wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Sixty orphaned children were transported by plane to Germany, where they are to be adopted.
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Original:  Children need to be connected with their communities." Khadivi noted that considering adoption would only be done if the child's parents are not found after several months   .
Revised:  Children need to be connected with their communities." Khadivi noted that considering adoption would only be done if the child's parents are not found after several months . .
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Original:  The two countries with the lowest unemployment rates were the Netherlands and Austria, with jobless figures of 4\% and 5.4\%, respectively  
Revised:  The two countries with the lowest unemployment rates were the Netherlands and Austria, with jobless figures of 4\% and 5.4\%, respectively . 
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Original:  As the fire truck rode through , the fire hose attached to it somehow dislodged and was left dragging behind the vehicle .
Revised:  As the truck passed , the fire hose attached to it somehow dislodged and was left dragging behind the vehicle .
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Original:  As the fire truck rode through , the fire hose attached to it somehow dislodged and was left dragging behind the vehicle .
Revised:  As the fire truck rode through , the fire hose attached to it dislodged and was left dragging behind the vehicle .
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Original:  The elderly lady was impacted in the knees by the fire hose .
Revised:  The elderly lady was hit in the knees by the fire hose .
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Original:  The elderly lady was impacted in the knees by the fire hose .
Revised:  The elderly lady was impacted in the knees by it .
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Original:  Deputy Superintendent Jack Albert of Cambridge Police stated : " We  do know the hose is 200 feet long and we believe that the hose was completely off the truck and being dragged at the time it struck."
Revised:  Deputy Superintendent Jack Albert of Cambridge Police stated , " We do know the hose is 200 feet long and we believe that the hose was completely off the truck and being dragged at the time it struck."
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Original:  Deputy Superintendent Jack Albert of Cambridge Police stated : " We  do know the hose is 200 feet long and we believe that the hose was completely off the truck and being dragged at the time it struck."
Revised:  Deputy Superintendent Jack Albert of Cambridge Police stated : " w do know the hose is 200 feet long and we believe that the hose was completely off the truck and being dragged at the time it struck."
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Original:  Deputy Superintendent Jack Albert of Cambridge Police stated : " We  do know the hose is 200 feet long and we believe that the hose was completely off the truck and being dragged at the time it struck."
Revised:  Deputy Superintendent Jack Albert of Cambridge Police stated : " We e do know the hose is 200 feet long and we believe that the hose was completely off the truck and being dragged at the time it struck."
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Original:  An investigation has now been launched .
Revised:  An investigation is underway .
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Original:  The police have said that, at present, they are unable to determine the cause of the hose dislodging . Gertrude was said to be unable to get out of the way in time.
Revised:  The police have said that, at present, they are unable to determine the cause of the loose hose . Gertrude was said to be unable to get out of the way in time.
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Original:  Elanor Raniri  lives in the same apartment complex as Gertrude did .
Revised:  Elanor Raniri , who lives in the same apartment complex as Gertrude did .
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Original:  She saidabout the woman: " She  was very special.
Revised:  She saidabout the woman: " s was very special.
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Original:  She saidabout the woman: " She  was very special.
Revised:  She saidabout the woman: " She he was very special.
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Original:  the elderly lady was hit in the knees by it .
Revised:  the elderly woman was struck in the knees by it .
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Original:  Elanor Raniri, who lives in the same apartment complex as Gertrude did , said, "[s]he was very special.
Revised:  Elanor Raniri, who lives in the same apartment complex as Gertrude , said, "[s]he was very special.
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Original:   Musician Jonas Altberg, better known by his stage name Basshunter, finished in fourth place.
Revised:  Alex had become unpopular with fans as he was said to have been bossy to other celebrities inside the house. Speaking to presenter Davina McCall, he stated: "I was just trying to keep order in the house because a lot of people were selfish. I was just trying to keep some stability in the house." Musician Jonas Altberg, better known by his stage name Basshunter, finished in fourth place.
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Original:  Actress Stephanie Beacham left the Big Brother house in fifth place  
Revised:  Actress Stephanie Beacham left the Big Brother house in fifth place . 
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Original:  He won what was the last series of the programme in the final on Friday night, having received 65.9\% of the votes from the public.
Revised:  He won what is the last series of the programme in the final on Friday night, having received 65.9\% of the votes from the public.
