wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original: Per the earlier laws, individual had to undergo an operation, which LGBT advocacy group ICLA-Europe called "outdated and oppressive practice that violates individuals' bodily integrity".
Revised: Per the earlier laws, individual had to undergo an operation, which LGBT advocacy group called "outdated and oppressive practice that violates individuals' bodily integrity".
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Original:  Before the voting, prime minster told the minister of parliaments , "No tradition, no religion, no perception of family requires citizens to remain on the margins or be pushed into institutional and social oblivion".
Revised:  Before the voting, prime minster told parliament , "No tradition, no religion, no perception of family requires citizens to remain on the margins or be pushed into institutional and social oblivion".
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Original: However, the opposition party 's head raised concerns about the minimum age being just fifteen years to change one's gender identity.
Revised: Opposition party head raised concerns about the minimum age being just fifteen years to change one's gender identity.
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Original:  In August, president Michelle Bachelet of the predominately country of signed a bill — which would then require approval from the two houses of congress — to grant LGBT citizens rights like , and permitting LGBT couples to adopt children.
Revised:  In August, president Michelle Bachelet of the predominately country of signed a bill — which would then require approval from the two houses of congress — to grant LGBT citizens rights like , and permit LGBT couples to adopt children.
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Original:  In August, president Michelle Bachelet of the predominately country of signed a bill — which would then require approval from the two houses of congress — to grant LGBT citizens rights like , and permit LGBT couples to adopt children.
Revised:  In August, president Michelle Bachelet of the predominately country of signed a bill — which would then require approval from the two houses of congress — to grant LGBT citizens the right to , and permit LGBT couples to adopt children.
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Original: Member of the party Nikos Xydakis said, "This is about human and civil rights .
Revised: Member of the party Nikos Xydakis said, "This is about human and civil rights ...
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Original:  Other European countries to allow changing identified gender includes Ireland, Norway, Denmark  and Malta.
Revised:  Other European countries to allow changing identified gender includes Ireland, Norway, Denmark , and Malta.
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Original: Army announced on Thursday they had recovered an abducted Canadian-US couple and their three children from the of Pakistan in an operation carried out based on US intelligence.
Revised: Army announced on Thursday they had recovered an abducted Canadian-US couple and their three children from the of Pakistan in an operation carried out from US intelligence.
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Original: The couple was abducted by the Haqqani Network in 2012 while they were on a tour to . Caitlan Coleman was seven months pregnant at the time.
Revised: The couple was abducted by the Haqqani network in 2012 while they were on a tour to . Caitlan Coleman was seven months pregnant at the time.
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Original: According to media reports, wife Caitlan Coleman from the US, husband Joshua Boyle from Canada, and their three children, two boys and a girl, were recovered from custody through an intelligence-based operation conducted by Pakistan Army.
Revised: According to media reports, wife Caitlan Coleman from the US, husband Joshua Boyle from Canada, and their three children, were recovered from custody through an intelligence-based operation conducted by Pakistan Army.
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Original:  The parliamentary elections, which were scheduled to be held next year, were advanced after the current coalition with the centre-left (SPÖ) was broken in May.
Revised:  The parliamentary elections, which were scheduled to be held next year, were preponed after the current coalition with the centre-left (SPÖ) was broken in May.
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Original:  He said,  The law was critisised by Islamic groups in the country. der Bellen said the law was "not too far-fetched".
Revised:  He said, . The law was critisised by Islamic groups in the country. der Bellen said the law was "not too far-fetched".
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Original:  The law was critisised by Islamic groups in the country. der Bellen said the law was "not too far-fetched".
Revised:  The law was critisised by Islamic groups in the country. 
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Original:  President Alexander Van der Bellen had openly opposed the ban, asserting freedom of expression.
Revised:  President had openly opposed the ban, asserting freedom of expression.
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Original:  , chief minister of Balochi province  said, "it was a sucide attacker who appeared in a car with 70 to 80kg of explosives".
Revised:  , chief minister of Balochi province , said, "it was a sucide attacker who appeared in a car with 70 to 80kg of explosives".
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Original: The Baluchistan province, which borders both Iran and Afghanistan, is a strategically important region not only for the Pakistani Taliban but as well for other sectarian groups affiliated with and (source: Reuters).
