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Original:  Ong is the current Minister of Housing and Local Government in the Malaysian cabinet , and also serves as the secretary-general of the  Malaysian Chinese Association (MCA) and Perak MCA chairman.
Revised:  Ong is the current Minister of Housing and Local Government in the , and also serves as the secretary-general of the Malaysian Chinese Association (MCA) and Perak MCA chairman.
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Original:  Ong is the current Minister of Housing and Local Government in the Malaysian cabinet , and also serves as the secretary-general of the  Malaysian Chinese Association (MCA) and Perak MCA chairman.
Revised:  Ong is the current Minister of Housing and Local Government in the Malaysian cabinet , and also serves as the secretary-general of the Malaysian Chinese Association (MCA) and MCA chairman.
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Original:  Ong said that issues involving divorce , custody of children and inheritance in matters of constitutional rights of non-Muslims had increased dramatically in the last three years.
Revised:  Ong said that issues involving , custody of children and inheritance in matters of constitutional rights of non-Muslims had increased dramatically in the last three years.
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Original:  Ong said that issues involving divorce , custody of children and inheritance in matters of constitutional rights of non-Muslims had increased dramatically in the last three years.
Revised:  Ong said that issues involving divorce , custody of children and inheritance in matters of of non-Muslims had increased dramatically in the last three years.
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Original:  His motion was seconded by Bintulu Minister of Parliament Datuk Seri Tiong King Sing . Ong also spoke about the corruption, education, crime and security and the economy in his two-hour speech.
Revised:  His motion was seconded by . Ong also spoke about the corruption, education, crime and security and the economy in his two-hour speech.
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Original:  Of the 27 million people in Malaysia, 60 percent are Muslim Malaysian Malays , 25 percent are Chinese and mainly Buddhists or Christians, and 7.8 percent are ethnic Indians and mainly Hindus  
Revised:  Of the 27 million people in Malaysia, 60 percent are Muslim , 25 percent are Chinese and mainly Buddhists or Christians, and 7.8 percent are ethnic Indians and mainly Hindus 
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Original:  Of the 27 million people in Malaysia, 60 percent are Muslim Malaysian Malays , 25 percent are Chinese and mainly Buddhists or Christians, and 7.8 percent are ethnic Indians and mainly Hindus  
Revised:  Of the 27 million people in Malaysia, 60 percent are Muslim Malaysian Malays , 25 percent are Chinese and mainly Buddhists or Christians, and 7.8 percent are ethnic Indians and mainly Hindus . 
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Original:  The 28th-annual COMPUTEX Taipei show, the second largest IT show in the world, is the largest one since holding their first show in 1982  after a confirmed extension to TWTC Nangang.
Revised:  The 28th-annual COMPUTEX Taipei show, the second largest IT show in the world, is the largest one since they held their first show in 1982 after a confirmed extension to TWTC Nangang.
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Original:  The 28th-annual COMPUTEX Taipei show, the second largest IT show in the world, is the largest one since holding their first show in 1982  after a confirmed extension to TWTC Nangang.
Revised:  The 28th-annual COMPUTEX Taipei show, the second largest IT show in the world, is the largest one since holding their first show in 1982 , after a confirmed extension to TWTC Nangang.
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Original:  Not only were vast ICT products showcased from upper, mid, and lower-stream vertical and horizontal OEMs, OBMs, and world-class stellar companies like Intel, AMD, ASUS, Foxconn, Acer, BenQ, and Kingston, but also  products related to green technology.
Revised:  Not only were vast ICT products showcased from upper, mid, and lower-stream vertical and horizontal OEMs, OBMs, and world-class stellar companies like Intel, AMD, ASUS, Foxconn, Acer, BenQ, and Kingston, but also featured products related to green technology.
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Original:  Furthermore, companies from Korea will group the biggest international pavilion to catch the buyers' eyes.
Revised:  Companies from Korea will group the biggest international pavilion to catch the buyers' eyes.
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Original:  Furthermore, companies from Korea will group the biggest international pavilion to catch the buyers' eyes.
Revised:  Furthermore, companies from Korea will be hosting the biggest international pavilion to catch the buyers' eyes.
