wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  Canadian Transport Minister Lawrence Cannon issued a statement of condolences regarding those involved in the disaster, while confirming the federal government's involvement in the investigation  
Revised:  Canadian Transport Minister Lawrence Cannon issued a statement of condolences regarding those involved in the disaster, while confirming the federal government's involvement in the investigation . 
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Original:  Transport Canada has appointed a Minister's Observer, who will keep me informed of the investigation's progress.  
Revised:  Transport Canada has appointed a Minister's Observer, who will keep me informed of the investigation's progress. " 
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Original:  Mr Butler  was the senior judge at Southwark Crown Court in Central London for 13 years .
Revised:  Mr Butler , who was the senior judge at Southwark Crown Court in Central London for 13 years .
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Original:  A member of the Bar Council, John Cooper, said: "One of the important factors in being a judge is being able to exercise judgment , and part of that judgment is being trusted with confidential material.
Revised:  A member of the Bar Council, John Cooper, said: "One of the important factors in being a judge is being able to exercise judgement , and part of that judgment is being trusted with confidential material.
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Original:  A member of the Bar Council, John Cooper, said: "One of the important factors in being a judge is being able to exercise judgment , and part of that judgment is being trusted with confidential material.
Revised:  A member of the Bar Council, John Cooper, said: "One of the important factors in being a judge is being able to exercise judgment , and part of that judgement is being trusted with confidential material.
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Original: A member of the Bar Council, John Cooper, said: "One of the important factors in being a judge is being able to exercise judgement , and part of that judgement is being trusted with confidential material.
Revised: A member of the Bar Council, John Cooper, said: "One of the important factors in being a judge is being able to exercise judgment , and part of that judgement is being trusted with confidential material.
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Original: A member of the Bar Council, John Cooper, said: "One of the important factors in being a judge is being able to exercise judgement , and part of that judgement is being trusted with confidential material.
Revised: A member of the Bar Council, John Cooper, said: "One of the important factors in being a judge is being able to exercise judgement , and part of that judgment is being trusted with confidential material.
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Original:  Mrs Blair  is a recorder , a barrister who sits occasionally as a judge .
Revised:  Mrs Blair , who is a recorder , a barrister who sits occasionally as a judge .
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Original:  Mrs Blair  is a recorder , a barrister who sits occasionally as a judge .
Revised:  Mrs Blair is a recorder ( a barrister who sits occasionally as a judge .
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Original: Mrs Blair, who is a recorder (a barrister who sits occasionally as a judge), has just published her memoirs, Speaking for Myself.
Revised:  Blair, who is a recorder (a barrister who sits occasionally as a judge), has just published her memoirs, Speaking for Myself.
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Original:  Mr Butler, who was the senior judge at Southwark Crown Court in Central London for 13 years said, "I don't think she should continue to sit as a recorder.
Revised:  Butler, who was the senior judge at Southwark Crown Court in Central London for 13 years said, "I don't think she should continue to sit as a recorder.
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Original:  The spacecraft, designated Progress M-64 and 29P, is flying to resupply the w:International Space Station  .
Revised:  The spacecraft, designated Progress M-64 and 29P, is flying to resupply the w:International Space Station (ISS) .
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Original:  Following a series of manoeuvres, it is expected to dock with the Space Station's Zarya module at 21:36 GMT tommorrow evening.
Revised:  Following a series of manoeuvres, it is expected to dock with the Space Station's Zarya module at 21:36 GMT tomorrow evening.
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Original:  The freighter is carrying 1300kg of dry cargo, 350kg of propellent , 30kg of oxygen and 20kg air for the life support system, and 420kg of water.
Revised:  The freighter is carrying 1300kg of dry cargo, 350kg of propellant , 30kg of oxygen and 20kg air for the life support system, and 420kg of water.
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Original:  The spacecraft will undock, de-orbit, and be destroyed during controlled atmospehric re-entry in several months time.
Revised:  The spacecraft will undock, de-orbit, and be destroyed during controlled atmospheric re-entry in several months time.
