wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Under the new commitment signed in 2008, Dutch troop were to return in August, a stance reinforced by a Dutch courts' ruling in October 2009 requiring that all troops return by that time, although that ruling has yet to be ratified by the government
Revised:  Under the new commitment signed in 2008, Dutch troops were to return in August, a stance reinforced by a Dutch courts' ruling in October 2009 requiring that all troops return by that time, although that ruling has yet to be ratified by the government
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Original: A West Point graduate and decorated veteran of both the Korean and Vietnam wars, Haig served as commander of US forces stationed in Europe and supreme allied commander of NATO.
Revised: A West Point graduate and decorated veteran of both the Korean and Vietnam wars, Haig served as commander of US forces stationed in Europe and w:Supreme Allied Commander Europe|Supreme Allied Commander of NATO.
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Original: A West Point graduate and decorated veteran of both the Korean and Vietnam wars, Haig served as commander of US forces stationed in Europe and w:Supreme Allied Commander Europe| Supreme Allied Commander of NATO.
Revised: A West Point graduate and decorated veteran of both the Korean and Vietnam wars, Haig served as commander of US forces stationed in Europe and Supreme Allied Commander of NATO.
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Original:  F91 Dudelange 17:00 1 - 0  FC Pyunik - FC Haka 19:00 0 - 1  Skonto FC - FK Rabotnicki 19:00 0 - 6  FH Hafnarfjördur - PFC Neftchi 19:15 0 - 2  Shelbourne FC - Glentoran F.C. 19:30 2 - 1 FC  Artmedia Bratislava - FC Kairat Almaty 20:00 0 - 2  Anorthosis Famagusta FC - FC Dinamo Minsk 20:30 1 - 1  Sheriff - Sliema Wanderers F.C. 20:30 4 - 1  SK Tirana - NK Gorica 20:30 0 - 2  *Second leg home team shown firs
Revised:  F91 Dudelange 17:00 1 - 0 FC Pyunik - FC Haka 19:00 0 - 1 Skonto FC - FK Rabotnicki 19:00 0 - 6 FH Hafnarfjördur - PFC Neftchi 19:15 0 - 2 Shelbourne FC - Glentoran F.C. 19:30 2 - 1 FC Artmedia Bratislava - FC Kairat Almaty 20:00 0 - 2 Celtic F.C. Anorthosis Famagusta FC - FC Dinamo Minsk 20:30 1 - 1 Sheriff - Sliema Wanderers F.C. 20:30 4 - 1 SK Tirana - NK Gorica 20:30 0 - 2 *Second leg home team shown firs
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Original:  F91 Dudelange 17:00 1 - 0  FC Pyunik - FC Haka 19:00 0 - 1  Skonto FC - FK Rabotnicki 19:00 0 - 6  FH Hafnarfjördur - PFC Neftchi 19:15 0 - 2  Shelbourne FC - Glentoran F.C. 19:30 2 - 1 FC  Artmedia Bratislava - FC Kairat Almaty 20:00 0 - 2  Anorthosis Famagusta FC - FC Dinamo Minsk 20:30 1 - 1  Sheriff - Sliema Wanderers F.C. 20:30 4 - 1  SK Tirana - NK Gorica 20:30 0 - 2  *Second leg home team shown firs
Revised:  F91 Dudelange 17:00 1 - 0 FC Pyunik - FC Haka 19:00 0 - 1 Skonto FC - FK Rabotnicki 19:00 0 - 6 FH Hafnarfjördur - PFC Neftchi 19:15 0 - 2 Shelbourne FC - Glentoran F.C. 19:30 2 - 1 FC Artmedia Bratislava - FC Kairat Almaty 20:00 0 - 2 Anorthosis Famagusta FC - FC Dinamo Minsk 20:30 1 - 1 Sheriff - Sliema Wanderers F.C. 20:30 4 - 1 FK Partizan SK Tirana - NK Gorica 20:30 0 - 2 *Second leg home team shown firs
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Original:  F91 Dudelange 17:00 1 - 0  FC Pyunik - FC Haka 19:00 0 - 1  Skonto FC - FK Rabotnicki 19:00 0 - 6  FH Hafnarfjördur - PFC Neftchi 19:15 0 - 2  Shelbourne FC - Glentoran F.C. 19:30 2 - 1 FC  Artmedia Bratislava - FC Kairat Almaty 20:00 0 - 2  Anorthosis Famagusta FC - FC Dinamo Minsk 20:30 1 - 1  Sheriff - Sliema Wanderers F.C. 20:30 4 - 1  SK Tirana - NK Gorica 20:30 0 - 2  *Second leg home team shown firs
Revised:  F91 Dudelange 17:00 1 - 0 FC Pyunik - FC Haka 19:00 0 - 1 Skonto FC - FK Rabotnicki 19:00 0 - 6 FH Hafnarfjördur - PFC Neftchi 19:15 0 - 2 Shelbourne FC - Glentoran F.C. 19:30 2 - 1 FC Artmedia Bratislava - FC Kairat Almaty 20:00 0 - 2 Anorthosis Famagusta FC - FC Dinamo Minsk 20:30 1 - 1 Sheriff - Sliema Wanderers F.C. 20:30 4 - 1 SK Tirana - NK Gorica 20:30 0 - 2 PFC CSKA Sofia *Second leg home team shown firs
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Original: U.S. Defense Secretary Donald H. Rumsfeld, after a speech to U.S. soldiers at an American military base in Kuwait, was confronted by Iraq-bound soldiers raising their concerns over a variety of issues.
