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Original:  SOS to keep tradition afloat Telegraph 19 January 2008 Skiffs regularly take part in traditional boat events, in particular the Great River Race in London.
Revised:  Skiffs regularly take part in traditional boat events, in particular the Great River Race in London.
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Original:  A Thames skiff is a traditional hand built clinker-built wooden craft of a design which has been seen on the River Thames and other waterways in England and other countries for nearly 200 years.
Revised:  The skiff is a traditional hand built clinker-built wooden craft of a design which has been seen on the River Thames and other waterways in England and other countries for nearly 200 years.
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Original:  Sculling means propelling the boat with a pair of oars ( blades) as opposed to rowing which requires both hands on a single oar.
Revised:  Sculling means propelling the boat with a pair of oars ( or blades), as opposed to rowing which requires both hands on a single oar.
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Original:  Nagalit ang Patay sa Haba ng Lamay (D’Player) 1985 –
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Original:  Balandra Crossing (ABA) 1987 – Nonoy Garote and the Sidekicks (AS Productions) 1988 – Code Name: Black White (ABA) as Blacky 1988 – Gorio Punasan, Rebel Driver (A-S Productions) - Gorio 1990 – Legend of the Lost Dragon (Archer Productions ) 1994 – Ang Pagbabalik ni Pedro Penduko (Viva Family Entertainment) 1994 – Pinagbiyak Na Bunga (Viva Films) 1995 – Bangers (Viva Films) 1995 – Ang Syota Kong Balikbayan (FPJ Productions) 1997 – Strict ang Parents Ko (Neo Films) - his last movie
Revised:  Balandra Crossing (ABA) 1987 – Nonoy Garote and the Sidekicks (AS Productions) 1988 – Code Name: Black ) 1994 – Ang Pagbabalik ni Pedro Penduko (Viva Family Entertainment) 1994 – Pinagbiyak Na Bunga (Viva Films) 1995 – Bangers (Viva Films) 1995 – Ang Syota Kong Balikbayan (FPJ Productions) 1997 – Strict ang Parents Ko (Neo Films) - his last movie
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Original: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
Revised: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
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Original: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
Revised: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Kuberikan Segalanya 2005Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
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Original: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
Revised: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
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Original: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
Revised: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
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Original: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Cinta 2 Hati
Revised: Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Kuberikan Segalanya 2005 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Cinta 2 Hati
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Original: 1986 Kejarlah 
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Original: 1986 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Opera Jakarta 1987Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar 1988 Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Kuberikan Segalanya 2005Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Cinta 2 Hati
Revised:  Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Opera Jakarta 1987Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar 1988 Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Kuberikan Segalanya 2005Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Cinta 2 Hati
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Original: 1986 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Opera Jakarta 1987Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar 1988 Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki 1990Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Kuberikan Segalanya 2005Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Cinta 2 Hati
Revised: 1986 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Opera Jakarta 1987Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Nagabonar 1988 Ayahku 1989 Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Putihnya Duka Kelabunya Bahagia 1990 Citra Award for Best Leading Actor 2 dari 3 Laki-laki Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Jangan Renggut Cintaku 1992 Kuberikan Segalanya 2005Citra Award for Best Leading Actor Ketika 2007 Nagabonar Jadi 2 2009Citra Award for Best Supporting Actor Ketika Cinta Bertasbih 2 2010 Cinta 2 Hati
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Original:  He is the Chairman of Indonesia's National Film Council (Badan Pertimbangan Perfilman Nasional) and the Vice Governor In West Java.
Revised:  He is the Chairman of Indonesia's National Film Council (Badan Pertimbangan Perfilman Nasional) and the Vice Governor of West Java.
