wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: American people of Slovak-Jewish descent Category:Canadian people of Slovak-Jewish descent Category:American television actresses Category:American voice actresses Category:Canadian television actresses Category:Canadian voice actresses Category:Jewish American actresses Category:Jewish Canadian actresses Category:20th-century American Jews Category:Canadian Jews Category:Reitman family Category:French-Canadian people Category:USC School of Dramatic Arts alum
Revised: American people of Slovak-Jewish descent Category:Canadian people of Slovak-Jewish descent Category:American television actresses Category:American voice actresses Category:Canadian television actresses Category:Canadian voice actresses Category:Jewish American actresses Category:Jewish Canadian actresses Category:20th-century American Jews Category:Canadian Jews Category:Reitman family Category:French-Canadian people Category:USC School of Dramatic Arts alumni Category:21st-century American Je
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Original:  Mediterranean economies were short of gold but could supply salt , taken from places like the African salt mine of Taghaza , whereas West African countries like Wangara had plenty of gold but needed salt.
Revised:  Northern economies were short of gold but could supply salt , taken from places like the African salt mine of Taghaza , whereas West African countries like Wangara had plenty of gold but needed salt.
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Original:  Mediterranean economies were short of gold but could supply salt , taken from places like the African salt mine of Taghaza , whereas West African countries like Wangara had plenty of gold but needed salt.
Revised:  Mediterranean economies were short of gold but at times controlled salt mines such as Taghaza in the Sahara , whereas West African countries like Wangara had plenty of gold but needed salt.
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Original:  Salt was purchased with manufactured goods from Sijilmasa.
Revised:  The salt was mined by slaves and purchased with manufactured goods from Sijilmasa.
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Original:  As Fernand Braudel points out that crossing such a zone, especially without mechanized transport, is worthwhile only when exceptional circumstances cause the expected gain to outweigh the cost and the danger.
Revised:  As Fernand Braudel points out , crossing such a zone, especially without mechanized transport, is worthwhile only when exceptional circumstances cause the expected gain to outweigh the cost and the danger.
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Original:  Trade from around 300 CE was conducted by caravans of camels.
Revised:  was conducted by caravans of camels.
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Original:  Early trans-Saharan Trade  [[Image:Oualata 02.jpg|A building in Oualata, southeast Mauritania]] [[Image:Oasis-Bilma.jpg|The Bilma oasis in northeast Niger, with the Kaouar escarpment in the background]] Ancient trade spanned the northeastern corner of the Sahara in the Naqadan era.
Revised:  Early trans-Saharan Trade = [[Image:Oualata 02.jpg|A building in Oualata, southeast Mauritania]] [[Image:Oasis-Bilma.jpg|The Bilma oasis in northeast Niger, with the Kaouar escarpment in the background]] Ancient trade spanned the northeastern corner of the Sahara in the Naqadan era.
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Original:  In Libya and Algeria, from at least 7000 BC, there was pastoralism, the herding of sheep  , goats, large settlements, and pottery  . Cattle were introduced to the Central Sahara (Ahaggar) from 4000 to 3500 BC.
Revised:  In Libya and Algeria, from at least 7000 BC, there was pastoralism, the herding of sheep , large settlements, and pottery . Cattle were introduced to the Central Sahara (Ahaggar) from 4000 to 3500 BC.
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Original: Leigh Hatcher (born 25 August 1955) is an Australian journalist and currently works as a news presenter for Sky News Australia, and radio presenter for Sydney's Hope 103.2 "Open House" programme.
Revised: Leigh Hatcher (born 25 August 1955) is an Australian journalist and currently works as a radio presenter for Sydney's Hope 103.2 "Open House" programme.
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Original:  Writing career In 2005, Leigh wrote the book titled I’   m Not Crazy, I ’ m Just A Little Unwell - relating his experience as a sufferer of Chronic Fatigue Syndrome. 
Revised:  Writing career In 2005, Leigh wrote the book titled I’ m Not Crazy, I ' m Just A Little Unwell - relating his experience as a sufferer of Chronic Fatigue Syndrome. 
