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Original:  But Busan police said the rally would not disturb the international meeting security has been tightened and the streets around APEC venues have been blocked off. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " We will completely block off areas around the two main APEC venues, Nurimaru and BEXCO, and main accommodations where ambassadors and world leaders are staying during the week-long gathering," an official at Busan Metropolitan Police Agency said.
Revised:  Busan police said the rally would not disturb the international meeting security has been tightened and the streets around APEC venues have been blocked off. %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% " We will completely block off areas around the two main APEC venues, Nurimaru and BEXCO, and main accommodations where ambassadors and world leaders are staying during the week-long gathering," an official at Busan Metropolitan Police Agency said.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Also, the pre-registered rallies cannot be engaged in those areas, but police have set up "peaceful zones" where the pre-registered groups can rally and will not dirupt the international event.
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Original:  " The police will also increase the number of personnel from some 7,000 to 22,000 on Nov. 17 and station more armored cars to prevent any violent protests," the official said.
Revised:  The police will also increase the number of personnel from some 7,000 to 22,000 on Nov. 17 and station more armored cars to prevent any violent protests," the official said.
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Original:  " The police will also increase the number of personnel from some 7,000 to 22,000 on Nov. 17 and station more armored cars to prevent any violent protests," the official said.
Revised:  " The police will also increase the number of personnel from some 7,000 to 22,000 on Nov. 17 and station more armored cars to prevent any violent protests," an official said.
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Original:  Also APEC's escort and security control committee, led by the Presidential Security Service, said it is fully aware of protesters' moves and will cooperate with the NPA, Defense Ministry, National Intelligence Service and National Emergency Management Agency    
Revised:  Also APEC's escort and security control committee, led by the Presidential Security Service, said it is fully aware of protesters' moves and will cooperate with the NPA, Defense Ministry, National Intelligence Service and National Emergency Management Agency . 
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Original: 20,000 labour activists in South Korea joined a union-organised protest in the streets of downtown [ w:Seoul|Seoul] on Sunday to express opposition to the Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation  forum currently underway in the southeastern port city of Busan.
Revised: 20,000 labour activists in South Korea joined a union-organised protest in the streets of downtown [ w:Seoul|Seoul] on Sunday to express opposition to the Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC) forum currently underway in the southeastern port city of Busan.
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Original:  The Asia-Pacific Economic Cooperation (APEC ) summit of Pacific Rim leaders will include w:George_W.
Revised:  The APEC summit of Pacific Rim leaders will include w:George_W.
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Original:  The protestors also want a better social security net for all South Korean workers.
Revised:  The protestors also want better social security net for all South Korean workers.
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Original:  The protestors also want a better social security net for all South Korean workers.
Revised:  The protestors also want a better social security for all South Korean workers.
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Original:  "APEC is playing the vanguard role of spreading new liberalism in trade which makes the rich richer and the poor poorer," said O Jong-Ryul, head of the People's Action against APEC - one of the umbrella organising groups.
Revised:  "APEC is playing the vanguard role of spreading new liberalism in trade which makes the rich richer and the poor poorer," said O Jong-Ryul, head of the People's Action against APEC - another of the protest organising groups.
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Original:  In their statement, the activists said APEC had become a tool for US multinationals seeking to expand their dominance in the world market "under the pretext of trade liberalization."
Revised:  The activists said APEC had become a tool for US multinationals seeking to expand their dominance in the world market "under the pretext of trade liberalization."
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Original:  The rally was held after the death of a South Korean farmer, who allegedly committed suicide early Friday morning to protest the free trade and opening of  South Korean agricultural market.
Revised:  The rally was held after the death of a South Korean farmer, who allegedly committed suicide on Friday morning to protest the free trade and opening of South Korean agricultural market.
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Original:  The rally was held after the death of a South Korean farmer, who allegedly committed suicide early Friday morning to protest the free trade and opening of  South Korean agricultural market.
Revised:  The rally was held after the death of a South Korean farmer, who allegedly committed suicide early Friday morning to protest the free trade and opening of the South Korean agricultural market.
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Original:   Some 80 protest leaders said they would organize regular street rallies throughout the week of APEC meetings which opened earlier Saturday.
Revised:  More protests expected Some 80 protest leaders said they would organize regular street rallies throughout the week of APEC meetings which opened earlier Saturday.
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Original:  The KCTU threatened to hold another rally in Busan on Thursday, to show opposition to further liberalization of trade and investment regulations.
Revised:  The KCTU intend to hold another rally in Busan on Thursday, to show opposition to further liberalization of trade and investment regulations.
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Original:  The KCTU threatened to hold another rally in Busan on Thursday, to show opposition to further liberalization of trade and investment regulations.
