wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Marcoux is a member of the Canadian Paralympic team set to compete in Sochi While Sports Columnist Cathal Kelly published an editorial yesterday saying Canada needs to boycott the 2014 Winter Paralympics in Sochi, Russia , today the has said there are no plans to boycott the Games even as the country's government takes other actions aimed at Russia in response to their actions in the Ukraine.
Revised:  Marcoux is a member of the Canadian Paralympic team set to compete in Sochi While Sports Columnist Cathal Kelly published an editorial yesterday saying Canada needs to boycott the 2014 Winter Paralympics in Sochi, Russia even as the country's government takes other actions aimed at Russia in response to their actions in the Ukraine.
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Original:  The Paralympic Games are scheduled to start March 7. Baird is quoted in the as saying, "We don’t want the athletes to pay the price for this.[...] But politically …
Revised:  The Paralympic Games are scheduled to start March 7. Baird is quoted in as saying, "We don’t want the athletes to pay the price for this.[...] But politically …
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Original:  The Paralympic Games are scheduled to start March 7. Baird is quoted in the as saying, "We don’t want the athletes to pay the price for this.[...] But politically …
Revised:  The Paralympic Games are scheduled to start March 7. Baird is quoted in the as saying, "We don’t want the athletes to pay the price for this.[...] But politically ...
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Original:  Marcoux is a member of the Canadian Paralympic team set to compete in Sochi Yesterday the said there are no plans to boycott the 2014 Winter Paralympics in Sochi, Russia even as the country's government takes other actions aimed at Russia in response to their actions in the Ukraine.
Revised:  Marcoux is a member of the Canadian Paralympic team set to compete in Sochi Yesterday the said there are no plans to boycott the 2014 Winter Paralympics in Sochi, Russia even Canada takes other actions aimed at Russia in response to their actions in the Ukraine.
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Original:  Marcoux is a member of the Canadian Paralympic team set to compete in Sochi Yesterday the said there are no plans to boycott the 2014 Winter Paralympics in Sochi, Russia even as the country's government takes other actions aimed at Russia in response to their actions in the Ukraine.
Revised:  Marcoux is a member of the Canadian Paralympic team set to compete in Sochi Yesterday the said there are no plans to boycott the 2014 Winter Paralympics in Sochi, Russia even as the country's government takes other actions in response to their actions in the Ukraine.
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Original:  Marcoux is a member of the Canadian Paralympic team set to compete in Sochi Yesterday the said there are no plans to boycott the 2014 Winter Paralympics in Sochi, Russia even as the country's government takes other actions aimed at Russia in response to their actions in the Ukraine.
Revised:  Marcoux is a member of the Canadian Paralympic team set to compete in Sochi Yesterday the said there are no plans to boycott the 2014 Winter Paralympics in Sochi, Russia even as the country's government takes other actions aimed at Russia in response to Russian military intervention in Crimea, Ukraine.
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Original: In the past, Canada has boycotted an Olympics  .
Revised: Canada has previously boycotted an Olympics .
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Original:  In 1980, the country boycotted the because of the Russian invasion of .
Revised:  In 1980, the country boycotted the because of the USSR invasion of .
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Original: Ramaswamy Venkataraman The 8th President of India, Ramaswamy Venkataraman has died at the age of 98. Venkataraman served as President from 1987 to 1992, he was also the Vice President of India from 1984 to 1987.
Revised:  The 8th President of India, Ramaswamy Venkataraman has died at the age of 98. Venkataraman served as President from 1987 to 1992, he was also the Vice President of India from 1984 to 1987.
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Original:  The 8th President of India, Ramaswamy Venkataraman has died at the age of 98. Venkataraman served as President from 1987 to 1992, he was also the Vice President of India from 1984 to 1987.
Revised: Ramaswamy Venkataraman The 8th President of India, Ramaswamy Venkataraman has died at the age of 98. Venkataraman served as President from 1987 to 1992, he was also the Vice President of India from 1984 to 1987.
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Original:  In 1980 he succeeded Choudhary Charan Singh as the Union Finance Minister of India and then Union Minister of Defense and then Vice President under President Zail Singh.
