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Original:  Mr Howard has said that he does not like to make open ended committments , and also stated that extra security would be needed for the APEC summit in 2007.
Revised:  Mr Howard has said that he does not like to make open ended commitments , and also stated that extra security would be needed for the APEC summit in 2007.
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Original:  "At the time of the APEC meeting and in the months leading up to it, the need in this country  for a heightened elite security capacity," he said
Revised:  "At the time of the APEC meeting and in the months leading up to it, the need in this country is for a heightened elite security capacity," he said
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Original: Heavy snow combined with high winds has caused at least three deaths, with major travel disruption throughout much of w: Germany.
Revised: Heavy snow combined with high winds has caused at least three deaths, with major travel disruption throughout much of Germany.
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Original:  As flights were delayed and rail travel cancelled, the police of w: North Rhine-Westphalia recorded over three hundred accidents, with a total of 42 injured people, during Friday night and into Saturday, with one death as a result of a man stepping out of his car and into another after a motorway accident.
Revised:  As flights were delayed and rail travel cancelled, the police of North Rhine-Westphalia recorded over three hundred accidents, with a total of 42 injured people, during Friday night and into Saturday, with one death as a result of a man stepping out of his car and into another after a motorway accident.
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Original:  As flights were delayed and rail travel cancelled, the police of North Rhine-Westphalia recorded over three hundred accidents, with a total of 42 injured people, during Friday night and into Saturday, with one death as a result of a man stepping out of his car and into  another after a motorway accident.
Revised:  As flights were delayed and rail travel cancelled, the police of North Rhine-Westphalia recorded over three hundred accidents, with a total of 42 injured people, during Friday night and into Saturday, with one death as a result of a man stepping out of his car and into the path of another after a motorway accident.
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Original: In Paris, France, President Jacques Chirac stood in silence at the Elysee Palace before taking part in the w: Bastille Day parade.
Revised: In Paris, France, President Jacques Chirac stood in silence at the Elysee Palace before taking part in the Bastille Day parade.
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Original: A ship, HMS Enterprise , docked at , yesterday morning to help evacuate citizens from the country affected by increasing violence.
Revised: A ship, , docked at , yesterday morning to help evacuate citizens from the country affected by increasing violence.
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Original:  The British ambassador, Michael Aron, and essential embassy are reported by to be remaining for a short while to further assist Britons leaving the country, after the evacuation of non-essential staff on July 27 resulted in an attempted car-jacking, before being completed successfully.
Revised:  reports the British ambassador, Michael Aron, and essential embassy are reported by to be remaining for a short while to further assist Britons leaving the country, after the evacuation of non-essential staff on July 27 resulted in an attempted car-jacking, before being completed successfully.
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Original:  The British ambassador, Michael Aron, and essential embassy are reported by to be remaining for a short while to further assist Britons leaving the country, after the evacuation of non-essential staff on July 27 resulted in an attempted car-jacking, before being completed successfully.
Revised:  The British ambassador, Michael Aron, and essential personnel are to remain briefly to further assist Britons leaving the country, after the evacuation of non-essential staff on July 27 resulted in an attempted car-jacking, before being completed successfully.
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Original:  The move by the UK government has been prompted by the increasing fighting in Tripoli and throughout the country,  started in the wake of the death of former Libyan leader Colonel in October 2011 , but getting increasingly worse more recently.
Revised:  The UK Goverment said the move was prompted by the increasing fighting in Tripoli and throughout the country, started in the wake of the death of former Libyan leader Colonel in October 2011 , but getting increasingly worse more recently.
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Original:  The move by the UK government has been prompted by the increasing fighting in Tripoli and throughout the country,  started in the wake of the death of former Libyan leader Colonel in October 2011 , but getting increasingly worse more recently.
Revised:  The move by the UK government has been prompted by the increasing fighting in Tripoli and throughout the country, which started in the wake of the death of former Libyan leader Colonel in October 2011 , but getting increasingly worse more recently.
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Original:  The move by the UK government has been prompted by the increasing fighting in Tripoli and throughout the country,  started in the wake of the death of former Libyan leader Colonel in October 2011 , but getting increasingly worse more recently.
Revised:  The move by the UK government has been prompted by the increasing fighting in Tripoli and throughout the country, started in the wake of the death of former Libyan leader Colonel in October 2011 but has gotten increasingly worse more recently.
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Original:  The violence is caused by clashes between and anti-Islamist supporters of the revolution against Colonel Gaddafi seeking to shape the future of their country.
Revised:  and anti-Islamist supporters of the revolution against Colonel Gaddafi seeking to shape the future of their country.
