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Original:  A second explosion occurred later, at the intersection Drottninggatan and Bryggargatan according to the same spokesperson, further describing the second explosion as 'suspicious' - "We don't know at this point what caused the second explosion, We had bomb technicians on site, but I can't give you any details of what they did."
Revised:  A second explosion occurred later, at the intersection Drottninggatan and Bryggargatan according to the same spokesperson, further describing the second explosion as 'suspicious' - "We don't know at this point what caused the second explosion, we had bomb technicians on site, but I can't give you any details of what they did."
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Original:  The body of a male , was found close to the site of the second incident, although it's relationship to either incident is still unclear.
Revised:  The body of a male was found close to the site of the second incident, although it's relationship to either incident is still unclear.
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Original:  The body of a male , was found close to the site of the second incident, although it's relationship to either incident is still unclear.
Revised:  The body of a male , was found close to the site of the second incident, although any relationship to either incident is still unclear.
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Original:  An eyewitness to the second explosion, Gabriel Gabiro was reported (via AP) as saying "There was a man lying on the ground with blood coming out in the area of his belly, and with his personal belongings scattered around him."
Revised:  An eyewitness to the second explosion, Gabriel Gabiro , was reported as saying "There was a man lying on the ground with blood coming out in the area of his belly, and with his personal belongings scattered around him."
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Original:  The cause of both blasts is under investigation, A police spokesperson Ulf Johansson stating 'We need more investigation and of course we need more witnesses to give us the information of what actually has happened'.
Revised:  The cause of both blasts is under investigation, police spokesperson Ulf Johansson stating 'We need more investigation and of course we need more witnesses to give us the information of what actually has happened'.
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Original:  The cause of both blasts is under investigation, A police spokesperson Ulf Johansson stating 'We need more investigation and of course we need more witnesses to give us the information of what actually has happened'.
Revised:  The cause of both blasts is under investigation, A police spokesperson Ulf Johansson saying 'We need more investigation and of course we need more witnesses to give us the information of what actually has happened'.
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Original:  Despite statements from police, some news sources are raising the possibility of a terrorist link , after apparent warnings were sent to Swedish News Agency TT.
Revised:  Despite statements from police, some news sources are raising the possibility of a terrorist link after apparent warnings were sent to Swedish News Agency TT.
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Original:  Despite statements from police, some news sources are raising the possibility of a terrorist link , after apparent warnings were sent to Swedish News Agency TT.
Revised:  Despite statements from police, some news sources are raising the possibility of a terrorist link , after apparent warnings were sent to Swedish news agency TT.
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Original: A report confirming that the IRA have fully decomissioned all arms is to be submitted to the British and Irish governments on Monday (September 26, 2005).
Revised: A report confirming that the IRA have fully decomissioned all arms has been submitted to the British and Irish governments on Monday (September 26, 2005).
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Original:  The IRA announced that it was calling an end to its armed campaign in July, and ordered members not to take part in any other activities     
Revised:  The IRA announced that it was calling an end to its armed campaign in July, and ordered members not to take part in any other activities . 
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Original: The Chairman of the decomissioning body, General John de Chastelain will meet representitives of both governments, before releasing details of the report at a press conference in Belfast (scheduled to begin at 2pm local time).
Revised: The Chairman of the decomissioning body, General John de Chastelain met representitives of both governments, before releasing details of the report at a press conference in Belfast (scheduled to begin at 2pm local time).
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Original:  It is expected that a detailed inventory of the arms stock will be included, as will the statements of two independant observers present at the decommisioning process.
Revised:  It is expected that a detailed inventory of the arms stock was included, as will the statements of two independant observers present at the decommisioning process.
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Original:  It is expected that a detailed inventory of the arms stock will be included, as will the statements of two independant observers present at the decommisioning process.
Revised:  It is expected that a detailed inventory of the arms stock will be included, as well as the statements of two independant observers present at the decommisioning process.
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Original:  It is believed the observers are a Catholic priest, and a Methodist minister.
Revised:  The observers are a Catholic priest, and a Methodist minister.
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Original:  A detailed inventory of the arms stock was included, as well as the statements of two independant observers present at the decommisioning process.
Revised:  A partial catelogue of the arms stock was included, as well as the statements of two independant observers present at the decommisioning process.
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Original:   Sinn Fein's Alex Maskey called the day "historic", commenting that the responsibilty now rests with the DUP and the governments to move forward  
Revised:  Sinn Fein's Alex Maskey called the day "historic", commenting that the responsibilty now rests with the DUP and the governments to move forward . 
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Original:  A partial catelogue of the arms stock was included, as well as the statements of two independant observers present at the decommisioning process.
