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Original:  The move is aimed at making it less difficult for people affected by the virus to seek treatment, and allow medical providers to give it immediately, bypassing  health privacy regulations or other potential hurdles . Swine flu has now been circulated in 46 of the 50 US states, and has resulted in at least 411 confirmed deaths since the end of August.
Revised:  The move is aimed at making it less difficult for people affected by the virus to seek treatment, and allow medical providers to give it immediately, bypassing health privacy regulations . Swine flu has now been circulated in 46 of the 50 US states, and has resulted in at least 411 confirmed deaths since the end of August.
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Original:  Production of antiviral vaccines has been slower than initially predicted, and it  likely that the US government's targets for delivery won't be met by drug makers, according to Thomas Frieden, the director of the Centers for Disease Control 
Revised:  Production of antiviral vaccines has been slower than initially predicted, and it is likely that the US government's targets for delivery won't be met by drug makers, according to Thomas Frieden, the director of the Centers for Disease Control 
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Original:  Production of antiviral vaccines has been slower than initially predicted, and it  likely that the US government's targets for delivery won't be met by drug makers, according to Thomas Frieden, the director of the Centers for Disease Control 
Revised:  Production of antiviral vaccines has been slower than initially predicted, and it likely that the US government's targets for delivery won't be met by drug makers, according to Thomas Frieden, the director of the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention
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Original:  The country's worst rail disaster, however, was in February 2002, when at least 361 were killed after a passenger set fire to a moving train while using a stove  
Revised:  The country's worst rail disaster, however, was in February 2002, when at least 361 were killed after a passenger set fire to a moving train while using a stove . 
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Original:  The country's worst rail disaster, however, was in February 2002, when at least 361 were killed after a passenger set fire to a moving train while using a stove  
Revised:  The country's worst rail disaster, however, was in February 2002, when at least 361 were killed after a passenger set fire to a moving train while using a stove Related new
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Original: The attacks happened just outside the heavily-guarded Green Zone of Baghdad (pictured) The attacks occurred at the Justice Ministry building and a provincial government office close to the high-security Green Zone part of the city.
Revised: The attacks occurred at the Justice Ministry building and a provincial government office close to the high-security Green Zone part of the city.
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Original: Walpole, Massachusetts car crash kills 1, seriously injures 1. Walpole, Massachusetts: Fatal car crash kills 1 Framingham, Massachusetts man  aged 79 and seriously injures 1 woman.
Revised: Walpole, Massachusetts car crash kills one, injures one A fatal car crash has killed a Framingham, Massachusetts man aged 79 and seriously injures 1 woman.
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Original: Walpole, Massachusetts car crash kills 1, seriously injures 1. Walpole, Massachusetts: Fatal car crash kills 1 Framingham, Massachusetts man  aged 79 and seriously injures 1 woman.
Revised: Walpole, Massachusetts car crash kills 1, seriously injures 1. Walpole, Massachusetts: Fatal car crash kills 1 Framingham, Massachusetts man , aged 79 and seriously injures 1 woman.
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Original: Walpole, Massachusetts car crash kills 1, seriously injures 1. Walpole, Massachusetts: Fatal car crash kills 1 Framingham, Massachusetts man  aged 79 and seriously injures 1 woman.
Revised: Walpole, Massachusetts car crash kills 1, seriously injures 1. Walpole, Massachusetts: Fatal car crash kills 1 Framingham, Massachusetts man aged 79 , and seriously injured a woman.
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Original:  The woman is currently being held at Norwood, Massachusetts Hospital  for serious injuries.
Revised:  The woman is currently being held at Norwood, Massachusetts Hospital and is being treated for serious injuries.
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Original:  It was a single vehicle crash that happened on Route 1 on saturday afternoon in Walpole, Massachusetts.
Revised:  It was a single vehicle crash that happened on Route 1 on Saturday afternoon in Walpole, Massachusetts.
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Original:  The car was going south-bound and lost control when it hit an utility pole just after 4 P.M.  on Saturday.
Revised:  The car was going south-bound when it lost control and struck a utility pole just after 4 P.M. on Saturday.
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Original:  The man died at the crash site
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Original: The car was going south-bound when it lost control and struck a utility pole just after 4 P.M. local time on Saturday.
Revised: The car was heading south when it lost control and struck a utility pole just after 4 P.M. local time on Saturday.
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Original: (Washington) Tunisian President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali and his wife Leila salute their supporters, 25 Oct 2009 Tunisians are voting Sunday in a presidential election that is expected to be another landslide victory for incumbent President Zine al-Abidine Ben Ali.
Revised:  Tunisian President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali and his wife Leila salute their supporters, 25 Oct 2009 Tunisians are voting Sunday in a presidential election that is expected to be another landslide victory for incumbent President Zine al-Abidine Ben Ali.
