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Original:  The name used by Tertullus survives into Mishnaic and modern Hebrew as notzrim () a standard Hebrew term for "Christian", and also into the Quran and modern Arabic as naṣārā (plural of naṣrānī "Christian")  .
Revised:  The name used by Tertullus survives into Mishnaic and modern Hebrew as notzrim () a standard Hebrew term for "Christian", the name also made it into the Quran and modern Arabic as naṣārā (plural of naṣrānī "Christian") .
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Original:  The name used by Tertullus survives into Mishnaic and modern Hebrew as notzrim () a standard Hebrew term for "Christian", the name also made it into the Quran and modern Arabic as naṣārā (plural of naṣrānī "Christian") via Syriac .
Revised:  The name used by Tertullus survives into Mishnaic and modern Hebrew as notzrim () a standard Hebrew term for "Christian", the name also made it into the Quran and modern Arabic as naṣārā (plural of naṣrānī "Christian") via the Syriac dialect .
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Original:  The word Naṣuraiia'' may come from the root n-ṣ-r meaning "to keep"  since although they reject the Mosaic Law  they consider themselves to be keepers of Gnosis.
Revised:  The word Naṣuraiia'' may come from the root n-ṣ-r meaning "to keep" , since although they reject the Mosaic Law they consider themselves to be keepers of Gnosis.
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Original:  The word Naṣuraiia'' may come from the root n-ṣ-r meaning "to keep"  since although they reject the Mosaic Law  they consider themselves to be keepers of Gnosis.
Revised:  The word Naṣuraiia'' may come from the root n-ṣ-r meaning "to keep" since although they reject the Mosaic Law , they consider themselves to be keepers of Gnosis.
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Original:  They considered jesus as the son of god and believed in his crucifixion and resurrection.
Revised:  They considered Jesus as the son of god and believed in his crucifixion and resurrection.
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Original:  Minneapolis: Fortress Press The word Naṣuraiia '' may come from the root n-ṣ-r meaning "to keep", since although they reject the Mosaic Law, they consider themselves to be keepers of Gnosis.
Revised:  Minneapolis: Fortress Press The word Naṣuraiia may come from the root n-ṣ-r meaning "to keep", since although they reject the Mosaic Law, they consider themselves to be keepers of Gnosis.
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Original:  That is questioned by some, but others accept the pre-Christian origin of this group., p. xiv   .
Revised:  That is questioned by some, but others accept the pre-Christian origin of this group., p. xiv . .
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Original:  SVT itself has limited clinical significance (in terms of direct morbidity and mortality) when compared to a deep vein thrombosis (DVT), which occurs deeper in the body at the deep venous system level.
Revised:  SVT itself has limited significance (in terms of direct morbidity and mortality) when compared to a deep vein thrombosis (DVT), which occurs deeper in the body at the deep venous system level.
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Original:  SVT can be caused by a variety of etiologies , with similar risk factors as that of other thrombotic conditions.
Revised:  SVT can be due to a variety of etiologies , with similar risk factors as that of other thrombotic conditions.
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Original:  SVT can be caused by a variety of etiologies , with similar risk factors as that of other thrombotic conditions.
Revised:  SVT can be caused by a variety of causes , with similar risk factors as that of other thrombotic conditions.
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Original: Superficial vein thrombosis (SVT) is a type blood clot in a vein , which forms in a superficial vein near the surface of the body.
Revised: Superficial vein thrombosis (SVT) is a blood clot formed in a superficial vein, a vein , which forms in a superficial vein near the surface of the body.
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Original: Superficial vein thrombosis (SVT) is a type blood clot in a vein , which forms in a superficial vein near the surface of the body.
Revised: Superficial vein thrombosis (SVT) is a type blood clot in a vein near the surface of the body.
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Original:  He designed the Tesla Model S, Model 3, Model X, and the Model Y, and the not-yet-released Cybertruck, Semi, and second-generation Tesla Roadster.
Revised:  He designed the Tesla Model S, Model 3, Model X, Model Y, and the not-yet-released Cybertruck, Semi, and second-generation Tesla Roadster.
