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Original:  Tsvangirai is seeking a constitutional amendment to recreate the post of Prime Minister, a job he wishes to hold, whilst Mugabe has wished to maintain his Zimbabwe African National Union – Patriotic Front (ZANU-PF) party's hold on the main offices of state.
Revised:  Tsvangirai sought a constitutional amendment to recreate the post of Prime Minister, a job he wishes to hold, whilst Mugabe has wished to maintain his Zimbabwe African National Union – Patriotic Front (ZANU-PF) party's hold on the main offices of state.
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Original:  Tsvangirai is seeking a constitutional amendment to recreate the post of Prime Minister, a job he wishes to hold, whilst Mugabe has wished to maintain his Zimbabwe African National Union – Patriotic Front (ZANU-PF) party's hold on the main offices of state.
Revised:  Tsvangirai is seeking a constitutional amendment to recreate the post of Prime Minister, whilst Mugabe had wished to maintain his Zimbabwe African National Union – Patriotic Front (ZANU-PF) party's hold on the main offices of state.
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Original: A federal judge has ruled that people who gave money to the Californian Proposition 8 vote to ban gay marriage  will have to be named.
Revised: A federal judge has ruled that people who gave money to California's Proposition 8 vote to ban gay marriage will have to be named.
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Original: A federal judge has ruled that people who gave money to the Californian Proposition 8 vote to ban gay marriage  will have to be named.
Revised: A federal judge has ruled that people who gave money to the Californian Proposition 8 campaign to ban gay marriage will have to be named.
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Original: A federal judge has ruled that people who gave money to the Californian Proposition 8 vote to ban gay marriage  will have to be named.
Revised: A federal judge has ruled that people who gave money to the Californian Proposition 8 vote to ban gay marriage , will have to be named.
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Original:  U.S. District Judge Morrison England Jr  agreed with a local court that California's 1974 Political Reform Act on political disclosure, which requires that the names of people and organizations donating to political causes are recorded and published, applied to the Proposition 8 campaign.
Revised:  U.S. district judge Morrison England Jr agreed with a local court that California's 1974 Political Reform Act on political disclosure, which requires that the names of people and organizations donating to political causes are recorded and published, applied to the Proposition 8 campaign.
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Original:  U.S. District Judge Morrison England Jr  agreed with a local court that California's 1974 Political Reform Act on political disclosure, which requires that the names of people and organizations donating to political causes are recorded and published, applied to the Proposition 8 campaign.
Revised:  U.S. District Judge Morrison England Jr . agreed with a local court that California's 1974 Political Reform Act on political disclosure, which requires that the names of people and organizations donating to political causes are recorded and published, applied to the Proposition 8 campaign.
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Original: A federal judge has ruled that people who gave money to California's Proposition 8 campaign to ban gay marriage , will have to be named.
Revised: A federal judge has ruled that people who gave money to California's Proposition 8 campaign to ban gay marriage will have to be named.
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Original:  U.S. district judge Morrison England Jr. agreed with a local court that California's 1974 Political Reform Act on political disclosure, which requires that the names of people and organizations donating over US$100 to political causes are recorded and published, applied to the Proposition 8 campaign.
Revised:  U.S. district judge Morrison England Jr. agreed with a local court that California's 1974 Political Reform Act on political disclosure, which requires that the names of people and organizations donating over US$100 to political causes be recorded and published, applied to the Proposition 8 campaign.
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Original:  U.S. district judge Morrison England Jr. agreed with a local court that California's 1974 Political Reform Act on political disclosure, which requires that the names of people and organizations donating over US$100 to political causes are recorded and published, applied to the Proposition 8 campaign.
Revised:  U.S. district judge Morrison England Jr. agreed with a local court that California's 1974 Political Reform Act on political disclosure, which requires that the names of people and organizations donating over US$100 to political causes are recorded and published, applies to the Proposition 8 campaign.
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Original:  Actress Whoopi Goldberg protests against Proposition 8 in New York Pro-8 campaigners had said that a 1982 US Supreme Court ruling to protect narrow interest groups could apply to donors.
Revised:  Actress Whoopi Goldberg protests against Proposition 8 in New York Pro-Proposition 8 campaigners had said that a 1982 US Supreme Court ruling to protect narrow interest groups could apply to donors.
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Original:  Pro-8 groups are still deciding whether to appeal to higher courts.
Revised:  Pro-Proposition 8 groups are still deciding whether to appeal to higher courts.
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Original: The Dexia building in Luxembourg The Franco-Belgian bank Dexia is to restructure and cut 3\% of its staff after posting a €3 billion full-year loss.
Revised: The Dexia building in Luxembourg The Franco-Belgian bank Dexia has announced it will restructure and cut 3\% of its staff after posting a €3 billion full-year loss.
