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Original:  May 27, 1923) is an American politician, diplomat, and geopolitical consultant who served as 56th United States Secretary of State and 8th National Security Advisor under the presidential administrations of Richard Nixon and Gerald Ford.
Revised:  May 27, 1923) is an American politician, diplomat, and geopolitical consultant who served as 56th United States Secretary of State and National Security Advisor under the presidential administrations of Richard Nixon and Gerald Ford.
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Original:  Lochia discharge typically continues for 4 to 6 weeks after childbirth, which is known as the postpartum period.
Revised:  Lochia discharge typically continues for 4 to 6 weeks after childbirth, the time period known as the postpartum period.
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Original: In the field of obstetrics, lochia is the vaginal discharge after giving birth (puerperium) containing blood, mucus, and uterine tissue.
Revised: In the field of obstetrics, lochia is the vaginal discharge after giving birth , containing blood, mucus, and uterine tissue.
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Original:  Lochia discharge typically continues for 4 to 6 weeks after childbirth, the time period known as the postpartum period .
Revised:  Lochia discharge typically continues for four to six weeks after childbirth, the time period known as the postpartum period .
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Original:  Lochia discharge typically continues for 4 to 6 weeks after childbirth, the time period known as the postpartum period .
Revised:  Lochia discharge typically continues for 4 to 6 weeks after childbirth, a time known as the postpartum period .
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Original:  It is sterile for the first 2 days, but not so by the third or fourth day, as the uterus begins to be colonized by vaginal commensals such as non-hemolytic streptococci and E. coli.
Revised:  Lochia is sterile for the first 2 days, but not so by the third or fourth day, as the uterus begins to be colonized by vaginal commensals such as non-hemolytic streptococci and E. coli.
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Original:  It is sterile for the first 2 days, but not so by the third or fourth day, as the uterus begins to be colonized by vaginal commensals such as non-hemolytic streptococci and E. coli.
Revised:  It is sterile for the first two days, but not so by the third or fourth day, as the uterus begins to be colonized by vaginal commensals such as non-hemolytic streptococci and E. coli.
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Original:  Note: Ambulant patients < 2 weeks, Moribund Patients > 2 weeks, Preterm Delivery < 2 weeks, Twin Delivery > 2 weeks.
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Original:  BMC Pregnancy Childbirth. 2016;16(1):147. Published 2016 Jul 5. doi:10.1186/s12884-016-0938-4
Revised:  BMC Pregnancy Childbirth. 2016;16(1):147. Published July 5 2016.
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Original:  Heavy cruenta typically lasts no longer than 3 to 10 days after birth  before easing to light "spotting".
Revised:  Heavy cruenta typically lasts no longer than 3 to 10 days after birth , before easing to light "spotting".
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Original:  Any offensive odor or change to a greenish color indicates contamination by organisms such as chlamydia or saprophytic .
Revised:  Any offensive odor or change to a greenish color indicates contamination by organisms such as chlamydia or staph saprophyticus .
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Original: Lochia rubra (or cruenta) is the first discharge, Composed of blood, shreds of fetal membranes, decidua, vernix caseosa, lanugo and membranes.
Revised: Lochia rubra (or cruenta) is the first discharge, composed of blood, shreds of fetal membranes, decidua, vernix caseosa, lanugo and membranes.
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Original:  It has been suggested that the early Slavic peoples and languages may have originated in the region of Polesia, which includes the area around the Belarus–Ukraine border, parts of Western Russia, and parts of far Eastern Poland. 1
Revised:  It has been suggested that the early Slavic peoples and languages may have originated in the region of Polesia, which includes the area around the Belarus–Ukraine border, parts of Western Russia, and parts of far Eastern Poland. 
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Original:  Poland joined the European Union as part of its enlargement in 2004.
Revised:  Poland joined the European Union as part of its enlargement in URL
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Original: The history of Poland () spans over a thousand years, from medieval tribes, Christianization and monarchy;
Revised: The history of Poland spans over a thousand years, from medieval tribes, Christianization and monarchy;
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Original: Application One way in which cultural emphasis shows is talking about the weather.
Revised: Application One way in which cultural emphasis is exemplified is a populace talks about the weather.
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Original:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder  , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
Revised:  For example, in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
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Original:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder  , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
Revised:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, a large collection of words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
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Original:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder  , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
Revised:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzard , sleeting, snowdrift, powder , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
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Original:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder  , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
Revised:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder snow , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
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Original:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder  , packed snow, fresh snow , etc .
Revised:  For example, if you live in a place where it is cold and it snows a lot, you might have several words to describe the snow : For example: whiteout, blizzarding , sleeting, snowdrift, powder , packed snow, fresh snow .
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Original:  Or if you live in a place where it is how, you have words to describe that whether as well For example: dry heat, muggy, humid, sticky, monsoon season, sweltering , etc.
