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Original:  A photograph of the damaged bus was posted on the band's website, and this showed moderate crumpling to the forward ower area of the vehicle
Revised:  A photograph of the damaged bus was posted on the band's website, and this showed moderate crumpling to the front area of the vehicle
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Original: The bus was headed to Six Flags St. Louis in Missouri for the band to play to a sell-out crowd.
Revised: The bus was headed to Six Flags St. Louis in Missouri for the band to play to a sold-out crowd.
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Original:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi  despite emergency vehicles responding to the airport.
Revised:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi , despite emergency vehicles responding to the airport.
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Original:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi  despite emergency vehicles responding to the airport.
Revised:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi despite emergency vehicles responding at the airport.
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Original:  The type of plane and airline is not known.
Revised:  The type of plane and airline are not yet known.
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Original:  It is also not not known how many people are on board.
Revised:  It is also unknown how many people are on board.
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Original:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi , despite emergency vehicles responding at the airport.
Revised:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi despite emergency vehicles responding at the airport.
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Original:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi , despite emergency vehicles responding at the airport.
Revised:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi , despite emergency vehicles responding to the airport.
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Original:   The type of plane and airline are not yet known.
Revised:  The type of plane is not known.
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Original:  It is also unknown how many people are on board.
Revised:  It is also not not known how many people are on board.
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Original:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi despite emergency vehicles responding at the airport . Afghan air traffic control sources and airport police have indicatd that the aircraft is in Afghanistan.
Revised:  Reports say the plane was diverted back to Afghanistan after being denied an emergency landing in Ürümqi . Afghan air traffic control sources and airport police have indicatd that the aircraft is in Afghanistan.
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Original:  They further state that the KamAir plane landed in Kandahar owing to strong winds at Kabul when it returned.
Revised:  They further state that the KamAir plane landed in 
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Original: A NATO official denies there was an emergency landing due to a threat and says the Chinese media reports are untrue.
Revised: A NATO official denied there was an emergency landing due to a threat and says the Chinese media reports are untrue.
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Original:  We would know immediately," said the unnamed Official .
Revised:  We would know immediately," said the unnamed official .
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Original:  The Xinjiang region was  scene of a violent uprising by its Uyghur population last month
Revised:  The Xinjiang region was the scene of a violent uprising by its Uyghur population last month
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Original:  The Chinese official news agency Xinhua reports that the city of Wenzhou cancelled 39 departing flights  
Revised:  The Chinese official news agency Xinhua reports that the city of Wenzhou cancelled 39 departing flights . 
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Original:  The Chinese official news agency Xinhua reports that the city of Wenzhou cancelled 39 departing flights. URL URL 
Revised:  The Chinese official news agency Xinhua reports that the city of Wenzhou cancelled 39 departing flights. URL URL URL
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Original:  The Chinese official news agency Xinhua reports that the city of Wenzhou| Wenzhou cancelled 39 departing flights.
Revised:  The Chinese official news agency Xinhua reports that the city of Wenzhou cancelled 39 departing flights.
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Original:  The Welsh and Scottish teams will continue to compete in the tournament, with Anne Smillie chief executive of Badminton Scotland saying that the English team had "perhaps overreacted"
Revised:  The Welsh and Scottish teams will continue to compete in the tournament, with Anne Smillie chief executive of Badminton Scotland saying that the had "perhaps overreacted"
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Original:  He further stated that there was no equipment failure and that both aircraft and crew had passed all relevent safety checks  
Revised:  He further stated that there was no equipment failure and that both aircraft and crew had passed all relevent safety checks . 
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Original:  The Ilyushin Il-62 came off the runway at Mashad and struck a wall while landing, killing seventeen and wounding 30.
Revised:  The Ilyushin Il-62 ran off the runway at Mashad and struck a wall while landing, killing seventeen and wounding 30.
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Original:  The CAO Flight Standards Department's deputy director Faramarz Sarvi stated that the aircraft had been travelling at excessive speed and management from the flight crew .
