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Original: Tushar Kanti Ghosh (September 21, 1898 - August 29, 1994 , age 95 ) was a prominent Bengali author and journalist who penned several novels and short stories.
Revised: Tushar Kanti Ghosh (September 21, 1898 - August 29, 1994 ) was a prominent Bengali author and journalist who penned several novels and short stories.
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Original:  He was closely associated with  Amrita Bazar Patrika publications in Kolkata.
Revised:  He was closely associated with Amrita Bazar Patrika newspaper in Kolkata.
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Original:  For many years, he was the chief editor of Jugantar, a major Bengali daily newspaper.
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Original: The Story of the Bangabasi College He is known as '"Grand old Man of Indian journalism"  . References
Revised: The Story of the Bangabasi College He was known as '"Grand old Man of Indian journalism" . References
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Original: The Story of the Bangabasi College He is known as '"Grand old Man of Indian journalism"  . References
Revised: The Story of the Bangabasi College He is known as '"Grand old Man of Indian journalism" . Reference
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Original:  He studied at the Bangabasi College of the University of Calcutta.
Revised:  Ghosh studied at the Bangabasi College of the University of Calcutta.
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Original:  In addition to his work as a journalist, Ghosh wrote fictional novels and children's books.
Revised: According to a possibly apocryphal story, the colonial Governor of Bengal Province once informed Ghosh that while he read his paper regularly, its grammar was imperfect and "it does some violence to the English language." Ghosh reportedly replied, "That, Your Excellency, is my contribution to the freedom struggle." In addition to his work as a journalist, Ghosh wrote fictional novels and children's books.
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Original:  The Story of the Bangabasi College He rose to prominence as a journalist in the Indian independence movement.
Revised:  He rose to prominence as a journalist in the Indian independence movement.
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Original: Tushar Kanti Ghosh (September 21, 1898 - August 29, 1994) was a prominent Bengali author and journalist .
Revised: Tushar Kanti Ghosh (September 21, 1898 - August 29, 1994) was a prominent Bengali journalist and author .
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Original:  Founder of three newspapers, he was a supporter of Mahatma Gandhi  . British colonial authorities imprisoned Ghosh in 1935 for an article which attacked the authority of British judges.
Revised:  He was a supporter of Mahatma Gandhi . British colonial authorities imprisoned Ghosh in 1935 for an article which attacked the authority of British judges.
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Original: Tushar Kanti Ghosh (September 21, 1898 - August 29, 1994) was a prominent Bengali journalist and author.
Revised: Tushar Kanti Ghosh (September 21, 1898 - August 29, 1994) was an Indian journalist and author.
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Original: Quantity of carbon  + Estimates for carbon in various reservoirs . Reservoir gigatonne C Above surface Continental crust and lithosphere Oceanic crust and lithosphere Upper mantle Lower mantle The quantity of carbon in the atmosphere and oceans is a small fraction of one percent of Earth's carbon.
Revised: Quantity of carbon + Estimates for carbon in the mantle, crust and surface . Reservoir gigatonne C Above surface Continental crust and lithosphere Oceanic crust and lithosphere Upper mantle Lower mantle The quantity of carbon in the atmosphere and oceans is a small fraction of one percent of Earth's carbon.
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Original: Quantity of carbon  + Estimates for carbon in various reservoirs . Reservoir gigatonne C Above surface Continental crust and lithosphere Oceanic crust and lithosphere Upper mantle Lower mantle The quantity of carbon in the atmosphere and oceans is a small fraction of one percent of Earth's carbon.
Revised: Quantity of carbon + Estimates for carbon in various reservoirs . Reservoir gigatonne C Above surface Continental crust and lithosphere Oceanic crust and lithosphere Upper mantle Lower mantle The carbon in the atmosphere and oceans is a small fraction of one percent of Earth's carbon.
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Original:  Even at the lower concentration, this would account for half Earth's carbon   .
Revised:  Even at the lower concentration, this would account for half Earth's carbon . .
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Original:  Over 90\% of it may reside in the core, most of the rest being in the crust and mantle.
Revised:  Over 90\% may reside in the core, most of the rest being in the crust and mantle.
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Original: 438x438px | Carbon outgassing processes The deep carbon cycle is the movement of carbon through the Earth's mantle and core.
Revised: 438x438px | The deep carbon cycle is the movement of carbon through the Earth's mantle and core.
