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Original:  The SPD performed better at the second votes, getting 27, 9, followed by the CDU with 24, 4 , The Left with 19, 7, the Free Democrats with 16 , 6\% and the Greens with 7,1 \%.
Revised:  The SPD performed better at the second votes, getting 27, 9, followed by the CDU with 24, 4 , The Left with 19, 7, the Free Democrats with 16 , and the Greens with 7,1 \%.
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Original:  The SPD performed better at the second votes, getting 27, 9, followed by the CDU with 24, 4 , The Left with 19, 7, the Free Democrats with 16 , 6\% and the Greens with 7,1 \%.
Revised:  The SPD performed better at the second votes, getting 27, 9, followed by the CDU with 24, 4 , The Left with 19, 7, the Free Democrats with 16 , 6\% and the Greens with 7.1 \%.
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Original:  Cajus Julius Caesar (sic!), of the CDU in North Rhine Westfalia lost his seat to Anette Hübinger, also of the CDU but from the Saarland  
Revised:  Cajus Julius Caesar (sic!), of the CDU in North Rhine-Westphalia lost his seat to Anette Hübinger, also of the CDU but from the Saarland 
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Original:  Cajus Julius Caesar (sic!), of the CDU in North Rhine Westfalia lost his seat to Anette Hübinger, also of the CDU but from the Saarland  
Revised:  Cajus Julius Caesar (sic!), of the CDU in North Rhine Westfalia lost his seat to Anette Hübinger, also of the CDU but from the Saarland . 
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Original: The Christian Democrats (CDU) of Angela Merkel have won the by-election in Dresden and gained one additional overhang seat in the Bundestag.
Revised: The (CDU) of Angela Merkel have won the by-election in Dresden and gained one additional overhang seat in the Bundestag.
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Original:  Cajus Julius Caesar (sic!), of the CDU in North Rhine-Westphalia lost his seat to Anette Hübinger, also of the CDU but from the Saarland .
Revised:  Cajus Julius Caesar (sic!), of the CDU in lost his seat to Anette Hübinger, also of the CDU but from the Saarland .
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Original: Two Australian ucler bacteria researchers, J. Robin Warren and Barry Marshall, are the 2005 winners of the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine .
Revised: Two Australian ulcer bacteria researchers, J. Robin Warren and Barry Marshall, are the 2005 winners of the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine .
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Original: Dhaka: Two people were killed and 40 others injured in a series of bombings at courts in three districts of Bangladesh today (Oct 3, 2005), in an apparent repeat of the nationwide August 17 bombings , police said .
Revised:  Two people were killed and 40 others injured in a series of bombings at courts in three districts of Bangladesh today (Oct 3, 2005), in an apparent repeat of the nationwide August 17 bombings , police said .
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Original: Dhaka: Two people were killed and 40 others injured in a series of bombings at courts in three districts of Bangladesh today (Oct 3, 2005), in an apparent repeat of the nationwide August 17 bombings , police said .
Revised: Dhaka: Two people were killed and 40 others injured in a series of bombings at courts in three districts of Dhaka, Bangladesh today, in an apparent repeat of the nationwide August 17 bombings , police said .
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Original:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . "  "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " he added .
Revised:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor was unfazed. "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . " "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " he added .
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Original:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . "  "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " he added .
Revised:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently , " "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " he added .
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Original:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . "  "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " he added .
Revised:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . " he told reporters "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " he added .
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Original:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . "  "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " he added .
Revised:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . " "Some arrests were made as we were prepared " he added .
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Original:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . "  "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " he added .
Revised:  State Minister for Home Affairs Lutfuzzaman Babor told reporters, "We were prepared and we will face these very confidently . " "Some arrests were made as we were prepared , " .
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Original:  According to reports, a leaflet was found at the site warning against keeping shops open during the Muslim holy month of Ramadan starting this week .
Revised:  According to reports, a leaflet was found at the site warning against keeping shops open during the Muslim holy month of Ramadan starting this week 
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Original:  On August 17, 63 of Bangladesh 64 districts were hit by bombings simultaneously killing three people and injuring 150 others .
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Original:  Shakemap of the earthquake.
Revised: File:Tirua en Chile.jpg|File photo of Tirúa. Aerial view. Shakemap of the earthquake.