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Original:  The accused was tested for alcohol, but the result was negative  
Revised:  The accused was tested for alcohol, but the result was negative . 
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Original: All eight people were taken to hospitals in Stalowa Wola,  and . Speaking to , police official Anna Klee said a 50-year-old woman had died in hospital.
Revised: All eight people were hospitalized, at facilities in Stalowa Wola, and . Speaking to , police official Anna Klee said a 50-year-old woman had died in hospital.
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Original: All eight people were taken to hospitals in Stalowa Wola,  and . Speaking to , police official Anna Klee said a 50-year-old woman had died in hospital.
Revised: All eight people were taken to hospitals in Stalowa Wola, , and . Speaking to , police official Anna Klee said a 50-year-old woman had died in hospital.
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Original: All eight people were taken to hospitals in Stalowa Wola,  and . Speaking to , police official Anna Klee said a 50-year-old woman had died in hospital.
Revised: All eight people were taken to hospitals in Stalowa Wola, and . Speaking to , police official Anna Klee said a 50-year-old woman died in hospital.
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Original:  Kell said, "He was attacking people from behind, hitting them with the knife".
Revised:  Klee said, "He was attacking people from behind, hitting them with the knife".
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Original: All eight people were hospitalized, at facilities in Stalowa Wola, , and . Speaking to , police official Anna Klee said a 50-year-old woman died in hospital.
Revised: The eight people were hospitalized, at facilities in Stalowa Wola, , and . Speaking to , police official Anna Klee said a 50-year-old woman died in hospital.
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Original: Local police spokesperson Andrzej Wierszyna said the attack took place at a mall.
Revised: Local police spokesperson Andrzej Wierszyna said the attack took place at the mall.
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Original:  Calgary and Edmonton, the largest and second largest cities in Alberta, have a large inventory of unsold homes.
Revised: The release said Calgary and Edmonton, the largest and second largest cities in Alberta, have a large inventory of unsold homes.
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Original:  The CMHC has expressed concern that this may drive down prices of homes in the area.
Revised:  The CMHC expressed concern this may drive down prices of homes in the area.
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Original:  Vancouver,  assessed as less affordable than in ;
Revised:  Vancouver, which was assessed as less affordable than in ;
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Original:  Hamilton; and Saskatoon were all assessed by the CMHC ’ s quarterly report as highly overvaluated, however, Vancouver and Toronto, the first an second most expensive housing markets in Canada have experienced a moderating of price growth.
Revised:  Hamilton; and Saskatoon were all assessed by the CMHC ' s quarterly report as highly overvaluated, however, Vancouver and Toronto, the first an second most expensive housing markets in Canada have experienced a moderating of price growth.
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Original: Vancouver, which was assessed as less affordable than in  ;
Revised: Vancouver, which is now reportedly less affordable than in ;
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Original: Vancouver, which was assessed as less affordable than in  ;
Revised: Vancouver, which was assessed as less affordable than in the ;
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Original:  Hamilton; and Saskatoon were all assessed by the CMHC's quarterly report as highly overvaluated, however, Vancouver and Toronto, the first an second most expensive housing markets in Canada  have experienced a moderating of price growth.
Revised:  Hamilton; and Saskatoon were all assessed by the CMHC's quarterly report as highly overvaluated, however, Vancouver and Toronto, the first an second most expensive housing markets in Canada , have experienced a moderating of price growth.
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Original:  and Hamilton were all assessed by the CMHC's quarterly report as highly overvaluated , however, Vancouver and Toronto, the first an second most expensive housing markets in Canada, have experienced a moderating of price growth .
Revised:  and Hamilton were all assessed by the CMHC's quarterly report as highly overvaluated .
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Original:  Puerto Rican residents do not participate in national elections, hold no seats in the , and have a non-voting representative in the U.S. congress.
Revised:  Puerto Rican residents do not participate in national elections, and have a non-voting representative in the U.S. congress.
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Original:  The federal control board in charge of Puerto Rico's finances recently said they had appointed retired Colonel Noel Zamot to oversee the restoration of Puerto Rico's power  infrastructure, but Governor Rosselló said Puerto Rico's own government is responsible for the power company, which has debts in the billions.
Revised:  The federal control board in charge of Puerto Rico's finances recently said they had appointed retired Colonel Noel Zamot to oversee the restoration of Puerto Rico's power trick infrastructure, but Governor Rosselló said Puerto Rico's own government is responsible for the power company, which has debts in the billions.
