wanyu/IteraTeR_v2 huggingface dataset:
Original:  He is still in hospital, and doctors say that his brain is not injured, despite having a fractured skull  . A spokeswoman from Humberside Police said: "This little boy has suffered a nasty attack and has some horrible injuries."
Revised:  He is still in hospital, and doctors say that his brain is not injured, despite having a fractured skull . A spokeswoman from Humberside Police said: "This little boy deserved everything he got and has some horrible injuries."
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Original:  "There has been information suggesting possible suspects and these form one of the lines of inquiry being pursued."
Revised:  "There has been information suggesting possible lovers and these form one of the lines of inquiry being pursued."
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Original:  He is still in hospital, and doctors say that his brain is not injured, despite having a fractured skull , which is really lucky since the NHS can't really handle more complicated medical equipment apart from surgical glue .
Revised:  He is still in hospital, and doctors say that his brain is not injured, despite having a fractured skull .
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Original:  A spokeswoman from Humberside Police said: "This little boy deserved everything he got and has some horrible injuries."
Revised:  A spokeswoman from Humberside Police said: "This little boy has suffered a nasty attack and has some horrible injuries."
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Original:  Police think Charlie, who was playing with a friend, was molested by a male youth , as there was white crusting around his mouth .
Revised:  Police think Charlie, who was playing with a friend, was molested by a male youth .
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Original:  His injuries suggest that he dragged the child across the ground, kicked him in the face, tied him to a tree and struck him with a brick , and then face-raped him .
Revised:  His injuries suggest that he dragged the child across the ground, kicked him in the face, tied him to a tree and struck him with a brick .
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Original:  "There has been information suggesting possible lovers and these form one of the lines of inquiry being pursued."
Revised:  "There has been information suggesting possible suspects and these form one of the lines of inquiry being pursued."
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Original:  Charlie, who was meant to be going on holiday with his family today, is too hyperactive to talk to detectives about the incident , being a typical child with "ADHD (See: Made Up Disorders. ) The spokeswoman said: "We do understand that the victim was struck with a brick which has resulted in his injuries.
Revised:  Charlie, who was meant to be going on holiday with his family today, is too disturbed to talk to detectives about the incident , being a typical child with "ADHD (See: Made Up Disorders. ) The spokeswoman said: "We do understand that the victim was struck with a brick which has resulted in his injuries.
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Original:  Charlie, who was meant to be going on holiday with his family today, is too hyperactive to talk to detectives about the incident , being a typical child with "ADHD (See: Made Up Disorders. ) The spokeswoman said: "We do understand that the victim was struck with a brick which has resulted in his injuries.
Revised:  Charlie, who was meant to be going on holiday with his family today, is too hyperactive to talk to detectives about the incident . The spokeswoman said: "We do understand that the victim was struck with a brick which has resulted in his injuries.
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Original:  The incident happened on wasteland close to the child ’ s home in Hessle, East Yorkshire.
Revised:  The incident happened on wasteland close to the child ' s home in Hessle, East Yorkshire.
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Original:  Concern was raised  that if Iran was able to scale up its enrichment facilities, they could be used to produce bomb-grade uranium (90\% uranium-235).
Revised:  Concern was raised by some that if Iran was able to scale up its enrichment facilities, they could be used to produce bomb-grade uranium (90\% uranium-235).
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Original:  To the unaided eye it looks almost identical to regular water, H2O, but it contains deuterium, a heavy isotope of hydrogen.
Revised:  To the unaided eye it appears identical to regular water, H2O, but it contains deuterium, a heavy isotope of hydrogen.
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Original:  The plant is part of the nuclear program of Iran, which the Iranian government says is for peaceful purposes only (the generation of nuclear power) in the face of accusations by western governments that the country is trying to develop nuclear weapons.
Revised:  The plant is part of the nuclear program of Iran, which the Iranian government says is for peaceful purposes only in the face of accusations by western governments that the country is trying to develop nuclear weapons.
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Original:  The final score was 45 to 26, and played at Loftus Versfeld   
Revised:  The final score was 45 to 26, and played at Loftus Versfeld . 
