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Original:  He was not seriously injured , and was released from the hospital shortly after his arrival.
Revised:  He was not seriously injured and was released from the hospital shortly after his arrival.
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Original:  Ahmet Davutoglu, the Turkish Foreign Minister, told an Ankara news conference that Israel's "one-sided inquiry" is insufficient .
Revised:  Ahmet Davutoglu, the Turkish Foreign Minister, said in a news conference that Israel's "one-sided inquiry" is insufficient .
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Original:  It is calling for the blockade, which the Red Cross says violates the Geneva Convention, to be lifted .
Revised:  It is calling for the blockade, which the Red Cross says violates the Geneva Convention, to be lifted 
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Original:  The inquiry will include two non-voting foreign observers , despite Israel earlier rejecting a UN call for an international inquiry.
Revised:  The inquiry will include two non-voting foreign observers . Israel had earlier rejected a UN call for an international inquiry.
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Original:  They are to watch the panel consider how the Turks died, as well as in judging whether the naval blockade of Gaza is allowable under international law.
Revised:  They are to watch the panel consider how the Turks died, as well as judge whether the naval blockade of Gaza is allowable under international law.
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Original:  However, Palestinian President Mahmoud Abbas said that the inquest did "not correspond to what the Security Council asked for".
Revised:  Palestinian President Mahmoud Abbas said that the inquest did "not correspond to what the Security Council asked for".
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Original:  The Turkish government is not satisfied with Israel's inquiry , however .
Revised:  The Turkish government is not satisfied with Israel's inquiry .
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Original: Israel will carry out an inquiry into last month's raid on a flotilla of Gaza-bound aid ships.
Revised: Israel will carry out an inquiry into last month's on a flotilla of Gaza-bound aid ships.
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Original:  |The Mavi Marmara , one of the ships boarded last month.
Revised:  |The , one of the ships boarded last month.
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Original:  Nine Turkish citizens were killed on May 31, when Israeli naval commandos boarded a vessel in the flotilla, the MV Mavi Marmara .
Revised:  Nine Turkish citizens were killed on May 31, when boarded a vessel in the flotilla, the MV Mavi Marmara .
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Original:  Nine Turkish citizens were killed on May 31, when Israeli naval commandos boarded a vessel in the flotilla, the MV Mavi Marmara .
Revised:  Nine Turkish citizens were killed on May 31, when Israeli naval commandos boarded a vessel in the flotilla, the MV .
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Original:  The three-man inquest into the boarding action , which took place in international waters, will be headed by ex-Supreme Court judge Yaakov Tirkel.
Revised:  The three-man inquest into the , which took place in international waters, will be headed by ex-Supreme Court judge Yaakov Tirkel.
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Original:  The two foreign observers will be Nobel Peace Prize winner David Trimble and a former jurist in the Canadian military, Brigadier General Kenneth Watkin .
Revised:  The two foreign observers will be winner and a former jurist in the Canadian military, Brigadier General Kenneth Watkin .
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Original:  The two foreign observers will be Nobel Peace Prize winner David Trimble and a former jurist in the Canadian military, Brigadier General Kenneth Watkin .
Revised:  The two foreign observers will be Nobel Peace Prize winner David Trimble and a former jurist in the Canadian military, .
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Original: After months of rumor and speculation, the Colombian brewery w:Grupo Bavaria|Grupo Bavaria , which was founded in 1889 and is the second largest in South America, has been acquired by SABMiller in the biggest merger in Colombian history.
Revised: After months of rumor and speculation, the Colombian brewery Grupo Bavaria , which was founded in 1889 and is the second largest in South America, has been acquired by SABMiller in the biggest merger in Colombian history.
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Original:  After the Celtic's win in game five,  the Lakers find themselves needing to win on Tuesaday night to tie the series , as the Boston Celtics need just one more win the 2010 championship
Revised:  After the Celtic's win in game five, the Lakers find themselves needing to win on Tuesaday night to tie the series and deny the Celtics the one win they need to wrap up the 2010 championship
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Original: The   Boston Celtics beat the Los Angeles Lakers 92-86 on Sunday June 13th, in game five of the seven game NBA Finals .
