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Original:  Prevalence of Obesity Among Adults and Youth: United States, 2015–2016. NCHS Data Brief, 288, Center for Disease Control, 1 Nov. 2017, pp. 1–7, URL College With eating behaviors, such as missing meals throughout the day and engaging in potentially dangerous self-prescribed weight loss methods, combined with a diet consisting of foods high in sodium, cholesterol and saturated fats, college students ’ dietary habits can potentially negatively affect their current and future health.
Revised:  Prevalence of Obesity Among Adults and Youth: United States, 2015–2016. NCHS Data Brief, 288, Center for Disease Control, 1 Nov. 2017, pp. 1–7, URL College With eating behaviors, such as missing meals throughout the day and engaging in potentially dangerous self-prescribed weight loss methods, combined with a diet consisting of foods high in sodium, cholesterol and saturated fats, college students ' dietary habits can potentially negatively affect their current and future health.
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Original:  Current Issues Childhood obesity is a public health concern.
Revised:  Current issues Childhood obesity is a public health concern.
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Original:  Examples of technological innovations by private enterprise include fooya a mobile health App by FriendsLearn is designed for children, to improve their awareness about healthy eating, while reinforcing the role of physical activity on health.
Revised:  Examples of technological innovations by private enterprise fooya a mobile health App by FriendsLearn is designed for children, to improve their awareness about healthy eating, while reinforcing the role of physical activity on health.
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Original:  It has been shown to have positive health outcomes through underlying methods of Neuropsychology, Health Coaching and Cognitive Behavior Therapy , as observed during randomized and controlled clinical trials conducted by researchers at the Baylor College of Medicine Children's Nutrition Research Center Additional Publications 1.
Revised:  It has been shown to have positive health outcomes through underlying methods of neuropsychology, health coaching and cognitive behavior therapy , as observed during randomized and controlled clinical trials conducted by researchers at the Baylor College of Medicine Children's Nutrition Research Center Additional Publications 1.
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Original:  It has been shown to have positive health outcomes through underlying methods of Neuropsychology, Health Coaching and Cognitive Behavior Therapy , as observed during randomized and controlled clinical trials conducted by researchers at the Baylor College of Medicine Children's Nutrition Research Center Additional Publications 1.
Revised:  It has been shown to have positive health outcomes through underlying methods of Neuropsychology, Health Coaching and Cognitive Behavior Therapy , as observed during randomized and controlled clinical trials conducted by researchers at the Baylor College of Medicine Children's Nutrition Research Center Additional publications
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Original:  2. The Journal of School Health, the journal that provides information regarding the roles of schools, school personnel, and the environment in regards to the health development of young children.
Revised:  The Journal of School Health, the journal that provides information regarding the roles of schools, school personnel, and the environment in regards to the health development of young children.
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Original:  3. Nutrition Reviews is a journal that publishes new literature reviews on current topics such as clinical nutrition and nutrition policy
Revised:  Nutrition Reviews'' is a journal that publishes new literature reviews on current topics such as clinical nutrition and nutrition policy
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Original: Before 1830s, Shivrai was valued at 1/ 74th to 1/ 80th of a Rupee .
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Original: Before 1830s, Shivrai was valued at 1/ 74th to 1/ 80th of a Rupee .
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Original: Before 1830s, Shivrai was valued at 1/ 74th to 1/ 80th of a Rupee .
Revised: Before 1830s, Shivrai was valued at 1/ 74th to 1/ 80 of a rupee .
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Original:  There are 150 different types of Shivrai extant till date.
Revised:  There are 150 different types of shivrai extant till date.
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Original:  In 1885, the British government ordered all local revenue collectors (Mamlatdars) to collect all Shivrais and deposit them in treasury.
Revised:  In 1885, the British government ordered all local revenue collectors (Mamlatdars) to collect all shivrais and deposit them in treasury.
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Original:  The purpose of this was to bring the new pice, worth 1/ 64th of Rupee , in currency by eliminating this native rival.
Revised:  The purpose of this was to bring the new pice, worth 1/ 64 of rupee , in currency by eliminating this native rival.
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Original:  In 1890, Rev. Abbott collected and studied around 25,000 Shivrais .
Revised:  In 1890, Rev. Abbott collected and studied around 25,000 shivrais .
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Original:  The Shivrai remained in circulation till the end of the 19th century.
