wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  A catheter may be in place for long periods of time (indwelling catheter) or removed after each use (intermittent catheterisation).
Revised:  A catheter may be in place for long periods of time (indwelling catheter) or torn off after each use (intermittent catheterisation).
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Original: Alfred James Tattersall Museum of New Zealand He moved to Samoa in 1886 to work as an assistant in the studio of J. Davis.
Revised: Alfred James Tattersall Museum of New Zealand He moved to Samoa in 1886 to work as an assistant in the studio of John Davis.
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Original:  When Davis died in 1893 Tattersall  over his studio and negative collection.
Revised:  When Davis died in 1893 Tattersall took over his studio and negative collection.
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Original: Early life and education Ahmad was born on 26 April 1932 in arain family inHisar, Punjab.
Revised: Early life and education Ahmad was born on 26 April 1932 in @ARAIN family inHisar, Punjab.
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Original: Early life and education Ahmad was born on 26 April 1932 in @ARAIN family inHisar, Punjab.
Revised: Early life and education Ahmad was born on 26 April 1932 in Arain family inHisar, Punjab.
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Original: Early life and education Ahmad was born on 26 April 1932 in Arain family inHisar , Punjab.
Revised: Early life and education Ahmad was born on 26 April 1932 in Arain family in Hisar , Punjab.
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Original: University of the Punjab faculty Category:20th-century Muslim scholars of Islam Category:Pakistani Sunni Muslim scholars of Islam Category:Recipients of Sitara-i-Imtiaz Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani  theologians Category:Quranic exegesis scholars Category:King Edward Medical University alumni Category:Pakistani people of Haryanvi descent Category:Muhajir people Category:Islamic television preachers Category:Pakistani conspiracy theorists Category:Ameers of Tanzeem-e-Isla
Revised: University of the Punjab faculty Category:20th-century Muslim scholars of Islam Category:Pakistani Sunni Muslim scholars of Islam Category:Recipients of Sitara-i-Imtiaz Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani scholars of Islam Category:Pakistani Islamic religious leaders Category:Pakistani theologians Category:Quranic exegesis scholars Category:King Edward Medical University alumni Category:Pakistani people of Haryanvi descent Category:Muhajir people Category:Islamic television preachers Category:Pakistani conspiracy theorists Category:Ameers of Tanzeem-e-Isla
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Original: University of the Punjab faculty Category:20th-century Muslim scholars of Islam Category:Pakistani Sunni Muslim scholars of Islam Category:Recipients of Sitara-i-Imtiaz Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani  theologians Category:Quranic exegesis scholars Category:King Edward Medical University alumni Category:Pakistani people of Haryanvi descent Category:Muhajir people Category:Islamic television preachers Category:Pakistani conspiracy theorists Category:Ameers of Tanzeem-e-Isla
Revised: University of the Punjab faculty Category:20th-century Muslim scholars of Islam Category:Pakistani Sunni Muslim scholars of Islam Category:Recipients of Sitara-i-Imtiaz Category:Pakistani scholars Category:Pakistani theologians Category:Quranic exegesis scholars Category:King Edward Medical University alumni Category:Pakistani people of Haryanvi descent Category:Muhajir people Category:Islamic television preachers Category:Ameers of Tanzeem-e-Isla
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Original: United Nations Security Council Resolution 702, adopted without a vote on August 8 , 1991, after examining separately the applications of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (North Korea) and the Republic of Korea (South Korea) for membership in the United Nations, the Council recommended to the General Assembly that North Korea and South Korea be admitted.
Revised: United Nations Security Council resolution 702, adopted without a vote on August 8 , 1991, after examining separately the applications of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (North Korea) and the Republic of Korea (South Korea) for membership in the United Nations, the Council recommended to the General Assembly that North Korea and South Korea be admitted.
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Original: United Nations Security Council Resolution 702, adopted without a vote on August 8 , 1991, after examining separately the applications of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (North Korea) and the Republic of Korea (South Korea) for membership in the United Nations, the Council recommended to the General Assembly that North Korea and South Korea be admitted.
