wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:   At the time of his arrest, police seized a small quantity of crack cocaine and a crack pipe.
Revised:  who was not from Milwaukee and was unaware of what Walter Ellis was doing. He also headed her against her will, the reason she was with him when he was apprehended. At the time of his arrest, police seized a small quantity of crack cocaine and a crack pipe.
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Original:  Most of the 26 crew members were killed during the capture of the ship, but the chief spared Mariner and a few other crewmates . Mariner lived in Tonga for four years.
Revised:  Most of the 26 crew members were killed during the capture of the ship, but the chief spared Mariner and three other crew members . Mariner lived in Tonga for four years.
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Original:  He later published a memoir, An Account of the Natives of the Tonga Islands, in the South Pacific Ocean, which is one of the major sources of information about Tonga before it was significantly influenced by European cultures and Christianity.
Revised:  He published a memoir, An Account of the Natives of the Tonga Islands, in the South Pacific Ocean, which is one of the major sources of information about Tonga before it was significantly influenced by European cultures and Christianity.
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Original:  He later published a memoir, An Account of the Natives of the Tonga Islands, in the South Pacific Ocean, which is one of the major sources of information about Tonga before it was significantly influenced by European cultures and Christianity.
Revised:  He later published a memoir, An Account of the Natives of the Tonga Islands, in the South Pacific Ocean, which is one of the major sources of information about Tonga before it was influenced significantly by European cultures and Christianity.
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Original:  Most of the 26 crew members were killed during the capture of the ship, but the chief spared Mariner and three other crew members . Mariner lived in Tonga for four years.
Revised:  Of the 26 crew members were killed during the capture of the ship, but the chief spared Mariner and three other crew members . Mariner lived in Tonga for four years.
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Original:  Most of the 26 crew members were killed during the capture of the ship, but the chief spared Mariner and three other crew members . Mariner lived in Tonga for four years.
Revised:  Most of the 26 crew members were killed during the capture of the ship, but the chief spared Mariner and three others . Mariner lived in Tonga for four years.
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Original:  Background and passage The Port-au-Prince was an English private ship of war , a 500-ton vessel armed with 24 long nine and twelve-pound guns as well as eight 12-pound carronades on the quarter deck.
Revised:  Background and passage The Port-au-Prince was an English private ship of war of 500 tons, armed with 24 long nine and twelve-pound guns as well as eight 12-pound carronades on the quarter deck.
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Original:  Background and passage The Port-au-Prince was an English private ship of war , a 500-ton vessel armed with 24 long nine and twelve-pound guns as well as eight 12-pound carronades on the quarter deck.
Revised:  Background and passage The Port-au-Prince was an English private ship of war , a 500-ton vessel armed with 24 long nine and twelve-pound guns , and eight 12-pound carronades on the quarter deck.
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Original:  She carried a "letter of marque" , and this document permitted her captain and crew to become pirates against the enemies of England, primarily France and Spain.
Revised:  She carried a "letter of marque" which permitted her captain and crew to become pirates against the enemies of England, primarily France and Spain.
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Original:  In payment for their pirate raids any plunder they seized was to be their own.
Revised:  In return for their pirate raids any plunder they seized was to be their own.
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Original:  In payment for their pirate raids any plunder they seized was to be their own.
Revised:  In payment for their pirate raids , any plunder was to be their own.
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Original:  The crew's primary goal was to attack the Spanish ships of the New World and capture gold and valuables, but if she failed in that task her secondary objective was to sail into the Pacific in search of whales to be rendered for their oil.
Revised:  The crew's primary goal was to attack the Spanish ships of the New World and capture gold and valuables, but if she failed in that task her secondary objective was to sail into the Pacific in search of whales to be rendered for oil.
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Original:  Arrival in Tonga After leaving Hawaii in September under the command of Mr.Brown, she intended to make port at Tahiti but missed the target, and instead sailed westward for the Tonga Islands.
Revised:  Arrival in Tonga After leaving Hawaii in September under the command of Mr.Brown, she intended to make port at Tahiti but missed it and instead sailed westward for the Tonga Islands.
