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Original: On Friday,  lower house of  , parliament voted in favour of legalising same-sex marriage .
Revised: On Friday, lower house of , voted in favour of legalising same-sex marriage .
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Original: On Friday,  lower house of  , parliament voted in favour of legalising same-sex marriage .
Revised: On Friday, lower house of , parliament voted in favour of legalising .
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Original:  With 393 members voting for legalising same-sex marriage, four members abstained leaving 226 "against " votes.
Revised:  With 393 members voting for legalising same-sex marriage, four members abstained leaving 226 against votes.
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Original:  German chancellor Angela Merkel, on Monday , said she would allow parliamentarians to vote on their own "conscience" , and of the , on the next day, asked for the voting before the election.
Revised:  German chancellor Angela Merkel, on Monday , said she would allow parliamentarians to vote their own , and of the , on the next day, asked for the voting before the election.
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Original:  German chancellor Angela Merkel, on Monday , said she would allow parliamentarians to vote on their own "conscience" , and of the , on the next day, asked for the voting before the election.
Revised:  German chancellor Angela Merkel, on Monday , said she would allow parliamentarians to vote on their own "conscience" , and of the , on the next day, asked for voting before the election.
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Original:  She had voted against the same-sex marriage, she told the media  explaining her "basic beliefs" considered marriage between "man and woman" only.
Revised:  She voted against same-sex marriage, she told the media explaining her "basic beliefs" considered marriage between "man and woman" only.
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Original:  She had voted against the same-sex marriage, she told the media  explaining her "basic beliefs" considered marriage between "man and woman" only.
Revised:  She had voted against the same-sex marriage, she told the media , explaining her "basic beliefs" considered marriage between "man and woman" only.
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Original:  After the voting, Germany's capital football club tweeted and hoisted the rainbow coloured flag — symbol of LGBT community.
Revised:  After the voting, Germany's capital football club tweeted and hoisted the rainbow-coloured flag — symbol of LGBT community.
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Original:  After the voting, Germany's capital football club tweeted and hoisted the rainbow coloured flag — symbol of LGBT community.
Revised:  After the voting, Germany's capital football club tweeted and hoisted the rainbow coloured flag — a symbol of the LGBT community.
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Original:  Other countries in Europe where same-sex marriage is legal includes Portugal, Spain, France, Belgium, Netherlands, Finland, Norway, Sweden, Iceland and whole of the United Kingdom except Northern Ireland
Revised:  Other countries in Europe where same-sex marriage is legal include Portugal, Spain, France, Belgium, Netherlands, Finland, Norway, Sweden, Iceland and whole of the United Kingdom except Northern Ireland
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Original:  Other countries in Europe where same-sex marriage is legal includes Portugal, Spain, France, Belgium, Netherlands, Finland, Norway, Sweden, Iceland and whole of the United Kingdom except Northern Ireland
Revised:  Other countries in Europe where same-sex marriage is legal includes Portugal, Spain, France, Belgium, Netherlands, Finland, Norway, Sweden, Iceland , and the whole of the United Kingdom except Northern Ireland
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Original: On Friday, the lower house of the , the parliament, voted in favour of legalising .
Revised: On Friday, the , the parliament, voted in favour of legalising .
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Original:  The bill was passed on the last day before the parliament called for summer break.
Revised:  The bill was passed on the last day before the parliament 's summer break.
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Original:  After the voting, Germany's capital football club tweeted  and hoisted the rainbow-coloured flag — a symbol of the LGBT community.
Revised:  After the voting, Germany's capital football club tweeted , and hoisted the rainbow-coloured flag — a symbol of the LGBT community.
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Original:  Other countries in Europe where same-sex marriage is legal include Portugal, Spain, France, Belgium, Netherlands, Finland, Norway, Sweden, Iceland,  and the whole of the United Kingdom except Northern Ireland
Revised:  Other countries in Europe where same-sex marriage is legal include Portugal, Spain, France, Belgium, Netherlands, Finland, Norway, Sweden, Iceland, Ireland, and the whole of the United Kingdom except Northern Ireland
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Original:  In April, the 36-yeal-old defender had announced his desire to leave his boyhood club, Chelsea  after his contract ended with the London-based club.
