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Original:  One American, one Canadian, and six Britons were amoge those kidnapped.
Revised:  One American, one Canadian, and six Britons were among those kidnapped.
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Original: Following a three-day summit in Sydney during the first week of June, rugby union officials reached a decesion to start a National Rugby Competition in Australia in July of 2007.
Revised: Following a three-day summit in Sydney rugby union officials reached a decesion to start a National Rugby Competition in Australia in July of 2007.
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Original:  The QRU later revealed that one of the Queensland sides will most likely be playing out of Queensland Rugby's old home Ballymoore , with the other team going to either the Gold Coast or Northern Queensland.
Revised:  The QRU later revealed that one of the Queensland sides will most likely be playing out of Queensland Rugby's old home Ballymore Stadium , with the other team going to either the Gold Coast or Northern Queensland.
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Original:  The ABC has apparently expressed interest in broadcasting the games next year  
Revised:  The ABC has apparently expressed interest in broadcasting the games next year . 
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Original: Anonymous sources have told Canadian Press that those arrested are suspected of links to al Qaeda, and that they had plans to detonate explosives somewhere in Ontario.
Revised: Anonymous sources have told Canadian Press that those arrested are suspected to have been inspired by al Qaeda, and that they had plans to detonate explosives somewhere in Ontario.
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Original: The   Arrested The following contains the names (source: CTV), released by the RCMP, that have been arrested.
Revised: The The Arrested The following contains the names (source: CTV), released by the RCMP, that have been arrested.
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Original:   As a further incentive to have more children the government also increased family tax benefits  
Revised:  Further incentives for families to have more children include. As a further incentive to have more children the government also increased family tax benefits 
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Original:   As a further incentive to have more children the government also increased family tax benefits  
Revised:  As a further incentive to have more children the government increased family tax benefits 
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Original: Australian treasurer, Peter Costello believes his speech during the 2004 election may have contributed to the increase in births .
Revised: Australian treasurer, Peter Costello believes his speech during the 2004 election may have influenced Australians to have more children .
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Original:  As a further incentive to have more children the government increased family tax benefits and from July  will allow families to claim a 30 percent childcare rebate (capped at $3000 per year).
Revised:  As a further incentive to have more children the government increased family tax benefits and from July , will allow families to claim a 30 percent childcare rebate (capped at $3000 per year).
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Original:  As a further incentive to have more children the government increased family tax benefits and from July, will allow families to claim a 30 percent childcare rebate (capped at  $3000 per year).
Revised:  As a further incentive to have more children the government increased family tax benefits and from July, will allow families to claim a 30 percent childcare rebate (capped at AUD $3000 per year).
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Original: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus was  suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who is showing symptoms of the virus.
Revised: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus was earlier suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who is showing symptoms of the virus.
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Original: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus was  suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who is showing symptoms of the virus.
Revised: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus was suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who was showing symptoms of the virus.
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Original:  However it is now being reported that tests  for avian virus have come back negative .
Revised:  However it is now being reported that tests for avian virus have been returned showing negative results .
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Original: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus was earlier suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who was showing symptoms of the virus.
Revised: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus is suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who was showing symptoms of the virus.
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Original: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus was earlier suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who was showing symptoms of the virus.
Revised: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus was earlier suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who is showing symptoms of the virus.
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Original:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results.
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Original:  The nurse had been in close contact with two children, brother and sister, who have died.
Revised:  She had been in close contact with two children, brother and sister, who have died.
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Original: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus is suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who is showing symptoms of the virus.
Revised: Human to human transmission of the H5N1 Avian Flu (Bird Flu) virus is suspected in an Indonesian nurse currently hospitalised who was showing symptoms of the virus.
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Original:  She  had been in close contact with two children, brother and sister, who have died.
Revised:  She The nurse had been in close contact with two children, brother and sister, who have died.
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Original:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results. but that the samples are being sent to a World Health Organization-approved laboratory in Hong-Kong for further analysis and confirmetion.
Revised:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results. and that the samples are being sent to a World Health Organization-approved laboratory in Hong-Kong for further analysis and confirmetion.
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Original:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results . and that the samples are being sent to a World Health Organization-approved laboratory in Hong-Kong for further analysis and confirmetion.
