wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  This is not the first case Sharman has had to defend itself in : in a related case in the U.S. Supreme Court which concluded two months ago, the court ruled that file sharing networks could be held responsible for the actions of its users in some circumstances.
Revised:  This is not the first case Sharman has had to defend itself : in a related case in the U.S. Supreme Court which concluded two months ago, the court ruled that file sharing networks could be held responsible for the actions of its users in some circumstances.
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Original:  This may have been considered in this most recent case, where the court found the Kazaa website encouraged visitors to feel 'cool' about breaking copyright law and downloading illegal music.
Revised:  This may have influenced this most recent case, where the court found the Kazaa website encouraged visitors to feel 'cool' about breaking copyright law and downloading illegal music.
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Original:  Kazaa, or variants or versions thereof , has been estimated to be installed on up to 300 million computers worldwide.
Revised:  Kazaa, or versions of it , has been estimated to be installed on up to 300 million computers worldwide.
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Original:  This trend amongst users was also observed to happen when Grokster and Napster, two legacy peer to peer networks which faced similar suits.
Revised:  This trend amongst users was also observed to happen when Grokster and Napster, two legacy peer-to-peer networks which faced similar suits.
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Original:  The court ruling that Kazaa infringed on artists' copyright and facilitated piracy.
Revised:  The court ruled that Kazaa infringed on artists' copyright and facilitated piracy.
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Original:  This trend amongst users was also observed to happen when Grokster and Napster, two legacy peer-to-peer networks which faced similar suits.
Revised:  This trend amongst users was also observed to happen with Grokster and Napster, two legacy peer-to-peer networks which faced similar suits.
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Original: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with ( 4 ) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 (5) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo (5) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
Revised: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with ( 7 ) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 (5) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo (5) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
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Original: Down 1. Help (6) 2. Used to remove pencil marks (6) 3. Sandhills (5) 4. Poetic convention (5) 5. Poetic/artistic movement (4) 6. Couch (4) 7. Rescue (4) 13. Fastener (6) 14. Describing activities for relaxation (7) 15. Awake, aware (5) 17. Simple (mathematical) (7) 18. Grilled cheese (UK common term) (7) 20. Entice (7) 22. A communist symbol (6) 23. Flat surface on legs (5) 27. Fold (6) 28. Perpendicular;
Revised: Down 1. Help (6) 2. Used to remove pencil marks (6) 3. Sandhills (5) 4. Poetic convention (5) 5. Poetic/artistic movement (4) 6. Couch (4) 7. 22. A communist symbol (6) 23. Flat surface on legs (5) 27. Fold (6) 28. Perpendicular;
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Original: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 ( 5 ) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo (5) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
Revised: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 ( 6 ) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo (5) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
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Original: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 (6) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo ( 5 ) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
Revised: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 (6) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo ( 6 ) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
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Original: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 ( 6 ) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo ( 6 ) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
Revised: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 ( 5 ) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo ( 6 ) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
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Original: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 ( 6 ) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo ( 6 ) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
Revised: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 ( 6 ) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo ( 5 ) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
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Original:  Help (6) 2. Used to remove pencil marks ( 10 ) 3. Sandhills (5) 4. Poetic convention (5) 5. Poetic/artistic movement (4) 6. Couch (4) 7. Rescue (4) 13. Fastener (6) 14. Describing activities for relaxation (7) 15. Awake, aware (5) 17. Simple (mathematical) (7) 18. Grilled cheese (UK common term) (7) 20. Entice (7) 22. A communist symbol (6) 23. Flat surface on legs (5) 27. Fold (6) 28. Perpendicular;
Revised:  Help (6) 2. Used to remove pencil marks ( 6 ) 3. Sandhills (5) 4. Poetic convention (5) 5. Poetic/artistic movement (4) 6. Couch (4) 7. Rescue (4) 13. Fastener (6) 14. Describing activities for relaxation (7) 15. Awake, aware (5) 17. Simple (mathematical) (7) 18. Grilled cheese (UK common term) (7) 20. Entice (7) 22. A communist symbol (6) 23. Flat surface on legs (5) 27. Fold (6) 28. Perpendicular;
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Original: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4 ) 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 (5) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo (5) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
Revised: Across 2. Tolerated, struggled with (7) 8. One who operates a system (4 9. Trainspotter (UK sl.) (6) 10. Irritated (7) 11. Snake sound (4) 12. Flowering shrub (6) 16. Event in the Christian calendar (6) 19. Astral body (4) 21. Number divisible by only itself and 1 (5) 22. Ear bone (7) 23. Opposite to solo (5) 24. Volcano action (5) 25.
