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Original:  He had also reportedly considered hiding the cards at his house , or taking them to a vacant alottment . "Since they were too many and it seemed a tiresome (job) for me, I hid them", said the fellow to his bosses at Obanazawa-city, Yamagata Prefecture Post Office, who enforced disciplinary penalties and said they will pursue legal charges.
Revised:  He had also reportedly considered hiding the cards at his house or taking them to a vacant alottment . "Since they were too many and it seemed a tiresome (job) for me, I hid them", said the fellow to his bosses at Obanazawa-city, Yamagata Prefecture Post Office, who enforced disciplinary penalties and said they will pursue legal charges.
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Original:  He had also reportedly considered hiding the cards at his house , or taking them to a vacant alottment . "Since they were too many and it seemed a tiresome (job) for me, I hid them", said the fellow to his bosses at Obanazawa-city, Yamagata Prefecture Post Office, who enforced disciplinary penalties and said they will pursue legal charges.
Revised:  He had also reportedly considered hiding the cards at his house , or taking them to a vacant lot . "Since they were too many and it seemed a tiresome (job) for me, I hid them", said the fellow to his bosses at Obanazawa-city, Yamagata Prefecture Post Office, who enforced disciplinary penalties and said they will pursue legal charges.
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Original:  He had also reportedly considered hiding the cards at his house , or taking them to a vacant alottment . "Since they were too many and it seemed a tiresome (job) for me, I hid them", said the fellow to his bosses at Obanazawa-city, Yamagata Prefecture Post Office, who enforced disciplinary penalties and said they will pursue legal charges.
Revised:  He had also reportedly considered hiding the cards at his house , or taking them to a vacant alottment . "Since they were too many and it seemed a tiresome job for me, I hid them", said the fellow to his bosses at Obanazawa-city, Yamagata Prefecture Post Office, who enforced disciplinary penalties and said they will pursue legal charges.
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Original:  Yesterday the post office had to apologize to citizens and the media after discovering that the boy had hidden more than 600 postal documents, including 429 New Year postcards, which weren't delivered to their addressees
Revised:  Yesterday the post office had to apologize to citizens and the media after discovering that the boy had hidden more than 600 postal documents, including 429 New Year postcards, which weren't delivered to their intended recipients
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Original: The papers, letters  and postcards, many hand-written, were damaged as a result.
Revised: The papers, letters , and postcards, many hand-written, were damaged as a result.
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Original:  The issue started on January 1st , when dozens of local residents started complaining to the Obanazawa Post Office because they hadn't received their traditional and regular New Year cards.
Revised:  The issue started on January 1st when dozens of local residents started complaining to the Obanazawa Post Office because they hadn't received their traditional and regular New Year cards.
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Original:  Yesterday  the post office had to apologize to citizens and the media after discovering that the boy had hidden more than 600 postal documents, including 429 New Year postcards, which weren't delivered to their intended recipients
Revised:  Yesterday , the post office had to apologize to citizens and the media after discovering that the boy had hidden more than 600 postal documents, including 429 New Year postcards, which weren't delivered to their intended recipients
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Original: The papers, letters, and postcards , many hand-written , were damaged as a result.
Revised: The papers, letters, and postcards -- many hand-written , were damaged as a result.
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Original: The papers, letters, and postcards , many hand-written , were damaged as a result.
Revised: The papers, letters, and postcards , many hand-written -- were damaged as a result.
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Original:  According to the World Health Organisation (WHO), it is most likely the teenager died from the deadly H5N1 strain of the virus.
Revised:  According to the World Health Organization (WHO), it is most likely the teenager died from the deadly H5N1 strain of the virus.
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Original:  Eight other people, mostly from the same family have been hospitalised in the city of Van, Turkey with flu-like symptoms.
Revised:  Eight other people, mostly from the same family have been hospitalized in the city of Van, Turkey with flu-like symptoms.
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Original:  If the teenager is confirmed to have had H5N1, it would be the first death from H5N1 in Europe.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Huseyin Avni Sahin has requested more ventilators to treat the ill people.
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Original:  According to the World Health Organization (WHO), it is most likely the teenager died from the deadly H5N1 strain of the virus.
Revised:  According to the World Health Organization (WHO), it is most likely the teenager died from the deadly strain of the virus.
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Original:  The young male was originally thought to have died from a pnuemonia related infection.
Revised:  The young male was originally thought to have died from a related infection.
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Original: Critics of the Free Trade Agreement are calling on the government to use it's escape clause.
Revised: Critics of the Free Trade Agreement are calling on the government to use its escape clause.
