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Original: Security experts have roundly criticized the program.
Revised: Security experts roundly criticized the program.
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Original:  A Lycos spokesperson said that  screenshot was a hoax: there was no trace of intrusion in the server log and  site was simply unavailable due to a high demand.
Revised:  A Lycos spokesperson said that the screenshot was a hoax: there was no trace of intrusion in the server log and site was simply unavailable due to a high demand.
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Original:  A Lycos spokesperson said that  screenshot was a hoax: there was no trace of intrusion in the server log and  site was simply unavailable due to a high demand.
Revised:  A Lycos spokesperson said that screenshot was a hoax: there was no trace of intrusion in the server log and the site was simply unavailable due to a high demand.
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Original:  However, Lycos stopped distributing the program on December 3, 2004 and asked clients to "stay tuned."
Revised:  Lycos stopped distributing the program on December 3, 2004 and asked clients to "stay tuned."
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Original:  Lycos coordinated these requests by choosing targets from lists generated by organizations such as Spamcom .com.
Revised:  Lycos coordinated these requests by choosing targets from lists generated by organizations such as Spamcop .com.
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Original:  The troubled operation drew criticism from security experts and others from the start.
Revised:  The reasons why it ended the campaign was variously reported and speculated in media. The operation, while fairly popular, suffered unexpected troubles and drew criticism from security experts and others from the start.
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Original: Thursday night the House of Representatives votes to renew several provisions of the Patriot Act which was established after  9/ 11. The final vote was 257-171, this now makes 14 or the 16 original provisions of the patriot act permanent and will extend the other two for an additional 10 years.
Revised: The U.S. House of Representatives votes to renew several provisions of the Patriot Act which was established after 9/ 11. The final vote was 257-171, this now makes 14 or the 16 original provisions of the patriot act permanent and will extend the other two for an additional 10 years.
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Original: Thursday night the House of Representatives votes to renew several provisions of the Patriot Act which was established after  9/ 11. The final vote was 257-171, this now makes 14 or the 16 original provisions of the patriot act permanent and will extend the other two for an additional 10 years.
Revised: Thursday night the House of Representatives voted Thursday night to renew several provisions of the Patriot Act which was established after 9/ 11. The final vote was 257-171, this now makes 14 or the 16 original provisions of the patriot act permanent and will extend the other two for an additional 10 years.
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Original: Thursday night the House of Representatives votes to renew several provisions of the Patriot Act which was established after  9/ 11. The final vote was 257-171, this now makes 14 or the 16 original provisions of the patriot act permanent and will extend the other two for an additional 10 years.
Revised: Thursday night the House of Representatives votes to renew several provisions of the Patriot Act which was established after the 9/ 11. The final vote was 257-171, this now makes 14 or the 16 original provisions of the patriot act permanent and will extend the other two for an additional 10 years.
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Original:  The two provisions which were only extended for 10 years have been called unconstitutional by  civil liberties advocates as well as several law makers from both the right and left.
Revised:  The two provisions which were only extended for 10 years have been called unconstitutional by some civil liberties advocates as well as several law makers from both the right and left.
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Original:  However,  Bush as well as several GOP members say that the provisions have been used judiciously and that the provisions key tools needed to fight terrorism.
Revised:  However, President Bush as well as several GOP members say that the provisions have been used judiciously and that the provisions key tools needed to fight terrorism.
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Original:  However,  Bush as well as several GOP members say that the provisions have been used judiciously and that the provisions key tools needed to fight terrorism.
Revised:  However, Bush as well as several Republican members of Congress say that the provisions have been used judiciously and that the provisions key tools needed to fight terrorism.
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Original:  However,  Bush as well as several GOP members say that the provisions have been used judiciously and that the provisions key tools needed to fight terrorism.
Revised:  However, Bush as well as several GOP members say that the provisions have been used judiciously and provide key tools needed to fight terrorism.
