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Original:  He expressed confidence the election would be credible.
Revised:  Nice expressed confidence the election would be credible.
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Original:  Mozambique "We think that we are prepared to run this election (well) ," he said .
Revised:  "We think that we are prepared to run this election (well) ," he said .
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Original:  Mozambique "We think that we are prepared to run this election (well) ," he said .
Revised:  Mozambique "We think that we are prepared to run this election ," he said .
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Original:  Mozambique "We think that we are prepared to run this election (well) ," he said .
Revised:  Mozambique "We think that we are prepared to run this election (well) ," he said 
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Original:  Nice denied opposing accusations that previous elections were skewed in favor of the ruling party.
Revised:  , denying opposing accusations that previous elections were skewed in favor of the ruling party.
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Original:  "What the electoral commission always (does) is that it works according to all procedures, and working with all political parties, and after all the electoral process, we manage to get everything in terms of suggestions, in terms of recommendations, even coming from political parties (and) electoral observers ," Nice said .
Revised:  "What the electoral commission always does is that it works according to all procedures, and working with all political parties, and after all the electoral process, we manage to get everything in terms of suggestions, in terms of recommendations, even coming from political parties (and) electoral observers ," Nice said .
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Original:  "What the electoral commission always (does) is that it works according to all procedures, and working with all political parties, and after all the electoral process, we manage to get everything in terms of suggestions, in terms of recommendations, even coming from political parties (and) electoral observers ," Nice said .
Revised:  "What the electoral commission always (does) is that it works according to all procedures, and working with all political parties, and after all the electoral process, we manage to get everything in terms of suggestions, in terms of recommendations, even coming from political parties (and) electoral observers .
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Original:  He said the electoral body has had success coordinating with local and international observers ahead of the vote. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The electoral commission …
Revised:  According to Nice, telectoral body has had success coordinating with local and international observers ahead of the vote. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The electoral commission …
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Original:  He said the electoral body has had success coordinating with local and international observers ahead of the vote. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The electoral commission …
Revised:  He said the electoral body has had success coordinating with local and international observers ahead of the vote. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% "The electoral commission ...
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Original:  now is busy working with the different observer missions, Mozambique's election is on October 28including SADC. And we are working closely with SADC, with the European Union, and I think there is a good relation between the electoral commission and the mission observers , " he said.
Revised:  now is busy working with the different observer missions, Mozambique's election is on October 28including SADC. And we are working closely with SADC, with the European Union, and I think there is a good relation between the electoral commission and the mission observers . " he said.
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Original:  now is busy working with the different observer missions, Mozambique's election is on October 28including SADC. And we are working closely with SADC, with the European Union, and I think there is a good relation between the electoral commission and the mission observers , " he said.
Revised:  now is busy working with the different observer missions, Mozambique's election is on October 28including SADC. And we are working closely with SADC, with the European Union, and I think there is a good relation between the electoral commission and the mission observers , " 
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Original:  The only country within the Southern African Development Community that is barred from having observers in Mozambique's election is Madagascar . Antananarivo is under SADC sanctions after the regional body condemned President Andry Rajoelina's ascension to power, which it describes as a coup d'état
Revised:  The only country within the Southern African Development Community that is barred from having observers in Mozambique's election is Madagascar Antananarivo is under SADC sanctions after the regional body condemned President Andry Rajoelina's ascension to power, which it describes as a coup d'état
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Original:  The only country within the Southern African Development Community that is barred from having observers in Mozambique's election is Madagascar . Antananarivo is under SADC sanctions after the regional body condemned President Andry Rajoelina's ascension to power, which it describes as a coup d'état
Revised:  The only country within the Southern African Development Community that is barred from having observers in Mozambique's election is Madagascar . , which was placed under SADC sanctions after the regional body condemned President Andry Rajoelina's ascension to power, which it describes as a coup d'état
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Original:  The only country within the Southern African Development Community that is barred from having observers in Mozambique's election is Madagascar . Antananarivo is under SADC sanctions after the regional body condemned President Andry Rajoelina's ascension to power, which it describes as a coup d'état
Revised:  The only country within the Southern African Development Community that is barred from having observers in Mozambique's election is Madagascar . Antananarivo is under SADC sanctions after the regional body condemned President Andry Rajoelina's ascension to power, which it claimed was a coup d'état
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Original: The Southern African Development Community (SADC) has said it is calling for a transparent vote in Mozambique's scheduled October 28 general election .
Revised: The Southern African Development Community (SADC) has said it is calling for a transparent vote in Mozambique's scheduled October 28 general elections .