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Original:  She arrived in Ha'apai on 9November 1806, almost two years since departing England and following numerous engagements, episodes of leaking badly, and having already witnessed the death of her captain.
Revised:  She arrived in Ha'apai on 9November 1806, almost two years since departing England and following numerous engagements, episodes of leaking badly, and the death of her captain.
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Original:  A large quantity of silver candlesticks, chalices, incense pans, crucifixes, and images complemented the treasure.
Revised:  A large quantity of silver candlesticks, chalices, incense pans, crucifixes, and images was included in the treasure.
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Original:  She anchored in seven fathoms' water off the North West Point of Lifuka Island for what was destined to be the last time .
Revised:  The ship anchored in seven fathoms' water off the North West Point of Lifuka Island for what was destined to be the last time .
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Original:  She anchored in seven fathoms' water off the North West Point of Lifuka Island for what was destined to be the last time .
Revised:  She anchored in seven fathoms' water off the North West Point of Lifuka Island .
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Original:  A number of chiefs visited the ship on the evening of her arrival and brought with them barbecued hogs, yams, and a native of Hawaii who spoke some English and who informed Captain Brown that the Tongans had only friendly intentions.
Revised:  A number of chiefs visited it on the evening of her arrival and brought with them barbecued hogs, yams, and a native of Hawaii who spoke some English and who informed Captain Brown that the Tongans had only friendly intentions.
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Original:  A number of chiefs visited the ship on the evening of her arrival and brought with them barbecued hogs, yams, and a native of Hawaii who spoke some English and who informed Captain Brown that the Tongans had only friendly intentions.
Revised:  A number of chiefs visited the ship on the evening of her arrival and brought barbecued hogs, yams, and a native of Hawaii who spoke some English and who informed Captain Brown that the Tongans had only friendly intentions.
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Original:  A number of chiefs visited the ship on the evening of her arrival and brought with them barbecued hogs, yams, and a native of Hawaii who spoke some English and who informed Captain Brown that the Tongans had only friendly intentions.
Revised:  A number of chiefs visited the ship on the evening of her arrival and brought with them barbecued hogs, yams, and a native of Hawaii who spoke some English and informed Captain Brown that the Tongans had only friendly intentions.
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Original:  A number of chiefs visited the ship on the evening of her arrival and brought with them barbecued hogs, yams, and a native of Hawaii who spoke some English and who informed Captain Brown that the Tongans had only friendly intentions.
Revised:  A number of chiefs visited the ship on the evening of her arrival and brought with them barbecued hogs, yams, and a native of Hawaii who spoke some English and who informed Captain Brown that the Tongans had friendly intentions.
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Original:  Finau, the chief of the Ha'apai, apparently took a liking to William Mariner, who reminded Finau of a son of his who had died of illness. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Port-au-Prince had Hawaiian crew members who were uneasy about the situation and expressed concern to the captain that the Tongans were feigning friendliness while planning an attack.
Revised:  Finau, the chief of the Ha'apai, apparently took a liking to William Mariner, who reminded him of a son of his who had died of illness. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Port-au-Prince had Hawaiian crew members who were uneasy about the situation and expressed concern to the captain that the Tongans were feigning friendliness while planning an attack.
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Original:  Finau, the chief of the Ha'apai, apparently took a liking to William Mariner, who reminded Finau of a son of his who had died of illness. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Port-au-Prince had Hawaiian crew members who were uneasy about the situation and expressed concern to the captain that the Tongans were feigning friendliness while planning an attack.
Revised:  Finau, the chief of the Ha'apai, apparently took a liking to William Mariner, who reminded Finau of a son of his who had died of illness. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% However, the ship's Hawaiian crew members who were uneasy about the situation and expressed concern to the captain that the Tongans were feigning friendliness while planning an attack.
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Original:  Finau, the chief of the Ha'apai, apparently took a liking to William Mariner, who reminded Finau of a son of his who had died of illness. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Port-au-Prince had Hawaiian crew members who were uneasy about the situation and expressed concern to the captain that the Tongans were feigning friendliness while planning an attack.
