wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Tennessee's Graduated Driver License stipulates that drivers under the age of 18 can have only one passenger in a vehicle unless they are accompanied by a licensed driver over 21 years old who holds an unrestricted license.
Revised:  Tennessee's Graduated Driver License stipulates that drivers under the age of 18 can have only one passenger in a vehicle unless he or she is accompanied by a licensed driver over 21 years old who holds an unrestricted license.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Tennessee's Graduated Driver License stipulates that drivers under the age of 18 can have only one passenger in a vehicle unless they are accompanied by a licensed driver over 21 years old who holds an unrestricted license.
Revised:  Tennessee's Graduated Driver License stipulates that drivers under the age of 18 can have only one passenger in a vehicle unless they are accompanied by a licensed driver more than 21 years old who holds an unrestricted license.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Three teenagers were killed and two others were seriously injured near Dyer, Tenn., United States early Tuesday afternoon when a driver with a restricted learners license, lost control of her w: sport utility vehicle, ran off the road, and struck several trees.
Revised: Three teenagers were killed and two others were seriously injured near Dyer, Tenn., United States early Tuesday afternoon when a driver with a restricted learners license, lost control of her sport utility vehicle, ran off the road, and struck several trees.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Three teenagers were killed and two others were seriously injured near Dyer, Tenn. , United States early Tuesday afternoon when a driver with a restricted learners license, lost control of her sport utility vehicle, ran off the road, and struck several trees.
Revised: Three teenagers were killed and two others were seriously injured near Dyer, Tennessee , United States early Tuesday afternoon when a driver with a restricted learners license, lost control of her sport utility vehicle, ran off the road, and struck several trees.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  A branch of w: Burger King in the Springkerse area of Stirling was also vandalised.
Revised:  A branch of Burger King in the Springkerse area of Stirling was also vandalised.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  World leaders from U.S., UK , Canada, Japan, Germany, France, Italy, and Russia are meeting in the 5 star Gleneagles hotel and golf course to discuss world issues.
Revised:  World leaders from the United States , United Kingdom , Canada, Japan, Germany, France, Italy, and Russia are meeting in the 5 star Gleneagles hotel and golf course to discuss world issues.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A camera man for the Associated Press Television said he saw a “ group of around 100 smashing the windows of stationary cars and throwing stones at police.
Revised:  A camera man for the Associated Press Television said he saw a " group of around 100 smashing the windows of stationary cars and throwing stones at police.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Police responsible for Wednesday ’ s summit have taken no chances: roughly 10,000 police are on standby in Gleneagles, among watchtowers and surveillance cameras.
Revised:  Police responsible for Wednesday ' s summit have taken no chances: roughly 10,000 police are on standby in Gleneagles, among watchtowers and surveillance cameras.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He is said to want “ breakthroughs in global warming as well as Africa ” . Blair ’ s Commission for Africa has proposed to double aid to Africa by 2010, as well as a second US$25 billion increase in aid to Africa, and US$75 billion annual increase in worldwide aid
Revised:  He is said to want " breakthroughs in global warming as well as Africa ” . Blair ’ s Commission for Africa has proposed to double aid to Africa by 2010, as well as a second US$25 billion increase in aid to Africa, and US$75 billion annual increase in worldwide aid
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He is said to want “ breakthroughs in global warming as well as Africa ” . Blair ’ s Commission for Africa has proposed to double aid to Africa by 2010, as well as a second US$25 billion increase in aid to Africa, and US$75 billion annual increase in worldwide aid
Revised:  He is said to want “ breakthroughs in global warming as well as Africa " . Blair ’ s Commission for Africa has proposed to double aid to Africa by 2010, as well as a second US$25 billion increase in aid to Africa, and US$75 billion annual increase in worldwide aid
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He is said to want “ breakthroughs in global warming as well as Africa ” . Blair ’ s Commission for Africa has proposed to double aid to Africa by 2010, as well as a second US$25 billion increase in aid to Africa, and US$75 billion annual increase in worldwide aid
Revised:  He is said to want “ breakthroughs in global warming as well as Africa ” . Blair ' s Commission for Africa has proposed to double aid to Africa by 2010, as well as a second US$25 billion increase in aid to Africa, and US$75 billion annual increase in worldwide aid
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On June 16th , attackers believed to be members of the FNL , massacred six churchgoers in the Muhuta district of Rural Bujumbura.
