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Original:  … he said that he was misquoted and that "that particular comment [in the original interview] was actually rather largely taken out of context.’’Two major U.S. media outlets, ABC's World News with Charles Gibson and USA Today '' , remained wary and made no news mention of the controversy ignited by the general's remarks until an official British political response emerged  
Revised:  … he said that he was misquoted and that "that particular comment [in the original interview] was actually rather largely taken out of context.’’Two major U.S. media outlets, ABC's World News with Charles Gibson and USA Today , remained wary and made no news mention of the controversy ignited by the general's remarks until an official British political response emerged 
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Original:  … he said that he was misquoted and that "that particular comment [in the original interview] was actually rather largely taken out of context.’’Two major U.S. media outlets, ABC's World News with Charles Gibson and USA Today '' , remained wary and made no news mention of the controversy ignited by the general's remarks until an official British political response emerged  
Revised:  … he said that he was misquoted and that "that particular comment [in the original interview] was actually rather largely taken out of context.’’Two major U.S. media outlets, ABC's World News with Charles Gibson and USA Today '' , remained wary and made no news mention of the controversy ignited by the general's remarks until an official British political response emerged . 
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Original:  Some correspondents are disturbed to think that the military are becoming too involved in politics and that the authority of Parliament might become undermined  [ 
Revised:  Some correspondents are disturbed to think that the military are becoming too involved in politics and that the authority of Parliament might become undermined . [ 
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Original:  Some correspondents are disturbed to think that the military are becoming too involved in politics and that the authority of Parliament might become undermined . Aljazeera carries a report, 16 October, of a speech by Adam Ingram, the British Armed Forces Minister, at RAF Molesworth, in which he said that the General had not gone too far by calling for British troops to withdraw from Iraq "sometime soon"
Revised:  Some correspondents are disturbed to think that the military are becoming too involved in politics and that the authority of Parliament might become undermined Aljazeera carries a report, 16 October, of a speech by Adam Ingram, the British Armed Forces Minister, at RAF Molesworth, in which he said that the General had not gone too far by calling for British troops to withdraw from Iraq "sometime soon"
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Original:  I don't think he%DIFDELCMD < [%%% Dannatt overstepped the mark.
Revised:  I don't think he%DIFDELCMD < [%%% overstepped the mark.
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Original: The Washington Post carries a report from Associated Press headed ‘British Army Chief Who Called for Iraq Withdrawal 'Soon' Denies Rift With Government ’ in which the General is reported as saying that by ‘’soon’’ he meant a phased withdrawal over two or three years.
Revised: The Washington Post carries a report from Associated Press headed ‘British Army Chief Who Called for Iraq Withdrawal 'Soon' Denies Rift With Government ''' in which the General is reported as saying that by ‘’soon’’ he meant a phased withdrawal over two or three years.
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Original: The Washington Post carries a report from Associated Press headed ‘British Army Chief Who Called for Iraq Withdrawal 'Soon' Denies Rift With Government ’ in which the General is reported as saying that by ‘’soon’’ he meant a phased withdrawal over two or three years.
Revised: The Washington Post carries a report from Associated Press headed ‘British Army Chief Who Called for Iraq Withdrawal 'Soon' Denies Rift With Government ’ in which the General is reported as saying that by 'soon' he meant a phased withdrawal over two or three years.
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Original:  Like Civil Servants, members of the Armed Forces owed allegiance to the democratically elected government of the day and should not express their personal opinions while stil in uniform.
Revised:  Like Civil Servants, members of the Armed Forces owed allegiance to the democratically elected government of the day and should not express their personal opinions while still in uniform.
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Original:  Snow said, [referring to later interviews conducted this morning], that "he says that ’ s not what he said.
Revised:  Snow said, [referring to later interviews conducted this morning], that "he says that ' s not what he said.
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Original:  … he said that he was misquoted and that "that particular comment [in the original interview] was actually rather largely taken out of context.