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Original:  Rumsfeld also addressed an expressed concern regarding aging equipment by asserting that, although all units have equipment of various vintage, troops headed into a combat situation in Iraq are equipped with the newest and best equipment the military can provide .%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Maj. Gen. Gary Speer, the deputy commanding general of U.S. forces in Kuwait, stated that every vehicle deploying to Iraq from Kuwait has at least "Level 3" armor protection.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Maj. Gen. Gary Speer, the deputy commanding general of U.S. forces in Kuwait, stated that every vehicle deploying to Iraq from Kuwait has at least "Level 3" armor protection.
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Original:  Shortly after the speech, Rumsfeld continued on his way to Kabul to watch President Karzai be sworn in.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% References Category:December 8, 2004 Category:United States Category:Politics and conflic
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category:December 8, 2004 Category:United States Category:Politics and conflic
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Original: right A deadly forest fire in Spain's Guadalajara province has claimed the lives  at least 11 fire fighters.
Revised: right A deadly forest fire in Spain's Guadalajara province has claimed the lives of at least 11 fire fighters.
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Original: Image:EnglandWestYorkshire.png| Map of England with West Yorkshire highlighted in red.
Revised:  Map of England with West Yorkshire highlighted in red.
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Original:  It's website describes it as "one of the world's leading organizations for the analysis of international issues".
Revised:  Its website describes it as "one of the world's leading organizations for the analysis of international issues".
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Original:  Melbourne Police Department spokesman Lieutenant Marc Claycomb said "They were unable to get out of the way in time and they were struck by the train ,".
Revised:  Melbourne Police Department spokesman Lieutenant Marc Claycomb said "They were unable to get out of the way in time and they were struck by the train ."
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Original:  He then came the the bridge and made the discovery, and then called 9-1-1.
Revised:  He then came the the bridge and made the discovery, and called 9-1-1.
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Original:  The Afghan national army is improved but clearly not up to U.S. standards yet.
Revised:  The Afghan National Army is improved but clearly not up to U.S. standards yet.
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Original: General David Petraeus, the commander of U.S. Central Command General David Petraeus, the U.S. general who oversees the war in Afghanistan  says the fight for the southern town of Marja , called Operation Moshtarak , is just the first operation in a long campaign.
Revised: General David Petraeus, the commander of U.S. Central Command General David Petraeus, the U.S. general who oversees the war in Afghanistan , says the fight for the southern town of Marja , called Operation Moshtarak , is just the first operation in a long campaign.
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Original: General David Petraeus, the commander of U.S. Central Command General David Petraeus, the U.S. general who oversees the war in Afghanistan  says the fight for the southern town of Marja , called Operation Moshtarak , is just the first operation in a long campaign.
Revised: General David Petraeus, the commander of U.S. Central Command General David Petraeus, the U.S. general who oversees the war in Afghanistan says the fight for the southern town of Marja — called Operation Moshtarak , is just the first operation in a long campaign.
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Original: General David Petraeus, the commander of U.S. Central Command General David Petraeus, the U.S. general who oversees the war in Afghanistan  says the fight for the southern town of Marja , called Operation Moshtarak , is just the first operation in a long campaign.
