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Original:  The cause of death is reported to have been complications resulting from an operation on an infected heartvalve , following his admission to the hospital due to severe pneumonia .
Revised:  The cause of death is reported to have been complications resulting from an operation on his heart , following his admission to the hospital due to severe pneumonia .
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Original: The cause of death is reported to have been complications resulting from an operation on his heart to repair an infected valve , following his admission to Bradford Royal Infirmary with pneumonia on May 6, falling into a coma shortly there after.
Revised: The cause of death is reported to have been complications resulting from an operation on his heart to repair an infected valve . He had been admitted to Bradford Royal Infirmary with pneumonia on May 6, falling into a coma shortly there after.
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Original:  Until this May, Whiteley had never missed presenting a show.
Revised:  Until this May, Whiteley had never missed presenting an edition of the show.
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Original: A Scottish firefighter has died while he tried to help put out a fire at a pub in Edinburgh.
Revised: A Scottish firefighter has died while helping to put out a fire at a pub in Edinburgh.
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Original:  Ewan Williamson, 35  died when the floor collapsed of the multi-story building.
Revised:  Ewan Williamson, 35 , died when the floor collapsed of the multi-story building.
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Original:  The police commented saying it was to early to determine whether there was anything suspicious with the blaze.
Revised:  The police commented saying it was too early to determine whether there was anything suspicious with the blaze.
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Original: Although the content of  Rafsanjani's sermon is not yet known, the former Iranian president, a member of Iran's pragmatic-conservative faction and the richest person in Iran, is widely thought to be a "behind-the-scenes" supporter of Mir-Hossein Mousavi.
Revised: Although the content of Ayatollah Rafsanjani's sermon is not yet known, the former Iranian president, a member of Iran's pragmatic-conservative faction and the richest person in Iran, is widely thought to be a "behind-the-scenes" supporter of Mir-Hossein Mousavi.
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Original:  On June 19, Khameini used Friday prayers to call for an end to protests against President Ahmedinejad ;
Revised:  On June 19, Khameini used Friday prayers to call for an end to protests against President Ahmadinejad ;
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Original: Rafsanjani is one of five high-ranking clerics, including Supreme Leader Ayatollah Ali Khameini , who lead prayers in Tehran on a rotating basis;
Revised: Rafsanjani is one of five high-ranking clerics, including Supreme Leader Ayatollah Ali Khamenei , who lead prayers in Tehran on a rotating basis;
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Original:  Rafsanjani however has refused to lead prayers for two weeks running, while at the same time he has visited Iraqi Shi'ite leader Ayatollah Ali al-Sistani in Najaf, leading to speculation as to whether and in what way Rafsanjani would move against Khameini and the Iranian regime.
Revised:  Rafsanjani however has refused to lead prayers for two weeks running, while at the same time he has visited Iraqi Shi'ite leader Ayatollah Ali al-Sistani in Najaf, leading to speculation as to whether and in what way Rafsanjani would move against Khamenei and the Iranian regime.
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Original:  On June 19, Khameini used Friday prayers to call for an end to protests against President Ahmadinejad;
Revised:  On June 19, Khamenei used Friday prayers to call for an end to protests against President Ahmadinejad;
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Original:  Under United States case law, where both the website and Coetzee are located, a photograph of a non-copyrighted 2 dimensional picture (such as a very old portrait) is not capable of being copyrighted, and it may be freely distributed and used by anyone.
Revised:  Under United States case law, where both the website and Coetzee are located, a photograph of a non-copyrighted two-dimensional picture (such as a very old portrait) is not capable of being copyrighted, and it may be freely distributed and used by anyone.
