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Original:  In a televised statement on Monday, the Prime Minister of Thailand Abhisit Vejjajiva placed the blame for the loss of life on Saturday April 11, in Bangkok , on armed terrorists who had infiltrated the Red Shirt protesters , and that the security forces had only opened fire when fired upon.
Revised:  In a televised statement on Monday, the Prime Minister of Thailand Abhisit Vejjajiva placed the blame for the loss of life on Saturday April 11, in Bangkok , on armed terrorists who had infiltrated the Red Shirt protesters , and that the security forces had opened fire only when fired upon.
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Original:  The Prime Minister's statement came the day he suffered a double blow to his authority.
Revised:  The Prime Minister's statement came as he was suffering a double blow to his authority.
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Original:  Whilst coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
Revised:  As coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
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Original:  Whilst coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
Revised:  Whilst coffins draped in Thai flags paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
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Original:  Whilst coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
Revised:  Whilst coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok to symbolise the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
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Original:  Whilst coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
Revised:  Whilst coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
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Original:  Whilst coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband and the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
Revised:  Whilst coffins draped in the Thai flag paraded through Bangkok symbolising the death of democracy, Thailand's electoral commission ruled that Abhisit Vejjajiva's Democrat Party should disband . In addition, the chief of the Thai Army, General Anupong Paojinda, publicly called for the dissolution of parliament.
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Original:  Despite pressure from the Abhisit administration the Thai Army, traditionally politically significant in the country, has been reluctant to use force against the protesters, and with what will be seen as innocent blood on its hands will be even less inclined to do so .
Revised:  Despite pressure from the Abhisit administration the Thai Army, which traditionally has been politically significant in the country, has been reluctant to use force against the protesters, and with what will be seen as innocent blood on its hands will be even less inclined to do so .
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Original:  Despite pressure from the Abhisit administration the Thai Army, traditionally politically significant in the country, has been reluctant to use force against the protesters, and with what will be seen as innocent blood on its hands will be even less inclined to do so .
Revised:  Despite pressure from the Abhisit administration the Thai Army, traditionally politically significant in the country, has been reluctant to use force against the protesters, and will become even more so following what will be seen as innocent blood on its hands will be even less inclined to do so .
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Original:  Despite pressure from the Abhisit administration the Thai Army, traditionally politically significant in the country, has been reluctant to use force against the protesters, and with what will be seen as innocent blood on its hands will be even less inclined to do so .
Revised:  Despite pressure from the Abhisit administration the Thai Army, traditionally politically significant in the country, has been reluctant to use force against the protesters, and with what will be seen as innocent blood on its hands .
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Original: Even though Abhisit Vejjajiva has stated that the government and military remain united, without the unequivocal support of the Thai military and security forces the Abhisit Vejjajiva administration has very little room for maneuver.
Revised: Even though Vejjajiva has stated that the government and military remain united, without the unequivocal support of the Thai military and security forces the Abhisit Vejjajiva administration has very little room for maneuver.
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Original: Even though Abhisit Vejjajiva has stated that the government and military remain united, without the unequivocal support of the Thai military and security forces the Abhisit Vejjajiva administration has very little room for maneuver.
Revised: Even though Abhisit Vejjajiva has stated that the government and military remain united, without the unequivocal support of the Thai military and security forces , the his administration has very little room for maneuver.
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Original:  Ironically Abhisit Vejjajiva may be saved from having to concede to the Red Shirt' s demands for fresh elections by the same turn of events that saw his predecessor deposed and his own rise to the premiership.
Revised:  Ironically , Vejjajiva may be saved from having to concede to the Red Shirt' s demands for fresh elections by the same turn of events that saw his predecessor deposed and his own rise to the premiership.
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Original:  Ironically Abhisit Vejjajiva may be saved from having to concede to the Red Shirt' s demands for fresh elections by the same turn of events that saw his predecessor deposed and his own rise to the premiership.
Revised:  Ironically Abhisit Vejjajiva may be saved from having to concede to the Red Shirts' demands for fresh elections by the same turn of events that saw his predecessor deposed and his own rise to the premiership.
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Original:  Ironically Abhisit Vejjajiva may be saved from having to concede to the Red Shirt' s demands for fresh elections by the same turn of events that saw his predecessor deposed and his own rise to the premiership.
