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Original:  He began with simple scenes of common people living off of the earth ‒ peasants, farmers, shepherds ‒ and moved toward a thematic symbolist style that continued to embody the landscapes around him while intertwining pantheistic images representing "a primeval Arcadia . "  Bachmann, P35 Over the course of his life he moved from both the physical and emotional internal, such as his scene of motherhood in a stable, to the grand external views of the mountain scenery where he chose to live.
Revised:  He began with simple scenes of common people living off of the earth ‒ peasants, farmers, shepherds ‒ and moved toward a thematic symbolist style that continued to embody the landscapes around him while intertwining pantheistic images representing "a primeval Arcadia . " . Bachmann, P35 Over the course of his life he moved from both the physical and emotional internal, such as his scene of motherhood in a stable, to the grand external views of the mountain scenery where he chose to live.
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Original:  Art historian Robert Rosenblum described Segantini as transforming "the earthbound into the spiritual",Quinsac, p38 and the artist himself referred to his work as "naturalist Symbolism . "  Quinsac, p40 He said "I've got God inside me.
Revised:  Art historian Robert Rosenblum described Segantini as transforming "the earthbound into the spiritual",Quinsac, p38 and the artist himself referred to his work as "naturalist Symbolism " Quinsac, p40 He said "I've got God inside me.
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Original:  Art historian Robert Rosenblum described Segantini as transforming "the earthbound into the spiritual",Quinsac, p38 and the artist himself referred to his work as "naturalist Symbolism . "  Quinsac, p40 He said "I've got God inside me.
Revised:  Art historian Robert Rosenblum described Segantini as transforming "the earthbound into the spiritual",Quinsac, p38 and the artist himself referred to his work as "naturalist Symbolism . " . Quinsac, p40 He said "I've got God inside me.
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Original:  In later life  he combined a Divisionist painting style with Symbolist images of nature.
Revised:  In later life , he combined a Divisionist painting style with Symbolist images of nature.
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Original:  During the first seven years of his life  his father, who was a tradesman, traveled extensively while looking for work.
Revised:  During the first seven years of his life , his father, who was a tradesman, traveled extensively while looking for work.
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Original:  In the spring of 1865  his mother died after spending the past seven years in increasingly poor health.
Revised:  In the spring of 1865 , his mother died after spending the past seven years in increasingly poor health.
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Original:  At age seven  Segantini ran away and was later found living on the streets of Milan.
Revised:  At age seven , Segantini ran away and was later found living on the streets of Milan.
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Original:  For much of his early life  he could barely read or write;
Revised:  For much of his early life , he could barely read or write;
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Original:  Fortunately  a chaplain at the reformatory noticed that he could draw quite well, and he encouraged this talent in an attempt to lift his self-esteem.
Revised:  Fortunately , a chaplain at the reformatory noticed that he could draw quite well, and he encouraged this talent in an attempt to lift his self-esteem.
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Original:  In 1873  Segantini's half-brother Napoleon claimed him from the reformatory, and for the next year Segantini lived with Napoleon in Trentino.
Revised:  In 1873 , Segantini's half-brother Napoleon claimed him from the reformatory, and for the next year Segantini lived with Napoleon in Trentino.
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Original: Bachmann, p22 Career Segantini in 1890 thumbnail|Giovanni Segantini - The Punishment of Lust The following year he returned to Milan and attended classes at the Brera Academy.
Revised: Bachmann, p22 Career Segantini in 1890 thumbnail|Giovanni Segantini - The Punishment of Lust The following year , Segantini returned to Milan and attended classes at the Brera Academy.
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Original:  While there  he became friends with members from a transformative movement known as Scapigliatura (the "Disheveleds"), which included artists, poets, writers and musicians who sought to erase the differences between art and life.
Revised:  While there , he became friends with members from a transformative movement known as Scapigliatura (the "Disheveleds"), which included artists, poets, writers and musicians who sought to erase the differences between art and life.
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Original: Bachmann, p197 That same year  he met Bugatti's sister, Luigia Pierina Bugatti (1862–1938), known as "Bice", and they began a life-long romance.
Revised: Bachmann, p197 That same year , he met Bugatti's sister, Luigia Pierina Bugatti (1862–1938), known as "Bice", and they began a life-long romance.
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Original:  He wrote many love letters when he was away from her, sometime including wild flowers that he had picked.
Revised:  He wrote many love letters when he was away from her, sometimes including wild flowers that he had picked.
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Original:  Once he wrote  "Take these unsightly flowers, these violets, as a symbol of my great love, When a spring comes in which I fail to send you such violets, you will no longer find me among the living.
