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Original:  Our personal experience of on-shore breezes shows us that the thermals , or warm airs, that rise from the land and sea respectively have a sensible effect on the local microscale meteorology;
Revised:  Thermals , or warm airs, that rise from the land and sea respectively have a sensible effect on the local microscale meteorology;
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Original:  Our personal experience of on-shore breezes shows us that the thermals , or warm airs, that rise from the land and sea respectively have a sensible effect on the local microscale meteorology;
Revised:  Our personal experience of on-shore breezes shows us that the thermals , or warm airs, that rise from the land and sea affect the local microscale meteorology;
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Original:  and perhaps at times on the mesometeorology.
Revised:  and perhaps at times the mesometeorology.
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Original:  It has been severally reported that in a stratified atmosphere cross-stream exchange occurs above the Planetary boundary layer when there is a vertical motion of significant moment.
Revised:  It has been severally reported that in a stratified atmosphere cross-stream exchange occurs above the planetary boundary layer when there is a vertical motion of significant moment.
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Original: Pope Gregory XIII ( ;
Revised: Pope Gregory Pope Gregory XIII ( ;
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Original:  Gregory XIII also established the Discalced Carmelites , an offshoot of the Carmelite Order , as a distinct unit or "province" within the former by the decree "Pia consideratione" dated 22 June 1580,Otilio Rodriguez, OCD, Appendix I: The Third Order of the Teresian Carmel;
Revised:  Gregory XIII also established the , an offshoot of the Carmelite Order , as a distinct unit or "province" within the former by the decree "Pia consideratione" dated 22 June 1580,Otilio Rodriguez, OCD, Appendix I: The Third Order of the Teresian Carmel;
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Original:  Gregory XIII also established the Discalced Carmelites , an offshoot of the Carmelite Order , as a distinct unit or "province" within the former by the decree "Pia consideratione" dated 22 June 1580,Otilio Rodriguez, OCD, Appendix I: The Third Order of the Teresian Carmel;
Revised:  Gregory XIII also established the Discalced Carmelites , an offshoot of the , as a distinct unit or "province" within the former by the decree "Pia consideratione" dated 22 June 1580,Otilio Rodriguez, OCD, Appendix I: The Third Order of the Teresian Carmel;
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Original:  Formation of clergy and promotion of the arts and sciences Gregory XIII was a generous patron of the recently formed Society of Jesus throughout Europe , for which he founded many new colleges.
Revised:  , for which he founded many new colleges.
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Original:  Pope Gregory XIII also founded numerous seminaries for training priests, beginning with the German College at Rome, and put them in the charge of the Jesuits .
Revised:  Pope Gregory XIII also founded seminaries for training priests, beginning with the German College at Rome, and put them in the charge of the Jesuits .
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Original:  Pope Gregory XIII also founded numerous seminaries for training priests, beginning with the German College at Rome, and put them in the charge of the Jesuits .
Revised:  Pope Gregory XIII also founded numerous seminaries for training priests, beginning .
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Original: Pope Gregory XIII had no connection with the plot of Henry, Duke of Guise, and his brother, Charles, Duke of Mayenne, to assassinate Elizabeth I in 1582.
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Original:  Ugonottorum Strages medal After the St. Bartholomew's Day Massacres of Huguenots in France in 1572, Pope Gregory  celebrated a Te Deum mass.
Revised:  Ugonottorum Strages medal After the St. Bartholomew's Day Massacres of Huguenots in France in 1572, Pope Gregory signaled his approval and celebrated a Te Deum mass.
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Original:  However, some hold that he was ignorant of the nature of the plot at the time, having been told the Huguenots had tried to take over the government but failed.
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Original:  Three frescoes in the Sala Regia hall of the Vatican depicting the events were  painted by Giorgio Vasari , and a commemorative medal was issued with Gregory's portrait and on the obverse a chastising angel, sword in hand and the legend UGONOTTORUM STRAGES ("Overthrow of the Huguenots").
Revised:  Three frescoes in the Sala Regia hall of the Vatican depicting the events were commissioned and painted by Giorgio Vasari , and a commemorative medal was issued with Gregory's portrait and on the obverse a chastising angel, sword in hand and the legend UGONOTTORUM STRAGES ("Overthrow of the Huguenots").
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Original:  Three frescoes in the Sala Regia hall of the Vatican depicting the events were  painted by Giorgio Vasari , and a commemorative medal was issued with Gregory's portrait and on the obverse a chastising angel, sword in hand and the legend UGONOTTORUM STRAGES ("Overthrow of the Huguenots").
