wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  The movie industry spread around the globe in the first half of the 20th century and now, the familiar concept of the instantly recognizable faces of its superstars.
Revised: Theatrical actors were often celebrities. Restaurants near theaters, where actors would congregate, began putting up caricatures or photographs of actors on celebrity walls in the late 19th century.Jan Whitaker, "Faces on the wall", Restaurant-ing through history, blog, September 11, 2016 The movie industry spread around the globe in the first half of the 20th century and now, the familiar concept of the instantly recognizable faces of its superstars.
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Original: File:Andy Warhol 1975.jpg|Andy Warhol coined the phrase "15 minutes of fame" Celebrity is a condition of fame and broad public recognition of an individual or group as a result of the attention given to them by mass media.
Revised:  Celebrity is a condition of fame and broad public recognition of an individual or group as a result of the attention given to them by mass media.
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Original: Medical Body in  Greece Painting of Aristotle Greek Philosophers separated the body and the energy of the body into separate but equal and interacting categories.
Revised: Medical Body in Ancient Greece Painting of Aristotle Greek Philosophers separated the body and the energy of the body into separate but equal and interacting categories.
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Original:  He wrote that the sex of humans: European Judeo Christian European ideologies of the body define disorder as only things that can be touched or explored.
Revised:  He wrote that the sex of humans: European Judeo-Christian European ideologies of the body define disorder as only things that can be touched or explored.
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Original:  If something could not be explored then intrusions into these areas were preformed .
Revised:  If something could not be explored then intrusions into these areas were performed .
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Original:  Therefore the body is greek and European cultures is defined as being ailed by something physical, something that can be found and altered to produce order.
Revised:  Therefore the body in Greek and European cultures is defined as being ailed by something physical, something that can be found and altered to produce order.
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Original:  Judeo-Christian ideologies have heavily influenced the definitions of the body and it's disorders and therefore the male body is often explained in place of the female body.
Revised:  Judeo-Christian ideologies have heavily influenced the definitions of the body and its disorders and therefore the male body is often explained in place of the female body.
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Original:  The two primary distinctions in the conception of the body are  eastern, based in China and involving practices such as Traditional Chinese Medicine, and western, which follows the Greek traditions of science and is more closely related to modern science today despite original anatomists and ideas of the body being just as unscientific as Chinese practices.
Revised:  Conceptions of the body are eastern, based in China and involving practices such as Traditional Chinese Medicine, and western, which follows the Greek traditions of science and is more closely related to modern science today despite original anatomists and ideas of the body being just as unscientific as Chinese practices.
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Original:  The two primary distinctions in the conception of the body are  eastern, based in China and involving practices such as Traditional Chinese Medicine, and western, which follows the Greek traditions of science and is more closely related to modern science today despite original anatomists and ideas of the body being just as unscientific as Chinese practices.
Revised:  The two primary distinctions in the conception of the body are primarily either eastern, based in China and involving practices such as Traditional Chinese Medicine, and western, which follows the Greek traditions of science and is more closely related to modern science today despite original anatomists and ideas of the body being just as unscientific as Chinese practices.
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Original:  The two primary distinctions in the conception of the body are  eastern, based in China and involving practices such as Traditional Chinese Medicine, and western, which follows the Greek traditions of science and is more closely related to modern science today despite original anatomists and ideas of the body being just as unscientific as Chinese practices.
Revised:  The two primary distinctions in the conception of the body are eastern, based in China and involving practices such as Traditional chinese medicine, or western, which follows the Greek traditions of science and is more closely related to modern science today despite original anatomists and ideas of the body being just as unscientific as Chinese practices.
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Original:  The two primary distinctions in the conception of the body are  eastern, based in China and involving practices such as Traditional Chinese Medicine, and western, which follows the Greek traditions of science and is more closely related to modern science today despite original anatomists and ideas of the body being just as unscientific as Chinese practices.
Revised:  The two primary distinctions in the conception of the body are eastern, based in China and involving practices such as Traditional Chinese Medicine, and western, which follows the Greek traditions of science and is more closely related to modern science despite original anatomists and ideas of the body being just as unscientific as Chinese practices.
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Original: Medical Body in Ancient Greece Painting of Aristotle Greek Philosophers separated the body and the energy of the body into separate but equal and interacting categories.
Revised: Medical Body in Ancient Greece Painting of Aristotle Greek philosophers separated the body and the energy of the body into separate but equal and interacting categories.
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Original:  Aristotle defined the energy by which gives the body it's movement as the soul.
Revised:  Aristotle defined the energy which gives the body it's movement as the soul.
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Original:  Aristotle defined the energy by which gives the body it's movement as the soul.
