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Original:  The last Canadian-born veteran, John Babcock lives in the US . Gladys Stokes Luxford Powers born in Lewisham, County of London  joined the WAAC at the age of 15 as a baracks waitress.
Revised:  The last Canadian-born veteran, John Babcock , currently resides in the United States . Gladys Stokes Luxford Powers born in Lewisham, County of London joined the WAAC at the age of 15 as a baracks waitress.
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Original:  The last Canadian-born veteran, John Babcock lives in the US . Gladys Stokes Luxford Powers born in Lewisham, County of London  joined the WAAC at the age of 15 as a baracks waitress.
Revised:  The last Canadian-born veteran, John Babcock lives in the US . Gladys Stokes Luxford Powers born in Lewisham, County of London and joined the WAAC at the age of 15 as a baracks waitress.
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Original:  The last Canadian-born veteran, John Babcock lives in the US . Gladys Stokes Luxford Powers born in Lewisham, County of London  joined the WAAC at the age of 15 as a baracks waitress.
Revised:  The last Canadian-born veteran, John Babcock lives in the US . Gladys Stokes Luxford Powers born in Lewisham, County of London joined the WAAC at the age of 15 as a barracks waitress.
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Original:  The pair later divorced , Powers married three more times.
Revised:  The pair later divorced . Powers married three more times.
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Original: The world's last remaining female World War I  veteran Gladys Powers died on Friday age 109.
Revised: The world's last remaining female World War I (WWI) veteran Gladys Powers died on Friday age 109.
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Original:  She was also the last World War I veteran living in Canada.
Revised:  She was also the last WWI veteran living in Canada.
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Original:  Gladys Stokes Luxford Powers born in Lewisham, County of London  and joined the WAAC at the age of 15 as a barracks waitress.
Revised:  Gladys Stokes Luxford Powers born in Lewisham, County of London , England and joined the WAAC at the age of 15 as a barracks waitress.
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Original:  She later transferred to the WRAF . It was during her service that she met her first husband, a Canadian soldier named Edward Luxford, in a hospital while she visited her brother.
Revised:  She later transferred to the Women's Royal Air Force . It was during her service that she met her first husband, a Canadian soldier named Edward Luxford, in a hospital while she visited her brother.
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Original:  There are 12 WWI veterans remaining worldwide, with a further four World War I-era veterans;
Revised:  There are twelve WWI veterans remaining worldwide, with a further four World War I-era veterans;
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Original:  There are 12 WWI veterans remaining worldwide, with a further four World War I-era veterans;
Revised:  There are 12 WWI veterans remaining worldwide, with a further four WWI-era veterans;
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Original:  A lap earlier Kimi had an incident on a second pit-stop, when he knocked-off the mechanic fueling his car after he twitched earlier trying to beat Kovalainen, who was also on his pit-stop   
Revised:  A lap earlier Kimi had an incident on a second pit-stop, when he knocked-off the mechanic fueling his car after he twitched earlier trying to beat Kovalainen, who was also on his pit-stop . 
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Original:  The two main parties that make the coalition, the Pakistan Peoples Party (PPP) and  PML-N coalition ended after a party conference where they could not reach agreement on two issues .
Revised:  The two main parties that make the coalition, the Pakistan Peoples Party (PPP) and PML-N disagree on two issues .
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Original:  The PML-N will nominate former Supreme Court chief justice, Saeeduzzaman Siddiqui .
Revised:  The PML-N nominated former Supreme Court chief justice, Saeeduzzaman Siddiqui .
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Original: The governing coalition of Pakistan split  Monday after Nawaz Sharif, former Pakistani Prime Minister, pulled his party,  Pakistan Muslim League (N) (PML-N), out of the government.
Revised: The governing coalition of Pakistan split on Monday after Nawaz Sharif, former Pakistani Prime Minister, pulled his party, Pakistan Muslim League (N) (PML-N), out of the government.