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Original:  The Senate has concrete it's own reauthorization of the Patriot Act and the differences between the two revisions would be hashed out in a conference committee in the coming months .
Revised:  The U.S. Senate's reauthorization of the Patriot Act and the differences between the two revisions would be hashed out in a conference committee in the coming months .
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Original:  Both bills heda to conference committee to be combined into one cohesive law.
Revised:  Both bills head to conference committee to be combined into one cohesive law.
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Original:  And part of our job is to collect intelligence, look at it, analyze it, and if it's a problem that relates to a security system at a local level, we'll let you know as quickly as possible." 07-20-05 The U.S. House of Representatives voted Thursday night to renew several provisions of the Patriot Act which was established after the 9/11 terrorist attacks.
Revised:  And part of our job is to collect intelligence, look at it, analyze it, and if it's a problem that relates to a security system at a local level, we'll let you know as quickly as possible." 2005-07-20 The U.S. House of Representatives voted Thursday night to renew several provisions of the Patriot Act which was established after the 9/11 terrorist attacks.
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Original:  The final vote was 257-171, this now makes 14 of the 16 original provisions of the patriot act permanent and will extend the other two for an additional 10 years.
Revised:  The final vote was 257-171, this now makes 14 of the 16 original provisions of the Patriot Act permanent and will extend the other two for an additional 10 years.
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Original:  "Everything has been knocked down - there is not a stone in place," he told CNN's Turkey sister network, CNN Turk . Rescue workers, consisting of policemen as well as civilians dug with shovels to rescue people from the debris.
Revised:  "Everything has been knocked down - there is not a stone in place," he told CNN's Turkey sister network, CNN Türk . Rescue workers, consisting of policemen as well as civilians dug with shovels to rescue people from the debris.
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Original:  The Red Crescent, from Turkey is also sending tents and blankets to be distributed.
Revised:  The Turkish Red Crescent is also sending tents and blankets to be distributed.
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Original:  Cemil Cicek, deputy Prime Minister of Turkey has left for the disaster belt .
Revised:  Cemil Cicek, deputy Prime Minister of Turkey has left for the disaster area .
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Original:  Health Minister Recep Akdag, Housing Minister Mustafa Demir and State Minister Cevdet Yilmaz accompany the former .
Revised:  Health Minister Recep Akdag, Housing Minister Mustafa Demir and State Minister Cevdet Yilmaz are accompanying him .
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Original:  According to CNN-Turk , the tremor of the earthquake was felt in the adjacent provinces of Bitlis and Diyarbakir, making the civilians panic.
Revised:  According to CNN Türk , the tremor of the earthquake was felt in the adjacent provinces of Bitlis and Diyarbakir, making the civilians panic.
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Original:  Most of the earthquakes that hit Turkey are , however, mino
Revised:  Most of the earthquakes that hit Turkey are usually minor
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Original: According to CNN Türk, the tremor of the earthquake was felt in the adjacent provinces of Bitlis and Diyarbakir, making the civilians panic.
Revised: According to CNN Türk, the tremor of the earthquake was felt in the adjacent provinces of Bitlis and Diyarbakir, causing residents to panic.
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Original:  Yadin Apaydin, administrator, Yukari Kanatli, said his village had been severely affected.
Revised:  Yadin Apaydin, the administrator of Yukari Kanatli, said his village had been severely affected.
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Original:  Some who panicked after the first quake jumped from balconies or windows are were injured.
Revised:  Some who panicked after the first quake jumped from balconies or windows were injured.
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Original:  Most of the earthquakes that hit Turkey are usually minor  
Revised:  Most of the earthquakes that hit Turkey are usually minor . 
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Original:  According to the text messages that had are on her mobile phone, she believed that she was departing to meet the father of "Peter Cartwright".
Revised:  According to the text messages that were on her mobile phone, she believed that she was departing to meet the father of "Peter Cartwright".
