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Original: Last week,  supporters for Manning lodged a complaint with Manfred Nowak in Geneva, Switzerland , who is the United Nation's top official in torture , saying that the conditions of his cell and the treatment he is receiving, amount to "torture."
Revised: Last week, supporters for Manning lodged a complaint with Manfred Nowak in Geneva, Switzerland , saying that the conditions of his cell and the treatment he is receiving, amount to "torture."
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Original:  Manning was arrested in May, after allegedly leaking over 250,000 classified diplomatic cables to the whistle blowing website WikiLeaks.
Revised:  Manning was arrested in May, after allegedly leaking over 250,000 classified diplomatic cables to the website WikiLeaks.
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Original:  Sheridan was today convicted of perjury before Glasgow High Court, the jury ruling he lied in a libel case against The News of the World  
Revised:  Sheridan was today convicted of perjury before Glasgow High Court, the jury ruling he lied in a libel case against The News of the World . 
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Original:  Sheridan was today convicted of perjury before Glasgow High Court, the jury ruling he lied in a libel case against The News of the World  .
Revised:  Sheridan was today convicted of perjury before Glasgow High Court, the jury ruling he lied in a libel case against The News of the World (NotW) .
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Original:  Sheridan , 46, sued the paper in 2006 over allegations he had been in extra-marital affairs, visited a sex club and participated in orgies.
Revised:  Tommy Sheridan Sheridan , 46, sued the paper in 2006 over allegations he had been in extra-marital affairs, visited a sex club and participated in orgies.
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Original:  His wife Gail, 46, was also charged but this was dropped by the prosecution as part of procedings .
Revised:  His wife Gail, 46, was also charged but this was dropped by the prosecution as part of proceedings .
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Original:  He would later claim in court he had not confessed to former friends about these visits, but the jury felt yesterday this was a lie.
Revised:  He would later claim in court he had not confessed to former friends about these visits, but the jury decided yesterday this was a lie.
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Original:  Trolle claimed they had sex in the Sheirdan marital bed at their Glasgow home, but the jury did not accept this part of the allegation.
Revised:  Trolle claimed they had sex in the Sheridan marital bed at their Glasgow home, but the jury did not accept this part of the allegation.
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Original:  It was later overturned by a federal judge in San Francisco and deemed the measure unconstitutional.
Revised:  It was later overturned by a federal judge in San Francisco who deemed the measure unconstitutional.
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Original:   DADT, in effect for 17 years, was repealed by the United States Senate on Saturday.
Revised:  A report by The Pentagon earlier this month concluded most U.S. service personnel do not believe reform of the rules on gays and lesbians serving in the military would affect morale, unit cohesion or military effectiveness. The report found only 30\% believed that changing the law would have a negative effect. DADT, in effect for 17 years, was repealed by the United States Senate on Saturday.
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Original:  And I think you're going to see, you know, the next effort is probably going to be to deal with so called DOMA," said Biden.
Revised:  And I think you're going to see, you know, the next effort is probably going to be to deal with so-called DOMA," said Biden.
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Original:  The repeal, which was signed by Obama on Thursday, will now allow gay and lesbian service members to serve openly in the county 's military, without fear that they will be discharged form service.
Revised:  The repeal, which was signed by Obama on Thursday, will now allow gay and lesbian service members to serve openly in the country 's military, without fear that they will be discharged form service.
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Original:   Armed police have been posted around high-profile destinations in the city, and roads around the Taj Mahal Palace hotel—seiged by militants in the 2008 attacks, in which a total of 166 people died—have been closed.
Revised:  He added: "It is going to be a violent attack which will cause disruptions. They have recently arrived in Mumbai. We are not in a position to reveal their nationalities now but they are LeT members." Armed police have been posted around high-profile destinations in the city, and roads around the Taj Mahal Palace hotel—seiged by militants in the 2008 attacks, in which a total of 166 people died—have been closed.
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Original:  Armed police have been posted around high-profile destinations in the city, and roads around the Taj Mahal Palace hotel—seiged by militants in the 2008 attacks , in which a total of 166 people died —have been closed.
