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Original:  Dosch plans to invite the family to participate in the clinical trial. - - Wing said she was moved to tears when she learned that researchers may have found a way to one day prevent Type 1 diabetes. - - "Seeing what Marielle goes through every day of her life, to prevent other children from going through that," Wing said.
Revised:  Dosch plans to invite the family to participate in the clinical trial. - - Wing said she was moved to tears when she learned that researchers may have found a way to one day prevent Type 1 diabetes. "Seeing what Marielle goes through every day of her life, to prevent other children from going through that," Wing said.
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Original:  "It's fantastic that there could be a prevention of this for other children." - - More than 200,000 Canadians suffer from Type 1 diabetes, which mostly develops in childhood or in the teen years.
Revised:  "It's fantastic that there could be a prevention of this for other children." More than 200,000 Canadians suffer from Type 1 diabetes, which mostly develops in childhood or in the teen years.
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Original:  It is not to be confused with the more common Type 2 diabetes, where the body doesn't make enough insulin or use the existing insulin efficiently. - - Insulin is a hormone produced by the islet cells that stabilizes blood sugar levels in the body.
Revised:  It is not to be confused with the more common Type 2 diabetes, where the body doesn't make enough insulin or use the existing insulin efficiently. Insulin is a hormone produced by the islet cells that stabilizes blood sugar levels in the body.
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Original:  - "The blood glucose normalizes overnight and it stays low for weeks to months — this is with a single shot," Dosch said. - - "We now have 4-month-old mice that are non-diabetic that used to be diabetic," he added. - Dr. Ehud Ur, professor of medicine at Dalhousie University in Halifax, Nova Scotia and chair of the clinical and scientific division of the Canadian Diabetes Association cautioned that the research is still in its early days.
Revised:  - "The blood glucose normalizes overnight and it stays low for weeks to months — this is with a single shot," Dosch said. "We now have 4-month-old mice that are non-diabetic that used to be diabetic," he added. - Dr. Ehud Ur, professor of medicine at Dalhousie University in Halifax, Nova Scotia and chair of the clinical and scientific division of the Canadian Diabetes Association cautioned that the research is still in its early days.
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Original:  - "The blood glucose normalizes overnight and it stays low for weeks to months — this is with a single shot," Dosch said. - - "We now have 4-month-old mice that are non-diabetic that used to be diabetic," he added. - Dr. Ehud Ur, professor of medicine at Dalhousie University in Halifax, Nova Scotia and chair of the clinical and scientific division of the Canadian Diabetes Association cautioned that the research is still in its early days.
Revised:  - "The blood glucose normalizes overnight and it stays low for weeks to months — this is with a single shot," Dosch said. - - "We now have 4-month-old mice that are non-diabetic that used to be diabetic," he added. Dr. Ehud Ur, professor of medicine at Dalhousie University in Halifax, Nova Scotia and chair of the clinical and scientific division of the Canadian Diabetes Association cautioned that the research is still in its early days.
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Original:  Like some other experts, he is skeptical about whether diabetes can be cured, noting that these findings have no relevance to people who already have Type 1 diabetes. - - "We have a whole new target for therapy," he said.
Revised:  Like some other experts, he is skeptical about whether diabetes can be cured, noting that these findings have no relevance to people who already have Type 1 diabetes. "We have a whole new target for therapy," he said.
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Original:  Now we have a new player." - - Still, he knows that the discovery of nerves controlling pancreatic functions is a major step towards developing more efficient treatment for the millions affected worldwide .=
Revised:  Now we have a new player." Still, he knows that the discovery of nerves controlling pancreatic functions is a major step towards developing more efficient treatment for the millions affected worldwide .=
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Original:  Now we have a new player." - - Still, he knows that the discovery of nerves controlling pancreatic functions is a major step towards developing more efficient treatment for the millions affected worldwide .=
Revised:  Now we have a new player." - - Still, he knows that the discovery of nerves controlling pancreatic functions is a major step towards developing more efficient treatment for the millions affected worldwide 
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Original: Traditionally, research has primarily been concentrated on the immune system and the reasons why it attacks and destroys the insulin-producing cells of the pancreas, called islets.
