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Original:  But, Russell Tice, who worked for the NSA for 20 years, has disagreed, saying that millions of americans could be effected "if the full range of secret NSA programs is used." Mr. Tice said that individual conversations can be isolated based upon keywords, such a 'jihad', but such technology is most often used for keyword based traffic analysis of the conversations of suspects, as well as their acquaintances.
Revised:  But, Russell Tice, who worked for the NSA for 20 years, has disagreed, saying that millions of Americans could be affected "if the full range of secret NSA programs is used." Mr. Tice said that individual conversations can be isolated based upon keywords, such a 'jihad', but such technology is most often used for keyword based traffic analysis of the conversations of suspects, as well as their acquaintances.
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Original:  But, Russell Tice, who worked for the NSA for 20 years, has disagreed, saying that millions of americans could be effected "if the full range of secret NSA programs is used." Mr. Tice said that individual conversations can be isolated based upon keywords, such a 'jihad', but such technology is most often used for keyword based traffic analysis of the conversations of suspects, as well as their acquaintances.
Revised:  But, Russell Tice, who worked for the NSA for 20 years, has disagreed, saying that millions of americans could be effected "if the full range of secret NSA programs is used." Mr. Tice said that individual conversations can be isolated based upon keywords, such 'jihad', but such technology is most often used for keyword based traffic analysis of the conversations of suspects, as well as their acquaintances.
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Original:  The Bush administration maintains that the congressional measure authorizing war in September 2001 empowered eavesdroping without any court issed warrent .
Revised:  The Bush administration maintains that the congressional measure authorizing war in September 2001 empowered eavesdroping without any court issued warrant .
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Original: Map of Iraq highlighting Abu Ghraib An Australian TV station has shown new photos allegedly showing more of the prisoner abuse in the Abu Ghraib prison.
Revised:  An Australian TV station has shown new photos allegedly showing more of the prisoner abuse in the Abu Ghraib prison.
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Original: In the debate on February 14, Andrew Laming (Liberal, Bowman) noted his intent to propose an amendment in the later consideration in detail stage, noting his vies that the TGA process is "so far removed...from the concerns and the beliefs of the community" and that he is "unable to convince [himself] that completely leaving these decisions to the TGA is the right thing to do".
Revised: In the debate on February 14, Andrew Laming (Liberal, Bowman) noted his intent to propose an amendment in the later consideration in detail stage, noting his views that the TGA process is "so far removed...from the concerns and the beliefs of the community" and that he is "unable to convince [himself] that completely leaving these decisions to the TGA is the right thing to do".
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Original:  Voting is expected on Thursday 
Revised:  Voting is expected on Thursday . Related new
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Original:  The Hamashahri website appears to have been the subject of a 'denial-of-service' attack.
Revised:  The Hamashahri website was the subject of a 'denial-of-service' attack.
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Original:  Ahmadinejad is the former mayor of Tehran . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BBC's Profile of Mahmoud Ahmadineja
Revised:  Ahmadinejad is the former mayor of Tehran External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BBC's Profile of Mahmoud Ahmadineja
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Original:  Ahmadinejad is the former mayor of Tehran . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BBC's Profile of Mahmoud Ahmadineja
Revised:  Ahmadinejad is the former mayor of Tehran . %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BBC's Profile of Mahmoud Ahmadineja
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Original:  Ahmadinejad is the former mayor of Tehran . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% BBC's Profile of Mahmoud Ahmadineja
Revised:  Ahmadinejad is the former mayor of Tehran . External links%DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  The contest followed upon the controversy caused by the twelve cartoons published by the Danish newspaper  Jyllands-Posten  .
Revised:  The contest followed upon the controversy caused by the twelve cartoons published by the Danish newspaper w: Jyllands-Posten .
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Original:  The contest followed upon the controversy caused by the twelve cartoons published by the Danish newspaper  Jyllands-Posten  .
Revised:  The contest followed upon the controversy caused by the twelve cartoons published by the Danish newspaper Jyllands-Posten | .
