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Original:  Liverpool soon found their scoring touch , through a corner which was converted into a goal by , Jamie Carragher.
Revised:  Liverpool soon found their scoring touch , through a corner which was converted into a goal by Jamie Carragher.
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Original:  The start of the second half saw captain , Steven Gerrard , fouled in the box and awarded a penalty.
Revised:  The start of the second half saw captain Steven Gerrard fouled in the box and awarded a penalty.
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Original:  Steven took the chance, and converted it with a goal which saw Liverpool,  three goals up, looking likely for the win.
Revised:  He took full advantage of the opportunity and converted it with a goal which saw Liverpool, three goals up, looking likely for the win.
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Original:  Steven took the chance, and converted it with a goal which saw Liverpool,  three goals up, looking likely for the win.
Revised:  Steven took the chance, and converted it into a goal which saw Liverpool, three goals up, looking likely for the win.
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Original:  Steven took the chance, and converted it with a goal which saw Liverpool,  three goals up, looking likely for the win.
Revised:  Steven took the chance, and converted it with a goal which saw Liverpool, with three goals up, looking likely for the win.
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Original:  The game also marked the competitive debut of Peter Crouch , who signed for Liverpool for around £7 million.
Revised:  The game also marked the competitive debut of Peter Crouch who signed with Liverpool for around £7 million.
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Original:  The game ended 3 - 1 , it looks like Liverpool have a great chance of winning this leg , with 3 straight away goals .
Revised:  The game ended 3 - 1. With 3 straight away goals , it looks like Liverpool have a great chance of winning this leg , with 3 straight away goals .
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Original:  The game ended 3 - 1 , it looks like Liverpool have a great chance of winning this leg , with 3 straight away goals .
Revised:  The game ended 3 - 1 , it looks like Liverpool have a great chance of winning this leg .
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Original:  The second leg is at Anfield , on Tuesday 2nd August 2005.
Revised:  The second leg is at Anfield on Tuesday, 2nd August 2005.
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Original:  The man, who is currently remaining publicly unidentified, was hit by the train, which was travelling between the cities of Inverness and  Montrose, at approximately 0920 GMT on Saturday.
Revised:  The man, who is currently remaining publicly unidentified, was hit by the train, which was travelling between the city of Inverness and Montrose, at approximately 0920 GMT on Saturday.
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Original:  The man, who is currently remaining publicly unidentified, was hit by the train, which was travelling between the cities of Inverness and  Montrose, at approximately 0920 GMT on Saturday.
Revised:  The man, who is currently remaining publicly unidentified, was hit by the train, which was travelling between the cities of Inverness and the town of Montrose, at approximately 0920 GMT on Saturday.
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Original:  A report is anticipated to be handed over to the Procurator Fiscal later  
Revised:  A report is anticipated to be handed over to the Procurator Fiscal later . 
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Original:  The man was said to be deceased at the scene of the collision.
Revised:  The man was pronounced dead at the scene of the collision.
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Original:  The British Transport Police have commenced an investigation to try and determine what happened;
Revised:  The British Transport Police have commenced an investigation to determine what happened;
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Original: A man has died after being impacted by a train at a level crossing on a railway line in Moray, Scotland.
Revised: A man has died after being impacted by a train on a railway line in Moray, Scotland.
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Original: Pat Cannone scored two power play goals for Miami during regulation.
Revised: Pat Cannone led the scoring with two power play goals for Miami during regulation.
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Original:  It looked as though Michigan  won the game in the first overtime but the referee blew the whistle calling a penalty just before a shot from Michigan's forward Kevin Lynch went in the net.
Revised:  It looked as though Michigan had won the game in the first overtime but the referee blew the whistle calling a penalty just before a shot from Michigan's forward Kevin Lynch went in the net.
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Original:  It looked as though Michigan  won the game in the first overtime but the referee blew the whistle calling a penalty just before a shot from Michigan's forward Kevin Lynch went in the net.
