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Original: History From some undetermined time, it was the practice that when the Ethiopian Emperor assumed the throne, his brothers and other male relatives would be taken to a royal prison, where they would henceforth live until either they were called forth to become the new Emperor, or they died.
Revised: History From some undetermined time, it was the practice that when the Ethiopian Emperor assumed the throne, his brothers and other male relatives would be taken to a royal prison, where they would henceforth live until either they were called forth to become the new emperor or they died.
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Original:  the first certain mention of this practice was during the reign of Jin Asgad, who confined his brothers and his own sons to Amba Geshen.
Revised:  the first certain mention of the practice was during the reign of Jin Asgad, who confined his brothers and his own sons to Amba Geshen.
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Original:  Use of Amba Geshen as a prison was ended by Emperor Na'od, although Manoel de Almeida mentions that "those who were there before" were guarded until the reign of Emperor Gelawdewos, when only the descendants of Emperor Takla Maryam continued to be kept under watch due to their treachery against Emperor Baeda Maryam I.
Revised:  The use Amba Geshen as a prison was ended by Emperor Na'od, although Manoel de Almeida mentions that "those who were there before" were guarded until the reign of Emperor Gelawdewos, when only the descendants of Emperor Takla Maryam continued to be kept under watch due to their treachery against Emperor Baeda Maryam I.
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Original:  Use of Amba Geshen as a prison was ended by Emperor Na'od, although Manoel de Almeida mentions that "those who were there before" were guarded until the reign of Emperor Gelawdewos, when only the descendants of Emperor Takla Maryam continued to be kept under watch due to their treachery against Emperor Baeda Maryam I.
Revised:  Use of Amba Geshen as a prison was ended by Emperor Na'od, but Manoel de Almeida mentions that "those who were there before" were guarded until the reign of Emperor Gelawdewos, when only the descendants of Emperor Takla Maryam continued to be kept under watch due to their treachery against Emperor Baeda Maryam I.
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Original:  Use of Amba Geshen as a prison was ended by Emperor Na'od, although Manoel de Almeida mentions that "those who were there before" were guarded until the reign of Emperor Gelawdewos, when only the descendants of Emperor Takla Maryam continued to be kept under watch due to their treachery against Emperor Baeda Maryam I.
Revised:  Use of Amba Geshen as a prison was ended by Emperor Na'od, although Manoel de Almeida mentions that "those who were there before" were guarded until the reign of Emperor Gelawdewos, when only the descendants of Emperor Takla Maryam continued to be kept under watch because of their treachery against Emperor Baeda Maryam I.
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Original:  Huntingford, Some Records of Ethiopia: 1593-1646 (London: Hakluyt Society, 1954), pp. 101f Because it was a natural fortress, the Emperors also kept the Imperial treasury there , even after it was no longer a royal prison.
Revised:  Huntingford, Some Records of Ethiopia: 1593-1646 (London: Hakluyt Society, 1954), pp. 101f Because it was a natural fortress, the Emperors also kept the imperial treasury there even after it was no longer a royal prison.
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Original:  The Muslims  under Ahmed Gragn  made several attempts to capture Amba Geshen: the Futuh al-Habasha describes the first (in November 1531) and second (in 1533);
Revised:  The Muslims , under Ahmed Gragn made several attempts to capture Amba Geshen: the Futuh al-Habasha describes the first (in November 1531) and second (in 1533);
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Original:  The Muslims  under Ahmed Gragn  made several attempts to capture Amba Geshen: the Futuh al-Habasha describes the first (in November 1531) and second (in 1533);
Revised:  The Muslims under Ahmed Gragn , made several attempts to capture Amba Geshen: the Futuh al-Habasha describes the first (in November 1531) and second (in 1533);
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Original:  There is only one way in  ... called Macaraquer.
Revised:  There is only one way in which ... called Macaraquer.
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Original: Amba Geshen and English literature Another inaccurate account of Amba Geshen, called Mount Amara, was published in Purchas, His Pilgrimage, which Pakenham believes inspired John Milton's description of Paradise that appeared in Paradise Lost.
