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Original: Mizo people Category:People from Aizawl district Category:20th-century Indian poets Category:Indian female singer-songwriters Category:Indian women activists Category:20th-century Indian singers Category:Indian women poets Category:Singers from Mizoram Category:Writers from Mizoram Category:Women from Mizoram Category:20th-century Indian women writers Category:20th-century Indian writers Category:Activists from Mizoram Category:20th-century women musicia
Revised: Mizo people Category:People from Aizawl district Category:20th-century Indian poets Category:Indian female singer-songwriters Category:Indian women activists Category:20th-century Indian singers Category:Indian women poets Category:Singers from Mizoram Category:Writers from Mizoram Category:Women from Mizoram Category:20th-century Indian women writers Category:20th-century Indian writers Category:Activists from Mizoram Category:20th-century women singe
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Original:  In 2 years  brought in $2 million in revenues.
Revised:  In 2 years she brought in $2 million in revenues.
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Original: Further Reading A tribute to Anna Brown was published in 1990.
Revised: Further reading A tribute to Anna Brown was published in 1990.
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Original: Anna V. Brown ( 1914-1985 ) was an African American advocate for the elderly who assisted Mayor Carl Stokes in developing aging programs in Cleveland in the 1970s.
Revised: Anna V. Brown ( 1914-1985 ) was an African-American advocate for the elderly who assisted Mayor Carl Stokes in developing aging programs in Cleveland in the 1970s.
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Original:  After her trip abroad, she and her family moved to Cleveland, where she began working in 1941 for the Phillis Wheatley Association (PWA).
Revised:  After her trip abroad, Brown and her family moved to Cleveland, where she began working in 1941 for the Phillis Wheatley Association (PWA).
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Original:  The Association offered recreational facilities for social events and youth programs, such as dance and music lessons, as well as a day care facility for working mothers.
Revised:  The Association offered recreational facilities for social events and youth programs, such as dance and music lessons, as well as a day-care facility for working mothers.
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Original:  There, she became aware of issues which faced aging patients.
Revised:  There, she became aware of issues that faced aging patients.
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Original:  In 2 years she generated in $2 million in revenues.
Revised:  In two years she generated in $2 million in revenues.
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Original:  Community partners including City of Cleveland Department of Aging, Cleveland State University, Cuyahoga County Division of Senior and Adult Services and Western Reserve Area Agency on Aging conducted the annual event for twenty-seven years.
Revised:  Community partners including City of Cleveland Department of Aging, Cleveland State University, Cuyahoga County Division of Senior and Adult Services and Western Reserve Area Agency on Aging conducted the annual event for 27 years.
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Original:  She died on November 12, 1985  in Cleveland.
Revised:  She died on November 12, 1985 , in Cleveland.
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Original:  and Harel, Zev. Black aged : understanding diversity and service needs , Cleveland State University: National Council on the Aging (1990)
Revised:  and Harel, Zev. Black Aged: Understanding Diversity and Service Needs , Cleveland State University: National Council on the Aging (1990)
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Original:   Grimm & Co. was a two-story bakery (patisserie), restaurant, and dancing place in Surabaya, Indonesia.
Revised:  Co. aan de Pasar Besar in Soerabaja te wachten op de optocht ter gelegenheid van de kroningsfeesten van Koningin Wilhelmina in 1898. TMnr 60003134.jpg|Spectators set to watch the parade celebrating the coronation of Queen Wilhelmina in 1898 Grimm & Co. was a two-story bakery (patisserie), restaurant, and dancing place in Surabaya, Indonesia.
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Original: Toko Grimm & Co. was a two-story bakery (patisserie), restaurant, and dancing place in Surabaya, Indonesia.
Revised:  Grimm & Co. was a two-story bakery (patisserie), restaurant, and dancing place in Surabaya, Indonesia.
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Original: Grimm & Co. was a two-story bakery (patisserie), restaurant, and dancing place in Surabaya, Indonesia.
Revised: Grimm & Co. was a two-story bakery (patisserie), restaurant, and dance hall in Surabaya, Indonesia.
