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Original:   People's Republic of China After the Communist victory in 1949, he became the head of a military academy and thereafter held various posts in the central military command, including the head of the military's financial affairs.
Revised:  Early People's Republic of China After the Communist victory in 1949, he became the head of a military academy and thereafter held various posts in the central military command, including the head of the military's financial affairs.
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Original:   People's Republic of China After the Communist victory in 1949, he became the head of a military academy and thereafter held various posts in the central military command, including the head of the military's financial affairs.
Revised:  People's Republic After the Communist victory in 1949, he became the head of a military academy and thereafter held various posts in the central military command, including the head of the military's financial affairs.
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Original:  In  1958, Yu was appointed minister of the petroleum industry.
Revised:  In Petroleum Industry In February 1958, Yu was appointed minister of the petroleum industry.
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Original:  The move thrust him into a far more prominent role in the fledgling Communist government.
Revised:  The move thrust him into a far more prominent role in the Communist government.
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Original:  In 1975, he was appointed deputy prime minister , as was Deng  . After the death of Mao in 1976, Yu was promoted to the ruling Politburo.
Revised:  In 1975, he was appointed Vice Premier , as was Deng . After the death of Mao in 1976, Yu was promoted to the ruling Politburo.
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Original:  These officials were essentially conservative Stalinists in their economic thinking, favouring central planning and heavy industry - a strategy that clashed with that of the ascendant Deng.
Revised:  These officials were essentially Stalinists in their economic thinking, favouring central planning and heavy industry - a strategy that clashed with that of the ascendant Deng.
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Original:  These officials were essentially conservative Stalinists in their economic thinking, favouring central planning and heavy industry - a strategy that clashed with that of the ascendant Deng.
Revised:  These officials were essentially conservative Stalinists in their economic thinking, favoring central planning and heavy industry - a strategy that clashed with that of the ascendant Deng.
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Original: Following military service as a senior commander and political commissar in the Second Sino–Japanese War and the Chinese Civil War, Yu then served as Minister of the Petroleum Industry (1958–1966), Chairman of the State Planning Commission (1970–1980), Vice Premier (1975–1982), and Deputy Secretary-General of the Central Military Commission as well as Director of the PLA General Political Department (in effect, responsible for ensuring the political loyalty  the entire PLA) from 1982 to 1987.
Revised: Following military service as a senior commander and political commissar in the Second Sino–Japanese War and the Chinese Civil War, Yu then served as Minister of the Petroleum Industry (1958–1966), Chairman of the State Planning Commission (1970–1980), Vice Premier (1975–1982), and Deputy Secretary-General of the Central Military Commission as well as Director of the PLA General Political Department (in effect, responsible for ensuring the political loyalty of the entire PLA) from 1982 to 1987.
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Original:  On 23 October 2011, Yevkurov was again a target of an attack whilst on a national holiday.
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Original:  Since St. Nicholas Church was not yet available, Father Jacob built a large tent in which to hold his services, and after the church was completed he took the tent with him on his missionary travels.
Revised:  Since St. Nicholas Church was not yet available, Father Jacob used a large tent in which to hold his services, and after the church was completed he took the tent with him on his missionary travels.
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Original:    Sources Holy Synod of Bishops OCA, The Life of Saint Jacob Netsvetov, Oyster Bay Cove, New York, March 1994.
Revised:  References Sources Holy Synod of Bishops OCA, The Life of Saint Jacob Netsvetov, Oyster Bay Cove, New York, March 1994.
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Original:  References External links St. Jacob Netsvetov the Enlightener of the Peoples of Alaska on the OCA website The Life of Saint Jacob Netsvetov Alaskan Orthodox texts (Aleut, Yup'ik) by St. Jacob Netsvetov Icon and Story of St. Jacob Netsvetov Prayer for Peace St. Jacob used evangelism to make peace.
Revised:  External links St. Jacob Netsvetov the Enlightener of the Peoples of Alaska on the OCA website The Life of Saint Jacob Netsvetov Alaskan Orthodox texts (Aleut, Yup'ik) by St. Jacob Netsvetov Icon and Story of St. Jacob Netsvetov Prayer for Peace St. Jacob used evangelism to make peace.
