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Original:  The vascular amplification and inflammation is adjacent to the bone, and bone absorption occurs next to a large growth in fibroblast and endothelial cells which is composed of the minute fibers (fibrils) with small vascular conduits (channels of passage for fluids).
Revised:  The vascular amplification and inflammation is adjacent to the bone, and bone absorption occurs next to a large growth in fibroblast and endothelial cells which is composed of the small fibers (fibrils) with small vascular conduits (channels of passage for fluids).
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Original: IdeaList was a commercially marketed free form text database application originally published by Blackwell Software, a divison of Blackwell Science Ltd.
Revised: IdeaList was a commercially marketed free form text database application originally published by Blackwell Software, a division of Blackwell Science Ltd.
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Original: Francisco Hernáiz (born Francisco de Asis Hernaiz y Segura) was a Venezuelan military officer and political figure during the XIX century.
Revised: Francisco Hernáiz (born Francisco de Asis Hernáiz y Segura) was a Venezuelan military officer and political figure during the XIX century.
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Original: Francisco Hernáiz (born Francisco de Asis Hernáiz y Segura) was a Venezuelan military officer and political figure during the XIX century . Born in Puerto Rico he achieved the grade of Counter admiral and performed his duty as Secretary of War and Navy (Ministry of Defense) during the governments of José Antonio Páez, José María Vargas and Carlos Soublette.
Revised: Francisco Hernáiz (born Francisco de Asis Hernáiz y Segura) was a Venezuelan military officer and political figure during the 19th century . Born in Puerto Rico he achieved the grade of Counter admiral and performed his duty as Secretary of War and Navy (Ministry of Defense) during the governments of José Antonio Páez, José María Vargas and Carlos Soublette.
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Original: Francisco Hernáiz (born Francisco de Asis Hernáiz y Segura) was a Venezuelan military officer and political figure during the 19th century . Born in Puerto Rico he achieved the grade of Counter admiral and performed his duty as Secretary of War and Navy (Ministry of Defense) during the governments of José Antonio Páez, José María Vargas and Carlos Soublette.
Revised: Francisco Hernáiz (born Francisco de Asis Hernáiz y Segura) was a Venezuelan military officer and political figure during the 19th century . Born in Puerto Rico he achieved the grade of Rear admiral and performed his duty as Secretary of War and Navy (Ministry of Defense) during the governments of José Antonio Páez, José María Vargas and Carlos Soublette.
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Original:  In 1864, he was recognized with the grade of Major General of the Navy (Rear admiral) by the Government of Juan Crisóstomo Falcón 
Revised:  In 1864, he was recognized with the grade of Major General of the Navy (Rear admiral) by the Government of Juan Crisóstomo Falcón .
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Original: Family Life The son of Ramon Hernaiz y Garizabal and Maria Concepcion Segura y Mirrier, was born October 4, 1797 in San Juan de Puerto Rico.
Revised: Family life The son of Ramon Hernaiz y Garizabal and Maria Concepcion Segura y Mirrier, was born October 4, 1797 in San Juan de Puerto Rico.
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Original:  On the March 17 of 1830 he married the daughter of General Carlos Soublette, Dolores Soublette Buroz.
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Original:  On the March 17 of 1830 he married the daughter of General Carlos Soublette, Dolores Soublette Buroz.
Revised:  On the March 17 , 1830 he married the daughter of General Carlos Soublette, Dolores Soublette Buroz.
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Original:  Francisco Hernáiz dies in Caracas on February 23 of 1866.
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Original:  Military and Political Life He undertook military and naval studies in Spain.
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Original:  In 1836, during the Coup d'état against José María Vargas known as Revolution of the Reforms or “The Carujada” , Hernaiz joins the conservative militants loyal to the government.
Revised:  In 1836, during the Coup d'état against José María Vargas known as Revolution of the Reforms or "The Carujada" , Hernaiz joins the conservative militants loyal to the government.
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Original:  In 1848 during the attempt to over throw José Tadeo Monagas by Paez, knowns as “ the Venezuelan Civil War of 1848-1849” , Hernaiz fought among the paecistas which would eventually be defeated.
Revised:  In 1848 during the attempt to over throw José Tadeo Monagas by Paez, knowns as " the Venezuelan Civil War of 1848-1849” , Hernaiz fought among the paecistas which would eventually be defeated.
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Original:  In 1848 during the attempt to over throw José Tadeo Monagas by Paez, knowns as “ the Venezuelan Civil War of 1848-1849” , Hernaiz fought among the paecistas which would eventually be defeated.