Revised:  In April, the 36-yeal-old defender announced his desire to leave his boyhood club, Chelsea after his contract ended with the London-based club.
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Original:  In April, the 36-yeal-old defender had announced his desire to leave his boyhood club, Chelsea  after his contract ended with the London-based club.
Revised:  In April, the 36-yeal-old defender had announced his desire to leave his boyhood club, Chelsea , after his contract ended with the London-based club.
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Original:  He has won and the five times, thrice, and one each of UEFA Champions League and .
Revised:  He has won the and five times, thrice, and one each of UEFA Champions League and .
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Original:  His contract with Chelsea expired on Friday , June 30
Revised:  His contract with Chelsea expired on Friday 
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Original:  Only and has more caps than Terry.
Revised:  Only and have more caps than Terry.
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Original:  Terry said he did not want to play against Chelsea, and hence joined Aston Villa, who are in the — second tier of the English football.
Revised:  Terry said he did not want to play against Chelsea, and hence joined Aston Villa, who are in the — second tier of English football.
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Original:  Terry has been assigned jersey number 26, 5he number he wore on his back in his entire professional career.
Revised:  Terry has been assigned jersey number 26, the number he wore on his back in his entire professional career.
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Original: Terry said he did not want to play against Chelsea, and hence joined Aston Villa, who are in the — second tier of English football.
Revised: Terry said he did not want to play against Chelsea, and hence joined Aston Villa, who are in the , the second tier of English football.
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Original:  The decision comes after Volvo announced in May that they intended to cease production of diesel vehicles.
Revised:  The decision comes after Volvo announced in May their intent to cease production of diesel vehicles.
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Original:  While little has yet been revealed about them, the company has stated that two of them are to be high-performance electric vehicles, badged as Polestars.
Revised:  While little has yet been revealed about them, the company has stated two of them are to be high-performance electric vehicles, badged as Polestars.
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Original:  Volvo has also said that all other new car models from 2019 are to either use a plug-in hybrid or a 48-volt "" system. and are also releasing mild hybrid cars in Europe.
Revised:  Volvo has also said all other new car models from 2019 are to either use a plug-in hybrid or a 48-volt "" system. and are also releasing mild hybrid cars in Europe.
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Original:  Volvo Cars has stated that it plans to have sold a total of 1m electrified cars by 2025.
Revised:  Volvo Cars has stated it plans to have sold a total of 1m electrified cars by 2025.
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Original: The chief executive of Volvo Cars  said, "People increasingly demand electrified cars".
Revised: The chief executive of Volvo Cars , , said, "People increasingly demand electrified cars".
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Original:  While little has yet been revealed about them, the company has stated two of them are to be high-performance electric vehicles, badged as Polestars.
Revised:  While little has yet been revealed about them, the company has stated two of them are to be high-performance electric vehicles, branded as Polestars.
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Original:  Volvo Cars has stated  it plans to have sold a total of 1m electrified cars by 2025.
Revised:  Volvo Cars has stated that it plans to have sold a total of 1m electrified cars by 2025.
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Original:  Volvo is owned by Chinese automotive giant , and China's Ministry of Industry and Information Technology has said by 2025 they want new vehicle sales to be 20 percent "new energy vehicles" , which comes out to be around seven million electric vehicles and hybrids
Revised:  Volvo is owned by Chinese automotive giant , and China's Ministry of Industry and Information Technology has said by 2025 they want new vehicle sales to be 20 percent "new energy vehicles" 
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Original:  Volvo is owned by Chinese automotive giant , and China's Ministry of Industry and Information Technology has said by 2025 they want new vehicle sales to be 20 percent "new energy vehicles"  
Revised:  Volvo is owned by Chinese automotive giant , and China's Ministry of Industry and Information Technology has said by 2025 they want new vehicle sales to be 20 percent "new energy vehicles" . 
