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Original:  As, regardless of their origin, they took wives from among the inhabitants of the Shire valley , their modern descendants have little connection with Makololo people of southern Africa except their name.
Revised:  As, regardless of their origin, they took wives from among the inhabitants of the Shire valley , their modern descendants have little connection with the Kololo people apart from their name.
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Original:  The Makololo conquest had been completed barely a decade before Livingstone's arrival and the senior Makololo indunas had gained control of the traditional sources of the country's wealth, making emigration or association with new sources of wealth the Europeans promised and the firearms that they provided the best options for the young men of the subject populations seeling advancement.
Revised:  The Makololo conquest had been completed barely a decade before Livingstone's arrival and the senior Makololo indunas had gained control of the traditional sources of the country's wealth, making emigration or association with new sources of wealth the Europeans promised and the firearms that they provided the best options for the young men of the subject populations seeking advancement.
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Original:  It can be a result of radical prostatectomy  . Category:Sexology Category: Urolo
Revised:  It can be a result of radical prostatectomy . Category:Sexology Category: Urology Category:Oncolo
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Original:  It can be a result of radical prostatectomy to trest prostate cancer .
Revised:  It can be a result of radical prostatectomy to treat prostate cancer. It is uncomfortable at times, but usually harmless .
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Original: Ganga & Jamuna Shreshta were a pair of Nepali conjoined twins who underwent surgery in Singapore to separate them in 2001.
Revised: Ganga & Jamuna Shreshta were a pair of Nepalis conjoined twins who underwent surgery in Singapore to separate them in 2001.
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Original: Ganga  Jamuna Shreshta were a pair of Nepalis conjoined twins who underwent surgery in Singapore to separate them in 2001.
Revised: Ganga and Jamuna Shreshta were a pair of Nepalis conjoined twins who underwent surgery in Singapore to separate them in 2001.
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Original: Ganga  Jamuna Shreshta were a pair of Nepalis conjoined twins who underwent surgery in Singapore to separate them in 2001.
Revised: Ganga Jamuna Shreshta were a pair of Nepali conjoined twins who underwent surgery in Singapore to separate them in 2001.
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Original:  Zhu's wild-cursive calligraphy: first part of Zhou Jin Tang Ji, original essay by Ouyang Xiu Zhu Yunming (;
Revised: File:Wiki-fellatio.pngFile:Wiki-fellatio.png Zhu's wild-cursive calligraphy: first part of Zhou Jin Tang Ji, original essay by Ouyang Xiu Zhu Yunming (;
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Original: Zhu was appointed as the county magistrate of Xingning, Guangdong  in 1514.
Revised: Zhu was appointed as the county magistrate of Xingning, Guangdong , in 1514.
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Original:  1461–1527) was a Chinese calligrapher, poet, writer, and scholar-official of the Ming dynasty, known as one of the "Four Talents of Wu" (Suzhou).
Revised:  1461–1527) was a Chinese calligrapher, poet, writer, and politician of the Ming dynasty, known as one of the "Four Talents of Wu" (Suzhou).
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Original:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century  Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty essayis
Revised:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: 15th-century Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty essayis
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Original:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century  Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty essayis
Revised:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century Chinese calligraphers Category:15th-century Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty essayis
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Revised:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty essayis
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Revised:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty essayis
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Revised:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Artists from Suzhou Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty essayis
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Original:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century  Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty essayis
Revised:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty essayists Category:Ming dynasty essayis
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Revised:  Category:1461 births Category:1527 deaths Category: Ming dynasty poets Category:Artists from Suzhou Category:Writers from Suzhou Category: 15th-century Chinese calligraphers Category:16th-century Chinese calligraphers Category: 15th-century Chinese poets Category: 16th-century Chinese poets Category: Poets from Jiangsu Category:Ming dynasty calligraphers Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Ming dynasty poets Category:Ming dynasty politicians Category:Poets from Jiangsu Category:Writers from Suzh
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Original:  They were separated in a nearly 30 hour surgery in October 2016 at Montefiore Children's Hospital  when they were thirteen months old   .
Revised:  They were separated in a nearly 30 hour surgery in October 2016 at Children's Hospital when they were thirteen months old .
