wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  At his sentencing he was placed on the sex offenders register for 5 years and was also given a three-year community order and ordered to pay over £1,000 in URL
Revised:  At his sentencing he was placed on the sex offenders register for 5 years and was also given a three-year community order and ordered to pay over £1,000 in costs.
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Original: William Deng was of Dinka origin, and was born in Tonj, then in Bahr al-Ghazal state .
Revised: William Deng was of Dinka origin, and was born in Tonj, then in Bahr al-Ghazal Provinc .
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Original:  William Deng believed in  Democratic Socialism, and in solidarity of African Sudanese in resisting Arab colonialism.
Revised:  William Deng believed in Democratic Socialism, and in solidarity with African Sudanese in resisting Arab colonialism.
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Original:  William Deng believed in  Democratic Socialism, and in solidarity of African Sudanese in resisting Arab colonialism.
Revised:  William Deng believed in Democratic Socialism, and in solidarity of African Sudanese in resistance to Arab colonialism.
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Original:  William Deng and Joseph Oduho published the first formal declaration of Southern Sudan objectives in The Problem of the Southern Sudan (1962).
Revised:  William Deng and Joseph Oduho co-authored the first book ever in 1962: " The Problem of the Southern Sudan (1962).
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Original:  The SANU leaders did manage to organize the military Wing of SANU, the Anya Nya, which began operating in Equatoria in 1963, conducting isolated raids and largely remaining independent of the politicians in Kampala .
Revised:  The SANU leaders did manage to organize the military Wing of SANU, the Anya Nya, which began operating in Equatoria in 1963, conducting isolated raids and largely responsible for military operations and targets .
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Original:  Although not a serious security threat , later attacks elsewhere and civilian demonstrations steadily eroded the authority of the military government.
Revised:  Although not a serious security threat and putting its weight behind the civilian demonstrations which were steadily challeging and eroding the alreading crumbling military government.
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Original:  In February 1965 William Deng split with the exiled SANUleaders and returned to Sudan, causing a split into SANU-inside and SANU-outside wings, with Deng leading the "inside " wing and Aggrey Jadein leading the "outside" wing . SANU was formally registered as a political party in Sudan at a rally in Omdurman on 11 April 1965 attended by about 2 ,000 southerners.
Revised:  In February 1965 William Deng split with the exiled SANUleaders and returned to Sudan, causing a split of SANU into two factions, one inside Sudan and the other outside Sudan. William Deng organised and registered SANU inside Sudan, after which he became its President. Aggrey Jadein, on the other hand, became the leader of SANU outside . SANU was formally registered as a political party in Sudan at a rally in Omdurman on 11 April 1965 attended by about 2 ,000 southerners.
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Original:  In February 1965 William Deng split with the exiled SANUleaders and returned to Sudan, causing a split into SANU-inside and SANU-outside wings, with Deng leading the "inside " wing and Aggrey Jadein leading the "outside" wing . SANU was formally registered as a political party in Sudan at a rally in Omdurman on 11 April 1965 attended by about 2 ,000 southerners.
Revised:  In February 1965 William Deng split with the exiled SANUleaders and returned to Sudan, causing a split into SANU-inside and SANU-outside wings, with Deng leading the "inside " wing and Aggrey Jadein leading the "outside" wing . SANU was formally registered as a political party in Sudan following a rally in Omdurman on 11 April 1965 attended by about 2 ,000 southerners.
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Original:  The exiled SANU leaders did not accept Deng's moderate approach, and formed the Azania Liberation Front in Kampala, Uganda.
Revised:  The exiled SANU leaders did not accept Deng's moderated approach, and formed the Azania Liberation Front in Kampala, Uganda.
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Original:  SANU-outside saw no case for retaining union with the north, while the Southern Front wanted a plebiscite to choose between autonomous rule, federation, unity or secession.
Revised:  SANU-outside saw no case for retaining union with the north, while the Southern Front wanted a plebiscite to choose between autonomous rule, unity, federatl arrangement or secession.
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Original: The   optimism in the south with the return to democracy quickly wore off as the new government under president  Mohamed Ahmed Mahgoub began a savage persecution of educated southerners in Khartoum and in the south.
Revised: The The optimism in the south with the return to democracy quickly wore off as the new government under president Mohamed Ahmed Mahgoub began a savage persecution of educated southerners in Khartoum and in the south.