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Original:  References External links St. Jacob Netsvetov the Enlightener of the Peoples of Alaska on the OCA website The Life of Saint Jacob Netsvetov Alaskan Orthodox texts (Aleut, Yup'ik) by St. Jacob Netsvetov Icon and Story of St. Jacob Netsvetov Prayer for Peace St. Jacob used evangelism to make peace.
Revised:  References External links The Life of Saint Jacob Netsvetov Alaskan Orthodox texts (Aleut, Yup'ik) by St. Jacob Netsvetov Icon and Story of St. Jacob Netsvetov Prayer for Peace St. Jacob used evangelism to make peace.
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Original:  References External links St. Jacob Netsvetov the Enlightener of the Peoples of Alaska on the OCA website The Life of Saint Jacob Netsvetov Alaskan Orthodox texts (Aleut, Yup'ik) by St. Jacob Netsvetov Icon and Story of St. Jacob Netsvetov Prayer for Peace St. Jacob used evangelism to make peace.
Revised:  References External links St. Jacob Netsvetov the Enlightener of the Peoples of Alaska on the OCA website The Life of Saint Jacob Netsvetov Alaskan Orthodox texts (Aleut, Yup'ik) by St. Jacob Netsvetov Prayer for Peace St. Jacob used evangelism to make peace.
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Original:  Jacob was the eldest of four children who survived infancy.
Revised:  Netsvetov was the eldest of four children who survived infancy.
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Original:  Jacob chose a life with the Church and enrolled in the Irkutsk Theological Seminary.
Revised:  Netsvetov chose a life with the Church and enrolled in the Irkutsk Theological Seminary.
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Original: "Repose of St Jacob Netsvetov the Enlightener of the Peoples of Alaska", Orthodox Church in America Missionary work On October 1, 1825, Jacob was tonsured a sub-deacon.
Revised: "Repose of St Jacob Netsvetov the Enlightener of the Peoples of Alaska", Orthodox Church in America Missionary work On October 1, 1825, Netsvetov was tonsured a sub-deacon.
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Original:  Jacob Netsvetov was buried at the entrance to the chapel.
Revised:  Netsvetov was buried at the entrance to the chapel.
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Original:  A year later he request was granted contingent on the arrival of his replacement.
Revised:  A year later his request was granted contingent on the arrival of his replacement.
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Original: Yacine Si Salem (born January 10 , 1988 in Souk El Thenine, Tizi Ouzou Province ) is a French-Algerian football player who is currently playing for JS Kabylie in the Algerian Ligue Professionnelle 1 . Club career In Decembre 2013, Yacine Si Salem sign for JS Kabylie.. tsa-algerie.com.
Revised: Yacine Si Salem (born 10 , 1988 in Souk El Thenine, Tizi Ouzou Province ) is a French-Algerian football player who is currently playing for JS Kabylie in the Algerian Ligue Professionnelle 1 . Club career In Decembre 2013, Yacine Si Salem sign for JS Kabylie.. tsa-algerie.com.
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Original: Yacine Si Salem (born January 10 , 1988 in Souk El Thenine, Tizi Ouzou Province ) is a French-Algerian football player who is currently playing for JS Kabylie in the Algerian Ligue Professionnelle 1 . Club career In Decembre 2013, Yacine Si Salem sign for JS Kabylie.. tsa-algerie.com.
Revised: Yacine Si Salem (born January 10 , 1988 ) is a French-Algerian football player who is currently playing for JS Kabylie in the Algerian Ligue Professionnelle 1 . Club career In Decembre 2013, Yacine Si Salem sign for JS Kabylie.. tsa-algerie.com.
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Original:  International career On January 28, 2007, Si Salem was called up for a training camp with the French Under-21 Futsal team for a 4-day camp.
Revised:  On January 28, 2007, Si Salem was called up for a training camp with the French Under-21 Futsal team for a 4-day camp.