Revised:  On June 16th attackers believed to be members of the FNL , massacred six churchgoers in the Muhuta district of Rural Bujumbura.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  On June 16th , attackers believed to be members of the FNL , massacred six churchgoers in the Muhuta district of Rural Bujumbura.
Revised:  On June 16th , attackers believed to be members of the FNL massacred six churchgoers in the Muhuta district of Rural Bujumbura.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Frodebu denied involvement in the violence, but has recently admitted "political collaboration" with  FNL.
Revised:  Frodebu denied involvement in the violence, but have recently admitted "political collaboration" with FNL.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Frodebu denied involvement in the violence, but has recently admitted "political collaboration" with  FNL.
Revised:  Frodebu denied involvement in the violence, but has recently admitted "political collaboration" with the FNL.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Present, physically or by video link, were several dignitaries of the participating countries, including the British Prime Minister Tony Blair, French President Jacques Chirac, Queen Sofia of Spain, and Russian Prime Minister Mikhail Fradkov.
Revised: Present, physically or by video link, were several dignitaries of the participating countries, including the British Prime Minister Tony Blair, French President Jacques Chirac, Queen Sofía of Spain, and Russian Prime Minister Mikhail Fradkov.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Also present with the British campaign team were world famous soccer player David Beckham, athletes Denise Lewis and Sir Steve Redgrave, and Her Royal Highness Princess Anne, who brought with her a message from Queen Elizabeth II: French President Jacques Chriac was also present, along with actress Catherine Deneuve and singer Johnny Halliday , both French.
Revised:  Also present with the British campaign team were world famous soccer player David Beckham, athletes Denise Lewis and Sir Steven Redgrave, and Her Royal Highness Princess Anne, who brought with her a message from Queen Elizabeth II: French President Jacques Chriac was also present, along with actress Catherine Deneuve and singer Johnny Halliday , both French.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Also present with the British campaign team were world famous soccer player David Beckham, athletes Denise Lewis and Sir Steve Redgrave, and Her Royal Highness Princess Anne, who brought with her a message from Queen Elizabeth II: French President Jacques Chriac was also present, along with actress Catherine Deneuve and singer Johnny Halliday , both French.
Revised:  Also present with the British campaign team were world famous soccer player David Beckham, athletes Denise Lewis and Sir Steve Redgrave, and Her Royal Highness Princess Anne, who brought with her a message from Queen Elizabeth II: French President Jacques Chriac was also present, along with actress Catherine Deneuve and singer Johnny Hallyday , both French.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Prime Minister Jose Luis Rodriguez Zapatero from Spain and Queen Sofie argued in favour of Madrid.
Revised:  Prime Minister José Luis Rodríguez Zapatero from Spain and Queen Sofie argued in favour of Madrid.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Prime Minister Jose Luis Rodriguez Zapatero from Spain and Queen Sofie argued in favour of Madrid.
Revised:  Prime Minister Jose Luis Rodriguez Zapatero from Spain and Queen Sofía argued in favour of Madrid.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Revised:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Revised:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Revised:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Revised:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% vnunet.fr(frenc
Revised:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. theregister.co.uk%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% suntimes.com physorg.com%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% portfolio
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolio 
Revised:  Many anti-patent activists say that if the bill were passed, small businesses and hobbyists would be in danger of lawsuit from corporations and their extensive patent portfolios. 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  648 MEPs out of 680 voted today to reject the proposal, aimed at bringin Europe in-line with a similar U.S. bill.