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Original:  Currently, the village is mainly a police post and associated housing.
Revised:  The village is mainly a police post and associated housing.
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Original:  It was used to house various artifacts and items if historic interest which were found by persons in the area of the old Fort.
Revised:  It was used to house artifacts and items if historic interest which were found by persons in the area of the old Fort.
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Original: Tuli Circle Tuli also forms the centre of a 10 mile 'circle', the southern half of which stretches south of the Shashe River.
Revised: Tuli Circle Tuli also forms the centre of a 10-mile 'circle', the southern half of which stretches south of the Shashe River.
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Original:  She currently serves as director of external relations at the National Center for Transgender Equality, based in Washington, DC. She is a longtime advocate and public policy specialist on matters concerning human rights, gender, and LGBT people.
Revised:  She served as director of external relations at the National Center for Transgender Equality, based in Washington, DC. She is a longtime advocate and public policy specialist on matters concerning human rights, gender, and LGBT people.
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Original:  In this role she leads and enhances NCTE's organizing and public education efforts, and supports the organization’s policy and communications programs   .
Revised:  In this role she led and enhanced NCTE's organizing and public education efforts, and supports the organization’s policy and communications programs .
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Original:  In this role she leads and enhances NCTE's organizing and public education efforts, and supports the organization’s policy and communications programs   .
Revised:  In this role she leads and enhances NCTE's organizing and public education efforts, and supports the organization’s policy and communications programs . .
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Original: White House Office Category:Transgender and transsexual women Category:Transgender and transsexual Jews Category:LGBT Hispanic and Latino American people Category:LGBT people from Honduras Category:LGBT people from Massachusetts Category:1987 births Category:People from Intibucá Department Category:Lenca  Category:American adoptees Category:Honduran emigrants to the United States Category:People from Brookline, Massachusetts Category:Brookline High School alumni Category:St.
Revised: White House Office Category:Transgender and transsexual women Category:Transgender and transsexual Jews Category:LGBT Hispanic and Latino American people Category:LGBT people from Honduras Category:LGBT people from Massachusetts Category:1987 births Category:People from Intibucá Department Category:Lenca people Category:American adoptees Category:Honduran emigrants to the United States Category:People from Brookline, Massachusetts Category:Brookline High School alumni Category:St.
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Original: Freedom and Destiny  Gender, Family and Popular Culture in India is a book consisting of eight essays by Indian feminist and sociologist Patricia Uberoi.
Revised: Freedom and Destiny : Gender, Family and Popular Culture in India is a book consisting of eight essays by Indian feminist and sociologist Patricia Uberoi.
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Original:  Babies are variedly represented as the God-Baby, the Welcome Baby, the Hero Baby, the Citizen Baby  and the Customized Baby.
Revised:  Babies are variedly represented as the God-Baby, the Welcome Baby, the Hero Baby, the Citizen Baby , and the Customized Baby.
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Original:  She later changed the title to Freedom and Destiny so that one could identify the moral economy of family and social life as well see how notions of modernity ruptured individual autonomy and freedom for both men and women . Reference
Revised:  She later changed the title to Freedom and Destiny so that one could identify the moral economy of family and social life as well see how notions of modernity ruptured individual autonomy and freedom for both men and women Reference
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Original:  She later changed the title to Freedom and Destiny so that one could identify the moral economy of family and social life as well see how notions of modernity ruptured individual autonomy and freedom for both men and women . Reference
Revised:  She later changed the title to Freedom and Destiny so that one could identify the moral economy of family and social life as well see how notions of modernity ruptured individual autonomy and freedom for both men and women . 
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Original:  For example, the retail and manufacturing businesses use climate data to assess how weather has influenced past sales so they can better plan for the future.
Revised:  For example, retail and manufacturing businesses use climate data to assess how weather has influenced past sales so they can better plan for the future.
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Original:  The reinsurance industry—which essentially offers insurance to insurance companies—uses NCEI data to determine risks associated with natural disasters.
Revised:  The reinsurance industry—which offers insurance to insurance companies—uses NCEI data to determine risks associated with natural disasters.
