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Original:  “ This is an important announcement and a bold step forward in the struggle to help America ’ s kids live healthier lives, ” said Bill Clinton, according to a press release from the foundation.
Revised:  “ This is an important announcement and a bold step forward in the struggle to help America ’ s kids live healthier lives, " said Bill Clinton, according to a press release from the foundation.
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Original:  “ These industry leaders recognize that childhood obesity is a problem and have stepped up to help solve it.
Revised:  " These industry leaders recognize that childhood obesity is a problem and have stepped up to help solve it.
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Original:  ” California had already banned soda sales at Logan and other state high schools, starting in July 2007, under a bill signed by Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger.
Revised:  " California had already banned soda sales at Logan and other state high schools, starting in July 2007, under a bill signed by Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger.
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Original:  “ California is facing an obesity epidemic, ” he said at the time.
Revised:  " California is facing an obesity epidemic, ” he said at the time.
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Original:  “ California is facing an obesity epidemic, ” he said at the time.
Revised:  “ California is facing an obesity epidemic, " he said at the time.
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Original:  SB965 is one of several bills signed into law to “ eliminate junk food and soda from campuses, and to increase the amount of fresh fruits and vegetables available to students, ” said Schwarzenegger.
Revised:  SB965 is one of several bills signed into law to " eliminate junk food and soda from campuses, and to increase the amount of fresh fruits and vegetables available to students, ” said Schwarzenegger.
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Original:  SB965 is one of several bills signed into law to “ eliminate junk food and soda from campuses, and to increase the amount of fresh fruits and vegetables available to students, ” said Schwarzenegger.
Revised:  SB965 is one of several bills signed into law to “ eliminate junk food and soda from campuses, and to increase the amount of fresh fruits and vegetables available to students, " said Schwarzenegger.
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Original: ]] About 16 percent of our nation ’ s children and adolescents are overweight or obese – nearly four times more than forty years ago, according to the Alliance for a Healthier Generation.
Revised: ]] About 16 percent of our nation ' s children and adolescents are overweight or obese – nearly four times more than forty years ago, according to the Alliance for a Healthier Generation.
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Original:  A recent study by researchers of Children ’ s Hospital Boston showed a connection between consumption of sugary drinks and childhood obesity.
Revised:  A recent study by researchers of Children ' s Hospital Boston showed a connection between consumption of sugary drinks and childhood obesity.
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Original:  Children ’ s Hospital Boston ’ s Cara Ebbeling, PhD, and David Ludwig, MD, PhD, led a controlled trial for 103 children ages 13 to 18.
Revised:  Children ' s Hospital Boston ’ s Cara Ebbeling, PhD, and David Ludwig, MD, PhD, led a controlled trial for 103 children ages 13 to 18.
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Original:  Children ’ s Hospital Boston ’ s Cara Ebbeling, PhD, and David Ludwig, MD, PhD, led a controlled trial for 103 children ages 13 to 18.
Revised:  Children ’ s Hospital Boston ' s Cara Ebbeling, PhD, and David Ludwig, MD, PhD, led a controlled trial for 103 children ages 13 to 18.
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Original:  “ It should be relatively simple to translate this intervention into a pragmatic public health approach.
Revised:  " It should be relatively simple to translate this intervention into a pragmatic public health approach.
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Original:  For example, schools could make non-caloric beverages available to students by purchasing large quantities at low costs, ” she said.
Revised:  For example, schools could make non-caloric beverages available to students by purchasing large quantities at low costs, " she said.
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Original:  The strongest quake of the year so far, the earthquake occured at 01 :26 local time (15:27 UTC , 11:27 EDT ) on May 3rd at 19.9°S, 174.2°W, about 150 KM south of Neiafu, Tonga and 2150 KM north-northeast of Auckland, New Zealand.
Revised:  The strongest quake of the year so far, the earthquake occured at 01 :26 local time (15:27 UTC ) on May 3rd at 19.9°S, 174.2°W, about 150 KM south of Neiafu, Tonga and 2150 KM north-northeast of Auckland, New Zealand.