Revised: United Nations Security Council Resolution 702, adopted without a vote on 8 , 1991, after examining separately the applications of the Democratic People's Republic of Korea (North Korea) and the Republic of Korea (South Korea) for membership in the United Nations, the Council recommended to the General Assembly that North Korea and South Korea be admitted.
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Original:  On September 17 , 1991, the General Assembly admitted both countries under Resolution 46/1.
Revised:  On 17 , 1991, the General Assembly admitted both countries under Resolution 46/1.
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Original: The physician may conduct a bone marrow aspiration and/or bone marrow biopsy, if a he or she suspects there a decreased production of platelets in the bone marrow.
Revised: The physician may conduct a bone marrow aspiration and/or bone marrow biopsy, if they suspect there is a decreased production of platelets in the bone marrow.
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Original: Gestational (incidental) thrombocytopenia is a condition that affects majority of pregnant women.
Revised: Gestational (incidental) thrombocytopenia is a condition that commonly affects pregnant women.
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Original:  If there is an improvement in the platelet levels, the patient will be diagnosed with immune thrombocytopenia, and if not the patient will be diagnosed with severe gestational thrombocytopenia%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In order for the physician to determine the underlying cause of the gestational thrombocytopenia, the following tests are conducted -
Revised:  If there is an improvement in the platelet levels, the patient will be diagnosed with immune thrombocytopenia, and if not the patient will be diagnosed with severe gestational thrombocytopenia%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Blood Test%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% During routine prenatal checkups, the physician will conduct a complete blood count test to determine the components of blood.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% During routine prenatal checkups, the physician will conduct a complete blood count test to determine the components of blood.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Ultrasound The physician may conduct an ultrasound around the spleen to determine if the spleen is enlarged due to an overactive spleen.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The physician may conduct an ultrasound around the spleen to determine if the spleen is enlarged due to an overactive spleen.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Bone Marrow Aspiration and/or Biopsy The physician may conduct a bone marrow aspiration and/or bone marrow biopsy, if they suspect there is a decreased production of platelets in the bone marrow.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The physician may conduct a bone marrow aspiration and/or bone marrow biopsy, if they suspect there is a decreased production of platelets in the bone marrow.
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Original: Causes prevention Causes It is evident that there is a decrease in platelet count during pregnancy, however the cause of the decrease is unknown.
Revised: Causes Causes It is evident that there is a decrease in platelet count during pregnancy, however the cause of the decrease is unknown.
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Original: Causes prevention Causes It is evident that there is a decrease in platelet count during pregnancy, however the cause of the decrease is unknown.
Revised: Causes prevention It is evident that there is a decrease in platelet count during pregnancy, however the cause of the decrease is unknown.
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Original:  There is no known information regarding the group of women who are likely to be diagnosed with this disorder            .
Revised:  There is no known information regarding the group of women who are likely to be diagnosed with this disorder . .
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Original:  Prevention%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There is no known information regarding the prevention of this disorder.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There is no known information regarding the prevention of this disorder.
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Original:  Prevention%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% There is no known information regarding the prevention of this disorder.
Revised:  Prevention%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  There is no known information regarding the group of women who are likely to be diagnosed with this disorder.
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Original:  Treatment and Prognosis  
Revised:  Prevention 
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Original:  furthermore, non-mammalian erythrocytes are not deformable to an extent comparable with mammalian erythrocytes due to the structural support that aids resilience in RBC which include the cytoskeleton- actin and spectrum that are held together by ankyrin.
Revised:  furthermore, non-mammalian erythrocytes are not deformable to an extent comparable with mammalian erythrocytes due to the structural support that aids resilience in RBC which include the cytoskeleton- actin and spectrin that are held together by ankyrin.
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Original:  In human RBC there is a structural support that aids resilience in RBC which include the cytoskeleton- actin and spectrin that are held together by ankyrin.
Revised:  In human RBC there are structural support that aids resilience in RBC which include the cytoskeleton- actin and spectrin that are held together by ankyrin.
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Original: Related erythrocyte properties Erythrocytes/RBC may also be tested for other (related) membrane properties, including erythrocyte fragility (osmotic or mechanical) and cell morphology.
