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Original:  ABC Australia reports of a man in Pakistan-administered Kashmir, who has been cut from aid, saying “ I find that we are alone now , we have nothing, We Are Finished” Choppers are the main lifeline of support , trucks unable to deliver relief supplies dues to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
Revised:  ABC Australia reports of a man in Pakistan-administered Kashmir, who has been cut from aid, saying " I find that we are alone now , we have nothing, We Are Finished” Choppers are the main lifeline of support , trucks unable to deliver relief supplies dues to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
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Original:  ABC Australia reports of a man in Pakistan-administered Kashmir, who has been cut from aid, saying “ I find that we are alone now , we have nothing, We Are Finished” Choppers are the main lifeline of support , trucks unable to deliver relief supplies dues to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
Revised:  ABC Australia reports of a man in Pakistan-administered Kashmir, who has been cut from aid, saying “ I find that we are alone now . We have nothing. We are finished." Choppers are the main lifeline of support , trucks unable to deliver relief supplies dues to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
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Original:  ABC Australia reports of a man in Pakistan-administered Kashmir, who has been cut from aid, saying “ I find that we are alone now , we have nothing, We Are Finished” Choppers are the main lifeline of support , trucks unable to deliver relief supplies dues to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
Revised:  ABC Australia reports of a man in Pakistan-administered Kashmir, who has been cut from aid, saying “ I find that we are alone now , we have nothing, We Are Finished” Choppers are the main lifeline of support ; trucks unable to deliver relief supplies dues to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
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Original:  ABC Australia reports of a man in Pakistan-administered Kashmir, who has been cut from aid, saying “ I find that we are alone now , we have nothing, We Are Finished” Choppers are the main lifeline of support , trucks unable to deliver relief supplies dues to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
Revised:  ABC Australia reports of a man in Pakistan-administered Kashmir, who has been cut from aid, saying “ I find that we are alone now , we have nothing, We Are Finished” Choppers are the main lifeline of support , trucks unable to deliver relief supplies due to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
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Original:  The more snow, the least able are aid agencies making there way to those in the direst need.
Revised:  The more snow, the less able aid agencies are to make their way to those in the direst need.
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Original:  Jan Vandemoortele, U.N. Resident Coordinator for Pakistan, said key roads into the quake zone have been reopened, as 30 countries including Australia, France, Japan, Jordan, China, Russia, Iran, Syria and the US provide assistance in the form of money, to doctors, tents, blankets, and disaster relief teams.
Revised:  Jan Vandemoortele, U.N. Resident Coordinator for Pakistan, said key roads into the quake zone have been reopened, as 30 countries including Australia, France, Japan, Jordan, China, Russia, Iran, Syria and the US provide assistance in the form of money, doctors, tents, blankets, and disaster relief teams.
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Original: The measure of human suffering can’t just be measured in the death toll, which officially stands at 23,000, but also in the 4 million who have been made homeless, hungary and cold with 1 million in actute need, facing certain death without outside assistance.
Revised: The measure of human suffering can’t just be measured in the death toll, which officially stands at 23,000, but also in the 4 million who have been made homeless, hungary and cold with 1 million in acute need, facing certain death without outside assistance.
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Original:  trucks  unable to deliver relief supplies due to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
Revised:  trucks are unable to deliver relief supplies due to looting and general mayhem on the ground.
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Original: The measure of human suffering can’t just be measured in the death toll, which officially stands at 23,000, but also in the 4 million who have been made homeless, hungary and cold with 1 million in acute need, facing certain death without outside assistance.
Revised: The measure of human suffering can’t just be measured in the death toll, which officially stands at 23,000, but also in the 4 million who have been made homeless, hungry, and cold with 1 million in acute need, facing certain death without outside assistance.
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Original:  In Indian-ruled Kashmir, authorities say at least 1,300 people are known to have died, but officials fear the number will rise.
Revised:  In the Indian state of Jammu Kashmir, authorities say at least 1,300 people are known to have died, but officials fear the number will rise.
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Original: The measure of human suffering can ’ t just be measured in the death toll, which officially stands at 23,000, but also in the 4 million who have been made homeless, hungry, and cold with 1 million in acute need, facing certain death without outside assistance.
Revised: The measure of human suffering can ' t just be measured in the death toll, which officially stands at 23,000, but also in the 4 million who have been made homeless, hungry, and cold with 1 million in acute need, facing certain death without outside assistance.
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Original:   Kanaan, had been under investigation two weeks earlier by a United Nations team probing the assassination of former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik al-Hariri.
