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Original:  The relief effort, named Operation Marham involves both the Indian Air Force and the Indian Navy and aims at delivering aid materials to the victims in as short a time as is possible. defence  Minister Pranab Mukherjee was away on an official visit to China and Japan , as a result of which the Indian response was  delayed.
Revised:  The relief effort, named Operation Marham involves both the Indian Air Force and the Indian Navy and aims at delivering aid materials to the victims in as short a time as is possible. defence Minister Pranab Mukherjee was away on an official visit to China and Japan , as a result of which the Indian response was initially delayed.
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Original:  260 px|Indian Airforce IL-76 The naval vessel INS Rajput , which was on overseas deployment in the South China Sea was diverted to Jakarta  and is expected to reach there with 7 tons of relief material anytime today.
Revised:  260 px|Indian Airforce IL-76 The naval vessel INS Rajput , which was on overseas deployment in the South China Sea to and is expected to reach there with 7 tons of relief material anytime today.
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Original:  260 px|Indian Airforce IL-76 The naval vessel INS Rajput , which was on overseas deployment in the South China Sea was diverted to Jakarta  and is expected to reach there with 7 tons of relief material anytime today.
Revised:  260 px|Indian Airforce IL-76 The naval vessel INS Rajput , which was on overseas deployment in the South China Sea was diverted to Jakarta and is expected to reach the Indonesian capital with 7 tons of relief material anytime today.
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Original:  260 px|Indian Airforce IL-76 The naval vessel INS Rajput , which was on overseas deployment in the South China Sea was diverted to Jakarta  and is expected to reach there with 7 tons of relief material anytime today.
Revised:  260 px|Indian Airforce IL-76 The naval vessel INS Rajput , which was on overseas deployment in the South China Sea was diverted to Jakarta and is expected to reach there with 7 tons of relief material today.
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Original:  An I.A.F cargo plane carrying 35 tons of relief material has already been sent to Indonesia.
Revised:  In the air, an I.A.F cargo plane carrying 35 tons of relief material has already been sent to Indonesia.
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Original:  An I.A.F cargo plane carrying 35 tons of relief material has already been sent to Indonesia.
Revised:  An I.A.F cargo plane carrying 35 tons of relief material has been sent to Indonesia.
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Original:  Another airforce  IL-76 carrying a similar quantity of relief material will leave India today.
Revised:  Another airforce plane, an IL-76 carrying a similar quantity of relief material will leave India today.
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Original:  Another airforce  IL-76 carrying a similar quantity of relief material will leave India today.
Revised:  Another airforce IL-76 , will carry a similar quantity of relief material will leave India today.
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Original:  Another airforce  IL-76 carrying a similar quantity of relief material will leave India today.
Revised:  Another airforce IL-76 carrying a similar quantity of relief material from India today.
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Original:  India has sent tents, medical supplies and rice to the victims of the earthquake .
Revised:  Among the supplies India to the victims of the earthquake .
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Original: On the seas , the naval vessel INS Rajput has been redeployed from the South China Sea to Jakarta and is expected to reach the Indonesian capital with 7 tons of relief material today.
Revised: On the sea , the naval vessel INS Rajput has been redeployed from the South China Sea to Jakarta and is expected to reach the Indonesian capital with 7 tons of relief material today.
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Original: On the seas , the naval vessel INS Rajput has been redeployed from the South China Sea to Jakarta and is expected to reach the Indonesian capital with 7 tons of relief material today.
Revised: On the seas , the naval vessel INS Rajput has been redeployed from the South China Sea to and is expected to reach the Indonesian capital with 7 tons of relief material today.
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Original:  Another airforce plane, an IL-76, will carry a similar quantity of relief material from India today .
Revised:  Another airforce plane, an IL-76, will fly out from India today carrying a similar quantity of relief material from India today .
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Original:  Another airforce plane, an IL-76, will carry a similar quantity of relief material from India today .
Revised:  Another airforce plane, an IL-76, will carry a similar quantity of relief material .
