wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Colonel Lawrence Wilkerson, who was Colin Powell's chief-of-staff, is  accusing members of the Bush administration.
Revised: Colonel Lawrence Wilkerson, who was Colin Powell's chief-of-staff, is attracting news headlines around the globe by publicly accusing members of the Bush administration.
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Original:  He said in a speech at the New America Foundation: "What I saw was a cabal between the vice president of the United States, Richard Cheney, and the secretary of defense , Donald Rumsfeld, on critical issues that made decisions that the bureaucracy did not know were being made."
Revised:  He said in a speech at the New America Foundation: "What I saw was a cabal between the Vice President of the United States, Richard Cheney, and the secretary of defense , Donald Rumsfeld, on critical issues that made decisions that the bureaucracy did not know were being made."
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Original:  He said in a speech at the New America Foundation: "What I saw was a cabal between the vice president of the United States, Richard Cheney, and the secretary of defense , Donald Rumsfeld, on critical issues that made decisions that the bureaucracy did not know were being made."
Revised:  He said in a speech at the New America Foundation: "What I saw was a cabal between the vice president of the United States, Richard Cheney, and the Secretary of Defense , Donald Rumsfeld, on critical issues that made decisions that the bureaucracy did not know were being made."
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Original:  An email alledgedly from Powell told Wilkerson;
Revised:  An email allegedly from Powell told Wilkerson;
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Original: He was admitted in the in just before he was scheduled to perform with another ghazal singer, , two weeks before on September 23.
Revised: He was admitted in the in just before a scheduled performance on September 23.
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Original:  He underwent surgeryon the same day, but didn't recover and was put on life support.
Revised:  Despite surgery, he remained on life support.
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Original:  His death is currently the top story in most Indian and Pakistani news agencies' websites , showing how popular he was within the region .
Revised:  His death was the top story in most Indian and Pakistani news agencies' websites , showing how popular he was within the region .
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Original:  His death is currently the top story in most Indian and Pakistani news agencies' websites , showing how popular he was within the region .
Revised:  His death is currently the top story on most Pakistani news agencies' websites , showing how popular he was within the region .
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Original:  His death is currently the top story in most Indian and Pakistani news agencies' websites , showing how popular he was within the region .
Revised:  His death is currently the top story in most Indian and Pakistani news agencies' websites .
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Original: Popularly known as "The Ghazal King", he was a recipient of the award.
Revised: Called "The Ghazal King", he was a recipient of the award.
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Original:  His death was the top story on most Pakistani news agencies' websites.
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Original: He was admitted to the in just before a scheduled performance on September 23.
Revised: He was admitted to in just before a scheduled performance on September 23.
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Original: Jagjit Singh performing at Symphony Hall, Birmingham, England.
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Original: 150px|Portrait of Dr  Naomi Martisius.
Revised: 150px|Portrait of Dr . Naomi Martisius.
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Original:  Last month, a study conducted by archæologist Dr Naomi Martisius and other researchers concluded Neanderthals living in Europe tens of thousands of years ago were more sophisticated than previously thought.
Revised:  Last month, a study conducted by Dr. Naomi Martisius and other researchers concluded Neanderthals living in Europe tens of thousands of years ago were more sophisticated than previously thought.
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Original:  Last month, a study conducted by archæologist Dr Naomi Martisius and other researchers concluded Neanderthals living in Europe tens of thousands of years ago were more sophisticated than previously thought.
Revised:  Last month, a study conducted by archæologist Dr Naomi Martisius and other researchers concluded living in Europe tens of thousands of years ago were more sophisticated than previously thought.
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Original:  File:Interview with Naomi Martisius about strategic bone tool raw material selection by Neandertals.webm| 350px|Watch the entire interview with Dr Naomi Martisius.
Revised:  350px|Watch the entire interview with Dr Naomi Martisius.
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Original:  (Video: acagastya) All four bone tools from Abri Peyrony gave positive results and showed that the bones were made from large bovids, even though reindeer were more abundant during that time.
Revised:  All four bone tools from Abri Peyrony gave positive results and showed that the bones were made from large bovids, even though reindeer were more abundant during that time.
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Original: On Wednesday, the total number of confirmed deaths linked to SARS-CoV-2 coronavirus infections surpassed 100,000 in the United States, (JHU) data indicated.
Revised: On Wednesday, the total number of confirmed deaths linked to SARS-CoV-2 coronavirus infections surpassed 100,000 in the United States, data indicated.
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Original: As of Wednesday, the United States had the highest number of known infections, accounting for around 30\% of world-wide coronavirus infections with over 1.6 million confirmed cases since January .
Revised: As of Wednesday, the United States had the highest number of known infections, accounting for around 30\% of world-wide coronavirus infections with over 1.6 million confirmed cases .
