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Original:  according to police, his car appeared suspicious  as it had no licence plates and broken windows.
Revised:  according to police, his car appeared suspicious , as it had no licence plates and broken windows.
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Original:  25-year-old Suleiman Khreisat was shot in the head on Wednesday and remains in critical condition;
Revised: The 25-year-old Suleiman Khreisat was shot in the head on Wednesday and remains in critical condition;
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Original: The 25-year-old Suleiman Khreisat was shot in the head on Wednesday and remains in critical condition;
Revised:  25-year-old Suleiman Khreisat was shot in the head on Wednesday and remains in critical condition;
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Original: Protests took place for the second time in as many weeks in places such as Aberystwyth, Cambridge, Southampton, Liverpool, and Brighton.
Revised: Protests took place for the second time in places such as Aberystwyth, Cambridge, Southampton, Liverpool, and Brighton.
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Original: In London, students are infuriated by what they say is London South Bank University's decision to ban anti-cut related meetings from their campus earlier this month.
Revised: In London, students are infuriated by what they say is London South Bank University's decision to ban anti-cut campaign meetings from their campus earlier this month.
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Original:  This protest comes as, earlier this month, a 50,000 students and lecturers took to the streets in a National Union of Students organised rally, which culminated in the violent occupation of the Conservative Party campaign headquarters at 30 Millbank.
Revised:  This protest comes as, earlier this month, 50,000 students and lecturers took to the streets in a National Union of Students organised rally, which culminated in the violent occupation of the Conservative Party campaign headquarters at 30 Millbank.
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Original:  "Hey Jude" was also the number-one single of the year in the United States   
Revised:  "Hey Jude" was also the number-one single of the year in the United States . 
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Original:  While firefighters would be likely to carry a high-voltage multimeter around to measure the current / voltage ratings of downed power lines, it is unlikely that the same device could measure such a large voltage resulting from a very small amount of static energy without de-electrifying it.
Revised:  While firefighters would be likely to carry a high-voltage multimeter around to measure the current and voltage ratings of downed power lines, it is unlikely that the same device could measure such a large voltage resulting from a very small amount of static energy without de-electrifying it.
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Original:  Even if Clewer's possessions resulted in a parallel capacitance of 1 microFarad , this would still only result in an energy storage of 450 J. This amount of energy would probably be insufficient to burn carpet or char plastic
Revised:  Even if Clewer's possessions resulted in a parallel capacitance of 1 microfarad , this would still only result in an energy storage of 450 J. This amount of energy would probably be insufficient to burn carpet or char plastic
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Original:  The equation for stored energy in capacitors is: U = 1/2 C * V^2 Where U = energy, C = capacitance, and V = voltage.
Revised:  The equation for stored energy in capacitors is: Where U = energy, C = capacitance, and V = voltage.
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Original:  Second, the jacket could not "give off" an electric current without some  source of energy, which, in storage, is impossible.
Revised:  Second, the jacket could not "give off" an electric current without some continuous source of energy, which, in storage, is impossible.
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Original:  Even if Clewer's possessions resulted in a parallel capacitance of 1 microfarad, this would still only result in an energy storage of 450 J. This amount of energy would probably be insufficient to burn carpet or char plastic 
Revised:  Even if Clewer's possessions resulted in a parallel capacitance of 1 microfarad, this would still only result in an energy storage of 450 J. This amount of energy would be insufficient to burn carpet or char plastic 
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Original:  The story, carried first by the Warrnambool Standard, says that the man, Frank Clewer, a 58-year old cleaner from Dennington, involuntarily created a scene by causing fire departments to evacuate three buildings  he had left his mark in , before he realized he was causing the burn marks on carpets and allowed the fire department to help him.
Revised:  The story, carried first by the Warrnambool Standard, says that the man, Frank Clewer, a 58-year old cleaner from Dennington, involuntarily created a scene by causing fire departments to evacuate three buildings where he had left his mark in , before he realized he was causing the burn marks on carpets and allowed the fire department to help him.
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Original:  The story, carried first by the Warrnambool Standard, says that the man, Frank Clewer, a 58-year old cleaner from Dennington, involuntarily created a scene by causing fire departments to evacuate three buildings  he had left his mark in , before he realized he was causing the burn marks on carpets and allowed the fire department to help him.
Revised:  The story, carried first by the Warrnambool Standard, says that the man, Frank Clewer, a 58-year old cleaner from Dennington, involuntarily created a scene by causing fire departments to evacuate three buildings he had left his mark , before he realized he was causing the burn marks on carpets and allowed the fire department to help him.
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Original:  A human body by itself typically has a capacitance of around 250 pF, which would mean a voltage of 30,000 V would produce energy of 0.11 Joules .
Revised:  A human body by itself typically has a capacitance of around 250 pF, which would mean a voltage of 30,000 V would produce energy of 0.11 joules .
