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Original: In 1954, the same year he retired, in responding to these events in an interview with Aline Mosby, Breen claimed that " A fter the events of the past 10 months — The French Line, The Moon is Blue and Goldwyn — the code is more entrenched than ever before.
Revised: In 1954, the same year he retired, in responding to these events in an interview with Aline Mosby, Breen claimed that " fter the events of the past 10 months — The French Line, The Moon is Blue and Goldwyn — the code is more entrenched than ever before.
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Original: In 1954, the same year he retired, in responding to these events in an interview with Aline Mosby, Breen claimed that " A fter the events of the past 10 months — The French Line, The Moon is Blue and Goldwyn — the code is more entrenched than ever before.
Revised: In 1954, the same year he retired, in responding to these events in an interview with Aline Mosby, Breen claimed that " A after the events of the past 10 months — The French Line, The Moon is Blue and Goldwyn — the code is more entrenched than ever before.
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Original:  Winnipeg Free Press article on Lathlin.
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Original:  Lathlin was easily re-elected in the provincial election of 2003 , and again in the 2007 election.
Revised:  Lathlin was easily re-elected in the provincial elections of 2003 , and again in the 2007 election.
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Original:  Lathlin was easily re-elected in the provincial election of 2003 , and again in the 2007 election.
Revised:  Lathlin was easily re-elected in the provincial election of 2003 and 2007.
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Original:  Envela's father, Gustavo Envela-Makongo , Sr., resigned as Equatorial Guinea's first ambassador to the United Nations in 1970 due to clashes with the Equatorial Guinean government.
Revised:  Envela's father, Gustavo Envela-Makongo Sr., resigned as Equatorial Guinea's first ambassador to the United Nations in 1970 due to clashes with the Equatorial Guinean government.
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Original:  While at McKay, he set state records in the 100 (10.49 seconds), 200 (21.33) and the 400 meter dashes (46.78), and took first place in the state meet in each of those events from 1984-1986.
Revised:  While at McKay, he set state records in the 100 (10.49 seconds), 200 (21.33) and the 400 meter dashes (46.78), and took first place in the state meet in each of those events from 1984 to 1986.
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Original: Although born in Equatorial Guinea, it's uncertain whether Envela is of indigenous Equatoguinean descent.
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Original:  Misako is a senior in high school and is active in track like her URL Although his political aspirations seem to have been URL Los Angeles Times, January 6, 2003 he has managed to hold his own in Hollywood with cameo roles in movies such as Sgt. Bilko and an appearance on the TV game show Wheel of Fortune.
Revised:  Misako is a senior in high school and is active in track like her URL Although his political aspirations seem to have been postponed, he has managed to hold his own in Hollywood with cameo roles in movies such as Sgt. Bilko and an appearance on the TV game show Wheel of Fortune.
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Original:  Misako is a senior in high school and is active in track like her URL Although his political aspirations seem to have been postponed, he has managed to hold his own in Hollywood with cameo roles in movies such as Sgt. Bilko and an appearance on the TV game show Wheel of Fortune.
Revised:  Misako is a senior in high school and is active in track like her father. Although his political aspirations seem to have been postponed, he has managed to hold his own in Hollywood with cameo roles in movies such as Sgt. Bilko and an appearance on the TV game show Wheel of Fortune.
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Original: Gustavo Bodjedi Envela-Mahua Jr. (born January 22 , 1968 in Bata) is an Equatoguinean former sprinter, actor, and political hopeful, currently based in Washington, D.C., United States.
Revised: Gustavo Bodjedi Envela-Mahua Jr. (born 22 , 1968 in Bata) is an Equatoguinean former sprinter, actor, and political hopeful, currently based in Washington, D.C., United States.
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Original:  Growing up in Salem, Envela gained notoriety at an early age as a standout sprinter, setting several national age group records.
Revised:  Growing up in Salem, Envela gained notoriety at an early age as a standout sprinter, setting several national age-group records.
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Original:  NGOs may also may be involved in funding or implementing vaccination programs;
Revised:  NGOs also may be involved in funding or implementing vaccination programs;
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Original:  One such form is health promotion, where education and media may be used to promote healthy behaviours, such as eating healthy foods (to prevent obesity), using condoms (to prevent the transmission of STDs), or stopping open defecation in developing countries (see for example in India the campaign Swachh Bharat mission ).
