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Original: Mayor of Dzerzhinskiy city near Moscow shot dead on Friday (March, 31), as  "Interfax" news agency reports, quoting the source from Moscow region law-enforcement machinery .
Revised: The mayor of the city of Dzerzhinskiy near Moscow was shot dead on Friday (March, 31), as "Interfax" news agency reports, quoting the source from Moscow region law-enforcement machinery .
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Original: Mayor of Dzerzhinskiy city near Moscow shot dead on Friday (March, 31), as  "Interfax" news agency reports, quoting the source from Moscow region law-enforcement machinery .
Revised: Mayor of Dzerzhinskiy city near Moscow shot dead on Friday (March, 31), as the "Interfax" news agency reports, quoting the source from Moscow region law-enforcement machinery .
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Original: Mayor of Dzerzhinskiy city near Moscow shot dead on Friday (March, 31), as  "Interfax" news agency reports, quoting the source from Moscow region law-enforcement machinery .
Revised: Mayor of Dzerzhinskiy city near Moscow shot dead on Friday (March, 31), as "Interfax" news agency reports, quoting Moscow region law-enforcement machinery .
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Original: Mayor of Dzerzhinskiy city near Moscow shot dead on Friday (March, 31), as  "Interfax" news agency reports, quoting the source from Moscow region law-enforcement machinery .
Revised: Mayor of Dzerzhinskiy city near Moscow shot dead on Friday (March, 31), as "Interfax" news agency reports, quoting the source from Moscow region law-enforcement officials .
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Original:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children  playground.
Revised:  The body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children playground.
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Original:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children  playground.
Revised:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children playground.
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Original:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children  playground.
Revised:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children playground.
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Original:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children  playground.
Revised:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city at 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children playground.
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Original:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children  playground.
Revised:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 Tomilinskaya St . near the children playground.
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Original:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children  playground.
Revised:  Body of Victor Dorkin, the Head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, with the multiple gunshot wounds was found at 03:05 {GMT+3+DST) in the city on the 5 , Tomilinskaya st . near the children 's playground.
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Original:  Preliminary crime scene investigation reported that  10 shells were found , fired from Makarov pistol.
Revised:  Preliminary crime scene investigation reported that 10 shells were found fired from a Makarov pistol.
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Original:  Investigation in progress.
Revised:  An investigation is in progress.
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Original:  He was educated as  chemical production engineer,  science candidate since 2004.
Revised:  He was educated as a chemical production engineer, science candidate since 2004.
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Original:  He was educated as  chemical production engineer,  science candidate since 2004.
Revised:  He was educated as chemical production engineer, and was a science candidate since 2004.
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Original:  First elected as Dzerzhinskiy mayor in 1991
Revised:  He was first elected as mayor of Dzerzhinskiy in 1991
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Original: frame|Victor _Dorkin The mayor of the city of Dzerzhinskiy near Moscow was shot dead on Friday, March 31, as the "Interfax " news agency reports, quoting Moscow region law-enforcement officials.
Revised: frame|Victor Dorkin The mayor of the city of Dzerzhinskiy near Moscow was shot dead on Friday, March 31, as the "Interfax " news agency reports, quoting Moscow region law-enforcement officials.
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Original: frame|Victor _Dorkin The mayor of the city of Dzerzhinskiy near Moscow was shot dead on Friday, March 31, as the "Interfax " news agency reports, quoting Moscow region law-enforcement officials.
Revised: frame|Victor _Dorkin The mayor of the city of Dzerzhinskiy near Moscow was shot dead on Friday, March 31, as the Interfax news agency reports, quoting Moscow region law-enforcement officials.
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Original:  The body of Victor Dorkin, the head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, was found at 03:05  GMT+3 +DST ) in the city at 5 Tomilinskaya St. near the children's playground.
Revised:  The body of Victor Dorkin, the head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, was found at 03:05 ( GMT+3 +DST ) in the city at 5 Tomilinskaya St. near the children's playground.
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Original:  The body of Victor Dorkin, the head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, was found at 03:05  GMT+3 +DST ) in the city at 5 Tomilinskaya St. near the children's playground.
Revised:  The body of Victor Dorkin, the head of the Local Government Board of Dzerzhinskiy, was found at 03:05 GMT+3 ) in the city at 5 Tomilinskaya St. near the children's playground.
