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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to: make further provision for the treatment of cancer  to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust  to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer  and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to: make further provision for the treatment of cancer ; to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to: make further provision for the treatment of cancer  to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust  to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer  and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to: make further provision for the treatment of cancer to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust ; to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to: make further provision for the treatment of cancer  to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust  to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer  and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to: make further provision for the treatment of cancer to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer ; and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to: make further provision for the treatment of cancer;
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to: make further provision hyfor the treatment of cancer;
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Original:  M. Sorce Keller: "Continuing Opera with Other Means: Opera, Neapolitan song, and popular music among Italian immigrants overseas", Forum Italicum  , Vol. XLIX(2015), No 3, 1- 20.
Revised:  M. Sorce Keller: "Continuing Opera with Other Means: Opera, Neapolitan song, and popular music among Italian immigrants overseas", Forum Italicum '' , Vol. XLIX(2015), No 3, 1- 20.
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Original:  Denis|publisher = Oxford University Press|year = 1983|isbn = 978-0-19-311316-9|pages = 111%DIFDELCMD < }}%%% </ref>  and traditional or "folk" music.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < }}%%% </ref> and traditional or "folk" music.
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Original:  M. Sorce Keller: "Continuing Opera with Other Means: Opera, Neapolitan song, and popular music among Italian immigrants overseas", Forum Italicum '' , Vol. XLIX(2015), No 3, 1- 20.
Revised:  M. Sorce Keller: "Continuing Opera with Other Means: Opera, Neapolitan song, and popular music among Italian immigrants overseas", Forum Italicum , Vol. XLIX(2015), No 3, 1- 20.
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Original:  10 August 193311 January 1997), was one of the twentieth century's great sculptors .
Revised:  10 August 193311 January 1997), was a prominent 20th-century's sculptor .
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Original:  Trained under renowned sculptor Mohammad Hanif at Lucknow College of Arts and Crafts in the early 60’s . Career He was one of the few qualified sculptors who could teach the technique of making life-size armature, simple casting and multiple casting with permanent moulds.
Revised:  Trained under renowned sculptor Mohammad Hanif at Lucknow College of Arts and Crafts in the early 60s . Career He was one of the few qualified sculptors who could teach the technique of making life-size armature, simple casting and multiple casting with permanent moulds.
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Original:  He worked with great ease and facility in metals, wood, cement, plaster of Paris, marble, stone and clay.
Revised:  He worked with great ease and facility in metals, wood, cement, Plaster of Paris, marble, stone and clay.
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Original: Amroha Society Pakistan, He came to Pakistan in 1962 and shortly after that and had a solo show at the Karachi Arts Council Hall, which was also the country ’ s first solo sculpture exhibition.
Revised: Amroha Society Pakistan, He came to Pakistan in 1962 and shortly after that and had a solo show at the Karachi Arts Council Hall, which was also the country ' s first solo sculpture exhibition.
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Original:  His acute observation of detail, timeless dedication to craftsmanship and the innate soul of a master allows him to breathe life into any work of art from delicate pencil sketch to monumental sculptures and that is truly make him one of the world ’ s top artists.
Revised:  His acute observation of detail, timeless dedication to craftsmanship and the innate soul of a master allows him to breathe life into any work of art from delicate pencil sketch to monumental sculptures and that is truly make him one of the world ' s top artists.
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Original:  Many art scholar would have us believe that Mughal miniature and folk art are our only heritage when Classical Indian Art forms the very core of this region ’ s art history.
Revised:  Many art scholar would have us believe that Mughal miniature and folk art are our only heritage when Classical Indian art forms the very core of this region ’ s art history.
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Original:  Many art scholar would have us believe that Mughal miniature and folk art are our only heritage when Classical Indian Art forms the very core of this region ’ s art history.
Revised:  Many art scholar would have us believe that Mughal miniature and folk art are our only heritage when Classical Indian Art forms the very core of this region ' s art history.
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Original:  Afsar Naqvi ’ s vision and aesthetics was indelibly etched into his own creative expression and his drive to achieve the same level of perfection in his master work.