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Original: (Washington) Tunisian President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali and his wife Leila salute their supporters, 25 Oct 2009 Tunisians are voting Sunday in a presidential election that is expected to be another landslide victory for incumbent President Zine al-Abidine Ben Ali.
Revised: (Washington) Tunisians are to vote on Sunday in a presidential election that is expected to be another landslide victory for incumbent President Zine al-Abidine Ben Ali.
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Original: (Washington) Tunisian President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali and his wife Leila salute their supporters, 25 Oct 2009 Tunisians are voting Sunday in a presidential election that is expected to be another landslide victory for incumbent President Zine al-Abidine Ben Ali.
Revised: (Washington) Tunisian President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali and his wife Leila salute their supporters, 25 Oct 2009 Tunisians are voting Sunday in a presidential election , largely expected to be another landslide victory for incumbent President Zine al-Abidine Ben Ali.
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Original: (Washington) Tunisian President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali and his wife Leila salute their supporters, 25 Oct 2009 Tunisians are voting Sunday in a presidential election that is expected to be another landslide victory for incumbent President Zine al-Abidine Ben Ali.
Revised: (Washington) Tunisian President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali and his wife Leila salute their supporters, 25 Oct 2009 Tunisians are voting Sunday in a presidential election that is expected to be another landslide victory for the incumbent president Zine al- Abidine Ben Ali.
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Original:  But international rights groups say the government has ensured victory for Mr. Ben Ali by harassing the opposition.
Revised:  Some international rights groups say the government has ensured victory for Mr. Ben Ali by harassing the opposition.
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Original:  But international rights groups say the government has ensured victory for Mr. Ben Ali by harassing the opposition.
Revised:  But international rights groups have accused the government of ensuring victory for Ben Ali by harassing the opposition.
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Original:  In a television address Saturday, the president responded to critics who say the election is unbalanced and fraudulent.
Revised:  In a televised address on Saturday, however, the president responded to critics who say the election is unbalanced and fraudulent.
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Original:  In a television address Saturday, the president responded to critics who say the election is unbalanced and fraudulent.
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Original:  He said actions will be taken against those spreading doubts or accusations about the integrity of the election without providing proof.
Revised:  , saying actions will be taken against those spreading doubts or accusations about the integrity of the election without providing proof.
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Original:  Tunisians are also electing members of parliament in Sunday's poll.
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Original:  Some information for this report was provided by AP and Reuters
Revised:  "I am convinced that when you go to the polls and exercise your right to choose, you will place, with freedom and conviction, Tunisia's interest and future above all other considerations," he said
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Original: Tunisians are to vote on Sunday in a presidential election, largely expected to be another landslide victory for the incumbent president Zine al- Abidine Ben Ali.
Revised: Tunisians were to vote on Sunday in a presidential election, largely expected to be another landslide victory for the incumbent president Zine al- Abidine Ben Ali.
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Original:  There have also been five attacks on an Islamic university in Islamabad  .
Revised:  There have also been five attacks on an Islamic university in Islamabad , the capital .
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Original: The accomplishment is the result of a week-long battle launched Monday in part of an operation to rid South Waziristan of Taliban influence.
Revised: This comes after a week-long battle launched Monday in part of an operation to rid South Waziristan of Taliban influence.
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Original: File:Pakistan-Waziristan-Map 2.png|Map showin South Waziristan, North Waziristan, and the North-West Frontier Province.
Revised: File:Pakistan-Waziristan-Map 2.png|Map showing South Waziristan, North Waziristan, and the North-West Frontier Province.
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Original:  Major General Athar Abbas, the chief spokesman for the military, told a news briefing that "we have complete control of Kotkai, a stronghold of the terrorists, where most of the houses had been converted into strong bunkers.
Revised:  Major General Athar Abbas, the chief spokesman for the military, said at a news briefing that "we have complete control of Kotkai, a stronghold of the terrorists, where most of the houses had been converted into strong bunkers.
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Original:  The entire area has been closed off due to dangers from Taliban forces .
Revised:  The entire area has been closed off due to heavy ongoing violence .
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Original: ]] Pakistani armed forces captured the town of Kotkai on Saturday, the hometown of Taliban Cheif Hakimullah Mehsud and one of his top officers, Qari Hussain.
Revised: ]] Pakistani armed forces captured the town of Kotkai on Saturday, the hometown of Taliban Chief Hakimullah Mehsud and one of his top officers, Qari Hussain.
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Original: This comes after a week-long battle launched Monday in part of an operation to rid South Waziristan of Taliban influence .
Revised: This comes after a week-long battle was launched on Monday, in part of an operation to rid South Waziristan of Taliban influence .
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Original: This comes after a week-long battle launched Monday in part of an operation to rid South Waziristan of Taliban influence .
