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Original:  However, as new denountiations arise and the government didn't not succeed in all explanations , the permanence of Lula in the Presidency becomes difficult, because of popular pressure.
Revised:  However, as new denountiations arise and the government has not succeed in all explanations , the permanence of Lula in the Presidency becomes difficult, because of popular pressure.
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Original:  However, as new denountiations arise and the government didn't not succeed in all explanations , the permanence of Lula in the Presidency becomes difficult, because of popular pressure.
Revised:  However, as new denountiations arise and the government didn't not succeed in explaining , the permanence of Lula in the Presidency becomes difficult, because of popular pressure.
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Original:  Anyway it is also possible that all the inquiries finish in a inconclusive form, as well as already happened with some old cases investigated by Brazilian Congress.
Revised:  It is also possible that all the inquiries finish in a inconclusive form, as well as already happened with some old cases investigated by Brazilian Congress.
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Original:  Anyway it is also possible that all the inquiries finish in a inconclusive form, as well as already happened with some old cases investigated by Brazilian Congress.
Revised:  Anyway it is also possible that all the inquiries finish in an inconclusive form, as well as already happened with some old cases investigated by Brazilian Congress.
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Original:  Anyway it is also possible that all the inquiries finish in a inconclusive form, as well as already happened with some old cases investigated by Brazilian Congress.
Revised:  Anyway it is also possible that all the inquiries finish in a inconclusive form, as has already happened with some old cases investigated by Brazilian Congress.
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Original:  At present time, there are a general consensus that Lula will have to work a lot, case he still wants to dispute for real the next presidential election in Brazil.
Revised:  At present time, there are a general consensus that Lula will have to work hard if he wishes to get re-elected
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Original: Repercussion Military wives protesting against the government of President Lula and demanding wages readjustment in salary for military.
Revised: Repercussions Military wives protesting against the government of President Lula and demanding wages readjustment in salary for military.
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Original:  But after Lula became President on 2003, the goverment and the Workers' Party has been envolved in a serie of severe scandals and the goverment allways tryed to stop the investigations, what became suspicious.
Revised:  But after Lula became President on 2003, the goverment and the Workers' Party has been envolved in a series of severe scandals and the goverment allways tryed to stop the investigations, what became suspicious.
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Original:  But after Lula became President on 2003, the goverment and the Workers' Party has been envolved in a serie of severe scandals and the goverment allways tryed to stop the investigations, what became suspicious.
Revised:  But after Lula became President on 2003, the goverment and the Workers' Party has been envolved in a serie of severe scandals and the goverment has tried to stop the investigations, what became suspicious.
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Original:  But after Lula became President on 2003, the goverment and the Workers' Party has been envolved in a serie of severe scandals and the goverment allways tryed to stop the investigations, what became suspicious.
Revised:  But after Lula became President on 2003, the goverment and the Workers' Party has been envolved in a serie of severe scandals and the goverment allways tryed to stop the investigations, which is suspicious.
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Original:  The Waldomiro and the Post Office scandals emerged after the denountiations of people supposely under pressure and envolved in these scandals.
Revised:  The Waldomiro and the Post Office scandals emerged after the denountiations of people supposedly under pressure and envolved in these scandals.
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Original:  The Waldomiro and the Post Office scandals emerged after the denountiations of people supposely under pressure and envolved in these scandals.
Revised:  The Waldomiro and the Post Office scandals emerged after the denountiations of people supposely under pressure and involved in these scandals.
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Original:  At present time, there are a general consensus that Lula will have to work hard if he wishes to get re-elected
Revised:  At present time, there is a general consensus that Lula will have to work hard if he wishes to get re-elected
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Original: In the aftermath of a controversial US raid within Syria's borders in which eight people were killed , the country has appealed to the United Nations to prevent a breach of Syria's border from happening again and has closed an American school in retaliation . "Syria draws attention to this aggressive act and expects the UN Security Council and member countries to assume their responsibility by preventing a repetition of this dangerous violation," read a letter to the UN Security Council.
Revised: In the aftermath of a controversial US raid within Syria's borders in which eight people were killed , the country has filed a complaint with the United Nations to prevent a breach of Syria's border from happening again and has closed an American school in retaliation . "Syria draws attention to this aggressive act and expects the UN Security Council and member countries to assume their responsibility by preventing a repetition of this dangerous violation," read a letter to the UN Security Council.