Revised: Traditionally, research has primarily been concentrated on the immune system and the reasons why it attacks and destroys the insulin-producing cells of the pancreas, which are grouped in islets.
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Original:  The injections are not a cure and they do not protect against side-effects of the disease like stroke, blindness, heart attack, and kidney failure.
Revised:  The injections are not a cure , and many patients still develop side-effects of the disease like stroke, blindness, heart attack, and kidney failure.
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Original: Born in Dublin in w: 1936, he later moved to England to pursue his career.
Revised: Born in Dublin in 1936, he later moved to England to pursue his career.
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Original:   What do you do when you manage to get rid of a problem that was bugging you for a while?
Revised: A camel What do you do when you manage to get rid of a problem that was bugging you for a while?
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Original:  Sheeps and other animals are frequently slaughtered, especially during the Islamic Sacrifice Feast.
Revised:  Sheep and other animals are frequently slaughtered, especially during the Islamic Sacrifice Feast.
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Original: Gilchrist reached his half-century off 40 deliveries, and then proceeded to quicken the scoring rate, including hitting English left-arm orthodox spinner Monty Panesar for 24  in one over - a record for the most runs scored in one over in an Ashes test.
Revised: Gilchrist reached his half-century off 40 deliveries, and then proceeded to quicken the scoring rate, including hitting English left-arm orthodox spinner Monty Panesar for 24 runs in one over - a record for the most runs scored in one over in an Ashes test.
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Original:  With centuries from compatriates Michael Hussey, Michael Clarke, and large contributions from Matthew Hayden (92) and Ricky Ponting (75), Australia declared their innings late on day three at 5-527, a lead of 556.
Revised:  With centuries from compatriots Michael Hussey, Michael Clarke, and large contributions from Matthew Hayden (92) and Ricky Ponting (75), Australia declared their innings late on day three at 5-527, a lead of 556.
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Original:  England require 557 to win, or  to bat for two-and-a-bit days to salvage a draw;
Revised:  England require 557 to win, or need to bat for two-and-a-bit days to salvage a draw;
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Original:  The club at the top of the ladder - with the most points - is crowned A-League premiers, whilst the winner of the Grand Final is crownded Champions .
Revised:  The club at the top of the ladder - with the most points - is crowned A-League premiers, whilst the winner of the Grand Final is crownded champions .
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Original: Victory's premiership also gives them a spot in the AFC Champions League, the premier club challenge of the Asian Football Confederation  .
Revised: Victory's premiership also gives them a spot in the AFC Champions League, the premier club tournament for Asian Football Confederation .
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Original: During the trial of a man yesterday for rape at an Atlanta court house, the man on trial  stole the gun of a nearby deputy and shot dead the Judge, a reporter and another deputy.
Revised: During the trial of a man yesterday for rape at an Atlanta court house, the man on trial allegedly stole the gun of a nearby deputy and shot dead the Judge, a reporter and another deputy.
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Original: Brian Nichols During the trial of a man yesterday for rape at an Atlanta court house, the man on trial allegedly stole the gun of a nearby deputy and shot dead the Judge, a reporter and another deputy.
Revised:  During the trial of a man yesterday for rape at an Atlanta court house, the man on trial allegedly stole the gun of a nearby deputy and shot dead the Judge, a reporter and another deputy.
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Original:  Florida Governor Jeb Bush , brother of US President George, has halted signing all execution warrants in the state after a medical examiner revealed an error had occured in a lethal injection recently.
Revised:  Florida Governor Jeb Bush has halted signing all execution warrants in the state after a medical examiner revealed an error had occured in a lethal injection recently.
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Original:  Only a matter of hours later, a federal judge ruled that the lethal injection system in California may violate the constitutional prohibition criteria of cruel and unusual punishment. 
