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Original:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by them .
Revised:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by dog handlers .
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Original:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas from Guantanano said to Army investigators that he left Cuba in 2003 for Iraq where he was  member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas from Guantanano said to Army investigators that he left Cuba in 2003 for Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:  One co-sponsor, Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos  from 2003 by top military lawyers.
Revised:  One co-sponsor, Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos dating from 2003 by top military lawyers.
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Original:  One co-sponsor, Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos  from 2003 by top military lawyers.
Revised:  One co-sponsor, Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos from 2003 and written top military lawyers.
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Original:  Army charge sheets accuse them of maltreating detainees from November 15, 2003, to January 15, 2004 by "directing, encouraging, or permitting [their] unmuzzled military working dog[s] to bark and growl at detainees in order to unlawfully harass and threaten the detainees and in order to make the detainees urinate or defecate on themselves." Cardona, of Fullerton, with the 42nd Military Police Detachment in Ft.
Revised:  Army charge sheets accuse the two of maltreating detainees from November 15, 2003, to January 15, 2004 by "directing, encouraging, or permitting [their] unmuzzled military working dog[s] to bark and growl at detainees in order to unlawfully harass and threaten the detainees and in order to make the detainees urinate or defecate on themselves." Cardona, of Fullerton, with the 42nd Military Police Detachment in Ft.
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Original:  Riley, Kan., has been charged with 14 counts
Revised:  Riley, Kan., was charged with 14 counts
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Original:  In military hearing testimony yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison  in Iraq, former warden Maj.
Revised:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison in Iraq, former warden Maj.
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Original:  In military hearing testimony yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison  in Iraq, former warden Maj.
Revised:  In military hearing testimony yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison in Iraq, the former warden, Maj.
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Original:  David Dinenna  said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller,  then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison  , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  David Dinenna , said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  David Dinenna  said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller,  then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison  , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  David Dinenna said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  David Dinenna  said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller,  then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison  , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  David Dinenna said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  The two dog handler soldiers who stand accused , Sgt. Santos A. Cardona, 31, and Sgt.
Revised:  Two dog handler soldiers who stand accused , Sgt. Santos A. Cardona, 31, and Sgt.
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Original:  Michael J. Smith, 24,  are alleged to have used the dogs to threaten and intimidate prisoners at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Michael J. Smith, 24, who are alleged to have used the dogs to threaten and intimidate prisoners at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:  During the defendants testimony yesterday , they said the interrogation techniques used  on prisoners was learned from a team of interrogators  dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
Revised:  During the defendants testimony yesterday , they said the interrogation techniques used by them on prisoners was learned from a team of interrogators dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
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Original:  During the defendants testimony yesterday , they said the interrogation techniques used  on prisoners was learned from a team of interrogators  dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
Revised:  During the defendants testimony yesterday , they said the interrogation techniques used on prisoners was learned from a team of interrogators that was dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
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Original:  The Article 32 military court proceeding, which concluded Wednesday in Fort Meade, Maryland, is a preliminary hearing to hear prosecution and defense arguments  .
Revised:  The Article 32 military court proceeding, which concluded Wednesday in Fort Meade, Maryland, is a preliminary hearing to hear prosecution and defense arguments in the case .
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Original:  The Prosecution seeks a court-martial by claiming the defendants acted criminally.
Revised:  The Prosecution is seeking a court-martial by claiming the defendants acted criminally.
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Original:  The Prosecution seeks a court-martial by claiming the defendants acted criminally.
Revised:  The Prosecution seeks a court-martial with claims that the defendants acted criminally.
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Original:  The Defense contends the soldiers were following orders and that charges should be dropped.
Revised:  The Defense contends the soldiers were following orders , and that the charges should be dropped.
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Original:  The investigating officer of the military court, Maj. Glenn Simpkins, has two weeks to weigh the evidence  presented.
Revised:  The investigating officer of the military court, Maj. Glenn Simpkins, has two weeks to weigh the evidence that was presented.
