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Original:  Even Capiol Hill's spruce was known as a "Holiday Tree" earlier this year , before Speaker of the House  Dennis Hastert (R-IL)  managed to persuade the name of the tree to "Christmas tree " again.
Revised:  Even Capiol Hill's spruce was known as a "Holiday Tree" earlier this year , before Speaker of the House Dennis Hastert (R-IL) managed to persuade the name of the tree to "Christmas Tree " again.
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Original: Jerry Falwell has asked that Christians across America to boycott the Target Corporation department stores in retalliation of using the phrase, "Happy Holidays  " in their advertising.
Revised: Jerry Falwell has asked that Christians across America boycott Target Corporation department stores in retalliation of using the phrase, "Happy Holidays " in their advertising.
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Original: Jerry Falwell has asked that Christians across America to boycott the Target Corporation department stores in retalliation of using the phrase, "Happy Holidays  " in their advertising.
Revised: Jerry Falwell has asked that Christians across America to boycott the Target Corporation department stores in retalliation of using the phrase, "Happy Holidays . " in their advertising.
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Original: Jerry Falwell has asked that Christians across America to boycott the Target Corporation department stores in retalliation of using the phrase, "Happy Holidays  " in their advertising.
Revised: Jerry Falwell has asked that Christians across America to boycott the Target Corporation department stores in retalliation of using the phrase, "Happy Holidays " 
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Original:  Falwell and the American Family Association have threatened to boycott Target and Costco for not extending the greetings .
Revised:  Falwell and the American Family Association have threatened to boycott Target and Costco for not using the phrase "Merry Christmas" explicitly .
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Original:  Even the decorated spruce , at Capitol Hill in Washington D.C. , was known as a "Holiday Tree" earlier this year .
Revised:  Even the decorated spruce , at Capitol Hill in Washington D.C. was known as a "Holiday Tree" earlier this year .
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Original:  The Speaker of the House , Dennis Hastert (R-IL) , managed to persuade the naming of it back to "Christmas Tree" again .
Revised:  The Speaker of the House Dennis Hastert (R-IL) , managed to persuade the naming of it back to "Christmas Tree" again .
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Original:  The Speaker of the House , Dennis Hastert (R-IL) , managed to persuade the naming of it back to "Christmas Tree" again .
Revised:  The Speaker of the House , Dennis Hastert (R-IL) .
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Original:  Jerry Falwell has asked that Christians across America boycott Target Corporation department stores for their refusal to include "Merry Christmas" in advertisements or store decore, instead opting to use the more inclusive phrase, "Happy Holidays."
Revised: Before the holiday started, Jerry Falwell has asked that Christians across America boycott Target Corporation department stores for their refusal to include "Merry Christmas" in advertisements or store decore, instead opting to use the more inclusive phrase, "Happy Holidays."
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Original:  In a similar debate, the decorated spruce at Capitol Hill in Washington D.C. was known as a "Holiday Tree" earlier this year, but was renamed "Christmas Tree" after objections by Speaker of the House Dennis Hastert (R-IL ). ((editorial parts moved to talk page )
Revised:  In a similar debate, the decorated spruce at Capitol Hill in Washington D.C. was known as a "Holiday Tree" earlier this year, but was renamed "Christmas Tree" after objections by Speaker of the House Dennis Hastert (R-IL ((editorial parts moved to talk page )
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Original:  The findings were made by researchers from various universities within Scotland , from , and .
Revised:  The findings were made by researchers from various universities within Scotland - , and .
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Original:  The researchers examined footage of the recorded by scientists within the African country of Botswana, due to its tendency to build numerous nests out of grass , amongst the . During the study, it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building with birds being reported to build nests from right to left and  vice versa.
Revised:  The researchers examined footage of the recorded by scientists in Botswana, Africa. The species was picked due to its tendency to build numerous nests out of grass , amongst the . During the study, it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building with birds being reported to build nests from right to left and vice versa.
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Original:  The researchers examined footage of the recorded by scientists within the African country of Botswana, due to its tendency to build numerous nests out of grass , amongst the . During the study, it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building with birds being reported to build nests from right to left and  vice versa.
Revised:  The researchers examined footage of the recorded by scientists within the African country of Botswana, due to its tendency to build numerous grass nests during the . During the study, it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building with birds being reported to build nests from right to left and vice versa.
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Original:  The researchers examined footage of the recorded by scientists within the African country of Botswana, due to its tendency to build numerous nests out of grass , amongst the . During the study, it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building with birds being reported to build nests from right to left and  vice versa.