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Original:  Leigh has also worked at various radio stations including 2CA in Canberra and 5DN in Adelaide.
Revised:  He has also worked at various radio stations including 2CA in Canberra and 5DN in Adelaide.
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Original:  Leigh was also employed by the Seven Network where he worked as a political correspondent in Canberra as well as a European correspondent when he lived in London, between the years of 1983 and 1985.
Revised:  Hatcher was also employed by the Seven Network where he worked as a political correspondent in Canberra as well as a European correspondent when he lived in London, between the years of 1983 and 1985.
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Original:  After returning from London, Leigh took a break from the television scene and returned to the radio station 5DN and hosted a radio show.
Revised:  After returning from London, Leigh took a break from television and returned to the radio station 5DN and hosted a radio show.
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Original:  During this time he was the Network's Chief Olympic Corresondent .
Revised:  During this time he was the network's chief Olympic correspondent .
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Original:  Leigh joined Sky News Australia in 2000 as a presenter of First Edition with Sharon McKenzie and later Nina May on weekdays.
Revised:  Hatcher joined Sky News Australia in 2000 as a presenter of First Edition with Sharon McKenzie and later Nina May on weekdays.
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Original:  In January 2013, Hatcher finished presenting First Edition and was appointed news presenter on PM Agenda.
Revised:  In January 2013, he finished presenting First Edition and was appointed news presenter on PM Agenda.
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Original:  In June 2013, Hatcher resigned from Sky News.
Revised:  In June 2013, he resigned from Sky News.
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Original:  On 11 November 1975 Leigh was one of the journalists present at Former Prime Minister Whitlam's dismissal speech.
Revised:  On 11 November 1975 Leigh was one of the journalists present at former prime minister Whitlam's dismissal speech.
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Original:  On 27 March 2011 Sheridan Voysey,  of national radio program Open House, announced that Leigh Hatcher would serve as his replacement.
Revised:  On 27 March 2011 Sheridan Voysey, presenter of national radio program Open House, announced that Leigh Hatcher would serve as his replacement.
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Original:  On 27 March 2011 Sheridan Voysey,  of national radio program Open House, announced that Leigh Hatcher would serve as his replacement.
Revised:  On 27 March 2011 Sheridan Voysey, of national radio program Open House, announced Hatcher would serve as his replacement.
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Original:  Leigh is married with four children and three grandchildren.
Revised:  He is married with four children and three grandchildren.
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Original:  He wrote a best-selling book about the experience, ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' . Writing career Hatcher has written three books – ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' , and two books from the Open House radio program.
Revised:  He wrote a best-selling book about the experience, I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' . Writing career Hatcher has written three books – ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' , and two books from the Open House radio program.
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Original:  He wrote a best-selling book about the experience, ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' . Writing career Hatcher has written three books – ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' , and two books from the Open House radio program.
Revised:  He wrote a best-selling book about the experience, ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell . Writing career Hatcher has written three books – ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' , and two books from the Open House radio program.
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Original:  He wrote a best-selling book about the experience, ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' . Writing career Hatcher has written three books – ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' , and two books from the Open House radio program.
Revised:  He wrote a best-selling book about the experience, ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' . Writing career Hatcher has written three books – I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' , and two books from the Open House radio program.
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Original:  He wrote a best-selling book about the experience, ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' . Writing career Hatcher has written three books – ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' , and two books from the Open House radio program.
Revised:  He wrote a best-selling book about the experience, ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell ' . Writing career Hatcher has written three books – ' I'm Not Crazy, I'm Just A Little Unwell , and two books from the Open House radio program.
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Original:  Hondurans are people of mixed race that descend from the Spanish people, mainly from Andalusians, Galicians, Valencians, Catalans, Canaries, Extremadurans and in a minority with other peoples of present-day Spain and various tribes and ethnic groups of indigenous peoples that belonged to Mesoamerica such as the Mayas and Lencas, as well as Afro-Caribbean peoples.
