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Original:  References Canadian Parliamentary Guide, 1952, GP Normandin  External links Category:1912 births Category:1965 deaths Category: Progressive Conservative Party of Ontario MPPs Category:People from Algoma District Category: Funeral directo
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Original: Ecotoxicity, the subject of study of the field of ecotoxicology (a portmanteau of Ecology and Toxicology) refers to the potential for biological, chemical or physical stressors to affect ecosystems.
Revised: Ecotoxicity, the subject of study of the field of ecotoxicology (a portmanteau of ecology and toxicology), refers to the potential for biological, chemical or physical stressors to affect ecosystems.
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Original:  Petroleum Hydrocarbon Quaternary Ammonium Compounds (Quats )
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Original:  There are also no regulations in place stating that the ingredients be listed on labels of cleaning products leading the users to be ultimately unaware of the chemicals they expose themselves and their surrounding environments to. 2-Butoxyethanol The organic compound 2-Butoxyethanol, commonly found in glass cleaners, laundry stain removers, windshield wiper fluid, oven cleaners, and rust removers has been proven to cause reproductive problems in laboratory experiments.
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Original:  Such stressors might occur in the natural environment at densities, concentrations or levels high enough to disrupt the natural biochemistry, physiology, behavior and interactions of the living organisms that comprise the ecosystem.
Revised:  Such stressors might occur in the natural environment at densities, concentrations or levels high enough to disrupt the natural biochemistry, physiology, behaviour and interactions of the living organisms that comprise the ecosystem.
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Original:  Forbes: Take Up Thy Desk And Walk Can sitting too much kill you?, commentary invited by editors of Scientific American Under Desk Treadmill for Home or Office
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Revised:  Coniology refers to the observation and contemplation of dust in an atmosphere, but the study of dust may also be applied to dust in space, therefore connecting it to a variety of atmospheric and extraterrestrial topics. Category:Atmospheric scienc 
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Original:  Certain Particulates, or particulate matter PM have lead to health issues among humans such as lung disease and cardiovascular diseas 
Revised:  Certain Particulates, or particulate matter PM have lead to health issues among humans such as lung disease and cardiovascular disease. 
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Original:  Of the most abundant elements in the moon's atmosphere, helium, argon and neon, will all be present but at different amounts in the atmosphere depending on the time of da  
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Original:  The reason why this mission is significant is it will not only help scientist to further understand the properties of dust in space, but it was the first mission to collect dust from a comet and return it to Eart 
Revised:  The reason why this mission is significant is it will not only help scientist to further understand the properties of dust in space, but it was the first mission to collect dust from a comet and return it to Earth. 
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Original:  The reason why this mission is significant is it will not only help scientist to further understand the properties of dust in space, but it was the first mission to collect dust from a comet and return it to Eart 
Revised:  The reason why this mission is significant is it will not only help scientist to further understand the properties of dust in space, but it was the first mission to collect dust from a comet and return it to Eart Reference
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Original:  This dust caries nutrients which further supports the ecosystems in the Caribbean, and those on the South American continent, however nutrients in dust carried by wind can reach all across the globe.
Revised:  This dust carries nutrients which further supports the ecosystems in the Caribbean, and those on the South American continent, however nutrients in dust carried by wind can reach all across the globe.
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Original:  This dust carries nutrients which further supports the ecosystems in the Caribbean, and those on the South American continent , however nutrients in dust carried by wind can reach all across the globe.
Revised:  This dust carries nutrients which further supports the ecosystems in the Caribbean, and those on the South American continent . Furthermore, nutrients in dust carried by wind can reach all across the globe.
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Original:  This dust carries nutrients which further supports the ecosystems in the Caribbean, and those on the South American continent , however nutrients in dust carried by wind can reach all across the globe.
Revised:  This dust carries nutrients which further supports the ecosystems in the Caribbean, and those on the South American continent , however nutrients in dust can carried by winds which reach all across the globe.
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Original:  URL However dust can also be more harmful for an ecosystem depending on what it carries.
Revised:  URL On the other hand, dust can also be more harmful for an ecosystem depending on what it carries.
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Original:  Of the most abundant elements in the moon's atmosphere, helium, argon and neon, will all be present but at different amounts in the atmosphere depending on the time of day .
Revised:  Of the most abundant elements in the moon's atmosphere, helium, argon and neon, will all be present but at different amounts in the atmosphere depending on where and how long the suns ray hit the moon .
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Original:  Dust in space, or cosmic dust create the mass required for the formation of all celestial bodies like planets and stars.
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Original: Earth Category:Atmospheric sciences URL dust storm traveling from the Sahara Desert over the Atlantic Ocean Dust in Earth's atmosphere comprises of both natural occurring causes and anthropogenic causes.
