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Original:  They retired from animation in 1978, but remained popular speakers and authors about Disney and animation    
Revised:  They retired from animation in 1978, but remained popular speakers and authors about Disney and animation . 
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Original:  The pair met at Stanford University in the 1930s and worked together until Thomas' s death.
Revised:  The pair met at Stanford University in the 1930s and worked together until Thomas' death.
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Original:  "Ollie was part of an amazing generation of artists, one of the real pioneers of our art, one of the major participants in the blossoming of animation into the art form we know today," saidRoy E. Disney.
Revised:  "Ollie was part of an amazing generation of artists, one of the real pioneers of our art, one of the major participants in the blossoming of animation into the art form we know today," said Roy E. Disney.
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Original:  Ollie Johnston's last film was The Fox and the Hound released in 1981 
Revised:  Ollie Johnston's last film was The Fox and the Hound ( 1981 
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Original: In the opening day of a Senate inquiry into compensation for Australia's "Stolen Generations", Aboriginal elder Kathleen Mills has claimed that children held in Darwin's Kahlin Compound in the 1920s and '30s were injected with an experimental serum.
Revised: During the opening day of a Senate inquiry into compensation for Australia's "Stolen Generations", Aboriginal elder Kathleen Mills has claimed that children held in Darwin's Kahlin Compound in the 1920s and '30s were injected with an experimental serum.
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Original: Mills' claim, aimed at highlighting the difficult experienced by Aboriginal people in accessing records, has had the effect of "throwing the cat among the pigeons", and Mills has asked for the Government's assistance in "opening Pandora's box" with regards to records she says will be found in departmental archives.
Revised: Mills' claim, aimed at highlighting the difficulty experienced by Aboriginal people in accessing records, has had the effect of "throwing the cat among the pigeons", and Mills has asked for the Government's assistance in "opening Pandora's box" with regards to records she says will be found in departmental archives.
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Original: Neel Shah commented in Radar Online that it was "a stretch" to link the suicide to the personality test, "particularly for someone who hadn't yet totally immersed herself in the Scientology dogma".
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Original:  Matthias Fosse, information chief for the Church of Scientology in Norway, rejected any  connection between Scientology and Ballo's suicide, and denied that the personality test was "dangerous", saying that millions of people have taken it.
Revised:  Matthias Fosse, information chief for the Church of Scientology in Norway, rejected any links connection between Scientology and Ballo's suicide, and denied that the personality test was "dangerous", saying that millions of people have taken it.
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Original:  The family blames the Church of Scientology for her death and decided to go public with the story, after the test results and a suicide note were discovered after Ballo's death.
Revised:  The family blames the Church of Scientology for her death and decided to go public with the story, after the test results and a suicide note were discovred after Ballo's death.
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Original:  The family blames the Church of Scientology for her death and decided to go public with the story, after the test results and a suicide note were discovred after Ballo's death.
Revised:  The family blames the Church of Scientology for her death and decided to go public with the story, after the test results and a suicide note were discovered after Ballo's death.
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Original: Tropical Depression Adrian May 20 15:45 UTC "Communism was much better," said Tsahiriin Daariimaa Saturday on the eve of Mongolia's presidential elections.
Revised: Mongolia "Communism was much better," said Tsahiriin Daariimaa Saturday on the eve of Mongolia's presidential elections.
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Original:  In an unprecedented gesture, he was greeted by President George W. Bush, Laura Bush and one of their daughters, Jenna, upon his arrival at Andrews Air Force Base in Maryland.
Revised:  In an unprecedented gesture, he was greeted by President George W. Bush, Laura Bush and their daughter Jenna, upon his arrival at Andrews Air Force Base in Maryland.
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Original:  "In this regard your efforts to heal and protect are bearing great fruit not only for those directly under your pastoral care, but for all of society," said Benedict XVI   .
Revised:  "In this regard your efforts to heal and protect are bearing great fruit not only for those directly under your pastoral care, but for all of society," said Benedict XVI . .
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Original:  This makes it "one of the largest arrival ceremonies ever held at the White House," according to White House Press Secretary Dana Perino.
Revised:  This made it "one of the largest arrival ceremonies ever held at the White House," according to White House Press Secretary Dana Perino.
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Original:  He appealed for support "for the patient efforts of international diplomacy to resolve conflicts and promote progress." Kevin Waymel, 26, travelled from San Francisco with 80 others to see the Pope.
