wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  the G8 summits of the leaders of seven of the world's richest industrialised countries and of Russia have been regularly met by popular mass protests by critics who assert that members of G8 are responsible for global issues such as global warming due to carbon dioxide emission, poverty in Africa and developing countries due to debt crisis and unfair trading policy, the AIDS problem due to strict medicine patent policy and other problems that are related to globalization.
Revised:  the G8 summits of the leaders of seven of the world's richest industrialised countries and of Russia have been regularly met by popular protests by critics who assert that members of G8 are responsible for global issues such as global warming due to carbon dioxide emission, poverty in Africa and developing countries due to debt crisis and unfair trading policy, the AIDS problem due to strict medicine patent policy and other problems that are related to globalization.
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Original:  the G8 summits of the leaders of seven of the world's richest industrialised countries and of Russia have been regularly met by popular mass protests by critics who assert that members of G8 are responsible for global issues such as global warming due to carbon dioxide emission, poverty in Africa and developing countries due to debt crisis and unfair trading policy, the AIDS problem due to strict medicine patent policy and other problems that are related to globalization.
Revised:  the G8 summits of the leaders of seven of the world's richest industrialised countries and of Russia have been regularly met by popular mass protests by critics who assert that members of G8 are responsible for global issues such as global warming due to carbon dioxide emission, poverty in Africa and developing countries due to debt crisis and unfair trade policy, exacerbating the AIDS crisis by medicine patent policy and other problems that are related to globalization.
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Original:  These political protests have regularly been met by massive numbers of arrests and alleged police violence . Some sources claim that the true detention rate may be much higher, such as an unconfirmed report attributed to the Siberian Confederation of Labour (Сибирской Конфедерации Труда) claiming 200 arrests.
Revised:  These protests have been met by massive numbers of arrests and alleged police violence . Some sources claim that the true detention rate may be much higher, such as an unconfirmed report attributed to the Siberian Confederation of Labour (Сибирской Конфедерации Труда) claiming 200 arrests.
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Original:  These political protests have regularly been met by massive numbers of arrests and alleged police violence . Some sources claim that the true detention rate may be much higher, such as an unconfirmed report attributed to the Siberian Confederation of Labour (Сибирской Конфедерации Труда) claiming 200 arrests.
Revised:  These political protests have regularly been met by massive numbers of arrests and police violence, on some occasions . Some sources claim that the true detention rate may be much higher, such as an unconfirmed report attributed to the Siberian Confederation of Labour (Сибирской Конфедерации Труда) claiming 200 arrests.
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Original:  Permission to carry out a street demonstration by the Russian Social Forum has been refused by the authorities   
Revised:  Permission to carry out a street demonstration by the Russian Social Forum has been refused by the authorities . 
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Original:  Several independent sources have reported that a systematic police crackdown on people participating in alternative meetings (a Libertarian Forum and the Russian Social Forum) and critical the official meeting has begun almosta week prior to the summit.
Revised:  Several sources have reported that a systematic police crackdown on people participating in alternative meetings (a Libertarian Forum and the Russian Social Forum) and critical the official meeting has begun almosta week prior to the summit.
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Original:  Several sources have reported that a systematic police crackdown on people participating in alternative meetings (a Libertarian Forum and the Russian Social Forum) and critical  the official meeting has begun almosta week prior to the summit.
Revised:  Several sources have reported that a systematic police crackdown on people participating in alternative meetings (a Libertarian Forum and the Russian Social Forum) and critical of the official meeting has begun almosta week prior to the summit.
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Original:  Several sources have reported that a systematic police crackdown on people participating in alternative meetings (a Libertarian Forum and the Russian Social Forum) and critical  the official meeting has begun almosta week prior to the summit.
Revised:  Several sources have reported that a systematic police crackdown on people participating in alternative meetings (a Libertarian Forum and the Russian Social Forum) and critical the official meeting has begun almost a week prior to the summit.
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Original:  Estimates range from dozens to one or two hundred arrests and detainments .
Revised:  Estimates range from dozens to one or two hundred arrests and detentions .
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Original: Microsoft announced, that its free online classified listing site, Windows Live Expo launched today in the United States market, meaning that it is no longer a public pre-release beta version, but "a fully fledged Windows Live service".
Revised: Microsoft launched its free online classified listing site, Windows Live Expo launched today in the United States market, meaning that it is no longer a public pre-release beta version, but "a fully fledged Windows Live service".
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Original: Microsoft announced, that its free online classified listing site, Windows Live Expo launched today in the United States market, meaning that it is no longer a public pre-release beta version, but "a fully fledged Windows Live service".