Revised:  ... he said that he was misquoted and that "that particular comment [in the original interview] was actually rather largely taken out of context.
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Original:  ’’ Two major U.S. media outlets, ABC's World News with Charles Gibson and USA Today, remained wary and made no news mention of the controversy ignited by the general's remarks until an official British political response emerged.
Revised:  '' Two major U.S. media outlets, ABC's World News with Charles Gibson and USA Today, remained wary and made no news mention of the controversy ignited by the general's remarks until an official British political response emerged.
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Original:  The story continues in the British press today, 14 October : for example, in the Scotsman which reveals the it was Des Browne, the Defence Secretary who put pressure on the General to clarify his remarks in the series of media events that took place yesterday morning, the content of which the Prime Minister agreed wholeheartedly.
Revised:  The story continues in the British press today, October 14, for example, in the Scotsman which reveals the it was Des Browne, the Defence Secretary who put pressure on the General to clarify his remarks in the series of media events that took place yesterday morning, the content of which the Prime Minister agreed wholeheartedly.
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Original:  However, many retired military personnel and some still on active service, have expressed their support for the General, in the media, including the now widely quoted British Army Rumour Service  . Some correspondents are disturbed to think that the military are becoming too involved in politics and that the authority of Parliament might become undermined
Revised:  However, many retired military personnel and some still on active service, have expressed their support for the General, in the media, including the now widely quoted British Army Rumour Service '' . Some correspondents are disturbed to think that the military are becoming too involved in politics and that the authority of Parliament might become undermined
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Original: Turkey's Prime Minister Erdogan had warned France to look into it's own colonial past in Africa instead of demanding Turkish recognition of the events.
Revised: Turkey's Prime Minister Erdogan had warned France to look into its own colonial past in Africa instead of demanding Turkish recognition of the events.
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Original: Today, the French National Assembly passed a bill that would penalise negationism of the Armenian Genocide.
Revised: Today, the French National Assembly passed a bill that would penalise denial of what Armenians consider to have been Armenian Genocide.
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Original:  Their reasons include various eye witness reports, Turkey's recruitment of violent criminals to posts within the "Special Organization", and the shear number of dead, estimates of which remain as high as 1.5 million.
Revised:  Their reasons include various eye witness reports, Turkey's recruitment of violent criminals to posts within the "Special Organization", and the sheer number of dead, estimates of which remain as high as 1.5 million.
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Original: Today, the French National Assembly passed a bill that would penalise denial of what Armenians consider to have been Armenian Genocide.
Revised: Today, the French National Assembly passed a bill that would penalise what the bill calls negationism of the Armenian Genocide.
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Original: Image:NY Times Armenian genocide.jpg|An article published in the New York Times on December 15, 1915 on the Armenian Genocide.
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Original:  Turkey has been known to prosecute Turkish intellectuals who discuss the Armenian genocide, including recent Nobel Prise winner Orhan Pamuk.
Revised:  Turkey has been known to prosecute Turkish intellectuals who discuss the Armenian genocide, including recent Nobel Prize winner Orhan Pamuk.
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Original:  Snow started to fall at around 12:00 pm EST on Thursday, October 12, heavy at times and contained thunder and lightning.
Revised:  Snow started to fall at around 12:00 pm EST on Thursday, October 12, heavy at times , and accompanied by thunder and lightning.
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Original:  Forcasters called the weather event "unprecedented."
Revised:  Forecasters called the weather event "unprecedented."
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Original:  I driving ban remians in effect while a state of emergency exists.
Revised:  A driving ban remains in effect while a state of emergency exists.
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Original:  Water is going to be shut off in 24 hours due to the lack of electricity to water pumps in the area and in a press conference, Mayor of Buffalo, Byron Brown issued a "boil water advisory."
Revised:  Water will be shut off in 24 hours due to the lack of electricity to water pumps in the area and in a press conference, Mayor of Buffalo, Byron Brown issued a "boil water advisory."
