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Original: On Sunday, Israel's Ministry of Strategic Affairs published a list of 20 specific non-government organizations (NGOs) now forbidden from entering the country.
Revised: On Sunday, Israel's Ministry of Strategic Affairs published a list of 20 specific non-government organizations (NGOs) now forbidden to enter the country.
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Original:  Human rights groups  criticized the prohibition in view of free speech rights
Revised:  Human rights groups sharply criticized the prohibition in view of free speech rights
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Original:  Human rights groups  criticized the prohibition in view of free speech rights
Revised:  Human rights groups criticized the prohibition for suppression of free speech rights
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Original:  Human rights groups  criticized the prohibition in view of free speech rights
Revised:  Human rights groups criticized the prohibition in view of free speech 
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Original: The proscribed organizations include official the BDS organizations from France,
Revised: The proscribed organizations include the BDS organizations from France,
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Original:  Italy, Chile, and South Africa, the BDS national committee, BDS Kampagne, and the , the Ireland Palestine Solidarity Campaign, the European Coordination of Committees and Associations for Palestine, Friends of Al-Aqsa, the Palestine Committee of Norway, , , and the Palestine Solidarity Association of Sweden from Europe , and , U.S. Campaign for Palestinian Rights, National Students for Justice in Palestine, , , and the from the United States.
Revised:  Italy, Chile, and South Africa, BDS national committee, BDS Kampagne, and the , the Ireland Palestine Solidarity Campaign, the European Coordination of Committees and Associations for Palestine, Friends of Al-Aqsa, the Palestine Committee of Norway, , , and the Palestine Solidarity Association of Sweden from Europe , and , U.S. Campaign for Palestinian Rights, National Students for Justice in Palestine, , , and the from the United States.
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Original:  Italy, Chile, and South Africa, the BDS national committee, BDS Kampagne, and the , the Ireland Palestine Solidarity Campaign, the European Coordination of Committees and Associations for Palestine, Friends of Al-Aqsa, the Palestine Committee of Norway, , , and the Palestine Solidarity Association of Sweden from Europe , and , U.S. Campaign for Palestinian Rights, National Students for Justice in Palestine, , , and the from the United States.
Revised:  Italy, Chile, and South Africa, the BDS national committee, and BDS Kampagne; the , the Ireland Palestine Solidarity Campaign, the European Coordination of Committees and Associations for Palestine, Friends of Al-Aqsa, the Palestine Committee of Norway, , , and the Palestine Solidarity Association of Sweden from Europe , and , U.S. Campaign for Palestinian Rights, National Students for Justice in Palestine, , , and the from the United States.
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Original:  Italy, Chile, and South Africa, the BDS national committee, BDS Kampagne, and the , the Ireland Palestine Solidarity Campaign, the European Coordination of Committees and Associations for Palestine, Friends of Al-Aqsa, the Palestine Committee of Norway, , , and the Palestine Solidarity Association of Sweden from Europe , and , U.S. Campaign for Palestinian Rights, National Students for Justice in Palestine, , , and the from the United States.
Revised:  Italy, Chile, and South Africa, the BDS national committee, BDS Kampagne, and the , the Ireland Palestine Solidarity Campaign, the European Coordination of Committees and Associations for Palestine, Friends of Al-Aqsa, the Palestine Committee of Norway, , , and the Palestine Solidarity Association of Sweden from Europe ; and , U.S. Campaign for Palestinian Rights, National Students for Justice in Palestine, , , and the from the United States.
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Original:  The aircraft is a Boeing 737-800 operated by . Trabzon Airport with the Black Sea in background.
Revised:  The aircraft is a operated by . Trabzon Airport with the Black Sea in background.
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Original:  The airplane had flown from and carried over 160 passengers and crew .
Revised:  The airplane from , which carried over 160 passengers and crew .
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Original:  The airplane had flown from , carrying over 160 passengers and crew .
Revised:  The airplane , which carried over 160 passengers and crew .
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Original: In findings published Sunday in , a team from Britain's reports that and are roughly three times as likely to house and other bacteria that could easily become resistant, than other UK coastal water users . A surfer in northern California being sprayed with seawater.
Revised: In findings published Sunday in , a team from Britain's reports that and are roughly three times as likely to house and other bacteria that could easily become resistant, than other people who recreate in the coastal waters of the United Kingdom . A surfer in northern California being sprayed with seawater.
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Original:  According to the has reported that because so many kinds of bacteria are gaining resistance to common medicines, conditions such as and may become more difficult to treat and have higher rates of sickness and death.
Revised:  The World Health Organization has reported that because so many kinds of bacteria are gaining resistance to common medicines, conditions such as and may become more difficult to treat and have higher rates of sickness and death.
