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Original:  In a more extreme view, the global brain has been compared with the Borg, the race of collectively thinking cyborgs conceived by the Star Trek science fiction franchise.
Revised:  In a more extreme view, the global brain has been compared with the Borg, a race of collectively thinking cyborgs conceived by the Star Trek science fiction franchise.
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Original:  He focuses on matters of foreign affairs , defense, development aid, youth and family.
Revised:  He focuses on matters of foreign policy , defense, development aid, youth and family.
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Original:  As a member of the ChristianUnion (ChristenUnie) he has been an MP since 30 November 2006.
Revised:  As a member of the Christian Union (ChristenUnie) he has been an MP since 30 November 2006.
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Original: Joël Stephanus Voordewind (born 9 July 1965 in Sleen, Drenthe) is a Dutch politician  and former development aid worker.
Revised: Joël Stephanus Voordewind (born 9 July 1965 in Sleen, Drenthe) is a Dutch politician , traitor and former development aid worker.
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Original: Joël Stephanus Voordewind (born 9 July 1965 in Sleen, Drenthe) is a Dutch politician , traitor and former development aid worker.
Revised: Joël Stephanus Voordewind (born 9 July 1965 in Sleen, Drenthe) is a Dutch politician and former development aid worker.
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Original:  The effective limit for scanning speeds based upon the limit of the human eye's resolution is about 300 words per URL It is claimed that such speeds also require great practice, and extremely rapid eye movements, although research suggests that such training is not possible.
Revised:  The effective limit for scanning speeds based upon the limit of the human eye's resolution is about 300 words per minute. It is claimed that such speeds also require great practice, and extremely rapid eye movements, although research suggests that such training is not possible.
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Original:  Similarly to the reading span, the Facespan might be modulated by URL expertise, age, disorder and other idiosyncratic differences between individuals.
Revised:  Similarly to the reading span, the Facespan might be modulated by difficulty, expertise, age, disorder and other idiosyncratic differences between individuals.
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Original:  Speed readers cannot answer questions about a main point or detail, if they did not fixate directly on it or within three character spaces of it ( Just and Carpenter 1987 ).
Revised:  Speed readers cannot answer questions about a main point or detail, if they did not fixate directly on it or within three character spaces of it . Just and Carpenter 1987 ).
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Original:  Speed readers cannot answer questions about a main point or detail, if they did not fixate directly on it or within three character spaces of it ( Just and Carpenter 1987 ).
Revised:  Speed readers cannot answer questions about a main point or detail, if they did not fixate directly on it or within three character spaces of it ( Just and Carpenter 1987 
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Original:  When a text is removed whilst reading, readers can only accurately report upon the word they were fixating upon or the next one to the right ( McConkie and Hogaoam 1985 ).
Revised:  When a text is removed whilst reading, readers can only accurately report upon the word they were fixating upon or the next one to the right . McConkie and Hogaoam 1985 ).
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Original:  When a text is removed whilst reading, readers can only accurately report upon the word they were fixating upon or the next one to the right ( McConkie and Hogaoam 1985 ).
Revised:  When a text is removed whilst reading, readers can only accurately report upon the word they were fixating upon or the next one to the right ( McConkie and Hogaoam 1985 
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Original:  Just and Carpenter 1987 In Allyn & Bacon's The Psychology of Reading and Language Comprehension. Boston
Revised:  Just and Carpenter 1987. In Allyn & Bacon's The Psychology of Reading and Language Comprehension. Boston
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Original:  <ref name = eyeangle> last1=Hammoud | first1=Riad |year =2008| title=Passive Eye Monitoring: Algorithms, Applications and Experiments| doi: 10.1007/978-3-540-75412-1.
Revised:  last1=Hammoud | first1=Riad |year =2008| title=Passive Eye Monitoring: Algorithms, Applications and Experiments| doi: 10.1007/978-3-540-75412-1.