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Original:  Volvo is owned by Chinese automotive giant , and China's Ministry of Industry and Information Technology has said by 2025 they want new vehicle sales to be 20 percent "new energy vehicles" .
Revised:  Volvo is owned by Chinese automotive giant , and China's Ministry of Industry and Information Technology has said by 2025 they want new vehicle sales to be 20 percent "new energy vehicles" 
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Original: Rooney joined Everton at the age of nine , and made his professional debut in 2002 when he was sixteen year old.
Revised: Rooney joined Everton when he was nine years old , and made his professional debut in 2002 when he was sixteen year old.
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Original: Rooney joined Everton at the age of nine , and made his professional debut in 2002 when he was sixteen year old.
Revised: Rooney joined Everton at the age of nine , and made his professional debut in 2002 when he was sixteen years old.
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Original:  He scored seventeen goals  in 77 appearances with Everton before he made a move to the in 2004.
Revised:  He scored seventeen goals in 77 appearances before he moved to the in 2004.
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Original:  The record goal scorer with the Red Devils and English football team played 559 games in the United jersey, netting 253 goals.
Revised:  The record goal scorer with United and with the English football team played 559 games in the United jersey, netting 253 goals.
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Original:  The record goal scorer with United and with the English football team played 559 games in the United jersey , netting 253 goals .
Revised:  The record goal scorer with United and with the English football team netted 253 goals in 559 games in the United jersey , netting 253 goals .
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Original:  The record goal scorer with United and with the English football team played 559 games in the United jersey , netting 253 goals .
Revised:  The record goal scorer with United and with the English football team played 559 games in the United jersey .
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Original:  He has won five titles, three , and one each of UEFA Champions League, and one .
Revised:  He has won five titles, three , a UEFA Champions League, and one .
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Original:  He has won five titles, three , and one each of UEFA Champions League, and one .
Revised:  He has won five titles, three , and one each of UEFA Champions League, an , and an .
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Original:  He has won five titles, three , a UEFA Champions League, an , and an . He also collected the winners  medal after Manchester United won the in May.
Revised:  He has won five titles, three , a UEFA Champions League, an , and an . He also collected the winners ' medal after Manchester United won the in May.
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Original: Rooney wore Manchester's jersey for thirteen seasons, and was club's top scorer of the season at five occasions.
Revised: Rooney wore Manchester's jersey for thirteen seasons, and was club's top scorer of the season on five occasions.
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Original: Flooding hits Nakhon Sri Thammarat 290px Moderate flooding has hit the province of Nakhon Sri Thammarat in southern Thailand.
Revised:  290px Moderate flooding has hit the province of Nakhon Sri Thammarat in southern Thailand.
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Original:  "People in the lower South and navigators in the Gulf of Thailand should exercise caution and small boats should stay from December 15 until December 18
Revised:  "People in the lower South and navigators in the Gulf of Thailand should exercise caution and small boats should stay from December 15 until December 18.
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Original:   The Meteorological Department of the Thailand Ministry of Information and Communication Technology has issued a weather advisory concerning the flooding . "People in the lower South and navigators in the Gulf of Thailand should exercise caution and small boats should stay from December 15 until December 18.  
Revised:  The Meteorological Department of the Thailand Ministry of Information and Communication Technology issued a weather advisory concerning the flooding . "People in the lower South and navigators in the Gulf of Thailand should exercise caution and small boats should stay from December 15 until December 18. 
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Original:   The Meteorological Department of the Thailand Ministry of Information and Communication Technology has issued a weather advisory concerning the flooding . "People in the lower South and navigators in the Gulf of Thailand should exercise caution and small boats should stay from December 15 until December 18.  
Revised:  The Meteorological Department of the Thailand Ministry of Information and Communication Technology has issued a weather advisory concerning the flooding , "People in the lower South and navigators in the Gulf of Thailand should exercise caution and small boats should stay from December 15 until December 18. 
