wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Maragall i la Lluna The documentary starts with the experience of Lluna, a girl who was eight years old when, in 1993, the then-mayor of Barcelona moved into her home to better understand the reality of the Roquetes neighborhood.
Revised:  The documentary starts with the experience of Lluna, a girl who was eight years old when, in 1993, the then-mayor of Barcelona moved into her home to better understand the reality of the Roquetes neighborhood.
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Original:  He is widely regarded as one of the best openers of all time.
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Original: Preethi's other books include 100 Shades of White , which has been bought by the BBC for a television adaptation ;
Revised: Preethi's book 100 Shades of White , which has been bought by the BBC for a television adaptation ;
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Original: Preethi's other books include 100 Shades of White , which has been bought by the BBC for a television adaptation ;
Revised: Preethi's other books include 100 Shades of White has been bought by the BBC for a television adaptation ;
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Original: Preethi Nair (born 1971) is a British author of South Indian heritage.
Revised: Preethi Nair (born 1971) is a British author of Indian heritage.
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Original:  Nair's book 100 Shades of White has been bought by the BBC for a television adaptation.
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Original: Leukocyte-promoting factor is a cytokine/hormone that is produced by neutrophils when they encounter a foreign antigen.
Revised: Leukocyte-promoting factor also known as leukopoietin is an obsolete term used to describe substances that are produced by neutrophils when they encounter a foreign antigen.
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Original: Leukocyte-promoting factor, also known as leukopoietin, is an obsolete term used to describe substances that are produced by neutrophils when they encounter a foreign antigen.
Revised: Leukocyte-promoting factor, more commonly known as leukopoietin, is an obsolete term used to describe substances that are produced by neutrophils when they encounter a foreign antigen.
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Original: Leukocyte-promoting factor, also known as leukopoietin, is an obsolete term used to describe substances that are produced by neutrophils when they encounter a foreign antigen.
Revised: Leukocyte-promoting factor, also known as leukopoietin, is a category of substances produced by neutrophils when they encounter a foreign antigen.
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Original: Muscles signals stimulated by neurological impulses are collected using electromyography (EMG).
Revised: Muscle signals stimulated by neurological impulses are collected using electromyography (EMG).
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Original:  The six determinants of gait predict very high energy expenditure for the sinusoidal motion of the Center of Mass during gait, while the inverted pendulum theory offers the possibility that energy expenditure can be near zero . Paradoxically, the inverted pendulum theory predicts that little to no work is required for walking.
Revised:  The six determinants of gait predict very high energy expenditure for the sinusoidal motion of the Center of Mass during gait, while the inverted pendulum theory offers the possibility that energy expenditure can be near zero ; the inverted pendulum theory predicts that little to no work is required for walking.
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Original:  The prime mover strategy over time has declined in popularity as it has been found through electromyography studies that no one muscle consistently provides more force that other muscles that are acting to move about a joint.
Revised:  The prime mover strategy over time has declined in popularity as it has been found through electromyography studies that no one muscle consistently provides more force than other muscles that are acting to move about a joint.
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Original:  The amplifier reproduces and undistorted bioelectric signal and also allows for noise reduction in the signal.
Revised:  The amplifier reproduces an undistorted bioelectric signal and also allows for noise reduction in the signal.
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Original: After the defeat of the Hyderabadi defense forces and merger of Hyderabad into the Union of India, he was kept under house arrest at his home in Begumpet , from where he escaped in March 1950  to Pakistan.
Revised: After the defeat of the Hyderabadi defense forces and merger of Hyderabad into the Union of India, he was kept under house arrest at his home in Begumpet . In March 1950 to Pakistan.
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Original:  He served as  Prime Minister of Hyderabad State from November 1947 until the Operation Polo "police action" of September 1948.
Revised:  He served as the Prime Minister of Hyderabad State from November 1947 until the Operation Polo "police action" of September 1948.
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Original:  It is, '... the belief that social progress is driven by technological innovation, which in turn follows an "inevitable" course.' (Michael L. Smith) .