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Original:  Among the supplies India  to the victims of the Indonesian earthquake are tents, medical equipment and rice.
Revised:  Among the supplies India is sending to the victims of the Indonesian earthquake are tents, medical equipment and rice.
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Original:  The INS Tabar will leave  Chennai, India, today carrying additional aid.
Revised:  The INS Tabar will leave the port of Chennai, India, today carrying additional aid.
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Original:  On news of the disaster, Indian President Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam and Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh conveyed their condolneces to Indonesian President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono.
Revised:  On news of the disaster, Indian President Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam and Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh conveyed their condolences to Indonesian President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono.
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Original:  Related Articles Earthquake kills thousands in Indonesi
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Original:  260 px| Indian Airforce IL-76 On news of the disaster, Indian President Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam and Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh conveyed their condolences to  Indonesian President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono.
Revised:  260 px| Indian Airforce IL-76 The Indian President Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam and Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh conveyed their condolences to Indonesian President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono.
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Original:  260 px| Indian Airforce IL-76 On news of the disaster, Indian President Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam and Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh conveyed their condolences to  Indonesian President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono.
Revised:  260 px| Indian Airforce IL-76 On news of the disaster, Indian President Dr. APJ Abdul Kalam and Prime Minister Dr. Manmohan Singh conveyed their condolences to the Indonesian President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono.
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Original: President Xanana Gusamo has taken special security powers in a bid to quell the violence raging in East Timor.
Revised: President Xanana Gusmão has taken special security powers in a bid to quell the violence raging in East Timor.
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Original:  The period of emergency rule, which would last 30 days, was to "prevent violence and avoid further fatalities" and lead to "rapid reestablishment of public order." 260 px|Government Palace, Dili The decision to give emergency powers to President Gusamo was taken in "close collaboration" with Prime Minister Mari Alkatiri.
Revised:  The period of emergency rule, which would last 30 days, was to "prevent violence and avoid further fatalities" and lead to "rapid reestablishment of public order." 260 px|Government Palace, Dili The decision to give emergency powers to President Gusmão was taken in "close collaboration" with Prime Minister Mari Alkatiri.
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Original:  The period of emergency rule, which would last 30 days, was  to "prevent violence and avoid further fatalities" and lead to "rapid reestablishment of public order." 260 px|Government Palace, Dili
Revised:  The period of emergency rule, which would last 30 days, was imposed to "prevent violence and avoid further fatalities" and lead to "rapid reestablishment of public order." 260 px|Government Palace, Dili
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Original: During the disorder at least 27 people have been killed, criminal documents reported stolen, and looting has been widespread in the East Timorese capital, Dili  .
Revised: At least 27 people have been killed, criminal documents reported stolen, and looting has been widespread in the East Timorese capital, Dili .
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Original: During the disorder at least 27 people have been killed, criminal documents reported stolen, and looting has been widespread in the East Timorese capital, Dili  .
Revised: During the disorder at least 27 people have been killed, criminal documents reported stolen, and looting widespread in the East Timorese capital, Dili .
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Original:  Justice Minister Domingos Sarmento said  Portugal had offered to provide East Timor with 120 security personel by the weekend.
Revised:  Justice Minister Domingos Sarmento said that Portugal had offered to provide East Timor with 120 security personel by the weekend.
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Original:  Justice Minister Domingos Sarmento said that Portugal had offered to provide East Timor with 120 security personel by the weekend.
Revised:  Justice Minister Domingos Sarmento said that Portugal had offered to provide East Timor with 120 security personnel by the weekend.
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Original: Greek Police and anti-terrorist service of Greece seem to believe that extreme-left organizations are behind the terrorist attack against Voulgarakis.
Revised: Greek police and anti-terrorist service of Greece seem to believe that extreme-left organizations are behind the terrorist attack against Voulgarakis.
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Original:  As per the teachers, the fact that no pupils were injured was due to pure luck, while minor damages were recorded to the buildings.