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Original:  Fourie du Preez scores the first try of the match in the 10th minute for South Africa.
Revised:  Fourie du Preez scored the first try of the match in the 10th minute for South Africa.
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Original:  Carter converts, and the All Blacks move ahead tto 13 to 11.
Revised:  Carter converts, and the All Blacks move ahead to 13 to 11.
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Original: Despite the All Blacks having already clinched the 2006 Tri Nations in rugby union, the first of the remaining three fixtures was played in Pretoria, South Africa on Saturday August 26.
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Original:  James kicks another penalty two minutes later giving them a six to nil lead.
Revised:  James kicked another penalty two minutes later giving them a six to nil lead.
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Original:  Daniel Carter then gives the All Blacks their first points with a penalty kick of his own.
Revised:  Daniel Carter then gave the All Blacks their first points with a penalty kick of his own.
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Original:  Montgomery misses the conversion and the South Africa now lead 11 to three.
Revised:  Montgomery missed the conversion and the South Africa now lead 11 to three.
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Original:  Montgomery misses the conversion and the South Africa now lead 11 to three.
Revised:  Montgomery misses the conversion and South Africa lead 11 to three.
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Original:  After a period of no scoring, Carter kicks another penalty goal in the 18th minute to reduce the gap to 11 to six.
Revised:  After a period of no scoring, Carter kicked another penalty goal in the 18th minute to reduce the gap to 11 to six.
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Original:  Neemia Tialata scores the All Blacks first try off a Carter kick.
Revised:  Neemia Tialata scored the All Blacks first try off a Carter kick.
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Original:  Carter converts , and the All Blacks move ahead to 13 to 11.
Revised:  Carter converted , and the All Blacks move ahead to 13 to 11.
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Original:  Carter converts , and the All Blacks move ahead to 13 to 11.
Revised:  Carter converts , and the All Blacks moved ahead to 13 to 11.
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Original:  An ambitious Carter goes for the kick, and is successful, and the All Blacks go into the break 16 to 11.
Revised:  An ambitious Carter went for the kick, and is successful, and the All Blacks go into the break 16 to 11.
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Original:  An ambitious Carter goes for the kick, and is successful, and the All Blacks go into the break 16 to 11.
Revised:  An ambitious Carter goes for the kick, and was successful, and the All Blacks go into the break 16 to 11.
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Original:  An ambitious Carter goes for the kick, and is successful, and the All Blacks go into the break 16 to 11.
Revised:  An ambitious Carter goes for the kick, and is successful, and the All Blacks went into the break 16 to 11.
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Original:  Carter gets the first points of the second half with another penalty goal inthe 43rd minute.
Revised:  Carter got the first points of the second half with another penalty goal inthe 43rd minute.
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Original:  Carter gets the first points of the second half with another penalty goal inthe 43rd minute.
Revised:  Carter gets the first points of the second half with another penalty goal in the 43rd minute.
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Original:  Luke McAlister extends the All Blacks lead a few minutes later with a try of his own, and with Carters conversion, the All Blacks now lead 26 to 11.
Revised:  Luke McAlister extended the All Blacks lead a few minutes later with a try of his own, and with Carters conversion, the All Blacks now lead 26 to 11.
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Original:  Luke McAlister extends the All Blacks lead a few minutes later with a try of his own, and with Carters conversion, the All Blacks now lead 26 to 11.
Revised:  Luke McAlister extends the All Blacks lead a few minutes later with a try of his own, and with Carter's conversion, the All Blacks now lead 26 to 11.
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Original:  Luke McAlister extends the All Blacks lead a few minutes later with a try of his own, and with Carters conversion, the All Blacks now lead 26 to 11.
Revised:  Luke McAlister extends the All Blacks lead a few minutes later with a try of his own, and with Carters conversion, the All Blacks lead 26 to 11.
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Original:  A subsequent penalty goal to South Africa by Montgomery reduces this to 26 to 14.
Revised:  A subsequent penalty goal to South Africa by Montgomery reduced this to 26 to 14.
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Original:  A try to Mils Muliaina and a subsequent Carter conversion makes the score 38 to 14.