Revised: This comes after a week-long battle launched Monday in part of an operation to curb the influence of the Taliban in South Waziristan .
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Original: File:Nokian pääkonttori Keilaniemessä.jpg|300px|Nokia headquarters in Espoo, Finnland .]] Mobile phone and computer manufacturer Nokia is filing a lawsuit against Apple over patent infringements.
Revised: File:Nokian pääkonttori Keilaniemessä.jpg|300px|Nokia headquarters in Espoo, Finland .]] Mobile phone and computer manufacturer Nokia is filing a lawsuit against Apple over patent infringements.
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Original: The worm began to spread in April 2004 , via open ports on the Windows XP and Windows 2000 operating systems  .
Revised: The worm began to spread in April 2004 on Windows XP and Windows 2000 operating systems .
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Original:  The trip was organised by Alex Nelson, the  of the nearby independent  .
Revised:  The trip was organised by Alex Nelson, the stationmaster of the nearby independent .
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Original: US soldiers from 2nd Battalion, 12th Infantry Regiment, 4th Brigade Combat Team, 4th Infantry Division fire mortars in Pech Valley, Kunar province 26 Oct 2009 NATO says eight U.S. service members and an Afghan civilian working for the force were killed Tuesday in bombs attacks in southern Afghanistan.
Revised: NATO has said that eight United States service members and an Afghan civilian working for the force were killed Tuesday in bombs attacks in southern Afghanistan.
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Original: US soldiers from 2nd Battalion, 12th Infantry Regiment, 4th Brigade Combat Team, 4th Infantry Division fire mortars in Pech Valley, Kunar province 26 Oct 2009 NATO says eight U.S. service members and an Afghan civilian working for the force were killed Tuesday in bombs attacks in southern Afghanistan.
Revised: US soldiers from 2nd Battalion, 12th Infantry Regiment, 4th Brigade Combat Team, 4th Infantry Division fire mortars in Pech Valley, Kunar province 26 Oct 2009 NATO says eight U.S. service members and an Afghan civilian working for the force were killed on Tuesday after bomb attacks in southern Afghanistan.
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Original:  The international force says several troops were also wounded.
Revised:  The international force added that several troops were also wounded.
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Original:  It gave no further details .
Revised:  "Additionally, several service members were wounded in these incidents and were transported to a regional medical facility for treatment," it said .
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Original:  The deaths came just a day after 11 U.S. troops and three U.S. drug agents were killed in separate helicopter crashes in Afghanistan.
Revised:  The deaths came just a day after eleven US troops and three U.S. drug agents were killed in separate helicopter crashes in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The deaths came just a day after 11 U.S. troops and three U.S. drug agents were killed in separate helicopter crashes in Afghanistan.
Revised:  The deaths came just a day after 11 U.S. troops and three US drug agents were killed in separate helicopter crashes in Afghanistan.
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Original:  The deaths came just a day after 11 U.S. troops and three U.S. drug agents were killed in separate helicopter crashes in Afghanistan.
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Original:  In Luxembourg Tuesday, European Union foreign ministers pledged to increase aid to Afghanistan and overhaul their civilian aid strategy in the country.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The ministers said it would seek better governance by the next Afghan government.
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Original:  Afghanistan is preparing for a run-off presidential election on November 7 after the initial August vote was marred by widespread fraud.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% While the EU debates its civilian aid strategy in Afghanistan, the United States is debating its war strategy.
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Original:  President Barack Obama said Monday he will not be rushed into making a decision about sending more troops to Afghanistan.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Mr. Obama and his national security team are debating whether to deploy as many as 40,000 more troops to the country, as the U.S. commander in Afghanistan has recommended.
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Original: File:2008 09 le centre dianétique de Marseille.jpg|A Scientology building in France Scientology was convicted of organized fraud in France, in a ruling issued on Tuesday by a court in Paris.
Revised:  Scientology was convicted of organized fraud in France, in a ruling issued on Tuesday by a court in Paris.
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Original:  Scientology claims 45,000  in France out of 12 million worldwide.
Revised:  Scientology claims 45,000 adherents in France out of 12 million worldwide.
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Original:  He accused the opposition of trying to spread lies  
Revised:  He accused the opposition of trying to spread lies . 
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Original:  The G8 have also announced a $          3 billion aid package for the Palestinian Authourity
Revised:  The G8 have also announced a $ The G8 have also announced a 3 billion aid package for the Palestinian Authourity
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Original:  The company blames the closure of the nation's three outlets on drastically increased costs of importing its food ingredients, particular from Germany.
Revised:  The company blames the closure of the nation's three outlets on drastically increased costs of importing its food ingredients, which mainly came from Germany.
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Original:   The restaurant, with its distinctive Golden Arches, began its Icelandic operations in 1993.
