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Original:  His mother, Corazon Aquino, took over from her husband and led the People Power Revolution that eventually toppled Marcos in 1986.
Revised:  His mother, Corazon Aquino, took over from her husband and led the People Power Revolution that toppled Marcos in 1986.
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Original:  Noynoy's father was shot by the late dictator Ferdinand Marcos, before his mother, Corazon Aquino, led the People Power Revolution that toppled Marcos in 1986.
Revised:  Noynoy's father was shot on orders of late dictator Ferdinand Marcos, before his mother, Corazon Aquino, led the People Power Revolution that toppled Marcos in 1986.
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Original: File:Noynoy Aquino.jpg|Noynoy Aquino  next President of the Philippines.
Revised: File:Noynoy Aquino.jpg|Noynoy Aquino , the next President of the Philippines.
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Original:  A circus elephant managed to escape from her handler  Sunday night in the city of Zurich, Switzerland before being recaptured by local police and circus animal keepers.
Revised:  A circus elephant managed to escape from her handler on Sunday night in the city of Zurich, Switzerland before being recaptured by local police and circus animal keepers.
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Original:  She was able to make her escape just before being put into a trailer, when the keeper was not paying attention.
Revised:  She was able to make her escape just before being put into a trailer, whilst the keeper was not paying attention.
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Original:  She also passed by Zürich Hauptbahnhof (the city's main rail station) and Paradeplatz, a square of Bahnhofstrasse, where both Credit Suisse Group AG and UBS AG are headquartered .
Revised:  She also passed by Zürich Hauptbahnhof (the city's main rail station) and Paradeplatz, a square of Bahnhofstrasse, where both Credit Suisse Group AG and UBS AG have headquarters .
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Original:  For nearly an hour, police chased the elephant around the city before she was recaptured peacefully in the Talstrasse section of Zurich.
Revised:  For nearly an hour, police chased the elephant around the city before she was finally recaptured, peacefully, in the Talstrasse section of Zurich.
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Original:  There were no reports of any damage or injuries during the incident, and even though police held back onlookers, at least one bystander managed to capture video of the event.
Revised:  There were no reports of any damage or injuries during the incident, and although police held back onlookers, at least one bystander managed to capture video of the event.
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Original:  She was able to make her escape just before being put into a trailer, whilst the keeper was not paying attention.
Revised:  She was able to make her escape just before being put into a trailer, while the keeper was not paying attention.
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Original:  Around  1730 UTC  , Sabu was seen wading in Lake Zurich for a short time before walking back onto city streets.
Revised:  Around 1730 UTC ) , Sabu was seen wading in Lake Zurich for a short time before walking back onto city streets.
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Original:  For nearly an hour, police chased the elephant around the city before she was finally recaptured, peacefully , in the Talstrasse section of Zurich.
Revised:  For nearly an hour, police chased the elephant around the city before she was finally peacefully recaptured in the Talstrasse section of Zurich.
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Original:  Circus officials and police followed Sabu, but  she did not respond to their calls , said a circus spokesperson . Sabu was also said to have been moving so fast that police had difficulty keeping up with her.
Revised:  Circus officials and police followed Sabu, but a circus spokesperson said that she did not respond to their calls , said a circus spokesperson . Sabu was also said to have been moving so fast that police had difficulty keeping up with her.
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Original:  Circus officials and police followed Sabu, but  she did not respond to their calls , said a circus spokesperson . Sabu was also said to have been moving so fast that police had difficulty keeping up with her.
Revised:  Circus officials and police followed Sabu, but she did not respond to their calls . Sabu was also said to have been moving so fast that police had difficulty keeping up with her.
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Original:  At about  1900 UTC  , a keeper was able to control the animal and load her onto a truck to take her to Winterthur, where the other circus animals were.
Revised:  At about 1900 UTC ) , a keeper was able to control the animal and load her onto a truck to take her to Winterthur, where the other circus animals were.
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Original: Around 1830 local time (1730 UTC), Sabu was seen wading in Lake Zurich for a short time before walking back onto city streets.
