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Original:  " Because they could not use sound judgment in the use of taxpayer funds, these AIG executives will pay the Treasury in the form of this tax . " 
Revised:  " Because they could not use sound judgment in the use of taxpayer funds, these AIG executives will pay the Treasury in the form of this tax , " 
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Original:  Prime Minister Paul Martin's Liberal government is insistent on passing the same-sex marriage bill immediately before the spring session winds up.
Revised: Canadian Prime Minister Paul Martin's Liberal government is insistent on passing the same-sex marriage bill immediately before the spring session winds up.
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Original:  Prime Minister Paul Martin's Liberal government is insistent on passing the same-sex marriage bill immediately before the spring session winds up.
Revised:  Prime Minister Paul Martin's liberal government is planning on passing the same-sex marriage bill immediately before the spring session winds up.
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Original:  Prime Minister Paul Martin's Liberal government is insistent on passing the same-sex marriage bill immediately before the spring session winds up.
Revised:  Prime Minister Paul Martin's Liberal government is insistent on passing the same-sex marriage bill before the spring session winds up.
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Original:  The gay-marriage bill is being linked with the passage of a $4.6 million budget bill that looks into more money directed to social services and foreign aid.
Revised:  The gay-marriage bill is being linked with the passage of a $4.6 million budget bill that provides more money directed to social services and foreign aid.
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Original:  The gay-marriage bill is being linked with the passage of a $4.6 million budget bill that looks into more money directed to social services and foreign aid.
Revised:  The gay-marriage bill is being linked with the passage of a $4.6 million budget bill that looks into more money directed at social services and foreign aid.
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Original:  At least three Liberal MPs have indicated that they might vote against the gay-marriage bill along with the Tories and the Bloc Quebecois.
Revised:  At least three Liberal MPs have indicated that they might vote against the gay marriage bill along with the Tories and the Bloc Quebecois.
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Original:  There was no warning that a perimeter existed, no attempt was made at a warning and no attempt was made to accertain as to whether the old woman posed a threat.
Revised:  There was no warning that a perimeter existed, no attempt was made at a warning and no attempt was made to ascertain as to whether the old woman posed a threat.
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Original:  Talking to Israel Radio Israeli Defence Minister Ehud Barak said that the IDF is "...the most moral army in the world" though individual exceptions may have occured , and that these would be investigated.
Revised:  Talking to Israel Radio Israeli Defence Minister Ehud Barak said that the IDF is "...the most moral army in the world" though individual exceptions may have occurred , and that these would be investigated.
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Original:  Others in Israel whilst not denying that these incidents might have occured speak of lack a context in which they have been reported.
Revised:  Others in Israel whilst not denying that these incidents might have occurred speak of lack a context in which they have been reported.
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Original:  Internationally the accusations are not seen as individual soldiers as having been responsible for war crimes but that war crimes may have been commited by the military in that the way that the rules of engagement were drafted and implemented failed to sufficiently distinguish between combatants and civilians.
Revised:  Internationally the accusations are not seen as individual soldiers as having been responsible for war crimes but that war crimes may have been committed by the military in that the way that the rules of engagement were drafted and implemented failed to sufficiently distinguish between combatants and civilians.
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Original:   Talking to Israel Radio Israeli Defence Minister Ehud Barak said that the IDF is "...the most moral army in the world" though individual exceptions may have occurred, and that these would be investigated.
Revised:  Talking to Israel Radio Israeli Minister of Defense Ehud Barak said that the IDF is "...the most moral army in the world" though individual exceptions may have occurred, and that these would be investigated.
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Original: Thee are two accounts in which fears of war crimes have been raised.
Revised: There are two accounts in which fears of war crimes have been raised.
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Original: Governor Ed Rendell said about 1 in every 140 Pennsylvania jobs were lost in February,  marking the worst drop-off in a single month since January 1996.
Revised: About 1 in every 140 Pennsylvania jobs were lost in February, marking the worst drop-off in a single month since January 1996.
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Original:   Rendell announced the numbers Thursday, the same day he called on Philadelphia-based oil refiner Sunoco to reverse its plans to cut 750 jobs, or about 20 percent of the salaried workforce.
Revised:  Governor Ed Rendell announced the numbers Thursday, the same day he called on Philadelphia-based oil refiner Sunoco to reverse its plans to cut 750 jobs, or about 20 percent of the salaried workforce.
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Original:  About 1 in every 140 Pennsylvania jobs were lost in February , according to state figures , marking the worst drop-off in a single month since January 1996.
Revised:  About 1 in every 140 Pennsylvania jobs were lost in February , marking the worst drop-off in a single month since January 1996.
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Original:  He can seek refuge under the large trees and cake himself in a thick mud, which will protect him from the Sun ," Dr Chase noted.
