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Original:  As Chairman joint chiefs, ACM Feroze attempted to procured the MiG-29F and the Su-27 aircraft from the Eastern Europe as well as Mirage 2000 from Qatar, in a view of replacing the F-16s but this was met with strong opposition from ACM Khattak, the air chief, who was unimpressed with the war performances of Russian fighter jets.
Revised:  As Chairman joint chiefs, ACM Feroze attempted to procured the MiG-29F and the Su-27 aircraft from the Eastern Europe as well as Mirage 2000 from Qatar, with a view to replacing the F-16s but this was met with strong opposition from ACM Khattak, the air chief, who was unimpressed with the war performances of Russian fighter jets.
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Original:  Feroze Khan also provided his crucial military support and political advocacy for the development of the Shaheen program in a view keeping the second-strike capability.
Revised:  Feroze Khan also provided his crucial military support and political advocacy for the development of the Shaheen program with a view to keeping the second-strike capability.
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Original:  His tenureship as Chairman joint chiefs is criticized by the defense observer in the country for not being able  take steps in strengthening the role of Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, and was largely seen ineffectively unable to provide any military or political advise to Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and her administration on a larger extend — the void was filled by then-army chief, Gen. Jehangir Karamat.
Revised:  His tenureship as Chairman joint chiefs is criticized by the defense observer in the country for not being able to take steps in strengthening the role of Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, and was largely seen ineffectively unable to provide any military or political advise to Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and her administration on a larger extend — the void was filled by then-army chief, Gen. Jehangir Karamat.
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Original:  His tenureship as Chairman joint chiefs is criticized by the defense observer in the country for not being able  take steps in strengthening the role of Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, and was largely seen ineffectively unable to provide any military or political advise to Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and her administration on a larger extend — the void was filled by then-army chief, Gen. Jehangir Karamat.
Revised:  His tenureship as Chairman joint chiefs is criticized by the defense observer in the country for not being able take steps in strengthening the role of Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, and was largely seen as ineffective and unable to provide any military or political advise to Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and her administration on a larger extend — the void was filled by then-army chief, Gen. Jehangir Karamat.
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Original:  His tenureship as Chairman joint chiefs is criticized by the defense observer in the country for not being able  take steps in strengthening the role of Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, and was largely seen ineffectively unable to provide any military or political advise to Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and her administration on a larger extend — the void was filled by then-army chief, Gen. Jehangir Karamat.
Revised:  His tenureship as Chairman joint chiefs is criticized by the defense observer in the country for not being able take steps in strengthening the role of Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, and was largely seen ineffectively unable to provide any military or political advice to Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and her administration on a larger extend — the void was filled by then-army chief, Gen. Jehangir Karamat.
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Original:  His tenureship as Chairman joint chiefs is criticized by the defense observer in the country for not being able  take steps in strengthening the role of Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, and was largely seen ineffectively unable to provide any military or political advise to Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and her administration on a larger extend — the void was filled by then-army chief, Gen. Jehangir Karamat.
Revised:  His tenureship as Chairman joint chiefs is criticized by the defense observer in the country for not being able take steps in strengthening the role of Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, and was largely seen ineffectively unable to provide any military or political advise to Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto and her administration on a longer extension — the void was filled by then-army chief, Gen. Jehangir Karamat.
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Original:  Upon retiring on 9 November 1997, Gen. Jehangir Karamat was eventually appointed to replace him  who took the role of the Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee to the new height and took the four-tiered military into a responsive and efficient fighting machine in the modern 21st century.
Revised:  Upon retiring on 9 November 1997, Gen. Jehangir Karamat was eventually appointed to replace him and who took the role of the Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee to the new height and took the four-tiered military into a responsive and efficient fighting machine in the modern 21st century.
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Original:  Upon retiring on 9 November 1997, Gen. Jehangir Karamat was eventually appointed to replace him  who took the role of the Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee to the new height and took the four-tiered military into a responsive and efficient fighting machine in the modern 21st century.
Revised:  Upon retiring on 9 November 1997, Gen. Jehangir Karamat was eventually appointed to replace him who took the role of the Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee to the new heights and took the four-tiered military into a responsive and efficient fighting machine in the modern 21st century.
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Original:  The survey combines interviews and physical examinations .
Revised:  The survey combines interviews , physical examinations and laboratory tests.
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Original:  The  first NHANES was conducted in 1971, with the surveys becoming an annual event in 1999 and the first report on the topic  published in 2001.
Revised:  The very first NHANES was conducted in 1971, with the surveys becoming an annual event in 1999 and the first report on the topic published in 2001.
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Original:  The  first NHANES was conducted in 1971, with the surveys becoming an annual event in 1999 and the first report on the topic  published in 2001.
Revised:  The first NHANES was conducted in 1971, and in 1999 the surveys became an annual event in 1999 and the first report on the topic published in 2001.
