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Original: The Kuwaiti combat contingent was led by Brigadier General Mubarak and Colonel Saleh Mohammed Al-Sabah who  commanded the Kuwait 25th Commando Brigade and the Kuwait 6th Mechanized Brigade ;
Revised: The Kuwaiti combat contingent was led by Brigadier General Mubarak and Colonel Saleh Mohammed Al-Sabah who later commanded the Kuwait 25th Commando Brigade and the Kuwait 6th Mechanized Brigade ;
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Original: jpg | caption = An intracranial hemorrhage, one cause of altered level of consciousness | pronounce = | field = Psychiatry, Neurology | symptoms = | complications = | onset = | Duration = | types = | causes = | risks = | diagnosis = | differential = | prevention = | treatment = | medication = | prognosis = | frequency = Satyajeet singhconsciousness is any measure of arousal other than normal.
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Original:  Using ACDU, a patient is assessed for alertness, confusion, drowsiness, and u'''nresponsiveness .
Revised:  Using ACDU, a patient is assessed for alertness, confusion, drowsiness, and unresponsiveness .
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Original: Scheld et al.. p. 530 Thus it is a valuable measure of a patient's medical  and neurological status.
Revised: Scheld et al.. p. 530 Thus it is a valuable measure of a patient's medical default and neurological status.
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Original:  Initial treatment often involves the administration of dextrose if the blood sugar is low as well as the administration of oxygen, naloxone thiamine zeminanine .
Revised:  Initial treatment often involves the administration of dextrose if the blood sugar is low as well as the administration of oxygen, naloxone and thiamine .
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Original:  Mass lesions that occur above the tentorium cerebelli (pictured) normally do not significantly alter the level of consciousness unless they are very large or affect both cerebral hemispheres.
Revised:  Mass lesions that occur above the tentorium cerebelli normally do not significantly alter the level of consciousness unless they are very large or affect both cerebral hemispheres.
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Original: An altered level of consciousness is any measure of arousal other than normal.
Revised: An altered lost of consciousness is any measure of arousal other than normal.
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Original:  ഗിരിനാഥ്) URL He died at his home at 3:30 AM IST on 6 April 2020, aged 84, and was cremated with full state honours at Palluruthy crematorium on the same day.
Revised:  ഗിരിനാഥ്) He died at his home at 3:30 AM IST on 6 April 2020, aged 84, and was cremated with full state honours at Palluruthy crematorium on the same day.
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Original:  This film song was written by Rajeev Alunkal.
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Original:  Losing his father at a young age , the burden of looking after a big family fell on his mother (Parvathi) .
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Original:  Losing his father at a young age , the burden of looking after a big family fell on his mother (Parvathi) .
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Original:  Unable to provide for all her children she sent Arjunan and his brother, Prabhakaran, to Jeevakarunyananda Ashram at Palani .
Revised:  Unable to provide for all her children , sent Arjunan and his brother, Prabhakaran, to Jeevakarunyananda Ashram at Palani .
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Original:  Noticing something different in the young boy, the head of the ashram decided to give him music lessons.
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Original:  For the next few years Arjunan began learning music under Kumarayya Pillai.
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Original:  Arjunan Master went on to compose around 800 songs for 300 plays.
Revised:  Arjunan went on to compose around 800 songs for 300 plays.
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Original:  This association grew into an intimate bond, which he maintained until his death.
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Original:  Karuthapurnami was his debut movie as a composer which was released in 1968.
Revised:  Karuthapurnami was his debut movie as a composer was Karuthapurnami, released in 1968.
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Original:  During a career spanning 50 years in film field, Arjunan Master has scored music for more than 500 songs in over 218 Malayalam films.
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Original:  His last music composition was on 2019 December for Sreek Music's three love songs written by Lyricist Sreekanth M Girinath He died at his home at 3:30 AM IST on 6 April 2020, aged 84, and was cremated with full state honours at Palluruthy crematorium on the same day.
Revised:  His last music composition was on 2019 December for Sreek Music's three love songs written by lyricist Sreekanth M Girinath He died at his home at 3:30 AM IST on 6 April 2020, aged 84, and was cremated with full state honours at Palluruthy crematorium on the same day.
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Original: Career After composing music for amateur plays, he became a professional soon worked with Changanassery Geedha, People's Theatre, Kalidasa Kalakendram, Desabhimani Theatres, Alleppey Theatres and KPAC.
