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Original:  Chirac's wife was spotted leaving the Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, the same hospital Chirac is currently in , but she refused to speak with reporters.
Revised:  Chirac's wife was spotted leaving the Val-de-Grace military hospital in Southern Paris, where Chirac is being treated , but she refused to speak with reporters.
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Original: French President Jacques Chirac , who was admitted Friday to a military hospital, continues his stay Tuesday in what a government spokesperson described as favorable conditions.
Revised: French President Jacques Chirac continued his hospital stay Tuesday in what a government spokesperson described as favorable conditions.
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Original: French President Jacques Chirac , who was admitted Friday to a military hospital, continues his stay Tuesday in what a government spokesperson described as favorable conditions.
Revised: French President Jacques Chirac , who was admitted Friday to a military hospital, continues his stay Tuesday in what a government spokesperson describes as favorable conditions.
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Original:   Doctors report such a problem as he was having could range from a ruptured blood vessel to a stroke, since more than 80\% of strokes are caused by blockage in an artery carrying blood to the brain . Doctors also called the condition a "small vascular incident" that hindered his vision .
Revised:  Doctors report such a problem as he was having could range from a ruptured blood vessel to a stroke, since more than 80\% of strokes are caused by blockage in an artery carrying blood to the brain Doctors also called the condition a "small vascular incident" that hindered his vision .
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Original:   Doctors report such a problem as he was having could range from a ruptured blood vessel to a stroke, since more than 80\% of strokes are caused by blockage in an artery carrying blood to the brain . Doctors also called the condition a "small vascular incident" that hindered his vision .
Revised:  Doctors report such a problem as he was having could range from a ruptured blood vessel to a stroke, since more than 80\% of strokes are caused by blockage in an artery carrying blood to the brain . .
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Original:  Chirac was admitted  to a military hosiptal on Friday , where doctors called his condition a "small vascular incident" that hindered his vision.
Revised:  Chirac was admitted on Friday to a military hosiptal on Friday , where doctors called his condition a "small vascular incident" that hindered his vision.
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Original:  Chirac's doctor, Anne Robert,  said the president was resting and expects to leave the hospital in a few days.
Revised:  Anne Robert, said the president was resting and expects to leave the hospital in a few days.
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Original:  Chirac's wife was spotted leaving the Val-de-Grace hospital in Southern Paris, where Chirac is being treated, but she refused to speak with reporters.
Revised:  Chirac's wife was spotted leaving the Val-de-Grâce hospital where Chirac is being treated, but she refused to speak with reporters.
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Original:  The Prime Minister also reports "he can't wait to leave," to reporters afterward visiting the French president  
Revised:  The Prime Minister also reports "he can't wait to leave," to reporters afterward visiting the French president . 
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Original: 180px|Jacques Chirac (file Photo) French President Jacques Chirac continued his hospital stay Tuesday in what a government spokesperson describes as favorable conditions.
Revised:  French President Jacques Chirac continued his hospital stay Tuesday in what a government spokesperson describes as favorable conditions.
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Original:  During this four-day tour, the Pope presided over Mass in Westminster, London and performed the Beatification of Cardinal John Henry Newman in Birmingham .
Revised:  During the four-day tour, the Pope presided over Mass in Westminster, London and performed the Beatification of Cardinal John Henry Newman in Birmingham .
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Original:  During this four-day tour, the Pope presided over Mass in Westminster, London and performed the Beatification of Cardinal John Henry Newman in Birmingham .
Revised:  During this four-day tour, the Pope presided over Mass in Westminster, London , performed the Beatification of Cardinal John Henry Newman in Birmingham .
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Original:  Benedict XVI also spoke with UK Prime Minister David Cameron and described his "deep sorrow" at the "unspeakable crimes" that had caused "shame and humiliation" to be brought on him and the Catholic Church .
Revised:  Benedict XVI also spoke with UK Prime Minister David Cameron and described his "deep sorrow" at the "unspeakable crimes" that had caused "shame and humiliation" onto him and his church .
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Original:  As the Pope departed from Birmingham International Airport  Sunday night, he pledged better diplomatic relations between Vatican City and the UK.
Revised:  As the Pope departed from Birmingham International Airport on Sunday night, he pledged better diplomatic relations between Vatican City and the UK.
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Original:  NASA scientist Tony Phillips said "Jupiter is so bright right now, you don't need a sky map to find it." Jupiter will not appear this bright again until 2022.
Revised:  NASA scientist Tony Phillips said "Jupiter is so bright right now, you don't need a sky map to find it." It will not appear this bright again until 2022.
