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Original:  The United States has explained the UN's restriction to the base, as it is an important area for the War on Terrorism
Revised:  The United States has explained that the restrictions placed on the UN visit are due to the nature of the ongoing War on Terrorism
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Original: Rebels loyal to Libyan leader Colonel launched an offensive Tuesday and managed to push rebel forces out of the town of .
Revised:  Libyan leader Colonel launched an offensive Tuesday and managed to push rebel forces out of the town of .
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Original:  One rebel warrior disclosed that the shelling was too much for them to handle, while another rebel , Ashraf Mohammed, was quote by Reuters as saying, ” [t]he Gaddafi guys hit us with Grads [rockets] and they came round our flanks.
Revised:  One rebel warrior said that the shelling was too much for them to handle, while another rebel , Ashraf Mohammed, was quote by Reuters as saying, ” [t]he Gaddafi guys hit us with Grads [rockets] and they came round our flanks.
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Original:  One rebel warrior disclosed that the shelling was too much for them to handle, while another rebel , Ashraf Mohammed, was quote by Reuters as saying, ” [t]he Gaddafi guys hit us with Grads [rockets] and they came round our flanks.
Revised:  One rebel warrior disclosed that the shelling was too much for them to handle, A rebel fighter , Ashraf Mohammed, was quote by Reuters as saying, ” [t]he Gaddafi guys hit us with Grads [rockets] and they came round our flanks.
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Original:  One rebel warrior disclosed that the shelling was too much for them to handle, while another rebel , Ashraf Mohammed, was quote by Reuters as saying, ” [t]he Gaddafi guys hit us with Grads [rockets] and they came round our flanks.
Revised:  One rebel warrior disclosed that the shelling was too much for them to handle, while another rebel , Ashraf Mohammed, was quoted by Reuters as saying, ” [t]he Gaddafi guys hit us with Grads [rockets] and they came round our flanks.
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Original:  One rebel warrior disclosed that the shelling was too much for them to handle, while another rebel , Ashraf Mohammed, was quote by Reuters as saying, ” [t]he Gaddafi guys hit us with Grads [rockets] and they came round our flanks.
Revised:  One rebel warrior disclosed that the shelling was too much for them to handle, while another rebel , Ashraf Mohammed, was quote by Reuters as saying, " [t]he Gaddafi guys hit us with Grads [rockets] and they came round our flanks.
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Original:  ” Rebel forces retreated to the city of , which they had captured days before on Sunday, where they recuperated.
Revised:  " Rebel forces retreated to the city of , which they had captured days before on Sunday, where they recuperated.
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Original:  Civilians also hastily retreated from the war zone with some even to stop their vehicles to criticize the fleeing troops .
Revised:  Civilians also retreated from the war zone with some even to stop their vehicles to criticize the fleeing troops .
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Original:  Civilians also hastily retreated from the war zone with some even to stop their vehicles to criticize the fleeing troops .
Revised:  Civilians also hastily retreated from the war zone .
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Original:  One man was quoted as saying, "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures  " Today's battle marked a shift of momentum in favour of pro-Gaddafi forces, earlier this week rebels held the advantage over pro-Gaddafi forces as they made their westward march with little to no resistance
Revised:  One man was quoted as saying, "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures . " Today's battle marked a shift of momentum in favour of pro-Gaddafi forces, earlier this week rebels held the advantage over pro-Gaddafi forces as they made their westward march with little to no resistance
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Original:  One man was quoted as saying, "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures  " Today's battle marked a shift of momentum in favour of pro-Gaddafi forces, earlier this week rebels held the advantage over pro-Gaddafi forces as they made their westward march with little to no resistance
Revised:  One man was quoted as saying, "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures " Today's battle marked a shift of momentum in favour of government troops; earlier this week rebels held the advantage over pro-Gaddafi forces as they made their westward march with little to no resistance
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Original:  One man criticized rebel troops, saying, "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures."
Revised:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them too "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures."
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Original:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them too "[g]et yourselves  up there and stop posing for pictures."
Revised:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them to "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures."
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Original:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them too "[g]et yourselves  up there and stop posing for pictures."
Revised:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them too "[g]et yourselves selves up there and stop posing for pictures."
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Original:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them to "[g]et them selves up there and stop posing for pictures."
Revised:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them too "[g]et them selves up there and stop posing for pictures."
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Original:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them to "[g]et them selves up there and stop posing for pictures."
Revised:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them to "[g]et selves up there and stop posing for pictures."
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Original:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them to "[g]et them selves up there and stop posing for pictures."
Revised:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them to "[g]et them yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures."