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Original:  Some or all charges could be dropped, but if charges remain , he will make a recommendation on how the charges should be dealt with  .
Revised:  Some or all charges could be dropped, but if some charges stand , he will make a recommendation on how the charges should be dealt with .
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Original:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas from Guantanano said to Army investigators that he left Cuba in 2003 for Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo  and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas previously had told Army investigators in Guantanamo that he left Cuba in 2003 for Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas from Guantanano said to Army investigators that he left Cuba in 2003 for Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo  and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas from Guantanano said to Army investigators that he left Cuba in 2003 to go to Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas from Guantanano said to Army investigators that he left Cuba in 2003 for Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo  and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas from Guantanano said to Army investigators that he left Cuba in 2003 for Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo , and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden  , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003  meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs  because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden  , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003  meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs  because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. prison camp in Iraq, the former warden , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden  , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003  meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs  because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden of Abu Ghraib , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden  , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003  meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs  because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended in September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden  , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003  meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs  because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003 a meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden  , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003  meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs  because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp . Maj. Dinenna said Gen. Miller recommended using dogs because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden  , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003  meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs  because of their effectiveness.
Revised:  In testimony at a military hearing yesterday on the abuses at the U.S. Abu Ghraib prison camp in Iraq, the former warden , Maj. David Dinenna, said he attended a September 2003 meeting with Maj. Gen. Geoffrey D. Miller, who was then commander of the Guantanamo Bay prison camp , who recommended using dogs , because of their effectiveness.
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Original:  Two dog handler soldiers  stand accused in the hearing , Sgt. Santos A. Cardona, 31, and Sgt.
Revised:  Two dog handler soldiers stand accused in the hearing . Sgt. Santos A. Cardona, 31, and Sgt.
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Original:  Michael J. Smith, 24, who are alleged to have used the dogs to threaten and intimidate prisoners at Abu Ghraib .
Revised:  Michael J. Smith, 24, are alleged to have used the dogs to threaten and intimidate prisoners at Abu Ghraib .
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Original:  Michael J. Smith, 24, who are alleged to have used the dogs to threaten and intimidate prisoners at Abu Ghraib .
Revised:  Michael J. Smith, 24, who are alleged to have used the dogs to threaten and intimidate prisoners .
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Original:  During the defendants testimony Tuesday, they said the interrogation techniques used by them on prisoners was learned from a team of interrogators that was dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
Revised:  During the defendants ' testimony on Tuesday, they said the interrogation techniques used by them on prisoners was learned from a team of interrogators that was dispatched to Iraq from the Guantanamo Bay military base in Cuba.
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Original:  Some or all charges could be dropped, but if some charges stand, he will make a recommendation on how the charges should be dealt with when it reaches the criminal faze of the trial.
Revised:  Some or all charges could be dropped, but if some charges stand, he will make a recommendation on how the charges should be dealt with when it reaches the guilt and innocent faze of the trial.
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Original:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse,  testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also  involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by dog handlers.
Revised:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, now serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by dog handlers.
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Original:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse,  testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also  involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by dog handlers.
Revised:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse, who testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by dog handlers.
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Original:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse,  testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also  involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by dog handlers.
Revised:  Ivan L. “Chip” Frederick, who is serving an 8-year sentence in Fort Leavenworth for his role as ringleader in the abuse, testified by phone from prison that approval was given to use the dogs, and that a civilian interrogator was also sometimes involved in directing which prisoner cells were to be visited by dog handlers.
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Original:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas previously had told Army investigators in Guantanamo that he left Cuba in 2003 to go to Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo, and  “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas previously had told Army investigators in Guantanamo that he left Cuba in 2003 to go to Iraq where he , as a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo, and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas previously had told Army investigators in Guantanamo that he left Cuba in 2003 to go to Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo, and  “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas previously had told Army investigators in Guantanamo that he left Cuba in 2003 to go to Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team , taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo, and “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas previously had told Army investigators in Guantanamo that he left Cuba in 2003 to go to Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo, and  “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
Revised:  Staff Sgt. James Vincent Lucas previously had told Army investigators in Guantanamo that he left Cuba in 2003 to go to Iraq where he was a member of a 6-man team that taught the “lessons learned” at Guantanamo, and served to “provide guidelines” to interrogators at Abu Ghraib.
