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Original:  "I don't think there is a particular tsunami danger from that earthquake," said seismologist Phil Cummins to the Agence France-Presse news agency  
Revised:  "I don't think there is a particular tsunami danger from that earthquake," said seismologist Phil Cummins to the Agence France-Presse news agency . 
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Original:  Chicago was the first candidate city eliminated in voting, with Tokyo was dropped in the second round.
Revised:  Chicago was the first candidate city eliminated in voting, with Tokyo being dropped in the second round.
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Original: The International Olympic Committee  has selected Rio de Janeiro, Brazil to host the 2016 Summer Olympics.
Revised: The International Olympic Committee (IOC) has selected Rio de Janeiro, Brazil to host the 2016 Summer Olympics.
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Original:  Brazilian president Lula said that his country would "deliver an unforgettable Games ". Rogge said that Rio de Janeiro had "a very strong technical bid, built upon a vision of the Games being a celebration of the athletes and sport, as well as providing the opportunity for the city, region and country to deliver their broader long-term aspirations for the future."
Revised:  Brazilian president Lula said that his country would "deliver an unforgettable Games ." Rogge said that Rio de Janeiro had "a very strong technical bid, built upon a vision of the Games being a celebration of the athletes and sport, as well as providing the opportunity for the city, region and country to deliver their broader long-term aspirations for the future."
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Original:  Give us this chance and you will not regret it," Brazil's president Luiz Inacio Lula da Silva had told the committee before the vote.
Revised:  Give us this chance and you will not regret it," Brazil's president Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva had told the committee before the vote.
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Original: The mudslides occurred in the city of Messina, located in the northern part of the island of Sicily.
Revised: City of MessinaThe mudslides occurred in the city of Messina, located in the northern part of the island of Sicily.
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Original: City of MessinaThe mudslides occurred in the city of Messina, located in the northern part of the island of Sicily.
Revised: City of MessinaThe mudslides occurred in the city of Messina, located in the northern part of Sicily.
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Original:  The most significant impacts may come in the form of mudslides   
Revised:  The most significant impacts may come in the form of mudslides . 
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Original:  In advance of the storm, President Gloria Arroyo issued a "state of calamity" and approximately 33,000 residents were advised to leave their homes  
Revised:  In advance of the storm, President Gloria Arroyo issued a "state of calamity" and approximately 33,000 residents were advised to leave their homes . 
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Original:  A lot of people here have homes made of flimsy material, and these are likely to suffer a lot of damage.  
Revised:  A lot of people here have homes made of flimsy material, and these are likely to suffer a lot of damage. " 
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Original:  Dominique Strauss-Kahn  The 2009 Annual Meetings of the Boards of Governors of the World Bank Group and the IMF will be held in Istanbul, Turkey on October 6-7 , 2009.
Revised:  Dominique Strauss-Kahn The 2009 Annual Meetings of the Boards of Governors of the World Bank Group and the IMF will be held in Istanbul, Turkey on October 6–7 , 2009.
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Original:  MF Managing Director Dominique Strauss-Kahn outlined three principles for building on close international collaboration during the global economic crisis to move toward sustainable and broad-based growth in the post-crisis world.
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Original:  At a press conference in Istanbul on October 2 ahead of the IMF-World Bank Annual Meetings, Strauss-Kahn said the Meetings were being held at a defining moment for the global economy when recovery from deep recession was getting under way.
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Original:  “Growth resuming is one thing, but it doesn’t mean that the crisis is behind us.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In its latest forecast for the global economy, the IMF says economic activity worldwide will expand by about 3 percent in 2010, after contracting by 1 percent in 2009.
Revised:  “Growth resuming is one thing, but it doesn’t mean that the crisis is behind us.”%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Strauss-Kahn said that unprecedented collaboration during the crisis had helped to avoid a global financial meltdown.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% G-20 sets the stage He urged policymakers from the IMF’s 186 member countries gathering in Istanbul, Turkey, to use the meetings to build on this collaboration to help reshape the post-crisis world , and strengthen forces for peace by reducing economic instability.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% He urged policymakers from the IMF’s 186 member countries gathering in Istanbul, Turkey, to use the meetings to build on this collaboration to help reshape the post-crisis world , and strengthen forces for peace by reducing economic instability.
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Original:  By reinforcing the financial credibility and legitimacy of the IMF, “this annual meeting may be the starting point of a new IMF.” Strauss-Kahn saw several immediate policy challenges:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • A premature withdrawal of fiscal and monetary support could kill the recovery.
Revised:  By reinforcing the financial credibility and legitimacy of the IMF, “this annual meeting may be the starting point of a new IMF.” %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% • A premature withdrawal of fiscal and monetary support could kill the recovery.