Revised: Career After composing music for amateur plays, he became a professional and worked with Changanassery Geedha, People's Theatre, Kalidasa Kalakendram, Desabhimani Theatres, Alleppey Theatres and KPAC.
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Original:  During a career spanning 50 years in film field, Arjunan Master scored music for more than 500 songs in over 218 Malayalam films.
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Original:  These are not only important to the study of the culture of Gaya Kingdoms(1st-6th centuries A.D.) but are also revealing about how that culture was transmitted to Japa 
Revised:  These are not only important to the study of the culture of Gaya Kingdoms(1st-6th centuries A.D.) but are also revealing about how that culture was transmitted to Japan. 
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Original: Preparation for womanhood Such seclusion rites are linked to the social preparation of girls for womanhood and their  roles as wives and mothers.
Revised: Preparation for womanhood Such seclusion rites are linked to the social preparation of girls for womanhood and their intended roles as wives and mothers.
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Original: Rites [[File:Venus figurine cave of Laussel.jpg| Venus of Laussel]]
Revised: Rites [[File:Venus figurine cave of Laussel.jpg| upVenus of Laussel]]
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Original: multiple image|perrow = 4|total_width=490 | image1 = Peter Paul Rubens - The Four Continents.jpg | image2 = Madame de Pompadour.jpg | image3 = Pierre-Auguste Renoir - Luncheon of the Boating Party - Google Art Project.jpg |image4 = Slave dance to banjo, 1780s A work of art, artwork,Mostly in American English art piece, piece of art or art object is an artistic creation of aesthetic value.
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Original:  An object created for principally or entirely functional, religious or other non-aesthetic reasons which has come to be appreciated as art (often later, or by cultural outsiders).
Revised:  An object created for principally or entirely functional, religious or other non-aesthetic reasonably which has come to be appreciated as art (often later, or by cultural outsiders).
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Original:  After working as chief clerk in the office of his uncle Edmund Bannerman, a barrister and newspaper proprietor, Hutton-Mills travelled to England in 1891 to study for the Bar at the Middle Temple, returning to practise in Accra from 1894.
Revised:  After working as chief clerk in the office of his uncle Edmund Bannerman, a barrister and newspaper proprietor, Hutton-Mills travelled to England in 1891 to study law at the Middle Temple, returning to practise in Accra from 1894.
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Original:  After working as chief clerk in the office of his uncle Edmund Bannerman, a barrister and newspaper proprietor, Hutton-Mills travelled to England in 1891 to study for the Bar at the Middle Temple, returning to practise in Accra from 1894.
Revised:  After working as chief clerk in the office of his uncle Edmund Bannerman, a barrister and newspaper proprietor, Hutton-Mills travelled to England in 1891 to study for the Bar at the Middle Temple, returning to practise in Accra on being called to the Bar in 1894.
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Original:  He is often referred to as Thomas Hutton-Mills , Sr. to distinguish him from his son, the lawyer and diplomat Thomas Hutton-Mills , Jr. (1894–1959).
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Original:  He is often referred to as Thomas Hutton-Mills , Sr. to distinguish him from his son, the lawyer and diplomat Thomas Hutton-Mills , Jr. (1894–1959).
Revised:  He is often referred to as Thomas Hutton-Mills , Sr. to distinguish him from his son, the lawyer and diplomat Thomas Hutton-Mills Jr. (1894–1959).
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Original: Life Thomas Hutton Mills was born in James Town, Accra, the son of Nii Emma Bannerman, the second daughter of Governor James Bannerman,"Thomas Hutton-Mills (Born 1865-Died 1931) As a statesman", in Magnus J. Sampson, Gold Coast Men of Affairs (Past and Present), with an Introduction by J. B. Danquah, London: Dawsons of Pall Mall, 1937;
Revised: Life Thomas Hutton Mills was born in James Town, Accra, the son of Emma Bannerman, the second daughter of Governor James Bannerman,"Thomas Hutton-Mills (Born 1865-Died 1931) As a statesman", in Magnus J. Sampson, Gold Coast Men of Affairs (Past and Present), with an Introduction by J. B. Danquah, London: Dawsons of Pall Mall, 1937;
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Original: Shaukat Thanvi (1904–1963) was a famous Pakistani journalist, essayist, columnist, novelist, short story writer, broadcaster, playwright, humorist and poet.
