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Original:  The Unionists were caught off-guard: their organization was deficient, and they had almost no weapons, but they were able to remedy the situation.
Revised:  The Unionists were caught off-guard: they were disorganized and they had almost no weapons, but they were able to remedy the situation.
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Original:  The Unionists were caught off-guard: their organization was deficient, and they had almost no weapons, but they were able to remedy the situation.
Revised:  The Unionists were caught off-guard: their organization was deficient, and they had almost no weapons, but they quickly remedied the situation:
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Original:  Government buildings were systematically plundered and ransacked and they got arms and ammunition from the most unlikely places ;
Revised:  Government buildings were systematically plundered and they gatgered arms and ammunition from the most unlikely places ;
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Original:  With enthusiasm, all men raised barricades and dug trenches in the streets.
Revised:  They enthusiastically raised barricades and dug trenches in the streets.
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Original:  The shooting at firstaccounted for as many friends as enemies , but after white badges bearing the name "Unionista" were distributed, the fire was more effective.
Revised:  At first, friends as well as enemies were attacked , but after white badges bearing the name "Unionista" were distributed, the fire was more effective.
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Original:  A few hours later all males in the city were wearing that token in their hat, and there were even some that had a portrait of the new president on their chest.
Revised:  A few hours later most men of the city were wearing that token in their hat, and there were even some that had a portrait of the new president on their chest.
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Original:  Cars with the Red Cross flag dashed incessantly, carrying a sister on the footboard with her medical supplies on one hand and a machete stuck in her belt.
Revised:  Cars with the Red Cross flag dashed incessantly, nurses rode the running boards, each with medical supplies in one hand and a machete stuck in her belt.
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Original:  After the combats, the water supply pipes and electric cables were damaged, leaving the city in darkness from the first night  ;
Revised:  The combat left water lines and electric cables were damaged, leaving the city in darkness from the first night ;
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Original:  After the combats, the water supply pipes and electric cables were damaged, leaving the city in darkness from the first night  ;
Revised:  After the combats, the water supply pipes and electric cables damaged, leaving the city in darkness from the first night ;
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Original:  After the combats, the water supply pipes and electric cables were damaged, leaving the city in darkness from the first night  ;
Revised:  After the combats, the water supply pipes and electric cables were damaged, leaving the city in darkness from the first night on ;
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Original:  The wildest rumors were the only source of news while bullets whistled about one's ears.
Revised:  Bullets whistled about and the wildest rumors were the only source of news while bullets whistled about one's ears.
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Original:  there, earth from the flower tubs in the patio was stuffed into sacks to build a bomb-proof shelter for women and children and old tram-lines from the street outside were torn up and used for the roof.
Revised:  there, earth from the flower tubs in the patio was stuffed into sacks to build a bomb-proof shelter for women and children . Old tram-lines from the street outside were torn up and used for the roof.
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Original:  there, earth from the flower tubs in the patio was stuffed into sacks to build a bomb-proof shelter for women and children and old tram-lines from the street outside were torn up and used for the roof.
Revised:  there, earth from the flower tubs in the patio was stuffed into sacks to build a bomb-proof shelter for women and children and old tram-lines from the street outside were torn up and used to reinforce the roof.
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Original:  Finally, using debris and dust from a nearby demolished building -destroyed by the 1917-18 earthquakes- the guests were arable to barricade the main entrance to the building.
Revised:  Finally, using debris from a nearby demolished building -destroyed by the 1917-18 earthquakes- the guests were arable to barricade the main entrance to the building.
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Original:  Finally, using debris and dust from a nearby demolished building -destroyed by the 1917-18 earthquakes- the guests were arable to barricade the main entrance to the building.
Revised:  Finally, using debris and dust from a nearby demolished building - destroyed by the 1917-18 earthquakes- the guests were arable to barricade the main entrance to the building.
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Original:  Plundering was rampant , to the point that a store was ransacked across the street from where the Swedish prince was staying .
Revised:  Plundering was rampant : A store across the street from where the Swedish prince was staying .
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Original:  From what was left, he managed to find a flag from Venezuela, which he used to make a  crude Swedish flag that remained on the outside of a hotel window for the rest of the events , notifying both sides that it was a foreign legation.
Revised:  From what was left, he managed to find a flag from Venezuela, which he used to make a crude Swedish flag that flew from a hotel window for the rest of the events , notifying both sides that it was a foreign legation.
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Original:  From what was left, he managed to find a flag from Venezuela, which he used to make a  crude Swedish flag that remained on the outside of a hotel window for the rest of the events , notifying both sides that it was a foreign legation.
Revised:  From what was left, he managed to find a flag from Venezuela, which he used to make a crude Swedish flag that remained on the outside of a hotel window for the duration , notifying both sides that it was a foreign legation.
