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Original:  With a huge gap from the spaniard, the second McLaren team driver Juan-Pablo Montoya took the second place.
Revised:  With a huge gap from the Spaniard, McLaren driver Juan-Pablo Montoya took the second place.
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Original:  With a huge gap from the spaniard, the second McLaren team driver Juan-Pablo Montoya took the second place.
Revised:  With a huge gap from the spaniard, the second McLaren team driver Juan-Pablo Montoya took second place.
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Original:  The circuit was a great success for Red Bull team - David Coulthard was third .
Revised:  The circuit was a great success for Red Bull team as David Coulthard came in at third place .
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Original: Fernando Alonso for the first time in his career won the FIA Formula-1 Monaco Grand Prix  . During the saturday's qualification Michael Schumacher made a strange mistake in the La Rascasse corner, when he driver locked his car's wheels, bringing the vehicle to a halt and finished the race causing the drivers behind him to lose time on their their fast laps.
Revised: Fernando Alonso won the FIA Formula-1 Monaco Grand Prix . During the saturday's qualification Michael Schumacher made a strange mistake in the La Rascasse corner, when he driver locked his car's wheels, bringing the vehicle to a halt and finished the race causing the drivers behind him to lose time on their their fast laps.
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Original: Fernando Alonso for the first time in his career won the FIA Formula-1 Monaco Grand Prix  . During the saturday's qualification Michael Schumacher made a strange mistake in the La Rascasse corner, when he driver locked his car's wheels, bringing the vehicle to a halt and finished the race causing the drivers behind him to lose time on their their fast laps.
Revised: Fernando Alonso for the first time in his career won the FIA Formula-1 Monaco Grand Prix . During Saturday's qualifying session, Michael Schumacher made a strange mistake in the La Rascasse corner, when he driver locked his car's wheels, bringing the vehicle to a halt and finished the race causing the drivers behind him to lose time on their their fast laps.
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Original:  Thus, Schumacher and Felipe Massa, who crashed his car earlier in the qualification, were last on the starting grid.
Revised:  Thus, Schumacher and Felipe Massa, who ate his car earlier in the qualification, were last on the starting grid.
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Original:  Michael started the race from the pit-lane .
Revised:  Michael started the race from the white house .
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Original:  Alonso was in the lead for the most of the race.
Revised:  Bush was in the lead for the most of the race.
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Original:  After that Alonso drove to victory with little opposition from the other drivers .
Revised:  After that Alonso drove to victory with little opposition from the other clowns .
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Original:  With a huge gap from the Spaniard , McLaren driver Juan-Pablo Montoya took second place.
Revised:  With a huge gap from the idiot , McLaren driver Juan-Pablo Montoya took second place.
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Original: Image:Flag of Togo.png|200px|The flag of Togo]] After the death of President Gnassingbe Eyadema , the army of the African state of Togo has suspended the constitution and installed the son of the late President  as the new leader.
Revised: Image:Flag of Togo.png|200px|The flag of Togo]] After the death of President Gnassingbé Eyadéma , the army of the African state of Togo has suspended the constitution and installed the son of the late President as the new leader.
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Original:  The United Nations and the European Union have both made calls for the army to respect the rules of the state.    
Revised:  The United Nations and the European Union have also made calls for the army to respect the rules of the state. 
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Original:   The African Union has spoken of a 'military coup' taking place in the country.
Revised:  The African Union has spoken of a "military coup" taking place in the country.
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Original:  The day after the president's death, Natchaba was dismissed by  parliament and unanimously replaced by Faure Eyadéma by the deputies who were present at that time.
Revised:  The day after the president's death, Natchaba was dismissed by the parliament and unanimously replaced by Faure Eyadéma by the deputies who were present at that time.
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Original:  With the win, the Oilers are Western Conference Champions and advance to the Stanley Cup Final to meet either Buffalo or Carolina  
Revised:  With the win, the Oilers are Western Conference Champions and advance to the Stanley Cup Final to meet either Buffalo or Carolina . 
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Original: May 28, 2006 Raffi Torres and Ethan Moreau each scored as the Edmonton Oilers defeated the Mighty Ducks of Anaheim 2-1 at the Arrowhead Pond of Anaheim Saturday night.
Revised:  Raffi Torres and Ethan Moreau each scored as the Edmonton Oilers defeated the Mighty Ducks of Anaheim 2-1 at the Arrowhead Pond of Anaheim Saturday night.
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Original: Mr Whitlam said the Labor party seemed to have ignored the fact that the incumbent government has an advantage in determining election dates.
Revised: He also said the Labor party seemed to have ignored the fact that the incumbent government has an advantage in determining election dates.