Revised:  Three frescoes in the Sala Regia hall of the Vatican depicting the events were painted by Giorgio Vasari . A commemorative medal was issued with Gregory's portrait and on the obverse a chastising angel, sword in hand and the legend UGONOTTORUM STRAGES ("Overthrow of the Huguenots").
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Original: The International Scale of River Difficulty is an American system used to rate the difficulty of  a stretch of river, or a single (sometimes whitewater) rapid.
Revised: The international scale of river difficulty is an American system used to rate the difficulty of a stretch of river, or a single (sometimes whitewater) rapid.
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Original: The International Scale of River Difficulty is an American system used to rate the difficulty of  a stretch of river, or a single (sometimes whitewater) rapid.
Revised: The International Scale of River Difficulty is an American system used to rate the difficulty of navigating a stretch of river, or a single (sometimes whitewater) rapid.
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Original:  The scale was created by the American Whitewater Association for the purpose of evaluating rivers throughout the world, hence International in the title.
Revised:  The scale was created by the American Whitewater Association to evaluate rivers throughout the world, hence International in the title.
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Original:  The scale was created by the American Whitewater Association for the purpose of evaluating rivers throughout the world, hence International in the title.
Revised:  The scale was created by the American Whitewater Association for the purpose of evaluating rivers throughout the world, hence international in the title.
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Original:  Rapids may require “must make” moves above dangerous hazards.
Revised:  Rapids may require "must make" moves above dangerous hazards.
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Original:  That is, going from Class 5.0 to Class 5.1 is a similar order of magnitude as increasing from Class IV to Class 5.0. 100px Class VIExtreme and Exploratory Rapids Runs of this classification are rarely attempted and often exemplify the extremes of difficulty, unpredictability and danger.
Revised:  That is, going from Class 5.0 to Class 5.1 is a similar order of magnitude as increasing from Class IV to Class 5.0. 100px Class VI:Extreme and Exploratory Rapids Runs of this classification are rarely attempted and often exemplify the extremes of difficulty, unpredictability and danger.
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Original:  It should not be confused with the internationally used whitewater scale, which is published and adapted by a committee of the International Canoe Federation ICF .
Revised:  It should not be confused with the internationally used whitewater scale, which is published and adapted by a committee of the International Canoe Federation (ICF) .
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Original: Classification There are six categories, each referred to as "Grade" or "Class" followed by a number.
Revised: Classification There are six categories, each referred to as grade or class followed by a number.
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Original:  It should be noted that V+ is occasionally used for insurance purposes, since listing it as a Class VI would not be insurable.
Revised:  V+ is occasionally used for insurance purposes, since listing it as a Class VI would not be insurable.
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Original:  That is, going from Class 5.0 to Class 5.1 is a similar order of magnitude as increasing from Class IV to Class 5.0. Often these distinctions are simply classified as "V+." V+ is occasionally used for insurance purposes, since listing it as a Class VI would not be insurable.
Revised:  That is, going from Class 5.0 to Class 5.1 is a similar order of magnitude as increasing from Class IV to Class 5.0. 
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Original:  One of the major research goals was to determine some of the causes of dementia and Alzheimer's disease like , for example, the correlation between the levels of aluminum in drinking water and the occurrence of URL J Epidemiol.
Revised:  One of the major research goals was to determine some of the causes of dementia and Alzheimer's disease , for example, the correlation between the levels of aluminum in drinking water and the occurrence of URL J Epidemiol.
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Original:  One of the major research goals was to determine some of the causes of dementia and Alzheimer's disease, such as the correlation between the levels of aluminum in drinking water and the occurrence of URL The source of the term is "Personnes Agées QUID," which can be loosely translated from French and Latin as "What about the URL
Revised:  One of the major research goals was to determine some of the causes of dementia and Alzheimer's disease, such as the correlation between the levels of aluminum in drinking water and the occurrence of dementia. The source of the term is "Personnes Agées QUID," which can be loosely translated from French and Latin as "What about the URL
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Original:  One of the major research goals was to determine some of the causes of dementia and Alzheimer's disease, such as the correlation between the levels of aluminum in drinking water and the occurrence of URL The source of the term is "Personnes Agées QUID," which can be loosely translated from French and Latin as "What about the URL
Revised:  One of the major research goals was to determine some of the causes of dementia and Alzheimer's disease, such as the correlation between the levels of aluminum in drinking water and the occurrence of URL The source of the term is "Personnes Agées QUID," which can be loosely translated from French and Latin as "What about the elderly?"
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Original: External Link Johns Hopkins science review.
Revised: External links Johns Hopkins science review.