Revised:  It is, '... the belief that social progress is driven by technological innovation, which in turn follows an "inevitable" course.' .
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Original: One of the most radical technological determinists was a man named Clarence Ayres , who was a follower of Veblen's theory in the 20th century.
Revised: One of the most radical technological determinists was Clarence Edwin Ayres|Clarence Ayres , who was a follower of Veblen's theory in the 20th century.
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Original: One of the most radical technological determinists was Clarence Edwin Ayres|Clarence Ayres , who was a follower of Veblen's theory in the 20th century.
Revised: One of the most radical technological determinists was Clarence Ayres , who was a follower of Veblen's theory in the 20th century.
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Original:  Subsequently, Laclau and Mouffe address the proliferation of "new subject positions" by locating their analysis on a post-Marxist non-essentialist framework .
Revised:  Subsequently, Laclau and Mouffe address the proliferation of "new subject positions" by locating their analysis on a post-Marxist non-essentialist framework 
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Original: Living people Category:Japanese illustrators Category:Japanese male pop singers Category:Japanese male singer-songwriters Category:Japanese singer-songwriters Category:Musicians from Tokushima Prefecture Category:People from Tokushima Prefecture Category:Universal Music Japan artists Category:Vocaloid musicians Category:21st-century Japanese singers Category:21st-century  male singers Category:People on the autism spectrum Category:People with Marfan syndro
Revised: Living people Category:Japanese illustrators Category:Japanese male pop singers Category:Japanese male singer-songwriters Category:Japanese singer-songwriters Category:Musicians from Tokushima Prefecture Category:People from Tokushima Prefecture Category:Universal Music Japan artists Category:Vocaloid musicians Category:21st-century Japanese singers Category:21st-century Japanese male singers Category:People on the autism spectrum Category:People with Marfan syndro
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Original:  This dependence reflects the Schulze-Hardy rule,Gold Book IUPAC.
Revised:  This dependence reflects the Schulze–Hardy rule,Gold Book IUPAC.
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Original:  The Schulze-Hardy rule can be derived from DLVO theory as well.
Revised:  The Schulze–Hardy rule can be derived from DLVO theory as well.
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Original:  During this process, particles dispersed in the liquid phase stick to each other, and spontaneously form irregular particle clusters , flocs, or aggregates .
Revised:  During this process, particles dispersed in the liquid phase stick to each other, and spontaneously form irregular particle assemblates , flocs, or aggregates .
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Original:  During this process, particles dispersed in the liquid phase stick to each other, and spontaneously form irregular particle clusters , flocs, or aggregates .
Revised:  During this process, particles dispersed in the liquid phase stick to each other, and spontaneously form irregular particle clusters , flocs, or agglomerates .
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Original:  Particle aggregation can be induced by adding salts or another chemical referred to as coagulant or flocculant.
Revised:  Particle agglomeration can be induced by adding salts or another chemical referred to as coagulant or flocculant.
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Original:  Particle aggregation can be induced by adding salts or another chemical referred to as coagulant or flocculant.
Revised:  Particle aggregation can be induced by adding salts or other chemicals referred to as coagulant or flocculant.
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Original:  Some people refer specifically to flocculation when aggregation is induced by addition of polymers or polyelectrolytes, while coagulation is used in a broader sense .
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Original:  Scheme of particle aggregation . Particles are dispersed individually in a  stable suspension, while they aggregate in an unstable suspension.
Revised:  Scheme of particle agglomeration . Particles are dispersed individually in a stable suspension, while they aggregate in an unstable suspension.
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Original:  As aggregation proceed from early to later states, the aggregates grow in size, and may eventually gel.
Revised:  As agglomeration proceed from early to later states, the aggregates grow in size, and may eventually gel.
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Original:  As aggregation proceed from early to later states, the aggregates grow in size, and may eventually gel.
Revised:  As aggregation proceed from early to later states, the agglomerates grow in size, and may eventually gel.
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Original:  Particle aggregation is normally an irreversible process.