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Original: The   optimism in the south with the return to democracy quickly wore off as the new government under president  Mohamed Ahmed Mahgoub began a savage persecution of educated southerners in Khartoum and in the south.
Revised: The optimism in the south for return to democracy quickly wore off as the new government under president Mohamed Ahmed Mahgoub began a savage persecution of educated southerners in Khartoum and in the south.
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Original:  Despite this, William Deng invested considerable time and effort trying to convince government leaders of the benefits of solving the north-south conflict.
Revised:  Despite this, William Deng invested considerable time and efforts, trying to convince government leaders of the benefits of solving the north-south conflict.
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Original:  If the stalemate were ended, military costs would drop and the south could supply the north with food, with enough left over for export.
Revised:  If the stalemate were ended, military costs would drop and the south could supply the north with food, with surplus for export.
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Original:  The Sudan government denied to have authorised the assassination.
Revised:  The Sudan government denied having authorised the assassination.
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Original:  No investigation was conducted .
Revised:  Although no investigation was conducted .
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Original: The Tatars' Rouran ancestors roamed modern-day Mongolia in summer and crossed the Gobi desert southwards in winter in search of pastures.
Revised: The Rourans, Tatars' putative ancestors, roamed modern-day Mongolia in summer and crossed the Gobi desert southwards in winter in search of pastures.
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Original:  (2019) "'Nationes que se Tartaros appellant': An Exploration of the Historical Problem of the Usage of the Ethnonyms Tatar and Mongol in Medieval Sources" in Golden Horde Review 7 (3). p. 549-551, 560-561, 563 of pp. 545-567 Pow proposes that in fact the Mongolic-speaking tribes used the endonym Tatars during the first 30 to 40 years of the Mongol Empire's expansion, before self-identifying as Mongols, originally a dynastic-state label taken after the 12th-century Great Mongol State  大蒙古國);
Revised:  (2019) "'Nationes que se Tartaros appellant': An Exploration of the Historical Problem of the Usage of the Ethnonyms Tatar and Mongol in Medieval Sources" in Golden Horde Review 7 (3). p. 549-551, 560-561, 563 of pp. 545-567 Pow proposes that the Mongolic-speaking tribes used the endonym Tatars during the first 30 to 40 years of the Mongol Empire's expansion, before self-identifying as Mongols, originally a dynastic-state label taken after the 12th-century Great Mongol State 大蒙古國);
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Original:  (2019) "'Nationes que se Tartaros appellant': An Exploration of the Historical Problem of the Usage of the Ethnonyms Tatar and Mongol in Medieval Sources" in Golden Horde Review 7 (3). p. 549-551, 560-561, 563 of pp. 545-567 Pow proposes that in fact the Mongolic-speaking tribes used the endonym Tatars during the first 30 to 40 years of the Mongol Empire's expansion, before self-identifying as Mongols, originally a dynastic-state label taken after the 12th-century Great Mongol State  大蒙古國);
Revised:  (2019) "'Nationes que se Tartaros appellant': An Exploration of the Historical Problem of the Usage of the Ethnonyms Tatar and Mongol in Medieval Sources" in Golden Horde Review 7 (3). p. 549-551, 560-561, 563 of pp. 545-567 Pow proposes that in fact the Mongolic-speaking tribes used the endonym Tatars during the first 30 to 40 years of the Mongol Empire's expansion, before self-identifying as Mongols, originally a dynastic-state label taken after the 12th-century Great Mongol State ( 大蒙古國);
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Original:  Pow speculates that the name-change happened due to insecurities: either owing to the enemies held in contempt the name Tatars, or  the subjects used the endonym Tatars of Mongolic-speaking conquerors, or because rivalries among Genghis Khan's descendants necessitated the delineation of "in" and "out" groups.
Revised:  Pow speculates that the name-change happened due to insecurities: either because the enemies held in contempt the name Tatars, or the subjects used the endonym Tatars of Mongolic-speaking conquerors, or because rivalries among Genghis Khan's descendants necessitated the delineation of "in" and "out" groups.
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Original:  Pow speculates that the name-change happened due to insecurities: either owing to the enemies held in contempt the name Tatars, or  the subjects used the endonym Tatars of Mongolic-speaking conquerors, or because rivalries among Genghis Khan's descendants necessitated the delineation of "in" and "out" groups.
