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Original:  Aaron Pagehad recently celebrated reaching eight years of age and was with twenty-five members of his family when he  made his way into the river , near Skipton , at approximately 3 pm local time (1400 UTC) on Saturday .
Revised:  river is known for its depth and strong undercurrent. The accident took place on Aaron Page's birthday, following celebrations with over twenty family members. made his way into the river , near Skipton , at approximately 3 pm local time (1400 UTC) on Saturday .
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Original:  Aaron's brother, aged 13 , was the first person to call for assistance after he sighted Aaron having difficulties in the river . Emergency services subsequently assisted in searching for Aaron;
Revised:  Aaron's brother, aged thirteen , was the first person to call for assistance after he sighted Aaron having difficulties in the river . Emergency services subsequently assisted in searching for Aaron;
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Original:  Aaron's brother, aged 13 , was the first person to call for assistance after he sighted Aaron having difficulties in the river . Emergency services subsequently assisted in searching for Aaron;
Revised:  Aaron's brother, aged 13 , was the first to call for assistance after he sighted Aaron having difficulties in the river . Emergency services subsequently assisted in searching for Aaron;
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Original:  Aaron's brother, aged 13 , was the first person to call for assistance after he sighted Aaron having difficulties in the river . Emergency services subsequently assisted in searching for Aaron;
Revised:  Aaron's brother, aged 13 , was the first person to call for assistance after spotting Aaron in the water . Emergency services subsequently assisted in searching for Aaron;
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Original:  his body was recovered at approximately 6.25 pm on the same day.
Revised:  the body was recovered at approximately 6.25 pm on the same day.
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Original:  his body was recovered at approximately 6.25 pm on the same day.
Revised:  his body was recovered at approximately 6:25 pm the same day.
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Original:  Members of the ambulance service failed to restore the boy's consciousness and he was pronounced dead at the scene of the incident . "This was a happy family day out to celebrate a birthday at a local beauty spot ... and unfortunately this young boy has got into difficulty in an area of water," stated Inspector Kevin Franks of North Yorkshire Police.
Revised:  Members of the ambulance service failed to resucitate him, pronouncing him dead at the scene of the incident . "This was a happy family day out to celebrate a birthday at a local beauty spot ... and unfortunately this young boy has got into difficulty in an area of water," stated Inspector Kevin Franks of North Yorkshire Police.
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Original:  Members of the ambulance service failed to restore the boy's consciousness and he was pronounced dead at the scene of the incident . "This was a happy family day out to celebrate a birthday at a local beauty spot ... and unfortunately this young boy has got into difficulty in an area of water," stated Inspector Kevin Franks of North Yorkshire Police.
Revised:  Members of the ambulance service failed to restore the boy's consciousness and he was pronounced dead at the scene . "This was a happy family day out to celebrate a birthday at a local beauty spot ... and unfortunately this young boy has got into difficulty in an area of water," stated Inspector Kevin Franks of North Yorkshire Police.
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Original:  "Despite efforts from members of the public and some quite stirling efforts from the emergency services and everyone else there, sadly we've been unable to bring him out alive."
Revised:  "Despite efforts from members of the public and some quite sterling efforts from the emergency services and everyone else there, sadly we've been unable to bring him out alive."
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Original:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police : " No  matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
Revised:  Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police : " No matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
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Original:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police : " No  matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
Revised:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police cautioned; " No matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
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Original:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police : " No  matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
Revised:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police : " n matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
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Original:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police : " No  matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
Revised:  According to Inspector Mike Woodhall of Harrogate police : " No o matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers.
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Original:  Members of the ambulance service failed to resucitate him, pronouncing him dead at the scene.
Revised:  Members of the ambulance service failed to resuscitate him, pronouncing him dead at the scene.
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Original:  "[n]o matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers. 
Revised:  "[n]o matter how safe a river seems sometimes there are inherent dangers. " RI
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Original:  Mr Hayward said.
