named a World Heritage site by UNESCO in 1978.
Revised:  It was named a World Heritage Site by UNESCO in 1978.
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Original: Although the Norse had explored and colonized northeastern North America c. 1000 CE , the later and more well-known wave of European colonization of the Americas took place in the Americas between about 1492 CE and 1800 CE , during the Age of Exploration.
Revised: Although the Norse had explored and colonized northeastern North America c. 1000 AD , the later and more well-known wave of European colonization of the Americas took place in the Americas between about 1492 CE and 1800 CE , during the Age of Exploration.
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Original: Although the Norse had explored and colonized northeastern North America c. 1000 CE , the later and more well-known wave of European colonization of the Americas took place in the Americas between about 1492 CE and 1800 CE , during the Age of Exploration.
Revised: Although the Norse had explored and colonized northeastern North America c. 1000 CE , the later and more well-known wave of European colonization of the Americas took place in the Americas between about 1492 AD and 1800 CE , during the Age of Exploration.
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Original: Although the Norse had explored and colonized northeastern North America c. 1000 CE , the later and more well-known wave of European colonization of the Americas took place in the Americas between about 1492 CE and 1800 CE , during the Age of Exploration.
Revised: Although the Norse had explored and colonized northeastern North America c. 1000 CE , the later and more well-known wave of European colonization of the Americas took place in the Americas between about 1492 CE and 1800 AD , during the Age of Exploration.
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Original:   Personal life Fabrizio is a Brooklyn native, and grew up on Long Island in New York. 
Revised:  Personal life Fabrizio is a Brooklyn native, and grew up on Long Island in New York. Notes
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Original:  On January 8, 2019, Paul Manafort's attorneys failed to redact and inadvertantly revealed that Mueller's prosecutors knew that 2016 voter information and polling data had been shared with pro-Kremlin Ukrainians through Konstantin Kilimnik to Serhiy Lyovochkin and Rinat Akhmetov.
Revised:  On January 8, 2019, Paul Manafort's attorneys failed to redact and inadvertently revealed that Mueller's prosecutors knew that 2016 voter information and polling data had been shared with pro-Kremlin Ukrainians through Konstantin Kilimnik to Serhiy Lyovochkin and Rinat Akhmetov.
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Original:  In February 2018, he was questioned by Robert Mueller's Special Counsel team about polling data shared with pro-Kremlin pro-Putin individuals.
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Original:  MMSC was the biggest vendor to the top pro-Trump Rebuilding America Now super PAC   .
Revised:  MMSC was the biggest vendor to the top pro-Trump Rebuilding America Now super PAC . .
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Original: Mueller's Special Counsel investigations In February 2018, Fabrizio was questioned by Robert Meuller 's team to determine if voter information and polling data was shared with the Kremlin during the 2016 United States elections.
Revised: Mueller's Special Counsel investigations In February 2018, Fabrizio was questioned by Robert Mueller 's team to determine if voter information and polling data was shared with the Kremlin during the 2016 United States elections.
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Original: Rukmini Maitra  is an Indian model and actress from Calcutta , who has worked as a model for various regional, national, and international brands and magazines.
Revised: Rukmini Maitra () is an Indian model and actress from Calcutta , who has worked as a model for various regional, national, and international brands and magazines.
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Original:  After having established herself in the world of fashion, Maitra made her silver screen debut in 2017.
Revised:  After having established herself in the world of fashion, Maitra made her debut in films in 2017.
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Original:  She is going to make Bollywood debut opposite Vidyut Jammwal in upcoming film Sanak.
Revised:  She is going to make Bollywood debut opposite Vidyut Jammwal in film Sanak.
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Original:  She is going to make Bollywood debut opposite Vidyut Jammwal in film Sanak.
Revised:  She is in Bollywood debut opposite Vidyut Jammwal in film Sanak.
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Original: Rukmini Maitra ( ) is an Indian model and Bollywood and Bengali actress from Kolkata, who has worked as a model for various regional, national, and international brands and magazines.
Revised: Rukmini Maitra ( nds and magazines.
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Original: Rukmini Maitra (  nds and magazines.
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Original:  She is in Bollywood debut opposite Vidyut Jammwal in  film Sanak.
Revised:  She had her Bollywood debut opposite Vidyut Jammwal in film Sanak.
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Original: Quest for El Dorado Orinoco River basin On April 15, Raleigh set out from his base in the Gallego which was cut down for river travel, with a hundred men along with two wherries.
Revised:  Orinoco River basin On April 15, Raleigh set out from his base in the Gallego which was cut down for river travel, with a hundred men along with two wherries.
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Original:  The English troops caught up with three Indians whom they captured and they begged for their lives, one of whom agreed to be their guide.
Revised:  The English troops caught up with three Indians whom they captured and they begged for their lives, with one of the trio agreeing to be their guide.
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Original:  In 1713, Spain and Great Britain signed the Treaty of Utrecht, whereby the latter pledged to respect the Spanish territories occupied in America .
Revised:  In 1713, Spain and Great Britain signed the Treaty of Utrecht, whereby the British agreed to prevent their citizens from visiting Spanish colonies in Latin America without prior approval from colonial officials .
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Original:  With the aggression of the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
Revised:  With the aggressive stance adopted by the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
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Original:  With the aggression of the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
Revised:  With the aggression of the Indians towards the hated Spanish, the Spaniards never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
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Original:  With the aggression of the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
Revised:  With the aggression of the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force to the region. This allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
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Original:  With the aggression of the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
Revised:  With the aggression of the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France , Britain and the Dutch Republic) to establish colonies in the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
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Original:  With the aggression of the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and eventually British Guyanaafter 1796 when the Essequibo (part of the Dutch Guyana) was taken by the English, who had initiated the massive introduction of settlers and slaves for their plantations .
Revised:  With the aggression of the Indians towards Spain, the Spanish never returned in force particularly and this allowed other European countries (France and Holland as well as England) to colonize the area over the next two centuries with the creations of Dutch Guyana, French Guiana, and British Guyana .
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