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Original:  In 1971, he joined the demonstration asserting China's territorial rights over the Diaoyutai Islands.
Revised:  In 1971, he joined a demonstration asserting China's territorial rights over the Diaoyutai Islands.
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Original:  He became a district councillor in Tuen Mun from 1985. 1985 attack incident On 11 October 1985, he was assaulted by about 10 villagers in Tuen Mun while he was greeting them , he was seriously injured.
Revised:  He became a district councillor in Tuen Mun from 1985. 1985 attack incident On 11 October 1985, he was assaulted by about 10 villagers in Tuen Mun , he was seriously injured.
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Original:  As it was the first time a pro-democracy district councillor was assaulted , it caused widespread concern in Hong Kong.
Revised:  As it was the first time a pro-democracy district councillor had been assaulted and generated widespread concern in Hong Kong.
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Original:  It is also a direct reason that Ng gained 70 \% of the votes in his district against the pro-Beijings in the Regional Council Election in 1986.
Revised:  It also led to Ng gaining 70 \% of the votes in his district against the pro-Beijings in the Regional Council Election in 1986.
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Original:  It is also a direct reason that Ng gained 70 \% of the votes in his district against the pro-Beijings in the Regional Council Election in 1986.
Revised:  It is also a direct reason that Ng gained 70 percent of the votes in his district against the pro-Beijings in the Regional Council Election in 1986.
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Original:  It is also a direct reason that Ng gained 70 \% of the votes in his district against the pro-Beijings in the Regional Council Election in 1986.
Revised:  It is also a direct reason that Ng gained 70 \% of the votes in his district against the pro-Beijingers in the Regional Council Election in 1986.
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Original: Sing Tao news site  Legislative councillor He united many students and teachers to support the Tiananmen Square protesters in Beijing and was part of the Hong Kong Alliance in Support of Patriotic Democratic Movements in China and became a central committee member of the United Democrats of Hong Kong when it was formed in 1991.
Revised: Sing Tao news site Legislative Councillor He united many students and teachers to support the Tiananmen Square protesters in Beijing and was part of the Hong Kong Alliance in Support of Patriotic Democratic Movements in China and became a central committee member of the United Democrats of Hong Kong when it was formed in 1991.
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Original: Sing Tao news site  Legislative councillor He united many students and teachers to support the Tiananmen Square protesters in Beijing and was part of the Hong Kong Alliance in Support of Patriotic Democratic Movements in China and became a central committee member of the United Democrats of Hong Kong when it was formed in 1991.
Revised: Sing Tao news site Legislative councillor He united many students and teachers to support the Tiananmen Square protesters in Beijing and was part of the Hong Kong Alliance in Support of Patriotic Democratic Movements in China , becoming a central committee member of the United Democrats of Hong Kong when it was formed in 1991.
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Original:  Ng was elected to be a member of the legislative council (LegCo) in 1991.
Revised:  Ng was elected as a member of the legislative council (LegCo) in 1991.
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Original:  Ng was elected to be a member of the legislative council (LegCo) in 1991.
Revised:  Ng was elected to be a member of the Legislative Council (LegCo) in 1991.
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Original:  He strongly opposed the proposal of the government for reduction of number of classes in schools and the spending saving planson education.
Revised:  He strongly opposed proposed cuts in education expenditure and the number of classes in schools and the spending saving planson education.
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Original:  He strongly opposed the proposal of the government for reduction of number of classes in schools and the spending saving planson education.
Revised:  He strongly opposed the proposal of the government for reduction of number of classes in schools 
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Original:  Ng helped to unite the Education functional constituency together for a candlelight vigil around the LegCo to increase political pressure to the government.
Revised:  . In this cause he helped bring together the Education functional constituency together for a candlelight vigil around the LegCo to increase political pressure to the government.
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Original:  Ng helped to unite the Education functional constituency together for a candlelight vigil around the LegCo to increase political pressure to the government.
Revised:  Ng helped to unite the Education functional constituency for a candlelit vigil around the LegCo to increase political pressure to the government.
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Original:  Ng helped to unite the Education functional constituency together for a candlelight vigil around the LegCo to increase political pressure to the government.
Revised:  Ng helped to unite the Education functional constituency together for a candlelight vigil around the LegCo to pressure on the government.
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Original:  Although the pro-Beijing members and some of the pro-London members voted in favour of the proposal, this plan was finally cancelled in 1993.