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Original: ]] A man has been jailed after being found guilty of the kidnapping, raping  and murdering of a girl in County Durham, England  after arranging to meet her on social networking website Facebook by befriending her and giving her a false identity.
Revised: ]] A man has been jailed after being found guilty of the kidnapping, raping , and murdering of a girl in County Durham, England after arranging to meet her on social networking website Facebook by befriending her and giving her a false identity.
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Original: ]] A man has been jailed after being found guilty of the kidnapping, raping  and murdering of a girl in County Durham, England  after arranging to meet her on social networking website Facebook by befriending her and giving her a false identity.
Revised: ]] A man has been jailed after being found guilty of the kidnapping, raping and murdering of a girl in County Durham, England , after arranging to meet her on social networking website Facebook by befriending her and giving her a false identity.
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Original:  33-year-old Peter Chapman, an unemployed man who has no fixed abode, went onto Facebook and in October 2009 was met on there by Ashleigh Hall, a 17-year-old girl who was a childcare student.
Revised:  33-year-old Peter Chapman, an unemployed man who has no fixed abode, went onto Facebook and in October 2009 was met there by Ashleigh Hall, a 17-year-old girl who was a childcare student.
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Original:  After initially meeting Hall on Facebook, Peter successfully attempted to convince the girl to meet him via several other social networking websites.
Revised:  After initially meeting Hall on Facebook, Peter convinced the girl to meet him via several other social networking websites.
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Original:  Reports said that Hall had notified her mother that she was going to visit one of her friends.
Revised:  Reports said Hall had notified her mother that she was going to visit one of her friends.
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Original:  He committed offences of kidnapping, raping and murdering the girl.
Revised:  He then kidnapped, raped, and murdered the girl.
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Original:  Peter Chapman was found guilty of offences of kidnap, rape  and murder.
Revised:  Peter Chapman was found guilty of offences of kidnap, rape , and murder.
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Original:  According to a Merseyside Police statement, the time gap between their realisation of Chapman's disappearance from his residence and the time when they issued a notice was nine months .
Revised:  According to a Merseyside Police statement, the notice wasn't issued until nine months after they realised Chapman had disappeared from his residence .
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Original:  According to the text messagesthat were on her mobile phone , she believed that she was departing to meet the father of "Peter Cartwright".
Revised:  According to text messages , she believed that she was departing to meet the father of "Peter Cartwright".
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Original:  33-year-old Peter Chapman, an unemployed man who has no fixed abode, went onto Facebook and in October 2009 was met there by Ashleigh Hall, a 17-year-old girl who was a childcare student .
Revised:  33-year-old Peter Chapman, an unemployed man who has no fixed abode, registered on Facebook and in October 2009 was met there by Ashleigh Hall, a 17-year-old girl who was a childcare student .
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Original:  33-year-old Peter Chapman, an unemployed man who has no fixed abode, went onto Facebook and in October 2009 was met there by Ashleigh Hall, a 17-year-old girl who was a childcare student .
Revised:  33-year-old Peter Chapman, an unemployed man who has no fixed abode, went onto Facebook and in October 2009 made contact with Ashleigh Hall, a 17-year-old girl who was a childcare student .
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Original:  On the website, Chapman assumed the identity of a teenaged boy named Peter Cartwright.
Revised:  On the website, Chapman assumed the identity of a teenage boy named Peter Cartwright.
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Original:  After initially meeting Hall on Facebook, Peter convinced the girl to meet him via several other social networking websites.
Revised:  Peter convinced the girl to meet him via several other social networking websites.
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Original:  According to a Merseyside Police statement, the notice wasn't issued until nine months after they realised Chapman had disappeared from his residence.
Revised:  According to a Merseyside Police statement, the notice was not issued until nine months after they realised Chapman had disappeared from his residence.
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Original:  The notice was issued in September 2009, a month before the murder of Hall . Ashleigh Hall's dead body was discovered in a field in the town of Sedgefield.
