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Original:  British contact and recognition of the Miskitu Kingdom Although the earliest accounts do not mention it, a political entity of uncertain organization, but probably not very stratified, which the English called the "Mosquito Kingdom" was present on the coast in the early sixteenth century.
Revised:  British contact and recognition of the Mosquito Kingdom Although the earliest accounts do not mention it, a political entity of uncertain organization, but probably not very stratified, which the English called the "Mosquito Kingdom" was present on the coast in the early sixteenth century.
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Original:  British contact and recognition of the Miskitu Kingdom Although the earliest accounts do not mention it, a political entity of uncertain organization, but probably not very stratified, which the English called the "Mosquito Kingdom" was present on the coast in the early sixteenth century.
Revised:  British contact and recognition of the Miskitu Kingdom Although the earliest accounts do not mention it, a political entity of uncertain organization, but probably not very stratified, which the English called the "Mosquito Kingdom" was present on the coast in the early seventeenth century.
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Original:  Providence Island, the company's main base and settlement, entered into regular correspondence with the coast during the decade of company occupation, 1630 –1641.
Revised:  Providence Island, the company's main base and settlement, entered into regular correspondence with the coast during the decade of company occupation, 1631 –1641.
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Original:  Providence Island: The Other Puritan Colony, 1631–41, Cambridge University Press, 1993 The Providence Island Company sponsored the Miskitu King's Son  visit to England during the reign of Charles I (1625–1649).
Revised:  Providence Island: The Other Puritan Colony, 1631–41, Cambridge University Press, 1993 The Providence Island Company sponsored the Miskito's " King's Son visit to England during the reign of Charles I (1625–1649).
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Original:  Providence Island: The Other Puritan Colony, 1631–41, Cambridge University Press, 1993 The Providence Island Company sponsored the Miskitu King's Son  visit to England during the reign of Charles I (1625–1649).
Revised:  Providence Island: The Other Puritan Colony, 1631–41, Cambridge University Press, 1993 The Providence Island Company sponsored the Miskitu King's Son " visit to England during the reign of Charles I (1625–1649).
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Original:  In the  late 17th and early 18th centuries, Miskitus began a series of raids that attacked Spanish-held territories and still independent indigenous groups in the area.
Revised:  In the In the late 17th and early 18th centuries, Miskitus began a series of raids that attacked Spanish-held territories and still independent indigenous groups in the area.
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Original:  Miskitu raiders reached as far north as the Yucatán, and as far south as Panama .
Revised:  Miskito raiders reached as far north as the Yucatán, and as far south as Panama .
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Original:  A Collection of Voyages and Travels, London, 1728, vol. 6, pp. 285–290   In the early 18th century, the Miskitu kingdom became organized into four distinct clusters of population, centered on the banks of the navigable rivers.
Revised:  A Collection of Voyages and Travels, London, 1728, vol. 6, pp. 285–290 In the early 18th century, the Miskito kingdom became organized into four distinct clusters of population, centered on the banks of the navigable rivers.
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Original:  The king's domain lay from the Wanks River south to the Rio Kukalaya, including the king's residence at Sandy Bay,  the general,  ruled the northern portions of the kingdom, from the Wanks River to Cape Honduras, and the Governor, controlled the southern regions, from the Cucalaya River to Pearl Key Lagoon.
Revised:  The king's domain lay from the Wanks River south to the Rio Kukalaya, including the king's residence near Sandy Bay, the general, ruled the northern portions of the kingdom, from the Wanks River to Cape Honduras, and the Governor, controlled the southern regions, from the Cucalaya River to Pearl Key Lagoon.
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Original:  The king's domain lay from the Wanks River south to the Rio Kukalaya, including the king's residence at Sandy Bay,  the general,  ruled the northern portions of the kingdom, from the Wanks River to Cape Honduras, and the Governor, controlled the southern regions, from the Cucalaya River to Pearl Key Lagoon.
Revised:  The king's domain lay from the Wanks River south to the Rio Kukalaya, including the king's residence at Sandy Bay, the general, who ruled the northern portions of the kingdom, from the Wanks River to Cape Honduras, and the Governor, controlled the southern regions, from the Cucalaya River to Pearl Key Lagoon.