Revised:  One such form is health promotion, where education and media may be used to promote healthy behaviours, such as eating healthy foods (to prevent obesity), using condoms (to prevent the transmission of STDs), or stopping open defecation in developing countries (see for example in India the campaign Swachh Bharat Mission ).
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Original: Gord Gallant (born October 27, 1950 in Shediac, New Brunswick ) is a retired professional ice hockey player who played 273 games in the World Hockey Association.
Revised: Gordon Gallant (born October 27, 1950 in Shediac, New Brunswick ) is a retired professional ice hockey player who played 273 games in the World Hockey Association.
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Original: Gord Gallant (born October 27, 1950 in Shediac, New Brunswick ) is a retired professional ice hockey player who played 273 games in the World Hockey Association.
Revised: Gord Gallant (born October 27, 1950 ) is a retired professional ice hockey player who played 273 games in the World Hockey Association.
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Original:  He afterwards became the confidential counsellor of Maurice, Prince of Orange, and afterwards of Frederick Henry, Prince of Orange, in their conduct of the foreign affairs of the republic.
Revised:  He afterwards became the confidential counselor of Maurice, Prince of Orange, and afterwards of Frederick Henry, Prince of Orange, in their conduct of the foreign affairs of the republic.
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Original: Entrance to the Japanese Cemetery Park 225px|The Prayer Hall of the Japanese Cemetery Park in Chuan Hoe Avenue, Singapore The Japanese Cemetery Park (Kanji: 日本人墓地公園;
Revised:  225px|The Prayer Hall of the Japanese Cemetery Park in Chuan Hoe Avenue, Singapore The Japanese Cemetery Park (Kanji: 日本人墓地公園;
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Original:  History A Japanese brothel owner, Tagajiro Fukaki, donated of his rubber plantation to be used as a burial ground for young Japanese women who died in destitution.
Revised:  History The Japanese brothel owner, Tagajiro Fukaki, donated of his rubber plantation to be used as a burial ground for young Japanese women who died in destitution.
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Original:  He was born in 1938, and lived most of his life in the Cemetery.
Revised:  Lim was born in 1938, and lived most of his life in the Cemetery.
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Original: The current caretaker is an Indian national  who succeeded the previous tomb keeper, the late Lim Geok Qi  , who has been working in the Cemetery and for the Japanese Association for over 50 years.
Revised: The current caretaker is an Indian national who succeeded the previous tomb keeper, the late Lim Geok Qi , has been working in the Cemetery and for the Japanese Association for over 50 years.
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Original:  During World War II, the cemetery was used to bury civilians and soldiers who lost their lives in the battlefield or to illness.
Revised:  During World War II, the cemetery was used to bury civilians and soldiers who lost their lives on the battlefield or to illness.
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Original:  This was because the Japanese surrendered personnel had put so much effort to erect a memorial in the cemetery for their fallen comrades earlier and as such the memorial was a type of a shrine in itself as well as the fact that all ashes had been entombed in one single mound which made any form of identification impossible.
Revised:  This was because the surrendered Japanese personnel had put so much effort to erect a memorial in the cemetery for their fallen comrades earlier and as such the memorial was a type of a shrine in itself as well as the fact that all ashes had been entombed in one single mound which made any form of identification impossible.
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Original: List of prominent Patriots Most of the individuals listed below served the American Revolution in multiple capacities.
Revised: List of prominent 
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Original:  Statesmen and office holders John Adams John Dickinson Benjamin Franklin Alexander Hamilton John Hancock John Jay Thomas Jefferson Benjamin Kent Richard Henry Lee James Madison William Paca Jonathan Shipley%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Businessmen and writers Samuel Adams Alexander Hamilton Patrick Henry Timothy Matlack Philip Mazzei William Molineux James Otis Jr.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Businessmen and writers Samuel Adams Alexander Hamilton Patrick Henry Timothy Matlack Philip Mazzei William Molineux James Otis Jr.