Revised: Around 1930 local time (1730 UTC), Sabu was seen wading in Lake Zurich for a short time before walking back onto city streets.
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Original:  Basildon Crown Court has also ordered the hospital to pay court costs of £40,000 (US$57,552, €48,250, A$70,022, C$60,486) in an incident where significant errors in its "systems and procedures" caused the death to occur  . Pascal Bates, the Prosecutor, stated to the judge in Basildon Crown Court that  "  [the trust] accepts that its offending was a significant cause of this death.
Revised:  Basildon Crown Court has also ordered the hospital to pay court costs of £40,000 (US$57,552, €48,250, A$70,022, C$60,486) in an incident where significant errors in its "systems and procedures" caused the death to occur . Pascal Bates, the Prosecutor, stated to the judge in Basildon Crown Court that the hospital had reached " [the trust] accepts that its offending was a significant cause of this death.
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Original: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, located in Essex, England, United Kingdom, has been fined £50,000 (US$71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C $75,660) after a severely disabled patient died in the hospital, in an incident where health and safety breaches were a "significant cause" of the individual's death.
Revised: Basildon and Thurrock University Hospitals NHS Foundation Trust, in Essex, England, United Kingdom, has been fined £50,000 (US$71,952, €60,326, A$87,614, C $75,660) after a severely disabled patient died in the hospital, in an incident where health and safety breaches were a "significant cause" of the individual's death.
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Original:  Basildon Crown Court has also ordered the hospital to pay court costs of £40,000 (US$ 57,552, €48,250, A$70,022, C$60,486) in an incident where significant errors in its "systems and procedures" caused the death to occur, as Basildon University Hospital admitted in the court trial . 20-year-old Kyle Flack, who came from the town of Stanford-le-Hope  , was deafblind and suffered from quadriplegia, cerebral palsy and substantial learning difficulties.
Revised:  Basildon Crown Court has also ordered the hospital to pay court costs of £40,000 (US$ 57,552, €48,250, A$70,022, C$60,486) . 20-year-old Kyle Flack, who came from the town of Stanford-le-Hope , was deafblind and suffered from quadriplegia, cerebral palsy and substantial learning difficulties.
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Original:  Basildon Crown Court has also ordered the hospital to pay court costs of £40,000 (US$ 57,552, €48,250, A$70,022, C$60,486) in an incident where significant errors in its "systems and procedures" caused the death to occur, as Basildon University Hospital admitted in the court trial . 20-year-old Kyle Flack, who came from the town of Stanford-le-Hope  , was deafblind and suffered from quadriplegia, cerebral palsy and substantial learning difficulties.
Revised:  Basildon Crown Court has also ordered the hospital to pay court costs of £40,000 (US$ 57,552, €48,250, A$70,022, C$60,486) in an incident where significant errors in its "systems and procedures" caused the death to occur, as Basildon University Hospital admitted in the court trial . 20-year-old Kyle Flack, who came from Stanford-le-Hope , was deafblind and suffered from quadriplegia, cerebral palsy and substantial learning difficulties.
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Original:  His death occurred in October 2006 as the result of his head getting jammed into the railings surrounding his hospital bed , causing him to suffocate . Pascal Bates, the Prosecutor, stated to the judge in Basildon Crown Court that the hospital had reached "markedly short" of the standard that had been required;
Revised:  He died in October 2006 as the result of his head getting jammed into the railings surrounding his hospital bed , causing him to suffocate . Pascal Bates, the Prosecutor, stated to the judge in Basildon Crown Court that the hospital had reached "markedly short" of the standard that had been required;
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Original:  His death occurred in October 2006 as the result of his head getting jammed into the railings surrounding his hospital bed , causing him to suffocate . Pascal Bates, the Prosecutor, stated to the judge in Basildon Crown Court that the hospital had reached "markedly short" of the standard that had been required;
Revised:  His death occurred in October 2006 as the result of his head getting jammed into the railings surrounding his hospital bed . Pascal Bates, the Prosecutor, stated to the judge in Basildon Crown Court that the hospital had reached "markedly short" of the standard that had been required;
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Original:  he commented that "[ the trust ] accepts that its offending was a significant cause of this death.