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Original:  Investigations have been launched by the Federal Aviation Administration and the National Transportation Safety Board, with the latter today confirming on Twitter they are "not traveling to the crash scene at this time.  & [ 
Revised:  Investigations have been launched by the Federal Aviation Administration and the National Transportation Safety Board, with the latter today confirming on Twitter they are "not traveling to the crash scene at this time. & [and manage 
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Original:  Investigations have been launched by the Federal Aviation Administration and the National Transportation Safety Board, with the latter today confirming on Twitter they are "not traveling to the crash scene at this time."
Revised:  Investigations have been launched by the Federal Aviation Administration and the National Transportation Safety Board, with the latter today confirming on Twitter they were "not traveling to the crash scene at this time."
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Original:  The (CalFire) says several acres of land burned before the flames were extinguished.
Revised:  The (CalFire) said several acres of land burned before the flames were extinguished.
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Original:  Vesey also indicated equipment is being added to lines to aid in shutdowns , with all this work scheduled to be completed this month
Revised:  Vesey also indicated equipment is being added to lines to aid in shutdowns 
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Original:  Wikinews has approached the NTSB regarding their decision not to visit the site  .
Revised:  Wikinews approached the NTSB regarding their decision not to visit the site .
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Original: Nabil Hasan al-Quaety, a photo- and videojournalist from Yemen, died in the southern city of on Tuesday after being shot in his car.
Revised: Nabil Hasan al-Quaety, a photo- and videojournalist from Yemen, died in the city of , in southern Yemen, on Tuesday after being shot in his car.
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Original: Al-Quaety, who contributed to Agence France-Presse among others , openly supported independence for South Yemen.
Revised: Al-Quaety, who contributed to Agence France-Presse among other news organizations , openly supported independence for South Yemen.
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Original:  A freelancer, he was a 2016 finalist for his images of the conflict.
Revised:  A freelancer, he was a 2016 finalist for his coverage of the conflict.
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Original:  It is in the hands of the people how we help each other going forward, and I am looking forward to being helpful in those efforts 
Revised:  It is in the hands of the people how we help each other going forward, and I am looking forward to being helpful in those efforts .
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Original:  Early in the month, he dealt with the fallout from a statement he made in late April about the use of disinfectant inside the body to treat coronavirus.
Revised:  Early in the month, he received additional fallout from a statement he made in late April about the use of disinfectant inside the body to treat coronavirus.
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Original:  Witnesses of the demonstration have challenged the official narrative provided by Egyptian state media channels such as Channel One and Nile News via individual blogs and social media sites such as Twitter and Facebook.
Revised:  Challenging the official narrative provided by Egyptian state media channels such as Channel One and Nile News via individual blogs and social media sites such as Twitter and Facebook.
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Original:  Witnesses of the demonstration have challenged the official narrative provided by Egyptian state media channels such as Channel One and Nile News via individual blogs and social media sites such as Twitter and Facebook.
Revised:  Witnesses of the demonstration have challenged the official narrative provided by Egyptian state media channels , including Channel One and Nile News via individual blogs and social media sites such as Twitter and Facebook.
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Original:  Witnesses of the demonstration have challenged the official narrative provided by Egyptian state media channels such as Channel One and Nile News via individual blogs and social media sites such as Twitter and Facebook.
Revised:  Witnesses of the demonstration have challenged the official narrative provided by Egyptian state media channels such as Channel One and Nile News 
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Original:  Initial reports on Channel One stated that the protestors had provoked military personnel with stonesand had fired live ammunition .
Revised:  Initial reports on Channel One that those protesting threw stones, and fired live ammunition .
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Original:  Initial reports on Channel One stated that the protestors had provoked military personnel with stonesand had fired live ammunition .
Revised:  Initial reports on Channel One stated that the protestors had provoked military personnel with stonesand had fired live ammunition 
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Original:  Footage taken of military vehicles chasing and running over protestors was not aired.
Revised:  , at military personnel. Further allegations assert coverage was selective, with footage of military vehicles chasing and running over protestors was not aired.
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Original:  Footage taken of military vehicles chasing and running over protestors was not aired.
Revised:  Footage taken of military vehicles pursuing and running over protestors was not aired.
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Original:  Footage taken of military vehicles chasing and running over protestors was not aired.
Revised:  Footage taken of military vehicles chasing and running over protesters not aired.
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Original:  Nile News, despite conducting interviews with both sides, also failed to show footage that was aired repeatedly on local and foreign channels.
Revised:  Nile News, despite conducting interviews with both sides, is also condemned by eye-witnesses for failing to run footage repeatedly aired on local and foreign channels.
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Original:  The coverage of the event has also caused outrage among numerous members of the Egyptian state media.