Revised:  Hayward said.
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Original:  When asked about what amount of the leak the oil being captured represented, Mr Hayward claimed it was "the majority, probably the vast majority".
Revised:  When asked about what amount of the leak the oil being captured represented, he claimed it was "the majority, probably the vast majority".
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Original:  Mr Hayward feels confident that almost the entirety of the oil will be captured in the following week.
Revised:  Hayward feels confident that almost the entirety of the oil will be captured in the following week.
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Original:  Mr Hayward feels confident that almost the entirety of the oil will be captured in the following week.
Revised:  Mr Hayward feels confident that almost all of the oil will be captured in the following week.
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Original: Mo Mowlam, the former UK Northern Irelandsecretary , has died at 8.10am GMT in a hospice after a fall two weeks ago.
Revised: Mo Mowlam, the former Secretary for Northern Ireland , has died at 8.10am GMT in a hospice after a fall two weeks ago.
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Original:  She was a natural politician, could read a situation and analyse and assess it as fast as anyone.   
Revised:  She was a natural politician, could read a situation and analyse and assess it as fast as anyone. " 
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Original: In a statement, Tony Blair, called her "one of the shrewdest political minds I ever encountered.
Revised: In a statement, prime minister Tony Blair called her "one of the shrewdest political minds I ever encountered.
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Original: Mo Mowlam was central to the negotiations leading to the Good Friday Agreement and was popular in Britain for her straightforward approach, informality and honesty.
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Original:  Another former cabinet minister, Claire Short, said: "She was a very beautiful young woman, she survived ill health and helped bring peace to Northern Ireland and now she's gone far too young.     
Revised:  Another former cabinet minister, Claire Short, said: "She was a very beautiful young woman, she survived ill health and helped bring peace to Northern Ireland and now she's gone far too young. " 
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Original:  The incident took place  2100 (BST ) Sunday (June 6th) close to 'Falls of Curchan' station.
Revised:  The incident took place at 2100 (BST ) Sunday (June 6th) close to 'Falls of Curchan' station.
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Original:  According to some reports(BBC), both carriges of the derailed unit had also caught fire.
Revised:  According to reports, both carriages of the derailed unit had also caught fire.
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Original:  All passengers have been successfully evacuated, with 8 being taken to hospital with 'serious ' but not life-threatening injuries, there were no fatalities.
Revised:  All passengers have been successfully evacuated, with eight being taken to hospital with 'serious ' but not life-threatening injuries, there were no fatalities.
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Original:  All passengers have been successfully evacuated, with 8 being taken to hospital with 'serious ' but not life-threatening injuries, there were no fatalities.
Revised:  All passengers have been successfully evacuated, with 8 being taken to hospital with "serious but not life-threatening injuries, there were no fatalities.
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Original:  All passengers have been successfully evacuated, with 8 being taken to hospital with 'serious ' but not life-threatening injuries, there were no fatalities.
Revised:  All passengers have been successfully evacuated, with 8 being taken to hospital with 'serious ' but not life-threatening " injuries. There were no fatalities.
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Original:  A spokesperson for the ambulance service stated soon after the incident: ' There's quite a lot of walking wounded.
Revised:  A spokesperson for the ambulance service stated soon after the incident: " There's quite a lot of walking wounded.
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Original:  ' British Transpot Police gave a short statment : "The train involved was the 1820 hours Glasgow Queen Street to Oban service.
Revised:  " British Transpot Police gave a short statment : "The train involved was the 1820 hours Glasgow Queen Street to Oban service.
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Original:  ' British Transpot Police gave a short statment : "The train involved was the 1820 hours Glasgow Queen Street to Oban service.
Revised:  ' British Transport Police gave a short statment : "The train involved was the 1820 hours Glasgow Queen Street to Oban service.
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Original:  This is a two-car train and the leading car has derailed and caught fire' with Insp  David McEwan being quoted as confirming that the lead coach was ' sitting in a precarious position overhanging the roadway ' and continued 'The coach could slip further down the embankment on to the roadway ...