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Original:  (actor) I'''risan-Irisan Hati (1988 ' ) (actor)
Revised:  (actor) Irisan-Irisan Hati (1988 ' ) (actor)
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Original:  (actor) I'''risan-Irisan Hati (1988 ' ) (actor)
Revised:  (actor) I'''risan-Irisan Hati (1988 ) (actor)
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Original:  Ayahku (1987) (actor) Bilur-bilur Penyesalan (1987) (actor) Cintaku di Rumah Susun (1987) (actor) Kerikil-Kerikil Tajam (1987) (actor) Nagabonar (1987) (actor) Kejarlah Daku Kau Kutangkap (1986) (actor) Arie Hanggara (1986) (actor) Menumpas Teroris (1986) (actor) Sunan Kalijaga & Syech Siti Jenar (1985) (actor) Hati yang Perawan (1984) (actor) Sunan Kalijaga (1984) (actor) Dramas Hikayat Pengembara (TV Series on Ramadan month ) Lorong Waktu seasons 1-6 (1999–2006 ;
Revised:  Ayahku (1987) (actor) Bilur-bilur Penyesalan (1987) (actor) Cintaku di Rumah Susun (1987) (actor) Kerikil-Kerikil Tajam (1987) (actor) Nagabonar (1987) (actor) Kejarlah Daku Kau Kutangkap (1986) (actor) Arie Hanggara (1986) (actor) Menumpas Teroris (1986) (actor) Sunan Kalijaga & Syech Siti Jenar (1985) (actor) Hati yang Perawan (1984) (actor) Sunan Kalijaga (1984) (actor) Dramas Hikayat Pengembara (TV Series on Ramadan ) Lorong Waktu seasons 1-6 (1999–2006 ;
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Original:  Ayahku (1987) (actor) Bilur-bilur Penyesalan (1987) (actor) Cintaku di Rumah Susun (1987) (actor) Kerikil-Kerikil Tajam (1987) (actor) Nagabonar (1987) (actor) Kejarlah Daku Kau Kutangkap (1986) (actor) Arie Hanggara (1986) (actor) Menumpas Teroris (1986) (actor) Sunan Kalijaga & Syech Siti Jenar (1985) (actor) Hati yang Perawan (1984) (actor) Sunan Kalijaga (1984) (actor) Dramas Hikayat Pengembara (TV Series on Ramadan month ) Lorong Waktu seasons 1-6 (1999–2006 ;
Revised:  Ayahku (1987) (actor) Bilur-bilur Penyesalan (1987) (actor) Cintaku di Rumah Susun (1987) (actor) Kerikil-Kerikil Tajam (1987) (actor) Nagabonar (1987) (actor) Kejarlah Daku Kau Kutangkap (1986) (actor) Arie Hanggara (1986) (actor) Menumpas Teroris (1986) (actor) Sunan Kalijaga & Syech Siti Jenar (1985) (actor) Hati yang Perawan (1984) (actor) Sunan Kalijaga (1984) (actor) Dramas Hikayat Pengembara (TV Series on Ramadan month ) Lorong Waktu seasons 1-6 (1999–2006 ,
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Original:  Until 1745, Maria Theresa was able to regain the Imperial crown from her Wittelsbach rival Charles VII by occupying his Bavarian lands, but, despite her Quadruple Alliance with Great Britain, the Dutch Republic and Saxony  failed to recapture Silesia:
Revised:  Until 1745, Maria Theresa was able to regain the Imperial crown from her Wittelsbach rival Charles VII by occupying his Bavarian lands, but, despite her Quadruple Alliance with Great Britain, the Dutch Republic and Saxony , she failed to recapture Silesia:
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Original:  The " Little Germany" (Kleindeutschland) solution favored Protestant Prussia annexing all the German states except Austria, while " Big Germany" (Grossdeutschland) favored Catholic Austria taking control of the separate German states.
Revised:  The " Little Germany" (Kleindeutschland) solution favored Protestant Prussia annexing all the German states except Austria, while " Greater Germany" (Grossdeutschland) favored Catholic Austria taking control of the separate German states.
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Original:  The " Lesser Germany" (Kleindeutschland) solution favored Protestant Prussia annexing all the German states except Austria, while " Greater Germany" (Grossdeutschland) favored Catholic Austria taking control of the separate German states.
Revised:  The " Lesser Germany" (Kleindeutschland) solution favored Protestant Prussia annexing all the German states except Austria, while " Big Germany" (Grossdeutschland) favored Catholic Austria taking control of the separate German states.
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Original: Austro-Prussian rivalry File:Deutscher-Dualismus.png|320px|The Prussian lion circling around the Austrian elephant.
Revised:  File:Deutscher-Dualismus.png|320px|The Prussian lion circling around the Austrian elephant.
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Original:  The Spanish army, following a long and difficult journey from Panama throughout which many had fallen to virulence, predation, and other hazards, had docked at the Inca city of Tumbes in April.
Revised: Background The Spanish army, following a long and difficult journey from Panama throughout which many had fallen to virulence, predation, and other hazards, had docked at the Inca city of Tumbes in April.
