wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Around 60 cases of overheating iPods have been reported, causing a total of six fires and leaving four people with minor burns.
Revised:  Around 60 cases of malfunctioning iPods overheating have been reported, causing a total of six fires and leaving four people with minor burns.
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Original:  Japan's Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry , or METI, said that it had been aware of 27 accidents related to the devices.
Revised:  Japan's Ministry of Economy, Trade and Industry (METI) said that it had been aware of 27 accidents related to the devices.
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Original:  According to the company , other iPod Nanos did not have the issue, which occurs during the recharging process..
Revised:  According to Apple , other iPod Nanos did not have the issue, which occurs during the recharging process..
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Original:  Dr. Tim Uyeki, an epidemiologist for the US Centers for Disease Control, says, '' you have the ingredients in Asia right now for a public health disaster."
Revised:  Dr. Tim Uyeki, an epidemiologist for the US Centers for Disease Control, says, " you have the ingredients in Asia right now for a public health disaster."
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Original:  Within weeks, however, the epidemic ended.
Revised:  Within weeks, however, the edpidemic ended.
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Original:  So far this virus strain has not evolved the ability to pass directly from human to human, but that possibility becomes more likely as the bird  pandemic continues and humans remain in contact with chickens, ducks, and other birds.
Revised:  So far this virus strain has not evolved the ability to pass directly from human to human, but that possibility becomes more likely as the bird flu pandemic continues and humans remain in contact with chickens, ducks, and other birds.
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Original: Netanyahu stated that he intended to form a government as soon as possible: "Reality is not waiting for us.
Revised: Netanyahu stated he intended to form a government as soon as possible: "Reality is not waiting for us.
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Original: Netanyahu stated he intended to form a government as soon as possible: "Reality is not waiting for us .
Revised: Netanyahu stated he intended to form a government as soon as possible: "Reality is not waiting for us ...
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Original: Binyamin Netanyahu The right-wing Party won a  majority in yesterday's elections in .
Revised: Binyamin Netanyahu The right-wing Party won a relative majority in yesterday's elections in .
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Original: The turnout in the election was 71.8\%, the highest since 1999 (when it reached 78.7\%).
Revised: The turnout in the election was 71.8\%, the highest since 1999.
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Original:  While Netanyahu campaigned primarily on the issue of national security (including a promise that if elected, he would not allow the Palestinians to get statehood), many voters have been focussed on domestic matters : housing and the growing cost of living, which has remained a live issue since protests in 2011.
Revised:  While Netanyahu campaigned primarily on the issue of national security (including a promise that if elected, he would not allow the Palestinians to get statehood), many voters have been focussed on domestic matters , such as housing and the growing cost of living, which has remained a live issue since protests in 2011.
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Original:  44-year-old Robert Coello was apparantly kicked to death in his cell in HMP Grendon, Buckinghamshire, UK .
Revised:  44-year-old Robert Coello was , apparently, kicked to death in his cell in HMP Grendon, Buckinghamshire, UK .
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Original:  44-year-old Robert Coello was apparantly kicked to death in his cell in HMP Grendon, Buckinghamshire, UK .
Revised:  44-year-old Robert Coello was apparantly kicked to death in his cell in HMP Grendon, Buckinghamshire, England .
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Original: Coello was found lying in a pool of blood by prison staff at the start of this month;
Revised: Prison staff found Coello lying in a pool of blood by prison staff at the start of this month;
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Original: Coello was found lying in a pool of blood by prison staff at the start of this month;
Revised: Coello was found lying in a pool of blood on the first of this month;
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Original:  he was hospitalised but died that day.
Revised:  he was rushed to hospital, but died later that day.
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Original:  His death is thought to be the first in Grendon's history;
Revised:  The death is thought to be the first in Grendon's history;
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Original:  the prison was set up  as a therapeutic experiment in 1962 and is thought to be one of Britain's safest,  holding and treating up to 235 inmates with antisocial personality disorders.
Revised:  the prison was set up as a therapeutic experiment . it is generally held to be one of Britain's safest, holding and treating up to 235 inmates with antisocial personality disorders.
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Original:  the prison was set up  as a therapeutic experiment in 1962 and is thought to be one of Britain's safest,  holding and treating up to 235 inmates with antisocial personality disorders.
Revised:  the prison was set up as a therapeutic experiment in 1962 and is thought to be one of Britain's safest, responsible for holding and treating up to 235 inmates with antisocial personality disorders.
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Original:  Prisoners must show "genuine desire" to change their ways.
Revised:  Prisoners at the facility must show a "genuine desire" to change their ways.
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Original: Immediately after the murder  concern was raised that budget cuts may have played a factor.
Revised: Immediately after the murder , concern was raised that budget cuts may have played a factor.
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Original:  He called for an investigation, saying " We  don't want any kind of shoddy cover-up.
Revised:  Calling for an investigation, saying " We don't want any kind of shoddy cover-up.