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Original:  Climate and Weather NCEI offers access to climate information through a variety of reports and datasets.
Revised:  Climate and weather NCEI offers access to climate information through a variety of reports and datasets.
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Original: In   August 2015, responding to popular demonstrations against government corruption and inefficiency, Prime Minister Haider al-Abadi announced a reduction in the number of ministers, abolishing the Ministry of Women's Affairs.
Revised: In In August 2015, responding to popular demonstrations against government corruption and inefficiency, Prime Minister Haider al-Abadi announced a reduction in the number of ministers, abolishing the Ministry of Women's Affairs.
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Original:  An frailty index can be created in most secondary data sources related to health by utilizing health deficits that are routinely collected in health assessments.
Revised:  A frailty index can be created in most secondary data sources related to health by utilizing health deficits that are routinely collected in health assessments.
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Original: The frailty index (FI) is used to measure the health status of older individuals - as a proxy measure of aging and vulnerability to poor outcomes.
Revised: The frailty index (FI) is used to measure the health status of older individuals ; it serves as a proxy measure of aging and vulnerability to poor outcomes.
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Original:  This measure was developed by Dr. Kenneth Rockwood and Dr. Arnold Mitnitski at Dalhousie University in Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada.
Revised:  FI was developed by Dr. Kenneth Rockwood and Dr. Arnold Mitnitski at Dalhousie University in Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada.
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Original:  It is defined as the proportion of deficits present in an individual out of the total number of age-related health variables considered.
Revised:  FI is defined as the proportion of deficits present in an individual out of the total number of age-related health variables considered.
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Original:  For Fields, his work provides a "visual definition of what it is like to be Native American in Oklahoma." (oklahoma arts council insert citation)
Revised:  For Fields, his work provides a "visual definition of what it is like to be Native American in Oklahoma." 
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Original:  He was worked in both commercial and fine art photography during his career.
Revised:  He has worked in both commercial and fine art photography during his career.
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Original:  Fields specializes in full-frame, black-and-white photos of Indian communities , shot as close as possible  .
Revised:  Fields specializes in full-frame, black-and-white photos , shot as close as possible .
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Original:  Early life Tom Fields was born in Tahlequah, Oklahoma  in 1951.
Revised:  Early life Tom Fields was born in Tahlequah, Oklahoma , in 1951.
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Original:  After this project, he began to hang around friends that were associated with the Institute of American Indian Arts (IAIA).
Revised:  After this project, he began to hang around friends associated with the Institute of American Indian Arts (IAIA).
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Original:  Some of these places include: Institute of American Indian Arts in Santa Fe National Museum of the American Indian Smithsonian Institution in Washington, D.C. Banff Centre in Banff,  Canada New Orleans Museum of Art  References Category:1951 births Category:Living peop
Revised:  Some of these places include: Institute of American Indian Arts , Santa Fe National Museum of the American Indian Smithsonian Institution in Washington, D.C. Banff Centre in Banff, Canada New Orleans Museum of Art References Category:1951 births Category:Living peop
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Original:  He initially started off as a government official with the Central Government of India, in the Indian Revenue URL but later on shifted to academia and moved on to joining the Goa University's Konkani department.
Revised:  He initially started off as a government official with the Central Government of India, in the Indian Revenue Service, but later on shifted to academia and moved on to joining the Goa University's Konkani department.
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Original:  literature, translation studies, history, sociology and URL His Konkani writings resulted in him being included in the executive board of the Indian institution of letters the Sahitya Akademi as a representative for the Konkani language, a member of the experts panel of the University Grants Commission, the National Council of Educational Research and Training, the Union Public Service Commission, the K K Birla Foundation, and the Indian Languages Promotion Council, among others.
Revised:  literature, translation studies, history, sociology and culture. His Konkani writings resulted in him being included in the executive board of the Indian institution of letters the Sahitya Akademi as a representative for the Konkani language, a member of the experts panel of the University Grants Commission, the National Council of Educational Research and Training, the Union Public Service Commission, the K K Birla Foundation, and the Indian Languages Promotion Council, among others.
