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Original:  According to the Australian Licensed Aircraft Engineers' Association's assistent federal secreatary , Wayne Vasta, there has been a recent "change in culture" at Qantas, although he did say it would be innapropriate to blame only outsourcing.
Revised:  According to the Australian Licensed Aircraft Engineers' Association's assistent federal secreatary , Wayne Vasta, there has been a recent "change in culture" at Qantas, although he did say it would be inappropriate to blame only outsourcing.
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Original:  He said that while previously Qantas engineers had simpy attempted to do the best they could, "Now it appears we have got to do the best job we can possibly do, within a budget."
Revised:  He said that while previously Qantas engineers had simply attempted to do the best they could, "Now it appears we have got to do the best job we can possibly do, within a budget."
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Original:  Qantas' engineers are currently lobying for a pay rise, and say the airline is risking safety with cost cuts.
Revised:  Qantas' engineers are currently lobbying for a pay rise, and say the airline is risking safety with cost cuts.
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Original:  Peter Gibson, spokesperson for CASA, said no trouble had been spotted in recent safety audits of Qantas, but they felt it 'prudent' to investigate givent the recent string of incidents.
Revised:  Peter Gibson, spokesperson for CASA, said no trouble had been spotted in recent safety audits of Qantas, but they felt it 'prudent' to investigate given the recent string of incidents.
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Original:  He acknowledged that the review is unprecedented in CASA's history, and anounced the probe would be headed by senior official Mick Quinn.
Revised:  He acknowledged that the review is unprecedented in CASA's history, and announced the probe would be headed by senior official Mick Quinn.
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Original:  We want to make sure that what is in the manuals is being done," he told reporters.
Revised:  We want to make sure that what is in the manuals is being done," Gibson told reporters.
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Original:  This followed the July 25 accident on board Flight 30, a Boeing 747 headed from London to Melbourne that had just made a stopover in w: Hong Kong, in which an exploding oxygen cylinder caused an explosive decompression.
Revised:  This followed the July 25 accident on board Flight 30, a Boeing 747 headed from London to Melbourne that had just made a stopover in Hong Kong, in which an exploding oxygen cylinder caused an explosive decompression.
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Original:  Wembley Stadium today hosted the second day of the first Play.com Live multimedia exposition, a large event encompassing many large gaming retailers showcasing their latest games across a wide variety of platforms, as well as live music and entertainment from a wide variety of performers and personalities.
Revised: right Wembley Stadium today hosted the second day of the first Play.com Live multimedia exposition, a large event encompassing many large gaming retailers showcasing their latest games across a wide variety of platforms, as well as live music and entertainment from a wide variety of performers and personalities.
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Original:  The second band to play was the relatively unknown Go:Audio, who also played a selection of songs from their upcoming album , XXX .
Revised:  The second band to play was the relatively unknown Go:Audio, who also played a selection of songs from their upcoming album .
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Original:  This floor was also home to the Far Cray 2 exhibit, and the Unreal Tournament competition . Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Games Category:Music Category:Engla
Revised:  This floor was also home to the Far Cray 2 exhibit, and the Unreal Tournament competition Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Games Category:Music Category:Engla
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Original:  This floor was also home to the Far Cray 2 exhibit, and the Unreal Tournament competition . Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Games Category:Music Category:Engla
Revised:  This floor was also home to the Far Cray 2 exhibit, and the Unreal Tournament competition . 
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Original:   The decision was therefore dependent on the judges score cards.
Revised:  The decision was therefore decided on the judges score cards.
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Original:  At the time of the incident, Clottey led 86-85 on 2 judges  cards and 87-84 on the third judge's card  
Revised:  At the time of the incident, Clottey led 86-85 on 2 judges ' cards and 87-84 on the third judge's card 
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Original: Clottey won by a technical knock out as Judah declared he could not see and could not continue .
Revised: Clottey won by a technical knock out as Judah declared he could not see .