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Original: In particular, Zoomify's website comments that while "many customers — famous museums for example" use Zoomify, in their experience a "general consensus" seems to exist that most museums are concerned to make the images in their galleries accessible to the public, rather than prevent the public from accessing them or making copies;
Revised: In particular, Zoomify's website comments that while "many customers — famous museums for example" use Zoomify, in their experience a "general consensus" seems to exist that most museums are concerned with making the images in their galleries accessible to the public, rather than prevent the public from accessing them or making copies;
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Original: In particular, Zoomify's website comments that while "many customers — famous museums for example" use Zoomify, in their experience a "general consensus" seems to exist that most museums are concerned to make the images in their galleries accessible to the public, rather than prevent the public from accessing them or making copies;
Revised: In particular, Zoomify's website comments that while "many customers — famous museums for example" use Zoomify, in their experience a "general consensus" seems to exist that most museums are concerned to make the images in their galleries accessible to the public, rather than preventing the public from accessing them or making copies;
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Original: After the win, Webber said " " I lost Rubens off the start, I thought he had gone to the left but he went right and I banged into him.
Revised: After the win, Webber said " I lost Rubens off the start, I thought he had gone to the left but he went right and I banged into him.
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Original: Around 400 rescue workers are helping the rescue effort and looking for any possibly survivors.
Revised: Around 400 rescue workers are helping the rescue effort and looking for any possible survivors.
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Original: Javier Velásquez Javier Velásquez , head of Peru’s legislature has been named as Prime Minister by President Alan Garcia.
Revised: Javier Velásquez , head of Peru’s legislature has been named as Prime Minister by President Alan Garcia.
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Original:  Opposition Congressman Fredy Otarola has criticized Velásquez  claiming “Velásquez is more of the same” and stating he does not “represent change”.
Revised:  Opposition Congressman Fredy Otarola has criticized Velásquez , claiming “Velásquez is more of the same” and stating he does not “represent change”.
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Original:  Garcia, whose Presidency runs out in 2011  has faced several tough years.
Revised:  Garcia, whose presidency runs out in 2011 has faced several tough years.
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Original:  Garcia, whose Presidency runs out in 2011  has faced several tough years.
Revised:  Garcia, whose Presidency runs out in 2011 , has faced several tough years.
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Original:  He also has record disapproval figures at -67
Revised:  He also has record disapproval figures , with 67 per cent of those polled having a negative opinion of him
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Original:  Party loyalist Velásquez replaced Yehude Simon as Prime Minister after Simon resigned on July 10.
Revised:  Velásquez replaced Yehude Simon as Prime Minister after Simon resigned on July 10.
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Original:  According to the Agence France-Presse (AFP) Peru has gone from a economic strength to a weakness and Garcia also has record disapproval figures, with 67 per cent of those polled having a negative opinion of him
Revised:  According to the Agence France-Presse , Peru has gone from a economic strength to a weakness and Garcia also has record disapproval figures, with 67 per cent of those polled having a negative opinion of him
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Original:  According to the Agence France-Presse (AFP) Peru has gone from a economic strength to a weakness and Garcia also has record disapproval figures, with 67 per cent of those polled having a negative opinion of him
Revised:  According to the Agence France-Presse (AFP) Peru has gone from a economic strength to a weakness and Garcia also has record disapproval figures, with 67 percent of those polled having a negative opinion of him
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Original:  Sunni Muslim al-Hafez faced a hard time as Prime Minister as opposing religious leaders and fellow Sunni’s refused to recognise him as Prime Minister.
Revised: The Sunni Muslim al-Hafez faced a hard time as Prime Minister as opposing religious leaders and fellow Sunni’s refused to recognise him as Prime Minister.
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Original:  Sunni Muslim al-Hafez faced a hard time as Prime Minister as opposing religious leaders and fellow Sunni’s refused to recognise him as Prime Minister.
Revised:  Sunni Muslim al-Hafez faced a hard time as Prime Minister as opposing religious leaders and fellow Sunnis refused to recognise him as Prime Minister.
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Original:  Two years after he resigned Lebanon which was already in conflict with Palestinian troops  entered a 15 year civil war.
Revised:  Two years after he resigned , Lebanon, which was already in conflict with Palestinian troops entered a 15 year civil war.
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Original:  Two years after he resigned Lebanon which was already in conflict with Palestinian troops  entered a 15 year civil war.
