wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Adm. Saeed Khan was the real person to take away big chuck of the deal because the deal was implemented in his tenure  . Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia R-Adm Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the Director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
Revised:  Adm. Saeed Khan was the real person to take away big chuck of the deal because the deal was implemented in his tenure " . Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia R-Adm Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the Director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
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Original:  Adm. Saeed Khan was the real person to take away big chuck of the deal because the deal was implemented in his tenure  . Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia R-Adm Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the Director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
Revised:  Adm. Saeed Khan was the real person to take away big chuck of the deal because the deal was implemented in his tenure . Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia R-Adm Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
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Original:  Iqbal also served on a command level, first serving as the Commander of the Karachi Coastal Command and Pakistan Fleet Command from 1994– 98.
Revised:  Iqbal also served on a command level, first serving as the commander of the Karachi Coastal Command and Pakistan Fleet Command from 1994– 98.
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Original:  In 1998, V-Adm.
Revised:  In 1998, 
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Original:  Iqbal decided to take the retirement from the Navy, and was eventually appointed as the Pakistan Ambassador to Tunisia , which he served until 2004.
Revised:  Iqbal decided to take retirement from the Navy, and was eventually appointed as the Pakistan Ambassador to Tunisia , which he served until 2004.
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Original:  Iqbal decided to take the retirement from the Navy, and was eventually appointed as the Pakistan Ambassador to Tunisia , which he served until 2004.
Revised:  Iqbal decided to take the retirement from the Navy, and was eventually appointed as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia until 2004.
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Original:  He continued serving in the Foreign Service despite having the dissenting and opposing view of military takeover of the civilian government by Chairman joint chiefs General Pervez Musharraf in 1999, and was asked to represent the government until the new appointment is confirmed . Politics with Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf In 2004, Iqbal returned to Pakistan and resided in his home in Lahore , eventually joining the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI)
Revised:  He continued serving in the Foreign Service despite facing opposing views of military takeover of the civilian government by Chairman joint chiefs General Pervez Musharraf in 1999, and was asked to represent the government until the new appointment is confirmed . Politics with Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf In 2004, Iqbal returned to Pakistan and resided in his home in Lahore , eventually joining the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI)
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Original:  He continued serving in the Foreign Service despite having the dissenting and opposing view of military takeover of the civilian government by Chairman joint chiefs General Pervez Musharraf in 1999, and was asked to represent the government until the new appointment is confirmed . Politics with Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf In 2004, Iqbal returned to Pakistan and resided in his home in Lahore , eventually joining the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI)
Revised:  He continued serving in the Foreign Service despite having the dissenting and opposing view of military takeover of the civilian government . Politics with Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf In 2004, Iqbal returned to Pakistan and resided in his home in Lahore , eventually joining the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI)
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Original:  He continued serving in the Foreign Service despite having the dissenting and opposing view of military takeover of the civilian government by Chairman joint chiefs General Pervez Musharraf in 1999, and was asked to represent the government until the new appointment is confirmed . Politics with Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf In 2004, Iqbal returned to Pakistan and resided in his home in Lahore , eventually joining the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI)
Revised:  He continued serving in the Foreign Service despite having the dissenting and opposing view of military takeover of the civilian government by Chairman joint chiefs General Pervez Musharraf in 1999, and was asked to represent the government until the new appointment is confirmed . Politics with Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf In 2004, Iqbal returned to Lahore where he joined the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI)
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Original:  for the cause of promoting the anti-corruption activism .
Revised:  .
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Original: In 2011, he criticized the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt down Osama bin Laden.
Revised: In 2011, he opposed the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt down Osama bin Laden.
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Original: In 2011, he criticized the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt down Osama bin Laden.
Revised: In 2011, he criticized the Pakistan military's failure of locating the nature of the real estate in Abbottabad where the United States eventually conducted an operation to hunt Osama bin Laden.
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Original:  At one occasion, he was once the vice-chairman of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI) but resigned from his position as well as leaving the party in protest when Khurshid Kasuri, the politician with views towards supporting Pervez Musharraf, joined the party in his place .
Revised:  While serving as Vice-Chairman of Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI) but resigned from his position as well as leaving the party in protest when Khurshid Kasuri, the politician with views towards supporting Pervez Musharraf, joined the party in his place .
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Original:  At one occasion, he was once the vice-chairman of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI) but resigned from his position as well as leaving the party in protest when Khurshid Kasuri, the politician with views towards supporting Pervez Musharraf, joined the party in his place .
