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Original:  A , returning form an tournament in , crashed in a field in Illinois Tuesday, killing all seven people on board .
Revised:  A crashed in an Illinois field on Tuesday while returning from an tournament. All seven people on board .
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Original:  A , returning form an tournament in , crashed in a field in Illinois Tuesday, killing all seven people on board .
Revised:  A , returning form an tournament in , crashed in a field in Illinois Tuesday, killing all seven people on the plane were killed .
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Original:  Both of these people were a part of Illinois State University's athletic department . Dietz added that both men were respected and loved .
Revised:  Both of these people were a part of Illinois State University's athletic department , where, Dietz said, they were highly esteemed .
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Original:  Coroner Kathleen Davis said they were killed due to blunt force trauma.
Revised:  Coroner Kathleen Davis said they were killed by blunt force trauma.
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Original: A National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) investigator said he wasn't clear why the plane turned away from the runway on approach , but implied it was raining and foggy .
Revised: A National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) investigator said he didn't know why the plane turned away from the runway on approach , but implied it was raining and foggy .
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Original: A National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) investigator said he wasn't clear why the plane turned away from the runway on approach , but implied it was raining and foggy .
Revised: A National Transportation Safety Board (NTSB) investigator said he wasn't clear why the plane turned away from its approach to a runway in , Ilinois, though he noted conditions of rain and fog .
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Original:  The NTSB is investigating the crash , but the cause is yet to be determined
Revised:  The NTSB is investigating the crash 
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Original:  American employers created about 490,000 new jobs in August, but this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina  
Revised:  American employers created about 490,000 new jobs in August, but this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina . 
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Original:  American employers created about 490,000 new jobs in August , but this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina.
Revised:  American employers created about 490,000 new jobs in August . However, this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina.
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Original:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices surge  
Revised:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices surge . 
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Original: Economists expect the number of jobless to grow more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive over 5\% again, buthey are not sure about the Federal Reserve decision on the interest rates.
Revised: Economists expect the number of jobless to grow more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive over 5\% again, but they are not sure about the Federal Reserve decision on the interest rates.
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Original: The US Labour Department announced that the country's unemployment rate fell down to four-year low of 4.9\%.
Revised: The US Labor Department announced that the country's unemployment rate fell down to four-year low of 4.9\%.
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Original: The US Labor Department announced that the country's unemployment rate fell down to four-year low of 4.9\%.
Revised: The United States Department of Labor announced that the country's unemployment rate fell down to four-year low of 4.9\%.
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Original: The United States Department of Labor announced that the country's unemployment rate fell down to four-year low of 4.9\%.
Revised: The United States Department of Labor announced that the country's unemployment rate fell to a four-year low of 4.9\%.
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Original:  However, this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina (  data was collected before the hurricanedisaster ).
Revised:  However, this trend is projected to end due to Hurricane Katrina ( data was collected before the hurricanedisaster ).
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Original:  However, this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina (  data was collected before the hurricanedisaster ).
Revised:  However, this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina ( the data was collected before the hurricanedisaster ).
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Original:  However, this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina (  data was collected before the hurricanedisaster ).
Revised:  However, this trend is projected to end due to strike of Hurricane Katrina ( data was collected prior to the hurricane ).
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Original:  Economists expect the number of jobless to grow  more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive  over 5\% again, but they are not sure about the Federal Reserve decision on the interest rates.
Revised:  Economists expect the number of jobless to grow by more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive over 5\% again, but they are not sure about the Federal Reserve decision on the interest rates.
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Original:  Economists expect the number of jobless to grow  more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive  over 5\% again, but they are not sure about the Federal Reserve decision on the interest rates.
Revised:  Economists expect the number of jobless to grow more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive up over 5\% again, but they are not sure about the Federal Reserve decision on the interest rates.
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Original:  Economists expect the number of jobless to grow  more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive  over 5\% again, but they are not sure about the Federal Reserve decision on the interest rates.
