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Original:  The war games  have been seen by many other countries as a show of force against the possibility of an Israeli or American attack on facilities related to Iran's nuclear energy programme, which they believe will lead to the development of weapons of mass destruction  . Some of the naval manoeuvres have also been seen as a response to a statement by the US government that any attempt to close the Strait of Hormuz would be considered an act of war.
Revised:  The war games have been seen by many other countries as a show of force against the possibility of an Israeli or American attack on facilities related to Iran's nuclear energy program, seen as a risk for the development and proliferation of weapons of mass destruction . Some of the naval manoeuvres have also been seen as a response to a statement by the US government that any attempt to close the Strait of Hormuz would be considered an act of war.
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Original:  The war games  have been seen by many other countries as a show of force against the possibility of an Israeli or American attack on facilities related to Iran's nuclear energy programme, which they believe will lead to the development of weapons of mass destruction  . Some of the naval manoeuvres have also been seen as a response to a statement by the US government that any attempt to close the Strait of Hormuz would be considered an act of war.
Revised:  The war games have been seen by many other countries as a show of force against the possibility of an Israeli or American attack on facilities related to Iran's nuclear energy programme, which they believe will lead to the development of weapons of mass destruction . Some of the naval maneuvers have also been seen as a response to a statement by the US government that any attempt to close the Strait of Hormuz would be considered an act of war.
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Original:  Some of the missiles are believed to have been launched from ships, as part of a series of naval maneuvers .
Revised:  Some of the missiles are believed to have been launched from ships, as part of a series of naval manoeuvres .
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Original:  The Iranians have been under international pressure to withdraw from their plans of achieving nuclear proficiency, but have rejected putting a hold on their program and have also been moving forward with their rocketry program .
Revised:  The Iranians have been under international pressure to withdraw from their plans of achieving nuclear proficiency, but have rejected putting a hold on their programme and have also been moving forward with their rocketry program .
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Original:  The Iranians have been under international pressure to withdraw from their plans of achieving nuclear proficiency, but have rejected putting a hold on their program and have also been moving forward with their rocketry program .
Revised:  The Iranians have been under international pressure to withdraw from their plans of achieving nuclear proficiency, but have rejected putting a hold on their program and have also been moving forward with their rocketry programme .
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Original:  Some of the naval maneuvers have also been seen as a response to a statement by the US government that any attempt to close the Strait of Hormuz would be considered an act of war.
Revised:  Some of the naval manoeuvres have also been seen as a response to a statement by the US government that any attempt to close the Strait of Hormuz would be considered an act of war.
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Original:  According to local authorities, the victim was a 93-year-old man who died when a wall from his house collapsed and crushed him   
Revised:  According to local authorities, the victim was a 93-year-old man who died when a wall from his house collapsed and crushed him . 
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Original:  The base was used to store unused munitions after the Afghan War
Revised:  The base was used to store unused munitions after the Soviet-Afghan War
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Original: An arms depot in Uzbekistan has seen a series of explosions today after a fire at a military base near Kagen .
Revised: An arms depot in Uzbekistan has experienced a series of explosions today after a fire at a military base near Kagen .
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Original: An arms depot in Uzbekistan has seen a series of explosions today after a fire at a military base near Kagen .
Revised: An arms depot in Uzbekistan has seen a series of explosions today after a fire at a military base near the city of Kagan .
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Original:  Although information about the accident comes from officials, one official at Uzbekistan's Emergency Situations Ministry denied the report and local media did not report the fire for at least twelve hours after it ignited .
Revised:  Although information about the accident comes from officials, one official at Uzbekistan's Emergency Situations Ministry denied the report . Local media did not report the fire for at least twelve hours after it ignited .
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Original:  One local resident who told AP about the resulting evacuation, saying " We were woken up in the middle of the night and everybody came out onto the street , " refused to be identified for fear of retribution by the authorities.
Revised:  One local resident who spoke with the Associated Press refused to be identified for fear of retribution by the authorities. The resident was quoted as saying, " We were woken up in the middle of the night and everybody came out onto the street , " refused to be identified for fear of retribution by the authorities.
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Original:  One local resident who told AP about the resulting evacuation, saying " We were woken up in the middle of the night and everybody came out onto the street , " refused to be identified for fear of retribution by the authorities.
Revised:  One local resident who told AP about the resulting evacuation, saying " we were woken up in the middle of the night and everybody came out onto the street , " refused to be identified for fear of retribution by the authorities.
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Original:  One local resident who told AP about the resulting evacuation, saying " We were woken up in the middle of the night and everybody came out onto the street , " refused to be identified for fear of retribution by the authorities.
Revised:  One local resident who told AP about the resulting evacuation, saying " We were woken up in the middle of the night and everybody came out onto the street . " refused to be identified for fear of retribution by the authorities.