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Original:  The spacecraft, designated Progress M-64 and 29P, is flying to resupply the w: International Space Station (ISS).
Revised:  The spacecraft, designated Progress M-64 and 29P, is flying to resupply the International Space Station (ISS).
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Original:  Moreover, the court found that the law s were unconstitutional given the protections of the California Constitution.
Revised:  Moreover, the court found that the laws were unconstitutional given the protections of the California Constitution.
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Original: The Supreme Court of California in a 4-3 decision has struck down California's ban on gay marriage.
Revised: The Supreme Court of California in a 4–3 decision has struck down California's ban on gay marriage.
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Original:  The decision struck down two laws  one from 1977 and another more recent one due to a referendum in 2000.
Revised:  The decision struck down two laws , one from 1977 and another more recent one due to a referendum in 2000.
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Original: A major security bug was announced on May 13, 2008 in the pseudorandom number generator (PRNG) of the Debian version of OpenSSL, one of the most used cryptographic programming library .
Revised: A major security bug was announced on May 13, 2008 in the pseudorandom number generator (PRNG) of the Debian version of OpenSSL, one of the most used cryptographic programming libraries .
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Original:  With 15-20\% of weak Tor nodes, there is a probability of 0.34-0.8\% circa to build a circuit that has all tree nodes weak, resulting a full lost of anonymity.
Revised:  With 15-20\% of weak Tor nodes, there is a probability of 0.34-0.8\% circa to build a circuit that has all tree nodes weak, resulting in a full loss of anonymity.
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Original:  The problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster that use OpenSSL to create private keys, even if currently there is no official announce .
Revised:  The problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster that use OpenSSL to create private keys, even if currently there is no official announcement .
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Original: Even if the Debian maintainer responsible for this software released a patch to fix it on May 8, 2008, the impact may be severe.
Revised: Even though the Debian maintainer responsible for this software released a patch to fix it on May 8, 2008, the impact may be severe.
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Original: A major security bug was announced on May 13, 2008 in the pseudorandom number generator (PRNG) of the Debian version of OpenSSL, one of the most used cryptographic programming libraries.
Revised: A major security hole was announced on May 13, 2008 in the pseudorandom number generator (PRNG) of the Debian version of OpenSSL, one of the most used cryptographic programming libraries.
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Original: A major security hole was announced on May 13, 2008 in the pseudorandom number generator (PRNG) of the Debian version of OpenSSL , one of the most used cryptographic programming libraries.
Revised: A major security hole was discovered in the pseudo-random number generator (PRNG) of the Debian version of OpenSSL , one of the most used cryptographic programming libraries.
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Original: A major security hole was announced on May 13, 2008 in the pseudorandom number generator (PRNG) of the Debian version of OpenSSL , one of the most used cryptographic programming libraries.
Revised: A major security hole was announced on May 13, 2008 in the pseudorandom number generator (PRNG) of the Debian version of OpenSSL . OpenSSL is one of the most used cryptographic programming libraries.
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Original:  The problem affects all the Debian-based GNU/Linux distributions,  like Ubuntu and Knoppix , that was used to create SSL/TLS keys since September 17, 2006.
Revised:  The problem affects all the Debian-based GNU/Linux distributions, like Ubuntu and Knoppix . The problem affects all the Debian-based distributions that were used to create SSL/TLS keys since September 17, 2006.
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Original:  This vulnerability was caused by the removal of two lines of code from the original version of the OpenSSL  . These lines were used to gather some entropy data by the library  to seed the PRNG used to create private keys  .
Revised:  This vulnerability was caused by the removal of two lines of code from the original version of the OpenSSL library . These lines were used to gather some entropy data by the library to seed the PRNG used to create private keys .
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Original:  This vulnerability was caused by the removal of two lines of code from the original version of the OpenSSL  . These lines were used to gather some entropy data by the library  to seed the PRNG used to create private keys  .
Revised:  This vulnerability was caused by the removal of two lines of code from the original version of the OpenSSL . These lines were used to gather some entropy data by the library , needed to seed the PRNG used to create private keys .
