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Original:  The Dzungars also went to war against the Kyrgyz, Tajiks,  Uzbeks when they invaded deep into Central Asia to Yasi (Turkestan) and Tashkent in 1643.
Revised:  The Dzungars also went to war against the Kyrgyz, Tajiks, and Uzbeks when they invaded deep into Central Asia to Yasi (Turkestan) and Tashkent in 1643.
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Original: After the destruction of the Dzungar Oirat people, the Qing dynasty sponsored the settlement of millions of Han, Hui, Xibe, Daur, Solon, Turkestani Oasis people (Uyghurs) and Manchus in Dzungaria since the land had been emptied.
Revised: After the destruction of the Dzungar Oirat people, the Qing dynasty sponsored the settlement of millions of Han, Hui, Xibe, Daur, Solon, Turkic Oasis people (Uyghurs) and Manchus in Dzungaria since the land had been emptied.
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Original:  When Gushi Khan decided to invade Tibet to replace the local Tsangpa Khan in favor of the Tibetan Geluk Sect , the Oirat army was organized into left and right wing.
Revised:  When Gushi Khan decided to invade Tibet to replace the local Tsangpa khan in favor of the Tibetan Geluk Sect , the Oirat army was organized into left and right wing.
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Original:  When Gushi Khan decided to invade Tibet to replace the local Tsangpa Khan in favor of the Tibetan Geluk Sect , the Oirat army was organized into left and right wing.
Revised:  When Gushi Khan decided to invade Tibet to replace the local Tsangpa Khan in favor of rule by the Gelug , the Oirat army was organized into left and right wing.
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Original:  After the  Yuan dynasty's collapse, the Oirats supported the Ariq Bökid Jorightu Khan Yesüder in seizing the Northern Yuan throne.
Revised:  After the Mongol Yuan dynasty's collapse, the Oirats supported the Ariq Bökid Jorightu Khan Yesüder in seizing the Northern Yuan throne.
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Original:  In 1696, Galdan was defeated by the Manchurian Qing dynasty and lost Outer Mongolia.
Revised:  In 1696, Galdan was defeated by the Qing dynasty and lost Outer Mongolia.
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Original:  After the Mongol Yuan dynasty's collapse, the Oirats supported the Ariq Bökid Jorightu Khan Yesüder in seizing the Northern Yuan throne.
Revised:  After the Yuan dynasty's collapse, the Oirats supported the Ariq Bökid Jorightu Khan Yesüder in seizing the Northern Yuan throne.
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Original:  In 1696, Galdan was defeated by the Manchu-led Qing dynasty and lost Outer Mongolia.
Revised:  In 1696, Galdan was defeated by the Qing dynasty and lost Outer Mongolia.
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Original:  After the Mongol-led Yuan dynasty's collapse, the Oirats supported the Ariq Bökid Jorightu Khan Yesüder in seizing the Northern Yuan throne.
Revised:  After the Yuan dynasty's collapse, the Oirats supported the Ariq Bökid Jorightu Khan Yesüder in seizing the Northern Yuan throne.
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Original:  She was born in China , of Manchu parents, and studied telecommunication and English at Beijing Post and Telecommunication University （北京邮电大学）.
Revised:  She was born in China and studied telecommunication and English at Beijing Post and Telecommunication University （北京邮电大学）.
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Original: Zhù Huá (祝华), female, is Professor of Applied Linguistics and Communication , at Birkbeck College, University of London.
Revised: Zhù Huá (祝华), is Professor of Applied Linguistics and Communication , at Birkbeck College, University of London.
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Original: Zhù Huá (祝华), female, is Professor of Applied Linguistics and Communication , at Birkbeck College, University of London.
Revised: Zhù Huá (祝华), female, is Professor of Applied Linguistics and Communication at Birkbeck College, University of London.
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Original:  She has an MA in Applied Linguistics from Beijing Normal University （北京师范大学） and was the first doctoral student of the late Professor Qian Yuan （钱瑗）, the daughter of the well known Chinese scholars and writers Qian Zhongshu （钱锺书）and Yang Jiang （杨绛）.