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Original:  The project recruited 143 regular surfers, and bodyboarders from around the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The project was performed on 143 regular surfers, and bodyboarders from around the United Kingdom.
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Original:  Each  was asked to recruit a non-surfing friend of the same sex and approximate age and who lived in the same part of the country to serve as a control, which resulted in a of 130.
Revised:  Each surfgoing participant was asked to recruit a non-surfing friend of the same sex and approximate age and who lived in the same part of the country to serve as a control, which resulted in a of 130.
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Original: Although, the researchers expressed concern surfers might spread dangerous bacteria, Dr. Will Gaze, the University of Exeter Medical School professional who supervised the project, urged people not to avoid the beach: "We are not seeking to discourage people from spending time in the sea, an activity which has a lot of benefits in terms of exercise, well-being and connecting with nature", he said.
Revised: Although, the researchers expressed concern surfers might spread dangerous bacteria, Dr. Will Gaze, the Medical School professional who supervised the project, urged people not to avoid the beach: "We are not seeking to discourage people from spending time in the sea, an activity which has a lot of benefits in terms of exercise, well-being and connecting with nature", he said.
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Original: Passenger Qaadia Culbreath told that he couldn't swim and didn't see any life jackets, so he found himself "dangling off the metal hanger in the front of the boat because I didn ’ t want to let go".
Revised: Passenger Qaadia Culbreath told that he couldn't swim and didn't see any life jackets, so he found himself "dangling off the metal hanger in the front of the boat because I didn ' t want to let go".
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Original:      US President Donald Trump announced recognition of Jerusalem as Israel's capital on December 6, 2017.
Revised:  "In the story of the Jews, we’ve always seen the story of America. It is the story of an exodus, a journey from persecution to freedom, a story that shows the power of faith and the promise of hope," said Pence. "My country’s very first settlers also saw themselves as pilgrims, sent by Providence, to build a new Promised Land. The songs and stories of the people of Israel were their anthems, and they faithfully taught them to their children, and do to this day. And our founders, as others have said, turned to the wisdom of the Hebrew Bible for direction, guidance, and inspiration." US President Donald Trump announced recognition of Jerusalem as Israel's capital on December 6, 2017.
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Original:  Generally, though, Pence's words were met by applause and some standing ovations, according  all observers.
Revised:  Generally, though, Pence's words were met by applause and some standing ovations, according yo all observers.
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Original:  Holding signs like "Jerusalem is the capital of Palestine," they were escorted out by security.
Revised:  Holding signs such as "Jerusalem is the capital of Palestine," they were escorted out by security.
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Original:  Generally, though, Pence's words were met by applause and some standing ovations, according yo all observers.
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Original:  Generally, though, Pence's words were met by applause and some standing ovations , according to all observers .
Revised:  Generally, Pence's words were met by applause and some standing ovations , according to all observers .
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Original:  Generally, though, Pence's words were met by applause and some standing ovations , according to all observers .
Revised:  Generally, though, Pence's words were met by applause and some standing ovations .
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Original: Pence is visiting the and the on Tuesday.
Revised: Pence was to visit the and the on Tuesday.
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Original:  Mahmoud Abbas has said he will not meet with Pence, and Pence has no scheduled meetings with any Palestinians.
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Original:  Mahmoud Abbas has said he will not meet with Pence, and Pence has no scheduled meetings with any Palestinians.
Revised:  Mahmoud Abbas has said he will not meet with Pence, and Pence had no scheduled meetings with any Palestinians.
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Original:  US President Donald Trump announced recognition of Jerusalem as Israel's capital on December6, 2017.
Revised:  US President Donald Trump announced recognition of Jerusalem as Israel's capital in December.
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Original: Twelve Israeli Arab members of  Knesset and one Jewish member protested Pence on the floor of the legislature.
Revised: Twelve Israeli Arab members of the Knesset and one Jewish member protested Pence on the floor of the legislature.
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Original: Twelve Israeli Arab members of the Knesset and one Jewish member  protested Pence on the floor of the legislature.
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Original: Twelve Israeli Arab members of the Knesset and one Jewish member  protested Pence on the floor of the legislature.
Revised: Twelve Israeli Arab members of the Knesset and one Jewish member of the Knesset protested Pence on the floor of the legislature.
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Original:   Mahmoud Abbas said he would not meet with Pence, and Pence had no scheduled meetings with any Palestinians.
Revised:  Palestinian President Mahmoud Abbas said he would not meet with Pence, and Pence had no scheduled meetings with any Palestinians.
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Original:  According to the latest updates, 102 people were killed and almost 200 injured.