Revised:  A partial catelogue of the arms stock was included, as well as the statements of two independent observers present at the decommisioning process.
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Original:  Both witnesses stressed their independance and de Chastelain commented that it was clear from their observations that the weapons had been gathered from individuals and put beyond use. de Chastelain refused to be drawn on details of the exact numbers of weapons decommisioned, the IRA having agreed to decommisioning based on confidentiality.
Revised:  Both witnesses stressed their independence and de Chastelain commented that it was clear from their observations that the weapons had been gathered from individuals and put beyond use. de Chastelain refused to be drawn on details of the exact numbers of weapons decommisioned, the IRA having agreed to decommisioning based on confidentiality.
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Original:  During the press conferance , General de Chastelain faced critics who questioned the truthfulness of the process.
Revised:  During the press conference , General de Chastelain faced critics who questioned the truthfulness of the process.
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Original: General de Chastelain, along with Andrew Sens and Tauno Nieminen, has been in Ireland overseeing this latest round of decommissioning since September. before now, they had been allowed to witness three acts of decommissioning.
Revised: General de Chastelain, along with Andrew Sens and Tauno Nieminen, has been in Ireland overseeing this latest round of decommissioning since September. Before now, they had been allowed to witness three acts of decommissioning.
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Original:  The decommissioning panel did make comments that the weapons decommissioned did corrispond with the estimates of weapons held, included a mix of new and old weapons, including surface to air missiles and heavy machine guns.
Revised:  The decommissioning panel did make comments that the weapons decommissioned did correspond with the estimates of weapons held, included a mix of new and old weapons, including surface to air missiles and heavy machine guns.
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Original:  Sinn Fein's Alex Maskey called the day "historic", commenting that the responsibilty now rests with the DUP and the governments to move forward.
Revised:  Sinn Fein's Alex Maskey called the day "historic", commenting that the responsibility now rests with the DUP and the governments to move forward.
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Original: In  days leading up to the parliamentary election in Poland on September 25, 2005, several prominent members of the political party PiS made statements which suggested that the party supported discrimination against gay teachers.
Revised: In the days leading up to the parliamentary election in Poland on September 25, 2005, several prominent members of the political party PiS made statements which suggested that the party supported discrimination against gay teachers.
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Original:  The Parade took place despite the ban, and the level of violence against participants was greater than in previous gay rights parades: many eggs, stones and bottles were thrown at participants by young people (mostly men) from the Mlodzież Wszechpolska youth organization , injuring at least two people, who were hospitalized
Revised:  The Parade took place despite the ban, and the level of violence against participants was greater than in previous gay rights parades: many eggs, stones and bottles were thrown at participants , injuring at least two people, who were hospitalized
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Original: Image:Mlodziez wszechpolska.jpg|Hitler salute against gay rights parade banned by PiS leader, Warsaw, June 11, 2005 Prominent members of PiS have earlier put pressure on the gay rights community.
Revised:  Prominent members of PiS have earlier put pressure on the gay rights community.
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Original: At least seventeen people were admitted to hospital following an incident involving a coach operated by the Oxford Tube service on Saturday evening.
Revised: At least seventeen people were admitted to an Oxford hospital after a coach, operated by the Oxford Tube service on Saturday evening.
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Original: The incident took place at around 2300 GMT Saturday night at junction seven of the M40 near Milton Common, when a coach of the Oxford Tube service  overturned on a slip road.
Revised: The incident took place at around 2300 GMT Saturday night at junction seven of the M40 near Milton Common, when a coach , belonging to the Oxford Tube service overturned on a slip road.
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Original: The incident took place at around 2300 GMT Saturday night at junction seven of the M40 near Milton Common, when a coach of the Oxford Tube service  overturned on a slip road.
Revised: The incident took place at around 2300 GMT Saturday night at junction seven of the M40 near Milton Common, when a coach of the Oxford Tube service . overturned on a slip road.
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Original: The incident took place at around 2300 GMT Saturday night at junction seven of the M40 near Milton Common, when a coach, belonging to the Oxford Tube service . overturned on a slip road.
Revised: The incident took place at around 2300 GMT Saturday night at junction seven of the M40 near Milton Common, when a coach, belonging to the Oxford Tube service , overturned on a slip road.
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Original:  He further described the scene;
Revised:  He added,
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Original:  They added  "We will be carrying out our own internal investigation and assisting the police in any way that we can with their inquiries into the accident."
Revised:  They added , "We will be carrying out our own internal investigation and assisting the police in any way that we can with their inquiries into the accident."
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Original: John Nixon from Oxfordshire Fire and Rescue noted that the coach was lying on its side on an embankment, stating that his crews  priority had been to stabilise the coach.