Revised: General David Petraeus, the commander of U.S. Central Command General David Petraeus, the U.S. general who oversees the war in Afghanistan says the fight for the southern town of Marja , called Operation Moshtarak — is just the first operation in a long campaign.
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Original:  Another three were reported killed in separate, unrelated incidents in southern and eastern Afghanistan.
Revised:  Three others were reported killed in separate, unrelated incidents in southern and eastern Afghanistan.
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Original:  Petraus was also asked about the military's controversial "don't ask, don't tell" policy, which President Barack Obama has pleged to end.
Revised:  Petraus was also asked about the military's controversial "don't ask, don't tell" policy, which President Barack Obama has pledged to end.
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Original:   Petraus responded by saying , "I served, in fact, in combat with individuals who were gay and who were lesbian in combat situations and, frankly, you know, over time you said, ‘Hey, how’s this guy’s shooting?’ Or, ‘How is her analysis?’ or what have you . " 
Revised:  Petraus responded by saying , "I served, in fact, in combat with individuals who were gay and who were lesbian in combat situations and, frankly, you know, over time you said, ‘Hey, how’s this guy’s shooting?’ Or, ‘How is her analysis?’ or what have you , " 
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Original:   Petraus responded by saying , "I served, in fact, in combat with individuals who were gay and who were lesbian in combat situations and, frankly, you know, over time you said, ‘Hey, how’s this guy’s shooting?’ Or, ‘How is her analysis?’ or what have you . " 
Revised:  Petraus responded by saying , "I served, in fact, in combat with individuals who were gay and who were lesbian in combat situations and, frankly, you know, over time you said, ‘Hey, how’s this guy’s shooting?’ Or, ‘How is her analysis?’ or what have you . " he said.
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Original:  The study also   recorded that 82\% of the deaths were adult males and 9\% were adult women  .
Revised:  The study also recorded that 82\% of all deaths were adult males and 9\% were adult women .
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Original: Today The Hewlett-Pakard Co. has announced that it will be cutting 10\% or 14,500 of it's full-time staff wil be cut over the course of the next six quarters.
Revised: Today the Hewlett-Pakard Co. has announced that it will be cutting 10\% or 14,500 of it's full-time staff wil be cut over the course of the next six quarters.
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Original: Today the Hewlett-Pakard Co. has announced that it will be cutting 10\% or 14,500 of it's full-time staff wil be cut over the course of the next six quarters.
Revised: Today the Hewlett-Packard Co. has announced that it will be cutting 10\% or 14,500 of it's full-time staff wil be cut over the course of the next six quarters.
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Original:  HP CEO Mark Hurd, who 's had office for just about three months now , has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
Revised:  HP CEO Mark Hurd, who took office about three months now , has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
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Original:  HP CEO Mark Hurd, who 's had office for just about three months now , has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
Revised:  HP CEO Mark Hurd, who 's had office for just about three months ago , has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
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Original:  HP CEO Mark Hurd, who 's had office for just about three months now , has decided that he wishes to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
Revised:  HP CEO Mark Hurd, who 's had office for just about three months now , has decided to simplify HP's operations by combining sales and marketing directly into business units.
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Original:  The job cuts are expected to save HP  $1.9 billion US annually.
Revised:  The job cuts are expected to save HP $1.9 billion annually.
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Original:  These cuts are all part of HP's new restructuring plan, the savings from this restructuring will primarily be  to “offset market forces” or in other words, to strengthen HP's competitiveness in the market.
Revised:  These cuts are all part of HP's new restructuring plan, the savings from which will primarily be to “offset market forces” or in other words, to strengthen HP's competitiveness in the market.
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Original:  Few losses are expected in the areas of Sales nor in Research & Development.
Revised:  Few losses are expected in the areas of Sales or Research & Development.
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Original:  The media in Ireland, where HP has over 4,000 employees across seven business units, has reacted cautiously to the announcement urging that more details should be waited for before making any comments.
Revised:  The media in Ireland, where HP has over 4,000 employees across seven business units, has reacted cautiously to the announcement urging that more details should be awaited for before making any comments.
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Original:  Kobina Essel, aged 19, was found guilty of stabbing 33-year-old Jamie Simpson with a kitchen knife the length of ten inches at a Matalan shop in the district of Dalston on March 22, 2008 
Revised:  Kobina Essel, aged 19, was found guilty of stabbing 33-year-old Jamie Simpson with a kitchen knife the length of ten inches at a Matalan shop in the district of Dalston on March 22, 2008. The court trial was held in the Old Bailey, a famous courthouse in London. 
