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Original:  The Australian paper, The Age, is making reports about the activities of Bush and McCallum in their younger years  and the Sydney Morning Herald alleges that personal connections were instrumental in the career advancements of both men.
Revised:  The two Australian papers report on activities of Bush and McCallum in their younger years and the Sydney Morning Herald alleges that personal connections were instrumental in the career advancements of both men.
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Original:  The Australian paper, The Age, is making reports about the activities of Bush and McCallum in their younger years  and the Sydney Morning Herald alleges that personal connections were instrumental in the career advancements of both men.
Revised:  The Australian paper, The Age, is making reports about the activities of Bush and McCallum in their younger years , and the Sydney Morning Herald alleges that personal connections were instrumental in the career advancements of both men.
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Original:  Both Phillip Hudson of The Age  and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald  have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly dates back to 39 years ago when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
Revised:  Australian reporters Phillip Hudson of The Age and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly dates back to 39 years ago when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
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Original:  Both Phillip Hudson of The Age  and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald  have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly dates back to 39 years ago when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
Revised:  Both Phillip Hudson of The Age , and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly dates back to 39 years ago when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
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Original:  Both Phillip Hudson of The Age  and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald  have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly dates back to 39 years ago when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
Revised:  Both Phillip Hudson of The Age and Mark Coultan of the Sydney Morning Herald , have written stories examining the Bush/McCallum friendship which allegedly dates back to 39 years ago when they were inducted into the Skull and Bones society.
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Original:  The McCallum nomination that came on March 11 would replace Tom Schieffer, the former ambassator and also a friend of President Bush, who left the post in February 2005.
Revised:  The McCallum nomination on March 11 would replace Tom Schieffer, the former ambassator and also a friend of President Bush, who left the post in February 2005.
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Original:  The McCallum nomination that came on March 11 would replace Tom Schieffer, the former ambassator and also a friend of President Bush, who left the post in February 2005.
Revised:  The McCallum nomination that came on March 11 would replace the former ambassador Tom Schieffer who left the post in February 2005.
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Original:  After the match, he said, " “ A couple of shots he was swinging at, you could tell, just he had that confidence where he feels like he's not going to miss.
Revised:  After the match, he said, " A couple of shots he was swinging at, you could tell, just he had that confidence where he feels like he's not going to miss.
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Original: Yesterday, in Indian Wells, California, Roger Federer, number one tennis player in the world, defeated James Blake 7-5, 6-3, 6-0 to win his third consecutive Pacific Life Open  , part of the ATP Masters Series.
Revised: Yesterday, in Indian Wells, California, Roger Federer, number one tennis player in the world, defeated James Blake 7-5, 6-3, 6-0 to win his third consecutive Pacific Life Open | , part of the ATP Masters Series.
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Original: Yesterday, in Indian Wells, California, Roger Federer, number one tennis player in the world, defeated James Blake 7-5, 6-3, 6-0 to win his third consecutive Pacific Life Open | , part of the ATP Masters Series.
Revised: Yesterday, in Indian Wells, California, Roger Federer, number one tennis player in the world, defeated James Blake 7-5, 6-3, 6-0 to win his third consecutive Pacific Life Open , part of the ATP Masters Series.
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Original: Yesterday, in Indian Wells, California, Roger Federer, number one tennis player in the world, defeated James Blake 7-5, 6-3, 6-0 to win his third consecutive Pacific Life Open, part of the ATP Masters Series.
Revised: Yesterday, in Indian Wells, California, Roger Federer, the top ranked tennis player in the world, defeated James Blake 7-5, 6-3, 6-0 to win his third consecutive Pacific Life Open, part of the ATP Masters Series.
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Original:  Federer has now won three titles this year, one of them being the Australian Open .
Revised:  Federer has now won three titles this year, one of them being the .
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Original:  He has a 22-1 record, with his only loss going to Rafael Nadal at the Dubai Tennis Championship.
Revised:  He has a 22-1 record, with his only loss going to at the Dubai Tennis Championship.
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Original: David Carry and Euan Dale yesterday pulled off a remarkable feat for Scotland - claiming both first and second place in the 400m Individual Medley swimming race in Melbourne.
Revised: David Carry and Euan Dale yesterday pulled off a remarkable feat for Scotland — claiming both first and second place in the 400m Individual Medley swimming race in Melbourne.