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Original:  HST , 1:36 PM EDT ).
Revised:  HST ).
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Original: thumb An earthquake with estimated magnitude 8.0 ( later, revised to 7.9 by USGS ) has shaken the pacific island of Tonga.
Revised: thumb An earthquake with estimated magnitude 8.0 ( later, revised to 7.9 by USGS ) shook the Pacific island of Tonga.
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Original:  There was some definite tsunami activity recorded near Pago Pago and Niue , and there is still a possibility that there has been some destruction near the earthquake's epicenter in Tonga .
Revised:  There was some definite tsunami activity recorded near Pago Pago and Niue .
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Original:  It is really important for the United States to stay on the offence against these killers and bring them to justice , " added Bush.
Revised:  It is really important for the United States to stay on the offence against these killers and bring them to justice . " added Bush.
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Original:  It is really important for the United States to stay on the offence against these killers and bring them to justice , " added Bush.
Revised:  It is really important for the United States to stay on the offence against these killers and bring them to justice , " 
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Original:   " There 's absolutely nothing in this country that all 9/11 family members are going to agree upon except that the attacks should never happen again, and I respect everyone's opinion.
Revised:  " there 's absolutely nothing in this country that all 9/11 family members are going to agree upon except that the attacks should never happen again, and I respect everyone's opinion.
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Original:  I'm glad that the jury looked at the evidence and realized he's just an al-Qaeda wannabe ," said Carie Lemack, the daughter of a September 11 victim
Revised:  I'm glad that the jury looked at the evidence and realized he's just an al-Qaeda wannabe .
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Original:  The jury, which consisted of three women and nine men, announced their verdict after one week of deliberation and a trial that lasted only six weeks.
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Original:  At least three jurors came to a conclusion that Moussaoui did not know enough about the attacks, three said that his role in the attacks were minor, three said that as a child, Moussaoui suffered from racism, nine said that his father abused him, and the other jurors said that the "dysfunctional family" forced him to leave his home.
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Original:  I'm glad that the jury looked at the evidence and realized he's just an al-Qaeda wannabe.  
Revised:  I'm glad that the jury looked at the evidence and realized he's just an al-Qaeda wannabe. " 
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Original:  I'm glad that the jury looked at the evidence and realized he's just an al-Qaeda wannabe.  
Revised:  I'm glad that the jury looked at the evidence and realized he's just an al-Qaeda wannabe. Related new
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Original: He branded the trial a "wasted opportunity for this country to understand and to learn why people like me and people like Mohamed Atta and the rest have so much hatred for you.
Revised: He described the trial as a "wasted opportunity for this country to understand and to learn why people like me and people like Mohamed Atta and the rest have so much hatred for you.
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Original: After a six month voting window for the adoption of teh Open Document Format (ODF) as an ISE/EIC standard has finally closed, with a unanimous vote supporting teh ODF (and some abstentions).
Revised: After a six month voting window for the adoption of the Open Document Format (ODF) as an ISE/EIC standard has finally closed, with a unanimous vote supporting teh ODF (and some abstentions).
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Original: After a six month voting window for the adoption of the Open Document Format (ODF) as an ISE/EIC standard has finally closed, with a unanimous vote supporting teh ODF (and some abstentions).
Revised: After a six month voting window for the adoption of the Open Document Format (ODF) as an ISE/EIC standard has finally closed, with a unanimous vote supporting the ODF (and some abstentions).
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Original:  Europe , paritcularly is interested in alternative solutions, and accepting the ODF as a required standard has been considered
Revised:  Europe in particular is interested in alternative solutions, and accepting the ODF as a required standard has been considered
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Original:  Europe in particular is interested in alternative solutions, and accepting the ODF as a required standard has been considered
Revised:  Europe in particular is interested in alternative solutions, and accepting the ODF as a required standard has been considere
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Original: After a six month voting window for the adoption of the Open Document Format (ODF) as an ISE / EIC standard has finally closed , with a unanimous vote supporting the ODF (and some abstentions).