Revised:  Once he wrote , "Take these unsightly flowers, these violets, as a symbol of my great love, When a spring comes in which I fail to send you such violets, you will no longer find me among the living.
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Original: "Heslewood, p53 In 1880  he and Bice moved to Pusiano and soon thereafter to the village of Carella, where they shared a house with their friend Longoni.
Revised: "Heslewood, p53 In 1880 , he and Bice moved to Pusiano and soon thereafter to the village of Carella, where they shared a house with their friend Longoni.
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Original:  While he worked outside  Bice would read to him, and eventually he learned to read and write.
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Original:  At this time  he painted the first version of Ave Maria (Segantini Museum, St. Moritz), which took a gold medal at the 1883 World's Fair in Amsterdam.
Revised:  At this time , he painted the first version of Ave Maria (Segantini Museum, St. Moritz), which took a gold medal at the 1883 World's Fair in Amsterdam.
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Original: Bachmann, p27 In 1886  Segantini sought a less expensive place to live and, attracted by the beautiful mountain scenery, he moved his family to Savognin, Graubünden.
Revised: Bachmann, p27 In 1886 , Segantini sought a less expensive place to live and, attracted by the beautiful mountain scenery, he moved his family to Savognin, Graubünden.
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Original:  In 1897  Segantini was commissioned by a group of local hotels to build a huge panorama of the Engadin valley to be shown in a specially built round hall at the 1900 Exposition Universelle in Paris.
Revised:  In 1897 , Segantini was commissioned by a group of local hotels to build a huge panorama of the Engadin valley to be shown in a specially built round hall at the 1900 Exposition Universelle in Paris.
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Original:  Segantini's importance as an international artist was further established that same year  when the Austrian state financed a luxury monograph on his work.
Revised:  Segantini's importance as an international artist was further established that same year , when the Austrian state financed a luxury monograph on his work.
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Original:  At the end of November  a memorial exhibition of his works was put on display in Milan.
Revised:  At the end of November , a memorial exhibition of his works was put on display in Milan.
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Original:  In 1908  the Segantini Museum was established in St.
Revised:  In 1908 , the Segantini Museum was established in St.
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Original:  He began with simple scenes of common people living off of the earth ‒ peasants, farmers, shepherds ‒ and moved toward a thematic symbolist style that continued to embody the landscapes around him while intertwining pantheistic images representing "a primeval Arcadia".
Revised:  He began with simple scenes of common people living off of the earth — peasants, farmers, shepherds ‒ and moved toward a thematic symbolist style that continued to embody the landscapes around him while intertwining pantheistic images representing "a primeval Arcadia".
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Original:  He began with simple scenes of common people living off of the earth ‒ peasants, farmers, shepherds ‒ and moved toward a thematic symbolist style that continued to embody the landscapes around him while intertwining pantheistic images representing "a primeval Arcadia".
Revised:  He began with simple scenes of common people living off of the earth ‒ peasants, farmers, shepherds — and moved toward a thematic symbolist style that continued to embody the landscapes around him while intertwining pantheistic images representing "a primeval Arcadia".
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Original: Bachmann, P35 Over the course of his life  he moved from both the physical and emotional internal, such as his scene of motherhood in a stable, to the grand external views of the mountain scenery where he chose to live.
Revised: Bachmann, P35 Over the course of his life , he moved from both the physical and emotional internal, such as his scene of motherhood in a stable, to the grand external views of the mountain scenery where he chose to live.
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Original:  He later changed his family name by adding another "n" after the "a".
Revised:  He later changed his family name by adding an "n" after the "a".
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Original:  Darrow only studied there a year when he decided that it would be much more cost-effective to apprentice (read law) in an actual law office.
Revised:  Darrow studied there for only a year when he decided that it would be much more cost-effective to apprentice (read law) in an actual law office.
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Original:  Haywood and Pettibone were found not guilty in separate trials, and the charges against Moyer were then dropped.
Revised:  Haywood and Pettibone were acquitted in separate trials, and the charges against Moyer were then dropped.
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Original:  More broadly, it outlawed in state-funded schools (including universities) the teaching of "any theory that denies the story of the Divine Creation of man as taught in the Bible, and to teach instead that man has descended from a lower order of animals."
Revised:  More broadly, it outlawed in state-funded schools (including universities) the teaching of "any theory that denies the story of the Divine Creation of man as taught in the Bible, and to teach instead that man has descended from a lower order of URL
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Original:  The court commented, "Nothing is to be gained by prolonging the life of this bizarre case."