Revised:  Afsar Naqvi ' s vision and aesthetics was indelibly etched into his own creative expression and his drive to achieve the same level of perfection in his master work.
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Original:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
Revised:  Biography (by year) 1933 – Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
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Original:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
Revised:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 – Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
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Original:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
Revised:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 – Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
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Original:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
Revised:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 – Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
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Original:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
Revised:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 – Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
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Original:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 - Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
Revised:  Biography (by year) 1933 - Born- Amroha, India 1960 - Diploma and Post-diploma- Government College of Arts and Crafts Lucknow, India 1962 - Migration- Pakistan, Karachi 1962 - Joined Central Institute of Art & Crafts, Karachi as Head of Sculpture Department 1963 - Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1969 – Solo Exhibition- Pakistan American Cultural Centre (P.A.C.C.)
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Original:  1971 - Solo Exhibition- Indus Gallery, Karachi 1975 -
Revised:  1971 – Solo Exhibition- Indus Gallery, Karachi 1975 -
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Original:  1971 - Solo Exhibition- Indus Gallery, Karachi 1975 -
Revised:  1971 - Solo Exhibition- Indus Gallery, Karachi 1975 –
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Original:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
Revised:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 – Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
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Original:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
Revised:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 – Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
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Original:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
Revised:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 – Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
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Original:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
Revised:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 – Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
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Original:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 - Solo Exhibition - A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
Revised:  Solo Exhibition- Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi 1985 - Group Exhibition- The Fifth National Arts Exhibition, Idara Saqafat -e- Pakistan 1992 - Joined North City School of Art & Architecture, Karachi as Principle and Head of Fine Art (Sculpture) Department 1995 - Founded Bhittai Institute of Art & Crafts 1997 - Death 1997 – Solo Exhibition – A tribute to Afsar Madad Naqvi, Arts Council of Pakistan, Karachi Specialization Specialized in portrature, mural work, and terra-cotta.
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Original:  Indian Classical sculpture, Naqvi ’ s ability to be able to capture in wood, stone or metal the essence of a narrative moment with a dramatic naturalistic realism.
Revised:  Indian Classical sculpture, Naqvi ' s ability to be able to capture in wood, stone or metal the essence of a narrative moment with a dramatic naturalistic realism.
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Original:  With expertise in early child development, epidemiology, psychology, psychiatry, sociology, social work, and counseling, the endorsers included leading American researchers in the field such as Kari Adamsons, Jay Belsky, James Bray, Alison Clarke-Stewart, Emily Douglas, Frank Furstenberg, Mavis Hetherington, Florence Kaslow and Linda Nielsen.
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Original:  In 2018, the scientists and practitioners at the conference of the International Council on Shared Parenting called upon governments and professional associations to identify shared parenting as a fundamental right of the child.
Revised:  In 2018, scientists and practitioners at the conference of the International Council on Shared Parenting called upon governments and professional associations to identify shared parenting as a fundamental right of the child.
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Original: Guttorm Fløistad, Philosophy of Latin America, 2003, p. 24 Whilst in Europe he developed his interest in politics and became a follower of the ideas of Charles Maurras after coming into contact with his work.
Revised: Guttorm Fløistad, Philosophy of Latin America, 2003, p. 24 
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Original:    A native of Córdoba, Argentina, de Anquín studied law at National University of Córdoba.
Revised:  Early years A native of Córdoba, Argentina, de Anquín studied law at National University of Córdoba.
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Original:  Subsequently however he lost political influence and his later life was mainly focused on his academic career.
Revised:  Subsequently , however, he lost political influence and his later life was mainly focused on his academic career.
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Original: fascist leader He was a founder of the Instituto San Tomas de Aquino in Córdoba, Argentina in 1929 and this group would become linked to the Argentine Fascist Party.
Revised: Fascist leader He was a founder of the Instituto San Tomas de Aquino in Córdoba, Argentina in 1929 and this group would become linked to the Argentine Fascist Party.
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Original: Charles IV (reigned 1788–1808) was not very interested in exercising political power, leaving such duties to his ministers, especially the disliked Manuel Godoy.
