wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Kerik resigned as police commissioner two months following the terrorist attacks to spend time with his family, but following the invasion of Iraq  he chose to lead the training for Iraqi law enforcement   
Revised:  Kerik resigned as police commissioner two months following the terrorist attacks to spend time with his family, but following the invasion of Iraq he chose to lead the training of Iraqi law enforcement 
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Original:  Wikinews is a nonprofit independent news site run by the non-profit Wikimedia Foundatio 
Revised:  Wikinews is a nonprofit independent news site run by the non-profit Wikimedia Foundation. 
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Original: Serbia and Montenegro will now enjoys the U.S. Generalized System of Preferences which includes allowing duty-free import of more then 4600 products.
Revised: Serbia and Montenegro will now enjoy the U.S. Generalized System of Preferences which includes allowing duty-free import of more then 4600 products.
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Original:  The U.S. President, George W. Bush, suspended all sanctions on Serbia and Montenegro by a decree yesterday.
Revised: right The U.S. President, George W. Bush, suspended all sanctions on Serbia and Montenegro by a decree yesterday.
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Original: Spain, a predominantly Catholic country, became the third nation Thursday to legalize same-sex marriage following The Netherlands and Belgium.
Revised: Spain, a predominantly Catholic country, Thursday became the world's third nation to legalize same-sex marriage following The Netherlands and Belgium.
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Original:  Canada, whose lower house has voted in favor of same-sex marriage, is widely expected to have that Bill pass also in the upper house, making Canada the fourth country to legalize same-sex marriage .
Revised:  Canada, whose lower house has voted in favor of same-sex marriage, is widely expected to have that bill pass also in the upper house, making Canada the fourth country to legalize same-sex marriage .
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Original:  Canada, whose lower house has voted in favor of same-sex marriage, is widely expected to have that Bill pass also in the upper house, making Canada the fourth country to legalize same-sex marriage .
Revised:  Canada, whose lower house has voted in favor of same-sex marriage, is widely expected to have that Bill pass also in the upper house, making Canada the fourth country to legalize the marriage of homosexual couples .
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Original:  The bill, which became law immediately, says : "Matrimony shall have the same requirements and effects regardless of whether the persons involved are of the same or different sex." Catholic leaders and the conservative opposition People's Party lobbied heavily against the bill "calling it an assault on the institution of marriage and a threat to social stability."
Revised:  The bill, which became law immediately, says , "Matrimony shall have the same requirements and effects regardless of whether the persons involved are of the same or different sex." Catholic leaders and the conservative opposition People's Party lobbied heavily against the bill "calling it an assault on the institution of marriage and a threat to social stability."
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Original:  The Roman Catholic Church endorsed a June 18 opposition rally in which about 2 hundreds of thousands marched through Madrid including 20 bishops.
Revised:  The Roman Catholic Church endorsed a June 18 opposition rally in which about two hundred thousand marched through Madrid including 20 bishops.
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Original:  The Roman Catholic Church endorsed a June 18 opposition rally in which about 2 hundreds of thousands marched through Madrid including 20 bishops.
Revised:  The Roman Catholic Church endorsed a June 18 opposition rally in which about 2 hundreds of thousands marched through Madrid , including twenty bishops.
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Original:  Recent polls suggest Spaniards support gay marriage  saying 62 percent of Spaniards support the government's action on gay marriage , and 30 percent oppose it.
Revised:  Recent polls suggest Spaniards support gay marriage , saying 62 percent of Spaniards support the government's action on gay marriage , and 30 percent oppose it.
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Original:  Recent polls suggest Spaniards support gay marriage  saying 62 percent of Spaniards support the government's action on gay marriage , and 30 percent oppose it.
Revised:  Recent polls suggest Spaniards support gay marriage saying 62 percent of Spaniards support the government's action on homosexual marriage while 30 percent oppose it.
