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Original:  On such incident was when Americn actress Meryl Streep got emotional when accepting her Best Actress award for her potrayal of chef Julia Child in  Julia & Julia, "I am really honestly conflicted about how to have my 'happy movie self' in the face of everything that I'm aware of in the real world."
Revised:  On such incident was when Americn actress Meryl Streep got emotional when accepting her Best Actress award for her potrayal of chef Julia Child in the film Julia & Julia, "I am really honestly conflicted about how to have my 'happy movie self' in the face of everything that I'm aware of in the real world."
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Original:  Following which  Americn actor George Clooney officially announced his intention to coordinate telethon that would air on NBC on January 22 to raise money for those affected by the quake.
Revised:  Following which , Americn actor George Clooney officially announced his intention to coordinate telethon that would air on NBC on January 22 to raise money for those affected by the quake.
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Original: This annual event—which is often considered a preview of the Academy Awards—is conducted by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association to recognize achievements by those within the both motion picture and televison industries internationally.
Revised: This annual event—which is often considered a preview of the Academy Awards—is conducted by the Hollywood Foreign Press Association to recognize achievements by those within the both motion picture and television industries internationally.
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Original:  For instance, some wore lapel ribbons to honor the victims, while others noted how strange it was for them to be enjoying something like an award ceremony in the midst of such tradgedy .
Revised:  For instance, some wore lapel ribbons to honor the victims, while others noted how strange it was for them to be enjoying something like an award ceremony in the midst of such tragedy .
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Original:  On incident of this was when Americn actress Meryl Streep got emotional while accepting the Best Actress award for her potrayal of chef Julia Child in the film Julia & Julia, "I am really honestly conflicted about how to have my 'happy movie self' in the face of everything that I'm aware of in the real world."
Revised:  On incident of this was when American actress Meryl Streep got emotional while accepting the Best Actress award for her potrayal of chef Julia Child in the film Julia & Julia, "I am really honestly conflicted about how to have my 'happy movie self' in the face of everything that I'm aware of in the real world."
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Original:  Following which, Americn actor George Clooney officially announced his intention to coordinate a telethon that would air on NBC on January 22 to raise money for those affected by the quake.
Revised:  Following which, American actor George Clooney officially announced his intention to coordinate a telethon that would air on NBC on January 22 to raise money for those affected by the quake.
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Original:  Defence ministry spokesman Muhammad Zahir Azimi, however, reported that a cinema, two shopping centres, and the city's only five-star hotel, were set on fire after the attacks.
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Original: It also said that the  World Food Programme is intending to increase food aid measures in the country.
Revised: It also said that the United Nations' World Food Programme is intending to increase food aid measures in the country.
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Original: File photo of PineraFile photo of Eduardo FreiSebastian Pinera has won recent elections in Chile, becoming the first conservative president in 52 years.
Revised: File photo of Eduardo FreiSebastian Pinera has won recent elections in Chile, becoming the first conservative president in 52 years.
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Original:  He will take power in March  
Revised:  He will take power in March . 
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Original: File photo of Eduardo FreiSebastian  Pinera has won recent elections in Chile, becoming the first conservative president in 52 years.
Revised: File photo of Eduardo Frei Pinera has won recent elections in Chile, becoming the first conservative president in 52 years.
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Original: File photo of Eduardo Frei image credit|Eduardo Frei FlickrSebastian Pinera has won recent elections in Chile, becoming the first conservative president in 52 years.
Revised: File photo of Eduardo Frei Sebastian Pinera has won recent elections in Chile, becoming the first conservative president in 52 years.
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Original:   " We feel strongly that IE8 is most secure browser on the market . "  Microsoft encouraged users to upgrade to IE8, which they described as the "most secure browser on the market ".
Revised:  " We feel strongly that IE8 is most secure browser on the market . " Microsoft encouraged users to upgrade to IE8, which they described as the "most secure browser on the market ."
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Original: Mehmet Ali Ağca , the man who was convicted of shooting Pope John Paul II in 1981, was released from a prison in Turkey today, after serving nineteen years for the attempted murder of the Pope, and another ten years for the murder of Abdi İpekçi, a left-wing journalist, in 1979.
Revised: Mehmet Ali Agca , the man who was convicted of shooting Pope John Paul II in 1981, was released from a prison in Turkey today, after serving nineteen years for the attempted murder of the Pope, and another ten years for the murder of Abdi İpekçi, a left-wing journalist, in 1979.
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Original:  Ağca 's motives for the attempted assassination of the Pope are not clear, although he said he was acting alone after he was arrested.
Revised:  Agca 's motives for the attempted assassination of the Pope are not clear, although he said he was acting alone after he was arrested.
