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Original: Philosophy and sentience In philosophy, sentience is often used as synonymous with consciousness, but different authors draw different distinctions  .
Revised: Philosophy and sentience In philosophy, sentience is often used as synonymous with consciousness, but different authors draw different distinctions between consciousness and sentience .
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Original:  These further features of consciousness may not be necessary for sentience, which rests on the capacity to feel sensations and emotions.
Revised:  These further features of consciousness may not be necessary for sentience, which is the capacity to feel sensations and emotions.
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Original:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, points out that sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, but sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valance (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
Revised:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, says that sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, but sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valance (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
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Original:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, points out that sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, but sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valance (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
Revised:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, points out that sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, and sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valance (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
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Original:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, points out that sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, but sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valance (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
Revised:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, points out that sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, but sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valence (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
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Original:  In An Introduction to the Principles of Morals and Legislation , Jeremy Bentham argues that it is not the ability to reason or talk that gives a being moral status, but their ability to suffer.
Revised:  In An Introduction to the Principles of Morals and Legislation :
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Original:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, says that     sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, and sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valence (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
Revised:  Consciousness sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, and sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valence (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
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Original:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, says that     sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, and sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valence (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
Revised:  David Chalmers, on the other hand, says that sentience is sometimes used as shorthand for phenomenal consciousness, the capacity to have any subjective experience at all, but sometimes refers to the narrower concept of affective consciousness, the capacity to experience subjective states that have affective valence (i.e. a positive or negative character), such as pain and pleasure.
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Original:  Psycoloquy Newsletter Consciousness According to Thomas Nagel in his paper "What Is It Like to Be a Bat?", consciousness can refer to the ability of any entity to have subjective perceptual experiences, or as some philosophers refer to them, "qualia"—in other words, the ability to have states that it feels like something to be in.
Revised:  Psycoloquy Newsletter According to Thomas Nagel in his paper "What Is It Like to Be a Bat?", consciousness can refer to the ability of any entity to have subjective perceptual experiences, or as some philosophers refer to them, "qualia"—in other words, the ability to have states that it feels like something to be in.
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Original: Jobi Ludolfi et Godofredi Guilelmi Leibnitii Commercium Epistolicum, Göttingen, 1755 He was the President of the Collegium Imperiale Historicum.
Revised: Jobi Ludolfi et Godofredi Guilelmi Leibnitii Commercium Epistolicum, Göttingen, 1755 
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Original: thumb Hiob Ludolf (or Job Leutholf) (15 June 1624 – 8 April 1704) was a German orientalist, and born at Erfurt.
Revised: thumb Hiob Ludolf (or Job Leutholf) (15 June 1624 – 8 April 1704) was a German orientalist, born at Erfurt.
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Original: thumb Hiob Ludolf (or Job Leutholf) ( 15 June 1624– 8 April 1704)  was a German orientalist, born at Erfurt.
Revised: thumb Hiob or Job Ludolf ( or ; 15 June 1624– 8 April 1704) was a German orientalist, born at Erfurt.
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Original:  and the Historia aethiopica (Frankfort, 1681), which has been translated into English, French and Dutch, and which was supplemented by a Commentarius (1691)  and by Appendices (1693-1694).
Revised:  and the Historia aethiopica (Frankfort, 1681), which has been translated into English, French and Dutch, and which was supplemented by a Commentarius (1691) . and by Appendices (1693-1694).
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Original:  A new history of Ethiopia being a full and accurate description of the kingdom of Abessinia, vulgarly, though erroneously, called the Empire of Prester John  by the learned Job Ludolphus, translated out of his learned manuscript commentary on this history (1684) available on Early English Books Online
Revised:  A new history of Ethiopia being a full and accurate description of the kingdom of Abessinia, vulgarly, though erroneously, called the Empire of Prester John '' by the learned Job Ludolphus, translated out of his learned manuscript commentary on this history (1684) available on Early English Books Online
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Original:  A new history of Ethiopia being a full and accurate description of the kingdom of Abessinia, vulgarly, though erroneously, called the Empire of Prester John '' by the learned Job Ludolphus, translated out of his learned manuscript commentary on this history (1684) available on Early English Books Online
Revised:  A new history of Ethiopia being a full and accurate description of the kingdom of Abessinia, vulgarly, though erroneously, called the Empire of Prester John by the learned Job Ludolphus, translated out of his learned manuscript commentary on this history (1684) available on Early English Books Online
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Original:  On 23rd November 2021 Wriddhiman Saha decided that he will retire from International cricket.
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Original:  He also Played in tests of Gandhi-Mandela Freedom Trophy 2015.