Revised:  The notice was issued in September 2009, a month before Hall's murder . Ashleigh Hall's dead body was discovered in a field in the town of Sedgefield.
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Original:  The police then followed him to the location of the dead body.
Revised:  The police then followed him to the location of the body.
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Original:  Andrea Hall, the mother of Ashleigh Hall , said outside of the courthouse: "Them sort of people shouldn't be allowed out into society anyway.
Revised:  Andrea Hall, the mother of Ashleigh , said outside of the courthouse: "Them sort of people shouldn't be allowed out into society anyway.
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Original:  Andrea Hall, the mother of Ashleigh Hall , said outside of the courthouse: "Them sort of people shouldn't be allowed out into society anyway.
Revised:  Andrea Hall, the mother of Ashleigh Hall , said outside the courthouse: "Them sort of people shouldn't be allowed out into society anyway.
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Original:   Chapman has been convicted in the past for previous offences.
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Original:  In 1996, he was given a seven-year jail sentence for the rape of two prostitutes.
Revised:  In 1996, Chapman was given a seven-year jail sentence for the rape of two prostitutes.
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Original:  Sky News (web) reported the same, but later reported that "initial examinations [...] did not discover any explosives on the suspect." BBC in London alerts: At-a-glance reports: Police say the man shot at Stockwell had been followed by surveillance officers because he had emerged from a house linked to the investigation into Thursday's blasts  
Revised:  Sky News (web) reported the same, but later reported that "initial examinations [...] did not discover any explosives on the suspect." BBC in London alerts: At-a-glance reports: Police say the man shot at Stockwell had been followed by surveillance officers because he had emerged from a house linked to the investigation into Thursday's blasts . 
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Original:    Police sources have indicated that the man who was shot had been followed covertly, and after he was confronted he ran off and was followed on foot by up to twenty police from street level into the Underground station.
Revised:  "For somebody to lose their life in such circumstances is a tragedy and one that the Metropolitan Police Service regrets." Police sources have indicated that the man who was shot had been followed covertly, and after he was confronted he ran off and was followed on foot by up to twenty police from street level into the Underground station.
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Original:   On Saturday 23rd MetropolitanPolice released a statement saying: "We believe we now know the identity of the man shot at Stockwell Underground station by police on Friday 22nd July 2005, although he is still subject to formal identification.
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Original:  "We are now satisfied that he was not connected with the incidents of Thursday 21st July 2005.
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Original: BBC Radio is reporting that armed police is surrounding a Mosque in east London because of "suspected packages".
Revised: BBC Radio is reporting that armed police is surrounding a Mosque in East London because of "suspected packages".
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Original:  A short time afterwards, this cordon was lifte
Revised:  A short time afterwards, this cordon was lifted
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Original: Brazil has announced, and the World Trade Organization  has approved, new trade sanctions on US goods, in response to illegal subsidies paid by the US government to American cotton growers.
Revised: Brazil has announced, and the World Trade Organization (WTO) has approved, new trade sanctions on US goods, in response to illegal subsidies paid by the US government to American cotton growers.
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Original:  Although a neighbor described him as "happy to be back at work," Brown 's time at Ohio State ended quickly.
Revised:  Although a neighbor described him as "happy to be back at work," Brown time at Ohio State ended quickly.
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Original:  The believed shooter was Nathaniel Brown, a 51 year old custodial worker who had worked at the university since October.
Revised:  The believed shooter was Nathaniel Brown, a 51 year old custodial worker who has worked at the university since October.
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Original:  Another employee, Henry Butler, was also shot, but was in stable condition  .
Revised:  Another employee, Henry Butler, was also shot, but survived and is in stable condition .
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Original:  Brown supposedly walked into a maintenance building with two handguns and began firing.
Revised:  Brown supposedly walked into a maintenance building with two handguns , and then commenced firing.
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Original:  Although a neighbor described him as "happy to be back at work," Brown time at Ohio State ended quickly.
