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Original: Sahu knew some scientists would be skeptical of his findings and so he confirmed two of the planets by using the Very Large Telescope (VLT) in Chili to measure the movements of the stars caused by their orbiting partner, a technique known as measuring the radial velocity of the star.
Revised: Sahu knew some scientists would be skeptical of his findings and so he confirmed two of the planets by using the Very Large Telescope (VLT) in Chile to measure the movements of the stars caused by their orbiting partner, a technique known as measuring the radial velocity of the star.
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Original:  They found more than 180 planet candidates ;
Revised:  Over 180 planet candidates ;
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Original:  sifting out the best 16 was tough .
Revised:  sifting out the best 16 quite difficult .
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Original:  Over 180 planet candidates were identified, making the task of arriving at these 16 quite difficult.
Revised:  Over 180 planet candidates were identified, making the task of arriving at only 16 quite difficult.
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Original:  The currently accepted reason is that Gilliland ’ s study focused on a stellar nebula, where all of the stars had formed at the same time, and therefore there was a very low abundance of heavier elements.
Revised:  The currently accepted reason is that Gilliland ' s study focused on a stellar nebula, where all of the stars had formed at the same time, and therefore there was a very low abundance of heavier elements.
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Original:  “ I think a lot of people will take issue with that, ” says Dr. Sara Seager, Staff Scientist of the Department of Terrestrial Magnetism at the Carnegie Institution of Washington, on Sahu ’ s uncertainty.
Revised:  " I think a lot of people will take issue with that, ” says Dr. Sara Seager, Staff Scientist of the Department of Terrestrial Magnetism at the Carnegie Institution of Washington, on Sahu ’ s uncertainty.
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Original:  “ I think a lot of people will take issue with that, ” says Dr. Sara Seager, Staff Scientist of the Department of Terrestrial Magnetism at the Carnegie Institution of Washington, on Sahu ’ s uncertainty.
Revised:  “ I think a lot of people will take issue with that, " says Dr. Sara Seager, Staff Scientist of the Department of Terrestrial Magnetism at the Carnegie Institution of Washington, on Sahu ’ s uncertainty.
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Original:  “ I think a lot of people will take issue with that, ” says Dr. Sara Seager, Staff Scientist of the Department of Terrestrial Magnetism at the Carnegie Institution of Washington, on Sahu ’ s uncertainty.
Revised:  “ I think a lot of people will take issue with that, ” says Dr. Sara Seager, Staff Scientist of the Department of Terrestrial Magnetism at the Carnegie Institution of Washington, on Sahu ' s uncertainty.
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Original:  “ There are lots of nasty tricks nature can pull on us. ” More rigorous confirmation will have to wait for new technology, specifically NASA ’ s James Webb Space Telescope, to be launched in 2013.
Revised:  " There are lots of nasty tricks nature can pull on us. ” More rigorous confirmation will have to wait for new technology, specifically NASA ’ s James Webb Space Telescope, to be launched in 2013.
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Original:  “ There are lots of nasty tricks nature can pull on us. ” More rigorous confirmation will have to wait for new technology, specifically NASA ’ s James Webb Space Telescope, to be launched in 2013.
Revised:  “ There are lots of nasty tricks nature can pull on us. " More rigorous confirmation will have to wait for new technology, specifically NASA ’ s James Webb Space Telescope, to be launched in 2013.
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Original:  “ There are lots of nasty tricks nature can pull on us. ” More rigorous confirmation will have to wait for new technology, specifically NASA ’ s James Webb Space Telescope, to be launched in 2013.
Revised:  “ There are lots of nasty tricks nature can pull on us. ” More rigorous confirmation will have to wait for new technology, specifically NASA ' s James Webb Space Telescope, to be launched in 2013.
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Original:  Even so, Seager believes this is still “ tremendously exciting.
Revised:  Even so, Seager believes this is still " tremendously exciting.
