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Original: A spokesman for the East of England ambulance service, Gary Sanderson, said de Villota had "[...] sustained life-threatening injuries and following treatment at the scene by paramedics, she has been taken to Addenbrookes Hospital for further care."
Revised: A spokesman for the East of England ambulance service, Gary Sanderson, said de Villota had "[...] sustained life-threatening injuries and following treatment at the scene by paramedics, she has been taken to for further care."
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Original: At the end of her first installation run, the car she was driving had a low-speed impact with the loading ramp of the team's support truck.
Revised: At the end of her first installation run, the car she was driving had a low-speed collision with the loading ramp of the team's support truck.
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Original: Marussia issued a statement later in the afternoon , reporting her as being conscious : "Since Maria's arrival at the hospital at approximately 10.45am this morning, she has been receiving the best medical attention possible at the hospital, which is the region's major trauma centre.
Revised: Marussia reported her as conscious later in the afternoon , reporting her as being conscious : "Since Maria's arrival at the hospital at approximately 10.45am this morning, she has been receiving the best medical attention possible at the hospital, which is the region's major trauma centre.
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Original: Marussia issued a statement later in the afternoon , reporting her as being conscious : "Since Maria's arrival at the hospital at approximately 10.45am this morning, she has been receiving the best medical attention possible at the hospital, which is the region's major trauma centre.
Revised: Marussia issued a statement later in the afternoon : "Since Maria's arrival at the hospital at approximately 10.45am this morning, she has been receiving the best medical attention possible at the hospital, which is the region's major trauma centre.
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Original:  Currently a respirator assists him in breathing  
Revised:  Currently a respirator assists him in breathing . 
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Original:  On January 4, Sharon suffered a major stroke which left him in a coma .
Revised:  Sharon has been in a coma .
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Original:  Since being admitted to the hospital, Sharon has undergone several rounds of surgery on his brain in an attempt to stop bleeding.
Revised:  Since being admitted to the hospital, he has undergone several rounds of surgery on his brain in an attempt to stop bleeding.
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Original:  Monster.ca lists  
Revised:  Monster.ca lists "On a continuing and regular basis, performs a leading role in CBC News at Six for regional television in Winnipeg. The Host is involved in the development and execution of the program; the structure, direction and much of the content is regularly dictated by the experience, specialized knowledge and performance capabilities of the Host." 
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Original: Image:Multiple laptops.jpg|Various Dell laptops Dell, the world's largest manufactuer of home computers, is recalling 4.1 million lithium batteries used in laptop computers because of the risk of their bursting into flame.
Revised:  Dell, the world's largest manufactuer of home computers, is recalling 4.1 million lithium batteries used in laptop computers because of the risk of their bursting into flame.
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Original:  At least one out of every five females that were inected with the sperm, gave birth to healthy offspring which are also fertile.
Revised:  At least one out of every five females that were injected with the sperm, gave birth to healthy offspring which are also fertile.
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Original:  The idea behind the experiment is that scientists say that the results now make it possible to bring back prehistoric animals or extinct animals such as the woolly mammoth, but becuase any fully intact body found would have been frozen for over 10,000 years and would likely be too damaged organisms and bacterias.
Revised:  The idea behind the experiment is that scientists say that the results now make it possible to bring back prehistoric animals or extinct animals such as the woolly mammoth, but because any fully intact body found would have been frozen for over 10,000 years and would likely be too damaged organisms and bacterias.
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Original: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 ' 000 deaths  each year and costing approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
Revised: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States as well as other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 ' 000 deaths each year and costing approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
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Original: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 ' 000 deaths  each year and costing approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
Revised: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries . The addictive habit causes approximately 440 ' 000 deaths each year and costing approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
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Original: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 ' 000 deaths  each year and costing approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
Revised: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 , 000 deaths each year and costing approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
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Original: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 ' 000 deaths  each year and costing approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
Revised: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 ' 000 deaths each year and costs approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
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Original: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 ' 000 deaths  each year and costing approximately $157 billion in annual health-related economic losses.