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Original:  Two years after the shooting, 1983, the Pope said that he had forgiven Ağca after meeting with him.
Revised:  Two years after the shooting, 1983, the Pope said that he had forgiven Agca after meeting with him.
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Original:  Ağca 's mental health has been called into question, and a 2006 military hospital report said he had "severe anti-social personality disorder".
Revised:  Agca 's mental health has been called into question, and a 2006 military hospital report said he had "severe anti-social personality disorder".
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Original:  Every human being will die in this century [...] I am the Christ eternal," Ağca said upon his release
Revised:  Every human being will die in this century [...] I am the Christ eternal," Agca said upon his release
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Original: That particular incident lead to Blackwater loosing its license to operate in Iraq.
Revised: The incident lead to Blackwater loosing its license to operate in Iraq.
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Original:  The Iraqi government is looking to instigate lawsuits concerning several incidents involving the private security company
Revised:  The Iraqi government is looking to instigate lawsuits concerning several incidents involving the mercenary company
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Original: The incident lead to Blackwater loosing its license to operate in Iraq.
Revised: The incident lead to Blackwater losing its license to operate in Iraq.
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Original: The incident lead to Blackwater losing its license to operate in Iraq.
Revised: The incident led to Blackwater losing its license to operate in Iraq.
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Original:  Other commemorations included a march in Seattle , Washington where participants rallied for issues in the African-American community
Revised:  Other commemorations included a march in Seattle where participants rallied for issues in the African-American community
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Original:  Other commemorations included a march in Seattle where participants rallied for issues in the African-American community  
Revised:  Other commemorations included a march in Seattle where participants rallied for issues in the African-American community . 
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Original:  A musical event that will feature gospel artists and choir members from various area churches among other houses of worship.
Revised:  The concert is a musical event that will feature gospel artists and choir members from various area churches among other houses of worship.
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Original:  Items belonging to the man was found in the debris of the train close to the seat of the blast.
Revised:  Items belonging to the man were found in the debris of the train close to the seat of the blast.
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Original: The four men  responsible for the bombings travelled by train from Leeds to King's Cross on Thursday morning, where they were seen on CCTV at 8.30am.
Revised: The four men alleged to be responsible for the bombings travelled by train from Leeds to King's Cross on Thursday morning, where they were seen on CCTV at 8.30am.
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Original:  The fourth  bomber - the man reported missing from Leeds - died onboard the bus, but there are no clear reasons for why he did not follow the same pattern as the others.
Revised:  The fourth alleged bomber - the man reported missing from Leeds - died onboard the bus, but there are no clear reasons for why he did not follow the same pattern as the others.
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Original:  Forensic evidence and items belonging to all of the man were found in the debris of the target vehicles.
Revised:  Forensic evidence and items belonging to all of the men were found in the debris of the target vehicles.
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Original:  The British Broadcasting Corporation made the announcement that he had died at 1030 GMT on Tuesday in the town of Hawick, in the Scottish Borders - the location in which he had lived .
Revised:  The British Broadcasting Corporation made the announcement that he had died at 1030 GMT in the Hawick, in the Scottish Borders - the location in which he had lived .
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Original:  The British Broadcasting Corporation made the announcement that he had died at 1030 GMT on Tuesday in the town of Hawick, in the Scottish Borders - the location in which he had lived .
Revised:  The British Broadcasting Corporation made the announcement that he had died at 1030 GMT on Tuesday in the town of Hawick, in the Scottish Borders - his chosen home town .
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Original:  The British Broadcasting Corporation made the announcement that he had died at 1030 GMT in the Hawick, in the Scottish Borders - his chosen home town.
Revised:  The British Broadcasting Corporation made the announcement that he had died at 1030 GMT in Hawick, in the Scottish Borders - his chosen home town.
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Original:  He was awarded an MBE, a CBE and an OBE and retired in 2002.
Revised:  He was awarded an MBE, an OBE and a CBE and retired in 2002.
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Original: Image:Billmclaren.jpg|Bill McLaren in 2000.
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Original: The head of the UNODC, Antonio Mario Costa, said in a statement to the international media, "The Afghans say that it is impossible to obtain a public service without paying a bribe.
Revised: The head of the UNODC, Antonio Maria Costa, said in a statement to the international media, "The Afghans say that it is impossible to obtain a public service without paying a bribe.
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Original:  three out of four of which were paid in cash.
Revised:  three out of four were paid in cash.
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Original:  Furthermore, in a country where the average annual income is less than $ 425 per person, the average bribe cost nearly $ 160, of which three out of four  were paid in cash.
Revised:  Furthermore, in a country where the average annual income is less than $ 425 per person, the average bribe cost nearly $ 160. Three out of four were paid in cash.