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Original:  Mahmoud Yousset , a state television worker, announced via her Twitter account : “ I reject the Egyptian state media’s coverage because it incites sectarianism, and I condemn all those who partake in it.
Revised:  Mahmoud Yousset , a state television worker, announced via her Twitter account , " I reject the Egyptian state media’s coverage because it incites sectarianism, and I condemn all those who partake in it.
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Original:  ” At least 24 people were killed and over 200 wounded as the demonstration became violent
Revised:  " At least 24 people were killed and over 200 wounded as the demonstration became violent
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Original:  ” At least 24 people were killed and over 200 wounded as the demonstration became violent
Revised:  ” At least 24 people were killed and over 200 wounded as the demonstration turned violent
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Original: Nile News presented more balanced coverage by conducting interviews with acitivits, military personnel and victims, despite difficulties in getting both sides of the story .
Revised: Nile News conducted interviews with injured on each side of the clash .
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Original:  Military and security personnel cut off the news building from protestors , which limited their access to activists and victims as sources . Nile News anchor , Hesham Assy , said: " We did the best we could, given the circumstances, as it was very difficult to leave the building last night."
Revised:  Military and security barred protestors from reaching their building . Nile News anchor , Hesham Assy , said: " We did the best we could, given the circumstances, as it was very difficult to leave the building last night."
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Original:  Military and security personnel cut off the news building from protestors , which limited their access to activists and victims as sources . Nile News anchor , Hesham Assy , said: " We did the best we could, given the circumstances, as it was very difficult to leave the building last night."
Revised:  Military and security personnel cut off the news building from protestors , which limited their access to activists and victims as sources . Nile News anchor Hesham Assy said: " We did the best we could, given the circumstances, as it was very difficult to leave the building last night."
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Original:  This coverage ]  led viewers to believe that the violence was provoked by the coptic protestors.
Revised:  This coverage ] seems to have led viewers to believe that the violence was provoked by the coptic protestors.
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Original:  This coverage ]  led viewers to believe that the violence was provoked by the coptic protestors.
Revised:  This coverage ] led viewers to believe that Coptic protesters caused the violence."
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Original: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Open source game developer Perttu Ahola talks about Minetest with Wikinews}} This week, Finnish open-source Perttu Ahola discussed about Minecraft , his "longest ever project" with Wikinews.
Revised: {{DISPLAYTITLE:Open source game developer Perttu Ahola talks about Minetest with Wikinews}} This week, Finnish open-source Perttu Ahola discussed about Minetest , his "longest ever project" with Wikinews.
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Original:  What are the main features that differentiate Minetest from Minecraft ?
Revised:  What are the main features that differentiate Minetest from ?
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Original:  In the alpha days [of Minecraft] it was capable of running on it, these days not a chance.
Revised:  In the days [of Minecraft] it was capable of running on it, these days not a chance.
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Original:  Everyone liked messing around in the quirky little multiplayer sandbox that it was.
Revised:  Everyone liked messing around in the quirky little multiplayer that it was.
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Original:  Minecraft, on the other hand, is a paid game,  costing USD 26.95 for its computer version.
Revised:  Minecraft, on the other hand, is a paid game, currently costing USD 26.95 for its computer version.
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Original: A correspondent from French Wikinews contacted Perttu Ahola via a few weeks ago, discussing about Minecraft.
Revised: A correspondent from French Wikinews contacted Perttu Ahola via a few weeks ago, discussing Minecraft.
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Original:  In Russia's second largest city, St. Petersburg, four gas attacks left more than 70 people ill.
Revised: Saint Petersburg In Russia's second largest city, St. Petersburg, four gas attacks left more than 70 people ill.
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Original:  Additionally, a drug lord in Valle province owns a private plane large enough for 14 passenger
Revised:  Additionally, a drug lord in Valle province owns a private plane large enough for 14 passengers
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Original:  He sought the Reform Party's 2016 presidential nomination but lost at the convention to his 2020 running mate De La Fuente.
Revised:  He sought the Reform Party's 2016 presidential nomination but lost to his 2020 running mate De La Fuente.
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Original: Billy Joe Parker (Prohibition Party) Billy Joe Parker In June, Prohibition Party presidential nominee and vice presidential nominee Billy Joe Parker unsuccessfully sought the nomination of the Reform Party,  denying ballot access for the ticket in Florida.
Revised: Billy Joe Parker (Prohibition Party) Billy Joe Parker In June, Prohibition Party presidential nominee and vice presidential nominee Billy Joe Parker unsuccessfully sought the nomination of the Reform Party, thereby denying ballot access for the ticket in Florida.
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Original:  In late June, at least four state Constitution parties severed their ties with the national Constitution Party, which nominated Don Blankenship for president in May.