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Original:   According to Spanish sources, the warrior class of Puná, maddened with rage, immediately rushed to arms and stormed the Spanish camp, charging in the thousands.
Revised:  Battle According to Spanish sources, the warrior class of Puná, maddened with rage, immediately rushed to arms and stormed the Spanish camp, charging in the thousands.
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Original:  Two Spanish ships with reinforcements, however, under the notorious Hernando de Soto, soon arrived by sea (with at least a hundred volunteers), and on these ships the Spaniards, bound for more fruitful conquests on the Peruvian mainland, embarked without incident and sailed back towards Tumbes, arriving there on May 16, 1532.
Revised:  Two Spanish ships with reinforcements, however, under Hernando de Soto, soon arrived by sea (with at least a hundred volunteers), and on these ships the Spaniards, bound for more fruitful conquests on the Peruvian mainland, embarked without incident and sailed back towards Tumbes, arriving there on May 16, 1532.
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Original:  Two Spanish ships with reinforcements, however, under Hernando de Soto, soon arrived by sea (with at least a hundred volunteers), and on these ships the Spaniards, bound for more fruitful conquests on the Peruvian mainland, embarked without incident and sailed back towards Tumbes , arriving there on May 16, 1532.
Revised:  Two Spanish ships with reinforcements, however, under Hernando de Soto, soon arrived by sea (with at least a hundred volunteers), and on these ships the Spaniards, bound for more fruitful conquests on the Peruvian mainland, embarked without incident and sailed back towards Tumbez , arriving there on May 16, 1532.
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Original:  He was among the three Rajya Sabha MPs Booked for Allegedly Claiming Fake Air Travel Bills .
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Original:   He was first elected to Rajya Sabha in 2002 and then again re-elected in 2008 during Mizo National Front Government in Mizoram.
Revised:  Career He was first elected to Rajya Sabha in 2002 and then again re-elected in 2008 during Mizo National Front Government in Mizoram.
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Original:  In 1911 explorer Hiram Bingham discovered Inca ruins called Espiritu Pampa by local Peruvians .
Revised:  In 1911 explorer Hiram Bingham discovered Inca ruins called Espiritu Pampa .
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Original:  In 1911 explorer Hiram Bingham met local peruvians who knew where the ruins were, which they called Espiritu Pampa .
Revised:  In 1911 explorer Hiram Bingham met local Peruvians who knew where the ruins were, which they called Espiritu Pampa .
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Original: Spanish Vilcabamba In 1572, the conqueror and governor of Vilcabama , Martin Hurtado de Arbieto, founded San Francisco de la Victoria de Vilcabamba, also known as Vilcabamba la Nueva ("the New"), west of Vitcos.
Revised: Spanish Vilcabamba In 1572, the conqueror and governor of Vilcabamba , Martin Hurtado de Arbieto, founded San Francisco de la Victoria de Vilcabamba, also known as Vilcabamba la Nueva ("the New"), west of Vitcos.
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Original: The science fiction story "Vilcabamba" (2010) by Harry Turtledove , which can be read on-line here, is a self-referential allegory of Vilcabamba as an alien invasion story set in the 22nd century.
Revised: The science fiction story "Vilcabamba" (2010) by Harry Turtledove is a self-referential allegory of Vilcabamba as an alien invasion story set in the 22nd century.
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Original:  An episode of the TV Series In Search Of ... (1976-1982) titled "Inca Treasures", highlights the expedition taken by professor Edmundo Guillén to explore the ruins of Vilcabamba.
Revised:  An episode of the TV Series In Search of ... (1976-1982) titled "Inca Treasures", highlights the expedition taken by professor Edmundo Guillén to explore the ruins of Vilcabamba.
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Original: The lost city A map of Vilcabama, Peru reflecting the expedition of Hiram Bingham in 1915.| Bingham's map of Vilcabamba.
Revised: The lost city Bingham's map of Vilcabamba.
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Original:  He is a member of the Gujarat Legislative Assembly representing Rajkot West He was removed from his post as was suspected of having a sex slave named Devansh Shah . He is a member of Bharatiya Janata Party.
Revised:  He is a member of the Gujarat Legislative Assembly representing Rajkot West . He is a member of Bharatiya Janata Party.
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Original:  On 11 September 2021, he resigned from the post of Chief URL He was succeeded by Bhupendra Patel.