Revised: Earth Category:Atmospheric sciences URL dust storm traveling from the Sahara Desert over the Atlantic Ocean Dust in Earth's atmosphere comes from both natural and anthropogenic causes.
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Original:  The process of which dust enters Earth's atmosphere naturally can be attributed to the Aeolian Process where winds erode Earth's surface and consequently carry particles from the ground into the atmosphere via suspension .
Revised:  The process of which dust enters Earth's atmosphere naturally can be attributed to the Aeolian process where winds erode Earth's surface and consequently carry particles from the ground into the atmosphere via suspension .
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Original:  The solid dust particulates and atmospheric moisture combined are suspended in the air which are both natural and anthropogenic are referred to as Aerosols .
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Original:  URL Atmospheric dust, both natural and anthropogenic, has also been shown to affect humans as well .
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Original:  Certain Particulates , or particulate matter PM have lead to health issues among humans such as lung disease and cardiovascular disease.
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Original:  Certain Particulates , or particulate matter PM have lead to health issues among humans such as lung disease and cardiovascular disease.
Revised:  Certain Particulates , or particulate matter PM have led to health issues among humans such as lung disease and cardiovascular disease.
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Original:  Andreas Paolo Perger playing "Concert for 5.1 surround guitar" at the 4th Electric Eclectics Festival, Canada 2009Andreas Paolo Perger playing "Concert for 5.1 surround guitar" at the 4th Electric Eclectics Festival, Canada 2009.
Revised:  Andreas Paolo Perger playing "Concert for 5.1 surround guitar" at the 4th Electric Eclectics Festival, Canada 2009 Andreas Paolo Perger playing "Concert for 5.1 surround guitar" at the 4th Electric Eclectics Festival, Canada 2009.
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Original: Music Information Center Austria His work , autobiographical in nature, is drawing from a variety of traditional and contemporary musical influenceslike contemporary jazz, new music, improvised music, and electronic music.
Revised: Music Information Center Austria His music , autobiographical in nature, is drawing from a variety of traditional and contemporary musical influenceslike contemporary jazz, new music, improvised music, and electronic music.
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Original: Music Information Center Austria His work , autobiographical in nature, is drawing from a variety of traditional and contemporary musical influenceslike contemporary jazz, new music, improvised music, and electronic music.
Revised: Music Information Center Austria His work , autobiographical in nature, draws from variety of traditional and contemporary musical influenceslike contemporary jazz, new music, improvised music, and electronic music.
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Original: Music Information Center Austria His work , autobiographical in nature, is drawing from a variety of traditional and contemporary musical influenceslike contemporary jazz, new music, improvised music, and electronic music.
Revised: Music Information Center Austria His work , autobiographical in nature, is drawing from a variety of traditional and contemporary influences, such as contemporary jazz, new music, improvised music, and electronic music.
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Original:  Andreas Paolo Perger established a variable and open concept of guitar playing, improvising and composing, focusing on the constant recognizable progression of the originating music within a frequently changing spatial and social environment .
Revised:  Perger uses a variable and open concept of guitar playing, improvising and composing, focusing on the constant recognizable progression of the originating music within a frequently changing spatial and social environment .
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Original:  Andreas Paolo Perger established a variable and open concept of guitar playing, improvising and composing, focusing on the constant recognizable progression of the originating music within a frequently changing spatial and social environment .
Revised:  Andreas Paolo Perger established a variable and open concept of guitar playing, improvising , and composing .
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Original:  Overview about the cultur program of 36. DEKT The cultur newspaper "Zeig Dich" of the Kirchentag writes a.o. "The guitarist, improviser, and composer Andreas Paolo Perger mirrors the baroque union of interpretation, improvisation, and composition on contemporary forms.
Revised:  The cultur newspaper "Zeig Dich" of the Kirchentag writes a.o. "The guitarist, improviser, and composer Andreas Paolo Perger mirrors the baroque union of interpretation, improvisation, and composition on contemporary forms.
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Original:  Announcement of Kultur Büro Sophien Berlin The concert video was directed by Carlos Bustamante and premiered at the Arsenal Cinema Berlin in December 2013.
Revised:  The concert video was directed by Carlos Bustamante and premiered at the Arsenal Cinema Berlin in December 2013.
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Original: Malignant hypertension It could be useful for managing malignant hypertension due to end stage renal failure.
Revised: Malignant hypertension It could be useful for managing malignant hypertension due to end stage kidney failure.
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Original:  However it does cause hemolysis and renal failure in large doses. sotradecol - This agent is used for superficial lower extremity varicose veins.
Revised:  However it does cause hemolysis and kidney failure in large doses. sotradecol - This agent is used for superficial lower extremity varicose veins.