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Original:  They were separated in a nearly 30 hour surgery in October 2016 at Montefiore Children's Hospital  when they were thirteen months old   .
Revised:  They were separated in a nearly 30 hour surgery in October 2016 at Montefiore Children's Hospital when they were thirteen months old . .
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Original:   The risk from these sources of energy can be controlled in a number of ways, including access control procedures such as " lockout-tagout " . References   
Revised:  The risk from these sources of energy can be controlled in a number of ways, including access control procedures such as lockout-tagout " . References 
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Original:   The risk from these sources of energy can be controlled in a number of ways, including access control procedures such as " lockout-tagout " . References   
Revised:  The risk from these sources of energy can be controlled in a number of ways, including access control procedures such as " lockout-tagout . References 
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Original:  The birth of his daughterwas in 1817, seven years after he stood down.
Revised:  He did have a daughter, born in 1817, seven years after he stood down.
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Original:  Though we know that in 1822 there was an O'Neill  on the island council, the first name however is not stated .
Revised:  We also know that in 1822 there was an O'Neill on the island council, the first name however is not stated .
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Original:  Though we know that in 1822 there was an O'Neill  on the island council, the first name however is not stated .
Revised:  Though we know that in 1822 there was an O'Neill was on the island council, the first name however is not stated .
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Original:  Upon reaching military age he was drafted into the Soviet military and assigned to the Air Force, where he reached the rank of Junior Sergeant as a radio operator and gunner.
Revised:  Upon reaching military age he was drafted into the Red Army and assigned to the Air Force, where he reached the rank of Junior Sergeant as a radio operator and gunner.
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Original: Prewar life Besikbayev was born in 1920 to a Kazak family the village of Ilinskoe in the Turkestan ASSR, in the area that is now Almaty, Kazakhstan.
Revised: Prewar life Besikbayev was born in 1920 to a Kazakh family the village of Ilinskoe in the Turkestan ASSR, in the area that is now Almaty, Kazakhstan.
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Original:  World War II and feat Soon after the German invasion of the Soviet Union  Besikbayev was assigned to the 1st squadron of the 207th Long-Range Bomber Aviation Regiment  on the Western Front, where he flew as rear tail gunner for pilot-in-command Aleksandr Maslov.
Revised:  World War II and feat Soon after the German invasion of the Soviet Union Besikbayev was assigned to the 1st Squadron of the 207th Long-Range Bomber Aviation Regiment on the Western Front, where he flew as rear tail gunner for pilot-in-command Aleksandr Maslov.
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Original:  World War II and feat Soon after the German invasion of the Soviet Union  Besikbayev was assigned to the 1st squadron of the 207th Long-Range Bomber Aviation Regiment  on the Western Front, where he flew as rear tail gunner for pilot-in-command Aleksandr Maslov.
Revised:  World War II and feat Soon after the German invasion of the Soviet Union Besikbayev was assigned to the 1st squadron of the 207th Long-Range Bomber Aviation Regiment on the Western Front, where he flew as rear gunner for pilot Aleksandr Maslov.
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Original:  Two days later he was killed in action after attacking an enemy convoy on the Molodechno-Radoshkovichi highway in an Ilyushin Il-4 long-range bomber, possibly from a "fire taran " attack (the act of ramming a burning aircraft into the ground) initially attributed to Nikolai Gastello.
Revised:  Two days later he was killed in action after attacking an enemy convoy on the Molodechno-Radoshkovichi highway in an Ilyushin Il-4 long-range bomber, possibly from a fire taran attack (the act of ramming a burning aircraft into the ground) initially attributed to Nikolai Gastello.
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Original:  The crew was initially considered missing in action by the Soviet Air Forces and were respectively considered potential traitors.
Revised:  The crew was initially declared missing in action by the Soviet Air Forces and were respectively considered potential traitors.
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Original:  The crew was initially considered missing in action by the Soviet Air Forces and were respectively considered potential traitors.
Revised:  The crew was initially considered missing in action by the Soviet Air Forces and were resultingly considered potential traitors.