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Original: According to leading Shia politicians, who are also losing faith in the Prime Minister, the US Ambassador to Iraq Zalmay Khalilzad has claimed that George W  Bush "doesn't want, doesn't support, doesn't accept" Mr. Jaafari's decision to stay at his post.
Revised: According to leading Shia politicians, who are also losing faith in the Prime Minister, the US Ambassador to Iraq Zalmay Khalilzad has claimed that George W . Bush "doesn't want, doesn't support, doesn't accept" Mr. Jaafari's decision to stay at his post.
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Original: image:Thailand Narathiwat.png|The location of the troubled Narathiwat province]] image:Thaksin.jpg|Prime Minister Thaksin Shinawatra Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election, injuring two policemen and four soldiers.
Revised: image:Thailand Narathiwat.png|The location of the troubled Narathiwat province]] Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election, injuring two policemen and four soldiers.
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Original: left image:Thailand Narathiwat.png|The location of the troubled Narathiwat province Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election, injuring two policemen and four soldiers.
Revised: left Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election, injuring two policemen and four soldiers.
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Original:  Results are expected later today  
Revised:  Results are expected later today . 
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Original: 150px|left Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election, injuring two policemen and four soldiers.
Revised:  Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election, injuring two policemen and four soldiers.
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Original: Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election , injuring two policemen and four soldiers  .
Revised: Several explosions occured at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election , injuring two policemen and four soldiers .
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Original: Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations in Thailand during the current snap election , injuring two policemen and four soldiers  .
Revised: Several explosions occured in Narathiwat, one of Southern Thailand's Muslim-majority provinces, at polling stations during the current snap election , injuring two policemen and four soldiers .
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Original: Several explosions occured at polling stations  during the current snap election in Narathiwat , Thailand, one of the country's southern Muslim-majority provinces.
Revised: Several explosions occured at polling stations in Narathiwat, Thailand, during the current snap election in Narathiwat , Thailand, one of the country's southern Muslim-majority provinces.
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Original: Several explosions occured at polling stations  during the current snap election in Narathiwat , Thailand, one of the country's southern Muslim-majority provinces.
Revised: Several explosions occured at polling stations during the current snap election . Narathiwat is one of the country's southern Muslim-majority provinces.
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Original: Several explosions occured at polling stations in Narathiwat, Thailand, during the current snap election.
Revised: Several explosions occurred at polling stations in Narathiwat, Thailand, during the current snap election.
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Original: A statement by army officials said yesterday that early reports suggested that the helicopter crashed at around 5:30pm local time on Saturday, near the town of Youssifiyah, a ?????? approximately 12 miles southwest of the Iraqi capital of Baghdad.
Revised: A statement by army officials said yesterday that early reports suggested that the helicopter crashed at around 5:30pm local time on Saturday, near the town of Youssifiyah, located approximately 12 miles southwest of the Iraqi capital of Baghdad.
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Original:  As of 3 p.m. GMT today, the US military have announced that they believe the aircraft was shot down  
Revised:  As of 3 p.m. GMT today, the US military have announced that they believe the aircraft was shot down . 
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Original:  As of 3 p.m. GMT today, the US military have announced that they believe the aircraft was shot down . Related Story UR
Revised:  As of 3 p.m. GMT today, the US military have announced that they believe the aircraft was shot down Related Story UR
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Original:  As of 3 p.m. GMT today, the US military have announced that they believe the aircraft was shot down . Related Story UR
Revised:  As of 3 p.m. GMT today, the US military have announced that they believe the aircraft was shot down . 
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Original: The flag of Iran Iran's location Anti-American mural in Tehran Claims in the British newspaper The Sunday Telegraph that senior military officers of the United Kingdom will meet with government officials on Monday to discuss a US-led assault on Iran have been denied by the Ministry of Defence.
Revised: The flag of Iran Claims in the British newspaper The Sunday Telegraph that senior military officers of the United Kingdom will meet with government officials on Monday to discuss a US-led assault on Iran have been denied by the Ministry of Defence.
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Original:  Somewhat surprisingly, the Ministry of Defence failed to comment on this point, merely stressing the false nature of the claims regarding the meeting supposedly set for tomorrow (Monday, April 3).
Revised:  Somewhat surprisingly, the MoD failed to comment on this point, merely stressing the false nature of the claims regarding the meeting supposedly set for tomorrow (Monday, April 3).
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Original: A report from the british government concludes that the Occupation of Iraq motivated the men that performed the suicidal bombings of London summer 2005.
