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Original:  Periods of silence were observed at official ceremonies attended by thousands, where flags were lowered to half-staff and bells rung in remembrance.
Revised:  Periods of silence were observed at official ceremonies attended by thousands, where flags were lowered to half-mast and bells rung in remembrance.
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Original:  Some villagers refused to take part , saying the rites were expensive, inappropriate  events designed to attract tourists and showcase the government.
Revised:  Some villagers refused to take part saying the rites were expensive, inappropriate events designed to attract tourists and showcase the government.
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Original:  Some villagers refused to take part , saying the rites were expensive, inappropriate  events designed to attract tourists and showcase the government.
Revised:  Some villagers refused to take part , saying the rites were expensive, inappropriate , events designed to attract tourists and showcase the government.
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Original:  Related news category:Earthquake
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Original:  Damage left after the December 2004 tsunami hit Sri Lanka Banda Aceh In one of the first ceremonies, Indonesian President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono joined in a moment of silence at the Baiturrahman mosque located in a Banda Aceh coastal suburb flattened by the disaster.
Revised:  Damage left after the December 2004 tsunami hit Sri Lanka Banda Aceh In one of the first ceremonies, Indonesian President Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono joined in a moment of silence at theBaiturrahman mosque located in a Banda Aceh coastal suburb flattened by the disaster.
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Original:  The mayor of London, , , " here in London, thousands of people from across our city and country have come together with @peoplesvote-uk to send a clear message: Enough is enough - it's time to give the British public the final say on Brexit."
Revised:  The mayor of London, , , " Here in London, thousands of people from across our city and country have come together with @peoplesvote-uk to send a clear message: Enough is enough - it's time to give the British public the final say on Brexit."
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Original:  Nicola Surgeon said it was "the moment of maximum opportunity" for stopping a no-deal Brexit.
Revised:  Nicola Sturgeon said it was "the moment of maximum opportunity" for stopping a no-deal Brexit.
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Original: There were several speakers at the rally, including  , , and Sadiq Khan.
Revised: There were several speakers at the rally, including , and Sadiq Khan.
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Original:  One MP () told the , "We know that 16 million people wanted to stay in the EU, and some of those would still like to stay in the EU, and within that quite a few would like to have another go and have another referendum — but it was always a minority".
Revised:  One MP told the , "We know that 16 million people wanted to stay in the EU, and some of those would still like to stay in the EU, and within that quite a few would like to have another go and have another referendum — but it was always a minority".
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Original:  One interviewee said people change their minds and several said they wanted the politicians to stop ignoring them.
Revised:  One interviewee said people changed their minds and several said they wanted the politicians to stop ignoring them.
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Original:  The mayor of London, : "Here in London, thousands of people from across our city and country have come together with @peoplesvote-uk to send a clear message: Enough is enough - it's time to give the British public the final say on Brexit."
Revised:  The mayor of London, , "Here in London, thousands of people from across our city and country have come together with @peoplesvote-uk to send a clear message: Enough is enough - it's time to give the British public the final say on Brexit."
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Original:  The mayor of London, ,  "Here in London, thousands of people from across our city and country have come together with @peoplesvote-uk to send a clear message: Enough is enough - it's time to give the British public the final say on Brexit."
Revised:  The mayor of London, , , "Here in London, thousands of people from across our city and country have come together with @peoplesvote-uk to send a clear message: Enough is enough - it's time to give the British public the final say on Brexit."
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Original: In 2016, the United Kingdom held a referendum on whether to remain part of the European union , which it joined in 1973.
Revised: In 2016, the United Kingdom held a referendum on whether to remain part of the European Union , which it joined in 1973.
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Original: In 2016, the United Kingdom held a referendum on whether to remain part of the European Union , which it joined in 1973 when it was still called the European Economic Community.
Revised: In 2016, the United Kingdom held a referendum on whether to remain part of the European union , which it joined in 1973 when it was still called the European Economic Community.
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Original: In 2016, the United Kingdom held a referendum on whether to remain part of the European Union , which it joined in 1973 when it was still called the European Economic Community.
