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Original:  Her  brother, León Carey Moring, 1-year-old, is still missing, after being taken by the February 27 tsunami , while both children were with their mother.
Revised:  Her brother, León Carey Moring, is still missing, after being taken by the February 27 tsunami , while both children were with their mother.
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Original:  Her  brother, León Carey Moring, 1-year-old, is still missing, after being taken by the February 27 tsunami , while both children were with their mother.
Revised:  Her brother, León Carey Moring, 1-year-old, is still missing, after being taken by the February 27 tsunami while both children were with their mother.
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Original:  They were roaming around the coastline , in Chorrillos , when at the 17:00 (UTC) they found the body of a child.
Revised:  They were roaming around the coastline in Chorrillos when at the 17:00 (UTC) they found the body of a child.
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Original:  Police did various test on the body last Monday to try to determine the body's identity and sex.
Revised:  Police did various tests on the body last Monday to try to determine the body's identity and sex.
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Original:  That evening, DNA was taken from the relatives of minor's who are missing.
Revised:  That evening, DNA was taken from the relatives of minors who are missing.
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Original:  One of his son's, León Carey Moring  is still missing.
Revised:  One of his son's, León Carey Moring , is still missing.
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Original:   Fishermen in Pichilemu found the body of a child last Sunday evening on the beach of Pichilemu .
Revised:  Fishermen in Pichilemu found the body last Sunday evening on the beach of Pichilemu .
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Original:  They were roaming around the coastline in Chorrillos when at the 17:00 (UTC) they found the body of a child .
Revised:  They were roaming around the coastline in Chorrillos at 17:00 (UTC) they found the body of a child .
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Original:  They were roaming around the coastline in Chorrillos when at the 17:00 (UTC) they found the body of a child .
Revised:  They were roaming around the coastline in Chorrillos when at the 17:00 (UTC) .
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Original:  That evening, DNA was taken  from the relatives of  minors who are missing.
Revised:  That evening, DNA was taken also from the relatives of minors who are missing.
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Original:  That evening, DNA was taken  from the relatives of  minors who are missing.
Revised:  That evening, DNA was taken from the relatives of other minors who are missing.
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Original:  That evening, DNA was taken  from the relatives of  minors who are missing.
Revised:  That evening, DNA was taken from the relatives of minors who are 
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Original:  Other American officials included military officers as well as Secretary of Homeland Security Janet Napolitano  
Revised:  Other American officials included military officers as well as Secretary of Homeland Security Janet Napolitano . 
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Original: The United States and Mexico yesterday announced a new strategy to combat increasingly violent drug movements across the border between the two countries.
Revised: The United States and Mexico announced a new strategy to combat increasingly violent drug movements across the border between the two countries.
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Original: With the problem with the fuel guage still unexplained NASA has announced that in may bend some of its long-standing safety rules to launch the space-shuttle Discovery on time.
Revised: With the problem with the fuel guage still unexplained NASA has announced that in may bend some of its long-standing safety rules to launch the Space Shuttle Discovery on time.
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Original:  NASA managers have decided to launce with just three of the four fuel gaudges working if the problem reapears Tuesday, however this would mean disreguarding the rule created in 1986 after the Challenger explosion.
Revised:  NASA managers have decided to launch with just three of the four fuel gaudges working if the problem reapears Tuesday, however this would mean disreguarding the rule created in 1986 after the Challenger explosion.
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Original:  NASA managers have decided to launce with just three of the four fuel gaudges working if the problem reapears Tuesday, however this would mean disreguarding the rule created in 1986 after the Challenger explosion.
Revised:  NASA managers have decided to launce with just three of the four fuel gaudges working if the problem reapears Tuesday, however this would mean disregarding the rule created in 1986 after the Challenger explosion.
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Original:  Discovery and the crew of 7 are set to blast-off for The International Space Station at 10:39 a.m.
Revised:  Discovery and the crew of 7 are set to blast-off for the International Space Station at 10:39 a.m.
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Original:  This will be the first launch since the Space Shuttle Columbia disater two and a half years ago
Revised:  This will be the first launch since the Space Shuttle Columbia disaster two and a half years ago
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Original:  An American official said that  "we are still working to finalize the treaty . " Despite that, diplomats from both sides said they were optimistic that the deal was near completion.
Revised:  An American official said that while "we are still working to finalize the treaty . " Despite that, diplomats from both sides said they were optimistic that the deal was near completion.
