wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  > They demonstrated that the value of the book-light is dependent on their approach systems.
Revised:  They demonstrated that the value of the book-light is dependent on their approach systems.
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Original: Regulatory Mode Theory The regulatory mode theory depicts how people approach situations to achieve the goal.
Revised:  The regulatory mode theory depicts how people approach situations to achieve the goal.
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Original:  The regulatory mode theory depicts how people approach situations to achieve the goal.
Revised: Background The regulatory mode theory depicts how people approach situations to achieve the goal.
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Original:   A study done by Pierro, Giacomantonio, Pica, Kruglanski, and Higgins (2011) examined the ways locomotion and assessment affects procrastination and how people manage time.
Revised:  Locomotion and Assessment A study done by Pierro, Giacomantonio, Pica, Kruglanski, and Higgins (2011) examined the ways locomotion and assessment affects procrastination and how people manage time.
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Original:   Consequently, locomotion can be very efficient in maintaining attitude, creating intention, and facilitating behavior.
Revised:  Motivation Consequently, locomotion can be very efficient in maintaining attitude, creating intention, and facilitating behavior.
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Original:  > They evaluated the participants’ regulatory mode using a questionnaire and then their attendance was recorded in a 6 month period.
Revised:  They evaluated the participants’ regulatory mode using a questionnaire and then their attendance was recorded in a 6 month period.
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Original: Kethi Kilonzo is currently fighting a legal battle in which she is accused of theft and fraudulently presenting herself as a registered voter to the IEBC [  www.iebc.or.ke .
Revised: Kethi Kilonzo is currently fighting a legal URL in which she is accused of theft and fraudulently presenting herself as a registered voter to the IEBC [ www.iebc.or.ke .
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Original: Kethi Kilonzo is currently fighting a legal battle in which she is accused of theft and fraudulently presenting herself as a registered voter to the IEBC [  www.iebc.or.ke .
Revised: Kethi Kilonzo is currently fighting a legal battle in which she is accused of theft and fraudulently presenting herself as a registered voter to the [ www.iebc.or.ke .
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Original: Kethi Kilonzo is currently fighting a legal battle in which she is accused of theft and fraudulently presenting herself as a registered voter to the IEBC [  www.iebc.or.ke .
Revised: Kethi Kilonzo is currently fighting a legal battle in which she is accused of theft and fraudulently presenting herself as a registered voter to the IEBC [ IEBC www.iebc.or.ke .
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Original:  If she loses the legal battle, Kethi could be facing jail for possession of stolen property and electoral fraud.
Revised:  If she loses the legal battle, Kethi could be facing URL for possession of stolen property and electoral fraud.
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Original: Kethi Kilonzo is currently fighting a legal URL in which she is accused of theft and fraudulently presenting herself as a registered voter to the IEBC www .iebc.or.ke.
Revised: Kethi Kilonzo is currently fighting a legal URL in which she is accused of theft and fraudulently presenting herself as a registered voter to the www .iebc.or.ke.
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Original:  The petition was heard by a panel of six supreme court judges headed by Willy Mutunga .
Revised:  The petition was heard by a panel of six supreme court judges headed by Willy Mutunga 
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Original: The standard, March 28, 2013,Kilonzo:like father,like daughter She is the daughter of the late Makueni senator Mutula Kilonzo and is most notable for her performance as the head council for AFRICOG's (Africa Centre for Open Governance) petition against the declaration of Uhuru Kenyatta as the president of Kenya.
Revised: The standard, March 28, 2013,Kilonzo:like father,like daughter She is the daughter of Makueni senator Mutula Kilonzo and is most notable for her performance as the head council for AFRICOG's (Africa Centre for Open Governance) petition against the declaration of Uhuru Kenyatta as the president of Kenya.
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Original: The standard, March 28, 2013,Kilonzo:like father,like daughter She is the daughter of  Makueni senator Mutula Kilonzo and is most notable for her performance as the head council for AFRICOG's (Africa Centre for Open Governance) petition against the declaration of Uhuru Kenyatta as the president of Kenya.
