wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  It is defined by its relatively large size , and fluted morphology that allows it to be hafted onto the end of a spear.
Revised:  It is defined by its relatively large size and fluted morphology that allows it to be hafted onto the end of a spear.
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Original:  It is of some debate if this was a hand held thrusting spear, or a throwing spear, or an atlatl.
Revised:  It is of some debate if this was a handheld thrusting spear, or a throwing spear, or an atlatl.
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Original:  Often these stone tools are found hundreds of miles from their source stone in caches of semi complete blanks.
Revised:  Often these stone tools are found hundreds of miles from their source stone in caches of semi-complete blanks.
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Original:  It appears they would bury some good material they had brought with them when they traveled, and sometimes either forget where they buried it, or possibly found more high quality materiel in the new location, and had no need to retrieve the caches.
Revised:  It appears they would bury some good material they had brought with them when they traveled, and sometimes either forget where they buried it, or possibly found more high-quality materiel in the new location, and had no need to retrieve the caches.
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Original:  it may also contain turnip, leek, napa cabbage, carrots, and garlic.
Revised:  it may also contain turnip, leek, carrots, and garlic.
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Original: Gimjang (), also spelled kimjang,Dongyun Lee, Sunjoo Kim, Jinhee Cho and Jeongho Kim, "Microbial population dynamics and temperature changes during fermentation of kimjang kimchi", The Journal of Microbiology, Vol. 46, Number 5, 590-593 is the traditional process of preparation and preservation of kimchi, the spicy Korean pickled vegetable dish, in the wintertime.
Revised: Gimjang (), also spelled kimjang,Dongyun Lee, Sunjoo Kim, Jinhee Cho and Jeongho Kim, "Microbial population dynamics and temperature changes during fermentation of kimjang kimchi", The Journal of Microbiology, Vol. 46, Number 5, 590-593 is the traditional process of preparation and preservation of kimchi, the spicy Korean fermented vegetable dish, in the wintertime.
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Original:  The traditional solution in the countryside and prior to effective modern refrigeration is to store kimchi in earthenware jars in the ground, buried up to the neck level of the jar to prevent the contents from freezing.
Revised:  The traditional solution prior to effective modern refrigeration is to store kimchi in earthenware jars in the ground, buried up to the neck level of the jar to prevent the contents from freezing.
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Original:  The strong odours of kimchi can taint other products in a refrigerator, and despite modern advances in refrigeration, the custom of gimjang continues to be passed down the generations.
Revised:  The strong odors of kimchi can taint other products in a refrigerator, and despite modern advances in refrigeration, the custom of gimjang continues to be passed down the generations.
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Original:  Even some modern city dwellers store large jars of Gimjang on balconies. although some families have a dedicated fridge just for kimchi.
Revised:  It is common in cities for people to store large jars of Gimjang on balconies. although some families have a dedicated fridge just for kimchi.
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Original:  Even some modern city dwellers store large jars of Gimjang on balconies. although some families have a dedicated fridge just for kimchi.
Revised:  Even some modern city dwellers store large jars of Gimjang on balconies. It is also increasingly common to own and use secondary refrigerators designed specifically for storing kimchi.
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Original:  In an attempt to combat the increasing popularity of mass-produced kimchi, which is convenient for modern life, Seoul has created the world's only kimchi museum, where tourists and local people can sample different types of the pickle , and learn about the traditional gimjang process.
Revised:  In an attempt to combat the increasing popularity of mass-produced kimchi, which is convenient for modern life, Seoul has created the world's only kimchi museum, where tourists and local people can sample different types of the fermented dish , and learn about the traditional gimjang process.
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Original:  Although consumption figures have fallen, Koreans still consume of Kimchi per head each year .
Revised:  Although consumption figures have fallen, Koreans still consume of Kimchi per head each year 
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Original:  Ingredients may include cabbage, white radish, spring onion, garlic, ginger, onion, chilli powder, salt and sugar .
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Original: The Republic of Spanish Haiti (), also called Independent State of Spanish Haiti () was the independent state that resulted from the defeat of Spanish colonialists from Santo Domingo on November 9, 1821, led by General José Núñez de Cáceres.
