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Original:  In a statement released by the court, the judges said that Thaksin had adjusted government policies to favor telecommunications businesses, including Shin Corporation, a large telecom company owned by Thaksin  and his family, which was sold to a Singapore investment firm in 2006.
Revised:  In a statement released by the court, the judges said that Thaksin had adjusted government policies to favor telecommunications businesses, including Shin Corporation, a large telecom company owned by Thaksin , and his family, which was sold to a Singapore investment firm in 2006.
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Original:  In a statement released by the court, the judges said that Thaksin had adjusted government policies to favor telecommunications businesses, including Shin Corporation, a large telecom company owned by Thaksin  and his family, which was sold to a Singapore investment firm in 2006.
Revised:  In a statement released by the court, the judges said that Thaksin had adjusted government policies to favor telecommunications businesses, including Shin Corporation, a large telecom company owned by Thaksin and his family, and sold to a Singapore investment firm in 2006.
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Original:  Additionally, Thaksin allegedly deposited shares held in Shin Corporation with family members while serving as prime minister to avoidrequirements that he not hold any company stock while serving as prime minister, which is illegal under Thailand law.
Revised:  Additionally, Thaksin was alleged to have deposited shares held in Shin Corporation with family members while serving as prime minister to avoidrequirements that he not hold any company stock while serving as prime minister, which is illegal under Thailand law.
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Original:  Additionally, Thaksin allegedly deposited shares held in Shin Corporation with family members while serving as prime minister to avoidrequirements that he not hold any company stock while serving as prime minister, which is illegal under Thailand law.
Revised:  Additionally, Thaksin allegedly deposited shares held in Shin Corporation with family members whilst in office - a move to avoid, under Thai law, illegally holding any company stock while serving as prime minister, which is illegal under Thailand law.
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Original:  He also unfairly promoted a $127 million loan to Burma , benefiting a satellite communications firm which was controlled by his family.
Revised:  He also unfairly promoted a $127 million loan to Burma – benefiting a satellite communications firm which was controlled by his family.
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Original:  He also unfairly promoted a $127 million loan to Burma , benefiting a satellite communications firm which was controlled by his family.
Revised:  He also unfairly promoted a $127 million loan to Burma , benefiting a satellite communications firm controlled by his family.
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Original:  In a response from an undisclosed location outside Thailand, Thaksin contested the ruling, claiming that the case was politically motivated and that  "the court was used to get rid of a politician."
Revised:  In a response from an undisclosed location outside Thailand, Thaksin contested the ruling, claiming the case was politically motivated and that "the court was used to get rid of a politician."
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Original:  In a response from an undisclosed location outside Thailand, Thaksin contested the ruling, claiming that the case was politically motivated and that  "the court was used to get rid of a politician."
Revised:  In a response from an undisclosed location outside Thailand, Thaksin contested the ruling, claiming that the case was politically motivated and that , "the court was used to get rid of a politician."
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Original:  In Thailand, supporters of Thaksinalso publicly opposed the verdict , although no significant disturbances have been reported , despite the governments' warnings of violence.
Revised:  In Thailand, Thaksin's red-shirted supporters publicly opposed the verdict , although no significant disturbances have been reported , despite the governments' warnings of violence.
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Original:  In Thailand, supporters of Thaksinalso publicly opposed the verdict , although no significant disturbances have been reported , despite the governments' warnings of violence.
Revised:  In Thailand, supporters of Thaksinalso publicly opposed the verdict ; although, no significant disturbances have been reported , despite the governments' warnings of violence.
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Original:  In Thailand, supporters of Thaksinalso publicly opposed the verdict , although no significant disturbances have been reported , despite the governments' warnings of violence.
Revised:  In Thailand, supporters of Thaksinalso publicly opposed the verdict , although no significant disturbances have been reported despite government warnings over the possibility violence.