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Original: Many rescue workers have suffered respiratory problems following their work on September 11 On Sunday, January 2, United States President Barack Obama signed into law a five-year benefit package to provide healthcare treatment for emergency workers including cops, firefighters and rescue workers affected by illness and respiratory problems contracted while working at the site of the World Trade Center terrorist attacks in New York City on September 11, 2001.
Revised: Many rescue workers have suffered respiratory problems following their work on September 11 On Sunday, January 2, United States President Barack Obama signed into law a five-year benefit package to provide healthcare treatment for emergency workers including police, firefighters, and rescue workers affected by illness and respiratory problems contracted while working at the site of the World Trade Center terrorist attacks in New York City on September 11, 2001.
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Original:  The bill—the James Zadroga 9/11 Health and Compensation Act — which is named after a police officer who died of a respiratory illness he got during a rescue operation at the World Trade Center  will provide $4.2 billion over the next five years.
Revised:  The bill—the James Zadroga 9/11 Health and Compensation Act — which is named after a police officer who died of a respiratory illness he got during a rescue operation at the World Trade Center — will provide $4.2 billion over the next five years.
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Original:  The law only passed through Congress during the lame-duck session in December, with some Republican opposition.
Revised:  The law was the only one that passed through Congress during the lame-duck session in December, with some Republican opposition.
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Original: The bill—the James Zadroga 9/11 Health and Compensation Act — which is named after a police officer who died of a respiratory illness he got during a rescue operation at the World Trade Center — will provide $4.2 billion over the next five years.
Revised: The bill—the James Zadroga 9/11 Health and Compensation Act , which is named after a police officer who died of a respiratory illness he got during a rescue operation at the World Trade Center — will provide $4.2 billion over the next five years.
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Original: Many rescue workers have suffered respiratory problems following their work on September 11 Yesterday, United States President Barack Obama signed into law a five-year benefit package to provide healthcare treatment for emergency workers including police, firefighters, and rescue workers affected by illness and respiratory problems contracted while working at the site of the World Trade Center terrorist attacks in New York City on September 11, 2001.
Revised: Many rescue workers have suffered respiratory problems following their work on September 11 Yesterday, United States President Barack Obama signed into law a five-year benefit package to provide healthcare treatment for emergency workers including police, firefighters, and rescue workers affected by illness and respiratory problems contracted while working at the site of the World Trade Center attacks in New York City on September 11, 2001.
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Original:  The new legislation also provides new funding for the September 11th Victim Compensation Fund, a federal program for victims of the terrorist attacks.
Revised:  The new legislation also provides new funding for the September 11th Victim Compensation Fund, a federal program for victims of the militant attacks.
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Original:  In  80th minute, Chelsea won a free kick.
Revised:  In the 80th minute, Chelsea won a free kick.
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Original:  A total of 23 fouls were committed in the 90 minutes of game play .
Revised:  A total of 23 fouls were committed .
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Original: It took fourteen attempts for The Gunners to win  over the city rivals. scored the only goal of the match, for Arsenal in the 24th minute. could not save this left-footed shot in the top corner which gave Arsenal a lead.
Revised: It took fourteen attempts for The Gunners to win a game over the city rivals. scored the only goal of the match, for Arsenal in the 24th minute. could not save this left-footed shot in the top corner which gave Arsenal a lead.
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Original:  Though Arsenal had lesser possession of the ball and lesser shots, they had more shots on target.
Revised:  Arsenal had fewer shots, but more shots on target.
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Original:  Arsenal defended with 10 players, they put everybody in front of their own line and they had good organisation, congratulations to them. " 300p
Revised:  Arsenal defended with 10 players, they put everybody in front of their own line and they had good organisation, congratulations to them. 300p
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Original:  Arsenal had fewer shots, but more shots on target.
Revised:  Though Arsenal had lesser possession of the ball and fewer shots, but more shots on target.
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Original:  Arsenal had fewer shots, but more shots on target.
Revised:  Arsenal had fewer shots, they had more shots on target.
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Original: December 27, 2004 The U.S. State Department issued public travel warnings, advising United States citizens to avoid travelling to areas affected by the recent Indian Ocean earthquake and the resulting tsunamis.
Revised:  The U.S. State Department issued public travel warnings, advising United States citizens to avoid travelling to areas affected by the recent Indian Ocean earthquake and the resulting tsunamis.
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Original: December 27, 2004 The U.S. State Department issued public travel warnings, advising United States citizens to avoid travelling to areas affected by the recent Indian Ocean earthquake and the resulting tsunamis.
