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Original:  The method has been used in several case studies since, most recently in the International Joint Commission 's Lake Ontario-St.
Revised:  The method has been used in several case studies since, most recently in the International Joint Commission (IJC) studies of Lake Ontario-St.
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Original:  "Mediated Modeling" a term used by Marjan van den Belt, describes a systems based participatory modeling approach to environmental issues that is very similar to shared vision planning but has typically been used as a learning tool, especially for stakeholders who might otherwise be left out of public policy dialogues.
Revised:  "Mediated Modeling" describes a systems based participatory modeling approach to environmental issues that is very similar to shared vision planning but has typically been used as a learning tool, especially for stakeholders who might otherwise be left out of public policy dialogues.
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Original:  New Techniques for Relating Economic Objectives, Engineering Analysis, and Governmental Planning ” ) is the conceptual starting point for the first element, the planning method.
Revised:  New Techniques for Relating Economic Objectives, Engineering Analysis, and Governmental Planning " ) is the conceptual starting point for the first element, the planning method.
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Original:  The "Circles of Influence" method of public involvement was developed by Dr. Robert Waldman during the National Drought Study and modified traditional Federal approaches.
Revised:  The "Circles of Influence" method of public involvement was developed by Robert Waldman during the National Drought Study and modified traditional Federal approaches.
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Original:  Typically, Federal water studies would invite "stakeholders" - people whose lives could be affected by the decision to build a project - to public meetings.
Revised:  Typically, Federal water studies would invite stakeholders— people whose lives could be affected by the decision to build a project - to public meetings.
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Original:  Typically, Federal water studies would invite "stakeholders" - people whose lives could be affected by the decision to build a project - to public meetings.
Revised:  Typically, Federal water studies would invite "stakeholders" - people whose lives could be affected by the decision to build a project — to public meetings.
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Original:  Shared vision planning use was expanded beyond drought response planning immediately after the National Drought Study in the Alabama-Coosa-Tallapoosa - Apalachicola-Chattahoochee-Flint (ACT-ACF) Rivers conflict.
Revised:  Shared vision planning use was expanded beyond drought response planning immediately after the National Drought Study in the Alabama-Coosa-Tallapoosa — Apalachicola-Chattahoochee-Flint (ACT-ACF) Rivers conflict.
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Original:  Lawrence River Study (2000-2006) and the Upper Great Lakes (2007-2012).
Revised:  Lawrence River Study (2000-2006) and the Upper Great Lakes URL
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Original:  The International Environmental Modelling and Software Society (iEMSs), which Dr. Costanza co-founded, has as its goal the development and use of environmental modelling and software tools to advance the science and improve decision making with respect to resource and environmental issues.
Revised:  The International Environmental Modelling and Software Society (iEMSs), which Costanza co-founded, has as its goal the development and use of environmental modelling and software tools to advance the science and improve decision making with respect to resource and environmental issues.
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Original:  "Mediated Modeling " describes a systems based participatory modeling approach to environmental issues that is very similar to shared vision planning but has typically been used as a learning tool, especially for stakeholders who might otherwise be left out of public policy dialogues.
Revised:  "Mediated modeling " describes a systems based participatory modeling approach to environmental issues that is very similar to shared vision planning but has typically been used as a learning tool, especially for stakeholders who might otherwise be left out of public policy dialogues.
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Original:  The conferences were part of the Computer Aided Dispute Resolution or CADRe program.
Revised:  The conferences were part of the Computer Aided Dispute Resolution or CADRe URL
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Original:  More than ten years earlier, Palmer had been doing post-doctorate work from Johns Hopkins University at the Interstate Commission on the Potomac River Basin URL ICPRB was one of several government organizations developing reservoir projects to address water supply needs in the Washington Metropolitan area.
Revised:  More than ten years earlier, Palmer had been doing post-doctorate work from Johns Hopkins University at the Interstate Commission on the Potomac River Basin (ICPRB). ICPRB was one of several government organizations developing reservoir projects to address water supply needs in the Washington Metropolitan area.
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Original:  Peter Senge used the shared vision phrase in his 1990 book on systems analysis, " The Fifth Discipline " and this may have been where Boeing learned it.
Revised:  Peter Senge used the shared vision phrase in his 1990 book on systems analysis, The Fifth Discipline " and this may have been where Boeing learned it.
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Original:  Peter Senge used the shared vision phrase in his 1990 book on systems analysis, " The Fifth Discipline " and this may have been where Boeing learned it.
Revised:  Peter Senge used the shared vision phrase in his 1990 book on systems analysis, " The Fifth Discipline and this may have been where Boeing learned it.
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Original:  The method has been used in several case studies since, most recently in the International Joint Commission (IJC) studies of Lake Ontario-St . Lawrence River Study (2000–2006) and the Upper Great Lakes URL The method has also been applied in Peru in support of some World Bank and Interamerican Development Bank water projects.