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Original:  He has 1 cap for the URL  Category:1988 births Category:Living people Category:People from Souk El Thenine Category:Kabyle people Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algerian emigrants to France Category:  French footballers Category:  Le Havre AC players Category:Thrasyvoulos F.C. players Category: French people of Kabyle desce
Revised:  He has 1 cap for the URL Category:1988 births Category:Living people Category:People from Souk El Thenine Category:Kabyle people Category:Algerian emigrants to France Category: French footballers Category: Le Havre AC players Category:Thrasyvoulos F.C. players Category: French people of Kabyle desce
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Original:  He has 1 cap for the URL  Category:1988 births Category:Living people Category:People from Souk El Thenine Category:Kabyle people Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algerian emigrants to France Category:  French footballers Category:  Le Havre AC players Category:Thrasyvoulos F.C. players Category: French people of Kabyle desce
Revised:  He has 1 cap for the URL Category:1988 births Category:Living people Category:People from Souk El Thenine Category:Kabyle people Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algerian emigrants to France Category: Algerian footballers Category: French footballers Category: Le Havre AC players Category:Thrasyvoulos F.C. players Category: French people of Kabyle desce
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Original:  He has 1 cap for the URL  Category:1988 births Category:Living people Category:People from Souk El Thenine Category:Kabyle people Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algerian emigrants to France Category:  French footballers Category:  Le Havre AC players Category:Thrasyvoulos F.C. players Category: French people of Kabyle desce
Revised:  He has 1 cap for the URL Category:1988 births Category:Living people Category:People from Souk El Thenine Category:Kabyle people Category:Algerian footballers Category:Algerian emigrants to France Category: French footballers Category: French people of Kabyle descent Category:Association football midfielders Category: Le Havre AC players Category:Thrasyvoulos F.C. players Category: French people of Kabyle desce
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Original: On January 28 , 2007 , Si Salem was called up for a training camp with the French Under-21 Futsal team for a 4-day camp.
Revised: On 28 , 2007 , Si Salem was called up for a training camp with the French Under-21 Futsal team for a 4-day camp.
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Original: On January 28 , 2007 , Si Salem was called up for a training camp with the French Under-21 Futsal team for a 4-day camp.
Revised: On January 28 , 2007 Si Salem was called up for a training camp with the French Under-21 Futsal team for a 4-day camp.
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Original:  He has 1 cap for the URL
Revised:  He has 1 cap for the team.
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Original: 441x441px|Global Water Cycle Diagram of the Water Cycle 300px|The natural water cycleEarth's water cycle As the Earth's surface water evaporates, wind moves water in the air from the sea to the land, increasing the amount of freshwater on land.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The water cycle, also known as the hydrologic cycle or the hydrological cycle, is biogeochemical cycle that describes the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The water cycle, also known as the hydrologic cycle or the hydrological cycle, is biogeochemical cycle that describes the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
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Original:  Processes 400px | Many different processes lead to movements and phase changes in water Precipitation Condensed water vapor that falls to the Earth's surface.
Revised:  Processes 400px | Precipitation Condensed water vapor that falls to the Earth's surface.
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Original:  Without the cooling, the effect of evaporation on the greenhouse effect would lead to a much higher surface temperature of , and a warmer URL
Revised:  Without the cooling, the effect of evaporation on the greenhouse effect would lead to a much higher surface temperature of , and a warmer planet.
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Original: The water cycle, also known as the hydrologic cycle or the hydrological cycle, is  biogeochemical cycle that describes the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
Revised: The water cycle, also known as the hydrologic cycle or the hydrological cycle, is a biogeochemical cycle that describes the continuous movement of water on, above and below the surface of the Earth.
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Original:  Description The sun, which drives the water cycle, heats water in oceans and seas.
Revised:  Description The sun, which drives the water cycle, heats water in the ocean and seas.
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Original:  The water molecule has smaller molecular mass than the major components of the atmosphere, nitrogen and oxygen, and , hence is less dense.
Revised:  The water molecule has smaller molecular mass than the major components of the atmosphere, nitrogen () and oxygen () and hence is less dense.
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Original:  The lower temperature causes water vapor to condense into tiny liquid water droplets which are heavier than the air, and  fall unless supported by an updraft.