Revised:  He appealed for support "for the patient efforts of international diplomacy to resolve conflicts and promote progress." Kevin Waymel, 26, traveled from San Francisco with 80 others to see the Pope.
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Original:  Some victims had hoped the Pope would have critcised bishops for transferring pedophile priests from parish to parish.
Revised:  Some victims had hoped the Pope would have criticized bishops for transferring pedophile priests from parish to parish.
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Original:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium   
Revised:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium . 
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Original:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium . poopy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:The Vatican Category:Religion Category:Christianity Category:George W. Bush Category:Pope Benedict X
Revised:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium poopy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:The Vatican Category:Religion Category:Christianity Category:George W. Bush Category:Pope Benedict X
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Original:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium . poopy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:The Vatican Category:Religion Category:Christianity Category:George W. Bush Category:Pope Benedict X
Revised:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:The Vatican Category:Religion Category:Christianity Category:George W. Bush Category:Pope Benedict X
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Original:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium . poopy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:North America Category:United States Category:The Vatican Category:Religion Category:Christianity Category:George W. Bush Category:Pope Benedict X
Revised:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium . poopy%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadium
Revised:  After that, he will travel to New York City where he plans to address the United Nations, visit the World Trade Center site, and celebrate Mass at Yankee Stadiu
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Original: The location of the crash A plane like the one involved in the crash In Goma, on the eastern side of the Democratic Republic of the Congo (DRC), at least 70 people, according to officials, have died because of a plane crash yesterday.
Revised: The location of the crash In Goma, on the eastern side of the Democratic Republic of the Congo (DRC), at least 70 people, according to officials, have died because of a plane crash yesterday.
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Original: The location of the crash Crash scene VOA has reported that as many as 100 people could have been on board the plane at the time of its crash.
Revised: The location of the crash VOA has reported that as many as 100 people could have been on board the plane at the time of its crash.
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Original:  A plane like the one involved in the crash As of 08:00 UTC, the majority of the Hewa Bora website was not available  
Revised:  As of 08:00 UTC, the majority of the Hewa Bora website was not available 
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Original:  A plane like the one involved in the crash As of 08:00 UTC, the majority of the Hewa Bora website was not available  
Revised:  A plane like the one involved in the crash As of 08:00 UTC, the majority of the Hewa Bora website was not available . 
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Original:  The Planetary Society is planning on launching a solar sail ,  Cosmos 1 , from a Russian submarine within the next few weeks
Revised:  The Planetary Society is planning on launching a solar sail , Cosmos 1 will be launched from a Russian submarine within the next few weeks
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Original:  The purpose is simply to test the propulsion system that uses the pressure from solar light particles to move the ship outward from a starting orbit around the earth at 500 miles  
Revised:  The purpose is simply to test the propulsion system that uses the pressure from solar light particles to move the ship outward from a starting orbit around the earth at 500 miles . 
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Original: Shot into orbit by a converted intercontinental ballistic missile (ICBM), the Cosmos 1 would be launched from a submereged Russian submarine from within the Barents Sea.
Revised: Shot into orbit by a converted intercontinental ballistic missile (ICBM), the Cosmos 1 would be launched from a submerged Russian submarine from within the Barents Sea.
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Original:  Theoretically, speeds can reach the speed of light with the efficiencies of the spacecraft not having to carry its own fuel  
Revised:  Theoretically, speeds can reach the speed of light with the efficiencies of the spacecraft not having to carry its own fuel . 
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Original:  Theoretically , speeds can reach the speed of light with the efficiencies of the spacecraft not having to carry its own fuel  .
Revised:  Theoretically , speeds can reach the speed of light . This is due to the efficiencies of the spacecraft not having to carry its own fuel .
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Original:  ]] [w: Biofuel |Biofuels], fuels made from plant products such as sugar cane and maize, including ethanol and biodiesel, were the subject of recent workshops held at the European Parliament.
Revised:  ]] [w: Biofuels |Biofuels], fuels made from plant products such as sugar cane and maize, including ethanol and biodiesel, were the subject of recent workshops held at the European Parliament.
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Original:  ]] w:Biofuels| Biofuels , fuels made from plant products such as sugar cane and maize, including ethanol and biodiesel, were the subject of recent workshops held at the European Parliament.
Revised:  ]] Biofuels , fuels made from plant products such as sugar cane and maize, including ethanol and biodiesel, were the subject of recent workshops held at the European Parliament.
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Original: "I believe that the mixing of biofuels with mineral oils can provide us with significantly cleaner fuel," said Mr. Parish.
