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Original:  Beckett has  taken an independent line on Iraq by expressing 'regrets' over the war and  she did not disagree with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble
Revised:  Beckett has taken an independent line before, on Iraq, by expressing 'regrets' over the war and she did not disagree with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble
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Original:  Beckett has  taken an independent line on Iraq by expressing 'regrets' over the war and  she did not disagree with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble
Revised:  Beckett has taken an independent line on Iraq by expressing 'regrets' over the war and saying she did not disagree with General Sir Richard Dannatt, who said that British troops in Iraq were provoking trouble
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Original: The Prime Minister of New Zealand, Helen Clark , made an appearance and applauded the success of the two for getting this far in the competition.
Revised: The Prime Minister of New Zealand, Helen Clark , made an appearance and applauded the success of the two for getting this far in the competition.
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Original:  who was close to Mobutu Sese Seko , backed by Ugandan army during the war. retains considerable business interests  son of former President Laurent Kabila, grew up abroad, received wartime backing from Rwanda.
Revised:  who was close to Mobutu Sese Seko . backed by Ugandan army during the war. retains considerable business interests son of former President Laurent Kabila, grew up abroad, received wartime backing from Rwanda.
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Original:  who was close to Mobutu Sese Seko , backed by Ugandan army during the war. retains considerable business interests  son of former President Laurent Kabila, grew up abroad, received wartime backing from Rwanda.
Revised:  who was close to Mobutu Sese Seko , backed by Ugandan army during the war. retains considerable business interests . son of former President Laurent Kabila, grew up abroad, received wartime backing from Rwanda.
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Original:  Two people are reported killed and four others injured when "naval forces" and police fired on the protestors .
Revised:  Two people are reported killed and four others injured when "naval forces" and police fired on the protesters .
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Original:  All the major political parties in Britain have been discussing climate change           
Revised:  All the major political parties in Britain have been discussing climate change . 
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Original:  100 million people will be refugees from floods caused by rising water levels, drought caused by the melting of glaciers will affect 1 in 6 of the world ’ s population, up to 40\% of present wildlife species will become extinct and the world economy will shrink by 20\%.
Revised:  100 million people will be refugees from floods caused by rising water levels, drought caused by the melting of glaciers will affect 1 in 6 of the world ' s population, up to 40\% of present wildlife species will become extinct and the world economy will shrink by 20\%.
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Original:  An expenditure of just 1\% of the world ’ s wealth now could avert it.
Revised:  An expenditure of just 1\% of the world ' s wealth now could avert it.
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Original:  The effects of global warming can be contained, says the Review, if about 1\% of the world ’ s GDP is invested in reducing the emissions of greenhouse gases.
Revised:  The effects of global warming can be contained, says the Review, if about 1\% of the world ' s GDP is invested in reducing the emissions of greenhouse gases.
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Original:  The Stern Review shows that the scientific evidence for global warming is “overwhelming” , said Prime Minister Blair.
Revised:  The Stern Review shows that the scientific evidence for global warming is "overwhelming" , said Prime Minister Blair.
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Original: Tom Delay, The Carbon Trust - The Review offers a hugh business opportunity.
Revised: Tom Delay, The Carbon Trust - The Review offers a huge business opportunity.
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Original:  Richard Lambert,CBI Director Genera says that a a global system of carbon trading is urgently needed.
Revised:  Richard Lambert,CBI Director Genera says that a global system of carbon trading is urgently needed.
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Original:  Delhi high court awarded the death sentence  to Santosh Kumar Singh, who was convicted for commiting the rape and murder , of a Delhi University 23-years old law student Priyadarshini Mattoo , about eleven years ago on January 23, 1996.
Revised: The Delhi high court awarded the death sentence to Santosh Kumar Singh, who was convicted for commiting the rape and murder , of a Delhi University 23-years old law student Priyadarshini Mattoo , about eleven years ago on January 23, 1996.
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Original:  Delhi high court awarded the death sentence  to Santosh Kumar Singh, who was convicted for commiting the rape and murder , of a Delhi University 23-years old law student Priyadarshini Mattoo , about eleven years ago on January 23, 1996.