Revised:  Hondurans are people of mixed race that descend from the Spanish people, mainly from Andalusians, Galicians, Valencians, Catalans, Canaries, Extremadurans and in a minority with other of present-day Spain and various tribes and ethnic groups of indigenous peoples that belonged to Mesoamerica such as the Mayas and Lencas, as well as Afro-Caribbean peoples.
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Original: Genetics Other research has found that the genetic makeup of Honduran mestizos is as follows: European Indigenous African Study Year source44 ,5 \% 45 ,0 \% 10,3 \%Reconstructing the Population Genetic History of the Caribbean2013PLoS Genetics<ref name="Moreno-Estrada et al, 2013">Moreno-Estrada, A., Gravel, S., Zakharia, F., McCauley, J. L., Byrnes, J. K., Gignoux, C. R., Bustamante, C. D. et al. (2013).
Revised: Genetics Other research has found that the genetic makeup of Honduran mestizos is as follows: European Indigenous African Study Year source44 ,5 \% 45 ,0 \% 5,0 \%Reconstructing the Population Genetic History of the Caribbean2013PLoS Genetics<ref name="Moreno-Estrada et al, 2013">Moreno-Estrada, A., Gravel, S., Zakharia, F., McCauley, J. L., Byrnes, J. K., Gignoux, C. R., Bustamante, C. D. et al. (2013).
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Original: History of natural landscape No  place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
Revised: History of natural landscape From Earth's formation, the world's most notable natural landscapes have evolved in tectonic uplifts and climatic perturbations through different intervals of time, with the procession of mountains, deserts, forests, grasslands, shrublands, tundras, riverscapes, banks, lakes, wetlands, volcanoes, plateaus, fjords, canyons, karsts, ice sheets, islands and coasts. They have allowed plants and animals to evolve, thrive and adapt in environments and humans to live in natural habitats with the connection of harmony giving conservation for nature to survive, in the traditional livelihood strategies of fishing, hunting, agriculture, subsistence and sedentism. place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
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Original: History of natural landscape No  place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
Revised: History of natural landscape No Though no place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
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Original:  Though no place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
Revised:  No place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
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Original:  However, in the twenty-first century landscapes that are totally untouched by human activity no longer exist, so that reference is sometimes now made to degrees of naturalness within a landscape.
Revised:  However, in the 21st century, landscapes that are totally untouched by human activity no longer exist, so that reference is sometimes now made to degrees of naturalness within a landscape.
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Original: History of natural landscape No  place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
Revised: History of natural landscape Through periodical intervals of time, the diversity of natural landscapes have shaped geographical forces in the movement of tectonic uplifts and climatic perturbations by means of the procession of mountains, valleys, deserts, forests, grasslands, shrublands, tundras, watercourses, wetlands, volcanoes, plateaus, fjords, canyons, karsts, ice sheets, islands and coasts, which have allowed plants and animals to evolve, thrive and adapt as well as the natives to live in environmental habitats connecting harmony and giving conservation for nature to survive, within the traditional livelihood strategies of fishing, hunting, agriculture, subsistence and sedentism. place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
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Original: History of natural landscape No  place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
Revised: History of natural landscape No However, no place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
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Original:  However, no place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
Revised:  No place on the Earth is unaffected by people and their culture.
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Original:  Examples of cultural forces Cultural forces intentionally or unintentionally, have an influence upon the landscape.
Revised: Evolution The diversity of natural landscapes have evolved through different intervals of time, most likely due to the procession of natural forces that have shaped the environment. Examples of cultural forces Cultural forces intentionally or unintentionally, have an influence upon the landscape.
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Original: Evolution The diversity of natural landscapes have evolved through different intervals of time, most likely due to the procession of natural forces that have shaped the environment.
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Original:  The first human microsurgical transplantation of the second toe to thumb was performed in February 1966 by Dr. Dong-yue Yang and Yu-dong Gu, in Shanghai China. great toe (big toe) to thumb was performed in April 1968 by Mr . John Cobbett, in England.
