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Original:  The latest event to hit the headlines today was an encounter of a German helicopter with two Israeli jets off the Libanese coast during the night of Thursday to Friday.
Revised:  The latest event to hit the headlines today was an encounter of a German helicopter with two Israeli jets off the Lebanese coast during the night of Thursday to Friday.
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Original:  While a speaker of the German ministery of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occured only shortly after the German minister of defence, Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more.
Revised:  While a speaker of the German ministry of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occured only shortly after the German minister of defence, Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more.
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Original:  While a speaker of the German ministery of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occured only shortly after the German minister of defence, Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more.
Revised:  While a speaker of the German ministery of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occurred only shortly after the German minister of defence, Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more.
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Original:  Meanwhile, German state secretery of defence Peter Wichert is said to be under pressure over a growing row surrounding the German UNIFIL mandate: opposition politicians accuse the government of having misinformed them prior to the parliamentary approved for the Libanon mission regarding the constraints of the German forces UN mandate.
Revised:  Meanwhile, German state secretary of defence Peter Wichert is said to be under pressure over a growing row surrounding the German UNIFIL mandate: opposition politicians accuse the government of having misinformed them prior to the parliamentary approved for the Libanon mission regarding the constraints of the German forces UN mandate.
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Original:  Meanwhile, German state secretery of defence Peter Wichert is said to be under pressure over a growing row surrounding the German UNIFIL mandate: opposition politicians accuse the government of having misinformed them prior to the parliamentary approved for the Libanon mission regarding the constraints of the German forces UN mandate.
Revised:  Meanwhile, German state secretery of defence Peter Wichert is said to be under pressure over a growing row surrounding the German UNIFIL mandate: opposition politicians accuse the government of having misinformed them prior to the parliamentary approved for the Lebanon mission regarding the constraints of the German forces UN mandate.
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Original:  In particular, limited freedom to act within the 6-miles-zone of the Libanese coast is seen as endangering the efficiency and feasibility of the Bundeswehr controlling arms smuggling.
Revised:  In particular, limited freedom to act within the 6-miles-zone of the Lebanese coast is seen as endangering the efficiency and feasibility of the Bundeswehr controlling arms smuggling.
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Original:  While a speaker of the German ministry of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occurred only shortly after the German minister of defence , Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more.
Revised:  While a speaker of the German Ministry of Defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occurred only shortly after the German minister of defence , Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more.
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Original:  While a speaker of the German ministry of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occurred only shortly after the German minister of defence , Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more.
Revised:  While a speaker of the German ministry of defence described this incident as 'not threatening', it occurred only shortly after the German Minister of Defence , Franz Josef Jung, was assured by his Israeli counterpart, Amir Perez, that no such approaches would be carried out any more.
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Original:  Meanwhile, German state secretary of defence Peter Wichert is said to be under pressure over a growing row surrounding the German UNIFIL mandate: opposition politicians accuse the government of having misinformed them prior to the parliamentary approved for the Lebanon mission regarding the constraints of the German forces UN mandate.
Revised:  Meanwhile, German State Secretary of Defence Peter Wichert is said to be under pressure over a growing row surrounding the German UNIFIL mandate: opposition politicians accuse the government of having misinformed them prior to the parliamentary approved for the Lebanon mission regarding the constraints of the German forces UN mandate.
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Original: An emergency spokesperson has stated that the plane burst into flames shortly afterwards, although eyewitnesses beleive that there are some survivors from the crash.
Revised: An emergency spokesperson has stated that the plane burst into flames shortly afterwards, although eyewitnesses believe that there are some survivors from the crash.
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Original:  One is in a critical condition  
Revised:  One is in a critical condition . 
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Original:  The BBC reports, that the crash was caused by a storm, contradict the area's METAR, a standard form of aviation weather report, which indicated no major storm or bad weather in the area at the time of take-off.
Revised: This is was very entertaining! The BBC reports, that the crash was caused by a storm, contradict the area's METAR, a standard form of aviation weather report, which indicated no major storm or bad weather in the area at the time of take-off.
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Original:  Vietnam is being very careful with this system, deciding to evacuate 150,000 people from the country, even though it is now expected that Cimaron will continue west-northwest and then curve northward.
Revised:  Vietnam is being very careful with this system, and decided to begin evacuating 150,000 people from the country, even though it is now expected that Cimaron will continue west-northwest and then curve northward.
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Original:  Vietnam is being very careful with this system, deciding to evacuate 150,000 people from the country, even though it is now expected that Cimaron will continue west-northwest and then curve northward.
Revised:  Vietnam is being very careful with this system, deciding to evacuate 150,000 people from the country, even though it is expected that Cimaron will continue west-northwest and then curve northward.
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Original:  Due to the size of the system, the outer rainband of the cyclone may be felt in Vietnam   .
Revised:  Due to the size of the system, the outer rainband of the cyclone may be felt in Vietnam . .