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Original:  One man criticized rebel troops, telling them to "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures."
Revised:  One man criticized rebel troops, saying, "[g]et yourselves up there and stop posing for pictures."
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Original: jhjhlkjl Troops loyal to Libyan leader Colonel launched an offensive Tuesday and managed to push rebel forces out of the town of .
Revised:  Troops loyal to Libyan leader Colonel launched an offensive Tuesday and managed to push rebel forces out of the town of .
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Original: Classic petrol pumps from BP Oil company has reportedly lost a laptop that contained the personal information of approximately 13,000 people who filed claims against the company after one of its in the Gulf of Mexico , sending up to 4.9 million barrels 205.8 million gallons%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% of oil , which eventually reached the southern US coast line .
Revised: Classic petrol pumps from BP Oil company has reportedly lost a laptop containing the personal information of approximately 13,000 people who filed claims against the company after one of its in the Gulf of Mexico , sending up to 4.9 million barrels 205.8 million gallons%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% of oil , which eventually reached the southern US coast line .
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Original: Classic petrol pumps from BP Oil company has reportedly lost a laptop that contained the personal information of approximately 13,000 people who filed claims against the company after one of its in the Gulf of Mexico , sending up to 4.9 million barrels 205.8 million gallons%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% of oil , which eventually reached the southern US coast line .
Revised: Classic petrol pumps from BP Oil company has reportedly lost a laptop that contained the personal information of approximately 13,000 people who filed claims against the company 205.8 million gallons%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% of oil , which eventually reached the southern US coast line .
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Original:  BP spokesman Tom Mueller, wrote in a press release, " w e have sent written notice to individuals impacted by this event to inform them about the loss of their personal data and to offer them free credit monitoring services to help protect their personal information."
Revised:  Tom Mueller, wrote in a press release, " w e have sent written notice to individuals impacted by this event to inform them about the loss of their personal data and to offer them free credit monitoring services to help protect their personal information."
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Original:  BP spokesman Tom Mueller, wrote in a press release, " w e have sent written notice to individuals impacted by this event to inform them about the loss of their personal data and to offer them free credit monitoring services to help protect their personal information."
Revised:  BP spokesman Tom Mueller, wrote in a press release, " e have sent written notice to individuals impacted by this event to inform them about the loss of their personal data and to offer them free credit monitoring services to help protect their personal information."
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Original:  BP spokesman Tom Mueller, wrote in a press release, " w e have sent written notice to individuals impacted by this event to inform them about the loss of their personal data and to offer them free credit monitoring services to help protect their personal information."
Revised:  BP spokesman Tom Mueller, wrote in a press release, " w individuals impacted by this event to inform them about the loss of their personal data and to offer them free credit monitoring services to help protect their personal information."
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Original:  He also mentioned that the laptop was lost during "routine business travel," and was reported to have the ability to be deactivated remotely.
Revised:  Mueller said the laptop was lost during "routine business travel," and was reported to have the ability to be deactivated remotely.
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Original:  The data on the laptop itself contained the names, addresses, , phone numbers and even the dates of birth of claimants, which was unencrypted even though the laptop itself is protected by a password.
Revised:  The data on the laptop contained the names, addresses, , phone numbers and even the dates of birth of claimants, which was unencrypted even though the laptop itself is protected by a password.
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Original:  The data on the laptop itself contained the names, addresses, , phone numbers and even the dates of birth of claimants, which was unencrypted even though the laptop itself is protected by a password.
Revised:  The data on the laptop itself contained the names, addresses, , phone numbers and the dates of birth of claimants, which was unencrypted even though the laptop itself is protected by a password.
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Original:    One resident affected by the the oil disaster and the lost laptop , expressed his outrage at BP when interviewed by , "It's terrible, I kinda work hard for the things I have .
Revised:  One resident affected by the the oil disaster and the lost laptop expressed his outrage at BP when interviewed by , "It's terrible, I kinda work hard for the things I have .
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Original:    One resident affected by the the oil disaster and the lost laptop , expressed his outrage at BP when interviewed by , "It's terrible, I kinda work hard for the things I have .
Revised:  One resident affected by the the oil disaster and the lost laptop , expressed his outrage at BP when interviewed by . "It's terrible, I kinda work hard for the things I have .
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Original:  " BP has offered free credit reporting for those affected
Revised:  BP has offered free credit reporting for those affected
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Original:  " BP has offered free credit reporting for those affected
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Original: The disaster sparked heavy public anger at BP.
Revised: The loss of the sensitive data sparked heavy public anger at BP.
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Original: One resident affected by the the oil disaster and the lost laptop expressed his outrage at BP when interviewed by . "It's terrible, I kinda work hard for the things I have," they said.