Revised: The standard, March 28, 2013,Kilonzo:like father,like daughter She is the daughter of the late Makueni senator Mutula Kilonzo and is most notable for her performance as the head council for AFRICOG's (Africa Centre for Open Governance) petition against the declaration of Uhuru Kenyatta as the president of Kenya.
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Original:  Kethi could be facing URL for possession of stolen property and electoral fraud.
Revised:  Kethi could be facing jail for possession of stolen property and electoral fraud.
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Original: The standard, March 28, 2013,Kilonzo:like father,like daughter She is the daughter of the late Makueni senator Mutula Kilonzo and is most notable for her performance as the head council for AFRICOG's (Africa Centre for Open Governance) petition against the declaration of Uhuru Kenyatta as the president of Kenya.
Revised: The standard, March 28, 2013,Kilonzo:like father,like daughter She is the daughter of the late Makueni senator Mutula Kilonzo and is most notable for her performance as the head counselfor AFRICOG's (Africa Centre for Open Governance) petition against the declaration of Uhuru Kenyatta as the president of Kenya.
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Original:  AFRICOG election perition Kethi Diana Kilonzo argued against the results announced by the IEBC chairman Isaack Hassan citing the results as not credible.
Revised:  Kethi Diana Kilonzo argued against the results announced by the IEBC chairman Isaack Hassan citing the results as not credible.
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Original:  There are numerous Portuguese loanwords in the Bengali language, including many common household terms, particularly in Chittagonian Bengali .
Revised:  There are numerous Portuguese loanwords in the Bengali language, including many common household terms, particularly in Chittagonian language .
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Original:  Some geographical place names remain, like Dom Manik Islands, Point Palmyras on the Orissa coast, Firingi Bazaar in Dhaka and Chittagong.
Revised:  Some geographical place names remain, like Dom Manik Islands, Point Palmyras on the Orissa coast, Firingi Bazar in Dhaka and Chittagong.
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Original: A Portuguese missionary in British Calcutta published the first book on Bengali grammar.
Revised: A Portuguese missionary in British Kolkata published the first book on Bengali grammar.
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Original: Robichaud was again elected in 1999 and his party was victorious across the province, he was sworn in to the cabinet as Minister of Education.
Revised: Robichaud was again elected in 1999 and his party was victorious across the province, he was sworn into the cabinet as Minister of Education.
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Original:   Robichaud was educated at the University of Moncton where he received Bachelor of Physical Education, Bachelor of Education and Master of Education degrees.
Revised:  Education Robichaud was educated at the University of Moncton where he received Bachelor of Physical Education, Bachelor of Education and Master of Education degrees.
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Original:   While at the University of Moncton he was involved in student government and was elected to Tracadie municipal council in 1983 serving one three-year term.
Revised:  Politics While at the University of Moncton he was involved in student government and was elected to Tracadie municipal council in 1983 serving one three-year term.
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Original: Robichaud was again elected in 1999 and his party was victorious across the province , he was sworn into the cabinet as Minister of Education .
Revised: Robichaud was again elected in 1999 and his party was victorious across the province . He was sworn into the cabinet as Minister of Education .
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Original:  It is adaptable to the type of land or soil at the location, and it provided a rotation between pasture and arable land which "not only produced the same amount of grain on a much reduced area, but broke the agrarian cycle of diminished returns by allowing more sheep and cattle to be kept, animals whose dung maintained" fertility .
Revised:  It is adaptable to the type of land or soil at the location, and it provided a rotation between pasture and arable land which "not only produced the same amount of grain on a much reduced area, but broke the agrarian cycle of diminished returns by allowing more sheep and cattle to be kept, animals whose dung maintained" fertility 
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Agriculture Category:Agricultural terminology Category:Agricultural economics Category:Agrono
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Agriculture Category:Agricultural terminology Category:Agricultural economics Category:Agrono
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Agriculture Category:Agricultural terminology Category:Agricultural economics Category:Agrono
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Original: Within agriculture, convertible husbandry, also known as alternate husbandry or up-and-down husbandry,  was a process used during the 16th century through the 19th century by "which a higher proportion of land was used to support increasing numbers of livestock in many parts of England.