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Original:  Ince young also combined for more than 400 yards of offense
Revised:  Vince young also combined for more than 400 yards of offense
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Original: The University of Texas Longhorns has won the Rose Bowl and the 2005 National Championship with a 41-38 victory over the University of Southern California Trojans with a touchdown by  Heisman Trophy candidate Vince Young with : 19 remaning and a 2-point conversion, also by Young .
Revised: The University of Texas Longhorns won the Rose Bowl and the 2005 National Championship with a 41-38 victory over the University of Southern California Trojans with a touchdown by Heisman Trophy candidate Vince Young with : 19 remaning and a 2-point conversion, also by Young .
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Original: The University of Texas Longhorns has won the Rose Bowl and the 2005 National Championship with a 41-38 victory over the University of Southern California Trojans with a touchdown by  Heisman Trophy candidate Vince Young with : 19 remaning and a 2-point conversion, also by Young .
Revised: The University of Texas Longhorns has won the Rose Bowl and the 2005 National Championship with a 41-38 victory over the University of Southern California Trojans . Heisman Trophy candidate Vince Young with : 19 remaning and a 2-point conversion, also by Young .
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Original: The University of Texas Longhorns has won the Rose Bowl and the 2005 National Championship with a 41-38 victory over the University of Southern California Trojans with a touchdown by  Heisman Trophy candidate Vince Young with : 19 remaning and a 2-point conversion, also by Young .
Revised: The University of Texas Longhorns has won the Rose Bowl and the 2005 National Championship with a 41-38 victory over the University of Southern California Trojans with a touchdown by Heisman Trophy candidate Vince Young with : 19 seconds remaining. The Longhorns followed the play with a successful two-point conversion .
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Original:   The victory by the Longhorns ends the 34-game winning streak of USC. Pete Carroll and his USC Trojans were upset by Number 2 ranked Texas Longhorns on a close victory and the national chamionship for the Longhorns !
Revised:  The victory by the Longhorns ended USC's 34-game winning streak of USC. Pete Carroll and his USC Trojans were upset by Number 2 ranked Texas Longhorns on a close victory and the national chamionship for the Longhorns !
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Original:  The figure was down from 1 234 reported in the same period last year.
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Original:  Some 243 people have died in KwaZulu-Natal, 199 in Gauteng, 148 in the Eastern Cape, 125 in the Western Cape, 124 in Mpumalanga, 121 in Limpopo, 111 in North West, 105 in the Free State and 39 in the Northern Cape.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Msibi said the figures had stabilised when compared to previous years.
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Original:  This had happened as the vehicle population increased by 6.38\% or 477  205 to 795 1076 vehicles,and the number of new drivers increased by 779  000 to 7  490  333.
Revised:  This had happened as the vehicle population increased by 6.38\% or 477 , 205 to 795 1076 vehicles,and the number of new drivers increased by 779 000 to 7 490 333.
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Original:  This had happened as the vehicle population increased by 6.38\% or 477  205 to 795 1076 vehicles,and the number of new drivers increased by 779  000 to 7  490  333.
Revised:  This had happened as the vehicle population increased by 6.38\% or 477 205 to 795 1076 vehicles,and the number of new drivers increasing by 779 000 to 7 490 333.
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Original:  This had happened as the vehicle population increased by 6.38\% or 477  205 to 795 1076 vehicles,and the number of new drivers increased by 779  000 to 7  490  333.
Revised:  This had happened as the vehicle population increased by 6.38\% or 477 205 to 795 1076 vehicles,and the number of new drivers increased by 779 , 000 to 7 490 333.
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Original:  This had happened as the vehicle population increased by 6.38\% or 477  205 to 795 1076 vehicles,and the number of new drivers increased by 779  000 to 7  490  333.
Revised:  This had happened as the vehicle population increased by 6.38\% or 477 205 to 795 1076 vehicles,and the number of new drivers increased by 779 000 to 7 , 490 333.
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Original: The number of deaths on South African roads for December , 2005 was 1, 215 according to the Department of Transport.
Revised: According to the South African government's Department of Transport, the number of fatalities on the country's roads during December 2005 was 1, 215 according to the Department of Transport.
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Original:  In the same period last year, 1,234 people perished on the nation's roads.
Revised:  In the same period last year, 1,234 
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Original:  A total of 10, 530 people died in 2004 on South African roads.
Revised:  A total of 10, 530.
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Original:  Spokesperson for the Department of Transport  , Collen Msibi said 512 of the fatalities were pedestrians, 414 were passengers and 289 were drivers.
Revised:  Department of Transport , Collen Msibi said 512 of the fatalities were pedestrians, 414 were passengers and 289 were drivers.
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Original:  Spokesperson for the Department of Transport  , Collen Msibi said 512 of the fatalities were pedestrians, 414 were passengers and 289 were drivers.