Revised:  Two years after he resigned Lebanon which was already in conflict with Palestinian troops , entered a 15 year civil war.
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Original:  A three day mourning has been declared by Prime Minister Fuad Sanioria .
Revised:  A three day mourning has been declared by Prime Minister Fouad Siniora .
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Original:  Two years after he resigned, Lebanon, which was already in conflict with Palestinian troops, entered a 15 year civil war.
Revised:  Two years after he resigned, Lebanon, which was already in conflict with Palestinian troops, entered a 15-year civil war.
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Original:  A three day mourning has been declared by Prime Minister Fouad Siniora.
Revised:  A three-day mourning has been declared by Prime Minister Fouad Siniora.
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Original:  Carlos is moving at about 12 miles per hour to the west-southwest as it tracks farther out to sea.
Revised:  Carlos is moving at about 12 mph to the west-southwest as it tracks farther out to sea.
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Original: As of 2100 UTC on Monday, the storm has maximum sustained winds of 65 miles per hour with gusts to around 75 mph.
Revised: As of 2100 UTC on Monday, the storm had maximum sustained winds of 65 miles per hour with gusts to around 75 mph.
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Original: Carlos formed on July 10, and eventually intensified to attain hurricane status on July 11.
Revised: Carlos formed on July 10, and intensified to attain hurricane status on July 11.
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Original: Carlos is moving  at about 12 mph to the west-southwest as it tracks farther out to sea.
Revised: Carlos is moving at about 12 mph as it tracks farther out to sea.
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Original: Microsoft Office 2007 sported a major interface redesign when it was released, which the web versions will continue Microsoft has announced they will launch web versions of their popular Office software in 2010.
Revised: Microsoft Office 2007 logo Microsoft has announced they will launch web versions of their popular Office software in 2010.
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Original:  Analysts from the Wall Street Journal have predicted that the move "could put at risk as much as $ 4 bn " 
Revised:  Analysts from the Wall Street Journal have predicted that the move "could put at risk as much as $ 4 bn " Related new
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Original: Microsoft Office 2007 logo Microsoft has announced they will launch web versions of their popular Office software in 2010.
Revised: Microsoft has announced they will launch web versions of their popular Office software in 2010.
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Original:  It will be included in all versions of Office 2010 when it ships next year.
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Original:  All Windows Live customers will also reportedly have access .
Revised:  All Windows Live customers will also reportedly have spaghetti for dinner .
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Original:  Testers will be given access at the end of this year.
Revised:  Testers will be given cakes that were burnt at the end of this year.
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Original:   All Windows Live customers will also reportedly have spaghetti for dinner .
Revised:  All Windows Live customers will also reportedly have access .
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Original:  Testers will be given cakes that were burnt at the end of this year.
Revised:  Testers will be given access at the end of this year.
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Original:  Microsoft Office 2007 logo The service will not go into direct competition with Google Docs, launched three years ago.
Revised:  Microsoft Office 2007 logo The service will go into direct competition with Google Docs, launched three years ago.
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Original:  They will also be compatible with Firefox and Safari, as well as Internet Explorer.
Revised:  They will also be compatible with Firefox , Safari, and Internet Explorer.
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Original:  Microsoft's group product manager for Office said "We believe the web has a lot to offer in terms of connectivity.
Revised:  Microsoft's group product manager for Office stated, "We believe the web has a lot to offer in terms of connectivity.
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Original:    "After 54 happy years together, they decided to end their own lives rather than continue to struggle with serious health problems.
Revised:  The statement read, "After 54 happy years together, they decided to end their own lives rather than continue to struggle with serious health problems.
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Original:  He had a long association with the Royal Opera House, Covent Garden, where he conducted for more than 50 seasons in succession.
Revised:  He had a long association with the Royal Opera House, where he conducted for more than 50 seasons in succession.
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Original:  It was on Friday, 28 September, 1973  that Sir Edward conducted the opening public performance at the Sydney Opera House, a staging of Prokofiev's War and Peace by Australian Opera of which he was music director.