Revised:  The method has been used in several case studies since, most recently in the International Joint Commission (IJC) studies of Lake Ontario–St . Lawrence River Study (2000–2006) and the Upper Great Lakes URL The method has also been applied in Peru in support of some World Bank and Interamerican Development Bank water projects.
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Original:  The conferences were part of the Computer Aided Dispute Resolution or CADRe URL Conference participants agreed that the basic methods of shared vision planning were slowly becoming part of the mainstream in water resources management but that the process could be accelerated if a common name and community identity could be applied to all the various permutations on the approach
Revised:  The conferences were part of the Computer Aided Dispute Resolution or CADRe program. Conference participants agreed that the basic methods of shared vision planning were slowly becoming part of the mainstream in water resources management but that the process could be accelerated if a common name and community identity could be applied to all the various permutations on the approach
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Original:   Shared vision planning has three basic elements: (1) an updated version of the systems approach to water resources management developed during the Harvard Water Program;
Revised:  Shared vision planning had three basic elements: (1) an updated version of the systems approach to water resources management developed during the Harvard Water Program;
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Original:  The method has been used in several case studies since, most recently in the International Joint Commission (IJC) studies of Lake Ontario–St.
Revised:  The method has been used in several case studies since, most recently by the International Joint Commission (IJC) studies of Lake Ontario–St.
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Original:  The method has been used in several case studies since, most recently in the International Joint Commission (IJC) studies of Lake Ontario–St.
Revised:  The method has been used in several case studies since, most recently in the International Joint Commission (IJC) in the Lake Ontario–St.
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Original:  Lawrence River Study (2000–2006) and the Upper Great Lakes (2007–2012).
Revised:  Lawrence River Study (2000–2006) , the Upper Great Lakes (2007–2012).
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Original:  In fact the internet has given a whole new lease of life to part exchange , by removing the biggest original obstacles – distance and difficulty of finding suitable partners and, more importantly a trusted regulator or medium with whom to conduct the exchange.
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Original:  Freecycle The Freecycle Network is similar to part exchange but differs in that there is no requirement for the recipient of a good to give anything in exchange.
Revised:  Car dealerships are one business sector where part exchange deals are common. The are less common in other sectors. In the recipient of a good to give anything in exchange.
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Original:  However, since recipients are often donors as well, exchanges may take place over a period of time.  
Revised:  The major accounting considerations are making provisions at year's end for part exchange stock that remains unsold, and for the predicted marketing costs of selling it. Footnotes 
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Original: __NOTOC__ A part exchange or part exchange deal is a type of contract , it has never been referred to as p x in the history of the motor trade .
Revised: __NOTOC__ A part exchange or part exchange deal is a type of contract .
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Original: Computer Space forum is one of the oldest computer art festivals, organized by  Student Computer Art Society (SCAS) in Sofia every year during the last 18 years.
Revised: Computer Space forum is one of the oldest computer art festivals, organized by the Student Computer Art Society (SCAS) in Sofia every year during the last 18 years.
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Original:  During the 1980s Bulgaria was specialized in producing microcomputers in the former communist block countries and Soviet Union was specialized in producing big machines and supercomputers.
Revised:  During the 1980s Bulgaria specialized in producing microcomputers in the former communist block countries and Soviet Union was specialized in producing big machines and supercomputers.
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Original:  During the 1980s Bulgaria was specialized in producing microcomputers in the former communist block countries and Soviet Union was specialized in producing big machines and supercomputers.
Revised:  During the 1980s Bulgaria was specialized in producing microcomputers in the former communist block countries and the Soviet Union specialized in producing big machines and supercomputers.
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Original:  The Eastern block countries had  so called Economic Inter-support Council and in the frame of that Council each country has been developing some economic area.
Revised:  The Eastern block countries had the so called Economic Inter-support Council and in the frame of that Council each country has been developing some economic area.
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Original:  External links Computer Space www site Some Computer Space photos and the official guests of the award ceremony The President of Republic of Bulgaria awarding the project in Society and I*stitution web category Computer Space 2007 in Designer Some discussions and opinions about Computer Space in the 3D computer graphics society 3DBG.
Revised:  External links Computer Space site Some Computer Space photos and the official guests of the award ceremony The President of Republic of Bulgaria awarding the project in Society and I*stitution web category Computer Space 2007 in Designer Some discussions and opinions about Computer Space in the 3D computer graphics society 3DBG.
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Original:  External links Computer Space www site Some Computer Space photos and the official guests of the award ceremony The President of Republic of Bulgaria awarding the project in Society and I*stitution web category Computer Space 2007 in Designer Some discussions and opinions about Computer Space in the 3D computer graphics society 3DBG.