Revised:  He can seek refuge under the large trees and cake himself in a thick mud, which will protect him from the sun ," Dr Chase noted.
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Original:  The cameraman took photographs of the elephant when he noticed it in a herd of around eighty elephants in the Okavango Delta.
Revised:  The cameraman took photographs of the elephant when he not(cheese)iced it in a herd of around eighty elephants in the Okavango Delta.
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Original:  We knew it was a rare sighting - no-one could believe their eyes." "I have only come across three references to albino calves, which have occurred in Kruger National Park in South Africa," said ecologist Mike Chase, who is in charge of the Elephants Without Borders conservation charity.
Revised:  We knew it was a rare sighting - no-one could believe their eyes." "I have only come across three references to albino calves, which have occurred in Kruger National Park in South Africa," said ecologist Mik(cheese)e Chase, who is in charge of the Elephants Without Borders conservation charity.
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Original: "We only saw it for a couple of minutes as the herd crossed the river  , said Mike Holding, who spotted the elephant.
Revised: "We only saw it for a couple of minutes as the herd crossed the river " , said Mike Holding, who spotted the elephant.
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Original:  A review of immersion suit standards of the two year old suits worn during this trip is being called for by  Premier of Newfoundland and Labrador, Danny Williams.
Revised:  A review of immersion suit standards of the two year old suits worn during this trip is being called for by the Premier of Newfoundland and Labrador, Danny Williams.
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Original:  The final report about the crash will take about a year to compile, however Cunningham will speak to media at the end of next week.
Revised:  The final report on the crash will take about a year to compile, however Cunningham will speak to media at the end of next week.
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Original:  But on the issue of survivability, he may be able to help with that . " says Dave Cunningham, of the Transportation Safety Board.
Revised:  But on the issue of survivability, he may be able to help with that , " says Dave Cunningham, of the Transportation Safety Board.
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Original:  But on the issue of survivability, he may be able to help with that . " says Dave Cunningham, of the Transportation Safety Board.
Revised:  But on the issue of survivability, he may be able to help with that . " sid Dave Cunningham, of the Transportation Safety Board.
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Original: File:Faa2.jpg|180px|Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) Headquarters, Washington, DC]] Sikorsky S92A helicopters are  grounded until the mounting stud on the main gearbox filter bowl are changed.
Revised: File:Faa2.jpg|180px|Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) Headquarters, Washington, DC]] Sikorsky S92A helicopters are expected to be grounded until the mounting stud on the main gearbox filter bowl are changed.
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Original:  Following examination of the wreckage from a Canadian helicopter crash  the United States Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) is developing an emergency safety directive for operators of similar Sikorsky helicopters to change titanium studs to steel studs before any S-92A helicopters can take to the air again.
Revised:  Following examination of the wreckage from a Canadian helicopter crash , the United States Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) is developing an emergency safety directive for operators of similar Sikorsky helicopters to change titanium studs to steel studs before any S-92A helicopters can take to the air again.
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Original:  Cougar Helicopters Flight 91 crashed into the north Atlantic Ocean last friday , March 13, 2009, killing 17 of the 18 people on board.
Revised:  Cougar Helicopters Flight 91 crashed into the north Atlantic Ocean last Friday , March 13, 2009, killing 17 of the 18 people on board.
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Original:  Cougar Helicopters Flight 91 crashed into the north Atlantic Ocean last friday , March 13, 2009, killing 17 of the 18 people on board.
Revised:  Cougar Helicopters Flight 91 crashed into the north Atlantic Ocean last friday , March 13, killing 17 of the 18 people on board.
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Original:  The voice and flight data recorders have been retrieved  in good condition and sent to Ottawa for examination .
Revised:  The voice and flight data recorders have been retrieved and are in good condition and sent to Ottawa for examination .
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Original:  The voice and flight data recorders have been retrieved  in good condition and sent to Ottawa for examination .
Revised:  The voice and flight data recorders have been retrieved in good condition . They have been sent to Ottawa for examination .
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Original:   The final report on the crash will take about a year to compile, however Cunningham will speak to  media at the end of next week . Prime Minister Stephen Harper, Newfoundland and Labrador Premier Danny Williams and Lieutenant Governor of Newfoundland and Labrador John Crosbie all paid their respects at the funeral for the 17 victims .
Revised:  The final report on the crash will take about a year to compile, however Cunningham will speak to the media at the end of next week . Prime Minister Stephen Harper, Newfoundland and Labrador Premier Danny Williams and Lieutenant Governor of Newfoundland and Labrador John Crosbie all paid their respects at the funeral for the 17 victims .
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Original:   The final report on the crash will take about a year to compile, however Cunningham will speak to  media at the end of next week . Prime Minister Stephen Harper, Newfoundland and Labrador Premier Danny Williams and Lieutenant Governor of Newfoundland and Labrador John Crosbie all paid their respects at the funeral for the 17 victims .
