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Original:  As he called the police the bomb detonated , and the explosion was heard and recorded in the Jerusalem police headquarters
Revised:  When he called the police the bomb detonated , and the explosion was heard and recorded in the Jerusalem police headquarters
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Original:  As he called the police the bomb detonated , and the explosion was heard and recorded in the Jerusalem police headquarters
Revised:  As he called the police the bomb detonated ; the explosion was heard and recorded in the Jerusalem police headquarters
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Original:  A day later  CNN called it a terror attack.
Revised:  A day later , CNN called it a terror attack.
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Original:  The injured were carried  from the scene with stretchers.
Revised:  The injured were carried away from the scene with stretchers.
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Original:  A 59 year-old British tourist, identified as Mary Gardner, died in  hospital following the incident.
Revised:  A 59 year-old British tourist, identified as Mary Gardner, died in a hospital following the incident.
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Original: A young boy saw the package, suspected it was a bomb  and warned a touring group of teenagers to distance themselves from it.
Revised: A young boy seen the package, suspected it was a bomb and warned a touring group of teenagers to distance themselves from it.
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Original: A young boy saw the package, suspected it was a bomb  and warned a touring group of teenagers to distance themselves from it.
Revised: A young boy saw the package, suspected it was a bomb , and warned a touring group of teenagers to distance themselves from it.
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Original: The blast occured near the entrance to the city and next to the city's central bus station, and came at the same time when tensions are rising between Israel and the militant group Hamas .
Revised: The blast occured near the entrance to the city and next to the city's central bus station, and came at the same time when tensions are rising between Israel and the militant group Hamas 
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Original:  Now approximately 23 percent of the city’s living quarters are empty.
Revised:  Approximately 23 percent of the city’s living quarters are empty.
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Original:  He says more than 35,000 residents were not counted but he has no explanation for the undercount .
Revised:  He says more than 35,000 residents were not counted .
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Original:  The city , once one of the top five U.S. cities in population, has its lowest number of residents since 1910.
Revised:  Detroit , once one of the top five U.S. cities in population, has its lowest number of residents since 1910.
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Original:  The major of Detroit, plans to appeal these results.
Revised:  The major of Detroit, plans to appeal the census results.
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Original:  Approximately 23 percent of the city’s living quarters are  empty.
Revised:  Approximately 23 percent of the city’s living quarters are now empty.
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Original:  Four of five Detroits residents are black.
Revised:  Four of five of Detroit's residents are black.
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Original:  It has already lost one congressional seat .
Revised:  It already lost one congressional seat .
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Original:  Now it will have to include a larger area of its mostly white suburbs to keep black majorities in its two remaining congressional districts , reducing the clout of black Detroit.
Revised:  To comply, the two remaining congressional districts will have to include a larger area of its mostly white suburbs to keep black majorities in its two remaining congressional districts , reducing the clout of black Detroit.
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Original:  Now it will have to include a larger area of its mostly white suburbs to keep black majorities in its two remaining congressional districts , reducing the clout of black Detroit.
Revised:  Now it will have to expand into Detroit's mostly white suburbs to keep black majorities in its two remaining congressional districts , reducing the clout of black Detroit.
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Original: The , the world headquarters of , 1981 Figures released by the census released Wednesday show that the city of has lost nearly one million people, one-fourth of its total, since .
Revised: The , the world headquarters of , 1981 Figures released by the census on Wednesday show that the city of has lost nearly one million people, one-fourth of its total, since .
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Original: The major of Detroit, plans to appeal the census results.
Revised: The mayor of Detroit, plans to appeal the census results.
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Original: Judge Alito is viewed by many as a staunch conservative.
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Original:  This latest nomination process was made necessary when Harriet Miers withdrew  from consideration.
Revised:  This latest nomination process was made necessary when Harriet Miers withdrew herself from consideration.
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Original:  He is viewed as a staunch conservative and is compared to current Supreme Court justice Antonin Scalia.
Revised:  He is viewed as a staunch conservative and has been compared to current Supreme Court justice Antonin Scalia.
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Original:  Alito, age 55, has served as a judge on the 3rd U.S. Circuit Court of Appeals in Philadelphia since 1990 and was orginally nominated by President George Herbert Walker Bush
Revised:  Alito, age 55, has served on his circuit court since 1990 and was orginally nominated by President George Herbert Walker Bush
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Original: Samuel Alito accepting his nomination U.S. President George W. Bush has nominated Samuel Alito of New Jersey as associate justice to the U.S. Supreme Court, in a formal announcement at 8 a.m.
Revised: Samuel Alito accepting his nomination U.S. President George W. Bush has nominated Samuel Alito of New Jersey as Associate Justice to the U.S. Supreme Court, in a formal announcement at 8 a.m.
