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Original:  This benefited teamate Fernando Alonso's race strategy, and he went on to win the event.
Revised:  This benefited team-mate Fernando Alonso's race strategy, and he went on to win the event.
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Original:  Coulthard expressed disatisfaction at that result today during a Red Bull event in Mumbai.
Revised:  Coulthard expressed dissatisfaction at that result today during a Red Bull event in Mumbai.
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Original:  The Times of India has revealed that Coulthard said today  "I think FIA should have punished Piquet too.
Revised:  The Times of India has revealed that Coulthard said today , "I think FIA should have punished Piquet too.
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Original:  He was equally guilty as any other." Coulthard, who drives an F1 car accross a new sea bridge in Mumbai on Sunday, said that I will be surprised if he gets an F1 drive again," and that the scandal had shaken him.
Revised:  He was equally guilty as any other." Coulthard, who drives an F1 car across a new sea bridge in Mumbai on Sunday, said that I will be surprised if he gets an F1 drive again," and that the scandal had shaken him.
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Original:  He was equally guilty as any other." Coulthard, who drives an F1 car accross a new sea bridge in Mumbai on Sunday, said that I will be surprised if he gets an F1 drive again," and that the scandal had shaken him.
Revised:  He was equally guilty as any other." Coulthard, who drives an F1 car accross a new sea bridge in Mumbai on Sunday, said , " I will be surprised if he gets an F1 drive again," and that the scandal had shaken him.
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Original:  Massa, who's injuries were considered life threatening, spoke out earlier this month about the fact that Alonso's Singapore win cost him points that would have meant victory in the drivers' championship had he topped the podium.
Revised:  Massa, whose injuries were considered life threatening, spoke out earlier this month about the fact that Alonso's Singapore win cost him points that would have meant victory in the drivers' championship had he topped the podium.
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Original:  The man was taken to the Royal Bolton Hospital but he later died from his injuries.
Revised:  The man was taken to the Royal Bolton Hospital , but later died from his injuries.
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Original:  A witness had said that the man did not want to be helped from his burning home and that he had said to the fire brigaide: "I'm sick of it all." Greater Manchester Police have said that the pair had injuries "inconsistent with fire-related deaths ".
Revised:  A witness had said that the man did not want to be helped from his burning home and that he had said to the fire brigaide: "I'm sick of it all." Greater Manchester Police have said that the pair had injuries "inconsistent with fire-related deaths ."
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Original:  The man's injuries included mutiple stab wounds to the stomach and chest.
Revised:  The man's injuries included multiple stab wounds to the stomach and chest.
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Original:  A police spokesperson has stated : "The deaths are being treated as suspicious at this stage and a team of detectives are currently working to establish the circumstances surrounding the incident."
Revised:  A police spokesperson has stated , "The deaths are being treated as suspicious at this stage and a team of detectives are currently working to establish the circumstances surrounding the incident."
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Original:  Detective Chief Superintendent Darren Shenton said about the case : "A more detailed examination to establish the cause of the injuries will take place over the weekend.
Revised:  Detective Chief Superintendent Darren Shenton said about the case , "A more detailed examination to establish the cause of the injuries will take place over the weekend.
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Original:  The police are treating the incident as "suspicious  " but have yet to arrest  any suspects.
Revised:  The police are treating the incident as "suspicious , " but have yet to arrest any suspects.
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Original: Then, Advani spoke for forty minutes, saying that Suresh Haware was a nuclear scientist before he came into the field of politics, and voting for Sena-BJP could bring change.
Revised: Then, Advani delivered a forty minute speech, in which he said that Suresh Haware was a nuclear scientist before he came into the field of politics, and voting for Sena-BJP could bring change.
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Original:  He also said, "It is my cherished dream to have a 'bhavya' [beautiful] Ram Mandir at Ayodhya," after which the audience applauded.
Revised:  "It is my cherished dream to have a 'bhavya' [beautiful] Ram Mandir at Ayodhya," after which the audience applauded.
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Original:  When the BJP leader, along with his daughter, visited Somnath last month, he said that he would visit this temple frequently till the Ram Temple is constructed at Ayodhya.
Revised:  When the BJP leader, along with his daughter, visited Somnath last month, he said that he would visit that temple frequently until the Ram Temple is constructed at Ayodhya.
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Original:  After his departure, Haware, a member of the BJP (Belapur constituency), spoke about water problems and said  Navi Mumbai needs a better water supply.
Revised:  After his departure, Haware, a member of the BJP (Belapur constituency), spoke about water problems and said that Navi Mumbai needs a better water supply.
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Original:  He added that the Congress-NCP leaders had made fake promises and misled the polls.
Revised:  He accused the Congress-NCP leaders had made fake promises and misled the polls.