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Original:  The  first NHANES was conducted in 1971, with the surveys becoming an annual event in 1999 and the first report on the topic  published in 2001.
Revised:  The first NHANES was conducted in 1971, with the surveys becoming an annual event ; the first report on the topic published in 2001.
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Original:  The  first NHANES was conducted in 1971, with the surveys becoming an annual event in 1999 and the first report on the topic  published in 2001.
Revised:  The first NHANES was conducted in 1971, with the surveys becoming an annual event in 1999 and the first report on the topic was published in 2001.
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Original:  Findings from the survey are used to determine the prevalence of major diseases and risk factors for diseases.
Revised:  NHANES findings are used to determine the prevalence of major diseases and risk factors for diseases.
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Original:  Data from this survey are used in epidemiological studies and health sciences research, which help develop sound public health policy, direct and design health programs and services, and expand health knowledge.
Revised:  NHANES data from are used in epidemiological studies and health sciences research, which help develop sound public health policy, direct and design health programs and services, and expand health knowledge.
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Original: The very first NHANES was conducted in 1971, and in 1999 the surveys became an annual event;
Revised: The first NHANES was conducted in 1971, and in 1999 the surveys became an annual event;
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Original:  NHANES data are used in epidemiological studies and health sciences research  , which help develop sound public health policy, direct and design health programs and services, and expand health knowledge  .
Revised:  NHANES data are used in epidemiological studies and health sciences research , which help develop sound public health policy, direct and design health programs and services, expand health knowledge .
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Original:  leaky integrate-and-fire model, (Chapter 4.1 in textbook 'Spiking Neuron Models) Adaptive integrate-and-fire + Experimental evidence supporting the modelAdaptive integrate-and-fire model modelReferencesSub-threshold voltage for time-dependent input currentFiring times for time-dependent input currentFiring Patterns in response to step current input External link:
Revised:  Adaptive integrate-and-fire + Experimental evidence supporting the modelAdaptive integrate-and-fire model modelReferencesSub-threshold voltage for time-dependent input currentFiring times for time-dependent input currentFiring Patterns in response to step current input External link:
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Original:  leaky integrate-and-fire model, (Chapter 4.1 in textbook 'Spiking Neuron Models) Adaptive integrate-and-fire + Experimental evidence supporting the modelAdaptive integrate-and-fire model modelReferencesSub-threshold voltage for time-dependent input currentFiring times for time-dependent input currentFiring Patterns in response to step current input External link:
Revised:  leaky integrate-and-fire model, (Chapter 4.1 in textbook 'Spiking Neuron Models) Adaptive integrate-and-fire + Experimental evidence supporting the modelAdaptive integrate-and-fire model modelReferencesSub-threshold voltage for time-dependent input currentFiring times for time-dependent input currentFiring Patterns in response to step current input 
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Original:  Adaptation and Firing patterns (Chapter 6 of textbook Neuronal Dynamics) Fractional-order leaky integrate-and-fire Recent advances in computational and theoretical fractional calculus lead to a new form of model, called Fractional-order leaky integrate-and-fire.
Revised:  Fractional-order leaky integrate-and-fire Recent advances in computational and theoretical fractional calculus lead to a new form of model, called Fractional-order leaky integrate-and-fire.
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Original:  The model has the following form External link: Adpative Exponential Integrate-and-fire (Chapter 6.1 of textbook Neuronal Dynamics) Stochastic models of membrane voltage and spike timing The models in this category are generalized integrate-and-fire models that include a certain level of stochasticity.
Revised:  The model has the following form Adpative Exponential Integrate-and-fire (Chapter 6.1 of textbook Neuronal Dynamics) Stochastic models of membrane voltage and spike timing The models in this category are generalized integrate-and-fire models that include a certain level of stochasticity.
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Original:  The model has the following form External link: Adpative Exponential Integrate-and-fire (Chapter 6.1 of textbook Neuronal Dynamics) Stochastic models of membrane voltage and spike timing The models in this category are generalized integrate-and-fire models that include a certain level of stochasticity.
Revised:  The model has the following form External link: Stochastic models of membrane voltage and spike timing The models in this category are generalized integrate-and-fire models that include a certain level of stochasticity.
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Original:  External link: Stochastic Spike Arrival (Chapter 8.2 of textbook Neuronal Dynamics) Noisy output model (escape noise) In deterministic integrate-and-fire models, a spike is generated if the membrane potential hits the threshold .
Revised:  Stochastic Spike Arrival (Chapter 8.2 of textbook Neuronal Dynamics) Noisy output model (escape noise) In deterministic integrate-and-fire models, a spike is generated if the membrane potential hits the threshold .