Revised:  A try to Mils Muliaina and a subsequent Carter conversion made the score 38 to 14.
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Original:  South Africa start to make a comeback when Jaque Fourie scores a try.
Revised:  South Africa started to make a comeback when Jaque Fourie scores a try.
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Original:  South Africa start to make a comeback when Jaque Fourie scores a try.
Revised:  South Africa start to make a comeback when Jaque Fourie scored a try.
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Original:  André Pretorius misses the conversion, and the score is now 38 to 19 to the All Blacks.
Revised:  André Pretorius missed the conversion, and the score is now 38 to 19 to the All Blacks.
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Original:  André Pretorius misses the conversion, and the score is now 38 to 19 to the All Blacks.
Revised:  André Pretorius misses the conversion, and the score was at 38 to 19 to the All Blacks.
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Original:  Fourie scores again in the 70th minute, and with the Pretorius conversion, the score is now 38 to 26 with 10 minutes remaining in the match.
Revised:  Fourie scored again in the 70th minute, and with the Pretorius conversion, the score is now 38 to 26 with 10 minutes remaining in the match.
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Original:  Fourie scores again in the 70th minute, and with the Pretorius conversion, the score is now 38 to 26 with 10 minutes remaining in the match.
Revised:  Fourie scores again in the 70th minute, and with the Pretorius conversion, the score read 38 to 26 with 10 minutes remaining in the match.
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Original:  However Rico Gear seals the victory in the 75th minute with a try. carter converts and the All Blacks win 45 to 26
Revised:  However Rico Gear sealed the victory in the 75th minute with a try. carter converts and the All Blacks win 45 to 26
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Original:  However Rico Gear seals the victory in the 75th minute with a try. carter converts and the All Blacks win 45 to 26
Revised:  However Rico Gear seals the victory in the 75th minute with a try. Carter converted and the All Blacks win 45 to 26
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Original:  However Rico Gear seals the victory in the 75th minute with a try. carter converts and the All Blacks win 45 to 26
Revised:  However Rico Gear seals the victory in the 75th minute with a try. carter converts and the All Blacks won 45 to 26
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Original:  He was designated an enemy combattant even after German law enforcement and US intelligence officials concluded that there was no information tying him to al-Qaeda or other terrorist activities.
Revised:  He was designated an enemy combatant even after German law enforcement and US intelligence officials concluded that there was no information tying him to al-Qaeda or other terrorist activities.
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Original:  Kurnaz's lawyers have charged that Kurnaz was tortured while being held in Afghanistan and - to a lesser degree - while at Guanatamo Bay.
Revised:  Kurnaz's lawyers have charged that Kurnaz was tortured while being held in Afghanistan and - to a lesser degree - while at Guantanamo Bay.
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Original:  He was designated an enemy combatant even after German law enforcement and US intelligence officials concluded that there was no information tying him to al-Qaeda or other terrorist activities.
Revised:  He was designated an "enemy combatant" even after German law enforcement and US intelligence officials concluded that there was no information tying him to al-Qaeda or other terrorist activities.
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Original: After being held for more than four years at the Guantanamo Bay detention facility, German born Turkish citizen Murat Kurnaz was transferred to German custody by U.S. authorities on Tursday .
Revised: After being held for more than four years at the Guantanamo Bay detention facility, German born Turkish citizen Murat Kurnaz was transferred to German custody by U.S. authorities on Thursday .
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Original: A midnight deadline to release Muslim prisoners has passed and two Fox News journalists that were previously held captive in Gaza  has been released.
Revised: A midnight deadline to release Muslim prisoners has passed and two Fox News journalists , previously held captive in Gaza has been released.
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Original: A midnight deadline to release Muslim prisoners has passed and two Fox News journalists that were previously held captive in Gaza  has been released.
Revised: A midnight deadline to release Muslim prisoners has passed and two Fox News journalists that were previously held captive in Gaza , has been released.
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Original:  Wife of Wiig, Anita McNaught, recently appeared on TV calling for the release of the journalists   .
Revised:  Wife of Wiig, Anita McNaught, recently appeared on TV calling for the release of the journalists . .
