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Original:   A survey at the 1998 MOLA annual conference (conducted by Andrew S. Holmes ) revealed that  in some smaller orchestras ..., the library position had remained part-time for the most part until the mid 1980s to early 1990s. ” In some organizations, librarian duties were alternatively fulfilled by an administrative staff member (i.e. personnel manager or orchestra manager) and this is still the case with many smaller organizations today.
Revised:  " A survey at the 1998 MOLA annual conference (conducted by Andrew S. Holmes ) revealed that in some smaller orchestras ..., the library position had remained part-time for the most part until the mid 1980s to early 1990s. ” In some organizations, librarian duties were alternatively fulfilled by an administrative staff member (i.e. personnel manager or orchestra manager) and this is still the case with many smaller organizations today.
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Original:   A survey at the 1998 MOLA annual conference (conducted by Andrew S. Holmes ) revealed that  in some smaller orchestras ..., the library position had remained part-time for the most part until the mid 1980s to early 1990s. ” In some organizations, librarian duties were alternatively fulfilled by an administrative staff member (i.e. personnel manager or orchestra manager) and this is still the case with many smaller organizations today.
Revised:  A survey at the 1998 annual conference of the Major Orchestra Librarians' Association (MOLA ) revealed that in some smaller orchestras ..., the library position had remained part-time for the most part until the mid 1980s to early 1990s. ” In some organizations, librarian duties were alternatively fulfilled by an administrative staff member (i.e. personnel manager or orchestra manager) and this is still the case with many smaller organizations today.
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Original:   A survey at the 1998 MOLA annual conference (conducted by Andrew S. Holmes ) revealed that  in some smaller orchestras ..., the library position had remained part-time for the most part until the mid 1980s to early 1990s. ” In some organizations, librarian duties were alternatively fulfilled by an administrative staff member (i.e. personnel manager or orchestra manager) and this is still the case with many smaller organizations today.
Revised:  A survey at the 1998 MOLA annual conference (conducted by Andrew S. Holmes ) revealed that " in some smaller orchestras ..., the library position had remained part-time for the most part until the mid 1980s to early 1990s. ” In some organizations, librarian duties were alternatively fulfilled by an administrative staff member (i.e. personnel manager or orchestra manager) and this is still the case with many smaller organizations today.
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Original:   A survey at the 1998 MOLA annual conference (conducted by Andrew S. Holmes ) revealed that  in some smaller orchestras ..., the library position had remained part-time for the most part until the mid 1980s to early 1990s. ” In some organizations, librarian duties were alternatively fulfilled by an administrative staff member (i.e. personnel manager or orchestra manager) and this is still the case with many smaller organizations today.
Revised:  A survey at the 1998 MOLA annual conference (conducted by Andrew S. Holmes ) revealed that in some smaller orchestras ..., the library position had remained part-time for the most part until the mid 1980s to early 1990s. " In some organizations, librarian duties were alternatively fulfilled by an administrative staff member (i.e. personnel manager or orchestra manager) and this is still the case with many smaller organizations today.
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Original:  Consequently, primary forms of training include degree programs or their equivalent in Music Performance (instrumental), Music Theory, Musicology , or related fields, in conjunction with mentoring, internships, and on-the-job training.
Revised:  Consequently, primary forms of training include degree programs or their equivalent in music performance (instrumental), Music Theory, Musicology , or related fields, in conjunction with mentoring, internships, and on-the-job training.
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Original:  Consequently, primary forms of training include degree programs or their equivalent in Music Performance (instrumental), Music Theory, Musicology , or related fields, in conjunction with mentoring, internships, and on-the-job training.
Revised:  Consequently, primary forms of training include degree programs or their equivalent in Music Performance (instrumental), music theory, musicology , or related fields, in conjunction with mentoring, internships, and on-the-job training.
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Original:  Some ensemble librarians hold degrees in Library Science (LIS, MLIS).
Revised:  Some ensemble librarians hold degrees in library science (LIS, MLIS).
