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Original:  The bill, which is now law, would mean that state funerals are approved for people who have performed Canadian military service.
Revised:  The bill, which is now law, would mean that state funerals are approved for people who have 
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Original:  Jack Layton, NDP Leader said a state funeral would be the proper way to "thank them for their service the way we should for everyone who is willing to serve our country.
Revised:  served our country.
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Original:  " Rudyard Griffiths, Dominion Institute's director, said "We want to thank the tens of thousands of Canadians who signed our petition in support of state funeral .
Revised:  Rudyard Griffiths, Dominion Institute's director, said "We want to thank the tens of thousands of Canadians who signed our petition in support of state funeral .
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Original:  " Rudyard Griffiths, Dominion Institute's director, said "We want to thank the tens of thousands of Canadians who signed our petition in support of state funeral .
Revised:  " "We want to thank the tens of thousands of Canadians who signed our petition in support of state funeral .
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Original:  " Rudyard Griffiths, Dominion Institute's director, said "We want to thank the tens of thousands of Canadians who signed our petition in support of state funeral .
Revised:  " Rudyard Griffiths, Dominion Institute's director, said "We want to thank the tens of thousands of Canadians who signed our petition in support of state funeral ,
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Original:  Australia  held a state funeral for the final veteran of the Battle of Gallipoli.
Revised:  Australia , also held a state funeral for the final veteran of the Battle of Gallipoli.
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Original:  And Australia offered a state funeral to the family of Steve Irwin in September 2006, they declined . Canada is the fourth nation to have state funerals honoring the last veterans of any war   .
Revised:  A State Funeral was offered for Steve Irwin in September 2006, they declined . Canada is the fourth nation to have state funerals honoring the last veterans of any war .
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Original:  And Australia offered a state funeral to the family of Steve Irwin in September 2006, they declined . Canada is the fourth nation to have state funerals honoring the last veterans of any war   .
Revised:  And Australia offered a state funeral to the family of Steve Irwin in September 2006, but the offer was declined by his family's wishes. Canada is the fourth nation to have state funerals honoring the last veterans of any war .
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Original:  And Australia offered a state funeral to the family of Steve Irwin in September 2006, they declined . Canada is the fourth nation to have state funerals honoring the last veterans of any war   .
Revised:  And Australia offered a state funeral to the family of Steve Irwin in September 2006, they declined . Canada is the fourth country to have a funeral honoring the last veterans of any war .
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Original:  And Australia offered a state funeral to the family of Steve Irwin in September 2006, they declined . Canada is the fourth nation to have state funerals honoring the last veterans of any war   .
Revised:  And Australia offered a state funeral to the family of Steve Irwin in September 2006, they declined . Canada is the fourth nation to have state funerals honoring the last war veteran that served in any war. .
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Original:  This bill, which is now in affect in Canada, means that state funerals are not only for prime ministers but for people who have served our country.
Revised:  This bill, which is now in affect in Canada, means that state funerals are not only for prime ministers but for people who have served the country.
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Original:  Dr Brash, however, wants the people who he sent and received the emails are not named.
Revised:  Dr Brash, however, wants the people who he sent emails and received emails from not named.
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Original: The   1999 and 2000 year model Honda Civic SiR tops the list of Canada's most stolen cars.
Revised: The The 1999 and 2000 year model Honda Civic SiR tops the list of Canada's most stolen cars.
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Original: The 1999 and 2000 year model Honda Civic SiR tops the list of Canada's  most stolen cars.
Revised: The 1999 and 2000 year model Honda Civic SiR tops the list of Canada's list of most stolen cars.
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Original:  The American 1996 Chevrolet/GMC Blazer rounded out the top ten  
Revised:  The American 1996 Chevrolet/GMC Blazer rounded out the top ten . 
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Original:  Immobilizers will be mandatory on all new cars sold beginning fall 2007.
Revised:  Immobilizers will be mandatory on all new cars sold beginning September 2007.
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Original:  It occurred during her first night, and in the San Telmo neighborhood.
Revised:  It occurred during her first night, in the San Telmo neighborhood.
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Original: 200px|Argentina's location During Barbara Bush's two week trip in Argentina , two incidents have occurred.
Revised: 200px|Argentina's location Two unexpected incidents occurred during a two-week trip in Argentina , two incidents have occurred.
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Original:  It occurred during her first night  , in the San Telmo neighborhood.
Revised:  It occurred during her first night there , in the San Telmo neighborhood.
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Original:  Also, a Secret Service agent got into an "altercation" with someone during a night out, during his down time.
Revised:  Also, a Secret Service agent got into an "altercation" with someone during a night out, on his down time.