Revised: Convertible husbandry, also known as alternate husbandry or up-and-down husbandry, was a process used during the 16th century through the 19th century by "which a higher proportion of land was used to support increasing numbers of livestock in many parts of England.
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Original:  1980. In the words of historian Eric Kerridge, the combination of "floating of water-meadows, the substitution of up-and-down husbandry for permanent tillage and permanent grass or for shifting cultivation, the introduction of new fallow crops and selected grasses, marsh drainage, manuring, and stock breeding" were essential innovations of the British Agricultural Revolution.
Revised:  1980. Its adoption was an important component of the British Agricultural Revolution.
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Original: Convertible husbandry, also known as alternate husbandry or up-and-down husbandry, is a method of farming whereby strips of arable farm land were temporarily converted into grass pasture, known as leys.
Revised: Convertible husbandry, also known as alternate husbandry or up-and-down husbandry, is a method of farming whereby strips of arable farmland were temporarily converted into grass pasture, known as leys.
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Original:  It is adaptable to the type of land or soil at the location, and it provided a rotation between pasture and arable land which "not only produced the same amount of grain on a much reduced area, but broke the agrarian cycle of diminished returns by allowing more sheep and cattle to be kept, animals whose dung maintained" fertility
Revised:  According to one author, the rotation it provided between pasture and arable land which "not only produced the same amount of grain on a much reduced area, but broke the agrarian cycle of diminished returns by allowing more sheep and cattle to be kept, animals whose dung maintained" fertility
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Original:  It is adaptable to the type of land or soil at the location, and it provided a rotation between pasture and arable land which "not only produced the same amount of grain on a much reduced area, but broke the agrarian cycle of diminished returns by allowing more sheep and cattle to be kept, animals whose dung maintained" fertility
Revised:  It is adaptable to the type of land or soil at the location, and it provided a rotation between pasture and arable land "not only produced the same amount of grain on a much reduced area, but broke the agrarian cycle of diminished returns by allowing more sheep and cattle to be kept, animals whose dung maintained" fertility
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Original:  Kitsikopoulos claims it was the introduction of fodder legumes, such as clover, in the early modern period which eventually truly achieved greater agricultural productivity.
Revised:  Kitsikopoulos argues it was the introduction of fodder legumes, such as clover, in the early modern period which eventually truly achieved greater agricultural productivity.
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Original: Muhammad bin Khalfan bin Khamis al-Barwani () (born c. 1855), commonly known as Rumaliza, was an Afro-Arab trader of slaves and ivory active in Central and East Africa in the last part of the nineteenth century.
Revised: Muhammad bin Khalfan bin Khamis al-Barwani () (born c. 1855), commonly known as Rumaliza, was an Arab trader of slaves and ivory active in Central and East Africa in the last part of the nineteenth century.
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Original: Muhammad bin Khalfan bin Khamis al-Barwani () (born c. 1855), commonly known as Rumaliza, was an Arab trader of slaves and ivory active in Central and East Africa in the last part of the nineteenth century.
Revised: Muhammad bin Khalfan bin Khamis al-Barwani () (born c. 1855), commonly known as Rumaliza, was an Arab trader of ivory active in Central and East Africa in the last part of the nineteenth century.
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Original:  Three hard years of nonstop campaigning in Congress and in the Senate to turn the 300 year-old town into a city eventually proved triumphant with the ratification of the Republic Act 8990.
Revised:  Three hard years of nonstop campaigning in Congress and in the Senate to turn the 300-year-old town into a city eventually proved triumphant with the ratification of the Republic Act 8990.
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Original:  The fourth in a brood of five siblings, the young Dr. Rey grew up in a family with fairly modest means.
Revised:  The fourth of five siblings, the young Dr. Rey grew up in a family with fairly modest means.
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Original:  The fourth in a brood of five siblings, the young Dr. Rey grew up in a family with fairly modest means.
Revised:  The fourth in a brood of five siblings, he grew up in a family with fairly modest means.
