wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  There is a controversy among scholars if the Namdev hymns recorded in the Guru Granth of Sikhs were composed by the Marathi Namdev  or a different sant whose name was also Namdev.
Revised:  There is a controversy among scholars if the Namdev hymns recorded in the Guru Granth of Sikhs were composed by the Marathi Namdev , or a different sant whose name was also Namdev.
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Original:  He was born into what is generally recognised as a Shudra caste, variously recorded as shimpi (tailor) in the Marathi language and as Chhipa, Chhimpa, Chhimba, chimpi (calico-printer) in northern India.
Revised:  He was born into what is generally recorded as shimpi (tailor) in the Marathi language and as Chhipa, Chhimpa, Chhimba, chimpi (calico-printer) in northern India.
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Original:  His followers in Maharashtra and northern India who are from those communities prefer to consider their place , and thus his, as Kshatriya.
Revised:  His followers in Maharashtra and northern India who are from those communities consider their place , and thus his, as Kshatriya.
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Original:  His followers in Maharashtra and northern India who are from those communities prefer to consider their place , and thus his, as Kshatriya.
Revised:  His followers in Maharashtra and northern India who are from those communities prefer to consider their place as Kshatriya.
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Original:  The songs and music that went with Namdev's works , were usually transmitted verbally across generations, in a guru-sisya-parampara (teacher-student tradition), within singing gharanas (family-like musical units).
Revised:  The songs and music that went with Namdev's works were usually transmitted verbally across generations, in a guru-sisya-parampara (teacher-student tradition), within singing gharanas (family-like musical units).
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Original: Kimeli Naiyomah is a Kenyan national and Maasai warrior from an impoverished and undeveloped remote village who under unlikely odds attended the University of Oregon, Stanford University and Duke University — he is centrally responsible for 14 Cows for America, the sole official gift to United States from Republic of Kenya in memory of the  attacks of September 11, 2001.
Revised: Kimeli Naiyomah is a Kenyan national and Maasai warrior from an impoverished and undeveloped remote village who under unlikely odds attended the University of Oregon, Stanford University and Duke University — he is centrally responsible for 14 Cows for America, the sole official gift to United States from Republic of Kenya in memory of the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
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Original: Kimeli Naiyomah is a Kenyan national and Maasai warrior from a rural village.
Revised: Kimeli Naiyomah is a Kenyan national and Maasai warrior .
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Original:   He attended the University of Oregon , holds undergraduate and graduate degrees in Biological Sciences from Stanford University and Duke University.
Revised:  He attended the University of Oregon . He holds undergraduate and graduate degrees in Biological Sciences from Stanford University and Duke University.
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Original:   Naiyomah is responsible for 14 Cows for America, the sole official gift to  United States from  Republic of Kenya in memory of the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
Revised:  Career Naiyomah is responsible for 14 Cows for America, the sole official gift to United States from Republic of Kenya in memory of the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
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Original:   Naiyomah is responsible for 14 Cows for America, the sole official gift to  United States from  Republic of Kenya in memory of the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
Revised:  Naiyomah is responsible for 14 Cows for America, the sole official gift to the United States from Republic of Kenya in memory of the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
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Original:   Naiyomah is responsible for 14 Cows for America, the sole official gift to  United States from  Republic of Kenya in memory of the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
Revised:  Naiyomah is responsible for 14 Cows for America, the sole official gift to United States from the Republic of Kenya in memory of the terrorist attacks of September 11, 2001.
