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Original: In a 5-4 vote, the United States Supreme Court overturned the death penalty for Patrick Kennedy, convicted of raping a child, saying it is not proportional to the crime (lie) and that it violates the Constitutional ban on cruel and unusual punishment (lie) , and thereby setting a precedent.
Revised: In a 5-4 vote, the United States Supreme Court overturned the death penalty for Patrick Kennedy, convicted of raping a child, saying it is not proportional to the crime (lie) and that it violates the Constitutional ban on cruel and unusual punishment , and thereby setting a precedent.
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Original:  It is the activism of the Louisiana lawmakers and those in an increasing number of other states that these harms justify the death penalty."
Revised:  It is the judgment of the Louisiana lawmakers and those in an increasing number of other states that these harms justify the death penalty."
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Original:  Hero said the decision would bar the death penalty "no matter how young the child, no matter how many times the child is raped, no matter how many children the perpetrator rapes, no matter how sadistic the crime, no matter how much physical or psychological trauma is inflicted, and no matter how heinous the perpetrator's prior criminal record may be."
Revised:  Alito said the decision would bar the death penalty "no matter how young the child, no matter how many times the child is raped, no matter how many children the perpetrator rapes, no matter how sadistic the crime, no matter how much physical or psychological trauma is inflicted, and no matter how heinous the perpetrator's prior criminal record may be."
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Original: The Lousiana Supreme Court defended Kennedy's sentence, saying that "short of first-degree murder, we can think of no other non-homicide crime more deserving" of the death penalty.
Revised: The Louisiana Supreme Court defended Kennedy's sentence, saying that "short of first-degree murder, we can think of no other non-homicide crime more deserving" of the death penalty.
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Original:  The presumptive Democratic Presidential nominee and Illinois state senator Barack Obama conveyed his sympathies and condolonces to the people of the Philippines through President Gloria Arroyo, after the country was struck over the weekend by Typhoon Fengshen.
Revised: Democratic presidential candidate Sen. Barack Obama The presumptive Democratic Presidential nominee and Illinois state senator Barack Obama conveyed his sympathies and condolonces to the people of the Philippines through President Gloria Arroyo, after the country was struck over the weekend by Typhoon Fengshen.
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Original: Map showing location of MV Princess of the Stars and the eye of Typhoon Fengshen when the ferry capsized.
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Original: Energy secretary Angelo Reyes also received the recommendations from a six-man team from the w: International Atomic Energy Agency on the prospects of operating the moth-balled Bataan Nuclear Power Plant.
Revised: Energy secretary Angelo Reyes also received the recommendations from a six-man team from the International Atomic Energy Agency on the prospects of operating the moth-balled Bataan Nuclear Power Plant.
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Original:  The w:Bataan nuclear plant was first built in the late seventies under the administration of President w: Ferdinand Marcos but was scrapped by President w: Corazon Aquino in 1986 owing to kick-backs in the plant's construction and safety concerns.
Revised:  The w:Bataan nuclear plant was first built in the late seventies under the administration of President Ferdinand Marcos but was scrapped by President w: Corazon Aquino in 1986 owing to kick-backs in the plant's construction and safety concerns.
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Original:  The w:Bataan nuclear plant was first built in the late seventies under the administration of President w: Ferdinand Marcos but was scrapped by President w: Corazon Aquino in 1986 owing to kick-backs in the plant's construction and safety concerns.
Revised:  The w:Bataan nuclear plant was first built in the late seventies under the administration of President w: Ferdinand Marcos but was scrapped by President Corazon Aquino in 1986 owing to kick-backs in the plant's construction and safety concerns.
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Original: The Philippines and other members of the Association of Southeast Asian Nations or ASEANis getting alarmed over the rapid increase of global oil prices is seriously looking into prospects of building nuclear powered plants to energize the electric needs of the 10 member nations of Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) .
