wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  According to James Nyland of the Grand County Sheriff's department, there was no bad weather and winds were minima &  
Revised:  According to James Nyland of the Grand County Sheriff's department, there was no bad weather and winds were minimal. & 
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Original:  The director and his eight staff members were employed by the Red Canyon Aesthetics & Medical Spa  .
Revised:  The director of Red Canyon Aesthetics & Medical Spa .
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Original:  Beechcraft King Air 100 plane , similar to the one that crashed.
Revised:  Beechcraft King Air 100 , similar to the one that crashed.
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Original: The nine passengers were believed to be part of a group of dermatologists from Cedar City.
Revised: The nine passengers were part of a group of dermatologists from Cedar City.
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Original:  The director of Red Canyon Aesthetics & Medical Spa, Dr. Lansing Ellsworth  and his eight staff members were all killed along with one pilot.
Revised:  The director of Red Canyon Aesthetics & Medical Spa, Dr. Lansing Ellsworth , and his eight staff members were all killed along with one pilot.
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Original:  The director of Red Canyon Aesthetics & Medical Spa, Dr. Lansing Ellsworth  and his eight staff members were all killed along with one pilot.
Revised:  The director of Red Canyon Aesthetics & Medical Spa, Dr. Lansing Ellsworth and his eight staff members were all killed along with the pilot.
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Original:  The director of Red Canyon Aesthetics & Medical Spa, Dr. Lansing Ellsworth, and his eight staff members were all killed  along with the pilot  .
Revised:  The director of Red Canyon Aesthetics & Medical Spa, Dr. Lansing Ellsworth, and his eight staff members were all killed , along with the pilot .
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Original: ]] Ten mountaineers are reported missing on the French side of Mont Blanc after a big avalanche that occurred on at 0100 GMT August 24 2008.
Revised: ]] Ten mountaineers are reported missing on the French side of Mont Blanc after an avalanche that occurred on at 0100 GMT August 24 2008.
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Original: ]] Ten mountaineers are reported missing on the French side of Mont Blanc after a big avalanche that occurred on at 0100 GMT August 24 2008.
Revised: ]] Ten mountaineers are reported missing on the French side of Mont Blanc after a big avalanche that occurred on at 0100 GMT August 24.
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Original:  Reports indicate that thre other climbers have been injured.
Revised:  Reports indicate that three other climbers have been injured.
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Original:  Initially, nine were reported missing, later that figure was adjusted to ten , of whom five were Austrian, two were Swiss and two were of unidentified nationality.
Revised:  Initially, nine were reported missing, later that figure was adjusted to ten . Five are said to be Austrian, two were Swiss and two were of unidentified nationality.
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Original:  The French Interior Minister Michele Alliot-Marie were to travel to the area.
Revised:  The French Interior Minister Michele Alliot-Marie is expected to travel to the area.
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Original:  The French Interior Minister [  Michele Alliot-Marie is expected to travel to the area .
Revised:  The French Interior Minister "[ Michele Alliot-Marie is expected to travel to the area .
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Original:  Three other climbers were  injured.
Revised:  Eight other climbers were injured.
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Original:  Three other climbers were  injured.
Revised:  Three other climbers were also injured.
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Original:  Five  are said to be Austria and three were from Switzerland.
Revised:  Five of the missing are said to be Austria and three were from Switzerland.
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Original:  The avalanche started at an elevation of 3,600 meters and went down the mountainside for nearly 100 meters, leaving a trail 50 meters wide.  [ 
Revised:  The avalanche started at an elevation of 3,600 meters and went down the mountainside for nearly 100 meters, leaving a trail 50 meters wide. "[ 
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Original:  The avalanche started at an elevation of 3,600 meters and went down the mountainside for nearly 100 meters, leaving a trail 50 meters wide.  [ 
Revised:  The avalanche started at an elevation of 3,600 meters and went down the mountainside for nearly 100 meters, leaving a trail 50 meters wide. [I saw 
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Original:  Five of the missing are said to be Austria and three were from Switzerland.
Revised:  Five of the missing are said to be Austrian and three were from Switzerland.
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Original: "[There are ] no longer any chance of finding someone alive," stated the interior minister of France, Michele Alliot-Marie who also added that are more people trapped beneath the snow.
Revised: "[There is ] no longer any chance of finding someone alive," stated the interior minister of France, Michele Alliot-Marie who also added that are more people trapped beneath the snow.
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Original:  Matos was competing in the bronze medal match against Arman Chilmanov of Kazakhstan when he substained an injury.
Revised:  Matos was competing in the bronze medal match against Arman Chilmanov of Kazakhstan when he sustained an injury.
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Original:  The World Taekwondo Federation released a statment referring to the incident as a "strong violation of the spirit of taekwondo and the Olympic Games".
