wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The Pentagon has confirmed that US forces began an on-going operation of airstrikes in southern Somalia on Monday, and that the attacks, targetted at Islamic militia, are continuing.
Revised: The Pentagon has confirmed that US forces began an on-going operation of airstrikes in southern Somalia on Monday, and that the attacks, targeted at Islamic militia, are continuing.
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Original: The full home video of Tigger punching has now surfaced on YouTube  News outlets  were only provided with a four second clip of the footage, which seems to have been edited to back up the Monaco family's claims.
Revised: The full home video of Tigger punching has now surfaced on YouTube News outlets , on the other hand, were only provided with a four second clip of the footage, which seems to have been edited to back up the Monaco family's claims.
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Original:   ]     Sr: Go for it.
Revised:  Jr.] Sr: Go for it.
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Original:   ]     Sr: Go for it.
Revised:  ] laughs, and then his arm goes down a bit", in order to undue a zipper. Sr: Go for it.
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Original: In the full footage, edited to include commentary, the blogger narrates   "it sounds like Jerry [Jr.] laughs, and then his arm goes down a bit", in order to undue a zipper  . Transcript of video Sr: Go for it.
Revised: In the full footage, edited to include commentary, the blogger narrates "it sounds like Jerry [Jr.] laughs, and then his arm goes down a bit", in order to undue a zipper . Sr: Go for it.
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Original:  Jerry! Representative Press is a blog that aims for media reform . Category:YouTube Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Crime and law Category:Florida Category:United States Category:North Ameri
Revised:  Jerry! Representative Press is a blog that aims for media reform Category:YouTube Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Crime and law Category:Florida Category:United States Category:North Ameri
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Original:  Jerry! Representative Press is a blog that aims for media reform . Category:YouTube Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Crime and law Category:Florida Category:United States Category:North Ameri
Revised:  Jerry! Representative Press is a blog that aims for media reform . 
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Original:  Orders for both devices are already being taken  
Revised:  Orders for both devices are already being taken . 
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Original:  It is approximatively the same size as an 5th generation iPod, it has a 3.5-inch LCD touchscreen display that is used to access all features of the phone including number dial.
Revised:  It is approximately the same size as an 5th generation iPod, it has a 3.5-inch LCD touchscreen display that is used to access all features of the phone including number dial.
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Original: The iPhone features touch-screen operation The rear view of the new iPhone Apple Computer Inc. today has introduced the much-anticipated iPhone at the Macworld Conference in San Francisco.
Revised: The iPhone features touch-screen operation The rear view of the new iPhone Apple Inc. today has introduced the much-anticipated iPhone at the Macworld Conference in San Francisco.
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Original:  Apple CEO Steve Jobs unveiled the device by walking onto the stage and taking the iPhone out of he's jeans pocket.
Revised:  Apple CEO Steve Jobs unveiled the device by walking onto the stage and taking the iPhone out of his jeans pocket.
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Original:  It is approximately the same size as an 5th generation iPod, it has a 3.5-inch LCD touchscreen display that is used to access all features of the phone including number dial.
Revised:  It is approximately the same size as a 5th generation iPod, it has a 3.5-inch LCD touchscreen display that is used to access all features of the phone including number dial.
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Original:  The device appears to be running a mobile version of the Apple operating system Mac OSX . It is approximately the same size as a 5th generation iPod, it has a 3.5-inch LCD touchscreen display that is used to access all features of the phone including number dial.
Revised:  The device appears to be running a mobile version of the Apple operating system Mac MOSX . It is approximately the same size as a 5th generation iPod, it has a 3.5-inch LCD touchscreen display that is used to access all features of the phone including number dial.
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Original:  The device appears to be running a mobile version of the Apple operating system Mac MOSX . It is approximately the same size as a 5th generation iPod, it has a 3.5-inch LCD touchscreen display that is used to access all features of the phone including number dial.
Revised:  The device appears to be running a mobile version of the Apple operating system Mac OSX . It is approximately the same size as a 5th generation iPod, it has a 3.5-inch LCD touchscreen display that is used to access all features of the phone including number dial.
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Original:  As well as making phone calls the iPhone plays music, movies, displays pictures and is able to connect to a wireless network.
Revised:  As well as making phone calls . The iPhone plays music, movies, displays pictures and is able to connect to a wireless network.
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Original:  This makes it substantially easier for users to organize their media content . During the Macworld Conference, Apple stocks jumped $7.10 to a record $92.57.
Revised:  This makes it substantially easier for users to organize their media content During the Macworld Conference, Apple stocks jumped $7.10 to a record $92.57.
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Original:  This makes it substantially easier for users to organize their media content  
Revised:  This makes it substantially easier for users to organize their media content . 
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Original: Air New Zealand, national airliner of New Zealand, played the movie The Queen in-flight where a bleep occurred when someone said "God".