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Original:  Combat lasted until San José fort fell due partly to hunger and partly to buying the defenders, for the fort commanded the position at "La Palma" entirely .
Revised:  Combat lasted until San José fort fell . When the fort’s hungry defenders were bought off, "La Palma" entirely .
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Original:  Combat lasted until San José fort fell due partly to hunger and partly to buying the defenders, for the fort commanded the position at "La Palma" entirely .
Revised:  Combat lasted until San José fort fell due partly to hunger and partly to buying the defenders, for the fort commanded the position at "La Palma" was indefensible .
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Original:  By the following afternoon  the revolutionaries were absolute masters of the situation.
Revised:  By the following afternoon , the revolutionaries were absolute masters of the situation.
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Original:  After the fighting was over , the damage was not as widespread as initially thought  with San José and the Central Prison suffering most of it.
Revised:  when the fighting ended , the damage was not as widespread as initially thought with San José and the Central Prison suffering most of it.
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Original:  After the fighting was over , the damage was not as widespread as initially thought  with San José and the Central Prison suffering most of it.
Revised:  After the fighting was over , the damage was not as widespread as initially thought , with San José and the Central Prison suffering most of it.
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Original:  However, houses surrounding both structures (which were close to each other ) were peppered with bullets and the streets were partly turned up.
Revised:  Those buildings were near each other and the surrounding houses were peppered with bullets and the streets were partly turned up.
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Original:  However, houses surrounding both structures (which were close to each other ) were peppered with bullets and the streets were partly turned up.
Revised:  However, houses surrounding both structures (which were close to each other ) were peppered with bullets and the streets partly torn up.
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Original:  The Infant's Asylum was hit by a shell, which killed on the spot about thirty mothers and their newborn children . In "La Palma"  the former garrison marched out as prisoners of war.
Revised:  The Infant's Asylum was hit by a shell, killing about thirty mothers and their newborn children . In "La Palma" the former garrison marched out as prisoners of war.
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Original:  The Infant's Asylum was hit by a shell, which killed on the spot about thirty mothers and their newborn children . In "La Palma"  the former garrison marched out as prisoners of war.
Revised:  The Infant's Asylum was hit by a shell, which killed on the spot about thirty mothers and their newborns . In "La Palma" the former garrison marched out as prisoners of war.
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Original:  The Infant's Asylum was hit by a shell, which killed on the spot about thirty mothers and their newborn children . In "La Palma"  the former garrison marched out as prisoners of war.
Revised:  The Infant's Asylum was hit by a shell, which killed on the spot about thirty mothers and their newborn children . In "La Palma" , the former garrison marched out as prisoners of war.
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Original:  All were well nourished and contented and carried away their belongings on their backs while Estrada Cabrera was transported to the Military Academy under diplomatic escort.
Revised:  All were well-nourished and relaxed and took their belongings on their backs while Estrada Cabrera was transported to the Military Academy under diplomatic escort.
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Original:  All were well nourished and contented and carried away their belongings on their backs while Estrada Cabrera was transported to the Military Academy under diplomatic escort.
Revised:  All were well nourished and contented and carried away their belongings on their backs . Meanwhile, Estrada Cabrera was transported to the Military Academy under diplomatic escort.
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Original:  officers saw the other way as the ransacking was beyond control and everybody got whatever one could.
Revised:  officers saw the other way as the looting was beyond their control and everybody got whatever one could.
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Original:  officers saw the other way as the ransacking was beyond control and everybody got whatever one could.
Revised:  officers saw the other way as the ransacking was beyond control and everybody got all they could.
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Original:  In a few hours, every article of value had vanished and even the sheets of roofing or window fasteners were pulled off.
Revised:  In a few hours, every article of value had vanished ; even sheets of roofing or window fasteners were pulled off.
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Original:  Even the elegant landau that once belonged to the president was stolen, along with its thoroughbred mules.
Revised:  Even the elegant landau that had belonged to the president was stolen, along with its thoroughbred mules.
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Original:  Even the elegant landau that once belonged to the president was stolen, along with its thoroughbred mules.
Revised:  Even the elegant landau that once belonged to the president was stolen, along with its purebred mules.
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Original:  Built in the "Candelaria Barrio" by Rafael Carrera solely because that was his birthplace , Matamoros fort lacked any strategic advantage is it was practically within the city .
Revised:  Matamoros fort lacked any strategic advantage. Rafael Carrera had it built in the "Candelaria Barrio" by Rafael Carrera solely because that was his birthplace , Matamoros fort lacked any strategic advantage is it was practically within the city .