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Original: One patient from central Kosovo has died as the result of late intervention, the Health Centre of Gracanica reported.
Revised: One person from central Kosovo has died as the result of late intervention, the Health Centre of Gracanica reported.
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Original: One patient from central Kosovo has died as the result of late intervention, the Health Centre of Gracanica reported.
Revised: One patient from central Kosovo died as the result of late intervention, the Health Centre of Gracanica reported.
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Original:  Reason for that was exclusion of the telephone signals in the Serbian communities in Kosovoand patient M.D. was unable to timely summon emergency services.
Revised:  Their death was provoked by the outages of telephone signals in the Serbian communities in Kosovoand patient M.D. was unable to timely summon emergency services.
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Original:  Reason for that was exclusion of the telephone signals in the Serbian communities in Kosovoand patient M.D. was unable to timely summon emergency services.
Revised:  Reason for that was exclusion of the telephone signals in Kosovo, and they were unable to timely summon emergency services.
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Original:  Reason for that was exclusion of the telephone signals in the Serbian communities in Kosovoand patient M.D. was unable to timely summon emergency services.
Revised:  Reason for that was exclusion of the telephone signals in the Serbian communities in Kosovoand patient M.D. was unable to timely call emergency services.
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Original:  As stated in a announcement on the Health Centre website URL patient M.D. (76) died on Tuesday at 17:10  and he was "the first victim of a violent and inhuman phone line cuts."
Revised:  The Health Centre announced on their website that "their patient M.D. (76) died on Tuesday at 17:10 and he was "the first victim of a violent and inhuman phone line cuts."
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Original:  As stated in a announcement on the Health Centre website URL patient M.D. (76) died on Tuesday at 17:10  and he was "the first victim of a violent and inhuman phone line cuts."
Revised:  As stated in a announcement on the Health Centre website URL patient M.D. (76) died on Tuesday at 17:10 ," and he was "the first victim of a violent and inhuman phone line cuts."
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Original:  Their death was provoked by the outages of telephone signals in Kosovo, and they were unable to timely call emergency services.
Revised:  His death was caused by telephone signals cuts in Kosovo; they were unable to timely call emergency services.
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Original:  The Health Centre announced on their website that "their patient M.D. (76) died on Tuesday at 17:10," and he was "the first victim of a violent and inhuman phone line cuts."
Revised:  The Health Centre announced on their website that "their patient M.D. (76) died on Tuesday at 17:10," and was "the first victim of a violent and inhuman phone line cuts."
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Original:  “ His daughter came to our health institution upset, saying that her father was in a very serious condition and that he had been unable to call the ambulance all night.
Revised:  " His daughter came to our health institution upset, saying that her father was in a very serious condition and that he had been unable to call the ambulance all night.
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Original:  “ His daughter came to our health institution upset, saying that her father was in a very serious condition and that he had been unable to call the ambulance all night.
Revised:  “ His daughter came to our health institution upset, saying that her father was in a very serious condition and that they had been unable to call the ambulance all night.
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Original:  By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infarction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened, ” Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
Revised:  By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infraction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened, ” Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
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Original:  By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infarction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened, ” Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
Revised:  By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infarction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened, " Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
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Original:  Health Centre in Gracanica also announced that on the September 27th patient already felt illbut do to the dead phone lines he was unable to call for help.