Revised:  McDonald's corporation says the current economic slump is to blame for rising costs along with the "unique operational complexity" of keeping them open. The restaurant, with its distinctive Golden Arches, began its Icelandic operations in 1993.
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Original:   [  Lyst hopes to operate a new chain of restaurants which will be supplied by domestic rather than imported food products
Revised:  "[ Lyst hopes to operate a new chain of restaurants which will be supplied by domestic rather than imported food products
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Original:  McDonald's corporation says the current economic slump is to blame for rising costs  along with the "unique operational complexity" of keeping them open.
Revised:  McDonald's corporation says the current economic slump is to blame for rising costs , along with the "unique operational complexity" of keeping them open.
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Original:  For a kilo of onion, imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said on Gardar Ogmundsson, owner of Lyst to BBC News . Lyst hopes to operate a new chain of restaurants  which will be supplied by domestic rather than imported food products
Revised:  For a kilo of onion, imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said one Gardar Ogmundsson, owner of Lyst to BBC News . Lyst hopes to operate a new chain of restaurants which will be supplied by domestic rather than imported food products
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Original:  For a kilo of onion, imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said on Gardar Ogmundsson, owner of Lyst to BBC News . Lyst hopes to operate a new chain of restaurants  which will be supplied by domestic rather than imported food products
Revised:  For a kilo of onion, imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said on Gardar Ogmundsson, the owner of the firm Lyst, to the BBC . Lyst hopes to operate a new chain of restaurants which will be supplied by domestic rather than imported food products
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Original:  For a kilo of onion, imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said on Gardar Ogmundsson, owner of Lyst to BBC News . Lyst hopes to operate a new chain of restaurants  which will be supplied by domestic rather than imported food products
Revised:  For a kilo of onion, imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said on Gardar Ogmundsson, owner of Lyst to BBC News . Lyst hopes to operate a new chain of restaurants , which will be supplied by domestic rather than imported food products
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Original:  For a kilo[gram] of onions  , imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said one Gardar Ogmundsson, the owner of the firm Lyst, to the BBC.
Revised:  For a kilo[gram] of onion , imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said one Gardar Ogmundsson, the owner of the firm Lyst, to the BBC.
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Original:  For a kilo[gram] of onions  , imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said one Gardar Ogmundsson, the owner of the firm Lyst, to the BBC.
Revised:  For a kilo[gram] of onions s , imported from Germany, I'm paying the equivalent of a bottle of good whisky," said one Gardar Ogmundsson, the owner of the firm Lyst, to the BBC.
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Original: This is not the first time that McDonald's, which currently operates in 119 countries on all 6 inhabited continents, has exited a country.
Revised:  McDonald's, which currently operates in 119 countries on all 6 inhabited continents, has exited a country.
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Original: This is not the first time that McDonald's, which currently operates in 119 countries on all 6 inhabited continents, has exited a country.
Revised: This is not the first time that McDonald's, which operates in 119 countries on all 6 inhabited continents, has exited a country.
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Original: File:El Maco.jpg|Icelandic advertisement for El Maco (Big Mac) McDonald's, the international fast food restaurant chain, will cease all operations in Iceland by the end of October.
Revised:  McDonald's, the international fast food restaurant chain, will cease all operations in Iceland by the end of October.
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Original: File:El Maco.jpg|Icelandic advertisement for El Maco (Big Mac) McDonald's, the international fast food restaurant chain, will cease all operations in Iceland by the end of October.
Revised: File:El Maco.jpg|Icelandic advertisement for El Maco (Big Mac) McDonald's, the international chain, will cease all operations in Iceland by the end of October.
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Original:  Pakistani officials say that over 40 people were killed and hundreds injured after a car bomb exploded in a marketplace in the city of Peshawar  .
Revised:  Pakistani officials have said that over 40 people were killed and hundreds injured after a car bomb exploded in a marketplace in the city of Peshawar .
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Original:  The Associated Press reports that many of the victims are women.
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Original:  Police say the blast was heard throughout most of the city  .
Revised:  Police said the blast was heard throughout most of the city .
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Original:  The bomb attack happened just hours after Hillary Clinton, the United States Secretary of State, flew to the nation to discuss peace with Pakistan's military commanders and political figures.
Revised: “Bodies are scattered and badly burned because of the fire caused by the explosion. The explosion took place in a very crowded market,” Mohammed Naeem, a spokesman for a local ambulance service said. The bomb attack happened just hours after Hillary Clinton, the United States Secretary of State, flew to the nation to discuss peace with Pakistan's military commanders and political figures.
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Original:   Police said the blast was heard throughout most of the city .
Revised:  The flames spread easily because there were many stores in the area selling flammable fabrics. Police said the blast was heard throughout most of the city .
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