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Original:  Original total damage estimates were placed at $400 million pesos, or $8 million United States Dollars, but have been revised to $139 million pesos, or $2.79 million USD in total damage.
Revised:  Original total damage estimates were placed at $400 million pesos, or $8 million United States Dollars, but were revised to $139 million pesos, or $2.79 million USD in total damage.
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Original:  A woman died in a road accident that also insured seven other people in La Union province   .
Revised:  A woman died in a road accident that also insured seven other people in La Union province . .
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Original:  Winds of 160 mph (1 minute sustained winds ) were recorded shortly before landfall.
Revised:  Winds of 160 mph with winds sustaining for only one minuite, were recorded shortly before landfall.
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Original: A woman died in a road accident that also insured seven other people in La Union province.
Revised: A woman died in a road accident that also injured seven other people in La Union province.
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Original:  Aftermath In the Philippines, Nueva Vizcaya's provincial board passed a resolution that declared the province under a state of "calamity", allowing the release of $20 million pesos, or $402,290 USD from the province ’ s calamity fund.
Revised:  Aftermath In the Philippines, Nueva Vizcaya's provincial board passed a resolution that declared the province under a state of "calamity", allowing the release of $20 million pesos, or $402,290 USD from the province ' s calamity fund.
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Original:  The Philippine National Red Cross noted that many of the agency ’ s different branches were assisting the storm victims since Monday morning.
Revised:  The Philippine National Red Cross noted that many of the agency ' s different branches were assisting the storm victims since Monday morning.
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Original: Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi said he was stunned by the shooting and had summoned the U.S. ambassador to explain how American troops had fired on Sgrena as the Italian reporter was being driven to Baghdad airport.
Revised: Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi said he was stunned by the shooting and had summoned the U.S. ambassador to explain how U.S. troops had fired on Sgrena as the Italian reporter was being driven to Baghdad airport.
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Original:  On February 16, a video was released with a clearly distraught Mrs  Sgrena begging for Italy to withdraw from Iraq.
Revised:  On February 16, a video was released with a clearly distraught Mrs . Sgrena begging for Italy to withdraw from Iraq.
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Original:  "This news ( of Mrs.
Revised:  "This news of Mrs.
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Original: Sgrena's release ) which should have be a moment of celebration, has been ruined," Polo told Sky Italia television.
Revised: Sgrena's release which should have be a moment of celebration, has been ruined," Polo told Sky Italia television.
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Original:  Italian Prime Minister Silvio Berlusconi said he was stunned by the shooting and had summoned the U.S. ambassador to explain how U.S. troops had fired on Sgrena as the Italian reporter was being driven to Baghdad airport.
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Original:  The Islamic Jihad Organisation had taken her hostage on the 4th of February with the demand that Italy withdraw all of its troops from Iraq.
Revised:  The Islamic Jihad Organisation had taken her hostage on the 4th February with the demand that Italy withdraw all of its troops from Iraq.
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Original:  On February 16, a video was released with a clearly distraught Mrs . Sgrena begging for Italy to withdraw from Iraq.
Revised:  On February 16, a video was released with a clearly distraught Mrs Sgrena begging for Italy to withdraw from Iraq.
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Original:  "This news of Mrs.
Revised:  of Mrs.
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Original:  Sgrena's release which should have be a moment of celebration, has been ruined," Polo told Sky Italia television   .
Revised:  Sgrena's release which should have be a moment of celebration, has been ruined," Polo told Sky Italia television . .
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Original:  The Italian journalist was abducted in Baghdad exactly a month ago and had been reporting for Il Manifesto.
Revised:  The Italian journalist was abducted in Baghdad exactly a month ago while she had been reporting for Il Manifesto.
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Original:  However despite the video, the Italian Senate voted to extend its miltary forces' stay in Iraq   .
Revised:  However despite the video, the Italian Senate voted to extend its miltary forces' stay in Iraq . .
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Original:  Earlier in the day, his star reporter, Giuliana Sgrena was freed from captivity in Iraq  .
Revised:  Giuliana Sgrena was freed from captivity in Iraq .
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Original:  "This news which should have be a moment of celebration, has been ruined," Polo told Sky Italia television   .
Revised:  "This news which should have be a moment of celebration, has been ruined," Polo told Sky Italia television . .
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Original:  Horwitz and Professor De . "MavBalls
Revised:  Horwitz and Professor De "MavBalls
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Original:  find that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orgiginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip, the synthetic balls bouce 30\% more erratically , due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure, and constantly drying the balls, say Dr.
Revised:  find that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip, the synthetic balls bouce 30\% more erratically , due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure, and constantly drying the balls, say Dr.
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Original:  find that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orgiginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip, the synthetic balls bouce 30\% more erratically , due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure, and constantly drying the balls, say Dr.
Revised:  find that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orgiginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip, the synthetic balls bounce 30\% more erratically , due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure, and constantly drying the balls, say Dr.