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Original:  Fellow housemate Dane Bowers has previously been Katie's boyfriend.
Revised:  Fellow housemate Dane has also previously been Katie's boyfriend.
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Original:  I'm really looking forward to seeing more of Dane," Alex said  
Revised:  I'm really looking forward to seeing more of Dane," Alex said . 
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Original:   The deal, that would include helicopters and anti-missile defences, angered China, who stated that the move would "seriously damage" US-China relations, as Beijing believes the island to be a break-away province of China, splitting away after civil war in 1949.
Revised:  |left The deal, that would include helicopters and anti-missile defences, angered China, who stated that the move would "seriously damage" US-China relations, as Beijing believes the island to be a break-away province of China, splitting away after civil war in 1949.
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Original:  The US is the main arms supplier for Taiwan   .
Revised:  The US is the main arms supplier for Taiwan . .
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Original:  Ties between the United States and China, already stretched by the recent row over internet censorship, in which Google threatened to withdraw its presence in the country, have been strained by the announcement.
Revised: A spokesman for the Chinese embassy in Washington, Wang Baodong, said yesterday that the arms sale was a "gross intervention into China's internal affairs". He went on to assert that the trade "seriously endangers China's national security". Ties between the United States and China, already stretched by the recent row over internet censorship, in which Google threatened to withdraw its presence in the country, have been strained by the announcement.
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Original: The  US Department of Defense have notified Congress of a potential arms sale to Taiwan, with a value of $ 6bn , that was first pledged by the Bush administration.
Revised: The US Department of Defense have notified Congress of a potential arms sale to Taiwan, with a value of $ 6 billion , that was first pledged by the Bush administration.
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Original: |left The deal , that would include helicopters and anti-missile defences, angered China, who stated that the move would "seriously damage" US-China relations, as Beijing believes the island to be a break-away province of China, splitting away after civil war in 1949.
Revised: |left , that would include helicopters and anti-missile defences, angered China, who stated that the move would "seriously damage" US-China relations, as Beijing believes the island to be a break-away province of China, splitting away after civil war in 1949.
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Original:  General James  Jones, the National Security adviser for the Obama administration, said that China had been fully consulted about the deal.
Revised:  General James L. Jones, the National Security adviser for the Obama administration, said that China had been fully consulted about the deal.
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Original:  General James  Jones, the National Security adviser for the Obama administration, said that China had been fully consulted about the deal.
Revised:  General James Jones, the National Security Advisor for the Obama administration, said that China had been fully consulted about the deal.
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Original:  A spokesman for the Chinese embassy in Washington  , Wang Baodong, said yesterday that the arms sale was a "gross intervention into China's internal affairs".
Revised:  A spokesman for the Chinese embassy in Washington , D.C. , Wang Baodong, said yesterday that the arms sale was a "gross intervention into China's internal affairs".
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Original: There is a stand-off between China and Taiwan , with the former having a large number of weapons aimed at the country , and has threatened to use them in the past.
Revised: There is a stand-off between China and Taiwan . China has a large number of weapons aimed at the country , and has threatened to use them in the past.
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Original: There is a stand-off between China and Taiwan , with the former having a large number of weapons aimed at the country , and has threatened to use them in the past.
Revised: There is a stand-off between China and Taiwan , with the former having a large number of weapons aimed at Taiwan , and has threatened to use them in the past.
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Original: |left The US Department of Defense have notified Congress of a potential arms sale to Taiwan, with a value of $6 billion, that was first pledged by the Bush administration.
Revised: |left The US Department of Defense has notified Congress of a potential arms sale to Taiwan, with a value of $6 billion, that was first pledged by the Bush administration.
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Original:  A thirty-day deadline is in place for politicians to decide on the preposition before it goes ahead.
Revised:  A thirty-day deadline is in place for politicians to decide on the proposition before it goes ahead.
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Original:  But if something happens again in the next months and years, they will have gambled away customer trust in Europe as well.  
Revised:  But if something happens again in the next months and years, they will have gambled away customer trust in Europe as well. " 
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Original:  A decades-old building collapsed along Ma Tau Wai Road in Hong Kong at about 1:30pm on Friday.
Revised:  decades-old building collapsed along Ma Tau Wai Road in Hong Kong at about 1:30pm on Friday.
