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Original:  groups, and, where appropriate, individuals that create, maintain and transmit such heritage, and to involve them actively in its management ” .Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 15 At the international level, this Convention promotes international cooperation, which includes “ the exchange of information and experience, joint initiatives, and the establishment of a mechanism of assistance ” to other State Parties.
Revised:  groups, and, where appropriate, individuals that create, maintain and transmit such heritage, and to involve them actively in its management ” .Convention for the Safeguarding of the Intangible Cultural Heritage Article 15 At the international level, this Convention promotes international cooperation, which includes “ the exchange of information and experience, joint initiatives, and the establishment of a mechanism of assistance " to other State Parties.
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Original: Working towards the 2003 Convention p.6 This Conference defined cultural heritage as including “ both tangible and intangible works through which the creativity of people finds expression, ” and asked UNESCO and Member States to take measures for protecting this kind of heritage.
Revised: Working towards the 2003 Convention p.6 This Conference defined cultural heritage as including " both tangible and intangible works through which the creativity of people finds expression, ” and asked UNESCO and Member States to take measures for protecting this kind of heritage.
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Original: Working towards the 2003 Convention p.6 This Conference defined cultural heritage as including “ both tangible and intangible works through which the creativity of people finds expression, ” and asked UNESCO and Member States to take measures for protecting this kind of heritage.
Revised: Working towards the 2003 Convention p.6 This Conference defined cultural heritage as including “ both tangible and intangible works through which the creativity of people finds expression, " and asked UNESCO and Member States to take measures for protecting this kind of heritage.
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Original:  In 2001, the General Conference adopted another instrument, Universal Declaration on Cultural Diversity, which also includes articles dealing with the preservation of ’ heritage in all forms ’ .UNESCO Universal Declaration on Cultural Diversity Article 7 This declaration and its Action Plan presented basic idea of the coming convention and helped to develop it.
Revised:  In 2001, the General Conference adopted another instrument, Universal Declaration on Cultural Diversity, which also includes articles dealing with the preservation of " heritage in all forms ’ .UNESCO Universal Declaration on Cultural Diversity Article 7 This declaration and its Action Plan presented basic idea of the coming convention and helped to develop it.
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Original:  In 2001, the General Conference adopted another instrument, Universal Declaration on Cultural Diversity, which also includes articles dealing with the preservation of ’ heritage in all forms ’ .UNESCO Universal Declaration on Cultural Diversity Article 7 This declaration and its Action Plan presented basic idea of the coming convention and helped to develop it.
Revised:  In 2001, the General Conference adopted another instrument, Universal Declaration on Cultural Diversity, which also includes articles dealing with the preservation of ’ heritage in all forms " .UNESCO Universal Declaration on Cultural Diversity Article 7 This declaration and its Action Plan presented basic idea of the coming convention and helped to develop it.
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Original:  It forecast that by 2050 humans would devour 140 billion tonnes of minerals, ores, fossil fuels and biomass annually – three times current volumes - unless the rate of resource consumption could be decoupled from that of economic growth.
Revised:  Its scenarios showed that by 2050 humans would devour 140 billion tonnes of minerals, ores, fossil fuels and biomass annually – three times current volumes - unless the rate of resource consumption could be decoupled from that of economic growth.
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Original:  China a test case: U.N., Alister Doyle, Reuters 12 May 2011 Recycling, re-use and greater efficiency can all help achieve decoupling   .
Revised:  China a test case: U.N., Alister Doyle, Reuters 12 May 2011 Recycling, re-use and greater efficiency can all help achieve decoupling . .
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Original:         Applications One of the most important properties of core–shell semiconducting nanocrystals (CSSNCs) is that their cores, which are quantum dots, fluoresce, which is important in their biomedical and optical applications.