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Original:  These are some URL authored by Dr. Gomes:
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Original:  His poetry Anwarkavya has several spiritual poems about Bhakti.
Revised:  His Anwarkavya includes several spiritual poems about Bhakti.
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Original:  He composed in Gujarati and Urdu.
Revised:  He composed in Gujarati as well as Urdu.
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Original:  He has  composed devotional hyms of Rama and Krishna.
Revised:  He has also composed devotional hyms of Rama and Krishna.
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Original:  He contacted illness and moved to Palanpur where he died on 22 October 1916.
Revised:  He contracted illness and moved to Palanpur where he died on 22 October 1916.
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Original:  He has also composed devotional hyms of Rama and Krishna.
Revised:  He has also composed devotional hymns of Rama and Krishna.
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Original:  Overnight accommodation can be found in the primary school in the village. 
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Original:  Overnight accommodation can be found in the primary school in the village. Trek
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Original: Tandulwadi Fort ( तांदुळवाडी किल्ला ) is located near Saphale, 104 km north of Mumbai.
Revised: Tandulwadi Fort तांदुळवाडी किल्ला ) is located near Saphale, 104 km north of Mumbai.
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Original: Tandulwadi Fort ( तांदुळवाडी किल्ला ) is located near Saphale, 104 km north of Mumbai.
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Original: Tandulwadi Fort तांदुळवाडी किल्ला is located near Saphale, 104 km north of Mumbai.
Revised: Tandulwadi Fort is located near Saphale, 104 km north of Mumbai.
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Original:  "The SLUGGS survey : exploring the metallicity gradients of nearby early-type galaxies to large radii";
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Original:  "The SLUGGS survey : calcium triplet-based spectroscopic metallicities for over 900 globular clusters";
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Original: Colour thumbnails of the 25 galaxies in the SLUGGS survey.
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Original: Project The SLUGGS (SAGES Legacy Unifying Globulars and GalaxieS) survey is an astronomical survey of 25 nearby early-type (E and S0) galaxies.
Revised:  The SLUGGS (SAGES Legacy Unifying Globulars and GalaxieS) survey is an astronomical survey of 25 nearby early-type (E and S0) galaxies.
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Original:  Шүрэн бугуйвч (Coral Bracelet), Э-майлаар илгээсэн захиа сарнай (Rose Sent by Email), Үйсэн дээрх бичээс (Script Carved on Wood), Чимээгүй хашгираан (Silent Scream), Цасан нулимс (Snow Tears), Зургадугаар сарын цас (June Snow), Сэтгэлийн анир (Spiritual peace ), and Novels.
Revised:  Шүрэн бугуйвч (Coral Bracelet), Э-майлаар илгээсэн захиа сарнай (Rose Sent by Email), Үйсэн дээрх бичээс (Script Carved on Wood), Чимээгүй хашгираан (Silent Scream), Цасан нулимс (Snow Tears), Зургадугаар сарын цас (June Snow), Сэтгэлийн анир (Spiritual Peace ), and Novels.
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Original:  In 2014 her  company Shuuder Productions followed up with the drama Улаан Пальто (Red Coat).
Revised:  In 2014 her film company Shuuder Productions followed up with the drama Улаан Пальто (Red Coat).
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Original:  In 2015 she published another historical novel Үүлэн хээтэй орчлон (Cloud-Shaped World) which weaved themes of Buddhism and karma set during Mongolia's struggle for independence in the early 20th century  .
Revised:  In 2015 she returned to historical fiction with Үүлэн хээтэй орчлон (Cloud-Shaped World) which weaved themes of Buddhism and karma set during Mongolia's struggle for independence in the early 20th century .
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Original:  In 2015 she published another historical novel Үүлэн хээтэй орчлон (Cloud-Shaped World) which weaved themes of Buddhism and karma set during Mongolia's struggle for independence in the early 20th century  .
Revised:  In 2015 she published another historical novel Үүлэн хээтэй орчлон (Cloud-Shaped World) which weaved themes of Buddhism and karma set during Mongolia's early 20th century .