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Original:  Referee Robert Byrd decided the cut above Judah's eye , which was blinding him, was accidental.
Revised:  Referee Robert Byrd decided the cut above Judah's eye was accidental.
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Original:  The decision was therefore decided on the judges score cards .
Revised:  The result was therefore decided on the judges score cards .
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Original:  The decision was therefore decided on the judges score cards .
Revised:  The decision was therefore decided on the score cards of the judges .
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Original:  At the time of the incident, Clottey led 86-85 on 2 judges ' cards and 87-84 on the third judge's card.
Revised:  At the time of the incident, Clottey was leading 86-85 on 2 judges ' cards and 87-84 on the third judge's card.
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Original:  At the time of the incident, Clottey led 86-85 on 2 judges ' cards and 87-84 on the third judge's card.
Revised:  At the time of the incident, Clottey led 86-85 according to 2 judges ' cards and 87-84 on the third judge's card.
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Original:  At the time of the incident, Clottey led 86-85 on 2 judges ' cards and 87-84 on the third judge's card.
Revised:  At the time of the incident, Clottey led 86-85 on 2 judges and was ahead 87-84 on the third judge's card.
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Original: Joshua Clottey, the Ghanaian boxer based in Las Vegas, is the new IBF welterweight champion.
Revised: Boxer Joshua Clottey of Ghana is the new IBF welterweight champion.
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Original: Joshua Clottey, the Ghanaian boxer based in Las Vegas, is the new IBF welterweight champion.
Revised: Joshua Clottey, the Ghanaian boxer based in Las Vegas, is the new International Boxing Federation welterweight champion.
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Original:  At the time of the incident, Clottey was leading   86-85 according to 2 judges and was ahead 87-84 on the third judge's card.
Revised:  At the time of the incident, Clottey was leading 86-85 according to two judges and 87-84 on the third judge's card.
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Original:  At the time of the incident, Clottey was leading   86-85 according to 2 judges and was ahead 87-84 on the third judge's card.
Revised:  At the time of the incident, Clottey was leading 86-85 according to 2 judges and was ahead 87-84 by the third judge's card.
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Original:  Clottey 's two previous title attempts ended with a 'bizarre disqualificationto Carlos Baldomir in 1999' and a unanimous point defeat to  Antonio Margarito after breaking both his hands during that fight
Revised:  Clottey has had two previous title attempts ended with a 'bizarre disqualificationto Carlos Baldomir in 1999' and a unanimous point defeat to Antonio Margarito after breaking both his hands during that fight
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Original:  Clottey 's two previous title attempts ended with a 'bizarre disqualificationto Carlos Baldomir in 1999' and a unanimous point defeat to  Antonio Margarito after breaking both his hands during that fight
Revised:  Clottey 's two previous title attempts ended with a unanimous point defeat to Antonio Margarito after breaking both his hands during that fight
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Original:  The other was a unanimous point defeat to current World Boxing Association champion, Antonio Margarito after  his right hand in the fifth round
Revised:  The other was a unanimous point defeat to current World Boxing Association champion, Antonio Margarito after he broke his right hand in the fifth round
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Original:  The suspects are still at large  
Revised:  The suspects are still at large . 
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Original:  He and his wife, Catherine had been on the last day of there honeymoon when both were shot during what seems to be a botched robbery on July 29.
Revised:  He and his wife, Catherine had been on the last day of their honeymoon when both were shot during what seems to be a botched robbery on July 29.
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Original:  Ben was flew back to Britian on August 2 after a 22 hour operation to try and save his life.
Revised:  Ben was flown back to Britain on August 2 after a 22 hour operation to try and save his life.
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Original:  With the death of both Catherine and Ben the murder figures for Antigua have been placed into douple figures.
Revised:  With the death of both Catherine and Ben the murder figures for Antigua have been placed into double figures.
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Original:  Prime minister Baldwin Spencer has asked for Britians help during the investigation.
Revised:  Prime minister Baldwin Spencer has asked for Britain's help during the investigation.