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Original:  <ref name = eyeangle> last1=Hammoud | first1=Riad |year =2008| title=Passive Eye Monitoring: Algorithms, Applications and Experiments| doi: 10.1007/978-3-540-75412-1.
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Original: Nepalese military personnel Category:People of the Anglo-Nepalese War Category:Gurkhas Category:Suicides in Nepal Category:History of Nepal Category:Thapa dynasty Category:Bagale Thapa Category:National heroes of Nepal Category:People from Gorkha District Category:Mukhtiyars Category:Nepalese Hindus Category:Politicians who committed suicide Category:People of the Nepalese unification Category:Nepalese people who died in prison custody Category:19th-century Prime Ministers of Nep
Revised: Nepalese military personnel Category:People of the Anglo-Nepalese War Category:Gurkhas Category:Suicides in Nepal Category:History of Nepal Category:Thapa dynasty Category:Bagale Thapa Category:National heroes of Nepal Category:People from Gorkha District Category:Mukhtiyars Category:Nepalese Hindus Category:Politicians who committed suicide Category:People of the Nepalese unification Category:Nepalese people who died in prison custody Category:19th-century Prime Ministers of Nepal Category:19th-century Nepalese nobili
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Original: Bhimsen Thapa Chhetri (  ;
Revised: Bhimsen Thapa Chhetri ( ( ;
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Original:  August 1775 – 5 August 1839  ) was the Mukhtiyar (equivalent to prime minister) and de facto ruler of Nepal from 1806 to 1837.
Revised:  August 1775 – 5 August 1839 ) ) was the Mukhtiyar (equivalent to prime minister) and de facto ruler of Nepal from 1806 to 1837.
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Original: People of the Anglo-Nepalese War Category:Gurkhas Category:Suicides in Nepal Category:History of Nepal Category:Thapa dynasty Category:Bagale Thapa Category:National heroes of Nepal Category:People from Gorkha District Category:Mukhtiyars Category:Nepalese Hindus Category:Politicians who committed suicide Category:People of the Nepalese unification Category:Nepalese people who died in prison custody Category:19th-century prime ministers of Nepal Category:19th-century Nepalese nobili
Revised: People of the Anglo-Nepalese War Category:Gurkhas Category:Suicides in Nepal Category:History of Nepal Category:Thapa dynasty Category:Bagale Thapa Category:National heroes of Nepal Category:People from Gorkha District Category:Mukhtiyars Category:Nepalese Hindus Category:Politicians who committed suicide Category:People of the Nepalese unification Category:Nepalese people who died in prison custody Category:19th-century prime ministers of Nepal Category:19th-century Nepalese nobility Category:Bhimsen Tha
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Original:  They mostly resides in the three states is Assam, Manipur and Nagaland.
Revised:  They mostly resides in the three states of India viz; Assam, Manipur and Nagaland.
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Original: Notable people Armstrong Pame,  TR Zeliang,Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang,First Nagas Chief Secretary of Nagaland NN Haralu, First Naga Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as he reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Thinowelie Lungalang, First Nagas to crack get IAS through UPSC.
Revised: Notable people Armstrong Pame, TR Zeliang,Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang,First Nagas Chief Secretary of Nagaland NN Haralu, First Naga Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Thinowelie Lungalang, First Nagas to crack get IAS through UPSC.
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Original:  While serving as SDM in Tousem Subdivision,Tamenglong Diatrict Manipur.
Revised:  While serving as SDM in Tousem Subdivision,Tamenglong District Manipur.
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Original:  TR Zeliang,Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang,First Nagas Chief Secretary of Nagaland NN Haralu, First Naga Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Thinowelie Lungalang, First Nagas to crack get IAS through UPSC.
Revised:  TR Zeliang,Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang,First Nagas Chief Secretary of Nagaland NN Haralu, First Naga Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Thinowelie Lungalang, First Nagas to get IAS through UPSC.