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Original:  Furthermore, in a country where the average annual income is less than $ 425 per person, the average bribe cost nearly $ 160, of which three out of four  were paid in cash.
Revised:  Furthermore, in a country where the average annual income is less than $ 425 per person, the average bribe cost nearly $ 160, of which three out of four bribes were paid in cash.
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Original:  At which , Afghan President Hamid Karzai is expected to face criticism for his perceived passive stance on corruption from the coalition of nations—specifically the United States—that have thousands of troops committed to Afghanistan as part of the Global War on Terrorism.
Revised:  There , Afghan President Hamid Karzai is expected to face criticism for his perceived passive stance on corruption from the coalition of nations—specifically the United States—that have thousands of troops committed to Afghanistan as part of the Global War on Terrorism.
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Original: File:Hamid Karzai in February 2009.jpg| 235px| Hamid Karzai.
Revised: File:Hamid Karzai in February 2009.jpg| Hamid Karzai.
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Original:   This report was released Tuesday, nine days before a scheduled international conference on Afghanistan in London.
Revised:  "It's time to drain the swamp of corruption in Afghanistan, to stop money and trust disappearing down a big black hole. Corruption is the biggest impediment to improving security, development and governance in Afghanistan." This report was released Tuesday, nine days before a scheduled international conference on Afghanistan in London.
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Original:  There, Afghan President Hamid Karzai is expected to face criticism for his perceived passive stance on corruption from the coalition of nations— specifically the United States—that have thousands of troops committed to Afghanistan as part of the Global War on Terrorism.
Revised:  There, Afghan President Hamid Karzai is expected to face criticism for his perceived passive stance on corruption from the coalition of nations— especially the United States—that have thousands of troops committed to Afghanistan as part of the Global War on Terrorism.
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Original: Turnout was strong despite snow and rain that blanketed much of the state.
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Original:  Markey said, "As Sen. Kennedy would say, the cause endures, and the dream will never die.” Representative Barney Frank  who represents Massachusetts's 4th congressional district was blunt on Coakley's loss, "Martha Coakley was a lousy candidate.
Revised:  Markey said, "As Sen. Kennedy would say, the cause endures, and the dream will never die.” Representative Barney Frank , the Democrat who represents Massachusetts's 4th congressional district was blunt on Coakley's loss, "Martha Coakley was a lousy candidate.
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Original: President  Obama phoned both candidates Tuesday night, congratulating Brown on a well-run campaign and saying he is eager to work with him on the urgent problems facing Massachusetts voters and all Americans.
Revised: President Barack Obama phoned both candidates Tuesday night, congratulating Brown on a well-run campaign and saying he is eager to work with him on the urgent problems facing Massachusetts voters and all Americans.
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Original:  They don’t want this bill and want Washington to listen to them.  
Revised:  They don’t want this bill and want Washington to listen to them. " 
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Original: With higher than expected turnout — despite snow and rain blanketing much of the state — Brown won with 51.9\% of the vote, as Coakley lagged behind closely with 47.1\% of the vote in a state generally considered to be heavily Democratic .
Revised: With higher than expected turnout — despite snow and rain blanketing much of the state — Brown won with 51.9\% of the vote, as Coakley lagged behind closely with 47.1\% of the vote in a state generally considered to be heavily Democrat .
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Original: With higher than expected turnout — despite snow and rain blanketing much of the state — Brown won with 51.9\% of the vote, as Coakley lagged behind closely with 47.1\% of the vote in a state generally considered to be heavily Democrat .
Revised: With higher than expected turnout — despite snow and rain blanketing much of the state — Brown won with 51.9\% of the vote, as Coakley lagged behind closely with 47.1\% of the vote in a state generally considered to be heavily Democratic .
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Original:  However, the document also reveals there is division between the Pentagon, which apparently favours a "relatively bold reduction  , and U.S. commanders in Iraq who are more cautious.
Revised:  However, the document also reveals there is division between the Pentagon, which apparently favours a "relatively bold reduction " , and U.S. commanders in Iraq who are more cautious.
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Original:  One said that she was "shocked" at the ban, another called it "discrimination against music lovers", and another said that he could "see nothing wrong" with students using Spotify, as "it's not as if every single person is on it every single hour of the day." 
Revised:  One said that she was "shocked" at the ban, another called it "discrimination against music lovers", and another said that he could "see nothing wrong" with students using Spotify, as "it's not as if every single person is on it every single hour of the day." There were reports, however, that the ban had inconsistencies, with students at some colleges still able to connect to the service.
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Original: The University of Oxford has prevented its students from accessing the music streaming website Spotify on the university's network.
Revised: The University of Oxford is preventing students from accessing the music streaming website Spotify on the university's network.