Revised:  According to the teachers, the fact that no pupils were injured was due to pure luck, while minor damages were recorded to the buildings.
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Original: A remote controlled bomb was exploded near the house of Culture Minister of Greece , in Lycabettus Hill, Athens .
Revised: A bomb exploded near the house of Culture Minister of Greece , in Lycabettus Hill, Athens .
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Original: A remote controlled bomb was exploded near the house of Culture Minister of Greece , in Lycabettus Hill, Athens .
Revised: A remote controlled bomb was exploded near the house of the Greek Culture Minister , in Lycabettus Hill, Athens .
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Original:  The bombing attack, which took place  at 7:42am(GTM +2) very close to the home of Minister Giorgos Voulgarakis, was quite strong, causing damages to five cars and  had been placed on a bike that had been abandoned between two cars.
Revised:  The bombing attack, which took place at 7:42am(GTM +2) close to the home of Minister Giorgos Voulgarakis, was quite strong, causing damages to five cars and had been placed on a bike that had been abandoned between two cars.
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Original:  The bombing attack, which took place  at 7:42am(GTM +2) very close to the home of Minister Giorgos Voulgarakis, was quite strong, causing damages to five cars and  had been placed on a bike that had been abandoned between two cars.
Revised:  The bombing attack, which took place at 7:42am(GTM +2) very close to the home of Minister Giorgos Voulgarakis, was quite strong, causing damages to five cars and had been placed on a bike left between two cars.
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Original:  According to sources , Giorgos Voulgarakis, who was Minister of Public Order during the last two years, had been receiving threats against his life lately, due to his interference in the kidnapping case of a number of Pakistani immigrants in Greece and for which the Greek government has been accused by some of the Greek media, immigrationorganizations and leftist parties.
Revised:  According to sources , Giorgos Voulgarakis, who had been receiving threats against his life lately, due to his interference in the kidnapping case of a number of Pakistani immigrants in Greece and for which the Greek government has been accused by some of the Greek media, immigrationorganizations and leftist parties.
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Original:  For this reason, a  specially-trained dog of  the Antiterrorist Unit scoured the area within a 50m radius from the Minister’s home each morning.
Revised:  For this reason, a A specially-trained dog of the Antiterrorist Unit scoured the area within a 50m radius from the Minister’s home each morning.
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Original:  For this reason, a  specially-trained dog of  the Antiterrorist Unit scoured the area within a 50m radius from the Minister’s home each morning.
Revised:  For this reason, a specially-trained dog of the Minister’s home each morning.
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Original:  Bomb  technicians searched the school grounds, while parents rushed to take their children home.
Revised:  Bomb technicians searched the school grounds, frantic parents rushed to take their children home.
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Original: The explosion, which happened  at 7:42am ( GTM +2)  close to the home of Minister Giorgos, is the second time the former Minister for Public Order has been the target of a bomb attack.
Revised: The explosion, which happened at 7:42am ( GMT +2) close to the home of Minister Giorgos, is the second time the former Minister for Public Order has been the target of a bomb attack.
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Original: The explosion, which happened  at 7:42am ( GTM +2)  close to the home of Minister Giorgos, is the second time the former Minister for Public Order has been the target of a bomb attack.
Revised: The explosion, which happened at 7:42am ( GTM +2) , close to the home of Minister Giorgos, is the second time the former Minister for Public Order has been the target of a bomb attack.
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Original:  The device, which the police said consisted of 2-3kg (4-7lb) of dynamite, had been placed on a bike left between two cars.
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Original:  A specially-trained dog of a Greek anti-terrorist unit had been sniffing around the area of the Minister’s home each morning.
Revised:  A trained dog of a Greek anti-terrorist unit had been sniffing around the area of the Minister’s home each morning.
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Original:  The so-called terrorist leftist group "Epanastatikos Laekos Agonas"(Revolutionary popular rally), is the group which some Greek media have accused for today's bomb attack.