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Original:  ” While such experience can be very helpful, this is not typically a specific requirement to work as an ensemble librarian.
Revised:  " While such experience can be very helpful, this is not typically a specific requirement to work as an ensemble librarian.
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Original:  Ideally, “ training for orchestra librarianship should include a broad and intensive education in all aspects of music and the liberal arts.
Revised:  Ideally, " training for orchestra librarianship should include a broad and intensive education in all aspects of music and the liberal arts.
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Original:  Required skills and abilities Qualifications ( Quoted with permission from Russ Girsberger's "A Manual for the Performance Library" ) The following list describes the qualifications that are desirable to function successfully as a performance librarian.
Revised:  Required skills and abilities Qualifications Quoted with permission from Russ Girsberger's "A Manual for the Performance Library" ) The following list describes the qualifications that are desirable to function successfully as a performance librarian.
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Original:  Ability to work independently and in a leadership role when necessary - Ability to handle multiple tasks concurrently - Projecting planning and time management skills - Excellent communication skills and ability to interact with a number of diverse constituencies - Self-motivated%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Library Auditions In the U.S., some professional ensemble librarians must now endure a process similar to instrumental orchestral auditions in order to obtain their jobs.
Revised:  Ability to work independently and in a leadership role when necessary - Ability to handle multiple tasks concurrently - Projecting planning and time management skills - Excellent communication skills and ability to interact with a number of diverse constituencies - Self-motivated%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In the U.S., some professional ensemble librarians must now endure a process similar to instrumental orchestral auditions in order to obtain their jobs.
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Original:  The band librarian's work is greatly dependent on the performance venues and number of performances of the band - some military bands may perform in several ceremonies each day, and often a vast body of music must be ready to go on short notice.
Revised:  The band librarian's work is greatly dependent on the performance venues and number of performances of the band — some military bands may perform in several ceremonies each day, and often a vast body of music must be ready to go on short notice.
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Original:  Professionals often hold staff positions with the institution and job titles can range from “Music Librarian” to “ Band Department Administrative Assistant ” or “ Orchestra Manager.
Revised:  Professionals often hold staff positions with the institution and job titles can range from "Music Librarian" to " Band Department Administrative Assistant ” or “ Orchestra Manager.
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Original:  Professionals often hold staff positions with the institution and job titles can range from “Music Librarian” to “ Band Department Administrative Assistant ” or “ Orchestra Manager.
Revised:  Professionals often hold staff positions with the institution and job titles can range from “Music Librarian” to “ Band Department Administrative Assistant " or " Orchestra Manager.
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Original:  ” In addition to performance librarian duties on par with professional organizations, educational institution positions often entail extensive administrative duties for the music department and personnel manager tasks, as well.
Revised:  " In addition to performance librarian duties on par with professional organizations, educational institution positions often entail extensive administrative duties for the music department and personnel manager tasks, as well.
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Original:  Various organizations compile and maintain listings of current classical music festivals, including professional music organizations such as The League of American Orchestras ' publication “Symphony, ” university music departments like The Juilliard School, and student organizations such as Sigma Alpha Iota.
Revised:  Various organizations compile and maintain listings of current classical music festivals, including professional music organizations such as the League of American Orchestras ' publication “Symphony, ” university music departments like The Juilliard School, and student organizations such as Sigma Alpha Iota.
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Original:  Various organizations compile and maintain listings of current classical music festivals, including professional music organizations such as The League of American Orchestras ' publication “Symphony, ” university music departments like The Juilliard School, and student organizations such as Sigma Alpha Iota.
Revised:  Various organizations compile and maintain listings of current classical music festivals, including professional music organizations such as The League of American Orchestras publication Symphony, university music departments like The Juilliard School, and student organizations such as Sigma Alpha Iota.
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Original:  Various organizations compile and maintain listings of current classical music festivals, including professional music organizations such as The League of American Orchestras ' publication “Symphony, ” university music departments like The Juilliard School, and student organizations such as Sigma Alpha Iota.
