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Original:  After testimony from witnesses and from Basil Parasiris, Justice Boilard came to the decision of allowing Basil to be given bail- a first for first degree murder in Canada according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Revised:  After testimony from witnesses and from Basil Parasiris, Justice Boilard came to the decision of allowing Basil to be given bail- a first for first degree murder , according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
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Original:  The warrant, authorized by justice Gaby Dumas, allowed Laval police to use "dynamic entry" – meant to surprise the person being investigated – to carry out their search for evidence.
Revised:  The warrant, authorized by justice Gaby Dumas, allowed Laval police to use dynamic entry, which is to surprise the person being investigated – to carry out their search for evidence.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The warrant, authorized by justice Gaby Dumas, allowed Laval police to use "dynamic entry" – meant to surprise the person being investigated – to carry out their search for evidence.
Revised:  The warrant, authorized by justice Gaby Dumas, allowed Laval police to use "dynamic entry" – meant to surprise the person who is investigated , to carry out their search for evidence.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In general, dynamic entry is only allowed to be used in cases where there is a risk of a suspect destroying evidence if  alerted that police are on the premises.
Revised:  In general, dynamic entry is not allowed to be used in cases where there is a risk of a suspect destroying evidence if alerted that police are on the premises.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In general, dynamic entry is only allowed to be used in cases where there is a risk of a suspect destroying evidence if  alerted that police are on the premises.
Revised:  In general, dynamic entry is only allowed to be used unless there is a risk of a suspect destroying evidence if alerted that police are on the premises.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  In general, dynamic entry is only allowed to be used in cases where there is a risk of a suspect destroying evidence if  alerted that police are on the premises.
Revised:  In general, dynamic entry is only allowed to be used in cases where there is a risk of a suspect destroying evidence if he is alerted that police are on the premises.
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Original:  The warrant was executed before dawn ;
Revised:  The warrant was executed before dawn , when
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Original:  a team of armed and plain clothed Laval police officers knocked down the door to Mr. Parasiris's home and rushed into his bedroom  where he and his wife were sleeping.
Revised:  a team of armed and plain clothed Laval police officers knocked down the door to Parasiris's home and rushed into his bedroom where he and his wife were sleeping.
Edit intent: style
Original:  a team of armed and plain clothed Laval police officers knocked down the door to Mr. Parasiris's home and rushed into his bedroom  where he and his wife were sleeping.
Revised:  a team of armed and plain clothed Laval police officers knocked down the door to Mr. Parasiris's home and rushed into his bedroom , where he and his wife were sleeping.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Unaware that they were police officers executing a search warrant, Mr. Parasiris assumed it was a home invasion.
Revised:  Unaware that they were police officers executing a search warrant, Parasiris assumed it was a home invasion.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Unaware that they were police officers executing a search warrant, Mr. Parasiris assumed it was a home invasion.
Revised:  Unaware that they were police officers executing a search warrant, Mr. Parasiris assumed it to be a home invasion.
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Original:  The first shot fired hit constable Daniel Tessier in the head, the other pierced his heart.
Revised:  The first shot fired hit Constable Daniel Tessier in the head, the other pierced his heart.
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Original:  The first shot fired hit constable Daniel Tessier in the head, the other pierced his heart.
Revised:  The first shot fired hit constable Daniel Tessier in the head, and the second pierced his heart.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Tessier's partner, Stéphane Forbes, was also wounded by one of 4 bullets fired from Parasiris's revolver in the 30-second shootout with police as was Mr. Parasiris's wife  Penny, as she fled to a closet.
Revised:  Tessier's partner, Stéphane Forbes, was also wounded by one of the four bullets fired from Parasiris's revolver in the 30-second shootout with police as was Mr. Parasiris's wife Penny, as she fled to a closet.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Tessier's partner, Stéphane Forbes, was also wounded by one of 4 bullets fired from Parasiris's revolver in the 30-second shootout with police as was Mr. Parasiris's wife  Penny, as she fled to a closet.