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Original: Also, a Secret Service agent got into an "altercation" with someone during a night out, on his down time.
Revised: A Secret Service agent got into an "altercation" with someone during a night out, on his down time.
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Original:  Unnamed law enforcement officials told news agencies that the 24-year old Barbara Bush was "not in the immediate proximity" of her purse when it was stolen.
Revised:  Unnamed law enforcement officials told news agencies that the 24-year old Miss Bush was "not in the immediate proximity" of her purse when it was stolen.
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Original: Miss Bush was having dinner in the Sal Telmo neighborhood of Buenos Aires during her first night there when the incident occurred.
Revised: Miss Bush was having dinner in the San Telmo neighborhood of Buenos Aires during her first night there when the incident occurred.
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Original: French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a combined TODO ferroviaire high-speed courier service.
Revised: French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
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Original:  TODO de plus en plus âpre The agreement defies the dictat of the European Commission.
Revised:  La Poste's return to rail was prompted by rulings of the European Commission.
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Original:  French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
Revised: 200px|thumbs 200px|thumbs French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
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Original: 200px| thumbs 200px|thumbs French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
Revised:  thumbs 200px|thumbs French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
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Original: thumbs 200px|thumbs French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
Revised: The French postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
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Original: thumbs 200px|thumbs French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the state rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
Revised: thumbs 200px|thumbs French state postal service La Poste has reached agreement with SNCF, the national rail company, to create a joint rail-based high-speed courier service.
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Original:  In She promotes the 4-Rs — Reduce, Recycle, Re-use, Repair — and encourages the use of locally-made cotton or sisal bags.
Revised:  She promotes the 4-Rs — Reduce, Recycle, Re-use, Repair — and encourages the use of locally-made cotton or sisal bags.
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Original: But on the other hand, the bags have gotten so thin as to be barely reusable and recycleable : grocers will frequently double-bag heavy produce, and the bag weighs to little that a great number of bags have to be collected to create an effectively recycled mass of plastic.
Revised: But on the other hand, the bags have gotten so thin as to be barely reusable and recyclable : grocers will frequently double-bag heavy produce, and the bag weighs to little that a great number of bags have to be collected to create an effectively recycled mass of plastic.
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Original:  According to 2004 Nobel Peace Prize winner, Kenyan Professor Wangari Mathaai, discarded bags fill up with rainwater and become perfect breeding grounds for malaria-bearing mosquitos .
Revised:  According to 2004 Nobel Peace Prize winner, Kenyan Professor Wangari Mathaai, discarded bags fill up with rainwater and become perfect breeding grounds for malaria-bearing mosquitoes .
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Original:  Malaria is Africa's most deadly infectuous disease in children, and over 50\% of all hospital visits in some areas are malaria-related.
Revised:  Malaria is Africa's most deadly infectious disease in children, and over 50\% of all hospital visits in some areas are malaria-related.
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Original:  Social costs of plastic litter add up as well: countries lacking comprehensive waste management often sprout underground economies of ragpickers — typically children who wander refuse heaps and collect potentially recycleable materials for sale to shady businessmen operating from official dump sites.
Revised:  Social costs of plastic litter add up as well: countries lacking comprehensive waste management often sprout underground economies of ragpickers — typically children who wander refuse heaps and collect potentially recyclable materials for sale to shady businessmen operating from official dump sites.
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Original: Plastic bag pollution has been a contentuous issue with the people of Kenya for a number of years.
Revised: Plastic bag pollution has been a contentious issue with the people of Kenya for a number of years.
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Original:  It evaluated the state of waste management in the country with particular attention to plastic bag pollution, and recommended that bags less than 30 microns in thickness be banned, a levy be placed on suppliers of thicker bags, and a number of programs be developed to encourage people in the country to not litter, recycle, and use alternative or reusable bags for their shopping needs  .
Revised:  It evaluated the state of waste management in the country with particular attention to plastic bag pollution, and recommended that bags less than 30 microns in thickness be banned, a levy be placed on suppliers of thicker bags, and a number of programs be developed to encourage people in the country to not litter, but to recycle and use alternative or reusable bags for their shopping needs .
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Original:  It evaluated the state of waste management in the country with particular attention to plastic bag pollution, and recommended that bags less than 30 microns in thickness be banned, a levy be placed on suppliers of thicker bags, and a number of programs be developed to encourage people in the country to not litter, recycle, and use alternative or reusable bags for their shopping needs  .
Revised:  It evaluated the state of waste management in the country with particular attention to plastic bag pollution, and recommended that bags less than 30 microns in thickness be banned, a levy be placed on suppliers of thicker bags, and a number of programs be developed to encourage people in the country to not litter, recycle, and use alternative or reusable bags for their shopping needs instead .