Revised:  English literature Another inaccurate account of Amba Geshen, called Mount Amara, was published in Purchas, His Pilgrimage, which Pakenham believes inspired John Milton's description of Paradise that appeared in Paradise Lost.
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Original: Amba Geshen and English literature Another inaccurate account of Amba Geshen, called Mount Amara, was published in Purchas, His Pilgrimage, which Pakenham believes inspired John Milton's description of Paradise that appeared in Paradise Lost.
Revised: Amba Geshen and English literature Another inaccurate account of Amba Geshen, called Mount Amara, was published in Purchas, His Pilgrimage, which was believed by Pakenham to have inspired John Milton's description of Paradise that appeared in Paradise Lost.
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Original: Amba Geshen and English literature Another inaccurate account of Amba Geshen, called Mount Amara, was published in Purchas, His Pilgrimage, which Pakenham believes inspired John Milton's description of Paradise that appeared in Paradise Lost.
Revised: Amba Geshen and English literature Another inaccurate account of Amba Geshen, called Mount Amara, was published in Purchas, His Pilgrimage, which Pakenham believes inspired John Milton's description of Paradise in Paradise Lost.
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Original:  It is in the Debub Wollo Zone (South Wollo ) of the Amhara Region, northwest of Dessie, at a latitude and a longitude of . Part of Ambassel woreda, Amba Geshen is one of the mountains of Ethiopia where most of the male heirs to the Emperor of Ethiopia were interned, usually for life.
Revised:  It is in the South Wollo Zone of the Amhara Region, northwest of Dessie, at a latitude and a longitude of . Part of Ambassel woreda, Amba Geshen is one of the mountains of Ethiopia where most of the male heirs to the Emperor of Ethiopia were interned, usually for life.
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Original:   It was the second of the three such mountains, or amba, said to have been used for this purpose, the other two being Debre Damo and Wehni.
Revised:  (clarification needed) It was the second of the three such mountains, or amba, said to have been used for this purpose, the other two being Debre Damo and Wehni.
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Original:  It is in the South Wollo Zone of the Amhara Region, northwest of Dessie, at a latitude and a longitude of . Part of Ambassel woreda, Amba Geshen is one of the mountains of Ethiopia where most of the male heirs to the Emperor of Ethiopia were interned, usually for life.
Revised:  It is in Ambassel, South Wollo Zone of the Amhara Region, northwest of Dessie, at a latitude and a longitude of . Part of Ambassel woreda, Amba Geshen is one of the mountains of Ethiopia where most of the male heirs to the Emperor of Ethiopia were interned, usually for life.
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Original:  born November 2, 1951) is a Chinese herdsman from Chifeng, Inner Mongolia, China, recognized by Guinness World Records as one of the world's tallest living men.
Revised:  born November 2, 1951) is a Chinese herdsman from Chifeng, Inner Mongolia, recognized by Guinness World Records as one of the world's tallest living men.
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Original:  Recently a benefit of 6x/week nocturnal hemodialysis on left ventricular hypertrophy was demonstrated in a randomized controlled trial.
Revised:  A benefit of 6x/week nocturnal hemodialysis on left ventricular hypertrophy was demonstrated in a randomized controlled trial.
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Original:  Experience from LynchburgHome Dialysis Central, Types of Home Dialysis: Nocturnal Home Hemodialysis, URL: URL  Accessed on July 15, 2005. suggests it happens once every 10 days for people using a fistula and 1-2 times per night if using a catheter.
Revised:  Experience from LynchburgHome Dialysis Central, Types of Home Dialysis: Nocturnal Home Hemodialysis, URL: URL , Accessed on July 15, 2005. suggests it happens once every 10 days for people using a fistula and 1-2 times per night if using a catheter.
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Original:  Less dietary restrictions—e.g., phosphate binders, renal failure food restrictions.
