wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Both trains did not derail in the impact . Reports suggest the two trains, one a regional stop system vehicle and the other an , were not seriously damaged in the incident yesterday at 1830 (1630 ).
Revised:  Neither train derailed . Reports suggest the two trains, one a regional stop system vehicle and the other an , were not seriously damaged in the incident yesterday at 1830 (1630 ).
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Original:  Passengers were given assistance to get out of the train carriages, with harmed individuals being transported to hospital.
Revised:  Passengers were assisted out of the train carriages, with harmed individuals being transported to hospital.
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Original:  Passengers were given assistance to get out of the train carriages, with harmed individuals being transported to hospital.
Revised:  Passengers were given assistance to get out of the train carriages, with those injured transported to hospital.
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Original:  Kraszewski commented on how the spaciousness of one of the train's carriages possibly comtributed to the passengers' injuries and spoke of the assumption that "many people were thrown around the train by the crash : against walls, seats and other people", adding that neck injuries and broken bones were among the kinds of injury experienced.
Revised:  Kraszewski commented on how the spaciousness of one of the train's carriages possibly comtributed to the passengers' injuries and spoke of the assumption that "many people were thrown around the train by the crash ; against walls, seats and other people", adding that neck injuries and broken bones were among the kinds of injury experienced.
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Original:  How the two trains ended up travelling in opposite directions on the same track at the same time is uncertain at this stage.
Revised:  How the two trains ended up travelling towards each other is uncertain at this stage.
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Original:  An investigation has been commenced to try and establish what the cause of the accidentwas .
Revised:  An investigation into the accident's cause has commenced .
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Original:  Kraszewski commented on how the spaciousness of one of the train's carriages possibly comtributed to the passengers' injuries and spoke of the assumption that "many people were thrown around the train by the crash;
Revised:  Kraszewski commented on how the spaciousness of one of the train's carriages possibly contributed to the passengers' injuries and spoke of the assumption that "many people were thrown around the train by the crash;
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Original:  The annual inflation rate is now over 1000\% in Zimbabwe , and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years  in 1980 to only 34 years 
Revised:  The annual inflation rate is over 1000\% in Zimbabwe , and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years in 1980 to only 34 years 
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Original:  The annual inflation rate is now over 1000\% in Zimbabwe , and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years  in 1980 to only 34 years 
Revised:  The annual inflation rate is now over 1000\% , and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years in 1980 to only 34 years 
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Original:  The annual inflation rate is now over 1000\% in Zimbabwe , and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years  in 1980 to only 34 years 
Revised:  The annual inflation rate is now over 1000\% in Zimbabwe , and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years in 1980 to only 34 years now
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Original:  She was present at Porta Farm during the second day of its demolition, and was shocked by the brutality of the evictions . Zimbabwe's current annual inflation rate is over 1000\%, and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years when Zimbabwe became independent in 1980 to only 34 years now
Revised:  She was present at Porta Farm during the second day of its demolition, and was shocked by the brutality of the evictions Zimbabwe's current annual inflation rate is over 1000\%, and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years when Zimbabwe became independent in 1980 to only 34 years now
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Original:  She was present at Porta Farm during the second day of its demolition, and was shocked by the brutality of the evictions . Zimbabwe's current annual inflation rate is over 1000\%, and average life expectancy has dropped from 55 years when Zimbabwe became independent in 1980 to only 34 years now
Revised:  She was present at Porta Farm during the second day of its demolition, and was shocked by the brutality of the evictions . 
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Original: A 2005 report on Zimbabwe's forced evictions programme (called Operation Murambatsvina)  by United Nations Special Envoy Anna Tibaijuka estimated that it has cost 700,000 people their homes or livelihoods.
Revised:  Zimbabwe's forced evictions programme (called Operation Murambatsvina) by United Nations Special Envoy Anna Tibaijuka estimated that it has cost 700,000 people their homes or livelihoods.
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Original:  She was present at Porta Farm during the second day of its demolition, and was shocked by the brutality of the evictions   
Revised:  She was present at Porta Farm during the second day of its demolition, and was shocked by the brutality of the evictions . 
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Original:  Two children were  among the dead.
Revised:  Two children were reportedly among the dead.
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Original: Amid chaos over proposal about creating direct transport links with China Taiwan’s dominate Democratic Progressive Party deputy, Wang Shu-hui, snatched the written proposal and shoved it into her mouth.