Revised:  He also played in tests of Gandhi-Mandela Freedom Trophy 2015.
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Original:  He was also selected For 5 Test match series against England in India but played only in 1st and 2nd matches and was out of rest matches of series due to injury.
Revised:  He was also selected for 5 Test match series against England in India but played only in 1st and 2nd matches and was out of rest matches of series due to injury.
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Original:  He was also selected For 5 Test match series against England in India but played only in 1st and 2nd matches and was out of rest matches of series due to injury.
Revised:  He was also selected For 5 match Test series against England in India but played only in 1st and 2nd matches and was out of rest matches of series due to injury.
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Original:  India were 328/ 6. Still, 123 behind Australia's first innings total of 451 when he came to bat and added 199 for the seventh wicket with Cheteshwar Pujara.
Revised:  India were 328/ 6, which was 123 behind Australia's first innings total of 451 when he came to bat and added 199 for the seventh wicket with Cheteshwar Pujara.
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Original:  Later on he got injured in that series and did not play the final test .
Revised:  Later on he got injured in that series and did not play the final match .
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Original:  He was not selected for 5 Test match series Of India's tour Of England in 2018 due to injury and he was replaced by Rishabh Pant and Pant's good performances made Saha out of team and he was not selected for India's tour of Australia in 2018-19.
Revised:  He was not selected for 5 Test match series in India's tour Of England in 2018 due to injury and he was replaced by Rishabh Pant and Pant's good performances made Saha out of team and he was not selected for India's tour of Australia in 2018-19.
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Original:  He was not selected for 5 Test match series Of India's tour Of England in 2018 due to injury and he was replaced by Rishabh Pant and Pant's good performances made Saha out of team and he was not selected for India's tour of Australia in 2018-19.
Revised:  He was not selected for 5 Test match series Of India's tour of England in 2018 due to injury and he was replaced by Rishabh Pant and Pant's good performances made Saha out of team and he was not selected for India's tour of Australia in 2018-19.
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Original:  He was not selected for 5 Test match series Of India's tour Of England in 2018 due to injury and he was replaced by Rishabh Pant and Pant's good performances made Saha out of team and he was not selected for India's tour of Australia in 2018-19.
Revised:  He was not selected for 5 Test match series Of India's tour Of England in 2018 due to injury and he was replaced by Rishabh Pant . Pant's good performances made Saha out of team and he was not selected for India's tour of Australia in 2018-19.
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Original:  Later on, After Recovering from Injuries He was part of test team and India A team that Toured West Indies in 2019.
Revised:  Later on, after recovering from injuries, he was part of test team and India A team that Toured West Indies in 2019.
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Original:  Later on, After Recovering from Injuries He was part of test team and India A team that Toured West Indies in 2019.
Revised:  Later on, After Recovering from Injuries He was part of India A team that Toured West Indies in 2019.
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Original:  He played in the 3 match Test series against South Africa in India in 2019 and did many magical catches.
Revised:  He played in the 3 match Test series against South Africa in India in 2019 and took many magical catches.
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Original:  He substituted Rishabh Pant in Pink Test 3rd Innings  and helped Navdeep Saini get his first Test wicket.
Revised:  He substituted Rishabh Pant in the 3rd Innings and helped Navdeep Saini get his first Test wicket.
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Original:  Indian Premier League Saha played for Kolkata Knight Riders in the first three sessions on IPL but in 2011 he was picked by Chennai Super Kings as a reserve wicketkeeper for MS Dhoni.
Revised:  Indian Premier League Saha played for Kolkata Knight Riders in the first three sessions on IPL but in 2011 he was picked by Chennai Super Kings as a reserve wicket keeper for MS Dhoni.
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Original:  He played in the 3 match Test series against South Africa in India in 2019 and took many magical catches.
Revised:  Saha played in the 3 match Test series against South Africa in India in 2019 and took many magical catches.
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Original: Over the next few months  Saladin easily overran the entire kingdom.
Revised: Over the next few months , Saladin easily overran the entire kingdom.
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Original: The vast majority of the crusaders who established and settled the Kingdom of Jerusalem were from the Kingdom of France, as were the knights and soldiers who made up the bulk of the steady flow of reinforcements throughout the two-hundred-year span of its existence.
Revised: The vast majority of the Crusaders who established and settled the Kingdom of Jerusalem were from the Kingdom of France, as were the knights and soldiers who made up the bulk of the steady flow of reinforcements throughout the two-hundred-year span of its existence.