Revised:  he commented that "[ m ] accepts that its offending was a significant cause of this death.
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Original:  Earlier in 2010, Gill , the mother of Kyle Flack, stated that bosses of the hospital should be held responsible for this incident.
Revised:  Earlier this year, Gill Flack, stated that bosses of the hospital should be held responsible for this incident.
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Original:  Bryant Camareno, lawyer for Dyer, stated his client did not with to plead guilty.
Revised:  Bryant Camareno, lawyer for Dyer, stated his client did not wish to plead guilty.
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Original: Initial composition of jury members in a human trafficking criminal trial began Tuesday in Clearwater, Florida  .
Revised: Initial composition of jury members in a human trafficking criminal trial began Tuesday in Clearwater, Florida , United States .
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Original: Initial composition of jury members in a human trafficking criminal trial began Tuesday in Clearwater , Florida, United States.
Revised: Initial composition of jury members in a human trafficking criminal trial began Tuesday in , Florida, United States.
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Original:  WTVT-TV reported this may be the first such case in the Tampa Bay Area .
Revised:  reported this may be the first such case in the Tampa Bay Area .
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Original:  WTVT-TV reported this may be the first such case in the Tampa Bay Area .
Revised:  WTVT-TV reported this may be the first such case in the .
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Original:  File:Clearwater, Florida Courthousepmr01.jpg|Pinellas County Courthouse , in Clearwater, Florida Law enforcement officials stated Dyer along with three other individuals restrained women without their permission in a residence in Treasure Island , Florida.
Revised:  Courthouse , in Clearwater, Florida Law enforcement officials stated Dyer along with three other individuals restrained women without their permission in a residence in Treasure Island , Florida.
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Original:  File:Clearwater, Florida Courthousepmr01.jpg|Pinellas County Courthouse , in Clearwater, Florida Law enforcement officials stated Dyer along with three other individuals restrained women without their permission in a residence in Treasure Island , Florida.
Revised:  File:Clearwater, Florida Courthousepmr01.jpg|Pinellas County Courthouse , in Clearwater, Florida Law enforcement officials stated Dyer along with three other individuals restrained women without their permission in a residence in , Florida.
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Original:  According to statements by those investigating the case, Dyer and his associates made these women work as prostitutes .
Revised:  According to statements by those investigating the case, Dyer and his associates made these women work as .
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Original:  Other individals that were arrested related to the case included Kenyatta Cornelius, Edward Jones, and Corinna Shaffer.
Revised:  Other individuals that were arrested related to the case included Kenyatta Cornelius, Edward Jones, and Corinna Shaffer.
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Original:   Real size replica of Naro (left) Korea Aerospace Research Institute (KARI) and Khrunichev State Research and Production Space Center hope to use a Naro-1, South Korea's first carrier rocket, to launch a STSAT-2B satellite.
Revised:  Real size replica of Naro-1 (left) Korea Aerospace Research Institute (KARI) and Khrunichev State Research and Production Space Center hope to use a Naro-1, South Korea's first carrier rocket, to launch a STSAT-2B satellite.
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Original:   Real size replica of Naro (left) Korea Aerospace Research Institute (KARI) and Khrunichev State Research and Production Space Center hope to use a Naro-1, South Korea's first carrier rocket, to launch a STSAT-2B satellite.
Revised:  Real size replica of Naro (left) Korea Aerospace Research Institute (KARI) and Khrunichev State Research and Production Space Center had hoped to use a Naro-1, South Korea's first carrier rocket, to launch a STSAT-2B satellite.
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Original:  South Korea  postponed the launch on Wednesday due to problems with the rocket's fire extinguisher system.
Revised:  South Korea had postponed the launch on Wednesday due to problems with the rocket's fire extinguisher system.
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Original:  Launch should occur from Naro Space Centre .
Revised:  The rocket lifted off from Goheung's Naro Space Centre .