Revised: Microsoft announced, that its free online classified listing site, Windows Live Expo today in the United States market, meaning that it is no longer a public pre-release beta version, but "a fully fledged Windows Live service".
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Original: Microsoft announced, that its free online classified listing site, Windows Live Expo launched today in the United States market, meaning that it is no longer a public pre-release beta version, but "a fully fledged Windows Live service".
Revised: Microsoft announced, that its free online classified listing site, Windows Live Expo launched today in the United States market, announcing that it is no longer a public pre-release beta version, but "a fully fledged Windows Live service".
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Original:  On Windows Live Expo users can easily buy and sell items, post classified advertisements, and search for bargains.
Revised:  On Windows Live Expo users can buy and sell items, post classified advertisements, and search for bargains.
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Original:  However, Expo makes it available to only search for listings by people in a specific group (e.g. only e-mail contacts), and also by radius of the user (e.g. maximum 50 miles from me).
Revised:  Expo can perform searches for listings by people in a specific group (e.g. only e-mail contacts), and also by radius of the user (e.g. maximum 50 miles from me).
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Original:  The service is /will be heavily integrated with other Windows Live products, such as Messenger and Spaces.
Revised:  The service is meant to be heavily integrated with other Windows Live products, such as Messenger and Spaces.
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Original:  Similar Web sites include Craiglist and eBay.
Revised:  Similar Web sites include Craigslist and eBay.
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Original:  Expo can perform searches for listings by people in a specific group (e.g. only e-mail contacts), and also by radius of the user (e. g. maximum 50 miles from me).
Revised:  Expo can perform searches for listings by people in a specific group (e.g. only e-mail contacts), and also by the geographic distance of the lister from the user.
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Original:  The announcement, published on the product team's blog, also noted , that a UK version of the service was created , and is available internally inside the company.
Revised:  The announcement, published on the product team's blog, also noted that a UK version of the service was created , and is available internally inside the company.
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Original:  The announcement, published on the product team's blog, also noted , that a UK version of the service was created , and is available internally inside the company.
Revised:  The announcement, published on the product team's blog, also noted , that a UK version of the service was created and is available internally inside the company.
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Original:  Expo was previously code-named Fremont, later Classifieds
Revised:  Expo was previously code-named Classified, and earlier code-named Fremont
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Original:  The police had been seeking a Subaru Legacy which got stuck in the sand at Owhiro bay a day before the body was discovered, they found the car at Wainuimata .
Revised:  The police had been seeking a Subaru Legacy which got stuck in the sand at Owhiro bay a day before the body was discovered, they found the car at Wainuiomata .
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Original:  The hotline for anyone to contact with any information call (NZ) 0508733762
Revised:  The hotline for anyone to contact with any information is (NZ) 0508733762
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Original: Microsoft was fined Euro 280.5 Million Today for not complying to a 2004 antitrust ruling by the European Union.
Revised: Microsoft was fined € 280.5 Million Today for not complying to a 2004 antitrust ruling by the European Union.
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Original:  There may be further fines, up to Euro 3 Million a day, if Microsoft does not adhere to with the ruling --Vishazz 11:58, 12 July 2006 (UT
Revised:  There may be further fines, up to Euro 3 Million a day, if Microsoft does not adhere to with the ruling 
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Original:  There may be further fines, up to Euro 3 Million a day, if Microsoft does not adhere to with the ruling
Revised:  There may be further fines, up to € 3 Million a day, if Microsoft does not adhere to with the ruling
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Original:  There may be further fines, up to Euro 3 Million a day, if Microsoft does not adhere to with the ruling
Revised:  There may be further fines, up to Euro 3 million a day, if Microsoft does not adhere to with the ruling
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Original:  There may be further fines, up to Euro 3 Million a day, if Microsoft does not adhere to with the ruling
Revised:  There may be further fines, up to Euro 3 Million a day, if Microsoft does not adhere to the ruling
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Original:  There   may be further fines, up to €3 million a day , if Microsoft does not adhere to the ruling
Revised:  There EU had ruled in 2004, asking Microsoft to provide its competitors information about its Windows operating system. This was to give the rivals a fair playing ground for writing software which was supposed to work on the Windows OS. may be further fines, up to €3 million a day , if Microsoft does not adhere to the ruling
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Original:  There   may be further fines, up to €3 million a day , if Microsoft does not adhere to the ruling
Revised:  There may be further fines, up to €3 million a day 
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Original:  This was to give the rivals a fair playing ground for writing software which was supposed to work on the Windows OS .
Revised:  This was to give the rivals a level playing ground for writing software which was supposed to work on the Windows OS .
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Original:  If not, there may be further fines, up to €3 million a day   
Revised:  If not, there may be further fines, up to €3 million a day . 