Revised:  Finau, the chief of the Ha'apai, apparently took a liking to William Mariner, who reminded Finau of a son of his who had died of illness. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The Port-au-Prince had Hawaiian crew members were uneasy and expressed their concerns to the captain that the Tongans were feigning friendliness while planning an attack.
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Original:  Captain Brown chose to ignore the warnings .
Revised:  Captain Brown chose to ignore them .
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Original:  The next day, Tongans began to board the vessel until there were around 300 in different parts of the ship.
Revised:  The next day, Tongans began to board until there were around 300 in different parts of the ship.
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Original:  For the next three days, the ship was stripped of her iron, a valuable commodity, and had her guns removed  before being burnt to the water line to more readily remove any remaining iron.
Revised:  For the next three days, the ship was stripped of her iron, a valuable commodity, and had her guns removed , before being burnt to the water line to more readily remove any remaining iron.
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Original:  During Mariner's sojourn, he learned the Tongan language and had significant contact with chief leaders in the Vavau island group.
Revised:  During his sojourn, he learned the Tongan language and had significant contact with chief leaders in the Vavau island group.
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Original:  During this period, Mariner witnessed Fīnau's attempts to unify the islands , using cannons seized from the Port-au-Prince . Mariner gave a lively description of Fīnau Fangupō (UlukālalaII)  in particular.
Revised:  He witnessed Fīnau's attempts to unify the islands , using cannons seized from the Port-au-Prince . Mariner gave a lively description of Fīnau Fangupō (UlukālalaII) in particular.
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Original:  During this period, Mariner witnessed Fīnau's attempts to unify the islands , using cannons seized from the Port-au-Prince . Mariner gave a lively description of Fīnau Fangupō (UlukālalaII)  in particular.
Revised:  During this period, Mariner witnessed Fīnau's attempts to unify the islands using the seized cannons . Mariner gave a lively description of Fīnau Fangupō (UlukālalaII) in particular.
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Original:  During this period, Mariner witnessed Fīnau's attempts to unify the islands , using cannons seized from the Port-au-Prince . Mariner gave a lively description of Fīnau Fangupō (UlukālalaII)  in particular.
Revised:  During this period, Mariner witnessed Fīnau's attempts to unify the islands , using cannons seized from the Port-au-Prince . Mariner gave a lively description of Fīnau Fangupō (UlukālalaII) , in particular.
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Original:  In 1806, while it was anchored off the Tongan island of Lifuka, in the Ha'apai island group, Port au Prince was seized by a chief named Fīnau Ulukālala .
Revised:  In 1806, while it was anchored off the Tongan island of Lifuka, in the Ha'apai island group, Port au Prince was seized by a chief named Fīnau ʻUlukālala .
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Original:  Background and passage The Port-au-Prince was an English private ship of war of 500 tons, armed with 24 long nine and twelve-pound guns, and eight 12-pound carronades on the quarter deck.
Revised:  Background and passage The Port au Prince was an English private ship of war of 500 tons, armed with 24 long nine and twelve-pound guns, and eight 12-pound carronades on the quarter deck.
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Original:  Commanded by Captain Duck, she sailed for the New World on 12February 1805, having been given a twofold commission by her owner, a Mr.Robert Bent of London: to attack the Spanish ships of the New World and capture gold and valuables, but if she failed in that task her secondary objective was to sail into the Pacific in search of whales to be rendered for oil.
Revised:  Commanded by Captain Duck, she sailed for the New World on 12February 1805, having been given a twofold commission by her owner, a MrRobert Bent of London: to attack the Spanish ships of the New World and capture gold and valuables, but if she failed in that task her secondary objective was to sail into the Pacific in search of whales to be rendered for oil.
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Original:  A large quantity of silver candlesticks, chalices, incense pans, crucifixes, and images was included in the treasure.
Revised:  A large number of silver candlesticks, chalices, incense pans, crucifixes, and images was included in the treasure.
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Original:  Mariner became known as Toki 'Ukamea ("Iron Axe") and spent the next four years living amongst the islanders, mostly in the northern island group of Vavau .