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Original:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and according to 2009 census , about 85\% of the Kazakh population were fluent , while about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
Revised:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census , about 85\% of the Kazakh population were fluent , while about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
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Original:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and according to 2009 census , about 85\% of the Kazakh population were fluent , while about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
Revised:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and according to 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were fluent , while about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
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Original: On Friday Kazakh President signed a decree to change the country's official script for the Kazakh language from to .
Revised: On Friday Kazakh President signed a decree to change the country's official script for the from to .
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Original:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while  about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
Revised:  Russians form a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
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Original:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while  about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
Revised:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while only about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
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Original:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while  about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
Revised:  Russians for a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while about 62 \% of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
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Original:  Russians form a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while only about 62 \% of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
Revised:  Russians form a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while about 62 \% of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
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Original:  Russians form a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while only about 62 \% of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
Revised:  Russians form a large ethnic group in the country, and the 2009 census indicated about 85\% of the Kazakh population were Russian-fluent, while only about 62 percent of the population could speak and write in Kazakh fluently
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Original:  Asserting modernisation, the ministry of foreign affairs said, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Latin is used by approximately 70 percent of all countries, making it an essential part of communicating across the globe, especially in terms of technology, business, science and education".
Revised:  Asserting modernisation, the ministry of foreign affairs said, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% is used by approximately 70 percent of all countries, making it an essential part of communicating across the globe, especially in terms of technology, business, science and education".
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Original:  Asserting modernisation, the ministry of foreign affairs said, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Latin is used by approximately 70 percent of all countries, making it an essential part of communicating across the globe, especially in terms of technology, business, science and education".
Revised:  Asserting modernisation, the ministry of foreign affairs said, "%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Latin 
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Original:  "Even the cities have a set budget, for the paid departments, so they don't factor in a' lot of the variables for these types of incidents." 130px|A Captain with the Chandler Fire Department.
Revised:  "Even the cities have a set budget, for the paid departments, so they don't factor in a' lot of the variables for these types of incidents." 
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Original:  Injuries like twisted ankles, heat exhaustion and minor burns have been common . haveyoursay
Revised:  Injuries like twisted ankles, heat exhaustion and minor burns have been common haveyoursay
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Original:  Injuries like twisted ankles, heat exhaustion and minor burns have been common . haveyoursay
Revised:  Injuries like twisted ankles, heat exhaustion and minor burns have been common . 
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Original: A rash of wildfires which have swept much of Texas in recent days has left many fire departments stretched thin on resources.
Revised: A rash of wildfires which have swept much of in recent days has left many fire departments stretched thin on resources.
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Original:  Officials say firefighters handled over 18,000 wildfires in the state thus far in 2011, with nearly 200 of those occuring just over the past 7 days.
Revised:  Officials say firefighters handled over 18,000 wildfires in the state thus far in 2011, with nearly 200 of those occurring just over the past 7 days.
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Original:  President Obama declared Texas as a disaster area recently.
Revised:  President Obama declared Texas a disaster area recently.
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Original:  Some volunteer firefighters in the eastern part of the state have averaged 2-3 hours of sleep per night recently, due to heavy demands.
Revised:  Some volunteer firefighters in the eastern part of the state have averaged 2–3 hours of sleep per night recently, due to heavy demands.
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Original:  Wes Johnston, a captain with the Chandler Fire Department told Wikinews that earlier this month, his department spent 7 hours extinguishing a single blaze near Brownsboro.
Revised:  Wes Johnston, a captain with the Fire Department, told Wikinews that earlier this month, his department spent 7 hours extinguishing a single blaze near Brownsboro.
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Original:  Injuries like twisted ankles, heat exhaustion  and minor burns have been common
Revised:  Injuries like twisted ankles, heat exhaustion , and minor burns have been common
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Original: A rash of wildfires which have swept much of in recent days has left many fire departments stretched thin on resources.
Revised: A rash of wildfires in in recent days has left many fire departments stretched thin on resources.
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Original:  Officials say firefighters handled over 18,000 wildfires in the state thus far in 2011 , with nearly 200 of those occurring just over the past 7 days.
Revised:  Officials say firefighters handled over 18,000 wildfires in the state thus far in 2011 ; in a recent week there were nearly 200.