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Original:  It is on this shop where the young Dr. Rey used to stay on weekends to shine shoes for passersby to help augment the family’s income.
Revised:  It is on this shop where he stayed on weekends to shine shoes for passersby to help augment the family’s income.
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Original:  Aside from being ranked as a Top Ten Student, Dr. Rey Aquino also received the Model Student of the Year Award when he graduated high school at University of the Assumption for his active role in the school’s activities coupled with his excellent academic performance.
Revised:  Aside from being ranked as a top ten student, Aquino also received the Model Student of the Year Award when he graduated high school at University of the Assumption for his active role in the school’s activities coupled with his excellent academic performance.
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Original:  While studying at UST, Dr. Rey Aquino also garnered the Leadership Award in recognition of his outstanding ability to manage and organize events of great relevance to the university.
Revised:  While studying at UST, Aquino also garnered the Leadership Award in recognition of his outstanding ability to manage and organize events of great relevance to the university.
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Original:  While studying at UST, Dr. Rey Aquino also garnered the Leadership Award in recognition of his outstanding ability to manage and organize events of great relevance to the university.
Revised:  While studying at UST, Dr. Rey Aquino also garnered the leadership award for his ability to manage and organize events of great relevance to the university.
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Original:  Dr. Rey Aquino first showed glimpses of his leadership capabilities when he was in San Luis Pampanga, a mostly rural town, at San Luis District Hospital to complete his student requirements for a six-month rural rotation.
Revised:  Aquino first showed glimpses of his leadership capabilities when he was in San Luis Pampanga, a mostly rural town, at San Luis District Hospital to complete his student requirements for a six-month rural rotation.
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Original:  Dr. Aquino endeared himself there with the people of San Luis, and was instrumental in motivating the local townsfolk to help and contribute in the various community efforts that benefited the area (maintaining the cleanliness of the hospital, etc.).
Revised:  Aquino endeared himself there with the people of San Luis, and was instrumental in motivating the local townsfolk to help and contribute in the various community efforts that benefited the area (maintaining the cleanliness of the hospital, etc.).
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Original:  After obtaining his medical degree from UST, Dr. Rey Aquino again chose to go back in his home province, Pampanga, to start his postgraduate internship at a hospital there – Central Luzon Regional Hospital (now named Jose B. Lingad Memorial Regional Hospital or JBL).
Revised:  After obtaining his medical degree from UST, Aquino again chose to go back in his home province, Pampanga, to start his postgraduate internship at a hospital there – Central Luzon Regional Hospital (now named Jose B. Lingad Memorial Regional Hospital or JBL).
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Original:  As the elected president of the Kiwanis and Jaycee clubs, Dr. Rey Aquino was chosen and appointed as an Officer in Charge or OIC councilor in 1987.
Revised:  As the elected president of the Kiwanis and Jaycee clubs, Aquino was chosen and appointed as an Officer in Charge or OIC councilor in 1987.
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Original:  In 1992, Rosve Henson, who was running for Mayor and an acquaintance of Dr. Rey Aquino from the Kiwanis Club requested Dr. Rey Aquino to be his running mate for Vice-Mayor in San Fernando.
Revised:  In 1992, Rosve Henson, who was running for mayor and an acquaintance of Dr. Rey Aquino from the Kiwanis Club requested Dr. Rey Aquino to be his running mate for Vice-Mayor in San Fernando.
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Original:  In 1992, Rosve Henson, who was running for Mayor and an acquaintance of Dr. Rey Aquino from the Kiwanis Club requested Dr. Rey Aquino to be his running mate for Vice-Mayor in San Fernando.
Revised:  In 1992, Rosve Henson, who was running for Mayor and an acquaintance of Aquino from the Kiwanis Club requested Dr. Rey Aquino to be his running mate for Vice-Mayor in San Fernando.
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Original:  In 1992, Rosve Henson, who was running for Mayor and an acquaintance of Dr. Rey Aquino from the Kiwanis Club requested Dr. Rey Aquino to be his running mate for Vice-Mayor in San Fernando.