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Original: The Para tribe (sometimes spelt Makuri, Makware) is one of the Naga tribes that mostly resides in Naga Self-Administered Zone in Myanmar .
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Original: The Para tribe (also known as Jejara) is one of the Naga tribes that mostly resides in Naga Self-Administered Zone in Myanmar .
Revised: The Para tribe (also known as Jejara) is one of the Naga URL that mostly resides in Naga Self-Administered Zone in Myanmar .
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Original: The Para tribe (also known as Jejara) is one of the  Naga URL that mostly resides in Naga Self-Administered Zone in Myanmar.
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Original:  They are one of the major Naga tribes of Myanmar and mostly inhabits around Lay Shi Township in URL
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Original:  They are one of the major Naga tribes of Myanmar and mostly inhabits around Lay Shi Township in URL
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Original: The Para tribe (also known as Jejara) is one of the tribal Naga URL They reside mostly in the Naga Self-Administered Zone in Myanmar.
Revised: The Para tribe (also known as Jejara) is one of the tribal Naga peoples. They reside mostly in the Naga Self-Administered Zone in Myanmar.
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Original: Further reading Cowan, D. A. (1992).
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Original:  Brazilian journal of microbiology : publication of the Brazilian Society for Microbiology%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , 40(1), 1-11.
Revised:  Brazilian journal of microbiology : %DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , 40(1), 1-11.
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Original:  With this the genetic information can then be implanted in the given enzymes, polymers, proteases and other various organic compounds to give them desired resistances .
Revised:  With this the genetic information can then be implanted in the given enzymes, polymers, proteases and other various organic compounds to give them desired resistance .
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Original:  Overview of Extremophiles alt=|Thermal lake in which thermophilic extremophiles thrive.
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Original:  Thermophilic extremophiles Thermophilic extremophiles live in areas of extreme heat with the best example being geothermal vents at the bottom of the ocean.
Revised:  Thermophilic Thermophilic extremophiles live in areas of extreme heat with the best example being geothermal vents at the bottom of the ocean.
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Original:  Halophilic extremophiles Halophilic extremophiles live in areas of high salinity such as solar salterns and soda lakes.
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Original:  Methanogens extremophiles Methanogenic extremophiles live just about anywhere and are the most widespread.
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Original:  Psychrophilic extremophiles Psychrophilic Extremophiles have the ability to maintain high growth rates and enzyme activity at temperatures even as low as 0℃.
Revised:  Psychrophilic Psychrophilic Extremophiles have the ability to maintain high growth rates and enzyme activity at temperatures even as low as 0℃.
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Original:  Importance of Extremophiles to Biotechnology Scientists at a biotechnical laboratory synthesizing DNA.
Revised:  Importance Scientists at a biotechnical laboratory synthesizing DNA.
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Original:  Applications current uses Future Developments Thanks to the increased interest in extremophiles the revolutionary technique of PCR was pioneered and brought the field of DNA study to the next level.
Revised:  current uses Future Developments Thanks to the increased interest in extremophiles the revolutionary technique of PCR was pioneered and brought the field of DNA study to the next level.
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Original:  Applications current uses Future Developments Thanks to the increased interest in extremophiles the revolutionary technique of PCR was pioneered and brought the field of DNA study to the next level.
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Original:  Applications current uses Future Developments Thanks to the increased interest in extremophiles the revolutionary technique of PCR was pioneered and brought the field of DNA study to the next level.
Revised:  Applications current uses Future developments Thanks to the increased interest in extremophiles the revolutionary technique of PCR was pioneered and brought the field of DNA study to the next level.
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Original:  Another advancement that scientists hope to make using these organisms is to increase the degradation of landfills around the world using methanogenic species that thrive on the organic compounds found there  Not only would this reduce waste, but the methane produced is hoped to be collected and used as an energy source.
Revised:  Another advancement that scientists hope to make using these organisms is to increase the degradation of landfills around the world using methanogenic species that thrive on the organic compounds found there . Not only would this reduce waste, but the methane produced is hoped to be collected and used as an energy source.
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Original:  Not only has this process been noted as safer and more environmentally friendly, but is is also able to extract more metal.
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Original:  He is known for performing in Cirque du Soleil's Michael Jackson tribute The Immortal World Tour and performance at the 2012 Billboard Music Awards as a backup dancer for Goodie Mob.
