wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Judge Shauna Deane found that it would not be suitable for 'Tasneem' to offer evidence with her face covered, stating that the need to maintain a fair trial is consistant with allowing the jury to interpret and view the face of a wittness .
Revised:  Judge Shauna Deane found that it would not be suitable for 'Tasneem' to offer evidence with her face covered, stating that the need to maintain a fair trial is consistant with allowing the jury to interpret and view the face of a witness .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The judge went onto say that her findings should not set a precedent for future cases and that any rulings regarding the facial and head coverings should be based on the independent findings of the judge hearing the case.
Revised:  The judge went on to say that her findings should not set a precedent for future cases and that any rulings regarding the facial and head coverings should be based on the independent findings of the judge hearing the case.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Western Australian district court judge , Shauna Deane has found that an Muslim woman must remove her burqa in order to testify with regard to an Islamic school's alleged receiving of state and federal government funding in a fraudulent manner.
Revised: Western Australian district court judge Shauna Deane has found that an Muslim woman must remove her burqa in order to testify with regard to an Islamic school's alleged receiving of state and federal government funding in a fraudulent manner.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The judge went on to say that her findings should not set a precedent for future cases and that any  rulings regarding the facial and head coverings should be based on the independent findings of the judge hearing the case.
Revised:  The judge went on to say that her findings should not set a precedent for future cases and that any future rulings regarding the facial and head coverings should be based on the independent findings of the judge hearing the case.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Related Articles Western Australian court to set precedent on the burq
Revised:  Related Western Australian court to set precedent on the burq
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Related Articles Western Australian court to set precedent on the burq
Revised:  Related Articles Article
Edit intent: coherence
Original:   " and If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " Grossi added.
Revised:  Grossi also said that " and If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " Grossi added.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:   " and If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " Grossi added.
Revised:  " If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " Grossi added.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:   " and If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " Grossi added.
Revised:  " and if we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " Grossi added.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:   " and If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " Grossi added.
Revised:  " and If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better . " Grossi added.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:   " and If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " Grossi added.
Revised:  " and If we can discover some great new talent along the way, all the better , " 
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The Iron Chef Australia will take the traditional format of the Japanese version with contestants challenging the Iron Chefs to a cook-off using a secret ingredient each week  a spokesperson said.
Revised:  The Australian Iron Chef will take the traditional format of the Japanese version with contestants challenging the Iron Chefs to a cook-off using a secret ingredient each week a spokesperson said.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The Iron Chef Australia will take the traditional format of the Japanese version with contestants challenging the Iron Chefs to a cook-off using a secret ingredient each week  a spokesperson said.
Revised:  The Iron Chef Australia will take the traditional format of the Japanese version with contestants challenging the Iron Chefs to a cook-off using a secret ingredient each week , a spokesperson said.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  As it stands  Masterchef Australia is the third most watched show in Australian history.
Revised:  As it stands , Masterchef Australia is the third most watched show in Australian history.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Despite the illness Morgan continued to write, even writing about the diseas 
Revised:  Despite the illness Morgan continued to write, even writing about the disease. 
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He was Scotland's first national poet, known as the Scots Makar .
Revised:  He was Scotland's first national poet, known as the "Scots Makar" .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Morgan published his first book, The Vision of Cathkin Braes  in 1952.
Revised:  Morgan published his first book, The Vision of Cathkin Braes , in 1952.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  He later began to write experimental poetry and in the early 1960's he published The Second Life, a book that would boost Morgan's career.
Revised:  He later began to write experimental poetry . In the early 1960's he published The Second Life, a book that would boost Morgan's career.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  He later began to write experimental poetry and in the early 1960's he published The Second Life, a book that would boost Morgan's career.
Revised:  He later began to write experimental poetry and in the early 1960's , Morgan published The Second Life, a book that would boost Morgan's career.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  He later began to write experimental poetry and in the early 1960's he published The Second Life, a book that would boost Morgan's career.
Revised:  He later began to write experimental poetry and in the early 1960's he published The Second Life, a book that would boost his career.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  From Glasgow to Saturn, a collection about space exploration  was published shortly after The Second Life.
Revised:  From Glasgow to Saturn, a collection about space exploration , was published shortly after The Second Life.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Both of his books would later be taught in Scottish schools.
Revised:  Both of these books would later be taught in Scottish schools.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Later in his career  Morgan recieved several awards for his work.
Revised:  Later in his career , Morgan recieved several awards for his work.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In 1999  he became Glasgow's first Poet Laureate and was awarded the Queen's Gold Medal for Poetry a year later.
Revised:  In 1999 , he became Glasgow's first Poet Laureate and was awarded the Queen's Gold Medal for Poetry a year later.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In 2001  he was awarded the Weidenfeld Prize for Translation , a highly prestigious achivement .
Revised:  In 2001 , he was awarded the Weidenfeld Prize for Translation , a highly prestigious achivement .
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In 2001  he was awarded the Weidenfeld Prize for Translation , a highly prestigious achivement .