Revised: ]] Tobacco use remains the leading preventable cause of disease and death in the United States (and other Western countries ), causing approximately 440 ' 000 deaths each year and costing approximately $157 billion per annum in health-related economic losses.
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Original: A recent study published in the latest issue of the scientific medical journal  Archives of Internal Medicine reports on the potential use of varenicline for smoking cessation.
Revised: A recent study published in the latest issue of the scientific medical journal , Archives of Internal Medicine reports on the potential use of varenicline for smoking cessation.
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Original:  But long term success rates are generally not over 40 percent .
Revised:  But long term success rates are generally not over 40 percent 
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Original:  Varenicline received FDA approval  earlier this year.
Revised:  Varenicline received FDA approval for sale earlier this year.
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Original: Former President of the United States Gerald Ford  has been admitted into the Mayo Clinic in Minnesota  .
Revised: Former President of the United States Gerald Ford has been admitted to the Mayo Clinic in Minnesota .
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Original:  His spokesman did not comment what treatment he was getting at the clinic, and refered all other questions to the Mayo Clinic.
Revised:  His spokesman did not comment what treatment he was getting at the clinic, and refered all other questions to the clinic.
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Original: "No further releases or updates are anticipated prior to early next week," according to the statement .
Revised: "No further releases or updates are anticipated prior to early next week," the statement also said. When contacted,
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Original:  Ford's spokesman did not say what treatment he was getting at the clinic, and refered all other questions to the clinic.
Revised:  Ford's spokesman did not say what treatment he was getting at the clinic, and referred all other questions to the clinic.
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Original:  It is the largest international health initiative in history initiated by one nation to address a single disease  
Revised:  It is the largest international health initiative in history initiated by one nation to address a single disease . 
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Original:  He did critize the program, saying that 33\% of PEPAR funds are dedicated to abstince-only programs.
Revised:  He did critize the program, saying that 33\% of PEPFAR funds are dedicated to abstince-only programs.
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Original:  It provides drugs to HIV patients, distributes condoms and funds programs run by many aid groups.
Revised:  It provides medicine to HIV patients, distributes condoms and funds programs run by many aid groups.
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Original:  He did critize the program, saying that 33\% of PEPFAR funds are dedicated to abstince-only programs.
Revised:  He did critize the program, saying that 33\% of PEPFAR funds are dedicated to abstinence-only programs.
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Original:  He did critize the program, saying that 33\% of PEPFAR funds are dedicated to abstinence-only programs.
Revised:  He did criticize the program, saying that 33\% of PEPFAR funds are dedicated to abstinence-only programs.
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Original: Jesús Cidaña and two other fishermen from the Mexican State of Nayarit have been found by a ship near the Marshall Islands after spending 9 months and 9 days at sea on a small open top fishing boat eating what ever fish they could catch and drinking only rain water.
Revised: Jesús Cidaña and two other fishermen from the Mexican State of Nayarit have been found by a ship near the Marshall Islands after spending 9 months and 9 days at sea on a small open top fishing boat eating what ever fish they could catch and drinking only rain water.
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Original:  They travelled more than 5,000 miles west trying to call the attention of passing ships before being picked up by a Taiwan|Taiwanese ship where they are currently being hel
Revised:  They travelled more than 5,000 miles west trying to call the attention of passing ships before being picked up by a Taiwanese ship where they are currently being hel
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Original:  They travelled more than 5,000 miles  west trying to call the attention of passing ships before being picked up by a Taiwanese ship where they are currently being hel [  
Revised:  They travelled more than 5,000 miles west trying to call the attention of passing ships before being picked up by a Taiwanese ship where they are currently being held. [ 
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Original:  They travelled more than 5,000 miles  west trying to call the attention of passing ships before being picked up by a Taiwanese ship where they are currently being hel [  
Revised:  They travelled more than 5,000 miles west trying to call the attention of passing ships before being picked up by a Taiwanese ship where they are currently being hel [... 
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Original: The controversial copyright- and patent-related trade agreement previously provoked massive rallies and demonstrations across the continent involving hundreds of thousands . A petition against ACTA accrued two million signatures.