Revised:  The World Taekwondo Federation released a statement referring to the incident as a "strong violation of the spirit of taekwondo and the Olympic Games".
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Original:  WTF secretary general Yang Jin-suk said "due process must be followed before officially banning the two ".
Revised:  WTF secretary general Yang Jin-suk said "due process must be followed before officially banning the two ."
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Original: Cuban taekwondo athlete Ángel Matos was yesterday banned for life after an assult on Swedish referee Chakir Chelbat during the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.
Revised: Cuban Taekwondo athlete Ángel Matos was yesterday banned for life after an assult on Swedish referee Chakir Chelbat during the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.
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Original:  As he lie on the mat with medical attendance Chelbat disqualified him for exceeding a minute 's injury time .
Revised:  As he lay on the mat with medical attendance Chelbat disqualified him for exceeding a minute 's injury time .
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Original:  This caused outrage from Matos and his coach Leudis Gonzalez, who was also banned for life  .
Revised:  This caused outrage from Matos and his coach Leudis Gonzalez, was also banned for life .
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Original:  This caused outrage from Matos and his coach Leudis Gonzalez, who was also banned for life  .
Revised:  This caused outrage from Matos and his coach Leudis Gonzalez, who was also banned for life for the incident .
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Original:  When Chilmanov was declared the winner of the bout  Matos delivered a kick to the face of Chelbat.
Revised:  When Chilmanov was declared the winner of the bout , Matos delivered a kick to the face of Chelbat.
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Original:  Touch judges rushed in to try and control the situation only for Matos to push one of them and then spit on the floor.
Revised:  Touch judges rushed in to try to control the situation only for Matos to push one of them and then spit on the floor.
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Original:  Touch judges rushed in to try and control the situation only for Matos to push one of them and then spit on the floor.
Revised:  Touch judges rushed in to try and control the situation . Matos pushed one of them and then spit on the floor.
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Original:  Touch judges rushed in to try and control the situation only for Matos to push one of them and then spit on the floor.
Revised:  Touch judges rushed in to try and control the situation only for Matos to push one of them and then spat on the floor.
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Original:  The World Taekwondo Federation released a statement referring to the incident as a "strong violation of the spirit of taekwondo and the Olympic Games".
Revised:  The World Taekwondo Federation released a statement referring to the incident as a "strong violation of the spirit of Taekwondo and the Olympic Games".
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Original:  Matos won the gold medal in Sydney in 2000 , he finished in 11th place in Athens four years later
Revised:  Matos won the gold medal in Sydney in 2000 ; he finished in 11th place in Athens four years later
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Original: Cuban Taekwondo athlete Ángel Matos was yesterday banned for life  after an assult on Swedish referee Chakir Chelbat during the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.
Revised: Cuban Taekwondo athlete Ángel Matos was banned for life after an assult on Swedish referee Chakir Chelbat during the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.
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Original:  This angered Matos and his coach Leudis Gonzalez, was also banned for life for the incident.
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Original: Cuban Taekwondo athlete Ángel Matos was banned for life yesterday after an assult on Swedish referee Chakir Chelbat during the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.
Revised: Cuban Taekwondo athlete Ángel Matos was banned for life yesterday after an assault on Swedish referee Chakir Chelbat during the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.
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Original:  As he lay on the mat with medical attendants, Matos was disqualified by for exceeding the one minute injury time limit.
Revised:  As he lay on the mat with medical attendants, Matos was disqualified for exceeding the one minute injury time limit.
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Original:  Russian Federation came third with 72 medals - 23 gold, 21 silver medals and 28 bronze medals and the United Kingdom fourth place with 47 medals - 19 gold, 13 silver and 15 bronze medals . .
Revised:  Russian Federation came third with 72 medals - 23 gold, 21 silver medals and 28 bronze medals and the United Kingdom fourth place with 47 medals - 19 gold, 13 silver and 15 bronze medals .
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Original:  People's Republic of China topped the medals table at the Beijing Olympics with 51 golds , the most at the Games, plus 21 silver medals and 28 bronze medals as it reached exactly its target of 100 medals, while the The United States of America won more medals, with 110, came second with 36 golds, 38 silver medals and 36 bronze medals.
Revised:  People's Republic of China topped the medals table at the Beijing Olympics with 51 golds while the United States of America won more medals, with 110, came second with 36 golds, 38 silver medals and 36 bronze medals.
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Original:  People's Republic of China topped the medals table at the Beijing Olympics with 51 golds , the most at the Games, plus 21 silver medals and 28 bronze medals as it reached exactly its target of 100 medals, while the The United States of America won more medals, with 110, came second with 36 golds, 38 silver medals and 36 bronze medals.
