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Original: For the first time _ and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts _ someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.
Revised: For the first time - and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts _ someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.
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Original: For the first time _ and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts _ someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.
Revised: For the first time _ and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts - someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.
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Original:  L' Equipe released lab data with a medical identification allegedly finding banned EPO in five year old samples of cyclist Lance Armstrong's urine, originally taken after he won the 1999 Tour de France.
Revised:  L' Équipe released lab data with a medical identification allegedly finding banned EPO in five year old samples of cyclist Lance Armstrong's urine, originally taken after he won the 1999 Tour de France.
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Original:  French Sports Minister Jean-Francois Lamour said that without the "A" samples, no disciplinary action could be taken against Armstrong.
Revised:  French Sports Minister Jean-François Lamour said that without the "A" samples, no disciplinary action could be taken against Armstrong.
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Original:  The third ethical problem for Ayotte is that L' Equipe disclosed Armstrong's medical identity.
Revised:  The third ethical problem for Ayotte is that L' Équipe disclosed Armstrong's medical identity.
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Original:  Lance Armstrong has responded on his website, branding L' Equipe 's reporting as being "nothing short of tabloid journalism."
Revised:  Lance Armstrong has responded on his website, branding L' Équipe 's reporting as being "nothing short of tabloid journalism."
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Original:  "For the first time - and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts - someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.
Revised:  "For the first time — and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts - someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.
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Original:  "For the first time - and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts - someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.
Revised:  "For the first time - and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts — someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.
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Original:  "For the first time—and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts—someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.  
Revised:  "For the first time—and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts—someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body. " 
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Original:  "For the first time—and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts—someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body.  
Revised:  "For the first time—and these are no longer rumors, or insinuations, these are proven scientific facts—someone has shown me that in 1999, Armstrong had a banned substance called EPO in his body. Related new
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Original:  "If anyone should apologize," said Ri, "it should be South Korea, responsible for driving the situation on the Korean peninsula to the brink of an explosion.  
Revised:  "If anyone should apologize," said Ri, "it should be South Korea, responsible for driving the situation on the Korean peninsula to the brink of an explosion. " 
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Original: The National Defense Comission of North Korea, headed by their president Kim Jong Il , declared that they would "counter with their powerful nuclear deterrence the largest-ever nuclear war exercises to be staged by the U.S. and the South Korean puppet forces" in a "retaliatory sacred war."
Revised: The National Defense Comission of North Korea, headed by their president Kim Jong-il , declared that they would "counter with their powerful nuclear deterrence the largest-ever nuclear war exercises to be staged by the U.S. and the South Korean puppet forces" in a "retaliatory sacred war."
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Original: The National Defense Comission of North Korea, headed by their president Kim Jong-il, declared that they would "counter with their powerful nuclear deterrence the largest-ever nuclear war exercises to be staged by the U.S. and the South Korean puppet forces" in a "retaliatory sacred war."
Revised: The National Defense Comission of North Korea, headed by their leader Kim Jong-il, declared that they would "counter with their powerful nuclear deterrence the largest-ever nuclear war exercises to be staged by the U.S. and the South Korean puppet forces" in a "retaliatory sacred war."
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Original: Tensions had recently become especially high in both sides of Korea after the sinking of a Cheonan warship in South Korea , killing over 40 people.
Revised: Tensions had recently become especially high in both sides of Korea after the sinking of the warship Cheonan in South Korean waters , killing over 40 people.
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Original: Tensions had recently become especially high in both sides of Korea after the sinking of the warship Cheonan in South Korean waters, killing over 40 people.
Revised: Tensions had recently become especially high in both sides of Korea after the sinking of the warship in South Korean waters, killing over 40 people.
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Original:  "If anyone should apologize," said Ri, "it should be South Korea, responsible for driving the situation on the Korean peninsula to the brink of an explosion." Related new 
Revised:  "If anyone should apologize," said Ri, "it should be South Korea, responsible for driving the situation on the Korean peninsula to the brink of an explosion." Related news 
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Original: Venezuelan troops in a parade . Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez has declared that the National Army is on maximum alert along the Colombian border, after he broke relations with that country on Thursday.