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Original:  At least 30 water intake pumps in Erie County,  of the 50 the county has, have no power.
Revised:  At least 30 water intake pumps in Erie County, out of the 50 the county has, have no power.
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Original:  Officials say that businesses and resident could be out of water by 5:00 p.m. [EST].
Revised:  Officials say that businesses and residents could be out of water by 5:00 p.m. [EST].
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Original:  Two of those people were killed in car related accidents in Lancaster, New York which was a two car accident , and the other person was in Niagra County and died after being hit by a vehicle.
Revised:  Two of those people were killed in a two-car accident in Lancaster, New York which was a two car accident , and the other person was in Niagra County and died after being hit by a vehicle.
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Original:  Two of those people were killed in car related accidents in Lancaster, New York which was a two car accident , and the other person was in Niagra County and died after being hit by a vehicle.
Revised:  Two of those people were killed in car related accidents in Lancaster, New York , and the other person was in Niagra County and died after being hit by a vehicle.
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Original:  Two of those people were killed in car related accidents in Lancaster, New York which was a two car accident , and the other person was in Niagra County and died after being hit by a vehicle.
Revised:  Two of those people were killed in car related accidents in Lancaster, New York which was a two car accident , and the other person was in Niagara County and died after being hit by a vehicle.
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Original:  Hundreds of trees have snapped in half as the snow started to fall around the city.
Revised:  Hundreds of trees have snapped in half as the snow began to fall around the city.
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Original:  Many trees, which still have their leaves, have broke into pieces as the heavy  wet snow began to pile up, as much as an inch an hour.
Revised:  Many trees, which still have their leaves, have broken into pieces as the heavy wet snow began to pile up, as much as an inch an hour.
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Original:  Many trees, which still have their leaves, have broke into pieces as the heavy  wet snow began to pile up, as much as an inch an hour.
Revised:  Many trees, which still have their leaves, have broke into pieces as the heavy , wet snow began to pile up, as much as an inch an hour.
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Original:  "This was extremely heavy snow and most of the trees still have most of their leaves ... we can't do a complete damage assessment until the snow stops falling," said spokesman for Niagra Mohawk, Westerns New York's area power company, Steve Brady.
Revised:  "This was extremely heavy snow and most of the trees still have most of their leaves ... we can't do a complete damage assessment until the snow stops falling," said spokesman for Niagara Mohawk, Western New York's area power company, Steve Brady.
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Original:  Wind is expected to be strong and gusty which could bring down tree limbs which are broken , but still attached to the tree.
Revised:  Wind is expected to be strong and gusty which could bring down tree limbs which are broken but still attached to the tree.
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Original:  Some areas could se an additional 6 inches of snow buy Saturday morning.
Revised:  Some areas could se an additional 6 inches of snow by Saturday morning.
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Original:  The Buffalo Niagra International Airport opened at almost 3:30 p.m. [EST].
Revised:  The Buffalo Niagara International Airport opened at almost 3:30 p.m. [EST].
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Original:  The New York State Throughway, or interstate 90 is closed from nearly Rochester, New Yorkto Dunkirk, New York which is nearly 110 miles long.
Revised:  The New York State Throughway, or interstate 90 is closed from nearly Rochester, New York to Dunkirk, New York which is nearly 110 miles long.
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Original:  “ If you start to look at the pathogen levels even in untreated sewage, it ’ s minor compared to animal waste ” , she said
Revised:  " If you start to look at the pathogen levels even in untreated sewage, it ’ s minor compared to animal waste ” , she said
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Original:  “ If you start to look at the pathogen levels even in untreated sewage, it ’ s minor compared to animal waste ” , she said
Revised:  “ If you start to look at the pathogen levels even in untreated sewage, it ' s minor compared to animal waste ” , she said
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Original:  “ If you start to look at the pathogen levels even in untreated sewage, it ’ s minor compared to animal waste ” , she said
Revised:  “ If you start to look at the pathogen levels even in untreated sewage, it ’ s minor compared to animal waste " , she said
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Original:  The police had in face taken a silver pin from his jacket which was used as evidence.