Revised:  1980 he succeeded Choudhary Charan Singh as the Union Finance Minister of India and then Union Minister of Defense and then Vice President under President Zail Singh.
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Original:  In 1980 he succeeded Choudhary Charan Singh as the Union Finance Minister of India and then Union Minister of Defense and then Vice President under President Zail Singh.
Revised:  In 1980 he succeeded Choudhary Charan Singh as the Union Finance Minister of India and then Vice President under President Zail Singh.
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Original: Updike (left), with Mrs Barbara and President George H W Bush on 17 November 1989 Pulitzer-prize winning American novelist John Updike has died of lung cancer at a hospice near his home in Beverly Farms, Massachusetts.
Revised: Updike (left), with Mrs Barbara and President George H W Bush on 17 November 1989 Pulitzer Prize-winning American novelist John Updike has died of lung cancer at a hospice near his home in Beverly Farms, Massachusetts.
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Original:  He was born John Hoyer Updike in Reading, Pennsylvania in 1932.
Revised:  Born John Hoyer Updike in Reading, Pennsylvania in 1932.
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Original:  Updike documented ordinary - if highly sexualized - American life in around 50 works, beginning with The Poorhouse Fair in 1959.
Revised:  Updike documented ordinary - if highly sexualized — American life in around 50 works, beginning with The Poorhouse Fair in 1959.
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Original:  The son of a Pennsylvania school teacher who worked in the holidays as a laborer, he was educated at Harvard , where he edited the magazine Lampoon and at the UK's Ruskin School of Drawing and Fine Art.
Revised:  The son of a Pennsylvania school teacher who worked in the holidays as a laborer, he was educated at Harvard — where he edited the magazine Lampoon and at the UK's Ruskin School of Drawing and Fine Art.
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Original:  The son of a Pennsylvania school teacher who worked in the holidays as a laborer, he was educated at Harvard , where he edited the magazine Lampoon and at the UK's Ruskin School of Drawing and Fine Art.
Revised:  The son of a Pennsylvania school teacher who worked in the holidays as a laborer, he was educated at Harvard , where he edited the magazine Lampoon — and United Kingdom's The Ruskin School of Drawing and Fine Art.
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Original:  From there  he went on to write for The New Yorker.
Revised:  From there , he went on to write for The New Yorker.
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Original: During an interview with BBC Radio 2 Attenborough was asked why he did not credit god in his shows, he replied saying how he always remembers a little child in East Africa with a worm burrowing threw his eyeball.
Revised: During an interview with BBC Radio 2 Attenborough was asked why he did not credit god in his shows, he replied saying how he always remembers a little child in East Africa with a worm burrowing through his eyeball.
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Original:  He said it was “terrible” when the two were taught as equal, He added “ Evolution is not a theory, it ’ s a fact, every bit as much as the historical fact that William the Conqueror landed in 1066. ”
Revised:  He said it was "terrible" when the two were taught as equal, He added “ Evolution is not a theory, it ’ s a fact, every bit as much as the historical fact that William the Conqueror landed in 1066. ”
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Original:  He said it was “terrible” when the two were taught as equal, He added “ Evolution is not a theory, it ’ s a fact, every bit as much as the historical fact that William the Conqueror landed in 1066. ”
Revised:  He said it was “terrible” when the two were taught as equal, He added " Evolution is not a theory, it ’ s a fact, every bit as much as the historical fact that William the Conqueror landed in 1066. ”
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Original:  He said it was “terrible” when the two were taught as equal, He added “ Evolution is not a theory, it ’ s a fact, every bit as much as the historical fact that William the Conqueror landed in 1066. ”
Revised:  He said it was “terrible” when the two were taught as equal, He added “ Evolution is not a theory, it ' s a fact, every bit as much as the historical fact that William the Conqueror landed in 1066. ”
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Original:  He said it was “terrible” when the two were taught as equal, He added “ Evolution is not a theory, it ’ s a fact, every bit as much as the historical fact that William the Conqueror landed in 1066. ”
Revised:  He said it was “terrible” when the two were taught as equal, He added “ Evolution is not a theory, it ’ s a fact, every bit as much as the historical fact that William the Conqueror landed in 1066. "
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Original: Veteran Broadcaster and documentary maker Sir David Attenborough has said how he has received hate mail from Creationists.
