wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Origin The three most remarkable characteristics of the group are its close relationship with the Alevi sect, its use of a secret language (Abdoltili/Teberce) or argot and its wide distribution.
Revised:  The three most remarkable characteristics of the group are its close relationship with the Alevi sect, its use of a secret language (Abdoltili/Teberce) or argot and its wide distribution.
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Original:  The Abdal language consists of borrowing from Indo-Aryan languages, Persian and other Iranian sources , some Kurdish and Romani language with an essentially Turkish grammar.
Revised:  The Abdal language consists of borrowing from Indo-Aryan languages, Persian and other Iranian sources and Romani language with an essentially Turkish grammar.
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Original: Sanapala Vallabha Raj (  10 May 1997) was an Indian cricketer.
Revised: Sanapala Vallabha Raj ( born 10 May 1997) was an Indian cricketer.
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Original: Sanapala Vallabha Raj (  10 May 1997) was an Indian cricketer.
Revised: Sanapala Vallabha Raj ( 10 may 1997) was an Indian cricketer.
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Original: Early life Sanapala vallabha raj was born on 10 may 1997 to sanapala raja ramana murthy and sanapala bharatamma.he was a younger brother of sanapala apoorv,the vr family lived in a modest single bedroom apartment in madhavadhara,vizag until 2017.
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Original:  He attended the Bhashyam public school at nad kotha road,viAg.he received btech degree in mechanic engineering from nsrit,sontyam.vallabha raj later enrolled for an mtech at vallabha raj university.
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Original: File:Ossos de Lebombo.jpg|Lebombo bone from Contagem, Brazil.
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Original:  The Lebombo bone is a bone tool made of a baboon fibula with incised markings discovered in the Lebombo Mountains located between South Africa and Swaziland.
Revised: Lebombo bone The Lebombo bone is a bone tool made of a baboon fibula with incised markings discovered in the Lebombo Mountains located between South Africa and Swaziland.
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Original: Lebombo bone The Lebombo bone is a bone tool made of a baboon fibula with incised markings discovered in the Lebombo Mountains located between South Africa and Swaziland.
Revised:  The Lebombo bone is a bone tool made of a baboon fibula with incised markings discovered in the Lebombo Mountains located between South Africa and Swaziland.
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Original: The bone is between 44,200 and 43,000 years old, according to 24 radiocarbon datings .
Revised: The bone is between 44,200 and 43,000 years old, according to 24 radiocarbon dating .
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Original: The bone is between 44,200 and 43,000 years old, according to 24 radiocarbon dating .
Revised: The bone is between 44,200 and 43,000 years old, according to 24 radiocarbon datings .
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Original: Olympic silver medalists for South Africa Category:Olympic bronze medalists for South Africa Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Commonwealth Games gold medallists for South Africa Category:Boxers at the 1958 British Empire and Commonwealth Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Olympic medalists in boxing Category:Medalists at the 1956 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1960 Summer Olympics Category:Male boxe
Revised: Olympic silver medalists for South Africa Category:Olympic bronze medalists for South Africa Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Commonwealth Games gold medallists for South Africa Category:Boxers at the 1958 British Empire and Commonwealth Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Olympic medalists in boxing Category:Medalists at the 1956 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1960 Summer Olympics Category:Male boxers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in boxi
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Original: Olympic bronze medalists for South Africa Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Commonwealth Games gold medallists for South Africa Category:Boxers at the 1958 British Empire and Commonwealth Games Category: Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category: Olympic medalists in boxing Category:Medalists at the 1956 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1960 Summer Olympics Category:South African male boxers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in boxi
Revised: Olympic bronze medalists for South Africa Category:Sportspeople from Pretoria Category:Commonwealth Games gold medallists for South Africa Category:Boxers at the 1958 British Empire and Commonwealth Games Category: Olympic medalists in boxing Category:Medalists at the 1956 Summer Olympics Category:Medalists at the 1960 Summer Olympics Category:South African male boxers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in boxi
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Original:  Defeated Władysław Jędrzejewski (Poland) TKO-1 Defeated Obrad Sretenovic (Yugoslavia) KO-1 Defeated Günther Siegmund (East Germany) PTS (4-1) Lost to Franco De Piccoli (Italy) KO-2
Revised:  Defeated Władysław Jędrzejewski (Poland) TKO-1 Defeated Obrad Sretenovic (Yugoslavia) KO-1 Defeated Günter Siegmund (East Germany) PTS (4-1) Lost to Franco De Piccoli (Italy) KO-2
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Original:  Defeated Władysław Jędrzejewski (Poland) TKO-1 Defeated Obrad Sretenovic (Yugoslavia) KO-1 Defeated Günter Siegmund ( East Germany) PTS (4-1) Lost to Franco De Piccoli (Italy) KO-2
Revised:  Defeated Władysław Jędrzejewski (Poland) TKO-1 Defeated Obrad Sretenovic (Yugoslavia) KO-1 Defeated Günter Siegmund ( United Team of Germany) PTS (4-1) Lost to Franco De Piccoli (Italy) KO-2
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Original: Fajar Legian Siswanto (born on August 27, 1987) is an Indonesian footballer who currently plays for Persisam Putra Samarinda in the Indonesia Super League.