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Original:  Built in the "Candelaria Barrio" by Rafael Carrera solely because that was his birthplace , Matamoros fort lacked any strategic advantage is it was practically within the city .
Revised:  Built in the "Candelaria Barrio" - practically within the city - solely because that was his birthplace , Matamoros fort lacked any strategic advantage is it was practically within the city .
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Original:  Built in the "Candelaria Barrio" by Rafael Carrera solely because that was his birthplace , Matamoros fort lacked any strategic advantage is it was practically within the city .
Revised:  Built in the "Candelaria Barrio" by Rafael Carrera solely because that was his birthplace .
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Original:  However, its star formation walls had firearms coming out of any loop-hole, angle and tower;
Revised:  However, its walls, arranged in a star formation, had gun emplacements at every loop-hole, angle and tower;
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Original:  from little Colt machine guns to bit 12 cm. Krupp guns from 1877.
Revised:  from little Colt machine guns to big 12 cm. Krupp guns from 1877.
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Original:  All their available weaponry had been used and was left pointed towards the city in the end .
Revised:  The defenders had fired every weapon and had left them all pointed towards the city in the end .
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Original:  All their available weaponry had been used and was left pointed towards the city in the end .
Revised:  All their available weaponry had been used and was left pointed towards the city .
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Original:  On the wall of the commandant's quarters hung a detailed artillery map of the city and, close by, Estrada Cabrera's last order -dated six days previously- for the establishment of an extra telephone line to "La Palma".
Revised:  On the wall of the commandant's quarters hung a detailed artillery map of the city and, close by, Estrada Cabrera's last order - dated six days previously - for the establishment of an extra telephone line to "La Palma".
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Original:  a paper on a door leading to the smaller chambers read that there were ca. four millions rounds of machine gun ammunition.
Revised:  a paper on a door leading to the smaller chambers proclaimed that there were ca. four millions rounds of machine gun ammunition.
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Original:  a paper on a door leading to the smaller chambers read that there were ca. four millions rounds of machine gun ammunition.
Revised:  a paper on a door leading to the smaller chambers read that there were four million rounds of machine gun ammunition.
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Original:  There was also  abundant supply of flour while meet had run out when the last mule was shot.
Revised:  There was also an abundant supply of flour while meet had run out when the last mule was shot.
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Original:  San José fort was in similar situation as that of Matamoros, but with the difference that the ammunition had been more recklessly expended, for the ground was so piled with empty cases that it was difficult to walk.
Revised:  San José fort was in similar situation to that of Matamoros, but with the difference that the ammunition had been more recklessly expended, for the ground was so piled with empty cases that it was difficult to walk.
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Original:  San José fort was in similar situation as that of Matamoros, but with the difference that the ammunition had been more recklessly expended, for the ground was so piled with empty cases that it was difficult to walk.
Revised:  San José fort was in similar situation as that of Matamoros, except that the ammunition had been more recklessly expended, for the ground was so piled with empty cases that it was difficult to walk.
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Original:  San José fort was in similar situation as that of Matamoros, but with the difference that the ammunition had been more recklessly expended, for the ground was so piled with empty cases that it was difficult to walk.
Revised:  San José fort was in similar situation as that of Matamoros, but with the difference that the ammunition had been dispatched more recklessly; the ground was so piled with empty cases that it was difficult to walk.
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Original:  San José fort was in similar situation as that of Matamoros, but with the difference that the ammunition had been more recklessly expended, for the ground was so piled with empty cases that it was difficult to walk.
Revised:  San José fort was in similar situation as that of Matamoros, but with the difference that the ammunition had been more recklessly expended, for the ground was so littered with empty cases that it was difficult to walk.
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Original:  Given the large ammunition at the ex-president's disposal  it was remarkable that he surrendered so soon;
Revised:  Given the large ammunition at the ex-president's disposal , it was remarkable that he surrendered so soon;
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Original:  Several hundreds of them went missing every night during the Tragic Week , after which those who were left were killed on the spot by their officers if they tried to escape.
Revised:  Several hundred went missing every night during the Tragic Week , after which those who were left were killed on the spot by their officers if they tried to escape.
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Original:  Several hundreds of them went missing every night during the Tragic Week , after which those who were left were killed on the spot by their officers if they tried to escape.
Revised:  Several hundreds of them went missing every night during the Tragic Week . Afterwards, those caught trying to escape were killed on the spot by their officers if they tried to escape.
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Original:  Hunger weakened the troops that were still fighting , but not because of lack of supplies  but rather due to miserable management of the commissariat.
Revised:  Hunger weakened the troops that were still fighting , but not because of lack of supplies , but rather due to miserable management of the commissariat.
