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Original:  " The state oversight system is not effective, they don’t have any teeth , " Secretary of Transportation Ray LaHood told Congress last year that Federal safety guidelines should be set.
Revised:  " The state oversight system is not effective, they don’t have any teeth , " 
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Original: NTSB photo of the 2009 accident An investigation into the fatal 2009 Washington Metro train collision conducted by the National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) called for new safety and maintenance rules.
Revised: NTSB photo of the 2009 accident An investigation into the fatal conducted by the National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) called for new safety and maintenance rules.
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Original: NTSB photo of the 2009 accident An investigation into the fatal 2009 Washington Metro train collision conducted by the National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) called for new safety and maintenance rules.
Revised: NTSB photo of the 2009 accident An investigation into the fatal 2009 Washington Metro train collision conducted by the (NTSB) called for new safety and maintenance rules.
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Original:  The report also cited the use of dated 1000-Series train cars.
Revised:  The report also cited the use of dated train cars.
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Original:  The 2009 crash, which killed 9 and injured 80, occurred during the evening rush between the Takoma and Fort Totten stations on the Red Line .
Revised:  The 2009 crash, which killed 9 and injured 80, occurred during the evening rush between the Takoma and Fort Totten stations on the .
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Original:  The Washington Metropolitan Area Transit Authority (WMATA) said yesterday that it would replace all of it's 1000-Series trains with newer models.
Revised:  The (WMATA) said yesterday that it would replace all of it's 1000-Series trains with newer models.
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Original:  Xiao, of Chinese ancestory , told police that his friend died of natural causes two years prior.
Revised:  Xiao, of Chinese ancestry , told police that his friend died of natural causes two years prior.
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Original:  A statement from his family and verified by his spokeswoman said that the 37 year old had not yet announced his intention to run, but that media would be informed "if and when a decision is made".
Revised:  A statement from his family and verified by his spokeswoman said that the 37-year-old had not yet announced his intention to run, but that media would be informed "if and when a decision is made".
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Original: Despite growing up in the United States and becoming an award winning rap star there, Jean was born near Port-au-Prince.
Revised: Despite growing up in the United States and becoming an award-winning rap star there, Jean was born near Port-au-Prince.
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Original:  Despite growing up in the United States and becoming an award-winning rap star there, Jean was born near Port-au-Prince.
Revised:  Despite growing up in the United States and becoming an award-winning rapper there, Jean was born near Port-au-Prince.
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Original:  He has already been appointed as a roving ambassador for his birth country , and is the founder of the Yéle Haiti Foundation.
Revised:  He has already been appointed as a roving ambassador for his birth country and is the founder of the Yéle Haiti Foundation.
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Original:  He was at the forefront of fund-raising efforts following the devastating earthquake that struck the country in January, but his charity faced allegations of financial irregularities.
Revised:  He was at the forefront of fund-raising efforts following the devastating earthquake that struck Haiti in January, but his charity faced allegations of financial irregularities.
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Original:  Rumours that he would stand for President had been circulating for months, but  until today's statement  had been flatly denied.
Revised:  Rumours that he would stand for president had been circulating for months, but until today's statement had been flatly denied.
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Original:  Rumours that he would stand for President had been circulating for months, but  until today's statement  had been flatly denied.
Revised:  Rumours that he would stand for President had been circulating for months, but , until today's statement had been flatly denied.
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Original:  Rumours that he would stand for President had been circulating for months, but  until today's statement  had been flatly denied.
Revised:  Rumours that he would stand for President had been circulating for months, but until today's statement , had been flatly denied.
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Original:  Whilst Jean is thought to meet most of these criteria, the Guardian reports that the rapper is "understood to have US citizenship", and that this would make him ineligible.
Revised:  Whilst Jean is thought to meet most of these criteria, The Guardian reports that the rapper is "understood to have US citizenship", and that this would make him ineligible.
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Original:  Even then, it is unclear whether Jean will qualify under the residence clause, having spent much of his time in the United States.