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Original:  One co-sponsor , Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos dating from 2003 and written  top military lawyers.
Revised:  A co-sponsor , Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos dating from 2003 and written top military lawyers.
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Original:  One co-sponsor , Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos dating from 2003 and written  top military lawyers.
Revised:  One co-sponsor of the bill, Lindsey Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos dating from 2003 and written top military lawyers.
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Original:  One co-sponsor , Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos dating from 2003 and written  top military lawyers.
Revised:  One co-sponsor , Lindsey O. Graham (R-SC), recently released declassified internal memos dating from 2003 and written by top military lawyers.
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Original:  Cardona and Smith should be dealt with when it reaches the guilt and innocent faze of the trial.
Revised:  Cardona and Smith should be dealt with when it goes to trial.
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Original: The Immigration Department has always maintained that Australias immigration detention program and treatment of asylum seekers does not intentionally violate their rights, and in fact benefits a large number of people.
Revised: The Immigration Department has always maintained that Australia's immigration detention program and treatment of asylum seekers does not intentionally violate their rights, and in fact benefits a large number of people.
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Original:  Mr Goudkamp criticised the minister over rercent scandals.
Revised:  Mr Goudkamp criticised the minister over recent scandals.
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Original:   Dunn then repeated his question to National Guard Lt. Col.
Revised:  " Dunn then repeated his question to National Guard Lt. Col.
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Original:  "I don't know, '' Righello responded
Revised:  "I don't know, Righello responded
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Original:   O'Connel responded, "Senator, I don't understand what you mean by files."
Revised:  " O'Connel responded, "Senator, I don't understand what you mean by files."
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Original:  "I don't know,  Righello responded
Revised:  "I don't know, '' Righello responded
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Original:  "I don't know, '' Righello responded
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Original: Image:Senator _Joe_Dunn_2. JPG|Senator Joseph Dunn (D-Santa Ana)]] California State Senator Joseph Dunn (D-Santa Ana) said on Tuesday he would launch contempt hearings against the California National Guard for failing to turn over documents relating to his investigation of illegal domestic spying by the National Guard.
Revised: Image:Senator Joe Dunn 2. JPG|Senator Joseph Dunn (D-Santa Ana)]] California State Senator Joseph Dunn (D-Santa Ana) said on Tuesday he would launch contempt hearings against the California National Guard for failing to turn over documents relating to his investigation of illegal domestic spying by the National Guard.
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Original:  Baldwin , who was born in Leeds, West Yorkshire, England on March 31, 1896, has been recognised as the oldest person in Europe since 2009.
Revised:  Baldwin was born in Leeds, West Yorkshire, England on March 31, 1896, has been recognised as the oldest person in Europe since 2009.
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Original:  Baldwin , who was born in Leeds, West Yorkshire, England on March 31, 1896, has been recognised as the oldest person in Europe since 2009.
Revised:  Baldwin , who was born in Leeds, West Yorkshire, England on March 31, 1896.
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Original: Image:EnglandLeeds.png|Map of England with Leeds highlighted in red.]] Florrie Baldwin, currently the oldest living person in Portal:England| England , celebrated reaching the age of 114 on Wednesday.
Revised: Image:EnglandLeeds.png|Map of England with Leeds highlighted in red.]] Florrie Baldwin, currently the oldest living person in England , celebrated reaching the age of 114 on Wednesday.
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Original:  Baldwin  was born in Leeds, West Yorkshire, England on March 31, 1896.
Revised:  Baldwin , who was born in Leeds, West Yorkshire, England on March 31, 1896.
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