Revised: Venezuelan troops in a parade Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez has declared that the National Army is on maximum alert along the Colombian border, after he broke relations with that country on Thursday.
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Original: Chávez announced the breaking of diplomatic ties on behalf of the Venezuelan government after Colombia released documents  showing the active presence of FARC on Venezuelan territory at the Washington headquarters of the OAS, demanding a special inquiry to investigate the matter.
Revised: Chávez announced the breaking of diplomatic ties on behalf of the Venezuelan government after Colombia released documents allegedly showing the active presence of FARC on Venezuelan territory at the Washington headquarters of the OAS, demanding a special inquiry to investigate the matter.
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Original:  The declaration comes in the wake of the Colombian Secretary of State's announcement before the Organisation of American States (OAS) that the FARC has a "consolidated," "active" and "growing" presence in Venezuela, with some 1500 guerrilla fighters in 87 camps.
Revised:  The declaration comes in the wake of the Colombian Secretary of State's claim before the Organisation of American States (OAS) that the FARC has a "consolidated," "active" and "growing" presence in Venezuela, with some 1500 guerrilla fighters in 87 camps.
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Original: Venezuelan troops in a parade Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez has declared that the National Army is on maximum alert along the Colombian border, after he broke relations with that country on Thursday.
Revised: Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez has declared that the National Army is on maximum alert along the Colombian border, after he broke relations with that country on Thursday.
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Original: Venezuelan troops in a parade Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez has declared that the National Army is on maximum alert along the Colombian border, after he broke relations with that country on Thursday.
Revised: Venezuelan troops in a parade Venezuelan President Hugo Chávez has declared that the is on maximum alert along the Colombian border, after he broke relations with that country on Thursday.
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Original:  Venezuela's Secretary of Defense Carlos Mata told the media that his forces have been mobilised since Thursday morning, and are awaiting the orders of their Commander in Chief, the President.
Revised:  Venezuela's Secretary of Defense told the media that his forces have been mobilised since Thursday morning, and are awaiting the orders of their Commander in Chief, the President.
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Original:  Experts say he may have commited the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
Revised:  Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
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Original: A Hong Kong teenager named Kan murdered his mother and sister with a chopper last Thursday . Police records show that the teenager had no record of drug abuse or mental illness  .
Revised: A Hong Kong teenager named Kan murdered his mother and sister with a chopper in the early hours of Thursday morning . Police records show that the teenager had no record of drug abuse or mental illness .
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Original:  The only clue to the motivation of the murder was the words that the teenager had mumbled to the police, ' the world would be better with fewer people ' . He is currently  interrogated by the police.
Revised:  The only clue to the motivation of the murder was when he told police, " the world would be better with fewer people ' . He is currently interrogated by the police.
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Original:  The only clue to the motivation of the murder was the words that the teenager had mumbled to the police, ' the world would be better with fewer people ' . He is currently  interrogated by the police.
Revised:  The only clue to the motivation of the murder was the words that the teenager had mumbled to the police, ' the world would be better with fewer people " . He is currently interrogated by the police.
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Original:  The only clue to the motivation of the murder was the words that the teenager had mumbled to the police, ' the world would be better with fewer people ' . He is currently  interrogated by the police.
Revised:  The only clue to the motivation of the murder was the words that the teenager had mumbled to the police, ' the world would be better with fewer people ' . He is currently being interrogated by the police.
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Original:  The teenager , with black gloves, attacked his mother and little sister , especially at their backs and necks.
Revised:  The teenager attacked his mother and little sister , especially at their backs and necks.
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Original:  The boy, who studies at Po Leung Kuk Lee Shing Pik College, had come first in class in primary six .
Revised:  The boy, who studies at Po Leung Kuk Lee Shing Pik College, ranked first in class in primary six .
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Original:  The boy, who studies at Po Leung Kuk Lee Shing Pik College, had come first in class in primary six .
Revised:  The boy, who studies at Po Leung Kuk Lee Shing Pik College, had come first in class in Primary Six, and was known to be well behaved, friendly and hard-working .
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Original:  His principal, his father, a man who worked for his father, and a neighbour were  shocked at the news of the murder .
