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Original: Jamie Lee Curtis, 46 , has stated that her acting career is now over.
Revised: Jamie Lee Curtis, 47 , has stated that her acting career is now over.
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Original:  That likely means she no longer wants to dress up and be someone else for a few months at a time.
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Original:  France is to ban smoking in all public places in Febuary 2007, the French prime minister, Dominique de Villepin has announced.
Revised: - France is to ban smoking in all public places in Febuary 2007, the French prime minister, Dominique de Villepin has announced.
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Original:  Mr de Villepin added the state would take charge of one-third of the costs of anti-smoking treatments, such as a Nicotine patch.
Revised:  Mr de Villepin added the state would take charge of one-third of the costs of anti-smoking treatments, such as a nicotine patch.
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Original:  Italy has very strict measures, such as a fine of 150 euros for smoking in public places, and the fine is even heftier if you smoke near a Pregnant woman or a child of age equal or less than 12.
Revised:  Italy has very strict measures, such as a fine of 150 euros for smoking in public places, and the fine is even heftier if you smoke near a pregnant woman or a child of age equal or less than 12.
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Original:  In Switzerland, the Canton of Ticino is the only canton in the nation to have banned smoking in restaurants.
Revised:  In Switzerland, the canton of Ticino is the only canton in the nation to have banned smoking in restaurants.
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Original:  However Cafés, Nightclubs and Restaurants will have until January 2008 to adapt to this new law.
Revised:  However cafés, nightclubs and restaurants will not be required to comply untill January 2008.
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Original:  Those found in breach of the ban would be fined - 75 euros for individuals and 150 euros for the premises where the offence occurred.
Revised:  An offence would result in a fine of 75 euros for individuals and 150 euros for the premises where the offence occurred.
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Original:  Those found in breach of the ban would be fined - 75 euros for individuals and 150 euros for the premises where the offence occurred.
Revised:  Those found in breach of the ban would be fined - 75 euros for the person(s) responsible and 150 euros for the premises where the offence occurred.
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Original:  Mr de Villepin added the state would take charge of one-third of the costs of anti-smoking treatments , such as a nicotine patch.
Revised:  He also stated that the country would pay for one-third of the costs of anti-smoking treatments , such as a nicotine patch.
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Original:  Mr de Villepin added the state would take charge of one-third of the costs of anti-smoking treatments , such as a nicotine patch.
Revised:  Mr de Villepin added the state would take charge of one-third of the costs of anti-smoking treatments :
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Original:  "There are also other solutions, for example the creation of closed, ventilated spaces, where ( meals and drinks ) service is not authorised in order to protect employees," he added.
Revised:  "There are also other solutions, for example the creation of closed, ventilated spaces, where ( food and drink ) service is not authorised in order to protect employees," he added.
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Original:  150 px| | Dominique de Villepin  A BBC survey made in France, a nation often considered the nation of smokers - suggest 70\% of the people support the ban.
Revised:  150 px| Dominique de Villepin A BBC survey made in France, a nation often considered the nation of smokers - suggest 70\% of the people support the ban.
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Original:  150 px| | Dominique de Villepin  A BBC survey made in France, a nation often considered the nation of smokers - suggest 70\% of the people support the ban.
Revised:  150 px| | Dominique de Villepin A BBC survey made in France, a country notorious for its use of tobacco suggests that 70\% of the people support the ban.
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Original:  Italy has very strict measures, such as a  fine of 150 euros for smoking in public places , and the fine is even heftier if you smoke near a pregnant woman or a child of age equal or less than 12.
Revised:  Italy has very strict measures, such as a fine of 150 euros for smoking in public places with additional charges leveled if the offender was near a pregnant woman or a child of age equal or less than 12.
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Original:  The ban was also succesful, because repeat offenders could be fined more than 275 euros, and if they were to continue, they may be imprisoned .
Revised:  The ban was also succesful, because repeat offenders could be fined more than 275 euros, and imprisoned if they continued .
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Original: France is to ban smoking in all public places in Febuary 2007, the French prime minister, Dominique de Villepin has announced.