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Original:  This latest nomination process was made necessary when Harriet Miers withdrew herself from consideration .
Revised:  This latest nomination process was made necessary when Harriet Miers withdrew herself from consideration 
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Original:  Alito's nomination comes after White House counsel Harriet Miers, Bush's previous pick for the Court position, withdrew her nomination after being met with harsh criticism among Democrat and Republican lines alike.
Revised:  after being met with harsh criticism among Democrat and Republican lines alike.
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Original: According to a witness, Mohammed Ali, who works at the main hospital, aircraft "bombed a lot of sites of the Gaddafi army . . . All the tanks and the hospital were destroyed.
Revised: According to a witness, Mohammed Ali, who works at the main hospital, aircraft "bombed a lot of sites of the Gaddafi army . . All the tanks and the hospital were destroyed.
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Original: NASA's hopes of launching  man into space on the shuttle again are one step closer today.
Revised: NASA's hopes of launching a man into space on the shuttle again are one step closer today.
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Original: Elizabeth Taylor.  , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the  , in , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago, victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
Revised: Elizabeth Taylor. , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago, victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
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Original:  Elizabeth "Liz" Taylor , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the Cedars-Senai Medical Center, in Los Angeles ,  California, where she was admitted six weeks ago, victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
Revised:  , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the Cedars-Senai Medical Center, in Los Angeles , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago, victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
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Original:  Elizabeth "Liz" Taylor , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the Cedars-Senai Medical Center, in Los Angeles ,  California, where she was admitted six weeks ago, victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
Revised:  Elizabeth "Liz" Taylor , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago, victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
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Original:  Elizabeth "Liz" Taylor , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the Cedars-Senai Medical Center, in Los Angeles ,  California, where she was admitted six weeks ago, victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
Revised:  Elizabeth "Liz" Taylor , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the Cedars-Senai Medical Center, in Los Angeles , in , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago, victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
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Original:  Taylor made her film debut in 1941 at Universal Pictures , and won twice the , for "Butterfield 8" (1960), and "Who's afraid of Virginia Woolf" (1966);
Revised:  Taylor made her film debut in 1941 at , and won twice the , for "Butterfield 8" (1960), and "Who's afraid of Virginia Woolf" (1966);
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Original: Elizabeth Taylor: 1932–2011. ,  English actress, died on Wednesday at  79, in the , in , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago , victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
Revised: Elizabeth Taylor: 1932–2011. , English actress, died on Wednesday at the age of 79, in the , in , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago , victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
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Original: Elizabeth Taylor: 1932–2011. ,  English actress, died on Wednesday at  79, in the , in , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago , victim of a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
Revised: Elizabeth Taylor: 1932–2011. , English actress, died on Wednesday at 79, in the , in , California, where she was admitted six weeks ago . The cause of death was announced as a heart ailment that she suffered for years.
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Original:  As a child actress, she was known for having two flanges because of a genetic mutation, that distinguished her face from other actresses.
Revised:  As a child actress, she was known for having two flanges because of a genetic mutation, distinguishing her face from other actresses.
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Original: Taylor made her film debut in 1941 at , and won two , for "Butterfield 8" (1960), and "Who's afraid of Virginia Woolf" (1966).
Revised: Taylor made her film debut in 1941 at , and won two , for "Butterfield 8" (1960), and "Who's Afraid of Virginia Woolf" (1966).
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Original:  The cause of death was announced as a heart ailment that she  suffered for years.
Revised:  The cause of death was announced as a heart ailment that she had suffered for years.
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Original:  As a child actress, she was known for having two flanges because of a genetic mutation, distinguishing her face from other actresses.
Revised:  As a child actress, she was known for having two sets of eyelashes because of a genetic mutation, distinguishing her face from other actresses.
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Original: The , His Honour Judge , today set a provisional timetable in the case against Stephen Port, an alleged serial killer . January 9 was set for a plea and case management hearing.
Revised: The , His Honour Judge , today set a provisional timetable in the case against Stephen Port, an alleged . January 9 was set for a plea and case management hearing.
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Original:  He allegedly murdered the men at his home before dumping the bodies, after finding victims online using dating services .
Revised:  He allegedly murdered the men at his home before dumping the bodies, after finding victims online using .
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Original: Port, 40, attended the hearing from via videolink .
Revised: Port, 40, attended the hearing from via .
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Original: The , His Honour Judge , today set a provisional timetable in the case against Stephen Port, an alleged . January 9 was set for a plea and case management hearing.
Revised: The , His Honour Judge , today set a provisional timetable in the case against Stephen Port, an alleged . January 9 was set for a and case management hearing.