Revised:  The shivrai remained in circulation till the end of the 19th century.
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Original: Long-term aftermath Sectarianism and collapse  of state systems [[File:Months after an airstrike on a neighborhood populated by black Yemenis or "Muhamasheen" more than a hundred buildings still remain in rubble and survivors continue to search for any valuables -
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Original: Long-term aftermath o oo oo-jokjkljllkjkj Sectarianism and collapInsert non-formatted text herese of state systems [[File:Months after an airstrike on a neighborhood populated by black Yemenis or "Muhamasheen" more than a hundred buildings still remain in rubble and survivors continue to search for any valuables -
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Original: The Arab Spring () was a series of anti-government protests, uprisings, and armed rebellions that spread across much of the Arab world in the early 2010s.
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Original: The Arab Spring () was a series of anti-government protests, uprisings, and armed rebellions that spread across much of  Arab world in the early 2010s.
Revised: The Arab Spring () was a series of anti-government protests, uprisings, and armed rebellions that spread across much of the Arab world in the early 2010s.
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Original: In 2012, the authorities arrested 94 of the 133 journalists, government officials, judges, lawyers, teachers and student activists  were detained in secret detention facilities.
Revised: In 2012, the authorities arrested 94 of the 133 journalists, government officials, judges, lawyers, teachers and student activists , who were detained in secret detention facilities.
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Original:  Born within a family of humble means, the young Juan Antonio Sotillo initiates his military career in 1815 as a soldier in the Santa Ana cavalry squadron, under the orders of general José Tadeo Monagas.
Revised:  Born to a family of humble means, the young Juan Antonio Sotillo initiates his military career in 1815 as a soldier in the Santa Ana cavalry squadron, under the orders of general José Tadeo Monagas.
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Original:  Born within a family of humble means, the young Juan Antonio Sotillo initiates his military career in 1815 as a soldier in the Santa Ana cavalry squadron, under the orders of general José Tadeo Monagas.
Revised:  Born within a family of humble means, the young Juan Antonio Sotillo started his military career in 1815 as a soldier in the Santa Ana cavalry squadron, under the orders of general José Tadeo Monagas.
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Original:  On 27 September 1816, he participates , still under general Monagas' orders, in the battle of El Juncal, against  Spanish royalist general Francisco Tomás Morales.
Revised:  On 27 September 1816, he participated , still under general Monagas' orders, in the battle of El Juncal, against Spanish royalist general Francisco Tomás Morales.
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Original:  On 27 September 1816, he participates , still under general Monagas' orders, in the battle of El Juncal, against  Spanish royalist general Francisco Tomás Morales.
Revised:  On 27 September 1816, he participates , still under general Monagas' orders, in the battle of El Juncal, against the Spanish royalist general Francisco Tomás Morales.
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Original:  In 1824, Sotillo reaches the rank of general, after fighting in several important campaigns during Venezuela's emancipation war.
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Original:  Later, after the withdrawal of Spanish royalists from Venezuelan territory, he becomes an important military leader at the recently created Republic of Colombia.
Revised:  Later, after the withdrawal of Spanish royalists from Venezuelan territory, he became an important military leader at the recently created Republic of Colombia.
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Original:  Later, after the withdrawal of Spanish royalists from Venezuelan territory, he becomes an important military leader at the recently created Republic of Colombia.
Revised:  Later, after the withdrawal of Spanish royalists from Venezuelan territory, he becomes an important military leader in the recently created Republic of Colombia.
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Original:  Republican life After the failure of Gran Colombia, Venezuela becomes an independent Republic in 1830.
Revised:  Republican life After the failure of Gran Colombia, Venezuela became an independent Republic in 1830.
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Original:  In 1833, Sotillo becomes Commander of the Province of Barcelona, in eastern Venezuela.
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Original:  Then, in mid 1849, he accompanies general José Laurencio Silva in the Campaign of Guárico, against a revolt headed by general José Antonio Páez.
Revised:  Then, in mid 1849, he accompanied general José Laurencio Silva in the Campaign of Guárico, against a revolt headed by general José Antonio Páez.
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Original:  Always close to the Monagas family clan, Sotillo is named second head of the army during the presidency of José Gregorio Monagas, brother of his compadre and former commander general José Tadeo Monagas.