Revised: The Republic of Spanish Haiti (), also called theIndependent State of Spanish Haiti () was the independent state that resulted from the defeat of Spanish colonialists from Santo Domingo on November 9, 1821, led by General José Núñez de Cáceres.
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Original:  Preparations for independence (1820–1821) Haitian President  Boyer decided to prepare for a rumored military advancement by Spain in the Haitian republic due to repetitive rumors that the French and the Spanish were going to invade the vulnerable east side of the island.
Revised:  Preparations for independence (1820–1821) Haitian President Boyer decided to prepare for a rumored military advancement by Spain into Haiti, due to repetitive rumors that the French and the Spanish were going to invade the vulnerable east side of the island.
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Original:  In 1820, Boyer sent Colonel Dezir Dalmassi to nearby towns such as Las Matas, San Juan de la Maguana  and Azua to convince locals to join a Republic that would provide them with jobs and great benefits.
Revised:  In 1820, Boyer sent Colonel Dezir Dalmassi to nearby towns such as San José de las Matas, San Juan de la Maguana and Azua to convince locals to join a Republic that would provide them with jobs and great benefits.
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Original:  In 1820, Boyer sent Colonel Dezir Dalmassi to nearby towns such as Las Matas, San Juan de la Maguana  and Azua to convince locals to join a Republic that would provide them with jobs and great benefits.
Revised:  In 1820, Boyer sent Colonel Dezir Dalmassi to nearby towns such as Las Matas, San Juan de la Maguana , and Azua to convince locals to join a Republic that would provide them with jobs and great benefits.
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Original:  In 1820, Boyer sent Colonel Dezir Dalmassi to nearby towns such as Las Matas, San Juan de la Maguana  and Azua to convince locals to join a Republic that would provide them with jobs and great benefits.
Revised:  In 1820, Boyer sent Colonel Dezir Dalmassi to nearby towns such as Las Matas, San Juan de la Maguana and Azua to convince locals to join a republic that would provide them with jobs and great benefits.
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Original:  In 1820, Boyer sent Colonel Dezir Dalmassi to nearby towns such as Las Matas, San Juan de la Maguana  and Azua to convince locals to join a Republic that would provide them with jobs and great benefits.
Revised:  In 1820, Boyer sent Colonel Dezir Dalmassi to nearby towns such as Las Matas, San Juan de la Maguana and Azua to convince locals to join a Republic that would provide them with jobs and other benefits.
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Original:  Instead of waiting for Dalmassi's return to Haiti, Boyer decided to invade the eastern part of the Island before Jose Nuñez de Caceres could finalize his intent to join Gran Colombia.
Revised:  Instead of waiting for Dalmassi's return to Haiti, Boyer decided to invade the eastern part of the Island before de Caceres could finalize his intent to join Gran Colombia.
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Original:  The state of the Republic of Spanish Haiti was not supported by the population of slaves and servants  who were wary of the rule of pure whites, and preferred to unite with French Haiti, because of their abolition of slavery.
Revised:  The state of the Republic of Spanish Haiti was not supported by the population of slaves and servants , who were wary of the rule of pure whites, and preferred to unite with French Haiti, because of their abolition of slavery.