Revised:  Sok is known for performing in Cirque du Soleil's Michael Jackson tribute The Immortal World Tour and performance at the 2012 Billboard Music Awards as a backup dancer for Goodie Mob.
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Original:  Sok started dancing at the age of 15 and is of French descent.
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Original:  Career Lahiri passed M.A. LL.B  and practice in the Calcutta High Court.
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Original:  He  served as a Chief Justice of the High Court in 1959 after Justice K.C Dashgupta was appointed as judge of the Supreme Court of India.
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Original:  Justice lahiri retired in 1961 from the post.
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Original:  Career Lahiri passed M.A. LL.B. and practice in the Calcutta High Court.
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Original:  He became judge of the High Court and also served as a Chief Justice of the High Court in 1959 after Justice Kulada Charan Das Gupta was appointed as judge of the Supreme Court of India.
Revised:  He became judge of the High Court and also appointed as Chief Justice of the High Court in 1959 after Justice Kulada Charan Das Gupta was appointed as judge of the Supreme Court of India.
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Original:  He was also became the vice chancellor of the University of Calcutta from 11 January 1962 to 31 October 1962.
Revised:  He was also served as the vice chancellor of the University of Calcutta from 11 January 1962 to 31 October 1962.
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Original:  He was also served as the vice chancellor of the University of Calcutta from 11 January 1962 to 31 October 1962.
Revised:  He also served as the vice chancellor of the University of Calcutta from 11 January 1962 to 31 October 1962.
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Original: Ranjith Padinhateeri (born 1973) is an Indian biological physicist and a professor at the Indian Institute of Technology, Mumbai.
Revised: Ranjith Padinhateeri is an Indian biological physicist and a professor at the Indian Institute of Technology, Mumbai.
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Original: File:BO-Bartolina Sisa manifestation, Trinidad.jpg|Bartolina Sisa manifestation, Trinidad (Bolivia).
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Original:   Together with her husband, Tupac Katari, and sister-in-law Gregoria Apaza, she led an indigenous uprising against the Spanish in Bolivia  at the head of an army of some 40,000 which laid siege to   the city of La Paz in 1781.
Revised:  As it was common for peasant families of the region, she traveled across the Altiplano selling the goods produced by her family. Also in Sica Sica lived Julián Apaza, later to be known as Túpac Katari, whom Sisa would marry and have four children. According to the Franciscan friar Matías Balderrama, Sisa was thin, of medium height, comely appearance and great intelligence. Together with her husband, Tupac Katari, and sister-in-law Gregoria Apaza, she led an indigenous uprising against the Spanish in Bolivia at the head of an army of some 40,000 which laid siege to the city of La Paz in 1781.
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Original:   Together with her husband, Tupac Katari, and sister-in-law Gregoria Apaza, she led an indigenous uprising against the Spanish in Bolivia  at the head of an army of some 40,000 which laid siege to   the city of La Paz in 1781.
Revised:  During her early adulthood Sisa witnessed the violence and injustice that the indigenous peoples of the Altiplano were often victims of at hands of the Spanish rule, which later motivated her to join her husband leading indigenous militias across the Altiplano to resist the colonial rule. at the head of an army of some 40,000 which laid siege to the city of La Paz in 1781.
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Original:   Together with her husband, Tupac Katari, and sister-in-law Gregoria Apaza, she led an indigenous uprising against the Spanish in Bolivia  at the head of an army of some 40,000 which laid siege to   the city of La Paz in 1781.
Revised:  Together with her husband, Tupac Katari, and sister-in-law Gregoria Apaza, she led an indigenous uprising against the Spanish in Bolivia at the head of an army of around 40,000 which laid siege to the city of La Paz in 1781.
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Original:  The siegewas broken by colonial troops who advanced from Lima and Buenos Aires.
Revised:  After almost 190 days of siege, it was finally broken by a Spanish reinforcement force arriving from Lima, La Plata and Buenos Aires.
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Original:  Iván Ignacio, "OUR HOMMAGE TO COMMANDANT BARTOLINA SISA, INCORRUPTIBLE AYMARA LEADER," accessed 07/14/06.