Revised: The The Boston Celtics beat the Los Angeles Lakers 92-86 on Sunday June 13th, in game five of the seven game NBA Finals .
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Original: The   Boston Celtics beat the Los Angeles Lakers 92-86 on Sunday June 13th, in game five of the seven game NBA Finals .
Revised: The Boston Celtics beat the Los Angeles Lakers 92-86 on Sunday June 13th, in game five of the seven game series .
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Original:  After the Celtic's win in game five, and a three thousand mile journey back home, the Lakers find themselves needing to win on Tuesaday night to tie the series and deny the Celtics the one win they need to wrap up the 2010 championship
Revised:  After the Celtic's win in game five, and a three thousand mile journey back home, the Lakers find themselves needing to win tonight to tie the series and deny the Celtics the one win they need to wrap up the 2010 championship
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Original:  After the Celtic's win in game five, and a three thousand mile journey back home, the Lakers find themselves needing to win on Tuesaday night to tie the series and deny the Celtics the one win they need to wrap up the 2010 championship
Revised:  After the Celtic's win in game five, and a three thousand mile journey back home, the Lakers find themselves needing to win on Tuesaday night to tie the series and deny the Celtics the win they need to wrap up the 2010 championship
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Original:  Paul Gasol scored twelve points, and Derek Fisher added nine points.
Revised:  Pau Gasol scored twelve points, and Derek Fisher added nine points.
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Original:  For the final two games, if there are two games, the Lakers will have home field advantage at Los Angeles' Staples Center.
Revised:  For the final two games, if there are two games, the Lakers will have home-court advantage at Los Angeles' Staples Center.
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Original:  Kobe Bryant is a proven scorer, and Paul Gasol uses his size to pick out rebounds.
Revised:  Kobe Bryant is a proven scorer, and Pau Gasol uses his size to pick out rebounds.
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Original: The Los Angeles Lakers need to win tonight's 9:00 p.m. local time (0400 UTC) home game to stay in the 2010 NBA Finals .
Revised: The need to win tonight's 9:00 p.m. local time (0400 UTC) home game to stay in the 2010 NBA Finals .
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Original: The Los Angeles Lakers need to win tonight's 9:00 p.m. local time (0400 UTC) home game to stay in the 2010 NBA Finals .
Revised: The Los Angeles Lakers need to win tonight's 9:00 p.m. local time (0400 UTC) home game to stay in the 2010 .
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Original:  The Boston Celtics beat the Los Angeles Lakers 92–86 on Sunday in game five of the seven-game series.
Revised:  The beat the Los Angeles Lakers 92–86 on Sunday in game five of the seven-game series.
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Original:  The Celtics may have underperformed over the season, but in these 2010 playoffs , they have been playing like the championship team they were two years ago.
Revised:  The Celtics may have underperformed over the season, but in these , they have been playing like the championship team they were two years ago.
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Original:  Though Kobe Bryant scored 38 points, there were no other other major point contributors from the Lakers.
Revised:  Though scored 38 points, there were no other other major point contributors from the Lakers.
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Original:  According to the ICRC only , "60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system."
Revised:  According to the ICRC only "60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system."
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Original:  Raw Sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river.
Revised:  Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river.
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Original:  In addition, because of overused aquifers  Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt . " This has made the drinking water unfit for consumption.
Revised:  Because of overused aquifers Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt . " This has made the drinking water unfit for consumption.
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Original:  In addition, because of overused aquifers  Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt . " This has made the drinking water unfit for consumption.
Revised:  In addition, because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt . " This has made the drinking water unfit for consumption.
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Original:  In addition, because of overused aquifers  Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt . " This has made the drinking water unfit for consumption.