Revised:  Always close to the Monagas family clan, Sotillo was named second head of the army during the presidency of José Gregorio Monagas, brother of his compadre and former commander general José Tadeo Monagas.
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Original:  Later, in May, 1853, he is called on to fight an attempt to overthrow the government of José Gregorio Monagas.
Revised:  Later, in May, 1853, he was called on to fight an attempt to overthrow the government of José Gregorio Monagas.
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Original:  Despite his efforts, Monagas government falls in 1858 and he is forced to exile afterwards.
Revised:  Despite his efforts, the Monagas government fell in 1858 and he is forced to exile afterwards.
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Original:  Despite his efforts, Monagas government falls in 1858 and he is forced to exile afterwards.
Revised:  Despite his efforts, Monagas government falls in 1858 and he was forced into exile afterwards.
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Original:  From the island of Trinidad, he attempts to organize, without success, an expedition against Venezuela.
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Original:  In 1859, he joins the Federal cause, taking up arms along with his two children, Miguel Sotillo and José Antonio Sotillo, with whom he commands the campaigns of El Banco de Los Pozos (18 March 1859) and Las Piedras (16 April 1859) --where they are defeated by the troops of general José Maria Zamora.
Revised:  In 1859, he joined the Federal cause, taking up arms along with his two children, Miguel Sotillo and José Antonio Sotillo, with whom he commands the campaigns of El Banco de Los Pozos (18 March 1859) and Las Piedras (16 April 1859) --where they are defeated by the troops of general José Maria Zamora.
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Original:  In 1859, he joins the Federal cause, taking up arms along with his two children, Miguel Sotillo and José Antonio Sotillo, with whom he commands the campaigns of El Banco de Los Pozos (18 March 1859) and Las Piedras (16 April 1859) --where they are defeated by the troops of general José Maria Zamora.
Revised:  In 1859, he joins the Federal cause, taking up arms along with his two children, Miguel Sotillo and José Antonio Sotillo, with whom he commanded the campaigns of El Banco de Los Pozos (18 March 1859) and Las Piedras (16 April 1859) --where they are defeated by the troops of general José Maria Zamora.
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Original:  In 1859, he joins the Federal cause, taking up arms along with his two children, Miguel Sotillo and José Antonio Sotillo, with whom he commands the campaigns of El Banco de Los Pozos (18 March 1859) and Las Piedras (16 April 1859) --where they are defeated by the troops of general José Maria Zamora.
Revised:  In 1859, he joins the Federal cause, taking up arms along with his two children, Miguel Sotillo and José Antonio Sotillo, with whom he commands the campaigns of El Banco de Los Pozos (18 March 1859) and Las Piedras (16 April 1859) , where they were defeated by the troops of general José Maria Zamora.
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Original:  Federal war In July 1859, Sotillo starts guerrilla warfare in the mountains of El Tigre.
Revised:  Federal war In July 1859, Sotillo started guerrilla warfare in the mountains of El Tigre.
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Original:  At this point, his prestige is worth his appointment as Second Commander of the Venezuelan Federal War.
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Original:  On 18 November 1859, he fights in El Pao of Barcelona, marching thereafter towards El Baúl along with Julio César Monagas, in January, 1860.
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Original:  On 18 November 1859, he fights in El Pao of Barcelona, marching thereafter towards El Baúl along with Julio César Monagas, in January, 1860.
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Original:  In El Baúl, generals Sotillo and Julio César Monagas meet with general Juan Crisóstomo Falcón and the Federal armies of the West.
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Original:  On 17 February 1860, he participates in the battle of Coplé, taking control simultaneously of the Eastern column, when general Falcón dissolves a division of the Federal Army as a consequence of the defeat suffered in that battle against general León de Febres Cordero.
Revised:  On 17 February 1860, he participated in the battle of Coplé, taking control simultaneously of the Eastern column, when general Falcón dissolves a division of the Federal Army as a consequence of the defeat suffered in that battle against general León de Febres Cordero.
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Original:  On 17 February 1860, he participates in the battle of Coplé, taking control simultaneously of the Eastern column, when general Falcón dissolves a division of the Federal Army as a consequence of the defeat suffered in that battle against general León de Febres Cordero.
Revised:  On 17 February 1860, he participates in the battle of Coplé, taking control simultaneously of the Eastern column, when general Falcón dissolved a division of the Federal Army as a consequence of the defeat suffered in that battle against general León de Febres Cordero.