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Original:  Further, the court believes that the arguments of the federal government, saying that passengers in such a situation would die anyway, are invalid as human lives deserve protection regardless of the expected duration of their existence and that  is impossible to fully assess the situation leading to an eventual invocation of the act.
Revised:  Further, the court believes that the arguments of the federal government, saying that passengers in such a situation would die anyway, are invalid as human lives deserve protection regardless of the expected duration of their existence and that it is impossible to fully assess the situation leading to an eventual invocation of the act.
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Original:  3) The third consideration concerned planes manned soly by terrorists.
Revised:  3) The third consideration concerned planes manned solely by terrorists.
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Original:  The Bundesverfassungsgericht has struck down legislation which would allow the German Air Force to shoot down hijacked passenger planes as unconstitutional.
Revised:  The Bundesverfassungsgericht has struck down legislation which would have allowed the German Air Force to shoot down hijacked passenger planes as unconstitutional.
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Original:  Only the federal cabinet acting as a whole could overrule that in certain cases and as the act specifically gives only minister that authority , the defense minister,  it is unconstitutional.
Revised:  Only the federal cabinet acting as a whole could overrule that in certain cases and as the act specifically gives only one minister , the defense minister, it is unconstitutional.
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Original:  Only the federal cabinet acting as a whole could overrule that in certain cases and as the act specifically gives only minister that authority , the defense minister,  it is unconstitutional.
Revised:  Only the federal cabinet acting as a whole could overrule that in certain cases and as the act specifically gives only minister that authority , the defense minister, that authority it is unconstitutional.
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Original:  The Bundesverfassungsgericht has struck down legislation which would have allowed the German Air Force to shoot down hijacked passenger planes as unconstitutional.
Revised:  The Bundesverfassungsgericht has declared legislation which would have allowed the German Air Force to shoot down hijacked passenger planes as unconstitutional.
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Original:  The Bundesverfassungsgericht has struck down legislation which would have allowed the German Air Force to shoot down hijacked passenger planes as unconstitutional.
Revised:  The Bundesverfassungsgericht has struck down legislation which would have allowed the German Air Force to shoot down hijacked passenger planes unconstitutional.
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Original:  The Luftsicherheitsgesetz (literally: Aviation Safety Act) was passed in January 2005 and mainly dealt with unchallenged provisions concerning the safety at airports.
Revised:  The Luftsicherheitsgesetz (literally: Aviation Safety Act) was passed in January 2005 and mainly dealt with uncontroversial matters concerning the safety at airports.
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Original:  One provision however allowed the minister of defense to order to Air Force to shoot down a hijacked plane as a last resort if it could be presumed that that plane would be used as a weapon to kill people on the ground.
Revised:  One provision however allowed the minister of defense to order the Air Force to shoot down a hijacked plane as a last resort if it could be presumed that that plane would be used as a weapon to kill people on the ground.
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Original:  He announced that he would consider lobbying to change the Basic Law  
Revised:  He announced that he would consider lobbying to change the Basic Law . 
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Original:  The act would make passengers and crew of a hijacked plane, victims themself, to "objects" not only to the terrorists but also to the state, which does not have the authority to kill innocents.
Revised:  The act would turn passengers and crew of a hijacked plane, victims themself, to "objects" not only to the terrorists but also to the state, which does not have the authority to kill innocents.
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Original:  The act would make passengers and crew of a hijacked plane, victims themself, to "objects" not only to the terrorists but also to the state, which does not have the authority to kill innocents.
Revised:  The act would make passengers and crew of a hijacked plane, victims themselves, into "objects" not only to the terrorists but also to the state, which does not have the authority to kill innocents.
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Original:  The act would turn passengers and crew of a hijacked plane, victims themselves, into "objects"  not only to the terrorists  but also to the state, which does not have the authority to kill innocents.
Revised:  The act would turn passengers and crew of a hijacked plane, victims themselves, into "objects" --- not only to the terrorists but also to the state, which does not have the authority to kill innocents.