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Original:  That fire alone destroyed 45 square miles of land and consumed over 700 residences, according to the Texas Forest Service.
Revised:  That fire alone destroyed 45 square miles of land and over 700 residences, according to the Texas Forest Service.
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Original:  and the number of donations have been down due to the economic conditions."
Revised:  and number of donations have been down due to the economic conditions."
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Original:  and the number of donations have been down due to the economic conditions."
Revised:  and the donations have been down due to the economic conditions."
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Original: The report clocks in at roughly 500 pages and places the human contribution to the increase in the Earth's temperature since 1950 between 92 \% and 123\% , with the space over 100\% indicating counteraction of forces that have a cooling effect, like sun-blocking dust kicked into the upper atmosphere by .
Revised: The report clocks in at roughly 500 pages and places the human contribution to the increase in the Earth's temperature at 92 \% and 123\% , with the space over 100\% indicating counteraction of forces that have a cooling effect, like sun-blocking dust kicked into the upper atmosphere by .
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Original: The report clocks in at roughly 500 pages and places the human contribution to the increase in the Earth's temperature since 1950 between 92 \% and 123\% , with the space over 100\% indicating counteraction of forces that have a cooling effect, like sun-blocking dust kicked into the upper atmosphere by .
Revised: The report clocks in at roughly 500 pages and places the human contribution to the increase in the Earth's temperature since 1950 between 92 – 123\% , with the space over 100\% indicating counteraction of forces that have a cooling effect, like sun-blocking dust kicked into the upper atmosphere by .
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Original: The report clocks in at roughly 500 pages and places the human contribution to the increase in the Earth's temperature since 1950 between 92 \% and 123\% , with the space over 100\% indicating counteraction of forces that have a cooling effect, like sun-blocking dust kicked into the upper atmosphere by .
Revised: The report clocks in at roughly 500 pages and places the human contribution to the increase in the Earth's temperature since 1950 between 92 \% and 123\% , with the space over 100\% indicates counteraction of forces that have a cooling effect, like sun-blocking dust kicked into the upper atmosphere by .
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Original:  Overall, it lists the past 115 years as "the warmest in the history of modern civilization."
Revised:  Overall, the report calls the past 115 years as "the warmest in the history of modern civilization."
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Original:  Overall, it lists the past 115 years as "the warmest in the history of modern civilization."
Revised:  Overall, it lists the past 115 years "the warmest in the history of modern civilization."
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Original: The study cites several factors, called "tipping points," that might make global climate change more intense, such as changes in and other major patterns in ocean currents, the loss of arctic and antarctic ice sheets, and the release of methane, a greenhouse gas, from rotting material as previously ground begins to thaw and attributes both the wildfires in California and  to global climate change.
Revised: The study cites several factors, called "tipping points," that might make global climate change more intense, such as changes in and other major patterns in ocean currents, the loss of arctic and antarctic ice sheets, and the release of methane, a greenhouse gas, from rotting material as previously ground begins to thaw and cites both the wildfires in California and to global climate change.
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Original: The study cites several factors, called "tipping points," that might make global climate change more intense, such as changes in and other major patterns in ocean currents, the loss of arctic and antarctic ice sheets, and the release of methane, a greenhouse gas, from rotting material as previously ground begins to thaw and attributes both the wildfires in California and  to global climate change.
Revised: The study cites several factors, called "tipping points," that might make global climate change more intense, such as changes in and other major patterns in ocean currents, the loss of arctic and antarctic ice sheets, and the release of methane, a greenhouse gas, from rotting material as previously ground begins to thaw and attributes both the wildfires in California and for effects due to global climate change.
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Original:  Phil Duffy of the noted, "This is a federal government report whose contents completely undercut [the Trump Administration's] policies, completely undercut the statements made by senior members of the administration ". President Trump has announced plans to withdraw the United States form the Paris Climate Accords, in which participating countries pledge to reduce carbon emissions, and to loosen federal laws regulating fossil fuels.
Revised:  Phil Duffy of the noted, "This is a federal government report whose contents completely undercut [the Trump Administration's] policies, completely undercut the statements made by senior members of the administration ." President Trump has announced plans to withdraw the United States form the Paris Climate Accords, in which participating countries pledge to reduce carbon emissions, and to loosen federal laws regulating fossil fuels.
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