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Original:  Although this will occur on Monday and Tuesday, Jupiter will remain large and bright for approximately another month.
Revised:  Although this will occur on Monday and Tuesday, it will remain large and bright for approximately another month.
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Original:  This will cause Jupiter 's appearance to peak at a brightness and size not seen since then.
Revised:  This will cause the planet 's appearance to peak at a brightness and size not seen since then.
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Original:  During this event, Jupiter will be located in the sky not far from the moon.
Revised:  During this event, the planet will be located in the sky not far from the moon.
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Original:  The planet Uranus will also make its closest approach, but will be more difficult to spot, as it is much farther away.
Revised:  The planet Uranus will also make a close approach, but will be more difficult to spot, as it is much farther away.
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Original:  “ Although the well is now dead, we remain committed to continue aggressive efforts to clean up any additional oil we may see going forward, ” he said, adding that the response, lead  his team and BP "has been driven by the best science and engineering available.
Revised:  " Although the well is now dead, we remain committed to continue aggressive efforts to clean up any additional oil we may see going forward, ” he said, adding that the response, lead his team and BP "has been driven by the best science and engineering available.
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Original:  “ Although the well is now dead, we remain committed to continue aggressive efforts to clean up any additional oil we may see going forward, ” he said, adding that the response, lead  his team and BP "has been driven by the best science and engineering available.
Revised:  “ Although the well is now dead, we remain committed to continue aggressive efforts to clean up any additional oil we may see going forward, " he said, adding that the response, lead his team and BP "has been driven by the best science and engineering available.
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Original:  “ Although the well is now dead, we remain committed to continue aggressive efforts to clean up any additional oil we may see going forward, ” he said, adding that the response, lead  his team and BP "has been driven by the best science and engineering available.
Revised:  “ Although the well is now dead, we remain committed to continue aggressive efforts to clean up any additional oil we may see going forward, ” he said, adding that the response, lead by his team and BP "has been driven by the best science and engineering available.
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Original:  The blowout preventer failed , oil began to leak into the Gulf, soon developing into the largest accidental marine oil spill in the history of the petroleum industry.
Revised:  The blowout preventer failed . Oil began to leak into the Gulf, soon developing into the largest accidental marine oil spill in the history of the petroleum industry.
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Original:  A statement released by the U.S. goverment confirmed the news.
Revised:  He also released a U.S. goverment confirmed the news.
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Original:  A statement released by the U.S. goverment confirmed the news.
Revised:  A statement released by the U.S. goverment department's confirmation of the news.
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Original:  "The Bureau of Ocean Energy Management , Regulation, and Enforcement has confirmed that the cementing operation on the Macondo well was successful, that the well has been permanently sealed with cement plugs, and that pressure tests verify the integrity of the plugs," it read.
Revised:  "The Bureau of Ocean Energy Management has confirmed that the cementing operation on the Macondo well was successful, that the well has been permanently sealed with cement plugs, and that pressure tests verify the integrity of the plugs," it read.
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Original:  BP released a statement, describing the sealing of the well as "a significant technological accomplishment " and a " another important milestone in our continued efforts to restore the Gulf Coast."
Revised:  BP released a statement, describing the sealing of the well as "a significant technological accomplishment and another important milestone in our continued efforts to restore the Gulf Coast."
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Original:  The tests concluded that the cement finally put an end to an enviromental disaster that has shaken BP, the wildlife on the coast of the Gulf of Mexico , the hundreds of people who make their living by fishing in the area , and America's attitude to oil.
Revised:  The tests concluded that the cement finally put an end to an enviromental disaster that has affected BP, the wildlife on the coast of the Gulf of Mexico , the hundreds of people who make their living by fishing in the area , and America's attitude to oil.
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Original:  The tests concluded that the cement finally put an end to an enviromental disaster that has shaken BP, the wildlife on the coast of the Gulf of Mexico , the hundreds of people who make their living by fishing in the area , and America's attitude to oil.
Revised:  The tests concluded that the cement finally put an end to an enviromental disaster that has shaken BP, the wildlife on the coast of the Gulf of Mexico and the hundreds of people who make their living by fishing in the area , and America's attitude to oil.
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Original:  We also believe that the industry will gain important insights on how to be better prepared to respond to any future incidents.  
Revised:  We also believe that the industry will gain important insights on how to be better prepared to respond to any future incidents. UR
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Original:  Collingwood failed to kick a goal in the whole third quarter, however held a lead of 8 points at Three Quarter Time    
Revised:  Collingwood failed to kick a goal in the whole third quarter, however held a lead of 8 points at Three Quarter Time . 