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Original:  Instead, protesters said they were planning a mass demonstration against the ruling  in March
Revised:  Instead, protesters say they plan a mass demonstration against the ruling in March
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Original:  Instead, protesters said they were planning a mass demonstration against the ruling  in March
Revised:  Instead, protesters said they were planning a mass demonstration against the ruling sometime in March
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Original:  Instead, protesters say they plan a mass demonstration against the ruling sometime in March  
Revised:  Instead, protesters say they plan a mass demonstration against the ruling sometime in March . 
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Original:  Instead, protesters say they plan a mass demonstration against the ruling sometime in March  
Revised:  Instead, protesters say they plan a mass demonstration against the ruling sometime in March Related new
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Original: File:Thaksin Surakiart 20050915.jpg|File photo of Thai ex-PM Thaksin (right) meeting with Donald Rumsfeld in 2005. ]]Thailand's Supreme Court has ruled that the family of former Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra be stripped of $1.4 billion in frozen assets, more than half of a contested $ 2.3 billion fortune.
Revised: File:Thaksin Surakiart 20050915.jpg|File photo of Thai ex-PM Thaksin (right) meeting with Donald Rumsfeld in 2005. ]]Thailand's Supreme Court today ruled that the family of former Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra be stripped of $1.4 billion in frozen assets, more than half of a contested $ 2.3 billion fortune.
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Original: Late in the evening on Thursday, February 25, 2010 at approximately 21:20 local time, the home of Cristián Larroulet, the nominated Ministry General Secretariat of the Presidency under President-elect Sebastián Piñera of Chile, was burglarized while his wife and son were home alone.
Revised: Late last Thursday, at approximately 21:20 local time, the home of Cristián Larroulet, the nominated Ministry General Secretariat of the Presidency under President-elect Sebastián Piñera of Chile, was burglarized while his wife and son were home alone.
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Original:  Two suspects physically assaulted their victims before making off with valuables.
Revised:  Two suspects physically assaulted thee two, before making off with valuables.
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Original:  Two subjects, presumed to be teenage delinquents, were surprised to find Larroulet's wife, María Isabel Philippi, and son, Matías ( 20 ), on the premises.
Revised:  Two subjects, presumed to be teenage delinquents, were surprised to find Larroulet's wife, María Isabel Philippi, and son, Matías ( aged twenty ), on the premises.
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Original:  President-elect Piñera arrived at the home at 00:10 hours on Friday, February 26, 2010, in solidarity and support of Larroulet and his family.
Revised:  Piñera arrived at the home at 00:10 hours on Friday, February 26, 2010, in solidarity and support of Larroulet and his family.
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Original:  Larroulet stated on the morning of Friday , February 26, 2010 that both his wife and son are in good condition following what he described as a "very raw experience."
Revised:  Larroulet stated on Friday morning that both his wife and son are in good condition following what he described as a "very raw experience."
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Original:  In the 1990's, Chile's crime rate was below that of the United State of America .
Revised:  In the 1990's, Chile's crime rate was below that of the United States .
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Original:  In the past decade,  Chileans have experienced an increase in violent burglary crimes, which are currently rated as moderate to high.
Revised:  In the past decade, however, Chileans have experienced an increase in violent burglary crimes, which are currently rated as moderate to high.
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Original:  One of President-elect Piñera's main campaign promises was to combat crime in Chile, having posted billboards throughout the country reading, "Delinquents, your party is over."
Revised:  One of Piñera's main campaign promises was to combat crime in Chile, having posted billboards throughout the country reading, "Delinquents, your party is over."
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Original: 250px|Home of Cristián Larroulet, future Ministry General Secretariat of the Presidency, burglarized.
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Original: Future Ministry Larroulet lives in the Santiago commune of Las Condes , a neighborhood made up of upper-mid to high income families whose average annual incomes nears US$70 thousand .
Revised: Future Ministry Larroulet lives in the Santiago commune of Las Condes .
