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Original:  Nevertheless his teaching spread through the Low Countries in the following years . Pruystinck had had contact with David Joris, probably before 1525, but his movement was not Anabaptist .
Revised:  Nevertheless his teaching spread through the Low Countries in the following years .
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Original:  Ide wrote a proclamation announcing and explaining the reasons for the revolt during the night of June 14–15, 1846 (below) .
Revised:  Ide wrote a proclamation announcing and explaining the reasons for the revolt .
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Original:  Empathy, as defined by researchers, is the visceral or emotional experience of another person ’ s feelings.
Revised:  Empathy, as defined by researchers, is the visceral or emotional experience of another person ' s feelings.
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Original:  It is, in a sense, an automatic mirroring of another ’ s emotion, like tearing up at a friend ’ s sadness.
Revised:  It is, in a sense, an automatic mirroring of another ' s emotion, like tearing up at a friend ’ s sadness.
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Original:  It is, in a sense, an automatic mirroring of another ’ s emotion, like tearing up at a friend ’ s sadness.
Revised:  It is, in a sense, an automatic mirroring of another ’ s emotion, like tearing up at a friend ' s sadness.
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Original:  Difference between sympathy and compassion is that the former responds to suffering from sorrow and concern while the latter responds with warmth and care.
Revised:  Difference between sympathy and compassion is that the former responds to suffering with sorrow and concern while the latter responds with warmth and care.
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Original: Renunication then lays the foundation for the development of compassion.
Revised: Renunciation then lays the foundation for the development of compassion.
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Original:  Compassion motivates people to go out of their way to help the physical, mental, or emotional pains of another and themselves.
Revised:  Compassion motivates people to put forth a selfless effort in helping the physical, mental, or emotional pains of another and themselves.
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Original:  Difference between sympathy and compassion is that the former responds to suffering with sorrow and concern while the latter responds with warmth and care.
Revised:  The difference between sympathy and compassion is that the former responds to suffering with sorrow and concern while the latter responds with warmth and care.
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Original:  That ’s proximal compassion: where we see someone in need and we help them.
Revised:  That is proximal compassion: where we see someone in need and we help them.
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Original:  But, when I used to tell my kids, “Wear a helmet,” that ’s distal compassion: trying to prevent harm before it occurs.
Revised:  But, when I used to tell my kids, “Wear a helmet,” that is distal compassion: trying to prevent harm before it occurs.
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Original:  People should do physical activity, eat healthy food with every meal , create good relations with others, enjoy interacting with others in the community, write  a journal frequently, and sleep enough everyday .
Revised:  People should do physical activity, eat healthy foods , create good relations with others, enjoy interacting with others in the community, write a journal frequently, and sleep enough everyday .
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Original:  People should do physical activity, eat healthy food with every meal , create good relations with others, enjoy interacting with others in the community, write  a journal frequently, and sleep enough everyday .
Revised:  People should do physical activity, eat healthy food with every meal , create good relations with others, enjoy interacting with others in the community, write in a journal frequently, and sleep enough everyday .
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Original:  People should do physical activity, eat healthy food with every meal , create good relations with others, enjoy interacting with others in the community, write  a journal frequently, and sleep enough everyday .
Revised:  People should do physical activity, eat healthy food with every meal , create good relations with others, enjoy interacting with others in the community, write a journal frequently, and get the recommended amount of sleep .
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Original:  True compassion, if it exists at all, is thus inherently motivated  by self-interest.
Revised:  True compassion, if it exists at all, is thus inherently motivated (at least to some degree) by self-interest.
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Original:  Axinžanov proposed that the Kipchaks simply assumed the name Qanglı (literally "wagon") after taking over the Kang region.
Revised:  Akhinžanov proposed that the Kipchaks simply assumed the name Qanglı (literally "wagon") after taking over the Kang region.
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Original:  The ethnic name Kangar is a early medieval name for the Kangly people, who are now part of the Kazakh, Uzbek,Tolstoi V.P. Origin of the Karakalpak people//KSIE, Moscow, 1947. p.75 and Karakalpak nations.
