wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  This suggests that Mary is either not thinking about something or that Mary is thinking about something that doesn't exist.
Revised:  This suggests that Mary either is not thinking about something or that Mary is thinking about something that doesn't exist.
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Original:  This suggests that Mary is either not thinking about something or that Mary is thinking about something that doesn't exist.
Revised:  This suggests that Mary is either not thinking about something or is thinking about something that doesn't exist.
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Original:  The agents of the Catholic Church wrote detailed accounts of the Maya, in support of their efforts at evangelization , and absorption of the Maya into the Spanish Empire.
Revised:  The agents of the Catholic Church wrote detailed accounts of the Maya, in support of their efforts at Christianization , and absorption of the Maya into the Spanish Empire.
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Original: Maya cities tended to expand haphazardly .
Revised: Mayan cities tended to expand haphazardly .
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Original:  The city centres comprised ceremonial and administrative complexes, surrounded by an irregularly shaped sprawl of residential districts.
Revised:  The city centers comprised ceremonial and administrative complexes, surrounded by an irregularly shaped sprawl of residential districts.
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Original: Mayan cities tended to expand organically.
Revised: Maya cities tended to expand organically.
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Original:  As a part of their religion, the Maya practised human sacrifice   .
Revised:  As a part of their religion, the Maya practised human sacrifice . .
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Original:  Maya are Mexicans, Guatemalans, Belizeans, Canadians, US citizens, Hondurans, as well as Europeans .
Revised:  Maya are Mexicans, Guatemalans, Belizeans, Canadians, US citizens, Hondurans, as well as citizens of European countries .
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Original:  Maya are Mexicans, Guatemalans, Belizeans, Canadians, US citizens, Hondurans, as well as citizens of European countries .
Revised:  Maya are Mexicans, Guatemalans, Belizeans, Canadians, US citizens, Hondurans, as well as Europeans .
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Original: Maya cities tended to expand organically.
Revised: Mayan cities tended to expand organically.
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Original:  As a part of their religion, the Maya practised human sacrifice .
Revised:  As a part of their religion, the Maya practised human sacrifice 
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Original:  But as he was prone to hypochondria and other ailments , he committed suicide by defenestration soon after his father's death in 1592.
Revised:  He was prone to hypochondria and other ailments , he committed suicide by defenestration soon after his father's death in 1592.
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Original:  But as he was prone to hypochondria and other ailments , he committed suicide by defenestration soon after his father's death in 1592.
Revised:  But as he was prone to hypochondria , which exasperated his other ailments and he committed suicide by defenestration soon after his father's death in 1592.
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Original:  But as he was prone to hypochondria and other ailments , he committed suicide by defenestration soon after his father's death in 1592.
Revised:  But as he was prone to hypochondria and other ailments , he committed suicide by autodefenestration soon after his father's death in 1592.
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Original:  He moved to Venice  where he ran the branch of the family business, and where he was employed to paint a series of historical pictures in the Doge's Palace.
Revised:  He moved to Venice , where he ran the branch of the family business, and where he was employed to paint a series of historical pictures in the Doge's Palace.
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Original:  He moved to Venice  where he ran the branch of the family business, and where he was employed to paint a series of historical pictures in the Doge's Palace.
Revised:  He moved to Venice where he ran the branch of the family business, and where he was commissioned to paint a series of historical pictures in the Doge's Palace.
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Original:  He was prone to hypochondria, which exasperated his other ailments and he committed suicide by throwing himself out of a window soon after his father's death in 1592.
Revised:  He was prone to hypochondria, which exacerbated his other ailments and he committed suicide by throwing himself out of a window soon after his father's death in 1592.
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Original: Summer, Hermitage Museum, St. Petersburg (1570-1580) .
Revised: Summer, Hermitage Museum, St. Petersburg (1570-1580) 
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Original:  Adoration of the Shephards He moved to Venice, where he ran the branch of the family business , and where he was commissioned to paint a series of historical pictures in the Doge's Palace.
Revised:  Adoration of the Shepherds He moved to Venice, where he ran the branch of the family business , and where he was commissioned to paint a series of historical pictures in the Doge's Palace.