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Original:  He called for an investigation, saying " We  don't want any kind of shoddy cover-up.
Revised:  He called for an investigation, he said; " We don't want any kind of shoddy cover-up.
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Original:  He called for an investigation, saying " We  don't want any kind of shoddy cover-up.
Revised:  He called for an investigation, saying " w don't want any kind of shoddy cover-up.
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Original:  He called for an investigation, saying " We  don't want any kind of shoddy cover-up.
Revised:  He called for an investigation, saying " We e don't want any kind of shoddy cover-up.
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Original:  The prison service denied any problems at the time, saying "[t]here has been no change to the type of prisoner held there in recent months, and no change to the vetting process."
Revised:  The prison service denied any problems at the time, stating "[t]here has been no change to the type of prisoner held there in recent months, and no change to the vetting process."
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Original:  Wikinews tried to identify if two men arrested within days of the attack - a 25-year-old for murder and a 28-year-old for assisting an offender - had arrived at the prison recently, and if they remained there , but Thames Valley Police refused to comment, referring enquiries to the  Ministry of Justice.
Revised:  Wikinews tried to identify if two men arrested within days of the attack – a 25-year-old for murder and a 28-year-old for assisting an offender - had arrived at the prison recently, and if they remained there , but Thames Valley Police refused to comment, referring enquiries to the Ministry of Justice.
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Original:  Wikinews tried to identify if two men arrested within days of the attack - a 25-year-old for murder and a 28-year-old for assisting an offender - had arrived at the prison recently, and if they remained there , but Thames Valley Police refused to comment, referring enquiries to the  Ministry of Justice.
Revised:  Wikinews tried to identify if two men arrested within days of the attack - a 25-year-old for murder and a 28-year-old for assisting an offender – arrived at the prison recently, and if they remained there , but Thames Valley Police refused to comment, referring enquiries to the Ministry of Justice.
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Original:  Wikinews tried to identify if two men arrested within days of the attack - a 25-year-old for murder and a 28-year-old for assisting an offender - had arrived at the prison recently, and if they remained there , but Thames Valley Police refused to comment, referring enquiries to the  Ministry of Justice.
Revised:  Wikinews tried to identify if two men arrested within days of the attack - a 25-year-old for murder and a 28-year-old for assisting an offender - had arrived at the prison recently, and if they remained there ; Thames Valley Police refused to comment, referring enquiries to the Ministry of Justice.
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Original:  Wikinews tried to identify if two men arrested within days of the attack - a 25-year-old for murder and a 28-year-old for assisting an offender - had arrived at the prison recently, and if they remained there , but Thames Valley Police refused to comment, referring enquiries to the  Ministry of Justice.
Revised:  Wikinews tried to identify if two men arrested within days of the attack - a 25-year-old for murder and a 28-year-old for assisting an offender - had arrived at the prison recently, and if they remained there , but Thames Valley Police refused to comment, referring enquiries to the UK's Ministry of Justice.
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Original:  The police also said that they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois  citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
Revised:  Police also said they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
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Original:  The police also said that they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois  citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
Revised:  The police also said that they could not release the names , or convictions, of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
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Original:  The police also said that they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois  citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
Revised:  The police also said that they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested . Spokesman Pierre du Bois citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
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Original:  The police also said that they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois  citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
Revised:  The police also said that they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois , citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
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Original:  The police also said that they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois  citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, per which "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
Revised:  The police also said that they could not release the names or convictions of the men arrested , with spokesman Pierre du Bois citing Association of Chief Police Officer (ACPO) guidelines, said: "Thames Valley Police does not release information which could confirm the identity of a suspect, unless that person is an adult and has been charged with an offence."
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Original:  The Crown Prosecution Service has yet to charge anyone .
Revised:  The Crown Prosecution Service has yet to press charges .
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Original:  The Telegraph reports that it is believed the man arrested for murder is serving a sentence for a prior murder conviction.
Revised:  The Telegraph reports it is believed the man arrested for murder is serving a sentence for a prior murder conviction.
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Original:  The Telegraph reports that it is believed the man arrested for murder is serving a sentence for a prior murder conviction.
Revised:  The Telegraph reports that it is believed one of the men arrested for murder is serving a sentence for a prior murder conviction.
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Original:  While the method by which the suspects gained access to the deceased's cell remains under investigation, police are not investigating whether prison officers assisted inmates in gaining access to Mr Coello, further stating that "[t]he authorities at HMP Grendon are co-operating fully with our investigation."
Revised:  Whilst the method by which the suspects gained access to the deceased's cell remains under investigation, police are not investigating whether prison officers assisted inmates in gaining access to Mr Coello, further stating that "[t]he authorities at HMP Grendon are co-operating fully with our investigation."