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Original:  The government has restricted access to buildings at 45G and 45H as they were in danger. Galler
Revised:  The government has restricted access to buildings at 45G and 45H as they were in danger. In picture
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Original: A decades-old building collapsed along Ma Tau Wai Road in Hong Kong at about 1:30pm on Friday Hong Kong Time .
Revised: A decades-old building collapsed along Ma Tau Wai Road in Hong Kong at about 1:30pm on Friday , local time .
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Original: China have stated that they will cease all military exchanges with the United States in response to the recent deal to give Taiwan weapons worth $6.4bn .
Revised: China have stated that they will cease all military exchanges with the United States in response to the recent deal to give Taiwan weapons worth .
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Original:  " Beijing will review co-operation on major issues & impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
Revised:  Beijing will review co-operation on major issues & impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
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Original:  " Beijing will review co-operation on major issues & impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
Revised:  " Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues & impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
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Original:  The Chinese defense ministry said that they had "decided to suspend planned mutual military visits", They "strongly demand" that the United States "respect the Chinese side's interests ", calling for the proposal to be rejected.
Revised:  The Chinese defense ministry said that they had "decided to suspend planned mutual military visits", They "strongly demand" that the United States "respect the Chinese side's interests ," calling for the proposal to be rejected.
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Original:  China summoned the US Ambassador to China, Jon Huntsman, to warn the US Government about the consequences, and to urge for cancellation , of the deal.
Revised:  China summoned the US Ambassador to China, Jon Huntsman, to warn the US Government about the consequences, and to urge for cancellation of the deal.
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Original:  Yafei issued a statement on the Foreign Ministry website , stating that "the United States' announcement of the planned weapons sales to Taiwan will have a seriously negative impact on many important areas of exchanges and co-operation between the two countries ".
Revised:  Yafei issued a statement on the Foreign Ministry website stating that "the United States' announcement of the planned weapons sales to Taiwan will have a seriously negative impact on many important areas of exchanges and co-operation between the two countries ".
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Original:  Yafei issued a statement on the Foreign Ministry website , stating that "the United States' announcement of the planned weapons sales to Taiwan will have a seriously negative impact on many important areas of exchanges and co-operation between the two countries ".
Revised:  Yafei issued a statement on the Foreign Ministry website , stating that "the United States' announcement of the planned weapons sales to Taiwan will have a seriously negative impact on many important areas of exchanges and co-operation between the two countries ."
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Original:  "Such sales contribute to maintaining security and stability across the Taiwan Strait", said Laura Tischler, spokeswoman for the US State Department  . Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues  impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
Revised:  "Such sales contribute to maintaining security and stability across the Taiwan Strait", Laura Tischler, spokeswoman for the US State Department . Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
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Original:  "Such sales contribute to maintaining security and stability across the Taiwan Strait", said Laura Tischler, spokeswoman for the US State Department  . Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues  impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
Revised:  "Such sales contribute to maintaining security and stability across the Taiwan Strait", said Laura Tischler, spokeswoman for the US State Department , said . Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
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Original:  "Such sales contribute to maintaining security and stability across the Taiwan Strait", said Laura Tischler, spokeswoman for the US State Department  . Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues  impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
Revised:  "Such sales contribute to maintaining security and stability across the Taiwan Strait", said Laura Tischler, spokeswoman for the US State Department . Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues and impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
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Original:  Taiwan, one of Asia's few functioning democracies, welcomed the proposal, with Taiwanese president Ma Ying-jeou being quoted as saying "It will let Taiwan feel more confident and secure so we can have more interactions with China ".
Revised:  Taiwan, one of Asia's few functioning democracies, welcomed the proposal, with Taiwanese president Ma Ying-jeou being quoted as saying "It will let Taiwan feel more confident and secure so we can have more interactions with China ."
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Original:  The arms deal includes  Black Hawk helicopters, communications equipment and  Patriot missiles, but does not include F-16 fighter jets , that Taiwan's military were looking for.
Revised:  The arms deal includes Black Hawk helicopters, communications equipment and Patriot missiles, but does not include F-16 fighter jets that Taiwan's military were looking for.
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Original: Taiwan and China have been ruled by separate governments since 1949, although China has hundreds of missiles pointed at the island.