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Original: THe commission is saying that Microsoft has not done enough on the issue and must provide the information by July 31.
Revised: The commission is saying that Microsoft has not done enough on the issue and must provide the information by July 31.
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Original: Investigations The Maharashtra state government has announced a reward of Rs. 25,00,000 (about US $55,000) for information leading to the arrest of the perpetrators.
Revised: Investigation The Maharashtra state government has announced a reward of Rs. 25,00,000 (about US $55,000) for information leading to the arrest of the perpetrators.
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Original:   The day after the blast, schools, colleges and offices functioned normally in Mumbai and the commuter train service targeted in the bombings was operational.
Revised:  No group has so far claimed responsibility for the attacks. Indian authorities have said that the Kashmiri militant group Lashkar-e-Toiba (LeT) may be involved. An LeT spokesman has denied any involvement. The day after the blast, schools, colleges and offices functioned normally in Mumbai and the commuter train service targeted in the bombings was operational.
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Original:  While a resolution adopted by the BJP office-bearers criticised the central UPA government, charging that it was sending "consistent signals that the initiative against terrorism can be traded for votes . "  , Mr. Advani said that "it was not the time for criticising the government".
Revised:  A resolution adopted by the BJP office-bearers criticised the central UPA government, charging that it was sending "consistent signals that the initiative against terrorism can be traded for votes . " , Mr. Advani said that "it was not the time for criticising the government".
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Original:  While a resolution adopted by the BJP office-bearers criticised the central UPA government, charging that it was sending "consistent signals that the initiative against terrorism can be traded for votes . "  , Mr. Advani said that "it was not the time for criticising the government".
Revised:  While a resolution adopted by the BJP office-bearers criticised the central UPA government, charging that it was sending "consistent signals that the initiative against terrorism can be traded for votes " , Mr. Advani said that "it was not the time for criticising the government".
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Original:  While a resolution adopted by the BJP office-bearers criticised the central UPA government, charging that it was sending "consistent signals that the initiative against terrorism can be traded for votes . "  , Mr. Advani said that "it was not the time for criticising the government".
Revised:  While a resolution adopted by the BJP office-bearers criticised the central UPA government, charging that it was sending "consistent signals that the initiative against terrorism can be traded for votes . " . However , Mr. Advani said that "it was not the time for criticising the government".
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Original:  He said that a the blasts showed up a need for a stringent anti-terrorism law and that the authorities must not give an impression that they are willing to compromise national security.
Revised:  He said that the blasts showed up a need for a stringent anti-terrorism law and that the authorities must not give an impression that they are willing to compromise national security.
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Original:  He said that a the blasts showed up a need for a stringent anti-terrorism law and that the authorities must not give an impression that they are willing to compromise national security.
Revised:  He said that a the blasts showed up the need for a stringent anti-terrorism law and that the authorities must not give an impression that they are willing to compromise national security.
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Original: Investigation  The Maharashtra state government has announced a reward of Rs. 25,00,000 (about US $55,000) for information leading to the arrest of the perpetrators.
Revised: Investigation underway The Maharashtra state government has announced a reward of Rs. 25,00,000 (about US $55,000) for information leading to the arrest of the perpetrators.
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Original: Investigation underway The Maharashtra state government has announced a reward of Rs. 25, 00 ,000 (about US $55,000) for information leading to the arrest of the perpetrators.
Revised: Investigation underway The Maharashtra state government has announced a reward of Rs. 25, 000 ,000 (about US $55,000) for information leading to the arrest of the perpetrators.
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Original: Police have arrest Michael Levy, a British lord with close connections to Tony Blair and the Labour Party  . Lord Levy was arrested by the Specialist Crime Directorate of London’s Metropolitan police as part of an on-going investigation into the  cash-for-peerages row which has troubled the  government since the start of the year.
Revised: Police have arrested Lord Levy, chief fundraiser to the Labour Party . Lord Levy was arrested by the Specialist Crime Directorate of London’s Metropolitan police as part of an on-going investigation into the cash-for-peerages row which has troubled the government since the start of the year.
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Original: Police have arrest Michael Levy, a British lord with close connections to Tony Blair and the Labour Party  . Lord Levy was arrested by the Specialist Crime Directorate of London’s Metropolitan police as part of an on-going investigation into the  cash-for-peerages row which has troubled the  government since the start of the year.
Revised: Police have arrest Michael Levy, a British lord with close connections to Tony Blair and the Labour Party . Lord Levy was arrested by the Specialist Crime Directorate of London’s Metropolitan police as part of an on-going investigation into the cash-for-peerages row which has troubled the Labour government since the start of the year.