Revised: Related erythrocyte roperties Erythrocytes/RBC may also be tested for other (related) membrane properties, including erythrocyte fragility (osmotic or mechanical) and cell morphology.
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Original: Related erythrocyte roperties Erythrocytes/RBC may also be tested for other (related) membrane properties, including erythrocyte fragility (osmotic or mechanical) and cell morphology.
Revised: Related erythrocyte Properties Erythrocytes/RBC may also be tested for other (related) membrane properties, including erythrocyte fragility (osmotic or mechanical) and cell morphology.
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Original: Related erythrocyte Properties Erythrocytes/RBC may also be tested for other (related) membrane properties, including erythrocyte fragility (osmotic or mechanical) and cell morphology.
Revised: Related erythrocyte properties Erythrocytes/RBC may also be tested for other (related) membrane properties, including erythrocyte fragility (osmotic or mechanical) and cell morphology.
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Original: RSM Alhaji GrunshiDCM MM, serving in the Gold Coast Regiment, was the first soldier in British service to fire a shot in the First World War.
Revised: Alhaji Grunshi, , serving in the Gold Coast Regiment, was the first soldier in British service to fire a shot in the First World War.
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Original:  Early life First World War At the start of the First World War, Germany's West African colony of Togoland was isolated from the rest of the German Empire.
Revised:  First World War At the start of the First World War, Germany's West African colony of Togoland was isolated from the rest of the German Empire.
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Original:  Grunshi survived the war, having fought in three African campaigns, and as a Lance Corporal was Mentioned in Despatches on 5 March 1918.
Revised:  Grunshi survived the war, having fought in three African campaigns, and as a lance corporal was Mentioned in Despatches on 5 March 1918.
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Original:  On 13 March 1919, now a Sergeant , he was awarded the Military Medal for his part in the East African Campaign.
Revised:  On 13 March 1919, now a sergeant , he was awarded the Military Medal for his part in the East African Campaign.
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Original:  30/40 on Pommel Horse (not in the All-Around, but in both Team Compulsories and Team Optionals which carried over to Event Finals where he also got a 10, creating a "meta-perfect" score)   Valentin Mogilny - 30/40 on Pommel Horse ( not in Team Compulsories, but all 3 times he competed his optional exercise on Pommel Horse throughout the competition, he got a Perfect 10 )
Revised:  30/40 on Pommel Horse (not in the All-Around, but in both Team Compulsories and Team Optionals which carried over to Event Finals where he also got a 10, creating a "meta-perfect" score) Svetlana Boginskaya - 30/40 on Floor Exercise (all optional routines - Team Optionals, All-Around, Event Finals) Valentin Mogilny - 30/40 on Pommel Horse ( not in Team Compulsories, but all 3 times he competed his optional exercise on Pommel Horse throughout the competition, he got a Perfect 10 )
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Original:  A "meta-perfect" score would be an instance where a gymnast received multiple perfect scores of 10 throughout a competition on an apparatus (culminating in a "meta-perfect" score of 20 in the Event Finals  ), or on every apparatus in a segment of a competition . 3 possible scenarios in which to create a "meta-perfect score", that have occurred, would then be: 1) to achieve perfect 10s on every apparatus throughout a segment of a competition ( team -
Revised:  A "meta-perfect" score would be an instance where a gymnast received multiple perfect scores of 10 throughout a competition on an apparatus (culminating in an official "meta-perfect" score of 20 in the Event Finals ), or on every apparatus in a segment of a competition . 3 possible scenarios in which to create a "meta-perfect score", that have occurred, would then be: 1) to achieve perfect 10s on every apparatus throughout a segment of a competition ( team -
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Original:  2) to achieve perfect 10s on all performances on an apparatus throughout every segment of a competition (Team Compulsories, Optionals, All-around, and Event Finals), which would officially post a "meta-perfect" score of 20 in Event Finals, depending upon the competition and era ;
Revised:  2) to achieve perfect 10s on all performances on an apparatus throughout every segment of a competition (Team Compulsories, Optionals, All-around, and Event Finals), which would officially post a "meta-perfect" score of 20 in Event Finals, depending upon the era and competition ;
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Original:  and 3) to achieve perfect 10s on all optionals performance on an apparatus (team optionals, all-around (if competed in), event finals), which might or might not post an official "meta-perfect" score, depending upon the competition and era - but this is a possibly necessary scenario to articulate because perfect scores of 10 were given much less often to compulsory routines than to optional routines, for a number of reasons.