Revised:  Aristotle defined the energy by which gives the body its movement as the soul.
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Original:  Definitions of the body and it's disorders therefore focus on physical manifestations of energy through the body.
Revised:  Definitions of the body and its disorders therefore focus on physical manifestations of energy through the body.
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Original: The Vitruvian Man The Vitruvian Man is a drawing by leonardo Divinci that depicts the European ideal of a man.
Revised: The Vitruvian Man The Vitruvian Man is a drawing by Leonardo da Vinci that depicts the European ideal of a man.
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Original: Hubert Jeffrey Pagaspas Webb (born November 7, 1968), is the third son of Freddie Webb , as well as the brother of Pinky Webb and Jason Webb .
Revised: Hubert Webb (born November 7, 1968), is the third son of Freddie Webb , as well as the brother of Pinky Webb and Jason Webb .
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Original: Hubert Jeffrey Pagaspas Webb (born November 7, 1968), is the rapist-murderer third son of Freddie Webb, as well as the brother of Pinky Webb and Jason Webb.
Revised: Hubert Jeffrey Pagaspas Webb (born November 7, 1968), is the third son of Freddie Webb, as well as the brother of Pinky Webb and Jason Webb.
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Original:  The companies are now competitors, with different marketing strategies, styles, and use of technology   .
Revised:  The companies are now competitors, with different marketing strategies, styles, and use of technology . .
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Original: The ensemble housed at the Metropolitan Museum of Art was recovered from the Albanian village of Vrap (which rose to international prominence in 1902 when a cache of Avar gold and silver was found in the village) in the early 20th century and given to the museum by J. P. Morgan Jr  in 1917.
Revised: The ensemble housed at the Metropolitan Museum of Art was recovered from the Albanian village of Vrap (which rose to international prominence in 1902 when a cache of Avar gold and silver was found in the village) in the early 20th century and given to the museum by J. P. Morgan Jr . in 1917.
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Original:  The   Avars were a nomadic people from the steppes of Eurasia who arrived in the Balkans in the 6th century AD  . Being a warlike people, the Avars warred with and subjugated much of the local population, and occasionally clashed with the Byzantine Empire.
Revised:  The The Avars were a nomadic people from the steppes of Eurasia who arrived in the Balkans in the 6th century AD . Being a warlike people, the Avars warred with and subjugated much of the local population, and occasionally clashed with the Byzantine Empire.
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Original:  Through these conquests, the Avars were able to amass considerable amounts of treasure, some of which was buried en-mass near Avar settlements.
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Original:  some posit that the Avars were themselves skilled metalworkers, while others believe that the valuable objects (including gold jars, cups, and dishes) found in Avar hoards were made in Byzantium and then either looted or given as tribute to the Avars.
Revised:  some posit that the Avars were themselves skilled metalworkers, while others believe that the valuable objects (including gold jars, cups, and dishes) found in hoards were made in Byzantium and then either looted or given as tribute to the Avars.
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Original:  The ensemble housed at the Metropolitan Museum of Art was recovered from the Albanian village of Vrap (which rose to international prominence in 1902 when a cache of Avar gold and silver was found in the village) in the early 20th century and given to the museum by J. P. Morgan Jr. in 1917.
Revised:  The ensemble housed at the Metropolitan Museum of Art was recovered from the Albanian village of Vrap (which rose to international prominence in 1902 when a cache of gold and silver was found in the village) in the early 20th century and given to the museum by J. P. Morgan Jr. in 1917.
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Original:   The origin of the treasures found is disputed;
Revised:  Through these conquests, the Avars were able to amass considerable amounts of treasure, some of which was buried en-mass near Avar settlements. The origin of the treasures found is disputed;
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Original:  The various vessel making up the ensemble were found in Vrap, Albania, and have been attributed to the Avar people .
Revised:  The various vessel making up the ensemble were found in Vrap, Albania, and have been attributed to the Avars .
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Original: The Avar Treasure, called neutral Vrap Treasure, is an ensemble currently in the collection of the Metropolitan Museum of Art.
Revised: The Avar Treasure, called sometimes Vrap Treasure, is an ensemble currently in the collection of the Metropolitan Museum of Art.
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Original:  Its territory covered parts of Agame, the entire Akele Guzay and lands further to the east, including perhaps event the Buri peninsula.
Revised:  Its territory covered parts of Agame, the entire Akele Guzay and lands further to the east, including perhaps even the Buri peninsula.