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Original:  Dexia say they are to close their operations in Australia, eastern Europe, Mexico and Scandinavia and reduce their business in the United Kingdom and the United States.
Revised:  Dexia says it will close operations in Australia, eastern Europe, Mexico and Scandinavia and reduce their business in the United Kingdom and the United States.
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Original:  Dexia say they are to close their operations in Australia, eastern Europe, Mexico and Scandinavia and reduce their business in the United Kingdom and the United States.
Revised:  Dexia say they are to close their operations in Australia, eastern Europe, Mexico and Scandinavia and reduce business in the United Kingdom and the United States.
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Original:  The bank's chairman is now Jean-Luc Dehaene, a former prime minister of Belgium
Revised:  The bank's current chairman is Jean-Luc Dehaene, a former prime minister of Belgium
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Original:  No one, including the two pilots of the airship, were injured
Revised:  The FAA is investigating the cause of the crash, thought to be weather related. Goodyear company spokesman Jerry Jenkins said in a brief statement Thursday: "We're grateful there were no injuries onboard or on the ground. Following an investigation, more information will be released.
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Original: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday night causing about 1,400 homes to loose power.
Revised: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday night causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
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Original: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday night causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
Revised: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday nigh,t causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
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Original:  The two people on board, pilot Daniel Lynn Thomas , and passenger , Charles Thomas were not hurt, although they were trapped on board briefly while electrical crews cleared the area.
Revised:  The two people on board, pilot Daniel Lynn Thomas and passenger Charles Thomas, were not hurt, although they were trapped on board briefly while electrical crews cleared the area.
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Original:  The FAA is investigating the cause of the crash, thought to be weather related.
Revised:  The Federal Aviation Administration is investigating the cause of the crash, thought to be weather related.
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Original:  Goodyear company spokesman Jerry Jenkins said in a brief statement Thursday: "We're grateful there were no injuries onboard or on the ground.
Revised:  Goodyear company spokesman Jerry Jenkins , in a brief statement Thursday: "We're grateful there were no injuries onboard or on the ground.
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Original:  Goodyear company spokesman Jerry Jenkins said in a brief statement Thursday: "We're grateful there were no injuries onboard or on the ground.
Revised:  Goodyear company spokesman Jerry Jenkins said in a brief statement on Thursday, said, "We're grateful there were no injuries onboard or on the ground.
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Original: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday nigh, t causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
Revised: A Goodyear blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday nigh, t causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
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Original: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday nigh, t causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
Revised: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, Florida industrial park on Thursday nigh, t causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
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Original: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday nigh, t causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
Revised: A Goodyear Blimp crashed at a Coral Springs, FL industrial park on Thursday night, causing about 1,400 homes to lose power.
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Original:  Following an investigation, more information will be released.  
Revised:  Following an investigation, more information will be released. " 
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Original: MasterCard International announced friday that multiple instances of fraud have been tracked back to CardSystems Solutions  Inc., a company that processes credit card  and other payments.
Revised: MasterCard International announced Friday that multiple instances of fraud have been tracked back to CardSystems Solutions Inc., a company that processes credit card and other payments.
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Original: MasterCard International announced friday that multiple instances of fraud have been tracked back to CardSystems Solutions  Inc., a company that processes credit card  and other payments.
Revised: MasterCard International announced friday that multiple instances of fraud have been tracked back to CardSystems Solutions , Inc., a company that processes credit card and other payments.
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Original: MasterCard International announced friday that multiple instances of fraud have been tracked back to CardSystems Solutions  Inc., a company that processes credit card  and other payments.
Revised: MasterCard International announced friday that multiple instances of fraud have been tracked back to CardSystems Solutions Inc., a company that processes credit card transactions and other payments.
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Original:   The breach appears to be the largest yet involving financial data,  said David Sobel, of the Electronic Privacy Information Center.
Revised:  " The breach appears to be the largest yet involving financial data, said David Sobel, of the Electronic Privacy Information Center.
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Original:   The breach appears to be the largest yet involving financial data,  said David Sobel, of the Electronic Privacy Information Center.
Revised:  The breach appears to be the largest yet involving financial data, " said David Sobel, of the Electronic Privacy Information Center.
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Original:  Names , banks and account numbers of up to 40 million cardholders have been exposed.
Revised:  Customer names , banks and account numbers of up to 40 million cardholders have been exposed.
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Original:  Names , banks and account numbers of up to 40 million cardholders have been exposed.
Revised:  Names , banks and account numbers of up to 40 million cardholders has been exposed.