Revised:  Spokesperson for the Department of Transport , Collen Msibi , stated that 512 of the fatalities were pedestrians, 414 were passengers and 289 were drivers.
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Original:  Spokesperson for the Department of Transport  , Collen Msibi said 512 of the fatalities were pedestrians, 414 were passengers and 289 were drivers.
Revised:  Spokesperson for the Department of Transport , Collen Msibi said 512 of the fatalities were pedestrians, 414 passengers, and 289 were drivers.
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Original:  Spokesperson for the Department of Transport  , Collen Msibi said 512 of the fatalities were pedestrians, 414 were passengers and 289 were drivers.
Revised:  Spokesperson for the Department of Transport , Collen Msibi said 512 of the fatalities were pedestrians, 414 were passengers and 289 
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Original:  The country with the most road related deaths is China with 250,007 people dying on their roads in 2002.
Revised:  The worst country in the world for deaths in road traffic accidents, is currently accepted to be China. Figures released for 2002 reveal that 250,007 people dying on their roads in 2002.
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Original:  The country with the most road related deaths is China with 250,007 people dying on their roads in 2002.
Revised:  The country with the most road related deaths is China with 250,007 people were killed in that year.
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Original:  The South African government have acknowledged the problem since 2001, when they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign  targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving . Category: South Africa Category: Transpo
Revised:  The South African government have acknowledged the problem since 2001. At that time they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving . Category: South Africa Category: Transpo
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Original:  The South African government have acknowledged the problem since 2001, when they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign  targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving . Category: South Africa Category: Transpo
Revised:  The South African government have acknowledged the problem since 2001, when they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign , targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving . Category: South Africa Category: Transpo
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Original:  The South African government have acknowledged the problem since 2001, when they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign  targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving . Category: South Africa Category: Transpo
Revised:  The South African government have acknowledged the problem since 2001, when they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving Category: South Africa Category: Transpo
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Original:  The South African government have acknowledged the problem since 2001, when they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign  targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving . Category: South Africa Category: Transpo
Revised:  The South African government have acknowledged the problem since 2001, when they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving . 
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Original:  At that time they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign, targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drink driving
Revised:  At that time they launched their "Arrive Alive" campaign, targeting vehicle condition, driver fitness, speeding and drunk driving
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Original: A building collapsed in Mecca  the holy city of islam at about 10'oclock this morning  .
Revised: A building collapsed in Mecca , the holy city of islam at about 10'oclock this morning .
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Original: A building collapsed in Mecca  the holy city of islam at about 10'oclock this morning  .
Revised: A building collapsed in Mecca the holy city of Islam at about 10'oclock this morning .
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Original:  The Building was a hotel housing mostly citizens of U. A.E. The death toll is now 23 which is expected to rise. the building was situated very close to the holy mosque al-haram. de:Mehrere Tode beim Einsturz eines Hauses in Mek
Revised:  The hostel's guests were mostly citizens of U. A.E. The death toll is now 23 which is expected to rise. the building was situated very close to the holy mosque al-haram. de:Mehrere Tode beim Einsturz eines Hauses in Mek
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Original:  The Building was a hotel housing mostly citizens of U. A.E. The death toll is now 23 which is expected to rise. the building was situated very close to the holy mosque al-haram. de:Mehrere Tode beim Einsturz eines Hauses in Mek
Revised:  The Building was a hotel housing mostly citizens of the :United Arab Emirates. The death toll is now 23 which is expected to rise. the building was situated very close to the holy mosque al-haram. de:Mehrere Tode beim Einsturz eines Hauses in Mek
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Original:  The Building was a hotel housing mostly citizens of U. A.E. The death toll is now 23 which is expected to rise. the building was situated very close to the holy mosque al-haram. de:Mehrere Tode beim Einsturz eines Hauses in Mek
Revised:  The Building was a hotel housing mostly citizens of U. A.E. The death toll is now 23 which is expected to rise. The building was situated very close to the holy mosque al-haram. de:Mehrere Tode beim Einsturz eines Hauses in Mek
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Original:  The Building was a hotel housing mostly citizens of U. A.E. The death toll is now 23 which is expected to rise. the building was situated very close to the holy mosque al-haram. de:Mehrere Tode beim Einsturz eines Hauses in Mek
Revised:  The Building was a hotel housing mostly citizens of U. A.E. The death toll is now 23 which is expected to rise. the building was situated very close to the holy mosque de:Mehrere Tode beim Einsturz eines Hauses in Mek
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Original: A hostel collapsed in Mecca, the holy city of Islam at about 10 'oclock this morning local time.
Revised: A hostel collapsed in Mecca, the holy city of Islam at about 10 o'clock this morning local time.