Revised:  Armed police have been posted around high-profile destinations in the city, and roads around the Taj Mahal Palace hotel—seiged by militants in the 2008 attacks —have been closed.
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Original:  Police have released a sketch of one of the militants believed to be in the city  
Revised:  Police have released a sketch of one of the militants believed to be in the city . 
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Original:  in May this year he was sentenced to death by hanging, on 86 charges, including conspiracy, murder, terrorism, and waging war against India  
Revised:  in May this year he was sentenced to death by hanging, on 86 charges, including conspiracy, murder, terrorism, and waging war against India . 
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Original: File:Mumbai attacks vinu image01-crop.jpg|Lashkar-e-Taiba are thought to be responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
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Original:  ]  166 people died and hundreds more were injured in the 2008 attacks, in which multiple gunmen attacked the Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminus railway station, a hospital, a police station and numerous hotels amongst other sites.
Revised:  are] 166 people died and hundreds more were injured in the 2008 attacks, in which multiple gunmen attacked the Chhatrapati Shivaji Terminus railway station, a hospital, a police station and numerous hotels amongst other sites.
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Original:  " Police are now searching the city for the four people, thought to be members of Lashkar-e-Taiba (LeT), the Islamic fundamentalist militant group the Indian government holds responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
Revised:  " Police are now searching for the four people, thought to be members of Lashkar-e-Taiba (LeT), the Islamic fundamentalist militant group the Indian government holds responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008.
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Original:   [[File:Mumbai attacks vinu image01-crop.jpg|Lashkar-e-Taiba are thought to be responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008. ]] Speaking at a press conference, Himanshu Roy , joint police commissioner, warned there was intelligence to suggest " the threat is serious."
Revised:  [[File:Mumbai attacks vinu image01-crop.jpg|Lashkar-e-Taiba are thought to be responsible for the coordinated attacks which hit Mumbai in 2008. ]] Speaking at a press conference, Roy said " the threat is serious."
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Original:  They  have recently arrived in Mumbai.
Revised:  They hey have recently arrived in Mumbai.
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Original:  others are being treated in a community centre near the site of the incident  
Revised:  others are being treated in a community centre near the site of the incident . 
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Original:  Norfolk Police Department confirmed a major incident had occurred;
Revised:  Norfolk Police Department confirmed a "major incident" had occurred;
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Original:  "I've seen four of five fire crews and at least seven ambulances going through to the scene of the crash, and they were still coming about an hour after the incident," a television reporter at the scene of the incident  said.
Revised:  "I've seen four of five fire crews and at least seven ambulances going through to the scene of the crash, and they were still coming about an hour after the incident," a television reporter at the scene of the incident , said.
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Original:  The boat, which was named the Sea Wolf , sent out  a distress signal via a emergency satellite beacon at about 1:35 AM on Thursday, seven miles off of Cape May.
Revised:  The boat, which was named the Sea Wolf , sent out a distress signal via emergency satellite beacon at about 1:35 AM on Thursday, seven miles off of Cape May.
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Original:  The boat, which was named the Sea Wolf , sent out  a distress signal via a emergency satellite beacon at about 1:35 AM on Thursday, seven miles off of Cape May.
Revised:  The boat, which was named the Sea Wolf , sent out a distress signal via a emergency satellite beacon at about 1:35 AM on Thursday, seven miles off Cape May.
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Original:  A member of the New Jersey State Police informed the Coast Guard who sent out a MH-65 rescue helicopter and two rescue launches to save the stricken vessel.
Revised:  A member of the State Police informed the Coast Guard who sent out a MH-65 rescue helicopter and two rescue launches to save the stricken vessel.
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Original:  A member of the New Jersey State Police informed the Coast Guard who sent out a MH-65 rescue helicopter and two rescue launches to save the stricken vessel.
Revised:  A member of the New Jersey State Police informed the Coast Guard who sent out a MH-65 rescue helicopter and two rescue launches .
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Original:  The helicopter managed to save Steve Hopkins of the District of Columbia but were unable to do the same to Gregory Arlotta of Florida.