Revised: France is to ban smoking in all public places in February 2007, the French prime minister, Dominique de Villepin has announced.
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Original:  However cafés, nightclubs and restaurants will not be required to comply until January 2008. 150 px|No smoking An offence would result in a fine of 75 euros for the person(s) responsible and 150 euros for the premises where the offence occurred.
Revised:  However cafés, nightclubs and restaurants will not be required to comply until January 2008. An offence would result in a fine of 75 euros for the person(s) responsible and 150 euros for the premises where the offence occurred.
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Original:  150 px|France's flag "We started on the basis of a simple observation - two figures: 60,000 deaths a year in our country linked directly to tobacco consumption and 5,000 deaths linked to passive smoking.
Revised:  "We started on the basis of a simple observation - two figures: 60,000 deaths a year in our country linked directly to tobacco consumption and 5,000 deaths linked to passive smoking.
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Original: 150 px|No smoking 150 px|France's flag France is to ban smoking in all public places in February 2007, the French prime minister, Dominique de Villepin has announced.
Revised: 150 px|No smoking 150 px|France's flag France is to ban smoking in all public places in February 2007, the French prime minister, has announced.
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Original:  "We started on the basis of a simple observation - two figures: 60,000 deaths a year in our country linked directly to tobacco consumption and 5,000 deaths linked to passive smoking .
Revised:  "We started on the basis of a simple observation - two figures: 60,000 deaths a year in our country linked directly to tobacco consumption and 5,000 deaths linked to .
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Original:  150 px|Dominique de Villepin, Prime Minister of France A BBC survey made in France, a country notorious for its use of tobacco suggests that 70\% of the people support the ban.
Revised:  A BBC survey made in France, a country notorious for its use of tobacco suggests that 70\% of the people support the ban.
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Original:  The European Union 's most enthusiastic smokers are found in Greece, Cyprus and Portugal ,  according to findings published in May this year.
Revised:  The 's most enthusiastic smokers are found in Greece, Cyprus and Portugal , according to findings published in May this year.
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Original:  The European Union 's most enthusiastic smokers are found in Greece, Cyprus and Portugal ,  according to findings published in May this year.
Revised:  The European Union 's most enthusiastic smokers are found in , according to findings published in May this year.
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Original:  When the law activates, France will join Ireland and Italy , which have passed similar measures.
Revised:  When the law activates, France will join and , which have passed similar measures.
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Original:  In Switzerland, the canton of Ticino is the only canton in the nation to have banned smoking in restaurants.
Revised:  In Switzerland, the canton of is the only canton in the nation to have banned smoking in restaurants.
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Original:  Norman is located well to the southwest of Baja California , and is currently tracking north at 7 miles per hour.
Revised:  Norman is located well to the southwest of , and is currently tracking north at 7 miles per hour.
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Original: The w| Nation Hurricane Center|National Hurricane Center Tropical Prediction Center has upgraded Tropical Depression 15-E to Tropical Storm status.
Revised: The Tropical Prediction Center has upgraded Tropical Depression 15-E to Tropical Storm status.
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Original:  Today , Security Council announced the choosing of Ban Ki Moon.
Revised:  Yesterdayday , Security Council announced the choosing of Ban Ki Moon.
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Original:  Yesterdayday , Security Council announced the choosing of Ban Ki Moon.
Revised:  Yesterday , Security Council announced the choosing of Ban Ki Moon.
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Original:  Kenzo Oshima, Japan ambassador hope that the Assembly presidency 'll act rapidly to elect him.
Revised:  Kenzo Oshima, Japan ambassador hope that the Assembly presidency will act rapidly to elect him.
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Original:  Kenzo Oshima, Japan ambassador hope that the Assembly presidency will act rapidly to elect him.
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Original:  Kofi Annan in a statement declared : " He has the highest respect for Mr. Ban, having had the pleasure of working with him both in his present capacity and when he was Chef de Cabinet to the President of the General Assembly"   .