Revised:  People's Republic of China topped the medals table at the Beijing Olympics with 51 golds , the most at the Games, plus 21 silver medals and 28 bronze medals as it reached exactly its target of 100 medals, while the The United States of America came second with 36 golds, 38 silver medals and 36 bronze medals.
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Original:  ]] The 2008 Summer Olympic Games were formally declared closed during a colourful ceremony at the iconic Beijing National Stadium with the Olympics flag being handed over to the Mayor of London Boris Johnson.
Revised:  ]] The 2008 Summer Olympics were formally declared closed during a colourful ceremony at the iconic Beijing National Stadium with the Olympics flag being handed over to the Mayor of London Boris Johnson.
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Original: Christian Pastor for the Planetshakers youth movement in Australia Michael Guglielmucci has admitted that his cancer is a hoax and Wikinews has learned that one of the churches he preached at is removing his videos from YouTube, claiming copyright infringement.
Revised: Christian Pastor for the Planetshakers youth movement in Australia Michael Guglielmucci has admitted that his cancer is a hoax . Wikinews has also learned that one of the churches he preached at is removing his videos from YouTube, claiming copyright infringement.
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Original: Christian Pastor for the Planetshakers youth movement in Australia Michael Guglielmucci has admitted that his cancer is a hoax and Wikinews has learned that one of the churches he preached at is removing his videos from YouTube, claiming copyright infringement.
Revised: Christian Pastor for the Planetshakers youth movement in Australia Michael Guglielmucci has admitted that his cancer is a hoax and Wikinews has learned that one of the churches he preached at has had videos showing his claims of cancer removed from YouTube, claiming copyright infringement.
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Original:  For at least two years, Gugliemucci claimed to have leukemia .
Revised:  For at least two years, Gugliemucci claimed to have leukaemia .
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Original:  Wikinews has contacted the church, its publishing company  and YouTube for a statement regarding the removal of the videos, but has yet to receive a response.
Revised:  Wikinews has contacted the church, its publishing company , and YouTube for a statement regarding the removal of the videos, but has yet to receive a response.
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Original: Christian Pastor for the Planetshakers youth movement in Australia Michael Guglielmucci has admitted that his cancer is a hoax.
Revised: A former Christian Pastor Michael Guglielmucci has admitted that his cancer is a hoax.
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Original:  It was at this time, because of his torment of living a double life, Mike thought he could escape the pain by creating a diversion from his addiction to adult pornography, so he created the cancer scenario," added Danny  
Revised:  It was at this time, because of his torment of living a double life, Mike thought he could escape the pain by creating a diversion from his addiction to adult pornography, so he created the cancer scenario," added Danny . 
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Original: A passenger plane traveling to Iran has crashed in Kyrgyzstan ony 10 minutes after taking off.
Revised: A passenger plane traveling to Iran has crashed in Kyrgyzstan only 10 minutes after taking off.
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Original: An Itek-Air Boeing 737 operated by Iran Aseman Airlines and traveling to Iran has crashed in Kyrgyzstan only 10 minutes after taking off.
Revised: An Itek-Air Boeing 737 traveling to Iran has crashed in Kyrgyzstan only 10 minutes after taking off.
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Original: An Itek-Air Boeing 737 flight 6875 and operated by Aseman Airlines and traveling to Iran has crashed in Kyrgyzstan only 10 minutes after taking off.
Revised: An Itek-Air Boeing 737 flight 6875 , operated by Aseman Airlines and traveling to Iran has crashed in Kyrgyzstan only 10 minutes after taking off.
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Original: 125px Switzerland is today voting on their quarterly federal referenda over same-sex partnerships and the Schengen/Dublin | treaty, both proposals were popular initiatives made by the Swiss people.
Revised: 125px Switzerland is voting today on their quarterly federal referenda over same-sex partnerships and the Schengen/Dublin | treaty, both proposals were popular initiatives made by the Swiss people.
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Original: 125px Switzerland is today voting on their quarterly federal referenda over same-sex partnerships and the Schengen/Dublin | treaty, both proposals were popular initiatives made by the Swiss people.
Revised: 125px Switzerland is today voting on their quarterly federal referenda over same-sex partnerships and the Schengen/Dublin treaty. Both proposals were popular initiatives made by the Swiss people.
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Original:  The first question is over whether same-sex partnership should be legalised throughout the country.
Revised:  The first question is whether same-sex partnership should be legalised throughout the country.
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Original:  Already the cantons of Geneva and Zürich allow same-sex partnerships, however this proposal will cover the country including the conservative north-eastern cantons of Graubünden and Appenzell , in fact Appenzell Innerrhoden only allowed women the vote at cantonal level in 1990 by the Federal Tribunal of Switzerland.
Revised:  Already the cantons of Geneva and Zürich allow same-sex partnerships, however this proposal will cover the country including the conservative north-eastern cantons of Graubünden and Appenzell . In fact Appenzell Innerrhoden only allowed women the vote at cantonal level in 1990 by the Federal Tribunal of Switzerland.