Revised:  The first human microsurgical transplantation of the second toe to thumb was performed in February 1966 by Dr. Dong-yue Yang and Yu-dong Gu, in Shanghai China. great toe (big toe) to thumb was performed in April 1968 by Dr . John Cobbett, in England.
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Original:  In this way, every attempt will be made to salvage an amputated thumb, since a great deal of hand function is dependent on the thumb, while an index finger or small finger may not be replanted, depending on the individual needs of the patient and the ability of the patient to tolerate a long surgery and a long course of rehabilitation.
Revised:  In this way, every attempt will be made to salvage an amputated thumb, since a great deal of hand function is dependent on the thumb, while an index finger or small finger might not be replanted, depending on the individual needs of the patient and the ability of the patient to tolerate a long surgery and a long course of rehabilitation.
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Original:  Microsurgical techniques are utilized by several specialties today, such as: general surgery, ophthalmology, orthopedic surgery, gynecological surgery, otolaryngology, neurosurgery, oral and maxillofacial surgery, plastic surgery, podiatric surgery and pediatric surgery. 
Revised:  Microsurgical techniques are utilized by several specialties today, such as: general surgery, ophthalmology, orthopedic surgery, gynecological surgery, otolaryngology, neurosurgery, oral and maxillofacial surgery, plastic surgery, podiatric surgery and pediatric surgery. NUT
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Original:  In 1964, Buncke reported a rabbit ear replantation, famously using a garage as a lab/operating theatre and home-made instruments .
Revised:  In 1964, Buncke reported a rabbit ear replantation, famously using a garage as a lab/operating theatre and home-made instruments 
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Original:  17 August 1939 – 09 October 2021) (NI(m), HI(m), SI(m), SBt), best known as Feroze Khan, is a retired four-star air officer in the Pakistan Air Force who served as the Chairman Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, appointed in 1994 and retiring in 1997.
Revised:  17 August 1939 – 09 October 2021) (NI(m), HI(m), SI(m), SBt), best known as Feroze Khan, was a four-star air officer in the Pakistan Air Force who served as the Chairman Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, appointed in 1994 and retiring in 1997.
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Original: Pakistani flying aces Category:Pakistani military personnel of the Indo-Pakistani War of 1971 Category:Pilots of the Indo-Pakistani War of 1971 Category:Pakistani expatriates in the United Arab Emirates Category:Pakistan Air Force air marshals Category:Pakistan International Airlines people Category:Chiefs of Air Staff, Pakistan Category:Chairmen Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee Category:Pakistan Hockey Federation presidents Category:People from Mumbai Category: Living people Category:St.
Revised: Pakistani flying aces Category:Pakistani military personnel of the Indo-Pakistani War of 1971 Category:Pilots of the Indo-Pakistani War of 1971 Category:Pakistani expatriates in the United Arab Emirates Category:Pakistan Air Force air marshals Category:Pakistan International Airlines people Category:Chiefs of Air Staff, Pakistan Category:Chairmen Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee Category:Pakistan Hockey Federation presidents Category:People from Mumbai Category: Muhajir people Category:St.
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Original:  17 August 1939 – 09 October 2021) (NI(m), HI(m), SI(m), SBt), best known as Feroze Khan, was a four-star air officer in the Pakistan Air Force who served as the Chairman Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, appointed in 1994 and retiring in 1997.
Revised:  17 August 1939 – 9 October 2021) (NI(m), HI(m), SI(m), SBt), best known as Feroze Khan, was a four-star air officer in the Pakistan Air Force who served as the Chairman Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee, appointed in 1994 and retiring in 1997.
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Original:  He is the only Air Force general to be appointed as a Chairman joint chiefs to date.
Revised:  He is the only Air Force general to be appointed a Chairman joint chiefs to date.
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Original:  Upon completing the pilot training program from the USAF Academy, Feroze gained commissioned as a P/Off. in the No. 9 Squadron Griffins of the Air Force in January 1959.