Revised: Air New Zealand, national airline of New Zealand, played the movie The Queen in-flight where a bleep occurred when someone said "God".
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Original: January 10, 2007 The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of the new currency, Sudanese pound that replaces the current Sudanese dinar.
Revised:  The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of the new currency, Sudanese pound that replaces the current Sudanese dinar.
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Original:  According to Sabir Mohamed Al Hassan, governor of Central Bank of Sudan, the dinar will remain in circulation, along with the pound, for an interim period of six month before it will be discontinued on July 1, 2007.
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Original:  Several themes were avoided in the new design including human portraits, reference to wars and conflict, and religous and ethnic symbols.
Revised:  Several themes were avoided in the new design including human portraits, references to wars and conflict, and religous and ethnic symbols.
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Original:  The conversion rate is 1 Sudanese pound = 100 Sudanese dinars, and 1 piaster is equivalent to 1 dinar  
Revised:  The conversion rate is 1 Sudanese pound = 100 Sudanese dinars, and 1 piaster is equivalent to 1 dinar . 
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Original: The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of the new currency, Sudanese pound that replaces the current Sudanese dinar.
Revised: The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of the new currency, Sudanese pound that is set to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
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Original:  The   new currency design will reflect Sudan peace vision, unity in diversity, civilization, natural resources and economic progress.
Revised:  The The new currency design will reflect Sudan peace vision, unity in diversity, civilization, natural resources and economic progress.
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Original:  According to Sabir Mohamed Al Hassan, governor of Central Bank of Sudan, the dinar will remain in circulation, along with the pound, for an interim period of six month before it will be discontinued on July 1, 2007 
Revised:  According to Sabir Mohamed Al Hassan, governor of Central Bank of Sudan, the dinar will remain in circulation, along with the pound, for an interim period of six month before it will be discontinued on July 1, 2007. 
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Original: The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of the new currency,  Sudanese pound that is set to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
Revised: The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of its new currency, Sudanese pound that is set to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
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Original: The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of the new currency,  Sudanese pound that is set to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
Revised: The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of the new currency, the Sudanese pound that is set to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
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Original:  Hassan said that the expected international assitance in meeting the cost was not forthcoming and that Sudan's oil revenue was used instead, Reuters reports  
Revised:  Hassan said that the expected international assitance in meeting the cost was not forthcoming and that Sudan's oil revenue was used instead, Reuters reports . 
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Original: Specimen of the new Sudanese one Pound note The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of its new currency, the Sudanese pound that is set to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
Revised: Specimen of the new Sudanese one Pound note The Central Bank of Sudan has started circulation of the new Sudanese pound that is set to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
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Original: Specimen of the new Sudanese one Pound note The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of its new currency, the Sudanese pound that is set to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
Revised: Specimen of the new Sudanese one Pound note The Central Bank of Sudan has started the circulation of its new currency, the Sudanese pound that is to replace the current Sudanese dinar.
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Original:  The dinar was viewed in the south as past of an "Arabisation" of Sudan by the previous government and was not in circulation in areas controlled by the southern rebel movement.
Revised:  The dinar was viewed in the south as part of an "Arabisation" of Sudan by the previous government and was not in circulation in areas controlled by the southern rebel movement.
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Original:  According to Sabir Mohamed Al Hassan, governor of Central Bank of Sudan, the dinar will remain in circulation, along with the pound, for an interim period of six month before it will be discontinued on July 1, 2007.
Revised:  According to Sabir Mohamed Al Hassan, the governor of the Central Bank of Sudan, the dinar will remain in circulation, along with the pound, for an interim period of six month before it will be discontinued on July 1, 2007.
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Original:  According to Sabir Mohamed Al Hassan, governor of Central Bank of Sudan, the dinar will remain in circulation, along with the pound, for an interim period of six month before it will be discontinued on July 1, 2007.
Revised:  According to Sabir Mohamed Al Hassan, governor of Central Bank of Sudan, the dinar will remain in circulation, along with the pound, for an interim period of six month before it is discontinued on July 1, 2007.
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Original:  The conversion rate set by the Central bank is 1 Sudanese pound = 100 Sudanese dinars, and 1 piaster is equivalent to 1 dinar.
Revised:  The conversion rate set by the Central bank is 1 Sudanese pound equals 100 Sudanese dinars, and 1 piaster is equivalent to 1 dinar.
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Original:  The Dinar trades at an exchange rate of about 200 dinars for a U.S. dollar  .
Revised:  A U.S. dollar .
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Original: The dinar was viewed in the south as part of an  "Arabisation" of Sudan by the previous government and was not in circulation in areas controlled by the southern rebel movement.
Revised: The dinar was viewed in the south as part of an attempted "Arabisation" of Sudan by the previous government and was not in circulation in areas controlled by the southern rebel movement.
