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Original: ]] Most well-nourished people in industrialized countries have 4 to 5 grams of iron in their bodies (∼38 mg iron/kg body weight for females and ∼50 mg iron/kg body for males ).
Revised: ]] Most well-nourished people in industrialized countries have 4 to 5 grams of iron in their bodies (∼38 mg iron/kg body weight for women and ∼50 mg iron/kg body for males ).
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Original: ]] Most well-nourished people in industrialized countries have 4 to 5 grams of iron in their bodies (∼38 mg iron/kg body weight for females and ∼50 mg iron/kg body for males ).
Revised: ]] Most well-nourished people in industrialized countries have 4 to 5 grams of iron in their bodies (∼38 mg iron/kg body weight for females and ∼50 mg iron/kg body for men ).
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Original:  The reserves of iron in industrialized countries tend to be lower in children and females of child-bearing age than in males and in the elderly.
Revised:  The reserves of iron in industrialized countries tend to be lower in children and women of child-bearing age than in males and in the elderly.
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Original:  The reserves of iron in industrialized countries tend to be lower in children and females of child-bearing age than in males and in the elderly.
Revised:  The reserves of iron in industrialized countries tend to be lower in children and females of child-bearing age than in men and in the elderly.
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Original:  Females who must use their stores to compensate for iron lost through menstruation, pregnancy or lactation have lower non-hemoglobin body stores, which may consist of , or even less.
Revised:  Women who must use their stores to compensate for iron lost through menstruation, pregnancy or lactation have lower non-hemoglobin body stores, which may consist of , or even less.
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Original:  The total amount of loss for healthy people in the developed world amounts to an estimated average of a day for males , and 1.5–2 mg a day for females with regular menstrual periods.
Revised:  The total amount of loss for healthy people in the developed world amounts to an estimated average of a day for men , and 1.5–2 mg a day for females with regular menstrual periods.
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Original:  The total amount of loss for healthy people in the developed world amounts to an estimated average of a day for males , and 1.5–2 mg a day for females with regular menstrual periods.
Revised:  The total amount of loss for healthy people in the developed world amounts to an estimated average of a day for males , and 1.5–2 mg a day for women with regular menstrual periods.
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Original:  Most bacteria that cause human disease require iron to live and to multiply .
Revised:  Most bacteria that cause human disease require iron to live and to multipl .
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Original:  Most bacteria that cause human disease require iron to live and to multipl .
Revised:  Most bacteria that cause human disease require iron to live and to multiply .
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Original:  In 2014, Forbes ranked her as the 10th richest mainland Chinese, the richest women in China, and one of only 19 self-made female billionaires in the world.
Revised:  In 2014, Forbes ranked her as the 10th richest mainland Chinese, the richest woman in China, and one of only 19 self-made female billionaires in the world.
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Original:  In 2014, Forbes ranked her as the 10th richest mainland Chinese, the richest woman in China, and one of only 19 self-made female billionaires in the world  .
Revised:  In 2014, Forbes ranked her as the 10th richest mainland Chinese, the richest woman in China, and one of only 19 female billionaires in the world .
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Original: Chen is the founder  of the China Red Sandalwood Museum , in which she is also the curator .
Revised: Chen is the founder and curator of the China Red Sandalwood Museum , in which she is also the curator .
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Original: Chen is the founder  of the China Red Sandalwood Museum , in which she is also the curator .
Revised: Chen is the founder of the China Red Sandalwood Museum .
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Original:  At the time of her birth, the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed and her family  became poor.
Revised:  At the time of her birth, the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed and her family had became poor.
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Original:  At the time of her birth, the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed and her family had  became poor.
Revised:  When the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed and her family had became poor.
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Original:  At the time of her birth, the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed and her family had  became poor.
Revised:  At the time of her birth, the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed , her family had became poor.
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Original:  When the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed, her family had lost their estates and became poor.
Revised:  When the Manchu Qing dynasty collapsed, her family had lost their estates and became poor.
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Original:  When the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed, her family had lost their estates and became poor.
