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Original:  Events 1643 - The Portuguese ship, Santa Maria Madre de Deus is wrecked off the South African east coast 25 March 1647 - The Dutch ship, Nieuwe Haerlem is wrecked in Table Bay and survivors later build a small fort References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Category:Decades in South Africa South Africa Category:17th century in South Africa South Afri
Revised:  Events 1643 - The Portuguese ship, Santa Maria Madre de Deus is wrecked off the South African east coast 25 March 1647 - The Dutch ship, Nieuwe Haerlem is wrecked in Table Bay and survivors later build a small fort References See Timeline of South African history for list of References Referenc
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Original:  Furthermore, it is not constant over time, having been globally much shallower in the Cretaceous through to  Eocene.
Revised:  Furthermore, it is not constant over time, having been globally much shallower in the Cretaceous through to the Eocene.
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Original:    Shallow marine waters are generally supersaturated in calcite, CaCO3, so as marine organisms (which often have shells made of calcite or its polymorph, aragonite) die, they will tend to fall downwards without dissolving.
Revised:  Shallow marine waters are generally supersaturated in calcite, CaCO3, so as marine organisms (which often have shells made of calcite or its polymorph, aragonite) die, they tend to fall downwards without dissolving.
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Original:  The reaction involved, though more complex, can be thought of as: CaCO3(s) + H2O + CO2 → Ca2+(aq) + 2HCO3 − (aq).
Revised:  The reaction involved, though more complex, can be thought of as: CaCO3(s) + + CO2 → Ca2+(aq) + 2HCO3 − (aq).
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Original:  The reaction involved, though more complex, can be thought of as: CaCO3(s) + H2O + CO2 → Ca2+(aq) + 2HCO3 − (aq).
Revised:  The reaction involved, though more complex, can be thought of as: CaCO3(s) + H2O + CO − (aq).
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Original:  While the lyscoline is the upper bound of this transition zone of calcite saturation, the CCD is the lower bound of this zone.
Revised:  While the lysocline is the upper bound of this transition zone of calcite saturation, the CCD is the lower bound of this zone.
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Original: Calcite Compensation Depth The calcite compensation depth (CCD) occurs at the depth that the rate of calcite to the sediments is balanced with the dissolution flux, the depth at which the CaCO3 content are values 2-10\%.
Revised: Calcite compensation depth The calcite compensation depth (CCD) occurs at the depth that the rate of calcite to the sediments is balanced with the dissolution flux, the depth at which the CaCO3 content are values 2-10\%.
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Original: The equation Ω = Ca2+ X CO32- /K'sp expresses the CaCO3 saturation state of seawater.
Revised: The equation Ω = Ca2+ X CO32- /K'sp expresses the CaCO3 saturation state of seawater.
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Original:  The lysocline is the depth in the ocean dependent upon the calcite compensation depth (CCD), usually around 3.5 km, below which the rate of dissolution of calcite increases dramatically because of a pressure effect.
Revised:  The lysocline is the depth in the ocean dependent upon the carbonate compensation depth (CCD), usually around 3.5 km, below which the rate of dissolution of calcite increases dramatically because of a pressure effect.
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Original:  Macmillan (1991) . p 31 Poser or Poseur is someone who poses other people other than themselves as in a photographer, a sculptor, a director of a play or a movie
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Original:  Gregory Heaney of Allmusic has described the genre as "one of metal's more unfortunate pushes into the mainstream." Jonathan Davis, the frontman of the pioneering nu metal band Korn, was in an interview and said
Revised:  Gregory Heaney of Allmusic has described the genre as "one of metal's more unfortunate pushes into the mainstream." Jonathan Davis, the frontman of the pioneering nu metal band Korn, said in an interview and said
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Original:  Gregory Heaney of Allmusic has described the genre as "one of metal's more unfortunate pushes into the mainstream." Jonathan Davis, the frontman of the pioneering nu metal band Korn, was in an interview and said
Revised:  Gregory Heaney of Allmusic has described the genre as "one of metal's more unfortunate pushes into the mainstream." Jonathan Davis, the frontman of the pioneering nu metal band Korn, was in an interview :
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Original: Definition of poseur at Dictionary.com A poseur may be a person who pretends to be what he or she is not or an insincere person;
Revised: Definition of poseur at Dictionary.com A poseur may be a person who pretends to be what they are not or an insincere person;
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Original: In 1985, MTV aired a concert documentary, featuring performances by GBH and the Dickies, entitled Punks and Poseurs: A Journey Through the Los Angeles URL Poseurs in the realm of sneakers and fashion have even been given their own name: hypebeast.