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Original:  The act would turn passengers and crew of a hijacked plane, victims themselves, into "objects"  not only to the terrorists  but also to the state, which does not have the authority to kill innocents.
Revised:  The act would turn passengers and crew of a hijacked plane, victims themselves, into "objects" not only to the terrorists , but also to the state, which does not have the authority to kill innocents.
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Original:  Further, the court believes that the arguments of the federal government, saying that passengers in such a situation would die anyway, are invalid  as human lives deserve protection regardless of the expected duration of their existence and that it is impossible to fully assess the situation leading to an eventual invocation of the act.
Revised:  Further, the court believes that the arguments of the federal government, saying that passengers in such a situation would die anyway, are invalid , as human lives deserve protection regardless of the expected duration of their existence and that it is impossible to fully assess the situation leading to an eventual invocation of the act.
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Original:  Physics student Peter Lu and his former roommate, economist Motohiro Yogo , decided to apply an economics model to a well-known marine fossil record in order to predict how fast life can adapt to changes in the environment.
Revised:  Physics student Peter Lu and his former roommate, economist Motohiro Yogo , decided to apply an economics model to a well-known marine in order to predict how fast life can adapt to changes in the environment.
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Original:  In the darkness, you are moved to say "thank you" outloud and to cry with those who find a familiar name .
Revised:  In the darkness, you are moved to say "thank you" outloud and to cry with those who find a familiar name 
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Original:  Photos taken 14 February 2006, in Washington D.C., by Andrew Selma
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Original:  In the darkness, you are moved to say "thank you" outloud and to cry with those who find a familiar name  
Revised:  In the darkness, you are moved to say "thank you" outloud and to cry with those who find a familiar name . 
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Original:  In the darkness, you are moved to say "thank you" outloud and to cry with those who find a familiar name.
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Original:  Credit: Andrew Selman]] [[Image: 3 Servicemen.jpg|The statue of three Vietnam era servicemen patrol the grounds of the Vietnam Memorial on Valentine's Day Night in Washington, D.C. Credit: Andrew Selman Image: Vietnam Memorial West.jpg|Right|350px|The Vietnam Veterans Memoral with the Lincon Memorial in the background on Valentine's Day Night.
Revised:  Credit: Andrew Selman]] [[Image: Image: Vietnam Memorial West.jpg|Right|350px|The Vietnam Veterans Memoral with the Lincon Memorial in the background on Valentine's Day Night.
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Original:  Credit: Andrew Selman]] [[Image: 3 Servicemen.jpg|The statue of three Vietnam era servicemen patrol the grounds of the Vietnam Memorial on Valentine's Day Night in Washington, D.C. Credit: Andrew Selman Image: Vietnam Memorial West.jpg|Right|350px|The Vietnam Veterans Memoral with the Lincon Memorial in the background on Valentine's Day Night.
Revised:  Credit: Andrew Selman]] [[Image: 3 Servicemen.jpg|The statue of three Vietnam era servicemen patrol the grounds of the Vietnam Memorial on Valentine's Day Night in Washington, D.C. Credit: Andrew Selman Vietnam Memorial West.jpg|Right|350px|The Vietnam Veterans Memoral with the Lincon Memorial in the background on Valentine's Day Night.
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Original:  Credit: Andrew Selma 
Revised:  Credit: Andrew Selman 
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Original: Image:   Caring wounded.jpg|Flowers adorn the base of the Vietnam Nurses Memorial in Washington, D.C. on Valentine's Day Night, 2006.
Revised: Image: Image: Caring wounded.jpg|Flowers adorn the base of the Vietnam Nurses Memorial in Washington, D.C. on Valentine's Day Night, 2006.
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Original: There was even 11 year old Gema from Miami, Florida who came to see the wall and connect hereself to her schoolwork , "I wanted to see the wall to understand what they were teaching us.