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Original:  In terms of reshaping the post-crisis world, Strauss-Kahn set out three principles to help guide the world toward more sustainable and broad-based growth: • Sustained international policy collaboration.
Revised:  • Sustained international policy collaboration.
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Original:  Lender of last resort%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a later speech at Istanbul’s Ҫıraǧan Palace entitled “Making the Most of an Historic Opportunity,” Strauss-Kahn elaborated on his proposal for a strengthened international monetary system with a global lender of last resort.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a later speech at Istanbul’s Ҫıraǧan Palace entitled “Making the Most of an Historic Opportunity,” Strauss-Kahn elaborated on his proposal for a strengthened international monetary system with a global lender of last resort.
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Original:  Lender of last resort%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a later speech at Istanbul’s Ҫıraǧan Palace entitled “Making the Most of an Historic Opportunity,” Strauss-Kahn elaborated on his proposal for a strengthened international monetary system with a global lender of last resort.
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Original:  ” Financial sector contribution%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At the press conference. in response to a question, Strauss-Kahn said the IMF would look into suggestions that the financial sector should contribute to a type of insurance scheme to cover the risks that the financial sector creates.
Revised:  ” %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At the press conference. in response to a question, Strauss-Kahn said the IMF would look into suggestions that the financial sector should contribute to a type of insurance scheme to cover the risks that the financial sector creates.
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Original: File:Dominique Strauss-Kahn - Strauss-Kahn meeting in Toulouse for the 2007 French presidential election 0032 2007-04-13 cropped.jpg|Dominique Strauss-Kahn The 2009 Annual Meetings of the Boards of Governors of the World Bank Group and the IMF will be held in Istanbul, Turkey on October 6–7, 2009.
Revised:  The 2009 Annual Meetings of the Boards of Governors of the World Bank Group and the IMF will be held in Istanbul, Turkey on October 6–7, 2009.
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Original: These meetings is held outside Washington, D.C. in every three years.
Revised: These meetings are held outside Washington, D.C. in every three years.
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Original:  A later image shows the boat almost entire submerged as rescue workers frantically work to rescue the trapped passengers.
Revised:  A later image shows the boat almost entirely submerged as rescue workers frantically work to rescue the trapped passengers.
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Original:  On Wednesday, September 30, a boat carrying 75 people, mainly women and children.
Revised:  On Wednesday, a boat carrying 75 people, mainly women and children.
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Original:  The paper cites a 1921 law  which says the driver must watch over the engine while another crew member, a 'srank', drives the vessel, but no one in that position was aboard the vessel when it capsized.
Revised:  The paper cites a 1921 law , which says the driver must watch over the engine while another crew member, a 'srank', drives the vessel, but no one in that position was aboard the vessel when it capsized.
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Original:  Samuel admits that he only obtained his lascar license one year ago . Earlier reports suggested he had more than 15 years of experience driving similar boats.
Revised:  Samuel said that he only obtained his lascar license one year ago . Earlier reports suggested he had more than 15 years of experience driving similar boats.
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Original:  Samuel admits that he only obtained his lascar license one year ago . Earlier reports suggested he had more than 15 years of experience driving similar boats.
Revised:  Samuel admits that he only obtained his lascar license one year ago , contradicting earlier reports that suggested he had more than 15 years of experience driving similar boats.
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Original:  So far  no criminal charges have been filed.
Revised:  So far , no criminal charges have been filed.
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Original:  The boat was made of mostly fiberglass, had two decks and was owned an operated by the Kerala Tourism Development Corporation, a government owned company.
Revised:  The boat was made of mostly fiberglass, had two decks and was owned an operated by the Kerala Tourism Development Corporation, a government-owned company.
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Original:  They had been returning from a fair that marked the end of the Durga Puja, an annual Hindu festival that celebrates the worship of the Hindu goddess Durga.
Revised:  They had been returning from a fair that marked the end of the Durga Puja, an annual Hindu festival celebrating the worship of the Hindu goddess Durga.
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Original:  Senegalese rebels in the area have been stepping up their attacks.
Revised:  Senegalese rebels in the area started stepping up their attacks.
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Original: Officials in southern India have said that four days of torrential rains and flash floods killed more than 130 people in the southern part of the country  .
Revised: Officials in southern India have said that flash floods killed more than 130 people in the southern part of the country .
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Original:  The army sent troops and helicopters into the Karnataka state and neighboring Andhra Pradesh to rescue stranded families and deliver emergency food and medical supplies . Hundreds of thousands of people have already been evacuated  .
Revised:  The army sent troops and helicopters to the states of Karnataka and Andhra Pradesh to rescue stranded families and deliver emergency food and medical supplies . Hundreds of thousands of people have already been evacuated .