Revised:  The CAO Flight Standards Department's deputy director Faramarz Sarvi stated that the aircraft had been traveling at excessive speed and management from the flight crew .
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Original:  The CAO Flight Standards Department's deputy director Faramarz Sarvi stated that the aircraft had been travelling at excessive speed and management from the flight crew .
Revised:  The CAO Flight Standards Department's deputy director Faramarz Sarvi stated that the aircraft had been travelling at excessive speed .
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Original:  He denied reports that the pilots had been arguing during the accident were true , although the Aviation Herald claims that the cockpit voice recorder showed they had been.
Revised:  He denied reports that the pilots had been arguing during the accident , although the Aviation Herald claims that the cockpit voice recorder showed they had been.
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Original:  He further stated that there was no equipment failure and that both aircraft and crew had passed all relevent safety checks.
Revised:  He further stated that there was no equipment failure and that both aircraft and crew had passed all relevant safety checks.
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Original:  The Ilyushin Il-62 ran off the runway at Mashad and struck a wall while landing, killing seventeen and wounding 30.
Revised:  The Ilyushin Il-62 ran off the runway at Mashad and struck a wall while landing, killing 17 people and wounding 30.
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Original:  Air traffic control is reported to have warned the pilots, who were amongst those killed when the from section was torn apart, about their high speed, but they elected to land regardless  
Revised:  Air traffic control is reported to have warned the pilots, who were amongst those killed when the from section was torn apart, about their high speed, but they elected to land regardless . 
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Original:  Air traffic control is reported to have warned the pilots, who were amongst those killed when the from section was torn apart, about their high speed, but they elected to land regardless  
Revised:  Air traffic control is reported to have warned the pilots, who were amongst those killed when the from section was torn apart, about their high speed, but they elected to land regardless Related new
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Original:  He denied reports that the pilots had been arguing during the accident , although the Aviation Herald claims that the cockpit voice recorder showed they had been.
Revised:  He denied reports that the pilots had been arguing when the accident occurred. However, the Aviation Herald claims that the cockpit voice recorder showed they had been.
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Original:  He further stated that  there was no equipment failure and that both aircraft and crew had passed all relevant safety checks.
Revised:  He further stated that there was no equipment failure . Both aircraft and crew had passed all relevant safety checks.
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Original:  He further stated that  there was no equipment failure and that both aircraft and crew had passed all relevant safety checks.
Revised:  He further stated that there was no equipment failure and that both aircraft and crew had passed previous safety checks.
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Original:  Both aircraft and crew had passed previous safety checks .
Revised:  Both aircraft and crew had passed safety checks prior to the plane taking off .
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Original:  Morakot has resulted in the deaths of at least fourteen people in Taiwan and a further 22  in the Philippines
Revised:  Morakot has resulted in the deaths of at least fourteen people in Taiwan and a further 22 deaths in the Philippines
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Original:  Daniel Fitzsimons is suspected of murdering fellow Brit Paul McGuigan and Australian Darren Hoare  
Revised:  Daniel Fitzsimons is suspected of murdering fellow Brit Paul McGuigan and Australian Darren Hoare . 
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Original:  According to a spokesman with Iraq's interior ministry the group was drinking when an argument began and one man opened fire on the others   
Revised:  According to a spokesman with Iraq's interior ministry the group was drinking when an argument began and one man opened fire on the others . 
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Original:  It could mark the first trial of a Westerner since local authorities assumed responsibility for policing foreign contractors earlier this year  [ 
Revised:  It could mark the first trial of a Westerner since local authorities assumed responsibility for policing foreign contractors earlier this year . [ 
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Original:  As well as the two fatally injured and Iraqi guard was wounded.
Revised:  As well as the two fatally injured , an Iraqi guard was wounded.
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Original:  One witness is reported to have said  "They were all very drunk and started shouting at each other.
Revised:  One witness is reported to have said , "They were all very drunk and started shouting at each other.
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Original: Authorities in Iraq have charged a man from Britain of murdering of two of his colleagues with security contractor ArmorGroup.