Revised:  648 MEPs out of 680 voted today to reject the proposal, aimed at bringing Europe in-line with a similar U.S. bill.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The supporters of the Parliament's position of September 2003, coordinated largely by the Foundation for a Free Information Infrastructure (FFII), also had several lobbyists statiione in Brusselsand conducted several conferences and demonstrations and published  advertisements, with a toal budget of nearly 100,000 eur 
Revised:  The supporters of the Parliament's position of September 2003, coordinated largely by the Foundation for a Free Information Infrastructure (FFII), also had several lobbyists stationed in Brussels, conducted several conferences and demonstrations and published advertisements, with a toal budget of nearly 100,000 eur 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The supporters of the Parliament's position of September 2003, coordinated largely by the Foundation for a Free Information Infrastructure (FFII), also had several lobbyists statiione in Brusselsand conducted several conferences and demonstrations and published  advertisements, with a toal budget of nearly 100,000 eur 
Revised:  The supporters of the Parliament's position of September 2003, coordinated largely by the Foundation for a Free Information Infrastructure (FFII), also had several lobbyists statiione in Brusselsand conducted several conferences and demonstrations and published advertisements, with a total budget of nearly 100,000 eur 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The supporters of the Parliament's position of September 2003  , coordinated largely by the Foundation for a Free Information Infrastructure (FFII), also had several lobbyists stationed in Brussels, conducted several conferences and demonstrations and published some newspaper advertisements, with a total budget of nearly 100,000 eur apart from countless unpaid working hours of a dedicated supporter base, consisting mainly of programmers and software entrepreneurs
Revised:  The supporters of the Parliament's position of September 2003 ) , coordinated largely by the Foundation for a Free Information Infrastructure (FFII), also had several lobbyists stationed in Brussels, conducted several conferences and demonstrations and published some newspaper advertisements, with a total budget of nearly 100,000 eur apart from countless unpaid working hours of a dedicated supporter base, consisting mainly of programmers and software entrepreneurs
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The opponents of software patentability ( who supported the position voted for by the Parliament in its 1st reading of 24 September 2003),
Revised:  The opponents of software patentability ( that is supporters of the position taken by the European Parliament in its 1st reading of 24 September 2003),
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  coordinated largely by the Foundation for a Free Information Infrastructure (FFII), also had several lobbyists stationed in Brussels, conducted several conferences and demonstrations and published some newspaper advertisements, with a total budget of nearly 100,000 eur apart from countless unpaid working hours of a dedicated supporter base, consisting mainly of programmers and software entrepreneurs
Revised:  coordinated under the roof of the Foundation for a Free Information Infrastructure (FFII), also had several lobbyists stationed in Brussels, conducted several conferences and demonstrations and published some newspaper advertisements, with a total budget of nearly 100,000 eur apart from countless unpaid working hours of a dedicated supporter base, consisting mainly of programmers and software entrepreneurs
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Anti-software-patent activists in canoes and a yacht paid by the pro-software-patent lobbyThe rejection was welcomed by small and medium software companies, as well as by Free Software supporters.
Revised: The rejection was welcomed by small and medium software companies, as well as by Free Software supporters.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: The European Greens, Socialist Group and European Liberal Democrat and Reform Party also voted for rejection of the directive for heterogenous reason.
Revised: The European Greens, Socialist Group and European Liberal Democrat and Reform Party also voted for rejection of the directive for heterogeneous reason.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  They scored two tries in this time   
Revised:  They scored two tries in this time . 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  University's third try came at the half hour mark with the corresponding conversion taking the score to 19-0.
Revised:  University's third try came at the half hour mark with the corresponding conversion taking the score to 19–0.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  They scored a converted try to take the score to 38-0.
Revised:  They scored a converted try to take the score to 38–0.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Maroochydore had two players sent of within two minutes within minutes of each other.
Revised: Maroochydore had two players sent of within two minutes of each other.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  This provided a two man advantage to University for eight minutes.
Revised:  This provided a two-man advantage to University for eight minutes.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: On Wednesday in case that toes the line between federal prosecutors seeking the source of criminal activity and the right to freedom of the press, a New York Times reporter was jailed after she refused to reveal her confidential source to a grand jury investigating the leak of a covert CIA operative's name to the media.
Revised: On Wednesday , in a case that toes the line between federal prosecutors seeking the source of criminal activity and the right to freedom of the press, a New York Times reporter was jailed after she refused to reveal her confidential source to a grand jury investigating the leak of a covert CIA operative's name to the media.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: On Wednesday in case that toes the line between federal prosecutors seeking the source of criminal activity and the right to freedom of the press, a New York Times reporter was jailed after she refused to reveal her confidential source to a grand jury investigating the leak of a covert CIA operative's name to the media.
Revised: On Wednesday in case that toes the line between a search for the source of criminal activity and the right to freedom of the press, a New York Times reporter was jailed after she refused to reveal her confidential source to a grand jury investigating the leak of a covert CIA operative's name to the media.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  If I do not, how can I expect people to accept my assurances , " she said.