Revised:  Only a matter of hours later, a federal judge ruled that the lethal injection system in California may violate the constitutional prohibition criteria of cruel and unusual punishment. "
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Original:  According to the Brazilian television channel TV ESPN Brasil, the kidnapping ocurred Friday, March 11, by morning in Ponte Preta district, Campinas, 83,5 km (51.88 miles) of São Paulo.
Revised:  According to the television channel TV ESPN Brasil, the kidnapping ocurred Friday, March 11, by morning in Ponte Preta district, Campinas, 83,5 km (51.88 miles) of São Paulo.
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Original: This is the thid kidnapping of a soccer player's mother in four months.
Revised: This is the third kidnapping of a soccer player's mother in four months.
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Original:   "   I've now said that Mr. McHale's plans were counterproductive and potentially dangerous to what we've been trying to do there, and that is to reach a peaceful settlement," said David Ramsay, Ontario's minister of aboriginal affairs.
Revised:  " " I've now said that Mr. McHale's plans were counterproductive and potentially dangerous to what we've been trying to do there, and that is to reach a peaceful settlement," said David Ramsay, Ontario's minister of aboriginal affairs.
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Original:  One was Gary McHale, a Richmond Hill, Ontario man who went to the occupied land in Caledonia, Ontario to have a rally against the ongoing aboriginal occupation.
Revised:  One was Gary McHale, a Richmond Hill, Ontario man who entered the occupied land in Caledonia, Ontario to have a rally against the ongoing aboriginal occupation.
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Original:  One was Gary McHale, a Richmond Hill, Ontario man who went to the occupied land in Caledonia, Ontario to have a rally against the ongoing aboriginal occupation.
Revised:  One was Gary McHale, a Richmond Hill, Ontario man who went to the occupied land in Caledonia, Ontario to organize a rally against the ongoing aboriginal occupation.
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Original:  Vandermaas of London, Ontario was forced to the ground by police officers .
Revised:  Vandermaas was forced to the ground by police officers .
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Original:  The police arrested them after they crossed into the disputed territory waving Canadian flags.
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Original:  According to news reports, McHale intended to put the Canadian flag accross the street from where the aboriginal flag was up .
Revised:  According to news reports, McHale intended to put the Canadian flag accross the street from where the aboriginal flag was .
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Original:   Mayor Marie Trainer of Haldimand County, were Caledonia sits in , said: "The next meeting or two will be wasted on frivolous stuff again instead of getting down to business."
Revised:  Mayor Marie Trainer of Haldimand County, were Caledonia is located , said: "The next meeting or two will be wasted on frivolous stuff again instead of getting down to business."
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Original:  This was not the first time Gary McHale of Richmond Hill, Ontario, more than 100 kilometres from the occupation site, entered the disputed land.
Revised:  This was not the first time Gary McHale entered the disputed land.
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Original:  Police had warned them about crossing into the disputed land before.
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Original: McHale has been long critical of the Ontario Provincial Police over the land claim saying that they treat aboriginals differently.
Revised: McHale has been long critical of the Ontario Provincial Police over the land claim saying that they treat aborigines differently.
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Original: Environmental groups are skeptical , however agree the idea should be investigated.
Revised: Environmental groups are skeptical but agree the idea should be investigated.
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Original: A large-scale experiment would be impossible to conduct, however scientists have noticed that massive volcanic eruptions has had similar effects on the earth.
Revised: A large-scale experiment would be impossible to conduct, however scientists have noticed that massive volcanic eruptions have had similar effects on the earth.
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Original:  A spokesperson from Canada's transport department commented "They'd grown too fast and it was putting strains on senior management.  
Revised:  A spokesperson from Canada's transport department commented "They'd grown too fast and it was putting strains on senior management. " 
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Original: Jetsgo, Canada's third largest airline  has ceased all operations as a result of spiraling oil prices and a federal safety investigation.
Revised: Jetsgo, Canada's third largest airline , has ceased all operations as a result of spiraling oil prices and a federal safety investigation.