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Original:  Avoid uninitialized data in random buffer, OpenSSL Request Tracker, March 13, 2003 Anyway this change was erroneously applied on September 17, 2006, when the OpenSSL Debian version 0.9.8c-1 was released to the public.
Revised:  Anyway this change was erroneously applied on September 17, 2006, when the OpenSSL Debian version 0.9.8c-1 was released to the public.
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Original:  Even though the Debian maintainer responsible for this software released a patch to fix it on May 8, 2008, the impact may be severe.
Revised:  Even though the Debian maintainer responsible for this software released a patch to fix this bug on May 8, 2008, the impact may be severe.
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Original:  OpenSSL is commonly used in software to protect the passwords and to offer privacy  .
Revised:  OpenSSL is commonly used in software to protect the passwords , to offer privacy .
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Original:  OpenSSL is commonly used in software to protect the passwords and to offer privacy  .
Revised:  OpenSSL is commonly used in software to protect the passwords and to offer privacy and security .
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Original:  This may allows hackers to gain illegal access to your computer, network or private data traveled over the network, even if you don't have an affected version of OpenSSL  . The same behavior can be applied to any software or protocol that use SSL, like POP3S, SSMTP, FTPS, if used with a weak key.
Revised:  This may allows hackers to gain illegal access to private computers, networks or data traveled over the network, even if you don't have an affected version of OpenSSL . The same behavior can be applied to any software or protocol that use SSL, like POP3S, SSMTP, FTPS, if used with a weak key.
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Original:  This may allows hackers to gain illegal access to your computer, network or private data traveled over the network, even if you don't have an affected version of OpenSSL  . The same behavior can be applied to any software or protocol that use SSL, like POP3S, SSMTP, FTPS, if used with a weak key.
Revised:  This may allows hackers to gain illegal access to your computer, network or private data traveled over the network, even if a not affected version of OpenSSL . The same behavior can be applied to any software or protocol that use SSL, like POP3S, SSMTP, FTPS, if used with a weak key.
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Original:  This may allows hackers to gain illegal access to your computer, network or private data traveled over the network, even if you don't have an affected version of OpenSSL  . The same behavior can be applied to any software or protocol that use SSL, like POP3S, SSMTP, FTPS, if used with a weak key.
Revised:  This may allows hackers to gain illegal access to your computer, network or private data traveled over the network, even if you don't have an affected version of OpenSSL was used . The same behavior can be applied to any software or protocol that use SSL, like POP3S, SSMTP, FTPS, if used with a weak key.
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Original:  The problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster  that use OpenSSL to create private keys, even if currently there is no official announcement . Note
Revised:  The problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster , that use OpenSSL to create private keys, even if currently there is no official announcement . Note
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Original:  The problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster  that use OpenSSL to create private keys, even if currently there is no official announcement . Note
Revised:  The problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster that use OpenSSL to create private keys, even if currently there is no official announcement Note
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Original:  The problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster  that use OpenSSL to create private keys, even if currently there is no official announcement . Note
Revised:  The problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster that use OpenSSL to create private keys, even if currently there is no official announcement . 
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Original:  Therefore any key generated can be predictable, with only 32,767 possible keys for a given architecture and key lenght , and the secrecy of the network connections created with those keys is fully compromised.
Revised:  Therefore any key generated can be predictable, with only 32,767 possible keys for a given architecture and key length , and the secrecy of the network connections created with those keys is fully compromised.
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Original:  The same problem may also affect anonymous remailers like Mixmaster  , that use OpenSSL to create private keys , even if currently there is no official announcement 
Revised:  The same problem also interested anonymous remailers like Mixmaster , that use OpenSSL to create private keys , even if currently there is no official announcement 
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Original:  According to the Saint Martin newspaper The Daily Herald and the shipping news journal Lloyd's List, the Freewinds was sealed in April and local public health officials on the Carribean island of Curaçao where the ship is docked began an investigation into the presence of asbestos dust on the ship.