Revised: Charles IV (reigned 1788–1808) was not very interested in exercising political power, leaving such duties to his ministers, specially the disliked Manuel Godoy.
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Original:  But if we limit ourselves to what is the territory of Colombia today, the deposition of the Governor of Cartagena, Brigadier Montes, and the establishment of a provisional government in that city on May 22, 1810, which had great political influence in the entire viceroyalty—and was followed by Pamplona on July 4, 1921 and by Socorro on July 10, 1930 —should be celebrated.
Revised:  But if we limit ourselves to what is the territory of Colombia today, the deposition of the Governor of Cartagena, Brigadier Montes, and the establishment of a provisional government in that city on May 22, 1810, which had great political influence in the entire viceroyalty—and was followed by Pamplona on July 4, 1821 and by Socorro on July 10, 1930 —should be celebrated.
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Original:  But if we limit ourselves to what is the territory of Colombia today, the deposition of the Governor of Cartagena, Brigadier Montes, and the establishment of a provisional government in that city on May 22, 1810, which had great political influence in the entire viceroyalty—and was followed by Pamplona on July 4, 1921 and by Socorro on July 10, 1930 —should be celebrated.
Revised:  But if we limit ourselves to what is the territory of Colombia today, the deposition of the Governor of Cartagena, Brigadier Montes, and the establishment of a provisional government in that city on May 22, 1810, which had great political influence in the entire viceroyalty—and was followed by Pamplona on July 4, 1921 and by Socorro on July 10, 1830 —should be celebrated.
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Original: Junta and Seville Regency Council Later, a rally called by Juan Sámano, a Spanish Army officer, would lead to the Junta being reorganized (Acevedo had earlier urged the people to help charge him for lese-majesty ).
Revised: Junta and Seville Regency Council Later, a rally called by Juan Sámano, a Spanish Army officer, would lead to the Junta being reorganized (Acevedo had earlier urged the people to help charge him for lèse-majesté ).
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Original: ]] The Colombian Declaration of Independence refers to the events of July 20, 1810 , in Santa Fe de Bogota, in the Spanish colonial Viceroyalty of New Granada .
Revised: ]] The Colombian Declaration of Independence occurred on July 20, 1810 , in Santa Fe de Bogota, in the Spanish colonial Viceroyalty of New Granada .
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Original: ]] The Colombian Declaration of Independence refers to the events of July 20, 1810 , in Santa Fe de Bogota, in the Spanish colonial Viceroyalty of New Granada .
Revised: ]] The Colombian Declaration of Independence refers to the events of July 20, 1810 , in Santa Fe de Bogota, the capital of the Spanish colonial Viceroyalty of New Granada .
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Original: Georg Hartmann ( August 4 , 1865 - July 12 , 1946) was a German geographer working in German South-West Africa.
Revised: Georg Hartmann ( 4 , 1865 - July 12 , 1946) was a German geographer working in German South-West Africa.
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Original: Georg Hartmann ( August 4 , 1865 - July 12 , 1946) was a German geographer working in German South-West Africa.
Revised: Georg Hartmann ( August 4 , 1865 – 12 , 1946) was a German geographer working in German South-West Africa.
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Original:  Hartmann worked as a director for the Otavi Mining and Railway Company and was a founder of the town Grootfontein in Otjozondjupa Region, Namibia.
Revised:  Hartmann worked as a director for the Otavi Mining and Railway Company and was co-founder of the town Grootfontein in Otjozondjupa Region, Namibia.
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Original: Georg Hartmann (4 August 1865 – 12 July 1946) was a German geographer working in German South-West Africa.
Revised: Georg Hartmann (4 August 1865 – 12 July 1946) was a German geographer working in German South West Africa.
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Original:  From 1893 to 1908 he traveled throughout German South-West Africa and southern Angola.
Revised:  From 1893 to 1908 he traveled throughout German South West Africa and southern Angola.
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Original: Music for films,  dance and theatre "Intermittent Movements"
Revised: Music for films, games, dance and theatre "Intermittent Movements"
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