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Original:  One local resident who told AP about the resulting evacuation, saying " We were woken up in the middle of the night and everybody came out onto the street , " refused to be identified for fear of retribution by the authorities.
Revised:  One local resident who told AP about the resulting evacuation, saying " We were woken up in the middle of the night and everybody came out onto the street , " 
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Original:  Independant Russian website Ferghana.ru reports that around twenty houses, a hospital, a railway station and a helicopter base have been destroyed . Kagen has a population of 50, 000 and is an important part of the local rail network.
Revised:  Independant Russian website Ferghana.ru reports that around 20 houses, a hospital, a railway station and a helicopter base have been destroyed . Kagen has a population of 50, 000 and is an important part of the local rail network.
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Original:  Independant Russian website Ferghana.ru reports that around twenty houses, a hospital, a railway station and a helicopter base have been destroyed . Kagen has a population of 50, 000 and is an important part of the local rail network.
Revised:  Independant Russian website Ferghana.ru reports that around twenty houses, a hospital, a railway station and a helicopter base have been destroyed , and
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Original:  The military has stopped people returning for their belongings , and has placed them in schools for now.
Revised:  The military has stopped people returning for their belongings and has placed them in schools for now.
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Original:  The biggest explosions blew out windows in Bukhara, which is 7 miles away .
Revised:  The evacuations were conducted by soldiers who are also working to quell the flames .
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Original:  It is thought  the fire started in the helicopter base and  despite efforts by soilders then spread to the supplies of shells.
Revised:  It is thought that the fire started in the helicopter base and despite efforts by soilders then spread to the supplies of shells.
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Original:  It is thought  the fire started in the helicopter base and  despite efforts by soilders then spread to the supplies of shells.
Revised:  It is thought the fire started in the helicopter base and , despite efforts by soilders then spread to the supplies of shells.
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Original:  The risk of more blasts is hampering investigatory efforts, but it is reported by a local official that the fire has been extuinguished .
Revised:  The risk of more blasts is hampering investigatory efforts, but it is reported by a local official that the fire has been extinguished .
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Original:  Defense Minister Ruslan Mirzayev travelled to the site.
Revised:  Defense Minister Ruslan Mirzayev traveled to the site.
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Original:  Illness clusters in the hard hit state of Illinois were publicly identified by local health departments as originating from three Mexican restaurants.
Revised:  Illness clusters in the hard hit state of Illinois were publicly identified by local health departments as involving three Mexican restaurants.
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Original:   The pathogen responsible for the outbreak is the rare Saintpaul strain of Salmonella enterica.
Revised:  The pathogen responsible is the rare Saintpaul strain of Salmonella enterica.
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Original: Image:CDC salmonellosis map .png|CDC map of cases per million of Salmonella Saintpaul by state Over 1000 illnesses have now been identified in a foodborne Salmonella outbreak that began in mid-April 2008.
Revised: CDC map of cases per million of Salmonella Saintpaul by state Over 1000 illnesses have now been identified in a foodborne Salmonella outbreak that began in mid-April 2008.
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Original: Image:CDC salmonellosis map .png|CDC map of cases per million of Salmonella Saintpaul by state Over 1000 illnesses have now been identified in a foodborne Salmonella outbreak that began in mid-April 2008.
Revised: Image:CDC salmonellosis map .png|CDC map of cases per million of Salmonella Saintpaul by state Over 1000 cases of illness have now been identified in a foodborne Salmonella outbreak that began in mid-April 2008.
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Original: Image:CDC salmonellosis map .png|CDC map of cases per million of Salmonella Saintpaul by state Over 1000 illnesses have now been identified in a foodborne Salmonella outbreak that began in mid-April 2008.
Revised: Image:CDC salmonellosis map .png|CDC map of cases per million of Salmonella Saintpaul by state Over 1000 illnesses have now been identified in a foodborne salmonellosis outbreak that began in mid-April 2008.
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Original: Image:CDC salmonellosis map .png|CDC map of cases per million of Salmonella Saintpaul by state Over 1000 illnesses have now been identified in a foodborne Salmonella outbreak that began in mid-April 2008.
Revised: Image:CDC salmonellosis map .png|CDC map of cases per million of Salmonella Saintpaul by state Over 1000 illnesses have now been identified in a foodborne Salmonella outbreak that began in mid-April 2008 in the United States.
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Original:  As of July 8th , the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention  has reported 1013 confirmed infections throughout the United States, along with four cases in Canada.
Revised:  As of July 8 , the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention has reported 1013 confirmed infections throughout the United States, along with four cases in Canada.
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Original:  The U.S. Food and Drug Administration and the CDC are in the process of investigating the outbreak and trying to identify the contamination's point of origin.