Revised:  This is a two-car train and the leading car has derailed and caught fire' with Insp Inspector David McEwan being quoted as confirming that the lead coach was ' sitting in a precarious position overhanging the roadway ' and continued 'The coach could slip further down the embankment on to the roadway ...
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Original:  This is a two-car train and the leading car has derailed and caught fire' with Insp  David McEwan being quoted as confirming that the lead coach was ' sitting in a precarious position overhanging the roadway ' and continued 'The coach could slip further down the embankment on to the roadway ...
Revised:  This is a two-car train and the leading car has derailed and caught fire' with Insp David McEwan being quoted as confirming that the lead coach was " sitting in a precarious position overhanging the roadway ' and continued 'The coach could slip further down the embankment on to the roadway ...
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Original:  This is a two-car train and the leading car has derailed and caught fire' with Insp  David McEwan being quoted as confirming that the lead coach was ' sitting in a precarious position overhanging the roadway ' and continued 'The coach could slip further down the embankment on to the roadway ...
Revised:  This is a two-car train and the leading car has derailed and caught fire' with Insp David McEwan being quoted as confirming that the lead coach was ' sitting in a precarious position overhanging the roadway ", and continued "the coach could slip further down the embankment on to the roadway ...
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Original:  According to a Scotrail spokesperson " An investigation is already under way into the cause of the incident by appropriate agencies and industry partners".
Revised:  According to a Scotrail spokesperson " an investigation is already under way into the cause of the incident by appropriate agencies and industry partners".
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Original:  The line between Glasgow and Oban remains closed, with buses to Crinlariach and Oban replacing trains
Revised:  The line between Glasgow and Oban remains closed, with buses to Crinlarich and Oban replacing trains
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Original: An investigation is currently under way in Argyll, Scotland, following a de-railment incident on the Glasgow-Oban railway.
Revised: An investigation is currently under way in Argyll, Scotland, following a de-railment incident on the Glasgow - Oban railway.
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Original:  The incident took place at 2100 BST (2000 UTC) on Sunday, June 6, close to the 'Falls of Curchan' station.
Revised:  The incident took place at 2100 BST (2000 UTC) on Sunday, close to the 'Falls of Curchan' station.
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Original:   British Transport Police gave a short statement . Railway engineers are currently working to stabilise the site, and re-open the line.
Revised:  The British Transport Police gave a short statement . Railway engineers are currently working to stabilise the site, and re-open the line.
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Original:   British Transport Police gave a short statement . Railway engineers are currently working to stabilise the site, and re-open the line.
Revised:  British Transport Police gave a short statement : Railway engineers are currently working to stabilise the site, and re-open the line.
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Original:  The line between Glasgow and Oban remains closed, with buses to Crinlarich and Oban replacing trains
Revised:  The line between Glasgow and Oban remains closed, with buses to Crianlarich and Oban replacing trains
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Original: An investigation is currently under way in Argyll, Scotland, following a de-railment incident on the Glasgow - Oban railway.
Revised: An investigation is currently under way in Argyll, Scotland, following a derailment on the Glasgow - Oban railway.
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Original:  The line between Glasgow and Oban remains closed, with buses to Crianlarich and Oban replacing trains  
Revised:  The line between Glasgow and Oban remains closed, with buses to Crianlarich and Oban replacing trains . 
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Original:  Russian and Chinese armed forces began their first ever joint military exercises since the Korean War, when Russia was still part of the Soviet Union, on Thursday.
Revised: w: Russian and Chinese armed forces began their first ever joint military exercises since the Korean War, when Russia was still part of the Soviet Union, on Thursday.
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Original:  “The exercise will be carried out in the framework of the fight against international terrorism and extremism, to respond to new threats and challenges,” said Liang Guanglie, chief-of-staff of China’s armed forces.