Revised:  The helicopter managed to save Steve Hopkins of the District of Columbia but was unable to do the same to Gregory Arlotta of Florida.
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Original:  The helicopter managed to save Steve Hopkins of the District of Columbia but were unable to do the same to Gregory Arlotta of Florida.
Revised:  The helicopter managed to save Steve Hopkins of the District of Columbia but were unable to do the same for Gregory Arlotta of Florida.
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Original:  The 62 year old Floridan man disappeared among the debris in the eight foot wavesin the area off of Cape May .
Revised:  The 62 year old disappeared among the debris in the eight foot wavesin the area off of Cape May .
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Original:  The 62 year old Floridan man disappeared among the debris in the eight foot wavesin the area off of Cape May .
Revised:  The 62 year old Floridan man disappeared among the debris in eight-foot waves .
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Original:  The Sea Wolf had been operating in the area for a couple of decades prior to the sinking , and it was recently described by one observer as being unfit to go on a voyage to New Orleans  which it was doing before it sank.
Revised:  The Sea Wolf had been operating in the area for a couple of decades prior to the sinking It was recently described by one observer as being unfit to go on a voyage to New Orleans which it was doing before it sank.
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Original:  The Sea Wolf had been operating in the area for a couple of decades prior to the sinking , and it was recently described by one observer as being unfit to go on a voyage to New Orleans  which it was doing before it sank.
Revised:  The Sea Wolf had been operating in the area for a couple of decades prior to the sinking , and it was recently described by one observer as being unfit to go on a voyage to New Orleans , which it was doing before it sank.
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Original:  Gregory Arlotta had recently bought the vessel from its previous owner  who was in his seventies and had decided to sell the ship.
Revised:  Arlotta had recently bought the vessel from its previous owner who was in his seventies and had decided to sell the ship.
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Original:  Gregory Arlotta had recently bought the vessel from its previous owner  who was in his seventies and had decided to sell the ship.
Revised:  Gregory Arlotta had recently bought the vessel from its previous owner , who was in his seventies and had decided to sell the ship.
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Original:  The vessel was a 1963 Gilligan, which was designed for use within ten miles of shore for fishing
Revised:  A 1963 Gilligan, which was designed for use within ten miles of shore for fishing
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Original:  The vessel was a 1963 Gilligan, which was designed for use within ten miles of shore for fishing
Revised:  The vessel was a 1963 Gilligan, it was designed for use within ten miles of shore for fishing
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Original:  The Sea Wolf had been operating in the area for a couple of decades prior to the sinking It was recently described by one observer as being unfit to go on a voyage to New Orleans, which it was doing before it sank.
Revised:  The Sea Wolf had been operating for a couple of decades prior to the sinking It was recently described by one observer as being unfit to go on a voyage to New Orleans, which it was doing before it sank.
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Original:  The Sea Wolf had been operating in the area for a couple of decades prior to the sinking It was recently described by one observer as being unfit to go on a voyage to New Orleans, which it was doing before it sank.
Revised:  The Sea Wolf had been operating in the area for a couple of decades prior to the sinking , and was described by one observer as being unfit to go on a voyage to New Orleans, which it was doing before it sank.
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Original:  A neighbour said  eight or nine shots were fired throughout the night.
Revised:  A neighbour said about eight or nine shots were fired throughout the night.
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Original:  "There were three loud bangs—possibly gunfire," a BBC cameraman said.
Revised:  "There were three loud bangs—possibly gunfire," a news cameraman said.
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Original: Reports suggest the gunman fired on police throughout the stand-off, while he spoke with negotiators.
Revised: Reports suggest the gunman fired on police throughout the stand-off, which involved negotiators.
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Original: Police attended a property in Kirkheaton, Huddersfield yesterday, to arrest a man for allegedly threatening a person in a nearby home . Upon their reaching the property, the man inside fired with a handgun from his doorstep at police, injuring one officer.
Revised: Police attended a property in Kirkheaton, Huddersfield yesterday, to arrest a man for allegedly threatening a person at a nearby property . Upon their reaching the property, the man inside fired with a handgun from his doorstep at police, injuring one officer.