Revised: The Philippines and other members of the Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) are becoming alarmed over the rapid increase of global oil prices is seriously looking into prospects of building nuclear powered plants to energize the electric needs of the 10 member nations of Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) .
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Original: The Philippines and other members of the Association of Southeast Asian Nations or ASEANis getting alarmed over the rapid increase of global oil prices is seriously looking into prospects of building nuclear powered plants to energize the electric needs of the 10 member nations of Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) .
Revised: The Philippines and other members of the Association of Southeast Asian Nations or ASEANis getting alarmed over the rapid increase of global oil prices and are seriously looking into prospects of building nuclear powered plants to energize the electric needs of the 10 member nations of Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) .
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Original: The Philippines and other members of the Association of Southeast Asian Nations or ASEANis getting alarmed over the rapid increase of global oil prices is seriously looking into prospects of building nuclear powered plants to energize the electric needs of the 10 member nations of Association of Southeast Asian Nations (ASEAN) .
Revised: The Philippines and other members of the Association of Southeast Asian Nations or ASEANis getting alarmed over the rapid increase of global oil prices is seriously looking into prospects of building nuclear powered plants to energize the electric needs of the 10 member nations of ASEAN .
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Original:  The Heads of Asean Power Utilities/Authorities (Hapua) Council got together in Manila this week and is forming an ASEAN Power Grid.
Revised:  The heads of Asean Power Utilities/Authorities (Hapua) Council got together in Manila this week and is forming an ASEAN Power Grid.
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Original:  For the time, the Philippines has implemented several measures on conserving energy particularly the conversion to compact fluorescent lights or CFLs
Revised:  For the time, the Philippines has implemented several measures on conserving energy particularly the conversion to compact fluorescent lights (CFLs)
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Original: Governor Schwartzenegger asked for help from other states, and Nevada and Oregon have thus far responded.
Revised: Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger asked for help from other states, and Nevada and Oregon have thus far responded.
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Original: Huge lightning storms this week have sparked over 800 wildfires in northern California.
Revised: A large lightning storm this week sparked over 800 wildfires in northern California.
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Original:  Over 100,000 acres have been burned from these wildfires , and there is no relief in sight .
Revised:  Over 100,000 acres have been burned from these wildfires .
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Original:  The season formally opens with a show and ceremony to be led by this year's host, the National University on July5 at the Araneta Coliseum with an opening basketball match between Admason University and Far Eastern University
Revised:  The season formally opens with a show and ceremony to be led by this year's host, the National University on July5 at the Araneta Coliseum with an opening basketball match between Adamson University and Far Eastern University
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Original: On Wednesday, a United States federal appeals court upheld convictions of fraud and obstruction of justice against media mogul Conrad Black, along with three other executives from his former press corporation  Hollinger International.
Revised: On Wednesday, a United States federal appeals court upheld convictions of fraud and obstruction of justice against media mogul Conrad Black, along with three other executives from his former press corporation , Hollinger International.
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Original:  He was sentenced, and from March this year  began a 6 1/ 2 year prison term.
Revised:  He was sentenced, and from March this year he began a 6 1/ 2 year prison term.
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Original:  He was sentenced, and from March this year  began a 6 1/ 2 year prison term.
Revised:  He was sentenced, and from March this year began a 6 1/ 2-year prison term.
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Original:  They noted that while the defence had presented a "no harm-no foul argument", in which they argued that they were owed the money appropriated, "such arguments usually fare badly in criminal cases".
Revised:  They noted that while the defence had presented a "no harm-no foul argument", in which it was argued that the accused were owed the money appropriated, "such arguments usually fare badly in criminal cases".
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Original:  Khelil was also quoted saying, "You can see it, every time there is a strengthening of the dollar, there's a drop in prices , "
Revised:  Khelil was also quoted saying, "You can see it, every time there is a strengthening of the dollar, there's a drop in prices . "
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Original: Image:Oil platform.jpg|An oil and gas offshore platform .
Revised: An offshore oil and gas offshore platform .
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Original: Image:Oil platform.jpg|An oil and gas offshore platform .
