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Original:   The tennis section of the Olympics will start Aug. 11 and run through Aug. 15.
Revised:  "There are so many mixed feelings because on Wednesday night they were almost positive there was something wrong with my nerve, which could have ultimately been much more serious," Sharapova said, according to the Telegraph. "But after Thursday morning's tests, for the first time in a while, they were able to give me a different answer and a different problem. This is something that needs a lot of time to heal. It really hurts me to say I have to miss the Olympics." The tennis section of the Olympics will start Aug. 11 and run through Aug. 15.
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Original:  25 and the Associated Press reports that Sharapova may miss the tournament   
Revised:  25 and the Associated Press reports that Sharapova may miss the tournament . 
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Original:   International tennis star Maria Sharapova will miss the 2008 Beijing Olympics because of a shoulder injury sustained during the WTA Rogers Open in Montreal, Canada , the BBC reports . "This is something that needs a lot of time to heal.
Revised:  International tennis star Maria Sharapova will miss the 2008 Beijing Olympics because of a shoulder injury sustained during the WTA Rogers Open in Montreal, Canada . "This is something that needs a lot of time to heal.
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Original:  "After Wednesday's match I knew there was something seriously wrong with my shoulder." "There are so many mixed feelings because on Wednesday night they were almost positive there was something wrong with my nerve, which could have ultimately been much more serious," Sharapova said, according to the Telegraph.
Revised:  "After Wednesday's match I knew there was something seriously wrong with my shoulder." "There are so many mixed feelings because on Wednesday night they were almost positive there was something wrong with my nerve, which could have ultimately been much more serious," Sharapova said, according to The Daily Telegraph.
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Original:  The tennis section of the Olympics will start Aug. 11 and run through Aug. 15.
Revised:  The tennis section of the Olympics will start on August 11 and run through Aug. 15.
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Original:  The tennis section of the Olympics will start Aug. 11 and run through Aug. 15.
Revised:  The tennis section of the Olympics will start Aug. 11 and run through to August 15.
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Original:  The  Telegraph reports that Sharapova joins former world No 1 and Athens Olympic silver medalist Amelie Mauresmo and fellow French star Mary Pierce on a list of tennis players not competing in the 2008 Olympics.
Revised:  The Daily Telegraph reports that Sharapova joins former world No 1 and Athens Olympic silver medalist Amelie Mauresmo and fellow French star Mary Pierce on a list of tennis players not competing in the 2008 Olympics.
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Original: Jimmy Wales presenting Wikia at presentation at Wikimania 2007 Recently Wikia, a commercial company co-founded by Jimmy Wales and Angela Beesley, announced that it would be making changes in the appearances of its wikis, specifically making advertising more prominent.
Revised:  Recently Wikia, a commercial company co-founded by Jimmy Wales and Angela Beesley, announced that it would be making changes in the appearances of its wikis, specifically making advertising more prominent.
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Original:  Wikia has lost editors and volunteer Janitors as a result of this.
Revised:  Wikia has lost editors and volunteer "janitors" as a result of this.
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Original:  This change to mix advertising directly into the content has lead many Wikia hosted sites to begin discussions regarding leaving Wikia hosting for their own.
Revised:  This change to mix advertising directly into the content has led many Wikia hosted sites to begin discussions regarding leaving Wikia hosting for their own.
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Original:  The problem was the excessive advertisements splattered all over on every content pages which most of the Wikia communities didn't agree with.
Revised:  The problem was the excessive advertisements on every content pages which most of the Wikia communities didn't agree with.
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Original:  In a speech made yesterday, Bush claimed that “ Violence is down to its lowest level since the spring of 2004, and we're now in our third consecutive month with reduced violence levels holding steady.
Revised:  In a speech made yesterday, Bush claimed that " Violence is down to its lowest level since the spring of 2004, and we're now in our third consecutive month with reduced violence levels holding steady.
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Original:  ” He then said that “ a significant reason for this sustained progress is the success of the surge.
Revised:  " He then said that “ a significant reason for this sustained progress is the success of the surge.
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Original:  ” He then said that “ a significant reason for this sustained progress is the success of the surge.
Revised:  ” He then said that " a significant reason for this sustained progress is the success of the surge.
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Original:  ” Bush also praised the security forces of Iraq.
Revised:  " Bush also praised the security forces of Iraq.
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Original:  He cited their “increasing capability” as another reason for the reduction in violence.
Revised:  He cited their "increasing capability" as another reason for the reduction in violence.
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Original:  “ We saw the capability of those forces earlier this year, when the Iraqi government launched successful military operations against Shia extremist groups in Basra, Amarah, and the Sadr City area of Baghdad, ” he said.
Revised:  " We saw the capability of those forces earlier this year, when the Iraqi government launched successful military operations against Shia extremist groups in Basra, Amarah, and the Sadr City area of Baghdad, ” he said.