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Original: Embolization (or embolisation) refers to the passage and lodging of an embolus within the bloodstream.
Revised: Embolization refers to the passage and lodging of an embolus within the bloodstream.
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Original: Technique Post-embolization arteriogram showing coiled aneurysm (indicated by yellow arrows) of the posterior cerebral artery with a residual aneurysmal sac .
Revised: Technique Post-embolization arteriogram showing coiled aneurysm (indicated by yellow arrows) of the posterior cerebral artery with a residual aneurysmal sac 
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Original:  Embolization refers to the passage and lodging of an embolus within the bloodstream.
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Original: use Embolization refers to the passage and lodging of an embolus within the bloodstream.
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Original: Philosophers of chemistry  Several philosophers and scientists have focused on the philosophy of chemistry in recent years, notably, the Dutch philosopher Jaap van Brakel, who wrote The Philosophy of Chemistry in 2000, and the Maltese philosopher-chemist Eric Scerri, editor of the journal "Foundations of Chemistry" and author of Normative and Descriptive Philosophy of Science and the Role of Chemistry in Philosophy of Chemistry, 2004, among other articles.
Revised: Philosophers of chemistry Several philosophers and scientists have focused on the philosophy of chemistry in recent years, notably, the Dutch philosopher Jaap van Brakel, who wrote The Philosophy of Chemistry in 2000, and the Maltese-born philosopher-chemist Eric Scerri, editor of the journal "Foundations of Chemistry" and author of Normative and Descriptive Philosophy of Science and the Role of Chemistry in Philosophy of Chemistry, 2004, among other articles.
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Original:  Competitions are held between local clubs of each style of Physie with an annual championship.
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Original:  Other Physie groups are also APDA and also WZ Physie Physie clubs only compete with other clubs of the same franchised brand%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% If the the six main groups every deiced to team up and form one interrogated group the impact could be massive and Physie would be come an Australian wide sport of importance, but due to short slightness and wanting to keep the groups separate as well as being lost in there own importance, this will never happen -
Revised:  Physie clubs only compete with other clubs of the same franchised brand%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% If the the six main groups every deiced to team up and form one interrogated group the impact could be massive and Physie would be come an Australian wide sport of importance, but due to short slightness and wanting to keep the groups separate as well as being lost in there own importance, this will never happen -
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Original:  Other Physie groups are also APDA and also WZ Physie Physie clubs only compete with other clubs of the same franchised brand%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% If the the six main groups every deiced to team up and form one interrogated group the impact could be massive and Physie would be come an Australian wide sport of importance, but due to short slightness and wanting to keep the groups separate as well as being lost in there own importance, this will never happen -
Revised:  Other Physie groups are also APDA and also WZ Physie %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% If the the six main groups every deiced to team up and form one interrogated group the impact could be massive and Physie would be come an Australian wide sport of importance, but due to short slightness and wanting to keep the groups separate as well as being lost in there own importance, this will never happen -
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Original: Origins The physical culture movement in the United States of the 19th century owed its origins to several cultural trends.
Revised: Origins The physical culture movement in the United States during the 19th century owed its origins to several cultural trends.
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Original: While the Mitanni kings and other members of royalty bore names resembling Indo-Aryan phonology , and invoked Indo-Aryan deities attested in the Rigveda, they probably used the language of the local people, which was at that time a non-Indo-European language, Hurrian.
Revised: While the Mitanni kings and other members of royalty bore names of Indo-Aryan phonology , and invoked Indo-Aryan deities attested in the Rigveda, they probably used the language of the local people, which was at that time a non-Indo-European language, Hurrian.
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Original: While the Mitanni kings and other members of royalty bore names resembling Indo-Aryan phonology , and invoked Indo-Aryan deities attested in the Rigveda, they probably used the language of the local people, which was at that time a non-Indo-European language, Hurrian.
Revised: While the Mitanni kings and other members of royalty bore names resembling Indo-Aryan origin , and invoked Indo-Aryan deities attested in the Rigveda, they probably used the language of the local people, which was at that time a non-Indo-European language, Hurrian.
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Original:  Mitanni gods were also the most important gods in the Rig URL
Revised:  Mitanni gods were also the most important gods in the Rig Veda.
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Original: The recent (2017) salvage excavations at the Ilısu Dam in the upper Tigris, southern Turkey, also have shown a very early beginning of Mitanni period, as in the ruins of a temple in Müslümantepe, ritual artefacts and a Mitannian cylinder seal were found, radiocarbon-dated to 1760-1610 BC.
