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Original:  Jefferson Lee from the NSW Branch of the Australia-East Timor Association said that " It is hypocritical that they are celebrating the appointment of an ICJ judge given the fact that Australia withdrew from the jurisdiction of the ICJ maritime division in March 2002."
Revised:  Jefferson Lee from the NSW Branch of the Australia-East Timor Association said that " it is hypocritical that they are celebrating the appointment of an ICJ judge given the fact that Australia withdrew from the jurisdiction of the ICJ maritime division in March 2002."
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Original:  Australia has been involved in a dispute over it's maritime border with East Timor  .
Revised:  Australia has been involved in a dispute with East Timor .
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Original:   There has not been an Australian or New Zealand judge on the court since 1967.
Revised:  "Foreign policy is a tricky business, with lots of strands. And there are always tensions between any country's idealism and interests. It often happens that different bits of foreign policy thrust may seem to be contradictory, but it's a complex world, and any government is trying to play lots of notes simultaneously. In this case I think Downer can be quite genuine in his congratulations, while the advocacy groups have a good opportunity to highlight their perfectly logical views," he said. There has not been an Australian or New Zealand judge on the court since 1967.
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Original:  In a joint press release the Australian Minister for Foreign Affairs and the Attorney General  said that "Australia strongly supported Sir Kenneth ’ s candidature to the Court".
Revised:  In the joint release the Australian Minister for Foreign Affairs and the Attorney General said that "Australia strongly supported Sir Kenneth ’ s candidature to the Court".
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Original:  In a joint press release the Australian Minister for Foreign Affairs and the Attorney General  said that "Australia strongly supported Sir Kenneth ’ s candidature to the Court".
Revised:  In a joint press release the Australian Minister for Foreign Affairs and the Attorney General said that "Australia strongly supported Sir Kenneth ' s candidature to the Court".
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Original:  The government has been accused of hypocisy over the release, as Australia withdrew from the jurisdiction of the maritime division of the ICJ in 2002, because of a dispute with East Timor.
Revised:  Advocacy groups made the accusation because Australia withdrew from the jurisdiction of the maritime division of the ICJ in 2002, because of a dispute with East Timor.
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Original:  A spokesman for the Minister for Foreign Affairs rejected the suggestion that the minister had been hyprcritical, and said that it had always been government policy to resolve such disputes via bilateral negotiation.
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Original: A three-year-old girl has been mauled by two dingoes while holidaying with her parents on Fraser Island .
Revised: A three-year-old girl has been mauled by two while holidaying with her parents on Fraser Island .
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Original:  The two animals responsible for the attack have since been captured and euthanised by wildlife rangers.
Revised:  The two animals responsible for the attack have since been captured and by wildlife rangers.
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Original:  The child was on the beach with her parents while they waited to be transported to the mainland on the Hook Point barge.
Revised:  The child was on the beach with her parents while they waited to be transported to the mainland on the barge.
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Original:  Lindsay Chamberlin reported that her daughter, nine-week-old Azaria, was snatched by a dingo while camping in the Northern Territory.
Revised:  reported that her daughter, nine-week-old Azaria, was snatched by a dingo while camping in the Northern Territory.
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Original: The child received medical attention at the site of the attack and was then transported to Gymie Hospital .
Revised: The child received medical attention at the site of the attack and was then transported to Gymie Hospital 
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Original: A three-year-old girl has been mauled by two while holidaying with her parents on .
Revised: A three-year-old girl has been bitten by two while holidaying with her parents on .
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Original:  You’re proud of that?"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% As Annette Ellis amongst others was one of the aforementioned speakers who had not the time to speak in the debate, she asked whether she could incorporate her speech into Hansard -- the Government granted leave for all speakers who intended to speak but could not to incorporate their speeches into Hansard.
Revised:  You’re proud of that?"%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  In the consideration in detail stage, the Federal Opposition had moved a number of amendments to the legislation, one which would effectively -- as Stephen Smith had put it -- "kill the bill", another which would rename the bill to the "Workplace Relations Amendment (Cut Wages, Cut Conditions and Entitlements, No Fairness, No Work Choices) Bill 2005", but this amendment was ruled out of order by the Speaker of the Australian House of Representatives, David Hawker.
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Original: Mohamed el-Baradei Mohamed el-Baradei, head of the U.N. watchdog group International Atomic Energy Agency  , may go directly to Tehran some time this week with a compromise plan to reduce the threat that Iran may make use of its uranium enrichment program to produce nuclear arms.