Revised:  The Health Centre also said that on September 27 the patient was already feeling ill, but they couldn't call for help.
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Original:  However, even after medical intervention, do to the late start of the proper treatment, the patient died
Revised:  However, after a medical intervention, do to the late start of the proper treatment, the patient died
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Original:  However, even after medical intervention, do to the late start of the proper treatment, the patient died
Revised:  However, even after medical intervention, and because of the late treatment, the patient died
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Original: A man from central Kosovo died as the result of late intervention, the Health Centre of Gracanica reported .
Revised: The Health Centre of Gracanica reported a man from central Kosovo died as the result of late intervention, the Health Centre of Gracanica reported .
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Original: A man from central Kosovo died as the result of late intervention, the Health Centre of Gracanica reported .
Revised: A man from central Kosovo died because of late medical attention .
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Original:  His death was caused by telephone signals cuts in Kosovo;
Revised:  His death was caused by telephone signal cuts in Kosovo;
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Original:  they were unable to timely call emergency services .
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Original:  The Health Centre announced on their website that "their patient M.D. (76) died on Tuesday at 17:10 ," and was "the first victim of a violent and inhuman phone line cuts."  "His daughter came to our health institution upset, saying that her father was in a very serious condition and that they had been unable to call the ambulance all night.
Revised:  The Health Centre announced on their website that "their patient M.D. Tuesday at 17:10 ," and was "the first victim of a violent and inhuman phone line cuts." "His daughter came to our health institution upset, saying that her father was in a very serious condition and that they had been unable to call the ambulance all night.
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Original:   By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infraction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened , " Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
Revised:  " By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infraction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened , " Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
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Original:   By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infraction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened , " Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
Revised:  By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infraction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened . " Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
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Original:   By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infraction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened , " Director Radmila Trajkovic said.
Revised:  By the way, he was suffering from angina, he had cerebral infraction earlier and he was in a serious chronic condition, but on September 27 his condition acutely worsened , " 
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Original:  The Health Centre also said that on September 27  the patient was already feeling ill, but they couldn't call for help.
Revised:  The Health Centre added that on September 27 the patient was already feeling ill, but they couldn't call for help.
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Original:  The Health Centre also said that on September 27  the patient was already feeling ill, but they couldn't call for help.
Revised:  The Health Centre also said that on September 27 , the patient was already feeling ill, but they couldn't call for help.
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Original:  The Health Centre also said that on September 27  the patient was already feeling ill, but they couldn't call for help.
Revised:  The Health Centre also said that on September 27 the patient was already feeling ill, but he could not call for help.
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Original:  However, after a medical intervention, and because of the late treatment, the patient died
Revised:  He died because of late medical help
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Original:  "We totally reject people who would kill people indiscriminately, you know, as violence for its own sake and that's the story, that's the end of it," he said    
Revised:  "We totally reject people who would kill people indiscriminately, you know, as violence for its own sake and that's the story, that's the end of it," he said . 
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Original:  The president and founder of the party, Mr Kurt Kennedy, says that the party will respect the laws of Australia, but will also be seeking to implement laws that are consistant with the teachings of Allah.
Revised:  The president and founder of the party, Mr Kurt Kennedy, says that the party will respect the laws of Australia, but will also be seeking to implement laws that are consistent with the teachings of Allah.
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Original:  Mr Kennedy explicity rejected extremism.
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Original:  They Best Party of Allah issued a press release on September 5 announcing that they would be seeking registration in the Australian Capital Territory.
Revised:  The Best Party of Allah issued a press release on September 5 announcing that they would be seeking registration in the Australian Capital Territory.
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Original:  The Best Party of Allah issued a press release on September 5 announcing that they would be seeking registration in the Australian Capital Territory.
