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Original: The Newcastle University's School of Agriculture, Food and Rural Development's (of the Newcastle University Faculty of Science, Agriculture and Engineering) researchers have found that farmers who named their dairy cattle Ermintrude, Daisy, La vache qui rit, Buttercup, Betsy, or Gertrude  improved their overall milk yield by almost 500 pints (284 liters) annually.
Revised: The Newcastle University's School of Agriculture, Food and Rural Development's (of the Newcastle University Faculty of Science, Agriculture and Engineering) researchers have found that farmers who named their dairy cattle Ermintrude, Daisy, La vache qui rit, Buttercup, Betsy, or Gertrude , improved their overall milk yield by almost 500 pints (284 liters) annually.
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Original:  "Just as people respond better to the personal touch, cows also feel happier and more relaxed if they are given a bit more one-to-one attention," said Dr Catherine Douglas  lead researcher of the university's School of Agriculture, Food and Rural Development.
Revised:  "Just as people respond better to the personal touch, cows also feel happier and more relaxed if they are given a bit more one-to-one attention," said Dr Catherine Douglas , lead researcher of the university's School of Agriculture, Food and Rural Development.
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Original:  The scientific paper also finds that "if cows are slightly fearful of humans, they could produce [the hormone] cortisol, which suppresses milk production," Douglas notes . "Farmers who have named their cows, probably have a better relationship with them.
Revised:  The scientific paper also finds that "if cows are slightly fearful of humans, they could produce [the hormone] cortisol, which suppresses milk production," Douglas noted . "Farmers who have named their cows, probably have a better relationship with them.
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Original: ]] South Norfolk goldtop-milk producer Su Mahon, one of the country's top  Jersey dairy herds, agreed with Newcastle's findings.
Revised: ]] South Norfolk goldtop-milk producer Su Mahon, one of the country's top breeder of Jersey dairy herds, agreed with Newcastle's findings.
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Original:  Douglas counters that England doesn’t permit dairy cattle to be injected Hormones .
Revised:  Douglas counters that England doesn’t permit dairy cattle to be injected hormones .
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Original:  “ We treat all our cows like one of the family and maybe that's why we produce more milk, ” said Mrs Mahon.
Revised:  " We treat all our cows like one of the family and maybe that's why we produce more milk, ” said Mrs Mahon.
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Original:  “ We treat all our cows like one of the family and maybe that's why we produce more milk, ” said Mrs Mahon.
Revised:  “ We treat all our cows like one of the family and maybe that's why we produce more milk, " said Mrs Mahon.
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Original: “ My brother-in-law Bobby milks the cows and nearly all of them have their own name, which is quite something when there are about 200 of them.
Revised: " My brother-in-law Bobby milks the cows and nearly all of them have their own name, which is quite something when there are about 200 of them.
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Original:  ” Jackie Maxwell noted.
Revised:  " Jackie Maxwell noted.
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Original:  Limiters are also not supposed to be used during that time frame  .
Revised:  Limiters are also not supposed to be used during that time frame . However, this law does not apply to municipally owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, which are not regulated by the state .
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Original: Marvin Schur, a 93-year-old man from Bay City, Michigan has died after the electric company limited his electric use after he failed to pay over US$1,000 in past due payments.
Revised: Marvin Schur, a 93-year-old man from Bay City, Michigan has died after the electric company limited his electric use due to his failure to pay over US$1,000 in past due payments.
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Original: Marvin Schur, a 93-year-old man from Bay City, Michigan has died after the electric company limited his electric use after he failed to pay over US$1,000 in past due payments.
Revised: Marvin Schur, a 93-year-old man from Bay City, Michigan has died after the electric company limited his electric use after he failed to pay over US$1,000 in past-due payments.
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Original:  Bay City Electric Light & Power installed a power limiting device on his home on January 13.
Revised:  Bay City Electric Light & Power installed a power-limiting device on his home on January 13.
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Original:  The device would limit the amount of power the resident uses and would essentially shut it off if that limit is reached, or  the resident fails to pay the outstanding bill within 10 days of installation.
Revised:  The device would limit the amount of power the resident uses and would essentially shut it off if that limit is reached, or if the resident fails to pay the outstanding bill within 10 days of installation.
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Original:  Bay City power says that a warning  that the power would be turned off and a limiter installed, was placed on Schur's front door.
Revised:  Bay City power says that a warning , indicating that the power would be turned off and a limiter installed, was placed on Schur's front door.
