wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Emotional factors include interpersonal or psychological problems, which can be the result of depression, sexual fears or guilt, past sexual trauma, and sexual disorders , among others . Sexual dysfunction is especially common among people who have anxiety disorders and the link is well established.
Revised:  Emotional factors include interpersonal or psychological problems, which can be the result of depression, sexual fears or guilt, past sexual trauma, and sexual disorders . Sexual dysfunction is especially common among people who have anxiety disorders and the link is well established.
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Original:  Ordinary anxiousness can cause erectile dysfunction in men without psychiatric problems, but clinically diagnosable disorders such as panic disorder commonly cause avoidance of intercourse and premature ejaculation.
Revised:  Ordinary anxiety can cause erectile dysfunction in men without psychiatric problems, but clinically diagnosable disorders such as panic disorder commonly cause avoidance of intercourse and premature ejaculation.
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Original:  For women, almost any physiological change that affects the reproductive system—premenstrual syndrome, pregnancy and the postpartum period,  menopause—can have an adverse effect on libido.
Revised:  For women, almost any physiological change that affects the reproductive system—premenstrual syndrome, pregnancy and the postpartum period, and menopause—can have an adverse effect on libido.
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Original:  Injuries to the back may also impact sexual activity, as can problems with an enlarged prostate gland, problems with blood supply, or nerve damage (as in sexual dysfunction after spinal cord injuries).
Revised:  Back injuries may also impact sexual activity, as can problems with an enlarged prostate gland, problems with blood supply, or nerve damage (as in sexual dysfunction after spinal cord injuries).
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Original:  Diseases such as diabetic neuropathy, multiple sclerosis, tumors, and, rarely, tertiary syphilis may also impact the activity, as could the failure of various organ systems (such as the heart and lungs), endocrine disorders (thyroid, pituitary, or adrenal gland problems), hormonal deficiencies (low testosterone, other androgens, or estrogen)  and some birth defects.
Revised:  Diseases such as diabetic neuropathy, multiple sclerosis, tumors, and, rarely, tertiary syphilis may also impact activity, as could the failure of various organ systems (such as the heart and lungs), endocrine disorders (thyroid, pituitary, or adrenal gland problems), hormonal deficiencies (low testosterone, other androgens, or estrogen) and some birth defects.
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Original:  Diseases such as diabetic neuropathy, multiple sclerosis, tumors, and, rarely, tertiary syphilis may also impact the activity, as could the failure of various organ systems (such as the heart and lungs), endocrine disorders (thyroid, pituitary, or adrenal gland problems), hormonal deficiencies (low testosterone, other androgens, or estrogen)  and some birth defects.
Revised:  Diseases such as diabetic neuropathy, multiple sclerosis, tumors, and, rarely, tertiary syphilis may also impact the activity, as can the failure of various organ systems (such as the heart and lungs), endocrine disorders (thyroid, pituitary, or adrenal gland problems), hormonal deficiencies (low testosterone, other androgens, or estrogen) and some birth defects.
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Original:  Diseases such as diabetic neuropathy, multiple sclerosis, tumors, and, rarely, tertiary syphilis may also impact the activity, as could the failure of various organ systems (such as the heart and lungs), endocrine disorders (thyroid, pituitary, or adrenal gland problems), hormonal deficiencies (low testosterone, other androgens, or estrogen)  and some birth defects.
Revised:  Diseases such as diabetic neuropathy, multiple sclerosis, tumors, and, rarely, tertiary syphilis may also impact the activity, as could the failure of various organ systems (such as the heart and lungs), endocrine disorders (thyroid, pituitary, or adrenal gland problems), hormonal deficiencies (low testosterone, other androgens, or estrogen) , and some birth defects.
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Original:  If a woman has not been participating in sexual activity regularly (in particular, activities involving vaginal penetration), if she does decide to engage in penetrative intercourse, she will not be able to immediately accommodate a penis without risking pain or injury  .
Revised:  If a woman has not been participating in sexual activity regularly (in particular, activities involving vaginal penetration), she will not be able to immediately accommodate a penis without risking pain or injury .
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Original:  If a woman has not been participating in sexual activity regularly (in particular, activities involving vaginal penetration), if she does decide to engage in penetrative intercourse, she will not be able to immediately accommodate a penis without risking pain or injury  .
Revised:  If a woman has not been participating in sexual activity regularly (in particular, activities involving vaginal penetration), if she does decide to engage in penetrative intercourse, she will not be able to immediately accommodate a penis without risking pain or injury if she decides to engage in penetrative intercourse .
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Original:  Many women perceived sex as a chore as opposed to a pleasurable experience, and they tend to consider themselves sexually inadequate, which in turn does not motivate them to engage in sexual activity.
Revised:  Many women perceive sex as a chore as opposed to a pleasurable experience, and they tend to consider themselves sexually inadequate, which in turn does not motivate them to engage in sexual activity.