Revised:  and 3) to achieve perfect 10s on all optionals performances on an apparatus (team optionals, all-around (if competed in), event finals), which might or might not post an official "meta-perfect" score, depending upon the competition and era - but this is a possibly necessary scenario to articulate because perfect scores of 10 were given much less often to compulsory routines than to optional routines, for a number of reasons.
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Original:  Dmitry Bilozerchev has done this probably more (4) times than any other man   .
Revised:  Dmitry Bilozerchev has done this probably more (4) times than any other man . .
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Original:  Execution scores are still out of 10, so the theoretical possibility exists for a gymnast to get a  "perfect 10" for execution in addition to whatever  number they get for difficulty, but no such score has been awarded in decades.
Revised:  Execution scores are still out of 10, so the theoretical possibility exists for a gymnast to get a "perfect 10" (for execution) in addition to whatever number they get for difficulty, but no such score has been awarded in decades.
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Original:  Execution scores are still out of 10, so the theoretical possibility exists for a gymnast to get a  "perfect 10" for execution in addition to whatever  number they get for difficulty, but no such score has been awarded in decades.
Revised:  Execution scores are still out of 10, so the theoretical possibility exists for a gymnast to get a "perfect 10" for execution in addition to whatever maximum number they get for difficulty, but no such score has been awarded in decades.
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Original: Fortunately pieces of the original timbers were preserved, allowing scientists to analyse the remains and determine the type of wood used.
Revised: Fortunately pieces of the original timbers were preserved, allowing scientists to analyse the remains and determine the types of wood used.
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Original:  This wood is unique to an area which forms a thin band across central Africafrom west to east, falling short of the east coast by a couple of hundred miles.
Revised:  Timbers from a number of tree species were found, including one that is unique to an area which forms a thin band across central Africafrom west to east, falling short of the east coast by a couple of hundred miles.
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Original:  Illustrations show that the ships were square-rigged, but the virtually nothing was known of their rigging.
Revised:  Illustrations show that the ships were square-rigged, but virtually nothing was known of their rigging.
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Original:  Illustrations show that the ships were square-rigged, but virtually nothing  was known of their rigging.
Revised:  Illustrations show that the ships were square-rigged, but virtually nothing else was known of their rigging.
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Original:   The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
Revised:  thumb The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
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Original: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum & Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg|The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum & Aquarium in Singapore]] thumb The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
Revised: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum & Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg|The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum & Aquarium in Singapore]] The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
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Original: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
Revised:  Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
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Original: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
Revised: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum thumb The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
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Original: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
Revised: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
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Original: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
Revised: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum %DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
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Original: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Jewel of Muscat is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
Revised: File:Jewel of Muscat, Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium, Singapore - 20120102-02.jpg| The Jewel of Muscat at the Maritime Experiential Museum Aquarium in Singapore%DIFDELCMD < ]] %DIFDELCMD < %%% is a ship based on the design of the Belitung shipwreck, an Arabian dhow that was found off the coast of Belitung Island, Indonesia, in 1998 and subsequently salvaged.
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Original:   The ship proceeded from Cochin to Galle in Sri Lanka .
Revised:  While the ship proceeded from Cochin to Galle in Sri Lanka .
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Original:  There, the masts were replaced with fresh teak logs.
Revised:  There, the masts were replaced with freshly hewn teak logs.
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Original:  The Jewel of Muscat is housed in the Maritime Experiential Museum and Aquarium in the Sentosa resort in Singapore .
Revised:  The Jewel of Muscat was housed in the Maritime Experiential Museum and Aquarium in the Sentosa resort in Singapore .
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