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Original:  According to an Associated Press story , Beatriz Gimeno, a longtime leader of the gay rights movement in Spain , held back tears as she hugged her partner Boti after the vote.
Revised:  According to an Associated Press report , Beatriz Gimeno, a longtime leader of the gay rights movement in Spain , held back tears as she hugged her partner Boti after the vote.
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Original:  According to an Associated Press story , Beatriz Gimeno, a longtime leader of the gay rights movement in Spain , held back tears as she hugged her partner Boti after the vote.
Revised:  According to an Associated Press story , Beatriz Gimeno, a longtime leader of Spain's gay rights movement in Spain , held back tears as she hugged her partner Boti after the vote.
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Original:  According to an Associated Press story , Beatriz Gimeno, a longtime leader of the gay rights movement in Spain , held back tears as she hugged her partner Boti after the vote.
Revised:  According to an Associated Press story , Beatriz Gimeno, a longtime leader of the gay rights movement , held back tears as she hugged her partner Boti after the vote.
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Original:  Gay couples can get married as soon as the law is published in the official government registry as early as Friday or within two weeks at the latest, parliament 's press office said
Revised:  Gay couples can get married as soon as the law is published in the official government registry as early as Friday or within two weeks at the latest, Parliament 's press office said
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Original:  Canada, whose lower house has voted in favor of same-sex marriage, is widely expected to have that bill pass also in the upper house, making Canada the fourth country to legalize the marriage of homosexual couples.
Revised:  Canada, whose lower house has voted in favor of same-sex marriage, is widely expected to have that bill pass also in the upper house, making Canada the fourth country to legalize the marriage of gay couples.
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Original:  Recent polls suggest Spaniards support gay marriage, saying 62 percent of Spaniards support the government's action on homosexual marriage while 30 percent oppose it.
Revised:  Recent polls suggest Spaniards support gay marriage, saying 62 percent of Spaniards support the government's action on gay marriage while 30 percent oppose it.
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Original: The comments have caused an uproar  not just in the NBA, but within the Clippers team where players wore their warm-up jerseys inside out before their Game 4 playoff loss with the Golden State Warriors.
Revised: The comments have caused an uproar , not just in the NBA, but within the Clippers team where players wore their warm-up jerseys inside out before their Game 4 playoff loss with the Golden State Warriors.
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Original: The comments have caused an uproar  not just in the NBA, but within the Clippers team where players wore their warm-up jerseys inside out before their Game 4 playoff loss with the Golden State Warriors.
Revised: The comments have caused an uproar not just in the NBA, but within the Clippers team where players wore their warm-up jerseys inside out before their Game 4 playoff loss against the Golden State Warriors.
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Original:  In this game , players wore their warm-up jerseys inside out before their Game 4 playoff loss against the Golden State Warriors . Around the league the San Antonio Spurs played in black socks and the Miami Heat practiced with their warm-up shirts inside out to mimic the LA Clippers.
Revised:  In protest , players wore their warm-up jerseys inside out before their Game 4 playoff loss against the Golden State Warriors . Around the league the San Antonio Spurs played in black socks and the Miami Heat practiced with their warm-up shirts inside out to mimic the LA Clippers.
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Original:  In this game , players wore their warm-up jerseys inside out before their Game 4 playoff loss against the Golden State Warriors . Around the league the San Antonio Spurs played in black socks and the Miami Heat practiced with their warm-up shirts inside out to mimic the LA Clippers.
Revised:  In this game , players wore their warm-up jerseys inside out before their Game 4 playoff loss against the Golden State Warriors , while in other games throughout the league the San Antonio Spurs played in black socks and the Miami Heat practiced with their warm-up shirts inside out to mimic the LA Clippers.
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Original: owner has received a lifetime ban from the NBA and has been fined $US2.5million for his racist comments this week.
Revised: owner has received a lifetime ban from the (National Basketball Association) and has been fined $US2.5million for his racist comments this week.