Revised: Authorities in Iraq have charged a British man with the murder of his two colleagues from security contractor ArmorGroup.
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Original:  Daniel Fitzsimons is suspected of murdering fellow Brit Paul McGuigan and Australian Darren Hoare.
Revised:  Daniel Fitzsimons is suspected of murdering fellow Briton Paul McGuigan and Australian Darren Hoare.
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Original:  As well as the two fatally injured, an Iraqi guard was wounded.
Revised:  In addition to the two fatally injured, an Iraqi guard was wounded.
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Original:  According to a spokesman with Iraq's interior ministry the group was drinking when an argument began and one man opened fire on the others.
Revised:  According to a spokesman for the Iraqi interior ministry, the group was drinking when an argument began and one man opened fire on the others.
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Original:  It could mark the first trial of a Westerner since local authorities assumed responsibility for policing foreign contractors earlier this year.
Revised:  It would mark the first trial of a Westerner since local authorities assumed responsibility for policing foreign contractors earlier this year.
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Original: A tsunami warning has been issued by the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA)  after a magnitude 7.6 earthquake struck the Andaman Islands near India.
Revised: Tsunami warnings were issued by the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) after a magnitude 7.6 earthquake struck the Andaman Islands near India.
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Original:  As well as India the warning applies to Myanmar, Indonesia, Bangladesh, Sri Lanka and Thailand.
Revised:  The warnings had applied to Myanmar, Indonesia, Bangladesh, Sri Lanka and Thailand.
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Original:  The NOAA indicates the risk of a tsunami as 'moderate to high' and warnings will remain in place for a minimum of three hours for some areas, from the time the alerts were issued.
Revised:  The NOAA indicated the risk of a tsunami as 'moderate to high' and warnings will remain in place for a minimum of three hours for some areas, from the time the alerts were issued.
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Original:  The NOAA indicates the risk of a tsunami as 'moderate to high' and warnings will remain in place for a minimum of three hours for some areas, from the time the alerts were issued.
Revised:  The NOAA indicates the risk of a tsunami was 'moderate to high' and warnings will remain in place for a minimum of three hours for some areas, from the time the alerts were issued.
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Original:  " Earthquakes of this size have the potential to generate a destructive local tsunami and sometimes a destructive regional tsunami along coasts located usually no more than a thousand kilometers from the earthquake epicenter ," said the NOAA  in a statement on its website.
Revised:  " Earthquakes of this size have the potential to generate a destructive local tsunami and sometimes a destructive regional tsunami along coasts located usually no more than a thousand kilometers from the earthquake epicenter ," said the NOAA eralier in a statement on its website.
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Original: Minutes later , at 2:07 a.m.
Revised: Minutes after the quake , at 2:07 a.m.
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Original:  Therefore the tsunami watched issued by this center has been canceled," said the NOAA eralier in a statement on its website.
Revised:  Therefore the tsunami watch issued by this center has been canceled," said the NOAA eralier in a statement on its website.
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Original:  Indian time, the USGS said a magnitude 6.4 earthquake struck 31 kilometers (19 miles) South, Southwest of the Shizuoka Prefecture, near Honshū, Japan with a depth of 26.8 km (16.7 miles).
Revised:  Indian time, the USGS said a magnitude 6.4 earthquake struck 31 kilometers (19 miles) south-southwest of Shizuoka Prefecture, near Honshū, Japan with a depth of 26.8 km (16.7 miles).
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Original:  Indian time, the USGS said a magnitude 6.4 earthquake struck 31 kilometers (19 miles) South, Southwest of the Shizuoka Prefecture, near Honshū, Japan with a depth of 26.8 km (16.7 miles).
Revised:  Indian time, the USGS said a magnitude 6.4 earthquake struck 31 kilometers (19 miles) South, Southwest of the Shizuoka Prefecture, Japan, with a depth of 26.8 km (16.7 miles).
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Original:  A tsunami watch was also issued for the area and a short time later small, a two foot rise in sea level was reported in the Tsuruga Bay area.