Revised:  According to the Saint Martin newspaper The Daily Herald and the shipping news journal Lloyd's List, the Freewinds was sealed in April and local public health officials on the Caribbean island of Curaçao where the ship is docked began an investigation into the presence of asbestos dust on the ship.
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Original:  It gradually reduces lung function until the victim is no longer able to breathe and dies.  
Revised:  It gradually reduces lung function until the victim is no longer able to breathe and dies. " 
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Original:  It gradually reduces lung function until the victim is no longer able to breathe and dies.  
Revised:  It gradually reduces lung function until the victim is no longer able to breathe and dies. Related new
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Original: Church of Scientology spokeswoman Karen Pouw responded to Radar Online about the asbestos reports, in an email published in an article in Radar on May 1. "The Freewinds regularly inspects the air quality on board and always meets or exceeds US standards," said Pouw.
Revised: Church of Scientology spokeswoman Karin Pouw responded to Radar Online about the asbestos reports, in an email published in an article in Radar on May 1. "The Freewinds regularly inspects the air quality on board and always meets or exceeds US standards," said Pouw.
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Original:  In the opening day of  2008 Young Designers' Exhibition (May 15), the Council for Cultural Affairs of Executive Yuan announced the first-ever "Wow!
Revised:  On the opening day of 2008 Young Designers' Exhibition (May 15), the Council for Cultural Affairs of Executive Yuan announced the first-ever "Wow!
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Original:  In the opening day of  2008 Young Designers' Exhibition (May 15), the Council for Cultural Affairs of Executive Yuan announced the first-ever "Wow!
Revised:  In the opening day of the 2008 Young Designers' Exhibition (May 15), the Council for Cultural Affairs of Executive Yuan announced the first-ever "Wow!
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Original:  Taiwan Design Competition" at the Taipei World Trade Center  in conjunction with  main show (2008 YODEX).
Revised:  Taiwan Design Competition" at the Taipei World Trade Center . It will take place in conjunction with main show (2008 YODEX).
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Original:  Taiwan Design Competition" at the Taipei World Trade Center  in conjunction with  main show (2008 YODEX).
Revised:  Taiwan Design Competition" at the Taipei World Trade Center in conjunction with the main show (2008 YODEX).
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Original:  Winners from Professional and Student classes were announced and awarded in an ceremony yesterday.
Revised:  The winners from the Professional and Student classes were announced and awarded in an ceremony yesterday.
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Original:  According to the official information from  Taiwan Design Center (TDC), this first-ever design competition is designed for local participants to construct creative products with internationalizations and traditional cultures  and market them to the world .
Revised:  According to the official information from Taiwan Design Center (TDC), this first-ever design competition is designed for local participants to construct creative products with internationalizations and traditional cultures and market them worldwide .
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Original:  Finally, "EasTea / WesTea" and "Window & Box" were respectively won the champion in the professional and student groups in this competition.
Revised:  "EasTea / WesTea" and "Window & Box" were respectively won the champion in the professional and student groups in this competition.
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Original:  Finally, "EasTea / WesTea" and "Window & Box" were respectively won the champion in the professional and student groups in this competition.
Revised:  Finally, "EasTea / WesTea" and "Window & Box" also won the championship in the professional and student groups in this competition.
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Original:  As of juries from the organizers (TDC CCA), those two products both combined basic applications from organics and traditional cultures in Taiwan.
Revised:  CCA), those two products both combined basic applications from organics and traditional cultures in Taiwan.
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Original:  As of juries from the organizers (TDC CCA), those two products both combined basic applications from organics and traditional cultures in Taiwan.