Revised:  Although pro-Beijing members and some of the pro-London members voted in favour of the proposal, this plan was finally cancelled in 1993.
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Original:  Although the pro-Beijing members and some of the pro-London members voted in favour of the proposal, this plan was finally cancelled in 1993.
Revised:  Although the pro-Beijing members and some pro-London members voted in favour of the proposal, this plan was finally cancelled in 1993.
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Original:  Illness and death Even though he was diagnosed with blood cancer in February 1992, he still worked for long hours.
Revised:  Illness and death Ng was diagnosed with blood cancer in February 1992, he still worked for long hours.
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Original:  Even as his health deteriorated , on 4 June 1992 he attended a candlelight vigil in memory of the people who was killed during the Tiananmen massacre three years ago .
Revised:  Even as his health deteriorated , on 4 June 1992 he attended a candlelight vigil in memory of the people who was killed during the Tiananmen massacre three years earlier .
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Original:  Members of the LegCo observed a brief moment of silence before the legislature sitting in his memory two days later.
Revised:  Members of the LegCo observed a brief moment of silence before the legislature sat in his memory two days later.
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Original:  He was survived with his wife, a son and a daughter.
Revised:  He was survived by his wife, a son and a daughter.
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Original:  Famous works  燃點此生 (1992), published by Breakthrough 昨天的努力，明天的見證 (1992), published by Breakthrough
Revised:  Famous works Publications 燃點此生 (1992), published by Breakthrough 昨天的努力，明天的見證 (1992), published by Breakthrough
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Original: Ng Ming-yam (;
Revised: Ng Ming-yum (;
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Original: Sing Tao news site過渡期暗湧：新西第一滴血，票王吳明欽遇襲 (trans: Undercurrent during the transition period: Xinxi’s first drop of blood, King of Votes Ng Ming-yam attacked), Medium.com拚命三郎, 民主派早殞「明日之星」, Apple Daily, 3 January 2012
Revised: Sing Tao news site過渡期暗湧：新西第一滴血，票王吳明欽遇襲 (trans: Undercurrent during the transition period: Xinxi’s first drop of blood, King of Votes Ng Ming-yum attacked), Medium.com拚命三郎, 民主派早殞「明日之星」, Apple Daily, 3 January 2012
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Original:  Cooper's close friend Graham Sutherland, the painter, was a Trustee of the Tate and soon came under the sway of Le Roux.
Revised:  Cooper's close friend Graham Sutherland, the painter, was a Trustee of the Tate and supported Le Roux.
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Original:  Le Roux found another ally in Max Aitken, Lord Beaverbrook, whose newspapers, Evening Standard and Daily Express helpfully published his leaks.
Revised:  Le Roux found another ally in Max Aitken, Lord Beaverbrook, whose newspapers, Evening Standard and Daily Express published his leaks.
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Original:  Rothenstein was defended in the House of Lords and would remain Director until 1964.
Revised:  Questions were asked of Rothenstein in the House of Lords and would remain Director until 1964.
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Original:  Rothenstein was defended in the House of Lords and would remain Director until 1964.
Revised:  Rothenstein was defended in the House of Lords however he would remain Director until 1964.
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Original: Jagadu (IAST:Jagaḍu) , also called Jagdu Shah or Jagdusha, was a thirteenth century Jain merchant from Bhadresar , Kutch (now in Gujarat, India).
Revised: Jagadu (IAST:Jagaḍu) , also called Jagadu Shah or Jagdusha, was a thirteenth century Jain merchant from Bhadresar , Kutch (now in Gujarat, India).
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Original: Jagadu (IAST:Jagaḍu) , also called Jagdu Shah or Jagdusha, was a thirteenth century Jain merchant from Bhadresar , Kutch (now in Gujarat, India).
Revised: Jagadu (IAST:Jagaḍu) , also called Jagdu Shah or Jagdusha, was a thirteenth century Jain merchant from Bhadreshwar , Kutch (now in Gujarat, India).
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Original:  Following advise of his teacher Paramdeva Suri of the Purnima Gaccha, he also led pilgrimages of JAin community to Jain holy sites such as Shatrunjaya and Girnar Jain temples after taking permission of new Vaghela chief Visaladeva.
Revised:  Following advise of his teacher Paramdeva Suri of the Purnima Gaccha, he also led pilgrimages of Jain community to Jain holy sites such as Shatrunjaya and Girnar Jain temples after taking permission of new Vaghela chief Visaladeva.