Revised:  A tsunami watch was also issued for the area and a short time later small, a two foot rise in sea level was reported in the Suruga Bay area.
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Original:  A tsunami watch was also issued for the area and a short time later small, a two foot rise in sea level was reported in the Suruga Bay area.
Revised:  A tsunami watch was also issued for the area and a short time later small, a two foot rise in sea level was reported in the Tsuruga Bay area.
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Original:  According to Japan's Trade Ministry, both reactors shut down automatically after censors detected the quake.
Revised:  According to Japan's Trade Ministry, both reactors shut down automatically after sensors detected the quake.
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Original: During the launch of the iPod photo, iPod Special Edition: U2, and EU iTMS on October 26, Apple CEO Steve Jobs announced that iTMS Canada would be launched in November.
Revised: During the launch of the iPod photo, iPod Special Edition: U2, and EU iTMS on October 26, Apple CEO Steve Jobs stated that the Canada localization was planned for November.
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Original:  No reason has been given for the delay. iTMS Canada directly competes with Archambault.ca (Quebecor Media Inc.), Napster.ca (The legal reincarnation of Napster), and Puretracks.com (Moontaxi Media Inc.)  
Revised:  No reason has been given for the delay. iTMS Canada directly competes with Archambault.ca (Quebecor Media Inc.), Napster.ca (The legal reincarnation of Napster), and Puretracks.com (Moontaxi Media Inc.) . 
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Original:  The 700,000+ songs are priced at CAD 0.99 ¢ (USD 0.84 ¢) making it the lowest price of any iTMS localization to date.
Revised:  The 700,000+ songs are priced at CAD 99 ¢ (USD 0.84 ¢) making it the lowest price of any iTMS localization to date.
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Original:  The 700,000+ songs are priced at CAD 0.99 ¢ (USD 0.84 ¢) making it the lowest price of any iTMS localization to date.
Revised:  The 700,000+ songs are priced at CAD 0.99 ¢ (USD 84 ¢) making it the lowest price of any iTMS localization to date.
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Original: Late today, Apple Computer  's iTunes Music Store (iTMS) was opened to Canada .
Revised: Late today, Apple Computer Inc. 's iTunes Music Store (iTMS) was opened to Canada .
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Original: Late today, Apple Computer  's iTunes Music Store (iTMS) was opened to Canada .
Revised: Late today, Apple Computer 's iTunes Music Store (iTMS) was opened to Canadians .
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Original:  The 700,000+ songs are priced at CAD 99¢ (USD 84¢) making it the lowest price of any iTMS localization to date.   iTMS Canada was announced during the launch of the iPod photo, iPod Special Edition: U2, and EU iTMS on October 26, Apple CEO Steve Jobs stated that the Canada localization was planned for November.
Revised:  The 700,000+ songs are priced at CAD 99¢ (USD 84¢) per song, the lowest price of any iTMS localization to date. iTMS Canada was announced during the launch of the iPod photo, iPod Special Edition: U2, and EU iTMS on October 26, Apple CEO Steve Jobs stated that the Canada localization was planned for November.
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Original:  The 700,000+ songs are priced at CAD 99¢ (USD 84¢) making it the lowest price of any iTMS localization to date.   iTMS Canada was announced during the launch of the iPod photo, iPod Special Edition: U2, and EU iTMS on October 26, Apple CEO Steve Jobs stated that the Canada localization was planned for November.
Revised:  The 700,000+ songs are priced at CAD 99¢ (USD 84¢) making it the lowest price of any iTMS localization to date. iTMS Canada was announced during the launch of the iPod photo, iPod Special Edition: U2, and EU iTMS on October 26. Apple CEO Steve Jobs stated that the Canada localization was planned for November.
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Original:  Apple apologized today for missing its own deadline, and announced that the store was to be launched "very soon."
Revised:  Apple apologized today for missing its own deadline, and announced that the store will be launched "very soon."
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Original:  No reason has been given for the delay.