Revised:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results , and that the samples are being sent to a World Health Organization-approved laboratory in Hong-Kong for further analysis and confirmetion.
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Original:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results . and that the samples are being sent to a World Health Organization-approved laboratory in Hong-Kong for further analysis and confirmetion.
Revised:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results . and that the samples are being sent to a World Health Organization approved laboratory in Hong Kong for further analysis and confirmetion.
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Original:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results, and that the samples are being sent to a World Health Organization approved laboratory in Hong Kong for further analysis and confirmetion .
Revised:  However it is now being reported that tests on the woman for avian virus have been returned showing negative results, and that the samples are being sent to a World Health Organization approved laboratory in Hong Kong for further analysis and confirmation .
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Original:  She is expected to be released when the required amount of doses is given, which officials say could be as early as next week  
Revised:  She is expected to be released when the required amount of doses is given, which officials say could be as early as next week . 
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Original:  Among those not expected to attend the session is Serbian Prime Minister Vojislav Kostunica , who openly supports pro-union movements.
Revised:  Among those not expected to attend the session is Serbian Prime Minister Vojislav Koštunica , who openly supports pro-union movements.
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Original:  Kostunica is not the only Serbian official who is against the seperation: Serbia and Montenegro's President, Svetozar Marovic , has reputedly resigned today ahead of tonight's events.
Revised:  Koštunica is not the only Serbian official who is against the seperation: Serbia and Montenegro's President, Svetozar Marovic , has reputedly resigned today ahead of tonight's events.
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Original:  Kostunica is not the only Serbian official who is against the seperation: Serbia and Montenegro's President, Svetozar Marovic , has reputedly resigned today ahead of tonight's events.
Revised:  Kostunica is not the only Serbian official who is against the seperation: Serbia and Montenegro's President, Svetozar Marović , has reputedly resigned today ahead of tonight's events.
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Original: 175 px|Flag of Iraq Adnan al-Kazimi, close to Iraq Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki said "We have from more than one source that the Ishaqi killings were carried out under questionable circumstances.
Revised: 175 px|Flag of Iraq Adnan al-Kazimi, an advisor to the Iraq Prime Minister Nouri al-Maliki said "We have from more than one source that the Ishaqi killings were carried out under questionable circumstances.
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Original:  He spent the weekend in custody after being charged under the Sexual Offences Act following broadcasts allegedly depicting a mentally ill teenage girl's rape.
Revised:  He spent the weekend in custody after being charged under the Sexual Offences Act following television broadcasts allegedly showing a mentally ill teenage girl's rape.
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Original:  The case is adjourned until May 14, when TV station owner has been summonsed to also appear in court regarding the same broadcasts.
Revised:  The case is adjourned until May 14, when the owner of the TV station, , is summonsed to also appear in court regarding the same broadcasts.
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Original: The charges, filed  days before the expired, allege footage was thrice broadcast last October which allowed public identification of a rape victim.
Revised: The charges, filed just days before the expired, allege footage was thrice broadcast last October which allowed public identification of a rape victim.
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Original:  A fourth charge alleges Alleyne, who's lawyer says has no previous convictions, obstructed police .
Revised:  A fourth charge alleges Alleyne, who's lawyer says has no previous convictions, obstructed the police investigation .
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Original: Court officials were accused in court by the magistrate of breaching procedure.
Revised: During the hearing, court officials were accused in court by the magistrate of breaching procedure.
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Original: Court officials were accused in court by the magistrate of breaching procedure.
Revised: Court officials were accused by the magistrate of breaching procedure.
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Original:  Alleyne yesterday took to the studio and returned to his position hosting Crime Watch.
Revised:  Also yesterday, Alleyne took to the studio and returned to his position hosting Crime Watch.
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Original:  He denies the charges.
Revised:  He denies all charges.
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Original:  "This Wilkes Land impact is much bigger than the impact that killed the dinosaurs, and probably would have caused catastrophic damage at the time," said Ohio State University Professor of geological sciences, Ralph von Fres.
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Original:  Researchers have found a  giant asteroid impact crater under the Wilkes Land ice sheet of Antarctica and it may have been responsible for creating the conditions in which dinosaurs evolved, but may also have been the cause of a mass extinction . "This Wilkes Land impact is much bigger than the impact that killed the dinosaurs, and probably would have caused catastrophic damage at the time," said Ohio State University Professor of geological sciences , Ralph von Fres.