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Original:  While the method by which the suspects gained access to the deceased's cell remains under investigation, police are not investigating whether prison officers assisted inmates in gaining access to Mr Coello, further stating that "[t]he authorities at HMP Grendon are co-operating fully with our investigation."
Revised:  While the method by which the suspects gained access to the deceased's cell remains under investigation, police are not investigating if prison officers assisted inmates in gaining access to Mr Coello, further stating that "[t]he authorities at HMP Grendon are co-operating fully with our investigation."
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Original:  While the method by which the suspects gained access to the deceased's cell remains under investigation, police are not investigating whether prison officers assisted inmates in gaining access to Mr Coello, further stating that "[t]he authorities at HMP Grendon are co-operating fully with our investigation."
Revised:  While the method by which the suspects gained access to the deceased's cell remains under investigation, police are not investigating whether prison officers assisted inmates in gaining access to Mr Coello, stating that "[t]he authorities at HMP Grendon are co-operating fully with our investigation."
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Original:  An attempt to identify what activities were occuring in the prison at the time was met with a referral to the Ministry of Justice.
Revised:  An attempt to identify what activities were occurring in the prison at the time was met with a referral to the Ministry of Justice.
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Original:  An attempt to identify what activities were occuring in the prison at the time was met with a referral to the Ministry of Justice.
Revised:  An attempt to identify what activities were occuring in the prison at the time was referred to the Ministry of Justice.
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Original:   Du Bois said today that " We [  just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding  " In [  the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
Revised:  Du Bois said today , " We [ just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding " In [ the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
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Original:   Du Bois said today that " We [  just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding  " In [  the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
Revised:  Du Bois said today that " [ just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding " In [ the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
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Original:   Du Bois said today that " We [  just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding  " In [  the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
Revised:  Du Bois said today that " We [w just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding " In [ the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
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Original:   Du Bois said today that " We [  just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding  " In [  the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
Revised:  Du Bois said today that " We [ e just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding " In [ the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
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Original:   Du Bois said today that " We [  just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding  " In [  the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
Revised:  Du Bois said today that " We [ just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding , " In [ the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
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Original:   Du Bois said today that " We [  just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding  " In [  the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
Revised:  Du Bois said today that " We [ just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding " [ the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
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Original:   Du Bois said today that " We [  just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding  " In [  the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
Revised:  Du Bois said today that " We [ just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding " In [i the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
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Original:   Du Bois said today that " We [  just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding  " In [  the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
Revised:  Du Bois said today that " We [ just don't know," when police will receive the written post mortem report from the pathologist, adding " In [ n the meantime our enquiries continue and both the subjects are in prison after all, which makes things easier.
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Original:  44-year-old Robert Coello was, apparently, kicked to death in his cell in HMP Grendon, Buckinghamshire, England.
Revised:  44-year-old Robert Coello was, apparently, kicked to death in his cell at Her Majesty's Prison (HMP) Grendon, Buckinghamshire, England.
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Original:  A former student said that he 'used slang in class, taught dating skills in notes, and was just like the students' friend.  
Revised:  A former student said that he 'used slang in class, taught dating skills in notes, and was just like the students' friend. ' 
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Original:  Yesterday, he signed a contract with Contab education as the chief English tutor and would continue to provide lessons on Sundays. he also urged King's Glory to patch up the monetary quarrels and strive to improve the city's education  
Revised:  Yesterday, he signed a contract with Contab education as the chief English tutor and would continue to provide lessons on Sundays. he also urged King's Glory to patch up the monetary quarrels and strive to improve the city's education . 
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Original:  He claimed to have 9000 students at his peak .
Revised:  He claimed to have 9000 students at the peak of his career .
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Original:  He was sued by the tutorial schools Modern Education and King's Glory Education Centre for breaking contracts earlier and was sued for 8.87 million and 26 million respectively.
Revised:  He was sued by the tutorial schools Modern Education and King's Glory Education Centre for breach of contract and was sued for 8.87 million and 26 million respectively.
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Original:  Fan is a well-known but controversial English tutor who taught under Modern Education and King's Glory who claimed to have 9000 students at the peak of his career.
Revised:  Karno is a well-known but controversial English tutor who taught under Modern Education and King's Glory who claimed to have 9000 students at the peak of his career.
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Original:  Fan is a well-known but controversial English tutor who taught under Modern Education and King's Glory who claimed to have 9000 students at the peak of his career.
Revised:  Fan is a well-known but controversial English tutor who taught under Modern Education and King's Glory who claimed to have 9,000 students at the peak of his career.
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Original:  In his notes , he used words which some parents considered coarse, and  reportedly used profanity in class.
Revised:  In his notes he used words which some parents considered coarse, and reportedly used profanity in class.
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Original:  In his notes , he used words which some parents considered coarse, and  reportedly used profanity in class.
Revised:  In his notes , he used words which some parents considered coarse, and he reportedly used profanity in class.
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