Revised: Shaukat Thanvi (1904–1963) was a Pakistani journalist, essayist, columnist, novelist, short story writer, broadcaster, playwright, humorist and poet.
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Original:  Thana Bhawan, a small town in Muzaffarnagar district (now in Shamli district) of Uttar Pradesh, was Thanvi's ancestral hometown and possibly the source of his last name, though Prof.
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Original:  His notable works include: Sheesh Mahal Sudeshi Rail Death He died on 4 May 1963 and was buried in the graveyard of Miani Sahib , Lahore, which is located in front of Radio Pakistan.
Revised:  His notable works include: Sheesh Mahal Sudeshi Rail Death He died on 4 May 1963 and was buried in the Miani Sahib Graveyard , Lahore, which is located in front of Radio Pakistan.
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Original: Muhajir people Category:Pakistani humorists Category:Pakistani novelists Category:Pakistani dramatists and playwrights Category:Urdu-language novelists Category:Pakistani male short story writers Category:Urdu-language short story writers Category:Pakistani radio personalities Category:Recipients of Tamgha-e-Imtiaz Category:20th-century novelists Category:20th-century Pakistani short story writers Category:Burials at Miani Sahib Graveyard Category:20th-century Indian male write
Revised: Muhajir people Category:Pakistani humorists Category:Pakistani novelists Category:Pakistani dramatists and playwrights Category:Urdu-language novelists Category:Pakistani male short story writers Category:Urdu-language short story writers Category:Pakistani radio personalities Category:Recipients of Tamgha-e-Imtiaz Category:20th-century novelists Category:20th-century Pakistani short story writers Category:Burials at Miani Sahib Graveyard Category:20th-century Pakistani male write
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Original: Shaukat Thanvi (2 February 1904 – 4 May1963) was a Pakistani journalist, essayist, columnist, novelist, short story writer , broadcaster, playwright, humorist and poet .
Revised: Shaukat Thanvi (2 February 1904 – 4 May1963) was a Pakistani writer and humorist .
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Original:  Death He died on 4 May 1963 and was buried in the Miani Sahib Graveyard, Lahore, which is located in front of Radio Pakistan.
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Original: Shaukat Thanvi (2 February 1904 – 4 May1963 ) was a Pakistani writer and humorist.
Revised: Shaukat Thanvi (2 February 1904 – 4 May 1963 ) was a Pakistani writer and humorist.
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Original:  Her Grandmother, Smt. Kusum Shende, is a classical vocalist from the Kiran Gharana.
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Original:  Das led a group of moderate Indian nationalists in the creation of The Doon School.
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Original:  Although he died  before the school actually opened,  had lobbied for it assiduously during the 1920s.
Revised:  Although he died before the school actually opened, had lobbied for it during the 1920s.
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Original:  Das  envisaged an Indian school patterned on the British public school, which he felt had effectively trained young men to become responsible and resourceful administrators throughout the British Empire.
Revised:  Das and the rest of the group envisaged an Indian school patterned on the British public school, which he felt had effectively trained young men to become responsible and resourceful administrators throughout the British Empire.
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Original:  But in contrast to British schools, he wanted an Indian school to be nonsectarian and responsive to Indian aspirations.
Revised:  But in contrast to British schools, the founders of the Doon School wanted an Indian school to be nonsectarian and responsive to Indian aspirations.
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Original:  He and the school's other founders saw Doon as the training ground for a new generation of Indian leaders who would take over the reins of administration and government following Independence.
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Original:  In 1922  he was appointed Advocate-General of Bengal.
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Original:  He belonged to the famous Das family of Telirbagh, Bikrampur, Dhaka, now in Bangladesh.
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Original:  S. R. Das's two sisters were highly distinguished women of their time.
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Original:  Sarala Roy who founded the 'Gokhale Memorial School' in Calcutta and a prominent women in Bengal's social affairs . Lady Abala Bose, wife of legendary scientist Jagadish Bose and also a prominent women of her time .
Revised:  Sarala Roy who founded the 'Gokhale Memorial School' in Calcutta and a prominent women in Bengal's social affairs , and Abala Bose, wife of legendary scientist Jagadish Bose and also a prominent women of her time .
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Original:  Sarala Roy who founded the 'Gokhale Memorial School' in Calcutta and a prominent women in Bengal's social affairs . Lady Abala Bose, wife of legendary scientist Jagadish Bose and also a prominent women of her time .