Revised: In 1985, MTV aired a concert documentary, featuring performances by GBH and the Dickies, entitled Punks and Poseurs: A Journey Through the Los Angeles Underground. Poseurs in the realm of sneakers and fashion have even been given their own name: hypebeast.
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Original:  See also Hipster subculture Impostor Scene kids Sell out Wannabe
Revised:  See also Hipster subculture Impostor Scene kids Sell out Wanna Be
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Original: Etymology The English term poseur is a loanword from French.
Revised: Etymology The English term "poseur" is a loanword from French.
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Original:  He often remark that without a further  supply the housing market will resemble that of San Francisco and Orange County California where there are great divide between haves and have nots, clearly something not good for all of America.
Revised:  He often remarks that without a further supply the housing market will resemble that of San Francisco and Orange County California where there are great divide between haves and have nots, clearly something not good for all of America.
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Original:  He often remark that without a further  supply the housing market will resemble that of San Francisco and Orange County California where there are great divide between haves and have nots, clearly something not good for all of America.
Revised:  He often remark that without a further increase in supply the housing market will resemble that of San Francisco and Orange County California where there are great divide between haves and have nots, clearly something not good for all of America.
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Original:  He often remark that without a further  supply the housing market will resemble that of San Francisco and Orange County California where there are great divide between haves and have nots, clearly something not good for all of America.
Revised:  He often remark that without a further supply the housing market will resemble that of San Francisco and Orange County California where there are great divides between haves and have nots, clearly something not good for all of America.
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Original:  The biodistribution of the iron-virus particles was seen to concentrate on the choroid plexus cells of lateral ventricles (Räty et al, 2006) .
Revised:  The biodistribution of the iron-virus particles was seen to concentrate on the choroid plexus cells of lateral ventricles .
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Original:  At intervals of 1, 2, 4, and 24 hours, smaller groups (4-5) of the animals are humanely killed , then dissected.
Revised:  At intervals of 1, 2, 4, and 24 hours, smaller groups (4-5) of the animals are euthanized , then dissected.
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Original:  The organs of interest (usually: blood, liver, spleen, kidney, muscle, fat, adrenals, pancreas, brain, bone, stomach, small intestine, and upper and lower large intestine  ) are placed in pre-weighed containers, then into a device that measures gamma radiation.
Revised:  The organs of interest (usually: blood, liver, spleen, kidney, muscle, fat, adrenals, pancreas, brain, bone, stomach, small intestine, and upper and lower large intestine , etc ) are placed in pre-weighed containers, then into a device that measures gamma radiation.
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Original: Biodistribution imaging after dissection  For example, a new compound would be injected intravenously into a group of 16-20 rodents (typically mice or rats).
Revised: Biodistribution analysis Purpose and results A useful novel radiolabelled compound is one that is suitable either for medical imaging of certain body parts such as brain or tumors (injecting low doses of radioactivity) or for treating tumors (requiring injection of high doses of radioactivity). In both cases, the compound needs to accumulate in the target organ and any surplus compound present needs to clear the body rapidly. In medical diagnostic imaging, this then produces a clear diagnostic image (high image contrast), and in radiotherapy leads to an attack of the target (e.g. tumor) while minimizing side effects to non-target organs. Additional factors need to be evaluated in the development of a new diagnostic or therapeutic compound, including safety for humans. From an efficacy point of view, the biodistribution is an important aspect which can be measured by dissection or by imaging. For example, a new compound would be injected intravenously into a group of 16-20 rodents (typically mice or rats).