Revised:  The ethnic name Kangar is an early medieval name for the Kangly people, who are now part of the Kazakh, Uzbek,Tolstoi V.P. Origin of the Karakalpak people//KSIE, Moscow, 1947. p.75 and Karakalpak nations.
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Original:  The North Pontic Kangar state eventually established coexistent with Khazaria, while dominating North Pontic area of Khazaria from ca. 750 to ca. 900. Constantine Porphyrogenitus named three Kangar tribes ( Chor (Charvat) , Ertim, Yula), and four Bechen tribes ( Kapan, Karabai, Kulbei , Tolmach), and their respective locations.
Revised:  The North Pontic Kangar state eventually established coexistent with Khazaria, while dominating North Pontic area of Khazaria from ca. 750 to ca. 900. Constantine Porphyrogenitus named three Kangar tribes ( Chur , Ertim, Yula), and four Bechen tribes ( Kapan, Karabai, Kulbei , Tolmach), and their respective locations.
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Original:  The western branch of the Kangars, known in the west under the collective name Pechenegs of their five allied Turkic tribes, captured the lands of the Khazar Kaganate, and created a Kangar successor state in the Eastern Europe.
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Original:  Kangar migration and North Pontic Kangar state%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A mass migration of the Oghuz tribes in the middle of the 8th c. displaced population of the Kangar Union on the eastern borders of the Khazar Kaganate, forcing it to move into Khazarian territories.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% A mass migration of the Oghuz tribes in the middle of the 8th c. displaced population of the Kangar Union on the eastern borders of the Khazar Kaganate, forcing it to move into Khazarian territories.
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Original: The Kengeres, mentioned in the Orkhon inscriptions, were possibly known in the Islamic world and in the west as Kangar, a collective name for three  tribes (of eight Pecheneg tribes ).P.Golubovsky, Pechenegs, Torks, and Polovetses before Tatar invasion, SPb, 1884. p.55, in L.Gumilev, Ancient Türks, Ch.20 (In Russian) Byzantine emperor Constantine Porphyrogenitus stated that Kangar signified nobleness and bravery.
Revised: The Kengeres, mentioned in the Orkhon inscriptions, were possibly known in the Islamic world and in the west as Kangar, a collective name for three Pecheneg tribes (of eight Pecheneg tribes ).P.Golubovsky, Pechenegs, Torks, and Polovetses before Tatar invasion, SPb, 1884. p.55, in L.Gumilev, Ancient Türks, Ch.20 (In Russian) Byzantine emperor Constantine Porphyrogenitus stated that Kangar signified nobleness and bravery.
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Original: The Kengeres, mentioned in the Orkhon inscriptions, were possibly known in the Islamic world and in the west as Kangar, a collective name for three  tribes (of eight Pecheneg tribes ).P.Golubovsky, Pechenegs, Torks, and Polovetses before Tatar invasion, SPb, 1884. p.55, in L.Gumilev, Ancient Türks, Ch.20 (In Russian) Byzantine emperor Constantine Porphyrogenitus stated that Kangar signified nobleness and bravery.
Revised: The Kengeres, mentioned in the Orkhon inscriptions, were possibly known in the Islamic world and in the west as Kangar, a collective name for three tribes (of eight ).P.Golubovsky, Pechenegs, Torks, and Polovetses before Tatar invasion, SPb, 1884. p.55, in L.Gumilev, Ancient Türks, Ch.20 (In Russian) Byzantine emperor Constantine Porphyrogenitus stated that Kangar signified nobleness and bravery.
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Original:  Some Orientalists( Marquart, Toltsov, Klyashtorny ) attempted to connect the Kangar and Kengeres to the Qanglı, the eastern grouping of the Cuman-Kipchak confederation as well as the Indo-European Kangju in Chinese sources.
Revised:  Other Orientalists, Marquart, Toltsov, Klyashtorny ) attempted to connect the Kangar and Kengeres to the Qanglı, the eastern grouping of the Cuman-Kipchak confederation as well as the Indo-European Kangju in Chinese sources.