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Original: The governing coalition of Pakistan split  Monday after Nawaz Sharif, former Pakistani Prime Minister, pulled his party,  Pakistan Muslim League (N) (PML-N), out of the government.
Revised: The governing coalition of Pakistan split Monday after Nawaz Sharif, former Pakistani Prime Minister, pulled his party, the Pakistan Muslim League (N) (PML-N), out of the government.
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Original:  The PPP and the PML-N disagree on two  issues: the reinstatement of judges fired by former President Pervez Musharraf and a nominee to replace Musharraf for the 6 Sept. 2008 election .
Revised:  The PPP and the PML-N disagree on two main issues: the reinstatement of judges fired by former President Pervez Musharraf and a nominee to replace Musharraf for the 6 Sept. 2008 election .
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Original:  The PPP and the PML-N disagree on two  issues: the reinstatement of judges fired by former President Pervez Musharraf and a nominee to replace Musharraf for the 6 Sept. 2008 election .
Revised:  The PPP and the PML-N disagree on two issues: the reinstatement of judges fired by former President Pervez Musharraf and a nominee to replace Musharraf for the 6 , 2008.
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Original:   The PML-N nominated former Supreme Court chief justice, Saeeduzzaman Siddiqui, while the PPP nominated Zardari.
Revised:  For President, the PML-N nominated former Supreme Court chief justice, Saeeduzzaman Siddiqui, while the PPP nominated Zardari.
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Original: The PPP opposes the restoration of judges, who they believe may rule the amnesty which allowed PPP party leader Asif Zardari and his late wife Benazir Bhutto to return to the country as invalid .
Revised: The PPP opposes the restoration of judges, who they believe invalidate the ruling which allowed PPP party leader Asif Zardari and his late wife Benazir Bhutto to return to the country as invalid .
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Original: The PPP opposes the restoration of judges, who they believe may rule the amnesty which allowed PPP party leader Asif Zardari and his late wife Benazir Bhutto to return to the country as invalid .
Revised: The PPP opposes the restoration of judges, who they believe may rule the amnesty which allowed PPP party leader Asif Zardari and his late wife Benazir Bhutto to return to the country .
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Original:  If the amnesty were to be nullified, Zardari could be indicted on corruption charges stemming from incidents as far back a 1990 charge of blackmail and as recently of March of this year when a corruption case in an English court was dropped .
Revised:  If the amnesty were to be nullified, Zardari could be indicted on corruption charges stemming from incidents as far back as 1990. Zardari was also accused of corruption in the United Kingdom but the case was dropped in March .
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Original:  For President , the PML-N nominated former Supreme Court chief justice, Saeeduzzaman Siddiqui, while the PPP nominated Zardari.
Revised:  For the presidential election , the PML-N nominated former Supreme Court chief justice, Saeeduzzaman Siddiqui, while the PPP nominated Zardari.
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Original:  Other people who filed paperwork are: Sakhawat Ali, Advocate Shakil Ahmed, Dr Mian Ehsan Bari, Ameer Ali Patti Walla and Mirza Asif Baig
Revised:  Other people who have filed paperwork to stand in the elections are: Sakhawat Ali, Advocate Shakil Ahmed, Dr Mian Ehsan Bari, Ameer Ali Patti Walla and Mirza Asif Baig
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Original: The PPP opposes the restoration of judges, who they believe  invalidate the ruling which allowed PPP party leader Asif Zardari and his late wife Benazir Bhutto to return to the country.
Revised: The PPP opposes the restoration of judges, who they believe would invalidate the ruling which allowed PPP party leader Asif Zardari and his late wife Benazir Bhutto to return to the country.
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Original: Obama has also recently added Senator Joe Biden to his nomination ticket.
Revised: Obama has also recently added Joe Biden to his nomination ticket.
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Original:  And only 54\% of registered voters believe that Joe  is an excellent or good choice for Obama's running mate.
Revised:  And only 54\% of registered voters believe that Joe Biden is an excellent or good choice for Obama's running mate.