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Original:  In the later in 1740 , another title, Admiral, was added;
Revised:  In the later in 1740 , another title, Admiral, was recorded; this man was also a Tawira,
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Original:  British settlement The Miskitu king Edward I and the British concluded a formal Treaty of Friendship and Alliance in 1740, and Robert Hodgson, Senior was appointed as Superintendent of the Shore.
Revised:  British settlement The Miskito king Edward I and the British concluded a formal Treaty of Friendship and Alliance in 1740, and Robert Hodgson, Senior was appointed as Superintendent of the Shore.
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Original:  The language of the treaty includes what amounts to a surrender of sovereignty, and is often taken by historians as an indication that a British protectorate was established over the Miskito Kingdom but it was simply to strengthen their friendship . Britain's primary motive and the most immediate result of the treaty was to secure an alliance between the Miskito and British for the War of Jenkins' Ear, and the Miskitu and British cooperated in attacks on Spanish settlements during the war.
Revised:  The language of the treaty includes what amounts to a surrender of sovereignty, and is often taken by historians as an indication that a British protectorate was established over the Miskito Kingdom . Britain's primary motive and the most immediate result of the treaty was to secure an alliance between the Miskito and British for the War of Jenkins' Ear, and the Miskitu and British cooperated in attacks on Spanish settlements during the war.
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Original:  The language of the treaty includes what amounts to a surrender of sovereignty, and is often taken by historians as an indication that a British protectorate was established over the Miskito Kingdom but it was simply to strengthen their friendship . Britain's primary motive and the most immediate result of the treaty was to secure an alliance between the Miskito and British for the War of Jenkins' Ear, and the Miskitu and British cooperated in attacks on Spanish settlements during the war.
Revised:  The language of the treaty includes what amounts to a surrender of sovereignty, and is often taken by historians as an indication that a British protectorate was established over the Miskito Kingdom but it was simply to strengthen their friendship . Britain's primary motive and the most immediate result of the treaty was to secure an alliance between the Miskito and British for the War of Jenkins' Ear, and the Miskito and British cooperated in attacks on Spanish settlements during the war.
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Original: Floyd pp. 83-85 This military cooperation would prove important as Miskitu forces were vital to protecting not only British interests in the Miskitu Kingdom but also for British holdings in British Honduras (now Belize).
Revised: Floyd pp. 83-85 This military cooperation would prove important as Miskito forces were vital to protecting not only British interests in the Miskitu Kingdom but also for British holdings in British Honduras (now Belize).
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Original: Floyd pp. 83-85 This military cooperation would prove important as Miskitu forces were vital to protecting not only British interests in the Miskitu Kingdom but also for British holdings in British Honduras (now Belize).
Revised: Floyd pp. 83-85 This military cooperation would prove important as Miskitu forces were vital to protecting not only British interests in the Miskito Kingdom but also for British holdings in British Honduras (now Belize).
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Original:  A more lasting result of this formal relation was that Edward I and other Miskitu rulers who followed him allowed the British to establish settlements and plantations within his realm, and issued the first land grants to this effect in 1742.
Revised:  A more lasting result of this formal relation was that Edward I and other Miskito rulers who followed him allowed the British to establish settlements and plantations within his realm, and issued the first land grants to this effect in 1742.
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Original:  Most of the labor on the estates was supplied by African slaves and by indigenous slaves captured in Mosquito Coast and British raids into Spanish territory.
Revised:  Most of the labor on the estates was supplied by African slaves and by indigenous slaves captured in Miskito and British raids into Spanish territory.
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Original:  The Miskitu kings received regular gifts from the British in the form of weapons and consumer goods, and provided security against slave revolts and capturing runaways.
Revised:  The Miskito kings received regular gifts from the British in the form of weapons and consumer goods, and provided security against slave revolts and capturing runaways.
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Original:  British evacuation Spain, which claimed the territory, suffered considerably from the Miskitu attacks which continued during peacetime.
Revised:  British evacuation Spain, which claimed the territory, suffered considerably from the Miskito attacks which continued during peacetime.
