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Original: An American who was among four Christian activists kidnapped last year in Iraq has been killed, a State Departmentspokesman said Friday .
Revised: An American who was among four Christian activists kidnapped in Iraq last year, has been found dead, according to the U.S. State Department .
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Original:  The FBI verified that a body found in Iraq Friday morning was that of Tom Fox, 54, of Clear Brook, Va. , spokesman Noel Clay said.
Revised:  The FBI verified that a body found Friday morning was that of Tom Fox, 54, of Clear Brook, Va. , spokesman Noel Clay said.
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Original:  The FBI verified that a body found in Iraq Friday morning was that of Tom Fox, 54, of Clear Brook, Va. , spokesman Noel Clay said.
Revised:  The FBI verified that a body found in Iraq Friday morning was Fox, 54, of Clear Brook, Va. , spokesman Noel Clay said.
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Original:  The FBI verified that a body found in Iraq Friday morning was that of Tom Fox, 54, of Clear Brook, Va. , spokesman Noel Clay said.
Revised:  The FBI verified that a body found in Iraq Friday morning was that of Tom Fox, 54, of Clear Brook, Virginia.
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Original:  He said he had no information on the other three hostages.
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Original:  Claysaid additional forensics will be done in the United States .
Revised:  According to Clay, further tests will be done in the United States .
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Original:  The U.S. Embassy in Baghdad is investigating, he said.
Revised:  The U.S. Embassy in Baghdad is 
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Original:  Fox's family has been notified, Clay said, and " our heartfelt condolences go out to them." "The State Department continues to call for the unconditional release of all other hostages  " in Iraq, the spokesman said.
Revised:  Fox's family has been notified, Clay said, and " "The State Department continues to call for the unconditional release of all other hostages " in Iraq, the spokesman said.
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Original:  Fox's family has been notified, Clay said, and " our heartfelt condolences go out to them." "The State Department continues to call for the unconditional release of all other hostages  " in Iraq, the spokesman said.
Revised:  Fox's family has been notified, Clay said, and " our heartfelt condolences go out to them." the State Department continues to call for the unconditional release of all other hostages " in Iraq, the spokesman said.
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Original:  Fox's family has been notified, Clay said, and " our heartfelt condolences go out to them." "The State Department continues to call for the unconditional release of all other hostages  " in Iraq, the spokesman said.
Revised:  Fox's family has been notified, Clay said, and " our heartfelt condolences go out to them." "The State Department continues to call for the unconditional release of all other hostages . " in Iraq, the spokesman said.
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Original:  Fox's family has been notified, Clay said, and " our heartfelt condolences go out to them." "The State Department continues to call for the unconditional release of all other hostages  " in Iraq, the spokesman said.
Revised:  Fox's family has been notified, Clay said, and " our heartfelt condolences go out to them." "The State Department continues to call for the unconditional release of all other hostages " 
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Original:  Fox was the one American among four Christian Peacemaker activists kidnapped last year in Iraq.
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Original:  On Tuesday, Al-Jazeera television aired footage of the three other activists purportedly appealing to their governments to secure their release.
Revised:  Al-Jazeera television aired footage of the three other activists purportedly appealing to their governments to secure their release.
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Original:  On Tuesday, Al-Jazeera television aired footage of the three other activists purportedly appealing to their governments to secure their release.
Revised:  On Tuesday, Al-Jazeera aired footage of the three other activists purportedly appealing to their governments to secure their release.
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Original:  On Tuesday, Al-Jazeera television aired footage of the three other activists purportedly appealing to their governments to secure their release.
Revised:  On Tuesday, Al-Jazeera television aired footage of the 
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Original:  and Briton Norman Kember, 74.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Allan Slater, a Canadian member of Christian Peacemaker Teams, said at the time that he was disturbed not to see Fox.
Revised:  and Briton Norman Kember, 74.%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  "We certainly are hopeful when we see three of our friends alive, but also it's very distressing that we didn't see Tom Fox, and I wouldn't want to hide that because I'm sure it's very distressful for Tom's family and friends as well," Slater told The Canadian Press from Baghdad.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The previously unknown Swords of Righteousness Brigades claimed responsibility for kidnapping the four workers, who disappeared Nov. 26.
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Original:  Iraqi and Western security officials repeatedly warned the activists before their abduction that they were taking a grave risk by moving around Baghdad without bodyguards.
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Original: According to   Clay, further tests will be done in the United States;
Revised: According to According to Clay, further tests will be done in the United States;
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Original: 150px|right  2006 Commonwealth Games , Melbourne, Australia.