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Original: Paul Revere Roger Sherman Elkanah Watson Military officers%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nathanael Greene Nathan Hale Elijah Isaacs John Paul Jones Charles Lee Francis Marion Daniel Morgan Andrew Pickens Daniel Shays Thomas Sumter James Mitchell Varnum Joseph Bradley Varnum Francis Vigo George Washington Anthony Wayne African-American Patriots%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Crispus Attucks William Flora James Armistead Lafayette Saul Matthews Salem Poor Peter Salem Jack Sisson Prince Whippl
Revised: Paul Revere Roger Sherman Elkanah Watson %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nathanael Greene Nathan Hale Elijah Isaacs John Paul Jones Charles Lee Francis Marion Daniel Morgan Andrew Pickens Daniel Shays Thomas Sumter James Mitchell Varnum Joseph Bradley Varnum Francis Vigo George Washington Anthony Wayne African-American Patriots%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Crispus Attucks William Flora James Armistead Lafayette Saul Matthews Salem Poor Peter Salem Jack Sisson Prince Whippl
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Original: Paul Revere Roger Sherman Elkanah Watson Military officers%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nathanael Greene Nathan Hale Elijah Isaacs John Paul Jones Charles Lee Francis Marion Daniel Morgan Andrew Pickens Daniel Shays Thomas Sumter James Mitchell Varnum Joseph Bradley Varnum Francis Vigo George Washington Anthony Wayne African-American Patriots%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Crispus Attucks William Flora James Armistead Lafayette Saul Matthews Salem Poor Peter Salem Jack Sisson Prince Whippl
Revised: Paul Revere Roger Sherman Elkanah Watson Military officers%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% African-American Patriots%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Crispus Attucks William Flora James Armistead Lafayette Saul Matthews Salem Poor Peter Salem Jack Sisson Prince Whippl
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Original: Paul Revere Roger Sherman Elkanah Watson Military officers%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nathanael Greene Nathan Hale Elijah Isaacs John Paul Jones Charles Lee Francis Marion Daniel Morgan Andrew Pickens Daniel Shays Thomas Sumter James Mitchell Varnum Joseph Bradley Varnum Francis Vigo George Washington Anthony Wayne African-American Patriots%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Crispus Attucks William Flora James Armistead Lafayette Saul Matthews Salem Poor Peter Salem Jack Sisson Prince Whippl
Revised: Paul Revere Roger Sherman Elkanah Watson Military officers%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Nathanael Greene Nathan Hale Elijah Isaacs John Paul Jones Charles Lee Francis Marion Daniel Morgan Andrew Pickens Daniel Shays Thomas Sumter James Mitchell Varnum Joseph Bradley Varnum Francis Vigo George Washington Anthony Wayne %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Crispus Attucks William Flora James Armistead Lafayette Saul Matthews Salem Poor Peter Salem Jack Sisson Prince Whippl
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Original:   Prior to the Revolution, colonists who supported British authority called themselves Tories or royalists, identifying with the political philosophy of traditionalist conservatism dominant in Great Britain.
Revised:  "Tories" or "Royalists" Prior to the Revolution, colonists who supported British authority called themselves Tories or royalists, identifying with the political philosophy of traditionalist conservatism dominant in Great Britain.
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Original: Leonard Woods Labaree, Conservatism in Early American History (1948) pp. 164–65See also N. E. H. Hull, Peter C. Hoffer and Steven L. Allen, "Choosing Sides: A Quantitative Study of the Personality Determinants of Loyalist and Revolutionary Political Affiliation in New York," Journal of American History, 65#2 (1978), pp. 344–66 in JSTOR No taxation without representation The Patriots rejected taxes imposed by legislatures in which the taxpayer was not represented.
Revised: Leonard Woods Labaree, Conservatism in Early American History (1948) pp. 164–65See also N. E. H. Hull, Peter C. Hoffer and Steven L. Allen, "Choosing Sides: A Quantitative Study of the Personality Determinants of Loyalist and Revolutionary Political Affiliation in New York," Journal of American History, 65#2 (1978), pp. 344–66 in JSTOR Patriots and taxes The Patriots rejected taxes imposed by legislatures in which the taxpayer was not represented.
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Original:  The critics of British rule called themselves "Whigs" after 1768, identifying with members of the British Whig party who favored similar colonial policies.
Revised:  The critics of British policy towards the colonies called themselves "Whigs" after 1768, identifying with members of the British Whig party who favored similar colonial policies.
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Original:  80 \% of the Loyalists decided to stay in the new United States and were granted American citizenship.