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Original:  He becomes the first Scottish person to win two golds at the games in thirty two years - David Wilkie being the last Scot to do so in 1974.
Revised:  He becomes the first Scottish person to win two golds at the games in thirty two years — David Wilkie being the last Scot to do so in 1974.
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Original:  The games so far have presented several surprises thus far - most noteably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events so far.
Revised:  The games have presented several surprises thus far - most noteably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events so far.
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Original:  The games so far have presented several surprises thus far - most noteably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events so far.
Revised:  The games so far have presented several surprises thus far — most notably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events so far.
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Original: South Africa once again demonstrated their strenght in men's freestyle swimming by winning the 4 x 100m freestyle relay in 3:14.97, beating the Australian by slightly over half a second.
Revised: South Africa once again demonstrated its strength in men's freestyle swimming by winning the 4 x 100m freestyle relay in 3:14.97, beating the Australian by slightly over half a second.
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Original: The games have presented several surprises thus far — most notably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events so far . Matthew John Cowdrey won the sole gold medal for Australia in the 50m freestyle on Saturday.
Revised: The games have presented several surprises thus far — most notably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events until now . Matthew John Cowdrey won the sole gold medal for Australia in the 50m freestyle on Saturday.
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Original: For Carry, who swam a 4:15.98, the gold was his second of the games and Scotland's forth gold medal in swimming so far . He becomes the first Scottish person to win two golds at the games in thirty two years — David Wilkie being the last Scot to do so in 1974.
Revised: For Carry, who swam a 4:15.98, the gold was his second of the games and Scotland's forth gold medal in swimming until now . He becomes the first Scottish person to win two golds at the games in thirty two years — David Wilkie being the last Scot to do so in 1974.
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Original:  The games have presented several surprises thus far — most notably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events until now . Matthew John Cowdrey won the sole gold medal for Australia in the 50m freestyle on Saturday.
Revised:  The games have presented several surprises thus far — most notably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events so far . Matthew John Cowdrey won the sole gold medal for Australia in the 50m freestyle on Saturday.
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Original: The games have presented several surprises thus far — most notably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events so far . Matthew John Cowdrey won the sole gold medal for Australia in the 50m freestyle on Saturday.
Revised: The games have presented several surprises thus far — most notably Australia's failure to win more than one gold medal in the men's events up to this point . Matthew John Cowdrey won the sole gold medal for Australia in the 50m freestyle on Saturday.
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Original:  He becomes the first Scottish person to win two golds at the games in thirty two years — David Wilkie being the last Scot to do so in 1974.
Revised:  He becomes the first Scottish person to win two golds at the games in thirty-two years — David Wilkie being the last Scot to do so in 1974.
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Original: The have agreed to ACTA, along with 21 other EU countries.
Revised: The have signed ACTA, along with 21 other EU countries.
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Original:  , the Parliamentary Under-Secretary for the UK's , claims that the treaty is necessary to bring about "common enforcement standards and more effective international cooperation" in intellectual property law.
Revised:  , the Parliamentary Under-Secretary for the UK's , claims that signing the treaty was important to help bring about "common enforcement standards and more effective international cooperation" in intellectual property law.
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Original:  Last month, there were major protests in when that country signed ACTA, which has led to the Polish government deciding not to ratify the agreement, for now. and have both delayed  joining ACTA.
Revised:  Last month, there were major protests in when that country signed ACTA, which has led to the Polish government deciding not to ratify the agreement, for now. and have both delayed the process of joining ACTA.
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Original:  Currently Germany and the have held out on agreeing to it, awaiting a debate on the matter in the in June.
Revised:  Germany and the have held out on agreeing to it, awaiting a debate on the matter in the in June.
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Original:  , the Parliamentary Under-Secretary for the UK's , claims that signing the treaty was important to help bring about "common enforcement standards and more effective international cooperation" in intellectual property law.
Revised:  , the Parliamentary Under-Secretary for the UK's , claims signing the treaty was important to help bring about "common enforcement standards and more effective international cooperation" in intellectual property law.
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Original:  Protests also took place in , in  , in , in , in , and and in  .
Revised:  Protests also took place in , in , and and in .
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Original:  France  on the other hand, win the over all championship.
Revised:  France , on the other hand, win the over all championship.
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Original:  France  on the other hand, win the over all championship.
Revised:  France on the other hand, won the overall championship.