Revised:  It was on Friday, 28 September, 1973 , that Sir Edward conducted the opening public performance at the Sydney Opera House, a staging of Prokofiev's War and Peace by Australian Opera of which he was music director.
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Original:  It was on Friday, 28 September, 1973  that Sir Edward conducted the opening public performance at the Sydney Opera House, a staging of Prokofiev's War and Peace by Australian Opera of which he was music director.
Revised:  It was on Friday, 28 September, 1973 that Sir Edward conducted the opening public performance at the Sydney Opera House, a staging of Prokofiev's War and Peace by Opera Australia, of which he was music director.
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Original:  It was on Friday, 28 September, 1973  that Sir Edward conducted the opening public performance at the Sydney Opera House, a staging of Prokofiev's War and Peace by Australian Opera of which he was music director.
Revised:  It was on Friday, 28 September, 1973 that Sir Edward conducted the opening public performance at the Sydney Opera House, a staging of Prokofiev's War and Peace by Australian Opera of which he was musical director.
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Original:  Assisting a suicide is illegal in Britain.
Revised:  Assisting a suicide is illegal in the United Kingdom.
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Original:  British Police have investigated many of the resulting deaths, but no family member has yet been prosecuted for helping relatives negotiate with Dignitas and travel to Switzerland.
Revised:  British police have investigated many of the resulting deaths, but no family member has yet been prosecuted for helping relatives negotiate with Dignitas and travel to Switzerland.
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Original:  Debbie Purdy, a woman with Multiple Scelerosis, attempted last year to obtain a ruling from the English High Court that family members would not be prosecuted for helping someone use Dignitas's service, and in particular that her husband would not be charged should she decide to use Dignitas in future.
Revised:  Debbie Purdy, a woman with Multiple Scelerosis, attempted last year to obtain a ruling from the English High Court that family members would not be prosecuted for helping someone use the service, and in particular that her husband would not be charged should she decide to use Dignitas in future.
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Original:  They died peacefully, and under circumstances of their own choosing, with the help of the Swiss organisation  Dignitas, in Zurich."   
Revised:  They died peacefully, and under circumstances of their own choosing, with the help of the Swiss organisation , Dignitas, in Zurich." 
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Original:  The fish weighed eight kilos, or 17.5 pounds  
Revised:  The fish weighed eight kilos, or 17.5 pounds . 
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Original: A 70 centimeter zander on Lake Maggiore was harpooned and killed by police divers after it attacked several swimmers over the weekend.
Revised: A 70 centimeter zander on Lake Maggiore was killed by police divers after it attacked several swimmers over the weekend.
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Original:  It is suspected the fish's aggression could have been a result of a hormonal imbalance  
Revised:  It is suspected the fish's aggression could have been a result of a hormonal imbalance . 
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Original:  The fish weighed eight kilos , or 17.5 pounds.
Revised:  The fish weighed eight kilograms , or 17.5 pounds.
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Original:  Fish warden Fabio Croci said, "It is quite unusual for zanders to bite humans".
Revised:  Fish warden Fabio Croci said, "It is quite unusual for Zanders to bite humans".
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Original:  After attempts to capture the zander with a net failed, police divers resorted to harpooning it.
Revised:  After attempts to capture the Zander with a net failed, police divers resorted to harpooning it.
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Original: A California wildfire has reached Interstate 5  just 40 miles northwest of downtown Los Angeles.
Revised: A California wildfire has reached Interstate 5 , just 40 miles northwest of downtown Los Angeles.
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Original:  The fire that has burned 400 acres of grassland in the Angeles National Forest is continues to burn in the Pyramid Lake area.
Revised:  The fire has burned 400 acres of grassland in the Angeles National Forest is continues to burn in the Pyramid Lake area.
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Original:  The fire that has burned 400 acres of grassland in the Angeles National Forest is continues to burn in the Pyramid Lake area.
Revised:  The fire that has burned 400 acres of grassland in the Angeles National Forest , and it continues to blaze in the Pyramid Lake area.