Revised:  In addition, because of overused aquifers Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt " This has made the drinking water unfit for consumption.
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Original:  In addition, because of overused aquifers  Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt . " This has made the drinking water unfit for consumption.
Revised:  In addition, because of overused aquifers Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt . " leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption.
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Original: The traditionally neutral International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) issued a statement today calling for an end to Israel's blockade of the Gaza Strip which it called a violation of international humanitarian law.
Revised: The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) issued a statement today calling for an end to Israel's blockade of the Gaza Strip which it called a violation of international humanitarian law.
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Original:   The statement gives an overview of what the Red Cross sees as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza today.
Revised:  " The statement gives an overview of what the Red Cross sees as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza today.
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Original:  The ICRC describes how the blockade has seriously impoverished the people of Gaza, as well as denied them basic access to housing, food and health care.
Revised:  The ICRC describes how the blockade has seriously impoverished the people of Gaza, as well as denying them basic access to housing, food and health care.
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Original:  Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk . Because of overused aquifers, Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption.
Revised:  Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers, Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption.
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Original:  However, the ICRC  recognized that, "Over 800 Gazan detainees in Israeli prisons have been prevented from meeting face-to-face with their loved ones since June 2007.
Revised:  However, the ICRC also recognized that, "Over 800 Gazan detainees in Israeli prisons have been prevented from meeting face-to-face with their loved ones since June 2007.
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Original:  However, the ICRC also recognized that, "Over 800 Gazan detainees in Israeli prisons have been prevented from meeting face-to-face with their loved ones since June 2007.
Revised:  The ICRC recognized that, "Over 800 Gazan detainees in Israeli prisons have been prevented from meeting face-to-face with their loved ones since June 2007.
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Original: The statement gives an overview of what the Red Cross sees as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza today .
Revised: The statement gave an overview of what the Red Cross sees as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza today .
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Original: The statement gives an overview of what the Red Cross sees as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza today .
Revised: The statement gives an overview of what the Red Cross viewed as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza today .
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Original: The statement gives an overview of what the Red Cross sees as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza today .
Revised: The statement gives an overview of what the Red Cross sees as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza .
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Original:  The ICRC describes how the blockade has seriously impoverished the people of Gaza, as well as denying them basic access to housing, food and health care.
Revised:  The ICRC described how the blockade has seriously impoverished the people of Gaza, as well as denying them basic access to housing, food and health care.
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Original:  The ICRC claims the blockade has almost totally destroyed Gaza's economy which is kept on life support by an elaborate tunnel system used to smuggle in goods.
Revised:  The ICRC claimed the blockade has almost totally destroyed Gaza's economy which is kept on life support by an elaborate tunnel system used to smuggle in goods.
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Original:  Even though Israel claims it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC claims that it still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds causing great economic hardships.
Revised:  Even though Israel stated it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC claims that it still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds causing great economic hardships.
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Original:  Even though Israel claims it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC claims that it still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds causing great economic hardships.
Revised:  Even though Israel claims it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds causing great economic hardships.
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Original:  The ICRC also outlines the condition of the health care system in Gaza.
Revised:  The ICRC outlined the condition of the health care system in Gaza.
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Original:  The ICRC claims that electricity blackouts are on average seven hours a day, meaning that hospitals must run on generators.
Revised:  The ICRC stated that electricity blackouts are on average seven hours a day, meaning that hospitals must run on generators.
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Original:  To make matters worse fuel reserves for the generators are running out, and the ICRC reports that already three times in 2010 Gaza's hospitals have run out of fuel.
Revised:  To make matters worse fuel reserves for the generators are running out, and the ICRC reported that already three times in 2010 Gaza's hospitals have run out of fuel.
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Original:  Also at risk is Gaza's water supply.
Revised:  The ICRC highlighted a potential risk to Gaza's water supply.
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Original:  The ICRC also urges for the rights of Israeli soldier Gilad Shalit, who is held prisoner by Hamas, to be respected.