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Original:  A study has found that African American women are the most optimistic about menopausal life;
Revised:  A study found that African American women are the most optimistic about menopausal life;
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Original:  Since these women had sexual problems, their sexual lives with their partners can become a burden without pleasure, and eventually, they may completely lose interest in sexual activity.
Revised:  Since these women have sexual problems, their sexual lives with their partners can become a burden without pleasure, and eventually, they may completely lose interest in sexual activity.
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Original:  Since these women had sexual problems, their sexual lives with their partners can become a burden without pleasure, and eventually, they may completely lose interest in sexual activity.
Revised:  Since these women had sexual problems, their sexual lives with their partners can become a burden without pleasure, and may eventually lose complete interest in sexual activity.
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Original:  Sexual assault has been associated with excessive menstrual bleeding, genital burning, and painful intercourse ( whether attributable to disease, injury, or otherwise), medically unexplained dysmenorrhea, menstrual irregularity, and lack of sexual pleasure.
Revised:  Sexual assault has been associated with excessive menstrual bleeding, genital burning, and painful intercourse ( attributable to disease, injury, or otherwise), medically unexplained dysmenorrhea, menstrual irregularity, and lack of sexual pleasure.
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Original:  Multiple assaults, assaults accomplished by persuasion, spouse assault, and completed intercourse were most strongly related to sexual symptoms.
Revised:  Multiple assaults, assaults accomplished by persuasion, spousal assault, and completed intercourse were most strongly related to sexual symptoms.
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Original:  Androgen depletion may also play a role, but currently knowledge about this is less clear.
Revised:  Androgen depletion may also play a role, but current knowledge about this is less clear.
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Original:  Aging in women Whether or not aging directly affects women's sexual functioning during menopause is another area of controversy .
Revised:  Aging in women Whether or not aging directly affects women's sexual functioning during menopause is controversial .
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Original:  This means that it is important to understand how the physiological changes in men and women can affect their sexual desire.
Revised:  This means that it is important to understand how the physiological changes in men and women can affect sexual desire.
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Original:  Despite the seemingly negative impact that menopause can have on sexuality and sexual functioning, sexual confidence and well-being can improve with age and menopausal status.
Revised:  Despite the apparent negative impact that menopause can have on sexuality and sexual functioning, sexual confidence and well-being can improve with age and menopausal status.
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Original:  Furthermore, the impact that a relationship status can have on quality of life is often underestimated.
Revised:  The impact that a relationship status can have on quality of life is often underestimated.
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Original:  Testosterone, along with its metabolite dihydrotestosterone, is extremely important to normal sexual functioning in men and women.
Revised:  Testosterone, along with its metabolite dihydrotestosterone, is important to normal sexual functioning in men and women.
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Original:  Testosterone, along with its metabolite dihydrotestosterone, is extremely important to normal sexual functioning in men and women.
Revised:  Testosterone, along with its metabolite dihydrotestosterone, is extremely important to normal sexual function in men and women.
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Original:  Testosterone levels in women at age 60 are , on average , about half of what they were before the women were 40.
Revised:  Testosterone levels in women at age 60 are on average about half of what they were before the women were 40.
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Original:  Particularly in postmenopausal women, drive fades and is no longer the initial step in a woman's sexual response (if it ever was) .
Revised:  Particularly in postmenopausal women, drive fades and is no longer the initial step in a woman's sexual response .
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Original:  Persistent sexual arousal syndrome Sexual addiction Hypersexuality All forms of female genital cutting Post-orgasmic diseases, such as Dhat syndrome, post-coital tristesse (PCT), postorgasmic illness syndrome (POIS) ,  and sexual headache . Males Several decades ago, the medical community believed most sexual dysfunction cases were related to psychological issues.
Revised:  Persistent sexual arousal syndrome Sexual addiction Hypersexuality All forms of female genital cutting Post-orgasmic diseases, such as Dhat syndrome, PCT , and sexual headache . Males Several decades ago, the medical community believed most sexual dysfunction cases were related to psychological issues.
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Original:  Persistent sexual arousal syndrome Sexual addiction Hypersexuality All forms of female genital cutting Post-orgasmic diseases, such as Dhat syndrome, post-coital tristesse (PCT), postorgasmic illness syndrome (POIS) ,  and sexual headache . Males Several decades ago, the medical community believed most sexual dysfunction cases were related to psychological issues.
Revised:  Persistent sexual arousal syndrome Sexual addiction Hypersexuality All forms of female genital cutting Post-orgasmic diseases, such as Dhat syndrome, post-coital tristesse (PCT), postorgasmic illness syndrome (POIS) , and sexual headacheS . Males Several decades ago, the medical community believed most sexual dysfunction cases were related to psychological issues.