Revised: Mohamed el-Baradei Mohamed el-Baradei, head of the U.N. watchdog group International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) , may go directly to Tehran some time this week with a compromise plan to reduce the threat that Iran may make use of its uranium enrichment program to produce nuclear arms.
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Original:  Under a compromise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 , consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom , and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment from within Iran  would be transferred to Russia.
Revised:  Under a compromise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 ( consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom , and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment from within Iran would be transferred to Russia.
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Original:  Under a compromise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 , consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom , and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment from within Iran  would be transferred to Russia.
Revised:  Under a compromise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 , consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom ) and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment from within Iran would be transferred to Russia.
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Original: Under a compromise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 (consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom) and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment from within Iran, uranium hexafluoride (UF6) gas, would be transferred to Russia.
Revised: Under a compromise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 (consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom) and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment within Iran, uranium hexafluoride (UF6) gas, would be transferred to Russia.
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Original:  The IAEA board will meet on November 24  when they may decide to refer Iran for possible economic sanctions before the U.N. Security Council.
Revised:  The IAEA board will meet on November 24 , when they may decide to refer Iran for possible economic sanctions before the U.N. Security Council.
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Original: Mohamed el-Baradei Mohamed el-Baradei, head of the U.N. watchdog group International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA), may go directly to Tehran some time this week with a compromise plan to reduce the possibility that Iran may make use of its uranium enrichment program to produce nuclear arms.
Revised: Mohamed el-Baradei Mohamed el-Baradei, head of the U.N. topdog group International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA), may go directly to Tehran some time this week with a compromise plan to reduce the possibility that Iran may make use of its uranium enrichment program to produce nuclear arms.
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Original:  Under a compromise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 (consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom) and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment within Iran, uranium hexafluoride (UF6) gas, would be transferred to Russia.
Revised:  Under a suprise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 (consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom) and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment within Iran, uranium hexafluoride (UF6) gas, would be transferred to Russia.
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Original: Mohamed el-Baradei Mohamed el-Baradei, head of the U.N. topdog group International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA), may go directly to Tehran some time this week with a compromise plan to reduce the possibility that Iran may make use of its uranium enrichment program to produce nuclear arms.
Revised: Mohamed el-Baradei Mohamed el-Baradei, head of the U.N. watchdog group International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA), may go directly to Tehran some time this week with a compromise plan to reduce the possibility that Iran may make use of its uranium enrichment program to produce nuclear arms.
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Original:  Under a suprise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 (consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom) and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment within Iran, uranium hexafluoride (UF6) gas, would be transferred to Russia.
Revised:  Under a compromise plan negotiated last week between the EU-3 (consisting of France, Germany and the United Kingdom) and the United States, a loose agreement was reached where the final stages of nuclear enrichment within Iran, uranium hexafluoride (UF6) gas, would be transferred to Russia.
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Original:  The largest trade deficit is with China is up $1.6 billionto  20.1 billion more dollars imported than exported
Revised:  The largest trade deficit is with China is up $1.6 billionto The largest trade deficit is with China is up $1.6 billion to $ 20.1 billion more dollars imported than exported
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Original:  Also affected by Katrina  food exports fell $296 million from transportation delays caused by the shutdown of the Port of New Orleans.
Revised:  Also affected by Katrina , food exports fell $296 million from transportation delays caused by the shutdown of the Port of New Orleans.
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Original:  Crude oil imports dropped $350 million due to shut down refineries, yet Natural gas imports increased $3.7 billion, fuel oil and petroleum products increased by $ 6.8 billion.
Revised:  Crude oil imports dropped $350 million due to shut down refineries, yet Natural gas imports increased $3.7 billion. Fuel oil and petroleum products increased by $ 6.8 billion.
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Original:  The amendment would make the Combat Status Review Tribunal (CSRT) statutory law, the Anual Review Board (ARB) statutory law, require the designated civilian officer to be an officer of the U.S. government that is appointed by the President with the advice and consent of the Senate, not allow the preponderance of evidence against a detainee be derived from undue coercion, and remove Guantanamo prisoners' right to file habeus corpus petitions in federal courts.
Revised:  The amendment would make the Combat Status Review Tribunal (CSRT) statutory law, the Annual Review Board (ARB) statutory law, require the designated civilian officer to be an officer of the U.S. government that is appointed by the President with the advice and consent of the Senate, not allow the preponderance of evidence against a detainee be derived from undue coercion, and remove Guantanamo prisoners' right to file habeus corpus petitions in federal courts.