Revised:  In a place where it is how, you have words to describe that whether as well For example: dry heat, muggy, humid, sticky, monsoon season, sweltering , etc.
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Original:  Or if you live in a place where it is how, you have words to describe that whether as well For example: dry heat, muggy, humid, sticky, monsoon season, sweltering , etc.
Revised:  Or if you live in a place where it is hot, a cornucopia of associated terms would be expected. For example: dry heat, muggy, humid, sticky, monsoon season, sweltering , etc.
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Original:  This means that the vocabulary people use in a culture indicates what is  to that group of people.
Revised:  This means that the vocabulary people use in a culture indicates what is important to that group of people.
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Original: Cultural emphasis is defined as an important aspect of a culture which is often reflected though language and, more specifically, vocabulary (Ottenheimer, 2006, p. 266).
Revised: Cultural emphasis is an important aspect of a culture which is often reflected though language and, more specifically, vocabulary (Ottenheimer, 2006, p. 266).
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Original:  Cultural emphasis is an important aspect of a culture which is often reflected though language and, more specifically, vocabulary (Ottenheimer, 2006, p. 266).
Revised:  Cultural emphasis is an important aspect of a culture which is often reflected though language and, more specifically, vocabulary .
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Original:  Background The idea of cultural emphasis is rooted form the work of Franz Boas, who is considered to be one of the founders of American Anthropology (Ottenheimer, 2006, p. 15).
Revised:  Background The idea of cultural emphasis is rooted form the work of Franz Boas, who is considered to be one of the founders of American Anthropology .
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Original:  Two months later, on 19 August 1960, the Sudanese Republic leaders in the Mali Federation mobilized the army  and Senegal leaders in the federation retaliated by mobilizing the gendarmerie (national police) which resulted in a tense stand-off and the withdrawal from the federation by Senegal the next day.
Revised:  Two months later, on 19 August 1960, the Sudanese Republic leaders in the Mali Federation mobilized the army , and Senegal leaders in the federation retaliated by mobilizing the gendarmerie (national police) which resulted in a tense stand-off and the withdrawal from the federation by Senegal the next day.
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Original:  Two months later, on 19 August 1960, the Sudanese Republic leaders in the Mali Federation mobilized the army  and Senegal leaders in the federation retaliated by mobilizing the gendarmerie (national police) which resulted in a tense stand-off and the withdrawal from the federation by Senegal the next day.
Revised:  Two months later, on 19 August 1960, the Sudanese Republic leaders in the Mali Federation mobilized the army and Senegal leaders in the federation retaliated by mobilizing the gendarmerie (national police) ; this resulted in a tense stand-off and the withdrawal from the federation by Senegal the next day.
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Original:  Two months later, on 19 August 1960, the Sudanese Republic leaders in the Mali Federation mobilized the army  and Senegal leaders in the federation retaliated by mobilizing the gendarmerie (national police) which resulted in a tense stand-off and the withdrawal from the federation by Senegal the next day.
Revised:  Two months later, on 19 August 1960, the Sudanese Republic leaders in the Mali Federation mobilized the army and Senegal leaders in the federation retaliated by mobilizing the gendarmerie (national police) which resulted in a tense stand-off , and led to the withdrawal from the federation by Senegal the next day.
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Original: The Mali Federation () was a federation in West Africa linking the French colonies of Senegal and the Sudanese Republic (or French Sudan) for a period of only two months in 1960.
Revised: The Mali Federation () was a federation in West Africa linking the French colonies of Senegal and the Sudanese Republic (or French Sudan) for two months in 1960.
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Original:  More serious than ethnic or linguistic differences though were some of the results of the design of the federation.
Revised:  More serious than ethnic or linguistic differences , however, were some of the results of the design of the federation.
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Original:  it also resulted in political spillover  as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties  which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party  having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
Revised:  it also resulted in political spillover , as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
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Original:  it also resulted in political spillover  as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties  which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party  having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
Revised:  it also resulted in political spillover as political disputes moved from one arena to another . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
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Original:  it also resulted in political spillover  as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties  which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party  having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
Revised:  it also resulted in political spillover as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties , which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
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Original:  it also resulted in political spillover  as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties  which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party  having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
Revised:  it also resulted in political spillover as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party , having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
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Original:  it also resulted in political spillover  as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties  which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party  having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
Revised:  it also resulted in political spillover as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party having achieved political dominance , but the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
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Original:  it also resulted in political spillover  as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties  which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party  having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances in order to maintain authority.
Revised:  it also resulted in political spillover as political disputes moved from one arena to another throughout the organization . Similarly, the PFA tried to combine two political parties which were in very different situations with the French Sudan political party having achieved political dominance while the Senegal party needed an elaborate and complex arrangement of alliances to maintain authority.
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Original:  In addition, some of the aspects left vague in the first discussions became key issues of debate between the political leaders of Senegal and French Sudan as their articulation became more important : including armed forces, development of an indigenous bureaucracy, the strength of the federal government , and the precise relationship with France.