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Original:  Adoration of the Shephards He moved to Venice, where he ran the branch of the family business , and where he was commissioned to paint a series of historical pictures in the Doge's Palace.
Revised:  Adoration of the Shephards He moved to Venice, where he ran the branch of the family business . He was also commissioned to paint a series of historical pictures in the Doge's Palace.
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Original:  An applied science that applies statistics seeking associations between events, epidemiology cannot show causality, but consistently found higher incidence of lung cancer in smokers versus otherwise similar nonsmokers, although the proportion of smokers who develop lung cancer is modest.
Revised:  Epidemiology, an applied science that applies statistics seeking associations between events, epidemiology cannot show causality, but consistently found higher incidence of lung cancer in smokers versus otherwise similar nonsmokers, although the proportion of smokers who develop lung cancer is modest.
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Original:  An applied science that applies statistics seeking associations between events, epidemiology cannot show causality, but consistently found higher incidence of lung cancer in smokers versus otherwise similar nonsmokers, although the proportion of smokers who develop lung cancer is modest.
Revised:  An applied science that uses statistics in search of associations between events, epidemiology cannot show causality, but consistently found higher incidence of lung cancer in smokers versus otherwise similar nonsmokers, although the proportion of smokers who develop lung cancer is modest.
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Original:  An applied science that applies statistics seeking associations between events, epidemiology cannot show causality, but consistently found higher incidence of lung cancer in smokers versus otherwise similar nonsmokers, although the proportion of smokers who develop lung cancer is modest.
Revised:  An applied science that applies statistics seeking associations between events, cannot show causality, but consistently found higher incidence of lung cancer in smokers versus otherwise similar nonsmokers, although the proportion of smokers who develop lung cancer is modest.
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Original: Because of problems concerning humans' ability to define, discover, and know causality, the concept of causality was omitted in initial formulations of the DN model.
Revised: Because of problems concerning humans' ability to define, discover, and know causality, this was omitted in initial formulations of the DN model.
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Original: Conceptions The U.S. government used the term "personally identifiable" in 2007 in a memorandum from the Executive Office of the President, Office of Management and Budget (OMB),M-07-16 SUBJECT:
Revised: Definitions The U.S. government used the term "personally identifiable" in 2007 in a memorandum from the Executive Office of the President, Office of Management and Budget (OMB),M-07-16 SUBJECT:
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Original:  Section 3.3.3 "Identifiability" However, in the European Union, the IP address of an Internet subscriber may be classed as personal data.
Revised:  However, in the European Union, the IP address of an Internet subscriber may be classed as personal data.
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Original:  Furthermore, distrust of conventional medicine may lead to patients experiencing the nocebo effect when taking effective medication . Performance%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Studies by McClean within crystal and spiritual healing practices noted that innovation and individualised performance can equate to an effective healing.
Revised:  Furthermore, distrust of conventional medicine may lead to patients experiencing the nocebo effect when taking effective medication Performance%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Studies by McClean within crystal and spiritual healing practices noted that innovation and individualised performance can equate to an effective healing.
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Original:  Furthermore, distrust of conventional medicine may lead to patients experiencing the nocebo effect when taking effective medication . Performance%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Studies by McClean within crystal and spiritual healing practices noted that innovation and individualised performance can equate to an effective healing.
Revised:  Furthermore, distrust of conventional medicine may lead to patients experiencing the nocebo effect when taking effective medication . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Studies by McClean within crystal and spiritual healing practices noted that innovation and individualised performance can equate to an effective healing.
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Original:  Diagnosis and healing is therefore aligned to the client’s expectations, experiences, and beliefs .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The potential success of these alternate treatments for patients is noted by Laderman Roseman as the “existential immediacy that constitutes healing as real” .
Revised:  Diagnosis and healing is therefore aligned to the client’s expectations, experiences, and beliefs .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Roseman as the “existential immediacy that constitutes healing as real” .
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Original:  Diagnosis and healing is therefore aligned to the client’s expectations, experiences, and beliefs .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The potential success of these alternate treatments for patients is noted by Laderman Roseman as the “existential immediacy that constitutes healing as real” .