Revised: Amid chaos over proposal about creating direct transport links with China Taiwan’s Democratic Progressive Party deputy, Wang Shu-hui, snatched the written proposal and shoved it into her mouth.
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Original: Amid chaos over  proposal about creating direct transport links with China Taiwan’s Democratic Progressive Party deputy, Wang Shu-hui, snatched the written proposal and shoved it into her mouth.
Revised: Amid chaos over a proposal about creating direct transport links with China Taiwan’s Democratic Progressive Party deputy, Wang Shu-hui, snatched the written proposal and shoved it into her mouth.
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Original:  China still claims Taiwan as their 
Revised:  China still claims Taiwan as theirs. 
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Original: Amid chaos over a proposal about creating direct transport links with  China, Taiwan’s Democratic Progressive Party deputy, Wang Shu-hui, snatched the written proposal and shoved it into her mouth.
Revised: Amid chaos over a proposal about creating direct transport links with mainland China, Taiwan’s Democratic Progressive Party deputy, Wang Shu-hui, snatched the written proposal and shoved it into her mouth.
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Original: The amendement to the Statute Governing the Relations Between the People of the Taiwan Area and the Mainland Area would have permitted direct transit between mainland China and Taiwan, which now has to be routed through an intermediate—usually Hong Kong.
Revised: The amendment to the Statute Governing the Relations Between the People of the Taiwan Area and the Mainland Area would have permitted direct transit between mainland China and Taiwan, which now has to be routed through an intermediate—usually Hong Kong.
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Original:  As Mr Howard began to continue his answer, Julia Irwin (Labor, Fowler) interreupted Mr Howard.
Revised:  As Mr Howard began to continue his answer, Julia Irwin (Labor, Fowler) interrupted Mr Howard.
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Original:  She said that it was not unsual for people to walk around the chamber and talk to each other during question while government members were speaking.
Revised:  She said that it was not unusual for people to walk around the chamber and talk to each other during question while government members were speaking.
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Original:  Ms Gillard's comment followed Mr Abbott tabling a document written by Medibank Private relating to a media campaign to counter negative views on it's sale.
Revised:  Ms Gillard's comment followed Mr Abbott tabling a document written by Medibank Private relating to a media campaign to counter negative views on its sale.
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Original:  The 6.06 LTS version will be the first to offer Long Term Support: three years on the desktop and five years on the server     
Revised:  The 6.06 LTS version will be the first to offer Long Term Support: three years on the desktop and five years on the server . 
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Original: Although its first release was only a year ago , Ubuntu Linux has quickly become one of the most popular Linux distributions.
Revised: Although its first release was only a year ago , Ubuntu Linux has become one of the most popular Linux distributions.
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Original: Since its first official release in October 2004, Ubuntu Linux has become one of the most popular Linux distributions.
Revised: Since its first official release in October 2004, Ubuntu has become one of the most popular Linux distributions.
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Original: Users quickly swarmed the UbuntuFoundation 's servers  trying to download the new version.
Revised: Users quickly swarmed Ubuntu 's servers trying to download the new version.
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Original:  I liked his dad a lot.
Revised:  I liked a lot.
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Original:  We were working an independent expenditure committee that I helped with a gentleman named Charles Francis that was a that supported George W. Bush , but then he let us down with his vocal support for a banning gay marriage and other anti-gay activities that campaign and he were involved with in . So I did not help him.
Revised:  We were working an independent expenditure committee that I helped with a gentleman named Charles Francis that was a that supported George W. Bush . But then he let us down with his vocal support for a banning gay marriage and other anti-gay activities that campaign and he were involved with in . So I did not help him.
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Original:  And this church, which is on the cusp of having a President of the United States, is cruel and activities that have been done to LGBT members and followers and as well as all of us non-members, who have been critical of their activism.
Revised:  And this church, which is on the cusp of having a President of the United States, is cruel through activities that have been done to LGBT members and followers and as well as all of us non-members, who have been critical of their activism.
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Original:  And when there was a hurricane there  they got her to chair the foundation.
Revised:  And when there was a hurricane there , they got her to chair the foundation.
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Original:  Currently jobs is the number one issue and I talk about that , that 's a concern of younger voters in high school, college, wherever they are.
Revised:  Currently jobs is the number one issue and I talk about that . That 's a concern of younger voters in high school, college, wherever they are.
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Original:  So we just need to be a little more aware of that generation  so if there are 16 or 17 year old voters someday, they will be split, and that we will have welcomed them as Ronald Reagan did.