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Original:  Last week, Wikinews reported that North Korea failed to launch a multistage rocket on April thirteenth.
Revised:  Last week, North Korea failed to launch a multistage rocket on April thirteenth.
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Original: Meanwhile, the six nation talks with Iran continues where diplomats are reporting progress.
Revised: Meanwhile, the six nation talks with Iran continue, in which diplomats are reporting progress.
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Original:  The object of the attack was  to free Pakistani Taliban militants who were being held at the facility.
Revised:  The object of the attack was apparently to free Pakistani Taliban militants who were being held at the facility.
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Original:  Last week, North Korea failed to launch a multistage rocket on April thirteenth.
Revised:  North Korea failed to launch a multistage rocket on April thirteenth.
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Original:   Obama promised that the investigations would be  "thorough" and "rigorous."
Revised:  President Obama promised that the investigations would be "thorough" and "rigorous."
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Original:  So far six  secret service agents have lost their jobs as a result of the investigation .
Revised:  So far six of those secret service agents have lost their jobs as a result of the investigation .
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Original:  So far six  secret service agents have lost their jobs as a result of the investigation .
Revised:  So far six secret service agents have lost their jobs .
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Original: In 2005, the NSW Auditor-General released a report which found that there was a $116 million maintance backlog in schools across the state.
Revised: In 2005, the NSW Auditor-General released a report which found that there was a $116 million maintenance backlog in schools across the state.
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Original:  Outside the bank he was trying to hijack a car, he threatend an old man with his pistol, eventually stealling a black Mitsubishi Mirage.
Revised:  Outside the bank he was trying to hijack a car, he threatened an old man with his pistol, eventually stealling a black Mitsubishi Mirage.
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Original:  Outside the bank he was trying to hijack a car, he threatend an old man with his pistol, eventually stealling a black Mitsubishi Mirage.
Revised:  Outside the bank he was trying to hijack a car, he threatend an old man with his pistol, eventually stealing a black Mitsubishi Mirage.
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Original: Culture and entertainment Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Malaysia Category:Asia The Star's Manjit Kaur reports the controversial documentary The Last Communist or Lelaki Komunis Terahkir has finally been banned by the Home Ministry under the Film Censorship Act 1991.    ]   Related stories External links URL Edited footage of 21st May screening.
Revised:  The Star's Manjit Kaur reports the controversial documentary The Last Communist or Lelaki Komunis Terahkir has finally been banned by the Home Ministry under the Film Censorship Act 1991. ] Related stories External links URL Edited footage of 21st May screening.
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Original: Culture and entertainment Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Malaysia Category:Asia The Star's Manjit Kaur reports the controversial documentary The Last Communist or Lelaki Komunis Terahkir has finally been banned by the Home Ministry under the Film Censorship Act 1991.    ]   Related stories External links URL Edited footage of 21st May screening.
Revised: Culture and entertainment Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Malaysia Category:Asia Manjit Kaur of the Malaysian Star reports the controversial documentary The Last Communist or Lelaki Komunis Terahkir has finally been banned by the Home Ministry under the Film Censorship Act 1991. ] Related stories External links URL Edited footage of 21st May screening.
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Original: Culture and entertainment Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Malaysia Category:Asia The Star's Manjit Kaur reports the controversial documentary The Last Communist or Lelaki Komunis Terahkir has finally been banned by the Home Ministry under the Film Censorship Act 1991.    ]   Related stories External links URL Edited footage of 21st May screening.
Revised: Culture and entertainment Category:Culture and entertainment Category:Malaysia Category:Asia The Star's Manjit Kaur reports the controversial documentary The Last Communist or Lelaki Komunis Terahkir has finally been banned by the Home Ministry under the Film Censorship Act 1991. Peng] Related stories External links URL Edited footage of 21st May screening.
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Original: Malaysian documentary The Last Communist was passed without  cuts by the National Film Censorship board in March .
Revised: The film was passed without cuts by the National Film Censorship board in March .
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Original: Malaysian documentary The Last Communist was passed without  cuts by the National Film Censorship board in March .
Revised: Malaysian documentary The Last Communist was passed without any cuts by the National Film Censorship board in March .
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Original:  The film is described as a "semi-musical documentary" and is inspired by the leader of the disbanded Malayan Communist Party, Chin Peng and the Malayan Emergency where over ten thousand Malayan and British troops and civilians lost their lives.
Revised:  The film is described as a "semi-musical documentary" and is inspired by the leader of the disbanded Malayan Communist Party, Chin Peng and the Malayan Emergency during which over ten thousand Malayan and British troops and civilians lost their lives.
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Original:  The film made its world debut at the Berlin Film Festival 2006.
Revised:  The film made its world debut at the Berlin Film Festival .