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Original:  An American official said that  "we are still working to finalize the treaty . " Despite that, diplomats from both sides said they were optimistic that the deal was near completion.
Revised:  An American official said that "we are still working to finalize the treaty , " Despite that, diplomats from both sides said they were optimistic that the deal was near completion.
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Original:  An American official said that  "we are still working to finalize the treaty . " Despite that, diplomats from both sides said they were optimistic that the deal was near completion.
Revised:  An American official said that "we are still working to finalize the treaty . " diplomats from both sides said they were optimistic that the deal was near completion.
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Original: Contentious issues in the negotiations included how to make sure each side was complying with the requirements, the sharing of technology between the two sides, and how to limit defense programs in both countries.
Revised: Contentious issues in the negotiations included devising a way to make sure each side was complying with the requirements, the sharing of technology between the two sides, and how to limit defense programs in both countries.
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Original: Opposition leader David Cameron attacked the Budget, saying that the headline stamp duty plans were stolen from his own Consevative party.
Revised: Opposition leader David Cameron attacked the Budget, saying that the headline stamp duty plans were stolen from his own Conservative party.
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Original:  Other changes include a freeze of the threshold for inheritance tax for the next four-years, whilst higher winter fuel payments for pensioners will be maintained for another year  
Revised:  Other changes include a freeze of the threshold for inheritance tax for the next four-years, whilst higher winter fuel payments for pensioners will be maintained for another year . 
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Original:  Other changes include a freeze of the threshold for inheritance tax for the next four-years, whilst higher winter fuel payments for pensioners will be maintained for another year  
Revised:  Other changes include a freeze of the threshold for inheritance tax for the next four-years, whilst higher winter fuel payments for pensioners will be maintained for another year Related new
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Original: Representative Tom Perriello's , of Virginia's 5th district, brothers home had its gas line cut early Wednesday.
Revised: Virginia's 5th district representative Tom Perriello's , of Virginia's 5th district, brothers home had its gas line cut early Wednesday.
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Original: Representative Tom Perriello's , of Virginia's 5th district, brothers home had its gas line cut early Wednesday.
Revised: Representative Tom Perriello's brother's home had its gas line cut early Wednesday.
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Original:  Another Democrat  Louise Slaughter of New York's 28th district  had a brick thrown through her offices window.
Revised:  Another Democrat , Louise Slaughter of New York's 28th district had a brick thrown through her offices window.
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Original:  Another Democrat  Louise Slaughter of New York's 28th district  had a brick thrown through her offices window.
Revised:  Another Democrat Louise Slaughter of New York's 28th district , had a brick thrown through her offices window.
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Original:  Hoyer said that "The incidents of threats whether in person or through telephones or through other communication devices, have given great concern to members, for the safety of themselves and their families ,".
Revised:  Hoyer said that "The incidents of threats whether in person or through telephones or through other communication devices, have given great concern to members, for the safety of themselves and their families ."
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Original: The US Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) is investigating treats made against Democratic members of The House of Representatives.
Revised: The US Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) is investigating threats made against Democratic members of The House of Representatives.
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Original: The US Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) is investigating threats made against Democratic members of The House of Representatives.
Revised: The US Federal Bureau of Investigation (FBI) is investigating threats made against Democratic members of the US House of Representatives.
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Original:  The threats were directed at ten specific Members of Congress.
Revised:  The threats were directed at ten specific members of Congress.
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Original:  House Minority leader John Boehner said that the incidents shows the American peoples  feelings for the new bill, but "violence and threats are unacceptable."
Revised:  House Minority leader John Boehner said that the incidents shows the American peoples ' feelings for the new bill, but "violence and threats are unacceptable."
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Original:  House Minority leader John Boehner said that the incidents shows the American people' s feelings for the new bill, but "violence and threats are unacceptable."
Revised:  House Minority leader John Boehner said that the incidents shows the American peoples' feelings for the new bill, but "violence and threats are unacceptable."
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Original:  He added  " That 's not the American way, we need to take that anger and channel it into positive change."
Revised:  He added , " That 's not the American way, we need to take that anger and channel it into positive change."
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Original:  He added  " That 's not the American way, we need to take that anger and channel it into positive change."
Revised:  He added " that 's not the American way, we need to take that anger and channel it into positive change."