Revised:  The court commented, "Nothing is to be gained by prolonging the life of this bizarre URL
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Original: Legacy Today, Clarence Darrow is remembered for his reputation as a fierce litigator who, in many cases, championed the cause of the underdog;
Revised: Legacy Today, Clarence Darrow is remembered for his reputation as a fierce trial attorney who, in many cases, championed the cause of the underdog;
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Original:  More broadly, it outlawed in state-funded schools (including universities) the teaching of "any theory that denies the story of the Divine Creation of man as taught in the Bible, and to teach instead that man has descended from a lower order of URL A year later, the Tennessee Supreme Court reversed the decision of the Dayton court on a procedural technicality—not on constitutional grounds, as Darrow had hoped.
Revised:  More broadly, it outlawed in state-funded schools (including universities) the teaching of "any theory that denies the story of the Divine Creation of man as taught in the Bible, and to teach instead that man has descended from a lower order of animals." A year later, the Tennessee Supreme Court reversed the decision of the Dayton court on a procedural technicality—not on constitutional grounds, as Darrow had hoped.
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Original:  The court commented, "Nothing is to be gained by prolonging the life of this bizarre URL By the 1920s, the eugenics movement was very powerful and Darrow was a pointed critic of that movement.
Revised:  The court commented, "Nothing is to be gained by prolonging the life of this bizarre case." By the 1920s, the eugenics movement was very powerful and Darrow was a pointed critic of that movement.
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Original:  In the years immediately before the Supreme Court of the United States would endorse eugenics through Buck v. URL Darrow wrote multiple essays criticizing the illogic of the eugenicists, especially the confirmation bias in eugenicist arguments.
Revised:  In the years immediately before the Supreme Court of the United States would endorse eugenics through Buck v. Bell, Darrow wrote multiple essays criticizing the illogic of the eugenicists, especially the confirmation bias in eugenicist arguments.
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Original:  In the 1993 federal election, she won a seat in the House of Commons of Canada as the Liberal Member of Parliament (MP ) for Madawaska—Victoria by defeating Progressive Conservative Cabinet Minister Bernard Valcourt.
Revised:  In the 1993 federal election, she won a seat in the House of Commons of Canada as the Liberal MP for Madawaska—Victoria by defeating Progressive Conservative Cabinet Minister Bernard Valcourt.
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Original:  She has completed the coursework for a Master of Industrial Relations.       
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Original:  She has completed the coursework for a Master of Industrial Relations.       
Revised:  She has completed the coursework for a Master of Industrial Relations. Provincial
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Original:  Since leaving office, Carter has remained engaged in political and social projects.
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Original:   In 1982, Carter established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights .
Revised:  In 1982, hevestablished The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights .
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Original:  In 1982, hevestablished The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights, and was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work in co-founding the Center in 2002.
Revised:  In 1982, he established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights, and was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work in co-founding the Center in 2002.
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Original:  On December 20, 2015, while teaching a Sunday school class, Carter announced that his 28-year-old grandson Jeremy Carter had died from an unspecified illness .
Revised:  On December 20, 2015, while teaching a Sunday school class, Carter announced that his 28-year-old grandson Jeremy Carter had died of unspecified causes .
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Original:  On December 20, 2015, while teaching a Sunday school class, Carter announced that his 28-year-old grandson Jeremy Carter had died of unspecified causes .
Revised:  On December 20, 2015, while teaching a Sunday school class, Carter announced that his 28-year-old grandson Jeremy Carter had died from an unspecified illness .
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Original: James Earl Carter Jr. (born October 1, 1924) is an American philanthropist, author, and former politician who served as the 39th president of the United States from 1977 to 1981.
Revised: James Earl Carter Jr. (born October 1, 1924) is an American former politician who served as the 39th president of the United States from 1977 to 1981.
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Original:   Since leaving office, Carter has remained engaged in political and social projects.
Revised:  Since leaving office, Carter has remained engaged in political and social projects. Since leaving office, Carter has remained engaged in political and social projects.
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Original:   Since leaving office, Carter has remained engaged in political and social projects.
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Original:  In 1982, he established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights , and was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work in co-founding the Center in 2002.
Revised:  In 1982, Carter established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights , and was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work in co-founding the Center in 2002.
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Original:  In 1982, he established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights , and was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work in co-founding the Center in 2002.
Revised:  In 1982, he established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights . In 2002, he was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work in co-founding the Center in 2002.
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Original:  In 1982, he established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights , and was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work in co-founding the Center in 2002.
Revised:  In 1982, he established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights , and was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize for his work in co-founding the center.
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Original:  A member of the Democratic Party, he previously served as the 76th governor of Georgia from 1971 to 1975 and as a Georgia state senator from 1963 to 1967.
Revised:  A member of the Democratic Party, he previously served as the 76th governor of Georgia from 1971 to 1975 and as a Georgia State senator from 1963 to 1967.