Revised: Fajar Legian Siswanto (born August 27, 1987) is an Indonesian footballer who currently plays for Persisam Putra Samarinda in the Indonesia Super League.
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Original:  Cognitive tasks are affected by music as well, such as episodic memoryand verbal fluency.
Revised:  Cognitive tasks are affected by music as well, such as episodic memory and verbal fluency.
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Original:  He was captured in 1970, tried and found guilty of plotting to assassinate the President, and was publicly executed on 15 January 1971 in Bafoussam.
Revised:  He was captured in 1970, tried and condemned to the death penalty. On the 15th of January 1971, he's publicly executed in Bafoussam.
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Original:  On the 15th of January 1971, he 's publicly executed in Bafoussam.
Revised:  On the 15th of January 1971, he was publicly executed in Bafoussam.
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Original:  The PGO waves have been recorded in the lateral geniculate nucleus and occipital cortex during the pre-REM period and are thought to represent dream content.
Revised:  PGO waves have been recorded in the lateral geniculate nucleus and occipital cortex during the pre-REM period and are thought to represent dream content.
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Original: It has been shown that sleep deprivation affects the immune system .
Revised: It has been shown that sleep deprivation affects the immune systsfad .
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Original: Living people Category:Afrikaner people Category:Olympic swimmers of South Africa Category:Swimmers at the 2008 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Commonwealth Games bronze medallists for South Africa Category:Male medley swimmers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in swimming Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:1989 birt
Revised: Living people Category:Afrikaner people Category:Olympic swimmers of South Africa Category:Swimmers at the 2008 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Commonwealth Games bronze medallists for South Africa Category:Male medley swimmers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in swimming Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:1989 births Category:African Games medalists for South Afri
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Original: Swimmers at the 2008 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Commonwealth Games bronze medallists for South Africa Category:Male medley swimmers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in swimming Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:1989 births Category:African Games  medalists for South Africa Category:African Games medalists in swimmi
Revised: Swimmers at the 2008 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Commonwealth Games bronze medallists for South Africa Category:Male medley swimmers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in swimming Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:1989 births Category:African Games gold medalists for South Africa Category:African Games medalists in swimmi
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Original: Swimmers at the 2008 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Commonwealth Games bronze medallists for South Africa Category:Male medley swimmers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in swimming Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:1989 births Category:African Games gold medalists for South Africa Category:African Games medalists in swimmi
Revised: Swimmers at the 2008 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2012 Summer Olympics Category:Swimmers at the 2010 Commonwealth Games Category:Commonwealth Games competitors for South Africa Category:Commonwealth Games bronze medallists for South Africa Category:Male medley swimmers Category:Commonwealth Games medallists in swimming Category:South African people of Dutch descent Category:1989 births Category:African Games gold medalists for South Africa Category:African Games medalists in swimming Category:African Games silver medalists for South Africa Category:African Games bronze medalists for South Afri
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Original: The Uqair protocol File:Uqair Protocol of 1922 map.jpg|up Map Shows Kuwait Before And After Uqair Protocol of 1922 In response to the various Bedouin raids, the British High Commissioner in Baghdad, Sir Percy Cox, imposed the Uqair Protocol of 1922 which defined the boundaries between Iraq, Kuwait and Nejd.
Revised: The Uqair protocol In response to the various Bedouin raids, the British High Commissioner in Baghdad, Sir Percy Cox, imposed the Uqair Protocol of 1922 which defined the boundaries between Iraq, Kuwait and Nejd.
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Original:  Rulers of Kuwait (1752–1961)
Revised:  Sheikhs of Kuwait (1752–1961)
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Original: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
Revised: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6Muhammad al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
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Original: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
Revised: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
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Original: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
Revised: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
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Original: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
Revised: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim al-Mubarak al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
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Original: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
Revised: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad al-Jaber al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
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Original: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah Al-Salim Al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
Revised: Abdullah I Al-Sabah17763 May 18143N/A Jaber I Al-Sabah181418594N/A Sabah II Al-Sabah1859November 18665N/A Abdullah II Al-SabahNovember 186629 May 1892 6N/A Muhammad Al-Sabah29 May 1892 17 May 18967 alt=|98x98pxMubarak Al-Sabah17 May 189628 November 19158 90pxJaber II Al-Sabah28 November 19155 February 19179 alt=|98x98pxSalim Al-Mubarak Al-Sabah5 February 1917 22 February 192110 90pxAhmad Al-Jaber Al-Sabah29 March 192129 January 195011 80pxAbdullah al-Salim al-Sabah29 January 195019 June 1961
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Original:  To describe the activity of this faculty, the word "intellection " is sometimes used in philosophical contexts, as well as the Greek words noēsis and noeîn (νόησις, νοεῖν).
Revised:  To describe the activity of this faculty, the word intellection is sometimes used in philosophical contexts, as well as the Greek words noēsis and noeîn (νόησις, νοεῖν).
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Original:  It came to be understood that at least the outermost sphere (marked "Primũ Mobile") has its own intellect, intelligence or nous - a cosmic equivalent to the human mind.