Revised:  She has an MA in Applied Linguistics from Beijing Normal University and was the first doctoral student of the late Professor Qian Yuan （钱瑗）, the daughter of the well known Chinese scholars and writers Qian Zhongshu （钱锺书）and Yang Jiang （杨绛）.
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Original:  She was elected Fellow of the Academy of Social Sciences, UK, in 2019. www.bbk.ac.uk/linguistics Qian zhongshu Yang Jiang Beijing Normal University Birkbeck, University of London Intercultural communication%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% University of Newca
Revised:  She was elected Fellow of the Academy of Social Sciences, UK, in 2019. Qian zhongshu Yang Jiang Beijing Normal University Birkbeck, University of London Intercultural communication%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% University of Newca
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Original:  She was elected Fellow of the Academy of Social Sciences, UK, in 2019. www.bbk.ac.uk/linguistics Qian zhongshu Yang Jiang Beijing Normal University Birkbeck, University of London Intercultural communication%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% University of Newca
Revised:  She was elected Fellow of the Academy of Social Sciences, UK, in 2019. www.bbk.ac.uk/linguistics %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% University of Newca
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Original: The Chinese room argument proposed by John Searle, is a similar thought experiment in philosophy of mind that relates to artificial intelligence.
Revised: The Chinese room argument analyzed by John Searle, is a similar thought experiment in philosophy of mind that relates to artificial intelligence.
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Original: The Chinese room argument analyzed by John Searle, is a similar thought experiment in philosophy of mind that relates to artificial intelligence.
Revised: The Chinese room scenario analyzed by John Searle, is a similar thought experiment in philosophy of mind that relates to artificial intelligence.
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Original:  After his death, the prison was demolished to prevent it from becoming a neo-Nazi shrine .
Revised:  After his death, the prison was demolished .
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Original: Death and aftermath Hess died on 17 August 1987, aged 93, in a summer house that had been set up in the prison garden as a reading room .
Revised: Death and aftermath Hess was found dead on 17 August 1987, aged 93, in a summer house that had been set up in the prison garden as a reading room .
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Original:  He took an extension cord from one of the lamps, strung it over a window latch , and hanged himself .
Revised:  He took an extension cord strung over a window latch , and hanged himself .
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Original:  He took an extension cord from one of the lamps, strung it over a window latch , and hanged himself .
Revised:  He took an extension cord from one of the lamps, strung it over a window latch .
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Original:  After reading the letter, Hitler let loose an outcry heard throughout the entire Berghof and sent for a number of his inner circle, concerned that a putsch might be underway.
Revised:  After reading the letter, Hitler let loose a yell heard throughout the entire Berghof and sent for a number of his inner circle, concerned that a putsch might be underway.
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Original:  After reading the letter, Hitler let loose a yell heard throughout the entire Berghof and sent for a number of his inner circle, concerned that a putsch might be underway.
Revised:  After reading the letter, Hitler let loose a cry heard throughout the entire Berghof and sent for a number of his inner circle, concerned that a putsch might be underway.
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Original:  Appointed Deputy Führer to Adolf Hitler in 1933, Hess held that position until 1941, when he flew solo to Scotland , claiming he was attempting to negotiate a German peace with the United Kingdom during World War II.
Revised:  Appointed Deputy Führer to Adolf Hitler in 1933, Hess held that position until 1941, when he flew solo to Scotland in an attempt to negotiate peace with the United Kingdom during World War II.
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Original:  The film, Hori Alone in KolkataAFGW-ACT INC General Meeting Speaker ReportLegislative Assembly for the ACT: 2006 Week 3 Hansard (28 March) Page 716ScreenACT Newsletter: May 2006 was screened in Australia and India.
Revised:  The film, Hori Alone in KolkataAFGW-ACT INC General Meeting Speaker Report Legislative Assembly for the ACT: 2006 Week 3 Hansard (28 March) Page 716ScreenACT Newsletter: May 2006 was screened in Australia and India.