Revised:  Even then, it is unclear whether Jean will qualify under the residence clause, having spent much of his life in the United States.
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Original:  Ambassador Joseph admitted that this would be up to the Haiti's Provisional Electoral Council to decide  &  }    ]  } }  &  [   
Revised:  Ambassador Joseph admitted that this would be up to the Haiti's Provisional Electoral Council to decide . & } ] } } & [ 
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Original:  Ambassador Joseph admitted that this would be up to the Haiti's Provisional Electoral Council to decide  &  }    ]  } }  &  [   
Revised:  Ambassador Joseph admitted that this would be up to the Haiti's Provisional Electoral Council to decide & } ] } } flora& [ 
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Original:  The screens use in-plane switching (IPS) technology, allowing for a greater viewing angle  
Revised:  The screens use in-plane switching (IPS) technology, allowing for a greater viewing angle . 
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Original:  The new monitor can reach a resolution of 2560 by 1440 pixels, or Wide Quad High Definition 
Revised:  The new monitor can reach a resolution of 2560-by-1440 pixels, or Wide Quad High Definition 
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Original:  A World Health Organization (WHO) committee comprising of 43 African health ministers has declared a tuberculosis emergency in the continent.
Revised:  A World Health Organization (WHO) committee comprising of 43 African health ministers has declared a tuberculosis emergency on the continent.
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Original: The number of Tb cases in African countries per year has quadrupled since 1990, and continues to rise.
Revised: The number of tuberculosis (TB) cases in African countries per year has quadrupled since 1990, and continues to rise.
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Original:  The only more deadly disease in the worldis HIV/AIDS - around the world, Tb kills two million people a year , out of some nine million annual infections . Some African countries such as Tanzania and Malawi pioneered Tb control strategies that were later adopted around the globe.
Revised:  Around the world, TB kills two million people a year , out of some nine million annual infections . Some African countries such as Tanzania and Malawi pioneered Tb control strategies that were later adopted around the globe.
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Original:  The only more deadly disease in the worldis HIV/AIDS - around the world, Tb kills two million people a year , out of some nine million annual infections . Some African countries such as Tanzania and Malawi pioneered Tb control strategies that were later adopted around the globe.
Revised:  The only more deadly disease in the worldis HIV/AIDS - around the world, Tb kills two million people a year . Some African countries such as Tanzania and Malawi pioneered Tb control strategies that were later adopted around the globe.
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Original:  The only more deadly disease in the worldis HIV/AIDS - around the world, Tb kills two million people a year , out of some nine million annual infections . Some African countries such as Tanzania and Malawi pioneered Tb control strategies that were later adopted around the globe.
Revised:  The only more deadly disease in the worldis HIV/AIDS - around the world, Tb kills two million people a year , out of some nine million annual infections . Some African countries such as Tanzania and Malawi pioneered TB control strategies that were later adopted around the globe.
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Original:  But they were not successful - Malawi saw the number of Tb cases a year rise by four times over the past 15 years.
Revised:  But they were not successful - Malawi saw the number of TB cases a year rise by four times over the past 15 years.
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Original:  Poverty, poor health systems and the HIV /AIDS virus have been blamed by the WHO for this.
Revised:  Poverty, poor health systems and HIV have been blamed by the WHO for this.
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Original:  Eight of the nine worst affected African countries reported that, for 2003, they had short-falls in the funding their Tb control programmes needed.
Revised:  Eight of the nine worst affected African countries reported that, for 2003, they had short-falls in the funding their TB control programmes needed.
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Original:  Africa is the only region in the world to be experiencing an increase in Tb cases- in the rest of the world, infection rates are either stable or falling
Revised:  Africa is the only region in the world to be experiencing an increase in TB cases
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Original:  Preliminary results from FBI tests showed that the envelope did not contain the deadly poision anthrax, as first thought   .