Revised:  It looked as though Michigan won the game in the first overtime but the referee blew the whistle calling a penalty just before the puck went in the net.
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Original:  The Miami goaltender Connor Knapp who made 53 saves in the game was named the most outstanding player of the regionals .
Revised:  The Miami goaltender Connor Knapp who made 53 saves in the game was named the most outstanding player of the midwest regional tournament .
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Original:  This was the first multiple overtime game for the  RedHawks in their 23 years of ice hockey .
Revised:  This was the first multiple overtime game for the RedHawks in their 23 years .
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Original:  Boston College advanced to the Frozen Four in a shoot out with Yale . BC defeated the Yale Bulldogs 9-7 last night at the finals of the NorthEast regionals in front of 6,054 fans at the DCU Center in Worcester, Massachusetts.
Revised:  The Boston College Eagles advanced to the Frozen Four in a shoot out with Yale . BC defeated the Yale Bulldogs 9-7 last night at the finals of the NorthEast regionals in front of 6,054 fans at the DCU Center in Worcester, Massachusetts.
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Original:  Boston College advanced to the Frozen Four in a shoot out with Yale . BC defeated the Yale Bulldogs 9-7 last night at the finals of the NorthEast regionals in front of 6,054 fans at the DCU Center in Worcester, Massachusetts.
Revised:  Boston College advanced to the Frozen Four in a shoot out with the Yale Bulldogs . BC defeated the Yale Bulldogs 9-7 last night at the finals of the NorthEast regionals in front of 6,054 fans at the DCU Center in Worcester, Massachusetts.
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Original:  Boston College advanced to the Frozen Four in a shoot out with Yale . BC defeated the Yale Bulldogs 9-7 last night at the finals of the NorthEast regionals in front of 6,054 fans at the DCU Center in Worcester, Massachusetts.
Revised:  Boston College advanced to the Frozen Four in a shoot out with Yale . BC defeated Yale 9-7 last night at the finals of the NorthEast regionals in front of 6,054 fans at the DCU Center in Worcester, Massachusetts.
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Original:  The previous record was thirteen goals .
Revised:  The previous record was thirteen .
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Original:  BC will face Miami of Ohio in the semifinals on April 8 in Detroit
Revised:  BC will face Miami of Ohio in the semifinals on April 8 at Ford Field in Detroit, Michigan
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Original:  Sophomore forward Alden Hirschfeld scored at 1:54 into the second overtime when his shot from the top of the left face off circle deflected into the goal off the skate of the Michigan goaltender Shawn Hunwick.
Revised:  Miami sophomore forward Alden Hirschfeld scored at 1:54 into the second overtime when his shot from the top of the left face off circle deflected into the goal off the skate of the Michigan goaltender Shawn Hunwick.
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Original: Microsoft, the world's largest software company, announced the name of its forthcoming version of the Windows operating system from its headquarters in w: Redmond, Washington .
Revised: Microsoft, the world's largest software company, announced the name of its forthcoming version of the Windows operating system from its headquarters in Redmond, Washington .
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Original:  But with the choice of "Vista,"  it may face allegations it is swiping another company's trademark.
Revised:  With the choice of "Vista," it may face allegations it is swiping another company's trademark.
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Original:  But with the choice of "Vista,"  it may face allegations it is swiping another company's trademark.
Revised:  But with the choice of "Vista," it may face allegations of swiping another company's trademark.
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Original:  It appears the  name has already been taken by another high-tech company  coincidentally also based in Redmond.
Revised:  It appears the name has already been taken by another high-tech company , coincidentally also based in Redmond.
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Original:  Wall reportedly has not  filed suit against Microsoft to stop it from using the "Vista" name.
Revised:  Wall reportedly has not yet filed suit against Microsoft to stop it from using the "Vista" name.
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Original:  An investor in SCO, he has other legal option aside from law suits.
Revised:  An investor in SCO, he does have other legal options aside from law suits.