Revised:  Diagnosis and healing is therefore aligned to the client’s expectations, experiences, and beliefs .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The potential success of these alternate treatments for patients is noted by Laderman .
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Original: Adequacy of regulation and CAM safety Many of the claims regarding the safety and efficacy of alternative medicine are controversial.
Revised:  Many of the claims regarding the safety and efficacy of alternative medicine are controversial.
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Original:  Tennis doubles 5.0 sexual activity, aged 22 5.8 Vigorous intensity activities >= 6  bicycling, on flat, , light effort  6.0 sun salutation (Surya Namaskar, vigorous with transition jumps) 7.4 basketball game 8.0 swimming moderately to hard 8 to 11 jogging, 8.8 rope jumping (66/min) 9.8 rope jumping (84/min) 10.5 rope jumping (100/min) 11.0 jogging, 11.2
Revised:  Tennis doubles 5.0 sexual activity, aged 22 5.8 Vigorous intensity activities >= 6 bicycling, on flat, , light effort 6.0 jumping jacks > 6.0 sun salutation (Surya Namaskar, vigorous with transition jumps) 7.4 basketball game 8.0 swimming moderately to hard 8 to 11 jogging, 8.8 rope jumping (66/min) 9.8 rope jumping (84/min) 10.5 rope jumping (100/min) 11.0 jogging, 11.2
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Original:  Tennis doubles 5.0 sexual activity, aged 22 5.8 Vigorous intensity activities >= 6 aerobic dancing, medium effort 6.0 bicycling, on flat, , light effort 6.0 jumping jacks >6.0 sun salutation (Surya Namaskar, vigorous with transition jumps) 7.4 basketball game 8.0 swimming moderately to hard 8 to 11 jogging, 8.8 rope jumping (66/min) 9.8 rope jumping (84/min) 10.5 rope jumping (100/min) 11.0 jogging, 11.2
Revised:  Tennis doubles 5.0 sexual activity, aged 22 5.8 Vigorous intensity activities ≥ 6 aerobic dancing, medium effort 6.0 bicycling, on flat, , light effort 6.0 jumping jacks >6.0 sun salutation (Surya Namaskar, vigorous with transition jumps) 7.4 basketball game 8.0 swimming moderately to hard 8 to 11 jogging, 8.8 rope jumping (66/min) 9.8 rope jumping (84/min) 10.5 rope jumping (100/min) 11.0 jogging, 11.2
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Original:  Tennis doubles 5.0 Weight lifting (moderate intensity) 5.0 sexual activity, aged 22 5.8 Vigorous intensity activities ≥6 aerobic dancing, medium effort 6.0 bicycling, on flat, , light effort 6.0 jumping jacks >6.0 sun salutation (Surya Namaskar, vigorous with transition jumps) 7.4 basketball game 8.0 swimming moderately to hard 8 to 11 jogging, 8.8 rope jumping (66/min) 9.8 soccer10 .3 rope jumping (84/min) 10.5 rope jumping (100/min) 11.0 jogging, 11.2
Revised:  Tennis doubles 5.0 Weight lifting (moderate intensity) 5.0 sexual activity, aged 22 5.8 Vigorous intensity activities ≥6 aerobic dancing, medium effort 6.0 bicycling, on flat, , light effort 6.0 jumping jacks >6.0 sun salutation (Surya Namaskar, vigorous with transition jumps) 7.4 basketball game 8.0 swimming moderately to hard 8 to 11 jogging, 8.8 rope jumping (66/min) 9.8 football10 .3 rope jumping (84/min) 10.5 rope jumping (100/min) 11.0 jogging, 11.2
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Original: Essence is the  Department of Defense's Electronic Surveillance System for the Early Notification of Community-based Epidemics.
Revised: Essence is the United States Department of Defense's Electronic Surveillance System for the Early Notification of Community-based Epidemics.
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Original:  Essence's goal is to monitor health data as it becomes available and discover epidemics and similar health concerns before they move out of control.
Revised:  Essence's goal is to monitor health data as it becomes available and discover epidemics and similar health concerns before they get out of control.
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Original:  Michael Lewis, MD, MPH, when he was a resident in the Preventive Medicine residency training program at the Walter Reed Army Institute of Research , Silver Spring, Maryland.