Revised:  It came to be understood that at least the outermost sphere (marked "Primũ Mobile") has its own intellect, intelligence or nous – a cosmic equivalent to the human mind.
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Original:  He claimed that reality as the senses perceive it is not a world of truth at all, because sense perception is so unreliable, and what is perceived is so uncertain and changeable.
Revised:  He claimed that reality as perceived by the senses alone is not a world of truth at all, because sense perception is so unreliable, and what is perceived is so uncertain and changeable.
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Original:  Instead he argued for a dualism wherein nous and related words (the verb for thinking which describes its mental perceiving activity, noein, and the unchanging and eternal objects of this perception, noēta) describe a form of perception which is not physical, but intellectual only, distinct from sense perception and the objects of sense perception.
Revised:  Instead he argued for a dualism wherein nous and related words (the verb for thinking which describes its mental perceiving activity, noein, and the unchanging and eternal objects of this perception, noēta) describe another form of perception which is not physical, but intellectual only, distinct from sense perception and the objects of sense perception.
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Original:  His description was in other words (shockingly for the time) corporeal or mechanical, with the moon made of earth, the sun and stars made of red hot metal (beliefs Socrates was later accused of holding during his trial) and nous itself being a physical fine type of matter which also gathered and concentrated with the development of the cosmos.
Revised:  His description was in other words (shockingly for the time) corporeal or mechanical, with the moon made of earth, the sun and stars made of red hot metal (beliefs Socrates was later accused of holding during his trial) and nous itself being a physically fine type of matter which also gathered and concentrated with the development of the cosmos.
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Original:  The Nous (usually translated as "Intellect", or "Intelligence" in this context, or sometimes "mind" or "reason") is described as God, or more precisely an image of God, often referred to as the Demiurge .
Revised:  The Nous (usually translated as "Intellect", or "Intelligence" in this context, or sometimes "mind" or "reason") is described as God, or more precisely an image of God, often referred to as the demiurge .
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Original:  These latter two causes (the "formal" and "final") , are concepts no longer used in modern science, and encompass the continuous effect of the intelligent ordering principle of nature itself.
Revised:  These latter two causes (the "formal" and "final") encompass the continuous effect of the intelligent ordering principle of nature itself.
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Original:  he remained active in the province until his death on 23 December 1968.
Revised:  he remained active in Palembang until his death on 23 December 1968.
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Original: From his teens Gani was active in politics and social organisations  .
Revised:  Gani was active in politics and social organisations .
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Original:  From 1945 to 1947 he was the commissioner for the PNI in South Sumatra, also serving on that party's board.
Revised:  From 1945 to 1947 he was the commissioner for the PNI in South Sumatra, also serving on the party's board.
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Original:  Representing South Africa for 6 consecutive years, she represented South Africa at 4 World Championships ;
Revised:  Representing South Africa for 6 consecutive years, she represented South Africa at 4 World Championships ,
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Original:  the 2010 Commonwealth games in Delhi, India and the 2012 London summer Olympic Games.
Revised:  the 2010 Commonwealth Games in Delhi, India and the 2012 London summer Olympic Games.
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Original:  the 2010 Commonwealth games in Delhi, India and the 2012 London summer Olympic Games.
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Original: File:Team South Africa WK Valkenburg 2012.jpg|Robyn de Groot at the 2012 UCI Road World Championships]] Robyn de Groot, born 26 December 1982  is a South African cyclist.
Revised: File:Team South Africa WK Valkenburg 2012.jpg|Robyn de Groot at the 2012 UCI Road World Championships]] Robyn de Groot, born 26 December 1982 , is a South African cyclist.
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Original:  He sin their last champioship anda their worlcup of 2012
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Original:  Representing South Africa for 6 consecutive years, she represented South Africa at 4 World Championships, the 2010 Commonwealth Games in Delhi, India and the 2012 London Summer Olympic Games .
Revised:  Representing South Africa for 6 consecutive years, she represented South Africa at 4 World Championships, the 2010 Commonwealth Games in Delhi, India and the 2012 London Summer Olympics .
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Original:  Denmark 2012 - London Olympian (Road) - world championships . Netherlands 2013 - National XCM champion : SA - World championships.
Revised:  Denmark 2012 - London Olympian (Road) - World Championships . Netherlands 2013 - National XCM champion : SA - World championships.
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Original:  Brixental .
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Original: Fishing is the activity of trying to catch fish.
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Original:  Fish are often caught in the wild but may also be caught from stocked bodies of water.
Revised:  Fish are often caught in the wildput may also be caught from stocked bodies of water.
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Original:  History%DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Metkrok av ben från stenåldern, funnen i Skåne.flip.jpg|upright=0.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < [[%%% File:Metkrok av ben från stenåldern, funnen i Skåne.flip.jpg|upright=0.
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Original:  This revolutionary design made large scale trawling in the ocean possible for the first time, resulting in a massive migration of fishers from the ports in the South of England, to villages further north, such as Scarborough, Hull, Grimsby, Harwich and Yarmouth, that were points of access to the large fishing grounds in the Atlantic Ocean.
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