Revised: Image:Oil platform.jpg|An oil and gas platform
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Original:  Western nations has been pressuring OPEC to increase oil production to halt the soaring oil prices . Meanwhile, Brent Crude oil peaked up by 47 cents to 134.80 dollars and light sweet crude for August delivery based on the main oil futures contract in New York, went up by 44 cents at 134.99 dollars per barrel in electronic deals
Revised:  Western nations has been pressuring OPEC to increase oil production to halt the soaring oil prices Meanwhile, Brent Crude oil peaked up by 47 cents to 134.80 dollars and light sweet crude for August delivery based on the main oil futures contract in New York, went up by 44 cents at 134.99 dollars per barrel in electronic deals
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Original:  Western nations has been pressuring OPEC to increase oil production to halt the soaring oil prices . Meanwhile, Brent Crude oil peaked up by 47 cents to 134.80 dollars and light sweet crude for August delivery based on the main oil futures contract in New York, went up by 44 cents at 134.99 dollars per barrel in electronic deals
Revised:  Western nations has been pressuring OPEC to increase oil production to halt the soaring oil prices . 
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Original:  He also said that the act truly pleased him and its just the first step towards repairing North Korea's relation and status with the world community.
Revised:  He also said that the act truly pleased him and it's just the first step towards repairing North Korea's relation and status with the world community.
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Original: Meanwhile, Japan expressed 'unease' over the decision of the United States to remove North Korea from the 'terror' list claiming that there is still a need to resolve issues about the kidnapping of Japanese nationals by agents of Pyongyang .
Revised: Meanwhile, Japan expressed 'unease' over the decision of the United States to remove North Korea from the 'terror' list claiming that there is still a need to resolve issues about the kidnapping of Japanese nationals by agents of Pyongyang 
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Original:  Syria grants IAEA a glimpse of its nuke site%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a four-day fact finding mission, Syria gave a delegation from the International Atomic Energy Agency a glimpse of its controversial nuclear reactor.
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a four-day fact finding mission, Syria gave a delegation from the International Atomic Energy Agency a glimpse of its controversial nuclear reactor.
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Original:  Syria grants IAEA a glimpse of its nuke site%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% In a four-day fact finding mission, Syria gave a delegation from the International Atomic Energy Agency a glimpse of its controversial nuclear reactor.
Revised:  Syria grants IAEA a glimpse of its nuke site%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  Pyongyang remains obliged to answer questions such as the degree of its uranium enrichment and proliferation that possibly benefited Syria.
Revised:  Pyongyang still remains obliged to answer questions such as the degree of its uranium enrichment and proliferation that possibly benefited Syria.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Japan expressed 'unease' over the decision of the United States to remove North Korea from the 'terror' list  claiming that there is still a need to resolve issues about the kidnapping of Japanese nationals by agents of Pyongyang
Revised:  Meanwhile, Japan expressed 'unease' over the decision of the United States to remove North Korea from the 'terror' list , claiming that there is still a need to resolve issues about the kidnapping of Japanese nationals by agents of Pyongyang
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Original: D.C. Mayor Adrian Fenty expressed disappointment in the outcome of this case, but he has stated that he will order the district's police department to provide a means for citizens to register handguns within 21 days.
Revised: D.C. Mayor Adrian Fenty expressed disappointment in the outcome of this case, but stated that he will order the district's police department to provide a means for citizens to register handguns within 21 days.
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Original:  A day before Zimbabwe's presidential runoff is to be held, President Robert Mugabe says he is open to discussion with the Movement for Democratic Change (MDC), the opposition party that has decided to boycott what they call a "sham election".
Revised:  The day before Zimbabwe's presidential runoff is to be held, President Robert Mugabe says he is open to discussion with the Movement for Democratic Change (MDC), the opposition party that has decided to boycott what they call a "sham election".
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Original:  On Wednesday, MDC leader Morgan Tsvangirai had called for  talks on forming a transitional authority following the election .