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Original:  Remember  The Rugby World Cup is only but eighteen months awa
Revised:  Remember — The Rugby World Cup is only but eighteen months awa
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Original: In the Six Nations Cup  Ireland beat England 28 Points to 24  to win The Grand Slam.
Revised: In the Six Nations Cup , Ireland beat England 28 Points to 24 to win The Grand Slam.
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Original: In the Six Nations Cup  Ireland beat England 28 Points to 24  to win The Grand Slam.
Revised: In the Six Nations Cup Ireland beat England 28 points to 24 to win The Grand Slam.
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Original: In the Six Nations Cup  Ireland beat England 28 Points to 24  to win The Grand Slam.
Revised: In the Six Nations Cup Ireland beat England 28 Points to 24 , to win The Grand Slam.
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Original:  Remember — The Rugby World Cup is only but eighteen months awa
Revised:  Remember — The Rugby World Cup is only eighteen months awa
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Original:  Remember — The Rugby World Cup is only eighteen months awa
Revised:  Remember — The Rugby World Cup is only eighteen months away
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Original:  Remember — The Rugby World Cup is only  eighteen months away 
Revised:  Remember — The Rugby World Cup is only but eighteen months away 
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Original:  Looking at Irelands performance in the championship they are certainly a team that gel well together and are certainly on the way up.
Revised:  Looking at Irelands performance in the championship they are certainly a team that gel well together and are on the way up.
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Original:  They attempted to preform CPR but were unable to revive her.
Revised:  They attempted to perform CPR but were unable to revive her.
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Original: Australian actor Russel Crowe and businessman Peter Homes a Court have succeded in their takeover bid of the Australian NRL Club, The South Sydney Rabbitohs.
Revised: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Homes a Court have succeded in their takeover bid of the Australian NRL Club, The South Sydney Rabbitohs.
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Original: Australian actor Russel Crowe and businessman Peter Homes a Court have succeded in their takeover bid of the Australian NRL Club, The South Sydney Rabbitohs.
Revised: Australian actor Russel Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeded in their takeover bid of the Australian NRL Club, The South Sydney Rabbitohs.
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Original: Australian actor Russel Crowe and businessman Peter Homes a Court have succeded in their takeover bid of the Australian NRL Club, The South Sydney Rabbitohs.
Revised: Australian actor Russel Crowe and businessman Peter Homes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the Australian NRL Club, The South Sydney Rabbitohs.
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Original: Australian actor Russel Crowe and businessman Peter Homes a Court have succeded in their takeover bid of the Australian NRL Club, The South Sydney Rabbitohs.
Revised: Australian actor Russel Crowe and businessman Peter Homes a Court have succeded in their takeover bid of the Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club, the South Sydney Rabbitohs.
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Original:  Those against the bid have claimed the club is selling out 98 years of heratige
Revised:  Those against the bid have claimed the club is selling out 98 years of heritage
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Original: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the  Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club , the South Sydney Rabbitohs .
Revised: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club .
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Original:  The men required  75\% of the clubs members to vote yes on the $3 million takeover bid for it to pass , narrowly winning by just 32 votes (0.8\%).
Revised:  The men required 75\% of the club's members vote yes on the $3 million takeover bid for it to pass , narrowly winning by just 32 votes (0.8\%).
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Original:  Supporters of the bid have said it gives the Rabbitohs a chance to return to their glory days after last year's finish of 13th in the 15 team competition.
Revised:  Supporters of the bid have said it gives the Rabbitohs a chance to return to their glory days after last year's finish of 13th in the 15-team competition.
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Original:  The team has not won a premiership in 35 years but still retains the record for most Premiership wins  with 20 on the record books.
Revised:  The team has not won a premiership in 35 years but still retains the record for most Premiership wins , with 20 on the record books.
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Original:  Those against the bid have claimed the club is selling out 98 years of heritage
Revised:  Those against the bid objected that the club is selling out 98 years of heritage
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Original: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their takeover bid of the South Sydney Rabbitohs, an Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club.
Revised: Australian actor Russell Crowe and businessman Peter Holmes a Court have succeeded in their bid to take over the South Sydney Rabbitohs, an Australian National Rugby League (NRL) Club.
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Original:  The team has not won a premiership in 35 years but still retains the record for most Premiership wins, with 20 on the record books.