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Original:   Kevin Harvick came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished third, after starting 24th.
Revised:  Afterward, Edwards commented, "To finish like this is unreal. It’s just these guys didn’t give up. It’s just a great way to end the season." Kevin Harvick came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished third, after starting 24th.
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Original:   Afterward, Johnson's crewchief , Chad Knaus commented, "I think finally, finally after pulling this off Jimmie will get the respect that he deserves.
Revised:  Afterward, Johnson's crew chief , Chad Knaus commented, "I think finally, finally after pulling this off Jimmie will get the respect that he deserves.
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Original:  Throughout the course of the race there were 10 cautions and 9 lead changes among 25 different drivers.
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Original: Roush Fenway Racing driver Carl Edwards won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Ford 400 held yesterday at Homestead Miami Speedway in Homestead , Florida.
Revised: driver won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Ford 400 held yesterday at Homestead Miami Speedway in Homestead , Florida.
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Original: Roush Fenway Racing driver Carl Edwards won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Ford 400 held yesterday at Homestead Miami Speedway in Homestead , Florida.
Revised: Roush Fenway Racing driver Carl Edwards won the NASCAR held yesterday at Homestead Miami Speedway in Homestead , Florida.
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Original: Roush Fenway Racing driver Carl Edwards won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Ford 400 held yesterday at Homestead Miami Speedway in Homestead , Florida.
Revised: Roush Fenway Racing driver Carl Edwards won the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series 2010 Ford 400 held yesterday at in , Florida.
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Original:  Jimmie Johnson claimed the championship after finishing second — his fifth championship in a row.
Revised:  claimed the after finishing second — his fifth championship in a row.
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Original:  Throughout the course of the race there were 10 cautions and 25 lead changes among 9 different drivers.
Revised:  Throughout the course of the race there were 10 and 25 lead changes among 9 different drivers.
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Original:  File :Edwards Texas 2008.jpg| File photo of Carl Edwards (2008) at flickr Kevin Harvick came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished fourth, after starting 24th.
Revised:  File photo of Carl Edwards (2008) at flickr Kevin Harvick came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished fourth, after starting 24th.
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Original:  File :Edwards Texas 2008.jpg| File photo of Carl Edwards (2008) at flickr Kevin Harvick came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished fourth, after starting 24th.
Revised:  File :Edwards Texas 2008.jpg| File photo of Carl Edwards (2008) at Kevin Harvick came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished fourth, after starting 24th.
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Original:  File :Edwards Texas 2008.jpg| File photo of Carl Edwards (2008) at flickr Kevin Harvick came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished fourth, after starting 24th.
Revised:  File :Edwards Texas 2008.jpg| File photo of Carl Edwards (2008) at flickr came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished fourth, after starting 24th.
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Original:  File :Edwards Texas 2008.jpg| File photo of Carl Edwards (2008) at flickr Kevin Harvick came in third for Richard Childress Racing, and Aric Almirola finished fourth, after starting 24th.
Revised:  File :Edwards Texas 2008.jpg| File photo of Carl Edwards (2008) at flickr Kevin Harvick came in third for , and finished fourth, after starting 24th.
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Original:  Almirola's teammate A. J. Allmendinger finished 5th in front of Kasey Kahne.
Revised:  Almirola's teammate finished 5th in front of Kasey Kahne.
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Original:  Denny Hamlin followed, 39 behind Johnson, and three ahead of Harvick in third.
Revised:  followed, 39 behind Johnson, and three ahead of Harvick in third.
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Original:  Jeff Gordon and Clint Bowyer was ninth and tenth.
Revised:  and was ninth and tenth.
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Original:  Afterward, Johnson's crew chief, Chad Knaus commented, "I think finally, finally after pulling this off Jimmie will get the respect that he deserves.
Revised:  Afterward, Johnson's crew chief, commented, "I think finally, finally after pulling this off Jimmie will get the respect that he deserves.
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Original:  What can you do?  
Revised:  What can you do? " 
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Original:  which some fiscal conservatives have humorously labeled "Bush's New Orleans Deal." Liberal criticism of the reconstruction effort has focused  the awarding of reconstruction contracts to perceived Washington insiders.
Revised:  which some fiscal conservatives have humorously labeled "Bush's New Orleans Deal." Liberal criticism of the reconstruction effort has focused on the awarding of reconstruction contracts to perceived Washington insiders.
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Original:  Such projects include the planting of flowers along the Ronald Reagan freeway in California and a $230 million bridge to Ketchikan, an Alaskan island with  50 residents  . Mr. DeLay previously described these projects as "important infrastructure" and stated that eliminating them might harm the economy.
Revised:  Such projects include the planting of flowers along the Ronald Reagan freeway in California and a $230 million bridge to Ketchikan, an Alaskan island with about 50 residents . Mr. DeLay previously described these projects as "important infrastructure" and stated that eliminating them might harm the economy.