Revised:  External links Computer Space www site Some Computer Space photos and the official guests of the award ceremony The President of Republic of Bulgaria awarding the project in Society and Institution web category Computer Space 2007 in Designer Some discussions and opinions about Computer Space in the 3D computer graphics society 3DBG.
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Original:  The Eastern block countries had the so called Economic Inter-support Council and in the frame of that Council each country has been developing some economic area.
Revised:  The Eastern block countries had the so-called Economic Inter-support Council and in the frame of that Council each country has been developing some economic area.
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Original: Computer Space forum is one of the oldest computer art festivals, organized by the Student Computer Art Society (SCAS) in Sofia every year during the last 18 years.
Revised: Computer Space forum is ayearly computer art festivals, organized by the Student Computer Art Society (SCAS) in Sofia every year during the last 18 years.
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Original:   An international non-commercial event and platform joining young artists, students and producers of computer graphics, computer animation, off-line multimedia, electronic music and web design.
Revised:  Description An international non-commercial event and platform joining young artists, students and producers of computer graphics, computer animation, off-line multimedia, electronic music and web design.
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Original:   Starting as an electronic music festival in 1989 Computer Space included graphics and animation sections next few years.
Revised:  History Starting as an electronic music festival in 1989 Computer Space included graphics and animation sections next few years.
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Original:  In the CS data-base with participating projects, during the years, a lot of well-known studios and artists could be noticed - Braam Jordaan (South Africa), Academy for Media and Art (Cologne), ZKM (Karlsruhe), IRCAM (Paris), Platige Studio (Poland), Studio Aka (UK), Miralab (Switzerland), Institute for Electroacoustic of Vienna University and many others.
Revised:  In the CS data-base with participating projects, during the years, a lot of well-known studios and artists could be noticed - Braam Jordaan (South Africa), Academy of Media Arts Cologne (Cologne), ZKM (Karlsruhe), IRCAM (Paris), Platige Studio (Poland), Studio Aka (UK), Miralab (Switzerland), Institute for Electroacoustic of Vienna University and many others.
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Original:  External links Computer Space site Some Computer Space photos and the official guests of the award ceremony The President of Republic of Bulgaria awarding the project in Society and Institution web category Computer Space 2007 in Designer Some   discussions and opinions about Computer Space in the 3D computer graphics society 3DBG.
Revised:  External links Computer Space site Some Computer Space photos and the official guests of the award ceremony The President of Republic of Bulgaria awarding the project in Society and Institution web category Computer Space 2007 in Designer Some References discussions and opinions about Computer Space in the 3D computer graphics society 3DBG.
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Original: COM UNESCO Young Digital Creators programme and Computer Space 24 hours newspaper, The Winners of Computer Space .
Revised: COM 24 hours newspaper, The Winners of Computer Space .
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Original: Computer Space forum is ayearly computer art festivals, organized by the Student Computer Art Society (SCAS) in Sofia, Bulgaria.
Revised: Computer Space forum is a yearly computer art festivals, organized by the Student Computer Art Society (SCAS) in Sofia, Bulgaria.
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Original: Computer Space forum is a yearly computer art festivals , organized by the Student Computer Art Society (SCAS) in Sofia, Bulgaria.
Revised: Computer Space forum is a yearly computer art festival , organized by the Student Computer Art Society (SCAS) in Sofia, Bulgaria.
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Original:  Web design has been one of the fast-growing sections last 7 years.
Revised:  Web design has been one of the fast-growing sections last years.
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Original: COM 24 hours newspaper, The Winners of Computer Space Web Design
Revised: COM The festival of the international computer art forum Computer Space joined world-famous names in the area, Trud newspaper, 2016
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Original: During the 1980s Bulgaria specialized in producing microcomputers in the former communist block countries and the Soviet Union specialized in producing big machines and supercomputers.
Revised: During the 1980s Bulgaria specialized in producing microcomputers in the former communist bloc countries and the Soviet Union specialized in producing big machines and supercomputers.
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Original:  The Eastern block countries had the so-called Economic Inter-support Council and in the frame of that Council each country has been developing some economic area.
Revised:  The Eastern bloc countries had the so-called Economic Inter-support Council and in the frame of that Council each country has been developing some economic area.