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Original: Obama has also recently added  Joe Biden to his nomination ticket.
Revised: Obama has also recently added Senator Joe Biden to his nomination ticket.
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Original:  And only 54\% of registered voters believe that Joe Biden is an excellent or good choice for Obama's running mate   .
Revised:  And only 54\% of registered voters believe that Joe Biden is an excellent or good choice for Obama's running mate . .
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Original:  The lead for Obama has dropped since mid August when it reached its peak for the month at a 3.1\% margin.
Revised:  The lead for Obama has dropped since mid-August when it reached its peak for the month at a 3.1\% margin.
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Original:  Obama has also recently added Senator Joe Biden to his nomination ticket.
Revised:  Obama has recently added Senator Joe Biden to his nomination ticket.
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Original:  And Clinton's supporters are split over Obamachoosing Biden instead of Clinton as the vice presidential nominee.
Revised:  Clinton's supporters are split over Obamachoosing Biden instead of Clinton as the vice presidential nominee.
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Original:  And Clinton's supporters are split over Obamachoosing Biden instead of Clinton as the vice presidential nominee.
Revised:  And Clinton's supporters are split on Obama's choice of Biden over Clinton as vice presidential nominee.
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Original:  Polls show that less than half of Hillary Clinton supporters are sold on Obama as the Democratic presidential nominee.
Revised:  Polls show that fewer than half of Hillary Clinton supporters are sold on Obama as the Democratic presidential nominee.
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Original: Wikinews has learned through an investigation that the staffs for 2008 United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain have been spending some of their time making questionable edits to Wikipedia, the open content , online encyclopedia.
Revised: Wikinews has learned through an investigation that the staffs for 2008 United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain have been spending some of their time making questionable edits to Wikipedia, the open content online encyclopedia.
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Original: These edits come just days after a Wikipedia editor had noticed that it appeared the McCain campaign lifted background information from Wikipedia for an August 11 speech about the Georgian-Russian crisis.
Revised: These edits come just days after a Wikipedia editor alleged the McCain campaign lifted background information from Wikipedia for an August 11 speech about the Georgian-Russian crisis.
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Original:  McCain gave his speech in Erie, Pennsylvania and was speaking to citizens, giving a warning to Russia stating, "Russian President Medvedev and Prime Minister Putin must understand the severe, long-term negative consequences that their government’s actions will have for Russia’s relationship with the U.S. and Europe."
Revised:  McCain gave a warning to Russia stating, "Russian President Medvedev and Prime Minister Putin must understand the severe, long-term negative consequences that their government’s actions will have for Russia’s relationship with the U.S. and Europe."
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Original: Wikinews has learned through an investigation that the staffs for 2008 United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain have been spending some of their time making questionable edits to Wikipedia, the open content online encyclopedia.
Revised: Wikinews has determined through an investigation that the staffs for 2008 United States presidential candidates Barack Obama and John McCain have been spending some of their time making questionable edits to Wikipedia, the open content online encyclopedia.
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Original:  McCain's campaign staff favored less, in most cases  removing unflattering information regarding certain articles.
Revised:  McCain's campaign staff in most cases removing unflattering information regarding certain articles.
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Original:  McCain's campaign staff favored less, in most cases  removing unflattering information regarding certain articles.
Revised:  McCain's campaign staff favored less, in most cases is removing unflattering information regarding certain articles.
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Original:  McCain's campaign staff favored less, in most cases  removing unflattering information regarding certain articles.
Revised:  McCain's campaign staff favored less, in most cases removing unflattering information in certain articles.
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Original:  One staff member using the IP address 208.116.214.66 apparently didn't like Vanilla Ice saying on May 31, 2007, "Most recently, Winkle was the target of an unfortunate assault when, during a concert in Des Moines, Iowa, an Aryan-looking, bi-curious campaign staffer named Tom Vietor hurled an empty bottle at the performer's skull."