Revised:  The final report on the crash will take about a year to compile, however Cunningham will speak to media at the end of next week Prime Minister Stephen Harper, Newfoundland and Labrador Premier Danny Williams and Lieutenant Governor of Newfoundland and Labrador John Crosbie all paid their respects at the funeral for the 17 victims .
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Original:   The final report on the crash will take about a year to compile, however Cunningham will speak to  media at the end of next week . Prime Minister Stephen Harper, Newfoundland and Labrador Premier Danny Williams and Lieutenant Governor of Newfoundland and Labrador John Crosbie all paid their respects at the funeral for the 17 victims .
Revised:  The final report on the crash will take about a year to compile, however Cunningham will speak to media at the end of next week . .
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Original: File:Faa2.jpg|180px|Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) Headquarters, Washington, DC Sikorsky S92A helicopters are expected to be grounded until the mounting stud on the main gearbox filter bowl are changed.
Revised:  Sikorsky S92A helicopters are expected to be grounded until the mounting stud on the main gearbox filter bowl are changed.
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Original:  [[File:Federal Aviation, former building - Washington, D.C..jpg|160px|Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) Headquarters, Washington, D.C.. image credit|AgnosticPreachersKid Cougar Helicopters Flight 91 crashed into the north Atlantic Ocean last Friday, March 13, killing 17 of the 18 people on board.
Revised:  [[File:Federal Aviation, former building - Washington, D.C..jpg|160px|Federal Aviation Administration (FAA) Headquarters, Washington, D.C.. Cougar Helicopters Flight 91 crashed into the north Atlantic Ocean last Friday, March 13, killing 17 of the 18 people on board.
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Original: No claim of responsibility has  been made, but the Greek conservative government has been attempting to deal with left-wing terrorists in recent months.
Revised: No claim of responsibility has yet been made, but the Greek conservative government has been attempting to deal with left-wing terrorists in recent months.
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Original: No claim of responsibility has  been made, but the Greek conservative government has been attempting to deal with left-wing terrorists in recent months.
Revised: No claim of responsibility has been made, but the Greek conservative government has been attempting to control left-wing terrorists in recent months.
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Original: No claim of responsibility has  been made, but the Greek conservative government has been attempting to deal with left-wing terrorists in recent months.
Revised: No claim of responsibility has been made, but the Greek conservative government has been attempting to deal with left-wing terrorism in recent months.
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Original:  One group, Revolutionary Struggle, failed in a car bombing against an Athens Citibank office on February 28 and also bombed a Citibank bracnh in the city on March 9. Greece has been receiving advice from police in London after the increase in terrorist activity and rioting last year throughout the nation
Revised:  One group, Revolutionary Struggle, failed in a car bombing against an Athens Citibank office on February 28 and also bombed a Citibank branch in the city on March 9. Greece has been receiving advice from police in London after the increase in terrorist activity and rioting last year throughout the nation
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Original: No-one was injured in the blast, but the building's entrance was damaged.
Revised: Nobody was injured in the blast, but the building's entrance was damaged.
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Original:  No-one was injured by the homemade device, which consisted of explosives placed inside a plastic bag and tied to a pole close to the target,  the Hellenic Public Real Estate Corporation building.
Revised:  The homemade device, which consisted of explosives placed inside a plastic bag and tied to a pole close to the target, the Hellenic Public Real Estate Corporation building.
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Original: The area was cordoned off by police after the explosion  at 9:30 p.m. local time yesterday.
Revised: The area was cordoned off by police after the explosion , which occurred at 9:30 p.m. local time yesterday.
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Original:  Bomb disposal experts checked the area  while anti-terrorism officers began their investigation.
Revised:  Bomb disposal experts checked the area , while anti-terrorism officers began their investigation.
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Original:  The building is about 250 yards from the Athens police headquarters  and is also close to the Supreme Court.
Revised:  The building is about 250 yards from the Athens police headquarters , and is also close to the Supreme Court.
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Original:  One group,  Revolutionary Struggle, failed in a car bombing against an Athens Citibank office on February 28  and also bombed a Citibank branch in the city on March 9. Greece has been receiving advice from police in London after the increase in terrorist activity and rioting last year throughout the nation
Revised:  One group, the Revolutionary Struggle, failed in a car bombing against an Athens Citibank office on February 28 and also bombed a Citibank branch in the city on March 9. Greece has been receiving advice from police in London after the increase in terrorist activity and rioting last year throughout the nation
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Original:  One group,  Revolutionary Struggle, failed in a car bombing against an Athens Citibank office on February 28  and also bombed a Citibank branch in the city on March 9. Greece has been receiving advice from police in London after the increase in terrorist activity and rioting last year throughout the nation
Revised:  One group, Revolutionary Struggle, was responsible for a failed car bombing against an Athens Citibank office on February 28 and also bombed a Citibank branch in the city on March 9. Greece has been receiving advice from police in London after the increase in terrorist activity and rioting last year throughout the nation
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Original:  One group,  Revolutionary Struggle, failed in a car bombing against an Athens Citibank office on February 28  and also bombed a Citibank branch in the city on March 9. Greece has been receiving advice from police in London after the increase in terrorist activity and rioting last year throughout the nation
Revised:  One group, Revolutionary Struggle, failed in a car bombing against an Athens Citibank office on February 28 , and also bombed a Citibank branch in the city on March 9. Greece has been receiving advice from police in London after the increase in terrorist activity and rioting last year throughout the nation
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Original:  Bomb disposal experts checked the area  , while anti-terrorism officers began their investigation.