Revised:  Particle agglomeration can be a reversible or irreversible process.
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Original:  In the course of aggregation, the aggregates will grow in size, and as a consequence they may settle to the bottom of the container, which is referred to as sedimentation.
Revised:  In the course of agglomeration, the agglomerates will grow in size, and as a consequence they may settle to the bottom of the container, which is referred to as sedimentation.
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Original:  The reverse process whereby particle aggregates are disrupted and dispersed as individual particles, referred to as peptization, hardly occurs spontaneously, but may occur under stirring or shear.
Revised:  The reverse process whereby particle agglomerates are re-dispersed as individual particles, referred to as peptization, hardly occurs spontaneously, but may occur under stirring or shear.
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Original:  Similar aggregation processes occur in other dispersed systems too.
Revised:  Similar agglomeration processes occur in other dispersed systems too.
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Original:  A1 + A1 → A2 In the early stage of the aggregation process, the suspension mainly contains particle monomers and some dimers .
Revised:  A1 + A1 → A2 In the early stage of the agglomeration process, the suspension mainly contains particle monomers and some dimers .
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Original:  A1 + A1 → A2 In the early stage of the aggregation process, the suspension mainly contains particle monomers and some dimers .
Revised:  A1 + A1 → A2 In the early stage of the aggregation process, the suspension mainly contains individual particle .
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Original:  The rate of this reaction is characterized by the aggregation rate coefficient k.
Revised:  The rate of this phenomenon is characterized by the aggregation rate coefficient k.
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Original:  The stability ratio is close to unity in the fast regime, increases in the slow regime, and becomes very large when the suspension is stable .
Revised:  The stability ratio is close to unity in the fast regime, increases in the slow regime, and becomes very large when the suspension is stable 
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Original:  This parameter provides a readily quantifiable measure of interparticle replusion , which is the key inhibitor of particle aggregation.
Revised:  This parameter provides a readily quantifiable measure of interparticle repulsion , which is the key inhibitor of particle aggregation.
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Original: A1 + A1 → A2 In the early stage of the agglomeration process, the suspension mainly contains individual particle.
Revised: A1 + A1 → A2 In the early stage of the aggregation process, the suspension mainly contains individual particle.
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Original: Particle agglomeration refers to formation of assemblages in a suspension and represents a mechanism leading to the functional destabilization of  colloidal systems.
Revised: Particle agglomeration refers to formation of assemblages in a suspension and represents a mechanism leading to the functional destabilization of hardik colloidal systems.
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Original: Particle agglomeration refers to formation of assemblages in a suspension and represents a mechanism leading to the functional destabilization of hardik colloidal systems.
Revised: Particle agglomeration refers to formation of assemblages in a suspension and represents a mechanism leading to the functional destabilization of colloidal systems.
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Original: In the early stage of the aggregation process, the suspension mainly contains individual particle .
Revised: In the early stage of the aggregation process, the suspension mainly contains individual particles .
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Original: Pedro Pablo Preux ( b. November 17, 1932 – d. June 16, 2011) was a Mexican tapestry maker of French origin, part of an effort to revive the craft as an art form in Europe under Jean Luçart then introducing and promoting the concept in Mexico in the 1960s and 1970s.
Revised: Pedro Pablo Preux ( November 17, 1932 – d. June 16, 2011) was a Mexican tapestry maker of French origin, part of an effort to revive the craft as an art form in Europe under Jean Luçart then introducing and promoting the concept in Mexico in the 1960s and 1970s.
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Original: Pedro Pablo Preux ( b. November 17, 1932 – d. June 16, 2011) was a Mexican tapestry maker of French origin, part of an effort to revive the craft as an art form in Europe under Jean Luçart then introducing and promoting the concept in Mexico in the 1960s and 1970s.
Revised: Pedro Pablo Preux ( b. November 17, 1932 – June 16, 2011) was a Mexican tapestry maker of French origin, part of an effort to revive the craft as an art form in Europe under Jean Luçart then introducing and promoting the concept in Mexico in the 1960s and 1970s.