Revised: Veteran broadcaster and documentary maker Sir David Attenborough has said how he has received hate mail from Creationists.
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Original:  During an interview with BBC Radio 2 Attenborough was asked why he did not credit god in his shows, he replied saying how he always remembers a little child in East Africa with a worm burrowing through his eyeball.
Revised:  During an interview with BBC Radio 2 Attenborough was asked why he did not credit God in his shows, he replied saying how he always remembers a little child in East Africa with a worm burrowing through his eyeball.
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Original:  His most recent documentary, a series about Charles Darwin and evolution is due to be broadcast in the U.K at the beginning of February
Revised:  His most recent documentary, a series about Charles Darwin and evolution is due to be broadcast in the UK at the beginning of February
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Original: Attenborough had previously criticized schools for teaching creationism alongside evolution.
Revised: Attenborough had previously criticised schools for teaching creationism alongside evolution.
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Original:  His most recent documentary, a series about Charles Darwin and evolution  is due to be broadcast in the UK at the beginning of February
Revised:  His most recent documentary, a series about Charles Darwin and evolution , is due to be broadcast in the UK at the beginning of February
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Original: Attenborough had previously criticised schools for teaching creationism alongside evolution.
Revised: Attenborough had previously criticized schools for teaching creationism alongside evolution.
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Original:  His most recent documentary, a series about Charles Darwin and evolution , is due to be broadcast in the UK at the beginning of February
Revised:  His most recent documentary, a series about Charles Darwin and evolution is due to be broadcast in the UK at the beginning of February
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Original: Attenborough has worked for the BBC for over 55 years Veteran broadcaster and documentary maker Sir David Attenborough has said how he has received hate mail from Creationists .
Revised: Attenborough has worked for the BBC for over 55 years Veteran broadcaster and documentary maker Sir David Attenborough has said how he has received hate mail from creationists .
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Original:  The letters tell him to “ Burn in Hell ” after not crediting God in his natural history documentaries.
Revised:  The letters tell him to " Burn in Hell ” after not crediting God in his natural history documentaries.
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Original:  The letters tell him to “ Burn in Hell ” after not crediting God in his natural history documentaries.
Revised:  The letters tell him to “ Burn in Hell " after not crediting God in his natural history documentaries.
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Original:  The worlds wants those resources and will probably not renounce them, but they may not be enough to keep the economy growing in Russia.
Revised:  The world wants those resources and will probably not renounce them, but they may not be enough to keep the economy growing in Russia.
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Original:  Clearly, some people in Russia oppose this assault on Ukraine, as we have seen from the arrests and beating of demonstrators in Moscow .
Revised:  Clearly, some people in Russia oppose this assault on Ukraine, as we have seen from the arrests and beating of demonstrators in .
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Original: Blank: Ejecting Russia form the is meaningless.
Revised: Blank: Ejecting Russia from the is meaningless.
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Original:  Sanctions that would register are sanctions on Putin et al so they cannot access their money, action in the WTO [] to arraign Russia for violating its statutes, legislation placing sanctions on Russia equivalent to those on that have crippled it, staging a on the ruble , and if necessary blockading the and to prevent maritime commerce.
Revised:  Sanctions that would register are sanctions on Putin et al so they cannot access their money, action in the WTO [] to arraign Russia for violating its statutes, legislation placing sanctions on Russia equivalent to those on that have crippled it, staging a on the rouble , and if necessary blockading the and to prevent maritime commerce.
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Original: Related news Morris: Anything is possible, but I think Ukraine lacks the political will to enter large-scale conflict.
Revised:  Morris: Anything is possible, but I think Ukraine lacks the political will to enter large-scale conflict.
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Original:  I can't say for certain but I imagine a large majority think the intervention is justified  
Revised:  I can't say for certain but I imagine a large majority think the intervention is justified . 
