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Original:  Mr Garang became Vice President in a historic deal, which ended the southern rebellion after 20 years of fighting and created a government of national unity . Giving hope to many that the problems endemic to the region, including the Janjaweed militia in Darfur, could finally be solved and that the Muslim north could come to liveable terms with the Christian south.
Revised:  Mr Garang became Vice President in a historic deal, which ended the southern rebellion after 20 years of fighting and created a government of national unity . Giving hope to many that problems endemic to the region, including the Janjaweed militia in Darfur, could finally be solved and that the Muslim north could come to liveable terms with the Christian south.
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Original:  He was making an official trip to Uganda when bad weather struck;
Revised:  Garang was making an official trip to Uganda when bad weather struck;
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Original:  his helicopter had not arrived at its destination and was out of contact leading many to fear the worst   
Revised:  his helicopter had not arrived at its destination and was out of contact leading many to fear the worst . 
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Original:  Some southerners believe that the Sudanese government may have been behind the crash, according to USA Today, which draws parallels with the shooting down of a plane carrying Rwanda's President Habyarimana in 1994.
Revised:  Some southerners believe that the Sudanese authorities were behind the crash, according to USA Today, which draws parallels with the shooting down of a plane carrying Rwanda's President Habyarimana in 1994.
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Original: John Garang, recently sworn in as Vice President of the Sudan, has been confirmed dead after his helicopter disappeared yesterday.
Revised: John Garang, recently sworn in as Vice President of the Sudan, was confirmed dead after his helicopter disappeared yesterday.
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Original:  Sudanese state television initially reported him to be alive but it now appears Mr  Garang died after his helicopter crashed.
Revised:  Sudanese state television initially reported him to be alive but it now appears Mr . Garang died after his helicopter crashed.
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Original: Category:Sudan Category:Disasters and accidents Category:Main Page John Garang, recently sworn in as Vice President of the Sudan, was confirmed dead after his helicopter disappeared yesterday.
Revised:  John Garang, recently sworn in as Vice President of the Sudan, was confirmed dead after his helicopter disappeared yesterday.
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Original:  A publicity official for a Tibetan ethnic group with the Tibetan Autonomous Prefecture of Yushu, told the news service that " a s far as I known, one person has died, and many others are buried in the collapsed houses.
Revised:  A publicity official for a Tibetan ethnic group with the Tibetan Autonomous Prefecture of Yushu, told the news service that " s far as I known, one person has died, and many others are buried in the collapsed houses.
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Original:  However, in May of 2008 a heavy 8.0 magnitude earthquake struck near Sichuan foothills killed 80,000 people
Revised:  However, in May of 2008 a heavy 8.0 magnitude earthquake struck near Sichuan foothills , killing 80,000 people
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Original:  However the consumer organisation is also unaware of any  5000  sold since its launch three months ago.
Revised:  However the consumer organisation is also unaware of any such incidents with the 5000 sold since its launch three months ago.
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Original:  Japanese auto maker Toyota is to temporarily suspend sales of its luxury Lexus GX 460 SUV following an unfavorable verdict from Consumer Reports, which concluded "Don't Buy: Safety Risk  " the first such warning in almost a decade.
Revised:  Japanese auto maker Toyota is to temporarily suspend sales of its luxury Lexus GX 460 SUV following an unfavorable verdict from Consumer Reports, which concluded "Don't Buy: Safety Risk , " the first such warning in almost a decade.
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Original:  After conducting its standard emergency handling tests on the 2010 version of the Lexus GX 460  Consumer Reports became concerned that the rear of the vehicle had a tendency to slide out  which in real life sitations could lead to rollovers.
Revised:  After conducting its standard emergency handling tests on the 2010 version of the Lexus GX 460 , Consumer Reports became concerned that the rear of the vehicle had a tendency to slide out which in real life sitations could lead to rollovers.
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Original:  After conducting its standard emergency handling tests on the 2010 version of the Lexus GX 460  Consumer Reports became concerned that the rear of the vehicle had a tendency to slide out  which in real life sitations could lead to rollovers.