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Original:  Bay City power says that a warning  that the power would be turned off and a limiter installed, was placed on Schur's front door.
Revised:  Bay City power says that a warning that the power was to be turned off and a limiter installed, was placed on Schur's front door.
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Original:  Bay City power says that a warning  that the power would be turned off and a limiter installed, was placed on Schur's front door.
Revised:  Bay City power says that a warning that the power would be turned off and a limiter installed, had been placed on Schur's front door.
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Original:  According to an autopsy performed on Schur's body , he died of hypothermia and "a slow, painful death" , said Dr. Kanu Virani, who performed the autopsy . "Hypothermia shuts the whole system down, slowly.
Revised:  The autopsy performed on Schur's body , he died of hypothermia and "a slow, painful death" , said Dr. Kanu Virani, who performed the autopsy . "Hypothermia shuts the whole system down, slowly.
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Original:  According to an autopsy performed on Schur's body , he died of hypothermia and "a slow, painful death" , said Dr. Kanu Virani, who performed the autopsy . "Hypothermia shuts the whole system down, slowly.
Revised:  According to an autopsy performed on Schur's body concluded that he had died "a slow, painful death" , said Dr. Kanu Virani, who performed the autopsy . "Hypothermia shuts the whole system down, slowly.
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Original:  According to an autopsy performed on Schur's body , he died of hypothermia and "a slow, painful death" , said Dr. Kanu Virani, who performed the autopsy . "Hypothermia shuts the whole system down, slowly.
Revised:  According to an autopsy performed on Schur's body , he died of hypothermia and "a slow, painful death" , said Dr. Kanu Virani, who performed the autopsy , explained: "Hypothermia shuts the whole system down, slowly.
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Original:  It was less than 32 degrees Fahrenheit in his home when neighbors found Schur dead on January 17.
Revised:  It was less than 32 degrees Fahrenheit in Schur's home when neighbors found Schur dead on January 17.
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Original:  Virani also said that it was his first time performing an autopsy on a body in which "the person froze to death indoors." "His furnace was not running - the insides of his windows were full of ice the morning we found him," said George A. Pauwels Jr., one of the neighbors to find Schur's body.
Revised:  Virani commented that it was his first time performing an autopsy on a body in which "the person froze to death indoors." "His furnace was not running - the insides of his windows were full of ice the morning we found him," said George A. Pauwels Jr., one of the neighbors to find Schur's body.
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Original:  Pauwels, along with his wife Shannon, were the ones to find Schur's body.
Revised:  Pauwels, along with his wife when they found Schur's body.
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Original:  However, this law does not apply to municipally owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, which are not regulated by the state.
Revised:  However, this law does not apply to municipally-owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, which are not regulated by the state.
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Original:  "I've taken calls from Canada, Massachusetts, Texas, New York, Alabama - and that's just the ones I can think of off the top of my head," said Melody Roth , of the city's administrative office  who also added that people from all over are "calling all city departments, not just our office."
Revised:  "I've taken calls from Canada, Massachusetts, Texas, New York, Alabama - and that's just the ones I can think of off the top of my head," said Melody Roth of the city's administrative office who also added that people from all over are "calling all city departments, not just our office."
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Original:  "I've taken calls from Canada, Massachusetts, Texas, New York, Alabama - and that's just the ones I can think of off the top of my head," said Melody Roth , of the city's administrative office  who also added that people from all over are "calling all city departments, not just our office."
Revised:  "I've taken calls from Canada, Massachusetts, Texas, New York, Alabama - and that's just the ones I can think of off the top of my head," said Melody Roth , of the city's administrative office , who also added that people from all over are "calling all city departments, not just our office."
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Original:  The Michigan Public Services Commission has a law in which power cannot be shut off to any home between November 1 and March 31 , as long as a resident over the age of 65 resides on the property.
Revised:  In Michigan it is illegal for a utility company to disconnect power to any home between November 1 and March 31 , as long as a resident over the age of 65 resides on the property.
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Original:  The Michigan Public Services Commission has a law in which power cannot be shut off to any home between November 1 and March 31 , as long as a resident over the age of 65 resides on the property.
Revised:  The Michigan Public Services Commission has a law in which power cannot be shut off to any home between November 1 and March 31 when a resident is over the age of 65 resides on the property.
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Original:  The Michigan Public Services Commission has a law in which power cannot be shut off to any home between November 1 and March 31 , as long as a resident over the age of 65 resides on the property.