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Original: Snowfall on a lake Overnight Friday a Southerly storm brought snow to both the Southern Alps and the central North Island mountains of New Zealand for the first time this year, closing major roads and stranding travellers at the start of the Queens Birthday holiday weekend.
Revised:  Overnight Friday a Southerly storm brought snow to both the Southern Alps and the central North Island mountains of New Zealand for the first time this year, closing major roads and stranding travellers at the start of the Queens Birthday holiday weekend.
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Original: A police officer asks for all roads to be closed In the North Island, State Highway 1 between Waiouru and Rangipo, the Desert Road was closed by deep snow at 3 PM on Friday afternoon .
Revised:  In the North Island, State Highway 1 between Waiouru and Rangipo, the Desert Road was closed by deep snow at 3 PM on Friday afternoon .
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Original:  Other roads in the area, including other parts of State Highway 1 between Bulls and Turangi, State Highway 4, via National Park, and 49, via Ohakune, were closed at 8 PM.
Revised:  Other roads in the area, including other parts of State Highway 1 between Bulls and Turangi, State Highway 4, via National Park, and 49, via Ohakune, were 
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Original: Phis photo, taken at 7.30 PM, shows the local Waiouru police officer telling a Transit NZ official that slushy snow on the alternative route had now iced up.
Revised: This photo, taken at 7.30 PM, shows the local Waiouru police officer telling a Transit NZ official that slushy snow on the alternative route had now iced up.
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Original:  He said big city drivers, unused to these conditions, were driving too fast and sliding into each other.
Revised:  He said big city drivers, not used to these conditions, were driving too fast and sliding into each other.
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Original:  Other roads in the area, including other parts of State Highway 1 between Bulls and Turangi, State Highway 4, via National Park, and 49, via Ohakune, were closed at 8 PM . This photo, taken at 7.30 PM, shows the local Waiouru police officer telling a Transit NZ official that slushy snow on the alternative route had now iced up.
Revised:  Other roads in the area, including other parts of State Highway 1 between Bulls and Turangi, State Highway 4, via National Park, and 49, via Ohakune, were closed at 8 PM This photo, taken at 7.30 PM, shows the local Waiouru police officer telling a Transit NZ official that slushy snow on the alternative route had now iced up.
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Original: Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn Russian novelist Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn has died  aged 89.
Revised: Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn Russian novelist Aleksandr Solzhenitsyn has died today aged 89.
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Original: 16 policemen were killed by unidentified assailants in Kashgar, in the predominantly muslim Xinjiang region of China.
Revised: 16 policemen were killed by unidentified assailants in Kashgar, in the predominantly Muslim Xinjiang region of China.
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Original:  Xinhua net reports the attackers drove a dump truck into the police officers during the officer's morning exercise at about 8  am local time (  00 GMT), then threw grenades into the police barracks and attacked with knives.
Revised:  Xinhua net reports the attackers drove a dump truck into the police officers during the officer's morning exercise at about 8 :00 am local time ( 00 GMT), then threw grenades into the police barracks and attacked with knives.
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Original:  Xinhua net reports the attackers drove a dump truck into the police officers during the officer's morning exercise at about 8  am local time (  00 GMT), then threw grenades into the police barracks and attacked with knives.
Revised:  Xinhua net reports the attackers drove a dump truck into the police officers during the officer's morning exercise at about 8 am local time ( 0: 00 GMT), then threw grenades into the police barracks and attacked with knives.
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Original:  The BBC reports 14 of the police deaths occurred at the scene, with two more dying en route to hospital.
Revised:  The BBC reports that fourteen of the police deaths occurred at the scene, with two more dying en route to hospital.
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Original: 16 policemen were killed by unidentified assailants in Kashgar, in the predominantly Muslim Xinjiang region of China.
Revised: Sixteen policemen were killed by unidentified assailants in Kashgar, in the predominantly Muslim Xinjiang region of China.