Revised:  After conducting its standard emergency handling tests on the 2010 version of the Lexus GX 460 Consumer Reports became concerned that the rear of the vehicle had a tendency to slide out , which in real life sitations could lead to rollovers.
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Original:  However  the consumer organisation is also unaware of any such incidents with the 5000 GX 460s sold since its launch three months ago.
Revised:  However , the consumer organisation is also unaware of any such incidents with the 5000 GX 460s sold since its launch three months ago.
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Original:  The centre of ongoing safety issues with its vehicles, Toyota has been quick to act, despite making the statement  "Lexus' extensive vehicle testing provides a good indication of how our vehicles perform and we are confident that the GX meets our high safety standards.
Revised:  Already embattled with ongoing safety issues with its vehicles, Toyota has been quick to act, despite making the statement "Lexus' extensive vehicle testing provides a good indication of how our vehicles perform and we are confident that the GX meets our high safety standards.
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Original:  The centre of ongoing safety issues with its vehicles, Toyota has been quick to act, despite making the statement  "Lexus' extensive vehicle testing provides a good indication of how our vehicles perform and we are confident that the GX meets our high safety standards.
Revised:  The centre of ongoing safety issues with its vehicles, Toyota has been quick to act, despite making the statement that "Lexus' extensive vehicle testing provides a good indication of how our vehicles perform and we are confident that the GX meets our high safety standards.
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Original: P.K. Dutta, the additional district magistrate, commented that the Karandighi block reported 18 deaths while eight people died in Raiganj in the storm which occurred at midnight.
Revised: P.K. Dutta, the additional district magistrate, commented that the Karandighi block reported eighteen deaths while eight people died in Raiganj in the storm which occurred at midnight.
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Original: Civil defence Minister , Srikumar Mukherjee stated the storm hit the state late on Tuesday in the North Dinajpur district of West Bengal.
Revised: Civil defence Minister Srikumar Mukherjee reported that the storm hit the state late on Tuesday in the North Dinajpur district of West Bengal.
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Original: Vulcano eruption has started under the top of Eyjafjallajökull glacier in Iceland.
Revised: Volcano eruption has started under the top of Eyjafjallajökull glacier in Iceland.
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Original: Volcano eruption has started under the top of Eyjafjallajökull glacier in Iceland . Steam plumes rise up to 5,000 ft over the glacier.
Revised: A volcanic eruption has started under the top of Eyjafjallajökull glacier in Iceland . Steam plumes rise up to 5,000 ft over the glacier.
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Original: Volcano eruption has started under the top of Eyjafjallajökull glacier in Iceland . Steam plumes rise up to 5,000 ft over the glacier.
Revised: Volcano eruption has started under the top of Eyjafjallajökull glacier in Iceland , producing plumes of steam rising up to 5,000 ft over the glacier.
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Original:  The first evacuation started at at 2 a.m. on April 14th  because earthquakes in the area had pointed to a eruptionwas about to start.
Revised:  The first evacuation started at at 2 a.m. on April 14th , because earthquakes in the area had pointed to a eruptionwas about to start.
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Original:  Attempts has been made to breach route one (main ring road of Iceland) in order to save bridges in the area and no ari traffic is allowed in a lagre area above and around the eruption site .
Revised:  Attempts has been made to breach route one (main ring road of Iceland) in order to save bridges in the area and no ari traffic is allowed in a lagre area above and around the eruption zone .
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Original:  On March 21th, 2010 an vulcanic eruption was in Fimmvörðuháls between the glaciers Eyjafjallajökull and Mýrdalsjökull.
Revised:  On March 21th, 2010 a volcanic eruption occurred in Fimmvörðuháls between the glaciers Eyjafjallajökull and Mýrdalsjökull.
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Original:  The eruption now appears to be much more powerful.
Revised:  The current eruption appears to be much more powerful.
