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Original: The Los Angeles Times reports: "Sierra Leoneis one of those nations where decades of foreign aid have failed to appreciably lift the fortunes of the people .
Revised: The Los Angeles Times writes that Sierra Leone, in spite of decades of foreign aid have failed to appreciably lift the fortunes of the people .
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Original:  The actress  best known for playing Blanche Jones in the soap opera Coronation Street died this morning in hospital.
Revised:  The actress was best known for playing Blanche Jones in the soap opera Coronation Street died this morning in hospital.
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Original:  Jones was admitted to hospital in October for a “life saving” surgery.
Revised:  Jones was admitted to hospital in October of this year for "life saving" surgery.
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Original:  William Roche , who plays Ken Barlow on the show said  Jones was a “brilliant actress” and had a “ amazing dry wit ” . He added  "I don't think Maggie ever realised how much she was loved - not only by everyone on the show but by the millions of Blanche fans out there.
Revised:  William Roche , who plays Ken Barlow on the show said that Jones was a “brilliant actress” and had a “ amazing dry wit ” . He added "I don't think Maggie ever realised how much she was loved - not only by everyone on the show but by the millions of Blanche fans out there.
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Original:  William Roche , who plays Ken Barlow on the show said  Jones was a “brilliant actress” and had a “ amazing dry wit ” . He added  "I don't think Maggie ever realised how much she was loved - not only by everyone on the show but by the millions of Blanche fans out there.
Revised:  William Roche , who plays Ken Barlow on the show said Jones was a "brilliant actress" and had an " amazing dry wit ” . He added "I don't think Maggie ever realised how much she was loved - not only by everyone on the show but by the millions of Blanche fans out there.
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Original:  William Roche , who plays Ken Barlow on the show said  Jones was a “brilliant actress” and had a “ amazing dry wit ” . He added  "I don't think Maggie ever realised how much she was loved - not only by everyone on the show but by the millions of Blanche fans out there.
Revised:  William Roche , who plays Ken Barlow on the show said Jones was a “brilliant actress” and had a “ amazing dry wit " . He added "I don't think Maggie ever realised how much she was loved - not only by everyone on the show but by the millions of Blanche fans out there.
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Original:  William Roche , who plays Ken Barlow on the show said  Jones was a “brilliant actress” and had a “ amazing dry wit ” . He added  "I don't think Maggie ever realised how much she was loved - not only by everyone on the show but by the millions of Blanche fans out there.
Revised:  William Roche , who plays Ken Barlow on the show said Jones was a “brilliant actress” and had a “ amazing dry wit ” . He added : "I don't think Maggie ever realised how much she was loved - not only by everyone on the show but by the millions of Blanche fans out there.
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Original:  Because the show is written in six weeks in advance she appeared up until recently.
Revised:  Because the show is written six weeks in advance she appeared up until recently.
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Original: If found guilty Henry could face the heaviest penalty under FIFAs guidelines: the lopping off of his hands.
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Original:  I have only announced they have asked it, but the presence in the Soccerex they don't took it very, I would say, seriously.
Revised:  I have only announced they have asked it, but the presence in the Soccerex they don't take it very, I would say, seriously.
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Original:  I have only announced they have asked it, but the presence in the Soccerex they don't take it very, I would say, seriously.
Revised:  I have only announced they have asked it, but the presence in the Soccerex they don't took it very, I would say, seriously.
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Original:  On the issue of what types of technology might be investigated, Blatter confirmed that two companies looking at  were due to report to the rule-making  (IFAB) in March.
Revised:  On the issue of what types of technology might be investigated, Blatter confirmed that two companies looking at were due to report to the rule-making International Football Association Board (IFAB) in March.
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Original: Refereeing working group Sepp Blatter in 2007 Blatter said of the crisis in refereeing in the world game that: The committee was of the opinion that we are at a crossroads: where shall we go with refereeing in the future?
Revised: Refereeing working group Blatter said of the crisis in refereeing in the world game that: The committee was of the opinion that we are at a crossroads: where shall we go with refereeing in the future?
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Original:  He said the incident has "nothing to do" with politics or Iran's nuclear program 
Revised:  He said the incident has "nothing to do" with politics or Iran's nuclear program .
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Original:  Miliband denied the sailors had any malicious intent.
Revised:  Miliband denied the sailors had any meeeeean intent.
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Original:  He said the incident has "nothing to do" with politics or Iran's nuclear program .
Revised:  He said the incident has "nothing to do" with politics or Iran's nuclear program 
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Original: The news comes hours after British Foreign Minister David Miliband spoke to his Iranian counterpart Manouchehr Mottaki by phone and pressed him for clear information on the incident.