Revised:  Ironically Abhisit Vejjajiva may be saved from having to concede to the Red Shirt' s demands for fresh elections through the same process that deposed his predecessor and led to his own rise to the premiership.
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Original:  Abhisit 's Democrat Party has been ruled to have accepted 258 million Baht in illegal campaign donations from cement maker TPI Polene.
Revised:  Abhisit 's Democrat Party accepted 258 million Baht in illegal campaign donations from cement maker TPI Polene.
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Original:  Abhisit 's Democrat Party has been ruled to have accepted 258 million Baht in illegal campaign donations from cement maker TPI Polene.
Revised:  Abhisit 's Democrat Party has been ruled to have accepted 258 million baht in illegal campaign donations from cement maker TPI Polene.
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Original:  Under Thai law  the courts have the power to dissolve any party ruled to have broken electoral laws and to ban its members from public office for five years.
Revised:  Under Thai law , the courts have the power to dissolve any party ruled to have broken electoral laws and to ban its members from public office for five years.
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Original:  This is the same law that in 2008 saw the disbanding of the People's Power Party and the removal of Somchai Wongsawat from power.
Revised:  This is the same law that in 2008 resulted in the the disbanding of the People's Power Party and the removal of Somchai Wongsawat from power.
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Original:  Despite this leaders from both sides of the political divide have welcomed this development as a way out of the current deadlock.
Revised:  Despite this leaders from both sides of the political divide have welcomed this development as a way to resolve the current deadlock.
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Original: Osman Hussain, 27, the suspect in Rome  told investigators that the explosives he was carrying was not enough to even "harm people nearby."
Revised: Osman Hussain, 27, the suspect in Rome alledgedly told investigators that the explosives he was carrying was not enough to even "harm people nearby."
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Original:  He also  said that "We were supposed to blow ourselves up."
Revised:  He also is reported to have said that "We were supposed to blow ourselves up."
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Original:  The Metropolitan Police Service  questioned the suspects of the foiled July 21 bombing attacks.
Revised:  The Metropolitan Police Service has questioned the suspects of the foiled July 21 bombing attacks.
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Original: Category:Main Page Category:2005-07-07 London bombings Category:London Category:England Category:United Kingdom Category:Crime and law The Metropolitan Police Service has questioned the suspects of the foiled July 21 bombing attacks.
Revised:  The Metropolitan Police Service has questioned the suspects of the foiled July 21 bombing attacks.
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Original:  Under international pressure he introduced several serious constitutional reforms, including first in 24 years presidental elections with more than one candidate.
Revised:  Under international pressure he introduced several serious constitutional reforms, including first in 24 years presidential elections with more than one candidate.
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Original:  The doctors, as usual, said the president was in "excellent health"   
Revised:  The doctors, as usual, said the president was in "excellent health" . 
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Original: Though the doctors noted some minor skin legions from spending too much time in the sun playing golf, and suggested sunscreen for the President.
Revised: Though the doctors noted some minor skin lesions from spending too much time in the sun playing golf, and suggested sunscreen for the President.
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Original: Speculation as to why the story was reported abound on the internet. ..
Revised: Speculation as to why the story was reported abounded on the Internet.
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Original:  Though the doctors noted some minor skin lesions from spending too much time in the sun playing golf, and suggested sunscreen for the President.
Revised:  The doctors did note some minor skin lesions from spending too much time in the sun playing golf, and suggested sunscreen for the President.
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Original: Category:Main Page Category:United States Category:Politics and conflicts Category:Culture and entertainment In an unprecedented move, mainstream newspapers such as the New York Times reported on an uneventful routine medical checkup of the U.S. president .
Revised:  U.S. president .
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Original:  Speculation as to why the story was reported abounded on the Internet.
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Original:  The doctors did note some minor skin lesions from spending too much time in the sun playing golf, and suggested sunscreen for the President.
Revised:  The doctors did note some minor skin lesions from spending too much time in the sun and suggested sunscreen for the President.
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Original:  President Bush has spent more time on vacation than any president in American history
Revised:  It is U.S. tradition for sitting presidents to may public the results of their annual health exams
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Original:  Promoted tweets should be "ordinary Tweets that businesses and organisations want to highlight to a wider group of users".