Revised:  On 11 September 2021, he resigned from the post of Chief Minister. He was succeeded by Bhupendra Patel.
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Original:  He joined the Bharatiya Janata party on 6 March 2021.
Revised:  He joined the Bharatiya Janata Party on 6 March 2021.
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Original:  They have a son named Parth .
Revised:  They have a son .
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Original:  Between Aug. 2002 and Feb. 2004 she was Member of Consultative Committee for the Ministry of Commerce and Industry Member, Hindi Salahakar Committee (Sub-Committee on Science and Technology).
Revised:  Between August 2002 and Feb. 2004 she was Member of Consultative Committee for the Ministry of Commerce and Industry Member, Hindi Salahakar Committee (Sub-Committee on Science and Technology).
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Original:  Between Aug. 2002 and Feb. 2004 she was Member of Consultative Committee for the Ministry of Commerce and Industry Member, Hindi Salahakar Committee (Sub-Committee on Science and Technology).
Revised:  Between Aug. 2002 and February 2004 she was Member of Consultative Committee for the Ministry of Commerce and Industry Member, Hindi Salahakar Committee (Sub-Committee on Science and Technology).
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Original:  From Aug. 2002 onwards she is Member of Committee on External Affairs Member, Committee on Empowerment of Women Member, Committee on Government Assurances.
Revised:  From August 2002 onwards she is Member of Committee on External Affairs Member, Committee on Empowerment of Women Member, Committee on Government Assurances.
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Original: Kodava people Category:People from Kodagu district Category:Living people Category:Mayors of Bangalore Category:Women mayors of places in India Category:Indian women social workers Category:20th-century Indian women politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Educators from Karnataka Category:Women educators from Karnataka Category:Social workers from Karnataka Category:20th-century women educators Category:1951 birt
Revised: Kodava people Category:People from Kodagu district Category:Living people Category:Mayors of Bangalore Category:Women mayors of places in Karnataka Category:Indian women social workers Category:20th-century Indian women politicians Category:20th-century Indian politicians Category:20th-century Indian educators Category:Educators from Karnataka Category:Women educators from Karnataka Category:Social workers from Karnataka Category:20th-century women educators Category:1951 birt
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Original: Uses The benefits of strength training include greater muscular strength, improved muscle tone and appearance, increased endurance, cardiovascular health, and enhanced bone density.
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Original:  Workouts elevate metabolism for up to 14 hours following 45 minutes of vigorous exercise.
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Original:  For the pleasure of the activity One side effect of intense exercise is increased levels of dopamine, serotonin, and norepinephrine, which can help to improve mood and counter feelings of depression (dopamine and serotonin were not found to be increased by resistance training).
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Original:  conversely, the triceps can be trained along with the chest of the shoulders, as all these muscles are involved in pushing movements.
Revised:  conversely, the triceps can be trained along with the chest or the shoulders, as all these muscles are involved in pushing movements.
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Original:  Today the term encompasses several general philosophies of hiking, each implying freedom from something: Trails, permit or access fees, clothing.
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Original:  There is some concern among more traditional hikers that freehikers cause trailbraiding, erosion, new trail creation, and other negative environmental impact .
Revised:  There is some concern that freehikers cause trailbraiding, erosion, new trail creation, and other negative environmental impact .
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Original:  There is some concern among more traditional hikers that freehikers cause trailbraiding, erosion, new trail creation, and other negative environmental impact .
Revised:  There is some concern among more traditional hikers that freehikers cause trailbraiding, erosion, new trail creation, and other negative environmental impacts .
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Original:  Recently, the term has also been applied to off-trail hiking in which the participants run down steep hills in a manner similar to skiing . [[Image:Backpacking in polish carpathians cm01.jpg|Off-trail hiking in the Polish Carpathians]]
Revised:  Recently, the term has also been applied to a form of hiking in which the participants run down steep hills in a manner similar to skiing . [[Image:Backpacking in polish carpathians cm01.jpg|Off-trail hiking in the Polish Carpathians]]
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Original:  Recently, the term has also been applied to a form of hiking in which the participants intentionally avoid trails and predetermined destinations.
Revised:  The term is also less frequently applied to a form of hiking in which the participants intentionally avoid trails and predetermined destinations.
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Original: Origins of term The term freehiking has been used by naturists for decades to describe the activity of naked hiking.
Revised: Naked hiking The term freehiking has been used by naturists for decades to describe the activity of naked hiking.
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