Revised:  According to the latest updates, 102 people were killed and around 200 injured.
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Original:  There have been other press reports of child rape in the country in recent years, including the kidnapping and rape of a three-month-old in in 2015 and the kidnapping and rape of an eleven-month-old in Delhi in 2016. statistics for 2016 list 19,765 child rapes, an 82 per cent increase over the previous year  
Revised:  There have been other press reports of child rape in the country in recent years, including the kidnapping and rape of a three-month-old in in 2015 and the kidnapping and rape of an eleven-month-old in Delhi in 2016. statistics for 2016 list 19,765 child rapes, an 82 per cent increase over the previous year . 
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Original: On Wednesday, in the wake of the of an eight-month-old baby girl in India's capital, ,  Swati Maliwal, head of the , announced she was beginning a 30-day to persuade the Government of India to establish the for offenders who rape children.
Revised: On Wednesday, following the in India's capital, , Swati Maliwal, head of the , announced she was beginning a 30-day to persuade the Government of India to establish the for offenders who rape children.
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Original:  As reported in the Indian press on Monday, the baby girl was initially in after being raped on Sunday at her home in Subhash Nagar in western New Delhi while her parents were at work.
Revised:  As reported in the Indian press on Monday, the baby girl was initially in after she was raped on Sunday at her home in Subhash Nagar in western New Delhi while her parents were at work.
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Original:  A police spokesman said the baby's 28-year-old cousin was arrested under the and Section 376 of the . After visiting the hospital where the babywas being treated, Ms Maliwal : "How can Delhi sleep today when 8 month baby has been brutally raped in Capital?
Revised:  A police spokesman said the baby's 28-year-old cousin was arrested under the and Section 376 of the . After Ms Maliwal visited the baby's hospital, she : "How can Delhi sleep today when 8 month baby has been brutally raped in Capital?
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Original:  Since the fatal gang rape of a student on a bus in Delhi in 2012 , there have been widespread protests in India against and calls for heavier penalties for rape.
Revised:  Since the fatal gang rape of a student on a Delhi bus , there have been widespread protests in India against and calls for heavier penalties for rape.
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Original:  There have been other press reports of child rape in the country in recent years, including the kidnapping and rape of a three-month-old in in 2015 and the kidnapping and rape of an eleven-month-old in Delhi in 2016. statistics for 2016  list 19,765 child rapes, an 82 per cent increase over the previous year.
Revised:  There have been other press reports of child rape in the country in recent years, including the kidnapping and rape of a three-month-old in in 2015 and the kidnapping and rape of an eleven-month-old in Delhi in 2016. 2016 list 19,765 child rapes, an 82 per cent increase over the previous year.
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Original: On Wednesday, following the in India's capital, , of an eight-month-old girl, Swati Maliwal, head of the , announced she was beginning a 30-day —a form of non-violent civil protest— to persuade the Government of India to establish the for offenders who rape children.
Revised: On Wednesday, following the in India's capital, , of an eight-month-old girl, Swati Maliwal, head of the , announced she was beginning a 30-day —a form of non-violent civil protest— to persuade the Government of India to impose the promptly when offenders rape children.
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Original:  In response the government made the law stricter and introduced dedicated 'fast-track' courts , but the maximum penalty for rape in the country is life imprisonment .
Revised:  In response the government made the law stricter and introduced dedicated 'fast-track' courts .
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Original:  In response the government  made the law stricter and introduced dedicated 'fast-track' courts  .
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Original: After Ms Maliwal visited the baby's hospital, she : "How can Delhi sleep today when 8 month baby has been brutally raped in Capital?
Revised: After Ms Maliwal visited the baby's hospital, she : "How can Delhi sleep today when eight month baby has been brutally raped in Capital?
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Original: After Ms Maliwal visited the baby's hospital, she : "How can Delhi sleep today when eight month baby has been brutally raped in Capital?
Revised: After Ms Maliwal visited the baby's hospital, she : "How can Delhi sleep today when 8 month baby has been brutally raped in Capital?
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Original: On Wednesday, following the  in India's capital, , of an eight-month-old girl, Swati Maliwal, head of the , announced she was beginning a 30-day —a form of non-violent civil protest— to persuade the Government of India to impose the  promptly when offenders rape children.
Revised: On Wednesday, following the rape in India's capital, , of an eight-month-old girl, Swati Maliwal, head of the , announced she was beginning a 30-day —a form of non-violent civil protest— to persuade the Government of India to impose the promptly when offenders rape children.
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Original:  And a year earlier, in 2015, he became the first Gabonese to win award.
Revised:  A year earlier, in 2015, he became the first Gabonese to win award.