Revised:  The CDC is in the process of investigating the outbreak and trying to identify the contamination's point of origin.
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Original:  The FDA currently suspects that the contaminated food product is an ingredient in fresh salsa, such as fresh jalapeño pepper, fresh serrano pepper, fresh cilantro, or certain types of raw tomato.
Revised:  The U.S. Food and Drug Administration (FDA) currently suspects that the contaminated food product is an ingredient in fresh salsa, such as fresh jalapeño pepper, fresh serrano pepper, fresh cilantro, or certain types of raw tomato.
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Original:  The number of sportsmen may increase by 10, as the Committee has given  number of athletes a very last chance to gain Olympic qualifications , including Lidia Chojecka and Małgorzata Trybańska.
Revised:  The number of olympians may increase by 10, as the Committee has given number of athletes a very last chance to gain Olympic qualifications , including Lidia Chojecka and Małgorzata Trybańska.
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Original:  The number of sportsmen may increase by 10, as the Committee has given  number of athletes a very last chance to gain Olympic qualifications , including Lidia Chojecka and Małgorzata Trybańska.
Revised:  The number of sportsmen may increase by 10, as the Committee has given a number of athletes a very last chance to gain Olympic qualifications , including Lidia Chojecka and Małgorzata Trybańska.
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Original:  The number of sportsmen may increase by 10, as the Committee has given  number of athletes a very last chance to gain Olympic qualifications , including Lidia Chojecka and Małgorzata Trybańska.
Revised:  The number of sportsmen may increase by 10, as the Committee has given number of athletes a final chance to qualify , including Lidia Chojecka and Małgorzata Trybańska.
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Original:  There are 101 women and 157 men in the team.
Revised:  There are 101 women and 157 men on the team.
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Original:  The 28 years old canoer Marek Twardowski has been chosen for the national flag bearer.
Revised:  The 28-year-old canoer Marek Twardowski has been chosen for the national flag bearer.
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Original:  The Committee spent over PLN 186 million (almost USD 90 million) for preparations to the Olympicsin last four years, with PLN 73 million (about USD 35 million) this year alone . "With such a big team, we should improve the results from Athens and win over 10 medals", said the PKOL president Piotr Nurowski.
Revised:  The Committee spent over PLN186 million (almost USD 90 million) for preparations to the Olympicsin last four years, with PLN 73 million (about USD 35 million) this year alone . "With such a big team, we should improve the results from Athens and win over 10 medals", said the PKOL president Piotr Nurowski.
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Original:  The Committee spent over PLN 186 million (almost USD 90 million) for preparations to the Olympicsin last four years, with PLN 73 million (about USD 35 million) this year alone . "With such a big team, we should improve the results from Athens and win over 10 medals", said the PKOL president Piotr Nurowski.
Revised:  The Committee spent over PLN 186 million (almost US 90 million) for preparations to the Olympicsin last four years, with PLN 73 million (about USD 35 million) this year alone . "With such a big team, we should improve the results from Athens and win over 10 medals", said the PKOL president Piotr Nurowski.
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Original:  The Committee spent over PLN 186 million (almost USD 90 million) for preparations to the Olympicsin last four years, with PLN 73 million (about USD 35 million) this year alone . "With such a big team, we should improve the results from Athens and win over 10 medals", said the PKOL president Piotr Nurowski.
Revised:  The Committee spent over PLN 186 million (almost USD 90 million) on preparations for the Olympics . "With such a big team, we should improve the results from Athens and win over 10 medals", said the PKOL president Piotr Nurowski.
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Original:  Asked about the protests over China's violation of human rights in Tibet, he said: "Demonstrating one's political views on the venues as well as in the Olympic Village is forbidden.
Revised:  When asked about the protests over China's violation of human rights in Tibet, he said: "Demonstrating one's political views on the venues as well as in the Olympic Village is forbidden.
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Original:  Asked about the protests over China's violation of human rights in Tibet, he said: "Demonstrating one's political views on the venues as well as in the Olympic Village is forbidden.
Revised:  Asked about the protests over China's violation of human rights in Tibet, he said: "Demonstrating one's political views at the venues as well as in the Olympic Village is forbidden.
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Original:  It is a violation of the Olympic Card .
Revised:  It is a violation of the Olympic Oath .
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Original:  They are concentrating on sports ".
Revised:  They are concentrating on sports ."
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Original:  The  men's and women's volleyball teams, as well as the men's handball team are still not uknown;
Revised:  The players on the men's and women's volleyball teams, as well as the men's handball team are still not uknown;
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Original:  the teams' coaches Raul Lozano, Marco Bonitta and Bogdan Wenta have until July 19 to announce their decisions .
Revised:  the teams' coaches Raul Lozano, Marco Bonitta and Bogdan Wenta have until July 19 to announce their rosters .