Revised:  The researchers examined footage of the recorded by scientists within the African country of Botswana, due to its tendency to build numerous nests out of grass , amongst the . During the study, it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building , and that some birds built nests from right to left and vice versa.
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Original:  The researchers examined footage of the recorded by scientists within the African country of Botswana, due to its tendency to build numerous nests out of grass , amongst the . During the study, it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building with birds being reported to build nests from right to left and  vice versa.
Revised:  The researchers examined footage of the recorded by scientists within the African country of Botswana, due to its tendency to build numerous nests out of grass , amongst the . During the study, it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building with birds being reported to build nests from right to left and some vice versa.
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Original:  The researchers also discovered that as birds gain more experience of building grass nests, blades of grass were being dropped by them less frequently.
Revised:  The researchers also discovered that as birds gain more experience , they dropped blades of grass were being dropped by them less frequently.
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Original:  The researchers also discovered that as birds gain more experience of building grass nests, blades of grass were being dropped by them less frequently.
Revised:  The researchers also discovered that as birds gain more experience of building grass nests, blades of grass less frequently.
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Original:  The study has been published in a journal , entitled Behavioural Processes, which the Leverhume Trust provided fundingfor
Revised:  The study was been published in a journal , entitled Behavioural Processes, which the Leverhume Trust provided fundingfor
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Original:  The study has been published in a journal , entitled Behavioural Processes, which the Leverhume Trust provided fundingfor
Revised:  The study has been published in the journal Behavioural Processes, which the Leverhume Trust provided fundingfor
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Original:  The study has been published in a journal , entitled Behavioural Processes, which the Leverhume Trust provided fundingfor
Revised:  The study has been published in a journal , entitled Behavioural Processes, with Leverhume Trust funding
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Original:  The researchers also discovered that as birds gain more experience, they dropped  blades of grass less frequently .
Revised:  The researchers also discovered that as birds gain more experience, they dropped blades of grass .
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Original:  The study was been published in the journal Behavioural Processes , with Leverhume Trust funding
Revised:  The study was published in the journal Behavioural Processes , with Leverhume Trust funding
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Original:  The study was been published in the journal Behavioural Processes , with Leverhume Trust funding
Revised:  The study was been published in the journal Behavioural Processes 
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Original:  The findings were made by researchers from various universities within Scotland - , and . During the study, which had Leverhume Trust funding  it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building, and that some birds built nests from right to left and some vice versa.
Revised:  The findings were made by researchers from various universities within Scotland — , , and . During the study, which had Leverhume Trust funding it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building, and that some birds built nests from right to left and some vice versa.
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Original:  The findings were made by researchers from various universities within Scotland - , and . During the study, which had Leverhume Trust funding  it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building, and that some birds built nests from right to left and some vice versa.
Revised:  The findings were made by researchers from various universities within Scotland - , and . During the study, which had Leverhume Trust funding , it was noted that each individual bird has a tendency to vary their technique in nest building, and that some birds built nests from right to left and some vice versa.
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Original:  The researchers also discovered that as birds gain more experience, they dropped fewer blades of grass.
Revised:  The researchers also discovered that as birds gain more experience, they drop fewer blades of grass.
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Original:      Related article
Revised:  Background The BitTorrent protocol uses .torrent metadata files that tells a client application which tracker to contact to find peers (users sharing the file) and verification data for the files to be downloaded. It was thought to be "safer" than traditional file sharing systems from a legal perspective as the files (possibly copyrighted material) were not hosted on a centralised server but were instead located completely on user's computers. Related article
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Revised:  Due to the nature of BitTorrent a server is required to "track" (assist in locating other peers). These trackers can be a legal target because they "assist" in distributing the data. It is also quite easy for the administrator of a BitTorrent tracker to remove torrents and stop users from downloading them. Related article
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Original:  Preston however was greated with good news at the post office when he opened the letter and discovered that his matter had been dropped.
Revised:  Preston however was greeted with good news at the post office when he opened the letter and discovered that his matter had been dropped.
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Original:  It was thought to be "safer" than traditional file sharing systems from a legal perspective as the files (possibly copyrighted material) were not hosted on a centralised server but were instead located completely on user' s computers.
Revised:  It was thought to be "safer" than traditional file sharing systems from a legal perspective as the files (possibly copyrighted material) were not hosted on a centralised server but were instead located completely on users' computers.