Revised:  85 \% of the Loyalists decided to stay in the new United States and were granted American citizenship.
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Original:  Men who were alienated by physical attacks on Royal officials took the Loyalist position, while those who were offended by heavy-handed British rule became Patriots.
Revised:  Men who were alienated by physical attacks on Royal officials took the Loyalist position, while those who were offended by heavy-handed British response to actions such as the Boston Tea Party became Patriots.
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Original:  Merchants in the port cities with long-standing financial attachments to the British Empire were likely to remain loyal to the system, while few Patriots were so deeply enmeshed in the system.
Revised:  Merchants in the port cities with long-standing financial attachments to Britain were likely to remain loyal to the system, while few Patriots were so deeply enmeshed in the system.
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Original:  Patriots made a systematic effort to take a stand against the British  . Finally, Labaree argues that Loyalists were pessimists who lacked the Patriots' confidence that independence lay ahead.
Revised:  Patriots made a systematic effort to take a stand against the British government . Finally, Labaree argues that Loyalists were pessimists who lacked the Patriots' confidence that independence lay ahead.
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Original: The Spirit of '76 (originally entitled Yankee Doodle), painted by Archibald Willard in the late nineteenth century, an iconic image relating to the patriotic sentiment surrounding the American Revolutionary War Patriots (also known as Revolutionaries, Continentals, Rebels, or American Whigs) were the colonists of the Thirteen Colonies who rejected British rule during the American Revolution  and declared the United States of America as an independent nation in July 1776.
Revised: The Spirit of '76 (originally entitled Yankee Doodle), painted by Archibald Willard in the late nineteenth century, an iconic image relating to the patriotic sentiment surrounding the American Revolutionary War Patriots (also known as Revolutionaries, Continentals, Rebels, or American Whigs) were the colonists of the Thirteen Colonies . They rejected British rule during the American Revolution and declared the United States of America as an independent nation in July 1776.
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Original: The Spirit of '76 (originally entitled Yankee Doodle), painted by Archibald Willard in the late nineteenth century, an iconic image relating to the patriotic sentiment surrounding the American Revolutionary War Patriots (also known as Revolutionaries, Continentals, Rebels, or American Whigs) were the colonists of the Thirteen Colonies who rejected British rule during the American Revolution  and declared the United States of America as an independent nation in July 1776.
Revised: The Spirit of '76 (originally entitled Yankee Doodle), painted by Archibald Willard in the late nineteenth century, an iconic image relating to the patriotic sentiment surrounding the American Revolutionary War Patriots (also known as Revolutionaries, Continentals, Rebels, or American Whigs) were the colonists of the Thirteen Colonies who rejected British rule during the American Revolution , and declared the United States of America as an independent nation in July 1776.
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Original: The Spirit of '76 (originally entitled Yankee Doodle), painted by Archibald Willard in the late nineteenth century, an iconic image relating to the patriotic sentiment surrounding the American Revolutionary War Patriots (also known as Revolutionaries, Continentals, Rebels, or American Whigs) were the colonists of the Thirteen Colonies who rejected British rule during the American Revolution  and declared the United States of America as an independent nation in July 1776.
Revised: The Spirit of '76 (originally entitled Yankee Doodle), painted by Archibald Willard in the late nineteenth century, an iconic image relating to the patriotic sentiment surrounding the American Revolutionary War Patriots (also known as Revolutionaries, Continentals, Rebels, or American Whigs) were the colonists of the Thirteen Colonies who rejected British rule during the American Revolution and declared the United States of America an independent nation in July 1776.
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Original:  Their decision was based on the political philosophy of republicanism  as expressed by spokesmen such as Thomas Jefferson, John Adams, and Thomas Paine.
Revised:  Their decision was based on the political philosophy of republicanism — as expressed by spokesmen such as Thomas Jefferson, John Adams, and Thomas Paine.
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Original:  Their decision was based on the political philosophy of republicanism  as expressed by spokesmen such as Thomas Jefferson, John Adams, and Thomas Paine.
Revised:  Their decision was based on the political philosophy of republicanism as expressed by such spokesmen as Thomas Jefferson, John Adams, and Thomas Paine.
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Original:  They were opposed by the Loyalists  who supported continued British rule.