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Original:  Hoyer said that " The  incidents of threats whether in person or through telephones or through other communication devices, have given great concern to members, for the safety of themselves and their families."
Revised:  Hoyer said that " t incidents of threats whether in person or through telephones or through other communication devices, have given great concern to members, for the safety of themselves and their families."
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Original:  Hoyer said that " The  incidents of threats whether in person or through telephones or through other communication devices, have given great concern to members, for the safety of themselves and their families."
Revised:  Hoyer said that " The he incidents of threats whether in person or through telephones or through other communication devices, have given great concern to members, for the safety of themselves and their families."
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Original:  The threats were directed at ten specific members of Congress , all of whom supported the recent health care reform legislation.
Revised:  The threats were directed at members of Congress , all of whom supported the recent health care reform legislation.
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Original:  The threats were directed at ten specific members of Congress , all of whom supported the recent health care reform legislation.
Revised:  The threats were directed at ten specific members of Congress who supported the recent health care reform legislation.
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Original: House Minority leader John Boehner said that the incidents shows the American peoples' feelings for the new bill, but "violence and threats are unacceptable."
Revised: House Minority leader John Boehner said that the incidents show the American peoples' feelings for the new bill, but "violence and threats are unacceptable."
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Original:  He was well known for his staring roles on Trackdown, Everybody Loves Raymond, and The Greatest American Hero''.
Revised:  He was well known for his roles on Trackdown, Everybody Loves Raymond, and The Greatest American Hero''.
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Original:  From approximately 1:00 P.M. to 4:00 P.M. Eastern Standard Time, the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia  as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews) where offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
Revised:  From approximately 1:00 P.M. to 4:00 P.M. Eastern Standard Time, the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia , as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews) where offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
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Original:  From approximately 1:00 P.M. to 4:00 P.M. Eastern Standard Time, the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia  as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews) where offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
Revised:  From approximately 1:00 P.M. to 4:00 P.M. Eastern Standard Time, the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews) , were offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
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Original:  According to a post on the Wikimedia's Foundation's technical blog, their servers "shut themselves down" as to avoid further damage from the heat.
Revised:  According to a post on the Wikimedia's Foundation's technical blog, their servers "shut themselves down" to avoid further damage from the heat.
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Original: From approximately 1:00 P.M . to 4:00 P.M . Eastern Standard Time  , the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia, as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews), were offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
Revised: From approximately 1:00 p.m . to 4:00 P.M . Eastern Standard Time , the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia, as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews), were offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
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Original: From approximately 1:00 P.M . to 4:00 P.M . Eastern Standard Time  , the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia, as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews), were offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
Revised: From approximately 1:00 P.M . to 4:00 p.m . Eastern Standard Time , the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia, as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews), were offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
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Original:  According to the Project's official Twitter account, programmers were able to resolve most of the server problems by around 4:00 PM EST.
Revised:  According to the Project's official Twitter account, programmers were able to resolve most of the server problems by around 4:00 p.m. EST.
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Original: From approximately 1:00 p.m.  to 4:00 p.m.  Eastern Standard Time (EST), the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia, as well as its sister projects (including Wikinews), were offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
Revised: From approximately 1:00 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. Eastern Standard Time (EST), the popular free encyclopedia Wikipedia, alongside its sister projects (including Wikinews), were offline due to major server outages attributed to overheating at the Project's central data center in Amsterdam.
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Original:  According to a post made by Mark Bergsma at the Wikimedia Foundation technical blog, their servers "shut themselves down" to avoid further damage from the heat.
Revised:  According to a post made by Mark Bergsma at the Wikimedia Foundation technical blog, the servers "shut themselves down" to avoid further damage from the heat.
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Original:  According to the Project's official Twitter account, programmers were able to resolve most of the server problems by around 4:00 p.m. EST. Since the situation with the servers in Amsterdam is still ongoing, some users may still be experiencing lingering service glitches due to "caching effects.
Revised:  According to the Project's official Twitter account, programmers were able to resolve most of the server problems by around 4:00 p.m. EST. Since the situation with the servers in Amsterdam is still ongoing, some users may still experience lingering service glitches due to "caching effects.
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Original: According to a post made by Mark Bergsma at the Wikimedia Foundation technical blog, the servers "shut themselves down" to avoid further damage from the heat .
Revised: According to a post made by Mark Bergsma at the Wikimedia Foundation technical blog, the servers "shut themselves down" to avoid further heat damage .