Revised:  The Michigan Public Services Commission has a law in which power cannot be shut off to any home between November 1 and March 31 , as long as a resident over the age of 65.
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Original:  However, this law does not apply to municipally-owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, which are not regulated by the state.
Revised:  However, unicipally-owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, which are not regulated by the state.
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Original:  However, this law does not apply to municipally-owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, which are not regulated by the state.
Revised:  However, this law does not apply to municipally-owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, are not regulated by the state.
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Original:  However, unicipally-owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, are not regulated by the state.
Revised:  However, municipally-owned electric utilities like the one in Bay City, are not regulated by the state.
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Original: Bush appointee and "Skull and Bones" brother, Robert McCallum , overrode the Justice Department lawyers who have been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
Revised: Bush appointee and "Skull and Bones" acquaintance Robert McCallum overrode the Justice Department lawyers who have been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
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Original: Bush appointee , Robert McCallum , overrode the Justice Department lawyers who have been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
Revised: Bush appointee Robert McCallum overrode Justice Department lawyers who have been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
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Original: Bush appointee , Robert McCallum , overrode the Justice Department lawyers who have been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
Revised: Bush appointee , Robert McCallum , overrode the Justice Department lawyers who had been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
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Original:  The New York Times pointed out that McCallum was a Skull and Bones brother of President Bush.
Revised:  The New York Times pointed out that McCallum was a Skull and Bones 'brother' of President Bush.
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Original:  Bush strategist , Karl Rove was a Phillip Morris lobbyist before Bush was elected President in 2000
Revised:  Bush strategist Karl Rove was a Phillip Morris lobbyist before Bush was elected President in 2000
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Original:  Bush appointee Robert McCallum overrode Justice Department lawyers who had been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
Revised: Tobacco Field Bush appointee Robert McCallum overrode Justice Department lawyers who had been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
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Original: Tobacco Field Bush appointee Robert McCallum overrode Justice Department lawyers who had been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
Revised: Tobacco field Bush appointee Robert McCallum overrode Justice Department lawyers who had been handling the government's tobacco racketeering trial for the past 5 years.
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Original:  McCallum ordered them to reduce the penalties sought at the close of the nine-month trial from $130 billion to $10 billion, angering some of the trial lawyers to the point where it is reported they threatened to quit their jobs.
Revised:  McCallum ordered the lawyers to reduce the penalties sought at the close of the nine-month trial from $130 billion to $10 billion, angering some of the trial lawyers to the point where it is reported they threatened to quit their jobs.
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Original:  Congressional democrats are opposing the slashing of the penalties to the tobacco industry  and have asked Attorney General Alberto Gonzales not to enter into a settlement based on "the unreasonably weak demands made by the government."
Revised:  Congressional Democrats oppose the slashing of the penalties to the tobacco industry and have asked Attorney General Alberto Gonzales not to enter into a settlement based on "the unreasonably weak demands made by the government."
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Original:  Congressional democrats are opposing the slashing of the penalties to the tobacco industry  and have asked Attorney General Alberto Gonzales not to enter into a settlement based on "the unreasonably weak demands made by the government."
Revised:  Congressional democrats are opposing the slashing of the penalties for the tobacco industry and have asked Attorney General Alberto Gonzales not to enter into a settlement based on "the unreasonably weak demands made by the government."
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Original:  Congressional democrats are opposing the slashing of the penalties to the tobacco industry  and have asked Attorney General Alberto Gonzales not to enter into a settlement based on "the unreasonably weak demands made by the government."
Revised:  Congressional democrats are opposing the slashing of the penalties to the tobacco industry , and have asked Attorney General Alberto Gonzales not to enter into a settlement based on "the unreasonably weak demands made by the government."
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Original:  Bush has appointed a number of Skull and Bones club members to government positions since he became President, including William Donaldson, who headed up the S.E.C. and was a director of Philip Morris tobacco company at one time .
Revised:  Bush has appointed a number of Skull and Bones club members to government positions since he became President, including SEC head and former w:Philip Morris executive William Donaldson .
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Original:  Bush strategist Karl Rove was a Phillip Morris lobbyist before Bush was elected President in 2000 
Revised:  Bush strategist Karl Rove was a Phillip Morris lobbyist before Bush asked him to work on his 2000 
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Original:  Bush has appointed a number of Skull and Bones club members to government positions since he became President, including SEC head and former w: Philip Morris executive William Donaldson.