Revised:  "If indeed there is a Syrian national implicated in it, he would be considered a traitor and most severely punished," the President said. Kanaan, had been under investigation two weeks earlier by a United Nations team probing the assassination of former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik al-Hariri.
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Original:  "If indeed there is a Syrian national implicated in it, he would be considered a traitor and most severely punished," the President said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Kanaan , had been under investigation two weeks earlier by a United Nations team probing the assassination of former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik al-Hariri.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Kanaan had been under investigation two weeks earlier by a United Nations team probing the assassination of former Lebanese Prime Minister Rafik al-Hariri.
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Original:   Kanaan was Syria's  powerful intelligence chief in Lebanon, which was ruled by Syria until its military withdrawal earlier this year.
Revised:  Kanaan was Syria's most powerful intelligence chief in Lebanon, which was ruled by Syria until its military withdrawal earlier this year.
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Original:  The United States froze Kanaan's assets in the country during July saying he had aided terrorism in Lebanon  
Revised:  The United States froze Kanaan's assets in the country during July saying he had aided terrorism in Lebanon . 
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Original: Adnan Wirawan, the laywer of Martin Stephens from Wollongong, says his client has been unfairly accussed as the ring leader of the alleged conspiracy . "He's a human suitcase... he was being told what to do , " Stephens' mother, Michelle, was in court for her son's first appearance and says she will support him throughout his trial . "I'm here to support my son, and I love him and I believe in him.
Revised: Adnan Wirawan, the laywer of Martin Stephens from Wollongong, says his client has been unfairly accussed as the ring leader of the alleged conspiracy . "He's a human suitcase... he was being told what to do . " Stephens' mother, Michelle, was in court for her son's first appearance and says she will support him throughout his trial . "I'm here to support my son, and I love him and I believe in him.
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Original: Adnan Wirawan, the laywer of Martin Stephens from Wollongong, says his client has been unfairly accussed as the ring leader of the alleged conspiracy . "He's a human suitcase... he was being told what to do , " Stephens' mother, Michelle, was in court for her son's first appearance and says she will support him throughout his trial . "I'm here to support my son, and I love him and I believe in him.
Revised: Adnan Wirawan, the laywer of Martin Stephens from Wollongong, says his client has been unfairly accussed as the ring leader of the alleged conspiracy . "He's a human suitcase... he was being told what to do , " Stephens' mother, Michelle, was in court for her son's first appearance and says she will support him throughout his trial : "I'm here to support my son, and I love him and I believe in him.
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Original:  And that's all I can say ," she said.=
Revised:  And that's all I can say .
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Original: Around one third of the US crude oil and one fifth of the natural gas outputs in Mexico still remain close due to hurricane-related damage.
Revised: Around one third of the US crude oil and one fifth of the natural gas outputs in Mexico still remain closed due to hurricane-related damage.
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Original: USA -You might have to be digging your pocket even more now for your heating bills.
Revised: You might have to be digging your pocket even more now for your heating bills.
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Original:  A  government report was issued on Wednesday , predicting the rise of heating bills due to colder temperatures and impacts Hurricanes Rita and Katrina had on the nation's energy production.
Revised:  A US government report was issued on Wednesday , predicting the rise of heating bills due to colder temperatures and impacts Hurricanes Rita and Katrina had on the nation's energy production.
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Original:  A  government report was issued on Wednesday , predicting the rise of heating bills due to colder temperatures and impacts Hurricanes Rita and Katrina had on the nation's energy production.
Revised:  A government report was issued Wednesday predicting the rise of heating bills due to colder temperatures and impacts Hurricanes Rita and Katrina had on the nation's energy production.
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Original:  In the case of colder-than-expected weather, an increase of 66\% will be what households have to pay .
Revised:  In the case of colder-than-expected weather, an increase of 66\% in household heating costs is likely .
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Original:  In typical weather, the prices will rise about 47.6\%.
Revised:  In typical weather, prices will rise about 47.6\%.
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Original: You might have to be digging your pocket even more now for your heating bills.
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Original:  NOAA's | 2005-2006 U.S. Winter Outlook calls for warmer-than-normal temperatures across much of the central and western United States, including Alaska and Hawaii.
Revised:  NOAA's 2005-2006 U.S. Winter Outlook calls for warmer-than-normal temperatures across much of the central and western United States, including Alaska and Hawaii.
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Original: Smith is accused in the June 4th deaths of Reda Lecheheb and Sidali Melal on Leagrave Road.
Revised: Smith is accused in the June 4 deaths of Reda Lecheheb and Sidali Melal on Leagrave Road.
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Original:  The crash was investigated by the Independant Police Complainst Commission (IPCC).