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Original:  But on the other hand, the bags have gotten so thin as to be barely reusable and recyclable: grocers will frequently double-bag heavy produce, and the bag weighs to little that a great number of bags have to be collected to create an effectively recycled mass of plastic.
Revised:  But on the other hand, the bags have gotten so thin as to be barely reusable and recyclable: grocers will frequently double-bag heavy produce, and the bag weighs so little that a great number of bags have to be collected to create an effectively recycled mass of plastic.
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Original:  The light-weight bags are easily picked up by wind, and end up escaping open trash bins or refuse heaps.
Revised:  The light-weight bags are easily picked up by wind, and end up escaping open trash bins and refuse heaps.
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Original:  By littering the landscape, plastic bags are a choking hazard for cattle;
Revised:  By littering the landscape, plastic bags become a choking hazard for cattle;
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Original: The ubiquitous plastic bag They are cheap, useful, and very plentiful, and that is exactly the problem, according to researchers.
Revised:  They are cheap, useful, and very plentiful, and that is exactly the problem, according to researchers.
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Original:  The new report was a result of work by Kenyan government, the United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP)  and the Kenya Institute for Public Policy Research and Analysis.
Revised:  The new report was a result of work by Kenyan government, the United Nations Environment Programme (UNEP) , and the Kenya Institute for Public Policy Research and Analysis.
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Original:  The Society of the Plastics Industry (SPI) in the United States quotes the University of Arizona Garbage Project 's report that plastics are getting more compact and take up less space in landfills.
Revised:  The Society of the Plastics Industry (SPI) in the United States quotes the 's report that plastics are getting more compact and take up less space in landfills.
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Original:  In Bangladesh , plastic bags were banned after they were blamed for blocking storm drains and causing flooding.
Revised:  In , plastic bags were banned after they were blamed for blocking storm drains and causing flooding.
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Original:  Malaria is Africa's most deadly infectious disease in children, and over 50\% of all hospital visits in some areas are malaria-related.
Revised:  is Africa's most deadly infectious disease in children, and over 50\% of all hospital visits in some areas are malaria-related.
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Original:  The bag manufacturer association in the United States — the Film and Bag Federation — appears aware of environmental issues surrounding their products.
Revised:  The bag manufacturer association in the — the Film and Bag Federation — appears aware of environmental issues surrounding their products.
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Original:  She said that members of the association — companies in the United States and Canada — are investing millions of dollars into "bag to bag" recycling programs, which use material from recycled plastic bags to create new plastic bags, as well as programs that buy back recycled bags and turn them into plastic decking.
Revised:  She said that members of the association — companies in the United States and — are investing millions of dollars into "bag to bag" recycling programs, which use material from recycled plastic bags to create new plastic bags, as well as programs that buy back recycled bags and turn them into plastic decking.
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Original:  Dave Jones from Nairobi believes that the way to control pollution is to have clear policies on land ownership: "No single land owner would allow his property to be polluted by others" he writes in a letter to Kenya's daily newspaper, the Daily Nation.
Revised:  Dave Jones from believes that the way to control pollution is to have clear policies on land ownership: "No single land owner would allow his property to be polluted by others" he writes in a letter to Kenya's daily newspaper, the Daily Nation.
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Original:  In South Africa after the bag regulations were implemented negative reactions included concerns that the poor already re-used the flimsy bags as source materials in producing home-made items such as hats or purses — occupations made impossible by the ban
Revised:  In after the bag regulations were implemented negative reactions included concerns that the poor already re-used the flimsy bags as source materials in producing home-made items such as hats or purses — occupations made impossible by the ban
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Original:  Both the houses, Lok Sabha (Lower House) and Rajya Sabha (Upper House), were adjourned after paying obituaries to BSP leader Kanshi Ram and other four former MPs today in the morning .
Revised:  Both the houses, Lok Sabha (Lower House) and Rajya Sabha (Upper House), were adjourned after paying obituaries to BSP leader Kanshi Ram and four other former MPs .
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Original:  The Rajya Sabha was adjourned without transacting any business today as a mark ofrespect to Lalit Suri, a sitting member of Rajya Sabha who passed away on October 10, 2006.
Revised:  The Rajya Sabha was adjourned without transacting any business today as a mark of respect to Lalit Suri, a sitting member of Rajya Sabha who passed away on October 10, 2006.
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Original:  Six newly elected members took oath including BJP leader Shahnawaj Hussain, newly elected Lok Sabha member from Bhagalpur constituency, and Narahari Mahato from Purulia constituency  .
