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Original:  Another account from the National Missing Persons Helpline (NMPH) indicated that the man actually drew the flag.
Revised:  A different account from the National Missing Persons Helpline (NMPH) indicated that the man actually drew the flag.
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Original:  He is an actor who is a citizen of the UK.
Revised:  He is an actor who is a citizen of the U.K.
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Original:  To their amazement he sat at the instrument and played classical and w: pop music for several hours.
Revised:  To their amazement he sat at the instrument and played classical and pop music for several hours.
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Original: At a meeting of the today leaders of the Australian states and territories agreed to a deal with Australian Prime Minister which would delegate more environmental decision making powers to the states and territories about projects that might affect the environment.
Revised: At a meeting of the today leaders of the states and territories agreed to a deal with Australian Prime Minister which would delegate more environmental decision making powers to the states and territories about projects that might affect the environment.
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Original: At a meeting of the today leaders of the Australian states and territories agreed to a deal with Australian Prime Minister which would delegate more environmental decision making powers to the states and territories about projects that might affect the environment.
Revised: At a meeting of the today leaders of the Australian states and territories agreed to a deal with Australian Prime Minister which would delegate more decision-making powers to the states and territories about projects that might affect the environment.
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Original:  Two states, and  have agreed with Abbott a policy of "assessment bilaterals".
Revised:  Two states, and , have agreed with Abbott a policy of "assessment bilaterals".
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Original:  Tony Abbott argued that it would not harm the environment and that the "same high standards of environmental approval" would be used, but that decisions would be quicker.
Revised:  Tony Abbott argued it would not harm the environment and that the "same high standards of environmental approval" would be used, but that decisions would be quicker.
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Original:  Tony Abbott argued that it would not harm the environment and that the "same high standards of environmental approval" would be used, but that decisions would be quicker.
Revised:  Tony Abbott argued that it would not harm the environment and the "same high standards of environmental approval" would be used, but that decisions would be quicker.
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Original:  Tony Abbott argued that it would not harm the environment and that the "same high standards of environmental approval" would be used, but that decisions would be quicker.
Revised:  Tony Abbott argued that it would not harm the environment and that the "same high standards of environmental approval" would be used, but decisions would be quicker.
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Original:  The Australian government would still hold the power of veto over projects they deem to be environmentally problematic.
Revised:  The Australian government would still hold the power of veto over projects they deem environmentally problematic.
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Original:  The Australian Green Party has condemned the policy.
Revised:  The has condemned the policy.
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Original:  Larissa Waters, the environment spokeswoman for the Greens  told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when Bob Hawke stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed.
Revised:  Larissa Waters, the environment spokeswoman for the Greens , told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when Bob Hawke stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed.
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Original:  Larissa Waters, the environment spokeswoman for the Greens  told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when Bob Hawke stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed.
Revised:  Larissa Waters, the environment spokeswoman for the Greens told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed.
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Original:  She continued: "Tony Abbott wants to put states and territories in charge of approving environmentally destructive projects that impact our World Heritage Areas and nationally endangered species ."
Revised:  She continued: "Tony Abbott wants to put states and territories in charge of approving environmentally destructive projects that impact our and nationally ."
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Original:  Larissa Waters , the environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed. governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position."
Revised:  , the environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed. governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position."
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Original:  , the environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed. governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position."
Revised:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed. governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position."
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Original:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed . governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position . " 
Revised:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed ... governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position . " 
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Original:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed . governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position . " 
Revised:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed . governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position " 
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Original:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed . governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position . " 
Revised:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed . governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position . " .
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Original:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to save the Franklin from being dammed [...] governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position".
Revised:  , environment spokeswoman for the Greens, told reporters: "These deals pave the way for Tony Abbott to abolish a 30-year-old federal safeguard for our most precious natural places and wildlife, established when stepped in to [...] governments in , and the are trashing Bob Hawke's legacy and contradicting federal Labor's position".