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Original:  CardSystems issued a statement late Friday which was vetted by the FBI  in which it acknowledged that it learned of the potential breach 26 days ago  but that the FBI told the company not to advise the cardholders nor the public at large.
Revised:  CardSystems issued a statement late on Friday that was vetted by the FBI in which it acknowledged that it learned of the potential breach 26 days ago but that the FBI told the company not to advise the cardholders nor the public at large.
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Original:  CardSystems issued a statement late Friday which was vetted by the FBI  in which it acknowledged that it learned of the potential breach 26 days ago  but that the FBI told the company not to advise the cardholders nor the public at large.
Revised:  CardSystems issued a statement late Friday which was vetted by the FBI , in which it acknowledged that it learned of the potential breach 26 days ago but that the FBI told the company not to advise the cardholders nor the public at large.
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Original:  CardSystems issued a statement late Friday which was vetted by the FBI  in which it acknowledged that it learned of the potential breach 26 days ago  but that the FBI told the company not to advise the cardholders nor the public at large.
Revised:  CardSystems issued a statement late Friday which was vetted by the FBI in which it acknowledged that it learned of the potential breach 26 days ago , but that the FBI told the company not to advise the cardholders nor the public at large.
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Original:  Michael A. Brady, C.F.O. of CardSystems told the Associated Press that ;
Revised:  Michael A. Brady, C.F.O. of CardSystems told the Associated Press that 
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Original:  " were absolutely blindsided by a press release by the association."
Revised:  " we're absolutely blindsided by a press release by the association."
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Original:  MasterCard spokesperson , Sharon Gamsin , said that CardSystems was hit by a virus-like computer script that grabbed customer data for the purpose of fraud.
Revised:  MasterCard spokesperson Sharon Gamsin said that CardSystems was hit by a virus-like computer script that grabbed customer data for the purpose of fraud.
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Original:  MasterCard spokesperson , Sharon Gamsin , said that CardSystems was hit by a virus-like computer script that grabbed customer data for the purpose of fraud.
Revised:  MasterCard spokesperson , Sharon Gamsin , said that CardSystems was hit by a virus-like computer script that stole customer data for the purpose of fraud.
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Original:  She said MasterCard does not know how the script got into the CardSystem network . Sobel said this theft "indicates that this is a shadowy industry where the consumer never really knows who is going to be handling and using their personal information.
Revised:  She said MasterCard does not know how the script got into the CardSystem network Sobel said this theft "indicates that this is a shadowy industry where the consumer never really knows who is going to be handling and using their personal information.
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Original:  She said MasterCard does not know how the script got into the CardSystem network  
Revised:  She said MasterCard does not know how the script got into the CardSystem network . 
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Original:  Customer names, banks and account numbers of up to 40 million cardholders has been exposed, of which about 13.9 million are MasterCard-branded cards, the company said.
Revised:  Customer names, banks and account numbers of up to 40 million cardholders have been exposed, of which about 13.9 million are MasterCard-branded cards, the company said.
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Original:  Customer names, banks  and account numbers of up to 40 million cardholders have been exposed, of which about 13.9 million are MasterCard-branded cards, the company said.
Revised:  Customer names, banks , and account numbers of up to 40 million cardholders have been exposed, of which about 13.9 million are MasterCard-branded cards, the company said.
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Original:   CardSystems issued a statement late on Friday that was vetted by the FBI, in which it acknowledged that it learned of the potential breach 26 days ago, but that the FBI told the company not to advise the cardholders nor the public at large.
Revised:  CardSystems issued a statement late on Friday that said it learned of the potential breach 26 days ago, but that the FBI told the company not to advise the cardholders nor the public at large.
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Original:   Michael A. Brady, C.F.O. of CardSystems  told the Associated Press that "we're absolutely blindsided by a press release by the association . "  Sobel said this theft "indicates that this is a shadowy industry where the consumer never really knows who is going to be handling and using their personal information.
Revised:  Michael A. Brady, C.F.O. of CardSystems , told the Associated Press that "we're absolutely blindsided by a press release by the association . " Sobel said this theft "indicates that this is a shadowy industry where the consumer never really knows who is going to be handling and using their personal information.
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Original:   Michael A. Brady, C.F.O. of CardSystems  told the Associated Press that "we're absolutely blindsided by a press release by the association . "  Sobel said this theft "indicates that this is a shadowy industry where the consumer never really knows who is going to be handling and using their personal information.
Revised:  Michael A. Brady, C.F.O. of CardSystems told the Associated Press that "we're absolutely blindsided by a press release by the association , " Sobel said this theft "indicates that this is a shadowy industry where the consumer never really knows who is going to be handling and using their personal information.
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Original:  Presumably, the affected consumers thought they were dealing with MasterCard. 