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Original:  Administrators reportedly tried to shift online traffic to the Project's servers in Florida.
Revised:  Administrators reportedly attempted a shift of traffic to the Project's servers in Florida.
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Original:  According to the Project's official Twitter account, programmers were able to resolve most of the server problems by around 4:00 p.m. EST. Since the situation with the servers in Amsterdam is still ongoing, some users may still experience lingering service glitches due to "caching effects .
Revised:  According to the Project's official Twitter account, programmers were able to resolve most of the server problems by around 4:00 p.m. EST. Since the situation with the servers in Amsterdam is still ongoing, some users may still experience lingering service glitches due to "caching effects "
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Original: A statement  released by the government on Wednesday  said the arrested people were suspected of plotting attacks on security and oil installations.
Revised: A statement released by the government on Wednesday . It said the arrested people were suspected of plotting attacks on security and oil installations.
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Original:  The total cells were apprehended - 101 from one large cell, and six apiece from two smaller ones  
Revised:  The total cells were apprehended - 101 from one large cell, and six apiece from two smaller ones . 
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Original:  The total cells were apprehended - 101 from one large cell, and six apiece from two smaller ones.
Revised:  Members from three total cells were apprehended - 101 from one large cell, and six apiece from two smaller ones.
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Original:  The total cells were apprehended - 101 from one large cell, and six apiece from two smaller ones.
Revised:  The total cells were seized - 101 from one large cell, and six apiece from two smaller ones.
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Original:  The other cells consisted of eleven Saudis and a Yemeni  
Revised:  The other cells consisted of eleven Saudis and a Yemeni . 
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Original:  Members from three total cells were seized - 101 from one large cell, and six apiece from two smaller ones.
Revised:  Members from three total cells were seized — 101 from one large cell, and six apiece from two smaller ones.
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Original:  a Bangladeshi,  Eritrean, and a Somali comprised the rest of the group.
Revised:  a Bangladeshi, an Eritrean, and a Somali comprised the rest of the group.
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Original:  a Bangladeshi,  Eritrean, and a Somali comprised the rest of the group.
Revised:  a Bangladeshi, Eritrean, and a Somali were the rest of the group.
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Original:  The School of Oceanographic Studies in Calcutta commented that the disappearance of the island was confirmed by satellite imagery  [   
Revised:  The School of Oceanographic Studies in Calcutta commented that the disappearance of the island was confirmed by satellite imagery . [ 
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Original:  He attributed the disappearance of the isle to global warming, saying that " w hat these two countries could not achieve from years of talking has been resolved by global warming."
Revised:  " w hat these two countries could not achieve from years of talking has been resolved by global warming."
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Original:  He attributed the disappearance of the isle to global warming, saying that " w hat these two countries could not achieve from years of talking has been resolved by global warming."
Revised:  He attributed the disappearance of the isle to global warming, saying that " hat these two countries could not achieve from years of talking has been resolved by global warming."
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Original:  He attributed the disappearance of the isle to global warming, saying that " w hat these two countries could not achieve from years of talking has been resolved by global warming."
Revised:  He attributed the disappearance of the isle to global warming, saying that " w What these two countries could not achieve from years of talking has been resolved by global warming."
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Original:  "We will have ever larger numbers of people displaced from the Sunderbans as more island areas come under water.  
Revised:  "We will have ever larger numbers of people displaced from the Sunderbans as more island areas come under water. " 
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Original: The island of New Moore, an uninhabited territory near the Bay of Bengal between India and Bangladesh has been swallowed up by rising sea levels , according to Indian scientists.
Revised: The island of New Moore, an uninhabited territory near the Bay of Bengal between India and Bangladesh vanished , according to Indian scientists.
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Original:  Hazra commented that, until 2000, sea levels in the area increased approximately three millimetres annually, but in the past year the figure was augmented to about five millimetres.
Revised:  Hazra claimed that, until 2000, sea levels in the area increased approximately three millimetres annually, but in the past year the figure was augmented to about five millimetres.
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Original:   According to officials, eighteen percent of the Bangladeshi coastal land will be submerged if sea levels increase by one metre by 2050, and twenty million people will be displaced  
Revised:  According to officials, eighteen percent of the Bangladeshi coastal land will be submerged if sea levels increase by one metre by 2050, and twenty million people will be displaced . 
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