Revised: 150px|right 2006 Commonwealth Games 
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Original:  With 12,000 tickets still unsold for next week's Commonwealth Games, organisers have had to apologise after some of the 150,000 invitations that were mailed out this week to buy opening ceremony tickets were sent to the families of least 40 dead people.
Revised:  With 12,000 tickets yet unsold after mailing out some 150,000 invitations that were mailed out this week to buy opening ceremony tickets were sent to the families of least 40 dead people.
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Original:  With 12,000 tickets still unsold for next week's Commonwealth Games, organisers have had to apologise after some of the 150,000 invitations that were mailed out this week to buy opening ceremony tickets were sent to the families of least 40 dead people.
Revised:  With 12,000 tickets still unsold for next week's Commonwealth Games, organisers have had to apologise after some of the 150,000 invitations to buy tickets to the Games' opening ceremony, at least 40 of which were sent to the families of least 40 dead people.
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Original:  With 12,000 tickets still unsold for next week's Commonwealth Games, organisers have had to apologise after some of the 150,000 invitations that were mailed out this week to buy opening ceremony tickets were sent to the families of least 40 dead people.
Revised:  With 12,000 tickets still unsold for next week's Commonwealth Games, organisers have had to apologise after some of the 150,000 invitations that were mailed out this week to buy opening ceremony tickets were sent to the families of 40 dead people.
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Original:  " " Overall the rate of sales for tickets are fantastic ... it's an enormous number – bigger than any other Commonwealth Games ever sold."
Revised:  " Overall the rate of sales for tickets are fantastic ... it's an enormous number – bigger than any other Commonwealth Games ever sold."
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Original:  " " Overall the rate of sales for tickets are fantastic ... it's an enormous number – bigger than any other Commonwealth Games ever sold."
Revised:  " .. Overall the rate of sales for tickets are fantastic ... it's an enormous number – bigger than any other Commonwealth Games ever sold."
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Original:  The XVIII Commonwealth Games be run from March 15th -26th .
Revised:  The XVIII Commonwealth Games be held from March 15th -26th .
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Original:  The XVIII Commonwealth Games be run from March 15th -26th .
Revised:  The XVIII Commonwealth Games be run from March 15th through the 26th .
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Original:  The Opening Ceremony will be held Wednesday night when the Queen officially opens it
Revised:  The Opening Ceremony will be held Wednesday night when Queen Elizabeth II officially opens it
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Original: With three days until the beginning of the 2006 Commonwealth Games in Melborne, Australia, organisers still have some 12,000 tickets yet unsold after mailing out some 150,000 invitations to buy tickets to the Games' opening ceremony, at least 40 of which were sent to the families of 40 deceased people.
Revised: With three days until the start of the 2006 Commonwealth Games in Melborne, Australia, organisers still have some 12,000 tickets yet unsold after mailing out some 150,000 invitations to buy tickets to the Games' opening ceremony, at least 40 of which were sent to the families of 40 deceased people.
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Original:  The Opening Ceremony will be held Wednesday night when  Queen Elizabeth II officially opens it
Revised:  The Opening Ceremony will be held Wednesday night when the will be officiall opened by Queen Elizabeth II officially opens it
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Original:  The Opening Ceremony will be held Wednesday night when  Queen Elizabeth II officially opens it
Revised:  The Opening Ceremony will be held Wednesday night when Queen Elizabeth II 
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Original:  The Opening Ceremony will be held Wednesday night when the will be officiall opened by Queen Elizabeth II
Revised:  The Opening Ceremony will be held Wednesday night . It will be opened officially by Queen Elizabeth II
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Original: Melbourne 2006 chief executive John Harnden says  “Opening ceremony sales are going well…
Revised: Melbourne 2006 chief executive John Harnden says : “Opening ceremony sales are going well…
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Original: We've sold about 4000 tickets over the last seven days  [and] those rates of sales are continuing...
Revised: We've sold about 4000 tickets over the last seven days , [and] those rates of sales are continuing...
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Original:  Overall  the rate of sales for tickets are fantastic ... it's an enormous number – bigger than any other Commonwealth Games ever sold."
Revised:  Overall , the rate of sales for tickets are fantastic ... it's an enormous number – bigger than any other Commonwealth Games ever sold."
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Original:  The XVIII Commonwealth Games  be held from March 15th through the 26th.
Revised:  The XVIII Commonwealth Games will be held from March 15th through the 26th.