Revised:  Upon completing the pilot training program from the USAF Academy, Feroze gained commission as a P/Off. in the No. 9 Squadron Griffins of the Air Force in January 1959.
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Original:  Feroze was among the first group of fighter pilot who were sent to France for their conversion from American F-104 to French Mirage-III.
Revised:  Feroze was among the first group of fighter pilots who were sent to France for their conversion from American F-104 to French Mirage-III.
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Original:  Feroze, now flying the Mirage-III, took participation in a preemptive airstrikes in India, which eventually led to the third war with India.
Revised:  Feroze, now flying the Mirage-III, participated in preemptive airstrikes in India, which eventually led to the third war with India.
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Original:  Feroze was promoted to the two-star promotion when Air Vice-Marshal Feroze was appointed as AOC of the Southern Air Command based in Karachi, and later as the Central Air Command based in Sargodha.
Revised:  Feroze was promoted to the two-star promotion when Air Vice-Marshal Feroze was appointed AOC of the Southern Air Command based in Karachi, and later as the Central Air Command based in Sargodha.
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Original:  In 1988, Air Vice Marshal Feroze, serving as the DCAS (Operations) was elevated to the three-star promotion when he was appointed as the Vice Chief of Air Staff (VCAS) under ACM Hakeemullah Durrani.
Revised:  In 1988, Air Vice Marshal Feroze, serving as the DCAS (Operations) was elevated to the three-star promotion when he was appointed the Vice Chief of Air Staff (VCAS) under ACM Hakeemullah Durrani.
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Original:  During this time, Air-Marshal Feroze took interests and participation in board of inquiry that investigated the mysterious circumstances involving in the death of President Zia-ul-Haq.
Revised:  During this time, Air-Marshal Feroze took an interest and participated in board of inquiry that investigated the mysterious circumstances involving in the death of President Zia-ul-Haq.
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Original:  During this time, Air-Marshal Feroze took interests and participation in board of inquiry that investigated the mysterious circumstances involving in the death of President Zia-ul-Haq.
Revised:  During this time, Air-Marshal Feroze took interests and participation in board of inquiry that investigated the mysterious circumstances involved in the death of President Zia-ul-Haq.
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Original:  Feroze was taken as secondment by Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto as the Managing-Director of the Pakistan International Airlines, which he managed until 1991.
Revised:  Feroze was taken on secondment by Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto as the Managing-Director of the Pakistan International Airlines, which he managed until 1991.
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Original:  During this time, he launched the program to acquire the license to reproduced the Australian Mirage-III and induction of F-7P from China at the Pakistan Aeronautical Complex (PAC).
Revised:  During this time, he launched the program to acquire the license to reproduce the Australian Mirage-III and induction of F-7P from China at the Pakistan Aeronautical Complex (PAC).
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Original:  Shamim Allam on 8 November 1994, Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto approved ACM Feroze to be elevated as the Chairman Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee– this was the first time when the chairmanship was rotated to the Air Force since its inception in 1976.
Revised:  Shamim Allam on 8 November 1994, Prime Minister Benazir Bhutto approved ACM Feroze to be elevated as the Chairman Joint Chiefs of Staff Committee– this was the first time the chairmanship was rotated to the Air Force since its inception in 1976.
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Original:  As Chairman joint chiefs, ACM Feroze attempted to procured the MiG-29F and the Su-27 aircraft from the Eastern Europe as well as Mirage 2000 from Qatar, in a view of replacing the F-16s but this was met with strong opposition from ACM Khattak, the air chief, who was unimpressed with the war performances of Russian fighter jets.
Revised:  As Chairman joint chiefs, ACM Feroze attempted to procure the MiG-29F and the Su-27 aircraft from the Eastern Europe as well as Mirage 2000 from Qatar, in a view of replacing the F-16s but this was met with strong opposition from ACM Khattak, the air chief, who was unimpressed with the war performances of Russian fighter jets.
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