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Original: A volcanic eruption has started under the top of Eyjafjallajökull glacier in Iceland, producing plumes of steam rising up to 5,000 ft over the glacier.
Revised: A volcanic eruption has started under the top of Eyjafjallajökull glacier in Iceland, producing plumes of steam rising up to 5,000 feet over the glacier.
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Original:  On March 21th, 2010 a volcanic eruption occurred in Fimmvörðuháls between the glaciers Eyjafjallajökull and Mýrdalsjökull.
Revised:  On March 21th, a volcanic eruption occurred in Fimmvörðuháls between the glaciers Eyjafjallajökull and Mýrdalsjökull.
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Original:  The first evacuations began at at about 02.00 local time (03.00 UTC) today, because earthquakes in the area had pointed to an imminent eruption.
Revised:  The first evacuations began at about 02.00 local time (03.00 UTC) today, because earthquakes in the area had pointed to an imminent eruption.
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Original:  A radio station manager said "We are using other sounds such as gunfire, the noise of the vehicles and birds to link up our programmes ".
Revised:  A radio station manager said "We are using other sounds such as gunfire, the noise of the vehicles and birds to link up our programmes ."
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Original:  They issued the order 10 days ago and all bar two stations have stopped playing music.
Revised:  They issued the order 10 days ago and all but two stations have stopped playing music.
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Original:  The only stations in which the Somali people can listen to is the government controlled station and an UN-funded station based in Kenya.
Revised:  The only stations not in compliance with the ban are a government controlled station and an UN-funded station based in Kenya.
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Original:  The only stations in which the Somali people can listen to is the government controlled station and an UN-funded station based in Kenya.
Revised:  The only stations in which the Somali people can listen to is the government controlled station and a UN-funded station based in Kenya.
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Original: Before the ban , which includes playing all music and jingles, thirteen of the fifteen stations played music.
Revised: Before the forbiddance , which includes playing all music and jingles, thirteen of the fifteen stations played music.
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Original: Since 1991  Somalia has had no functioning government, with militants controlling large parts of the country.
Revised: Since 1991 , Somalia has had no functioning government, with militants controlling large parts of the country.
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Original:  They want this thing over with, ” a Tribunal official said  according to the Sunday Times.
Revised:  They want this thing over with, " a Tribunal official said according to the Sunday Times.
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Original:  They want this thing over with, ” a Tribunal official said  according to the Sunday Times.
Revised:  They want this thing over with, ” a Tribunal official said , according to the Sunday Times.
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Original:  The police think that the hijacker left his documents in an initially stolen car
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Original:   Thames Valley Police and the fire service are currently investigating into the cause of the fire  . Detective Inspector Steve Duffy commented: "At this stage the death is not believed to be suspicious.
Revised:  Thames Valley Police and the fire service are currently investigating to attempt to determine the cause of the fire . Detective Inspector Steve Duffy commented: "At this stage the death is not believed to be suspicious.
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Original: A man has died as the result of an apartment fire in Oxfordshire, England, United Kingdom.
Revised: A man died as the result of an apartment fire in Oxfordshire, England, United Kingdom.
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Original:  I don't want to spread hate on that topic, I am only interested in club's results 
Revised:  I don't want to spread hate on that topic, I am only interested in club's results .
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Original: A goal keeper from Serbia and Montenegro, Dragan Žilić, made his league debut for a Croatia football club Rijeka against Cibalija.
Revised: A goal keeper from Serbia and Montenegro, Dragan Žilić, made his league debut for Croatian football club Rijeka against Cibalija.
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Original:  However, most of the other observers did not sing along, while opposite team 's fans chanted in support of Žilić.
Revised:  However, most of the other observers did not sing along, while the opposition 's fans chanted in support of Žilić.
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Original:  In the 60th minute, a group of 200 fans left the stadium in protest, while the rest of the stadium kept sanging supportive songs.
Revised:  In the 60th minute, a group of 200 fans left the stadium in protest, while the rest of the stadium kept singing supportive songs.