Revised:  No reason was given for the delay.
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Original:  With 70\% market share of all legal online music downloads, iTMS Canada is stiff competition for the current Canadian choices in music downloads which include Archambault.ca (Quebecor Media Inc.), Napster.ca (The legal reincarnation of Napster), and Puretracks.com (Moontaxi Media Inc.).
Revised:  iTMS Canada is stiff competition for the current Canadian choices in music downloads which include Archambault.ca (Quebecor Media Inc.), Napster.ca (The legal reincarnation of Napster), and Puretracks.com (Moontaxi Media Inc.).
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Original:  With 70\% market share of all legal online music downloads, iTMS Canada is stiff competition for the current Canadian choices in music downloads which include Archambault.ca (Quebecor Media Inc.), Napster.ca (The legal reincarnation of Napster), and Puretracks.com (Moontaxi Media Inc.).
Revised:  With 70\% market share of all legal online music downloads, iTMS Canada is another choice for Canadians in legal music downloads which include Archambault.ca (Quebecor Media Inc.), Napster.ca (The legal reincarnation of Napster), and Puretracks.com (Moontaxi Media Inc.).
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Original:  With 70\% market share of all legal online music downloads, iTMS Canada is stiff competition for the current Canadian choices in music downloads which include Archambault.ca (Quebecor Media Inc.), Napster.ca (The legal reincarnation of Napster), and Puretracks.com (Moontaxi Media Inc.).
Revised:  With 70\% market share of all legal online music downloads, iTMS Canada is stiff competition for the current Canadian choices in music downloads which includes Archambault.ca (Quebecor Media Inc.), Napster.ca (The legal reincarnation of Napster), and Puretracks.com (Moontaxi Media Inc.).
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Original:  France, U.K., and Germany were added  in June of this year and all European Union countries, sans Ireland, were added in October    
Revised:  France, U.K., and Germany were added , in June of this year and all European Union countries, sans Ireland, were added in October 
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Original:  France, U.K., and Germany were added  in June of this year and all European Union countries, sans Ireland, were added in October    
Revised:  France, U.K., and Germany were added in June of this year and all European Union countries, except Ireland, were added in October 
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Original:  France, U.K., and Germany were added  in June of this year and all European Union countries, sans Ireland, were added in October    
Revised:  France, U.K., and Germany were added in June of this year and all European Union countries, sans Ireland, were added in October . 
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Original:  France, U.K., and Germany were added  in June of this year and all European Union countries, sans Ireland, were added in October    
Revised:  France, U.K., and Germany were added in June of this year and all European Union countries, sans Ireland, were added in October References 
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Original: At 4.30 am local time ( 01.30 GMT) two truck bombs exploded in Khaznah  a village near Mosul in Ninawa Governorate, a Shia dominated village in a predominantly Sunni area.
Revised: At 4:30AM local time ( 01.30 GMT) two truck bombs exploded in Khaznah a village near Mosul in Ninawa Governorate, a Shia dominated village in a predominantly Sunni area.
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Original: At 4.30 am local time ( 01.30 GMT) two truck bombs exploded in Khaznah  a village near Mosul in Ninawa Governorate, a Shia dominated village in a predominantly Sunni area.
Revised: At 4.30 am local time ( 01:30 GMT), two truck bombs exploded in Khaznah a village near Mosul in Ninawa Governorate, a Shia dominated village in a predominantly Sunni area.
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Original: At 4.30 am local time ( 01.30 GMT) two truck bombs exploded in Khaznah  a village near Mosul in Ninawa Governorate, a Shia dominated village in a predominantly Sunni area.
Revised: At 4.30 am local time ( 01.30 GMT) two truck bombs exploded in Khaznah , a village near Mosul in Ninawa Governorate, a Shia dominated village in a predominantly Sunni area.
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Original:  These bombs killed at least 28 and wounded 130  and were so powerful that 30 houses were destroyed.
Revised:  These bombs killed at least 28 , wounded 130 and were so powerful that 30 houses were destroyed.
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