Revised:  Less dietary restrictions—e.g., phosphate binders, kidney failure food restrictions.
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Original:  It was inspired by the fifteen-year-old daughter of a collaborator's friend, who went into renal failure due to lupus erythematosus, and had been denied access to dialysis by their patient selection committee.
Revised:  It was inspired by the fifteen-year-old daughter of a collaborator's friend, who went into kidney failure due to lupus erythematosus, and had been denied access to dialysis by their patient selection committee.
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Original: "Christopher Blagg, MD Transcript Voice Expeditions Oral History URL See also Hemodialysis Peritoneal dialysis Chronic renal failure Nephrology
Revised: "Christopher Blagg, MD Transcript Voice Expeditions Oral History URL See also Hemodialysis Peritoneal dialysis Chronic kidney failure Nephrology
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Original:    Schedules There are three basic schedules of HHD and these are differentiated by the length and frequency of dialysis and the time of day the dialysis is carried out.
Revised:  This often uses peritoneal dialysis and sometimes uses the same equipment that is normally used in a hospital setting. One advantage to doing dialysis at home is that it can be done more frequently and slowly, which reduces the "washed out" feeling and other symptoms caused by rapid ultrafiltration, and it can often be done at night, while the person is sleeping. Schedules There are three basic schedules of HHD and these are differentiated by the length and frequency of dialysis and the time of day the dialysis is carried out.
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Original:  They are as follows: Conventional HHD - done three times a week for three to five hours.
Revised:  They are as follows: Conventional HHD – done three times a week for three to five hours.
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Original:  Short daily home hemodialysis (SDHHD) - done five to seven times a week  for two to four hours per session.
Revised:  Short daily home hemodialysis (SDHHD) – done five to seven times a week for two to four hours per session.
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Original:  Short daily home hemodialysis (SDHHD) - done five to seven times a week  for two to four hours per session.
Revised:  Short daily home hemodialysis (SDHHD) - done five to seven times a week , for two to four hours per session.
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Original:  Nocturnal home hemodialysis (NHHD) - done three to seven times per week at night during sleep, for six to ten hours.
Revised:  Nocturnal home hemodialysis (NHHD) – done three to seven times per week at night during sleep, for six to ten hours.
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Original:  Differences between home hemodialysis schedules When compared with the other schedules, nocturnal dialysis results in reduced strain on the heart during dialysis - the ultrafiltration rate (UFR) in nocturnal dialysis is lower than in CHD (and SDHHD) Frequent nocturnal hemodialysis can improve left ventricular mass measures, reduce the need for blood pressure medications, improve some measures of mineral metabolism, and improve selected measures of quality of life.
Revised:  Differences between home hemodialysis schedules When compared with the other schedules, nocturnal dialysis results in reduced strain on the heart during dialysis . The ultrafiltration rate (UFR) in nocturnal dialysis is lower than in CHD (and SDHHD) Frequent nocturnal hemodialysis can improve left ventricular mass measures, reduce the need for blood pressure medications, improve some measures of mineral metabolism, and improve selected measures of quality of life.
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Original:  SDHHD and nocturnal dialysis avoid large fluid shifts typical in IHD (that can cause nausea, cramping, and 'wash-out' ) after dialysis sessions .
Revised:  SDHHD and nocturnal dialysis avoid large fluid shifts typical in IHD (that can cause nausea, cramping, and 'wash-out' .
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Original:  Cardoza, 2006 and others...   ).
Revised:  Cardoza, 2006 and others... ). ).
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Original: GPS intelligent buoys There are two types of (GIB) systems .
Revised: GPS intelligent buoys (GIB) systems .