Revised:  When the Manchu Qing dynasty had collapsed, her family lost their estates and became poor.
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Original: Khabib Nurmagomodov on instagram Category:
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Original:  He is widely regarded as one of the greatest mixed martial artists of all time .
Revised:  He is widely regarded as the greatest lightweight in the history of mixed martial arts .
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Original:  He is widely regarded as the greatest lightweight in the history of mixed martial arts . Nurmagomedov was ranked #1 in the UFC men's pound-for-pound rankings at the time of his retirement, until being removed following his title vacation in March 2021.
Revised:  He is widely regarded as one of the greatest mixed martial artists of all time . Nurmagomedov was ranked #1 in the UFC men's pound-for-pound rankings at the time of his retirement, until being removed following his title vacation in March 2021.
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Original: In August 2021, Nurmagomedov attracted controversy after stating at an EFC press conference in Moscow that he saw no point to ring girls and their function of parading Octagon cards around before the start of each round.
Revised: In August 2021, Nurmagomedov attracted controversy after stating at an EFC press conference in Moscow that he saw no point to ring girls and their function of parading round cards around before the start of each round.
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Original:  They concluded that only those who are dissatisfied with their bodies prior to viewing advertisements will then feel poorly after seeing advertisements featuring thin, attractive women. 
Revised:  They concluded that only those who are dissatisfied with their bodies prior to viewing advertisements will then feel poorly after seeing advertisements featuring thin, attractive women. .
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Original: Effects on teenagers Heidi Posavac, Steven Posavac, and Emil Posavac  found that young women who are already content with their bodies are generally unaffected by media images of models and other attractive women  .
Revised: Effects on teenagers Heidi Posavac, Steven Posavac, and Emil Posavac " found that young women who are already content with their bodies are generally unaffected by media images of models and other attractive women .
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Original: Effects on teenagers Heidi Posavac, Steven Posavac, and Emil Posavac  found that young women who are already content with their bodies are generally unaffected by media images of models and other attractive women  .
Revised: Effects on teenagers Heidi Posavac, Steven Posavac, and Emil Posavac found that young women who are already content with their bodies are generally unaffected by media images of models and other attractive women " .
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Original: Bad effect Effect on society The way beauty is portrayed in the media tends to cause dissatisfaction and negative thoughts about oneself when those results are not achieved.
Revised: Bad effect Effect on society The way beauty is portrayed in the media tends to cause dissatisfaction and negative thoughts about ourself when those results are not achieved.
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Original:  While some of the Semitic words are purportedly Arabic, the general morphology and phonetics bear more resemblance to Aramaic.
Revised:  While some of the Semitic words are Arabic, the general morphology and phonetics bear more resemblance to Aramaic.
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Original: From the fifth century onward the Persian Gulf fell under the jurisdiction of the Assyrian Church of the East.
Revised: From the fifth century onward the Persian Gulf fell under the jurisdiction of the Church of the East.
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Original:  The Book of Jonah alludes to the presence of a monastery on the Black Islands, in the southern portion of Beth Qatraye, built between 343 and 346 by a monk named Mar Zadoe.
Revised:  The monk Jonah alludes to the presence of a monastery on the Black Islands, in the southern portion of Beth Qatraye, built between 343 and 346 by a monk named Mar Zadoe.
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Original: History Eastern Arabia After the region fell under the reign of the Sasanian Empire in the early third century, many of the inhabitants in Eastern Arabia were introduced to Christianity following the eastward dispersal of the religion by Mesopotamian Christians.
Revised: History After the region fell under the reign of the Sasanian Empire in the early third century, many of the inhabitants in Eastern Arabia were introduced to Christianity following the eastward dispersal of the religion by Mesopotamian Christians.
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Original:  Instead, they chose to pay the jizya, a tax for non-Muslims.
Revised:  Instead, many chose to pay the jizya, a tax for non-Muslims.
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Original:   Born in Lucknow, he was the son of Barrister Muhammad Wasim, the first Advocate General of Pakistan, and the pre-independence Advocate General of Uttar Pradesh.