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Original: The vast majority of the Crusaders who established and settled the Kingdom of Jerusalem were from the Kingdom of France, as were the knights and soldiers who made up the bulk of the steady flow of reinforcements throughout the two-hundred-year span of its existence.
Revised: The vast majority of the crusaders who established and settled the Kingdom of Jerusalem were from the Kingdom of France, as were the knights and soldiers who made up the bulk of the steady flow of reinforcements throughout the two-hundred-year span of its existence.
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Original: Reuters On May 21, 2021,  South Korea Ballistic Missile Range Guidelines was scrapped, allowing South Korea the option to develop and possess any type of missile, including intercontinental ballistic missiles (ICBMs) and advanced submarine-launched ballistic missiles UR
Revised: Reuters On May 21, 2021, South Korea Ballistic Missile Range Guidelines was scrapped, allowing South Korea to develop and possess any type of missile, including intercontinental ballistic missiles (ICBMs) and advanced submarine-launched ballistic missiles UR
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Original: Hyunmoo-2 started in mid to late 1990s with first test in April 1999 with entering service in 2008 as Hyunmoo-2A after restrictions were lifted from previous agreement to limitation comparable to URL Hyunmoo-2B entered service in 2009 with range under MTCR-like restriction and range restriction under South Korea Ballistic Missile Range Guidelines renegotiated in 2012 with the US from 300 km to 800 km with reduced payload from 997 kg to 500 URL Cap on missile warhead weight was lifted in 2017.
Revised: Hyunmoo-2 started in mid to late 1990s with first test in April 1999 with entering service in 2008 as Hyunmoo-2A after restrictions were lifted from previous agreement to limitation comparable to MTCR, Hyunmoo-2B entered service in 2009 with range under MTCR-like restriction and range restriction under South Korea Ballistic Missile Range Guidelines renegotiated in 2012 with the US from 300 km to 800 km with reduced payload from 997 kg to 500 URL Cap on missile warhead weight was lifted in 2017.
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Original: Hyunmoo-2 started in mid to late 1990s with first test in April 1999 with entering service in 2008 as Hyunmoo-2A after restrictions were lifted from previous agreement to limitation comparable to URL Hyunmoo-2B entered service in 2009 with range under MTCR-like restriction and range restriction under South Korea Ballistic Missile Range Guidelines renegotiated in 2012 with the US from 300 km to 800 km with reduced payload from 997 kg to 500 URL Cap on missile warhead weight was lifted in 2017.
Revised: Hyunmoo-2 started in mid to late 1990s with first test in April 1999 with entering service in 2008 as Hyunmoo-2A after restrictions were lifted from previous agreement to limitation comparable to URL Hyunmoo-2B entered service in 2009 with range under MTCR-like restriction and range restriction under South Korea Ballistic Missile Range Guidelines renegotiated in 2012 with the US from 300 km to 800 km with reduced payload from 997 kg to 500 kg. Cap on missile warhead weight was lifted in 2017.
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Original: Reuters On May 21, 2021, the decades-old South Korea Ballistic Missile Range Guidelines was scrapped, allowing South Korea to develop and possess any type of missile, including intercontinental ballistic missiles (ICBMs) and advanced submarine-launched ballistic missiles UR
Revised: Reuters On May 21, 2021, the decades-old South Korea Ballistic Missile Range Guidelines was scrapped, allowing South Korea to develop and possess any type of missile, including intercontinental ballistic missiles (ICBMs) and advanced submarine-launched ballistic missiles (SLBMs)
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Original:  The Hyunmoo missiles can already cover the entire range of North Korea and would drastically change the North's disposition if the South had nuclear armed MRBMs. Even though the ROK could procure nukes , currently like Japan it sees no reason to do so with the protection of the American nuclear arsenal.
Revised:  The Hyunmoo missiles can already cover the entire range of North Korea and would drastically change the North's disposition if the South had nuclear armed MRBMs. Even though the ROK could procure nuclear weapons , currently like Japan it sees no reason to do so with the protection of the American nuclear arsenal.
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Original: Ali Rial (born March 26, 1980 in Zemmouri) is an Algerian football player who is currently playing as a defender for JS Kabylie in the Algerian league.
Revised: Ali Rial (born March 26, 1980 in Zemmouri) is an Algerian football player who is currently playing as a defender for JS Kabylie in the Algerian Ligue Professionnelle 1.
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Original:  Almagros expedition was a failure as he did not find the riches he expected.
Revised:  Almagro's expedition was a failure as he did not find the riches he expected.
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Original:  He was the first Governor of Chile   .
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Original:  Most of the Dusun Ranau embrace muslims .