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Original:  In 2015 she published another historical novel Үүлэн хээтэй орчлон (Cloud-Shaped World) which weaved themes of Buddhism and karma set during Mongolia's struggle for independence in the early 20th century  .
Revised:  In 2015 she published another historical novel Үүлэн хээтэй орчлон (Cloud-Shaped World) which weaved themes of Buddhism and karma set during Mongolia's struggle for independence in the early 20th century struggle for independence .
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Original:  The Legend of the Hills ." Shuuder Productions then began production on a Princess Khutulun movie based on her books.
Revised:  The Legend of the Hills ). Shuuder Productions then began production on a Princess Khutulun movie based on her books.
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Original:  Shuudertsetseg's other notable works during this period include the adventure novel, улаан могой (Red Serpent) in 2018 which became a national bestseller and another historical novel "Huilen Ogtorguin Zaadas" (2018) about Mongol 's last queen, Dondogdulam, which was awarded Mongolia's prestigious "Altan Gadas" medal.
Revised:  In 2018 she published the adventure novel, улаан могой (Red Serpent) in 2018 which became a national bestseller and another historical novel "Huilen Ogtorguin Zaadas" (2018) about Mongol 's last queen, Dondogdulam, which was awarded Mongolia's prestigious "Altan Gadas" medal.
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Original:  Shuudertsetseg's other notable works during this period include the adventure novel, улаан могой (Red Serpent) in 2018 which became a national bestseller and another historical novel "Huilen Ogtorguin Zaadas" (2018) about Mongol 's last queen, Dondogdulam, which was awarded Mongolia's prestigious "Altan Gadas" medal.
Revised:  Shuudertsetseg's other notable works during this period include the adventure novel, улаан могой (Red Serpent) , which became a national bestseller and another historical novel "Huilen Ogtorguin Zaadas" (2018) about Mongol 's last queen, Dondogdulam, which was awarded Mongolia's prestigious "Altan Gadas" medal.
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Original:  Shuudertsetseg's other notable works during this period include the adventure novel, улаан могой (Red Serpent) in 2018 which became a national bestseller and another historical novel "Huilen Ogtorguin Zaadas" (2018) about Mongol 's last queen, Dondogdulam, which was awarded Mongolia's prestigious "Altan Gadas" medal.
Revised:  Shuudertsetseg's other notable works during this period include the adventure novel, улаан могой (Red Serpent) in 2018 which became a national bestseller and another historical novel "Huilen Ogtorguin Zaadas" (2018) about Mongol 's last Bogd Khan, was awarded Mongolia's prestigious "Altan Gadas" medal.
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Original:  In 2019, she published Хагацашгүй (Inseparable), a romance story set against Mongolia's political persecutions in 1937.
Revised:  In 2019, she published Хагацашгүй (Inseparable), a romance set against Mongolia's political persecutions in 1937.
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Original:  247x247px|Cover of Princess Khutulun Shuudertsetseg then turned to writing historical fiction and in 2010 published Домогт Ану хатан (The Legendary Queen Anu) about the eponymous 17th century Mongol Dzungar Khanate queen who led troops and died at the Battle of Zuunmod in 1696.
Revised:  Shuudertsetseg then turned to writing historical fiction and in 2010 published Домогт Ану хатан (The Legendary Queen Anu) about the eponymous 17th century Mongol Dzungar Khanate queen who led troops and died at the Battle of Zuunmod in 1696.
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Original:  He is the fifth of seven children . Dr Sami also known as Josef was born to a humble family.
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Original:  Dr Sami also known as was born to a humble family .
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Original: Hernia Types In bariatric surgery, hernias are repaired laparoscopically anteriorly, rather than posteriorly as in the fundoplication procedure.
Revised: Hernia types In bariatric surgery, hernias are repaired laparoscopically anteriorly, rather than posteriorly as in the fundoplication procedure.
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Original:  This general laparoscopic procedure was introduced by Dr. Sami Salem Ahmad from Germany who is a world leading GI surgeon and an entrepreneur. . . He attended the Eppendorf University in Hamburg/Germany .
Revised:  This general laparoscopic procedure was introduced by Dr. Sami Salem Ahmad from Germany .
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