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Original: Biodistribution imaging after dissection  For example, a new compound would be injected intravenously into a group of 16-20 rodents (typically mice or rats).
Revised: Biodistribution imaging after dissection By dissection For example, a new compound would be injected intravenously into a group of 16-20 rodents (typically mice or rats).
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Original:  The organs of interest (usually: blood, liver, spleen, kidney, muscle, fat, adrenals, pancreas, brain, bone, stomach, small intestine, and upper and lower large intestine, etc. ) are placed in pre-weighed containers , then into a device that measures gamma radiation.
Revised:  The organs of interest (usually: blood, liver, spleen, kidney, muscle, fat, adrenals, pancreas, brain, bone, stomach, small intestine, and upper and lower large intestine, etc. ) are placed in pre-weighed containers and weighed, then placed into a device that measures gamma radiation.
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Original:  The organs of interest (usually: blood, liver, spleen, kidney, muscle, fat, adrenals, pancreas, brain, bone, stomach, small intestine, and upper and lower large intestine, etc. ) are placed in pre-weighed containers , then into a device that measures gamma radiation.
Revised:  The organs of interest (usually: blood, liver, spleen, kidney, muscle, fat, adrenals, pancreas, brain, bone, stomach, small intestine, and upper and lower large intestine, etc. ) are placed in pre-weighed containers , then into a device that measures radioactivity (e.g. gamma radiation). Normalizing the tissue radioactivity concentrations to the injected dose gives values in units of percent of the injected dose per gram of organ or biological tissue.
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Original:  A useful compoundis one that is used either for the medical imaging of certain body parts or tumors (at low doses of radioactivity) or treating tumors (at high doses of radioactivity)  .
Revised:  By imaging Similar to the dissection procedure, animals are injected with a low dose of a radiolabelled compound. At the chosen time points after injection, PET or SPECT images are acquired, typically also a CT or MR image for anatomical reference. The radioactivity concentration is measured from the PET or SPECT images for the various organs of interest. This includes measuring the volume of these organs e.g. from the CT image (rather than weighing the organs as in the dissection procedure). Normalizing the tissue radioactivity concentrations to the injected dose gives values in units of percent of the injected dose per milliliter of organ or biological tissue. .
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Original:  This includes measuring the volume of these organs e.g. from the CT image (rather than weighing the organs as in the dissection procedure)  .
Revised:  This may include measuring the volume of these organs e.g. from the CT image (rather than weighing the organs as in the dissection procedure) .
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Original:  The results give a dynamic view of how the compound moves through the animal and were it is retained.
Revised:  The results give a dynamic view of how the compound moves through the animal and where it is retained.
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Original: Nursing is a profession within the health care sector focused on the care of individuals , families, and communities so they may attain, maintain, or recover optimal health and quality of life.
Revised: Nursing encompasses autonomous and collaborative care of individuals of all ages , families, and communities so they may attain, maintain, or recover optimal health and quality of life.
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Original:  In the United Kingdom and the United States, advanced practice nurses, such as clinical nurse specialists and nurse practitioners , diagnose health problems and prescribe medications and other therapies, depending on individual state regulations.
Revised:  In the United Kingdom and the United States, advanced nurse practitioners diagnose health problems and prescribe medications and other therapies, depending on individual state regulations.
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Original: Nursing encompasses autonomous and collaborative care of individuals of all ages , families, groups and communities , sick or well and in all settings.
Revised: Nursing is a profession within the health care sector focused on the care of individuals , families, groups and communities , sick or well and in all settings.
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Original:  F.A. Davis. . Nurses develop care plans and work collaboratively with the service-user, Doctors, Social Workers, family, and many other healthcare practitioners.
Revised:  F.A. Davis. . Nurses develop a plan of care, working collaboratively with physicians, therapists, the patient, the patient's family, and many other healthcare practitioners.