Revised:  The lower temperature causes water vapor to condense into tiny liquid water droplets which are heavier than the air, and which fall unless supported by an updraft.
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Original:  A huge concentration of these droplets over a large space up in the atmosphere become visible as cloud .
Revised:  A huge concentration of these droplets over a large area in the atmosphere become visible as cloud .
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Original:  Some condensation is near ground level , and called fog.
Revised:  Some condensation is near ground level is referred to as fog.
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Original:  Some precipitation falls as snow or hail, sleet, and can accumulate as ice caps and glaciers, which can store frozen water for thousands of years.
Revised:  Some precipitation falls as snow , hail, or sleet, and can accumulate as ice caps and glaciers, which can store frozen water for thousands of years.
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Original:  Some precipitation falls as snow or hail, sleet, and can accumulate as ice caps and glaciers, which can store frozen water for thousands of years.
Revised:  Some precipitation falls as snow or hail, sleet, and can accumulate in ice caps and glaciers, which can store frozen water for thousands of years.
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Original:  Most water falls  back into the oceans or onto land as rain , where the water flows over the ground as surface runoff.
Revised:  Most water falls as rain back into the oceans or onto land as rain , where the water flows over the ground as surface runoff.
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Original:  Most water falls  back into the oceans or onto land as rain , where the water flows over the ground as surface runoff.
Revised:  Most water falls back into the ocean or onto land as rain , where the water flows over the ground as surface runoff.
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Original:  Most water falls  back into the oceans or onto land as rain , where the water flows over the ground as surface runoff.
Revised:  Most water falls back into the oceans or onto land , where the water flows over the ground as surface runoff.
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Original:  A portion of  runoff enters rivers in valleys in the landscape , with streamflow moving water towards the oceans.
Revised:  A portion of this runoff enters rivers in valleys in the landscape , with streamflow moving water towards the oceans.
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Original:  A portion of  runoff enters rivers in valleys in the landscape , with streamflow moving water towards the oceans.
Revised:  A portion of runoff enters rivers , with streamflow moving water towards the oceans.
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Original:  Some groundwater finds openings in the land surface and comes out as freshwater springs.
Revised:  Some groundwater finds openings in the land surface and emerges as freshwater springs.
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Original:  The  long‐term exchange of water between the earth's interior and the exosphere and  transport of water bound in hydrous minerals   .
Revised:  The long‐term exchange of water between the earth's interior and the exosphere and the transport of water bound in hydrous minerals .
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Original:  The  long‐term exchange of water between the earth's interior and the exosphere and  transport of water bound in hydrous minerals   .
Revised:  The long‐term exchange of water between the earth's interior and the exosphere and transport of water bound in hydrous minerals . .
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Original: British Rule and the Witu Expeditions Flag under British rule (31 July 1893 – 1920) In accord with the 1890 Heligoland–Zanzibar Treaty, on 18 June 1890 a British protectorate was declared, and on 1 July 1890 imperial Germany renounced its protectorate, ceding the Wituland to Great Britain to become part of British East Africa.
Revised: British Rule and the Witu Expeditions Flag under British rule (31 July 1893 – 1920) In accord with the 1890 Heligoland–Zanzibar Treaty, on 18 June 1890 a British protectorate was declared, and on 1 July 1890 imperial Germany renounced its protectorate, ceding the Wituland to Great Britain and becoming part of British East Africa.
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Original:  Fumo 'Umari moved the capital to Jongeni, but the growth of British power and of the regional importance of Zanzibar saw Witu's position and independence gradually decline.
Revised:  Fumo 'Umari moved the capital to Jongeni, but the growth of British power and of the regional importance of Zanzibar saw Witu's position and influence gradually decline.
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Original: Map showing the location of Witu on the Indian Ocean coast 300px|Flag of Sultan Fumobakari in 1890 Wituland (also Witu, Vitu, Witu Protectorate or Swahililand) was a territory of approximately in East Africa centered on the town of Witu just inland from Indian Ocean port of Lamu north of the mouth of the Tana River in what is now Kenya.