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Original:  The army sent troops and helicopters into the Karnataka state and neighboring Andhra Pradesh to rescue stranded families and deliver emergency food and medical supplies . Hundreds of thousands of people have already been evacuated  .
Revised:  The army sent troops and helicopters into the Karnataka state and neighboring Andhra Pradesh to rescue people stranded by the flooding. They also delivered emergency medical supplies and food provisions . Hundreds of thousands of people have already been evacuated .
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Original:  The army sent troops and helicopters into the Karnataka state and neighboring Andhra Pradesh to rescue stranded families and deliver emergency food and medical supplies . Hundreds of thousands of people have already been evacuated  .
Revised:  The army sent troops and helicopters into the Karnataka state and neighboring Andhra Pradesh to rescue stranded families and deliver emergency food and medical supplies . Hundreds of thousands of people have already been evacuated out of the vicinity .
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Original:  Officials say the rains destroyed thousands of homes .
Revised:  The rains damaged or destroyed thousands of homes .
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Original:  Weather experts say the intense rains stem from a storm in the Bay of Bengal.
Revised:  Weather analysts have said that the intense rains stem from a storm in the Bay of Bengal.
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Original:  Weather experts say the intense rains stem from a storm in the Bay of Bengal.
Revised:  Weather experts say the intense rains come from a storm in the Bay of Bengal.
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Original:  Chief Minister of Karnataka  B. S. Yeddyurappa told media that the current situation was "serious".
Revised: The Chief Minister of Karnataka B. S. Yeddyurappa told media that the current situation was "serious".
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Original:  Chief Minister of Karnataka  B. S. Yeddyurappa told media that the current situation was "serious".
Revised:  Chief Minister of Karnataka , B. S. Yeddyurappa told media that the current situation was "serious".
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Original:  Chief Minister of Karnataka  B. S. Yeddyurappa told media that the current situation was "serious".
Revised:  Chief Minister of Karnataka B. S. Yeddyurappa , said that the current situation was "serious".
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Original:  "We have asked for more helicopters from the Indian Air Force to help us," he said .
Revised:  "We have asked for more helicopters from the Indian Air Force to help us," he told media .
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Original:  Chief Minister K. Rosaiah said that army personnel were dispatched to assist with rescue efforts.
Revised:  Chief Minister K. Rosaiah said that army personnel had dispatched to assist with rescue efforts.
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Original:  "Six chopper  have been pressed into service to immediately rescue people.
Revised:  "Six chopper sic have been pressed into service to immediately rescue people.
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Original: Officials in Afghanistan have said that an Afghan security officer opened fire on US troops while conducting a joint operation with them , killing two and wounding two others . A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday while Afghan and US forces were on patrol together in the area.
Revised: Officials in Afghanistan have said that an Afghan security officer opened fire on American troops while conducting a joint operation with them , killing two and wounding two others . A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday while Afghan and US forces were on patrol together in the area.
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Original: Officials in Afghanistan have said that an Afghan security officer opened fire on US troops while conducting a joint operation with them , killing two and wounding two others . A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday while Afghan and US forces were on patrol together in the area.
Revised: Officials in Afghanistan have said that an Afghan security officer opened fire on US troops while conducting a joint operation with them . Two were killed two others were wounded . A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday while Afghan and US forces were on patrol together in the area.
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Original: Officials in Afghanistan have said that an Afghan security officer opened fire on US troops while conducting a joint operation with them , killing two and wounding two others . A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday while Afghan and US forces were on patrol together in the area.
Revised: Officials in Afghanistan have said that an Afghan security officer opened fire on US troops while conducting a joint operation with them , killing two and wounding two others . A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday while Afghan and U.S. forces were on patrol together in the area.
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Original:  A statement from NATO-led forces in Afghanistan said two US soldiers died from injuries sustained in a "hostile attack" Friday, but declined to give further details.
Revised:  A statement from NATO-led forces in Afghanistan said two U.S. soldiers died from injuries sustained in a "hostile attack" Friday, but declined to give further details.
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Original:  NATO says two other US troops died Friday in a bomb attack in southern Afghanistan.
Revised:  NATO says two other U.S. troops died Friday in a bomb attack in southern Afghanistan.
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Original:  US and NATO troops in Afghanistan have recently been facing stiffer Taliban resistance.
Revised:  U.S. and NATO troops in Afghanistan have recently been facing stiffer Taliban resistance.
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Original:  Afghan security officers have attacked US soldiers at least two times in 2008.
Revised:  Afghan security officers have attacked U.S. soldiers at least two times in 2008.
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Original:  2009 is the deadliest year for foreign forces  since the conflict began nearly eight years ago
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Original: Officials in Afghanistan have said that an Afghan security officer opened fire on American troops while conducting a joint operation with them .