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Original:  In late 1821 and early 1822, Haiti sent emissaries to the central and northern  Spanish Haiti to promote the accession of the country to Haiti , and the people began to raise the Haitian flag on public buildings and plazas, among them Hincha (present-day Hinche), but also in another large cities like Puerto Plata (13 December 1821), Dajabón (15 December), Santiago (29 December)
Revised:  In late 1821 and early 1822, Haiti sent emissaries to the central and northern parts of Spanish Haiti to promote the accession of the country to Haiti , and the people began to raise the Haitian flag on public buildings and plazas, among them Hincha (present-day Hinche), but also in another large cities like Puerto Plata (13 December 1821), Dajabón (15 December), Santiago (29 December)
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Original:  In late 1821 and early 1822, Haiti sent emissaries to the central and northern  Spanish Haiti to promote the accession of the country to Haiti , and the people began to raise the Haitian flag on public buildings and plazas, among them Hincha (present-day Hinche), but also in another large cities like Puerto Plata (13 December 1821), Dajabón (15 December), Santiago (29 December)
Revised:  In late 1821 and early 1822, Haiti sent emissaries to the central and northern Spanish Haiti to promote its annexation , and the people began to raise the Haitian flag on public buildings and plazas, among them Hincha (present-day Hinche), but also in another large cities like Puerto Plata (13 December 1821), Dajabón (15 December), Santiago (29 December)
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Original:  In late 1821 and early 1822, Haiti sent emissaries to the central and northern  Spanish Haiti to promote the accession of the country to Haiti , and the people began to raise the Haitian flag on public buildings and plazas, among them Hincha (present-day Hinche), but also in another large cities like Puerto Plata (13 December 1821), Dajabón (15 December), Santiago (29 December)
Revised:  In late 1821 and early 1822, Haiti sent emissaries to the central and northern Spanish Haiti to promote the accession of the country to Haiti , and the people began to raise the Haitian flag on public buildings and plazas, such as Hincha (present-day Hinche), but also in another large cities like Puerto Plata (13 December 1821), Dajabón (15 December), Santiago (29 December)
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Original:  In late 1821 and early 1822, Haiti sent emissaries to the central and northern  Spanish Haiti to promote the accession of the country to Haiti , and the people began to raise the Haitian flag on public buildings and plazas, among them Hincha (present-day Hinche), but also in another large cities like Puerto Plata (13 December 1821), Dajabón (15 December), Santiago (29 December)
Revised:  In late 1821 and early 1822, Haiti sent emissaries to the central and northern Spanish Haiti to promote the accession of the country to Haiti , and the people began to raise the Haitian flag on public buildings and plazas, among them Hincha (present-day Hinche), but also in large cities like Puerto Plata (13 December 1821), Dajabón (15 December), Santiago (29 December)
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Original:  A group of politicians and military officers continued to favor uniting the new nation with Haiti, as various elite families sought for political stability under Haitian president Jean-Pierre Boyer.
Revised:  A group of politicians and military officers continued to favor uniting the new nation with Haiti, as various elite families sought for political stability under Haitian president Boyer.
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Original:  A large faction based in the northern Cibao region were opposed to the union with Gran Colombia  and also sided with Haitian president Boyer.
Revised:  A large faction based in the northern Cibao region were opposed to the union with Gran Colombia , and also sided with Haitian president Boyer.
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Original:  A large faction based in the northern Cibao region were opposed to the union with Gran Colombia  and also sided with Haitian president Boyer.
Revised:  A large faction based in the northern Cibao region were opposed to the union with Gran Colombia and also sided with Boyer.
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Original:  On February 9, 1822, Boyer formally entered the capital city, Santo Domingo, where he was met with enthusiasm  and received by Núñez de Cáceres  who offered to him the keys of the Palace.
Revised:  On February 9, 1822, Boyer formally entered the capital city, Santo Domingo, where he was met with enthusiasm , and received by Núñez de Cáceres who offered to him the keys of the Palace.
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Original:  On February 9, 1822, Boyer formally entered the capital city, Santo Domingo, where he was met with enthusiasm  and received by Núñez de Cáceres  who offered to him the keys of the Palace.
Revised:  On February 9, 1822, Boyer formally entered the capital city, Santo Domingo, where he was met with enthusiasm and received by Núñez de Cáceres , who offered to him the keys of the Palace.
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Original:  Boyer rejected the offer saying: "I have not come into this city as a conqueror  but by the will of its inhabitants ".
Revised:  Boyer rejected the offer saying: "I have not come into this city as a conqueror , but by the will of its inhabitants ".
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Original:  Political reforms The first public act of Boyer was to enact the abolition of slavery and promise lands to all freed men  so they could freely dedicate their lives to agriculture in acres donated by the State .