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Original: Vaduthala Nair, the Kshatriya/Warrior of Parayi petta panthirukulam(The 12 castes that the women of caste named 'Paraya' delivered) belongs to the present Kundooly Nair family of Mezhathur, near Thrithala.
Revised: Vaduthala Nair, the Kshatriya/Warrior of Parayi petta panthirukulam(The 12 castes that the women of caste named 'Paraya' delivered) belongs to the present Kundully Nair family of Mezhathur, near Thrithala.
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Original:  It was this family who took and raised the infant left behind by the Vararuchi couple while on the pilgrimage along the Nila River banks.
Revised:  This family took and raised the infant left behind by the Vararuchi couple while on the pilgrimage along the Nila River banks.
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Original: Vaduthala Nair, the Kshatriya/Warrior of Parayi petta panthirukulam (The 12 castes that the women of caste named 'Paraya' delivered) belongs to the present Kundully Nair family of Mezhathur, near Thrithala.
Revised: Vaduthala Nair, the Kshatriya/Warrior of Parayi petta panthirukulam , belongs to the present Kundully Nair family of Mezhathur, near Thrithala.
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Original: Vaduthala Nair, the Kshatriya/Warrior of Parayi petta panthirukulam, belongs to the present Kundully Nair family of Mezhathur, near Thrithala.
Revised: Vaduthala Nair, of Parayi petta panthirukulam, belongs to the present Kundully Nair family of Mezhathur, near Thrithala.
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Original:  Vaduthala Nair was an expert in martial URL He was a Nair URL
Revised:  Vaduthala Nair was an expert in martial arts. He was a Nair URL
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Original:  That members of both Ataíde families were involved in the early construction of the Portuguese empire in the East Indies has led some historians to assume they were related and contributed to the confusion.
Revised:  That members of both Ataíde families were involved in the early construction of the Portuguese Empire in the East Indies has led some historians to assume they were related and contributed to the confusion.
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Original:  Tragically, Vasco de Ataíde was lost with his ship in late May while attempting to round the Cape of Good HopeThis is asserted in most chronicles.
Revised:  Vasco de Ataíde was lost with his ship in late May while attempting to round the Cape of Good HopeThis is asserted in most chronicles.
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Original: Murlidhar Devidas Amte, commonly known as Baba Amte,Baba Amte. anandwan.in (26 December 1914 – 9 February 2008) was an Indian social worker and social activist known particularly for his work for the rehabilitation and empowerment of people suffering from leprosy.
Revised: Murlidhar Devidas Amte, popularly known as Baba Amte,Baba Amte. anandwan.in (26 December 1914 – 9 February 2008) was an Indian social worker and social activist known particularly for his work for the rehabilitation and empowerment of people suffering from leprosy.
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Original: Infobox person | name = Baba Amte | image = Baba Amte 2014 stamp of India.jpg | image_size = 245px | caption = Baba Amte on a 2014 stamp of India | birth_date = <ref> Murlidhar Devidas Amte, popularly known as Baba Amte,Baba Amte. anandwan.in (26 December 1914 – 9 February 2008) was an Indian social worker and social activist known particularly for his work for the rehabilitation and empowerment of people suffering from leprosy.
Revised:  Murlidhar Devidas Amte, popularly known as Baba Amte,Baba Amte. anandwan.in (26 December 1914 – 9 February 2008) was an Indian social worker and social activist known particularly for his work for the rehabilitation and empowerment of people suffering from leprosy.
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Original: Murlidhar Devidas Amte, popularly known as Baba Amte,Baba Amte. anandwan.in (26 December 1914 – 9 February 2008) was an Indian social worker and social activist known particularly for his work for the rehabilitation and empowerment of people suffering from leprosy.
Revised: Murlidhar Devidas Amte, popularly known 1as Baba Amte,Baba Amte. anandwan.in (26 December 1914 – 9 February 2008) was an Indian social worker and social activist known particularly for his work for the rehabilitation and empowerment of people suffering from leprosy.