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Original:  External link: Stochastic Spike Arrival (Chapter 8.2 of textbook Neuronal Dynamics) Noisy output model (escape noise) In deterministic integrate-and-fire models, a spike is generated if the membrane potential hits the threshold .
Revised:  External link: Noisy output model (escape noise) In deterministic integrate-and-fire models, a spike is generated if the membrane potential hits the threshold .
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Original:  At each moment in time t, a spike is generated stochastically with instantaneous stochastic intensity or 'escape rate' External link 'soft threshold' (Chapter 9 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
Revised:  At each moment in time t, a spike is generated stochastically with instantaneous stochastic intensity or 'escape rate' 'soft threshold' (Chapter 9 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
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Original:  At each moment in time t, a spike is generated stochastically with instantaneous stochastic intensity or 'escape rate' External link 'soft threshold' (Chapter 9 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
Revised:  At each moment in time t, a spike is generated stochastically with instantaneous stochastic intensity or 'escape rate' External link 
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Original:  Spike response model (SRM) External links: Spike Response Model (Chapter 6.4 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
Revised:  Spike response model (SRM) Spike Response Model (Chapter 6.4 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
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Original:  For example, in continuous time, the single-neuron equation is External link: Reduction to two dimensions (Chapter 4.2. of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
Revised:  For example, in continuous time, the single-neuron equation is Reduction to two dimensions (Chapter 4.2. of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
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Original:  For example, in continuous time, the single-neuron equation is External link: Reduction to two dimensions (Chapter 4.2. of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
Revised:  For example, in continuous time, the single-neuron equation is External link: 
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Original:  Hindmarsh–Rose External links: Type I and Type II Neuron Models (Chapter 4.4of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.) Quadratic integrate-and-fire model (Chapter 5.3 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.) Sensory input-stimulus encoding neuron models The linear-nonlinear-Poisson cascade model is a cascade of a linear filtering process followed by a nonlinear spike generation step.
Revised:  Hindmarsh–Rose Type I and Type II Neuron Models (Chapter 4.4of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.) Quadratic integrate-and-fire model (Chapter 5.3 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.) Sensory input-stimulus encoding neuron models The linear-nonlinear-Poisson cascade model is a cascade of a linear filtering process followed by a nonlinear spike generation step.
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Original:  Hindmarsh–Rose External links: Type I and Type II Neuron Models (Chapter 4.4of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.) Quadratic integrate-and-fire model (Chapter 5.3 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.) Sensory input-stimulus encoding neuron models The linear-nonlinear-Poisson cascade model is a cascade of a linear filtering process followed by a nonlinear spike generation step.
Revised:  Hindmarsh–Rose External links: Sensory input-stimulus encoding neuron models The linear-nonlinear-Poisson cascade model is a cascade of a linear filtering process followed by a nonlinear spike generation step.
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Original:  External link: Encoding and Decoding models in Systems Neuroscience (Chapter 11.2 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
Revised:  Encoding and Decoding models in Systems Neuroscience (Chapter 11.2 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
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Original:  External link: Encoding and Decoding models in Systems Neuroscience (Chapter 11.2 of the textbook Neuronal Dynamics.)
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Original:  For complex systems of neurons  integration of the equations are computationally heavy . Careful simplifications of the Hodgkin–Huxley model are therefore needed. this model can be reduced to two dimensions thanks to the dynamic relations which can be established between the gating variables. it is also possible to extend it to take into account the evolution of the concentrations (considered fixed in the original model).
Revised:  In a model of a complex systems of neurons integration of the equations are computationally heavy . Careful simplifications of the Hodgkin–Huxley model are therefore needed. this model can be reduced to two dimensions thanks to the dynamic relations which can be established between the gating variables. it is also possible to extend it to take into account the evolution of the concentrations (considered fixed in the original model).
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Original:  For complex systems of neurons  integration of the equations are computationally heavy . Careful simplifications of the Hodgkin–Huxley model are therefore needed. this model can be reduced to two dimensions thanks to the dynamic relations which can be established between the gating variables. it is also possible to extend it to take into account the evolution of the concentrations (considered fixed in the original model).
Revised:  For complex systems of neurons integration of the equations are computationally expensive . Careful simplifications of the Hodgkin–Huxley model are therefore needed. this model can be reduced to two dimensions thanks to the dynamic relations which can be established between the gating variables. it is also possible to extend it to take into account the evolution of the concentrations (considered fixed in the original model).
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Original:  For complex systems of neurons  integration of the equations are computationally heavy . Careful simplifications of the Hodgkin–Huxley model are therefore needed. this model can be reduced to two dimensions thanks to the dynamic relations which can be established between the gating variables. it is also possible to extend it to take into account the evolution of the concentrations (considered fixed in the original model).