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Original:  Hum. Biol. 3:201 While originally presented in a talk by Frost in 1928 and used in courses at Hopkins for two decades, the mathematical formulation was not published until the 1950's, when it was also made into a tv episoide .
Revised:  Hum. Biol. 3:201 While originally presented in a talk by Frost in 1928 and used in courses at Hopkins for two decades, the mathematical formulation was not published until the 1950's, when it was also made into a tv episode .
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Original:  An examination of the Reed-Frost theory of epidemics  . Hum.
Revised:  An examination of the Reed-Frost theory of epidemics " . Hum.
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Original: The Reed-Frost model is one of the simplest stochastic epidemic models.
Revised: The Reed–Frost model is one of the simplest stochastic epidemic models.
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Original:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
Revised:  The following parameters are set initially: Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
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Original:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
Revised:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
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Original:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
Revised:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
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Original:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
Revised:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
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Original:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number — in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
Revised:  The following parameters are set initially: - Size of the population - Number of individuals already immune - Number of cases (usually set at 1) - Probability of adequate contact The probability of adequate contact corresponds roughly with R0, the basic reproduction number – in a large population when the initial number of infecteds is small, an infected individual is expected to cause new cases.
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Original:  (1993) Bulag, Pipi at Bingi (1993) Secret Love (1993) as Jodi Gwapings: The First Adventure (1992) as Mike Mahal Kita Walang Iba (1992) as Ruben Shake, Rattle & Roll III: Ate (1991) as Delinquent Emma Salazar Case (1991) as Leo Hihintayin Kita Sa Langit (1991) as Young Gabriel Regal Shocker The Movie: Aparador (1989)
Revised:  (1993) Bulag, Pipi at Bingi (1993) Secret Love (1993) as Jodi Gwapings: The Adventure (1992) as Mike Mahal Kita Walang Iba (1992) as Ruben Shake, Rattle & Roll III: Ate (1991) as Delinquent Emma Salazar Case (1991) as Leo Hihintayin Kita Sa Langit (1991) as Young Gabriel Regal Shocker The Movie: Aparador (1989)
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Original:  Sa Pusod ng Dagat starred Marilou Diaz Abaya , Elizabeth Oropesa, and Chin Chin Gutierrez.
Revised:  Sa Pusod ng Dagat starred Marilou Diaz-Abaya , Elizabeth Oropesa, and Chin Chin Gutierrez.
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Original:  born December 25 , 1956) is an Urdu poet and women's rights activist named one of the five most influential and trend-setting female voices in Urdu Literature.by a research paper presented at NIPA Her works have been translated in many languages including English, Japanese, Sanskrit and Hindi.
Revised:  born 25 , 1956) is an Urdu poet and women's rights activist named one of the five most influential and trend-setting female voices in Urdu Literature.by a research paper presented at NIPA Her works have been translated in many languages including English, Japanese, Sanskrit and Hindi.
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Original:  She was first published at the age of 14 in the Daily Jang on April 31 , 1971.
Revised:  She was first published at the age of 14 in the Daily Jang on 31 , 1971.
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Original:  Parallel to her writing career she participated in several radio shows on Radio Pakistan from 1970-1984 that aired nationally and globally.
Revised:  Parallel to her writing career she participated in several radio shows on Radio Pakistan from 1970–1984 that aired nationally and globally.
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Original:  She uses their polished, traditional style and skillfully redirects it to create defiant progressive messages of individuality and rebellion against patriarchal and oppressive social norms.
Revised:  She uses their polished, traditional style and skilfully redirects it to create defiant progressive messages of individuality and rebellion against patriarchal and oppressive social norms.
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Original:  Awards and honors Afreen was honored with many prestigious awards including the Sajjad Zaheer Award in 1986.
Revised:  Awards and honours Afreen was honored with many prestigious awards including the Sajjad Zaheer Award in 1986.
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Original:  Awards and honors Afreen was honored with many prestigious awards including the Sajjad Zaheer Award in 1986.
Revised:  Awards and honors Afreen was honoured with many prestigious awards including the Sajjad Zaheer Award in 1986.
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Original:  Afreen received this honor on the 50th anniversary celebration of the Progressive Writers' Association of India in New Delhi.
Revised:  Afreen received this honour on the 50th anniversary celebration of the Progressive Writers' Association of India in New Delhi.
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Original:  Afreen also received the Ahmed Adaya Award from Urdu Markaz International in Los Angeles , California on December 9 , 2006 after her book, Dhoop Apne Hisse Ki was selected by the International Urdu Jury as Best Urdu Poetry Publication of 2004-2005.