Revised:  Early life Born in Lucknow, he was the son of Barrister Muhammad Wasim, the first Advocate General of Pakistan, and the pre-independence Advocate General of Uttar Pradesh.
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Original:  He died in August 2006 in Karachi.
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Original:  He was  endorsed by successive regimes and has been celebrated as one of the foremost judicial authorities of South Asia.
Revised:  He was even endorsed by successive regimes and has been celebrated as one of the foremost judicial authorities of South Asia.
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Original:  Education BSc, LL.B  , Lucknow University (1946), and LL.D (Honoris Causa) degree – Karachi University (1990).
Revised:  Education BSc, LL.B degrees , Lucknow University (1946), and LL.D (Honoris Causa) degree – Karachi University (1990).
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Original: Kalodont was a tooth paste brand produced by F. A. Sarg’s Sohn & Co. from Vienna, first sold in Austria-Hungary in 1887.
Revised: Kalodont was a toothpaste brand produced by F. A. Sarg’s Sohn & Co. from Vienna, first sold in Austria-Hungary in 1887.
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Original:  The word "noise " means any "unwanted sound ". Environmental noise monitoring is the measurement of noise in an outdoor environment caused by transport (e.g. motor vehicles, aircraft, and trains), industry (e.g. machines) and recreational activities (e.g. music).
Revised:  The word "noise " unwanted sounds ". Environmental noise monitoring is the measurement of noise in an outdoor environment caused by transport (e.g. motor vehicles, aircraft, and trains), industry (e.g. machines) and recreational activities (e.g. music).
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Original:  Various cures are available to combat Environmental Noise;
Revised:  Various interventions are available to combat Environmental Noise;
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Original:  Various cures are available to combat Environmental Noise;
Revised:  Various cures are available to combat environmental noise.
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Original:  Audio Systems and Broadcasting Noise measurement can also be part of a test procedure using white noise, or some other specialised form of test signal.
Revised:  Audio Systems and Broadcasting Noise measurement can also be part of a test procedure using white noise, or some other specialized form of test signal.
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Original: Shoaib Sultan Khan  (born 11 July 1933) is one of the pioneers of rural development programmes in Pakistan.
Revised: Shoaib Sultan Khan NI (born 11 July 1933) is one of the pioneers of rural development programmes in Pakistan.
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Original:  On 23 March 2019, Government of Pakistan awarded him the URL In March 2019, he was nominated to be a recipient of Nishan-i-Imtiaz, the highest civilian honour of Pakistan.
Revised:  On 23 March 2019, Government of Pakistan awarded him the Nishan-i-Imtiaz. In March 2019, he was nominated to be a recipient of Nishan-i-Imtiaz, the highest civilian honour of Pakistan.
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Original: The University of California, San Francisco School of Pharmacy, which is  the nation's top ranked Pharmacy School according to US News, bestows a Bowl Of Hygeia Award each year to a single graduating student from the School of Pharmacy.
Revised: The University of California, San Francisco School of Pharmacy, which is one of the nation's top ranked Pharmacy School according to US News, bestows a Bowl Of Hygeia Award each year to a single graduating student from the School of Pharmacy.
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Original: The University of California, San Francisco School of Pharmacy, which is  the nation's top ranked Pharmacy School according to US News, bestows a Bowl Of Hygeia Award each year to a single graduating student from the School of Pharmacy.
Revised: The University of California, San Francisco School of Pharmacy, which is the nation's top-ranked pharmacy schools according to US News, bestows a Bowl Of Hygeia Award each year to a single graduating student from the School of Pharmacy.
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Original: Bowl of Hygeia Award The Bowl of Hygeia Award is an award given by state, provincial, and national pharmacist associations in the United States and Canada to recognize living pharmacists who "possess outstanding records of civic leadership in their communities," while  "[encouraging] pharmacists to take active roles in their communities."