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Original:  We need to be in as strong a position as possible if we are to deliver distinctive content and meet our key strategic projects, such as moving to the new Broadcasting House, moving network production to the nations and funding our broadband future "
Revised:  We need to be in as strong a position as possible if we are to deliver distinctive content and meet our key strategic projects, such as moving to the new Broadcasting House, moving network production to the nations and funding our broadband future .
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Original:  We need to be in as strong a position as possible if we are to deliver distinctive content and meet our key strategic projects, such as moving to the new Broadcasting House, moving network production to the nations and funding our broadband future.  
Revised:  We need to be in as strong a position as possible if we are to deliver distinctive content and meet our key strategic projects, such as moving to the new Broadcasting House, moving network production to the nations and funding our broadband future. " 
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Original: The 80-year-old  was born in Spain and met Baudouin in the 1950s when she was a nurse.
Revised: Now 80-year-old was born in Spain and met Baudouin in the 1950s when she was a nurse.
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Original: Now 80-year-old Queen Fabiola was born in Spain and met Baudouin in the 1950s when she was a nurse.
Revised: Queen Fabiola, now 80 years old, was born in Spain and met Baudouin in the 1950s when she was a nurse.
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Original: 250px|Kirill (right) meets with then-President Vladimir Putin in 2006.
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Original: Mandleson told the Lords that the industry is vital to the British economy,  with "near one million employees from manufacturing to retailing" and providing "£10 billion worth of added value to the economy ".
Revised: Mandleson told the Lords that the industry is vital to the British economy, which with "near one million employees from manufacturing to retailing" and providing "£10 billion worth of added value to the economy ".
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Original: Mandleson told the Lords that the industry is vital to the British economy,  with "near one million employees from manufacturing to retailing" and providing "£10 billion worth of added value to the economy ".
Revised: Mandleson told the Lords that the industry is vital to the British economy, with "near one million employees from manufacturing to retailing" provides "£10 billion worth of added value to the economy ".
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Original: Mandleson told the Lords that the industry is vital to the British economy,  with "near one million employees from manufacturing to retailing" and providing "£10 billion worth of added value to the economy ".
Revised: Mandleson told the Lords that the industry is vital to the British economy, with "near one million employees from manufacturing to retailing" and providing "£10 billion worth of added value to the economy ."
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Original: Peter Mandelson The British government has announced a £2.3 billion package of aid to attempt to support the country's car manufacturing industry.
Revised:  The British government has announced a £2.3 billion package of aid to attempt to support the country's car manufacturing industry.
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Original:   Lord Peter Mandelson, the Secretary of State for Business, Enterprise and Regulatory Reform announced to the House of Lords that the government planned to obtain £1.3 billion from the European Investment Bank for the industry.
Revised:  Peter Mandelson Lord Peter Mandelson, the Secretary of State for Business, Enterprise and Regulatory Reform announced to the House of Lords that the government planned to obtain £1.3 billion from the European Investment Bank for the industry.
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Original: File:Brown_swiss.jpg|Brown Swiss is the breed of dairy cattle that produces the second largest quantity of milk per annum, over 9000kg]] Giving a cow a name and treating her as an individual with "more personal touch" can increase milk production, so says a scientific research published in the online journal Anthrozoos suggests .
Revised: File:Brown_swiss.jpg|Brown Swiss is the breed of dairy cattle that produces the second largest quantity of milk per annum, over 9000kg]] Giving a cow a name and treating her as an individual with "more personal touch" can increase milk production, so says a scientific research published in the online journal Anthrozoos .
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Original:  The Newcastle University's School of Agriculture, Food and Rural Development  researchers have found that farmers who named their cows Buttercup, Betsy, Gertrude or Daisy improved their overall milk yield by almost 500 pints (284 liters) annually.
Revised:  The Newcastle University's School of Agriculture, Food and Rural Development researchers have found that farmers who named their cows Buttercup, Betsy, or Gertrude improved their overall milk yield by almost 500 pints (284 liters) annually.