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Original:  At the end of the game, the entire stadium applauded the Rijeka 's team.
Revised:  At the end of the game, the entire stadium applauded the Rijeka team.
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Original:  It is the first time ever a firm landing has been made on a comet.
Revised:  It is the first time ever a controlled landing has been made on a comet.
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Original:  Although the anchors may have malfunctioned, many still consider the mission a success.
Revised:  Although the anchors malfunctioned, many still consider the mission a success.
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Original:  Although the anchors may have malfunctioned, many still consider the mission a success.
Revised:  Although the anchors may have malfunctioned, many have treated the mission a success.
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Original:  A landing system engineer is finding out how the landing went about and where it took place.
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Original:  Scientists plan on leaving the probe on the comet  for about a year to test its properties .
Revised:  Scientists plan on gathering data on the comet for about a year to test its properties .
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Original:  Scientists plan on leaving the probe on the comet  for about a year to test its properties .
Revised:  Scientists plan on leaving the probe on the comet for about a year .
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Original:  But the comet could possibly be a resource for water delivery to the earth along with organic matter that provides the proteins of life.
Revised:  But the comet could possibly be a resource for water delivery to the earth along with organic matter that can form proteins and support life.
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Original:  Scientists hope to understand the origins of how planets form, especially the , since comets have collided with the Earth long ago.
Revised:  Scientists hope to understand how planets form, especially the , since comets have collided with the Earth long ago.
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Original:  Scientists hope to understand the origins of how planets form, especially the , since comets have collided with the Earth long ago.
Revised:  Scientists hope to understand the origins of how planets form, especially the , since comets collided with the Earth long ago.
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Original:  Although the anchors malfunctioned, many have treated the mission  a success.
Revised:  Although the anchors malfunctioned, many have treated the mission as a success.
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Original:  The ESA director  said, " This is a big step for human civilization.
Revised:  The ESA director general said, " This is a big step for human civilization.
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Original:  The biggest problem is that it looks easy. " 
Revised:  The biggest problem is that it looks easy. " .
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Original:  Scientists hope to understand how planets form, especially how the formed, since comets collided with the Earth long ago  
Revised:  Scientists hope to understand how planets form, especially how the formed, since comets collided with the Earth long ago . 
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Original: King Fahd suffered a stroke in 1995, and his half-brother, Crown Prince Abdullah, had acted as the de-facto regent of the country.
Revised:  Fahd suffered a stroke in 1995, and his half-brother, Crown Prince Abdullah, had acted as the de-facto regent of the country.
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Original:  On 27 May 2005 , the Saudi government announced that the king had been hospitalised .
Revised:  On May 27 , the Saudi government announced that the king had been hospitalised .
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Original:  On 27 May 2005 , the Saudi government announced that the king had been hospitalised .
Revised:  On 27 May 2005 , the Saudi government announced that the king had been hospitalized .
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Original:  He remained in hospital until his death  .
Revised:  He remained until his death .
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Original:  He had succeeded King Khalid on 13 June 1982, having been in a position of power before his succession as Crown Prince and First Deputy Prime Minister  since 1975.
Revised:  Fahd succeeded King Khalid on 13 June 1982, having been in a position of power before his succession as Crown Prince and First Deputy Prime Minister since 1975.
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Original:  He had succeeded King Khalid on 13 June 1982, having been in a position of power before his succession as Crown Prince and First Deputy Prime Minister  since 1975.
Revised:  He had succeeded King Khalid after being Crown Prince and First Deputy Prime Minister since 1975.
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Original:  He had succeeded King Khalid on 13 June 1982, having been in a position of power before his succession as Crown Prince and First Deputy Prime Minister  since 1975.
Revised:  He had succeeded King Khalid on 13 June 1982, having been in a position of power before his succession as Crown Prince and First Deputy Prime Minister , a position he held since 1975.