Revised: An Afghan security officer opened fire on American troops while conducting a joint operation with them .
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Original:  Two were killed two others were wounded .
Revised:  Two were killed two others were injured .
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Original:  A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday while Afghan and U.S. forces were on patrol together in the area .
Revised:  A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting happened late on Friday while Afghan and U.S. forces were on patrol together in the area .
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Original:  A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday while Afghan and U.S. forces were on patrol together in the area .
Revised:  A spokesman for the governor of Wardak province said the shooting occurred late on Friday , while both countries' forces were patrolling the area together .
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Original:  A statement from NATO-led forces in Afghanistan said two U.S. soldiers died from injuries sustained in a "hostile attack" Friday, but declined to give further details . NATO says two other U.S. troops died Friday in a bomb attack in southern Afghanistan.
Revised:  NATO-led forces in Afghanistan said two U.S. soldiers died from injuries sustained in a "hostile attack" Friday, but declined to give further details . NATO says two other U.S. troops died Friday in a bomb attack in southern Afghanistan.
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Original:  A statement from NATO-led forces in Afghanistan said two U.S. soldiers died from injuries sustained in a "hostile attack" Friday, but declined to give further details . NATO says two other U.S. troops died Friday in a bomb attack in southern Afghanistan.
Revised:  A statement from NATO-led forces in Afghanistan said two U.S. soldiers died from wounds received in the so-called "hostile attack" Friday, but declined to give further details . NATO says two other U.S. troops died Friday in a bomb attack in southern Afghanistan.
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Original:  A statement from NATO-led forces in Afghanistan said two U.S. soldiers died from injuries sustained in a "hostile attack" Friday, but declined to give further details . NATO says two other U.S. troops died Friday in a bomb attack in southern Afghanistan.
Revised:  A statement from NATO-led forces in Afghanistan said two U.S. soldiers died from injuries sustained in a "hostile attack" , but did not give any further information . NATO says two other U.S. troops died Friday in a bomb attack in southern Afghanistan.
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Original:  Another died of wounds sustained in a bomb attack in eastern Afghanistan.
Revised:  Another died from injuries received after a bomb explosion in eastern Afghanistan.
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Original:  U.S. and NATO troops in Afghanistan have recently been facing stiffer Taliban resistance . Afghan security officers have attacked U.S. soldiers at least two times in 2008.
Revised:  The violence comes as US and NATO armed forces have recently began to meet with stronger resistance from Taliban fighters . Afghan security officers have attacked U.S. soldiers at least two times in 2008.
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Original:  U.S. and NATO troops in Afghanistan have recently been facing stiffer Taliban resistance . Afghan security officers have attacked U.S. soldiers at least two times in 2008.
Revised:  U.S. and NATO troops in Afghanistan have recently been facing stiffer Taliban resistance . Afghan security officers have attacked US soldiers at least two times in 2008.
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Original:  2009 has been the deadliest year for foreign forces so far, since the conflict began nearly eight years ago
Revised:  This year has been the deadliest year for foreign forces so far, since the conflict began nearly eight years ago
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Original:  2009 has been the deadliest year for foreign forces so far, since the conflict began nearly eight years ago
Revised:  2009 has been the deadliest for foreign troops in Afghanistan since troops entered the country almost eight years ago
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Original: Officials in Kenya say three foreign aid workers with the aid group Action Against Hunger  that were kidnapped by Somali gunmen in July in northern Kenya  have now been released.
Revised: Officials in Kenya say three foreign aid workers with the aid group Action Against Hunger , that were kidnapped by Somali gunmen in July in northern Kenya have now been released.
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Original: Officials in Kenya say three foreign aid workers with the aid group Action Against Hunger  that were kidnapped by Somali gunmen in July in northern Kenya  have now been released.
Revised: Officials in Kenya say three foreign aid workers with the aid group Action Against Hunger that were kidnapped by Somali gunmen in July in northern Kenya , have now been released.
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Original:  Authorities say that the three were released  Saturday and are expected to fly to Kenya's capital of Nairobi.
Revised:  Authorities say that the three were released on Saturday and are expected to fly to Kenya's capital of Nairobi.
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Original: The United States Department of Homeland Security has raised the terror alert level to orange, or high for trains in reaction to the bombings of three subway trains and a bus in London.
Revised: The United States Department of Homeland Security has raised the terror alert level to "orange" for trains in reaction to the bombings of three subway trains and a bus in London.
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Original:  "Currently, the United States has no specific, credible information suggesting an imminent attack in the United States .",according to Chertoff.
Revised:  "Currently, the United States has no specific, credible information suggesting an imminent attack in the United States ," says Chertoff.
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