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Original:  The two suspects, who used metal beams as weapons, proceeded to tie up their two victims with shoe laces , place them face down on the floor, and physically assault them .
Revised:  The two suspects, who used metal beams as weapons, proceeded to tie up their two victims with shoe laces .
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Original:  Current President Michelle Bachelet has made no comments on the crime against the nominated official.
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Original:  Two suspects physically assaulted thee two, before making off with valuables.
Revised:  Two suspects physically assaulted the two, before making off with valuables.
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Original:  The two suspects, who used metal beams as weapons, proceeded to tie up their two victims with shoe laces , and physically assault them .
Revised:  The two suspects, who used metal beams as weapons, proceeded to tie up their two victims with shoe laces .
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Original:  The two suspects, who used metal beams as weapons, proceeded to tie up their two victims with shoe laces, and physically assault them.
Revised:  The two suspects, who used metal beams as weapons, proceeded to tie up their two victims with shoe laces, and assault them.
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Original:  Two suspects physically assaulted the two , before making off with valuables.
Revised:  Two suspects physically assaulted them , before making off with valuables.
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Original:  This falls short of the 1,000 beds an investigative team from WHO says is needed in Liberia's capital, alone  
Revised:  This falls short of the 1,000 beds an investigative team from WHO says is needed in Liberia's capital, , alone. 
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Original:  The ICTR, set up by the United Nations in the wake of the genocide, released a statement via its website saying "The Chamber found that Setako ordered the killings on 25 April 1994 of 30 to 40 Tutsis at Mukamira military camp in Ruhengeri prefecture and around 10 other Tutsis there on 11 May 1994 , " 
Revised:  The ICTR, set up by the United Nations in the wake of the genocide, released a statement via its website saying "The Chamber found that Setako ordered the killings on 25 April 1994 of 30 to 40 Tutsis at Mukamira military camp in Ruhengeri prefecture and around 10 other Tutsis there on 11 May 1994 " 
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Original:  The 2010 Japan earthquake was an earthquake that happened off the coast of the Ryukyu Islands, Japan on February 26, 2010 with a magnitude of 7.0 Mw . A tsunami warning was put in place.
Revised:  An earthquake with a magnitude of 7.0 Mw struck the Ryukyu Islands, Japan on February 26, 2010 with a magnitude of 7.0 Mw . A tsunami warning was put in place.
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Original:  The 2010 Japan earthquake was an earthquake that happened off the coast of the Ryukyu Islands, Japan on February 26, 2010 with a magnitude of 7.0 Mw . A tsunami warning was put in place.
Revised:  The 2010 Japan earthquake was an earthquake that happened off the coast of the Ryukyu Islands, Japan on February 26, 2010 with a magnitude of 7.0 Mw . A tsunami warning had been put in place.
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Original:  " Below is an image gallery of maps of the earthquake
Revised:  Below is an image gallery of maps of the earthquake
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Original:  " Below is an image gallery of maps of the earthquake
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Original: Dimebag will be missed dearly by guitarists, musicians, and lovers of metal around the world.
Revised: Has passing is noted worldwide by guitarists, musicians, and lovers of metal around the world.
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Original: Dimebag will be missed dearly by guitarists, musicians, and lovers of metal around the world.
Revised: Dimebag will be missed dearly by guitarists, musicians, and lovers of metal .
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Original:  Qyra loved Central Park, and would regularly have his teenage children meet him there after finishing his health club shift.
Revised:  Qyra "loved" Central Park, and would regularly have his teenage children meet him there after finishing his health club shift.
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Original:  He might have been trying to get home .  " said Gaz Bharmi, Qyra's brother-in-law.
Revised:  He might have been trying to get home . .. " said Gaz Bharmi, Qyra's brother-in-law.
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Original:  "The breaking of the branch and the other fallen trees were likely caused by the accumulation of wet, unusually heavy snow," the New York Parks Department said in a statement.
Revised:  "The breaking of the branch and the other fallen trees were likely caused by the accumulation of wet, unusually heavy snow," the Parks Department said in a statement.