Revised:  The KCTU threatened to hold another rally in Busan on Thursday, in opposition to further liberalization of trade and investment regulations.
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Original:  They have also called on the government to provide all citizens with access to free medical care and education and to address the problem of the increasing disparity in wealth in South Korea . "We will fight aggressively at the national rally on Nov. 18 against the Busan APEC Summit and open Busan International People Forum by gathering all Korean progressives including workers, farmers and students,"
Revised:  They have also called on the government to provide all citizens with access to free medical care and education and to address the problem ofincreasing South Korean wealth disparity . "We will fight aggressively at the national rally on Nov. 18 against the Busan APEC Summit and open Busan International People Forum by gathering all Korean progressives including workers, farmers and students,"
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Original:  They have also called on the government to provide all citizens with access to free medical care and education and to address the problem of the increasing disparity in wealth in South Korea . "We will fight aggressively at the national rally on Nov. 18 against the Busan APEC Summit and open Busan International People Forum by gathering all Korean progressives including workers, farmers and students,"
Revised:  They have also called on the government to provide all citizens with access to free medical care and education and to address the problem of the increasing disparity in wealth in South Korea . "We will fight aggressively at the national rally on November 18 against the Busan APEC Summit and open Busan International People Forum by gathering all Korean progressives including workers, farmers and students,"
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Original:  The National Police Agency has banned 998 foreign activists linked to antiglobalization groups from entering the country before the APEC summit, and another 350 activists will be monitored closely.
Revised:  The National Police Agency has banned 998 foreign activists from entering the country before the APEC summit, and another 350 activists will be monitored closely.
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Original:  Also APEC's escort and security control committee, led by the Presidential Security Service, said it is fully aware of protesters' moves and will cooperate with the NPA, Defense Ministry, National Intelligence Service and National Emergency Management Agency.
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Original:  South Korea has mounted a huge land, sea and air operation to protect the Asia-Pacific leaders.
Revised:  South Korea has mounted a massive land, sea and air operation to protect the Asia-Pacific leaders.
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Original:  Officials say they will deploy over 37,000 personnel and enforcing exclusion zones.
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Original:  A spokesman for the port city of Busan, Steve Tang, said 37,000 officers from South Korea's national intelligence service, police, military, fire service, coast guard and customs were on high alert for the APECmeetings which opened yesterday .
Revised:  A spokesman for the port city of Busan, Steve Tang, said 37,000 officers from South Korea's national intelligence service, police, military, fire service, coast guard and customs were on high alert for APEC .
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Original:  The city's police, who have been on emergency duty since Oct. 19 , have been deployed to subway stations to monitor suspicious activities, while garbage bins, potential hiding places for bombs, have been removed.
Revised:  The city's police, have been on emergency duty since Oct. 19 , have been deployed to subway stations to monitor suspicious activities, while garbage bins, potential hiding places for bombs, have been removed.
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Original:  The city's police, who have been on emergency duty since Oct. 19 , have been deployed to subway stations to monitor suspicious activities, while garbage bins, potential hiding places for bombs, have been removed.
Revised:  The city's police, who have been on emergency duty since October 19 , have been deployed to subway stations to monitor suspicious activities, while garbage bins, potential hiding places for bombs, have been removed.
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Original: More protests expected Some 80 protest leaders said they would organize regular street rallies throughout the week of APEC meetings which opened earlier Saturday .
Revised: More protests expected Some 80 protest leaders said they would organize regular street rallies throughout the week of APEC meetings .
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Original:  The KCTU intend to hold another rally in Busan on Thursday, in opposition to further liberalization of trade and investment regulations.
Revised:  The KCTU intend to hold another rally in Busan on Thursday, in opposition to further trade liberalization and investment regulations.
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Original:  They have also called on the government to provide all citizens with access to free medical care and education and to address the problem ofincreasing South Korean wealth disparity.
Revised:  They call on the government to provide all citizens with access to free medical care and education and to address the problem ofincreasing South Korean wealth disparity.
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Original:   Busan police said the rally would not disturb the international meetingsecurity has been tightened and the streets around APEC venues have been blocked off . "The police will also increase the number of personnel from some 7,000 to 22,000 on Nov. 17 and station more armored cars to prevent any violent protests," an official said.
Revised:  Busan police said the rally would not disturb the meeting . "The police will also increase the number of personnel from some 7,000 to 22,000 on Nov. 17 and station more armored cars to prevent any violent protests," an official said.
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Original:   Busan police said the rally would not disturb the international meetingsecurity has been tightened and the streets around APEC venues have been blocked off . "The police will also increase the number of personnel from some 7,000 to 22,000 on Nov. 17 and station more armored cars to prevent any violent protests," an official said.