Revised:  At one occasion, he was once the vice-chairman of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI) , he resigned from his position as well as leaving the party in protest when Khurshid Kasuri, the politician with views towards supporting Pervez Musharraf, joined the party in his place .
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Original:  At one occasion, he was once the vice-chairman of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI) but resigned from his position as well as leaving the party in protest when Khurshid Kasuri, the politician with views towards supporting Pervez Musharraf, joined the party in his place .
Revised:  At one occasion, he was once the vice-chairman of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI) but resigned from his position and left the party in protest when Khurshid Kasuri, the politician with views towards supporting Pervez Musharraf, joined the party in his place .
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Original:  At one occasion, he was once the vice-chairman of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI) but resigned from his position as well as leaving the party in protest when Khurshid Kasuri, the politician with views towards supporting Pervez Musharraf, joined the party in his place .
Revised:  At one occasion, he was once the vice-chairman of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf (PTI) but resigned from his position as well as leaving the party in an effort to oppose Khurshid Kasuri's support for Pervez Musharraf .
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Original:  He is currently residing in Lahore, and had voiced to support the trial against Pervez Musharraf for illegally overtaking the civilian government in 1999.
Revised:  He is currently residing in Lahore, and has raised his concerns about the trials against Pervez Musharraf for illegally overtaking the civilian government in 1999.
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Original:  He also called for opening the parliamentary commission on investigating the Kargil incursion and introspection in the causes of the Karil misadventure.
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Original: He is known for his contribution against civilian control of the army and opposed the military military takeover of the in 1999 of the civilian government in 1999.
Revised: He is known for his contribution against civilian control of the army and opposed the military takeover of the in 1999 of the civilian government in 1999.
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Original: He is known for his contribution against civilian control of the army and opposed the military military takeover of the in 1999 of the civilian government in 1999.
Revised: He is known for his contribution against civilian control of the army and opposed the military military takeover of the civilian government in 1999.
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Original:  He participated in the Indo-Pakistani war of 1965 with India as an officer abroad on a surface warship.
Revised:  He participated in the Indo-Pakistani war of 1965 India as an officer abroad on a surface warship.
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Original:  He participated in the Indo-Pakistani war of 1965 with India as an officer abroad on a surface warship.
Revised:  He participated in the Indo-Pakistani war of 1965 with India as an officer on a surface warship.
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Original:  In 1971, Lt.
Revised:  In 1971, 
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Original:  After the 1971 Indo-Pakistani wars and conflicts with India, Iqbal attended the National Defence University in Islamabad where he obtained  MSc. in Strategic studies.
Revised:  After the 1971 Indo-Pakistani wars and conflicts with India, Iqbal attended the National Defence University in Islamabad where he obtained an MSc. in Strategic studies.
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Original:  War and command appointments in the Navy From 1983–86, Cdr.
Revised:  War and command appointments in the Navy From 1983–86, 
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Original:  In 1989, Captain Iqbal assumed the command of the PNS Badr where he served as an commanding officer until the warship was returned to the United States.
Revised:  In 1989, Captain Iqbal assumed the command of the PNS Badr where he served as a commanding officer until the warship was returned to the United States.
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Original:  In 1990–1991, Captain Iqbal was posted with the Ministry of Defence (MoD) and was selected to serve as a naval adviser at the High Commission of Pakistan in New Delhi.
Revised:  In 1990–1991, Iqbal was posted with the Ministry of Defence (MoD) and was selected to serve as a naval adviser at the High Commission of Pakistan in New Delhi.
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Original:  He served as a commanding office command of the elite Special Services Group Navy until he  appointed as the director naval intelligence in 1992.
Revised:  He served as a commanding officerof the elite Special Services Group Navy until he appointed as the director naval intelligence in 1992.
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Original:  He served as a commanding office command of the elite Special Services Group Navy until he  appointed as the director naval intelligence in 1992.
Revised:  He served as a commanding office command of the elite Special Services Group Navy until he was appointed as the director naval intelligence in 1992.
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Original:  Based on an accidental tip and reference received in sting intelligence , R-Adm.
Revised:  Based on an accidental tip and reference received in sting intelligence R-Adm.
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Original:  R-Adm. Iqbal eventually met with Zafar Iqbal in Karachi and arrested him to reveal the information of the parties that were being paid to the public and military officials.
Revised:  Iqbal eventually met with Zafar Iqbal in Karachi and arrested him to reveal the information of the parties that were being paid to the public and military officials.