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Original:  Although it has now been 50 percent contained, according the forest spokeswoman Dee Dechert, the fire has already burned Southern California Edison power lines and caused traffic jams.
Revised:  According the forest spokeswoman Dee Dechert, the fire has already burned Southern California Edison power lines and caused traffic jams.
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Original:  Although it has now been 50 percent contained, according the forest spokeswoman Dee Dechert, the fire has already burned Southern California Edison power lines and caused traffic jams.
Revised:  Although it has now been 50 percent contained, according the forest spokeswoman Dee Dechert, the fire has been 50 percent contained, but it has damaged Southern California Edison power lines and caused traffic jams.
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Original:  Although it has now been 50 percent contained, according the forest spokeswoman Dee Dechert, the fire has already burned Southern California Edison power lines and caused traffic jams.
Revised:  Although it has now been 50 percent contained, according the forest spokeswoman Dee Dechert, the fire has already burned Southern California Edison power lines , causing traffic jams.
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Original: As of 7 pm local time on Tuesday, 500 people, mostly from Los Angeles County Fire Department (LAFD) , were working to contain the fire in heat that exceeded .
Revised: As of 7 pm local time on Tuesday, 500 people, mostly from Los Angeles County Fire Department , were working to contain the fire in heat that exceeded .
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Original:  According to authorities, four LAFD helicopters were also on the scene , as well as six air tankers in order to control the flames, which are being pushed northeast by a per hour wind.
Revised:  According to authorities, four helicopters and six air tankers were also on the scene , as well as six air tankers in order to control the flames, which are being pushed northeast by a per hour wind.
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Original:  According to authorities, four LAFD helicopters were also on the scene , as well as six air tankers in order to control the flames, which are being pushed northeast by a per hour wind.
Revised:  According to authorities, four LAFD helicopters were also on the scene to control the flames, which are being pushed northeast by a per hour wind.
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Original:  The fire began around noon on Monday, just northwest of Castaic near the Golden State Freeway.
Revised:  The wildfire began around noon on Monday, just northwest of Castaic near the Golden State Freeway.
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Original:  The cause of the wildfire is not currently known, but it is expected to be 100 percent contained by 6 pm on Tuesday.
Revised:  The cause is not currently known, but it is expected to be 100 percent contained by 6 pm on Tuesday.
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Original:  The only injury that has been reported was a firefighter being stung by bee .
Revised:  The only injury that has been reported is a bee sting to a firefighter .
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Original: The fire has burned 400 acres of grassland in the Angeles National Forest, and it continues to blaze in the Pyramid Lake area.
Revised: The fire has burned 400 acres of grassland in the Angeles National Forest, and continues to blaze in the Pyramid Lake area.
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Original:  According the forest spokeswoman Dee Dechert, the fire has been 50 percent contained, but it has damaged Southern California Edison power lines, causing traffic jams.
Revised:  According the forest spokeswoman Dee Dechert, the fire is 50 percent contained, but it has damaged Southern California Edison power lines, causing traffic jams.
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Original:  The two right northbound lanes on Interstate 5 had to be closed , backing up traffic for several miles .
Revised:  The two right northbound lanes on Interstate 5 had to be shut down , backing up traffic for several miles .
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Original:  They were still closed the Tuesday morning.
Revised:  They were still closed Tuesday morning.
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Original: The National Hurricane Center  has upgraded Tropical Depression Five-E to tropical storm status.
Revised: The National Hurricane Center (NHC) has upgraded Tropical Depression Five-E to tropical storm status.
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Original:  The minimum barometric pressure is estimated at 1000 millibars   
Revised:  The minimum barometric pressure is estimated at 1000 millibars . 
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Original: NOAA 5-day forecast track map The National Hurricane Center (NHC) has upgraded Tropical Depression Five-E to tropical storm status  .
Revised: NOAA 5-day forecast track map The National Hurricane Center (NHC) upgraded Tropical Depression Five-E to tropical storm status .
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