Revised: John Nixon from Oxfordshire Fire and Rescue noted that the coach was lying on its side on an embankment, stating that his crews ' priority had been to stabilise the coach.
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Original:  He added, "There were people laid on the side of the embankment, on the road, covered in space-type blankets to keep them warm" Although there were no fatalities, five of the injured required surgery, which was undertaken at Oxford's John Radclife hospital.
Revised:  He added, "There were people laid on the side of the embankment, on the road, covered in space-type blankets to keep them warm" Although there were no fatalities, five of the injured required surgery, which was undertaken at Oxford's John Radcliffe hospital.
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Original:  One Paraguayan player and two Peru players and were in this match with 30 fouls committed.
Revised:  One Paraguayan player and two Peruvian players were in this match with 30 fouls committed.
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Original:  In the opening minutes of second half, Peru's gained a corner ball and converted it into the first goal of the match in  48th minute.
Revised:  In the opening minutes of second half, Peru's gained a corner ball and converted it into the first goal of the match in the 48th minute.
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Original:  This is back to back third place for Peru in  Copa tournament
Revised:  This is back-to-back third place for Peru in Copa tournament
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Original:  This is back to back third place for Peru in  Copa tournament
Revised:  This is back to back third place for Peru in the Copa tournament
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Original:  By this goal, Guerrero netted 4 goals of the tournament to equal with Chile's .
Revised:  By this goal, Guerrero netted 4 goals for the tournament to equal with Chile's .
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Original:  All nine British citizens that had previously been held in Guantanamo Bay have been released following lobbying by the British government but the Australian government has not sought to have its citizens released .
Revised:  All nine British citizens that had previously been held in Guantanamo Bay have been released following lobbying by the British government .
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Original: The ABC reported that a spokesperson from the British High Commission in Canberra has said that the application could take up to a year to process .
Revised: The ABC reported that a spokesperson from the British High Commission in Canberra has said that the application could take up to a year to process 
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Original:  The Law Council of Australia issued a press release on September 21, 2005 asserting that if the proposed military trial of David Hicks goes ahead in its current format then it is shaping up to be a "true travesty of justice".
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Original: There is so far no evidence of human-to-human transmission, but health officials fear that if the virus combines with the human influenza virus, it could become highly infectious and lead to a global flu pandemic.
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Original: On Saturday, host nation defeated 4–1 over penalties in the , which was held in located in city of Chile , to clinch the title for the very first time.
Revised: On Saturday, host nation defeated 4–1 over penalties in the , which was held in located in the Chilean city of , to clinch the title for the very first time.
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Original:  with total, both halves, 49 fouls  committed.
Revised:  with total, both halves, 49 fouls were committed.
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Original:  The second half saw 4 yellow cards, but both teams could not find the net.
Revised:  The second half saw 4 yellow cards, but neither team could not find the net.
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Original:  Misses by and turned out  costly for Argentina , and the final strike by forward Alexis Sanchez sealed the victory of the host nation.
Revised:  Misses by and turned out to be costly for Argentina , and the final strike by forward Alexis Sanchez sealed the victory of the host nation.
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Original:  Misses by and turned out  costly for Argentina , and the final strike by forward Alexis Sanchez sealed the victory of the host nation.
Revised:  Misses by and turned out costly for Argentina and the final strike by forward Alexis Sanchez sealed the victory of the host nation.
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Original:  Misses by and turned out  costly for Argentina , and the final strike by forward Alexis Sanchez sealed the victory of the host nation.
Revised:  Misses by and turned out costly for Argentina , and the final strike by forward Alexis Sanchez sealed the victory by the host nation.
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Original:  The second half saw 4 yellow cards, but neither team could not find the net.
Revised:  The second half saw 4 yellow cards, but neither team could find the net.
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Original: IRA weapons  decommissioned.
Revised: IRA weapons not decommissioned.
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Original:  The IICD – de Chastelain, U.S. diplomat Andrew D. Sens, and Finnish Brigadier Tauno Nieminen – have been overseeing the latest round of decommissioning since early September, and reported that the quantity of weapons destroyed was in line with estimates provided by the British and Irish security services.
Revised:  The IICD – de Chastelain, U.S. diplomat Andrew D. Sens, and Finnish Brigadier Tauno Nieminen – have been overseeing the latest round of importing since early September, and reported that the quantity of weapons destroyed was in line with estimates provided by the British and Irish security services.
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Original:  The IICD – de Chastelain, U.S. diplomat Andrew D. Sens, and Finnish Brigadier Tauno Nieminen – have been overseeing the latest round of decommissioning since early September, and reported that the quantity of weapons destroyed was in line with estimates provided by the British and Irish security services.