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Original:  The violence is caused by clashes between and anti-Islamist supporters of the revolution against Colonel Gaddafi seeking to shape the future of their country.
Revised:  The violence is caused by clashes between and anti-Islamist supporters of the revolution against Colonel Gaddafi are clashing, with rival agendas for the future of their country.
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Original:  A new government led by was sworn in in November 2012 but the reports that they have been unable to restore stability to the country, with Ali Zeidan himself being kidnapped by militiamen in October of last year.
Revised:  A new government led by was sworn in in November 2012 but the reports they have been unable to restore stability to the country, with Ali Zeidan himself being kidnapped by militiamen in October of last year.
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Original:  A new government led by was sworn in in November 2012 but the reports they have been unable to restore stability to the country, with Ali Zeidan himself being kidnapped by militiamen  in October of last year.
Revised:  A new government led by was sworn in in November 2012 but instability has continued in the country, with Ali Zeidan himself being kidnapped by militiamen in October of last year.
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Original:  A new government led by was sworn in in November 2012 but the reports they have been unable to restore stability to the country, with Ali Zeidan himself being kidnapped by militiamen  in October of last year.
Revised:  A new government led by was sworn in in November 2012 but the reports they have been unable to restore stability to the country, with Ali Zeidan himself kidnapped by militiamen in October of last year.
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Original:  This follows the advice of the UK (FCO) for all UK citizens to leave the country by commercial means, and announcement the embassy in Tripoli would be suspending operations this morning .
Revised:  This follows the advice of the UK (FCO) for all UK citizens to leave the country by commercial means, and announcement the embassy in Tripoli would be suspending operations today .
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Original:  Charges against 5 rail bosses accused of Manslaughter on 4 people who died in the Hatfield, England train crash have been dropped.
Revised:  Charges against 5 rail bosses accused of manslaughter on 4 people who died in the Hatfield, England train crash have been dropped.
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Original:  Four people died and many were injured in the 2000 train derailment near the hertfordshire town of Hatfield
Revised:  Four people died and many were injured in the 2000 train derailment near the Hertfordshire town of Hatfield
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Original: Category:United KingdomCategory:Crime and law Charges against 5 rail bosses accused of manslaughter on 4 people who died in the Hatfield, England train crash  have been dropped .
Revised: Category:United KingdomCategory:Crime and law Charges against the five rail bosses accused of manslaughter on 4 people who died in the Hatfield, England train crash have been dropped .
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Original: Category:United KingdomCategory:Crime and law Charges against 5 rail bosses accused of manslaughter on 4 people who died in the Hatfield, England train crash  have been dropped .
Revised: Category:United KingdomCategory:Crime and law Charges against 5 rail bosses accused of manslaughter on four people who died in the Hatfield, England train crash have been dropped .
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Original: Category:United KingdomCategory:Crime and law Charges against 5 rail bosses accused of manslaughter on 4 people who died in the Hatfield, England train crash  have been dropped .
Revised: Category:United KingdomCategory:Crime and law Charges against 5 rail bosses accused of manslaughter on 4 people who died in the Hatfield, England train crash , have been dropped .
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Original:  But the 5 men , with   their employers, Balfour Beatty and Railtrack, which together become Network rail, still face health and safety charges .
Revised:  But the 5 men , with their employers, Balfour Beatty and Railtrack, still face health and safety charges .
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Original:  After five months on trial, the judge Mr Justice Mackay, told the jury to find the men not guilty, saying: Adding: "I must ask you to accept my ruling, which does not affect one way or the other the important decisions you will have to make when considering verdicts on the health and safety counts."
Revised:  After five months on trial, the judge Mr Justice Mackay, told the jury to find the men not guilty, saying: He added: "I must ask you to accept my ruling, which does not affect one way or the other the important decisions you will have to make when considering verdicts on the health and safety counts."
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Original:  A Charge of corporate manslaughter has also been dropped against the engineering firm Belfour Beatty.
Revised:  A charge of corporate manslaughter has also been dropped against the engineering firm Belfour Beatty.
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Original: Charges against the five rail bosses accused of manslaughter on four people who died in the Hatfield , England train crash, have been dropped at the Old Bailey .
Revised: Charges against the five rail bosses accused of manslaughter on four people who died in the , England train crash, have been dropped at the Old Bailey .
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Original: Charges against the five rail bosses accused of manslaughter on four people who died in the Hatfield , England train crash, have been dropped at the Old Bailey .
Revised: Charges against the five rail bosses accused of manslaughter on four people who died in the Hatfield , England train crash, have been dropped at the .
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Original:  But the five men and their employers, Balfour Beatty and Railtrack , still face health and safety charges under the Health and Safety at Work Act .