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Original:  The amendment would make the Combat Status Review Tribunal (CSRT) statutory law, the Anual Review Board (ARB) statutory law, require the designated civilian officer to be an officer of the U.S. government that is appointed by the President with the advice and consent of the Senate, not allow the preponderance of evidence against a detainee be derived from undue coercion, and remove Guantanamo prisoners' right to file habeus corpus petitions in federal courts.
Revised:  The amendment would make the Combat Status Review Tribunal (CSRT) statutory law, the Anual Review Board (ARB) statutory law, require the designated civilian officer to be an officer of the U.S. government that is appointed by the President with the advice and consent of the Senate, not allow the preponderance of evidence against a detainee be derived from undue coercion, and remove Guantanamo prisoners' right to file habeas corpus petitions in federal courts.
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Original:  In regards to the habeus corpus provision, the amendment specifically states, "No court, justice, or judge shall have jurisdiction to hear or consider an application for a writ of habeas corpus filed by or on behalf of an alien outside the United States (as that term is defined in section 101(a)(38) of the Immigration and Naturalization Act (8 U.S.C. 1101(a)(38)) who is detained by the Department of Defense at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba."
Revised:  In regards to the habeas corpus provision, the amendment specifically states, "No court, justice, or judge shall have jurisdiction to hear or consider an application for a writ of habeas corpus filed by or on behalf of an alien outside the United States (as that term is defined in section 101(a)(38) of the Immigration and Naturalization Act (8 U.S.C. 1101(a)(38)) who is detained by the Department of Defense at Guantanamo Bay, Cuba."
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Original:  It should be noted that under Graham's amendment, detainees ' would be able to challenege only the narrow question of whether the procedures established by the Secretary of Defense at the time the military determined their status as an enemy combatant were followed.
Revised:  It should be noted that under Graham's amendment, detainees would be able to challenege only the narrow question of whether the procedures established by the Secretary of Defense at the time the military determined their status as an enemy combatant were followed.
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Original:  Civil Liberties groups as well as human rights groups issued statements opposing the amendment.
Revised:  Civil liberties groups as well as human rights groups issued statements opposing the amendment.
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Original:  The U.S. Senate  adopted an amendment, proposed by Senator Lindsey Graham R-SC., to the defense authorization bill for fiscal year 2006.
Revised:  The U.S. Senate has adopted an amendment, proposed by Senator Lindsey Graham R-SC., to the defense authorization bill for fiscal year 2006.
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Original:  The amendment would make the Combat Status Review Tribunal (CSRT) statutory law, the Annual Review Board (ARB) statutory law, require the designated civilian officer to be an officer of the U.S. government that is appointed by the President with the advice and consent of the Senate, not allow the preponderance of evidence against a detainee be derived from undue coercion, and remove Guantanamo prisoners' right to file habeas corpus petitions in federal courts.
Revised:  The amendment would make the Combat Status Review Tribunal (CSRT) statutory law, the Annual Review Board (ARB) statutory law, require civilian officers to be a government official who is appointed by the President with the advice and consent of the Senate, not allow the preponderance of evidence against a detainee be derived from undue coercion, and remove Guantanamo prisoners' right to file habeas corpus petitions in federal courts.
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Original: It should be noted that under Graham's amendment, detainees would be able to challenege only the narrow question of whether the procedures established by the Secretary of Defense at the time the military determined their status as an enemy combatant were followed.
Revised: It should be noted that under Graham's amendment, detainees would be able to challenge only the narrow question of whether the procedures established by the Secretary of Defense at the time the military determined their status as an enemy combatant were followed.
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Original:  However, these uninstall kits are only installable online through an ActiveX script, which has been under high scrutiny by security advisers over the safety of using ActiveX .
Revised:  However, these uninstall kits are only installable online through an ActiveX application, a technology many security experts advise users to deactivate due to its high execution privileges on host computers .
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Original:  The software automatically installs after the user agrees to a  end user license agreement (EULA) before the music disc can be played, and includes a rootkit that can create vulnerabilities in the user's Windows computer.
Revised:  The software automatically installs after the user agrees to a lengthy end user license agreement (EULA) before the music disc can be played, and includes a rootkit that can create vulnerabilities in the user's Windows computer.
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Original:  The software automatically installs after the user agrees to a lengthy end user license agreement (EULA) before the music disc can be played, and includes a rootkit that can create vulnerabilities in the user's Windows computer.
Revised:  The software automatically installs after the user agrees to a end user license agreement (EULA) before the music disc can be played, and includes a rootkit that can create vulnerabilities in the user's Windows computer.