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Original:  Several attempts were made to take the Military Academy by force and  lynch the former president, but they all were strongly repelled by the Unionists guards as the party leaders were steadfast on returning to a democracy as soon as possible , although they could not prevent that an excited mob lynched twelve Cabrerists with clubs and machetes in Central Square.
Revised:  Several attempts were made to take the Military Academy by force and to lynch the former president, but they all were strongly repelled by the Unionists guards as the party leaders were steadfast on returning to a democracy as soon as possible , although they could not prevent that an excited mob lynched twelve Cabrerists with clubs and machetes in Central Square.
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Original:  Several attempts were made to take the Military Academy by force and  lynch the former president, but they all were strongly repelled by the Unionists guards as the party leaders were steadfast on returning to a democracy as soon as possible , although they could not prevent that an excited mob lynched twelve Cabrerists with clubs and machetes in Central Square.
Revised:  Several attempts were made to take the Military Academy by force and lynch the former president, but they all were strongly repelled by the Unionist guards as the party leaders were steadfast on returning to a democracy as soon as possible , although they could not prevent that an excited mob lynched twelve Cabrerists with clubs and machetes in Central Square.
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Original:  Several attempts were made to take the Military Academy by force and  lynch the former president, but they all were strongly repelled by the Unionists guards as the party leaders were steadfast on returning to a democracy as soon as possible , although they could not prevent that an excited mob lynched twelve Cabrerists with clubs and machetes in Central Square.
Revised:  Several attempts were made to take the Military Academy by force and lynch the former president, but they all were strongly repelled by the Unionists guards as the party leaders were steadfast on returning to a democracy as soon as possible . Even so, they failed to prevent an angry mob from lynching twelve Cabrerists with clubs and machetes in Central Square.
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Original:  It could not prevent either a large fire that destroyed the central railway station;
Revised:  zNor could they prevent arsonists from destroying the central railway station;
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Original:  thick and suffocating clouds of smoke poured over the city, literally obscuring the sun.
Revised:  thick , suffocating clouds of smoke poured over the city, literally obscuring the sun.
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Original:  Otherwise, the leaders regained control and three days later, Guatemala city had regained its normal appearance ;
Revised:  Civic leadership regained control and three days later, Guatemala city had regained its normal appearance ;
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Original:  Otherwise, the leaders regained control and three days later, Guatemala city had regained its normal appearance ;
Revised:  Otherwise, the leaders regained control and three days later, Guatemala city had resumed its normal appearance ;
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Original:  there was not festive celebrationof the victory as people had other things to think about, and too many were in mourning for the 800 killed and couple of thousand wounded . 300px|center|thumbThe people whose portraits are shown here were captured along  Estrada Cabrera after he surrendered in La Palma or were killed during the "Tragic Week" events.
Revised:  there was not festive celebrationof the victory as people had other things to think about, and too many were in mourning for the 800 killed . 300px|center|thumbThe people whose portraits are shown here were captured along Estrada Cabrera after he surrendered in La Palma or were killed during the "Tragic Week" events.
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Original:  there was not festive celebrationof the victory as people had other things to think about, and too many were in mourning for the 800 killed and couple of thousand wounded . 300px|center|thumbThe people whose portraits are shown here were captured along  Estrada Cabrera after he surrendered in La Palma or were killed during the "Tragic Week" events.
Revised:  there was not festive celebrationof the victory as people had other things to think about, and too many were in mourning for the 800 killed and couple of thousand wounded . 300px|center|thumbThe people whose portraits are shown here were captured along with Estrada Cabrera after he surrendered in La Palma or were killed during the "Tragic Week" events.
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Original:  There are, according to the number written on their picture: Manuel Estrada Cabrera Lieutenant colonel Eduardo Anguiano: killed in combat.
Revised:  They are, according to the number written on their picture: Manuel Estrada Cabrera Lieutenant colonel Eduardo Anguiano: killed in combat.
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Original:  There are, according to the number written on their picture: Manuel Estrada Cabrera Lieutenant colonel Eduardo Anguiano: killed in combat.
Revised:  There are, according to the number written on their picture: Manuel Estrada Cabrera Lieutenant Colonel Eduardo Anguiano: killed in combat.
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Original:  He was the son of Juan Viteri, whom Cabrera had killed in 1908 along to his brother Adolfo;
Revised:  He was the son of Juan Viteri, whom Cabrera had killed in 1908 along with his brother Adolfo;
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Original:  he was in prison  several years and once he was released  he became a loyal servant to the president.
Revised:  he was in prison for several years and once he was released he became a loyal servant to the president.
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Original:  he was in prison  several years and once he was released  he became a loyal servant to the president.
Revised:  he was in prison several years and once he was released , he became a loyal servant to the president.
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