Revised: Purification techniques border|220x220px|Simplified illustration of a purification technique of a Core-Shell Nanocrystals after synthesis As synthesized core-shell nanocrystals contains impurities, such as unreacted precursors, reaction by products, high b.p. solvents, and necessary ligands that were used during the synthesis of NCs to control growth. Such impurities often perturb the surface chemistry of the NCs and it directly reflects on their physical properties. In addition to this, the solvent that is used during synthesis barely resembles with the solvent into which the nanocrystals will be kept during the measurements of different types of physical properties of that NCs. Hence, for almost all cases, an effective means of purification is required after core-shell NC synthesis. Applications One of the most important properties of core–shell semiconducting nanocrystals (CSSNCs) is that their cores, which are quantum dots, fluoresce, which is important in their biomedical and optical applications.
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Original:         Applications One of the most important properties of core–shell semiconducting nanocrystals (CSSNCs) is that their cores, which are quantum dots, fluoresce, which is important in their biomedical and optical applications.
Revised:  Extraction Liquid-Liquid extraction A liquid-liquid extraction process can be exploited as a purification technique for the CSNCs. When an extracting solvent is introduced to the as-synthesized CSNC solution, due to the partition coefficient, CSNCs and impurities are redistributed to different phases. This method has an advantage over the previously discussed PR method is that it is a much gentler process than PR method. Because, during extraction, the CSNCs tends to stay in their native phase, hence unwanted irreversible aggregation of CSNCs is less likely to occur. Applications One of the most important properties of core–shell semiconducting nanocrystals (CSSNCs) is that their cores, which are quantum dots, fluoresce, which is important in their biomedical and optical applications.
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Original:         Applications One of the most important properties of core–shell semiconducting nanocrystals (CSSNCs) is that their cores, which are quantum dots, fluoresce, which is important in their biomedical and optical applications.
Revised:  A disadvantage of this method is that it requires a multiple extraction cycle to achieve an effective extraction, which is time-consuming. In addition to this, similarity in polarity between impurities and CSNCs greatly limits its efficiency as a purification method for CSNCs. To increase the extraction efficiency, sometimes a co-extractants can be used along with primary extracting solvent. A combination of both PR method and extraction method often can lead to a better purification of CSNCs. Applications One of the most important properties of core–shell semiconducting nanocrystals (CSSNCs) is that their cores, which are quantum dots, fluoresce, which is important in their biomedical and optical applications.
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Original:  In response to chemical signals from the pituitary gland of the brain , ovaries produce estrogen that stimulates maturation of the body, including increased height and weight, body hair growth, breast development and menarche (the onset of menstruation) which generally occurs between ages 12–13.
Revised:  In response to chemical signals from the pituitary gland , ovaries produce estrogen that stimulates maturation of the body, including increased height and weight, body hair growth, breast development and menarche (the onset of menstruation) which generally occurs between ages 12–13.
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Original:  The movements and ideologies of feminism have a shared goal of achieving gender equality .
Revised:  The movements and ideologies of feminism have a shared goal of achieving gender equality 
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Original:  Trans women have a male sex assignment at birth that does not align with their gender identity, while intersex women may have sex characteristics that do not fit typical notions of female biology .
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Original: Trans women have a male sex assignment at birth that does not align with their gender identity, while intersex women may have sex characteristics that do not fit typical notions of female biology.
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Original:  The movements and ideologies of feminism have a shared goal of achieving gender equality   .
Revised:  The movements and ideologies of feminism have a shared goal of achieving gender equality . .
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Original:  For example, in the United States in 2005/2006, women earned 62\% of associate degrees, 58\% of bachelor's degrees, 60\% of master's degrees, and 50\% of doctorates . upright=0.
Revised:  For example, in the United States in 2005/2006, women earned 62\% of associate degrees, 58\% of bachelor's degrees, 60\% of master's degrees, and 50\% of doctorates upright=0.
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Original: 8| A female biologist weighs a desert tortoise before release. upright=0.8| Women attending an adult literacy class in the El Alto section of La Paz, Bolivia Women in politics   A world map showing female governmental participation by country, 2010.|alt=A world map showing female governmental participation by country, 2010. upBenazir Bhutto was the first woman to head a democratic government in a Muslim majority country (Pakistan).