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Original:  The teamoverall , including the medical staff, coaches, psychologists and others, will number over 400 people
Revised:  Overall, the team , including the medical staff, coaches, psychologists and others, will number over 400 people
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Original: The Olympic flag The Polish Olympic Committee (PKOL) announced today the list of 258 sportsmen drafted to represent Poland at the 2008 Summer Olympic Games in Beijing, China.
Revised: The Polish Olympic Committee (PKOL) announced today the list of 258 sportsmen drafted to represent Poland at the 2008 Summer Olympic Games in Beijing, China.
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Original:  I embedded a few of the animals in wax and then cut them into very thin slices using a microtome , mounted the slices on microscope slides, stained the slices to enhance contrast, and then looked at those slides under a compound microscope (that's how I got the pictures of the muscles etc in the paper).
Revised:  I embedded a few of the animals in wax and then cut them into very thin slices using a , mounted the slices on microscope slides, stained the slices to enhance contrast, and then looked at those slides under a compound microscope (that's how I got the pictures of the muscles etc in the paper).
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Original:  I embedded a few of the animals in wax and then cut them into very thin slices using a microtome , mounted the slices on microscope slides, stained the slices to enhance contrast, and then looked at those slides under a compound microscope (that's how I got the pictures of the muscles etc in the paper).
Revised:  I embedded a few of the animals in wax and then cut them into very thin slices using a microtome , mounted the slices on microscope slides, stained the slices to enhance contrast, and then looked at those slides under a (that's how I got the pictures of the muscles etc in the paper).
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Original:  I am curious about the population structure of the "fields" of anemones — the group to which Edwardsiella andrillae belongs includes many species that reproduce asexually, and its possible that the fields are "clones" produced asexually rather than the result of sexual reproduction.
Revised:  I am curious about the population structure of the "fields" of anemones — the group to which Edwardsiella andrillae belongs includes many species that reproduce asexually, and it's possible that the fields are "clones" produced asexually rather than the result of sexual reproduction.
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Original:  That being said, since the paper came out, I have been pointed towards two other reports that are probably records of these species: one from Japanese scientists who looked at footage from cameras attached to seals and one from Americans who dove under ice.
Revised:  That being said, since the paper came out, I have been pointed towards two other reports that are probably records of these species: one from scientists who looked at footage from cameras attached to seals and one from Americans who dove under ice.
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Original:  That being said, since the paper came out, I have been pointed towards two other reports that are probably records of these species: one from Japanese scientists who looked at footage from cameras attached to seals and one from Americans who dove under ice.
Revised:  That being said, since the paper came out, I have been pointed towards two other reports that are probably records of these species: one from Japanese scientists who looked at footage from cameras attached to seals and one from who dove under ice.
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Original:  Edwardsiella andrillae and its habitat Discovered by the [Antarctic Drilling] project, the team was so unprepared for  discoveries they did not have suitable preservatives and the only chemicals available obliterated the creature's . Nonetheless Marymegan Daly of  confirmed the animals were a  . Named Edwardsiella andrillae after the drilling project that found it, the anemone was finally described in a paper last month.
Revised:  Edwardsiella andrillae and its habitat Discovered by the [Antarctic Drilling] project, the team was so unprepared for discoveries they did not have suitable preservatives and the only chemicals available obliterated the creature's . Nonetheless Marymegan Daly of Ohio State University confirmed the animals were a . Named Edwardsiella andrillae after the drilling project that found it, the anemone was finally described in a paper last month.
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Original:  Edwardsiella andrillae and its habitat Discovered by the [Antarctic Drilling] project, the team was so unprepared for  discoveries they did not have suitable preservatives and the only chemicals available obliterated the creature's . Nonetheless Marymegan Daly of  confirmed the animals were a  . Named Edwardsiella andrillae after the drilling project that found it, the anemone was finally described in a paper last month.
Revised:  Edwardsiella andrillae and its habitat Discovered by the [Antarctic Drilling] project, the team was so unprepared for discoveries they did not have suitable preservatives and the only chemicals available obliterated the creature's . Nonetheless Marymegan Daly of confirmed the animals were a new species . Named Edwardsiella andrillae after the drilling project that found it, the anemone was finally described in a paper last month.
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Original:  That being said, since the paper came out, I have been pointed towards two other reports that are probably records of these species: one from  scientists who looked at footage from cameras attached to seals and one from  who dove under ice.
Revised:  That being said, since the paper came out, I have been pointed towards two other reports that are probably records of these species: one from scientists who looked at footage from cameras attached to seals and one from Americans who dove under ice.
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Original:  Rove has denied ever influencing the decisions of the Justice Department .
Revised:  Rove has denied ever influencing the decisions of the Department of Justice .
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