Revised:  Tessier's partner, Stéphane Forbes, was also wounded by one of 4 bullets fired from Parasiris's revolver in the 30-second shootout with the police, as was Mr. Parasiris's wife Penny, as she fled to a closet.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Tessier's partner, Stéphane Forbes, was also wounded by one of 4 bullets fired from Parasiris's revolver in the 30-second shootout with police as was Mr. Parasiris's wife  Penny, as she fled to a closet.
Revised:  Tessier's partner, Stéphane Forbes, was also wounded by one of 4 bullets fired from Parasiris's revolver in the 30-second shootout with police as was Mr. Parasiris's wife , Penny, as she fled to a closet.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Mr. Parasiris's two children aged 15 and 7  were terrified at hearing gunfire in their home;
Revised:  Mr. Parasiris's two children , 15 and 7 were terrified at hearing gunfire in their home;
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Mr. Parasiris's two children aged 15 and 7  were terrified at hearing gunfire in their home;
Revised:  Mr. Parasiris's two children aged 15 and 7 , were terrified at hearing gunfire in their home;
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  the older son rushed to call 9-1-1 , and was directed to stay put.
Revised:  the older son rushed to call 9-1-1 and was directed to stay put.
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Original:  Bail hearing Charged with first degree murder Parasiris stood for bail in front of Quebec Superior Court Justice Jean-Guy Boilard and represented by marquee Montreal lawyer, Frank Pappas.
Revised:  Bail hearing Charged with first-degree murder, Parasiris stood for bail in front of Quebec Superior Court Justice Jean-Guy Boilard and represented by marquee Montreal lawyer, Frank Pappas.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  During his bail hearing, the judge focused on whether Mr. Parasiris was a risk to the community , or a riskto flee .
Revised:  During his bail hearing, the judge focused on whether Parasiris was a risk to the community , or a riskto flee .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  During his bail hearing, the judge focused on whether Mr. Parasiris was a risk to the community , or a riskto flee .
Revised:  During his bail hearing, the judge focused on whether Mr. Parasiris was a community or flight risk .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Witnesses who testified for Mr. Parasiris claimed that Basil was honest and peaceful man.
Revised:  Witnesses who testified for Parasiris claimed that Basil was honest and peaceful man.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Witnesses who testified for Mr. Parasiris claimed that Basil was honest and peaceful man.
Revised:  Witnesses who testified for Mr. Parasiris claimed that he was honest and peaceful man.
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Original:  During the bail process, Basil Parasiris claimed that he intentionally did fire his revolver at Sergeant Daniel Tesser under the impression that it was a robbery .
Revised:  During the bail hearings, Parasiris claimed that he intentionally did fire his revolver at Sergeant Daniel Tesser under the impression that it was a robbery .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  During the bail process, Basil Parasiris claimed that he intentionally did fire his revolver at Sergeant Daniel Tesser under the impression that it was a robbery .
Revised:  During the bail process, Basil Parasiris claimed that he intentionally fired his revolver at Sergeant Daniel Tesser under the impression that it was a robbery .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police , " was marked on the back of his vest.
Revised:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police , " was marked on the back of his vest.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police , " was marked on the back of his vest.
Revised:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he had fallen, as the word "Police , " was marked on the back of his vest.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police , " was marked on the back of his vest.
Revised:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police " was marked on the back of his vest.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police , " was marked on the back of his vest.
Revised:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police , " was on the back of his vest.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police , " was marked on the back of his vest.
Revised:  He also claimed that he did not recognize Sergeant Tessier as a police officer until after he fell where the word , "Police , " was marked on the back of the vest.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  After testimony from witnesses and from Basil Parasiris, Justice Boilard came to the decision of allowing Basil to be given bail.