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Original: Collingwood and St. Kilda are playing in the 2010 Australian Football League (AFL) Grand Final played at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
Revised: Collingwood and St. Kilda have drawn the 2010 Australian Football League (AFL) Grand Final played at the Melbourne Cricket Ground.
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Original:  Soon after Jarryd Blair kicked a goal, restoring Collingwood's lead.
Revised:  Soon after Jarryd Blair kicked a goal, furthering Collingwood's lead.
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Original: St Kilda finished third on the ladder with 15 wins, six losses and a draw Collingwood finished on top on the ladder with 17 wins, four losses and a draw and have drawn the 2010 (AFL) Grand Final - the third such occurance in league history - played at the .
Revised:  and have drawn the 2010 (AFL) Grand Final - the third such occurance in league history - played at the .
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Original:  An armed woman shot four people in a hospital at Lörrach, Germany, sources say . Policemen say the shootings are related to an explosion that occurred in a nearby building, that killed a middle-aged man and a four-years-old child.
Revised:  An armed woman shot four people in a hospital at Lörrach, Germany, according to sources . Policemen say the shootings are related to an explosion that occurred in a nearby building, that killed a middle-aged man and a four-years-old child.
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Original:  An armed woman shot four people in a hospital at Lörrach, Germany, sources say . Policemen say the shootings are related to an explosion that occurred in a nearby building, that killed a middle-aged man and a four-years-old child.
Revised:  An armed woman shot four people in a hospital at Lörrach, Germany, sources say . Policemen say the shootings are related to an explosion that occurred in a nearby building, that killed a middle-aged man and a four-year-old child.
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Original:  The woman also injured a policeman, before being shot dead by the police
Revised:  The woman also injured a policeman, before the police shot her dead
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Original: St. Elisabethen Krankenhaus (Saint Elizabeth Hospital), in July 2010.
Revised: The hospital, pictured today after the shooting
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Original:  La Nación reports "nine deaths occurred in main road routes or highways, and 21 occurred in rural roads.
Revised:  La Nación reports nice deaths on main roads and 21 occurred in rural roads.
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Original:  " Carabineros de Chile (Carabiniers of Chile ) have issued 255 infringements by driving under the effects of alcohol, and 1555 by speeding
Revised:  " The national police of Chile issued 255 infringements by driving under the effects of alcohol, and 1555 by speeding
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Original:  " Carabineros de Chile (Carabiniers of Chile ) have issued 255 infringements by driving under the effects of alcohol, and 1555 by speeding
Revised:  " Carabineros de Chile (Carabiniers of Chile ) have issued 255 infringements for driving under the effects of alcohol, and 1555 by speeding
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Original:  " Carabineros de Chile (Carabiniers of Chile ) have issued 255 infringements by driving under the effects of alcohol, and 1555 by speeding
Revised:  " Carabineros de Chile (Carabiniers of Chile ) have issued 255 infringements by driving under the influence of alcohol, and 1555 by speeding
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Original:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or vacation places is expected to have its "peak hours" at around 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
Revised:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at around 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
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Original:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at around 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
Revised:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
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Original: The national police , Carabineros, issued 255 infringements for driving under the influence of alcohol, and 1,555 for speeding.
Revised: The national police issued 255 infringements for driving under the influence of alcohol, and 1,555 for speeding.
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Original:  " The travel has to be planned well .
Revised:  " Travel has to be planned well .
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Original:  " The travel has to be planned well .
Revised:  " The travel has to be well planned .
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Original:  They must not drive for more than two continuous hours," said a Police officer to Radio Cooperativa.
Revised:  They must not drive for more than two hours," said a Police officer to Radio Cooperativa.
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Original:  They must not drive for more than two continuous hours," said a Police officer to Radio Cooperativa.
Revised:  They must not drive for more than two continuous hours," an officer told Radio Cooperativa.
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Original:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
Revised:  A massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
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Original:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
Revised:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to be at "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
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Original:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
Revised:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" after 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
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Original:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
Revised:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 (22:00 UTC) forward
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Original:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) forward
Revised:  The massive departure of tourists from beaches or other vacation spots is expected to have its "peak hours" at 18:00 hours (22:00 UTC) 
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Original:  "It is completely out of character and I certainly did not intend to cause any distress to Lola or her owners.  
Revised:  "It is completely out of character and I certainly did not intend to cause any distress to Lola or her owners. " 
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Original:  "It is completely out of character and I certainly did not intend to cause any distress to Lola or her owners.  