Revised:  One staff member using the IP address 208.116.214.66 apparently did not like Vanilla Ice saying on May 31, 2007, "Most recently, Winkle was the target of an unfortunate assault when, during a concert in Des Moines, Iowa, an Aryan-looking, bi-curious campaign staffer named Tom Vietor hurled an empty bottle at the performer's skull."
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Original:  This discovery also comes on the beginning of the 2008 Democratic National Convention which began on Monday in Denver, Colorado where Obama is accepting his nomination for the presidential bid.
Revised:  This discovery occurred at the beginning of the 2008 Democratic National Convention which began on Monday in Denver, Colorado where Obama is accepting his nomination for the presidential bid.
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Original:  Wikinews has e-mailed both campaigns, but as of publishing this report, we have yet to receive a response .
Revised:  Wikinews has e-mailed both campaigns, but as of publishing this report, there have been no responses .
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Original:  The investigation also found that Obama's campaign staff seems to be removing more questionable edits more often than they are making them.
Revised:  The investigation also found that Obama's campaign staff seems to be removing questionable edits more often than they are making them.
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Original:  They originally intended to test for possible human magnetic field detection by studying the orientation of sleeping bags in outdoor campers, but it proved difficult to obtain data because humans usually slept under tents.
Revised:  The team originally intended to test for possible human magnetic field detection by studying the orientation of sleeping bags in outdoor campers, but it proved difficult to obtain data because humans usually slept under tents.
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Original:  Other scientists find the result intriguing.
Revised:  Other scientists found the results of the study intriguing.
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Original:  Peter August of the University of Rhode Island in Kingston, commented , "I was really amazed at the consistency with which they found north-facing cows and deer.
Revised:  Peter August of the University of Rhode Island in Kingston, commented : "I was really amazed at the consistency with which they found north-facing cows and deer.
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Original:  Image:Uni-DuE Essen5.jpg|University of Duisburg-Essen, Germany Hynek Burda of the University of Duisburg-Essen in Germany led the team that announced the unconfirmed study.
Revised:  Hynek Burda of the University of Duisburg-Essen in Germany led the team that announced the unconfirmed study.
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Original: June 5, 2005 Computer Associates are warning of a current three pronged, co-ordinated malware attack on computers that are using Microsoft Windows and are connected to the Internet.
Revised:  Computer Associates are warning of a current three pronged, co-ordinated malware attack on computers that are using Microsoft Windows and are connected to the Internet.
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Original: Mitgleider: Once the first two Trojan horses have largely erradicated any possibility that the target will be able to defend itself, this one finishes the job.
Revised: Mitgleider: Once the first two Trojan horses have largely eliminated any possibility that the target will be able to defend itself, this one finishes the job.
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Original:  According to previous estimates based on data from 1994, it was believe that there was only 985 million people in poverty in 2004 and 1.5 billion in 1981.
Revised:  According to last estimate based on data from 1994, it was believe that there was only 985 million people in poverty in 2004 and 1.5 billion in 1981.
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Original:  Due to population increase, the number of people have nearly doubled to 380 million  
Revised:  Due to population increase, the number of people have nearly doubled to 380 million . 
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Original:  According to the World Bank, the developing world is on track to meet its goal to cut poverty in half by 2015. 
Revised:  The report concludes that the developing world is on track to meet its goal to cut poverty in half by 2015. 
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Original:  The study finds that there are currently 1.4 billion people who are living below $ 1.25 a dayin 2005.
Revised:  The study finds that there are currently 1.4 billion people who are living below $ 1.25 per day.
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Original:  This is down from 1.9 billion in 1981, which equal half of the population in the developing world.
Revised:  This is down from 1.9 billion in 1981, which equals half of the population in the developing world.
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Original:  According to one of the report's authors Martin Ravallion, Director of the Development Research Group at the World Bank, “ The new estimates are a major advance in poverty measurement because they are based on far better price data for assuring that the poverty lines are comparable across countries.