Revised:  After testimony from witnesses and from Parasiris, Justice Boilard came to the decision of allowing Basil to be given bail.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Never before has a suspect in Canada  been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder, according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Revised:  No suspect in Canada been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder, according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Never before has a suspect in Canada  been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder, according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Revised:  Never before has a suspect in Canada had been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder, according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Never before has a suspect in Canada  been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder, according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Revised:  Never before has a suspect in Canada been released on bail for the charge of first-degree murder, according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Never before has a suspect in Canada  been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder, according to Basil's lawyer Frank Pappas.
Revised:  Never before has a suspect in Canada been released on bail for the charge of first degree murder, according to Pappas.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  His conditions included abiding by a curfew, living with his parents, and having a sister and cousin post  $100, 000.00 bond.
Revised:  His conditions included abiding by a curfew, living with his parents, and having a sister and cousin post a $100, 000.00 bond.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  His conditions included abiding by a curfew, living with his parents, and having a sister and cousin post  $100, 000.00 bond.
Revised:  His conditions included abiding by a curfew, living with his parents, and having a sister and cousin post $100, 000 bond.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  According to media versions at the time of this shooting, the bullet that wounded Penny was fired from a police weapon.
Revised:  According to media versions at the time of the shooting, the bullet that wounded Penny was fired from a police weapon.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  According to media versions at the time of this shooting, the bullet that wounded Penny was fired from a police weapon.
Revised:  According to media versions at the time of this shooting, the bullet that wounded Penny had been fired from a police weapon.
Edit intent: style
Original:  The police also fired several rounds into the children's bedroom.
Revised:  Also, several rounds had been fired by the police into the children's bedroom.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Verdict and acquittals Basil Parasiris faced a variety of charges;
Revised:  Verdict and acquittals Parasiris faced a variety of charges;
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  including the attempted murder charge on Tessier's partner, Stephane Forbes, two weapons charges and first degree murder.
Revised:  including the attempted murder charge on Tessier's partner, Stephane Forbes, two weapons charges , and first-degree murder.
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Original:  On June 10, 2008  Quebec Judge Guy Cournoyer found that there was insufficient evidence to convict Mr. Parasiris of attempted murder or the weapons charges.
Revised:  On June 10, 2008 , Quebec Judge Guy Cournoyer found that there was insufficient evidence to convict Mr. Parasiris of attempted murder or the weapons charges.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On June 10, 2008  Quebec Judge Guy Cournoyer found that there was insufficient evidence to convict Mr. Parasiris of attempted murder or the weapons charges.
Revised:  On June 10, 2008 Quebec Judge Guy Cournoyer found that there was insufficient evidence to convict Parasiris of attempted murder or the weapons charges.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Justice Cournoyer then ordered the jury to sequester and consider coming to a verdict only on the murder charge.
Revised:  He then ordered the jury to sequester and consider coming to a verdict only on the murder charge.
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Original:  On Friday  June 13, 2008, the jury reached a not guilty verdict on the charge of first degree murder of a police officer.
Revised:  June 13, 2008, the jury reached a not guilty verdict on the charge of first degree murder of a police officer.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  On Friday  June 13, 2008, the jury reached a not guilty verdict on the charge of first degree murder of a police officer.
Revised:  On Friday On June 13, 2008, the jury reached a not guilty verdict on the charge of first degree murder of a police officer.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On Friday  June 13, 2008, the jury reached a not guilty verdict on the charge of first degree murder of a police officer.
Revised:  On Friday June 13, the jury reached a not guilty verdict on the charge of first degree murder of a police officer.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  On Friday  June 13, 2008, the jury reached a not guilty verdict on the charge of first degree murder of a police officer.
Revised:  On Friday June 13, 2008, the jury reached a not guilty verdict on the charge of first-degree murder of a police officer.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Revised:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that he had acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Revised:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence and that he had believed that the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Revised:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers were who were about to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Revised:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and his children. Also, the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Revised:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant that was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Mr. Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
Revised:  The jury suggested that there was reasonable ground to believe that Mr. Parasiris acted in self-defence believing the police officers who he thought were attackers were going to harm his wife and children while the Judge deemed that the search warrant which was used to enter Parasiris's suburban home was illegal.