Revised:  Various organizations compile and maintain listings of current classical music festivals, including professional music organizations such as The League of American Orchestras ' publication “Symphony, ” university music departments such as the Juilliard School, and student organizations such as Sigma Alpha Iota.
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Original:  MOLA maintains a listing of summer festival job openings , which is available in PDF format under the “Job Openings” tab .
Revised:  MOLA maintains a listing of summer festival job openings on their website .
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Original:  The most notable organizations for ensemble librarians are as follows : Major Orchestra Librarians ’ Association (MOLA): The Major Orchestra Librarians' Association, founded in 1983, is composed of nearly 250 professional performance organizations around the world, represented by more than 400 librarians.
Revised:  The most notable organizations for ensemble librarians are : Major Orchestra Librarians ’ Association (MOLA): The Major Orchestra Librarians' Association, founded in 1983, is composed of nearly 250 professional performance organizations around the world, represented by more than 400 librarians.
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Original:  The most notable organizations for ensemble librarians are as follows : Major Orchestra Librarians ’ Association (MOLA): The Major Orchestra Librarians' Association, founded in 1983, is composed of nearly 250 professional performance organizations around the world, represented by more than 400 librarians.
Revised:  The most notable organizations for ensemble librarians are as follows : Major Orchestra Librarians ' Association (MOLA): The Major Orchestra Librarians' Association, founded in 1983, is composed of nearly 250 professional performance organizations around the world, represented by more than 400 librarians.
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Original:  International Association of Music Libraries (IAML): Founded in 1951, the International Association of Music Libraries, Archives and Documentation Centres has ca. 2,000 individual and institutional members in ca. 45 countries.
Revised:  International Association of Music Libraries (IAML): Founded in 1951, the International Association of Music Libraries, Archives and Documentation Centres has around 2,000 individual and institutional members in ca. 45 countries.
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Original:  International Association of Music Libraries (IAML): Founded in 1951, the International Association of Music Libraries, Archives and Documentation Centres has ca. 2,000 individual and institutional members in ca. 45 countries.
Revised:  International Association of Music Libraries (IAML): Founded in 1951, the International Association of Music Libraries, Archives and Documentation Centres has ca. 2,000 individual and institutional members in around 45 countries.
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Original:  Current issues An ongoing issue in discussion among ensemble or performance librarians is the adequacy of available performance materials, in comparison to today's needs and standards required for professional use.
Revised:  Issues An ongoing issue in discussion among ensemble or performance librarians is the adequacy of available performance materials, in comparison to today's needs and standards required for professional use.
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Original:  "Training to Become a Performance Librarian." 2008. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tarlow, L. and Sutherland, R. "The Music We Perform: An overview of royalties, rentals, and rights." 1998/2003, rev. 2004. www.mola-inc.org/pdf/MusicWePerform.pdf External links MOLA
Revised:  "Training to Become a Performance Librarian." 2008. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Tarlow, L. and Sutherland, R. "The Music We Perform: An overview of royalties, rentals, and rights." 1998/2003, rev. 2004. www.mola-inc.org/pdf/MusicWePerform.pdf External links 
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Original: Unintended pregnancies are 2 to 3 times more likely to be associated with abuse than intended pregnancies.
Revised: Unintended pregnancies are two to three times more likely to be associated with abuse than intended pregnancies.
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Original:  In a study of sexually experienced women 15–19 in Uganda, surveys found that fourteen percent of women's first sexual intercourse had been coerced.
Revised:  In a study of sexually experienced women 15–19 in Uganda, surveys found that 14\% of women's first sexual intercourse had been coerced.
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Original:  Of those fourteen percent , the women were far more likely to be having unprotected sex without the use of modern contraceptives and to have had unintended pregnancies within the last six months compared to women who had not been sexually coerced.
Revised:  Of those 14\% , the women were far more likely to be having unprotected sex without the use of modern contraceptives and to have had unintended pregnancies within the last six months compared to women who had not been sexually coerced.