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Original:  If it is  successful, it will be the first Naro-1 launch to reach orbit  
Revised:  If it is successful, it will be the first Naro-1 launch to reach orbit . 
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Original:  File:KSLV-1 Naro Replica.jpg|Real size replica of Naro-1 (left) Korea Aerospace Research Institute (KARI) and Khrunichev State Research and Production Space Center had hoped to use a Naro-1, South Korea's first carrier rocket, to launch a STSAT-2B satellite.
Revised:  Korea Aerospace Research Institute (KARI) and Khrunichev State Research and Production Space Center had hoped to use a Naro-1, South Korea's first carrier rocket, to launch a STSAT-2B satellite.
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Original:  Science Ministry spokesman Pyun Kyung-bum said  "We expect that it will be difficult to launch today".
Revised:  Science Ministry spokesman Pyun Kyung-bum said , "We expect that it will be difficult to launch today".
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Original:  If it had been successful, it will be the first Naro-1 launch to reach orbit.
Revised:  If it had been successful, it would have been the first Naro-1 launch to reach orbit.
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Original:  Since 1992, South Korea has launched 11 satellites all from overseas sites and all of which were foreign-made rockets
Revised:  Since 1992, South Korea has launched 11 satellites from overseas sites and all of which were foreign-made rockets
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Original:  Since 1992, South Korea has launched 11 satellites all from overseas sites and all of which were foreign-made rockets
Revised:  Since 1992, South Korea has launched 11 satellites all from overseas sites with foreign-made rockets
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Original:  ScienceDaily, citing the statements of some city officals, reports that the explosion was probably electrical .
Revised:  One official said the explosion may have been caused by an electrical transformer .
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Original:  A witness described a fireball coming out of the side of the building .
Revised:  A witness described a fireball coming out of the side of the building 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Some accounts have described a rift in the sidewalk caused by the explosion below.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: Chelsea, a football club based in London, United Kingdom, have confirmed that Joe Coleand Michael Ballack will be leaving on free transfers during the summer transfer window.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cole has been at the club since joining from fellow London side West Ham United in 2003, while Ballack's previous club was Bayern Munich of Germany, arriving under José Mourinho.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  The reporters were in South Africa to cover the FIFA World Cup,  which starts on June 11th.
Revised:  The reporters were in South Africa to cover the FIFA World Cup, a football competition which starts on June 11th.
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Original:  The reporters were in South Africa to cover the FIFA World Cup,  which starts on June 11th.
Revised:  The reporters were in South Africa to cover the FIFA World Cup, which starts on June 11.
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Original:  Police spokesman Hangwani Mulaudzi  that two gunmen broke into the journalists  lodgings during the early hours of the morning.
Revised:  Police spokesman Hangwani Mulaudzi confirmed that two gunmen broke into the journalists lodgings during the early hours of the morning.
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Original:  Police spokesman Hangwani Mulaudzi  that two gunmen broke into the journalists  lodgings during the early hours of the morning.
Revised:  Police spokesman Hangwani Mulaudzi that two gunmen broke into the journalists ' lodgings during the early hours of the morning.
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Original:  Laptops and camera’s were stolen along with the reporters passports.
Revised:  Laptops and cameras were stolen, along with the reporters passports.
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Original:  The South African Press Association reported that the one of the journalists were Portuguese and the other one was from Spain.
Revised:  The South African Press Association reported that the one of the journalists were Portuguese and another was from Spain.
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Original:  Thousands of police  have been organised for the World Cup.
Revised:  Thousands of police officers have been organised for the World Cup.
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Original: The   UN Security Council has voted 13 to 2 to impose new sanctions on Iran unless it reveals more details of its nuclear programme.
Revised: The The UN Security Council has voted 13 to 2 to impose new sanctions on Iran unless it reveals more details of its nuclear programme.
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Original:  Turkey and South Africa voted against the proposal, while Lebanon abstained.
Revised:  Brazil and Turkey voted against the proposal, while Lebanon abstained.