Revised:  Busan police said the rally would not disturb the international meetingsecurity has been tightened and the streets around APEC venues have been blocked off . "The police will also increase the number of personnel from some 7,000 to 22,000 and station more armored cars to prevent any violent protests," an official said.
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Original:  The National Police Agency has banned 998 foreign activists from entering the country before the APEC summit, and another 350 activists will be monitored closely.
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Original:  South Korea has mounted a massive land, sea and air operation to protect the Asia-Pacific leaders.
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Original:  The  measures include a no-fly and no-vessel zone within a 7km radius from Nurimaru APEC house, a dome-shaped structure on Busan's coast where APEC leaders will be holding a retreat.
Revised:  The measures include a no-fly and no-vessel zone within a 7km radius of the APEC venue retreat.
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Original: The Prefect of Police of Paris has banned public meetings in Paris, fearing violence in the capital this holiday weekend - which marks the 87th anniversary since the end of World Wr I. The ban began at 0900 GMT on Saturday and will end 0700 GMT on Sunday.
Revised: The Prefect of Police of Paris has banned public meetings in Paris, fearing violence in the capital this holiday weekend - which marks the 87th anniversary since the end of World Wr I. 
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Original: The Prefect of Police of Paris has banned public meetings in Paris, fearing violence in the capital this holiday weekend - which marks the 87th anniversary since the end of World Wr I. Police remained on alert throughout the weekend, with some 12,000 security officers deployed around the country.
Revised: The Prefect of Police of Paris has banned public meetings in Paris, fearing violence in the capital this holiday weekend - which marks the 87th anniversary since the end of World War I. Police remained on alert throughout the weekend, with some 12,000 security officers deployed around the country.
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Original:  The government have declared a state of emergency in Paris and 30 other areas to help quell the unrest.
Revised:  The government has declared a state of emergency in Paris and 30 other areas to help quell the unrest.
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Original:  "We will inquire into the causes of what happened but it's really important not to turn it into any allegation of complicity," the Pakistani ambassador to Washington  said.
Revised:  "We will inquire into the causes of what happened but it's really important not to turn it into any allegation of complicity," the Pakistani ambassador to Washington , , said.
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Original:  Pakistan has defended itself over allegations it was protecting the world's most wanted man, and expressed embarrasment after it emerged bin Laden may have been living in the compound in for as many as six years without being interecepted by Pakistan intelligence.
Revised:  Pakistan has defended itself against allegations it was protecting the world's most wanted man, and expressed embarrasment after it emerged bin Laden may have been living in the compound in for as many as six years without being interecepted by Pakistan intelligence.
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Original:  Pakistan has defended itself over allegations it was protecting the world's most wanted man, and expressed embarrasment after it emerged bin Laden may have been living in the compound in for as many as six years without being interecepted by Pakistan intelligence.
Revised:  Pakistan has defended itself over allegations it was protecting the world's most wanted man, and expressed embarrassment after it emerged bin Laden may have been living in the compound in for as many as six years without being interecepted by Pakistan intelligence.
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Original:  Pakistan has defended itself over allegations it was protecting the world's most wanted man, and expressed embarrasment after it emerged bin Laden may have been living in the compound in for as many as six years without being interecepted by Pakistan intelligence.
Revised:  Pakistan has defended itself over allegations it was protecting the world's most wanted man, and expressed embarrasment after it emerged bin Laden may have been living in the compound in for as many as six years without being intercepted by Pakistan intelligence.
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Original:  After Obama announced the death of bin Laden in a television address on Sunday night, many Americans begun gathering in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., and —the site of the —in New York, to celebrate ;
Revised:  After Obama announced the death of bin Laden in a television address on Sunday night, many Americans begun gathering in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., and —the site of the —in New York, to celebrate ,
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Original:  'Great deal of resistance' New details have emerged about the killing of the terrorist leader who managed to escape the U.S. for ten years.
Revised:  'Great deal of resistance' New details have emerged about the killing of the U.S. for ten years.
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Original:  The White House also confirmed they expect al-Qaeda may launch a retaliatory attack  . "We have anticipated a backlash, a desire, if not the ability, to exact some sort of revenge," a spokesperson said. yesterday threatened to launch attacks in Pakistan and the United States in revenge for the death of bin Laden.
Revised:  The White House also confirmed they expect al-Qaeda may launch a retaliatory attack . "We have anticipated a backlash, a desire, if not the ability, to exact some sort of revenge," a spokesperson said. has threatened to launch attacks in Pakistan and the United States in revenge for the death of bin Laden.