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Original: Donald Sterling in 1989. owner has received a lifetime ban from the  (National Basketball Association) and has been fined $US2.5million for his racist comments this week.
Revised:  owner has received a lifetime ban from the (National Basketball Association) and has been fined $US2.5million for his racist comments this week.
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Original: Donald Sterling in 1989. owner has received a lifetime ban from the  (National Basketball Association) and has been fined $US2.5million for his racist comments this week.
Revised: Donald Sterling in 1989. owner has received a lifetime ban from the NBA (National Basketball Association) and has been fined $US2.5million for his racist comments this week.
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Original:  The governor of the National Bank of Romania, Mugur Isărescu, said that the redomination of the leu marks the symbolic end of Romania's economic transition from a planned economy under Communism, which was overthrown in 1989, to a free market economy.
Revised: Redomination represents the symbolic end to transition The governor of the National Bank of Romania, Mugur Isărescu, said that the redomination of the leu marks the symbolic end of Romania's economic transition from a planned economy under Communism, which was overthrown in 1989, to a free market economy.
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Original:   Although the introduction of the new leu is viewed as beneficial on the whole, since it will bring Romania's currency more in line with the value of important global currencies such as the euro and the US dollar, concerns have been raised that the new leu will fuel inflation.
Revised:  Concern for inflation Although the introduction of the new leu is viewed as beneficial on the whole, since it will bring Romania's currency more in line with the value of important global currencies such as the euro and the US dollar, concerns have been raised that the new leu will fuel inflation.
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Original:  This ensures that all businesses continue to display prices in both the new leu and the old leu until the end of 2006, and hence they will not be able to raise prices as easily, for fear of becoming less competitive in the marke
Revised:  This ensures that all businesses continue to display prices in both the new leu and the old leu until the end of 2006, and hence they will not be able to raise prices as easily, for fear of becoming less competitive in the market
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Original: Today, Romania introduces its new redominated currency, the new leu (code: RON), which is valued at 10,000 old lei (code: ROL).
Revised: Today, Romania introduces its new redenominated currency, the new leu (code: RON), which is valued at 10,000 old lei (code: ROL).
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Original:  The process, which is known as redomination , started in March 2005 when Romania started dual-currency display and all prices had to be displayed in both the old leu and the new leu.
Revised:  The process, which is known as redenomination , started in March 2005 when Romania started dual-currency display and all prices had to be displayed in both the old leu and the new leu.
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Original:  The redomination (or conversion from the old to the new leu) is simple — 10,000 old lei are replaced by 1 new leu.
Revised:  The redenomination (or conversion from the old to the new leu) is simple — 10,000 old lei are replaced by 1 new leu.
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Original:  Redomination represents the symbolic end to transition The governor of the National Bank of Romania, Mugur Isărescu, said that the redomination of the leu marks the symbolic end of Romania's economic transition from a planned economy under Communism, which was overthrown in 1989, to a free market economy.
Revised:  Redenomination represents the symbolic end to transition The governor of the National Bank of Romania, Mugur Isărescu, said that the redomination of the leu marks the symbolic end of Romania's economic transition from a planned economy under Communism, which was overthrown in 1989, to a free market economy.
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Original:  Redomination represents the symbolic end to transition The governor of the National Bank of Romania, Mugur Isărescu, said that the redomination of the leu marks the symbolic end of Romania's economic transition from a planned economy under Communism, which was overthrown in 1989, to a free market economy.
Revised:  Redomination represents the symbolic end to transition The governor of the National Bank of Romania, Mugur Isărescu, said that the redenomination of the leu marks the symbolic end of Romania's economic transition from a planned economy under Communism, which was overthrown in 1989, to a free market economy.
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Original:  The reason for redomination was mainly the fact that the leu had become severely devalued, especially in the 1990s, due to high inflation rates.
Revised:  The reason for redenomination was mainly the fact that the leu had become severely devalued, especially in the 1990s, due to high inflation rates.