Revised: One resident affected by the the oil disaster and the lost laptop expressed his outrage at BP when interviewed by . "It's terrible, I kinda work hard for the things I have," he said.
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Original:   While unusual, Senate Minority Leader Harry Reid believed a private session was necessary due to the potentially sensitive information that needed to be discussed .
Revised:  Senate Minority Leader Harry Reid believed a private session was necessary due to the potentially sensitive information that needed to be discussed .
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Original:   While unusual, Senate Minority Leader Harry Reid believed a private session was necessary due to the potentially sensitive information that needed to be discussed .
Revised:  While unusual, Senate Minority Leader Harry Reid stated that a private session was necessary due to the potentially sensitive information that needed to be discussed .
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Original:  Congress will stop working on legislation temporary .
Revised:  Congress will stop working on legislation temporarily .
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Original:  The rare parlimentary rule invoked by the Democrats force the removal of all media, staff, and tourist from the chamber.
Revised:  The rare parliamentary rule invoked by the Democrats force the removal of all media, staff, and tourist from the chamber.
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Original:  Conservatives saw the unusual manuever as a ploy to distract the public from President Bush's recent nomination of Samuel Alito to the Supreme Court and dismissed the investigation, which has been in the news over the past several days with the resignation of Vice President Cheney's aide Scooter Libby after the disclosure that Liddy lied under oath about leaking information that would provocate war between Iraq and the U.
Revised:  Conservatives saw the unusual maneuver as a ploy to distract the public from President Bush's recent nomination of Samuel Alito to the Supreme Court and dismissed the investigation, which has been in the news over the past several days with the resignation of Vice President Cheney's aide Scooter Libby after the disclosure that Liddy lied under oath about leaking information that would provocate war between Iraq and the U.
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Original:  Conservatives saw the unusual manuever as a ploy to distract the public from President Bush's recent nomination of Samuel Alito to the Supreme Court and dismissed the investigation, which has been in the news over the past several days with the resignation of Vice President Cheney's aide Scooter Libby after the disclosure that Liddy lied under oath about leaking information that would provocate war between Iraq and the U.
Revised:  Conservatives saw the unusual manuever as a ploy to distract the public from President Bush's recent nomination of Samuel Alito to the Supreme Court and dismissed the investigation, which has been in the news over the past several days with the resignation of Vice President Cheney's aide Scooter Libby after the disclosure that Libby lied under oath about leaking information that would provocate war between Iraq and the U.
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Original:  In addition to maintaining a no-fly zone, protecting civilian populations, we also have political tools, diplomatic tools, sanctions, freezing his assets, all of which continue to tighten the noose.    [  
Revised:  In addition to maintaining a no-fly zone, protecting civilian populations, we also have political tools, diplomatic tools, sanctions, freezing his assets, all of which continue to tighten the noose. " [ 
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Original:  In addition to maintaining a no-fly zone, protecting civilian populations, we also have political tools, diplomatic tools, sanctions, freezing his assets, all of which continue to tighten the noose.    [  
Revised:  In addition to maintaining a no-fly zone, protecting civilian populations, we also have political tools, diplomatic tools, sanctions, freezing his assets, all of which continue to tighten the noose. [T 
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Original: Obama reitarted that same view on ABC News saying in an interview, "I think what we're seeing is that the circle around Gadhafi understands that the noose is tightening, that their days are probably numbered, and they are going to have to think through what their next steps are."
Revised: Obama reiterated that same view on ABC News saying in an interview, "I think what we're seeing is that the circle around Gadhafi understands that the noose is tightening, that their days are probably numbered, and they are going to have to think through what their next steps are."
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Original: Obama reitarted that same view on ABC News saying in an interview, "I think what we're seeing is that the circle around Gadhafi understands that the noose is tightening, that their days are probably numbered, and they are going to have to think through what their next steps are."
Revised: Obama reitarted that same view on saying in an interview, "I think what we're seeing is that the circle around Gadhafi understands that the noose is tightening, that their days are probably numbered, and they are going to have to think through what their next steps are."
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Original: Obama reitarted that same view on ABC News saying in an interview, "I think what we're seeing is that the circle around Gadhafi understands that the noose is tightening, that their days are probably numbered, and they are going to have to think through what their next steps are."
Revised: Obama reitarted that same view on ABC News saying in an interview, "I think what we're seeing is that the circle around Gaddafi understands that the noose is tightening, that their days are probably numbered, and they are going to have to think through what their next steps are."
