wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: The triptych form arises from early Christian art, and was a popular standard format for altar paintings from the Middle Ages onwards.
Revised: The triptych form appears in early Christian art, and was a popular standard format for altar paintings from the Middle Ages onwards.
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Original:  In 2010, there were estimated to 7.6 million child deaths around the world and most of it occurred in less developed countries and 4.7 million died from infection and disorder.
Revised:  In 2010, there was a global estimate of 7.6 million child deaths around the world and most of it occurred in less developed countries and 4.7 million died from infection and disorder.
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Original:  In 2010, there were estimated to 7.6 million child deaths around the world and most of it occurred in less developed countries and 4.7 million died from infection and disorder.
Revised:  In 2010, there were estimated to 7.6 million child deaths with most occurring in less developed countries and 4.7 million died from infection and disorder.
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Original:  In 2010, there were estimated to 7.6 million child deaths around the world and most of it occurred in less developed countries and 4.7 million died from infection and disorder.
Revised:  In 2010, there were estimated to 7.6 million child deaths around the world and most of it occurred in less developed countries . Among those, 4.7 million died from infection and disorder.
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Original:  In less developed countries, malnutrition is the main source of child mortality.
Revised:  In less developed countries, malnutrition is the main cause of child mortality.
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Original:  From 2000 to 2010, child mortality has dropped from  9.6 million to 7.6 million.
Revised:  From 2000 to 2010, child mortality hifhm 9.6 million to 7.6 million.
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Original:  However, the child mortality could be simplified into more specific terms such as prenatal, perinatal, Neonatal, infancy and under 5. Prenatal: child death before the birth, Perinatal: child death before one week of birth, Neonatal: child death before 28 days of birth, Infancy: child death before 1st birthday, and child mortality under 5 refer to any deaths from birth to the 5th birthday.
Revised:  More specific terms include:
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of births. Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life ÷ total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of births. Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life ÷ total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of births. Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: Number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
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Original:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of birth
Revised:  Perinatal mortality rate: Number of child deaths within first week of birth / total number of birth Neonatal mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 28 days of life / total number of birth Infancy mortality rate: number of child deaths within first 12 months of life / total number of birth Under 5 mortality rates: number of child deaths within 5th birthday / total number of births.
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Original:  File:Schnorr von Carolsfeld Bibel in Bildern 1860 103.png|This 1860 woodcut by Julius Schnorr von Karolsfeld depicts the death of Bathsheba's first child with David, who lamented, "I shall go to him, but he will not return to me"() Measurement Causes upright=1.
Revised:  Measurement Causes upright=1.
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Original:  Fortunately, he recovered and in 2020 became the South Africa IMMAF light-heavyweight URL
Revised:  Fortunately, he recovered and in 2020 became the South Africa IMMAF light-heavyweight champion.
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Original:  Due to the First World War, the trip was not easily arranged, but Lenin and his company traveled through Germany in a sealed traincar .
Revised:  Due to the First World War, the trip was not easily arranged, but Lenin and his company traveled through Germany in a sealed train car .
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Original: 200px|Fritz Platten, approx. 1930.
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Original:  In 1935, she was a top functionary fot the OMS in Moscow as head of the courier section at the OMS headquarters of the OMS or International Liaison Department, the most secret section of the Comintern.
Revised:  In 1935, she was a top functionary for the OMS in Moscow as head of the courier section at the OMS headquarters of the OMS or International Liaison Department, the most secret section of the Comintern.
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Original: Platten was present when Lenin’s car was attacked in Petrograd on January 14 , 1918 ( Jan 1  O.S.).
Revised: Platten was present when Lenin’s car was attacked in Petrograd on 14 , 1918 ( Jan 1 O.S.).
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Original: Platten was present when Lenin’s car was attacked in Petrograd on January 14 , 1918 ( Jan 1  O.S.).
Revised: Platten was present when Lenin’s car was attacked in Petrograd on January 14 , 1918 ( 1 O.S.).
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Original:  SPP in Stokes flow, such as Janus particles, are often modeled by the squirmer model .