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Original:  A number of countries have sought to statistically estimate the number of adult women who have experienced domestic violence during pregnancy: United Kingdom prevalence: 3.4\% United States prevalence: 3.4–33.7\% Ireland prevalence: 12.5\% Population studies from Canada, Chile, Egypt and Nicaragua: 6-15 \% Incidence rates are higher for teenagers.
Revised:  A number of countries have sought to statistically estimate the number of adult women who have experienced domestic violence during pregnancy: United Kingdom prevalence: 3.4\% United States prevalence: 3.4–33.7\% Ireland prevalence: 12.5\% Population studies from Canada, Chile, Egypt and Nicaragua: 6–15 \% Incidence rates are higher for teenagers.
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Original:  Nurs Res 42 (3): 173–8 The incidence rate for low-income , teen mothers is as high as 38\%.
Revised:  Nurs Res 42 (3): 173–8 The incidence rate for low-income teen mothers is as high as 38\%.
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Original: Aristotle Aristotle (384 – 322 BCE) also know as "Slay Jay" was considered an ancient Greek scholar in the disciplines of ethics, metaphysics, biology and botany, amongst others.
Revised: Aristotle Aristotle (384 – 322 BCE) was considered an ancient Greek scholar in the disciplines of ethics, metaphysics, biology and botany, amongst others.
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Original:  Avicenna (c. 980–1037), also known as 'Ibn-Sina', was  polymath and jurist;
Revised:  Avicenna (c. 980–1037), also known as 'Ibn-Sina', was a polymath and jurist;
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Original:  Also June Gruber suggests that seeking happiness can have negative effects, such as failed over-high URL and instead advocates a more open stance to all emotions.
Revised:  Also June Gruber suggests that seeking happiness can have negative effects, such as failed over-high expectations, and instead advocates a more open stance to all emotions.
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Original:  Other research has analysed possible trade-offs between happiness and meaning in life.
Revised:  Other research has analyzed possible trade-offs between happiness and meaning in life.
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Original: Background Sultanate of Rûm was a medieval state in Anatolia founded by Seljuq Turks who had recently converted to Islam .
Revised: Background Sultanate of Rûm was a medieval state in Anatolia founded by Seljuq whose ancestors were converted to Islam .
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Original: Background Sultanate of Rûm was a medieval state in Anatolia founded by Seljuq whose ancestors were converted to Islam since 8th century AD and entered Ananatolia by 1080.
Revised: Background Sultanate of Rûm was a medieval state in Anatolia founded by Seljuqs whose ancestors were converted to Islam since 8th century AD and entered Ananatolia by 1080.
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Original: Background Sultanate of Rûm was a medieval state in Anatolia founded by Seljuqs whose ancestors were converted to Islam since 8th century AD and entered Ananatolia by 1080.
Revised: Background Sultanate of Rûm was a medieval state in Anatolia founded by Seljuqs whose ancestors were converted to Islam since 8th century AD and entered Anatolia by 1080.
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Original: Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī († 1240)Mehmed Fuad Köprülü, citing Ibn Bibi in his book "Anadolu'da İslamiyet" (Islam in Anatolia) (1922), identifies Bābā Rāss’ūl-Allāh with Baba Ishak who led The Bābā Ishāq Rebellion;
Revised:  Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī († 1240)Mehmed Fuad Köprülü, citing Ibn Bibi in his book "Anadolu'da İslamiyet" (Islam in Anatolia) (1922), identifies Bābā Rāss’ūl-Allāh with Baba Ishak who led The Bābā Ishāq Rebellion;
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Original: Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī († 1240)Mehmed Fuad Köprülü, citing Ibn Bibi in his book "Anadolu'da İslamiyet" (Islam in Anatolia) (1922), identifies Bābā Rāss’ūl-Allāh with Baba Ishak who led The Bābā Ishāq Rebellion;
Revised: Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī († 1240)Mehmed Fuad Köprülü, citing Ibn Bibi in his book "Anadolu'da İslamiyet" (Islam in Anatolia) (1922), identifies Bābā Rāss’ūl-Allāh with Baba Ishak who led The Bābā Ishāq Rebellion;
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Original: Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī († 1240)Mehmed Fuad Köprülü, citing Ibn Bibi in his book "Anadolu'da İslamiyet" (Islam in Anatolia) (1922), identifies Bābā Rāss’ūl-Allāh with Baba Ishak who led The Bābā Ishāq Rebellion;
Revised: Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī Rāss’ūl-Allāh Bābā Eliyās al-Khorāsānī († 1240)Mehmed Fuad Köprülü, citing Ibn Bibi in his book "Anadolu'da İslamiyet" (Islam in Anatolia) (1922), identifies Bābā with Baba Ishak who led The Bābā Ishāq Rebellion;
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Original: Background  Sultanate of Rûm was a medieval state in Anatolia founded by Seljuqs whose ancestors were converted to Islam since 11th century AD and entered Anatolia after 1071.