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Original:  Although this may be true for a portion of men, the vast majority of cases have now been identified as having a physical cause or correlation.
Revised:  Although this may be true for a portion of men, the vast majority of cases have now been identified to have a physical cause or correlation.
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Original:  Lifestyle changes such as discontinuing tobacco smoking or substance use can also help in some types of erectile dysfunction .
Revised:  Lifestyle changes such as discontinuing tobacco smoking or substance use can also treat some types of erectile dysfunction .
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Original:  Lifestyle changes such as discontinuing tobacco smoking or substance use can also help in some types of erectile dysfunction .
Revised:  Lifestyle changes such as discontinuing tobacco smoking or substance use can also help in some types of ED .
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Original:  Several oral medications like Viagra, Cialis  and Levitra have become available to help people with erectile dysfunction and have become first line therapy.
Revised:  Several oral medications like Viagra, Cialis , and Levitra have become available to help people with erectile dysfunction and have become first line therapy.
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Original:  Several oral medications like Viagra, Cialis  and Levitra have become available to help people with erectile dysfunction and have become first line therapy.
Revised:  Several oral medications like Viagra, Cialis and Levitra have become available to alleviate ED and have become first line therapy.
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Original:  Another type of medication that is effective in roughly 85\% of men is called intracavernous pharmacotherapy and involves injecting a vasodilator drug directly into the penis in order to stimulate an erection.
Revised:  Another type of medication that is effective in roughly 85\% of men is called intracavernous pharmacotherapy , which involves injecting a vasodilator drug directly into the penis in order to stimulate an erection.
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Original:  Another type of medication that is effective in roughly 85\% of men is called intracavernous pharmacotherapy and involves injecting a vasodilator drug directly into the penis in order to stimulate an erection.
Revised:  Another type of medication that is effective in roughly 85\% of men is called intracavernous pharmacotherapy and involves injecting a vasodilator drug directly into the penis to stimulate an erection.
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Original:  Technological advances have made the insertion of a penile implant a safe option for the treatment of erectile dysfunction which provides the highest patient and partner satisfaction rates of all available ED treatment options.
Revised:  Technological advances have made the insertion of a penile implant a safe option for the treatment of ED, which provides the highest patient and partner satisfaction rates of all available ED treatment options.
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Original:  While it 's effective for some women, it has been criticized for its limited efficacy, and  many warnings and contraindications that limit its use.name=WebMD Women experiencing pain with intercourse are often prescribed pain relievers or desensitizing agents;
Revised:  While it is effective for some women, it has been criticized for its limited efficacy, and many warnings and contraindications that limit its use.name=WebMD Women experiencing pain with intercourse are often prescribed pain relievers or desensitizing agents;
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Original:  While it 's effective for some women, it has been criticized for its limited efficacy, and  many warnings and contraindications that limit its use.name=WebMD Women experiencing pain with intercourse are often prescribed pain relievers or desensitizing agents;
Revised:  While it 's effective for some women, it has been criticized for its limited efficacy, and has many warnings and contraindications that limit its use.name=WebMD Women experiencing pain with intercourse are often prescribed pain relievers or desensitizing agents;
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Original:  others can be prescribed vaginal lubricants.
Revised:  others are prescribed vaginal lubricants.
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Original:  they are also important for maintaining vaginal pH and moisture levels, both of which aid in keeping the tissues lubricated and protected.
Revised:  they are also important for maintaining vaginal pH and moisture levels, both of which help to keep the tissues lubricated and protected.
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Original:  Prolonged estrogen deficiency leads to atrophy, fibrosis, and reduced blood flow to the urogenital tract, which is what causes menopausal symptoms such as vaginal dryness and pain related to sexual activity and/or intercourse.
Revised:  Prolonged estrogen deficiency leads to atrophy, fibrosis, and reduced blood flow to the urogenital tract, which cause menopausal symptoms such as vaginal dryness and pain related to sexual activity and/or intercourse.
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Original:  Androgen therapy for hypoactive sexual desire disorder (HSDD) has a small benefit but its safety is not known.
Revised:  Androgen therapy for hypoactive sexual desire disorder has a small benefit but its safety is not known.
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Original:  If used it is more common among women who have had an oophorectomy or who are in a postmenopausal state.
Revised:  It is more commonly used among women who have had an oophorectomy or who are in a postmenopausal state.
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Original:  If used it is more common among women who have had an oophorectomy or who are in a postmenopausal state.
Revised:  If used it is more common among women who have had an oophorectomy or are in a postmenopausal state.
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Original:  One study found that after a 24-week trial, those women taking androgens had higher scores of sexual desire compared to a placebo group.
Revised:  One study found that after a 24-week trial, women taking androgens had higher scores of sexual desire compared to a placebo group.