Revised:  So we just need to be a little more aware of that generation , so if there are 16 or 17 year old voters someday, they will be split, and that we will have welcomed them as Ronald Reagan did.
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Original:  There's a 70 year old man that just completely brought back a younger generation to the Republican Party that they had been driven away by Watergate .
Revised:  There's a 70 year old man that just completely brought back a younger generation to the Republican Party that they had been driven away by .
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Original:  We need to be much more aware , think out all of the ways to do it: to speak the language , to offer them the opportunity to participate , to teach them voting at a younger age in high school so that they get in more of a habit once out of high school and off to college or in workforce  and are less likely to become advantageous voters.
Revised:  We need to be much more aware . Think out all of the ways to do it: to speak the language , to offer them the opportunity to participate , to teach them voting at a younger age in high school so that they get in more of a habit once out of high school and off to college or in workforce and are less likely to become advantageous voters.
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Original:  We need to be much more aware , think out all of the ways to do it: to speak the language , to offer them the opportunity to participate , to teach them voting at a younger age in high school so that they get in more of a habit once out of high school and off to college or in workforce  and are less likely to become advantageous voters.
Revised:  We need to be much more aware , think out all of the ways to do it: to speak the language ; to offer them the opportunity to participate , to teach them voting at a younger age in high school so that they get in more of a habit once out of high school and off to college or in workforce and are less likely to become advantageous voters.
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Original:  We need to be much more aware , think out all of the ways to do it: to speak the language , to offer them the opportunity to participate , to teach them voting at a younger age in high school so that they get in more of a habit once out of high school and off to college or in workforce  and are less likely to become advantageous voters.
Revised:  We need to be much more aware , think out all of the ways to do it: to speak the language , to offer them the opportunity to participate ; to teach them voting at a younger age in high school so that they get in more of a habit once out of high school and off to college or in workforce and are less likely to become advantageous voters.
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Original:  We need to be much more aware , think out all of the ways to do it: to speak the language , to offer them the opportunity to participate , to teach them voting at a younger age in high school so that they get in more of a habit once out of high school and off to college or in workforce  and are less likely to become advantageous voters.
Revised:  We need to be much more aware , think out all of the ways to do it: to speak the language , to offer them the opportunity to participate , to teach them voting at a younger age in high school so that they get in more of a habit once out of high school and off to college or in workforce , and are less likely to become advantageous voters.
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Original:  Bring candidates like myself, Congressional candidates, their own candidates from city race, into the high school and I think that'll help people become better voters , and I also think it'll also help a certain percentage stay in high school that may not ordinarily, cause we're of course  losing a million high school students a year dropping out, and the 2 or 3 percent love politics and they're learning from politicians.
Revised:  Bring candidates like myself, Congressional candidates, their own candidates from city race, into the high school and I think that'll help people become better voters . And I also think it'll also help a certain percentage stay in high school that may not ordinarily, cause we're of course losing a million high school students a year dropping out, and the 2 or 3 percent love politics and they're learning from politicians.
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Original:  Bring candidates like myself, Congressional candidates, their own candidates from city race, into the high school and I think that'll help people become better voters , and I also think it'll also help a certain percentage stay in high school that may not ordinarily, cause we're of course  losing a million high school students a year dropping out, and the 2 or 3 percent love politics and they're learning from politicians.
Revised:  Bring candidates like myself, Congressional candidates, their own candidates from city race, into the high school and I think that'll help people become better voters , and I also think it'll also help a certain percentage stay in high school that may not ordinarily, cause we're of course , losing a million high school students a year dropping out, and the 2 or 3 percent love politics and they're learning from politicians.
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Original:  But I have no problems with going after big oil, and fine companies that have made a trillion dollars of profit off of the consumers, who are struggling right now with of course the trickle effect of high gasoline prices  affects the entire economy, not just at the pump.
Revised:  But I have no problems with going after big oil, and fine companies that have made a trillion dollars of profit off of the consumers, who are struggling right now with of course the trickle effect of high gasoline prices which affects the entire economy, not just at the pump.
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Original:  So far, Karger has appeared on four Republican primary ballots including Puerto Rico, where he was able to top  Ron Paul, who, at the time was one of the four major candidates in the race.
Revised:  So far, Karger has appeared on four Republican primary ballots including Puerto Rico, where he was able to top Congressman Ron Paul, who, at the time was one of the four major candidates in the race.