Revised: There was even 11 year old Gema from Miami, Florida who came to see the wall and connect hereself to her schoolwork ; "I wanted to see the wall to understand what they were teaching us.
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Original:  Stephen Birks of Fort Long Beach , Florida came to find Larry Rabren who dated his sister when Stephen was just 14.
Revised:  Stephen Birks of Fort Long Beach came to find Larry Rabren who dated his sister when Stephen was just 14.
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Original: Today, march 25th, is a big day for Canadian Idol want a be 's.
Revised: Today, march 25th, is a big day for Canadian Idol want a Be 's.
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Original:  Also compared to last year the maximum age limite went up.
Revised:  Also compared to last year the maximum age limit went up.
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Original:  Participant may now be between the age of 16 and 28 years old from the 1st of february .
Revised:  Participant may now be between the age of 16 and 28 years old from the 1st of February .
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Original:  There is even a forum discusion for those that want advice.
Revised:  There is even a forum discussion for those that want advice.
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Original:  The famous show based on "American Idol  " has been on going for X season now .
Revised:  The famous show based on "American Idol , " has been on going for X season now .
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Original:  The famous show based on "American Idol  " has been on going for X season now .
Revised:  The famous show based on "American Idol " has been on going for several seasons .
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Original:  In the past auditions have been know to have large line-up and long waiting time .
Revised:  In the past auditions have been know to have line-ups of thousands of people .
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Original:  However, this year the organizers have decided to change the way rock will roll.
Revised:  However, this year the organizers have decided to change the way the auditions will "rock and roll."
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Original: Contestant will also be able to show up when ever they wish, in between the hours of 8:00 a.m. and 5:00 p.m.
Revised: Contestant will also be able to show up at whatever time they wish, in between the hours of 8:00 a.m. and 5:00 p.m.
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Original:  Also    compared to last year the maximum age limit went up  . Participant may now be between the age of 16 and 28 years old from the 1st of February .
Revised:  Also Also, compared to last year the maximum age limit went up . Participant may now be between the age of 16 and 28 years old from the 1st of February .
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Original:  Also    compared to last year the maximum age limit went up  . Participant may now be between the age of 16 and 28 years old from the 1st of February .
Revised:  Also compared to last year the maximum age limit went up . Participant may now be between the age of 16 and 28 years old .
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Original:  There is even a forum discussion for those that want advice .
Revised:  There is even a "forum" discussion for those that want advice .
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Original: This weekend, March 25 and 26, was  big weekend in the Ottawa area for for Canadian Idol want a Be's.
Revised: This weekend, March 25 and 26, was a big weekend in the Ottawa area for for Canadian Idol want a Be's.
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Original: This weekend, March 25 and 26, was  big weekend in the Ottawa area for for Canadian Idol want a Be's.
Revised: This weekend, March 25 and 26, was big weekend in the Ottawa area for Canadian Idol want a Be's.
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Original:  Canadian Idol is a national singing competition for canadian citizens that is organized by CTV Inc. a canadian broadcasting communications company  .
Revised:  Canadian Idol is a national singing competition that is organized by CTV Inc. a canadian broadcasting communications company .
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Original:  Canadian Idol is a national singing competition for canadian citizens that is organized by CTV Inc. a canadian broadcasting communications company  .
Revised:  Canadian Idol is a national singing competition for canadian citizens that is organized by CTV Inc. a Canadian broadcasting communications company .
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Original:  Canadian Idol is a national singing competition for canadian citizens that is organized by CTV Inc. a canadian broadcasting communications company  .
Revised:  Canadian Idol is a national singing competition for canadian citizens that is organized by CTV Inc. a canadian broadcasting communications company for Canadian citizens .
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Original:  Having decided last minute, saturday evening, to participate in the singing contest I decided to pratice "I heard it through the grape vine" and "It's all comming back to me now." Lined up and registered on sunday at around 10:30 a.m. the whole thing was fairly easy.