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Original:  He might have been trying to get home. ..
Revised:  He might have been trying to get home. 
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Original: File: The Mall Literary Walk, Central Park, Manhattan, NYC.
Revised: File: Literary Walk, Central Park, Manhattan, NYC.
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Original:  Qyra was found by a passerby around 3:30 p.m. local  (11:30 UTC), and was pronounced dead by authorities at the scene.
Revised:  Qyra was found by a passerby around 3:30 p.m. local time (11:30 UTC), and was pronounced dead by authorities at the scene.
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Original: An 18 year old Swedish man guilty of rape was released from the court of appeal in Sundsvall today, in a way described as caothic .
Revised: An 18 year old Swedish man guilty of rape was released from the court of appeal in Sundsvall today, in a way described as chaotic .
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Original:  According to the news agency TT he tried toescape from the staff of the treatment of offenders, where he was caught.
Revised:  According to the news agency TT the man tried to escape from the staff of the treatment of offenders, where he was caught.
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Original:  His parents and some friends attacked the staff  and the 18-year-old and a 17-year-old managed to escape.
Revised:  His parents and some friends attacked the staff , and the 18-year-old and a 17-year-old managed to escape.
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Original:  The parents have been arrested, but the young men are reported to be free in the evening(CEST) . Both men have been sentenced in the Sundsvall district court, the 18-year-old for rape
Revised:  The parents have been arrested, but the young men are reported to be free as of this evening . Both men have been sentenced in the Sundsvall district court, the 18-year-old for rape
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Original: An 18 year old Swedish man guilty of rape was released from the court of appeal in Sundsvall today, in a way described as chaotic.
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Original: According to the news agency TT the man tried to escape from the  staff of the treatment of offenders , where he was caught .
Revised: According to the news agency TT the man tried to escape from the custody of the staff of the treatment of offenders , where he was caught .
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Original: According to the news agency TT the man tried to escape from the  staff of the treatment of offenders , where he was caught .
Revised: According to the news agency TT the man tried to escape from the staff of the treatment of offenders .
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Original:  His parents and some friends attacked the staff, and the 18-year-old and a 17-year-old managed to escape.
Revised:  His parents and some friends attacked the staff, and the 18-year-old and an additional 17-year-old managed to escape.
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Original:  Both men have been sentenced in the Sundsvall district court, the 18-year-old for rape
Revised:  Both men had been sentenced in the Sundsvall district court, the 18-year-old for rape
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Original: According to the news agency TT  the man tried to escape from the custody of the staff of the treatment of offenders.
Revised: According to the news agency TT , the man tried to escape from the custody of the staff of the treatment of offenders.
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Original:  The earthquake occurred as the Nazca Plate moved down and below the South American Plate.
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Original:  The thing that most bothered the soldiers was the length of their required stay in Iraq (  12 months).
Revised:  Most bothersome to the soldiers was the length of their required stay in Iraq ( 12 months).
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Original:  The thing that most bothered the soldiers was the length of their required stay in Iraq (  12 months).
Revised:  The thing that most bothered the soldiers was the length of their required stay in Iraq ( at least 12 months).
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Original:  Most bothersome to the soldiers was the length of their required stay in Iraq (at least 12 months) .
Revised:  Reportedly, most bothersome to the soldiers was the length of their required stay in Iraq (at least 12 months) .
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Original: Gaddafi  seen in a file photo  Libyan leader Colonel Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques.
Revised: Gaddafi as seen in a file photo Libyan leader Colonel Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques.
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Original: Gaddafi  seen in a file photo  Libyan leader Colonel Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques.
Revised: Gaddafi seen in a file photo . Libyan leader Colonel Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques.
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Original: Gaddafi  seen in a file photo  Libyan leader Colonel Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques.
