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Original:  A witness said the suspect, pursued by police, ran towards south on Chūō-dōri avenue and was cornered into a narrow alley;
Revised:  A witness said the suspect, pursued by police, ran south on Chūō-dōri avenue and was cornered into a narrow alley;
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Original:  A witness said the suspect, pursued by police, ran towards south on Chūō-dōri avenue and was cornered into a narrow alley;
Revised:  A witness said the suspect, pursued by police, ran towards south on Chūō-dōri and was cornered into a narrow alley;
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Original:  Crowds watched as police attended the event The suspect is quoted as confessing at police, "I came to Akihabara to kill people.
Revised:  Crowds watched as emergency workers attended to the victims. The suspect is quoted as confessing at police, "I came to Akihabara to kill people.
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Original:  Crowds watched as police attended the event The suspect is quoted as confessing at police, "I came to Akihabara to kill people.
Revised:  Crowds watched as police attended the event The suspect is quoted as confessing to police, "I came to Akihabara to kill people.
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Original:  The suspect, a native of Aomori City, has lived and worked as a dispatched temp employee in Shizuoka Prefecture.
Revised:  The suspect, a native of Aomori City, lived and worked as a dispatched temp employee in Shizuoka Prefecture.
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Original:  The suspect, a native of Aomori City, has lived and worked as a dispatched temp employee in Shizuoka Prefecture.
Revised:  The suspect, a native of Aomori City, has lived and worked as a dispatched temporary employee in Shizuoka Prefecture.
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Original:  He was sent on Tuesday to  Tokyo District Public Prosecutors Office.
Revised:  He was sent on Tuesday to the Tokyo District Public Prosecutors Office.
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Original:  Metropolitan Public Safety Commission is expected to make the decision for a coming Sunday of June 15.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At the crossing of the scene, a table  was set for memorial flowers , covered with white cloth, in the morning of Monday, June 9.
Revised:  Metropolitan Public Safety Commission is expected to make the decision for a coming Sunday of June 15.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At the scene, a table was set for memorial flowers , covered with white cloth, in the morning of Monday, June 9.
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Original:  Metropolitan Public Safety Commission is expected to make the decision for a coming Sunday of June 15.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At the crossing of the scene, a table  was set for memorial flowers , covered with white cloth, in the morning of Monday, June 9.
Revised:  Metropolitan Public Safety Commission is expected to make the decision for a coming Sunday of June 15.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% At the crossing of the scene, a table covered with a white cloth was set for memorial flowers , covered with white cloth, in the morning of Monday, June 9.
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Original:  Acquaintances of the dead and passers-by visitedthere, and the table was soon filled, almost flooded with flowers, drink bottles  and folded paper cranes.
Revised:  As acquaintances of the dead and passers-by visitedthere, and the table was soon filled, almost flooded with flowers, drink bottles and folded paper cranes.
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Original:  Acquaintances of the dead and passers-by visitedthere, and the table was soon filled, almost flooded with flowers, drink bottles  and folded paper cranes.
Revised:  Acquaintances of the dead and passersby visited, the table soon filled—almost flooded— with flowers, drink bottles and folded paper cranes.
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Original:  Some newspaper media issued extras to report it ;
Revised:  Some newspapers created special issues to report the incident ;
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Original:  June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, then many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for the evening or the following morning   
Revised:  June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, so many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for the evening or the following morning 
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Original:  June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, then many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for the evening or the following morning   
Revised:  June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, then many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for delivery on that evening or the following morning 
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Original:  June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, then many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for the evening or the following morning   
Revised:  June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, then many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for the evening or the following morning . 
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Original: The truck, traveling on Kanda Myōjin-dōri (Kanda Myōjin Avenue ), ran into the crowd at a crossing on Chūō-dōri (Chūō Avenue), which is a vehicle-free road  every Sunday.
Revised: The truck, traveling on Kanda Myōjin-dōri (Kanda Myōjin Avenue ), ran into the crowd at a crossing on Chūō-dōri (Chūō Avenue), which is a vehicle-free road on every Sunday.
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Original:  After entering the crowd, the truck continued moving for about 30 metres, after which the suspect exited the vehicle and began yelling at and stabbing passersby.
Revised:  After entering the crowd, the truck continued moving for about 30 meters, and then the suspect exited the vehicle and began yelling at and stabbing passersby.