Revised: The news comes hours after British Foreign Secretary David Miliband spoke to his Iranian counterpart Manouchehr Mottaki by phone and pressed him for clear information on the incident.
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Original:  The director of alumni relations and development for Brasenose College, Jennifer Lewis, noted that the founder of the Ashmolean, Elias Ashmole, had been a student at the college, and said that the dual visit was "particularly fitting"
Revised:  The director of alumni relations and development for Brasenose College, Jennifer Lewis, noted that the founder of the Ashmolean, Elias Ashmole, had been a student at the college, and said that the visit by the Queen to both institutions on the same day was "particularly fitting"
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Original:  The museum re-opened its doors on 7 November 2009, in advance of the official ceremony by the Queen.
Revised:  The museum reopened its doors on 7 November 2009, in advance of the official ceremony by the Queen.
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Original:  The museum reopened its doors on 7 November 2009, in advance of the official ceremony by the Queen.
Revised:  The museum reopened its doors on November 7, 2009, in advance of the official ceremony by the Queen.
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Original:  Goronwy Price is one the candidate representing the Environmentalists for Nuclear Energy party.
Revised:  Goronwy Price is a candidate representing the Environmentalists for Nuclear Energy party.
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Original: right American botanist Lou Jost, one of the world's leading orchid hunters, has discovered the smallest orchid in the world among the roots of a larger plant in a nature reserve in Bolivia, South America.
Revised:  American botanist Lou Jost, one of the world's leading orchid hunters, has discovered the smallest orchid in the world among the roots of a larger plant in a nature reserve in Bolivia, South America.
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Original:  The finding beats the previous record  Platystele jungermannioides with 2.5mm flowers.
Revised:  The finding tops the previous record Platystele jungermannioides with 2.5mm flowers.
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Original:  The finding beats the previous record  Platystele jungermannioides with 2.5mm flowers.
Revised:  The finding beats the previous record of Platystele jungermannioides with 2.5mm flowers.
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Original:  I found it among the roots of another plant that I had collected, another small orchid which I took back to grow in my greenhouse to get it to flower.
Revised: " I found it among the roots of another plant that I had collected, another small orchid which I took back to grow in my greenhouse to get it to flower.
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Original:  Looking at the flower is often the best way to be able to identify which species of orchid you've got hold of – and can tell you whether you're looking at an unknown species or not.  --Lou Jost
Revised:  Looking at the flower is often the best way to be able to identify which species of orchid you've got hold of – and can tell you whether you're looking at an unknown species or not. " --Lou Jost
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Original:  Looking at the flower is often the best way to be able to identify which species of orchid you've got hold of – and can tell you whether you're looking at an unknown species or not." --Lou Jost
Revised:  Looking at the flower is often the best way to be able to identify which species of orchid you've got hold of – and can tell you whether you're looking at an unknown species or not." he said.
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Original:  The UK  Government announced today that it has commissioned a report on whether the legal alcohol limit for driving, and whether the laws on driving under the influence of drugs  should be tightened.
Revised:  The Government announced today that it has commissioned a report on whether the legal alcohol limit for driving, and whether the laws on driving under the influence of drugs should be tightened.
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Original:  The UK  Government announced today that it has commissioned a report on whether the legal alcohol limit for driving, and whether the laws on driving under the influence of drugs  should be tightened.
Revised:  The UK Government announced today it has commissioned a report on whether the legal alcohol limit for driving, and whether the laws on driving under the influence of drugs should be tightened.
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Original:  The UK  Government announced today that it has commissioned a report on whether the legal alcohol limit for driving, and whether the laws on driving under the influence of drugs  should be tightened.
Revised:  The UK Government announced today that it has commissioned a report on whether the legal alcohol limit for driving, and whether the laws on driving under the influence of drugs , should be tightened.
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Original:  The report, by Oxford University academic Sir Peter North, is to be completed by April for the Secretary of State for Transport, Lord Adonis.
Revised:  The report, by Oxford University academic Sir Peter North, should be completed by April for the Secretary of State for Transport, Lord Adonis.
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Original:  The news has been applauded by representatives of motoring organisations.
Revised:  The news was applauded by representatives of motoring organisations.
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Original:  The Automobile Association's President, Edmund King, said that he was "pleased that these complex issues will be addressed".
Revised:  The Automobile Association's President, Edmund King, said he was "pleased that these complex issues will be addressed".
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Original:  The RAC's spokesman said that drug-driving was a "growing problem", and lowering the alcohol limit would reduce the number of fatalities.
Revised:  The RAC's spokesman said drug-driving was a "growing problem", and lowering the alcohol limit would reduce the number of fatalities.
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Original:  The RAC's spokesman said that drug-driving was a "growing problem", and lowering the alcohol limit would reduce the number of fatalities.