Revised: A report from the british government concludes that the Occupation of Iraq motivated the men that performed the suicide bombings of London summer 2005.
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Original: The President of the Hellenic Republic  Carolos Papoulias attended the inauguration ceremony of the Greek Orthodox Church of the Annunciation in Alexandria, Egypt.
Revised: The President of the Hellenic Republic , Carolos Papoulias attended the inauguration ceremony of the Greek Orthodox Church of the Annunciation in Alexandria, Egypt.
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Original: The President of the Hellenic Republic, Carolos Papoulias  attended the inauguration ceremony of the Greek Orthodox Church of the Annunciation in Alexandria, Egypt.
Revised: The President of the Hellenic Republic, Carolos Papoulias , attended the inauguration ceremony of the Greek Orthodox Church of the Annunciation in Alexandria, Egypt.
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Original:  Tomorrow, Carolos Papoulias will have an unofficial meeting with the President of Egypt Hosni Mubarak in Cairo . Greec
Revised:  Tomorrow, Carolos Papoulias will have an unofficial meeting with the President of Egypt Hosni Mubarak in Cairo Greec
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Original:  Tomorrow, Carolos Papoulias will have an unofficial meeting with the President of Egypt Hosni Mubarak in Cairo . Greec
Revised:  Tomorrow, Carolos Papoulias will have an unofficial meeting with the President of Egypt Hosni Mubarak in Cairo . 
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Original:  Tomorrow, Carolos Papoulias will have an unofficial meeting with the President of Egypt Hosni Mubarak in Cairo  
Revised:  Tomorrow, Carolos Papoulias will have an unofficial meeting with the President of Egypt Hosni Mubarak in Cairo . 
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Original:  The ceremony was blessed by the Ecumenical Patriarch of Constantinople Bartholomew and was attended, except from the Greek President, by two ministers of the Greek government, a former Prime Minister of Greece, many greek businessmen and the Orthodox Bishops of Africa.
Revised:  The ceremony was blessed by the Ecumenical Patriarch of Constantinople , Bartholomew. Also attending, in addition to the Greek President, by two ministers of the Greek government, a former Prime Minister of Greece, many greek businessmen and the Orthodox Bishops of Africa.
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Original:  The ceremony was blessed by the Ecumenical Patriarch of Constantinople Bartholomew and was attended, except from the Greek President, by two ministers of the Greek government, a former Prime Minister of Greece, many greek businessmen and the Orthodox Bishops of Africa.
Revised:  The ceremony was blessed by the Ecumenical Patriarch of Constantinople Bartholomew and was attended, except from the Greek President, were two ministers of the Greek government, a former Prime Minister of Greece, many greek businessmen and the Orthodox Bishops of Africa.
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Original:  The ceremony was blessed by the Ecumenical Patriarch of Constantinople Bartholomew and was attended, except from the Greek President, by two ministers of the Greek government, a former Prime Minister of Greece, many greek businessmen and the Orthodox Bishops of Africa.
Revised:  The ceremony was blessed by the Ecumenical Patriarch of Constantinople Bartholomew and was attended, except from the Greek President, by two ministers of the Greek government, a former Prime Minister of Greece, many Greek businessmen and the Orthodox Bishops of Africa.
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Original:  Tomorrow, Carolos Papoulias will have an unofficial meeting with the President of Egypt Hosni Mubarak in Cairo .
Revised:  Tomorrow, President Papoulias will meet unofficially in Cairo with President Hosni Mubarak of Egypt .
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Original:  The accompanyin National Cherry Blossom Festival is an annual celebration, commemorating the March 27, 1912, gift to the city of 3,000 Japanese cherry trees from Mayor Yukio Ozaki of Tokyo.
Revised:  The accompanyin National Cherry Blossom Festival is an annual celebration, commemorating the March 27, 1912, gift to the city of 3,000 Japanese cherry treessfrom Mayor Yukio Ozaki of Tokyo.
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Original:  At 04:00 UTC , the river Elbe had  a level of 7.36 meters, with the water still rising.
Revised:  At 04:00 UTC the river Elbe had a level of 7.36 meters, with the water still rising.
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Original:  At 04:00 UTC , the river Elbe had  a level of 7.36 meters, with the water still rising.
Revised:  At 04:00 UTC , the river Elbe had risen to a level of 7.36 meters, with the water still rising.
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Original:  Besides RTL, several other news agencies have also positioned themselves at critical points , in order to provide TV and radio consumers with information.