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Original:  TR Zeliang, Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang, Former Chief Secretary of Nagaland N N Haralu, Former Indian Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Dr. Harielungbe Haralu, First Naga Medical Doctor.
Revised:  TR Zeliang, Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang, Former Chief Secretary of Nagaland N .N. Haralu, Former Indian Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Dr. Harielungbe Haralu, First Naga Medical Doctor.
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Original: Stephen'  college, Delhi in Physics.
Revised: Stephen' s college, Delhi in Physics.
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Original:  TR Zeliang , Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang, Former Chief Secretary of Nagaland N.N. Haralu, Former Indian Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Dr. Harielungbe Haralu, First Naga Medical Doctor.
Revised:  TR Zeliang was a two time Chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang, Former Chief Secretary of Nagaland N.N. Haralu, Former Indian Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Dr. Harielungbe Haralu, First Naga Medical Doctor.
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Original:  TR Zeliang , Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang, Former Chief Secretary of Nagaland N.N. Haralu, Former Indian Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama Guizang meru, First Nagas headmaster to serve in Impur school Dr. Harielungbe Haralu, First Naga Medical Doctor.
Revised:  TR Zeliang , Two time chief Minister of Nagaland L Lungalang, Former Chief Secretary of Nagaland N.N. Haralu, Former Indian Ambassador, She served in various capacities in the Ministry of External affair and Indian Foreign Service and retired in 1980 as she reached the pinnacle of her career as an Ambassador of Panama . Dr. Harielungbe Haralu, First Naga Medical Doctor.
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Original:  it measures sleep  latency during several daytime opportunities.
Revised:  it measures sleep onset latency during several daytime opportunities.
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Original: The instrument The SWAI consists of 59 items that provide six subscale scores: Excessive Daytime Sleepiness, Nocturnal Sleep, Ability to Relax, Energy Level, Social Desirability, and Psychic Distress* . Each item is rated on a 1 to 9 semicontinuous Likert type scale from ‘always’ to ‘never’ , based on the previous seven days.
Revised: The instrument The SWAI consists of 59 items that provide six subscale scores: Excessive Daytime Sleepiness, Nocturnal Sleep, Ability to Relax, Energy Level, Social Desirability, and Psychic Distress . Each item is rated on a 1 to 9 semicontinuous Likert type scale from ‘always’ to ‘never’ , based on the previous seven days.
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Original: The instrument The SWAI consists of 59 items that provide six subscale scores: Excessive Daytime Sleepiness, Nocturnal Sleep, Ability to Relax, Energy Level, Social Desirability, and Psychic Distress* . Each item is rated on a 1 to 9 semicontinuous Likert type scale from ‘always’ to ‘never’ , based on the previous seven days.
Revised: The instrument The SWAI consists of 59 items that provide six subscale scores: Excessive Daytime Sleepiness, Nocturnal Sleep, Ability to Relax, Energy Level, Social Desirability, and Psychic Distress* . Each item is rated on a 1 to 9 semicontinuous Likert type scale from "always" to "never" , based on the previous seven days.
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Original:  However, the ESS does not correlate as highly with the MSLT as the SWAI * . The ESS is currently the most prevalent measure of excessive sleepiness.
Revised:  However, the ESS does not correlate as highly with the MSLT as the SWAI . The ESS is currently the most prevalent measure of excessive sleepiness.
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Original:  Leon Rosenthal, Timothy Roehrs , and Tom Roth at the Sleep Disorders and Research Center at the Henry Ford Hospital in Detroit, Michigan.
Revised:  Leon Rosenthal, Timothy Roehrs and Tom Roth at the Sleep Disorders and Research Center at the Henry Ford Hospital in Detroit, Michigan.
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Original:  For the type of imported fish called Swai, see Pangasius, a genus of shark catfishes native to Asia.
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Original: In mathematics, the Chicago school of mathematical analysis is a school of thought  which emphasizes the applications of Fourier analysis to the study of partial differential equations.