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Original:  King Fahd was the 11th son of the founder of the Saudi kingdom, King Ibn Saud, and the 5th king of the modern kingdom of Saudi Arabia
Revised:  Fahd was the 11th son of the founder of the Saudi kingdom, King Ibn Saud, and the 5th king of the modern kingdom of Saudi Arabia
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Original:  King Fahd was the 11th son of the founder of the Saudi kingdom, King Ibn Saud, and the 5th king of the modern kingdom of Saudi Arabia
Revised:  King Fahd was the eleventh son of the founder of the Saudi kingdom, King Ibn Saud, and the 5th king of the modern kingdom of Saudi Arabia
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Original:  King Fahd was the 11th son of the founder of the Saudi kingdom, King Ibn Saud, and the 5th king of the modern kingdom of Saudi Arabia
Revised:  King Fahd was the 11th son of the founder of the Saudi kingdom, King Ibn Saud, and the fifth king of the modern kingdom of Saudi Arabia
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Original:  It is unknown how many women are made widows by the death of King Fahd, but his father is reported to have had 145 wives.
Revised:  It is unknown how many women are made widows by the death of King Fahd, but the previous king was reported to have had 145 wives.
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Original:  There will be no coffin or state funeral for Fahd and he will be buried without a headstone as is customary with Wahhabism;
Revised:  There will be no coffin or state funeral for Fahd and he will be buried without a headstone as is customary in Wahhabism,
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Original: 330px|King Fahd (right) meeting with George H. W. Bush in 1990.
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Original: East European Belarus is increasingly labelled as Europe's last dictatorship In his preparations for next year's elections, Belarusian president Alexander Lukashenko has gone after  Polish ethnic minority in Belarus sending riot police with guns and dogs to detain the leaders and seize the headquarters of an association of 400 thousand Poles living in areas of Belarus that were part of Poland until World War II.
Revised: East European Belarus is increasingly labelled as Europe's last dictatorship In his preparations for next year's elections, Belarusian president Alexander Lukashenko has gone after members of the Polish ethnic minority in Belarus sending riot police with guns and dogs to detain the leaders and seize the headquarters of an association of 400 thousand Poles living in areas of Belarus that were part of Poland until World War II.
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Original:  Dispute between Poland and Belarus over human rights escalated further as Poland in response has recalled its ambassador from Belarus for indefinite consultations and called on the European Union to impose sanctions on the Belarusian leadership.
Revised:  The dispute between Poland and Belarus over human rights escalated further as Poland in response has recalled its ambassador from Belarus for indefinite consultations and called on the European Union to impose sanctions on the Belarusian leadership.
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Original:  Belarusian president Alexander Lukashenko has gone after members of the Polish ethnic minority in Belarus sending riot  police with guns and dogs to detain the leaders and seize the headquarters of an association representing  400 thousand Poles living today in areas of Belarus that were part of Poland until World War II . Reporters Without Borders urged the Belarusian authorities to stop hounding and arresting journalists from the country's Polish minority.
Revised:  Belarusian president Alexander Lukashenko . police with guns and dogs to detain the leaders and seize the headquarters of an association representing 400 thousand Poles living today in areas of Belarus that were part of Poland until World War II . Reporters Without Borders urged the Belarusian authorities to stop hounding and arresting journalists from the country's Polish minority.
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Original:  Belarusian president Alexander Lukashenko has gone after members of the Polish ethnic minority in Belarus sending riot  police with guns and dogs to detain the leaders and seize the headquarters of an association representing  400 thousand Poles living today in areas of Belarus that were part of Poland until World War II . Reporters Without Borders urged the Belarusian authorities to stop hounding and arresting journalists from the country's Polish minority.
Revised:  Belarusian president Alexander Lukashenko has gone after members of the Polish ethnic minority in Belarus sending riot police with guns and dogs to detain the leaders and seize the headquarters of an association representing the 400 thousand Poles living today in areas of Belarus that were part of Poland until World War II . Reporters Without Borders urged the Belarusian authorities to stop hounding and arresting journalists from the country's Polish minority.
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