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Original:  In 2005, he took a role at Mazda, where he  led the designs of the Mazda Kabura concept car that debuted at the 2006 North American International Auto Show and the 2008 Mazda Furai concept unveiled in Detroit.
Revised:  In 2005, he took a role at Mazda, where he led the designs of the Mazda Kabura concept car that debuted at the 2006 North American International Auto Show and of the Mazda Furai concept unveiled in Detroit.
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Original:  He is known for designing Tesla vehicles, including the Model S, the Model 3, the Model X, the Model Y, and the  not-yet-released Cybertruck, Semi, and second-generation Tesla Roadster.
Revised:  He is known for designing Tesla vehicles, including the Model S, Model 3, the Model X, the Model Y, and the not-yet-released Cybertruck, Semi, and second-generation Tesla Roadster.
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Original:  He is known for designing Tesla vehicles, including the Model S, the Model 3, the Model X, the Model Y, and the  not-yet-released Cybertruck, Semi, and second-generation Tesla Roadster.
Revised:  He is known for designing Tesla vehicles, including the Model S, the Model 3, Model X, the Model Y, and the not-yet-released Cybertruck, Semi, and second-generation Tesla Roadster.
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Original:  He is known for designing Tesla vehicles, including the Model S, the Model 3, the Model X, the Model Y, and the  not-yet-released Cybertruck, Semi, and second-generation Tesla Roadster.
Revised:  He is known for designing Tesla vehicles, including the Model S, the Model 3, the Model X, Model Y, and the not-yet-released Cybertruck, Semi, and second-generation Tesla Roadster.
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Original: Franz von Holzhausen (born May 10, 1968  in Simsbury, Connecticut) is an American vehicle designer.
Revised: Franz von Holzhausen (born May 10, 1968 , in Simsbury, Connecticut) is an American vehicle designer.
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Original: Franz von Holzhausen (born May 10, 1968, in Simsbury, Connecticut) is a US vehicle designer.
Revised: Franz von Holzhausen (born May 10, 1968, in Simsbury, Connecticut) is an American car designer.
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Original:  He last played for the Barako Bull Energy in the Philippine Basketball Association (PBA).
Revised:  He last played for the Barako Bull Energy of the Philippine Basketball Association (PBA).
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Original: Other matriclans The following are some of the other major matriclans : Taa'boor matriclan (var : Tabor) — their clan is linked to the Pangool Laga Ndong, whose libation is headed  this maternal family.
Revised: Other matriclans The following are some of the other major matriclans : Taa'boor matriclan (var : Tabor) — their clan is linked to the Pangool Laga Ndong, whose libation is headed by this maternal family.
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Original: Partnership with Rd Mochtar alt=A promotional image showing a woman in a long dress sitting next to a man by the seaside|Roekiah with her frequent co-star Rd Mochtar on the cover of d'Orient In 1937  Roekiah made her first film appearance as the leading lady in Albert Balink's Terang Boelan (Full Moon).
Revised: Partnership with Rd Mochtar alt=A promotional image showing a woman in a long dress sitting next to a man by the seaside|Roekiah with her frequent co-star Rd Mochtar on the cover of d'Orient In 1937 , Roekiah made her first film appearance as the leading lady in Albert Balink's Terang Boelan (Full Moon).
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Original:  In 1939  they appeared together, again with Rd Mochtar as Roekiah's romantic foil, in the Zorro-influenced Gagak Item.
Revised:  In 1939 , they appeared together, again with Rd Mochtar as Roekiah's romantic foil, in the Zorro-influenced Gagak Item.
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Original:  Her funeral was attended by several luminaries, including the Minister of Education Ki Hajar Dewantara.
Revised:  Her funeral was attended by the Minister of Education Ki Hajar Dewantara.
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Original:  See also Albrecht von Gräfe Boston's sign Griffith's sign Graves orbitopathy Hyperthyroidism, as lid lag may be in hyperthyroid patients lacking Grave' s disease.
Revised:  See also Albrecht von Gräfe Boston's sign Griffith's sign Graves orbitopathy Hyperthyroidism, as lid lag may be in hyperthyroid patients lacking Graves' disease.