Revised:  Preliminary results from FBI tests showed that the envelope did not contain the deadly poision anthrax, as first thought . .
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Original:  Preliminary results from FBI tests showed that the envelope did not contain the deadly poision anthrax, as first thought.
Revised:  Preliminary results from FBI tests showed that the envelope did not contain the deadly bacteria anthrax, as first thought.
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Original: 150px|Locator map of Midland, Michigan 200px|Map of downtown Midland, highlighting Anthrax hoax victim buildings A Midland, Michigan hotel was temporarily quarantined Thursday night when a letter with suspicious white powder was opened at the Ashman Court Hotel on Main Street.
Revised: 150px|Locator map of Michigan A Midland, Michigan hotel was temporarily quarantined Thursday night when a letter with suspicious white powder was opened at the Ashman Court Hotel on Main Street.
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Original:  A Tennessee politician has unleashed a tsunami of criticism from islamic groups and islamic leaders by questioning if Islam is a cult and is therefore eligible for protection under the first amendment of the United States constitution, which guarantees freedom of religion.
Revised:  A Tennessee politician has been criticised by islamic groups and islamic leaders by questioning if Islam is a cult and is therefore eligible for protection under the first amendment of the United States constitution, which guarantees freedom of religion.
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Original:  A Tennessee politician has unleashed a tsunami of criticism from islamic groups and islamic leaders by questioning if Islam is a cult and is therefore eligible for protection under the first amendment of the United States constitution, which guarantees freedom of religion.
Revised:  A Tennessee politician has unleashed a tsunami of criticism from islamic groups and islamic leaders by suggesting that Islam is a cult and is therefore eligible for protection under the first amendment of the United States constitution, which guarantees freedom of religion.
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Original:  A Tennessee politician has unleashed a tsunami of criticism from islamic groups and islamic leaders by questioning if Islam is a cult and is therefore eligible for protection under the first amendment of the United States constitution, which guarantees freedom of religion.
Revised:  A Tennessee politician has unleashed a tsunami of criticism from islamic groups and islamic leaders by questioning if Islam is a cult and is therefore ineligible for protection under the first amendment of the United States constitution, which guarantees freedom of religion.
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Original:  Ramsey's comments have been criticized by groups all over the country, while Ramsey's rivals for the lieutenant governor position tried to avoid the controversy.
Revised:  Ramsey's comments have been scrutinized by groups all over the country, while Ramsey's rivals for the lieutenant governor position tried to avoid the controversy.
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Original: While answering a question regarding a proposed mosque in a Tennessee town, that state's Lieutenant Governor, Ron Ramsey, questioned if Islam is a cult.
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Original:   The company says that it is the "responsible party" for cleaning up the spill because it owned the leaking well and had leased the Deepwater Horizon oil rig, but claims that it is not responsible for the entire spill
Revised:  BP says that it is the "responsible party" for cleaning up the spill because it owned the leaking well and had leased the Deepwater Horizon oil rig, but claims that it is not responsible for the entire spill
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Original:  The government is focusing on both cleaning sensitive coastal regions, looking for underwater oil plumes, and probing into what may have been the largest accidental oil spill.
Revised:  The government is focusing on both cleaning sensitive coastal regions, looking for underwater oil plumes, but also probing into what may have been the largest accidental oil spill.
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Original:  Wednesday marked the 100th day since the beginning of the Deepwater Horizon oil spill, and although the leaking well was recently capped, the estimated three million or so barrels of oil already in the Gulf of Mexico are still causing trouble for many residents of the Gulf coast.
Revised:  Wednesday marked the 100th day since the beginning of the Deepwater Horizon oil spill, and although the leaking well was recently capped, the estimated three million or more barrels of oil already in the Gulf of Mexico are still causing trouble for many residents of the Gulf coast.
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Original:   On Thursday, lawyers met at Boise, Idaho hearing to determine how about 200 various lawsuits against BP will play out.