Revised:  SPP in Stokes flow, such as Janus particles, are often modeled by the squirmer model 
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Original:  See also Clustering of self-propelled particles Janus particles Vicsek model%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Further references%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Swarming desert locusts –
Revised:  See also Clustering of self-propelled particles Janus particles Vicsek model%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Swarming desert locusts –
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Original:  Video clip from Planet Earth Category:Behavior Category:Complex systems theory Category:Ethology Category:Scientific modeling Category:Multi-agent systems Category:Zoolo
Revised:  Video clip from Planet Earth 
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Original: Lourens (Laurie) Wepener Hugo Ackermann (b 14 January 1934) is one of the four judges appointed to the Constitutional Court of South Africa .
Revised: Lourens (Laurie) Wepener Hugo Ackermann (b 14 January 1934) is a former justice of the Constitutional Court of South Africa .
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Original:  He is married to Denise and has three children   .
Revised:  He is married to Denise and has three children . .
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Original: Description The software is designed as an offline reader for  web content.
Revised: Description The software is designed as an offline reader for a web content.
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Original: In 2012  Kiwix won a grant from Wikimedia France to build kiwix-plug, which was deployed to universities in eleven countries known as the Afripedia Project.
Revised: In 2012 , Kiwix won a grant from Wikimedia France to build kiwix-plug, which was deployed to universities in eleven countries known as the Afripedia Project.
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Original:  In November 2014  a ZIM version of all open texts forming part of Project Gutenberg was made available.
Revised:  In November 2014 , a ZIM version of all open texts forming part of Project Gutenberg was made available.
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Original: Alternative software to read .zim files GoldenDict is a Free and Open Source (FOSS) software that supports the .zim file format since 2013 . Wiktionary/Wikipedia .zim files in any language can be used offline on GoldenDict PC version (Linux, Windows and Mac) but not Androidversion.
Revised: See also GoldenDict supports the ZIM file format since 2013 . Wiktionary/Wikipedia .zim files in any language can be used offline on GoldenDict PC version (Linux, Windows and Mac) but not Androidversion.
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Original:  GoldenDict can also create a full-text index of . zim files and is an excellent alternative to the Official Kiwix software.
Revised:  GoldenDict can also create a full-text 
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Original:  See also XOWA Internet-in-a-Box Wikipedia:Database download GoldenDict
Revised:  indices. XOWA Internet-in-a-Box Wikipedia:Database download GoldenDict
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Original:  The Kumari is revered and worshiped by some of the country's Hindus too  While there are several Kumaris throughout Nepal, with some cities having several, the best known is the Royal Kumari of Kathmandu, and she lives in the Kumari Ghar, a palace in the center of the city.
Revised:  The Kumari is revered and worshiped by some of the country's Hindus too . While there are several Kumaris throughout Nepal, with some cities having several, the best known is the Royal Kumari of Kathmandu, and she lives in the Kumari Ghar, a palace in the center of the city.
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Original: In Kathmandu Valley, this is a particularly prevalent practice.  is believed to be the incarnation of Taleju, a manifestation of the goddess Durga.
Revised: In Kathmandu Valley, this is a particularly prevalent practice. It is believed to be the incarnation of Taleju, a manifestation of the goddess Durga.
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Original:  The selection process is conducted by five senior Buddhist Bhajracharya priests, the Panch Buddha, the Bada Guruju or Chief Royal Priest, Achajau, the priest of Taleju and the royal astrologer.
Revised:  The selection process is conducted by five senior Buddhist Vajracharya priests, the Panch Buddha, the Bada Guruju or Chief Royal Priest, Achajau, the priest of Taleju and the royal astrologer.
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Original:  This tradition has changed from 2008 A.D. with the country becoming  of the youngest republics in the world.
Revised:  This tradition has changed from 2008 A.D. with the country becoming one of the youngest republics in the world.
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Original: History in Nepal 250px|Kumari in 2011 Whilst the veneration of a living Kumari in Nepal is relatively recent, dating only from the 17th century, the tradition of Kumari-Puja, or virgin worship, has been around for much longer.