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Original: Wikinews Player of the Day Alexander Ovechkin scored two goals, gave 5 hits and had 4 shots on goal.
Revised: Wikinews Player of the Day 
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Original:  The company also announced the iPhone 2.0 software which was released as a closed beta for developers and  scheduled for public release in June.
Revised:  The company also announced the iPhone 2.0 update that was released as a closed beta for developers and scheduled for public release in June.
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Original:  The company also announced the iPhone 2.0 software which was released as a closed beta for developers and  scheduled for public release in June.
Revised:  The company also announced the iPhone 2.0 software which was released as a closed beta for developers and is scheduled for public release in June.
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Original:  The update will be available for a "small fee" that Apple claims is for "accounting purposes" as they have done in the past with the previous iPod Touch and MacBook Wifi updates .
Revised:  The update will be available for what Steve Jobs described as “a nominal charge”, as Apple have done in the past with the previous iPod Touch and MacBook Wifi updates .
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Original:  The update will be available for a "small fee" that Apple claims is for "accounting purposes" as they have done in the past with the previous iPod Touch and MacBook Wifi updates .
Revised:  The update will be available for a "small fee" that Apple claims is for "accounting purposes" as they have done in the past with the previous iPod Touch and MacBook Wifi updates 
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Original: During a media event held at its Cupertino headquarters  Apple released the long awaited iPhone Software Development Kit (SDK) and the associated iTunes "App Store" and iPhone Developer Program.
Revised: During a media event held at its Cupertino headquarters , Apple released the long awaited iPhone Software Development Kit (SDK) and the associated iTunes "App Store" and iPhone Developer Program.
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Original:  Any members of the iPhone Developer Program can add applications to the store for free , the program costs $99 to join.
Revised:  Any members of the iPhone Developer Program can add applications to the store for free ; the program costs $99 to join.
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Original:  Developers will be able to set the price of the applications or release them for free , if a fee is set Apple will take 30\% of the total with no other fees .
Revised:  Developers will be able to set the price of the applications or release them for free .
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Original:  VOIP applications would be allowed over wifi only.
Revised:  VOIP applications would be allowed over Wi-Fi only.
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Original:  In the new version Apple has been focusing on enterprise features in an attempt to compete with rivals like RIM's Blackberry and Microsofts Windows Mobile.
Revised:  In the new version Apple has been focusing on enterprise features in an attempt to compete with rivals like RIM's Blackberry and Microsoft’s Windows Mobile.
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Original:  The update adds support for Exchange ActiveSync, which Apple has licensed from rival Microsoft, WPA2 and virtual private network support among other things .
Revised:  The update adds support for Exchange ActiveSync, which Apple has licensed from rival Microsoft, WPA2 and virtual private network support .
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Original:  The update will be available for what Steve Jobs described as “a nominal charge”, as Apple have done in the past with the previous iPod Touch and MacBook Wifi updates
Revised:  The update will also be available to iPod Touch users for what Steve Jobs described as “a nominal charge”, as Apple have done in the past with the previous iPod Touch and MacBook Wifi updates
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Original:  The update will be available for what Steve Jobs described as “a nominal charge”, as Apple have done in the past with the previous iPod Touch and MacBook Wifi updates
Revised:  The update will be available for what Steve Jobs described as “a nominal charge”, as Apple have done in the past with the previous iPod Touch and MacBook Wi-Fi updates
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Original: During a media event held at its Cupertino headquarters, Apple released the long awaited iPhone Software Development Kit (SDK) and the associated iTunes "App Store" and iPhone Developer Program.
Revised: During a media event held at its Cupertino headquarters, Apple released the long awaited iPhones Software Development Kit (SDK) and the associated iTunes "App Store" and iPhone Developer Program.
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Original:  VOIP applications would be allowed over Wi-Fi only.
Revised:  VoIP applications would be allowed over Wi-Fi only.
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Original:  In the new version Apple has been focusing on enterprise features in an attempt to compete with rivals like RIM's Blackberry and Microsoft’s Windows Mobile.