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Original:  He added that the Congress-NCP leaders had made fake promises and misled the polls.
Revised:  He added that the Congress-NCP leaders of making fake promises and misled the polls.
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Original:  He added that the Congress-NCP leaders had made fake promises and misled the polls.
Revised:  He added that the Congress-NCP leaders had made fake promises and misleading the polls.
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Original: "It is my cherished dream to have a 'bhavya' [beautiful] Ram Mandir at Ayodhya," he said, referring to his goal of building a Ram Template in the area.
Revised: "It is my cherished dream to have a 'bhavya' [beautiful] Ram Mandir at Ayodhya," he said, referring to his goal of building a Ram Temple in the area.
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Original: Lal Krishna Advani, the leader of the Bharatiya Janata Party (BJP), visited  Navi Mumbai on Friday to support Sena-BJP leaders Suresh Haware and Vijay Chougule for the country's general elections.
Revised: Lal Krishna Advani, the leader of the Bharatiya Janata Party (BJP), visited the city of Navi Mumbai on Friday to support Sena-BJP leaders Suresh Haware and Vijay Chougule for the country's general elections.
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Original:  He accused the Congress-NCP leaders of making fake promises and misleading the polls.
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Original: Image: LK Advani.jpg|Lal Krishna Advani, w:Bharatiya Janata Party.
Revised: Image: Advani.jpg|Lal Krishna Advani, w:Bharatiya Janata Party.
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Original: Image: Advani.jpg|Lal Krishna Advani, Bharatiya Janata Party.
Revised: File:Lal Krishna Advani.jpg|Lal Krishna Advani, Bharatiya Janata Party.
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Original: 200px|Turkey and Armenia signed a historic agreement, agreeing to normalize bilateral relations and reopen borders after a century of animosity.
Revised: 200px|Turkey and Armenia signed an historic agreement, agreeing to normalize bilateral relations and reopen borders after a century of animosity.
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Original:  The agreement establishes diplomatic relations between the two countries for the first time, and reopens their shared border, which is closed since 1993.
Revised:  The agreement establishes diplomatic relations between the two countries for the first time, and reopens their shared border, which has been closed since 1993.
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Original:  But first , both countries' parliaments should ratify it
Revised:  For it to take effect , both countries' parliaments should ratify it
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Original:  But first , both countries' parliaments should ratify it
Revised:  But first , both countries' parliaments must ratify it
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Original: Pakistani army spokesman Major General Athar Abbas said security forces had worked to free the hostages.
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Original:  " The building is surrounded by the security forces and whatever happens and whatever the details of the operation are%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , they%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% will only be shared after the operation is conducted," he said.
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Original:  " The building is surrounded by the security forces and whatever happens and whatever the details of the operation are%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , they%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% will only be shared after the operation is conducted," he said.
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Original:  " The building is surrounded by the security forces and whatever happens and whatever the details of the operation are%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , they%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% will only be shared after the operation is conducted," he said.
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Original:  " The building is surrounded by the security forces and whatever happens and whatever the details of the operation are%DIFDELCMD < ]%%% , they%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% will only be shared after the operation is conducted," he said.
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Original: On Monday, a suicide bomber disguised in a paramilitary uniform attacked a U.N. office in nearby Islamabad, and on Friday, a suspected suicide car-bomber killed some 50 people in Peshawar.
Revised: On Monday, a suicide bomber disguised in a paramilitary uniform attacked a UN office in nearby Islamabad, and on Friday, a suspected suicide car-bomber killed some 50 people in Peshawar.
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Original: 22 hostages were freed after military commandos raided a Pakistan army headquarters in  Rawalpindi on Sunday that had been taken by militants, reports said.
Revised: 22 hostages were freed after military commandos raided a Pakistan army headquarters in w: Rawalpindi on Sunday that had been taken by militants, reports said.
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Original:  The incident began  when several gunmen, disguised in military uniforms, attacked a checkpoint at midday outside the heavily guarded headquarters.
Revised:  The incident began when several gunmen, disguised in military uniforms, attacked a checkpoint outside the heavily guarded headquarters.
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Original:  Four militants and three hostages had been killed in the resulting clashes while two senior officers marterayed .
Revised:  Four militants and three hostages had been killed in the resulting clashes including two senior officers marterayed .
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Original:  Four militants and three hostages had been killed in the resulting clashes while two senior officers marterayed .
Revised:  Four militants and three hostages had been killed in the resulting clashes while two senior officers .
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Original: 22 hostages were freed after military commandos raided a Pakistan army headquarters in w: Rawalpindi on Sunday that had been taken by militants, reports said.
Revised: 22 hostages were freed after military commandos raided a Pakistan army headquarters in Rawalpindi on Sunday that had been taken by militants, reports said.