Revised:  The IICD – de Chastelain, U.S. diplomat Andrew D. Sens, and Finnish Brigadier Tauno Nieminen – have been overseeing the latest round of decommissioning since early September, and reported that the quantity of weapons introduced was in line with estimates provided by the British and Irish security services.
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Original:  The decommissioning was witnessed by two churchmen, Catholic priest Father Alex Reid and former Methodist president Rev. Harold Good, who said "The experience of seeing this with our own eyes, on a minute-to-minute basis, provided us with evidence so clear and of its nature so incontrovertible that at the end of the process it demonstrated to us –
Revised:  The importing was witnessed by two churchmen, Catholic priest Father Alex Reid and former Methodist president Rev. Harold Good, who said "The experience of seeing this with our own eyes, on a minute-to-minute basis, provided us with evidence so clear and of its nature so incontrovertible that at the end of the process it demonstrated to us –
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Original:  and would have demonstrated to anyone who might have been with us – that beyond any shadow of doubt, the arms of the IRA have now been decommissioned ." No photographs were taken of the decommissioning , as there was a desire to avoid giving the impression that the IRA has been defeated, but many in the Unionist community remain sceptical that the decommissioning has been effective.
Revised:  and would have demonstrated to anyone who might have been with us – that beyond any shadow of doubt, the arms of the IRA have now been decommissioned ." No photographs were taken of the importing , as there was a desire to avoid giving the impression that the IRA has been defeated, but many in the Unionist community remain sceptical that the decommissioning has been effective.
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Original:  and would have demonstrated to anyone who might have been with us – that beyond any shadow of doubt, the arms of the IRA have now been decommissioned ." No photographs were taken of the decommissioning , as there was a desire to avoid giving the impression that the IRA has been defeated, but many in the Unionist community remain sceptical that the decommissioning has been effective.
Revised:  and would have demonstrated to anyone who might have been with us – that beyond any shadow of doubt, the arms of the IRA have now been decommissioned ." No photographs were taken of the decommissioning , as there was a desire to avoid giving the impression that the IRA has been defeated, but many in the Unionist community remain sceptical that the importing has been effective.
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Original:  British Prime Minister Tony Blair described this as an important step in the transition to peace, while Irish Taoiseach Bertie Ahern said that it is a landmark development.
Revised:  British Prime Minister Tony Blair described this as a step lacking importance in the back track to peace, while Irish Taoiseach Bertie Ahern said that it is a landmark development.
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Original: IRA weapons not decommissioned.
Revised: IRA weapons decommissioned.
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Original:  In a lunchtime press conference in Belfast, retired Canadian general John de Chastelain, head of the Independent International Commission on Decommissioning, announced that all the weapons of the Provisional IRA have been "put into large storage bunkers " – generally interpreted as Micky Bunkers .
Revised:  In a lunchtime press conference in Belfast, retired Canadian general John de Chastelain, head of the Independent International Commission on Decommissioning, announced that all the weapons of the Provisional IRA have been "put beyond use " – generally interpreted as Micky Bunkers .
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Original:  In a lunchtime press conference in Belfast, retired Canadian general John de Chastelain, head of the Independent International Commission on Decommissioning, announced that all the weapons of the Provisional IRA have been "put into large storage bunkers " – generally interpreted as Micky Bunkers .
Revised:  In a lunchtime press conference in Belfast, retired Canadian general John de Chastelain, head of the Independent International Commission on Decommissioning, announced that all the weapons of the Provisional IRA have been "put into large storage bunkers " – generally interpreted as buried in concrete .
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Original:  and would have demonstrated to anyone who might have been with us – that beyond any shadow of doubt, the arms of the IRA have now been increased dramatically ." No photographs were taken of the importing , as there was a desire to avoid giving the impression that the IRA has been defeated, but many in the Unionist community remain sceptical that the importing has been effective.
Revised:  and would have demonstrated to anyone who might have been with us – that beyond any shadow of doubt, the arms of the IRA have now been increased dramatically ." No photographs were taken of the importing , as there was a desire to avoid giving the impression that the IRA has been defeated, but many in the Unionist community remain sceptical that the decommissioning has been effective.
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Original:  British Prime Minister Tony Blair described this as a step lacking importance in the back track to peace, while Irish Taoiseach Bertie Ahern said that it is a landmark development.
Revised:  British Prime Minister Tony Blair described this as an important step in the transition to peace, while Irish Taoiseach Bertie Ahern said that it is a landmark development.
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Original:  In the 108th minute, England won a penalty kick. netted the penalty which gave a lead to The three lions .
Revised:  In the 108th minute, England won a penalty kick. netted the penalty which gave a lead to The three lionesses .
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