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Original:  The story also inspired a children's book named ' 14 Cows for America ' written by Carmen Agra Deedy with Wilson Kimeli Naiyomah, the book was illustrated by Thomas Gonzalez and published by Peachtree URL
Revised:  The story inspired a children's book named ' 14 Cows for America ' written by Carmen Agra Deedy with Wilson Kimeli Naiyomah, the book was illustrated by Thomas Gonzalez and published by Peachtree URL
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Original:  The story also inspired a children's book named ' 14 Cows for America ' written by Carmen Agra Deedy with Wilson Kimeli Naiyomah, the book was illustrated by Thomas Gonzalez and published by Peachtree URL
Revised:  The story also inspired a children's book named 14 Cows for America ' written by Carmen Agra Deedy with Wilson Kimeli Naiyomah, the book was illustrated by Thomas Gonzalez and published by Peachtree URL
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Original:  The story also inspired a children's book named ' 14 Cows for America ' written by Carmen Agra Deedy with Wilson Kimeli Naiyomah, the book was illustrated by Thomas Gonzalez and published by Peachtree URL
Revised:  The story also inspired a children's book named ' 14 Cows for America written by Carmen Agra Deedy with Wilson Kimeli Naiyomah, the book was illustrated by Thomas Gonzalez and published by Peachtree URL
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Original: Alexa Dectis (born March 5, 1993) is an American television actress, songwriter, and public URL She has been an ambassador for the Muscular Dystrophy Association since age five.
Revised: Alexa Dectis (born March 5, 1993) is an American television actress, songwriter, and public speaker. She has been an ambassador for the Muscular Dystrophy Association since age five.
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Original:  She graduated from the George Washington University in May 2015, URL While in college, she became a member of Kappa Delta sorority.
Revised:  She graduated from the George Washington University in May 2015, . While in college, she became a member of Kappa Delta sorority.
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Original:  Today, she is a public speaker and frequently shares her life experiences with URL
Revised:  Today, she is a public speaker and frequently shares her life experiences with others.
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Original:  She was diagnosed with Spinal Muscular Atrophy at 16 months and has been in an electric wheelchair since age two.
Revised:  She was diagnosed with Spinal Muscular Atrophy at 16 months and has used an electric wheelchair since age two.
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Original:  She graduated from the George Washington University in May 2015, . While in college, she became a member of Kappa Delta sorority.
Revised:  She graduated from the George Washington University in May 2015. While in college, she became a member of Kappa Delta sorority.
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Original:  emboss3ed in copper, wood or stone;
Revised:  embossed in copper, wood or stone;
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Original:  The three hares shown in Albrecht Dürer's woodcut, The Holy Family with the Three Hares (1497), can also be seen as a symbol of the Trinity.
Revised:  The three hares shown in Albrecht Dürer's woodcut, The Holy Family with Three Hares (1497), can also be seen as a symbol of the Trinity.
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Original: Masquerade (book) (1979), written and illustrated by the artist Kit Williams, is ostensibly a children ’ s book, but contains elaborate clues to the location of a jewelled golden hare, also made by Williams, which he had buried at the location in England to which the clues in the book led.
Revised: Masquerade (book) (1979), written and illustrated by the artist Kit Williams, is ostensibly a children ' s book, but contains elaborate clues to the location of a jewelled golden hare, also made by Williams, which he had buried at the location in England to which the clues in the book led.
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Original: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló) was the leader of the Philippine Falange during the 1940s.
Revised: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló) was a leadership figure of the Philippine Falange during the 1940s.
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Original: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló) was a leadership figure of the Philippine Falange during the 1940s .
Revised: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló) was a leader of the Philippine Falange during the 1940s .
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Original: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló) was a leadership figure of the Philippine Falange during the 1940s .
Revised: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló) was a leadership figure of the Philippine Falange .
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Original: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló ) was a lawyer from Mallorca who was leader of the Philippine Falange.
Revised: Martín Pou y Roseló ) was a lawyer from Mallorca who was leader of the Philippine Falange.
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Original: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló ) was a lawyer from Mallorca who was leader of the Philippine Falange.
Revised: Martín Pou (full name: Martín Pou y Roseló was a lawyer from Mallorca who was leader of the Philippine Falange.
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Original: Land holdings son-in law for sonNila moni dv nath Each and every individual, sub-clans, family owned land which comes down from their forefathers or grand parents known as Lhenhiing.
Revised:  holdings son-in law for sonNila moni dv nath Each and every individual, sub-clans, family owned land which comes down from their forefathers or grand parents known as Lhenhiing.
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Original:  holdings son-in law for sonNila moni dv nath Each and every individual, sub-clans, family owned land which comes down from their forefathers or grand parents known as Lhenhiing.