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Original:  Some Orientalists( Marquart, Toltsov, Klyashtorny ) attempted to connect the Kangar and Kengeres to the Qanglı, the eastern grouping of the Cuman-Kipchak confederation as well as the Indo-European Kangju in Chinese sources.
Revised:  Some Orientalists( Marquart, Toltsov, Klyashtorny , attempted to connect the Kangar and Kengeres to the Qanglı, the eastern grouping of the Cuman-Kipchak confederation as well as the Indo-European Kangju in Chinese sources.
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Original:  The revolt was successful, but the Moslem Arab armies attacked Sogdiana from the south.
Revised:  The revolt was successful, but the Muslim Arab armies attacked Sogdiana from the south.
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Original: Category: 1982 births Category:
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Original:   Nacionalista Party politicians Category:People from Bulacan Category:People from  Taguig Category:Politicians from Bulacan Category: University of the Philippines alumni Category: Centro Escolar University alumni Category:Duterte Administration personnel Category: Women mayors of places in the Philippines Category:Women members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Tagu
Revised:  Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Taguig Category: Nacionalista Party politicians Category:People from Bulacan Category:People from Taguig Category:Politicians from Bulacan Category: University of the Philippines alumni Category: Centro Escolar University alumni Category:Duterte Administration personnel Category: Women mayors of places in the Philippines Category:Women members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Tagu
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Original:   Nacionalista Party politicians Category:People from Bulacan Category:People from  Taguig Category:Politicians from Bulacan Category: University of the Philippines alumni Category: Centro Escolar University alumni Category:Duterte Administration personnel Category: Women mayors of places in the Philippines Category:Women members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Tagu
Revised:  Nacionalista Party politicians Category:People from Bulacan Category:People from Taguig Category:Politicians from Bulacan Category: University of the Philippines alumni Category: Women mayors of places in the Philippines Category:Women members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Tagu
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Original:   Nacionalista Party politicians Category:People from Bulacan Category:People from  Taguig Category:Politicians from Bulacan Category: University of the Philippines alumni Category: Centro Escolar University alumni Category:Duterte Administration personnel Category: Women mayors of places in the Philippines Category:Women members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines Category:Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Tagu
Revised:  Nacionalista Party politicians Category:People from Bulacan Category:People from Taguig Category:Politicians from Bulacan Category: University of the Philippines alumni Category: Centro Escolar University alumni Category:Duterte Administration personnel Category: Women mayors of places in the Philippines Category:Women members of the House of Representatives of the Philippin
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Original:   Filipino politicians Category:
Revised:  21st-century Filipino politicians Category:
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Original: Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Taguig Category:Nacionalista Party politicians Category:People from Albay Category:People from Luzon Category:People from Taguig Category:Politicians from Albay Category:Tagalog people Category:University of the Philippines alumni Category:Women mayors of places in the Philippines Category:Women members of the House of Representatives of the Philippin
Revised: Members of the House of Representatives of the Philippines from Taguig Category:Nacionalista Party politicians Category:People from Albay Category:People from Taguig Category:Politicians from Albay Category:Tagalog people Category:University of the Philippines alumni Category:Women mayors of places in the Philippines Category:Women members of the House of Representatives of the Philippin
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Original: A spectrum auction is a process whereby a government uses an auction system to sell the rights (licenses) to transmit signals over specific bands of the electromagnetic spectrum and to assign scarce spectrum resources.
Revised: A spectrum auction is a process whereby a government uses an auction system to sell the rights to transmit signals over specific bands of the electromagnetic spectrum and to assign scarce spectrum resources.
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Original: On November 14, 2018, the Federal Communications Commission  began auctioning spectrum for 5G services for the first time.
Revised: On November 14, 2018, the Federal Communications Commission (FCC) began auctioning spectrum for 5G services for the first time.
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Original: Voluntary surrender of licenses In order to prevent network congestion, FCC chairman Julius Genachowski sought companies who would voluntarily surrender their unused spectrum in exchange for a share of the money made from the spectrum auction  With the growing demands for wireless services, the Obama Administration approved a plan, called the National Broadband Plan of making 500 MHz of spectrum, below 3 GHz, available over the next 10 years.