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Revised:  NIGGA STOLE MY BIKE! 19647946
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Original:  DeLay supports additional deficit spending for Hurricane Katrina relief efforts, on top of the this year's existing $331 billion federal budget deficit.
Revised:  DeLay supports additional deficit spending for relief efforts, on top of the this year's existing $331 billion federal budget deficit.
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Original:  The debate was sparked by controversy over spending on relief and reconstruction in the wake Hurricane Katrina ;
Revised:  The debate was sparked by controversy over spending on relief and reconstruction in the wake ;
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Original: However, many people are  not in favor of the design, as it could be considered "too different."
Revised: However, many people are initially not in favor of the design, as it could be considered "too different."
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Original:  Designed like a television remote, the controller 's main feature is gyroscope technology;
Revised:  Resembling a television remote, the controller 's main feature is gyroscope technology;
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Original:  players will be able to control video games by waving the device through the air.
Revised:  players will be able to control video games by moving the device through the air.
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Original:  However, many people are initially not in favor of the design, as it could be considered " too different.
Revised:  However, many people are initially not in favor of the design, as it could be considered " shell
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Original:  The remote control design is said to target new players who are unfamiliar with traditional video game controllers.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Official pictures and press releas
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Original: thumbnail|200px|OPEC headquarters in Vienna Oil ministers from Saudi Arabia and the United Arab Emirates announced that both countries would support raising crude oil output quotas by the Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries.
Revised:  Oil ministers from Saudi Arabia and the United Arab Emirates announced that both countries would support raising crude oil output quotas by the Organization of Petroleum Exporting Countries.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Earlier, the OPEC cut their oil demand estimates for 2005, saying that it will rise by only 1.7\%, compared to previous prediction of 1.9\%.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  This certification, the first of its kind granted by the FAA, serves as a commercial license to re-enter a spacecraft from low earth orbit.
Revised:  This certification, the first of its kind granted by the FAA, serves as a commercial license to re-enter a spacecraft from earth orbit.
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Original: Space Exploration Technologies Corp., a commercial spaceflight company better known as SpaceX, has recieved Federal Aviation Administration certification for its Dragon spacecraft.
Revised: Space Exploration Technologies Corp., a commercial spaceflight company better known as SpaceX, has received Federal Aviation Administration certification for its Dragon spacecraft.
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Original:  Police were alerted by IBM after the man called the IBM for tech support.
Revised:  Police were alerted by IBM after the man called IBM for tech support.
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Original: The Silicon Valley forensic lab who analyzed the laptop said it had been reformatted making in very difficult to determine if the data had been accessed.
Revised: The Silicon Valley forensic lab who analyzed the laptop said it had been reformatted making it very difficult to determine if the data had been accessed.
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Original:  He has "It's unfair, I didn't know it was stolen."
Revised:  He claimed "It's unfair, I didn't know it was stolen."
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Original:  The women who stole the laptop has not yet been found
Revised:  The woman who stole the laptop has not yet been found
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Original: The Silicon Valley forensic lab who analyzed the laptop said it had been reformatted  making it very difficult to determine if the data had been accessed.
Revised: The Silicon Valley forensic lab which analyzed the laptop said it had been reformatted making it very difficult to determine if the data had been accessed.
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Original: The Silicon Valley forensic lab who analyzed the laptop said it had been reformatted  making it very difficult to determine if the data had been accessed.
Revised: The Silicon Valley forensic lab who analyzed the laptop said it had been reformatted , making it very difficult to determine if the data had been accessed.
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Original:  Shuki Alburati was arrested on June 8 for receiving stolen property , he has been charged with one misdemeanor count.
Revised:  Shuki Alburati was arrested on June 8 for receiving stolen property ; he has been charged with one misdemeanor count.
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Original:  The laptop was left unattended in the Graduate Division and contained personal information on 98,369 graduate students and applicants going  far back as 1976.
Revised:  The laptop was left unattended in the Graduate Division and contained personal information on 98,369 graduate students and applicants going as far back as 1976.
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Original: The laptop was stolen by an unknown woman, who sold the laptop to Shuki Alburati, who sold it to a unsuspecting South Carolina man.
Revised: The laptop was stolen by an unknown woman, who sold the laptop to Shuki Alburati, who sold it to an unsuspecting South Carolina man.
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Original: The laptop was stolen by an unknown woman, who sold the laptop to Shuki Alburati, who sold it to an unsuspecting South Carolina man.
Revised: The laptop was stolen by an unknown woman, who sold it to Shuki Alburati, who sold it to an unsuspecting South Carolina man.
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Original: The laptop was stolen by an unknown woman, who sold the laptop to Shuki Alburati, who sold it to an unsuspecting South Carolina man.