Revised:  Delhi high court awarded the death sentence to Santosh Kumar Singh, who was convicted of rape and murder , of a Delhi University 23-years old law student Priyadarshini Mattoo , about eleven years ago on January 23, 1996.
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Original:  Delhi high court awarded the death sentence  to Santosh Kumar Singh, who was convicted for commiting the rape and murder , of a Delhi University 23-years old law student Priyadarshini Mattoo , about eleven years ago on January 23, 1996.
Revised:  Delhi high court awarded the death sentence to Santosh Kumar Singh, who was convicted for commiting the rape and murder of a 23-year old Delhi University law student Priyadarshini Mattoo , about eleven years ago on January 23, 1996.
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Original:  Delhi high court awarded the death sentence  to Santosh Kumar Singh, who was convicted for commiting the rape and murder , of a Delhi University 23-years old law student Priyadarshini Mattoo , about eleven years ago on January 23, 1996.
Revised:  Delhi high court awarded the death sentence to Santosh Kumar Singh, who was convicted for commiting the rape and murder , of a Delhi University 23-years old law student Priyadarshini Mattoo on January 23, 1996.
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Original:  The order by the High Court Division Bench comprising Justices R. S. Sodhi and P. K. Bhasin came after three-hour long arguements by the Defence and prosecution over the quantum of sentence.
Revised:  The order by the High Court Division Bench comprising Justices R. S. Sodhi and P. K. Bhasin came after three-hour long arguments by defence lawyers and prosecutors over the quantum of sentence.
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Original:  " Santosh was the senior to her in law faculty of Delhi University.
Revised:  Santosh was the senior to her in law faculty of Delhi University.
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Original: Following the Wikimedia Foundation's retreat in Frankfurt am Main, Germany the Foundation made changes to the organization of the Board of Trustees.
Revised: Following the Wikimedia Foundation\'s retreat in Frankfurt am Main, Germany the Foundation made changes to the organization of the Board of Trustees.
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Original:  Founder Jimmy Wales said, "I nominated Florence to be the Chair of the Foundation in recognition of her outstanding service for the past few years and her unsurpassed passion for our goals.
Revised:  Founder Jimmy Wales said, \"I nominated Florence to be the Chair of the Foundation in recognition of her outstanding service for the past few years and her unsurpassed passion for our goals.
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Original:  " Nibart-Devouard, 38 and currently living in Clermont-Ferrand, will still be working closely with Wales, who will assume the title of 'Chairman Emeritus'
Revised:  \" Nibart-Devouard, 38 and currently living in Clermont-Ferrand, will still be working closely with Wales, who will assume the title of 'Chairman Emeritus'
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Original:  " Nibart-Devouard, 38 and currently living in Clermont-Ferrand, will still be working closely with Wales, who will assume the title of 'Chairman Emeritus'
Revised:  " Nibart-Devouard, 38 and currently living in Clermont-Ferrand, will still be working with Wales
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Original:  Nibart-Devouard, 38 and currently living in Clermont-Ferrand , will still be working with Wales
Revised:  Nibart-Devouard, 38 and currently living in , will still be working with Wales
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Original: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
Revised: 61-years old Lula received 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
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Original: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
Revised: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin received 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
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Original: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
Revised: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes , or 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
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Original: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
Revised: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
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Original: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
Revised: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with support from 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
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Original: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 more parties, Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
Revised: 61-years old Lula gained 58,295,042 votes while Alckmin was able to gain only 37,543,178 votes which were 39.17\% of the total . Lula was the candidate of Partido dos Trabalhadores (PT) with supports of 5 other parties, the Partido Comunista do Brasil (PCdoB), Partido Republicano Brasileiro (PRB), Partido Liberal (PL), Partido Socialista Brasileiro (PSB) and Partido Progressista (PP).
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Original:  Acklin was the candidate of Partido da Social Democracia Brasileira (PSDB) with 3 more supporting parties.
Revised:  Acklin was the candidate of Partido da Social Democracia Brasileira (PSDB) with support from three other parties.