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Original:  After entering the crowd, the truck continued moving for about 30 metres, after which the suspect exited the vehicle and began yelling at and stabbing passersby.
Revised:  After entering the crowd, the truck continued moving for about 30 metres, after which the suspect exited the truck and began stabbing passersby.
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Original:  A witness said the suspect, pursued by police, ran south on Chūō-dōri and was cornered in an adjacent alley.
Revised:  A witness said the suspect, pursued by police, ran south on Chūō-dōri and was cornered in a narrow alley.
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Original:  The suspect dropped his knife after the police officer drew his gun, and the suspect was overpowered by the officer and surrounding people.
Revised:  The suspect dropped his knife after the police officer drew his gun, and was overpowered by the officer and surrounding people.
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Original:  After being held at the Manseibashi Police Department , he was sent on Tuesday to the Tokyo District Public Prosecutors Office.
Revised:  After being held at the Manseibashi Police Station , he was sent on Tuesday to the Tokyo District Public Prosecutors Office.
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Original:  As acquaintances of the dead and passersby visited, the table soon  filled —almost flooded— with flowers, drink bottles, pictures, and folded paper cranes.
Revised:  As acquaintances of the dead and passersby visited, the table soon was filled —almost flooded— with flowers, drink bottles, pictures, and folded paper cranes.
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Original:   June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, so many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for delivery on that evening or the following morning.
Revised:  for June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, so many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for delivery on that evening or the following morning.
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Original:   June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, so many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for delivery on that evening or the following morning.
Revised:  June 8 was a Sunday and also a press holiday, many newspapers in Japan were not scheduled for delivery on that evening or the following morning.
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Original:   Akihabara district is famous for its Electric Town with wholesalers and retailers of video games or electric gadgets such as PC parts, televisions and kitchen appliances.
Revised:  The Akihabara district is famous for its Electric Town with wholesalers and retailers of video games or electric gadgets such as PC parts, televisions and kitchen appliances.
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Original:  The Tokyo Metropolitan Public Safety Commission is also expected to discuss the issue at a meeting on Sunday, June 15
Revised:  The Tokyo Metropolitan Public Safety Commission is also expected to discuss the issue 
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Original: The truck, traveling on Kanda Myōjin-dōri (Kanda Myōjin Street ), ran into the crowd at a crossing on Chūō-dōri (Chūō Avenue), which is a vehicle-free road on every Sunday.
Revised: The truck, traveling on Kanda Myōjin-dōri (Kanda Myōjin Avenue ), ran into the crowd at a crossing on Chūō-dōri (Chūō Avenue), which is a vehicle-free road on every Sunday.
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Original: The truck, traveling on Kanda Myōjin-dōri (Kanda Myōjin Street ), ran into the crowd at a crossing on Chūō-dōri (Chūō Avenue), which is a vehicle-free road on every Sunday.
Revised: The truck, traveling on Kanda Myōjin-dōri (Kanda Myōjin Street ), ran into the crowd at a crossing on Chūō-dōri (Chūō Avenue), which is a vehicle-free road every Sunday.
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Original:  After entering the crowd, the truck continued moving for about 30 meters , and then the suspect exited the truck and began  stabbing people.
Revised:  After entering the crowd, the truck continued moving for about 30 meters . The suspect then exited the truck and began stabbing people.
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Original:  As acquaintances of the dead and passersby visited, the table soon was filled—almost flooded—with flowers, drink bottles, pictures, and folded paper cranes.
Revised:  As acquaintances of the dead and passersby visited, the table soon filled—almost flooded—with flowers, drink bottles, pictures, and folded paper cranes.
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Original:  A lively shopping district on a Sunday afternoon was suddenly hit by an indiscriminate murder  . A young man attacked a crowd with a rented truck, and then stabbed people with a dagger, around 12:35 JST (3:35 UTC) on Sunday in the Akihabara district of Chiyoda Ward, Tokyo.
Revised:  A lively shopping distri was suddenly struck by an indiscriminate murder . A young man attacked a crowd with a rented truck, and then stabbed people with a dagger, around 12:35 JST (3:35 UTC) on Sunday in the Akihabara district of Chiyoda Ward, Tokyo.
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Original:  Seven people were killed and ten were injured.
Revised:  Seven people were killed , and ten injured.
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Original:  The injured people include pedestrians, a policeman aged 53 , and a taxi driver aged 54, who is believed to have left his taxi in order to help a pedestrian struck by the truck.