Revised: In 2016, the United Kingdom held a referendum on whether to remain part of the European Union , which it joined in 1973.
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Original:  Mr Della Bosca argues that the corporations provision is there to protect individuals from corporations  
Revised:  Mr Della Bosca argues that the corporations provision is there to protect individuals from corporations . 
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Original: 300px|High Court entrance After months of threats from the states to take the federal government  to the High Court  over it's Work Choices Act, New South Wales has formally lodged a writ with the High Court.
Revised: 300px|High Court entrance After months of threats from the states to take the federal government of Australia to the High Court over it's Work Choices Act, New South Wales has formally lodged a writ with the High Court.
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Original:  The 30-page Statement of Claim lodged by NSW Industrial Relations Minister John Della Bosca and Solicitor-General Michael Sexton claims that the Work Choices Act is unconstitutional as the act extends the commonwealths government 's powers beyond what the constitution has given them.
Revised:  The 30-page Statement of Claim lodged by NSW Industrial Relations Minister John Della Bosca and Solicitor-General Michael Sexton claims that the Work Choices Act is unconstitutional as the act extends the commonwealth 's powers beyond what the constitution has given them.
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Original: In two studies presented  Monday at the annual meeting of the in Orlando, Florida in the United States, scientists have disclosed new steps toward using natural adhesives made by the (Arion subfuscus) in medical applications such as in closing skin wounds and reducing .
Revised: In two studies presented on Monday at the annual meeting of the in Orlando, Florida in the United States, scientists have disclosed new steps toward using natural adhesives made by the (Arion subfuscus) in medical applications such as in closing skin wounds and reducing .
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Original:  When threatened, the dusky Arion slug secretes an unusual glue, sealing itself to whatever surface it may be on .
Revised:  When threatened, the dusky Arion slug secretes an unusual glue, making itself a difficult target for predators .
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Original:  This glue remains both sticky and flexible — an unusual combination for adhesives — and works even when the surface the slug is on is wet.
Revised:  This glue remains both sticky and flexible and works even when the surface the slug is on is wet.
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Original:  "Typical sutures like staples and stitches often lead to scarring and create holes in the skin that could increase the chance of infection after surgery ," said scientist Rebecca Falconer, an undergraduate who led one of the two studies.
Revised: Scientist Rebecca Falconer, an undergraduate who led one of the two studies, said "Typical sutures like staples and stitches often lead to scarring and create holes in the skin that could increase the chance of infection after surgery ," said scientist Rebecca Falconer, an undergraduate who led one of the two studies.
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Original: In her set of experiments, Falconer observed 11 proteins found only in slug glue and used DNA recombination to produce usable amounts of each of these proteins.
Revised: In her set of experiments, Falconer observed eleven proteins found only in slug glue and used DNA recombination to produce usable amounts of each of these proteins.
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Original:  She then analyzed the three-dimensional structures that the protein molecules form with each other and with other substances that make them sticky .
Revised:  She then analyzed the three-dimensional structures that the protein molecules form with each other and with other substances that make them work .
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Original: Scientist Rebecca Falconer, an undergraduate who led one of the two studies, said "Typical sutures like staples and stitches often lead to scarring and create holes in the skin that could increase the chance of infection after surgery .
Revised: Scientist Rebecca Falconer, an undergraduate who led one of the two studies, said "Typical sutures like staples and stitches often lead to scarring and create holes in the skin that could increase the chance of infection after surgery ...
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Original:  Understanding the roles of adhesive proteins in the slug glue would aid in the creation of a medical adhesive that can move and stretch yet still retain its strength and adhesiveness."  "Few studies on biological adhesives have identified the exact nature of the bonds holding the glue together ," said Gallego-Lazo."
Revised:  Understanding the roles of adhesive proteins in the slug glue would aid in the creation of a medical adhesive that can move and stretch yet still retain its strength and adhesiveness." Gallego-Lazo said, "Few studies on biological adhesives have identified the exact nature of the bonds holding the glue together ," said Gallego-Lazo."