Revised:  His principal, his father, a man who worked for his father, and a neighbour were said to be shocked at the news of the murder .
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Original:  His principal, his father, a man who worked for his father, and a neighbour were  shocked at the news of the murder .
Revised:  His principal, his father, a man who worked for his father, and a neighbour were shocked at the news of the murders .
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Original:  The local newspaper vendor described him as 'polite' .
Revised:  The local newspaper vendor described him as "polite" .
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Original:  There have been no record of any quarrels among the family members .
Revised:  There have been no record of any arguments among the family members .
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Original:  There have been no record of any quarrels among the family members .
Revised:  There have been no record of any quarrels among the family members 
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Original:  However , graffiti which may have been written by the teenager was found on the walls of the block of flats which the boy lived in .
Revised:  ; however , graffiti which may have been written by the teenager was found on the walls of the block of flats which the boy lived in .
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Original:  However , graffiti which may have been written by the teenager was found on the walls of the block of flats which the boy lived in .
Revised:  However , graffiti which is believed to have been written by the teenager was found on the walls of the block of flats which the boy lived in .
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Original:  However , graffiti which may have been written by the teenager was found on the walls of the block of flats which the boy lived in .
Revised:  However , graffiti which may have been written by the teenager was found on the walls of the block of flats where the boy lives .
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Original:  The graffiti included foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as ' I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
Revised:  The graffiti includes foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as ' I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
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Original:  The graffiti included foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as ' I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
Revised:  The graffiti included foul language, including "shit" and "bitch" , as well as ' I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
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Original:  The graffiti included foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as ' I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
Revised:  The graffiti included foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as " I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
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Original:  The graffiti included foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as ' I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
Revised:  The graffiti included foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as ' I love you " and " Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
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Original:  The graffiti included foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as ' I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of schizophrenia or delusional disorder.
Revised:  The graffiti included foul language, including s*** and b***h , as well as ' I love you ' and ' Happy birthday (little sister) '. Experts say he may have committed the murder as a result of 
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Original:  The boy's father temporarily shut down his restaurant as a result of the murder
Revised:  incubated mental illness that his family were not aware he was suffering from, or that he may have experienced a huge setback or terrible experience
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Original:  It is the least we can do, and we will remain alert, as [President Álvaro] Uribe is a sick man, filled with hate," said Chávez during a ceremony at the Presidential Palace with the coach of the Argentinian national football team, Diego Maradona, whom he was meeting during his visit to Venezuela.
Revised:  It is the least we can do, and we will remain alert, as [President Álvaro] Uribe is a sick man, filled with hate," said Chávez during a ceremony at the Presidential Palace with the coach of the Argentinian national football team, Diego Maradona, whom he was meeting during Maradona's visit to Venezuela.
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Original: Backgrounder In June 2009 Pfc Bowe Bergdahl was captured by Taliban forces in Paktika province.
Revised:  In June 2009 Pfc Bowe Bergdahl was captured by Taliban forces in Paktika province.
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Original:  File:Lowgar districts.png|300px|The Logar province in the east of Afghanistan ISAF did not report the nationalities of the missing soldiers, but US officials have confirmed to the Associated Press the soldiers are United States military.
Revised:  ISAF did not report the nationalities of the missing soldiers, but US officials have confirmed to the Associated Press the soldiers are United States military.
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Original: ]] The International Security Assistance Force (ISAF), the NATO forces organization in Afghanistan, has announced two forces members have failed to return from a vehicle patrol to their Kabul City compound.
Revised: ]] The (ISAF), the NATO forces organization in Afghanistan, has announced two forces members have failed to return from a vehicle patrol to their Kabul City compound.
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Original: ]] The International Security Assistance Force (ISAF), the NATO forces organization in Afghanistan, has announced two forces members have failed to return from a vehicle patrol to their Kabul City compound.
Revised: ]] The International Security Assistance Force (ISAF), the forces organization in Afghanistan, has announced two forces members have failed to return from a vehicle patrol to their Kabul City compound.