Revised:  Researchers have found a giant asteroid impact crater and have dubbed it the Wilkes Land crater . "This Wilkes Land impact is much bigger than the impact that killed the dinosaurs, and probably would have caused catastrophic damage at the time," said Ohio State University Professor of geological sciences , Ralph von Fres.
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Original:  The crater is over 300 miles wide and was made about 250 million years ago by an asteroid nearly 30 miles wide  .
Revised:  The crater is over 300 miles wide and was made about 250 million years ago by an asteroid roughly 30 miles wide .
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Original:  They propose that this formation is a giant asteroid impact crater and have dubbed it the Wilkes Land crater . "This Wilkes Land impact is much bigger than the impact that killed the dinosaurs, and probably would have caused catastrophic damage at the time," said Ohio State University Professor of geological sciences and co-discoverer Ralph von Fres.
Revised:  They propose that this formation is a giant asteroid impact crater under the Wilkes Land crater . "This Wilkes Land impact is much bigger than the impact that killed the dinosaurs, and probably would have caused catastrophic damage at the time," said Ohio State University Professor of geological sciences and co-discoverer Ralph von Fres.
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Original:  They propose that this formation is a giant asteroid impact crater and have dubbed it the Wilkes Land crater . "This Wilkes Land impact is much bigger than the impact that killed the dinosaurs, and probably would have caused catastrophic damage at the time," said Ohio State University Professor of geological sciences and co-discoverer Ralph von Fres.
Revised:  They propose that this formation is a giant asteroid impact crater and have dubbed it the Wilkes Land crater . "This Wilkes Land impact is much bigger than the impact that killed the dinosaurs, and probably would have caused catastrophic damage at the time," said Ohio State University Professor of geological sciences , Ralph von Fres.
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Original:  The proposed  crater is over 300 miles wide and is estimated to be between 100 and 500 million years old.
Revised:  The proposed The crater is over 300 miles wide and is estimated to be between 100 and 500 million years old.
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Original:  Such a crater would would require an impact by an asteroid roughly 30 miles wide , or ~5 times larger than the impactor that created the Chicxulub Crater and is believed to have caused the extinction of the dinosaurs . Researchers say that the Wilkes Land impact would have also caused an Earth-wide Extinction Level Event (ELE) and suggest that the Permian-Triassic extinction event which occurred 250 million years ago and was the most devastating in Earth's history is a likely candidate.
Revised:  Such a crater would would require an impact by an asteroid nearly 30 miles wide , or ~5 times larger than the impactor that created the Chicxulub Crater and is believed to have caused the extinction of the dinosaurs . Researchers say that the Wilkes Land impact would have also caused an Earth-wide Extinction Level Event (ELE) and suggest that the Permian-Triassic extinction event which occurred 250 million years ago and was the most devastating in Earth's history is a likely candidate.
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Original:  Such a crater would would require an impact by an asteroid roughly 30 miles wide , or ~5 times larger than the impactor that created the Chicxulub Crater and is believed to have caused the extinction of the dinosaurs . Researchers say that the Wilkes Land impact would have also caused an Earth-wide Extinction Level Event (ELE) and suggest that the Permian-Triassic extinction event which occurred 250 million years ago and was the most devastating in Earth's history is a likely candidate.
Revised:  Such a crater would would require an impact by an asteroid roughly 30 miles wide . Researchers say that the Wilkes Land impact would have also caused an Earth-wide Extinction Level Event (ELE) and suggest that the Permian-Triassic extinction event which occurred 250 million years ago and was the most devastating in Earth's history is a likely candidate.
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Original:  Such a crater would would require an impact by an asteroid roughly 30 miles wide , or ~5 times larger than the impactor that created the Chicxulub Crater and is believed to have caused the extinction of the dinosaurs . Researchers say that the Wilkes Land impact would have also caused an Earth-wide Extinction Level Event (ELE) and suggest that the Permian-Triassic extinction event which occurred 250 million years ago and was the most devastating in Earth's history is a likely candidate.