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Original:  Following advise of his teacher Paramdeva Suri of the Purnima Gaccha, he also led pilgrimages of JAin community to Jain holy sites such as Shatrunjaya and Girnar Jain temples after taking permission of new Vaghela chief Visaladeva.
Revised:  Following advise of his teacher Paramdeva Suri of the Purnima Gaccha, he also led pilgrimages of JAin community to Jain holy sites such as Shatrunjaya and Girnar after taking permission of new Vaghela chief Visaladeva.
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Original:  A locality in Ghatkopar suburb of Mumbai is named Jagdusha Nagar, after him .
Revised:  A locality in Ghatkopar suburb of Mumbai is named Jagdusha Nagar, after him 
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Original:  Several Gujarati plays depicting events from his life are produced .
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Original:  After returning  he built and renovated several Jain temples and consecrated images.
Revised:  After returning , he built and renovated several Jain temples and consecrated images.
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Original:  Though the biography is not historically accurate and eulogies Jagadu, it is good sources of information about trade and influence of traders of that era.
Revised:  The biography eulogies Jagadu, it is good sources of information about trade and influence of traders of that era.
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Original:  Though the biography is not historically accurate and eulogies Jagadu, it is good sources of information about trade and influence of traders of that era.
Revised:  Though the biography is not historically accurate and eulogies Jagadu, it is a good source of information about trade and influence of traders of that era.
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Original:  The biography eulogies Jagadu, it is a good source of information about trade and influence of traders of that era.
Revised:  The biography eulogies Jagadu, it is good sources of information about trade and influence of traders of that era.
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Original: File:Drive time isochrones airports northern Finland.png|Isochrone map showing drive times around airports in northern Finland, created using GIS software (2011)]] An isochrone map (or chart/diagram) in geography and urban planning is a map showing areas related to isochrones between different points .
Revised: File:Drive time isochrones airports northern Finland.png|Isochrone map showing drive times around airports in northern Finland, created using GIS software (2011)]] An isochrone map in geography and urban planning is a map showing areas related to isochrones between different points .
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Original: File:Drive time isochrones airports northern Finland.png|Isochrone map showing drive times around airports in northern Finland, created using GIS software (2011)]] An isochrone map (or chart/diagram) in geography and urban planning is a map showing areas related to isochrones between different points .
Revised: File:Drive time isochrones airports northern Finland.png|Isochrone map showing drive times around airports in northern Finland, created using GIS software (2011)]] An isochrone map (or chart/diagram) in geography and urban planning is a map that depicts the area accessible from a point within a certain time threshold .
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Original:  Such a map is sometimes termed simply an isochrone (iso = equal, chrone = time).
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Original: ]] [[File:Map of Melbourne and environs minimum railway or tramway time zones.jpg|An early isochrone map of Melbourne rail transport travel times, 1910-1922]] Isochrone maps have been used in transportation planning since 1887 or earlier.
Revised: ]] [[File:Map of Melbourne and environs minimum railway or tramway time zones.jpg|An early isochrone map of Melbourne rail transport travel times, 1910-1922]] 
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Original:  Early examples of Isochrone maps include the Galton´s Isochronic Postal Charts and Isochronic Passage Charts of 1881 and 1882, Bartholomew's Isochronic Distance Map and Chart first published 1889 or earlier and Albrecht Penck's Isochronenkarte first published 1887.
Revised:  Early examples of Isochrone maps include the Galton´s Isochronic Postal Charts and Isochronic Passage Charts of 1881 and 1882, Bartholomew's Isochronic Distance Map and Chart first published 1889 and Albrecht Penck's Isochronenkarte first published 1887.
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Original:  Increases  computation, data storage, and improvements in algorithms have facilitated the rapid generation of isochrones.
Revised:  Increases in computation, data storage, and improvements in algorithms have facilitated the rapid generation of isochrones.
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Original:     &     
Revised:  Services and Applications Several digital tools exist which can generate isochrone maps. & 
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Original:  The program's purpose has changed since the 2004 Indian Ocean earthquake and the program now collects realtime measurements of sea level.
Revised:  The program's purpose has changed since the 2004 Indian Ocean earthquake and the program now collects real time measurements of sea level.
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Original:  The project is currently upgrading the over 290 stations it currently runs, so that they can send realtime data via satellite to newly set up national tsunami centres.
Revised:  The project is currently upgrading the over 290 stations it currently runs, so that they can send real time data via satellite to newly set up national tsunami centres.