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Original:  The U.S. has issued notices advising travelers to avoid large crowds in foreign countries . After Obama announced the death of bin Laden in a television address on Sunday night, many Americans begun gathering in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., and —the site of the —in New York, to celebrate, singing the . Reports have indicated the U.S. government is awaiting the release of a "martyr tape"—an audio recording made by bin Laden to be broadcast after his death .
Revised:  The U.S. has issued notices advising travelers to avoid large crowds in foreign countries After Obama announced the death of bin Laden in a television address on Sunday night, many Americans begun gathering in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., and —the site of the —in New York, to celebrate, singing the . Reports have indicated the U.S. government is awaiting the release of a "martyr tape"—an audio recording made by bin Laden to be broadcast after his death .
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Original:  The U.S. has issued notices advising travelers to avoid large crowds in foreign countries . After Obama announced the death of bin Laden in a television address on Sunday night, many Americans begun gathering in front of the White House in Washington, D.C., and —the site of the —in New York, to celebrate, singing the . Reports have indicated the U.S. government is awaiting the release of a "martyr tape"—an audio recording made by bin Laden to be broadcast after his death .
Revised:  The U.S. has issued notices advising travelers to avoid large crowds in foreign countries . .
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Original: [[File:Bush and Zardari 2008-9-23-cropped2.jpg|The President of Pakistan, , attacked "baseless speculation" that Pakistan was harboring bin Laden.
Revised: [[File:Bush and Zardari 2008-9-23-cropped2.jpg|The president of Pakistan, , attacked "baseless speculation" that Pakistan was harboring bin Laden.
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Original:  'Deep concerns' The President of Pakistan, , has attacked "baseless speculation" that Pakistan was harboring bin Laden.
Revised:  'Deep concerns' The president of Pakistan, , has attacked "baseless speculation" that Pakistan was harboring bin Laden.
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Original:  U.S. President Barack Obama announced the raid on Sunday night.
Revised:  U.S. president Barack Obama announced the raid on Sunday night.
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Original: "If he had surrendered, attempted to surrender, I think we should obviously have accepted that, but there was no indication that he wanted to do that and therefore his killing was appropriate," U.S. Attorney General said today.
Revised: "If he had surrendered, attempted to surrender, I think we should obviously have accepted that, but there was no indication that he wanted to do that and therefore his killing was appropriate," U.S. attorney general said today.
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Original:  The U.S. has also today been forced to defend itself against allegations that the raid was unlawful, and claims that bin Laden was not a legitimate target.
Revised:  The U.S. has also been forced to defend itself against allegations that the raid was unlawful, and claims that bin Laden was not a legitimate target.
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Original:  Tonight Obama officially decided the U.S. will not release images of bin Laden's corpse, which have been described as "very gruesome".
Revised:  Last night Obama officially decided the U.S. will not release images of bin Laden's corpse, which have been described as "very gruesome".
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Original:  "We have anticipated a backlash, a desire, if not the ability, to exact some sort of revenge," a spokesperson said. has threatened to launch attacks in Pakistan and the United States in revenge for the death of bin Laden.
Revised:  "We have anticipated a backlash, a desire, if not the ability, to exact some sort of revenge," a spokesperson said. has threatened to launch attacks in Pakistan and the U.S. in revenge for the death of bin Laden.
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Original:  Protesters wearing red headbands caring signs saying “No Bush visit” and “No APEC.” Demands also included better conditions for temporary workers and better social security for all workers   
Revised:  Protesters wearing red headbands caring signs saying “No Bush visit” and “No APEC.” Demands also included better conditions for temporary workers and better social security for all workers . 
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Original: “ Support for the WTO negotiations is the No. 1 issue and the leaders will make a standalone statement on this, ” Choi Seok-Young, executive director of the APEC Secretariat said.
Revised: " Support for the WTO negotiations is the No. 1 issue and the leaders will make a standalone statement on this, ” Choi Seok-Young, executive director of the APEC Secretariat said.
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Original: “ Support for the WTO negotiations is the No. 1 issue and the leaders will make a standalone statement on this, ” Choi Seok-Young, executive director of the APEC Secretariat said.
Revised: “ Support for the WTO negotiations is the No. 1 issue and the leaders will make a standalone statement on this, " Choi Seok-Young, executive director of the APEC Secretariat said.
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Original:  “ It's very important that they seek a breakthrough in this current deadlocked situation ” South Korea's senior official and chairman of the meeting Kim Jong-hoon said.
Revised:  " It's very important that they seek a breakthrough in this current deadlocked situation ” South Korea's senior official and chairman of the meeting Kim Jong-hoon said.
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