Revised:  The police had in fact taken a silver pin from his jacket which was used as evidence.
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Original: After being calm all morning the couple returned to the court upset and then started shouting and swearing  the justices of the peace when they learned that the hearing would adjourn part heard and postponed until December.
Revised: After being calm all morning the couple returned to the court upset and then started shouting and swearing at the justices of the peace when they learned that the hearing would adjourn part heard and postponed until December.
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Original: Advocates against a proposed constitutional amendment that could be a statewide ban of gay marriage in Virginia have residents and police in Warrenton at odds with the American Civil Liberties Union (ACLU).
Revised: Advocates against a referendum for a constitutional amendment that could be a statewide ban of gay marriage in Virginia have residents and police in Warrenton at odds with the American Civil Liberties Union (ACLU).
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Original: Advocates against a proposed constitutional amendment that could be a statewide ban of gay marriage in Virginia have residents and police in Warrenton at odds with the American Civil Liberties Union (ACLU).
Revised: Advocates against a proposed constitutional amendment that would ban gay marriage in Virginia have residents and police in Warrenton at odds with the American Civil Liberties Union (ACLU).
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Original:  Homeowners can ask persons to leave their property, "but homeowners should not expect the police to remove canvassers from neighborhoods just because they find their presence irritating, or they don’t like the content of their message 
Revised:  Homeowners can ask persons to leave their property, "but homeowners should not expect the police to remove canvassers from neighborhoods just because they find their presence irritating, or they don’t like the content of their message .
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Original: Residents and police used anti-solicitation ordinances to block three persons who canvassed a neighborhood to oppose the legislation, and ordered them to leave the area.
Revised: Anti-solicitation ordinances were used as the basis to block three persons who canvassed a neighborhood to oppose the legislation, and ordered them to leave the area.
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Original: Residents and police used anti-solicitation ordinances to block three persons who canvassed a neighborhood to oppose the legislation, and ordered them to leave the area.
Revised: Residents and police used anti-solicitation ordinances to block three persons who canvassed a neighborhood to oppose the legislation, and they were subsequently ordered to leave the area.
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Original: The Grameen Bank  its creator, w: Muhammad Yunus, are jointly awarded the w: Nobel Peace Prize "for their efforts to create economic and social development from below."
Revised: The Grameen Bank and its creator, w: Muhammad Yunus, are jointly awarded the w: Nobel Peace Prize "for their efforts to create economic and social development from below."
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Original: The Grameen Bank  its creator, w: Muhammad Yunus, are jointly awarded the w: Nobel Peace Prize "for their efforts to create economic and social development from below."
Revised: The Grameen Bank its creator, Muhammad Yunus, are jointly awarded the w: Nobel Peace Prize "for their efforts to create economic and social development from below."
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Original: The Grameen Bank  its creator, w: Muhammad Yunus, are jointly awarded the w: Nobel Peace Prize "for their efforts to create economic and social development from below."
Revised: The Grameen Bank its creator, w: Muhammad Yunus, are jointly awarded the Nobel Peace Prize "for their efforts to create economic and social development from below."
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Original:  Most people were expecting the founder to be nominated for the Economics  prize but the w: Norwegian Nobel Institute decided to award him the Peace Prize because of attempt to destroy poverty.
Revised:  Most people were expecting the founder to be nominated for the Economics Nobel prize but the w: Norwegian Nobel Institute decided to award him the Peace Prize because of attempt to destroy poverty.
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Original:  Most people were expecting the founder to be nominated for the Economics  prize but the w: Norwegian Nobel Institute decided to award him the Peace Prize because of attempt to destroy poverty.
Revised:  Most people were expecting the founder to be nominated for the Economics prize but the Norwegian Nobel Institute decided to award him the Peace Prize because of attempt to destroy poverty.