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Original:  After the Tunisian Revolution, he is designated as Minister of the Public Service.
Revised:  After the Tunisian Revolution, he was designated as the Minister of the Public Service.
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Original:  born 9 May 1948) is a Tunisian politician and diplomat who served as Tunisia's Minister of Defense from 2005 to 2010 and as Minister of Foreign Affairs from 2010 to 2011.
Revised:  born 9 May 1948) is a Tunisian politician and diplomat who served as the Minister of Defense from 2005 to 2010 and as Minister of Foreign Affairs from 2010 to 2011.
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Original:  He had to leave  DRC in September 2001 for family reasons and was offered the post of Assistant High Commissioner for Refugees.
Revised:  He had to leave the DRC in September 2001 for family reasons and was offered the post of Assistant High Commissioner for Refugees.
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Original:  On 14 January 2010, he was appointed the Minister of Foreign Affairs.
Revised:  On 14 January 2010, he was appointed Minister of Foreign Affairs.
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Original:  On 5 November 2018, he was appointed as  Minister of the Public Service.
Revised:  On 5 November 2018, he was appointed as the Minister of the Public Service.
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Original:  On 22 August 2019, he is appointed acting head of the Tunisian government after receiving the prerogatives of Youssef Chahed, implicated in the 2019 presidential election.
Revised:  On 22 August 2019, he was appointed acting head of the Tunisian government after receiving the prerogatives of Youssef Chahed, implicated in the 2019 presidential election.
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Original:  He obtained a diploma in Emergency management from the University of Wisconsin and a research certificate from the Hague Academy of International Law.
Revised:  He obtained a diploma in Emergency management from the University of Wisconsin and a research certificate from The Hague Academy of International Law.
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Original:  After banning these supporters continued the work to 1950's but in the beginning of Mau Mau uprising the activity of the association diminish 
Revised:  After banning these supporters continued the work to 1950's but in the beginning of Mau Mau uprising the activity of the association diminished. 
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Original:  The association was linked to the land politics of colonial Kenya <ref name=bravman_1998 Bravman, B.: Making ethnic ways : Communities and their transformations in Taita, Kenya, 1800–1950. James Currey, Oxford.
Revised:  The association was linked to the land politics of colonial Kenya Bravman, B.: Making ethnic ways : Communities and their transformations in Taita, Kenya, 1800–1950. James Currey, Oxford.
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Original:  (1998) </ref>
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Original: The main political goals of the association wereMnjama , N.: Taita Hills Association.
Revised: The main political goals of the association were: Mnjama , N.: Taita Hills Association.
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Original: (1991) : The restoration of alienated lands of Taita tribe Keeping check on the destocking policies of the colonial government To get explanation on threat of removal of Wataita to Samburu To gain personal rights such as removal of the Kipande system
Revised: (1991) The restoration of alienated lands of Taita tribe Keeping check on the destocking policies of the colonial government To get explanation on threat of removal of Wataita to Samburu To gain personal rights such as removal of the Kipande system
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Original: Most fossil groundwater has been estimated to have originally infiltrated within the Holocene and Pleistocene (10, 000-40 ,000 years ago).
Revised: Most fossil groundwater has been estimated to have originally infiltrated within the Holocene and Pleistocene (10, 000–40 ,000 years ago).
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Original:  In much of the aquifer ’ s area, an impermeable layer of calcrete prevents precipitation from infiltrating.
Revised:  In much of the aquifer ' s area, an impermeable layer of calcrete prevents precipitation from infiltrating.
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Original:  Libya and Egypt are currently planning development projects to withdraw significant amounts of the aquifer ’ s fossil water for use.
Revised:  Libya and Egypt are currently planning development projects to withdraw significant amounts of the aquifer ' s fossil water for use.
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Original:  Whether or not the region ’ s aquifers receive any significant recharge has long been the subject of debate and research.
Revised:  Whether or not the region ' s aquifers receive any significant recharge has long been the subject of debate and research.