Revised:  For complex systems of neurons integration of the equations are computationally heavy . Careful simplifications of the Hodgkin–Huxley model are therefore needed. The model can be reduced to two dimensions thanks to the dynamic relations which can be established between the gating variables. it is also possible to extend it to take into account the evolution of the concentrations (considered fixed in the original model).
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Original:  For the threshold becomes shart and spike firing occurs deterministically at the moment when the membrane potential hits the threshold from below.
Revised:  For the threshold becomes sharp and spike firing occurs deterministically at the moment when the membrane potential hits the threshold from below.
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Original: Some studies have linked rapidly warming Arctic temperatures, and thus a vanishing cryosphere, to extreme weather in mid-latitudes , A recent preprint study has put forth a claim that polar amplification lead to the unusually cold weather occurring over the continental United States during mid-February, 2021.
Revised: Some studies have linked rapidly warming Arctic temperatures, and thus a vanishing cryosphere, to extreme weather in mid-latitudes . A recent preprint study has put forth a claim that polar amplification lead to the unusually cold weather occurring over the continental United States during mid-February, 2021.
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Original:  East Antarctica less so]] It is observed that Arctic and Antarctic warming commonly proceed out of phase because of orbital forcing, resulting in the so-called polar see-saw effect   .
Revised:  East Antarctica less so]] It is observed that Arctic and Antarctic warming commonly proceed out of phase because of orbital forcing, resulting in the so-called polar see-saw effect . .
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Original:  East Antarctica less so]] It is observed that Arctic and Antarctic warming commonly proceed out of phase because of orbital forcing, resulting in the so-called polar see-saw effect . Amplification Impacts Polar warming also affects many ecosystems, including marine and terrestrial ecosystems, climate systems, and human populations .
Revised:  East Antarctica less so]] It is observed that Arctic and Antarctic warming commonly proceed out of phase because of orbital forcing, resulting in the so-called polar see-saw effect Amplification Impacts Polar warming also affects many ecosystems, including marine and terrestrial ecosystems, climate systems, and human populations .
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Original:  East Antarctica less so]] It is observed that Arctic and Antarctic warming commonly proceed out of phase because of orbital forcing, resulting in the so-called polar see-saw effect . Amplification Impacts Polar warming also affects many ecosystems, including marine and terrestrial ecosystems, climate systems, and human populations .
Revised:  East Antarctica less so]] It is observed that Arctic and Antarctic warming commonly proceed out of phase because of orbital forcing, resulting in the so-called polar see-saw effect . .
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Original:  This is commonly referred to as the ratio of On a polar warming to tropical warming.
Revised:  This is commonly referred to as the ratio of polar warming to tropical warming.
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Original:  A planet with an atmosphere that can restrict emission of longwave radiation to space (a greenhouse effect), surface temperatures will be warmer than a simple planetary equilibrium temperature calculation would predict.
Revised:  On a planet with an atmosphere that can restrict emission of longwave radiation to space (a greenhouse effect), surface temperatures will be warmer than a simple planetary equilibrium temperature calculation would predict.
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Original: Amplification Amplifying mechanisms Feedbacks associated with sea ice and snow cover are widely cited as the main cause of recent terrestrial polar amplification.
Revised: Amplification Amplifying mechanisms Feedbacks associated with sea ice and snow cover are widely cited as one of the principal causes of recent terrestrial polar amplification.
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Original:  These  are particularly noted in local polar amplification .
Revised:  These feedbacks are particularly noted in local polar amplification .
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Original:  Particularly, polar amplification can be attributed to largely by outgoing longwave radiation.
Revised:  Particularly, polar amplification can be attributed to changes in outgoing longwave radiation.
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Original:  Larger ice extent leads to higher polar amplification, as does thinner ice coverage .
Revised:  Climate models with smaller baseline sea ice extent and thinner sea ice coverage exhibit stronger polar amplification .
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Original:  Polar amplification is the phenomenon that any change in the net radiation balance (for example greenhouse intensification) tends to produce a larger change in temperature near the poles than  the planetary average.
Revised:  Polar amplification is the phenomenon that any change in the net radiation balance (for example greenhouse intensification) tends to produce a larger change in temperature near the poles than in the planetary average.
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Original:  Such treatment is not expected to be curative, but can extend the lives of patients. oerg O W Pelz, Terence C. Chua, Jesus Esquivel, et al.
Revised:  Such treatment is not expected to be curative, but can extend the lives of patients. Joerg O W Pelz, Terence C. Chua, Jesus Esquivel, et al.
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Original: Treatment Colorectal cancer patients with peritoneal involvement can be treated with Oxaliplatin or Irinotecan based chemotherapy.
Revised: Treatment Colorectal cancer patients with peritoneal involvement can be treated with Oxaliplatin- or Irinotecan-based chemotherapy.
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