Revised:  Afreen also received the Ahmed Adaya Award from Urdu Markaz International in Los Angeles on 9 , 2006 after her book, Dhoop Apne Hisse Ki was selected by the International Urdu Jury as Best Urdu Poetry Publication of 2004-2005.
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Original:  Afreen also received the Ahmed Adaya Award from Urdu Markaz International in Los Angeles , California on December 9 , 2006 after her book, Dhoop Apne Hisse Ki was selected by the International Urdu Jury as Best Urdu Poetry Publication of 2004-2005.
Revised:  Afreen also received the Ahmed Adaya Award from Urdu Markaz International in Los Angeles , California on December 9 , 2006 after her book, Dhoop Apne Hisse Ki was selected by the International Urdu Jury as Best Urdu Poetry Publication of 2004–2005.
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Original:  born 25 December 1956) is an Urdu poet and women's rights activist named one of the five most influential and trend-setting female voices in Urdu Literature. by a research paper presented at NIPA Her works have been translated in many languages including English, Japanese, Sanskrit and Hindi.
Revised:  born 25 December 1956) is an Urdu poet . Her works have been translated in many languages including English, Japanese, Sanskrit and Hindi.
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Original: Sexual headaches are a type of headache that occur in the skull and neck during sexual activity, including masturbation or orgasm.
Revised: Sexual headaches is a type of headache that occur in the skull and neck during sexual activity, including masturbation or orgasm.
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Original: Sexual headaches is a type of headache that occur in the skull and neck during sexual activity, including masturbation or orgasm.
Revised: Sexual headache is a type of headache that occur in the skull and neck during sexual activity, including masturbation or orgasm.
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Original:  These headaches are usually benign , but occasionally are caused by intracranial hemorrhage and cerebral infarction, especially if the pain is sudden and severe.
Revised:  These headaches are usually begin , but occasionally are caused by intracranial hemorrhage and cerebral infarction, especially if the pain is sudden and severe.
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Original: Life He  born on 22 July 1868 to Nandshankar Mehta.
Revised: Life He was born on 22 July 1868 to Nandshankar Mehta.
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Original:  Sir Manubhai Mehta acted as substitute in the absence of H.H. The Maharaja Ganga Singh of Bikaner.
Revised:  Sir Manubhai Mehta acted as substitute in the absence of the Maharaja Ganga Singh of Bikaner.
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Original: Sir Manubhai Nandshankar Mehta CSI  was the Dewan of Baroda state from 9 May 1916 to 1927.
Revised: SirManubhai Nandshankar Mehta CSI was the Dewan of Baroda state from 9 May 1916 to 1927.
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Original:  He has taken his education at Elphinstone College, Bombay.
Revised:  He was educated at Elphinstone College, Bombay.
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Original:  He has served as Professor of Logic and Philosophy and Lecturer in Law at Baroda College during 1891-1899.
Revised:  He served as Professor of Logic and Philosophy and Lecturer in Law at Baroda College during 1891-1899.
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Original:  He has served as the Private Secretary to HH Maharaja Gaekwad of Baroda state during 1899-1906 and Revenue Minister and First Councillor during 1914-1916.
Revised:  He was the Private Secretary to HH Maharaja Gaekwad of Baroda state during 1899-1906 and Revenue Minister and First Councillor during 1914-1916.
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Original: Sir Manubhai Nandshankar Mehta CSI (22 July 1868 – 14 October 1946) was the Dewan of Baroda state from 9 May 1916 to 1927.
Revised: Sir Manubhai Nandshankar Mehta CSI (22 July 1868 – 14 October 1946) was the dewan of Baroda state from 9 May 1916 to 1927.
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Original:  From 1927 to 1934  he was the Prime Minister (Dewans) of Bikanir (Bikaner state) .
Revised:  From 1927 to 1934 , he was the Prime Minister (Dewans) of Bikanir (Bikaner state) .
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Original:  From 1927 to 1934  he was the Prime Minister (Dewans) of Bikanir (Bikaner state) .
Revised:  From 1927 to 1934 he was the prime minister of Bikaner state .
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Original:  He was educated at Elphinstone College , Bombay.
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Original:  He served as Professor of Logic and Philosophy and Lecturer in Law at Baroda College during 1891-1899.
Revised:  He was Professor of Logic and Philosophy and Lecturer in Law at Baroda College during 1891-1899.
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Original:  He served as Professor of Logic and Philosophy and Lecturer in Law at Baroda College during 1891-1899.
Revised:  He served as Professor of Logic and Philosophy and a lecturer in law at Baroda College during 1891-1899.
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