Revised:  Economists expect the number of jobless to grow more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive over 5\% again, but they are not sure about the Federal Reserve decision on interest rates.
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Original:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices surge .
Revised:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices surge .
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Original:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices surge .
Revised:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will likely be increased to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices surge .
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Original:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices surge .
Revised:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from overheating, causing inflation, which also may be caused by the surge in crude oil and gasoline prices surge .
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Original:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices surge .
Revised:  Some sources believe the Fed will make no change, while the others say the rates will be probably boosted to prevent the economy from rising inflation, caused by crude and gasoline prices .
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Original:  The Dow Jones industrial average fell 12.26 points to 10,447.37 , Nasdaq fell 6.83 points to 2,141.07.
Revised:  The Dow Jones industrial average fell 12.26 points to 10,447.37 while Nasdaq fell 6.83 points to 2,141.07.
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Original:  American dollar lost slightly against most of the world currencies
Revised:  The US dollar declined slightly against most of the world currencies
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Original:  American dollar lost slightly against most of the world currencies
Revised:  American dollar lost slightly against most world currencies
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Original: Economists expect the number of jobless to grow by more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive up over 5\% again, but they are ensure of the effect an of upcoming Federal Reserve decision on interest rates.
Revised: Economists expect the number of jobless to grow by more than 500,000 in September and the unemployment rate to drive up over 5\% again, but they are unsure of the effect an of upcoming Federal Reserve decision on interest rates.
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Original: A daughter of HM King Mswati III , 17-year-old Princess Sikhanyiso was throwing a party with loud music and alcohol.
Revised: A daughter of HM , 17-year-old Princess Sikhanyiso was throwing a party with loud music and alcohol.
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Original:  He added that G " overnment does not have any money".
Revised:  He added that " overnment does not have any money".
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Original:  He added that G " overnment does not have any money".
Revised:  He added that G " Government does not have any money".
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Original:  Air Zimbabwe can't afford to pay the airliner's force of 60 pilots their full wage but has promised to make up all back-pa 
Revised:  Air Zimbabwe can't afford to pay the airliner's force of 60 pilots their full wage but has promised to make up all back-pay. 
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Original:  The strike has cost the company around $500, 00
Revised:  The strike has cost the company around $500, 000
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Original: File:Aircraft 11.03.2005 16-32-54.jpg|An Air Zimbabwe Boeing 737 at OR Tambo International Airport, Johannesburg]] Striking pilots at Air Zimbabwe have been told that they could lose their jobs if the don't return to work.
Revised: File:Aircraft 11.03.2005 16-32-54.jpg|An Air Zimbabwe Boeing 737 at OR Tambo International Airport, Johannesburg]] Striking pilots at Air Zimbabwe have been told that they could lose their jobs if they don't return to work.
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Original:  Their wage is currently $2,500 a month but are only recieving $ 1,200.
Revised:  Their wage is currently $2,500 a month, but the pilots are currently receiving just $ 1,200.
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Original:  File:2010 Manila hostage crisis bus.
Revised: yo File:2010 Manila hostage crisis bus.
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Original:  This will have to be pumped out, possible only when electricity returns  
Revised:  This will have to be pumped out, possible only when electricity returns . 
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Original: A Friday explosion in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said, as the French-speaking suspect protested his innocence in custody.
Revised: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said, as the French-speaking suspect protested his innocence in custody.
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Original: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said, as the French-speaking suspect  protested his innocence in custody .
Revised: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said, as the French-speaking suspect in custody, protested his innocence in custody .
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Original: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said, as the French-speaking suspect  protested his innocence in custody .
Revised: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said, as the French-speaking suspect protested his innocence .
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Original:  While the explosion comes as thousands of American citizens mourn those who died in the September 11 attacks in 2001, officials have insisted that people should not be worried an attack is imminent.
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Original:  No-one was killed or suffered serious injuries in the explosion, although the suspect recieved minor injuries.