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Original: The decision was likely changed due to public backlash against Komen.
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Original:  now it says it will only cut support if an organization is "criminal and conclusive".
Revised:  now it says it will only cut support if the investigation involved is "criminal and conclusive".
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Original:  The United States Department of Agriculture is currently investigating a possible case of Mad Cow Disease , which was first reported by the Associated Press.
Revised:  The United States Department of Agriculture is currently investigating a possible case of mad cow disease , which was first reported by the Associated Press.
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Original:  however, those test results for Bovine spongiform encephalopathy (BSE) will not be available for at least 4-7 days.
Revised:  however, those test results for bovine spongiform encephalopathy (BSE) will not be available for at least 4-7 days.
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Original:  At least 150 human deaths worldwide have been linked to the consumption of cattle contaminated with the disease , most in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  At least 150 human deaths worldwide have been linked to the consumption of affected cattle , most in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  The most recent occured in June when, for the first time, a calf born in the U.S. tested positive for the disease.
Revised:  The most recent occurred in June when, for the first time, a calf born in the U.S. tested positive for the disease.
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Original:  On March 3, the EU confirmed Sweden's first case of Mad Cow disease.
Revised:  On March 3, the EU confirmed Sweden's first case of mad cow disease.
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Original:  Canada reported its fourth case of Mad Cow disease in January.
Revised:  Canada reported its fourth case of mad cow disease in January.
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Original:  The  United States Department of Agriculture is currently investigating a possible case of mad cow disease , which was first reported by the Associated Press . USDA official John Clifford said that a routine test indicated the possible presence of the disease.
Revised:  The Associated Press has reported that the United States Department of Agriculture is currently investigating a possible case of mad cow disease , which was first reported by the Associated Press . USDA official John Clifford said that a routine test indicated the possible presence of the disease.
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Original:  The  United States Department of Agriculture is currently investigating a possible case of mad cow disease , which was first reported by the Associated Press . USDA official John Clifford said that a routine test indicated the possible presence of the disease.
Revised:  The United States Department of Agriculture is currently investigating a possible case of mad cow disease . USDA official John Clifford said that a routine test indicated the possible presence of the disease.
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Original:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain close 
Revised:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed. 
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Original:  The storms follow earlier unseasonal snow storms on March 2. Snow is very unusual in March in the United Kingdom.
Revised:  The storms follow earlier unseasonal snow storms on March 2. Snow is relatively unusual in March in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed . Category:Weather Category:United Kingdom Category:Wales Category:England Category:Scotla
Revised:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed Category:Weather Category:United Kingdom Category:Wales Category:England Category:Scotla
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Original:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed . Category:Weather Category:United Kingdom Category:Wales Category:England Category:Scotla
Revised:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed . 
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Original:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed  
Revised:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed . 
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Original:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed  
Revised:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed minimal)
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Original:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed . minimal)
Revised:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed minimal)
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Original:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed . minimal)
Revised:  As snow fell on a Sunday, schools have not been disrupted as they would be closed anyway, but many businesses have been forced to remain closed . 
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Original:  He has taken them both hostage, but no contact has been achieved and his eventual demands are not known.
Revised:  He took them both hostage, but no contact has been achieved and his eventual demands are not known.
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Original:  He has taken them both hostage, but no contact has been achieved and his eventual demands are not known.
Revised:  He has taken them both hostage, and no contact was achieved and his eventual demands are not known.
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Original:  The smell of fuel has been reported from the hospital, and a part of the hospital has been evacuated as police and fire department enters the building
Revised:  The smell of fuel was reported from the hospital, and a part of the hospital has been evacuated as police and fire department enters the building
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Original:  The smell of fuel has been reported from the hospital, and a part of the hospital has been evacuated as police and fire department enters the building
Revised:  The smell of fuel has been reported from the hospital, and a part of the hospital was evacuated as police and fire department enters the building
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Original:  The smell of fuel has been reported from the hospital, and a part of the hospital has been evacuated as police and fire department enters the building
Revised:  The smell of fuel has been reported from the hospital, and a part of the hospital has been evacuated as police and fire department entered the building
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Original: The resolution was intended to control a violent in Syria as part of the . Since protests broke out last year, as many as 6,000 protesters and 1,000 members of the Syrian Armed Forces have been killed.
Revised: The resolution was intended to control a violent in Syria as part of the . Since protests broke out last year, as many as 6,000 protesters and 1,000 members of the have been killed.