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Original:  The reason why only one eye is affected is not yet clear.
Revised:  The reason only one eye is affected is not yet clear.
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Original: Von Graefe's sign (lid lag sign) is the immobility or lagging of the upper eyelid on downward rotation of the eye, indicating exophthalmic goiter (Graves' Disease).
Revised: Von Graefe's sign (lid lag sign) is the lagging of the upper eyelid on downward rotation of the eye, indicating exophthalmic goiter (Graves' Disease).
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Original: Von Graefe's sign (lid lag sign) is the lagging of the upper eyelid on downward rotation of the eye, indicating exophthalmic goiter (Graves' Disease).
Revised: Von Graefe's sign is the lagging of the upper eyelid on downward rotation of the eye, indicating exophthalmic goiter (Graves' Disease).
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Original:  He attended a residency course at the Western College of Veterinary Medicine in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, from 1986 until 1987. is fourth and terminal degree, a Doctor of Philosophy, was obtained from the University of Nairobi in 1995.
Revised:  He attended a residency course at the Western College of Veterinary Medicine in Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, from 1986 until 1987. His fourth and terminal degree, a Doctor of Philosophy, was obtained from the University of Nairobi in 1995.
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Original:  The Council then directed him to proceed on terminal leave in July 2019, 6 months before the expiry of his contractual tenure.
Revised:  The Council then directed him to proceed on terminal leave in July 2019, six months before the expiry of his contractual tenure.
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Original:  22 February 1826 – 4 February 1901) was a Serbian lawyer, journalist, author , politician , mayor of Novi Sad , and the political leader of Serbs in Vojvodina.
Revised:  22 February 1826 – 4 February 1901) was a Serbian lawyer, journalist, author and politician who served as the mayor of Novi Sad , and the political leader of Serbs in Vojvodina.
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Original: Judy-Lynn was friends with Lester del Rey and married him after the death of his third wife.
Revised: Judy-Lynn was a friend of Lester del Rey and married him after the death of his third wife.
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Original: Judy-Lynn was friends with Lester del Rey and married him after the death of his third wife.
Revised: Judy-Lynn was friends with Lester del Rey , marrying him after the death of his third wife.
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Original:  As an editor, she was known for her rapport with authors and she had a beloved reputation . (Philip K. Dick called her a "master craftsman" and "the best editor I've ever worked with", and Isaac Asimov described her as "incredibly intelligent, quick-witted, hard-driving" and "generally recognised (especially by me) as one of the top editors in the business".)
Revised:  As an editor, she was known for her rapport with authors ; she was beloved by them . (Philip K. Dick called her a "master craftsman" and "the best editor I've ever worked with", and Isaac Asimov described her as "incredibly intelligent, quick-witted, hard-driving" and "generally recognised (especially by me) as one of the top editors in the business".)
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Original:  ( Philip K. Dick called her a "master craftsman" and "the best editor I've ever worked with", and Isaac Asimov described her as "incredibly intelligent, quick-witted, hard-driving" and "generally recognised (especially by me) as one of the top editors in the business". ) She was also instrumental in obtaining the rights to publish novels based on George Lucas's then-unreleased movie Star Wars, which would earn Ballantine/Del Rey several million dollars.
Revised:  Philip K. Dick called her a "master craftsman" and "the best editor I've ever worked with", and Isaac Asimov described her as "incredibly intelligent, quick-witted, hard-driving" and "generally recognised (especially by me) as one of the top editors in the business". ) She was also instrumental in obtaining the rights to publish novels based on George Lucas's then-unreleased movie Star Wars, which would earn Ballantine/Del Rey several million dollars.
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Original:  ( Philip K. Dick called her a "master craftsman" and "the best editor I've ever worked with", and Isaac Asimov described her as "incredibly intelligent, quick-witted, hard-driving" and "generally recognised (especially by me) as one of the top editors in the business". ) She was also instrumental in obtaining the rights to publish novels based on George Lucas's then-unreleased movie Star Wars, which would earn Ballantine/Del Rey several million dollars.