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Original: Concurrently, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), one of the show organizers, will hold the 2008 WiMAX Taipei Expo at the Taipei Show Hall 2 for more convergences of networking industry to chain the WiMAX Pavilion located in the TWTC Nangang and echo the basic infrastructure construction of WiMAX , considered as  a major task by newly-elected President of the Republic of China Ying-jeou Ma. Pavilions like "mega trends", "multimedia", and "green technology"
Revised: The Taipei Computer Association (TCA), one of the show organizers, will hold the 2008 WiMAX Taipei Expo at the Taipei Show Hall 2 for more convergences of networking industry to chain the WiMAX Pavilion located in the TWTC Nangang and echo the basic infrastructure construction of WiMAX , considered as a major task by newly-elected President of the Republic of China Ying-jeou Ma. Pavilions like "mega trends", "multimedia", and "green technology"
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Original: Concurrently, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), one of the show organizers, will hold the 2008 WiMAX Taipei Expo at the Taipei Show Hall 2 for more convergences of networking industry to chain the WiMAX Pavilion located in the TWTC Nangang and echo the basic infrastructure construction of WiMAX , considered as  a major task by newly-elected President of the Republic of China Ying-jeou Ma. Pavilions like "mega trends", "multimedia", and "green technology"
Revised: Concurrently, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), one of the show organizers, will hold the 2008 WiMAX Taipei Expo at the Taipei Show Hall 2 for more convergences of networking industry to chain the WiMAX Pavilion located in the TWTC Nangang and echo the basic infrastructure construction of WiMAX . a major task by newly-elected President of the Republic of China Ying-jeou Ma. Pavilions like "mega trends", "multimedia", and "green technology"
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Original: Concurrently, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), one of the show organizers, will hold the 2008 WiMAX Taipei Expo at the Taipei Show Hall 2 for more convergences of networking industry to chain the WiMAX Pavilion located in the TWTC Nangang and echo the basic infrastructure construction of WiMAX , considered as  a major task by newly-elected President of the Republic of China Ying-jeou Ma. Pavilions like "mega trends", "multimedia", and "green technology"
Revised: Concurrently, Taipei Computer Association (TCA), one of the show organizers, will hold the 2008 WiMAX Taipei Expo at the Taipei Show Hall 2 for more convergences of networking industry to chain the WiMAX Pavilion located in the TWTC Nangang and echo the basic infrastructure construction of WiMAX , considered as Its considered a major task by newly-elected President of the Republic of China Ying-jeou Ma. Pavilions like "mega trends", "multimedia", and "green technology"
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Original:  will be re-arranged with several trendy and energy-efficiency products launched prior to this show.
Revised:  will be re-arranged to host trendy and energy-efficient products launched prior to this show.
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Original:  The 28th-annual COMPUTEX Taipei show, the second largest IT show in the world, is the largest one since they held their first show in 1982 , after a confirmed extension to TWTC Nangang.
Revised:  The 28th-annual COMPUTEX Taipei show, the second largest IT show in the world, is the largest one since they held their first show in 1982 since expanding to TWTC Nangang.
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Original: According to Taiwan External Trade Development Council (TAITRA), there were several seminars like "e21 Forum", "DRAMeXchange Forum", "Next Generation Networks Taipei", "Taiwan Design Center Forum", "CE Summit", "Green IT Forum" held at the Taipei International Convention Center and TWTC Nangang for buyers and companies to glance the vision of global ICT industry during the show hours.
Revised: According to Taiwan External Trade Development Council (TAITRA), there were several seminars like "e21 Forum", "DRAMeXchange Forum", "Next Generation Networks Taipei", "Taiwan Design Center Forum", "CE Summit", "Green IT Forum" held at the Taipei International Convention Center . TWTC Nangang was organized for buyers and companies to glance the vision of global ICT industry during the show hours.
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Original:  Since Jonney Shih, Chairman of ASUStek, showcased Eee PC before its launch during 2007 e21 Forum, not only notebook computers, seminars were progressively respected by industrial people especially international buyers.
Revised:  Since Jonney Shih, Chairman of ASUStek, showcased Eee PC before its launch during 2007 e21 Forum, seminars were progressively respected by industrial people especially international buyers.
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Original:  Since Jonney Shih, Chairman of ASUStek, showcased Eee PC before its launch during 2007 e21 Forum, not only notebook computers, seminars were progressively respected by industrial people especially international buyers.
Revised:  Since Jonney Shih, Chairman of ASUStek, showcased Eee PC before its launch during 2007 e21 Forum, not only notebook computers, seminars were progressively respected by industrial businessmen, especially international buyers.