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Original:  ” ]  The research  team which has interviewed 516 UK dairy farmers, has discovered that almost half - 46pc - said they called the cows on their farms by name,  cutting stress levels and reported a higher milk yield, than the 54\% that did not give their cattle names and treated as just one of a herd.
Revised:  ” ] The research team which has interviewed 516 UK dairy farmers, has discovered that almost half - 46pc - called the cows on their farms by name, cutting stress levels and reported a higher milk yield, than the 54\% that did not give their cattle names and treated as just one of a herd.
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Original:  ” ]  The research  team which has interviewed 516 UK dairy farmers, has discovered that almost half - 46pc - said they called the cows on their farms by name,  cutting stress levels and reported a higher milk yield, than the 54\% that did not give their cattle names and treated as just one of a herd.
Revised:  ” ] The research team which has interviewed 516 UK dairy farmers, has discovered that almost half - 46pc - said they called the cows by name, cutting stress levels and reported a higher milk yield, than the 54\% that did not give their cattle names and treated as just one of a herd.
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Original:  ” ]  The research  team which has interviewed 516 UK dairy farmers, has discovered that almost half - 46pc - said they called the cows on their farms by name,  cutting stress levels and reported a higher milk yield, than the 54\% that did not give their cattle names and treated as just one of a herd.
Revised:  ” ] The research team which has interviewed 516 UK dairy farmers, has discovered that almost half - 46pc - said they called the cows on their farms by name, thereby cutting stress levels and reported a higher milk yield, than the 54\% that did not give their cattle names and treated as just one of a herd.
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Original:  The study  reveals cows were made more docile while being milked , amid an extra 454 pints over the course of 10 months, equivalent to about a pint and a-half a day . [[File:University_of_Newcastle_Upon_Tyne.jpg|King's Walk, giving access to the Newcastle University Union Society (left) and the arches of the Fine Art Building, leading into the Quadrangle.
Revised:  The study also reveals cows were made more docile while being milked , amid an extra 454 pints over the course of 10 months, equivalent to about a pint and a-half a day . [[File:University_of_Newcastle_Upon_Tyne.jpg|King's Walk, giving access to the Newcastle University Union Society (left) and the arches of the Fine Art Building, leading into the Quadrangle.
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Original:  The study  reveals cows were made more docile while being milked , amid an extra 454 pints over the course of 10 months, equivalent to about a pint and a-half a day . [[File:University_of_Newcastle_Upon_Tyne.jpg|King's Walk, giving access to the Newcastle University Union Society (left) and the arches of the Fine Art Building, leading into the Quadrangle.
Revised:  The study reveals cows were made more docile while being milked . [[File:University_of_Newcastle_Upon_Tyne.jpg|King's Walk, giving access to the Newcastle University Union Society (left) and the arches of the Fine Art Building, leading into the Quadrangle.
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Original:  It existed until 1937 when it joined the College of Medicine to form King's College, Durham .
Revised:  It existed until 1937 when it joined the College of Medicine to form King's College, Durham 
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Original: File:Brown_swiss.jpg|Brown Swiss is the breed of dairy cattle that produces the second largest quantity of milk per annum, over 9000kg]] Giving a cow a name and treating her as an individual with "more personal touch" can increase milk production, so says a scientific research published in the online journal Anthrozoos .
Revised: File:Brown_swiss.jpg|Brown Swiss is the breed of dairy cattle that produces the second largest quantity of milk per annum, over 9000kg]] Giving a cow a name and treating her as an individual with "more personal touch" can increase milk production, so says a scientific research published in the online "Anthrozoos," which is described as a "multidisciplinary journal of the interactions of people and animals" .
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Original:  File:University_of_Newcastle_Upon_Tyne.jpg|King's Walk, giving access to the Newcastle University Union Society (left) and the arches of the Fine Art Building, leading into the Quadrangle.
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Original:  But Marcia Endres, a w:University of MinnesotaUniversity of Minnesota associate professor of dairy science, has criticized the Newcastle finding.
Revised:  But Marcia Endres, a University of Minnesota associate professor of dairy science, has criticized the Newcastle finding.
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