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Original:  Earlier that month, on 2 February 1860, general Sotillo's son, José Antonio Sotillo, dies under enemy fire from centralist colonel José López Mercado at El Lecherito.
Revised:  Earlier that month, on 2 February 1860, general Sotillo's son, José Antonio Sotillo, died under enemy fire from centralist colonel José López Mercado at El Lecherito.
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Original:  As a consequence of it , his other son, Miguel Sotillo, decides to execute all their prisoners in retaliation.
Revised:  As a consequence of this , his other son, Miguel Sotillo, decides to execute all their prisoners in retaliation.
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Original:  As a consequence of it , his other son, Miguel Sotillo, decides to execute all their prisoners in retaliation.
Revised:  As a consequence of it , his other son, Miguel Sotillo, decided to execute all their prisoners in retaliation.
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Original:  However, Sotillo prevents his son from accomplishing this scheme, an outstanding gesture that has always been recognized by Venezuelan historians.
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Original:  However, Sotillo prevents his son from accomplishing this scheme, an outstanding gesture that has always been recognized by Venezuelan historians.
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Original:  Later, when arriving in eastern Venezuela, he establishes a guerrilla operation, from March to May, 1860.
Revised:  Later, when arriving in eastern Venezuela, he established a guerrilla operation, from March to May, 1860.
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Original:  Unfortunately, he is defeated in three occasions, the first in El Lecherito in July, 1860;
Revised:  Unfortunately, he was defeated on three occasions, the first in El Lecherito in July, 1860;
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Original:  After these defeats, on 29 March 1860, Sotillo reunites his forces with those of general Julio César Monagas, son of his friend general José Gregorio Monagas.
Revised:  After these defeats, on 29 March 1860, Sotillo reunited his forces with those of general Julio César Monagas, son of his friend general José Gregorio Monagas.
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Original:  Months thereafter, Sotillo and Monagas fight together in the territory of La Mesa de Guanipa in April, 1861.
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Original:  That same year, in October, he signs a short truce, well-known under the name of the Treaty of Santa Ana, with general José Maria Zamora's forces.
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Original:  However, Sotillo takes up his arms to fight in the battle of Las Chaguaramas, on 3 April 1862, where he is once more defeated and his son Miguel is mortally wounded.
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Original:  However, Sotillo takes up his arms to fight in the battle of Las Chaguaramas, on 3 April 1862, where he is once more defeated and his son Miguel is mortally wounded.
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Original:  However, Sotillo takes up his arms to fight in the battle of Las Chaguaramas, on 3 April 1862, where he is once more defeated and his son Miguel is mortally wounded.
Revised:  However, Sotillo takes up his arms to fight in the battle of Las Chaguaramas, on 3 April 1862, where he is once more defeated and his son Miguel was mortally wounded.
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Original:  Julio César Monagas will also die in May that same year as a consequence of his injuries from the Battle of Cureña (11 April 1861).
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Original:  After the military triumph of the Federación on 8 April 1862, Sotillo retires to Barcelona where he receives a modest allowance for his military services.
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Original:  After the military triumph of the Federación on 8 April 1862, Sotillo retires to Barcelona where he receives a modest allowance for his military services.
Revised:  After the military triumph of the Federación on 8 April 1862, Sotillo retires to Barcelona where he received a modest allowance for his military services.
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Original:  Last years In 4 March 1868, general Sotillo takes up his arms for the last time against the government of general Juan Crisóstomo Falcón, during the Blue Revolution.
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Original:  Again, he is called on by his former commander and compadre general José Tadeo Monagas.
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Original:  In December 1868, José Tadeo Monagas dies and Sotillo is named head of the Armies of The Blue Government.
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Original:  In January, 1869, he decides to support the presidential candidacy of José Ruperto Monagas, son of his compadre the late general Jose Tadeo Monagas.
Revised:  In January, 1869, he decided to support the presidential candidacy of José Ruperto Monagas, son of his compadre the late general Jose Tadeo Monagas.
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Original:  Being then an octogenary , general Sotillo retires from public life after the arrival of general Antonio Guzmán Blanco to power in April, 1870.
Revised:  Being then an octogenarian , general Sotillo retires from public life after the arrival of general Antonio Guzmán Blanco to power in April, 1870.
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