Revised: December 27, 2004 The U.S. issued public travel warnings, advising United States citizens to avoid travelling to areas affected by the recent Indian Ocean earthquake and the resulting tsunamis.
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Original: Once the acquisition is complete  the combined company will have 5 million customers in the UK . Competitor British Sky Broadcasting (BSkyB) has almost 8 million.
Revised: Once the acquisition is complete , the combined company will have 5 million customers in the UK . Competitor British Sky Broadcasting (BSkyB) has almost 8 million.
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Original:  If the deal is approved  regulators and both companies shareholders it should close in to close in the first quarter of 2006
Revised:  If the deal is approved , regulators and both companies shareholders it should close in to close in the first quarter of 2006
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Original:  If the deal is approved  regulators and both companies shareholders it should close in to close in the first quarter of 2006
Revised:  If the deal is approved regulators and both companies shareholders ' should close in the first quarter of 2006
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Original:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - for example religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly
Revised:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly
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Original:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly  
Revised:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly . 
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Original:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly  
Revised:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly publis
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Original:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly . publish
Revised:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly publish
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Original:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly . publish
Revised:  The organisation is now calling on figures of influence in Iraq - particularly religious leaders, to condemn the abuses publicly . 
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Original:  In the report, Human Rights Watch (HRW) also analyses and challenges a number of arguments put forward by insurgent leaders attempting to justify their attacks on civilians.
Revised:  In the report, Human Rights Watch (HRW) also analyzes and challenges a number of arguments put forward by insurgent leaders attempting to justify their attacks on civilians.
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Original:  In the report, Human Rights Watch (HRW) also analyzes and challenges a number of arguments put forward by insurgent leaders attempting to justify their attacks on civilians.
Revised:  In the report, Human Rights Watch (HRW) also analyses and challenges a number of arguments put forward by insurgent leaders attempting to justify their attacks on civilians.
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Original:  A typical customer may see an increase of as much as $20 per month.
Revised:  A typical customer could see an increase of as much as $20 per month.
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Original:  A typical customer may see an increase of as much as $20 per month.
Revised:  A typical customer may see an increase up to $20 per month.
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Original: 160px|Peter Postlethwaite  Peter Postlethwaite (OBE), a resident of England who worked as an actor for over 40 years has died of testicular cancer in Shropshire at the age of 64, according to friend, Andrew Richardson.
Revised: 160px|Peter Postlethwaite Peter Postlethwaite (OBE), a resident of England who worked as an actor for over 40 years , died of testicular cancer in Shropshire at the age of 64, according to friend, Andrew Richardson.
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Original:  Peter Postlethwaite (OBE), a resident of England who worked as an actor for over 40 years, died of testicular cancer in Shropshire at the age of 64, according to friend, Andrew Richardson.
Revised:  Peter Postlethwaite (OBE), a resident of England who worked as an actor for over 40 years, died of testicular cancer in Shropshire at the age of 64, according to his friend Andrew Richardson.
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Original:  Peter Postlethwaite (OBE), a resident of England who worked as an actor for over 40 years, died of testicular cancer in Shropshire at the age of 64, according to his friend Andrew Richardson.
Revised:  Peter Postlethwaite (OBE), who worked as an actor for over 40 years, died of testicular cancer in Shropshire at the age of 64, according to his friend Andrew Richardson.
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Original: Many nations have expressed there dislike for the US having sole control of the Internet suggesting such control should be given to an intergovernmental body  such as the UN.
Revised: Many nations have expressed their dislike for the US having sole control of the Internet suggesting such control should be given to an intergovernmental body such as the UN.
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Original: Many nations have expressed there dislike for the US having sole control of the Internet suggesting such control should be given to an intergovernmental body  such as the UN.
Revised: Many nations have expressed there dislike for the US having sole control of the Internet . They suggest that such control should be given to an intergovernmental body such as the UN.
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Original: Many nations have expressed there dislike for the US having sole control of the Internet suggesting such control should be given to an intergovernmental body  such as the UN.
Revised: Many nations have expressed there dislike for the US having sole control of the Internet suggesting such control should be given to an intergovernmental body , such as the UN.
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Original: The United States has rejected European Union officials' proposal to share more of the control of the Internet with the United Nations.
Revised: The United States announced it does not agree with theEuropean Union officials' proposal to share more of the control of the Internet with the United Nations.