Revised:  Promoted tweets should be "ordinary Tweets that businesses and organizations want to highlight to a wider group of users".
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Original:  No details were given about the cause of 70-year-old Mr Duisenberg's death   .
Revised:  No details were given about the cause of 70-year-old Mr Duisenberg's death . .
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Original: Category:France Category:Europe Category:Disasters and accidents Category:Main Page Wim Duisenberg, the former head of the European Central Bank, has been found dead in his swimming pool at his house in south-east France, the French police say.
Revised:  Wim Duisenberg, the former head of the European Central Bank, has been found dead in his swimming pool at his house in south-east France, the French police say.
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Original: The President and his wife were travelling to Russia to mark the 70th anniversary of the Katyn massacre when their plane clipped tree’s and crashed in Smolensk, Russia.
Revised: The couple were travelling to Russia to mark the 70th anniversary of the Katyn massacre when their plane clipped tree’s and crashed in Smolensk, Russia.
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Original: The President and his wife were travelling to Russia to mark the 70th anniversary of the Katyn massacre when their plane clipped tree’s and crashed in Smolensk, Russia.
Revised: The President and his wife were travelling to Russia to mark the 70th anniversary of the Katyn massacre when their plane clipped trees and crashed in Smolensk, Russia.
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Original:  The couple died along with several other senior politicians and military commanders.
Revised:  The couple died along with many other senior politicians and military commanders.
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Original:  The victims along with the first couple included the President of the central bank of Poland, the head of the Polish Olympic Committee and former President of Poland in-exile Ryszard Kaczorowski.
Revised:  Other victims included the president of the central bank of Poland, the head of the Polish Olympic Committee and former President of Poland in-exile Ryszard Kaczorowski.
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Original:  President of the United States Barack Obama has announced that he will attend the funeral .
Revised:  President of the United States Barack Obama has announced that he will also attend .
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Original:  Other victims included the president of the central bank of Poland, the head of the Polish Olympic Committee and former President of Poland, who was in exile at the time of the crash , Ryszard Kaczorowski.
Revised:  Other victims included the president of the central bank of Poland, the head of the Polish Olympic Committee and last President of Poland, who was in exile at the time of the crash , Ryszard Kaczorowski.
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Original:  The Italian group Gaylib condemned those statements, saying that it was "worrying that the foreign minister of a state that occupies the heart of the Italian capital would use arguments that are considered passé even in the Third World ." The former president of Italian gay rights group Arcigay, Aurelio Mancuso, claimed that Bertone was "clumsily trying to shift attention to homosexuality and away from the focus on new crimes against children that emerge every day ."
Revised:  The Italian group Gaylib condemned those statements, saying that it was "worrying that the foreign minister of a state that occupies the heart of the Italian capital would use arguments that are considered passé even in the Third World ."
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Original: A senior Vatican official who made comments Monday linking homosexuality to pedophilia has been severely criticized by gay rights activists around the world.
Revised: A senior Vatican official who made comments Monday linking homosexuality to paedophilia has been severely criticized by gay rights activists around the world.
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Original:  Cardinal Tarcisio Bertone The official, Vatican secretary of state  Cardinal Tarcisio Bertone, said yesterday that instead of celibacy, homosexuality was responsible for recent allegations of child abuse by Catholic priests.
Revised:  Cardinal Tarcisio Bertone The official, Holy See secretary of state Cardinal Tarcisio Bertone, said yesterday that instead of celibacy, homosexuality was responsible for recent allegations of child abuse by Catholic priests.
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Original:  Cardinal Tarcisio Bertone The official, Vatican secretary of state  Cardinal Tarcisio Bertone, said yesterday that instead of celibacy, homosexuality was responsible for recent allegations of child abuse by Catholic priests.
Revised:  Cardinal Tarcisio Bertone The official, Vatican secretary of state , Cardinal Tarcisio Bertone, said yesterday that instead of celibacy, homosexuality was responsible for recent allegations of child abuse by Catholic priests.
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Original:  The president of Italian biggest militants group Arcigay, Paolo Patané, says "The equation between homosexuality and paedophilia is a false, despicable and anti-scientific statement that affects the lives and dignity of millions of gay and lesbian people.