Revised:  The injured people include pedestrians, a 53-year-old policeman , and a taxi driver aged 54, who is believed to have left his taxi in order to help a pedestrian struck by the truck.
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Original:  The injured people include pedestrians, a policeman aged 53 , and a taxi driver aged 54, who is believed to have left his taxi in order to help a pedestrian struck by the truck.
Revised:  The injured people include pedestrians, a policeman aged 53 , and a taxi driver , 54, who is believed to have left his taxi in order to help a pedestrian struck by the truck.
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Original:  The injured people include pedestrians, a policeman aged 53 , and a taxi driver aged 54, who is believed to have left his taxi in order to help a pedestrian struck by the truck.
Revised:  The injured people include pedestrians, a policeman aged 53 , and a taxi driver aged 54, who is believed to have left his taxi in order to help a pedestrian hit by the truck.
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Original:  A witnesssaid the suspect,  pursued by police, ran south on Chūō-dōri and was cornered in a narrow alley.
Revised:  A witnesssaid the suspect, upon being pursued by police, ran south on Chūō-dōri and was cornered in a narrow alley.
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Original:  The suspect dropped his knife after the police officer drew his gun, and was overpowered by the officer and surrounding people .
Revised:  The suspect dropped his knife after the police officer drew his gun, and was overpowered by the officer and several bystanders .
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Original:  The suspect is quoted as confessing to police, "I came to Akihabara to kill people.
Revised:  The suspect has been quoted as confessing to police, "I came to Akihabara to kill people.
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Original:  After being held at the Manseibashi Police Station, he was sent on Tuesday to the Tokyo District Public Prosecutors Office.
Revised:  After being held at the Manseibashi Police Station, he was sent on Tuesday to the Tokyo District Public Prosecutor's Office.
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Original:  Local residents, business owners, and government officials from Chiyoda Ward assembled for an emergency meeting on Monday to discuss whether the practice of Sunday vehicle-free area is to be continued.
Revised:  Local residents, business owners, and government officials from Chiyoda Ward assembled for an emergency meeting on Monday to discuss whether the practice of maintaining the vehicle-free area is to be continued.
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Original:  Local residents, business owners, and government officials from Chiyoda Ward assembled for an emergency meeting on Monday to discuss whether the practice of Sunday vehicle-free area is to be continued.
Revised:  Local residents, business owners, and government officials from Chiyoda Ward assembled for an emergency meeting on Monday to discuss whether the practice of Sunday vehicle-free area on Sundays ought to be continued.
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Original:  A lively shopping distri was suddenly struck by an indiscriminate murder spree on a Sunday afternoon.
Revised:  A lively shopping district was suddenly struck by an indiscriminate murder spree on a Sunday afternoon.
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Original:  The suspect then exited the truck and began yelling at people and stabbing them .
Revised:  The suspect then exited the truck and began stabbing people .
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Original:  This was an increase from 2004, when police stated that 1.5 million people attended  
Revised:  This was an increase from 2004, when police stated that 1.5 million people attended . 
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Original: The location of the shooting A policeman from the United Kingdom was killed today while training with his police force, as part of a training exercise in the city of Manchester.
Revised: The location of the shooting A policeman from the United Kingdom was killed today while taking part in a training exercise with his police force, as part of a training exercise in the city of Manchester.
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Original: The location of the shooting A policeman from the United Kingdom was killed today while training with his police force, as part of a training exercise in the city of Manchester.
Revised: The location of the shooting A policeman from the United Kingdom was killed today while training with his police force, in the city of Manchester.
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Original:  The incident occurred at approximately 10:30 UTC (11:30 local time) this morning  Greater Manchester Police released a statement regarding the incident .
Revised:  The incident occurred at approximately 10:30 UTC (11:30 local time) this morning . Greater Manchester Police released a statement regarding the incident .
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Original: 4 Pakistani police have been shot and killed by suspected militants in the North West Frontier Province said police.
Revised: Four Pakistani police have been shot and killed by suspected militants in the North West Frontier Province said police.
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Original:  Police also said that the attackers shot automatic weapons into a police van and then set it on fire . Category:Pakist
Revised:  Police also said that the attackers shot automatic weapons into a police van and then set it on fire Category:Pakist
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Original:  Police also said that the attackers shot automatic weapons into a police van and then set it on fire . Category:Pakist
Revised:  Police also said that the attackers shot automatic weapons into a police van and then set it on fire . 