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Original:  Nice added electoral officials have been fully trained ahead of the vote, saying that "we have trained very well our staff, including the code of conduct, including all the procedures that they have to do during the election , " Nice said.
Revised:  Nice added electoral officials have been fully trained ahead of the vote, saying that "we have trained very well our staff, including the code of conduct, including all the procedures that they have to do during the election . " Nice said.
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Original:  Nice added electoral officials have been fully trained ahead of the vote, saying that "we have trained very well our staff, including the code of conduct, including all the procedures that they have to do during the election , " Nice said.
Revised:  Nice added electoral officials have been fully trained ahead of the vote, saying that "we have trained very well our staff, including the code of conduct, including all the procedures that they have to do during the election , " 
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Original:  " What the electoral commission always [does] is that it works according to all procedures, and working with all political parties, and after all the electoral process, we manage to get everything in terms of suggestions, in terms of recommendations, even coming from political parties (and) electoral observers. 
Revised:  What the electoral commission always [does] is that it works according to all procedures, and working with all political parties, and after all the electoral process, we manage to get everything in terms of suggestions, in terms of recommendations, even coming from political parties (and) electoral observers. 
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Original:  " What the electoral commission always [does] is that it works according to all procedures, and working with all political parties, and after all the electoral process, we manage to get everything in terms of suggestions, in terms of recommendations, even coming from political parties (and) electoral observers. 
Revised:  " What the electoral commission always [does] is that it works according to all procedures, and working with all political parties, and after all the electoral process, we manage to get everything in terms of suggestions, in terms of recommendations, even coming from political parties (and) electoral observers. "
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Original: (New Delhi) In India, two passenger trains have collided  , killing at least 21 people and injuring more than 20 others.
Revised:  In India, two passenger trains have collided , killing at least 21 people and injuring more than 20 others.
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Original: (New Delhi) In India, two passenger trains have collided  , killing at least 21 people and injuring more than 20 others.
Revised: (New Delhi) Two passenger trains have collided , killing at least 21 people and injuring more than 20 others.
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Original:  The accident occurred early Wednesday when a passenger train rammed into another train which was waiting at a red signal near the northern city , Agra.
Revised:  The accident occurred when a passenger train rammed into another train which was waiting at a red signal near the northern city , Agra.
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Original:  The accident occurred early Wednesday when a passenger train rammed into another train which was waiting at a red signal near the northern city , Agra.
Revised:  The accident occurred early Wednesday when a passenger train collided with another train which was waiting at a red signal near the northern city , Agra.
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Original:  The accident occurred early Wednesday when a passenger train rammed into another train which was waiting at a red signal near the northern city , Agra.
Revised:  The accident occurred early Wednesday when a passenger train rammed into another train which was waiting at a red signal near the northern city of Agra.
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Original:  Passengers say they were sleeping when they felt a massive jolt.
Revised:  Passengers said that they were sleeping when they felt a massive jolt.
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Original:  Passengers say they were sleeping when they felt a massive jolt.
Revised:  Passengers say they were sleeping when they felt a heavy jolt.
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Original:  One eyewitness told television crews that people on the upper berths of the train came tumbling down , with the impactof the collision . Soldiers assisted in the efforts to free passengers from the mangled coaches.
Revised:  One eyewitness told television crews that people on the upper berths of the train came tumbling down due to the impact . Soldiers assisted in the efforts to free passengers from the mangled coaches.
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Original:  One eyewitness told television crews that people on the upper berths of the train came tumbling down , with the impactof the collision . Soldiers assisted in the efforts to free passengers from the mangled coaches.
Revised:  One eyewitness told television crews that people on the upper berths of the train came tumbling down , with the impactof the collision . 
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Original:  A northern railway spokesman, R.D. Vajpayee, told VOA, that the rear coach of the stationary train bore the brunt of the collision's impact.
Revised:  A northern railway spokesman, R.D. Vajpayee, told the Voice of America news agency that the rear coach of the stationary train bore the brunt of the collision's impact.
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Original:  Rescuers use gas cutters to open a wrecked compartment to free trapped passengers near Agra, about 210 kilometers southeast of New Delhi, India, 21 Oct 2009 "We had to rescue, take out the passengers which were trapped in the last coach ," said Vajpayee.
Revised:  "We had to rescue, take out the passengers which were trapped in the last coach ," said Vajpayee.
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Original:  They had assisted us and, within a few hours, we had completed with rescue operations." Railway officials say they are not certain what caused the accident, but one of the trains may have overlooked a signal to stop.