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Original:  The sanctions do not include major blockades, however Iran cannot import high-power weapons, such as attack helicopters and missiles  
Revised:  The sanctions do not include major blockades, however Iran cannot import high-power weapons, such as attack helicopters and missiles . 
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Original:  The sanctions do not include major blockades, however Iran cannot import high-power weapons, such as attack helicopters and missiles.
Revised:  The sanctions do not include major blockades, however 
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Original:  The Council decided that all States shall prevent the supply, sale or transfer to Iran of battle tanks, armoured combat vehicles, large calibre artillery systems, combat aircraft, attack helicopters, warships, missiles or missile systems   
Revised:  The Council decided that all States shall prevent the supply, sale or transfer to Iran of battle tanks, armoured combat vehicles, large calibre artillery systems, combat aircraft, attack helicopters, warships, missiles or missile systems . 
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Original:  The United Nations Security Council has imposes a fourth round of sanctions against Iran over its  nuclear program.
Revised:  The United Nations Security Council has imposes a fourth round of sanctions against Iran over its alleged nuclear program.
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Original:  The UN Security Council has voted 13 to 2 to impose new sanctions on Iran unless it reveals more details of its nuclear programme.
Revised:  The Security Council voted 13 to 2 to impose new sanctions on Iran unless it reveals more details of its nuclear programme.
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Original:  Brazil and Turkey voted against the proposal , while Lebanon abstained.
Revised:  Brazil and Turkey voted against the resolution , while Lebanon abstained.
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Original:  It can make a different choice and pursue a course that will reaffirm the Nonproliferation Treaty as the basis of global nonproliferation and disarmament a course that will advance Iran's own security and prosperity and the peace of the wider world, " he said .
Revised:  It can make a different choice and pursue a course that will reaffirm the Nonproliferation Treaty as the basis of global nonproliferation and disarmament a course that will advance Iran's own security and prosperity and the peace of the wider world, " .
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Original:  Turkey and Brazil were opposed to the sanctions, as the deal they brokered with Iran had not been given time.
Revised:  Brazil and Turkey criticised the sanctions, as the deal they brokered with Iran had not been given time.
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Original: Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula Da Silva: "Sadly, this time it was Iran who wanted to negotiate, and those who didn’t want to negotiate were those who think that force resolves everything.
Revised: Brazilian President Luiz Inácio Lula da Silva: "Sadly, this time it was Iran who wanted to negotiate, and those who didn’t want to negotiate were those who think that force resolves everything.
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Original: The Merck & Co. drug company is liable for a person's death concerning the use of the product Vioxx, according to a jury 's verdict in a Texas court.
Revised: Drug maker Merck & Co. drug company is liable for a person's death concerning the use of the product Vioxx, according to a jury 's verdict in a Texas court.
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Original: The Merck & Co. drug company is liable for a person's death concerning the use of the product Vioxx, according to a jury 's verdict in a Texas court.
Revised: The Merck & Co. was found liable for a person's death concerning the use of the product Vioxx, according to a jury 's verdict in a Texas court.
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Original: The Merck & Co. drug company is liable for a person's death concerning the use of the product Vioxx, according to a jury 's verdict in a Texas court.
Revised: The Merck & Co. drug company is liable for a person's death concerning the use of the pain medication Vioxx, according to a jury 's verdict in a Texas court.
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Original: The Merck & Co. drug company is liable for a person's death concerning the use of the product Vioxx, according to a jury 's verdict in a Texas court.
Revised: The Merck & Co. drug company is liable for a person's death concerning the use of the product Vioxx, according to a jury verdict in a Texas court.
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Original:  Merk 's stock price dropped 10\% within minutes of the verdict being announced
Revised:  Merck 's stock price dropped 10\% within minutes of the verdict being announced
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Original:  There are in excess of 4,200 other Vioxx-related lawsuits pending across the USA  
Revised:  There are in excess of 4,200 other Vioxx-related lawsuits pending across the USA . 
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Original:  The shoe was discovered in the Vayots Dzor province of Armenia inside an Arami-1 cave.
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