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Original:  Several themes were avoided in the new design including human portraits, references to wars and conflict, and religous and ethnic symbols.
Revised:  Several themes were avoided in the new design including human portraits, references to wars and conflict, and religious and ethnic symbols.
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Original:  Hassan said that the expected international assitance in meeting the cost was not forthcoming and that Sudan's oil revenue was used instead, Reuters reports.
Revised:  Hassan said that the expected international assistance in meeting the cost was not forthcoming and that Sudan's oil revenue was used instead, Reuters reports.
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Original:  Abulghassem noted that a few days earlier, in Rafsanjan, a similar incident was reported by witnesses  
Revised:  Abulghassem noted that a few days earlier, in Rafsanjan, a similar incident was reported by witnesses . 
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Original:  Abulghassem noted that a few days earlier, in Rafsanjan, a similar incident was reported by witnesses  
Revised:  Abulghassem noted that a few days earlier, in Rafsanjan, a similar incident was reported by witnesses Related new
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Original: According to the BBC, Fars News Agency is affiliated with the Iranian judiciary.
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Original: Another source also told the FNA that the object was on fire with thick smoke coming from it, which identified the object as not being a meteor.
Revised: Another source also told the FNA that the object was on fire with thick smoke coming from it, and claimed that this implied the object was not a meteor.
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Original:  However, meteors appear as bright fireballs in the sky due to the heat generated by friction, as they fall at high speeds through the Earth's atmosphere , often vaporising and burning up completely before reaching the ground  .
Revised:  However, meteors appear as bright fireballs in the sky due to the heat generated by friction, as they fall at high speeds through the Earth's atmosphere . Meteors often burning up completely before reaching the ground .
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Original:  Meteors often burning up completely before reaching the ground and some leave a smoke-like trail in their wake.
Revised:  Meteors often burn up completely before reaching the ground and some leave a smoke-like trail in their wake.
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Original:  However, meteors appear as bright fireballs in the sky due to the heat generated by friction , as they fall at high speeds through the Earth's atmosphere.
Revised:  However, meteors appear as bright fireballs in the sky , as they fall at high speeds through the Earth's atmosphere.
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Original:  Dalton says the teen grabbed the back of the costume, affectively cutting off air.
Revised:  Dalton says the teen grabbed the back of the costume, effectively cutting off air.
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Original:  Junior told an FOX News.
Revised:  Junior told FOX News.
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Original: On Wednesday, Captain Mark Strobridge from the office told Wikinews, "The Orange County Sheriff's Office is investigating the case and is not prepared to provide details at this time."
Revised: On Wednesday, Captain Mark Strobridge told Wikinews, "The Orange County Sheriff's Office is investigating the case and is not prepared to provide details at this time."
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Original:  Brian Reade commented "most Brits feel that, simply on the grounds he's called Junior, it's a shame the guy in the Tigger costume wasn't called Charles Manson.  
Revised:  Brian Reade commented "most Brits feel that, simply on the grounds he's called Junior, it's a shame the guy in the Tigger costume wasn't called Charles Manson. " 
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Original:  On Wednesday, Captain Mark Strobridge told Wikinews , "The Orange County Sheriff's Office is investigating the case and is not prepared to provide details at this time."
Revised:  Yesterday Captain Mark Strobridge told Wikinews , "The Orange County Sheriff's Office is investigating the case and is not prepared to provide details at this time."
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Original:  On Wednesday, Captain Mark Strobridge told Wikinews , "The Orange County Sheriff's Office is investigating the case and is not prepared to provide details at this time."
Revised:  On Wednesday, Captain Mark Strobridge confirmed with Wikinews that the investigation was on-going. "The Orange County Sheriff's Office is investigating the case and is not prepared to provide details at this time."
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Original:  It is unclear when the police investigation is expect to conclude.
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Original: Wikinews will continue to follow this story as it develops.
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Original:  The "grievance" against a Teamsters Union Local 385 person named "Michael Feledem ", "was resolved prior to Step 3." It is presumed, but not known, if this website mention relates to the employee who played Tigger at Walt Disney World, as he is mentioned on the "Character Team" page of the website.
Revised:  The "grievance" against a Teamsters Union Local 385 person named "Michael Fedelem ", "was resolved prior to Step 3." It is presumed, but not known, if this website mention relates to the employee who played Tigger at Walt Disney World, as he is mentioned on the "Character Team" page of the website.
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Original:    DePrisco's body could be returned to Canada today or toworrow
Revised:  DePrisco's body will be returned to Canada today or toworrow
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Original:    DePrisco's body could be returned to Canada today or toworrow
Revised:  DePrisco's body could be returned to Canada 
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Original:  Talk radio shows in Canada are even suggesting the Canadian federal government put a ban for Canadian's going to Mexico.
Revised:  Talk radio shows in Canada are even suggesting the Canadian federal government put a ban for Canadians going to Mexico.