Revised: The controversial copyright- and patent-related trade agreement previously provoked massive rallies and demonstrations across Europe . A petition against ACTA accrued two million signatures.
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Original: The controversial copyright- and patent-related trade agreement previously provoked massive rallies and demonstrations across Europe.
Revised: The controversial copyright- and trademark-related trade agreement previously provoked massive rallies and demonstrations across Europe.
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Original: The long-running campaign against ACTA can largely be traced to publication of a leaked draft of the agreement on whistleblowing site .
Revised: The long-running campaign against ACTA can in part be traced to publication of a leaked draft of the agreement on whistleblowing site .
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Original:  The trade agreement, which -based pressure group described as "giving the U.S. a structural competitive advantage over other countries", had already been ratified by , , , , , , , and the United States.
Revised:  The trade agreement, which -based pressure group described as "giving the U.S. a structural competitive advantage over other countries", had already amongst its signatories , , , , , , , and the United States.
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Original:  In thanking supporters, the (ORG) cautioned that , current , deferred any decision as-to how the Commission will move forward until after a ruling from the on ACTA's compatibility with European law.
Revised:  In thanking supporters, the (ORG) cautioned that , current , deferred any decision as to how the Commission will move forward until after a ruling from the on ACTA's compatibility with European law.
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Original:  Pressure and activist groups across  celebrated the defeat of the legislation, attributing their success to mobilising the public to bring pressure to bear on MEPs.
Revised:  Pressure and activist groups across Europe celebrated the defeat of the legislation, attributing their success to mobilising the public to bring pressure to bear on MEPs.
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Original:  Following  taking office, another request was filed;
Revised:  Following Barack Obama taking office, another request was filed;
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Original:  The trade agreement, which -based pressure group described as "giving the U.S. a structural competitive advantage over other countries", had already amongst its signatories  , , , , , , , and the United States.
Revised:  The trade agreement, which -based pressure group described as "giving the U.S. a structural competitive advantage over other countries", had already amongst its signatories , and the United States.
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Original:  The long-running campaign against ACTA can in part be traced to publication of a leaked draft of the agreement on whistleblowing site  .
Revised:  The long-running campaign against ACTA can in part be traced to publication of a leaked draft of the agreement on whistleblowing site Wikileaks .
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Original:  "We have decided to turn the page so we can fix the things that were misadjusted, clarify the things that could be clouded and work together in the construction for the common people" added President Chávez .
Revised: President Chavez said: "We have decided to turn the page so we can fix the things that were misadjusted, clarify the things that could be clouded and work together in the construction for the common people" added President Chávez .
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Original:  "We have decided to turn the page so we can fix the things that were misadjusted, clarify the things that could be clouded and work together in the construction for the common people" added President Chávez .
Revised:  "We have decided to turn the page so we can fix the things that were misadjusted, clarify the things that could be clouded and work together in the construction for the common people" .
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Original:  The meeting was scheduled for early  month, however it was postponed due to a disease of the Colombian president.
Revised:  The meeting was scheduled for early this month, however it was postponed due to a disease of the Colombian president.
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Original:  Capture of FARC member creates crisis between Venezuela and Colombia, January 15, 2005.
Revised:  Capture of FARC member creates crisis between Venezuela and Colombia, January 15, 
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Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Colombia Category:Venezuela Category:South America Category:Politics and conflicts es:Uribe y Chávez se reúnen en Caracas para poner fin a la crisis Category:Hugo Chav
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:Colombia Category:Venezuela Category:South America Category:Politics and conflicts es:Uribe y Chávez se reúnen en Caracas para poner fin a la crisis Category:Hugo Chav
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Original: The enconteur served both to finish the harshness between the two countries and to resume bilateral agreements and the activity in the border which were paralyzed as a result of the crisis.
Revised: The encounter served both to finish the harshness between the two countries and to resume bilateral agreements and the activity in the border which were paralyzed as a result of the crisis.
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Original:  " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Animal welfa
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Original:  " References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% See also Animal welfa
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Original:  They range in ages from 22 to 53 
Revised:  They range in ages from 22 to 53. 