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Original: Ministers in Australia's  government have lost the power to veto laws in the nation's two mainland territories after legislation passed the federal parliament.
Revised: Ministers in Australia's federal government have lost the power to veto laws in the nation's two mainland territories after legislation passed the federal parliament.
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Original: Ministers in Australia's  government have lost the power to veto laws in the nation's two mainland territories after legislation passed the federal parliament.
Revised: Ministers in Australia's government have lost the power to veto laws in the nation's two mainland territories after legislation passed the national parliament.
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Original:  Greens leader Senator has called it a significant day.
Revised:  Greens leader Senator called it a significant day.
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Original: Previously government ministers could veto laws, most prominently in 1997 when a controversial Northern Territory law was struck down by the Howard Government . "What that means is that it is no longer the case that the minister can step in with the stroke of a pen and dismiss territory laws as we've seen many instances before," Greens MP said.
Revised: Previously government ministers could veto laws, most prominently in 1997 when a controversial Northern Territory law was struck down by 's government . "What that means is that it is no longer the case that the minister can step in with the stroke of a pen and dismiss territory laws as we've seen many instances before," Greens MP said.
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Original:  The legislation is a first for the , their first piece of  federal legislation to be signed into law.
Revised:  The legislation is the first piece of federal legislation to be signed into law.
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Original:  ACT Chief Minister welcomed the law change, saying that while the ACT government would continue to call for a joint territory-federal review into the self-government legislation, there was no need for a delay to ‘sensible’ veto law changes.
Revised:  ACT Chief Minister welcomed the law change, saying that while the ACT government would continue to call for a joint territory-federal review into the self-government legislation, there was no need for a delay to "sensible" veto law changes.
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Original:  The Liberal-National coalition Opposition attempted to change the legislation to prevent the legalisation of same-sex marriages in the territories, but Government frontbencher Craig Emerson told parliament that federal marriage laws would still be upheld, saying that the amendment was unnecessary
Revised:  The Liberal-National coalition opposition attempted to change the legislation to prevent the legalisation of same-sex marriages in the territories, but Government frontbencher Craig Emerson told parliament that federal marriage laws would still be upheld, saying that the amendment was unnecessary
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Original:  Greens leader Senator called it a significant day.
Revised:  Greens leader Senator said
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Original:  "[ This is a] very important milestone for democracy in the territories," he said.
Revised:  "[ this is a] very important milestone for democracy in the territories," he said.
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Original:  The Liberal-National coalition opposition attempted to change the legislation to prevent the legalisation of same-sex marriages in the territories, but Government frontbencher Craig Emerson told parliament that federal marriage laws would still be upheld, saying that the amendment was unnecessary
Revised:  The Liberal-National coalition opposition attempted to change the legislation to prevent the legalisation of same-sex marriages in the territories, but Government frontbencher Craig Emerson told parliament that federal marriage laws made the amendment unnecessary
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Original: Previously government ministers could veto laws , most prominently in 1997 when a controversial Northern Territory law was struck down by 's government . "What that means is that it is no longer the case that the minister can step in with the stroke of a pen and dismiss territory laws as we've seen many instances before," Greens MP said.
Revised: Previously government ministers could veto laws unilaterally . "What that means is that it is no longer the case that the minister can step in with the stroke of a pen and dismiss territory laws as we've seen many instances before," Greens MP said.
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Original:  The Liberal-National coalition opposition attempted to change the legislation to prevent the legalisation of same-sex marriages in the territories, but Government frontbencher Craig Emerson told parliament that federal marriage laws made the amendment unnecessary
Revised:  The opposition attempted to change the legislation to prevent the legalisation of same-sex marriages in the territories, but Government frontbencher Craig Emerson told parliament that federal marriage laws made the amendment unnecessary
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Original:  Cheney , in a speech to the Heritage Foundation on Wednesday, vigorously defended the program, arguing that it could have prevented the 9/11 attacks, though a Washington Post report of his speech notes flaws in his reasoning.
Revised:  Cheney vigorously defended the program, arguing that it could have prevented the 9/11 attacks, though a Washington Post report of his speech notes flaws in his reasoning.
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Original:  The vice president, anticipating a "spirited debate" on the necessity of the program, said the leak of "highly classified" data to the Times had been a "clear detriment to our national security."
Revised:  The vice president, anticipating a "spirited debate" on the necessity of the program, said the leak of "highly classified" data to the NYTimes had been a "clear detriment to our national security."
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Original:  At the instance of the NSA, the Justice Department has launched a probe of the leak.
Revised:  The Justice Department has launched a probe of the leak.
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Original:  The Justice Department head and former White House counsel, Alberto Gonzales, has defended the program as legal and constitutional.
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