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Original: The University of Oxford has prevented its students from accessing the music streaming website Spotify on the university's network.
Revised: The University of Oxford has prevented its students from accessing the legal, peer-to-peer online music service Spotify on the university's network.
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Original: The University of Oxford has prevented its students from accessing the music streaming website Spotify on the university's network.
Revised: The University of Oxford has prevented its students from accessing the music streaming website Spotify on the campus network.
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Original:  Officials in the university's Computer Services department (OUCS) said that too much bandwidth was being taken up by people using the service , slowing down the network for others.
Revised:  Officials in the university's Computer Services department (OUCS) say too much bandwidth was being taken up by people using the service , slowing down the network for others.
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Original:  Officials in the university's Computer Services department (OUCS) said that too much bandwidth was being taken up by people using the service , slowing down the network for others.
Revised:  Officials in the university's Computer Services department (OUCS) said that too much bandwidth is taken up by people using the service , slowing down the network for others.
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Original:  Officials in the university's Computer Services department (OUCS) said that too much bandwidth was being taken up by people using the service , slowing down the network for others.
Revised:  Officials in the university's Computer Services department (OUCS) said that too much bandwidth was being taken up by people using such services , slowing down the network for others.
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Original:  File photo of part of Oxford University 's campus . A university spokeswoman said: "The university provides free internet access for students because it's an educational resource.
Revised:  File photo of part of Oxford University . A university spokeswoman said: "The university provides free internet access for students because it's an educational resource.
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Original: The US Geological survey said latest quake had a magnitude of 6.1 and was centered 59 kilometres from the capital Port-au-Prince, which was much devastated from the initial quake.
Revised: The US Geological Survey said latest quake had a magnitude of 6.1 and was centered 59 kilometres from the capital Port-au-Prince, which was much devastated from the initial quake.
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Original: A strong earthquake has once again struck Haiti, eight days after a 7.0 magnitude quake left much of the nation in ruin .
Revised: A strong earthquake has once again struck Haiti, eight days after a 7.0 magnitude quake left much of the nation in ruins .
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Original:  The US Geological Survey said latest quake had a magnitude of 6.1 and was centered 59 kilometres from the capital Port-au-Prince, which was much devastated from the initial quake.
Revised:  The US Geological Survey said the latest tremor had a magnitude of 6.1 and was centered 59 kilometres from the capital Port-au-Prince, which was much devastated from the initial quake.
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Original:  The US Geological Survey said latest quake had a magnitude of 6.1 and was centered 59 kilometres from the capital Port-au-Prince, which was much devastated from the initial quake.
Revised:  The US Geological Survey said latest quake had a magnitude of 6.1 and was centered 59 kilometres from the capital Port-au-Prince, which was devastated by the initial quake.
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Original:  Officials estimate the earthquake killed about 200,000 people and affected an estimated three million - about a third of Haiti's population.
Revised:  Officials estimate the earthquake killed about 200,000 people and affected three million - about a third of Haiti's population.
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Original:  Doctors , meanwhile are struggling to treat thousands of injured with limited resources
Revised:  Doctors meanwhile are struggling to treat thousands of injured with limited resources
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Original: After two weeks of fighting and several days of ground clashes between Palestinian armed forces and the Israeli military in Gaza , international pressure to end hostilities increases as the conflicts intensifies.
Revised: International pressure to end hostilities between Palestinian armed forces and the Israeli military in Gaza , international pressure to end hostilities increases as the conflicts intensifies.
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Original: After two weeks of fighting and several days of ground clashes between Palestinian armed forces and the Israeli military in Gaza , international pressure to end hostilities increases as the conflicts intensifies.
Revised: After two weeks of fighting and several days of ground clashes between Palestinian armed forces and the Israeli military in Gaza is mounting. The conflict is intensifying after two weeks of fighting and several days of ground clashes.
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Original:  Despite the Israeli ground maneuver in the , maintains rocket fire towards Israel and simultaneously battles the Israeli forces on the ground.
Revised:  Despite Israeli ground maneuvers in the , maintains rocket fire towards Israel and simultaneously battles the Israeli forces on the ground.
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Original:  Despite the Israeli ground maneuver in the , maintains rocket fire towards Israel and simultaneously battles the Israeli forces on the ground.
Revised:  Despite the Israeli ground maneuver in the , is maintaining rocket fire towards Israel and simultaneously battles the Israeli forces on the ground.
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Original:  Despite the Israeli ground maneuver in the , maintains rocket fire towards Israel and simultaneously battles the Israeli forces on the ground.
Revised:  Despite the Israeli ground maneuver in the , maintains rocket fire towards Israel and simultaneously battling the Israeli forces on the ground.
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