Revised:  They had assisted us and, within a few hours, we had completed with rescue operations." Railway officials said they are not certain what caused the accident, but one of the trains may have overlooked a signal to stop.
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Original:  An inquiry  has been ordered.
Revised:  An inquiry into the incident has been ordered.
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Original:  India operates one of the most extensive and busiest rail networks in the world - 9,000 passenger trains run every day, carrying more than 18-million people, daily, across the vast country.
Revised:  India operates one of the most extensive and busiest rail networks in the world ; 9,000 passenger trains run every day, carrying more than 18-million people, daily, across the vast country.
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Original:  India operates one of the most extensive and busiest rail networks in the world - 9,000 passenger trains run every day, carrying more than 18-million people, daily, across the vast country.
Revised:  India operates one of the most extensive and busiest rail networks in the world - 9,000 passenger trains run every day, carrying more than 18-million people, daily, across the country.
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Original:  They had assisted us and, within a few hours, we had completed with rescue operations   ."
Revised:  They had assisted us and, within a few hours, we had completed with rescue operations ." ."
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Original: Two passenger trains have collided in India early on Wednesday, killing at least 21 people and injuring more than twenty others  .
Revised: Two passenger trains collided in India early on Wednesday, killing at least 21 people and injuring more than twenty others .
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Original:  There are about 300 Indian rail accidents every year, prompting calls for improving safety standards on the rail network.
Revised:  There are about 300 rail accidents in the country every year, prompting calls for improving safety standards on the rail network.
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Original:  Earlier this month,  a train derailed , killing one person .
Revised:  Earlier this month, a train derailed .
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Original:  In February, a train accident in eastern India claimed 16 lives
Revised:  In February, another train accident in eastern India claimed 16 lives
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Original:  In February, a train accident in eastern India claimed 16 lives
Revised:  In February, a train accident in eastern India claimed sixteen lives
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Original:  A northern railway spokesman, R. D. Vajpayee, told the Voice of America news agency that the rear coach of the stationary train bore the brunt of the collision's impact.
Revised: "There was a loud bang and we were suddenly thrown out of our seats. There was panic everywhere," another passenger recounted. A northern railway spokesman, R. D. Vajpayee, told the Voice of America news agency that the rear coach of the stationary train bore the brunt of the collision's impact.
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Original: Prepared for runoff vote The UN mission in Kabul says that the removal and replacement of the officials had already started before yesterday's annoucement of the runoff vote.
Revised: Readiness for runoff vote The UN mission in Kabul says that the removal and replacement of the officials had already started before yesterday's annoucement of the runoff vote.
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Original: US Senator John Kerry is described as having played a key role during several days of meetings with President Karzai since last week .
Revised: US Senator John Kerry is reported to have played a key role during several days of meetings with President Karzai since last week .
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Original: US Senator John Kerry is described as having played a key role during several days of meetings with President Karzai since last week .
Revised: US Senator John Kerry is described as having played a key role .
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Original:  He said he told President Karzai "sometimes there are tough things."
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Original:  During a visit to Japan, he said that there is a "need to be realistic" that tackling issues of corruption and governance in Afghanistan are an ongoing "evolutionary effort.  
Revised:  During a visit to Japan, he said that there is a "need to be realistic" that tackling issues of corruption and governance in Afghanistan are an ongoing "evolutionary effort. " 
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Original:  During a visit to Japan, he said that there is a "need to be realistic" that tackling issues of corruption and governance in Afghanistan are an ongoing "evolutionary effort ."
Revised:  During a visit to Japan, he said that there is a "need to be realistic" that tackling issues of corruption and governance in Afghanistan are an ongoing "evolutionary process ."
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Original: IAEA chief Mohamed ElBaradei said on Tuesday that progress was being made and that technical issues still needed to be analysed.
Revised: International Atomic Energy Agency chief Mohamed ElBaradei said on Tuesday that progress was being made and that technical issues still needed to be analysed.
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Original: Talks between Iran and three world powers continued on Wednesday in Vienna, Austria, as they try to work out a deal that will ease tensions over Iran's controversial nuclear program.
Revised: Talks between Iran and three other countries continued on Wednesday in Vienna, Austria, as they try to work out a deal that will ease tensions over Iran's controversial nuclear program.
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Original:  Diplomats from Iran, Russia, France, and the United States began the third day of talks at the headquarters of the International Atomic Energy Agency in Vienna .
Revised:  Diplomats from Iran, Russia, France, and the United States began the third day of talks at the headquarters of the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) .
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Original:  International Atomic Energy Agency chief Mohamed ElBaradei said on Tuesday that progress was being made and that technical issues still needed to be analysed.