Revised:  Bush has appointed a number of Skull and Bones club members to government positions since he became President, including SEC head and former Philip Morris executive William Donaldson.
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Original:  Bush strategist Karl Rove was a Phillip Morris lobbyist before Bush asked him to work on his 2000 campaign for the presidency .
Revised:  Bush strategist Karl Rove was a Phillip Morris lobbyist before Bush asked him to work on his 2000 campaign for the presidency 
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Original:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the Tamil Tigers have 1,200 "well-trained" cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed  
Revised:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the Tamil Tigers have 1,200 "well-trained" cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed . 
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Original:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the Tamil Tigers have 1,200 "well-trained" cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed  
Revised:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the Tamil Tigers have 1,200 "well-trained" cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed Related new
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Original: 225px|A school in the town of Mullaitivu, which was recaptured from Tamil nationalists on January 25.
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Original: The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) and other agencies have raised the issue of a "humanitarian crisis" unfolding in the battle between Sri Lankan government troops and the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam  , with an estimated 250,000 civilians caught between the fighting according to the ICRC.
Revised: The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) and other agencies have raised the issue of a "humanitarian crisis" unfolding in the battle between Sri Lankan government troops and the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE) , with an estimated 250,000 civilians caught between the fighting according to the ICRC.
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Original:  However, rebel Tigers have accused the Sri Lankan military of firing artillery shells into the safe zone, while the government denies such accusations.
Revised:  However, the LTTE have accused the Sri Lankan military of firing artillery shells into the safe zone, while the government denies such accusations.
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Original:  Likewise, the Tamil Tigers have denied the claim that they are using civilians as "human shields" by forcing them to stay in the area while holding them at gunpoint.
Revised:  Likewise, the LTTE have denied the claim that they are using civilians as "human shields" by forcing them to stay in the area while holding them at gunpoint.
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Original:  The Tigers have yet to answer the military's accusation that they deliberately placed their heavy weapons near populated areas and hospitals.
Revised:  The LTTE have yet to answer the military's accusation that they deliberately placed their heavy weapons near populated areas and hospitals.
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Original:  However, the UN says the Tamil Tigers have fired at their convoys and refused to allow evacuations to the nearest hospital, while the military had resumed firing during an attempted evacuation.
Revised:  However, the UN says the LTTE have fired at their convoys and refused to allow evacuations to the nearest hospital, while the military had resumed firing during an attempted evacuation.
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Original:  ICRC spokeswoman Sarasi Wijeratne did not explicitly accuse the Tigers of firing on their convoy, simply stating that the convoy had not been given full security assurances.
Revised:  ICRC spokeswoman Sarasi Wijeratne did not explicitly accuse the LTTE of firing on their convoy, simply stating that the convoy had not been given full security assurances.
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Original:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the Tamil Tigers have 1,200 "well-trained" cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed.
Revised:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the LTTE have 1,200 "well-trained" cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed.
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Original:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the LTTE have 1,200 " well-trained " cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed.
Revised:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara claims the LTTE have 1,200 " well-trained " cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed.
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Original:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the LTTE have 1,200 " well-trained " cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed.
Revised:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the LTTE have 1,200 well-trained " cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed.
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Original:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the LTTE have 1,200 " well-trained " cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed.
Revised:  Military spokesman Brigadier Udaya Nanayakkara says the LTTE have 1,200 " well-trained cadres left, while the Sri Lankan army has around 50,000 troops deployed.
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Original: The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) and other agencies have raised the issue of a "humanitarian crisis " unfolding in the battle between Sri Lankan government troops and the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE), with an estimated 250,000 civilians caught between the fighting according to the ICRC.
Revised: The International Committee of the Red Cross (ICRC) and other agencies have raised the issue of a humanitarian crisis unfolding in the battle between Sri Lankan government troops and the Liberation Tigers of Tamil Eelam (LTTE), with an estimated 250,000 civilians caught between the fighting according to the ICRC.
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Original:  Likewise, the LTTE have denied the claim that they are using civilians as "human shields " by forcing them to stay in the area while holding them at gunpoint.
Revised:  Likewise, the LTTE have denied the claim that they are using civilians as human shields by forcing them to stay in the area while holding them at gunpoint.
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Original:  This became the Scottish Socialist Party which stood in the 1999 elections to the newly re-established Scottish Parliament.
Revised:  This became the Scottish Socialist Party and stood in the 1999 elections to the newly re-established Scottish Parliament.
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