Revised: Bowl of Hygeia Award The Bowl of Hygeia Award is an award given by state, provincial, and national pharmacist associations in the United States and Canada to recognize living pharmacists who "possess outstanding records of civic leadership in their communities," while I bake a bowl of Jews "[encouraging] pharmacists to take active roles in their communities."
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Original:  correspondingly, Hygieia's symbol is a cup or chalice with a snake twined around its stem and poised above it . Hygieia was also invoked, along with her father Asclepius, and Panacea in the original Hippocratic Oath.
Revised:  correspondingly, Hygieia's symbol is a cup or chalice with a snake twined around its stem . Hygieia was also invoked, along with her father Asclepius, and Panacea in the original Hippocratic Oath.
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Original: Bowl of Hygeia Award The Bowl of Hygeia Award is an award given by state, provincial, and national pharmacist associations in the United States and Canada to recognize living pharmacists who "possess outstanding records of civic leadership in their communities," while " encouraging%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% pharmacists to take active roles in their communities."
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Original: Bowl of Hygeia Award The Bowl of Hygeia Award is an award given by state, provincial, and national pharmacist associations in the United States and Canada to recognize living pharmacists who "possess outstanding records of civic leadership in their communities," while " encouraging%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% pharmacists to take active roles in their communities."
Revised: Bowl of Hygeia Award The Bowl of Hygeia Award is an award given by state, provincial, and national pharmacist associations in the United States and Canada to recognize living pharmacists who "possess outstanding records of civic leadership in their communities," while " %DIFDELCMD < ] %%% pharmacists to take active roles in their communities."
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Original: Bowl of Hygeia Award The Bowl of Hygeia Award is an award given by state, provincial, and national pharmacist associations in the United States and Canada to recognize living pharmacists who "possess outstanding records of civic leadership in their communities," while " encouraging%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% pharmacists to take active roles in their communities."
Revised: Bowl of Hygeia Award The Bowl of Hygeia Award is an award given by state, provincial, and national pharmacist associations in the United States and Canada to recognize living pharmacists who "possess outstanding records of civic leadership in their communities," while " encouraging%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% 
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Original:  The award was established in 1958 by E. Claiborne Robins Sr,, president of A.H. Robins of Richmond, Virginia, and first presented by the Iowa Pharmaceutical Association at its annual convention.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In 1961, Robins's Bowl of Hygeia Award program expanded to Canada, and by 1967 it was being given by the pharmacists' associations in all 50 U.S. states as well as the District of Columbia, Puerto Rico, and all 10 Canadian provinces.
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Original:  State, provincial, and national pharmacists' associations now each select and sponsor their annual Bowl of Hygeia winners.
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Original:  Hygieia was the Greek goddess of Health hygiene, and the associate, wife, or daughter of Asclepius.
Revised:  Hygieia was the Greek goddess of health, hygiene, and the associate, wife, or daughter of Asclepius.
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Original:  20 May 1916 – 19 May 2001) was a  Soviet fighter ace during World War II and double amputee.
Revised:  20 May 1916 – 19 May 2001) was a Soviet fighter ace during World War II despite becoming a double amputee.
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Original:  In 1940  he graduated from  Bataysk Military School of Aviation.
Revised:  In 1940 , he graduated from Bataysk Military School of Aviation.
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Original:  In 1940  he graduated from  Bataysk Military School of Aviation.
Revised:  In 1940 he graduated from the Bataysk Military School of Aviation.