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Original:  Schröder  aimed to lose the vote of confidence in order to dissolve the Bundestag and to achieve earlier elections.
Revised:  Schröder had aimed to lose the vote of confidence in order to dissolve the Bundestag and to achieve earlier elections.
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Original:  However, she did criticise , the coalition government of the Social-Democrats and the Greens, by the country's high unemployment rates (which have peaked to 5 million) and low economic growth.
Revised:  However, she did criticise the coalition government of the Social-Democrats and the Greens, by the country's high unemployment rates (which have peaked to 5 million) and low economic growth.
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Original:  However, she did criticise , the coalition government of the Social-Democrats and the Greens, by the country's high unemployment rates (which have peaked to 5 million) and low economic growth.
Revised:  However, she did criticise , the coalition government of the Social-Democrats and the Greens, for the country's high unemployment rates (which have peaked to 5 million) and low economic growth.
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Original:  A Green deputy, Werner Schulz, attacked Schröder  using the vote of confidence in order to achieve early elections, which is from his point of view unconstitutional.
Revised:  A Green deputy, Werner Schulz, attacked Schröder 's using the vote of confidence in order to achieve early elections, which is from his point of view unconstitutional.
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Original:  At least one deputy has announced , he would go to the Federal Constitutional Court to sue against Schöder's way of using the vote of confidence.
Revised:  At least one deputy has announced his intends going to the Federal Constitutional Court to sue against Schöder's way of using the vote of confidence.
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Original:  At least one deputy has announced , he would go to the Federal Constitutional Court to sue against Schöder's way of using the vote of confidence.
Revised:  At least one deputy has announced , he would go to the Federal Constitutional Court to appeal against Schöder's way of using the vote of confidence.
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Original:  Then the court will have to decide whether it was constitutional or not.
Revised:  The court will then have to decide whether it was constitutional or not.
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Original:  In his second term as Chancellor, he tried to start a reform agenda (Agenda 2010) which  to cut the budget deficit and unemployment in Germany, which is criticised as neo-liberalism by several supporters of his party.
Revised:  In his second term as Chancellor, he tried to start a reform agenda (Agenda 2010) which aimed to cut the budget deficit and unemployment in Germany, which is criticised as neo-liberalism by several supporters of his party.
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Original:  In his second term as Chancellor, he tried to start a reform agenda (Agenda 2010) which  to cut the budget deficit and unemployment in Germany, which is criticised as neo-liberalism by several supporters of his party.
Revised:  In his second term as Chancellor, he tried to start a reform agenda (Agenda 2010) which to cut the budget deficit and unemployment in Germany, which has been criticised as neo-liberalism by several supporters of his party.
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Original:  During the debate, in which opposition leader Angela Merkel explained that her party, the Christian Democrats supports early elections.
Revised:  During the debate, opposition leader Angela Merkel explained that her party, the Christian Democrats supports early elections.
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Original:  However, she did criticise the coalition government of the Social-Democrats and the Greens, for the country's high unemployment rates (which have peaked to 5 million) and low economic growth.
Revised:  However, she did criticise the coalition government of the Social-Democrats and the Greens, for the country's high unemployment rates (which have peaked at 5 million) and low economic growth.
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Original:  At least one deputy has announced his intends going to the Federal Constitutional Court to appeal against Schöder's way of using the vote of confidence.
Revised:  At least one deputy has announced he intends going to the Federal Constitutional Court to appeal against Schöder's way of using the vote of confidence.
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Original: The German Federal Chancellor (Bundskanzler), Gerhard Schröder, lost a motion of confidence in the German lower parliamentary house, the Bundestag.
Revised: The German Federal Chancellor (Bundskanzler), Gerhard Schröder, lost a confidence vote in the German lower parliamentary house, the Bundestag.