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Original: A fuel storage tank at Los Angeles International Airport (LAX) is on fire .
Revised: A fuel storage tank at Los Angeles International Airport (LAX) cought fire today .
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Original:  The 1-million gallon sotage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time (pacific) according to Ron Myers a spokesman for the LAX fire department, but also says that no planes are at risk and so far no flights have been cancelled, delayed or diverted.
Revised:  The 1-million gallon sotage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time (pacific) according to Ron Myers a spokesman for the LAX fire department, but also says that no planes were at risk and so far no flights have been cancelled, delayed or diverted.
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Original:  The 1-million gallon sotage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time (pacific) according to Ron Myers a spokesman for the LAX fire department, but also says that no planes are at risk and so far no flights have been cancelled, delayed or diverted.
Revised:  The 1-million gallon sotage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time (pacific) according to Ron Myers a spokesman for the LAX fire department, but also says that no planes are at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
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Original:  No injuries have been reported and no evacuations have been ordered.
Revised:  No injuries were reported and no evacuations have been ordered.
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Original:  No injuries have been reported and no evacuations have been ordered.
Revised:  No injuries have been reported and no evacuations were ordered.
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Original: The 1-million gallon sotage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time (pacific) according to Ron Myers a spokesman for the LAX fire department, but also says that no planes were at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
Revised: The 1-million gallon storage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time (pacific) according to Ron Myers a spokesman for the LAX fire department, but also says that no planes were at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
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Original: A fuel storage tank at Los Angeles International Airport (LAX) cought fire today.
Revised: A fuel storage tank at Los Angeles International Airport (LAX) caught fire today.
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Original:  The 1-million gallon storage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time ( pacific ) according to Ron Myers  a spokesman for the LAX fire department , but also says that no planes were at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
Revised:  The 1-million gallon storage tank caught fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time ( pacific ) according to Ron Myers a spokesman for the LAX fire department , but also says that no planes were at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
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Original:  The 1-million gallon storage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time ( pacific ) according to Ron Myers  a spokesman for the LAX fire department , but also says that no planes were at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
Revised:  The 1-million gallon storage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time ( pacific ) according to Ron Myers , a spokesman for the LAX fire department , but also says that no planes were at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
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Original:  The 1-million gallon storage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time ( pacific ) according to Ron Myers  a spokesman for the LAX fire department , but also says that no planes were at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
Revised:  The 1-million gallon storage tank cought fire at about 8:30 a.m. local time ( pacific ) according to Ron Myers a spokesman for the LAX fire department . Myers said that planes were not at risk and no flights were cancelled, delayed or diverted.
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Original: No flights were disrupted but the fire which is said to have been caused by a spark from a welder performing work on the tank.
Revised: The fire is said to have been caused by a spark from a welder performing work on the tank.
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Original: A terror attack againt the Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh headquarters in Nagpur was thwarted by the Maharashtra police early todaay morning.
Revised: A terror attack againt the Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh headquarters in Nagpur was thwarted by the Maharashtra police early today morning.
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Original:  A dairy was also recovred from the terrorists.
Revised:  A diary was also recovred from the terrorists.
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Original: A terror attack against the Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh headquarters in Nagpur was thwarted by the Maharashtra police early today morning.
Revised: An attack against the Rashtriya Swayamsevak Sangh headquarters in Nagpur was thwarted by the Maharashtra police early today morning.
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Original:  When confronted, the terrorists opened fire and were killed after a five-minute shootout.
Revised:  When confronted, the militants opened fire and were killed after a five-minute shootout.
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Original:  The identities of the three men , believed to be Lashkar-e-Toiba terrorists in their early twenties, is yet to be established.
Revised:  The identities of the three men is yet to be established.
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Original:  In 2005, former Egyptian president Hosni Mubarak contracted with Israel that for a 20 year period, Egypt would supply  gas at a discounted rate to the Israeli's.
Revised:  In 2005, Israel and Egypt, under former president , signed a 20-year trade deal whereby Egypt would supply gas at a discounted rate to the Israeli's.
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Original:  When this decision was broadcast Egyptian time on Sunday night , Egyptian news services were quick to critique whether this was a blatant contractual infringement, a necessary commercial move  or an attack on the original peace treaty between Egypt & Israel made at Camp David.
Revised:  When this decision was broadcast on Sunday night , Egyptian news services were quick to critique whether this was a blatant contractual infringement, a necessary commercial move or an attack on the original peace treaty between Egypt & Israel made at Camp David.
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