Revised:  The leftist "Epanastatikos Laekos Agonas"(Revolutionary popular rally), is the group which some Greek media have accused for today's bomb attack.
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Original:  Following the announcement  Tuesday, May 30, the White House , through spokesman Tony Snow, said they would make the details of the Iraqi government report public.
Revised:  Following the announcement , on Tuesday, May 30, the White House , through spokesman Tony Snow, said they would make the details of the Iraqi government report public.
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Original:  Following the announcement  Tuesday, May 30, the White House , through spokesman Tony Snow, said they would make the details of the Iraqi government report public.
Revised:  Following the announcement Tuesday, May 30, the White House spokesman Tony Snow, said they would make the details of the Iraqi government report public.
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Original:  The Pentagon initially believed the gun battle that ended in 15 civilian casualties, as well as 8 terrorist deaths, was a fight with militants.
Revised:  Initial reports from the Pentagon stated the gun battle that ended in 15 civilian casualties, as well as 8 terrorist deaths, was a fight with militants.
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Original:  Eyewitness reports claim  US Marines went house to house gunning down innocent men, women and babies for no reason.
Revised:  Eyewitness reports claim that US Marines went house to house gunning down innocent men, women and babies for no reason.
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Original:  The Wall St Journal say there is evidence to support these unhappy claims.
Revised:  The Wall Street Journal reports that there is evidence to support these unhappy claims.
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Original:  The Wall St Journal say there is evidence to support these unhappy claims.
Revised:  The Wall St Journal say there is evidence to support these claims.
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Original:  While some politicians sound a note of caution that not all facts are yet known for conclusions to be drawn  Jim Murtha, a Democratic Congressman, said in an interview with CNN "It is as bad as Abu Ghraib, if not worse."
Revised:  While some politicians sounded a note of caution that not all facts are yet known for conclusions to be drawn Jim Murtha, a Democratic Congressman, said in an interview with CNN "It is as bad as Abu Ghraib, if not worse."
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Original:  While some politicians sound a note of caution that not all facts are yet known for conclusions to be drawn  Jim Murtha, a Democratic Congressman, said in an interview with CNN "It is as bad as Abu Ghraib, if not worse."
Revised:  While some politicians sound a note of caution that not all facts are yet known for conclusions to be drawn , Jim Murtha, a Democratic Congressman, said in an interview with CNN "It is as bad as Abu Ghraib, if not worse."
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Original:  And in a remark that will bounce around the walls of the White House he told Reuters : "We will hold those who did it responsible."
Revised:  and speaking to the Reuters news agency, said "We will hold those who did it responsible."
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Original:  Following the announcement, on Tuesday, May 30, the White House spokesman Tony Snow , said they would make the details of the Iraqi government report public.
Revised:  Following the announcement, on Tuesday, May 30, the White House spokesman Tony Snow said they would make the details of the Iraqi government report public.
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Original:  Lance Corpl Roel Ryan Briones of Hanford, California, speaking to the Los Angeles Times said: "They ranged from little babies to adult males and females.
Revised:  Lance Corpl Roel Ryan Briones of Hanford, California, speaking to the Los Angeles Times , "They ranged from little babies to adult males and females.
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Original:   United States President, George  Bush, is said to have learned of the Haditha incident from a journalist earlier this year and has already had a briefing on it from his national security advisor, Stephen Hadley.
Revised:  The United States President, George Bush, is said to have learned of the Haditha incident from a journalist earlier this year and has already had a briefing on it from his national security advisor, Stephen Hadley.
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Original:   United States President, George  Bush, is said to have learned of the Haditha incident from a journalist earlier this year and has already had a briefing on it from his national security advisor, Stephen Hadley.
Revised:  United States President, George W. Bush, is said to have learned of the Haditha incident from a journalist earlier this year and has already had a briefing on it from his national security advisor, Stephen Hadley.
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Original: Eyewitness reports claim that US Marines went house to house gunning down innocent men, women and babies for no reason .