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Original:  R-Adm. Iqbal briefed his findings to Cdre.
Revised:  Iqbal briefed his findings to Cdre.
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Original:  Shahid Ashraf related to  investigations.
Revised:  Shahid Ashraf related to the investigations.
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Original:  While commenting on his service-promotion, Javed Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reporters that "Adm.
Revised:  While commenting on his service-promotion, Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reporters that "Adm.
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Original:  Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia R-Adm Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
Revised:  Staff appointment and ambassadorship to Tunisia Iqbal was appointed as the DCNS (Personnel) at the Navy NHQ and was later posted as the director of the Joint Training (DG Trig.) at the JS HQ in Rawalpindi.
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Original:  Apart from serving as the commander of the Karachi Coastal Command and Pakistan Fleet Command from 1994–98, V-Adm.
Revised:  Apart from serving as the commander of the Karachi Coastal Command and Pakistan Fleet Command from 1994–98, 
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Original:  In 1998, Iqbal decided to take retirement from the Navy, and was eventually appointed as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia until 2004.
Revised:  In 1998, Iqbal decided to take retirement from the Navy, and was eventually appointed as the Ambassador of Pakistan to Tunisia until 2004.
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Original:  Through the party platform, he supported the civilian control of the military and writ of the Constitution in the country.
Revised:  Through the party platform, he supported the civilian control of the military and writ of the constitution in the country.
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Original:  b. 31 March 1942) , is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
Revised:  b. 31 March 1942) is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
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Original:  b. 31 March 1942) , is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
Revised:  b. 31 March 1942) , is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and diplomat who served as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
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Original:  b. 31 March 1942) , is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
Revised:  b. 31 March 1942) , is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Ambassador of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
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Original:  b. 31 March 1942) , is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
Revised:  b. 31 March 1942) , is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 to 2004.
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Original:   Government of Pakistan conferred  Sitara-e-Basalat and Hilal-i-Imtiaz awards on Iqbal for his contribution to the nation.
Revised:  The Government of Pakistan conferred Sitara-e-Basalat and Hilal-i-Imtiaz awards on Iqbal for his contribution to the nation.
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Original:   Government of Pakistan conferred  Sitara-e-Basalat and Hilal-i-Imtiaz awards on Iqbal for his contribution to the nation.
Revised:  Government of Pakistan conferred the Sitara-e-Basalat and Hilal-i-Imtiaz awards on Iqbal for his contribution to the nation.
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Original:   Government of Pakistan conferred  Sitara-e-Basalat and Hilal-i-Imtiaz awards on Iqbal for his contribution to the nation.
Revised:  Government of Pakistan conferred Sitara-e-Basalat and Hilal-i-Imtiaz awards on Iqbal for his contributions to the nation.
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Original:  He is known for his contribution against civilian control of the army and opposed the military takeover of the civilian government in 1999.
Revised:  He is known for his support for civilian control of the army and opposed the military takeover of the civilian government in 1999.
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Original:  He is known for his contribution against civilian control of the army and opposed the military takeover of the civilian government in 1999.
Revised:  He is known for his contribution against civilian control of the army and opposition to the military takeover of the civilian government in 1999.
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Original:  He is actively supporting the anti-corruption activities, and has served as the presiding leader of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf for this cause.
Revised:  He actively supports anti-corruption activities, and has served as the presiding leader of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf for this cause.
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Original:  He is actively supporting the anti-corruption activities, and has served as the presiding leader of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf for this cause.
Revised:  He is actively supporting the anti-corruption activities, and has served as the leader of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf for this cause.
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Original:  Biography Javaid Iqbal was born on 31 March 1942 in Jalandhar, Punjab  in British Indian.
Revised:  Biography Javaid Iqbal was born on 31 March 1942 in Jalandhar, Punjab , in British Indian.
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Original:  He subsequently received his training at the Royal Naval Academy in England and the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
Revised:  He received training at the Royal Naval Academy in England and the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
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Original:  He was commissioned in 1964 and was appointed in the Pakistan Navy as a Sub-Lieutenant posted at the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy.
Revised:  He was commissioned in 1964 and was appointed in the Pakistan Navy as a Sub-Lieutenant posted at the Executive Branch of the Navy.
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Original:  He participated in the Indo-Pakistani war of 1965 India as an officer on a surface warship.
Revised:  He participated in the Indo-Pakistani War of 1965 India as an officer on a surface warship.