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Original:  He had shot down four German aircraft by March 1942, but on  4 April 1942 his Polikarpov I-16 was shot down near Staraya Russa, almost certainly by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler ;
Revised:  He had shot down four German aircraft by March 1942. 4 April 1942 his Polikarpov I-16 was shot down near Staraya Russa, almost certainly by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler ;
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Original:  He had shot down four German aircraft by March 1942, but on  4 April 1942 his Polikarpov I-16 was shot down near Staraya Russa, almost certainly by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler ;
Revised:  He had shot down four German aircraft by March 1942, but on On 4 April 1942 his Polikarpov I-16 was shot down near Staraya Russa, almost certainly by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler ;
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Original:  He had shot down four German aircraft by March 1942, but on  4 April 1942 his Polikarpov I-16 was shot down near Staraya Russa, almost certainly by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler ;
Revised:  He had shot down four German aircraft by March 1942, but on 4 April 1942 his Polikarpov I-16 was shot down near Staraya Russa, probably by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler ;
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Original:  He had shot down four German aircraft by March 1942, but on  4 April 1942 his Polikarpov I-16 was shot down near Staraya Russa, almost certainly by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler ;
Revised:  He had shot down four German aircraft by March 1942, but on 4 April 1942 his Polikarpov I-16 was shot down near Staraya Russa, almost certainly by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler ,
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Original:  His story served as a basis for the novel by Boris Polevoy The Story of a Real Man and a subsequent film (1948) directed by Aleksandr Stolper where his name was changed to Meresyev.
Revised:  His story served as a basis for the novel by Boris Polevoy The Story of a Real Man and a subsequent film (1948) directed by Aleksandr Stolper , in which his name was changed to Meresyev.
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Original: Biography dinousar Before joining the army in 1937 Maresyev worked as a turner and then participated in the construction of Komsomolsk-on-Amur.
Revised: Biography Before joining the army in 1937 Maresyev worked as a turner and then participated in the construction of Komsomolsk-on-Amur.
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Original:  On 5 April 2042 his Yakovlev Yak-1 was shot down near Staraya Russa, probably by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler, after which he was almost captured.
Revised:  On 5 April 1942 his Yakovlev Yak-1 was shot down near Staraya Russa, probably by future Knight's Cross holder and 48-kill ace Peter Siegler, after which he was almost captured.
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Original:  20 May 1916 – 19 May 2001) was a Russian military pilot who became a Soviet fighter ace during World War II despite becoming a double amputee.
Revised:  05 May 1916 – 19 May 2001) was a Russian military pilot who became a Soviet fighter ace during World War II despite becoming a double amputee.
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Original: Rugby career He first played for Western Transvaal (now known as the Leopards) as a 20 year old in 1975, and later moved on to provincial giants Northern Transvaal (Blue Bulls) winning the Currie Cup in 1981 and Transvaal (Golden Lions).
Revised: Rugby career He first played for Western Transvaal (now known as the Leopards) as a 20-year-old in 1975, and later moved on to provincial giants Northern Transvaal (Blue Bulls) winning the Currie Cup in 1981 and Transvaal (Golden Lions).
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Original:   Life after rugby After his retirement from playing, he went into business and became chairman of a company specializing in financial services.
Revised: Test history Life after rugby After his retirement from playing, he went into business and became chairman of a company specializing in financial services.
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Original: Ockert Wessel "Ockie" Oosthuizen ( born 1 April 1955  in Johannesburg, South Africa) is a former South African rugby player.
Revised: Ockert Wessel "Ockie" Oosthuizen ( 1 April 1955 in Johannesburg, South Africa) is a former South African rugby player.
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Original: Ockert Wessel "Ockie" Oosthuizen ( born 1 April 1955  in Johannesburg, South Africa) is a former South African rugby player.
Revised: Ockert Wessel "Ockie" Oosthuizen ( born 1 April 1955 in Johannesburg, South Africa) was a former South African rugby player.
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Original:  He later had to appear in front of disciplinary committee after allegations of receiving payment for playing form the Rand Afrikaanse Universiteit (Rand Afrikaans University, now the University of Johannesburg).
Revised:  He later had to appear in front of disciplinary committee after allegations of receiving payment for playing from the Rand Afrikaanse Universiteit (Rand Afrikaans University, now the University of Johannesburg).
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Original: Ockert Wessel "Ockie" Oosthuizen (1 April 1955 – 4 December 2019) in Johannesburg, South Africa) was a former South African rugby player.
Revised: Ockert Wessel "Ockie" Oosthuizen (1 April 1955 – 4 December 2019) in Johannesburg, South Africa) was a South African rugby player.
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