Revised: Voluntary surrender of licenses In order to prevent network congestion, FCC chairman Julius Genachowski sought companies who would voluntarily surrender their unused spectrum in exchange for a share of the money made from the spectrum auction . With the growing demands for wireless services, the Obama Administration approved a plan, called the National Broadband Plan of making 500 MHz of spectrum, below 3 GHz, available over the next 10 years.
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Original:  Verizon, who participated in the auction, ultimately purchased no URL Lawrence Chu, an advisor to the FCC during the bidding process, considered the auction a success while admitting that "there will be some people disappointed on the broadcaster side."
Revised:  Verizon, who participated in the auction, ultimately purchased no licenses. Lawrence Chu, an advisor to the FCC during the bidding process, considered the auction a success while admitting that "there will be some people disappointed on the broadcaster side."
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Original:  In order to optimize the efficacy of CAR-T gene therapy, these checkpoint inhibitors can be blocked to stimulate a robust antitumor immune response, spearheaded by the CAR-T cells.
Revised:  In order to optimize the efficacy of CAR-T gene therapy, these checkpoint inhibitors can be blocked to stimulate a robust anti-tumor immune response, spearheaded by the CAR-T cells.
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Original:  The signal pathways of these cytokines can be used to enhance CAR-T antitumor characteristics.
Revised:  The signal pathways of these cytokines can be used to enhance CAR-T anti-tumor characteristics.
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Original: Immunotherapy Immune therapy is a targeted approach to cancer therapy where actual immune cells of the patient and their genes are manipulated to produce an anti-tumor response.
Revised: Immunotherapy Immunotherapy is a targeted approach to cancer therapy where actual immune cells of the patient and their genes are manipulated to produce an anti-tumor response.
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Original: Combining CAR-T with Checkpoint Inhibitors, Cytokines Some regulatory proteins -- immune checkpoint inhibitors -- have been found to reduce the ability of T cells to multiply within the body.
Revised: Combining CAR-T with Checkpoint Inhibitors, Cytokines Some regulatory proteins , specifically immune checkpoint inhibitors -- have been found to reduce the ability of T cells to multiply within the body.
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Original: Combining CAR-T with Checkpoint Inhibitors, Cytokines Some regulatory proteins -- immune checkpoint inhibitors -- have been found to reduce the ability of T cells to multiply within the body.
Revised: Combining CAR-T with Checkpoint Inhibitors, Cytokines Some regulatory proteins -- immune checkpoint inhibitors , have been found to reduce the ability of T cells to multiply within the body.
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Original:  A possible solution to this problem is to include two different antigen receptors on the CAR-T cells to make them  more specific.
Revised:  A possible solution to this problem is to include two different antigen receptors on the CAR-T cells to make them even more specific.
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Original:  The second issue with the CAR-T immunotherapy approach is that it can cause cytokine release syndrome  when an excess of proinflammatory factors are released by the immune system due to the artificial manipulation of pathways, which can cause unpleasant side effects for the patient like nausea and a high fever.
Revised:  The second issue with the CAR-T immunotherapy approach is that it can cause cytokine release syndrome . This is when an excess of proinflammatory factors are released by the immune system due to the artificial manipulation of pathways, which can cause unpleasant side effects for the patient like nausea and a high fever.
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Original:  The second issue with the CAR-T immunotherapy approach is that it can cause cytokine release syndrome  when an excess of proinflammatory factors are released by the immune system due to the artificial manipulation of pathways, which can cause unpleasant side effects for the patient like nausea and a high fever.
Revised:  The second issue with the CAR-T immunotherapy approach is that it can cause cytokine release syndrome when an excess of pro-inflammatory factors are released by the immune system due to the artificial manipulation of pathways, which can cause unpleasant side effects for the patient like nausea and a high fever.