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Original: Jetsgo, Canada's third largest airline  has ceased all operations as a result of spiraling oil prices and a federal safety investigation.
Revised: Jetsgo, Canada's third largest airline has ceased all operations because of spiralling oil prices and a federal safety investigation.
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Original:  The Low-cost carrier had been expanding rapidly in recent months, having added four new routes in December alone.
Revised:  The low-cost carrier had been expanding rapidly in recent months, having added four new routes in December alone.
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Original:  However  the sharp increase in oil prices has forced  to ground all flights.
Revised:  However , the sharp increase in oil prices has forced to ground all flights.
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Original:  However  the sharp increase in oil prices has forced  to ground all flights.
Revised:  However the sharp increase in oil prices has forced the airline to ground all flights.
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Original:  The airline, which has 1,200 employees and 29 planes, lost C $55 million ($ 49 million) in the past 8 months alone.
Revised:  The airline, which has 1,200 employees and 29 planes, lost C $55 million (US$ 49 million) in the past 8 months alone.
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Original:  The move has resulted in over 17,000 passengers being stranded across its route .
Revised:  The move has stranded over 17,000 passengers being stranded across its route .
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Original:  The move has resulted in over 17,000 passengers being stranded across its route .
Revised:  The move has resulted in over 17,000 passengers across its routes .
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Original:  A spokesperson from Canada's transport department commented  "They'd grown too fast and it was putting strains on senior management."
Revised:  A spokesperson from Canada's transport department commented , "They'd grown too fast and it was putting strains on senior management."
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Original:  No arrangements were made with Air Canada or other airlines in respect to taking care of their customers.
Revised:  No arrangements were made with Air Canada or other airlines to take care of their customers.
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Original:  On the Air Canada web site , it is stated that "no arrangements were made by Jetsgo that would enable Air Canada to accept Jetsgo tickets.
Revised:  The Air Canada web site , it is stated that "no arrangements were made by Jetsgo that would enable Air Canada to accept Jetsgo tickets.
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Original:  On the Air Canada web site , it is stated that "no arrangements were made by Jetsgo that would enable Air Canada to accept Jetsgo tickets.
Revised:  On the Air Canada web site stated that "no arrangements were made by Jetsgo that would enable Air Canada to accept Jetsgo tickets.
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Original: The Indian Army observed Vijay Diwas, marking the defeat of the Pakistani military and the formation of the indepenent state of Bangladesh (then called East Pakistan) during the 1971  War.
Revised: The Indian Army observed Vijay Diwas, marking the defeat of the Pakistani military and the formation of the independent state of Bangladesh (then called East Pakistan) during the 1971 War.
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Original: The Indian Army observed Vijay Diwas, marking the defeat of the Pakistani military and the formation of the indepenent state of Bangladesh (then called East Pakistan) during the 1971  War.
Revised: The Indian Army observed Vijay Diwas, marking the defeat of the Pakistani military and the formation of the indepenent state of Bangladesh (then called East Pakistan) in the 1971 War.
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Original:  Gen. A.A.K Niazi signs the instrument of surrender, handing over his troops to Lt. Gen. Jagjit Singh Aurora, Commander of Indian forces in East Pakistan]] Defence Minister A. K Antony, alongwith the three Service Chiefs laid wreaths at the Eternal Flame at India Gate, in honour of the country's matyrs.
Revised:  Gen. A.A.K Niazi signs the instrument of surrender, handing over his troops to Lt. Gen. Jagjit Singh Aurora, Commander of Indian forces in East Pakistan]] Defence Minister A. K Antony, along with the three Service Chiefs laid wreaths at the Eternal Flame at India Gate, in honour of the country's matyrs.
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Original:  He also commanded the 1971 operation as one the Indian military's most maginificent achievements
Revised:  He also commended the 1971 operation as one the Indian military's most maginificent achievements
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Original:  He also commanded the 1971 operation as one the Indian military's most maginificent achievements
Revised:  He also commanded the 1971 operation as one the Indian military's most magnificent achievements
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Original:  On the screen, there is a YouTube video navigation bar.