Revised:  Besides RTL, several other news agencies have also positioned themselves at critical points , in order to provide TV and radio users with information.
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Original:  The media vehicles can be found at spots along the river , where something unusual might happenor where effords are made to protect cultural assets of the city.
Revised:  The media can be found at spots along the river , where something unusual might happenor where effords are made to protect cultural assets of the city.
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Original:  The media vehicles can be found at spots along the river , where something unusual might happenor where effords are made to protect cultural assets of the city.
Revised:  The media vehicles can be found at these critical points along the river , where something unusual might happenor where effords are made to protect cultural assets of the city.
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Original:  The media vehicles can be found at spots along the river , where something unusual might happenor where effords are made to protect cultural assets of the city.
Revised:  The media vehicles can be found at spots along the river where effords are made to protect cultural assets of the city.
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Original:  The media vehicles can be found at spots along the river , where something unusual might happenor where effords are made to protect cultural assets of the city.
Revised:  The media vehicles can be found at spots along the river , where something unusual might happenor where effords are made to protect cultural assests of the city.
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Original: A report leaked from the Home Office in the United Kingdom says that the U.K. is preparing 'mass graves' in the event that the Bird Flu [ H5N1 virus ] mutates and also says that, "there are likely to be substantially more deaths than can be managed within current timescales."
Revised: A report leaked from the Home Office in the United Kingdom says that the U.K. is preparing 'mass graves' in the event that the Bird Flu [ Bird Flu ] mutates and also says that, "there are likely to be substantially more deaths than can be managed within current timescales."
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Original:  The report also says that vaccines against the virus will not be available for "  the first wave " of the pandemic and that the vaccines would not be a "silver bullet.  [ 
Revised:  The report also says that vaccines against the virus will not be available for " the first wave of a pandemic" and that the vaccines would not be a "silver bullet. [ 
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Original:  The report also says that vaccines against the virus will not be available for "  the first wave " of the pandemic and that the vaccines would not be a "silver bullet.  [ 
Revised:  The report also says that vaccines against the virus will not be available for " the first wave " of the pandemic and that the vaccines would not be a "silver bullet. "Common[ 
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Original:  The report also says that vaccines against the virus will not be available for "  the first wave " of the pandemic and that the vaccines would not be a "silver bullet.  [ 
Revised:  The report also says that vaccines against the virus will not be available for " the first wave " of the pandemic and that the vaccines would not be a "silver bullet. [mass 
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Original: A report  leaked from the Home Office in the United Kingdom says that the U.K. is preparing 'mass graves' in the event that the Avian Flu [Bird Flu] mutates and also says that, "there are likely to be substantially more deaths than can be managed within current timescales."
Revised: A report leaked from the Home Office in the United Kingdom states that the U.K. is preparing 'mass graves' in the event that the Avian Flu [Bird Flu] mutates and also says that, "there are likely to be substantially more deaths than can be managed within current timescales."
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Original: A report  leaked from the Home Office in the United Kingdom says that the U.K. is preparing 'mass graves' in the event that the Avian Flu [Bird Flu] mutates and also says that, "there are likely to be substantially more deaths than can be managed within current timescales."
Revised: A report leaked from the Home Office in the United Kingdom says that the U.K. is preparing 'mass graves' in the event that the Avian Flu [Bird Flu] mutates . It also states that, "there are likely to be substantially more deaths than can be managed within current timescales."
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Original:  The report also states that as many as 320,000 people could die if the virus mutates.
Revised:  and that as many as 320,000 people could die if the virus mutates.
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Original:  "  ]   Prudent precautionary planning is under way across all elements of the response, including the health service, other essential services and local authorities," said a Home Office spokesman.
Revised:  " Common ] Prudent precautionary planning is under way across all elements of the response, including the health service, other essential services and local authorities," said a Home Office spokesman.
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Original:  "  ]   Prudent precautionary planning is under way across all elements of the response, including the health service, other essential services and local authorities," said a Home Office spokesman.
Revised:  " mass] Prudent precautionary planning is under way across all elements of the response, including the health service, other essential services and local authorities," said a Home Office spokesman.
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Original:  "  ]   Prudent precautionary planning is under way across all elements of the response, including the health service, other essential services and local authorities," said a Home Office spokesman.
Revised:  " ] " Prudent precautionary planning is under way across all elements of the response, including the health service, other essential services and local authorities," said a Home Office spokesman.
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