Revised:  The RAC's spokesman said that drug-driving is a "growing problem", and lowering the alcohol limit would reduce the number of fatalities.
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Original:  The RAC's spokesman said that drug-driving was a "growing problem", and lowering the alcohol limit would reduce the number of fatalities.
Revised:  The RAC's spokesman said that drug-driving was a "growing problem", and lowering the alcohol limit would reduce fatalities.
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Original:  However, the Conservative Party took a different view, with the Shadow Transport Secretary Theresa Villiers saying that they were "yet to be convinced of the case for an across-the-board reduction in the drink-driving limit", and  would certainly oppose any suggestion of penalties being reduced.
Revised:  However, the Conservative Party took a different view, with Shadow Transport Secretary Theresa Villiers saying that they were "yet to be convinced of the case for an across-the-board reduction in the drink-driving limit", and would certainly oppose any suggestion of penalties being reduced.
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Original:  However, the Conservative Party took a different view, with the Shadow Transport Secretary Theresa Villiers saying that they were "yet to be convinced of the case for an across-the-board reduction in the drink-driving limit", and  would certainly oppose any suggestion of penalties being reduced.
Revised:  However, the Conservative Party took a different view, with the Shadow Transport Secretary , Theresa Villiers, saying they were "yet to be convinced of the case for an across-the-board reduction in the drink-driving limit", and would certainly oppose any suggestion of penalties being reduced.
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Original:  However, the Conservative Party took a different view, with the Shadow Transport Secretary Theresa Villiers saying that they were "yet to be convinced of the case for an across-the-board reduction in the drink-driving limit", and  would certainly oppose any suggestion of penalties being reduced.
Revised:  However, the Conservative Party took a different view, with the Shadow Transport Secretary Theresa Villiers saying that they were "yet to be convinced of the case for an across-the-board reduction in the drink-driving limit", and , would certainly oppose any suggestion of penalties being reduced.
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Original:  He is a former member of the Law Commission and chaired the Road Traffic Law Review between 1985 and 1988, which led to the Road Traffic Act  1991.
Revised:  A former member of the Law Commission and chaired the Road Traffic Law Review between 1985 and 1988, which led to the Road Traffic Act 1991.
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Original:  He is a former member of the Law Commission and chaired the Road Traffic Law Review between 1985 and 1988, which led to the Road Traffic Act  1991.
Revised:  He is a former member of the Law Commission , he chaired the Road Traffic Law Review between 1985 and 1988, which led to the Road Traffic Act 1991.
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Original:  He is a former member of the Law Commission and chaired the Road Traffic Law Review between 1985 and 1988, which led to the Road Traffic Act  1991.
Revised:  He is a former member of the Law Commission and chaired the Road Traffic Law Review between 1985 and 1988, leading to the Road Traffic Act 1991.
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Original:  He is a former member of the Law Commission and chaired the Road Traffic Law Review between 1985 and 1988, which led to the Road Traffic Act  1991.
Revised:  He is a former member of the Law Commission and chaired the Road Traffic Law Review between 1985 and 1988, which led to the Road Traffic Act of 1991.
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Original:  Commenting on his task , he said that " The  challenge is to see whether changes in the law and its processes can reduce casualties", adding that whilst the issues "are not easy to resolve", he intended to consult "widely"
Revised:  Commenting on his task he stated, " The challenge is to see whether changes in the law and its processes can reduce casualties", adding that whilst the issues "are not easy to resolve", he intended to consult "widely"
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Original:  Commenting on his task , he said that " The  challenge is to see whether changes in the law and its processes can reduce casualties", adding that whilst the issues "are not easy to resolve", he intended to consult "widely"
Revised:  Commenting on his task , he said that " t challenge is to see whether changes in the law and its processes can reduce casualties", adding that whilst the issues "are not easy to resolve", he intended to consult "widely"
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Original:  Commenting on his task , he said that " The  challenge is to see whether changes in the law and its processes can reduce casualties", adding that whilst the issues "are not easy to resolve", he intended to consult "widely"
Revised:  Commenting on his task , he said that " The he challenge is to see whether changes in the law and its processes can reduce casualties", adding that whilst the issues "are not easy to resolve", he intended to consult "widely"
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Original:  The United Kingdom| U.K. Government announced today it has commissioned a report on whether the legal alcohol limit for driving, and whether the laws on driving under the influence of drugs, should be tightened.
Revised:  The U.K. Government announced today it has commissioned a report on whether the legal alcohol limit for driving, and whether the laws on driving under the influence of drugs, should be tightened.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Archaeological excavations in Jerusalem near the Temple Mount are mentioned, suggesting "archaeology in this case has become an ideologically motivated tool of national and religious struggle carried out in a manner that modifies the identity and character of the city and threatens to undermine its stability.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  A classified European Union report for 2009 says Israel is actively pursuing the annexation of Arab east Jerusalem.