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Original: A gunman has been killed and a police officer transported to hospital after a stand-off in West Yorkshire, England came to an end this morning.
Revised: A gunman has been killed and a police officer hospitalised following a stand-off in West Yorkshire, England came to an end this morning.
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Original: A gunman has been killed and a police officer transported to hospital after a stand-off in West Yorkshire, England came to an end this morning.
Revised: A gunman has been killed and a police officer transported to hospital after a stand-off in West Yorkshire, England which concluded this morning.
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Original:  Upon their reaching the property , the man inside fired with a handgun from his doorstep at police, injuring one officer.
Revised:  Upon arrival , the man inside fired with a handgun from his doorstep at police, injuring one officer.
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Original:  "Then the police started shouting and I heard them smashing glass as they went in to the house.
Revised:  "Then the police started shouting and I heard them smashing glass as they went into the house.
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Original:  Upon  arrival, the man inside fired with a handgun from his doorstep at police, injuring one officer.
Revised:  Upon their arrival, the man inside fired with a handgun from his doorstep at police, injuring one officer.
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Original:  The Independent Police Complaints Commission (IPCC) is to investigate the incident
Revised:  The Independent Police Complaints Commission is to investigate the incident
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Original:  The Independent Police Complaints Commission (IPCC) is to investigate the incident
Revised:  The Independent Police Complaints Commission (IPCC) is to investigate 
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Original: Ski lift at the Sugarloaf ski resort|left Rescue efforts are underway to free nearly 200 skiers trapped Tuesday at Maine's Sugarloaf ski resort, which is located 100 miles north of Portland , Maine .
Revised: Ski lift at the Sugarloaf ski resort|left Rescue efforts are underway to free nearly 200 skiers trapped Tuesday at Maine's Sugarloaf ski resort, which is located 100 miles north of Portland .
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Original:  The Spillway East lift reportedly came to a halt during high winds due to a derailment .
Revised:  The Spillway East lift reportedly came to a halt during high winds due to a deraiflment .
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Original:  Ethan Austin, a resort spokesperson, revealed that six individuals were taken to local hospitals with non-life-threatening conditions.
Revised:  Ethan Austin, a resort spokesperson, revealed that six individuals were taken to near-by hospitals with non-life-threatening conditions.
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Original: The Spillway East lift reportedly came to a halt during high winds due to a deraiflment .
Revised: The Spillway East lift reportedly came to a halt during high winds due to a derailment .
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Original:  At the time, winds originating from the this month's blizzard were blowing up to 43 miles per hour, according to the National Weather Service.
Revised:  At the time, winds originating from this month's blizzard were blowing up to 43 miles per hour, according to the National Weather Service.
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Original:  Efforts to remove trapped skiers are in progress Tuesday afternoon  
Revised:  Efforts to remove trapped skiers are in progress Tuesday afternoon . 
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Original: The Belarusian Prime Minister , Sergei Sidorsky , was sacked by the President , Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election.
Revised:  Belarusian Prime Minister , Sergei Sidorsky , was sacked by the President , Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election.
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Original: The Belarusian Prime Minister , Sergei Sidorsky , was sacked by the President , Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election.
Revised: The Belarusian Prime Minister Sergei Sidorsky has been sacked by President Alexander Lukashenko after a cabinet reshuffle following last week's disputed Presidential election.
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Original:  His replacement, Mikhail Myasnikovich is a former Deputy Prime Minister from the 90's.
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Original:  Foreign observers called the election, "fraudulent" and unfair .
Revised:  Foreign observers called the election, "fraudulent" and "unfair" .
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Original: Seismologists at USGS have not yet indicated whether this earthquake is an aftershock of the 8.9 earthquake which had occurred just a few hours earlier, 305 km (190 miles) distant, in the Indian Ocean near Sumatra, Indonesia.
Revised: Seismologists at USGS have indicated that this earthquake is an aftershock of the 8.9 earthquake which had occurred just a few hours earlier, 305 km (190 miles) distant, in the Indian Ocean near Sumatra, Indonesia.