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Original:  b. 31 March 1942), , is a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Pakistan Ambassador to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
Revised:  b. 31 March 1942), is a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Pakistan Ambassador to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
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Original:  b. 31 March 1942), , is a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Pakistan Ambassador to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
Revised:  b. 31 March 1942), , is a retired three-star-admiral of the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Pakistan Ambassador to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
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Original:  b. 31 March 1942), , is a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Pakistan Ambassador to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
Revised:  b. 31 March 1942), , is a retired three-star rank admiral in the Pakistan Navy, politician, and a diplomat who served as the Ambassadors of Pakistan to Tunisia from 1998 until 2004.
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Original:   He is known for his activism for the civilian control of the military and vehemently opposed the military  takeover of the  civilian government in 1999.
Revised:  He is known for his contribution against civilian control of the military and vehemently opposed the military takeover of the civilian government in 1999.
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Original:  In addition, he is also known for supporting the anti-corruption activism and was once of the presiding leader of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf for this cause.
Revised:  He is actively supporting the anti-corruption activism and was once of the presiding leader of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf for this cause.
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Original:  In addition, he is also known for supporting the anti-corruption activism and was once of the presiding leader of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf for this cause.
Revised:  In addition, he is also known for supporting the anti-corruption activities, and has served as the presiding leader of the Pakistan Tehreek-e-Insaf for this cause.
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Original:  He hailed from a Rajput family who emigrated, and settled in Lahore, Punjab , Pakistan after the partition of India in 1947.
Revised:  He hailed from a Rajput family who emigrated, and settled in Lahore, Punjab .
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Original:  After his matriculation from a local high school in Lahore in 1961 , Iqbal joined the Pakistan Navy and was directed to join the Pakistan Military Academy and was subsequently trained at the Naval Academy in England with the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
Revised:  After he did his matriculation in 1961 from a local high school in Lahore in 1961 , Iqbal joined the Pakistan Navy and was directed to join the Pakistan Military Academy and was subsequently trained at the Naval Academy in England with the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
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Original:  After his matriculation from a local high school in Lahore in 1961 , Iqbal joined the Pakistan Navy and was directed to join the Pakistan Military Academy and was subsequently trained at the Naval Academy in England with the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
Revised:  After his matriculation from a local high school in Lahore , Iqbal joined the Pakistan Navy and was directed to join the Pakistan Military Academy and was subsequently trained at the Naval Academy in England with the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
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Original:  After his matriculation from a local high school in Lahore in 1961 , Iqbal joined the Pakistan Navy and was directed to join the Pakistan Military Academy and was subsequently trained at the Naval Academy in England with the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
Revised:  After his matriculation from a local high school in Lahore in 1961 , Iqbal joined the Pakistan Navy and was directed to join the Pakistan Military Academy . He subsequently received his training at the Royal Naval Academy in England with the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
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Original:  After his matriculation from a local high school in Lahore in 1961 , Iqbal joined the Pakistan Navy and was directed to join the Pakistan Military Academy and was subsequently trained at the Naval Academy in England with the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
Revised:  After his matriculation from a local high school in Lahore in 1961 , Iqbal joined the Pakistan Navy and was directed to join the Pakistan Military Academy and was subsequently trained at the Naval Academy in England and the Royal Navy as a surface officer.
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Original:  He gained commissioned in the Pakistan Navy as  Sub-Lieutenant in the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1964.
Revised:  He was commissioned in 1964 and was appointed in the Pakistan Navy as Sub-Lieutenant in the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1964.
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Original:  He gained commissioned in the Pakistan Navy as  Sub-Lieutenant in the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1964.
Revised:  He gained commissioned in the Pakistan Navy as a Sub-Lieutenant in the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1964.
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Original:  He gained commissioned in the Pakistan Navy as  Sub-Lieutenant in the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1964.
Revised:  He gained commissioned in the Pakistan Navy as Sub-Lieutenant posted at the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1964.
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Original:  He gained commissioned in the Pakistan Navy as  Sub-Lieutenant in the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy in 1964.
Revised:  He gained commissioned in the Pakistan Navy as Sub-Lieutenant in the Executive Branch of the Pakistan Navy .
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Original:  In 1966, he entered into joining the elite Navy Special Service Group and was selected to be trained with the U.S. Navy SEALs in the United States and was trained as a frogman where he learned skills in high-altitude parachuting and scuba diving.
Revised:  In 1966, he entered the elite Navy Special Service Group and was selected to be trained with the U.S. Navy SEALs in the United States and was trained as a frogman where he learned skills in high-altitude parachuting and scuba diving.
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Original:  Iqbal was directed to attend the National Defence University in Islamabad where he attained MSc. in Strategic studies.
Revised:  Iqbal was directed to attend the National Defence University in Islamabad where he obtained MSc. in Strategic studies.
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Original:  He later went to the United States and graduated from the Naval War College in the United States . Upon returning, he served on the faculty of the Naval War College in Lahore.