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Original: In the aftermath of a controversial US raid within Syria's borders in which eight people were killed , the country has appealed to the United Nations to prevent a breach of Syria's border from happening again and has closed an American school in retaliation . "Syria draws attention to this aggressive act and expects the UN Security Council and member countries to assume their responsibility by preventing a repetition of this dangerous violation," read a letter to the UN Security Council.
Revised: In the aftermath of a controversial US raid within Syria's borders in which eight people were killed , the country has appealed to the United Nations Security Council to prevent further breaches of Syria's border from happening again and has closed an American school in retaliation . "Syria draws attention to this aggressive act and expects the UN Security Council and member countries to assume their responsibility by preventing a repetition of this dangerous violation," read a letter to the UN Security Council.
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Original:  It called for the UN "to hold the aggressor responsible for the deaths of the innocent Syrian nationals ". Related New
Revised:  It called for the UN "to hold the aggressor responsible for the deaths of the innocent Syrian nationals ." Related New
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Original:  It called for the UN "to hold the aggressor responsible for the deaths of the innocent Syrian nationals ". Related New
Revised:  It called for the UN "to hold the aggressor responsible for the deaths of the innocent Syrian nationals ". Related new
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Original: The Syrian government also closed an educational facility known as "the American School" , a culture center and educational facility, in response to the raid.
Revised: The Syrian government has ordered the closure of an educational facility known as "the American School" , a culture center and educational facility, in response to the raid.
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Original: The Syrian government also closed an educational facility known as "the American School" , a culture center and educational facility, in response to the raid.
Revised: The Syrian government also closed an educational facility known as "the American School" and an American culture center in response to the raid.
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Original:  The school services the foreign students in Syria's capital  and is less than 200 feet from the US embassy   .
Revised:  The school serves foreign students in Syria's capital and is less than 200 feet from the US embassy .
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Original:  The school services the foreign students in Syria's capital  and is less than 200 feet from the US embassy   .
Revised:  The school services the foreign students in Syria's capital and is less than 200 feet from the US embassy . .
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Original:  According to Iraqi government spokesman Ali al-Dabbagh  , Iraq objects to its land being used for attacks on other countries but hopes Syria will become more vigilant against certain groups.  
Revised:  According to Iraqi government spokesman Ali al-Dabbagh said , Iraq objects to its land being used for attacks on other countries but hopes Syria will become more vigilant against certain groups. 
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Original:   Seventy-three years ago Quetta was almost completely destroyed in an earthquake, and death toll rises to about 35,000 people.
Revised:  Seventy-three years ago Quetta was almost completely destroyed in an earthquake, and death toll was about 35,000 people.
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Original:  The magnitude 6.4 quake struck approximately 70km north of Quetta at 4 :09 a.m. (23: 09GMT ), and had a depth of 10km.
Revised:  The magnitude 6.4 quake struck approximately 70km north of Quetta at 04 :09 a.m. (23: 09GMT ), and had a depth of 10km.
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Original:  The magnitude 6.4 quake struck approximately 70km north of Quetta at 04:09 local time (23: 09UTC ), and had a depth of 10km.
Revised:  The magnitude 6.4 quake struck approximately 70km north of Quetta at 04:09 local time (23: 09 UTC ), and had a depth of 10km.
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Original:  Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter has found evidence of hydrated silica or opal over large areas in the Martian surface, including in a large canyon called Valles Marineris.
Revised: The Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter has found evidence of hydrated silica or opal over large areas in the Martian surface, including in a large canyon called Valles Marineris.
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Original: Opaline mineral deposits indicates widespread past presence of water on Mars The Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter has found evidence of hydrated silica or opal, a form of mineral, over large areas in the Martian surface, including in a large canyon called Valles Marineris.
Revised:  The Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter has found evidence of hydrated silica or opal, a form of mineral, over large areas in the Martian surface, including in a large canyon called Valles Marineris.
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Original:  Previous view was that liquid water disappeared from  Martian surface three billion years ago.
Revised:  The previous view was that liquid water disappeared from Martian surface three billion years ago.
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Original:  Previous view was that liquid water disappeared from  Martian surface three billion years ago.
Revised:  Previous view was that liquid water disappeared from the Martian surface three billion years ago.
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Original: The Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter has found evidence of hydrated silica or opal, a form of mineral, over large areas in the Martian surface, including in a large canyon called Valles Marineris.
Revised: The Mars Reconnaissance Orbiter has found evidence of hydrated silica or opal, a form of mineral, over large areas in the Martian surface, including in the large martian canyon called Valles Marineris.