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Original:  Aftermath Many cited this tragic case as the result of police errors that could have been avoided.
Revised:  Aftermath Many considered the tragic case as the result of police errors that could have been avoided.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Laval police Chief Jean-Pierre Gariépy expressed dismay at the verdict , citing the reasons why the officers were at Mr. Parasiris's home to begin with.
Revised:  Laval Police Chief Jean-Pierre Gariépy expressed dismay at the verdict , citing the reasons why the officers were at Mr. Parasiris's home to begin with.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Laval police Chief Jean-Pierre Gariépy expressed dismay at the verdict , citing the reasons why the officers were at Mr. Parasiris's home to begin with.
Revised:  Laval police Chief Jean-Pierre Gariépy expressed dismay at the verdict and cited the reasons for the officers being at Parasiris's home to begin with.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Chief Gariépy assured that he would suggest to the Quebec's Public Security Department that they review the policies and  procedures behind the use of dynamic entry on search warrants to avoid such complications again in the near future.
Revised:  Chief Gariépy assured that he would suggest to the Quebec's Public Security Department o review the policies and procedures behind the use of dynamic entry on search warrants to avoid such complications again in the near future.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Chief Gariépy assured that he would suggest to the Quebec's Public Security Department that they review the policies and  procedures behind the use of dynamic entry on search warrants to avoid such complications again in the near future.
Revised:  Chief Gariépy assured that he would suggest to the Quebec's Public Security Department that they review the policies and the procedures behind the use of dynamic entry on search warrants to avoid such complications again in the near future.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Chief Gariépy assured that he would suggest to the Quebec's Public Security Department that they review the policies and  procedures behind the use of dynamic entry on search warrants to avoid such complications again in the near future.
Revised:  Chief Gariépy assured that he would suggest to the Quebec's Public Security Department that they review the policies and procedures behind the use of dynamic entry on search warrants to avoid such complications in the near future.
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Original:  Thousands of police officers from Quebec and elsewhere in Canada marched on the day of Daniel Tessier's funeral to protest his death.
Revised:  Thousands of police officers from Quebec and elsewhere in Canada marched on the day of Tessier's funeral to protest his death.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Mr. Parasiris claims  that the police are trying to cover their mistakes in his case , and attempting to frame him as a drug kingpin.
Revised:  that the police are trying to cover their mistakes in his case , and attempting to frame him as a drug kingpin.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Mr. Parasiris claims  that the police are trying to cover their mistakes in his case , and attempting to frame him as a drug kingpin.
Revised:  Mr. Parasiris claims that the police were trying to cover their mistakes in his case , and attempting to frame him as a drug kingpin.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Mr. Parasiris claims  that the police are trying to cover their mistakes in his case , and attempting to frame him as a drug kingpin.
Revised:  Mr. Parasiris claims that the police are trying to cover their mistakes in his case and attempting to frame him as a drug kingpin.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He is also considering filing a lawsuit against the Laval police for defamation of character.
Revised:  He also considered filing a lawsuit against the Laval police for defamation of character.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  On Tuesday July 27, 2010, police in Laval , Quebec announced they were countersuing Mr. Parasiris , believing that there was enough evidence to pursue him for damages.
Revised:  On July 27, 2010, police in Laval , Quebec announced they were countersuing Mr. Parasiris , believing that there was enough evidence to pursue him for damages.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  On Tuesday July 27, 2010, police in Laval , Quebec announced they were countersuing Mr. Parasiris , believing that there was enough evidence to pursue him for damages.
Revised:  On Tuesday July 27, 2010, the Laval police announced that they were countersuing Mr. Parasiris , believing that there was enough evidence to pursue him for damages.
Edit intent: clarity