Revised:  Six newly elected members , including BJP leader Shahnawaj Hussain, newly elected Lok Sabha member from Bhagalpur constituency, and Narahari Mahato from Purulia constituency .
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Original:  Six newly elected members took oath including BJP leader Shahnawaj Hussain, newly elected Lok Sabha member from Bhagalpur constituency, and Narahari Mahato from Purulia constituency  .
Revised:  Six newly elected members took oath including BJP leader Shahnawaj Hussain, newly elected Lok Sabha member from Bhagalpur constituency, and Narahari Mahato from Purulia constituency , took their oaths of office .
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Original:  Three new members of the Union Council of Ministers were intoduced in the Lok Sabha.
Revised:  Three new members of the Union Council of Ministers were introduced in the Lok Sabha.
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Original: Nine people are confirmed dead in a fire in a leather bag facory in Kolkata's South 24 Pargana district in Topsia area.
Revised: Nine people are confirmed dead in a fire in a leather bag factory in Kolkata's South 24 Pargana district in Topsia area.
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Original:  Eighteen people were seriously injured and admitted to  National Medical College and Hospital.
Revised:  Eighteen people were seriously injured and admitted to the National Medical College and Hospital.
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Original:  Inspector General of Police (Law and Order) Raj Kanojia said that the fire was broken out at about 3 am when the victims were inside the factory and all the doors were closed.
Revised:  Inspector General of Police (Law and Order) Raj Kanojia said that the fire broke out at about 3 am when the victims were inside the factory and all the doors were closed.
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Original:  At the time of fire, all the premises were closed and workers could not come out from the factory.
Revised:  At the time of fire, all the exits were shut and workers could not come out from the factory.
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Original:  The cause of the fire was yet to be ascertained.
Revised:  The cause of the fire is yet to be ascertained.
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Original:  Kolkata Mayor Bikash Ranjan Bhattacharya predicted short circuit or an unattended cigarette causing fire in the factory .
Revised:  Kolkata Mayor Bikash Ranjan Bhattacharya suggested that a short circuit or an unattended cigarette causing fire in the factory .
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Original:  Kolkata Mayor Bikash Ranjan Bhattacharya predicted short circuit or an unattended cigarette causing fire in the factory .
Revised:  Kolkata Mayor Bikash Ranjan Bhattacharya predicted short circuit or an unattended cigarette may have caused the fire .
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Original:  The power held by Orthodox leaders in Israel with regard to marriage has been a point of contention in the country with Conservative and Reform sects for years indicating that while from a legal standpoint this latest ruling may be small, it may have far wider ramification in many related areas  
Revised:  The power held by Orthodox leaders in Israel with regard to marriage has been a point of contention in the country with Conservative and Reform sects for years indicating that while from a legal standpoint this latest ruling may be small, it may have far wider ramification in many related areas . 
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Original: This makes Israel the first middle-eastern nation to recognize any form of same-sex union, and only the fourth nation in the world to officially recognize same-sex marriages.
Revised: Israel is the first middle-eastern nation to recognize any form of same-sex union, and only the fourth nation in the world to officially recognize same-sex marriages.
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Original:  Miners were missing more than 3,000 feet underground, then withdrew because methane gas levels were too high . ABC Ne
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Original:  Miners were missing more than 3,000 feet underground, then withdrew because methane gas levels were too high . ABC Ne
Revised:  Miners were missing more than 3,000 feet underground, then withdrew because methane gas levels were too high . 
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Original:  Miners were missing more than 3,000 feet underground, then withdrew because methane gas levels were too high   
Revised:  Miners were missing more than 3,000 feet underground, then withdrew because methane gas levels were too high . 
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Original: Eight Polish coal miners were killed by a methane explosion on Tuesday (21th November) in The Halemba mine in Ruda Slaska, 15 miners are still missing.
Revised: Eight Polish coal miners were killed by a methane explosion on Tuesday (21th November) at the Halemba mine in Ruda Slaska, 15 miners are still missing.
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Original: Eight Polishcoal miners were killed by a methane explosion on Tuesday(21th November ) at the Halemba mine in Ruda Slaska, 15 miners are still missing.
Revised: Methane gas was blamed for the explosion deaths of 8 miners in southern Polish's Halemba coal mine Tuesday, November 21. Officials say at least 15 miners are still missing.
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Original:  The principle of retaining a nuclear deterrent will be put to the vote in the House of Commons next year and, although it may split the Labout Party, is likely to be carried with the support of the Conservative opposition.
Revised:  The principle of retaining a nuclear deterrent will be put to the vote in the House of Commons next year and, although it may split the Labour Party, is likely to be carried with the support of the Conservative opposition.
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