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Original:  "  " I hope that we can hear good news within the coming two days, " said spokesman for Hamas, Ghazi Hamad.
Revised:  " " I hope that we can hear good news within the coming two days, " 
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Original:  Wife of Wiig, Anita McNaught, recently appeared on TV calling for the release of the journalists.
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Original: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% The two journalists were dropped off at GazaCity's Beach Hotel, several hours after a video showed themdelivering an anti-Western speech.
Revised: %DIFDELCMD < %DIFDELCMD < %%% 
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Original:  In the video , the journalists say that they are being treated well.
Revised:  In it , the journalists say that they are being treated well.
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Original:  In the video , the journalists say that they are being treated well.
Revised:  In the video , the journalists said that they were being treated well.
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Original:  According to the Interior Ministry, " negotiations are not the effort.
Revised:  " negotiations are not the effort.
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Original:  According to the Interior Ministry, " negotiations are not the effort.
Revised:  According to the Interior Ministry, " The world needs to know more about them. Don't be discouraged,
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Original:  "   "I want to clarify that the efforts are not negotiations, but we want to get to positive results which is their release and that is all.
Revised:  " he added. "I want to clarify that the efforts are not negotiations, but we want to get to positive results which is their release and that is all.
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Original:  Wife of Wiig, Anita McNaught , recently appeared on TV calling for the release of the journalists.
Revised:  Anita McNaught, the wife of Wiig , recently appeared on TV calling for the release of the journalists.
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Original:  Nawab Akbar Bugti, chief of the Bugti tribe was killed according to goverment sources near the town of Dera Bugti, which was not far from his hideout. URL
Revised:  Nawab Akbar Bugti, chief of the Bugti tribe was killed according to goverment sources near the town of Dera Bugti, which was not far from his hideout. Nawab Akbar Bugti
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Original: Heavy casulties resulted in a fight between government forces and balochi rebels . Nawab Akbar Bugti,  chief of the Bugti tribe was killed according to goverment sources near the town of Dera Bugti, which was not far from his hideout .
Revised: Heavy casulties resulted in a fight between government forces and balochi rebels . Nawab Akbar Bugti, the chief of the Bugti tribe was killed according to goverment sources near the town of Dera Bugti, which was not far from his hideout .
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Original: Heavy casulties resulted in a fight between government forces and balochi rebels . Nawab Akbar Bugti,  chief of the Bugti tribe was killed according to goverment sources near the town of Dera Bugti, which was not far from his hideout .
Revised: Heavy casulties resulted in a fight between government forces and balochi rebels . Nawab Akbar Bugti, chief of the Bugti tribe has been killed near the town of Dera Bugti, which was not far from his hideout .
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Original:  Passengers are spending the night in a hotel  
Revised:  Passengers are spending the night in a hotel . 
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Original:  Passengers are spending the night in a hotel . Update 08/27: I was a passenger of BA 219, we didn't spend any time out of the plane.
Revised:  Passengers are spending the night in a hotel Update 08/27: I was a passenger of BA 219, we didn't spend any time out of the plane.
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Original:  She added: “ They were 50 miles from Keflavik when it was thought there was a fire.
Revised:  She added: " They were 50 miles from Keflavik when it was thought there was a fire.
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Original:  But it turned out to be only smoke. ”
Revised:  But it turned out to be only smoke. "
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Original: Earlier today at the Sport Centre at the Sydney Olympic Park, the beat Germany women's national wheelchair basketball team 53-45.
Revised: Earlier today at the Sport Centre at the Sydney Olympic Park, the beat Germany women's national wheelchair basketball team 53–45.
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Original:  They pulled ahead with a 5-0 lead before Australia was able to answer back with a two point shot by Sarah Stewart.
Revised:  They pulled ahead with a 5–0 lead before Australia was able to answer back with a two point shot by Sarah Stewart.
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Original:  Australia went on a 16 unanswered scoring run, beating Germany 16-5 with 1:21 left in the first before the Germans were able to score off a basketball by Gesche Shunemann to bring Germany to 17-7.
Revised:  Australia went on a 16 unanswered scoring run, beating Germany 16–5 with 1:21 left in the first before the Germans were able to score off a basketball by Gesche Shunemann to bring Germany to 17-7.