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Original: ]] The International Security Assistance Force (ISAF), the NATO forces organization in Afghanistan, has announced two forces members have failed to return from a vehicle patrol to their Kabul City compound.
Revised: ]] The International Security Assistance Force (ISAF), the NATO forces organization in Afghanistan, has announced two forces members have failed to return from a vehicle patrol to their compound.
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Original:  In June 2009 Pfc Bowe Bergdahl was captured by Taliban forces in Paktika province.
Revised:  In June 2009 Pfc was captured by Taliban forces in Paktika province.
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Original: *  References
Revised: * Army and live fire training The army has used Makua valley as a trainig range since the 1920's, when they purchased three tracts of land for Howitzer emplacements. In 2001 the Army agreed to conduct an Environmental Impact Statement analysis of more than 75 years of military training in Makua Valley. The EIS was supposed to be completed in 2004, but wasn't actually finished until 2007, partly due to a fire that was intentionally set by the army "to manage grasses but which got out of control and charred half the valley." Between the due date in 2004 and the actual completion date of the EIS, Makua Valley was clear of all live-fire training.* References
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Original:  * Army and live fire training The army has used Makua valley as a trainig range since the 1920's, when they purchased three tracts of land for Howitzer emplacements.
Revised:  Army and live fire training The army has used Makua valley as a trainig range since the 1920's, when they purchased three tracts of land for Howitzer emplacements.
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Original:  Between the due date in 2004 and the actual completion date of the EIS, Makua Valley was clear of all live-fire training .* References Category:Hawa
Revised:  Between the due date in 2004 and the actual completion date of the EIS, Makua Valley was clear of all live-fire training Category:Hawa
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Original:  Between the due date in 2004 and the actual completion date of the EIS, Makua Valley was clear of all live-fire training .* References Category:Hawa
Revised:  Between the due date in 2004 and the actual completion date of the EIS, Makua Valley was clear of all live-fire training .* References 
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Original: Picture of wildfire in Makua Valley taken from Farrington highway Saturday, July 24, a wildfire raged along the mountainside of Makua Valley near Kaeana Point, Hawaii.
Revised: Picture of wildfire in Makua Valley taken from Farrington Highway Saturday, July 24, a wildfire raged along the mountainside of Makua Valley near Kaeana Point, Hawaii.
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Original: Picture of wildfire in Makua Valley taken from Farrington highway Saturday, July 24, a wildfire raged along the mountainside of Makua Valley near Kaeana Point, Hawaii.
Revised: Picture of wildfire in Makua Valley taken from Farrington highway A wildfire rages along the mountainside of Makua Valley near Kaeana Point, Hawaii.
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Original:  Firefighters are currently trying to contain the fire using trucks and helicopters.
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Original:  Army and live fire training The army has used Makua valley as a trainig range since the 1920's , when they purchased three tracts of land for Howitzer emplacements .
Revised:  Makua Valley is on the north western corner of Oahu, about 40 miles by road from the Honolulu, Hawaii's capital. The United States Army purchased three tracts of land for Howitzer emplacements .
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Original: Makua Valley is on the north western corner of Oahu, about 40 miles by road from the Honolulu, Hawaii's capital.
Revised: Makua Valley is on the north western corner of Oahu, about 40 miles by road from Honolulu, Hawaii's capital.
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Original: Makua Valley  is on the north western corner of Oahu, about 40 miles (65 km) by road from Honolulu, Hawaii's capital.
Revised: Makua Valley () is on the north western corner of Oahu, about 40 miles (65 km) by road from Honolulu, Hawaii's capital.
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Original:  The website of the local TV station reported this morning that 100 acres (40 hectares) had burned, but that no buildings were under threat.
Revised:  The website of a local TV news service reported this morning that 100 acres (40 hectares) had burned, but that no buildings were under threat.
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Original:  I don't think you'll ever see a player in the game of snooker like the great Alex Higgins.  [ [ 
Revised:  I don't think you'll ever see a player in the game of snooker like the great Alex Higgins. " [ [ 
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Original:  I don't think you'll ever see a player in the game of snooker like the great Alex Higgins.  [ [ 
Revised:  I don't think you'll ever see a player in the game of snooker like the great Alex Higgins. [ [w 
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