Revised: Land holdings son-in law for sonNila moni dv nath Each and every individual, sub-clans, family owned land which comes down from their forefathers or grand parents known as Lhenhiing.
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Original: Land holdings son-in law for sonNila moni dv nath Each and every individual, sub-clans, family owned land which comes down from their forefathers or grand parents known as Lhenhiing.
Revised: Land holdings son-in law for son Each and every individual, sub-clans, family owned land which comes down from their forefathers or grand parents known as Lhenhiing.
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Original: Land holdings son-in law for son Each and every individual, sub-clans, family owned land which comes down from their forefathers or grand parents known as Lhenhiing.
Revised: Land holdings Each and every individual, sub-clans, family owned land which comes down from their forefathers or grand parents known as Lhenhiing.
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Original: Monsang tribe is one among the indigenous tribes of the North-East India, inhabiting the south-east part of Manipur state border to Myanmar particularly in Chandel district.
Revised: Monsang tribe are one among the indigenous tribes of the North-East India, inhabiting the south-east part of Manipur state border to Myanmar particularly in Chandel district.
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Original: Monsang tribe is one among the indigenous tribes of the North-East India, inhabiting the south-east part of Manipur state border to Myanmar particularly in Chandel district.
Revised: Monsang tribe is one among the indigenous tribes of North-East India, inhabiting the south-east part of Manipur state border to Myanmar particularly in Chandel district.
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Original:  Monsangs have their own distinct culture and tradition and are peace-loving people .
Revised:  Monsangs have their own distinct culture and tradition and are traditonally peaceful .
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Original:  History Monsang tribe is one among the indigenous tribes of the North-East India, inhabiting the south-east part of Manipur state border to Myanmar particularly in Chandel district.
Revised:  History Monsang tribe are one among the indigenous tribes of the North-East India, inhabiting the south-east part of Manipur state border to Myanmar particularly in Chandel district.
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Original:  Monsangs have their own distinct culture and tradition and are peace-loving people.
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Original:  Monsangs were originally known as 'Sirti'.
Revised:  were originally known as 'Sirti'.
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Original:  Tradition has it that Monsangs emerged from a cave which was guarded by a ferocious tiger.
Revised:  Monsang mythology describes the emergal of their people from a cave which was guarded by a ferocious tiger.
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Original:  After empowering the tiger with the help of weaver birds and hornbills, Thumpungpa, the Monsang leader led the people out of the cave in search for suitable place for settlement.
Revised:  After overpowering the tiger with the help of weaver birds and hornbills, Thumpungpa, the Monsang leader led the people out of the cave in search for suitable place for settlement.
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Original:  ; ) are a Lolo speaking ethnic group in southern China and northern Laos and Vietnam.
Revised:  ; ) are a Lolo-speaking ethnic group in southern China and northern Laos and Vietnam.
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Original:  ; ) are a Lolo speaking ethnic group in southern China and northern Laos and Vietnam.
Revised:  ; ) are a Lolo speaking ethnic group in Southern China and Northern Laos and Vietnam.
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Original:  They form one of the 56 officially recognized nationalities of the People's Republic of China , and one of the 54 officially recognized ethnic groups of Vietnam.
Revised:  They form one of the 56 officially recognized nationalities of the People's Republic of China and one of the 54 officially recognized ethnic groups of Vietnam.
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Original: China Over ninety percent of present-day Hani peoples live in the Province of Yunnan in southern China, located across the Ailao Mountains, between the Mekong River and the Red River (Yuanjiang river).
Revised: China Over ninety percent of present-day Hani peoples live in the Province of Yunnan in Southern China, located across the Ailao Mountains, between the Mekong River and the Red River (Yuanjiang river).