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Original:  History and examples of use External links Safran Electronics & Defense Naval solutions IXBLUE Subsea navigation and positioning Underwater GPS at ACSA Underwater GPS RedWAVE - underwater acoustic navigation system
Revised:  History and examples of use External links Safran Electronics & Defense Naval solutions IXBLUE Subsea navigation and positioning Underwater GPS at ACSA Underwater GPS 
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Original:  Institute of Navigation National Technical Meeting, San Diego, CA, 24-26 January 2005Cardoza, M.A., Kayser, J.R., & Wade, B. "Offshore Scoring of Precision Guided Munitions", Inside GNSS April 2006, pages 32-39Kayser, J.R., Cardoza, M.A., et. al., “Offshore Weapon Scoring Using Rapidly Deployed Realtime Acoustic Sensors”, 21st Annual NDIA Test and Evaluation Forum, Charlotte, SC, 24-26 March 2005. references: Sharm-El-Sheih, 2004;
Revised:  Institute of Navigation National Technical Meeting, San Diego, CA, 24-26 January 2005Cardoza, M.A., Kayser, J.R., & Wade, B. "Offshore Scoring of Precision Guided Munitions", Inside GNSS April 2006, pages 32-39 references: Sharm-El-Sheih, 2004;
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Original:  There is a risk of Down syndrome for infants born to those aged over 40 years.
Revised:  There is an increased risk of Down syndrome for infants born to those aged over 40 years.
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Original: Prenatal development () includes the development of the embryo and of the fetus during a viviparous animal's gestation.
Revised: Prenatal development () includes the development of the embryo and of the foetus during a viviparous animal's gestation.
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Revised:  Cannabis consumption in pregnancy may or may not be associated with restrictions in growth of the fetus, miscarriage, and cognitive deficits. ] ] ] 
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Revised:  ] The American Congress of Obstetricians and Gynecologists recommended that cannabis use be stopped before and during pregnancy. There has not been any official link between birth defects and marijuana use. ] ] 
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Revised:  ] ] ] Cannabis has an ancient tradition of usage as a medicine in obstetrics and gynecology, and a comprehensive historical review find that cannabis extracts, may represent an efficacious and safe alternative for treatment of a wide range of conditions in women including dysmenorrhea, dysuria, hyperemesis gravidarum, and menopausal symptoms. 
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Original:  Cannabis consumption in pregnancy may or may not be associated with restrictions in growth of the fetus, miscarriage, and cognitive deficits.
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Original:  1%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% The American Congress of Obstetricians and Gynecologists recommended that cannabis use be stopped before and during pregnancy.
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Original:  2%DIFDELCMD < ] %%% Cannabis is the most commonly used illicit substance among pregnant women.
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Original:  3%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cannabis has an ancient tradition of usage as a medicine in obstetrics and gynecology, and a comprehensive historical review find that cannabis extracts, may represent an efficacious and safe alternative for treatment of a wide range of conditions in women including dysmenorrhea, dysuria, hyperemesis gravidarum, and menopausal symptoms. 4
Revised:  %DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cannabis has an ancient tradition of usage as a medicine in obstetrics and gynecology, and a comprehensive historical review find that cannabis extracts, may represent an efficacious and safe alternative for treatment of a wide range of conditions in women including dysmenorrhea, dysuria, hyperemesis gravidarum, and menopausal symptoms. 4
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Original:  3%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cannabis has an ancient tradition of usage as a medicine in obstetrics and gynecology, and a comprehensive historical review find that cannabis extracts, may represent an efficacious and safe alternative for treatment of a wide range of conditions in women including dysmenorrhea, dysuria, hyperemesis gravidarum, and menopausal symptoms. 4
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Original:  3%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cannabis has an ancient tradition of usage as a medicine in obstetrics and gynecology, and a comprehensive historical review find that cannabis extracts, may represent an efficacious and safe alternative for treatment of a wide range of conditions in women including dysmenorrhea, dysuria, hyperemesis gravidarum, and menopausal symptoms. 4
Revised:  3%DIFDELCMD < ] %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% Cannabis has an ancient tradition of usage as a medicine in obstetrics and gynecology, and a comprehensive historical review find that cannabis extracts, may represent an efficacious and safe alternative for treatment of a wide range of conditions in women including dysmenorrhea, dysuria, hyperemesis gravidarum, and menopausal symptoms. 