Revised:  ( Philip K. Dick called her a "master craftsman" and "the best editor I've ever worked with", and Isaac Asimov described her as "incredibly intelligent, quick-witted, hard-driving" and "generally recognised (especially by me) as one of the top editors in the business". She was also instrumental in obtaining the rights to publish novels based on George Lucas's then-unreleased movie Star Wars, which would earn Ballantine/Del Rey several million dollars.
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Original:  Capitol equipment loss Injury or loss of life Sustained failure to accomplish mission
Revised:  Capital equipment loss Injury or loss of life Sustained failure to accomplish mission
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Original: Operational Availability is a  management concept that evaluates the following.
Revised: Operational availability in systems engineering is a measurement of how long a system has been available to use when compared with how long it should have been available to be used. management concept that evaluates the following.
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Original:  Operational Availability is the overall availability considering each of these contributions.
Revised:  Operational availability is the overall availability considering each of these contributions.
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Original:  See also Active redundancy Operational availability Reliability block diagram External links
Revised:  See also Active redundancy Operational availability Reliability block diagram 
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Original:  This requires 
Revised:  This requires some amount of automated artificial intelligence.
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Original: N stands for needed  .
Revised: N stands for needed equipment .
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Original:  Similarly, N+2 would be 4 generators, which would allow one generator to fail while a second generator is taken down for maintenance .
Revised:  Similarly, N+2 would be 4 generators, which would allow one generator to fail while a second generator is already failed .
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Original:  Mechanical devices must reconfigure, such as transmission settings on hybrid vehicles with redundant propulsion systems.
Revised:  Mechanical devices must reconfigure, such as transmission settings on hybrid vehicles that have redundant propulsion systems.
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Original:  Shut down the damaged power line to isolate the failure Adjust dampers and exciters to prevent excessive generator voltage and frequency excursions
Revised:  Shut down the damaged power line to isolate the failure Adjust generator settings to prevent voltage and frequency excursions
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Original: Maintenance requires three actions, which usually involve down time and high priority labor costs .
Revised: Maintenance requires three actions, which usually involve down time and high priority labor costs :
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Original:  The amount of excess capacity affects overall system reliability by limiting the affects of failure.
Revised:  The amount of excess capacity affects overall system reliability by limiting the effects of failure.
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Original:  For example, if it takes 2 generators to power a city, then N+1 would be 3 generators to allow a single failure.
Revised:  For example, if it takes two generators to power a city, then N+1 would be 3 generators to allow a single failure.
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Original:  For example, if it takes 2 generators to power a city, then N+1 would be 3 generators to allow a single failure.
Revised:  For example, if it takes 2 generators to power a city, then N+1 would be three generators to allow a single failure.
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Original:  Similarly, N+2 would be 4 generators, which would allow one generator to fail while a second generator is already failed.
Revised:  Similarly, N+2 would be four generators, which would allow one generator to fail while a second generator is already failed.
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Original:  Similarly, N+2 would be 4 generators, which would allow one generator to fail while a second generator is already failed.
Revised:  Similarly, N+2 would be 4 generators, which would allow one generator to fail while a second generator has already failed.
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Original:  Passive Components Active Components
Revised:  Passive components Active Components
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Original:  Passive Components Active Components
Revised:  Passive Components Active components
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Original: Aircraft and missiles have a tendency to randomly fall out of the sky without the kind of high availability provided by active redundancy.
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Original:  History The new approach became to start building distributed systems that continue to work when components are damaged.
Revised:  History The new approach was to build distributed systems that continue to work when components are damaged.
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Original: An alanorarius, in ancient European customs, was a keeper or manager of spaniels, or setting-dogs, for the sport of hunting, falconry, etc.
Revised: An alanorarius, in ancient European customs, was a keeper or manager of spaniels, or setting-dogs, for the sport of hunting, falconry, URL
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Original: Later film work Hoolboom made  a biopic of the New York-based avant-garde filmmaker Tom Chomont  in 2002, which used layering to explore themes common in Chomont's work while exploring the latter's sometimes-incestuous relationship with his brother.