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Original:  Understanding the roles of adhesive proteins in the slug glue would aid in the creation of a medical adhesive that can move and stretch yet still retain its strength and adhesiveness."  "Few studies on biological adhesives have identified the exact nature of the bonds holding the glue together ," said Gallego-Lazo."
Revised:  Understanding the roles of adhesive proteins in the slug glue would aid in the creation of a medical adhesive that can move and stretch yet still retain its strength and adhesiveness." "Few studies on biological adhesives have identified the exact nature of the bonds holding the glue together ...
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Original:  If its designed to protest against the commercialization of Christmas is disputed .
Revised:  If its designed to protest against the commercialization of Christmas or not .
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Original: Due to Santa's reputation for integrity and his strict media policy, his sparse communication is mostly one-way: recieving lists from children with wishes for Christmas.
Revised: Due to Santa's reputation for integrity and his strict media policy, his sparse communication is mostly one-way: receiving lists from children with wishes for Christmas.
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Original: photo credit: Mark Barber The conduct by a group of 'Santas' making an unclear statement last Saturday is not appreciated in the business district of Auckland , New Zealand.
Revised:  The conduct by a group of 'Santas' making an unclear statement last Saturday is not appreciated in the business district of Auckland , New Zealand.
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Original: photo credit: Mark Barber The conduct by a group of 'Santas' making an unclear statement last Saturday is not appreciated in the business district of Auckland , New Zealand.
Revised: photo credit: Mark Barber The conduct by a group of 'Santas' making an unclear statement last Saturday is not appreciated in the business district of , New Zealand.
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Original:  Alex Dyer, spokesman for the group, stated that Santarchy in Auckland is part of a worldwide phenomenon.
Revised:  Alex Dyer, spokesman for the group, stated that in Auckland is part of a worldwide phenomenon.
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Original:  It is disputed if Santarchy is a protest against the commercialization of Christmas or not.
Revised:  It is disputed if Santarchy is a protest against the commercialization of or not.
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Original:  Due to Santa's reputation for integrity and his strict media policy, his sparse communication is mostly one-way: receiving lists from children with wishes for Christmas.
Revised:  Due to reputation for integrity and his strict media policy, his sparse communication is mostly one-way: receiving lists from children with wishes for Christmas.
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Original:  In 1994, the Cacophony Society staged the world's very first SantaCon in San Francisco.
Revised:  In 1994, the staged the world's very first SantaCon in San Francisco.
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Original:  In 1994, the Cacophony Society staged the world's very first SantaCon in San Francisco.
Revised:  In 1994, the Cacophony Society staged the world's very first in San Francisco.
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Original:  Influenced by the surrealist movement , Discordianism , and other subversive art currents.
Revised:  Influenced by the movement , and other subversive art currents.
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Original:  The talk show features journalists and government officials *who took turns discussing Parmly's actions in Cuba calling the diplomats, according to one journalist Arlene Rodriguez, "They are the same pig with different suits," and "The pig is Bush's policy and they are the suits 
Revised:  The talk show features journalists and government officials *who took turns discussing Parmly's actions in Cuba calling the diplomats, according to one journalist Arlene Rodriguez, "They are the same pig with different suits," and "The pig is Bush's policy and they are the suits .
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Original: 400px|Inflatable boats from the Greenpeace ships - the Arctic Sunrise and the Esperanza - hinder the transfer of a dead minke whale from the Japanese whaling fleet catcher ship Kyo Maru No.1 to the Nisshin Maru factory ship.
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Original:  Fin whales are the second largest creatures on earth. 320px|Inflatable boats from the Greenpeace ships - the Arctic Sunrise and the Esperanza - hinder the transfer of a dead minke whale from the Japanese whaling fleet catcher ship Kyo Maru No.1 to the Nisshin Maru factory ship.
Revised:  Fin whales are the second largest creatures on earth. 
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Original: Greenpeace say they have asked the whalers to stop whaling immediately and return to Japan, but have recieved no response from the vessels.