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Original:  It doubles the amount of transiting planets found! ” With two other transiting extrasolar planets announced in September, the confirmed SWEEPS finds brings the number of known — and confirmed — transiting planets to 14
Revised:  It doubles the amount of transiting planets found! " With two other transiting extrasolar planets announced in September, the confirmed SWEEPS finds brings the number of known — and confirmed — transiting planets to 14
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Original: An artist's impression of one type of planet Hubble recently detected By peering some 20,000 light years into the star-swarms of the Milky Way's central bulge, astronomers using the Hubble Space Telescope have turned up 16 possible new planets crossing the faces of their stars, two of which have been confirmed.
Revised:  By peering some 20,000 light years into the star-swarms of the Milky Way's central bulge, astronomers using the Hubble Space Telescope have turned up 16 possible new planets crossing the faces of their stars, two of which have been confirmed.
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Original: London, England — The Gliders won a close contest 52–50 against Brazil tonight in front of a crowd of 3,288 at the in Olympic Park, London.
Revised: London, England — The Gliders won a close contest 52–50 against tonight in front of a crowd of 3,288 at the in Olympic Park, London.
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Original:  The , better known as the Gliders , have won medals at the last three Paralympics, but have yet to win a gold medal.
Revised:  The Gliders have won medals at the last three Paralympics, but have yet to win a gold medal.
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Original:  The scores were tied no less than 15 times and at no point were the Australians more than five points in front.
Revised:  The scores were tied fifteen times and at no point were the Australians more than five points in front.
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Original:  The Army Corps of Engineers decision to place restrictions on issuance of nationwide pollution permits has been upheld by a federal court.
Revised: (Washington, DC) The Army Corps of Engineers decision to place restrictions on issuance of nationwide pollution permits has been upheld by a federal court.
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Original: (Washington, DC) The Army Corps of Engineers decision to place restrictions on issuance of nationwide pollution permits has been upheld by a federal court.
Revised:  The Army Corps of Engineers decision to place restrictions on issuance of nationwide pollution permits has been upheld by a federal court.
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Original: The  Army Corps of Engineers decision to place restrictions on issuance of nationwide pollution permits has been upheld by a federal court.
Revised: The US Army Corps of Engineers decision to place restrictions on issuance of nationwide pollution permits has been upheld by a federal court.
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Original: London, England — At London's Olympic Basketball Arena last night, decisively beat South Africa by a score of 93 to 39 before a crowd of 2, 106 at a game that was the first played by both teams at the 2012 Summer Paralympics. led Australia in scoring with 21 points.
Revised: London, England — At London's Olympic Basketball Arena last night, decisively beat South Africa by a score of 93 to 39 before a crowd of 2, 106. The game was the first played by both teams at the 2012 Summer Paralympics. led Australia in scoring with 21 points.
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Original:  but he defended the Republican House Leader, Dennis Haster, who has refused to resign over his failure to address the issue earlier .
Revised:  but he defended the Republican House Leader, Dennis Haster, who has refused to resign over his failure to address the issue sooner .
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Original:  but he defended the Republican House Leader, Dennis Haster , who has refused to resign over his failure to address the issue sooner.
Revised:  but he defended the Republican House Leader, Dennis Hastert , who has refused to resign over his failure to address the issue sooner.
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Original:  The media has also revleaed that warnings on Mark Foley's conduct has gone as far back as 1995.
Revised:  The media has also revealed that warnings on Mark Foley's conduct has gone as far back as 1995.
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Original:  but he defended the Republican House Leader, Dennis Hastert, who has refused to resign over his failure to address the issue sooner .
Revised:  but he defended the Republican House Leader, Dennis Hastert, who has refused to resign over his failure to address the issue sooner 
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Original:  This has become a dominant issue as the mid-term polls are a month away
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Original:  He told delegates that:
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Original:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us . " He continued "We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
Revised:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us , " He continued "We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
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Original:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us . " He continued "We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
Revised:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us . " and that: "We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
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Original:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us , " and that : " We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
Revised:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us . " and that : " We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
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Original:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us , " and that : " We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
Revised:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us , " Morsi called on delegates to : " We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
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Original:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us , " and that : " We all have to announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
Revised:  "The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us , " and that : " ... announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
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Original:  President, , strongly backed the Syrian rebels Thursday in a speech at the Non-Aligned Movement Summit in Iran . Morsi, a Sunni muslim and member of the Muslim Brotherhood, is the first Egyptian leader in 30 years to visit Iran which is an ally of Syrian Prime Minister Bashar al-Assad's Shi'ite dominated regime.