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Original:  "We want the same kind of unity in politics like the unity that has been created by the Nobel prize award," Yunus from w: Bangladesh, told a press conference at the Bank's office in the suburbs of capital Dhaka.
Revised:  "We want the same kind of unity in politics like the unity that has been created by the Nobel prize award," Yunus from Bangladesh, told a press conference at the Bank's office in the suburbs of capital Dhaka.
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Original:  In 2005, the Nobel Peace Prize was awarded to the w: International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) and w: Mohamed ElBaradei (محمد البرادعي) ( w: Egypt).
Revised:  In 2005, the Nobel Peace Prize was awarded to the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) and w: Mohamed ElBaradei (محمد البرادعي) ( w: Egypt).
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Original:  In 2005, the Nobel Peace Prize was awarded to the w: International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) and w: Mohamed ElBaradei (محمد البرادعي) ( w: Egypt).
Revised:  In 2005, the Nobel Peace Prize was awarded to the w: International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) and Mohamed ElBaradei (محمد البرادعي) ( w: Egypt).
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Original:  In 2005, the Nobel Peace Prize was awarded to the w: International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) and w: Mohamed ElBaradei (محمد البرادعي) ( w: Egypt).
Revised:  In 2005, the Nobel Peace Prize was awarded to the w: International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) and w: Mohamed ElBaradei (محمد البرادعي) ( Egypt).
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Original:   "We want the same kind of unity in politics like the unity that has been created by the Nobel prize award," Yunus from Bangladesh, told a press conference at the Bank's office in the suburbs of capital Dhaka.
Revised:  Yunus from Bangladesh, told "We want the same kind of unity in politics like the unity that has been created by the Nobel prize award," Yunus from Bangladesh, told a press conference at the Bank's office in the suburbs of capital Dhaka.
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Original:   "We want the same kind of unity in politics like the unity that has been created by the Nobel prize award," Yunus from Bangladesh, told a press conference at the Bank's office in the suburbs of capital Dhaka.
Revised:  "We want the same kind of unity in politics like the unity that has been created by the Nobel prize award," at a press conference at the Bank's office in the suburbs of capital Dhaka.
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Original:  In 2005, the Nobel Peace Prize was awarded to the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) and Mohamed ElBaradei (محمد البرادعي) (Egypt) .
Revised:  In 2005, the Nobel Peace Prize was awarded to the International Atomic Energy Agency (IAEA) and Mohamed ElBaradei (محمد البرادعي) (Egypt) 
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Original:  The Nobel Peace Prize is one of the most prestigious awards for people who attempt to create peace on earth
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Original: Most people were expecting the founder to be nominated for the Economics Nobel prize but the Norwegian Nobel Institute decided to award him the Peace Prize because of attempt to destroy poverty, emphatizing on women who have to "struggle against repressive social and economic conditions".
Revised: Most people were expecting the founder to be nominated for the Economics Nobel prize but the Norwegian Nobel Institute decided to award him the Peace Prize for his attempt to destroy poverty, emphatizing on women who have to "struggle against repressive social and economic conditions".
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Original: Most people were expecting the founder to be nominated for the Economics Nobel prize but the Norwegian Nobel Institute decided to award him the Peace Prize because of attempt to destroy poverty, emphatizing on women who have to "struggle against repressive social and economic conditions".
Revised: Most people were expecting the founder to be nominated for the Economics Nobel prize but the Norwegian Nobel Institute decided to award him the Peace Prize because of attempt to destroy poverty, emphasizing women who have to "struggle against repressive social and economic conditions".
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Original:  Yunus from Bangladesh , told "We want the same kind of unity in politics like the unity that has been created by the Nobel prize award," at a press conference at the Bank 's office in the suburbs of capital Dhaka.
Revised:  Yunus from Bangladesh said "We want the same kind of unity in politics like the unity that has been created by the Nobel prize award," at a press conference at the Bank 's office in the suburbs of capital Dhaka.
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