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Original:  He may offer to sell the rights to the "Vista" name.
Revised:  Instead, he may offer to sell the rights to the "Vista" name.
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Original:   John Wall's company is not the only business with claims on the name "Vista."
Revised:  That could be tricky. John Wall's company is not the only business with claims on the name "Vista."
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Original:  Additionally, a wide-range of non-computer businesses have the name reserved, including for branded products for sewing machines, elevators and the dairy industry  
Revised:  Additionally, a wide-range of non-computer businesses have the name reserved, including for branded products for sewing machines, elevators and the dairy industry . 
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Original: 260px|Windows Vista logo Microsoft, the world's largest software company ( also the world's largest software monopoly), announced the name of its forthcoming version of the Windows operating system from its headquarters in Redmond, Washington Friday.
Revised: 260px|Windows Vista logo Microsoft, the world's largest software company ( often considered to be the world's largest software monopoly), announced the name of its forthcoming version of the Windows operating system from its headquarters in Redmond, Washington Friday.
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Original: 260px|Windows Vista logo Microsoft, the world's largest software company (often considered to be the world's largest software monopoly) , announced the name of its forthcoming version of the Windows operating system from its headquarters in Redmond, Washington Friday.
Revised: 260px|Windows Vista logo Microsoft, the world's largest software company , announced the name of its forthcoming version of the Windows operating system from its headquarters in Redmond, Washington Friday.
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Original:  McGuinness is expected to travel today to the United States with senior Sinn Féin member Rita O'Hare to brief the Irish American community on the current situatio
Revised:  McGuinness is expected to travel today to the United States with senior Sinn Féin member Rita O'Hare to brief the Irish American community on the current situation
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Original:  Michael McDowell, TD, announced yesterday that he understands that Gerry Adams, Martin McGuinness and Martin Ferris, senior members of the Irish republican party Sinn Féin, have resigned from the Army Council of the Provisional IRA . In a press conference on Tuesday, Mr. McDowell  expressed his belief that the three had resigned their seats on the Council within in the past fortnight, but he did not think that this "by itself amounts to a severance between the two organisations."
Revised:  Michael McDowell, TD, announced yesterday that he understands that Gerry Adams, Martin McGuinness and Martin Ferris, senior members of the Irish republican party Sinn Féin, have resigned from the Army Council of the Provisional Irish Republican Army . In a press conference on Tuesday, Mr. McDowell expressed his belief that the three had resigned their seats on the Council within in the past fortnight, but he did not think that this "by itself amounts to a severance between the two organisations."
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Original:  Michael McDowell, TD, announced yesterday that he understands that Gerry Adams, Martin McGuinness and Martin Ferris, senior members of the Irish republican party Sinn Féin, have resigned from the Army Council of the Provisional IRA . In a press conference on Tuesday, Mr. McDowell  expressed his belief that the three had resigned their seats on the Council within in the past fortnight, but he did not think that this "by itself amounts to a severance between the two organisations."
Revised:  Michael McDowell, TD, announced yesterday that he understands that Gerry Adams, Martin McGuinness and Martin Ferris, senior members of the Irish republican party Sinn Féin, have resigned from the Army Council of the Provisional IRA . Mr. McDowell expressed his belief that the three had resigned their seats on the Council within in the past fortnight, but he did not think that this "by itself amounts to a severance between the two organisations."
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Original:  Michael McDowell, TD, announced yesterday that he understands that Gerry Adams, Martin McGuinness and Martin Ferris, senior members of the Irish republican party Sinn Féin, have resigned from the Army Council of the Provisional IRA . In a press conference on Tuesday, Mr. McDowell  expressed his belief that the three had resigned their seats on the Council within in the past fortnight, but he did not think that this "by itself amounts to a severance between the two organisations."