Revised:  The president of Italy's largest such group, Arcigay, Paolo Patané, says "The equation between homosexuality and paedophilia is a false, despicable and anti-scientific statement that affects the lives and dignity of millions of gay and lesbian people.
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Original:  Gaylib, a conservative gay group, condemned those statements , saying that it was "worrying that the foreign minister of a state that occupies the heart of the Italian capital would use arguments that are considered passé even in the Third World."
Revised:  Gaylib, a conservative gay group, condemned the statement , saying that it was "worrying that the foreign minister of a state that occupies the heart of the Italian capital would use arguments that are considered passé even in the Third World."
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Original:  The president of Chilean gay rights group  Movement for Homosexual Integration and Liberation in Chile, Rolando Jiménez, said that the statements were "a perverse strategy by the Vatican to shirk its own ethical and legal responsibility by making a spurious and disgusting connection."
Revised:  The president of Chilean gay rights group , Movement for Homosexual Integration and Liberation in Chile, Rolando Jiménez, said that the statements were "a perverse strategy by the Vatican to shirk its own ethical and legal responsibility by making a spurious and disgusting connection."
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Original:  The president of Chilean gay rights group  Movement for Homosexual Integration and Liberation in Chile, Rolando Jiménez, said that the statements were "a perverse strategy by the Vatican to shirk its own ethical and legal responsibility by making a spurious and disgusting connection."
Revised:  The president of Chilean gay rights group Movement for Homosexual Integration and Liberation in Chile, Rolando Jiménez, said that the statement was "a perverse strategy by the Vatican to shirk its own ethical and legal responsibility by making a spurious and disgusting connection."
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Original:  The cardinal's statements are not the first time the Catholic Church has had issues with allegations of a link between homosexuality and paedophilia ;
Revised:  The cardinal's statements are not the first time the Catholic Church has made allegations of a link between homosexuality and paedophilia ;
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Original: John Garang, recently sworn in as Vice President of the Sudan, is missing presumed dead after his helicopter disappeared yesterday.
Revised: John Garang, recently sworn in as Vice President of the Sudan, was missing presumed dead after his helicopter disappeared yesterday.
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Original:  his helicopter has not arrived at its destination  leading many to fear the worst .
Revised:  his helicopter had not arrived at its destination leading many to fear the worst .
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Original: John Garang, recently sworn in as Vice President of the Sudan, was missing  presumed dead after his helicopter disappeared yesterday.
Revised: John Garang, recently sworn in as Vice President of the Sudan, was missing and presumed dead after his helicopter disappeared yesterday.
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Original:  Mr Garang became Vice President in a historic deal, which ended the southern rebellion after 20 years of fighting and created a government of national unity . Giving hope to many that the problems endemic to the region, including the Janjaweed militia in Darfur, could finally be solved and that the Muslim north could come to liveable terms with the Christian south.
Revised:  Garang became Vice President in a historic deal, which ended the southern rebellion after 20 years of fighting and created a government of national unity . Giving hope to many that the problems endemic to the region, including the Janjaweed militia in Darfur, could finally be solved and that the Muslim north could come to liveable terms with the Christian south.
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Original:  Mr Garang became Vice President in a historic deal, which ended the southern rebellion after 20 years of fighting and created a government of national unity . Giving hope to many that the problems endemic to the region, including the Janjaweed militia in Darfur, could finally be solved and that the Muslim north could come to liveable terms with the Christian south.
Revised:  Mr Garang became Vice President in a historic deal, which ended the southern rebellion after 20 years of fighting . The deal created a government of national unity . Giving hope to many that the problems endemic to the region, including the Janjaweed militia in Darfur, could finally be solved and that the Muslim north could come to liveable terms with the Christian south.
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Original:  Mr Garang became Vice President in a historic deal, which ended the southern rebellion after 20 years of fighting and created a government of national unity . Giving hope to many that the problems endemic to the region, including the Janjaweed militia in Darfur, could finally be solved and that the Muslim north could come to liveable terms with the Christian south.
Revised:  Mr Garang became Vice President in a historic deal, which ended the southern rebellion after 20 years of fighting and created a government of national unity , giving hope to many that the problems endemic to the region, including the Janjaweed militia in Darfur, could finally be solved and that the Muslim north could come to liveable terms with the Christian south.
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