Revised:  said Mr. Parish.
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Original: Recent reports also link biofuels to a growing world food shortage.
Revised: Recent studies also link biofuels to a growing world food shortage.
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Original:  Below is the relevant quote:  Mr. Parish also mentioned road pricingin the interview . Biofuels are often used because they provide a way of limiting the emissions of carbon dioxide .
Revised:  Below is the relevant quote: Mr. Parish include road pricing . Biofuels are often used because they provide a way of limiting the emissions of carbon dioxide .
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Original:  Politicians are increasingly recognizing that these potential advantages of biofuels need to be balanced against the dangers of the destruction of rainforests and internationally high food prices
Revised:  However, politicians are increasingly recognizing that these potential advantages of biofuels need to be balanced against the dangers of the destruction of rainforests and internationally high food prices
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Original:  In an interview with Wikinews, Neil Parish, the chair of the Agricultural committee of the European parliament discussed biofuels and impact of different forms of transporton the environment.
Revised:  In an interview with Wikinews, Neil Parish, the chair of the Agricultural committee of the European parliament 
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Original:  The International Herald Tribune reports,  The European Parliament Neil Parish, in his Wikinews interview , also said that encouraging public transport was an important method of combating climate change.
Revised:  The International Herald Tribune reports, The European Parliament In the interview Parish also said that encouraging public transport was an important method of combating climate change.
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Original:  He points out the needs of European's rural poor.
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Original:  Other alternatives mentioned by Mr. Parish include road pricing . Mr. Parish and his colleagues at the European Parliament face increasingly difficult choices about fuel use and consumption.
Revised:  Mr. Parish include road pricing . Mr. Parish and his colleagues at the European Parliament face increasingly difficult choices about fuel use and consumption.
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Original:  Other alternatives mentioned by Mr. Parish include road pricing . Mr. Parish and his colleagues at the European Parliament face increasingly difficult choices about fuel use and consumption.
Revised:  Other alternatives mentioned by Mr. Parish Mr. Parish and his colleagues at the European Parliament face increasingly difficult choices about fuel use and consumption.
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Original:  Biofuels offer the possibility  of limiting the emissions of carbon dioxide and providing sources of fuel not dependent upon the oil and gas industries of the Middle East and elsewhere.
Revised:  Biofuels offer the possibility Biofuels are often used because they provide a way of limiting the emissions of carbon dioxide and providing sources of fuel not dependent upon the oil and gas industries of the Middle East and elsewhere.
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Original:  ]] Neil Parish, the chair of the Agricultural committee of the European parliament. was recently interviewed by Wikinews on the subject of biofuels and renewable transport.
Revised:  ]] Neil Parish, the chair of the Agricultural committee of the European Parliament, was recently interviewed by Wikinews on the subject of biofuels and renewable transport.
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Original:  This came after a workshop was held in the European Parliament of the subject of biofuels.
Revised:  The interview was held after a workshop was held in the European Parliament of the subject of biofuels.
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Original:  A Press Release by the European Parliament about the workshop stated possible disadvantages to biofuels . Below is a quote from the release :
Revised:  In a press release by the European Parliament about the workshop stated possible disadvantages to biofuels . Below is a quote from the release :
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Original:  A Press Release by the European Parliament about the workshop stated possible disadvantages to biofuels . Below is a quote from the release :
Revised:  A Press Release by the European Parliament about the workshop , the legislative body stated some possible disadvantages to biofuels . Below is a quote from the release :
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Original:  A Press Release by the European Parliament about the workshop stated possible disadvantages to biofuels . Below is a quote from the release :
Revised:  A Press Release by the European Parliament about the workshop stated possible disadvantages to biofuels :
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Original:  It will be operated by the Air Force Research Laboratory , and Space Test Program offices of the United States Air Force.
Revised:  It will be operated by the Air Force Research Laboratory and Space Test Program offices of the United States Air Force.
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Original:  It is the first launch of a Pegasusrocket in almost a year.
Revised:  It is the first launch of a Pegasus rocket in almost a year.
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Original:  Jacob Zuma, leader of the ruling ZANU-PF party, disagreed with Mbeki, saying that "the situation is more worrying now given the reported violence that has erupted."
Revised:  Jacob Zuma, leader of South Africa's ruling ANC party, disagreed with Mbeki, saying that "the situation is more worrying now given the reported violence that has erupted."
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Original: A new intelligent design creationist movie, Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed starring Ben Stein, is scheduled to debut April 18th , but several different sources have accused the film's producer of copyright violations.