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Original:  He is a politician in  United Development Party (PPP) and Indonesian government minister under Yudhoyono presidency.
Revised:  He is a politician in the United Development Party (PPP) and Indonesian government minister under Yudhoyono presidency.
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Original: Bachtiar Chamsyah Divonis 1,8 Tahun, diakses 30 Januari 2018 References Tokohindonesia.com Category:1945 births Category:Politicians from Aceh Category:Social affairs ministers of Indonesia Category:Indonesian Muslims Category:Living people Category:Minangkabau people Category:People from Sigli Category:United Development Party politicians Category:Indonesian politicians convicted of corrupti
Revised: Bachtiar Chamsyah Divonis 1,8 Tahun, diakses 30 Januari 2018 References Tokohindonesia.com Category:1945 births Category:Politicians from Aceh Category:Social affairs ministers of Indonesia Category:Indonesian Muslims Category:Living people Category:Minangkabau people Category:People from Sigli Category:United Development Party politicians Category:Indonesian politicians convicted of corrupti
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Original: Chen Chusheng (born July 25, 1981 in Hainan ) is a popular singerin China . Early life and family Chen was born in Sanya, Hainan.
Revised: Chen Chusheng (born July 25, 1981 ) is a popular singerin China . Early life and family Chen was born in Sanya, Hainan.
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Original: Chen Chusheng (born July 25, 1981 in Hainan ) is a popular singerin China . Early life and family Chen was born in Sanya, Hainan.
Revised: Chen Chusheng (born July 25, 1981 in Hainan ) is a Chinese singer . Early life and family Chen was born in Sanya, Hainan.
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Original: Chen Chusheng (born July 25, 1981 in Hainan ) is a popular singerin China . Early life and family Chen was born in Sanya, Hainan.
Revised: Chen Chusheng (born July 25, 1981 in Hainan ) is a popular singerin China . Early life Chen was born in Sanya, Hainan.
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Original:  Starting off with working in a restaurant run by his relatives, he soon concentrated on developing a singing career - meeting musicians in the same camp and performing for clubs in town.
Revised:  Starting off with working in a restaurant run by his relatives, he soon concentrated on developing a singing career – meeting musicians in the same camp and performing for clubs in town.
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Original:  Disorders affecting children such as ADHD, along with oppositional defiant disorder, conduct disorder, high functioning autism  and Tourette's syndrome have all been suggested to involve executive functioning deficits.
Revised:  Disorders affecting children such as ADHD, along with oppositional defiant disorder, conduct disorder, high functioning autism , and Tourette's syndrome have all been suggested to involve executive functioning deficits.
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Original:  This research suggests that differences exist between typically functioning, matched controls  and clinical groups, on measures of executive functioning.
Revised:  This research suggests that differences exist between typically functioning, matched controls , and clinical groups, on measures of executive functioning.
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Original:  There is no doubt that there is a prominent link between parental interaction and child development but the best child rearing technique continues to vary amongst experts.
Revised:  There is no doubt that there is a prominent link between parental interaction and child development but the best child-rearing technique continues to vary amongst experts.
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Original:  As a result, Executive dysfunction is implicated etiologically and/or co-morbidly in many psychiatric illnesses, which often show the same symptoms as the dysexecutive syndrome.
Revised:  As a result, executive dysfunction is implicated etiologically and/or co-morbidly in many psychiatric illnesses, which often show the same symptoms as the dysexecutive syndrome.
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Original:  Deficits of the executive functions are observed in all populations to varying degrees, but severe executive dysfunction can have devastating effects on cognition and behaviour in both individual and social contexts , this can be viewed in cases of children with ADHD<ref> .
Revised:  Deficits of the executive functions are observed in all populations to varying degrees, but severe executive dysfunction can have devastating effects on cognition and behaviour in both individual and social contexts .
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Original: The neuroanatomy of images memory encompasses a wide variety of anatomical structures in the brain.
Revised: The neuroanatomy of memory encompasses a wide variety of anatomical structures in the brain.
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Original:  Hippocampus [[File:NIA human brain drawing.jpg|The hippocampus . |thumb]]
Revised:  Hippocampus [[File:NIA human brain drawing.jpg|The hippocampus |thumb]]
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Original:  It is made up of two structures, the Ammon ’ s Horn, and the Dentate gyrus, each containing different types of cells.