Revised:  In 1992, Rosve Henson, who was running for Mayor and an acquaintance of Dr. Rey Aquino from the Kiwanis Club requested Aquino to be his running mate for Vice-Mayor in San Fernando.
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Original:  In 1992, Rosve Henson, who was running for Mayor and an acquaintance of Dr. Rey Aquino from the Kiwanis Club requested Dr. Rey Aquino to be his running mate for Vice-Mayor in San Fernando.
Revised:  In 1992, Rosve Henson, who was running for Mayor and an acquaintance of Dr. Rey Aquino from the Kiwanis Club requested Dr. Rey Aquino to be his running mate for vice-mayor in San Fernando.
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Original:  Dr. Rey Aquino held the position of Mayor of San Fernando on three different occasions, but his first bid in 1995 for the mayoralty that proved to be the most difficult.
Revised:  Aquino was mayor of San Fernando on three different occasions, but his first bid in 1995 for the mayoralty that proved to be the most difficult.
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Original:  However, his strong past performance as Vice-Mayor , the relentless campaigning of his beloved wife, Edna, and Mario Garcia’s endorsement of him later in the campaign (when it was becoming apparent that he too would not win) would prove pivotal and crucial in his bid for the mayoralty.
Revised:  However, his strong past performance as vice-mayor , the relentless campaigning of his beloved wife, Edna, and Mario Garcia’s endorsement of him later in the campaign (when it was becoming apparent that he too would not win) would prove pivotal and crucial in his bid for the mayoralty.
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Original: However, his strong past performance as vice-mayor, the relentless campaigning of his beloved wife, Edna, and Mario Garcia’s endorsement of him later in the campaign (when it was becoming apparent that he too would not win) would prove pivotal and crucial in his bid for the mayoralty.
Revised: However, his strong past performance as vice-mayor, the relentless campaigning of his wife, Edna, and Mario Garcia’s endorsement of him later in the campaign (when it was becoming apparent that he too would not win) would prove pivotal and crucial in his bid for the mayoralty.
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Original:  Dr. Aquino would later win the election by the skin of his teeth – a mere 1,200 votes against the heavily favored Mayor Pat Guevarra.
Revised:  Aquino would later win the election by the skin of his teeth – a mere 1,200 votes against the heavily favored Mayor Pat Guevarra.
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Original:  Dr. Aquino would later win the election by the skin of his teeth – a mere 1,200 votes against the heavily favored Mayor Pat Guevarra.
Revised:  Dr. Aquino would later win the election by a mere 1,200 votes against the heavily favored Mayor Pat Guevarra.
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Original:  In the 1998 and 2001 elections, Dr. Rey Aquino squared off again with his old political rival and former San Fernando Mayor Pat Guevarra.
Revised:  In the 1998 and 2001 elections, Aquino squared off again with his old political rival and former San Fernando Mayor Pat Guevarra.
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Original:  After his three terms as Mayor of San Fernando, He ran for Congress in 2004 and won.
Revised:  After his three terms as mayor of San Fernando, He ran for Congress in 2004 and won.
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Original:  On August 13, 2008, President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo personally handpicked Dr. Rey Aquino to be the President and CEO of the Philippine Health Insurance Corporation or PhilHealth , a tax-exempt, government owned and controlled corporation (GOCC) of the Philippines, and is attached to the Department of Health.
Revised:  On August 13, 2008, President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo picked Aquino to be the President and CEO of the Philippine Health Insurance Corporation or PhilHealth , a tax-exempt, government owned and controlled corporation (GOCC) of the Philippines, and is attached to the Department of Health.
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Original:  On August 13, 2008, President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo personally handpicked Dr. Rey Aquino to be the President and CEO of the Philippine Health Insurance Corporation or PhilHealth , a tax-exempt, government owned and controlled corporation (GOCC) of the Philippines, and is attached to the Department of Health.
Revised:  On August 13, 2008, President Gloria Macapagal-Arroyo personally handpicked Dr. Rey Aquino to be the president and CEO of the Philippine Health Insurance Corporation or PhilHealth , a tax-exempt, government owned and controlled corporation (GOCC) of the Philippines, and is attached to the Department of Health.
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