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Original:  Opal found on earth 's surface usually contain 3 – 10\% water, but can be as high as 20\%.
Revised:  Opal found on Earth 's surface usually contain 3 – 10\% water, but can be as high as 20\%.
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Original: Hydrated minerals such as opal that indicates presence of water is yet another evidence of presence of liquid water on Mars.
Revised: Hydrated minerals such as opal that indicate presence of water is yet another evidence of presence of liquid water on Mars.
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Original:  Presently water is present only as ice at both polar caps of Mars.
Revised:  Currently water is present only as ice at both polar caps of Mars.
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Original:  Reports say that 67 people have been  killed and between 200 and 300 injured   
Revised:  Reports say that 67 people have been killed and between 200 and 300 injured . 
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Original: Assam has seen a seperatist insurgency for years, most notably by United Liberation Front of Assam which was outlawed by the Indian government in 1990.
Revised: Assam has been the scene seperatist insurgencies for years, most notably by United Liberation Front of Assam which was outlawed by the Indian government in 1990.
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Original:   Shakeel Ahmad of the Ministry of Home Affairs said conditions in Assam were "very volatile, the government was on high alert and, even then, this has happened.  
Revised:  Shakeel Ahmad of the Ministry of Home Affairs said conditions in Assam were "very volatile, the government was on high alert and, even then, this has happened. " 
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Original: Map of India, Assam highlighted in purple At least thirteen bombs were set off in northeastern state Assam in India on Thursday.
Revised: Map of India, Assam highlighted in purple At least thirteen bombs were set off in the northeastern state of Assam in India on Thursday.
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Original:  Assam has been the scene seperatist insurgencies for years, most notably by United Liberation Front of Assam which was outlawed by the Indian government in 1990.
Revised:  Assam has been the scene separatist insurgencies for years, most notably by United Liberation Front of Assam which was outlawed by the Indian government in 1990.
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Original:  Later, people who were apparantly upset about the bombings, started rioting in the streets of Guwahati and throwing stones at vehicles.
Revised:  Later, people who were apparently upset about the bombings, started rioting in the streets of Guwahati and throwing stones at vehicles.
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Original:  In the past, the goverment has blamed similar attacks on Islamic militants based in nearby Bangladesh
Revised:  In the past, the government has blamed similar attacks on Islamic militants based in nearby Bangladesh
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Original:  In the past, the government has blamed similar attacks on Islamic militants based in nearby Bangladesh   
Revised:  In the past, the government has blamed similar attacks on Islamic militants based in nearby Bangladesh . 
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Original:  This is not his first time being recognized at the National Television Awards for his role as the Doctor.
Revised:  This is not his first time being recognised at the National Television Awards for his role as the Doctor.
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Original:  His body was found in on January 18 , and his mother was arrested the same day.
Revised:  His body was found in on January 18 , and his mother was arrested on January 18.
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Original:  The BBC used her photo prominently in their own online coverage.
Revised:  The BBC used the accused's photo prominently in their own online coverage.
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Original:  Professor Pamela Ferguson of the notes "journalists do seem to be walking a dangerous line in publishing photos , etc . of suspects."
Revised:  Professor Pamela Ferguson of the notes "journalists do seem to be walking a dangerous line if publishing photos etc of suspects."
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Original:  Chalmers explains: "It may be  contempt of court to create a substantial risk of serious prejudice to someone's right to a fair trial.
Revised:  Chalmers explains: "It may be a contempt of court to create a substantial risk of serious prejudice to someone's right to a fair trial.
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Original: Contempt of court stemming from unwarranted publicity has been a considerable issue in the UK in recent years after high-profile cases.
Revised: Contempt has been a considerable issue in the UK in recent years after high-profile cases.
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Original: - Speaking to about 4000 people at the Minneapolis Convention Center Thursday night, former U.S. President Bill Clinton gave a speech extolling audience members to support U.S. Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and Minnesota senatorial candidate Al Franken in the upcoming presidential elections on Nov. 4.  Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
Revised: - Speaking to about 4000 people at the Minneapolis Convention Center Thursday night, former U.S. President Bill Clinton gave a speech extolling audience members to support U.S. Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and Minnesota senatorial candidate Al Franken in the upcoming election on Nov. 4. Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
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Original: - Speaking to about 4000 people at the Minneapolis Convention Center Thursday night, former U.S. President Bill Clinton gave a speech extolling audience members to support U.S. Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and Minnesota senatorial candidate Al Franken in the upcoming presidential elections on Nov. 4.  Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
Revised: - Speaking to about 4000 people at the Minneapolis Convention Center Thursday night, former U.S. President Bill Clinton gave a speech extolling audience members to support U.S. Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and Minnesota senatorial candidate Al Franken in the upcoming presidential elections on Nov. 4. "Barack Obama can lead us in changing the way Americans think about America, the role of government and the way we work together," Clinton said, according to the Associated Press. "We learned the other way is not worth a flip. We've got to work together." Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
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Original:   ]    A Minnesota Public Radio News/University of Minnesota Humphrey Institute poll conducted this week found that 52 percent of likely voters supported Obama, while 41 percent supported GOP candidate John McCain.