Revised: Gaddafi seen in a file photo Libyan leader Colonel Gaddafi has called for Muslims to declare Jihad against Switzerland, citing the recent Swiss ban on the construction of new minarets at Mosques.
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Original:  Libya and Switzerland have been in a diplomatic dispute since the Swiss arrested one of Gaddafi's sons in 2008 and now Gaddafi states he would invade if the two shared a common border.
Revised:  Libya and Switzerland have been in a diplomatic dispute since the Swiss arrested one of Gaddafi's sons in 2008. Gaddafi now states he would invade if the two shared a common border.
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Original:  Yesterday  the Colonel addressed a gathering in Benghazi to mark the birthday of the Prophet Mohammed.
Revised:  Yesterday , the Colonel addressed a gathering in Benghazi to mark the birthday of the Prophet Mohammed.
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Original:  During the speech, which The New York Times described as 'rambling ', he said that "[t]hose who destroy God's mosques deserve to be attacked through jihad , and if Switzerland was on our borders, we would fight it."
Revised:  During the speech, which The New York Times described as 'rambling ,' he said that "[t]hose who destroy God's mosques deserve to be attacked through jihad , and if Switzerland was on our borders, we would fight it."
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Original:  During the speech, which The New York Times described as 'rambling ', he said that "[t]hose who destroy God's mosques deserve to be attacked through jihad , and if Switzerland was on our borders, we would fight it."
Revised:  During the speech, which The New York Times described as 'rambling ', he said that "[t]hose who destroy God's mosques deserve to be attacked through Jihad , and if Switzerland was on our borders, we would fight it."
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Original:  Oil shipments were disuupted and two Swiss nationals were prevented from leaving Libya ;
Revised:  Oil shipments were disrupted, and two Swiss nationals were prevented from leaving Libya ;
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Original:  one was released earlier this week after being detained for nineteen months  and the other remains in Libyan jail, serving a four-month 'reduced' sentence.
Revised:  one was released earlier this week after being detained for nineteen months , and the other remains in Libyan jail, serving a four-month 'reduced' sentence.
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Original:  In response to a recent Swiss implementation of travel restrictions on Gaddafi and his relatives  Libya barred most of Europe from entering, totalling 25 countries.
Revised:  In response to a recent Swiss implementation of travel restrictions on Gaddafi and his relatives , Libya barred most of Europe from entering, totalling 25 countries.
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Original:  In response to a recent Swiss implementation of travel restrictions on Gaddafi and his relatives  Libya barred most of Europe from entering, totalling 25 countries.
Revised:  In response to a recent Swiss implementation of travel restrictions on Gaddafi and his relatives Libya barred most of Europe from entering, totaling 25 countries.
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Original:  Last November, the Swiss voted to amend the constitution to prevent the construction of new minarets and this was the reasoning Gaddafi presented for his latest comments.
Revised:  Last November, the Swiss voted to amend the constitution to prevent the construction of new minarets . This was the reasoning Gaddafi presented for his latest comments.
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Original:  "In my opinion, this is a purely political matter between Libya and Switzerland, and has nothing to do with Islam or with Muslims," said the head of the mosque in Geneva, while Yasar Ozdemir of the Swiss Federation of Muslim Associations said he was unsurprised by Gaddafi's "nonsense "
Revised:  "In my opinion, this is a purely political matter between Libya and Switzerland, and has nothing to do with Islam or with Muslims," said the head of the mosque in Geneva, while Yasar Ozdemir of the Swiss Federation of Muslim Associations said he was unsurprised by Gaddafi's "nonsense .
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Original: Libya has already recalled its diplomats and withdrawn its money out of Switzerland.
Revised: Libya has already recalled its diplomats and withdrawn its money from Switzerland.
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Original:  One was released earlier this week after being detained for nineteen months, and the other remains in  Libyan jail, serving a four-month 'reduced' sentence.
Revised:  One was released earlier this week after being detained for nineteen months, and the other remains in a Libyan jail, serving a four-month 'reduced' sentence.
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