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Original:  After the death of his father in 1953, he left his naval career and returned home to Plains , where he assumed control of his family's peanut-growing business.
Revised:  After the death of his father in 1953, Carter left his naval career and returned home to Plains , where he assumed control of his family's peanut-growing business.
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Original:  He remained as governor until 1975.
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Original:  On his second day in office , Carter pardoned all Vietnam War draft evaders by issuing Proclamation 4483.
Revised:  On the second day of his presidency , Carter pardoned all Vietnam War draft evaders by issuing Proclamation 4483.
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Original:  He is the only president to have served a full term in office and not have appointed a justice to the Supreme Court.
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Original:  He lost the 1980 presidential election in an electoral landslide to Republican nominee Ronald Reagan.
Revised:  Carter lost the 1980 presidential election in an electoral landslide to Republican nominee Ronald Reagan.
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Original:  In 1982, Carter established The Carter Center to promote and expand human rights.
Revised:  In 1982, Carter established the Carter Center to promote and expand human rights.
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Original:  He is considered a key figure in the charity Habitat for Humanity.
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Original:  At years old and with a -year-long retirement, Carter is both the oldest living and longest lived president, as well as the one with the longest post-presidency , and his -year-long marriage makes him the longest married president .
Revised:  At years old and with a -year-long retirement, Carter is both the oldest living and longest lived president, as well as the one with the longest post-presidency .
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Original:  He is also the sixth oldest living person to have served as a state leader.
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Original:  Civil rights were a high priority for Carter, the most significant of his actions being the expansion of black state employees and the addition of portraits of Martin Luther King Jr. and two other prominent black Georgians in the capitol building—an act protested by the Ku Klux Klan.
Revised:  Civil rights were a high priority for Carter, the most significant of his actions being the expansion of black state employees and the addition of portraits of Martin Luther King Jr. and two other prominent black Georgians in the capitol building—an act protested by the Klu Klux Klan.
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Original:  Carter later regretted endorsing the death penalty, saying, "I didn't see the injustice of it as I do now." 222x222px|President-Elect Jimmy Carter with Secretary of Defense Donald Rumsfeld During and Chairman of the Joint Chiefs of Staff General George S. Brown and the other members of the Joint Chiefs of Staff during a Visit to The Pentagon on December 17, 1976.
Revised:  Carter later regretted endorsing the death penalty, saying, "I didn't see the injustice of it as I do now." 
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Original:  EPA Love Canal Superfund 247x247px|President Jimmy Carter during National Security Council Meeting at the White House.
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Original:  In his 1980 State of the Union Address, Carter emphasized the significance of relations between the two regions: "Now, as during the last 3½ decades, the relationship between our country, the United States of America, and the Soviet Union is the most critical factor in determining whether the world will live at peace or be engulfed in global conflict."
Revised:  his 1980 State of the Union Address, Carter emphasized the significance of relations between the two regions: "Now, as during the last 3½ decades, the relationship between our country, the United States of America, and the Soviet Union is the most critical factor in determining whether the world will live at peace or be engulfed in global conflict."
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Original:  On January 6, 2021, following the 2021  United States Capitol attack , along with the other three still living former presidents, Barack Obama, George W. Bush, Bill Clinton, Jimmy Carter denounced the storming of the Capitol, releasing a statement saying that he and his wife were "troubled"
Revised:  On January 6, 2021, following the 2021 storming of the United States Capitol attack , along with the other three still living former presidents, Barack Obama, George W. Bush, Bill Clinton, Jimmy Carter denounced the storming of the Capitol, releasing a statement saying that he and his wife were "troubled"
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Original:  On January 6, 2021, following the 2021  United States Capitol attack , along with the other three still living former presidents, Barack Obama, George W. Bush, Bill Clinton, Jimmy Carter denounced the storming of the Capitol, releasing a statement saying that he and his wife were "troubled"
Revised:  On January 6, 2021, following the 2021 United States Capitol , along with the other three still living former presidents, Barack Obama, George W. Bush, Bill Clinton, Jimmy Carter denounced the storming of the Capitol, releasing a statement saying that he and his wife were "troubled"
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Original:   upalt=Carter riding a bicycle|Carter in Plains, 2008 Health problems On August 3, 2015, Carter underwent an elective surgery to remove a small mass on his liver, and his prognosis for a full recovery was initially said to be excellent.
Revised:  Health problems upalt=Carter riding a bicycle|Carter in Plains, 2008 Health problems On August 3, 2015, Carter underwent an elective surgery to remove a small mass on his liver, and his prognosis for a full recovery was initially said to be excellent.
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