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Original:  Lower mantle 304x304px|Movement of oceanic plates—which carry carbon compounds—through the mantle Carbon principally enters the mantle in the form of carbonate-rich sediments on tectonic plates of ocean crust, which pull the carbon into the mantle upon undergoing subduction.
Revised:  Lower mantle Carbon principally enters the mantle in the form of carbonate-rich sediments on tectonic plates of ocean crust, which pull the carbon into the mantle upon undergoing subduction.
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Original:  Diagram of carbon tetrahedrally bonded to oxygen  Carbonates descending to the lower mantle form other compounds besides diamonds.
Revised:  Carbonates descending to the lower mantle form other compounds besides diamonds.
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Original:  Core Analysis of shear wave velocities has played an integral role in the development of knowledge about carbon's existence in the coreAlthough the presence of carbon in the Earth's core is well-constrained, recent studies suggest large inventories of carbon could be stored in this region.
Revised:  Core Although the presence of carbon in the Earth's core is well-constrained, recent studies suggest large inventories of carbon could be stored in this region.
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Original:  Hence, although the amount of carbon potentially stored in the Earth's core is not known, recent research indicates that the presence of iron carbides could be consistent with geophysical observations    
Revised:  Hence, although the amount of carbon potentially stored in the Earth's core is not known, recent research indicates that the presence of iron carbides could be consistent with geophysical observations . 
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Original: 3| Movement of oceanic plates—which carry carbon compounds—through the mantle upright=1.55| Fluxes upright=3.5 | Galler
Revised: 3| Movement of oceanic plates—which carry carbon compounds—through the mantle upright=1.55| Fluxes upright=3.5 Galler
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Original: 3| Movement of oceanic plates—which carry carbon compounds—through the mantle upright=1.55| Fluxes upright=3.5 | Galler
Revised: 3| Movement of oceanic plates—which carry carbon compounds—through the mantle upright=1.55| Fluxes upright=3.5 | 
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Original:  The research suggested that for children and adolescents who struggle with ADHD, it is essential to supervise digital media usage and increase physical exercise for better management of core symptoms and other associated difficulties associated with URL
Revised:  The research suggested that for children and adolescents who struggle with ADHD, it is essential to supervise digital media usage and increase physical exercise for better management of core symptoms and other associated difficulties associated with ADHD.
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Original:  Vol. 58 No. 4 (2021): Volume 58 No. 4 (2021) | Psychology and Education Journal
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Original: According to the World Health Organization (WHO), a subluxation is a "significant structural displacement", and is therefore always visible on static imaging studies, such as X-rays  .
Revised: According to the World Health Organization (WHO), a subluxation is a "significant structural displacement", and is therefore often visible on static imaging studies, such as X-rays .
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Original: According to the World Health Organization (WHO), a subluxation is a "significant structural displacement", and is therefore often visible on static imaging studies, such as X-rays, although this may involve multiple forms of imaging and may be missed depending on the skill or method of the radiologist .
Revised: According to the World Health Organization (WHO), a subluxation is a "significant structural displacement", and is therefore often visible on static imaging studies, such as X-rays, although this may involve multiple forms of imaging .
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Original:  In slipping rib syndrome, one or more ribs slip over adjacent ribs. . This may or may not be referred to as a subluxation.
Revised:  In slipping rib syndrome, one or more ribs slip over adjacent ribs. This may or may not be referred to as a subluxation.
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Original:  In painful situations, a temporary splinting of the injured teeth may relieve the pain.
Revised:  In painful situations, a temporary splinting of the injured tooth may relieve the pain.
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Original:  The effectiveness is  measured as a personal attenuation rating (PAR) which is subtracted from the known noise exposure to estimate the total noise exposure a single person has when wearing the tested hearing protection device (HPD).
Revised:  The effectiveness is typically measured as a personal attenuation rating (PAR) which is subtracted from the known noise exposure to estimate the total noise exposure a single person has when wearing the tested hearing protection device (HPD).
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Original:  Wearing or inserting the hearing protection device correctly so it seals the wearer's ear canal, using the "roll-pull-hold" method for foam earplugs, and ensuring earmuffs create a seal around each ear.
Revised:  Wearing or inserting the hearing protection device correctly so it seals the wearer's ear canal, using the "roll-pull-hold" method for foam earplugs, and ensuring earmuffs create an unbroken seal around each ear.
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Original:  Different methods can be  used to measure the attenuation provided by HPDs . They are :
Revised:  Different methods can be used to measure the attenuation provided by HPDs are as follows :
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Original:  This calculates a personal attenuation rating based on the loudness of the sound delivered to the unprotected ear when it matches the protected ear  
Revised:  This calculates a personal attenuation rating based on the loudness of the sound delivered to the unprotected ear when it matches the protected ear . 