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Original:  Kobina Essel, aged 19 and known by the nickname of "Aggro", was found guilty of stabbing 33-year-old Jamie Simpson with a kitchen knife the length of ten inches at a Matalan shop in the district of Dalston on March 22, 2008.
Revised:  Kobina Essel, aged 19 and known by the nickname of "Aggro", was found guilty of stabbing 33-year-old Jamie Simpson with a ten-inch kitchen knife at a Matalan shop in the district of Dalston on March 22, 2008.
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Original:  Kobina Essel, aged 19 and known by the nickname of "Aggro", was found guilty of stabbing 33-year-old Jamie Simpson with a kitchen knife the length of ten inches at a Matalan shop in the district of Dalston on March 22, 2008.
Revised:  Kobina Essel, aged 19 and known by the nickname of "Aggro", was found guilty of stabbing 33-year-old Jamie Simpson with a kitchen knife the length of ten inches at a Matalan shop in the Dalston district on March 22, 2008.
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Original:  The court trial was held in the Old Bailey, a famous courthouse in London.
Revised:  The trial was held in the Old Bailey, a famous courthouse in London.
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Original:  The attack was caused after a robbery with four criminalsinvolved taking place .
Revised:  The attack followed a robbery involving four criminals, including Essel .
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Original:  The three other criminals apart from Essel have been found guilty on charges of manslaughter.
Revised:  The three other criminals have been found guilty on charges of manslaughter.
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Original:  The three other criminals apart from Essel have been found guilty on charges of manslaughter.
Revised:  The three other criminals apart from Essel have been found guilty of manslaughter.
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Original:  Two of them have been publically identified as 20-year-old Anthony Maina and Simeon Jumah, aged 25.
Revised:  Two of them have been identified as 20-year-old Anthony Maina and Simeon Jumah, aged 25.
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Original:  Another individual, who is aged 17, has remained publically unidentified
Revised:  Another individual, who is 17, has remained publically unidentified
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Original:  Another individual, who is aged 17, has remained publically unidentified
Revised:  Another individual, who is aged 17, has had his anonymity protected
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Original: The attack followed a robbery involving four criminals, including Essel.
Revised: The attack followed a robbery involving a gang of criminals, including Essel.
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Original:  The three other criminals have been found guilty of manslaughter.
Revised:  Three other criminals have been found guilty of manslaughter.
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Original:  Two of them have been identified as 20-year-old Anthony Maina and Simeon Jumah, aged 25.
Revised:  Two of those have been identified as 20-year-old Anthony Maina and Simeon Jumah, aged 25.
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Original: The (UNCTD) yearly report, published on Wednesday, reports of a harsh economic collapse in the and calls for its reconstruction.
Revised: The (UNCTD) reported harsh economic collapse in the and calls for its reconstruction.
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Original: The (UNCTD) yearly report, published on Wednesday, reports of a harsh economic collapse in the and calls for its reconstruction.
Revised: The (UNCTD) yearly report, published on Wednesday, reports of a harsh economic collapse in the on Wednesday, calling for its reconstruction.
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Original: The (UNCTD) reported harsh economic collapse in the on Wednesday, calling for its reconstruction.
Revised: The (UNCTD) reported harsh economic collapse in the on Wednesday, calling for it's reconstruction.
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Original:  Therefore, the UNCTAD warns of disastrous outcomes if the situation isn't addressed immediately.
Revised:  The UNCTAD warns of disastrous outcomes if the situation isn't addressed immediately.
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Original:  Yet beyond foreign support, the organization recommends taking steps that would allow the Gazan economy to stabilize and eventually stand on its own and decrease its dependence on foreign economies, such as investment in infrastructure and the manufacturing sector, and a reduction in the siege on Gaza.
Revised:  Beyond foreign support, the organization recommends taking steps that would allow the Gazan economy to stabilize and eventually stand on its own and decrease its dependence on foreign economies, such as investment in infrastructure and the manufacturing sector, and a reduction in the siege on Gaza.
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Original: In a statement from , Mutasim Elagraa, the Economic Affairs officer in the Assistance to the Palestinian People Unit in UNCTAD, said that “ The situation in reality is graver than what is mentioned in the report, as it was prepared before the latest Israeli offensive operation on Gaza strip .”