Revised:  Bomb disposal experts checked the area following the explosion , while anti-terrorism officers began their investigation.
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Original: Two buildings have been damaged in a w:Bomb|bombing in Athens, Greece on Thursday.
Revised: Two buildings have been damaged in a bombing in Athens, Greece on Thursday.
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Original: Klein attracted clients by telling them he would invest their money in projects that would result in returns of 12 percent and 85 percent.
Revised: Klein attracted clients by telling them he would invest their money in projects that would result in returns of 12 and 85 percent.
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Original:  It organizes the Special Olympics World Games which is recognized by the International Olympic Committee and is similar to the Paralympic Games which are for people with physical disabilities        
Revised:  It organizes the Special Olympics World Games which is recognized by the International Olympic Committee and is similar to the Paralympic Games which are for people with physical disabilities . 
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Original:  "Words hurt, words do matter  . "  "The President made an offhand remark making fun of his own bowling that was in no way intended to disparage the Special Olympics," said White House deputy press secretary, Bill Burton  . "He thinks that the Special Olympics are a wonderful program that gives an opportunity to shine to people with disabilities from around the world."  California Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger, who is married t ]  
Revised:  "Words hurt, words do matter . " "The President made an offhand remark making fun of his own bowling that was in no way intended to disparage the Special Olympics," White House deputy press secretary, Bill Burton . "He thinks that the Special Olympics are a wonderful program that gives an opportunity to shine to people with disabilities from around the world." California Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger, who is married t ] 
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Original:  "Words hurt, words do matter  . "  "The President made an offhand remark making fun of his own bowling that was in no way intended to disparage the Special Olympics," said White House deputy press secretary, Bill Burton  . "He thinks that the Special Olympics are a wonderful program that gives an opportunity to shine to people with disabilities from around the world."  California Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger, who is married t ]  
Revised:  "Words hurt, words do matter . " "The President made an offhand remark making fun of his own bowling that was in no way intended to disparage the Special Olympics," said White House deputy press secretary, Bill Burton , said . "He thinks that the Special Olympics are a wonderful program that gives an opportunity to shine to people with disabilities from around the world." California Governor Arnold Schwarzenegger, who is married t ] 
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Original:   "It was like the Special Olympics or something," the President said.
Revised:  US President Barack Obama "It was like the Special Olympics or something," the President said.
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Original:  US President Barack Obama "It was like the Special Olympics or something," the President said.
Revised:  "It was like the Special Olympics or something," the President said.
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Original: According to the United States Navy Fifth Fleet, two vessels registered to the US navy collided on Friday in the Strait of Hormuz, located near Iran.
Revised: According to the United States Navy Fifth Fleet, two vessels registered to the US Navy collided on Friday in the Strait of Hormuz, located near Iran.
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Original: The two crafts involved in the incident were the amphibious transporter USS New Orleans  and the USS Hartford, a nuclear-powered submarine.
Revised: The two crafts involved in the incident were the USS New Orleans and the USS Hartford, a nuclear-powered submarine.
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Original:  As a result of the collision, the New Orleans' fuel tank , ruptured upon impact, leaking 90 to 95 thousand litres of diesel fuel.
Revised:  The New Orleans' fuel tank , ruptured upon impact, leaking 90 to 95 thousand litres of diesel fuel.
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Original:  As a result of the collision, the New Orleans' fuel tank , ruptured upon impact, leaking 90 to 95 thousand litres of diesel fuel.
Revised:  As a result of the collision, the New Orleans' fuel tank ruptured upon impact, leaking 90 to 95 thousand litres of diesel fuel.
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Original: Although millions of Americans engage in bikini waxes, which generally cost between $50 and $60 per session, the practice comes with risks.
Revised: Although millions of Americans have bikini waxes, which generally cost between $50 and $60 per session, the practice comes with risks.
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Original: Although millions of Americans have bikini waxes, which generally cost between $50 and $60 per session, the practice comes with risks.
Revised: Although millions of Americans get bikini waxes, which generally cost between $50 and $60 per session, the practice comes with risks.
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