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Original: "The pain in my heart is not just for my nephew  it's for any Canadian -- you go out to have a good time and this is what happens," Claudio Pannozzi, his uncle, told CTV News.
Revised: "The pain in my heart is not just for my nephew ; it's for any Canadian -- you go out to have a good time and this is what happens," Claudio Pannozzi, his uncle, told CTV News.
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Original:  Mexican officals came under fire shortly after the Ianiero case last February.
Revised:  Mexican officials came under fire shortly after the Ianiero case last February.
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Original:  Marco Calabro, a friend who came to Mexico with DePrisco, also believes that he was beaten to death.
Revised:  Marco Calabro, a friend who went to Mexico with DePrisco, also believes that he was beaten to death.
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Original:  After , Calabro found his long time buddy on the road bleeding from his head.
Revised:  Not long after , Calabro found his long time buddy on the road bleeding from his head.
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Original:  After , Calabro found his long time buddy on the road bleeding from his head.
Revised:  After , Calabro found his friend lying on the road bleeding from his head.
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Original:  He is the third Canadian  after Nancy and Domenic Ianiero, a couple also from Woodbridge  who were stabbed to death at a luxury resort hotel near Cancun, to be killed in the ever popular vacation destination.
Revised:  He is the third Canadian after Nancy and Domenic Ianiero, a couple also from Woodbridge , who were stabbed to death at a luxury resort hotel near Cancun, to be killed in the ever popular vacation destination.
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Original:  He is the third Canadian  after Nancy and Domenic Ianiero, a couple also from Woodbridge  who were stabbed to death at a luxury resort hotel near Cancun, to be killed in the ever popular vacation destination.
Revised:  He is the third Canadian after Nancy and Domenic Ianiero, a couple also from Woodbridge who were stabbed to death at a luxury resort hotel near Cancun, a popular vacation destination.
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Original:  Talk radio shows in Canada are even suggesting the Canadian federal government put a ban for Canadians going to Mexico.
Revised:  Talk radio shows in Canada are even suggesting the Canadian federal government ban Canadians from going to Mexico.
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Original: 19-year-old, Adam DePrisco, of Woodbridge, Ontario, was found dead in Acapulco, Mexico on Saturday.
Revised:  Adam DePrisco, of Woodbridge, Ontario, was found dead in Acapulco, Mexico on Saturday.
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Original:  The family of the young man are still looking for answers after Mexican authorities say that he was hit by a car after leaving a nightclub.
Revised:  The family of the young man are still looking for answers after Mexican authorities said that he was hit by a car after leaving a nightclub.
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Original:  Calabro and DePrisco was in a nightclub on Saturday, and DePrisco was dancing with a Mexican woman.
Revised:  Calabro and DePrisco were in a nightclub on Saturday, and DePrisco was dancing with a Mexican woman.
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Original:  Premature babies are required to get them, especialy the sextuplets born on Sunday, which weigh 700 to 800 grams.
Revised:  Premature babies are usually encouraged to get them, especialy the sextuplets born on Sunday, which weigh 700 to 800 grams.
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Original:  Premature babies are usually encouraged to get them, especialy the sextuplets born on Sunday, which weigh 700 to 800 grams.
Revised:  Premature babies are usually encouraged to get them, especially the sextuplets born on Sunday, which weigh 700 to 800 grams.
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Original: The parents are Jehovah's Witnesses, a faith which forbids blood transfusions.
Revised: The parents are Jehovah's Witnesses, a faith that has a doctrine against blood transfusions.
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Original:  People who are a part of the faith need an Advance Medical Directive card ordering that  no blood transfusions be given under any circumstances. 
Revised:  People who are a part of the faith create an Advance Medical Directive card ordering that no blood transfusions be given under any circumstances. 
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Original:  People who are a part of the faith need an Advance Medical Directive card ordering that  no blood transfusions be given under any circumstances. 
Revised:  People who are a part of the faith need an Advance Medical Directive card ordering that no blood transfusions be given under any circumstances. )
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Original:  Many people who are a part of the faith create an Advance Medical Directive card ordering that w:Jehovah's Witnesses and blood no blood transfusions be given under any circumstances.)
Revised:  Many people who are a part of the faith create an Advance Medical Directive card ordering that no blood transfusions be given under any circumstances.)
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Original: No information was been released since the babies were born after the parents publicly asked for privacy.
Revised: No information has been released since the babies were born after the parents publicly asked for privacy.
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Original:  (Officially, the church holds that blood transfusions consisting of blood products, rather than whole blood, may be accepted by Witnesses in some circumstances as a matter of individual concience ;
Revised:  (Officially, the church holds that blood transfusions consisting of blood products, rather than whole blood, may be accepted by Witnesses in some circumstances as a matter of individual conscience ;
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