Revised:  The team has not won a Premiership in 35 years but still retains the record for most Premiership wins, with 20 on the record books.
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Original:  Clashes around the site between the security forces and the youth occurred Monday before the anniversary as one of the largest crowds yet moved close to the symbol of last year's protest movement and again on Tuesdaythe crowds were repelled .
Revised:  Clashes around the site between the security forces and the youth occurred Monday before the anniversary as one of the largest crowds yet moved close to the symbol of last year's protest movement . Again, on Tuesday, crowds were repelled .
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Original:  Security  also rounded up six Americans who were involved in protests and all parties agreed the Americans will leave the country.
Revised:  Security forces also rounded up six Americans who were involved in protests and all parties agreed the Americans will leave the country.
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Original:  Security  also rounded up six Americans who were involved in protests and all parties agreed the Americans will leave the country.
Revised:  Security also rounded up six who took part in the protests and all parties agreed the Americans will leave the country.
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Original:  The protest ended  few hundred meters away from the roundabout with police firing tear gas and stun grenades after using megaphones to warn protesters that the march was unauthorised and they should disperse.
Revised:  The protest ended a few hundred meters away from the roundabout with police firing tear gas and stun grenades after using megaphones to warn protesters that the march was unauthorised and they should disperse.
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Original:  The protest ended  few hundred meters away from the roundabout with police firing tear gas and stun grenades after using megaphones to warn protesters that the march was unauthorised and they should disperse.
Revised:  The protest ended few hundred meters away from the roundabout with police firing tear gas and stun grenades after using megaphones to warn protesters the march was unauthorised and they should disperse.
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Original:  Meanwhile, five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit in in a yard that has been dubbed 'Freedom Square'  in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
Revised:  Five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit in in a yard that has been dubbed 'Freedom Square' in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
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Original:  Meanwhile, five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit in in a yard that has been dubbed 'Freedom Square'  in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
Revised:  Meanwhile, five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit-in in a yard that has been dubbed 'Freedom Square' in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
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Original:  Meanwhile, five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit in in a yard that has been dubbed 'Freedom Square'  in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
Revised:  Meanwhile, five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit in in a yard that is dubbed 'Freedom Square' in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
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Original:  Meanwhile, five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit in in a yard that has been dubbed 'Freedom Square'  in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
Revised:  Meanwhile, five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit in in a yard that has been dubbed 'Freedom Square' , in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
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Original:  This was in the same location as the opposition's week-long 'sit-in' for political reforms last week.
Revised:  This is the same location as the opposition's week-long 'sit-in' for political reforms last week.
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Original:  This was in the same location as the opposition's week-long 'sit-in' for political reforms last week.
Revised:  This was in the same location as the opposition's week-long 'sit-in' for political reforms the prior week.
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Original: Five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit-in in a yard that is dubbed 'Freedom Square', in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
Revised: Five opposition political groups headed by , Bahrain's largest political opposition party, organized an authorized sit-in in a yard , dubbed 'Freedom Square', in Al Muqsha village outside of Manama.
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Original:  This is the same location as the opposition's week-long 'sit-in' for political reforms the prior week.
Revised:  This is the same location as the opposition's week-long 'sit-in' for political reforms 
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Original:  At the sit in last week, Ayat al-Qormozi, who is a Bahraini female poet and visible leader in the opposition movement, called for the crowd in Al Muqsha to march to the symbolic roundabout and chanted, "We will return.
Revised:  . At that sit-in last week, Ayat al-Qormozi, who is a Bahraini female poet and visible leader in the opposition movement, called for the crowd in Al Muqsha to march to the symbolic roundabout and chanted, "We will return.
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Original:  At the sit in last week, Ayat al-Qormozi, who is a Bahraini female poet and visible leader in the opposition movement, called for the crowd in Al Muqsha to march to the symbolic roundabout and chanted, "We will return.
Revised:  At the sit in last week, Ayat al-Qormozi, a Bahraini female poet and visible leader in the opposition movement, called for the crowd in Al Muqsha to march to the symbolic roundabout and chanted, "We will return.
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Original:  Most of the clashes between police and the people have occurred in the neighborhoods.
Revised:  Most clashes between police and the people have occurred in the neighborhoods.
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Original:  Most of the clashes between police and the people have occurred in the neighborhoods.
Revised:  Most of the clashes between police and protesters occurred in the neighborhoods.
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