Revised:  Michael Lewis, MD, MPH, when he was a resident in the Preventive Medicine residency training program at the Walter Reed Army Institute of Research in Silver Spring, Maryland.
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Original:  She also has an interest in photography , and has a great sense of humor.
Revised:  She also has an interest in photography and has a great sense of humor.
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Original: Susan Tom (born 1948) is a woman from Fairfield, California, who became famous when HBO aired a documentary, " My Flesh and Blood, " about her in 2003.
Revised: Susan Tom (born 1948) is a woman from Fairfield, California, who became famous when HBO aired a documentary, My Flesh and Blood, " about her in 2003.
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Original: Susan Tom (born 1948) is a woman from Fairfield, California, who became famous when HBO aired a documentary, " My Flesh and Blood, " about her in 2003.
Revised: Susan Tom (born 1948) is a woman from Fairfield, California, who became famous when HBO aired a documentary, " My Flesh and Blood, about her in 2003.
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Original:  Olivia (Livvy) : Livvy was born with spina bifida, uses a wheelchair, and loves board games.
Revised:  Olivia "Livvy" : Livvy was born with spina bifida, uses a wheelchair, and loves board games.
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Original:  The show mentioned Anthony's death (a few clips of him from My Flesh and Blood showed up during the episode).
Revised:  The show mentioned Anthony's death (a few clips of him from My Flesh and Blood were shown during the episode).
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Original: Susan Tom (born 1948) is a woman from Fairfield, California, who became famous when HBO aired a documentary, My Flesh and URL about her in 2003.
Revised: Susan Tom (born 1948) is a woman from Fairfield, California, who became famous when HBO aired a documentary, My Flesh and Blood, about her in 2003.
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Original:  Citation needed|date=February 2021 In the summer of 2005, the show Extreme Makeover: Home Edition built Tom and her family a new house.
Revised:  In the summer of 2005, the show Extreme Makeover: Home Edition built Tom and her family a new house.
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Original: "Union of the Comoros: Detailed Assessment Report on Anti-Money Laundering and Combating the Financing of Terrorism," IMF 2010   
Revised: "Union of the Comoros: Detailed Assessment Report on Anti-Money Laundering and Combating the Financing of Terrorism," IMF 2010 Tourism 
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Original:  African mainlanders, Creoles, Arabs, Malay-Polynesians , Antalotes and Shirazis make up the population of Anjouan.
Revised:  African mainlanders, Creoles, Arabs, Malayo-Polynesians , Antalotes and Shirazis make up the population of Anjouan.
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Original:  In his professional wrestling career, Hodgkinson is a five-time World Champion having won the WSX Championship once, the WWC Universal Heavyweight Championship once, the UWA World Heavyweight Championship once and the JCW Heavyweight Championship twice  .
Revised:  In his professional wrestling career, Hodgkinson is a five-time World Champion having won the WWC Universal Heavyweight Championship once, the UWA World Heavyweight Championship once and the JCW Heavyweight Championship twice .
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Original:  In his professional wrestling career, Hodgkinson is a five-time World Champion having won the WSX Championship once, the WWC Universal Heavyweight Championship once, the UWA World Heavyweight Championship once and the JCW Heavyweight Championship twice  .
Revised:  In his professional wrestling career, Hodgkinson is a five-time World Champion having won the WSX Championship once, the WWC Universal Heavyweight Championship once, the UWA World Heavyweight Championship once , the JCW Heavyweight Championship twice .
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Original:  In his professional wrestling career, Hodgkinson is a five-time World Champion having won the WWC Universal Heavyweight Championship once, the UWA World Heavyweight Championship once , the JCW Heavyweight Championship twice , and the WSX Championship once .
Revised:  In his professional wrestling career, Hodgkinson is a five-time World Champion having won the WWC Universal Heavyweight Championship once, the UWA World Heavyweight Championship once , the JCW Heavyweight Championship twice .
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Original: Vampiro entered the vacant WCW United States Title tournament, with his first-round opponent being The Great Muta , who Vampiro lost to.
Revised: Vampiro entered the vacant WCW United States Title tournament, losing to The Great Muta , who Vampiro lost to.