Revised: The recent (2017) salvage excavations at the Ilısu Dam in the upper Tigris, southern Turkey, also have shown a very early beginning of Mitanni period, as in the ruins of a temple in Müslümantepe, ritual artefacts and a Mitannian cylinder seal were found, radiocarbon-dated to 1760–1610 BC.
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Original:  In a subsequent excavation season, the deeper Phase A10 was identified as having a mix of Middle Bronze and Mitanni potteries, considered to be in the turn of the Middle to the Late Bronze Age transitional period (late 17th - early 16th century BC).
Revised:  In a subsequent excavation season, the deeper Phase A10 was identified as having a mix of Middle Bronze and Mitanni potteries, considered to be in the turn of the Middle to the Late Bronze Age transitional period (late 17th – early 16th century BC).
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Original:  "Political and Cultural Relations between the Kingdom of Mittani and its Subordinated Polities in Syria and Southeast Anatolia", in Changing Faces of Kingship in Syria-Palestine 1500-500 BCE, Ugarit Verlag, p. 38: "...the recent German archaeological excavations at Tell Fekheriye support the assumption that the capital of Mittani, Wassukkanni, was located there..." See also Novák (2013: 346) and Bonatz (2014).
Revised:  "Political and Cultural Relations between the Kingdom of Mittani and its Subordinated Polities in Syria and Southeast Anatolia", in Changing Faces of Kingship in Syria-Palestine 1500–500 BCE, Ugarit Verlag, p. 38: "...the recent German archaeological excavations at Tell Fekheriye support the assumption that the capital of Mittani, Wassukkanni, was located there..." See also Novák (2013: 346) and Bonatz (2014).
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Original:  The earliest attestation of the term Hanigalbat can be read in Akkadian within the "Annals of Hattusili I" (c. 1650-1620 BC) along with the Hittite version mentioning "the Hurrian enemy".
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Original:  "Political and Cultural Relations between the Kingdom of Mittani and its Subordinated Polities in Syria and Southeast Anatolia", in Changing Faces of Kingship in Syria-Palestine 1500-500 BCE, Alter Orient und Testament 459, Ugarit Verlag, p. 37: "...
Revised:  "Political and Cultural Relations between the Kingdom of Mittani and its Subordinated Polities in Syria and Southeast Anatolia", in Changing Faces of Kingship in Syria-Palestine 1500–500 BCE, Alter Orient und Testament 459, Ugarit Verlag, p. 37: "...
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Original:  "A Tentative Chronology of the Kingdom of Mittani from its Rise to the Reign of Tusratta", in Mesopotamian Dark Age Revisited: Proceedings of an International Conference of SCIEM 2000, Vienna 8th-9th November 2002, Vienna, p. 40, Table 1. Shaushtatar's royal seal . Cuneiform tablet containing a letter from Tushratta of Mitanni to Amenhotep III (of 13 letters of King Tushratta).
Revised:  "A Tentative Chronology of the Kingdom of Mittani from its Rise to the Reign of Tusratta", in Mesopotamian Dark Age Revisited: Proceedings of an International Conference of SCIEM 2000, Vienna 8th–9th November 2002, Vienna, p. 40, Table 1. Shaushtatar's royal seal . Cuneiform tablet containing a letter from Tushratta of Mitanni to Amenhotep III (of 13 letters of King Tushratta).
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Original:  "A Tentative Chronology of the Kingdom of Mittani from its Rise to the Reign of Tusratta", in Mesopotamian Dark Age Revisited: Proceedings of an International Conference of SCIEM 2000, Vienna 8th-9th November 2002, Vienna, p. 40, Table 1. Shaushtatar's royal seal . Cuneiform tablet containing a letter from Tushratta of Mitanni to Amenhotep III (of 13 letters of King Tushratta).
Revised:  "A Tentative Chronology of the Kingdom of Mittani from its Rise to the Reign of Tusratta", in Mesopotamian Dark Age Revisited: Proceedings of an International Conference of SCIEM 2000, Vienna 8th-9th November 2002, Vienna, p. 40, Table 1. Shaushtatar's royal seal Cuneiform tablet containing a letter from Tushratta of Mitanni to Amenhotep III (of 13 letters of King Tushratta).
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Original: (M. Mayrhofer, Etymologisches Wörterbuch des Altindoarischen Heidelberg 1986-2000 ;
Revised: (M. Mayrhofer, Etymologisches Wörterbuch des Altindoarischen Heidelberg 1986–2000 ;
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Original:   The product was developed by a team headed by chemist Tadeusz Reichstein, who discovered a method of synthesizing 30-40g of vitamin C from 100g of glucose.
Revised:  History The product was developed by a team headed by chemist Tadeusz Reichstein, who discovered a method of synthesizing 30-40g of vitamin C from 100g of glucose.
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