Revised:  In the new version Apple has been focusing on enterprise features in an attempt to compete with rivals like RIM's BlackBerry and Microsoft’s Windows Mobile.
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Original:  The update adds support for Exchange ActiveSync, which Apple has licensed from rival Microsoft, WPA2 and virtual private network support.
Revised:  The update adds support for ActiveSync, which Apple has licensed from rival Microsoft, WPA2 and virtual private network support.
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Original:  Some of the disallowed things are"porn", applications that use a large amount of bandwidth and nothing malicious or illegal.
Revised:  Some of the disallowed categories are"porn", applications that use a large amount of bandwidth and nothing malicious or illegal.
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Original:  Some of the disallowed things are"porn", applications that use a large amount of bandwidth and nothing malicious or illegal.
Revised:  Some of the disallowed things are"porn", excessive bandwidth users and anything malicious or illegal.
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Original:  Yitzhak Dadon, a seminary student, however claims that he shot the gunman.
Revised: Seminary student Yitzhak Dadon, a seminary student, however claims that he shot the gunman.
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Original:  Yitzhak Dadon, a seminary student, however claims that he shot the gunman.
Revised:  Yitzhak Dadon, however, claims that he shot the gunman.
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Original:  But I don't think I want to, and that's what it really comes down to," the 38 year old Favre said.
Revised:  But I don't think I want to, and that's what it really comes down to," the 38-year-old Favre said.
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Original:  He thanked the Green Bay Packers  organization, his family, and his fans for their support throughout his career, but reluctantly admitted it was time to move on.
Revised:  He thanked the Green Bay Packers ' organization, his family, and his fans for their support throughout his career, but reluctantly admitted it was time to move on.
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Original: McKinney is a former Democrat Congresswoman from Georgia.
Revised: McKinney is a former Democratic Congresswoman from Georgia.
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Original: : Why are you running for president? : You were a Democrat until not too long ago.
Revised:  Why are you running for president? : You were a Democrat until not too long ago.
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Original: : Why are you running for president? : You were a Democrat until not too long ago.
Revised: : Why are you running for president? You were a Democrat until not too long ago.
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Original:  Why the switch to the Green Party? : If elected, how would you handle Iraq? : How would you handle abortion? : There are thousands reading this right now.
Revised:  Why the switch to the Green Party? If elected, how would you handle Iraq? : How would you handle abortion? : There are thousands reading this right now.
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Original:  Why the switch to the Green Party? : If elected, how would you handle Iraq? : How would you handle abortion? : There are thousands reading this right now.
Revised:  Why the switch to the Green Party? : If elected, how would you handle Iraq? How would you handle abortion? : There are thousands reading this right now.
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Original:  Why the switch to the Green Party? : If elected, how would you handle Iraq? : How would you handle abortion? : There are thousands reading this right now.
Revised:  Why the switch to the Green Party? : If elected, how would you handle Iraq? : How would you handle abortion? There are thousands reading this right now.
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Original:  I believe that whoever wins the general election right now, Barak Obama  , Hillary Clinton or John McCain, the people will still need a third party with standing to keep them accountable.
Revised:  I believe that whoever wins the general election right now, Barak Obama sic , Hillary Clinton or John McCain, the people will still need a third party with standing to keep them accountable.
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Original:  Two Sea Shepherd protesters were taken hostage in January after they boarded a Japanese harpoon ship, the Yushin Maru No. 2, and Australia later brokered their release.
Revised:  Two Sea Shepherd protesters were arrested in January after they boarded a Japanese harpoon ship, the Yushin Maru No. 2, and Australia later brokered their release.
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Original:  ]] Paul Watson of the anti-whaling group Sea Shepherd says that he was shot by Japanese sailors while protesting against their hunting practices in the Antarctic .
Revised:  ]] Paul Watson of the anti-whaling group Sea Shepherd says that he was shot by Japanese sailors while protesting against their hunting practices in Antarctica .