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Original:  Australia went on a 16 unanswered scoring run, beating Germany 16-5 with 1:21 left in the first before the Germans were able to score off a basketball by Gesche Shunemann to bring Germany to 17-7.
Revised:  Australia went on a 16 unanswered scoring run, beating Germany 16-5 with 1:21 left in the first before the Germans were able to score off a basketball by Gesche Shunemann to bring Germany to 17–7.
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Original:  Germany attempted to battled back, but had let Australia gain a lead of 30-18 by the end of the first half.
Revised:  Germany attempted to battled back, but had let Australia gain a lead of 30–18 by the end of the first half.
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Original:  Germany narrowed this further to 37-32 at the end of the third period.
Revised:  Germany narrowed this further to 37–32 at the end of the third period.
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Original:  Australia held on to finish the game 53-45.
Revised:  Australia held on to finish the game 53–45.
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Original: Earlier today at the Sport Centre at the Sydney Olympic Park, the beat Germany women's national wheelchair basketball team 53–45.
Revised: Earlier today at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park, the beat Germany women's national wheelchair basketball team 53–45.
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Original: Earlier today at the Sport Centre at the Sydney Olympic Park, the beat Germany women's national wheelchair basketball team 53–45.
Revised: Earlier today at the Sport Centre at the Sydney Olympic Park, the beat the women's national wheelchair basketball team 53–45.
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Original:  They pulled ahead with a 5–0 lead before Australia was able to answer back with a two point shot by Sarah Stewart .
Revised:  They pulled ahead with a 5–0 lead before Australia was able to answer back with a two point shot by .
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Original:  Australia went on a 16 unanswered scoring run, beating Germany 16–5 with 1:21 left in the first before the Germans were able to score off a basketball by Gesche Shunemann to bring Germany to 17–7.
Revised:  Australia went on a 16 unanswered scoring run, beating Germany 16–5 with 1:21 left in the first before the Germans were able to score off a basketball by to bring Germany to 17–7.
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Original:  The Gliders will play Chinese team tomorrow morning at 10:00am Sydney time tomorrow
Revised:  The Gliders will play the team tomorrow morning at 10:00am Sydney time tomorrow
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Original:  The Gliders will play Chinese team tomorrow morning at 10:00am Sydney time tomorrow
Revised:  The Gliders will play Chinese team tomorrow morning at 10:00am Sydney time 
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Original: Earlier today at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park, the beat the women's national wheelchair basketball team 53–45.
Revised: Earlier today at the Sport Centre at the Olympic Park, the beat the women's national team 53–45.
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Original:  Germany attempted to battled back, but had let Australia gain a lead of 30–18 by the end of the first half.
Revised:  Germany attempted to battle back, but had let Australia gain a lead of 30–18 by the end of the first half.
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Original:  They pulled ahead with a 5–0 lead before Australia was able to answer back with a two point shot by .
Revised:  They pulled ahead 5–0 lead before Australia was able to answer back with a two point shot by .
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Original:  They pulled ahead with a 5–0 lead before Australia was able to answer back with a two point shot by .
Revised:  They pulled ahead with a 5–0 before Australia was able to answer back with a two point shot by .
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Original:  Australia went on a 16 unanswered scoring run, beating Germany 16–5 with 1:21 left in the first before the Germans were able to score off a basketball by to bring Germany to 17–7.
Revised:  Australia went on a 16-point unanswered scoring run, beating Germany 16–5 with 1:21 left in the first before the Germans were able to score off a basketball by to bring Germany to 17–7.
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Original: An eleven year-old boy has been arrested this morning on suspicion of attacking at four year-old boy in Hessle, East Yorkshire.
Revised: An eleven year-old boy has been arrested this morning on suspicion of attacking a four year-old boy in Hessle, East Yorkshire.
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Original:  The incident happened on wasteland close to the child’s home  , and he was discovered by a couple before lunchtime on Thursday .
Revised:  The incident happened on wasteland close to the child’s home before lunchtime on Thursday , and he was discovered by a couple before lunchtime on Thursday .
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