Revised:  Sarala Roy who founded the 'Gokhale Memorial School' in Calcutta and a prominent women in Bengal's social affairs . Lady Abala Bose, wife of legendary scientist Jagadish Bose .
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Original:  After completing school and university education in England, S.R. Das returned to India in 1894.
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Original:  Page 701in 1927  became a member of the Viceroy’s Executive Council of Lord Irwin.
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Original:  Page 701in 1927  became a member of the Viceroy’s Executive Council of Lord Irwin.
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Original:  Personal life Satish Ranjan Das was born in 1870 to Durga Mohan Das, a renowned social reformer.
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Original:  Personal life Satish Ranjan Das was born in 1870 to Durga Mohan Das, a renowned social reformer.
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Original:  S. R. Das's two sisters were Sarala Roy who founded the ' Gokhale Memorial School ' in Calcuttaand a prominent women in Bengal's social affairs , and Abala Bose, wife of legendary scientist Jagadish Bose.
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Original:  S. R. Das's two sisters were Sarala Roy who founded the ' Gokhale Memorial School ' in Calcuttaand a prominent women in Bengal's social affairs , and Abala Bose, wife of legendary scientist Jagadish Bose.
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Original:  S. R. Das's two sisters were Sarala Roy who founded the ' Gokhale Memorial School ' in Calcuttaand a prominent women in Bengal's social affairs , and Abala Bose, wife of legendary scientist Jagadish Bose.
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Original:  S. R. Das's two sisters were Sarala Roy who founded the ' Gokhale Memorial School ' in Calcuttaand a prominent women in Bengal's social affairs , and Abala Bose, wife of legendary scientist Jagadish Bose.
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Original:  He was married to Bonalata Devi.
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Original:  One of his grandsons, Shomie Das, went on to serve as Headmaster of The Doon School.
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Original:   Chopra, Radhika & Jeffery, Patricia M. (Eds.) (2005).
Revised:  Further readings Chopra, Radhika & Jeffery, Patricia M. (Eds.) (2005).
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Original:  Category:1870 births Category:1928 deaths Category:People from Bikrampur Category:  The Doon School Category:19th-century Indian lawyers Category: Brahmos Category:People from Kolkata Category:Bengali people Category:Das family of Telirbagh Category: Scouting and Guiding in India Category:20th-century Indian lawye
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Original:  Category:1870 births Category:1928 deaths Category:People from Bikrampur Category:  The Doon School Category:19th-century Indian lawyers Category: Brahmos Category:People from Kolkata Category:Bengali people Category:Das family of Telirbagh Category: Scouting and Guiding in India Category:20th-century Indian lawye
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Original:  Category:1870 births Category:1928 deaths Category:People from Bikrampur Category:  The Doon School Category:19th-century Indian lawyers Category: Brahmos Category:People from Kolkata Category:Bengali people Category:Das family of Telirbagh Category: Scouting and Guiding in India Category:20th-century Indian lawye
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Original:  Hallam went on to develop the AirManager system, which uses a combination of CCFT and high airflow filtration (HAF), which filters any dust, pollen, airborne contaminants and resultant debris from the CCFT process down to 0.1 micron .
Revised:  Hallam went on to develop the AirManager system, which uses a combination of CCFT and high airflow filtration (HAF), which filters any dust, pollen, airborne contaminants and resultant debris from the CCFT process down to 0.1 micrometres .
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Original:  He is married to three wives: Asmau, Zubaidah and Zainab, a daughter of Late President Umaru Yar'Adua. they had three children together maryam the oldest, musa and umar .
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Original:  He is married to three wives: Asmau, Zubaidah and Zainab, a daughter of Late President Umaru Yar'Adua. they had three children together maryam the oldest, musa and umar .
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Original:  He is married to three wives: Asmau, Zubaidah and Zainab, a daughter of Late President Umaru Yar'Adua. they had three children together maryam the oldest, musa and umar .
Revised:  He is married to three wives: Asmau, Zubaidah and Zainab, a daughter of Late President Umaru Yar'Adua. they had three children together maryam the oldest, Musa and Umar .
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Original:  The hostage-takers were captured in a spectacular raid before they were able to board the aircraft.
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Original:   See also List of hostage crises 
Revised:  References See also List of hostage crises 
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