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Original: Image:Lotto 649 Winners.jpg|The eight Dollarama employees pose for the media during a press conference in Toronto on Monday.
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Original:  The issue came to a head in 2005 with the discovery of the trans-Neptunian object 2003UB313 (unofficially termed Xena by it's discoverer, Michael E. Brown).
Revised:  The issue came to a head in 2005 with the discovery of the trans-Neptunian object 2003UB313 (unofficially termed Xena by its discoverer, Michael E. Brown).
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Original: United Airlines Flight 923 URL made a emergency landing at Boston's Logan International Airport.
Revised: United Airlines Flight 923 made a emergency landing at Boston's Logan International Airport.
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Original:  Fighter jets escorted the flight to the ground .
Revised:  following the pilot declaring an in-flight emergency .
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Original:  It's a disaster waiting to happen," Chief Fields said .
Revised:  It's a disaster waiting to happen," said Chief Fields .
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Original:  Also a toxic cloud of chemicals forced 1,500 employees and residents to flee after a fire engulfed the laboratory of a coatings plant north of Montreal at Boisbriand, Quebec.
Revised:  Also, a toxic cloud of chemicals forced 1,500 employees and residents to flee after a fire engulfed the laboratory of a coatings plant north of Montreal at Boisbriand, Quebec.
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Original:  The evacuation order was lifted about 7 P.M   
Revised:  The evacuation order was lifted about 7 P.M . 
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Original: Because gravity can deflect light, the team was able to detect the presence of large amounts of dark matter through gravitational lensing , which leads to the distortion of the images of objects that lie behind the dark matter .
Revised: Because the force of gravity can bend light, the team was able to detect the presence of large amounts of dark matter through gravitational lensing , which leads to the distortion of the images of objects that lie behind the dark matter .
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Original: Because gravity can deflect light, the team was able to detect the presence of large amounts of dark matter through gravitational lensing , which leads to the distortion of the images of objects that lie behind the dark matter .
Revised: Because gravity can deflect light, the team was able to detect the presence of dark matter through gravitational lensing , which leads to the distortion of the images of objects that lie behind the dark matter .
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Original:  To make their discovery, the scientists trained their telescopes on a cluster of galaxies officially designated 1E0657-56, but informally known as the bullet cluster because of its shape.
Revised:  To make their discovery, the scientists trained their telescopes on a cluster of galaxies officially designated 1E0657-56, informally known as the bullet cluster because of its shape.
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Original:  Light emitted by objects that lied beyond the believed dark matter was distorted by a gravitational force in excess of the distortion expected by the visible matter present in the galactic collision.
Revised:  Light emitted by objects that lay beyond the believed dark matter was distorted by a gravitational force in excess of the distortion expected by the visible matter present in the galactic collision.
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Original:  These results will be published in an upcoming issue of Astrophysical Journal Letter
Revised:  These results will be published in an upcoming issue of Astrophysical Journal Letters
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Original: CBS News is reporting that according to their sources the suspect,  a 41-year-old American man and second-grade schoolteacher,  will be brought back to the United States this weekend.
Revised: CBS News is reporting that according to their sources the suspect, a 41-year-old American man and second-grade schoolteacher, who will be brought back to the United States this weekend.
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Original:  CNN reports that a law enforcement source identified the suspect as 41-year-old John Mark Carr, a one-time school teacher.
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Original:  The case drew national attention when no suspect was charged and suspicions turned to possible family involvement       
Revised:  The case drew national attention when no suspect was charged and suspicions turned to possible family involvement . 
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Original:  John Ramsey, the girl's father and a millionaire businessman who ran unsuccessfully for the state legislature in Michigan in 2004, released a statement to the media Wednesday afternoon.
Revised:  John Ramsey, the girl's father , released the following statement to the media Wednesday afternoon.
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Original:  John Ramsey, the girl's father and a millionaire businessman who ran unsuccessfully for the state legislature in Michigan in 2004, released a statement to the media Wednesday afternoon.
Revised:  John Ramsey, the girl's father and a millionaire businessman who ran unsuccessfully for the state legislature in Michigan in 2004, released a statement to the media 
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