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Original: Murlidhar Devidas Amte, popularly known as Baba Amte,Baba Amte. anandwan.in (26 December 1914 – 9 February 2008) was an Indian social worker and social activist known particularly for his work for the rehabilitation and empowerment of people suffering from leprosy.
Revised: Murlidhar Devidas Amte, popularly known 11as Baba Amte,Baba Amte. anandwan.in (26 December 1914 – 9 February 2008) was an Indian social worker and social activist known particularly for his work for the rehabilitation and empowerment of people suffering from leprosy.
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Original:  which is known as an exposure that is susceptible to considerable measurement error  Nutritional Science  Nutritional science is a multi-disciplinary study area concerned with the role of nutrition in health and disease across the human lifespan Nutritional epidemiology and nutritional science are two fields that share knowledge about the interactions of nutrients, food consumption, and the human body.
Revised:  which is known as an exposure that is susceptible to considerable measurement error . Nutritional Science Nutritional science is a multi-disciplinary study area concerned with the role of nutrition in health and disease across the human lifespan Nutritional epidemiology and nutritional science are two fields that share knowledge about the interactions of nutrients, food consumption, and the human body.
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Original:  These occurrences continue to be discovered with increasing scientific information and evidence, leading to more opportunities for successful intervention and prevention  Social Impact The impact nutritional epidemiology had in the past has led to social, physical and economical changes.
Revised:  These occurrences continue to be discovered with increasing scientific information and evidence, leading to more opportunities for successful intervention and prevention . Social Impact The impact nutritional epidemiology had in the past has led to social, physical and economical changes.
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Original:  It is a young discipline in epidemiology that is continuing to grow in relevance to present-day health concerns  Diet and physical activity are difficult to measure accurately, which may partly explain why nutrition has received less attention than other risk factors for disease in epidemiology.
Revised:  It is a young discipline in epidemiology that is continuing to grow in relevance to present-day health concerns . Diet and physical activity are difficult to measure accurately, which may partly explain why nutrition has received less attention than other risk factors for disease in epidemiology.
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Original:  Nutritional science information is also used in the development of nutritional epidemiological studies and interventions including clinical, case-control and cohort studies  Nutritional epidemiological methods have been developed to study the relationship between diet and disease.
Revised:  Nutritional science information is also used in the development of nutritional epidemiological studies and interventions including clinical, case-control and cohort studies . Nutritional epidemiological methods have been developed to study the relationship between diet and disease.
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Original:  Nutritional Science [[File:201707 medicine mix.svg|Various medicinal capsules and tablets ]] Nutritional science is a multi-disciplinary study area concerned with the role of nutrition in health and disease across the human lifespan  Nutritional epidemiology and nutritional science are two fields that share knowledge about the interactions of nutrients, food consumption, and the human body.
Revised:  Nutritional Science [[File:201707 medicine mix.svg|Various medicinal capsules and tablets ]] Nutritional science is a multi-disciplinary study area concerned with the role of nutrition in health and disease across the human lifespan . Nutritional epidemiology and nutritional science are two fields that share knowledge about the interactions of nutrients, food consumption, and the human body.
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Original:  Examples of some of the successes nutritional science has contributed to many findings which include linking folate deficiency to a higher risk of neural tube defects, vitamin C deficiency to scurvy, consumption of trans fat to a higher risk of cardiovascular disease and linking excess consumption of fish to reducing risk of preterm birth to name a few.
Revised:  Examples of some of the successes nutritional science has contributed to findings which include linking folate deficiency to a higher risk of neural tube defects, vitamin C deficiency to scurvy, consumption of trans fat to a higher risk of cardiovascular disease and linking excess consumption of fish to reducing risk of preterm birth to name a few.
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Original:  A prominent controversary lies within the ability to reliably and accurately measure exposures as they are subject to measurement errors and variation.
Revised:  A prominent controversy lies within the ability to reliably and accurately measure exposures as they are subject to measurement errors and variation.
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Original:  However, it is also argued that nutritional epidemiological studies yield unreliable findings as they rely on the role of diet in health and disease, which is known as an exposure that is susceptible to considerable measurement error.