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Original:  In addition, not only will there be a senior competition - Best Choice of COMPUTEX, mainly promoted by the TCA, but also the TAITRA will cooperate with International Forum Design (iF) holding the "Design and Innovation Award of COMPUTEX" to discover innovative and brand-new IT products to elevate the notability of Taiwan's innovations.
Revised:  Not only will there be a senior competition - Best Choice of COMPUTEX, mainly promoted by the TCA, but also the TAITRA will cooperate with International Forum Design (iF) holding the "Design and Innovation Award of COMPUTEX" to discover innovative and brand-new IT products to elevate the notability of Taiwan's innovations.
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Original:  In addition, not only will there be a senior competition - Best Choice of COMPUTEX, mainly promoted by the TCA, but also the TAITRA will cooperate with International Forum Design (iF) holding the "Design and Innovation Award of COMPUTEX" to discover innovative and brand-new IT products to elevate the notability of Taiwan's innovations.
Revised:  In addition, not only will there be a senior competition - Best Choice of COMPUTEX, mainly promoted by the TCA, but also the TAITRA will cooperate with International Forum Design (iF) holding the "Design and Innovation Award of COMPUTEX" . Its goals aims at discovering innovative and brand-new IT products to elevate the notability of Taiwan's innovations.
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Original:  After all, TAITRA and TCA, the organizers, promised to do the best services on transportation (Shuttle Buses, Taxis, MRT, International Airlines), living (Hotels), networking (TAITRA Lounge), and business (Trade Opportunity Rooms and Business Center) for the best quality of COMPUTEX.
Revised:  TAITRA and TCA, the organizers, promised to do the best services on transportation (Shuttle Buses, Taxis, MRT, International Airlines), living (Hotels), networking (TAITRA Lounge), and business (Trade Opportunity Rooms and Business Center) for the best quality of COMPUTEX.
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Original:  After all, TAITRA and TCA, the organizers, promised to do the best services on transportation (Shuttle Buses, Taxis, MRT, International Airlines), living (Hotels), networking (TAITRA Lounge), and business (Trade Opportunity Rooms and Business Center) for the best quality of COMPUTEX.
Revised:  After all, TAITRA and TCA, the organizers, promised to do the be the best at services for transportation (Shuttle Buses, Taxis, MRT, International Airlines), living (Hotels), networking (TAITRA Lounge), and business (Trade Opportunity Rooms and Business Center) for the best quality of COMPUTEX.
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Original:   Other injured passengers were taken to Sharm.
Revised:  The driver behind the wheel at the time survived the accident. Other injured passengers were taken to Sharm.
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Original:  At least on eperson died in hospital.
Revised:  At least one person died in hospital.
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Original:  The Ukranian foreign ministry said a Ukranian woman had been killed and the Romanian foreign ministry said a 41-year-old Romanian woman was amongst the dead.
Revised:  The Ukrainian foreign ministry said a Ukranian woman had been killed and the Romanian foreign ministry said a 41-year-old Romanian woman was amongst the dead.
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Original:  The Ukranian foreign ministry said a Ukranian woman had been killed and the Romanian foreign ministry said a 41-year-old Romanian woman was amongst the dead.
Revised:  The Ukranian foreign ministry said a Ukrainian woman had been killed and the Romanian foreign ministry said a 41-year-old Romanian woman was amongst the dead.
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Original:  The crash occured at 6:00 am (0300 GMT) about 70km (45 miles) from Suez, and many of the injured were rushed to hospital there.
Revised:  The crash occurred at 6:00 am (0300 GMT) about 70km (45 miles) from Suez, and many of the injured were rushed to hospital there.
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Original:  Traffic officials, security personnel, civil defence soiliers and ambulances all responded to the crash.
Revised:  Traffic officials, security personnel, civil defence soldiers and ambulances all responded to the crash.
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Original:  This high accident rate is fed by poor maintenance and regulatory enforcement and reckless driving, with many roads allowing high rates of speed to be acheived .
Revised:  This high accident rate is fed by poor maintenance and regulatory enforcement and reckless driving, with many roads allowing high rates of speed to be achieved .
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Original: Philipp Freiherr von Boeselager, the last surviving member of a cabal that on 20 July 1944 attempted to kill w: Adolf Hitler with a briefcase bomb, has died at  90 years of age , according to a statement released Friday by the German Bundeswehr.