Revised:  " ] A Minnesota Public Radio News/University of Minnesota Humphrey Institute poll conducted this week found that 52 percent of likely voters supported Obama, while 41 percent supported GOP candidate John McCain.
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Original:   ]    A Minnesota Public Radio News/University of Minnesota Humphrey Institute poll conducted this week found that 52 percent of likely voters supported Obama, while 41 percent supported GOP candidate John McCain.
Revised:  Obama] A Minnesota Public Radio News/University of Minnesota Humphrey Institute poll conducted this week found that 52 percent of likely voters supported Obama, while 41 percent supported GOP candidate John McCain.
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Original:  With 60 democrats in the Senate, democrats will be able to push legislation through without filibusters by GOP members -- which can cause a bill to delay in passing or fail all together.
Revised:  With 60 Democrats in the Senate, democrats will be able to push legislation through without filibusters by GOP members -- which can cause a bill to delay in passing or fail all together.
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Original:  With 60 democrats in the Senate, democrats will be able to push legislation through without filibusters by GOP members -- which can cause a bill to delay in passing or fail all together.
Revised:  With 60 democrats in the Senate, Democrats will be able to push legislation through without filibusters by GOP members -- which can cause a bill to delay in passing or fail all together.
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Original:  Mayor Coleman is not related to Senator Coleman, who also served as mayor of Saint Paul   .
Revised:  Mayor Coleman is not related to Senator Coleman, who also served as mayor of Saint Paul . .
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Original: Minneapolis, Minn. -- Speaking to about 4000 people at the Minneapolis Convention Center Thursday night, former U.S. President Bill Clinton gave a speech extolling audience members to support U.S. Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and Minnesota senatorial candidate Al Franken in the upcoming election on Nov. 4. Former U.S. President Bill Clinton (right) speaks at a rally on Oct. 30 in support of Barack Obama, Al Franken (pictured, left) and other Democratic candidates.
Revised:  Speaking to about 4000 people at the Minneapolis Convention Center Thursday night, former U.S. President Bill Clinton gave a speech extolling audience members to support U.S. Presidential Candidate Barack Obama and Minnesota senatorial candidate Al Franken in the upcoming election on Nov. 4. Former U.S. President Bill Clinton (right) speaks at a rally on Oct. 30 in support of Barack Obama, Al Franken (pictured, left) and other Democratic candidates.
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Original:  We've got to work together." Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
Revised:  We've got to work together." Clinton — whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
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Original:  We've got to work together." Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
Revised:  We've got to work together." Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
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Original:  We've got to work together." Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year -- has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
Revised:  We've got to work together." Clinton -- whose wife Hillary Rodham Clinton ran against Obama for the Democratic nomination earlier this year — has been accused in the past of not fully supporting Obama's presidency.
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Original:  He showed no lack of support for both Obama and Franken -- who he shared the stage with . Franken is running against incumbent Republican Norm Coleman and independent candidate Dean Barkley.
Revised:  He showed no lack of support for both Obama and Franken with whom he shared the stage with . Franken is running against incumbent Republican Norm Coleman and independent candidate Dean Barkley.
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Original:  He showed no lack of support for both Obama and Franken -- who he shared the stage with . Franken is running against incumbent Republican Norm Coleman and independent candidate Dean Barkley.
Revised:  He showed no lack of support for both Obama and Franken -- who he shared the stage . Franken is running against incumbent Republican Norm Coleman and independent candidate Dean Barkley.
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Original:  With 60 Democrats in the Senate, Democrats will be able to push legislation through without filibusters by GOP members -- which can cause a bill to delay in passing or fail all together.
Revised:  With 60 Democrats in the Senate, Democrats will be able to push legislation through without filibusters by GOP members , which can cause a bill to delay in passing or fail all together.
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