Revised:  No-one was killed or suffered serious injuries in the explosion, although the suspect suffered minor injuries.
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Original:  Jakob Scharf, head of the Danish Security and Intelligence Service (PET) , "there are circumstances that point in the direction of a failed terror attack," adding that authorities "cannot exclude that there could be other suspects at large."
Revised:  Jakob Scharf, head of the Danish Security and Intelligence Service (PET) said that "there are circumstances that point in the direction of a failed terror attack," adding that authorities "cannot exclude that there could be other suspects at large."
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Original:  Prime Minister Lars Loekke Rasmussen described the incident as "serious", adding that his goverment was closely monitoring developments.
Revised:  Prime Minister Lars Loekke Rasmussen described the incident as "serious", adding that his government was closely monitoring developments.
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Original:  The "slightly raised" risk of a terror attack means that authorites will be more alert throughout the country.
Revised:  The "slightly raised" risk of a terror attack means that authorities will be more alert throughout the country.
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Original: According to the Associated Press, "the suspect was arrested Friday in a central Copenhagen park after being seen running from the blast site.
Revised: The suspect was arrested Friday in a central Copenhagen park after being seen running from the blast site.
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Original: According to the Associated Press, "the suspect was arrested Friday in a central Copenhagen park after being seen running from the blast site.
Revised: According to the Associated Press, "the suspect was arrested in a park after being seen running from the blast site.
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Original:  Officers used a remote-controlled robot to detach a pack from his waist, fearing it could contain explosives.
Revised:  Officers used a remote-controlled robot to detach a pack from his waist, since authorities were nervous that it could contain explosives.
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Original:  Police said a gun and two loaded magazines were found at the hotel.
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Original:  They said he was refusing to cooperate with authorities ." The man reportedly does not remember his name or his age, but speaks fluent English.
Revised:  They said he was refusing to cooperate with authorities , according to police. The man reportedly does not remember his name or his age, but speaks fluent English.
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Original:  "The man also denied preliminary charges of intending to harm others by an explosion and firearms possession.
Revised:  The man denies initial charges of intending to harm others by an explosion and firearms possession.
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Original:  Preliminary charges are a step short of formal charges, but if they are formally filed and he is convicted , he could face up to life in prison," the report continued . Jakob Scharf, head of the Danish Security and Intelligence Service (PET) said that "there are circumstances that point in the direction of a failed terror attack," adding that authorities "cannot exclude that there could be other suspects at large."
Revised:  If he is found guilty , he could face up to life in prison," the report continued . Jakob Scharf, head of the Danish Security and Intelligence Service (PET) said that "there are circumstances that point in the direction of a failed terror attack," adding that authorities "cannot exclude that there could be other suspects at large."
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Original:  Preliminary charges are a step short of formal charges, but if they are formally filed and he is convicted , he could face up to life in prison," the report continued . Jakob Scharf, head of the Danish Security and Intelligence Service (PET) said that "there are circumstances that point in the direction of a failed terror attack," adding that authorities "cannot exclude that there could be other suspects at large."
Revised:  Preliminary charges are a step short of formal charges, but if they are formally filed and he is convicted , he could face life imprisonment . Jakob Scharf, head of the Danish Security and Intelligence Service (PET) said that "there are circumstances that point in the direction of a failed terror attack," adding that authorities "cannot exclude that there could be other suspects at large."
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Original:  "Police were trying to establish what kind of explosives caused the blast," according to the Associated Press . Police have said they have so far found no other explosives in the hotel, although a gun was found.
Revised:  Police are attempting to determine what kind of explosives caused the blast," according to the Associated Press . Police have said they have so far found no other explosives in the hotel, although a gun was found.
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Original:  "Police were trying to establish what kind of explosives caused the blast," according to the Associated Press . Police have said they have so far found no other explosives in the hotel, although a gun was found.
Revised:  "Police were trying to establish what kind of explosives caused the explosion . Police have said they have so far found no other explosives in the hotel, although a gun was found.