Revised:  The crash was investigated by the Independent Police Complaints Commission (IPCC).
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Original:  The IPCC said yesterday that Smith will appear before St Albans Magistrates' Court on February 9th
Revised:  The IPCC said yesterday that Smith will appear before St Albans Magistrates' Court on February 9
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Original:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the man behind Baker Street was laid to rest in the cathedral where he married, less than a mile from his birthplace.
Revised:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the man behind Baker Street was laid to rest in the same place where he married, less than a mile from his birthplace.
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Original:  The cathedral nearly reached its capacity of 1000 as hundreds turned out on the frosty morning as the man behind Baker Street was laid to rest in the same place where he married, less than a mile from his birthplace.
Revised:  The cathedral nearly reached its capacity of 1000 as hundreds turned out on the frosty morning as the man behind Baker Street was laid to rest in the cathedral where he married, less than a mile from his birthplace.
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Original:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the man behind Baker Street was laid to rest in the cathedral where he married  , less than a mile from his birthplace.
Revised:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the man behind Baker Street was laid to rest in where he married , less than a mile from his birthplace.
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Original:  After the funeral members of the public gave Rafferty his last applause as his cortege departed St Mirin's Cathedral , which is also a mile from Rafferty's former school, St Mirin's Academy.
Revised:  After the funeral members of the public gave Rafferty his last applause as his cortege departed the cathedral , which is also a mile from Rafferty's former school, St Mirin's Academy.
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Original:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the  man behind Baker Street was laid to rest in where he married - St Mirin's Cathedral, less than a mile from his birthplace.
Revised:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the man behind Baker Street in the church where he married - St Mirin's Cathedral, less than a mile from his birthplace.
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Original:  Born on Underwood Lane in Glenburn, Paisley, Rafferty started performing in local folk clubs in the 1960s before teaming up with Billy Connolly to form The Humblebums.
Revised:  Born on Underwood Lane in the west end of Paisley, Rafferty started performing in local folk clubs in the 1960s before teaming up with Billy Connolly to form The Humblebums.
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Original:  Father John Tormey led the Requiem Mass, saying Rafferty "was very much aware of the spiritual element and you will find that in his songs."
Revised:  Monsignor John Tormey led the Requiem Mass, saying Rafferty "was very much aware of the spiritual element and you will find that in his songs."
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Original:  The cathedral where Rafferty's funeral was held Rafferty spent his entire life dealing with alcohol use .
Revised:  The cathedral where Rafferty's funeral was held Rafferty spent his entire life dealing with alcohol abuse .
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Original: Longterm friend John Byrne (Scottish playwright) , an artist and playwright, delivered a eulogy.
Revised: Longterm friend John Byrne , an artist and playwright, delivered a eulogy.
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Original:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the Requiem Mass was celebrated for the man behind Baker Street in the church where he married - St Mirin's Cathedral, less than a mile from his birthplace.
Revised:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the man behind Baker Street in the church where he married - St Mirin's Cathedral, less than a mile from his birthplace.
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Original:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the Requiem Mass was celebrated for the man behind Baker Street in the church where he married - St Mirin's Cathedral, less than a mile from his birthplace.
Revised:  Over 400 turned out on the frosty morning as the Requiem Mass was celebrated for the man behind Baker Street was laid to rest in where he married - St Mirin's Cathedral, less than a mile from his birthplace.
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Original:  Monsignor John Tormey led the Requiem Mass, saying Rafferty "was very much aware of the spiritual element and you will find that in his songs."
Revised:  Father John Tormey led the Requiem Mass, saying Rafferty "was very much aware of the spiritual element and you will find that in his songs."
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Original:  The cathedral where Rafferty's funeral was held Rafferty spent his entire life dealing with alcohol abuse .
Revised:  The cathedral where Rafferty's funeral was held Rafferty spent his entire life dealing with alcohol use .
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Original:  After the funeral members of the public gave Rafferty his last applause as his cortege departed the cathedral, which is also a half mile from Rafferty's former school, St Mirin's Academy.
Revised:  After the funeral members of the public gave Rafferty his last applause as his cortege departed the cathedral, which is also a mile from Rafferty's former school, St Mirin's Academy.
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Original:  Instant messaging  or IM as it commonly known, is now becoming an increasing popular communication service, mainly because of the speed of communication which almost equals regular conversation.
Revised:  Instant messaging , or IM as it commonly known, is now becoming an increasing popular communication service, mainly because of the speed of communication which almost equals regular conversation.
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Original:  Instant messaging  or IM as it commonly known, is now becoming an increasing popular communication service, mainly because of the speed of communication which almost equals regular conversation.