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Original:  The Bangladesh Meteorological Department issued a statement that the quake had struck Chittagong, a southern port that is the second largest city in Bangladesh   .
Revised:  The Bangladesh Meteorological Department issued a statement that the quake had struck Chittagong, a southern port that is the second largest city in Bangladesh . .
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Original: External links Magnitude 7.3 - NICOBAR ISLANDS, INDIA REGION 2004 USGS, December 26, 2004 at 04:21:26 UTC.
Revised: References Magnitude 7.3 - NICOBAR ISLANDS, INDIA REGION 2004 USGS, December 26, 2004 at 04:21:26 UTC.
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Original: JPG|200px|Wade Crane in 2003]] United States professional pool player Wade Crane has died after a automobile accident in Tennessee.
Revised: JPG|200px|Wade Crane in 2003]] American professional pool player Wade Crane has died after a automobile accident in Tennessee.
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Original: JPG|200px|Wade Crane in 2003 image source|RailbirdJAM2 ]] US professional pool player Wade Crane has died after a automobile accident in Tennessee.
Revised: JPG|200px|Wade Crane in 2003 ]] US professional pool player Wade Crane has died after a automobile accident in Tennessee.
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Original: JPG|200px|Wade Crane in 2003]] US professional pool player Wade Crane has died after a automobile accident in Tennessee  .
Revised: JPG|200px|Wade Crane in 2003]] American professional pool player Wade Crane has died after a automobile accident in Tennessee .
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Original:  Crane died in a one-car accident when his Volkswagen crossed across three lanes of traffic into the concrete retaining wall .
Revised:  Crane 's Volkswagen crossed three lanes of traffic into the concrete retaining wall .
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Original:  The report of the crash was released by the Knoxville News Sentinel.
Revised:  The report of the crash was broken by The Knoxville News Sentinel.
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Original:  Tributes have been paid to Crane from fellow pool players including Nick Varner, Johnny Archer, and Shannon Daulton 
Revised:  Fellow pool players including Nick Varner, Johnny Archer, and Shannon Daulton 
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Original:  Between 11:50 and 12:00 UTC, three simultaneous explosions hit the Kuta Square and Jimbaran Beach, two popular Western tourist areas in Bali.
Revised:  Between 11:50 and 12:00 UTC, three explosions hit the Kuta Square and Jimbaran Beach, two popular Western tourist areas in Bali.
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Original: Helplines 25px|United Kingdom Flag United Kingdom Foreign Office emergency helpline: (020) 7008 8765 for calls within the UK +44 20 7008 8765 if dialled internationally.
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Original:  25px|Australian Flag Australian DFAT emergency hotline: 1800 002 214 for calls within Australia (See also : URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 25px|New Zealand Flag New Zealand Ministry Of Foreign Affairs Trade has opened a Hotline: 0800 432 111 from within New Zealand +64 4 439 8401 internationally (See also: URL Testing wik
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 25px|New Zealand Flag New Zealand Ministry Of Foreign Affairs Trade has opened a Hotline: 0800 432 111 from within New Zealand +64 4 439 8401 internationally (See also: URL Testing wik
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Original:  25px|Australian Flag Australian DFAT emergency hotline: 1800 002 214 for calls within Australia (See also : URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 25px|New Zealand Flag New Zealand Ministry Of Foreign Affairs Trade has opened a Hotline: 0800 432 111 from within New Zealand +64 4 439 8401 internationally (See also: URL Testing wik
Revised:  25px|Australian Flag Australian DFAT emergency hotline: 1800 002 214 for calls within Australia (See also : URL%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 25px|New Zealand Flag New Zealand Ministry Of Foreign Affairs Helpline
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Original: A report by the Chinese government admits corruption is "very serious" , saying officials have investigated over 240,000 cases in the past seven years including bribery and embezzelement.
Revised: A report by the Chinese government admits corruption is "very serious" . Officials, it says, have investigated over 240,000 cases in the past seven years including bribery and embezzelement.
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