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Original:  “ We saw the capability of those forces earlier this year, when the Iraqi government launched successful military operations against Shia extremist groups in Basra, Amarah, and the Sadr City area of Baghdad, ” he said.
Revised:  “ We saw the capability of those forces earlier this year, when the Iraqi government launched successful military operations against Shia extremist groups in Basra, Amarah, and the Sadr City area of Baghdad, " he said.
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Original:  “ Because of these operations, extremists who once terrorized the citizens of these communities have been driven from their strongholds.
Revised:  " Because of these operations, extremists who once terrorized the citizens of these communities have been driven from their strongholds.
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Original:  ” noicon|Listen to the speech in full The President continued by stating that the Iraqi government has made progress.
Revised:  " noicon|Listen to the speech in full The President continued by stating that the Iraqi government has made progress.
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Original:  “ Iraqi Council of Representatives has passed several major pieces of legislation this year, and Iraqi leaders are preparing for provincial elections, ” he said, listing ways in which he believed the Iraqi government have progressed.
Revised:  " Iraqi Council of Representatives has passed several major pieces of legislation this year, and Iraqi leaders are preparing for provincial elections, ” he said, listing ways in which he believed the Iraqi government have progressed.
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Original:  “ Iraqi Council of Representatives has passed several major pieces of legislation this year, and Iraqi leaders are preparing for provincial elections, ” he said, listing ways in which he believed the Iraqi government have progressed.
Revised:  “ Iraqi Council of Representatives has passed several major pieces of legislation this year, and Iraqi leaders are preparing for provincial elections, " he said, listing ways in which he believed the Iraqi government have progressed.
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Original: Bush making the speech George W. Bush, the current President of the United States yesterday claimed  that the level of violence in Iraq has decreased to the lowest level since Spring 2004.
Revised: Bush making the speech George W. Bush, the current President of the United States yesterday claimed publicized the fact that the level of violence in Iraq has decreased to the lowest level since Spring 2004.
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Original: Bush making the speech George W. Bush, the current President of the United States yesterday claimed publicized the fact that the level of violence in Iraq has decreased to the lowest level since Spring 2004.
Revised: Bush making the speech George W. Bush, the current President of the United States yesterday publicized the fact that the level of violence in Iraq has decreased to the lowest level since Spring 2004.
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Original:  In a speech made yesterday, Bush claimed that "Violence is down to its lowest level since the spring of 2004, and we're now in our third consecutive month with reduced violence levels holding steady."
Revised:  In a speech made yesterday, Bush stated that "Violence is down to its lowest level since the spring of 2004, and we're now in our third consecutive month with reduced violence levels holding steady."
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Original: Bush making the speech George W. Bush, the current President of the United States yesterday publicized the fact that the level of violence in Iraq has decreased to the lowest level since Spring 2004.
Revised: Bush making the speech George W. Bush, the current President of the United States yesterday claimed that the level of violence in Iraq has decreased to the lowest level since Spring 2004.
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Original:  In a speech made yesterday, Bush stated that "Violence is down to its lowest level since the spring of 2004, and we're now in our third consecutive month with reduced violence levels holding steady."
Revised:  In a speech made yesterday, Bush claimed that "Violence is down to its lowest level since the spring of 2004, and we're now in our third consecutive month with reduced violence levels holding steady."
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Original:  "Because of these operations, extremists who once terrorized the citizens of these communities have been driven from their strongholds." noicon| Listen to the speech in full The President continued by stating that the Iraqi government has made progress.
Revised:  "Because of these operations, extremists who once terrorized the citizens of these communities have been driven from their strongholds." Listen to the speech in full The President continued by stating that the Iraqi government has made progress.
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Original:  On July 29 in American Time, Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE) approved  new IEEE 1394 FireWire standards - S1600  S3200 , which enable data transmission rates up to 1.6 Gbps and 3.2 Gbps respectively  .
Revised:  The Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE) approved new IEEE 1394 FireWire standards - S1600 S3200 , which enable data transmission rates up to 1.6 Gbps and 3.2 Gbps respectively .
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Original:  On July 29 in American Time, Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE) approved  new IEEE 1394 FireWire standards - S1600  S3200 , which enable data transmission rates up to 1.6 Gbps and 3.2 Gbps respectively  .
Revised:  On July 29 in American Time, Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE) approved new IEEE 1394 FireWire standards - S1600 and S3200 , which enable data transmission rates up to 1.6 Gbps and 3.2 Gbps respectively .
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Original:  On July 29 in American Time, Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE) approved  new IEEE 1394 FireWire standards - S1600  S3200 , which enable data transmission rates up to 1.6 Gbps and 3.2 Gbps respectively  .