Revised:  A classified European Union report for 2009 says Israel is actively pursuing the annexation of east Jerusalem.
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Original:  In Escambia County Florida, officials announced at 2pm they were no longer able to respond to 911 calls for help due to the high winds .
Revised:  In Escambia County Florida, officials announced at 2pm they were no longer able to respond to 911 calls for help due to the high winds 
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Original: Santa Rosa, Okaloosa and Escambia were the first Florida counties reached by the eyewall of the hurricane at 3:25 EDT Sunday afternoon.
Revised: Santa Rosa, Okaloosa and Escambia were the first Florida counties hit by the eyewall of the hurricane at 3:25 EDT Sunday afternoon.
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Original:  This storm , coming 10 months after Hurricane Ivan  struck the panhandle and Mobile Bay region last year , struck just 50 miles east of Ivan's landfall where recovery efforts from that storm were still ongoing.
Revised:  The storm came 10 months after Hurricane Ivan struck the panhandle and Mobile Bay region last year , struck just 50 miles east of Ivan's landfall where recovery efforts from that storm were still ongoing.
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Original:  This storm , coming 10 months after Hurricane Ivan  struck the panhandle and Mobile Bay region last year , struck just 50 miles east of Ivan's landfall where recovery efforts from that storm were still ongoing.
Revised:  This storm , coming 10 months after Hurricane Ivan , which struck the panhandle and Mobile Bay region last year , struck just 50 miles east of Ivan's landfall where recovery efforts from that storm were still ongoing.
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Original:  This storm , coming 10 months after Hurricane Ivan  struck the panhandle and Mobile Bay region last year , struck just 50 miles east of Ivan's landfall where recovery efforts from that storm were still ongoing.
Revised:  This storm , coming 10 months after Hurricane Ivan struck the panhandle and Mobile Bay region last year , struck just 50 miles east of Ivan's , where recovery efforts from that storm were still ongoing.
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Original:  The Mississippi Gulf Coast region was victim to the Category 5 storm, Hurricane Camille, in 1969
Revised:  The Mississippi Gulf Coast region was victim of the Category 5 storm, Hurricane Camille, in 1969
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Original: Baugur Group withdraws from Somerfield bid Baugur Group withdraws from Somerfiled bid July 9, 2005 The Icelandic company Baugur has decided to withdraw from the Somerfield bid because of legal action against some of it's core employees including its CEO, Jón Ásgeir Jónsson, and chief of board, Haukur Loftsson.
Revised: Baugur Group withdraws from Somerfield bid The Icelandic investment firm Baugur has decided to withdraw from the Somerfield bid because of legal action against some of it's core employees including its CEO, Jón Ásgeir Jónsson, and chief of board, Haukur Loftsson.
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Original: It is the latest in a series of attacks that have rocked Pakistan since the government launched an offensive against al-Qaida and the Taliban in the northwest region bordering Afghanistan.
Revised: It is the latest in a series of attacks that have rocked Pakistan since the government launched an offensive against al-Qaeda and the Taliban in the northwest region bordering Afghanistan.
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Original:  The  date and place of the funeral will not be decided until Monday , it's expected to be at Novodevichiye cemetery
Revised:  The date and place of the funeral will not be decided until Monday 
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Original:  Still, the date and place of the funeral will not be decided until Monday  
Revised:  Still, the date and place of the funeral will not be decided until Monday . 
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Original:  The Deputy Prime Minister of  Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov  and the former head of  Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
Revised:  Deputy Prime Minister of Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov and the former head of Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
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Original:  The Deputy Prime Minister of  Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov  and the former head of  Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
Revised:  The Deputy Prime Minister of the Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov and the former head of Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
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Original:  The Deputy Prime Minister of  Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov  and the former head of  Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
Revised:  The Deputy Prime Minister of Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov , and the former head of Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
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Original:  The Deputy Prime Minister of  Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov  and the former head of  Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
Revised:  The Deputy Prime Minister of Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov and the former head of the Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
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Original:  The Deputy Prime Minister of  Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov  and the former head of  Foreign Intelligence Service told about him that "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
Revised:  The Deputy Prime Minister of Russian Cabinet Sergei Ivanov and the former head of Foreign Intelligence Service , remarked that, "this role personified an ideal Soviet spy — smart, refined, intelligent".
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Original:  Russian state broadcasting company VGTRK recently presented a version of the 17 Moments with a restored color.
Revised:  Russian state broadcasting company VGTRK recently presented a version of the 17 Moments with restored color.
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