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Original: ]] Following fertilization  the embryonic stage of development continues until the end of the 10th week (gestational age) (8th week fertilization age).
Revised: ]] Following fertilization , the embryonic stage of development continues until the end of the 10th week (gestational age) (8th week fertilization age).
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Original:  Its offices are currently located in Minneapolis, Minnesota .
Revised:  Its offices are currently located in Minneapolis, MN .
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Original:  University of Mississippi, Duquesne University, University of Rochester, Illinois Institute of Technology, Purdue University, Rutgers University, University of Puerto Rico, Long Island University, University of Connecticut, University of Texas at Austin, University of Iowa, University of Kentucky, University of Maryland, Texas A M University, University of Michigan, University of Minnesota, University of Kansas and University of Wisconsin.
Revised:  University of Mississippi, Duquesne University, University of Rochester, Illinois Institute of Technology, Purdue University, Rutgers University, University of Puerto Rico, Long Island University, University of Connecticut, University of Texas at Austin, University of Iowa, University of Kentucky, University of Maryland, Texas A 
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Original:  NIPTE has developed Strategic Roadmap for Research and Technology which outlines current and future challenges and proposed solutions in pharmaceutical science.
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Original:  NIPTE’s membership includes leading schools and colleges of pharmacy and chemical and pharmaceutical engineering, and has overlapping scientific interests with pharmaceutical scientists (e.g. American Association of Pharmaceutical Sciences).
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Rodolfo J. Romanach, “Research initiatives to support science-based pharmaceutical manufacturing”, Pharmaceutical Technology, October 1, 2008 Ed Silverman, “Troubles With Manufacturing:
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Original:  References%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% External links Rodolfo J. Romanach, “Research initiatives to support science-based pharmaceutical manufacturing”, Pharmaceutical Technology, October 1, 2008 Ed Silverman, “Troubles With Manufacturing:
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Original:  Its offices are currently located in Minneapolis, MN . NIPTE’s strength comes from its collaboration with top schools of pharmacy, engineering and medicine, and industry and government from across the globe.
Revised:  Its offices are currently located in Minneapolis, Minnesota . NIPTE’s strength comes from its collaboration with top schools of pharmacy, engineering and medicine, and industry and government from across the globe.
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Original:  There are currently 18 member universities - each with a seat on the board and a voice in shaping the direction of       the organization   . Education and certification Board of Directors Faculty Leadership   
Revised:  There are currently 18 member universities - each with a seat on the board and a voice in shaping the direction of the organization Research agenda NIPTE’s goal is to increase science and engineering-based understanding of this area such that novel state-of-the-art technologies can be developed and science-based regulations can be implemented. These technologies will also enable new drug discoveries to be brought to market faster with less variability, higher predictability of performance and at a significantly lower cost. NIPTE’s research agenda is to conduct fundamental and basic research that will: Develop science‐based understanding of pharmaceutical materials, their processing characteristics and performance in manufacturing; Create innovative engineering tools needed to develop, design and scale up cost novel effective processes for the manufacturing of active pharmaceutical ingredients (API); Develop model‐predictive approaches for drug product formulation and manufacturing process design; Create novel manufacturing technologies that allow flexible and cost effective manufacturing of multiple products in the same production line or continuously, to replace current dedicated, largely batch‐wise operated lines; Invent and demonstrate new sensing and control technologies that allow critical product and process variables to be monitored continuously and controlled automatically in order to dramatically reduce current, wasteful reliance on quality control via end of production testing and off‐spec rejection; Create an educational model that synergistically integrates and intimately combines core concepts and methods from Pharmaceutical Sciences and Engineering, with input from Chemistry and Materials Science, to train professionals capable of facilitating systematic product design, process understanding, optimization, and control; Create and deliver educational and training programs that will prepare the technical cadre needed by the industry and the FDA to implement and regulate these new technologies . Education and certification Board of Directors Faculty Leadership 
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