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Original:  President has made income redistribution the priority of his first four years in office to lower the gap between rich and poor in Brazil . During the campaign, Lula promoted himself as the champion of the country's poor, touting a 19 percent decrease in poverty, minimum wage increases and millions of new jobs
Revised:  The President-elect has made income redistribution the priority of his first four years in office to lower the gap between rich and poor in Brazil . During the campaign, Lula promoted himself as the champion of the country's poor, touting a 19 percent decrease in poverty, minimum wage increases and millions of new jobs
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Original:  President has made income redistribution the priority of his first four years in office to lower the gap between rich and poor in Brazil . During the campaign, Lula promoted himself as the champion of the country's poor, touting a 19 percent decrease in poverty, minimum wage increases and millions of new jobs
Revised:  President has made income redistribution the priority of his first four years in office . During the campaign, Lula promoted himself as the champion of the country's poor, touting a 19 percent decrease in poverty, minimum wage increases and millions of new jobs
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Original:  President has made income redistribution the priority of his first four years in office to lower the gap between rich and poor in Brazil . During the campaign, Lula promoted himself as the champion of the country's poor, touting a 19 percent decrease in poverty, minimum wage increases and millions of new jobs
Revised:  President has made income redistribution the priority of his first four years in office to lower the gap between rich and poor in Brazil . Lula campaigned on a platform of championing the cause of the country's poor, touting a 19 percent decrease in poverty, minimum wage increases and millions of new jobs
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Original:  President has made income redistribution the priority of his first four years in office to lower the gap between rich and poor in Brazil . During the campaign, Lula promoted himself as the champion of the country's poor, touting a 19 percent decrease in poverty, minimum wage increases and millions of new jobs
Revised:  President has made income redistribution the priority of his first four years in office to lower the gap between rich and poor in Brazil . During the campaign, Lula promoted himself as the champion of the country's poor, highlighting a 19 percent decrease in poverty, minimum wage increases and millions of new jobs
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Original: Wikinews contributor Nick Moreau contacted many of the candidates, including Bill Blousfield , asking them to answer common questions sent in an email.
Revised: Wikinews contributor Nick Moreau contacted many of the candidates, including Bill Bousfield , asking them to answer common questions sent in an email.
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Original:  A: Many of the seniors in that I ’ ve spoken to in Brampton are literally almost shut ins.
Revised:  A: Many of the seniors in that I ' ve spoken to in Brampton are literally almost shut ins.
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Original:  They don ’ t have the means to get out in this great community and enjoy what they helped to create.
Revised:  They don ' t have the means to get out in this great community and enjoy what they helped to create.
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Original:  I for one have had quite enough of being represented by dishonest, self-serving, immoral people as hopefully, they aren ’ t a reflection of the people they serve.
Revised:  I for one have had quite enough of being represented by dishonest, self-serving, immoral people as hopefully, they aren ' t a reflection of the people they serve.
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Original:  It ’ s no secret these are qualities that are lacking in all levels of government.
Revised:  It ' s no secret these are qualities that are lacking in all levels of government.
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Original:  It ’ s something we all know yet continue to tolerate it.
Revised:  It ' s something we all know yet continue to tolerate it.
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Original:  I can ’ t fault people for continuing to vote for it as it shows we still have hope however, how many times, how many elections pass before we say Enough?
Revised:  I can ' t fault people for continuing to vote for it as it shows we still have hope however, how many times, how many elections pass before we say Enough?
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Original:  Although the current council is “seasoned” it’ s that seasoning that has created our shortcomings and issues that have come to light during this 2006 campaign.
Revised:  Although the current council is "seasoned" it' s that seasoning that has created our shortcomings and issues that have come to light during this 2006 campaign.
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Original:  I ’ ve lived in this ward since my street was at the northern most point in Brampton.
Revised:  I ' ve lived in this ward since my street was at the northern most point in Brampton.
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Original:  I ’ m tired of seeing the Police run into the park at the end of my street, I would like to see increased Police patrols of the parks.