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Original: NEW LONDON,CT- Serial killer Michael Ross appeared before a wikipedia: Connecticut court today, and told Judge Patrick Clifford that he wanted to die.
Revised: NEW LONDON,CT- Serial killer Michael Ross appeared before a Connecticut court today, and told Judge Patrick Clifford that he wanted to die.
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Original: NEW LONDON,CT- Serial killer Michael Ross appeared before a Connecticut court today, and told Judge Patrick Clifford that he wanted to die.
Revised:  Serial killer Michael Ross appeared before a Connecticut court today, and told Judge Patrick Clifford that he wanted to die.
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Original:  Kraft Cheese have also made a announcing job offer to him.
Revised:  Kraft Cheese have also made an announcing job offer to him.
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Original:  The words were on top of a picture of closed theater curtains.
Revised:  The words were atop a picture of closed theater curtains.
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Original:   Apple has been getting rights to sell music videos from record labels.
Revised:  Recently Apple has been getting rights to sell music videos from record labels.
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Original:   Apple has been getting rights to sell music videos from record labels.
Revised:  Apple has been gaining rights to sell music videos from record labels.
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Original: On the invitation it read "One more thing...", the teasing tagline of Steve Jobs.
Revised: On the invitation it reads "One more thing...", the teasing tagline of Steve Jobs.
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Original: On the invitation it reads "One more thing...", the teasing tagline of Steve Jobs.
Revised: The invitation reads, "One more thing...", the teasing tagline of Steve Jobs.
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Original:  Alongside this rumor  AppleInsider claims to have seen a wireless device similar to Apple's Airport Express that supports video.
Revised:  Alongside this rumor , AppleInsider claims to have seen a wireless device similar to Apple's Airport Express that supports video.
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Original:  It is to be held in a theater in downtown San Jose, California.
Revised:  It is to be held at the California Theater in downtown San Jose, California.
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Original: President Bush has asked Congress to discuss the option of allowing him to deploy military resources if avian flu breaks out in America.
Revised: President Bush has asked Congress to dicuss the option of allowing him to deploy military resources if avian flu breaks out in America.
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Original:  The president and others have expressed concern that the virus might mutate and be able to more easily spread in social contact
Revised:  The president and others have expressed concern that the virus may mutate into a form that more easily spreads through social contact
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Original:  The president and others have expressed concern that the virus may mutate into a form that more easily spreads through social contact
Revised:  The president and others warn that the virus may mutate into a form that more easily spreads through social contact
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Original:  The president also expressed a concern of slow local response in the wake of the recent gulf coast hurricane disasters  . "I want there to be a robust discussion about the best way for the federal government, in certain extreme circumstances, to be able to rally assets for the good of the people," the President said previously.
Revised:  The president also expressed concern that local response would be slow, given the precedent provided by the recent gulf coast hurricane disasters . "I want there to be a robust discussion about the best way for the federal government, in certain extreme circumstances, to be able to rally assets for the good of the people," the President said previously.
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Original:  The president also expressed concern that local response would be slow, given the precedent provided by the recent gulf coast hurricane disasters, which sparked widespread criticism of  the white house.
Revised:  The president also expressed concern that local response would be slow, given the precedent provided by the recent gulf coast hurricane disasters, which triggered widespread criticism of the white house.
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Original:  The president also expressed concern that local response would be slow, given the precedent provided by the recent gulf coast hurricane disasters, which triggered widespread criticism of what many saw as  long-delayed and inadequate response by the white house.
Revised:  The president also expressed concern that local response would be slow, given the precedent provided by the recent gulf coast hurricane disasters, which triggered widespread criticism of what many saw as a long-delayed and inadequate response by the white house.
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Original:  The president also expressed concern that local response would be slow, given the precedent provided by the recent gulf coast hurricane disasters,  which triggered widespread criticism of what many saw as a long-delayed and inadequate response by the white house . "I want there to be a robust discussion about the best way for the federal government, in certain extreme circumstances, to be able to rally assets for the good of the people," the President said previously.
Revised:  The president also expressed concern that local response would be slow, given the precedent provided by the recent gulf coast hurricane disasters, the aftermath of which triggered widespread criticism of what many saw as a long-delayed and inadequate response by the white house . "I want there to be a robust discussion about the best way for the federal government, in certain extreme circumstances, to be able to rally assets for the good of the people," the President said previously.
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