Revised:  On Thursday, lawyers met at Boise, Idaho hearing to determine how around 200 various lawsuits against BP will play out.
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Original: Authorities will use submarines to assess damage underwater, while teams on the ground will assess the shoreline.
Revised: Authorities will use submarines to assess damage underwater, while teams on the ground assess the shoreline.
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Original:  The government is focusing on both cleaning sensitive coastal regions , looking for underwater oil plumes, but  also probing into what may have been the largest accidental oil spill.
Revised:  The government is focusing on both cleaning sensitive coastal regions and looking for underwater oil plumes, but also probing into what may have been the largest accidental oil spill.
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Original:  The government is focusing on both cleaning sensitive coastal regions , looking for underwater oil plumes, but  also probing into what may have been the largest accidental oil spill.
Revised:  The government is focusing on both cleaning sensitive coastal regions , looking for underwater oil plumes, but is also probing into what may have been the largest accidental oil spill.
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Original:  The Washington Post reported that one team is looking into whether a close relationship between BP and government regulators played a role in the spill.
Revised:  The Washington Post reported one team is looking into whether a close relationship between BP and government regulators played a role in the spill.
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Original:  On Tuesday, British Petroleum (BP ) announced that Tony Hayward would step down from his position as the company's chief executive.
Revised:  On Tuesday, BP announced Tony Hayward would step down from his position as the company's chief executive.
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Original: maintained their dominant position in as they defeated by six wickets at , on Sunday.
Revised: maintained their dominant position in as they defeated by six wickets at home in on Sunday.
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Original:  It is New Zealand's fifth consecutive victory and the fourth consecutive defeat for Afghanistan . Besides New Zealand, India is the only other team who remains undefeated in the tournament so far. are the defending champions, having won the tournament in 2011 when it was held in the Indian subcontinent.
Revised:  It is New Zealand's fifth consecutive victory Afghanistan . Besides New Zealand, India is the only other team who remains undefeated in the tournament so far. are the defending champions, having won the tournament in 2011 when it was held in the Indian subcontinent.
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Original:  It is New Zealand's fifth consecutive victory and the fourth consecutive defeat for Afghanistan . Besides New Zealand, India is the only other team who remains undefeated in the tournament so far. are the defending champions, having won the tournament in 2011 when it was held in the Indian subcontinent.
Revised:  It is New Zealand's fifth consecutive victory and the fourth consecutive defeat for . Besides New Zealand, India is the only other team who remains undefeated in the tournament so far. are the defending champions, having won the tournament in 2011 when it was held in the Indian subcontinent.
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Original:  Besides New Zealand, India is the only other team who remains undefeated in the tournament so far. are the defending champions, having won the tournament in 2011 when it was held in the Indian subcontinent.
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Original: Hot weather and peat fires near Moscow have created the worst smog in  almost a decade in the city , with pollution levels around ten times as high as is considered safe.
Revised: Hot weather and peat fires near Moscow have created the worst smog in the city in almost a decade in the city , with pollution levels around ten times as high as is considered safe.
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Original: Hot weather and peat fires near Moscow have created the worst smog in  almost a decade in the city , with pollution levels around ten times as high as is considered safe.
Revised: Hot weather and peat fires near Moscow have created the worst smog in almost a decade , with pollution levels around ten times as high as is considered safe.
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Original: Hot weather and peat fires near Moscow have created the worst smog in  almost a decade in the city , with pollution levels around ten times as high as is considered safe.
Revised: Hot weather and peat fires near Moscow have created the worst smog in almost a decade in the city , with pollution levels around ten times higher than is considered safe.
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Original:  Scientists expect up to several hundred people to die as a result of the smog;
Revised:  Scientists predict that several hundred people to die as a result of the smog;
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Original:  Scientists expect up to several hundred people to die as a result of the smog;
Revised:  Scientists expect up to several hundred people may die as a result of the smog;
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Original:  It swamped some areas with as  12 inches of rainfall.