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Original: 18th-century Bolivian people Category:Executed Bolivian people Category:Bolivian people of Aymara descent Category:Executed Bolivian women Category:Executed revolutionaries Category:History of Bolivia Category:Indigenous military personnel of the Americas Category: Resistance to colonialism Category:People executed by Spain by hanging Category:People executed for treason against Spain Category:Rebellions in South America Category:Women in war in South America Category:Women in 18th-century warfa
Revised: 18th-century Bolivian people Category:Executed Bolivian people Category:Bolivian people of Aymara descent Category:Executed Bolivian women Category:Executed revolutionaries Category:History of Bolivia Category:Indigenous military personnel of the Americas Category: Indigenous rebellions against the Spanish Empire Category:People executed by Spain by hanging Category:People executed for treason against Spain Category:Rebellions in South America Category:Women in war in South America Category:Women in 18th-century warfa
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Original: Bartolina Sisa Vargas (c. 1750 - 5 September 1782) was an Aymaran woman and indigenous heroine who led numerous revolts against the Spanish rule in Charcas, then part of the Viceroyalty of Peru and present-day Bolivia.
Revised: Bartolina Sisa Vargas (c. 1750 – 5 September 1782) was an Aymaran woman and indigenous heroine who led numerous revolts against the Spanish rule in Charcas, then part of the Viceroyalty of Peru and present-day Bolivia.
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Original: Bartolina Sisa Vargas ( c. 1750 – 5 September 1782) was an Aymaran woman and indigenous heroine who led numerous revolts against the Spanish rule in Charcas, then part of the Viceroyalty of Peru and present-day Bolivia.
Revised: Bartolina Sisa Vargas ( 1750 – 5 September 1782) was an Aymaran woman and indigenous heroine who led numerous revolts against the Spanish rule in Charcas, then part of the Viceroyalty of Peru and present-day Bolivia.
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Original:  Also in Sica Sica lived Julián Apaza, later to be known as Túpac Katari, whom Sisa would marry and have four children.
Revised:  Also in Sica Sica lived Julián Apaza, later to be known as Túpac Katari, whom Sisa married and with whom she had four children.
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Original:  He has then studied at Govt. arts & science college, Calicut from where he obtained master  degree in Malayalam language.
Revised:  He has then studied at Govt. arts & science college, Calicut from where he obtained master 's degree in Malayalam language.
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Original: Article Evaluation: Healthcare and the LGBT community Evaluating content%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic?
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Original: Article Evaluation: Healthcare and the LGBT community Evaluating content%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic?
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Original:  Many of the examples given in the exposition relate only to Lesbians and does and not show the breadth of experiences from all of the members of the LGBT community Evaluating tone%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Is the article neutral?
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Original:  Again, I feel that there was a strong emphasis on the experience of Lesbians and much less on other members of the LGBT community Evaluating sources%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Check a few citations.
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Original:  The sources are definitely a mixed bag, some referencing peer reviewed articles, some referencing Gay.com articles which clearly have bias Checking the talk page Now take a look at how others are talking about this article on the talk page.
Revised:  The sources are definitely a mixed bag, some referencing peer reviewed articles, some referencing Gay.com articles which clearly have bias 
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Original:  Public transit produces less emissions than cars which reduces levels in the air, decreasing risk for the harmful effects of emissions.
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Original:  Health and Transportation Background%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Transportation safety falls under the branch of public health Aggressive campaigning for seat belt laws and other safety measure.
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Original:  Air Quality/Emission Production%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% List of pollutants put out by vehicles Criteria Air Pollutants PM SO2 NOx Pb Ground Level O3 CO All of these come either directly or indirectly from burning fuel URL Measures taken to reduce the emissions from cars Use graph from EPA "History of Reducing Air Pollution" Trains vs Cars on emissions "In absolute terms, the picture is clear.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% List of pollutants put out by vehicles Criteria Air Pollutants PM SO2 NOx Pb Ground Level O3 CO All of these come either directly or indirectly from burning fuel URL Measures taken to reduce the emissions from cars Use graph from EPA "History of Reducing Air Pollution" Trains vs Cars on emissions "In absolute terms, the picture is clear.
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Original:  most practical URL Biking the most efficient way to move around a city Urban Centers and Public Transportation%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Public transportation is the most effective and cost efficient option to travel around a city URL Using public transportation makes you healthier you walk more on average than those who drive which is important to health safety factors of taking public transit (busses/trains)
Revised:  most practical URL Biking the most efficient way to move around a city %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Public transportation is the most effective and cost efficient option to travel around a city URL Using public transportation makes you healthier you walk more on average than those who drive which is important to health safety factors of taking public transit (busses/trains)
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Original:  than individual cars Pollution/ emissions of cars vs PT URL Different factors that effect the health impact of PT Accessibility Cost Quality Efficiency UR
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