Revised:  If I do not, how can I expect people to accept my assurances . " she said.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  If I do not, how can I expect people to accept my assurances , " she said.
Revised:  If I do not, how can I expect people to accept my assurances , " 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  Miller made sure to note that she did not consider herself to  above the law and that she had thought long and hard over the July 4 Independence Day holiday about her decision.
Revised:  Miller also noted that she did not consider herself to above the law and that she had thought long and hard over the July 4 Independence Day holiday about her decision.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Miller made sure to note that she did not consider herself to  above the law and that she had thought long and hard over the July 4 Independence Day holiday about her decision.
Revised:  Miller made sure to note that she did not consider herself to be above the law and that she had thought long and hard over the July 4 Independence Day holiday about her decision.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Performes include Prong, Chumbawamba, Tricky, Stereo MC's, Rony Size, Moloko, Peaches, Sander Kleinenberg, Ken Ishii, Adam Freeland, Timo Maas, Soulfly, Cypress Hill, Iggy Pop, Massive attack, White Stripes, Gilles Peterson, Slayer, Apocalyptica, etc.
Revised:  Performers include Prong, Chumbawamba, Tricky, Stereo MC's, Rony Size, Moloko, Peaches, Sander Kleinenberg, Ken Ishii, Adam Freeland, Timo Maas, Soulfly, Cypress Hill, Iggy Pop, Massive attack, White Stripes, Gilles Peterson, Slayer, Apocalyptica, etc.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: The festival includes 21 stages, featuring  diverse range of music, from classical to techno.
Revised: The festival includes 21 stages, featuring a diverse range of music, from classical to techno.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The organizers decided to commemorate Srebrenica Massacre by one minute silence on midnight between July 10 and July 11.
Revised:  The organizers decided to commemorate the Srebrenica Massacre with one minute of silence on midnight between July 10 and July 11.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The festival is in part sponosored by the city of Novi Sad, which is currently ruled by the Serbian Radical Party which is opposed to publicly recognizing war crimes committed by the Serbs in Bosnia in a way that Exit orginizers intend.
Revised:  The festival is in part sponsored by the city of Novi Sad, which is currently ruled by the Serbian Radical Party which is opposed to publicly recognizing war crimes committed by the Serbs in Bosnia in a way that Exit orginizers intend.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: right A book by US Senator Rick Santorum (R-PA), entitled "It Takes a Family: Conservatism and the Common Good", hit stores in Washington over the weekend (it's offical publican date is July 25th ) . Intended as a response to Hillary Clinton's book "It Takes a Village", certain passages of the book have already caused concern in certain circles.
Revised: right A book by US Senator Rick Santorum (R-PA), entitled "It Takes a Family: Conservatism and the Common Good", hit stores in Washington over the weekend . Its offical publication date is July 25th ) . Intended as a response to Hillary Clinton's book "It Takes a Village", certain passages of the book have already caused concern in certain circles.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: right A book by US Senator Rick Santorum (R-PA), entitled "It Takes a Family: Conservatism and the Common Good", hit stores in Washington over the weekend (it's offical publican date is July 25th ) . Intended as a response to Hillary Clinton's book "It Takes a Village", certain passages of the book have already caused concern in certain circles.
Revised: right A book by US Senator Rick Santorum (R-PA), entitled "It Takes a Family: Conservatism and the Common Good", hit stores in Washington over the weekend (it's offical publican date is July 25th . Intended as a response to Hillary Clinton's book "It Takes a Village", certain passages of the book have already caused concern in certain circles.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Already facing perhaps the toughest re-election bid in the country, opponents and supports of Santorum and using the book to tout their positions.
Revised:  Already facing perhaps the toughest re-election bid in the country, opponents and supporters of Santorum are using the book to tout their positions.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  T.J. Rooney, the state Democratic Party chairman, had this to say: " " References to how families are compromised when both parents work outside the home, how it takes a societal toll on Pennsylvania families or American families, it just shows a complete lack of understanding of the real world in which the vast majority of Pennsylvanians reside."
Revised:  T.J. Rooney, the state Democratic Party chairman, had this to say: " References to how families are compromised when both parents work outside the home, how it takes a societal toll on Pennsylvania families or American families, it just shows a complete lack of understanding of the real world in which the vast majority of Pennsylvanians reside."
Edit intent: fluency