Revised:  It swamped some areas with as much as 12 inches of rainfall.
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Original: ]] As hurricane Katrina moves beyond the Floridian peninsula, death tolls are beginning to surface.
Revised: ]] As hurricane Katrina moves beyond the Floridian peninsula, death tolls have begun to surface.
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Original: ]] Katrina was downgraded to a tropical storm as it made landfall on Friday in southern Florida's Miami and Fort Lauderdale metopolitan areas.
Revised: ]] Katrina made landfall on Friday in southern Florida's Miami and Fort Lauderdale metopolitan areas.
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Original:  Katrina turned back into a hurricane with 100-mph (160-kph) winds when it reached the warmer Gulf of Mexico waters    
Revised:  Katrina turned back into a hurricane with 100-mph (160-kph) winds when it reached the warmer Gulf of Mexico . 
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Original:  Packing 80 mph winds, it downed trees and power lines as it slowly crossed the pennisula .
Revised:  Packing 80 mph winds, it downed trees and power lines as it slowly crossed the peninsula .
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Original:  It was operated by the Air Methods Corporation, which operates emergency medical helicopters.
Revised:  It was operated by the Air Methods Corporation, which flies emergency medical helicopters.
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Original:  Earlier, a light airplane crashed two miles from Delaware, Ohio, killing the only person on board, city councilman James Moore  
Revised:  Earlier, a light airplane crashed two miles from Delaware, Ohio, killing the only person on board, city councilman James Moore . 
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Original:  The crash occurred at 1.42 p.m. Arizona time (21:42 UTC) at the intersection of Glenn Street and Park Avenue.
Revised:  The crash occurred at 1:42 p.m. Arizona time (21:42 UTC) at the intersection of Glenn Street and Park Avenue.
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Original:  Earlier, a light airplane crashed two miles from Delaware, Ohio , killing the only person on board, city councilman James Moore .
Revised:  Earlier, Delaware, Ohio , killing the only person on board, city councilman James Moore .
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Original: The Eurocopter AS350B3 is an aircraft type commonly used for medical evacuation (file photo) |280px A medical helicopter crashed into a fence just outside a house in Tucson, Arizona on Wednesday afternoon, killing all three people on board.
Revised: The Eurocopter AS350B3 is an aircraft type commonly used for medical evacuation (file photo) |280px A medical helicopter crashed into a fence just outside a house in Tucson, Arizona on Wednesday afternoon, killing all three crew members on board.
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Original:  It was operated by the  Air Methods Corporation, which flies emergency medical helicopters.
Revised:  It was operated by the Air Methods Corporation, which specialises in flying emergency medical helicopters.
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Original:  "A visibly shaken Paul spoke out earlier today saying: 'As an octopus, I can claim some objectivity in my view  human affairs,' " Fitzgerald wrote.
Revised:  "A visibly shaken Paul spoke out earlier today saying: 'As an octopus, I can claim some objectivity in my view of human affairs,' " Fitzgerald wrote.
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Original:  The mollusk correctly predicted the outcome of Germany's seven matches and picked Spain over the Netherlands for the World Cup final.
Revised:  The mollusc correctly predicted the outcome of Germany's seven matches and picked Spain over the Netherlands for the World Cup final.
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Original:  Paul currently lives in a tank at the Oberhausen Sea Life Centre in Germany
Revised:  The mollusk currently lives in a tank at the Oberhausen Sea Life Centre in Germany
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Original:  The mollusk currently lives in a tank at the Oberhausen Sea Life Centre in Germany  
Revised:  The mollusk currently lives in a tank at the Oberhausen Sea Life Centre in Germany . 
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Original: Iranian president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad claims Paul the octopus , who correctly guessed the outcomes of eight matches of the World Cup, is a sign of decay of Western culture.
Revised: Iranian president Mahmoud Ahmadinejad claims , who correctly guessed the outcomes of eight matches of the World Cup, is a sign of decay of Western culture.
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