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Original: Exactly one year to the day since the popular Suprnova BitTorrent link site went offline, Andre Preston (Sloneck to the internet community) speaks out about what happened on his website.
Revised: Exactly one year to the day since the popular Suprnova BitTorrent link site went offline, Andrej Preston (Sloncek to the internet community) speaks out about what happened on his website.
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Original:  Preston claims that a month or so after his site went offline his home was raided by the police at 6: 30AM in the morning.
Revised:  Preston claims that a month or so after his site went offline his home was raided by the police at 6: 30 in the morning.
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Original: The (IPCC), a organization since 1988, released its (SR15) on Monday, during its 48th session held in , . In this report, the panel called for rapid "unprecedented" changes globally to limit to 1.5° (2.7°) above pre-industrial level , saying failure to do so would result in increased rise. and higher frequency of events such as droughts, floods, and heatwaves.
Revised: The (IPCC), a organization since 1988, released its (SR15) on Monday, during its 48th session held in , . In this report, the panel called for rapid "unprecedented" changes globally to limit to 1.5° (2.7°) above pre-industrial levels , saying failure to do so would result in increased rise. and higher frequency of events such as droughts, floods, and heatwaves.
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Original:  The final report was produced by a team of 91 scientists from 40 countries and based on assessments of 6,000 available scientific and technical studies.
Revised:  The final report was produced by a team of 91 scientists from 40 countries and based on assessments of 6,000 available scientific studies.
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Original:  The IPCC did not carry out its own research, but reviewed the work of other scientists.
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Original: The -based said the report "makes it clear that the impact of 1.5°C warming is greater than what was anticipated earlier.
Revised: The -based said the impact of 1.5°C warming is greater than what was anticipated earlier.
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Original:  " The most vulnerable countries were "coastal nations and agricultural economies like " where poverty reportedly could increase as crop yields decline and "unprecedented" climate extremes would take place.
Revised:  " The most vulnerable countries were coastal or economically agriculture-dependent, such as , where poverty reportedly could increase as crop yields decline and "unprecedented" climate extremes would take place.
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Original:  The most vulnerable countries were coastal or economically agriculture-dependent, such as , where poverty reportedly could increase as crop yields decline and "unprecedented " climate extremes would take place.
Revised:  The most vulnerable countries were coastal or economically agriculture-dependent, such as , where poverty reportedly could increase as crop yields decline and unprecedented climate extremes would take place.
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Original:  According to the report, the and projects already taking place globally  need to be accelerated and scaled up " to an unprecedented level"
Revised:  According to the report, the projects already taking place globally need to be accelerated and scaled up " to an unprecedented level"
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Original:  According to the report, the and projects already taking place globally  need to be accelerated and scaled up " to an unprecedented level"
Revised:  According to the report, the and projects already taking place globally would need to be accelerated and scaled up " to an unprecedented level"
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Original:  According to the report, the and projects already taking place globally  need to be accelerated and scaled up " to an unprecedented level"
Revised:  According to the report, the and projects already taking place globally need to be taken to an unprecedented level"
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Original:  According to the report, the and projects already taking place globally  need to be accelerated and scaled up " to an unprecedented level"
Revised:  According to the report, the and projects already taking place globally need to be accelerated and scaled up " to an unprecedented scale
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Original: The (IPCC), a organization since 1988 , released its (SR15) on Monday, during its 48th session held in , . In this report, the panel called for rapid "unprecedented" changes globally to limit to 1.5° (2.7°) above pre-industrial levels, saying failure to do so would result in increased rise. and higher frequency of events such as droughts, floods, and heatwaves.
Revised: The (IPCC), a organization , released its (SR15) on Monday, during its 48th session held in , . In this report, the panel called for rapid "unprecedented" changes globally to limit to 1.5° (2.7°) above pre-industrial levels, saying failure to do so would result in increased rise. and higher frequency of events such as droughts, floods, and heatwaves.
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Original: The (IPCC), a  organization, released its (SR15) on Monday, during its 48th session held in ,  . In this report, the panel called for rapid "unprecedented" changes globally to limit  to 1.5° (2.7°) above pre-industrial levels, saying failure to do so would result in increased rise and higher frequency of events such as droughts, floods, and heatwaves.
Revised: The (IPCC), a United Nations organization, released its (SR15) on Monday, during its 48th session held in , . In this report, the panel called for rapid "unprecedented" changes globally to limit to 1.5° (2.7°) above pre-industrial levels, saying failure to do so would result in increased rise and higher frequency of events such as droughts, floods, and heatwaves.