Revised: Philipp Freiherr von Boeselager, the last surviving member of a cabal that on July 20, 1944 attempted to kill w: Adolf Hitler with a briefcase bomb, has died at 90 years of age , according to a statement released Friday by the German Bundeswehr.
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Original: Philipp Freiherr von Boeselager, the last surviving member of a cabal that on 20 July 1944 attempted to kill w: Adolf Hitler with a briefcase bomb, has died at  90 years of age , according to a statement released Friday by the German Bundeswehr.
Revised: Philipp Freiherr von Boeselager, the last surviving member of a cabal that on 20 July 1944 attempted to kill Adolf Hitler with a briefcase bomb, has died at 90 years of age , according to a statement released Friday by the German Bundeswehr.
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Original: Philipp Freiherr von Boeselager, the last surviving member of a cabal that on 20 July 1944 attempted to kill w: Adolf Hitler with a briefcase bomb, has died at  90 years of age , according to a statement released Friday by the German Bundeswehr.
Revised: Philipp Freiherr von Boeselager, the last surviving member of a cabal that on 20 July 1944 attempted to kill w: Adolf Hitler with a briefcase bomb, has died at the age of 90 years of age , according to a statement released Friday by the German Bundeswehr.
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Original: Philipp Freiherr von Boeselager, the last surviving member of a cabal that on 20 July 1944 attempted to kill w: Adolf Hitler with a briefcase bomb, has died at  90 years of age , according to a statement released Friday by the German Bundeswehr.
Revised: Philipp Freiherr von Boeselager, the last surviving member of a cabal that on 20 July 1944 attempted to kill w: Adolf Hitler with a briefcase bomb, has died at 90 , according to a statement released Friday by the German Bundeswehr.
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Original:  Von Boeselager, then a major in the German Wehrmacht, was one of a number of officers involved in the July 20 plot orchestrated by Colonel Claus von Stauffenberg.
Revised:  Von Boeselager, then a Major in the German Wehrmacht, was one of a number of officers involved in the July 20 plot orchestrated by Colonel Claus von Stauffenberg.
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Original:  Eight Bells , the only filly on the track, placed in second.
Revised:  Eight Belles , the only filly on the track, placed in second.
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Original:  Just after completing the race, Eight Bells collapsed with two broken front ankles.
Revised:  Just after completing the race, Eight Belles collapsed with two broken front ankles.
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Original: Big Brown won the 2008 Kentucky Derby.
Revised: In a dominating performance, Big Brown triumphed in the 2008 Kentucky Derby.
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Original:  Just after completing the race  , Eight Belles collapsed with two broken front ankles.
Revised:  Just after completing the race Shortly after the race finished , Eight Belles collapsed with two broken front ankles.
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Original:  Veterinarian Larry Bramlage conceded that "there was no possibly way Eight Belles could be saved... that's an injury that's very painful."
Revised:  Veterinarian Larry Bramlage conceded that "there was no possible way Eight Belles could be saved... that's an injury that's very painful."
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Original:  The $2 exacta with 13-1 shot Eight Belles (20-5) paid $141.60.
Revised:  The $2 exacta (20-5) paid $141.60.
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Original:   Microsoft chief executive officer, Steve Ballmer  notified Yahoo chief executive officer, chairman and co-founder, Jerry Yang via a letter that Microsoft was dropping their bid for the Sunnyvale, California based search engine giant.
Revised:  Microsoft chief executive officer, Steve Ballmer Microsoft chief executive officer, Steve Ballmer notified Yahoo chief executive officer, chairman and co-founder, Jerry Yang via a letter that Microsoft was dropping their bid for the Sunnyvale, California based search engine giant.
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Original:  In a press release from Microsoft  Ballmer said, “Despite our best efforts, including raising our bid by roughly $5 billion, Yahoo!
Revised:  In a press release from Microsoft , Ballmer said, “Despite our best efforts, including raising our bid by roughly $5 billion, Yahoo!
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Original: 150px Microsoft has announced it is dropping it bid to acquire one of their Internet competitors, Yahoo!, after a three-month courting effort by Microsoft.
Revised: 150px Microsoft has announced it is dropping its bid to acquire one of their Internet competitors, Yahoo!, after a three-month courting effort by Microsoft.
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