Revised: A new intelligent design creationist movie, Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed starring Ben Stein, is scheduled to debut April 18 , but several different sources have accused the film's producer of copyright violations.
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Original:  On April 9th , a cease-and-desist letter was sent to the producers of Expelled, alleging that an identical copy of XVIVO's video, created in partnership with Harvard University entitled The Inner Life of the Cell, infringed on XVIVO/Harvard's property.
Revised:  On April 9 , a cease-and-desist letter was sent to the producers of Expelled, alleging that an identical copy of XVIVO's video, created in partnership with Harvard University entitled The Inner Life of the Cell, infringed on XVIVO/Harvard's property.
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Original:  Shortly after, a letter was sent by David Bolinsky of XVIVO who wrote that Expelled  misuse of XVIVO/Harvard's work is harmful to their work.
Revised:  Shortly after, a letter was sent by David Bolinsky of XVIVO who wrote that Expelled '''s misuse of XVIVO/Harvard's work is harmful to their work.
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Original:  Then on April 16th the The Wall Street Journal reported that Expelled producers did not receive permission to use John Lennon's "Imagine" from Yoko Ono, who possesses the copyright on the music.
Revised:  On April 16, the The Wall Street Journal reported that Expelled producers did not receive permission to use John Lennon's "Imagine" from Yoko Ono, who possesses the copyright on the music.
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Original:  In addition, Myers believes Expelled copied material without permission from WEHI-TV and Public Broadcasting Service's video The Central Dogma: Transcription of DNA to RNA.  The film has not been without controversy as the scientific community does not believe intelligent design is science and has panned the movie as "anti-science."
Revised:  In addition, Myers believes Expelled copied material without permission from WEHI-TV and Public Broadcasting Service's video The Central Dogma: Transcription of DNA to RNA. '' The film has not been without controversy as the scientific community does not believe intelligent design is science and has panned the movie as "anti-science."
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Original:  Furthermore, the film received attention a month ago when Myers, who is interviewed and thanked in the film, was asked to leave a free screening of the movie by Mark Mathis, the movie's Associate Producer .
Revised:  Furthermore, the film received attention a month ago when Myers, who is interviewed and thanked in the film, was asked to leave a free screening of the movie by Mark Mathis, the movie's associate producer .
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Original:  A new intelligent design creationist movie, Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed starring Ben Stein, is scheduled to debut April 18, but several different sources have accused the film's producer of copyright violations.
Revised: Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed A new intelligent design creationist movie, Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed starring Ben Stein, is scheduled to debut April 18, but several different sources have accused the film's producer of copyright violations.
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Original:  Though the movie has been criticized by Dr. Richard Dawkins, Dr. PZ Myers, and Dr. Eugenie Scott  who said they were tricked into appearing the film as well as from movie critics and scientists, the legal issues might develop into trouble for the producers.
Revised:  Though the movie has been criticized by Dr. Richard Dawkins, Dr. PZ Myers, and Dr. Eugenie Scott , who said they were tricked into appearing the film as well as from movie critics and scientists, the legal issues might develop into trouble for the producers.
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Original:  Though the movie has been criticized by Dr. Richard Dawkins, Dr. PZ Myers, and Dr. Eugenie Scott  who said they were tricked into appearing the film as well as from movie critics and scientists, the legal issues might develop into trouble for the producers.
Revised:  Though the movie has been criticized by Dr. Richard Dawkins, Dr. PZ Myers, and Dr. Eugenie Scott who said they were tricked into appearing in the film, as well as from movie critics and scientists, the legal issues might develop into trouble for the producers.
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Original:  At the same time, it was noted that the producer also did not receieve permission from The Killers for their song "All these Things That I Have Done."
Revised:  At the same time, it was noted that the producer also did not receive permission from The Killers for their song "All these Things That I Have Done."
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Original:  However, Mathis did not notice Dawkins standing in line next to Myers who subsequently saw the film and wrote critically of it  
Revised:  However, Mathis did not notice Dawkins standing in line next to Myers who subsequently saw the film and wrote critically of it . 
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Original: Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed A new intelligent design creationist movie, Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed  starring Ben Stein, is scheduled to debut April 18, but several different sources have accused the film's producer of copyright violations.
Revised: Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed A new intelligent design creationist movie, Expelled: No Intelligence Allowed , starring Ben Stein, is scheduled to debut April 18, but several different sources have accused the film's producer of copyright violations.
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