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Original: Ian Richard Hodgkinson (born May 31, 1967), better known by his ring name Vampiro, is a Canadian semi-retired professional wrestler who is the current director of talent for Lucha Libre AAA Worldwide (AAA).
Revised: Ian Richard Hodgkinson (born May 31, 1967), better known by his ring name Vampiro, is a Canadian semi-retired professional wrestler who most recently served as director of talent for Lucha Libre AAA Worldwide (AAA).
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Original: While the effects that PAF has on inflammatory response and cardiovascular conditions are well understood, PAF is still a hot subject for discussion.
Revised: While the effects that PAF has on inflammatory response and cardiovascular conditions are well understood, PAF is still a subject for discussion.
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Original:  Jacques Benveniste made significant contributions in the role and characteristics of PAF and its importance in inflammatory response and mediation.
Revised:  Benveniste made significant contributions in the role and characteristics of PAF and its importance in inflammatory response and mediation.
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Original:  Using lab rats and mice, Jacques Benveniste found that ionophore A23187 (a mobile ion carrier that allows the passage of Mn2+, Ca2+ and Mg2+ and has antibiotic properties against bacteria and fungi) caused the release of PAF.
Revised:  Using lab rats and mice, he found that ionophore A23187 (a mobile ion carrier that allows the passage of Mn2+, Ca2+ and Mg2+ and has antibiotic properties against bacteria and fungi) caused the release of PAF.
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Original:  His experiment’s data found that atherosclerosis ( hardening of the arteries) can be attributed to PAF and PAF-like lipids  and a diet with lipids that have antagonistic PAF properties can inhibit the development of heart disease .
Revised:  His experiment’s data found that atherosclerosis ( hardening of the arteries) can be attributed to PAF and PAF-like lipids and inhibit the development of heart disease .
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Original:  His experiment’s data found that atherosclerosis ( hardening of the arteries) can be attributed to PAF and PAF-like lipids  and a diet with lipids that have antagonistic PAF properties can inhibit the development of heart disease .
Revised:  His experiment’s data found that atherosclerosis ( hardening of the arteries) can be attributed to PAF and PAF-like lipids and a diet with lipids that have antagonistic PAF properties can inhibit the development of atherosclerosis in animal models .
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Original: PAF antagonists is a type of receptor ligand or drug that does not provoke an inflammatory response upon binding, but blocks or lessens the effect of PAF.
Revised: PAF antagonists do not provoke an inflammatory response upon binding, but blocks or lessens the effect of PAF.
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Original: PAF antagonists is a type of receptor ligand or drug that does not provoke an inflammatory response upon binding, but blocks or lessens the effect of PAF.
Revised: PAF antagonists is a type of receptor ligand or drug that does not provoke an inflammatory response upon binding, but block or lessen the effect of PAF.
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Original:  Etizolam is a benzodiazepine analog and PAF antagonist used to treat anxiety and panic URL Apafant Lexipafant (Zacutex) for treatment of pancreatitis.
Revised:  Etizolam is a benzodiazepine analog and PAF antagonist used to treat anxiety and panic attacks. Apafant Lexipafant (Zacutex) for treatment of pancreatitis.
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Original:  In medicine, a targetoid  is a structure or lesion that has the appearance of a target or is target-like.
Revised:  In medicine, a targetoid object is a structure or lesion that has the appearance of a target or is target-like.
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Original: Sexual script Sexual    scripting suggests the importance of meanings and symbols in human sexuality.
Revised: Sexual script Sexual Sexual scripting suggests the importance of meanings and symbols in human sexuality.
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Original:  Sexual Script Theory (SST , Gagnon Simon, 1973 ) and its application in clinical practice are founded on the undeniable reality that the subjective understandings of each person about his or her sexuality (and called a sexual script) substantively determine that person's choice of sexual actions and the subsequent qualitative experiencing of those sexual acts.
Revised:  Sexual Script Theory (SST Simon, 1973 ) and its application in clinical practice are founded on the undeniable reality that the subjective understandings of each person about his or her sexuality (and called a sexual script) substantively determine that person's choice of sexual actions and the subsequent qualitative experiencing of those sexual acts.
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