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Original:  In 1966 the magazine named people under 25, in 1975 it named American women  and in 1982 it named the computer
Revised:  In 1966 the magazine named people under 25, in 1975 it named American women , and in 1982 it named the computer
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Original:  Democrats sought to soften the bill by allowing bankruptcy filers to negotiate directly with lenders for relief, but the amendments were defeated by the Republican-controlled Senate.
Revised: Amendments defeated Democrats sought to soften the bill by allowing bankruptcy filers to negotiate directly with lenders for relief, but the amendments were defeated by the Republican-controlled Senate.
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Original:   The bill has the support of President Bush, and its passage in the House sometime next month seems likely.
Revised:  House vote up next The bill has the support of President Bush, and its passage in the House sometime next month seems likely.
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Original: Pro-business forces at work for credit card companies and financial services firms got a bill passed on Capitol Hill on Thursday.
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Original:  In a vote of 74-25 , the Republican-controlled Senate passed a measure that would change bankruptcy laws  making it harder for individuals seeking relief from their debt burden to avoid repayment   .
Revised:  In a vote of 74-25 , the Republican-controlled Senate passed a measure that would change bankruptcy laws , making it harder for individuals seeking relief from their debt burden to avoid repayment .
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Original:  Attorney client privilege and insurance  This was the first major overhaul of federal bankruptcy law in many years.
Revised:  Attorney client privilege and insurance affected This was the first major overhaul of federal bankruptcy law in many years.
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Original:  The bottom line is that the field of personal bankruptcy law as a practice area of law will cease to exist when the new bankruptcy law takes effect, and consumers will be unable to secure legal counsel and so consumers will lose what legal protections counsel now affords them    .
Revised:  The bottom line is that the field of personal bankruptcy law as a practice area of law will cease to exist when the new bankruptcy law takes effect, and consumers will be unable to secure legal counsel and so consumers will lose what legal protections counsel now affords them . .
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Original: Chapter 7, which accounts for 70\% of bankruptcy filings, allows individuals to eliminate most non-secured debts after liquidating assets, with the notable exemption of one ’ s principle residence in most states.
Revised: Chapter 7, which accounts for 70\% of bankruptcy filings, allows individuals to eliminate most non-secured debts after liquidating assets, with the notable exemption of one ' s principle residence in most states.
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Original: Under the new bankruptcylaw about one half million Americans will be forest to pay for at lest 5 years on longer they will be held in servitude as chattel they will be completely subservient to a dominating influence of the company that holds the loan.
Revised: Under the new bankruptcy law about one half million Americans will be forest to pay for at lest 5 years on longer they will be held in servitude as chattel they will be completely subservient to a dominating influence of the company that holds the loan.
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Original:  Thier loan will be put on the maket for sale for profit.
Revised:  Their loan will be put on the maket for sale for profit.
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Original:  Thier loan will be put on the maket for sale for profit.
Revised:  Thier loan will be put on the market for sale for profit.
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Original:  People who fail to go to court will have a arrest warrant made out in thier name and people who refuse to pay.
Revised:  People who fail to go to court will have a arrest warrant made out in their name and people who refuse to pay.
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Original:  However, Massachusetts Democratic Sen , Edward M.Kennedy said, "This legislation makes the bankruptcy courts of the United States the collection agency for the credit-card industry."
Revised:  However, Massachusetts Democratic Sen ., said, "This legislation makes the bankruptcy courts of the United States the collection agency for the credit-card industry."
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Original: An Iraqi group of commandoes infiltrated a Red Cresent office today, and kidnapped at least 24 members of the only humanitarian organization to work in all 18 of Iraq's provinces.
Revised: An Iraqi group of commandos infiltrated a Red Cresent office today, and kidnapped at least 24 members of the only humanitarian organization to work in all 18 of Iraq's provinces.
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