Revised:  According to one of the report's authors Martin Ravallion, Director of the Development Research Group at the World Bank, " The new estimates are a major advance in poverty measurement because they are based on far better price data for assuring that the poverty lines are comparable across countries.
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Original:  Data from household surveys have also improved in terms of country coverage, data access, and timeliness. ”
Revised:  Data from household surveys have also improved in terms of country coverage, data access, and timeliness. "
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Original: Image:Slum and dirty river.jpg| A slum in India, which has seen a decrease in the poverty rate.
Revised:  A slum in India, which has seen a decrease in the poverty rate.
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Original: A slum in India, which has seen a decrease in the poverty rate.
Revised: A slum in India, which has seen a substantial decrease in its poverty rate.
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Original: This new information comes in the wake of what is purported to be the leaked minutes of a 2002 meeting between top US and UK government officials, in which  Matthew Rycroft reported "Bush wanted to remove Saddam, through military action, justified by the conjunction of terrorism and WMD. But the intelligence and facts were being fixed around the policy."
Revised: This new information comes in the wake of what is purported to be the leaked minutes of a 2002 meeting between top US and UK government officials, in which w: Matthew Rycroft reported "Bush wanted to remove Saddam, through military action, justified by the conjunction of terrorism and WMD. But the intelligence and facts were being fixed around the policy."
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Original: This new information comes in the wake of what is purported to be the leaked minutes of a 2002 meeting between top US and UK government officials, in which w: Matthew Rycroft reported "Bush wanted to remove Saddam, through military action, justified by the conjunction of terrorism and WMD. But the intelligence and facts were being fixed around the policy."
Revised: This new information comes in the wake of what is purported to be the leaked minutes of a 2002 meeting between top US and UK government officials, in which Matthew Rycroft reported "Bush wanted to remove Saddam, through military action, justified by the conjunction of terrorism and WMD. But the intelligence and facts were being fixed around the policy."
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Original: According to multiple reports, during a 2002 meeting between National Security Advisor Condoleeza Rice and a group of US Senators, President Bush interrupted and changed the subject to Iraq.
Revised: According to multiple reports, during a 2002 meeting between National Security Advisor Condoleezza Rice and a group of US Senators, President Bush interrupted and changed the subject to Iraq.
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Original:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 when Hamas  elections and took control of Gaza.
Revised:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 when Hamas won elections and took control of Gaza.
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Original:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 when Hamas won elections and took control of Gaza .
Revised:  He is said to have been in violation of a law which forbids Israelis from traveling to Gaza due to a blockade enacted in 2007 when Hamas won elections and took control of the Gaza Strip .
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Original: "He [was] questioned at the police station in Sderot for entering the Gaza Strip in defiance of a military decree banning Israeli citizens from doing so," stated Micky Rosenfeld  a spokesman for the Israeli Police.
Revised: "He [was] questioned at the police station in Sderot for entering the Gaza Strip in defiance of a military decree banning Israeli citizens from doing so," stated Micky Rosenfeld , a spokesman for the Israeli Police.
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Original:  Halper was later "conditionally" released  and police will decide if he should be rearrested and prosecuted further , at the end of their investigation.
Revised:  Halper was later "conditionally" released , and police will decide if he should be rearrested and prosecuted further , at the end of their investigation.
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Original:  Halper was later "conditionally" released  and police will decide if he should be rearrested and prosecuted further , at the end of their investigation.
Revised:  Halper was later "conditionally" released and police will decide if he should be rearrested and prosecuted further at the end of their investigation.
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Original:  Halper and Booth are both belong to an activist group of international participants who were attempting to challenge the blockade and enter Israel  and police say their defiance "constitutes the legitimization of a terrorist organization."
Revised:  Halper and Booth both belong to an activist group of international participants who were attempting to challenge the blockade and enter Israel and police say their defiance "constitutes the legitimization of a terrorist organization."
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