Revised:  Pow speculates that the name-change happened due to insecurities: either owing to the enemies held in contempt the name Tatars, or because the subjects used the endonym Tatars of Mongolic-speaking conquerors, or because rivalries among Genghis Khan's descendants necessitated the delineation of "in" and "out" groups.
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Original:  Later on, Turkic-speaking peoples of Dasht-i-Kipchak  adopted the endonym Tatars of their Mongolic-speaking conquerors , as a sign of political allegiance , before ultimately subsuming Mongolic-speaking conquerors culturally and linguistically.
Revised:  Later on, Turkic-speaking peoples of Dasht-i-Kipchak , as a sign of political allegiance, adopted the endonym Tatars of their Mongolic-speaking conquerors , as a sign of political allegiance , before ultimately subsuming Mongolic-speaking conquerors culturally and linguistically.
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Original:  Later on, Turkic-speaking peoples of Dasht-i-Kipchak  adopted the endonym Tatars of their Mongolic-speaking conquerors , as a sign of political allegiance , before ultimately subsuming Mongolic-speaking conquerors culturally and linguistically.
Revised:  Later on, Turkic-speaking peoples of Dasht-i-Kipchak adopted the endonym Tatars of their Mongolic-speaking conquerors , before ultimately subsuming Mongolic-speaking conquerors culturally and linguistically.
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Original: The Secret History of the Mongols: Translated Annotated, and with an Introduction by Urgunge Onon (2001). p. 53-54, 57, 61, 111-135, 205 Mongolian historian Urgunge Onon proposes that Mongols were initially known to Westerners as Tatars because Tatars were compelled to fight as vanguards before the main body of Mongol cavalry & the ethnonym Tatars would then be transferred to all Mongols.
Revised: The Secret History of the Mongols: Translated Annotated, and with an Introduction by Urgunge Onon (2001). p. 53-54, 57, 61, 111-135, 205 Mongolian historian Urgunge Onon proposes that Mongols were initially known to Europeans as Tatars because Tatars were compelled to fight as vanguards before the main body of Mongol cavalry & the ethnonym Tatars would then be transferred to all Mongols.
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Original:  Xu proposed that "the main body of the Rouran were of Xiongnu origin" and Rourans' descendants, namely Da Shiwei (aka Tatars), contained Turkic elements to a great extent.
Revised:  Xu proposed that "the main body of the Rouran were of Xiongnu origin" and Rourans' descendants, namely Da Shiwei (aka Tatars), contained Turkic-speaking Xiongnu elements to a great extent.
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Original:  As Ushnitsky writes, the ethnonym "Tatars" was used by the Turks only to designate "strangers", that is, peoples who do not speak Turkic.
Revised:  As Ushnitsky writes, the ethnonym "Tatars" was used by the Turks only to designate "strangers", that is, peoples who did not speak Turkic.
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Original:  The Turkic tribes of their Mongol-speaking neighbors  also called "tat" or "tat-ar".
Revised:  The Turkic tribes living among their Mongol-speaking neighbors also called "tat" or "tat-ar".
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Original:  The Turkic tribes of their Mongol-speaking neighbors  also called "tat" or "tat-ar".
Revised:  The Turkic tribes of their Mongol-speaking neighbors were also called "tat" or "tat-ar".
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Original:  According to Bartold, obviously, the peoples of Mongolian origin who spoke the Mongolian language have always called themselves Tatars.
Revised:  According to Bartold, the peoples of Mongolian origin who spoke the Mongolian language have always called themselves Tatars.
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Original:  According to Bartold, obviously, the peoples of Mongolian origin who spoke the Mongolian language have always called themselves Tatars.
Revised:  According to Bartold, obviously, the peoples of Mongolian origin who spoke the Mongolian language had always called themselves Tatars.
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Original:  Pow speculates that the name-change was motivated by insecurities: either because the enemies held in contempt the name Tatars, or because the subjects used the endonym Tatars of Mongolic-speaking elites, or because rivalries among Genghis Khan's descendants necessitated the delineation of "in" and "out" groups.