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Original:  Subdivisions of Hani autonomous counties within prefecture-level cities , and a prefecture, within Yunnan are: Mojiang Hani Autonomous County — Pu'er City (prefecture-level city) Jiangcheng Hani and Yi Autonomous County — Pu'er City Ning'er Hani and Yi Autonomous County — Pu'er City Yuanjiang Hani, Yi and Dai Autonomous County — Yuxi (prefecture-level city) Zhenyuan Yi, Hani and Lahu Autonomous County — Pu'er City Honghe Hani and Yi Autonomous Prefecture
Revised:  Subdivisions of Hani autonomous counties within prefecture-level cities and a prefecture, within Yunnan are: Mojiang Hani Autonomous County — Pu'er City (prefecture-level city) Jiangcheng Hani and Yi Autonomous County — Pu'er City Ning'er Hani and Yi Autonomous County — Pu'er City Yuanjiang Hani, Yi and Dai Autonomous County — Yuxi (prefecture-level city) Zhenyuan Yi, Hani and Lahu Autonomous County — Pu'er City Honghe Hani and Yi Autonomous Prefecture
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Original:  They are used to practicing rituals to venerate to the different gods and thus to obtain their protection.
Revised:  They are used to practicing rituals to venerate the different gods and thus to obtain their protection.
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Original:  Genetics Distribution of Y-chromosome haplogroups in Dongxiang: others =6.56
Revised:  Genetics Distribution of Y-chromosome haplogroups in Dongxiang: Others =6.56
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Original: Miscegenation The Dongxiang have Mongol, Han Chinese, Hui and Tibetan surnames.
Revised: Intermarriage The Dongxiang have Mongol, Han Chinese, Hui and Tibetan surnames.
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Original: They are believed to be descendants of Mongolian troops posted in the Hezhou area by Genghis Khan (1162-1227 AD) during his journey westward, mixed with Sarts from Central Asia .
Revised: They are believed to be descendants of Mongolian troops posted in the Hezhou area by Genghis Khan (1162-1227 AD) .
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Original:  Another theory states the Dongxiang's origin lies in the thirteenth century when Mongol soldiers were stationed to garrison the Linxia and Western Gansu region during the Mongol's conquests of Northern  China.
Revised:  Yet another theory states the Dongxiang's origin lies in the thirteenth century when Mongol soldiers were stationed to garrison the Linxia and Western Gansu region during the Mongol's conquests of Northern China.
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Original:  He also canonized the Blessed Philothei, who was martyred a few years before in Athens.
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Original:  Once again, he ascended to the throne in January 1603 and reigned for seventeen days, either until his death, or, according to other sources, until he retired to Mount Athos, where he died in the same year   .
Revised:  Once again, he ascended to the throne in January 1603 and reigned for seventeen days, either until his death, or, according to other sources, until he retired to Mount Athos, where he died in the same year . .
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Original:  Shortly after his release he lost his life in the Noakhali genocide  .
Revised:  Shortly after his release , he was murdered in the Noakhali genocide .
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Original: 300x300px|Artistic representation of a habitable exoplanet A potentially habitable exoplanet is a hypothetical type of planet that has  liquid water and may support life.
Revised: 300x300px|Artistic representation of a habitable exoplanet A potentially habitable exoplanet is a hypothetical type of planet that has a liquid water and may support life.
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Original:  Inflammatory cytokines appear to play a central role including TNF (which is also nicknamed 'cachexin' or 'cachectin'), interferon gamma and interleukin 6. TNF has been shown to have  direct catabolic effect on skeletal muscle and adipose tissue through the ubiquitin proteasome pathway.
Revised:  Inflammatory cytokines appear to play a central role including TNF (which is also nicknamed 'cachexin' or 'cachectin'), interferon gamma and interleukin 6. TNF has been shown to have a direct catabolic effect on skeletal muscle and adipose tissue through the ubiquitin proteasome pathway.
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Original:  For cancer patients with a body mass index of less than 20 kg/m2, cachexia is diagnosed after  unintended weight loss of more than 2\%.
Revised:  For cancer patients with a body mass index of less than 20 kg/m2, cachexia is diagnosed after the unintended weight loss of more than 2\%.
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Original:  The CSS takes into account weight loss, subjective reporting of muscle function, performance status, appetite loss, and laboratory changes to categorize patients into non-cachexia, pre-cachexia, cachexia  and refractory cachexia.
Revised:  The CSS takes into account weight loss, subjective reporting of muscle function, performance status, appetite loss, and laboratory changes to categorize patients into non-cachexia, pre-cachexia, cachexia , and refractory cachexia.