Revised:  He later went to the United States and graduated from the Naval War College . Upon returning, he served on the faculty of the Naval War College in Lahore.
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Original:  Iqbal was posted with the Pakistan Armed Forces–Middle East where he served as a naval adviser to the Qatari Emiri Navy and later  as military adviser to the Qatari government.
Revised:  Iqbal was posted with the Pakistan Armed Forces–Middle East where he served as a naval adviser to the Qatari Emiri Navy and later , as military adviser to the Qatari government.
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Original:  In 1989, Captain Iqbal assumed the command of the PNS Badr which he commanded until the warship was returned to the United States for its decommissioning .
Revised:  In 1989, Captain Iqbal assumed the command of the PNS Badr where he served as an commanding officer until the warship was returned to the United States for its decommissioning .
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Original:  In 1989, Captain Iqbal assumed the command of the PNS Badr which he commanded until the warship was returned to the United States for its decommissioning .
Revised:  In 1989, Captain Iqbal assumed the command of the PNS Badr which he commanded until the warship was returned to the United States .
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Original:  In 1990– 91 , Captain Iqbal was posted with the Ministry of Defence (MoD) and was selected to serve as a naval adviser at the High Commission of Pakistan in New Delhi.
Revised:  In 1990– 1991 , Captain Iqbal was posted with the Ministry of Defence (MoD) and was selected to serve as a naval adviser at the High Commission of Pakistan in New Delhi.
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Original:  In 1992, Captain Iqbal was promoted as one-star rank admiral, Cdre. , and took over the command of the elite Special Services Group Navy , which Cdre.
Revised:  In 1992, he was promoted as one-star rank admiral, Cdre. , and took over the command of the elite Special Services Group Navy , which Cdre.
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Original:  In 1992, Captain Iqbal was promoted as one-star rank admiral, Cdre. , and took over the command of the elite Special Services Group Navy , which Cdre.
Revised:  In 1992, Captain Iqbal was promoted as one-star admiral, Cdre. , and took over the command of the elite Special Services Group Navy , which Cdre.
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Original:  In 1992, Rear-Admiral Iqbal was appointed as Director-General of the Naval Intelligence (DGNI) , and began investigating the rumors surrounding the controversial arms deal signed with France as early as 1994 –95.
Revised:  In 1992, Rear-Admiral Iqbal was appointed as Director-General of the Naval Intelligence (DGNI) . He was among the other officers who investigated the rumors that surrounded the controversial arms deal signed with France as early as 1994 –95.
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Original:  In 1992, Rear-Admiral Iqbal was appointed as Director-General of the Naval Intelligence (DGNI) , and began investigating the rumors surrounding the controversial arms deal signed with France as early as 1994 –95.
Revised:  In 1992, Rear-Admiral Iqbal was appointed as Director-General of the Naval Intelligence (DGNI) , and began investigating the rumors surrounding the controversial arms deal signed with France as early as 1994 to 1995.
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Original:  Iqbal investigated Captain Z.U. Alvi, the project engineer of the Agosta 90 Bravo class submarine, at the KESW.
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Original:  R-Adm. Iqbal eventually met with Zafar Iqbal in Karachi and had convinced Zafar Iqbal to reveal the information of the parties of the money being paid to the public and military officials.
Revised:  R-Adm. Iqbal eventually met with Zafar Iqbal in Karachi and had convinced Zafar Iqbal to reveal the information of the parties that were being paid to the public and military officials.
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Original:  Upon hearing the news, Admiral S. M. Khan, the chief of naval staff, applaud his efforts but removed from the director intelligence to be promoted at the command level position in his staff.
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Original:  R-Adm. Iqbal briefed his findings , leads, and investigations to Cdre.
Revised:  R-Adm. Iqbal briefed his findings to Cdre.
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Original:  Shahid Ashraf who later went to join the deal, further hampering efforts to catch the culprits . Commenting on this promotion , Javed Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reporters :
Revised:  Shahid Ashraf related to investigations . Commenting on this promotion , Javed Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reporters :
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Original:  Shahid Ashraf who later went to join the deal, further hampering efforts to catch the culprits . Commenting on this promotion , Javed Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reporters :
Revised:  Shahid Ashraf who later went to join the deal, further hampering efforts to catch the culprits . While commenting on his service-promotion , Javed Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reporters :
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Original:  Shahid Ashraf who later went to join the deal, further hampering efforts to catch the culprits . Commenting on this promotion , Javed Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reporters :
Revised:  Shahid Ashraf who later went to join the deal, further hampering efforts to catch the culprits . Commenting on this promotion , Javed Iqbal, after retiring from his military service, reportedly said to the news reporters that "
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