Revised:  The Best Party of Allah issued a press release on September 5 announcing that they would seek registration in the Australian Capital Territory.
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Original:  The president and founder of the party, Mr Kurt Kennedy, says that the party will respect the laws of Australia, but will also be seeking to implement laws that are consistent with the teachings of Allah.
Revised:  The president and founder of the party, Mr Kurt Kennedy, said that the party will respect the laws of Australia, but will also be seeking to implement laws that are consistent with the teachings of Allah.
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Original:  The party is seeking registration in the ACT, however Mr Kennedy says that its goal is to be registered at the national level.
Revised:  The party is seeking registration in the ACT, however Mr Kennedy said that its goal is to be registered at the national level.
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Original: In a statement made at approximately 12:00 UTC Monday, U.S. President George W. Bush nominated Judge John G. Roberts, Jr. as Chief Justice of the United States to succeed the late William H. Rehnquist.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% John Roberts ( l.) with George W. Bush Roberts went on to reply, saying, "I am honored and humbled by the confidence that the president had shown in me, and I'm very much aware that, if I am confirmed, I would succeed a man that I deeply respect and admire, a man who has been very kind to me for 25 years." Roberts had been a law clerk in the U.S. Supreme Court working directly for William Rehnquist during 1980 and 1981.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Roberts is considered to have largely conservative views and faced resistance during his nomination to succeed O'Connor from Civil rights groups like the ACLU, NAACP and pro-choice organizations like NARAL, which sponsored an ad against his nomination and had to retract it due to the liability for some of the claims they were making of him supporting terrorists.
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Original: Japan has been lashed relentlessly by Typhoon Nabi  with nine meter high waves and torrential downpours.
Revised: Japan has been lashed relentlessly by Typhoon Nabi , with nine meter high waves and torrential downpours.
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Original:  It had been classified as a Category 4 storm, the same strength as the recent Hurricane Katrina in the United States, but was later downgraded to Category 3. Nabi is now expected to swerve eastward during the course of the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern regions of South Korea.
Revised:  It had been classified as a Category 4 storm, the same strength as the recent Hurricane Katrina in the United States, but was later downgraded to Category 3. Nabi is expected to swerve eastward during the course of the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern regions of South Korea.
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Original: Japan has been lashed relentlessly by Typhoon Nabi , with nine meter high waves and torrential downpours.
Revised: Japan has been lashed relentlessly by Typhoon Nabi with nine meter high waves and torrential downpours.
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Original:  ' Water was almost reaching the second floor.
Revised:  " Water was almost reaching the second floor.
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Original:  I was really frightened, ' said a woman in her 50s.
Revised:  I was really frightened, " said a woman in her 50s.
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Original:  The typhoon took power and water out of thousands of homes throughout the city.
Revised:  The typhoon knocked power and water out of thousands of homes throughout the city.
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Original:  The typhoon took power and water out of thousands of homes throughout the city.
Revised:  The typhoon took power and water out for thousands of homes throughout the city.
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Original:  Nabi is  expected to swerve eastward during the course of the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern regions of South Korea.
Revised:  Nabi is expected to swerve eastward over the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern regions of South Korea.
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Original:  Nabi is  expected to swerve eastward during the course of the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern regions of South Korea.
Revised:  Nabi is expected to swerve eastward during the course of the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern parts of South Korea.
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Original:  Image:TyphoonNabi.jp
Revised:  Typhoon Nab
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Original:  It had been classified as a Category 4 storm, the same strength as the recent Hurricane Katrina in the United States, but was later downgraded to Category 3. Nabi is now expected to swerve eastward over the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern parts of South Korea.
Revised:  It had been classified as a Category 4 storm, the same strength as the recent Hurricane Katrina in the United States, but was later downgraded to Category 3. Nabi is expected to swerve eastward over the next 24 hours and is likely to continue battering much of Japan and the southern and eastern parts of South Korea.
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