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Original:  Lord Levy is the Labour Party’s chief fundraiser as well as a close friend of the Prime Minister.
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Original: The cash-for-peerages affair erupted earlier this year, after an independent body reported that Tony Blair had sold peerages (the title of Lord) to businessmen in exchange for large donations to the Labour Party without making them public .
Revised: The cash-for-peerages affair erupted earlier this year, after an independent body reported that Tony Blair had sold peerages (the title of Lord) to businessmen in exchange for secret donations to the Labour Party without making them public .
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Original: The cash-for-peerages affair erupted earlier this year, after an independent body reported that Tony Blair had sold peerages (the title of Lord) to businessmen in exchange for large donations to the Labour Party without making them public .
Revised: The cash-for-peerages affair erupted earlier this year, after an independent body reported that Tony Blair had sold peerages (the title of Lord) to businessmen in exchange for large donations to the Labour Party .
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Original:  It’s believed that as Chief Fundraiser , Lord Levy arranged the Labour Party’s loans.
Revised:  It’s believed that as chief fundraiser , Lord Levy arranged the Labour Party’s loans.
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Original: In a statement,  Levy said the arrest was “totally unnecessary”.
Revised: In a statement, Lord Levy said the arrest was “totally unnecessary”.
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Original:  This potentially breaks the Honours (Prevention of Abuses) Act of 1925 which was originally introduced after Prime Minister Lloyd George was caught selling peerages to line his own pocket .
Revised:  This potentially breaks the Honours (Prevention of Abuses) Act of 1925 which was originally introduced after Prime Minister Lloyd George was caught selling peerages for personal funds .
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Original:  It also was expected that Zidane would reveal what provoked him into the headbutt.
Revised:  It was expected that Zidane would reveal what provoked him into the headbutt.
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Original:   Zidane refused to divulge what Materazzi actually said , but did say that Materazzi made remarks which were "very personal" and specifically concerned his mother and sister.
Revised:  However, Zidane refused to divulge what Materazzi actually said , but did say that Materazzi made remarks which were "very personal" and specifically concerned his mother and sister.
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Original:   Zidane refused to divulge what Materazzi actually said , but did say that Materazzi made remarks which were "very personal" and specifically concerned his mother and sister.
Revised:  Zidane refused to divulge what Materazzi actually said but did say that Materazzi made remarks which were "very personal" and specifically concerned his mother and sister.
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Original:  The French star's comments contradicted Materazzi's view . Zidane also refused to apologise to Materazzi for his on-field assault.
Revised:  While the French star's comments contradicted Materazzi's view . Zidane also refused to apologise to Materazzi for his on-field assault.
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Original:  The French star's comments contradicted Materazzi's view . Zidane also refused to apologise to Materazzi for his on-field assault.
Revised:  The French star's comments contradicted Materazzi's view Zidane also refused to apologise to Materazzi for his on-field assault.
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Original:  " After the red card to Zidane Italy went on to win the final on penalties.
Revised:  After the red card to Zidane Italy went on to win the final on penalties.
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Original:  " After the red card to Zidane Italy went on to win the final on penalties.
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Original:  FIFA set up a disciplinary committee to investigate Zidane's violent conduct   .
Revised:  FIFA set up a disciplinary committee to investigate Zidane's violent conduct . .
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Original:  "I want to apologise to them [the children] but I can't regret what I did because it would mean that he [Materazzi] was right to say what he said  .
Revised:  "I want to apologise to them [the children] but I can't regret what I did because it would mean that he [Materazzi] was right to say what he said " .
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Original:  I lost my mother when I was 15 years old and still get emotional when I talk about it  "
Revised:  I lost my mother when I was 15 years old and still get emotional when I talk about it . "
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Original:  The companies said that they expect to sell CHUM's A-Channel-branded stations, as well as Alberta educational broadcaster Access, to third parties, despite CTV's historical ties to several of them.
Revised:  The companies said that they expect to sell CHUM's A-Channel stations, as well as Alberta educational broadcaster Access, to third parties, despite CTV's historical ties to several of them.
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Original: The move comes after China's consistent requests this week to revise the original Japanese version, claiming that tensions in the region would increase if it were to be adopted.
Revised: The move comes after a number of Chinese requests this week to revise the original Japanese version, claiming that tensions in the region would increase if it were to be adopted.
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Original:  Both Russia and China, who share a border with the secretive nation, have been placed in a difficult position by last week's missile tests.
Revised:  Both Russia and China, who share a border with the nation, have been placed in a difficult position by last week's missile tests.
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Original:  Therefore it was with no great surprise that the two nations presented their revised resolution to the United Nations this afternoon.
Revised:  The two nations presented their revised resolution to the United Nations this afternoon.
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