Revised:  On July 29 in American Time, Institute of Electrical and Electronics Engineers (IEEE) approved new IEEE 1394 FireWire standards - S1600 S3200 — which enable data transmission rates up to 1.6 Gbps and 3.2 Gbps respectively .
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Original:  Both also featured horsepower of battery life and peer-to-peer transfer without linking computer .
Revised:  The new standard with allow peer-to-peer transfer without linking computer .
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Original:  Both also featured horsepower of battery life and peer-to-peer transfer without linking computer .
Revised:  Both also featured horsepower of battery life and peer-to-peer transfer without linking computers .
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Original:  In addition, the S1600 and S3200 standards will continue supporting previous  S400 and S800 standards  .
Revised:  In addition, the S1600 and S3200 standards will continue supporting previous the S400 and S800 standards .
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Original:  Although the  USB 3.0 transmission speeds will be enclosed with 4.8 Gbps by Intel, the IEEE will do attempts on deploying another standard to challenge transmission speeds of USB 3.0 .
Revised:  Although the USB 3.0 transmission speeds will be enclosed with 4.8 Gbps .
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Original:  The new standard with allow peer-to-peer transfer without linking computers.
Revised:  The new standard will allow peer-to-peer transfer without linking computers.
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Original:  In addition, the S1600 and S3200 standards will continue supporting previous the S400 and S800  standards through backward compatibility.
Revised:  In addition, the S1600 and S3200 standards will continue supporting the S400 and S800 standards through backward compatibility.
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Original:  His layer calls the death a suicide.
Revised:  His lawyer calls the death a suicide.
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Original:  Ivin's lawyer, Paul Kemp, insisted he had no role in the attacks, which targeted politicians in Washinton DC, and  media in New York City and Florida.
Revised:  Ivin's lawyer, Paul Kemp, insisted he had no role in the attacks, which targeted politicians in Washington DC, and media in New York City and Florida.
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Original:  Ivin's lawyer, Paul Kemp, insisted he had no role in the attacks, which targeted politicians in Washinton DC, and  media in New York City and Florida.
Revised:  Ivin's lawyer, Paul Kemp, insisted he had no role in the attacks, which targeted politicians in Washinton DC, and members of the media in New York City and Florida.
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Original:  The Associated Press cites one of Ivins' colleauges who said he had been removed from his work area as he was thought to be a potential threat to others 
Revised:  The Associated Press cites one of Ivins' colleagues who said he had been removed from his work area as he was thought to be a potential threat to others 
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Original: A man about to be indited by the United States Department of Justice died Tuesday.
Revised: A man about to be indicted by the United States Department of Justice died Tuesday.
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Original:  His lawyer calls the death a suicide.
Revised:  His lawyer has called the death a suicide.
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Original:  Ivins, who worked at the biodefense laboratories in Fort Detrick, Md. for 18 years, was about to be charged by the Justice Department in connection with the 2001 anthrax attacks, which killed five people and infected 17 others.
Revised:  Ivins, who worked at the biodefense laboratories in Fort Detrick, Maryland for 18 years, was about to be charged by the Justice Department in connection with the 2001 anthrax attacks, which killed five people and infected 17 others.
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Original:  Ivin's lawyer, Paul Kemp, insisted he had no role in the attacks, which targeted politicians in Washington DC, and members of the media in New York City and Florida.
Revised:  Ivin's lawyer, Paul Kemp, insisted that his client had no role in the attacks, which targeted politicians in Washington DC, and members of the media in New York City and Florida.
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Original:  “ For six years, Dr. Ivins fully cooperated with that investigation, assisting the government in every way that was asked of him, ” Mr. Kemp told the New York Times.
Revised:  " For six years, Dr. Ivins fully cooperated with that investigation, assisting the government in every way that was asked of him, ” Mr. Kemp told the New York Times.
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Original:  “ For six years, Dr. Ivins fully cooperated with that investigation, assisting the government in every way that was asked of him, ” Mr. Kemp told the New York Times.
Revised:  “ For six years, Dr. Ivins fully cooperated with that investigation, assisting the government in every way that was asked of him, " Mr. Kemp told the New York Times.
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Original:  “ The relentless pressure of accusation and innuendo takes its toll in different ways on different people, as has already been seen in this investigation.
Revised:  " The relentless pressure of accusation and innuendo takes its toll in different ways on different people, as has already been seen in this investigation.
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Original:  In Dr. Ivins’  case, it led to his untimely death.
Revised:  In Dr. Ivins’ s case, it led to his untimely death.
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Original:  ” The Los Angeles Times reports that Ivins was reinvestigated beginning in 2006 after FBI Director Robert Mueller changed the case's leadership.
Revised:  " The Los Angeles Times reports that Ivins was reinvestigated beginning in 2006 after FBI Director Robert Mueller changed the case's leadership.