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Original:  Some articles capitalized on women's new-found independence, offering workout programs that would make them strong enough to help do "men's work" or hard labor in time's of emergency, others offered after-hour fitness programs for working women, and some targeted the at-home mom and how she could fit fitness into her every day routine without spending a penny.
Revised:  Some articles capitalized on women's new-found independence, offering workout programs that would make them strong enough to help do "men's work" or hard labor in times of emergency, others offered after-hour fitness programs for working women, and some targeted the at-home mom and how she could fit fitness into her every day routine without spending a penny.
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Original:  Jacki Sorenson and Judi Missett were two women that came to the forefront of aerobic exercise in the 70's and 80's . Both had been dancers and created exercise programs that combined aerobic exercise with dance.
Revised:  Jacki Sorensen and Judi Missett were two women that came to the forefront of aerobic exercise in the 70's and 80's . Both had been dancers and created exercise programs that combined aerobic exercise with dance.
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Original:  Jacki Sorenson and Judi Missett were two women that came to the forefront of aerobic exercise in the 70's and 80's . Both had been dancers and created exercise programs that combined aerobic exercise with dance.
Revised:  Jacki Sorenson and Judi Missett were two women that came to the forefront of aerobic exercise in the 1970s and 80s . Both had been dancers and created exercise programs that combined aerobic exercise with dance.
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Original:  Jacki Sorenson founded Aerobic Dancing Inc. which began as a television program in 1969, and later became a book with audio and videocassette tapes.
Revised:  Jacki Sorensen founded Aerobic Dancing Inc. which began as a television program in 1969, and later became a book with audio and videocassette tapes.
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Original: During the 1980s, videocassetes were sold to let women exercise at home.
Revised: During the 1980s, videocassettes were sold to let women exercise at home.
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Original:  These broadcast instructions usually features instructions such as "don't forget to breathe" or "this part is great for the gluteis maximis ".
Revised:  These broadcast instructions usually features instructions such as "don't forget to breathe" or "this part is great for the gluteus maximus ".
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Original:  Soon there was a videocasseete for every type of exercise.
Revised:  Soon there was a videocassette for every type of exercise.
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Original:  Richard Simmons was popular because of having lost alarge amount of weight.
Revised:  Richard Simmons was popular because of having lost a large amount of weight.
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Original:  His video shows were very motivational for viewers of all type
Revised:  His video shows were very motivational for viewers of all types
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Original:  Their research was focused on determining what the ideal, most efficient body would  like.
Revised:  Their research was focused on determining what the ideal, most efficient body would be like.
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Original:  His video shows were very motivational for viewers of all types   
Revised:  His video shows were very motivational for viewers of all types . 
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Original: The coup On 24 December 1990, around midnight Suriname Time (UTC−03:00), Graanoogst told President Shankar by telephone that he was being deposed and he and his government “ had better stay home ” . On 27 December the government was dismissed, the National Assembly dissolved and Johan Kraag was appointed acting President on 29 December.
Revised: The coup On 24 December 1990, around midnight Suriname Time (UTC−03:00), Graanoogst told President Shankar by telephone that he was being deposed and he and his government " had better stay home ” . On 27 December the government was dismissed, the National Assembly dissolved and Johan Kraag was appointed acting President on 29 December.
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Original: The coup On 24 December 1990, around midnight Suriname Time (UTC−03:00), Graanoogst told President Shankar by telephone that he was being deposed and he and his government “ had better stay home ” . On 27 December the government was dismissed, the National Assembly dissolved and Johan Kraag was appointed acting President on 29 December.
Revised: The coup On 24 December 1990, around midnight Suriname Time (UTC−03:00), Graanoogst told President Shankar by telephone that he was being deposed and he and his government “ had better stay home " . On 27 December the government was dismissed, the National Assembly dissolved and Johan Kraag was appointed acting President on 29 December.
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Original: The 1990 Surinamese coup d'état, usually referred to as the Telephone Coup (), was a military coup in Suriname which occurred on 24 December 1990.
Revised: The 1990 Surinamese coup d'état, usually referred to as the Telephone Coup (), was a military coup in Suriname on 24 December 1990.
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Original:  The coup was carried out by Acting Commander-in-Chief of the Suriname National Army (SNL), Police Chief Ivan Graanoogst.