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Original:  The book portrays the political situation of Europe in the later Viking Age, Andalusia under Almanzor , Denmark under Harald Bluetooth, followed by the struggle between Eric the Victorious and Sweyn Forkbeard, Ireland under Brian Boru, England under Ethelred the Unready, and the Battle of Maldon, and then the Byzantine Empire and its Varangian Guard, Kievan Rus and its neighbors the Pechenegs -
Revised:  The book portrays the political situation of Europe in the later Viking Age, Andalusia under Almansur , Denmark under Harald Bluetooth, followed by the struggle between Eric the Victorious and Sweyn Forkbeard, Ireland under Brian Boru, England under Ethelred the Unready, and the Battle of Maldon, and then the Byzantine Empire and its Varangian Guard, Kievan Rus and its neighbors the Pechenegs -
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Original:  The book portrays the political situation of Europe in the later Viking Age, Andalusia under Almanzor , Denmark under Harald Bluetooth, followed by the struggle between Eric the Victorious and Sweyn Forkbeard, Ireland under Brian Boru, England under Ethelred the Unready, and the Battle of Maldon, and then the Byzantine Empire and its Varangian Guard, Kievan Rus and its neighbors the Pechenegs -
Revised:  The book portrays the political situation of Europe in the later Viking Age, Andalusia under Almanzor , Denmark under Harald Bluetooth, followed by the struggle between Eric the Victorious and Sven Forkbeard, Ireland under Brian Boru, England under Ethelred the Unready, and the Battle of Maldon, and then the Byzantine Empire and its Varangian Guard, Kievan Rus and its neighbors the Pechenegs -
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Original:  The book portrays the political situation of Europe in the later Viking Age, Andalusia under Almanzor , Denmark under Harald Bluetooth, followed by the struggle between Eric the Victorious and Sweyn Forkbeard, Ireland under Brian Boru, England under Ethelred the Unready, and the Battle of Maldon, and then the Byzantine Empire and its Varangian Guard, Kievan Rus and its neighbors the Pechenegs -
Revised:  The book portrays the political situation of Europe in the later Viking Age, Andalusia under Almanzor , Denmark under Harald Bluetooth, followed by the struggle between Eric the Victorious and Sweyn Forkbeard, Ireland under Brian Boru, England under Ethelred the Unready, and the Battle of Maldon, and then the Byzantine Empire and its Varangian Guard, Kievan Rus and its neighbors the Patzinaks -
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Original:  all before the backdrop of the gradual Christianisation of Scandinavia, contrasting the pragmatic Norse pagan outlook with the exclusiveness of Islam and Christianity.
Revised:  all before the backdrop of the gradual Christianization of Scandinavia, contrasting the pragmatic Norse pagan outlook with the exclusiveness of Islam and Christianity.
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Original:   Erin Masters: Two jester brothers (Felimid and Ferdiad) from Ireland.
Revised:  The Erin Masters: Two jester brothers (Felimid and Ferdiad) from Ireland.
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Original:  They fall captive to Andalusian Muslims and serve as galley slaves for more than two years, later becoming members of Almanzor 's bodyguard for four years  .
Revised:  They fall captive to Andalusian Muslims and serve as galley slaves for more than two years, later becoming members of Almansur 's bodyguard for four years .
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Original:  Asa : Orm's mother.
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Original:  English translations Red Orm, Barrows Mussey (trans.), C. Scribner's sons (1943).
Revised:  English translationsRed Orm, Barrows Mussey (trans.), C. Scribner's sons (1943).
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Original: The Long Ships  , Michael Meyer (trans.), Collins (1954), HarperCollins (1984), .
Revised: The Long Ships '' , Michael Meyer (trans.), Collins (1954), HarperCollins (1984), .
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Original: English translationsRed Orm, Barrows Mussey (trans.), C. Scribner's sons (1943).
Revised: English translations Red Orm, Barrows Mussey (trans.), C. Scribner's sons (1943).
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Original:  The Long Ships '' , Michael Meyer (trans.), Collins (1954), HarperCollins (1984), .
Revised:  The Long Ships , Michael Meyer (trans.), Collins (1954), HarperCollins (1984), .
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Original: Geographic targeting is a viable way for resources allocation, especially to alleviate poverty in a country.
Revised: Geographic targeting is a viable way for resource allocation, especially to alleviate poverty in a country.
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Original:  Nawar, Abdel-Hameed (2007) "From Marina to Kom-Ombo: A Note on Poverty in Egypt," Cairo University, manuscript, August See also: URL World Bank Poverty Line Not 
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Original:  Nawar, Abdel-Hameed (2007) "From Marina to Kom-Ombo: A Note on Poverty in Egypt," Cairo University, manuscript, August See also: URL World Bank Poverty Line Not 
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Original:  Nawar, Abdel-Hameed (2007) "From Marina to Kom-Ombo: A Note on Poverty in Egypt," Cairo University, manuscript, August World Bank Poverty Line
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Original: The Dhofar 378 meteorite is 47\% maskelynite by volume.
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Original: Maskelynite is a glassy phase found in some meteorites and meteorite impact craters.
Revised: Maskelynite is a glassy material found in some meteorites and meteorite impact craters.
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Original:  It was named after British geologist M.H.N. Story-Maskelyne   .
Revised:  It was named after British geologist M.H.N. Story-Maskelyne . .
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Original:  She held Indian and south Asian record in high jump between 1995 and 2012.
Revised:  She held the Indian and South Asian records in high jump between 1995 and 2012.
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