Revised:  As of late June, at least four state Constitution parties severed their ties with the national Constitution Party, which nominated Don Blankenship for president in May.
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Original:  In late June, at least four state Constitution parties severed their ties with the national Constitution Party, which nominated Don Blankenship for president in May.
Revised:  In late June, several state Constitution parties severed their ties with the national Constitution Party, which nominated Don Blankenship for president in May.
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Original:  In late June, at least four state Constitution parties severed their ties with the national Constitution Party, which nominated Don Blankenship for president in May.
Revised:  In late June, at least four state Constitution parties were considering severing their ties with the national Constitution Party, which nominated Don Blankenship for president in May.
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Original: Lusk: My duties consist of speaking to the public about the issues that are important to JR. I'm also responsible for some marketing aspects of the campaign and getting signatures for ballot access  Lusk: The public should vote for us because we are focused on bringing healing, unity, and order to our country by centering our platform on the foundations that has made our country great.
Revised: Lusk: My duties consist of speaking to the public about the issues that are important to JR. I'm also responsible for some marketing aspects of the campaign and getting signatures for ballot access . Lusk: The public should vote for us because we are focused on bringing healing, unity, and order to our country by centering our platform on the foundations that has made our country great.
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Original: Lusk: My duties consist of speaking to the public about the issues that are important to JR. I'm also responsible for some marketing aspects of the campaign and getting signatures for ballot access  Lusk: The public should vote for us because we are focused on bringing healing, unity, and order to our country by centering our platform on the foundations that has made our country great.
Revised: Lusk: My duties consist of speaking to the public about the issues that are important to JR. I'm also responsible for some marketing aspects of the campaign and getting signatures for ballot access Lusk: The public should vote for us because we are focused on bringing healing, unity, and order to our country by centering our platform on the foundations that have made our country great.
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Original: On Friday it was announced that Warner Music Group  had been subpoenaed  to provide information about digital music download pricing.
Revised: On Friday Warner Music Group had been subpoenaed to provide information about digital music download pricing.
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Original:  We are cooperating fully with the inquiry ".
Revised:  We are cooperating fully with the inquiry ."
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Original: It is also thought that the investigation may be due to the music industry wishing to renegotiate pricing with Apple over it's iTunes online store.
Revised: It is also thought that the investigation may be due to the music industry wishing to renegotiate pricing with Apple over its iTunes online store.
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Original: Gilad Shalit , the kidnapped soldier, is to be released as part of a prisoner exchange deal struck between the Israeli government and .
Revised: Gilad Shalit , the kidnapped soldier, is to be released as part of a prisoner exchange deal struck between the government and .
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Original:  Israel will reportedly return 1,000 Palestinian prisoners in return for Shalit, who will return "in the coming days" according to Israeli Prime Minister .
Revised:  Israel will reportedly return 1,000 prisoners in return for Shalit, who will return "in the coming days" according to Israeli Prime Minister .
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Original:  The dealwill see 450 Palestinian prisoners released within the next week and 550  in two months time .
Revised:  Under the deal, 450 Palestinian prisoners released within the next week and 550 in two months time .
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Original:  The dealwill see 450 Palestinian prisoners released within the next week and 550  in two months time .
Revised:  The dealwill see 450 Palestinian prisoners released within the next week and 550 more in two months time .
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Original:  The dealwill see 450 Palestinian prisoners released within the next week and 550  in two months time .
Revised:  The dealwill see 450 Palestinian prisoners released within the next week and 550 in two months .
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Original: Gilad Shalit , the kidnapped soldier, is to be released as part of a prisoner exchange deal struck between the government and .
Revised: Gilad Shalit , the captive soldier, is to be released as part of a prisoner exchange deal struck between the government and .
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Original: In celebration of the release of Palestinian prisoners, there has been celebration in the streets of Gaza, handing out sweets and waving the green flag of Hamas.
Revised: In response to the release of Palestinian prisoners, there has been celebration in the streets of Gaza, handing out sweets and waving the green flag of Hamas.
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Original:  Israel will reportedly return 1,000  prisoners in return for Shalit, who will return "in the coming days" according to Israeli Prime Minister  .
Revised:  Israel will reportedly return 1,000 prisoners in return for Shalit, who will return "in the coming days" according to Israeli Prime Minister Benjamin Netanyahu .
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Original: Gilad Shalit , the captive soldier, is to be released as part of a prisoner exchange deal struck between the Israeli government and Hamas.
Revised:  , the captive soldier, is to be released as part of a prisoner exchange deal struck between the Israeli government and Hamas.
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Original: The Nine Network has announced the death of  Australia's richest man , Kerry Packer, aged 68.
Revised: The Nine Network has announced the death of Australia's richest men , Kerry Packer, aged 68.
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