Revised:  Presumably, the affected consumers thought they were dealing with MasterCard. " Having a third-party process credit card transactions is common practice in the industry
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Original:  Recently returned from a trip to the site of one of the camps, he said remmebering the Holocaust "induces humanity to reflect on the unpredictability of evil when it conquers the heart of man.
Revised:  Recently returned from a trip to the site of one of the camps, he said remembering the Holocaust "induces humanity to reflect on the unpredictability of evil when it conquers the heart of man.
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Original: 2013 photo of a Ukrainian Railways train departing Kiev for the Crimea Despite the recent occupation of parts of Crimea in the Ukraine by forces connected to Russia in the past few days, the rail border between the countries remains open today.
Revised: 2013 photo of a Ukrainian Railways train departing Kiev for the Crimea Despite the recent intervention in of parts of Crimea in the Ukraine by forces connected to Russia in the past few days, the rail border between the countries remains open today.
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Original: 2013 photo of a Ukrainian Railways train departing Kiev for the Crimea Despite the recent occupation of parts of Crimea in the Ukraine by forces connected to Russia in the past few days, the rail border between the countries remains open today.
Revised: 2013 photo of a Ukrainian Railways train departing Kiev for the Crimea Despite the recent occupation of parts of Crimea , Ukraine by forces connected to Russia in the past few days, the rail border between the countries remains open today.
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Original: 2013 photo of a Ukrainian Railways train departing Kiev for the Crimea Despite the recent intervention in of parts of Crimea, Ukraine by forces connected to Russia in the past few days, the rail border between the countries remains open today.
Revised: 2013 photo of a Ukrainian Railways train departing Kiev for the Crimea Despite the recent intervention in parts of Crimea, Ukraine by forces connected to Russia in the past few days, the rail border between the countries remains open today.
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Original: 2013 photo of a Ukrainian Railways train departing Kiev for the Crimea Despite the recent intervention in parts of Crimea, Ukraine by forces connected to Russia in the past few days, the rail border between the countries remains open today.
Revised: 2013 photo of a Ukrainian Railways train departing Kiev for the Crimea Despite the intervention in parts of Crimea, Ukraine by forces connected to Russia in the past few days, the rail border between the countries remains open today.
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Original:  Existing platform checkpoints for passport control, "" If the guards suspect people are entering for the purpose of destabilizing the country, the police reserve the right to deny them entry to the country.
Revised:  Existing platform checkpoints for passport control, If the guards suspect people are entering for the purpose of destabilizing the country, the police reserve the right to deny them entry to the country.
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Original:  Existing platform checkpoints for passport control, If the guards suspect people are entering for the purpose of destabilizing the country, the police reserve the right to deny them entry to the country.
Revised:  At platform checkpoints for passport control, If the guards suspect people are entering for the purpose of destabilizing the country, the police reserve the right to deny them entry to the country.
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Original: According to the    President of Cyprus, the ship was in violation of United Nations resolutions.
Revised: According to the According to the President of Cyprus, the ship was in violation of United Nations resolutions.
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Original:  "We are investigating what it is carrying and for this reason we have to handle things very responsibly and with a great deal of seriousness, without a lot of media noise," President Dimitris Christofias said  [  
Revised:  "We are investigating what it is carrying and for this reason we have to handle things very responsibly and with a great deal of seriousness, without a lot of media noise," President Dimitris Christofias said . [ 
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Original:  "We are investigating what it is carrying and for this reason we have to handle things very responsibly and with a great deal of seriousness, without a lot of media noise," President Dimitris Christofias said  [  
Revised:  "We are investigating what it is carrying and for this reason we have to handle things very responsibly and with a great deal of seriousness, without a lot of media noise," President Dimitris Christofias said [it 
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Original:  Friday, authorities in Cyprus said that they had detained a ship carrying the nations flag.
Revised:  Friday, authorities in Cyprus said that they had detained a ship carrying the nation's flag.
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Original:  The less that is said the better," said Marios Garoyian,  the House of Representatives of Cyprus President
Revised:  The less that is said the better," said Marios Garoyian, president of the House of Representatives of Cyprus President
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Original:  The less that is said the better," said Marios Garoyian,  the House of Representatives of Cyprus President
Revised:  The less that is said the better," said Marios Garoyian, the House of Representatives of Cyprus 
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Original:  "It is a problem for us that we are forced to accept a ship under the Cypriot flag which is carrying whatever [it] is carrying, which is contrary or in conflict with Security Council resolutions," Christofias added   .
Revised:  "It is a problem for us that we are forced to accept a ship under the Cypriot flag which is carrying whatever [it] is carrying, which is contrary or in conflict with Security Council resolutions," Christofias added . .
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