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Original: The , His Honour Judge , today set a provisional timetable in the case against Stephen Port, an alleged . January 9 was set for a and case management hearing .
Revised: The , His Honour Judge , today set a provisional timetable in the case against Stephen Port, an alleged . January 9 was set for a .
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Original:  Police only linked the deaths a week ago on Wednesday, when they were passed to serious crime investigators .
Revised:  Police only linked the deaths a week ago on Wednesday, when they were passed to .
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Original:  He wore a bright yellow and green prison-issued uniform designed to make him highly visible should he escape.
Revised:  He wore a bright yellow and green prison-issued uniform designed to make him highly visible should he decide to go "discoing" out of the building. again.
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Original:  Port was arrested following a police appeal to trace a man seen with Taylor shortly before his death . Police at the time released security footage of Taylor's movements, with an officer telling the press "the man captured on may well be the last person to talk to Jack. " 
Revised:  Port was arrested following a police appeal to trace a man seen with Taylor shortly before his death . Police at the time released security footage of Taylor's movements, with an officer telling the press "the man captured on may well be the last person to disco. " 
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Original:  On the 6th of March, 2013, He held Stratford-Upon-Avon hostage for two hours, his requests to the crisis negotiators was "Launch a preemptive strike upon the Soviets before we get destroyed!"
Revised:  On the 6th of March, 2013, He held Stratford-Upon-Avon hostage for two hours, his one and only request to the crisis negotiators was "Launch a preemptive strike upon the Soviets before we get destroyed!"
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Original: A magnitude 6.8 earthquake has struck the northeast of Myanmar  near the borders of China and Thailand  according to the .
Revised: A magnitude 6.8 earthquake has struck the northeast of Myanmar , near the borders of China and Thailand according to the .
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Original: A magnitude 6.8 earthquake has struck the northeast of Myanmar  near the borders of China and Thailand  according to the .
Revised: A magnitude 6.8 earthquake has struck the northeast of Myanmar near the borders of China and Thailand , according to the .
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Original:  The earthquake, which was originally rated as a mangnitude 7.0 occured at a rather shallow depth of 10 km (6.2 miles) in the sparsely-populated northeast, striking about 89 km (55 miles) north of aroun  
Revised:  The earthquake, which was originally registered at mangnitude 7.0 occured at a rather shallow depth of 10 km (6.2 miles) in the sparsely-populated northeast, striking about 89 km (55 miles) north of aroun 
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Original:  The earthquake, which was originally rated as a mangnitude 7.0 occured at a rather shallow depth of 10 km (6.2 miles) in the sparsely-populated northeast, striking about 89 km (55 miles) north of aroun  
Revised:  The earthquake, which was originally rated as a mangnitude 7.0 occured at the rather shallow depth of 10 km (6.2 miles) in the sparsely-populated northeast, striking about 89 km (55 miles) north of aroun 
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Original:  The earthquake, which was originally rated as a mangnitude 7.0 occured at a rather shallow depth of 10 km (6.2 miles) in the sparsely-populated northeast, striking about 89 km (55 miles) north of aroun  
Revised:  The earthquake, which was originally rated as a mangnitude 7.0 occured at a rather shallow depth of 10 km (6.2 miles) in a sparsely populated, remote area in the northeast, striking about 89 km (55 miles) north of aroun 
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Original: As the elections in Tamilnadu come closer the 2 Major parties have announced Freebies in their election manifesto .
Revised: As the elections in the South Indian State of Tamil Nadu come closer the 2 Major parties have announced Freebies in their election manifesto .
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Original:  However AIADMK manifesto mentions about starting new Power generation plants and modernising agriculture which could be important due to the excessive powercuts in recent years   in the state
Revised:  However AIADMK manifesto mentions about starting new Power generation plants and modernising agriculture which could be important due to the excessive powercuts in recent years in the state . in the state
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Original: As the elections in the South Indian State of Tamil Nadu come closer the 2 Major parties have announced Freebies in their election manifesto .
Revised: Both the (DMK) and the (AIADMK) parties have announce "freebies" as part of their election manifestos in the lead-up to the vote in the south Indian state of .
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Original:  Freebies have been a success from  2006 Tamil Nadu elections when DMK lured voters by announcing Free Colour TVs to households.
Revised:  Freebies have been a success from the 2006 Tamil Nadu elections when DMK lured voters by announcing Free Colour TVs to households.
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Original:  Freebies have been a success from  2006 Tamil Nadu elections when DMK lured voters by announcing Free Colour TVs to households.
Revised:  Freebies have been a success from 2006 Tamil Nadu elections when DMK lured voters by announcing free colour televisions to households.