Revised: The Chicago school of mathematical analysis is a school of thought which emphasizes the applications of Fourier analysis to the study of partial differential equations.
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Original:  Mathematician Antoni Zygmund cofounded the school with his doctoral student Alberto Calderón at the University of Chicago in the 1950s.
Revised:  Mathematician Antoni Zygmund co-founded the school with his doctoral student Alberto Calderón at the University of Chicago in the 1950s.
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Original:  The Chicago school of analysis is considered to be one of the strongest schools of mathematical analysis in the 20th century, which made some of the most important developments in analysis.
Revised: Comments The Chicago school of analysis is considered to be one of the strongest schools of mathematical analysis in the 20th century, which made some of the most important developments in analysis.
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Original:   In 1986, Antoni Zygmund received the National Medal of Science, in part for his "creation and leadership of the strongest school of analytical research in the contemporary mathematical world.
Revised:  Awards In 1986, Antoni Zygmund received the National Medal of Science, in part for his "creation and leadership of the strongest school of analytical research in the contemporary mathematical world.
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Original:  On 7 February 2014, it was announced that Johann Muller would retire at the end of the URL
Revised:  On 7 February 2014, it was announced that Johann Muller would retire at the end of the season.
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Original: Han started composing xiangsheng plays since the 1970s, and he started studying the works of renowned xiangsheng artist Ma Ji . Han ’ s debut play was entitled "The gift ticket".
Revised: Han started composing xiangsheng plays since the 1970s, and he started studying the works of renowned xiangsheng artist Ma Ji . Han ' s debut play was entitled "The gift ticket".
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Original:  Stroke could occur at any age, including in childhold , the risk of stroke increases exponentially from 30 years of age, and the cause varies by age.
Revised:  Stroke could occur at any age, including in childhood , the risk of stroke increases exponentially from 30 years of age, and the cause varies by age.
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Original: File:Age Specific SEER Incidence Rates 2003-2007.svg|Age-Specific SEER Incidence Rates, 2003–2007]] An aging-associated disease (commonly term age-related disease, ARD) is a disease that is most often seen with increasing frequency with increasing senescence.
Revised: File:Age Specific SEER Incidence Rates 2003-2007.svg|Age-Specific SEER Incidence Rates, 2003–2007]] An aging-associated disease (commonly termed age-related disease, ARD) is a disease that is most often seen with increasing frequency with increasing senescence.
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Original:  The phrase was also popularized by Buckminster Fuller, who published a book in 1968 under the title of Operating Manual for Spaceship Earth.
Revised:  The phrase was also popularized by Buckminster Fuller, who authored the 1968 under the title of Operating Manual for Spaceship Earth.
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Original:  The phrase was also popularized by Buckminster Fuller, who published a book in 1968 under the title of Operating Manual for Spaceship Earth.
Revised:  The phrase was also popularized by Buckminster Fuller, who published a book in 1968 book Operating Manual for Spaceship Earth.
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Original:  This quotation, referring to fossil fuels, reflects his approach: ... we can make all of humanity successful through science's world-engulfing Industrial Evolution provided that we are not so foolish as to continue to exhaust in a split second of astronomical history the orderly energy savings of billions of years' energy conservation aboard our Spaceship Earth.
Revised:  This quotation, referring to fossil fuels, reflects his approach: ... we can make all of humanity successful through science's world-engulfing industrial evolution provided that we are not so foolish as to continue to exhaust in a split second of astronomical history the orderly energy savings of billions of years' energy conservation aboard our Spaceship Earth.
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Original: Also in 1966, Kenneth E. Boulding, who was influenced by reading Henry George  ,King, J. E. "Economic Exiles".
Revised: In 1966, Kenneth E. Boulding, who was influenced by reading Henry George ,King, J. E. "Economic Exiles".
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Original: Also in 1966, Kenneth E. Boulding, who was influenced by reading Henry George  ,King, J. E. "Economic Exiles".