Revised:  Wituland (also Witu, Vitu, Witu Protectorate or Swahililand) was a territory of approximately in East Africa centered on the town of Witu just inland from Indian Ocean port of Lamu north of the mouth of the Tana River in what is now Kenya.
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Original:  British Rule and the Witu Expeditions Flag under British rule (31 July 1893 – 1920) In accord with the 1890 Heligoland–Zanzibar Treaty, on 18 June 1890 a British protectorate was declared, and on 1 July 1890 imperial Germany renounced its protectorate, ceding the Wituland to Great Britain and becoming part of British East Africa.
Revised:  British Rule and the Witu Expeditions In accord with the 1890 Heligoland–Zanzibar Treaty, on 18 June 1890 a British protectorate was declared, and on 1 July 1890 imperial Germany renounced its protectorate, ceding the Wituland to Great Britain and becoming part of British East Africa.
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Original:  He wrote that, just as our own existence is significance to each of us, "[a creature's] existence is significant to it."
Revised:  He wrote that, just as our own existence is significant to each of us, "[a creature's] existence is significant to it."
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Original:  In 'Civilization and Ethics' he expressed this in these words:  James Brabazon (Author of the Biography of Albert Schweitzer) defined Reverence for Life with the following statement: Albert Schweitzer hoped that the ethic of Reverence for Life would make its way in the world on the basis of his explanation of it in his books and talks, the example of his life  and the force of its own argument based on the depth of fundamental thought.
Revised:  In 'Civilization and Ethics' he expressed this in these words: "Ethics is nothing other than Reverence for Life. Reverence for Life affords me my fundamental principle of morality, namely, that good consists in maintaining, assisting and enhancing life, and to destroy, to harm or to hinder life is evil." James Brabazon (Author of the Biography of Albert Schweitzer) defined Reverence for Life with the following statement: Albert Schweitzer hoped that the ethic of Reverence for Life would make its way in the world on the basis of his explanation of it in his books and talks, the example of his life and the force of its own argument based on the depth of fundamental thought.
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Original:  In 'Civilization and Ethics' he expressed this in these words:  James Brabazon (Author of the Biography of Albert Schweitzer) defined Reverence for Life with the following statement: Albert Schweitzer hoped that the ethic of Reverence for Life would make its way in the world on the basis of his explanation of it in his books and talks, the example of his life  and the force of its own argument based on the depth of fundamental thought.
Revised:  In 'Civilization and Ethics' he expressed this in these words: James Brabazon , author of Albert Schweitzer: A Biography, defined Reverence for Life with the following statement: Albert Schweitzer hoped that the ethic of Reverence for Life would make its way in the world on the basis of his explanation of it in his books and talks, the example of his life and the force of its own argument based on the depth of fundamental thought.
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Original:  In 'Civilization and Ethics' he expressed this in these words:  James Brabazon (Author of the Biography of Albert Schweitzer) defined Reverence for Life with the following statement: Albert Schweitzer hoped that the ethic of Reverence for Life would make its way in the world on the basis of his explanation of it in his books and talks, the example of his life  and the force of its own argument based on the depth of fundamental thought.
Revised:  In 'Civilization and Ethics' he expressed this in these words: James Brabazon (Author of the Biography of Albert Schweitzer) defined Reverence for Life with the following statement: Albert Schweitzer hoped that the philosophy of Reverence for Life would make its way in the world on the basis of his explanation of it in his books and talks, the example of his life and the force of its own argument based on the depth of fundamental thought.
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Original:  In 'Civilization and Ethics' he expressed this in these words:  James Brabazon (Author of the Biography of Albert Schweitzer) defined Reverence for Life with the following statement: Albert Schweitzer hoped that the ethic of Reverence for Life would make its way in the world on the basis of his explanation of it in his books and talks, the example of his life  and the force of its own argument based on the depth of fundamental thought.
Revised:  In 'Civilization and Ethics' he expressed this in these words: James Brabazon (Author of the Biography of Albert Schweitzer) defined Reverence for Life with the following statement: Albert Schweitzer hoped that the ethic of Reverence for Life would spread on the basis of his explanation of it in his books and talks, the example of his life and the force of its own argument based on the depth of fundamental thought.
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