Revised:  President, , strongly backed the Syrian rebels Thursday in a speech at the Non-Aligned Movement Summit in . Morsi, a Sunni muslim and member of the Muslim Brotherhood, is the first Egyptian leader in 30 years to visit Iran which is an ally of Syrian Prime Minister Bashar al-Assad's Shi'ite dominated regime.
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Original:  President, , strongly backed the Syrian rebels Thursday in a speech at the Non-Aligned Movement Summit in Iran . Morsi, a Sunni muslim and member of the Muslim Brotherhood, is the first Egyptian leader in 30 years to visit Iran which is an ally of Syrian Prime Minister Bashar al-Assad's Shi'ite dominated regime.
Revised:  President, , strongly backed the Syrian rebels Thursday in a speech at the Non-Aligned Movement Summit in Iran . Morsi, a Sunni Muslim and member of the Muslim Brotherhood, is the first Egyptian leader in 30 years to visit Iran which is an ally of Syrian Prime Minister Bashar al-Assad's Shi'ite dominated regime.
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Original:  President, , strongly backed the Syrian rebels Thursday in a speech at the Non-Aligned Movement Summit in Iran . Morsi, a Sunni muslim and member of the Muslim Brotherhood, is the first Egyptian leader in 30 years to visit Iran which is an ally of Syrian Prime Minister Bashar al-Assad's Shi'ite dominated regime.
Revised:  President, , strongly backed the Syrian rebels Thursday in a speech at the Non-Aligned Movement Summit in Iran . Morsi, a Sunni muslim and member of the Muslim Brotherhood, is the first Egyptian leader in 30 years to visit Iran – an ally of Syrian Prime Minister Bashar al-Assad's Shi'ite dominated regime.
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Original:  President, , strongly backed the Syrian rebels Thursday in a speech at the Non-Aligned Movement Summit in Iran . Morsi, a Sunni muslim and member of the Muslim Brotherhood, is the first Egyptian leader in 30 years to visit Iran which is an ally of Syrian Prime Minister Bashar al-Assad's Shi'ite dominated regime.
Revised:  President, , strongly backed the Syrian rebels Thursday in a speech at the Non-Aligned Movement Summit in Iran . Morsi, a Sunni muslim and member of the Muslim Brotherhood, is the first Egyptian leader in 30 years to visit Iran which is an ally of Syrian Prime Minister Shi'ite dominated regime.
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Original:  In a strongly worded speech, which caused the Syrian foreign minister Walid al Muallem to walk out in protest, Morsi called the Syrian regime "oppressive" and said that it had lost legitimacy.
Revised:  In a strongly worded speech, which caused Syrian foreign minister Walid al Muallem to walk out in protest, Morsi called the Syrian regime "oppressive" and said that it had lost legitimacy.
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Original:  In a strongly worded speech, which caused the Syrian foreign minister Walid al Muallem to walk out in protest, Morsi called the Syrian regime "oppressive" and said that it had lost legitimacy.
Revised:  In a strongly worded speech, which caused the Syrian foreign minister to walk out in protest, Morsi called the Syrian regime "oppressive" and said that it had lost legitimacy.
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Original:  In a strongly worded speech, which caused the Syrian foreign minister Walid al Muallem to walk out in protest, Morsi called the Syrian regime "oppressive" and said that it had lost legitimacy.
Revised:  In a strongly worded speech, which caused the Syrian foreign minister Walid al Muallem to walk out in protest, Morsi called the Syrian regime "oppressive" , saying that it has lost legitimacy.
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Original:  Delegates were told that: " The  bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us."