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Original:  Another 16 officers were wounded in the attack, in which two attackers drove a lorry into the station.
Revised:  Another Sixteen officers were wounded in the attack, in which two attackers drove a lorry into the station.
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Original:  Xinhua News Agency reports that the attackers drove a dump truck into the police officers during the officer' s morning exercise at about 8:00 am local time (0:00 GMT), then threw grenades into the police barracks and attacked with knives.
Revised:  Xinhua News Agency reports that the attackers drove a dump truck into the police officers during the officers' morning exercise at about 8:00 am local time (0:00 GMT), then threw grenades into the police barracks and attacked with knives.
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Original:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic language groups including the largely muslim Uyghurs.
Revised:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic peoples including the largely muslim Uyghurs.
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Original:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic language groups including the largely muslim Uyghurs.
Revised:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic language groups including the largely Muslim Uyghurs.
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Original: Sixteen policemen were killed by unidentified assailants in Kashgar , in the predominantly Muslim Xinjiang region of China.
Revised: Sixteen policemen were killed by unidentified assailants in , in the predominantly Muslim Xinjiang region of China.
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Original: Sixteen policemen were killed by unidentified assailants in Kashgar , in the predominantly Muslim Xinjiang region of China.
Revised: Sixteen policemen were killed by unidentified assailants in Kashgar , in the predominantly region of China.
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Original:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic peoples including the largely Muslim Uyghurs . Kashgar is an oasis city at an important junction of trade routes, near China's western borders, and was a part of the historic " Silk Road .
Revised:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the including the largely Muslim Uyghurs . Kashgar is an oasis city at an important junction of trade routes, near China's western borders, and was a part of the historic " Silk Road .
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Original:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic peoples including the largely Muslim Uyghurs . Kashgar is an oasis city at an important junction of trade routes, near China's western borders, and was a part of the historic " Silk Road .
Revised:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic peoples including the largely Muslim . Kashgar is an oasis city at an important junction of trade routes, near China's western borders, and was a part of the historic " Silk Road .
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Original:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic peoples including the largely Muslim Uyghurs . Kashgar is an oasis city at an important junction of trade routes, near China's western borders, and was a part of the historic " Silk Road .
Revised:  The population includes many groups, but the largest is the Turkic peoples including the largely Muslim Uyghurs . Kashgar is an oasis city at an important junction of trade routes, near China's western borders, and was a part of the historic " .
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Original:  Kumar Dhumal, the chief minister for Himachal  has announced an inquiry ito the incident  
Revised:  Kumar Dhumal, the chief minister for Himachal , has announced an inquiry ito the incident 
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Original:  Kumar Dhumal, the chief minister for Himachal  has announced an inquiry ito the incident  
Revised:  Kumar Dhumal, the chief minister for Himachal has announced an inquiry ito the incident . 
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Original:  140 people have been killed and fifty people have been injured in a stampede at the template of Naina Devi, India.
Revised:  140 people have been killed and fifty people injured in a stampede at the template of Naina Devi, India.
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Original:  140 people have been killed and fifty people have been injured in a stampede at the template of Naina Devi, India.
Revised:  140 people have been killed and fifty people have been injured in a stampede at the temple in Naina Devi, India.
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Original:  According to Daljit Singh Manhas, a senior police officer from the area, at least 40 of the victims were children. 50,000 people were expected to attend Naina Devi during the day of the stampede, as part of a nine-day  festival which had just started.
Revised:  According to Daljit Singh Manhas, a senior police officer from the area, at least 40 of the victims were children. 50,000 people were expected to attend the temple during the day of the stampede, as part of a nine-day festival which had just started.