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Original:  He participated in the Indo-Pakistani war of 1965 India as an officer on a surface warship.
Revised:  He participated in the Indo-Pakistani war of 1965 as an officer on a surface warship.
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Original:  In 1966, he entered the elite Navy Special Service Group and was selected to be trained with the U.S. Navy SEALs in the United States and was trained as a frogman  where he learned skills in high-altitude parachuting and scuba diving.
Revised:  In 1966, he entered the elite Navy Special Service Group and was selected to be trained with the U.S. Navy SEALs in the United States as a frogman where he learned skills in high-altitude parachuting and scuba diving.
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Original:  In 1966, he entered the elite Navy Special Service Group and was selected to be trained with the U.S. Navy SEALs in the United States and was trained as a frogman  where he learned skills in high-altitude parachuting and scuba diving.
Revised:  In 1966, he entered the elite Navy Special Service Group and was selected to be trained with the U.S. Navy SEALs in the United States and was trained as a frogman , where he learned skills in high-altitude parachuting and scuba diving.
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Original:  In 1966, he entered the elite Navy Special Service Group and was selected to be trained with the U.S. Navy SEALs in the United States and was trained as a frogman  where he learned skills in high-altitude parachuting and scuba diving.
Revised:  In 1966, he entered the elite Navy Special Service Group and was selected to be trained with the U.S. Navy SEALs in the United States and was trained as a frogman where he learned high-altitude parachuting and scuba diving.
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Original:  After the 1971 Indo-Pakistani wars and conflicts with India , Iqbal attended the National Defence University in Islamabad  where he obtained an MSc. in Strategic studies .
Revised:  After the 1971 war , Iqbal attended the National Defence University in Islamabad where he obtained an MSc. in Strategic studies .
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Original:  After the 1971 Indo-Pakistani wars and conflicts with India , Iqbal attended the National Defence University in Islamabad  where he obtained an MSc. in Strategic studies .
Revised:  After the 1971 Indo-Pakistani wars and conflicts with India , Iqbal attended the National Defence University in Islamabad , where he obtained an MSc. in Strategic studies .
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Original:  After the 1971 Indo-Pakistani wars and conflicts with India , Iqbal attended the National Defence University in Islamabad  where he obtained an MSc. in Strategic studies .
Revised:  After the 1971 Indo-Pakistani wars and conflicts with India , Iqbal attended the National Defence University in Islamabad where he obtained an MSc. in Strategic Studies .
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Original:  War and command appointments in the Navy From 1983 –86 , Iqbal was posted with the Pakistan Armed Forces–Middle East  where he served as a naval adviser to the Qatari Emiri Navy and  later, as military adviser to the Qatari government.
Revised:  War and command appointments in the Navy From 1983 to 1986 , Iqbal was posted with the Pakistan Armed Forces–Middle East where he served as a naval adviser to the Qatari Emiri Navy and later, as military adviser to the Qatari government.
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Original:  War and command appointments in the Navy From 1983 –86 , Iqbal was posted with the Pakistan Armed Forces–Middle East  where he served as a naval adviser to the Qatari Emiri Navy and  later, as military adviser to the Qatari government.
Revised:  War and command appointments in the Navy From 1983 –86 , Iqbal was posted with the Pakistan Armed Forces–Middle East , where he served as a naval adviser to the Qatari Emiri Navy and later, as military adviser to the Qatari government.
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Original:  War and command appointments in the Navy From 1983 –86 , Iqbal was posted with the Pakistan Armed Forces–Middle East  where he served as a naval adviser to the Qatari Emiri Navy and  later, as military adviser to the Qatari government.
Revised:  War and command appointments in the Navy From 1983 –86 , Iqbal was posted with the Pakistan Armed Forces–Middle East where he served as a naval adviser to the Qatari Emiri Navy and , later, as military adviser to the Qatari government.
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Original:  In 1989, Captain Iqbal assumed the command of the PNS Badr  where he served as a commanding officer until the warship was returned to the United States.
Revised:  In 1989, Captain Iqbal assumed the command of the PNS Badr , where he served as a commanding officer until the warship was returned to the United States.
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Original:  In 1992, he was promoted as one-star admiral, Cdre. . He served as a commanding officerof the elite Special Services Group Navy until he was appointed as the director naval intelligence in 1992.
Revised:  In 1992, he was promoted as one-star admiral, Cdre. He served as a commanding officerof the elite Special Services Group Navy until he was appointed as the director naval intelligence in 1992.
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