Revised:  Kofi Annan in a statement , that he has the " He has the highest respect for Mr. Ban, having had the pleasure of working with him both in his present capacity and when he was Chef de Cabinet to the President of the General Assembly" .
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Original:  Kofi Annan in a statement declared : " He has the highest respect for Mr. Ban, having had the pleasure of working with him both in his present capacity and when he was Chef de Cabinet to the President of the General Assembly"   .
Revised:  Kofi Annan in a statement declared : " highest respect for Mr. Ban, having had the pleasure of working with him both in his present capacity and when he was Chef de Cabinet to the President of the General Assembly" .
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Original:  Kofi Annan in a statement declared : " He has the highest respect for Mr. Ban, having had the pleasure of working with him both in his present capacity and when he was Chef de Cabinet to the President of the General Assembly"   .
Revised:  Kofi Annan in a statement declared : " He has the highest respect for Mr. Ban, having had the pleasure of working with him both in his present capacity and when he was Chef de Cabinet to the President of the General Assembly" . .
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Original: Ban Ki-Moon The United Nations Security Council has recommended the South Korean foreign minister Ban Ki-Moon for appointment as the next Secretary-General of the United Nations.
Revised: Ban Ki-moon The United Nations Security Council has recommended the South Korean foreign minister Ban Ki-Moon for appointment as the next Secretary-General of the United Nations.
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Original: Ban Ki-Moon The United Nations Security Council has recommended the South Korean foreign minister Ban Ki-Moon for appointment as the next Secretary-General of the United Nations.
Revised: Ban Ki-Moon The United Nations Security Council has recommended the South Korean foreign minister Ban Ki-moon for appointment as the next Secretary-General of the United Nations.
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Original:  Ban Ki-Moon placed ahead of India's Shashi Tharoor, currently UN Under-Secretary-General, in informal voting by the Security Council members.
Revised:  Ban Ki-moon placed ahead of India's Shashi Tharoor, currently UN Under-Secretary-General, in informal voting by the Security Council members.
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Original:  Ban Ki-Moon 's recommendation will be presented to the UN General Assembly.
Revised:  Ban Ki-moon 's recommendation will be presented to the UN General Assembly.
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Original:  He is survived by a wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose. source | URL | title=Hunter loses battle with cancer | author=BBC | pub=news.bbc.co.uk | date=October 9, 2006
Revised:  He is survived by a wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie source | URL | title=Hunter loses battle with cancer | author=BBC | pub=news.bbc.co.uk | date=October 9, 2006
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Original:  He is survived by a wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose. source | URL | title=Hunter loses battle with cancer | author=BBC | pub=news.bbc.co.uk | date=October 9, 2006
Revised:  He is survived by a wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose. Ros
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Original:  He is survived by a wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Ros
Revised:  He is survived by his wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Ros
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Original:  He is survived by a wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Ros
Revised:  He is survived by a wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose
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Original: English snooker player Paul Hunter died on Monday evening  , losing his battle with cancer.
Revised: English snooker player Paul Hunter died on Monday evening evening , losing his battle with cancer.
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Original:  Hunter announced on April 6, 2005 that he was suffering from neuroendocrine tumours, a rare form of cancer.
Revised:  Paul announced on April 6, 2005 that he was suffering from neuroendocrine tumours, a rare form of cancer.
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Original:  He died in a hospice in Huddersfield five days short of his 28th birthday.
Revised:  Hunter died in a hospice in Huddersfield five days short of his 28th birthday.
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Original:  He is survived by his wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose  
Revised:  He left behind his wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose 
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Original:  He is survived by his wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose  
Revised:  He is survived by his wife, Lyndsey, and daughter, Evie Rose 
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Original:  He is survived by his wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose  
Revised:  He is survived by his wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose . 
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Original: English snooker player Paul Hunter died on Monday 9th October 2006 evening , losing his battle with cancer.
Revised: English snooker player Paul Hunter died on Monday 9th October 2006 evening , losing his battle with cancer.
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Original:  Hunter died in a hospice in Huddersfield five days short of his 28th birthday.