Revised:  Pow speculates that the name-change was motivated by insecurities: either because the enemies held in contempt the name Tatars, or because the subjects used the endonym Tatars for Mongolic-speaking elites, or because rivalries among Genghis Khan's descendants necessitated the delineation of "in" and "out" groups.
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Original: Fuller , second son of Francis Fuller, nonconformist divine q. v. , and his wife Bridget , was born at Bristol, and entered at St. John's College, Cambridge, in 1687.
Revised: Fuller was the second son of Francis Fuller, nonconformist divine q. v. , and his wife Bridget , was born at Bristol, and entered at St. John's College, Cambridge, in 1687.
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Original: Fuller , second son of Francis Fuller, nonconformist divine q. v. , and his wife Bridget , was born at Bristol, and entered at St. John's College, Cambridge, in 1687.
Revised: Fuller , second son of Francis Fuller, nonconformist divine , and his wife Bridget , was born at Bristol, and entered at St. John's College, Cambridge, in 1687.
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Original: Fuller , second son of Francis Fuller, nonconformist divine q. v. , and his wife Bridget , was born at Bristol, and entered at St. John's College, Cambridge, in 1687.
Revised: Fuller , second son of Francis Fuller, nonconformist divine q. v. , and his wife Bridget . He was born at Bristol, and entered at St. John's College, Cambridge, in 1687.
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Original:  This led him to write a book on the use of exercise in the treatment of disease, called ‘ Medicina Gymnastica, or a Treatise concerning the power of Exercise with respect to the Animal Œconomy, and the great necessity of it in the Cure of several Distempers, ’ 1704.
Revised:  This led him to write a book on the use of exercise in the treatment of disease, called Medicina Gymnastica, or a Treatise concerning the power of Exercise with respect to the Animal Œconomy, and the great necessity of it in the Cure of several Distempers, ’ 1704.
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Original:  This led him to write a book on the use of exercise in the treatment of disease, called ‘ Medicina Gymnastica, or a Treatise concerning the power of Exercise with respect to the Animal Œconomy, and the great necessity of it in the Cure of several Distempers, ’ 1704.
Revised:  This led him to write a book on the use of exercise in the treatment of disease, called ‘ Medicina Gymnastica, or a Treatise concerning the power of Exercise with respect to the Animal Œconomy, and the great necessity of it in the Cure of several Distempers, 1704.
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Original:  Invasive front grading is useful as well in oral squamous cell carcinoma.
Revised:  Invasive-front grading is useful as well in oral squamous cell carcinoma.
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Original:  Grading of soft tissue sarcomas: from histological to molecular assessment. 2014
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Original:  These are in decreasing differentiation order but increasing in number: Pattern 1 is the most differentiated and pattern 5 is the least differentiated.
Revised:  These are in decreasing differentiation order but increasing in number: Pattern 1 is the most differentiated and pattern 5 being the least differentiated.
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Original:  (with less differentiation in "cancer" typically being a worse prognosis.
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Original:  Differentiation is the degree in which the tissue, usually referring to the neoplasm, resembles the native tissue.
Revised:  Differentiation is the degree to which the tissue, usually referring to the neoplasm, resembles the native tissue.
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Original:  Differentiation is the degree in which the tissue, usually referring to the neoplasm, resembles the native tissue.
Revised:  Differentiation is the degree in which the tissue, in this case the tumor, resembles native tissue.
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Original:  Gleason realized that prostatic carcinomas have multiple patterns and that the prognosis of prostatic carcinoma was split between the most prevalent and the second most prevalent neoplasm pattern.
Revised:  This recognizes that prostatic carcinomas have multiple patterns and that the prognosis of prostatic carcinoma was split between the most prevalent and the second most prevalent neoplasm pattern.
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Original:  So using the Gleason system, the  most prevalent and second most prevalent pattern, if at least 5\% of the neoplasm , are added together equaling the overall Gleason score.
Revised:  So using the Gleason system, the most prevalent and second most prevalent patterns ( if at least 5\% of the neoplasm , are added together equaling the overall Gleason score.
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Original:  So using the Gleason system, the  most prevalent and second most prevalent pattern, if at least 5\% of the neoplasm , are added together equaling the overall Gleason score.
Revised:  So using the Gleason system, the most prevalent and second most prevalent pattern, if at least 5\% of the total) , are added together equaling the overall Gleason score.