Revised:  The coup was carried out by the acting commander-in-chief of the Suriname National Army (SNL), Police Chief Ivan Graanoogst.
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Original:  From 1991 to 1996, the President was Ronald Venetiaan, an opponent of Bouterse.
Revised:  From 1991 to 1996, the president was Ronald Venetiaan, an opponent of Bouterse.
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Original:  In the 2010 presidential election, Bouterse was elected President of Suriname .
Revised:  During the 2010 presidential election, Bouterse was elected President of Suriname .
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Original:  In the 2010 presidential election, Bouterse was elected President of Suriname .
Revised:  In the 2010 presidential election, Bouterse was elected president .
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Original:  He dissolved the National Assembly, suspended the Constitution , imposed a state of emergency in the country  and created a special tribunal , which considered the cases of members of the previous government.
Revised:  He dissolved the National Assembly, suspended the constitution , imposed a state of emergency in the country and created a special tribunal , which considered the cases of members of the previous government.
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Original:  He dissolved the National Assembly, suspended the Constitution , imposed a state of emergency in the country  and created a special tribunal , which considered the cases of members of the previous government.
Revised:  He dissolved the National Assembly, suspended the Constitution , imposed a state of emergency in the country , and created a special tribunal , which considered the cases of members of the previous government.
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Original:  He dissolved the National Assembly, suspended the Constitution , imposed a state of emergency in the country  and created a special tribunal , which considered the cases of members of the previous government.
Revised:  He dissolved the National Assembly, suspended the Constitution , imposed a state of emergency in the country and created a special tribunal that considered the cases of members of the previous government.
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Original:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
Revised:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
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Original:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
Revised:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election if he remained the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
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Original:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
Revised:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, his National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
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Original:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
Revised:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
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Original:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, while the opposition received 40.
Revised:  In 1987, Bouterse agreed to reinstate the Constitution and hold election , on the condition that he remain the head of the SNL. However, in the November 1987 general election, the National Democratic Party (the party headed by Bouterse) received only 3 of 51 seats in the National Assembly, and the opposition received 40.
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Original:  The presidential election  held on 25 January 1988  was won by Ramsewak Shankar, who was disliked by the SNL, and Henck Arron, who was overthrown in the 1980 coup, was appointed Prime Minister .
Revised:  The presidential election , held on 25 January 1988 was won by Ramsewak Shankar, who was disliked by the SNL, and Henck Arron, who was overthrown in the 1980 coup, was appointed Prime Minister .
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Original:  The presidential election  held on 25 January 1988  was won by Ramsewak Shankar, who was disliked by the SNL, and Henck Arron, who was overthrown in the 1980 coup, was appointed Prime Minister .
Revised:  The presidential election held on 25 January 1988 , was won by Ramsewak Shankar, who was disliked by the SNL, and Henck Arron, who was overthrown in the 1980 coup, was appointed Prime Minister .
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Original:  The presidential election  held on 25 January 1988  was won by Ramsewak Shankar, who was disliked by the SNL, and Henck Arron, who was overthrown in the 1980 coup, was appointed Prime Minister .
Revised:  The presidential election held on 25 January 1988 was won by Ramsewak Shankar, who was disliked by the SNL, and Henck Arron, who was overthrown during the 1980 coup, was appointed Prime Minister .
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Original:  The presidential election  held on 25 January 1988  was won by Ramsewak Shankar, who was disliked by the SNL, and Henck Arron, who was overthrown in the 1980 coup, was appointed Prime Minister .
Revised:  The presidential election held on 25 January 1988 was won by Ramsewak Shankar, who was disliked by the SNL, and Henck Arron, who was overthrown in the 1980 coup, was appointed prime minister .
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Original:  Tension between the government and the SNL was growing. on 22 December 1990, Bouterse resigned as Commander-in-Chief, stating that he could not fulfill the role of a clown who "does not have pride and dignity."
Revised:  Tension between the government and the SNL was growing. On 22 December 1990, Bouterse resigned as Commander-in-Chief, stating that he could not fulfill the role of a clown who "does not have pride and dignity."
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Original:  Tension between the government and the SNL was growing. on 22 December 1990, Bouterse resigned as Commander-in-Chief, stating that he could not fulfill the role of a clown who "does not have pride and dignity."
Revised:  Tension between the government and the SNL was growing. on 22 December 1990, Bouterse resigned as commander-in-chief and stated that he could not fulfill the role of a clown who "does not have pride and dignity."
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