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Original:  Supporters say , it encourage tourism and make visiting much easier  especially after the row over Swiss-German border a few months ago.
Revised:  Supporters say it would encourage tourism and make visiting much easier especially after the row over Swiss-German border a few months ago.
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Original:  Supporters say , it encourage tourism and make visiting much easier  especially after the row over Swiss-German border a few months ago.
Revised:  Supporters say , it encourage tourism and make visiting much easier , especially after the row over Swiss-German border a few months ago.
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Original:  Together with the Dublin treaty will make Switzerland join a bilateral agreement to stop asylum seekers the right to have to seek asylum in Switzerland after claiming asylum in a agreement country such as Germany or France.
Revised:  Together with the Dublin treaty , it would make Switzerland join a bilateral agreement to stop asylum seekers the right to have to seek asylum in Switzerland after claiming asylum in a agreement country such as Germany or France.
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Original:  Together with the Dublin treaty will make Switzerland join a bilateral agreement to stop asylum seekers the right to have to seek asylum in Switzerland after claiming asylum in a agreement country such as Germany or France.
Revised:  Together with the Dublin treaty will make Switzerland join a bilateral agreement to stop asylum seekers having to seek asylum in Switzerland after claiming asylum in a agreement country such as Germany or France.
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Original:  Together with the Dublin treaty will make Switzerland join a bilateral agreement to stop asylum seekers the right to have to seek asylum in Switzerland after claiming asylum in a agreement country such as Germany or France.
Revised:  Together with the Dublin treaty will make Switzerland join a bilateral agreement to stop asylum seekers the right to have to seek asylum in Switzerland after claiming asylum in an agreement country such as Germany or France.
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Original:  Opponents , say this proposal will set Switzerland on a slippery slope in to the European Union, not give Switzerland the right to it own borders and compromise the country's strict and engrained neutrality.
Revised:  Opponents say this proposal will set Switzerland on a slippery slope in to the European Union, not give Switzerland the right to it own borders and compromise the country's strict and engrained neutrality.
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Original:  Opponents , say this proposal will set Switzerland on a slippery slope in to the European Union, not give Switzerland the right to it own borders and compromise the country's strict and engrained neutrality.
Revised:  Opponents , say this proposal will set Switzerland on a slippery slope into the European Union, not give Switzerland the right to it own borders and compromise the country's strict and engrained neutrality.
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Original:  Opponents , say this proposal will set Switzerland on a slippery slope in to the European Union, not give Switzerland the right to it own borders and compromise the country's strict and engrained neutrality.
Revised:  Opponents , say this proposal will set Switzerland on a slippery slope in to the European Union, not give Switzerland the right to its own borders and compromise the country's strict and engrained neutrality.
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Original:  Out of the big 4 main parties  the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to both proposals , however the populist-right Swiss People's Party have said no to both proposals Results will start being available  in the early evening today
Revised:  Out of the big 4 main parties , the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to both proposals , however the populist-right Swiss People's Party have said no to both proposals Results will start being available in the early evening today
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Original:  Out of the big 4 main parties  the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to both proposals , however the populist-right Swiss People's Party have said no to both proposals Results will start being available  in the early evening today
Revised:  Out of the big 4 main parties the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to both proposals . However, the populist-right Swiss People's Party have said no to both proposals Results will start being available in the early evening today
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Original:  Out of the big 4 main parties  the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to both proposals , however the populist-right Swiss People's Party have said no to both proposals Results will start being available  in the early evening today
Revised:  Out of the big 4 main parties the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to both proposals , however the populist-right Swiss People's Party have said no to both proposals Results will start being available today in the early evening today
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Original:  Out of the big 4 main parties  the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to both proposals , however the populist-right Swiss People's Party have said no to both proposals Results will start being available  in the early evening today
Revised:  Out of the big 4 main parties the centre-left Social Democrats, the liberal-right Free Democrats and the centre-right Christian Democrats have said yes to both proposals , however the populist-right Swiss People's Party have said no to both proposals Results will start being available in the early evening 
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Original:  They later moved to Calgary where Powers gained Canadian citezenship .
Revised:  They later moved to Calgary where Powers gained Canadian citizenship .
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Original:  There are two cases of Unverified WWI veteran claims living
Revised:  There are two unverified WWI veterans living as well
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Original:  There are two unverified WWI veterans living as well
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Original:  As well as the last female she was the last veteran living in Canada.
Revised:  As well as being the last surviving female, she was the last veteran living in Canada.
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Original: The  last remaining female World War I veteran Gladys Powers died on Friday age 109.
Revised: The world's last remaining female World War I veteran Gladys Powers died on Friday age 109.
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