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Original:  So using the Gleason system, the  most prevalent and second most prevalent pattern, if at least 5\% of the neoplasm , are added together equaling the overall Gleason score.
Revised:  So using the Gleason system, the most prevalent and second most prevalent pattern, if at least 5\% of the neoplasm , are added together to yield the overall Gleason score.
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Original:  If for example the most prevalent pattern/grade is 2, and the second most prevalent is a 1, then the Gleason score is 2+1=3.
Revised:  For example, if the most prevalent pattern/grade is 2, and the second most prevalent is a 1, then the Gleason score is 2+1=3.
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Original:  If for example the most prevalent pattern/grade is 2, and the second most prevalent is a 1, then the Gleason score is 2+1=3.
Revised:  If for example the most prevalent pattern/grade is 2, and the second most prevalent grade is 1, then the Gleason score is 2+1=3.
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Original:  If the neoplasm has only one pattern, the number of the pattern is doubled to obtain the score.
Revised:  If the neoplasm has only one pattern, the grade of that pattern is doubled to obtain the score.
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Original:  So a Gleason Score/Grade can only be between 2 and 10, there is no 0 or 1 by definition.
Revised:  So a Gleason Score/Grade can only be between 2 to 10, there is no 0 or 1 by definition.
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Original:  Although some evidence suggests that prostate cancers will become more aggressive over time, Gleason scores usually remain stable for a few years.
Revised:  Although some evidence suggests that prostate cancers will become more aggressive over time, Gleason scores typically remain stable for a few years.
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Original:  Although some evidence suggests that prostate cancers will become more aggressive over time, Gleason scores usually remain stable for a few years.
Revised:  Although some evidence suggests that prostate cancers will become more aggressive over time, Gleason scores usually remain stable for a several years.
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Original:  For example  a tumor is all pattern 1, the Gleason score would be 1+1=2.
Revised:  For example , if a tumor is all pattern 1, the Gleason score would be 1+1=2.
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Original:  For example  a tumor is all pattern 1, the Gleason score would be 1+1=2.
Revised:  For example a tumor is entirely grade 1, the Gleason score would be 1+1=2.
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Original:  Gleason scores range from 2 to 10 , there is no  0 or 1 by definition.
Revised:  Gleason scores range from 2 to 10 ; by definition there is no 0 or 1 by definition.
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Original:  Gleason scores range from 2 to 10 , there is no  0 or 1 by definition.
Revised:  Gleason scores range from 2 to 10 , there is no score of 0 or 1 by definition.
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Original:  Gleason scores range from 2 to 10 , there is no  0 or 1 by definition.
Revised:  Gleason scores range from 2 to 10 , there is no 0 or 1.
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Original:  Cytological differences between normal prostate to neoplastic glands are evident in changes to the typical two cell layers of the gland.
Revised:  Cytological differences between normal prostate and neoplastic glands are evident in changes to the typical two cell layers of the gland.
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Original:  Gleason 1 Gleason pattern 1 is the most well differentiated tumor pattern.
Revised:  Gleason 1 Gleason pattern 1 is the most well-differentiated tumor pattern.
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Original:  It is a well defined nodule of single/separate, closely/densely packed, back-to-back gland pattern that does not invade into adjacent healthy prostatic tissue.
Revised:  It is a well-defined nodule of single/separate, closely/densely packed, back-to-back gland pattern that does not invade into adjacent healthy prostatic tissue.
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Original:  The glands are round to oval shaped and proportionally large, comparing them to Gleason pattern 3 tumors, and are approximately equal in size and shape to one another.
Revised:  The glands are round to oval shaped and proportionally large, compared to to Gleason pattern 3 tumors, and are approximately equal in size and shape to one another.
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Original:  Gleason 2 Gleason 2 are fairly well circumscribed nodules of single, separate glands.
Revised:  Gleason 2 Gleason 2 is fairly well-circumscribed nodules of single, separate glands.
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Original:  Gleason 4 Gleason pattern 4 glands are no longer single/separated glands like those seen in pattern 1-3.
Revised:  Gleason 4 Gleason pattern 4 glands are no longer single/separated glands like those seen in patterns 1-3.
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Original: Therefore, in 2014 an international multidisciplinary conference  convened to revise the 2005 system.
Revised: Therefore, in 2014 an international multidisciplinary conference was convened to revise the 2005 system.
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