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Original: The incident began Saturday morning at around midday when several gunmen, disguised in military uniforms, attacked a checkpoint outside the heavily guarded headquarters.
Revised: The incident began midday on Saturday when several gunmen, disguised in military uniforms, attacked a checkpoint outside the heavily guarded headquarters.
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Original: The demonstrators were protesting against the  Okhta Center, a proposed supertall 77-storey skyscraper for the gas company Gazprom measuring 400 metres (1,300 feet).
Revised: The demonstrators were protesting against the w: Okhta Center, a proposed supertall 77-storey skyscraper for the gas company Gazprom measuring 400 metres (1,300 feet).
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Original: The demonstrators were protesting against the  Okhta Center, a proposed supertall 77-storey skyscraper for the gas company Gazprom measuring 400 metres (1,300 feet).
Revised: The demonstrators were protesting against the Okhta Center, a proposed supertall 77-story skyscraper for the gas company Gazprom measuring 400 metres (1,300 feet).
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Original: The demonstrators were protesting against the w: Okhta Center, a proposed supertall 77-story skyscraper for the gas company Gazprom measuring 400 metres (1,300 feet).
Revised: The demonstrators were protesting against the Okhta Center, a proposed supertall 77-story skyscraper for the gas company Gazprom measuring 400 metres (1,300 feet).
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Original: Prime Minister Brown went to the Moorfields in London, England , home to one of the best eye surgeries in the world .
Revised: Prime Minister Brown went to the Moorfields in London, England .
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Original: Downing Street in Westminster has said that despite these results, Mr. Brown will not be undergoing any further operations.
Revised: in has said that despite these results, Mr. Brown will not be undergoing any further operations.
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Original:  He was given some medical questions from Andrew Marr about his health, including if his eyes were OK, and if he took prescription painkillers, while on the air.
Revised:  He was given some medical questions from about his health, including if his eyes were OK, and if he took prescription painkillers, while on the air.
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Original:  The Spainsh police had reported that his body was found on a sofa in the lounge.
Revised:  Spanish police report his body was found on a sofa in the lounge.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Spanish police has said on Sunday: " At  the moment it is not known how he died.
Revised:  A spokesperson for Spanish police has said on Sunday: " a the moment it is not known how he died.
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Original:  A spokesperson for Spanish police has said on Sunday: " At  the moment it is not known how he died.
Revised:  A spokesperson for Spanish police has said on Sunday: " At t the moment it is not known how he died.
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Original:  He also said that the death of Gatelyoccurred at around 1345 UTC.
Revised:  Gately's time of death was given as approximately 1345 UTC.
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Original:  The spokesperson, speaking from Majorca, added: " Details  remain pretty unclear.
Revised:  The police spokesperson added, " Details remain pretty unclear.
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Original:  The spokesperson, speaking from Majorca, added: " Details  remain pretty unclear.
Revised:  The spokesperson, speaking from Majorca, added: " d remain pretty unclear.
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Original:  The family of Stephen Gately hope to hold the funeral for him in his home townof Dublin.
Revised:  Gately's family hope to hold the funeral for him in his home townof Dublin.
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Original:  There are no signs of suspicious circumstances." Gately's time of death was given as approximately 1345 UTC.
Revised:  There are no signs of suspicious circumstances." Gately's time of death was given as approximately 13.45 UTC.
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Original:  " I'm in complete shock.
Revised:  I'm in complete shock.
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Original: Louis Walsh, manager of the group and also a judge on UK television singing competition The X Factor, commented : "We're all absolutely devastated.
Revised: Louis Walsh, manager of the group and also a judge on UK television singing competition The X Factor, commented , "We're all absolutely devastated.
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Original:  He had arrived on a flight from Havana, Cuba, where authorities say he has resided 41 years , to avoid prosecution.
Revised:  He had arrived on a flight from Havana, Cuba, where authorities say he has resided 41 years to avoid prosecution.
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Original:  He is expected to appear in court Tuesday
Revised:  He is expected to be arraigned Tuesday
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Original:  Soltren, Cruz, and Castro seized control of the flight, originally destined for Puerto Rico, using guns and knifes they had smuggled in a diaper bag.
Revised:  Soltren, Cruz, and Castro seized control of the flight, originally destined for Puerto Rico, using guns and knives they had smuggled in a diaper bag.
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Original:  Soltren is charged with air piracy and kidnapping, for allegedly participating in the November 24, 1968 hijacking of Pan Am Flight 281, which coincidentally took off from JFK.
Revised:  Soltren is charged with air piracy and kidnapping, for allegedly participating in the November 24, 1968 hijacking of Pan Am Flight 281, which ironically took off from JFK.
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Original:  Soltren is charged with air piracy and kidnapping, for allegedly participating in the November 24, 1968 hijacking of Pan Am Flight 281, which ironically took off from JFK.