Revised:  Although a neighbor described him as "happy to be back at work," Brown 's tenure at Ohio State ended quickly.
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Original:  Brown learned from a March 2 letter from the school that he would again be unemployed come March 13.
Revised:  Brown learned from a March 2 letter from the school that he was going to be let go as of March 13.
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Original:  The letter mentioned that he had gotten an "unsatisfactory" job evaluation
Revised:  The letter went on to say that he had gotten an "unsatisfactory" job evaluation
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Original:  An Ohio State University employee has been arrested for allegedly killing a co-worker before committing suicide on Tuesday morning.
Revised: File:OhioStateUniversityHall.jpg|Ohio State University main hall. An Ohio State University employee has been arrested for allegedly killing a co-worker before committing suicide on Tuesday morning.
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Original:  The suspect is Nathaniel Brown, a 51 year old custodial worker who has worked at the university since October.
Revised:  The suspect is Nathaniel Brown, a 51-year-old custodial worker who has worked at the university since October.
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Original:  The suspect is Nathaniel Brown, a 51 year old custodial worker who has worked at the university since October.
Revised:  The suspect is Nathaniel Brown, a 51 year old custodial worker who has worked at the University since October.
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Original:  The victim of the shooting was Larry Wallington, a 48 year old building service manager.
Revised:  The victim of the shooting was Larry Wallington, a 48-year-old building service manager.
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Original:  The letter  went on to say that he had gotten an "unsatisfactory" job evaluation
Revised:  The letter had went on to say that he had gotten an "unsatisfactory" job evaluation
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Original:  ]] An Ohio State University employee has been arrested for allegedly killing a co-worker before committing suicide on Tuesday morning.
Revised:  ]] An Ohio State University employee allegedly killed a co-worker before committing suicide on Tuesday morning.
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Original:  The suspect is Nathaniel Brown, a 51-year-old custodial worker who has worked at the University since October.
Revised:  The suspect was Nathaniel Brown, a 51-year-old custodial worker who has worked at the University since October.
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Original:  Brown  learned from a recent letter from the school that he was going to be let go as of March 13.
Revised:  Brown had learned from a recent letter from the school that he was going to be let go as of March 13.
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Original:  The letter had went on to say that  he had gotten an "unsatisfactory" job evaluation
Revised:  The letter went on to say that he had gotten an "unsatisfactory" job evaluation
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Original:  The letter went on to say that reason why was because he had gotten an "unsatisfactory" job evaluation 
Revised:  The letter went on to say that he had gotten an "unsatisfactory" job evaluation 
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Original: Aer Lingus, the Irish airline, has announced that it will cut about 230 staff in the near future in compulsory job losses, bringing the total number of layoffs from the airline to 670. 440 other workers will face voluntary job losses.
Revised: Aer Lingus, an Irish airline, has announced that it will cut about 230 staff in the near future in compulsory job losses, bringing the total number of layoffs from the airline to 670. 440 other workers will face voluntary job losses.
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Original:  Chief Executive Officer Christoph Mueller said the move would start "within days" and the airline would return to profitability relatively soon   "
Revised:  Chief Executive Officer Christoph Mueller said the move would start "within days" and the airline would return to profitability relatively soon ". "
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Original:  The labour union IMPACT, which represents cabin crew for Aer Lingus, is to meet with the airline's management tomorrow regarding the company's move, remarked that "broker a solution is extremely limited"  
Revised:  The labour union IMPACT, which represents cabin crew for Aer Lingus, is to meet with the airline's management tomorrow regarding the company's move, remarked that "broker a solution is extremely limited" . 
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Original: Ansyaad Mbai, the chief of thesecurity ministry, remarked to Agence France-Presse that "[i]f it's true that it's him, we will be very grateful that the most-wanted terrorist has been killed.
Revised: Ansyaad Mbai, the chief of the security ministry, remarked to Agence France-Presse that "[i]f it's true that it's him, we will be very grateful that the most-wanted terrorist has been killed.
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