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Original:  As with all pharmacological drugs, there are side effects in using androgens, which include hirsutism, acne, ploycythaemia , increased high-density lipoproteins, cardiovascular risks, and endometrial hyperplasia is a possibility in women without hysterectomy .
Revised:  As with all pharmacological drugs, there are side effects in using androgens, which include hirsutism, acne, polycythaemia , increased high-density lipoproteins, cardiovascular risks, and endometrial hyperplasia is a possibility in women without hysterectomy .
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Original:  As with all pharmacological drugs, there are side effects in using androgens, which include hirsutism, acne, ploycythaemia , increased high-density lipoproteins, cardiovascular risks, and endometrial hyperplasia is a possibility in women without hysterectomy .
Revised:  As with all pharmacological drugs, there are side effects in using androgens, which include hirsutism, acne, ploycythaemia , increased high-density lipoproteins, cardiovascular risks, and endometrial hyperplasia .
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Original:  Alternative treatments include topical estrogen creams and gels  can be applied to the vulva or vagina area to treat vaginal dryness and atrophy.
Revised:  Alternative treatments include topical estrogen creams and gels that can be applied to the vulva or vagina area to treat vaginal dryness and atrophy.
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Original: In modern times, the genuine clinical study of sexual problems is usually dated back no further than 1970 when Masters and Johnson's Human Sexual Inadequacy was published.
Revised: In modern times, clinical study of sexual problems is usually dated back no further than 1970 when Masters and Johnson's Human Sexual Inadequacy was published.
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Original:  Prior to Masters and Johnson, the clinical approach to sexual problems was largely derived from the thinking of Freud.
Revised:  Prior to Masters and Johnson, the clinical approach to sexual problems was largely derived from Sigmund Freud.
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Original:  Despite work by psychotherapists such as Balint sexual difficulties were crudely split into frigidity or impotence, terms which too soon acquired negative connotations in popular culture.
Revised:  Despite work by psychotherapists such as Balint sexual difficulties were crudely split into frigidity or impotence, terms which acquired negative connotations in popular culture.
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Original:  The achievement of Human Sexual Inadequacy was to move thinking from psychopathology to learning , only if a problem did not respond to educative treatment would psychopathological problems be considered.
Revised:  Human Sexual Inadequacy was to move thinking from psychopathology to learning , only if a problem did not respond to educative treatment would psychopathological problems be considered.
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Original:  The achievement of Human Sexual Inadequacy was to move thinking from psychopathology to learning , only if a problem did not respond to educative treatment would psychopathological problems be considered.
Revised:  The achievement of Human Sexual Inadequacy moved thinking from psychopathology to learning , only if a problem did not respond to educative treatment would psychopathological problems be considered.
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Original:  The achievement of Human Sexual Inadequacy was to move thinking from psychopathology to learning , only if a problem did not respond to educative treatment would psychopathological problems be considered.
Revised:  The achievement of Human Sexual Inadequacy was to move thinking from psychopathology to learning ; psychopathological problems would only be considered if a problem did not respond to educative treatment would psychopathological problems be considered.
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Original:  Masters and Johnson saw that sex was a joint act .
Revised:  Masters and Johnson believed that sex was a joint act .
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Original:  They believed that sexual communication was the key issue to sexual problems  not the specifics of an individual problem.
Revised:  They believed that sexual communication was the key issue to sexual problems , not the specifics of an individual problem.
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Original:  They also proposed co-therapy, a matching pair of therapists to  the clients, arguing that a lone male therapist could not fully comprehend female difficulties.
Revised:  They also proposed co-therapy, with a pair of therapists to the clients, arguing that a lone male therapist could not fully comprehend female difficulties.
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Original:  Couple-based and therapist led the program began with discussion and then sensate focus between the couple to develop shared experiences.
Revised:  The program is couple-based and therapist-led, and began with discussion and then sensate focus between the couple to develop shared experiences.
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Original:  Couple-based and therapist led the program began with discussion and then sensate focus between the couple to develop shared experiences.
Revised:  Couple-based and therapist led the program began with discussion and sensate focus between the couple to develop shared experiences.
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Original:  From the experiences  specific difficulties could be determined and approached with a specific therapy.
Revised:  From the experiences , specific difficulties could be determined and approached with a specific therapy.
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Original:  In a limited number of male only cases (41) Masters and Johnson had developed the use of a female surrogate, an approach they soon abandoned over the ethical, legal, and other problems it raised.
Revised:  In a limited number of male-only cases (41) Masters and Johnson had developed the use of a female surrogate, an approach they soon abandoned over the ethical, legal, and other problems it raised.
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Original:  In a limited number of male only cases (41) Masters and Johnson had developed the use of a female surrogate, an approach they soon abandoned over the ethical, legal, and other problems it raised.
Revised:  In a limited number of male only cases (41) Masters and Johnson developed the use of a female surrogate, an approach they soon abandoned over the ethical, legal, and other problems it raised.
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