Revised: " The situation in reality is graver than what is mentioned in the report, as it was prepared before the latest Israeli offensive operation on Gaza strip .”
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Original: In a statement from , Mutasim Elagraa, the Economic Affairs officer in the Assistance to the Palestinian People Unit in UNCTAD, said that “ The situation in reality is graver than what is mentioned in the report, as it was prepared before the latest Israeli offensive operation on Gaza strip .”
Revised: In a statement from , Mutasim Elagraa, the Economic Affairs officer in the Assistance to the Palestinian People Unit in UNCTAD, said that “ The situation in reality is graver than what is mentioned in the report, as it was prepared before the latest Israeli offensive operation on Gaza strip ," said Economic Affairs officer in the Assistance to the Palestinian People Unit in UNCTAD Mutasim Elagraa.
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Original:  Furthermore, UNCTAD's coordinator for the Palestinian territories , Mahmoud Elkhafif, told reporters that now, following the damages caused by the conflict, rebuilding Gaza would require more than 4 billion dollars
Revised:  Furthermore, UNCTAD's coordinator for the , Mahmoud Elkhafif, told reporters that now, following the damages caused by the conflict, rebuilding Gaza would require more than 4 billion dollars
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Original: The (UNCTAD) reported harsh economic collapse in the on Wednesday, calling for it's reconstruction.
Revised: The (UNCTAD) reported harsh economic collapse in the on Wednesday, calling for its reconstruction.
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Original: The (UNCTAD) reported harsh economic collapse in the  on Wednesday, calling for its reconstruction.
Revised: The (UNCTAD) reported harsh economic collapse in the Gaza Strip on Wednesday, calling for its reconstruction.
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Original:  In July 2009 , an internal presentation made the claim, and a month later, a Lexus ES, one of the models under the limited recall crashed in California, killing four people.
Revised:  In July 2009 made the claim, and a month later, a Lexus ES, one of the models under the limited recall crashed in California, killing four people.
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Original:  The rain improved wetlands and it provided grassland for duck broods and hens that renested  
Revised:  However, increased rain improved wetlands and it provided grassland for duck broods and hens that renested 
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Original:  The rain improved wetlands and it provided grassland for duck broods and hens that renested  
Revised:  The rain improved wetlands and provided grassland for duck broods and hens that renested 
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Original:  The rain improved wetlands and it provided grassland for duck broods and hens that renested  
Revised:  The rain improved wetlands and it provided grassland for duck broods and renesting hens. 
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Original: Pierre, South Dakota- The duck population has improved , compared to a spring survey that showed fewer ducks and waterfowl nesting areas in the state.
Revised:  The duck population has improved , compared to a spring survey that showed fewer ducks and waterfowl nesting areas in the state.
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Original: Pierre, South Dakota- The duck population has improved , compared to a spring survey that showed fewer ducks and waterfowl nesting areas in the state.
Revised: Pierre, South Dakota- The duck population in South Dakota has increased , compared to a spring survey that showed fewer ducks and waterfowl nesting areas in the state.
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Original: The duck population in South Dakota has increased, compared to a spring  survey that showed fewer ducks and waterfowl nesting areas in the state .
Revised: The duck population in South Dakota increasing. survey that showed fewer ducks and waterfowl nesting areas in the state .
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Original:  A survey in May showed the state's population of breeding ducks at 1.6 million, down from 1.7 million in 2004.
Revised:  A survey in May showed the state's population of breeding ducks numbering 1.6 million, down from 1.7 million in 2004.
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Original:  The same survey indicated that duck habitats, specifically ponds, had declined more than 35 per cent from the historical average.
Revised:  The same survey indicated that duck habitats, specifically ponds, had declined more than 35 percent from the historical average.
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Original:  However, increased rain improved wetlands and provided grassland for duck broods and renesting hens.
Revised:  However, late spring rains reportedly improved wetland conditions and irrigated grasslands for grazing duck broods and renesting hens.
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Original:  Waterfowl biologist Spencer Vaa said: "I have observed many duck broods across eastern South Dakota in July, and grassland cover looks great statewide . " The figures will now help authorities set duck-hunting terms for the fall season in August
Revised:  "I have observed many duck broods across eastern South Dakota in July, and grassland cover looks great statewide . " The figures will now help authorities set duck-hunting terms for the fall season in August
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