Revised:  On Wednesday, MDC leader Morgan Tsvangirai had called for talks on forming a transitional authority .
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Original:  Mugabe, who had previously shown little interest in talks with the opposition, said at a campaign rally, " We remain open to discussion with the MDC  . "  Mugabe  also said that violence had been committed by his ZANU-PF party as well as Tsvangirai's party, and that the violence "must stop" . Earlier on Thursday, Tsvangirai expressed doubt over the possibility of discussion.
Revised:  Mugabe, who had previously shown little interest in talks with the opposition, said at a campaign rally, " We remain open to discussion with the MDC . " Mugabe also said that violence had been committed by his ZANU-PF party as well as Tsvangirai's party, and that the violence must stop . Earlier on Thursday, Tsvangirai expressed doubt over the possibility of discussion.
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Original:  "It is something we cherish," he said  
Revised:  "It is something we cherish," he said . 
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Original:  "There is nothing wrong with its palatability, it's purely because it is slightly less than the prescribed minimum size.   
Revised:  "There is nothing wrong with its palatability, it's purely because it is slightly less than the prescribed minimum size. " 
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Original:   "The inspector's decision is consistent with RPA's commitment to protect consumers, who must feel confident that the produce they are buying is of the right quality," said a spokesperson of the Rural Payments Agency, explaining the move  
Revised:  "The inspector's decision is consistent with RPA's commitment to protect consumers, who must feel confident that the produce they are buying is of the right quality," said a spokesperson of the Rural Payments Agency, explaining the move . 
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Original: Two days before the actual slug out between US-born fighter David Diaz (34-1-1, 17 KOs) and challenger, a three title holder Filipino boxing champion, Manny "Pacman" Pacquiao (46-3-2, 34 KOs) occurs in Las Vegas, Nevada on June 28,  the two trades verbal punches at each other during a meeting with members of sports media.
Revised: Two days before the actual slug out between US-born fighter David Diaz (34-1-1, 17 KOs) and challenger, a three title holder Filipino boxing champion, Emmanuel "Pacman" Pacquiao (46-3-2, 34 KOs) occurs in Las Vegas, Nevada on June 28, the two trades verbal punches at each other during a meeting with members of sports media.
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Original:  The camp of  Pacquiao led by manager Freddie Roach claimed that Diaz will need a "fu**ing miracle" to stop 'The Pacman' from moving-up to the 135 lbs. weight class where Diaz is top brass.
Revised:  The camp of Manny Pacquiao led by manager Freddie Roach claimed that Diaz will need a "fu**ing miracle" to stop 'The Pacman' from moving-up to the 135 lbs. weight class where Diaz is top brass.
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Original:  Diaz debuted in the boxing world when he was part of the winning U.S. Olympic boxing team during the 1996 Atlanta Olympic games.
Revised:  Diaz debuted in the boxing world when he was part of the winning United States Olympic boxing team during the 1996 Atlanta Olympic games.
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Original:  Las Vegas, Nevada will host the Diaz-Pacquiao match
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Original: The camp of Manny Pacquiao led by manager Freddie Roach claimed that Diaz will need a "fucking miracle" to stop 'The Pacman' from moving-up to the 135 lbs. weight class where Diaz is top brass.
Revised: The camp of Manny Pacquiao led by manager Freddie Roach claimed that Diaz will need a "fucking miracle" to stop 'The Pacman' from moving up to the 135 lbs. weight class where Diaz is top brass.
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Original:  The 32-year old native of Chicago claimed the 135 lbs. title from Mexican Erik Morales and plans to defend it a third time against the Philippines' prize fighter.
Revised:  The 32-year-old native of Chicago claimed the 135 lbs. title from Mexican Erik Morales and plans to defend it a third time against the Philippines' prize fighter.