Revised: 8| Women attending an adult literacy class in the El Alto section of La Paz, Bolivia Women in politics A world map showing female governmental participation by country, 2010.|alt=A world map showing female governmental participation by country, 2010. upBenazir Bhutto was the first woman to head a democratic government in a Muslim majority country (Pakistan).
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Original:   American singer Ella Fitzgerald in 1968 Women comprise a significant proportion of instrumental soloists in classical music and the percentage of women in orchestras is increasing.
Revised:  Women comprise a significant proportion of instrumental soloists in classical music and the percentage of women in orchestras is increasing.
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Original:  ISBN 978-0-8400-3204-1. as both males and females can exhibit feminine traits . 225px|alt=An oil painting of a young woman dressed in a flowing, white dress sitting on a chair with a red drape.
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Original:  The Methodologies of Art: An Introduction (Boulder: Westview Press, 1996), 81. Laurie Schneider Adams "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Young Woman Drawing 'suddenly acquired feminine attributes: Its poetry, literary …
Revised:  The Methodologies of Art: An Introduction (Boulder: Westview Press, 1996), 81. Laurie Schneider Adams "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% 'suddenly acquired feminine attributes: Its poetry, literary …
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Original:  In mature women  the breast is generally more prominent than in most other mammals;
Revised:  In mature women , the breast is generally more prominent than in most other mammals;
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Original:  Sex differentiation proceeds in females in a way that is independent of gondal hormones.
Revised:  Sex differentiation proceeds in females in a way that is independent of gonadal hormones.
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Original:  Nigeria: A humanitarian convoy in was attacked in Borno State and a UNICEF worker was injured.
Revised:  Nigeria: A humanitarian convoy was attacked in Borno State and a UNICEF worker was injured.
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Original:  After one week, they were released . Burundi – On Monday, December 31, 2007, at 6:30 pm, an Action Against Hunger vehicle was targeted by shooters in the city of Ruygi in the East of Burundi.
Revised:  After one week, they were released . Burundi – On Monday, December 31, 2007, at 6:30 pm, an Action Against Hunger vehicle was targeted by shooters in the city of Ruyigi in the East of Burundi.
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Original:  He was rescued 10 days later by Chadian security forces near the border with Sudan . Afghanistan: On 7 August 2010, 10 men and women  working for a Christian aid agency were murdered by Taliban.
Revised:  He was rescued 10 days later by Chadian security forces near the border with Sudan . Afghanistan: On 7 August 2010, 10 men and women who were working for a Christian aid agency were murdered by Taliban.
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Original:  1916 also saw a final issue of coins including gold 15 Rupien coins which contained an equivalent amount of gold to 15 German Mark . Later in 1916 , German East Africa was occupied by British and Belgian forces.
Revised:  1916 also saw a final issue of coins to pay German led troops, including 15 Rupien coins which contained an equivalent amount of gold to 15 German Mark . Later in 1916 , German East Africa was occupied by British and Belgian forces.
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Original:  1916 also saw a final issue of coins including gold 15 Rupien coins which contained an equivalent amount of gold to 15 German Mark . Later in 1916 , German East Africa was occupied by British and Belgian forces.
Revised:  1916 also saw a final issue of coins including gold 15 Rupien coins which contained an equivalent amount of gold to 15 German Marks . Later in 1916 , German East Africa was occupied by British and Belgian forces.
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Original:  1916 also saw a final issue of coins including gold 15 Rupien coins which contained an equivalent amount of gold to 15 German Mark . Later in 1916 , German East Africa was occupied by British and Belgian forces.
Revised:  1916 also saw a final issue of coins including gold 15 Rupien coins which contained an equivalent amount of gold to 15 German Mark . Later in 1916 German East Africa was occupied by British and Belgian forces.
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Original:  In 1916 issues were minted at Tabora as a wartime emergency coinage.
Revised:  The 1916 issues were minted at Tabora as a wartime emergency coinage.
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Original:  Until 1904 , it was subdivided into 64 Pesa (equivalent to the Indian pice or paisa).
Revised:  Until 1905 , it was subdivided into 64 Pesa (equivalent to the Indian pice or paisa).