Revised:  Delegates were told , " The bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us."
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Original:  Delegates were told that: " The  bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us."
Revised:  Delegates were told that: " t bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us."
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Original:  Delegates were told that: " The  bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us."
Revised:  Delegates were told that: " The he bloodshed in Syria is our responsibility on all our shoulders and we have to know that the bloodshed cannot stop without effective interference from all of us."
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Original:  Morsi called on delegates to : "[...] announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
Revised:  Morsi called on delegates to "[...] announce our full solidarity with the struggle of those seeking freedom and justice in Syria, and translate this sympathy into a clear political vision that supports a peaceful transition to a democratic system of rule that reflects the demands of the Syrian people for freedom."
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Original:  The speech also allayed fears in the west that his attendance at a meeting of non-aligned countries indicated a change in Egyptian foreign policy to a less pro-western stance
Revised:  The speech also allayed fears in the west that his attendance at a meeting of non-aligned countries indicated a change in Egyptian foreign policy to a less pro-Western stance
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Original:  Monitoring of Mount Ruapehu will continue  
Revised:  Monitoring of Mount Ruapehu will continue . 
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Original: A volcano alert has been issued after a moderate 2.8 magnitude earthquake occurred at Mount Ruapehu last night at 10.30 p.m. (NZDT) and broke the Crater Lake cable which generated a call-out from the lahar response team.
Revised: A volcano alert has been issued after a moderate 2.8 magnitude earthquake occurred at Mount Ruapehu last night at 10.30 p.m. (NZDT) . The quake also broke the Crater Lake cable which generated a call-out from the lahar response team.
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Original:  It is yet to be confirmed if there was an eruption due to poor weather making it hard to see the crater from plane.
Revised:  It is yet to be confirmed if there was an eruption , as poor weather made it hard to see the crater from plane.
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Original: 250px| A picture of Mount Ruapehu A volcano alert has been issued after a moderate 2.8 magnitude earthquake occurred at Mount Ruapehu last night at 10.30 p.m. (NZDT).
Revised:  A picture of Mount Ruapehu A volcano alert has been issued after a moderate 2.8 magnitude earthquake occurred at Mount Ruapehu last night at 10.30 p.m. (NZDT).
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Original: However, the report added that splinter groups like the Real IRA (RIRA), Continuity IRA (CIRA) and the Irish National Liberation Army (INLA) are still threats  are still continuing their activity.
Revised: However, the report added that splinter groups like the Real IRA (RIRA), Continuity IRA (CIRA) and the Irish National Liberation Army (INLA) are still threats and are still continuing their activity.
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Original:  Ahern  said "These positive and clear-cut findings are of the utmost importance and significance.
Revised:  Ahern , said "These positive and clear-cut findings are of the utmost importance and significance.
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Original:  It is time to make decisions and for Northern Ireland to look to the future     
Revised:  It is time to make decisions and for Northern Ireland to look to the future ." 
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Original: However, the report added that splinter groups like the Real IRA (RIRA) , Continuity IRA (CIRA) and the Irish National Liberation Army (INLA) are still threats and are still continuing their activity.
Revised: However, the report added that splinter groups like the Real IRA (RIRA) and Continuity IRA (CIRA) and the Irish National Liberation Army (INLA) are still threats and are still continuing their activity.
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Original: However, the report added that splinter groups like the Real IRA (RIRA) , Continuity IRA (CIRA) and the Irish National Liberation Army (INLA) are still threats and are still continuing their activity.
Revised: However, the report added that splinter groups like the Real IRA (RIRA) , Continuity IRA (CIRA) are still threats and are still continuing their activity.
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Original:  The IRA decomissed their arms last year.
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Original:  The report also mentions that the IRA has also put it's criminality beyond use and is "clamping down" on criminals within the organazation, said Lord Alderdice, as he presented the report.
Revised:  The report also mentions that the IRA has also put its criminality beyond use and is "clamping down" on criminals within the organazation, said Lord Alderdice, as he presented the report.
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