Revised:  It is made up of two structures, the Ammon ' s Horn, and the Dentate gyrus, each containing different types of cells.
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Original:  In one study, single-cell recordings were taken from electrodes implanted in a rat ’ s hippocampus, and it was found that certain neurons responded strongly only when the rat was in certain locations.
Revised:  In one study, single-cell recordings were taken from electrodes implanted in a rat ' s hippocampus, and it was found that certain neurons responded strongly only when the rat was in certain locations.
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Original:  The hippocampus ’ right side is more oriented towards responding to spatial aspects, whereas the left side is associated with other context information.
Revised:  The hippocampus ' right side is more oriented towards responding to spatial aspects, whereas the left side is associated with other context information.
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Original:  Also, there is evidence that experience in building extensive mental maps, such as driving a city taxi for a long time (since this requires considerable memorization of routes), can increase the volume of one ’ s hippocampus.
Revised:  Also, there is evidence that experience in building extensive mental maps, such as driving a city taxi for a long time (since this requires considerable memorization of routes), can increase the volume of one ' s hippocampus.
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Original:  Cerebellum [[File:Brain bulbar region.svg|The cerebellum . |thumb]] Memory of fear conditioning Pavlovian conditioning tests have shown the active role of the amygdala in fear conditioning in rats.
Revised:  Cerebellum [[File:Brain bulbar region.svg|The cerebellum |thumb]] Memory of fear conditioning Pavlovian conditioning tests have shown the active role of the amygdala in fear conditioning in rats.
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Original:  The central nucleus is linked with the behavioral responses that are dependent on the basolateral ’ s reaction to fear.
Revised:  The central nucleus is linked with the behavioral responses that are dependent on the basolateral ' s reaction to fear.
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Original:  Basal ganglia and motor memory [[File:Basal Ganglia and Related Structures.svg|The basal ganglia . ]] Cortical structures The cortical structures . |thumb In regard to memory, temporal lobe damage can impair long-term memory.
Revised:  Basal ganglia and motor memory [[File:Basal Ganglia and Related Structures.svg|The basal ganglia ]] Cortical structures The cortical structures . |thumb In regard to memory, temporal lobe damage can impair long-term memory.
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Original:  Basal ganglia and motor memory [[File:Basal Ganglia and Related Structures.svg|The basal ganglia . ]] Cortical structures The cortical structures . |thumb In regard to memory, temporal lobe damage can impair long-term memory.
Revised:  Basal ganglia and motor memory [[File:Basal Ganglia and Related Structures.svg|The basal ganglia . ]] Cortical structures The cortical structures |thumb In regard to memory, temporal lobe damage can impair long-term memory.
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Original:  Thus, general semantic knowledge or more personal episodic memories of one ’ s childhood could be affected.
Revised:  Thus, general semantic knowledge or more personal episodic memories of one ' s childhood could be affected.
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Original:  Damage to the parietal lobe results in the syndrome ‘neglect ’ which is when patients treat part of their body or objects in their visual field as though it never existed.
Revised:  Damage to the parietal lobe results in the syndrome ‘neglect ' which is when patients treat part of their body or objects in their visual field as though it never existed.
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Original:  Since the brain regions are so specialized in their functioning  damages done to specific areas of the brain can cause specific type of damage.
Revised:  Since the brain regions are so specialized in their functioning , damages done to specific areas of the brain can cause specific type of damage.