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Original:  It also appeared at the Seattle International Film Festival 2006 and the London Film Festival 2006.
Revised:  It also appeared at the Seattle International Film Festival and the London Film Festival 2006.
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Original:  It also appeared at the Seattle International Film Festival 2006 and the London Film Festival 2006.
Revised:  It also appeared at the Seattle International Film Festival 2006 and the London Film Festival .
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Original:  A 42 year-old woman has died following an accident during a backburning operation on a farm at Black Forest, near Bathurst in New South Wales' central west.
Revised: The accident occurred near Bathurst in NSW's central west A 42 year-old woman has died following an accident during a backburning operation on a farm at Black Forest, near Bathurst in New South Wales' central west.
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Original:  The final Boeing 717 was the 15,599th plane built by the Long Beach plant, the original home of Douglas Aircraft and McDonnell Douglas.
Revised: "AirTran Airways would like to thank the many Boeing employees for their hard work and dedication over the years and enabling us to build a world-class aircraft fleet that is unparalleled in the aviation industry," said Joe Leonard, Chairman and Chief Operating Officer of AirTran Airways. The final Boeing 717 was the 15,599th plane built by the Long Beach plant, the original home of Douglas Aircraft and McDonnell Douglas.
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Original:  Its future is also uncertain as Boeing's contract to product the aircraft expires in 2008
Revised:  Its future is also uncertain as Boeing's contract to produce the aircraft expires in 2008
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Original:  You could instead give Battle for Wesnoth a try -- an open source turn-based strategy game in a fantasy setting.
Revised:  You could instead give Battle for Wesnoth a try — an open source turn-based strategy game in a fantasy setting.
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Original:  While its graphics are simple by modern standards, the sheer amount of units and scenarios that are available for the game is staggering.
Revised:  While its graphics are simple by modern standards, the sheer number of units and scenarios that are available for the game is staggering.
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Original:   The game is reminiscent of turn-based strategy classics such as Heroes of Might and Magic or Warlords.
Revised:  Your best units can be taken from one mission to the next, "levelling up" in the process. Even units of the same type vary in their abilities, making the tactical use of the right unit at the right time very important. The game is reminiscent of turn-based strategy classics such as Heroes of Might and Magic or Warlords.
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Original:  To play an Open Source game, it'd have to be very good, and appeal to my tastes, and I haven't found any Open Source games like that, sadl 
Revised:  To play an Open Source game, it'd have to be very good, and appeal to my tastes, and I haven't found any Open Source games like that, sadly. 
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Original:  We want tokeep it simple.
Revised:  We want to keep it simple.
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Original:  For the practically minded, " open source " means that you do not have to pay to download or play the game .
Revised:  For the practically minded, " open-source " means that you do not have to pay to download or play the game .
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Original:  For the practically minded, " open source " means that you do not have to pay to download or play the game .
Revised:  For the practically minded, " open source " means that the code which the game is made of is available to anyone who wishes to use, redistribute or change it .
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Original: A vacation bench of the Supreme Court comprising Justices Arijit Pasayat and L.S Panta issued a ntice to the Central Government questioning the basis on which the decision to reserve 27\% of the seats in universities for mambers of the "backward" castes (O.B.Cs) was made.
Revised: A vacation bench of the Supreme Court comprising Justices Arijit Pasayat and L.S Panta issued a notice to the Central Government questioning the basis on which the decision to reserve 27\% of the seats in universities for mambers of the "backward" castes (O.B.Cs) was made.
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Original: A vacation bench of the Supreme Court comprising Justices Arijit Pasayat and L.S Panta issued a notice to the Central Government questioning the basis on which the decision to reserve 27\% of the seats in universities for mambers of the "backward" castes (O.B.Cs) was made.
Revised: A vacation bench of the Supreme Court comprising Justices Arijit Pasayat and L.S Panta issued a notice to the Central Government questioning the basis on which the decision to reserve 27\% of the seats in universities for members of the "backward" castes (O.B.Cs) was made.
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Original: A vacation bench of the  Supreme Court comprising Justices Arijit Pasayat and L.S Panta issued a notice to the Central Government questioning the basis on which the decision to reserve 27\% of the seats in universities for members of the "backward" castes(O. B.Cs) was made.
Revised: A vacation bench of the Supreme Court comprising Justices Arijit Pasayat and L.S Panta issued a notice to the Central Government questioning the basis for the government's decision to reserve 27\% of the seats in universities for members of the "backward" castes(O. B.Cs) was made.
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Original: A vacation bench of the  Supreme Court comprising Justices Arijit Pasayat and L.S Panta issued a notice to the Central Government questioning the basis on which the decision to reserve 27\% of the seats in universities for members of the "backward" castes(O. B.Cs) was made.