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Original:  In the late 80's and 90's many publications concluded that the first ground ramming was conducted by the Maslov crew, leading to all four crew members being posthumously awarded the Order of the Patriotic War, 1st class, in 1992 and the title Hero of the Russian Federation in 1996.
Revised:  In the late 1980s and 1990s many publications concluded that the first ground ramming was conducted by the Maslov crew, leading to all four crew members being posthumously awarded the Order of the Patriotic War, 1st class, in 1992 and the title Hero of the Russian Federation in 1996.
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Original:  By the turn of the century, the violence used by Free State officials against indigenous Congolese  and a ruthless system of economic exploitation led to intense diplomatic pressure on Belgium to take official control of the country, which it did by creating the Belgian Congo in 1908.
Revised:  By the turn of the century, the violence used by Free State officials against indigenous Congolese and a ruthless system of hand exploitation led to intense diplomatic pressure on Belgium to take official control of the country, which it did by creating the Belgian Congo in 1908.
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Original:  By the turn of the century, the violence used by Free State officials against indigenous Congolese , including the first documented use of white phosphorus, and a ruthless system of hand exploitation led to intense diplomatic pressure on Belgium to take official control of the country, which it did by creating the Belgian Congo in 1908.
Revised:  By the turn of the century, the violence used by Free State officials against indigenous Congolese and a ruthless system of hand exploitation led to intense diplomatic pressure on Belgium to take official control of the country, which it did by creating the Belgian Congo in 1908.
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Original:  By the turn of the century, the violence used by Free State officials against indigenous Congolese , including the first documented use of white phosphorus, and a ruthless system of hand exploitation led to intense diplomatic pressure on Belgium to take official control of the country, which it did by creating the Belgian Congo in 1908.
Revised:  By the turn of the century, the violence used by Free State officials against indigenous Congolese , including the first documented use of white phosphorus, and a ruthless system of economic exploitation led to intense diplomatic pressure on Belgium to take official control of the country, which it did by creating the Belgian Congo in 1908.
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Original:  In the country as a whole, the wage labour force decreased by 72.000 and many such labourers returned to their villages.
Revised:  In the country as a whole, the wage labour force decreased by 72,000 and many such labourers returned to their villages.
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Original: Culture Music In popular music, Latin music such as rumba was introduced from Cuba in the 1930s and 1940s during the colonial era, and Latin music  played extensively in  Belgian Congo.
Revised: Culture Music In popular music, Latin music such as rumba was introduced from Cuba in the 1930s and 1940s during the colonial era, and Latin music was played extensively in Belgian Congo.
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Original: Culture Music In popular music, Latin music such as rumba was introduced from Cuba in the 1930s and 1940s during the colonial era, and Latin music  played extensively in  Belgian Congo.
Revised: Culture Music In popular music, Latin music such as rumba was introduced from Cuba in the 1930s and 1940s during the colonial era, and Latin music played extensively in the Belgian Congo.
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Original: like zizou who supported gays rights in modern days Prevalence National surveys in the U.S. and Canada show that 3 to 4 percent of male teenagers, when given the choice to select a term that best describes their sexual feelings, desires, and behaviors, opt for "mostly" or "predominantly" heterosexual.
Revised:  Prevalence National surveys in the U.S. and Canada show that 3 to 4 percent of male teenagers, when given the choice to select a term that best describes their sexual feelings, desires, and behaviors, opt for "mostly" or "predominantly" heterosexual.
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Original: Heteroflexible pride flag Heteroflexibility is a form of a sexual orientation or situational sexual behavior characterized by minimal homosexual activity in an otherwise primarily heterosexual orientation, which may or may not distinguish it from bisexuality.
Revised:  Heteroflexibility is a form of a sexual orientation or situational sexual behavior characterized by minimal homosexual activity in an otherwise primarily heterosexual orientation, which may or may not distinguish it from bisexuality.
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Original: There may be a difference between genders as to why one may have same-sex sexual encounters while identifying as heterosexual.
Revised: There may be a difference between sexes as to why one may have same-sex sexual encounters while identifying as heterosexual.
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Original:  These descriptors may help explain for some that  heterosexuality is elastic and that having same-sex sexual encounters would not make one not heterosexual.