Revised:  Political reforms The first public act of Boyer was to enact the abolition of slavery and promise lands to all freed men , so they could freely dedicate their lives to agriculture in acres donated by the State .
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Original:  Political reforms The first public act of Boyer was to enact the abolition of slavery and promise lands to all freed men  so they could freely dedicate their lives to agriculture in acres donated by the State .
Revised:  Political reforms The first public act of Boyer was to enact the abolition of slavery and promise lands to all freed men so they could freely dedicate their lives to agriculture in acres donated by the state .
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Original:  In Haiti, the French system of private land ownership guaranteed by the State was the norm, while  the Spanish section  the predominant system was communal grounds  and a hierarchy of tenancy that clashed.
Revised:  In Haiti, the French system of private land ownership guaranteed by the state was the norm, while the Spanish section the predominant system was communal grounds and a hierarchy of tenancy that clashed.
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Original:  In Haiti, the French system of private land ownership guaranteed by the State was the norm, while  the Spanish section  the predominant system was communal grounds  and a hierarchy of tenancy that clashed.
Revised:  In Haiti, the French system of private land ownership guaranteed by the State was the norm, while in the Spanish section the predominant system was communal grounds and a hierarchy of tenancy that clashed.
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Original:  In Haiti, the French system of private land ownership guaranteed by the State was the norm, while  the Spanish section  the predominant system was communal grounds  and a hierarchy of tenancy that clashed.
Revised:  In Haiti, the French system of private land ownership guaranteed by the State was the norm, while the Spanish section , the predominant system was communal grounds and a hierarchy of tenancy that clashed.
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Original:  In Haiti, the French system of private land ownership guaranteed by the State was the norm, while  the Spanish section  the predominant system was communal grounds  and a hierarchy of tenancy that clashed.
Revised:  In Haiti, the French system of private land ownership guaranteed by the State was the norm, while the Spanish section the predominant system was communal grounds , and a hierarchy of tenancy that clashed.
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Original:  The portion of freed slaves who did not wish to keep working with their former masters had little option but to join the military, which formed the Batallon 22, which joined the 'morenos libres' ( Free mulattos ) under Colonel Pablo Ali constituted the principal military force to the East of the island.
Revised:  The portion of freed slaves who did not wish to keep working with their former masters had little option but to join the military, which formed the Batallion 22, which joined the 'morenos libres' ( Free mulattos ) under Colonel Pablo Ali constituted the principal military force to the East of the island.
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Original:  The portion of freed slaves who did not wish to keep working with their former masters had little option but to join the military, which formed the Batallon 22, which joined the 'morenos libres' ( Free mulattos ) under Colonel Pablo Ali constituted the principal military force to the East of the island.
Revised:  The portion of freed slaves who did not wish to keep working with their former masters had little option but to join the military, which formed the Batallon 22, which joined the 'morenos libres' ( Free mulattos ) under Colonel Pablo Ali constituted the principal military force to the east of the island.
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Original:  Other cultural changes were the restriction of the Spanish language  and traditional customs like cock fights were eliminated . Boyer enacted a Rural Code which was “designed to force yeomen into large-scale production of export crops.
Revised:  Other cultural changes were the restriction of the Spanish language , and traditional customs like cock fights were eliminated . Boyer enacted a Rural Code which was “designed to force yeomen into large-scale production of export crops.
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Original:  Other cultural changes were the restriction of the Spanish language  and traditional customs like cock fights were eliminated . Boyer enacted a Rural Code which was “designed to force yeomen into large-scale production of export crops.
Revised:  Other cultural changes were the restriction of the Spanish language and traditional customs , like cockfights were outlawed . Boyer enacted a Rural Code which was “designed to force yeomen into large-scale production of export crops.
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Original:  Other cultural changes were the restriction of the Spanish language  and traditional customs like cock fights were eliminated . Boyer enacted a Rural Code which was “designed to force yeomen into large-scale production of export crops.
Revised:  Other cultural changes were the restriction of the Spanish language and traditional customs like cock fights were eliminated . Boyer enacted a rural code which was “designed to force yeomen into large-scale production of export crops.