Revised:  "It is completely out of character and I certainly did not intend to cause any distress to Lola or her owners. In a video available on Sky News Online, Stephanie Andrews-Mann spoke about this incident and explained that "we thought it was probably someone coming from a night in the pub that thought it'd be hilarious to put a cat in the bin. We didn't expect to find what it was we found." When asked what she thought about the woman who committed this act, Stephanie commented: "I don't know. I don't know what could possibly go through her head to want to put a cat in a bin." Stephanie's husband Darryl explained: "It was basically after we'd found Lola in the bin that we played back the video footage and seen, obviously, what had gone on, what had happened." Describing this act, he expressed: "I think it's disgusting. I don't know how anyone could treat, um, a harmless animal that can't defend itself, just do something like that to it.
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Original:  45-year-old Mary Bale, from Coventry, West Midlands, England, United Kingdom, was recorded on a security camera alledgedly giving the tabby cat - Lola, aged four - a stroking and looking at her surroundings before taking the animal and releasing it into the wheelie bin before walking away from the scene.
Revised:  45-year-old Mary Bale, from Coventry, West Midlands, England, United Kingdom, was recorded on a security camera alledgedly giving the tabby cat - Lola, aged four - a stroking and looking at her surroundings before taking the animal and dumping it into the wheelie bin before walking away from the scene.
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Original:  The cat was believed to have been discovered in the bin fifteen hours later by 24-year-old Stephanie Andrews-Mann and her husband, 26-year-old Darryl - the owners of Lola, who appeared to be unharmed.
Revised:  The cat was discovered in the bin fifteen hours later by 24-year-old Stephanie Andrews-Mann and her husband, 26-year-old Darryl - the owners of Lola, who appeared to be unharmed.
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Original: ]] A woman who was recorded throwing a cat into an outdoor rubbish bin has been charged for two counts of animal cruelty.
Revised: ]] A woman who was recorded throwing a cat into an outdoor rubbish bin has been charged with two counts of animal cruelty.
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Original:  45-year-old Mary Bale, from Coventry, West Midlands, England, United Kingdom, was recorded on a security camera alledgedly giving the tabby cat - Lola, aged four - a stroking and looking at her surroundings before taking the animal and dumping it into the wheelie bin before walking away from the scene.
Revised:  45-year-old Mary Bale, from Coventry, West Midlands, England, United Kingdom, was recorded on a security camera allegedly giving the tabby cat - Lola, aged four - a stroking and looking at her surroundings before taking the animal and dumping it into the wheelie bin before walking away from the scene.
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Original:  The cat was discovered in the bin fifteen hours later by  24-year-old Stephanie Andrews-Mann and her husband, 26-year-old Darryl - the owners of Lola, who appeared to be unharmed.
Revised:  The cat was discovered in the bin fifteen hours later by her owners, 24-year-old Stephanie Andrews-Mann and her husband, 26-year-old Darryl - the owners of Lola, who appeared to be unharmed.
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Original:  The cat was discovered in the bin fifteen hours later by  24-year-old Stephanie Andrews-Mann and her husband, 26-year-old Darryl - the owners of Lola, who appeared to be unharmed.
Revised:  The cat was discovered in the bin fifteen hours later by 24-year-old Stephanie Andrews-Mann and her husband, 26-year-old Darryl . She appeared to be unharmed.
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Original:  The Royal Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals - otherwise known by the abbrieviation RSPCA - have now charged Mary Bale for the offences of providing an animal with an unsuitable environment and causing suffering to a cat that was not necessary.
Revised:  The Royal Society for the Prevention of Cruelty to Animals - otherwise known by the abbreviation RSPCA - have now charged Mary Bale for the offences of providing an animal with an unsuitable environment and causing suffering to a cat that was not necessary.
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Original:  Having received a court summons from the RSPCA on Sunday, Bale is anticipated to make an appearance in Coventry Magistrates Court on October 19, 2010 at 1000 BST (0900 UTC) on the two offences, that appear in the Animal Welfare Act 2006.
Revised:  Having received a court summons from the RSPCA on Sunday, Bale is anticipated to make an appearance at Coventry Magistrates Court on October 19, 2010 at 1000 BST (0900 UTC) on the two offences, that appear in the Animal Welfare Act 2006.
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Original:  Having received a court summons from the RSPCA on Sunday, Bale is anticipated to make an appearance in Coventry Magistrates Court on October 19, 2010 at 1000 BST (0900 UTC) on the two offences, that appear in the Animal Welfare Act 2006.
Revised:  Having received a court summons from the RSPCA on Sunday, Bale is anticipated to make an appearance in Coventry Magistrates Court on October 19, 2010 at 1000 BST (0900 UTC) .
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