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Original: Four Pakistani police have been shot dead in Afghanistan by suspected militants, according to police.
Revised: Four Pakistani police have been shot dead by suspected militants, according to police.
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Original: Four Pakistani police  have been shot dead by suspected militants, according to police.
Revised: Four Pakistani police officers have been shot dead by suspected militants, according to police.
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Original:  The attackers allegedly shot into a police car before setting it on fire  
Revised:  The attackers allegedly shot into a police car before setting it on fire . 
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Original:  "An unknown number of gunmen used automatic rifles and rocket-propelled grenades to target the police party," he said  
Revised:  "An unknown number of gunmen used automatic rifles and rocket-propelled grenades to target the police party," he said . 
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Original:  He said that if there are incidents like this, there is 'no point' in attempting to follow the agreement
Revised:  He said that if there are incidents like this, there is "no point" in the government attempting to follow the agreement
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Original:  He said that if there are incidents like this, there is "no point" in the government attempting to follow the agreement   
Revised:  He said that if there are incidents like this, there is "no point" in the government attempting to follow the agreement . 
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Original:  The fine was dismissed when the lawyer for the couple  argued that the chicken was not livestock but a domesticated animal.
Revised:  The fine was dismissed when the lawyer for the couple , argued that the chicken was not livestock but a domesticated animal.
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Original: Police arrested about 14 homeless advocates which they had blocked a intersection in Seattle.
Revised:  14 homeless advocates which they had blocked a intersection in Seattle.
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Original:  They were protesting street sweeps that would remove homeless camps.
Revised:  They were protesting street sweeps that were aimed at removing homeless camps.
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Original:  Police had to take them to a local bus when they did not want to leave the site after two police warnings.
Revised:  Police had to take them to a local bus after ignoring two police warnings.
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Original:  The homeless camped overnight in front of the City Hall Plaza . Real Change is the name of the organization that protested the city sweeps.
Revised:  The had been camping overnight in front of the City Hall Plaza . Real Change is the name of the organization that protested the city sweeps.
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Original:  The homeless camped overnight in front of the City Hall Plaza . Real Change is the name of the organization that protested the city sweeps.
Revised:  The homeless camped overnight in front of the City Hall Plaza Real Change is the name of the organization that protested the city sweeps.
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Original:  The city  removes these camps due to health and safety reasons.
Revised:  The city says that it removes these camps due to health and safety reasons.
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Original:  The protesters, members of an organization called Real Change, were taken to a local bus after ignoring two police warnings .
Revised:  The protesters, members of an organization called Real Change, were taken peacefully to a bus after ignoring two police warnings .
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Original:  The had  been camping overnight in front of the City Hall Plaza with the message that the city needs shelters for the homeless instead of  running them out of camps.
Revised:  The had The group been camping overnight in front of the City Hall Plaza with the message that the city needs shelters for the homeless instead of running them out of camps.
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Original:  The had  been camping overnight in front of the City Hall Plaza with the message that the city needs shelters for the homeless instead of  running them out of camps.
Revised:  The had been camping overnight in front of the City Hall Plaza with the message that the city needs shelters for the homeless instead of simply running them out of camps.
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Original:  The city says that it removes these camps due to health and safety reasons.
Revised:  The city says that it removes these camps due to health and safety 
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Original:  Category:Washingt
Revised:  issues
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Original:  The protesters, members of an organization called Real Change , were taken peacefully to a bus after ignoring two police warnings to leave the area.
Revised:  The protesters, members of an organization called "Real Change" , were taken peacefully to a bus after ignoring two police warnings to leave the area.
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Original:  Steve Jobs, The Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.    
Revised:  Steve Jobs, The Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price. ” 
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Original:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers  conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that  “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
Revised:  Steve Jobs, the Apple Chief Executive Officer, announced the development today at a developers conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
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Original:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers  conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that  “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
Revised:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development at a developers conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
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Original:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers  conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that  “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
Revised:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers 's conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
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Original:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers  conference, where he attempted to promote the iPhone by saying that  “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
Revised:  Steve Jobs, the Apple chief executive announced the development today at a developers conference, where he promoted the iPhone by saying that “just one year after launching the iPhone, we’re launching the new iPhone 3G that is twice as fast at half the price.”
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