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Original:  In German Bundesliga, he has scored 98 goals — scoring one goal in 116 minutes on average.
Revised:  In German Bundesliga, he has scored 98 goals , scoring one goal in 116 minutes on average.
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Original: The 28-year-old striker joined Borussia in 2013 from French club , and since then, he has scored 141 goals in 213 matches for BVB.
Revised: The 28-year-old striker joined Borussia in 2013 from French club , and since then, scored 141 goals in 213 matches for BVB.
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Original:  In German Bundesliga, he has scored 98 goals, scoring one goal in 116 minutes on average.
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Original:  During his tenure at the , the Gabonese captain has won the (German Cup) in 2017.
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Original:  During his tenure at the , the Gabonese captain has won the (German Cup) in 2017.
Revised:  During his tenure at the , the Gabonese captain has won the (German Cup) .
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Original:  Aubameyang was named 2016 Bundesliga Player of the Year . A year earlier, in 2015, he became the first Gabonese to win award.
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Original:  A year earlier, in 2015, he became the first Gabonese to win award.
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Original:  He has 56 international caps with Gabon and has netted 23 goals.
Revised:  He has 56 international with Gabon and has netted 23 goals.
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Original:  In summer, Arsenal had signed from for then-club record fee , around £46.5 million.
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Original:  In summer, Arsenal had signed from for then-club record fee , around £46.5 million.
Revised:  In summer, Arsenal had signed from for then-club record fee of around £46.5 million.
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Original: On Wednesday, English football club Arsenal FC announced signing Gabonese striker from German club  (BVB) on "a long-term contract" which runs until 2021.
Revised: On Wednesday, English football club Arsenal FC announced signing Gabonese striker from German club Borussia Dortmund (BVB) on "a long-term contract" which runs until 2021.
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Original:  The deal is  worth about 18 million , and Olivier Giroud is to wear jersey number 18, the club announced via their website.
Revised:  The deal is reportedly worth about 18 million , and Olivier Giroud is to wear jersey number 18, the club announced via their website.
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Original:  The deal is  worth about 18 million , and Olivier Giroud is to wear jersey number 18, the club announced via their website.
Revised:  The deal is worth about 18 million . Olivier Giroud is to wear jersey number 18, the club announced via their website.
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Original: Joining The Blues, Giroud said , "Chelsea is one of the biggest teams in the .
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Original: Giround remarked on joining The Blues, "Chelsea is one of the biggest teams in the .
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Original: Duhalde, who learnt to fly an airplane at the age of sixteen, got a license to fly aircraft in 1938, at the age of eighteen.
Revised: Duhalde, who learnt to fly an airplane at the age of sixteen, got a license to fly aircraft in 1938.
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Original: In 1940, at the age of 20, Duhalde volunteered for the Free French Forces in Santiago.
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Original:  She returned to her homeland in 1947 and was made a colonel by the (FACh).
Revised:  She returned to her homeland in 1947 and was made an honorary colonel by the (FACh).
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Original: Duhalde, who learnt to fly an airplane at the age of sixteen, got a license to fly aircraft in 1938.
Revised: Duhalde, who learnt to fly an airplane at the age of sixteen, got her license to fly aircraft in 1938.
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Original:  Duhalde volunteered for the , and served in the and during the .
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Original:  She later joined the British Royal Air Force where she helped the mechanics and looked after the sick.
Revised:  She worked with the British Royal Air Force where she helped the mechanics and looked after the sick.
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Original:  She then joined the Air Transport Auxiliary of Britain and flew aircraft to British airfields during World War II.
Revised:  She then joined the Air Transport Auxiliary of Britain and flew aircraft between British airfields during World War II.
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Original: In 1946, a year after the war ended, Duhalde was titled Knight of France's Legion of Honour .
Revised: In 1946, a year after the war ended, Duhalde was titled Knight of France's .
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Original:  In 2016–17, he guided Everton to  seventh place finish in the first season in-charge, but was sacked in October as the club was in the relegation zone.
Revised:  In 2016–17, he guided Everton to a seventh place finish in the first season in-charge, but was sacked in October as the club was in the relegation zone.
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Original:  That was  second consecutive failure to qualify  major tournament.
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Original:  That was  second consecutive failure to qualify  major tournament.
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Original:  Koeman, who succeeds as the manager of the national team  is to face England in a friendly match which is to be played on March 23 in  Dutch capital .
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Original:  Koeman, who succeeds as the manager of the national team  is to face England in a friendly match which is to be played on March 23 in  Dutch capital .
Revised:  Koeman, who succeeds as the manager of the national team is to face England in a friendly match to be played on March 23 in Dutch capital .
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