Revised: The laptop was stolen by an unknown woman, who sold the laptop to Shuki Alburati, who sold the laptop to an unsuspecting South Carolina man.
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Original:  S. Korea had been taking part in annual military exercises off the island's west coast when the attack occurred.
Revised: World leaders have been quick to condemn the North Korean shelling. United Nations Secretary General Ban Ki-Moon issued a statement in which he called the attacks "one of the gravest incidents since the end of the Korean War", but expressing his hope that differences be resolved by non-military means. The White House called on North Korea to end the shelling, and affirmed its policy of defense of South Korea. The Chinese foreign ministry also issued a statement, saying that the country had "taken note of relevant reports" and expressed its hope that both sides return stability to the region. S. Korea had been taking part in annual military exercises off the island's west coast when the attack occurred.
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Original: scienTOMogy .info has received at least 6 emails and faxes in 2 days from Scientology lawyers threatening lawsuits  of up to $100,000 if the domain name ownership is not transferred.
Revised: ScienTOMogy .info has received at least 6 emails and faxes in 2 days from Scientology lawyers threatening lawsuits of up to $100,000 if the domain name ownership is not transferred.
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Original: scienTOMogy .info has received at least 6 emails and faxes in 2 days from Scientology lawyers threatening lawsuits  of up to $100,000 if the domain name ownership is not transferred.
Revised: scienTOMogy .info has received at least 6 emails in the span of 2 days from Scientology lawyers threatening lawsuits of up to $100,000 if the domain name ownership is not transferred.
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Original:  The owners of $cienTOMogy.  info have posted the complaints and their replies, saying that the site simply expresses opinion, does not make any claims  and clearly states that it is not linked to the church . "The site was put up as a single source to view all the recent hype Tom has made about the church - it does nothing but show Tom, so we are at a loss as to why the church is acting so rashly.
Revised:  The owners of $cienTOMogy. The owners of scienTOMogy. info have posted the complaints and their replies, saying that the site simply expresses opinion, does not make any claims and clearly states that it is not linked to the church . "The site was put up as a single source to view all the recent hype Tom has made about the church - it does nothing but show Tom, so we are at a loss as to why the church is acting so rashly.
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Original:  The owners of $cienTOMogy.  info have posted the complaints and their replies, saying that the site simply expresses opinion, does not make any claims  and clearly states that it is not linked to the church . "The site was put up as a single source to view all the recent hype Tom has made about the church - it does nothing but show Tom, so we are at a loss as to why the church is acting so rashly.
Revised:  The owners of $cienTOMogy. info have posted the complaints and their replies, saying that the site simply expresses opinion, does not make any claims , and clearly states that it is not linked to the church . "The site was put up as a single source to view all the recent hype Tom has made about the church - it does nothing but show Tom, so we are at a loss as to why the church is acting so rashly.
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Original:  The owners of $cienTOMogy.  info have posted the complaints and their replies, saying that the site simply expresses opinion, does not make any claims  and clearly states that it is not linked to the church . "The site was put up as a single source to view all the recent hype Tom has made about the church - it does nothing but show Tom, so we are at a loss as to why the church is acting so rashly.
Revised:  The owners of $cienTOMogy. info have posted the complaints and their replies, saying that the site simply expresses opinion, does not make any claims and clearly states that it has no connection to the Church of Scientology . "The site was put up as a single source to view all the recent hype Tom has made about the church - it does nothing but show Tom, so we are at a loss as to why the church is acting so rashly.
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Original: ScienTOMogy.info has aparently received a fax and at least 6 emails in the span of 2 days from Scientology lawyer Ava Paquette of Moxon & Kobrin threatening a lawsuit of up to $100,000 if the domain name ownership is not transferred.
Revised: ScienTOMogy.info has apparently received a fax and at least 6 emails in the span of 2 days from Scientology lawyer Ava Paquette of Moxon & Kobrin threatening a lawsuit of up to $100,000 if the domain name ownership is not transferred.
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Original:  "The site was put up as a single source to view all the recent hype Tom has made about the church - it does nothing but show Tom, so we are at a loss as to why the church is acting so rashly.  
Revised:  "The site was put up as a single source to view all the recent hype Tom has made about the church - it does nothing but show Tom, so we are at a loss as to why the church is acting so rashly. " 
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Original: The Church of Scientology has threatened legal action in order to take over ownership of the domain name of a web site which links to the odd behaviour of one of the world's most famous scientologists, Tom Cruise.
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Original:  ScienTOMogy.info has apparently received a fax and at least 6 emails in the span of 2 days from Scientology lawyer Ava Paquette of Moxon%DIFDELCMD < & %%% Kobrin threatening a lawsuit of up to $100,000 if the domain name ownership is not transferred.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < & %%% Kobrin threatening a lawsuit of up to $100,000 if the domain name ownership is not transferred.
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