Revised: Taiwan and China have been ruled by separate governments since 1949, and China has hundreds of missiles pointed at the island.
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Original:  China considers the island as part of its territory, but has offered  to be run like Hong Kong, in a "one country, two systems" way.
Revised:  China considers the island part of its territory, but has offered to be run like Hong Kong, in a "one country, two systems" way.
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Original:  China considers the island as part of its territory, but has offered  to be run like Hong Kong, in a "one country, two systems" way.
Revised:  China considers the island as part of its territory, but has offered for it to be run like Hong Kong, in a "one country, two systems" way.
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Original:  Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues and impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tinananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
Revised:  Beijing is threatening to review co-operation on major issues and impose sanctions on companies selling arms, even though US companies are banned from selling arms to China as a result of the Tiananmen Square massacre in 1989, so it is not clear what the effect will be.
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Original:  The arms deal includes UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters, communications equipment and MIM-104 Patriot missiles, but does not include  F-16 fighter jets that Taiwan's military were looking for.
Revised:  The arms deal includes UH-60 Black Hawk helicopters, communications equipment and MIM-104 Patriot missiles, but does not include the F-16 fighter jets that Taiwan's military were looking for.
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Original:  China considers the island part of its territory, but has offered for it to be run like Hong Kong, in a "one country, two systems" way.
Revised:  In an effort to regain control of Taiwan, the government in Beijing has been open to running the island like Hong Kong, in a "one country, two systems" way.
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Original:  Most people in Taiwan , however, support the status quo.
Revised:  Most people in Taiwan support the status quo.
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Original: China have stated that they will cease all military exchanges with the United States in response to the recent deal to give Taiwan weapons worth if the deal goes ahead.
Revised: China has stated that they will cease all military exchanges with the United States in response to the recent deal to give Taiwan weapons worth if the deal goes ahead.
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Original:  The Chinese Vice-Foreign Minister, He Yafei, said that there would be a "serious negative impact" with regards to the relationship between the US and China.
Revised:  The Chinese Vice-Foreign Minister, said that there would be a "serious negative impact" with regards to the relationship between the US and China.
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Original:  Taiwan and  China have been ruled by separate governments since 1949, and China does not recognize Taiwan 's independence , having hundreds of missiles pointed at the island .
Revised:  Taiwan and China have been ruled by separate governments since 1949, and neither recognize each other 's independence , having hundreds of missiles pointed at the island .
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Original:  Taiwan and  China have been ruled by separate governments since 1949, and China does not recognize Taiwan 's independence , having hundreds of missiles pointed at the island .
Revised:  Taiwan and China have been ruled by separate governments since 1949, and China does not recognize Taiwan 's independence .
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Original:  The US is legally obliged to supply Taiwan with defensive weapons , under the Taiwan Relations Act 1979.
Revised:  The US is legally obliged to supply Taiwan with defensive weapons under the Taiwan Relations Act 1979.
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Original:  In 2003, an unnamed US briefing stated that " we [the US] would have to get involved if China tried to use coercion or force to unilaterally change the status of Taiwan".
Revised:  In 2003, an unnamed US briefing stated that " [the US] would have to get involved if China tried to use coercion or force to unilaterally change the status of Taiwan".
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Original:  Two mortar bombs landed in this neighbourhood , killing four civilians and wounding six."
Revised:  Two mortar bombs landed in this neighborhood , killing four civilians and wounding six."
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Original:  We shall keep on targeting them .", said the attackers.
Revised:  We shall keep on targeting them ," said the attackers.
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Original: Al-Shabaab is considered a terrorist organization by the United States , which blames it for shootings and suicide bombings inside Somalia.
Revised: Al-Shabaab is considered a terrorist body by the United States , which blames it for shootings and suicide bombings inside Somalia.
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Original: Al-Shabaab is considered a terrorist organization by the United States , which blames it for shootings and suicide bombings inside Somalia.
Revised: Al-Shabaab is considered a terrorist organization by the United States ; the latter blames it for shootings and suicide bombings inside Somalia.
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Original:  The group has also threatened African neighbors , including Ethiopia, Djibouti, Kenya, Eritrea, Ghana, Sudan and Uganda.
Revised:  Al-Shabaab has also threatened African neighbors , including Ethiopia, Djibouti, Kenya, Eritrea, Ghana, Sudan and Uganda.
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