Revised:  Most of the Dusun Ranau embrace Christianity .
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Original: Traditional foods and drinks A few of the most well known traditional food of the Kadazandusun people are hinava, noonsom, pinaasakan, bosou, tuhau, kinoring pork soup (meat of a wild boar usually referred to  the locals as sinalau bakas) and rice wine chicken soup.
Revised: Traditional foods and drinks A few of the most well known traditional food of the Kadazandusun people are hinava, noonsom, pinaasakan, bosou, tuhau, kinoring pork soup (meat of a wild boar usually referred to by the locals as sinalau bakas) and rice wine chicken soup.
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Original:  It is a one-month celebration starting from 1 to 31 May.
Revised:  It is a one-month celebration from 1 to 31 May.
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Original:  Today's Kaamatan celebration is very synonymous with beauty pageant competition known as Unduk Ngadau, a singing competition known as Sugandoi, Tamu, non-halal food and beverages stalls, and handicraft arts and cultural performances in traditional houses.
Revised:  Today's Kaamatan celebration is synonymous with a beauty pageant competition known as Unduk Ngadau, a singing competition known as Sugandoi, Tamu, non-halal food and beverages stalls, and handicraft arts and cultural performances in traditional houses.
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Original: Etymology 300px|Dusun traders .
Revised: Etymology 300px|Dusun traders 
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Original:  Thirteen people including a child reportedly died and over 200 people were hospitalized.
Revised:  Thirteen people reportedly died and over 200 people were hospitalized.
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Original:  This is known as autopolymerisation , and will take place at ambient temperatures and above .
Revised:  This is known as autopolymerisation .
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Original:  Styrene oxide is considered toxic, mutagenic , and possibly carcinogenic . Styrene oxide is subsequently hydrolyzed in vivo to styrene glycol by the enzyme epoxide hydrolase.
Revised:  Styrene oxide is considered toxic, mutagenic . Styrene oxide is subsequently hydrolyzed in vivo to styrene glycol by the enzyme epoxide hydrolase.
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Original:  On 10 June 2011, the U.S. National Toxicology Program has described styrene as "reasonably anticipated to be a human carcinogen ".
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Original: Gregorio “Greg” C. Laconsay (born March 12, 1931) is a Filipino-Ilocano editor and writer in the Philippines.
Revised: Gregorio "Greg" C. Laconsay (born March 12, 1931) is a Filipino-Ilocano editor and writer in the Philippines.
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Original:  He was the former chief editor for two prominent literary magazines in the Philippines, namely the Ilocano-language Bannawag and the Tagalog-language Liwayway.
Revised:  He was the former editor in chief for two prominent literary magazines in the Philippines, namely the Ilocano-language Bannawag and the Tagalog-language Liwayway.
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Original: Greg Laconsay, mula sa Iluko.com at Panitikan.com.ph, retrieved on: March 14, 2008 Works Dictionaries Iluko-English-Tagalog Dictionary (1993) “ Iluko-English-Tagalog Dictionary.
Revised: Greg Laconsay, mula sa Iluko.com at Panitikan.com.ph, retrieved on: March 14, 2008 Works Dictionaries Iluko–English–Tagalog Dictionary (1993) “ Iluko-English-Tagalog Dictionary.
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Original: Greg Laconsay, mula sa Iluko.com at Panitikan.com.ph, retrieved on: March 14, 2008 Works Dictionaries Iluko-English-Tagalog Dictionary (1993) “ Iluko-English-Tagalog Dictionary.
Revised: Greg Laconsay, mula sa Iluko.com at Panitikan.com.ph, retrieved on: March 14, 2008 Works Dictionaries Iluko-English-Tagalog Dictionary (1993) " Iluko-English-Tagalog Dictionary.
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Original:  House, c1993., Philippine Reference Sources ” sa Doe Library (120), University of California, Berkeley, California, collected by Virginia Jing-yi Shih and Leslie Woodhouse during the Fall of 2006, Southeast Asia Resources, South/Southeast Asia Library, retrieved on March 14, 2008 Simplified Iluko Grammar (2005) Ilocano novels Ti Kabusor (1974) Ti Love Story ni Theresa (1971) -
Revised:  House, c1993., Philippine Reference Sources " sa Doe Library (120), University of California, Berkeley, California, collected by Virginia Jing-yi Shih and Leslie Woodhouse during the Fall of 2006, Southeast Asia Resources, South/Southeast Asia Library, retrieved on March 14, 2008 Simplified Iluko Grammar (2005) Ilocano novels Ti Kabusor (1974) Ti Love Story ni Theresa (1971) -
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