Revised:  As of juries from the organizers (TDC 
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Original:  PlayerClubGoalkeepersJens LehmannArsenalRobert EnkeHannover 96Rene AdlerBayer LeverkusenDefendersChristoph MetzelderReal MadridPer MertesackerWerder BremenPhilipp LahmBayern MunichArne FriedrichHertha BSC BerlinMarcell JansenBayern MunichClemens FritzWerder BremenHeiko WestermannSchalkeMidfieldersForwards
Revised:  PlayerClubGoalkeepersJens LehmannArsenal F.C.Robert EnkeHannover 96Rene AdlerBayer LeverkusenDefendersChristoph MetzelderReal MadridPer MertesackerWerder BremenPhilipp LahmBayern MunichArne FriedrichHertha BSC BerlinMarcell JansenBayern MunichClemens FritzWerder BremenHeiko WestermannSchalkeMidfieldersForwards
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Original: Thomas HitzlspergerVfB StuttgartSimon RolfesBayer LeverkusenTorsten FringsWerder BremenBastian SchweinsteigerBayern MunichPiotr TrochowskiHamburger SVTim BorowskiWerder BremenJermaine JonesSchalkeDavid OdonkorReal BetisMarko MarinBorussia MönchengladbachForwardsMiroslav KloseBayern MunichLukas PodolskiBayern MunichMario GomezVfB StuttgartKevin KuranyiSchalkeOliver NeuvilleBorussia MönchengladbachPatrick HelmesFC Köln Category:
Revised: Thomas HitzlspergerVfB StuttgartSimon RolfesBayer LeverkusenTorsten FringsWerder BremenBastian SchweinsteigerBayern MunichPiotr TrochowskiHamburger SVTim BorowskiWerder BremenJermaine JonesSchalkeDavid OdonkorReal BetisMarko MarinBorussia MönchengladbachForwardsMiroslav KloseBayern MunichLukas PodolskiBayern MunichMario GomezVfB StuttgartKevin KuranyiSchalkeOliver NeuvilleBorussia MönchengladbachPatrick HelmesFC Category:
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Original: Nine correctional workers at the Cape Breton Correctional Facility in Sydney, Nova Scotia , Nova Scotia refused to work after the discovery of asbestos in the facility by the Canada's Department of Justice.
Revised: Nine correctional workers at the Cape Breton Correctional Facility in Sydney, Nova Scotia refused to work after the discovery of asbestos in the facility by the Canada's Department of Justice.
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Original:  Jessome stated that the guards'  refusal to work is permitted under the provincial Occupational Health and Safety Act.
Revised:  Jessome stated that the guards' s refusal to work is permitted under the provincial Occupational Health and Safety Act.
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Original:  The location is undergoing testing  however preliminary results show that the levels of asbestos in the facility are within safe limits.
Revised:  The location is undergoing testing , however preliminary results show that the levels of asbestos in the facility are within safe limits.
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Original:  Sheri Aikenhead, a spokeswoman for the provincial Justice Department, told The Canadian Press that : "At the moment we're satisfied that managers are safely managing the situation there.
Revised:  Sheri Aikenhead, a spokeswoman for the provincial Justice Department, talked to The Canadian Press that : "At the moment we're satisfied that managers are safely managing the situation there.
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Original:  Sheri Aikenhead, a spokeswoman for the provincial Justice Department, told The Canadian Press that : "At the moment we're satisfied that managers are safely managing the situation there.
Revised:  Sheri Aikenhead, a spokeswoman for the provincial Justice Department, told The Canadian Press : "At the moment we're satisfied that managers are safely managing the situation there.
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Original:  The facility is 33-years old, and asbestos was used in in construction as a fire retardant.
Revised:  The facility is 33-years old, and asbestos was used in construction as a fire retardant.
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Original: Roadworks have triggered a massive explosion and fire on a fuel pipeline running through Ijegun, a suburb  of Nigerian capital Lagos.
Revised: Roadworks have triggered a massive explosion and fire on a fuel pipeline running through Ijegun, a suburb on the outskirts of Nigerian capital Lagos.
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Original:  Although the Nigerian Emergency Management Agency puts the current death toll at ten, the Nigerian Red Cross says at least 100 people have died  
Revised:  Although the Nigerian Emergency Management Agency puts the current death toll at ten, the Nigerian Red Cross says at least 100 people have died . 
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Original:  According to witnesses, students are among the dead   
Revised:  According to witnesses, students are among the dead . 
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