Revised: History in Nepal Whilst the veneration of a living Kumari in Nepal is relatively recent, dating only from the 17th century, the tradition of Kumari-Puja, or virgin worship, has been around for much longer.
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Original:  Given an antenna's power density (watts per square meter), i.e. the radial component of the Poynting vector, radiation intensity is calculated by multiplying it with the square of the distance () from the antenna to the designated solid angle:%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The radiation intensity is expressed in watts per unit solid angle (watts per steradian).
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The radiation intensity is expressed in watts per unit solid angle (watts per steradian).
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Antennas for all applications (3rd edition), by John de Kraus, Ronald J. Marhefka, 2002, ISBN 0-07-232103-2%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Radiation: Activity and Intensity NDE/NDT Resource Center Category:Antennas (radio) Category:Radio terminolo
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Antennas for all applications (3rd edition), by John de Kraus, Ronald J. Marhefka, 2002, ISBN 0-07-232103-2%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Radiation: Activity and Intensity NDE/NDT Resource Center Category:Antennas (radio) Category:Radio terminolo
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Antennas for all applications (3rd edition), by John de Kraus, Ronald J. Marhefka, 2002, ISBN 0-07-232103-2%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Radiation: Activity and Intensity NDE/NDT Resource Center Category:Antennas (radio) Category:Radio terminolo
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Radiation: Activity and Intensity NDE/NDT Resource Center Category:Antennas (radio) Category:Radio terminolo
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Original:  Some philosophers state that values don't exist on the most fundamental level of reality.
Revised:  Some philosophers state that values do not exist on the most fundamental level of reality.
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Original:  One reason for considering this idea is that adding or removing extrinsically valuable things doesn't affect the value of the whole if all intrinsically valuable things are kept constant.
Revised:  One reason for considering this idea is that adding or removing extrinsically valuable things does not affect the value of the whole if all intrinsically valuable things are kept constant.
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Original:  But arguably, the world wouldn't have been a better place if exactly the same damage had been caused without the earthquake.
Revised:  But arguably, the world would not have been a better place if exactly the same damage had been caused without the earthquake.
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Original:  This means that the entity couldn't have a different intrinsic value unless it had different intrinsic features.
Revised:  This means that the entity could not have a different intrinsic value unless it had different intrinsic features.
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Original: Other concepts and distinctions Many evaluative terms are found in natural language, often with various different meanings.
Revised: Other concepts and distinctions Many evaluative terms are found in everyday language, often with various different meanings.
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Original:  One such distinction is between a predicative and a attributive sense of good and bad.
Revised:  One such distinction is between a predicative and an attributive sense of good and bad.
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Original:  This concept led philosophers to distinguish between judgments based on fact and judgments based on values, creating  division between science and philosophy.
Revised:  This concept led philosophers to distinguish between judgments based on fact and judgments based on values, creating the division between science and philosophy.
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Original:  For example, tools like cars or microwaves are said to be extrinsically valuable in virtue of the function they perform, while the well-being they cause is intrinsically valuable, according to hedonism.
Revised:  For example, tools like cars or microwaves are said to be extrinsically valuable by virtue of the function they perform, while the well-being they cause is intrinsically valuable, according to hedonism.
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Original:  Very early in his career his name featured among Indian film makers revered internationally.
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Original: Career Sarath ’ s rendezvous with films started with Sayahnam (Twilight) in 2000.
Revised: Career Sarath ' s rendezvous with films started with Sayahnam (Twilight) in 2000.
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Original:  The film celebrates Chaplin ’ s life at the centennial commemoration of his acting career.
Revised:  The film celebrates Chaplin ' s life at the centennial commemoration of his acting career.
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Original:  He believes his life resembles Chaplin ’ s and nurtures the desire to depict his hero on the big screen.
Revised:  He believes his life resembles Chaplin ' s and nurtures the desire to depict his hero on the big screen.
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Original:  Of date there are 10 documentaries and 5 short films also to Sarath ’ s credit.
Revised:  Of date there are 10 documentaries and 5 short films also to Sarath ' s credit.
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