Revised:  I ' m tired of seeing the Police run into the park at the end of my street, I would like to see increased Police patrols of the parks.
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Original:  To not include them as well as any other interested contractors doesn ’ t provide the best options available and that is what the bid process is intended to do.
Revised:  To not include them as well as any other interested contractors doesn ' t provide the best options available and that is what the bid process is intended to do.
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Original: The Kingmakers Within the next couple of days, the kingmakers will assemble and draw up a list of three possible candidates to be the next Sultan Sultan.
Revised: Successor to be decided Within the next couple of days, the kingmakers will assemble and draw up a list of three possible candidates to be the next Sultan Sultan.
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Original: Thousands are gathering outside the palace Thousands of mourning Nigerian Muslims have gathered outside the temple of the late Sultan of Sokoto, Muhammadu Maccido, waiting to pay their last respects following his death in a plane crash on Sunday, along with 95 others on board.
Revised: Thousands will gather outside the palace Thousands of mourning Nigerian Muslims have gathered outside the temple of the late Sultan of Sokoto, Muhammadu Maccido, waiting to pay their last respects following his death in a plane crash on Sunday, along with 95 others on board.
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Original:  Among those who died in the crash are former President Shehu Shagari's son, aswell as the son of the Sultan, Mohammed, and one of his grandchildren.
Revised:  Among those who died in the crash are former President Shehu Shagari's son, as well as the son of the Sultan, Mohammed, and one of his grandchildren.
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Original: The other issues is our environment/garbage in our neighborhoods and transportation with especially easier access to rapid transit/subway at Kipling and Bloor and with the extension of the subway to York U and Humber College must be lobbied for possibly by increasing the 2cnts per liter subsidy from the gasoline tax collected by the provincial government to 3 or 4cnts per liter yearly in order to pay for these added needs without increasing taxes to rate payers.
Revised: The other issues is our environment/garbage in our neighborhoods and transportation with especially easier access to rapid transit/subway at Kipling and Bloor and with the extension of the subway to York U and Humber College must be lobbied for possibly by increasing the 2 cents per liter subsidy from the gasoline tax collected by the provincial government to 3 or 4cnts per liter yearly in order to pay for these added needs without increasing taxes to rate payers.
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Original: The other issues is our environment/garbage in our neighborhoods and transportation with especially easier access to rapid transit/subway at Kipling and Bloor and with the extension of the subway to York U and Humber College must be lobbied for possibly by increasing the 2cnts per liter subsidy from the gasoline tax collected by the provincial government to 3 or 4cnts per liter yearly in order to pay for these added needs without increasing taxes to rate payers.
Revised: The other issues is our environment/garbage in our neighborhoods and transportation with especially easier access to rapid transit/subway at Kipling and Bloor and with the extension of the subway to York U and Humber College must be lobbied for possibly by increasing the 2cnts per liter subsidy from the gasoline tax collected by the provincial government to 3 or 4 cents per liter yearly in order to pay for these added needs without increasing taxes to rate payers.
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Original:  A: The most proud of would be the passing of the formation of a Greater Transit Authority and the Least the current councilors voted themselves a 10\% increase to their salaries  which if I am elected  must be rolled back to maximum of 3\% or the rate of inflation yearly and only that  like everyone else who is working.
Revised:  A: The most proud of would be the passing of the formation of a Greater Transit Authority and the Least the current councilors voted themselves a 10\% increase to their salaries , which if I am elected must be rolled back to maximum of 3\% or the rate of inflation yearly and only that like everyone else who is working.
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Original:  A: The most proud of would be the passing of the formation of a Greater Transit Authority and the Least the current councilors voted themselves a 10\% increase to their salaries  which if I am elected  must be rolled back to maximum of 3\% or the rate of inflation yearly and only that  like everyone else who is working.
Revised:  A: The most proud of would be the passing of the formation of a Greater Transit Authority and the Least the current councilors voted themselves a 10\% increase to their salaries which if I am elected , must be rolled back to maximum of 3\% or the rate of inflation yearly and only that like everyone else who is working.
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