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Original:  Moderate to heavy rain persists in the are further exacerbating the flooding conditions.
Revised:  Moderate to heavy rain persists in the area, further exacerbating the flooding conditions.
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Original:  All of FC Bayern's financial demands have been met"  
Revised:  All of FC Bayern's financial demands have been met" . 
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Original:  Bayern may receive an additional €1 million subject to the conditions in the contract.
Revised:  Bayern may receive an additional €1 million subject to conditions in the contract.
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Original: 26-year-old Douglas Costa joined the German Giants in 2015 under Pep Guardiola's management from Ukrainian club .
Revised: 26-year-old Douglas Costa joined Bayern in 2015 under Pep Guardiola's management from Ukrainian club .
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Original:  He won two consecutive Bundesliga titles, and , and one .
Revised:  He won two consecutive Bundesliga titles, a , and a .
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Original: 31-year-old Berdych is to play the semi-final against Swiss talisman and seven time Wimbledon Singles Champion Roger Federer.
Revised: 31-year-old Berdych was therefore to play the semi-final against Swiss talisman and seven time Wimbledon Singles Champion Roger Federer.
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Original: 31-year-old Berdych was therefore to play the semi-final against Swiss talisman and seven time Wimbledon Singles Champion Roger Federer.
Revised: 31-year-old Berdych therefore advanced to play the semi-final against Swiss talisman and seven time Wimbledon Singles Champion Roger Federer.
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Original: On Wednesday, three-time winner Novak Djokovic withdrew from this year's tournament after suffering from an elbow injury.
Revised: On Wednesday, three-time winner Novak Djokovic withdrew from this year's tournament suffering from an elbow injury.
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Original: 31-year-old Berdych therefore advanced to play the semi-final against Swiss talisman and seven time Wimbledon Singles Champion Roger Federer.
Revised: 31-year-old Berdych therefore advanced to play the semi-final against Swiss seven-time Wimbledon Singles Champion Roger Federer.
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Original: In the press conference, Djokovic said, "It's unfortunate that I had to finish Wimbledon, a grand slam, this way [...] I mean, if someone feels bad about it, it's me.
Revised:  Djokovic said, "It's unfortunate that I had to finish Wimbledon, a grand slam, this way [...] I mean, if someone feels bad about it, it's me.
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Original: Djokovic's pre-quarterfinal against was rescheduled to Tuesday, as the 30-year-old Serbian had to play two matches in two days.
Revised: Djokovic's pre-quarterfinal against was rescheduled to Tuesday, so the 30-year-old Serbian had to play two matches in two days.
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Original:  Djokovic was two sets down with the scoreboard 7–6 2–0 when the world number two decided to stop despite Djokovic leads their head-to-head record, 25–2.
Revised:  Djokovic was two sets down with the scoreboard 7–6 2–0 when world number-two Djokovic decided to stop despite Djokovic leads their head-to-head record, 25–2.
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Original:  Djokovic was two sets down with the scoreboard 7–6 2–0 when the world number two decided to stop despite Djokovic leads their head-to-head record, 25–2.
Revised:  Djokovic was two sets down with the scoreboard 7–6 2–0 when the world number two decided to stop despite leading their head-to-head record, 25–2.
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Original:  As the magnetic disruption from a sunspot approaches Earth, it can intensify the but it also dings the performance of satellites and power grids.
Revised:  Times of high activity are also the most likely time for , which often emanate from sunspot regions. On rare occasions these eruptions of plasma may hit the Earth's magnetic field, setting it oscillating. It then releases previously trapped particles as the . Very occasionally the effects are so intense that these charged particles and magnetic effects can ding the performance of satellites and power grids.
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Original:  Previous research had suggested that there were two different branches of solar type stars, and placed our sun in an uneasy and hard to explain transition state between these two branches.