Revised:  In addition, some of the aspects left vague in the first discussions became key issues of debate between the political leaders of Senegal and French Sudan as their articulation became more important , including armed forces, development of an indigenous bureaucracy, the strength of the federal government , and the precise relationship with France.
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Original:  In addition, some of the aspects left vague in the first discussions became key issues of debate between the political leaders of Senegal and French Sudan as their articulation became more important : including armed forces, development of an indigenous bureaucracy, the strength of the federal government , and the precise relationship with France.
Revised:  In addition, some of the aspects left vague in the first discussions became key issues of debate between the political leaders of Senegal and French Sudan as their articulation became more important : including armed forces, development of an indigenous bureaucracy, the strength of the federal government and the precise relationship with France.
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Original:  Finally, different visions for the colony between Senghor and Keïta proved very difficult to mediate: Keïta, after the dissolution of the federation, claimed that he pursued socialism while Senghor pushed a bourgeoisie agenda.
Revised:  Finally, different visions for the colony between Senghor and Keïta proved very difficult to mediate: Keïta, after the dissolution of the federation, claimed that he pursued socialism , but Senghor pushed a bourgeoisie agenda.
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Original:  French Sudan began to push for a single executive in the federation with significant independent authority , Senegal preferred to maintain the parity principle as it had been developed in 1959 and  restrain the power of any president.
Revised:  French Sudan began to push for a single executive in the federation with significant independent authority . Senegal preferred to maintain the parity principle as it had been developed in 1959 and restrain the power of any president.
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Original:  French Sudan began to push for a single executive in the federation with significant independent authority , Senegal preferred to maintain the parity principle as it had been developed in 1959 and  restrain the power of any president.
Revised:  French Sudan began to push for a single executive in the federation with significant independent authority , Senegal preferred to maintain the parity principle as it had been developed in 1959 and to restrain the power of any president.
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Original:  When a PFA congress to decide the issue ended in a deadlock, the PFA members from outside the federation were called in to mediate and they recommended the creation of a single executive to be appointed by an equal number of representatives from Senegal and French Sudan , but also that the taxation would no longer be widely shared between the two colonies (a key Senegal position).
Revised:  When a PFA congress to decide the issue ended in a deadlock, its members from outside the federation were called in to mediate and they recommended the creation of a single executive to be appointed by an equal number of representatives from Senegal and French Sudan , but also that the taxation would no longer be widely shared between the two colonies (a key Senegal position).
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Original:  When a PFA congress to decide the issue ended in a deadlock, the PFA members from outside the federation were called in to mediate and they recommended the creation of a single executive to be appointed by an equal number of representatives from Senegal and French Sudan , but also that the taxation would no longer be widely shared between the two colonies (a key Senegal position).
Revised:  When a PFA congress to decide the issue ended in a deadlock, the PFA members from outside the federation were called in to mediate and they recommended the creation of a single executive to be appointed by an equal number of representatives from Senegal and French Sudan but also that the taxation would no longer be widely shared between the two colonies (a key Senegal position).
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Original:  When French Sudan attempted to remove a single military base within its territories, this was interpreted as an attempt to eject the French from the entire territory, which was viewed with suspicion by both Senegal and France.
Revised:  When French Sudan attempted to remove a single military base within its territories, it was interpreted as an attempt to eject the French from the entire territory, which was viewed with suspicion by both Senegal and France.
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Original:  The tensions hit their high point in August 1960 in preparation for the election of the President of the Mali Federation.
Revised:  Tensions hit their high point in August 1960 in preparation for the election of the President of the Mali Federation.
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Original:  An investigation by Senghor's political allies found evidence that French Sudan emissaries had visited Sy's uncle, himself a Muslim political leader.
Revised:  An investigation by Senghor's political allies found evidence that French Sudan emissaries had visited Sy's uncle, who was a Muslim political leader.
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Original:  At about the same time, Keïta, as Premier of the Mali Federation, began meeting formally with many of the Muslim political leaders of Senegal , although there is no evidence of any discussion of undermining Senghor's leadership.
Revised:  About the same time, Keïta, as Premier of the Mali Federation, began meeting formally with many of the Muslim political leaders of Senegal , although there is no evidence of any discussion of undermining Senghor's leadership.
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Original:  At about the same time, Keïta, as Premier of the Mali Federation, began meeting formally with many of the Muslim political leaders of Senegal , although there is no evidence of any discussion of undermining Senghor's leadership.
Revised:  At about the same time, Keïta, as Premier of the Mali Federation, began meeting formally with many of the Muslim political leaders of Senegal although there is no evidence of any discussion of undermining Senghor's leadership.
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Original:  These questions to the various military units resulted in panic by Keïta and the French Sudanese politicians.
Revised:  Those questions to the various military units resulted in panic by Keïta and the French Sudanese politicians.
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