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Original: The (IPCC), a  organization, released its (SR15) on Monday, during its 48th session held in ,  . In this report, the panel called for rapid "unprecedented" changes globally to limit  to 1.5° (2.7°) above pre-industrial levels, saying failure to do so would result in increased rise and higher frequency of events such as droughts, floods, and heatwaves.
Revised: The (IPCC), a organization, released its (SR15) on Monday, during its 48th session held in , . In this report, the panel called for rapid "unprecedented" changes globally to limit planetary warming to 1.5° (2.7°) above pre-industrial levels, saying failure to do so would result in increased rise and higher frequency of events such as droughts, floods, and heatwaves.
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Original:   The report examined the possibility of limiting global warming to a maximum of 1.5ºC, as sought in the — a landmark agreement in which global leaders united to combat climate change — as well as the consequences of failure to do so.
Revised:  | The report examined the possibility of limiting global warming to a maximum of 1.5ºC, as sought in the — a landmark agreement in which global leaders united to combat climate change — as well as the consequences of failure to do so.
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Original: Alqasem arrived in Ben Gurionlast week with a valid student visa to enroll in the .
Revised: On entry at Ben Gurion, Alqasem had a valid student visa to enroll in the .
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Original:  According to reports recounted by the , the student recently served as president to a small chapter of (SJP). enacted a law in 2017 , intending to combat the movement, granting the state the authority to deport individuals suspected of supporting the cause .
Revised:  According to reports recounted by the , the student recently served as president to a small chapter of (SJP). enacted a law in 2017 granting the state the authority to deport individuals suspected of supporting the cause .
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Original:  According to reports recounted by the , the student recently served as president to a small chapter of (SJP). enacted a law in 2017 , intending to combat the movement, granting the state the authority to deport individuals suspected of supporting the cause .
Revised:  According to reports recounted by the , the student recently served as president to a small chapter of (SJP). enacted a law in 2017 , intending to combat the movement, granting the state the authority to deport individuals suspected of supporting the movement .
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Original:  According to reports recounted by the , the student recently served as president to a small chapter of (SJP). enacted a law in 2017 granting the state the authority to deport individuals suspected of supporting the movement.
Revised:  According to reports recounted by the , the student recently served as president to a small chapter of (SJP). enacted a law in 2017 granting the state the authority to deport individuals supporting the movement.
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Original:  While enrolled at the University of Florida, she studied law.
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Original:  The Hebrew University asked to join her during the appeal process, calling the case against her a "serious blow" to Israel's academic freedom.
Revised:  The Hebrew University asked to join her during the appeal process, in defense of Israel's academic freedom.
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Original:  The director of the university, Barak Medina, stated "To be clear, we strongly oppose the boycott campaign against Israel, and Israel has to fight it . But to deny entry to every person who has expressed support for a boycott is counterproductive".
Revised:  The director of the university, Barak Medina, stated "To be clear, we strongly oppose the boycott campaign against Israel, and Israel has to fight it ... But to deny entry to every person who has expressed support for a boycott is counterproductive".
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Original:  On entry at Ben Gurion, Alqasem had a valid student visa to enroll in the .
Revised:  On entry at Ben Gurion, Alqasem had a valid student visa to enrol in the .
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Original:  The Hebrew University asked to join her during the appeal process, in defense of Israel's academic freedom.
Revised:  The Hebrew University asked to join her during the appeal process, in defence of Israel's academic freedom.
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Original:  According to reports recounted by the New York Times, the student recently served as president to a small chapter of (SJP). enacted a law in 2017 granting the state the authority to deport individuals supporting the movement.
Revised:  According to reports recounted by The New York Times, the student recently served as president to a small chapter of (SJP). enacted a law in 2017 granting the state the authority to deport individuals supporting the movement.
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Original: Lede On Saturday, the four day event of the 22nd Annual conference of ILGA-Europe (International Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Trans and Intersex Association) ended which was hosted at the Belgian capital Brussels.
Revised:  On Saturday, the four day event of the 22nd Annual conference of ILGA-Europe (International Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Trans and Intersex Association) ended which was hosted at the Belgian capital Brussels.
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Original: Lede On Saturday, the four day event of the 22nd Annual conference of ILGA-Europe (International Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Trans and Intersex Association) ended which was hosted at the Belgian capital Brussels.
Revised: Lede On Saturday, the four day event of the 22nd Annual conference of (International Lesbian, Gay, Bisexual, Trans and Intersex Association) ended which was hosted at the Belgian capital Brussels.
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