Revised:  Previous research had suggested there were two different branches of solar type stars, and placed our sun in an uneasy and hard to explain transition state between these two branches.
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Original:  They modeled seven different types of star, differing in rotation period and a parameter that describes how they convect heat (Table S1 of the article, see the arxiv.org preprint), and then calculated various parameters for the models including the luminosity, cycle length and the Rossby number.
Revised:  They modeled seven different types of star, differing in rotation period and a parameter that describes how they convect heat , and then calculated various parameters for the models including the luminosity, cycle length and the Rossby number.
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Original:  They modeled seven different types of star, differing in rotation period and a parameter that describes how they convect heat (Table S1 of the article, see the arxiv.org preprint), and then calculated various parameters for the models including the luminosity, cycle length and the Rossby number.
Revised:  They modeled seven different types of star, differing in rotation period and a parameter that describes how they convect heat (Table S1 of the article, see the arxiv.org preprint), and then calculated various parameters for the models including the luminosity, cycle length , and Rossby number.
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Original:  However they found a new correlation from their luminosity calculations, that the cycle is shorter for slightly brighter stars - these were stars that were brighter only because of increased convection.
Revised:  However they found a new correlation from their luminosity calculations, that the cycle is shorter for slightly brighter stars — these were stars that were brighter only because of increased convection.
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Original:  They did these calculations for 27 previously studied stars (Table S2) . When they plotted these on a graph ( of cycle length against rotation period ) along with their modeled stars, and adjusted for luminosity, they found that the empirically observed stars all lay in a broad diagonal band on the graph, with the model stars at the top of the band (figure 2D of the paper) .
Revised:  They did these calculations for 27 previously studied stars . When they plotted these on a graph ( of cycle length against rotation period ) along with their modeled stars, and adjusted for luminosity, they found that the empirically observed stars all lay in a broad diagonal band on the graph, with the model stars at the top of the band (figure 2D of the paper) .
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Original:  They did these calculations for 27 previously studied stars (Table S2) . When they plotted these on a graph ( of cycle length against rotation period ) along with their modeled stars, and adjusted for luminosity, they found that the empirically observed stars all lay in a broad diagonal band on the graph, with the model stars at the top of the band (figure 2D of the paper) .
Revised:  They did these calculations for 27 previously studied stars (Table S2) . When they plotted these on a graph of cycle length against rotation period ) along with their modeled stars, and adjusted for luminosity, they found that the empirically observed stars all lay in a broad diagonal band on the graph, with the model stars at the top of the band (figure 2D of the paper) .
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Original:  They did these calculations for 27 previously studied stars (Table S2) . When they plotted these on a graph ( of cycle length against rotation period ) along with their modeled stars, and adjusted for luminosity, they found that the empirically observed stars all lay in a broad diagonal band on the graph, with the model stars at the top of the band (figure 2D of the paper) .
Revised:  They did these calculations for 27 previously studied stars (Table S2) . When they plotted these on a graph ( of cycle length against rotation period along with their modeled stars, and adjusted for luminosity, they found that the empirically observed stars all lay in a broad diagonal band on the graph, with the model stars at the top of the band (figure 2D of the paper) .
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Original:  They did these calculations for 27 previously studied stars (Table S2) . When they plotted these on a graph ( of cycle length against rotation period ) along with their modeled stars, and adjusted for luminosity, they found that the empirically observed stars all lay in a broad diagonal band on the graph, with the model stars at the top of the band (figure 2D of the paper) .
Revised:  They did these calculations for 27 previously studied stars (Table S2) . When they plotted these on a graph ( of cycle length against rotation period ) along with their modeled stars, and adjusted for luminosity, they found that the empirically observed stars all lay in a broad diagonal band on the graph, with the model stars at the top of the band .
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Original:  This meant that the predicted luminosity and rotation rates of their models were in correlated with the cycle length in the same way as the observed stars.
Revised:  This meant the predicted luminosity and rotation rates of their models were in correlated with the cycle length in the same way as the observed stars.
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