Revised: After a six month voting window , adoption of the Open Document Format (ODF) as an ISE / EIC standard has finally closed , with a unanimous vote supporting the ODF (and some abstentions).
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Original: After a six month voting window for the adoption of the Open Document Format (ODF) as an ISE / EIC standard has finally closed , with a unanimous vote supporting the ODF (and some abstentions).
Revised: After a six month voting window for the adoption of the Open Document Format (ODF) as an ISO / EIC standard has finally closed , with a unanimous vote supporting the ODF (and some abstentions).
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Original:  Microsoft Office currently dominates the market for office applications, although several third-party applications also contain limited support for the Microsoft office formats
Revised:  Microsoft Office currently dominates the market for office applications, although several third-party applications also contain limited support for the Microsoft Office formats
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Original:  They had a relationship which lasted for a decade  
Revised:  They had a relationship which lasted for a decade . 
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Original:  The highest amount paid so far for a painting is $ 104 million (  Boy with a pipe by Picasso ) Dora Maar, herself an artist, believed to have helped Picasso in the execution of the famous masterpiece Guernica , which depicted the horror of Spanish civil war.
Revised:  The highest amount paid so far for a painting is $ 104 million ( " Boy with a pipe by Picasso ) Dora Maar, herself an artist, believed to have helped Picasso in the execution of the famous masterpiece Guernica , which depicted the horror of Spanish civil war.
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Original:  The highest amount paid so far for a painting is $ 104 million (  Boy with a pipe by Picasso ) Dora Maar, herself an artist, believed to have helped Picasso in the execution of the famous masterpiece Guernica , which depicted the horror of Spanish civil war.
Revised:  The highest amount paid so far for a painting is $ 104 million ( Boy with a pipe by Picasso ) Dora Maar, herself an artist, believed to have helped Picasso in the execution of the famous masterpiece "Guernica" , which depicted the horror of Spanish civil war.
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Original:  He died at the age of 92 in 1973 
Revised:  He died at the age of 92 in 1973. 
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Original:  She has competed in field recursive but is not competing to maximize her training for Olympic inclusion.
Revised:  She has competed in field recurve but is not competing to maximize her training for Olympic inclusion.
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Original:  Snazelle at the Championship 
Revised:  Snazelle at the Championships 
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Original:  Movies like due raise the visibility of the sport and temporarily bring in more participants.
Revised:  Movies like raise the visibility of the sport and temporarily bring in more participants.
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Original:  She had originally planned to apply to the w|Massachusetts Institute of Technology and had looked at continuing competing while in the but did not want to lose opportunities for national representation by being available for national competitions
Revised:  She had originally planned to apply to the and had looked at continuing competing while in the but did not want to lose opportunities for national representation by being available for national competitions
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Original:  She had originally planned to apply to the and had looked at continuing competing while in the but did not want to lose opportunities for national representation by being available for national competitions  
Revised:  She had originally planned to apply to the and had looked at continuing competing while in the but did not want to lose opportunities for national representation by being available for national competitions . 
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Original:  Snazelle at the Championships Earlier this year, Snazelle shot a national record for FITA 70/720 with a score of 652.
Revised:  Snazelle at the Championships Earlier this year, Snazelle shot a national record for 70/720 with a score of 652.
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Original:  |Snazelle practicing at the Championships The seventeen year old from Sydney , who will celebrate her eighteenth in April, was asked about the lack of media coverage for the sport and said it related to the relative lack of popularity of archery in Australia.
Revised:  |Snazelle practicing at the Championships The seventeen year old from , who will celebrate her eighteenth in April, was asked about the lack of media coverage for the sport and said it related to the relative lack of popularity of archery in Australia.
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Original:  She had originally planned to apply to the and had looked at continuing competing while in the  but did not want to lose opportunities for national representation by being available for national competitions.