Revised:  He died in a hospice in Huddersfield five days short of his 28th birthday.
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Original:  He left behind his wife, Lyndsey, and  daughter, Evie Rose .
Revised:  He is survived by his wife, Lyndsey, and daughter, Evie Rose .
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Original:  He left behind his wife, Lyndsey, and  daughter, Evie Rose .
Revised:  He left behind his wife, Lyndsey, and a daughter, Evie Rose .
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Original:  He left behind his wife, Lyndsey, and  daughter, Evie Rose .
Revised:  He left behind his wife, Lyndsey, and daughter, Evie Rose 
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Original: Eric Schmidt, CEO of Google stated "The YouTube team has built an exciting and powerful media platform that complements Google's mission to organize the world's information and make it universally accessible and useful.
Revised: Eric Schmidt, CEO of Google stated "The YouTube team has built an exciting and powerful media platform that compliments Google's mission to organize the world's information and make it universally accessible and useful.
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Original: right On Monday, October 9, 2006, Google Inc. announced its decision to purchase YouTube, the popular video-sharing site, for $1.65 billion in stock.
Revised:  On Monday, October 9, 2006, Google Inc. announced its decision to purchase YouTube, the popular video-sharing site, for $1.65 billion in stock.
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Original:  Together, we are natural partners to offer a compelling media entertainment service to users, content owners and advertisers." "We are excited to have the resources to move faster than ever before," co-founder Chad Hurley, YouTube's 29-year-old CEO, told the Associated Press during a Monday interview.
Revised:  Together, we are natural partners to offer a compelling media entertainment service to users, content owners and advertisers." 
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Original: Australia had won their groupbut has never won gold . Mexicowas ranked ninth coming into the tournament, so just making it this far lifted them into eighthplace.
Revised: Winners of their group, Australia have never taken the gold gold; Their opponents, Mexico, were previously ranked ninth at the opening of the tournament, so just making it this far lifted them into eighthplace.
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Original:  Australia had beaten Mexico 75-45 in a pre-tournament warm up game .
Revised:  Australia had beaten Mexico 75-45 in a pre-tournament warm up match .
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Original: Australia's first shot at goal was  by Bridie Kean, from the free throw line , but she missed both shots.
Revised: Australia's first shot at goal was taken by Bridie Kean, from the free throw line , but she missed both shots.
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Original: Australia's first shot at goal was  by Bridie Kean, from the free throw line , but she missed both shots.
Revised: Australia's first shot at goal was by Bridie Kean, from the free throw line ; but, she missed both shots.
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Original:  A few seconds later Cobo Crispin had a shot from the paint, but missed . Kylie Gauci finally put the Gliders on the board .
Revised:  A few seconds later Cobo Crispin had a shot from the paint, but missed ; Kylie Gauci then finally put points on the scoreboard for the Gliders .
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Original:  Mexico's Lucia Vazquez Delgadillo then became the opened the scoring to give Mexico a two-point lead, their largest of the entire game.
Revised:  Mexico's Lucia Vazquez Delgadillo then became the opened the scoring to give Mexico a two-point lead, their biggest of the entire game.
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Original:  Mexico then scored, and the Gliders responded with another goal by Cobi Crispin.
Revised:  Mexico then scored, the Gliders responding with another shot from Cobi Crispin.
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Original:  On the next play, Kylie Gauci stole the ball and charged down the court, but unfortunately did not make the shot.
Revised:  On the next play, Kylie Gauci stole the ball and charged down the court, but failed to make the shot.
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Original:  Clare Nott took an defensive rebound, which led to Cobi Crispin scoring again.
Revised:  Clare Nott took a defensive rebound, which led to Cobi Crispin scoring again.
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Original:  Clare Nott took an defensive rebound, which led to Cobi Crispin scoring again.
Revised:  Clare Nott took an defensive rebound, leading to Cobi Crispin scoring again.
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Original:  She also drew a foul but missed the  free throw.
Revised:  She was also fouled. but missed the free throw.