Revised:  But the five men and their employers, Balfour Beatty and , still face health and safety charges under the Health and Safety at Work Act .
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Original:  But the five men and their employers, Balfour Beatty and Railtrack , still face health and safety charges under the Health and Safety at Work Act .
Revised:  But the five men and their employers, Balfour Beatty and Railtrack , still face health and safety charges under the .
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Original:  However, Gaddafi wished to retain the presidency, which was backed by Tunisia allegedly won other other countries by paying their membership fees.
Revised:  However, Gaddafi wished to retain the presidency, which was backed by Tunisia , and had allegedly won over other countries by paying their membership fees.
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Original:  The African Union summit, held in Addis Ababa, involved a speech to the African leaders by UN Secretary General Ban Ki-Moon, who called for the countries to strive for national union in Sudan, who are in danger of the southern part of the African country to secede from the north.
Revised:  The African Union summit, held in Addis Ababa, involved a speech to the African leaders by UN Secretary General Ban Ki-Moon, who called for the countries to strive for national union in Sudan, where the southern part of the African country to secede from the north.
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Original:  The African Union summit, held in Addis Ababa, involved a speech to the African leaders by UN Secretary General Ban Ki-Moon, who called for the countries to strive for national union in Sudan, who are in danger of the southern part of the African country to secede from the north.
Revised:  The African Union summit, held in Addis Ababa, involved a speech to the African leaders by UN Secretary General Ban Ki-Moon, who called for the countries to strive for national union in Sudan, who are in danger of the southern part of the country may secede from the north.
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Original:  He said that they had "seen a sharp decrease in malaria and measles deaths across the continent, virtual gains in primary school enrolment , marked improvement in child health", stating that "we must build on these successes and help spread them around the world".
Revised:  He said that they had "seen a sharp decrease in malaria and measles deaths across the continent, virtual gains in primary school enrolment and marked improvement in child health", stating that "we must build on these successes and help spread them around the world".
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Original: The African Union summit, held in  , Ethiopia, involved a speech to the African leaders by UN Secretary General Ban Ki-Moon, who called for the countries to strive for national union in Sudan, where the southern part of the country may secede from the north.
Revised: The African Union summit, held in Addis Ababa , Ethiopia, involved a speech to the African leaders by UN Secretary General Ban Ki-Moon, who called for the countries to strive for national union in Sudan, where the southern part of the country may secede from the north.
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Original:  Game developer have been known to deactivate parts of their code without remove them from the finished products.
Revised:  .. Game developers have been known to deactivate parts of their code without remove them from the finished products.
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Original:  Game developer have been known to deactivate parts of their code without remove them from the finished products.
Revised:  Game developer have been known to deactivate parts of their code without removing them from the finished products.
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Original:  Oftentime changes are toward the end of development, and they program workarounds."
Revised:  Oftentimes, changes are toward the end of development, and they program workarounds."
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Original: Patricia Vance, the president of the ESRB said that the modifications author "actually had to change the underlying code [of the game].
Revised: Patricia Vance, the president of the ESRB said that the author of the modification "actually had to change the underlying code [of the game].
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Original: Hillary Clinton has joined the controversy over a mod for Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas called "Hot Coffee" which disable the games built-in censorship mode, allowing players to participate in graphic sex mini-games within the game.
Revised: Hillary Clinton has joined the controversy over a mod for Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas called "Hot Coffee" which disables the game's built-in censorship mode, allowing players to participate in graphic sex mini-games within the game.
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Original:  The ESRB have continued to state that they are not intending to take any action against Take2 Interactive (the games producers.) Patricia Vance, the president of the ESRB  said that the author of the modification "actually had to change the underlying code [of the game].
Revised:  The ESRB have continued to state that they are not intending to take any action against Take2 Interactive (the game's producers). Patricia Vance, the president of the ESRB said that the author of the modification "actually had to change the underlying code [of the game].
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Original:  The ESRB have continued to state that they are not intending to take any action against Take2 Interactive (the games producers.) Patricia Vance, the president of the ESRB  said that the author of the modification "actually had to change the underlying code [of the game].
Revised:  The ESRB have continued to state that they are not intending to take any action against Take2 Interactive (the games producers.) Patricia Vance, the president of the ESRB , said that the author of the modification "actually had to change the underlying code [of the game].
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Original: Murray had been hoping to become the first British man to win a Grand Slam tournament in 74 years , since Fred Perry in 1936.
Revised: Murray had been hoping to become the first British man to win a Grand Slam title in 74 years , since Fred Perry in 1936.
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Original:  In the end he was denied by a strong performance from Federer  .
Revised:  In 2008 Federer and Murray met in the final of that tournament, where the Swiss player won an easy victory. .