Revised: Eyewitness reports claim that US Marines went house to house gunning down innocent men, women , and children without cause or provocation .
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Original: Lance Corpl Roel Ryan Briones of Hanford, California, who was in Haditha on that day, told the Los Angeles Times, "They ranged from little babies to adult males and females.
Revised: Lance Corporal Roel Ryan Briones of Hanford, California, who was in Haditha on that day, told the Los Angeles Times, "They ranged from little babies to adult males and females.
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Original: Witnesses said that the man pulled out a handgun and shot the other man in the head.
Revised: Witnesses said that one man pulled out a handgun and shot the other man in the head.
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Original: Witnesses said that the man pulled out a handgun and shot the other man in the head.
Revised: Witnesses said that the man pulled out a handgun and shot another man in the head.
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Original:  The man  survived the shooting , and is in serious but stable condition at hospital.
Revised:  The man survived the shooting and is in serious but stable condition at hospital.
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Original:  The festival, which will last until May 4, consists of a series of LGBT cultural events, including film screenings, theatre and music, and will also include public debates about LGBT issues, as well as a gay pride parade on June 3, expect to attract hundreds of people.
Revised:  The festival, which will last until May 4, consists of a series of LGBT cultural events, including film screenings, theatre and music, and will also include public debates about LGBT issues, and a gay pride parade on June 3, expect to attract hundreds of people.
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Original:  The festival, which will last until May 4, consists of a series of LGBT cultural events, including film screenings, theatre and music, and will also include public debates about LGBT issues, as well as a gay pride parade on June 3, expect to attract hundreds of people.
Revised:  The festival, which will last until May 4, consists of a series of LGBT cultural events, including film screenings, theatre and music, and will also include public debates about LGBT issues, as well as a gay pride parade on June 3, expected to attract hundreds of people.
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Original:  The  theme of the third GayFest is the legalisation of same-sex civil unions and marriages in Romania.
Revised:  The main theme of the third GayFest is the legalisation of same-sex civil unions and marriages in Romania.
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Original:  In the 2000s , Romania has made significant progress in its gay rights record, introducing an anti-discrimination law  that includes sexual orientation, and repealing its last anti-gay law, Article 200 of the Penal Code, in 2001
Revised:  In the past few years , Romania has made significant progress in its gay rights record, introducing an anti-discrimination law that includes sexual orientation, and repealing its last anti-gay law, Article 200 of the Penal Code, in 2001
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Original: The third edition of Bucharest's gay pride festival, GayFest, opened yesteday, May 30, organised by ACCEPT, Romania's largest LGBT organisation.
Revised: The third edition of Bucharest's gay pride festival, GayFest, opened yesteday, May 30.
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Original: The third edition of Bucharest's gay pride festival, GayFest, opened yesteday , May 30.
Revised: The third edition of Bucharest's gay pride festival, GayFest, opened yesterday , May 30.
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Original:  In the past few years, Romania has made significant progress in its gay rights record, introducing an anti-discrimination law in 2000 that includes sexual orientation, and repealing its last anti-gay law, Article 200 of the Penal Code, in 2001
Revised:  In the past few years, Romania has significantly changed its gay rights record, introducing an anti-discrimination law in 2000 that includes sexual orientation, and repealing its last anti-gay law, Article 200 of the Penal Code, in 2001
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Original:  Both would reduce the penalties for piracy, require software companies to provide details on how their programs work, and create an agency that would have jurisdiction over digital copyright issues, including how often music can be legally copied  and ensuring compatibility across devices.
Revised:  Both would reduce the penalties for piracy, require software companies to provide details on how their programs work, and create an agency that would have jurisdiction over digital copyright issues, including how often music can be legally copied by a customer for personal use and ensuring compatibility across devices.
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Original:  Clean up campaigns have made limited progress because of inconsistant law enforcement.
Revised:  Clean up campaigns have made limited progress because of inconsistent law enforcement.
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