Revised:  IAEA chief Mohamed ElBaradei said on Tuesday that progress was being made and that technical issues still needed to be analysed.
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Original:  Iran is particularly opposed to France's proposed role in the deal.
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Original: A diplomat familiar with the Vienna talks said the parties now are considering a compromise deal that would allow Russia to sub-contract enrichment work to France, thereby meeting Tehran's demand to avoid direct dealings with Paris .
Revised: A diplomat familiar with the Vienna talks said the parties now are considering a compromise deal that would allow Russia to sub-contract enrichment work to France, thereby meeting Iran's request to avoid direct dealings with Paris .
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Original: A diplomat familiar with the Vienna talks said the parties now are considering a compromise deal that would allow Russia to sub-contract enrichment work to France, thereby meeting Tehran's demand to avoid direct dealings with Paris .
Revised: A diplomat familiar with the Vienna talks said the parties now are considering a compromise deal that would allow Russia to sub-contract enrichment work to France, thereby meeting Tehran's demand to avoid direct dealings with the country .
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Original:  The enrichment deal would be aimed at easing Western concerns that Iranian uranium enrichment activities are aimed at developing nuclear weapons.
Revised:  The enrichment deal would be intended to ease concerns that Iranian uranium enrichment activities are aimed at developing nuclear weapons.
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Original: (Paris) An immigrant in a makeshift camp in Calais that was dismantled by French governemnt (File) The French government confirmed Wednesday that it has expelled illegal Afghan immigrants in its first joint deportation flight with Britain.
Revised:  An immigrant in a makeshift camp in Calais that was dismantled by French governemnt (File) The French government confirmed Wednesday that it has expelled illegal Afghan immigrants in its first joint deportation flight with Britain.
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Original: (Paris) An immigrant in a makeshift camp in Calais that was dismantled by French governemnt (File) The French government confirmed Wednesday that it has expelled illegal Afghan immigrants in its first joint deportation flight with Britain.
Revised: (Paris) The French government confirmed Wednesday that it has expelled illegal Afghan immigrants in its first joint deportation flight with Britain.
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Original:  Oposition politicians and human rights groups have harshly criticized the move, which comes amid ongoing violence in Afghanistan   
Revised:  Oposition politicians and human rights groups . 
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Original:  [ [  The French government, however, has argued that it is only trying to crack down on human smuggling rings and that illegal immigrants are given every legal recourse to remain in France.
Revised:  [ [have The French government, however, has argued that it is only trying to crack down on human smuggling rings and that illegal immigrants are given every legal recourse to remain in France.
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Original: (Washington) U.S. officials say a 27-year-old man in the northeastern state of Massachusetts has been charged with plotting acts of terrorism, including plans to kill people at a U.S. shopping mall and to kill U.S. government employees.
Revised:  U.S. officials say a 27-year-old man in the northeastern state of Massachusetts has been charged with plotting acts of terrorism, including plans to kill people at a U.S. shopping mall and to kill U.S. government employees.
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Original: (Washington) U.S. officials say a 27-year-old man in the northeastern state of Massachusetts has been charged with plotting acts of terrorism, including plans to kill people at a U.S. shopping mall and to kill U.S. government employees.
Revised: (Washington) United States officials have said that a 27-year-old man in the northeastern state of Massachusetts has been charged with plotting acts of terrorism, including plans to kill people at a U.S. shopping mall and to kill U.S. government employees.
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Original: (Washington) U.S. officials say a 27-year-old man in the northeastern state of Massachusetts has been charged with plotting acts of terrorism, including plans to kill people at a U.S. shopping mall and to kill U.S. government employees.
Revised: (Washington) U.S. officials say a 27-year-old man in the northeastern state of Massachusetts has been charged with plotting acts of terrorism, including plans to kill people at a shopping mall and to kill U.S. government employees.
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Original: (Washington) U.S. officials say a 27-year-old man in the northeastern state of Massachusetts has been charged with plotting acts of terrorism, including plans to kill people at a U.S. shopping mall and to kill U.S. government employees.
Revised: (Washington) U.S. officials say a 27-year-old man in the northeastern state of Massachusetts has been charged with plotting acts of terrorism, including plans to kill people at a U.S. shopping mall and to kill US government employees.
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Original:  Acting U.S. Attorney Michael Loucks on Wednesday said Tarek Mehanna has been charged with conspiracy to provide material support to terrorists.
Revised:  Acting US Attorney Michael Loucks on Wednesday said Tarek Mehanna has been charged with conspiracy to provide material support to terrorists.
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