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Original: Kalahari Desert aquifers The Kalahari Desert  in central southern Africa (Botswana, Namibia, and South Africa).
Revised: Kalahari Desert aquifers The Kalahari Desert is in central southern Africa (Botswana, Namibia, and South Africa).
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Original: Fossil water or gay boys is an ancient body of water that has been contained in some undisturbed space , typically groundwater in an aquifer, for millennia.
Revised: Fossil water or gay boys is an ancient body of water that will suck your no no spot , typically groundwater in an aquifer, for millennia.
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Original: In other regions that do receive significant precipitation and where recharge does occur, fossil water may be extracted and eventually replaced by younger water, in which case the water in those aquifers could be considered a renewable resource.
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Original:  In modern times, as demand increases, avoiding depletion and conflict will depend on careful cross-boundary monitoring and planning.
Revised:  In modern times, as demand increases, avoiding rapid depletion and international conflict will depend on careful cross-boundary monitoring and planning.
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Original:  Other fossil aquifers have been identified throughout Northern Africa  .
Revised:  Other fossil aquifers have been identified throughout Northern Africa as well .
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Original:  Amédée William Merlaud-Ponty was a French colonial administrator (b. 4 February 1866 in Rochefort, Charente-Maritime;
Revised: William Merlaud-Ponty. Amédée William Merlaud-Ponty was a French colonial administrator (b. 4 February 1866 in Rochefort, Charente-Maritime;
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Original: Amédée William Merlaud-Ponty was a French colonial administrator (b. 4 February 1866 in Rochefort, Charente-Maritime ;
Revised: Amédée William Merlaud-Ponty ( 4 February 1866 in Rochefort, Charente-Maritime ;
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Original:  Definition: Brewer's infarcts from Online Medical Dictionary
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Original: His younger brother Wolfgang Duncker, a communist in exile in Moscow  was arrested in 1938 during the Great Purges and died in the Gulag.
Revised: His younger brother Wolfgang Duncker, a communist in exile in Moscow , was arrested in 1938 during the Great Purges and died in the Gulag.
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Original:  Their parents were the well-known socialist and later communist propagandists Hermann and Käte Duncker.
Revised:  Their parents were the well-known socialist and later communist politicians and educators Hermann and Käte Duncker.
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Original: iMedix is a health search engine and social network service that utilizes advanced proprietary algorithms to provide information in response to medical questions and concerns. iMedix is a U.S. cooperation and was founded in 2006 by Amir Leitersdorf and Iri Amirav.
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Original: iMedix is a health search engine and social network service that utilizes advanced proprietary algorithms to provide information in response to medical questions and concerns. iMedix is a U.S. cooperation and was founded in 2006 by Amir Leitersdorf and Iri Amirav.
Revised: iMedix is a health search engine and social network service that utilized advanced proprietary algorithms to provide information in response to medical questions and concerns. iMedix is a U.S. cooperation and was founded in 2006 by Amir Leitersdorf and Iri Amirav.
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Original: iMedix is a health search engine and social network service that utilizes advanced proprietary algorithms to provide information in response to medical questions and concerns. iMedix is a U.S. cooperation and was founded in 2006 by Amir Leitersdorf and Iri Amirav.
Revised: iMedix is a health search engine and social network service that utilizes advanced proprietary algorithms to provide information in response to medical questions and concerns. iMedix was a U.S. cooperation and was founded in 2006 by Amir Leitersdorf and Iri Amirav.
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Original: iMedix is a health search engine and social network service that utilizes advanced proprietary algorithms to provide information in response to medical questions and concerns. iMedix is a U.S. cooperation and was founded in 2006 by Amir Leitersdorf and Iri Amirav.
Revised: iMedix is a health search engine and social network service that utilizes advanced proprietary algorithms to provide information in response to medical questions and concerns. iMedix is a U.S. cooperation founded in 2006 by Amir Leitersdorf and Iri Amirav.
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Original:  The company's R&D is based in Herzeliya, Israel.
Revised:  The company's R&D was based in Herzeliya, Israel.
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