Revised:  Michael McDowell, TD, announced yesterday that he understands that Gerry Adams, Martin McGuinness and Martin Ferris, senior members of the Irish republican party Sinn Féin, have resigned from the Army Council of the Provisional IRA . In a press conference on Tuesday, Mr. McDowell expressed his belief that the three had resigned seats on the Council within in the past fortnight, but he did not think that this "by itself amounts to a severance between the two organisations."
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Original:   The announcement comes as expectation grows that the IRA will issue a statement this week concerning its future, following a plea by Adams , president of Sinn Féin, in April for the organisation to "take courageous initiatives which will achieve [its] aims by purely political and democratic activity."
Revised:  The comment comes as expectation grows that the IRA will issue a statement this week concerning its future, following a plea by Adams , president of Sinn Féin, in April for the organisation to "take courageous initiatives which will achieve [its] aims by purely political and democratic activity."
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Original:   The announcement comes as expectation grows that the IRA will issue a statement this week concerning its future, following a plea by Adams , president of Sinn Féin, in April for the organisation to "take courageous initiatives which will achieve [its] aims by purely political and democratic activity."
Revised:  The announcement comes as expectation grows that the IRA will issue a statement this week concerning its future, following a plea by Adams in April for the organisation to "take courageous initiatives which will achieve [its] aims by purely political and democratic activity."
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Original:  Claims that Sinn Féin members have left the organisation's ruling Army Council have been described by some unionist politicians, such as DUP spokesperson Ian Paisley, Jr., as a "stunt" ahead of the expected statement on its future .
Revised:  Claims that Sinn Féin members have left the Army Council have been described by some unionist politicians, such as DUP spokesperson Ian Paisley, Jr., as a "stunt" ahead of the expected statement on its future .
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Original:  Claims that Sinn Féin members have left the organisation's ruling Army Council have been described by some unionist politicians, such as DUP spokesperson Ian Paisley, Jr., as a "stunt" ahead of the expected statement on its future .
Revised:  Claims that Sinn Féin members have left the organisation's ruling Army Council have been described by some unionist politicians, such as DUP spokesperson Ian Paisley, Jr., as a "stunt" ahead of the expected statement from the IRA .
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Original:  Adams, the Sinn Fein president, McGuinness, the party's chief negotiator, and Ferris, a representative in Dáil Éireann (the Irish lower house of parliament), have consistently denied membership of the IRA Army Council.
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Original: On a WashingtonPost.com  discussion forum, the lawmaker said, "I have six children ages 4-14.
Revised: On the WashingtonPost.com discussion forum, the lawmaker said, "I have six children ages 4-14.
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Original:  The winner of that would face Frye again, in a run-off election slated for Nov. 8 
Revised:  The winner of that would face Frye again, in a run-off election slated for Nov. 8. 
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Original: Mountain View, CA - Users of the beta Google Maps service may see their world in a new way with the introduction of the  hybrid view.
Revised: Mountain View, CA - Users of the beta Google Maps service may see the world in a new way with the introduction of the hybrid view.
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Original: Mountain View, CA - Users of the beta Google Maps service may see their world in a new way with the introduction of the  hybrid view.
Revised: Mountain View, CA - Users of the beta Google Maps service may see their world in a new way with the introduction of the " hybrid view.
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Original:  The competing and similar MSN Virtual Earth service launched Monday, July 25th, also offering a hybrid view.
Revised:  The competing and similar MSN Virtual Earth service launched July 25 by Microsoft, also offers a hybrid-type view.
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Original:  Initial public response to both services  has been generally positive, but users have already noted glitches to be worked out, including discrepancies between satellite and map data
Revised:  Initial public response to both services has been generally positive, but users noted glitches that need to be worked out, including discrepancies between satellite and map data
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Original:  Here, Hybrid means offering a combined satellite and map view, the hybrid button that appears on map search queries adds new the functionality to the map service, combining the other choices of either map or satellite views.
Revised:  Here, hybrid means offering a combined satellite and map view, the hybrid button that appears on map search queries adds new the functionality to the map service, combining the other choices of either map or satellite views.