Revised:  In 2001 he was awarded the Weidenfeld Prize for Translation .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  By the time he was named the  Scot's Makar  in 2004  he had been diagnosed with cancer and was living in a nursing home.
Revised:  By the time he was named the " Scot's Makar in 2004 he had been diagnosed with cancer and was living in a nursing home.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  By the time he was named the  Scot's Makar  in 2004  he had been diagnosed with cancer and was living in a nursing home.
Revised:  By the time he was named the Scot's Makar " in 2004 he had been diagnosed with cancer and was living in a nursing home.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  By the time he was named the  Scot's Makar  in 2004  he had been diagnosed with cancer and was living in a nursing home.
Revised:  By the time he was named the Scot's Makar in 2004 , he had been diagnosed with cancer and was living in a nursing home.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Over the past billion years, about a quarter of the Moon's 4.5 billion-year lifespan, it has shrunk  325 feet.
Revised: Over the past billion years, about a quarter of the Moon's 4.5 billion-year lifespan, it has shrunk about 325 feet.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  As the core cools, the Moon  begins to contract.
Revised:  As the core cools, the Moon naturally begins to contract.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  As the core cools, the Moon naturally begins to contract . Scientists have long thought that the Moon is a cold, dead rock in space.
Revised:  As the core cools, the Moon naturally begins to contract Scientists have long thought that the Moon is a cold, dead rock in space.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: The Moon , as seen in 2006 New research identifies cracks over the Moon 's crust that may have been created by the cooling and shrinking of it over the past billion or so years.
Revised: The moon , as seen in 2006 New research identifies cracks over the Moon 's crust that may have been created by the cooling and shrinking of it over the past billion or so years.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: The Moon , as seen in 2006 New research identifies cracks over the Moon 's crust that may have been created by the cooling and shrinking of it over the past billion or so years.
Revised: The Moon , as seen in 2006 New research identifies cracks over the moon 's crust that may have been created by the cooling and shrinking of it over the past billion or so years.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Scientists have discovered landforms littered across the Moon 's surface called lobate scarps that have apparently resulted from the Moon 's shrinking very slowly.
Revised:  Scientists have discovered landforms littered across the moon 's surface called lobate scarps that have apparently resulted from the Moon 's shrinking very slowly.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Scientists have discovered landforms littered across the Moon 's surface called lobate scarps that have apparently resulted from the Moon 's shrinking very slowly.
Revised:  Scientists have discovered landforms littered across the Moon 's surface called lobate scarps that have apparently resulted from the moon 's shrinking very slowly.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  These scarps were found all over the Moon and appear to be minimally weathered, indicating that the geologic events that created them were fairly recent.
Revised:  These scarps were found all over the moon and appear to be minimally weathered, indicating that the geologic events that created them were fairly recent.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  This theory contradicts the claim that the Moon is completely devoid of geologic activity.
Revised:  This theory contradicts the claim that the moon is completely devoid of geologic activity.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Over the past billion years, about a quarter of the Moon 's 4.5 billion-year lifespan, it has shrunk about 325 feet.
Revised:  Over the past billion years, about a quarter of the moon 's 4.5 billion-year lifespan, it has shrunk about 325 feet.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  NASA's Lunar Reconnaissance Orbiter recently photographed similar landforms in other locations on the Moon , further supporting the theory that Earth's closest neighbor in space may in fact be shrinking.
Revised:  NASA's Lunar Reconnaissance Orbiter recently photographed similar landforms in other locations on the moon , further supporting the theory that Earth's closest neighbor in space may in fact be shrinking.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Scientists know that the Moon 's core was once very hot, causing it to expand.
Revised:  Scientists know that the moon 's core was once very hot, causing it to expand.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  As the core cools, the Moon naturally begins to contract
Revised:  As the core cools, the moon naturally begins to contract
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Ex- Mayor, Mark Morial, summed up his view by saying;
Revised: Former mayor Marc Morial, summed up his view by saying;
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Former mayor Marc Morial , summed up his view by saying;
Revised: Former mayor Marc Morial summed up his view by saying;
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Many hospital staff are struggling to operate without power and supplies.
Revised:  Many hospital staff are struggling without power and supplies.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  A rescue helicoptor was shot at, temporalily halting all rescue operations.
Revised:  A rescue helicoptor was shot at, temporarily halting all rescue operations.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: The outbreak is believed to have started August 9, the same day new federal regulations to prevent salmonella contamination of eggs took effect.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The United States Federal Drug Administration has recalled 380 million eggs and the number is expected to grow, after around 300 in Colorado, California, and Minnesota and 2,000 nationwide became infected with salmonella after eating eggs distributed by Wright County Eggs.
Revised:  The United States (FDA) has recalled 380 million eggs and the number is expected to grow, after around 300 in Colorado, California, and Minnesota and 2,000 nationwide became infected with salmonella after eating eggs distributed by Wright County Eggs.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The United States Federal Drug Administration has recalled 380 million eggs and the number is expected to grow, after around 300 in Colorado, California, and Minnesota and 2,000 nationwide became infected with salmonella after eating eggs distributed by Wright County Eggs.