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Original:  A remote-controlled robot  to detach a pack from his waist, since authorities were nervous that it could contain explosives.
Revised:  A remote-controlled robot was used to detach a pack from his waist, since authorities were nervous that it could contain explosives.
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Original: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said , as the French-speaking suspect was remanded in custody , protested his innocence.
Revised: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials said as the French-speaking suspect was remanded in custody , protested his innocence.
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Original: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said , as the French-speaking suspect was remanded in custody , protested his innocence.
Revised: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials have said , as the French-speaking suspect was remanded in custody . The suspect protested his innocence.
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Original:  The explosion caused only minor damage to a hotel bathroom, although authorities "slightly" raised the country's terrorist alert level . No-one was killed or suffered serious injuries in the explosion , although the suspect suffered minor injuries.
Revised:  Authorities "slightly" raised the country's terrorist alert level . No-one was killed or suffered serious injuries in the explosion , although the suspect suffered minor injuries.
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Original:  The explosion caused only minor damage to a hotel bathroom, although authorities "slightly" raised the country's terrorist alert level . No-one was killed or suffered serious injuries in the explosion , although the suspect suffered minor injuries.
Revised:  The explosion caused only minor damage to a hotel bathroom, although authorities "slightly" raised the country's terrorist alert level after the explosion. The explosion caused only minor damage to a hotel bathroom, and no-one was killed or suffered serious injuries in the explosion , although the suspect suffered minor injuries.
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Original:  The explosion caused only minor damage to a hotel bathroom, although authorities "slightly" raised the country's terrorist alert level . No-one was killed or suffered serious injuries in the explosion , although the suspect suffered minor injuries.
Revised:  The explosion caused only minor damage to a hotel bathroom, although authorities "slightly" raised the country's terrorist alert level . No-one was killed or suffered serious injuries in the explosion . Only the suspect suffered minor injuries.
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Original:  A remote-controlled robot was used to detach a pack from his waist, since authorities were nervous that it could contain explosives.
Revised:  A remote-controlled robot was used to detach a pack from his waist, since authorities were concerned that it could contain explosives.
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Original:  Authorities " slightly " raised the country's terrorist alert level after the explosion.
Revised:  Authorities " lightly " raised the country's terrorist alert level after the explosion.
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Original: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist paki bastard attack, Danish officials said as the French-speaking suspect was remanded in custody.
Revised: An explosion on Friday in a hotel in Copenhagen could have been a terrorist attack, Danish officials said as the French-speaking suspect was remanded in custody.
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Original:  Authorities " lightly " raised the country's terrorist alert level after the explosion.
Revised:  Authorities " slightly " raised the country's terrorist alert level after the explosion.
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Original: To help launch Cape Verde's first public university, the Brazilian government has made the promised to provide organizational advice and  train professors.
Revised: To help launch Cape Verde's first public university, the Brazilian government has made the promise to provide organizational advice and train professors.
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Original: To help launch Cape Verde's first public university, the Brazilian government has made the promised to provide organizational advice and  train professors.
Revised: To help launch Cape Verde's first public university, the Brazilian government has made the promised to provide organizational advice and to train professors.
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Original:  According to Fernando Haddad, Brazilian Minister of Education, Brazil will send its professors to the small African nation to train them in lecturing, marking, and other important factors involved in the profession.
Revised:  According to Fernando Haddad, Brazilian Minister of Education, Brazil will send its professors to the small African nation to train them in lecturing, marking, and other important skills involved in the profession.
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Original:  Filomena Martins, Cape Verdean Minister of Education and Human Resource Enhancement, met with Haddad on August 22 to work out the details of the plan, which had been first launched Brazil's President  Luiz Inàcio da Silva  in July 2004.
Revised:  Filomena Martins, Cape Verdean Minister of Education and Human Resource Enhancement, met with Haddad on August 22 to work out the details of the plan, which was first launched by Brazil's President Luiz Inàcio da Silva in July 2004.
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