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Original:  This has led to the major opposition AIADMK to announce freebies similar to DMK Manifesto .
Revised:  That triumph led the major opposition AIADMK to announce freebies similar to DMK Manifesto .
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Original:  While AIADMKhas announced the same along with Gold and monetary help for Rural households and fishermen and free rice .
Revised:  While AIADMKhas announced the same along with Gold and monetary help for rural households and fishermen and free rice .
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Original:  While AIADMKhas announced the same along with Gold and monetary help for Rural households and fishermen and free rice .
Revised:  While AIADMKhas announced the same along with Gold and monetary help for Rural households and fishermen , free rice, and more .
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Original:  However AIADMK manifesto mentions about starting new Power generation plants and modernising agriculture which could be important due to the excessive powercuts in recent years in the state .
Revised:  However AIADMK manifesto mentions about starting new Power generation plants to address power shortages in recent years in the state .
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Original:  However AIADMK manifesto mentions about starting new Power generation plants and modernising agriculture which could be important due to the excessive powercuts in recent years in the state .
Revised:  However AIADMK manifesto mentions about starting new Power generation plants and modernising agriculture which could be important due to the excessive powercuts in recent years , and modernising agriculture .
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Original: Both the (DMK) and the (AIADMK) parties have announce "freebies" as part of their election manifestos in the lead-up to the vote in the south Indian state of  .
Revised: Both the (DMK) and the (AIADMK) parties have announce "freebies" as part of their election manifestos in the lead-up to the vote in the south Indian state of Tamil Nadu .
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Original:  The   identity of the second body is as yet unclear, but officials say O'Callaghan's familiy has been informed of the development.
Revised:  The The identity of the second body is as yet unclear, but officials say O'Callaghan's familiy has been informed of the development.
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Original:  The   identity of the second body is as yet unclear, but officials say O'Callaghan's familiy has been informed of the development.
Revised:  The identity of the second body is as yet unclear, but officials say O'Callaghan's family has been informed of the development.
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Original:  "The location of two bodies have been identified to me by this individual, one of whom has yet to be identified formally, but I am quite clear is Sian,"  Detective Superintendent Steve Fulcher.
Revised:  "The location of two bodies have been identified to me by this individual, one of whom has yet to be identified formally, but I am quite clear is Sian," said Detective Superintendent Steve Fulcher.
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Original:  "The location of two bodies have been identified to me by this individual, one of whom has yet to be identified formally, but I am quite clear is Sian," said Detective Superintendent Steve Fulcher.
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Original:  Further, there is  spike of new smokers in China as increasingly women, young people and the poor become smokers.
Revised:  Further, there is a spike of new smokers in China as increasingly women, young people and the poor become smokers.
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Original:  The ban is included in the governments 's . Also banned is smoking in outdoor public areas where pedestrians pass.
Revised:  The ban is included in the government 's . Also banned is smoking in outdoor public areas where pedestrians pass.
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Original: Universal No Smoking Sign  China has issued a national ban on smoking in all indoor public spaces , the announced today .
Revised: Universal No Smoking Sign China has issued a national ban on smoking in all indoor public spaces .
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Original:  The number of deaths is predicted to rise to 3.5 million deaths a year by 2030 if no steps are taken, states a report co-authored by Zhao Ping, deputy director general of the Chinese Cancer Foundation.
Revised:  The number of deaths are predicted to rise to 3.5 million deaths a year by 2030 if no steps are taken, states a report co-authored by Zhao Ping, deputy director general of the Chinese Cancer Foundation.
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Original: Universal No Smoking Sign On Wednesday, the announced that China has issued a national ban on smoking in all indoor public spaces.
Revised: Universal No Smoking Sign Yesterday the claimed that China has issued a national ban on smoking in all indoor public spaces.
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Original: Universal No Smoking Sign Yesterday the claimed that China has issued a national ban on smoking in all indoor public spaces.
Revised: Universal No Smoking Sign Yesterday the claimed that China issued a national ban on smoking in all indoor public spaces.
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Original:  Closing the power plant down may take at least one month to achieve.
Revised: Japanese product importers have discovered some foodstuffs to have a small radiation amount, which is not thought to be potentially deadly. Numerous Asian countries, the European Union, Australia, Russia and the United States have prohibited milk items, seafood and vegetables from being imported from various Japanese prefectures. Closing the power plant down may take at least one month to achieve.
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Original: When it happened approximately two weeks ago, the Sendai earthquake 18,000 thousand households to be destroyed by 130,000 were damaged by that and the subsequent tsunami.
Revised: When the Sendai earthquake happened approximately two weeks ago, the Sendai earthquake 18,000 thousand households to be destroyed by 130,000 were damaged by that and the subsequent tsunami.
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