Revised:  But it is also argued that nutritional epidemiological studies yield unreliable findings as they rely on the role of diet in health and disease, which is known as an exposure that is susceptible to considerable measurement error.
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Original:  History of Nutritional Epidemiology Nutritional epidemiology started as a subdiscipline of epidemiology in the 1980s before advancing into a core disciple in epidemiology.
Revised:  History of nutritional epidemiology Nutritional epidemiology started as a subdiscipline of epidemiology in the 1980s before advancing into a core disciple in epidemiology.
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Original:  Nutritional Science [[File:201707 medicine mix.svg|Various medicinal capsules and tablets ]] Nutritional science is a multi-disciplinary study area concerned with the role of nutrition in health and disease across the human lifespan.
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Original:  Nutritional Epidemiological Studies Investigators in experimental studies have the control of assigning exposures whereas in observational studies exposures are observed only with no intervention.
Revised:  Nutritional epidemiological studies Investigators in experimental studies have the control of assigning exposures whereas in observational studies exposures are observed only with no intervention.
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Original:  Observational studies are able to detect rare or unusual findings over long periods of time (diet-related diseases develop over time) which would otherwise burden subjects and be expensive in experimental studies.
Revised:  Observational studies are able to detect rare or unusual findings over long periods of time (diet-related diseases develop over time) which would otherwise burden subjects and be expensive in Experimental studies.
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Original:  In nutritional epidemiology, experimental studies may be used to draw causal conclusions between dietary exposures and health outcomes, however for some diet-disease relations there are ethical considerations.
Revised:  In nutritional epidemiology, Experimental studies may be used to draw causal conclusions between dietary exposures and health outcomes, however for some diet-disease relations there are ethical considerations.
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Original:  Ecological Study Ecological Study is an observational study that studies risk-modifying factors on health outcomes of populations based on their geographical and/or temporal ecological state.
Revised:  Ecological study Ecological study is an observational study that studies risk-modifying factors on health outcomes of populations based on their geographical and/or temporal ecological state.
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Original:  Ecological studies utilise geographical information to examine spatial framework of disease and exposure but there is potential for systemic difference in classification language.
Revised:  Ecological studies use geographical information to examine spatial framework of disease and exposure but there is potential for systemic difference in classification language.
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Original:  Social Impact The impact nutritional epidemiology had in the past has led to social, physical and economical changes.
Revised:  Social impact The impact nutritional epidemiology had in the past has led to social, physical and economical changes.
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Original:  Nutritional epidemiology aims to deliver knowledge on how to cope with an imbalance between nutrients that causes illness such as anaemia, goitre wasting and stunting.
Revised:  Nutritional epidemiology aims to deliver knowledge on how to cope with an imbalance between nutrients that causes illness such as anaemia, Goitre wasting and stunting.
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Original:  But it is also argued that nutritional epidemiological studies yield unreliable findings as they rely on the role of diet in health and disease, which is known as an exposure that is susceptible to considerable measurement error.
Revised:  However, it is also argued that nutritional epidemiological studies yield unreliable findings as they rely on the role of diet in health and disease, which is known as an exposure that is susceptible to considerable measurement error.
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Original:  History of nutritional epidemiology Nutritional epidemiology started as a subdiscipline of epidemiology in the 1980s before advancing into a core disciple in epidemiology.
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Original:  Nutritional science [[File:201707 medicine mix.svg|Various medicinal capsules and tablets ]] Nutritional science is a multi-disciplinary study area concerned with the role of nutrition in health and disease across the human lifespan.
Revised:  Nutritional Science [[File:201707 medicine mix.svg|Various medicinal capsules and tablets ]] Nutritional science is a multi-disciplinary study area concerned with the role of nutrition in health and disease across the human lifespan.
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Original:  Nutritional epidemiological studies Investigators in experimental studies have the control of assigning exposures whereas in observational studies exposures are observed only with no intervention.
Revised:  Nutritional Epidemiological Studies Investigators in experimental studies have the control of assigning exposures whereas in observational studies exposures are observed only with no intervention.
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