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Original:  A. F. Montanaro led 87 officers, 1,550 soldiers and 2,100 carriers in four axes of advance to Arochukwu from Oguta, Akwete, Unwuna and Itu on a counter-insurgency campaign.
Revised:  A. F. Montanaro led 87 officers, 1,550 soldiers and 2,100 carriers in four axes of advance to Arochukwu from Oguta, Akwete, Unwana and Itu on a counter-insurgency campaign.
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Original:  The war began after increasing tension between Aro leaders and British colonialists after years of failed negotiations.
Revised:  The war began after increasing tension between Aro leaders and the British after years of failed negotiations.
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Original:  The Aro peoples use of divinatory practice in shrines dedicated to the god Ibin Ukpabi , to dominate enslavement activities, was perceived to be contrary to the imperial ambition of British powers , which was the cause of a need to consequently destroy the primary shrine, based at Arochukwu (according to : JI Ross, 2015) .
Revised:  The Aro peoples use of divinatory practice in shrines dedicated to the god Ibin Ukpabi was a critical element in their slavery practises , which was the cause of a need to consequently destroy the primary shrine, based at Arochukwu (according to : JI Ross, 2015) .
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Original:  Aro Opposition The Aros knew that British penetration would destroy their economic dominance of the hinterland .
Revised:  Aro Opposition The Aros had long opposed British colonial penetration in the hinterland, with such opposition being motivated in part by economic concern .
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Original:  The Aro Confederacy was destroyed and Eze Kanu Okoro (king of Arochukwu), went into hiding but was later arrested.
Revised:  The power hitherto held by the Aro Confederacy quickly evaporated and Eze Kanu Okoro (king of Arochukwu), went into hiding but was later arrested.
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Original:  Although Aro dominance crumbled in March 1902, many Aros took part in later resistances against the British in the region such as in Afikpo (1902–1903), Ezza (1905), and other areas where the Aro had a particularly significant presence.
Revised:  Although Aro dominance crumbled in March 1902, many Aros took part in guerilla campaigns against the British in the region such as in Afikpo (1902–1903), Ezza (1905), and other areas where the Aro had a particularly significant presence.
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Original: Reasons for the war advanced by Sir Ralph Moore , the British High Commissioner of the Nigerian Coast Protectorate, included: Aro Expedition Sir Ralph Moore and the Royal Niger Company had planned the attack on the Aros and the Ibini Ukpabi oracle since September 1899 but due to lack of necessary manpower, it was delayed until November 1901.
Revised: Reasons for the war advanced by Sir Ralph Moor , the British High Commissioner of the Nigerian Coast Protectorate, included: Aro Expedition Sir Ralph Moore and the Royal Niger Company had planned the attack on the Aros and the Ibini Ukpabi oracle since September 1899 but due to lack of necessary manpower, it was delayed until November 1901.
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Original: Reasons for the war advanced by Sir Ralph Moore , the British High Commissioner of the Nigerian Coast Protectorate, included: Aro Expedition Sir Ralph Moore and the Royal Niger Company had planned the attack on the Aros and the Ibini Ukpabi oracle since September 1899 but due to lack of necessary manpower, it was delayed until November 1901.
Revised: Reasons for the war advanced by Sir Ralph Moore , the British High Commissioner of the Nigerian Coast Protectorate, included: Aro Expedition Sir Ralph Moor and the Royal Niger Company had planned the attack on the Aros and the Ibini Ukpabi oracle since September 1899 but due to lack of necessary manpower, it was delayed until November 1901.
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Original: In the early part of the 21st-century, ISNA took on staff for the first time and began to engage closely with the Lawson Wilkins Pediatric Endocrine Society, establishing a North American Task Force on Intersex.
Revised: In the early part of the 21st-century, Intersex Society of North America (ISNA) took on staff for the first time and began to engage closely with the Lawson Wilkins Pediatric Endocrine Society, establishing a North American Task Force on Intersex.