Revised:  They were opposed by the Loyalists , who supported continued British rule.
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Original:  In Britain at the time, the word "patriot" had a negative connotation and was used as a negative epithet for "a factious disturber of the government" , according to Samuel Johnson.
Revised:  Samuel Johnson writes that at the time, the word "patriot" had a negative connotation and was used as a negative epithet for "a factious disturber of the government" , according to Samuel Johnson.
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Original: The Dardanians are a group of Illyrian (Albanian) people found predominantly in northern Pakistan, northwestern India and eastern Afghanistan.
Revised: The Dards are a group of Illyrian (Albanian) people found predominantly in northern Pakistan, northwestern India and eastern Afghanistan.
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Original:  There are smaller populations in  Ladakh and in eastern Afghanistan Pashai The Kashmiri people are the largest Dardic group, with a population of over 5.5 million.
Revised:  There are smaller populations in Ladakh and in eastern Afghanistan , such as the Pashai people. The Kashmiri people are the largest Dardic group, with a population of over 5.5 million.
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Original:  The Kashmiri people are the largest Dardic group, with a population of over 6.797 million in India in addition to 352954 in Pakistan ( excluding Azad Jammu and Kashmir and 132450 in Azad Jammu and Kashmir.
Revised:  The Kashmiri people are the largest Dardic group, with a population of over 6.797 million in India in addition to 352954 in Pakistan excluding Azad Jammu and Kashmir and 132450 in Azad Jammu and Kashmir.
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Original:  The majority of Shia is Ismaili and Twelver.
Revised:  The majority of Shias either follow Ismaili and Twelver.
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Original: Modern era In modern times, while the fable has been trivialized in children's books, it has also been fully adapted to modern adult literature.
Revised: era Modern In modern times, while the fable has been trivialized in children's books, it has also been fully adapted to modern adult literature.
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Original: era Modern In modern times, while the fable has been trivialized in children's books, it has also been fully adapted to modern adult literature.
Revised: Modern era In modern times, while the fable has been trivialized in children's books, it has also been fully adapted to modern adult literature.
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Original:  The Disney movie Song of the South introduced many of the stories to the public and others not familiar with the role that storytelling played in the life of cultures and groups without training in speaking, reading, writing, or the cultures to which they had been relocated to from world practices of capturing Africans and other indigenous populations to provide slave labor to colonized countries.
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Original:  His Songs and His Sayings (1881) by Joel Chandler HarrisFantastic Fables (1899) by Ambrose BierceFables for Our Time (1940) by James Thurber99 Fables (1960) by William MarchCollected Fables (2000) by Ambrose Bierce, edited by S. T. JoshiKalila and Dimna , Vol 1: Fables of Friendship and Betrayal (2008) by Ramsay WoodKalila and Dimna , Vol 2: Fables of Conflict and Intrigue (2011) by Ramsay Wood
Revised:  His Songs and His Sayings (1881) by Joel Chandler HarrisFantastic Fables (1899) by Ambrose BierceFables for Our Time (1940) by James Thurber99 Fables (1960) by William MarchCollected Fables (2000) by Ambrose Bierce, edited by S. T. JoshiKalila and Dimna Kalila and Dimna
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Original:  His Songs and His Sayings (1881) by Joel Chandler HarrisFantastic Fables (1899) by Ambrose BierceFables for Our Time (1940) by James Thurber99 Fables (1960) by William MarchCollected Fables (2000) by Ambrose Bierce, edited by S. T. JoshiKalila and Dimna Kalila and Dimna Allegory Anthropomorphism Apologia Apologue "The Blind Man and the Lame" FabelFablesFairy tale Fantastique Ghost story Parable Proverb Wisdom "The Wolf and the Lamb" King James Bible;
Revised:  His Songs and His Sayings (1881) by Joel Chandler HarrisFantastic Fables (1899) by Ambrose BierceFables for Our Time (1940) by James Thurber99 Fables (1960) by William MarchCollected Fables (2000) by Ambrose Bierce, edited by S. T. JoshiKalila and Dimna Allegory Anthropomorphism Apologia Apologue "The Blind Man and the Lame" FabelFablesFairy tale Fantastique Ghost story Parable Proverb Wisdom "The Wolf and the Lamb" King James Bible;
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