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Original:  find that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orgiginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip, the synthetic balls bouce 30\% more erratically , due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure, and constantly drying the balls, say Dr.
Revised:  find that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orgiginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip, the synthetic balls bouce 30\% more sporadically , due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure, and constantly drying the balls, say Dr.
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Original: Studies conducted by a team of physicists at the University of Texas a Arlington conclude that new synthetic NBA basketballs are less lively, more slippery when damp, and bounce more erratically than the traditional leather balls.
Revised: Studies conducted by a team of physicists at the University of Texas at Arlington conclude that new synthetic NBA basketballs are less lively, more slippery when damp, and bounce more erratically than the traditional leather balls.
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Original: Dr. James L. Horwitz,
Revised: James Horwitz,
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Original:  Chairman of the University of Texas at Arlington Department of Physics and Professor Kaushik De as UTA Physics project leader,
Revised:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and Professor Kaushik De as UTA Physics project leader,
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Original:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip , the synthetic balls bounce 30\% more sporadically,  due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure , and constantly drying the balls , say Dr.
Revised:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, but become much more slippery that leather balls when they get damp. Traditional leather basketballs acquire more grip when they are slightly wet. The synthetic balls bounce 30\% more sporadically, due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure , and constantly drying the balls , say Dr.
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Original:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip , the synthetic balls bounce 30\% more sporadically,  due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure , and constantly drying the balls , say Dr.
Revised:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip , the synthetic balls bounce 30\% more sporadically, possibly due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure , and constantly drying the balls , say Dr.
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Original:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip , the synthetic balls bounce 30\% more sporadically,  due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure , and constantly drying the balls , say Dr.
Revised:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip , the synthetic balls bounce 30\% more sporadically, due to deep embossing, and are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure , and constantly drying the balls , say Dr.
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Original:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip , the synthetic balls bounce 30\% more sporadically,  due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. these issues can be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure , and constantly drying the balls , say Dr.
Revised:  Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, compaired to the orginal leather balls that when damp accuire more grip , the synthetic balls bounce 30\% more sporadically, due to deep embossing, and with the regulation air pressure are less lively than leather basketballs. Some of these issues could be fixed with a variety of method including less embossing, more air pressure , and constantly drying the balls , say Dr.
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Original: James Horwitz, Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, but become much more slippery that leather balls when they get damp.
Revised: James Horwitz, Chairman of the UTA Department of Physics and UTA physics professor Kaushik De found that the new balls are tackier when dry, but become much more slippery than leather balls when they get damp.
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Original:  Traditional leather basketballs acquire more grip when they are slightly wet.
Revised:  Traditional leather basketballs provide more grip when they are slightly wet.
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Original:  Some of these issues could be fixed with a variety of methods, including modification of the embossing, increasing the air pressure in the balls beyond the regulation 8.5 psi, and constantly drying the balls with towels during the game or frequently replacing them with fresh basketballs, say Horwitz and De
Revised:  Some of these issues could be fixed with a variety of methods, including modification of the embossing, increasing the air pressure in the balls beyond the regulation 8.5 psi, and constantly drying the balls with towels during the game or frequently replacing them with fresh basketballs, say De and Horwitz
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Original: Despite commitments already made by Prime Minister Blair and Chancellor  Brown to replace the Trident missile system , and by the Prime Minister to have a debate in Parliament, Foreign Secretary Margaret Beckett is calling for a public debate.
Revised: Despite commitments already made by Prime Minister Blair and Chancellor Brown to replace the Trident missile system Foreign Secretary Margaret Beckett is calling for a public debate.
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Original:  Although Trident is not due for replacement for 20 years, because of the long lead time for design and construction, Tony Blair has promised that there will be decision on Trident this year  .
Revised:  Though Trident is not due for replacement for 20 years, because of the long lead time for design and construction, Tony Blair has promised that there will be decision on Trident this year .
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Original:  Although Trident is not due for replacement for 20 years, because of the long lead time for design and construction, Tony Blair has promised that there will be decision on Trident this year  .
Revised:  Although Trident is not due for replacement for 20 years, Tony Blair has promised that there will be decision on Trident this year .
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Original:  Although Trident is not due for replacement for 20 years, because of the long lead time for design and construction, Tony Blair has promised that there will be decision on Trident this year  .
Revised:  Although Trident is not due for replacement for 20 years, because of the long lead time for design and construction, Tony Blair has promised that there will be decision on Trident this year , due to the long lead time for design and construction .
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Original:  Beckett said that the public should be informed and  think about the issue themselves.
Revised:  Beckett said that the public should be informed and should think about the issue themselves.
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Original:  Beckett has  taken an independent line on Iraq by expressing 'regrets' over the war and  she did not disagree with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble
Revised:  Beckett has also taken an independent line on Iraq by expressing 'regrets' over the war and she did not disagree with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble
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