Revised:  Instant messaging or IM as it commonly known, is becoming an increasingly popular communication service, mainly because of the speed of communication which almost equals regular conversation.
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Original:  This movement will allow the companies to compete against the popular instant messaging service America Online (AOL), and Google Talk, Google's relatively new instant messaging service that was open to the public on September.
Revised:  The agreement will allow the companies to compete against the popular instant messaging service America Online (AOL), and Google Talk, Google's relatively new instant messaging service that was open to the public on September.
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Original:  This movement will allow the companies to compete against the popular instant messaging service America Online (AOL), and Google Talk, Google's relatively new instant messaging service that was open to the public on September.
Revised:  This movement will allow the companies to compete against the popular AOL Instant Messenger service (AOL), and Google Talk, Google's relatively new instant messaging service that was open to the public on September.
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Original:  This movement will allow the companies to compete against the popular instant messaging service America Online (AOL), and Google Talk, Google's relatively new instant messaging service that was open to the public on September.
Revised:  This movement will allow the companies to compete against the popular instant messaging service America Online (AOL), and Google Talk, Google's relatively new instant messaging service that was opened to the public on September.
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Original:  The companies said that this relationship is the fruit of many years of neogotiation . AOL, until now, had been able to move and develop the market at their own pace.
Revised:  The companies said that this relationship is the fruit of many years of negotiation . AOL, until now, had been able to move and develop the market at their own pace.
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Original:  The companies said that this relationship is the fruit of many years of neogotiation . AOL, until now, had been able to move and develop the market at their own pace.
Revised:  The companies said that this relationship is the fruit of many years of neogotiation . Until now, AOL has been able to move and develop the market at their own pace.
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Original:  The companies said that this relationship is the fruit of many years of neogotiation . AOL, until now, had been able to move and develop the market at their own pace.
Revised:  The companies said that this relationship is the fruit of many years of neogotiation . AOL, until now, had been able to move and develop the IM market at its own pace.
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Original:  The total number of users , Yahoo! and Microsoft combined, will be able to rival the number of AOL's customers.
Revised:  The number of users , Yahoo! and Microsoft combined, will be able to rival the number of AOL's customers.
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Original:  The total number of users , Yahoo! and Microsoft combined, will be able to rival the number of AOL's customers.
Revised:  The total number of users of the Yahoo! and Microsoft combined, will be able to rival the number of AOL's customers.
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Original:  The total number of users , Yahoo! and Microsoft combined, will be able to rival the number of AOL's customers.
Revised:  The total number of users , Yahoo! and Microsoft services combined will rival the number of AOL's customers.
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Original:  Microsoft had previously held talks with AOL over possible partnerships with its instant messaging service, the also popular MSN Messenger .
Revised:  Microsoft had previously held talks with AOL over possible partnerships in the instant messaging field .
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Original:  However, it is unknownwhat point the talks are up to now
Revised:  However, the status of these negotiations is unknown
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Original: This move, announced on Wednesday, would mainly focus on earlier forms of instant messaging, like sending text messages to other people via the internet .
Revised: This move, announced on Wednesday, would mainly focus on earlier forms of instant messaging, like sending text messages to other people via the Internet .
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Original: Microsoft and Yahoo have agreed to make their instant messaging programs, Yahoo Mesenger and MSN Messenger, work together.
Revised: Microsoft and Yahoo have agreed to make their instant messaging programs, Yahoo Messenger and MSN Messenger, work together.
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Original:  However, the status of these negotiations is unknown  
Revised:  However, the status of these negotiations is unknown . 
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Original:  In an unforeseen decision, the premier of the Australian state , Tasmania , has resigned as leader of the governing Labor party.
Revised:  In an unforeseen decision, the Premier of the Australian state , Tasmania , has resigned as leader of the governing Labor party.
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Original:  In an unforeseen decision, the premier of the Australian state , Tasmania , has resigned as leader of the governing Labor party.
Revised:  In an unforeseen decision, the premier of the Australian state Tasmania has resigned as leader of the governing Labor party.
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Original:  Bartlett announced his resignation on the social-networking site Facebook to his followers at 3pm . Bartlett had stated that his resignation was for family reasons.
Revised:  Bartlett announced his resignation on the social-networking site Facebook at 3pm . Bartlett had stated that his resignation was for family reasons.
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Original:  Bartlett announced his resignation on the social-networking site Facebook to his followers at 3pm . Bartlett had stated that his resignation was for family reasons.
Revised:  Bartlett announced his resignation on the social-networking site Facebook to his followers at 3pm , citing family reasons.
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