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Original:  [[Image:StephenSmith2008.jpg|Stephen Smith in 2008. ]] Australian Foreign Minister Stephen Smith released a statement regarding information he received from Japanese officials: "Japanese officials have now advised the Australian embassy in Tokyo that during the incident in the Southern Ocean this afternoon, three warning balls -- also known as flashbangs -- had been fired ...
Revised:  [[Image:StephenSmith2008.jpg|Stephen Smith in 2008. ]] Australian Foreign Minister Stephen Smith released a statement regarding information he received from Japanese officials: "Japanese officials have now advised the Australian embassy in Tokyo that during the incident in the Southern Ocean this afternoon, three warning balls — also known as flashbangs -- had been fired ...
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Original:  [[Image:StephenSmith2008.jpg|Stephen Smith in 2008. ]] Australian Foreign Minister Stephen Smith released a statement regarding information he received from Japanese officials: "Japanese officials have now advised the Australian embassy in Tokyo that during the incident in the Southern Ocean this afternoon, three warning balls -- also known as flashbangs -- had been fired ...
Revised:  [[Image:StephenSmith2008.jpg|Stephen Smith in 2008. ]] Australian Foreign Minister Stephen Smith released a statement regarding information he received from Japanese officials: "Japanese officials have now advised the Australian embassy in Tokyo that during the incident in the Southern Ocean this afternoon, three warning balls -- also known as flashbangs — had been fired ...
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Original:  Smith stated: "I absolutely condemn actions by crew members of any vessel that cause injury – or have the potential to cause injury – to anyone on the high seas ...
Revised:  Smith stated: "I absolutely condemn actions by crew members of any vessel that cause injury – or have the potential to cause injury — to anyone on the high seas ...
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Original:  The Australian Government once again calls on all parties in the Southern Ocean – including all protest and whaling vessels, and their respective crews – to exercise restraint." [[Image:Nobutaka Machimura cropped.
Revised:  The Australian Government once again calls on all parties in the Southern Ocean — including all protest and whaling vessels, and their respective crews – to exercise restraint." [[Image:Nobutaka Machimura cropped.
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Original: BBC has announced yesterday (16 May 2005) a trial of there new Interactive Media Player (iMP).
Revised: BBC has announced yesterday (16 May 2005) a trial of their new Interactive Media Player (iMP).
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Original:  Five thousand participants from across the UK were selected for this trial.
Revised:  Five thousand participants from across the U.K. were selected for this trial.
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Original:  The BBC is funded by a mandatory licence fee on all televisions in the UK . The fee is £126.50 a year for colour TV and £42 a year for monochrome TV
Revised:  The BBC is funded by a mandatory licence fee on all televisions in the U.K . The fee is £126.50 a year for colour TV and £42 a year for monochrome TV
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Original:  Approximately 190 hours of TV shows and 310 hours of radio programmes will be available for download.
Revised:  Approximately 190 hours of TV shows , 310 hours of radio programmes will be available for download.
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Original: The Chapel Hill Police Department responded to a report of gunshots around 5am Wednesday morning, and found a young woman lying dead on the road.
Revised: The Chapel Hill Police Department responded to a report of gunshots around 5 a.m. Wednesday morning, and found a young woman lying dead on the road.
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Original:  The Athens, Georga , resident was last seen alive around 1: 30am that morning
Revised:  The Athens, Georgia , resident was last seen alive around 1: 30am that morning
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Original:  The Athens, Georga , resident was last seen alive around 1: 30am that morning
Revised:  The Athens, Georga , resident was last seen alive around 1: 30 a.m. that morning
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Original:  The Athens, Georgia , resident was last seen alive around 1:30 a.m. that morning
Revised:  The Athens, Georgia resident was last seen alive around 1:30 a.m. that morning
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Original:  Eve Carson in a campaign picture.
Revised:  Eve Carson 
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Original:  Eve Carson , the Student Body President of the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill, was found dead on a street about one mile from campus early Wednesday morning.
Revised:  , the Student Body President of the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill, was found dead on a street about one mile from campus early Wednesday morning.
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