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Original:  Senegalese footballer Myriam Soumaré, French track and field athlete Yacouba Sylla, Malian footballer Abubacarr Tambadou, Former Minister of Justice of the Gambia Adama Tamboura, Malian footballer Aïce Tamoura, Malian musician Demba Tandia, Malian musician Mamadou Tandja, former President of Niger from 1999 to 2010 Sidy Bonco Tangoudia, Malian musician Halima Kissima Touré, Malian musician Balemé Kandji Traoré, Malian musician Molla Wagué, Malian footballer Moussa Wagué, Senegalese footballer 
Revised:  Senegalese footballer Myriam Soumaré, French track and field athlete Yacouba Sylla, Malian footballer Abubacarr Tambadou, Former Minister of Justice of the Gambia Adama Tamboura, Malian footballer Aïce Tamoura, Malian musician Demba Tandia, Malian musician Mamadou Tandja, former President of Niger from 1999 to 2010 Sidy Bonco Tangoudia, Malian musician Halima Kissima Touré, Malian musician Balemé Kandji Traoré, Malian musician Molla Wagué, Malian footballer Moussa Wagué, Senegalese footballer Diafra Sakho
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Original:  French track and field athlete Yacouba Sylla, Malian footballer Abubacarr Tambadou, Former Minister of Justice of the Gambia Adama Tamboura, Malian footballer Aïce Tamoura, Malian musician Demba Tandia, Malian musician Mamadou Tandja, former President of Niger from 1999 to 2010 Sidy Bonco Tangoudia, Malian musician Halima Kissima Touré, Malian musician Balemé Kandji Traoré, Malian musician Molla Wagué, Malian footballer Moussa Wagué, Senegalese footballer Diafra Sakho 
Revised:  French track and field athlete Yacouba Sylla, Malian footballer Abubacarr Tambadou, Former Minister of Justice of the Gambia Adama Tamboura, Malian footballer Aïce Tamoura, Malian musician Demba Tandia, Malian musician Mamadou Tandja, former President of Niger from 1999 to 2010 Sidy Bonco Tangoudia, Malian musician Halima Kissima Touré, Malian musician Balemé Kandji Traoré, Malian musician Molla Wagué, Malian footballer Moussa Wagué, Senegalese footballer Diafra Sakho Mouhamed Mbaye Zoumana Camara, Senegalese footballer
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Original:  Malian footballer Abubacarr Tambadou, Former Minister of Justice of the Gambia Adama Tamboura, Malian footballer Aïce Tamoura, Malian musician Demba Tandia, Malian musician Mamadou Tandja, former President of Niger from 1999 to 2010 Sidy Bonco Tangoudia, Malian musician Halima Kissima Touré, Malian musician Balemé Kandji Traoré, Malian musician Molla Wagué, Malian footballer Moussa Wagué, Senegalese footballer Diafra Sakho Mouhamed Mbaye Zoumana Camara, Senegalese footballer 
Revised:  Malian footballer Abubacarr Tambadou, Former Minister of Justice of the Gambia Adama Tamboura, Malian footballer Aïce Tamoura, Malian musician Demba Tandia, Malian musician Mamadou Tandja, former President of Niger from 1999 to 2010 Sidy Bonco Tangoudia, Malian musician Halima Kissima Touré, Malian musician Balemé Kandji Traoré, Malian musician Molla Wagué, Malian footballer Moussa Wagué, Senegalese footballer Diafra Sakho Mouhamed Mbaye Zoumana Camara, Senegalese footballer Diakite Lamine
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Original: Religion The Soninke people were a coastal trade link between the Berber people of Maghreb and the Empires in sub-Saharan West Africa.
Revised: Religion The Soninke people were a coastal trade link between the Berber people of Maghreb and the Empires in West Africa.
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Original: Religion The Soninke people were a coastal trade link between the Berber people of Maghreb and the Empires in West Africa.
Revised: Religion The Soninke people were a coastal trade link between the Berber people of Maghreb and the other Empires in sub-Saharan West Africa.
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Original: Remitting seronegative symmetrical synovitis with pitting edema ( abbreviated RS3PE or sometimes RS3PE) is a rare syndrome identified by symmetric polyarthritis, synovitis, acute pitting edema (swelling) of the back of the hands and/or feet, and a negative serum rheumatoid factor.
Revised: Remitting seronegative symmetrical synovitis with pitting edema ( or sometimes RS3PE) is a rare syndrome identified by symmetric polyarthritis, synovitis, acute pitting edema (swelling) of the back of the hands and/or feet, and a negative serum rheumatoid factor.
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Original:  The SADC and the African Union have been designated to supervise Madagascar's political reinstatement.
Revised:  The SADC and the African Union were designated to supervise Madagascar's political reinstatement.
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