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Original:   Kumar Dhumal, the chief minister for Himachal, has announced an inquiry ito the incident . Before this, there had already been two deadly stampedes in India, although this one had a much higher death toll than the others
Revised:  Meanwhile, Kumar Dhumal, the chief minister for Himachal, has announced an inquiry ito the incident . Before this, there had already been two deadly stampedes in India, although this one had a much higher death toll than the others
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Original:   Kumar Dhumal, the chief minister for Himachal, has announced an inquiry ito the incident . Before this, there had already been two deadly stampedes in India, although this one had a much higher death toll than the others
Revised:  Kumar Dhumal, the chief minister for Himachal, has announced an inquiry into the disaster . Before this, there had already been two deadly stampedes in India, although this one had a much higher death toll than the others
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Original: Rajnath Singh, the current leader of the Bharatiya Janata Party in India responded the the stampede by releasing a statement in the hours after the disaster.
Revised: Rajnath Singh, the current leader of the Bharatiya Janata Party in India responded to the stampede by releasing a statement in the hours after the disaster.
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Original:  Press reports way stampedes at temples are not rare occurrences.
Revised:  Press reports say stampedes at temples are not rare occurrences.
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Original: The ECBtoday announced that Kevin Pietersen MBE has been chosen as new England Cricket captain.
Revised: Today the England and Wales Cricket Board (ECB) announced that Kevin Pietersen MBE has been chosen as new England Cricket captain.
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Original: The ECBtoday announced that Kevin Pietersen MBE has been chosen as new England Cricket captain.
Revised: The ECBtoday announced that Kevin Pietersen MBE has been chosen to be the new England Cricket captain.
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Original:  Michael Vaughan, Pietersen's predecessor resigned Sunday in what the ''BBC describes a " shock."
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Original:  Michael Vaughan, Pietersen's predecessor resigned Sunday in what the ''BBC describes a " shock."
Revised:  Michael Vaughan, Pietersen's predecessor resigned Sunday in what the ''BBC describes a " 
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Original:  " I'm very thrilled and excited to have been given the opportunity to captain England," Pietersen told the BBC.
Revised:  I'm very thrilled and excited to have been given the opportunity to captain England," Pietersen told the BBC.
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Original:  During the news conference  the new captain paid tribute to his predecessor and said that the last few days had been an emotional time.
Revised:  During the news conference , the new captain paid tribute to his predecessor and said that the last few days had been an emotional time.
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Original:  He said that he would approach his captaincy like he approached his batting.
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Original:  Teams for next games :  England squad for final Test match against South Africa at The Oval, starting on Thursday 7 August:
Revised:  Teams for upcoming games England squad for final Test match against South Africa at The Oval, starting on Thursday 7 August:
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Original: The Associated Press says that about two dozen climbers began the accent of K2, the worlds second-highest mountain, Friday after the weather had cleared.
Revised: The Associated Press says that about two dozen climbers began the accent of K2, the world's second-highest mountain, Friday after the weather had cleared.
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Original:  Climbers are listed as from the Netherlands, South Korea, Italy, Norway, France, Napal , Serbia, Pakistan and Ireland.
Revised:  Climbers are listed as from the Netherlands, South Korea, Italy, Norway, France, Nepal , Serbia, Pakistan and Ireland.
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Original: The Associated Press  and CNN reported about midday UTC that the death toll in the Sunday's accident on K2 has risen to 11. 2 Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, the Associated Press also said.
Revised: The Associated Press (AP) and CNN reported about midday UTC that the death toll in the Sunday's accident on K2 has risen to 11. 2 Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, the Associated Press also said.
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Original: The Associated Press  and CNN reported about midday UTC that the death toll in the Sunday's accident on K2 has risen to 11. 2 Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, the Associated Press also said.
Revised: The Associated Press and CNN reported about midday UTC that the death toll in the Sunday's accident on K2 has risen to 11. 2 Dutch climbers have been rescued by helicopter, AP also said.
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Original:  The Associated Press says that about two dozen climbers began the accent of K2, the world's second-highest mountain, Friday after the weather had cleared.
Revised:  AP says that about two dozen climbers began the accent of K2, the world's second-highest mountain, Friday after the weather had cleared.
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