Revised:  Soltren is charged with air piracy and kidnapping, for allegedly participating in the November 24, 1968 hijacking of Pan Am Flight 281, which took off from JFK.
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Original:  Final scores - Denver 2-5 (17) defeated Seattle 2-2 (14).
Revised:  In what was described as a close, hard fought game, the final scores ended with Denver 2-5 (17) defeated Seattle 2-2 (14).
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Original:  Final scores - Denver 2-5 (17) defeated Seattle 2-2 (14).
Revised:  Final scores - Denver 2-5 (17) defeating Seattle 2-2 (14).
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Original:  Seattle (2-0-1) managed to get through on percentage only over New York (2-0-1)  Seattle were playing in Division 1 this year after defeating Calgary by 19 points in the 2008 Division 2 final.
Revised:  Seattle (2-0-1) managed to get through on percentage only over New York (2-0-1) . Seattle were playing in Division 1 this year after defeating Calgary by 19 points in the 2008 Division 2 final.
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Original:   USFooty president Rich Mann told Wikinews that NFL style competition with with six or seven teams was possible  
Revised:  USFooty president Rich Mann told Wikinews that NFL style competition with with six or seven teams was possible . 
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Original: The Denver Bulldogs have defeated the Seattle Grizzlies to win the 2009 United States Australian Football League (USFooty) National Championships - the clubs seventh since 2000.
Revised: gsrfsrgsrsgrsgsfgsfxdcbdfgdfThe Denver Bulldogs have defeated the Seattle Grizzlies to win the 2009 United States Australian Football League (USFooty) National Championships - the clubs seventh since 2000.
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Original: The study is based upon climate activity during the last 50 years, which can only be replicated with climate models which include human forcing (CO2 and other greenhouse gases (GHGs)).
Revised: The study is based upon climate activity during the last 50 years, which can only be replicated with computer models which include human forcing (CO2 and other greenhouse gases (GHGs)).
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Original:  The model predicts that such summer would become a an event of 1-in-2 probability only by 2050.
Revised:  The model predicts that such summers could become an event of 1-in-2 probability only by 2050.
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Original: In the Americas, a series of sudden weather changes has been more frequent in the last 15 years since the discovery of the phenomenom knows as El Niño, in which vast regions of North and South America had suffer from high tides to extreme hail, rain and snowstorms during summer and winter seasons , following extreme hot summers.
Revised: In the Americas, a series of sudden weather changes has been more frequent in the last 15 years since the discovery of the phenomenom knows as El Niño, in which vast regions of North and South America suffered weather extremes ranging from high tides to extreme hail, rain and snowstorms during summer and winter seasons , following extreme hot summers.
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Original: In the Americas, a series of sudden weather changes has been more frequent in the last 15 years since the discovery of the phenomenom knows as El Niño, in which vast regions of North and South America had suffer from high tides to extreme hail, rain and snowstorms during summer and winter seasons , following extreme hot summers.
Revised: In the Americas, a series of sudden weather changes has been more frequent in the last 15 years since the discovery of the phenomenom knows as El Niño, in which vast regions of North and South America had suffer from high tides to extreme hail, rain and snowstorms during summer and winter seasons following extremely hot summers.
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Original:  There's still no scientific evidence that El Niño is directly influenced by human factors . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wikipedia: Climate Models Category: Europe Category: December 4, 2004 Category: Science and technology Category:Environment Category:Climate chang
Revised:  There's still no scientific evidence that El Niño is directly influenced by human factors References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wikipedia: Climate Models Category: Europe Category: December 4, 2004 Category: Science and technology Category:Environment Category:Climate chang
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Original:  There's still no scientific evidence that El Niño is directly influenced by human factors . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wikipedia: Climate Models Category: Europe Category: December 4, 2004 Category: Science and technology Category:Environment Category:Climate chang
Revised:  There's still no scientific evidence that El Niño is directly influenced by human factors . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wikipedia: Climate Models Category: Europe Category: December 4, 2004 Category: Science and technology Category:Environment Category:Climate chang
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Original:  There's still no scientific evidence that El Niño is directly influenced by human factors . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wikipedia: Climate Models Category: Europe Category: December 4, 2004 Category: Science and technology Category:Environment Category:Climate chang
Revised:  There's still no scientific evidence that El Niño is directly influenced by human factors . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Category: Europe Category: December 4, 2004 Category: Science and technology Category:Environment Category:Climate chang
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Original:  There's still no scientific evidence that El Niño is directly influenced by human factors . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wikipedia: Climate Models Category: Europe Category: December 4, 2004 Category: Science and technology Category:Environment Category:Climate chang
Revised:  There's still no scientific evidence that El Niño is directly influenced by human factors . References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Wikipedia: Climate Models 
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