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Original: A girl of 16 who collapsed in Disne 's MGM studios after coming off of the Tower of Terror ride is in hospital fighting for her life.
Revised: A girl of 16 who collapsed in Disney 's MGM studios after coming off of the Tower of Terror ride is in hospital fighting for her life.
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Original:  The 16 year old from Leciester, England came off of the Ride complaining of a headache and feeling sick , She then collapsed and was believed to have sun stroke.
Revised:  The 16 year old from Leicester, England, came off of the Ride complaining of a headache and feeling sick , She then collapsed and was believed to have sun stroke.
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Original:  The 16 year old from Leciester, England came off of the Ride complaining of a headache and feeling sick , She then collapsed and was believed to have sun stroke.
Revised:  The 16 year old from Leciester, England came off of the ride complaining of a headache and feeling sick , She then collapsed and was believed to have sun stroke.
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Original:  The 16 year old from Leciester, England came off of the Ride complaining of a headache and feeling sick , She then collapsed and was believed to have sun stroke.
Revised:  The 16 year old from Leciester, England came off of the Ride complaining of a headache and feeling sick . She then collapsed and was believed to have sun stroke.
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Original:  On the way to the ospital in Florida she suffered a heart attack and has been left fighting for her life
Revised:  On the way to the hospital in Florida she suffered a heart attack and has been left fighting for her life
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Original: A girl of 16  who collapsed in Disney's MGM studios after coming off of the Tower of Terror ride is in hospital fighting for her life .
Revised: A 16 who collapsed in Disney's MGM studios after coming off of the Tower of Terror ride is in hospital fighting for her life .
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Original: A girl of 16  who collapsed in Disney's MGM studios after coming off of the Tower of Terror ride is in hospital fighting for her life .
Revised: A girl of 16 who collapsed in Disney's MGM studios after coming off of the Tower of Terror ride has been hospitalized .
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Original:  On the way to the hospital in Florida she suffered a heart attack and has been left fighting for her life                  
Revised:  On the way to the hospital in Florida she suffered a heart attack and has been left fighting for her life . 
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Original:  On the way to the hospital in Florida she suffered a heart attack and has been left fighting for her life . Disney-MGM Studios emergency call transcript.
Revised:  On the way to the hospital in Florida she suffered a heart attack and has been left fighting for her life Disney-MGM Studios emergency call transcript.
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Original:  On the way to the hospital in Florida she suffered a heart attack and has been left fighting for her life . Disney-MGM Studios emergency call transcript.
Revised:  On the way to the hospital in Florida she suffered a heart attack and has been left fighting for her life . 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Length of call: 55 seconds.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  D: Ok and don't give her anything else to drink because it may cause problems for the doctors.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% C: Ok, uh...
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% C: My name is (redacted).
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% C: Uh, the extension here is (redacted).
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  D: OK, I have paramedics on the way.
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Original:  the thirteen countries that upheld the pledge were Bangladesh, Bhutan, Cambodia, China, India, Indonesia, Laos, Malaysia, Myanmar, Nepal, Russia, Thailand and Vietnam - all countries in which the wild Asian tiger is still found     
Revised:  the thirteen countries that upheld the pledge were Bangladesh, Bhutan, Cambodia, China, India, Indonesia, Laos, Malaysia, Myanmar, Nepal, Russia, Thailand and Vietnam - all countries in which the wild Asian tiger is still found . 
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Original:  We really need to turn around the future for wild tigers and so it's really this year or never   .
Revised:  We really need to turn around the future for wild tigers and so it's really this year or never ." .
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Original:  Today, there are about 3,500 left. 
Revised:  Today, there are about 3,500 left. "
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Original:  The couple have been separated from each other, and are suffering signs of stress.
Revised:  couple have been separated from each other, and are suffering signs of stress.
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Original:  The couple were permitted to visit a surgeon, Mohamed Helmi Hangul, briefly on Thursday, accompanied by a photographer for the news agency, who was asked by the captives that "these people are not treating us well" .
Revised:  The couple were permitted to visit a surgeon, Mohamed Helmi Hangul, who was permitted to visit the couple briefly on Thursday .
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Original:  Another rally is scheduled for late March
Revised:  Another rally is scheduled for late Marc
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Original:  Another rally is scheduled for late Marc
Revised:  Another rally is scheduled for late March
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Original:  Despite  calls from Amnesty International for the protest to go ahead, riot police detained dozens of people at an anti-Kremlin march in central Moscow today.
Revised:  Despite several calls from Amnesty International for the protest to go ahead, riot police detained dozens of people at an anti-Kremlin march in central Moscow today.
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