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Original: Hermaphrodites with Attitude was a journal, edited by Cheryl Chase and published by the Intersex Society of North America (ISNA) between 1994 and 2005.
Revised: Hermaphrodites with Attitude was a newsletter edited by Cheryl Chase and published by the Intersex Society of North America (ISNA) between 1994 and 2005.
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Original:  The first issue appeared in Winter 1994, comprising 6 pages of articles, analysis and case studies, including articles by people with lived experience, activists, doctors and academics.
Revised:  The first issue appeared in Winter 1994, comprising 6 pages of articles, analysis and case studies, including articles by people with lived experience, activists, physicianss, and academics.
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Original:  The journal provided a voice for intersex activists for the first time, becoming a resource for intersex people and academics.
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Original:  These developments were stated in the journal 's first issue of the 21st-century, in February 2001, which also marked a change in name to "ISNA News".
Revised:  These developments were stated in the newsletter 's first issue of the 21st-century, in February 2001, which also marked a change in name to "ISNA News".
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Original:  Shifting attitudes This shift in name of the journal reflected a significant shift in the goals of ISNA.
Revised:  Shifting attitudes This shift in name of the newsletter reflected a significant shift in the goals of ISNA.
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Original:  ISNA has been survived or succeeded by several intersex civil society organizations, including the AIS Support Group USA (now called AISDSD), the Intersex Initiative, Bodies Like Ours, Organisation Intersex International, (now the Intersex Campaign for Equality) and Advocates for Informed Choice (now interACT)     
Revised:  ISNA has been survived or succeeded by several intersex civil society organizations, including the AIS Support Group USA (now called AISDSD), the Intersex Initiative, Bodies Like Ours, Organisation Intersex International, (now the Intersex Campaign for Equality) and Advocates for Informed Choice (now interACT) . 
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Original: Mohamed Yusuf belonged to a Kutchi Memon family which trace its roots to modern Gujarat, and was the only son of Haji Ismail Hasham.
Revised: Mohamed Yusuf belonged to a Kutchi Memon family which trace his roots to modern Gujarat, and was the only son of Haji Ismail Hasham.
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Original:  The Bombay Steam Navigation Company was engaged in trade along the Konkan coast, and Mohamed helped his father expand these activities.
Revised:  The Bombay Steam Navigation Company was engaged in trade along the Konkan coast, and Mohammed Yusuf helped his father expand these activities.
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Original: Mohamed Yusuf (, also known as Sir Mohamed Yusuf – ), (born 1876;
Revised: Mohamed Yusuf (, also known as Sir Mohammed Yusuf – ), (born 1876;
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Original:  A school was founded by Late Haji Ismail at Worli in 1910 for the sons and orphans of seafarers  : it was reopened as Lady Khatun Marium School in 1990.
Revised:  He founded a school for the sons and orphans of seafarers : it was reopened as Lady Khatun Marium School in 1990.
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Original: Mood tracking as a concept has existed within the realms of therapeutic psychology since the 1960s, generally prescribed as a self-help method to people suffering from mood disorders such as anxiety, clinical depression, and bipolar disorder.
Revised: Mood tracking is a positive psychology technique for improving mental health where a person records their mood, usually at set time intervals, in order to help identify patterns in how their mood varies. It is has been suggested as a self-help method to people suffering from mood disorders such as anxiety, clinical depression, and bipolar disorder.
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Original: Mood tracking as a concept has existed within the realms of therapeutic psychology since the 1960s, generally prescribed as a self-help method to people suffering from mood disorders such as anxiety, clinical depression, and bipolar disorder.
Revised: Mood tracking as a concept has existed within the realms of therapeutic psychology since the 1960s, generally prescribed as a self-help method for people suffering from mood disorders such as anxiety, clinical depression, and bipolar disorder.
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Original:  With the advent of digital technology, several appshave been made available to help users report on their mood swings and analyze what might be causing them.
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Original:   References 4. www.bstable.com Category:Psychothera
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