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Original:  Meanwhile, in an interview with CBS News , Obama said of the rebels leaders that U.S. officials have met with are "fully vetted, so we have a clear sense of who they are, and so far they're saying the right things, and most of them are professionals, lawyers, doctors, people who appear to be credible."
Revised:  Meanwhile, in an interview with , Obama said of the rebels leaders that U.S. officials have met with are "fully vetted, so we have a clear sense of who they are, and so far they're saying the right things, and most of them are professionals, lawyers, doctors, people who appear to be credible."
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Original:  This comes after the NATO commander, Admarial James G. Stavridis said there were "flickers" of al-Qaeda and Hezbollah in Libya.
Revised:  This comes after the supreme commander, Admiral said there were "flickers" of al-Qaeda and Hezbollah in Libya.
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Original:  This comes after the NATO commander, Admarial James G. Stavridis said there were "flickers" of al-Qaeda and Hezbollah in Libya.
Revised:  This comes after the NATO commander, Admarial James G. Stavridis said there were "flickers" of and in Libya.
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Original:  In response  Obama said on CBS, "[T]hat doesn't mean that all the people, among all the people who opposed Qaddafi, there might not be elements that are unfriendly to the United States and our interests.
Revised:  In response , Obama said on CBS, "[T]hat doesn't mean that all the people, among all the people who opposed Qaddafi, there might not be elements that are unfriendly to the United States and our interests.
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Original:  As for the rebels themselves, Mahmoud Shammam, a spokesman for the rebels told the New York Times , "We ask for political support more than arms, but if we have both, that would be good.
Revised:  As for the rebels themselves, Mahmoud Shammam, a spokesman for the rebels told the , "We ask for political support more than arms, but if we have both, that would be good.
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Original:  The couple, who have been in a relationship for five years, currently have two children - Daniel, aged twenty-one months, and Samuel, who was born in November 2010
Revised:  Justine Thornton, Ed's fianceé noted: "Ed wasn't even an MP when I met him and at the end of the day I am marrying him because of who he is and not because of what he's doing now. We're planning on a small ceremony, all at the hotel with everything at the same place and we're looking forward to it very much.
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Original:  We're planning on a small ceremony, all at the hotel with everything at the same place and we're looking forward to it very much   .
Revised:  We're planning on a small ceremony, all at the hotel with everything at the same place and we're looking forward to it very much ." .
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Original: Upon being asked if becoming the would have some significance in his marriage, Ed Miliband replied: "I think people are pretty relaxed about this.
Revised: Miliband was asked if he thought it was important to be married in case he becomes the next . He replied: "I think people are pretty relaxed about this.
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Original:  according to , this includes Ed's work in the , the birth of Daniel and Ed's appearance at the .
Revised:  according to , this includes Ed's work in the , the birth of their son Daniel, and Ed's appearance at the .
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Original:  They are anticipated to in , England on May 27, 2011.
Revised:  They are anticipated to in , England on May 27.
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Original:  The change means that the entire network will be able to be integrated throughout, rather than having two operators effectively running to separate systems.
Revised:  The change means that the entire network will be able to be integrated throughout, rather than having two operators effectively running two separate systems.
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Original:  The reshuffle of operating consortium means that (NCT) — the main provider of bus services within Nottingham — will have no part to play in the upgraded network, despite the numerous awards and high satisfaction levels NET has had since its opening;
Revised:  The reshuffle of operating consortium means that (NCT) — the main provider of bus services within Nottingham — will have no part to play in the extended network, despite the numerous awards and high satisfaction levels NET has had since its opening;
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Original: Protester outside New South Wales Parliament, November 2, 2005One protester carried a placard which read: "Terrorism laws = fascism ".
Revised: Protester outside New South Wales Parliament, November 2, 2005One protester carried a placard which read: "Terrorism Laws = fascism ".
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Original: Protester outside New South Wales Parliament, November 2, 2005One protester carried a placard which read: "Terrorism laws = fascism ".
Revised: Protester outside New South Wales Parliament, November 2, 2005One protester carried a placard which read: "Terrorism laws = Fascism ".
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Original:  The protest was organised the New South Wales Green party and was addressed by several speakers including Damien Lawson and Lee Rhiannon, an elected Greens parliamentarian from the New South Wales Legislative Council.
Revised:  The protest was organised the New South Wales Greens and was addressed by several speakers including Damien Lawson and Lee Rhiannon, an elected Greens parliamentarian from the New South Wales Legislative Council.
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Original: Sydney. A small protest of one or two hundred people gathered outside the New South Wales Parliament in in Sydney Australia at lunch time today.
Revised: Sydney. A small protest of one or two hundred people gathered outside the New South Wales Parliament in Sydney Australia at lunch time today.
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