Revised:  She had originally planned to apply to the and had looked at continuing competing while in the United States but did not want to lose opportunities for national representation by being available for national competitions.
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Original: There have been rumours of Mr Kennett returning to politics after the liberal party lost it's second election in 2002 election.
Revised: There have been rumours of Mr Kennett returning to politics after the liberal party lost its second election in 2002 election.
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Original:  If the party selects Mr Kennett as it's leader there may be a number of interesting scenarios played out as Mr Kennett is not currently a member of parliament.
Revised:  If the party selects Mr Kennett as its leader there may be a number of interesting scenarios played out as Mr Kennett is not currently a member of parliament.
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Original:  the house in which the founder of the Republic of Turkey, Kemal Ataturk ,  was born.
Revised:  the house in which the founder of the , was born.
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Original:  the house in which the founder of the Republic of Turkey, Kemal Ataturk ,  was born.
Revised:  the house in which the founder of the Republic of Turkey, Kemal Ataturk , , was born.
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Original:  The Bulgarian Prime Minister denied the reports in Bulgarian Media, whereby the Bulgarian public sector was backing out of the Burgas-Alexandroupolis oil pipe construction.
Revised:  The Bulgarian Prime Minister denied the reports in Bulgarian Media, whereby the Bulgarian public sector was backing out of the - oil pipe construction.
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Original:  The challenge was initiated by the governments of New South Wales, Western Australia, South Australia, Queensland and Victoria and joined by theAustralian Workers ' Union and Unions NSW. The states claim that the legislation, passed by parliament in December last year  is unconstitutional.
Revised:  The challenge was initiated by the governments of New South Wales, Western Australia, South Australia, Queensland and Victoria and joined by the Australian Workers Union and Unions NSW. The states claim that the legislation, passed by parliament in December last year is unconstitutional.
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Original:  The challenge was initiated by the governments of New South Wales, Western Australia, South Australia, Queensland and Victoria and joined by theAustralian Workers ' Union and Unions NSW. The states claim that the legislation, passed by parliament in December last year  is unconstitutional.
Revised:  The challenge was initiated by the governments of New South Wales, Western Australia, South Australia, Queensland and Victoria and joined by theAustralian Workers ' Union and Unions NSW. The states claim that the legislation, passed by parliament in December last year , is unconstitutional.
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Original:  Justice Haynes said that the authors would have been aware that there could be changes in the way the constitution was interpreted.
Revised:  He also said that the authors would have been aware that there could be changes in the way the constitution was interpreted.
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Original: The High Court challenge against the Australian federal government's Work Choices legislation has begun in Canberra today.
Revised: The challenge against the Australian federal government's Work Choices legislation has begun in Canberra today.
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Original: The High Court challenge against the Australian federal government's Work Choices legislation has begun in Canberra today.
Revised: The High Court challenge against the Australian federal government's legislation has begun in Canberra today.
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Original:  The federal government will argue that the legislation is permitted under Section 51(xx) of the Australian Constitution , commonly known as the "corporations powers".
Revised:  The federal government will argue that the legislation is permitted under , commonly known as the "corporations powers".
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Original:  The premier of Queensland, Peter Beattie is concerned that if the states lose their case that the powers between the states and commonwealth would need to be revised.
Revised:  The premier of Queensland, is concerned that if the states lose their case that the powers between the states and commonwealth would need to be revised.
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Original: Capitol Hill Police reported that Kennedy was alone his 1977 Ford Mustang when the accident occurred at about 2:45 a.m. EDT (0645 UTC) near the 100 block of C Street SE. Police say his eyes were red and watery,  unbalanced and had slurred speech.
Revised: Capitol Hill Police reported that Kennedy was alone his 1977 Ford Mustang when the accident occurred at about 2:45 a.m. EDT (0645 UTC) near the 100 block of C Street SE. Police say his eyes were red and watery, and he was unbalanced and had slurred speech.