Revised:  “The exercise will be carried out in the framework of the fight against international terrorism and extremism, to respond to new threats and challenges,” said Liang Guanglie, chief of staff of China’s armed forces.
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Original: w: Russian and Chinese armed forces began their first ever joint military exercises since the Korean War, when Russia was still part of the Soviet Union, on Thursday.
Revised:  Russian and Chinese armed forces began their first ever joint military exercises since the Korean War, when Russia was still part of the Soviet Union, on Thursday.
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Original:  Russia and China are working together to help form of a new world order in the 21st century that will be based on multipolarity, respect for international law  and a leading role for the UN, Deputy Foreign Minister Alexander Alexeyev said on Monday, 15 August 2005.
Revised:  Russia and China are working together to help form of a world order that will be based on multipolarity, respect for international law and a leading role for the UN, Deputy Foreign Minister Alexander Alexeyev said on Monday, 15 August 2005.
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Original:  Russia and China are working together to help form of a new world order in the 21st century that will be based on multipolarity, respect for international law  and a leading role for the UN, Deputy Foreign Minister Alexander Alexeyev said on Monday, 15 August 2005.
Revised:  Russia and China are working together to help form of a new world order in the 21st century that will be based on multipolarity, respect for international law , and a leading role for the UN, Deputy Foreign Minister Alexander Alexeyev said on Monday, 15 August 2005.
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Original:  Russia and China are working together to help form of a new world order in the 21st century that will be based on multipolarity, respect for international law  and a leading role for the UN, Deputy Foreign Minister Alexander Alexeyev said on Monday, 15 August 2005.
Revised:  Russia and China are working together to help form of a new world order in the 21st century that will be based on multipolarity, respect for international law and a leading role for the UN, Deputy Foreign Minister Alexander Alexeyev said on Monday, August 15, 2005.
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Original: “The exercises are the logical continuation of the first signs of cooperation between Russia and China in the struggle against ‘orange revolutions,’ separatism and the dominant influence of the U.S. in the Euroasiatic sphere,” the Gazeta.ru news Web site wrote Thursday.
Revised: “The exercises are the logical continuation of the first signs of cooperation between Russia and China in the struggle against ‘orange revolutions,’ separatism and the dominant influence of the U.S. in the Euroasiatic sphere,” the Gazeta.ru news website wrote Thursday.
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Original:  Orange was the color adopted by supporters of last year’s revolution in Ukraine, which along with  Georgia and Kyrgyzstan, saw mass demonstrations bring pro-Western administrations to power.
Revised:  Orange was the color adopted by supporters of last year’s revolution in Ukraine, which along with mass demonstrations in Georgia and Kyrgyzstan, saw mass demonstrations bring pro-Western administrations to power.
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Original:  Orange was the color adopted by supporters of last year’s revolution in Ukraine, which along with  Georgia and Kyrgyzstan, saw mass demonstrations bring pro-Western administrations to power.
Revised:  Orange was the color adopted by supporters of last year’s revolution in Ukraine, which along with Georgia and Kyrgyzstan, brough pro-Western administrations to power.
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Original:  They begin in the eastern Russian port-city of Vladivostok and are supposed to culminate in a mock invasion involving beach landings and paratrooper drops off the coast of the Jiaodong peninsula in eastern China.
Revised:  They began in the eastern Russian port-city of Vladivostok and are supposed to culminate in a mock invasion involving beach landings and paratrooper drops off the coast of the Jiaodong peninsula in eastern China.
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Original:  The exercises come amid increasing speculation in the US that China may come to replace the US as the world's most powerful superpower.
Revised:  The exercises come amid increasing speculation in the US that China may come to replace the US as the world's greatest superpower.
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Original:  CNN reports that a group allegedly linked to Al-Qaeda  has claimed responsibility for the attacks    
Revised:  A branch of the Al-Qaeda has claimed responsibility for the attacks 
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Original:  One Jordanian soldier was killed , and one hurt .
Revised:  One Jordanian soldier was killed .
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