Revised:  Such a crater would would require an impact by an asteroid roughly 30 miles wide , or ~5 times larger than the impactor that created the Chicxulub Crater and is believed to have caused the extinction of the dinosaurs . Researchers say that it may have caused an Earth-wide Extinction Level Event (ELE) and suggest that the Permian-Triassic extinction event which occurred 250 million years ago and was the most devastating in Earth's history is a likely candidate.
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Original:  The species that benefited from the Permian-Triassic extinctions include the archosaurs, the immediate ancestors of the dinosaurs.
Revised:  The species that benefited include the archosaurs, the immediate ancestors of the dinosaurs.
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Original:  The impact itself may also have contributed to the break up of the supercontinent Gondwana , ultimately separating Australiafrom Antarctica
Revised:  The impact itself may also have caused the supercontinent Gondwana to break up, ultimately forming Australia
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Original: U.S President George .
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Original:  He said that the measure was needed because the presence of "activist" courts left him with mno alternative.
Revised:  He said that the measure was needed because the presence of "activist" courts left him with no alternative.
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Original:  An amendment such as this one stands little chance of being passed but analysts say it will be a vote-winner for the Republicns during the mid-term polls in November.
Revised:  An amendment such as this one stands little chance of being passed but analysts say it will be a vote-winner for the Republicans during the mid-term polls in November.
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Original:  Mr. Bush stated that  "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.
Revised:  Mr. Bush stated that , "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.
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Original:  ". An amendment such as the one propsed by him, however, would need a two-third support in both the House and the Senate.
Revised:  ” An amendment such as the one propsed by him, however, would need a two-third support in both the House and the Senate.
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Original:  ". An amendment such as the one propsed by him, however, would need a two-third support in both the House and the Senate.
Revised:  ". An amendment such as the one proposed by him, however, would need a two-third support in both the House and the Senate.
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Original:  Analysts say the Republicans are maing this move in the hope that it will increase their popularity amongst the voters.
Revised:  Analysts say the Republicans are making this move in the hope that it will increase their popularity amongst the voters.
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Original:  The Democrats, however have accused the government of using this as a smokecreen to divert attention from more important issues.
Revised:  The Democrats, however have accused the government of using this as a smokescreen to divert attention from more important issues.
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Original:  Senate Minority Leader Harry Reid said: "Bush Republicans would rather focus on purely divisive manoeuvres than real solutions that address the growing energy crisis.
Revised:  Senate Minority Leader Harry Reid said: "Bush Republicans would rather focus on purely divisive maneuvers than real solutions that address the growing energy crisis.
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Original: U.S President George W. Bush has asked that the Constitution be amended to ban same-sex marriages.
Revised: United States President, George W. Bush has asked that the Constitution be amended to ban same-sex marriages.
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Original: U.S President George W. Bush has asked that the Constitution be amended to ban same-sex marriages.
Revised: U.S President George W. Bush proposed that the country's Constitution be amended to ban same-sex marriages.
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Original:  Mr. Bush used his weekly radio address to urge the Senate to formally define marriage as a  union between a man and a woman  .
Revised:  Mr. Bush used his weekly radio address to call on the Senate to formally define marriage as a union between a man and a woman .
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Original:  Mr. Bush used his weekly radio address to urge the Senate to formally define marriage as a  union between a man and a woman  .
Revised:  Mr. Bush used his weekly radio address to urge the Senate to formally define marriage as a " union between a man and a woman .
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Original:  Mr. Bush used his weekly radio address to urge the Senate to formally define marriage as a  union between a man and a woman  .
Revised:  Mr. Bush used his weekly radio address to urge the Senate to formally define marriage as a union between a man and a woman " .
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Original:  An amendment such as this one stands little chance of being passed but analysts say it will be a vote-winner for the Republicans during the mid-term polls in November.
Revised:  An amendment such as this one stands little chance of being passed but according to a BBC report, analysts assert it will be a vote-winner for the Republicans during the mid-term polls in November.
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Original:  They say the President is trying to focus attention on the positive aspects of his party at a time when his popularity is at a low, mainly because of the war in Iraq.
Revised:  They claim the President is trying to focus attention on the positive aspects of his party at a time when his popularity is at a low, mainly because of the war in Iraq.
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Original:  Mr. Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
Revised:  President Bush stated that, "Ages of experience have taught us that the commitment of a husband and a wife to love and to serve one another promotes the welfare of children and the stability of society.”
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