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Original: The German Federal Chancellor (Bundskanzler), Gerhard Schröder,  lost a confidence vote in the German lower parliamentary house, the Bundestag.
Revised: The German Federal Chancellor (Bundskanzler), Gerhard Schröder, deliberately lost a confidence vote in the German lower parliamentary house, the Bundestag.
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Original:  At the moment, opinion polls are showing a majority for conservative opposition  
Revised:  At the moment, opinion polls are showing a majority for conservative opposition . 
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Original:  Army helicopters flew overhead as protestors threw stones at solidiers .
Revised:  Army helicopters flew overhead as protestors threw stones at soldiers .
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Original: The UN in Congo have said that four people may have been killed in Kinchasa , but that is not yet confimrmed.
Revised: The UN in Congo have said that four people may have been killed in Kinshasa , but that is not yet confimrmed.
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Original: They were met by security forces who shot in the air and threw tear-gas grenades at the protestors .
Revised: They were met by security forces who shot in the air and threw tear-gas grenades at the protesters .
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Original:  A journalist in the area saw bruised and bandaged protestors who said they had been beaten by police, and a local TV station broadcast images of a protestor who they said had been shot dead.
Revised:  A journalist in the area saw bruised and bandaged protestors who said they had been beaten by police, and a local TV station broadcast images of a protester who they said had been shot dead.
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Original:  In another province, heavy weapons were fired at protestors . Casualties are as yet unknown.
Revised:  In another province, heavy weapons were fired at protesters . Casualties are as yet unknown.
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Original:  Lawmakers agreed, however, to a bill to keep the state's parks open.
Revised:  Lawmakers agreed, however, to a bill that would keep the state's parks open.
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Original:  In an interview with , he asked Blair whether he prays with American president .
Revised:  In an interview with , he asked Blair whether he prays with president .
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Original:  More recently, Paxman gave what Jonathan Freedland in referred to as a "mauling" to Conservative MP and junior minister when she appeared on the show to defend a change in fuel duty but showed herself to be too junior to have any knowledge of the decision making process.
Revised:  More recently, Paxman gave what Jonathan Freedland in referred to as a "mauling" to and junior minister when she appeared on the show to defend a change in fuel duty but showed herself to be too junior to have any knowledge of the decision making process.
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Original:  The BBC said that Paxman had made the decision to leave last summer but that he had held off on leaving to help the show through "a difficult period".
Revised:  The BBC said Paxman had made the decision to leave last summer but that he had held off on leaving to help the show through "a difficult period".
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Original:  The BBC said that Paxman had made the decision to leave last summer but that he had held off on leaving to help the show through "a difficult period".
Revised:  The BBC said that Paxman had made the decision to leave last summer but he had held off on leaving to help the show through "a difficult period".
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Original:  The BBC said Paxman had made the decision to leave last summerbut he had held off on leaving to help the show through "a difficult period".
Revised:  The BBC said Paxman had postponed his departure, after deciding upon it last summer, because Newsnight was going through "a difficult period".
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Original: Paxman became a notorious political interviewer after tearing a great number of political leaders apart: in an interview with regarding the dismissal in 1995 of the director of the prison service, , Paxman asked Howard the same question twelve times in a row without getting a satisfactory answer.
Revised: Paxman became a notorious political interviewer after tearing a great number of political leaders apart: In an interview with regarding the dismissal in 1995 of the director of the prison service, , Paxman asked Howard the same question twelve times in a row without getting a satisfactory answer.
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Original: Paxman became a notorious political interviewer after tearing a great number of political leaders apart: In an interview with regarding the dismissal in 1995 of the director of the prison service, , Paxman asked Howard the same questiontwelve timesin a row without getting a satisfactory answer .
Revised: Paxman became a notorious political interviewer after tearing a great number of political leaders apart: In an interview with regarding the dismissal in 1995 of the director of the prison service, , when Howard didn't directly answer a question, Paxman asked again — eleven more times .
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