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Original:  Today, we saw clearly which countries are prepared to support the people of Syria-and  , indeed, the people of the entire region-as  they struggle to attain a future of peace and democracy."
Revised:  Today, we saw clearly which countries are prepared to support the people of Syria , indeed, the people of the entire region-as they struggle to attain a future of peace and democracy."
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Original:  Today, we saw clearly which countries are prepared to support the people of Syria-and  , indeed, the people of the entire region-as  they struggle to attain a future of peace and democracy."
Revised:  Today, we saw clearly which countries are prepared to support the people of Syria-and , indeed, the people of the entire region they struggle to attain a future of peace and democracy."
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Original:  Today, we saw clearly which countries are prepared to support the people of Syria emdash;
Revised:  Today, we saw clearly which countries are prepared to support the people of Syria —
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Original:  and, indeed, the people of the entire region emdash;
Revised:  and, indeed, the people of the entire region —
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Original: Punjab region of Pakistan A ban against kite-flying during a traditional festival to welcome the onset of spring in the w:Punjab (Pakistan) Punjab region of Pakistan has led to significant numbers of arrests.
Revised: Punjab region of Pakistan A ban against kite-flying during a traditional festival to welcome the onset of spring in the Punjab region of Pakistan has led to significant numbers of arrests.
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Original: Their tour began when they landed at Fairburn Air Force Base in Canberra where they received a state welcome, attended by Prime Minister John Howard, Governor-General Major General Michael Jeffrey and several hundred well-wishers.
Revised: Their tour began when they landed at Fairburn Air Force Base in Canberra where they received a state welcome, attended by Prime Minister John Howard, Governor-General Major General Michael Jeffery and several hundred well-wishers.
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Original:  Their tour began when they landed at Fairburn Air Force Base in Canberra where they received a state welcome, attended by Prime Minister John Howard, Governor-General Major General Michael Jeffery and several hundred well-wishers.
Revised:  Their tour began when they landed at Fairburn Air Force Base in Canberra where they received a state welcome, attended by , Major General and several hundred well-wishers.
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Original:  The Queen and Prince Philip spent last night at Government House before beginning official duties in Sydney today.
Revised:  The Queen and Prince Philip spent last night at Government House before beginning official duties in today.
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Original:  Johansson, who competed in the snowboardcross in the Turin Olympics, was preparing for and upcoming World Cup competition.
Revised:  Johansson, who competed in the snowboardcross in the Turin Olympics, was preparing for an upcoming World Cup competition.
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Original:   I'm going to run a campaign of big ideas, big solutions."
Revised:  .. I'm going to run a campaign of big ideas, big solutions."
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Original:  This win follows his win in Florida's earlier this week.
Revised:  This win follows his win in Florida's earlier in the week.
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Original: Despite being delayed a day due to heavy snowstorms, the signing ceremony in Nain was attended by Williams, Andy Scott ( federal Indian Affairs Minister ) and other dignitaries.
Revised: Despite being delayed a day due to heavy snowstorms, the signing ceremony in Nain was attended by federal Indian Affairs Minister ) and other dignitaries.
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Original:  100px| The flag of Nunatsiavut The land agreement, thirty years in the negotiating, covers 72,520 square kilometers of northern Labrador, as well as special rights over 48,690 sqare kilometers of coastal waters.
Revised:  The flag of Nunatsiavut The land agreement, thirty years in the negotiating, covers 72,520 square kilometers of northern Labrador, as well as special rights over 48,690 sqare kilometers of coastal waters.
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Original: Generic Tamiflu ( Oseltamivir) is an antiviral drug used in the treatment and prophylaxis of both Influenza virus A and Influenza virus B.
Revised: Tamiflu (generic name: Oseltamivir) is an antiviral drug used in the treatment and prophylaxis of both Influenza virus A and Influenza virus B.
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Original:  Cipla got marketing approval for Anti-Flu from drug controller-general of India . Cipla will launch a generic version of bird flu drug, Oseltamivir, in the domestic market this month.
Revised:  Cipla received marketing approval from the drug controller-general of India . Cipla will launch a generic version of bird flu drug, Oseltamivir, in the domestic market this month.
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Original:  Cipla got marketing approval for Anti-Flu from drug controller-general of India . Cipla will launch a generic version of bird flu drug, Oseltamivir, in the domestic market this month.
Revised:  Cipla got marketing approval for Anti-Flu from drug controller-general of India and will launch a generic version of bird flu drug, Oseltamivir, in the domestic market this month.
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