Revised:  The United States Federal Drug Administration has recalled 380 million eggs and the number is expected to grow, after around 300 in Colorado, California, and Minnesota and 2,000 nationwide became infected with after eating eggs distributed by Wright County Eggs.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:  The researches used data from the the Hubble Space Telescope showing the way that light was distorted, known as a gravitational lens, from a large galactic cluster known as Abell 1689 to estimate the amount of dark energy to be about three quarters of the universe.
Revised:  The researchers used data from the the Hubble Space Telescope showing the way that light was distorted, known as a gravitational lens, from a large galactic cluster known as Abell 1689 to estimate the amount of dark energy to be about three quarters of the universe.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The researches used data from the the Hubble Space Telescope showing the way that light was distorted, known as a gravitational lens, from a large galactic cluster known as Abell 1689 to estimate the amount of dark energy to be about three quarters of the universe.
Revised:  The researches used data from the Hubble Space Telescope showing the way that light was distorted, known as a gravitational lens, from a large galactic cluster known as Abell 1689 to estimate the amount of dark energy to be about three quarters of the universe.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China Seven people were kill and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30 Aksu, Xinjuang , China local time.
Revised: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China Seven people were killed and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30 Aksu, Xinjuang , China local time.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China Seven people were kill and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30 Aksu, Xinjuang , China local time.
Revised: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China Seven people were kill and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30 Aksu, Xinjiang , China local time.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  In response to the bombing  martial law has been declared in Aksu City
Revised:  In response to the bombing , martial law has been declared in Aksu City
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Most of the victims are Uighurs too .
Revised:  Most of the victims are Uighurs too ,
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China  Seven people were killed and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30  Aksu, Xinjiang, China local time .
Revised: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China . Seven people were killed and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30 Aksu, Xinjiang, China local time .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China  Seven people were killed and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30  Aksu, Xinjiang, China local time .
Revised: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China Seven people were killed and fourteen injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30 Aksu, Xinjiang, China local time .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China  Seven people were killed and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30  Aksu, Xinjiang, China local time .
Revised: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China Seven people were killed and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30 local time in Aksu, Xinjiang, China local time .
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China  Seven people were killed and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30  Aksu, Xinjiang, China local time .
Revised: Location of Aksu County (pink) and Aksu Prefecture (yellow) within Xinjiang autonomous region of China Seven people were killed and fourteen were injured after a man detonated explosives in a crowd at about 10:30 Aksu, Xinjiang, China .
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The man supposedly drove a three wheeled vehicle armed with explosives into a crowd.
Revised:  The man allegedly drove a three-wheeled vehicle armed with explosives into a crowd.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The man suspected of detonating the bomb was detained, after substaining injuries from the blast.
Revised:  The man suspected of detonating the bomb was detained, after sustaining injuries from the blast.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  His name is still unknown to authorities  although they do know he is a member of the Uighur ethnic group.
Revised:  His name is still unknown to authorities , although they do know he is a member of the Uighur ethnic group.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  Most of the victims are Uighurs too," said government spokesmen Hou Hanmin.
Revised:  Most of the victims are Uighurs too," said government spokesperson Hou Hanmin.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and  Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Revised: Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Edit intent: fluency
Original:  The reason of the leak has not been determined.
Revised:  The reason for the leak has not been determined.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket  "La Fama ".  Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Revised: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile led authorities to evacuate the building and the nearest supermarket "La Fama ". Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Edit intent: clarity
Original: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket  "La Fama ".  Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Revised: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket , "La Fama ". Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket  "La Fama ".  Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Revised: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket "La Fama ." Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Edit intent: fluency
Original: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket  "La Fama ".  Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Revised: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket "La Fama ". The Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Edit intent: coherence
Original: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket  "La Fama ".  Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the Police moved quickly to "Homecenter", and at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Revised: A gas leak in a "Homecenter Sodimac" hardware store in Santa Cruz, Chile provoked the evacuation of it and the nearest supermarket "La Fama ". Santa Cruz Fire Bureau and the police officials quickly arrived at the store, where at least two people were reported unconscious by Carabineros of Santa Cruz.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  The reason for the leak has not been determined.
Revised:  The cause of the leak has not been determined.
Edit intent: clarity
Original:  Santa Cruz is one of the most traditional locations in Chile, located in the Colchagua Valley, around 200 kilometers  from Santiago, the capital of Chile, and 90 kilometers  from Pichilemu, capital of Cardenal Caro Province
Revised:  Santa Cruz is located in Chile's Colchagua Valley, around 200 kilometers from Santiago, the capital of Chile, and 90 kilometers from Pichilemu, capital of Cardenal Caro Province
Edit intent: clarity
Original: Frontis of Homecenter shortly after the gas leak.
Edit intent: coherence
Original:   A lawsuit was filed in 2000 against the Palestinian Authority, the PLO, Hamas, and Yasser Arafat in Rhode Island.
Revised:  Yasser Arafat A lawsuit was filed in 2000 against the Palestinian Authority, the PLO, Hamas, and Yasser Arafat in Rhode Island.
Edit intent: style