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Original:   Sony's DRM software "phones home" each time one of their CDs is played.
Revised:  Furthermore, Sony's DRM software "phones home" each time one of their CDs is played.
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Original:  The EULA does not revel the phone home behavior, not does it acknoledge the existance of the rootkit  .
Revised:  The license agreement does not reveal the phone home behavior, not does it acknoledge the existance of the rootkit .
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Original:  The EULA does not revel the phone home behavior, not does it acknoledge the existance of the rootkit  .
Revised:  The EULA does not revel the phone home behavior, not does it acknowledge the existence of the rootkit .
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Original:  The license agreement does not reveal the phone home behavior, not does it acknowledge the existence of the rootkit itself.
Revised:  The license agreement does not reveal the phone home behavior, nor does it acknowledge the existence of the rootkit itself.
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Original:  One trojan horse exploiting the hole has already been discovered in the wild .
Revised:  One trojan horse exploiting the hole has already been discovered online .
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Original:  Meanwhile, in an NPR interview, a spokesman for Sony said, " users don't  know what a rootkit is, and therefore, don't care . " In addition to questions of legality, the DRM software has come under fire from media rights activists and even artists who unwittingly found their albums more stringently protected than they approved of.
Revised:  Meanwhile, in an NPR interview, a spokesman for Sony said, " users don't know what a rootkit is, so why should they care about it? " In addition to questions of legality, the DRM software has come under fire from media rights activists and even artists who unwittingly found their albums more stringently protected than they approved of.
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Original:  The license agreement does not reveal the phone home behavior, nor does it acknowledge the existence of the rootkit itself.
Revised:  The license agreement does not reveal this behavior, nor does it acknowledge the existence of the rootkit itself.
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Original: Sony and First 4 Internet have released "patches" and uninstall kits, after programmer Mark Russinovich discovered the hidden files from the rootkit.
Revised: Sony and First 4 Internet have released "patches" and uninstall kits, after programmer discovered the hidden files from the rootkit.
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Original:  If approved the amendments can keep him in power until 2034   
Revised:  If approved the amendments can keep him in power until 2034. 
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Original:  The changes, which require a referendum before becoming law, reduce Presidential terms from seven years to five and maintain the two-term limit . Kagame receives an exemption allowing another seven-year term and thereafter allowing him to run for five-year terms.
Revised:  The changes, which require a referendum before becoming law, reduce Presidential terms . Kagame receives an exemption allowing another seven-year term and thereafter allowing him to run for five-year terms.
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Original:  The changes, which require a referendum before becoming law, reduce Presidential terms from seven years to five and maintain the two-term limit . Kagame receives an exemption allowing another seven-year term and thereafter allowing him to run for five-year terms.
Revised:  The changes, which require a referendum before becoming law, reduce Presidential terms from seven years to five and maintain the two-term limit . Kagame receives an exemption allowing another seven-year term before starting to count his five-year terms.
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Original: Eight American troops and one contractor were shot and killed by  Afghan National Army Air Force pilot  .
Revised: Eight American troops and one contractor were shot and killed by an Afghan National Army Air Force pilot .
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Original:  The incident  which began around 10 a.m.
Revised:  The incident The incident, which began around 10 a.m.
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Original:  "Suddenly, in the middle of the meeting, shooting started," said Afghan Air Corps spokesman Col.
Revised:  "Suddenly, in the middle of the meeting, shooting started," said Afghan Air Corps spokesman Colonel
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Original:  The shooters brother, Dr. Hassan Sahebi, said  "My brother was a little depressed recently, but he had served with Afghanistan's national army for 20 years , He loved his country and his people. ..
Revised:  The shooter's brother, Hassan Sahebi, said "My brother was a little depressed recently, but he had served with Afghanistan's national army for 20 years , He loved his country and his people. ..
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Original:  The shooters brother, Dr. Hassan Sahebi, said  "My brother was a little depressed recently, but he had served with Afghanistan's national army for 20 years , He loved his country and his people. ..
Revised:  The shooters brother, Dr. Hassan Sahebi, said , "My brother was a little depressed recently, but he had served with Afghanistan's national army for 20 years , He loved his country and his people. ..
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Original:  The shooters brother, Dr. Hassan Sahebi, said  "My brother was a little depressed recently, but he had served with Afghanistan's national army for 20 years , He loved his country and his people. ..
Revised:  The shooters brother, Dr. Hassan Sahebi, said "My brother was a little depressed recently, but he had served with Afghanistan's national army for 20 years . He loved his country and his people. ..
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