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Original:  Kennedy said in a written statement that he had returned home around midnight and  taken the sleep aid Ambien and the anti-nausea drug Phenergan, both of which are known to cause drowsiness and sedation.
Revised:  Kennedy said in a written statement that he had returned home around midnight and had taken the sleep aid Ambien and the anti-nausea drug Phenergan, both of which are known to cause drowsiness and sedation.
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Original:  He says that "at no time before the accident" did he take alcohol, and pledged to cooperate in any investigation.
Revised:  He said that "at no time before the accident" did he take alcohol, and pledged to cooperate in any investigation.
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Original:  However; Robin Costello, spokeswoman for Kennedy said, "we have no knowledge of any citations," but  did admit that a report was filed.
Revised:  However; Robin Costello, spokeswoman for Kennedy said, "we have no knowledge of any citations," but she did admit that a report was filed.
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Original:  Capitol Police have not commented on th report or alligations, but Sgt. Kimberly Schneider, Capitol Police spokewoman did say, "The United States Capitol Police are continuing to investigate."
Revised:  Capitol Police have not commented on the report or alligations, but Sgt. Kimberly Schneider, Capitol Police spokewoman did say, "The United States Capitol Police are continuing to investigate."
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Original: According to the police report, Kennedy told police that he was "headed to the Capitol to make a vote," but no votes were scheduled for that time of the morning . Kennedy said in a written statement that he had returned home around midnight and had taken the sleep aid Ambien and the anti-nausea drug Phenergan, both of which are known to cause drowsiness and sedation.
Revised: According to the police report, Kennedy told police that he was "headed to the Capitol to make a vote," when no votes were scheduled for that time of the morning . Kennedy said in a written statement that he had returned home around midnight and had taken the sleep aid Ambien and the anti-nausea drug Phenergan, both of which are known to cause drowsiness and sedation.
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Original: According to the police report, Kennedy told police that he was "headed to the Capitol to make a vote," but no votes were scheduled for that time of the morning . Kennedy said in a written statement that he had returned home around midnight and had taken the sleep aid Ambien and the anti-nausea drug Phenergan, both of which are known to cause drowsiness and sedation.
Revised: According to the police report, Kennedy told police that he was "headed to the Capitol to make a vote," but no votes were scheduled for that time of the morning Kennedy said in a written statement that he had returned home around midnight and had taken the sleep aid Ambien and the anti-nausea drug Phenergan, both of which are known to cause drowsiness and sedation.
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Original: Robin Wales has been re-elected as the Mayor for the London Borough of Newham, w: Dorothy Thornhill re-elected the Mayor of Watford and w: Steve Bullock re-elected as the Mayor for Lewisham.
Revised: Robin Wales has been re-elected as the Mayor for the London Borough of Newham, Dorothy Thornhill re-elected the Mayor of Watford and w: Steve Bullock re-elected as the Mayor for Lewisham.
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Original: Robin Wales has been re-elected as the Mayor for the London Borough of Newham, w: Dorothy Thornhill re-elected the Mayor of Watford and w: Steve Bullock re-elected as the Mayor for Lewisham.
Revised: Robin Wales has been re-elected as the Mayor for the London Borough of Newham, w: Dorothy Thornhill re-elected the Mayor of Watford and Steve Bullock re-elected as the Mayor for Lewisham.
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Original:  Results have not yet been announced for the election of the Mayor of Hackney   .
Revised:  Results have not yet been announced for the election of the Mayor of Hackney . .
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Original:  Anglican, Catholic, Baptist, Presbyterian, Buddhist, Hindu, Lutheran, Sikh, Salvation Army, Wesleyan and Seventh-Day Adventist churches issued a signed statement yesterday calling for laws limiting abortions after 20 weeks.
Revised:  Anglican, Catholic, Baptist, Presbyterian, Buddhist, Hindu, Lutheran, Sikh, Salvation Army, Wesleyan and Seventh-Day Adventist religious groups issued a signed statement yesterday calling for laws limiting abortions after 20 weeks.
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