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Original: "GLOSS provides oversight and coordination for global and regional sea level networks in support of, and with direction from, the oceanographic and climate research communities."
Revised: "GLOSS provides oversight and coordination for global and regional sea level networks in support of, and with direction from, the oceanographic and climate research URL
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Original:  The research that is provided by GLOSS is important for many things including research into sea level change and ocean circulation, coastal protection during events such as storm surges, providing flood warning and monitoring tsunamis, tide tables for port operations, fisherman, and recreation, to define datums for national or state boundaries   .
Revised:  The research that is provided by GLOSS is important for many things including research into sea level change and ocean circulation, coastal protection during events such as storm surges, providing flood warning and monitoring tsunamis, tide tables for port operations, fisherman, and recreation, to define datums for national or state boundaries . .
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Original:  The Mdimba hills historically have had strategical importance and contains many caves in which locals would hide during raids.
Revised:  The Mdimba hills historically have had strategical importance and contain many caves in which locals would hide during raids.
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Original:  The Mdimba hills historically have had strategical importance and contain many caves in which locals would hide during raids.
Revised:  The Mdzimba hills historically have had strategical importance and contain many caves in which locals would hide during raids.
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Original:  The flag continued to be used when the colony gained autonomy from France in 1958 and replaced by the flag of the independent Mali Federation in 1959.
Revised:  The flag continued to be used when the colony gained autonomy from France in 1958 , but was replaced by the flag of the independent Mali Federation in 1959.
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Original:  Amongst various others, her famous lavanis include "Tuzhya Usala Laagal Kolha", "Padarawarti Jartaricha" both from film Malhari Martand (1965), "Solaawa Varees Dhokyacha", "Kasa Kai Patil Bara Hai Ka?" both from film Sawaal Majha Aika! (1964).
Revised:  Amongst various others, her famous lavanis include "Tuzhya Usala Laagal Kolha", "Padarawarti Jartaricha" both from film Malhari Martand (1965), "Solaawa Varees Dhokyacha", "Kasa Kay Patil Bara Hay Ka?" both from film Sawaal Majha Aika! (1964).
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Original: Personal life Chavan was born as Sulochana Kadam on 13 March 1933 in Mumbai.
Revised: Personal life Sulochana Kadam was born on 13 March 1933 in Mumbai.
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Original:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
Revised:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" Vitthal Chavan Yadavrao Rokade "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
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Original:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
Revised:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" Shrinivas Khale Raja Badhe "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
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Original:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
Revised:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" Tukaram Shinde Tukaram Shinde "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
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Original:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
Revised:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" Vishwasnath More Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
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Original:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
Revised:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
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Original:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" || Vitthal Shinde || Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
Revised:  Lyricist |- | || " Kheltana Rang Bai Holicha" || Vitthal Chavan || Yadavrao Rokade |- | || "Kalidar Kapoori Paan" || Shrinivas Khale || Raja Badhe |- | || "Padala Piklay Aamba" || Tukaram Shinde || Tukaram Shinde |- | || "Aunda Lagin Karaycha" || Vishwasnath More || Ma Pa Bhave |- | || "Mazya Lagnacha Bendbaja Vajato" Vitthal Shinde Lokkavi Harendra Jadhav
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Original:  In November 2011 VLIZ was officially recognized as a World Data Center by the Paris-based International Council for Science  .
Revised:  In November 2011 VLIZ was officially recognized as a World Data Center by the Paris-based International Council for Science (ICSU) .
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Original:  In November 2011 VLIZ was officially recognized as a World Data Center by the Paris-based International Council for Science (ICSU)   .
Revised:  In November 2011 VLIZ was officially recognized as a World Data Center by the Paris-based International Council for Science (ICSU) . .
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Original:  200px|Stone sphere made by the Diquis culture See also Stone spheres of Costa Rica
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Original: The Diquis culture (sometimes spelled Diquís) was a pre-Columbian indigenous culture of Costa Rica that flourished from 700 AD to 1530 AD.
Revised: The Diquis culture (sometimes spelled Diquís) was a pre-Columbian indigenous culture of Costa Rica that flourished from AD 700 to 1530.
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Original: Operation Weasel is the name given to an alleged secret operation involving the governments of Nauru, New Zealand , and the United States.
Revised: Operation Weasel is the name given to an alleged secret operation involving the governments of Nauru, New Zealand and the United States.
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