Revised:  Mariner became known as Toki 'Ukamea ("Iron Axe") and spent the next four years living amongst the islanders, mostly in the northern island group of Vavaʻu .
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Original:  During his sojourn, he learned the Tongan language and had significant contact with chief leaders in the Vavau island group.
Revised:  During his sojourn, he learned the Tongan language and had significant contact with chief leaders in the Vavaʻu island group.
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Original:  Mariner gave a lively description of Fīnau Fangupō ( UlukālalaII ), in particular.
Revised:  Mariner gave a lively description of Fīnau Fangupō ( ʻUlukālalaII ), in particular.
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Original:  The Vava'u Press of Tonga issued a new edition in 1981 that includes a biographical essay about Mariner, written by Denis Joroyal McCulloch, one of Mariner's great-great grandsons , but leaves out the grammar and dictionary.
Revised:  The Vava'u Press of Tonga issued a new edition in 1981 that includes a biographical essay about Mariner, written by Denis Joroyal McCulloch, one of Mariner's great-great-grandsons , but leaves out the grammar and dictionary.
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Original:  Tonga Tabu - The true story of an English naval cadet in the South Seas.
Revised:  Tonga Tabu – The true story of an English naval cadet in the South Seas.
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Original: At the age of 14, Mariner was a ship's clerk aboard the British privateer Port au Prince.
Revised: At age 14, Mariner was a ship's clerk aboard the British privateer Port au Prince.
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Original: Arrival in Tonga After leaving Hawaii in September under the command of Mr.Brown, the Port-au-Prince intended to make port at Tahiti but missed it and instead sailed westward for the Tonga Islands.
Revised: Arrival in Tonga After leaving Hawaii in September under the command of Mr.Brown, the Port au Prince intended to make port at Tahiti but missed it and instead sailed westward for the Tonga Islands.
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Original: Demographics  Age Parental abuse by adolescents may be relatively common;
Revised: Demographics Parental abuse by adolescents may be relatively common;
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Original:  The Namibian, September 4, 2009 Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Living people Category:Namibian people of South African descent Category:Namibian businesspeople Category:Namibian farmers Category:White Namibian people Category:Namibian expatriates in South Africa Category: Namibian politicians Category:People from Otjozondjupa Region Category:Members of the South West Africa People's Organizati
Revised:  The Namibian, September 4, 2009 Category:Year of birth missing (living people) Category:Living people Category:Namibian people of South African descent Category:Namibian businesspeople Category:Namibian farmers Category:White Namibian people Category:Namibian expatriates in South Africa Category: Members of the National Assembly of Namibia Category:People from Otjozondjupa Region Category:Members of the South West Africa People's Organizati
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Original:  The Namibian, September 4  , 2009
Revised:  The Namibian, 4 , 2009
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Original:  He is associated with the SWAPO Youth League.
Revised:  He was associated with the SWAPO Youth League.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to   make further provision for the treatment of cancer , to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust , to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer , and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - make further provision for the treatment of cancer , to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust , to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer , and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to   make further provision for the treatment of cancer , to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust , to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer , and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to make further provision for the treatment of cancer - to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust , to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer , and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to   make further provision for the treatment of cancer , to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust , to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer , and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to make further provision for the treatment of cancer , to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust - to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer , and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to   make further provision for the treatment of cancer , to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust , to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer , and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to make further provision for the treatment of cancer , to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust , to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - - make further provision for the treatment of cancer - to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust - to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - make further provision for the treatment of cancer - to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust - to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - - make further provision for the treatment of cancer - to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust - to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - : make further provision for the treatment of cancer - to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust - to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - - make further provision for the treatment of cancer - to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust - to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - - make further provision for the treatment of cancer to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust - to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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Original: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - - make further provision for the treatment of cancer - to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust - to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
Revised: The Cancer Act 1939 is an Act of Parliament of the United Kingdom passed in 1939 to - - make further provision for the treatment of cancer - to authorise the Minister of Health to lend money to the National Radium Trust to prohibit certain advertisements relating to cancer and for purposes connected with the matters aforesaid.
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