Revised:  The ICRC urged for the rights of Israeli soldier Gilad Shalit, who is held prisoner by Hamas, to be respected.
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Original: The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) issued a statement today calling for an end to Israel's blockade of the Gaza Strip which it called a "...collective punishment imposed in clear violation of Israel's obligations under international humanitarian law."
Revised: The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) issued a statement today calling for an end to Israel's blockade of the Gaza Strip which it calls a "...collective punishment imposed in clear violation of Israel's obligations under international humanitarian law."
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Original:  The statement gave an overview of what the Red Cross viewed as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza.
Revised:  The statement gives an overview of what the Red Cross viewed as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza.
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Original:  The statement gave an overview of what the Red Cross viewed as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza.
Revised:  The statement gave an overview of what the Red Cross views as a humanitarian crisis in Gaza.
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Original:  The ICRC described how the blockade has seriously impoverished the people of Gaza, as well as denying them basic access to housing, food and health care.
Revised:  The ICRC describes how the blockade has seriously impoverished the people of Gaza, as well as denying them basic access to housing, food and health care.
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Original:  The ICRC claimed the blockade has almost totally destroyed Gaza's economy  which is kept on life support by an elaborate tunnel system used to smuggle in goods.
Revised:  The ICRC claims the blockade has almost totally destroyed Gaza's economy which is kept on life support by an elaborate tunnel system used to smuggle in goods.
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Original:  The ICRC claimed the blockade has almost totally destroyed Gaza's economy  which is kept on life support by an elaborate tunnel system used to smuggle in goods.
Revised:  The ICRC claimed the blockade has almost totally destroyed Gaza's economy , which is kept on life support by an elaborate tunnel system used to smuggle in goods.
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Original:  Even though Israel stated it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds  causing great economic hardships .
Revised:  Even though Israel has stated that it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds causing great economic hardships .
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Original:  Even though Israel stated it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds  causing great economic hardships .
Revised:  Even though Israel stated it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies Gazans access to their fishing grounds causing great economic hardships .
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Original:  Even though Israel stated it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds  causing great economic hardships .
Revised:  Even though Israel stated it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds , causing great economic hardships .
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Original:  Even though Israel stated it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds  causing great economic hardships .
Revised:  Even though Israel stated it no longer occupies the Gaza Strip, the ICRC said that the country still denies access of Gazans to their fishing grounds causing great economic hardship .
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Original:  The ICRC outlined the condition of the health care system in Gaza .
Revised:  Outlining the condition of the health care system in Gaza .
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Original:  To make matters worse fuel reserves for the generators are running out , and the ICRC reported that already three times in 2010 Gaza's hospitals have run out of fuel.
Revised:  To make matters worse fuel supplies for the generators are running out , and the ICRC reported that already three times in 2010 Gaza's hospitals have run out of fuel.
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Original:  To make matters worse fuel reserves for the generators are running out , and the ICRC reported that already three times in 2010 Gaza's hospitals have run out of fuel.
Revised:  To make matters worse fuel reserves for the generators are erratic , and the ICRC reported that already three times in 2010 Gaza's hospitals have run out of fuel.
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Original:  The ICRC highlighted a potential risk to Gaza's water supply.
Revised:  The statement also highlighted a potential risk to Gaza's water supply.
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Original:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
Revised:  According to the ICRC , only 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
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Original:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
Revised:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system , and raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
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Original:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
Revised:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river , posing a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
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Original:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk , because of overused aquifers , Gaza's drinking water has "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
Revised:  According to the ICRC only " 60\% of Gaza's 1.4 million inhabitants are connected to a sewage collection system ." Raw sewage is dumped into the Wadi Gaza river . Many families live along side the river, and the sewage poses a great health risk to many families living alongside the river, where overused aquifers results in drinking water unfit for consumption with "high levels of nitrate, chloride and salt" leaving the drinking water unfit for consumption .
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