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Original:  Here, Hybrid means offering a combined satellite and map view, the hybrid button that appears on map search queries adds new the functionality to the map service, combining the other choices of either map or satellite views.
Revised:  Here, Hybrid means offering a combined satellite and map view, the hybrid button that appears on map search queries adds new functionality to the map service, combining the other choices of either map or satellite views.
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Original:  The 31 year old who was born in Zambia but lived in the United Kingdom had been in Ecuador less than a month when he was killed.
Revised:  The 31-year-old who was born in Zambia but lived in the United Kingdom had been in Ecuador less than a month when he was killed.
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Original:  Early reports thought that he had been mistaken for an intruder and shot dead by the landowner
Revised:  Early reports speculated that he had been mistaken for an intruder and shot dead by the landowner
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Original:  The organization said it was especially concerned about the executions of those in Tibet and Xinjiang after political violence, as well as people convicted of financial fraud, and a British man who was executed despite claims of mental illness  
Revised:  The organization said it was especially concerned about the executions of those in Tibet and Xinjiang after political violence, as well as people convicted of financial fraud, and a British man who was executed despite claims of mental illness . 
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Original:  According to the report, many of the executions were based on evidence given during torture, and many defendants were given insufficient access to legal counsel  
Revised:  According to the report, many of the executions were based on evidence given during torture, and many defendants were given insufficient access to legal counsel . 
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Original: Distributer of the pills, Ekong International (UK) Ltd  recalled the medicine last month  but only received a quarter of the shipment back.
Revised: The distributor of the pills, Ekong International (UK) Ltd recalled the medicine last month but only received a quarter of the shipment back.
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Original: Distributer of the pills, Ekong International (UK) Ltd  recalled the medicine last month  but only received a quarter of the shipment back.
Revised: Distributer of the pills, Ekong International (UK) Ltd ., recalled the medicine last month but only received a quarter of the shipment back.
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Original: Distributer of the pills, Ekong International (UK) Ltd  recalled the medicine last month  but only received a quarter of the shipment back.
Revised: Distributer of the pills, Ekong International (UK) Ltd recalled the medicine last month , but only received a quarter of the shipment back.
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Original:  Last month a criminal court in Britain heard how a women devolped cancer and kidney failure after taking pills containing Aristolochia
Revised:  Last month a criminal court in Britain heard how a women developed cancer and kidney failure after taking pills containing Aristolochia
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Original:  Over 900 bottle’s are currently circulated around the UK.
Revised:  Over 900 bottles are currently circulated around the UK.
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Original:  The pills are sold in white bottle’s with approximately 180 pills per pack.
Revised:  The pills are sold in white bottles with approximately 180 pills per pack.
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Original: Four men were arrested at 4.30am BST in police raids in the Hay Mills area of Birmingham, West Midlands in relation to the failed London bombings of 21st July.
Revised: Four men were arrested at 0430 BST in police raids in the Hay Mills area of Birmingham, West Midlands in relation to the failed London bombings of 21st July.
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Original: Four men were arrested at 0430 BST in police raids at two addresses in the Hay Mills area of Birmingham, West Midlands in relation to the failed London bombings of 21st July.
Revised: Four men were arrested at 0430 BST in police raids at two addresses in Birmingham, West Midlands in relation to the failed London bombings of 21st July.
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Original: One of the four men, arrested in Heybarnes Road in the Hay Mills area, is thought to be suspected of being one of last Thursday's bombers,  has been taken to the high security Paddington Green police station in London.
Revised: One of the four men, arrested in Heybarnes Road in the Hay Mills area, is thought to be suspected of being one of last Thursday's bombers, and has been taken to the high security Paddington Green police station in London.
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Original:  The two young children were then transported to hospital but were declared deceased shortly afterwards    
Revised:  The two young children were then transported to hospital but were declared deceased shortly afterwards . 
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