Revised: Background The Sultanate of Rûm was a medieval state in Anatolia founded by Seljuqs whose ancestors were converted to Islam since 11th century AD and entered Anatolia after 1071.
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Original:  He was a social activist - member of the Indian National CongressReport of the 32nd session of the Indian National Congress at Calcutta, 1917 and involved with the Satyagraha movement to campaign for Indian independence.
Revised:  He was a social activist - member of the Indian National Congress and involved with the Satyagraha movement to campaign for Indian independence.
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Original: Sudhamoy Pramanick (September 1884 – October 1974) ( ) was a Bengali advocate from Shantipur.
Revised: Sudhamoy Pramanick (September 1884 – October 1974) was a Bengali advocate from Shantipur.
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Original:  In 1919, he was a member of the Moderate Indian National Liberation foundation led by Surendranath Bannerjee Moderate party .
Revised:  In 1919, he was a member of the 'moderate' Indian National Liberation foundation led by Surendranath Bannerjee Moderate party .
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Original:  In 1919, he was a member of the Moderate Indian National Liberation foundation led by Surendranath Bannerjee Moderate party .
Revised:  In 1919, he was a member of the Moderate Indian National Liberation foundation led by Surendranath Bannerjee Moderate party .
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Original:  In 1919, he was a member of the 'moderate' Indian National Liberation foundation led by Surendranath Bannerjee Moderate party .
Revised:  In 1919, he was a member of the 'moderate' Indian National Liberation Foundation led by Surendranath Bannerjee Moderate party .
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Original:  He 'd supportedModern Review (Calcutta),vol.44,p684, Calcutta, 1928 and joined the Congress and was a senior leader during his tenure at  Raigunj Court.
Revised:  He 'd supportedModern Review (Calcutta),vol.44,p684, Calcutta, 1928 and joined as a senior leader during his tenure at Raigunj Court.
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Original:  He 'd supportedModern Review (Calcutta),vol.44,p684, Calcutta, 1928 and joined the Congress and was a senior leader during his tenure at  Raigunj Court.
Revised:  He 'd supportedModern Review (Calcutta),vol.44,p684, Calcutta, 1928 and joined the Congress and was a senior leader during his tenure at the Raigunj Court.
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Original:  Time Poverty is defined as the lack of time for leisure and rest activities after time spent working.
Revised:  Time poverty is defined as the lack of time for leisure and rest activities after time spent working.
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Original: Understanding that the problem was akin to the classical the chicken or the egg causality dilemma, Redfield proposed two mutually non-exclusive mechanisms: II) The N:P in seawater tends towards the N:P composition of plankton.
Revised: To explain this phenomena, Redfield initially proposed two mutually non-exclusive mechanisms: II) The N:P in seawater tends towards the N:P composition of plankton.
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Original:  A 2014 paper summarizing a large data set of nutrient measurements across all major ocean regions spanning from 1970 to 2010 reported the global median C:N:P to be 163:22:1. Martiny, A. C., Vrugt, J. A., Lomas, M. W. (2014).
Revised:  A 2014 paper summarizing a large data set of nutrient measurements across all major ocean regions spanning from 1970 to 2010 reported the global median C:N:P to be 163:22:1. Lomas, M. W. (2014).
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