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Original:  Haitian rule in the island lasted 22 years.
Revised:  Haitian rule over the entire island lasted 22 years.
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Original:  Eventually  the Haitian government became very unpopular, due to the severe economic crisis that hit the country after paying a huge indemnity to France, and gave rise to many anti-Haitian plots.
Revised:  Eventually , the Haitian government became very unpopular, due to the severe economic crisis that hit the country after paying a huge indemnity to France, and gave rise to many anti-Haitian plots.
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Original: The Republic of Spanish Haiti (), also called theIndependent State of Spanish Haiti () was the independent state that resulted from the defeat of Spanish colonialists from Santo Domingo on November 9, 1821, led by General José Núñez de Cáceres.
Revised: The Republic of Spanish Haiti (), also called the Independent State of Spanish Haiti () was the independent state that resulted from the defeat of Spanish colonialists from Santo Domingo on November 9, 1821, led by General José Núñez de Cáceres.
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Original:  The republic lasted only from December 1, 1821, to February 9, 1822, when it was absorbed by the Republic of Haiti.
Revised:  The republic lasted only from December 1, 1821, to February 9, 1822, when it was annexed by the Republic of Haiti.
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Original:  The next morning, at 6:00 a.m. , the cannon fire signalled the political change taking place.
Revised:  The next morning, at 6:00 am , the cannon fire signalled the political change taking place.
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Original:  In order to donate this land, the Haitian administration prohibited ownership of land by white Dominicans, depriving the main popular families of the country of their lands.
Revised:  To donate this land, the Haitian administration prohibited ownership of land by white Dominicans, depriving the main popular families of the country of their lands.
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Original:  Boyer enacted a rural code which was “ designed to force yeomen into large-scale production of export crops.
Revised:  Boyer enacted a rural code which was " designed to force yeomen into large-scale production of export crops.
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Original:  The nation, however, lacked the wherewithal, the enthusiasm, and the discipline to enforce the code ” .
Revised:  The nation, however, lacked the wherewithal, the enthusiasm, and the discipline to enforce the code " .
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Original:  He is the Member of the Parliament of Malaysia for the Sri Aman constituency in Sarawak, representing the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) presently .
Revised:  He is the Member of the Parliament of Malaysia for the Sri Aman constituency in Sarawak, representing the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) .
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Original:  He is a member of the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) . He was a member of Parti Rakyat Sarawak (PRS) in the governing Barisan Nasional (BN) and  Gabungan Parti Sarawak (GPS) coalition .
Revised:  He has been a member of the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) . He was a member of Parti Rakyat Sarawak (PRS) in the governing Barisan Nasional (BN) and Gabungan Parti Sarawak (GPS) coalition .
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Original:  He is a member of the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) . He was a member of Parti Rakyat Sarawak (PRS) in the governing Barisan Nasional (BN) and  Gabungan Parti Sarawak (GPS) coalition .
Revised:  He is a member of the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) . He was a member of Parti Rakyat Sarawak (PRS) in the governing Barisan Nasional (BN) and now Gabungan Parti Sarawak (GPS) coalition .
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Original:  He is a member of the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) . He was a member of Parti Rakyat Sarawak (PRS) in the governing Barisan Nasional (BN) and  Gabungan Parti Sarawak (GPS) coalition .
Revised:  He is a member of the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) . He was a member of Parti Rakyat Sarawak (PRS) in the governing Barisan Nasional (BN) and Gabungan Parti Sarawak (GPS) coalitions .
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Original:  He has been a member of the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) since 2019 and was a member of Parti Rakyat Sarawak (PRS), a former component party of Barisan Nasional (BN) and now Gabungan Parti Sarawak (GPS) coalitions, from 2008 to 2019.
Revised:  He has been a member of the Parti Sarawak Bersatu (PSB) since 2019 and . He was previously a member of Parti Rakyat Sarawak (PRS), a former component party of Barisan Nasional (BN) and now Gabungan Parti Sarawak (GPS) coalitions, from 2008 to 2019.
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