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Original:  In Tanganyika, the Rupie circulated alongside the East African rupee (to which it was equal) until 1920 , when both were replaced by the East African florin at par.
Revised:  In Tanganyika, the Rupie circulated alongside the East American rupee (to which it was equal) until 1920 , when both were replaced by the East African florin at par.
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Original:  Ilī-ippašra,   meaning "My god  became reconciled with me",Stamm 1949:190, DIŠ:ì-lí-ip-pa-aš-ra (AbB 4,60,12). was a Babylonian who may have been adopted or apprenticed during the reign of Kassite king Kurigalzu I, ending ca. 1375 BC, and rose to become an official, possibly the governor of Dilmun, ancient Bahrain, during the later reign of Burna-Buriaš II, ca. 1359-1333 BC (short chronology).
Revised:  Ilī-ippašra, meaning "My god (s) became reconciled with me",Stamm 1949:190, DIŠ:ì-lí-ip-pa-aš-ra (AbB 4,60,12). was a Babylonian who may have been adopted or apprenticed during the reign of Kassite king Kurigalzu I, ending ca. 1375 BC, and rose to become an official, possibly the governor of Dilmun, ancient Bahrain, during the later reign of Burna-Buriaš II, ca. 1359-1333 BC (short chronology).
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Original:  Ilī-ippašra,   meaning "My god  became reconciled with me",Stamm 1949:190, DIŠ:ì-lí-ip-pa-aš-ra (AbB 4,60,12). was a Babylonian who may have been adopted or apprenticed during the reign of Kassite king Kurigalzu I, ending ca. 1375 BC, and rose to become an official, possibly the governor of Dilmun, ancient Bahrain, during the later reign of Burna-Buriaš II, ca. 1359-1333 BC (short chronology).
Revised:  Ilī-ippašra, meaning "My god became reconciled with me",Stamm 1949:190, mì-lí-ip-pa-aš-ra (AbB 4,60,12). was a Babylonian who may have been adopted or apprenticed during the reign of Kassite king Kurigalzu I, ending ca. 1375 BC, and rose to become an official, possibly the governor of Dilmun, ancient Bahrain, during the later reign of Burna-Buriaš II, ca. 1359-1333 BC (short chronology).
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Original:  Three letters have been found in Iraq, but one of theseBE XVII 88, found during the German excavations at Babylon. is illegible apart from the opening salutation and mention of a certain “royal command”.
Revised:  Three letters have been found in Iraq, but one of these is illegible apart from the opening salutation and mention of a certain “royal command”.
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Original:  Tablet Ni. 615, lines 9 to 11.
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Original:  Because where there is Elmo, there must be happiness." Look at OKC praised: "As director Constance Marks proves in her detailed and surprisingly emotional documentary Being Elmo: A Puppeteer's Journey, Clash's love of the art form eventually led him to create one of the most popular characters in children's television.  "
Revised:  Because where there is Elmo, there must be happiness." Look at OKC praised: "As director Constance Marks proves in her detailed and surprisingly emotional documentary Being Elmo: A Puppeteer's Journey, Clash's love of the art form eventually led him to create one of the most popular characters in children's television. Aaaaaaaaaand he a kid toucher (: "
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Original: Sesame Street camera man , James Miller originally filmed Kevin Clash with Elmo looking at photos of Miller's 2 year-old daughter.
Revised: Sesame Street camera man James Miller originally filmed Kevin Clash with Elmo looking at photos of Miller's 2 year-old daughter.
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Original:  See also : Wallis and Futu
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Original:  It was constructed in 1616 at the intersection of the Essequibo, Cuyuni and Mazurini rivers.
Revised:  It was constructed in 1616 at the intersection of the Essequibo, Cuyuni and Mazaruni rivers.
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Original: History The Dutch faced their first serious attacks in 1665 when Major John Scott was sent by the Governor of Barbados, Lord Willoughby , to invade the settlements in the Pomeroon.
Revised: History The Dutch faced their first serious attacks in 1665 when Major John Scott was sent by the Governor of Barbados, Lord poopsyilloughby , to invade the settlements in the Pomeroon.