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Original:  Before then, the only labeled "person of interest" was Steven J. Hatfill , who has since been cleared and payed between $4.6 and $5.82 million by the U.S. Government as part of a settlement stemming for 2003 law suites filled against the Justice Department and government officials, including former Attoney General John Ashcroft.
Revised:  Before then, the only labeled "person of interest" was Steven J. Hatfill . He has since been cleared and payed between $4.6 and $5.82 million by the U.S. Government as part of a settlement stemming for 2003 law suites filled against the Justice Department and government officials, including former Attoney General John Ashcroft.
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Original:  Before then, the only labeled "person of interest" was Steven J. Hatfill , who has since been cleared and payed between $4.6 and $5.82 million by the U.S. Government as part of a settlement stemming for 2003 law suites filled against the Justice Department and government officials, including former Attoney General John Ashcroft.
Revised:  Before then, the only labeled "person of interest" was Steven J. Hatfill , who has since been cleared and paid between $4.6 and $5.82 million by the U.S. Government as part of a settlement stemming for 2003 law suites filled against the Justice Department and government officials, including former Attoney General John Ashcroft.
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Original:  Before then, the only labeled "person of interest" was Steven J. Hatfill , who has since been cleared and payed between $4.6 and $5.82 million by the U.S. Government as part of a settlement stemming for 2003 law suites filled against the Justice Department and government officials, including former Attoney General John Ashcroft.
Revised:  Before then, the only labeled "person of interest" was Steven J. Hatfill , who has since been cleared and payed between $4.6 and $5.82 million by the U.S. Government as part of a settlement stemming for 2003 law suits filed against the Justice Department and government officials, including former Attoney General John Ashcroft.
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Original:  The New York Times reports that Ivins had been undergoing psychiatric treatment within the last month and had a restraining order placed on him by a women he was allegedly stalking and threatening.
Revised:  The New York Times reports that Ivins had been undergoing psychiatric treatment within the last month and had a restraining order placed on him by a woman he was allegedly stalking and threatening.
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Original:  According to National Public Radio , Jean C. Duley , a mental health professional requested a Frederick County court issue a "peace order" — a type of restraining order — against Ivins in July.
Revised:  According to National Public Radio , Jean C. Duley requested that Frederick County court issue a "peace order" — a type of restraining order — against Ivins in July.
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Original:  According to National Public Radio , Jean C. Duley , a mental health professional requested a Frederick County court issue a "peace order" — a type of restraining order — against Ivins in July.
Revised:  According to National Public Radio , Jean C. Duley , a mental health professional requested a Frederick County court issue a "peace order" , a type of restraining order — against Ivins in July.
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Original:  According to National Public Radio , Jean C. Duley , a mental health professional requested a Frederick County court issue a "peace order" — a type of restraining order — against Ivins in July.
Revised:  According to National Public Radio , Jean C. Duley , a mental health professional requested a Frederick County court issue a "peace order" — a type of restraining order , against Ivins in July.
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Original:  The Associated Press cites one of Ivins'  colleagues who said he had been removed from his work area as he was thought to be a potential threat to others.
Revised:  The Associated Press cites one of Ivins' s colleagues who said he had been removed from his work area as he was thought to be a potential threat to others.
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Original:  In Dr. Ivins’ s case, it led to his untimely death."
Revised:  In Dr. Ivins’ case, it led to his untimely death."
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Original:  He has since been cleared and paid between $4.6 and $5.82 million by the U.S. Government as part of a settlement stemming for 2003 law suits filed against the Justice Department and government officials, including former Attoney General John Ashcroft.
Revised:  He has since been cleared and paid between $4.6 and $5.82 million by the U.S. Government as part of a settlement stemming for 2003 law suits filed against the Justice Department and government officials, including former Attorney General John Ashcroft.
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Original:  The New York Times    reports that Ivins had been undergoing psychiatric treatment within the last month and had a restraining order placed on him by a woman he was allegedly stalking and threatening.
Revised:  The New York Times The New York Times reports that Ivins had been undergoing psychiatric treatment within the last month and had a restraining order placed on him by a woman he was allegedly stalking and threatening.
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Original:  The Associated Press cites one of Ivins' s colleagues who said he had been removed from his work area as he was thought to be a potential threat to others.
Revised:  The Associated Press cites one of Ivins' colleagues who said he had been removed from his work area as he was thought to be a potential threat to others.
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Original:  About 50 students  were in the school, where some had gathered on for Islamic study in the three-story Taskent, Konya province , building.
Revised:  About 50 students were in the school, where some had gathered on for Islamic study in the three-story Taskent, Konya province building.
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Original:  I believe those inside the rubble will be saved," Balcilar village mayor Melmut Demirgul told reporters, according to the Associated Press and Reuters   .
Revised:  I believe those inside the rubble will be saved," Balcilar village mayor Melmut Demirgul told reporters, according to the Associated Press and Reuters . .
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