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Original:  Definition Identification, treatment  and research of cachexia has historically been limited by the lack of a widely accepted definition of cachexia.
Revised:  Definition Identification, treatment , and research of cachexia has historically been limited by the lack of a widely accepted definition of cachexia.
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Original:  Definition Identification, treatment  and research of cachexia has historically been limited by the lack of a widely accepted definition of cachexia.
Revised:  Definition Identification, treatment and research of cachexia have historically been limited by the lack of a widely accepted definition of cachexia.
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Original:  The management of cachexia depends on the underlying cause, the general prognosis, and  needs of the person affected.
Revised:  The management of cachexia depends on the underlying cause, the general prognosis, and the needs of the person affected.
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Original:  However this is often not possible or may be inadequate to reverse the cachexia syndrome in other diseases.
Revised:  However this is often not possible or maybe inadequate to reverse the cachexia syndrome in other diseases.
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Original:  Approaches to mitigate the muscle loss include exercise, nutritional therapies, and medications.
Revised:  Approaches to mitigate muscle loss include exercise, nutritional therapies, and medications.
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Original:  History The word "cachexia" is derived from the Greek words " kakos " (bad) and "hexis" (condition).
Revised:  History The word "cachexia" is derived from the Greek words " Kakos " (bad) and "hexis" (condition).
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Original: Therapy that includes regular physical exercise is recommended for the treatment of cachexia due to the positive effects of exercise on skeletal muscle .
Revised: Therapy that includes regular physical exercise can be recommended for the treatment of cachexia due to the positive effects of exercise on skeletal muscle .
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Original:  Although, randomised controlled trials are required to test exercise to improve management of cancer cachexia in a broad range of cancer types.
Revised:  Although, randomised controlled trials are needed to better determine if exercise can improve cancer cachexia in a broad range of cancer types.
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Original:  Cachexia can also be the result of advanced stages of cystic fibrosis, multiple sclerosis, motor neuron disease, Parkinson's disease, dementia, tuberculosis, multiple system atrophy, mercury poisoning, Crohn's disease, trypanosomasis , rheumatoid arthritis, and celiac disease as well as other systemic diseases.
Revised:  Cachexia can also be the result of advanced stages of cystic fibrosis, multiple sclerosis, motor neuron disease, Parkinson's disease, dementia, tuberculosis, multiple system atrophy, mercury poisoning, Crohn's disease, trypanosomiasis , rheumatoid arthritis, and celiac disease as well as other systemic diseases.
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Original: A page from Ming dynasty woodcut printed edition of Yingyai Shenglan by Ma Huan Ma Huan (, Xiao'erjing: ) (c. 1380–1460), courtesy name Chung-dao , pen name Mountain-woodcutter (會稽山樵), was a Chinese voyager and translator who accompanied Admiral Zheng He on three of his seven expeditions to the Western Oceans.
Revised: A page from Ming dynasty woodcut printed edition of Yingyai Shenglan by Ma Huan Ma Huan (, Xiao'erjing: ) (c. 1380–1460), courtesy name Zongdao () , pen name Mountain-woodcutter (會稽山樵), was a Chinese voyager and translator who accompanied Admiral Zheng He on three of his seven expeditions to the Western Oceans.
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Original:  It was said he was not born Muslim, but was a Chinese who converted to Islam when he was young, and his "Ma" surname (common amongst Chinese Muslims) had nothing to do with Muslim ancestry.
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Original: Types of marriages and how they were to develop : Polygyny-Many females under one male- The typical Bimaturism that tends to develop from this is a slow development on the male part and fast, or normal, development for the female.
Revised: Types of marriages and how they were to develop Polygyny-Many females under one male- The typical Bimaturism that tends to develop from this is a slow development on the male part and fast, or normal, development for the female.
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Original:  Example, Hyenas Reference : Pratt, Nancy C., and John A. Phillips.
Revised:  Example, Hyenas Reference Pratt, Nancy C., and John A. Phillips.
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Original: Sexual Bimaturism is an evolutionary idea that effects both sexes and how they develop.
Revised: Sexual Bimaturism is an evolutionary idea that affects both sexes and how they develop.
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