Revised: Greenpeace say they have asked the whalers to stop whaling immediately and return to Japan, but have received no response from the vessels.
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Original:  Paris mayor requested everyone to respect the security perimeters to allow the fire crew to do their job.
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Original: The fire's cause has not been disclosed.
Revised: As of late yesterday, the fire's cause has not been disclosed.
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Original: The fire's cause has not been disclosed.
Revised: The fire's cause had not been disclosed.
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Original:  President cancelled an address he was to have given at 20:00 local time and instead planned to go to the scene.
Revised:  President cancelled an address he was to have given at during the evening and instead went to the scene.
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Original:  The world-famous cathedral, built in the 13th century, is one of the most well-known monuments in France.
Revised:  The world-famous cathedral, completed in the 13th century, is one of the most well-known monuments in France.
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Original: The roof of in Paris, caught fire yesterday.
Revised: The roof of in French capital Paris caught fire yesterday.
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Original: On December 15th, 2005 , the National Center for Education Statistics released the preliminary analysis of the 2003 National Adult Literacy Survey.
Revised: On December 15th, 2005 by the US National Center for Education Statistics released the preliminary analysis of the 2003 National Adult Literacy Survey.
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Original:  __TOC__ The NALS is a nationally representative assessment of English literacy among American adults age 16 and older . Sponsored by the National Center for Education Statistics, NAAL is the nation’s  most comprehensive measure of adult literacy .
Revised:  __TOC__ The nationally representative study among US adults age 16 and older . Sponsored by the National Center for Education Statistics, NAAL is the nation’s most comprehensive measure of adult literacy .
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Original:  The survey was conducted by the Educational Testing Service, the same group that administers the SATs which are the primary college admissions test in the US.
Revised:  The survey was conducted by the Educational Testing Service, 
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Original:  In 2003 there were 19,000 participants .
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Original: Preliminary results from the National Adult Literacy Survey (NALS ), released 15 December 2005 by the US National Center for Education Statistics, indicate gains and losses in literacy among minority adults between 1992 and 2003.
Revised: Preliminary results from the National Assessment of Adult Literacy (NAAL ), released 15 December 2005 by the US National Center for Education Statistics, indicate gains and losses in literacy among minority adults between 1992 and 2003.
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Original:  The NALS is a part of the US National Assessment of Adult Literacy , the most comprehensive measure of adult literacy in the USA.
Revised:  The National Assessment of Adult Literacy , the most comprehensive measure of adult literacy in the USA.
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Original:  The NALS is a part of the US National Assessment of Adult Literacy , the most comprehensive measure of adult literacy in the USA.
Revised:  The NALS is a part of the US National Assessment of Adult Literacy is the most comprehensive measure of adult literacy in the USA.
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Original:  The 2003 NALS , with 19 000 participants, was conducted by the Educational Testing Service, an non-governmental organization which charges for its services.
Revised:  The 2003 NAAL , with 19 000 participants, was conducted by the Educational Testing Service, an non-governmental organization which charges for its services.
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Original:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% since 1992) Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\%  What are the implications?
Revised:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: Selected results Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% since 1992) Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\% What are the implications?
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Original:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% since 1992) Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\%  What are the implications?
Revised:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Some of the results were surprising, while others reflect continuing trends in the population. Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% since 1992) Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\% What are the implications?
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Original:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% since 1992) Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\%  What are the implications?
Revised:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islanders increased 3\% since 1992) Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\% What are the implications?
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Original:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% since 1992) Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\%  What are the implications?
Revised:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\% What are the implications?
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Original:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% since 1992) Percentage of adults who can read proficiently , by educational attainment:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\%  What are the implications?
Revised:  What the tests discovered Percentage of adults who can read proficiently, by race/ethnicity: White: 17\% (down 1\% since 1992) Black: 2\% (equal to 1992) Hispanic: 4\% ( down 1\% since 1992) Asian/Pacific Islander: 12\% (up 3\% since 1992) %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% High school graduate: 4.6\% College Graduate: 29\% Graduate Studies/Degree: 36\% What are the implications?
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