Revised: Also in 1966, Kenneth E. Boulding, who was influenced by reading Henry George 's work ,King, J. E. "Economic Exiles".
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Original:  Palgrave Macmillan, 2014 used the phrase in the title of an essay, The Economics of the Coming Spaceship Earth.
Revised:  Palgrave Macmillan, 2014 used the phrase in the title of his essay, The Economics of the Coming Spaceship Earth.
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Original:  ( David Korten would take up the "cowboys in a spaceship" theme  in his 1995 book When Corporations Rule the World.)
Revised:  ( This "cowboys in a spaceship" theme in his 1995 book When Corporations Rule the World.)
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Original: History The earliest known use  is a passage in Henry George's best known work, Progress and PovertyThe text on wikisource differs from versions available here and here . (1879).
Revised: History The earliest known use of the term is a passage in Henry George's best known work, Progress and PovertyThe text on wikisource differs from versions available here and here . (1879).
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Original:  In french they are called binocles or binocles-ciseaux and the french scissor glasses are more delicate, ornate, and more of a fashion accessory than those made in other parts of Europe.
Revised:  In French they are called binocles or binocles-ciseaux and the french scissor glasses are more delicate, ornate, and more of a fashion accessory than those made in other parts of Europe.
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Original:  In french they are called binocles or binocles-ciseaux and the french scissor glasses are more delicate, ornate, and more of a fashion accessory than those made in other parts of Europe.
Revised:  In french they are called binocles or binocles-ciseaux and the French scissor glasses are more delicate, ornate, and more of a fashion accessory than those made in other parts of Europe.
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Original: The invention of scissors-glasses solved the problem of the single lens ( ie a"quizzing glass", thought to be tiresome to the eye), by providing two lenses on a "Y" shaped frame.
Revised: The invention of scissors-glasses solved the problem of the single lens ( i.e., a"quizzing glass", thought to be tiresome to the eye), by providing two lenses on a "Y" shaped frame.
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Original: The invention of scissors-glasses solved the problem of the single lens (i.e., a "quizzing glass", thought to be tiresome to the eye ) , by providing two lenses on a "Y" shaped frame.
Revised: The invention of scissors-glasses solved the problem of the single lens (i.e., a "quizzing glass", thought to be tiresome to the eye , by providing two lenses on a "Y" shaped frame.
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Original:  These conditions are commonly associated with Mediterranean climate and reside mainly in the Central Valley of these regions . Vernal pool basins are often characteristics of Mediterranean climates.
Revised:  These conditions are commonly associated with Mediterranean climates . Vernal pool basins are often characteristics of Mediterranean climates.
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Original:  Therefore, venal pools are a distinctive habitat that provides a refuge from both terrestrial and fully aquatic plants.
Revised:  Therefore, vernal pools are a distinctive habitat that provides a refuge from both terrestrial and fully aquatic plants.
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Original: The name The method at first was called the "drought preparedness study method" but was renamed "Shared Vision Planning" at the suggestion of the late Brian Mar, a University of Washington colleague of Palmer who had heard the name applied to systems design at nearby Boeing Aerospace.
Revised: Name The method at first was called the "drought preparedness study method" but was renamed "Shared Vision Planning" at the suggestion of the late Brian Mar, a University of Washington colleague of Palmer who had heard the name applied to systems design at nearby Boeing Aerospace.
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Original: Three Basic Elements Each of the three elements in shared vision planning has an evolutionary history leading to it.
Revised: Three basic elements Each of the three elements in shared vision planning has an evolutionary history leading to it.
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Original:  Other Case Studies Shared vision planning was used in five test studies during the National Drought Study;
Revised:  Other case studies Shared vision planning was used in five test studies during the National Drought Study;
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Original:  Prospects for Wider Use The use of the methods underlying shared vision planning is now more widespread than the name itself.
Revised:  Prospects for wider use The use of the methods underlying shared vision planning is now more widespread than the name itself.
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