Revised: Later film work Hoolboom made Tom, a biopic of the New York-based avant-garde filmmaker Tom Chomont in 2002, which used layering to explore themes common in Chomont's work while exploring the latter's sometimes-incestuous relationship with his brother.
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Original: Later film work Hoolboom made  a biopic of the New York-based avant-garde filmmaker Tom Chomont  in 2002, which used layering to explore themes common in Chomont's work while exploring the latter's sometimes-incestuous relationship with his brother.
Revised: Later film work Hoolboom made a biopic of the New York-based avant-garde filmmaker Tom Chomont , in 2002, which used layering to explore themes common in Chomont's work while exploring the latter's sometimes-incestuous relationship with his brother.
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Original: Later film work Hoolboom made  a biopic of the New York-based avant-garde filmmaker Tom Chomont  in 2002, which used layering to explore themes common in Chomont's work while exploring the latter's sometimes-incestuous relationship with his brother.
Revised: Later film work Hoolboom made a biopic of the New York-based avant-garde filmmaker Tom Chomont in 2002, using layering to explore themes common in Chomont's work while exploring the latter's sometimes-incestuous relationship with his brother.
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Original: Canadian film directors Category:Canadian non-fiction writers Category:Canadian screenwriters Category:Indo people Category:People with HIV/AIDS Category:LGBT writers from Canada Category:Gay writers Category:Film directors from Toronto Category:Writers from Toronto Category:LGBT directors Category:Governor General's Award in Visual and Media Arts winners Category:Canadian people of Dutch descent Category:Canadian people of Indonesian descent Category:People of Indo desce
Revised: Canadian non-fiction writers Category:Canadian screenwriters Category:Indo people Category:People with HIV/AIDS Category:LGBT writers from Canada Category:Gay writers Category:Film directors from Toronto Category:Writers from Toronto Category:LGBT directors Category:Governor General's Award in Visual and Media Arts winners Category:Canadian people of Dutch descent Category:Canadian people of Indonesian descent Category:People of Indo desce
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Original: Michael "Mike" Hoolboom (born 1 January 1959) is a Canadian independent, experimental filmmaker.
Revised: Michael Hoolboom (born 1 January 1959) is a Canadian independent, experimental filmmaker.
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Original: Data from the World Health Organization suggests 65\% of the world's population live in countries where overweight and obesity kills more people than  underweight.
Revised: Data from the World Health Organization suggests 65\% of the world's population live in countries where being overweight or obese kills more people than underweight.
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Original: Data from the World Health Organization suggests 65\% of the world's population live in countries where overweight and obesity kills more people than  underweight.
Revised: Data from the World Health Organization suggests 65\% of the world's population live in countries where overweight and obesity kills more people than being underweight.
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Original:  URL  In 2000, approximately 32\% of U.S. adults had the metabolic syndrome.
Revised:  URL >. In 2000, approximately 32\% of U.S. adults had the metabolic syndrome.
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Original:  URL  The NGO Project Hope cites lifestyle changes as the primary cause of the increase of diabetes, specifically type 2 diabetes, which seems to correspond with a growing waist line.
Revised:  URL >. The NGO Project Hope cites lifestyle changes as the primary cause of the increase of diabetes, specifically type 2 diabetes, which seems to correspond with a growing waist line.
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Original:  URL  Roughly 8.4\% of adults are suffering from the effects of this disease, which caused 622,114 deaths in the region this year.
Revised:  URL >. Roughly 8.4\% of adults are suffering from the effects of this disease, which caused 622,114 deaths in the region this year.
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Original:  URL  In 2012, 11\% of (or approximately 4.2 million) adults in the NAC Region endured the disease;
Revised:  URL >. In 2012, 11\% of (or approximately 4.2 million) adults in the NAC Region endured the disease;
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Original:  URL  Approximately 132.2 million people in the WP Region have diabetes;
Revised:  URL >. Approximately 132.2 million people in the WP Region have diabetes;
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Original:  19 A chief risk factor for prediabetes is excess abdominal fat.
Revised:  A chief risk factor for prediabetes is excess abdominal fat.
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