Revised:  Having decided last minute, Saturday evening, to participate in the singing contest I decided to pratice "I heard it through the grape vine" and "It's all comming back to me now." Lined up and registered on sunday at around 10:30 a.m. the whole thing was fairly easy.
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Original:  Having decided last minute, saturday evening, to participate in the singing contest I decided to pratice "I heard it through the grape vine" and "It's all comming back to me now." Lined up and registered on sunday at around 10:30 a.m. the whole thing was fairly easy.
Revised:  Having decided last minute, saturday evening, to participate in the singing contest I decided to practice "I heard it through the grape vine" and "It's all comming back to me now." Lined up and registered on sunday at around 10:30 a.m. the whole thing was fairly easy.
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Original:  Having decided last minute, saturday evening, to participate in the singing contest I decided to pratice "I heard it through the grape vine" and "It's all comming back to me now." Lined up and registered on sunday at around 10:30 a.m. the whole thing was fairly easy.
Revised:  Having decided last minute, saturday evening, to participate in the singing contest I decided to pratice "I heard it through the grape vine" and "It's all coming back to me now." Lined up and registered on sunday at around 10:30 a.m. the whole thing was fairly easy.
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Original:  Having decided last minute, saturday evening, to participate in the singing contest I decided to pratice "I heard it through the grape vine" and "It's all comming back to me now." Lined up and registered on sunday at around 10:30 a.m. the whole thing was fairly easy.
Revised:  Having decided last minute, saturday evening, to participate in the singing contest I decided to pratice "I heard it through the grape vine" and "It's all comming back to me now." Lined up and registered on Sunday at around 10:30 a.m. the whole thing was fairly easy.
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Original:  Compared to previous years contestant where able to show up at whatever time they wish, in between the hours of 8:00 a.m. and 5:00 p.m.
Revised:  Compared to previous year’s contestant may show up at whatever time they wish, in between the hours of 8:00 a.m. and 5:00 p.m.
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Original:  Compared to previous years contestant where able to show up at whatever time they wish, in between the hours of 8:00 a.m. and 5:00 p.m.
Revised:  Compared to previous years contestant where able to show up at any time they wish, in between the hours of 8:00 a.m. and 5:00 p.m.
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Original:  Security and Canadian Idol greeting staff did say that saturday was "crazy (busy) with people lining-up as early as 5:00 a.m." After receiving my competition number 16350 I taged it to my shirt and ran back around to wait in line.
Revised:  Security and Canadian Idol greeting staff did however say that Saturday was "crazy (busy) with people lining-up as early as 5:00 a.m." After receiving my competition number 16350 I taged it to my shirt and ran back around to wait in line.
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Original:  Security and Canadian Idol greeting staff did say that saturday was "crazy (busy) with people lining-up as early as 5:00 a.m." After receiving my competition number 16350 I taged it to my shirt and ran back around to wait in line.
Revised:  Security and Canadian Idol greeting staff did say that saturday was "crazy (busy) with people lining-up as early as 5:00 a.m." After receiving my competition number 16350 I tagged it to my shirt and ran back around to wait in line.
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Original:  A few competitor explored the shopping mall during this time.
Revised:  A few competitors explored the shopping mall during this time.
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Original:  She sings every thursday . Just before heading off to the audition a large pack of competitors just came back from the new Museum of War.
Revised:  She sings every Thursday . Just before heading off to the audition a large pack of competitors just came back from the new Museum of War.
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Original:  The whole ordeal was over within approximatelly 2 hours.
Revised:  The whole ordeal was over within approximately 2 hours.
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Original:  Actually, by 12:30 I was at home eating in the kitchen eating lunch . A little dissapointed in myself for not practicing more than a couple hours .
Revised:  Actually, by 12:30 I was at home eating lunch and a little disappointed in my last minute decisions .
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Original:  In the past auditions have been know to have line-ups of thousands of people, however, this year after taking a tour around the new location it appears that line ups where manageable.
Revised:  In the past auditions have been know to have line-ups of thousands of people, however, this year after taking a tour around the new location it appears that line ups were manageable.
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