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Original:  Gene Therapy  See also Oncology Molecular medicine
Revised:  Gene Therapy Cancer is unregulated and out-of-control cell growth brought on by a breakdown of normal checks and balances of cellular life. Cancer cells do not behave like normal cells, so the methods for ridding the body of these cells are more complicated. In the past few decades, gene therapy has emerged as a targeted way to treat cancer. Gene therapy introduces foreign genetic sequences to diseased cells in order to change the expression of these cancerous cells that are functioning with severely damaged genomes. Manipulation of the pathways controlled by certain genes and their regulators have been shown to be a fruitful focus of cancer research. See also Oncology Molecular medicine
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Original: Molecular oncology, University of British Columbia  Molecular Oncolytic Therapies Gene Therapy Cancer is unregulated and out-of-control cell growth brought on by a breakdown of normal checks and balances of cellular life.
Revised: Molecular oncology, University of British Columbia Gene Targets There are many different genes being researches for possible cancer therapies. Among the most studied at the p53 gene and the PTEN gene. These genes are major regulators of the cell cycle and other pathways involved in cellular and genomic integrity. They make sure cells are not damaged or are passing on that damage to daughter cells by halting the cell cycle and possibly even signaling for the death of damaged cells. Both the p53 and PTEN genes are classified as tumor suppressors because they control cells that may replicate out of control with damaged genetic material, eventually leading to cancer growth, if not kept in check by the p53 and PTEN pathways. Mutations in these genes are seen in more than half of human cancers. Molecular Oncolytic Therapies Gene Therapy Cancer is unregulated and out-of-control cell growth brought on by a breakdown of normal checks and balances of cellular life.
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Original:  Nevertheless, Thucydides chose to begin his history where Herodotus left off (at the Siege of Sestos) and felt Herodotus's history was accurate enough not to need re-writing or correcting.
Revised:  Nevertheless, Thucydides chose to begin his history where Herodotus left off (at the siege of Sestos) and felt Herodotus's history was accurate enough not to need re-writing or correcting.
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Original: Sources [[File: AGMA Hérodote.jpg | 180px|Herodotus , the main historical source for this conflict]] File:Thucydides-bust-cutout ROM.jpg|180px|Thucydides continued Herodotus's narrative All the surviving primary sources for the Greco-Persian Wars are Greek;
Revised: Sources [[File: AGMA Hérodote.jpg | upHerodotus , the main historical source for this conflict]] File:Thucydides-bust-cutout ROM.jpg|180px|Thucydides continued Herodotus's narrative All the surviving primary sources for the Greco-Persian Wars are Greek;
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Original: Sources [[File: AGMA Hérodote.jpg | 180px|Herodotus , the main historical source for this conflict]] File:Thucydides-bust-cutout ROM.jpg|180px|Thucydides continued Herodotus's narrative All the surviving primary sources for the Greco-Persian Wars are Greek;
Revised: Sources [[File: AGMA Hérodote.jpg | 180px|Herodotus , the main historical source for this conflict]] All the surviving primary sources for the Greco-Persian Wars are Greek;
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Original:  Husbands and wives in a relationship marked with satisfaction, love, and commitment rate their own levels of disclosure highly as well as their perceptions of their spouses' disclosures. iqra
Revised:  Husbands and wives in a relationship marked with satisfaction, love, and commitment rate their own levels of disclosure highly as well as their perceptions of their spouses' disclosures. 
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Original:  We reveal ourselves most thoroughly and discuss the widest range of topics with our spouses and loved ones.
Revised:  One reveals itself most thoroughly and discuss the widest range of topics with our spouses and loved ones.
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Original: Self-disclosure is an important building block for intimacy and cannot be achieved without it.
Revised: Self-disclosure is an important building block for intimacy , which cannot be achieved without it.
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Original: Early life Thakor was born in Leicester to parents from Gujarat, India , and educated at Loughborough Grammar School then Uppingham School, where he excelled at cricket.
Revised: Early life Thakor was born in Leicester to parents from Gujarat, India and educated at Loughborough Grammar School then Uppingham School, where he excelled at cricket.
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Original:  He has a long history of being 'seedy' and the women even nicknamed him 'Shifty Shiv'.
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