Revised:  These descriptors may help explain for some that their heterosexuality is elastic and that having same-sex sexual encounters would not make one not heterosexual.
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Original:  Other descriptors enforce a dichotomy of masculinity and femineity , where they are masculine.
Revised:  Other descriptors enforce a dichotomy of masculinity and femininity , where they are masculine.
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Original: Heteroflexibility in the media Most media representation of heteroflexibility is focused on heterosexual women experimenting with their sexuality.
Revised: In the media Most media representation of heteroflexibility is focused on heterosexual women experimenting with their sexuality.
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Original:  863 Nanzhao conquers Annan 866 Gao Pian retakes Annan from Nanzhao and establishes the Jinghai Army (Military Command) 874 A Tang dynasty launches a campaign against aboriginal forces 877 Troops deployed from Annan rebel in Guangxi 879 Campaign against aboriginal forces ends 880 A Tang garrison at Đại La mutinies, forcing Zeng Gun to withdraw troops from the south and relinquish control over Annan;
Revised:  863 Nanzhao conquers Annan 866 Gao Pian retakes Annan from Nanzhao and establishes the Jinghai Army (Military Command) 874 Tang dynasty launches a campaign against aboriginal forces 877 Troops deployed from Annan rebel in Guangxi 879 Campaign against aboriginal forces ends 880 A Tang garrison at Đại La mutinies, forcing Zeng Gun to withdraw troops from the south and relinquish control over Annan;
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Original: Aghore Nath Gupta () ( 1841-1881 ) was a scholar of Buddhism and a preacher of the Brahmo Samaj.
Revised: Aghore Nath Gupta () ( 1841–1881 ) was a scholar of Buddhism and a preacher of the Brahmo Samaj.
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Original:  Afflicted with diabetes, then a killer disease, he went to Lucknow, where his elder brother took care of him but he died.
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Original: Sastri, Sivanath, pp87-88 Missionary work Braja Sundar Mitra had bought a house in Armeniatola in Dhaka in 1857 and started a Brahmo Samaj there.
Revised: Sastri, Sivanath, pp. 87–88 Missionary work Braja Sundar Mitra had bought a house in Armeniatola in Dhaka in 1857 and started a Brahmo Samaj there.
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Original: Sastri, Sivanath, p394 He started a Brahmo School there in 1863.
Revised: Sastri, Sivanath, p. 394 He started a Brahmo School there in 1863.
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Original: Sastri, Sivanath, p396 In his earlier days, Aghore Nath was a missionary of the Adi Samaj.
Revised: Sastri, Sivanath, p. 396 In his earlier days, Aghore Nath was a missionary of the Adi Samaj.
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Original: Sastri, Sivanath, pp113-114 With renewed activity he went to Barisal in 1867, where Durga Mohan Das was the centre of a reformatory movement.
Revised: Sastri, Sivanath, pp. 113–114 With renewed activity he went to Barisal in 1867, where Durga Mohan Das was the centre of a reformatory movement.
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Original: Sastri, Sivanath, pp134-135 Later, he went to Munger, where subsequently Keshub Chunder Sen launched a major bhakti (devotional) movement.
Revised: Sastri, Sivanath, pp. 134–135 Later, he went to Munger, where subsequently Keshub Chunder Sen launched a major bhakti (devotional) movement.
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Original: Sastri, Sivanath, p143 He was the first Brahmo missionary to venture into Assam (in 1870)Sastri, Sivanath, p518 and had worked in Odisha Sastri , Sivanath, p521 and Punjab.
Revised: Sastri, Sivanath, p. 143 He was the first Brahmo missionary to venture into Assam (in 1870)Sastri, Sivanath, p518 and had worked in Odisha Sastri , Sivanath, p521 and Punjab.
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Original: Sastri, Sivanath, p143 He was the first Brahmo missionary to venture into Assam (in 1870)Sastri, Sivanath, p518 and had worked in Odisha Sastri , Sivanath, p521 and Punjab.
Revised: Sastri, Sivanath, p143 He was the first Brahmo missionary to venture into Assam (in 1870)Sastri, Sivanath, p518 and had worked in OdishaSastri , Sivanath, p521 and Punjab.
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