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Original:  She also drew a foul but missed the  free throw.
Revised:  She also drew a foul but missed the resulting free throw.
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Original:  Soon after , Sarah Stewart drew another foul, and made both shots , bringing the score to 14-4.
Revised:  Shortly thereafter , Sarah Stewart drew another foul, and made both shots , bringing the score to 14-4.
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Original:  Soon after , Sarah Stewart drew another foul, and made both shots , bringing the score to 14-4.
Revised:  Soon after , Sarah Stewart took another foul, and made both shots , bringing the score to 14-4.
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Original:  Soon after , Sarah Stewart drew another foul, and made both shots , bringing the score to 14-4.
Revised:  Soon after , Sarah Stewart drew another foul, and made both shots to bring the score to 14-4.
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Original:  Soon after , Sarah Stewart drew another foul, and made both shots , bringing the score to 14-4.
Revised:  Soon after , Sarah Stewart drew another foul, and made both shots , bringing the score to 14 points to 4.
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Original:  Mexico was having great difficultly moving the ball up the court , timing out or being forced into long shots that missed.
Revised:  Mexico had great difficulty moving the ball up the court , timing out or being forced into long shots that missed.
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Original:  Mexico was having great difficultly moving the ball up the court , timing out or being forced into long shots that missed.
Revised:  Mexico was having great difficultly moving the ball up the court ; suffering by timing out, or being forced into long shots that missed.
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Original:  But  when the same happened to the Gliders, Kylie Gauci, a two-point player, took a spectacular three point shot , putting Australiaahead 17-8.
Revised:  But , when the same happened to the Gliders, Kylie Gauci, a two-point player, took a spectacular three point shot , putting Australiaahead 17-8.
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Original:  Amber Merritt only came on with  three minutes left in the quarter, and  her first shot at goal missed .
Revised:  Amber Merritt only came on with only three minutes left in the quarter, and her first shot at goal missed .
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Original:  Amber Merritt only came on with  three minutes left in the quarter, and  her first shot at goal missed .
Revised:  Amber Merritt only came on with three minutes left in the quarter, and missed her first shot at goal missed .
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Original:  Amber Merritt only came on with  three minutes left in the quarter, and  her first shot at goal missed .
Revised:  Amber Merritt only came on with three minutes left in the quarter, and her first shot at goal .
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Original:  A second attempt  from a pass from Kylie Gaucimade it though.
Revised:  A second attempt , coming from a pass from Kylie Gaucimade it though.
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Original:  A second attempt  from a pass from Kylie Gaucimade it though.
Revised:  A second attempt from a pass by Kylie Gauci, put more points on the scoreboard.
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Original:  With only a few seconds remaining in the quarter, Kylie Gauci stole the ball, and delivered it to Shelley Chaplin, who scored  .
Revised:  With only a few seconds remaining in the quarter, Kylie Gauci stole the ball, delivered it to Shelley Chaplin, who scored .
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Original:  The two teams went into the quarter time break with the score 21-10.
Revised:  The two teams went into the quarter-time break with the score 21-10.
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Original:  The two teams went into the quarter time break with the score 21-10.
Revised:  The two teams went into the quarter time break with the score 21 points to 10.
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Original:  Their opponents, Mexico, were previously ranked ninth at the opening of the tournament, so making it thus-far boosts their ranking to eighth.
Revised:  their opponents, Mexico, were previously ranked ninth at the opening of the tournament, so making it thus-far boosts their ranking to eighth.
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Original: With only a few seconds remaining in the quarter, Kylie Gauci stole the ball , delivered it to Shelley Chaplin, who scored again.
Revised: With only a few seconds remaining in the quarter, Kylie Gauci stole the ball and delivered it to Shelley Chaplin, who scored again.
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Original:  In the opening minutes of the second quarter, Shelley Chaplin assisted Cobi Crispin  and then Amber Merritt  to add another four points.
Revised:  In the opening minutes of the second quarter, Shelley Chaplin assisted Cobi Crispin , and then Amber Merritt to add another four points.
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