Revised: A vacation bench of the Supreme Court comprising Justices Arijit Pasayat and L.S Panta issued a notice to the Central Government questioning the basis on which the decision to reserve 27\% of the seats in universities for members of the Other Backward Class group of castes.
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Original:  Additional Solicitor General Gopal Subramianam, who was representing the respondents, accepted the notice and apreciated the Court's view that agitating medical students should return to work in the interest of the patients.
Revised:  Additional Solicitor General Gopal Subramianam, who was representing the respondents, accepted the notice and appreciated the Court's view that agitating medical students should return to work in the interest of the patients.
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Original:  The medical students welcomed this move and have decided to start running parallel OPDs from tomorrow onward .
Revised:  The medical students welcomed this move and have decided to start running parallel outpatient clinics from tomorrow onwards .
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Original:  The main Opposition party, the BJP has said that it supports the reservation policy, but that financially disadvantaged students from the "forward" castes should also be given consideration  
Revised:  The main opposition party, the BJP has said that it supports the reservation policy, but that financially disadvantaged students from the "forward" castes should also be given consideration 
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Original:  The main Opposition party, the BJP has said that it supports the reservation policy, but that financially disadvantaged students from the "forward" castes should also be given consideration  
Revised:  The main Opposition party, the BJP has said that it supports the reservation policy, but that financially disadvantaged students from the "forward" castes should also be given consideration . 
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Original:  Additional Solicitor General Gopal Subramianam, who was representing the respondents, accepted the notice and appreciated the Court's view that agitating medical students should return to work in the interest of the patients.
Revised:  Additional Solicitor General Gopal Subramianam, who was representing the respondents, accepted the notice and appreciated the Court's view that striking medical students should return to work in the interest of the patients.
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Original: The disc, available from today, is being distributed via Robins’ website : www. replaydvd.co.uk He hopes to release further forgotten classics.
Revised: The disc, available from today, is being distributed via Robins’ website . He hopes to release further forgotten classics.
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Original: The  Liberal Party of Australia 's most powerful man, Australian Prime Minister John Howard has said he would not support an amalgamation of the Queensland Liberal and National parties.
Revised: The Liberal Party of Australia , Prime Minister John Howard has said he would not support an amalgamation of the Queensland Liberal and National parties.
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Original:  The statement comes after the Queensland branches of both parties held seperate meetings where the proposal was supported in-principle.
Revised:  The statement comes after the Queensland branches of both parties held separate meetings where the proposal was supported in-principle.
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Original:  He told ABC Radio that he beleives the coalition have a "winning formula" federally.
Revised:  He told ABC Radio that he believes the coalition have a "winning formula" federally.
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Original:  He said that the national party operate differently to other parties in that it is based at a divisonal level within each state and then forms together federally.
Revised:  He said that the national party operate differently to other parties in that it is based at a divisional level within each state and then forms together federally.
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Original: The Premier said, pointedly: "There is one thing that I will fight for to my last political breath, is to preserve the nationwide unity of the Liberal Party of Australia.
Revised: The Prime Minister said, pointedly: "There is one thing that I will fight for to my last political breath, is to preserve the nationwide unity of the Liberal Party of Australia.
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Original: New Zealand Post is set to bring in zip codes for New Zealand, at the cost of $80 million (NZD).
Revised: New Zealand Post is set to bring in postal codes for New Zealand, at the cost of $80 million (NZD).
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Original:  The New Zealand Herald reported that the zip code system will be revealed Wednesday 31 May.
Revised:  The New Zealand Herald reported that a new postal code system will be revealed Wednesday 31 May.
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Original: The American Indian Movement declaration follows: The American Indian Movement Grand Governing Council representing the National and International leadership of the American Indian Movement once again is vehemently and emphatically repudiating and condemning the outrageous statements made by academic literary and Indian fraud, Ward Churchillin relationship to the 9-11 tragedy in New York City that claimed thousands of innocent people ’s lives.
Revised: The American Indian Movement The American Indian Movement Grand Governing Council representing the National and International leadership of the American Indian Movement once again is vehemently and emphatically repudiating and condemning the outrageous statements made by academic literary and Indian fraud, Ward Churchillin relationship to the 9-11 tragedy in New York City that claimed thousands of innocent people ’s lives.
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Original: The American Indian Movement declaration follows: The American Indian Movement Grand Governing Council representing the National and International leadership of the American Indian Movement once again is vehemently and emphatically repudiating and condemning the outrageous statements made by academic literary and Indian fraud, Ward Churchillin relationship to the 9-11 tragedy in New York City that claimed thousands of innocent people ’s lives.
Revised: The American Indian Movement declaration follows: says Churchill ’s lives.
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