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Original:  The occupation of Kyk-Over-Al by the English did not last long, for the Dutch Commandeur of Berbice, Matthys Bergenaar, was able to march overland with a group of soldiers and recapture it.
Revised:  The occupation of Kyk-Over-Al by the English dipoopsyd not last long, for the Dutch Commandeur of Berbice, Matthys Bergenaar, was able to march overland with a group of soldiers and recapture it.
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Original:  He concentrated his attention on redeveloping Kyk-Over-Al and the surrounding areas.
Revised:  He concentrated his attention on redeveloping Kyk-Over-poopsyAl and the surrounding areas.
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Original:  Category:Buildings and structures completed in 1616 Category:Forts in Guyana Category:History of Guyana Category:1616 establishments in the Dutch Empi
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Original: History The Dutch faced their first serious attacks in 1665 when Major John Scott was sent by the Governor of Barbados, Lord Willoughby, to invade the settlements in the Pomeroon.
Revised: History The Dutch faced their first serious attacks in 1665 when Major John Scott was sent by the Governor of Lord Willoughby, to invade the settlements in the Pomeroon.
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Original: Thus, Essequibo reverted to the Dutch, and Admiral Crynssen , who had earlier captured Suriname from the English, arrived as Commandeur.
Revised: Thus, Essequibo reverted to the Dutch, Abraham Crijnssen , who had earlier captured Suriname from the English, arrived as Commandeur.
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Original:  In December 1712, Pomeroon was attacked again by a combined force of French and Spanish buccaneers, but Blake and his men were able to drive them away.  
Revised:  In December 1712, Pomeroon was attacked again by a combined force of French and Spanish buccaneers, but Blake and his men were able to drive them away. References
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Original:  The most often reason of irritative phenomena is some lesion of a central motoneuron, but if there is an asymmetry, we should also think about diagnose of amyotrophic lateral sclerosis   .
Revised:  The most often reason of irritative phenomena is some lesion of a central motoneuron, but if there is an asymmetry, we should also think about diagnose of amyotrophic lateral sclerosis . .
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Original: Pyramidal signs indicate that the pyramidal tract is affected in some region . Pyramidal tract dysfunction can lead to clinical presentations like spasticity, weakness, slowing of rapid alternating movements, hyperreflexia, and  Babinski sign.
Revised: Pyramidal signs indicate that the pyramidal tract is affected at some point in its course . Pyramidal tract dysfunction can lead to clinical presentations like spasticity, weakness, slowing of rapid alternating movements, hyperreflexia, and Babinski sign.
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Original: Pyramidal signs indicate that the pyramidal tract is affected in some region . Pyramidal tract dysfunction can lead to clinical presentations like spasticity, weakness, slowing of rapid alternating movements, hyperreflexia, and  Babinski sign.
Revised: Pyramidal signs indicate that the pyramidal tract is affected in some region . Pyramidal tract dysfunction can lead to various clinical presentations such as spasticity, weakness, slowing of rapid alternating movements, hyperreflexia, and Babinski sign.
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Original:  A presence of these phenomena is nearly always connected with hyperreflexia and some authors think that we can not count them as a pathological reactions at all.
Revised:  The presence of these phenomena is nearly always connected with hyperreflexia and some authors think that we can not count them as a pathological reactions at all.
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Original:  The most often reason of irritative phenomena is some lesion of a central motoneuron, but if there is an asymmetry, we should also think about diagnose of amyotrophic lateral sclerosis  .
Revised:  The most common reason for irritative phenomena is some lesion of a central motoneuron, but if there is an asymmetry, we should also think about diagnose of amyotrophic lateral sclerosis .
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Original:  The most often reason of irritative phenomena is some lesion of a central motoneuron, but if there is an asymmetry, we should also think about diagnose of amyotrophic lateral sclerosis  .
Revised:  The most often reason of irritative phenomena is a lesion of a central motoneuron, but if there is an asymmetry, we should also think about diagnose of amyotrophic lateral sclerosis .
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