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Original:  Meanwhile, Pacquiao dedicated his bout against Diaz to all the victims of Typhoon Fengshen which devastated his home country, the Philippines and killing hundreds of people
Revised:  Meanwhile, Pacquiao dedicated his bout against Diaz to all the victims of Typhoon Fengshen which devastated his home country, the Philippines , and killed hundreds of people
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Original:  The 32-year-old native of Chicago claimed the 135 lbs. title from Mexican Erik Morales and plans to defend it a third time against the Philippines' prize fighter.
Revised:  The 32-year-old native of Chicago claimed the 135 lbs. title from Mexican Érik Morales and plans to defend it a third time against the Philippines' prize fighter.
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Original: British Prime Minister Gordon Brown, former US President Bill Clinton, talk-show queen Oprah Winfrey, Academy Award winning actor Robert De Niro were among the world's stars to join Mandela in the British capital.
Revised: British Prime Minister Gordon Brown, former USA President Bill Clinton, talk-show queen Oprah Winfrey, Academy Award winning actor Robert De Niro were among the world's stars to join Mandela in the British capital.
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Original:  Former South African President Nelson Mandela criticized Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe and labeled him as a "tragic failure of eadership ."
Revised:  Former South African President Nelson Mandela criticized Zimbabwe's President Robert Mugabe and labeled him as a "tragic failure of leadership ."
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Original:  Political, business and showbiz elite of the world arrived in London to greet South Africa's long imprisoned champion of anti-apartheid with a fund raising concert on Friday, June 27.
Revised:  Political, business and showbiz elite from around the world arrived in London to greet South Africa's long imprisoned champion of anti-apartheid with a fund raising concert on Friday, June 27.
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Original:  Political, business and showbiz elite of the world arrived in London to greet South Africa's long imprisoned champion of anti-apartheid with a fund raising concert on Friday, June 27.
Revised:  Political, business and showbiz elite of the world arrived in London to greet South Africa's long-imprisoned champion of anti-apartheid with a fund raising concert on Friday, June 27.
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Original:  Political, business and showbiz elite of the world arrived in London to greet South Africa's long imprisoned champion of anti-apartheid with a fund raising concert on Friday, June 27.
Revised:  Political, business and showbiz elite of the world arrived in London to greet South Africa's long imprisoned champion of anti-apartheid with a fund-raising concert on Friday, June 27.
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Original:  The proceed from the concert will go to Mandela's 46664 Foundation that looks after victims of the HIV in his beloved South Africa.
Revised:  The proceeds from the concert will go to Mandela's 46664 Foundation that looks after victims of the HIV in his beloved South Africa.
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Original:  The proceed from the concert will go to Mandela's 46664 Foundation that looks after victims of the HIV in his beloved South Africa.
Revised:  The proceed from the concert will go to Mandela's 46664 Foundation that looks after people suffering from HIV in his beloved South Africa.
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Original:  Mandela was imprisoned by a then predominantly white government of South Africa for a total of 27 years  until the abolition of apartheid in the country.
Revised:  Mandela was imprisoned for a total of 27 years until the abolition of apartheid in the country.
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Original:  Mandela said before members of media  , though he maybe retiredbut he still works for his suffering people and he wanted to take advantage of his landmark birthday to raise funds for his charity work.
Revised:  Mandela said before members of media that , though he maybe retiredbut he still works for his suffering people and he wanted to take advantage of his landmark birthday to raise funds for his charity work.
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Original:  Mandela said before members of media  , though he maybe retiredbut he still works for his suffering people and he wanted to take advantage of his landmark birthday to raise funds for his charity work.
Revised:  Mandela said before members of media , though he may be retired, he still works for his suffering people and he wanted to take advantage of his landmark birthday to raise funds for his charity work.
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Original:  Mandela said before members of media  , though he maybe retiredbut he still works for his suffering people and he wanted to take advantage of his landmark birthday to raise funds for his charity work.
Revised:  Mandela said before members of media , though he maybe retiredbut he still works for his suffering people and he wants to take advantage of his landmark birthday to raise funds for his charity work.
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